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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper opinion effects computers people obese people People tend get moody seems computers addictive I think computers huge effect people The nubmer one thing people every year becoming obese leave chair sit inside day Also get lazy nt want get order food delivered right hause The next idea get enought exersise nt sit day nt move But move get something eat go get phone This limit kids adults hours less computer time day next reason people computers tend get Like one second happy get computer sad They get couped inside whole day They nt see enough people nt see If hour day moody ness would change People need lot exersise maintain weight muscle last receson computers effects people people tend act addicted computer Like playing game day nt realize get addicted stop playing day People need leave computer something else like ride bike play sport In conclusion I trying tell taht good people stay inside day play computer hazardous health putting hgih risk obesity So please listen ideasSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When one reaches 16 years of age, they have the ability to drive on their own in the streets but now, will one really need a driver's license? Google is in the process of making their own self driving cars to eventually put them out intothe world for everyone to have. These cars may have its good points but it also has its bad points. Ultimately, I think developing these cars are a bad thing to do. These cars may cause more lack of effort but also they cause danger to citizens, danger to the driver, and more problems for the company. You could even say one crash could cause an explosion.\n\nIn the text of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author talks about the point of cars being developed by Google that do not need drivers to drive. The gives some positive aspects of the idea, but also negative. I think the negative rules out the positive. The text says \"even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or manufacturer?\" This point brings up the problems of the manufacturer/company, but also brings up the fact that an incident can in fact happen. \"In the case of an accident...if the technology fails\" are the points that show technology is not perfect, it has its flaws, so having technology take the wheel is just as bad as a person and maybe worse. \"traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars.\" States even say that the driverless cars must be restricted because of lack of safety. This quote shows that the driverless cars are overall not safe to civilians and the ones who, apparently, ride in it.\n\nDriverless cars may sound like a benefit but technology has the same what if risk as a person does. In the year of 2015, there has been more car crashes then there has been by far and that is because of texting and driving. If people were not at the wheel and driving there would not be anymore car crashes, right? This would not be true, glitches, hacks, and theft has happened this year, as well and all 3 things happened because of the lack in control over technology; we can not depend on it. If we do, there could be even new ways to cause destruction. Hacks on cars and theft of cars to cause more escaped criminals. The more ways to build and create, the more ways to destroy and wreak havoc.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are more dangerous than constructive based on the negative aspects of them. The driverless cars may be smarter and better but also has more of a percentage rate to get into accidents and cause more trouble. While Google develops so does the criminals who hear of them. There are not only unnatrural ways of havoc, there is also natural ways, some that even scientist can not predict; the volume of a storm.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock nature law airships flying low urban areas The greatest obstacle builders faced nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Also back ships would force dirigible spin around forceful winds Then using lead weights Empire State Building would dangling high people streets safe The next obstacle law existed airships flying low urban areas This made dirigibles illegal fly buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lots of people in the world use vehicles in their daily lives but do they know what they are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and fifty percent in some car intensive areas in the United States. Thats one of the reasons why limiting car usage would be so great for us. Another great advantage we would have by limiting car usage would be lowering stress and lowering air polution as well,\"said Carlos Arturo Plaza.\" Also limiting car usage would make cities denser, and better for walking, those are the advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nFirst off, limiting car usage would reduce greenhouse gases. Our cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and fifty percent in car areas in the United States. That is an unbelievable percentage of greenhouse gases in Europe and an unreal percentage here in the United States. Lowering that percent would be great and alot of people would be thankful, and that would be an advantage of limiting car usage around the world.\n\nAnother advantage of limiting car usage would be lowering stress and at the same time lowering pollution. If you limit car usage and just stop driving a car, grab your bike and go for a nice bike ride, it would be a good thing if you are stressed out, it will take your mind off of things and allow you to ease the stress and just relax, and while your not even thinking about it, you wouldn't be polluting the air because your on a bicycle. That is another great advantage towards limiting car usage.\n\nAlso limiting car usage would make cities denser, and allow more walking room for people to walk around instead of having to dodge vehicles. If we limit car usage, we could probably build and make more parks where people could walk and exercise, but if we have alot of vehicles driving around, how could we do that. So therefore, limiting car usage would allow us to do that and there's another advantage of vehicles being limited.\n\nNow do you understand how limiting car usage has its advantages? Here i'll let you know again. One it will reduce greenhouse gas emissions by alot. Two it can even lower stress as well as when your not even thinking about it, lowering pollution. Not driving a car and lets just say you go for a nice bike ride, that will lower your stress, it takes your mind off of things and allows you to relax, and at the same time your lowering pollution. And finally, it will makes cities denser and allow more walking room for people. Those are the advantages of limiting car usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes I am with the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions.\n\nI am with it because it would get to know the students better and make them into a better person. It could also help you be on task more and not be distracted by the little things you see.\n\nI see it could help from these evidence in the artical because right here it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". In that sentance it is saying that a classroom computer is knowing when a student is confused or bored I think if a computer knew exactly when that was I think it would be pretty cool. Going into the computer and the computer knowing what you are and who you are and how you deal with your life is pretty rare to do.\n\nAnother way I strongly agree on is for instance you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there face right?\n\nof course but image a computer doing the same thing. Dr. haung ovserves that artist such as da vinci studied a human anantomy to hlep them paint facial muscles precisely enought to convey the most important emotions. Others think on how you feel the first day is how you will feel the 2nd day and then its just gonna keep going until you need or get help. What if somebody was getting mentily abused from somebody cruel and rude and they did not say anything to anyone. Well thats why we got the computer to help us out and it would tell us how it really felt on who they are.\n\nHelping others out could really benefit somebodys life in alot of ways. Techology would really need more and more advice from other companys. in paragraph 3 it says \" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face and all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\". Im that sentace it is talking about more of the muscles than computers.\n\nThen test on the humans to see if they are showing \"emotional expressions\". You may be able to test there musscles and if they are hard and twich alot it shows that they are lieing or if they just relax and let it go through like you should it would show the truth.\n\nA conclution of this is that my opinion i think we should have it around earth because I think we as people need to help others if they are having bad problems with there lives so thats why we need the computer to test them out and see how they are doing with it. Dr Paul Echman has classified six basic emotions of happiness , suprise , anger , disgust , fear or sadness and this computer could tell you what you are if you would do the test.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driveless car are not good at all because we will have nothing to work for. But at the same time there are postitive effects and negative ones as well . Driverless car would make a huge change in our world today. There would be alot less bad things happening if they were driverless. People wouldnt have to go through the trouble to push the gas to make the care go or anything.\n\nThe postitive effects of turing to driveless cars are very high. People want this to happen so they are going to try to find all the positive thing about it and let other people know. The cars that Sergey Brin are creating would use half of the fuek that todays taxes and offer more flexibility than a bus. The cars have been driven more than half a million miles without crashing but the thing about that is that google care arent truly driverless. The cars still alret the driver when they are pullin gin and out of driveways or dealing with traffic suchas getting aroung roadwork and accidents.\n\nThe good thing right now is the cars are not completely driveless becuase you can steer, accelerate, and brake themseleves, but they are still designed to tell the driver that the road ahead requires them to something like get through work zones and around accidents.\n\nThere are many negitive thing to having driveless cars as well such as making sure that the automatic will happen at all times. What if what its suppose to do doesnt work out and then you do something else and you hurt someone or yourself.\n\nThe person would have to stay alert at all times just is case it doesnt do what its suppose to do. Even though its a drive less car you still have to keep your hands on the wheel at all times so you could not do anything that you wanted to do. They said that you had to take over when the car gets into situations and i dont think that is fair becuase its suppsose to be all driverless.\n\nSome thing make me think that driveless cars are good but I don't agree at all. I feel like you have to put in just as much work as you do now to dirve the \"driveless\" car. You shoudn't have to keep your eyes are the road at all times because its suppose to do what it is suppose to do when its happening. The article said that it will cause less wrecks and i disagree becuase if people are doing what the are suppose to be doing you can get in a wreck so easily. I think that we should be able to control it whenever it is needed. If people dont want to us the \"driverless\" car they should be able to have an opition to turn it off and on.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable. This information could help in many situations. This information could let the teacher know when a student doesn't feel good or is feeling angry or sad and maybe better teach the student or get the student emotional help. This could let the Teacher know when the student is happy and help the teacher ways to keep the student happy and working hard. This information could help stop many bad situations caused by emotional distress in the classroom.\n\nFacial Action Coding System is ver valuable in the classroom. This software could help you know when a student is angry or sad. This information could help a teacher find new ways to better teach a student. With just the slightest knowledge of how a student feels in a classroom could help a teacher find ways to cheer up the student and find ways of teaching that better fit the student. Facial Action Coding System would effectivey open up ways of better understanding the student. The author says \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movement\" which could be a helpful way of determining students needs in the classroom.