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"content": "The story like mine reasons First ended story make readers think happen part two Secondly make part two That way ended story likeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With the topic of driverless cars, one may come to believe that they are essentially a good thing. However, others may see them as a menace to society. My standing with the topic favors the idea of them being a menace. Driverless cars have some good qualities, but the overall usage if them is unfavorable. These cars seem as though they will be inconvienent to society.\n\nDriverless cars, even with their new installations, are dangerous. Manufactures and engineers if these car are doing their best to make them as safe as possible, but there is still a benefit of doubt. The main issue seen with driverless cars is that it is a technological type of invention. With technology, there is still a possibility that it will have some sort of mishap and cause damage to either the driver or a bystander. In paragraph seven, it states that these cars can steer, accelerate and brake with ease.However,the fact that it needs the drive to manually access control when there is traffic and other things is a problem. Seeing as the car can function well without the driver may cause the driver to use their phone and while they are distracted, the car may switch to needing the driver's attention and control. During this scenario, it is more than likely that an accident will occur.\n\nAlthough there are many downsides to driverless cars, there is still good use for the technology installed in them. The usage of rearview cameras help drivers with being aware of unforeseen objects that may enter their blind spot. The invention of sensors to brake each individual wheelwould be a bonus to the driver. These would allow for the driver to gain less momentum during a skid. Also, the concept of having these cars use less gas than regular cars is beneficial to the driver. It would allow them to save a lot more money on gas and be able to go places without worrying as much about the estimated gas cost to get there.\n\nUnfortunately, the driverless cars need the approval of the driver,but the state as well. Now, many states have deemed testing computer- driven cars illegal. This does more good than harm for the roads of the state. If states were to deem driverless car legal in there state, the traffic and state laws would have to be changed for the occasion. The state would have to create laws covering the issue of blame in terms of anaccident, as mentioned in paragraph nine. Also, the issue with the cars not being fully driverless causes the purpose to be defeated. The name for the type of car and its functions do not coincide with one another.\n\nAs a result, driverless cars are not meant to be created. They would cause too much damage to the roads and roads would be unsafe. These cars are essentially figments of a dream that cannot be realized without the cost of lives. Many would deem them as a unique feature that would set America different from the rest of the world. On the other hand, others are not willing to make them a reality at the cost of inoccent lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "popular hobbies rather than their individual activities.Hobbies and are different for everyone; this is the human nature,. The current generations are very much in the latest trend which makes them happy and also them to make more money. For example, cricket is the most famous game in , children and playing it whenever they have free time in their daily life. This makes them become a star in this game when they reach a certain age in their life. In addition, this popularity will help them to make lots of money in their life. , there are many .Those aiming to spend more time to make money rather than on their own interests. However, some of them are not about the popular hobbies and interests. For instance, drinking alcohol is one of the popular hobbies low income and .In conclusion, spending more time popular hobbies and interests really depends on their . It may to become a star in their life or time with many friends.Avoid statements such as ‘This essay will explain the reason’, your essay should present a point of view including supporting information and examples. The essay needs to be easy to follow, and in addition your English should be accurate and appropriate.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, the increasing population has caused trouble in purchasing lands. On the one hand, society argues the fact that authorities should make remedy actions to fix the issue of inadequate residences. However, on other hand, people themselves should solve this problem. I partially agree with the given statement, and I will provide the substantiated argument in upcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nTo commence, the government should restrict the allocation of land. To put it in another way, the management should apply more taxes to real estate so that they limit the making of houses. Moreover, a focus on vertical housing would help to resolve the matter of even distribution of homes. As an illustration, the apartments, and townhouses in developed cities like Singapore, are made in a vertical manner in limited areas. Furthermore, authorities should apply more taxes on bungalows and large houses. Therefore, people would purchase less of them. As an example, the Canadian ministry restricts the purchase of houses for two years to resolve the problem of the housing shortage. \r\n\r\nOn a contrary, people could also solve this problem by themselves. To simplify, they should prefer living in the suburbs and outskirts of towns instead of living in bigger cities. The community can find more job opportunities like farming in villages to earn their livelihood. This would help in bringing more employment to the country and in this manner, society could also develop the villages. The fresh air of villages would also make people more healthy and less stressed. Therefore, it would reduce crimes in society. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although people move to metropolitan cities in search of better opportunities, they still face residential issues. Therefore, it is the responsibility of both the law and the community to resolve the issue by encouraging people to live in vertical housing and villages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars would be great. But in all reality how safe are they? Are they going to be expensive? Should we trust these cars with our lives? There are a lot of questions that could be asked about these cars. But can they all be proven? Well people will soon come to find out.\n\nHow safe are these cars? They are safe until they have a technology mishap or faailure. You can not always trust technology. Any question of these cars could be asked. But what if they can't be proven? For instance if your car doesn't warn you of danger, road construction, or any detours and you're asleep. But your car didn't warn you. How's that your fault? That's the thing they will tell you that you were \"driving\" so it was your fault.\n\nThese cars may not be safe. They may not even be cheap. Do i think driverless cars are a good idea? No i think they are a terrible idea. I'm sure many people would agree. There are enough accidents as there is. But if a car is going to fail there's another. And it may not be your fault. But you were the one driving.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The new trimester started leadership second period With idea responsibilities leadership student I skeptical taking class After days taking class I began enjoy After week teacher announced would stage helping set organize upcoming assembly I never done anything sort I somewhat excited Days went entire class practiced setting assembly running places moving props stacking chairs The day assembly finally arrived time show The students poured seats scurried around behind curtains Everything set perfectly The curtains rose assembly began My peers I stood behind stage watching assembly unfold The school band preformed long boring set songs curtains fell entire leadership class ran stage picked stacked chairs band used After ran get bleachers dragged front stage The choir going preform retreated back behind curtains The choir sang songs watched proceeded set last song students moved around leaving large open spot top row With choirs last song preformed simple swaying dance go along song My leadership class friends I noticed large open spot choir thought would hilarious one us went pretended sing dance However none us enough courage The choir finished song dance first assembly We cleaned got ready second assembly It time second assembly everything going preformed The students came sat seats band played stacked chairs moved bleachers It time choir come sing The thought funny would go bleachers dance came upon us Finally convinced one classmates She ran choir room put choir robe put hair funny bun fixed forehead stepped onto bleachers She took open spot top row The song began well dance She broke random dancing way matching dancing choir members It obvious belong The crowd soon began realize going Laughter broke seats soon laughter broke behind stage well I laughing like I never laughed It painful tears pouring face I gasping air Running breath bracing deep inhale right moment song dead silent pause The auditorium went completely silent I inhaled I took air body managed let extremely loud embarrassing screeching noise People behind curtain stared I knew heard throughout auditorium Embarrassed I laughed even harder causing pain tears lack oxygen The song ended followed end laughter end assembly The girl stepped bleachers scrambled building hiding robe along way We laughed way next period listening students hallway talking Giggles filled school hours Talk actually happened happened everyone s minds except The second period leadership students knew exactly happened We pleasure telling everyone school dirty little details The following days however teachers also got word Not thinking actions way would soon face consequences We told irresponsible childlike We plethora possible punishments school suspension school referral apology choir class loss privilege leadership After school board talked parents gave event serious consideration got one day school apologizing entire choir class The school board realized joke letting us easier could In eyes prank well worth For weeks end every night I would go bed laughing leadership assemblySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although some people argue that the today's youth doesn't pay attention to the valuable advice of their parents. Nowadays, education system plays a prominent role in making and teaching students the importance of independence. I will illustrate my reasons for disagreement for this statement in the following paragraphs.\n\nFirstly, in today's globalized world,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion? I think the technology computers that reads students emotional expressions is valuable because it describes your mood depending on how you feel. In the text it states, if you smile when a web ad appears on your sreen, a similar ad might follow. If you frown, the next ad will be different. This is showing how the Facial Action Coding System works on different emotions. By the way, did making a happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy? According to the text it states, Facial feedback theory of emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. This is explaining how the Facial Action Coding System proccess works with your facial muscles and it produces the type emotions or mood your in. \"Putting on a haapy face\" actually works. According to the text it states, The Facial Action Coding System indicates the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. This is explaing that if you try to over do your smile or over do a emotion it can tell if your not being serious or not. This is why i think the Facial Action Coding System is valuable for students because its good experience for different emotions your in gives you feedback on how you feel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting the usage of your vehicle comes with many advantages to not only yourself but the enviornment as well. If you were to put the vehicles away and walk or bike to school or work, you would burn a lot of calories. Not only would you help yourself in that way but you would help the enviorment in many different ways. It might take more time to do stuff without a vehicle but it will help you more in the long run. There are limitless advantages to using other forms of transportation.\n\nWalking or biking to school would take longer and it would take more of your time. But while doing this, you not only burn many calories but you get yourself in better shape. Continuesly doing this for a month or so would get you in top shape, making it easy for you to get to your location within the same amount of time as a vehicle. Doing this will help your body both mentally and physically while also giving your wallet a break on gas money. What's there not to love about getting in shape and saving money at the same time.\n\nWhile saving money on gas, you would save the enviornment from the gas. Vehicles cause a lot of pollution and can even build a layer of smog over cities. These layers of smog get stuck in the air, making the area it's around warmer. The amount of pollution within the world is absurd, and if everyone were to stop using vehicles that would cut down the total pollution by a large portion. Lower air pollution is also shown to take away stress, and lowering the use of your vehicle would also get rid of the stress of other drivers.\n\nThe only negative thing about cutting down the use of vehicles would be the time it takes to get to your desired location. Riding a bike may take twenty minutes more, but think of all of the benefits in the long run. You lose twenty minutes from having to ride your bike, but you get to enjoy the experience of riding the bike and your body enjoys the benefits from riding the bike. The world is suffering from all of the pollution, and you losing twenty minutes to a simple bike ride would help the world last longer by a great amount. It may not make a big difference with one person but if everyone limits the usage of their vehicles, they could greatly help the world.\n\nSo why would you not limit the usage of your vehicles? With all of the benefits you gain from doing so, you have no reason to not lower it. You could make a change for both your physical health and the health of the enviorment. The benefits of cutting down on the usage of your vehicles greatly outnumber the negatives. So what's more important to you, losing twenty minutes to a beautiful bike ride or polluting the enviorment and ruining the area you live in? There are no reasons to why you should not cut down on the usage of your car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the next up and comming thing. with everyone jumping on the ne tech as soon as they can get there hands on it, it is sure to take off. people have places to gor and things to do briveing can be very taxing on the driver.so the driverless cars would take a load off and same with stress while keeping you alert. i do belive driverless cars are the next great thing next to sliced bread.\n\n'' tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car that drives its self %90 of the time.'' as you can see driverless cars are already here. there are more then just one compony makeing these cars for exmapel audi and nisan aloso are makeing these cars. google has made self piloting cars already and has had no crashes ever.\n\neven though they are called ''driverless cars'' they are not complitely divrless. the car alearts the driver at anytime for complex road condithions like road construction. there are dangers though for example the driver is on the phone and ignores the cars warning to take over. but this ''driverless car idea is not new by anymeans the first time it was thought of was in the 1950s where General moters made a track to test their idea but the track had eletric cabels to guide the cars so it made into more of a smarter road.\n\nso in the end smart cars can eleminate some or most driveing dangers. it will better our lives as a whole. this is the here and now and this could end up better for the enviorment to with most of the\n\n''driverless cars'' being eletric.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In modern society, transnational trading has become a major topic of concern. It is widely believed that international commerce should be implemented without any governmental restraint. From my personal perspective, I totally disagree with this notion for the following reasons. \r\n\r\nIn the first place, the lack of state control over international distribution can unequivocally exert an adverse influence on local businesses. There has been an increasing number of products that are now imported into a particular nation, thus increasing the competitiveness in the domestic market. Since consumers now have a wide range of product and service choices, they may have a preference for foreign-derived products in the belief of better quality. As a result, local enterprises are likely to lose a share of their target audience to their foreign counterparts. This, to some extent, will gradually cause them to suffer financially if no feasible plan is made to gain consumers’ trust back, \r\n\r\nMoreover, this practice acts as a catalyst for an abundance of illegal actions. To begin with, without any restriction from authorities, smuggling is likely to occur. The act of exporting precious products as a way of money laundering and tax evasion will detrimentally influence the economy, for example, resulting in the loss of tax revenue. Additionally, counterfeiting also tends to be on the rise. Due to the absence of regulations, many unethical companies will mass-produce low-quality imitation goods to cut the manufacturing cost. Selling them may, eventually, endanger consumers and diminishes public health. A case in point is a recent scandal in which a pharmaceutical company in Vietnam illicitly imported substandard medicines, taking a heavy toll on countless patients. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I am convinced that uncontrolled international trade should be taken under state control, due to its detrimental impacts, such as increasing illicit trading activities and competitiveness in the local market, If properly supervised, this will definitely make a great contribution to the development of a country.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that governments will not collect any tax from individuals so that they can keep all the savings they earn. This essay disagrees with that statement and will first discuss on how the officials spends the levy they gathered and then talk about how the collection help in the economy of the state.\n\nThe government does not have enough funds in sustaining the needs of the people. That's why they need to collect the money so there will be a fair distribution for the needs of the country. In the United States of America, which have the most collected compensation of about $23 billion dollars, part of their collection goes to homeless people who cannot afford to provide the basic necessities in life which includes shelter, clothes, foods and medicines. Another division of it, is intended to be reserved in case when there are calamities will happen. \n\nAnother point to consider is the money that the administration gather. It will give an impact to the economy of the country. Through the money that has been collected, it will give rise to more infrastructure and buildings that can open to a lot of jobs not only for individuals living in that state, but also for the people outside their territory. In Australia a lot of work open for non immigrant people. With this thing, the economy of Australia goes up from number 9 to 4.\n\nIn conclusion, people need to pay with taxes for the proper reimbursement of the wealth of the nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Due to advanced technology, some people say that every employee will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots in the future. It is likely that repetitive jobs will be taken over by machines, while it is highly unlikely that occupations requiring creativity will be done by robots. This essay will discuss why very few humans will be employed in the future. \r\n\r\nFirstly, Artificial intelligence (AI) and robots may eventually replace all menial jobs which need more effort or labour. Several industries will take the help of robotics because it is convenient and cheap, rather than offering internships or highly paid professions. For instance, in many rich and developed countries like Canada, Japan, and Australia, to name but a few, multinational companies use automated machines in place of workers to reduce the need for humans in manufacturing units that operate assembly lines. Thus, a number of people have difficulties finding sufficient jobs. \r\n\r\nConversely, there are various human tasks that cannot be replaced by electronic machines because it is detrimental to expect automated apparatuses to deliver contingency responses to problems for which humans are naturally equipped. All in all, some trades require a human touch such as healthcare, transportation, education, psychology, art & creative pursuits and other sectors require the presence of human sensitivity and creativity. Therefore, AI will never be able to take the position of people in these essential industries.