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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars should not become a thing. Sure, it is nice to think we can make a car that is a public transportation system that would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. But today driverless cars are still not completely driverless. These cars alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\n\nCars can do all sorts of things for us these days including, rear view cameras, park for us, GPS, and even stop for the driver before it hits something. If something were to happen who takes the blame for the accident, the driver, car company, or who? The last thing we need to do is trust a car with more than just those four tasks. If people are too lazy to drive then they will be too lazy to jump back on the wheel when the car needs assistance. Drunk driving is a large issue in America and those drunks will try to drive and blame it on the car that is supposed to drive itself. The laws about no texting while driving will go away because people will rely on the car too much. If we cannot trust cars with driving by itself rather than driving and assisting then I cannot trust it at all. These new cars would also need sets of laws, rules, and regulations for people and the manufacturers to follow.\n\nIf these cars do get into a crash, who is liable, who's insurance is it on, and would the car companies get sued? How could anybody prove who's fault to why the accident happened. Although car companies say they have plans to drive themselves in the future I do not believe them and I do not trust them. I hope that driverless cars do not become a thing in my lifetime.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few decades, the issue of housing shortage in an urban area has been a major concern because an expensive land caused serious problems in society. Although some people claim that only governments can deal with this matter, in my opinion with a combination both of the government and an individual, this problem can be tackled as I will discuss in the following essay. \r\n\r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that governments have the power to establish legislation and subsidies. For example, governments will fine real estate agencies if they overcharge people who buy houses in the city, Therefore, real estate agencies would provide a reasonable price. Furthermore, another thing governments can do is to provide financial supported who buy houses in the city . A good example of this is Taiwan authority share a proportion of money to subsidies people buying a housing in urban areas. As a result, citizens can alleviate the burden of financial concern. \r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, an ndividual also need to take action in order to deal with this problem. People should try to to find vertical apartments instead of private houses in urban areas. For example, In Singapore, the majority people tend to live in high-rise building so that more people can live in the city. By doing this, the apartments can accommodate more population in the urban area. \r\n\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the fact that state should take more responsibility, from my perspective, a combination of authority and individuals should be coordinated to solve the problems. Provided benefits as well as are encouraged, people to live in urban areas, this phenomenon can be alleviated.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have been a few close calls during our presidential ellection over the past decades, but it doesn't mean it's enough to scratch it out and throw it away. We should keep the Electoral College for many reasons, but mostly to keep chaos from happening.\n\nTo begin with, the Electoral College has been the method we have used for years for choosing our next President, so why would we change it now? Well, the answer is we shouldn't. It may seem like a good idea at first to change to the election by popular vote, but here's the problem. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, but less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The Electoral College is what helps the candidates from winning from a landslide. The Electoral consists of 583 electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes is reqquired to elect the President. So even though some may say you're not choosing your President, you're actually helping to chose your President. When you vote you're actually voting for an elector that will (most likely) vote for the candidate to your appeal.\n\nFurthermore, many people such as Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and even the Chamber of Commerce have agreed to abolish the Electoral College. According to a Gallup poll in 2000, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Although, this all may seem like a time for change, isn't the Electoral College doing us a favor? \"The Electoral College consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress.\" The Electoral College is a process, as a compromise established by our founding fathers, between election of the President by a vote in cCongress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\n\nLast, but not least, the Electoral College helps with voting for President. \"Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee, and that trust is rarely betrayed.\" It is possible for the winner to win the electoral vote, but will not win the national popular vote. \"The Electoral College requires a candidate to have transregional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" \"So a solid regional favorite has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, that he knows he will will.\" Therefor, he will not gain any electoral votes by increasing his plurality in those states in favor of him. \"This is a desirable result because the candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president.\n\nAll in all, we should keep the Electoral College because it helps balance out the nation's amount of votes for a good successful President that will help it's people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time of smarter and better cars has finally come. Fururists have been dreaming of driverless cars for centuries and their dreams will finally come true. They have found a way of creating a car where human interaction is zero to none.\n\nDriverless cars may sound like the coolest idea ever, but with that comes a lot more risks. Humans are distracted as it is on the road, imagine not having to drive at all; or only when needed. Google has modified cars to insert sensors, radars, and cameras to have a safer environment for the driver; they also have ideas on how to warn the driver that human assistance is needed. GM will create vibrating seats, which sounds like it could get the attention of a person since they will be sitting on it, but other cars, like the Google ones, will simply announce when the driver should get ready for action. In my opinion that will not work, simply because a person could be listening to music or taking a nap or many other things that can easily distract a human. Other warning signals, like lights on the dasboard, will not work because the driver could be on their phone, texting, talking to other passengers, and not see it.\n\nAn arguement about smarter cars is that the key to driverless cars was not only the cars themselves, but the roads. There would be needed special tracks with electrical cables, negative polarity, and a big amount of money. Another one is that the law wants to keep everyone on the riads safe, but with driverless cars the drivers wll not be alert and the risk on the roads will increase. And who is it to blame -the driver or the car?\n\nThe idea of roads being full of cars with no alert drivers and just smart roads, is not a very bright one for me. The excitement of teenagers getting ready to receive their permits or licenses would be taken away from them, and the alertness would be zero to none. Smarter cars does not sound like a very smart idea to me.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Living in both big cities and regional towns have their own advantages and disadvantages. Although, regional towns are small and provide a simple lifestyle, I still think that large cities offer a better lifestyle and much better facilities.\nIt is true that regional towns have a simpler lifestyle and are not completely industrialized, which leads to a better environment and healthier people. Some people say that large cities have a few problems like traffic and high population. I, however, believe that the advantages of living in a big city, completely outweigh the disadvantages.\nFirstly, Due the modernisation and globalisation of industries, various multinational companies look for employees and are usually situated in urban areas. People move from rural areas to urban towns to look for employment with higher salaries as well as international exposure. Secondly, cities have a vast network of transportation available which is more frequent and comfortable for the commuters. Many people from small towns transit through big cities for inter-state or international travels. Lastly, large towns provide better accommodation for people with better living facilities. They have huge buildings with many apartments which are very well structured. These buildings also have facilites like gym, pools, grocery shops e.t.c. so that residents don't have to travel far. Which is why, when people move from small towns, it is easier for them to rent a room according to their budget and requirements.\nIn conclusion, While I strongly believe that one should visit regional towns from time to time to freshen up their mind and body, I completely disagree with the fact that people should be encouraged by the government to permanently move to these areas .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper know child teen age eight seventeen nt live go computer Well myspace facebook aim like online hangout Kids every log nt log unless parent child makes I firmly belive computers major effect people three reasons people nt exersise dont interact others kids smocky sneak research wasnt Online websites games like hipnotysing people making stay hours Most parents belive child computer research hour good however kids would sneak pay online going go website allowed go wasnt Sometimes best thing get fresh air interact others Buth websites make people stay conect two hours dont get fresh air dont interact others Most times people forgot dont know something except computer play much People grow fast think people start eat drink sometimes sleep computer People stay computer eat wont get enought exercise start get fat soon stay computers didnt exercise burn fat How see computers major effect people interacting others enough kids wife sneaky go website wer allowed go thier parents wernt homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the Facial Action Coding System would be slightly helpful, but other than that, not at all. While few would benefit from being taught by a computer, others, not so much.\n\nDr. Huang said that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I believe this is wrong, as there is no way of making a student less bored. If you were to add entertainment to the mix of the lesson, then how could the lesson be taken seriously? Teachers tend to add their own spice to lessons that, both, make the students laugh, and become more interested in the lesson. No computer could mimick a human's humor. A computer also would not be able to explain things as well as a teacher could. A computer could modify the lesson as many times as it could, but the student would still be confused. A teacher would be able to explain things better and make it simpler than a computer could. It would also be quicker.\n\nIt is proven that students learn better with paper and a physical learning environment. Sure, a computer would know more and be able to explain things more properly, but knowing this fact... Would it even be worth teaching the student if they won't even remember it? Technology would also completely replace the need to write down notes by hand. With a physical environment, you also learn life skills. For example, knowing when to speak and ask questions, manners, and getting along and working with others. These skills are often used in work environments.\n\nAnd, what about those who have no access to technology? Poverty and homelessness are still big in the world. Sure, your child could participate in a physical environment at a school, but why would there be a need for schools if it is all on the computer? It would also be cheaper for school officials to have computers than to have teachers that require a weekly or monthly pay, and to not require supplies for the children as well. It would quickly spiral into a \"be rich or be homeless\" world in an instant. A lot of stress would be put on the backs of many people who wish for their child to get an education. We already give these people a hard time, why given them an even harder time, and even include their children?\n\nIn conclusion, a lot would be wrong with using the Facial Action Coding System in schools. Very few would benefit from having such advanced technology instead of teachers and a physical environment, but the rest would be disadvantaged.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm not for driverles cars because they can still cause an accident and if any person could, Also there not really driving the car itself but is helping out the driver by stop when they are not looking or if there is a green light then, the car will alert the driver to press the gas if they are distacted. But, it will not drive a person home if they are drunk. There are better ideas then making a driving car. But, instead of buidling drivierless cars we can save the enviroment. They can make the world a better places but make fuel efficeny cars instead of driverless cars. Make trucks not run on diesel we can be doing so much more than making a driverless car. What if the car computer programming chip is damage then that means that the car can't be able to work correctly and that the car is in a higher risk of getting more people in danger because of the driverlesss car.\n\nBuilding a driverles car is going to be very expensive. And we are not in a lot of debt so we should use are money wisely.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, in various countries, a considerable number of individuals find that it is fascinating to get to know a background of their accommodations. This essay will deeply explain the reasons why this trend is emerged and what approach can be used to discover the past of their living places in the following paragraphs:\r\n\r\nTo begin with the foremost reason, a huge number of people, albeit some scientific evidences that the ghost might not exist, believes in ghost. In addition, they prevent to live in a place that has the history related to a pass-away person, resulting in a reduction of a house' price. Take Japanese situation for example; a huge number of old individuals died alone in their own place because they have not got any descendant who will be able to look after them; therefore, many real estrate companies offer a more affordable price for those who would like to live in the house that has the history related to the died person.\r\n\r\nMoreover, thanks to the technological advancement that help ones to know more about the background of a certain living places, now, there are numerous websites and applications for those who would like to find the places that offer them a special price due to the ghost-related notorious. Ghost House App, for instance, is the application with a map that illustrates many locations that owners reduce the price of their accomodations owing to bad reputation background which useful to help the home seekers to find the low-price home.\r\n\r\nIn the light of these facts, people curious to know the historical background of the house since its history can affect to the price of an accomodation; hence, they use the applications to find out the accomodation that its price is reduced owing to a notorious background.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotion reading technology is on the rise in the electronic world. This new software was developed by Prof. Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, with help from Prof. Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. The purpose of this technology is to make computers able to read emotions by the movement of facial muscles. The software is currently able to define six basic emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nI am for having emotion-reading technology in the classroom, as long as it doesn't become a distraction. The article explains that if a student is taking online lessons or is learning from the computer and becomes confused or bored, the computer will be able to sense the students emotion and modify the lesson to catch the students interest or to help the student to not be confused. The article also says how most of human communication is nonverbal, which includes emotional communication. If a computer was able to sense these emotions, the student would be able to learn far more than with a regular lesson.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that having this new technology could benefit students tremendously, as long as students aren't exaggerating emotions to get desired effects of their lesson plans. Since the computer is adapting to the student, the student could also be less intimidated about their intellect, causing them to be more confident overall.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am arguing against the development of these cars. Because I believe that they are not safe and they shouldn't have made them. The car could mess up and cause the whole car to wreck and the person thats inside of the car\n\nI am really against this idea This idea is an amazing idea but its dangeous because it's rsking other life's. For a car to work right and to know wehich way to go its going to need a whole lot of sensors. But what if one of the sensors mess up and makes the car get into a accident.\n\nIn conclussion I say that us humans should not have a car like this because we are also putting ourselves and others in danger. And im pretty\n\nsure that nobody wants to get hurt or die over a malfunction with there automatic sensor car. I think that we should just stick with the basic cars and let the owners control there vehicle how we do in this world today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In paragragh nine it states that if something where to happen and sommone were to get hurt or die who you blame?\n\nBetter question is who fault is it? If there was to come a day that there were no drivers out their anymore and it was a driveless then who would need to learn how to drive?, Who need to know the law of driving because if your driving then you cant be charged with anything because your not the one driving.\n\nIf someone where to be out drinking with there friends and was to hop in there driverless car, what would happen if they were to get pulled over? they are not driving so they couldnt be charged with dui or anything of that nature. So there are many things that no one could understand in the fact that there are so many driving rules that you\n\nmust go by.