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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In personal opinon I think books things nt want read think offensive stay It s like person offended read Say library see book think offends You think self book removed library think offensive think peoples shoes Just becaus think book offensive nt mean everyone else think That age groups grade levels set kid likes picture books get stuck book curse words things meant adults Same concept movies magazines music etc Take example I walking library I saw book called I thought looks like stupid book I would nt want read I think throw book away Now lets think sound fair Maybe kids favorite book comes next day gone What lets say go look favorite book find someone found offensive someone nt like much threw away Does nt seem fair In conclusion think removing books offensive people nt like I think leave nt remove based personal opinonSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The National Aeronautics and Space Administration are studying Venus and they want to learn more about the planet. Venus is a star close to the sun and it's a planet, and it's Earth's twin. Their some reason why people wants to study Venus, because a lot of things are going on the planet, like it's has the hottest temperature.It's the hottest planet even though Mercury is close to the sun. Venus has powerful earthquakes, erupting volcanoes, and frequent lighting.\n\nThe NASA wants to send a human to study about Venus and to learn more about that planet. They notice that Venus is the same thing as earth, but a lot different. It has rocky sediment and the features is include valleys, mountains, and craters. That's what the scientists thinking about send a human to Venus to take pictures and explore, to prove if it's same thing s Earth. NASA are still studying the planet, and they want to learn more about Venus, if it's good idead to go.\n\nAccording to the text the author want to know if it's a good idea to send a human to Venus. Planet Venus may seem a dangeous planet, because it's hot and the natural disater. It may be worthy to the scientists to learn about Venus and sending a human over there. It's about thirty miles away and they are thinking about this a lot. Venus may be dangerous, but scientists should thinking deeper about this. NASA and the scientist should think deeper and if it's worthy to study Venus and learn more about the planet, or sending a robot to take pictures.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's been a large debate on if the Face in Mars is a natural landform. I believe the Face in Mars is a natural landform from natural disasters happening on Mars. One thing that leads me to believe that the Face on Mars is a natural landform is when it says in paragraph 7 \"Thosands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nSo, proof was also given that the mysterious Face on Mars was a natural landform. In paragraph 11 it states that objects were found in the picture such as airplains, Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks. This leads me to believe that all the objects are also causes of this natural landform on Mars because objects like these may leave marks, or spots and ect. Lastly, what led me to believe that the Face on Mars is a natural landfrom is paragrapgh 12 saying \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\" This says that the Face is way to large to be a human face or alien. in conclusion, the Face on Mars is a natural landform because there was proof that it is, objects were found on the picture making spots, marks and ect., and that the face is way to big to be a human's face or alien's.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i ever face to face with someone that tells me they were formed by aliens i would kinda believe them. Because there's alot of wierd stuff out in this world like, birds dying for no reason. But i would ask that person to show evidence or prove it to me, or explain to me how was he formed. But what happened with mars its just a natural landform. It's a natural landform because alot of things happen because of nature\n\nThey found a formed of Jessus Cross in a tree, that doesn't mean God was there and drew the cross. No , It was part of nature. Also if a baby was born with six fingers desn't mean that the parents wanted a kid with six fingers because they though it was cool, it was because of part of nature and thats how the baby was born. In my oponion what happen in Mars about the face and stuff i think it just happened because it happened. Like problbly there was an earhquake that made that.\n\nAlso they were saying that they think that was form in the ancient times. I think thats dumb because they just found out that there might be live in Mars. If ancient lived in Mars then since along time scientist would of none that there is live in Mars instead of sending ships. But people these days dont know anything anymore. Or it could be because of other stuff that might of happened and we dont know about yet?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years around the world, there is a big argument on crime rate reduction. The majority of nations agree this can be achieved by providing the best schooling system to their people and others argue the imprisonment is the best solution. In this essay, I will be discussing the reasons why I agree with the statement before arriving at a conclusion.\r\n\r\n Firstly, the majority of criminals around the world are uneducated and it leads them to unemployed citizens. With the lack of basic study , the knowledge they are unable to distinguish the ethical and unethical activities in society. For example, the person who completes his basic primary schooling got knowledge from their education system to distinguish good and bad qualities around their surroundings. It motivates them to stay away from illegal activities.Also, it will lead them to pursue next-level degrees and carrier opportunities.\r\n\r\n On another hand, the people who have already been placed in prison for their proven criminal activities are getting a chance to meet fellow criminals. These interactions lead them towards new crimes instead of behavioural change. For example, in recent years we saw a young criminal who was placed in jail by proved pickpocket cases meet fellow prisoners who are convicted in drugs cases. This leads him to change his path towards drug smuggling instead of motivation towards a good future.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, the above statements proved instead of keeping criminals in Jails it's always better to focus on a minimum educational system for young generations. It leads to building a better society throughout the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are very useful in an everyday life. Cars are a source of transportation to people and most of the world uses them. Although, now there has been new technologies out that may allow cars to be driven by themselves. These cars could certainly be helpful to many people around the world, but are they really needed? Driverless cars might make it easier to travel from place-to-place without a worry, but there are many negative apsects from using them\n\nFirst off, driverless cars can be expensive to build and upgrade. In order to come out with this techonogy all around the world, someone has to be responsible to build them. Normal human driven cars are expensive as is but imagine having even more equipment added in order for this driverless car to be safe and useful. These cars need sensors all around in order to detect its surroundings. Also the car needs video cameras, a GPS receiver, and most importantly a sensor that uses laser beams to build a 3-D model of the car's surroundings at all times. These equipments can cost a great deal of money when there are thousands of these car manufactured. Without these the car would not be capable of mimicing the skills of a human driving the car. Not only do the cars need newer equipment but the roads also need upgrades in order for these cars to connect and understant what the road ahead will be like. All of these upgrades and equipments can cost people a huge amount of money.\n\nAdding on, owning a driverless car calls for more responsibility from the owner and more alertness as well. Driverless cars could certainly help a driver along the road, but there is a great deal of responsibilities the driver has to take. The driver can not rely on the driverless car one hundred percent of the time due to any mistake it could make. These cars may be smart and pack a lot of new technology but cars and software can make mistakes and in a car they could cause a great deal of accidents. Being a driver means having resposibility of the car, the passengers, the road, and any other car on the road along with their passangers. Even if the car is able to function without a driver, the driver should be alert on the road for when the car needs help. Laws would have to be inforced in order for drivers to make a commitment with these smart cars. Driverless cars may be dangerous without an alert and responsible driver on board.\n\nLastly, driverless cars could have a chance of backfiring on the owner. If these cars are not bult or manufactured and tested correctly they could cause accidents. Relying on the manufacturer is a great part of buying these cars. Tests that are not run correctly could ruin the reputation of the cars and cause them to not be bought or even built anymore. Technology fails all the time but some times it does not. Perhaps during a test the car works fine but in a real world experience it does not, this could be a negative impact on the manufacturer. Even if a car were to fail would it be the fault of the owner or the manufacturer? This could be a big problem for the driverless cars.\n\nAll in all, driverless cars could make life a bit easier to people around the world but there could also be lots of negative things that come with them. Driverless cars can be expensive to manufactur. Some people would not be willing to pay so the cars could be useless to build. The driverless cars also need upgraded roads to assist them as well as responsible and alert drivers. This could cause trouble on the roads if the drivers rely too much on the car and its technology. Driverless cars are a huge advance in technology but could cause lots of trouble along the way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" a claim is made whether or not technology should be used to read the emotional expressions of students inside a classroom.\n\nWhile having some who would disagree, there are many ways that this new technology could benefit some students.\n\nThe author, Nick D'Alto, explains the different ways that Dr. Huang has predicted the new advances that could be made to computers.\n\nTechnology can now alter what they do and how they operate by analyzing the emotion in ones face.\n\nThis new technology could benefit most students due to the changes that may be made on a computer because of ones facial expressions.\n\nNew technology to improve how students learn is presented in this passage.\n\nAccording to Dr. Huang, computers can recognize a students emotion, like being confused or mad, when doing a lesson.\n\nHe then explains how this could help students by stating,\n\n\"\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\"(D'Alto par. 6).\n\nThis could benefit some because if a student seems to be getting bored or confused, the computer can then recognize and change what needs to be changed.\n\nThis results in the student better understanding what they are learning because the computer has modified itself to the pace or the way a student learns best.\n\nComputers altering how they operate due to the facial expressions on someone could still yet be proven to improve the way students learn.\n\nIt could help slow down when a student looks confused.\n\nIt could also bring an attention grabber to the screen when a student seems to be bored.\n\nThese many ways prove how by having that valuable technology in a classroom, how many would be benefiting from it.\n\nA computer changing itself due to the emotion on someones face could really benefit how students learn inside classrooms and comprehend the information that they are being taught.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of what students do after graduating school is being topic. Some of school leavers choose to explore and part of them decided to get a job rathe than straight continue to university. This is have two-side view based on advantages and the disadvantages. I will focus on the good side first then moving to look at the opposite.\n\nTo begin, late adolescent who have been just finished their school do travels or works because they want to have real-world experiences. Taking time off to work can gain valuable life experiences such as knowing the culture in office and learn from senior that suitable to implemented in daily life. Furthermore, explore world also beneficial for them to make good connections with others from different background.\n\nDeveloping independence is the reasons young adult prefer to work and travel. People will develop skill from this decision because their life become theirself responsibility. Here learning personal management and can not dependen to others. It helps individual to face real world.\n\nOn the other hand, young people is not directly going to university have disadvantages. They lost of academic momentum and will impact decreasing chance to be accepted in college because it prioritized new students who direct to go university. \n\nMoreover, social disconnect for individuals who take break may feel out connect with peers because the differences of behavior and age. Also, potential to be ignore involve in this situation because of peers feel you are not part of them. For instance, others not ask you to do group work in some subjects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should we keep the Electoral College? Because its what we've done from the start. Sometimes its fine just to keep things the same. There is nothing wrong with change but I  beleive that this is the right choice. If we demolish the Electroal College then voting really wouldn't be fair. Because some states have more people than others.\n\nI dont think we really need to change this rule. Because sometimes its best to keep things the same. Its been going on for about 200 years. There hasn't been too many things that have gone wrong with it. Yes there has been troubles in the past. But were all human no matter what we do we can't be perfect. So we will just have to learn from our mistakes an approve on them. We have to belive we have the right people for the job and hope they will make sure things run smoothly for electing a president or any other official we use it for.\n\nIf we get rid of the Electoral College then the voting for office wouldnt be fair. Some states are a lot bigger than others. So once its gone then the bigger states would have more effect on the votes than the smaller ones. Example: if we do get a new way to vote and its off popular vote then what if New York has 40,000,000 people and Nevada has only 10,000,000 people. New Yorks votes would have a more effect than Nevadas. This may lead to long debates over the voting arrangement because the smaller states would be mad that they wouldn't get as much of a fair vote. Just like how it was when the founding fathers made this arrangement.\n\nThese are my reasons I think that keeping the Electoral College is a better than having just popular vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars will be a beneficial aspect on the world as it progresses in the future. The development of these cars will ensure the safety of the driver/passenger and outside pedestrians and drivers. this development in cars will also make driving less straining for the driver as it requires careful attention when on the road. Therefore, the development of driverless cars can be supported as a beneficial aspect to revolutionize the world.\n\nWhen it comes to safety and accidents, cars tend to be always involve those factors. Many daily drivers make the road a more dangerous place because they dont have there full atttention on the road. instead, are distracted by other factors such as texting, or anything thats causes them to take their eyes off the road. with the development of driverless cars, they can ensure the guaranteed saftey of the driver as they will be completeley imobolized to hazardous mistakes. according to the article \"The Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author states that \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers\". In this case, it shows that safety is only ensured when drivers are alert. because not all drivers are alert in the real world, saftey can't be guaranteed. This safety can be guaranteed to driverless cars which prime function is to transport; incapable of submission to outside forces.\n\nDriving as previously stated requires plentiful attention to the road and your surroundings. this however, can be straining to the driver due to being restrained to look at the road for a long peiod of time and hands becoming sore from grasping the steering wheel. Driverless cars can relieve the burden of that due to them having control of driving themselves. the driver can instead relax, enetertain himself, and or sleep if exhausted from a busy day. In the article, the author states that enetrtainment/ information systems can be turned off when the driver needs to take over, implying that the driver only needs to be engaged when necessary rather than 100% of the time.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of driverless cars can be seen as a great innovation to the safety of the world and drivers among it . People will no longer need to feel the heavy burden of ensuring to remain alert when not fully engaged, or the tense suffering of driving over a period of time. The development of driverless cars will indeed be a positive aspect on drivers global.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the bar graph given, mean amount of hours that people spend per week doing housework is shown, varying with the presence of children and also their gender. The key of the graph indicates that the subjects were married women and women with either no children, 1-2 children or three or more children. In general, women work far more on unpaid work such as gardening and childcare compared to men and even more if they have more children.\nIn the household where there are no children, women spend 30 hours when men spend around 20 hours a week doing housekeeping. It is clearly evident that women spend the least doing housework when they have no children compared to those who have at least one.\nWhen a family has one to two children, the quantity of time women devote on unpaid work dramatically increases to little more than 50 hours. On the contrary, the amount of time men put in to help their wives remain the same even when they get children.\nFinally, women spend the most time at 60 hours doing family work when there are three or more children. This amount of time is precisely double the amount of time they worked when there are no children. Despite the significant increase of women's working time, men spend less time doing hosuework at 17 hours when they have at least three children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that it is possible to resolve a part of environmental problems if the cost of fuel for the personal and commercial transport will significantly increase. I particularly agree with this statement and in this essay, I will try to explain why. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, burnable fuel it is the main resource of energy in modern world, and the cost of the fuel has a great impact for the cost of food and goods, hence people try to save their money what extend to conscious consumption of the fuel and more effective logistic ways. Therefore, the fuel economy is decreased amount of the pollution to the environment which has a positive influence on the nature. Moreover, cost of fuel extends to developing of advanced technology and it is a fact that modern cars have a less exhaust of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere than earlier. For example, Scandinavian countries stimulate people to keep the fuel economy policy and to have modern vehicles by way to cancellation of taxes to the owners of cars with zero emissions. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, increasing the cost of the fuel in poor countries, could stimulate people to use mo cheaper and dirtier fuel, which only increases air pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When writing about certain topics, you need the right amount of evidence to properly support the topic. The author's title is \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". However very little parts of his article are relevant to the title.