\r\n\r\nHence, I would conclude that while a considerable number of occupations may be taken up by intelligent computer programs, certain careers will always remain for a highly skilled workforce. Eventually, fewer activities will be done by individuals, but that does not mean robotics will become pervasive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author talks describles how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. It doesn't just help us understand and studied how we feel and how we can \"calculate\" emotions.\n\nThis new technology can help read the emotional expressions of students in a classrom can be extremely valuable. It will give teachers and schools the ability to not just understand students through communication but also through their emotions. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...,\"(6) This quote shows that the new technology will help teachers and schools have the ability for them to understand if students like or understands an assignment or test. Facial Action Coding System can help extremely will letting them nknow that students need more help or they're just bored of it.\n\nAlso, knowing if a student is gulity of something bad they did or understnading if they are in a bad spot in their lives. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,...\"(6) This quote shows that most humans don't really communication verbally or even thtough emotion. Having this technology gives future insite for schools on students allowing them to help students out more not just in an educational way but in a emotional way. It's hard for student to ask or understand what is going on andnot wanting to say anything. Without students acknowledgement can be more valuable because then they'll know something is going on. Students will try hard knowing someone is watching them or as the new technology is doing, is studying them and their emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can be valuable to all schools across the national not just for the students but for everyone. We should have this new technology on aboard for a better education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A considerable proportion of citizens adopt a preconceived notion that atrocities are considered equal in the eyes of justice despite the legal category age. I strongly oppose the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.\r\n\r\nTo commence, leading a minor to an equivalent prison for adults has numerous negative repercussions on the generic development of a human. In other words, the type of nutrition that generally includes insufficient nutritional elements is not appropriate in terms of adequate body’s growth. Moreover, there are certain rules inside the jail that oblige prisoners to adjust their daily routines which will affect various physical aspects such as sleeping hours and though works. As reported in the Times magazine in 2015, a significant number of suicide cases under legal age has been registered in police records due to detrimental treatment inside penal institutions. Hence, the experience of balanced punishment facilities has proved harmful effects on the healthy involvements of a young individual. \r\n\r\nAnother compelling reason to support my view is that the mind of a juvenile did not attend a complete maturity in order to be convicted similarly to grown persons. This means that special tribunals are allocated for juniors. Additionally, numerous countries rely on rehabilitation centres because they believe that minors need special care that will provide a second opportunity for a prosperous future. To demonstrate, I had my relative who was addicted to drugs,however, the Canadian government procured required assistance which led him to the way of salvation. Thus, conviction is treated differently according to the mental level of each person.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people consider that crimes people must be evaluated identically among social groups. I totally disagree with this statement because of unfavourable consequences on the natural growth and mental completion of an adolescent.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that heads of enormous organizations should receive higher wages due to their crucial responsibilities, whereas others believe that this creates an unfair environment for labourers. This essay will explore both viewpoints prior to concluding that I agree with the former perspective.\n\nOn the one hand, a number of individuals argued that creating an equal working environment is critical for a variety of reasons. Firstly, having equal pay would create a sense of comfort among labourers which would enable them to do their tasks received from their supervisor without any related burden. Additionally, managers do not virtually contribute more actual value than their employees. For example, managers of cattle breeding firms do not directly participate in production processes and therefore, there is no reason for them to receive higher profit than typical employees.\n\nHowever, I believe that it is more beneficial to offer competitive wages to directors of large organizations. First and foremost, high-income act as a motivator for these individuals to achieve their targets and enhance their management skills. For instance, companies like Google or Apple offer high earnings for leadership positions, which helps retain top talent. Furthermore, supervisors with rich experience can adapt to changes in the workplace and manage employees more effectively than others, and as a result, they deserve an adequate wage.\n\nIn conclusion, while it is critical to maintain equality in terms of wages in large businesses, I believe that pay should be based on individuals' experience and level of responsibility. Consequently, offering higher salaries to supervisors is necessary to retain talent and ensure the effective management of huge organizations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Computers greatest tool mankind They give people acsess information anything else world ler us connect faraway places one click button without computers people would never know learn much without computers modern planes cars would exist without computer test probaly would exist sconclusion much time computor theres one doin lifetimeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some researchers are thinking that when a country develops finance then all of the people living here will be feeling better and won’t want economic wealth more. I think it isn’t a good idea for some reason and I will improve it right now.\n\nThere are a lot of reasons why I disagree with this opinion. First of all, I believe that your country isn’t the richest country in the world so you think your nation doesn’t need to develop more financially is a bad idea.For example the USA is one of the most country developing in the world, compared to another nation maybe is richer but this country never stand still position also they always want increase the average of economy then they can to be a leader of the world to help another country. This is the first reason I disagree with this idea and secondly, if your motherland has a good economy, all things like exports, imports, deliveries to another nation will be easier. You can import seafood,agriculture, very easy or maybe you can get a good price for this. Therefore, in my opinion, an increase in economic wealth is always good and convenient for citizens in all countries.\n\nBut some people agree with the idea that if the platform of economic wealth was stronged, they wouldn't want to be richer for some reason. Maybe their life was more satisfying so they want to enjoy and forget activities or don’t motivate themselves to develop for the country to increase their economy. Or the perspective was limited then they can’t saw a long-vision in future that nation didn’t develop so all of people will have a trouble exports and imports. I think non-knowledge is the biggest reason people don’t want to be richer.\n\n\tOverall, I disagree with the opinion of some experts that increasing the average financial status of a country won’t give citizens more satisfaction.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are some problems with driverless cars because they need the funding for all the sensors and such for these cars not to mention they would need the funding for the roads to run the smarter cars. Also what happens if someone is in one of these cars and the sensor stops working, that could mean a car crash so injuries and possibly death for that person. These cars area good idea but they would be very costly and could be really dangerous if broken or if something goes wrong. Not to mention this is just one more freedom we are losing. . we would be losing our ability to drive and having our cars do it for us. I know that this world is slowly becoming lazier but wow. . driverless cars. They are thinking out all the aspects of these cars like what we would do if the \"driver\" got bored etc. but it is not good because that is just going to make people even more inactive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of this passage provides many reasons on why we should explore Venus. The author states many interesting facts about Venus and ways we could adventure the risky terrain.\n\nAccording to the author in passage two, Venus is the closest planet to Earths size and density. This meaning, if we were to explore this terrain it could be a possible place to start another biome like Earth. In passage four, the author mentions that Venus has mountains, valleys, and craters that resemble those we have on Earth. The author makes a good point in mentioning that Earth and Venus are very different but also very similar.\n\nThe author also reveals to us that Venus has an atmosphere made up of about 97% carbon dioxide. This piece of evidence is backed up with passage five, where the author also states that NASA is thinking about usinng the solution of allowing scientists to float above the harsh conditions of Venus' surface. This would allow our scientists to be able to explore and gather more information about Venus all while avoiding dangerous conditions.\n\nThe author does an excellent job at continuing to provide statements that support the idea of exploring Venus. At the end of passage five, the author states that solar power would be plentiful, and the radiation on Venus' surface and atmosphere would not exceed Earths levels of radiation. According to what the author states in passage six, many researchers are working on building machines that can withstand Venus' difficult conditions. This would allow the machines to collect samples from Venus' surface for the machines to bring back to earth for our scientists to analize.\n\nAt the end of the article, the author provides the idea that us humans exploring Venus could lead to many other great explorations. Overall throughout the article the author continuously provides valuable reasons on why it is worth it for our scientists to explore Venus. The exploration could lead to many great things accoriding to the information the author provided to us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No matter wich candidate has the most votes The Electoral College holds the final decission. Even though this makes it unfair to our voters this is a secure way of choosing the next president. Sometimes we are not smart enough to pick the right candidate ourselves. I believe that we should rely on the Electoral College. It is there to make sure that we do not get a president that might over rule and it also avoids run-off elections.\n\nThe Electoral College reduces the chance of getting a president that might have intentions of over powering. For instance in Cuba, nothing like The Electoral College exists which is why Fidel Castro is still in charge and does not give the citizens freedom. Although he may not be in full charge, he still rules through his brother. But because of him they have poor food supply, barely any money, shelter is weak, and food is scares. With the Electoral College this would be less likely to happen because the electors process everything before making the final decision. Like stated in Source number three \"voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really listen to the competing candidates\".\n\n\"Candidates may have won the popular vote but not won the presidency\" says source two. This makes it unfair to voters. On top of that, The Electoral College avoids Run-off elections. \"Avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast\" says Source three. Nixon and Clinton for example had fourty-three percent of the popular votes. For a candidate who can not run their state The Electoral College may turn off voters. When candidates seem to be tied or are about to be tied it complecates the process and so it is reduced by The Electoral College.\n\nI support The Electoral College becuase of the reduced chance of getting a president with over powering intentions and it avoids run-off elections.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article in the last paragraph the author was talking about how \"Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts\". That phrase means to me that just becasue its really hard to get to Venus or observe Venus doesnt mean it is impossible to get there. Also not losing hopes because maybe they could build something to get there even though it is not safe. Now days they have more technology and more smart things that could possibly get there. Venus being the the closest planet to Earth is an advantage because it is not as far as other planets scienctists coud possibly get samples of rocks,gas, or anything else.\n\nThis is not easy like it says in paragraph 5 \"Not easy conditions, but survivablefor humans\". The temperatures are very high 800 degrees Fahrenheit which also makes it vey difficult. It is hard to examen Venus closley but it is not impossible like the author told us in paragraph 1 \"it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closley\".\n\nIn the article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" has sad a lot about Venus I agree with the author. Author thinks it is possible to get closer to Venus and I agree. I agree becasue now days scienctits have more technology have new things it could possibly happen for them to get a closer view.\n\nEven though scienctist have through go through a lot and learn a lot I feel like they would be happy if they could get it to happen. Back in those days they had computers like it says on paragraph 7 which is so amazing how those scienctists were not scared becasue it was obviously more dangerous it was not as safe as it is now. \" human curiosity will likely lead us into many equallly endeavis\" this phrase grabbed my attention beacsue it is really true us humans want to know so much that we start to think and think that makes it go around and humans also start wondering which makes people start learning about it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "From my point of view, I agree with encouraging youth to have（do) unpaid work to help local communities, but there is a little proportion of this opinion I don't agree, that is teenagers should be required to do this.\r\n\r\nNowadays, the majority of youngsters grow up in the internet environment, which causes them to have fewer opportunities to take part in realistic social activities than before. If they are willing to help local communities to do some daily work, I think they will improve their social abilities and accumulate practical skills, such as building friendships with other same ages and using office software on computers. These kinds of stuff can be positive effects on their lives.\r\n\r\nAnother point that I want to emphasize is that not all youth should be required for doing this, there are various activities for teenagers to utilize their time, such as advanced learning, physical exercises, or just relaxing with their families during leisure time. What matters is that young people have their own right to choose what kinds of activities they are enjoyed in.\r\n\r\nFrom the view of the other side, what a well-known fact is that the labour costs have become increasingly higher than before while social economics developed. But at the same time, studies show that charities are short of the labour force, for example, the component of old people in the population of our society becomes bigger and bigger, what is the intractable problem is that young people are exhausted from their jobs, which causes they do not have enough energies for taking care of their parents and children. If teenagers could help local charities to take care of the elderly, it will be a powerful positive effect to improve this social problem. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that teenagers who have abilities and wills can devote themselves to unpaid work to help local communities, it's definitely beneficial to both individual teenagers and society , and what I will consistently think is that people can not require all teenagers to do anything that is not written in the law until they are willing to.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Recently, young adults are having difficulties in finding long lasting jobs. This essay will explain the reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to solve the problem.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the reasons are twofold. The main reason is that many young people find their job unsuitable for themselves. They do not get well understanding in their careers, so after they have worked for a period of time, they may find it not suitable for them. They will choose to change to another job which they think is more interesting. As a result, youngsters may find it difficult to find permanent jobs. Another reason is that employers are not willing to hire long term workers. The salaries of part time workers are much cheaper than permanent workers, so many companies prefer hiring part time workers.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are two methods to solve the problem. Firstly, schools can provide some courses to allow students to get better understanding to their careers. For instance, students can know the job requirements and the job duties, so they can decide which career is really suitable for them. Moreover, the government can encourage company to hire young adults by providing subsidy. The government can provide subsidy to companies if they provide permanent jobs for youngsters, it can create incentives to let companies to hire them. Therefore, teens will have a higher chance to get a long lasting job.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the reason why youngsters cannot find long lasting positions is because they do not get enough understanding of their jobs and companies do not pay a higher salary, however there are still ways to solve the problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My position on driverless cars is not approved. If the car is called \"driverless\" why would you still need a human in the car to be ready and alerted if an he/she had to take action in a serious situation. \"Designed to notify the driver wjhen the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\"\n\nSince the car is a driverless car why would a driver still need to be ready and alerted when the car cant manage to handle something. As in paragraph 7 it states \"all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" Well if thats the case then why call it a driverless car if you still need to be alerted. That would also mean that the driver is not allowed to slack off and that the rules before the human got that car will still applie. Both eyes on the road at all times and both hands on the wheel at all times.\n\nIt would cost so much money to build new roads for the cars because in oder for the cars to drive and move in perfect condition is to have sensors that can read the positive and the negative polarity as messages in the binary code. As said in paragrahp 3 \"they required massive upgrades to exsiting roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" To much constuction would be happening at one time.\n\nWhen the option of smarter roads was crossed of the list, a new option came metioning smarter cars. \"They needed a whole lot more sensors.\" That seemslike a great idea but what if a human drvies on to many bumps and a sensor breaks off? Who knows how much it cost to fix it or where you can even find another sensor to replace the one that broke. A sensor can miscalculate a turn or and turn another way and cause a crash only because one or more sensors miscalulated.\n\nAnother thing about the sensors. what about the winter time? What if the sensors freeze or just get snow on them are the sensors water proof? So that would also put the human thats behind the wheel in a huge risk of being injured. The sensors could not pick up any positive or negative messages it need to read the binary code.