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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is a natural landform, and we have proof that shows it such as several pictures taken, one clearer than the next. The brightest photo and the examination of the Face tell us there are no aliens on this planet.\n\nFirstly, when NASA got the first picture, I concede that it looked somewhat alien-like, however, that was a huge misunderstanding. A more closely taken picture shows that it is, in fact, a natural landform. I know this because when the picture was taken, there was no alien monument. Therefore, no aliens, right? But the wispy clouds that were there when this picture was taken, envoke skeptics. A third picture silences them.\n\nSecondly, once the skies above Cydonia (the place on Mars where the face is) are cleared, they go in for the third picture of the face. This picture proves to be the of the best quality. Stated in in the text, it reads, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\"\n\nProving this photo to be the most accurate. And when they examine the photo,it shows that the picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, common landforms in the American west. Garin then says, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\"\n\nWith the clearest pictures taken, we can all see that the planet of mars has no aliens, for the Face is a natural landform. Yes, people will believe what they will, but the examinations, and the clear pictures prove that the Face is close to a butte or mesa, common landforms found in the American West.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars aren't what the people of the world need at this time. Its better to have human drivers than driverless cars. In the text it says, \"Google cars aren't truly driverless.\" This statement tells the audience that driverless cars are only just a dream. Therefore wasting time, effort, and money on a driverless car is pointless. What if their car's technology fails and creates an accident that coul've been avoided with a human driver behind the wheel?\n\nIn the the text it tells us, \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Driverless cars sounds like it could become a reality but it would be too expensive to do so and we should focus our money on more important acitvites than creating driverless cars.\n\nToo much effort would be going into trying to make driverless cars when the cars we have now are fine enough. For example the text reads, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the maufacturer?\" Creating new laws for a driverless car sounds like a lot of work that no one wants to do and the laws we have now aren't perfect and could probably use work on them instead of creating fresh new laws on driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I student I wanted let know great interesting books I read schools library public library well The problem complaints friends families books Not I ve also seen books appropriate children reading I wanted let know I kind thinking taking books would nt good idea I think without books less people would want read learn To begin I wanted talk complaints friends told One school good books read want take replace ones like I thinking would ones go library choice everyones So I m trying say nt good books students wo nt going library If nt get books wo nt well school something affect school Furthermore complaints one family member seen young girl looking book appropriate public library So instead taking types books put room strictly children go They taken book would nt ever used Also another reason If taken another peson might need information topic book would nt able find nt That I thing types books special room intead taken Finally I somewhat mentioned earlier books truly important That I go taking books favored others If person nt like certain book magazine request book magazie want read By book ar nt used could actually used someone else intersted So keep book students people would go read In conclusion people might say taking book better keeping Well way I see wrong keeping better It better someday books useful nomatter old If inappropriate books like metioned earlier put away good place If ar nt enough interesing ones requesting one another way That I think taking books shelves wrong watever order let books go waistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mooring Mast authored presents two main obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The first problem uncontrollable factor mother nature With high speed air currents would cause back ship swivel around around mooring mast If dirigible unable dock correctly dangers would fact dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe Another problem builders encountered already existing law made sure airships nt fly low cities The author notes This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Because mother nature preexisting legislature builders Empire State Building overcome enigmatic problemsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opition this technology would be really helpful to students in school. If a teacher is teachng a lession and a student or all of them are using compuers then I can see this technology being helpful to the teacher and the student. It could even help a student do better in school.\n\nIf this technology can somehow let the teacher know if someone eather isn't interested or they are interested then it can tell the teacher to do something else. With this knowledge for the teacher he or she can change the lession a little to someones specific liking so no student is bored. With this students can be more focused on the lession at hand. With this, in the future students might be excited to go to school. Also help them if there having difficulty in something.\n\nPeople can even make this technology avallible in other aspects like video games and watching videos or movies. If someone plays a game it can suggest another game like it, samething with movies. With this people can find more things they like to do at home. This will allow this technology to find things someone likes to do and see if they enjoy it. This might even make people feel generally happier in their home.\n\nIn conclusion this technology for classrooms is in my opition a great idea. Not only can it help students who are confused, but this can make them excited to go to school. This will allow students to do much better in school and find how they learn best. Also this can make people be happier at home when doing things they like. People can use this to find even more things that they like even if they never considered it before.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if teachers couldn't teach anymore and we had to rely on technology? The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because, it can help educate the children. There's technology out there that can help people learn.\n\nWith this new technology children can learn faster and better. If a computer can realize when a young child is confused or just plain bored of all the school work, then why shouldn't be able to reteach the information a better way so they understand. The key to sucess is having a good base of knowledge. With better education comes better and greater opertunities.\n\nTechnology that can read emotions of students in a classromm is valuable because it can lead to a high education. With a higher education comes better job oppertunities that others can't get. It also helps them retain more information compared to staying up all night to study for a class they don't pay attention to.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are just too dangerous to allow in society. Who would be held responsible for malfunctions that result in harm? Driverless cars are just too unpredictable to let out on the roads. Safety is more important than wanting to be lazy. There are just too many unanswered questions with driverless cars.\n\nExactly who will take the blame for accidents? That is a huge and unnecisary choice for lawmakers to make. As the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" What if the manufacter made the car to perfection and the driver did everything right but the bumpy roads and pot holes make the car's computer system malfunction? Then the blame could be put on the government for not having safe enought roads. This could result in lawsuits that are not needed. There is just too many legal problems to have them on the road.\n\nThese are just some of the questions that arise with this topic. Can the roads be safer? Are the cars going to be affordable? Will this put millions of taxi drivers and bus operators out of work? The list goes on and on. Driverless cars bring way too many dangerous and terrifing questions. The most important thing for our society is safety. To keep that, everyone has to be willing to stay in control of their cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many artistic places prefer to have an entry fee, whereas others let free access. I fully think that the benefits to have admission fees compensate the drawbacks to be not free.\nMany individuals would visit museum or art galleries if it were free which could attract more tourists. Unfortunately, admission charge decreases the possibility to discover paintings or masterpieces. However, before being a cultural place, art galleries are a place where numerous employees work. Indeed, if visitors had not to purchase the entrance, workforce would be not paid and the place would be not clean as museum should be. Moreover, huge museums as the British Museum have some sponsors to restore masterpieces whereas small museums have sometimes not the fundings and hence, admission fees would help it. Then, having an entry fee limit the number of individuals who do not really want to see art and appreciate the place.\nConcerning to cultural places, museum and art galleries know that many households could not afford ticket entrances for their offspring so many museums establish reduced price for teenagers and children. This project improves the relation between young people and the culture, then it allows children to be attracted to culture, partipate to the technical expenses behind the entry fee and after to visit again some cultural places when they will grow up and purchase the full price. Moreover, purchasing tickets help to the economy of the country which sometimes famous cultural places are a significant part of country's income. For instance, admission fees in museum are two third of the tourism's outcome in France.\nTo conclude, I believe that admission fees should outweigh free entrance because it does not let the worth process of museum to work. Even if sometimes admission fees are costly for us, there is always a meaning behind the prices.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some assume that the world and development in the future depend mostly on robots. Nevertheless. These machines have some people questioning their potential risks. Both angles hold valid justifications. however, the writer believes robots are ideal non-human workers to enhance the evolution of the world's future.\r\n\r\nObviously, robots had taken the role of workers when people found out its profound benefits. In other words, these machines will reduce the time work, and money needed to produce goods, so it gains higher productivity as well. Furthermore, robots are the solution to the short-staffed problem which has been popular throughout the world for a long time as it affected negatively the global economy.\r\n\r\nConversely, there is a viewpoint that robots could have a severe impact on the public. Advocates of this view assert that Al could damage the residents on the grounds that in the temporary world. It developed with its knowledge, in contrast to emotion. Definitely, AT has some researchers warned about its danger.\r\n\r\nFrom the writer's perspective, despite several drawbacks that robots could bring to the public, the advantages of these machines outweigh them. This is the fact that in some extreme conditions such as radioactive laboratories, people cannot access these dangerous environments so robots would be the perfect alternative.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, workers were replaced by robots which could bring in large profits and work in every\r\n\r\nsituation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We live world inundated persuaded media Ever since little young minds filled opinions others history present Whether reading book watching motion picture even listening new music artist lives affected media The art world considered one controversal businesses work Each piece literature movie shared vast community critics We given right opinion pieces Every piece art judged criticized However many find certain pieces offending way shape form It quite impossible produce piece fit everybody s satisfaction For example religious pieces often scorned nonfactual information director s author s opinion matter Since live diverse community religions pieces never satisfy audience Movies criticized decades represent sort life lesson truth appealing audience Why learn reflect No piece media possibly directed satisfy opinions world As personal example I see novels books war heavily criticized The men women fought country enjoy see pieces written war protesters peace keepers see insult cause wrote book name This book heavily criticized topic censorship The world lived dramatically affected impact peoples opinions If book movie offensive group people burned books History books slavery war burned others found topics offending Nonreligious groups thought religion offensive burned works religion Their government wanted world peace community every man equal diversity longer existent denies book written censorship book gives generation great lesson For generations grown world diversity Every mind special different never share identical thoughts neighbor Therefore must recognize survive live together We escape diversity live The books see shelves movies see big screen music listen earphones make generations history next We need accept neighbor opinions born equal If throw away history accomplishments man left nothing improve nothing leave marking history We accept others ideas build improve life s As stand world filled diversity must move reflect It time offend offended time learn moveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever looked at a freind and have no clue what he or she is feeling? well with the new invention the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) could tell what your freind is feeling just by reading their face.\n\nI think the technology of having a divice that could read a human emotions is a impressive and could be valuable.\n\nOne reason why I think the FACS is a good thing is because it would be great for the cosulasr at the school that could help ceritain kids out if they are feeling low, depressed, sad and any other negitive feelings. a sentence from paragraph 3 says \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear , and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscels.\"\n\nAnother reason why i think FACS is a good thing for studenst in the class room is it could read the studnce and if the student is having trouble or confused , the FACS could see it and make the assiment less difficult for the student wich would help alot, I thought this because in the text it says , \" A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confusd or bored, Dr. Hang predicts. \" then it could modifiy the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" this shows that it could be useful for students .\n\nThses are some reason of why i belive that the FACS is a good thing for students at school .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir Narciso life would nothing change In paragraph says love cooking still today I eternally grateful shows loves families cooking Also paragraph Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air Narciso shows loves culture music In paragraph Narciso says even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country love This showed family still country good Narciso says paragraph I always grateful parents love sacrafice Narciso loves family thankful everything ve done The overall mood memoir family gets share many great And fun moments togetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting really affected cyclist The author wrote rough terrain isolation Flat roads replaced short rolling hills tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake After reading information descriptions I inferred author alone desert awful conditions I go inferal tone resentment also He seemed wish hadnt taken shortcut landed desert The hot weather another factor affected author trying keep balance dehydrated state He seems really planned long ride would conserve water The rough terrain desolation hot temperatures seemed affected cyclist authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles trying construct marvelous building One obstacle making sure stress building dirigible would go foundation building top middle could cause collapse As said text The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Over worth modifications made building s framework building changed many ways make stable enough dirigible dockAnother obstacle weather building strong winds air currents This would mean dirigible would dangling high pedestrians street s safe thing highly flammable hydrogen floating around millions An obstacle well came dirigibles time effort put learn safely install mooring mast This took people going professionals like Navy finding proper way The mooring mast Empire State Building caused many obstacles get waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For all these years there has always been an advancement in technology. Google cofounder Sergey has always been around technology. Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues. I honestly think driverless cars are a good thing. These days there are people who text and drive and do not keep there eyes on the road, and one day they are going to regret texting and driving. These driverless cars is an extra safety hazard for these people, and if somehow or someway they still end up texting and driving and they hit someone, i honestly think they should go to prison. Cars are not toys they are dangerous, and so are those people who are behind those wheels. I think all the cameras and the sensors in the toyota prius is amazing. One day it might save someone's life. Today people are all about privacy so they might not like that camera, but they don't realize that it's not going to be used against them it's there to save their life one day. The toyota prius is like a moving computer, there is so much technology in it, it's unbelievable. Automakers that make these driverless vehicles are bringing home the big bucks. Driverless cars are so expensive because of the technology that they have in them. Today I personally think that people wont buy the driverless cars because they might not like all the sensors or the cameras. There was a metaphor that someone came up with \"Look Twice Save a Life.\" I have no idea who came up with that saying, but it is one of the greatest sayings i have ever heard when it comes to driving. Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved. Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90% of the time. That is crazy! I couldn't imagine what cars would be like in 20 years. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. That is in 2020, could you imagine what cars would be like in 2040. So if you were to ask me how i felt about driverless cars. I would smile and say \"they are the best thing ever invented.\" They alert drivers when they need to take over and they made a track to run test on these driverless cars. When they ran test at this track for the driverless cars the track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical. I think all this technology that they have to offer us is amazing, and I think if we didn't have it I think there would be more crashes. Which leads to more people dieing. So how I feel about driverless cars I love them!