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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like to take adventures? Would you like to explore the world? Do you like taking care of animals? Well if you do this is the right place for you.\n\nYou should join the program because you will have a lot of fun! We will be exploreing places and going all over the world. You will get to eat new foods and get to go to new places and more. We will be taking care of horses, young cows and mules. But you can not be afraid to go on ships because that is what we will be riding on. You also have to be very responsible because taking care of animals as big as them is hard work.\n\nSo come on down and join us the Seagoing Cowboys cant wait to see you. Hope to see you soon! Here are all of the places we will possibley be going; Italy, China, Atlantic Ocean, Greece, Euroupe, and the United States.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view is he has 2 part time jobs in p1 they are a grocery store and a bank.\n\nHe also saw many countries in ruins.\n\nThere were 44 notions that joined together to help in p2.\n\nHe had to help take care of all the horses in p2.\n\nLuke diddnt know his life would change so fast that he got a job in p1.\n\nHe had 2 part time jobs and his friend invited him to go to Europe but Luke knew he cuoldn't say no.\n\nThere were many countries in ruins in p2.\n\nThat diddn't have food supplies, and more in p2.\n\nThe countries that were left in ruins were in Europe and the month and year was August 1945 in p2.\n\nIt took 44 nations to help the countries get food supplies, and more back iin p2.\n\nThe nations formed the UNRRA (the United Nations Releif and Rehabilitation) in p2.\n\nUNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys to take care of all the horses in p2.\n\nA Seagoing Cowboy was much than an adventure for Luke Bomberger in p9.\n\nBeing one opened the world to him in p9.\n\nIt made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs in p9.\n\nLeading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years in p9.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article about driverless cars, it talks about how driverless cars can help people. But can they? Driverless cars can be very dangerous in some ways. People can fall asleep just as easily as driving a normal car. They fall asleep in these driverless cars because they think \"Oh it's in control, I can snooze for a bit.\" When no, you can't. You have to be alert at all times. In paragraphs 7-10 it talks about how authorities and the law are getting involved with these driverless cars ideas. If the law doesn't approve of the driverless cars ideas it's beacuse they are aware of the people and children walking across the streets or crossing roads. If the driver in the driverless car isn't paying attention to the pedestrians, the car might not stop in time for the driver to take control.\n\nDriverless cars do have benefits though. It does help alert the driver with any dangers up ahead or construction up ahead and has the driver take the wheel. But like what is said before, there are still some issues. Driverless cars cannot navigate on its own, you have to steer and be in control at all times if you want to get somewhere. The car isn't Knight Rider. We still have to pay attention to the car and its surroundings and one day, it might be too late, and you crash because you couldn't get ahold of the wheel because the car wouldn't shift it to you. In paragraphs 4-6 it talks about sensors in the cars, which is a good thing, but they could malfunction and then you're messed up from then on. The sensors help to alert the driver with anything that is out of its control. But it still can't navigate and that isn't very helpful, now is it? These are reasons the cars can be dangerous.\n\nSo in conclusion, driverless cars aren't all that great. They still have faults and could easily malfunction and then you don't have any control over the car anymore. These cars are not safe for anyone, and a drunk driver could easily take advantage of that. No car is going to be perfect, it'll still have dents and scratches in the long run and just like any other, it willeventually crash. Drivers need to be aware of these cons instead of focussing on the pros. Because no car will be perfect nor will it fully develop to drive on its own. It's not a living thing, its a machine for transport. Try focussing on what could go bad, before you get behind that driverless car and find out in the long run. Are \"Driverless cars\" really driverless? Think about it before you buy one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It night eve I couldnt hardly wait In family eve go grandparents house When talk eat favorite open presents As mom dad I drove grandparents house I couldnt open car door fast enough I sprinted front door rang door bell hundred times CAPS hello grandpa said CAPS eat fast I open presents yah sure done eating I sprinted stairs fast I could I couldnt wait As I waited patiently old relatives opened presents finally turn I ripped wrapping paper saw game Since first present I open fast I waited paitently turnSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I firmly believe that the face on Mars is a natural occurence. This landform looks similar to landforms in the western United States of America. Some people think that this face was created by aliens. The idea that a landform on Mars was created by aliens is absurd. I have written an essay to show why the conspiracy theorist are wrong and science is correct.\n\nMy first claim is that NASA would love to have aliens on Mars. NASA's budget has been cut drastically by the federal government in the last fifteen years. A discovery of aliens would make the federal governmet increase NASA's budget. People across the country would enjoy learning about this new alien civilization. This shows NASA would have no reason to hide this new information. Another reason this landform is a natural occurence is the fact that an alien civilization may not have a face similar to humans. The aliens would also be different from humans because they would not have been able to drink water, since there is no liquid water on Mars.\n\nThe conspiracy theorist do have a somewhat justifiable arguement. The face does look frightengly similar to the face of a human. The face has a nose, eyes,\n\nand a mouth that look a lot like you or me. The problem with that orginal picture is that it wasn't taken with a high quality camera like we use today. Also I understand that citizens don't always trust the federal governments. Although that is true, the United States government would not be endangering its citizens with this discovery.\n\nEven though this landform look like a face, it is actually similar to landorms in the western United States. The buttes in Idaho, Montana Wyoming, and Utah are much like this. None of the buttes look like a human face, but they have similar structures, slopes, and size. NASA has also taken more pictures of the face to ensure that it is a natural landform.\n\nIn conclusion, people who think this is evidence of alien life are just wishful theinkers. There is overwelming evidence that suggest that this is just a mesa or butte. The facts tell you what the truth is and the truth is that it was't created by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Community service is a great deed and some people think that no wage community work if done by adolescents in their spare time can be fruitful for not only the community but themselves too. However, I do not fully agree with the above statement and this essay will discuss the reasons below.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, there is no doubt about the benefits of doing community work regardless of the pay as doing something for society will always be returned manifolds. For example, when we take care of the elderly, they often bless us for our future endeavours and also share their invaluable life experience which can help an individual in tackling similar situations if they arise. Moreover, teenagers meet all sorts of people while working for this noble cause and can increase their network as well as learn to deal with real problems. This will result in their personal growth tremendously as well as help them grow in their professional life.\r\n\r\nSo it is undeniable that community work will make a society more prosperous and stable as there will be less problems to tend to. Be that as it may, getting paid for this service is a different issue. Sometimes , teenagers can lose interest in things which do not give tangible rewards. Therefore, giving a wage, even if it is small, will definitely attract more people towards community service. Moreover, they will do their work even more efficiently because of the lure of pay.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think if a teenager volunteers community service without considering the wage, it is great on his part but giving payment will help them stay motivated for this job so I do not fully agree with the given statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be the next big thing. Driverless cars sound like a good idea at first, but as I read this article the dangers of this car became more and more like a night mare. We should not be able to make these kinds of cars, simply for the dangerous side of these cars. These types of cars could poitentially blow up in seconds if their senors or something else has a default. These cars made for certain situations and only have been tested in those situations. Some concerns that could be raised is when the car can tell the space between you and another car, the development of \"traffic jam\", and the safety of these cars. They aren't safe.\n\nFirst off, how do we know that this car can really park itself or alert the driver? Sure this has been tested but only a certain amount of cars have been tested with actual people inside. The senors in the car can have a default and end in a fatal situation.\n\nWith the car being driverless the safety of turning the wheel has to be scary. If the car is driverless then it should do all the work of the real life driver and the driver shouldn't have to be alert. If car companies have been making these cars for almost 16 years then what is wrong with it? My guess would be that their would be something of its sort already in car dealerships ready to buy.\n\nThe development of traffic jam seems like a good idea until you start to read further into it. It can do wonderful things such as alert a driver, announce when the driver needs to take ahold of the car, but shouldn't the car already be able to do this on its own? Yes it keeps at a constant rate of 25 MPH but what if you want to go faster, how will you do that? \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way,\" said by Dr. Werner Huber it is not the fun new way. This method of driving can cost the lives of many and they can also cost the company billions and millions of dollars if somebody sues them. Even though \"Traffic Jam\" has some pretty cool features in helping us stay safe, it is one of these i have to believe it to see it kind of things. The features of \"Traffic Jam\" can distract people more and more.\n\nFinally, as discussed earlier the safety of these cars aren't all that great. It is safest that almost all states it is illegal to drive computer driven cars. Most drivers are alert as is, the only thing that would distract a driver would be if he or she was on their cell phones. That is why they put in laws such as \"Texting while driving.\" One thing that has to be developed is who is going to be sued if that test driver or actual person is harmed while testing these cars. By the driver being so focused on the gadets in the car, this can cause more accidents that texting and driving.\n\nIn conclusion, Google and other car makers should stop making these cars because they can harm people alot. We should not have driver less cars because when can the car tell to park how much space is between you and the other cars, the development of \"Traffic Jam\", and the safety of these cars. There has been talks about these kind of cars before but then they stopped and now new ideas are going. Big companies don't want to be sued because of something that their car did. Since Telsa has projected to make a 2016 release for a car capable for driving on auto piolet 90 percent of the time, it seems as if car companies have a little more testing and fixing to do. It's surprising to think that three major car companies will have self driven cars by 2020.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many different topics and reasons about becoming a Seagoing Cowboy but i'm not goning to mention them all if I did it would take me an excrutiateingly long time. So in cunclusion I am onley going to mention a few of them such as importance, adventure, and sites.\n\nThe importians of the Seagoing Cowboys was an extremley important person to be in that time period for saveing hundreds of thousands of cattle, hoarses and any kind of lifestock that was useful to the people. No matter how stormy it got they always tryed there best to keep on cource and never give up. They worked very hard cleaning stalls, feeding the animals, and giving them waterThey were always honored then and I think we should honor them now as well or better as they did back in the time of world war Two.\n\nOh and just imagian the adventure they had out on the open sea just having the time of there lives. They probably ran in to some nasty storms just think of the waves probabley huge waves the size of a mountain. In the story Luke almost whent flying off the shp but he got lucky he caught a peice of metal to hold onto. Cuold youjust imagian how much that would scare you, if you would have been swallowed by the hungery ocean. They could have even been flung overboard and eaten by sharks it just gives me the chilles thinking about it.\n\nOh just thnk of the sites they have seen they have probabley been all around the world. In the story it said that Luke he whent to Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. That was only one he even whent down the Panama Canal on his way to China! can you imagian dong somthing like that !? It would be spectaculer seeing those kind of sites. He even whent on a tour threw an excuvated castle now that is like the cherry on a sundae don't you agree?\n\nThat is why I think past Seabearing Cowboys shoul be honored for there services and not just ignored like they are today. My goal is to get the word out about the Seabearing Cowboys to show there importance to this country. So they arent just forgoten and cast away and not honored.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez really see moods love friendship perseverance created In second paragraph see love Narciso Rodriguez s life home Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop lives warm home Love definitely big mood ran throughout Rodriguez home shows greatly memoirAnother mood shown strongly Rodriguez s memoir friendship In last sentence fourth paragraph see My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This sentence shows great friendship love Rodriguez family offered always lending helping handThe final mood strongly shown throught memoir perseverance The Rodriguez family moved Cuba oneroom apartment New Jersey states paragraph one The Rodriguez family took whatever jobs could get wanted best children The Rodriguez family always rose fell memoir mood shines greatly In memoir family immensely important mood shows greatlySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the advantages of limiting car usage is a good thing. cuts down on greenhouse gasses. but dont worry the rate that people are getting there licences is going down. i think that fines are a good way to cut down on golable emitions.\n\nif we do what they did in vauban in the united states we could cut down on the greenhouse gasses and make citys more breathable. make them it better for people to get around and use less space for highways and malls. or we can fine people when they use cars and that would really cut down on the gas.\n\nless and less people are not getting there licences because the have no reason to when thay can just car pool and the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. the rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down 2 or 3 befor the down turn. if it persists many sociologists believe it will have benefical implications for carbon emissions and the environment. there are shifts in the driving population that have droped suggest that the trend may accelerate.\n\nlike in paris that fined people $31 for driving. and exceptions were made for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carring 3 or more people. but public transport was free. in the city diesel fuel was blamed, it makes up 67% of vehicles in france. compaired to a 53.3% average for the rest of western europe. paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in london in conclusion the advantages of limitating car usage is a good thing.1 it cuts down on greenhouse gasses. 2 fines help over all. and 3 licence rate is droping.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have their own opinions about the Electoral College; whether it should be taken away or kept. They have good reasons, but honestly do they really need the electors to vote for our people?\n\nThe Electoral College should be abolished. Why do people still defend the electoral college? The voters don't even vote for a president. They vote for a slate of electors. Why can't us voters control the electors. You're not really voting for the president, you're basically voting for electors who are pledged to the specific candidate. The electoral college isnt needed.\n\nLet the voters vote for who they want. They know what that candidate is gonna do for their people when they become president. We don't need people who are pledged to that candidate to keep debating over them. It states that when you vote for a presidential candidate, you are actually voting for a slate of electors.\n\nThe Electoral College stays with us, only to keep the voting in balance. They should just do the winner-take-all. Everyone despises the electoral college. It has no purpose to be retained, but only to keep the voting balanced.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" there is a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) that enables computers to identify human emotions. This technology is relatively brand new. It creates a 3-D computer model of all fourty-four major muscles in the face that move like human muscles as well. Then, psychologists have classified six basic emotions that are associated with different movements in the facial mucles. This new technology could result in many benefits in our community as well as all around the world. The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it would allow teachers to know when students become confused, are being dishonest, or are depressed and possibly having problems at home.\n\nIn the classroom, it is common for students to tend to get confused while being taught a lesson. It is also common for students to get bored and become uninterested in the lesson at hand. With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers can make sure that their students are acquiring the best education possible and absorbing all of the material. Teachers can adapt their teaching style according to how students respond to the lesson being taught. This way, both the students and teachers can be on the same page, making education easier for students and teachers. The article states,\"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,'\" (D'Alto). In this quote, Dr. Huang is telling the reader how this new technology could possibly develop into something much bigger where it can modify the lesson for students who become bored or confused, making it an easier and better experience for the student.