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"content": "What is the real benefit of having a automatically operated car? How would you train an everyday person to operate such a brilliant vehicle? Not doubting that it's such terrible idea, i just think there is no way to wrinkle what cant be ironed out in one big shot. What about car enthusiast? If we keep making automated cars, there will not be a car that is going to be worth it later, car shows would die off, car auctions would die off, the idea of car collection would die off. Cars would not go down in history.\n\nThe technology involved is fascinating. It's truely out of this world. As the passage said, there are alot of wireless technologies that go into a automated vehicle. Laser systems. Carmers. Not including the wifi it will need to communicate with other cars. As the wireless systems come online, so do the hacker modified computers that hack your mercedes-benz, or your nissan. If hackers could take over your car, think about the crime rate that would slowely accelerate. Robbery would go up because of all the cars they could just steal. That now incooperates new firewall systems that im sure will add to that total price you want to pay for your car. Plus keeping your car updated, expect to peeling open your wallet.\n\nI know this passage is based more toward the personal car industry, but what about the high class trucking industry we have. Most of everything you have has probably came from a truck at one point in time. You can not let the automation of cars take off without caring about the equipment used to get your car parts to the plant your vehicles are going to be made. That part of the automation has to kick start too. They can not be left behind. There is another problem.\n\nLastly, making this a everyday ritual is not going to be easy. I do not think the roads will be filled with auto operated cars anytime soon. I do indeed think that technology in our cars will keep becoming more advanced surely, but the idea of a fully operated car does not appeal anytime soon. The fun of driving is still too strong. As more and more people are living on this planet, i think it will be neccessary eventually, but for as of right now, its not a issue. As a last question to leave you on, how would you incooperate full proof systems that apply to every financial class and is available to anyone wanting to buy Nissans or mercedes benz vehicles?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The obstacles builders empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock winds top building always shifting violent air currents Also dirigibles use Hydrogen highly flammable So blows gon na lot bad things going New york Also law airships flying low Urban areas The building would modified strengthened dirigibles could goSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wonder what over planet is like earth?\n\nStudying venus is a wortthy pursit despit its dangers, venus has simlair features to earht in fact the text it referred to as Earth \"Twin\" becaus e of its size and density and sometimes the distance from the sun. venus long ago,\"probably\" had oceans and spme type of forms of life living on venus, at this moment in time if you look at a picture are captured of venus you would see rocky sediment and features such as valleys,mountains and craters.\n\nNow that we've understand the good aspects of venus their are some very dangerous cons about veunes. at thirty plus miles above surface the temperature rises at 170 degrees farenheit it sounds nice and toasty but air pressure would close to sea level on earth,solar power would be plentifull and radiation would not exceed on earth so its not survuable for humans. many spaceships landed on venus but many didnt make it back due to conditions of the tempature in closing as much as we want to disciver new things and find somewhere other then earth we must look at the terms and conditionsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Electoral College is \"unfair,outdated,and irrational\". if the Electoral College is unfair why should should the U.S keep this process in our goverment? who really knows? But on the other hand popular votes is a great way to keep voteing fair and rattional to the U.S citizens.\n\nFirst of all,their are many reasons popular votes are way more usefull and fair then the Electoral College, say one canidate gets 80 percent of the U.S votes but the other candiate wins because of Electoral College vote it just makes no sense. a large anount of americans are considering the Electoral College vote the diaster factor the reasons for that their are many to say such as unfair,outdated,and irrational and much more.\"it can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no hope of of carrying their state\". that qute demostrates how some people dont even vote because the Electoral College gives no hope to some potential voters.\n\nSecond of all,popular votes are more logical and sensefull then other voting stratigies. to most ameriacns it just makes more sense to use popular voteing procsess then the Electoral College because they actaully have say in the potential president. if potential voters are not voteing because the Electoral College then why have it?\" the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in wich no canidate recevies a majority of the votes\" this quote explains how canidates can not get majority rule over the other canidate. Electoral College should be replaced with majority rule.\n\nOn the other hand, Electoral College avoids the run-off elections,\"the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast\"this quote explains how Electoral College makes the voteing process easier and has less pressure on canidates and voters. also the Electoral College restores some of the weught in the polyical balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apprtioment of the senate decreed in the constitutuion.\n\nlast,popular votes/majority rule are in all a better way of voteing in the U.S because of the fairness and rights the U.S citizens all deserve,yes the Electoral College votes are easier but in the end who really wins? noboby does.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people say that as with making a profit, companies are responsible for society. I completely agree with this idea because it can make an index to measure a healthy socioeconomic.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the main target of each company in the business area is making money, which inherently plays a critical role in society. If a company has succeeded in making a profit, it generally needs to grow and improve, which means more job positions for new employees, more indirect jobs, and more money for other businesses that are related to that company. Consequently, the level of poverty will decrease, the economy will be more dynamic, and society will be healthier psychologically because of the money that is on moving between people. It seems that the business leads to various solutions for a part of social problems, and if it can make money, society is unlikely to face such difficulties.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, businesses have social responsibilities to other parts of society that are impacted by them, but they are not inherently responsible for them. A big company that has chosen a small city to make its factory, which is routine in companies because they want a decline in their costs, can be a good example of how business can impact on society. But this decision can have detrimental effects on local people. Migrating new workers from other areas, using infrastructural facilities like hospitals or schools by that migrated workers, and disappearing traditional cultures because of communication that local people make with such workers are some instances of such effects. Companies should be responsible for creating enough infrastructures and keeping and celebrating traditional cultures, which give the confidence that this selection is a win-win situation for both companies and people who impact directly from their business activity. Consequently, reduce the socioeconomic gap can have an achievement for businesses.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although businesses make a positive impact on society by making money, there are other types of problems, such as socioeconomic gap, that root in business’ activities, and they should have this responsibility to reduce the negative influences of them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These article that are given to me have good reasons why we may not need cars as time passes by, and their advantages.\n\nIn the first article, it gives many reasons why some people in Germany dont need, or used cars. In the third paragraph, second sentence, a women states \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Meaning, that she probably had a lot of issues when she had a car, maybe it was engine problems, battery, or maybe the gas prices that they used to have, but now she can relaxe, not having to deal with any engine problems, battery problems, or the gas prices, now that she doesn't own a car. Now she probably just has a bike, and bike are really easy to fix, not like a car were you have to pay someone to fix it for you, also pay for items that the person fixing your car has used. Basically some people in Germany are trying to save money, and have found a way to do it.\n\nNext, the second article and the third article, take on one of the most important thing, our planet. In the two article it gives alot of reasons why a car is banned from Paris and Bogota, Colombia, but the one that captures me the most would be on the paragraph 17, were it states \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals.\" Showing that Paris has noticed a problem and are actually doing something about it. They have banned cars to see if that is the actual problem, and they have found out that the cars are the problem. And they're answer to that problem is to set a fine to those people that had their cars with even numbered licence plates on Mondays and odd numbered licenced plates on the following day. Paris then got the results, if the cars were the problem, and yes it was, there was less smog, so they had decided to leave the fine. And in the third article, it shows that also Colombia is taking part of a smog free place. But they instead decide to ban cars and only give permission to buses and taxi drivers to drive. But they don't only give bus drivers and taxi drivers osmething to enjoy, the have also given their people ways to enjoy a place without cars. They have fixed their old, beat-up sidewalks and have put more bicycle trails for people that don't drive buses or taxis.\n\nLast but not least, in the last article it shows that even a powerful and strong nation can also take part of helping the planet, by lowering its most known culture, driving. It might seem like America is taking a part of helping the planet, by lowering the number of cars, and drivers. The statement that captures my attention the most would be \"A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.\" Meaning that a nation were young people would come to lead it in the future, some have decided to do it by hard work. Some would lead it by doign it in the hard, but basically simple way, driving.\n\nIn conclusion, those are my reasons to why limiting car usage have its advantages, by saving money, peoples lives, and our planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's modern world to earn money family go to other countries. Few people believe it creates a bad impact on kids whereas some do not. However, it is challenging for the person to adapt to a new place while I disagree that moving will affect a child's development.\r\n\r\nFirstly, kids are more prone to adapting to new cultures, places and situations. They have the capability to make friends easily and they manage to develop new ideas more quickly than adults. For instance, if a kid has to move with the parent from a developing country to a developed country. It is not only beneficial for kids overall development but also nurture new skills. Moreover, different cultures and traditions will also increase knowledge. \r\n\r\nSecondly, nowadays the world is becoming globalized. No matter what is our ethnicity, we can be successful. Likewise, many businesses are done abroad are making people richer. There are many international companies who are recruiting new families for communicating and transporting goods. Furthermore, the family can work and be connected due to our high tech technology easily. Friends and families can be connected via Facebook, Whatsapp.\r\n\r\nOn contrary, moving with family to a different country is stressful. Children are separated from their grandparents. Sometimes it takes time to adapt to the new culture even though the state is well developed. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I agree with the fact that moving to another place can not only give new experiences but also gives opportunities for the kids as well. Although, the family can face a situation of being alone without their relatives which can be stressful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper opinion effects computers people spending much time computers good day So first reason I think spending much time computers good thing s better outside activities people day instead could hang friends sports something else computer day start lose friends second reason I dont think good computer day exercising start gain weight cause sitting day computer good go outside go walk could go gym could exercise good keep healthy cause I know someone computer day really go outside says computers teach alot good day last reason bad effects computers people could use computers bad things could going bad websites make compute even longer could even become addicted computers nothing else ans people cameras computers people use bad things thats better computera day long So reasons bad effects computers could people go outside activities hang friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the essay ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile¨ the Facial Action Coding System is described as a new technology for identifying human emotions with astounding accuracy. I feel that this new technology would be beneficial on a classroom computer where it could determine how the student is feeling and how it needs to change the classroom material. This would allow the student to comprehend the material to the best of his or her ability.\n\nIn the passage, the author describes how the Facial Action Coding System can determine when a student becomes confused or bored. When students get confused or bored while looking at a computer monitor, their level of productivity drops tremendously. If the Facial Action Coding System could be programmed to change material on the computer according to how the student is responding to it, FACS could be a helpful tool in helping students to learn better.\n\nIn addition to FACS being helpful for students, the program would also be very precise and would work well for all the students that use it. In ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile¨, Dr. Huang explains that the facial expressions for each emotion are universal. This means that the sofware would work on all sorts of students who have different facial features. FACS is able to detect whether any student is happy, surprised, angry, disgusted, fearful, or sad because the program works on everybody.\n\nThe reason for FACS being able to determine the emotions of different individuals is because the FACS constructs a 3-D model of the face and uses the 44 major muscles in the face to determine how the user is feeling. The flexing and tightening of different muscles decifers the emotion or mixed emotions of the user. Having multiple emotions to deal with makes FACS even more accurate. For example, if a student is reading a passage on the computer and is feeling sad and confused about is, FACS could be programmed to switch the next passage to something more uplifting and easier to understand.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be an extremely helpful tool to help students learn in the classroom. FACS would be able to determine the emotions of the student using the major muscles in the face, and change what the student is doing to adapt to his or her emotions. Being able to do this, FACS would greatly increase a student´s ability to learn and improve their productivity in the classroom. The Facial Action Coding System should be used in every classroom to benefit the learning of each individual student by using his or her emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting affects rider hot wich makes thirsty long road witch affect mind state last fact sight affect coralSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Swish swash the boat tips back and forth as we head forward.\n\nLOVE animals, water, or everything become a Seagoing Cowboy. This will help you freshen up. You will be able to see fish, seagles, whales, dolphins, and much more. You will see many other people and you can comepeat in baceball, volleyball, table- tennis, fencing, and evan boxing. Not realy the sportsey kind of person thats fine you can read, write, whisle, and play other games.\n\nBang chrash heho the animals may make a lot of noise but ......... their sooooooooo cute. You feed the houres, the ponyes, and many more animals. ''I always say life is not always about what you feel the world consist of others or dose Albert Eistine say that I can not reamember anymore'' ''I know life is not seved to you on a silver plater you have to work for it BUUUT for a hourse it is toutilyey not fair I mean why do they get it all and we have to give it to them. SOOOO sorry I got of tipice waaaaaayyyyyy off topic.''\n\nSo as I was saying the needs of others come first not your own when your a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIt is all around you it is blue it is wet what is it...? it is water. a The water dose not come from a skink it comes from omm Well i do not know where it comes from. You can feel that ocen brease going throurth your hair. That solty air filling your lunges it is exstrodinary.\n\nMony mony who dose not LOOOOVE mony. The joney back is allll free time you can do what evver you want. So you get paid for doing nothing cool right. will at least I do. become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nYou might say I have to clean up poop gross. Well you are right sorry but it is worth it. I get sea sick. Then sty in the bottom of the ship. Idon't like fish. aThen do not look at them ovily. I have probles or isuse. Then stop with alllll the complaining.\n\nBecome a SEAGOING COWBOY now; you will not ever for get it. More info?: Go to www. More info on Seagoing Cowboys. joyn // have fun // .com\n\nIt will be the beest diseshion you will make ever.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The dirigibles able dock mast Empire State Building obvious reasons When construction workers building mast nt realize dangerous dirigible landing top building There cautions workers realized First dirigible catches fire like one Lakehurst New Jersey lot people would risk big city massive amounts people Another reason realized dangerous dirigible land due high swirling winds If tried landing violent winds would nt let would least bit safe This workers Empire State building faced obstacles allowing dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "my reasons to think that the face or rock formation on mars that looks like a face is just a natural formation because many scientists figured it was just another martian mesa whiich was common around cydonia.\n\nalso many conspiracy theorsts say that they are hiding something when actually defenders of the nasa budget wish they were an ancient civilization on mars also few scientists believed it was an alien artifact also when they took another picture 10 times sharper it revealed thatt it in fact was a natural formation.\n\nbut not everyone was satisfied so they took another picture with MGS but it was not easy because It was hard to to find the exact position of it and they had to look throught wispy clouds.\n\nthey also took a 2nd photo which was extrodinary because they used the cameras maximum resoulution which would show anything such shacks pyramids or planes you could see what the were what the picture actually showed was butte or mesa landforms common around the american west.