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"content": "In most cases computers help you with math or looking up an answer. But now a days computers are getting more advanced like being able to change a masterpeice made by\n\nDa Vinci. That would be something that could draw the bored kids in. Even the confused student's who dont ask for help could beneifit from a more advanced technologly. Most lessons are drawn out and very long which makes me want to put my attenton else where, then what im post to be focused on. If a computer could recognize when I was confused or bored that would benifit me and my teacher.\n\nThat would put me in a better place of learning and being focused. If I and my fellow peirs was actully happy about learning I feel our mind would lock more stuff in. Sometimes it goes in one ear and out the other. But this wouldn't just help school students. This could be used to help a seller of a video game. When most people play games after while its not as fun. When the Facial Action Coding System enables the game can reboot itself to be more interesting and keep that person interested to buy and play more of that same game. Just like in school I would come back more ready then ever if I had something not boring to look forward to. Not even helping the every day life this could be a grate value to the discovery of the human muscles. Showing how your muscles in your face come together and make that facial expression. Like the example given in the story the Zygomatic major ( muscles that begin at youR cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. Using the computer you can find out what helps the cheecks rise up.\n\nIm getting to off topic just wanted to show other ways that this coumputer can be helpful. The students would be more prepared for test and examines like iSTEP, SATS,and ECAS. if the lecture was more intersting to grasp the consept that is be taught to me or anyone. Like Dr. Huang said \" faces don't lie\" if my face expression is happy im locked into my studies and ready to learn. But if I'm bored I get right on my phone so can find that spark. I now by being a student other students feel this way this could make life so much easier to actully feel like you learned something today. So this more advancd computer will definitly help students and the work environment there in.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System is a new software that has given computers the ability to identify the emotion of a person. It does this by constructing a 3-D model of the face. This new innovative software can identify six emotions of a human. These emotions are happiness, disgust, anger, sadness, and fear. This tecnology can be useful in many different ways in today's world. There are also some things that may not be so good about this either.\n\nThis software has many positve things about it that can help students and teachers across the world. The software can help inside the classrooms. Using this software to calculate and identify people's emotions, it would be very easy to see if a student is struggling. Many students who struggle keep it to themselves hoping to catch on. This may not be the case in every student, though. Dr. Huang predicts that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" If this software can actually detect this, then it would make learning and teaching way easier. Teachers could try different teaching methods to help with the growth and progress of their students and help them understand what they're doing. They could aslo try something that is more fun and appesaling to the students. This technology could be lifesaving in the classroom.\n\nAlthough this software could help many people everywhere, how does everyone feel about this? If used in the classrooms, some parents and students may not want this to be a part of their learning environment. Many students could be sad all of the time due to person issues and home life. Would they want their teacher to know that they were always upset? I think that it would be a good idea to first have recieved permission from every student and parent before allowing this into the classrooms.\n\nI also think that this software could literally save lives. If it is able to identify these emotions, it could prevent students from harming themselves. The software can determine your emotion based on every little detail of your face. In pararaph 8 the author states, \"Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" With this being said, if you try to hide your emotions, the computer will still be able to tell. I think school counslors should have this tecnology in schools right now. Getting proper equipment to identify how a student is feeling could help the counselors talk to them about their problems because not all students will share how they feel.\n\nWith all the information that i provided, I definitely think that this technology is valuable. The software provides accurate results and it could eaily help students and teachers everyday in the classroom. What more could you ask for than a safe and reliable software that could raise test scores and possibly save some lives? This may just be the next big thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars that can drive themselves may seem outrageous and insane, but believe is or not they are coming. Driverless cars have sensors that contain much better response and control than any human being. Driverless cars also give the driver assistance and take control of the car. Lastly, driverless cars give the driver a signal if the driver must take over, so they will always be safe. There are so many positives that come with driverless cars, and that is the reason why they are rumbling their way into the future.\n\nDriverless cars have built-in sensors that can make driving much safer than any human driver. The text states, \"...those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" This evidence from the text shows that the sensors are able to detect danger right away, while humans have trouble keeping away from danger. The text also states, \" The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This evidence from the text explains that driverless cars are able to react to danger much faster and more smoothly than any human can, making driving safer for everyone. These two pieces of evidence from the text show that driverless cars are safer for not only the people in the car, but also the people around the car.\n\nSecondly, driverless cars are able to assist the driver and take control when needed. The text states \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph...\" This evidence from the text explains that the car is able to perform human functions, and can control the car when the driver is in need of it. The text also states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves...\" This evidence from the text shows that driverless cars are very smart and reliable. These two pieces of evidance from the text explain that driverless cars are very up to date, and are extremely trust worthy.\n\nLastly, Driverless cars give the driver a signal if the driver needs to take over. The text states \"...but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This evidance from the text explains that driverless cars keep the driver safe by sending signals ahead of time, so that the driver can be ready.\n\nThe text also states, \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" This evidance from the text shows that driverless cars are not just taking over for the human. People still need to be safe and watch the road, so driverless cars are making sure they are always focused. These two examples from the text show that driverless cars are safer, because they assist the driver, but also keep them focused for any dangerous outcomes.\n\nAlthough driverless cars may seem all positive, there are some negatives that come with them. The text states \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" This example from the text illustrates that having the driving focused on the road the whole time may seem pointless, because if they are focused they might as well drive the car themselves. The text also states, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" This evidence from the text explains that technology is not always perfect, so there could be accidents and dangerous situations. No one would know who to blame because the technology was driving the car, but the driver could have been more focused, so there are many negatives to that. Driverless cars may have some faults, but they do also help the safety of the drivers in many more ways.\n\nCars that can drive themselves may seem very far away, but they are right around the corner. Driverless cars are more controlled than any human, more assisting, and more safe than any car driven by a human. Humans are not able to sense danger ahead and that is why driving can be so unsafe. Driverless cars give the driver an opportunity to feel more relaxed and safer about driving. There may be some negatives to this idea, but there are so many more positives that come with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the story Cowboy who Road the Waves i have to support why people would want to do his job. There are many reasons. Who would like a job that you got to see the world and travel. I would like to see the world. whaty about you?\n\nIn 1947 the world wars finaly ended WW1 and WW2 had a spand of 30 years. There was alot of mess to clean up and you had to be a certain person to do it. The see cowboys where just the right people. Luke said in the story that it was a fun job. But also hard. You got to see the world and do many activitys. You had lots of free time. But it was very dangerous he even broke his ribs doing it.\n\nLuke stated that he got to see many countrys. He had free time to do what he wanted. All whole he did alot of good. But he wasnt at home very often and that ment he had no permanit home. He just traveled.\n\nI think this wound be a great job for someone who wants to travel. Not have a family. Or wants to have a abnormal life. I dont know if i would want to do this job or not. All in all i think it would be a great job.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This paper will decride why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nThere are many reasons .\n\nHere are some of them.\n\nOne reason is you get to help people that have no food or shelter because of a war.\n\nThey lost everything you take them food and biuld them shelter.\n\nAnother reason is that you get to meet people from other countries and explore there culture.\n\nYou go to China and Greece that is so fun.\n\nLastley a reason is that you get to stop at cool towns and countrys to get a tour.\n\nWe went to Crete and we went to the Panama Canal and went on a tour of that as well.\n\nThere are so many fun and entertaining things to do when you become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSome reasons that you should not become a Seagoing Cowboy is because it is very dangerous.\n\nYou go into other lands not knowing if they aer going to be mean or very nice to you new comers.\n\nYou have to feed dangerous and vises animals on the ship such as hourses, goats, and donkeys.\n\nThey may not be happy about being on the ship and may get mad and hurt you.\n\nYou could fall overborad and be left to yourself in the ocean.\n\nThe ship may fall over and you may have a ship wreak.\n\nYou are going to paces that are danaged from the war and the soliders there might not know that the war is over and they could shot you.\n\nEven though there are many ways that you could get hurt or killed you will still have lots of fun on your trip across the world and back.\n\nAs you can see there are so many fun things to do on the ship and on the land.\n\nYou can play volleyball, baseball, wresteling, tag, hide and seek, and even vesing.\n\nYou will have fun on and off the ship and you will never be bored there are so many ways to be active and healthey even on the boat.\n\nThere are so many things to do off the ship like go and have a nice taste of what ever country or culture you are in, it is truly great.\n\nI hope that every thing I have told you will make you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy and mabey make that your dream job.\n\nThis paper explianed why you should become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nJust think about all of the things I said today before you go pick your next job.\n\nMabey after that you will host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years with your family.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technology able to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because we could detect different type of moods even by making faces that wouldn't necessarily indicate a certain mood just by looking at their face. This sort of technology can benefit in more way's as well such as helping video game designers make their graphics more realistic and having characters resemble actual and more expressive moods.\n\nReading students emotional expressions can determine how they could possibly feel and perhaps help them out if they're feeling low or having a bad day. A simple computer program could tell if a student is in need of help by determining if the student is in a state of confusion or stress. Then if the student is confused or in need of help then the lesson could be modified and altered to be made more understandable for the student. The student could also be helped by a digital instructor that would trigger when the student is confused. Technology like this could give students better understanding of whatever is being taught knowing there are students that are too shy or scared to ask questions it could finally help them learn without having any fear of raising their hand and causing attention.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System can really benefit students all around the world who would use it and prepare and give students more understanding in our future causing it to be brighter and more vivid ,therefore, the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable piece of technological advancment that could impact our future in a positive manner.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" said \" Numerous factor constibute to Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite it's proximity to us.\" One of the reasons why the author said that is more than three decades ago not one single spaceship has touched down on Venus. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nSome facts about Venus is that sometimes it's called the \"Evening Star\". Venus is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from the sun. Its often referred to as Earth's \"twin\". It's the closest planet to Earth interms of density and size and tye closest in distance too.\n\nAs people may think Venus is just a normal planet that spacecrafts can go to and explor the planet, but thats wrong. On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what people in Earth experience. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nAs what the author wrote, all the reason and evidence explains that Venus is a really dangerous planet for people to land on the planet and study it without surviving.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the year 1976, NASA sent a spacecraft to Mars to find a landing site for Viking 2. Unexcpectedly, we stumbled across a landform that appeared to possess a human likeness. The landform was a huge rock formation that stretched from an estimate of 2 miles on Mars. Needless to say, this phenomenal sight has people questioning whether or not aliens exist among us, and in turn leading to the false belief of alien existence. I can assure you the land formation was not created by alien life forms.\n\nThis peculiar rock formation is what we call Face. Face does startling resemeble a perfect human face, but it is only an illusion of the shadows that give Face human eyes, nose, and a mouth. Even though we posted countless of articles on Face and defended the natural landform case, there are still people who assume Face is a creation of aliens. To shed light on the subject, on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and the team snapped photos of the landform. The resoultion was ten times sharper than the original photo we took back in 1976. The photo showed the equivalent of a butte or a mesa, landforms that we commonly see in the western part of America.\n\nFuthermore, the alien theory does not support enough facts or details to prove who created the landform. Face is merely one of those \"miracles\" of nature that appear to have unique traits when those traits were formed by a tiny illusion, Illusions that conjured the human-like aspects of Face trick your brain into believing the landform looks like a real human face. From that trick, anyone would try to find a loop hole to bring the subject up of alien existence.\n\nIn the long run, Face is a landform, and will always remain a natural landform, as our superior technology and research has proven that fact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions is an extremely smart idea. They see if they were confused or not. This software could help kids understand their assignments easier, explain more things throughly, and break the subject down into smaller sections.\n\nThe way that this software could help kids understand their assignments easier is that it could read their emotions while they're taking notes and the teacher says something they don't understand. The software could then read that emotion of confusion and show them a simplier way to understand it. Thus making the lesson easier to understand so they could actually do their work right instead of doing it completely wrong.\n\nAnother way that this software could help students understand things better is that it could explain more throughly. For example, a student could be sitting in math class and taking notes. The kid might not understand what the teacher means as he's talking about a specific formula. The software could reconigze the look and explain it better to the sudent so that they understand what they meant.\n\nThe last reason why this software could be useful is that it could break down in the lesson into smaller sections. A kid could be completely lost on what he's learning about in science and they're overwhelmed by everything together. The program could reconigze the confusion of the kid. It could then break the whole lesson apart and explain it one step at a time so could make more sense to them.\n\nIn conclusion, this software could do amazing things to help students understand and comprehend a lesson better than anything else. While this program will probably never be available for my education, it would be amazing asset for future students. The software could make it easier for assignments to be understood, explain a lesson further than the teacher did, and break lessons down into smaller sections. This software is the future for our world's education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper Advances technology amazing nt always positive effect society That I honestly believe computers benefit community For instance computers dangerous people days seem spend much time using Not mention computers cost way much money To begin mom dad always say nt talk strangers I go I think say I go use computer Computers truly dangerous someone nt careful For example online predators often depict someone nt Therefore ca nt ever really trust someone simply met chat room Also cyber bullying another problem computers put people risk Another danger computers anything posted internet accessed almost anyone This includes pictures blogs comments I believe society would better without constant worry computer Secondly people especially younger generation spend excessive amounts time computers Some people spend hours day using computer could activity actually benefited If people spent much time helping community much time helping community computer world would much better place live Not mention would bring people closer one another Computers seem control peoples lives nt healthy I think people spend time living less time faces glued computer screen Lastly computers like vampires sucking away money In economy people need saving money college even simpler things like new pair shoes Additionaly rate technology advances even hightech computers date year two new one needed Also computers prices constantly rising It hard keep I strongly believe computers waste money bring society All computers negative attribute communities across First dangerous Secondly time consuming thirdly computers expensive Computers simply hassle worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A few people have a viewpoint that enrolling in a famous University and obtaining a degree is worthful and it will land themself in the finest Multi-National Corporate Companies, whereas some others will be pondering to undertake employment immediately after completing school. I agree with the former point of view and in a forthcoming paragraph, I will elucidate the reasons why an individual should take up employment after graduating.