\n\nFacial Action Coding System's way of understanding each students emotions can help with teachers keeping students on track and working hard. The software could help the teacher recognize when the student is happy. This information of the students happiness could indeed help the teacher come up with more ways of effectively motivating the student and getting them to work even harder. This software would better help the students and teachers to effectively make sure everyone is successful in the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding Software could help stop situations in the classroom. This software could easily tell the treacher when a student is feeling extra sad or angrier than usual. This information could help the teacher get the student emotional help such as a therapist, counselor, or medical help. For example, in the cases of school shootings, 90% of the time the reason these incidents happen is because in the classrooms people don't recognize how a student is feeling and that student doesn't get help. With this software it keeps people aware of others' emotions in the classroom. This could make it easier to get the student help and ultiately stop the possible outcome. In situations where fights break out, it is often because the teacher doesn't recognize a students anger and can't effectively calm the students down in time and prevent the fight. With the Facial Action Coding System a teacher would be able to see when a student is angry or a bad situation is about to happen and the teacher could quickly make sure the situation is avoided.\n\nFacial Action Coding System would be very valuable in detecting students emotions in the classroom. The software could helpe boost the students learning experience and help boost the students performance. The software could also help the teacher recognize students emotions and help find better ways to teach the students. This software could even be the one thing that prevents a major tragedy from going down. The Facial Action Coding System would be greatly useful and effective within the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions, i believe that using this technology will not be useful in schools or for students in a classroom. There are many reasons why this system can not be used in a classroom. Someone can easily hack into the system, it would not be really useful in a class and we do not need computers to do the work we can achive on our own.\n\nFirst off, this system probably does not have a secure way of making sure nothing goes wrong. Someone can easily hack into the program and make everything go crazy. Someone can shut it down, or even find a way to destroy the system. So many things can go wrong in this proccses. Technology today is not as strong as we think. Once its out in the cloud, its out there. A hacker can get in and record either the person or lessons or anything and put it out in the cloud. Which is not a good thing.\n\nSecondly, it would not be useful in a classroom. Teachers have a specific way of teaching and a specific way of giving their students the information they need. In the text the author states, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" While this might sound useful, it wouldn't be as effective as a conversation face to face. Where the student is actually getting one on one time with a teacher and actually understanding the lesson.\n\nLastly, i believe that we do not need computers to do the work we as humans can achive. The artical states \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive 'calculation' everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" They already state that we can do what the program is doing, so why do we need the program. There is no need for the program. There is one pro to this program as well. The program can help the lesson become more suitable for the students and their different types of learning styles. Again, there is no need for the program if we can do the work ourselves.\n\nIn conclusion, this program will not be useful in a classroom setting. There are a lot of situations and terrible things that can happen. It would not be useful in a classroom enviorment and lastly we truly do not need it. We can achive the goal on our own and not have a computer do it for us. No, i do not think this program would be useful in a classroom or any school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the industrial revolution, people are using fuel to live and bring the disaster environment to plants and animals. The number of plants and animals is dramatically decreased by the dispearling nature environment. Although, the damager of environment is irreparable, some people still do something to save the environment. \n\nIt is true that the extinct species never back our life. For example, Dudu bird has been endangered over 200 years, and no one sees it again. So it is pointless to make a change for the extinct species. However, the change people making for our planet is never too late to save other endangered species. \n\nThe best way for saving the species living on our planet is every individual and government working together to improve our environment and make the action such as reducing plastic goods, recycle garbage and decreasing pollution from industries. I believe that if All the action of benefit nature environment can keep into the long term plan, the endangered species will survive in the near future. Furthermore, the climate change will be controlled and the diversity of animals and plants will be recovered, whenever we make our planet better.\n\nAlthough, some people think that the change we making for the environment cannot bring the extinct species back, I prefer that improving our environment to protect the endangered creatures by government and people together will avoid the disaster to plants and animals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author decided conclude story paragraph show Saengs determination adapt new life In third paragraph second page author writes Saeng looked white bud hand small fragile That atleast could hold onto After failing drivers test Saeng feeling foreign alone She desperately looked flower reminder homeland Vietnam The flower brought back comforting memories bought one plants returned After discussion mother Saeng understands must cope new home much like flower must adapt new surroundings By concluding story stated sentence author informing reader Saeng must blossom new home order well She still needs time flowers needs time plant roots groundSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author claims that investigating Venus's surface is worth our time even tho there are many dangers there, because Venus at one point in time may have had simliar feature that Earth does such as water, Venus has similar geological traits, and Venus is sometimes the closest planet to Earth making Venus a likely trip.\n\nScientist believe that one point in time Venus had oceans on its surface along with other life forms such as vegetation and maybe alien life. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" It would be a ground breaking discovery to man kind if we were able to discover a new form of life on another planet.\n\nUnder Venus's thick atmosphere and its giant corrosive clouds, the geological formation of Venus is similar to our planet. Venus has craters and mountains like we do on Earth.\"The planet has a surface rocky of sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" With such similar features to our home planet it makes Venus a likely option to send mankind to visit.\n\nDuring Earth's orbit, there are points in time were Mars is the closet planet to us and other times when Venus is the closest planet to us. Since Venus is closer to the sun it orbits faster than Earth while Mars is farther from the sun it has a slower orbit. Since Venus at points in time is the closest planet makes it a likely option to go visit.\" Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" With Venus being the closest planet at a given time makes it an ideal planet to study.\n\nI believe the author proves a valid point on why we need to travel to Venus, because Venus could have had really similar features to Earth at one point in time, Venus also has similar geological traits, and Venus is sometimes the closest planet to Earth. With that information given to us by the author makes the idea of studying Venus a worthy pusuit despite the many dangers there are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have lots of ups and downs, but in my oppinion with some work it could become something huge.\n\nThe first example of why I think these cars have alot of potential is they would make driving so easy. While the car is focused on the road you could be doing really anthing else. You can be on your phone, or eating or even attending to your baby in the back seat. The car will allow you to just sit back and relax without the hastle.\n\nBut some say that the car is unsafe. People are very timid about change when it comes to there saftey and there familys saftey and even just change in general. Some may say what if a car swerves over at you or what if theres an accident or the car stops working, but thats all a what if. But the car would do it's job. The car has a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted by the rear view mirror, four automotive sensor, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor to ensure that the car is ready at anytime.\n\nAlso the car would be able to drive even in the most tough times. The car will be able to drive in traffic and work zones. Instead of having the stress of trafic jams you can watch a movie or do whatever. And the entire time the car will be watching every move anthing makes around to ensure your saftey at all times.\n\nIn conclusion these are the reasons why i support driverless cars and why they will change our lives forever.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders faced many obstacles attempting build Empire State Building use dirigibles dock One obstacle architects engineers faced dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium NUM dangerous hydrogen highly flammable Another obstacle faced winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents NUM even though dirigible would tied mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast NUM Another problem due winds would wind would blow dirigible onto sharp spires buildings area would puncture dirigible s shell NUM A last example obstacle would law stating airships flying low urban areas NUM illegal Even nt law making illegal ship ever tie building even approach area NUM attemption even trying would dangerous people around buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limited car use has dramatically reduced the amount of enviromental toxins in the air in some cities. Paris, France and Bogota, Colombia have banned car use for a day and have seen the air clean up just because very few cars were being driven. One community in Germany even banned the use of cars in general. The enviroment is in dire need of help and we can help it. If everyone took one day out of the week where we did not drive anywhere and on the other six days we drove as little as possible and carpooled the air would be so much cleaner. Not driving also has added health benefits, walking or biking everywhere is a good way to excersise.\n\nA new kind of suburb has been created in Germany where cars are not allowed. There are a few roads on the perimeter of the city that allow cars to be driven but besides that residents walk or bike everywhere. There is little pollution in the air and residents are able to take a tram into neighboring cities. Seventy percent of families do not have a car and fifty-seven percent of families sold their car to live in this community. If you own a car in this community you can buy a parking spot for forty thousand dollars. One resident, Heidrum Walter, said, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier that way.\" Lack of cars also gives parents peace of mind, cars are still dangerous machines and in this community their kids can play without their parents worrying about them getting involved in an accident.\n\nParis' pollution rates have been rising over the years and hit almost record level highs for a few days, so in order to reduce the amount of smog in the air there was a temporary car ban. One day anyone who has a even-number license plate was not allowed to drive. If you were caught driving you had to pay a fine that is equalivant to thirty-one U.S. dollars. The smog miraculosly cleared up quickly and people were able to drive again. Another city in Columbia, Bogota, holds a \"Day Without Cars\", once a year. Citizens are allowed to use public buses and taxis during this day. The government is trying to advocate for public transportation and smog reduction. Most people walk on this day and even though it has rained on this day before citizens participated just the same.