\n\nIn paragraph seven it states that the car would be watching you to see if you had your hands on the wheel and was paying attention. What were to happen if you dont have your hands on the wheel or your not paying attention, Who would find out, what would they do? It says that there are some cars that can already driving by its self in a traffic jam. What were to happen if something was to happen in the traffic jam?\n\nThe manufacturer could be held for what has happened or whats might happen, so many cars get recalled because of seat belts or brakes, what would happen if alot of cars got recalled? If theres nothing but driverless cars then what would happen? Be stuck walking, Im sure that there are many things that people think of when it comes to Driverless cars. Just think for a second what would you think about if you have the chance to choose If the driverless cars were aloud, Would you agree or disagree? Thats all i have to say about the whole thing with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This techonlogy can show poeple how therer emotions are say that there is a women stading there and the computer starts to scan her face and starts to tell her about every one of her emotions that she has that she never even felt like that basic that u can change thta like if the computer said that u are unhappy sad and feel wanted whaat if u change that and go back o skan your face after a month u fixed all your promblems and it tells yyou u are happy u are wanted and u are no longer sad or any kind of depressedment so basicaly this computer can possibly help people out with there promblems just like a person that talks to u to get out your emotions that u have built high inside u thats what this computer can do to help those people that need it promibly stop the killing your self and doing any thing thats is a crime it just might stop crimes to to tell the person what they are feeling.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that stricter punishments will deter many motorists from driving dangerously or carelessly on the roads. However, I strongly disagree that this is the only way to improve lane freedom, because there are alternative measures which would also be effective.\r\n\r\nStricter punishments will undoubtedly act as a deterrent, so that motorists will think twice before committing traffic offences. It is often forgotten that motoring offences are, in fact, crimes. The full weight of the law should be applied in imposing a range of non-custodial sentences, such as heavy fines, and the confiscation of driving licences. The letter of the law must be strictly implemented, banning offenders from the roads so they will no longer pose a danger to other road users, including pedestrians. Those who drive while intoxicated should serve a prison sentence, as is sometimes imposed in the UK, because they endanger innocent lives.\r\n\r\nWhile harsh penalties for offenders should be high on the government agenda, there are other steps which national and local authorities should take to improve roadway security. Firstly, installing speed cameras has made drivers aware of the need to adhere to speed limits. Many authorities around the world have adopted this very cost-effective measure. Secondly, traffic calming measures have succeeded in reducing the number of accidents, especially in built-up areas. Finally, it is necessary to adopt a policy of conducting regular vehicle inspections, at authorised centres, to avoid accidents caused by mechanical failures.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in order to improve drive freedom, it is not enough to be tough on traffic crimes by punishing more harshly those who violate the law. A range of roadway freedom measures should accompany harsher driving penalties.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Throughout the reading he talks about how it'll put an impact on daily driving and how modern day cars will be self driving and automatic. In 2009 Google had made a vehicle that'd support the idea of self driving vehicles by creating and designing one himself.\n\nThe positives and negatives of being able to own one of these vehicles or being able to have the oppurtunity of them being manuafactured throughout the United States or other countries could have an impact on the world itself. In paragraph one it stated that Google cofounder Sergey Brin had envisions of public transportation systems where fleets of driverless cars became the new form of taxi transportation. The vehicles he foresees would use half of the fuel of todays transportational vehicles. What that means is that the environment around you would have less smog and less toxins in the air. With that being said it could dramatically change how people would be able to get to work everyday. Instead of using a bus and waiting for the stop it'll open up another door for them to use the cars that are self driven and that could be more effeciant with the time of them arriving to their destination.\n\nNow,we will be discussing the negatives of having the cars built. The cost of the technology that needs to be put inside of each cars could cost more than the actually shell itself. If it uses an amazing amount of wiring and sensors then they will also run into electric problems and the hassal of spending all of the time and money on one car. With the gps reciever,four automotive radar sensors,a video camera that is installed near the rearview mirror,and many other things that are needed to even start the \"self driving program\" just isn't worth it in my opinion. The system will always have a flaw and so will humans. But humans have the skill of being able to get out of sticky situations. The computers inside of the car won't be able to sense all of the risks on the local street or on the highway compared to a humans abilitys and sight. The computers on the vehicle only examine the surroundings and the speed. But how close is soon? An accident could be avoided in most cases because of manual driving. Having a computer that is only set to go a certain speed and to use just the programs on it to avoid certain things isn't worth the time of a regular driver.\n\nIn conclusion,I myself would not purchase a vehicle that is assisted and needs all of the technology of doing something that I could do independently. It is a very vague opinion on my part but to me it is a fair share of laziness and the inability to drive a vehicle with basic knowledge.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System seems like it could be a very helpful tool, but it woldn't be best fit in a classroom. There are several reasons why this technology would bring minimal help to a classroom. First, it would be more of a distraction to the students and bring more problems for the teacher. Also, the classes in which it would be helpful are just a handful. Finally, changing the lesson plan based on a student's facial expression wouldn't be the best idea.\n\nHaving a emotion recognizing computer software would bring many unnecessary distractions and interuptions into classrooms. Students, especially in the lower grade levels, would want to play with the software instead of using it as a learning tool. It would be a hassel for the teacher to enforce rules on the use of the technology. Since the software would have to run on a high-tech computer, more rules would need to be enforced on that computer. The software would bring more problems that could easily be avoided.\n\nOther than to read the expressions that the students are conveying, the software isn't of much use in most classes. The software could work in an anatomy class or a scince class, but it wouldn't be used often. The classes in which it wouldn't be helpful outweigh the classes it would. For example, a music or math teacher would have a hard time incorporating this into a lesson. The tool would be forced into lesson plans instead of being a necessity.\n\nIf lesson plans were changed based on wether the students were bored or not, there would be difficulty getting to lessons. In classrooms, sometimes students wonder off. Also, if the student doesn't enjoy the subject, many times they don't even try. Other times, such as in an advanced math class, the material that is being taught is very complex, but the students still have to learn it. Changing the lesson plan wouldn't be of much help to anyone.\n\nOverall, the software would bring more harm to classrooms than being a useful learning tool. There are also very specific classes in which it would be helpful. Unless a class is built around this software, it would be of much use. Also, lesson plans shouldn't be altered because of the emotions some students are conveying. Conclusively, the sofware isn't necessary to teach, and it doesn't enhance learning enough to be a useful tool.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today I -Luke- think you should join the progam i joined called \"Seagoing Cowboys progam \" . I joined the progam for a certain reson and thats because of a great friend of mine - Don -invited me to join him to go to Europe on a cattle boat . I knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. And at that time in 1945 in Europe the World War II had just ended which ment so many things were ruined i wanted to help out so I joined the Seagoing Cowboys progam .And if your not selfish and care about other people take this opportunity and help out a persons life join not only cause we wan't you to but it would be good for a change if someone you loved lived in a country were distruction had just happened you would join but these people you may not love or you don't know but they are still humans maybe even children still they have lives to live and children to have to keep the population growing. I'm giveing you a great opportunity just think about it consider trying .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is a very strange place.This article talks about having driverless cars in the future.Also, this artilce reads about the advantages and disadvantages of these \"driverless' cars.for instance these cars shall save you from buy a new car when your old one breaks down.\n\nA driverless car seems like something nice to have, which it is. Having a driverless car can bring lots of easieness into your life. These smartcars can detect when theses dangers ahead. In these cars there are sensors that have become way more advanced over the years, these sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on the wheels to reduce power.Its allowing the human a better resonse and more control than a human could manange. They may be \"driverless\" cars, but there still needs to be a human inside to stay alert so they can be ready to take control when a problem occurs. Also, if the driver is not paying attetion the car will immidately notify the driver,The seats will vibrate if theres danger ahead. Athough there are laws saying that a human driver must be engaged at all times. In most states, it is illgeal to test computer driven cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i dont believe that driverless cars would be a good influence on our population. I say that because i dont think people would use these cars as good use. People wouldnt use these cars for good reason because they would take advantage of it because it can drive on its own, I know it would have a built in camera for our eyes on the road but lets just be real here noone will even take a glance at the road. These cars are really smart cars and all but what does this car do for us? I really think these cars wouldnt do us any good because none of us wouldnt want to drive anymore because it drives on its own therefore that would make us all lazy drivers. im sure these cars know alot but they probably dont know the importance of driving under roads that are under construction, or bad weather, slick roads. Which concerns me of all of our safety, and all our lives at risk. What if the roads are very slick and its foggy outside? i dont think the car can drive through that type of weather because at times it is very hard for us humans to drive under that condition.\n\nMost of us have children and passengers while driving with us all the time i am very concerned of their safety too, what if they are not comfortable with these cars, they want you to take control of the wheel. We all have our opinions on things but these cars i really dont like the idea of it. Like money wise the cars would cost us millions probably for it and there are more important things in the world to buy, we really dont need to spend all our money on these cars. Gas money for these cars what if these cars use a lot of gas?\n\nWe would have to spend like another 80 to 90$ on gas too. The car what if the car alert system or camera stops working?\n\nWe have no other choice but to take the wheel, it shouldnt take all that money for a car and for something to happen to it and we have to end up driving it anyways, so we shouldnt even have this idea of these cars in my opinion its a waste of money. In conclusion i dont think it would be a good idea for us to have this new source of techinology because most of us wont even use it right and it could cause all kinds of problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Critics may say that it is easier to get a successful career if we study at a university or higher education. Otherwise, some people think that getting a job after high school is better. This essay agrees with the opinion about going to universities straight after high school is essential.\n\nOn the one hand, the higher your education, the more knowledge you achieve. On the whole, many universities are very likely to concentrate on a particular subjects, if you go on studying after graduating, you will have opportunities to get massive knowledge. Those will help you to get promoted easily since you are professional in an aspect. Going to university not only helps you to be professional in your subject but also leads you to be successful easily.\n\nOn the other hand, an early career will help you to require optional knowledge which schools cannot teach you such as communication and social skills. During your course, you will meet various kinds of people and many difficult situations which will improve your skills indirectly. That work makes communication skill and relationships go up and also stand a greater chance of landing a well-earned job. As can be seen, many of students are likely to be blue-collar workers and get a high-paid job not so long after.\n\nFrom my perspective, I would rather go to universities than find jobs after graduating. Due to nowadays world, more and more companies would like to hire employees who have qualifications in their own work. They also have chances to get promoted due to they are hard-working and professional in their career.\n\nIn a nutshell, colleges or higher education would be the best route to be succeeded in your life. although more and more students find jobs right after graduating from the academy, there is a small opportunity for their course to be successful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Lives Narciso Rodriguez author creates calm loving mood The author first shows loving mood says My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved This shows loving mood parents wanted give children better life moving american even though leaving alot behind The author shows calm mood says always filled air scent music life love It I learned real definition family This quote puts calm mood think filling air scents playing nice music puts clam relaxed mood This quote also shows loving mood well This explains love family proud call family family All evidents set memoirs mood loving careingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I sat table speechless told story The lot past seven years youngest son born three weeks early doctor told would live three days As told stared distance reliving moment She told baby rare disease Half brain smooth instead normal rigid She told first days scared Seeing next thing kept bursting tears He lived longer told grew older could nt walk His pediatrician told would never able take first steps would live life confined wheel chair given another miracle He walked With aide camouflage cane beat odds told could nt talk He speaks sign language She also taught take care He normal kid liked play cars He nt different rest kids This going roller coaster week I met early arrived disabled kids I known hours telling life story I got next week become best friends We went swimming river played sticks went nature walks even rode horse The smile face lit day every time I saw got experience things child kind would never able lifetime We got go tubing ride jet skis fish stock pond sure catch something Having best time lives parted night bed cabin I tent Each night I left I could hear family laughing talking great day much fun To part making child happy cherry top experience One event particular week always stay close heart experimenting around tricycle made specifically children disabilities He tried hours make go No matter hard tried could nt move My heart broke I saw start cry He frustrated gave moved swings instead The rest day filled look sorrow frustration face I wanted fix I fix He needed happy That night I went directer I told happened brought garage The garage chaotic unorganized I nt quite understand emerged brand new shiny bike One foot straps supportive seat complete dragons bell It perfect thing I excited let try The next delicious blueberry pancake breakfast set try new toy This moment big parents He told d never walk ever able ride bike talk He lived miracles He could strapped bike put helmet started The anticipation almost much After seconds passed wheels began turn riding bike Tears streamed faces greatest moment life The way smiled laughed new found capability great sight To part something special honor rode bike around day He even rode cabin continued ride circles around bunk I left family enjoy night went bed The rest week filled great deal fun end came goodbyes hard We nt want leave I become part family trusted I felt home I new best friends could nt wait next would meet could make new memoriesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. On the planet's surface tempertures average over 800 degrees Faherenheit, and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained in the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. It tells us that if anyone went to venus the pressure will probably be hot as an oven like as heat and Other forces, and it can cause danger to people who goes there Venus's surface only lasted for three weeks in such conditions. But should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. A thick atomsphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atomsphere. Venus is the second planet from our sun\n\nVenus is like erupting volcanoes, powerful, earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking land on its surface. Radiation of venus would not exceed earth levels.