\n\nThink about if all electricy just cut off in a specific area. Wouldnt those sensors need the electircity to read the binary code? Wouldnt the sensors need to read the positive and negative messages also? If there was an power outage then no human would getting bakc to there destination or home.\n\nFloods can be a thing that the sensors could get a shortage from. When its constantly raining and the water is rising faster by the minute and the car is driving through all of it while its splashing uner the car the sensors could definitly messed up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Exploring Venus\n\nVenus is one of the two clostest plantes to Earth, including Mars. We don't know a lot about other planets, because exploring them is to hard. The conditions some planets contain are to tough for human contact.\n\nEven though it would be hard, the author thinks it would benifit us greatly in the long run if we explored Venus. The passage states that Venus could have been closely related to Earth. Scientists say that millions of years ago, Venus could have been covered by forests and oceans, just like Earth. If this statement is true, then there is a slight possibility there is still some form of life, whether it be plants, animals, or even small living cells.\n\nThe article explains, \"The planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" Since the surface is to hot for human contact, scientists say that if we fly about 30 miles above the surface, then we can study the landscape in conditions that are fit enough for humans to survive. It may not be comforatable, as temperatures will still be about 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but we could still survive. \"The air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth,\" the article explains.\n\nEven though we could still stay 30 miles above surface level, the author says that could only provide limited information on the planet. The author says,\"Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" This means cameras couldn't really capture any detailed pictures of Venus. Also, if we want any rock samples from the planet then we would have to get up close to the planet. The author claims that scientists are developing machines that can last longer through these conditions. That will allow them to get any samples they need. The passage explains that NASA is working on a robot that can lat up to 3 weeks in these conditions. They are also trying to gather an old computer that can make calculations wihtout using any electronics.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea of traveling to Venus to get information about the planet. Everytime the author makes a statement detering us from studying Venus, he backs it up with a solution. His closing paragraph also says,\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exopanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Here he states that we shouldn't be afraid of the obstacles we face, but that we should face and overcome them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A government, whether it is democratic or republic, should aim on the good will of their citizens, have vision to fulfil and responsibilities to carry on. Thus, economic headway is the key to success for a prosperous future. Many, including the regime think that, the priority should be given to ensure the promotion of economy while others disagree with this notion and opine that they should focus its efforts on the progress of the less privileged. In this essay, we can discuss both sides.\n\nTo begin with, economists betterment is a policy intervention endeavour aiming to improve the well-being of people. Economic advance is required to ensure a better life standard for the civilian. For instance, to control the crime rates, corruptions, better hospital facilities, etc. So, it is important for a state to assure the stability of austerity. Without economic stability, an administration cannot ensure advancement in education, defence, healthcare, international trade and social safety. Moreover, without economic success, a country cannot defend itself from external threats, fight with epidemic diseases and cannot ensure proper health care facilities to its inhabitant.\n\nOn the other hand, even though economic prosperity plays an essential part, governments must ensure a better living standard and green environment. They have to pay attention to create a more advanced educational system, business ventures, job opportunities and thereby creating better life standards and comfort and then, the ministry can collect more funds through taxes. The authorities should provide blue sky and clean air to their taxpayers, as their right. Therefore, the hike of the economic sectors should be aligned with other important sectors. In addition, many people would also argue that it is better to bestow a prosperous country to the new generation rather than leaving them a broken economy.\n\nTo sum up, it is undeniable that economic expansion plays an important role in the development of a nation. More than half the people of the world are living in conditions approaching misery. Thus, the officials must consider many other aspects which are equally important. However, I personally believe that besides economic improvement, better education, social welfare, security and political stability are equally important for the sustainable development of a nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it has some very good points but it also isn't the safest alternative either. Most people when they think of a driverless car think they dont have to do anything, well in the article the auther states \"The human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" Most people wouldn't pay that much attention even if they knew the car would try and alert them. The article also states that the displays that alert the driver about things coming they can be instantly turned off as to help with those who text and drive but in my opinion some people would do what was needed to turn off the displays and then get back to playing on their phone or other things. These kinds of cars are illegal in some states for safety issues.\n\nThese cars are mostly technology so if the technology fails the driver or others could be hurt. The article states \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" I would belive it could be both depending on the sitiation but most times it could be a\n\ntechnology malfunction because in this day and age people are learning how to hack and do other things with the new technology, so it could cause an outbreak of panic on many people thinking technology is safe especially when driving. Most people would also be happy with the new and improved technology no matter if its been proven safe or not. The cars are driving on autopilot for 90 percent of the time says the article for 2016 but it all depends on the laws and if there will be new laws created just for this new driverless car.\n\nThe laws that are in affect now are to keep drivers, passangers, and pedestrians safe and the article tells that lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. If the drivers of the car belive they just got a \"Driverless Car\" they arent going to wanna be alert as they were in their old cars they would wanna relax and not do anything as they drive since they believe the car is driverless.These are a few of the issues that can be caused by the new driverless car but it does have positive effect for some people and for gas and other fuels. The driverless car isnt all bad but it does have its issues. I am against driverless cars for their saftey hazards.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "We live in an age of technology where one could not go a single minute without being influenced or even witnessing tech. Going off of that, technology is used more and more in the educational system, with classes using computers and i-pads for everyday acivities. The Facial Action Coding System would be a perfect addition to the educational sytem and could even make a huge impact on average people's everyday lives.\n\nTechnology in schools is a wonderful tool, offering millions if not billions of different sources and programs online with the click of a button. When used properly, students can grandly enhance their learning skills with the use of technology. However not every program, resource, or tool works for every single student, which is where the Facial Action Coding System would come in. Using this device, teachers can potentially get feedback on whether student's are enjoying what they are doing, what one could do to make a student's learning experience better, and with this device a teacher could even tell if their class is confused or bored. Since emotional expression are so important in a classroom, a teacher could potentially even modify the lesson plan based off of the overall moof of the class.\n\nThis invention is groundbreaking on it's own, and bringing it into the educational system with it's proper use and encorporation, could be of tremendous help to the United States educational system.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke thinks that others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because the cattle-boat trips are an unbelieveable opportunity for small-town boy. He said it opened up the world to him. It may just open up the world for you too.\n\nYou might also get to see some exotic places. For exampleyou might get to see Europe, China, and the Acropolis in Greece, like Luke did. You may also get to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water, like him. You would also get some time to have fun on board too,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You would get to play games such as baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Some things like table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games would help pass the time.\n\nIt made Luke Bomberger more aware of people and of other countries in need. It might make you too. You might have to do a lot of work like, check on all of the animals every hour to make sure they are ok. Luke couldn't say no because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. He hopes you do too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Every car has it's problems, so why are people just focused on driveless cars problems? Yeah they might crash, but every car can crash so why are you just focused on one car? I think driveless cars can actually help with a lot here's why.\n\nDriveless cars take less fuel. That means it will take less money to full up the gas tank. That means you can go places and play on your phone on your way or you can put on your makeup if you didn't have enough time too when you was home.\n\nPeople think that driverless cars are dangerous because the passenger might get hurt, but the driveless car has drove up to half of a million miles without crashing. People also don't like them because they think the driveless car doesn't warn you when their is something wrong, but that isn't true because they have a lot of different was to tell you that they need you to take over because the driverless car is having trouble. People really just judge the driverless car because they haven't used one because if they would've used a driverless car and hadn't crashed there would be no problem with the car, but people always judge first and ask later.\n\nThere are a lot of reasons I like driverless cars, but a main reason is that it's new techonology like who doesn't want to test out new techonology as soon as it comes out. People who like when things change don't like new techonology so they probably won't like the driverless cars. Some more reasons I like driverless cars because Google is coming up with more ways for the car to become more safer.\n\nSo if you don't think driverless cars aren't safe please read a article about it because they have some issues, but so does everything else in this world. So if your judging it based on how friends and family feels do you even think on stuff yourself?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars has been a controversial subject for about 25 years now. Some people think it was created by aliens, while others think it's a natural landform, as proven.\n\nTo start off, why would scientist lie about a possible life form on a different planet? If they had any evidence or clue there was life form, it would blow up fast. With information becoming so popular more people would take interest in the subject, resulting in more funds. If anything, scientist would want to find new life form.\n\nAlso, there has been a lot of photographic proof of it being a natural landform. There has been different pictures form a handfull of different times, wouldn't you think there would be some kind of evidence at all if it was really made by aliens?\n\nNot only is it more logical to assume it was a natural landform, there is no evidence against it, but evidence to support it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe materials shelf belongs basically anybody world I also think materials shelf allowed removed long materials get put back spot matter My experiance books really great like read times spare time read When get book look book observe way take library know wanted read book observe great thing bookwhen read book im fast reader im reading like know book gunna end begans If pick magazine library would nt take library cause magazines expensive get times also hard replace ever needed replaced But get one would look important stuff get kind stuff times think movies nt able library cause people could take ideas movies andor steal movies libraries would expensive pay tooken library watch movie would enjoy much possible cause day comes turn chance watching turn Music passion people people would go buy cd s something listen music would listen get idea play ever wanted become musician something like times would write lyrics song way understand singer singing either listen song My point something comes shelf return rightful spot otherwise consequences people trusted much longerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In our rather futuristic society for a number of reasons people are getting more interested in the past of their hometowns.With the help of rapidly ameliorating technology their desire to learn about the history can be easily put into life.But what are the roots of such an eagerness? First of all, the hectic lifestyle that we all experience nowadays does not leave any space for\r\n\r\ncalmness and peace in our souls, so most of the people- especially adolescence- are struggling with finding their feet whilst having a broad spectrum of knowledge about the world around really gives a feeling of confidence in the impermanence of life. ln addition to this, it is said that being aware of the past you can change the future.Consequently, if people want to live a better life in more comfortable environment, they have to explore the history of their homes in order not to repeat past mistakes.\r\n\r\nFor this aims we are lucky to have multiple tools to carry out research into the subject. Despite libraries being considered as an old-fashioned and not necessarily convenient approach of learning there are actually quite a few books and magazines which are not available online but which are extremely helpful when it comes to the local interests. News, photos, articles and interviews with different people published in old magazines indeed provide with a clear image of past events. Browsing the internet forums is also a great idea to find new information and make friend with mutual objectives.\r\n\r\nPutting everything into a nutshell, learning about the history of your place not only builds a sense of confidence but also might have a big impact on our future way of lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There has been a difference of opinion regarding the final purpose of museums, while some believe that these kinds of places should be only informational, I would argue that can be both entertaining and educational. \r\nOn the one hand, museums naturally are historical places due to the quantity of cultural heritage contained. In this way, exhibitions showing ancient components and the remains may be a great way to learn about the history of different cultures. In fact, in most of the antique representations are shown aspects about the life and customs of our ancestors. Also, most people visit these institutions in order to receive a further knowledge. For example, the majority of museums include a guide who is in charge of the tour. This person, can even give response of any particular curiosity surged. \r\nOn the other hand, it is an important factor of museums the role of being enjoyable. Such historical institutions are principal tourist attractions, foreign people often have limited time. Because of that, is relevant the development of special methods, which sum all the data in an attractive form. For example, in many countries they offer audio visual systems in order to turn the tour into more dynamic. The average visitor may become bored if they have to read a lot of educational content, especially school students or younger citizens. Because of that, the museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities as part of its exhibitions. \r\nBy way of conclusion, I believe that educational and enjoyable experience cannot be brought into comparison to see which is more relevant because they have complementary equal meaning to those historical points.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In passage The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted talked obstacles facest trying allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building The three main obstacles safety mother nature existing laws One greatest obstacle safety Lsted states Never fulfilled purpose The greatest reason one safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Because hydrogen highly flammable would way would safe The building could catch fire danger Secondly nature would affect dirigibles Lsted states The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The violent air currents couldnt allow dirigibles Empire State Building ca nt dirigibles violent air currents It isnt safe Lastly laws obstacle builders face Lsted s knowledge The practical lesson dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas The law huge obstacle builders building dirigibles Because ca nt build something law Because safety mother nature laws thats stop builders building dirigiblesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers harmfully effecting children going effect generations even Computers fine moderation things If needed school project fine using computer everyday rather exercising okay Supporters technology say computers positive effect I disagree They say practice hand eye coordination teach far away places talk people online Sports great way exercise practice hand eye coordination Tennis baseball basketball hockey etc great sports practice hand eye coordination They much healthier IMing friends day You sit butt day scream mom get drink water dinner CAPS generations becoming way dependant says grade teacher How suppose able support family older cant get computer CAPS family hard work mom tells family needs food means someone needs job someone also needs get food That takes lot time energy I agree mom simple things like going outside hour day practiced child job family easier Rather searching internet hous find good online source support thesis paper go library The internet realitively new data basis However grown much You always trust internet sources People posted website could well crazy Plus websites filled viruses happens computer dead due viruses actually need computer school project The simple alternative would going local library checking variety books The books trusted filled information The internet also safe place Facebook aim email twitter etc ways people comunicate computer Facebook aim twitter scary safe know talking They profile able relate could lying The internet broad place open strangers dad says I allowed ways comunicate specific reasons I stated earlier My parents protect I agree decision Rather talking complete strangers go friends house Your friends people want talk spend time Overall computers bizarre pieces technology unsafe truthful forcing children become dependent adults I disagree supporters technology There many healthy alternatives computer I believe experts concerned people spending much time computer less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends Not alternatives I stated keep people safe also practice healthier way living It important keep bodies healthy end thats everyone s goalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars seem like a wonderful idea but produce so many threats that it may not be worth it. In my opinion driverless cars are a mistake. Even though the idea is good, it is not very practical at all. Basically self-driving car manufacturers are asking drivers to trust our lives to sensors and blinking lights.