\n\nThe first two paragraphs of the article have little to nothing to do with what the author is trying to explain. For example, the first paragraph just explains what Venus is. Which if you're interested in reading this article, you're likely to already know Venus is a planet. While the last sentence in the first paragraph states it's challenging to explore, it doesn't every bridge to why. Instead the author moves on to their second paragraph. Which again only a couple of sentences in this paragraph actually relate to what the author's claim. The bulk of this paragraph is once again just explaining what Venus is. Now halfway through the paragraph the author begins to write about why Venus is challenging to explore closely. It is stated that \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". While this is a good example there is no evidence provided as to why they havent survived the landings. Paragraph 3 seems to be the most informative out of them all. We learn that Venus has an \"atmosphere of almost 97% Carbon Dioxide\", and \"clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid\". Then the author continues to state that \"temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\", and the \"atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experiance on our own planet\". Without much explanation needed these are most supporting sentnces of their claim out of the entire article. The author addresses a question we all have about the article, \"Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" The author promply addresses this by stating \"it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Followed up by saying it was probably covered largely with oceans. We have to take them at their words on this statement comsidering they didnt provide any proof that this statement has any truth to it. While the author explains NASA's ideas for exploring Venus, they never really explain why we would want to.\n\nOverall I found the authors claim was weakly supported by their evidence. What they could have done better is stick to the best pieces of evidence they have, and just explain them better. If more evidence was provided to proof the claims to be true, then the author would have a more persuesive article.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I firmly believe computers positive benefits society These advancements technology enrich peoples lives One way computer help students school work online see teachers pages Another great thing computers whenever people need information details place things count internet help Most importantly vital source communication People depend computers scheduling keeping touch everyone know Without computers students would lot worse When student forgets homework go teachers online page check assignment night Another thing students benefit online textbooks If student ca nt manage carry home pounds books use textbook online Nowadays internet filled lots great information educational site Teacher also allow students research projects online participate online educational activities Not computer help educationally probably must well known information centers If people want see restaurant store product online Also many people want go destinations know get The internet provides directions reach destination quick efficient manner An extremely important helpful aspect internet ability purchasing ordering items online Before someone decides something find sorts information product shop around lowest price People even order groceries new house busy I strongly think internet number one way communication people For example team manager soccer team always emails times locations next game practice I would lost confused without emails I depend Buisnesses also heavily rely internet keep touch clients keep buisness The use web confrences saves lot travel allows company buisness world Above people depend heavily social networking sites keep intouch friends keep date news fun talking people Without internet probably half world communications would would good Computers without positive effect society When educational resource helpful Also best information database known probably used Most importantly wihout computer world would mess without main source communications People know spend much time inside always know go outside fun get fresh air Therefore computers negative effect people remain essential asset everyday lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My personal opinion is not to supprot driverlesss cars. They save time and stress but do they? But in reality it is causing more stress from having to question whos fault it would be for an accident, what if the tecenology goes wrong, and is this worth our money or time. Whos fault would it be if it happened right now?\n\nWho's fault would it be if the vechile and the owner got into and accident? We do not know the answer because we dont have any laws on teh vechiles yet. The reason we don't have laws or rules are because they are illegal to have in many states. So what if something went wrong in the car to cause the accident would it be the owners or the manufactors? We the people can't control the technology inside the car so what could we do to stop it?\n\nWhat if the technology goes wrong? IF something were to break interanlly the owner most likely couldn't get a notifcation to fix it immeditatly. What if the LIDAR breaks in the Toyota Prius? The prius then could not have a interanl display of the surrounding and drive safely for the owner, and then the owner would be in danger of a accident. GM has made a vibrating seat for when the owner need to stop backing or pullign up before the owner hits something. What if the virbation breaks in the seat and the owner backs or pulls into something? Who's reliable for the accident? We the people need to stop and ask ourselves is this techology really worth the risk in our lives?\n\nHow much is this cost us to condone? Who's money is getting took away to fund the finding of new parts, fuels, resources, and the researching time to make a more reliabe smarter car? The price of these cars would be an outragous amount for something so small to add to the vechiles, but we cant test or even drive legally yet! Truly we the people could find something else better to funding the tax payers money with like curing hunger, finding a cure to dieases like AIDS or cancers, and trying to home the homelss. We should not spend a penny more on something we can not own, drive, or even test legally on our own soild with. We shouldn't have to fund something that comes out 4 years later with the risk of still not being legal.\n\nThe point of driverless cars is to free stress and time. But in all reality it is causing more stress from having to question whos fault it would be for an accident, what if the tecenology goes wrong, and is this worth our money or time. The accident can be either way on whos fault is the manufactor for the lack of better techonolgy or the owners for not paying attention. The tecenology could go wrong at any second and give a risk to the owners and people around him or her's life. Then the money being spent is also causing problems we cant test or use the item till 4 years from now so is it worth it? We the people need to ask ourselves and our communities is this worth the time, effort, or money? This is why i personally do not support dirverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article main idea is about the advantages of limiting the car usage. This doesn't just benefict the enviorment but it also beneficts us in health and many other way like economy. The way that we can limit the car use to do a day-free car use world wide,like there already doing in Colombia,Europe and Paraguay, it wouldnt be everyday but once a month would still help out in so much.\n\nThe advantages of limiting car use help in so many reason. This experiment have been done in the outside of freigburg, near the French and Swiss borders in the new districts, what they do is, forbid street parking, driveways, and home garage . A 57 percenct of families that move to this expiremtal district, have said \"when i had a car i was always tense. i am much happier this way. This proves not this expirement is not a lost cause , it can be solve many things: save every penny you would have to spend in gas, help the ecosystem, and the robbery of cars one less worry. In Colombia they be spending there car-free day hiking, or in  there bikes. It has been the thrid year straight cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for does who dont follow the rule the $25 fine. This movement hasnt stop , what has done is giving peolpe conciusness and now not only Europe (PARIS) and Colombia , now the next country to follow this step is Paraguay. This all beging in the mid-1990 in Colombia (bogota), with this came the constrution of 118 miles of bycicle paths, more than the any other Latin american city. In the United States car lover has decrease sense 2005 according to a study made . It has been major causes that made the car buying decrease like for example not all of the peple involve in a car-crash / accident can afford a new or even use car , others just perferd moving somewhere they have it all close from there job, and home , most people just see as a way of working out and maintaing there physical health .\n\nThe limiting of cars can sure help out the ecosytem but not every one lives in a city, state , country that everything is close by . One major reason out of many others is that you may live somewhere that you'll have cross,  by suburn neigthbordhood that can be implicated with drugss or even arms dealers. With this idea of limiting cars most peolpe are not even going to care to get there license.\n\nThis can many more car accident it wouldnt be a resposable thing to do. sense you have a daugther , son or memmber of you family does , think about the possability of one of them in this type of situation. Every year everywhere in the world they create thousands of cars imagine if we just decided stop using them how many would be dissaemploy , not just that all the materials that they will be losing, all the time they lost , and most important the money they spend in materials, and payckecks to every singul one of the industrial employes.\n\nA car is a space that keeps you safe from the outside when you're in the road , just imagine you're self on your way ready to go to work and in the way it starts raining, you have find a place where to wait until it stops raining mean while , you're paycheck is decrease due to the cause that you're not in you're work , sure you can explain it to your boss but is he/her going to lett you off that easy. The weather is just one of does things that you can't controll or predict , so by take the risk . With out a car you're saving you money but with a car you're protecting you'rself , familiy and others. The car is one of the eays ways to transport not just you're self groceries,shopping items and many others things . If the plan is to help the ecosystem lett me tell you that electric cars exist , the technology is evolving is creating new ways to live better safer life .\n\nWith the evidence just given to you . We can say that the experiment that everyday is evolving , expanding. The limintinf of car is one excellent way to contribute with the ecosystem and all that have given us. All the evidence is there the reason and cause , when you analys it no can agree with this essay that the idea  liminting car is a great idea that can solve many things to many peolpe it does'nt mean that it has to be a measure to everyone but does that are on board shoul considate more and spread it out into the people .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would you want to join the program Seagoing Cowboy? One reason is it's a one in the lifetime opportunity. You also help countries recover the countries' belongings. The fun part is you get to travel around the world, and visit a variety of places! Wouldn't you like to travel around the world and help countries?\n\nI know I would enjoy being in the program.\n\nLuke Bomberger helped recover food supplies,animals and much more. 44 other nations joined a group called UNRRA. The Seagoing Cowboys were taking care of animals. Luke had made nine trips in1947, it was the most of any Seagoing Cowboy! Luke thought it was unbelievable for a small-town boy!\n\nHe felt special helping people and animals, an seeing countries. How would you feel? It must have been busy for Luke caring for animals! Taking care of animals is hard work ,imagine taking care of 15 or more!\n\nWould you enjoy taking care of many animals? When Lukewatchman duty and it had been rainy so it was slippery Luke had slipped and fell he had cracked his ribs and couldnt work for a few days. When they unboarded they played many games and sports. Luke was more aware of other countries and needs.\n\nI think it would be fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy and help countries. would you want to? Helping Countries is very special and i would do it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, the influence of newspapers on people's decisions has become a controversial argument. Whilst the main factor that has encouraged their significant effect is their ability to reach the overwhelming majority of citizens' homes, I believe that this has positively influenced civilians' notions. In this essay, the main reasons behind this trend, along with its advantageous points will be further elaborated. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n To embark on, despite the fact that papers are endangered because of new means of publicities, the factor that has encouraged them to be highly influential is their ubiquity in a substantial proportion of homes. This means that when journals become accessible to the majority of countrymen, their influence will be excessively profound. An eminent example of this is the Egyptian famous newsletters Al Ahram which is considered to be the main road towards Egyptians' thoughts and opinions. Therefore, the impact of journals on people's notions has not changed over the ages. \r\n\r\n Furthermore, this phenomenon has a positive impact on nations' way of thinking because they are reliable and trusted. In other words, if youth read any news published in these authentic journals, they will believe that this information is trusted and take it for granted. This can be witnessed by the publicity campaign which was conducted by the famous football player Mo Salah which has positively impacted young people's attitudes. Accordingly, in a final analysis, newsletters play a quintessential constructive role in teenagers' attributes. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only does the availability of magazines help in their profound impact, but also they have an indispensable influence on teenagers' lives. Eventually, I am a staunch believer that without the help of written news, young people could not have been aware enough.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though, driverless cars seem to be easier and better than a self driving car, they have possible negative outcomes. Some people would get a driverless car because of lazyness or not wanting to driving. A driverless car could have good and bad outcomes. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driverways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" Whether the driver wants to drive or not they still would have to stay aware and watch the road at all times.\n\nThere are many reasons some people wouldn't get a driverless car.Driverless cars are created to further lazyness. People would start texting and being on the phone as the driverless car drive. That can still cause an accident, technology have issues and powerdowns often. You can't depend on technology for everything. The main reason some wouldn't buy the driverless car is because of safety reasons. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" People feel as if anything can happen and go wrong dealing with a driverless car. It's as if you are risking your life for a free ride with no safety guarantees. Another reason some may turn down a driverless car is because they are expensive. \"The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary codes. These smart road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Theseare just the main issues dealing with an driverless car.\n\nOn the otherhand, some may think a driverless car is way better than a regular car. Only because they don't really have to do anything. They can relax in the driver seat and cruise around. It's nothing wrong with having relax time while your car drive you itself. They are still developing new safety ideas for the driverless car. \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the roas, the car watches the driver.\" These ideas will insure safety to the people. Aslong, as the driver stay alert while the driverless car is driving everything should go well. People have their different reasons on why they should and shouldn't buy a driverless car, but even with a regular car you can still have accidents. To be on the safe side, always pay attention to the road for your own safety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology increased day by day. New adventures are searching by the sciencists and robots are one of them.Robots are important to human's future development on ome extent but they have many side effects which i will mentioned in following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, robots are the shadow of human beings so undoubtly they word hard like people For example they have sharp mind,clever and hard-worker.Some people like the robots because they would be best friends rather than people of this era. People can use them for earning too much money Foe instance one robot can work 24hour just it need a chargeable battery Which is cheapest way for any businessman.Secondly, robots are essential for future in every field like education because they store information thretcal and practical so they can teach children in better way rather than teachersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suports the idea because in the text he says that Venus is kind of earths twin cause its the same size. The author also wants to do that because he says that although Venus is a dangerous panet that it could still be studied.He puts in there that even though Venus is the second-closet planet to the sun that it has many different features than Mercury. Considering the fact that Mercury is the closet planet to the Sun, but it has different qualities than Venus. The Earth is different from Venus because Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees. Also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth, also is has almost 97 percent carbon dioxide on the surface of the planet.\n\nThe author explains that the atmosphere of Venus can crush a submarine and that, that is why no aircraft has landed on the planet because they can't survive for long periods of time. He also explains that Venus could've been different from what it was 12,000 years ago? But, anyway the authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college system is better than the popular vote system because every citizen should have a say in who is running the country they are living in. Also, if not everyone has a say in who their president is there would probably be claims of discrimination towards the government for not letting those people vote. There would,as well, not be a standard that could be set that everyone agrees on because the people excluded would not accept it. Popular vote hasnt worked in the past and it wont work now either.\n\nIf we chose the popular vote system it would never work out because there would always be people,mostly the ones excluded from voting, that would disagree with the system in general and the standard set on who can or can't vote. For example,in colonial times only white men who owned land could vote and I am sure that the african americans and the women and even the white men who didn't own land were not too happy with that standard. Of course if we had the popular vote system today,the standard would definitely have to be changed but the people who are excluded wouldn't like the system at all.\n\nIn the electoral college system everyone who would like to gets a say in who is running their country and pretty much nobody has a problem with it. It is also much easier to count the vote's of 586 votes from the electoral college than like half a billion from cictizens in america. Another two reasons that the electoral colege system is better than the popular vote system.\n\nIn the colonial times there were slaves and only 1 out of every 4 votes from slaves counted and that was very discriminative but it was how it was back then but think,if we adopt the popular vote system, what would happen if only white and black people could vote or only white men. There would be udder chaos in America and there would be wrongful deaths and crimes. I would get mad too if i was put in a spot where i was not allowed to vote but some people would take it to the extreme and it probably wouldn't stop until the standard was amended.\n\nIn conclusion, the popular vote system is all around a bad idea and it would cause nothing but bad times. Keep the voting system the same because everyone seem's to like it so dont fix it if it's not broken. That is why we should not change or fix the voting system in America.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are people who think that there should be a requirement for teenagers to do a nonprofit volunteer work for society in their spare time. This assay agrees with the statement because not only there will be more volunteers to provide helps the community is needed but also working in their free time can keep young generations away from the bad distractions.