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the face is just a natural landform. although few scientists believe the face was an alien artifact. malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using absolute resolution. it remain me most of middle butte in the snake river plain of idaho. that is a lava dome that take the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on mars. the face on mars is just a mesa. reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to mars. it certainly did. back to my statement i think the face is just a natural landform. The alien making was hidden by haze. the face is just a natural landform it remain me most of a lava dome that take the form of an isolated mesa abouit the same height. there was no alien monument after all. And they revealing a natural landform. the why i believe alien didn't make that it is just alandform that looklike a human face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whati I think about drivless cars is that itt'll be a safer way to drive because unlike humans paying attention on the rode, driveless cars will just have to do all thw ork for you. I also think its a safer way for people.\n\nThese cars would have a whole lots of sensors, so that it can tell red, yellow, and green light, knowing when people is crossing the rode, knows when to stop at specific signs, knowing where to go, and etc. These would be the smartest cars in the world. It's also going to need computer hardware, and software to make driving safer are also leading to ears that can handle more and more driving on their own. It'll be better for people so knowing they don't have to be so bored on the rode no more, so they can just get on their phones, watch tv in the cars, and also eat and go to sleep.\n\nSo I asure people that these drivesless cars would be the most bvest way for us to drive without wrecking, or doing bad things on the rodeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions, like happiness, sadness, fear, and more. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face and it detects all 44 major muscles in the face. Then, the FACS system associates the movements of the facial muscles in the model with a percentage of each of the six basic emotions -- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Dr. Huang believes that this system could be used in schools to help advance the use of technology in the classroom. The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because lessons can shift due to the emotions of the students, students would be kept on task, and it could be used to determine real and fake emotions.\n\nSchool lessons can shift and become more entertaining and compatible to the emotions of students through the use of FACS. School lessons can be unentertaing to kids and cause them to daze off and not pay attention. With the use of FACS, these lessons can shift to a modified version to keep the student engaged in the acitivity. According to Dr. Huang, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" When a student is confused the computer could change the lesson, on only that students computer, in order for that student to be able to understand the content presented. The FACS machine could alleviate all the question asking and sleeping in classrooms by keeping the students engaged in what they're learning about.\n\nThe FACS machine can shift what appears on the computer based on the emotions of the student. The computer can detect emotions at any given time, according to Nick D'Alto, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" D'Alto uses the example of advertisements as a way to detect emotions through the computer -- in this case if the person liked the ad, then more ads similar to the previous ad would appear; but if the person did not like the ad, then the next ad would be different. This could also be used in the classroom. The computer could analyze the emotions of the student and could keep the student on task. For example, if a student were playing games during a lesson, the FACS machine would be able to detect that through the student's emotions and would put the student back to the lesson. This would allow the teacher to be sure that all students are paying attention and on task during the lesson.\n\nTeachers can use the FACS machine to tell if their students are showing real emotion or fake emotion based on their lesson. The computer can detect real emotions, even if a student is trying to mask them. According to Nick D'Alto, \"It's all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" The computer can tell whether a person is actually smiling or giving a forced smile by looking into the muscular action units. For example, a teacher asks her student if he is enjoying the lesson. The student responds by lying, \"Yes, it's very fun,\" but in reality the student does not enjoy the task. Through the FACS, the teacher would be able to spot that the kid is bored and that he was showing fake emotion to her. She would be able to shift the lesson to help that student stay engaged and entertained.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be a valuable asset to any classroom. It would be able to keep the lessons entertaining for the students and prevent boredom and sleeping in class. The system would be able to keep the students on task and away from computer games. Also, the machine would be able to detect if a kid was showing fake emotion towards a teacher. The FACS machine has many great uses and would be very suitable for a school environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Through the past century, mechanization on a global scale has indubitably innovated the world in efficency and economic progress. In particular, however, the key invention of the car has solely shown the benefits of such techonological progress. For a few innovators, the mere invention of cars did not seem convincing enough, hence the creation of driverless automobiles has been in design to furtherly increase efficiency and safety. Although the benefits of adopting driverless cars in society seem convincing in progressing society, ultimately, the implementation of driverless cars will only entail disaster.\n\nA strong factor contributing to the cons of driverless cars is the undeniable usage of human skills throughout the road even with using driverless cars. Although the term \"driverless car\" may seem like a straight-forward terminology, it is in reality not. Currently, there is no such development of a car that completely remains independent of the car passenger. On paragraph 7 it notes, \"None of the cars developed so far are completey driverless.\" Morever, due to the fact that driverless cars cannot function completely by themselves, this requires that human passengers still have to be attentive at all times.\n\nAs continued on paragraph 7 it states, \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" In summation, this means the human driver must continue to remain alert and be ready to take over the wheel if the driverless car cannot deal with a specific situation. Despite that driverless cars can permform tasks independently, it is only to a limited extent. Therefore, this still requires the full attention and driving skill set of the car driver. If this still requires the full attention and driving skills of the car driver, the invention of the carless driver, in reality, has no useful benefits. The driver therefore, still has risks of getting into car accidents because they still need to rely on their driving abilities, rendering the invention of driverless cars ineffective.\n\nThe most important factor of all in contributing against the promotion of driverless cars however, is the idea of fault. On paragraph 9, a controversial question is brought up, asking \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" If a driverless car were to get into an accident and if someone were to be injured as a result, who's fault would it ultimately be? This serious and controversial argument as a result, creates a prodigious amount of conflict, particularly between drivers and manufacturers. Because driverless cars are most of the time, indepent of the car drivers, an accident caused by this invention will guaranteed cause a difficulty in finding who is truly at fault. On one hand, it could have been the driver himself for not paying attention to the road and altering the mechanics of the driverless car. However on the other hand, it could have been a completely honest mistake, where the driverless car itself commited an automated mistake that did not associate with the actions of the car driver.\n\nDriverless cars in conclusion, make it difficult to assert the blame on whos truly at fault in a driverless car accident, therefore making it extremely more difficult in handling and resolving this situation.\n\nWithout driverless cars, there will only be one to blame and therefore, more problems will be resolved.\n\nLastly, the existence of traffic laws and working zones on the roads is prominent in abasing the efficency of driverless cars. On paragraph 9 it says, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" In other terms, common aspects of the road, such as traffic laws and working zones, are designed so that only human drivers can handle those situations, thus making driverless cars useless. In these terms, this means that alert drivers will perform much more reliably than an automated car because the road and traffic laws are set up so that the only safe car is a car where a human driver is in control at all times. Because driverless cars are incapable of handling such pivotal features of the modern road system, they must still rely on their human drivers, contradicting their own title of \"driverless\" cars. In conclusion, because the driving laws of the road are mainly designed so that safety will be best achieved with alert human drivers, the implementation of driverless cars in modern society is utterly useless.\n\nDue to the manifestations of human action-based driving laws, continued necessity for human driving skills, and no exact blame for fault in a driverless car accident, the addition of driverless cars into society will only bring increased harm and debatable increased efficiency.\n\nThe addition of fully driverless cars is currently only fantasy, and should remain this way eternally.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The first day I met I knew right dog Her black white fur soft cotton eyes brown bark tree genuine personality dog could possess Which something I could tell right away dog Over next couple months friendship grew I taught talk smile stand two legs dance A black lab instantly became best friend two ran property barking playing Everynight two would cuddle next eachother sleep The times new dog would lay side relax I would call oreo Her middle belly white sides black making look like largebreathing oreo name come The seventh month came along fast enjoyable every day side CAPS gave best comfort I needed always giving smile day rainy sleeping next I didnt feel best It kind like special dose medicine presence made feel well Her love grown deep hearts house one kind something began change days went Her food bowl would nearly full everytime fed wouldnt run anymore wouldnt talk wouldnt smile I knew something wrong We didnt know sick late The first day thrown blood That worrying began boyfriend mother I We wanted find vet help none us money The second day I couldnt find anywhere property I thought maybe gone walk around outskirts house reached pm still sign Panick spread throughout body I gave looking turned towards PERSON I looked straight eyes I know hear looked big brown eyes wagged tail CAPS I knew understood began sniff around areas property suddenly picked trace followed line scent old opal car wagged tail looked looked back car There sick looking So I pulled back onto property boyfriends mother look We werent sure poisoning something else So called animal expert asked said sounded likely like parvo since hadnt gotten parvo shot yet So night help feel better I boyfriend stayed shooting water dehydrated body spinach juice hoping would help wanted sleep So left alone peace decided would check In boyfriend go work I left alone take care I sang songs layed porch sad looking despair I stroked head telling much best friend favorite dog meant much I told I loved I tried getting eat would puke back Finally day crying next I noticed kept walking pond behind house sitting It gave insentive check butt As I pulled tail noticed large bloody hole flies flying rotting inside I cried It time decide whether put I boyfriend father looked watching pain It time As soon got vet office took inside layed table I told hold onto shot overdose anasthesia seconds gone everyone room silent I cried limp longer smiling body We dug hole buried tree played CAPS mama bear heavenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowdays trafiic is a big problem in many cities. From big cities to small town overall globe the issue of traffic is esclating. In this eassy we will be discussing some problem which causes the traffic, wheras on other hand we will be discussing some of the relavant solution of the cause. \r\n\r\nHigh volume of traffic could be rising up mainly because of the two reasons. Firslty, increase in population as per records the numbers in particualar are tend to be more as compared to last decades. For instant, in one family if there are five people which means they will be having average of two to three vehciles. More transportation in particularliy in one family leads to more vehciles causing more trafic. Following that second reason second reason is poor emergency services. For example, according to one article the waiting time to response to emergency services such as road accidents is 10% more than other services. \r\n\r\nSome solution can be purposed to reduce the problem. New and stricted rules should have to be taken place. Such as even odd system which was purposed by kajriwal in delhi. He suggested it will be one day for even licnence plates and one day for odd license plates throughout the week. Additionally, carpool is most effective way to reduce the traffic. People in large organization have to make the carpooling a standard rule so not only they can engourage to reduce the traffic but also to reduce pollution. \r\n\r\nIncrease in traffic is big threat to globe. Mainly rise in population and poor emergency services are drifting them to rise whereas, if we will take some measurement into the place we can reduce them by adpating rules like carpooling and making new and strict rules.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This passag calm happy mood He looking back childhood memories He talked cheerful house people neighborhood You could picture house smell aromas Narciso set nice setting tone entire passage lifted energy You could tell passionate writing He showed real admiration childhood people shared The way felt childhood potrayed beautifully piece really helped reader get happiness community like feel Her gratefullness potrayed mood made entire piece fun readSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Facial Action Coding System is where it sees if you're happy, sad, surpised, anger, digust, and fear. How? It will tell by have a picture of a no emotional , than compare to your see what's the diifference.\n\nHaving Facial Action Coding System in the school, would be kinda great cause it would show the teachers what the student thinks about the assginment. Like, the Dr. Huang said ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'. But, the computer needs to understand that most communication is nonverbal, like emotional communication.\n\nBut, than i'm against because how can the computer see what all the student are feeling like? Like, is going to look at every student face, if yes that had be a waste of time cause that would take the whole class period. If no, than do the teachers have to buy a Facial Action Coding System computer for every student.\n\nFinally, I think it would be a good idea because the teachers would know how the students are feeling by something they had said or asign. If I was a student, I'd like it cause that would be a good new expreince.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, the history facts of any particular house were only being interested by architects and estate agents. However, in the modern time, more and more people are passionate about researching their residence’s background to satisfy their curiosity or for their religious purposes. This essay will discuss some main causes for this trend and suggest a few possible methods for finding the history of any house.\r\n\r\nCuriosity is probably the first reason that urging people to investigate the background of their building. That is due to the fact that many people start sharing their own stories lying under their house on social media, thus encourage more people, especially youngsters, to find interesting facts of their place so that have more decent conversation with their friends. Another factor that can be accounted for is the owners' superstitious matters. Specially for Asian countries - where the local are well-known for their religion culture, the past events of their house become far more important since they show whether that building is suitable for the owners or not. For instance, Vietnamese have a traditional rule stating that they should not live on, or near, a former graveyard because that is disrespectful to the deaths and they will be punished for that. Therefore, it is necessary for people to know the past details of their property.\r\n\r\nThere are plenty methods that can be applied for finding a house's background. Firstly, despite the fact that many real estate agents may sometimes distorted the truth in order to have an easier negotiation with buyers, they are still a very reliable source for ones who want to know better about their house. These agents always have specific details about their in-charged building, thus if any people can get access to it, they will be fully equipped with necessary information. Secondly, social media can also be used to research about one location. However, this method might not as effective compared to the previous one because it is extremely difficult to find any information of a specific area.\r\n\r\nIn essence, it is irrefutable that the interest on the history of their house will still increase in the future. Particularly, most of people want to know better about the history of their house because of their curiosity and their superstitious and through online articles and people's knowledge, they can gather the basic background of their residence.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "years ago birthday thing I wanted Ipad touch Well everybody got party ate cake ice cream I opend presants I got none toach I sad I opend birthday cards I got I told mom since I didnt get I go buy But I wait till everybody gone go get hours patient I finally went gotSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been some discussion about the existence and need of parks and squares in towns and cities. While some people believe that these open premises are essential, others insist that these places make the land useless and hence they must be converted to practical purposes. In my opinion, despite the voices against the larger public places, parks and squares provide great value to both the towns and its civilians.\n\nFirst of all, the open areas have always been considered as the heart of cities, where people get together for meetings and leisure activities. Besides that children and their parents spend quality time at these places after their hectic daily schedules. The increasing pollution in cities is a cause of great concern for the government and the citizens and places like parks and squares often provide relaxation to the old people. Moreover, such places attract tourists as they usually have a history behind their creation. For instance, all European towns are famous for their beautiful gardens and city center squares. Thus, it’s absolutely imperative to conserve them for the future generations.