\n\ntherfore this evidence proves that the \"face\" on mars is just a natural landform common n the american west on our planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think author concludes story paragraph shows saeng comfortable surrounded things homeland She thinks ready take test sees ducks hibiscus begins bud Narrator says A saebya ledges tall high surrounded garden evidence Saeng hibiscus Vietnam story well reminds The narrator also says Overhead flock geese faint looks clear yesfamiliar Saeng proves geese symbolize home alsoSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The automobile was made a long time ago to help us move around faster and more efficient,however,have we really thought about the benefits that could come from limiting the usuage of cars such as:Saving money in gas and insurance,Less car crash related injuries and even because its better for the enviroment.\n\nWith limiting the usuage of cars comes many pro's such as saving money. On average,an American spends about thirty-five to fourty dollars on gas per fill-up and one hundred to two hundred dollars a month on insurance a month depending on age,experience,accidents,etc. By limiting your car usage comletely or even just a little just imagine the extra money you'll have aying around for the nessecities and maybe even a ittle you-time. Say you buy a bike and the only time you use your car is to drive to work and anywhere out-of-state,that means that you'll be able to go a week with roughly two gallons of gas. That puts you at about thirty-eight hundred dollars a year where if you were purchasing four or five gallons a week you'd be spending approximately eleven thousand dollars a year. Thats no chump change. You're insurance would gradually decrease due to safe driving and age so along with gas being cheaper,so would the insurance.\n\nFlorida is a state well-known for car crashes due to weather conditions like rain and fog and you can't do anything to change that other than take a different,much safer mode of transportaion such as a bus. Nowadays bus and semi-truck drivers are more experienced and cautius then they used to for one reason,CYB(Cover your Butt).You see major bus and semi-truck companies now that due to the size of their vehicles,if there's ever crash involving one of their autmobiles then they're likely to get blamed cause of the size of the vehicles and so it would make since for them to send their drivers to extensive training and make sure that their trucks are in good hands,which is exactly what they do. Studies show that you're chances of being in a wreck in a bus are one of every one hundred rides while being in a car driven by yourself puts you at a whopping one of ten ridesyur chances of safety are greatly increased.\n\nThe United States of America has no shortage of pollution and that's not helped by the fact that we have one of the largest populations of personal automobiles inhabiting this country. There are many other kinds of pollution that occurrs in the land of the free but most of it like factory smoke,large ship(boat)smoke and even resturant made smoke can not really be stopped or diminished by you or me but one form of pollution we can prevent is automobile smoke. In the US up to fifty percent of greenhouse gas is from cars(certain areas).If you stop using you car and ride a bike even thugh it won't seem like muchyou'd be suprised at the difference. Say a sall cmmunity around yur neighborhood gives up their cars that could account for half a percent of greenhouse gas which is more than it seems. Just ask yourself if you want your friends and family growing up in a dying,polluted world.\n\nIn conclusion,I'm not discrediting the huge help cars can be in our daily lives I'm just saying if we continue along this car-orientated path,pollution may be what ends our daily lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face. People think it was created by aliens, some others belive it's just a natural landform, but it is in fact a natural landform. Although it does look like a face, that aliens created, it is a landform created by a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa, with shadows that make it look like it has facial features.\n\nA Martian mesa. That's all the face is. It was created by a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated messa, with shadows that give it the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. Martian mesas, are common enough around Cydonia, which is another reason why this could'nt have been created by aliens. Lastly, this couldn't have been aliens, because there is not enough scientific proof to even know if there is even any form of life on mars. The face is just a huge rock formation, with shadows that give you the illusion of facial features.\n\nEven though most people believe that it is a natural landform, some do believe it was aliens who created it. One reason is because, it is more benitfital for Nasa to keep quiet, and say it is a natural landform. Another reason is because, the face looks more like an alien face than a natural landform. Although there is more proof that it is a natural landform, that face could have been made by aliens.\n\nAll in all the face appears to be a natural landform. Some people may disagree but, there is more facts and research, that the face is a natural landform. Although there is more facts about it being a natural lansdform, some people still will think it could have been aliens who created the face. But the face is just a huge rock formation created by a Martian mesa, with shadows that give you the illusion of facial features.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Obesity among children has risen in the past years. Parents and government share the responsibility to keep children well-being. This essay will discuss reasons and examples of how both sides have responsibilities toward the children.\nTo begin with, Politicians should have an obligation to legislate laws that stop some food companies from selling high-calorie diets in the country. Laws toward diet companies should ban them from increasing sweeteners in candies to rise profits. In the same manner, the government has a duty to build outdoor play-ground and clubs to help parents raise healthy kids. Gardens should be grown to overcome obesity. In the UAE each block in the city has its own garden and playground. Research in the Netherlands shows a huge decline in obese children after the government renewed old playgrounds.\nParents on the other hand share a tremendously important rule. Parents should encourage their children to practice sports and substitute bad habits. Pampering the kids with a sweetened diet should be stopped. Parents should read about the effect of obesity on their kids' health. For example, simple sugar rise the glucose level rapidly causing the unexpected energetic status of the kid before bedtime. Some medical cases were seen among children related to obesity like cardio-pulmonary illnesses. If the parents were aware of these consequences they would discourage the bad habits of their children.\nTo sum up, government do its role in keeping the kids' wellness by building institutions and providing laws on their behalf. Also, parents should educate themselves and their children, and stop unnecessary food habits.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator, the system we have today used to elect the president, the Electoral College, must be changed. Instead, we should elect the president by means of a popular vote. The Electoral College is unecessary and complicated, and not to mention, outdated. Source 1 says that the Electoral College was established in the Constitution by the founding fathers. This begs the question, how can a system so old still be practical and in use today? This system, therefore, needs to be replaced by a national popular vote.\n\nThere are so many things that could go wrong with the Electoral College, such as a tie, in which the decision would go to the House of Representatives. According to Source 2, if this were to happen, than, \"the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters.\" This, of course, would not reflect the nation's vote, and would anger millions of people. If we elected the president by a popular vote, than the chances of this happening would be significantly more slim.\n\nAnother flaw of the Electoral College is that even if a presidential nominee won the popular vote, they could still lose the election. Even though some may argue that this occasion is highly unlikely, this has actually happened twice before, in 1888 and 2000, according to Source 3. \"It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote... It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes.\" This is a major flaw of the Electoral College system, which is very frustrating to millions of people. Imagine how you would feel if your candidate won the majority of the nation's vote, but still lost the election because of this horrible voting system. This unfair incidence could be avoided, if only we got rid of the Electoral College, and replaced it with the simple, fair, and straightforward method of the popular vote.\n\nThe popular vote is the preferred voting system in the United States. According to Source 2, \"over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" If this is the preferred voting system, and the Electoral College has so many flaws, why not change to using the popular vote? It only makes sense. Not to mention, if the Electoral College were to be thrown out, then maybe more people would come out to vote, which is important. We would then have a more accurate representation of who the nation wants as their leader.\n\nSome may argue that the Electoral College is a good system of electing the president, that the founding fathers knew what they were doing when they established it, and that it \"produces a clear winner,\" (Source 3.) But, the information given above disproves these unvalid arguements. If the Electoral College is such a great system, than why can a nominee who won the majority of the nation's votes still win the election? Will it always produce a clear winner? What about the event of a tie? Or, what about when the \"winner\" did not win the majority of the votes?\n\nIn conclusion, the replacement of this flawed system known as the Electoral College by a national popular vote is absolutely necessary. The people are pushing for a change, and I strongly urge you, senator, to acknowledge this issue.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It s first day high school gut full butterflies make want run bathrooms hide world I friends yet I shy go join groups I walked classes alone Students would get face wanting know school I came wanted know I remember wanting left alone hidden bubble space Girls would ask I upset since I nt smiling fun getting know new classes Lunch much crowded old school Students would sit hallways eating lunch crowd around one big table chattering loudly one another I chewed lip looking spot nt occupied students I found table near front lunch room empty placed brown lunch sack front eating peanut butter jelly sandwich Two boys two girls rushed settled next laughing one another getting seat next CAPS I m s name skinny boy black caps response PERSON I replied stared entire time That s pretty name I m met funny kid next orange back pack I smiled nodded tshirt military uniform said They ate lunch school got pizza sub sandwiches They showed pictures funny events phones everyone even including CAPS kid nt careful might get razor rash I said laughing little looking picture little boy sliding slide looked like cheese grader took pepperoni flinging randomly air going take picture everyone picture id phone next picture taken pepperoni hands slipped landed smack face I busted laughing everyone table joined I clenching stomachs wiping away tears went bathroom wash away smell face returned said CAPS word see face I took picture right pepperoni hit face picture hilarious mouth hanging open like going eat something like angry handed phone one person time started laugh asking send picture I wondering I could guys friend I asked looking eye one respond CAPS ca nt friend duh nt want friend would nt hanging teased My twisted gut loosened releaf CAPS probably would made excuse leave smiled I laughed worrying I would nt fit friends could make laugh hard I pepperoni stuck faceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Electoral College is where we pick our state elector to choose our president. We as citizen get to help choose our state's electors when we vote. It's a benefit to keep our Electoral College in the government system.\n\nAfter all, Electoral College do have their negatives. In the source \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid denfenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer claims that \"voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors.\" We are not voting for our own president, but choosing an electors for our own state to go on and help us vote for our United States of America's president,but with an Electoral College every state get two Senators and one House of Representatives. Which divide everything equally. Our votes are counted by our population of people. So, the Electoral College shouldn't be change.\n\nMainly, Electoral College help us vote for our president. In the source \"What is the Electoral College\" by the Office of the Federal Register assert that the winner of the president is \"election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" The more popular votes our states is given the higher chance that president is going to be elected. \"Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president\" out of 538 votes for a presidnet to win. With an Electoral College each president have to get at least 270 elector votes from all the 50 states for them to be president.\n\nLastly, Electoral College have no run-off elections. In the source \"In defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner mentioned that with no run-offs there wouldn't be any \"complicate the presidential election process.\" There will never be a tie votes between an election. For example, between Nixon and Clinton both got 43 percent popular votes which is a tie and hard to pick, but with an elector vote their votes are 301:370 which is a big difference.\n\nIn summary, Electoral College is a useful system in the government that should be kept in place. It has been used over the years and it would be a pain to change everything now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "What would it be like to own a driverless car? Well as I sit here and ask myself that, I think of all the possible outcomes there could be. Yes, it would be nice to have a car that would do the driving for you, but humans will have to drive at some point. I feel as if this car could be resulted in both good and bad ways.\n\nThere are many reasons this car is a great idea. Say a wife and husband go out for a romantic date and leave their child at home with a babysitter. While they were gone, the child started running a fever and began to puke. The babysitter calls the parents but gets no answer. There is no medicine at the house and the nearest hospital is four blocks away. The girl babysitting does not yet have her license, so she asks herself what to do? She thinks about how long it would take to walk all the way there, then grabs the child and runs outside. Once she gets outside she puts the child in the car and straps him in. An even tho she does not have a license she gets in the driver seat, and starts up the car. She puts the car in gear and it beigns to drive itself to the hospital. Once they arrive at the hospital, the babysitter takes the child into the hospital and checks in while the car parks itself.\n\nThere are many great things that could come from this car. There is also a few things to worry about though. If the car is driving itself for the most part, then all the human is going to do is sit there. Therefore their driving skills may decrease. If the car drives itself all the time, then no one will remember how to drive correctly. What if something was to happen to the car and it would malfunction while driving down the road. What if the people in the car get seriously hurt? Those are things that will have to be worked out before the car could be released. But overall I feel like the driveless car would be a great idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am against driverless vehicles because too many risks and complications can become of these advanced automobiles.\n\nThe article's author states that while the technologically advanced vehicals will use approximatelhy half of the fuel used today in your average vehical, the cars cannot navigate roadwork and accidents. While putting your car on autopilot for a few minutes can be helpful, having it on autopilot 90% of the time could be scary. As if people didn't have enough complications with manually driving normal vehicles, trusting your life with an advanced automobile may not be the safest route to your vacation home.\n\nWhile the cars are said to alert the driver when his/her skills are necessary it can not be assured that the driver is focused, unintoxicated, or under the influence of narcotics and drugs. Another problem could be the vehicle could glitch and spiral random alerts or not alert the driver at all, causing the drivers life to be in danger. In the majority of cases, the driver may not even need to manually manuever the car on their way to their destination and decide to take a time manageable nap or scroll through their newsfeed on their favorite social media application. They say the driver must be alert, but when the car is doing the majority of the work, won't the driver occupy themself with a tedious task?\n\nGoogle's car was said to go a half a million miles without crashing, and while these cars notify their drivers and use 1/2 the fuel used in your average car, there is no guarenteed safety for the driver and the other attendants of the vehicle.\n\nTherefore, if a crash were to insue due to a problem in the system of the vehicle or the lack of focus/ distracted driver the fault would fall onto someone. The outcome of the situations caused by the vehicles are completely unpredicatable. So I state, a safer route for society is to avoid the introduction of technologically advanced automobiles as they could come with misfortune and become a threat to civilazation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While cars are not yet completely driverless, the current measures ensuring the entertainment, safety, and almost constant leisure of the passenger provide a bright outlook for the future. Driverless cars are coming. Passengers barely have to intervene at the moment, and with the passage of time, the technology needed to make completely driverless cars will come. With cars already capable of 90% autonomy, it is not difficult to imagine completely autonomous cars, and considering the safety of said cars, it is unlikely that the law will maintain non-intervention on the matter.\n\nMany wonder why anyone would want to drive a driverless car that still requires a driver, but the technology ensures that cars are neigh on completely driverless and also allow the passenger more entertainment while she/he is not driving. In-car entertainment in the form of Pandora is already installed in cars, as well as in-car texting. However, these displays turn off instantly when the driver needs to take over. This is not as easily possible with drivers trying to text with cell phones. The in-car system is thus both a safety measure and an entertainment provider.\n\nAdmittedly, cars are not yet completely driverless, but they are nearly so and it is not far fetched to believe that cars will become completely driverless in the future. The 2013 BMW \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" can handle speeds up to 25 mph, while also ensuring the driver keeps hold of the wheel and is able and ready to takeover should the situation require it. The cars can steer, accelerate and brake themselves, but they notify the driver when the road requires their skills. This begot the necessity of quickly gaining the driver's attention for just this problem. Cameras can watch to ensure drivers focus on the road and other technology also serves to ensure the driver's attention is on the road and can easily be caught.