\n\nSelf driving cars still rely on humans to take over when things get too difficult. Even though google has been testing automated driving systems since 2009 they still can't use them practically on the roads. What happens when you're sitting down using the heads-up displays meant to keep you busy and you start to drift off? Sure the car has noises and vibrations to wake you up, but some people are heavy sleepers that won't be woken up even by all that commotion. And even if it does wake you up it would have to be a sudden, loud noise or movement and that can induce panic causing the driver to swerve off the road. Then you have crashes, lawsuits, and injury or even death.\n\nThat is another point that must be addressed. Who is to blame when the inevitable crashes occur? Is it the driver's fault for trusting in the technology, or is it the manufacturers fault for producing systems that arent perfect enough to trust our lives with. And what about drivers who refuse to trust the systems in the first place? How will the cars react against the human element.\n\nMany people are against these self-driving cars and will refuse to trust their lives to robots. Humans are unpredictable and often times don't pay attention to the road, or drive under the influence leaving an element of surprise that the robots have to react to in a split second. And a middle class family or even upper class might be reluctant to spend the money on the cars and systems nescessary to allow for automated driving.\n\nSelf-driving cars are not the future. Automobile deaths are decreasing every year as cars get safer and more reliable. There is no reason to introduce a new problem that will just cause more deaths and inevitably end in tradgedy. Humans should not put their lives in the hands of sensors, that's just blind stupidity. The lawsuits, cost, and having to put full trust into a computer should be proof enough.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is often argued that money is an important and basic need of the public. There are several factors that motivate individuals to stay in the workplace and some people think that money is the greatest component among them. I strongly agree with this statement and I think that other factors are also important along with money to stay in the workforce , I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, money is the basic need for every individual to stay in the workforce. To illustrate this, money helps people to run their household budget. For example, nowadays, more and more people working in IT sectors, this is because technical sectors are growing rapidly in the last 5 years and people have a number of opportunities to earn high salary packages from these companies. Also, in this digitalised world, everything is skyrocketing and for that reason, people need money to buy things for their daily uses.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other factors are also important that motivate employers to stay in the workforce. Firstly, job satisfaction is the most prominent factor which motivates the public to stay in their organization. For example, take my friend Anil, he joined \"Sysko\" 5 years ago and still working there as a senior web developer but his company environment is eco-friendly and for that reason, he working continuously in this organisation. Secondly, some people like to gain experience from their fieldwork instead of earning high packages, which helps them to make their future much better.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I strongly agree with this opinion and I think that money is an important factor for every individual along with job satisfaction and gaining experience from work helps workers to stay in their workplace.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It would seem that driverless cars will appear more in the future. Not only will they be there, but will be more advanced. Driverless cars will be a great advancement in the history of technology, but what are the precautions? What will happen when the people behind the wheel get in an accident? Driverless cars, although nice, can be dangerous when the people become lazy.\n\nDriverless cars can do almost everything a driver can: steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. But the cars also alert their drivers when their skill is needed such as navigating through tricky zones. Some people question what is the point of a car that can drive itself, but still need a driver. The car still needs the functions of a human being in order to stop accidents from happening. In this case, safety is a big concern for the ability to use driverless cars.\n\nThe laws of driving are there to keep the driver, passenger and pedestriands safe. But what if the car doesn't realize the situation at hand if it doesn't undrstand human emotion. To some a safe car has a human driver in control. a situition that many can agree with, but also the car does seem to understand when their is a dangerous situation. But there are always problems with technology, malfunctioning can happen. What if the technology malfunctions and an accident happens? The big question is who would be at fault? A question that cannot be answered at the moment it would seem. If there are problems such as these, then maybe these cars shouldn't be produced.\n\nThe path to the finishing of driverless cars gets closer every day. But so many precautions can happen with this advancement. Would you want to get in an accident because of system malfunctioning? This advancement could truley make people lazy, and it would best to prevent this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir author creates mood The mood love The author loves parents things sacraficed come He really appreciates everything ve done really gratefulThe author describes warmth kitchen How s filled love culture The great aroma parents cooking music culture loves itThe author also describes family close friends The love got The memoir says My parents always kept arms door open many people consider family knowing would us considered people nt really family Family They helped family friends s creates mood love CAPS memoir author creates mood LOVESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The position I chose is to disagree with the developing of driverless cars. There's many things that could happen with computer controlled cars. Some of my reasons being are there could be a glitch in the system while the car is driving and what would happen if there's a crash, who would be the blame for it? Another reason is with these driverless cars that could possibly make it into the future, how would people be able to get their license? There's many other reasons that driverless cars should not be created.\n\nFirst of all, with driverless cars, what would happen if there's a glitch in the system while the car is driving? If it's called driverless then i'm assuming it's going to be computer operated. Technology today seems to have many issues with it sometimes. So, what makes manufacturers think these cars won't if they're willing to fall through with this invention? The car could be driving down a highway or road and just turn uncontrollably off the road or into a pole or another car. Also, let's say you're sittiing in a traffic jam and your car just starts automatically driving causing you to crash into someone else or also, going off the road, or even running a stop light or sign. There's many things that could happen if the car ends up glitching and starts going out of control.\n\nAlso, if there were to be a crash anywhere, who would be the blame for the crash? As of today, if you crash into someone the only possible way you'd be to blame is if you were drinking or on something you weren't suppose to or driving without your seatbelt on or not paying attention, like being on your phone. Even if those aren't the reasons, you or the other person is still put to blame for crashing into each other. But what if you're in a driverless car and you're following every rule, you're perfectlly fine, and everything is going good, then you and another person crash into each other? Would you be put to blame or the car? I would believe you would meaning how you're behind the wheel and they can't put fault on the car. But could they put the fault on the person or company who made the car? This just shows all the possible complications people would have to go through if something bad were to happen to the car or to someone else from the car.\n\nMost importantly, with these driverless cars, if one day they took over, how would people be able to get their license? If these are going to be the cars of the future then would old cars still be around? If so, when it comes to people getting their license then are they going to use normal cars or the driverless cars? But if they were to use a normal car they'd have to go off the original laws that were created for people to get a valid license. If driverless cars are being invented I feel like they'd make a new driving book with new rules for the driverless cars. But would there be as many rules as the original one? A car that drives itself based off a computer, basically, what rules would there possibly be other than you just remaining alert in case you have to do some of the driving? I don't believe it'd make sense to put someone behind a normal car in order to get their license if someday driverless cars are going to take over and possibly everyone is going to have one, so everything someone learns would be for nothing basically. Might as well let a 10 year old be eligible to get behind the wheel if the car is just going to drive itself and there'd be really no rules.\n\nThere's many things to think about. Yes, I agree there's some positive thinking on some of this. But, there's also negative because you have to think about the person behind the wheel and people in the car with that person, along with those around the car. In order to make these cars, I feel they need to come up with a way in order to protect people's safety so less deaths can happen on the road. Like, making sure there's not a glitch in the system and thinking about who would be at fault in a car crash. Also, what would they do for people in order for them to get their license. These are some of the reasons I believe driverless cars should not be invented.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "mood created author I would say good gratefull parents everything family important excerpt In paragraph says Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed explanation gratful towards family In paragraph says growing great environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative explains close someone doesnt mean blood relatedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this modern world, it is argued by some politicians and authorities that the art classes are crucial for students while others believe that those courses are loss of time. I believe that art classes have significant importance in many ways, such as expanding imagination or being handled multi-tasking works, and this essay will examine both arguments.\r\n\n\nFirst of all, in many developed countries, the art classes are a big part of the curriculum of the preliminary and high schools. Moreover, as per an academic article published by the EU says that It has been proven that each art, but most importantly painting, helps children to enlarge their imagination which allows them to create innovative products or structures in future. For instance, if a student’s imagination skill has been increased up to 14 years old, he would be able to draw the futuristic buildings and might become one of the most popular architects. Furthermore, multi-tasking skill has been mentioned in almost every job applications’ requirements. People could not have this skill after the 20s, instead, this skill should be imposed on a person in her childhood times. In fact, in the same article which aforementioned above states that there is a solid relation between multi-handling and playing the piano. Whereas a child learns how to play the piano, he also could gain a concrete skill to manage his brain in a different way, which allows him to do multiple tasks at the same time in their professional life.\r\n\n\nOn the other hand, students are entitled to join admission test in the last year of preliminary school and high school to enrol the high school and university respectively. In fact, those admission tests only cover math and literature questions, and due to that reason, most of the parents direct their children to study math instead of art courses. Although some of the students are willing to be an artist, the education system does not allow them to realize their dream come true. Furthermore, some of the famous directors have not been studied in art schools, instead, they have studied engineering or medicine. For instance, Nuri Bilge Ceylan, the best director in Turkey, studied electronic engineering, started the movie as a hobby and he recorded his first film when he was at 32 years old.\r\n\n\nIn conclusion, in light of the information given above, although there are so rare examples to prove that spending time on art is a loss of time, I am strongly convinced that art classes are crucial and has great importance for children's educational and professional lives. It should not be forgotten that a life without art is like a tree without roots.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do computers really benifit society This tricky question years Some people say computers huge help allows us see world different perspective learn computers vast increase tecknology Though others say computers addicting unsafe unsecure machine using especially left lot personal files hooked internet Plus people spend time computer ever missing thier families friends able enjoy nature simple things life Besides want honest opinion computers used tools The fact many people look computers personal diaries something save files even something play games says They ignore biggest fact computers used make life easier This really computers made help us It could simple ORGANIZATION complexed super computer still serves main purpose making life easier Even tried upgrade computer would still serve purpose yet people still look still next big thing entertainment Many people might even know yet computer turn really ruin life Ever since made popular disk around people using computers alot Its created fastest computer ever It selling world wide buisnesses small companies schools even entertainment A years ago made something called xbox It revolutionized gaming way people look gaming But whats problem The problem people addicted entertainment When happens people start becoming dependent computer Its anything bad fact since computers internet people depend computers going find hard avoid hacked worse getting information stolen There one thing computers remains constant Family friends find hard talk loved one spend time computers This makes comunication hard like I said addicting CAPS people nt real friends chat people online knowing really says Making friends online unsafe thing computer Over people online say people often break away thier real friends find new friend ve made So remember even though computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Autonomous cares have been dreamt of for several generations now. Theyve gone through multiple changes and theories but we've just now found one solution that may be the key to the next generations of cars. In 2009 tech company Google revealed that it was working on a self driven car. However, despite this being in the works for over 9 years it still has its faults so some are sceptical about its rise to being the new standard. I however see differently.\n\nMany people believe that these autonomous cars are highly dangerous to the public. This is not true, The self riven car from Google has only witnessed one crash in its lifespan. That crash was caused by another driver. Given this information it is true that car should have been able to have a counter menouver to this. So if everyone were to be using a car like this on the otherhand there would be no need for these types of menouvers to take place.\n\nNow, others will think the cars to be completely impractical in todays society, but this is in fact false. The autonomous vehichles will only consume roughly half the fuel we do today, meaning we will cut back on our dependence for fossil fules such as gasoline. Since they dont require a driver in most situatiuons it will allow the driver to multitask while in the car which will be a great benefit given todays busy world. Better still is that they come equiped with high grade sensors to sense oncoming dangers and can move or speed up if it needs to without having the attention of the person inside it.\n\nSo am i for the autonomous cars? i absolutely am. With the cut of fossil fuels and the safety thats provided when in one who would want them to stop? They will make everyday life more simplistic and much more safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's society, when people are asked if they would give up their cars, they would be shocked. No would be the most common answer. However, the advantages of limiting car usage are great. General stress decreases, and polution to the environment also decreases. People are not only helping themselves, but also helping the ecosystem.\n\nStress. Everyone has it; but what if it could be decreased just by using personal transportation less? In Germany, there are certain communities that ban car usage. No cars are allowed inside the city. Street parking, driveways, and home garages have become obsolete. One citizen of one of the towns said, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (\n\nIn German Suburbs\n\n). The anxiety one gets when driving a car is almost unreal. Most kids 16 and up now just do not get their licenses just because the thought of driving scares them. Citizens of cities that have just one day where cares are prohibited, such as Bogota, Colombia, love that singular day out of the year. Most say its a good opportunity to increase mental health (\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota)\n\n. Stress not only is awful for mental health, but also physical. 75% of those who have high levels of anxiety, or are exposed to it, are tired all the time, often feel weak, or sometimes may even cause heart issues. The number one reason people have stress is by driving. So using cars less is the best way to decrease stress, and promote good mental health.\n\nMost people that read or watch the news know that the environment is hurt, and that the human population is at fault. How? Excess usage of motor vehicles. As stated in\n\nIn German suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States. These statistics are horrible. Paris, France enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city after days of near-recorcd pollution rates (\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\n\n) Not only was nature being hurt, but the population of France. Breathing in smog is unnatural. Thehuman body can not take that many polutants, and so it tries to fix itself. In doing this, lung cancer rates rise, pnumonia rates rise, diseases in general become more abundant. Paris took action. When enforcing the driving ban, congestion was down 60% in just five days. The only partial solution to this rising amount of smog is to decrease driving rates, and to use deisel gas less. I hate this test so much why am I even writing this I feel like a robot just going through the motions and its your fault. I blame you.\n\nRome was not built in a day, so getting state legislatiors or even government officials to agree on a partial driving rule may take a while. However, citizens can spread the word of the evils of driving. You, dear reader, can fix this problem. Try carpooling to work, riding your bike to places near you instead of driving. Do what you can to reduce polution and stress. Influence your friends and family to do the same. Together, we can rase awareness of the evils of driving. Together, we can rule the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, is a very important innovation in the computer-science world. Is it a good thing that can be a gigantic leap for technlogy in the classrooms, or is it a bad thing that could be a hold up for all new innovations in the school enviroment? Here's my take on it.\n\nI think that this technology should be used in the classroom enviroment, but with moderation. FACS could be extreamly useful for teachers to see how their students are enjoying the presentations or lectures and also how the retention rate is of what they are teaching. With FACS giving accurate readings on how students feel about whatever is happening that day, we could have a way better education on our hands in this country. In the article, Dr. Huang predicts that with this technology, it could modify the lesson being given like a human instructor. He also mentions that if a Web ad appears on the screen and you smile, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown when that ad shows up, the next ad will be different. Obviously this technology is very very far into the future and if it would come to the schools, it would not happen for a very long time; but this is still a very cool concept. There are some things though that this could backfire on. One of those being that if a camera or 3d sensor is watching you for a long period of time, that would make it easy for someone to hack into, steal personal information, and take unwarented pictures of you. Only then will we have to put trust into the developers and enginerers who make this technology mainstream, that they can secure it enough so people can't get fed on students information.