\n\nSchool behavior is a big part of a students education. If a student is constantly acting out and misbehaving it could affect his or her education pretty badly. Although, that is why Facial Action Coding Systems could also be very useful in a classroom environment. The technology could be able to detect if a student is being dishonest, which could prove very handy when dealing with situations with delinquents and trouble-makers. In the excerpt, the author writes, \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful,\" (D'Alto). In this quote, the author tells the reader about some facial muscle clues that allow experts to tell if a famous figure is being dishonest. These are some of the same facial clues the FACS looks for.\n\nFinally, The FACS could help find if students are depressed or having problems at home. The machine can detect six different emotions, including sadness. This could prove useful when dealing with distressed students. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" (D'Alto). This quotes tells the reader about the emotions the machine can read.\n\nThe use of the FACS to read the emotionalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting affect cyclist many ways When essay states The sun beginning beat down This shows affects feels cycling road affect ability keep cycling sun hard Also states I waterdepleting mph shows also dehydrated goin slow ammount heat lack water affected ability keep cycling areaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author created mood love caring They alwayS cared peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator i think that we should cape the electoral college process because, if it is not broken don't fix it. Also this process is a part of our founding fathers history it was established to compromise between election of the president. Thats way we should cape the electoral college process.\n\nThe electoral college has 538 electors but the president needs to have 270 electoral votes to become the president. The 23 amendment of the contitution allows columbia 3 electors and treated like a state for purpose of the electoral college. When you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates electors. Every candidate running for president in your state has his or her own goup of electors. Some states have a winner take all system, which gives all the electors a award to the winning presidential candidate.\n\nAfter the presidential election the governor prepares a \"certificate of ascertainment\" listing the candidates who ran for president. The certificate of ascertainment declares the winning presidential candidate in my state will represent your state at the meeting of electors. Abolishing the electoral college no said Bob Dole and Jimmy Carter they agreed. They are not alone according to a Gallup poll in 2000 taken after Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\n\nThe electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. There is pressure for running off election when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast that pressure which would complicate the presidential election process is reduced by the electoral college which produces a clear winner.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A claim that I know about the author is that he know's what he's talking about like saying how Venus is the second planet from our solar system, they say Venus is Earths twin because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. What I find interesting is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the surface of Venus the temperature averages over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is ninety times greater than what we experience on our own planet. So if someone from here on Earth tries to go on Venus they would not make it because there is so much pressure up there and nothing to have on to protect you all that pressure will make your body explode, the same thing would happen if someone went really far down in the ocean they wouldn't last very long because your body isn't used to going that far which puts a lot of pressure on you, so if you have a scuba suit on it still won't help you, if you have a scuba tank it will put pressure on that to and make all the air flow out which means you wouldn't have enough time to get back up the the surface. One thing that I found facinating was they had computers in the 1940's during World War \|\| they weren't that quick like the modern ones these days the ones they make now can run really quick, they can flip so they turn into a tablet, another thing they make now is you can buy a tablet and get a certain kind of keyboard that hooks on to the tablet so it turns it into a computer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Companies these days are bombarding consumers with advertisements in order to get an edge over the competition. Although customers make their own decisions these campaigns can be influential. In this essay, I will be discussing several points on how an advertisement the individual and what measures can be taken to protect them.\n\nBusinesses are investing heavily in marketing so that they reach the majority of the customer base. Food delivery apps such as swiggy and zomato are benefitting the most out of this. a recent study on hunger shows that when your stomach is empty the brain does not function to its maximum capacity. When lunchtime strikes, hunger takes over and you will instantly see the application popping up notifications to take advantage of your starvation. you end up ordering online rather than eating home-cooked meals. Moreover, these apps record the time of your food order and have a history of your eating habits knowing exactly when to remind you through their campaigns so you end up spending more.\n\nIn order to avoid being influenced by marketing, people need to be more cautious of what they are signing up for. Every app and browser asks for permission before they start showing relevant search-related pages. It is in the consumer's hands to decide how much information they want to share, most people do not realise that they are in control. the browser settings or application settings can be adjusted if they do not want to be bombarded with multiple advertisements from various companies. they can also choose to not allow history tracking so that their data cannot be used against them. \n\nBy way of conclusion, people can easily get influenced through many campaigns, if the individual educates him/herself then they can avoid the impact from this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Even though good effects computers people also many bad effects Some major bad effects computers people exercise talk strangers interaction family friends One effects computers people exersise One important effect computers people exersise Right many people obese bad eating exersise One problems people CAPS get computers couchs go outside These people choose stay indoors nothing except watch go computer So computers big effect people live lives Another problem caused computers kids talking strangers Most kids member social network like There people go websites computers pretend teen This get many kids trouble careful websites Since people access websites computers another bad effect computers people Another bad effect iteraction family friends When people computers focus whats computer surroundings Being computer stops many people interacting family friends Not interacting anyone causes social skills weaken since always computer This become serious problem person becomes adicted computer This cause many problems communication throughout family making family weaken In conclusion even though good effects computers people also many bad effects cause serious problems Computers cause tragaties families andor persons s lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This type of technology would be good for teachers. It would also help the students inside school. A type of technology that benifits both teachers and students should be in all schools. The technolgy that can read emotinal expressions of students in a classroom is vauable because its sometimes hard to tell for sure by a facial expression when there are so many.\n\nThis could benifit students like if they are having a hard time figuring out something the technology could tell the teacher and the teacher could explain it in a different way or tell the student what they are doing worng. By doing this the technolgoy would help the student get better grades in class they are having difficalty in. Its sometimes hard to tell how a person is felling when they can use many facial expressions at once that why this kinda of technology is good for classrooms. In paragraph five it says \"Of corse, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried\". One way this would be helpful to teachers on the students is when they are doin the homework and they are stuck and to nervios to ask for help. Also when a student dosen't fully understand what to do on something. In pareagraph six the author has a quote from Dr. Huang that says \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\", this is true for most students mainly teens because it's easy and naurtal to when expressing emotions.\n\nEach school should have this technology to make education better for kids when having trouble asking for help. Facial expressions are difficalt to read with so many different ones. This would also help the school by having higher rates in school. All shcools should consider investing in the technology that reads the emotional expresions.\n\nThis new technology would benifit students and teachers in many way in the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificially intelligent robots are progressively replacing humans in the workplace. Although menial jobs may be taken over by robots however, creative jobs would still require human mind to be done. This essay will discuss why fewer jobs must require human interaction.\nSimple jobs that don’t require complex procedures will soon be replaced by artificially intelligent robots to perform them. Rather to invest in recruiting and training of human resource for routine tasks, it can smartly be performed by robots flawlessly. For example, in fast food restaurants, people can place order on automated machines with predefined instructions, which serve order within allocated time limit without any hassle. In addition to that they work round the clock without any holidays. For these reasons, simpler jobs performed by robots will completely be handed over to them.\nConversely, the jobs that require unique solutions would still require human mind to be completed. Robots will never be able to think and produce a unique ideas or solutions to potential requirements. For instance, the advertisement of newly developed product would require a creative strategy to distinguish it from existing products. Rather than using an existing strategy of same category product.\nTo conclude, it is likely that significant number of jobs will be taken over by artificially intelligent robots. Menial jobs would entirely be the domain of robots; however, complex jobs that require unique solutions would still be performed by humans. Ultimately, few human jobs will be left due to increasingly artificially intelligent workforce.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should not keep the Electoral college because; first, it's unfair, and also, it can quickly turn into a disater.\n\nTo begin with, the Electoral college is an unfair system. In\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong , \" Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always.\"[Plumer, p10].When voters vote for the Electoral college the person they put in might not even vote for who the people want for the President. The system is not only unfair when people vote, also when campagins happen in states. In paragraph 13 of\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong , the author states \"Because of the winner-takes-all system... candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\". With this system, we have some states that are left out of the campaign of candidates going through states, because they are not important to the candidate for winning.\n\nIn addition, not only is the Electoral college unfair, the system can fail at any given election. Plumer wrote in paragraph 11 \"...what if a state sends two slates of electors to congress.\" the Electoral college is only to have one slate of electors from each state. With two slates from one state it would give both the state and the candidate an advantage over the rest of the states and the other candidate, that would turn into a disater. Not only can the states destory the Electoral college system, the system can destory itself. Included in paragraph 12, \" The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\". Even the people put into the college can ruin themselves by one or two electoral voters changing their minds.\n\nNot everything about the Electoral college is bad. The article\n\nIn the Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our reasons despised method of choosing the President said, \"..it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.\"[Posner, p18]. Even the other vote systems are strongly disliked. The Electoral system is not the most disliked system but it can also get the President everyone wants. In paragraph 19,\"... a candidate with regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president.\". A candidate for the president can't focus on one region, because it will make other states feel that they are not important.\n\nFinally, the Electoral college should no longer exist because, it's an unfair system and can quickly turn into a catastrophe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Earth twin, Venus is mainly known as being around the same size and dstance between Earth, but the thick carbon dioxide atmosphere prevents us from exploring our sister planet. Scientists have been planning and have been making progress and adventions on exploring Venus like, making an aircraft that would sustain living conditions while being able to explore Venus wthout being harmed. Scientists have concluded that Venus's geography was once like earths and could contain a livable lifestyle like no other.\n\nVenus is the most hottest planets, while being second in line from the Sun. The atmosphere is 90x greater than Earths, along with the 97% carbon dioxide and reaching over 800 degrees fehrenheit. Venus's Earth like feature consisting of moutains, valleys, and craters can furthermore be our new nearst option for planetary visits. But would the crucial value of going to venus be approcable.\n\nLiving on Venus would be around Earths living conditions, with the same amount of pressure and around the same amount of radiation. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans. While scientists are still working on machines to last the challenge of Venus, the innovations would allow them to last more than three weeks in such conditions.\n\nAnother project scientists are looking in is old technology like mechanical computers like todays. The devices were envisioned in the late 1800s and was a important role in World War II. The devices would make calculations without electrionic need. In comparison the device would need to rendure extreme physical conditions like, being able to stand up to acid, heat and other forces.\n\nIn conclusion the exploration throughout our planets should not be stopped or limited from the danger and risk of finding out beyond your imagination about our neighbors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger worked a two part-time job in a grocery store. He also worked in a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke said yes because it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nWorld War 2 was over in Europe which left many countries in ruins. To help recover everything 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys. Luke and Don decided to sign up to help take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nIn August 1945 Luke and Don recieved their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived August 14 the day the Pacific war ended. Don and Luke boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece. The SS Charles had a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nIt also took Luke about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Luke was busy all the time while crossing because he had to take care of the animals. The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalls also had to be cleaned.\n\nOn Lukes second trip he served as niht watchman. Luke's job was to check on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. Luke was happy to be alive, but coudn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.\n\nLuke is trying to convince others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program becasuse he wants others to help out recover other countries food supplies, animals, and more stuff that they have lost during the Wars. Luke wants everyone to be a part of helping others because without any help nothing is possibe.\n\nLuke wants you to go through helping others and taking care of animals like how he did. Like when Luke got on the SS Charles W. Wooster when he was headed to Greece because the Pacific war had ended and everything was ruined or destroyed. He had a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. That is hard work. He had to stay up as watchman to take care of the animals and report to the captain. Luke got hurt but after the accident he began to help again. Luke want you to work as hard as him to save the world. Wars can cause a buch of damage to countries so try to help them out. Participate in the program to help ou like my friend Don and I.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued whether higher educational qualification makes a person more successful or one's more engagement in paid work straight after school is more beneficial. I am going to examine this question from both viewpoints alongside providing my opinion.\n\nOn the one hand, the option to start work after school is more attractive, because people can start earning money. In this way, they can become financially independent and support their family as well. This may also help them to acquire skills about how to manage expenses or budget, which they can implement further in their life or business. One good illustration of this is a successful businessman named Ratan Tata, the owner of Ambuja Cement Company, who chose to work just after school education and became one of the richest persons in the world by applying his knowledge, skills and real-life experiences to the business. Thus, this example vividly demonstrates that getting higher degrees is not necessarily needed for a successful career.\n\nOn the other hand, few individuals have the opposite opinion because they may believe that attaining academic qualifications offers better options. There are some professions that cannot be joined without a relevant degree such as doctor, engineer, lawyer, and many more, as all these occupations demand academic qualification with intense training and practice, but also offer lucrative salary packages and more financial stability. Moreover, people can easily switch their careers at any point in their life. When they feel monotonous after working in one field for a long time, they can enter in new jobs as compared to those, who dropped the idea of attending university or college.