\n\nOn the other hand, one can’t deny the fact that cities are getting crowded each day and lacking places to build public and commercial centers. New transportation systems are coming to the cities and they need a large space to build stations and wider lanes. For example, New York was planned nearly two hundred years ago and the roads in the city were small and narrow which were built for carts not for cars and buses. Later, New York city authority converted many historical parks and gardens into parking stations and highways. This transformation was publicly criticized by civilians and other town planners. Therefore, destroying parks and other public places for current benefits is not the solution for space constraints in cities.\n\nIn conclusion, big public grounds are the need of our future generations. Cities are facing a lot of pressure to develop a substantial infrastructure for the growing population, but this cannot be allowed at the cost of parks and squares. Therefore, it’s completely indispensable to have huge social places in the cities and towns.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to live in a world where cars drive themselves? It sounds like a pretty simplistic question but it leaves many people puzzled and confused. This decison is hard for people because they cannot make a decision if they do not have the right information to compare life with, or without the advanced automomobiles. Supporters of advanced automibiles would say that driveless cars are much more benificial to the driver and will finally decrease the total number of drunk driving incidents. Non supporters of drivless automobiles would say that driveless cars take away a persons liberty to do it their self. They would also argue the fact that trusting a computer over a live human is not only idiotic but very unsafe. Considering all the facts above I believe driveless cars are the way to go. It would not only make drivers safe themselves but it will also limit accidents of others on the road. My counter arguement for people who believe driveless automobiles strip them of their the liberty to do things their way is that sometimes doing things our way is not the best. Most drunk drivers were doing things their way until they hit a mom with two little children in the backseat. To tho who are still skeptical of excepting this process it\n\nis ok to admit that their is a better way to do things and that technology could very well be the gateway to a better future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago something funny happened. It had to do with the planet Mars. NASA spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. It was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude. People think that the Unmasking Face on Mars was created by aliens. NASA looked at it and examed it as much as possible. Many photos have been shot of the face and there are many reasons and knows that the face wasn't created by aliens, although that would be interesting.\n\nAs NASA photographed it many times it was still hard to tell whether or not it was an alien that created the face or not. NASA zoomed into the photos to get a better look at it. They also tried using a mapping spacecraft. As thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. Everyone was so satisfied by the face. After looking and looking at the pictures NASA took, there were no alien monument after all.\n\nAfter all there was full truth that the face was not created by an alien. The picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa.Which are landforms common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of MIddle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" say Garvin.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the driverless car seems like a really good idea but it is really dangerous to have. im going to give you three reasons why they are a dangerous car to have. one reason is that what if something goes wrong with the system and someone gets hurt. the second reason is that it could really expensive and not everybody will be able to afford one. the third reason is that what if the driver falls asleep and is not awake to take over when he or she is suppose to.\n\nthe first reason is that what if something goes wrong with the system and someone gets hurt. in the story the auother states that the system could go down and it wouldnt alert the driver so without the driver taking over someone could be seriously hurt. also if the system went down they could be stuck in the middle of no where.\n\nanother reason is that it could be really expensive and not everyone would be able to afford one. it wouldnt be fair if everyone couldnt enjoy the new technolegy. it shouldnt so much money so everyone can have one. in the story it says that in order to make these types of cars it would be really expensive and everyone would not be able to afford one.\n\nmy last and final reason is that what if the driver falls asleep and isnt awake to take over when he or she needs to. if they fell asleep the car could keep going and cause an accident. the driver could think its safe to text or sleep while the car is driving.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Acting Coding System could allow you to express yourself without meaning to. It would be such a helpful thing for students, it could allow them to become smarter or even allow them to get a bad feelng out by letting someone know they are upset or stressed.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System would allow a student who was confused or bored to get extra help. As is stated in paragraph 6 of they are confused or bored it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor to help them understand. This would allow someone who was quiet and shy that is to afraid to ask for the extra help in class to get the help. They would be able to do so without speaking up in front of everyone and geting embarassed, they could just simply sit there and pay attention allowing the Facial acting coding system to see it.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would also allow someone who is very upset to get help without having to be straightforward and walk up to someone and ask. It could recognize you are upset as stated in paragraph 3 and it could alert someone that you nee help. You could then have them come to you instead of you having to start the conversation with them and theyd already know you were upset and needed to talk to someone.\n\nIt would also be able to find what you are interested in and help you find stuff you like and possibly what you want to do. As stated in paragraph 6 the computer can play an ad and it can see if you like it by the response you have suchas smiling it will play more ads that are like that one or if you frown it can avoid ones like that and play something the complete opposite until it finds what you like. This would also allow you to find people who are similar to you that like the same stuff allowing you to become friends and get closer tothe friends you already had.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be a very valuable tool for in the classroom. It would allow students to learn to there greatest ability because it will be able to effectivily modify the lesson when one is confused. It would allow the higher members know if a student was also having trouble and needed talked to. Yes the Facial Action Coding System would be of good use in the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One problems thousandfoot dirigible held single cable tether would add stress frame The obstacle went make frame stronger In paragraph states obstacle went make building stronger architects designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower The rocketshaped mast would four wings corners Other obstacles went making sure mooring mast tall enough paragraph Smith says people Washington figuring safe way mooring airships mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should be developed. If driverless cars were used, rather than normal cars, people would save money on gas. In the passage, it says that the driverless cars use half as much gas than a normal car does. Also, driverless cars can be safer than normal cars. If all the cars were not being driven by people, would there even be traffic? So the car would not need an emergency driver just in case there is traffic.\n\nFirsr of all, driverless car safety is constantly being updated, to make sure that the car doesn't get in an accident. The car has multiple sensors to know where it is going. There also still has to be a driver, so when there is traffic or road construction the driver can take over, helping prevent an accident. The car has an alert system that tells the driver to take the wheel. The driver also has to keep their hands on the wheel.\n\nAdditionally,The driverless cars could help a lot with public transportation. The driverless car can be used as a taxi to take people to nearby places. A driverless car could even prevent drunk driving because the drunk driver wouldn't be driving, the car would be driving. The drunk driver would get home safely.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should be developed. They are very safe in protecting the driver and pesestrians. Driverless cars can help a lot in public transportation. Whether it be a bus stop or a drunk driver. Convince your governor to allow driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is technology that is used in the classroom good for identifying facial expressions of students useful? Computers in the classroom that have the capability to identify whether a student is actually paying attention and to when they are bored or uninterested, is something that I think is a good. Putting all this techonology to work that we have could be beneficial in the classroom.\n\nThe software can tell even by a painting how the person is feeling. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"The software identified how the Mona Lisa was feeling just by detecting her muscles in the painting. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face...\" The software begins by taking a picture of your face and then constructing a 3-D model of it.\n\nNext, the software takes a closer look at your face. \"...all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" The software constructs the 3-D model into your facial expression and then it runs it by the 6 basic emotions. \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness...\" By putting your 3-D face through the facial identifying portion and identifying your emotions.\n\nNow, in the classroom this would be very beneficial. \"... we humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. For instance you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" The software can do the exact things that us humans can do. Just by looking into the camera lense the conmputer software can identify how I am feeling. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Then i could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". By using this software in a classroom the software can modify the activity to make it more fun for the students.\n\nFor now the software can only identify simple expressions but later on it should be able to do complex ones with new algorithms. \"Perhaps Dr. Huangs's emotion algorithms are a different sort of \"Da Vinci Code!\" Since most of our communication is non-verbal communication, this software could be a big help in the classroom. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, So computers need to understand that too.\" With technology rapidly expanding and getting bigger and smarter, it needs to understand how to recognize our human emotions and to better activities and such. In conclusion, I agree that emotion detecting software is useful in the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think in the years to come that maybe, just maybe something like this could work, but it wont be anytime soon. First off this will obviously be overwehlmingly expensive and will be very time cosumming. Right now people should not be thinking about these expensive plans because roadways today are still atleast somewhat reliable. considering this will require many years of work, and ruin the routes for people making it unconvenient for some that have daily routines to get around to sum up their day.\n\nThe biggest problem that I see is money and how much something like this could very well cripple our economy, obviously the other problems are serious like getting the amount of people necessary to do something this bold. Dont get me wrong it can solve the shortage of jobs and could get people off the streets and give chances to those less fortunate and could also pay extremely well. At the same time aswell, what happens to the workers after they are done with the roads. They could possibly end up without more jobs after the fact and the prices in the economy in my mind will have shot up.\n\nI also think its a bad idea because of where the money might be coming from. My biggest opinion is that it will possibly be coming out of the tax payers and this will bring a domino effect of poverty because the jobs people work for might not be able to keep up with the amount of money coming out of their employees checks. This could for sure bring a huge downfall in America's economy.\n\nTime in my opinion will also not be on anybody side because it would be reguired for all streets, backroads, interstate highways, and country roads internationally to be remanufactured. Maybe even surrounding countries like Canada and Mexico might have to adapt to the big change in roads. This would also trickle down all the way into south america and maybe be impossible for some places to obtain the funds or resources to make these things happen.\n\nThese reasons in my opinion are very clear and understanable to most because of the situations countries go through on a daily baises. Money, time, materials, and man power are required for this huge plan and I dont think it will be provided anytime soon. This is something that really seems impossible, but nobody will never know exactly what the future holds for our roadways.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As cyclist makes journey towards Yosemite setting causes much worry concern In beginning narrator content excited He something lovers heading beautiful destination found short cut save hours time He confidentin directions given old men However continues winding road environment makes doubt theirjudgement The first town comes entirely desertedThough first laughs laster realizes much trouble nt come civilization soon The cyclist runs across ramshackle shed shut factories water supply sinks lower road seems tantalize He passes water pump needs yet water something close toxic A road sign reminds go fast though die nt pick pace He forced look picture ofa happy boy guzzling grape juice dehydrates All features setting addition overpowering heat sun drive narrator breaking pointSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Road accidents have always been a significant matter of concern, so much so that there is an idea that says the problem can only be solved by punishing driving offenders very strictly. However, I do not think this is the only solution, although it could be somewhat effective.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it could be helpful to apply serious penalties to reduce the risk of traffic accidents. Theoretically, this not only can prevent lawbreakers from driving thoughtlessly again but also can warn other people against doing that. For example, since 2019, when Vietnam laid down strict legislation on alcohol consumption control, the number of crashes caused by drunkenness has decreased. According to this law, drivers will receive a fine of at least 85 USD for motorcycles and 255 USD for cars if their blood or breath contains alcohol, besides having their driving licence confiscated.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the above-mentioned solution is not always successful, hence an alternate measure should be proposed. Research conducted in Queensland, Australia, in 2019 shows that traffic infringements did not decrease despite the imposition of serious penalties, suggesting that people’s aggressive driving habits were not successfully deterred. Therefore, another measure is needed, and from my perspective, we ought to think about banning private vehicles, at least in a number of areas. This not only contributes to the reduction of road accident risks but also helps to ease environmental problems.\r\n\r\nIn brief, imposing strict punishments on driving offences could be helpful, but only to a certain extent. Since this method cannot defeat reckless driving, another proposal ought to be made, such as prohibiting personal vehicles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient dad waiting get money chiuahuce It dada sold giutar uncle get money day coarse didnt A day went still nothing When mom came picked I went swim practice trying patient wait dad get money At around dad called saying wont get money till I mad still tried patient A days went soon I excited We finally got I patiently waiting week tired So I patience worth That time I patient something goodIt really paidSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view is really unique.Its unique because of how he likes to be a seagoing cowboy and and crring for other animals and watching out for them when they are on the boat and makes sure that neither one of them falls off the boat,and i'm pretty sure that slipping off that ladder and cracking his ribs really hurt a lot when he did that.and the way he took time off from his jobs just to go all the way to Europe with his friend was probably worth it even if he did crack his ribs,i just bet he had a wonderful adventure with his friend Don.Having a good time is what its all about even when you hurt yourself or about to fall off board,the adventure and having fun is what it's all about.And in the story it was giving description about what there was to do on the boat,it was saying how they were entertaining themselves like playing baseball,volleyball,table-tennis,fencing ,boxing,reading,whittling,and games that helped them pass the time.and when it said it opended up the world to him,and then he said he was greatful for the opportunity,and that awareness stayed with him,leading his hamily to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the article is about the future for driverless cars and new technology that has been improving in our cars. The question is, should we allow driverless cars or not? In my opinion, I think we should have driverless cars. My reason for this is that i think it would be pretty cool to have driverless cars considering how our technology is changing over the years. Although, in some cases driverless cars can't be good but i'm sure that our technology can fix that.