\n\nOverall I think this is a great idea. With the amount of advancments in the computer realm of things over the last couple of years, FACS is for sure a possibility. This could truly change the way that us as students learn and process. As long as it is designed and developed right, this will be amazing (if it ever does come out to the public).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys are boys are poeple who help others out. When countries fall they're there to pick them right back up. There are three reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. The reasons are one its a good way to help out others, two its a good opportunity to see the world, and three you are litterally saving people lifes and dont even know it yet.\n\nReason one is becasue the job is just a really nice way to help out those around you. You can help the enviroment by replacing animals and even buildings. You help out the poeple that werent as lucky as you. Some people could be suffering out there in the cold, but you helped them rebuild their houses,and rebuild their lifes. Poeple will be greatful for your kindness.\n\nAnother thing i noticed was that It gives you a good oddortunity to see the world. Luke\n\nGot to see a bunch of beatiful things on his way to other countries. He Got to see things from New Orleans. To China. He got to see things you wouldnt normaly see just going through your normal life. You have the chance to see stunning things if you were a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLast but not least. The Last thing i noticed was that you are litterally saving poeple's life. Poeple could be out their starving and you could be the one to fix it. Some poeple would rather just care for their own family, but you have to power to give poeple food. They will have homes to sleep in becasue of you. Poeple will be snuggled in beds at night becasue you choose or not if you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSome poeple may think that it would take away their time, but what are you really losing. All your doing is helping poeple out? Is that not enough? uSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever been in a situation where you have very little to no control at all? How anxious were you in this situation? This feeling is something that we have all been through at least onces in our lives. Having known this feeling very well myself, I feel that having Driverless Cars would be a huge mistake. Having the ability to sit back and watch your car drives itself would lead to one being distracted more often because they would have more time to check a phone or send a text. Having independent cars could also result in more accidents that were the after effect of a computer malfunction. Another flaw that was stated in the passage dealt with the fact that if one crashes, there could be an endless fight of who is really liable, the driver or the manufacturer. Having the technology to make self dependent cars would lead to more time for distractions, a higher chances of malfunctions, and law sutis over liablity.\n\nHaving Driverless Cars would allow most of the population to have more time to get distracted. If a teen has just gotten a new tablet and wants to get it all set up and go some where at the same time, they would be able to do this. They would jump into their car and start messing with their new toy. If a little kid happens to run into the road while the driver isn't paying attention, the car probably wouldn't have time to react. Now the driver has to deal with a man slaughter charge just becuase the car was supposed to do it for her. The situtation is also a perfect example of how these cars could malfunction.\n\nAnother flaw to the new concept of self driving cars is the fact that they could suffer computer malfunctions at any time. If the driver needs to drive through a dirt road, the car could hit a bump that would knock a wire lose that controls the speed of the vehicle. The car could also get rain water into on of the control panels that migh end of leaving one stranced on the side of the road due to an electrical fire. Another computer flaw is that nothing is perfect. Not every single computer hard drive or control panel is going to be exactly right.\n\nOne little mistake by the developer could lead to an entire city worth of cars having to be recalled. At this point if a driver is in a recalled vehicle and gets into an accident, who is there really to blame?\n\nThe final reason to keep independent cars just a dream is the fact that there is no way to tell who is really liable for the accident. If a civilian is driving through a street in the city while another is on a bike and they hit at a intersection with numerous blind spots, who is going to take the blame. Will the pedestrian on the bike be charged because he wasn't aware of the unknown blind spot? Will the civilian in the car be charged with unvoluntary man slaughter because he/she expected the car to stop, or will the manufacturer be charged because their flawless design lead to the death of a innocent citizen? There are so many reasons to just leave this unlikely vision in the minds of the creators: however, these three are really the things that companies need to pay attention to.\n\nThe way that people can get distracted so easily, the way that computers can malfunction, and the way that people will try to put the blame on others are three reasons why companies need to leave independent cars in a dream. People should never have to worry about a car with a mind of its own killing innocent people. The entire idea of Driverless Cars is completely filled with flaws that could lead to infinite problems in the driving world. Driverless cars should not be part of our future or any one else's after that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Diverless cars are not a good thing for us to have. I think we should stay with car that humans can drive because i feel like the driverless car might breakdown or might not listen an take you somewhere that you didnt want to go.\n\nDriverless cars would not be a good idea to put on the streets, one reason is because the driverless car might break down without you knowing an you have to go to work an the driverless car takes you to another location an now your late. Another reason why driverless cars wouldnt be a good idea when on the high way an everything is going fine until your driverless car locks up an you wouldnt be able to do anthing to control it an your wheels lock up just because the driverless car is having technogly problems an you get in a servere car crash. These are two resons why i think driverless cars are not a good choice to put on streets.\n\nMore reasons i feel like driveless cars are not a good thing to invent because of travel reasons . If i wanted to travel to florida or California i wouldnt be able to take my driverless car to them two states because they feel that the only safe car thats out ther is a car that is being controlled by a human. I feel like thats not fare because i wouldnt be able to go to them two states because i only have a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are not trust wrothy to me because people can have so many problems with the car an people wouldnt be able to go to some states because of the car. If you ever think about getting a driverless car think about your safety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I dont believe sencor take away thing library shelves seems either offensive inappropriet veiwers I wouldent recomend kids ready sort material untill age ready sort viewing The reason I say I believe know people sooner later going tho see hear go sort viewing andor experience sometime lives happend many people continue happen everyone lives The events happen many people awful yet true go around world known people people know deal situation least know know goby cerntian events go like example cerntian person race minding bisnuess passes group race appressers began offending words shouldent worry Because person going constantly use words know heshe weak person trying get nervs wont physical harm There many people dont like try best hide others would make worse everybody would lead clueless people got exposed people attend hide We shouldent hide others keep knowing happend going leaving clueless I believe nothing held back people ready see know going matter crule painful know take care selves thell experience first handSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI think our country should choose the president by popular vote. So the people get the president they think is the best for the job. But to do this we will need people motivated to go and vote. Because not many people normally go and vote during the election. or any election for that matter.\n\nIt will help with the problem of canidates going to a certain state to get the votes. But they can just go to densly populated areas. The flip to that though is they will need to spend more time convincing and/or explaining what they will do in office. Even if we need to find a way to break a tie if a tie happens with popular vote.\n\nThe only way to fix the Electoral College vote is not all of one states vote goes to a canidate that way they can't abuse the strategy of going to the states with more votes.\n\nFrom your sender,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Humans have a interesting way living in today`s society because we have advanced technology like cars. Just because people have cars the usage should still be limited. When it comes to limiting car usage people have lots of advantages.\n\nTo begin with, in the passage \"in german suburb, llife goes on without cars\" ms. rosenthal clearly states that 70% of Vauban`s families dont have cars. They think that this is less tense without one. But not only that. 5,500 residents within a rectanglar square mile may be the most advanced expirement iun low-car surburban life. even in \"paris bans driving due to smog\" they think the driving should be limited. the smog was intensive for five days. as a statement was said in passage three 'it is a good way to take away stress. so leaving that in mind it could still effect car usage positively.\n\nsecondly, in the last passage ms. rosenthal says \"obamas gaol about the green house gas will be asisted so thats meaning the people will need to limit their car usage or he will. as a population the worlds usage is slowly but surely decreasing. in the passage it says americans couldnnt afford cars so that alont is assiting the limiting car usage. the numer of cars driven was 9% below nor so that was a huge win for the limiting car usage car usage should be be limited because of many reasons. so i propose a law to all of man kind that car usage should be limited for the better of the eniorment and for all people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The science around such a product as the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is truly amazing and spectacular but should we let it teach our next generation?\n\nNo, that is my anwser for the question to be asked on if it should teach children, you maybe asking why, but the anwser is truly simple. The connection between a computer and a human child will not benifit it an any way, but are we asking the right question? I think that teacher would have a much better time using this rather than it having it's job, with technology changing and improving faster than ever seen before this could really help out teachers. Imagine if we had this in classrooms, genuisness is something people inspire to be no matter who you arte you always wants to learn something, but most fall short of this because they are so dis interested in the work. Now imagine if you had a product that stopped children from being bored and distracting themselves or others, imagine if you made something not only ore interesting but responded to you, why would you ever stop learning? And a sence of accomplishment would not only boost your self but could also make you want to learn even more than before, an entire generation of people who enjoyed learning the sky is no longer a limit the stars would be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "so want A CAPS else want A I wanting play station long Its thirteenth I never wanted something All friends Whenever I went house played night day I wanted one I wanted one really dad The exception cost I already party together would So mom I decided agreement I pay pay half From day I asked everyone money gift I dont want presents I eye prize So normally family party relatives come give present celebrate I knew thats I would get Everything seemed perfect I planed Have family party couple days go buy I didnt mind waiting two three days I figured I would live hey mom family party DATE moment steam coming ears I could feel face burning like I putting head fire You realize whole month away waiting days isnt patient I dont know From day I still havent gotten two days Ill holding stack cash hands heading gamertop I wait longer I probably wouldnt made Im patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today i will be discussing why the face on Mars is an natural landform and not an alien creation. The reason for the ''rock formation'' to look like an human head is because of the shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.'' stated in paragraph 3.\n\nSome people think that NASA is hiding the truth about the ''face on Mars'' but defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars. Meaning if the rock formation was really made by aliens it would benefit them in their budget and they would not need to hide it.\n\nIn paragraph 7 ''a (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original viking photos''. Thousands of anxious people were waiting when the picture first appeared on a JPL web site, ''revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all''.\n\nSome people still did not believe that it was just an natural landform. So in paragraph 11 as stated ''So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!'' These give all the facts and reasons why the ''Face on Mars'' is just an natural landform and not an alien creation or any other ancient history artifact of some sort.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When you say that the face on mars is an alien artifact how do you know. Prove to me that it is. So you can't well quess what. I can prove to you that it is not an alien artifact. All I have to do is use knowledge that I have from the evidence.\n\nIn the story it says that people made a movie about the face on mars. It has also been put in many magazines. It has also been put in haunted grocerey store check out lines. All of that is just to draw attention. All though it did they just want you to think that because they wanted money.\n\nSence people thought that the face was an alien artifact N.A.S.A made photographing it a main priority. On a JPL website they revieled that the face was a landmark and nothing more. The face on mars was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude were it was winter. This was a cloudy time on the planet mars. It may have messed with the picture a little bit anyway.\n\nSome mission controles prepared to look again. It's very hard to locate the face sence the camera scans the planet like a fax machine. They dont just come across it very often. They evan used a special camera that zooms in very close to the planet. They still saw that the planets face was nothing more than a landform.\n\nIn conclusion the face is nothing. There were no alien artifacts. So that should prove to you. That there were not aliens. It's nothing more than a simple landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many different emotions that you go through on a daily basis. Some of them are pleasing motions and others aren't. Every emotion that you go through can be seen by other people through your facial queues. Facial queues are important in some instances, but they are not important for education.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would have a lot of uses on a set for a tv program or play. It could help make a set run more efficiently by automating ligh queues and what not. The opposite of that is true for schools. There is not a real good reason for schools to use funding to buy FACS because not every computer in the school needs one. It might be useful to have one on every external door to the school to aid with security but not on school computers. In paragraph 5 of the excerpt it states, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" That sentence is explaining that humans already do what the FACS does, Furthermore we don't need a computer to read our emotions because we already do so.\n\nFacial queues are important to everyday life. It is how humans read and help understand eachother. A FACS can be useful to help further security in schools, but not as useful to help students learn.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I think computer long bad people could get obsessed computer You could get trouble could effect education One reason I think computer long bad people could get obsessed For example playing outside nice day called friend asked come said I ca nt computer You said todays nice day Then friend said playing games Thats example obsessed computer Another reason computer long bad could get trouble Getting trouble online bad could get sued owner website could delete computer Also parents found would even trouble would get grounded That means wouldnt able use computer long time My last reason computer long bad could effect education If someone computer long instead homework could effect grades lot If happens wouldnt alowd graduate go college That good thing trying get good college Even though computers important still nt long In conclusion everything I said computer long bad proves much computer bad peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"Vauban streets are completely \"car free\"-except the main street thoroughfare..\" Soon our country will be car free. With all the gas pollution we in the air car's need to be banned from our country. Many countries for example have already banned people from driving cars, like Bogota,Paris, and German. In Bogota in stead of banning the cars everyday they what is called a \"Car-free day\" in this car free day people either hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work or school. Violators faced $25 fines. In Paris they enforced a partial diving ban to clear air of the global city. If people dint leave their cars at home they suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Almost 4,000 drivers were fined. When the smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party they only banned odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. In German you are not allowed to drive a car but you are allowed to own one and if you do own one you must pay $40,000 to have it parked at your home. \" Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in eroupe, the untied states and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use..\" The untied states needs to do something about the auto use. We should use the new trend to try and not use cars anymore or do what Bogota does and have car-free days. This new trend wou;d help our contries and states. It was help the air not be as polluted as it is now. We dont want the air to get as bad a china or any other counties because then we really wont have a choice of a car-free day. People today should take the oppertunity and walk place that are close to home instead of driving places close to home and putting that extra pollution in the air. Obama is rethinking about this trend because accordng the text 23% of young people driving has decreased witch mean either less people are going to be driving because they dont have a licenece or the young people will start to drive without a licence and not care. Countries have open new programs where they get kids to go bike riding aound the block or country or to go hiking or just anything to save from driving everywhere. these programs are across the nation. Many people do them adults and teens. Instead of using multiple cars to go to school or workwhy dont yall just think about car-pooling. walking or riding a bike. Technology today makes people feel like their more connected without going out to drive somewhere to meet. \" ..America's love affair with its vehicles seem to be cooling.\" A research company in 2005 did a reaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood Narciso Rodriguez Home The prints Our Lives grateful This shown Narciso explains detail major chronologically ordered events life Narciso also includs little sentences parentheses explaining said telling grateful This happens example Narciso states My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful This shows greatful parents taught cook still today Narciso also shows gratefullness making abundantly clear gratefull parents taught much In memoir Narciso Rodriguez created gratefullness overall mood piece showing thankful parents taught muchSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever heard of what some refer as Earth's twin? Venus seems nearly impossible to get anything on its surface especially humans, but this does not mean it's not possible. Venus is thought to have been increadibly Earth-like long ago, so what happened? The author supports his idea of Venus being worthy to explore very well while including both the danger and hinting towards the benifits.