\n\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that for having successful career, one may not need any academic qualification, as it is just a piece of paper that cannot decide someone's future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the value of using technology to read students' emotional expressions, because I don't think relying on a computer model to detect or show the exact percentage of emotion in your expressions is accurate. In the writing it says that the 3-D model can detect six basic emotions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Even some mixed emotions, but I don't think that's 100% true.\n\nThe 3-D model basis off expressions with certain muscle structures or movements, for example in paragraphs seven and eight it talks about how the model can tell if someones smile is real or fake. In paragraph seven it says \"In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners or your mouth\" then in paragraph eight it continues saying \"Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis pars palbraeus makes crow's-feet around your eyes\". Continuing in paragraph eight it says \"In a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a diffrent muscle, the risorius.\" I disagree with this completly because what if the persons or students smile is actually fake, but they're using all of those muscles that supposibly show a \"real smile\" or visa versa. What if a person or student is actually really angry, but they're muscles are relaxed and shows that they're calm or happy. I just don't believe that a machine or 3-D computer model can detect or show a persons true emotions or expressions just from muscle movements. To an expert, someone whos been doing a lot of research on this, will definitly disagree with me because to them \"faces don't lie\" but in my opinion faces lie all the time.\n\nIn conclusion the 3-D model just doesn't seem accurate 100% accurate. You shouldn't rely on a model to give off the exact percentage of your emotion, because of certain muscles being or not being used in your expressions. I believe people can hide emotions very well and I don't believe technology has gotten to the point yet to where in can show or detect the exact percentage or the correct emotion of a human being just from muscle movements and a 3-D computer model.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To start off, I think the technology to read emotional espressions of students is vulnerable because in todays society not a lot of people are great at socializing, their faces and actions speak louder than theirown words. Basically saying that students and teachers should know somethng is wrong with the person just by looking at their face and the expressions they're portraying.\n\nIn the article it states that the peoples faces don't lie and that this is a pro because it helps detect wheather a person is lying or not. On paragrapgh #8 it sites \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" Clearly, right there it states that we could know wheather a big person we look up towards to like our president could be lying to us or not just by simply using this advance computer technology to recognize human facial expressions. This is also a gret opportunity for humans and computers to develop better ways to communiacte. It's a great big step forward in society too. If you're not great at expressing how you feel verbally maybe you're better just facialy expressing it without saying a single word. This amamzing technology can even identify mixed emotions. In the article it staes that \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery. Most humans communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" says Dr. Huang. This means your computer could know how you feel without saying a single wrord. I also think this an advanatge to school consuelors because students sometime have trouble in school and don't really like to talk about their feelings.\n\nTo conclude, I think the technology to read emotionals expressions should be vulnerable to students and the teachers as well. Why? Becasuse a lot of people can struggle with anxiety/social problems and they just need somepone to talk to but just don't know how. This is why computer science is helpful to when it comes to situations like this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Earth as we know it has been striving for many years but our population is growing rapidly due to everyone havng children and deaths. We can only do so much one day this planet we call earth will be like the rest of the planets. Not being able to live on because of bad conditions. Nasa has been doing other approaches to studying venus. they tried to send a couple space crafts to venus but the rough and cloudy planet made the spacecrafts fail due to the enviroment. Nasa has been doing test to figure out something that can stand the venus enviroment. They haven't sent a spacecraft to venus in three decades. ''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familir features such as valleys, mountains and craters.'' Venus is the nearest option for us. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans so it probaly could support human life but we still have to take the risks. how would we live on a planet that doesnt even have what we need to survive. A thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. would we be wearing suits around all day the averge temperture on venus is roughly 800 degress fahrenheit, we dont get past 105 degress fahrenheit. Yes the planet sounds to good to be true but if that is what we have that is atleast like earth we should give it a try. considering the fact of life on another planet is fascinating. We can make the trip to venus but you cant even see it you will by flying over dense clouds and if you go under the clouds it's very hot. In conclusion Venus is like earths sister and if we can find a way to make it liveable to humans we should try it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you want to be a helpful person who also wants to have a fun and hard working experience, come and sign up for Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nI have had a great experience on the cattle boat and it also felt great helping others in need.\n\nWhen you are on the cattle boat you will experience an oppertunity of a lifetime.\n\nI think that the cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable oppertunity for a small town boy like me.\n\nI also think that besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\n\nBut seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\n\nOne time, I took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\n\nI also toured an excavated castle in Crete an marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nI also found to have some fun aboard, espeacially on return trips when the animals had been unloaded.\n\nWe played baseball and voleyball game in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\n\nWe also played table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. So as you can see, being a Seagoing Cowboy is fun and hard, but it is worth a shot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars can bring about a new generation to the world of technology. Driveless cars allow ¨drivers¨ to transport without actually driving.These cars can lead to new technologies such as, cars that run on water or even flying cars. With this new knowledge of technology future generations can have an easier, futuristic lifestyle. Although driveless cars can be easier and bring forth new technological advances, they may be dangerous.\n\nThese new cars may seem very cool and exciting, but they can be dangerous to the one ¨driving\" the car, or the people around the car. This means the driver would still need to be attentive to all things going on. As the passage states in paragraph 7, ¨all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zones and around accident.¨ This means drivers cannot doze off as they make their way to their designation. Although there may be alerts for the driver it still may not work. For instance, if the driver were to fall asleep and the alrerts couldn´t wake up the driver causing them to crash or hit someone unexpectedally crossing the street. Another example could be if an error occurred within the car and didn´t alert the driver fast enough or at all.\n\nFurthermore with the possibility of these accidents occuring, who would be the one to blame for this mishap? As the passage states ¨If the new technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?¨ With this being said, many arguments can arise. Who is the one to blame? If driveless cars requires the driver to be just as attentive as a driver in a normal car, is the driveless car really worth it? With these arguments in place, new laws would need to be made in order to cover liability.\n\nThere are still many things to figure out about driveless cars such as, safety issues and the new laws that would need to be brought about. These driveless cars could lead to new advances in future car models, but are they safe enough to bring into the new world? Another downside is having to figure out laws for who would take the blame if an accident were to occur. With these issues to keep in mind, the driveless car can be improved for a more safer and reliable experience.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear late controversy Computers affect people s lives I believe effects people negative My main reasons argument The persons health users well Did know kids teens obese computers contribute statistic If person eating unhealthy sizing They still fit go computer instead working They become fat This serious problem Becoming overweight many health risks liked heart It also could prevent person excersicing If overweight legs could ache simple set stairs could become huge challenge Do want obesity rates I would think If watch tv could picture perfect families We know family like Introducing computers could mess fact even For example cousin used outgoing friend person Now computers nothing else play computer He gets eats breakfast The plays computer untill lunch He eats small lunch right back playing After along hows playing He computer hopps goes laptop night This greatly affects family They try get online He cant interact family huge infact Even though could get talk one ways talking facebook Now family We easily avoid telling every body known facts My final argument users well teen many us facebook I homework I use internet facts stories I go facebook If anyone dows effect grades If chat facebook If arent homework wont get good grade If could less serious problems Another thing could actually need computer stay It could addicting might rely kill dident computer So see many negative effects user computer It could many problems inthe future like health family happiness So spread word sake thousands peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it's mainly talking about how many percent of people do not own cars or people who old there cars. If I had a good car nothing wrong with it. I would make payments on it. It might not be the best car but hey long as i can get somewhere on time. I really don't know much about Vaubans but they are knid of nice. My dream car is V8 Titans Nessian i really love those trucks I hoping my mother will get me one but that all depends on my behavior at home and school plus grades those are more important. When the suburbs came out i thought it came from china but it said \"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class familes from chicago to shanghai tend to make their homes. And that experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes.... Passengers cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" It also saids \"Vauban home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life. In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" I love cars well actually theres curtent cars that i like but hey you got to love them right V8 titan i love the most.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys\n\nHave you ever heard of a Seagoing Cowboy? When I was young my friend and I were offered a chance to join the UNRRA, \" the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration.\" I knew it was an \"opportunity of a lifetime.\"\n\nThey hired us to help with carrying war animals across the seas. We had tons of fun times, and we hope you can will consider becoming a Seagoing Cowboy too.\n\nFirst, we got to help many and different kinds of people. We would help\n\nprepare the animals for them and get them ready to go to war. The animals also provided food for countries that needed help through hard times\n\nSecond, we would get to see amazing and very unique views. We had the privilige of taking a gondola ride through Venice, Italy. We also saw the Panama Canal and and a castle in Crete on our way traveling to China.\n\nThirdly, we had all kinds of fun and games onboard. We would play games in the stalls when the animals were gone. We played baseball, vollleyball, table tennis, and many other games to help pass the time.\n\nIn the end, I learned my job wasn't meant for adventures. It was an opportunity to explore the world and the people that came with it along with their needs.I was glad we had a chance to help everyone that we could.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine if your online school computer could analize if you are understanding your lesson on exponents or not? This could one day be possible. Prof. Thomas Huang and his collegue Prof. Nicu Sebe, are working on a new software that can recogize your emotions. It may know if your happy or sad and by knowing how you feel it will read how you feel about the subject. This technology would be of an imense help in virtual classrooms. This technology could also analyse pictures and videos taken before to see how the person feels while at a public event, or in a old family picture.This technology could help many fields including the advertising industry, as it could tell how you feel from different ads, and change the type of ads you see as suggested by your reaction to them.\n\nHowever how would the computer know if we are happy or sad? \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of all the face\". In the 3-D model our muscles are copied exactly and the computer analyzes how we feel based on our expression. As if it scaned your face at a family reunion where you don't to be there, but your smiling for the picture. How does it know if your smiling for real, or if your smiling so you don't apear bored in the picture? \" In a false smile, the mouth is streached sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius... these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\"\n\nIn conclusion Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe new technology is a inovation that could help many different fields in many different ways. It would help people really see how people feel about a certain topic or person. It could help stores know when a person is mad or annoyed at their products or staff. This new technology would be a great partner with facial recognition working side by side to know how each person feels. This new technology would be important to an online classroom as with an online course you never really truly\n\nunderstand if a person is frustuated with the material, or if a person really feels motivated and understands what they are being taught. This New technology would be a great addition to the teaching field, and would help students learn to their fullest potential.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There numerous obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One big problem faced wind The way mooring station built meant wind could catch tail dirigible causing spin around building Also mooring station completed wind made unsafe dirigibles get close building Another problem faced stability support building Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s Framework CAPS This blimp would nt pull mooring station building One final problem faced safety people It said dirigibles use flamible gasses fly If accident like Hindenburg busy New York streets would terrible There many problems faced building crew Empire state building wind stability safetySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im always patient Its I older brother doesnt told Lets say dad tells clean bath room well takes ten minuts get I go hes cleaning wont let So Im thats one reasons Another older sister shes always phone I barely ever get use So I wait parents get home yell get thats Im patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Looking for something to do and deals with animals and military that you and your friend can sign up for? You should try UNRRA which means United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration. The UNRRA hired \" Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses,Young cows,and mules that are shipped overseas. My friend and I signed up for it we had a fun time playing games when the animals were unloaded. We took care of the animal's in the ship that was going overseas. In August 1945, We recevided orders to report to New Orleans. We arrived on Ausust 14, the day the Pacific War ended, My friend Don and I got seaman's paper's and boared the SS Charles W. Wooster and headed for Greece with 335 horses and enough hay and nuts to keep them all alive.\n\nWe took about two weeks to cross the Atlanitc Ocean from the eastern coast of United States and a month, But during these weeks and month we did a lot of stuff. You would have a benefit of seeing Europe and China , But seeing Acropoils in Greece is special.We also did fun stuff more fun stuff when the animals were unloaded. We play baseball and volleyball in empty hold's that animals lived in. We played table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whitttling and games.If your on the ship and sign up and are suposed to be drafted to the army they might let you be a seacowboy instead.\n\nThis is why you should join the UNRRA. It will keep u working and having fun at the same time. This will also make you aware of other peoples needs. Sign up for the UNRRA today. Also your awareness will stay with you forever and always. Help out the animals and have fun. You can even be a lookout for the ship watching over the animals when everyone else goes to sleep, But just to warn you dont get a broken rib then you cant work for a few days.It'll open up a new world for you it did to me. But being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure for you and me, Its a grateful opportunity for all boys who want to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Think about it you'll probaly like it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Gender equality is the most important achievement of our era, but the fact that men still do esteemed jobs shows we have not been successful enough. Some people believe that the government should reserve certain percentages of these jobs for women. I agree with his idea due to the following reasons. \r\n\r\nSome people believe that people should have job opportunities based on their qualifications and pay more attention to women. I think that would be true if we had some equality for all processes of our life. It would be right if men and women had equal conditions at all stages of life. Contrariwise, women still suffer from female discrimination, directly and indirectly. So men and women don't grow up in the same situation. In such circumstances, competing men and women to get a job is not fair. \r\n\r\nWomen’s abilities to do important jobs are considered. In the United States, women got more PHDs than men last year. Despite this, fewer women are in important jobs. Those facts show sexism does even exist in socially progressive countries. Ignoring women's capacities can decrease their motivation. Supporting women by the government can motivate them and their families. \r\n\r\nAs a result, reserving high levels of jobs by the government for women can help power balance between men and women, which is necessary for all societies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many years countries like the United States, France, and Germany idolized the cars that they managed to manufacture. This so-called \"love affair\" between people and their cars, though, has started to diminish, and it may be for the better. In the past, the people who owned the prettiest, loudest, and coolest cars considered themselves to be at the top of an automobile social structure, but now, new generations are starting to move away from buying cars. They've resorting to walking, bicycling, or taking a form of public transport. Sure, owning cars may make you \"better\" than everyone else, but at what cost?