\n\nWhen you choose to walk or bike everywhere it not only makes an impact on the enviroment but it also reduces your risks for dieseases like obesity, heart disease, and diabetes. Obesity rates in America are a lot higher than they should be and that's partially due to lack of physical activity. By walking or biking to work or to school you reduce that risk because your heart rate is up and your body is moving. Of course if people stop driving obesity will still exist due to our horrible eating habits but it would help a lot. If there was less driving it would also be beneficial to our health because we would be breathing cleaner air. The air we breathe is often times highly polluted and if there was less cars not as many deadly chemicals would be in the air. There would still be cigarette smoke and factory pollution but it would be dramatically less.\n\nIf people in America reduced their driving time it would be better for the air and better for us. Many other cities have proposed an annual day without cars so I think cities in America should start doing it. We only have one world and although we have done a pretty horrible job of taking care of it, that does not mean we can't attempt to fix the mess we made.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Safety reasons weather conditions government laws defeated purpose mooring mast top building For example many dirigibles used time contained hydrogen instead helium hydrogen highly flammable densely populated area NUM The builders realized smart Furthermore The winds top building constantly shifting violent air currents NUM This created dangerous situation ship would swing around mast Lastly obvious obstacle government law prohibiting ship even approach building existing law airships flyinging low urban areas NUM The whole idea built something great slowly dwindled The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles many attempt allow dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "to achieve a good successful career, It is believe that going the university or college is the best route. While getting a good straight after school is also a good idea. This essay I would tend to studying at university or college\n\n.\n\nOn the one hand, there are several reasons why people think that starting work straight after school is a great option. Firstly, young people will have work experience, it means they have time to strengthen their skill. Moreover, young workers have the ability to deal with disgruntled customers politely. It is therefore may agree that company will pay attention to staff working experience and heighten their future. Secondly, many young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their study may save their money. Because there are some schools have a high fee which exceed their financial level. If they choose the suitable major, they might not need to go to the university.\n\nOn the other hand, I believe that the option to continue studying is me benifical. First of all, learning more and more let them have a deeper about level of expertise. Futhermore, it might enhance the income than the others who do not have. For example, a technologist has a significant income. meanwhile, an individual who work as employee get a lower one. The second, companies demand people with high education. The job market is becomming increasingly competitive. Therefore, if our dreamwork require that we have to get Master's degree, continuing studying is completely correct. For instance, to qualify for lecture positions at Malaysia public university, MA degree is an indispensible level.\n\nIn conclusion, although it is partly true that going to work straight after school in some cases, I still support the view that continuing learning at the university aor collegeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I ve heard taking survey see people believe computers Well I m someone talk family friends sites like facebook myspace aim They also exercise internet go youtube find different types positions Today people use computers like adults anfd children use computers means kids today athletic sports The adults use computers work ability schools At newspaper places need computer type daily papers s compers ill type work As people get home wherever nt get daily paper go online look For students computers important us get talk friends need look something go internet In schools really big books different classes need bring home And s bad back schools came books online For people love sports look favorite team see weeks game There also vertual sport games play computer When first move somewhere oout town go google see good town live good school system would want child go But man things online computers So thanks letting help decisionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I really like the fact technology has changed over time by smart people who have the time and committment to make our community a better place. It is really hard to tell emtion sometimes. There's sometimes people who have a relaxed face, but is happy. I totally agree with the computer technology to tell emotion for paintings and illustrations. Although, I wouldnt recommend using it on students maybe for some people, but not for all. Certain students could take that very personal like \"invading their privacy\" situation type, but I certaintly wouldn't use it on students.\n\nConstructing a 3-D model of the face of a painting or illustration I could understand that, but having the audacity to invade someones space would be a totally different story, when you could just ask them about their problems or just to even check up on them. Severall of students could take in the process personal, beause they might not want people to know that they're upset or angry only for the simple fact people can go and spread your business, or maybe they don't want to talk.\n\nPermission of using it on students also matters. You're not just going to walk up to any person, take a picture of them, and then run away with it. Something is going to be said. The technology of it is so cool, but personally used on students, The professors and any other users have got to be out of their minds to use it for such reasoning on students. Realizing expressions throughout other humans are very common, only because we know what the emotions of sad, happy, excited, scared look like. We can tell when there's something wrong, because that's just our humanly instincts.\n\nSupporting my evidence as to \"Most communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"Some computers need to understand that too.\" I totally disgaree with that though computers shouldn't know all personal information on how which and who feels some kind of way when you can talk out their problems. They don't have to have a happy face to be happy, or a sad face to be sad. There are people who hide their feelings deep down inside faking their emotion on the outside. A lot of things you can't just \"up and tell\" human instincts don't work like that.\n\nCame to thought that all technology is not meant for human interactions. Again, invading space just is not healthy or right for other people. Some may want to be left alone, not bothered with. Especially without permission. Things could change within the matter of seconds. Emotions are so common eve with the looks on their face, but there are going to be a lot times where other people hide them. Personal things just shouldn't be shared or forced on someone. No permission, not to be bothered with. Want to be alone? Leave them. Space is important.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart displays the proportion of graduates who are unemployed between the age of 20 to 24 in a European country over two years.\nOverall, it is evident that men's ratio in unemployment is notably higher than women's ratio in both years. And also it can be seen that the ratio of unemployed graduates among men increased in contrast to the previous year.\nTo begin with, January of 2008 has 10 men in percentage and women, it is almost 7% but in January 2009, graduate unemployment among men rose to almost 13%, among women it rose to roughly 10%. In April 2008, both male and female percentages were lowest and the unemployment rate in men rose to nearly 13%, while females percentage does not show any advancement.\nFurthermore, the unemployment rate of both genders in July 2008 was also stood at the lowest, however, in July 2009 it became twice the previous ratio. Lastly, October in both years showed the highest unemployment ratio as in 2008 for men ratio was more than 15% and for women, it was more than 12% while in 2009 men ratio advance to more than 20% and among women, it increased to almost 15%.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nobody can deny the growing economic progress in both developing and developed nations thanks to globalization and the advent of high technology. In recent years, while people living in developing countries are more content with their life than those in the past, people residing in developed countries cope with the contrary phenomenon. Basically, there’re many reasons for this phenomenon and we will discuss the issue here. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that happiness is the key factor that makes people’s life more valuable. Obviously, people from developing nations, nowadays, can have higher living standards in comparison with their previous dwellers. In these countries, money plays a fundamental role in their daily life. With the rapid development of every life aspect, they strive to attain salary increments or financial rewards that enable them to escape from poverty. As a result, they become wealthier and feel happier in their life.\r\n\r\nIt is true that enjoying our lives with our beloved people, along with other welfare benefits, appears to be among the great prerequisites for the desired life apart from working and earning a living. Jan-Emmanuel De Neve, Oxford University economist, and WHR collaborator says: “In terms of policy, we always feel that developing for the sake of growth cannot be considered the happiness of mankind.\" From that perspective, one can figure out such valuable lessons about happiness. For one thing, financial adequacy is indispensable. Without money, many people will have to lead a poor life and feel extreme fatigue all the time. As a result, people are often under constant pressure and cannot live happily as their counterparts who remain financially stable. In order to sustain the staff’s lives at the basic level, governments should support them by providing more job opportunities, greater subsidies during difficult times such as a global pandemic or economic crisis, or greater grants in case of healthcare issues. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, high competitiveness in the economy and target-related problems in modern society are factors that people are not happy about. Due to economic growth, companies have to compete fiercely against each other for the market. Therefore, employees are forced to work harder than before so that the company will not be overtaken by other companies in technology, quality, and quantity. In addition to the hectic life that they are supposed to lead, their performance at work is frequently assessed to reduce the risk of redundancy if the companies restructure or downsize. To illustrate, companies specializing in technology, and furniture, ... have to regularly update the market situation to attract customers by creating new designs and technologies. When the competition among companies becomes intense, the workers will have to put more effort into their work to get a lot of tasks done. Subsequently, such poor work-life balance will make people in developed countries no longer as happy as they used to be.\r\n\r\nAll in all, although it seems logical to accept certain reasons why more and more people have become materialistic, chasing a rich life without caring about the existing, good things around them, other aspects of life including environmental, social, and welfare issues also need to be closely taken notice of to ensure the ultimate sustainability. Human life is limited, what can be better to fulfil personal wishes as well as improve our living quality than spending more time for ourselves, travelling, discovering ourselves, nurturing our interests, and taking good care of our health. A matter of greater importance is that employers should offer their staff the dramatic availability of opportunities to enjoy their every moment of life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Science Fiction movies you may have heard or seen driverless cars. Have you ever thought what it would be like to own a driverless car? Well in a few years that may be possible.