\n\nOver the years, cars have been getting better and has features the car can do itself such as: alerting the driver when accidents are about to happen, built-in GPS to get around easier, automatic steering, accelerating, and braking. For example, say if you were taking your daughter to school and your daughter asks \"dad, I would like to be dropped off here\" and the dad looks at his daughter and says \"It's fine I can drop you off at school\" and before he knew it, the car automatically stops before he could. This means that his car braked by itself and if his car didn't have self breaking then he would have been in an accident. This proves that technology took place in this situation. Although, sometimes driverless cars aren't a good idea.\n\nSometimes, driverless cars aren't such a good idea, but why? In some cases driverless cars aren't such a good idea because as it says in paragraph 9 about Waiting on the Law for trafficing, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" This means that not always is the technology is up-to-date. Also, sometimes it would be boring if there were driverless cars because if you were just to sit in the driver's seat and not drive then it would be boring because what would be the point to be in the driverless car and you couldn't drive? If you ask me, I think maybe soon our technology will improve and we would have an auto pilot mode or something that can have an option for us to drive or not.\n\nSometimes, driverlesss cars can be a good idea, but why? Well, like I said in paragraph 2 our cars are getting better every year and car companies are coming up with new ways for our car and for us to purchase it as well. Also, it's always good to not drive even when you are tired and that way we have automatic acceleration to where the car can drive by itself. Cars also have little things that improve with accident alerts and that is a seat that vibrates everytime you are close to an accident.\n\nIn conclusion, my position for driverless cars is I think a good idea because of my evidenvce that I provided above. For some people,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho main character saeng undergos many obstacles tries adapt new country different home The author chooses end story When come back saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again author meant end story fashion ensure reader saeng found new hope symbolized hibiscus flowerNow along budding new hope flower also carries sentimental value home Sometimes best way overcome obstacles embrace greenhouse leaves room start anewSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few believe education in University or college leads to a successful career, apart from them some students quit their studies soon after completing the schooling to get a job. In my point of view, i believe that graduation is necessary for a successful career and to stand independently. \n\nNowadays, graduation is the primary requirement, to achieve technical and qualified Jobs. In order to get respectable pay, a person needs to have good qualifications. Keeping in mind people believe that college studies definitely improve their career. Let us take, to become a teacher, or to become a Doctor, they need be graduated. \n\nAlternatively, these days Education became commercial, some students are not in a position to opt for higher studies, on the other hand they break their education after school and find the jobs which are relevant to them, like assistants, technicians, etc. \n\nTo conclude, education always encourages, enlighten the student career in the right path, studying beyond school will additionally improve their financial position. Though for certain students it's hard to complete their higher studies, for sure the time spent on completing their graduation will earn them a good life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist paragraph say temperture getting high drank water test like battery acid This would affect hot water starting get hot would able get day pasing also paragraph say roads changed hill ride hills become tired pumping legs would feel hot tiredd would want ride bike That features setting affect cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion everyone right go library get whatever book magazine movie music People go library lot reason computers books etc Also public library comes handy people nt computer home It s public library able go find anything need book movie wise Everyone differnt likes interests books movies m sure people go library expect looking Some people go library find looking Then people get mad upset cause figured library would nt But yes I think kind magazine movie book library need I mean s library Also people right go get whatever book movie want It s called freedom everyone diffrent everyone likes diffrent things There times I went library find books movies nt You would think library would book movie trying potty train toddler nt I think every kind book magazine movie want library Yeah people take offense cares obviously nt want leave go get want Just cause nt like nt mean people nt So I nt think cause people nt like removed shelves So absolutely think books movies magazines removed shevles You like like shoud nt matter people think long s like So opinion library good use everyone leave books magazines etc shevles people like read watchSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This tecnology is valuable because when the student is in class, and starts to get bored the computer would recognize the emotion of the student. The computer could then modify the lesson exactly how a teacher would but even better because it is a computer.\n\nThis technology would not just help out in schools, it can help out in many different places such as: hospitals, workplaces, and much more. Just how it can sense the emotion of the student it could also detect how a patient is felling. Therefore making it easier for the doctor and the patient. If the patient goes in not felling well at all the computer could detect the way the patient feels. The Facial Action Coding System would show the doctor percentages of the patients emotions. There will later be an update to the software making it more advanced. The sofware could have updates like, detecting more emotions such as stress, pain, which would help out in different places. The software would also dectet your emotion then could reference how to bring your emotions up.\n\nThis Technology is very valuable. It detects how anyone or a student in this case is felling and could modify the lesson for that student. The Facial Action Coding System would help the student do better in school. If the student gets bored in class or confused the computer will modify that, and then the student may understand what the computer is teaching rather better than the way the teacher was.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist come lot obstacles For example snake path cationly rides around Also alot hills wasnt sure could make hills Furthermore almost water could die heatstroke dehidration In conclusion comes obsticles achieves goalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this story, the author talks about how humans are capable of landing on Venus and checking the planet out. He states that there are many dangers like the high atmospheric pressure Venus has, and that Venus has the hottest temperature surface in all of the planets. Each mission they had was unmanned, and no space craft survived a landing for more than a few hours. The author supports his claim of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers bad because he explains that there are more dangers than possibilities and they have just conducted research and never tried or invented anything he states yet.\n\nNASA says they could create a blimp- like vehicle that hovers about 30 or so miles above Venusian landscape. This would work out because they have liveable conditions from where they are floating at, but they couldn't do anything with the info they get. When they are 30 miles above the ground it makes it difficult because most forms of light can only cover the dense atmosphere. The text states, \"Most importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" This is saying that scientists wouldn't be able to take substances form Venus back home to the US and the scientists would mainly have to explain all there observations from sight. The author also talks about how scientists are working on innovations and certain inventions that have not happend yet so he can't explain more details on how they could make it to Venus but many things have to be innovated first.\n\nNASA is also working on other approaches to get to Venus, but we can't start sending people to Venus if we don't even know if the invention or approach could work. There are more dangers than ways to get to Venus safely in this article so that is also a reason why I think he does a bad job supporting his claim. Venus to me is not really worth researching for just because of those conditions that the planet has, but if the blimp-like thing works out, I still think the scientists wouldn't be able to see what they wanted and get no good evidence. Like I said, pictures and any light source would be hard to get when you're in Venus. NASA and other researchers should focus on a different planet than Venus because It would be way to difficult to get people there, yet alone get reseach from Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear home nothing You cant play basketball friends hand eye cordenation You want learn arnt books And want talk friends Thats would happend dident advances technology No handeye cordenation wouldent able learn far way places coudent online Ccomputers benifit lives many ways To begin hand eye cordenation important Without woudent able ware even hold pensil peoples hand eye cordenation emproved using computer That proven say head human reactions CAPS knows hands oversized part body computer help movements hone hand eye cordenation said interview sience magaziene When clumsy break things Importan things sumtimes like broke mothers glass vase could helped used computer In addition computers give us power learn faraway places No books people prefer looking information computer book fact Some people wouldent heard earthquake wasent websights brodcasted updates Campers weudent heard In front page spread promote use computers instead books Books could outdated computer always uptodate answers Also people need able talk online Bisness meetings governments plans chatting friend People need able stay tuch If presedent couldent vidio conference would flying everyware Emale way talks coworkers I located far away much easier makes bissnesses major incoperations flow CAPS way kids talk seems says lets feel like part somthing biger Now happy healthy educated young old amaricans They research whatever want Its amazing technology alows talk online research faraway places practice handeye cordenation That sounds like good thing So computeristic fist good So agreeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders constructed The Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempted allow dirigibles dock Most importantly could simply drop mooring mast atop building hope best The mast would add large amount stress framework also factor stress dirigibles load wind pressure framework would need modified strengthened Safety also key problem builders ran Most dirigibles highly flammable fly populated city New York would impractical As well flammable characteristic also law airships flying low urban areas So therefore illegal tie even approach building The last obstacle builders ran wind The winds height constantly shifting due violent currents There also fear wind would blow ships sharp spires another building Including obstacles loss interest dirigibles result discontinuation projectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology that can describe how you are feeling from just ypur face is called, The Facial Action Coding system can be usefull in some positive ways or negitive,like it says in the articel you can read you classroom mines and you will know how they feel. In my opinion i think that they should use The Facial action coding system because you never know what someone is hidding or what they thing about the lesson in class or the work in a job. Also most of us will probably know how someone is feeling but some of us will not and that is were the Facial Action Coding system kickes in.\n\nThe most important thing about his machine is that there has been people that committed suicede and if the machine can detect what you feel i think that it can detect those people or kids and that way thier parents or teachers could know and stop it from happening and that machine can save a life or two. The machine can be also be used for police officers that need to slove a case or thing that someone is lying so they will just have to put the machine in thier face and ask questions and that will beb a win for th epolice officers. The article also said that the drawing of Mona Lisa was not only smilling she was also, ''9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 83 percent happy and 2 percent angry''. So if that machine told them all those percents in just a smile that the painting did that is amazing.\n\nThe best way to put this is that anything is posiblie you just have to do it, Because in the article it says ''Moving you facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help prduce them put on a happy face. I alsways thought that mona lisa was just happy in a picture but never in my mind did i thing that she was much more than just happy. The best is yet to come and we will not be worried about the stuff that happens becasue of their emotions because the Facial Action Coding System will get us covered.\n\nSo i ask you Did making a happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Unlike the aliens theory, we have poof that it just a landform. It's not werid to see something like that.\n\nThe Face on Mars, it is rare to see this, and it's not normal, but on earth we have we have odd things to see here. Like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. We have odd shape things on Earth too, so seeing a face is not that odd, it's amazing, but it not something that had to be made by aliens.\n\nAlso we have proof, the Mars Orbiter Camera took lots of pictures and revealed it to be just a normal landform. It formation does look like a head, the shadows give the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. So it is a huge rock, since it look like face , we give the people the idea that it was made to look like an face, but in reality it just a huge rock.\n\nInconclusion, the Face is just a natural landform. The alien theory is wrong, and the face is nothing special. We have proof and reasons why it's not made by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe that the face on Mars is made by aliens? I know my opinion doesnt matter, what matters is whats real. I know you are also thinking that this is crazy, because we all know aliens do not exist. There is no proof of aliens.\n\nIt has to be a natural landform, because in the 12th paragraph Garvin said it reminded him of Most Butte in the Snake River of Idaho. Our universe can create anything, just because something look like it was made does not mean it is. There could of been rocks there, and the dust just blows around them. Making it look like it was made, by something or someone. The very most obvious thing is aliens do not exist, there has been no proof of alien. Even to this day in 2016 there is still no proof of aliens.\n\nIn the 3rd paragraph NASA even mentioned it as a \"huge rock formation\" scientist are very smart if there was other such thing that made it, it would have already been discovered. Also the face on Mars was a good way to get attention, like paragraph number 5 said so. The face of Mars turned into a famous pop icon. It was on Hollywood films, all the way to Haunted grocery store check out lines. If people could get the public to think that it was aliens that made the face, it would have maybe become way more popular. Plus most people do not believe in such thing as aliens, if they do not have real proof.\n\nMy very last example is , if NASA found out was aliens they would have already told the public. It would be huge for NASA to discover aleins. There is no way they would hide the proof that aliens are real. It would help their budget, if they did discover an ancient alien civilization on mars. As it says in paragraph 6 scientist started hunting for more information. It became a priority for them. All the pictures they took revealed it as a natural landformation as it says in paragraph 7.\n\nThere is no way it is related to Aliens. So if someone says that NASA is just hiding it, it would be false. NASA would surely reveal that there is aliens on another planet. Just imagine how much attention they would get if they actually discovered it. They would probably be one of the richest people. It is positive that a face on mars, made by aliens is not real. It is just a natural landform of rocks, that looks like a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist riding tower stopped directions These old men told take short cut got lost He ghost town desert In conclusion desert hotSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient thats I I go fishing If spot cast takes sometimes almost fifty casts get bite wait swallow sometimes patient picking lure going use That sometimes patient picking lure going use That sometimes count water color amount weeds fish eat Then patience spot arent motor runs wait fish come back So lot patience go fishingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The NASA and I think that the face on Mars is just a natural landfrom. In some history people believed that aliens are real. Most still do, but the face that had happeared on Mars is just a natural landfrom.\n\nIn the text it states that \"NASA's Vicking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for it's siter Vicking 2, when it had spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" Now if the human face object was created by aliens then we would have of seen some kind of evidence that they would have left behind.\n\n\"Thousand of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landfrom\". The website could have of not been shown to the public, but the NASA wanted the people to know that their was no aliens involved in \"the Face monument\". Now their might of had been some kind of evidence that their was aliens their. The camera would have caught something even if it was cloudy at the red planet. Technology has gotten alot better the past 25 years so we would have of seen some kind of shape of evidence.\n\nThat the results have been made their was not any aliens involved in the human face shaped object. Landforms are really common on any planets, American West had a river plain that connected to Idaho. The river was not involved with any aliens in it but if we take a picture of Mars, and find a face does it have to be an alien monument?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nAfter much research, I have decided that the electoral college should not be kept. It is not completley fair, because the citizens think they're voting for their prefered candidate when really, they're voting for that candidate's electors. That means that if a candidate wins the votes of the citizens, he might not win the electoral college votes. This also means that he was not the president that the U.S. citizens wanted, but what the electoral voters wanted. In the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" they ask the question, \"Can voters sometimes controll whom their electors vote for?