\n\nCarbon dioxide emissions are at an all-time high, meaning that cars are harming the world more than helping it.\n\nYes, cars will be continue to be seen as cool, and owning cars will continue to be seen as cool, but nevertheless, with green house gases emitted from the tailpipes of cars ripping holes in the Earth's atmosphere, cars seem to be more of an impediment to the cause than an improvement.\n\nCountries in Western Europe such as Paris and Germany have recognized that the exponential amounts of smog produced by cars are becoming dangerous. Legislators everywhere are taking cautious steps towards eliminating the gases that have a choke hold their cities. An official of the Transportation for America, David Goldberg says \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" (Par. 7, Rosenthal). Cities in Paris and Germany are adopting a similar idea- developing cities than have a ban cars.\n\nVauban, Germany is one of these cities, dicouraging their 5,500 residents to give up their cars, charging them $40,000 to be able to park in one of the two garages in the city. As a result of these rules, 70% of the families that live in Vauban don't own a car, and 57% sold a car in order to live there (Par. 3, Rosenthal). The citizens are reported to be happier and less tense without a car, claiming that cars were the cause of their stress.\n\nCommunites like Vauban are set up in a way that makes life easy for the car-less citizens. In this approach, stores and offices are placed within walking distance from the houses, rather than in malls along some distant highway (Par. 6, Rosenthal). This has effectively reduced the amount of emissions of green-house gases drastically in Germany, and other countries around the world are starting to adopt Vauban's basic precepts in an attempt to make cities more compact (Par. 6, Rosenthal).\n\nParis, France is one of these cities that is revolutionizing its transportation. Paris has more smog than any other European counry, with 147 micrograms of particulate matter in the air, compared to 79.7 micrograms in London (Par. 17, Duffer). The smog rivaling that of Beijing, China, attempts were made by the government to reduce this smog, fining motorists for two days if they were found using their cars. France, having tax policies that favored the use of diesel over regular gas, blamed diesel fuel for it's record pollution levels.\n\nBogota, Colombia ran into a similar problem with it's high numbers of carbon dioxide emissions. The country has developed an atmosphere improvement campaign in the 1990's, constructing hiking and bicycle paths to encourage people to go \"car-free\". For the Day Without Cars, alternative transportation like taxis, buses, and bicycles are promoted, and violators that use their cars on this day are fined $25. Despite the constant rain, participants still turned out, claiming that \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away the stress and lower air pollution,\" (Par. 24, Selsky).\n\nOther cities in Colombia have joined the event such as Cali and Valledupar. The mayor of Asunción, Paraguay, hearing about the revolutionary event says \"These people are genertaing a revolutionary change, anf this is crossing borders,\" (Par 26, Selsky). Since the Day Without Cars' institution, parks and sports centers have prospered, sidewalks and roads have been repaved, and traffic congestion has been dramatically reduced (Par. 28, Selsky). The appeal of car culture is decreasing, and it has effected countries all over the world.\n\nAn \"incipient shift\" in American's behavior over the last few years sugests that the American people are driving less, buying fewer cars, and getting fewer licenses every year (Par. 29, Rosenthal). The number of miles driven by Americans peaked in 2005, and has been diminishing steadily after that. Due to the recession, the majority of Americans couldn't afford to buy new cars, meaning that less people were driving.\n\nMimi Sheller, a sociology professer states that, \"Different things are converging which suggests that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift,\" (Par. 35, Rosenthal). What she says is true; carpooling, van and public transportation services, and bike-sharing programs are the most populat they've ever been. Shifts in the population of drivers may accelerate the current trend, and the \"cash-strapped\" Americans that can't afford a car may never actually have to buy one.\n\nThe teenage and young adult population has been affected by this cultural shift aswell, with many teenagers not bothering to get a liscence. They figure out other ways to get around, and revolve their schedules arounf where they can walk or which friend they can ride with. Driving by young people is at an all-time low, dropping by 23% between 2001 and 2009 (Par. 41, Rosenthal). Many young people are adopting the ideas that owning, or even driving vehicles is impractical, or even undesirable. This mind-set, in turn, is reducing green house gas emissions unintentionally.\n\nOver the years car and culture trends have changed multiple times, and this trend occurring now is probably the best one yet. Reducing carbon dioxide and green house gas emissions is very important, and this current philosophy and outlook on cars is aiding the elimination of those harmful gases. \"Pedestrain, bicycle, private cars, commecial and public traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" (Par. 43, Rosenthal). Overall, this idea is helping the Eath, unlike the many ideas before it. Limiting car use has had a positive effect on the world, and has been advantageous in many countries in helping them revitialize their cities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been in your car and thought I wish my car could drive by its self? Well you must have a fairy godmother because your wish just came true. They have started to design driverless cars now, they are very efficient. They are a lot easier to drive as well. Driverless cars make everyones life easier and they need to be manufactured.\n\nThese driverless cars can actually limit your risk of having an accident. The cars have a sensor and they sense when an object is too close. The author shows this by \"Those sensors had become moe advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" This shows how these cars can better keep not just you but also your family safe. These cars also have auto brakes which can better prevent collisions. The author gives examples of this in \" Can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine.\" This shows how the car can prevent accidents from happening.\n\nOn top of that these driverless cars are a lot easier to handle or control. On way they are easier is by being able to navigate through work zones by itself. the author shows this in this excerpt \" They can steer...\" This shows that they can steer by themselves. Another way is by going around accidents. The author states that the veichle will be able to go around a proplem it faces.\n\nIf that's not enough to convince you its a good idea then they also make drivers more alert when they're on the road. One way they do this is by quickly getting the drivers attention when there is an issue. Another way it make driver more alert is by having driver seats that vibrate to alert the driver. The author shows this by \"GM has developed driver's seat that vibrate when the veichle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This shows that drivers will stay alert even if they are not driving.\n\nThese cars are very useful in every day life. They help you have less accidents so less money you need to pay on your insurance. Also, they are very easy to handle or function. Driverless cars also make you as a driver more alert to prevent injury to you or your car. Driverless cars can make everyones life easir and need to be manufactured.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the majority of couples are opting to have children in the later part of their life. Some explanation for such situation is discussed before analyzing the impact on society and family life is given. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, having children in the early stage of a newly married couple's life has become an old fashion now. People nowadays are very serious about their professional careers. Both husband and wife want to excel in their respective fields. Usually, in their first year of marriage there is a difference in opinion on who and how will they raise the kid. Secondly, they believe the older father and mother are more capable to look after a kid as they are more experienced, wealthier, and more willing to bring up the child. For example, nowadays people are having kids in their mid-thirties. \r\n\r\nEvery trend comes with both merits and demerits. A Newly couple will get enough time to spend with each other before taking the responsibility to raise a kid. They can have many unplanned vacations, outings, dinners without any hesitation or burden of looking after the child. Parents both can be more focused on their work in order to achieve their dreams or lay a solid foundation for their future. But, on the other hand, when a recently married couple decides to have a child later, there might be some serious health risks. Women can have some serious complications during the prenatal and postnatal. Consequently, if any maternal health issues arise the whole family's morale is turned upside down.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having a baby during the later time of your life are caused by many factors, majorly because of competitiveness in the market for young adults, and both the advantages and disadvantage effects can be seen on family life and societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "STUDENT_NAME\n\nOTHER_PII\n\nOTHER_PII\n\nThere reason why the author says to how he supports the claim is becuase we could have question like these ,\"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\". So thats why we should or theres a good reasson why we should learn what we can from things like these.Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.People who come learing things like this know how and where things goes when comes on to things like this .The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Thats why back then it wasnt easy isnt learing things like this becuase bascelly now everything we look for or eveything we do now is by phone or a comuter or something the back then wasnt there to help as much knowing to what it is and what it dose.So that the why aother would ask how or why we would wanna study this or if it was worth it.\n\n\"Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.\" its worth so much for you to see how much to learn or how much you get from listening, from it or to it's not just what you can see out of it.Reason would be becasue you wouldnt just know things like this you would know what to expcact what they say.The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?,Theres a lot of reason why its worth studying thiis you have question and you want answers and you cant even figere that put becase of you dont know thow things and becuase you would see things that dont make sense to you.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.In teh article it says how things can, be done a other or a onther it aways come to back and how things.It\n\ncome back yo what we know at the end of the day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a horrible idea and it seems like a really easy way for people to get killed. Some people are always going to neglect the safety hazards or the law and there will be more car deaths than there has ever been before.\n\nBefore getting sucked into \"the future\",citizens have to realize that having computer cars are not a good idea. Most people can't handle a computer how could they possibly control a car and a computer. If these type of cars releasse there needs to be a whole different licenense because only responsible people will do responsible things with these cars; irresponsibke people would think it's ok to take naps behind the wheel, but it's not, the driver must be alert through all times(p.7 \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\").\n\nWhat is the point of driverless cars if not for humans to take naps or watch a movie on netflix? The whole driverless car idead promotes laziness. There is absolutely too many thing that could go wrong on the highway, the street, a mountain, etc. and there will be a time that someone just won't be able to grab control and that will be it, then people will see the danger in driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I went get teath cleaned went doctors I waited three NUM hours get teath cleaned hand I took book read I reading book times I got called get teath cleaned I went doctors get wald medisan refilled get shoes I wait two NUM hours getting called room I waited could get shots ready So I waited five hours five minutes time I finally went eat lunch That I daySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello there, my name is Luke Bomberger, and I'm here to convince you to participate in my favorite program, the Seagoing Cowboys. To be apart of this program is an opportunity of a lifetime. It all started when the 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA. They hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. We went everywhere, including Europe, China, Greece, and even Italy! I even have a spectacular story about me in Greece. I turned eight-teen before arriving in Greece, which ment that I could be in the military, but when they realized that I was a Seagoing Cowboy, they told me to just keep doing it for my service.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy I was even the one who made nine whole trips. The most of any Seagoing Cowboy! Being apart of this, was one of the greatest opportunities for a small-town boy like me. It was helping out on my Aunt Katie's farm had prepared me for the hardwork for the animals like by feedding and water them two or three times a day, feeding the horses bales of hay and bags of oats, and the stalls even had to be clean. One thing I can say about that part, is that it did keep me busier than ever!\n\nThere were too many fun times we had, but there were times that we didn't. On my second trip, I served as a nightwatchman, and my only job was to check on all the animals every hour. After I made one of my hourly reports, I slid down a very slick ladder. My heart was like a bullet beating so fast in my chest. I almost fell into the Atlantic Ocean. My ribs were so cracked, they said that they can't even work for the next couple of days, so I didn't.\n\nAlthough there were scary parts of all the trips, there were fun parts too! I always had fun on board, especially after the animals had been unlodaded. We would play baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games all helped pass the time. It really opened up the world for me, and I am grateful for the opportunity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the planet of our solar system. Occasionally Venus is the closest planet to Earth in term of size as well as distance. Venus, also known as \"Evening Star,\" is a second planet from our sun that makes it more brighter and warmer. Venus is covered with a large blanket of carbon dioxide. The temperature on the Venus is approximately 800 degrees Fahrenhite, and also has the atmospheric pressure 90 time greater than on Earth, this circumstances make the Human life quite impposible on Venus. Venusian geology has impediments like volcano eruption and earthquickes.\n\nDo you ever feel how interesting it would be to visit places that are out of this world? Or, do you ever thought, what if we get the chance to visit different planets like Venus or Mars? Well, we are no longer away from the time when we will visit different planets for our vacation trips. Although our neighboring planets are inhospitable of human life, however ; Astronomers are fascinated about Venus because it may once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago Vinus was covered with oceans and could have supported various froms of life. Even today, Venus have some features that are analogous to those on the Earth. Human's have sent plethora number of spacecrafts to Venus but didn't get success. NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to the study Venus. NASA's possible solution to hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray, as the temperature would be around 170 degrees Farhrenheit above that land, it will make easier for humans to research on Venus. To get samples of rock or gas, scientists has to conduct a mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and persional despite the risks. NASA has discovered that electronic devices made of silicon carbide can last for three weeks on Venus as they will not melt easily. NASA and many other organizations are working hard to make it possible for human to visit other planets.\n\nAs we know, how many different condition are becoming hindurance for humans to visit Venus, but we are no longer away from the time when human will visit other planets and will research about that planet. Recently scientists has discovered that their is a life possible on Mars. Many organizations like NASA and Space-X are working hard to send humans to Mars. Similarly we will find the way to land on Venus and know more about it. Our travels beyond the Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, Mr. Senator i'm writing this letter to you because i'm in favor of keeping the Electrocal College. I'm in favor of the Electroral college because \"the electoral college method is not democratic in a modern sense\". There are five reason's im in favor of the electrocal college, One reason is the certainty of the outcome you wont win if you have more popular votes but less electoral vote \"It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes\".\n\nThe second reason is Everyone's President \"The electroral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\"\n\nIn the 2012 elections Romney was popular in the south \"no incentive to campaign heavily in those states.\" He doesnt have to have to campaign that much in the south because he knows those states will vote for him. The third reason is the Swing States \"The winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates-as we saw in 2012-to focustheir campaing efforts on the toss-up state.\" Voters in the toss-up states have to pay close attention to the campaign because they're the ones that are going to decide the election . The forth reason is Big states, the bigger the states the more electoral votes they have and the presidential candidates pay more attention to those states \"a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in campaign than a small state does...\"\n\nThe fifth Reason is Avoid Run-Off Elections \"There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the preisdential election process, reduced by the electoral college, which invariably produces a clear winner...