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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology could be very valuable in a classrooom enviroment. This software can do many things to benifit the classroom.\n\nThe technology used here is very useful to the classroom in many ways. When a student is feeling bored in the classroom he or she would be presented with things to keep them occupied. This software can tell when you are happy about something on your computer so it will pull that specific thing up when you are bored. Another good reason this software can help a classroom is that it can help a student when they struggle. Many students don't like to admit when they are struggling, they feel embarassed. This software can tell when they are struggling and help them in a way that wouldn't embarass them. This software can help them in key parts of where you struggle. One of the biggest problems in today's school is that techers dont know what students are struggling on. A student can hide there emotions for a teacher who is teaching many students at once, its a lot harder for them to hide their emotions from a computer.\n\nThis software preciseley analizes every detail of your face for the most accuracy. So it wont be malfunctioning when your student is trying to learn.\n\nThis software would be a great edition to every classroom. It would mantain a happy and benificial enviroment for the student. It would be one of the best things to use in a classroom to help a student.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The main way the majority of the people in our community get around each and every day, is by car. A car is the number way that people get from point A to B, but this is not the case throughout the world. A lot of countries have taken to effect the amount of damage a car can do, so they are beginning to limit car usage. They are beginning to realize that there are benefits from not having to crank up a car every time they have to go to the store thats a minute or two up the road, or every time they have to go to school, or what ever the case may be. A lot of them are coming to the conclusion that by limiting the car usage will, lower the amount of pollution and smog that is released in the air, lower the stress on having to worry about gas prices, and citizens will be more motivated to work and etc.\n\nThe amount of pollution that is let out into the air every day is ridiculous. In a lot of countries, smog has become a big issue even with out the effects of car usage. Car usage only makes it worst. In France, there was recored to be a numerous amount of cases where they reported a lot of congestion in the air, due to tha gas that was let out in the air due to the usages of the car. Paris began to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Paris has more smog than other European capitals, it was recorded that Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter, with Brussels having only 144 and London having 79.7. They began to momentarliy stop mitir vehicles dropping the amount on congestion to 60 percent.\n\nAlthough the amount of excersie that is received is at an all time low. By banning the amount of car usages this pushes more people to get excersie. A lot of the people in our community always depend of the vehicle on four wheels to get us around, not realizing they have to feet. Most stores in our community are beginning to be built at every corner to make things a little bit more convenient and in walking distance, and by lowering the car usage a lot of us will have to begin to depend on walking, to get from point A to B. Which will, and can do a lot of our health in the long run.\n\nNow many of us pass by more the one gas station a day, and begin to dread the prices of gas. The gas prices go up, and seem to consistitently go up more and more. A lot of those who work, don't like the fact that they have to give machines their money to get from place to place, and this only gets worst. Most children around teen ages who are beginning to get their liscense are not in the rush just for this exact reason. The prices of gas will only pull you down along with a lot of other expenses that people have to face everyday. Researchers have shown that the precentages in young people driving has decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.\n\nIn conclusion, many are beginning to realize the cons of how much driving can do. For example, the fact that it causes pollution, has a big effect on expenses and has a lot to do with excersing and etc. Many should to take these things into consideration before they try to argue it, and realize the positive effects it may have.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many things that humans have not explored despite how close we are to them. Venus is the the closest planet to Earth but we stiill haven´t explored it in over three decades. Even though these missions to Venus are dangerous, we still need to explore what we can. In ¨The Challenge of Exploring Venus,¨ the author states that studying Venus is a worthly persuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports this idea by describing how Venus might have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nThe author supports that Venus is worth exploring despite the dangers because it might have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. In paragraph 4, the author describes how important it is that we explore Venus, and how similar Earth is to this planet. ¨Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\" (4). This quote explains how similar Earth was to Venus and also describes the need for discovery. Venus is worthy to be explored despite the dangers because we need to see why Venus is no longer like Earth and why it doesn´t have forms of life on it anymore. Going to Venus would be a worthy persuit because we are very limited to the planets that we can explore and Venus is one of the only planets to visit right now with our current technology. This evidence proves the author suggesting how important it is to go on an exploration to Venus because it used to be similar to Earth, but it has vastly changed and we need to see how and why.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea thoroughly that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by describing how Venus might have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. The fact that Venus and Earth used to be so similar is important because scientists need to discover why Venus is so different and how this happened. Going through with this exploration would be extremely benificial and would open up new ideas on how we can save our planet today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has become almost fully integrated into today's society. Computers, smart phones, and more are used in a positive aspect; the driverless car is no exception. The development of driverless cars is a positive and necessary one, one that will help improve society significantly.\n\nOne of the most important features of driving is safety, and the driverless car has been safe. Google's cars that can drive independently under specific conditions have \"driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" The driverless car has not been fully developed, yet already Google's cars have successfully driven over a long distance without any accidents. Technology is constantly improving, and so will safety. Google's cars have position-estimating sensors, automative radar sensors, and even a rotation sensor on the roof. As these senors are improving, it is also making \"driving safer and also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" Once the driverless car is completed, it should have the sensors and technology to keep drivers safe, more than the ability of an actual human drivers to keep themselves safe. The advanced technology is not only a dream, but is slowly becoming a reality. Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, \"believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream.\" The driverless car is a ensured success, and with the development of the driverless car, comes the ensured safety of the driver.\n\nNot only would the driverless car be safe, but it would also be efficient. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with these efficient cars. Brin says that the cars, \"would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" The driverless car can be made into an efficient car, saving fuel and allowing for more flexibility than other mediums of public transportation. The cars would be able to take one anywhere while having a better environmental impact. The development of these driverless cars would \"fundamentally change the world\" for the better.\n\nLastly, the driverless car would be able to provide safety as well as entertainment. Currently, cell phones and almost everything is a distraction and hazard to the human driver. But with the driverless car, the driver is able to maintain his own safety and entertain himself. Some manufactures are going to bring \"in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the drivers need to take over.\" The driver can now safely entertan himself and know he will be safe. The technology is able to instantly alert the driver, keeping him from coming into harm's way. The driver has luxury, comfort, and safety with the development of the driverless car, something not available to the current driver.\n\nThe driverless car has too many positives, and should most certainly be developed. The development of the car would bring about greater safety, efficiency, and entertainment to every driver. The potential of technology is limitless, and the driverless car should be used to further enhance and accomodate the experience of every driver around the globe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author is not stated or unknown in this case, starts out saying \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" Driverless cars can shape our future into something new, amazing and beyond brillient. I too can envision that driverless cars will submerge in the world and replace the gas guzling and earth killing cars we have today.\n\nTechnology advances may not always be good but they might not always be bad either. The author gives both the positive and negative sides of the driverless cars. A lot of companies are making computer-driven cars but they are still requiring a driver for some aspects, such as roadblocks or accidents that need them to manouver around that they cant really sense. In paragraph 5 it states \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing a far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Driverless cars are proven to be more alert than humans can be which is a great safety call from the company.\n\nDriverless cars can be a great benefit to us and the safety of everyone around us. They can help if you're working in some type of buisness job and need to finsih up a couple things before a meeting. Workers needing to call and talk to some clients or even a stay at home parent who needs to help their kid on the way to school or something. They can also help with drunk drivers. They could take them home, wouldnt have to worry about someone getting hit, like a hit and run, or a car wreck. It would be much safer for them and everyone else that night who is out and about doing their thing.\n\nLike all things, they do have a negative side to them. Sensors could fail or the car could go into a unknown course and have no idea what to do, a car could come out of no where and cause a wreck, lots of things could happen but ther positives outweigh the negatives this time or in any case, they always do. I am looking forward to driverless cars in the near future from Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan. Wont you be too?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story Winter Hibiscus written Minfong Ho When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again trying show past memories transformed hope determination After failing driving test Saeng finds Hibiscus memories home land grandmother consume She buys plant puts vegetable garden After done planting Saeng sees flock Canada geese fly overhead Using memory old home family applied new surroundings Saeng vows retake test try The author ends story Winter Hibiscus paragraph show Saeng giveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers huge thing adays Almost everyone one use But people think hurting society This nt right need education people nt day job So could things harmful society Your right ca nt Every single person type education But education computer If rae working need get another degree job You ca nt go day find school online schooling night That way nt miss work still get schooling Another reason school project essay You might need computer search things project Or cite sorces What need type essay No computers education go works something Where nt need education But people nt day society Nothing Kids adults go outside fun They go computer check emails play games look facebooksmyspaces But enough responcibility go get fresh air And sit side nt problem life want live way Not way everyone else wants They make choices thier self nt need others So really nt effect What job need internet Most office people computer talk others email fix problems People work need computer access account get money People estimate cost building need adding something keeping record The video games perfect example programers use computer porgram want happening game thet takes hours complete So computers harmful society I still nt see Education people nt day job really good reason computers becept So everyone I strongly encourage reconsider could happen without computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Become a Seagoin Cowboy Today\n\nMany people have different occupations and ways to earn currency around the world.\n\nOne of the best occupations for you could be a Seagoing Cowboy. Working in this area can do many things for you, including helping to grow your cultural understandings as you would be working around the world meeting and working with new people. You would be taking care of animals that are aboard your ship, providing food and water for them. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy will be a oppurtunity you can not pass up.\n\nAs a Seagoing Cowboy your main job is to transfer animals around the world while tending to them aboard a boat. While stopping in a country you have the oppurtunity to go and see monuments, historical cities, and almost anything you can imagine! You will be assinged a task and given animals such as horses or mules to bring over to countries in need of them. You can start this job at a young age and work your way up through the system. This occupation will take extended periods of time while working day and night, wich means you would have to be away from your family.\n\nIn conclusion A Seagoing Cowboy could be an amazing job for some who want to work in this sort of field. You get to travel the world to places you have only dreamed about visiting. You will be working with animals throughout the day, growing a tight bond with them. And you will have the chance to meet new people with different cultures and up-bringings. Become a Seagoing Cowboy today! You will not be disappointed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story somewhat sad The girl misses homeland She also sad failed driving test The author I think ends story girl saying take test show even though sad country failing going give Failing test especially driving test stinks Your excited get dont So author trying show despite girls sadness give The girl going keep trying finally passes Also author probably wanted leave positive note usually dont want leave story sad solution So said would try test There many reasons author ended way obviousSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I hunting cold play I sitting blind dad waiting deter Its almost eight o clock since We hear ducks geese making noises marshland next us could see trees dance wind Smell trash dance grass morning fog Then nowhere came another doe They went us caution I got gun ready Then came eight point bunch I shot heart lung I also gutted The year youth hunt I patient paidSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor citizen brought attention people around computers technology bad us I also heard people believe tecnology So reason I m writing today issue put beliefs I believe new technology effecting daily exercising playing outside enjoy nature interacting friends family Now new technology computers people distracted want exercise This effect youth fat unhealthy sluggish time nt want happen youth future keeps state country suffer Another reason good exercise computer watching time proven energy feel happier time Computers us A poll even says people get headaches feel tired computer Exercise wo nt Sence new technology gagits people really nt go outside play around enjoy nature anymore I asking mother topic said CAPS days nt go outside anymore I remember I age mother would kick outside I would nt back home around pm I believe still happen Maybe parents still run around neigborhood If offtine maybe adults naturally relie computers entertainment Do nt think good idea My last topic computers cellphone really nt interact friends family anymore Now days Friends aim video chat text instead going something This nt really healthy us might know talk people real life Also someone aims texts really nt know tone talking face face Lastly I know familys get hurt technology They nt put get emails feel like nt see This also health relationship family members I really hope I persuade technology ok use sometime day Remember technology bad nt exerce play outside enjoy nature really nt interact friends family members Thank timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do you think that author think we should studying Venus, and is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers in presents? I think we should study Venus before trying to visit or exploring ,because you never know whats going on up there. Venus is like the first or second biggest planet on earth. To me i think Venus is a cool planet to study and learn about. In the passage I read that venus has the hottest surface temperature. In paragraph 3 it says on the planet's surface the surface tempertures average is over 800 degress. If i had a choice to go to Venus i wouldn't go, because i feel like its not save to go there because anything can haappen. Some people that do go up there 50% of them either cant breathe, get hurt ,or other things happened. Venus has about 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets . In paragraph 4 it states that the value of returnig back to venus seems indisputable, but what are the options of making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive. So therefore I agree with the author. I think you should study before trying out new things and exploring venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage, the author says, \"...Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sedimentand includes familar features, such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a cruical consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\"\n\nSo, for that being stated, that is why the author thinks the planet, Venus, is still worthy of visiting and discovering. The author also states that it's nearly impossible to go there. He said that we could be able to get there, but not able to touch ground because of the heat Venus holds. We wouldn't be able to touch or take samples of anything because it would be too hot.\n\nThe author states that NASA is working on new ways and ideas on how to approach Venus. He said that NASA has made something similar to Venus's heat and that they made something that would, maybe could, protect it from all that power of heat.\n\nLastly, He restates by adding in his conclusion, that Venus has value and is worth discovering more. He says that we will more than likely to discover more of what Venus has to offer because of the curiosity that we humans have and that nothing, not even the fear and douts we have will stop us from exploring and figuring out new things. He sates that we shouldn't be limited to travel because of the doubts and fear we have. The author states that we need to take a little risk to explore.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist gives feeling hopelessness When cyclist got directions Yosemite two old people thought getting good shortcut In reality led road seemed head nowhere saw many things added feeling hopelessness example author writes I toiled At points tumbleweeds crossed path adversely large snake It really move like diamondback blocked majority pavement front This shows cyclist getting tired seeing tumbleweeds usually represents phase completely deserted deadly snakes get way This answers question shows setting leads feeling hopelessnessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world we live today, almost everyone owns a car; or even two. The amount of people in the streets going to work and to school is excessive. This is a real issue that is almost not discussed. There are cities in the U.S. that have more cars than there are people in the city, like in L.A., which is something excessive. It would be good to not use cars once in a while. That's why, some countries are doing an event every year where they don't use cars all day. And they'd have to pay a fine of 25$ if they violated the rules.\n\nWe have been using cars for a long period of time, and we will keep using them for much more, but it would really help if we did not use them as much. Because sometimes there is so much traffic, is better to walk. When you own a car, you get stressed out. We all hate those \"Bad Drivers\" and we get angry when they are stopping us or blocking our way, and that gives us stress. Sometimes you relay so much on your car that you even use it to go around the corner, and this does not help your economy at all.\n\nDriving so much isn't helping the environment either. A lot of european cities have smog due to the pollution of so much cars, so they were forced to ban all cars that had odd-numbered plates from driving. If less people were to drive, there would be much less pollution. I don't think it would hurt anyone to walk once in a while.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be the best thing that has been invented to this day. These cars would make to were you would not have to use as much gas, and the price of gas would probably go down. So then it would be easier to pay for gas if you could not afford a driverless car. This would make it a little safer than having a bunch of people trying to hurry to work or where ever they are going. This would more than likely decresase the number of wrecks every year.\n\nThe cars are probably really expensive and hard to make though. When somebody finally gets a car that will be able to be driven on the road and is safe for people to get in than they could start making more to sell. Once people start figuring out that there is a car that can drive its self than they are going to buy. Then when they start to buy it they manufacturers are going to make thier money back really quick and easy. When the cars first come out they will be really expensive because they have to make thier money back on what they put into the cars.\n\nWhen the cars have to back up then the drives will take over and back it up. If the car has to go through a bunch of contruction than they drivers will also have to take over so that they car does wreck. Therefore the manufacturers would have to put in some kind of sensor to make the car stop before they went through or alret the person that are going to have to take over. In the smart cars there were vibrating sets so that the drivers would wake up or pay attetion to the road so that they could take over.\n\nIf you ever got in a wreck and you weren't driving at the time of the wreck that nobody would really know who's at fault. They manufacturers couls be at fault or the people that are driving the car could be at fault. They could say that the owner of the car is at fault because he should have been paying attention to the car even though they weren't the ones driving the car. They could also blame the manufacturers becasue they could have not done something right to the car or it was really the cars fault and that would come back on the manufacturers.\n\nDriverless car can be a good and a bad thing. They can help they envrioment with less poplution. It is chepar on gas. It is also a bad thing becasue they could cause many wrecks. People also don't know how to use the cars so it would be eays to wreck.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I went doctors The docter said wait room brother sister mom She said nother docter come waited three hours room My mom mad forgot us The docter spose come went wrong room The worst part I get three shots I hate shots In conclusion I learned mom patient I got ice cream docters patience always rewardSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger used to be an average teenager working two part-time jobs. Then his friend, Don Reist, came and asked him if he wanted to be a 'Seagoing Cowboy', or one who helps bring livestock to war victims in Europe. Luke then took this as an opportunity of a lifetime and couldn't resist.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys are a group of people who take care of livestock that were being shipped overseas to help the many that were devastated by the war in Europe. This livestock included young cows, horses, and mules. Shortly after Don and Luke found out about the Seagoing Cowboys, they then both signed up. LIttle did Luke and Don know, this job had a lot of risks.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys were a great part of an even greater orginization, the UNRRA, or the United Nations Relief and Rehibilitation Adminisrtation. This orginization was made up of 44 nations. This orginization also helped relieve and rehibilltate the devastated families of Europe. Luke knew what he was doing was a great cause, but did he know that going across the Atlantic and the Pacific oceans was a very risky thing. Luke could have had second thoughts about the risks that he was taking, but he wasn't doing it for himself, he was doing it for the people that needed his help.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are basically rusty cars. The reason is because, of all the things that can hit the car and damage it. Sometimes it depends on the car if it will get really rusty or not. Box Chevy, for example, those things will rust up so quick if you don't drive them. That's why I think cars should be driven.\n\nCars originally, many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads. For example, in the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. Those track would give a positive or negative messages in a binary code. The reason for that is so they know that the car is good for the roadmor not.\n\nLet's not make driveless cars rusty ones, because you are just wasting money, but I have a feeling that we will do something big in these next couple of years. Our technology is getting better and better everyday, if we just keep improving on it, we will have some of the best cars to be ever made on planet earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "VENUS\n\nIn the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author makes many great points to knowing venus more. In paragraph four, the author talks about how the twin planet could once support life. Also in paragraph seven, it explains NASA is working on electronics to study the plantes surface and air. However in paragraph five it talks about a interesting fact about maybe sending humans to venus aswell. which all of these topics i will explain why these are amazing ideas and will evaluate them.\n\nMy first topic that interested me was the topic in paragraph four stating how \"Venus was probably covered largly with oceans and could of supported various forms of life\". This conclusion alone is crazy considering the conditions now of Venus. However the plantet has similar surface to earth with rocky sediment and valleys, moutains, and crators. If this is the case we should really look into this more as humans and can learn why the planet has changed over time, this can help us with our own home furthermore. It very well may teach us new things about space primarily too.\n\nThe second idea about venus i found was enchanting to hear almost, stating how NASA may make \"electronics made of silicon carbide\". Landing some sort of drone on Venus would be extreamly historic to do. In doing that we maybe able to perhaps start some sort of life or adventure/misson to put people on the planet itself. They have even test such electronics in a testing chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. However the drone only lasted for three weels inside the chamber, but is impressive never the less. With that time we could easily learn so much more about the twin planet and maybe harboring life one day if we can suceed and take this technology somewhere one day.\n\nWhich brings me to my next point. The idea of sending humans to study the planet itself. NASA's solution however to the hostile conditions of the planet \"would allow scientists to float above the fray\". they also stated using a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the planet. it would almost be like a aircraft or plane flying just like earth. With this the humans can safe from storms or tempertures way hotter than mercury. Another good thing is solar power would be pleniful. From just this information, us as human can be taught so much just by these thoughts. i would very much be entreged to see this acually happen to Venus and the human race.\n\nSo my conclusion, with all the evidence i have stated about the planet having simular conditions as our plantet, and sending drones and humans to this planet and with many safe concusions. i beleve that the author supported well enought ideas and text to support his claim about trying to solve more and the planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i think that we should use technology to read students emotional expressions because now we don't really see what a student might be feeling so thats why we have technology and with the high techology advances we have now we can try to atleast see what a student might be feeling like or atleast try to figure out what he is feeling or how he or she might be feeling. and it all works out because now researchers have computers that construct a 3-D model of our faces and all 44 major muscles in the model move like human muscles. even though most people dont show that they are happy or upset most of the time they might be and thats why the researchers perform an impressive calculation each day. also i think using technology is the best idea because what else can we use to read someones facial expressions besides the fact that we can recognize some but not all facial expressions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the author defends the claim that the exploration of Venus is a \"worthy pursuit,\" I, however, believe that this statement is not proven very efficiently. Although the author refers to NASA and the experiments they've carried out, the information just does not sufficiently back up the statement that Venus is a \"worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" The author continuously describes the challenge it would be for humans to carry out the study of Venus from space, as well as using terms that convey the assumptions he or she is making based on his or her opinion. Many risks would be taken in order to physically explore Venus, so with this information in mind, I believe the author did not support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nIn order for mankind to study the \"cloud-draped world,\" they would have to undergo much training to even be prepared to come near Venus and its harsh conditions. As stated in the text, the conditons on the planet are \"far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" Even with advanced technology that we have today, the article states that \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" If the technology we have today can't even survive the conditions on Venus, how are humans supposed to be able to? Even though the author claims the conditions are \"not easy, but survivable for humans,\" the temperature can climb up to over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. These pieces of evidence from the excerpt convey the idea that Venus and its characteristics are far too dangerous for humans to even go near.\n\nIn addition to Venus' extreme conditions, the challenge of collecting physical evidence from the planet would be extremely difficult as well. Even though humans could possibly hover 30 miles above the ground level, the texts states that the vast distance would provide only \"limited insight on ground conditions,\" and it would \"[render] standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Along with that, the author admits that \"researchers would not be able to take samples...from a distance.\" The challenge that the study provides would simply not be worth the time, money, and risks. If man were to go to extreme lengths to reach within 30 miles of a planet and not be able to collect and evidence or data, it would not be a successful mission if the goal was to obtain new information about the planet.\n\nMoreover, the author's word choice contributes to the idea that his or her claim is not very well supported. When examining the similarities between Earth and Venus, the author uses the word \"probably,\" saying that \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The word \"probably\" gives off the impression that the author is making an assumption about the fact that Venus could support life just like Earth based on a common feature between the two planets. It is dangerous to make assumptions about subjects such as this, because it would be very costly if it turned out to be incorrect in the end.\n\nAfter considering both sides of this controversial claim, I believe the author did not support the claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Although the author referred to the study being beneficial to man's sense of imagination and innovation, it is simply just too dangerous. The author repeatedly describes the challenge it would be for humans to carry out the study of Venus from space, as well as word choice that conveys the assumptions he or she makes based on their own knowledge. Many risks would be taken in order to physically explore Venus, and I believe the dangers could be more costly than the knowledge gained through the experience. I believe the author did not support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea of studying Venus for a few reasons. In the passage he says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\".\n\nSo the author sopports the idea for expanding our knowlege. reason being is Venus has Earth like features,\n\nNo spacecraft survived landing, and no light being let through.\n\nThe authors says Venus has earth like features. He wants to learn more about the planet that came close to how earth is now. In paragraghph 4 it says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\" this means that it looks alot and is very similar Earth.\n\nNo spacecraft has survived the landing. in the passage in paragraph 2 it says \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a a few hours. Maybe this issue expains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\". Saying this the author wants to find out more about Venus and its surface. The reason no spacecraft has lasted longer than a few hours is because,the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. Also the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nMost light sources cannot be seen. in paragraph 6 it says \"limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\". Since almost no light can get through from a safe distance you would have to do more traveling and explore more closer like the author wants. It is hard to document the sights of the travel if you cannot get close enough for rhe cameras to work.\n\nThose are the reasons the author wants to study more of Venus. For all of the challenges and all ofwhat is yet to find from how its similar to earth, how theres barely any documents on the sights of the planet, then finally how no spacecraft has survived long enough to get any more information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We, here at NASA have recently discoverd somthing peolpe call the \"Face\". It is a landform on Mars that is shaped like a human face. Here at Nasa we also once thought that it was a alien of some sort or a human face, until we did more research to find out sooner that it was just a messa. Lots of reserch has been done, and more pictures of the face have been taken, it is assured that it is nothing more than a landform. We would not lie about it because, we are the ones who introduced it to them, if their were aliens on Mars we would benifit more than anyone, and we know it was not one because we are the best space reasherch team in the world, so I'm sure we would know if we took a picture of an alien or not.\n\nIf the picture of the face happend to be aliens on Mars I'm sure we would not have introduced it to the public. According to conspiracy theorist \"the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide...\" if we would rather hide the \"evidence\", then why would we announce it to the public.\n\nMost people who think that the Face is an alien of some type also say that NASA is lying to them about the landform, but we would benifet the most from an alien appering on Mars dead,or alive. An alien would help us to discover a whole civilizations of them and help us to find out how to survive on Mars. That is information we would love to one day share with the puplic. Which is why we would not hide it fron them. Everyone on the NASA team would get so much out of the Face being more than just a funny-looking landform.