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of overweight has polarized public opinion . Few folks opine that the government should be increasing the price of food to get ride the overweight serves the interest of it is a presence in an advantageous way , while other cliques of men divulge that it is contemptible by society or people and only brings drawbacks with it . Therefore , the main objects of this essay is to throw light on the pros and the cons of this dubious matter . \r\n\r\nAt the start , there are prolific points to agree with the meritorious side which is income . To be more specific , they are increasing the level of the income by this step . In additiin , the ministry will get considerable money compared without this low . For an instance , Oman 2000 witness a huge number of money which is 500,000 R.O each month because they are did it . Another positive outlook is protect. In other words , they are saving it is citizens by rising the price in all country . Actually , they are puying the fast food rather than healthy food , subsequently this is the problem . As we know , the fast food had the highest negative effect's . For example , Reem ates the dinner every days from outside that why she had overweight . Moreover , she can not stays one day without it , so it is a really good idea to stop these kinds of the humans . \r\n\r\nBy contrast , it is predicated that the thorns of this area can not be neglected . The most worrying aspect is the priority . As we know , the food is basis human to reach the health , hence no one can leaving without it . Actually , some of the persons not have the good income , subsequently they can not buy enough goods . To be honest , these days became significantly hard for these humans ,especially the poor people . \r\n\r\nTo summarize the composition , the essay explecated the advantages of growing the products to decrease the overweight, not only but it also shed light on it is the disadvantages . Regarding this discourse , the pros outweigh the cons so , I fully agree eith this low .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should people join the Seagoing Cowboys? Well here are six reasons why you should join the SGCB. 1 reason is that you could have a great experance getting to see parts of the world that you haven't seen becasue if you get to other parts of the world you could make paper on the subject for a school project or just tell people about it. Another reason is that you could get your friends on it to so you wint have to go alone and know no one there. A 3rd reason is that you can help people that need it because what if you had something terrible happen to you wouldn't people halp you how much they can. A 4th reason is that you get to be on a boat with animals that would be fun for people that like animals. The 5th reason is that you can have fun with all the other things that you can find to do make it fun in your own way. A 6th reason is that you get a work experance that probly no other kid or adult would that is good because if you wanted a job in the millitary then you could say that \"I help in a world wide bad happening and I was a Seagoing Cowboy and I have been to different parts of the world so I know my way around places.\"that is why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having an electoral college is a controversial topic. There are many different views on whether electoral college should be allowed or removed. Keeping the Electoral College does of couse have its benefits, but so does changing to elecction by popular vote. On a personal opinion, taking out Electoral College has more positives then negatives. When taking out Electoral College, citizens of this country actually have a say in the president they choose and it will become less complicated and less confusing for voters.\n\nRemoving Electoral College and replacing it with election by popular vote is greatly convenient. Citizens in the US right now do not have a say in the president they want to win. Instead of voting for the president they are actually voting for a \"slate of electors\" according to Source 2 by Bradford Plumer. Electoral College does not represent a democracy which is what this country is all about. This country gives the individuals a right to say and express themselves. When a 4 year term is over and it is time to vote again, the citizens are voting for a group of people, not the actual president. Then, those group of people called electors later vote for the president they would like. Even though in Source 3 is states \" But each party selects a slate of electors truested to vote for the partys nominee (and that trust is barely betrayed) is is entirely possible for the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\" Meaning the electoral college can still vote for another president even if it not the party's nominee. It is the electors who choose the president not the people.\n\nFurthermore, selecting president by popular votes contains more benefits. Many people become confused when it comes to voting. They do not fully understand the concept of the Electoral College and therefore make mistakes when it comes to voting. In source 2, it clearly states \" Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes.\" Thus meaning that people are not clear on the situation and end up making a mistake that may or may not have have changed the outcome of that election. Even though the college restores the politicaql balance between large and small states and has it's good sides to it, removing the Electoral college will be more bemeficial at the end of the day.\n\nAll in all, Electoral College should be removed and reoplaced. It will be better. Having people clear on who they vote for and actually having a say in who they want to win president will actually show this countries democratic views and will relieve probably a big chunk of Americas citizens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted author describes obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigible blimps dock The original purpose mast serve landing spot dirigibles also known blimps In paragraph author states The one obstacle expanded use New York City lack suitable landing area Al Smith saw opportunity Empire State Building A mooring mast added top building would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refuling service let passengers That s one obstacle company In paragraph says mooring mast made changes existing plans buildings skeleton construction proceeded planned The buildings structure nt really help dirigibles muchSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many communities, it is accepted that young people do free work for the community. I agree that this is correct, and in this essay I will try to explain it. \r\n\r\nAs we know, humanity has lived in communities for many years. Traditional values are passed down from generation to generation. And one of the most important qualities is the ability to work, because this is what provides people with the necessary things for their existence. The older generation of people usually teach the younger ones, because the younger ones do not yet have enough experience to do the job well. For example, many schools offer work education classes where teenagers can do useful things for the community like birdhouses for birds or prepare simple meals for charity dinners. At the same time, teenagers feel needed for society, which increases their self-esteem. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, they gain useful experience and knowledge. For example, the ability to cook is always useful in the future. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion I would like to say that unpaid work for the community among teenagers brings them together and distracts them from things like drugs and other addictions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article called,\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it explains an advanced technology that can identify what humans are feeling on the inside. This technology is attention grabbing and seems so futuristic. The Facial Action Coding System claims to have lots of uses. I think that this new technology could be very useful in a learning environment. The Facial Action Coding System could benefit a classroom setting by being able to tell if the student is completely understanding the material, being able to tell if a student if bored and zoning out, and by seeing if you are enjoying the lesson.\n\nA lot of times students do not understand the information that is being pushed on them and are too afraid to ask questions. Teachers can't read a students mind, and teachers aren't a computerized system to identify if a student is understanding the concepts in class. Students are often too afraid and embarrassed to ask questions in class and for that sake, they just don't do it. From personal experience as a student, this can be frustrating and doesn't benefit my education. The new Facial Action Coding System could change the way people learn on a whole new level by being able to identify confusion, and then breaking down the concepts more. Having a system that can identify if students are confused could be extremely beneficial on lots of different levels.\n\nStudents sit through classes for up to 8 hours a day, 5 days a week. That makes me bored just thinking about it. A student is bound to zone out and not to mention get bored throughout the day. It's not wrong to be teaching the material that needs to be taught, but making it a little more interesting could benefit everyone. A system that can detect if a student is getting bored and incorperating more interesting topics into the lesson would be beneficial to everyone. That could make a students life a lot less stressful, and a teachers life a lot easier.\n\nSome students think other topics are more interesting than others. Which is just a matter of opinion, but I found in my years of schooling that it will be a lot easier to learn material if you are enjoying it. I believe that every student has the ability to enjoy learning about something during their years of school. The Facial Coding System could speed up the process of finding interesting topics for a student a lot easier. Sometimes it takes years to find a topic in school that you enjoy, but if we had this new technology available to us, it could help students enjoy what they are learning a lot more.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System has many ways to benefit how we learn. Understanding the material completely, being engaged in the topics, and even enjoying to learn in school. I believe that if we had to ability to do those things, and had that technology in front of us. That there is no reason students wouldn't benefit from it. It could change learning in a whole new way for students. So why wouldn't we give the Facial Action Coding System a try in the classroom?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates mood calm comfortable For example paragraph says Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen shows house without yelling fighting Also paragraph says congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home shows grew home comfortable In paragraph says kitchen humble house feast always filled air life love showing family calm loved The author says paragraph I never forget parents turned simple house home shows comfortable growing house even though nt lots things In conclusion author creats mood memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in a classroom. Many students often get bored, distracted, or just lose focus when being taught a lesson that doesn't interest them. Of course you can't just not learn the lesson, since you are learning because it will come to use later on. Therefore, I believe that with help from your computer screen, you could stay on track with your work.\n\nOften times, teachers use different teaching styles based on what allows their students to learn most effectively. With the Facial Action Coding System, computers could do so, too. For example, say you're reading an excerpt on the computer and it's not really on a topic that interests you, most students would immediately lose attentiveness to the reading. This is not a good thing, especially if the information was important, useful, or for a grade. But, with the Facial Action Coding System, this problem could be solved. The system could be used to spice up the learning, or keep the teaching style stays the same way if the student is staying attentive.\n\nMany people learn in a different way. Some students are more effectively taught by learning visually, others hands-on, and some verbally. The Facial Action Coding system could recognize these based on students facial expressions. If the student is looking focused while seeing a diagram, the system could see they're a visual learner, and keep teaching the topic in that way. Otherwise if that doesn't work, the system could see if the student's emotions would change based on if they could listen to the information instead of reading.\n\nBased on the positive characteristics of the Facial Action Coding System, I believe we should have the technology at school. The system could really be put to use, especially if it could help students learn and understand topics in an easier way. The emotion reading technology would be extremely valuable to have in a classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThere is a big controversy between the issue of keeping the Electoral College or abolishing it. Some people say that we should abolish the Electoral College because it is unfair or outdated, and others agree with the idea of having electors choosing their party's nominee. The Electoral College should be abolished because it is unfair for the states with smaller populations, and the \"swing states\" don't get any attention during the Presidential Election.\n\nIf we look at the statistics about the Electoral College, we see in the article \"\n\nWhat Is the Electoral College?\n\n\" by the Office of the Federal Rigister, it states \"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors\" and \"A majority of 270 electoral votes.\" Your states number of electoral votes is based off of your states population, which isn't fair to smaller states such as Hawaii or Alaska. Hawaii has four electoral votes and Alaska has three electoral votes, while the larger states like California have fifty-five elecotoral votes.\n\nThe way that our country today decides our winner in the Presidential Election is the \"winner-take-all\" system that gives the all the votes to the winning canidate. In the article \"\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\n\n\" from \"\n\nMother Jones\n\n\" by Braford Plumer, he states that \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, canidates don't spend time in states they know have no chance of winnning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing states.'\" But in the article \"\n\nIn defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\n\n\" by Richard A. Posner, he states that \"...almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a slight plurity in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state\" and \"The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates.\"\n\n\"The electoral college is unfair,outdated, and irrational.\" We need to abolish the Electoral College because it just isn't fair to the voters and some stes are getting more attention than other states. If we abolish the Electoral College, we would have a more fair election and more people would come and vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience virtue I always wanted Sometimes I lose patience something take long In seriously event called It raising many people wanted see would close The rain inocaculously stop I wait It six So words family I stand wait two hours thirty minutes The two hours seemed take forever It unbelievable torture My brother kept annoying us queued squeaky noises My brother reprimanded three times stopped Finally let us got pop hotdogs We found seats began watch Man Im glad I patient enough The show worth waitSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This technology has not actually been proven yet on a human, only on a painting. This could be valuable when doing homework or study time, would not be very valuable in class though because a teacher can tell if a student is bored, and would be helpful if a teacher has something that might entertain the class to keep it interesting.\n\nThis emotianal reading technology would be valuable when students are doing homework or studying for something. It would be able to have the student take a break, or make the subject interesting so the student doesn't lose interest.The text states \" ...If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" This shows that it can help them stay focused on their task by giving them a tiny break so that students aren't bored out of their mind. Some students get bored when studying, or doing homework, and usually take a break that doesn't end. This technology can help students stay focused on the task and not get bored.\n\nThis technology might not be so valuable in a classroom because a teacher can tell if a student is not paying attention, bored or is just asleep. This technology will not be very valuable in a classroom, most students get bored and try to go to sleep during class. If their are students actually working, will the teacher have to change the subject to a more interesting matter for the few who are bored or alseep.The text states \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal... even though individuals often shiw varying degrees of expression.\"This shows that not all students have the same emotianal expressions so they will be different.Will a computer be able to distinguish each and every single student in that class as an emotional expression. This emotional expression reading technology can be exploited to where students can make themesleves bored and the subject will always become exciting or entertaining.\n\nThis emotian reading technology can be used however if a teacher has somepthing planned but wants to use it as like a break. Then students who are getting bored and zoning off would have something to keep them focused after the teacher does what they had planned.The text states \"A slassroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming cinfused or bored..., then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This shows that it would help the students stay focused. This would help the students because it is a sort of break that can be entertaing. Students would like this because it would relax them and cause them to pay more attention, because they are not bored anymore.\n\nThis emotion reading technology could be valuable if a student is doing homework or studying, or if the teacher had soemhting planned but wanted to use it as a break for the class, but would not be very valuable because a teacher can tell when they are losing their students to boredism. This technology can be helpful but at the same time may not be helpful. It can help keep the students focused for hoemwork and studying, but in a class that is typically boring, the teacher won't really need ot be told their emotions because they will already know them from experience. This technology would need to be given to soemone only for an important reason so that students don't take advantage of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test Saeng nt want give yet In story Saeng mumbled I mean like kind atat She found still shaky say words home Saeng still upset misses home Vietnam When Saeng puts hibiscus ground feels alive Saeng wants feel home United States Saeng nt going give driving try harder harder pass testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when no one will have any money because of \"Driverless Cars\". Yes, you may think driverless cars is a good idea but its not. We already have \"Driverless Cars\", they are taxis and buses. They say it would use half the fuel of today's taxis and are more flexible than a bus. But how much would they cost? Are they going to be cheaper than a taxi? Are they going to be bigger than a bus?\n\nBuses and taxis are probaly the cheapest forms of transport, and don't get me started on Ubers.\n\nThey say that Google has already made some \"Driverless Cars\", but they are not really driverless. Driverless means no one behind the wheel. \"They alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" If it can't drive through traffic or back out of driveways then what's the point. What's the point of having a \"Driverless Car\" if it's not really driverless. Isn't the whole point of having a driverless car to relax and let it drive on it's own, not to be alerted when it can't even pull up into your driveway.