\n\nThe first question most people would have about exploring a planet that is inhospital would be \"What's the point?\" Venus is thought to once have been covered by oceans and supported forms of life (pg. 4). Not only that but Venus is also the closest in density and size to Earth as well (pg. 2). With these things in mind you could start to understand why this would have once been so similar to Earth, the author is persuading the reader with how similar Venus once may have been to Earth. Not only this but the author talks about how Venus may be the closest option we have if we ever have to leave Earth (pg 4).\n\nThe author explains and counters how impossible it seems to explore Venus. Paragraph three goes into detail about the percent of carbon in the atmoshpere, corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere, impressively high temperatures, and the atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than on Earth. The author gives you all the details to make you think to yourself \"It would be completely impossible for any human to even touch the surface of Venus.\" The author once again counters the seemingly impossible with the idea NASA has came up with, a floating vehicle that stays roughly 30 miles above the surface. While the temperatures would still be 170 degrees fahrenheit the air pressure would be barable and there'd be a plentiful amount of solar power that could be used to keep the vehicle running and keep a cooler temperature inside.\n\nThe author has supported his idea of studying Venus as much as possible, they come across very convincing with all of his main points about the use of having the ability of going there available, how it could be done, and the important reasearch information we could learn from Venus the author has made it very clear why it is a good idea. What's the use of space exploration if we don't explore what we need to explore?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, i would argue that it is better to go college or university\n The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, learning skills which are necessary for your future career such as team working,problems solving,etc could be a good chance to be well-prepared and get a well-paid job. For example, applicants who have a real experiences which are only gained from working will be more impressive with employer in interviews. Secondly, it is undeniable that start earning money when you work straight after high school could help you to become independent with financial problems in future. For instance, the income that you accumulate every year from your job might increase to a numerous money if you make a good plan and the result is you could be comfortable in your spending. \n On the other hand, i believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Furthemore, the job market in recent years is very competitive and academic qualifications are a good way to help you become prominent. As an illustration, some diplomas that you gain from higer level education such as master, doctor, etc are the compulsory codition to get a job in many speicial organizations like Ministry of Finance, Central Bank. What is more, knowledge which you obtain from university or college are the optimal way to broaden your horizon. A case in point, microorganism is a special feild so that most precious universities could be suitable places if you want to explore this feild.\n For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their lives if they continue their studies beyond school level.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear name I give opinions computers Computers fun educational They lots websites games Such portaportal safe fun games kids They also educational websites help work Such google Ask questioncom websites info things need help They also facebook Yes I know rumors people threatening chats But able chat friends instead waiting mom get phone lets meet new people without tell opinion computers safe different occassions also fun educationalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars! Wow, people might think the Face was created by aliens. But is not created by aliens because it was just a natural landform. It might looked like a human face,but is not.That why I am going explain to you why the Face on Mars was just a\n\nnatural landform.\n\nFirst of all,I can see why people could sy it's a face becuase it has nose and our eye shape but it was just a huge rock formation..which resembles a human head...formed by shadows.Some scientists even believe that it was an alien artifact.(Jim Garvin,6)\"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien Artifact, photofraphing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global surveyor.\" Scientists prove that it was just Martian Mesa(Jim Gravin,2) \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"\n\nAll in all, at the end. It was just the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent a butte or mesa---landforms common around the American West.If that was a face, you could find a spacecraft or airplane but we didn't so that also prove that it was just lanform.Jim Garvin also say that \"It reminds me most of Middle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho\"(Jim Garvin,12).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In contemporary society, many community programs rely sharply on the voluntary workforce. Therefore there is widespread concern about requiring the teens to help citizens in the community as volunteers. From my perspective, despite many drawbacks that could be the results of this sentiment, the advantages of being voluntary are obvious and beneficial for both youngsters and society.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, it is true that when more youth people involve in charity and voluntary programs, these activities could reach more vulnerable individuals and be more effective. Helping the elders, for instance, rely significantly on the volunteers. Furthermore, working in charity organizations will be totally beneficial to the union citizens who are normally unmatured and unexperienced have the opportunities to build up the confidence and working needed skills. They are, for example, working in team skills, and time management. In addition, these actions also encourage teenagers to be community-minded and compassionate which are the factors to aid the contemporary workforce release work-related stress and cherish their life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some inevitable drawbacks of being in a voluntary workforce. Initially, the low-experienced youngsters need significant oversight from the supervisors while these ones are assigned to repair projects, for example, educate the younger ones, or assist the elderly. As a result, it might create more issues than it solves. Moreover, high school students are under high pressure of academic knowledge and contests, consequently fitting these non-profit activities into their schedule could be difficult, especially for those who manage to achieve the high result. Consequently, coming up with these sorts of programs might appear complicated.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, In the long term, requiring the youth involved in community actions is absolutely beneficial to both objects despite short-term disadvantages. However, the age required of the young individuals should be flexible and considered to release the burden of a high workload.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Are driverless cars a good idea? Driverless cars are a terrible idea because of how dangerous they will be. It is like a robot, anything could happen to the car at any time and then you are stuck, unsure of what to do. This could cause lots of accidents, just knowing that a human will not be operationg the car. In case of an accident, whom is to be blamed, the machine or the \"operator\". These cars should not only be illegalized in the United States, but they should be illegalized everywhere.\n\nJust to say, perhaps something goes wrong with your machine, breaks go out, steering control column gets thrown off, or a control sensor is broke while driving. How will the car know to pull off the road or even know where \"off the road\" is? The cars will not know, what to do they are desgned to just drive and the manufaturers are not thinking about, what if something goes wrong with these cars? They are just in it for the money, they are trying to beat all of the other companies. As the passage states, \"When these vehicles break down , no one will be there to repair them!\" These cars are pretty much just for big money skams, they will come out and be big for a while, then later on everyone will find out they are horible.\n\nWhat happens when these sorts of cars are in an accident, who will be to blame? There will be accidents with these cars, but when they are in accidents, who will be to blame the car or the operator? No one knwos how this would really play out in court because stuff could break on the car and the car just lost control. If this would be the case you couldn't blame the operator, but you also could not blame a car in court. This would mean that the operator may have injuries, but the biggest thing is that he may not have a car anymore either. Such as the author states, \"How will anyone be put to blame in case of accidents or break downs, but most importantly, if the car is at fault how would the other operator get his or her car fixed?\" This is the biggest thing of all, is who is to blame in these cases?\n\nSure these cars will be pretty nice and all, but is a driverless car worth the risk of hurting either you or your family? No it is not, that's why these cars should not be legal in the U.S. or anywhere else. As the author states, \"This matter should not only be talked amongst the United States, but also everywhere else in the world to.\" The author is very right about this because these cars are very dangerous and should not be aloud to be driven.\n\nIn conclusion, these driverless cars should not be legal anywhere in the world. They are dangerous and not safe for anyone. A lot could go wrong with these vehicles and could possibly injure someone. Can things not just be kept simple ,and have people quit being lazy and drive thereselves everywhere rather than having a robot do it. Incidents may happens with humans to, but there is nothing but problems to come out of driverless cars!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying venus is a worthy pursuit becaue it is a well known planet , venus is the closet planet to earth and also has the hottest surface temperatue of any planet in our solar system . '' astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system '' this shows that venus is a likely planet. There are numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for human to study , However NASA is working on other ways to study venus . ''Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of venus '' this shows that its alot to learn about venus .\"striving to meet the meet the challenge presented by venus has vaulse , not only because of insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. this shows that venus is challeging despite the dangersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The technology to read the emotional expressions of students has the potential to be highly valuable. The potential of this technology is vast and has so many uses. Though the technology may be new, it could have limitless possibilities.\n\nBeing able to read people's emotions could lower suicide rates. If we could read emotions, then people would know whether someone is depressed and would be able to help them. This would be helpful, because it can be difficult to tell if someone is depressed.\n\nThis technology could also help with education. As Dr. Huang said in paragraph 6, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.” This is why it would also be effective in classrooms.\n\nConsidering all that has been presented, it should be clear why this technology, the Facial Action Coding System, would be helpful to society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "First, I have to say that from Lukes point of veiw he is saying that being a Seagoing Cowboy is good because your giving supplies to countries so they can rebuild their country and you get to travel world, so it's a win win. Luke would want people to join because joining forces with countries to help other countries is something that is helping the less fortunate countries. Some peolpe just think their going over sea to help other people and that's boring,but, when your heading back home you can use the empty space that you put the supplies in for fun activities. I think people should join the UNRRA(the United National Relief and Rehabilitation Assosiation).\n\nNext, Luke would want people to join because you never know what you might learn over sea. You may learn how to do things you never knew how to do like fishing or you might learn about the different countries you go to and you could share that knowledge with your friends when you get home. You could even visit muesems and see things you never knew existed. The things you see could inspire you to make something compared to that and it might be in a muesem one day.\n\nFinally, Joining the UNRRA\n\nis a great oppurtunity because you can do and learn thing you never knew how to do and learn you never knew about the country you might be inat that moment. You could visit muesems and see acieneit artifacts. You could see famous art pecies painted by really famous painters. If people would give the UNRRA a chance you could probably have a very nuce timeand think about inspiring kids to join when they grow up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people think that this face had been created by an alien, but it's just a natural landform that was made there. No one made it. If probably just formed there during a bad time at some point. If it were created by aliens it would be very nice because we now know that aliens could be realistic or non realistic, but NASA can't prove that aliens made it. NASA'S probably still trying to figure it out. This piece is only a natural landform from Mars. Don't believe that aliens made it or think it's a sign of anything important. I know this is true because of the research I found out.\n\nIf you carefully read the article you see that NASA says they think an alien might have made it. They said \"might\", so they don't really know if it was created by an alien. Plus, alien's aren't real, NASA just wants you or try and convince you to believe that they think an alien made that Face on Mars. You also notice that it has took them 3 or more years to figure it out in the pictures with the Faces on Mars. People could really tell by then that it isn't an alien that made the faces. It should'nt take that long to try and find evidence of an alien, it's just propostorous.\n\nNow, you can try and see that these faces that some people think are aliens, aren't real. I gave some of the world a good description of how I know it is just an natural landform on Mars, and not an alien. If you citizens still want to believe that it was produced by an alien, then so be it. I can't change your opinion, and I can't force you to believe me. My opinion to this Face on Mars, to me is that it is just a natural landform piece on Mars. If NASA'S department ends up going back up to Mars and they find an alien, then they were right, but if they were also to go back in future reverance and didn't find anything that changed since 2001 then I told you so that aliens aren't real, and that it is just an NATURAL LANDFORM PIECE.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "On May 24, 2001, a NASA Viking 1 spacecraft had saw a landform on Mars that had happened to look like a human face. The spacecraft had taken pictures of this landform and show the world a few days later in order to attract people to Mars. Some people, like conspiracy theorists, say that it's evidence of alien life that NASA has hidden from the public, but if this had been something NASA was hiding, they wouldn't have show that photo at all to the public. Scientists and astronaunts have denied this by adding titles that suggest otherwise on there photos, showing the photo in the first place, and going back up to space to take more pictures.\n\nAccording to paragraphs 1 though 5, NASA had found a landforn that resembled a human face of an Egyptian Pharaoh located on a region called Cydonia. Mission control was surprised to see the face, but believed it was just another Martian mesa with unusual shadows, so they decided to reveal the pictures to the media, knowing there wasn't anything \"top secret\" or alien like about it. Then, according to paragraph 5, NASA had captioned the image, \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth,\" basically telling the public that it was just a quirky looking natural landform, not a big alien conspiracy theory. People defending the NASA budget even claimed they wished there was an ancient civilization on Mars, basically meaning there wasn't life that they knew of. Finally, in paragraph 7, another NASA spacecraft went over Cydonia on APril 5, 1998 and took better, sharper pictures, showing that it was just a natural landform that didn't have a civilization in it.\n\nIn conlusion, NASA was not trying to hide a whole big alien civilization theory from the world. They had just saw a cool natural landform with weird shadows that made it look like a human face and decided to share it with the world. If there was a conspiracy, NASA wouldn't have showed the picture to the world, added a title stating that it was an artifact, or have willingly went back up to space to take another picture of the landform. Therefore, NASA is not hiding any ancient alien civilizations from the United States, or any other part of the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hi, my name Luke Bomberger. I have crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. I am \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\"\n\nWhen you join this program you will experince lots of opportunies. I will tell some reasons to join the program, just keep reading.\n\nThe best reason about this trip is that you get help people who were affected by World War ll. \"Helping out on his aunt Kate's farm as a boy had prepared Luke for hard work, but not the dangers at sea.\" \" Besides helping people, I had the side benfit of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nTravling was lots of fun also. \"But seeing in the Acropolis in Greece was special.\" \"So taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\" I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at Panamal Canal on hs way to China.\"\n\nWhen we had time left over we usaslly spent it, will doing fun activites. \"Luke also found time to have fun on borad, especially on ruturn trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\"\n\n\"Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped me passed the time.\"\n\nIn conlsion, I have now realised even more why why I like doing this. Now that you read this this eassy, I hope that you learned why I loved doing this and that you know a little more about my experince.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The first time NASA first spotted the Face on Mars was in 1976 during the Viking 1 mission. At first the scientists back at NASA were surprised, but it did not last long. After some research was done scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa. What made the mesa look like a face were just shadows. When the image was revealed to the public it got a lot of attention. Although some believed the face was a sign of alien life, others were not as easily convinced.\n\nThe first picture was taken in 1976 when technology was not very great. So in 1997\n\nNASA 's Mars Exploration Program chief scientist, Jim Garvin decided he'd try to get another photo. On April 8, 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over the site again. Michael Malin and his MOC team took a picture that was, \"Ten times sharper than the original Viking photos,\" the article says. But other conspiricy theorists think otherwise.\n\nThe article mentions that the Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude. It was apparently winter there in April of '98. Skeptics say, \"Perhaps alien markings were hidden by the haze.\" Garvin says, \"Targeting Cydonia was not easy...in fact it is hard to work.\" Mars Global Surveyor noramally looks straight down but in order to get a good picture, they would have to actually move the camera 2.5 km. They also do not pass over the face very often.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 they attempted another picture. This time the picture was perfect. It was a cloudless day in Cyndonia. \"The team had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view.