\n\nHere at NASA we have the top technology and some of smartest scientist you could ever meet. Our space crafts bring us back pictures of diffrent planets all the time, we know what a piece of land is. It is almost impossibele to mistake about anything with us. We have seen so many things a landform like that is no alien monument. It looks like a lot of things we have right here in the America West, like the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nOn the basis of the evidence presented the Face is not an alien monument, but just a wierd looking landform. At NASA we would not lie about somthing that benifits us, or that we prsented to the public first, we also could not miss somthing as big as that with all of our skilled technology os people. Unfortunotly, for the alien bilevers and us, no alien life of any sort has been found yet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying the fact that public spaces in towns and cities can be an arguable subject. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals believe that outdoor public spaces it is important for towns and cities. there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that public spaces it is crucial because they can be used as venues for cultural events, and festivals.\n\nTo begin with, parks and squares can help prompt community interaction like social hubs. In other words, it serves as a space where individuals from different backgrounds can interact, fostering a sense of community and belonging. In addition, it can assist in elevating the levels of health and well-being. For example, it provides environments that encourage physical activity and relaxation, which are essential for maintaining mental and physical health.\n\nAnother point to consider, outdoor public spaces have an environmental benefit. It is also possible to say that, it helps reduce urban heat islands, improve air quality, and provide habitats for local wildlife. Moreover, it can be used as a landmark for economic advantages. For instance, Well-maintained public spaces can boost local economies by attracting tourists and increasing the value of surrounding properties.\n\nIn conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that I tend to believe that public spaces such as squared and parks it actually important for all towns and cities because they will help boost the economy and increase community interaction, I suggest that the government make programs that help in building beautiful public spaces.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ore people use computers necessarily good thing Spendign mcuh time computers affects activity level Also Kids staying later compute turn lowering grades Finally spending much time computer decrease amount time spent friends family Firstly spending much time computer affects activity level The time spent computer less time person something active like exercising people spend hours computer per day hours used exercise play sport number would decrease according recent study Doctors said least overweight parents spend ftheir time computer thus limiting time exercising The amount spent computer shown decrease activity level effect number overweight obese people everywhere If want become healthier country state writing time spent computers Also kids stay later computers lower grades More time spent anywhere means less time studying means lower grades Kids spent average hours computer day kids spend hours day A student saw grades improve spending less time computer That studnet also felt get computer This tests quizzes Computers clearly negative effect grades school work Finally computers limit amount time spent family nd friends A student said spent time going friends computer nt time better friendshhip friends A kid uses computer free time spends less time friends someone usues moderation Afmilies also suffer swell If family member spends time computer family members less relationship nt talk anything together dwill likely know going life something wrong As tell computers also negative effect relationships family friends The overuse computers nnot benefit society They affect persons activity level students grades importantly persons realtionships family friends In oredr ake country better healthier place must time spent computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's perpetually transforming epoch , television has become an inevitable part of a person's life. As a consequence, it is opined by a few people that the number of TV programs is increasing in day to day life and it gives to masses more choices ,while are others anti the former's view and believed that it has significant effect the quality of the programs. I have discussed both views along with my opinion on the forthcoming subdivisions.\r\n\r\nTaking into account the former's view, the number of TV schedules gives us more options.,Additionally we have become a part of a global village .As a part of it, if TV programs will increase ,we will get more choices and varieties of programs for different cultures, traditions and regions. Moreover ,we can get more information about not only countries but also the globe. For example , due to the number of tv programs, we can see different sports programs, daily shows ,discoveries and whatnot.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the flip side of the coin , an increasing number of schedule lead to boredom .What is more , nowadays when shaw becomes famous and gets TRP another producer produces a similar type of telecast for getting a higher TRP .As a result , similar reality shows cannot find some extra and unique interest in viewing. So , people will feel boredom and stop to watch TV plan. it deteriorates the quality of the TV schedule.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion , because of an increasing number of TV programs ,someone gets an opportunity to make a career and also it reveals the identity of civilization. To exemplify ,at present , in ' dance India dance' programs - small children are giving their performances.By watching these schedules,kids will learn it and also dance will get a chance to show their talent and they will make a career in future so it will win-win situation for both.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,As every garden has its weed , similarly, similarly an inclining figure of schedule gives more alternative and career opportunities.On the other hand , some people think it leads towards boredom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been sick just because you went outside, maybe it was because of the air pollution that thousand of cars give everyday. So don't you you ever wonder how it would be like if there were few cars, would it make a difference on the world. Many people are strating projects to see how it would be like to have no car. Residents in Vauban, Germany have given up there cars a become surburban pioneers. They walk or ride there bicycle were they need to go. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two said that \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". So should't we try having few cars around. Not only i vauban promothing a free car zone but also in the United States, the environmental protection agency are promoting \"car reduced\" communities to reduce the smog on the world.\n\nDid you know that Paris ban driving due to smog. Paris was typically had more smog than other Europeans Capitals but duo to the banding many people had there car impounded for their reaction to the fine and conestion was down to 6 percent in the capital of France. BOGOTA, Columbia strated a program call a car-free day, millions of columbia hiked, biked, skated or took bus to work, leaving the streets devoid of traffic jam. The goal of this program is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Many people were happy because the parks and sports center have bloomed throughout the city the ,uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broed, smooth sidewalks. Also rush hours were restriction have dramatically cut traffic. Would you love to ride the car with your frieds instead of the old same rutine of being alone all the mornings on your way to school. Like kids that make new friends when they ride the bus to school wouldn't like to meet new people like that too.\n\nMany people don't like riding their bicycle to work because they would get dirty. but isn't it better to be dirty than live in air polluted word that affects your life. passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent inib the united states. Fewer people are buying less cars years is a start that people are not depending are cars that much. A study shows that cars driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Should we help the world and reduce global warming. We still cars but we should retuced haw many we have. Lets improve our safety by reducing have much we use cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The most basic and persistant form of transportation that has been around for centuries has been the use of cars. Hundreds of thousands of people use automobiles to get to their destinations in a quicker and more efficient way. Recently, all over the world, places like Germany and Paris have been rethinking their dependency on cars. Ongoing issues regarding pollution and stress have all been traced back to using a car daily. By limiting everyday car usage, greenhouse gas emissions, constant road rage, and lack of space for other recreational purposes will decrease or even be eliminated.\n\nPollution and global warming is a growing problem that has been affecting animals, people, and the air that we breathe. Slowly, the polluted air is becoming more and more infected. Cars and their tailpipes are a main contributor towards this issue. Studies have shown that \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in the United States\" (Rosenthal 1). The gas that is being released into the air does not have any way of being recycled. With a large amount of gas being released daily, the air can quickly become polluted with toxins and gas that normally is not used in the human body. In Paris, the intensifying smog caused a buildup of car traffic, which \"rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\" (Duffer 1). Also, Paris had been found to have more smog that the other European capitals had, \"[last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of pariculate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London\" (Reuters 1). This was purely because of the amount of cars, scooters, and buses that Paris has roaming around the cities. The decision to ban car use for odd-numbered license plates cleared the smog that prevented the drivers from using their cars.\n\nRoad rage is common in drivers that constantly have to deal with pedestrians, other cars, and the amount of traffic lights on the streets. The instinct to yell and become angered while driving has developed and grown into stress that affects an average person. Heidrun Walter, a mother of two, has ditched her car and resorted to using her own two feet as her way of transportation. Walter says \"When I had a car, I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Instead of having to hear honks and beeps from incoming cars, she is surrounded by the calm streets filled with bicycles, wandering children, and the occasional automobile. Being a part of the suburban neighborhoods means that a quiet and serene environment is typical and common. Therefore, being thrusted onto the busy streets may be an enzyme to stress and road rage.\n\nRecreational areas, such as parks and shopping centers, are a way of allowing people to relax and enjoy their free time. However, buildings are being demolished to make rooms for new highways and roads to allow for more efficient ways of traveling for the excessive amount of cars that there are on the streets. There are attempts being made to \"make the suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking\". Also, stores are beginning to be placed on a main street, instead of in shopping malls alongside highways (Rosenthal 1). These ideas take away from living spaces and create difficulty for those who want to go into a store. In Bogota, Columbia, Mayor Antanas Mockus has created a program that bans cars for the Day Without Cars. This day is part of an idea and campaign to reduce stress and air pollution. Since this day began in the mid- 1990's, \"parks and sport centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush- hour restrictions have been dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up\" (Selsky 1).\n\nSince the invention in the 1800's, cars have been depended on to take one or more people from Point A to Point B in a safe and fast way. For centuries, that has been a reasonable form of transportation. But as air pollution is increasing, drivers are becoming more angry, and land space is being taken up by new roads and streets; the idea of cars is being frowned upon. \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitous assist from a incipient shift in American behavior...\" (Rosenthal 1). Limiting car use allows for a healthier environment filled with other forms of transportation like walking, biking, and etc. Countries are beginning to form bans on cars forcing fellow citizens to lower their car usage. Last year, Bill Ford created a business plan in order to change America's way of transportation. He vowed to adjust future and current cities in which, \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\", eventually creating a better world for generations to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive that the FACS technology would be valuable. I think that it would be valuable because it can probably tell if a student is cheating or if the student is tired.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would allow the computer to track the users face. It would allow the computer to know if the student is cheating seeing if the user is smiling a little. It would alse be able to see it the user is tired or bored. If the user (or student) was tired or bored could tell the computer to switch it up a little bit and try to make whatever they are doing a little bit funner.\n\nThe text states that if you see an ad on your screen and you smile it will show you a ad just like that one. If you frown when you see that ad it will show you a conpletely differnet one.\n\nThat is just a couple of thing the FACS can do. So that is why I belive that it would be valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "International sporting events are well-known for attracting a high level of attention because they give many people something to look forward to. Understandably, there are advantages and disadvantages for the host country, and careful consideration is required to determine whether a nation will benefit or lose from hosting a major sports championship.Worryingly, the new infrastructure required for hosting a major sporting event often comes at the expense of local people. Their lives get disrupted by construction works and at times residents have even been evicted from their homes for stadiums to be built. Worse still, practice shows the expensive, gigantic buildings constructed for the sports event aren’t being used afterwards and fall into disrepair, leaving the country with high maintenance bills. The financial burden from hosting the Olympic Games, for example, is staggering and can run into tens of billions. Still, the question remains whether or not the pros outnumber the cons.It is hard to underestimate the amount of influence on the country’s global status and prestige that comes with becoming a home to an international sporting event. New trade opportunities appear on the horizon, as it happened for many countries that hosted the Olympic Games. There is also a welcome increase in tourism, which gives the local economy a boost, injecting billions of dollars into the national budget. Construction of new stadiums, hotels and infrastructure such as new roads and rail links creates new jobs, further improving the country’s economy. Less tangible but still important is the aspect of national pride and the feel-good factor associated with hosting an international sports event.All in all, it seems to me that an international sporting event can bring more good than harm to a country, especially if its potential dangers can be avoided or minimised. Hosting a World Championship is a one-in-a-lifetime opportunity for a country and an immense source of pride for its citizens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions essential part life Some emotions bring tears laughter alone two powerful essential things life There time long ago I able turn girl s tears laughter made day little betterIt starts craze today s teenage world CAPS Which nt know website teens spend quite lot time people comunicate website I log see girl I like also signed I start talking The normal teenage conversation CAPS whats sort thing happens asks I able hang Now tell I m wrong guys would go hang girl like I went meet library always beautiful even though I doubt trying As I got closer seemed upset yet I asked bothering wish tell I nt want make things worse I left alone All I could thing could I make happy I started talking craziest things knowing would help To luck actually helped started smiling After little I laughing good time Since day dating really happy everyday I see I say something random make smileSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I patient onone way point mom dad brother I We driving go It took us hours get I patient wated waited get soo exited When got waited line ride hole bunch rollercoaster We waited line hours every ride extra buisy day I wanted ride tallest rollercoaster It called tallest rollercoster I ever people came To get ride hour wait exosting patient But got front worth waitSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Keep shelvesThe reason libraries people read want read If I owned library I would everything shelves alot people everyone likes thing Truthfully I would nt care isnt handful people everyones feelings If people started taking certain things book stores libraries would eventually get hand The reason would get hand certain topic like slavery someone wanted learn enjoyed reading topics like wouldnt fair people might find offensive put stuff public like Everyone opinion express opinion subject want express nt harming anyone physically emotionally If everyones opinion heard taken consideration tghe world know would boring outragous People like action adventures others like laid back kind stuff Why take things people long time going start conflict change way people live everyday life Maybe could turn good way really chances billion thousand Things offensive people interesting others keep everything shelves If certain people going complain really big deal Maybe someday everyone world agrees reasoning could change really dont see happening anytime soon The main reason always going conflict groups people Everyone cant happy time say cares weather something offends someone thats opionion alot people seeing stay shelf people actually enjoy kind stuffSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Paragraph 2 implies that, \"The Electoral College processs consist of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the eclectoral votes by Congress.