\n\nHowever, the lack of traffic laws concerning driverless cars currently decreases the spread of use of the driverless car. Currently, traffic laws operate under the belief that human drivers are safer than robotic ones, but the safety measures in cars prove that said cars warrant laws to be made about them. They are not as unsafe as human drivers, and in fact can be safer because they make texting and driving more impossible. There is no longer reason for the law to call driverless cars unsafe, and it is imperative that they make laws concerning them.\n\nAutomakers continue to tweak current driverless cars under the correct assumption currently face are surmountable. It is already 2016 and Tesla cars can drive on autopilot 90% of the time. Thanks to the fact that driverless cars can already drive on autopilot 90% of the time, the only hindrance to the growth of use of driverless cars is the lack of laws concerning said cars. However, because the cars can be mostly autonomous and are quite safe, it is likely that laws will soon be made to cover driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You know life much harder dont patients If dont Im going tell There time found I going thats good part I ask how getting fly right I knew I going patient I thought I didnt enough patients fly Although I got Now worst thing I got hot We stand outside wait bus It got hot I lost patients got angry everyone I thought I going blow Only I didnt want wait ride anymore Haha I came sences I start easier wait bus eventaly showed I already felt way betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Rise in population, has led to an increase in the usage of vehicles that has resulted in many environmental problems. There are numerous people who think that the price of the fuel must increase. In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea that costly fuel will help solve various environmental issues. \r\n\r\nFirstly, the excessive use of natural resources used to manufacture a vehicle, causes countless environmental problems like deforestation, killing of animal for leather which results in irregular rainfall. However, the spike in fuel cost makes many people think twice before purchasing a vehicle. \r\n\r\nSecondly, the gas emitted from the vehicle cause various air pollutants to harm the environment and living beings. For instance, global warming, soil erosion that deteriorates the plants. Therefore, by enforcing strict laws like increasing the cost of fuel will make people opt for public transport, which will help reduce the usage of vehicles.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is important for us to remember that the earth has provided us with endless resources, now it is our turn to protect it and use it effectively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While owning a car may seem like the most important possession a person can have, it is becoming more beneficial to find a way to live without them. Cities around the world are turning in their cars, even if just for a day, and finding that it brings plenty of advantages to make up for what could be seen by some as a troublesome lack of easy transportation. Both the environment and and the well being of the people are grateful for the new change, and examples of such will follow.\n\nTo begin, according to \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, one can learn about Vauban, Germany, a place manifested so that residents of the upscale community must give up their cars. While residents are still permitted to own cars, they must be kept in large garages at the edges of the community. Here, the owner of the car must buy a space within the garage, along with a home in the residence. Parking on the streets is forbidden, along with driveways and home garages. The streets of the residency are completely free of cars, except for a few streets on one side of the community, and for where the tram to downtown runs through. Most of the citizens of Vauban choose not to own a car, or sold their car in order to move to the community, and find they are much more content in their lifestyle because of it. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, stated that she is \"much happier this way\", explaining that she was always tense while in possession of a car. This community was created as a prime example to showcase the advantages of limited (or forbidden) car usage, and it is now being used as the basis of the growing trend around the world, including America and more places in Europe, in which suburban life is being seperated from its former dependance on auto use.\n\nFurthermore, the reduction of air pollution and smog has become a major advantage in the limitation of car usage. After suffering through days of near-record pollution, Paris, France had composed a temporary driving ban in an attempt to clear the air, according to Rober Duffner in \"Paris Bans Driving due to Smog\". The passage goes further to explain that the ban followed five days of smog that rivalled the likes of Beijing, China, which is widely recognized for being one of the most polluted cities in the world. Exceptions to the ban were made for hybrids and cars carrying three or more passengers, and public transportation was made to be free. Once the smog cleared enough, the ban was lifted and citizens were allowed back to the road, but the reduction of auto usage was what saved the air from becoming overly polluted. Moreover, in Bogota, Colombia, citizens participate in a car-free day, entitled Day Without Cars, once a year to reduce smog in the cities, according to \"Car-free Day is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky. Violators are charged with $25 fines, but, according to Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus, the people participate, and the turnouts are large. This day without cars, which has begun to spread to other Colombian cities, is a fantastic way to reduce both air pollution and stress, and is a part of a campaign to oversee the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, which, according to Mayor Mockus, is the most of any city in Latin America.\n\nIn addition, \"The End of Car Culture\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal tells the reader of the new goals created to cut down on America's greenhouse gas emissions. According to the passage, the goals, set by President Obama, have been graciously aided by recent studies which show that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and have been making less of an effort to get a license as the years go by. With transportation being the second largest source of the nation's carbon emissions, behind power plants, this pattern, if maintained, will most likely have majorly benificial impacts on the environment.\n\nAll in all, there are many advantages that could easily come with limiting car usage, including the reduction of smog and a more pleasent lifestyle for the citizens who decide to limit or cease their auto usage. While transportation issues may arise when people begin to give up their motorized vehicle, or if they decide to not purchase one in the first place, as many already have, a quick purchase of a bike or the use of public transit can solve at least some of them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local Newspaper I believe computers great help society I explain thoughts ideas I hope agree reading For starters I would like say first subject communication computers allow us talk everyday folks folks around world There many ways talk text speech webcam like talk hundreds communication cients servers online usually always able someone Secondly I would like say computers great way creation On computer program design presentations documents drawings maps graphs almost anything put mind virtually made You gather information servers websites create learn lot everyday computer I fisned There reading book sites web This gives opprotunity web searcher vast ammount information allow learn alot every day life Finaly I would like say computers wide range entertennent There many choose like videos movies games anything suitable user users computer On game user talk friends game CAPS example online game These kinds games skyrocket entertennent lovers vast ammount enjoyment endure Another type entertennent videos people watch videos movies video website database thousands millions videos movies Whatever user wants text click away The last type entertennent allow user daily life take friends family relatives To sum I would like tell Local news paper agree computers good thing society Please reread pick rightSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The seagoing Cowboys program really! I mean wow, what a way to say volunteers. Luke's in this article really convinced me to really not do what he does. Man that whole animals and sightseeing sounds fun but, what if I was on a mountain and... No not now your going to have to read on to find out what I was going to say.\n\nWell wasn't that fun to just pull you into my argument like that. Well let's just begin. What I was going to say was that, what if I was on a mountain and just was sitting at the edge rolled over then SPLAT! I'm some red paint,clothes,and Puerto Rican on Mount Everest. Luke never actually mentioned any safety factors or danger factors in this article. What if a shark ate the front side of the boat and then me! Or I accidentally step on a tiger tail and it make me into a Puerto Rican smoothie! Their are so many dangerous things that can happen!\n\nI mean look we do have some upsides to the program too. Like helping people with their animals on their farm. Then you have to take care of the crops so they can sell them to get money or use them for their own to eat some delicious meat. There also is the sightseeing that I was just talking about. You could go see monkeys,elephants, and much more.\n\nLastly, should you apply for the job. Well it's your choice I gave you some ups and downs on the job. Yet, you decide. I think I changed my mind I totally do not want to go there because I'm not going to die.\n\nNow in conclusion the job could be good or bad depending on who you are. The way I see it is that I'm probably going to get killed so no. Yet, you may see things differently like maybe you want to be up close and personal with a bear or tiger. Now this was just the warnings and God things of the job and, if you want to get it good luck.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigables dock stress dirigables load wind pressure could caused problems buildings foundation A thousandfoot dirigble held single cable tether would add stress buildings frameSafety another issue dirigbles outside United States used hydrogen instead helium This problem hydro gen highly flammable On May German dirigble Hindenburg destroyed fire New Jersey accident would dangerous New York city densely populatedAnother reason faced problems allow dirigables dock existing law airships flying close urban areas In December dirigble attempt reach mooring mast could reach winds fearing may blow dirigble onto sharp spires buildings This would puncture dirigbles shellSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This sentence concludes passage show hibiscus budding new season starts Saeng new person able take test In sentence cold snow fleeing geese planted hibiscus represent Saeng going They either cold ready leave restricted like Saeng feels But new season starts geese come back hibiscus longer restricted pot Saeng also grow able take test This sentence put end show much Saeng grow hibiscus growingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Let's address the issue of driverless cars to the point. Driverless cars are a symbol of our advancment in technology, but they diminish the joy of driving yourself. Many people when stressed or angry go for a drive and feel the better since they have control over something especialy if something is wrong in their life. Driverless cars also increase the issue that technology is making todays people so lazy. Technology does everything for us, and soon it can even drive us. Do we really want to become a species of lazy slobs more so then we alrady are. No. Driving\n\nalso makes people polite and let others go before them, or giving rides to friends. Learning to drive is also extremely important. To teens and young adults it is a right of passage and if taught by a parent, is a great bonding experience to closen a parent and teen. Maybe an A.I. system for better saftey percautions would be a better idea then spending so much time and money on self driving cars, since many people would just play a game or try and nap in a vehicle where they didn't have to do anything. People fall asleep in subways or on buses all the time so what would make a self drivin car any different. Sure it could watch and keep the driver awake but it would get very anoyying and the techgonolgy for that is still yet to be developed. So i think the idea of driverless cars is amazing, but however I do not believe it would do us much good (except for the elderly). That is only a few things to be considered when thinking over the concept of driverless cars. They might not be as good as they seem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the new technology to read students faces in the class room could be of some use, but I also think that it would not be of use in the classroom. The reason I think it would be useful is it could help a teacher understand some of the kids facial expressions.\n\nA teacher can read the childs face to see if they can help then when they are sad and dont tell anyone, but I also think that it would be an invasion of the childs space, because sometimes when kids or even adults get mad or sad and they dont say anything to anyone it's because they dont want people to know. It could help in somecases like when a child is being bulllied at school and they dont tell someone then the teacher could use the device to see that the child is either sad or mad or even both.\n\nI support and do not support this at ther same time. i support it because I feel it could be helpful but I do not suppot this because I feel if a child needs help with how they are feeling they will go to an adult they trust, weather it be a teacher at school or a parent or even a friend at achool.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A fair portion of people thinks that watching television is not good for children in every way other people opine that watching television improves their growing period. This essay intends to analyse both sides of the argument and express my side of the argument \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, nowadays most young ones are spending time on television watching their favourite television program.To be clearer, watching television for the entire period brings addictive behaviour in children thus, the children will deviate from academic this impact their living standard.On top of that,the children become lazier to engage in any productive activity and this brings down physical activity that they do in their regular routine.Apart from this certain eye-related diseases may occur.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, while watching television children benefit in many ways.Firstly,this enhances the knowledge of the children while watching television Program that is related to information basis can widen the knowledge of the children Moreover,the children can spend their valuable time with their family sp this can increase the bond between the family members ,As a result children can free from the hectic academic lifestyle\r\n\r\nHaving Scurtinged both views, I have come to the point where the children need to watch the television because engaging in these activities can reduce the stress and strain they face in their academic life and also the children can reduce the friendship with bad peer groups for certain level as well as the children can broaden the knowledge about a certain field. So this can take them to a good the position\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although a few people say television is bad ,I think television is good for children's development such increase family bonding and sharpening the knowledgeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The diagram depicts the life-cycle of the salmon, from being an egg to transforming into a fully grown adult fish.\nThe first stage of the salmon starts in the river, where the spawning of two mature salmons lead to the laying of eggs. The rivers have long been chosen by salmons for breeding spots because their fresh-saltless water is suitable for the eggs and the freshly hatched baby salmons to start maturing in. After emerging from the eggs, the hatchlings stay on in the fresh water till they pre-mature/partially grow. After gaining considerable size and adapting to the primary waters, they travel to the estuaries, the only stop-over between them and the oceans. Only the first of the young salmons to reach the estuaries are able to make it to the oceans. This is because once these small and stagnant water bodies get over-crowded, there is virtually no space left in them which in-turn leads to the death of many young salmons.\nThe young salmons who were able to survive the estuaries journey to the oceans, where the salty water increases their size and makes them fully grown. After getting the maturity to breed, they go back to the rivers from where the cycle starts all-over again.\nIn total, there are 8 stages in the life of a salmon to maturity, it starts in the rivers and ends in the rivers too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper opinion people support advances technology belive computers positive effect people I disagree Some people dont even get enough sleep stay late computers Also spend less time exersizing less time interacting family friends Thos reasons I disagree In paragraph I going tell I think people things going computer night If wake morning start grumpy dont blame computer stay late Would rather get good nights rest extra tired morning stayed late computer Well I stayed friends house computer night didnt even get sleep In morning soo grumpy soo tired languege arts teacher PERSON says CAPS late computer night isnt healthy get bugs eyes youre sleepy I mean theres whole lot side effects parents agree first reason In paragraph I telling second reason I disagree less time excersizing CAPS parents realy want kids lazy computer days want kids excersize get healthier friends kids always computer everyday time thats verry healthy especialy re young So couple weeks ago I talked active good computer alot Now bearly go computer always outside playing running around science teacher says CAPS excersize better anything non active also fun kids agree science teacher In paragraph I going explain I think interacting family friends better computer If familys shoes think would rather come hang computer When I younger family used yell get computer I could hang finaly day come I got understand family pain mom says I hang family friends often family members friends agree mom conclusion I disagree statement Some people support advances technology belive computers positive effect people reason people arent enough sleep less time excersizing less time interacting friends familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In all countries around the globe armed police personnel are common. However, the necessity of arming them is debatable. Some people claim that it leads to the unprecedented attack on common people and perhaps to state terrorism and violence, while I concur with the side of those who argue that it is essential to maintain law and order. The reasons are manifold for my support will be discussed in this essay. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I totally disagree with the notion that state terrorism is raising because of armed police officers. In fact, many people who believe this notion are not ready to understand the fact that the police department is directly controlled by the home department of government. And thus there are myriad public councils are working to strictly monitor the judicial use of these weapons by police officers. Additionally, these people often come with an example of some random police encounters with common people. Although these incidents are true, I believe these are mostly accidental and the police officers who are responsible for these also have been punished severely for their negligence. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the country's entire internal security management is under the control of the police department. In order to maintain these superiorly, they are in the need to develop some sort of fear among people. This fear in my opinion is healthy for the betterment of society. Furthermore, police and state security forces are the first-line workers who need to witness some dangerous situations. Despite their personal well-being, they work towards the welfare and security of the people. For example, recently one of the police inspectors in my neighbourhood was brutally attacked by some petty thieves during a situation when he tried to arrest them for shoplifting. This incident made me think in favour of armed police officers that if he was allowed to carry his weapon, he would have got prevented the attack. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, not only do armed police officers use their weapons to maintain law and order, but also for their self-protection. Therefore, I totally agree that arming police officers will never lead to state terrorism or violence, in fact, it prevents these.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Im patient person im going wrighting patience Patience dont complain board waiting somthing For example convenance I wrighting story patience please take note story completely untrue walking home saw elderly woman trouble grocerys wanted help thinking cousin arriving house moment walked woman asked needed help replied if could I live pointed large tan house carried things door CAPS go said CAPS mind helping put away woman asked thought mother never wanted go strangers house sort knew said help woman smile picked bags said CAPS home unlocked CAPS not replied keys asked I beleve lost somwere lawn searched half hour found bush He brought keys said CAPS go opened door helped grocres When put away said CAPS I ought going CAPS without somway I repay you said woman CAPS go find purse waited waited hour The woman came kitchin change CAPS change I couldnt find wallet said gave change left feeling like good person patient woman told mom good deed cousin got stay longer This example patience ever happens make sure patient know personSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are quite a few advantages in limiting car usage. You may think thats a very silly idea but honestly you have no idea. lets look at the bright side of this. If we limit car usage there will be less money waste, because you wont have to worry about spending your money on gas. Instead you can use it for something more valuable. Also in the article they mention this...\"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden inthis experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss borders.\" They dont really even use the cars so why have them if to some people in French they are useless.\n\nAlso as a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter, a media trainerand mother of two. So now i know that not everyone needs a car most people dont. They think that us having only taxi's and busses things would be a better community and society to us, but i disagree. We wouldn't be able to get from one place to another as fast as we can, because of how there are people going everywhere to different places. So im glad we dont have only busses and taxi's.\n\n\"In the United States, the Enviromental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduce\" communities, and legislators are starting to act,if cautiosuly. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport. Can yall believe that for the first time, two other Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. Meaning they are for getting rid of cars. Also as of Apirl 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995, Part of the explination is because Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemplyed weren't going to work anyway.\n\nNew York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation. Also \"a study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009...\"thats crazy to think about that now we are in 2014 and i believe that number has most likely gone up. We need to fix it as soon as we can to prevent harm to our sociecty, because the younger ones have more reckless drivers than the older ones, and adults.\n\nFinally, those are my reason and my explinations on why i think cars should stop because of the harm to our community and how we should start using bikes or even walk from point a to point be,or use the busses either one will safe us the gas mopney for example. Also it would prevent less deaths because there wouldn't be so many cars all together at onceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, in the contemporary epoch, juveniles prefer to postpone being parents to later years in contrast to medieval times. This essay will demonstrate how this would open up new gates for young generation to have kids once they are prepared for different aspects of maternity and paternity. Whilst elucidating how this can raise countries’ elder population to a hazardous stage for community.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, for the first notion, new generation remarkably feels slighter pressure to have kids in early years in comparison to their ancestors while they have a significant immutable situation. Consequently, due to improvement in fertility’s studies, one is free to devote more years on numerous sides of their life such as profession, education, self growth, etc. whilst there is no need to concern about losing the chance of being parent in forthcoming stages of their life. A survey carried by oxford university in 2020 revealed more than 43 percent of young females who are occupied in companies are showing interest to focus on their career path in their youth and get pregnant while they have a more stable job statue.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "the author supports his ideas very well because, he tells why its important to study venus and why it is the worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author also says ¨venuse is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size¨.They have aslo sent numerous spacecrafts and have done previouse missions. The pervious missions was unmanned. There has not been a spaceship that has touched venuse and why, the author said that gthe reason that spaceship or has not landed was becuse it would not last mor than just a few hours. The author supports the idea that studying venus is worthy pursuit despit the dangers, because know that i read the story icould see why. Venus might be dangers to go to and explore but by making spacecrafts and more andmakeing experiment it probably would not be so dangerous to send spacecraft or maybe a spaceshit to try it out again.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face is a landform because the planet must of formed it a long time ago. Or some where there was life on that planet and they died right there where the surface rose up andnformed its face . Most people think it was created by aliens but it was clarified as a natural landform.\n\nWe took picture ten times more sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site,revealing a natural landform.\n\nWhen they unveiled the image for all to see the caption noted a huge rock formation thee author thought it was a good way to attract attention to mars it certainly did.\n\nBut before they could see the face they had to go thorght wispy clouds and they had to wait for winter to be over. But after all that on a cloudless summer day they finally got to see the face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Universities are offering many online courses for the convinience of people. Although online courses can never substitute the regular education, some benefits of online courses are undeniable. This essay will discuss both the advantegs and disadvantages of study through the internet.\nPrima facie, education through internet has far more reach than any other method. Universities can approach students from all over the world, even a student from a remote area can be benefitted through the revolutionary internet courses. Online courses are also considered to be cost effective because a student can study from the comfort of home and save lot of living expenses.\nWhile remote education reaches many students, it lacks in many ways. A physical classroom exeperience gives a student far more learning than the online one. Some practical subjects like Medical Science and Science require a lab facility and presence of students in the classroom environment. Theories can be still taught online but practical education is not feasible. Attending college also provides many mental health benefits, students connects with fellow studenst and teachers and create a social circle which in return result in healthy conversations and meeting. An healthy and happy environment is significant and helps people learn more quickly. Moreover a regular college education comes with many extra curricullar activities like sport, drama, music etc. I can never forget my college days where I enjoyed many youth festivals and sports event which helped in developing overall personality. Colleges provied many other benefit like socail gathering and focus on behaviroul aspect of students as well.\nIn a nutshell though online education comes with some good feature but can never replace the physical/regular education system.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Humans have been curious about what is out beyond the sky for a long time. From ancient Greek and Roman astronomers who thought the Earth was the center of the universe, to Galielio who proved them wrong, humans have been wondering about what is truly out there amoung the heavens and the stars. In the \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author, despite the many harrowing \"challenges\" metioned, strongly and effectively supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, calling to that innate human want to know.\n\nOne way he supports this endavor is through scientific logic. He cites how similar Venus is to earth saying, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". One of the best ways to support a point is through factual evidence. By making clear that Venusian exploration makes logical sense, the author strengthens his argument. The fact that Venus is Earth-like and at times very close distance wise to her, makes exploring Venus seem like the next logical step. This scientific backing gives the mission to know more about Venus crediblity and adds a sense of noblitiy, which makes it seem worthy. Without scientific backing it would seem like a far-fetched dream, unworthy of any time or effort.\n\nThe author also effectively supports the exploration of Venus through emotional means. He does this by dangling the possibility of life on Venus. He states,\"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". It is basic human nature to want to not be alone. The want on community drives humans to great lengths to find others like them. Humans have and contiune to cross oceans, battle fields, and other challenging situations in order to not be by themselves. This pursuit for companionship extends to the exploration of Venus. Despite the temperature of Venus's surface being \"over 800 degrees Fahernheit\" and it having an \"atmospheric pressure ... 90 times greater than [Earth's]\" humans are still trying to think of ways to go there on the slim chance that there might be or might have been life there at one point. All in the hopes that humans might not be so alone in this grand universe. By tapping into the basic need and want to not be alone the author makes a strong case for the worthiness of Venusian exploration because many see the search for other life as noble cause and can relate with it.\n\nAnother way the author supports his point is by giving expamples of the progress already made and supplying hope. One of the \"challenges\" Venusian exploration faces is the weather on Venus. Venus has \"eurpting vlocanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strkies\". These condtions would frighten anyone. But to combat them, the author informs the reader about a possible solution proposed by NASA of a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\". In doing so, the author makes the problems seem easier to solve while at the same time providing hope through a possible solution. By showing that the exploration of Venus might indeed be possible that author is able reenforce the worthiness of pursuing Venus. The question changes from \"Can it be done?\" to \"How should it be done?\" which makes it seem like a worthy adventure. The author also give the pursuit hope by diplaying a possible way for it to actually happan. This can get people excited and add to the fervor and want to find out what Venus is really like.\n\nThrough the use of scientific logic, emotional motivation, and inspiring hope, the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is able to take an endavor that seems impossible and turn it into a worthy adventure that many can relate with and want to happen. The author taps into human curiousity and exploits it. In the same way the drive to explore the Moon enabled humans to reach new heights, so to does the author depict the study of Venus an epic mission, worthy of adverse challenges humans will face to accomplish it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No robot has ever survived and no human has ever landed here. Its Venus. The Earths twin planet. a mission that plenty want to do but is too dngerous and risky for us right now. But scientists and NASA are working on getting to Venus, but why?\n\nLike i said Venus is Earths twin. Venus, at some points, is the closest planet to earth. The only exception is Mars becasue all 3 travel around the sun at different times. Venus is our closest and most reliable planetary visit. Its conditions dozens of miles above the surface are rough, but liveable. With temperatures at that height at 170 degrees Fahrenheit, Venus is the closest things we can find to Earth. Meaning at one point Venus was probably just like earth with large oceans and mountains. If Venus was just like Earth back then, there is a chance that there was forms of life on this planet. This make scientist want to go and get sample of the gas and rocks on Venus and try to see if there was life on other planets except Earth.\n\nWith Venus surface 90 times hotter than earths 800 degrees, right now it almost seems impossible. Every robot theyve sent to land on Venus has not lasted 2 weeks. This dosent stop NASA from researching and still giving effort to land on Venus. One day, scietnists believe a Venus visit will be marked down in the books.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author includes scentence When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show determination She determined pass test Even facing problems adapting wents sucseed So wait year try better preparedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced numerous problems dealing mooring mast First I would say safety number one issue If dirigible catch fire could land main streets New York City posing hazard hundreds pedestrians Also weather another factor If windy fly time mast would waste When I read spend NUM CAPS modify building s framework I started thinking things town could There also existing law made illegal airships even remotely close Empire State Building Overall idea mooring mast poorly planned ideaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is often believed that adolescents are supposed to do volunteer works in their spare time to contribute to their society. It is also considered that their efforts are beneficial to the public as a whole. I do not support the whole idea. In this essay, I will try to portray the reasons behind my partial disagreement. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, there is no denying the fact that the youth are the energy that drives a nation towards prosperity. Usually, youngsters are really motivated when they try something new. Besides, when teenagers contribute to a project that is useful to the people, they feel a sense of belonging too. At the same time, this is great for the country, since the contributions from the younger generation will help the nation move forward. \r\n\r\nHowever, in my opinion, it is compulsory to make sure that no good work goes without reward. Anyone who has done something good for anyone deserves to be compensated for it. The idea of remuneration will definitely encourage the youth to participate in the upcoming developmental ventures. For this reason, I believe it would be logical to pay for the work the teenagers do for society. Consequently, it might potentially make more people join the trend of playing their designated role in the process because of the fact that their works will be acknowledged. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as great as it may appear to contribute to the people but every positive effort demands to be noticed. Therefore, I consider that no work done by teenagers should go unrewarded, rather be acknowledged by society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The world around us is advancing and technology is becoming more and more efficient. The next big thing in the automobile industry , in front of flying cars, is driverless cars. Driverless cars are essentially cars that don't require a human driver. Many people believe that driverless cars will fundamentally change the world but with this fundamental change there are negative factors that can create more problems than it could fix. Sure driverless cars will make an efficient public service transportation method, but there is one problem with them that makes driverless cars a controversial topic in our changing world. Whos is to blame for an accident, the driver of the manufacturer? I am against the development of driverless cars because they impose a controversial argument just that, who is to blame?\n\nJust this question alone is why driverless cars should not be a part of our future.\n\nCar accidents will inevitably happen, whether the car is driven by a human or controled by a computer. In the article it is said best,\" If the technology fails and someon is injured, who is at fault--the drvier or the manufacturer?\". Starting from the time the first driverless car is made legal and the first accident that happens with the self driven car there will be an argument. A court case will apear titled something like \"Man Fell Asleep in Driverless Car Hits Pedestrian Because of Technology Failure.\" It will be that man versus the manufacturer of the car and the argument of who's fault it is will be\n\ndiscussed endlessly. There will be a split in the opinion of our people between those who side with the man that it is the manufacturer's fault and those who side with the manufacture blaming it on the person in the car at the time. This can all be avoided ahead of time by not supporting the development of driverless cars.\n\nWith all advances in today's technology there are pros and cons. Many people will choose to support the development of self driving cars because the pros the present seem just so amazing. Some people like the fact that it would make an efficient public transportation system. Others like the fact that it would require little assistance and doesn't require as much work from them as the driver. To me this just gives us a reason to be more lazy. Safety is the most important topic when discussing the idea of having driverless cars and the development of these cars can potentially be a threat to the safety of other drivers and pedestrians out on the roads.We must not be awe-struck by the amazing things it could possibly do, but focus on the concerns and potential treats it could make to our safety.