\n\n\"Originally, many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads.\" So what you're telling me is that you want to make the roads smarter too? No, you need to make humans smarter not cars or roads. If we weren't so lazy we wouldn't need \"Driverless Cars\". \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" Want if the \"human at the wheel\" sucks at driving?\n\nThen we are going to have some issues.\n\nThe sensors are what the should be adding to cars. The sensors \"Can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better respone and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"\n\nSee that is what we need in cars, they are so many car accidents because of speeding and drunk driving.\n\nOk back to why \"Driverless Cars\" souldn\"t be made. Driverless cabs? They already driverless cabs, you, yourself are not driving the cab. Unless you are a cab driver you are not driving the cab, and it's going to take so many jobs away from cab drivers. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to driver?\" Their turn to drive? So you take turns driving your brand new driverless car? But don't worry they have a in-car-entertaimnet and information system to make sure you don't fall asleep at the wheel. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer?\" I thought it was a driverless car why would the driver be at fault?\n\nI can talk about this \"Driverless Cars\" idea for hours but I only have fifty-five minutes to talk about this. So i'm just going to wrap this up with my last thought. Driverless cars sould not be made.\n\nLIL BOATSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers that can happen.\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the verty edges of imagination and innovation\".The author wants the reader to know that if you live in fear you will never know what is out there.\n\nScientists know that seekiing to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close to it despite the risks.The author makes it clear that risks and dangers are going to happen with anything that you do in life.If fear stopped people from doing unimaginble things there would not be any unimaginble people who made those things possible and real.\n\nThe author wants the reader to understand two things in this article and that is fear shouldn't stop you even if there are risks and dangers.The other thing the author wants the reader to take from this is that with a little imagination and innovation you can do anything you set your mind too.Even if that means going to Venus.\n\nOver three deccdes scientists have been trying to get to Venus but no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, this would explain why not a single spaceship as tounched down on Venus.Scientists even discussed futher vistis to its surface because it may be the only earth-liked planet in our solar system.\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans that could have supported various forms of life just like earth\".Although Venus being just like Earth in many ways our aricrafts could not be able to fly over Venus because it is to hot up there with 170 degrees Fahrenheit, and not having easy conditions survivable for humans.In other words Venus is still untouched by humans and will probably be for a while until scientists find a way to do the unimaginble.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Saeng vowes spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test The author concludes paragraph hibiscus brings comfort home confidence Almost familiar now This quote story shows things starting right starting feel comforting making relize living similar used live When around hibiscus brings back memorys flowers used lived Both mother daughter appreciate flower found similar back home For example story mother says Its flowers arent pretty strong enough make cold months here This shows appreciate similarity old hibiscus In conclution author concludes story paragraph helps readers understand importance girls memory used liveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, joining the Seagoing Cowboys is a fantastic opportunity. If you get the chance, I recommend that you sign up as soon as possible. I did, and my experience was amazing. Let me explain why.\n\nOne reason that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because you get to help countries in need. The Seagoing Cowboys are a part of the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Adminstration, and provide countries with cattle that the countries might not have because of war. You also get the opportunity to visit many gorgeous and fascinating places. On my trips, I got to visit Europe, China, Venice, and even the Acropolis in Greece, and many more locations. If you like to travel and see new areas, then becoming a part of the Seagoing Cowboys is an opportunity of a lifetime. Even if you're not very into traveling, but you like working with animals, joing the Seagoing Cowboys is still a great idea. On the trips, you spend the majority of your time working with horses, young cows, and mules, which can be a wonderful opportunity for a fan of animals. But the trips aren't all work. You can still fit in time for fun and pass time with a lot activities, such as baseball, volleyball, fencing, whittling, etc. Even better, though, you can become more aware of people in other countries and their needs, which can make you more sympathetic and kind to people who are from different countries, especially countries that are poor and aren't the best places for people to live. These are just a few of the reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nAs I stated before, the Seagoing Cowboys is a fantastic opportunity, and if you ever get the chance, you should join as soon as you can. You get to help out countries in need, visit many beautiful and unique places, and get more experience on working with animals. The trips are also quite fun, and there are many activites that you can do, especially after the animals have been unloaded. You can even learn about people in other countries and their struggles, which can prevent you from being ignorant, and that awareness can make you kinder. This is all why you should definitely consider participating in the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Google has already made a driverless car in 2009. Driverless cars should not be able to be used. There will be more people texting while driving. More people get drunk and driving. Who would to blame if something goes wrong?\n\nIf cars drove themselves there would be way more people texting while driving. If people are texting and driving they won't be able stop at red light and at stop signs. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" When people are texting they tend to not hear things others say.\n\nGetting drunk and then driving is againist the law but people still do it. When drunk sense are num so things like vibrating won't be felt. \" GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" When people can't feel it they will back into it and can cause huge accidents.\n\nWhat happens if too many controls are used at once? If the cars doesnt autobrake and causes a huge accident who would be in trouble? Driverless cars could help prevent alot of accidents and cause alot. When people are not paying attention and the car doesnt stop at a red light it can hurt many people and companies.\n\nDriverless cars should not be able to be on the streets. People could be drunk and paying attention to their phones. Pedestrians may no be safe everytime. Who will be to blame if there is an accident. Not everyone would follow the laws for driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watchings TV affects children, it is hard to determine it is whether the length of watching time or the content of programs has more effects on youngsters. Although I believe that the time spent watching TV has negative impacts on young people, I think the content of programs has more marked influences on them.\nOn one hand, the consequences of watching TV for a long period of time are deleterious. First, The more children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to them. They might become more overeliant on TV for entertainment, which results in a sedentary lifestyle. Thefore, they are likely to have health risks, such as heart attack and diobety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The earth as you know it is where us humans live and we have been living their for many many decades. The thought of going somewhere far away from earth sounds frightening,and unbelievable,but it may not be as unbelievable as you think. The author tells us Venus is the second planet from our sun and Earth, Venus, and Mars are all \"neighbors\" but all these planets have differences. These differences could lead us to something new or something that us humans have yet to discover.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The authour states \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" The author is not declining the idea of studying venus but rather suggesting us readers that it is not dangerous to study venus. The author also states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into manly equally intimidating endeavors.\" He/She believes venus could point us into a new direction and it is worthy enough to study even if it means facing danger us humans have not yet expierenced.\n\nWe do not know what will become of us humans in the near future but rather of thinking that way we should focus on what we have here and what we have around us. Although at this current moment we do not have sufficent materials to study venus that should not stop us from exploring furthur into venus and/or studying it.\n\n\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This quote provides a new outlook of what is to come and it shows that the author definitley supports the idea of studying venus despite all the dangers it could come with.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Face in Mars is just a natural landform because the one of the scientist said that they don't just pass over the Face veary often and that it's also not an easy to target Cydonia. When the face appeared on the monitors the scientist thought that their could've been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab. Later on the found out that it was just another Martian measa, (\"couple days later the NASA an image for all to see a huge rok formation\".)\n\nThe Face from Mars got populer it was in the pop icon, also came out in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, and radio talk shows, it even haunted a grocey store in a checkout lines for tweny-five years.\n\nIf the Face on Mars was created by aliens I don't think that the govoner would let the scientist or the the scientist would give out information of the face on Mars. It's personl information and it is not aloud for the scientist to give out information without permshen of there boss or the goverment. Also the 2001 images spans 1.56 meters, compared to the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They scan your face get your emotions and see how you feel.The reults are wonderful and your happy but is it right? Can a computer really scan you and tell your emotions.How does it know how you feel it's just a computer it doesnt have facial futures or emtions.\n\nThe human face can show so many emotions and has this for a reason. You can look at a person and tell if there happy or sad bcause of there facial futures. The artical states that \"the facial evpressions for each emotion are universal\" showing that everone should be able to tell eachothers emotions without the tecnology. We show the facial expresions we have to show our mood and give off our emotions.\n\nHowever the computer may help in some way to a class but as the atical ask \"how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we use to express to show how we feel?\" If im happy and this computer says im sad well how does it know? This is tecnology that someone is using to comapre one persons face with someone elses and not everyone uses the same emotions to show the same feelings.This computer could be good for telling us the feelings in art but you shoud be able to look at art and tell the emotions thats what art is its emotions in panting or drawing form.\n\nThe artical states that most human communication is nonverbal and includes emotional communication. Why do we need the computer to tell us the emotions when you can look and tell yourself. Each expression is compaired to a nutral face what if the machine guesses wrong what if you show different emotions for different fellings than other people? We can tell emotions we use them everyday but the computer dosent its only telling you what the people who put it together know.\n\nIn conclusion should this tecnology be used in the classroom? Should we really leave the finnal call to the computer and also how does the computer know your feelings if it doesent have its own. Whys should we let the computer tell us our emotions? The choice is yours to decide but to even decifer if or if not to use the computer but even doing that your showing emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars? I am against the development of driverless cars. I do not understand the point of them. I feel like they are being over done and that they are not needed. I feel we do just fine without them , and will continue to do so.\n\nIn the article it mentions the car not being able to navigate itself through certain situations. i feel that defeats a lot of the purpose of the car. They are said to be driverless but still require the assistance of a driver? If you still have to drive and be fully alert and aware at all times, not knowing when you will have to take back control over the car, what is the point? The driverelss cars not being able to navigate themselves properly 100% of the time could cause serious or potentionally deadly harm if that were to be the cause of an accident. These cars are not fully safe.\n\nEven though driverless cars are not an completely awful idea , i think manufacturers have a lot of kinks and problems to work out before they plan on getting any further with driverless cars. Maybe in the future these vehicles will be of better use . As of now , i am against the ue of driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are man things in this world that can be believed. In this case we shouldn't believe that the face on mars was created by an alien life form. We really cant believe something that has been supported by many facts and evidence. There are many reasons to why we should't believe that.\n\nOne of the three reasons is that according to the excerpt, scientists figured it was just another martian mesa,\"common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an egyptian Pharaoh.\" This shows that the figures were common around those areas but this one in particular had shadows which resembled an eyptian Pharaoh. Also, a few days after that NASA found out that the shadpows formed an illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth but we really can't trust this if it's a coincidence or actually true. Well that's when they're wrong thinking that it was created by aliens.\n\nAccoring to paragraph seven, on April,5 1988, when mars global surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, a team snapped pictures ten times sharper than the ones the viking took. these pictures showed that the \"alien created\" landform was actually a natural one. The text supports this by showing that the they took way more sharper images which made them way more credible then the ones they took before because you could see the actual natural landform. Although he pictures were ten times sharper, there was still clouds which made the image hard to see making it not reliable.\n\nFinally, the landform was a natural one for this reason. In paragraph 12, he text shows that ,\"what the picture ctually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake RIver Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin which really shows that the butte or mesa is really similar to the the Face on mars which can actually be one. also, \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as th Face on Mars.\n\nTo sum it all up, the article had a couple sources of evidence to support the fact that the Face was really just a natural landform. Also, there are many sights of evidence to show why believing that aliens created the landform was eally wrong. After all we should ll believe in something that is credible and supported with many details an evidence.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology adavncements have come a long way since the primitive sticks and stones of the early human era and dueing this time humans have been constanly creating new inventions for different tasks. now there is a new technology that will allow people to calculate emotions. This new invention to read humans emotions to an exceptionally accurate percent can and will be a valuable asset later in life for reading our emotions which in turn will help tell the truth when we dont want to,find what is bothering people so it can be fixed, as well as keeping people focused in their daily lives.\n\nThis will be useful in our everday lives because it is a more advanced and accurate form of something we already use daily. for instance we as humans \"calculate\" these emotions when we are looking at a friend and we can \"tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on his or her face\". but despite that we humans still cannot accurately describe and convey the truth behind the emotion. we may see a person who is happy but in reality they are very down and upset or angry. this is where this new technology comes into play. With this new tecnology people will be able to find the true emotion becuase it can detect mixed emotions and the emotions that make it up. because of this peoople then can respond in a way that is needed to either make the situation better or keep it on the same topic that it is currently on. this technology could also keep people focused and alert due to this technology responding to keep attention to the task at hand. for example\n\n\" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored .\" \"then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" Or if you are an adult the technology could respond to your emotions and change itself to fit your needs the best. This use of the new technology would help both the people of the working class and students who are trying to stay focused on the class and its lessons. in addition to this the technology can also be used for entertainment. the technology would \"make computer -animated faces more expressive\" which would ensure more happines from the user.\n\nBecause of all the advanced tasks that the new technology can do such as help tell the truth, keep attention to task at hand, help fit itself to specific needs and create better entertainment. This new technology will come with great benefits and is definetly a helpful recource that should be implmented into classrooms and other facilities to ensure a better and more productive daily life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is not fair and should be abolished. Did you know that 60 percent of voters would prefer a more direct way to vote then what we have now. That is a lot of people who just want a more trustworthy and direct voting process. The Electoral College should be abolished because you can't trust the people you elect, and many states do not even see any electors at all.\n\nHaving your trust in people who you only see campaigns for on television is pretty hard to do. Honestly that is quite ridiculous for them to ask of us. In source 2, paragraph 11, Plumer tells us about how sometimes \"faithless\" electors disregard their party's candidate and vote for whomever they please. So is it really worth going through the trouble of electing poeple who might not even do as they said they would. Posner on the other hand explains that the trust in the elector is rarely betrayed (source 3, paragraph 16). But is it really worth risking four, maybe eight years of our lives to trust poeple we really do not know. Not to mention how it could affect our jobs and lives at home if this does happen.