\" Because of that I pesonally think that we should not keep the Electoral College, because people want to choose who they want to be preseident they don't want to rely on someone else to choose for them, that may even end up betraying them,and also when you vote you think you are actually voting for a presidential candidate but you're actually voting for a state of electors, the whole point on voting is to choose who you want. I think it's unfair to everyone just like\n\nSource 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong said in paragraph 14\n\n\"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational, and also in\n\nSource 3: In defense of the Electoral College: Five despised method of choosing the President in paragraph 15-16 said \"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College methid is not democratic in a modern sense...it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors, But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)...[; however,] it i sentirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\n\nParagraph 10 simply says that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\n\nWhy waste your time and money planning for something knowing that you have no chance at winning. I agree with what\n\nSource 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong said in paragraph 13\n\n\"At most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because fo the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont' spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story Saeng shows reminded home I believe thought could pass test flower blooming reminded home For example Saeng mumbled Not like kind before This suggest probably home sick Then spring comes blooms flower could give strength pass test This I believe author ended paragraphSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author suggests that studying Venus is\n\na worthy pursiut despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThis can be seen when the author says that the value obtained is that scientist can get an insight on the planet Venus so that they are able to know what lives out there beyond Earth. The author also explains how by the inquiring nature of humans have resulted in many life-threathing acts to be seen as challenges that are yet to be overcome.\n\nTo overcome the obstacles of Venus such as the rocky surfaces, an atmosphere consisting of 97 percent carbon dioxide, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acids and average temperatures of a staggering 800 degrees Fahrenheit, NASA has come up with several options which wil create a possible way for humans to visit Venus. One idea would be to put humans on blimp-like vehicle that would make it possible for humans to float above Venus. This cancels out the dangers of being exposed to high temperatures and experiencing rocky situations. However, there are some defects in this plan. this is because scientist will only be provided with limited insight on Venus as most forms of light is not able to penetrate throught the thick atmosphere and therefore, photography and videography becames unfruitful. Scientist aren't also able to research and study the the surface of Venus as samples cannot be taken.\n\nNevertheless, scientist are not giving up and still have hope that Venus will be accessible. Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide hsave been tested in chambers with conditions similar to Venus and have managed to last up to 3 weeks. They also are looking into using old technology called mechanical computers, which are said to be more resistant to heat, pressure and several other forces.\n\nIn the end, the author explains how despite all the hurdles that have to be considered to make our mark on Venus, it will definitely be of much value to not only scientist but to human kind.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is described in many ways. It is described as needed, useful and helpful. I think it is described as unfair, outdated, and irrational. I describe it this way because majority votes do not really \"count\", has been used for three hundred years, and it is just more time taken to vote for our president.\n\nTo kick it off, the electoral college is unfair in many ways. When we vote for our president, our votes don't exactly count. We just vote for representatives to go vote for the president. Many people would have won by majority vote, but the electoral college had more votes for the other side.\n\nContinuing on, the electoral college is very outdated. The Founding Fathers used it when they were alive. I think that America is a little past that, because that was three hundred years ago. Why still use something that old? It is pretty irrational to still use the electoral college.\n\nFinishing off, the electoral college is very irrational. It makes no sense to have a process that long to do a somewhat simple thing. Even other Americans believe that the election should be based off of majority vote. Sixty percent of them believe that to be true! The electoral college is a waste of time.\n\nAll in all, the electoral college is just a waste of time, and process. It takes to long for the president to be voted in. It also makes no sense because our votes dont even count. Most of us believe it should go away, by majority vote,too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is it about Venus, that make danger worth it? We all can't help to be curious even when it might require some danger. What is so important about Venus that cause us to try harder? Why are we so attached to Venus?\n\nWhat type of danger is causing issues for us to find answers?\n\nScientist have sent spacecraft to planet to research and get evidence, but theres been a few issues. They have tried sending spacecraft to Venus but they have not had a sucessful one in over 3 decades. The thing about Venus is that it's temperature reach around 800 degrees fahrenhait, the atmosphere pressure is 90 times more than ours. Which can cause many issues for spacecrafts.\n\nScientist have found that earthquakes, volcanoes, and even lighting are located on Venus. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" they say the believe that Venus might just have been the most Earth-Like planet. How? they believe that at some point Venus was the home to oceans, valleys, mountains, and even could support certain life form. What if there right? but they can only know if they have true evidence from Venus.\n\nWhat if Venus was once a place where life could live, what happened? Scientist have been working hard on creating a spacecraft that can handle heat, but also pressure. \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" they talk about working with NASA. They came up with the idea that maybe if we create a type of hovering car that could be close the Venus, but not on Venus. A car that could handle some pressure and some heat, without being destroyed. In the beginning they thought it would be a great idea, and yes it would get them close to get some information about Venus. The only issue is that if they really wanted true answer. They would have to get evidence that would surpport there questions. One day we will get up and personal with Venus and get our answers.\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" Is the danger worth it, yes. Think about all the things we could teach and show people. Share with them the amazing information we never knew about Venus. We are never going to get answer if we don't search for them. Danger is always going to be a issue. Curosity is always going to be the reason we push harder and ask more questions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think they should because the electoral college is a process not a place. The founding father established it in the constitition as the compromise between election of the President by a popular vote. The electoral college cobsists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. Your state's entitles allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each memeber in the house of representatives plus two for your senators. Each candiate running for president in your state has hin or her own group of electors. The Electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.\n\nThe presidential election is held every four years on the tuesday after the first monday in november. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you actually voting for your candidate's electors. After the presidential election, your governor prepares a \"Certifacte of Ascertainent\" lsiting all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in december of the election year. Your state's certificates of acertainments are sent to the congres and the national archives as part of the official records of the presential election.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president. if you lived in texas, for example, and and wanted to vote for john kerry, you'd vote for a slate of democatic electors pledged to kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Who are the electors? They can anyone not holding public office it depends on the state. That is how it works this is my reason.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I agree people stop spending thier day computer start exercise spend time friends family The computer ability let learn faraway places instead sitting behind desk learning somewhere faraway go outside see Also country one top fat people I believe computer something kids school facebook kids facebook least hour This people stop using internet day getting exercise need country one top world fast people The internet allow chat family friends still need hand friends outside exercise playing sports going walk block nt healthy relationship someitmes even computer chat online Also nt go outside enjoy nature play friends become lazy sitting chair day wouldnt care anything anymoreSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet Venus is also known as the ''Evening Star,\" due to how it is one of the brightest points of light in the sky during the night. Venus is also sometimes referred as the Earth's ''twin,'' this is because Venus is the closest of the planets to Earth when comparing density size, and occasionally distance. Even though Venus is safe to see from a distance, but it has been proven that Venus is extremely dangerous when to close. Venus's physical conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk.\n\nFurthermore, An article called \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states reasons otherwise, as how a way a human can examine Venus with a special kind of technology. Venus's conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk. The atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide surrounds Venus. Along with the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere of Venus. In addition to, the planets conditions are very high compared to Earth. For example, in paragraph 3 it states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThis information reveals how lethal the planet Venus truly is when compared to Earth.\n\nSecondly, NASA is working with an old electronic that further supports the idea of studying Venus. Even though this electronic is stated to survive the lethal conditions of Venus, it isn't going to be retrievable from the surface of Venus, as humans can only get as close as 3 miles from Venus's surface. Including, the piece of technology is extremelly old and outdated. For example, in paragraph 7 it states, \"These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll.\" This information proves against the authors point, and shows how invailed and outdated the technology is.\n\nTo conclude, The study of Venus was attempted and failed. Knowing more information about Venus will have no purpose because the living conditions are unstable. Venus's conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk.\n\nThe temperatures are way to high and the air quality is sad. There is no technology at this moment that can survive the extreme physical conditions of Venus. Even if the technology is new or old. After all, Earth is ten times better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting affects cyclist cross different types land marks First got information old people For example showed map old people going know old short cuts new ones Second ran water For instance cyclist ran water climb hills tired Plus tried get water one thing hot water come last finally got story old guy map For example asked old guy place going said I map So therefore knew trouble In conclusion features setting affects cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are a great idea for our future.\n\nFor many years prople have bin working on cars to drive by themselves , from 1950 to now. But there are many things still being worked on, for example, the driverless cars are still needing the passanger to drive out of driveways or take hold of traffic situations like bblockades. Many sensors make the possible as well. Another simple subject of the matter is that the driver will be notified when to take over such as a vibration of the seat tells them when.\n\nIt is not like the self driving cars are dangerous if they malfunction the car should be able to let the driver drive\n\nhim or herself. It is a matter to look at about the safety situations of the cars, wether it is a brake malfunction or an engine malfunction. Even if there were problems towards the car we still have engineers and scientists developing ways to complete these cars and make them completely safe for everyone around. They even plan to make them completely safe by 2020 not far at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going to tell about how the author of the article ''The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is trying to convince people to explore and stuying one of our 8 plants called \"Venus\". He starts off by geeting in detail with describing how vevus is by stating \" Venus sometimes caleed the Evening Star,is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,and saying venus is the second plant fro our sun. Earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closet in distance too. He also discribed the plant as a cloud-draped world, and says maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched downn on venus in more than three decades\n\nThe author also gets into some math into this by breaking down some percentages that venus has compared to other plants by saying. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus \". he also says that one the plants surface , temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and theatmosphere pressure is 90 times gretaer than what they have experienced on earth. Venus has the hottest surface tempertature of many plants in our solar system, even with mercury being closer to the sun. He basically telling us about the percentages and the deepest amont of venus and other plants we didnt reaserch about.\n\nIn more of the storyhe tells you the things yo are exprcted to see on venus. Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth. The planet has a surfae of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters. He changes the subject and goesminto the NASA and how they have ideas on sending humas to study venus. he describes how going out there would be like by saying imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above theroiling venusian landscape. Also at thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but tha air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earthSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memior home His home His house never perfect mad need parent s change home neighborhood made learn learn love much sacrifice parents made loving memior home townSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates feeling everyone neighborhood treated family though struggling get buy They struggling immigrants sacrificed lot Narciso s parents highly skilled well paying jobs Cuba forced get whatever jobs could find They would always help someone family necesary often Narciso s family made best poor managed get They without loosing culture Cuban music food Their entire neighborhood one big family survived thrived little Being blood relative nt defenition family part Newark New JerseySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The largest issue allowing dirigibles use building mooring site safety It mentions paragraph German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire New Jersey This brought thoughts happening Empire State Building If dirigible caught fire attached building would high death rate due New York City populated Another obstacle would keeping dirigibles swiveling around mooring mast In paragraph point lead weights away back ship would quite dangerous many pedestrians street Yet another reason trying dirigibles building practical existing law airships flying low urban areas paragraph This made illegal ships tie building let alone get close enough try Tying reasons together fact wind strong top building anything happen safely without sort injurySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After the reserch I have done I think that changeing the system would be a good idea because of the following reasons, its not really fair because your not actually voteing for the president, but for a slate of electors, also becuse of the candidates are more focused on the bigg states, and the swing states.\n\nThe first reason that changing the system is a good idea is that lots of people think that it is unfair. Like in source 2 by Brandford Plumer, \"If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John kerry, You'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry.\" but if the electors dont win the statewide election he wouldnt get the votes, so its like your vote didn't even count. The winner take all system is unfair because your actualy not choosing your own president.\n\nThe next problem are the big staes. The candidates dont spend many time is the small state because they now that those votes won't really help them win so the go to the bigger states where they now they will get more votes. In source 3 by Richard A. Posner says \" a large state gets more attention form presidential candidates in a campain than a small state dose.\" For example in 2012 obama won the votes from florida, get got 29 electoral votes. But if he were to go to a small state and won he would only get a few votes, so its not fair for the smaller states and it's not equal.\n\nThe finall issue are the swing states. Candidates focus more on the toss-up states. In these states they spend more time and give out more information because in these states the people really pay colse attention to the campain. The candidates dont spend any time int the staes they now they no chances for winning, that why durind the 2000 campain, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all!\n\nIn response, based from the followin informatom given I think that The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. It should not be the elecotal votes that matter it should be the peoples votes. Also some states dojnt even hear from the candidates because they are busy with the big staes and trying to win over the swing states. If you do change the system you will make lots of people happy and I think that it will work out well for the U.S and everything will be equal.