\n\nMany companies like Google, General Motors, and BMW have tried to make driverless cars. While many cars have been successful, none have been completely driverless. In some cases like work zones and where accidents are, a human driver must take control of the car in order to bypass the scene.\n\nI think that driverless cars would be cool, but there is some danger to yourself and others without a person being in control. First, if the car were to switch to where a human takes control and the person was not paying attention then there would most likely be an accident. Second, if you were to learn how to use a driverless car you would have to learn how to drive first without a driverless car in case you have to take control of the car. Third, technology isn't perfect, there might be some isues with the first models of driverless cars and overtime the driverless cars will be fixed so that there will not be as many accidents because of a malfunction. Lastly, if you wanted to go somewhere you would have to program the car or use a GPS.\n\nIf there were driverless cars there would most likely be less car accidents in the future. Many accidents are caused by people driving faster or slower than the posted speed, drunk drivers, and having no experience by driving a car. If you were to elminate driving then there would be less car crashes.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that driverless cars would be a benfit to society by preventing most car crashes. However even if there are driverless cars the person controlling the driverless car needs to pay attention just like if they were driving the car. In the future, are you going to drive or let the car drive for you?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to the accelerating pace of modernization, people have been influenced by the different ways of pursuing their jobs. Therefore, research indicates that in the coming years' a large proportion of people will choose to telecommute. In my opinion, people will definitely consider the option of work from home, but despite this, there will be still a few professions which need human presence rather than a digital environment. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are numerous reasons why most of the occupation could be done while sitting at a home. Because modern technology has made it possible for both the employer and employees to carry on their jobs anywhere and anytime. It is seen that online social media portals provide the opportunity for people to start their offline and online business so that they can work from any corner of the world. Consequently, the trend will bring cost-effectiveness for the worker as they could save their time and money to commute to and from the work. According to the convenience point of view, it is anticipated that the vast majority of the population will choose to work from home option. For example, the Enagic Company of U.S.A, offering the number of online employments and people are earning a handsome amount of salary while working at their own pace. Thus, online occupations are an absolute imperative.\r\n\r\nConversely, there are few jobs which could not be done during our homestay. Because these kinds of professions, demands the human-beings involvement which is otherwise impossible to pursue if there will be the absence of an individual. For instance, a doctor could not examine their patients from the home, no doubt there are virtual appointments available for the people but in the cases of serious medical conditions, the doctor's presence is necessary. Overall, it is true that jobs such as corporate, project management, software developer and many more could be easily done from one's comfort zone, though lifesaver occupation is in the demand of expert's presence.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is true that the influence of technology is escalating in the work sectors. Likewise, in the future, more and more work will be done from the home. I firmly agree with the notion, but all jobs will not be part of a massive shift.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers play huge role society Many adults children spend lot time computer every day I think bad Instead computers I think would best spend time family Exercising enjoying outdoors also good time consuming activity Studying school work jobs also important things people instead computer much Family important life people take advantage Instead computer day spending home family activities could fun For example teenagers come home school go computer talk friends play games instead talking parents day anything By spending time family learn become closer able talk anything Nature beautiful thing Sure see pictures nature internet actual thing By outside enjoying nature taking walks runs even hikes get exercise Exercising important thing persons life need fit healthy computer would happen Adults even teenagers jobs While jobs involve computers No one get job spending day computer playing games I talking people Teenagers well playing game talking Computer time There plenty important activities spending time family enjoying nature school work jobs Computer necisity We lives I think use usingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is known for reading facial expressions of people. The FACS uses you facial muscles to see your emotions that a normal person can see. The Facial Action Coding System is a great work of technology because it can read if someone is faking a smile based on your facial muscle movement. FACS was used to read emotions in the Mona Lisa painting, but it is not valuable for reading expressions of a classroom full of students.\n\nThe FACS can read facial expressions, but not all of them. Humans knows there are millions of facial expressions rangeing from exicement to depression. In the article, the FACS only knows about six emotional expression and that is happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. In a classroom full of students, we will not be able to read if the students are confuse, hungry, or tired. The FACS will try to read thoses expressions and deliver the wrong data for the student they are testing.\n\nThe FACS is a great piece of technology, but it can't read all the expressions a person has. It can only read up to six expressions which is happy, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. While, we have million of more features like confusion, tired, hungry, or in shocked. This would be good for reading some data in paintings, but not in real life today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars\n\nBy Dariontai White\n\nDo you think that the face is from an Alien? I do. and if you keep reading i can tell you why.\n\nI think it's just a human from a long time ago. My evidence is this quote from the text \"NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible lamding sites for its isster ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" This quote explains its self, and thats's why i think its a human.\n\nI think it just a natural landform, and i got a quote to back it up. My quote is \"Thousands of anxious we surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" and that quote tells you that it was a natural landform after all.\n\nMy last reason why I think its a landform is because of the quote that say's \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent ro a buttle or mesa - landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nIn conclusion, if anyone ask me what I think it is My answer would be a natural landform, and if they ask me how do i know i have evidence.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's 2020, and manufacturers are fianlly coming up with the technology to create driverless cars. You don't know if you should be for or against this idea. Well, there are many reason why you shouldn't be for the idea of driverless cars. They can be very dangerous, they are probably very expensive, and people would become lazy and inexperienced?\n\nOne reason driverless cars are bad are they can be very dangerous. The manufacturers hope to bring in-car entertainment to make sure the driver doesn't get bored. In doing so, they care creating a distraction. If something happens to the car, nobody will even know because they aren't paying attention. Speaking of, what if it breaks while you are using it, will people know how to fix it? I assume since it will such sophisticated technology that most people will not know how to fix it. Those are just some of the ways we know that this car will be very dangerous.\n\nAnother big reason we know this car is not a good idea is that they are probably going to be very expensive. People can barely afford the cars we have now. How can the manufacturers expect to sell a smart car to millions, or even billions, of people. They would not be able to sell enough cars to come out with a profit. On top of it being very expensive to buy, you also have to to look at how expensive it would be to fix it if it broke down. If you can barely afford to buy the car, how can you expect to repair it. Those are just a few reasons on how the car would be very expensive.\n\nLastly, if everyone could be driven places, would there be a need for riding bikes, or going on runs? People would become obiese. Nobody would stop to smell the roses, or just stare at the beauty of the world that God created for us. Another reason is that kids would never learn how to drive because the car would be driving for them. If the car were to break and stop driving itself, how would they get home because they can't drive it for themselves. Those are jsut a few reasons on how people would become lazy and inexperienced.\n\nThere are many reasons the world should not have driverless cars, including they can be very dangerous, they would be very expensive, and people would become lazy and inexperienced. \"EEEEERRRRRRRR!!!\" Your car just broke, what are you going to do?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir upbeat happy mood Grew Newark New Jersey Cuban family tells story Narciso went childhood This memoir really emphasizes connection love Narciso parents home It kind makes think house walls ceiling maybe s part familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In sports always patient Like making shots someone getting best If patient keep working hard sooner later make shots get best player patient basketball career At high went high school wasnt biggest fastest strongest even best patient When high school frield varsity didnt make He upset coaches felt like shouldve made team His mom went fo told give Unlike kids didnt quit tell wasnt good enough He stayed patient kept working hard All worked paid next year made team He went go He championship game winning shot He went get drafted draft The one worst teams It took couple years win first championship During first couple seasons stayed calm win five championships In last one getting older knew would tested They made finals The getting tired though They went series kept pushing kept fighting Finally sixth championship put tough situations stayed patient played like allstarSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted informed many obstacles standing way landing dirigible top Empire State Building One obstacle found paragraph says Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather hellium hydrogen highly flammable As see use hydrogen would provide great hazard New York City dirigible landing top building It highly populated spot could potentially dangerous Another example obstacle seen paragraph It stated greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature wind Lsted informs us terrible hazard air currents top Empire State Building All many obstacles stood way allowing dirigibles dock end nt successfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My positon on driverless cars is to just be in the car. Driverless cars should already be invented because some people dont drive or dont like to drive. Its just like a taxi but better. Google has cars that drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Driverless cars should be just like google cars because its lets you know when someone is about to hit your car and has a alert on them when the driver is pulling out the driveway or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\n\nThere thinking about making computer driving cars. There should be a driverless car if you dont know how to drive, it helps out alot. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepair to take over. The driverless car is not good to buy because you still need a driver for the car so its bacicly a waste of your money. They should have a car that automaticly drives for you without a driver or nothing.\n\nThe manufacture is at fault because he made the car and its suppost to be a driverless car. Cars by 2020 would be able to drive themselves. The real driverless car is going to be great when it comes out because people really want have to drive at all. We are getting closer to our destination everyday. The gm has developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people in various states allow adolescents to search for part time work, whereas some people do not allow for any reasons. In my opinion, allowing the children would boost their confidence self-reliant and give them a chance to learn new skills.