\r\n\r\nEven though, some community have enough help they need, there are still many societies that are lack of basic needs and they do not know where to ask. Having teenagers doing volunteer jobs can fill the hole in the community. The related organization or community’s management can list out what help people need so they can focus on the real problem. For example, there are poor people living in the city which they are forgotten and do not receive the care as they should. Volunteers can help taking care of the area such as cleaning the trash in the community. \r\n\r\nMoreover, this can provide a good distraction for teenagers to focus on because not all parents have time to be with their children all day and being alone, unsupervised, can lead them to have thoughts of doing or trying new things which are not always appropriated things to do. Also, volunteer jobs can teach the young ones about helping people who need help and taking care of our community. For instance, teenagers who are living in the poor area or in a bad environment can experience doing the good intentions for people in their free time so they do not have time to do something bad or cause problems.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that there should be a requirement for teenagers to do volunteer work in their free time so that the community will get help of the things they needed and the young ones can focus on doing good purposes in their spare time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I bored I bored I know would pay iof I flit tookheavers In I hoven I went bathroom eat lunch plaed sellfon I sleped soller ISCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is offensive Should people right take people ideas What think I think centuries people writing making video types music Some consider freedom speech Others might think rebellious conspiracy I believe exceptional writers promising producers artists But medias good Over vast amount time young children influenced medias books movies music etc Its perfectly normal many adults children discriminate certain media But thats cases children suffering theres also religon race gender sexuality social groups certain rules certains laws wrong doingsBut everyone entiltled opinionHundreds people discreminated see mediasA life changing expierience movie The This could considered offensive lots peolpe african american decent race suffered similar abuse This issues freedom speech always disagreements differennt views oppinionBut I one believe theres certain stuff shoukdnt allowed put public mediaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do we need a Facial Action Coding System in our classrooms? I agree, with using a Facial Acton Coding System in our classroom. The Facial Action Coding System could help teacher know what their students' emotions are, and if the students emotions are in negative mood or positive mood they can change their lessons so they are more interesting for the students. Not only could this help the teachers but, this may help the students be more engaged in the classroom and participate more duriung lessons when they need to. Classroom computers acn already dectect how a student is feeling by giving teh student a certain AD depending on their mood.\"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts(Paragraph 6). If you make a facial expression it not only shows how you are feeling, it can also help you produce your facial muscles. In conculsion, it woulcd be a great idea for teachers to use them in the classroom, and they probably put them in work areas so managers know how their emploees are feeling in their work area.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nMany people believe that the Electoral College should be abolished, while others believe that the Electoral College should stay as it is. However, what most people who want to keep the electoral college, do not know is that when you vote for a presidential candidate you are actually voting for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Which means that the people do not get a direct vote towards the president. Therefore, it can cause disinterest in people who are eligible to vote. That is why I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.\n\nThe first reason as to why I favor in abolishing the Electoral college is because you can not always trust the electors. As shown back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy so that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy. Also, due to the winner-take-all system, candidates do not spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, it is obvious that they just want to win and you can not trust those candidates, especially the people who promise to do things they know they can not fulfill. The electors that \"the people vote for\" do not want to help their state, they do not even care for the needs of the people, they are just there for the money. Another reason as to why you can not trust the electors is because it is known that the electors can vote for whomever they choose and forget about the people's needs. One of the main reasons as to why this causes disintrest in potential voters. If the people vote directly for the president they have a better chance in speaking up and fighting for what they want therefore, trusting. Those are some of the rights that are taken away by the electoral college and people do not even realize it.\n\nAnother reason as to why I believe the electoral college should be abolished is because the electoral college is unfair to voters. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. That is more than half of the people! If the government really cared for what the people want, the electoral college would have been abolished by now. Studies have shown that only half of the people living in the U.S have voted in the pasts elections. If you really want the number of voters to increase and for citizens of the U.S to express their political preferences you should actually listen to them and abolish the electoral college.\n\nLastly, the electoral college prevents voters from controling who they vote for. Many voters now in days believe that when they vote, their one vote decides the election but, they are wrong. If they abolish the electoral college the voters would have a better chance in having who they want for president. The people who vote in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference we'll have more citizens voting if the electoral college is abolished. How do you expect for U.S citizens to vote and express themselves if they are not heard?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As I started reading this article, I hadn't really had an opinion on whether driverless cars should be in existence or not. After reading this, I definitely recognize how little assistance driverless cars present. They seem to only make driving a bit more complicated for the driver. Sure, the technology is cool but it isn't really practical.\n\nAs a society, we've descended into requiring entertainment every second of the day. Whether it's music in the car, music in our ears, wanting more and more tv shows, or spending hours upon hours browsing the internet, we are desiring entertainment. Letting a car drive for us while we watch tv, check twitter, or send a text is just the next step descending us into this self-centered and anti-social culture. The article states that you can be enjoying a tv show or texting until the computer can't navigate on it's own. Then the car will alert you and make you drive. This seems very hazardous because you have little to no time to assess the situation the car has gotten itself into because you were just focusing on the latsest Twitter news.\n\nCars are pretty much as advanced as they need to be. My grandma just got a new car that has a camera set up in the back so she can see behind her. That's helpful. An alarm also goes off when she gets too close to an object around the perimeter of the car so she knows to be careful. That's helpful. These are technological advances that I'm all for. These are very practical and make the chance of hitting someone or something decrease. But if we have cars that do 50% of the driving and then throw the clueless-as-to-what's-happening driver to drive the other 50%, then we are going to have more collisions. It's just logic.\n\nThe fact that manufacturers are stiil tryig so hard to make these ineffective, driverless cars just shouts that they want more cash. Dr. Werner Huber, the BMV project manager driver from the article said, \"We have to interpret driving fun in a new way.\" He knows that this is dangerous and wants to talk it up so that people will buy these cars that have a better chance of getting them killed than a normal car. Just more companies wanting more money at the expense of others.\n\nThere are many other arguments against these driverless cars, but until they are perfected and can get me from one place to another with zero percent chance that I could hit something or get hit, I'm completely agaisnt making computers in cars to call ourselves a futuristic society and be entertained constantly while going through my day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is a process not a place. When the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and also a popular vote of approved citizens. That should stay remain the same they should not be any change to the Electoral College system.\n\nThe Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electorals. When the electors have a meeting thats when they are able to for the President, Vice President that is running for office. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors, majority of 270 electoral vote, is to elect the President. Each state is entitled allotment in its Congressional delegation which means one for each member in the House of Representives plus two for your Senators.\n\nUnder the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated three electors and are treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. Each candidate that is running in the election has their own group of electors, generally chosen by the candidate's political party. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. The voters help choose their state's electorals when they voted for the President, when they vote for the candidate they are actually votin for the candidate's electors. Voters are more likely to pay attention to the efforts the candidate put to win the election like the campagin.\n\nThe Electoral College system has a method called \"winner- take-all that awards all the electors to the winning presidental candidate. After the presidental election the state governor will prepare a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\" that which list all the of the candidates that ran for office, along with the names for their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winner of the presidental candidate of your state. The Certificate of Ascertainment is sent to the Congress and the National Archives as part of the offical records of presidential election.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this passage, it is made very clear that exploring Venus is very unsafe for humans. While it is stated in paragraph 2, Venus can be thought of as a twin to Earth and it has many similarities, there are also many differances that make it very difficult for humans to set foot on Venus. In paragraph 3, it states \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" The atmosphere of our similar neighboring planet is just too toxic for a human to last long on the surface, let alone be able to call that planet their new home. Also in paragraph 3, it is stated that Venus's average temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit which is impossible for earth living creatures to survive in. Also, the atmospheric pressure is so much greater than Earth's that the two conditions combined are too extreme for human life. Scientists may be able to find a way around all these issues, but it will take great amounts of time and effort.\n\nOver time, all the issues involving the conditions of Venus may not matter. NASA, or the National Aeronautics and Space Administration, has been looking into the issues for years. NASA is attempting to travel to Venus, but not land on the planet to evaluate it. If NASA could get rock samples and test the atmosphere around Venus, they could possibly find ways to edit it or edit human immunities to make it more likely to support human life on Venus. This would take a while to achieve and there is potential that nothing scientists find could improve the liklihood of life on Venus.\n\nRecently, NASA has found kinds of electronics that can survive on Venus, but don't last long. In order to find out more about the probability of eventually having life on that planet, someone needs to develop a form of technology that will last long enough to evaluate the living conditions that future humans would have to undergo. Finding the materials needed to make electronics last on Venus is very difficult. The temperatures are so extreme that most materials would just melt. Eventually, it was discovered that mechanical computers, a very old form of technology, could last on Venus. If all electronics could be composed of the things the mechanical computers are composed of, it is probable that electronics could last for long periods of time on Venus and be able to collect the data needed to investigate the idea of human life on Venus.\n\nThanks to the data the electronics could gather, eventually things could be altered on Venus, on Earth, or both in order to allow life on the planet. These changes could take generations to be completely effective. The great difference in climate between the two planets, for example, could take many years to become less of an issue.\n\nAlthough, there are many things keeping people from living on Venus, people must first make enough advances to visit Venus. If people are not able to set foot on the planet for long enough to collect samples to test back on Earth, there would be no way of supporting life long enough for people to live there. If people can get to the point of being able to stand on Venus without issue, then the advances will pretty well be enough to support life on our neighboring planet. The first step, however, is also the largest one. Advancing that much could take a large period of time, but it is definitely possible. Life on Venus could be a lot closer than some may think. In all reality, the differerances may not be that great, especially compared to the differences between Earth and other neighboring planets. There is evidence of water on Venus in years past, so if water can be put back on Venus or if waterbodies can be found on Venus once again, life could be supported in the years approching.\n\nAlthough there are many dangers of life on Venus, it is nothing that Earth living creatures couldn't handle. Besides the temperature and atmosphere, life could easily be supported. These are big obstacles to pass, but there is no doubt that it could be overcome.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lets talk about a dream you and everyone else has probably had or wished for your entire life. Think of a car that drives for you! Now go back to the fact that this was a dream and not reality. Well let me tell you that this fantasy is no longer a dream, but now a reality! With the vision and help of google cofounder Sergey Brin, this dream of self automated cars can now take form! This is a good step for people everyone because of the way it increases efficancy, still allows the driver to have control, and is overall safer for the drivers and thier passengers.\n\nBesides taking a tremendous amount of stress off your back for not having to drive, this google smart car will increase the eficiancy of you and society tenfold. Sergey Brin is planning( after the car has been perfected and tested) to set up a taxy service useing these cars. They are far more practical then buses and run on only half the gas rate of a regular taxy. With this service some people will not even need to own cars at all and just take the taxy service! Also, the car has been equiped with state of the art tecnology; automated sensors, advanced GPS system, you name it and it will have it. Using the GPS, the car can quickly navigate the quickest route to anywhere you want to go. And with the advanced sensors, it can carefully manuver the rode properly. With this car, the efficancy of everyone will fly through the roof.\n\nFor those that like having control of the car or don't trust machines to do the driving for them; they have nothing to fear. You will still have alot of control over the car when doing this, in fact everyone will. The car was not quite made on a standered of perfect for all automated driving. For example, the car can not manuver through certain things you may encounter on the rode such as road blocks, work zones, or pulling into a drive way. When the car encounters this it will automatically switch itself to manual, and the driver will take over for the time being. This may be seen as a draw back in the efficancy, but really it is for the best. This will not let the people using these cars become lazy or careless on the road. And it is good to know how to drive.\n\nAnd finally, this car makes you more safe then if you would be driving the car. Like I said before, the car is equipped with advanced sensors that allow it to view everything around it. The only time the sensor would be wrong is if there was a malfunction with the car itself. However, studies show that this is much rarer then human error, so you are less likely to get into an accident with this car. This malfuction error is the main reason the car is not availible to the public yet, manufacters and the states want to make sure that they can minimize this error to as small as they can.\n\nUsally, automated cars is believed are the work of science fiction and dreams. But now humanity again has surpassed this boundary. Because of the cars efficency, amount of manual control, and safty, this car is just another step on science's progress to continue and improve lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Care Are Coming.\" was about the good and bad details about driverless cars. Are the driverless cars safe to test? What all can\n\nthese Driverless cars do? Should they be allowed to release and be bought?\n\nWhat are the pros and cons about these driverless cars. Do I support the development of these cars; yes I do.\n\nOver the years cars have been getting smarter and smater; that's no doubt. But are these cars smart enough to drive their self? Some cars have sensor bumbers to tell you to stop moving forward and or backwards because you are too close to something. Some of those cars will even brake for you.( Such as Buick, Cadillac, Chevy, Kia, Ect) They even have parking assistance.\n\nDriverless cars alert the diver when it needs you to take over. Some of these driverless cars seat will vibrate, some actually move the seat and direct your hands to the wheel to take over. That's very smart of a car to do and very well played. These cars are great for truck drivers that have to drive a long distance. \"While The Driver Watches The Road, The Car Watches The Driver.\"\n\nDriverless cars are safe to test. There is no record(s) of any accidents caused by driverless cars or any record(s) of the driverless cars recking them self. They should allow the driveless car to drive is self to another state about one hour or two away for a more accurate safey test. to show the people that driverless cars are such a plus to the world and maybe could help the precent rate of accidents to go down; being that most accidents are caused because the person couldn't brake fast enough.\n\nThe pros of driverlesss cars is that you can take a long trip and have the ability to relax and not have to drive the whole way. These Driverless cars would be great for mothers because babies need a lot of attention and sometimes they drop their bottles, toys, food , ect. The cons of the Driverless car is that it will sometimes need for yot to take over the wheel.\n\nIn conclusion Driverless cars are a plus for the world and can help stop a lot of problem that occur. It really can help truck drivers out A LOT women with babies and can help prevent accidents. Driverless cars are approved by me, and hopefully the world will think the same.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibels dock The main reason diriibles could nt dock dirigbles load The load would cause stress The wind pressure also another reason dirigbles could nt dock The wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The dirigbles docked means electric winch The electric winch fine also says dirigible could swing breeze could safety concern alsoSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features journey cruel Rolling hills make work harder get The works sweats therefore needs fluids The lack water help Poisonous dont really bother leaves alone The condition roads adds hills Rough roads make work hard get hills So guy getting pretty roughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author explains why we have yet to travel to Venus and supports with evidence why he thinks we should in the near future. The author supports this idea thoroughly in the presentation of the dangers that traveling to Venus may present, and informing the reader of the advancements in technology and ideas that may allow humans to one day study Venus from up close.