\" and they answer, \"Not always.\" This proves that the electoral college is not fair. Also, the electoral college shouldn't be kept because some electors will, \"refuse to vote for their party's candidate and cast a vote for whomever they please,\" says \"The Indifensible Electoral College\".\n\n\"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" says \"The Indefensible Electoral College.\" That is more than half of the United States population, therefore we should get rid of it. I believe that we should abolish it along with that 60 percent, thatway when voting, it will be much more fair. Also, it will make choosing the president of the U.S. up to the people.\n\nSome may think that keeping the electoral college is good because, If there is a tie in the election, the electoral college can break it with their votes. Although this does help, it has only happened once, therefore proving to not be needed. Other reasons are because it gives certainty of an outcome, helps big states, and avoids run-off elections, but are also not that important.\n\nIn conclusion I, along with 60 percent of the U.S. populaton, believe that the electoral college should not be kept due to its unfairness.\n\n-PROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author wants us to study Venus becuase he want as to know about are plantes and how dangers it presents can be he also talks about how venus he the clostest plant to the Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. Even more challenging there cloude are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venu's atmoshphere. The temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenhiet, and the atmosheric pressure is 90 time greater then on our own plant.Venus was probably covered largely with ocean and could have supported various forms of life just like the Earth. The author say that Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth . Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\n\nimagine a blimp- like vehicle hovering\n\n30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. The temperatures would be still toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit\n\nbut the are pressure would be close to that of the sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. For an example some electronics are made of silicon carbide. In the 1800's\n\nplayed an important role in the 1940's during world war 2.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is very outdated and confusing. Most American voters believe their votes elect the president even though they really don't. In truth, American voters are electing electors that instead go to the District of Columbia and vote the new president instead. As infuriating as this sounds, seeing as most Americans want a direct vote so a president is elected by popular vote, it's not entirely bad, but it isn't the best election system. The Electoral college is a system that should stay.\n\nMost Americans that are angered and upset when they realize their vote doesn't have as much say as they though are usually the ones who fight to abolish the Electoral College. While this is true, it is also accurate, most people don't even know that they aren't even voting for the president, and their vote is only electing their state's electors. As upsetting as that is, it's mostly just like choosing a new senator or representative to represent the state. This is the same idea, our state votes for a number of people to vote for us. If we win the democratic side, democrats will vote for the democrat (they rarely betray us) candidate.\n\nWhile the winner-takes-all system is unfair to those who do not agree with the side the state chose overall, it provides a clear system to clearly elect a new president. Candidates always try to persuade states, oftening visiting them to sway them to vote for electors that will go to elect them instead. Looking on the results, it's safe to say the Electoral College, as upsetting as it can be, is a voting system that should stay until we can find a better one. Abolishing the system might make it more of a direct vote, but the Electoral College is organized.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA student.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story greatly affected cyclist The main setting riding bike desert The desert really hot needed water would riding woods snow Also hills travel ride bike takes energy would needed water road flat finally terrain riding animals ran snake could hurt Because setting story desert cyclist affected thought wouldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college should be abolished because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates elector (source 1), and the voters cant always control who their electors vote for (source 2). On the other hand the electoral college is a great thing because a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possibe but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote (source 3).\n\nWhen you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates elector (source 1). Most people, including me, would like to vote for the president not a candidate because they might not even vote for the person you want for president. Some states are smaller then others so that makes them feel like their votes arent as important as the bigger states like California and Texas. The electoral college consists of only 538 electors compared to how many people are actually in the U.S. so there is a greater chance that the wrong president might be elected.\n\nMany people do not vote because the voters cant always control who their electors vote for (source 2). Not everyone wants to take the chance of voting for the wrong person to be elected for president. Some voters might get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate, as it says in source 2. Most states are small so most people in those states dont think the little states matter and they arent important in the election when they actually do.\n\nOn the other hand the electoral college is a great thing because a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possibe but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote (source 3). A better thing about the electoral college is that it requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal, meaning that not all the vote can come from one or two regions and no other ones. Voters in presidential elections are the people who want to express a political preference rather than the people woh tihnk a single vote can dicide an election.\n\nAs a student I want the best for the up coming generations, including me, that are going to be able to be a part of the presidential elections and to not be confused who to vote for or how the electoral college works. Every year a new generation becomes legal to vote and be part of the election but if they dont know how to vote or how it works then they wont be able to. Some people dont know anything about poitics but, still want to be able to vote so, it should be easy for them to vote for who they want to be president rather then the long process of, voting for the canidates elector and most of the time they dont vote for who they want and they vote for the wrong person.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is second plant from our sun, and is also referred to as Earth's \"twin.\" So why don't we know more about it? Scientists are saying that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Three ways we could study Venus are by floating above the fray, using machines made of silicon carbide, or mechanical computers.\n\nFloating above a certain point in Venus could help keep a person safe from the storms and, \"unfriendly ground conditions.\" Looking at Venus from a certain point can barley help Scientists gather enough information. In the text it says that, \"hovering far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videopraphy ineffective.\"\n\nSo now that we know this, this leads me to the other options.\n\nUsing machines made of silicon carbide is more of a simplified electronic device that can withstand most of Venus's \"unfriendly conditions.\" In the passage the author states, \"electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Which means if they can get that device in Venus, they could probably get some sort of sample depending on how long they leave it there.\n\nMechanical computers were used back in the 1940s during World War II. They made calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. If Scientists used regular electronic devises, which are very delicate, it would be destroyed due to the conditions on Venus. So in the texts it says, \"mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" Which could work because of how extreme it is on Venus.\n\nIn conclusion I believe we need to know more about Venus and expand our finding by studying different places and planets. So by using these three mechanisms like floating about the fray, using silicon carbide, and mechanical machines we could learn more about Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more and more people believe that completing a course at university or college is the best way for their children to have a successful career. However, other people claim that it is better to get a job and gain experience in society after they finished high school. In this essay, I completely agree that people should study at university.\n\nOn the other hand, many people argue that if they get a job straight after school they have able to earn money early than those who go to university, so they can give their families a lot of financial support that helps improve their life quantity. Moreover, everyone knows that the universities’ tuition fees are high, therefore they will save a high amount of money for another effective method if they straight go to work, furthermore, becoming a worker early mean they have more opportunities to practice their particular skills and knowledge instead of just study base-theory at university.\n\nHowever, participating in the university or college courses give we learning high-level knowledge and undergo a complete education system from a lot of famous professors. Additionally, at University we can meet many different types of people who have special skills and creative ideas, it is a chance for you to expand your network and make friends with those who have similar interests. Also, according to many reports, people who graduated from university or college have a high probability find jobs easily and have higher career achievements in the future. What is more, there are great quantities of scholarships at universities or colleges that their future or in-school students can apply for, those scholarships decreased students' financial stress.\n\nIn conclusion, while some people believe that going straight to the job is better, I consider that humans should spend time studying at the university because it provides them with an appropriate knowledge base in the subject they are going to explore further during their career. University is an integral part of human life since it allows them to learn and develop skills that, in turn, will make them more prepared for a successful career.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle law There existing law airships flying low urban areas Although first builders looked past many nonlegal obstacles faced There also safety issue docking dirigibles Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable One last obstacle builders faced wind The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents With obstacles would improbable close impossible dock dirigibles mast Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast architects went many obstacles allowing dirigibles dock Empire State BuildingThe engineers go different expirences consult experts take tours equipment would used project The architects realize could nt drop mooring mast top Empire State Building realize consequences danger like wind pressure Also fires firework happen many people would get hurt killed due New York s population The architects faced many obstacles taught danger outcome building mooring MastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "school s office usual thing I elementary school already developed habit making sick I could go home It worked several reality adults could outsmart sickness As kid I perfect actor apparently acting skills fading All staff new harder make ways I remember forth grade I made appearance office really choice innocence I never knew could happen next My cousin I classes used look alike kids teachers would often confuse looked like twins One day cousin struggling couple math problems math teacher decided stay minutes school help However also use ride bus I decided wait order catch bus together Those minutes became already missed bus That s made appearance office chunky old lady new heart I would always remember sitting chair front computer filling papersThis time knew nt one wan na go home days We missed bus said asked us gave explanations In meantime called make sure telling truth When showed office lady explained said problem confused explanations thinking missed bus reason making look like liar When heard said I nt telling truth I tried explain lady mistaken use even cousin tried defend office lady said sure I said Being kid I felt ashamed even though I knew I telling truth Mrs decided give demerit deep inside I knew I said truth s matters As kid seems like end world situations Feeling anger I nt able anything I look back brings smile face poor judgment I could think teacher mean I see big misunderstanding Now around years passed memory still I get best When I hang cousin base conversations funny moments childhood bring laughter remembering foolish things young Sharing moments bring us closer family friends better thing enjoying moments long lasting laughter people loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affected cyclist didnt know going die live He used water hot mouth drySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For my own position on driverless cars, I am against the development of them.\n\nReason being is because their is always minor fixes; fixes that can either indanger you and the safety of anyone else in the car with you.\n\n\"They said that Tesla has projected a 206 release for a car of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\"\n\nThat still isn't good enough for safety of human beings, because they would though act as if the car's purpose the entire time is able to just drive itself.\n\nEspecially in traffic on highways, express ways, or even downtown traffic. People would wonder is it really safe to use driverless cars?\n\nThe driverless cars would not be able to configure itself on what is safe with the incoming traffic and hazardous affects.\n\nOne question that people would need to know before hand using this driverless car is who's fault would it be if someone gets injured, the driver or maufacturer?\n\nMost states want drivers and everyone in the car to be at alert at all times for safe reasons.\n\nIt is understood that the driverless car would be able to handle speeds up to 25 mph, but that would not be able to help during traffic like highways or downtown.\n\nIt just tells us how useless this new type of car will be used.\n\nI believe that the driverless cars should not be indevelopment.\n\nIf so people should be careful and not to use them for fun, because these types of cars have bugs in them, that should be fixed before in use.\n\nDo I believe that they sound great for the future of course, but at this time and era no because people can barely handle a new hover board that came out.\n\nIn regards this is what people should think about and believe what I have stated against this development of driverless cars, not just for fun and excitement but as well as your safety and safety of others.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From my perspective,\n\nI think driverless cars are coming is... The argument of this article will be unsafe,safe, dangerous and breakingdown. this argument has spme pros and cons. The pros is that many people dont need cars anymore. Cause of them breaking down and not working right.Alopt of cars take different things such as; oils and other chimcals as well. This has a negative effect on people due to damages and how much milage it goes up to.\n\nThe cons are that it can drive itself, park and much more. But the main cause is that what if its not safe?. The car must be safe to drive or it wont sale. Taxis are expensive and cost by miles and by the minute. The Google cars are better in a way u can drive yourself and its not hands on. This is a new generation factory made car that is different from other's in the past. No one else can come up with a self parking car like google. It probably takes less gas as well. Also it has a 3-D model which means when it self parks it uses the light inside to watch out for other cars while parking. Basically its a second camera. And it can break itself. So now you know it has all these new gajets and it basically does everthing without you touching it. In actual reality i would buy it myself as well. I think its a cool car and that its better. Nowadays people would've known about this car until it was advertised and seen in the city. It locks itself to. That's even better. The car assists for you it can do so much regular cars can't. And the fun part about this is that you don't even need a driver.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello there, I'm Luke Bomberger, I was asked to recuild new members. I believe if your part of the Seagoing Cowboys you'll have the time of your life, come on now just take a look at me.\n\nI have crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and Pacific Ocean twice before.\n\nIf you do not believe that you will have the time of your life then you will not believe all the beautful places or imagtheant. You may not want to come because you do not believe in what I say to be true. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelivable opptuntiy for a small-town boy\", like myself.\n\nThe fun bit is when you get to take care of the animals or when the animals had been unloaded and the space where the animals used to be are free, you can go there, and play games like baseball,volleyball, table-tennis, fancing, and boxing or read a good, nice (or not so nice)\n\nbooks.\n\nI rember that when I was a young boy, I used to work at my aunt's farm. I'm a hardworking person, that is not really used to the sea during my second trip. The effect that was caused me not being use to the sea was I had a job as a night watchman, I had to check on the animals every hour. Then one day I was doing my daily rottone when a storm hit and I lose my blance, I'm lucky that I'm okay thought.\n\nAt the end of my adventures I realise that I have learned so much about others and their ways of life. Thanks to Seagoing Cowboys I have done many good deeds, and my family host a number of international students and exchange visitors for some years and I do hope for many more to come. Thank you all for coming to the the indorceiner of the Seagoing Cowboys program!