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph resembles life another chance geese come back The reason last part resembles back life says spring spring usually good time year gets warmer towards Flowers come back The hibiscus plant bloom renew In way warming thought old home Then time retake driving test failed bought plant The author added last part tied matched well storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock nature past problems happenedAn obstacle builders faced providing safety After fire Lakehurst builders worried issues might occur especially takes place downtown New YorkAnother obstacle nature Because mooring mast top building builders frightened violent air currentsThe last obstacle law airships could fly low urban areas So illegal airship tied buildingThe builders faced three main obstacles Nature past accident law Unfortunetly unable continue work obstacles strongSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many different characteristics setting determine outcome event Im story Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclists journey affected weather relouded things The heat extreme thing showed cases detened reading maximum level ability Also time labes place greatly affects cyclist Lastly type road amount ground cover affects performance Overall setting determining factor journey lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir many different moods auther tells Happiness mood author tells They happy together grate time Another mood careing parents care others keep doors open For times Love Love around house They love Friends Family celebrate matter They also show love leting people stay untill get back onto Feet One mood memoir courage two people show courage get keep Courage long time Expeshaly come grate jobs ones arnt greatSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso mood growing UP Cuba moveing US When finds house later famliy makes house home The also explaning life like dose like cooking famliy dose free timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is important for many different reasons. Not only is Venus Earth's \"twin\", it is also the closest planet to Earth in denisty and size. In the article the author belives that studying Venus despite the many dangers it brings is very much worth it. I will talk about why he is correct.\n\nThe author of this article suggets that studying Venus is worthy of our time because it could help us learn about it and it's past. Also the planet is the most geologically similar to Earth in our entire solar system. In paragraph 4 the author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\". This quote shows that learning about Venus told us that in it's past it was capable of sustaining life. I belive also that the author is correct in saying that we should study it more because, if Earth every came to where it was not able to sustain life, we could look into moving to Venus because it was capable of sustaining life. Despite these dangers that he presented such as a very high tempature, exploring more into Venus is very important.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe the author was correct in saying that we should look more into Venus becasue we could learn about it past and it's capability of sustaining life in the future. That is why Venus is so important not just to the author but also to NASA.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In this article, you will seem to get/understand many things about Venus. (many things you do or don't already know).\n\nVenus holds many dangers. For instance, it states \"clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmospher\". Another ex. \"A thick atmopshere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". In those 2 following examples pulled from Paragraph 3, it means and is decribing how dangerous the challenges there to explore Venus.\n\nFurthermore, they're several ways Venus is dangerous all around. In this article you will find evidence after evidence. In Paragraph 3, it says \" On the planet's surface, temperatures averge over 800 degrees Fahenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expeirence on our own planet.\"\n\nIn conclusion, they're many encounters/evidence Venus is so badly dangerous. Thats why in the title it says Challenges, because exploring Venus is a challenge for sure. Venus is worth the pursit despite all the dangers it beholds.\n\n(sorry i ain't that great, i have massive reading comprension problems).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read's student's emotional expressions is a good way of being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. There is a new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an ''action unit.'' The Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists Dr. Paul Eckman, who he is the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman ''has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surpise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness - and then associated each characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example , your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. In the article '' Making Mona Lisa Smile .''\n\nEckman (paragraph 3).\n\nIt says in the article '' The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expressions.'' Huang, (paragraph 4)\n\nIn fact, us humans perfrom the same kinds of impressive ''clculation'' every day. For instance, you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there face. The author talks about how '' Most humans communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, So computers need to understand that, too.'' Huang, (paragraph 6)\n\nAlso in the article it says '' It's all about those muscular action units. They even indiccate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth.''\n\nD ' Alto (paragraph 7) There is alot of stuff we can all learn about each other, Who knew it would invloe alot of science, facial expressions and emotions. Its always good to know how your students are feeling when you are teaching them something new.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When using technology to read students emotional expression you can expreience and read them wrong.\n\nUsing technology is a big thing in the world right now and alot of people go to technology or the internet for answers but when you use technology you can experience malunfunctions and wrong answers, so to read a student emotional expression you may read them wrong or get the wrong answer. Reading a student using technology can go many different ways you may get the right answer or you may get the wrong answer,but you can not calculate how a student feel based on a computer and facial muscles. Someone can feel angry and depressed and the computer can read them wrong. You dont have to use technology for everything you can do other things such as ask the person how they feel or look at their facial expression instead of hooking them up to technology in paragraph 5 it says \"you can tell how a friend feel simply by the look on their face\". The computer may say one thing but the person may feel another. This creation may work on some people but not all,in paragraph 5 it says\"in fact,we humans perform this same impressive calculation everyday\" even though it calculate all face expressions do not mean that person is feeling that way, a person can be mad for a few minutes or for a act then the computer will say overall that you are angry but you are really happy. In paragraph \"eckman has classified six basic emotions and then associated each with characteristics movents of the facial muscles\" . In conclusion, you sould not use technology to see how they feel when you can ask them and we should not have to use technology for everything when its right in front of you ,technology is taking over the way people feel towards things and people and you should not use it for someone emotional facial expressions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mast builders Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles The largest obstacle faced safety dirigibles comming outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen flammable Another obstacle nature Winds constantly shiffting caused violent air currents Another obstacle law airships flying low urban areas The builders relized hazards They facing dropped idea using moorning mast dirigibles passengersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys to see the amazing veiw.The seagoing cowboys is a crusie to see the world .The captain will give you a shift.When we had free time after dropping off the animals we would play baseball and volleyball in the place the animals lived.To hold are pass time we would have Table- Tennis tournements,fencing ,boxing,reading,whittle and games also passed the time.The Seagoing Cowboys opened up the world for me .It made more aware of people of other countries and their needs.The awareness stayed with me ,leading my family to host a number of international students and exchange visotors for many years.Seagoing Cowboys is more than a adventure.Sometimes you might have to\n\nbe the watchman wher you check ont he animals every hour.UNRRA is United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration\n\ntook int he Seagoing Cowboys.Seagoing will be a great\n\nexperience and that's why you should join.Everyone is loving and caring so you should join us because we will make you comftable it is a opportunity of a lifetime.Join and you will have the best time ever\n\ntake in care of the animals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that males and females differ in many aspects due to their natural genders. Therefore, many people firmly believe that some kind of works is suitable for men, and women are good in other types of jobs, whereas some think that there should be no discrimination between males and females in case of job opportunities. I agree with the latter thought for several reasons, which are discussed in the following paragraphs.\nFirst of all, gender stereotypes no longer exist in modern society. For many years the majority had been insisting on the belief that women were fragile and therefore, they should not have done tough works. For example, practicing in farmlands considered to be a masculine task. However, now the situation has changed to a great deal of extent, and more women are seen in jobs which require physical abilities. For instance, it will not be surprising seeing a woman on top of a skyscraper supervising a group of male workers.\nSecondly, with the appearance of feminist sects, it has been ages that the definition of masculine and feminine tasks has altered. In fact, the borders of what used to decide whether a career was proper for males or females have blurred. As an example, if a company decides to announce a job advertisement, it is not allowed to put a limit on the gender of applicants.\nTo conclude, although it has been believed that some jobs are particularly for men and women could not be successful in, the definition of masculine and feminine has vastly changed. Once again, I reaffirm my position that there should be no gender discrimination in offering individuals a specific job just because of expired thoughts of the previous generations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I totally agree with Google cofounder Sergey Brin that driverless cars would change the world, and in a good way.\n\nThe positive things outwiegh the positive in my eye. The only negative thing in this article that was adressed, and could actually be an accurate problem is that some people may not think it is safe. That is true but every invention is not completely safe, everything has reasons that may pursuade somebody to think that it is unsafe no matter what it is , or who thinks otherwise.\n\nWhen it comes to safety everybody has their own opinion.\n\nThere were many posititve things in this article that were brought to my attention such as, \"the cars using half of the fuel that today's taxis are using, more flexibillity than a bus, alerting the driver when the car is in any type of danger, and so on.\" Those are things that today's cars lack, not all of them but more than enough. If people want this world to be a \"better place\" then why not try new things that could actually solve and prevent some of the problems that are going on today.\n\nEveryday there are car wrecks, and I genuinely feel like having driveless cars would decrease the percentage of the wrecks and prevent the percentage of people losing their lives. The percentage and the risks of people dying in a car accident are extremely high. Driveless cars would be the next step to decreasing most if not all of these risks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world has been facing a number of worldwide environmental issues. Many people hold the belief that in order to fix those issues a raise in the fuel fare is a must. I personally completely agree with this point of view. This is because the increased rate will push many industries to look for environmental-friendly energy alternatives thus decreasing pollution, as well as encourage the companies to come up with better pollutants free machinery such as solar energy automobiles. \r\n\r\nThe main reason why an increase in fuel cost will eliminate many ecological problems is that many factories and corporations will no longer be able to afford it. Therefore, this will lead them to use renewable sources of power particularly solar and wind energy. Those resources produce clean energy that does not cause any type of pollution. Additionally, studies have long extolled the drastic decrease in levels of air pollutants in areas where windmills and solar energy panels were installed. \r\n\r\nFurther support for my point of view is that with the increase in fuel cost, the companies will invest in coming up with eco-friendly automobiles. A good illustration here is the cars that utilize solar energy or the ones that work with electrically recharged batteries. According to recent studies due to high fuel expenditures, there is an increasing demand for those eco-friendly cars. Some people are already making the shift from fuel depending cars to more hygienic ones. Thus, companies should seize this opportunity and be encouraged to come up with new solutions and further improve their current productions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reiterate my position that raising the price of fuel will definitely fix many environmental issues. As a result, Industries will use renewable resources to run their factories, and companies will invest in pollutant-free automobiles that will drastically lower the levels of pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do we have driverless cars? Driverless cars can be both harmful and helpful. One reason an driverless car can be helpful is if you dont really want to drive.A reason a driverless car can be harmful is it has a mind of it's own. I disagree with having a driverless car because there are many reasons you can get hurt. The car has a mind of it's own and is more exspensive, can stop working, or it can crash at any time and will be blamed by the manufacturer.\n\nAlthough driverless car has a mind of it's own.It is basically computarized and will not be able to do things at certain times. Driverless cars are actually more exspensive because they use alot more technology than any normal car. Driverless cars also need a whole lot of sensors if they want\n\nthe car to work as planned. Now driverless cars need those sensors to make the car more safer.\n\nThe sensors can cause the car to apply brakes or individual wheels to reduce\n\npower from the engine.\n\nAlso another reason why i dissagree with driverless cars are because it can stop working at anytime.Driverless cars can\n\nbe harmful to the driver because what if the car just all of a sudden stop working. If you have a driverless car and you are on the highway and u weren't aware of the road. That will be an accident waiting to happen. Just because driverless cars worked in movies for driving half a million miles Doesn't mean it will work in the real world.\n\nThe last reason i dissagree with driverless cars is because it can crash at anytime. Also it will be blammed by the manufacturer. If someone gets hurt driving a driveless car everyone will be looking at who made it and they will be in trouble for a mistake they made. In most states driving a driveless car it is illegal. A driveless car is another type of technolgy that can fail at any time.Someone can also be ingured if something who fault is the manufacturer not the driver because the manufacture is the one who made the car so they should be blammed for it.\n\nIn conclusion having a Driverless car is not good for your safety. It is one of those technolgy that they are testing out which is very dangerous. By having these driverless cars it will reduce more car accidents, stop working and the car will still be managed based off a computer programm and will get more and more exspensive. As the technolgy grows and they figure out new ideas to put on the car to try and make it more safe. I dont think that Driveless cars will change make the future better because there are many reasons the technolgy can go wrong.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I like the idea of driverless cars, they still might be a work in progress but I think they are the new idea of the future. I think driverless cars can prevent numerous things such as car crashes, careless drivers such as drunk drivers, and make the roads a safer place.\n\nWays driverless cars can prevent car crashes is that everyone is going the same speed, each turn is similar, and the way the car drives is similar to all of the other cars. Also if a car is about to crash, the driverless car may have built in breaks to stop and can sense an object in its way (paragraph 4). The technology in the car may be so advanced it could change modern day driving and drivers.\n\nLet's say someone was out late and had to much to drink, and the person wants to drive home. If that person has a driverless car, that would make the road at least 50% safer because they are not physically driving. That person would not have to pay close attention to the road and could get home safer than having to drive home drunk. It might not sound like a good idea in the first place to drive home drunk but it could prevent numerous acident the drunk person can cause.\n\nDriverless cars are the idea of the future, I'm the article it's says Tesla is trying to release a car in 2016 capable of self drving 90% (paragraph 10). This car might not be very affordable but then you car manufacturers such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan which are more affordable cars manufacturers. So it can be easier and more affordable to buy one. Even if the driverless cars might not be completely drives less (hence 90% self drving) and even if it partially self drving it can help the drunk person who is careless and drives home. It could help the person who runs the red light from causing others to crash. People might still have worries and questions about self driving cars but I think self drving cars can make the roads a safer place and is a start of a brighter future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days Internet plays a vital role as a means of keeping and delivering the knowledge while books did in the past. Although storing information in books is preferred by some people, I strongly believe that storing knowledge online will be more beneficial. This essay will highlight those views and reasons behind my thoughts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some people argue that storing information or knowledge on paper has its own merits. They are likely to love the smell of paper and the texture when they read. Those who prefer carrying books to searching online tend to think it has the value of owning a book. Also, those who love books love to collet them as a hobby. It reflects personal tastes and choice.