\n\n\nOn the one hand, freedom is the key to innovation and confidence. The liberty to youngsters to find out the jobs may make them contribute to the economy as well as create room for the fruitful inventions. An example can be seen in many countries,where youth is the 70% working force, contributing to the progress of the nation in different sections of research, industry, sports and military services.Moreover,part time job gives an individual financial support and new techniques or skills in their initial period. This leads to confidence,mental support and assists in further career goals.\n\n\nOn the other hand, excessive freedom is detrimental in most cases. The youngsters are mostly naive or vulnerable and inexperienced at an early age, which are likely influenced by illegal activities. For example, some criminal reports show that teenagers indulge in drug addiction or criminal activities, when they come from studies or jobs in other cities. Furthermore, sometimes these jobs are hazardous to health which seems to cause physical injury. Consequently, these injuries and criminal involvements may affect the whole life or upcoming career of the young generation.\n\n\nOverall, it seems advisable that part time work at a young age makes a person financially strong, decision maker and learner. However, it should not be fatal and unlinked with unethical activities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars are Coming\" we are faced with both of the negatives and positives of having cars that can drive themselves. The author gives us enough on both sides to where we can make an argument for either. My argument is simple, driverless cars are pointless and should not be permitted at all.\n\nSure, there are many positives to having driverless cars; such as, public transportation that is easy and quicker than buses and taxis, a much simpler driving experience on highways, many sensors to alert you when to take control, and helpful brakes to prevent you from crashing. All of these ideas seem grand and such, but they require one thing, an alert driver. Having all of these tools and being alert 100% of the time is simply unreasonable. Driverless cars provide a carelss driving environment that can bring about less attentive driving that can result in crashes if the sensors malfunction.\n\nAnother problem with driverless cars are the precautions and legislative decisions that will need to be brought to attention along with the permittance of them. According to the article, the traffic laws of the present are solely focused on safe cars being ones with a driver in control at all times. So what would happen if a person were to be in an accident with a driverless car? This creates a multitude of problems with legislation because technically, it's not the drivers fault because the car is supposed to be able to function on its own, but it's also not the cars fault because it requires an alert driver for the things it isn't capable of doing. This causes danger on the road and tough consequences and decisions in court, as well as in the legislation.\n\nThe final problem that I notice with driverless cars is the attention span of the driver, which is reffered to in paragraph 8. If the car is doing all the driving, what is to stop the driver from getting distracted by doing something else. It comes down to psychology and if the driver is just sitting at the steering wheel doing nothing as the car drives itself the fact is, the driver will probably find something else to do and not be alert. Driverless cars are only built to do so much and having a distracted driver behind the wheel just causes more danger.\n\nAlthough driverless cars seem to have a lot of positives, it seems to me the negatives outweigh them. Manualy driven cars have just as many positives as the driverless car and keeps the driver paying attention and makes the driver responsible for their own traffic issues. Laws won't have to be changed and the roads would be just as safe, if not safer, as it would be with a distracted driver behind the wheel of a driverless car. So in conclussion, I would have to say that driverless cars provide a careless driving environment and will cause many problems in legislative and judicial areas, and it'd be much more simple to stick with manually driven cars that will provide an alert driver and no changes to the government.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Schooling is the primary precursor for children to gain knowledge. In the past, most of the schools were single-sex schools. But the trend is now very different in many countries as co-educational schools are gaining more popularity among the parents. Some people are choosing co-educational schools over single-sex schools and its mainly because students of co-educational develop more soft skills and have less gender discrimination in later stages of their life.\n\nSchooling develops the primary base for soft skills like communication, making friends. Co-educational schools have a slight advantage in cultivating soft skills among the students. It is due to the fact that the students are exposed to both genders which helps them to develop their soft skills with both genders and makes them more capable to fit in every environment. For example, a study of Harvard business school which was conducted in 2012 reported that the students of co-educational schools easily become accustomed within the job environment than single-sex schools.\n\nGender discrimination is something that is built in every sector of our society whether it is job or business or household activities. Students having co-educational background shows less gender discrimination in their later stage as they have developed a sense of equality since their childhoods. For example, a group study having 25 students in each group was conducted between a co-educational school and a single-sex school of Paris shows a remarkable difference when they are tested to solve a problem. Co-educational school completed the work within 1 hour whereas single-sex school takes almost 3 hours to complete. It shows that different gender thinks of a problem differently and when one combines these two the outcome to solve a problem is quicker.\n\nHowever, despite of having disadvantages the single-sex school is still the choice for many parents. Many tend to believe that single-sex school develop a strong sense of competition within the students as well as helps to have less problems regarding early ages of children.\n\nIn conclusion, con-educational schools are better in developing soft skills and less gender discrimination within their students. This helps the students to develop a balanced way of leading life in late stage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Gas has a horrible smell and its bad for the economy and environment. What makes it worse is that its coming out of you're own car. In Germany they have given up their cars in the way that, there's more space for more beneficial builldings and for homes instead of a parking garage and another reason is it takes stress off of the driver.\n\nCars are taking up lots of space that could be usesd for beneficial buildings like schools, hospitals, banks and etc. We don't need cars to live our life's we're to reliant on them and our ecoconomy revolves around cars and to society the type of car you have defines you. We'll no it's not true. We need to stop being spoiled and think about our environment and those around us because if the people in Germany and Paris can do it, so can we. This is an advantage because we can learn to take care of ourselves and you can save lots of money instead of buying a car.\n\nDo you ever feel tense when you're in you're car driving? I do, and I sit in the passenger seat. I'm always afraid that someone could be drunk driving or just driving recklessly and hit you're car. Some could be afraid because they don't want ticket and scared to be pulled over. It's very stressful to have to pay so much attention to the road and prevent accidents and what not. This could be an advantage because it could be considered safer, and it take's alot of stress off of you, mentally and physically.\n\nThere are lots of reasons why cars are a big advantage whether or not it seems valid just give it a try, and maybe our economy will get better. I'm not saying not to use you're cars at all because it's yours just limit your usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon The builders Empire State Building faced opstacles building Empire State Building allowing dirigibles dock thereOne reason Al Smith fourterm governor New York headed efforts construct Empire State Building years office made tower tall The hight building ft But almost losing title worlds tallest tower announced would top hat put towerAnother reason tower made Dirigibles blimps That Could people New York New Jersey Smith wanted place dirigibles could dock But never happened German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners State building realized much worse accident could New YorkIn s idea dropped another dirigible trying proform stunt The Empire State Building never got fofil madeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe in aliens? Do you think that aliens made The Face on Mars? Well let me tell you, they didn't. It resembles traits of natural landforms that we on the Earth have too. Do you see where I'm coming from?\n\nYes, I understand it's' a planet we haven't been on yet don't you get that, they could have perfectly normal things just like the Earth that happen every day. Do you understand now?\n\nNo?, well on April 5, 1998, when Mars GLobal Surveryor flew over Cydonia for the first time and the MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharer than the origina Viking photos. It is a real landform that was caused by natural things that happen, it was no alien monument. It is very hard to get to the face in space because our teams have to go different places, we have to look at different things.\n\nI see your point of view though, I get that MOC could have gotten the picture wrong, but you see it was ten times as sharper than it had been years before. Yes, it was cloudy to and that could have caused some major differnces comapred to when it is sunny. The \"alien markings could have been hidden by haze\", you never know though, but we don't make it over the face very often, it's hard to get a better view from it.\n\nThe picture could have been photoshopped to make it look different, I know its in the late ninety's but it wen tto a Jet Propulsion Lab where the face started to apppear into a face. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common arounf Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptain Pharoh. It was a good way to engage the public attraction to Mars. It became an icon in mocies, books, talk shows, it was every where for 25 years. Many scientists believed it was important to NASA and very few believed it was an alien artifact, after eighteen long years the Vikining mission was over.\n\nDo you believe me now when I say that aliens didn't create this face on Mars? It is very posible that they did but, not very likely that they did. You have to look at the facts that it might actually be a natural landform, this argument could go either way but again look at the facts and how we got a ten times sharper look at it and how Mars works, it could work the same as Earth and we don't consider Earth to have aliens on it, we don't blame aliens on our land features. Every planet is different and Mars could turn out to have storms and earthquakes and tornados just like we do on Earth, just remember that next time you think that aliens are real, look at all the facts, ALL the facts and then make your decision.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a interesting but amazing planet. It has a nickname of the \"Evening Star\". It is the planet that is the closest related to earth, which makes sense for it also being referred to as Earth's \"twin.\" It being so closely related to our home planet has caught the eye of some. It is a planet no one can get close to however some think it is worth some risks to discover what lies there. You may be thinking what risks are there? Well there are quite a few. The author does a great job explaining what the risks are and how harsh Venus can be. However I do not believe they explained enough of the benefits that support why we should explore it despite the risk factor involved.