\r\n\r\n On one hand, Education is said to be the passport of the future and an individual, who has passed from a university or from its affiliated college, will not only obtain the dream job offer from one of the finest MNC'S but also can demand the highest salary, perks and incentives. Because most of the companies in this modern era, has certain prerequisites such high qualification from renowned University and required skills, accordingly land talented graduates in their companies and take up more challenging role of managing and developing the business. Moreover, research conducted by the California research institute has emphasised that Corporate companies prefer to hire 60% more individuals who have high qualifications and skills obtained by studying from renowned universities and colleges.\r\n\r\n On other hand, people who prefer to undertake job opportunities after school, always struggles to find dream job opportunities in the corporate world, because they neither qualify for the requirements of qualification and skills set up by these companies nor can perform job duties and responsibilities as expected by their supervisors and manger because of lack of understanding of corporate work. Hence, they end up taking low profile jobs that require low skills, abilities and knowledge, compared to their requirements of corporate companies. Hence, it is obvious that industry requires people, who have high qualifications and knowledge.\r\n\r\n Therefore , I conclude that an individual who prefer to study first in university or college, then choose to work on job opportunities, will be more satisfied with higher job roles prospects in different fields than who prefer to work first after school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine if you are on an spacecraft, and you see something unusual. It looks like a face on the surface of the planet Mars. Your first instinct might be that it was made by aliens or creatures we have never seen. Well, this did happen; in 1976 NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was flying over Mars and they stumbled upon what looked like a humans face, but they were not positive what or why it was there. This Face is just a natural landform because scientists proved it, there was no sign of abnormal activities, and mesas are not unusual in Mars.\n\nThis Face is a natural landform because scientists proved it was not made by aliens. The author states, \"And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonai for the first time Micheal Malin and Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. This shows how the Face was only a landform. \"The text states, \"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. 'We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view' said Garvin. 'Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.' Each Pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This exemplifies how scientists used advanced technology to take an accurate picture of the Face. What they found was that it was a mesa.\n\nAgain this shows how scientists took advanced pictures and all they saw was a natural landform.\n\nFurthermore, there was not any abnormal activity to prove it was aliens. Gavin said, \"As a rule of thumb you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" This shows how the camera was powerful enough to have shown if it was really an alien monument. Similarly, Gavin states, \"So, if there were objects on this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This adds on to the idea that if there had been an alien civilization they would have been able to capture anything that was out of the normal.\n\nAdditionally, these landforms are not unusual on Mars. Infact, there are similar landforms on planet Earth. The article states, \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.\" This shows how mesas are common in Mars, and they are not strange to be seen. Furthermore, the text states, \"What the picture shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. 'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho,' says Garvin. 'That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolate mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.'\" This exemplifies how these landforms are not just in Mars, but also on planet Earth. However, this specific landform had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh, but the picture tooken byThe Mars Global Surveyor proves that it was a natural landform. This camera took a picture using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\n\nClearly, the Face on Mars was just a mesa. There was no explanation found of how it could have been formed by aliens. First, there was no evidence found that it was an alien artifact; cameras proved that it was a landform. Plus, mesas are not unusual in the planet Mars. The Face seen on the Mars was another one of Mother Nature's ability to create spectacular scenes in the landscape.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting your car use could be a great way to enjoy nature and life. Walking is a great way to work out. Even riding a bike around your city, or town is a great way to work out. Some advantages of not using a car is that you don't have to worry about getting in to a car wreck, you don't have to smoke up your area with all the carbon dioxide that comes out of your car, and you actually work out for once. Limiting your car usage will have you not in a hurry. Heidrun Walter said, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". She feels that not using a car would make her feel better.\n\nCars are just a waste, I see that in the future there is going to be like a lot of over weight people. No one hardly work out nowadays. Just get in the car and go somewhere instead of walking around the block. It's going to be the real version of \"Wal-E\" where the earth is full of trash and everyone is going to live on a spaceship and their all over weight.\n\nBeing in a car will pollute your city so fast if everyone around had a car. As it says in the article, \"[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\". It is that way because a whole lot of people live there and almost everyone has a car over there in the two cities. Using a car will only make things better for the people and for the environment.\n\n\"BOGOTA, Colombia... millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets o fthis capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" This excerpt from the article explains some of the advantages of not using a car. All of them sound joyful. Hiking, Biking, Skating and no traffic jams? This sounds like a field day in the city. What could go wrong with all of these delightful activites goin on?\n\nThe excerpt clearly says that without cars you could have multiple and multiple things to do besides being lazy. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" - Carlos Arturo Plaza. Less stress and lower air pollution, I think that's the best combination of all. New york even has a bike-sharing program so you could ride your bike all over its city. Wow ! sounds like a deal to me.\n\nNot using a car is a great way to be yourself and do something with your life and to help others. No one likes pollution, and no one wants to be out of shape. As said by Carlos, he's stress free from cars. There's multiple sources out there that you could join and be apart of without having a car. The United States people are not using cars as much now, and all over the world people are starting programs to stop car usage. Without cars I believe that the world would be a better and healthier place.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout this article there were a lot of questions or concerns that popped through my head. The idea will be more convenient, there would be less money spent on gas, and less responsibility on the driver. There are a lot of positives in this outcome but a huge negative if they can't fix the safety and alibilty in this.\n\nSafe is the key. If the drivers are not safe and can get hurt or killed easier there is no point. What happens when the technology somehow fails or the car doesn't stop when needed? There are many questions that need to be solved and its just too much. The company's of these cars should feel 100x more pressured and concerned in losing money than they will gain money. This may never happen and this driverless car idea might work but there is just too many alibilty in the company's hands.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless car system from a public transport might save time, less money on gas, and less responsibility on the driver but once when the technology fails and if people start getting killed or hurt they are going to have to shut it down and it will all be a waste. I would rather have my hands on the wheel and know the reason my car was crashed was because of me and that it was my fault, not the cars fault.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this reading, the author is talking about exploring venus, but all his evidence speaks differently. I believe the author does not support the clam that Venus is a worthy pursuit because the evidence given is mediocre. He contradicts himself in many paragraphs proving why we shouldn't send people over, and has not given any reason why we should go over there.\n\nIn this short persuasive article, the author does not pursuade at all. In paragraph two, the backround of Venus is given, but it's not stated why its important to visit this planet. \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\" The only valid reason givin in this short story is when it is said in paragraph 4, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This statement gives no reason for traveling and researching Venus except for the fact it used to be like Earth.\n\nThough it is said Earth is one of a kind, this article states Venus is the most like Earth planet they've ever found. That could be a valid reason to explore and consider inhabiting, but it is proven with evidence that Venus is inhospitable and would serve no purpose in researching and visiting. In paragraph three, it is said, \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" These conditions are said to be inhospitable in paragraph four. It is also said, \"Such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our ocean and liquify.\" This evidence says the planet is almost impossible to visit and collect data on, except in the fifth paragraph, it is a very long explanation as to how we could even study venus. This is then contradicted in the sixth paragraph by saying photography and videography are ineffective because of the thick atmosphere, and no samples would be possible because the ground conditions are too bad for humans, and even metal.\n\nIn conclusion, the evidence the author has given us condradicts and outweighs the evidence given for the idea Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, meaning he did not support this idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports the evidence by giving examples of how venus is almost the same as earth. He also gives evidence of mars and venus being the best options to send drones and crafts to and says facts about venus and mars says that venus could of been just like earth a long time ago and could of had oceans all over its world. mars could of had oceans too craft that were sent to mars came back with sea chells and other ocean like things and mauntains look like the ones that we have here on earth people thing that venus and mars were both the same as earth but just died out and became deserts and eveything died on them. \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". \"the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" these quotations show that the author is giving evidence on how Earth and Venus are kind of the same and how we can live on venus. These quotations also show facts about the features of venus and how it is similar to earth in many ways. the conclusion to my essay is that the author backed up his answer pretty good and had alot of good evidence in the story to back him up he also explained everything really well and answered all his questions with evidence to back them up and gave facts about more things like the temprature and how mars is the same and has almost the same features as Earth too and venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "to begin with people say that cars are the number one things that can help them get around to where they need to be, but to others they say walking or bikes are much more safer or helpful, people have the most advantages when it comes to cars, cars are way faster and easier to drive. i think people should limit thier car usage because passangers cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions and up to 50 percent in some cars-intensive areas in the united states. people should limit thier car usage because after days of near-record pollution paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\n\nmany people usally hicked,biked,skated or took buses to work during a car-free day and thats great exercise the number one thing to keep yu healty and strong its also a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution. president obamas ambitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emissions unveiled,that has left researchers pondering a fundamental question like has america passed peak driving but americas love for vehicles seems to be cooling.\n\na study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.\n\ndoug short of advisor perspectives research company says the miles driven in the united states pealed in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter according to an analysis. part of th explanitory certainly lies in the recession because cash strapped americans could not afford new cas and the unemployed werent going to work anyways.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Housing shortages is the major problem in the cities. In many big cities government is trying to solve the problem. However, I disagree with the aforementioned statement that only government should play a pivotal role to solve shortages of housing in the big cities due to the reasons outlined below.\n\nFirstly, People believe that the government can only solve housing shortages in the major cities. This is to say that, In the massive number, People are moving from rural place to a developed cities in search of better facilities. As a result, The population of a particular place increases and the shortages of housing will arise. To illustrate, according to the New York Times, 15% of population has increased from migration in the capital city 'Kathmandu' in the fiscal year 2019/2020. Furthermore, The governement should play a role to limit migration and manage a proper plan to develop every cities of the country. Similarly, In the massive cities, the authorisation should focus on proper plan on housing.\n\nSecondly, With the major role of the government to control the housing planning . The citizens also have important role to control housing shortages. In the other words, The general public should take knowledge about the proper housing plan before they seattle in any locations. For instance, according to the Himalayan Times, 5% of people who seattled in the area of New Baneshwor had been found to be living in the government land. As a result, The authorisation is planning to remove the households.\n\nTo sum up, The government plays a pivotal role to solve housing shortages with it the citizens also play a crucial role to the solve it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When considering what to be taught in secondary school, people are still divided about whether international news should be one of the official subjects or not. While there are benefits to adding this new channel into the classroom, there are also good reasons why it might be helpful to only focus on current curricula. \r\nThe statement that international news should be studied at secondary school is strong for several reasons. In terms of social view, it would help students to gain a wider perspective of the world. In this way, youngsters can be widely acknowledged with current affairs so that they could be aware of how to behave properly. Moreover, in the education view, international news accompanied by different academic subjects such as science, literature, mathematics would complete the integrated learning, which provides students with a full development to lead their life in the future. It is, therefore, clear that global updating plays a vital role in assisting education\r\nOn the other hand, it is also understandable that including international news as a subject in secondary school curricula is definitely irrelevant. First, students are now snowed with a hectic schedule, which may result in overloading if any additions. Moreover, in the current education system, especially examination, it places a great emphasis on academic subjects, if students don’t concentrate enough on these qualifications, they might fail. Secondly, the violence represented in many of today's news could affect students' performance. This is because, at the secondary school’ age, students are still inexperienced to understand those negative aspects. So the youngsters tend to misjudge the situations and act inappropriately. Therefore, the study of international news would be a destructive and wasteful use of school resource.\r\nIn conclusion, there are convincing arguments for the study of global news into secondary school, but it is also reasonable that it shouldn’t add to be an official subject.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years car ownership has decreased with positive consequences. Life with out cars has its advantages. It is reducing the amount of emissions put into the air, cars are resposible for 12 percent of green house gas. Life without cars can also relive stress.\n\nAn experimental car free community in Germany called \"Vauban\" completed in 2006 is a town where 70% of its residents do not own cars and the streets are completely car free. It's constructed so everything is within walking distance. This means no need for cars, wich means little to no polution. People usaully bike or walk to their destination in Vauban.\"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much better this way\" says a Vauban resident. Vauban is a component of a movment called smart planning. As you can see, a community with no cars is prospering aurgurably better than one with cars. People are less stressed and pollution is heavily reduced. A life/community with no cars has little to no negative results.\n\n\"After a near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air oof the global city.\" france need a solution to reduce the smog, so they banned even-numberd license plates on monday and odd on tuesday. with some exceptions such as electric cars and hybrids. After five days of heavy smog and no cars, smog congestion was reduced to 60 percent. Here is another perfect example how decreasing cars on the street is directly linked to pollution decrease .because they took away cars, pollution was heavily decreased. This is a huge advantage that limiting car usage has.\n\nThe USA has always been a car culture, but things are changing for the better.\n\ncar liscense ownership rates have only decreased since 2005. this means we are putting out less emissions than 12 years ago! we are eqaul to where the country was in 1995. the reasons vary as to why lisence ownsership is decreasing but so far it has its advantages. People are car pooling more and using bikes and walking to their destination. the only negative side of limited car usauge is for the car industry. with less cars on the road, they get less money. But overall people will benifit from this.\n\nLimiting car usage has huge advantages and I encourage you to try walking or biking rather than using your car. You will become more socail, fit, and help prevent pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The story \" The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\" was all about venuse. The story explained that Venus is\n\ndangerous, it's not safe for people to go up to Venus and they are thinking about sending technology to Venus.\n\nVenus is very dangerous. In the story it say that \"venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system\". That is not good imagine a (NASA) researcher going to venus to get information they would not even make it back because of how hot it is. Venus is something were people should not go. Also in the text it says that \"Venus would not allow scientists to float above the fry\". That quot from the text is very important because it is clealy warrning you that it is dangerous.