\n\nYes, driverless cars would be effiecient and fundamental to our future, but its really not worth all the controversy it causes on who is to blame for a potential accident, the driver or the manufacturer. The development of self driven cars are, also, not worth the increased threat to the safety of pedestrians and other driver, not to mention the expenses it would require to produce them. I strongly\n\ndiscourage the development of these cars and encourage you to look into this idea. Somewhere down the line this will be a topic of discussion broadcasted everywhere, but we can start looking ahead so we don't get lead astray by the idea of further advancement and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some experts believe that the raise the price of fuel such as petrol and diesel is the best way to tackle environmental pollution. In my opinion, I firmly believe that there is the best solution to solve the problem of the environment; some other possible solutions will be elaborated.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, If fuel prices increases then uses of traffic will reduce that will curb environmental pollution. As cars and motorbikes are the main sources of greenhouse gases and urban pollution, excessive use of cars releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which is harmful to the environment and badly affects the ozone layer. If the price of petrol in hiked, individuals will start to use their cars less often and this in return can decrease the rate of air pollution. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, by increasing fuel prices people will turn to alternative sources which are environment-friendly. For instance, instead of the use of a private car ,the rising price of petrol can be caused the majority of the people use much more public transportation. People will invest in renewable energy sources such as wind, solar panels, and tide rather than non-renewable sources like coal and petrol. For example, the United States have proven their efficiency in energy production. Second, the government can encourage more people to use public transport, this practice can help clean the environment and reduce traffic.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing the price of petrol can be an effective factor to reduce environmental pollution. People will use alternative sources and renewable energies, the government should also take serious actions by encouraging public transports for solving these problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I beleive computers extreemly important society day age Computers help people talk people Online keep touch family friends Secondly I think computers important help learning even online schooling Lastly computers help need entertainment people Computers one used tools planet Almost every family one people even Let s face many people traveling around world trying make decent living families Computers help keep touch wheather s emailing even video chat This makes people happy still keeps informed family members friends For people reunite family someone searching I nt know maybey longlost brother something Computers keep families togetherm might got little surprise every My keep computers Lastly computers plain fun Maybe re looking funny videos go search funny videos keep busy I know I enjoy downloading music different people If song going head look I m sure ll find looking You cooking need recipie something I sure re computer willing tell whatever please All right computers one important tools world live today We depend computers many things like keeping touch family helping people learn things provide entertainment name Computers help countless thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Argument\n\nCan you imagine having you driverless car and you're car malfunctions and drives off a lane and crashes? The new cars that are coming out in the near future where you don't have to drive and the car does everything for you is a bad idea.Even though there are a lot of good reasons why there should be driverless cars it still doesnt weigh out how many reasons why we shouldnt have driverless cars.\n\nWe all have at least been fascinted with the idea of having driverless cars. This has a lot of downsides. This could impact the jobs in the world with having driverless cars take out the taxi industry. This Driverless car can give terrorist an oppurtunity to drive the cars into a building and create a lot of injuries and deaths. What happens if one of the sensors fail or one of the binary codes fail to work and this could cause you you're life? All thes factors contribute on why we shouldnt have a driverless car in out community.\n\nThey shouldn't be wasting their time trying to make driverless cars happen when this could cost possibly billions to make roads and cars. We need to see the bigger things like using electric cars instead of using gas feul for out planet. This instead helps out planet and is effective and could impact the our planet in a better way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper opinion fact computer bad citizens I think people getting enough exercise I also think get lazy computer bad three reasons opinion People getting enough exercise People get lazy changes computer mount time They get addicted computer The first reason people getting enough exercise I pick reason people I know gain lot weight s kinda sad nothing stay computer eat Another detail computer messes eyes staring type screen One time I eyes felt weird getting computer The third detail people gets fragile weak I picked detail get computer exercise bones become weak The second reason people become lazy changes example people keep asking get stuff stuff would good friend The second detail person change person lazy go fun events freind The next thing wont freind anymore The third detail s like bestfriend replaced computer hurts person know long time replaced computer thats something make depressed make wan na commit suicide anyways The third reason person get addicted computer example want celebrate birthday person says first I got beat level person saying person going get computer Another detail day go pass fast thats like waisting days life people died anything get life waist good The third detail began hate person person dose nt care anything computer Those reasons explain opinion compter fact news paper I readSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The overwhelming majority of young people are inclined to marry after graduating from university or after becoming prosperous. Young adults do not have an intention in becoming parents, as they want to travel around the world and chasing after desire. I reckon this is an absolutely positive trend.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, a man has children, meaning he is a homesitter; eventually, he gives up his dream and purpose, and die still alive. We all know that raising a child is an irritating job, and a huge amount of money is needed to look after a child. For example, if we observe undergraduates, they usually say, I will think about a child after empowering my financial power. Besides, youngsters' top priority is to pursue their passion now, but not to raise a kid. Hence, the population assumes adults should have a baby only after they get affluent, as raising a kid is not a game.\r\n\r\nSecondly, one of the world's anguishing issues is overpopulation; many animals have become endangered species due to the fact that the growing numbers of humanity and human-beings depleted resources of nature. Many habitats got destroyed to feed 7 billion people. For instance, we cut down forests and destroy the ecosystem to satisfy our needs. Thus, this trend will save our planet. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, young adults have more alternatives to live compared to the old ages, so they think about to start a family after becoming wealthy or do not ever initiate. This phenomenon's virtue is immeasurable, as it will tackle one of the major problems of the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Engineering docking station supposed great accomplishment city New York Unfortunately builders faced many obstacles trying make incredible plan flourish Many engineers think hazards reasons apparent even constructed CAPS greatest issue safety Dirigibles used highly flammable gas hydrogen incident like Hindenburg occur would immense danger densely populated cityAnother obstacle winds top Empire State Building The winds constantly shifting backs dirigibles would swing around aroundThere also law low flying aircraft urban areas illegal ship ever even approach area The idea docking station great however many obstacles brought early planning Empire State Building never came dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "According to the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" in the near future there will be cars that don't need to be driven by people, but will be engineered to drive themselves. Evidence from the article shows, there are both positives and negatives to these cars being released and used by the public people. My opinion is that the development of these cars should stop, and that they will overall have a negative impact on the public and cause much more trouble than they are worth.\n\nThe first major concern of mine is the legalality of these cars. The article states that computer-driven cars are illegal to test in most states, so a person definitely couldn't ride in one in public. Only the states of California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia, are allowed even limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nIn order for these cars to even be released to the public, many states would have to change their laws and it would take a long period of time just to do that. There is also cameras placed in some of the driverless cars, and to me, that is complete invasion of privacy. I believe a person should be able to do whatever they want in their own car without having to worry about being watched.\n\nAnother down-side to computer-driven cars is liability issues if a car were to get into an accident. Would the driver be the one to blame, or would it be the manufacturer of the car? There is no man-made object that is fool-proof, so why would computer-driven cars be any different? These are only some of the questions that people will face if companies do release driverless cars to the public.\n\nI am a firm believer than machines operated by people work much more efficiently than machines that operate themselves. I believe that cars are something that are meant to be driven by people, and if they try to operate themselves, many accidents and machine malfunctions will occur. There is already many malfunctions that occur in modern cars as it is. Also driving is meant to be an awesome experience for people new to driving, and if driver-less cars are developed future generations will be robbed of their chance to experience what driving is really like.\n\nMy opinion is that the development of these cars should stop for multiple reasons, and that they will overall have a negative impact on the public and cause much more trouble than they are worth. The development of these cars should stop, because a great amount of money and time is being put into something that I believe will negatively impact the public. The issues stated above are only some of the issues that people will have to face if driverless cars are released to the public, think of how many more issues could possibly arise from computer-driven cars being released to the public.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "CAPS day dad pulled three times several quotes book I reading people could take offense The book general rather appeasing book s things people might take offense That nt mean book nt belong shelves I nt think libraries forced take books shelves offended someone That s like saying shoot everyone made offensive comment somebody life would left nothing end If someone finds things people say offensive generally stop hanging person Therefore would make sense someone stop reading book find offensive Some magazines really offensive things people real world say It s like generic nonfiction books come insulting things say high school level You nt subscirbe particular magazine even pick read These days many things offend many people many different ways What might offend street across town might find funnyYou make everyone happy took books shlef someone complained offensive things read would trying appease everyones wants needs I think would fair put restriction books age limits Some offensive ones could higher age limits At junior high I attended books categorized young adult books means either eighth grade note guardian saying s alright read types books It d like movies movies ratings certain people watch ca nt books I guess I trying say would disappointing numerous people started taking books movies magazines shelves market someone cried foul If nt like material looking reading watching listening forcing pay attention They go read nursery rhymes offenesive Once I say taking book shelf everytime someone complains material would like shooting every person ever made offensive comment someone lifetime d left nothingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on how their used . Driverless cars are needed in some cases . Driverless cars could create more accidents and also can creat less problems. Driverless cars could be a disrtaction for the world . Driverless cars will also cause problems with health because the owner might be lazy and become obese.\n\nDriverless cars can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on how thier used, because people always try to take advantage of things . Driverless cars would be good for people who have a disability . Driverless cars may not be good in all cases cause the driver would still have to be in the car because it they would have to drive for themselves navigatin through workzones and when accidents occur , the person behind the wheel might be asleep or busy doing other things which would cause for another accident to happen. As long as driverless cars are used well and not abused because Driverless cars could be useless.\n\nDriverless cars are needed in some cases , they would take place of a taxi. People occasionally like to go out to bars,clubs,events and drink beers and other beverages that can make them under the influence . Those drivers do not need to be behind a wheel operating a vehicle, they become a danger and could injure and sometimes kill people of innocence . Driverless cars would be good for people who are disabled because they could help them move around and go places which could could help them out . Driverless cars are needed in cases as if a women were pregnant or a person is injured they could get home or to a hospital.\n\nDriverless cars could be a distraction for the world, taxi and cab drivers could lose their jobs which could make the unemployement rate go up and America cant afford for that to happen. Driverless cars could make people lose their focus and also can be harder for people to focus till on the road. People would get the idea that just because they dont have to be in the car or even operating the car that they could lose focus . Driverless cars are really not needed because people need to be more focused on the road and not doing other things to limit possible distractions .\n\nDriverless cars could also create health problems , If the route the person has to go is cleared from accidents and road work sites then they could be fine . People need to be moving every muscle in their body . Little things like pushing your foot down on the gas pedal or the brakes move the muscle in your leg .\n\nDriverless cars can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on how their used. Driverless cars are needed in some cases . Driverless cars could create less accidents and also create less problems . Driverless cars could be a distraction for the world . Driverless cars will also cause problems with health because the owner might be lazy and become obese. Driverless cars are only needed if they could be used in positive ways .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When want read one special book heard find considered offensive would The public libraries take offensive material shelves noone read Then one special book wanted read limits A book someone worked hard song movie stored away little contraversy Do find fair rights I find fact cencorship confusing topic public libraries If someone write publish book someone want read If find offensive one read fair people enjoy The way done dont like dont read dont take away would want read There material libraries think censored certain degree Such anything nudity adult content That dose mean though taken away The stuff content taken away seleted area adults view Many movie stores book stores idea dosent library adopt idea We right freely state opinions believe If someone wants write book think right allowed If censor something dont like say violation constitution You allowed express opinion taking away cause like wrong Do find fair people spend much money time writting book people find offensive noone view anymore I say someone spends time effort allowed enjoy Is really hard pick book find offensive Censorship good cases inforcing much someone calls offensive againts right freedom expressionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph Saeng saying made promise give getting license hibiscus makes feel like home In text mother says CAPS seen kind blooming along lake Its flowers arent pretty strong enough make cold months winter hibiscus Thats matters says makes Saeng sad knows hibiscus remind hibiscus home gives power want try springSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Yes they should change to a election by popular vote. They should change to this because then they will know the actual amount of votes. And because they can see how many people want that person to become president instead of the electors because what if one of the electors changes their mind and goes for another person. Then that person can't revote and they are stuck voting for the person they do not want. And if it is changed it may cause problems politically.\n\nThe reason why people would most likely not want to change it because they might like voting for an elector and because they might think it is much easier and wont take as long to choose the president. Also the Louisiana legislature might replace the electors with new electors who would vote for John F. Kennedy. And that would be unfair because the popular vote would not really be for John F. Kennedy. Also there could be a tie in the electoral vote instead of a winner sometimes. Then the House of Representatives would have to vote if that did happen.\n\nThe electoral college is proven to be unfair to voters because of the winner takes all system. And so the dont spend time in the states because they know they have no chance in winning. And the state might pick a elector that they do not like by accident and mess up their vote. And the electors can only be people not holding public office. They might also choose a certain president because of his or her race.\n\nAnd the thing is that the people do not choose the president the electors elect the president. Sometimes but it hardly ever happens, the elector chosen would change their vote to the other president. It depends on the state on who would most likely become president because the more people the bigger the vote will be. Also the electoral college method might turn of certain voters. And sometimes no candidate wins the majority vote and this causes pressure and makes it complicated to elect the president.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People come across an abundance of advertisements every day. I totally agree, the adverts influence consumers and this can be regulated by imposing some law act by the government also creating some public awareness. We will discuss further on this topic and exhibit references.\n\nAlthough, everyone needs to get current markets affairs details, like., what are the new items have been launched? what are the new features in it? But nowadays, the offers and deals are projected in front of the public which makes them buy everything. It affects every individual, especially the youngsters who are in college and recently hired, they are the target for advert companies. When they promote with discounts, buyers will be in the queue to purchase them and they end up buying unnecessary stuff. For instance, the fashion industry gives huge offers every month and consumers are buying them regularly but they hardly use them which is a waster of money and their wardrobe overflow with clothes.