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, storing knowledge on in the Internet has plenty of positives which allow people to store information permanently.\r\n\r\nUnlike paper, online information does not require any physical or chemical maintenance work to preserve it for a long time. It even does not disappear for good. For example, back in the past, we have been through a tremendous loss of valuable and historical books due to the terrible accidents such as war, fire, or natural disaster. In this regard, people are aware of the significance of storing information safely and permanently. \r\n\r\nMoreover, online information or knowledge is accessible by everyone and everywhere. All we need to do is just searching the Internet to look for the information that we want rather than going to book shop or libraries. It allows us to save physical time and effort to travel and get it. Even though I need a particular knowledge, it is available anytime and anywhere if there is connection with Internet. This easy accessibility to knowledge can enable us to improve the quality of life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, those beauties of storing knowledge or information on the Internet makes it possible to live more convenient and effective world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Government spend money on various amenities and facilities for the people of their country.However, there is always an ongoing debate on how government should spend their money. Some people believe that money should spend money on arts and others believe to spend money on health facilities and on betterment of education system.\r\n\r\nSpending money on the arts would bring various economic benefits to the country. By using money to renovate old art and develop new will attract more tourists to visit the country and help our economy to grow. With the profit gained from tourism we can use that for the overall development of the country.For instance, One of the most profitable sectors in todays world is tourism and by developing arts we can boost the economy of our country which would help in the progress of our nation.\r\n\r\nHowever, spending money on health and education would improve the quality of life. By spending money on the welfare of the society the life of the citizens improves gradually.Providing better health facilities to help people to survive for a longer period of time.Improving education facilities will help the youth to study efficiently and would eventually help them to become successful in the future. The government increases the quality of life by giving citizens the basic rights.For instance, in a survey, it is proved that improving quality of education students can improve themselves by 15%.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, providing better health facilities and improving education should the priority of the government as giving them basic amenities would improve the quality of life and would increase the expectancy of life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say you should be against the development of these cars and its true but then again not. Not just because this cars dont need a driver and can drive them self this cars dont give you 100% percent chance that the car doesnt need a driver, It could cause accidents. How about when you have problems with the car, do you know how expensive it would be to get itparts raplace? what about the law, Who would it be to blame if something happen?\n\nThey are saying automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved. You see, auto maker doesnt give you 100% chance that the car is a good use so it could drive itself. Thats what could cause an accident. Their cars have driven more than half a millon milies without a crash. What can assure you that your car may be one of the first?\n\nThis google cars they say that have could also bring you a problem in the future . Google cars arent truly driverless. Too expensive to be practical. Practically if i was starting to use one of them driverless cars , for me that i am a starter , they need a whole lot of senors. That is exspensive.\n\nDriving laws focus on keeping drivers safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best with alert drivers. But if you have an accident who is the one to blame? they say who the car isn't fully driverless. What if their something wrong with it and where the car needs you all of a sudden it starts to turn a direction you dont want it to go and causes and accident. The law is going to blame you for it .\n\nnot because you grabbed of hold of the wheel, but because the google car can have driven more than half a million millies. They ask you \" why wouldn't we blame you, its your fault that crash happen.''\n\nIn conclusion this cars actually do need a driver when their reaching a point they cant drive on. they say \"we have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\" is it fun to get injured. Who would have to pay for the parts that dont work in the car? you would have too. They required massive upgrades to existing roads. Having all this things to worry about is a reason to be against the development of these cars. Being in the position what be a problem with my safety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship Libraries In libraries lot books helpful There also lot magazines music movies A lot movies adult movies kid section lot libraries Most books magazines movies reachable little children I library child seen books When I went library kid I went parents We would go mainly go kids section I also remember going grandparents I would read books I would put puzzle together something I remember time I went library seen something offensive I ve never library seen anything seems offensive I m sure book movie somewhere every library offensive give example personal experience something I If libraries books offensive good job hiding kids I hav nt heard anything people finding kind books books magazines I read I tend read many books world I like read biographys sports players types books like Whenever I read magazines usually sports cars I nt read much offensive things going If libraries offensive books kids people nt reading library nt need remove shelves Some adult come library looking one books ask find So opinion I think libraries nt remove books shelvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think the Face on Mars is a natural land form? Do you think it was made by ancients civilization? Or do u think it made by anliens? Well thats what were here to find out. Lets start out with the three photos from 1976, 1998, 2001 sha'll we.\n\nThe picture from 1976 shows a similar face close to a human face. But since the definition on the photo is as good as it is today with modern technology it gives us the allushen of the land looking like a face because of the different heights. The other reason you can tell its not from aliens is by the way the face rounds off at the end when it touches the ground. Also from the photo from 76 is that each pixel is about 43 meters and thats just per pixel.\n\nThe picture from 1998 is a little better than the 1976 photobut its still not good enough. Its pretty clear that u can see that is not a face because of how disrupted the ground looks compared to the 1976 photo. In the 1998 photo from Viking 2, you can still see the resemblements of the face just not as much as you could in the picture from Viking 1 in 76.\n\nOkay now to the last picture. The photo from 2001 is a lot better than the 76 and the photo from 98. In 2001 the photo was so high definition it show the elevation and the parts of the land or the mesa was risen from the ground. You can tell the differents because it looks like the mesa is on a type of plate like contential plates that the Earth has and that are constantly moving around today. All of these facts I found tell me thats its just a uniquelly shape mesa landform.\n\nI thought the Face on Mars was just a land form. Using the information I got from the passage and all of the details I found, it tells me aliens did not make this face. Who knows they probably did and it been destroyed over the many many centries that mars has been around in this solar system. Do you still think its was formed by an acient civilization or aliens? Do you still think it was a natural land form? Thats what I found out about Marses popular Face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever dream of going to Venice, Italy, \"a city with streets of water\", or tour a \"excavated castle in Crete or marvel at the Panama canal on your way to China\"?\n\nThe UNRRA started hiring \"Seagoing Cowboys\" at the end of World War II. These \"Cowboys\" helped haul animals across the ocean to help with their food supply. Once Luke Bomberger had hauled \"335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\" It's an amazing experience that many people would love.\n\nFirst of all, being on board across the ocean meant ways to pass time. \"Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animnals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games helped pass time.\"\n\nSecondly, you get to see amazing places all over the world. As I said at the beginning, Luke got to wittness the trips through Venice, Italy and a castle in Crete. \"I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special, so was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nLast but not least, you get to help the people by sending them food. \"It was 1945, World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up.\n\nMost people might say that scince you are overseas, it could be dangerous. Yes it could, Luke cracked his ribs while trying to avoid falling into the Atlantic. (Ironic, isn't it?) But it is a lot of fun going across the oceans with some friends.\n\nRemember that it is fun, you get freetime to do whatever you want, that you can see amazing places like Venice, Italy, and you get to help hundreds of people. \"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. 'I'm grateful for the opportunity,' he says. 'It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people might think good idea censor things library People might think material might offensive bad youth people go librariesPeople might think better take bad offensive item shelf I different opion subject I nt think anything censored library matter deal book movies music magazines ect The real question material censored removed The answer question sensored removed The library somewhere go get information anything want If items censored taken shelfs resources would limited help people searching information Another big problem censoring removint materials people might missing alot knowleged never herd might bad offensive Such slavery taking lot world history I feel strongly people knowing worlds past Now happens items removed shelfs libraries going thousands books longer read offensive We ca nt get rid like A lot offensive stuff true based true story park getting arrested refused give seat white person removing books would pointless ever put people go get material want know The important thing want books censored gone want remove Okay book bad offensive look way People choice want read watch listen So people dont like material library nt mean everyone else nt like It peoples choice opion couple people say So end think books items library sould censored taken shelfs I believe people right read listen watch ever want I see people opions fighting opions removing books Also people nt like book library one told thay go meaning opion really nt matterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many people do not have a sufficient number of friends to interact and this circumstance brings out to feel lonely. Moreover, low communication could be related to not enough physical activities, for they have no opportunity to hang out with their friends outside. In this essay, I will explain the possible reasons and how can they solve these issues.\n\nTo begin with, technology has gradually caught on all over the world. Growing in the technological industry, especially the internet account for a lack of communication skill in the community. Hence, the users of the Internet make themselves lonely and they have become couch potatoes due to spending a lot of time looking at the screen of a TV or smartphone. The possible solution for that reason could be that people put a time limit on their phones and they can try to initiate a conversation with others in a cafe that is in their vicinity.\n\nSecondly, there was an outbreak called Coronavirus. During the COVID period, people have to stay at home and cut contact with other people down. Because, this disease is a pandemic and has a high mortality rate. After the diseases, the socialisation skills of people are lost and they got used to being at home. Putting out a solution for this cause could be easier, for example, the government does some sales of drinks (including coffee, tea, ice latte, and americano) in popular venues to encourage their citizens to build a new network. \n\nIn conclusion, there are more than 2 reasons to feel a sense of loneliness and have a low level of physical condition, however, the two main causes could be the improvement of technology and the effect of pandemic disease. I hope, people could remove the side effects of these situations from their lives with the government and some professionals as soon as possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author thinks that we will studied more about Venus do too human curiousity. But knows its very dangerous to study Venus\n\nIts dangerous to study Venus because its air is much thicker than earths and isnt even oxygen and the temprature is greater tha earth,Venus has the highets ground temp even tho Murcary is closer to the sun than Venus. Venus might be a good option to sudies tho becasue it says that it may at one point have been like earthand had oceans but we cant get too its surface to to our ships not making it threw the gasses and the ships just burning up. Scientist are working on a ship that will hover over Venus and take recorderings of it but the ship wont be able to land on the surface to stuided it. Scientist have made a cilicin that can go trew the rought terain and weather of Venus,they tested this with a special chamber simutlation,The rover lasted up to three weeks.\n\nScientist will study more about Venus and make new invetions that will be able to with stand the chaos of Venus. One day we will learn what Venus use to really be like and learn about its histroy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many regions, it's becoming popular among individuals the finding out information about archives in the houses where they live. In this ,essay I will give some reasons and details about it. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, in present days more and more people are interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in because they want to prevent themselves from some incidents. For instance, many residents have unexpected histories, for example, some people might think in this house may live a lot of demons or devils ,due to their appearance. On the other hand, in their ,imaginations people have to know the former time of their habitation before buying a home. Furthermore, they can find a large number of money or gold, due to in their residence in the past maybe lived a rich human or other. However, it seems interesting to have knowledge about their residents and it is also fun for them such as finding out fossils.\r\n\r\nIn addition to this ,they can research this in any circumstance, for instance,they can take information from their neighbours. Moreover, they might be able to do an excavation where they live just for fun, or they promise people a big deal if someone finds a valuable thing, due to some individuals who want to know about the history of their houses want to do something special ,not just for fun.\r\n\r\nTo sum up,many humans who want to find out the history of their residence, want to take some benefits from it or for the sake of itSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator\n\nIm am wrighting a letter to you In hopes that you will change the way we ineletion to change it to populart vote for the president of the united states. In election, for example, obama had received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3. this means to me thatif we like someone we can mostly end up having them our president. Flordia for the electoral votes given to each state. Flordia only have a 29 for electoral votes. Yes some people might say that is a lot but if we were to do it on populart votes it would be more fair to the other state. For example rode island on have 3 how is electoral votes fair for them? In 2000, when gore had more popular votes than bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888. The popular vote was very close in Florida in 2012 nevertheless obama who won that vote got 29 electoral votes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I strongly believe technologies kids adults use computers I strongly believe people bad affection people addicted spend less time family friends Finally spend less time excercising great opportunities self Clearly think lettng students adults use computers take mind make addicted computer This bad addicted something go back This means time anything For example micht forget life around us live Addiction hard get live life box play nonsens live life fullest Over addiction everything including computers horrible Without doubt spending much time computers rott brain make lazy Meaning less excersise less active This problem specially teens Teens computer every week cell phones ipods many Alot teens get cranky become node neisty parents testing As people dont excercise move around alot cause severe consequences like obesity cancer Obesity usually happens eating food also ahppen eating exercising People arent moving become lazy desire anything effect Overall computers cause people excercise less active cause Lastly Computers make people spend less less time family treat computer computers In everyday life teens cell phones computers listening music electronics causing If goes alot teens loose people Computers waste time make affect people use computers electronicsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree computers helping people To start computers possitive affect us They also give us ability learn Also allows people talk online far away places So yes computers good people First computers possitive affect The computer give one motivation Or help someone find lost pet Also could help get job Plus find safe home So ya computers possitive effect You also gain ability learn This helping deth people sites sighn language Also get information places visit This help learn diffrent contrays Most importantly help kids adults school work work This concluds learn things computers The computer also allows talk people far away This come handy familys Also people hospitilized family Plus fathers moms military talk kids Most though adopted kids could talk birth parents online Here another reason computers good This I agree computers They possitive affect people They given us ability learn Lastly allows talk people love far away So conclution benifit people use computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez author s mood happy says I always grateful parents love sacrifice And loves family friends oh dearly He also grateful lot family members close That could get together dinner lot The author says It warmth kitchen humble house Cuban feast albeit frugal Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love As see memoir author felt happy grateful love sacrifice familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries, there is a bigger trend in researching the history related to the places where people are living. I think the main reasons behind this can be seen as curiosity and education purposes, the best way is to get information from older people.