\n\nVenus is not very safe for humans/researchers. In the story it says that \" beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seekinhg to land on its surface\". Just reading that littke sentence you can tell Venus is no joke it is very dangerous. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration would not even send a human to study Venus.\n\nIn the story the author talked about sending mechanical computers to Venus to get the information they need. That would be very smart to send old technology\n\n(Mechanical computers) insted of humans it would be way safer. In the story the author states that \"These divices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II\".\n\nSo I belive that if these mechanical computers did the job back in 1940s then it can do the job now because we have better technology no then we did back then. Also it states in the story that \"modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible and quick but tend to be more delicaye when it comes to extrem phisical condidtions\". If they send these computers they can really get their information andit would save more human lives because then the humans would not have to go to Venus toget the information they need.\n\nIn conclusion Venus is dangerous, its not safe for humans to go up to venus and they are thinking about sending tecnology computers to get information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars have been used almost everywhere around the world to help us with our daily lives, like getting us to get to any where we want in a short amount of time. Though there are many beneifts to having a car,there is a price to pay, such as greenhouse gas. Many of us have been so accustomed to having a car, that not having one seems like it will make life complicated as it is. However that is not necessarily true, because just like there are benefits to having a car, there are benefits to limiting car usage.\n\nFor example, in Vauban, Gemany 70 percent of the family's in the community do not own any vehicle as a result of street parking, driveways and home garages being generallly forbidden, and 57 percent have sold their car to move there. A benefit that has come from cars being banned is some like Heidrun Wlater, a media trainer and mother of two, felt much happier without a car as oppossed to when she had a car she always felt tense.\n\nHowever, Vauban is not the only commmunity that has used a movement called \"smart planning\", which is the separation of suburban life from auto use. The trend is growing in Europe, in the United States, as well as other places. Experts say that the method is an effort to greatly reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. In places like Europe, passengar cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions. While places in the United States that has a high car usuage number is responsible for 50 percent of greenhouse gas emissions.\n\nIn addition to greenhouse gas emmisions, the usuage of cars is causing smog in places, such as Paris, where driving has been ban due to days of having a near-record pollution. However, with the exception of usuage for plug-in cars, hybird, and cars carrying three or more passengars. According to Reuters, research shows that Paris has more smog than other European capital. As a result of the ban, car traffic was down 60 percent in the capital. Furthermore, many delivery companies lost revenue. However, the benefit to ban of the usuage of cars is the smog cleared up enough for the ruling French party to lift off the ban on odd-number plates on Tuesday.\n\nMoreover, just like in Europe, in the United States, President Obama wishes to reduce the amount of greenhouse gas emissions produce. The United States is well-known for its car culture. However, research has shown that Americans are buying less cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as the years go by. Part of the reason for this outcome is the result of the recession, which led to Americans not being able to buy new cars and unemployed did not need the use of the car since they were not going to work anyways. If the pattern of the usage of cars continues the way it's going many sociologist belive it will have a beneficial use on the reduction of carbon emissions and the environment.\n\nIn conclusion, though having a car seems to make life easier. It has a negative effect on our environment. Furthermore, there are benefits to not having a car, such as being less stressed, reducing greenhouse gas emission, and creating a better environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout process building Empire State Building dirigibles dock many complications At building unable simply put mooring mast top building The roof flat therefore dirigible would add stress building They would need modify building framework Then realized dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable would unsafe They ran problem nature At top Empire State Building winds constantly shifted violent air currents Even tether mooring mast back ship would spin around around mooring mast Therefore people streets neither possibly safe There also exisisting law flying airships low urban areas All gave way airplanes even though dirigibles nt work helpedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Yes, the driverless car has its ups and downs but in whole I truley belive this car is wonderful. I think it is a great oppertunity for people who don't always like driving, I can say for my self I don't always injoy driving because sometimes it gets confussing or makes me frustrated.\n\nI think that having a driverless car will show weather people are responsible enogh for stuff like this. Obviously if a driver buys this car just so they don't have to worry about driving, or so they can text and drive, you can tell that they aren't responsible. But there are some people that acually care about rode safty and would treat this car with the same responsiblity as the other car.\n\nThere are a lot of ways that we can make sure people are paying attention, I really like the idea of how we can put cameras up to make sure the driver of the car is staying alert and paying attention to the road. Like the artical said, \"While the driver watches to road, the car watches the driver.\"\n\nWith the cameras we can catch people wh do the wrong thing even if they don't have a driverless car! The cameras will be able to see people who look like they are speeding, they can see people that text and drive, they will also be able to catch the people that are under the influence of drugs and alchol. So there are postivies to the driverless car and making more driver safty to the other cars.\n\nLike i said the driver still has to stay alert to the road, and one thing that will help that is how the seat vibrates when the car is in danger of backing into something. This will help if a person if having trouble see behind the car if they feel a vibration they know to take charge of the car. The artical asked, \"What if the driver wants to drive the car and take charge?\" I think with the vibrateing seats this will helps the driver to take charge.\n\nAnd what I think is most imporant is, \"Who is held responsible if there is a car accident and someone gets injured? The driver or the manufacturers?\" I do know that car accidents are going to happen, weather you mean it or you don't. Even if you are driving a car that isn't driverless you can get in an accident, because there is awlays going to be that one person that drinks and drives or is texting someone, so accidents happen. On this question, I think it would be both the manufacturers and the drivers fault. I think this because, yeas the drivers should be alert to everything that is going on, on the road, even if they aren't driving. And it is part the manufactureres fault because they are the ones that trust us with this type of car, know that there are people out in the would that will take it for advantage.\n\nAt first when I read the title I thaught, \" A driverless car? No Way! I would never buy one of those.\" But now that I read this I can say, that a driverless car would be great to have. So why don't we make it happen, because I know one day i would deffinatly buy one. And I will be one of the people that pay attention to thr road, and have ddirver safty.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this contemporary era, staying in the job market has become indispensable for people and many reasons are underlying this trend along with the pursuit of making money. This essay will discuss the reasons for being part of the workforce of people and why money is on the top of that list.\r\n\r\nTo initiate, we can say that there can be some career goals which compel people to stay in the work market and even make them stay work late hours. Professionals don't leave their jobs so that they can get more and more work experience and award promotions and certain desired positions in long run. Even women are also in this race and not ready to compromise their careers on the family because they also have the motives of getting managerial positions. Besides this, the masses work to get job benefits, for instance, insurance and free vacations with family to Europe and other fascinating destinations. For example, according to a survey held by California University in 2010, it was observed that because of such alluring benefits offered by the corporate sector , people prefer not to leave them. Therefore, in the quest of getting managerial positions along with job benefits, communities prefer to stick with their offices.\r\n\r\nHowever, the most important factor in this regard is money. Folks are working day and night to make more and more money as money is the ultimate need of life in this fast pacing age. Men and women want to have a better living standard ,moreover, they want to give a better future to their kids. For example, according to a survey done in Pakistan, more than 80 per cent of people present in the workforce, are motivated to make money for better living standards. Hence, money is the top reason for this trend.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, considering all the aspects, it can be said that there can be ample factors which compel professionals to stay in the workforce. I completely support this notion that along with many other reasons, money is the most essential and important factor, because of which folks are motivated to work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars have been imagined for a while . The cars have been in the works for years but Google has claimed the tittle for the first to make the amlighty driverless car. The cofounder of Google envisons a future of public transportation where it is driverless. In the end the decision to go forward and have all cars be driverless is a great idea.\n\nAccoring to the article in 2009 a driverless car was tested out and drove more than half a million miles without a crash. Wolrdwide car accidents are a leading reason for dealth. This minumises this with the car tested in 2009. This could be a potental saver of many lives being lost in car accidents. With the creation of the car people on the street would also have a way better navagation system.\n\nIn the late 1950's a General Motors track and car was made baised off a specific concept car that would run on a special test track. The track was baised off an electical cable and also another driverless car at Bekeley where they used magnets\n\nwith alternating polarity. The desire to have a driverless car has been trying to be engeneered for years. Even in the 1950's these smart road system worked quite well, though there would be massive changes needing to be updated onto our current roads which is way to expensive to be practicle, it can be tweaked and made better for safer driving.\n\nOne of the biggest issues with the driverless cars is the actual human drivers involvement in the driverless cars. The human driver is infact required to do some driving if there is road work or accidents; this makes a lot of people upset questioning if the cars are even infact driverless. Along with that comes of who claimes the responsibiliy if an accident accurs? Traffic laws are writtin with the assumption that a human driver is in control of the car at all times. It is even illegal in\n\nmost states to even test drive computerdriven cars. Which brings in the big question of if technology fails and someone is injured, who is resposnible for the accident - the manufacturor or the driver?\n\nWith the cars having someone to navigate through trafic or areas where there is an accident thats just to ensure a safer experience. The computer can ideed direct the car to steer, accelerate, and brake itsself. Alert drivers area neeeded as for the car has been designed to get the drivers attention whenever a problem accurs or it is nessasary for them to take over. They have even developed vibrating seatbelts.\n\nDriverless cars would be quite usefull and should be developed and manufactured worldwide. This car minnumises accidents and could save a lot of lifes. The driverless cars are continueng to be developed and Telsa has even projected a car in 2016 capable of driving on autioptolet 90 percent od the time. This car would change the future making it a safer place for drivers everywhere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Offensive materials anything I m talking libraries whats inside Books music movies magazines offensive someone everyone Removing materials library shelves people veiw offensive material good idea find offensive somewhere someone enjoying Not everyone find book song movie magazine offensive reason books cds movies magazines withheld public library My friends liked reading books like make stop reading like To A offensive find offensive nt read plain simple There wil always one person nt want kid watch certain movie read book good reason remove materials libray shelves let people read want read watch want listen want good reason remove book form libray shelves We right read watch listen anything please Having somebody never seen get book movie magazine removed library find little offensive like someone kick nt lot money Many books world considered offensive least one person one maybe two people right tell anyone read Censorship libraries horrible idea everyone read book listen cd Having chance need read book listen song might change lives better worse choice read want Any material considered offensive offensive people nt want kids read Offensive nonoffensive materials declared people entire country What one man considers offensive another man considers life changing Anything make someone change order chance freedom read ever would like If find book offensive remeber chance read give chance someone elseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The increasing prevalence of furious sports has been a great concern. Owning to this, some assume that the Governments should abolish this type of sports while others contend that citizens should have a right to immerse in any activities, regardless of its high-risk characteristics. In my opinion, the policies ought to focus on participants's assurance instead of banning any sports.\nOn the one hand, the propose of prohibiting extreme sports should not be approved because it is against the democratic society. Inevitably, the participating in risky sports is one of residents' rights. As a result, the intervention of the Admistrations in this case will prevent them from their own interests illegally. Moreover, the extreme sports abolishment may extinguish carreers and dreams of numerous professional athletes and trainees. Therefore, banning is not a reasonable approach in this situation.\nOn the other hand, authorizing freedom in playing dangerous sports generates several matters. Understandably, participants mostly risk their health and lives being involved in these activities, from violence and physical injuries, which means the furious characteristics are posing a threat to their own existences. In addition, the prohibition on those sports can orientate hobby development for future generation on healthy sports, requiring less violence and intension. This, therefore, leads to a more tranquil community.\nFinally, according to my perspective, the Administrations should attempt to handle safety assurance and enhance risk education in those players. Under this circumstance, the residents are equipped with protective support and still allowed to enjoy and follow their passion. This then would be the optimal way to meet residents' demand.\nConclusively, I personally believe the solution is not about whether the Governments should forbid furious sports activities, but about providing them protective assurance and risk acknowledgement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear In opinion computer better thing alot stuff like play games My three reason computer talk online friend homework project fine things Therefore I think like computer need My first reason talking online People talk online talk friend If talk oline figure homework whens meeting time party starts You also talk online friends family moved lives far away around My second reason homework Sometimes need computer homework You need computer print picture report You wil also need type yout report vaction The computer also help fine history book online homework project My third reason finding things You fine old tall You also figure spell big word You fine many hallway take beach places Fine wall In coulsion like learn thing talk online stuff get computerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Ho authorconcludes story come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test hibiscus represents hope adapting circumstances Saeng trying adapt new changes herlife nothing working She found still shaky say words home lest burst tears CAPS Hibiscus makes life easier reminds homeland gives hope look rootbound poor thing rootbound represents Saeng inher new country Unwilling try anything getting scared assoon Saeng mother plant hibiscus Saeng realizes planting going try love new life spring hibiscus Saeng ready blossom start trying accept lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The created author memoir warm inviting In quote authors childhood revealed feels The innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed forms backdrop life warm home Also author says creats happy shows greatful parent s I always greatful parents love sacrifice The last qout wraps feeling life feels It warmth kitchen humble house cuban feast always filled air scent music life loveI never forget parents turned simple house home This quote show love warmth everyone family house bring people together This showed warmth love selflessness familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I understand people use computers good side bad one Do go computer hours every day That could bad I believe computers good thing used properly Hopefully I m done ll see I m coming matters Everyone computer days The problem many people way much They say working handeye coordination reality wasting away lives chair They communicate much rest household make big happy family They say getting important information truth might getting false information viruses Bad people one might hack computer ruin day Things like could people want find hurt Yes computer definitely bad side But good side well That long much It improve handeye coordination play right games And teach things Many websites true information place things nt need see know You helpful It also easy way purchase items You order Most importantly fun So side argument Do think way many people computer Or think computers great long re careful I one pick latter one WhatSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. Doing community service can be character-building for a teenager. The community will also deal greatly from unpaid work.\r\n\r\nDoing unpaid community service can be character-building for a teenager. Through community ,work a teenager can build strong relationships with new people that may have positive benefits in the future. For example, meeting new individuals will lay the groundworkwork for a strong social network. A strong social network may have many future benefits for career placement. Furthermore, it is a great way for teenagers to give back to the community. \r\n\r\nThe community will benefit from unpaid service. Nowadays, there is an ageing population that now more than ever requires assistance. Allowing young high school students to do menial tasks it will save taxpayer money for communities. The more money that is saved the better it can be allocated to more important necessities. For instance, money can be spent on medicine for the elderly or refurbishing care homes. Moreover, there is a strong correlation between better mental health when older people are in contact with younger individuals.