\n\nDespite, many folks don't consider it as a main issue but it needs to be addressed immediately because it may seem like to growth booster of a nation but in ,reality this is another cause of global warming. \n\nIn order to regulate government should enforce law acts to demand sellers to reveal the truth behind the production. Furthermore, create awareness, to educate public whatever shows in many ads, just to attract crowd there is no necessity of buying all of them and waste money. For instance, a beauty brand was saying, females will get fairness in 15 days by using their product. That organization hit a jackpot but later, an activist provided proof to the court that their production is fake and demanded them reveal the truth. From that incident, they have started to include a disclaimer. Then nations become more aware of what they are purchasing. These results were possible only after the ministry involved and pressed rightful law for society also they share this information to educate the population.\n\nTo conclude, I completely agree, thought products promotions are required to expand knowledge, the customers are fooled by ads and that influence them to purchase just for the namesake.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no doubt that the number of children who are committing crimes has increased nowadays. while many argue that these children should be punished as per the severity of their crime, others believe that it is their parents who should be punished, instead of the children. I agree with the former view than the latter for several reasons.\r\n\r\nIt is true that youngsters are not mature enough to understand the consequences of their actions. They either commit the crime on someone else's influence and do not have even the slightest idea that their actions are illegal. It is their parents' responsibility to keep a track of their kids, their activities and also the people whom they are meeting to avoid such mishaps on the first place. Failing to do it should put them behind the bars rather than their kids. For example, in India, if a child who is under age and doesn't have a license is caught driving, their parents will be arrested instead of the driver. It significantly reduced underage driving. Therefore, as it is the parents' responsibility to ensure their kids follow the rules, it should be them who should be penalized for their descendents' action.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are few crimes which should not beSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The person I might talk with who thinks it was aliens more than likely doesn't have any back up information about why aliens did it. He probably is just another conspiracy theorist who assumes that the evidence that we've gathered is just a hoax to the public;however, we gather most of our evidence by examining the pictures that everybody else in the public is looking at. Heres the evidence why the Face of Mars is not due to the work of aliens.\n\nWhen you look at the face, it might seem like something a lifeform would create;however, it's also has many traits that are equivalent to land formations that regular human beings like Garvin, have seen in the world. If we examine our latest picture of the face from 2001, we can see that one of the sides seems to have cracked. Eventhough you might have your theory that aliens have created these cracks, we have our evidence that erosion plays a big part on a planets surface and make tears into the surface like the cracks in this landform. This is just of the reasons why we think the Face is just a chunk of the planet and not a creation of an intelligent species.\n\nAs you observe our 1998 photo and compare it to our 2001 photo of the face, you can see that there seems to be more substance added to it. Mars has wind like Earth and can blow the sand from the ground on to the face. Thats one way we could see how the cracks on the side of it could be created. The weather could have made the face by some flat mountains that could have had sand blown on it that ended up in the formation of a face.\n\nThe people might have also seen recent movies about the face and have thought that these pictures of aliens might have actually been true and that the formations had ben created the same way that the aliens in the movies made it. Hollywood films have had many ways of making movie magic and this isn't anything different from that. NASA has never gotten any clear evidence and pictures of alien artifacts or beings that have proven that alien lifeforms do exists . The Hollywood technology is not intelligent enough to actually get good, factual shots of alien beings. The technology that movies use are used to make everything look so real;however, they also use costumes and make up and various other devices that can transform the human body and trick the eye to think that these are real alien creatures.\n\nThere might be some theories and ideas that might make a person think that aliens are the true creator of the face. NASA has the same amount if not, more information than these theorists' and we can actually back up this information. So if the person who thinks that aliens made the face, NASA has to just show them the facts to make sure that people aren't tricked by the fiction.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars have devoloped a lot since 2009, many company's such as nissan,bmw and many others said they would have a driverless car by 2020\n\nthats because these driverless cars an amazing piece of work,\n\nWho dosen't want a car that is going to drive for them i mean that sounds pretty cool to me but what about if there is a car accident. Does the car know what to do when there is an emergency? So if driverless cars are going to be made then what is going to happen to the normal gas running cars because i know these driverless cars are not going to be cheap. Driverless cars are great for teens that are just starting how to learn to drive because they wont have to do all the driving the car would do most of it and they will eventually get better and the hang of driving, these kind of cars could also be good for the elderly because some can not see as good anymore they either crash or get hit that is why this car would be great for them less accidents, no more getting lost. this driverless car has it all gps,sensors,video camera, who wouldn't want a car with all these features plus it's going to keep you and your family safe with all the protection it has added.\n\nDriverless cars well they ever be allowed on the streets who knows. Nissan,Bmw and the other company's that are trying to build these cars should go ahead and make them because nobody knows if they are going to work or aren't going to work. Driverless cars should be made because it's an amazing thing that would change the world forever. Finally driverless cars should be allowed to be made because everything deserves a try.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Undoubtedly, with the rapid change of technology, people who decide to complete things instantly has been becoming more common and normal. Whereas some people refer to get things done instantly as a good development, others think upon it as a drawback and a block of revolution. As for my perspective, I consider the negative effect overwhelm the positive one.\n\nAn array of reasons may lead to why finishing things instantly is a negative effect. Firstly, people who have the ability to solve the tasks persuade more effective and efficient of complete jobs. In the other words, those who want to save more time to get high outcomes or profit. It might be a good influence of development. Furthermore, sometimes completing things instantly might make people look down the services and think of it as low prices.\n\nOn the other hand, as far as I am concerned. Firstly, only focus on saving time might cause people to forget to focus on details in the long term and it also makes a number of mistakes which people do not want it happen. Take my experience for example. While I trying to solve the math examination as soon as possible, I make a lot of stupid mistakes of easy questions. Therefore, getting things done instantly might decrease the willing of improving skills. That is, rather than trainning basic skills people show more intresting in using fast ways to deal with instant servicing and getting information.\n\nIn conclusion, I consider the negative effect of getting things done instantly to overwhelm the positive effect of development due to it cause the frequency of stupid mistakes happen more than before.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the present age, people tend to have children in older age. From my perspective, it has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will discuss the main reasons associated with this epidemic and reveals why it has more disadvantages.\r\n\r\nThe main reasons of this global problem are people's career and their freedom. Nowadays individuals' career and their position in the society have a great importance. Everyone try to enhance their performances and get promoted; therefore, having baby is a huge obstacle and prevent parents to reach their goals. What's more, people without children have a freedom. In other words, they do whatever they want and enjoy their lives. For example, a single person can travel or go to parties anytime without worrying about her baby.\r\n\r\nHowever, having children in older age has major drawbacks. First of all, old parent’s children may suffer some disorders like Down syndrome. This problem is more common among old mothers' children, which cause irreparable problems on society. Secondly, older parents are not energetic and they can't play with their babies properly. They get bored easily and in the future because of huge age difference, they couldn't understand children and this causes disparity between them. For instance, teens with young parents have a good relationship with them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, having baby in old age has various reasons like importance of job prospective and liberty. On the other hand it has serious demerits like disability and parents impatient. I personally believe that benefits of this epidemic cannot overshadow the disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "On long bike ride cyclist affected setting He affected lack water heat bad directions throughout story cyclist ran water due bad directions men Trying keep balance dehydrated state The water bottles contained tantalizing sips He ran water became dehydrated trip The heat major part dehydration bike ride I traveling high deserts California June I California hot The trip made even longer due bad directions old men Because I listened gentlemen hadnt porch decades caused laugh The gentlemen gave wrong directions time right information But land changed directions wrong When going bike rides setting rides great help bad help The cyclist experienced setting bike ride affect great dealSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When I hurt hand day meaping I patient I patient I fell hall I went office I waited patietly call mom pick When mom said going take room It took wile find parking spot got I patient even though hand hurting The finally found one went inside My mom went font desk tell I We waited little nurse came use go room talk said I would wait bed open xrays I saw lady window I knew opened doors asked She us follow room waited forty five minutes doctor come take us xray room When finished went back room waited wile Antill doctor come said I nt broke anything gave brace I went home I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper great concern computers wether people spend much time sitting infront screen I believe people aware time computers Instead ruining eyes exercising enjoying family friends Exercising major part every persons life nt get enough could become obeise Obeisity cause people like think slob Although might say nt care others think long run might mistake think way exercise likely rid almost type discrimination look different even better average person If ever get chance get telescope set spot see stars night Instead keeping eyes glued computer nice sunny joy go walk woods As see nature much beautiful hundreds tiny tots colors forming image nature If find image beautiful plant go see feel plant in person Many programs available computers let see people would nt rather talk real life I sure would I think people would well population said would much rather talk friends relatives person computer screen I feel however possible always talk people person cameras wires I hope I made clear exercising nature people real life much better options front computer rest lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus has the hottest surface temperture out of all the plantets; even though, Mercury is close to the sun . Did you know that ? Well if not maybe you should read \"The Challege of Eploring Venus\". The article pours out information about this evening star;however, you obtain more then just knowngle from this article. To contuie, the article expresses emotions and the author's feelings about the dangerous pursit to explore this marvlous planet.\n\nSo, did you know planet could have babies? Well I don't know if that entriley true, but Venus is the Earth's twin. Which I don't think should be taken littralle, because they're own twins thanks to looks. Which is pretty segrgated, but oh well. So back on topic Venus is classified as Earth's twin, because Venus is the closest plant in density, size, and distance. Also did you know astromers have theory that Venus couldv'e been Earth-like. They're fascinated that Venus couldv'e been covered with ocean and couldv'e even supported life. The astrometer only belive this, beacues the features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus has valleys, mountains, craters, and even a rocky surface. This really helped support why Venus is worth the risk, because look at all this inforamation we know. Yet, how are we suppose to belive it's true. You see humans are very heavy headed, which means we are not very open minded to knew idea. To contuie, people are going to fight weather it's true or not. Humans need to see it in order to believe it.\n\nConsquently, you may not think that humans need to see it to believe it. So, to get into our next topic some of the things I'm telling you about Venus may not even be true. We need to head into this challnge head first and hope for the best. We need to stop being scared of the what if's and be more scared of that nots. Many reseachers are working on innovtion that can help us obtain the knowlege of Venus, which is such a succes. For example, NASA is working on an invention to help reseacher fload above the heated surface. On the other hand, forms of light can't penetrate dense atmosphere, which would be tough since Venus atmosphere 97% carbon dioxide. To contuie reseacher can't get rock,gas,or any kind of phyical samples, but that why we need to keep pushing. If we wanna find out Venus's secerets we need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nTo wrap things up, Venus is a strange planet that we don't quite understand, but it we just stay strong we can find a way to discover the truth. Also who know what the knowlede from Venus could help us do. Venus has value weather you see it or not. The author shows his feeling swithout being so in your face about it. The pursit to Venus means alot to his as shown in the text. The author even talks about how the values of Venus are needed. They even bring why it's has value, innovation that make it possible, and pours tons of instersting facts about Venus to presrated you into seeing his point of view.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author does support this idea because in the article it talks about how even thogh it is going to be a challange it is dueable and you can survive under these condicions. Even if they will be lots problemes it will be safe but it wont be easy due to tempetur diffences and diffent radiation levels.It is also the brightest point in the sky and is the plant to have the most similarites to the earth.The arthor also knows that they have diffent tempetures and it is not safe to travle by foot the author still aproves about this idea about going to venus.\n\nEven if some oceans liquefys many metals they can make and invent new types of metal to help go into oceans and also even though it is no safe to go on foot veicles like jets cat go above storms and rocky floors. Also solor power will be plentiful for powering every thing because of how bight it is on venus.It is also a good idea because people are upgrading and making old parts better by making the resist mor and last more time in these conditions.\n\nThe tempurtes in venus is an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than the earth but even with these temeptures you can still be able to survive and they are also more extreme than anything we encountered on earth.The author also says that us humans should not be scared of taking risks and should expand to meet very edges of imagination and innovation.They are also working on making thins like cellphones and tablets more resistant to be able to be used on venus or outher places.\n\nThe authors opinion is that it is a good idea even if it is not easy and every thing is alot diffent you can still be able to survive on venus.Some diffences are tempture,weather,terrians and every thing is similar but more deadly on venus than on earth .There might be alsot of bad things but every thing can have a souloution like with stoms you can use somthing like a jut and be able to go above the storms and moutains and in the water you can make strong more resistant metals to go under water.So what the author said is we should not be sacred to take risk and should just go for it and try and maby it will all be fine and go well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It would be useful to students in the classroom to learn different techniqes to tell deception. For example, these muscle cues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. Another example would be it's useful for intergrating criminals and being able to tell if they are being truthful. Also to learn what the facial musle, do what? These are all examples of why it useful or valuable to to the classroom.\n\nIts important to pick a honest and truthful politician and not one thats going to hide information. The (FACS) allows you to know if they are being truthful or deceptive. The FACS shows when politicians are similing they arent always being truthful and most likely to be deceptive. This system would be very useful to pick and truthful and honest politician for are future.\n\nAlso, would be useful to see if criminals are holding information or being honest. Intergrating criminals would be alot easier and accurate.FACS would be helpful for police academies to learn facial cues and tell how a person is feeling to know how they are gonna react in a situation. If a terrorist is being truthful would be very vaulable and life saving. It would be very useful for police academies.\n\nThis system is very useful to nursing school to learn what musle in the face do. Even to learn just every facial muscles and what it does to make a facial expreesion such as contract and felix is very imporant to know. Or just to know how a patient is feeling or being truthful about the pain they claim to exprience. This would be vaulable to nursing school in so many ways.\n\nAll these are examples of how the Facial Action Coding System would be vaulable to are schools and countless types of schools and uses. It is important in so many uses to til a mood,reaction, and honesty. Schools would benfit from it so much. Even the future would benefit from it from picking politicans to presidents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A number of people think that all work will be performed by artificial intelligence tools in the future. As far as I am concerned, I am on the same wavelength with them about this particular idea. This essay discusses the determinants of why this phenomenon will possibly happen.