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire state building faced many obstacles course bringing Al Smith s plans life One air ships flying low Urban areas illegal If breaking law nt large enough obstacle issue New York citizen s safety also came play Most dirigibles dangerous due flamability So one wrong move could killed many exploded densley populated area Another huge obstacle came play lightness dirigibles would allow s rear swivel around around mooring mast The way stop would put citizens dangerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do you think about diverless car? There are advantages and disadvantages to diverless cars. In the article \"Diverless Cars Are Coming,\" the Google cofounder, \"Sergey Brin\" envisions a future public tranportation system where fleets of diverless cars form a public taxi system.\n\nIn my opinion, i don't think the world needs diverless cars, simiply because technology is already consumed the world. Now a days everyone is on their phones or laptops doing business work or simiply being on soical media, the last thing we need are cars without divers. In the article, they talk about smart roads and binary code messages. How can you have the technology to make a road smart? Is my question. Who in the right mind would want this? It is just making the world look more and more lazy. The fact that that this is the future is ridiculous. Making driving fun is not just a way to make a new car? Its stupid to be honest. They should be focusing on making cars more safer and more knowedgeable when it comes to crashes or other emerganies.\n\nSo, Driverless cars? If you ask me they just seem like a waste of time and money. You're just making the world more lazy then what it already is. The world doesn't need cars that are built with technology to help them drive or to drive for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a new invention due to all new technologly being used today. They include cameras, sensors, and GPS. These car dont need human beings to be driven but may contain passengers. Google confounder Sergey wants this invention to be a uplift to the future. The law is the only thing standing in his way.\n\nI believe driverless cars are not a useful sourse. I dont like the fact that Sergy's intentions are to make us more lazy then what we already are. How is it we are told to always keep our eyes on the road if there won't be any? Also saftey plays a big part in every thing and i dont find the car safe. Under no circumstances!\n\nThe car couldnt be safe because as said in the text, what is someone where to get into an accident, who would the courts be able to blame? Most court claims about this situation wouldnt be far. To blame the a driver couldnt be far due to bugs on the manufacturers behalf. Nor would it be fun if a person crashed into the experiment. We know fines are going to take palce. Also what if rush hour comes along, what about traffic? Would the car get confused on when to turn? Or if we get further into thought, think about long you think you would be sitting at a turn. The car wouldnt be moving at your pace. Couldnt make people late to their destination.\n\nThis car is up to date with all the new equitment, but thinking critically, eletronics do not have brains. Some things need humans. Also Ferdal law will hopefully not pass this car due to saftey cause. These thing can get minds of it own and hurt someone or maybe even destory property. I dont believe manufacturers wants to pay all those bills .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez creates mood happiness greatfulness memoir He talks family always celebrating From native Cuba The memoir states It warmth kitchen humble house Cuban Feast albeit frugal Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love house Narciso grew Narciso s parents came america give children better life makes Narciso greatful Narciso also greatful parents love sacrifice gave Narciso says way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends Which makes greatfullness come mood He shows hapiness greatfulness parents mood memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "now, I know that you are thinking that driveless cars are crazy, but they might be a little bit of help someday. just think about it ,you can relax, sleep, play on your phones or even\n\ntalk on them without being distracted while driving so you can do whatever you need to do while driving . We are getting closer to adappting that type of technology stated in paragraph 6 , it says \" Antilock brakes and driver assitance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire, but Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project,believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream.\"\n\nDriverless cars may sound exciting but there are some problems with cars without drivers. there is a law that states that \"only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\" meaning that there must be atleast someone controlling the car. I admitt it doesn't get any better that driverless cars, but there are rules we have to follow.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorial college is a bad thing because voters aren't voting directly for the candidates. Voters are only voting for a slate of electors that then vote for a president. Uninformed people might be mislead as to what they are actually voting for. The election should be changed to popular vote because the electorial college is not votiong directly on a matter.\n\nWhile big states have more say in what happens, small states were created to have just as much power. There are few states with over twenty electorial votes, and twenty votes is a lot. But, there are far more small states(in terms of population) than big states. Having many states with only 7-16 beats few big states with 20-55. Some candidates won the popular vote, but lost the electorial vote due to what states they were popular in. This sways the actual results of voting and messes up what should be based on raw voting numbers. Having electors making the desision for the state is another reason why certain candidates lose.\n\nSome people in America don't know the difference between the popular vote and electorial vote. This can result in people being mislead. If a candidate were to visit California and make a good impression, that state would have a higher chance of being in that candidates favor. If another candidate were to go to Montana, make a good impression just like the first one, he would have the advantage for that state. Both candidates put in the same effort, but the first one would have many more electorial votes than the second mainly because of how electorial votes work.\n\nThe winner takes all rule is also in some way bad. Candidates would be competing over larger states like California and New York, If the voting within that state came down to a 49 to 51 percent vote, one candidate would be so close but acheive absoloutly nothing. Each candidate SHOULD get whatever votes they earned to make the voting the way it should be and more fair.\n\nThe electorial college is in many ways imperfect, which is why popular vote would be more efficient and more of an actual competition. Popular vote is also a way to make voting simple.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Yes this is explainable, and he says this for many reasons in well supported. Venus is a complicated planet, like most others and has dangers and complications too. And Venus is a very challenging planet to study and more even explore. But the main reason why it is a worthy pursuit is by how fascinating it is, and it is fascinating for lots of reasons. But the challenge it takes is mainly what is fascintating about it.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by the way Venus was once earh-like with earth-like features and condtions. And it may have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system at one point. Long ago it had similar oceans and valleys, mountains and craters similar to earth. And it at a point could've supported various forms of life. Despite its severe conditions of the acidic clouds and carbon dioxide filled atmosphere with great pressure, it is survivable for humans. This planet Venus is so interesting/fascinating that NASA has seemed to go out of thier way to test modern technology to see if they can handle the severe conditons of Venus in a chamber for periods of time. They have tried to built more long-lasting and stronger mechanical parts to handle the pressure, heat and other forces.\n\nAstronomers and scientists continue to pursue this challenging journey to studying Venus and its dangers. They seem they will stop at nothing or the tough challenges it may come with. The author states that, \"Srtiving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained by the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" And the author also states, \"Our travels on Earh and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Venus is a challenging planet to study which seems to make scientist and astronomers want to study it even more. And the worthy pursuit of this goes beyond limitations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology of reading into students emotional expressions for the classroom can be beneficial because it gives a more in depth look into how a student is feeling during a specific lesson rather than them saying they understand the lesson when they do not. This new technology may make it easier for classrooms because some kids dont like to speak up when they dont understand something and that does not help the student or teacher. So this new technology will keep the teacher up to date on how there students or feeling about the lessons.\n\nSome students assume it is easier to just not say anything at all when they dont understand something. Students dont want to be a hassle for the teachers to have to go back and go over a lesson so they end up not saying anyhting on there confusion. Also students just do not want to be the only classmate to speak up. Dr. Huang says \" A clasroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This can help the teacher in order to realize what they can do to make the lesson more fun like helping the students engage more. Also this can just help the teacher know what they can go over in order to make the students understand certain lessons more.\n\nThis technology can help more so with the teacher because it is there job to help students when they do not understand something and to make the classroom learning process easier. Dr. Huang predicts that \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This would really help teachers alot in the sense that they dont have to worry about if anybody is behind in there class because everyone will be at there own pace on different levels of the lesson.\n\nUsing technology to read students emotional expressions during class will be very beneficial to the teacher and students. This will help the classroom flow smoother because the teacher will not have to worry about who is caught up and there understanding, if the computer can figure out where the student starts getting confused or bored. Then mabey eventually the computer will be able to modify the lesson for peoples learning pace and understandment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock For one thing builders could nt simply place mast top empire state building building would surely collapse A thousandfoot dirigible moored top empire state building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame To change fix problem sixty thousand dollars would needed modifications Another obstacle builder s failed see actual construction modernday dirigible The dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly Flammable If dirigibles ever explode docking situation would horrible densely populated area New York Lastly greatest obstacle building nature Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around would dangerous The dirigible could pedestrians streets meaning safe There three obstacles prevented empire state building allowing dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea to further study Venus very well and I will show you how. The author supports his idea by giving different things NASA and other countries have down to explore the planet, but he also helps introduce the reader to the planet in the first paragraph.\n\nThe author starts by giving different facts about the planet including the following \"Venus sometimes called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points in the sky, making it simple for even an amatuer stargazer to spot.\" this is from the first paraghraph and even though it may not seem like he supported his idea he introduced the planet to the reader, which in turn helps the reader to understand the planet a bit more. He also explains how human beings have been fascinated by it with the following from paragraph 2 \"Earth,Venus,and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner_in space terms_humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" also there is this from paragraph 4 \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may have well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solor system\". this is proving that for decades humans have been fascinated by this gas cloud-draped planet. He also explains that NASA is trying to figure out ways to get to the surface safely in paragraphs 5&7 with the following \"NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been teseted in achamber simulating the choas of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" this is really some compelling information. This information really helps set the tone that we just might be able to study Venus's choatic surface.\n\nI think that the author really supports his idea with all of the infromation provided even though this mission might seem impossible people like this author s trying to keep the hope alive. The author explains how NASA is trying so many different technologies to try and send them to the surface, also while trying to figure out if scientist could try and hover over the planet while studying the planet from the outside. There you have it so many ways this author supports his idea that there is still hope for studying Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the developing new technological world pollution are most affected factor to preventing a climate change. Also, damage of environment to prevent modulation in climate. Generally mankind are thinking to change those life with the environment is to safe for it’s. If asked to support, I would choose partially agree with this sentence also my opinion is elaborated further.\nModern cities the weather are very bad condition at that time, because of the human are main factor of the change environment. Moreover, green house effect is very harmful to our environment and that is polluted by people. For instance, a farmer is growing the vegetables on his farm but they would grow up the non- seasonal vegetable using the green house. So, that the important to damage the over environmental cycle. In contras, people has to knowledge of the how they can stop this effect and also get a less pollution.\nAnother side, some has think of the batter option is human are manage to live in all type of the environmental condition. Furthermore, in some case, climate is very unknowing situation that might we can manage it, that time the we can settle with climate situation. For example, in ruler areas people will know about the all kind of safety and protection of the those development; consequently the government will provide a this type of knowledge of it’s population. Thus, the society have defense to the any type of the weather condition.\nTo conclude, general public can cover both of the situation handle in any of the climate change. In my opinion they have to focus on the less damage of environment and also the learn about how to survive in the difficult weather condition.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every library tons information everything There tons books music movies magazines contain information There even information people might take offence On hand somebody else could perfectly fine I think libraries keep books shelfs matter kind content contain everybody takes offence contents books way vice versa The subject race might come play books libraries Books information people things people race Some people want books took libraries content contain really could n important part history people need educated Some books words offencive people skin color relgion ethnic race This information people need know thats people treated back stuff like still occurs today Libraries kinds information I think books libraries stay matter contain Even content offensive people could still important part history people need knowSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To a certain ,extent I agree that the role of schools is to prepare children to be more productive. However, I also believe that schools have a positive impact on us as individuals. \r\n\r\nSchools predominantly teach their students to be dedicated workers in the market. The school's curriculum concentrates on improving some skills that are not necessarily going to help students in the real-world such as memorizing texts and definitions which is considered not the best approach to learning, Secondly, most teachers criticize their pupils when they fail in their tests, ignoring that the essence of great success is great failings. This may execute trepidation of failing when they are experiencing life as adults. Consequently, fewer opportunities will merge for them because they always avoid risk-taking as they assume to avoid failure, such conception can be devastating for children in their life. \r\n\r\n Moreover, schools have a great impact overall on our life in terms of aspects like education and occupation. Society members may sometimes adopt and circulate the experience of some successful people and deal with it as a role ,not as an exceptional state, as they claim that most of the biggest successful people did not go to school, overlooking the millions of people that schools were a crucial component of their success such as becoming the CEO of a particular company. Another interesting thing is that most of the jobs in the last century require qualifications and school certification is the most important among them. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the methodology used in teaching children should be optimized to align the real-world demands. Although schools have a beneficial effect on society and individuals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper discussion around decades People agree whether computers good privelage society bumping year year I think computers positive effect people This teach handeye coordination give knowlege cultures around world allow people communicate one another Do think downsides really outweigh positives Handeye coordination something born You gain get older acheive practive Computers help goal PERCENT people go frequently horrible catching baseball going caught every time says biologist And helps baseball sports juggling golf tennis If get good sports play fun even proffessional Who knew playing could get far life Did know according Time magazine people go better able focus tasks schoolwork enables hands eyes work together one And everyone knows get good grades school almost job could qualified Then earn good amount money live dream life Oh great another hour day school Hhmm What I first block history What Yes We re culture project That means I easily go find great things place I m assigned That s another upput computers Easy access tons useful information I cheerleading everyday school If I project I nt hours hours look books find I need know Computers allow sport still get good grade school people use computers informational work faraway places It faster accurate You could search bookshelf find almanac But find would need check copyright Hopefully s recent If re trouble Would feel like prying shelves acccurate Facebook All new ways communicate people Just another useful effect people Forgot write homework Hopefully friend nt ask PERCENT people nt chat others online says expert Most reason another Such homework happened day nt seen eachother forever Do nt chat people online Trust gradesaver Maybe help conclude computers give positive effect society handeye coordination information chatting What would withoutSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer software that could tell how you were feeling just by looking at you. Could this be good for the classroom? Or perhaps could it pave the way for future students with new ways to learn?