\" that was my last reason i hope it stays the same to elect presidents. There are alot of people that want the elctions to change but i think this is the best way to elect presidents. Mr. senator i hope you have read my letter and that you consider wjat i have wrote on this letter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story basically brings back memories In memoir author feels happy strong lovable mood He feels times never going forgettable s always going remember times That gets older take good times granted Even bad times look back Also always thankful parents done make life better esier That way would nt life hard depressed life Hopefully always thankful oppertunity parents gave I know parents I would never forgetSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Facial Action Coding System is an outstanding idea. This device would help so many people brighten their mood, elaborate the learning ability of students to try and help them, and all around make the world happier.\n\nEvery student comes to school and sees their friends. But, can you really tell how they are feeling? The only way you would be able to make a hypothesis is based on their expressions and being friends with them for maybe a long time. But maybe the teacher would have a more strenuous time trying to figure out their students moods. That is exactly what this new technology will do. The author states,\"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" So a teacher could implement this technology and figure out if a student is having a rough day and try to show some compassion towards them.\n\nThis new technology would also help the academic studies of students and make the environment they work in more happy. In the article the author states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is perfect for students, especially since the generation now is obtaining a lot of homework from their teachers that has to be completed online. I find myself being cofused or bored on homework quite often, so this technology would be able to help me and students all around the world, stay interested and advance their intelligence at the pace that is right for them. This technology being able to detect emotion is great for inside a classroom. It could detect a student having a rough day and so some other students could get together and elaborate a plan to try and make that student feel happy. In my own experience, when everyone is happy in the classroom, it makes for a easier and stressless day at school.\n\nThis technology is a great step for the future. Enabling students to be happier in their young year and advance academically at the pace they need will carry on throughout their years. Having smarter and more enthusiastic people in the job force will make more companies strive and make the world more efficient. So why not say yes to this technology, making the lifes of students in the classroom less stressful, and make the world a better place?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper people think computers waste time dangerous Yes computers dangerous also help diffrent ways Such paying bills line planin vacation even attending collage classes For people bills strugle They incovenienc way If think people work day time night would nt nice come home bills payed Well one way computers computers programs help pay bills faster come home relax enjy free time Computers also good planing vactions people year use line programs plan vacations trips example family I planed trip When get airport first class tikets ride wateing got plain best far Going new generation people starting take line colleg classes fact work kid home good people jobs short learn alot A computer helpful taking classes one would incible taking class A computer great thing things So mother worker would like go back school consider taking line colleg classes And family wants vacation try one programs enternet travlingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Base excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock They going might hit building fly self Could get close enough tie forceful winds CAPS lines That mean nt safeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In beginning use dirigibles seemed like good idea They could new form transportation appeared flaws As development dirigibles progressed showed signs problems The engineers planned mooring dirigible mast Empire State Building would added lot stress building s frame They next found safety issue Most dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium flamable Also would use lead weights hold dirigible moored It would dangerous lead weights dangling pedestrians street With lead weights dirigible would simply swivel air possibility puncturing shell Finally law airships flying low urban areas This made illegal ship even approach building There high hopes use dirigibles end cons prosSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the world has been experiencing rapidly aging population, the issue of providing proper care for the elderly is concerning the society. However, I am inclined to believe that the increase of elderly people will be under control. While many challenges are likely to taken place, there will be effective ways to manage this civil segment with the cooperation of both government and private sectors.\nAs the elderly population is expanding, the demand for nursing homes or elders’ clubs are on the increase. To meet this demand, private sectors are investing on this type of institutions and services as they foresee the lucrative profit these businesses can probably generate in the near future. Apparently, young people are occupied with their daily job which makes it impossible to take care of their parents or grandparents. Therefore, sending the elderly to nursing homes or hiring personal care service are reasonable options to be consider.\nAnother reason to validate my opinion is the balance in labor force. While some developed countries are experiencing aging population, the scenario is opposite in developing countries whose birth rate is considerably high. As a result, many developed countries such as Germany have encouraged a welcoming entry of those young laborers into its nursing industry. One of my friend has been settling in Germany following her moving to the country 5 years ago to become a nursing staff in privately-owned elderly clubs.\nLast but not least, government interference in elderly care is highly recommended. It is suggested that the government allocate more budget to establish publicly-owned elderly homes to mitigate the financial burden to acquire this service. Moreover, regulations on pension plan should be properly adjusted and taken more seriously by employers so that people are assured financially when they are retire.\nIn conclusion, I believe the elderly problem is likely to be handled well if there are joint effort of both private and public sectors in creating healthcare system and human resource management.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On May 24, 2001 25 years ago something wierd happend on Mars. Viking 1 spacecraft was going around Mars, taking pictures of landing places for its sister ship. While taking pictures the Vicking saw the shadowy likeness of a human face. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the very first time ever. Michael Malin and and his Mars Orbiter Camera, took picturse 10 times shaper then then from the preveous Viking picture. After that they conclued that there was no alien monument after all.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor came realy close for a second look. Garvin said this \" We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to the center the Face in look.\" Malins team got an really extraordinary picture of the face, by using camera's absolute maximum resoltion.\n\nIn the 2001 Viking photo its spans 1.56 meters, in 1976 Viking photo comaperd to 43 meters per pixel.\n\nAfter all of the studies and looking at the picturese, what the picture actually shows is the Martin equivalent of the butte or mesa. They are landforms common in West American. Its a lava dome that takes a form of a isolated mesa its about the same size and height as the face of Mars. So thats why the pictue is just a natural landform. And not alien artifact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The construction workers faced many obstacles building Empire State building One obstacles hieght Since wanted make building tallest building world make sure enough technology Also add extra seventeen flores building making floors instead original floors Another obstacle safety issues The construction workers never checked problems building mooring mast In paragraph author States The yet unsolved problems mooring air ships afixed mass height made describable post pone later date final installation landing gear author trying say designing production mooring mass overlooked certain issues make set back final date Due obstacles construction team managed succeed Building tallest building The Empire State buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All throughout story Winter Hibiscus author gives feeling hope comfort obtaned Saeng thinks past And continue feeling hope last sentence gives feeling Saeng better beginning story For example beginning story Saeng feeling alrenated alone misplaced new country But story progresses starts develop peace mind certainly future brighter passing growing confidence In conclusion author uses last sentence give feeling hope Saengs future growing confidenceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is vary dangerous to explore it because because of the extream heat and the high pressurebut i think it would be worth it. I think it is a vary interesting planit because i would like to know if there is any other life than what is on earth. I dont think that earth is the only inhabbited planet.\n\nIn The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author says there are valleys, mountains, and craters. I think it would be nice if they could think of a way to explore venus but i dont know if that will happen because we might not be advanced enough. If we where able to get on the planet with out dieing we might find out that there was life on it or there might still be life on there that had to adapt to the envierment.\n\nThere are alot more planets out in the univers we shout see how far we can get. We might find other planets with life on them. I dont think we should just focus on this one planet. All they are doing is waisting recources on one planet that they could be using on other panets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder how it would be like to live on another planet ? or if there was another planet that was like Earth? Well now you can. Scientist have benn trying to reaserch on Venus and how many years ago. Scientist belived that Venus was covered with large oceans and that it may have supported various forms of life. Why cant humans or other form of life live there, scientist have been studing venus for a long time. Venus average weather is up to 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the air pressure is 90 times greater than the one on earth. Our sister planet still has some features that resembled rocky sediments and features valleys, and moutains. Why studing venus is a important ideas. Studing Venus is important because if there is another planet that reasembles Earth so that it wont be overpopulated and see if there could one day be a way to live in another planet. In conclution it's a very smart choice that scientist keep studing earth and see if one day it could be a planet to live on.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this short story the authoer is sayiing thet it is not woth you time to study venus. it not with the time but it is a star that shines bright inthe sky at nigh time. The author said \"the value of returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the opitions for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive\". it not safe to send to someone int to space to venus becasue they do not know if they will be able to get them back to earth safely. for other reason, \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile condititons on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the roiling venusian landscape. with means that venus landscape it not good for people to be up ther on it surface, scientist do jnot know if there is right oxygen on that planet for humans to breath. With that\n\n\"NASA is working on other approaches to study venus\", because they are now thinking that it not safe for them to send humans upp to space to get data for them because they don't know what it like on that planet or how the weather , the surface is for humans to be on it. NASA is goimg to be useing technology with they call \" mechanical computers\" to studdy the planet here on earth. but venus is now called\" the evening star brightest points of light in the night sky\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based on what I've read some believe that there's a face on Mars, and it could be linked to extra-terrestrial life. But I don't find this to be truthful here's why. If you look at the picture from 1976 it can resemble a face, but if you look at the 2001 picture it just looks like a landform. Here's another thing, the one from 1998 looks like volcanic activity is emerging, which could be the case. These pictures contain important information, and data that can be analyzed, which will help NASA find out more about this.\n\nLet's go back to the Viking 1 spacecraft. This machine was built in 1976, which could possibly mean the machines camera was broken, or malfunctioning. One major factor in this is NASA. NASA is a company who study's life outside our atmosphere. When they launch probes into space it costs millions of dollars to do so. When they find real life outside our atmosphere they get paid for all the research they've done.\n\nThen there's the rumors that certain people spread around. Usually it's untrue, but there's a possibility that it's true. These are theorists, they do this to gain popularity for themselves, or sometimes even money. The \"Face on Mars\" did gain lots of popularity for itself among time. It got movies, magazines, even haunted grocery checkout lines. But among that it caused other things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People say this giant face like montain is from nature, some say its an arifact from an ancient civilization on mars . What do i think? I think it's just mother nature at her best. I will explain to you why i believe so.\n\nAs shown in paragraphs 2 and 3, Martian mesa's are very common around the area of the \"face\". And that its not really a face but really its sort of like an illusion ,because of the shadowing at the eyes, nose, and mouth. sure there are huge posiblities that this face can be an artifact ,but we have no proof.\n\nIn 1998 when scientist sent a probe back to mars, they had no evidence of\n\n\"The Face\" being an ancient artifact. But, through out the whole passage they never gave us any factual detail of this face on mars suface is an actual artifact or not ,so until scientist actually give us proof on anything, the world may never know until that day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was the first spacecraft of any sort to see the mysterious face on Mars? This mysterious face was first discovered in 2001. I am a scientist from NASA that has been researching this unusual, shadowy likeness of a human face since about twenty-five years ago. My name is Ellie. I get all sorts of questions and opinions asked to me about the human face. Some people say that they do not think that it's real, and that NASA is just making it up to get more people to notice us. Well, that would be wrong, considereing that we have pictures to prove it. We know that the face is just a natural landform because the pictures show it to be almost equivalent of a mesa or butte, and it looks identical to the Middle Butte in Idaho.\n\nWe know that the shadowy likeness of a human face is just a natural landform because is looks almost equivalent to a mesa or a butte. We have many questions asking things like, \" How do you know that aliens didn't form it?\"\n\nand, \"How do we know that this picture is not photoshopped to get NASA more commercial business?\" The answer is we don't know exactly what formed it, but our research shows that it is a natural landform. First of all, pictures do not lie, especially that camera that we took it with. We took the picture with using a camera's absolute maximum resolution. In this camera, \"each pixel in the 2001 images spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo\" as we know from our research. Also, the mysterious landform that we captured looked like a mesa or a butte- landforms that are common around the American Midwest. to add to that, the Face takes the same shape as a lava dome and the same height. Not only does the face look almost equivalent to a mesa or butte, but it also looks almost identical to most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nAnother reson that we know that the Face is just a natural landorm is because it looks almost identical to a landform is Idaho. People send NASA emails, and letters asking questions. One of our most states opinions is,\" Just because it looks like a landform on Earth doesn't mean anything. Things might be different there and there could be aliens there.\" Yes that could be true, but our research and pictures also prove it to be wrong. The first snapshot of the Face was captured was a long time ago. Since then our camera and photo quality has improved. Today we now have way better pictures of the Face than we did over twenty-five years ago. That means that we can see the landform better and look at the different characteristics of the landform. Then after we looked at the characteristics, we found that the Face had almost the exact same size, shape, quality of a landform in Idaho, United States. Also, one of our researches stated the definition of the Middle Butte. He stated,\"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face in Mars. Thousands of web surfers had been anxiously waiting for images for NASA to be revealed. Until one day we released the pictures. As we knew already, web surfers found that there was \"no alien monument after all\" as we know from our research. We also released how we took the picture. We had a picture taken by a camera on board MGS, but it had to peer through clouds. Then people started saying statements like,\" Perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze.\" Once again, that cannot be true because the characteristics and qualities of the Face look exactly like a part of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nNow you have been proved wrong, and I hope all your questions were answered about the Face, or at least the questions that were stated in the article. we have done a lot of research on this mysterious human face, and found that it was not created by aliens. We know that it is a landform because it looks like a mesa or a butte, and it looks almost identical to the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Therefore, this Face is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robot is one of people’s developments which are recently becoming a hot topic. An artificial intelligence robot can do almost every work by the data. Because of this ability, some people say that the intelligence robot will do all jobs in the future. But the others say it will not. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss about this topic.\r\n\r\n First, artificial intelligence robot is more efficient than human. AIBO mainly work with the input data, so it is more authentic than people. Also, it has a fast judgment. In other words, it judges the situation or the problem immediately by using the system. For example, there is an AIBO is calculating the mathematical problems. It solves the problem by finding out the example of the problem in several data which are input in it. Thus, some people say AIBO will do all jobs in the future.