\r\n\r\nMany teenagers may not see the purpose of doing unpaid community work. However, in the long run this type of work is extremely valuable. Teenagers will be given the opportunity to build their character and strong social connections for future endeavours. As well as, the community will benefit greatly by having to spend fewer resources on a capable workforce. Therefore, teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My essay on the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is against the development of driverless cars because they are not safe.\n\nCar development has come along greatly, but driverless cars are not the way to go. If someone's driverless car breaks down it will be extremely expensive to replace the parts necessary for function. Driverless cars also would take jobs away from working citizens such as; Cab drivers, Pizza delivery specialists, Postal workers, and Truck drivers. IN THE ARTICLE, it says \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\", but if the vehicle's system malfunctions the commands necessary to announce to the driver to manually operate wouldn't function properly.\n\nDriverless cars can be very dangerous. When one is using a driverless car, he/she is putting his/her and their passenger's lives in hazardous conditions. No one should take that risk.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the story, \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", nasa is looking at what looks to be face on mars. Some people are saying that the face was intentionally made by martians, while others think it is mearly just a natural landform called a butte or mesa. I bieleve that this is something that naturally formmed over time due to erosion and other factors. Its hard to argue against a picture taken by a nasa survoyer. Also, the picture would have revieled any alien civilizations\n\nor structures around the face. It is also very likely that our minds are playing tricks on us, seeing the shadows from a certain angel and at a certain distance.\n\nI that i think that the face is nothing more than a brutte or mesa because of the picture taken by the survoyer. this picture was more in depth and would have revieled any out of place things like small huts or homes and pyrimads. Also, the first picture was taken from a mutch farther distance so the mesa's shadows played tricks on peoples eyes, making them think that it was a face when in all reality, the face isnt there when you get closer to the landform.\n\nall in all, the facts show that this was not aliens trying to send a message or draw attraction. i stand by the claim that this is mearly a butte or mesa naturally formed over time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is a small chance that the picture we saw that appears to be a face was left by ailens. We took multiple photos time and time again and none of them came back the same as the original. Also when we zoomed in there was no evidence supporting that alien built or form the figure that we saw. There was no tracks, no ships, and there was no sign of life.\n\nThere was no evidence left on that planet to show ailens where ever there or left the figure we saw. We have natrual land forms and that reminds us of mulitple things. So there is a possibilty that what we saw use to be a old volcaneo or somthing else.\n\nDetails that we took from the multiple photos we took don't match or even look like the first photo. All the othere photos we took was better quality than the first and none of them look like the original. So there is a chance that the camera caught somthing that with the unusual shadows was a once in a life time photo.\n\nSo what you are saying just doesn't match up with the fact and evidence we have on file. Thats why we beleive it wasnt left by ailens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" tries to explain the several complications of sending a mission to Venus. They provide tons of factual evidence about the geography and climate of Venus. They give many good points, but ultimately fail at their task to convince readers that Venus exploration is worth it. Along with a failed point, this author tends to go off on side-tangents that have minimal importance to the story.\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is an article about the positives and negatives of trying to land a spacecraft on Venus. He has a decent build-up into his first point while giving more and more small facts about our second planet. Venus is likely the most similar planet to Earth, with its rocky surface, hills, and mountains, but it has much more limiting factors to deter us from traveling there. It has terrible weather in comparison to Earth, with acidic carbon dioxide filling 97% of the atmosphere and with heats of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The authors gives plenty of information about this planet, most of it relevant to the topic at hand, and therefore succeeds in teaching you about Venus.\n\nEven after succeeding in information given, the author fails to promote the idea that travel to Venus is worth all the cons. They write about NASA wanting to know as much as possible about one of our closest neighbors, but don't give enough reasons as to why it's worth it. With acidic atmospheres ripping through machinery, technologies don't stand a chance on the Venusian surface. With the science that we have, the most we can hope for is a jet-like expirience, flying several miles above surface so that the pressure doesn't crush us instantly. Venus is additionally prone to constant volcanoes, earthquakes, and storms deadly enough to take out machinery. Given all this information, it seems like the author is trying to deter us from missions to Venus instead of promoting it, as they planned.\n\nThe final point to take into consideration when reading this article is the authors' side-tangents. Multiple times, the author delves into a side-topic as opposed to continuing on with the topic of Venus exploration. They start off the article with two sentences that have no relation to the story, yet confuse readers. The sentences are about Venus' nickname, the \"Evening Star\", and how even though it is a planet, it is still called this. This is completely irrelevant to exploration, as everyone knows it is a planet, and the \"Evening Star\" name is never mentioned again. Later on in the passage, the author rambles on about World War II-age computers and how they functioned properly even before the digital age. Once more, this is slightly irrelevant and does not contribute to the story at all except to add another paragraph instead of focusing on the specifics of how NASA is using them to help with Venus.\n\nOverall, this article about Venus is less than \"stellar\". The author attempts to prove why Venus missions are a neccesity, but doesn't quite get their point across. They provide great knowledge and information, despite being off-topic occasionally. This article is full of great facts, but the delivery is off and could have potentially been a better read if the author was on the other side of the argument, which has more proof to back it up. All in all, the author does not support their idea the best.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, there is no doubt that the quality of the environment has become a huge issue. It is argued that this problem could be solved by raising the fuel cost for transport with the support of authorities. Personally, I completely agree with this solution, the following paragraph will show the reasons why.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, I concur with putting the increase in gas price into action can bring about many drawbacks. For example, residents having private vehicles will have to pay more for travelling. Especially long-term traffic, it could afford not to be spent on anymore. Additionally, the price of freight services becomes ever-increasing, hence not many people are willing to pay for it. The economy may lose its stability as well as being under pressure. Not only travel but also other activities are affected because of the lack of finance, like manufacturing or agricultural activities. Even though people have trouble in benefit from fuel, this policy exerts a positive impact on the environment particularly by reducing gas emissions.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution. the number of car owners will significantly decrease if the policy is carried on, thus uplifting the frequency of using public transport. The higher reduction in means of transport is, the fewer emissions are discharged. To enhance this, the authorities should warn people about unfortunate accidents along with the negative effects caused by private cars and other vehicles, so that they can encourage the use of shared transportation. Making the transport system become a more affordable alternative to private means of transport also plays a vital role. For instance, the government can decline the price of fees for buses, taxis, or underground trains. Citizens could tend to be more attractive and follow the policy more efficiently. All of the above plans would have a massive impact on the environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I consider making the price of fuel for private vehicles one of the most efficient methods to control gas emissions coming into the atmosphere. Besides, governments should apply many other policies to support it and each resident has to take a responsibility for the benefit of our future generationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever heard about a face on Mars? Do you believe it or not? Well some say that a picture was captured on Mars claiming that it is was a face created by Aliens. But on the other hand some say it is just a natural landform on Mars. But in this article I will be proving that the face is just a natural landform.\n\nThe face on Mars is just a natural landform because scientist figured out that it was just another martian mesa. Only a shadow that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. After they dicovered that, a few days later NASA put the 1976 picture out to the public also saying \"huge rock formation... which resembles as a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" On April 5, 1998 team snapped pictures ten times better then the first one but the camera had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. On April 8, 2001 they tried again on a cloudless summer day. The team captured an extraodinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butter messa, landforms common around the American West. So there you have it the mask on Mars was just a natural landform.\n\nSo have you ever heard of the face on Mars? Do you belive it? The face on Mars was jsut a natural landform proven by NASA.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is true that people have increasingly put in extra hours at work and therefore had little time for their families and friends in recent years. This essay will discuss the possible causes in my perspective for this growing trend and also suggests the possible consequences that may result in both personal life and society.\r\n\r\nThere are several causes for people working harder and longer hours in today's world. First, since the world's population is still increasing in huge annual increments, at around 80 million per year, with scarce resources and opportunities, people are having to contend with each other harder than ever before, especially in densely populated areas. This means that if a person doesn't work diligently, he or she will be susceptible to unemployment and not be able to feed his or her family.Second, spending more time working can offer a number of benefits to workers in the company. For example, by leaning into a frenzy in the workplace, a worker can be viewed as productive or being sought after, creating a sense of status for him or her.\r\n\r\nConsequently, the trend can affect individuals and society to a certain extent. Being overly concerned about work can impair other important aspects of life, including relationships with family members. For instance, some successful managers have divorced many times or have not been able to watch their children grow since they don't spend time with their families. In addition, spending too much time in the performance zone could give rise to various mental health problems, such as burnout or stress, leading to productivity loss as a result. Recent research and studies conducted have indicated that productivity decreases for employees who work more than fifty hours per week because of inadequate recovery time.\r\n\r\nIn short, I believe that overpopulation and self-recognition have caused employees to spend longer hours in the workplace and neglect family relationships. This may result in burnout and stress, leading to reduced productivity and spoiling family relationships.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why they invent Facial Action Coding System? Well in my personal opinion this is a good experiment for student, family, etc, because sometimes people do not want show they emotions or feeling, for example: If a girl of school that has depression or personal problems and she do not want talk abaut that with her teacher or consuler and this girl is thinking in kill herself, if the school have the Facial Action Coding System the professor can save her life, that a great experiment, but one thing is all school can't have it because are expense so this experiment can't help to all students or families that need.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, the Dr. Huang says \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" he is trying to said that they experiment is not just for people, he is says that is universal so that mean is for all that have face or that the Facial Action Cording System can read emotions for example:The Facial Action can read the Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa.\n\nIn conclusion the\n\nFacial Action Coding System is a veryy good option for school they can saves lifes, and evit masacres of students with that Facial Action and be a major country.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my honest opinion on driverless cars is that it would be good to own and driver one around town. I feel it would cut down on alot of actccidents, another thing its say in the article that the 2013 BMW can handle driving functions at speed up to 25 mph, but the special touch sensors make sure that drivers keeps hold of the wheel. Also they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver of the road ahead, that requries human skills,\n\nTheres a down fall to owning a driverless car. You might not be able to drive car or there because of the law, theres only a few state that allow it. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Cloumbia they have allowed limited use of semi-autonomous cars. Nother thing there would be new laws needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident or the car can stop working or even worst loss control. Also if the technology fails and someone gets injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufactuer?\n\nMy thoughts of it all now is it really worth it? I say it would take the fun out drivering. Hearing the car engine as you step on the gas pedal or watch the speed wouldn't make your heart beat fast knowing that you did it or would you have a computer do it for you but quite and no sound. Who knows if this a safe thing to do to have driverless cars. To be honest it would take the fun out of it because you can't upgrade your car like you want because all that high tech stuff is setting the car. I love hearing car engines and letting your neighbors or people know that your there. This what I think about itSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If someone where to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program they would need to be able to experince how to take care of the animals, feed them, and change their litter. And take care of horeses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over sea's.\n\nOne reason to join the program would be becasue you could travel the world and go to different places you've never been before in your life! You can even make new friends while traveling.\n\nLuke had gone to the program because he wanted to help people who were in need. Exploring new places: like Greece, China, and Italy. Luke also had fun on board because the other people would play volley ball or baseball. When going on these trips it helped Luke be aware of other countries that were in need.\n\nA second reason is that you could play on the ship, these are some of the things that you could play: baseball, volley ball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and reading. In empty holds where animals had been housed.\n\nA third reason that Luke had done was that. When Luke did the program he thought it was an adventure. It made Luke be more aware of what was happening to countries and their needs. So he deicded to host a internatinal students and exchange visitors with his family.\n\nYou could take care of animals, feed them, and chnge their litter.You could also travel to different places. And play games in animals old empty stalls. Luke however decided to do a host with his family.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am here to discuss with you the topic of the landform on Mars. Yes, it's the one shaped like a human face. I have been getting many claims of it being a monument built by ancient life on Mars. Believe us, here at NASA we would love for the claims of alien life to be true, but we've been given substantial information that those claims are incorrect. There are many reasons why these claims are invalid. First of all, landforms like the so-called face appear on our home planet it would be easy to find; secondly the appearance of a face was given merely by the casting of shadows over the surface over the red plant; and lastly, the intensely zoomed in picture showed no sign of anything that would hint at any type of civilization.\n\nHere on Earth, we have tons of natural landforms created by erosion, glaciers, and the sea. The landform on Mars appears to be a mesa, a landform that happens to be very common in the western area of America. The climate of Mars can be quite similar to that of the West, and that hints to us that because of the hot climate that usually occurs with the sun shining on Mars, this landmark has formed only because of the climate and conditions of the area. It is a reasonable idea to consider and should be proof enough, but there are still some sceptics so I will continue.\n\nSome may say, even if it was a natural landform, how on Earth does it look exactly like a human face? Well first of all, people see what they wish to see. They think it's a face because it is such a fascinating and fantastic thing to think of. \"A human face on Mars?! No way!\" The landform isn't actually shaped like a face, it is merely the shadows that are cast on it that cause the appearance of it being a face. However, upon closer inspection by NASA the landform was revealed merely to be a completely normal patch of land, nothing special at all.\n\nIf all of what I'm saying isn't enough to convince you, I have got one more important point to make. NASA has gone to extensive lengths to examine this landform that has caused such a big fuss among the people. In the April of 2008, scientists set out to explore the face of Mars once more. It was an apparently cloudless day and it was that day that they took the picture. The picture was zoomed in as far as it could have been, so that anything on the face of the planet could be seen. There weren't any signs of life, no tents where extra-terrestrial life would sleep and no proof of anything building this landform.\n\nTo sum all of this up, there is simply just no way that this landform could have been built by alien life. There are too many facts and too much research done on this landform, we know all there is to know and what we can say for sure is, there is simply no way the Face was createed by Aliens. You'll just have to face the facts and wonder how on earth this picture managed to look exactly like a human face. The mystery was fun while it lasted, but now that we have the facts, it is time to lay this case to rest.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State built two floors passengers drop luggage They view floors idea nt work wasted money extra roomsThey started working build attempt make dirigibles dock top wasted alot time money waste altogetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This line chart depicts how much waste produced by three different organizations during 15 years peroid. The waste production was measured by wieght.