\n\nWhat are it's benifits? What are it's flaws? Could this new software be worse for us than it is good? Is this new software good or bad?\n\nProf. Thomas Haung is the creator of this software. So far they say your home mac can't run this software but it could someday. Like all inventions theres got to be fails or bumps in the road. My question is what were they and how long did it take to make this software?\n\nI could definately see the the benifits of this being used in the classroom. Not only for the benifit or the student but the teacher as well. For example if the student has had a bad night at home. If the software works right it could tell. They said that it could identifly over forty four diffrent muscle postition depending on the exspression. Then at that point it could notify the teacher and then he or she could help or get help from a guidance councler. But not only that if the student is confused on what he or she is learning the teacher would know instantly and could help. This would elimante the shy students who hate being noticed and have trouble learning the subject.\n\nThis could also pave the road for new ways to learn. So if the student does not like the subject or gets borded very easly like it said in the article it could switch the way it was treaching the student. With this it could also regrab the students attention letting he or she fully learn the lesson so they could fully understand it. If the software worked right it could do so much good for the students grades and help them perphare for the future.\n\nThe benifits of the software could not only mean the better well being for students and teachers alike. But it could also help us interrogate prisioners by seeing there emotions towards things when you ask them a question. It could possibly replace the lie detector test or be combined with it to make it even better.\n\nThe flaws could be major or they could be small. For example if the program uses a camrea it could very well lead to people hacking the system and finding there next traget. Or if its used in a prison and they hack it they could find out everything a prisoner knows and said during the interrogation. Or it could be used to get personal information from a councler and there patient or a doctor and there patient.\n\nCould this software be worse of us than it is good? It very well could be but it also has so many benifits to level the playing field. If it can be hacked its going to be but they can place secerity measure to counter this. I see no reason this could be worse than good. But there is always a possalbilty it could be.\n\nIs this new software good or bad? This new software can see fortyfour diffrent muscle in the face and read them like a book. But it could be hacked and used against us. Or be used to get personal information from us. It also got so many good use that it levels thoughs out making it sound as if it were for the better. Like useing it to help kids learn things better in class or to help them emotionally.\n\nSo my arguement is that it should be used. Like it said in the article it can help students learn better or to draw there attention back to the subject. But it could also help teachers read there students emotions and be able to tell if there happy or sad or what there feeling and be able to change that. Or the ads for example say we don't like that ad or it offends us the software could tell and it could make it to were it no longer played that ad and kept it out of the playlist. Or even better your listening to music and you dont like the song it could tell and not play it anymore. But if you liked that song it could make a playlist for you or add to one.\n\nTo not use this would be a mistake because of the benifts it has for us in our everyday lives even if it has its flaws. the good outways the bad in this situation. There are so many uses that even the bad that could happen from using this software are slim to none. With kids who have a higher learning means we can excel faster in advancement in medical and science. Prisoners on death row that are innocent could now be spared instead of living someone elses fate. So the good outways the bad in this situation and should be used with full intent to help us for the good.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At doctor lot people se decided stay wait Also mom dad went sister doctor Furthermore sister I wanted go outside play parents said watch tv mom reading magazine dad reading newspaper Finally little left person go doctor call name sister dad mom went us So sister dont get scared check ups dad paid left home patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello! My name is Luke and Iam taking part in the \"Seagoing Cowboys Program.\" It is amazing to see how awesome God's nature can be. It feels really good to go to different places and see cool things but know that you are serving God by helping others.\n\nI joined the program for many reasons. I joined because I have a really good friend named Don Reist. He talked to me about how they do things there and how much fun it is. So I thought, if I went and was serving people and helping them survive, would it be good for me, and then I knew that God was calling me to do this and I wanted to do what was right in the eyes of the Lord, so I said, \"Yes.\"\n\nOnce I got there, I heard that there were 44 nations and that we were going to form UNRRA, wich meant, (the United Nations Relief nd Rehabilation Administration). Don and I had signed up for the \"Seagoing Cowboys,\" where you take care all of the animals. It wasnt what I had expected, but it was still something that I could serve God for.\n\nI had served for many years and I am very happy that I chose to do this. If I haden't then I would be stuck working a bank and grocery store. So that is my story and my many reasons why you should join our group and make the world a better place!\n\nIn conclusion, I think that you should totally join. If you are thinking about it then that is just fine. Just think quik!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For decades, most couples have been reluctant to have babies at younger ages as a result there is a sharp decrease in the youth parents. However, what are the benefits of this situation, and what are the drawbacks? In this essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions.\r\n\r\nLet's begin by looking at the advantages of this situation. These days both men and women are inclined to focus on their job-related burdens as well as their university studies since it is difficult to take responsibility when you have children because of the huge amount of time which should be spent only on toddlers. As proven by statistics, four out of every eight spouses never consider having infants before becoming successful in their Professional fields. As a consequence, most young generations follow their goals, and hence, they start a family after quenching outstanding desires.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is known to everyone that rearing offsprings are a demanding task which requires a large amount of patience and this feature may be diminished when parents become older so they show less interest in spending time with their heirs. The result of a survey in Canada explored that most children who have Middle-aged procreators feel lonely in comparison with other kids. As a result, having infants in their forties has both negative impacts on offspring as we as couples, hence, creates less strong bonds among them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, bringing up a child is an arduous burden at any age and demands a lot of paying attention. Personally, in my opinion, people should ponder several times before starting a family of different ages as being a parent is the hardest duty in the whole life but it is well worth the effort.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some books suitable kids They could make section adults includes books censored These books aloud checked kids age unless parent guardian allows Some adults nt care kids read library I ve read books school adult books school Back elementary school I remember checking alot books I nt think adult books Some kids enjoy reading adult books It helps reading skills content book suitable Making section adults would help stop kids reading adult material I believe take place every library around worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving an automobile takes lots of practice, and not everyone is good at using them. Now and days there's texting and driving, and people who just dont know what they are doing. Driving can be very dangerous unless you have a driverless car. Driverless cars have a lot of pro's, and can change the future positively. Driverless cars will be a good idea because they can efficiently use fuel, decrease the amount of car accidents, and they are safer.\n\nFirst, driverless cars are fuel efficient. As stated in the first paragraph of the article, \"...use half the fuel of today's taxi's and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Sergey Brin, Google's cofounder, belives it can fundamently change the world. If using driverless cars will use half the fuel of cars we use today then everyone would save more money. Money saved on fuel can pay for tuitions, charity, and etc. So therefore money saved on fuel can be put to better use.\n\nNext, today you can't go on the news anymore without seeing several fatal car crashes. Driverless cars have been tested since 2009, and can drive under many conditions. The article states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" As of now Google cars aren't driverless but they do alert the driver to take over or pull over. Sensors on the cars can tell you when to brake, or when you are at risk for an accident. Having a driverless car can help someone who has to drive hours on end and may not be fully alert, or someone who is new to driving. Therefore the amount of car accidents will plumet.\n\nAlso using these cars can make a bigger difference when it comes to safety than the ones we use today. Texting and driving will not be stressed as much when using a driverless car. It is said that there will be head-up displays for entertainment when using these cars. To make this entertainment safer the article stated, \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over, something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" Therefore the cars are designed to make driving safer.\n\nTo conclude, smarter cars or driverless cars can change the future positively. Driverless cars will be a great idea becuase they can efficiently use fuel, decrease the amount of car accidents, and they are much safer. They are already being made and automakers are going to release cars that are capable for autopilot this year. Everyday technology grows and we get closer to that day. Don't you want the future to be brighter for generations to come?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting effects cyclist away people cant tell cycling forty miles maybe gallon water hard expecialy California I hitting water bottles pretty regularly I traveling high desserts California June The effect body would rather devastatingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books music movies magazines form expression We freedom way feel think graphic read I believe censorship libraries needed protect minds children people easily influenced thoughts others Books major factor expressing way one feels topic romance horror Many children like read books comic books invovle great deal violence Childrens mind s like sponges means soke anything read great chance influencing functioning everyday activities If go music store find many different types music rap blue grass I ve noticed school particular type music stands rap favorite artist known rapping drugs sex money violence Many teens think favorite artist ca nt I ve listened songs every song one four key topics comes Like movie industry starting come movies drugs sex money violence Many students school talk latest comedy movies like ORGANIZATION The CAPS ect turned life something like movies go break Movies like funny watch someone easily influenced nt watching Books music movies magazines surround us stories thoughts another human We freedom right also right take away feel endangering minds others I think censorship library certain things good option cleaning mind poisoning messSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "America's great past time might now be just that, in the past. This isn't baseball though, it's the usage of our American vehicles. America was the frontrunner in the invention of cars and has the motor capital of the world in Detroit. However, We've come a long way since the model T and now it is time to move forward into a new, cleaner era of transportation. Cities all across the world have begun the process of minimzing the usage of private motor vehicles to help stop pollution, and to encourage the use of public transportation. The trend is already upon us in America as well, as a study showed that between 2001 and 2009 the amount of young people driving has decreased by 23 percent. Life without cars has proven beneficial to many cities around the world and it is time to spread to all cities.\n\nFirst off, limiting the usage of cars will vastly decrease the amount of pollution to our environment. Recently in Paris, France the government banned all drivers with odd license plates on the first day and all even number plates the second during a two day effort to minimize the smog and pollution of the city. This method proved to be very effectiveas the capital decreased its congestion by 60 percent. This little experiment may seem like a very small accomplishment, but it should serve to be the precedent by which other countries can help stop pollution. If this was done once evry month in major cities around the world it would cause a major decrease in pollution. In the long term it shows people that having their own car isn't always necessary and it is better for the environment to use public tranportation, and or other means to get to one's destination. Bogota, Colombia also participated in their second anual car-free day. This was considered to be a huge success by their mayor and many other South American leaders came to witness it themselves. They were all thouroughly impressed by the programs effectiveness and have thought about implementing it in their own countries.\n\nSecondly, limiting car usage will result in different city layouts that could prove to be more desirable and efficient. In Vauban, Germany they have decided to go nearly car free with 70 percent of residents not owning a car. Car ownership is allowed but the owner of the vehicle must buy a space in a large parking garage for 40,000 dollars. Many of the residents claim that they lived a more stressful life when they owned a car and are now much happier because of the sale of their vehicle. This has started a trend in Europe of small suburban communities going car free to help the environment and their lives. This shift into a car free world is sparking the idea for new city designs to make them denser so mit is easier for people to travel from place to place. Stores can be placed only a walk away on a main street as opposed to a large shopping mall that is along a large highway.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting the use of cars and motor vehicles would prove to be extremely benficial for our world and our society. It would help solve the pollution and global warming crisis by limiting the amounts of carbon dioxide we put into our atmosphere. It would also change the shape of our suburban life, making it easier for people to get from place to place while still maintaining their green lifestyle. An Earth without cars becomes an Earth with a more peaceful environment and a healthy atmosphere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and the author supports this idea by stateing how earth like it is and how even thought there is a mass of co2\n\nand the clouds of highly corosive sulfuric acid and tht the planted is on average 800 degrees Fahrenheit they still belive that we can live ther because it is our nearest planet to earth and could at onew point be our backup planet. They also want to study it for its land feature \"valleys, mountains, and crater.\"\n\nNASA has found out how to send humans to study the surface of Venus, \"Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\"- NASA \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovoring 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" It wont work due to the fact that it will still be at a \"tosty 179 degrees Farenheit\" they could still do it, \"the air preasure would be close to that of sea level on earth\" and \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed that of earth levels.\" It is survivable for humans.\n\nAlothough venus may not seam like the best planet to live on one day it might be the only planet to live on if we keep poluting the planet we have now and not take and helping our planet out of its situation. NASA does say that \" human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginationand innovation.\" Life as we know it will one day end and by exploring these new planets we may have somewhere else to go if our Earth decides to regect us as humans due to our events of life\n\nand destruction we have done to it.\n\nBy the time that we may have to leavecomputers may be more advanced and scientist may figure out how to make humnas live without oxygen but for the meantime we need to take care of the Earth that we have so our species and others to come may use this beautiful planet and treat it better than we have.\n\nVenus is known as the twin to Earth due to is closeness tho earth in terms of density and size. \"Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbo, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that some times we are lcoser to Mars and other times Venus.\" Mars is another planet that we plan to look into moving mars has beter living conditions but not a lot of plaants but it dies have ice and water inside it but Mars has a very large Nebula (large huricane of gasses) that is quite dangerous for human life.\n\nThank you for reading,\n\n-STUDENT_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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