\r\n\r\nFirstly, some people are very curious to know the myths behind older buildings. In many developed countries, there are fewer older buildings because these buildings have been demolished for modern building constructions. Therefore people are trying to get details on how these places were before and the rumors around them.\r\n\r\nSecondly, many people who are learning about historical areas are keen to find them for their education purpose. It is very hard to find the details on older buildings like who lived, which kind of material they used, the appearance of those houses, and the difference between the houses of the rich and poor. If people can find these details they can come up with clear ideas on how it was in earlier days. \r\n\r\nThirdly, the best way to find out these details is by talking to older people who live in these areas. The older generation has seen how these places become changed over their whole life since they lived in the same area and they experienced all the changes that happened around them. People can get to know a lot of real stories behind the buildings from them. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is an emerging trend to find more about the history of the place people are living mainly due to the curiosity to know the history and some people are studying them for their actual subjects. The greatest way to find these details is from the senior citizens living in the areas.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are an interesting idea. I have never really thought about a cars that can steer, brake and or accelerate themselves. These cars they call driverless aren't actually driverless but they think they are close. There are benfits to a driverless car such as, they can tell you when you need to take control of the car and not just keep going head on into anything and also they can vibrate when they sense danger from backing into an object. There are cons to this as well.\n\nThere can be a glitch and they can crash or not work. And if you crash who is at fault?\n\nAs the article says, \"So how driverless with the cars be in the future?\" Its a matter of when the cars with actually be \"driverless\" not how because as the article says they still need human assistance. If they can still steer, brake and accelerate the makers are getting closer and closer to making it driverless. For now they still need the human driver to keep their hands on the wheel at all times and their eyes on the road at all time. Its like the people are making sure the car is doing its job. What is something goes wrong and what will the human drivers do then?\n\nDr. Werner Huber the BMW project manager driver says, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Huber wants to make it fun but it needs to be fun in a safe way. So he wants to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems thats helps give the human drivers a heads-up. He wants to incorporate safety features to make sure its fun in a safe way because as it says in paragraph 8, safety is a big concern. But if there is a glitch and someone or other people get hurt there will be consequences.\n\nThere are driving laws that try to keep drivers, passengers and pedestrians safe. But traffic laws are written under the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. What if that human is a drunk driver and they are uncoordinated how will it be safe then? I think that people have to be certified to drive a smart car or a driverless car as they say because their can be reckless and careless drivers out there and they can cause problems for themselves and with the manufacturers. In paragraph 9 it says, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nIn conclusion, there can and are many arguments and debates on wether or not driverless cars will be actually be driverless and safe. The automakers are getting closer and closer everyday and safety is the number one priority. The article says Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving autopilot 90 percent of the time. What about the other 10 percent will us humans still have to watch the car and make sure its doing its job or can it actually be driverless and safe once in for all. Airplanes have an autopilot option. If airplanes have an autopilot option why can't cars?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To support the author idea I'm gonna say that the article says that Venus is a really\n\ndangerous and interesting planet because all this things:\n\n- On the planet's surface, temperatures average are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\n-The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\n-Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\n-thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\n-Solar power would be plentiful.\n\n-Radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\n\n-It doesnt have easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\n-Also important programmes like NASA are working on travell to Venus:\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers\n\n-Also he should study it because Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Way back when the only way you could get around is by walking or riding a horse. They didn't have cars back then, they never even thought about getting around by driving. Back then you didn't have to worry about gas prices or anything like that. In this generation everyone think's the only way they can get where they want to go is by driving a car,when that really isn't the case.\n\nDriving in this generation can be fun, but can also cause a lot of disadvantages. Cars can be very dangerous and cause a lot of damage in this world. Right when you get in your car and start driving around you are poluting the air. There's so pollution in this world and cars are making it worse. The world use to be clean before cars came around cars are taking over people and their lives.\n\nCars cause a lot of accidents. Every second of everyday there is an accident and people are loosing their lives because of it. People don't take driving seriously at all. If we didn't have cars there would be no accidents happening. No one would be driving under the influnce and having to worry about getting in the car and driving home. If we all walked we would be getting our excercise and not have to worry about loosing a life.\n\nI think we should go a week without driving a car and see how everyone likes it. Yes, the sidewalks will be packed but when you drive you have to deal with traffic. Another thing is that you don't have to worry about wasting your money on gas. I think this world would be a better place with less cars and more walking.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author did support his idea by stating that there some extreme conditions and what the conditions are like.\n\nSome of the challenges that the author stated were erupting volcanoes, powerful the earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes. As it is stated in paragrapgh three, it states \"temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\".. Venus is a most Earth-like planet, and thats what astronomers find interesting. In paragrapgh four, it describes how the some features of the planets are alike. He also talks about how NASA has been looking for a way to send humans there and trying to find the right technology to use. Using technogoly that will survive. They also know that avoiding the ground would be good because of it conditions, so they're trying to find a way to hover safely above Venus.\n\nIn conclusion I would say the author did support his idea. By stating the good and bad things of studying Venus. It would be risky but knowing more about the planets is a good thing, and also find it interesting. maybe later on it owuld help us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been in all of our minds since television and moives have put them there. Google has had driverless cars since 2009, but are they safe to be in one. While haveing a driverless car seems epic it does have some downfall to it. Driverlesss cars , or smart cars, are a bad idea because it cost a large amount of money, a driver must be on the wheel and on alert at all times, and it even has problems with the law.\n\nDriverless cars in the late 1950s had to run on a special track. The smart-road systems worked well. It was actully a succesful test, but it would have require massive upgrades to the existing roads. The roads would be too expensive to upgrade. So instead of smart-roads they moved on to smart cars. The smart cars would need a lot of sensors to work. The senors would of course become more advance, but so well the cost.\n\nAlthough the smart cars cost a large amount it also still needs a driver at the wheel. The car can handle speeds up to 25mph, but the sensors make sure the dirver hold on to the wheel. Even though it is a smart car none of the cars can go without a driver at the wheel. The car would need a driver for roads it can't navigat thourgh. Such as work zones and around accidents. The car can not navigat thourgh these places which is why it alerts the driver that the need to take control of the wheel. To improve this the manufacturers put cameras in the smart car to watch driver. They make sure that the driver is focused on the road. If there is a road the car needs help with, it would vibrate the seat to alert the driver.\n\nEven if the car can alert the driver the law focus on on how focused the driver is. In some states it is illegal to test a computer-driven car. Such states worry the the car would cause an accident to the passengers, and pedestrians. If the traffic laws change it would still need to cover liability of the accident. So if the car fails and caused an accident would the driver or manufacturer be at fault.\n\nSo in the end driverless cars are a horribly idea. They would cost a large amount of money. As well as they are not actully driverless and needs someone to be there, and they are agist the law at some states. Driverless cars should just stay in television and moives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would be extra sure and take more photos because for all we know, it could be something very exciting and we may even miss out on the planet's past. After we took pictures, I asked the person who took the pictures and they said aliens may have built it, but if you think about it, the face is just a regular landform like we have on Earth. Even if there really was life on Mars, they would not survive long because Mars is closer to the Sun so it would be as hot as stepping on concrete. I told the executive that in order to find out more about Mars, we need to actually go to the planet and collect samples. If we can just collect one rock on Mars, we will find out lots of things about Mars and its landforms. I think that being able to go to Mars is a big step for us. If we see more faces while at Mars, we will know for sure if it is a landform or if aliens made it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thomas Huang has created an software that can recongnize your emotions from an computer and I dont think its a good or bad idea. Here are some why its not valuable.\n\nPeople shouldnt always know how others feel. They shouldnt have to be worried about if a computer knows there sad or not. Most students come to class to get away from there emotions so why would you bring them back up?\n\nAlthough this computer could be valuable in some ways like helping your friend feel happy. As they said in the passage \" it could recognize when a student is becoming confused and bored\" which would get them back on track. It also modifies the lesson for you. Making it easier on the person that is on the computer.\n\nSo is the emtional expressions of students in a classroom valuable? I would have to save thats all up to you. Some people would like others knowing if they are sad or not. Personally I woud not like them knowing I was sad all the time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a thing of today and a thing of the future. They have been in the process of being developed for many years now but are still not ready to hit the roads and are not completely driverless.\n\nMy position on driverless cars is that they can be good with certain things but with others they lack in the amazingness often used to talk about them. They have their goods and their bads to them and in the future they might be able to be used everywhere and be completely driverless. I believe a driverless car would be good and it could help many people. It could help the blind and the disabled to be able to get around without having someone else have to take care of them. They could live a normal life, but in order for that to happen the car has to be entirely driverless.\n\nDriverless cars are good because they can help those traveling long distances and the driver does not have to be driving the car, but the driverless cars we have nowadays are not completely driverless. A driver still has to be paying attention to the road and be able to react when needed. The car, as stated in the passage, can not drive through work zones or around accidents. The car alerts the driver when it believes it can not handle the environment in which it is driving.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless cars are still being developed and will most likely be fully developed within a few years. They have many good things about them and their purpose, but they still need a lot of work done to them to make them entirely driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most would say that drivereless cars would be a good thing, but personally, I do not believe that. Driverless cars is just a huge accident waiting to happen.\n\nMost people would be 100% for the driverless cars, but clearly they do not know what they are risking. Although they seem cool, many band things can come along with these cars; there could be more accidents, the car could get overwhelmed and blow up, or the car could be in trouble somehow and there would be no way for the person driving the car to find a way to help. To me, driverless cars would just be a big mistake.\n\nThe first reason as to why these cars would be a mistake is that at any time there could be a car accident. Althought these cars would help assist and help people with disabilities be able to drive, it says in the passage that they can 'steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.' What would happen if someone with a disability or someone who had no idea how to drive got behind the wheel and they got into car trouble and they had no idea what to do. That could easily cause a car accident. People being lazy behind the wheel is another thing that could lead to car accidents. People will start to believe that sense they are not technically driving, they could text, or even drink behind the wheel. Little do these people know that even with driverless cars, an accident can and will occur at any second.\n\nNot only could a car accident happen but the cars would get very overwhelmed and possibly blow up. Cars often have a tendency to get heated up really fast, and although these cars are designed to notify the driver when something bad is going on, the driver could have fallen asleep and not have heard that maybe the engine was getting overheated and they needed to calm the car down and take a break for a minute or so. The car getting overheated could also go along with the accident thing. I have heard before about cars that have got into an accident and the impact of the car caused something in the engine to go off where the car exploded. We need drivers so they can notice when bad things are about to happen, not just letting them happen like they would without a driver.\n\nAnother one of the bad things that could happen is that the car could be in trouble and the person behind the wheel might not know anything about what is going on and so they can not help. The thing with the new driverless cars is that people will think they do not need to learn how to drive or learn how to even take care of a car. No matter whether we have driverless cars or not, people still need to take drivers ed and learn all about the safety of cars. They need to learn how to change a tire, or what each signal means, and even though these cars would run on low fuel, they would need to know when to add more gas to the cars.\n\nCars that actually have drivers in them is just a good choice. I am not saying that driverless cars would not be fun because they would be, they would be exciting and easy. The problem is that no matter what, there will be accidents and they can range from small to very large. The best alternative is to just keep the cars we have now. What kind of world would this be if we risked everyone's lives just for our own fun and satisfaction. Car trouble, accidents, and the cars getting overwhelmed are just a few of the hundreds of problems these cars would create. People need to realize that they can not always rely on technology to go everything. People need to stop being lazy and take responsibility for being able to drive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New York said city never sleeps The people New York always awake rushing streets When fourterm governor Al Smith wanted put mooring mast top Empire State Building people New York many concerns Along people constructing building These concerns consisted laws saftey constructionIf mooring mast built law d worry would flying airships low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even come close area Another major worry safety These dirigibles contained highly flammable hydrogen If dirigible caught fire New York City damage could tragic The construction mast question never planned making prior starting projectOverall mooring mast top Empire State Building never really destined created Too many factors obstacles way idea creating mooring mast beganSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even thouugh exploring venus is a dangerous pursuit and there are many dangers many reasearches still want to study venus. Why is studying venus a worthy pursuit you might ask. It is a worthy pursuit for several different reasons. One reason studying venus is a worthy pursuit is because it will help innovate or technology of today for the better of tommorow and because we should fear these dangers but they should not stop us from learning and making new innovations. One example from the text to back this statement up states, \"Our travels on Earth and Beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nIn conclusion to this i believe that we should go visit venus in the safest way possible so that we might know more about our solar system. I also believe it may help us advance our technology. And with that lets go to venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that all adolescents should spend their time to get extra money by some jobs. I disagree with this perspective because I believe that teenagers should use their free time to support society as much as possible.