\nAccording to what's shown, company A procuded the hightest amount of waste in 2000 which was about 12 tonnes per year. This amount gradually decreased unitl it reached 9 tonnes yearly in 2015. While company B waste production wieght around 9 tonnes per year during the peroiod between 2000 and 2004. In 2005 the waste production shows sharp rise followed by rapid fall in the next 10 years. In regards of company C, the company start with the lowest quantity of waste in 2000, this quantity rocketed in the next 15 years. By the end of 2015 the waste of company C wieght about 10 tonnes annualy.\nTo sum up we can say that, each company of the three has different patteren of waste mangement over 15 years period.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to travel the world, and help people? If you join Seagoing Cowboys Program you can do both. This program help the people who have been effected by World War II.We help them by sailing cattle boats across the sea. You should be a Seagoing Cowboy for these reasons in the following.\n\nThe first reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is you can travel the world. Luke Bomberger said that \" The cattle boat trips were an unbelievable oportunity for a small town boy\". Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. He also said that\n\n\"Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But to see the Acropolis in Greese was special.\"\n\nThe last reason you should join is you can help a lot of people. What if you were one of the people that needed help? They would want you to join too! They would not get help if people did not join. Luke said that \" It made me more aware of people of other countries in need.\" Would you want find that awareness too?\n\nSight seeing and helping people are why you should be in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. Seagoing Cowboys are amazing ar'nt they? It would be really fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Would you like to be a Seagoing cowboy? It seems like a lot of fun does is'nt!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "That one person, having the overall say in the United States. The U.S. has ever four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November elections to determine our leader. the process or system that takes place now is the Electoral College votiong system where people elect electors to vote on the President your state discides on. I disfavor the Electoral College system, because of the overall fairness.\n\nPlanning the future, the College of Electoral system has a \"lack of democratic pedigree.\" Having things change for the worse the states elect all their trust into a elector that may not vote for the president the states civilians want. Then the ratio to the amount of civilians to the number of electoral votes are off. \"Wyoming represent 500,000 voters, would have much say as thee 55 representatives from Califormia, who represent 35 million voters.\" Voters have to realize that their political prefrence will not make as much difference in the Electoral College, than in the popular vote. If the population of voters want a certain President, then it makes sense to have him elected. It has the same concept as the \"winner take all\" system, but their will be no faith in an elector that may confuse his purpose of votes.\n\nThe Electoral College avoids the problem of might having the states with no candidates to cast their votes. Also making the President visit certain states with a enormous amout of voters and try to win their votes. This make the President learn about the conflicts of the states and what their problem is to try and compromise it. Some people prefer to have elector, because they want to have a political prefrence. In a proportional manner with equal input into the election, the future would have to change making it popular vote wins. In the point of view of other civilians, other people from other regions may feel disenfranchised. Then segregationist will be equal in input taking out the favortism.\n\nDecember is now here and the elector will vote in a new President. The rules of electing an offical leader may change, but the proccess of being offical doesn't. The President must first prepare a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\" witch causes the President to record all the people and information involving in the election. This is for the record of the Congress and National Archives. The proccess of election should change, because of the overall fairness of the amount of voters to electoral votes. This democratic pedigree will give everyone an equallity to voters and amount of input.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I will talk about Venus or what is known as the \"Evening Star\" and many facts about it. When I finish talking about this article I hope you will get to understand a little bit more about Venus so let's start. I will talk about Venus's relation to Earth and other facts about Venus.\n\nVenus is easy to see as an amateur stargazer but is hard to examine closely and I will tell you a few reasons why. Venus is considered to be Earth's twin because of the equal density, size, and closest in distance. Many spacecrafts have tried landing on Venus but nobody returned from The Evening Star but a few reasons why might be because 97% of the atmosphere is covered in carbon dioxide, the planets surface is 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet. Scienctists still want to discover Venus and find out more about it. Scienctists have discovered that the planet has valleys, mountains, and craters in the planet.\n\nSo I have told you many facts about Venus and I hope if you want to get to know more about Venus then I hope that this article helped you out. Venus is considered to be easy to find even if you are an amateur stargazer but hard to examine closely. So in conclusion Venus is a very hot planet with many tough things for scientists to overcome to finally get to explore what Venus is like, what it looks like, and just to find out more about the planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People should particate in the Seagoing Cowboy program because you could work with cows,pigs,horses, and if you really loved animals you should join.You could meet new friends their because you are gone have a partner .You get to travel around the sea like the picifac ocean and the atlantic ocean.\n\nThe second reason is you can go to China.Caring food for animal over there crossings keep you busy the feed hourses and pigs and cows bales hay and bags of otas had to be pulled up from the lower ships.And you could clean stall.You would get breaks and you would play fun gmaes like baseball,volleyball games,in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\n\nMore games such as table -tennis tournaments, fencing ,boxing,reading, whitting and games also passed time.But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than adventure.It opend the world to him\n\nit made him more aware of people of other countires and their need.\n\nThat awerness stayed with him leading famileys to hosnest a number of inernatioanl students and exchange for many years.In Augest 1945 they recevied thier orders to report to New Orleans\n\nthey arrrived he 14th .They got their seamen papers and borded the SS Charels W.Wooster, headed for Greece-with\n\na cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many books magazines music movies discovered world Some funny sad wierd scary etc And questionable others wheather even nessecary even put material shelf library first place I one one people would question book magazine movie music I believe everyone s voice needs heard somehow take voice away like lose lot voices We entitled opinion When comes things opinionated end something feel strongly There people want express feelings whole world people understand agree feel If take away people connect Some things come across offensive others right say something shared rest world I observed people interests things like music books movies gives people way come together talk something I witnessed concerts everybody seems connect reason see band person like listen Everybodys different likes personal preference something Like Katherine Paterson said But I right remove book shelfthat work I abhorthen also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us I think trying say take book shelf think going nothing left anybody read Then Theres variety materials needed discovered wheather book music movie everyone special type enjoy I think censorship good idea sort material shelf Theses materials keep people connected I think important censor anything give writer voice give voice people agree material book movie musicSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Education plays an important part in one's life. Currently, there is a debate going on between two groups of people, where the first group thinks that the best path to a successful career is to study at university or college after school. On the other hand, the second group believes that it is better to get some jobs right after the school. In my opinion, education is more important than doing jobs, hence after completing school, one should be admitted into the university or college for further study. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give detail explanation in support of my view.\n\nEducation is the key to progress and therefore, one should always give preference to study rather than anything else. If we observe carefully, we will see that the most successful people are the ones who are more educated. In fact, we can extend this example for countries also, where more developed nations are the one, where there are more learned people. A recent study has proved, that people who opt for higher education immediately after completing their school, tend to be more successful than the other. \n\nOn the other hand, some people argue that doing some jobs after school will give someone real life experience about the work environment. In this process, they get to interact with different types of people and culture, which extend their outlook and will certainly help them in the long run. In addition, they also earn some money, that can be helpful for their higher education, as higher study is very costly. But there is a hidden danger to this. Many young people do not know the value of savings and they may end up losing all of their hard earned money on friends and alcohols. Moreover, some people are consumed by the greed and continue earning money and give up the higher education for good. A recent survey has shown that among the people who took a job after school, thirty percent of them give up the ambition of acquiring higher degree.\n\nTo summarize, I think there are some short time benefits, if someone chooses to do some jobs immediately after completing school. But, in order to achieve long term sustainable benefits, everyone has to give priority to higher education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it could become our new home. Venus is often referred as Earth's twin, as it's similar in density and size, and the closest in distance to Earth. Humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on Venus and were unmaned for a good reason as the spacecrafts can only survive for a few hours after landing. The planet Venus is challenging to study but we humans want to learn more about it. Venus was once an Earth like planet, can be the nearest option for a planetary visit, and be studied with new ideas.\n\nVenus was once an Earth like planet in our solar system. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans long ago. The planet Venus would have most likely been able to support life. Today, Venus still has some analogous feature like valleys, mountains, and craters. As though Venus was a Earth like planet and no longers supports life it still is a planet that scientist want to study. As the knowledge of this planet is unknown.\n\nVenus can be our first planetary visit in the near future. NASA has a compelling idea for sending scientist to study Venus, NASA is thinking of scientist to float above the fray. They are thinking of having a blimp-like vehicle to hover above 30 or so miles in the roiling Venusian. A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the dangerous ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Although these is an option it would be difficult to study venus as most light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere and scientist can't go down there and get rock samples.\n\nVenus is an interesting planet to study but it will be difficult to even see the surface. NASA is trying to study Venus by using simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber that simulates the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for about three weeks. Another project that will allow the study of Venus is looking back at old technology called mechanical computers, this devices were envisioned in the 1800s and were used during World War II. Those computers uses gears and levers to make calculations and don't require electronics. Mechanical parts are more resistent to pressure, heat, and other forces. This ideas can be used to study the planet Venus.\n\nVenus is worthy of been studied as it resembles Earth in many ways and the closest to us. Venus is similar in density and size and has similarities to Earth. As humans sent numerous unmanned spacecrafts they have only lasted a few hours after their landing. As we humans want to study the planet Venus we come up with ideas to study it. Although Venus is the closest our knowledge is very little but we know it was once an Earth like planet that could have supported life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When I seven I played basketball team named We playing championship I wasnt game My coach told stay bench game I hard seen player team Without playing team coach didnt put yard I knew I stayed calm patient would let play So minute left game coach told get game win us So I got seconds left I got ball started making shots But seconds left point I got fouled I take technical shot foul line ball rim I made first shot without problem second shot I didnt know I thought I play game patients I got ready shoot I got patient shot think I shot I made team got ball inbound stole ball game If I wasnt patient game wouldnt I wouldnt gotten trophy take homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It cold grade football teams playing different times one one course leaders I happened one The game starts oclock started cheering After getting cold wareing warmups still cold So cold getting kind cranky As half time came even colder We took brake went got hot chocolate Well corse hurry get back bleachers sit well I started walk faster faster I dropped hot cholate front Well I mad Im leader I happy Then started cheering colder started kept cheering leaders decided wanted take warmups pepole want take well take And froze held game Then went home probubly went bedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Electoral college is something that has been around for hundreds of years, and has helped us decide what to do. It is a fair method of electing the president, but it is not what we need anymore. Times have changed since that was established, so it is time we use a good old-fashioned way of voting, and use election by popular vote.\n\nBack in the seventeenth century, when the Electoral College was created to find a balance between citizen voting and majority vote. How it works, is we select the electors representing our state's votes, they meet and vote, and then congress counts their votes. Also, all states, except Maine and Nebraska have something called the \"winner-take-all\" syatem, and that is a \"system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.\"(s1,p7) But now, the citizens in your state who qualify as a voter cast their votes. Instead of that being what our state's choice is, we choose the electors of our candidate, or person we voted for, and then the candidate with the majority votes wins, getting atleast 270 out of 538 electoral votes. This seems very unfair, and in one specific case, it is. In the 2000 presidential election, between Al Gore and George Bush, Al Gore got more popular votes than George Bush; he should have won. But Bush had more electoral votes, and that was where is mattered. So, Bush won that. If Gore won popularity wise, he should have won, hense creating happier citizens, since he won the majority of their votes.\n\nAnother argument, according to source 3, paragraph 23, is that the Electoral College method of choosing the president, \"may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\" This is very important, as we all want a good leader who will support our home state. If, for example, the Electoral College voted on a Democrat, and he won, Florida may not have much hope. Florida is a Republic state, as is most of the southern states; yes, Mr. President would be obligated to help all 50 states when necessary, but the bigger benefits would go towards the Democratic states, and probably his home state. Therefore, voters may not even bother casting in a ballot if the candidate of their choice does not have much hope, or if they think either potential leader will benefit them. So if they do not have much of a choice in the matter, they lose interest and shrug it off, as opposed to if it were popular vote, and every single vote was accounted for. Fortunately, though, this does not happen often; one meesly vote does not do much to turn the tables.\n\nThe Electoral College, all-in-all, has helped us a lot, yes, but it is high time we go back to the popularity vote. It would make most citizens, and many potential voters, happier to know that they are accounted for, and we won't have the potential of the popularity winner, the one the people actually voted for, to lose on account of the electors. It should be the people of America's decision, not a group of government workers, to decide who runs our nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Reading popular It something sitting home also classroom School libraries filled defferent varieties books magazines Some books could arguably offensive people These books taken away library shelves There books people find offensive even continue read rest book Whether sexual even political reader finds offensive read rest book There books describe detail sexual scenes many parents want kids read kinds books This reason remove books library shelves It offensive certain people took shelves would available others read handle kind story Parents kids simply read books Libraries take books away together readers enjoy kinds books There also books politics Majority people stand firm politics budge comes discussing believe right true When reader comes across book way see politics real problem With politics serious matter many people overreact someone tells believe think true really Politicians especially Still many authors write political matters books educate reader points yet seen If reader agree author writing find offensive read book There plenty readers would like read book learn politics If reader knows kind reading offends know better pick book first place Many libraries offer music movies magazines check take home It true many movies lyrics songs could strike someone offensive For reason check Many people enjoy music movies offensive language It something adds song movie People know limits know contents stay away As long readers people like kinds books music keep shelf Taking away would take away number people visit library You could go local library find people looking music section music section reason come library first place The music movie section stay libraries The people checking mature responsible enough know find contents offensive Libraries take certain books movies magazines away people find offensive Some books music contents offensive readers viewers However offensive first person mean offensive next The libraries need keep sections libraries different kinds readers Reading extremely popular activity Readers want variety books music movies chooseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclist affected features setting making feel worse The cyclist lost found dirty water moving rough ground The features setting cool pines rushing rivers however cyclist comes find rushing river refreshing He also encounters terrain change flat road short rolling hills There sign Do exceed posted speed limit also name passage limit mph cyclist going mph Ironically finds picture boy drinking grape juice factory cause hang head misery due intense thirst Finally comes fish camp encounters owner ironically tells hed better using mapSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author talks about a new type of technology that can detect human emotions. This new technology is called the Facial Action Coding System, or FACS for short. The scientists who created this new technology believe it would be very useful if integrated into different aspects of peoples lives. Ones of their most prominent suggestions being in classroom computers.