\n\nThoughout the article, the author uses current technology and past human experiences with the planet to portray the difficulties space travellers may have researching the planet. In paragraph three the author explains the harsh environment on Venus that causes spacecraft to malfunction and stop working. The author says, \"These conditions are much worse than anything humans encounter on Earth,\" and that the atmospheric pressure, \"...would crush even a submarine,\" and, \"liquefy many metals\" (Paragraph 3). These claims support the idea of the planet being challenging to observe with rovers and spacecraft and presents the idea of humans wishing to overcome challenges simply for curiosity's sake.\n\nAdditionally, the author explains the progress humans are making in their pursuit of the planet through the creation metals and machinery capable of withstanding the harsh conditions of the hostile Venus. The author presents the idea of a hovering craft on the planet that can escape the severity of the surface; The author stating the conditions were not easy, \"...but survivable for humans\" (Paragraph 5). The author justly displays this plan by also weighing the negatives. The author states that, \"...peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the surface can only provide limited insight on the ground conditions...\" (Paragraph 6) The authro's support of the argument through evidence from both sides shows an understanding of the full scope of the issue and allows the author to affect one's opinion more effectively.\n\nFinally, the author claims that the value in reaching Venus lies in the exploration of human curiosities and the opportunity to learn from an environment so close to home and so unwilling to allow humans to look in. \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (Paragraph 8). The author believes that the true reward in the exploration of Venus lies in overcoming the challenges we will face along the way and through evidence and reasoning supports the idea that the journey is worth it.\n\nThe author of this article supported the idea that the study of our hostile neighbor Venus was worth the risks it presents. The article lays out the dangers and the potential ways of overcoming them, while also presenting the good and bad of the options. Although opinionated, this article presents an idea that is based in sound logic and upon reasonable evidence. The author of this article did an excellent job in explaining and supporting the idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is living in venus important despite all the dangers? Well I think yes because just like mars you could maybe get life on venus If It was less toxic. I think scientsis are trying to make life on venus because it's possible.\n\nMy claim is that you could get life on venus because it's not to dangerous. On paragraph 2 he says \"These dfifferences in speed mean that sometimes we're closer to mars and other times to venus\". In paragraph 4 astronomers were saying \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth\". This evidence proves that if scientsis try, maybe we can get life on venus.\n\nTo conclude all of this I was basically trying to say that venus actually isn't that bad of an planet like saturn or mecury because it's either too hot or too cold in those planets. But in venus it's kind of right in the middle. So probably by 2025 there could be a chance of living in venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She ends paragraph starts When geese came back hibiscus budding like restart try dealing memories home adaption new country I think able deal better take shows wont giveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Crime is a considerable social issue that has existed as time passes. However, most nations tend to use imprisonment to deduct criminal rates while others suggest that high-quality education will be more effective than putting all of them into prison. From my perspective, there is no doubt that teaching them how the world operates will eventually decrease the crime rate, but the imprisonment system is still necessary for a country to manipulate and control society in a good way. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, crimeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be able to do what Luke Bomberger did? Just step right up folkes and sign up for free today! We cattle boat sailers don't give up we are resilient. I bet you are resilient to so sign up. You get to travel get to see some places you never seen before. Sometimes you might even go on a avanture. If you dont believe me you can scrutinize this sign up sheet. The ocean wheather can get surreal but we cattle boat sailers dont give up! You get to see China you'll see Europe. While your traveling you get to haul horses and cattle. The horses will have enough food to last for the trip the record for the most trips is nine trips aint that crazy. Well if you sign up today you might be the one to beat that record so get started by signing up right now for free today.\n\nWhile your out at sea you can see some surreal things like new kind of fish you never seen or some new kind of shark you never even knew about. Life of being a cattle boat sailer is not bad it is kind of fun. Your driving this big ship with horses by your self. Just picture youself out at sea with the wind blowing threw you hair the sound of the ocean the sunset. You can do all those fantastic things all you got to do is sign up now today. We need moore sailers to help us get these cattle to there destination. The best sailer we had was Luke Boberger he holds the record of the most trips. Luke was as audacious like a lion in the wild. Luke loved doing what he did. The trips Luke had done were unbelieveable.\n\nYou get to be at sea with youself a bunch of horses and if you want a friend. With the ocean wheather you might loose some cattle but its okay as long as you get the rest of the cattle to the destination. We have had some brave and strong sailers but we need more. We need audacious and fearless sailers. If you sign up you'll get the im-not-gonna-regret-this kind of feeling. CRACK!Is what the boat does whenever you hit a rock but you wont have to pay for the damage we will. If you want to work for us more than two years the boat you drive will be yours thats right folkes well give you the boat. All you got to do is sign your name and well even throw in a free sailer out fit with new shoes and hat. Once you get the hang of it you'll be like this is a peace of cake. The boat comes with a horn that will-tell-everyone-the-boat-is-okay and so are you,but all you have to do is sign a couple of papers and fill some documents out.\n\nWe sailers get to travel all arounf the world inmagine how much money you'll get. The pay is also great. You might have to risk your life sometimes but you'll be fine. This is all your decision. What the papers say is about your health care,what kind of cattle do you prefer to sail with intell six months later. These are all you decisions but we do need some resilient sailer to help us. Luke Bomberger would of wanted you to help us sail these poor animals. so please sign up today for free.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I argue for the against of driverless cars. I think tehnology is reliable but could have numerous amount of flaws to it. Driverless cars might not be as safe and secure as an individual driving the car. The car could glitch like any other electronic occasionally does and before the car could inform the owner about the glitch a crash might have taken place.\n\nIn paragraph four sentence three it read that Google's modified Toyota Priua\n\nand has inserted a video camera near the rearview mirror. How far in distance does the video cameras go and is the distance clearly shown on the camera? When passing by a diffrent pupil's vehicle, does it capture wht is happening what is going in the car?\n\nIf I was driving I would not want a car next to me with camera's sticking out. It would be similar to be invading someone's privacy when you are observing there car movements, having them captured on camera when they think they are safe inside their own personal automobile. Would Driveless cars be using gas or will they be powered in a solar or will thay be using just oil? If gas is not used in sundry amount what will happen to the gas stations. The gas station prices will go down and it could lead to a some financial problems.\n\nIn conclutionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Around the world, cars are the main use of transportation. The exaust from cars causes pollution in the air world-wide. By limiting car use, you can easily cut the pollution levels released by cars in half. There are many great aspects of limiting car use. Some international cities have already set a day where citizens do not use their cars. Limiting car use is a great option for the enviroment. As it can help many individuals from all around the world.\n\nIn the city of Vauban, Germany, most citizens do not even own vehicles. \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\"(Rosenthal, 3) Vauban claims to be a car free community. The banning of cars is a \"growing trend in Europe\" (Rosenthal, 4) The movement is called \"smart planning.\" (Rosenthal, 4) Cars play a huge roll in polluting the Earth. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" (Rosenthal, 5) The \"Enviromental Protection Agency is promotiong \"car reduced\" communities.\" (Rosenthal, 9) Limiting car use is a huge benefit for the Earth and people living in it.\n\nIn Paris, France, the pollution levels are increasing drastically. For that reason, Paris has decide to ban driving for two days. Citizens who failed to not drive were punished with a $31 fine. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France\". (Duffer, 14) This statistic shows that by the limiting of car use, traffic levels may chage drastically. From the lower use of cars on the roads, the smog above Paris was clearing and moving towards Beijing. Which is \"one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" (Duffer, 14) The main cause of the pollution is diesel fuel. France in particular favors deisel fuel. \"Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France\". (Duffer, 16) This is the prmary cause of the pollution in the city. By banning the cars, the city recieved clarity from the smog surrounding it prior to the ban.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia, one day a year they ban all cars despite public transit. They have been doing this for three years. If a citizen failed to obey the car ban, a $25 dollar fine was given to them. Buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaza stated, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"(Selsky, 24) The car ban is part of an improvement campaign from the mid-1900s. Rain or shine the residents of Bogota still participated. This past year two additional cities participated in the movement. The movement has shown great success and has been helping with pollution and stress many individuals face daily.\n\nIn the United States of America, President Obama wants to lower the rate of greenhouse gas emmissions. Studies show that \"Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\"(Rosenthal, 29) In 2005, there was a peak of the miles driven. In 1995, this was 9 percent lower this was also the case in April of 2013. Michael Silvak, an individual that studies the trend and who is a research professor at the University of Michigan's Transportation Research Institute said, \"rates of car ownership per house hold and per  person sdtarted to come down two to three years before the turn down.\" (Rosenthal, 33) As the years have past, the numbers of car owners have decreased. Although the idea of limiting car use sounds like a great idea, it will eventually hurt the automotive industry. People will stop purchasing cars due to these bans.\n\nThere are many widespread advantages to limiting the car use of individuals around the globe. Greenhouse gas emmission levels are essentially rising. By taking action and limiting car use, the world can decrease these levels. Less use of vehicles can help relieve stress, a condition a lot of people face around the globe. It is truly amazing that by banning cars for a day, the surrounding smog was clearer in Paris. The widespread happines in Vauban, Germany due to car-free living is another great outcome. Bogota's influence on two other cities is also very empowering. Limiting car use is not as bad as it may seem. In the long run, it will benefit our surrounding enviroment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future. Some people think that the future will have flying cars, and meals will be in pill form. Some people think that the world will be all shiny and futuristic, like in the movies. I beleive that we are living in it. A new development of software was made by Professor Thomas Huang. He invented a software that is able to improve accuracy in perceiving the emotions of people. This is a genius idea. It can be used for so many things, and it could be very valuable for school systems. This software development could be very useful for schools because it can tell when a student is lying about something, it can tell how a student is feeling about something being taught, and it can tell what the student enjoys, and what the student dislikes.\n\nThis technology could be very helpful for classrooms because it would be able to know when a student is lying about something. You might be wondering how it is able to do this task. In an article named, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" it shows how the technology of the software, the Facial Action Coding System, is actually able to detect the emotions of peoples' faces. In the text is says, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of th face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is calles an \"action unit\". Then DR. Huang relies on the work of pshycologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckham, creator of FACS(Facial Action Coding Sysytem). Eckham has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\"\n\nThat whole pragraph shows how it can pick up peoples' emotions, and detect how they are feeling. So if a student was lying about something then this software would be able to detect the emotions of someone lying and it would be able to catch them.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be very helpful in teaching. If a student was not happy in the way a teacher was teaching something, the Facial Action Coding System would be able to pick this up and show that the student was not happy about the way someone was teaching something. This could help impove school systems everywhere because the teachers could then brainstorm other ways of teaching, so that the students could fine it more enjoyable, and they could wrap their head around a subject that was too hard for them to learn. In the text it says, \"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" This line of text is showing that this program is actually reliable because it is able to scan anatomical features of someone, which conveys a persons emotion on weather they are happy about something.\n\nFinally, this software could help schools because it can help see what students like, and what they dislike. If this technology was actually succsesful, then it could help out teachers greatly because it can help them decide what the students dislikes, and what the student enjoys. It would be able to do this because it would be able to use face recognition to see how a student feels about something. If the teacher showed a student something, and the Facial Action Coding System showed happiness, then that would mean the teachers should use more of that tyoe of stuff. If a teacher showed something, and the Facial Action Coding System showed that the stdent didn't like that, then the teaher and the schools would use less of that.\n\nThe technology of the Facial Action Coding System would benifit school's greatly. This software development could be very useful for schools because it can tell when a student is lying about something, it can tell how a student is feeling about something being taught, and it can tell what the student enjoys, and what the student dislikes. The Facial Coding Action System is the future for schools, and the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story vampire named goes regular middle school It first day school waiting line schedule later combonaiton And line really long late first day get way back line The person front kept complaining getting This take forever complained person front CAPS shut man I dont like see complaining exclaimed Everyone gymnasium stopped talking looked direction This good sign stopped talking waited line After long minutes listening music ipod people away front line Then something bad happened CAPS isnt schedule said blonde girl The person giving schedules call everyone back see schedule So minutes passed finally got schedule If hadnt patience wouldnt standed minutes line Good thing brought ipodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human curiosity can be a dangerous but also can lead to ground breaking discoveries. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring\n\nVenus\", talks about how the \"Evening Star\" has great value and there is much to learn from studying it, despite the dangers that come along with it. The author supports this idea becuase he gives readers prime examples of everything that could go wrong by sending a spacecraft to Venus to study it. Although the author also gives us alturnitives for learning about this planet and maybe even inhabiting it some day.\n\nHumans have spent many decades descovering new planets. Each robot that is sent to space took time, money, and countless hours of perfecting it to best fit those planets conditions. In paragrapgh 7 the author compares an average phone to a spacecraft being sent to Venus. \"Imagine exposing a phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin\", This is a good example because people now are very familar or some even attached to thier electronics. The author knew that people would understand just what would happen to a rover by making the comparison of the dangers.\n\nPlanets in our solar system never fail to fasinated the people who grauduated with a 4.0 GPA. Scientist believe that Venus was an Earth-like planet many years ago. In paragrapgh 4 it states \"Venus was probably covered with large oceans and could've supported many forms of life.\" This is an important detail becuase it shows that scientist will never want to stop fininding new things to learn about. Also in paragrapgh 4 the authors states, \"The value of returning to Venus are indisputable\". This is important becuase everyone wants to see the experience happen despite all the risk. Scientists will always find a way.\n\nFighting to beat the harsh conditions of our neiboring planet, there is still much to learn about Venus. The fight for knowledge and the crave for no more curiosity will be the thing to push humans over the egde to concure every mile of our solor system. Yes, it takes time and money. But humans have not failed to break the limations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways For example weather California June hot water cyclist found pipes hot well The text says Somewhere neighborhood two hundred degrees This affected water drink Another example overcome tumbleweeds snakes The text states tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake This obstacle overcome Another example deserted The text says no one sight building car structure kindSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is that there would be less pollution in the story it says that paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. There would be less trafic jams in the artical it stated that millans of colobians hiked,biked,skated or took busses to work during a car free day, because there are less cars they were able to replace bad sidewalks with smooth nice sidewalks and new restronts and upscale shopping districts have cropped up. In the artical it said that parks and sport centersalso have boomed throughout the city uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad,smooth sidewalks, rush hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic and new restronts and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nSome other advantages of limiting car usage would be that people would be more fit and not fat since they have to bike or walk places instead of eating mcdonalds and driving around. And since there alweays biking or walking places they would feel stronger and not as week they would know that in a situation where there stranded witout a car they can ralay on walking places since there more used to walking than driving. And i feel that if people started walking instead of driving people would be more friendly to each other and they would know one another but if everyone was driving like how they are they are there only way of comunication is to honk at one another so they never actually get to talk and get to know each other.