\n\nDid you know seventeen states didn't see any candidates at all in the 2000 campaign. In source 2, paragraoh 13, Plumer talks about how candidates do not visit states they know the can't win or states that they know they will definintly win. This leaves many states who do not get to see any candidates at all. This makes those states feel like their votes do not count and worry if they their new president willl have any regards for their interest. In source 3, paragraph 19, Posner says that this is a good thing that candidates do not visit states they know the can't win or states that they know they will definintly win because then that candidate can focus on the states that may be undecided or swing states. He believes this is a good thing because a candidate with appeal in only a few states is unlikely to be a good president. But you are leaving out a big proportion of the United States population who would love the expiernce of hearing a cadidate give a passionate speech about why he\\she should be elected.\n\nWe can come to the conclusion that the Electoral College should be abolished because you really can't trust the people you elect, and many states do not even see any electors at all, which then makes them feel worthless. Furthermore, we can say that the new way to elect the president should be more direct and fair.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology to read human facial expressions might be a little too much. It might say your emotion is one but your not feeling that emotion and then it will just throw you off. But if we could use it just for pictures, and projects in schools, that might be a bit more intresting.\n\nSay if we got this new technology in our schools today it might not always be correct then throw some students off, or it could become very distracting and take away from the students learning. Todays kids are so involve with technology and it shouldn't really be mixed in with our schools as much because students just become distracted\" \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrcutor.\" \" What if the coomputer reads the wrong emotion that the student is feeling and then it wouldn't give them the correct lesson. But if we used it for school related projects then that might help with the students learning and engage them more.\n\nIn conclusion it wouldn't be the best solution to use this technology to read students emotions, becaue it might not always work, and students can become distracted easily. But if we could use it for projects or to do research then that might be a way that students can use it for studies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us quote Author Katherine Paterson She saying books people would think little graphic shocking take books shelf eventually would books left read I agree sense take certain books shelves library We take shelves would taboo many ways It would stepping hot water people would violating authors freedom press would decide material right wrong far far comes censorship These many reasons wrong Taking certain books shelves would constitution The gives citizens freedom press This means write anything want without worry government s citizens opinions If start taking certain books shelves libraries include controversial things violating natural right Which leads next argument allow censorship charge So many people want include opinions right wrong So supposed believe On person think somthing line person standing next would think ordinary That makes country great We mixture many different ideas work together common goal If government would assign someone censoring books magazines music would uproar How one person say something wrong And someone allowed censor things would included How far far This hard question ask If allow one person judge things included Would judgement stop books movies music Or would expand judgement clothes lifestyles If implement system censorship lives would become one big judgement Self expression would go window people would scared deemed inapropriate Our world would become puzzle trying fit noticed rather standing pushing human race forward There always going people disagree things They find place offensive What realize everyone views things different ways We people need learn accept something ordinary try understand otheres comming If world would much better placeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some nations, there is an increasing number of homeowners who show interest in delving into the past of the house or building they reside in. This essay will look at some possible causes and offer multiple ways to help residents investigate this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, understanding the home’s history can help people to know whether they can or can’t alter parts of the building. If individuals are aware of the background of their houses, they will be provided with a better understanding of the condition including construction materials used or how the house evolved. This information, therefore, prevents owners from causing irreparable damage to original features. Secondly, many people look for the story of their homes because they are curious. To illustrate, some remnants such as a portrait of a family member, or some novels left by the previous occupants might trigger curiosity about who they were.\r\n\r\nThere are several methods which can enable people to find out about the history of where they live in. To begin with, they can look for the seniors in their neighbourhood to ask questions. These people have been living in the area for years and staying in touch with previous owners so they know a lot about what happens behind the walls. Hence, they can share things and provide the necessary information. In addition, census records are helpful for new homeowners. Thanks to these, individuals are able to discover the names of family members who lived in the home, as well as their marital status, occupations, and other intriguing information.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, looking at the past of a property is essential if a person wants to make some changes to the house or to find the answer to unsure past events. In order to find the answer, residents can seek old people living in nearby areas or look up old census records.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear brought attention people feel computers bad us Some people say distraction physicaland mental health Although I see people would think I believe computers good benifit society I believe computers help people learn stay intach friends family live faraway stay orginized Sometimes people computer learning nt even know Simply visiting homepage automaticly see news feeds things happening around world Other times people go online diliberatly learn If someone thinking going would probably go internet learn Simply searching equadore many choices pop climate sesonal weather hotel options farts But thats way people learning internet Now many college students option taking lessons online This students like calm quietness house distractions sitting class Friends could big distraction class stay intouch friends moved away I remember second grade bestfriend move away I sad I badey ever talked one day parents set us vidio chat I felt like I right This great I though many people could use talk relatives friends Another great way stay intouch friends family email By writing message sending make staying touch easey personal wants chat emails easey thing send world wide So many people love type keyboard well many different papers type could lost I hate clutter I many school binders papers lost This I take great advantage typing paper every chance I get My computer keeps orginiced I could never loose work File save idiot proof way keep files safe place Then press print get hard copy I sure many people love using computer reason Also I much faster typer I writer work lot needey computer As see plenty reasons using computer goof society learn stay intouch friends family stay orginiced Many people could agree Do ntSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The innovation of using the new technology known as Facial Action Coding System (FACS) would be an invalubale asset in any classroom across the globe as it's complex algorithms can make learning more beneficial by reading individuals for what they require than it go unnoticed.\n\nWith FACS installed in each classroom, students would become more focused and better at managing class time rather than wasting it by other means. The excerpt quotes Dr. Huang,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(P2, L7-8). This statement details how FACS can keep students invested in the lesson with optimal intake of course material as the level of emotional feedback allows it to continuously make improvements on itself to assist students with comprehension and prevent negative emotions.\n\nStudents would also gain access to more interactive material such as educational media that would allow them to further their own understanding of topics held in the classroom. The text states,\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive--for video games or video surgery.\"(P6 L 8-10). This opens up a variety of possible academic applications with students being able to perform interactive virtual surgeries or increase their social adequency by speaking in front of large, virtual crowds more effectively as facial expression can give them incite on their performance and the list goes on. This facial reading technology can boost gaming and simulated platforms that make the students more eager and\n\nwilling to learn and try new educational things by taking and giving facial input.\n\nAlong with all of the individualized educational benefits in the classroom, this technology can also improve the moods of student that could make the schooling environment more easy going. The text says, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but may even help produce them.\"(P9 L2-4).This details that students who would smile more in class knowing it is being monitored, may truly smile by the end of it because the collective group of students would gradually raise the atmosphere of the classroom into a friendly environment with high spirits. This would not only make the learning process run smoothly, but also decrease stress in students and increase productivity.\n\nAn argument could be made that the constant monitorization can make students anxious or feel as though their right to privacy is being breached, but in reality, classrooms are already like this. Students who use school loaned computers only have access to education material and any teacher may pull up what is on the students screen regardless of permission. But by choosing FACS, it would make the student feel more comfortable as they know that the computer is monitoring their expressions in order to make life simpler and is always best suited for them. Over time, they will be accustomed to it and maybe even regard it as best part of the learning experiance growing up in a rapidly evolving, technology-based world.\n\nIn conclusion, by integrating this facial expression reading software into school systems, students will gain many new oppertunites to get the most out of their education. Not only would they be able to keep pace with the objectives of each class with ease and a smile, but they would be able to leave each day having learning or done a task with immediate input by computer generated expressions that are reassuring of how well the student did. For the best possible education, this system creates and maintains the academic environment needed to have all students be prosperous and effective individuals when it is time for them to become apart of the real world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often an argued issue that money should spend on new buildings rather than of renovating the old buildings. New buildings can be lived a longer period to compared the old museums. I partially agree with this statement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. \n\nTo commence with, certainly, capital should be spent on new museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones because these kinds of new museums can be lived a longer period, new modernized buildings can be built with a better interior design and all the amenities. In addition, these can be given enormous convenient to the population might be used happily. For example, in India has built new museums for the population instead of spending money on renovating olds. Therefore, money should be spent on new buildings. \n\nOn the other hand, finance can spend on renovating old buildings because these actions need a minimum amount of money, resources, labour and everything. Moreover, demolishing's building can be created numerous economic loss towards the nations. For instance, in western nation cannot demolish to their old bildings, besides, they can renovate old buildings. Hence, renovating is the best idea rather than building new ones. \n\nTo conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that both have positives and negatives. The government should be spent money on the proper and useful things. So, I partially agree with the thing indicated statements. I believe that the authority should be taken a better decision which is affordable or huge.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you risk your life to search for answers that might just end up dissapointing you? Well I'm asssuming that the author of this article would. The author talks more about the bad things about Venus than the good things, which doesn't help his/her claim that it \"is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\". In this article, the author talks more about the hardships Venus's enviroment would provide than the benefits, he/she talks about how hard it would be to build a spacecraft to even withstand Venus's envirmonet, and he/she doesnt't provide any points or ideas to why we should want to visit there.\n\nThe author mentions that Venus's atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide. Not only is the atmosphere 97 percent carbon dioxide, it also contains \"clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid\". Temperatures on Venus average around 800 degrees fahrenheit, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet, which would be impossible to maintian human life, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times what we have here on earth. All of paragraph 3 is just talking about the negative's of Venus, which doesn't support the authors claim that these risks are worth finding out any information.\n\nIn paragraph five, the author talks about how NASA is trying to build a spacecraft that can withstand Venus's envirmonet. He/she explains in paragraph 2 that no spacecraft that has been sent to Venus has ever survived the landing for more than a few hours. The author talks about how NASA wants to build a blimp that will hover 30 miles above the surface of Venus so that is can avoid the harsh conditions on the surface, although right after this, he/she states that even 30 miles up off the surface, Venus is still going to be around 170 degrees Farenheit. The extremly high air pressure, heat, harsh storms, etc will all have to be concidered when trying to build a spacecraft that will be able to survive on Venus. Once again, these paragraphs are not explainging much good that is coming out of a manned trip to Venus.\n\nThroughout the article, the author talks about very little benefits that come when sending a man to Venus. Scientists do believe that Venus was once covered with large oceans and might have had a variety of life forms. But this means nothing to us now if it's all destroyed. We will never for sure know if there was once life there, all of the evidence is gone. Honestly, what is the point in even going to Venus? Temperatures of 800 degrees would have burnt everything. Besides, why does is matter to us if there was once life there? We should focus on Earth and how we need to start taking care of it, before it ends up like Venus. There was no solid point in this article that honestly pursuaded me to want to send someone to visit Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not think the author supported his claim well, he talked more about the negative parts of Venus, about how hard it would be to build something to trasport them there, and he/she never really states anything persuading the reader about why it would be good to visit Venus. Although it would be intresting to find out stuff about Venus's past, no one will ever know the absolute truth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we should keep the Electoral College but we could also change election by popular vote because there could be problems over the outcome of an Electoral College, the reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. A candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president. Voters in toss-up are more likely to pay close intention to the campaign, knowing that they are going to decide the election. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the vote cast. It also restores some weight in the political balance. There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast. The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\n\nEach candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electoral. Most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. Your states Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election. Voters can expect close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. Under the electoral college system, voters don't vote for the president, but for electors, who in turn elect the president. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. The person who picks the electors in the first place depends on the state.\n\nThe argument against the electoral college is what we might call disaster factor. If there is a tie in the electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Because each state casts only one vote. the electoral college is unfair to voters, because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, they only focus on the right races in the swing states. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote the party's nominee, but it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Elecotral college is widely regarded as an person or a thing that seems to belong to the past and not to fit in the present, it's a non- demogratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receive most popular votes the winner.\n\nSo i think we should keep electoral college because it's a process not a place. \"The founding faters established it in the constitution as compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens\" (Source 1 paragraph 1).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I patient I go eat So one speat food Like one time I went eat family And dress alike birthday So I ask daddyto tell birthday day And I wanted piece cake So want tell I said give us minute So I waited waited And finly said bring piece cake I place brun Then dad said bring piece cause happen So finly bring cake And sang happy birthday And I happy tell I found speat food ate itto I found I lifte I heard people talking speat food Then I said wait fries said yea Then I said I dont care cause I didnt eat fries They said I I fries neasty And I rolled eyes walked away But I dont I scared somebody would That I patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is no doubt that a person wants to become famous, and he or she uses many social media to be famous in their community. In this way personality is more renowned for their glamour as well as money rather than for their approaches. It also many impacts to young people. I agree with the given statement. The upcoming paragraphs will examine the why celebrities are more famous.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, personalities are more well know than for their achievements. First and foremost step is that, as we know very well, technology is making life easier, faster as well as convenient. In all over the world of people are using many social media for becoming a rich man. Sometimes, their dreams are ruined to the technology, then they spend more and more money to be become in the community. Apart from this, lazy and obese. To illustrate, some individuals want to become well known without any hard work. They give money to industry for becoming famous. These are the major reasons.