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the utilization of artificial intelligence-based programs is more effective rather than conventional ones. The process of automatization by artificial intelligence is less time-consuming than manual way. Subsequently, the works that are done by those devices is also highly accurate. For instance, the arrangement of the buyers list just needs single click of devices which is simpler than manually processing and the results are also in accurate order.\r\n\r\nSecondly, artificial intelligence is also efficient. In regard to institutional-related work, artificial-intelligence-driven devices can possibly reduce the amount of money that commercial organizations spend on employee salaries. The company using robots have to pay only for the installation of devices, whilst the institutions with the employee must give the amount of salary in every period of time which is significantly higher. For example, Microsoft company which utilises chat robot to answer questions from the attendance of the websites have to pay only five hundred dollars for its instalment, which is cheaper when compared to giving fifty dollars salary per month for a long period of time.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, personally, I see eye to eye with the viewpoint that states all jobs will be done by robots eventually. The reasons why this event could possibly happen are related to its effectivity and efficiency.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on mars have to be a alien because back in time they did not have spaceships. If they did have spaceships back in the past we would of already discover it by now. It's probably a alien because it was buried in the ground for so may years that face is actually popping out. They should unburied it to see if it's human or not. If it is they have alot of research to do if not they still have alot have research to do. They should try to see if a body goes with that head. It could be a decovery of a new world. At the end of the article they said \" that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" They can also look up any information about mars having a volcanoe. That no one knows about. but if we just know found this it is more likey to be a alien. Because we been going to mars for a long time and it's weird that they just know recover that face. What happen if it's not a alien or human what if its just a rock that turned into a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Businesses are always driven by money-making pursuits, which, however, is argued that it needs to shoulder social responsibilities as well. From my perspective, I am in favour of this opinion, believing that not only should enterprises and entrepreneurs aim to make a profit but take more duties into consideration.\r\n\r\nLiving in a world full of competitiveness and stress, there is no doubt that businessmen and corporations make an effort to earn as much money as they could, thus gaining an edge over competitors. For instance, Apple's company endeavours to lower the manufacturing cost and increase the sale price so that it can reap more revenue from the market. As a result, all interested parties, such as shareholders, governments and so on, can benefit from it. Furthermore, profit-driven pursuits could fuel people and enterprises to make progress through unremitting effort, because wealth is able to make many dreams come true. For example, business persons can improve the living standard for themselves and their families, which brings them happiness and well-being. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the country provides us with opportunities to do business, therefore individuals and organizations engaging in commercial activities ought to make contributions to society. To begin with, the community offers well-built infrastructure and sufficient employees for people to make a fortune, which in turn should be paid back by money-makers. Apart from paying taxes, Apple company and other international corporations also donate a great sum of money to local charities and the less fortunate, thereby achieving higher value beyond money-making goals. In addition, the wealth in the country can be distributed more equally when individuals and enterprises take their social responsibilities, say, investing their gains into neighbourhoods to render assistance to those in need, thus building a harmonious society with a narrow gap between the haves and have-nots. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while it is true that individuals and companies in the businesses should spare no pains in maximizing profit, there is a wider role to play for them in society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affets cyclist afew ways For example features Rough Road didnt allow arive fast drive speed limit Second fact drivuing desert large snake made way Road causing man ease past trying keep balance dehidrated state driving desert hegot hot started get dehydrated lack water Lastly features werent buildings far miles left lost didnt anywhere stop ask directions These features defenitly affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In Joe Kurmaskies Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Speed Limit features setting affects cyclist great deal Each feature causing cyclist act For example reaching ramshackle shed cyclist finds water inusuable causes conserve water try head next town That action leads deeper high deserts California June Also terrain changes flat road short rolling hills cyclist must change speed better survive continue dehydrated state The scarcity buildings dry desert terrain causes cyclist try every shack building comes across water In story features setting dictates actions cyclist quest survive desert lotSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The below process diagram illustrates the basic required stages for the manufacturing of ethanol fuel from corns.\nOverall, there are nine essential stages for the production of ethanol fuel, starting with receiving corns (as a raw material) from the supplier to transporting the final product to the customer.\nThe first step in this process is to receive the required corns and store them in the storage area. Secondly, corns are fed into a milling process. After that, they are mixed with water and cooked for four hours. Afterwards, it's subjected to a fermentation for two days.\nNext, a separation process is required to separatre the liquid from the solid by-products. The liquid is then purified for a period of 5 hours. Moreover, and after the purification process, purified ethanol product is stored waiting for a request from the customer. Finally, the ethanol fuel is shipped once an order is received from the customer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that scitentific research should be devoted to addressing global health issues, but there are some who contend that there are more prossing problems to focus on. This essay discusses both sides of thos argument and why I partially agree with the later opinion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some argue it is important that adequate attention is given to solving global health issues. Currently, there are many people who are finding it difficult to afford medicine to be protected from diseases. To address this, scientist could strive to devise new and more affordable alterntives so that these people can live healthily in long-term. This is evident with the Hepatistis B vaccine as prior do its invention medication for treatment was presated, more people were administered the vaccine and the inspection rate had decreased by a considerable margin.\r\n\r\nHowever, others argue that there are other issues that are more deservvving of attention from researches. One of them is global famine, as there are some regions that are suffering from crop shortages due to numerous factors such as poor soil quality and pests. Therefore, scitentists could devote te creativity new genetically-modified crops that could withstand harsh conditions. Another critical issue is global warming, as it could pose a higher threat than most ploghts an global health. Hence, scientific research could be valuable in finding the causes of it as will as solutions to curb the effort of it.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that while it is important that scientific research should be dedicated to solving global health problems, there are more critical issues that neet to be addressed such as reducing famine and mitigating global warming.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face That Scared The World\n\nWe have all hear about this \"Face\" right ? , Well if you haven't Is really just a landform. The other Scientists has all of these people rallied up because they think that aliens are to exist. That cannot be possible because , if aliens existed then why are we just finding them? Wouldn't we already have proof of their existence ?\n\nThen Again , there are all types of landforms on earth some man made and more of the natural kind , So basically what you guys are saying is that if we find landform that looks like something is automatically aliens ??? what about mount rushmore ? That is a man made structure not saying that the \"face\" is man made but its just not relevant to get all of this contrversy about something that we barely know about .\n\nSo Therefore, You guys really dont know what the structure is. none of us know what \"it\" really is , It might look like a face but aliens are just not relevant enough to believe that they actually did something of this nature. i personally do Not believe in aliens , well would you blame me ? We have been to the moon, we have had a rover on mars for years ! and what do we get? nothing , just a rocky surface . no aliens , no water , No life period.\n\nNevertheless, even though in paragraph 10 it says, \"that that put out The maximum camera resoulution and each pixel spans 1.56 meters thats still not giving us any proof . We have been on this \"Aliens Are Real\" Stuff for a while now , and we dont have nothing that proves it. Don't you guys think that we should just cut it all out the picture ? we are wasting money on absoutely NOTHING.\n\nFinally , as I finish my statement I will just say that im'm not telling you guys to give up on your research , Not at all . but all I am saying is That If your gonna try and find these \"aliens\" of yours Atleast have some proof of their existance. Then Maybe I'll Believe You all when You do it. Thats all i have to say , I plead my case now . Goodluck with your research .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I think people need see realatey computer s real world re lot people spending much time computer spending enough time familys things really important While computer getting exsercise getting stronger sitting Thats one ways people get fat moveing around sitting When computer day everyday missing whats happening family miss every thing s going I think people need relax spending time computer get exsercise call one cousins brothers even mon find really ones really matter But really ca nt tell people long allowed spend computer give opinon hope listenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I PROPER_NAME do not agree with this subject. I beleave that no one should beable to make there country or state non driving this are no advantiges of not really having then yes you get exercise and yes less trafic but then guess what then people will be late to jobs and will be cold in whinter then guess what you all state or country will go to compleate crap all because you want to be a healty apple in the world. I had got my licence when i was 16 years old on my birthday and i was happy i had bought my own car and it was five speed and i tolk my test and guess what i passed with a 100 on it now if you want to make road more safer re test these old people on the road like relly some of then cant even see over wheel or they dont know what no you turn mean they allways drive to slow and cause acident so now what do you have to say about that.\n\nyes they kids now aday dont even get there perment because the testr book they give you is no where near the questions they ask you and dont for get about you oldy have 20 sec to anser it what the hell is the rush for so you can fail then if they pass they pass if they fail they fail so leave us kids a lone pick on the old people they get so old and drive they sneze and have heart atacts every day and kill people so that is what i think of this prompt.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Reducing car usage is becoming a big thing in a lot of cities around the world. In some cities they're developing \"car-free\" days, a day without cars, to lower air pollution. Too many people are using cars and this is causing traffic jams and pollution in the air, which is not good for the environment. I believe that limiting car usage is an advantage because it can help prevent air pollution, traffic jams, and can make people open their mind to use other ways of transportation. Most cities in different countries are evolving and people are liking \"car-free day\".\n\nLimiting car usage can prevent congestion in the streets which causes the air to be polluted. According to Source 2, Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals, so Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion went down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog. This really helps clear the air for polluted cities.\n\nThe population is growing everywhere, especially cities like Bogota, Colombia with 7 million. According to Source 3, it was the third straight year that cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in Bogota, Colombia. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work leaving the streets of this capital city without any traffic jams. The turnout was large and people are liking this new change. For example, a businessman named Carlos Arturo Plaza said\n\n\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nMunicipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event and were enthusiastic. The mayor of Asuncion, Paraguay said,\n\n\"These people are generating a revoluntionary change, and this is crossing borders.\"\n\nSince these cities have made this change, there has been a great outcome from this.\n\nThere are many different ways you can go to places without having to use cars all the time. For example in Source 4, Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University, says\n\n\"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift.\"\n\nIn this source it explains that the internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. The renewal of center cities has made the suburbs less appealing and has drawn empty nesters back in. Same with the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. With all of these changes, people who have stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One time friend waitin I stay hole hour I takin time wait though couldnt I got bathroom I said thankz said anytime I surprisedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hello. I am Luke Bomberger and after you read this article, you will definitely want to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It is a fun job, it is a job full of adventure, and is a very heartwarming experience.\n\nI said that being a Seagoing cowboy is a heartwarming experience. And there is no doubt about that. While being a Seagoing Cowboy, you ride the seas. And you also tend to animals to keep them well for the trip to other countries. These animals will be given to countries in need from the World War 2. It can really give you a good heartwarminng feeling when you help others. But you don't just give to the countries, you also get to viset them! Besides helping people, you can tour all the different countries that you visit. I got to visit many places like the Panama Canal on my way to China. And I even got to tour and excavated castle in Crete!\n\nAs I said in the previous paragraph, you will be working and traveling the world. And even though it is a hard working job and long periods of time on a boat, don't fret! There are a lot of fun activities and games that you can participate in on the ships while you are traveling. And sometimes, you can even play sports! After we took the animals to their destinations, we all played baseball and volley ball games in the empty holds where the animals were previously held. There were differnt games also. There was table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and other games too! But sometimes, I would like to read a book or whittle something. So you will definitely have a fun trip.\n\nSo do you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy yet? I bet you do! In this article, I said how it is a heartwarming experience, it's a job full of adventure, and has very fun trips around the world! I know I definitely liked being a Seagoing Cowboy, and I bet that you will love being one too!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story ending paragraph like spring comes back going try When I reading story its says story mother asked What happened And Saeng said I I failed test So I predicting mother going help studying gardening When snow melts Saeng vowed time work harder past testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With the use of this new software, the Facial Action Coding System, people have the power to detect how someone is feeling. Dr. Huang was able to detect feeling with this new software by construscting a 3-D model of a face, in which all 44 major muscles in the model move like the human muscles. Dr. Huang also relied on the work of psychologists to determine the basic emotions, in this case, it was six emotions (happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness). This software it proven to work thus it would be valuable to several schools around the world.\n\n\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\"\n\nsaid Dr. Huang but by using video imagery the new software can track these facial movements by comparing the expressions with a neutral face. Way before we had this kind of technology we could perform the same calculation every day. For example, we could probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by looking at their face. Of course we will not always be right with our calculations and we probably can not explain how we knew but thanks to Dr.Huang we have a new software that can.\n\nIn the article it states that by having a computer in the classroom that could help recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored can let the teacher help the student by modifying a lesson in a way that the student can understand better. With the advances of technology it will not be long enough before we can detect other emotions such as depression and anxiety. If the computer can detect these emotions it can help teachers know that the student needs some sort of help. If students get the help they need, wether it being therapy or just some time off, it can help reduce the number of suicides.\n\nThis technology can help students in the long run. This technology can also make computer-animated faces more expressive. This would help many students who want to be or are in the medical field. This new software would make video surgery a lot more expressive. Students and teachers should be allowed to have the oppurtinity to use this technology, Facial Action Coding System, to better thier education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It seems that almost everyone I know has a car. However, cars are the creators of a large number of problems. There are a number of reasons that less car usage would be beneficial to our society. This could include limiting pollution and congestion, improving health, as well as saving money.\n\nCars are responsible for a large part of greenhouse gas and carbon emissions. Cutting car usage would immensely help our environment, which is a goal that many people want to achieve. In some cities in the United States of America, cars are responsible for as much as 50 percent of greenhouse gas emissions. Some cities, like Beijing, China are so polluted, that smog is abundant throughout much of the city, making walking and other outdoor physical activities very unpleasant. Limiting car usage would help narrow that pollution a lot. Our environment has been negatively affected for a long time due to car usage, so it is time for that to change.