\n\nSome ideas i have to make this work is to make the tikets of driving a car higher and make smoother and better roads/sidewalks, and if you really want this to work you have to make better bikes that are easyer to ride faster sronger and more reliable other than selling a piese of metal on two weels or you could lover the prises of bikes and walking shoes because not everyone can afford the best bikes and walking shoes so if you lowerd your prises people can actually afford transportation such as bikes, skateboards and all that other good stuff instead of a car.\n\nRight now would be a good time to start trying to make people ride bikes or walkn other than using a car because according to the artical americas love affair with its vehicals seems to be cooloing , when adjusted for population growth ,the number of miles driven in the united states peaked in 2005 and dropped stedially thereafter. Car ownership per household and per person started to come down two or three years before the downturn said Mickael Sivak ,who studies the trend and who is an reaserch professor at the university of michigan transportation reaserch instatude. And if the patterns keep going like how they are it will have benefical implications for corbon emission and the enviorment. These are all the reasons and facts why we should limit car usage and start walking or riding bikes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a source of transportation. In movies, there are driverless cars. People have dreamed of laying back in the seat and letting the car glide down the street. No work whatsoever. Driverless cars are not a good source of transportation because the computer-driven system could shut down, the technology is not advanced enough, and drivers could get bored waiting on their turn to drive.\n\nFirst of all, the computer-driven system could shut down at anytime. Everyday computers have glitches or reboot. If someone was driving, and their car suddenly started swerving or braking hard because of a glitch, there is nothing they could do. These cars could cause many deaths. These cars could cause as much damage as texting and driving. Keeping these cars off of the road would be the best bet.\n\nAddtionally, the technology is not advanced enough. Scientists are trying to make some of this technology work. In paragraph 7, it says, \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of 'Traffic Jam Assistant.' The car handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" Some cars now have sensors the will stop the car from ramming into the back of another car or keep the car from swerving into other lanes. There are no cars the are advertised that show safer, newer ways have a driverles car. Companies and manufactureres need to work on technology before putting these cars out on the road.\n\nAlso, drivers could get bored. Years ago, people drove and didn't have to worry about getting bored because a computer system was driving for them. Some manufacturers are hoping to bring some in-car entertainment to keep drivers from getting bored. That would just be another distraction like texting. It's more of a big concern than not being bored. If no one had driverless cars, no one would be bored.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not a good source of transportation because the computer-driven system could shut down, the technology is not advanced enough, and drivers could get bored waiting on their turn to drive. Keep the production of these cars away. Driverless cars are not safe and would more than likely cause wrecks amongst drivers. When technology is advanced enough to make these cars, that's when they should be on the road.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear register I writting urge affect computers people helpful The reason I say computers helpful helps give direction helping economy send messages thru quickly instant messaging Read I could let know things computer helpful I know I said computers help gives direction let explain like You know need go somewhere far nt know act car Well think computer option left Like example I going south nt nt know get So option computer We logged google found direction So first reason read next Okay okay okay know way economy rediculous Away computers helping economy instead people driving go pay bills could pay online Because s saving money state wo nt pay questions get gas cars often get rebuild Like example gas station near house getting rebuilt something went wrong pipes costing us say nt away could save economy Its time move next reason Listen s reason computers helpful Im known instant messaging This helpful nt house phone cellphone wan na tell family member friend something really bad happened could tell thru instant messaging CAPS would surely would get Like one time friend aint house phone cellphone somebody trying brake house instant message let know could get send cellphone And I called mom let know befor I know another massage coming thru saving CAPS reading computers helpful helping give direction save economy instant messaging could agree saying computers helpful Its still opinion read minds think read say nt trueSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several people opine that art has a vital role for children as a subject at school, while other people consider that is an unnecessary course. In my opinion, it is a lecture that so crucial for children`s life.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the number of people argues that learning craft is reluctant to subject which solely wastes of time for juvenility. Firstly, it is an art which has plenty of drawbacks so that could create a problem for the children such as finding a job. To illustrate, unfortunately, we live in an age which occupations have a chance of earning much money relevant with the doctor, business companies instead of art. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that art has a load of advantageous for children life. First of all, who could learn their history by means of art is juvenility. In other words, they do not concentrate not only science subjects but also aware of their history and culture. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a myriad of human argues that focus on art subjects is not essential, while I completely agree that knowledge regarding the profession is focal.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A couple years ago I middle school I meet one bestfriend I great times When I first meet math class assigned seat next We started talking eventhough didnt know well could say laughter closest distance We would laugh really random things happened didnt really know talk Sometimes wouldnt make sence laughing But laughed way eventhough didnt understand others jokesLaughing something keped distance close Time went became good friends Laughing one thing keped us cose together nothing better We people like laugh lot get bored If humor first meet I nt think would got along well end We didnt really anything didnt know good We would hang lunch class together laugh thought funny really dumb We nothing better A couple months latter seemed become really close friends laughter We knew much better finally things talk found something common Laughter still something friendship much begining first meet During math time always talking laughing things would say That never happened But able talk things things made us laugh new laughter isnt thing keeping us colse together Now ways get along We friends could get along differenlty I friends really close distance would laugh lot With friends I didnt really laugh much close friendship My friends I get along different ways laughter We differents ways get along fun Some really calm like laugh lot like Mostly type like laughing time closer way I think laughing could shortest distance two people There things keep two people close together Laughing help people good time together I nt think big big part friendship I think get along somethings common It also depends get along treat Everybody different way keeps close friend I think s different everybodySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although the idea of coexistence between climate change and humans appears reasonable, this cannot be viewed as the ultimate approach for humankind to combat climate change. There are a number of reasons why the coexistence can do more harm than good. First, climate change is largely shaped by human-caused geoengineering rather than nature itself. For example, in order to produce the energy that drives the world’s economy, most nations rely on carbonrich fuels like coal, oil and gas, which directly correlates with the intensification of global warming. Second, even if citizens agree to keep the environment the way it is, corporations, especially in the manufacturing and mining industries, would not as that would affect their profits. Therefore, it can be implied that if corporations were not held accountable for their contribution to global warming as in the case of coexistence, the issue of climate change would inevitably be exacerbated. It is more economically sound to actively prevent climate change than to ignore it. In fact, the costs, either financial or non-financial, of dealing with future consequences of climate change can be overwhelming. For instance, the increase in intensity and frequency of storms can cause massive destructions and deaths in many coastal areas, which would take decades to recover. In addition, rising temperatures have also contributed to the extinction of species worldwide. It should be noted that the extinction is irreversible and comes at great cost to the ecosystem and apparently humans living within it. In conclusion, actively combating global warming must be regarded as top priority given the high urgency. Governments and corporations worldwide should take steps to ensure that climate change remains at bay.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As this goes on whether this was made by ET or a natural occuring thing we must look the evidence we have.It fact over opinion right so as the fact prove stuff that we need to know.\n\nThe face on mars set somthing new in the science world and set new discovery, new opertuite for us to have to moviton to go out of space again just as it was during the 1967 time.People have said many thing about this picture, that ET or it a natural occuring thing.Many sciencist belivie that it is just natural.Then we those people that kinda think out the box and it a little werid at the same time.THose people are called conspiracy theorists and the think out somthing different such as ET made it.Thing have change over that past year like the camra.That one way to say that camra back wasn't a good as it is today as it set that high defintion (HD) to change the people look at it. If you look at the 1976 piture it look like a face now look at 2001 it look like mountain. IT went to face to somthing like a moutian.\n\nAs time past so does our tech and it is a hole lot better than the past. Now we can see it at a different way then before.That really we have to do is make the tech better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of human curiosity, imagination,innovation and wanting to make those embitions real.According to the article in paragraph4 it state that \"Long ago, venus was proably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\". this statement show us that the author also want to pursuit his study because Venus was once like Earth and this might push, the author of wanting to know the cause why venus is not like earth anymore.\n\nAnother reason why the author want to pursuit his study is that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit and that no spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than decades. The author might wan to be the first to touch down on Venus after each mission failed. As the author states in paragraph 8, he want to pursuit the study because he believe that our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers.\n\nFurther more, he is fascinated about studying Venus because Venus has the hottest surface temperature out of any\n\nplanet in our solar system, even though Mecury is closer to our Sun, According to the statement on paragraph 3. If Venus is hotter than Mecury even though, they refferred at Venus as earth twin , the author would definately want to pursuit hi studying to known other reason for Venus of being hotter than Mecury.\n\nIn conclusion the author want to be able to reach the planet venus and able to take some sample of rock, gas from the planet Vennus to Furthermore srudy the planet. According to the article statement \" more importantly researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas or anything else, from a distance. He believe that even thought the astronauts want to use a hovering vehicle over venus to avoid unfriendly ground conditions, the author does not believe that this way of stuying Venus is enough.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is indeed true that digital resources today far outstrip what can be put and stored in print books. Almost any kind of book can now be accessed digitally and those that can’t be will soon be changed to a digital format. Some people, therefore, believe that libraries with print books are no longer needed.If one looks at this issue dispassionately, it seems far more logical that people now should only read books digitally. It only requires a single computer or electronic reader and an individual can have access to the history of literature and works on all other fields. The costs involved with setting, typing, printing and distributing print books would practically disappear and this would make things more convenient and much cheaper. An actual library building would be totally unnecessary, as all one would need would be a ‘virtual library’ as a website and all works could be accessed through this portal. There would not even be any need to leave the house to gain access to anything one needed. This would seem to be the most logical way of proceeding.Logic, however, is not always the best approach to everything. Print books have a long history with humanity and our relationship with real books is not something that can be changed overnight. Many people, including younger readers, feel that there is something special about having a book with real paper and needing to turn pages. There will therefore for the time being be a future for print books and libraries.Libraries will continue to be especially important, as not all older people use computers and e-readers as much as the younger generation. They will still want to read print books and the library is a cheap and convenient place to find them. In addition, if only a few books in print are available in the future, libraries might be one of the few places where they might be accessed. Another purpose that libraries serve is acting as community centres that organise events, education and childcare. Ironically, libraries also provide computers and Internet access for people who cannot afford their own.In spite of the seeming dominance to come of digital books, I feel that there is and will be a place for libraries with print books. This state of affairs might change in the future, but at present, they are important community resources.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read\n\nthe emotional expressions of students is valuable. We now have technology that can prove what we are feeling. In the article it states the steps of how we can find out our emotions. Also Dr.Haung said that a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. If they know what the students are feeling then the teachers know what do .\n\nFirst it begins with a 3-D computer model of the face. It say's in the artical that all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. After all of that , they can determine the emotion of the student. Also by just looking at there faces we can determine there emotions.\n\nIf we use this type of technology we can help students out. If students have probelms, the computer can help out. If the teacher's know what the studetn's are feeling then they can help out. The teacher's could sit down with them and talk to them. Also the computer can give the teacher new ways to teach in class.\n\nFinally the computer's can be helpful to find out\n\nother things , besides emotions. By doing this, scientest can find out what other things ccomputer's can\n\ndo for us. Finding what peope are feeling is very helpful . It gives us a llittle bit of information of what the person is thinking. From that information we can do something about there emotions.\n\nUsing this type of technology is very helpful. It helps us find out about our emotions. Also other's emotions .\n\nThis help's scientest know what, other things we can do with this type of technology. This technology can help us in many ways , besides find out what people are feeling. It's great that we know that computer's can help us out , not just by using the internet\n\nbut in many other ways.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays climate change is inevitable due to global warming. Many argue that we need to take radical actions to avoid erratic weather while others are complacent about it. From my perspective, we need to put in efforts to mitigate this issue before it's exacerbated. I will share my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs\n\nTo commence with, the carbon footprint should be monitored across all the nations. In other words, the government officials could impose penalties on the citizens crossing the threshold of carbon limits. Consequently, individuals would consciously change their lifestyles. For instance, for commuting, they may switch from private to public transportation. Thus, this will purge emissions in some quantities and help in tackling extreme weather issues.\n\nFurthermore, schools should focus on environmental studies. To elaborate on this, if adolescents are aware of the rising problems as shared by their teachers about irregular temperature then they will feel responsible towards the environment. For example, a tree plantation drive or a beach clean-up could help teenagers to be accountable. Hence, with their mindful behaviour, preventing climate change will be easier.\n\nTo sum up, we can avert the effects on weather by reducing the release of carbon dioxide gases. The government can impose penalties on those who don't abide by the rules. Also, students need to be involved in this herculean task as they are the future and it's vital for them to learn and overcome this situation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World War two was very devistating. Many people were killed, and several villages were destroyed. You should be a Seagoing Cowboy to help the lives of those who are still alive. If you become a Seagoing cowboy, you would never regret it. People who were Seagoing Cowboys should not be called Seagoing Cowboys, but people should call them heroes.\n\nPeople who become Seagoing Cowboys have not only time to spend helping others. They also have time to go sightseeing. If you are an animal person, this job is perfect for you. On the ship you have to take good care of the animals. If you are a person who likes sports. You would also love to become a Seagoing Cowboy. They played many games on the ship (such as baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, and boxing).\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy will change your life. You will become more sensitive to different types of cultures. You will also be called a hero for the rest of your life. Please become a Seagoing Cowboy. There are people that need our help.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i don't think that the new technology is valuable. I don't think it's valuable because there is really no need to check how people feel. I think that would be valuable in other situations, like for depressed people, or for like an aslyum to check how these people feel. I think that it would be a waste of money, it would be to much money for all the features to add. The passage said that it Facial Action Coding System would have to scan your face and i think that would be a lot of money for just making something that would be able to check how you feel. You could sell it to certain people that help people out with emotional things, so like they would scan their face in the begining to see how they feel, after the meeting they have the person in charge would have to scan their face to see if that meeting changed the way they felt from the begining. It would be good for certain uses but to have it in schools wouldn't really help. I think it wouldn't help in schools because i don't think people would just like it if you just had to scan there face to see how they feel, i think you have to ask them first and if they say yes you can see how they feel. I don't think we should have this around because there is really no need why you need to check how people feel if you don't know who they are. Even if they are just students doing what they need to do i don't think they would like people knowing how they feel, i know i wouldn't like people scanning how i felt if i don't know them because some people don't like people knowing the stuff they feel and how they feel unless you know them and can trust them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI believe that we should keep Electoral Colleges but massive changes to the system.  