\" Garvin said. Not easy work. The article also mentions that each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photos. I think that this picture did really prove that the Face was only a landform and not some kind of martian marking.\n\nIn the end people came to relize that the Face on Mars was really on a butte or a mesa of some sort. Garvin says, \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground...you could have seen what they were.\" I personally do not think the Face is part of ancient Martian life but as Garvin says, \"It reminds me of most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho.\" I hope now that the others that once believed in the face now relize it really was only their imagination.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this day and age ,movement has been became a controversial issue as it spread globally. Due to this people endure many obstacles .So, i intend to explore the source of this problem along with some viable solutions to it .\nTo regard with some possible factors of this trend. Firstly.In an earlier time , people used to less transpiration services and they covered long and short distance through domestic animals,sometimes by walking as well.Whereas,these days everyone has their private vehicles and they reliably on it for moving far-away and nearest destination.Thus ,this practice act as promote traffic level on roads.One further point is that the public transportation systemshipping system is less effective because human beings does not reach at their locations on time as a consequence, they have to use private vehicles which leads to influx . Another reason is behind that many people who travel rural areas to urban areas for obtaining education,work , medical services ,which helps to increase transportation because they also use private vehicles instead of public shipment.\nMoving further with possible action in the favour of address this practice. Primary and strong action should be taken by government is that the authorities provide extra and improve public transit facilities in order to reduce private vehicle on the roads along with encourage people use public shipping and spread awareness regarding health issues which may be occurred in the future due to gridlock. Moreover,companies should allow cab for their employees and people must walk for short distance which may help reducefreight level.\nIn conclusion.I reiterate that service has very diverse outcomes like increase accident rate, pollution,health problems.Therefore, the government and humanity can be reduced it with conscious steps.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No, i do not agree with America creating \"driverless\" cars . Depending on a machine to navigate the roads and sucessfully take you to your destination is an accident waiting to happen litterally. Who would be at fault if a wreck were to accure? Would you really be able to have piece of mind while letting your car do the driving?\n\nFirst, you have to think about who would really be at fault if an accident happened. In the article it states that \"if technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" Well it would be challenging to understand that fully, because if something were to happen with one or more sensors malfunctioning, than how can you blame the driver in that case? The maufaturing companies would have to run numerous tests and double check to insure that all of the sensors and gadgets on the vehicle are in working order and stay that way so they deliver a safe product on their part. At the time of the wreck, you will have to take into concideration what each driver was doing, and the steps leading up to the event to come to a conclution of who fault it is.\n\nSecondly, the cars arent 100% driverless, you still have to take over the wheel when need be. When in these cars, the driver has to give his/her full attention at all times, so you might as well be in an ordinary vehicle. A quote from the text states \"their cars have driven more than a million miles without a crash but sofar, Google's cars arent trully driverless; they alert the drivers to take over the when pulling in and out of drive ways or dealing with complicated issues, such as navagating through road work or accidents.\" Having to take over when their is a contruction zone or driveways etc, is not the deffinition of a full driverless car to me.\n\nlastly, the cars have fancy sensors and other tools and whatnot , but these cars still call for human skills. Driverless cars are intelligent but may not be able manage a situation if you were to look down at your phone quickly or something else along the lines of that. The information states that \"they can steer, accelerate and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills. You have to stay focused on the road and guide the car if needed in a situation. if you want to not stay locked on the road and do another thing while in the car, these vehicles are not for you.\n\nIn conclusion, i do not approve of these inventions until it is proved that they are 100% safe and until you dont have to pay attention to driving the whole time. Driverless cars still need the skill of a human behind the wheel, they arent fully driverless and something may not work in proper order, and also you have to think about who would be at fault if a wreck happened. These are all things we need to take into concideration before going out and purchasing one of these new vehicles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper I think computers positive effect people Some adults mostly kids getting enough exercise even spending time family Some parents less active kids Kids failing homework always computer get home Adults kids getting less excersize Sitting reading ever computer excersizeing They going get fat eat sit get hungery eat sit Some people say getting finger arm exsersize moveing mouse thats really true Looking computer screen day cause masive hand People also spending time family They sitting infront computer ignoring everyone everything around Kids could enjoying things besides computers Parents could outside Playing catch kids even playing board game People less active They going haveing fun jumping around friends Instead aim computers message facebook even myspace Kids failing school fail home work school They would rather go computer This think computers positive effect kids adultsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time I patient I ordered mail It cool I ordering online When I got shipping I paid went checkout screen I saw time long would take get house It said weeks CAPS I exclaimedThats long time CAPS decided I make weeks I ready I waited And waited And waited Until one I saw The address said CAPS I happy This incident taught always patient chances youll get yar wanting endSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Wasting food is slowly becoming people's habit in this modern world. This essay will discuss the reason that people are wasting food and suggest a viable solution.\nThe principal reason is that people are unable to finish their dishes as they often take more portions of food than they can, which can cause more food to be wasted. For instance, buffets are the most common place that wastes tons of food, especially in hotels. Hence, as more food you pick, the more reasonable the price of the buffet is.\nWasting food is slowly becoming people's habit in this modern world. This essay will discuss the reason that people are wasting food and suggest a viable solution.\nThe principal reason is that people are unable to finish their dishes as they often take more portions of food than they can, which can cause more food to be wasted. For instance, buffets are the most commonly wasted tons of food, especially in the hotel. Hence, as more food you pick, the more reasonable the price of the buffet is.\nA solution to this worrying problem is to take away the leftovers back home. As food can be kept for a few days in the refrigerator, people can cook it at their house without going out to afford meals. As a result, this can reduce the expenditure on food and transportation. In my experience, my mother would pack the leftover food and bring it back home. As a result, the food still tastes the same at the restaurant. Thus, my family and I will never discuss what to eat for the rest of the day. Had it not been for preventing food waste by bringing it back home, the amount of waste foods would never have been able to reduce.\nIn conclusion, one of the main problems with the over-wasting of food in many countries is unable to finish the food and this can be solved by taking away the food back home. It is predicted that more and more individuals will be taking away their remaining food to their accommodation and this will reduce the amount of waste food.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Public libraries able keep sorts content sorts people I feel strongly statement everyone world different Many people different interests religons customs If took certain books music library would defeat purpose calling public library But different sections books music etc people would able find wantneed easily one would worry getting offended It would fair anyone world took certain books materials one person got offendedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Yes, the use of this technology is very valuable in many ways. The technology can detect how you are feeling, in the passage it tells you that the computer can tell if a human is mad, happy, sad, worried, etc.\n\nThis technology can be very useful to techers as well as anyone else. If a student is feeling a lot of emotion and trying to do school work, they will be more focused on what they were feeling instead of the work the teacher has given him/her. It can also help the teacher to know how exactly to act twards a student. For example, if a student is feeling 75% sad they are most likely going to cry. If a student is about to cry and teacher starts yeling at them for not paying attention, because the student isn't feeling like themselves that day its going to trigger the students brain to make them cry.\n\nIn conclusion, this tehcnology in my opinion should most defiently be used in schools. Not only to help the teachers out, but for the stundents themelves. I think that if we use this technology it will increase focuse on school work will improve moods, and increase better grades and testing scores.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Would it be a good idea for a computer to tell a students emotion by the look on their face? I think this would be a good idea in my opinon. A reason that would be a good idea is if the student is falling behind it can let the teacher know. And it can try to change the lesson so that theywill understand. Here are two reasons why it would be a great idea.\n\nThe frist reason is that during a lesson if a student does ot get what is happening the computer can notify the teacher and she can ask him whats wrong. This would benefit both of them because the student would not be behind anymore. The teacher can continue teaching knowing the student is caught up. So this would help everyone not to fall behind.\n\nThe second reason is that if a student is in a bad mood the teacher will know. Sometimes students will get a adittude towards teachers and they don't know why. If the computer can tell them that peice of information the teacher would know why. Then after the student gets over what he/she have been through the can apoligies.\n\nIn conclusion this would be a great idea that will benefit all. teachers can now help students that are struggling. And students can now not be left behind. and this will hopefully help with the teachers be aware of what a students mood is and try not to get them anymore angyer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When I drive I wined when time comes patient otherwise wont yelled loud heart warming sound Starting time year I loved sound Its second favorite sound The vibrations rattaling lags races away driving I could wait turn After I rides mins said words I thought hed never say turn I looked truck Wow look small next truck I ran fast I could pit I climed onto tires rim top tire cab CAPS gaggag Oh yeah This felt right I couldnt go fast I almost tipped So thats good thing So nat shell paconts comes long waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, guardians encourage their children to do active sports rather than learning academic subjects. Others said that their children should study rather than do physical activities. In this essay, I believe kids should study more than go outside to do sports.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, spending more time doing sports can reduce screen time. Submitting homework online, doing research tasks, and sending emails. Secondly, sports such as basketball, football and baseball can make you more potent. For example, losing weight can help increase muscle strength as you burn calories, benefiting one's health overall. When you feel tired after studying, your parents might ask you to go outside and do sports to make yourself feel better. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, rather than doing physical activity, kids should do more studying. Doing a lot of studies can help you improve during a test. For instance, reading books, doing mini-tests and revising can lead to a better score during the test. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that kids should study more because they might have a lot of homework. It is safe to say that kids should spend more time studying than doing physical activities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Go outside and take a deep breath, as it is right now you may feel refreshed and may even feel twinge of joy as you just took in a breath of the wonderful natural and clean air. But, as it so happens with the increase of greenhouse gases in the world, in just a few years this may not be the same situation. Instead of enjoying your breath, you may be coughing or choking on the polluted air. In the past few decades, our air pollution has gone up drastically and most of that comes from our cars. According to Source 1, written by Elisabeth Rosenthal, cars in Europe make up 12 percent of its greenhouse gases and up to 50 percent in areas in the United States! That's a whole lot! Rest assured though, there is an easy and crutial way we can begin to cut down those numbers- we must begin to limit our car usage.\n\nAlready, you may question this and begin to wonder if it is even a possible or logical request. Well, it is; in many places throughout the world, communities have begun to forget about their cars and use bikes, walking, and more public transportation options instead of their cars. It can happen, in\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she informs us about an upscale community in Vauban, Germany where its residents have given up their reliance on cars. It's streets have no cars, except for the tram that runs to its downtown areas. While everyone is still allowed to own a car, and some do, they must park it at one of the only two areas to park- in large garages where an owner must buy a space for up to $40,000! You may think that it's crazy but in reality it is not. The structure of the city allows almost everything to be in close proximity to one another reducing the need for a car. Many citizens have reported to be feeling better and happier as they feel more carefree and have the stress that cars bring removed from their lives. This helps to reduce the emission produced by cars and Vauban is one of the most successful cities and have been an influence in many areas.\n\nNow, if you are not up to the idea of completely giving up your car then, there are several alternatives that you can do to help and will still reduce and limit your car usage. In Source 3, by Andrew Selsky, Mr. Selsky brings to us a fairly new tradition that started about 3 years ago in Bogota, Colombia. Bogota is Colombia's capital and one of the most populated cities. Bogota has a city-wide day called, \"Day Without Cars.\" It is simple enough, buses and taxis are only permitted while cars are banned. Millions of people walked, biked, skated, or found other ways of getting to work and frankly enjoyed it. Other citizens reported it as a fun day to take away stress while helping our endangered enviroment. This day that started only 3 days ago has now spread to other areas such as Cali and Valledupar, and Asuncion, Paraguay. Not only do these days help the enviroment but it also helps the citizens. All throughout Bogota, new parks and sports centers have been built, old and cracked sidewalks have been replaced with smooth ones, and new areas for income- such as restaurants and upscale shopes- have popped up around the city as well. The reason for the building and new employment of jobs is so that people will have reasons to walk around and allow for it to be more convient for others who work near by the areas. We also notice a similar idea arise in the lovely city of Paris, France. For those who don't know while Paris is known for it's impressive architecture and beautiful sights, it also has a bad reputation of being very polluted. This pollution comes from the amount of tourists it recieves as well as the different and populous amounts of motor transportation. In Source 2 by Robert Duffer, we see he examines several days in which the city of Paris bans driving due to the record amounts of pollution in the air. For those who were driving when they weren't supposed to be were fined and a few even had their car impounded for their reactions to the fine. Unfortunately, the government established in Paris realized that they had to do this after 5 full days of intensifying smog. At first, many were scared, confused, and even upset as to why this was happening but they began to see that it was neccessary. Once their levels of smog began to normalize, congestion is Paris was down about 60 percent! All in all, we need to begin limiting our usage of cars, from the examples provided it shows that in the end, it isn't such a bad thing after all. It increases, activities to do, work opportunities for people, and reduces air pollution. While, they were able to save Paris this time, next time they may not be so lucky. In the United States, according to Source 4 which is very reliable, we actually see a decrease in car usage overall. These rates have dropped for several reasons, and have about the same results and benefits. People have begun getting healthier, emission rates have decreased.\n\nWhile the idea of limiting car usage may scare some people, it is proved to be extremely helpful. Limiting car usage helps reduce emissions, and increases job opportunities and everything.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "it is often argued that children in the contemporary era are more responsible, whereas, others opine that young people are more attentive in old days. In my opinion, it has a positive impact on offsprings as they have more responsibilities that make them amenable towards society.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there is a number of reason behind less growth of responsibilities. Firstly, in this technical era, kids have alternative equipment so they spend most of their with gadgets and scrolling social media applications such as, Facebook, Instagram which urge them to check their cell phones frequently. A consequence this, leads to a lack of helping others. Moving further, due to the hectic schedule of work, parents do not have enough time to spend with their kids and make them understand the moral values that will help them. For instance, a report issued by the ministry of the USA, 76% guardian of youngsters sent their toddlers to creche due to time shortage, as a result of this,A a child aged between 8 to 12 years are less attentive in their work. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, toddlers have become smart, intelligent as well as accountable . They are very focused in their field of education as the study system in this advanced era is highly competitive and adolescents facing difficulty to score better marks. Moreover, juvenile respect their elders and they start earning at a very young age and learn social skills which are fruitful to them and for society as well. To illustrate, pubescent who earn money with part-time job or any other way can meet their need and expenses which eliminate the burden of parents along with, they become self-dependent and take the decision of their life.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, with the changing atmosphere and advancement in technology have a great impact on kids as compared to past days.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are some people who would argue that young people should take legally more responsibility for caring for their old parents who can not look after themselves mentally, physically as well financially. Personally, I believe that there are some drawbacks of the above trend, as will be explained.