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I accept that there are certain benefits of paying jobs for teens. In most developed countries, people tend to educate their children that they should be learned financial independence as soon as possible. Hence, It would be very helpful for adolescents who might have the opportunity to get some money from a part-time job. For example, A lot of American parents are willing to give their children make money by supporting family businesses such as delivery, storage, and so on. In fact, getting paid jobs has a certain effect of encouraging and motivating teenagers to be more mature and responsible.\r\n\r\nAt the same time, I would agree that young adults should contribute small efforts to their community by working as a volunteer, perhaps taking part in some non-government institutions about the environment or organization in reducing plastic rubbish campaign and so on. I believe that in this way teenagers might have chances to gain necessary experiences and useful skills for their future as well as support their own society. For example, Greta Thunberg a well-known environmental activist, against climate change as well as global warming issues not only in Sweden but also around the world, She is just 16-year-old, with her efforts, she generated a lot of pressure for political experts of the major nations on reflecting their own actions on serious environmental issues. Personally, I suppose that a tiny contribution might have a much greater impact on society \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young teenagers might have a range of opportunities to seek a well-paid job, but in my opinion, Parents should encourage their children finding a meaningful work for our communities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph demonstrated employment changes in several sectors in the USA from 1930 to 2010.\nIt is clear that at the beginning of the period the vast majority of people were working in agriculture, fishing industry and logging, while other occupations were not so popular. However, by 2010 the situation had changed dramatically.\nA more detailed look at the graph reveals that in 1930 a little less than 80 percent of the US citizens were farming, fishing and cutting trees. This proportion was going down at a slow pace untill 1970. At the same period the number of people working in othere areas was fluctuating at levels from 0% to approximately 15%.\nAlthough about 60 percent of workers were employed in farming, fishing and foresting sector in 1970, there was a sharp decrease in popularity in this sector and it had become the least popular by 2010 (just above 1%). Meanwhile, more people got occupied in manufacturing. It increased from about 10 percent in 1970 to almost 40 in 2010. The second most popular area was technical sphere, closely followed by trade and office work (25% and 20% respectively in 2010). The situation in other jobs didn't change much during the whole periodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has driverless cars ever came to your mind before? To think that car companies and Google are working on these futuristic things are mind blowing. In a few years we could be in the future era of cars. Cars like this would change the world. They would use less fuel, help improve safety, and allow the driver to have fun.\n\nFirst reason driverless cars would help improve our life is they use less fuel. Having to use less fuel would save people big money. The cars would be able to travel more miles per gallon. Since these cars will only need half as much fuel, people could select cars not based on how much gas they use, This would allow customers to choose the car they really want.\n\nSecond reason driverless cars would help improve our life is they can decrease the number of car crashes. Inside all these cars are loads of sensors. These sensors help the car stop, slow down, or brake automatically. By having this kind of technology, the car accidents around the country would drop. That also means more people would buy these cars knowing they are safe.\n\nLast reason driverless cars would help improve our life is because they would allow the \"driver\" to have fun and relax. Some of the manufacturers would put in-car entertainment and information systems in the car. These display systems could turn of instantly in case the driver wanted to take over the car. Drivers in the car could also text if they wanted too. They would not have to worry about hitting someone or something.\n\nDriverless cars would greatly improve our society. They would use less fuel to save us more money, decrease car accidents, and make drivers less bored. It could take many more years for these type of cars to come. They might not even come for another 20 years. When they do, we will all be living in the future era of cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As humans, everyone is curious and want to learn new things about our world. NASA is a govermnet organization that strives to find new things every day that will improve our understanding of our galaxy. One of the planets that scientists have looked at lately is Venus. Venus is planet that scientists have trying to find out more about although the planet is very hostile and dangerous. If scientists can figure out more about Venus, we can further our understanding of what this planet is and what it once was. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" writes his feelings about how dangerous it is as well as how desiring it is to further explore more information about this planet.\n\nThere are many different things that scientists are intrested about when it comes to this planet. Many studies have shown that Venus might have been at one point the most like earth planet in the solar system. The author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have been supported various forms of life, jut like Earth\"(4). The passage further sugests that although it would crutial to find out about this planet there are draw backs. There have been many missions for spacecrafts to land on this planet but none of them \"survived the landing for more than a few hours\"(2). Although the planet is so close to us, the conditions are very dangerous for exploration. The author informs the reader of the harsh conditions of the planet, but also show the reader insight to possible reasons why it is so worthy of studying.\n\nVenus is a very interesting planet and has conditions tht sugest that it was just like earth. There even is proof that suggests that there once was some living organisms on this planet as well. The author informs us by writing, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\"(4). Scientist using this knowledge that there were once life forms, can think of solutions for people to go to Venus. This can help explorers and scientist to learn more about how life lived on this planet and what it was like. The drawback to this idea is that Venus is a planet filled with gas and is roughly, \"170 degrees Fahrenheit\"(5). This temperature is very harsh conditions for humans to live in or even exploring what is on this planet.\n\nAlthough the planet is filled with gas and is not suitable for exploring with robots or people. The author suggest there are many positive things on exploring Venus, like studying life forms and what the planet consists of despit e the challenges that are in the way.\n\nThere are so many cool things that we can learn about Venus and scientists have no idea what these things might be. Human nature is to descover new things about our world. That is how humans learned new things over time and progressed through civilization. Venus is a very intresting planet that NASA is stil kind of confused about the planet and want to know more about it. If there were solar pannels on Venus then the \"solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Never the less, Venus is a planet that is very dangerous and there needs to be many precautions before thinking about putting people on it. Not only is the temperature of the the planet warmer, it is also, \"90 times greater atmoshperic pressure than earth\"(3). The air pressure on this planet is so much stronger, that it is going to be harder for astronauts to be on this planet for a certain amount of time. The author brings up many ideas regarding how dangerous Venus is, but at the same time humans want to satisfy our curiosity by learning more about what this planet consists of.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports that Venus is a worthy pursuit depsite the dangers. The writer did a very good job by using facts to support his claim regarding the exploration of this planet. Curiosity is what mainly drives exploration in humans. Scientists and explorers can not hold back from these drawbacks because in the end, we want to know more about the unknown qualities of this planet and what they consist of despite what challenges we might have to face.\n\nScientists will find a way to learn more about this planet although there are many challenges that lie in their path. Just like these scientists, everyone should not give up because of roadblocks that come their way rather, they should keep trying and think about it differently.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To motivate and retain skillful and talented people in the workforce of our ever fast changing society, many companies have been contemplating what the most important factors are in their employees' perspectives. Because capitalism and materialism are two of the most significant driving principles of societal growth, one would argue that money must be the most important factor.\r\n\r\nIt's obvious that tangible rewards such as commissions, bonuses and promotions are always given to individuals based on their performances, all of these rewards are distributed in the form of money. This basic feedback mechanism has been working exceptionally well in terms of productivity for many centuries in Western countries. Progress and advancements in technology and industrial revolution made this case clearer than ever.\r\n\r\nFinancial gain allows basic working class to put bread and butter on the table, to stay cozy under a roof and provide basic needs for the family. Money is especially important for these grassroot people as it's impractical to pursue other non-monetary goals when you are just trying to make ends meet.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, middle to upper class often stride for a more lucrative career path in order to accumulate wealth for other lifelong investments, which can often lead to early retirement and a more fulfilling, enjoyable later life.\r\n\r\nThere are other factors like workplace relationship, job satisfaction and company social responsibility that can affect employees' prospects. Companies should also consider these aspects in order to maximise the development and retention of their workforce. However, when people have to make a choice in career or job change, money and opportunity of promotion are two of the most significant elements that influence their choices.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that pursuing a higher education through university is the best way to have a successful career. However, others think that getting a job right after school is better. With the rising standards of living, people want to earn money quickly to satisfy their needs, all while being successful. So, which of these two paths is able to satisfy people's demands?\nHigher education is the first step towards a better future. Although there are some exceptions that defy this rule like Bill Gates, for instance. It still holds true for the vast majority. College studies enrich your mind and enable you to discover knowledge that you would not uncover alone. Not to mention that there are professionals who can aid you with your studies and career. Furthermore, you do not just gain academic experience you gain so much more, as you get involved in the university life; getting to know people of different backgrounds, nationalities and cultures will open up your mind and give you better adaptation and socializing skills. Whatever you learn or experience during college will aid you in your professional life. It also makes you an expert on what you do, there is a difference between someone who just states their opinion on a matter and between someone who actually have information about that matter.\nNevertheless, some people don't believe much in higher studies. They just want to get a job after they graduate high school and start building a future for themselves. These people tend to invest the years that would be spent in a certain faculty in pursuing a career. Some of these people have their own skills and talents that will allow them to build a future on their own. For example, some artists would start selling their arts at a young age and wouldn't study art, they'd open an art gallery and create their own business.The same could be said about actors and singers, of course they would need to train to improve their talents, but they can still manage without pursuing a higher studies. Others just prefer working than studying. \nIn my opinion, I believe that both sets of paths are right. As much as I believe that studying at university does make a difference and adds to your skills and knowledge, it's not a rule. Some of the greatest leaders in the world didn't get a chance at a higher education, take Mohamed Ali, for instance, he built a great empire, improved Egypt's educational and economic system, all while being illiterate. Now, I am not encouraging illiteracy but I believe hat everyone should do what is best for them. Set a goal and do what it takes to achieve that goal. If you want to be a doctor, you'd have to go to medical school. Thus, you must determine what you want and take the right decisions to attain your desires. \nIn conclusion, it's our goals and dreams that determine what sort of action we'd take. However, one must know that success is a matter of determination and hard work, whether they choose to go to college or open up their own business.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars could hold new possiblities for mankind.\n\nJust think, that one day there will be cars that drive themeselves and don't need your attention to drive. a day where people could stop worrying about crashes as much and worry about what other problems are in the world. A driverless car could change the way we think about things. New ideas would come popping up such as driverless airplanes, or driverless trains. this new technolgoy could open the world up to a whole way of thinking and new ideas.\n\nIf one day cars can drive on their own we could us this to save the earth. In the article it says that the Google cofounder Sergey Brin \"has a vision where fleets of driverless cars form a public transportation taxi system. The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of todays taxis.\"(Driverless Cars Are Coming). Just think about all the fuel we would save. it could even give us an the chance to think about the earth and start to fix other world problems. we could concentrate more on finding a cure for cancer that has taken so many lives. people around the world could help those that are starving. this technology could help us think of better way to create food so that there will be food for those people that are starving. a down side to this is that if there are self driving cars there will also be people that lose their jobs because of it. that would be a problem but we could also find a solution. in the article it tells us there are problems with thew car such as that they can not manuver though accidents or work zones (Driverless Cars Are Coming) but as technology becomes\n\nmore advanced, more people will be able to fix that problem.\n\nE very day people are working on the driverless car making it\n\nsafe to use and fixing problems. People are fixing these problems for us so that we can live in a better and safer world. even though there will be problems people will always be there to fix it and make it better. If you had the opputunity to take a driverless car out would you?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir The mood good feeling To explaination lived reality Having family come live till get back feet Having family around Realizing turned house Home Endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life warm home came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved The barriers work strong high parents accepted might able find kind jobs deserved In Cuba Narciso Sr Had worked laboratory Rawedia Maria studied Chemical Engineering In start lives entirely taking whatever work could find The faith struggle would lead children better times drove endure hard times Is I thought author memoir moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a great little short story that includes very interesting facts and it's all on how to go about studying the planet Venus despite the dangers. That's not even half of it either in other words let me give you some knowledge that I have gained from this wonderul author.\n\nAnd this is where I'll tell you about the why scientists are still discussing further visits to the planet, so it say's in \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" that it once long ago may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system then also Venus still today has a surface of rocky sediment besides that includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters fun fact Venus is called our \"Sister Planet\".\n\nNow let's go to some of the reason's why human-beings aren't able to survive on Venus basically the story say's venus average temperatures are on average eight-hundred fahrenheit,the atomspheric pressure is also 90 times greater than what we experience from here on earth there for as you can see the conditions are too extreme for humans to survive on the planet.\n\nFurthermore let's talk about how NASA plans to study Venus. So NASA's solution is like imagin a bimp-like vehicle hovering thirty-plus miles above Venus to avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up there, but it doesn't mean it's not going to hot it will be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and thje air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\nFinally for this conclusion I will just voice my own opinon about the short story on \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the thing I liked about the story is that it wasn't that hard to break everything down in to a little essay but besides that it was good and very informational story. I loved it!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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