These changes would help prevent ties, avoid a large number of \"swing\" state, and also make elections easier.  For one to prevent ties, that is a hard thing to prevent cosidering we have no control over who someone votes for but it can be solved. If, in case of a tie, we due a tie braker as you will.  There will be a revotation process with 499 voters, these voters are picked at random in the city data base.  \"...for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him.\"\n\nNumber 2 is to solve swing states, again this is something it is hard to prevent but can be solved.  There needs to be an equal number over information distributed among the states and so forth.  For the conclusion of making elections easier, we need to make the more convenient. It takes a long time to vote for you and could be faster.  Although the electoral system is slightly flawed we still need to keep the \"peoples\" president, and there are not manyn other ways to do this than to due the system we have now.  The only major problem is the the system is out of date.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been apart of our community for such a long time, now they are apart of us. They are a statement to some and just a form of transportation to others, some look for the coolest style, some look for the biggest and baddest one, and others look for the gas a car saves. The kind of car that you love all depend on what you like, that is why there is so many kinds of cars. In movies we have seen flying cars, super cars, timetraveling cars, and even invisible cars. So what about the cars that drive themselves?\n\nPeople have always wondered about cars that drive themselves as a kid we have all probablly looked out our window and seen a car from an angle that we could'nt see the driver and think of a ghost car. The real question now is if those \"ghost cars\" are that far off. Could there be a driverless car in our lifetime? With tecnology racing along as fast as it is, it is very possible. One of the biggest questions about this subject is, should we do it?\n\nThe risk that comes with this can be very high. Would consumers trust the tecnology to be faultless and work perfectly? If the tecnology messes up just once at the worst time, it could end up in a fatal crash. One wire shorts and your car spins out of control going 65mph. The risks of putting peoples lives in the hands of a car, a robot, seems way too dangeous. Cars like this have been tested before and went half a million miles without crashes, it all goes perfect until it goes wrong. That one moment that it goes wrong, could be devestating. What then? Does the car company get sued becasue of \"faulty equipment\" or does the owner of the car take the fault because they are the ones that can take control at any time.\n\nDriverless cars should not be let loose to the public until they have run thousands of tests of every possible situation. Until those cars are truely perfect. Not a second too soon. These are people in those cars, and little bugs in the system can not be present. Until those driverless cars are perfectly tuned and can without doubt, last up to a million miles without any problems, they should stay in the warehouses. Some people may say, \"Human error is more dangeous than the errors that the cars could make.\" That is just not true, an error in a robot happens and can't be fixed in the time a crash could happen and once the error happens and your car is spinning that system does not know how to come back from that. Humans on the other hand being alert and present can adjust and make corrrections to fix the spin out. A robot would leave you spinning bracing and hoping for the best instead of avoiding the crash in some cases.\n\nIt's exciting that new tecnolgy like this is becoming a possiblity. They should without question keep going on the development of these cars. These cars being released in the near future, should not even be a possiblity. It should be many, many years until these cars are becoming close to finshed. Something this huge that can have peoples lives in the cars hands, or wheels, has to be perfected. Keep the cars put away for now, the dream of those cars could become a reality in our lifetime, in our childrens lifetime. Are you comfortable with your childrens lives, at times, in the hands of a system?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is debatable issue as to whether boxing, a seemingly bloody sport, should be excluded from the modern society. As far as I am concerned, the attempt to remove boxing from the current age is utterly unjustified.\nAdmittedly, boxing is often associated with various disturbing factors, such as foul language, disregard to rivals, violent punches and inelegant appearance as a result of intense physical contacts. However, such gory scenes may frequently take place in underground boxing games which are barely recognised by the professional community of boxing and by the legal system. Unlike underground boxing, professional boxing upholds moral principles and universal values, for examples, respect to opponents, obedience of rules, etc. Also, professional boxers are protected by safety equipment and judges who may stop the game when witnessing any player suffering serious injuries. Therefore, the health hazards involved in boxing games may not be as severe as the public assumes.\nAnother reason reinforcing my position is that boxing already enjoys considerable popularity around the world and plays an important part in people's entertainment, as exemplified by the successful ticket sales of most boxing games and high audience rating of TV programmes broadcasting boxing matches. Given such popularity of boxing, the removal of this sport may cause widespread dissatisfaction and complaint.\nTo draw a conclusion, the exclusion of boxing is completely groundless and irrational, given the safety protection, sportmanship and popularity as reflected in this sport. I expect in the future, more views could arise to furnish the understanding in this regard.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in VAUBAN,Germany executives are making a big leap on forbidden street parking,driveways and home garages. it costs $40,000 to buy a parking space becuse of the retricans on cars. The reason for this \"smart planning\" is becuse 12 percent of green house gases in Europe come from tailpipes. David Goldberg qoutes that \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car and that will have to stop\". In the United States the Environmental Protection\n\nAgency is promting car reduction becuse of pollution being at such a high polution rate. paris has the most smog out of any other European capital.\n\nBOGOTA,Colombia had a car free day and millions of colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses. rain did not stop people from pertisipating in this event,for the first time two other colombian cities,cali and valledupar joined this event.\n\npresident Obama ambitous goals were to curb the united states greenhouse gas emissions unveiled last week. more americans are buying more and more less cars. Mr. sivaks son lives in san fransisco and has a car but takss bay area if nessecary.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists have been trying to figure out what the face is on Mars. It turns out that the face, is not really a face. Scientists discovered that the formation that everyone is seeing in the photograph is actually a landform called a Butte, they are most likely found in the American west.\n\nThis formation was so astonishing that it was featured in a Hollywood film, Magazines, Books, radio talk shows and even haunted grocery store checkout lines. People thought that this kind of evidence should be hidden. A few scientists believed that the face was an alien artifact, but phototgraphing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when MGS arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, they photographed the face as soon as they could get a good shot at it. MGS is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine. Eighteen years later they decided to end the mission, they felt that it was important to taxpayers.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, MGS flew across Cydonia for the first time. A team of Mars Orbiters took a picture ten time sharper than the original photo. An enormouse amount of web surfers waited for the pricture, but when it posted they weren't so satisfied. There wasn't and alien monument after all. NASA just does not pass over the face very often.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, MGS drew close enough for a second look. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in field of view. The picture showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa, which again are landforms common around the american West. It reminds people of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nEach of the pictures pixles in 2001 had a span of 1.56 meters compareed to 43 meters per pixle in the best 1972 image. If there were to be objects in the pictuer such as a plain on the ground or Eqyptian style Pyramids you would see them. So after all there is no face on the panet, it is just a landform called a butte.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Luke's point of view you have a opportunity of a lifetime to be in the\n\nSeagoing Cowboy program. You have a opportunity of a lifetime because you get to experience adventures and visit many unique places . To be in the Seagoing Cowboys program you have to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas . One reason why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you can help the countries that were left in ruins when World War ll ended. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations have joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).The second reason why you should participate is because you also can find time to have when the animals have been unloaded. In conclusion you can participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program to help these countries that were left in ruins by the World War ll and it can also make you more aware of the people that are from other countries and there needs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this artical is important. Our emotions are always changing. This new technology can help us in different ways. I'm for this because learn how someone feels is important in some cases. Facial experssions show how someone feels through their emotions.\n\nThe creator of FACS is an psychologists named Dr. Paul Eckman. The Facial Action Coding System is able to read an identify peoples emotion. Only the six basics which are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust ,fear , and sadness. The way they found Mona Lisa's emotions was by using a 3-D computer to construct the face. They found all forty-four major muscles, the movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit on the computer.\n\nIf the FCAS was used in school it can be a benifit to students and teachers. It can show how student are acting in class to see if they're under standing or not. If someone isn't understanding then the teacher can see and talk more on that subject. If the students id doing an assinment on the computer and get the answer wrong and see confusion the system could reword the question and see if that's easier.\n\nThe main idea of the Facial Action Coding System is to see emoition. It can help in many situations. In school we can now see if student are confused or paying attention.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not be developed. The cars still need the help of people to perform some activities. The cars also will have millions of sensors that at any one point if one goes bad the whole car would not be able to function properly. Driving also requires the driver to be alert at all times. Driverless cars are going to have ways to entertain the driver instead of keeping the driver focused on the task at hand. With all of these potential problems driverless cars should not be developed.\n\nThe cars can brake and go on their own to help the person driving. They also vibrate when you are about to back into something or are drifting into another lane, but they can not correct these things. Some cars can drive themselves but can not function properly when coming to a roadwork area or an accident scene. If a car is incapable of dealing with these contingencies we should not develop them.\n\nCars that can drive themselves need millions of censors just to stay on the road let alone the lane. In paragraph 4 the prompt talks about the cars using LIDAR which is a device that projects a laser and spins on top of the car. Every rotation showing the computer the cars surroundings. While on the road however the LIDAR could spin around and before it get around again an object could have found its way to being in the path of the car giving the car, depending on its speed, hardly any or no time to react. Other sensors could go bad or just the slightest miscalculation or glitch in anything could spell disaster for the car and its passenger(s). These cars should not be developed given today's unreliable technology.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the questions, \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" and, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\", were asked. In the same paragraph the author answers the question by saying, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in new way.\" Manufacturers hope to fix that problem by introducing \"in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\"(Paragraph 8) These same ideas contradict the claim in paragraph 9 that says, \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best acieved with alert drivers.\" How can drivers be alert if they are busy \"having fun\" before the car decides to hand over the controls to the driver. Driverless cars are just going to cause more accidents due to the lack of attention the drivers are giving the road.\n\nDriverless cars should not be developed because they still require human assistance, there are too many things that can go wrong with the technology required, and that driving takes alert drivers, the same drivers that are going to be \"entertained\" while they wait for their turn to drive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists knew that it was another martion mesa tthat looks like a face because of shadows,but theorists thought that the face was bona fide evidence of life on mars, that nasa would rather hide. Defenders of the nasa budget say they wish that there was ancient life on mars. LIfe on mars would be boon rather than a burden for nasa.\n\nFinally after anpther image was released on the JPL website it revealed a....natural landform. skeptics that of course have to argue with every peice of information we have decided that he image was too hazy do to the clouds to get a clear view. As rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel. So objects in a picture like airplanes or egyption style pyramids, or even a small shack! You could see where they were. Finally they come out and say, what is in the picture is a martion equivlent of a butte or mesa- landforms commen out in the american west.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all, the Electoral College is regarrded as a non-democratic method of selecting a president that should be over powered by declaring the canidate who gets the most popular votes the winner. The Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense, it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution.\n\nSo, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does. Most people vote for a presidant just because everyone else did, his/her race, his/her gender, and other things like that. Voting for that presidant with no knowlage about them or what they are capable of. But people tend to vote for that president out of majority because if 50% of the largest state voted \"yes\" for this president then we vote for him and then he/she is now president and is not doing anything right and they think that if you take away this or you do that it will solve the problem. But it won't, it'll only make things worse and upset a lot of people.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors ? They can be anyome not holding public office. Sometimes statee conversations, sometimes the presidential candidates themsleves. The single best argument against the electoral college is that we might call the disaster factor.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the text \"Exploring Venus\" the ather trys to make points on why we should viset Venuse. In paragraph 3 the ather speeks of the dangers of visiting this planet. he states that the \"atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\" and the clouds are made of highly corrosive sulfer. The ather also states that Venus has temperatures avreges of 800 dagrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times more than Earth. Venase is even the hotest planet do to volcanoes and other extreme wether.\n\nThe ather also staded that (NASA) is develaping space ceafts that can survive these codishans. He states that a blimp like shudal will hover 30 or more miles above Venas. He calls this a worthy cause becaus \"human curioity will likely lead us into many equaly intimdating endeavors\". This is not only not a good argumant for taking such risk but also a pointlas reson to go to Venuse. The things we can lern is not werth the time mony and posibly lives it will cost to get it. This is why it is not wherth it to go to Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, studying and participating in physical workouts have the same importance to the development of children. Therefore, parents should try to balance the amount of time children spend for both these types of activities. \nOn the one hand, it is important for a children to be well-educated. Spend time studying can help children to train their ability in logical thinking and hard-working. These skills not only shown it value to increase the productivity of the students at school, but also very benefitial for their life after graduation. It can be argued that these skills provide more jobs opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore improve the quality of life for students who have them. Moreover, it is also crucial to ensure our next human generation have enough knowledge to continue the humanity’s development. They are the future world leaders, so giving them a better education can result in the latter new inventions, economic growth or greater future prosperity.\nOn the other hand, physical workouts also play an important role in the life of a child. Doing regular body exercises is believe to be benefitial for the children’s health, especially for the immune system, thus help to reduce the risk of children suffer from many kind of diseases such as obesity or near-sighted. Physical activities also force youngsters make contact with the nearby society, make them more socialize and out-going. Beside, playing sports is also effective in reducing the stress and anxiousness for children, which is often occur to students recently\nIn conclusion, physical activities and study are both necessary for children, and should receive equally concern from parentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ended story paragraph order show Saeng looking forward life positive outlook It shows going depressed change life anymore The hibiscus used device storys plot When changes happen hibiscus changes happen story At first Saeng without hibiscus feels hopeless When sees remembers past sad Once plans things start look She begins accept change last paragraph says when come back hibiscus budding I take test again shows Saeng looking future positively positive change hibiscus beginning bloom The author concludes story symbolic way helps express storys themesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you feel safe knowing that you were putting your life into a computer's \"hands\"? There are many positive and negative examples on driverless cars. I have looked at the negative effects and I have chosen to be agaisnt the idea of driverless cars. I have chosen this mainly for safety reasons.\n\nOne reason that I am against the development of driverless cars is the safety concern. In paragraph nine it explains how these driverless cars are currently unsafe to drive in certain road conditions. These conditions may include pulling in and out of locations, dealing with complicated trafic issues, and navigating through roadwork and accidents. As a result, in almost all states it is illegal to even test driverless cars. There are currently only three states in the country that have \"limited\" use of semi-autonomous cars, California, Nevada, and Florida. The car manufacterers say in the soon future more states will add to this list as soon as the cars are proved reliable and safe. With that said even if they become legal in more states, new laws will need to be added in order to cover liabilty if there would so happen to be an accident. Another concern of mine is, what if this driverless car were to malfunction? Let us say I was in the passenger seat of my driverless car. What if I were to fall asleep?