\n\nUsing the new technology of FACS in schools would be very useful. It could sense when a student is having a difficult time with an assignment, or is confused about the lesson being taught. This way it could change the teaching method to one the student understands more. Then it would use that method more often, and the student would be able to learn more. \" \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" \". It could also sense when the student isn't quite interested in the lesson. So the FACS technology could change it to one that captivates the students attention more.\n\nIn sum, using this new technology that can detect emotions in the classroom would be very useful. It would be able to modify a students learning method based on their productivity. This would allow then to understand what they are being taught better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the current world, governments of some countries are spending huge tolls of currency on creative works. Although, well off communities are in support of such acts of authority, most people are on the opposite side and according to them more money should be invested on the development of health and educational facilities instead of arts. Personally I am in the favour of latter and in the subsequent ,paragraphs I will be describing the reasons for taking the side.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, creativity is something that people may admire after all their basic needs are fulfilled while most countries fail to provide all the basic necessities evenly to all their citizens. Despite this fact, many governments intents to provide huge budget for recreational facilities in order to get higher revenue since well of people are most likely to spend on amusement at a high cost. But as an administrative body, they should focus on the even distribution of facilities and make a greater investment in the development of quality education and improved hospitals for all as it is their basic right as citizens.\r\n\r\nAnother thing to add up is that when the govt provides more emphasis on amusement over education or health there is a huge possibility to decrease the overall growth of that particular country which may lead to a crisis in further hand. For example, improper medical facilities may result in a disease outbreak or a lack of educational facilities may lead to unemployment problems a larger scale. \r\n\r\nOverall, governments of all countries should make a balanced budget so that creativity gets attention after meeting the needs of the health and educational sectors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is an ongoing debate about whether businesses should undertake responsibilities or not, advocating the importance of being involved in social activities as a significant action. I strongly believe that although international companies cannot be responsible for solving social problems, small businesses should be accompanied by local communities in curbing certain issues.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost argument is that businesses have a great impact on society as well as contribute to a country's economic posterity. To extend, businesses have a significant role in preventing society from turning into a 'throw-away society' and producing waste resources. Consequently, companies should enlighten local people to be aware of certain issues such as consumerism, capitalism, etc. To cite an example, several businesses published advertisements to inform people about inflation on social media platforms in Turkey. As a result, people did not tend to buy products for the risk of the waste of money for a while. This emphasises the significance of the effects on society while having these companies.\r\n\r\nRegarding another argument, businesses also should take action when natural accidents happen. To expand the idea, while natural accidents such as earthquakes, downpours, etc, they are obliged to help with their equipment, or financially. For instance, the big earthquake, which was measured 7,4 points out of 12, happened in 2023 in Turkey. During this period, all small and international businesses volunteered to donate adequately to the minister of health, and they opened supplies such as cars, and agricultural machines for free to use.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite a belief that people deem businesses do not have any social responsibility in today's world, I am on the side of people who understand the gravity of actions taken by companies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A face on Mars? In 2001 there were pictures take by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft on Mars. Those pictures revealed what many believe was a face. When NASA revealed the picture for all to see they had called it \"a huge rock formation.\" They stated, \"it was formed by shadows giving the ilusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" It then became a pop icon.\n\nSome people think the Face is evience of life on Mars. Theorists say NASA was trying to hide the evidece, where defenders of the NASA budget \"wish there was an ancient civilization on mars.\" So, in 1998 scientists flew over Cydonia taking pictures of what many call the \"Face\" ten times sharper than before. When those pictures were released it was revealed to be a natural landform. But many argued otherwise.\n\nFor the third time in 2001, scientists went to take another look. The camera they had used proved to be much more accurate than the one used in the first Viking photo in 76. The pixels of the camera were 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel. According to scientists if there were any objects in the picture such as airplanes or Egyptian pyramids they would be able to be seen.\n\nIt is proven that the picture actaully showed butte or mesa landform. These landforms are very common around the West. The landform found was even compared to \"the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Which is a dome about the same size size as the Face on Mars.\n\nIt is sad to say that there are proven facts that reveal there is no such thing as the \"Face on Mars\". For years scientists have been studying life on Mars. Even in 1976, 39 years ago!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author trying communicate Saeng never give confidence grow retake test like hibiscus spring Comparing Saeng hibiscus plant last paragraph show grow advance take test its right time The snow melting represents sorrows going away sun shows succeed grow like hibiscus plant bought The plant growing sunlight would represent confidence take test next time getting rid cold brisk snow like negative self esteem attitude The author chose compare Saeng plant last paragraph show related life attitude life change result hibiscus plantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued by some people that university or college education is the most significant gateway to high-paid\n Occupations. However, others think that students should spend their time working and integrating the real world after their high school graduation. As the supporters of each views have their own justifications, I side with the advocates of the second opinion.\n\nOn the one hand, one argument that put forward in favour of pursuing the further education after school\n Graduation is that university education is the key factor to securing a stable career. As a matter of fact, the current job market requires a relevant background in academic competences. Therefore, it is undeniable that the acquiring a university diploma have better employment opportunities in comparison with the high school degree holders. Furthermore, in certain specific study fields such as science, physics or information technology, organisations require a great deal of professional skills. In other words, the graduation from a respectful tertiary education can be a deciding factor in getting a high-salary job.\n\nOn the other hand, it would be naive to think university education can guarantee a successful career path. Contrastingly, there is the greatest number of university graduates who have problem of unemployment due to the lack of experience. Consequently, having work experience and soft skills such as leadership, time-managing and the other interpersonal skills can throw the balance in favour of the applicant. As a consequence, an excellent working experience and the expertise in useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company can put one ahead of\n The game when applying for a competition.\n\nIn conclusion, in my opinion, although university education is associated with beneficial impact on academic\n knowledge of people, people should make sure that their skills and competences reach the demand of a position which they apply in order to be sure of successSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent times, people are showing interest before buying houses or where they staying because they want to know the backdrop about that ownership. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some reasons as well as also suggest the number of ways how the public collect information as well.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as a human it is our nature to learn the behind story regarding a place or building because of our curiosity. Before bringing an apartment or villa public is very keen to know the reason for selling or about previous owners and most important but not in the list this place has any connection with historical events or not. For instance , one of my friends who live in Manhattan, wants to buy a house and after , an investigation he learned that this residence was used as a jail in Second World War. Moreover, individuals want to know what kind of materials are used when this building was built due to rise condo collapse accidents.\r\n\r\nHowever, on the other hand, there are several ways to get information about any plot before buying. Firstly, folks can ask their agents about details of their desired residence because they are well informed and professional. Secondly, they can go estate registration office because they have up to date data regarding any land. For example, in Bangladesh , people can get knowledge about any lands, houses or buildings in their tract registry centre. Lastly, technology is advanced now with one tap , a person can get all important information.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there is no true reason to learn about the history of buildings or apartments and people only do dwellings their past time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "WHAT IS THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE?\n\nDOES THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE WORK?\n\n''THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS A PROCESS NOT A PLACE THE FOUNDING FATHERS ESTABLISHED IT IN THE CONSTITUTION AS A COMPRIMISE BETWEEN ELECTION OF THE PRESIDENT BY VOTE IN CONGRESS AND ELECTIION OF THE PRESIDENT BY A POPULAR VOTE OF QUALIFIED CITIZENS''.THIS PROCESS CONSISTS OF 538 ELECTORS. ALSO EACH CANDIDATE RUNNING FOR PRESIDENT IN YOUR STATEHAS HIS OR HER OWN GROUP OF ELECTORS.\n\n\"WHAT HAVE RICHARD NIXON, JIMMY CARTER, BOB DOLE, AND THE US CHAMBER OF COMMERCE, AND THEIR AFL-CIO ALL, IN THEIR TIME, AGREE ON\"? THE CORRECT ANSWER IS ABOLISHING THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE. PEOPLE AY THEIR ARE THINGS WRONG WITH THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE. THAT IS TRUE. ONE OF THE TINGS THAT IS WRONG WITH IT IS \"UNDER THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM , VOTERS VOT NOT FOR PRESIDENT, BUT FOR A SLATE OF ELECTOERS, WHO IT Turn elect the president.\n\nthese Are what the electoral colleges is and the goods and bads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that the use of a computer in a classroom to read a students facial expressions is a good idea. It would be able to know if the student is confused and not understanding the matter that is being taught, and help them to understand it better.\n\nIn paragraph six, D'alto states that a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. I think this would be very beneficial to the average students life. There are times when a human is incapable of knowing when a student is confused, unless the student says something aloud. The author states that most human communication is nonverbal. This woud allow a way to connect deeper with the students and teach them to the best of their ability.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe the computer in the classroom is a good idea. It will give us more ways to understand how our students are feeling. This way we will not lose any of them along the way of teaching a lesson. I think that America should give it a try in select schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys Program. If you think you shouldn't I will give you two\n\nvery good reasons why you should. But remember it's a once in a life time thing.\n\nFirst of if your the kind of person that likes to save the community or help others this is the perfect job for it. If get you join the club you'll be saving lots of animals, people, plants,and habitats. The cows can be saved by building a farm. The animals like dear, wolfs, and squirrels and all the other animals can be saved by the forest. Sharks and fish and the other sea living animals can be saved by not putting polluted thing in the water. Snakes and the coyotes can be saved by helping the desert animals.\n\nSecond, if your the kind of guy or women that likes to climb, or go on journeys, and swim then this also the perfect club. You'll go climb mountains and sail on huge boats and for fun catch fish.\n\nThose are the two amazing reasons now i'll see you there hope you have fun!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planet's surface, tempertues average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressire is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Marcury is closer to our sun. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Welcome my name is Bianca a scientist at NASA. Many of you may know about the strange \"Face on Mars,\" and how there are countless rumors about the famous being a natural landform or bona fide evidence of life on Mars. While scientists belive and have configured it is in fact a natural landform skeptics just do not agree.\n\nHowever, May 24, 2001 when the photo was snapped scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, since it was common around Cydonia. Just this peticular one had unusual shadows that make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. When NASA uneiled the image the caption noted \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving illusion of facial features.\" They said or reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. In fact it did!\n\nMeanwhile, conspiracy theorists are just glued to the fact that they think the Face is evidence to life on Mars. They say its evidence that NASA would rather hide than show, but reality is us as NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars!\n\nAlthough, few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact conspiracy theorists were driven to prove it was evidence of life. And so on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his MOC or Mars Orbiter Camera snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. When the image first appeared on a JPL web site it revealed...a natural landform. Proving there was no alien monument.\n\nAfter all, skeptics were still drilled to the idea that it is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. Conspiracy theorists said perhaps the alien markings were hidden by haze. So our NASA team on April 8, 2001 the global surveyor drew close enough for a second look. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo!\n\nFinally, after all photos were taken and examined the 2001 pictured demonstrated that what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. Much like most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. So after all the Face on Mars was acutally just a natural landform. All rumors have cleared the air. Scientists have configured!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports the idea of studing Venus is a worthy persuit dispite the dangers because it has some similarites to earth.\n\nThe similarites to eart are that Venus has valleys,mountains, and craters. They want to study venus to see if it is safe enough for a spacecraft to land and get more evidance . NASA has a possible solution to the hostile conditions on th esurface of Venus would allow scientsts to float above fray.\n\nSolar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not be exceed earths levels. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.\n\nTo find out more important information about Venus the reseachers would have to have some type of sample but they cannot\n\ntake samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. To conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would have to get up close and personal dispite the risk. We are not yet able to land and get pieces of the planet because of some risky differences from earth that we would not beable to compet with.\n\nNASA is working on other approches to study Venus, lookig back to an old technology called mechanical computers played an inportant role bakc in the 1940s during worl war 2 these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Systems that use mechanical parts cna be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other forces.\n\nDispite the dangers of Venus because its diffrences from earth , our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by these dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. We need to find ways to protect our self on Venus and be able to stay alive if we were to ever land there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One storys patient one time uncles nonse I wanted play tboy Well like five kids I asked I could play said I patient So I sat waited like hour two atleast felt like I didnt say word whole time I finally got play Thats story patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying and exploring Venus (a.k.a. the \"Evening Star\" or \"Earth's Twin\") is a worthy pursuit to do. It is well worthy and a good exploration job. You can find out so many things you would not have known if you don't go, it is scientifically productive.\n\n\"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth\", as stated in the text, which means Venus has a lot to explore, the information scientists can get would be a crazy amount. The features of Venus can be very similar to Earth's features. Venus has mountains, valleys, and craters just as our own planet that we live on does. It has a surface of rocky sediment. Venus is one of the two closest neighboring planets. The surface of the planet is hot, but like stated in the text NASA is coming up with a compelling idea for humans. It is to make a blimp-like hovering vehicle to float about 30 miles above the fray, while still exploring. The weather is not easy conditions, but it is made well sustainable for humans to travel. NASA has tested some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide in a chamber that has very much similar conditions to Venus's surface and it has lasted for three weeks in these conditions. This shows that if it can withstand the conditons humans and their electronics can too. NASA however, has also came up with an idea to look at old technology that was envsioned around the 1800s called mechanical computers. These computers can sustain lots of conditions, as in Venus's conditions.\n\nThe conditions on Venus are bad but are well being worked on to make them sustainable. NASA is working on many approaches to make travel and exploration ready to go to Venus. The conditions at Venus are very dangerous but with all the new technology travelling there will be easy. The insight scientists can get on this planet for later life is so remarkable it would be crazy not to travel there and get the information we can, maybe life on Venus is possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am for driverless cars although I do see some problems that could be adressed when it comes to notifying the driver and ways to keep the driver alert. Also the safety of the car needs to be exactly the same like a regular car. But other than a few \"kinks\" here and there I think that this could be a great thing for the people who can but can't drive.