\n\nWhile many people would say that cars are a necessary means of transportation, there are many other available sources to cut car usage. These sources could include walking, bicycling, skating, taking a bus, carpooling, as well as many other activities. Not only do some of those activities not pollute our environment, but they are also healthy excercises. Cars are also a large reason for accidents and injuries. A large number of people die or get injured every day due to car crashes. While many people are safe drivers, car accidents are almost unavoidable.\n\nLimiting car usage is another way of saving money, which is something that just about everyone I know wants to do. You end up spending a lot of hard earned money on gas or insurance rates because of cars. I know that many of my teenage friends are always bugging their parents for gas money. By using other means of transportation, that money could be saved and spent on something worthwhile to you.\n\nBy now, you should see all the positive effects of limiting car usage. While cars are a large part of transportation, there are a number of available sources of transportation that can be used instead. I hope that next time you are planning on going somewhere, whether it be spending time with friends or going to work, you will think about another source of transportation besides a car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To: Senator\n\nWhen hearing about the Electoral College, most people think of a group of individuals casting votes based on the popularity of the candidate in their state. What they don't know is that \"the Electoral College is a process, not a place\"(source 1) Some people, like Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole, have all thought that the Electoral College should be abolished and be replaced by the popular vote. According to a poll taken in 2000, 60 percent of voters believe the precidency should be decided on the popular vote (source 2). After thoroughly researching, the Electoral College should be replaced by the popular vote. The current system of electing isn't exactly democratic and there is a chance for there to be a tie in the votes.\n\nMost states have a \"winner-takes-all\" system (with the exception ofMaine and Nebraska) that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate in their state.(source 1) There may be an arguement that no state has enough votes to give the presidency to someone; however, this system basically casts away the other votes of those on the side of the opposing candidate, making it undemocratic. Besides that, there is also the chance that a few of the electors go rouge and vote for the opposing candidate. To be a democracy means to listen to the voice of the people; however, the college may not always listen.\n\nThe electoral College consists of 538 electors, meaning that the possibility of there being a tie is likely. When there is a tie, the fate of the potential presidents lie in the House of Representatives. When the election results are in the hands of the House, the selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. It will be more likely that they will vote for the candidate in their party rather than listen to the people's vote. Not only does it ignore the rights of the people, but this gives an unfair advantage to the candidate who's party is currently in power.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is a \"non-democratic method of selecting a president...\" (source 3). Instead the choice of presidency should be at the will of the people, not in the hands of electors. In the words of Plumer, the elctoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Education is the foundation upon which one build their future. In this 21st century, home-education is being preferred by numerous parents rather than the primitive way of learning within school premises. In my opinion, there are some benefits; however, these pale in comparison with the potential drawbacks. Various reasons behind this notion are explained explicitly in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, one of the major demerits of not visiting the school is, children will not receive legitimate degree certificates. In this contemporary era, education qualification along with valid proof of one’s capability is the most crucial thing to achieve. If a child does not have formal education, they will not be able to sit for any competitive examinations and job interviews, which require proficiency. Without authorized and verified documents not only getting the job is difficult but also salary will reduce drastically. To illustrate, a survey conducted by the University of California reveals that a carpenter’s wage per hour is 35 dollars on average, who have completed a diploma. Whereas, who learned from experience and practice at home, earns 25 dollars each hour. In fact, if home-educated children decide to enrol themselves for any degree course in the near future, they are less likely to get a chance for admission.\r\n\r\nIn addition, school-going young people learn how to make friends and appropriate way of behaving with various persons present inside the campus. Moreover, adjustment quality in the tenacious situations has been developed by them. By working and playing with friends they learn leadership, teamwork, moral values, the significance of collaborative and collective work. All these skills assist them to enhance their level of competency and capacity as well as improvement of their cognitive development. Research published by the study committee of India displays that offspring taught by teachers are highly sociable and skilled as compare to others, who are grown up in the homely environment, for instance. Besides, a young mind will be deprived of having all the fun activities and above-mentioned qualities, which everyone should have, to lead a successful life.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, I am a firm believer in the fact that this ongoing escalating trend has severe detrimental impacts on an individual’s life. The importance of educational institutions is indispensable and everybody should taste that life in order to obtain the goal of developing healthier pursuits.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear, Senator\n\nI'am a conserend voter that belives you should represent the people of your party and should apose the electoral college. It causes an unnecissary complication for voting for who will represent the face of the best country on earth. We the people do not want to get the wrong president to represent the majority of the population. The chances of an indefined out come through electoral college may be low but when it comes down to the presidency nothing should be left to chance.\n\nThe voters should know how the system of voting for president. They are the ones that deside so they should know how there vote can be used to have the greatest affect. Bradford Plumer states \"voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate...sometimes\". A democracy is when the people deside the destiny of there country. For them not to know what there chosing takes power out of the hands of the people.\n\nThe Winner-takes-all system is ok when your on the playground as a childs it does not work in the real world. This system creates Swing States. Acording to Richard A. Posner \"method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates to focuse their campaign efforts on the toss-up sates\". This draws attention away from other states. Bradford Plumer explanes that \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen sates didn't see the candidates at all\". He also clames \"puting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in ohio\". This is not right each vote should be just as important as anyother and no state should be the desiding outcome in an election.\n\nChance is a crazy thing. If there is a chance of something happening and it's given time it will happen. A number of weird outcomes can happen with electoral college. One outcome is the posibility of having a tie. Richard A. Posner explains\"A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number\". If a tie happens the represenetives vote for the people and because each state has one vote per electoral college...\"55 representatives from california, who represent 35 millon voters.\". Second posible out come is the majority vote goes to one canadite and the electoral college goes to the other. For example Bradford Plumer wrote\"This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency.\" These are just two of the odd outcomes of electoral colleges could cause.\n\nElectoral college don't solve problems but creat them. The best way to put it is this...\"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are most assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best.\"~(Bradford Plumer)~SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I like the idea of driverless cars. A driverless car could do justice just for about anyone. Such as drunk drivers, elderly people, and or people that might need glasses. Driverless cars have a lot of positives to it. The car can handle driving functions, steer, accelerate, brake, and a lot other fascinating things.\n\nIn paragraph 3 General Motors were the first car company to attempt to make a smart road. GM also made a special test track. Which had a electrical cable that sent radio signals to a reciever in the front end of the car. The smart-road systems suprisingly worked well. The bad thing was that the road required massive upgrades, and it would be too expensive to be practical.\n\nSince manufactures didn't have enough money to upgrade the roads, manufactures turned to smarter cars- but how much smarter did the car have to be? Google cofounder Sergey Brin, modified Toyota Prius uses sensors, video cameras, and an GPS reciever. The most important technology in the system was the spinning sensor on the roof. The spinning sensor used laser beams to form a constantly updated 3-D model of the car's surrounding.\n\nThe most intruiging question of the Driverless car was \"Why would anyone want a driverlesscar that still needs a driver?\" In paragraph 8 the question is perhaps answered. Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager admited \"The physchological aspects of automation are really a challenge.\" His proposal is that BMW has to interpret the driving in a fun way!\n\nMost driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians SAFE. Lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Traffic laws says that \"Only safe cars has a human driver in control at all times. So in most states it its illegal to test computer driven cars. The big question that remains is if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufactuer?\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work on the assmption that the problems ahead will be solved. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. We are growing closer to the destination everyday.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A new software has been developed that improves accuaracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software has promsing applications for a variety of industries. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can make learning more interesting, it's accurate, and to develop better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nUsing the Facial Action Coding System in a learning environment could help make education more interesting. To make learning more interesting, a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. The same technology can make computer -animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. Dr.Huang states,\"Most human communicaton is nonverbal,including emotial communication so computers need to understand that,too.\"\n\nThis means that computers would need to know nonverbal communication.\n\nAlong with making learning more interesting, the Facial Action Coding System is really accurate. The FACS begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face. All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Dr.Paul Eckman classified six basic emotions and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Dr.Huang even observes artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help paint facial muscles precisely\n\nenough to convey specific emotions.\n\nIn addition of the FACS being accurate, it develops new ways for humans and computers to communicate. The FACS developed new ways to communicate in various ways. It tracks facial movements by weighing the different units. The software can identify mixed emotions. For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The use of this technology is valuable because it can make learning more interesting, it's accurate, and it develops better ways for humans and computers to communicate.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I do not think that driverless cars are necessary. As we know, a lot of drivers now aren't responsible while driving manually. How could they handle an automatic car? I also feel that not only will this car be very expensive to perchase, but learning how to use the car will cost a lot of money as well. Those who have been driving cars manually would need a lesson on how to control these automatic cars because it is completely different from what the whole world is used to. It would be like driver's school; therefore, that would be pretty expensive.\n\nTo begin with, cars now are already very advanced (sensors, gps, cars that can be charged, etc.) There are even sensors to help the driver on the steering wheel. Secondly, automatic cars such as these are illegal to drive is a lot of states, as someone could be injured or killed if the computer-cars fail. I don't believe driveless cars are any more safer than manual cars for this reason.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article, the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I believe that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of student in a classroom is not valuable. In paragraph 6, the author talks about how the machine can recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused and it can modify the lesson like a human instructor. I believe it is pointless and unessesary. A teacher should not need technology to determine if one of their students is confused, lost or bored. A teacher should also be abe to modify their own lesson so it helps student understand more. Although it might help a little, the student would not always be confused or bored about the lesson they are learning. The student could be daydreaming or thinking about something else. A teacher can always ask questions about the lesson. If they think somebody is confused, they can ask them a question instead of having to rely on the machine. Techology is being so relied on in todays world and I believe it is unessasary. We cannot and should not always rely on it. Especially when it comes to the emotions of a person,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars have been a big topic lately. In some ways driverless cars sound cool but they also seem a little scary. I think that diverless cars shouldn't be allowed on public roads because they are not safe.\n\nSome think being able to have your car drive itself sounds nice. You could just sit in your car and listen to music while you wait to arive to your desination. Driverless cars would allow you to sit in your seat, hands on the wheel, but not acually driving. This idea does sound nice but as all other technology such as computers and phones, technology is not always reliable.\n\nA driverless car could cause a marjor or even fatal crash. While most driverless cars require you to have hands on the wheel this does not mean you will be paying attention if somthing is about to happen. All it would take is for somthing in the car to mess up and people could be very seriously hurt.\n\nI think that people driverless cars are not safe and they should not be allowed on public roads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A portion of communities argue that the most important thing kids should learn from education institutes is how to become fine residents and workers. However , others think that it has more advantages for the person. I partially agree with the statement, because I believe two of them are complimentary. \r\n\r\nFirstly, School is a place where children cultivate good habits. Such as manner,and sense of time. Furthermore, kids also learn cooperation and communication in school. The abilities above are the basis of being a good resident and efficient employee, however, they can also advantage individuals in their career lives. For instance, a worker who has a better attitude and always finishes the task on time is more likely to be promoted than others who don’t. Also, teamwork allows individuals to bring their diverse perspectives to problem-solving, which in turn increases their success at arriving at solutions more efficiently and effectively. As a result, we can see that while being a good citizen and worker, the resident can also get benefits. \r\n\r\nMoreover, a study from the National Taiwan University shows that the education level is disproportionate to the crime rate.Furthermore, as time changes, finding an individual's interest is becoming more and more important in education.The youth no longer be taught that getting good scores is the only way the be successful in their future life. The educators started to help children search for their passion, instead of telling them what to do is the best. For instance, Taiwan’s high school students not only take normal classes like math, Chinese, and science, but the clubs after school are taken seriously nowadays. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, formal school help students lay a foundation for becoming a good person in the world, meanwhile, it plays an important role in guiding children to find their own passion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Based excerpt builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle United States dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable If dirigible ever destroyed fire densely populated area like downtown New York accident could dangerous One grestest obstacle using mooring mast nature The author says The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Dangling lead weights weigh pedestrians streets niether practical safe The Mooring Mast tells obstacles builders face allow dirigibles dock Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 5.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Censorship big part lot things library There books movies magazines computers anyone want get Kids love go library get books hang friends Strict parents might believe books magazines music offensive library But nt everyone else thinks I believe people different views things There people think kids seeing bad things make want Others think kids seeing offensive things make learn Another thing people believe bad libraries talking Not everyone goes library wants sit talk anyone Most people go libraries Libraries fun go You get book want read There point parent worried child reading book isnt age group libraries good sections labled age groups They also would able check book staff good making sure isnt book shouldnt read person Also younger kids go always adult So parent keep eye kid doesnt believe right read offensive books Parents let kid go library without scared something look something bad Talking libraries always fun talk book reading hangout The staff people get mad kids laughing talking something I think make floor people go hangout talk In libraries lot good things rather bad things people always feel welcome Books people say offensive usually interesting ones So want see kids see offensive books movies make sure go adult sectionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 2.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "One nice sunny day I traped doctors office air conditioning doctors office chairs dirty waiting room I already cramed room people minutes I trying patient patience wearing Sweat dripped face black short CAPS shirt I starting get hot mad I kept patience I know I going get mad even wouldnt help make time faster Then sudden creeeeeck door opened A tall white woman green schrubs said CAPSSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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