\n\nYou've heard the story, now it is your turn to decide. Should you feel safe without the car under your control and in the \"hands\" of a computer?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cutting-edge technology has been adopted more and more in manufacturing currently. Experts assume that robots can replace humans to do some current jobs. In my opinion, there will be advantages and disadvantages to using this new kind of technology. \r\n\r\nConcerning positive aspects, robots can take over good production much more quickly and accurately than workers. Thus, it can help not only enhance labour productivity but also be more economical and profitable. In addition, robots can do some dangerous tasks instead of humans, for example, robots can take over expedition jobs or rescue people. Besides, they can do manual jobs that people are much bored doing such as delivering jobs or collecting trash, even doing housework. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, there will be some disadvantages to using robots. First, it can damage our vulnerable environment. Because robots can consume huge electricity for operation. However, fossil fuels are used to produce electricity. On the other hand, the more fossil fuels are used, the more adverse influence on the environment. Second, the unemployment rate will increase among people with low income and low-level education. Finally, due to heavy dependence on technology, robots demand costly repair and maintenance expenses in order to prevent robots from breaking down. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, the application of robots in production will bring enormous benefits. Besides, it will be concerned about their negative impacts, especially their adverse effect on our environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer as a teacher would make many young kid's dreams, but would it be a reasonable thing to do? I believe that reading emotional expressions of the student in a classroom is valuable. To support my claim, I will talk about the people who are behind the research, how the technology works, and what it could mean for the classroom.\n\nThe people behind the Facial Action Coding System are a group of scientist who aim to better communicate computers and humans. The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" states, \"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" For the Facial Action Coding System project, Dr Huang teamed up with some colleges. This is stated in the first paragragh, and it says, \"The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institut for Advanced Science at the University o Illinois, woking in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam.\" These are the inveters of the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nSome importance about my claim being valuable in a classroom setting is how it works. The computer scans or face and conducts diffrent projects on a 3D model of your face. In paragraph 3, it states 2 evidences of the process. One from paragaph 3 is, \"The process begin when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscels.\" The other from paragraph 3 is, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" The process would be very safe in the sense that through time, it could be reduced to an instant, and cause a course to take diffrent action.\n\nFollowing how the coding works, the grander part is using it in a classroom. Some evidence that supports me from Dr Huang is whn he states, \"\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Huang predicts, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\"This vision of his is a key factor in my claim of importance. He also goes on to support, \"\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional break communication, \"notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that, too.\"\" This tells me that there is still things that are yet to be finished with the idea, but this can go from the classroom, to the world of buisness in an instant.\n\nTo conclude, from the gathered information that was given to me by the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the evidence supports my claim of the importance of reading emotional expressions in the classroom. The specific topics of the article that helped me conclude this are the team pushing forward the project, the sceince behind the coding, and finally with the dream of the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I like the idea of this technology of how it can tell what peoples emotions are like. I belive it can help people who are wanting to in the feild of human emotions, because it can help them spot how a patient is feeling.\n\nBut this technology can also do harm to some people with depression because if or when they try the online face reader it is going to show that they are sad, mad, or angry and that might make them feel those emotions even more.\n\nand here is my list of why I love and hate technology.\n\nModern technology has gotten to a point where if computers came alive the human race would be killed off in a couple of days.\n\nComputers can now detect how we are feeling.\n\nWe have been able to make robots and who is to say that someone made falty wireing or made a falty chip.\n\nThere goes a robot on its way to making the world its own.\n\nTechnology is getting better every day with new computers and new updates to keep them safer to the user so they can worry less about their information getting out to the public.\n\nThat is Apples clam to fame that their phones and computers can not be hacked.\n\nThere are special employee's in Apple that try to hack their own system to make sure that their system is bulletproof.\n\nThis is why they were able to make this clam.\n\nWhen new updates, phones, and computers come out there is a select few that try to find the weakest part of the system and tair it down.\n\nJust to prove that no computer is better than them and their hacking system.\n\nIn fact now hacking systems are so good now that almost any computer can get hacked for the other side of the world.\n\nLike the saying goes you are only as strong as your weakest link.\n\nThese are all reasons they computers are good and bad for people they can save use by keeping our information safe but they could also be hacked by some smart guy who has way to much time on his hands and then finally the world could be taken over by robots.\n\nThese are all reasons why I love and hate technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argue by some that developed country does not require any improvement in economic sector as their societes already feel satisfy with their current condition. I personally stand to this notion since mostly people from this country have a stable life. This essay will elaborate more about this issues on the following paragraph.\n\nRich country typically pay attention most on some basic needs of its dwellers such as salary, tax, education and health access in order to make sure all of the citizen have same treatment. This is why their citizent have a tendency to feel satisfy as long as their basic needs is provided by government. For example Swiss is categorized as some of happiest country in the world, as a result their dwellers even with regular job living in a happy and healthy life. Thus, they do not ask for another new improvement related to economic aspect.\n\nFurthermore, as they already living in such a wealthy living condition, people from this country put their sight more entertaining themselves. This is mostly done with spending their time on vacation, learning new things and spend some time joining social organization such as involving in charity to support other people who struggle with economic matters. For instance, people in my village, receive donation from one social organisation in Finland, which focussed more on education with providing learning material, tools, uniform and even provide healthy food once i a week.\n\nTo conclude, as all the citizen has been living in decent life, government from rich country pay attention more on other aspects rather than economic aspect as their citizen mostly engaged in social things to satisfy themselves.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to know how someone was feeling? If they was happy or sad? Well, now you can! In the story \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", they identify emotions with technology and this idea is spectacular because it can read people's emotions if they're trying to hide it. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\". The technology takes the image of the face and calculates it into the persons emotion, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit.\" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal according to Dr. Huang.\n\nFor some people, this idea may be unlikely, but for others it's a miracle. For instance, let's say that you or someone you knew got robbed and they wanted to find out who it was; they suspect one person and they tell you they didn't do it, how would you know for sure if they was telling the truth?. The police could use this technology to check if the person is lying or not by the muscles in the culprits face. If the person was in fact lying, the muscles in their face would start to tighten, if they was telling the truth; their muscles would loosen as in relief. Others would say it's unlikely because they don't want anyone to know how they are feeling.\n\nThe Mona Lisa was a beautiful painting created by Leonardo da Vinci, the painting of the women was confusing yet, fascinating. Her confusing smile led people to ponder weather she was happy, sad, bored, or even angry. The smile is a half smile, almost as if she's trying her hardest to keep it in place. Most people think that her smile faded along time of sitting in the same position for hours, some say that Mona Lisa wasn't even a real person just an image.\n\nThe muscles in our face can inform a person just how we're feeling, the look on our face gives it all away. \"Meanwhile, mucles called oricularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. (That's intruction #2). But in a flase smile, the mouth is streched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\".\n\nIn concluion, this idea is very brilliant and is the key to our future, and it'll help find criminals. I approve of this technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I didnt know Then dad told place called buddies Ive never day Then waitress put us circular table Then asked us would like anything drink I told waitress I would like diet pepsie My sister got fruit punch As always My mom dad got mountain dew My brother got cherry pepsie I dont know got different drinks It took minutes get drinks though My dad wasnt patient He knew food take forever Finally waitress came drinks She apologized wait Then took order The wait minutes My dad impatient I patient one table The resturaunt wasnt even busy I told dad patient food right minutes So waited waited Finally food came We ate food got bill left That time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages when you limit your car usage. By limiting your car usage you will have to choose a diffrent way of transportation and thats often walking or riding a bike. Those two choices of transportation are often used as stress relivers. Also you dont have to worry about traffic or having to rush out of work for the gym beacause you have all ready got in a little excrise\n\nFor exapmle in source 3 \"car-free day is spinning into a big hit in bogota\" it says \" It's a good opporunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\". Also when limiting your car usage people often turn to walking, or biking as i've stated before. when a city has a high populltion of walkers and bikers they will have to start making public places closer. As stated in \"source 1\" (¶ 6) \" In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\"When walking you can get a really nice excrise in when getting from place to place and riding a bike can also get your legs in shape. While siting in a car all day dosent help you out at all it's only polluting the air and has you on your butt all day. Less car driving can also mean less car wrecks.\n\nOften people are late to work because of rush hour. As stated in \"source 2\" (¶14)\"Congestion was down 60 precent in the capital of france\". while riding a bike you dont really have to think about traffic. Another problem with driving is parking the less cars the less you'll have to worry about a parking space.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On may 24,2001 NASA Viking was snapping pictures around mars when something weird showed up on one of the photos. when NASA seen what looked like a human face went crazy. An ever since NASA'S crazy image got out thousends and thousends of people all around america were talking about \"the face on mars\". But Mars Orbiter Camera team came to find that it was not a human face but just a simple natural landform.\n\nMany people believed that it was an alien artifact. Even few sciantists believed this too. But on April 5, 1998, Mars global surveyor flew over Cydonia for the frist time .Mas Orbiter team took a picture ten times sharper then viking photo. When the picture was taken by Mars camera team showed upon a JPL web site. Showing that the image was a natural landform, that there was no alien atifact. People still don't believe that it's just a natural landform, but this picture was taken by a digital image 3 times bigger then pixel size. so if any other objects such as airplanes, egyptial shaped pyramids, or small shacks you would most definetly see them. The landform that is actually shown on mars was a commom landform around American West.\n\nIn conclusion you can see that this image was studied very hard on to find out was it actually was, wich is a natural landform found in the American West. An if you still don't believe just think about it. The image taken that reaveled it to be a natural landform had each pixel in the 2001 spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the 1976 Viking image.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertising is an effective measure in modern marketing to help enterprises promptly capture | sales. However, from consumers’ view, it has some negative influences that require measures to prevent those bad impacts.\n\nRegarding the drawbacks of advertising, promotion, the first to mention is that many advertisements make people misled easily. Advertisements are meant to attract enterprise’s target customers so the function and quality of products tend to be exaggerated. As a result, buyers face higher possibility of buying the goods that are not of any real value to them. In addition, advertising sometimes encourages bad habits which are detrimental to people’s health. For example, fast food agencies always put emphasis on the advantageous side of their products and ignore the inherent peril of obesity. Furthermore, companies continuously push new products into the market to generate sales. Via advertising campaigns, these new products would quickly replace the old ones and the old ones will be disposed of despite the fact that they are still in good use. This is a recurring cycle that causes a waste of resources for customers.\n\nTo save this situation, it is urgent that governments take action to protect consumer’s rights by introducing comprehensive legislation on the advertising industry. Tougher sanctions should also be imposed on any company that violates the law. This would certainly increase agencies’ awareness of launching ethical advertisements. Additionally, associations of consumer’s right protection should play most crucial roles in this battle. To say more, it is vital that consumers protect themselves. They should learn to become wise consumers by making research and analysing thoroughly what they need before giving buying decisions.\n\nTo sum up, it is certain that bad advertisements will continuously fill the television screen, magazines, mailbox, and so on. So, to prevent their negative impacts, there is a need for both government’s interference and consumers’ wisdom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think computers good effect peoples lives You alot stuff internet costs much without You study different foods cultures around world If play games online get better handeye coordination skills There also things buy video chat family friends The computer convinient useful If interested place world type name place get facts cultures foods Instead buying airline ticket see go online learn language You also study food people eat clothes wear You also learn sports games If play games computer get better handeye coordination Most games daunloads free There puzzle games challenge action fun take rapid button pressing adventure let explore new lands And alot games talk people make friends There otherways talk instead games There email chat rooms facebook twitter video chat With things talks friends family around world statecountry All either download go internet buy You talk old friends talk family havent seen Video chat see eacho ther face book share pictures chat rooms talk multiple people In conclusion computers convinient society today Whether s studying world fun talking people know computer many wonderous things peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is no doubt the truth that the majority of people want to live in a society where they can derive a sense of satisfaction. While people are ceaselessly struggling to improve society to meet their needs, there is almost always some problems or issues that remain and keep society from being better. In this essay, I try to examine the reason why it is a highly challenging and even impossible task to create an ideal society and give some measures that might be helpful to mitigate the situation.\nThe first step is to understand why the goal of an ideal society is tough to achieve. One of the most apparent reasons is that it is nearly not possible to give an explicit definition of ideality. Since the desire of each person can be extremely different and individual, their expectations of what an excellent society should look like are immensely varied and sometimes incompatible with each other. For instance, some people wish to have a society of fewer foreign immigrants because of the eventual rise in crime and the more intensive competitiveness in the job market, while others insist that a multicultural society certainly brings vast amounts of merits to the future. Another obvious reason is in terms of the difficulty of realizing the requirements. A prime example is eliminating discrimination against gender or sexual orientation. Although a lot of related laws have been introduced to protect the vulnerable population from being discriminated against, this issue remains one of the most significant concerns that people have and need to face every day.\nDespite the complexity and challenges of creating the ideal society for everyone, there is still a large number of things that can be done to enhance the expectations of people toward the society where they live. In my opinion, an ideal society includes at least great tolerance. I believe that education, especially in primary school and kindergarten, plays an essential role in teaching how to treat others with respect, which benefits the tolerant atmosphere in society significantly. One measure that government should leastwise take into account is to fund the more meaningful projects at the school, which publicize and advocate the value of fairness, justice, and kindness.\nTo sum up, although it might not be possible to create a society that satisfies the whole population regarding the huge diversity of attitudes people hold toward the key consideration of an ideal society, there is still highly necessary to make every effort to make it a better one for all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I know computers positive effect people The computers connect families contain information great peoples education conveint Computors step future take advantage First internet email help family members connect My family lives hours away car love talk email This helps connect family another reason computors Another reason includes family family sitting around calling everywhere find board game would easier go online find This way would quick easy find one board game The last reason computer would help family family wants get kinds activities need number could go online On internet family could find numbers information This way families activities together As one see computer bringing families together An reason computers good society educations With information tip fingers people want learn Now days people try find tools computers mae people get education Secondly computers another way go collage If ar nt going schoolcollage sick You would nt miss anything click button materials needed missed Lastly everyone knows classrooms ca nt afford one computer The children want computors hard If get one would change much They would able learn much The children could lean different countries far away As result computers would improve way learn The last reason computers helpful convience Now say world crazy nt go talk someone wo nt The computer offer ability confrence people would communication work parttners With ability talk another work would make us lighter nation This one many reasons computers conviente subssiquently computers conviente could book flights vacations rentals much With click button going nice vacationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think this would be a good idea? In the reading Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto, Mona Lisa is mostly happy a little disgusted and a little fearful and a little angry this is about mixed emotions and coming up with a new technology about reading yoiur emotions and calculating them for you to see whos really happy or faking happiness. This is about calculating emotions on a three D computer.