\r\n\r\n Second, some think AIBO has no ability to create. AIBO’s thinking is limited with the information in their system. As a result, it cannot find a solution to a problem that it never met before. Moreover, AIBO has no feelings. It can copy people’s emotions and instincts, however, it has no ability to understand and feel it. For instance, some jobs such as writer who needs to explain the emotional exchanges between the characters are hard to explain well by robot. Therefore, I think artificial intelligence robot does not have ability to develop.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, artificial intelligence robot is a great invention of human. It has advantage of more efficient than people with accumulate thinking and expedite judgment. However, jobs like writer and scientist who has to understand well human’s feeling and find out new things cannot be done by AIBO. Accordingly, I disagree that AIBO will do every job in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The contents books libraries vary many way Some children s books adult books Libraries books spark interest reader Not books made particular age group gender Which mean library picked apart contents novel magazines music movies A library suppose anyone enjoys read variety materials select people nt like text meanings behind book song movie In library little town splits variations reading materials music movies There children s section books grew half building Also audult section larger novels topics teens younger children would interest parents would want reading Another great thing books people like teen books spark interest With ideas people writing today possible control comes mind Some greatest books probably deepest meanings audiences nt prefere listen But great people liberty go find book magazine even likeWhen freedom read taken away reader stop reading Does nt admisistrations schools want kids read get test scores If take away like read nt mean stop reading Also nt mean test scores go In experience topics I read grown mother would like fact people read want People nt like told personal experience Taking away topics well liked even words contents reading fair readers I believe censor books music movies magazines etc would mean libraries would goneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming' It tell bith postive and negative facts about driverless cars. I believe that there should be drtiverless cars this is where I stand. Driverless cars have been worked on for a while now. So far they have developed software to help the advancedment of driverless cars. I think that driverless cars will provide more of a positive impact on the world than a negative one.\n\nDriverless cars have been worked on for a while now. Its been since the 1980's the used sensors attached to the wheels of cars of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, they are more advanced with better response times than ever when indanger and all around. In the late 1950's, receivers to capture radio signals th guide the car on a special track.\n\nSo far they have develped software to help the advancedment of driverless cars .In 2013, There was a develpment called \"Trafic Jam Assistant\"announced by BMW.This helps steer,accelerate, and break themselves. however they notify the driver when it doesn't have the skills to drive it in a certin situation. It can function up to 25 mph. There are also vibrations in the drivers seat to notify of an emergancy. This can mean that the driver still needs to stay concentrated on the road when the sitiuations occur. There have beeen ideas considering useing flashlights lighs on the mwindsheilkd and other heads up display just in case.\n\nDriverless carts really aren't driverless now. Most of the software for the car still needs someone to drive the car. The software hasn't really advanced so much the needs to be no one conentrating on the road ahead. These are just to help progress the advancement for driverless cars and increases safety. So even if the sofware fails the car still has the driver attention on the road. All they can do now is help the driver and other become more afe when driving incase anything happens.\n\nIn concluion, the driverless cars now aren't completely driverless and needs the drivers skills so that means it can provide more safety than less. If it can continue in success the driverless cars will be much more safe than now. Driverless cars can use half the fuel of today's cars and can offer more felxiblity when driving. The cars can have better response times than humans can in the future. Driverless cars will provide more of an increase in safety then what we have now in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars aren't a good idea. Even though Genral Motors developed a special test track to determine is these cars are working or not , when this car is sold the might still be a defect.\n\nAt first the were constructing a smart road that took a lot of magnetic sensors, which cost a lot to do. So they started a smart car. to make this car they need alot of sensors. This car took alot of time an work to manufacture. The most important part of this Toyota Prius was to mimic the skill of the human at the wheel. These sensors were advanced to detect response to danger of \" out of control skids or rollover\". The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. Even though it allows better response for the car, what about the people in the car that might get hurt inside the car.\n\nThis diverless car might be good for some, but some might think that people should still take caution in there their driving because if people use this car more, people might get to use to the car stopping on its on . They might forget how regular cars work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Author Joe Kurmaskie learns dangers lifeless wilderness experience described do exceed posted speed limit As cyclist riding one undeveloped areas California lack water found setting proves crippling survival The trails directed towns sources fresh drinkable water days The combination constant exercise riding terrain lack water recources California summer weather lack civilization trained authors energy caused suffer dehydration Too much exposer conditions could killed The modern time period year also caused directions author given accurate thus causing cyclist find self dangerous area country The setting do exceed posted speed limit places cyclist life threatening situationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay will talk about the general increase in talking about money.\nI will expose why I believe this is a negative development.\nIn worldwilde terms there has been a general society empoverishment.\nIn general terms, inflation has beaten the entire world very hard due to the fluctuations in energy prices, furthermore the war between Russia and Ucrania has worsen even more this fluctuation as Russia has almost stopped suppling Gas to Europe. On the other hand Ucrania was the biggest Europe´s seed warehouse and our economy at the food industry has also been affected by huge price increase.\nHowever salaries have not been rised up enough to reach inflation rate which directly has driven society to a loss of value. This fact induces us to speak more often and more in detail about prices, about our salaries or about our home rentals. Population wonders how come our governments are not settling different actions to repair this huge loss which is causing biggest wealth inequality rates, dividing even more the society between wealthy and poors and sending a lot of population to thicken \"the under the poverty line\" population .\nNewspapers and communication agencies daily inform about war status, but lately they are forgoting to insist on the economy crash we are suffering. Only in France there have been important strikes to report their disomfort with the enlargement of the retirement age as well as the general price increase.\nTo summarise, the economical situation worldwide is wobbling, and the least we can do is talking about it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the biggest concern for many developing and developed countries is to find ways to reduce or eliminate various pollutions. It is believed that by increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles can solve environmental issues. I moderately agree with this opinion and think that in addition to this there are various other methods to reduce the level of pollutions such as introducing battery operated vehicles, and planting more trees.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I believed that increasing the fuel cost will limit the usage of cars or other vehicles which in turn reduce the level of pollution to some extent. However, introducing battery operated vehicles can drastically decrease the levels of environmental pollution such as air pollution, as there will be no CO2 emissions. A good example to illustrate this idea is everlasting beauty of Switzerland where government has ban the fuel operated vehicles and make it compulsory for all its citizens to use eco-friendly cars in order to protect the environment they live in. Thus, not only increasing the cost of fuel can reduce the level of pollution, but also introducing eco-friendly cars can help to reduce the level of pollutions in air.\r\n\r\nSecondly, planting more trees is a natural way to clean air, water and soil. In other words, Trees plays an important role during the process of photosynthesis in which trees take in CO2 and produce the oxygen we breathe and thus improve the quality of air. In addition to this, it also help to conserve water, preserve soil and support wildlife. Switzerland is a prime example for such an initiative where planting trees are applauded whereas trading of wood, cutting trees for furniture’s are strictly prohibited and considered serious offence which may even results in life time prison.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I moderately agree that not only increasing the cost of fuel will help reduce the environmental issues but also believes that use of battery as a fuel and planting more trees can drastically improve the quality of environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As many people are interested in finding out about the history of house or buliding they live in. The main reason behind this is people are interested in History and want to earn name and fam. For research people can take help from researchers. \r\n\r\nThere are so many reason for finding about history such as a person becoming famous, want to earn money, want know get more and more knowledge and much more. Most of the community are fousing on finding more about building in which they live in. Some community are doing reserch because in many buliding because old age community have hide gold there. For example, if a man do research on building and get gold then its good for nation and for that person also. From my experience history teach person about many things. \r\n\r\nPeople can do reasearch in many ways like by searching on the intrenet. Public can get more information from books as well as by asking old age public. For example, if a woman want to do research on buliding then she can get more knowledge from books and old movies. Thus, Due to finding more and more about countries histories place many groups are getting employment and national income is also growing fast. However, government should support people who are doing reaserch and should give them funds. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the above information describe about people interset in finding more and more about history. Finding about history have so many benefits. There are so many reason for getting more data from history places. Hence, People can do reseach by taking help from so many other people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that most people benefit students contemplate at an institute or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.\n\t On the one hand, most companies desire to get a highly educated worker. Due to employees play a key role in exceeding other competitors and running a successful company. Therefore, these ways are opening up by going to institute and improving your education. For evidence from the most successful people graduated at an educational institution. Another argument is that if they study at the educational institution, they will be bosom friend who come from other countries of the world. Thus they will be able to work in a team and adapt to anything. \n\tBy contrast, opponents of this view point out that not all pupils live in a situation where study at the institute, or even possible. Examples can be seen in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a seminary may be hard. Finally, it must be said that not all young people actually desire to study at the educational institution, because their interests lie elsewhere. For example, some of them want to work after school.\n\tOverall, it is logical to conclude that a highly educated worker, unearth the culture of communications should be positive of our enterprise. It would appear that it serves the interest of both the offspring and family's environmental.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do u want to become a Seagoing Cowboy? Well, what are you waiting for! Join today and trust me you wont regret it. Seagoing Cowboys can be as young as 18. These wonderful cowboys travel the world to help those in need. Young 18 yearold Luke joined and he said that it was such a great oppurtunity and that it opened up the World to him. Let's take a closer look now at all of Luke's amazing adventures.\n\nWhen Luke and his friend Don sighned up to help the UNRRA they got the job of Seagoing Cowboys. These amazing cowboys take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke's first adventure took him to Greece. Along with the ship crew there were 335 horses to take to Greece. It still was going to take a two weeks to get to Europe though so Luke had to preform his duties.Luke's duties were to clean the stalls, feed the animals, and water them two or three times aday. All of these jobs kept Luke busy for the two week long journey.If you have good experience on a farm thaen this job would be perfect for you.When Luke arrived in Greece he got to see the Acropolis.\n\nWhile in Europe Luke got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. He also got to tour a castle in Crete. Luke was also able to marvled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nOn Luke's second trip he got night watch duty. He had the job of checking on the animals every hour. Luke suggests you have a steady balance for this job so you dont slip and fall off the edge. Luke stated that on there trip back to the USA they had time for fun when all the animals were out of there stalls. They would play baseball and volleyball in the empty stalls. The cowboys also occupied themselves with terrific games of table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. All these amazing activities helped the cowboys pass time on there sea voyage.\n\nLuke says that the Sea Cowboys is more than just a fun adventure its about helping those in need around the worl. Luke stated that the Sea cowboys program opened many doors in his life. For instance his family started taking in a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. So, if you have a kind and open loving heart I suggest you join the Sea Cowboys just like Luke did and trust me you wont regret it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more and more countries’ governments put teenagers' education in a highly prioritized place, but they are always ignoring educating adults who did not learn how to write and read. I completely agree that the government should pay more attention and financial aid to educating adults.\n\nFirst of all, Educating adults and giving them special training , will help us solve many toughly problems such as a decrease in the employment rate in many countries and meeting the high demand in society because of the lack of workers. Around the world there are a large number of countries that face the problem of declining birth rates that decreased the nation's workforce, so why we don’t use another special method to deal with this issue, I consider that making up more particular schools for a person is the best way.\n\nOn the other hand, knowledge is only one way to success, so we should give more opportunities for older people to succeed and improve the quantity of their life, training them with special skills that they have able to apply jobs and earn money for their family costs. Moreover, thank these days technology which let it easier for us to learn without the time and place restrictions, and the price of E-learning is cheaper than traditional study, it is a better way for adult learning. \n\nIn conclusion, I believe that there is no reason to government doesn’t spend more money on adult teaching, it will bring us plenty of benefits that we couldn’t imagine before, it can meet the high demand of labour markets, decrease the unemployment rate and give every resident chances for success.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We all have emotions and how we express them can be different than how other people express them. In the article \"making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about a new software called 'Facial Action Coding System'. the facial coding system can help kids in school to learn the lesson better and the teachers adapt to the kids and how they want to be taught to suceed.\n\nThe 'Facial Action Coding System' can help kids to learn the lesson and for the teachers to adapt to how the kids want to be taught and what is the best way to teach the students so they learn the material better and undertsand it. This system can give you percentages on their exact emotions for example it tests a total of 6 emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This could help the teachers to change their teaching techniques to improve the childs sucess rate. But some might say \"oh its an invasion of privacy to tell how we are really feel about people\". in that case than anythings an invasion of privacy because the technology is used to help the kids become more sucessful as students and help the teachers understand their students better. \" most communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" said by Dr. Haung in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" this shows that we learn from peoples actions more than what we learn from them when they speak.\n\nThe facial action coding system can improve peoples learning so they can be more sucessful in the long run. So teachers now don't have sit there thinking for an hour on how to help that one kid in the class that is mysterious to them and cant figure out a way to get through to them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorial college is one of the worst things to happen to america. there are so many reasons why but i will just give you three. It does not allow us to vote for president anymore. It's a lazy system. The voters have a right to pick yet it's not up to use it's up anyone who is not in office. The electorial system has just to may flaws.\n\nThe first reason is it doesn't alow us to vote for president anymore. The goverment has someone high in power of each state deside even if it's not true its who they want and how they want it. The electorial vote was created by some people high in power. Richard Nixon Jimmy Carter Bob Dole The U.S.A. chamber of commerce the CIO AFL all created the electorial vote mind you that all were know for bad ideas.