\r\nProbing further, there are lots of influence on children due to this phenomenon. The first impact on children, for we know that children are future for the country. If celebrities motivate to children, and children enjoy their personal life. They will not only become independent, but also very difficult to opt their career in the following years.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I would say that every coin has two facets. In this way personalities have both impacts as well as benefits, and I think there are more effective on youngsters. Celebrities ought to be more responsible and enjoyed the achievements.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, climate change is a much- discussed problem on earth, but some people argue that we need to accept it than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this argument, because i believe that we still have time to confront with this gravest problem and minimize the human impact the earth's climate.\nThere are a variety of measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent, or at least alleviate, climate change. Governments should control of limit the carbon dioxide emissions that effect of global warming. They could invest in renewable source of energy such as wind, water and solar power. As individuals, we should also try to limit our contribution to climate change by using bicycles and public transport. Moreover, most of companies have to establish protective zones of natural scenery and electors support who propose to tackle climate change.\nOn the other hand, if we get accustomed to live linked to climate change, I believe that the consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example, I am not optimistic that we would be able to cope with minor attempts. Millions of people would be displaced by flooding, tsunami within low-lying areas. These people would lose their homes and also their jobs, and they would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other countries. Therefore, as well as increased homelessness and the unemployment rate.\nTo summarize, it would appear that we must more pay attention to climate change while I disagree with those who argue that we cannot preserve it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although the Facial Action Coding System in a classroom is usefull, it isn't very valuable. Their are pros and cons about have the facial coding system.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will tell whether the students taking tests are confused or distracted, but the state gives out tests that the students have to take because its still work their supposed to do no matter how bored or unhappy they get. In paragraph 6, it states that it could modify the lesson for the children if they're bored or confused which is helpful if its fun or freetime. The childrens facial expressions may not be how they actually feel which would make the calculations go wrong. Instead of a computer detecting if a person is sad or confused, the teacher should.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is not valuable, the teachers should detect whether the student should do a certain lesson no matter how fun or boring it is, not the computer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author trying convey sense hope Saeng new country After noting failed test probably citizenship test author wants conclude story something reasures reader It obvious test important Saeng could even look mother eye This probably bought flower mother The ending reasures reader dont wonder workout SaengSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I lot paitenits I sprined one ice skating I spins trichs everywhere one I land I fell back bone I hurt arm mom surprised I could even stand hard I fell My arm hurting bad So mom rushed help go home The next morning hurting times I go doctors get xrays took two weeks devnlop So I two weeks pain So turns I didnt break arm however I lot pain waiting resualts It took lot paients wait wait wait xraysSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is hard to deny that people like to find out about the history of the house or building they live in. In my opinion, there are lots of intersecting stories about the structures and what changed before we lived . \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the place may have undergone hundreds of periods, which became the place we live or visit. Thus, there must have some special parts left behind, and people who have been attracted by the past would start to research the related information. For instance, the president's office has been established for hundred years and also become a viewpoint that let visitors can enter to learn some knowledge. Moreover, actual visits to the house and doing some research would be more influential to the population. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, we can get most of the information on the Internet no matter news or magazines. Furthermore, a lot of writers have publicised past books, which could be borrowed from the library or browsing websites. For instance, the articles of the presidents can find not only on the internet but also in the library. What's more, many texts have been translated into different languages, so the fans won't be worried about that. \r\n\r\nIn a nutshell maintains that there are so many place’s historical events we didn't know about. Therefore, more and more people are interested in researching those interesting things, which are easy to find in recent years. Additionally, readers who gain the reward may have some impact on the life of the case they studied.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, some people think they are the most important things ever made. In some places like Colombia they barley ever use them. Some people in Colombia even say that their everyday life is maybe even easier. People actually do get more easilystressed by just owning a car. With all this evidence given it is clear that limiting cars would be an advantage.\n\nCars are in fact a big disadvantage. In source one it even goes into detail about how much money it is to just to be a car-owner. In Freiburg, Vauban's streets there are \"car-free\" car-owners spend $40,00 along with a home to have space for their cars. As results to this 70 perecent of people in Vauban are not car-owners and 57 percent sold their cars. In source one it also says that the United States previous bills were 80 percent alone have gone to the highways and another 20 percent to transport. In source two and three Paris and Colombia were having to pay for fines of $25 to $31.\n\nAs another result to all the money people are playing just to be a car-owner people get very stressed over all of this. In source three Colombia banned cars with the exception of buses and taxis. After three years of banned cars people hiked, biked, skater, took the bus or took a taxi. With the three years and still in progress people in Colombia soon began to relise that \"it's a good opportunity to take away stress\" said Carlos Arturo Plaza a local buisness man in Colombia.\n\nOf course no one could buy any cars or stress over them if we can't breath. Cars do hurt our enviroment and green houses. By the gas and pollution we put into the world by just driving our cars around isnt any safter as if we got into a car crash. Everytime we drive cars or take the bus we just hurt our planet, plants, and people a little more and more. Just by this fact alone people should know that driing cars around everywhere is a giant disadvantage.\n\nIt would be an advantage to limit car usage because cars make everyone pay large amounts of money just to be called a car-owner. From spending all this money and being fined over stuff people do believe isn't fair most people in fact do stress themself out over this which is not healthy for anyone. Another fact abput limiting cars is that it would indeed improve our saftey not one for us people but for our enviroement too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes a new technology which enables computers to decipher human emotions. There has been some debate on whether or not schools should incorporate this new technology into their computers to see how a student is feeling. I personally believe that using this new technology in the classroom is valuable for a few reasons.\n\nOne reason why I think that this technology would be valuable in schools is so that teachers can use this information to see if they way they are teaching is effective. If the software finds that a student is extremely bored or confused then, a teacher may decide to change up their teaching strategy and start doing something that will not bore students and give them all the possible chances they can get to learn. One of the creators of this software, Dr. Huang supports this belief as well by saying \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\".\n\nAnother reason why this technology would be vital in schools is to see how students are doing mentally. The stresses of school and other things often gets to students especially in high school but they usually choose not to seek help when they need it. So if this technology could tell when a student is feeling stressed or sad an adult could start getting them the help that they need to feel better. Teachers could also use this information to tell if they are giving out too much stressful and strenuous work and need to cut down on it some. The technology that has been created is pretty much tested and approved as well, \"imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad,\" is stated to show how effective the software would be in finding a students emotions.\n\nSo I definitely believe that incorporating this technology into schools would help in many different ways and is very valuable. It would help teachers alter their plans to incorporate more fun lesson plans that keep students participating but also gets the point across so students actually learn. In another way it could help school staff help students in need who may be depressed or stressed out. These are just a few ways that this technology could help out of the many possibilities that the software could be used for.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The usage of motor vehicles has been on a steady decline for the last several years. More and more people are relying on carpooling and other means of transportation. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's articles, she discusses Vauban, Germany, where cars are forbidden and how the use of cars has been on the decline. In Robert Duffer's article, he talks about Paris' issues with pollution and the ways it has been dealt with. In Andrew Selsky's article, he talks about a program in Colombia when citizens use other means of transportation other than cars. The perks of limiting car usage include less pollution, less traffic congestion, and improved safety.\n\nThe main culprit of pollution issues is car usage. In Source 2, Robert Duffer says that \"Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France...\"(Duffer 16) This is because of a tax policy that has a preference to this fuel. Diesel fuel is a lot more harmful than regular gasoline, and if many people are using this fuel pollution rates will skyrocket. Cutting down on these fuels altogether could create a less polluted environment. In addition, cars cause 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and 50 percent in specific places in the U.S(Rosenthal 5). This statistic is startling, since half of the pollution problems in the U.S are associated to cars. By using other means of transportation such as the train or even carpooling, this number can be greatly reduced to a much smaller percentage.\n\nWith more cars, more traffic congestion occurs. A sign of this congestion is evident when Rosenthal says\"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities.(Rosenthal 37)\" A lot of people are still using their own vehicles to get from point A to B, and as a result their is more money that has been given to toll bridges because of that. The encouragement of governments to suggest car-pooling services and shared rides will decrease the revenue that comes from tolls. If everybody shared a ride with a person from work or from somewhere else, there would be a great decrease in traffic congestion.\n\nFurthermore, public transportation such as the BART in the San Francisco Bay area has decreased the amount of drivers on the road. Although the rides are typically longer than driving a car from point A to B, it is a more efficient method of transportation.(Rosenthal 40) Using these alternate methods of transportation decreases the amount of cars on the road at once. With less cars on the road at once, there is more efficiency in getting where you need to go.\n\nSafety is one of the most important aspects of reducing the amount of cars. In Colombia, a program promotes the use of no cars one day per year. Many of the citizens use alternate methods of transportation such as walking and riding bikes.(Selsky 20)By promoting this, there are obviously less cars on the road and a lesser risk of people being injured by cars. With programs that promote other modes of transportation, many lives can be saved since there would be fewer cars on the road. Although many people require cars to get from place to place, the idea of lives being saved is something that shouldn't be ignored. Also, technology has aided the decline in cars. Telecommunication has helped people become connected to friends and family in a way without meeting with them face to face.(Rosenthal 35) Because of this, people dont have to travel to meet with their friends and family. This has created a domino effect; people can communicate through social media and texting which causes less cars to be on the road to visit other people and overall causes less safety isssues.\n\nIn conclusion, cars are the focal point of many issues in our society. They cause many safety issues such as traffic accidents,more traffic congestion which causes increases in revenue in tolls, and pollution issues. By reducing car usage, many of these problems can disappear, and can create a safer and healthier environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The students of today are the leaders of tomorrow. This statement directly portrays that students have the potential to grow and do outstanding things. In order for this growth, a student must be well educated in his or her school teachings, and must be confident in his or her learning. The Facial Action Coding System is a new technological device that can read a person's facial expression. Using this innovative technology, a teacher can thoroughly recognize if a student is understanding the material, and is confident in their studies. The use of this face-reading technology for students is essential towards a student's overall education, as well as personal confidence.\n\nEducation in the classroom is very valuable towards a student's growth. Due to personal experience, a student does not only need the education itself, but needs to understand the education for more knowledge. This facial-reading computer can clarify if a student is actually understanding the education. For example, Dr. Huang stated, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Therefore, if a student is struggling, \"Then it can modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Therfore, this directly shows that the technology created can increase a student's performance in school. This can allow the teacher, or the program, to help the student understand more information when a student is struggling. This innovative technology can result in positive changes in student's education and school environments.\n\nA student must be confident in what he or she is learning to advance in school. Without confidence, a student is often lost and loses hope in their personal ability. With confidence, a student is proud and is ready for any assignment given to them. This new innovative technology, the Facial Action Coding System, can determine whether a student is confident in their studies. As Dr. Huang stated, the technology studies facial expressions and muscles to determine what expression is being conveyed. Using this technology can allow the teacher, or the program, to determine if you are happy, proud, and understanding the material, or if you are angry, distraught, and unhappy with the material. This allows the teacher to provide personal help, so that therefore, they can provide understanding and you are more confident, and ready for subsequent information. This technology can help provide confidence for students in their respective studies.\n\nUsing the Facial Action Coding System in school environments would prove to be very beneficial and valuable. Through the ability of this new technology, understanding the education would greatly increase among students who need extra study tools and material. Confidence could be measued through the technology and help could be provided, so that students are better prepared mentally and physically for future assignments. This innovation could be used to guide the students of today, into leaders of tomorrowSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the era of globalization, a numerous number of inhabitants have been becoming more curious about their current accommodation. The objective of this essay is to investigate some causes of people trying to explore the past of building they live in, suggest possible solutions that residents can provide and evaluate them. \r\n\r\nOne of the major causes of having passion for exploring the history of the building has been arising with its historical value. In other words, the overwhelming majority of local organization exerts oneself to the utmost extent to share information about significant historical events via social media. For instance, government announces pictures of buildings of ancient times in order to catch individuals’ attention. Consequently, new generation, who did not live in those times, identify their homes as well as be inspired to investigate the history of local architecture. Solution for this might be researching previous possessors and the house itself, as it might have some unique differences compared to other buildings. This solution is more possible due to the fact that it is effortless to find former owners in contemporary world owing to the Internet. \r\n\r\nAnother crucial cause of keening on knowing more about the past of the place that they live in is profit that owners can make putting up the building for sale. In other quarters, businessmen want to acquire historical houses as early as possible, since its price might soar substantially year by year, being a prominent investment. As an example, houses in Western Europe where dukes used to live cost a fortune on the international market. Therefore, in recent times residents are paying more attention to homes that they are living at the moment. Learning house’s past and its maintenance could be believed as a solution. This solution is more feasible as everyone can find any data in the net. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, all aforementioned points illustrate that by learning backward of the home they live, inhabitants can make benefits from it. As far as I am concerned, the residents could certainly implement a range of measurements to research historical buildings.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Home The Blueprints lives creates distinct mood I think mood Warm caring comforting loving The author s home family oriented blood family His neighborhood family Racism norm segrigation prevailed When Narciso Rodriguez discribes sounds comforting loving He My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This brings happy light feel article coforting wellWhen Rodriguez I always grateful parents love sacrifice mood changes bit Now s admiring grateful compationate As Narciso Rodriguez discribes parents Struggle could grow nicer feel hes grateful loving The mood happy loving full compasion point This mood created Home The blueprints livesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this is a natural landform. I believe this because there is more evidence to support this idea. So in these next two-three paragraphs I am going to tell you why.\n\nThe first fact that clarify's that the face is just a landform comes in the last paragraph in the article. In this paragraph it clearly states that the picture actually shows a Martian equivlant of a butte or mesa - landforms that are common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin.\n\nAnother paragraph that supports the evidence is clear and correct is in paragaph eleven. \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This supports me evidence from the paragraph above by telling how much you could see in these pictures.\n\nIn these last few paragraphs I have given you evidence from the article that support that the Face is a natural landform. So I hope I persuaded you to believe that the Face is a natural Landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This table illustrates the distribution details of domestic income on four different categories by five EU countries.\nFirstly, Turkey had spent more money on Food & drink than others such as 36% of their income. However, Germany had least expenses to deal with this category. On Housing, UK was the one that expensed 37% of income. The amount spent by France & Germany was more and less similar but Spain spent less amount than all.\nSecondly, Germany preferred to allocate 15% of income to Clothing with highest percentage. While, the Spain & France considered almost equal amount for Clothing category with 7% and 8% respectively that was least than other countries. It was noted that Germany was much interested in Entertainment over other countries by spending 19% of money. The least amount spent on this category by Turkey. \nIn Summary, the focus of Turkey and UK to support people basic needs such as Food & Drink and Housing. Germany was the one that spent much more on Entertainment than others. Spain invested its income less than all other countries in each category.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars is not a great idea. My reasons would be if the car gets in an accedent because it was driving itself then whos fault is it- the driver or the manufacturer. Also, like it says in the text,\"they can steer,acclerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, what if your bored of waiting for their turn to drive and start texting or even fall asleep, then they wouldn't know that the car had stop driving by itself. Finally, imagine the cars are driverless and one day it doesn't work and you have to drive it yourself, how are you going to drive it if you dont know how to?\n\nMy first reason, whos fault would it be- the driver or the manufacturer. What if the company says they are not going to pay for what the driverless car did and then you had to pay for the damages. Also, what if you demand the manufactures to pay the damages and the say no , then you take them to court. the manufacturer wins then you would have an extra fee to pay.\n\nMy second reason, what if you don't know when its your turn to drive and fall asleep. Also, what if the driver start texting when to the driverless car needs human skills to drive the car and then it goes straight and hits another car or even worse another person. Finally,\n\nimagine your driving at night and the driveless car takes over and you fall asleep, how do you know that it didnt hit something, skips a red light, or even was over the speed limit.\n\nMy final reason, what if the driverless cars would stop working one day and nobody knew how to drive themselves. Frist, people that need to go to their jobs would be able to make it on time be they would have to walk or bike there. Also, people wouldn't be able to make it anywhere. Finally, the company would get suited by all the people that had a smart car.\n\nSo i think that\n\ndriverless cars area bad idea because whos fault would it be if it gets into an accident, how would you know when its your turn if you are texting or asleep, and finally what if alll driverless cars stop working one day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reading faces is something very weird that we have discoverd over time and has changed a lot on how you could approach someone or even look at paintings different now. We can also take this very far with all this new technology that we have and the Facial Action Coding Sytstem or (FACS) we will be able to read paintings and facial expressions so much better.\n\nProfessor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdamn with Dr. Huang and his colleague are high experts for computers and trying to find a better way to communicate through facial expressions. This will be very valuable to people in the future such as people that are deaf or have a little bit of not being able to hear.\n\nReading expressions is how a lot of people tell if somone is angry sad or happy. Reading expressions can help us in a lot of situatiuons and if we can take it to new levels such as looking at paintings or pictures in museums we will be able to go even further after the date that we will collect. Yes reading expressions is valuable to us and this because the more data we have the more farther we can go.\n\nThe best way that we have started this is by just everyday facial expressions. The reason people use that and why it is valuable is because the more people use facial expressios more data we will gather to make more epxressions.\n\nSo through all of this facial expressions on how far we have come or just using it in everyday life it can either make your first impression or it could help you in a sticky situation. With all the data we have collected and how much we keep collecting from Dr.Huang and his calluege we will take this to bigger heights and be able to read peoples expressions so much more and that's why this is valuable to us a person but as a society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Marcia Amidon Lsted excerpt The Mooring Mast describes obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigables dock One obstacle would faced realized designing mast would put top building docking The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof They found dirigible docked top building would add much stress building s fram Therefore first obstacle make modifications would strengthen building s framework However Lsted points paragraph The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Due rough air currents top building winds would constantly shifting making even dirigible tethered mast sway around Another issue question weight dirigables In open landing fields would weight dirigables lead weights Using extremely heavy weights hundreds people streets would acceptable In conclusion one see builders Empire State building faced many obstacles trying allow dirigables dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenges of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThe author doesn't use wording that makes him sound stuborn or demanding.\n\nThe article also brings up the idea of studying Venus gradually, instead of pushing the idea right away.\n\nAlso, the author is very honest about the conditions of Venus.\n\nAll of this taken into consideration, the author's view on the matter is compelling and well supported.\n\nThe author's suggestion is well supported throughout the article.\n\nAs the author brings up the idea of studying Venus they address the problems and give solutions for them, instead of brushing over them.\n\nThis is shown when the author talks about a technology that NASA is working on that could help. He wrote,\" By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat , and other forces.\"\n\nThe author also gives benefits that a human would be helpful for humans if they were to go and study Venus. The author states,\" Solar power would be plentiful, and radation would not exceed Earth levels.\"\n\nThe author also realizes that the conditions on Venus would not be comfortable and makes this known when he wrote,\" Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nIn conclusion the author supports their idea of studying Venus exceedingly well.\n\nThe author not only makes know the problems that everone worries about but also offers solutions for them.\n\nThey also gradually make their view know instead of pushing it right away. The article is very compelling with the amount of information given and honesty that the author has when talking on the subject.\n\nSince, the author addresses the dangers of studying Venus and tries to solve them or atleast work around them the article is overall informative and well supported.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Often people argue that watching television has an impact on their adolescent attitude , where as many think that influencing nature is due to the amount of time they use to spend on screen . However, in upcoming paragraphs both parameters are discussed in detail.\n\n\nTo begin with , Juvenile usually follow the advertisement trend being seen through the entertainment platforms. Because at this age of learning they are in habit of catching all good as well as bad manners. Therefore, it all depends upon their interest , moral values and surroundings what they are analysing as beneficial for them . For instance , youngsters prefer action , ferry tales and adventuresome videos which lead them to an imaginary world , hence , they are not able to understand the actual message behind particular video. \n\n\nOn the other hand, people believe that behaviour changes is just because of the significant time they watch TV or entertainment advertisements. Moreover , sticking to a specific type of resource creates a curiosity in their mind to watch that thing again and again . Ultimately they are addict to be in that situation . For example , infants like cartoons more than anything . In recent research by University of London , it has been observed that children are very much attracted by the audio visual ads and almost 80 percent of kids are influenced by watching the entertainment screen for long duration. \n\n\nTo recapitulate , I reckon that , irrespective of timing factor and the type of advertisement being watched, children's always attract toward that advert ,then they try to imitate them with their own way it leads to their attitude changes. Nonetheless , by telecasting informative as well as precise videos, younger ones will be entertained a lot. Apparently, there would not be any behavioural changes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is just a natural landform although, many others would disagree. Sure, there are many theories of how it could have been made by aliens but, where's all the evidence? There is no evidence for aliens having built the Face and, saying the Face is a natural landform makes much more sense.\n\nSome people have said that it has been built by aliens but NASA is just hiding the evidence. NASA would not hide such evidence even if there was any. NASA would be able to profit if they found proof of ancient or modern lifeforms that built the Face. NASA would receive a bunch of funds to go explore Mars, there would be many people lining up to go, and many more positions at mission control buildings would open up. This would give NASA a lot more oppurtunities to go explore and make money.\n\nOther people have been saying that maybe the evidence hasn't been found yet, but aliens have built the Face. Clear pictures have already been taken of Mars and of Cydonia and show no evidence of aliens living there or having lived there. Pictures haven't shown huts or any other buildings where aliens could have lived. There are also others who say, \"How does a natural land formation end up looking like that?\" Well, the features on the Face are really just shadows of higher points on the Face or holes in the Face. There are also many landforms on Earth similar to the Face such as buttes or plateaus.\n\nThis shows that aliens did not make the Face and that NASA wasn't hiding evidence about aliens building it. It also shows that there is no evidence of aliens having lived on Mars or currently living on Mars. If there were no aliens on Mars, how was the Face made by aliens?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Visiting Venus might be challenging but it is fun to Study and talk about. According to the article, \"While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely\". In this statement, it shows that Venus is a close planet to earth but we can only see it from distance because people cannot go there.\n\nVenus is a planet that is dangerous for people to go because of its climate weather. In paragrapg 2, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived that landing for more than a few hours\". This article shows that because Venus is a dangerous place for visiting and everyone that went their cannot survive it for two hours. In paragraph 3, \"A thick atmsphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challanging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". This article proves that Venus climate is very bad because their temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nAccording to NASA, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. This means if NASA wants to see how Venus looks like they need to send a jet or other flying machines\n\nthat would overcome every obsticles on its way. \"It also shows that flying thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degress Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels\". This statement clearly shows that in this climate weather, most humans would not be able to survive in 24 hours. It shows that with this weather people would be sick and people would not be able to breath because of the high temperate.\n\nIn paragraph 8, It shows that we should not give up on visiting Venus because of the climate change or because of the challenges that we have to face before we survive.\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is the closest planet to earth and it is also the secound planet from the sun but it is a very challenging place to visit or see how doing are doing. Venus has the average temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and it also have a very bad climate. According to NASA idea, Venus hostile condition would allow scientist to float above the fray, which means they can go to Venus but they would have to face some challenges like avoiding rocks and other hard materials coming their way in order to survive the journey.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming in the future. They are cars that run semi-on their own and use senors to tell them what to do. They are being tested to this day by manufactures such as Google. I am for the driverless cars because they help keep drivers safer, have some negative outcomes, and are a good idea.\n\nDriverless cars will keep drivers safe. There are lots of car crashes now-a-days with cars controlled by humans. With the driverless cars, drivers still have the ability to drive on their own, but the driverless cars will alert them when they need to drive on their own. It alerts them when their are accidents and work zones that need to be navigated through. It is stated in the artice that, \" While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The car will turn off alerts instanly only if the driver is paying attention to the road. This will help keep drivers safer.\n\nAlthough, there are some negative sides to the driverless cars I still am for them. One negative is that it doesn't fully drive on it's own. It states in the article that \"They still alert the driver to take over pulling in and out of driveways and or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" So, they are not fully driverless. Second, there could be a malfuncation to the driverless cars. If, a driverless car\n\ndoes malfunction there is no law that states whether its the manufactures will be at fault or the drivers. So, there are some negative sides to the driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are a good idea. They are safer for drivers and give drivers alerts. The alerts come from sensors that are installed all over the car. The combination of sensors used in the cars are necessary for the driverless cars to mimic the skill of humans at the wheel. They also use up less fuel then today's cars. Which is helping the evironment. Cars that have multiple good reasons like stated before are a good idea and should be developed.\n\nOverall, I am for the driverless cars. I am for them because they are safer then today's cars by sending alerts to driver's. They may have some negative sides but the negative sides help with knowing about the cars. They are also a good idea overall. They should be developed and used in the furture.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. I believe this because in the article it explains how even if the face is showing no expression the techonolgy can read how you are feeling because of the muscular actions. The techonology can recognize a the difference between a real smile and a fake smile.\n\nThis technology could be really helpful to teachers. For example, in the article it states ¨A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored (D´Alto).¨ Which means it could help the teacher come up with leason plans that the students get more involved in and catch thier attention more.\n\nIts not only helping the students education but could also help with their problems. For instants, if a student is going through a hard time and doesnt know how to tell someone and is upset but cant talk about it to somone the technology can read he or shes emotion allowing the teacher to know and try to help understand the student better. In the article it states that ¨Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication (D´Alto).¨ This technology will help find out the emmotional status of a students and maybe why they are acting theywhy they are. It could help build a conversation with the students about their emotions.\n\nThis technology that reads the emotional expressions of students is valuble in a classroom. Helps a students with emotional problems and education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has changed a lot of ways that we live today. Nowadays we have phones that can recogonize our faces by just looking at it, anyone could make any facial expression by looking at their phone and it will set it as a passcode and in which phones are protected from other people that try to get into it. Having a computer that recgonizes is an outstanding piece of work, and as younger kids get much older they will be able to learn about how technology has improved the way of living. Students in this era may have some kind interest in going into computer science or go into anything that has to do with technology.\n\nThe use of technology that can read facial expressions is remarkable. Students will be absolutely amazed of how a computer can show wheather the person is either happy, confused, sad, or angry. Students can use the facial expression software to find out how they are feeling. For instince in paragraph 6 the author states \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different (par.6).\" In this quote the author clearly explains how amazingly smart a comupter can be. Being able to develop that technology is one of a kind. The author also stated in paragraph 6, video games and video surgery technology works the same way, for example many students enjoy playing video games in their spare time, and if they are into a game they are really into, the technology and software bulit into the game will able to show the audience the characters expression inside of the game.\n\nMoving foward, the famous painting of Mona Lisa may seem like she is 100 percent smiling right? Wrong. The famous painting has had many people have conterversal arguments about her facial expression, thinking she is serious or smiling. According to the author, they explain\n\n\"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry (par.1).\" This shows how much techonlogy has improved during the past years. Having new software that can inform students the real expression on someone's face through face to face or through a picture or painting is insane. Teachers will be able to ask their studnets how people are feeling by they way they express their emotion, and show them the actual feeling behind the expression.\n\nFuthermore, students can have an idea of how the way technology works and how it is set up. Being able to work with technology that can show statistics the way people express their feelings is outstanding. In paragraph 9, the author explains how the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion explains how a person's facial muscle moves while they express the way they are feeling. It also states that it can even help produce the emotion while peforming the facial expression \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them (par.9).