\n\nFor Venus being Earth's \"twin\" it's very different from earth. The author included the facts of the atmosphere of Venus is made up of almost ninty-seven percent of carbon dioxide and it's clouds have highly corrosive sulferic acid in them. Earth does not have either of those and humans breathe oxygen and in return produces carbon dioxide. Humans really couldn't benefit from the lack of oxygen compared to the almost ninty-seven percent carbon dioxide. The almost other three percent may not even be oxygen but the author doesn't include that detail. Earth doesn't have an average of over 800 degress on its surface unlike Venus. The author then included that the pressure is 90 times greater on Venus then it is on Earth, that pressure can crush a submarine.\n\nThere is even more that prevent us from discovering more on Venus. The weather there can and will include erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning storms. Which is really not ideal at all for trying to explore.\n\nNASA is working on ways to get up close with Venus. According to the passage they have been testing different electronics made of silicon carbide in chambers simulating the conditions on Venus. They discovered it could last up to three wees. Their other idea was to have scientists float above the fray. But they couldn't take rocks samples or anything by doing so. It would be a good way, but they really couldn't get the research they wanted. As well as the fact it wouldn't be easy conditions because of the radiation.\n\nAccording to the author, Astromers are very interested in Venus because at one point they believe it was \"the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" They believe it was covered with oceans and even sustained life just like Earth does now. In current day they know that it still does have similarities to Earth like valleys, mountains, and craters. But is that really all worth it?\n\nThe author then says the value of returning there is indisputable. The author really included a lot more risks than benefits of returning there. The support they gave wasn't that supportive. Then would say something beneficial for example, they could actually observe from the fray but they only have limited sight of the planet. It really just adds to the negative part of the exploration. The article seemed to have more negativity than positivity. The risks drowned out the support which in turn made the author's point not as strong.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The picture of faces on Mars are actually natural landforms, known as buttes or mesas. The text states that the picture really shows a Martian version of a butte or mesa. The text also states that you can find other mesas around the American West. Mesas are pieces of land that above ground-level. The author also stated that, Garvin, a mission controller, said that it reminded him most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho and that its a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hight as the Face on Mars. Although, I can see why people would think it was created by aliens, there are more facts to prove that its a natural landform. Scientists have shown that, as of right now, there are no signs of life on Mars, so aliens could not have made it. In conclusion, science has proved many more facts about the Face than a conspiracy theorist has.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, various knowledge was stored in books. Nowadays, technology developed so, instead of books we can find more quick and easy much information on the Internet. In my opinions, there are many benefits and disadvantage, therefore, we should use it properly.\r\n\r\nInternet data have much fake information, unlike the only right knowledge books. Therefore, we can use the wrong knowledge for assignment, reports. Moreover, we are the cost of buying digital devices to access the Internet. Most digital devices are an expensive option for some whereas books are a cheaper option to get the same knowledge. Also, some people said that books are still safe more than online because the Internet has many viruses.\r\n\r\nI think that the data stored on the internet can offer extensive benefits for everyone. Firstly, we quickly find the knowledge on the Internet more than in books, in other words, we do not spend a long time to discover the information. Moreover, the source of knowledge on the Internet is easily accessible from any location and time. Anyone with access to the Internet can quickly access knowledge without geographical constraints. And we get highly secures and keep out data safe online. Furthermore, online information can be shared more faster through the link. It is safe and convenient.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, searching knowledge on the Internet is many pros and cons such as quickly find, easy approach, have fake knowledge and buy the digital device, for the reason, we should use filter out fake information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern era, youngsters who commit offences should be punished in similar ways as mature people. I do think that younger criminals should have behaved less strictly than older offenders. In this essay, I will discuss the viewpoint and give relevant ideas about the issue.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, young adults are less mature compared to adults this is why they should not be considered in the same punishments.Furthermore, sometimes they are more susceptible to being afflicted by bad peers or role models.To make an example, many of them may join aggressive gangs,in which they commit a sort of illegal work like; smoking, teasing, hijacking and so on. Therefore, the youth should not be punished the same as the grown man who committed the types of offensive words.\r\n\r\nBesides, less proper guidance and violations from one's parents can be the main reasons for youngsters becoming criminals.In addition , nowadays parents are often busy with work so that they may be involved with some unwanted crimes like stealing something pen,pencil, sharpener and many more.To explain , punishments must be more flexible for children having such backgrounds. Thus, in this way, it is significant to consider their circumstance and why they inevitably commit crimes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if youngsters commit crimes, their lack of responsibility and surroundings should be considered when they are handled by authorities, in order to rehabilitate them effectively. I do believe that age should be considered while punishing because it will help in reducing crime in the society in future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world of technology is developing to a higher level everyday. From television to having a small computer that can fit into your pockets. We have evolved, so did technology.\n\nTechnology is important in our life. Without technology now, would be hard and not easy to live without. But we took it to another level that we can now tell people facial expression. I like the idea that they did but I honestly don't think it would matter or change the way kids are gonna feel in school. Reading students emotions in class would help the teacher or staffs know how the students are feeling, but that wouldn't change the fact that they are in school. Students that are giving work will most likely feel a little angry inside. Teacher and staffs should be able to tell if a student is happy or sad. Not all teacher or staff can tell, but just looking at the students mouth or orbicularis tighten around their lips should show that they are angry or happy. Work is never fun or will make a student happy in school. I'm against the value of using technology to read students emotion expression because to make it through a lesson plan, it wouldn't matter if the students is happy or sad or even mad. In the end we all have to pass the class and make it through whatever the teacher gives us. Even though the technology of knowing other people emotions is cool, there wont be a different on how students in school will change how they feel.\n\nThis is only a sample of new technology. There will be more advance technology coming. Without technology life would be difficult. From chalkboard to projector. Technology is a big part of human life and the way they affect us. From solving a problem on your phone or even searching things we don't know on the web. Knowing people emotion will change a lot of people and will surprise them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The manufacturing of consumer goods has become increasingly, this leads to consequences of destroying the natural environment. In this essay, I will outline several reasons and the solutions to deal with these issues.\n\nThere are many factors from the production of consumer goods which harm the environment. To begin with, it is quite natural that the huge population has increased the demand for various consumer products and to meet the demands, new factories and industries are being established each day. To provide the spaces required for the number of these factories needed to cut trees and forests, this makes deforestation for wooden or agricultural products increasingly leads to soil erosion. This has a direct impact on the environment. Furthermore, as more goods are produced, more toxic wastes and emissions are released from factories into nature. Water sources are contaminated, and the air is severely polluted, which results in the deaths of many marine and terrestrial animals.\n\nThe solutions to this problem have to be very efficient and long term. Firstly, the government imposes punishment on companies that harm the environment during the production process. In addition, many governments are also encouraging the development of more sustainable manufacturing processes. For instance, many countries offer tax breaks and incentives for businesses using renewable energy, and some firms are even allowed to purchase green energy at cheaper prices than traditional fossil fuels. Also, companies should promote the use of eco-friendlier materials such as using paper or bamboo instead of plastics. \n\nIn conclusion, the overuse of natural resources and human luxury affect the natural environment very adversely. To solve these problems, it could be educating people to be frugal while purchasing goods. Additionally, governments and companies must join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly by switching to greener materials.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The process of driverless cars , has been studied since the mid-1900's. So, why haven't they sold any, its because there still hasn't been a driverless car capable or worth being sold by compianies or the manufactuers themselves know that these \"Driverless Cars\" will pose a big safety hazard. Companies and manufacturers tested many cars but,some where only able to auto-drive under certain conditions.There is no certainty that these conditions will be met at all times.\n\nA car that could drive by its self would be so cool but after a while dont you think you'll get bored. A self driving car takes all the fun out of driving,because all u do is sit there while you car does the work for you. Also not everyone drives the same and not everyone follow the rules of the road.The cars dont even possess the human inteligence to make decisions.\n\nThese cars pose a great safety risk.The cars were made with all sorts of destractions when a true driver known that you must keep all attention to the road. the more disrtactions there are the more likely an accident would happen. A car that drives its self cant tell the difference between a child and an adult, so it makes it more accessible for younger beings. these cars come wilth a great amount of technology,and that every peice is important to keep the car functioning,but what if some systems give out,that would likely cause an accident.Then whos's fault is it yours or the manufacturers.If systems are broken or shocked you will be the one comming out of pocket and the amount of technology that would need to be replaced would cost money also.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a new software that enables computers to identify human emotions. This software detects how other people are feeling even if they are trying to hide their emotions. Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute of Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, is the creator of this expectacular software. The use the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is helpful.