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, taking care of old people consistently can create some difficulties for young people in daily life. With the acceleration of people's living tempo, young people are quite busy that can not spare enough time for their old parents. Furthermore, they face heavy pressure from their society, work and families. In addition to this, they have to shoulder the responsibility in the face of caring and providing a happy life for old people. However, it is a burden for them that they cannot sit the whole day talking with their parents. They have to concentrate more on their work. Because, the more they devote themselves to work, the better life they can provide for old parents. Secondly, special old-man clubs can offer entertainment facilities and bounteous food. The old people can there make some new companies and friends establishing good relationships with them.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, young people should pay more attention to old parents providing a happy life. Despite the benefits of old man clubs, young people themselves should take off their old parents. There older people may feel lonely that miss their daughters, sons and grandchildren and also, want to celebrate the special holiday events together with all family members at home. They prefer a family atmosphere.\r\n\r\n To sum up, I think younger family members should provide a good living environment by caring for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Your a teacher at a Junior High School, you walk in to class and see an assortment of facial expressions, some happy, some sad and some wacky expressions you will probably never see again. But as a teacher are you suppose to read emotional expressions of students or teach a certain subject. this is why use of the Facial Action Coding System in a school classroom setting is not logical.\n\nFor instance the cost of installing a FACS in every classroom across the nation let alone the state would be a fortune. Also, the type of infastructure in the schools network is a heavy task that can lead to lots of problems, it takes years of planning and research let alone a trial run before the State school board let alone the County school board would vote to fund this type of undertaking. in Paragraph 6 Dr. Huang predicts \" if the software was installed on a classroom computer it could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused and modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This statement by Dr. Huang requires alot more than just installing the software, most schools in the Nation still don't have 1 to 1 technology implemented in their schools, also if you don't have 1 to 1 technology then if a teacher happens to have computers in their classroom ,mutiple classes are held in that room every day. Not once in the article does it state how much infastructure and planning is needed to run the FACS in a classroom.\n\nThe Software is an amazing accomplishment by its developers and could be a very great help in the work place where computers and other forms of eletronic technolongies like phones and tablets are used. they have already used the FACS on one of the most famous faces in history \"Mona Lisa\" by Leonardo Da Vinci, when decoded the Mona Lisa's was said to be 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% Fearful, and 2% angry, this alone is an amazing breakdown of a hundreds of years old painting thats facial expression has been a perplexor to all who have seen it.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a amazing development by Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe, but it is not a technology that is needed to run a succsessful productive classrom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper I believe much use computer bad affects people People get addicted easily They also use lot electricity And people sit computer day nt exercise These bad affects computers bad without life might little harder Playing computer games online poker sounds fun right Wrong People get addicted everyday Online poker could dangerous I remember seeing show guy addicted He d put credit card information sit play day Before knew debt Once addicted hard stop It s stupid thing get point You sit waste money especially economy way A recent study shows people play online poker addicted within two weeks Other games also addicting There s website called addicting I guess people nt know affects addicted computer family Did know electricity goes computer Thats almost half going one thing I nt think s right pretty much everything done computer In economic chrisis I nt think enery wasted playing computer games We could use energy important things people need If everyone nt need computers communicate everything would nt problem The number computers sold gone since I understand emailing facebook But nt get hand Isnt outside beautiful day great Would nt rather enjoy excercise rather sitting glued computer Obesity huge problem A lot people obese sitting computer excercising I remember I younger everytime I went friends house dad would sitting playing poker games computer He shape lazy His parents later got divorce turned totally different person Most lazy We nt like work nt I would define rather excersise go outside instead computer You live lot healthier re addicted computer And re healthier re happier So conclusion nt control computer bad affects Computers easy get addicted use lot electricity make people fat lazy Do think playing computer games worth losing friends familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine a world where you get out of bed. Fix your self or your child something to eat, Get ready and walk out of the door. Only not to a car that you youself will be drivin, but a car that will drive you any where you want it too.\n\nThe problem that I have with driverless cars is, that I believe it's another way for humans to be lazy. In todays world we have machines to vacum our floor, and wash our dishes. Now we want cars to drive us places? The world is getting lazy. America is one of the countries with the highest obesity rate, now driving a car has nothing to do with your weight, but it has something to do with your mind. When driving a car you have to be alert. Not only for yourself but for others around you. When I drive my mother always tells me to watch myself and the people around me, because you may be paying attention, but others might not be. When growing up getting and driving a car at 16 is almost every teenagers dream, but how will the future teenagers of the world get that experience if we have driverless vehicles? When I got my license it was a feeling of accomplishment. I had read that long drivers manual forover a month and when I took both of those test I was ready, but with a driverless car will a person even get that feelling? Will they even need a license or even a car of their own?\n\nNow I get what the article says about driverless cars use less fuel than a normal one, and \"Driving fun in a new way\".\n\nHaving a driverless car would be pretty cool. Getting into a car and typing in where you want to go and the car just taking you there. Or just telling it what to do due to voice actiivation. But, is driving suppose to be fun? Or a way to get to one place or another. If driving was fun it wouldn't be safe. People would be drag racing throughout the city causing chaos and getting into serious damage.\n\nMoving into a world where technology is becoming more and more relevant is good, but driverless cars..Not so much. It was very innovative,and futuristic, but in my opinion a waste of money, time, and space.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why explore Venus? Is it not dangerous, and scary, and hot? What could it possibly have that Earth has not already given us? Well, Venus is much more like Earth than most people like to think. And personally, between you and I, I think they are scared of the opportunity to leave their comfortable homes and Cheetos. Venus could be crucial for Earth, and we are about to find out why.\n\nHere is a hypothetical scenario. Tomorrow, we find out it is too late to stop global warming, and we have twenty years to evacuate the planet, or we die with it. Scientists everywhere panic! 'Oh no! We don't have anywhere to go!' Then, NASA steps in, like a really protective dad, 'fear not, children. We can be safe on Venus.' Everyone responds happily, until they process the situation. 'Wait, did you say Venus?! We would never last in such a desolate, violent place!' Well, you're wrong buddy. And science can vouch for me. Venus isn't so different from Earth. At least, it didn't used to be. Scientists who have made successful missions to Venus with droids have found traces of oceans, valleys, mountains, you name it! There have been many, many signs on Venus of Earth-like conditions! The article states that Astronomers have reason to believe Venus was actually more Earth-like than Mars! It amazes and confuses them! On top of Venus being just like us, it would be easily acessible. After all, it is just a few light years away.\n\nVenus, while very desolate, and violent, has also shown signs of possibly being able to support life as we know it. Scientists would like to keep their manned missions above the violent weather conditions, making it easy for them to study the surface of the small planet. The traces of water and weather left behind provide a sense of comfort for humans, knowing that if Venus was a last resort, they would be safe and secure.\n\nNow, in order for Venus to truly be acessable, in those hypothetical twenty years, we would have to make major technological advances. We would need transportation, protection, shelter, amongst many other things. However, Venus does provide some of the things we need, or keeps us safe from what we should avoid. Venus provides a close position to the sun, which, while still very hot, leaves plenty of wiggle room for solar energy, utilized by us! Not only would that power us, but it would also keep us from ruining another planet! The air pressure in the atmosphere is similar to that of sea level on Earth, which would be ideal for the young, and the old. Additionally, Venus provides protection from harmful radiation, much like Earth! What's not to love about avoiding radiation?\n\nVenus is a strong, beautiful, powerful and incredible planet. It can protect us, serve us, and make us feelm safe. While there are some disadvantages, I'd argue that there are more advantages. Who wouldn't? Humans act on their curiosity, with no regard for danger or doubts. In this growing age of technology, how could we? I'd keep an open mind on space exploration. After all, we might be just lightyears from our new home.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist One reason I say ran water could dehidrate Also looking water slowed dsown Another reason I say man gave wrong directions got lost confused That setting affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concluded story specific paragraph geese show Saeng going try overcome obstacles She disappointed failing test took comfort memories homeland She bought hibiscus saw homeland lot flower comfort affection But also ability come obstacles planting hibiscus saw geese flying knew trySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this essay I will be telling you that the Face is only natural landform\n\nOn May 24,2001, on Mars NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was going arounf the planet,capturing photos of potential lading sites for its sister ship Viking 2,\"when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.An enormous head nearly 2 miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a regio of the Red Planet called Cydonia\"\n\nThere was a wave of\" surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their monitorsm .but the sensation was short lived.\" At first it was thought to just be another martian mesa common enough around Cyndonia.\" only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah.\"\n\nIn conclusion the face is only made up of natural landformsthe shadows surrouding it help to give it a 3d effect as by addin a little more depth to what seems to be the eyes,nose,and mouth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In a few cities, bikes are given priority over cars, while in others pedal rides are being replaced by car drives. This essay will discuss why this is the case, followed by my opinion. \r\n\r\nMany people choose to use an automobile over a pedal because they think cycling is less time-consuming and more comfortable. However, pedals are only useful for short distances and they are not air-conditioned, so the public will be uncomfortable in cold or hot weather, plus the pedal takes physical effort to pedal, which makes the public feel very tired. For instance, in Baotou, a small city in China, commuters tend to choose vehicles as their transportation as it takes an average of one hour to get to work by pedal compared to just 30 minutes by car.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, many metropolitan areas encourage their citizens to travel by pedal rather than a vehicle, as cycling can bring many benefits to the city and the public. Cycling involves pedalling, which activates your body and keeps your heart strong. On top of this, it does not produce any kind of pollution in the environment and does not add to traffic. Moreover, since parking spaces are very limited and the cost of parking is extremely high in a metropolis, trying to use bicycles instead of cars is more cost-saving for many people. These benefits are highly needed to improve both lifestyle and the environment under global warming conditions. For example, in Amsterdam, the government has given top priority to bike riders and created separate bike lanes to promote the idea. Today, the majority of the city's population only rides bicycles.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, taking into account the above facts and the health benefits of cycling, I believe that this development is far better and should be adopted by all places around the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "In recent times, it can be realized a growing interest among individuals in different parts of the earth that they intend to collect more historical information about the place such as flats and villas that they are living there. This essay will point out some reasons caused this widespread trend and also suggest some constructive ways to gain more data about this topic. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the primary reason for this tendency might be the interest to the historical topics. Some residences specially who live in the old and historical buildings would like to know more about the past time of their place because listening to and reading a part of historical tale could always be attractive and pleasant for some of this planet inhabitants and these legends could be more interesting and attractive when the owner of that place will give performance in the future of this storyline. On the other hand, some citizens who want to buy a house or flat prefer not to rely on advertisments or assertions of property aggencies due to this fact that they opine that these sources of information could be misleading and if customers trust them, they will trick them so they try to collect information about that past of that buildings themselves. \r\n\r\nAlso, there are several ways to find a wide range of data about different constructions which are located in dissimilar neighbourhoods. For instance, one of the most effective and convinient way to carry this research out is using different websites on the internet and browsing through them precisely to gather a huge amount of accurate information about the desired structures. In addition, there is another workable method to get enormous amount of data about a particular place. The residences can ask from their elderly neighbours about that place, certainlly the older generations have more knowledge about this topic. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, recently a considerable nember of dwellers display this tendency to know more about the history of the place that they are its residence now. Some of them are just history lovers and some of them can not trust others and they do not want to accept others’ claims about the property that they intend to buy and they prefer to shoulder this responsibility. Additionally, there are some available methods for them to get their desired inforamtion for example conducting a survey in their nighbourhood and also doing an inventigation on the internet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Scientist say Venus will be very challenging to explore because of its harsh conditions.Venuses conditions are very dangerous to the human body.Because of these harsh conditions i will tell some\n\nfacts that scientist have proven.With in the next paragraphs i will be stating facts straight from the artical.\n\nVenus or ''EveningStar'' is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Scientist say that venus is the closest planet to Eath in size and density. Nasa is trying to send humans to Venus but because of it harsh conditions we would need very special suits to even go through its atmosphere. Scientist have yet to cover the whole surface of Venus.\n\nScientist say that Venus is so inhospitable, but they keep digging for answers and why the conditions on Venus are are so bad. 97% of Venuses atmosphere is a carbin dioxide blanket. Scientist say that the clouds on Venus are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On venuses surface temperature can rerach over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90x greaterthyen what we experience on our own planet.\n\nBecaus eof venuses harch condition scientist are still trying to figure out a way for human to visit Venus one day and history will be made.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "The author in this story is telling us that venus is the hottest planet in the world even thought mercery is the colses to the sun and that it vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape.The auhor suggest that studying venous is a worthy pursuit despite the danges it presents the ain idea or claim is the challenge of exploring venus \"It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely\".\n\nVenus is a thick atomoshere of almost a 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. The scientes think is challenge and they want to find out if they can do all the thing they need to build a special tea that can can be on earth and for it to not bedestroud very esey and for it not be a problem for them to just not have to build it all over ad just have to restart if thoug they can keep back some information and for it can help.In addiont in venus on the planet surface the temperature approximiting average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit also that the atomosheric pressuer is approximing 90 times greater tha twhat we experice on our own plant. But is just somthing we need becasue the condition are far extreme than anything but, however humans encounter on earth like such as environment would crash even a submarine accustomed on to dive into nthe deepest part of our oceanand will need many tools.\n\nThe author want to know is it possibe that we can challenge of exploring the situation.also they want to find new stradiges to not let the landscape for not working or getting hurt.The scientist think that the can make a thing that can go up to the sky and take a look at all the planets and especially at venus. The author is wanting to know if it is a challenge and i think is it because they have to find the way to make a speacial team of tools and supples that they need and that cost lots and lots of money and thay have to us there brain to make the best tool to send up so the can take a look at the planets.The claim was if the challenge of exploring venus and we got the answer we wanted.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, In most countries, it is becoming a trend to know about the history of the apartment in which they are currently living. This essay will discuss the reasons for finding history and will also discuss the way research in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, people are more curious to know the fact about the house in which they are living. There are some common reasons such as they want to know who was living in this building earlier they were prominent people or this building has some link with past heroes. Secondly, they invest a large amount of money on house and they fear that this building should not belong to a criminal. For instance, In German, 85% of people found the history of their home and some found that their house is special because prominent people were living there. \r\n\r\nThere are so many ways to know about the past of your apartment. Firstly, people can ask their local residents who are living in this area for a long time. They can clearly tell them about the past of their home. Secondly, the internet is the main source to find accurate information. One can search all details by adding the location of his home. Moreover, a person can visit a local construction office where all the details of the owners are kept. This is an easy way to access the past history of an apartment.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, People are curious to know the fact about the past of their home and it is also a right to know. There are some methods to know about the past of the house.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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