\"\n\nIn conclusion, studnets that have accsess to this advanced technology that can read expressions is valuable and worth keeping in the future. Not only will it amuse the students but it can also help them learn about the new improvements that are being created while they get older. Technology is becoming a much more valuable, powerful tool and helping change the way we live and how we view technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System technology is to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom which is not valuable to a classroom. In my honest opinion I believe it is very unnecessary. The first reasoning is that this technology that was developed was developed for a very different purpose than the usage of a classroom. My second reasoning is that the technology doesn't even claim to detect the boredness of the students. Others may argue that it will help students in a positive way but they are completely wrong because it will do up to nothing for them. All these reasonings combined are the main factors as to why i believe that the usage of this technology is not valuable in the school environment.\n\nMy first reasoning as to why i believe that this facial and emotional recognition technology is not valuable in a classroom setting is because the sole purpose as to why it was built was to detect emotions in an individual. It was not developed to help students make learning easier in any way. According to the article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto, \"New software has been developed that improves the accuracy in percieving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries.\" This is evidence that helps support my claim because it is a statement that explains the purpose of this new technology which is only for the detection of emotions in the face of humans and not to help young students to advance their school life. Also, according to the article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto, \"By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutra face (showing no emotions).\" This statement/quote is evidence of my claim because again it states the true purpose of this technology and what it is truly used for; not once in that statement had it discussed how it would help students better their education.\n\nMy second reasoning as to why i believe this technology is not best fit for the school environment is because the technology is used to only detect 6 emotions and using it to help teachers combat \"boredom\" within their student is not one of them. The article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto states, \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions-hapiness,surprise,disgust,fear and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" This is evidence because the quote clearly states that the emotions that are detectable are not inclusive to boredome if the technology can't detect boredom\n\nor confusion then how can it help with the students. The article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto also states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a students is becoming confusesd or bored,' Doctor Huang predicts.\" This is evidence of my claim/reasoning because this statement by the creater of this technology even says it COULD happen which leads us to infer that it probably would not happen anytime soon, meaning that although this technology is smart it still may not be able to help students out.\n\nOthers may argue that the usage of this Facial Action Code System will help students positively in the classroom but they are completely wrong. This system may not even help them at all. According to the article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto, \"'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,' notes Dr.Huang 'So computers need to understand that, too.'\"\n\nThis is evidence as to why those that argue it is a positive effect is wrong because the inventer of this technology basically stated the technology has more to understand (such as the emotional communications of humans), meaning that this technology may not fully comprehend all of the emotions of not just humans but students if this technology was to be placed in the classroom settings. Also according to the article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' by Nick D'Alto, \"'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" This is evidence because it states what it could do for a students which is adding more cartoon expresions\n\nand thats basically about it. It doesn' really help out a students when theyre confused just because there are more animated cartoons.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that the Facial Action Coding System is not a valuable usage in a classrrom of students. First, the technology was built for asole purpose of detecting facial emotions and not to help students in any way but add cartoons. Second, the technology is not advanced enough to even detect emotions of boredom in students , it can only detect six emotions in which bored is not one. Others may argue that it will positively impact the students but they are completely wrong because it literally does nothing for them. Finally, in my most honest opinion this technology is mainly useless in a classroom which is why it is clearly not valuable in a classroom environment that includes students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are aware of the driverless car in development.People are eather for or against the driveless car.There is both psotive and negative things about the drivethies car.But i believe that creating the car is a postive thing because it is imporant to creat new technolgoy and not live in the past,the car does not make human errors,and it still allows the driver to have control of the car at anytime.\n\nPeople have alwasy dreams of a car that would drive itself. The driverless car has filled the entertanment world.The dream of the car has finally came true.But people think it dangerious and should not be tester,but the world cant live in the past.It is important to improve the technogly we have today.Not allowing the car is just forcing the world to live in that past.THe driverless car still is not fully driveless and it has some issues,but if states are banning test the car it is just forceing people to live in the past.\n\nMajorty of the the car accedents acurre becuase of human error.But some are stil caused by car errors too.The driverless car of filed cameras and sensors to make drive as save as possible.Driveless car are able to see and sensor thing that human is not able to see.People get very distacted easly while driving,texting while driving has been a huge issue.Many accedents are caused\n\nby not paying attenction.The smart car is on full alert at all time and is able to stop if there is an object in the way.\n\nDriveless car is still not fully driverless.The driver stil need to able to navigate through accedents and road constuction.The driver is still able to be incontrol at anytime needed.Since the driverless car is not able to navigate through troubled areas, people believe that is not fit for public use.But this just allows humans to stay focused and get distracted.The car is able to allert the driver if the diver need to take over.\n\nThere is alot of ups and downs to the driveless car,but people are test and designing cars that are more safe.Many car today are already semi selfdriving.Tesla is releaseing a car in 2016 that is able to go in autopilot.cars every year are becoming more and more driverless,it just a matter of time until it is fully driverless.The driverless car is postive becuase it is important not to live in the past,it allows for no human error,and it allowed the driver to be inconrtrol at anytime needed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The lack of accommodation has become a serious urban social issue in many metropolitan areas of the world. It has been argued that only the leaders of the countries can tackle this problem. In my opinion, without the supporting from other parties, the government could not cope well with the housing shortage.\nIt cannot be denied that country management system plays a vital role in many of our lives, but nevertheless government intervention would hamper the private sector. For instance, the supply of urban spaces is constrained by locally controlled land use plans that make the property developers difficult to build housing in the places where it is most highly valued—in dense urban settings. Although, there’s a growing demand for urban living. Given its role in attracting public consumption and accelerating economic development, the real estate industry should be at the mercy of the market, rather than the government.\nAnother drawback of state control over the housing market is that it could pose a huge burden upon the state. The government has borne the funding for various affordable public housing programs, and concern has arisen because of the poor condition of the surrounding environment, traffic connectivity and numerous other social and service facilities like schools, markets, or hospitals. For example, most of social flats are outside the expensive centre of Ho Chi Minh, the social housing projects may boast affordable price tags even to low-income groups, but ultimately the long commute between home and work rendered this to become a disadvantage. Consequently, the programme of building a large amount of public housing will probably heavily burden a country.\nTo conclude, I believe that governments play an important role in meeting basic housing demands of individuals, but the joint effort of both government and private sector is required.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So you think the face on Mars was created by ailens? Well, I'm here to tell you that there is no way to tell that the face on Mars was created by ailens. Science shows that the only possible explaination is that it is simply a natural landform, because, one, it's what scientists figured, two, they have photographic evidence there is no way ailens could've made it, and three, they had the highest resolution on the camera, so you would've seen if something else was in there.\n\nTwenty five years ago, when scientests were roaming around on Mars with their \"Viking 1\" spacecraft, circling the planet, taking phtos of possible landing sites for the other ship, \"Viking 2\" they spotted a shadowy landform that looked like a human face. Obviously, the NASA researchers were stunned to see the giant face looking back at them. They were extremely excited to find the landform, but the sensation was shortly-lived when scientests came to the conclusion that it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyer flew over Cydonia for the first time. They used a Mars Orbiter Camera team to snap a picture. It was ten times shaper than the origional photos by the viking. It showed clearly that it was indeed, a natural landform.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, NASA was finally able to get an absolutely clear, high definition picture of the landform. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" said one of the researchers.\n\nSo, in conclusion, there is no possible way ailens or some other form of life out there could've made the face on Mars. It's simply a natural landform. Nothing else to it, shown by the evidence I've just given and proven.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People want to reveal unwanted history out of curiosity in this modern era. A lot of people are making an effort to find out the history of where they reside. This essay will discuss the reasons for and method of the research. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, people have felt comforted in the residences where they are residing. This mentality has developed since the very beginning of civilization. For example, the ancient Americans lived in the cave. Over a long period, these caves were built by cutting hill rocks. It was a tremendous activity compared to what had happened before. This fascination was built by them and continues. The majority of the community wants to stay in their residence because they feel comfortable and safe. Another thing is that at that time, people were researching the future development of houses. Many scientists are giving their whole skills to developing housing facilities, which will be more convenient for surviving.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist desert tired also running water hes getting dehydratedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It affect cyclest condition determines pace even fast could travelSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals consider climatic changes detrimental to their business; however, others consider it as an opportunity to grow. In my opinion, climate change creates new work opportunities. Both the viewpoints are discussed in the essay.\r\n\r\nClimate variation can certainly hurt businesses. For example, extreme weather conditions affect crops. A poor harvest will make farmers poorer and affect rural economies. When farmers do not have money to spend, the demand for products will decrease. Obviously, this is detrimental for all trade. Likewise, extreme rainfall or flooding may force stores to stay closed for days on end. All of these scenarios are harmful to businesses.\r\n\r\nConversely, for many companies, the changing weather conditions are an affirmative way to grow. This is because climatic changes create new demands and as the demands are dynamic, the organisations can grab the opportunity to provide whatever is needed. For example, in 2019, Delhi was covered with smog in the month of October and according to the survey conducted by the Economic Times, the sale of air-purifiers and anti-pollution masks increased by almost 100%. Likewise, poor rainfall increases the demand for rainwater harvesting systems. In the same way, hotter summers provide manufactures a great opportunity to sell more fans and air conditioners. These examples clearly prove that if businesses are capable of catering to the changing needs of society in the wake of climate modification, they can reap rich dividends.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although many people consider climate transformation as bad for their trade, in my opinion,it is possible to gain huge monetary benefits from such changes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries, there is a proliferation of people are gaining momentum in searching for the past story of the house or building they stay in. This essay will explain why and how people doing so.\r\n\r\nTo start with the first reason, people want to know about the quality and safety of their homes. For example: people will find details for the property quality, especially the construction builder, materials used to build the house and also the architecture structural in order to avoid deleterious consequences in the future such as building collapse. The second reason is to cast about the Chinese geomancy of the house location and direction. For instance, people want to live in a place that suits them and they believe that the house can give them a better fortune if it has a finer position. Last but not least, the third reason is knowing the legacy of the ownership status, so as to prevent the occurrence of unnecessary lawsuit problems.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are ways that people are able to access the history of their living place. One of the common ways is browsing on the internet, this is a vital tool to explore all relevant information about the premise. Some people may be able to request from their local council or even ask the neighbours living in the neighbourhood.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is commonly believed that knowing the place you stay is much needed because I personally will be hunting what is the past history of my house and let myself living peacefully in my own shelter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist For example hot outside would need water normal Also raining would drive careful That setting would affect cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story outside Yosemite outside riding bike She around hills water hot land You know around hills says I maneuvered hill You also know starts around good water When I tried drop two flavor battery acid shows water bad Also land hot says two hundred degrees Yosemite starts bad ends learning stick never give Yosemites biggest problem lack water due fact hot outside water bad tasting like battery acidSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the real world of today, many people crave for the technologies of the future and one of those technologies are driverless cars. Humans have always looked to the future where cars would one day be able save us in more accidents. We also want cars to use less fuel and could be able to drive us anywhere. However, we never truly look on at what it takes to build a driverless car, until we do. However, not only do driverless cars take time to make, once driverless cars are complete, there is more responsiblity that comes with the product. Driverless cars a great thing for our future because the cars can save us in moments where humans can fail, each of them will use less fuel, and drive us anywhere.\n\nEven today, there are driverless cars andregular cars present the ability so prevent accidents to some extent. In each of today's cars, there are sensors and other gadgets that send information to the car's computer. Processing this information, cars can apply brakes to certain tires and cut the engine in faster time than humans could, if the time ever came up for it. One such car, Google's modified Toyota Prius runs such sensors, video cameras, and gps recievers to run driverless car software.\n\nAnother reason, driverless cars will help the gas prices lower all around the world. Gas prices constantly rise as more demand for it arises and the supply of it lowers. The driverless cars of the future will need as less as half the amount of fuel or lower. With cars needing less fuel, the prices will lower due to it being affordable to give to everyone. And with more fuel, cars can travel farther and to more places.\n\nWith this in mind, the driverless cars of the future will drive humans to any place needed. Some may think it impossible, but Google cofounder Sergey Brin belives otherwise. He believes the cars in the future could be used as a public transportation system, with fleets of driverless cars as public-transport taxis. He believes it can be great.\n\nHowever, for a driveless car to be the greatest it can be, it first has to be driverless. The driverless cars that are currently existing today cannot claim the title of driverless. Each car will drive to the destination as required but will alert the human to stay awake and alert such that one can take over the car when nearing accidents or work zones. So that raises the question, how can we make this car truly driverless?\n\nThe technology and cars of today are not driverless yet but in time they could be. These future cars will drive humans to any destination without human assistance. Each car will run on less fuel, effectively lowering gas prices. And with its software, the car and the human will witness less accidents. Due to special software, the cars will prevent accidents,burn less fuel, and drive to any destination.