\n\nThis computer software works with emotion algorithms. According to the passage, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" Mona Lisa, Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, was tested with this software. A recent study shows that Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 2 percent angry. The Facial Action Coding System uses video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. The text also states that this software can even identify mixed emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is helpful at schools. With the help of this software, teachers could know when a student is sad or angry. This computer software can also detect mixed emotions. This new software could even save lifes. For example, nowadays with the bullying's situation, a teacher would detect when a student is being bullyied or if the student is under a depression. The teacher could help him and prevent any type of accident. The software can help at schoosl in other ways. The text states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Hung predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\"\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System has been developed that improves accuracy in perciving the emotions of others. Making faces reveal so much about the science of emotions. Becuase of this software, teachers could see when a student is sad or angry and the teacher could help him. The software could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. The use the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotion expressions of students in a classroom is helpful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "confused yet youst country concentrat test soon flower plown feels like home thinks better testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is difficult to establish new routine, but sometime it is important. Some people think, that is it important to change our daily life. Conversely, other thinks that does not matter at all and, do not want to change. In my point of view, I think it is difficult to change. However, we have a lot of environmental issues last decade, therefore, we need to change.\nLearn new habits and to try new places is difficult as we get older. So, if people arrive to create a meaningful and happyness life, I think it could be counterproductive to change. For instance, if you have a good salary, a beautifull place to live and a lovely family, it is not important to search other things. Cause of, the most important feature of life is to be happy.\nOn the other hand, the human nature is to evolve. I think, adaptation to his own environment is crucial for deal with the recents climate. Moreover, if we stop to learn new behaviour, we could not be able to adapt sharply for the global warming. For example, one solution about the global warming is to learn news behaviours and habits. That can help to reduce smog and, as we know, our brain are plastic, but if we do not use it, it will stop to work.\nTo conclude, to change is important because in our century we have big issues. But as we seen there are no explicit reason to change if there are no problem and we are happy in our life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You would enjoy and like to join the Seagoing Cowboys progam because not only do you get to go and see fun and unique places. You also get to see all types of extrodinary and wonderful things. Also you get to feed and help the animals everyday.\n\nNext, yes ok you might get hurt and I know somethings you have to live with for a very long time but you still get to be on a boat with animals. Also you get be on a boat with all types of nice and genorous people. If you focus to much on the negative things you won't be able to see the positive things that are right in front of you.\n\nDo you want to do something that you would like to do? Then this is the place for you. Then, you finally get to see all the awesome things in the water and don't forget that you would be doing something that a teenager would love to do; ok I get not all teenagers love to go and, yes some teenagers like to be on there phone but any other teenager would love to go on a boat and see the places that you would get to see during this amazing trip. Next, if you have siblings and you are tired of all of there energy and them always wanting to play with you then this your trip all to yourself doing something that you love not something that babies like but something that you like.\n\nFinally, let's get to the good part you get to meet fun new people and who knows maybe some of your friends could be on the boat and maybe even some of your favorite animals could be on that boat. Also, if you like helping and helping people then this is also the thing for you; and you get to go back home and back to schoool and tell all your friends and family about the most amazing and exciting trip you got to go to. Not only will they be jealous but think of all the pictures you would get to take and when you got home you could look at how much fun you had and you would think about how you would love to go back there.\n\nIn conclusion, I would love to tell more about the exciting and extravagant things there. I would love to but I guess you would just have to go\n\njoin the UNRRA ( the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) today and also if you are shy then invite any of your friends along with you and maybe that friend could help you meet new people and take you to see the animals. Not only will your friend just be there to help you meet new people and meet new animals but you guys would be together helping and cleaning together.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some ,countries people tend to understand about the history of their life accommodation . In the following essay , the reason for the idea and the way of research previous information about house will be discussed . \r\n\r\nThe cause of attention to know about the history of the home would be the fact that , the construction, people living there, is one of the most essential point as an environment where people and their families spend many of time in it . Moreover , having enough information about the past situation of buildings help us to live in an accommodation that is without any ownership problem . For instance , a person who has been living in an apartment for 2 years without searching about it's history after a while another person claims that this house is his inheritance and saling the place was illegal. Therefore, if people search about their constructions history , they will be able to preserve and sure about their ownership.\r\n\r\n Asking to the old neighborhoods can be a reasonable and suitable way to reach date about building era.Furthermore, some people that have been accommodated for along time near our flat would be the best way to achieve information about the construction . Because they were in the region before us for a long time. For instance , elderly lives under a traditional roof near our house have many information about our home . Because he know our flat when was built and who accommodated in it . Therefore , the more people take data from the older families around their apartment , the more information will be found about the history of construction .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , people in many societies are interested in their house to sure about there isn't any illegal issue in accommodating their roof .\r\n\r\nAlso , if people ask the older neighbourhoods about the history of building not only do they find many details about their living place , but people also be sure about their ownership and keep their house comfortably .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay setting affects cyclist different ways For example couse must tough dehydrated says rolling hills rough roads Another example dangerous animals like snakes came across In conclusion reasons setting affects cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 a unusaul photo of what appears to be a human like face was located on the big red planet Mars. This at first got heads turning and questions popping in every scientist mind at NASA. From the article it states that twenty five years ago NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars, while snapping some photos for a landing site for its sister ship Viking 2. In the article it says that it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. The real question is the photo taken was it the face of an alien?\n\nIn the article it states that there must have been a surprising expression on the faces of the mission controllers face back at Jet Propulsion Lab. Soon after the misson controlls saw the photo they, have firgured out it was just simple another Martin messa, common enough around Cydonia. In the article it says that the unusual shadows that made it look like an Eyptian Pharaoh, it is also very interesting to hear what they compared it to.\n\nIn the article it says that after a few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see, and the caption read, \"huge rock information...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and atrract attention to Mars.\n\nIn the article soon after being published it most certianly did catch the attention of the people. It even has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and it even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Now some people even think the face is bona fide evidence pf life on Mars, and evidence that NASA would rather hide.\n\nIn the article a few scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cnydonia became a priority for NASA. In the article mission controllers prepared to look again, and said \"it's not easy to target Cydonia,\" says Garvin. Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks striaght down and scans. In the article Mars Global Surveyor said, \"we just don't pass over the Face very often,\" he noted.\n\nIn conclusion about this whole Mars photo of a Face is clealry not another alien artificat, its just clearly just a natural landform. In the article it also states that in 2001 in April the redid the photo. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to thecenter of the face to get a clearer shot. Now I must say in the article it states that what the picture was actually shows is the Martin equivalent of butte or messa-landforms common aroundthe American West.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy is a very neat thing to do. I think that everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you get to travel over water. By traveling over water you can see fun things like sea animals and you can also visit cool places.\n\nIf you like animals or if you take care of animals then this is the thing for you because you get to take care of animals so that way they can get to where they are going safely. Plus if you have never done it before, it would be a pretty cool experience because you also get to feed the animals on the boat ride and you get to give them something to drink.\n\nThis would also be a fun and creative program because you get to do cool thing like watch dolphins and fish and all of the other sea creatures swim. The way that this would be a creative program is because you could make up names for the animals. In the text it says, \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy.\" So in that sentence, it proves that being a seagoing cowboy was a fun experience.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting devastating cyclists condition CAPS high desert California surely never easy task begin Without proper hydration people often suffer heatstrokes pass sometimes even perishing entirely worse cyclist effort exerting pedaling short rolling hills Even worse trail old eccentric men set run doesnt much way nuping depleted water supply The first town cyclist comes across easily splits the traditional definition ghost town water pump comes emits sewage incredibly hot brackish water Therefore heat made worse look water cyclist path This combination features setting causes great deal distress cycling almost pushing deathSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have always been a point of interest as our technology advances. I am for driverless cars because they could make the roads safer.\n\nThese driverless cars are not completely driven by a computer. There are certain times where the person in the car has to take over, like work zones or accidents. However, for the most part, these cars have so many sensors and cameras in them that they can drive without the help of a human driver. This could mean that accidents that happen when the driver is distracted or incapacitated, would never happen. Once our technology advances ever furthur and these cars actualy become driverless, then they could prevent accidents.\n\nCars made by companies like Google or Tesla are not only interested in make a cars driverless, but they want to make a car that would be better for the environment. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a car that \"would use half of the fuel\", and Tesla's focus has been on electric cars. Both of these options reduce or elimate the need for fossil fuels, therefore reducing carbon emmissions and taking better care of our environment.