\n\nMy position on driverless cars. My position on driverless cars is that I'm for them although they could have some issues. Like in paragraph seven lines twelve and thirteen I think that the cars should have more than a announcement about them needing to take the wheel. For example what if the driver falls asleep what would happen if the announcement doesn't wake the driver up? It would more than likely result in an accident or even a possible death. Also the price worries me I think the price will be too high for several to afford it making it hard for the people that could really use it to be able to.\n\nThere are multiple good sides to this though for example teenagers can drive safer because the car does it for them until they need to manualy take over. For elders who can't see very well or can't drive anywhere this would help them to get to places they need to go for example the grocery store and the pharmacy and the doctors. People would get around much easier and much more efficiently.\n\nSo in conclusion there are more good sides than bad ones. Im all for the the developement of these cars. I hope they get out soon. Although I am worried they will be so expensive that barely anyone will be able to afford them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Everyone love computers right Those computers help us anything They also give people facts faraway places And someone live s away chat online What would world computers First I would like talk computer help us anything Computers give us picture places watch videos even see movies free Also check weather going airport check flight time canceled There many things computer help us Now also give facts opinions pictures videos movies faraway places Like one time I going visit terrible storm flight canceled I went computer checked told canceled Also somewhere faraway watch videos place They also maps guide way And also check highway traffic would nt stuck Wow imagine living without computer Third chat online friends family If miss someone want talk websites let Like And also see person attach camera computer s called videochatting And anyone anywhere time In conclusion done computer Helping anything Giving people facts faraway places And talk online There s many know ll need go store get computerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this article, the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, despite the seemingly impossible conditions of surviving on the planet. He/she supports this claim multiple times in the article, saying that,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This proclamation suggests that Venus was once like Earth before becoming so inhospitable, implying that scientists could understand a great deal about Venus's fate if it was studied. This understanding of Venus's transformation into the wasteland it is now would help scientists make predictions about the causes of Venus's destruction, allowing them to warn humanity to not make those same mistakes.\n\nThe last paragraph in the article states that, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavours.\" What the author is proclaiming here is that overcoming the obstacles associated with analyzing Venus is good practice if we want to achieve similar undertakings with Mars and possibly even planets that are even farther away, like Mercury and Jupiter.\n\nAnother point the author makes is that there are multiple ways to safely study Venus without risk. The first would be utilizing a blimp-like vehicle capable of floating 30 feet above the ground for extended periods of time, allowing the crew inside to bypass most of the hazardous ground conditions of Venus and analyze the surface. \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so mile above the roiling Venusian landscape...a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" Not only that, but NASA has been testing how silicon carbide electronics react to the simulated chaotic conditions of Venus's surface. NASA has proved that the electronics can survive for about 3 weeks under those conditions. With further testing and refinement, it's possible that more complex electronics could survive for up to a few months, allowing more time for further data extraction from Venus's surface. \"...some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders many obstacals attempting allow dirigibles dock A thousandfoot dirigible top building held single cable tether would put stress buildings fam The steel frame building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Theese obstacalsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are said to be the thing of the future but I disagree. Driverless cars should not be used by the public or anybody by any means. Too much can go wrong such as; a sensor malfunction, driver could not be paying attention and crash the car, no insureance for the cars. Driverless cars should not be made a thing anytime soon or at all by that means.\n\nAs it states in the passage \"For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" The passage describes a total of eleven different sensors. If a sensor were to malfucntion without the driver knowing it could cause harm to others or the driver. Having one sensor malfunction could thow off the cars GPS location and it could end the driver up in a place they didn't want to be. If a virus or a type of Malware would affect the sensors in any way it would cause every single sensor to not work properly and could end up killing the passengers of the car. Sensors add more danger than they add good to these Driverless cars.\n\nThe passage claims these are \"Driverless cars\" and that isn't true by any means. The car still has to manually be parked and moved through tight spaces. The BMW driverless car can only reach up to 25 MPH and the driver of the car is still required to keep their hands on the wheel. The so called \"driverless cars\" have to maunally be driver through accidents, roadwork, and other tight obsticles. Having that been said the driver must stay alert the entire time the car is in motion, and because of that they are practically driving. As I said early these cars aren't really \"driverless.\"\n\nThe law is another major part of why these cars aren't around the United States yet. The cars are only allowed for test driving in the states of; California, Nevada, Florida, and D.C. The traffic laws must cover then who is at fault if an accident occurs, is it the driver or is is the manufacturer? Insureance would be another topic that would be in the traffic laws. Insurance companies would have to get a policy that cover diverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars will only cause more harm than they will good in today's society. These types of cars should remained banned in the U.S.A. The cars put too many things at risk such as the company, driver, pedestrians, and even the law. The driverless cars shouldn't be part of the near future or any future at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Exploring Venus\n\nVenus is the closest planet to us in our solar system, which means we should explore it. At least, that is what the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" believes. However, he does not support this claim very well as he gives only one vague reason to explore it, he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it, and provides very few actual solutions.\n\nFirst of all, he does a good job of naming the several dangers and obstacles of exploring Venus such as the extreme atmosphiric pressure. The main problem though, is the temperature wich as the author states, \"average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,\" (Paragraph 3). This poses a problem as most metals and other materials melt at such high temperatures. However, the author fails to give very many solutions to these issues.\n\nThe author only provides two solutions to the numerous problems that he previously stated. Those solutions were to stay above the atmosphere where it is not as hot, and to create mechanical computers that were more reinforced. These solutions would be all well and good had he not brought up a problem with the first in which he states \"peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only little insight on ground conditions\" (Paragraph 6) thus, it is not a true solution to the problem at hand. But maybe there is good reasons to keep trying to come up with new ways to explore Venus.\n\nSadly, the author only provides one vague reason for which scientists should still try to come up with new ways to explore Venus. This reason of his is,\"It may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (Paragraph 4). The problem with this is that it does not go very deep into why it being similar to Earth matters. A scientist at NASA might understand any signifigance in that statement, but an average person might not. For that reason it is a very weak argument.\n\nIn short, The author does not support his idea for exploring Venus very well because he only gives one vague reason to explore it and he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it while providing very few actual solutions. Had he named more solutions and reasons to explore Venus it would have supported his idea far more. He named too many dangers without ways to properly combat them, which is why the author's support for his claim was weak.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is obvious that education plays an indispensable role in shaping future of each individual and the society. Whether students should have the right to make evaluation and criticism towards their teachers has become an intense debate. I am of the opinion that while evaluating may be beneficial for learning experience, it is crucial to maintain the assessment to a respectful and constructive degree.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, allowing students to evaluate their teachers can bring certain benefits. One of those is promoting the student-centered teaching method, which is highly appreciated in today’s education. As students have the chance to provide feedbacks, the teachers also have the opportunities to gain more valuable insights into their teaching as well as realizing areas which they have to improve. Moreover, constructive criticism fosters a collaborative learning environment. By having positive communication, both studying and teaching experience will be substantially enhanced.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, it is worth noting that there are also a few potential drawbacks may occur. This approach can lead to the loss of respect between students and teachers. Reverence and collaborative attitude are necessary in conversation of evaluation. If those are not ensured, it will result in a disrespectful and inefficient learning environment. Furthermore, a number of alternative approaches can be implemented in order to prevent unwanted consequences, namely peer evaluation, professional development programs. By doing this, not only avoiding the loss of respect but also addressing teacher performance issues.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, while allowing students to criticize their teachers may contribute to a better academic quality, it is vital to strike the balance to maintain efficiency and reverence during the learning progress.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Globalization is a process of advancement and increase in interaction between the worlds’ countries and people. It locomotion, communication, knowledge and skills. is gaining over the entire world. It has enough world attention needed from international organization in promoting and encouraging human right and freedom , opportunities, economic, social and culture rights.However, there are some countries that are missing out opportunities that are offered and its taken as a big problem to their country. They are the poorer countries that are not connected to the people globally and their people are unskilled due to the lack of knowledge and . They are also unable to trade with the other countries which are richer and larger as they are unable to meet the demand of them. They also will not have the opportunities and the challenges that are .Globalization has also crimes like the illegal drug trafficking around the world through the air, sea and land. This has involved human smuggling and stuffing it in anything they come across. This has a lot of problems to the country and the families of the drug addicts. This will also lead to other crimes like robbery and violence in the country.Another negative side of globalization is the dumping of the dangerous waste to the , sea or the ocean. This will , the water and cause harm to the people .To conclude, globalization has contributed a lot to the world’s but the international organization should also not forget the poorer countries and the countries should also tackle its other negative sides that affect the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face that is on Mars, is just a natural landform. I am here to prove that it is just a natural landform. All of my reasons will come from the passage named \"Unmasking the Face on Mars.\"\n\nI know that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform because, in the passage it is stated that when the spacecraft Viking 1 was circling it was snapping photos when it spotted a shawdowy figure like a human face on a region on the planet named Cydonia. After that though, scientisits figured out it was just another Martian mesa common around Cydonia. Next, on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor Camera snapped pictures better than the ones that Viking took. Thousands of peole waited for when the image would first appear on a JPL web site. The website revealed that it was just a natural landform after all. Finally, in the very last paragraph it said, what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. They are similar to landforms common around the American West. A scientist named Jim Garvin said \"it reminds him of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Gavin also stated \"that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa around the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nSo therefore, all of the reasons stated above prove that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. It formed a long time ago and that is something to figure out in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "For the past two decades we as citizens have been trying to reduce our greenhouse gas emissions, with little or no change. A major conductor of greenhouse gases would be automoblies also known as cars. For example France, cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel made up 67 percent of vehicles in France, which was blamed for causing five-days of intensifying smog that rivaled even Beijing, China; Which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\n\nIn an article \"\n\nSuburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, It tells about Vauban, a town occupied with 5,500 residents in Germany where locals have given up their cars. Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district and Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\" except the main thoroughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge of the community. 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" said Heidrun Walter a local resident of the town.\n\nVauban serves as a great example on how the majority of world should be. The time to take action is now. Reducing car usage can benefit the world around us globally, less pollution equals a cleaner world we live in meaning a better environment. Things like \"A day without a car\" should be global holiday. In \"\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\n\n\" by Andrew Selsky it describes how Bogota, Colombia had a day without cars that helped promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\n\nCars are the main source of greenhouse gas emissions and need to be put on a limit.\n\nThey produce pollution that is not only bad for the earth, but bad for our health as well. A solution to reduce cars emissions is having holidays in which no one can use cars and use other forms of transportation like bus or bike. It is important that we take action and aim for a better, cleaner tomorrow.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affected cyclist many ways One way cyclist sticking map Instead sticking map asked couple old people The old people gave cyclist directions also gave short cut take Thats second effect came cyclist started use shortcut instead main road Thats features setting affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "For me right after i got out of highschool i went to the ,Seagoing Cowboys progam. I got to do things like see the world,and learn how to be a good employee. I got to do things some people will get to do, that is why you should sign up too.\n\nOne amazing thing that i got to try while doing the program was i was able explore the world. I got to ship 335 horses and enough food to feed them to Greece. While in Greece igot to see Acropolis that was truly amazing for me.\n\nJust imagine what it would be like for you. Other places i saw were, China,and Europe,They were also amazing.\n\nAlso While being on a ship i learned good work ethnics being there you had to work,so i cleaned stables and feed the animlas. It tought me skillls that i use in the real world.\n\nhard work is a good skill since now people think they are intitled to stuff, and we aren't. we must work fo our own stuff and thats what theytought me. You could even make it a legacy you could do it aand then your son could do it and so on (etc).\n\nOne last thing don't you love america? by helping me help you are helping your people you are giving back to your country and that will sure make your mom proud ,( less dangerous and risky than the army).I take that back you not just helping america you helping earth. Your cleaning up the mess we as all humans started War we need to help clean it up now to prove to your family and our God that we are worhty of life on such wonnderful planet.\n\nNow that you have heard from me will you reconsider your thinking. Try it out if you dont like don't do it. But you should always try everthing. So please come help in my program Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State Building faced allow dirigibles moor framing building height building passengers would land dock The frame building important thousand feet dirigible moor top building could add stress building s structure frame transfer building s foundation Wind pressure directional change would also push dirigible according adding stress buildingThe building first designed floors allow dirigible dock load unload passengers needed room height The building needed observation room boarding area When building redesigned building reached floors st floor observation room doubled boarding areaThe builders Empire State Building many obstacles design attempt allow dirigibles moor roof including adding height building The foremost problem though framing building It needed strengthened would allow dirigible moor top issues structure buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Click click another information page opens handy trusty smart easy use divices always object Although people starting handy desktops bad wellbeing oposing people strongly think dont get enough exercise outdoor activitys Well computers great entertainment system also vast information supplie even allow socialization friends family I nt understand say So let express love computers Televisions radios payers match internet s great wide spread entertainment system The computer faimly fun movies itunes tracks even websites could make movies Posting pictures sending via email click mouse The internet obvious best reason faimly movie night One greatest pro internet vividsorce information Google wikipedia even dictionarycom greatest information sites As much nature watching exercise healthy fun I would rather learn sunny beach great landscape If looking tie tie even info history report sure easy thing How could talk friend across world germany The answer simple skype fiacebook myspace available handy Many sites fee polocy cant charge money social living friends As personal experience I could talk cousins wqho live due great interaction site facebook And would take time run across town unsure thier even Obviously internet great socializing activity Now I stated opinion wonderful effect internet entertainment system information history world even socializing friends I m people open thier eyes see great uses computerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my personal opinion I would say that the technology to read other people emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not a good valuable. The Facial Action Coding System wouldn't be a good valuable because why would school bother buying the Facial Action Coding Sysytem for their student just to check if they happy or not. Instead of buying Facial Action coding System they should buy school material,books or even online websites for kids to learn,because kids really wouldn't like a computer checking them out if they are happy or sad.