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoir happy warm The memoir happy warm describes small home happy like paragraph says always filled air scent music life love This shows love fills air happy That author creates moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nElections are up coming soon and before we all even know it, it's going to be election day. As we all know, there is this process called The Electoral College that was established in the Constitution by our founding fathers. To be honest, I think it is time for a change. If you really think about it, The Electoral College isn't really in favor of the people anymore. Here's what i think should happen, instead of on election day when we vote for just the President and just getting the senates that ran for the Presidental candidate, I think we should have two different votings: one for the President and one for the senates, here's why:\n\nFirst, when election day comes around and we think we are voting for the president, we aren't, but instead voting for a big group of slate electors where they vote for the president. For example, if you lived in Washington and you wanted to vote for [John] Doe, for instance, you would be voting for a slate of about 35 electors pledged to that President. Then the slate of electors vote for the presdient, not the people, and I dont think everyone knows that. Most of the people that know about have said that The Electoral College is a \"diaster factor\" while the government says that \"the American people should consider themselves lucky\" WRONG!!!!!! The American people technically can't even vote for their own president becuase \"it's against the Constitution\" there needs to be a change. Like allowing some people who go in to vote to either: vote for a slate of electors who elect the President or just vote for the president themselves. That way the people feel like their vote actually does count.\n\nThank you State Senator for giving me some of your time so you can read my letter to you about The Electoral College. I hope you take my idea under consideration.\n\nThanks again,\n\nSincerely,\nPROPER_NAME (student at SCHOOL_NAME)SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist rough time The elements It dry hot water In text says The water bottles contained tantalizing sips This shows hardly water would make thirster CAPS weeds crossed path ridiculously large snake It obviously quote maker visualize desert colorado The man one sight building car structure kind He saving energy water He starting go little crazy The hills killer text says one long crippling hill This show rough conditions told us begining cyclist The biker hell rough time setting definity effectsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called the \"Facial Coding Sytem\"is the best technology ever. It has a veriety of features like the 3-D model,the recognizition emotion face,annd the math homework app .\n\nThe 3-D model is one way why people should choose this technology because if you have a 3-D model computer then everything looks big and clear. This proves that now and days people like to watch thing and look at things big and clear. So that is why you should take this technology.\n\nThe recognize emotion is another reason why this is a nice technology. For example,this shows how you feel or the way you expressions look. The author says,\"Using video imagery,the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in real life or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\"This proves that the facial emotion can work on anything whether is a person or a picture of someone.\n\nThe math homework is the last reason why you should buy this technology. In fact this is also a part of the emotion senser like whether if you feel like doing it or not. For examle,in the text it says,\"Hold on! Can we actually calculate emotions-like mathwork.\"This proves that the technology can tell if we want to do something or not. Emotion in the new technology can really determine a person.\n\nIn conclusion,The emotion,homework and 3-D computer are the best features to have on a technology and people would love it too if they had want to get one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood perspective would calm cozy sentimental feeling When author would talk parents passed many feelings much culture made think I I It gave warm fuzzy feeling cooking music family I relate It gave feeling perseverance stop striving believe It made feel strong inspired mother father s dedication familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles engineers faced Of Any builder You think About high high wind conditions sturdiness frame And payroll engineers Although Al Smith run Problems rethink Mooring Mast agood idea Putting An Thousand foot Dangling Building feet air Al Smith landmark US But Shouldnt put nonusable Mooring Mast At topSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People seem to think that the face found on the planet Mars was created by creatures that we have not yet seen. There is no factual proof that Aliens even exist, so how can they create things on the big red planet? Tabloids and false internet articles give people ideas that maybe the government is lying about aliens, and other strange things that happen that nobody really talks about.\n\nPeople are guilable creatures, and believe the things that are told, even if it's rediculous! As a scientist who got their degree at Yale, and works as the head of their department at NASA, nobody will believe me when I say that this mound was not built by anyone, or anything. People ask me how i know that I am correct,and to answer that question I say that I know what it is. NASA has not been hiding top secret information from anyone, and we are very puublic about what it is. It is a mesa, young people. They are common landforms, that they even occur on Earth. They are found in America, to the west of the country.\n\nI wanted to know if anyone had any mor ewuestions for me. People emailed me questions from all ver the country, and other countries as well. A middle aged man wrote me from Texas last week, asking if i had ever seen some of the landforms, like a mesa or butte. The answer is yes, during the summer about 5 years ago, everyone on this case took a trip there to observe, and take notes what mechanisms lived there. A teenager from California asked if i have ever had any kind of suspicians about matrians creating the face. Like always I said no, because while there is plenty of data to support a mesa, there is almost no actual scientific proof of anyone seeing a martian.\n\nScience changes over periods of time as technology and people progress. I feel that we will keep doing research over this face, but that won't change. Out of the all of the years that I have been trying to work with my team and put the peices together over and over again to make sure that we are right, I can't see any data changing. So do not be another guilable human who listens to tabloids and false internet articles and rumors. Listen to the facts of NASA scientists, you can trust us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the phenomenon of education became a topic of debate among individuals. While many nations prioritize education of young people, some argue that governments should spend more budget to educate adults who are illiterate. I completely agree with this statement in favour of providing education for illiterate adults as this development could bring numerous benefits to the society.\n\nTo begin with, it is irrefutable that being unable to read and write causes numerous issues to adults and this make their living in a society more stressful. To elaborate, illiterate adults are also facing unemployment due to lack of basic education which most of the hiring companies are looking forward. Because of joblessness, adults experience financial crisis and issues like poverty and homelessness. Indeed, it is a serious social issue and this must not be overlooked by governments. In order to curb this matter, Governments must take efforts to educate adults who lack basic education. This development not only beneficial to improve the illiterate person’s overall wellbeing, but in the long term, variety of social concerns of a nation can also be tackled.\n\nAnother factor to consider is that a nation’s economic strength is lies on its adult population. For example, If a nation’s adults population are increasingly illiterate, that nation will witness a dramatic decline in its social, economic, political and economic development. Precisely, adult population is majorly contributing to the workforce of a country, thus, if adults not being able to find job due to their illiteracy, this will affect negatively for a nation’s economic growth. In fact, education is the basis for everything, without education, nothing can be achieved. Whilst some nation only prioritises their young people to educate, they are significantly neglecting their adult population who are illiterate. This trend is certainly detrimental to a nation’s overall development.\n\nTo conclude, undoubtedly, in order to tackle social issues like poverty and unemployment, it is more than necessary to educate adults who are illiterate. Therefore, Governments ought to spend more money for the education of illiterates, as it will bring numerous benefits to a country’s development.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \" The Challenge of Explorinng Venus \", the author belives that we should explore venus even if there are hazards. we should explore venus because it is the only planet that is a like twin,that we will gain insight on the planet,and that human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimadating endavors.\n\nvenus is one of planetary neighbors meanig that it is one of the closest planets to earth. Scientest often call venus our twin. In paragraph four,sentence 3 scientes also say that, \" Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" With this being said they could moniter venus and get it running like how it use to be if we can we can get up there and be there long enough. If we are able to do that Scientest could probaly move life over to Venus.\n\nIf insight is gained over Venus we could create new life or even move life over to Venus. With the right technology we could create a habitat that we can live on. If we did acomplish thus our life could change forever. We could reduce the amount of poultion, control the population, and if ever needed we could move to a diffrent planet. With posibiltes like this we could change our life and how we would live forever. This could embark ideads of us going to mars and trying the same thing.\n\nIf we did this it could show that we can make other planets an enviorment that we could live on. Such as mars and other palnets. Pepole would be inspired to colonize another planet. Mars also as earth like features you can grow props there and do many other things. With great minds on the project anything is posible.\n\nin conclusion, with the thought of exploreing venus because it is the only planet that is a like twin,that we will gain insight on the planet,and that human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimadating endavors. Are all valid points because if all these things are posible than anything is posible within our planet and with outher planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic indicates the international sports events could bring beneficial for a country. There are several aspects to approve as below:\nFirstly, international sports events could increase economical income and stimulate domestic consumption. An international sports event usually attracts a lot of audiences and tourists come to host country during the event is holding. A lot of people produce tremendous consumptions which include match tickets, transportation fees , accommodation and shopping costs. Moreover, international sports events will attract many sponsors, both oversea and domestic. They might find the new financial opportunity to extend their further investments in host country. For example, 2018 FIFA World Cup held in Russia where attracted many thousands of tourists flooded into the country and created a huge sum profits.\nSecondly, international sports events help to develop country's infrustructures and facilities. For example, in order to hold the 2008 BeiJing Olympic Game China built the nation stadium , nation swimming center and Olympic community so on. Furthermore, the first high speed train started to shuttle from Bei Jing to Tian Jin. In next two decades , more and more high speed trains shuttle in China. Thirdly, an international sports event will efficiently encourage the citizens devoted more passions and enthusiasms to participate in it. For example, Bei Jing is the host city to held the 2022 Winter Olympic Game, which encourage a lot of Chinese to learn and participate these winter sports, like snowboard, skating. Fourth, there is an opportunity to perform various cultures and histories of country to all visitors. Meanwhile, international sports events successfully held in a country that will enhance its international influence and the reputation in international stage.\nGenerally speaking, international sports events could bring various beneficial development, not only for country but also for individuals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus exploration will be very useful and effecient planetary location for space travel. Despite the dangers of this planet, our technology today can get through the ragging tempetures and the hot enviorment. Not enough for human exploration just yet, but in the future if NASA keeps finding more and more about this planet, then we will soon be able to have human exploration visits.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to being similar to Earth. In our future Venus could be our nearest option for space travel. This planet has very similar features to our planet. Mountians, craters, and valleys are found on Venus. Venus may also have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to the ones on Earth. The danger of exploring this planet is the thing that will be most difficult to get by. Having temperatures over 800 for the average is scary and could instantly melt any of probes or drones we send. Surrounding Venus is a 97 perecnt carbon dioxide blanket. An idea was to have floating vehicles 30 miles in the air to stay away from the harsh enviroments on the ground. The temperature would still be at 170 degrees Fahrenhiet, but it is better then the ragging 800 on the ground. Floating vehicles might be an amzijng idea for exploring Venus without being harmed.\n\nYet the harsh enviorments, exploring Venus will be very useful and a efficent planetary source. Having Venus as a secondary option for space travel will be very helpful in the future. NASA should continue their search and exploration of Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "H\n\nello fellow citezens , we are here to inform you about limit car usage. First driving to much can cause harm to the population . Second Germaney continue their lives with out cars . Last but not least driving to much can cause smog .\n\nFirst let me say every minute of this day a type of car or truck is causuing damage to the wolrd with its gas . For example every morning I drive to school I see gas coming out from the exghust pipe from multiple cars . Every time a car turns on there a chance the world breaks down . Plants and tree dies slowly .\n\nNext let me tell you about Germany how they live everyday with out usuing cars . For example , Seventy percent of the Vauban's family does not own a car . 57 percent sell their cars to move to a new area . How do they live or get to their destinantion ? Well let me tell you they either walk or ride bikes there . There are even commercial about tranpostation . They say it low emmisions and imprives safety .\n\nLast but not least cars can cause smog . For example , In Bogota , Colombia people either hike , bike , skate , or even took buses to work . Colombia had bannded cars for the tird year . With only buses and taxis that were permitted only . The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog .\n\nViolaters would face a twenty-five dollars fine.\n\nTo wrap it up limit car usage can cause harm and effect the world . First driving to much can cause harm to the population . Second Germaney continue their lives with out cars . Last but not least driving to much can cause smog .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The industrial era has improved human's life on a new level, but at the same time, damaged the Earth at an alarming rate. The more resources are exploited, the more vulnerable the ecosphere is. This essay seeks to analyze the roots of the matter and give out a solution.\n\nTo begin with, every activity of the world industrial system functions solely based on natural resources. From the small food packaging to the gigantic plane, it was these production enterprises that utilize the majority of the raw supplies. For this reason, when the market needs are on the rise, more materials will be used and thereby, leading to resources exhaustion. Moreover, the production procedures discharge emissions and waste into the environment, resulting in air, water and soil pollution. Therefore, the increase in the demand for goods leads to incessant exploitation and exposure, which subsequently debilitate the ecosystem.\n\nUnder the circumstances that the world industry relies heavily on the environment and is constantly exploiting the resources, it is unfeasible to thoroughly resolve the problem within a near-sighted future. However, applying some methods can help improve the situation. For example, many businesses are encouraged to substitute renewable energy, such as electricity, hydro, or wind, for limited fuels. Many world-leading corporations like Tesla has been pioneering in producing electric cars instead of conventional gasoline-based vehicles, which has helped to reduce harmful emission. Besides using engine transportation, people are also incited to travel on foot or by bicycles as it also contributes to improving the situation.\n\nIn conclusion, by taking advantage of natural resources and releasing pollutants to serve for producing goods, humans are imposing burdens on the Earth. Cutting down the polluted discharges is a temporary solution, and to absolutely solve the problem requires more time and effort.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The current education system consists students, a teacher and a classroom. Many believe, that this system may not exist in future. The current idea of a teacher giving lectures to many student in a classroom may become obsolete. First of all we must understand the current education system we are talking about and why this system may face extinction. I do agree that we will see a lots of changes in education system in near future. However, I do not think that the entire system will be replaced by a new one. \nBy the year 2050, there will be lots of inclusion in the field of technology. Due to these new inventions, our life will be easier. Technological advancement will also affect our education system. We may see digital classrooms in future, where physical presence of a teacher is no longer required. Instead of attending a lecture in a classroom, students can also study from home in front of their computers. In my opinion, future education system will not be location dependent. Nonetheless, the key members like students and teacher will be there. \nIn conclusion, I think there will be a lots of changes in education system by the year 2050. I think those changes will bring a lot of positive aspects in the field of education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "its stupid for kids rhese days to have technology at school it doiesnt help out at all this generation is straight up lazy we took away cursive we took away books and the technology is reading for us next thing you know we are gong to have robot teachers its stupid we need to go back to what it use to be just straight up papaer and textbooks. yeah sometimes its fun to have technology everyone does but not in school look how these kids are growing uo the only thing they do is mess around and play games in class and dont do there homework and dont pay attention or getting in trouble and its ridiculous. the worse thing of all about having technology at schol is cyber bullying i mean thats easy to do download an app change your name wps address and they wont know who it is and people will say mean things to the other student might making kids comit suicide or shot up te school we need to get rid of technology in school its doing no on good besides the teachers because they're lazy and just want to type a number in the computer and put it in the grade book i mean thats my opinin ik alot of people dont agree with me but schools all around the united states of america needs to get rid of these ipads and chromebooks and macbooks for the schools and even the elementreys have them thats just a new lazy generation coming and thats how its going to be no morw jobs for the new generation well by then you will be able to work from home but still technology is bad for schools in this societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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