\n\nThe second reason is It's a lazy system. Before some had to count all votes now no on has to count them the leaders of the states do it for them they pick who they feel and thats it. At any point in time there could be a tie because there is an even number of voters. Someone could even lows there presedince even if he gets the most votes.\n\nThe third and final reason is the reason that we use the electorial vote. We use it because its cheaper that way. The government wont tell u but its a cheaper way of voting. They know that if we use there way the money will come out of our pockets not theres so the have us use this way in stead.\n\nWell there you have it there is why an electorial vote is bad. I will give them this it is easier. But still there are so many reasons why its bad. We dont even vote anymore the leader of a state does. Its lazy and bab for either candidate. The electorial vote has been and will always be a bad way to vote and a bad thing for America and its history.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports his idea that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present in many ways. The first way the author supports this idea is by explaining all the dangers on Venus and then later shows how NASA has come up with ways to explore Venus safely. The second way he supports his idea is by using rhetorical questioons to start many of his paragraphs. Lastly the author also uses strong evidence and facts.\n\nTo start the author talks about the dangers that Venus has in paragraph 3. The author says, \"These conditons are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" By talking about these dangers the author shows that he has a full understanding of how dangerous the conditons on Venus are. He then further supports his point by stating a way that has been found that would allow people to study Venus without being harmed. The author states, \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditons, but survivable for humans.\" When the author states this it helps prove that there is a way to go to Venus and avoid the dangers it presents.\n\nSecondly the author asks questions in paragraph 4 and then he answers them. By doing this he gets the reader to stop and think and form an answer/opinion. For example he asks the question, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" This gets the reader to think about why scientist would still want to discover a place so harsh. It also alows for the reader to maybe start to agree with the author because if scientists want to explore Venus then maybe it isn't as bad as it seems.\n\nLastly the author uses ethos which is the appeal to authority. The author does this by talking about NASA. When the author brings up NASA it shows that he really knows what he is talking about. It does this because NASA specializes in space exploration and is seen as a group of intelligent individuals. The author states, \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" This helps support his claim because he is using ethos by stating that NASA has an idea and what NASA is.\n\nIn conclusion in the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supportsthe clame that Venus is a worth persuit despite the dangers it presents in a few ways. One of the ways the author suppors this idea is by using ethos. The second way that the author supports it is by explaining all the dangers and then explaining how to overcome them. The third way he supports his claim is by asking the audience questions to get them to think. Overall the author supports his idea well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Hello my name is STUDENT_NAME, I am from NASA and I heard that you thought the face was real on Mars.\"\n\n\"I don't think I know mister, and yes it is real and I have prove.\"\n\n\"Well sir if you have prove do you mind showing me.\"\n\n\"Well you see sir I don't exactly have it right now my friend borrowed it.\"\n\nSince he didn't have the evidence I wanted to leave, but something urged me to stay. Was it the way his tone was with him knowing that it was a head on Mars.\n\n\"Hey so are we gonna talk or are you leaving.\"\n\n\"No sir I want to hear more about how you know it is real.\"\n\n\"Okay so when I first seen the picture it was when I was OTHER_PII, my mom had showed it to me. When I first seen it i was immediatly intrigued, and I knew it was real. I don't care what those pictures show if you put people on Mars They will see for themselves that face is an alien life form.\n\n\"Well I see your point but you have to understand that Nasa has scientifical evidence that the face is just rock that has formed into what looks like a face.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My mom went doctors couple weeks ago school went like didnt leave till So little sister played game entertain ourselfs So watched tv played ipods told stories bored So got boring sit wait sit wait school I thought much left lie dear got fly cut seats But turns someone else asleep Then sudden I feel someone shaking saying lexi tayler my mom called woke ready go mall So went spent rest able day mall And story time I patient sitting doctorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience important value To sacced need patience I used patience life I got first horse I needed patience stubborn self centered poorly trained I teach moves slow pace could remember supposed I also needed patience moved present home didnt recognize surroundings These though ways patience appeared lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars\n\nDriverless cars could change the world for the better. They could make our lives easier and less stressful. Driverless cars could save lives, save time, and save money. These cars would be a great replacement for the manual cars used today. Driverless cars could benefit our society greatly.\n\nThis new invention of cars without drivers could save many lives. Each year thousands of citizens die, or are injured due to car accidents. These accidents are caused mainly by drivers. If cars continue to need drivers, many more deaths will result from this horrible choice. The drivers of these vehicles could be drunk, driving illegally without a valid license, texting, or distracted, resulting in car crashes. The possibilities as to why a person driving a car could get into an accident are endless! However, with no unsuitable driver at the wheel, roads all over the world will become much safer. If ,instead of a driver, the car is automated and drives by itself, people could rid the world of unsafe drivers. With these driverless cars, thousands of lives all over the world could be spared.\n\nDriverless cars could save people time. According to paragraph two in the article, Google's driverless cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Less crashes would result in less traffic jams. Without traffic jams, citizens would be able to get to their destination quicker and easier. Driverless cars could also save time by not having to constantly run into blocked roads. Due to the driverless cars being automated and controlled by an automated system, the system will most likely be able to detect the quickest route to the preferred destination. Therefore, driverless cars could be an advantage to us by saving us time.\n\nWith the invention of the driverless car, homo sapiens (humans) would be able to save money. The first product of the driverless car is not bound to be cheap, but as time progresses, the cost of this new car will eventually go down. According to paragraph one in the provided article, the driverless cars would use half the fuel of today's cars and would offer far more flexibility than a bus. Gas is a very expensive fuel. However, if citizens were to only need to pay for half of the money they pay for gas today, then they could save a lot of money that could be used for more important investments. Also, the driverless cars could result in less car crashes, which would result in not having to pay for damage repair. Overall, the driverless cars would not only your save life, but your money too.\n\nThe driverless cars could benefit our lives. They would be able to not only improve the way people live today, but they would also have the power to save lives, save time, and save money. This new car design could be the exact replacement, for the manual car used today, our society has been looking for. With these cars, students would also be able to focus on their schoolwork more, rather than on passing their driving exam. They could change life as people know it. The driverless cars would fundamentally change the world for the better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most us times really book magazine reading sudden come across vulgar language pictures activities suitable us Why author throw book Why nt back book tell offensive behavior book Why magazine library risky pictures It even make people interested specific author anymore quite possibly persuade someone stop visiting library Certain materials libraries removed The first reason certain materials libraries removed suitable children even young teenagers Let s say child library pick random book check Turns summary story back actually college kids partying participating illegal activities Your child hand read summary wants book based moral story interesting cover critic reviews If child reads book vulgar language illegal activities likely going upset The second reason certain materials libraries removed books materials offensive material placed book stores instead public library In case parents feel content children read material library Adults older teenagers still material choice take trip bookstore find need They get check items free like library safer children young teenagers Not mention people respect morals much read offensive material The third reason certain materials libraries removed library ordered state back book magazine movies etc way choose book contains anything taken offensive reader That way someone questioning summary book risky title cover illustration flip back see tolerable Libraries remove certain materials shelves It create civil trip library No worries accidentely coming upon sentence chapter book someone s morals Or flipping pages magzine seeing picture offends Libraries contain safe books ages bookstores pleasure offensive material shelves It s win win situationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Explaining venus\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Venus has so much the reader can learn about like how cool it is, the dangerous part about Venus, and some facts that most people did not know about.\n\nOne thing they can learn about is how cool it is. In the text it states \"Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetry neighbor, aorbit the sun different speeds.\" In that evidence it explains that it is not the same but it is still cool for kids to learn about and read about. for some kids if they read it they can tell other people about it because most of the readers wouldnt have know about this.\n\nOne more evidence is how hard it is to study Venus. In this paragraph it shows \"Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light can not penatrate the dense atmosphere , rendering standard forms of photograpy and videography ineffective\". In this text it tells you why it is hard for them to go up there. \"more importantly, researchers can not take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\". They had trouble getting proof of what was on venus, because they couldnt send anything up there.\n\nThis essay shows why Venus would be great to study and why it is so hard for people to go up there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph feels like audience know saeng feeling This paragraph ending shows saeng keep trying every spring grow back flowers shows Saeng lot potential make vowe top successfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is a natural landform that NASA has captured. Us scientist strongly believe that it is just a regular landform on Mars, because the way that the picture is set up. NASA says that the objects in the picture is common around the American West, but not everyone was falling for that when the picture was released. Because when they went to Mars it was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. So it wasn't that much of a clear veiw to take a picture in.\n\nSkeptics says that the alien markings were hidden by haze. Some people think that NASA would hide the fact that there was life on Mars, buts thats not the case at all. Then on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the very first time. Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture way better than the original Viking photos. No one said it was an alien creation after that photo was taken becuase it wasn't and us scientist knew it wasn't from the beginning of all of this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be a great advance in technology. People may have to help the car through tough driving situations, but that's understandable. Even though there are laws against it in many states, when people see how safe these cars can be then the laws might change.\n\nThere have been many great advances in technology in the past decade. Technology keeps getting better and better. Back in the 1950s people tested the driverless car but they also needed a smart road. Now instead of needing a smart road engineers have started creating a new type of smart car because having to replace all the roads is an almost impossible thing to do. On these cars there is a version made by Google who modified the Toyota Prius and put sensors on the left wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, and a GPS receiver. This will all help the car in driving itself.\n\nEven though the car has all those things there are still ways it would have to be used by humans. This isn't a bad thing though. If the car couldn't go through traffic and had problems then a human would need to take over because it's just too hard for the car to all that stopping and starting again on its own and you're also saving your car froming being in an accident. Another way manufacturers thought up to keep drivers from getting bored waiting on their turn to drive was putting in an in-car entertainment that will be shut off when the driver is needed.\n\nIn many states there are laws that it is even illegal to test driverless cars. People think the only safe car is a car with a human driver. While laws are put in place to protect the saftey of people and other cars, when people see how safe the new driverless cars are then they will change the law.\n\nThere are many ways thar driverless cars are good. I only listed a few of the many. That's why I think driverless cars are the future of this world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article authors mood seemed happy good For example likes parents selfish hard working people tried make life happy He also liked would invite lot people come visit treated like family He also likes tought things know cooking His mood seem change talked Cuba job bit eser New Jersey They tried make much could mood seemed bit worried His mood changed happy menchened loves way treat house like real homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In This article they are talking about Exploring Venus and why is it good to do this. My reason why we should not do this is To dangress for human to be on Venus because it's rain is acid their too so if make something that we can be on the plant the rain will kill us still nothing save you from acid. But only that one thing the air their so bad that you will die by that too. But they ae making a robot that can last 3 week on the plant. They are planning of making a airship that flots 30 feet up in the air but the storm are so bad that they wont last that long.\n\nNot including how we can breath too. But they can try all they want their not going make it because venus is a dangress plants storm and just heat alone will kill him in 25 to 15 minute just being on their an if that doesn't kill them the presure of the plant will kill you not including any type of food will not be eatable because of the acid and not so good air thair for making venus not human comtamble at all.\n\nBut that not it the toxcit air will poison you an kill you so eating their will lead to your death at some point being their because th poison will soon start kicking in anf slowly killing you being how much you take in your body. their only so much we can do that is sending a robot to venus that really it their not point reasking you life so they can go on venus their no point in it at all. But venus has other thing that kill you lighen will kill you their too they have lighten storm thair about every 23minute on the plant alone so anythig metal or something that can track lighten to it will cause your death faster so what say we make it so we can be on the plant.\n\nHow we going get on we have not ship that can stand up to the acid clouds it burn throw that hold spaceship and kill who on it by falling to death or by the acid I'm not saying we can't do it I saying it's going take us long time an year to able to do it not including the cost that going be to get to that point in life but we might not make and forgot it too but only we can do it or not do it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When attempting allow dirigibles dock attop Empire state building builders faced obsticles One obsticle faced strong wind current As said paragraph winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This would cause back ship swivel around mast Another obsticle added stress would put foundation building The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate stated paragraph A third obsticle builders faced matter dangers fire well chances endangering discussed paragraph One last obsticle faced builders existing law airships flying low urban areas paragraph Those many major obsticles faced builders attempting dock dirigibles top tallest building worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although this technology is very cool and exiting it has flaws. Even though certian expressions show differnt feelings how can you actually know what I feel. These are answers that I will be talking about.\n\nOne question I have is how do you know what I am actually feeling. In some movies they have x-men and other hero's that have powers to know what people are thinking. But I don't think this is the case here. In the artical it talked about how is you made the expression you actually felt how you were acting. That kind of sounds like lying to me. You might just be seeing their fake emotions and not how they trully feel. I know that with me. I fake how I feel somtimes and don't actually know how I feel.\n\nAnother thing I would like to talk about is the six emotions of happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. There are so many other feelings than these love ,joy, peace, hate, lust, jelousy, and many more. How can you say that those six are the only true emotions that you can judge. It is like saying I have two percent of the puzzle, I think I know all the varibles. How can you say that?\n\nI have proven to you that the system they have made is false like almost all systems are. That emotions are much deeper than six emotions that you can see on a screen. this proves that my emotions and yours can't be tested on a screen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On this article the author is decribing the plant Venus and how is is dangers for humans/NASA to study the plant. Also the author is talking about how Venus is the brightest night sky and \"Venus is also referred to Earth twin because is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size\" (paragraph 2). Gives out reasons why Venus is a dangers plant to study. Said a history about NASA studying Venus and things has gone wrong. Venus is twice or 80 times as dangers as Earth.