\n\nFirst off, Mona Lisa is mostly always happy and she wanted to come up with a way to see if a lot of school students are happy or just faking there happiniss and hiding there real emotions. there is this three D computer that can take calculations on your emotions and tell you if you are truly happy or hiding your real emotions.\n\nsecendly, theres ba computer that contructs a three-D model of the face and all 44 major muscles in the model must move around like the human muscles. there are six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness the three-D computer can detect all six of these emotions and calculate the emotions and tell you how you really feel. you can tell when someone is truly smiling because there muscles in there face move a serten way and if it is a fake smile your muscles move a different way therefore you can tell if the smile is fake or not.\n\nTherefore, yes i think this new technology would work because the three-D model can detect the true feelings you have and calculate it i think you shoukd try this if you ever get a chance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hot features setting affect cyclist First hot days lot water drink He get dehydrated Also one around help gets lost Joe Kurmaskie explains there one sight building car structur kind Finally creature large snake came along road So move aroundSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concluded story When come back saeng vowed silently spring snows melt gesse return hibiscus budding I take test again shows entire theme story The theme story adjusting things life The conclusion demonstrats says take test The hibiscus allowed get changes life For example The familiar fragrance filled lungs saeng could almost feel light strands grandmother s long grey hair The hibiscus something home gave good memorys The hibiscus encouraged except new life keep trying make betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear lot talk computers effect society Some experts say computers good society think opposite computers bad society make children obese decrease person social skills even make children less educated Computers plain bad In recent years studies show children use computer often less likely less willing get active Dr says The children use computers time waste active A study conducted shows children use computer hours day obese children use one hour less day Computers keep children inside day A child computer wasting time active The main reason children become fat computer easier go computer walk exert energy Computer direct cause child obesity threat society Some think computer increase social skills dead wrong On computer talk friends like actually talking On computer talk privite say ever heck want In public say something bad get lot trouble A computer offers face face interaction So person uses computer often social gathering usually awkward My cousin spends time computer I went christmas never took eyes screen Computers destroying social life millions people Did know people use computer often usually less smart kids nt Experts computers say computers used infenite nolege The key word fraise kids knoledge finger tips nt mean use On many projects homework assignments I record kids say CAPS I copied printed article google copying printing students nt learn anything Computers slowly making people less educated Ever since invention computer people seen promise society Now computers destroying society making people fat socialy weird less educated So people still think computers goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir calm mood For personally home always calm place The author emphasizes mood using words like aromas passionate The author sets calm kind gentle mood talking family friends In conclusion author sets calm kind mood using words subject matter I feel calmingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The process of the election of the president of the United States is somewhat ambigous. The Electoral College basically controls the shifts between the competion, in a way that some rare cases in which a candidate loss the presidential election because of the amount of votes the Electoral college. The Electoral College should be abolished, not only is it unfair but irrational.\n\nThe Electoral College basically chooses for the people in some of the pass elections. The process of the voting in The Electoral College consists of five hundred and thirty eight electors, but only the majority of two hundred seventy electoral votes are required to elect the President. The Electoral College has a method to over rule by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes a winner. When the people in general vote for a candidate  they sometimes vote for a slate of numerous democratic or republican electors. We as the people not all the time but it happens, get puzzled when voting. When it comes to applying what you know about your future President some of the voting body doesnt know what candidate to decide on, since some times the candidates have similar campaign goals.\n\nSome states called Swing States contain the people that pay really close attention to the candidates campaigns. The voters that pertain to these states want to really listen to what their prefered candidate has to offer, as well as the the opponents campaign. Now people really need to have an actual choice over who their countrys leader is, for some people they are fine with the Electoral College taking their vote and only think of it as a vote.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that we the people need our votes to count as well and even more then the Electoral College just for the reason that we are voting for the person who will lead our country for four terms. In the end the Electoral College needs to be abolished for our vote to count.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I tend to have a negative aspect on driverless cars . I believe we will always need people to operate a car. New cars can do all sorts of stuff like, trafic jam assistance ,they can steer, accelerat ,and break themselves. All of these designs have one thing in common and that is to notify the driver if there is about to be a colision or anything. I also belive that you need human contact when in a car. Would you like to sit in the back of a moving car without a person in the front seat. If there were to be something that the car cant see or feel ahead a fewmiles like a flood how would the car know to stop when it clearly cant see it .how is it soppossed to know what to do. Like if a woman stared to have a sesure or a diabetic or anything like that what would the car be able to do about that. Also i do believe you should always follow the law but in a state of emergencey what if u needed to speed or anything of the sort a car that drives itself could not be allowed to do that surlly it would break rule regulations.\n\nI would not get in a car without a human being behind the wheel I would not put my life in the \"hands\" of a car. a person has feelings and you cant give that to a machine.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on these new smart cars is that I feel the just shouldn't even create them. They could cause accidents, it could be pedestrians in the street, traffic lights messes up alot, and IT COULD JUST BE DANGEROUS period.\n\nWhat if someone was traveling down the road in one of these new smart cars and they got so used to the smart driving and stirring itself and the driver falls asleep or something. Example, my dad for instents, he travels ALOT and he gets so tired of being the only one driving for hours and hours by himself, so he would feel like this is the perfect car for him, but me knowing him, he would just lean his seat back put his shades on and let the car do all the work, and ends up falling asleep or something, or get on his phone and misses his turn. Also the cars could most likely cause accidents because there is always alot of people on the road driving really SLOW in front of you and, and the smart car could be set to go an certain speed and hits the back of the car in front of you. Pedestrians can be in the street at the wrong time and the smart car is just still going and hits the pedestrian. Traffic lights stop working or acts funny also and out of no where you might think you have the right a way to go and the light could just red.\n\nPoint blank period there could be to many dangerous thigns that can happen with these cars, seriously. Would it be the driver in the smart car fault? No, because there not the ones driving, it would be GOOGLE'S fault.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood story happy author describing childhood memories great times home He says loved home kid enjoyed hanging family Also mood story loving The author talks realized true meaning family house Plus talks much parents sacrificed happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you ever think about participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program?\n\nWell, you should because you get to help people. The UNRRA, United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration, hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas.\n\nThey also help countries that were left to ruins after World War 2.\n\nI was caring for the animals during the crossings and it kept me busy.\n\nYou should really join if you like to care for animals or if you like to do good things for the world.\n\nIt might keep you very busy but you will love doing it. On my secod trip, I served as night watchman.\n\nMy job was to check on the animals every hour.\n\nThere was a rainy day one night and I slid down a slippery ladder and I landed on my backside, but did I quit the Seagoing Cowboys no I kept doing it.\n\nHere are some last few reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nOne reason is that you get to go around the world.\n\nThe second reason is that once you are done with your job you get to have fun on board. We played volleyball and baseball games.\n\nWe had table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and a lot of other games that helped pass time.\n\nI hope after reading this argument essay you will join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Introduction:\r\n\r\nThe significance of art education in schools is a topic of contention. While some believe it plays an indispensable role in fostering holistic growth, others consider it superfluous compared to more pragmatic subjects.\r\n\r\nBody Paragraph 1 - Benefits of Art Education:\r\n\r\nArt education, foremost, promotes holistic development. It nurtures creativity, an essential trait for innovative problem-solving, and encourages self-expression, providing an emotional outlet for children. Additionally, by exposing students to various art forms from diverse cultures, art education broadens their worldview, promoting tolerance and cultural appreciation. Furthermore, art can often be interwoven with other subjects, enhancing cross-curricular learning and providing a richer educational experience.\r\n\r\nBody Paragraph 2 - Arguments Against Art Education:\r\n\r\nConversely, some critics argue that in an increasingly technological world, emphasis should be on subjects that align more directly with future job markets, notably the STEM subjects. They believe that resources, both monetary and in terms of time, should prioritize these more 'practical' subjects. Additionally, given the subjective nature of art, assessment can be inconsistent, potentially leading to skewed grading. They also point out that, like any subject, art may not cater to the strengths of all students, potentially causing disillusionment in those who do not resonate with it.\r\n\r\nConclusion (and Opinion):\r\n\r\nWhile the practicality of subjects like mathematics and science is indisputable, sidelining art education risks neglecting the nurturing of creativity, a pivotal skill for the future. In an era where rote tasks are increasingly automated, creative thinking stands out as a uniquely human asset. Therefore, in my opinion, art education should maintain its esteemed position in the school curriculum, not as a mere supplementary subject, but as a cornerstone for fostering a balanced, innovative, and open-minded future generation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The claim of this enitre article is that \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" I believe this gives the author a reason to study it, in any and every way that may be possible. Another claim that could be relevent is \"While Venus is simple to see from the distant, but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" This basically is saying that yes, it might be challenging to examine Venus at a close angle, but its worth it for the outcome.\n\nThe author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus is worth studying for that reason of that most likely millions maybe even billions of years ago there was various life forms that lived there without any dangers to plants, animals, and humans whatsoever. In paragraph 5, they talk about NASA having an idea to create a blimp-like vehicle that will hover 30 or so miles about the Venusian Landscape. It will still be warm at 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure will be that of sea level on Earth, which is survivable for humans. Venus's typical temperature is 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we have ever experienced on our planet, its still worthy of being explore on.\n\nIn conclusion, even though exploring Venus will be very dangerous, there are many ways we can see if it could sustain human-life without having to sedn humans up there. For exampple in paragraph 7 it states that \"Another project is looking back on an old technology called mechanical computers.\" These computers were used in World War 2. These computers can sustain the heat and pressure because they use mechanical partd that are more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. Therefore the travels on Earth shouldn't be limited by the doubts and the danger, but should be very well expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. In this life we can accomplish any and everything that we want as long as we believe we can.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The society that we live in changes with time and the social norms and expectations of the people change as well. In some western cultures, it is usually seen that people expect their kids to earn their own money by doing small jobs, while other countries like asian, believe that young teens shouldn't focus on that aspect. In my personal opinion, I regard the fact that young ones should earn on their own. This essay will be discussing both the views of the people in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nCountries like USA, UK and Australia has a great influence on the humans from all around the world. Parents assume that their teenagers should step out of the house and earn their own pennies. One of the main reason to have such trust is that parents suppose that it will help their children to become responsible adults. Earning money can guide them to learn about concepts of saving money and using it with a lot of control. For example, in the western areas, teens tend to work at fast food chains or at other cafes while parallely pursuing their education. It causes them to develop socially and cognitively. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, in most of the Asian countries like India, Japan, and Korea, the youth is assumed to focus only on their education. Fathers and mothers wish their kids to pursue different careers and study hard throughout school in order for them to get admitted into a good university. Majority of the time the adolescents are evidently seen to be learning lessons in schools and extra tutions. Parents think that concentrating only on classroom subjects will aid their children to thrive in future. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although studies are an important aspect of a kid's life, it is also necessary for them to learn how to be responsible. Reading books cannot always assist a child to be responsible and it is essential for them to develop socially and cognitively which can happen when they are allowed to go out and work on their own.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author shows us his great support in his story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". In the story he does show a lot of information about his claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The study of Venus is worthy because Earth and Venus are like twins and the temperature/pressure of Venus.\n\nIn the story, the author gives us information about the relationship of Earth and Venus. For example, on paragraph two it states, \"Often referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms\n\nof density and size...\" The author shares us this information because the author is telling us on how Earth and Venus are related to each other. Also, in this piece of evidence it shows that they are occasionally the closest in their distance too.\n\nThe author also gives us information of the temperature/pressure of Venus. For example, on paragraph 3 it states, \"On planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...\" This proves that the author is telling us the average temperature in fahrenheit for Venus. It also shows the atmospheric pressure for Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author does show great information to prove his claim that the study of Venus is a worthy pursuit by showing us the information that is interesting at Venus with it's relationship with Earth and the temerature/pressure of Venus. Like it's interesting to know that Earth are related as twins because of their density and size. It's also interesting to know that Venus's average temperature is 800 degrees fahrenheit with a atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than what we've experienced.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "who think\n\nDear Senator\n\nI heard recently that you might be taking away the electoral college.  If you dont know allready the electoral college is a process founded by our fuounding fathers in the constitution.  In the article \"In defence of the electoral college\" they say,\"no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.  so a solid regional favorite, such as romney was in the south, has no incentive to campagin heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his pulralityin the states that he knows he will win.\"  this keeps the election 'fair' and the canidates cant just pick a region and \"take over.\"\n\nI understand that when you use the Electoral college system you vote not for the president but for a slate.  allthought this is your still putting your vote towards a president.\n\nIn the article \"In defence of the electoral college\"the electoral college restores some of the weight in the policital balance that the large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution.  The Electoral college keeps the votes balance in the states.  These are some reasons you should consider before you take away the Electoral college, and remember like source 3 say \"voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who thinkthat a single vote may decide an election.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studing Venus is a worthy pursuit. Althought Venus's is a very challenging planet to examine closely. Astronomers are fasinated by Venus and want to study it.\n\nThey are amazed with\n\nVenus and would like to study it more because Venus may have been once a Earth-like planet in out solor system. In the text it states that long ago Venus was probably coverd largely with oceans and could of have supported various forms of life there.\n\nVenus als has a surface of rocky sediment and it also includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. In the test it also states that Venus could also be out nearest option for a planetary visit. Nasa is making a possible solution to the surface of Venus to allow scientists to float above the fay.\n\nFinally studying Venus has value and not only because of the insight to be gained on the planted itself. Humans would likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Venus geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nIn conculsion studying Venus could lead to great options. And it could one day be a second planet humans could vist without a strugle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]