\n\nStudents wouldnt like to go to school knowing that almost everyday that there going to check their emotions. Everyday there are people that go to school sad,depressed,happy, and exited and those people dont wat to tell other people how they feel like. Even if those people try to fake smile theey wouldn't get away without it because in the article it say's \"In a false smile,the mouth is streched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle,the risorius. To an expert,faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. So this means that it can detect a fake smile because of our face muscle called orbicularis pars palpabraeus.\n\nEven though it's kinda a cool invention but it shouldn't be for students or schools because sometime students want to fix here emotion by themselve or sometimes they don't want anyone to see that person emotion. My own opinion the Facial Acting Coding System should be used in places like in therapy or somewhere just related to behavior but it wouldn't be a good value in a school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that artificially intelligent robots are progressively substituting humans in the workforce. In my opinion, workers in all menial jobs are more likely to be replaced by AI machines, however, it is very unlikely that this would be the case for the jobs requiring human interactions. This essay will discuss why eventually only some particular jobs are at risk of being redundant.\r\n\r\nIt is argued that machines are gradually replacing low-skilled workers in many industries. Many companies will turn to artificial intelligence, not only because they are obliged to catch up with technology development in order to maintain their credibility in the market, but because it is also less expensive than hiring, training, and employing a human. For example, in some supermarkets machines took over the labour work usually done by humans. For these reasons, jobs that can be replaced with this cutting-edge technology will be replaced.\r\n\r\nConversely, jobs where human contacts play a pivotal role can not be replaced with robots. In other words, there are certain occupations where taking a decision requires considering unpredictable circumstances or events or even the emotions of other people and robots can not be trusted to be in such positions. For instance, surgeons have to adapt continuously to unforeseeable situations during surgeries to ensure the patients' safety which can not be done by programmed robots. Therefore, jobs requiring humans' complex capacities are far from being substituted with developed, automated machines.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is deemed that all jobs will be carried out by artificially intelligent robots in the future. In my point of view, that unskilled labour will eventually be done by machines and automation; however, sophisticated jobs that require specific human skills will not be affected. Ultimately, few human jobs will be safe in this advanced technological world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Using a software to know what students feel like is important because it allows you to find the bugs and fix them. It's good to know what your students are feeling. whether it's happy, sad,mad, fear, or bored you will always know. It's also good because it can tell you what you need to know like did they like the lesson you gave. Were they confused, or bored? shown in paragraph six \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\"\n\nDr.Huang says that Da Vinci studied anatomy to help paint perfect unit action. Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms are different than Da Vinci's because Da Vinci was using his mind to do it. Dr. Huang was using his technology to crack the\n\nDa vinci's code. It's the differnce in time that makes it tough for them to be compared by eachother. Shown in paragraph five.\n\nIts\n\nimportant for students to know what muscles they have in their body. They should be taught this in health classes. Knowing that will help understand how they use their muscles even when they don't realize it. According to making mona lisa smile in paragraph's 7,8,9 shows you the muscles, and the effects that they have.\n\nIn conclusion, Using a software to know what students feel like is important because it allows you to find the bugs and fix them.\n\nTeachers can use expressions from their students to know what they are doing right or wrong. It saves a lot of time so that the kids can enjoy learning, and not get bored, tired, or confused because of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Families should have their homes with their cars under their garage. Car ownerships is allowed, but there are only two places to park. When i had a car i was always tense. But passenger cars they are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. Up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states. Its basic precepts are being adapted around the world in attempts to make surburbs more accessible to public transportation. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs , where middle-class families from chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. They shouldnt even limit cars.\n\nIt will be harder for parents to do what they have to do. Especially if you have a family and walking a distance when your car could be at your house with you. Its not right to have car owner space along with a home because some people cant afford to pay all that money. If people give up their cars just to move. While there have have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking ,planners are now taking concepts to the suburbs. Vauban may be the nost advanced experiment in low-car suburban life. I dont think stores should be placed a walk way on a main street rather than in malls along some distant highway. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill be approved. Street parking,driveways and home garages should be forbidden in this experimental new district .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When you go out in the streets have you ever seen a driverless car? Are you safe with letting your children in the streets knowing there is a car with no need of a driver to drive it? well , i dont argue with driverless cars. Why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver?\n\nOne of the reasons for not agreeing with the driverless car is safety. Safety is a big part the world and specially in the streets. There really is no need for driverless cars because in the paragragh it says \" In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless \" The human driver must remain alert an be ready to take over when the situation requires. If its a driverless car we dont need to pay attention because it would be driving on it own. Yet, the car still needs our help in situations it can't do it self.\n\nAlso, it says in the paragraph \" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert driver.\" So, when driving a driverless car you dont have to steer, accelerate, and brake. But you have to still pay attention. Driverless cars should not be allowed in the streets, An malfunction can happen at any second on the road an whos to blame? The driver or the driverless car? \"The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,\" admits Dr. Werner HUber, a BMW project manager driver. Theres always gonna be a challenge but we dont need more of a challenge when something isnt working in our driverless car.\n\nLastly, Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Which mean driverless cars are not safe, i mean not all cars are safe but really think about it , would you want you child out in the streets knowing the law is letting driverless car drive around? Because i know my children wouldnt be out. As a result , in most states it is illegal even to tesr computer driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars. Manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe. Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault?\n\nMy conclusion is that driverless cars should not be allowed on the streets because of safety reasons , and failures on streets. Nobody knows when, where, and at what time an accident can happen due to driverless cars. All cars always needs to be driven by a human not a computer. Laws are made for human drivers not computers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear town paper I would pick computers There couple reasons I m computers able talk friends online able learn stuff also play video games One reason I would computers talk freinds online So facebook myspace talk friends day wanted What I mean simply typing want say friend receive exacte words ll reply For example wanted say hi friend would look hishers messages reply So able talk friends online one example I computers Another reason I would computers able learn things So wanted learn language would go google something try find fast easy site What I mean goto google whole bunch site s come want find fastest easyest site So abe learn important things like language another reason I m computers The last reason picking computers play video games What I mean borde noone talk get computer play mind numbing game educational game class For example science class played game computer gravity learning educatinola game So last reason I m computers I m computer play games So know I m computers I computers talk friends online learn stuff play video gamesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story endding shows plant comes back blooms go back take test try pass time She knows going tough come back pass test knows like knows plant fight winter come back bloom spring This gives confidence pass test plant come tough winter going As result author ended storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People think the face on Mars was created or a sign by the aliens. Well Im here to prove them that it was a natural landform. It couldn't have been created by aliens because NASA would have picked something up.\n\nMy first reason why the face was just a natural landform, is because in the text it states that '' The sensation was short lived. Scientists figuered it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.'' Meaning that the face was just a natural landform created because they are common in that area.\n\nMy second reason why the face was just a natural landform, is because in the text it states that ''the team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing.... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.'' Meaning the face was just a natural landform and it had no connetion to aliens.\n\nMy third and final reason why the face was just a natural landform, is becuase in the text it states that '' What the picture actually shows it the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. It reminds me most of middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. Meaning that the face on Mars looks like landforms here on Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, the face was just a natural landform. The face was not made by aliens, it was just a natural landform, which are common in Cydonnia where the face appeared.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This sounds like a great idea because teachers wouldn't have to worry about getting around to everyone in the classroom, re-teaching the same lesson, trying to figure out what activities/ lesson can help the kids understand more but this could aslo be a big distraction.\n\nI think that the use of this technology to read students expressions is valueable because whatever lesson it is being taught if the student is bored or confused it will modify the lesson. I think this is very useful because as a student i know that when a lesson is boring or not interesting its hard for me to pay attention or get focused. So the fact that it could tell that im not really into it or getting it and it'll change itself to something more \"my style\" is great. I know that teachers can't be everywhere at once to help or make you understand so when you're at you desk with your hand up waiting on the teacher to get to you probably frustrated by the now the computer will sense it and help you out before your teacher has to see you. This also helps by saving time in the class rooms because somethings not every student will get right away and instead of the teacher re-teaching it over and over the computer will see that your not getting it and change the lesson to something a little more complex, that you get and understand.\n\nNow as much as i am with this idea, a downfall could be students getting too carried away with it. Even though we are in high school kids can still be a little immitaure, this could be a distraction to the kids. They'll try to play with the sytem by making the wrong facial expression on purpose to see if the computer could guess how they're feeling. This could take away from valueable class time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story I think author concludes paragraph story Saeng saying comes back next sees hibiscus bloom take test feels place use arrangements living feels uncomforatable thinks able bloms tow hormanSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driving has many perks to it, its easy, gets you there faster. But do to all of this driving there are also downsides to it. Driving benefits us, but not driving also has its benfits as well. The advantages of not driving are high, such as less pollution, you save more money. And to be honest it might just be the end of car cultures. People in an upscale community in Vauben, Germany are giving up their cars. Why? you might ask. Because street parking, driveways, and home garages are forbidden in this experimental new district. If you do own a car, you will have to pay a fee to park it on the outskirts of town, and quite frankly many people can not afford that, so they do it the natural way. Which in turns benefits them because they get plenty of exercise.\n\nContinuing on, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the city. The air was so foggy because of the fuel that they used which was diesel fuel. Another perk of limited driving use is that less pollution gets into the air. All of this driving puts smoke into the air, and makes it a very unhealthy environment. Breathing in all of that really affects your lungs and so forth. The smog cleared enough monday for the french party to discard the ban for that day until next time.\n\nMany countries are trying the ''car free day''. Such as Bogota,Columbia,millions of columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during car-free day. The goal was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. ''Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", said businessman carlos Arturo Plaza. Many countries are excited about this and say that its a revolutionary change. If many people try this out and see what the benefits are, then they will know that maybe just maybe that this might be best.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator you should chaange the voting rules from Electoral College to popular vote because the Electoral College is to confusing. Popular vote is a more efficent way to vote for the presedent.\n\nFor example in the article Does the Electoral College Work it says that the Electoral College votes by people who are profetionals and popular vote is by the people of the United States of America. This quote explains how the popular vote is better because it is decided by the people not the government.\n\nAnother reason why you should change the voting rules is that the Electoral College doesnt even work. In the article it explains how''under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the presedent ,but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.''This quote explains that the electoral college has nothing to do with the people the vote is not decided by the people why have any people to begin with.\n\nI just think overall you should consider the tip and change the voting rules.\n\nAnother reason why the electoral college has to be gone is it is un orginized. In the text ''The indefensible electoral college why even the best-laid defense of the systeme are wrong.''the quote explains that even though both systems of voting work,popular vote is the more dominant rule.\n\nIn conclution you need to change the system for the people and overall just make voting a lot easier.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine when cars will be nothing but the future. This is actually kind of easy to imagine, but also very mind-blowing to what the future may hold, no? Well, driverless cars are future and it can only get better. They are a big advancement helpfully to our world, and I am definitely for the development they will bring to us and the world.\n\nFirst of all, driverless cars would become just like a public-transport taxi system, only better. These cars can better improve how we drive, more economically. The smart cars now only \"use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\". This will help the environment greatly, because with all the pollution from old cars and diesel semi-trucks, our air quality will not be so good if we do not do something to make it better. These driverless cars will help the environment, and it will not add to the problems we have now. With the cars only getting better, the future driverless cars will only advance more as car manufacturers figure out ways to make travel easier.\n\nSecondly, the driverless car would include combinations of input to help the actual driving going on on the road. These inputs are needed to help \"mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". What is the point in a driverless car if it has a driver? There are already cars in our world that can park by themselves and have rear cameras to help with views, but not entirely a car that can do every bit a human can do. The tyes of inputs and sensors the driverless car would have are: position sensors on wheels, sensors on the roof, a video camera for rearview mirrors, a GPS reciever, and a laser that can constantly show us a 3-D mdoel of the car's surroundings. Without all of these features, the car wouldn't be able to actually drive on its own. These sensors will help the driver, (who won't actually be driving) and the car do what it has to do to detect every movement around it.\n\nLastly, these driverless cars are a big safety improvement to our world. Safety in cars is huge in our world today because we use travel more on big, open roads and highways. Many accidents happen on the road, and when accidents happen, it can be costly and harmful to the driver, their car, and their income. While one is in the car, we always want to make sure we get to our destination without any problems. Car accidents do not happen very often to people, but it is also not entirely rare. The features of the driverless car will ensure safety while driving at all times. Many people still text and drive, which is a big concern while on the road for you and for others also driving. When you have a driverless car, you can do what you need to do, and that includes sending a text. You will have a less risk of getting into an accident. Although the \"non-driving driver\" will not have to actually put their hands on the wheel because the car does all the work, the driver still has to be focused on the road. The driver must stay attentive to his or her surroudings because if there are road hazards, the driver must come into play and actually take the wheel until the road is free of hazardous conditions. The driverless car will watch you and you will remain watching the road. It is like a team effort, even though the human only comes into play when they are needed.\n\nIn all, I am all for driverless cars and its development that comes with it. The cars will be more economical and useful to our public-transport system, the features and sensors that come with it will help the cars drive more smoothly and efficiently, and these cars will better help the world's safety crisis while in a car. Driverless cars are the future, and we are driving ourselves slowly, but surely, onto the road to a better time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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