\n\nThe author said that Venus is dangers to study at because the carbon dioxide is 97 percent and average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\"(paragraph 3). So it's saying that Venus might look like Earth by no where near the experience. Venus temperature is higher that an human can't take. As well as the clouds is highly corrosive sulfuric acid.\n\nAlso on the article says that the Earth and Venus so alike on how they look. By terms in size, density, and occasinally the clostest distance in too and Venus is also referred to as Earth's twin. The author explains that the pervious spacecraft did not survived landing on Venus. No other spacecraft or none of above as landed on Venus on the past decades.\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus reputation as a challenging planet\"(Paragraph 2).\n\nThe author says that NASA is going to send more people to study Venus and will find other suggesting on how to. According to the article it says, \"NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus\"(paragraph 5). They had an idea of hovering 30 or so miles above to see Venus landscape. As NASA says is will still be around 170 degrees hovering arounf 30 miles or so, which could be a problem beacuse it's still too hot for humans. As not an easy conditons but could probably be the same sea level on earth but still survivable for humans.\n\nAs all the dangers said could be caused or worst by studing Venus, NASA is still by this day is working on other approaches to studying Venus. By the article saying, \" Example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber\"(paragraph 7). Which those devices that they are studying was made at year 1800s and during World War ll. By all so said by the article is dangers to study Venus because they had failed missions in the past. Also know that Venus is not even close to Earth and their temperatures and oxygen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that NASA has found a head on Mars? Some say it may be an a alien head or even a human head. There are still some who say that the head is just a natural land form. The head is a natural land form because NASA went and took more pictures, NASA used logic and evidence,and the scientist did a pixel scan or Mar's.\n\nNASA took many pictures of the supposed called head on there first trip twenty five years ago. Yet,\n\nafter they already said it was\n\nfake , they still went and took more pictures just to prove to people that the head is just a fake. In paragraph seven it states \" And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the firist time, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiters Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten time sharper than the orginal Viking photos.\" This shows that NASA went back to take more pictures, but also used better technolgy. NASA took the time to go back and take pictures. They also used better tools to prove there point even further. This shows that NASA went and took time out of there day to help solve the conspiracy theroy. Another peice of evidence from the text is in paragraph six which states \" We phtographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" NASA is saying that they did this as soon as they could get the best possible shot of the so called head. Some this shows that NASA took these pictures, and did as soon as possible to prove that they are right.\n\nNext,\n\nNASA used logic and evidence\n\nto help there conspiracy theroy on weather the head was real of not. One example from the text is paragraph three\n\nit states \" The caption noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head...\n\nformed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\" This shows that it was a posiblity that there could have just been a shadow and not a true head. Another peice of evidence from the text is in paragraph ten it states \" Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" This is the evidence because pople were agruing that the scientist went to Cydonia on a cloudy day. They think that becasue it was cloudy the aliens could have been hidden. Some they came back and did it on a non-cloudy day. This shows that the NASA scienctist were once agian right because they never found proof of a head.\n\nLastly the scientist came back and used a pixel scan. A pixel scan will give you much better images then the one they used before. One example from the text is paragraph ten which states \" Malin's team captured an extraordianry photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" This shows that scientist used they best possible camera's possible in this situation. The camera's not only gave them better pictures but a better look on the whole planet. Another peice of evidence is in paragraph eleven it staes \" So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground of Egytian-style pyramids or even a small shack, you could see what they were.\" This shows how good the camera's were and how good the pictures were , and that the scientist wanted to use the best possible tools to prove there point.\n\nSome may say that the scientist are just hidding this from the people. In paragraph five it states \" Some people think that the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that Nasa would rather hide, say conspiracy therorist.\"\n\nThe question is why would NASA hide this from the people. In paragraph five it states \" Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wiish there was an ancient civilzation on Mars.\" There is no reason the NASA would hide this becasue they truley want there was a civilzation on Mars. So when saying this it shows that NASA has no need to hide evidence form the people that there may or may not be life forms on Mars.\n\nThe head is a natural land form because NASA went and\n\ntook more pictures, NASA used logic and evidence , and they did a pixel scan. NASA is correct in saying that there is no alien life forms on Mars. Yet, there will always be conspiracy theorys, becuase there are always opinions. With evidence you can prove those opinions wrong. So what is your opinion on this topic?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a good idea to join the Seagoing Cowboys because, it is a good process of learning how to take care and train horses, cows, and mules, and other animals that suffered in the ruins doing the war, and provide food supplies for the animals. That's when the countries started to form together UNNRA, which had hired the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nYou also get to go places you never seen before like, in the passage it said that Luke explored Venice, Italy. It is very fun too because, you get to also play fun sports like tennis, volleyball games, and table tennis tournaments. It takes a lot of hardwork to join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nIt is a very good thing to join the Seagoing Cowboys because, it is a good experience to do an animal a favor, by taking care of it and providing with every thing it needs. It is a very positive program to go through, and that is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever imagined without movies music entertain A books read magazines inform upon latest gossip fashion Well items banned seen read creativity soon books magazines read music listen movies watch able express opinions I believe certain materials removed shelves found offensive If left without certain materials creativity Everyone forced think thoughts ca nt learn thoughts protrayed offensive No one read topic interested banned cease creative thinking allowing people think differently In process deciding books offensive offensive books eventually eliminated Certain topics nt liked everyone Katherine Paterson says I right remove book everyone else And books left shelf us Paterson exactly right one person right remove book everyone cause everyone take book dislike much Also everyone likes different kinds books different topics cause less self expression someone nt like books think offensive books shelves anyone learn Everyone turn ca nt express opinions If certain topic banned discovered offensive topic result thought banned If ca nt read watch topic nt able think talk topic either offend someone Also people pick books library eventually transferred areas clothing food thoughts etc Eventually everyone wearing clothes eating food thinking thoughts I believe certain materials exterminated shelves found offensive If specific materials banned creativity eliminated lives eventually materials banned lack self expression If nt ever thought without books moves music magazines I hope learned crule boring would without materialsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is trusted by some people that something children watch on tv affects to their behavior. Others’ idea that amount of time spending while watching tv influences their character. In this essay I will debate both sides and give my opinion below. \nLet’s begin by looking at the first side of the argument. These days, kids are watching wrong things on tv because parents do not pay attention to their children. While they watch terroristic or awful videos as a result of, they will be terror in foreign countries in the future. Kids’ behavior is weakest because they have never watcher these videos and they getting used with those films. Moreover, awful videos can affect to their brain and they will do like these evil activities as a consequence of, they will perish someone. To summarize my opinion on the matter that children must not allowed to watch wrong actions by parents.\n Turning to the other side if the statement. In recent years, the most teenagers are dedicating their leisure time on watching tv because they are being remained a form of idler as a result of, they do not do their home tasks. At least, parents must not overlook their kids because they lose their light of eye with watching ridiculous films. In my point of aspect, children must be placed by their parents and to take control. \nTo sum up, parents play the huge of role in the life of their kids, if they will do it would be best.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that poverty and hunger can be reduced by economical growth, whilst others have an opinion to stop the economic growth as it harms the environment. While I understand people’s concern about environmental damage, I still believe to get rid of poverty and hunger economic growth is needed.\r\n\r\nThere are multiple reasons why people support the ban on economical growth. Firstly, owing to industrial growth, air and water pollution levels are shooting. For instance, recent surveys depict that industrial waste is one of the main reasons for polluting clean water resources. Moreover, carbon emission has been at its peak in the last decade due to the rise in the number of industries, which is essential for the economy. Secondly, deforestation, which is done to provide space to industries, is also a huge problem. Cutting down forests results in hampering the water cycle. Floods are also a result of these deforestation activities. For example, North-east India is facing devastating flood situations as the result of deforestation in the Himalayas. These points make people believe that economical growth has a bad impact on the environment.\r\n\r\nDespite these causes, I still believe to end hunger and poverty strong economy is vital. To start with, economical growth leads to hundreds of job openings, which is quite essential to fight against poverty. If people are earning well, it will be easy for them to provide with the basic needs of their family. Recently, Amazon has declared to open a warehouse in Orissa creating thousands of jobs in the state. In addition to this, a rising economy will help to provide more funds for deprived masses. To explain, Navin Bharat is one of the central government schemes in India to provide cheap food and accommodation to poor individuals. Hence, growth in the economy is thought to be the main solution to these situations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while people side with the idea to stop economical growth, I am in favour of boosting the economy to end poverty and hunger.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i was a scientist for the NASA i would be able to tell the people how is so strange that thier is face on the planet Mars. For my opinon of the face on Mars was not made from the aliens because if aliens really created that face on the Mars planet the aliens would leave some prints or something that proves that the aliens did it.\n\nWhen i read this article i never new that thier were a face on the Mars. This took place 25 years ago because the scienctist never new thier were a face until they recegnize because someone was send to out of space to check out what was on the planet Mars.\n\nA few days later NASA got a goood pitcure that actully the picture of the face on mars actullay came really good that you can see very clearly. Some people really didnt know that thier was a face on the planet Mars.\n\nAm really surprise that the scientist got to discovered that they were face on the planet MarsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that it's not wise to prevent climate change and we must think of ways to be compatible with it. I completely disagree with this idea and I believe it's much easier to prevent global warming from getting worse, and also we cannot afford its consequences.\n\nTo begin with, dealing with global warming results is much harder, while it's easier, and more achievable to take some simple yet fundamental steps. Air pollution is one of the main factors in global warming, and to be more specific, carbon dioxide produced as a result of fossil fuels, plays a major role in this pollution. Governments can significantly reduce CO2 production by applying extra tax on fossil fuel-based cars and encourage people to purchase electric vehicles. Also, people can be a great help in this situation, by making simple changes in their everyday life. For instance, they can commute to work by bicycle instead of taking a cab or worse, riding their own car.\n\nFurthermore, the consequences of prolonged and worsened global temperature rise are expensive, and it's too difficult to tackle. One of the first things that can occur as a result of it, is poles Ice melt, resulting in increased sea water level. This can cause lots of cities to sink, and many lives will be lost. For example, recent research shows that if the world's temperature keeps rising at the current speed, the city of Bangkok in Thailand will go underwater by 2030. One more reason to argue is mass extinctions that could happen as a complication of global warming. Lots of species are at risk of extinction at this very moment, such as polar bears and penguins living in Antarctica.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that it's better to take steps to mitigate the world's temperature rising, because it's a lot easier to do so and we won't have to deal with its consequences.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Narciso Rodriguez author sets certain mood describes hardships family faced give better life They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved feels thankful appreciates parents This sets happy mood happy would nt give anything replace itIn paragraph Narciso Rodriguez sets nostalgic mood talking childhood past family back also explains My parents always kept arms door open many people consider family This creates warm friendly mood knowing parents friendly generousThe story Narciso Rodriguez sets many moods readerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood excerpt bright The author describes risk taking loving parents The author describes many things parents given Within walls young parents created traditional Cuban home Both shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm house As see author Narciso Rodriguez describes young life home happiness greatfullness This generously spoken within depths excerpt Many authors enjoy using tones express personal feelings opinions matter In case author wanted express joy writingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You may have seen venus, or sometimes called te \"Evening Star\", as you were stargazing, but did you know its actually a planet. Venus is also our twin in relations to density and size. It is also a planet worth exploring or pursuiting because of how much it is like Earth.\n\nVenus is very similar to Earth in regards to size and density. This is one reasons why it's worth pursuiting. In the article it states that, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" If Venus was like Earth long ago we can learn from it and figure out why it changed into a very hot and into unhabital conditions. Venus is also worhty of exploring because NASA has an idea on how to send humans to Venus. If they were to successfully send someone to Venus the advancement in technology would be astounding.\n\nExploring Venus does seem like a good idea but have you thought of the dangers of doing so. Venus' average temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmosphere is almost 97% carbon dioxide. That is very dangerous conditions for a spacecraft let alone a human. In the article it says, \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" If a spacecraft can't even do it, can a human?\n\nYes it is very dangerous to explore Venus but the outcome weighs out the danger. If Venus is Earth's twin then Earth could do the samething. We need to research and explore the planet so we can see if they samething could happen to Earth. This can also give people at NASA a challenge to create something or some kind of ship that can withstand the harsh conditions. This could help with technology advancement and with the technology we may be able to go to place we've never been before.\n\nExploring Venus is worth it because of all the advanement that could happen. With exploring Venus can lead to so many possibilities. It can help with exploring other planets and maybe learn more about ours. It does pose a lot of risks but I feel like the outcome is greater than the risks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System (FACS) should be used in the classroom. The FACS technology would be very helpful in classrooms because it can help the kids in the class understand things better.\n\nThe FACS technology would help kids understand better by reading their emotions and telling what they understand and what they don't. The technology is capable of reading human facial expressions and giving the verdict on what they are feeling. Say for example a kid in a class has no clue what is going on in the subject, the FACS system can read his/her emotions and change the course to be a little more understandable for them. It can also help by seeing if the anyone is feeling sad or depressed and they can help that person.\n\nAlthough this technology sounds great and seems like it has no flaws or problems, it does. The system may become a distraction to the children by them knowing about it and continuing to think about it. The FACS system may also mess up and read the wrong emotions on someone and send the wrong information to whoever runs the system. It is not said how long of a process that it takes just to figure out one persons emotions. Having the system would be better than nothing though. It's better to know how the kids are feeling rather than not knowing at all.\n\nOverall the FACS system is very impressive at figuring out human's emotions based on their facial expressions. The FACS technology would be very helpful in classrooms because it can help the kids in the class understand things better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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