\n\nAlthough there is some serious work to be done to be able to test these cars to improve the cars to be legally considered safe, I think that the reality of driverless cars is not to far away, and that it is a good thing. They could make the road a safer place and help out our environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to defenders of NASA if their was an ancint civilization on Mars NASA would benifit from it financialy. \" NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Also there is no evidence or traces of a Ancient civilization on Mars. Also NASA has no reason to try to cover up any civilization that we may not know about because they will be benifiting from that with more tax money from the government.\n\nThe reasons why NASA would not want to cover or hide an ancient civilization on Mars up is because they would clearly benifit from the sitiuation. \" Defenders of the\n\nNASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Also part of the reason they even made this picture avalible to the public is to bring attention to mars. \" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" If they wanted to cover this \"Face\" on Mars up there would have never been a photo releasead to the public so every one can look at and study.\n\nAfter all of that information about NASA and how they would benifit from a ancint civilization on. Mars there is no absalutly no reason NASA would cover this up if they were going to benifit from the possibility of an. Ancient civilization on a planet that does not even have life today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, the public has become fully aware of the importance of voluntary work, especially when it is conducted by youth in their free time. I strongly support this view and will elaborate my stance in this essay with arguments in the below paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first main reason behind my agreement is that youth will take the advantage of conducting such community work to develop themselves and build their social networks. To cite an example, young men in some Europe countries are required to volunteer around 150 hours yearly in community work such as planting trees, this would be helpful for them in terms of social development and building networks in their communities. \r\n\r\nAnother piece of evidence why I support this view is that unpaid works encourage teenagers to be generous and to support poor people. For example, when a young man immerses himself to hold and perform community free workshops and ceremonies with poor students, he will really enhance those people's lives. As a result, the communities will be able to develop gradually in many sectors and jump to the next level. \r\n\r\nMoreover, teenagers will feel more productive, organized and energetic when they exploit their free time to serve their communities. For instance, a conducted research in Sweden states that the self-satisfaction of the teenagers who performed unpaid community work was three folds higher than the satisfaction of whom don’t engage in such voluntary work. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many people feel the importance of teenagers’ engagement with unpaid community works in their free time to develop their communities. Personally, I think conducting the voluntary work will be a strong pillar in the teenager’s curriculum vitae, and encourage poor communities to develop.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Mona Lisa Smile\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable. To tell how someone is feeling whether or not they are using facial expressions with a computer is kinda of a cool thing. Although, some people just have a straight face and not feeling any type of way. But, in a way it might be weird to others.\n\nImagine a computer telling you how you feel at that moment and trying to help you feel better. So COOL right! \" The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" That was created by Dr. Huang that now just relies on the psychologists. Also, the text states, \" Dr. Pual Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions-- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness--and then associated each with characteristics movements of the facial muscles.\" The invention was a very smart invention. If they can brighten someones day, it'll make the world so much happier. Knowing people are always on there phone when they are upset or angry or, evening smiling, that is by far the greatest idea. The text also states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lessons, like an effective human instructor.\" Also, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even produce them.\" That is amazing progress and who ever would of thought something like this could be done. I believe you could get alot of things done faster, because being bored, confused mad or upset while trying to do work you really dont want to. So something that'll chnge your facial expression to happy is wonderful. Think about all the positivity.\n\nNow. some people like there privacy and dont like sharing or telling peoiple what the problem his. Alot of people are blank faced or like to fake a smile and go on about their day. The text states, \"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried,etc.\" In the meaning of sometimes we dont know how we feel, again sometimes we juist want to be left alone in a situation and figure it out ourselves. The text also states, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \" So computers need to understand that too.\" So, theres not of lot of back up for this invention being a bad idea, but you have to look at it both wyas. There are really some privite people out there who aren't in the mood to be happy or people who are antisocial and doesnt use computers oe cell phones. They live old school, many wiould have never known about this invention.\n\nIn conclusion to Making Mona Lisa Smile, being happy is the number 1 key to life, whether it seems or feels like it. With someone trying to make you happy you feel special , just think you dont have anyone but a computer to rely on, you think to yourslf well what can a computer do to help me. Then coming to find out it can do just as muc as a person can but not physically.\n\nIt's a great inventiona and could be very successful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,\n\nState senator, i believe that we should keep the electoral college because it it not only benifits congress it aso benifits the president who is running to be our leader as well and also our electors.\n\nThe electoral college has been made from our founding fathers in the constitution it shows a meaning, a meaning not only to us but also to The United states and in the most part its total strangers who pick these people its a political party it may seem unfair that the votes we are putting in is for the electors to run but its a show of value it shows the the electors get help with votes and so does the president just like it may be in the other side of the green grass as well.\n\n\"The Electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast\"(pg22). Obama gotten 61.7 percent of the electoral votes while Romney got 51.3 it seems of electors in the electorial college knew what the were doing now my gas prices isnt over 3 dollars a gallon near me \"almost all of the states award electoral votes on a winner-takes -basis\"(pg18) not only a predident is just not chosen it is a meeting that takes place where they go throughly to pick the vice prsident or the president.\n\nIn each state the cadinate that is running for that paticular has their own group of electors that in safe hands its a great thing to know that people that are being chosen are being reviewed by state laws as well to be exact and either way we help choose our state electors its not about the specific people its about all of us and how we contributre to the votes to our candinates in the electoral college we are not only helping the electors the electors are helping the presidnt as well and most of all we are helping United State Of America Founding Fathers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a lot of discussion whether or not to keep the Electoral College. The electoral college is the process in which we vote for our next president. It was established in the Constitution by our founding fathers, which was a really long time ago. So why do we still use the Electoral College? The Electoral College is completely outdated. We need to get rid of the Electoral College now!\n\nWhy are we still using the Electoral College to vote? It's extremely confusing. What if you vote for the wrong elector? That sometimes happens which is unfair to voters. We should be able to just directly vote for the president we want. If we could just vote for the president we want, not the electors, it would be so much simplier. Why confuse the citizens of the U.S. when you could just make things easier for us? The Electoral College is a way to confusing process to vote for our president. It's time to update the way we vote.\n\nPeople think they're voting for the president, but really, they're just voting for electors. That is completely unfair. Why not just vote for the president of your choice? The citizens cannot always control who the electors vote for. How unfair would that be if the elector you chose, decided to vote for the president you didn't want? Also, the electors can be just anyone. They can be anyone not holding public office. Depending on what state you're in, either the state conventions, the states party central committee or even the presidential candidates can pick the electors. Why even bother going through all that trouble when you could just vote for the president you want? It's way more easier.\n\nThere are so many things that could go wrong when using the Electoral College process to vote. What if there is a tie in the electoral votes? Then who does the state choose? That would throw everyone off guard. Why have to even worry about that when you could just vote the president of your choice? It's ridiculous that we still use the Electoral College to vote. Also, we could choose the wrong elector when voting and that would really make people mad.\n\nThe Electoral College is outdated, confusing, and just way to complicated. Why go through the trouble of having to make sure you vote for the right elector, when you could just vote for the president of your choice. It's completely irrational how we still use the Electoral College to vote. You're not voting for the president you want, but for electors to choose the president. You can't always control who the electors vote for. There are a handful of things that could go wrong. We just need to get rid of the Electoral College once and for all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays people are curious to find out about the story of their house or building, such as apartment or condominium where they live in. Even though they do it with many ways including asking with strangers around their home or with police near their home which makes inconvenient in neighbourhood, I believe it is justified to seek what the history of their home with the aim of safety.\r\n\r\nTo start with, in this modern’s era, people who buy their house by online platform do not know about the experience and history from the former owner of the house. Moreover, they are intended to purchase the house which they want if the land of the house is legal and free from a criminal. In addition, in order to do this, they have to find the background of the house. For example, based on experience from my uncle, he was keen on to buy his own in 2017 and the price was relatively cheap when he was surfing on the internet. Meanwhile, he did not know what happened before he owned his house so that he browsed from the internet for the purpose of getting information of the house and he asked his neighbour. The information that he got told him that the murder had happened before he bought the house and he felt anxious after hearing that.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in my country, the buyer of the house are educated from the government and the law which rules of the agreement has already legitimated since there were many reports from the community about they did not have an access to look up the information. For instance, the news from Metrotv (Indonesia news media) once reported the owner of the house was killed by stranger and the family from the owner told to the media that they got restricted from the previous owner about the story, therefore the news from that had made the government govern the right for the purchaser to find out the history.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, in this modern era, people have to be careful before making purchase of the house in order to their safety. In my opinion, It is justified to seek what the history of the house since they have to regard that the safety is important and government in this modern’s era have been aware about that matter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient I school teacher left room The kids started going crazy standing tables Throwing paper planes paper The kids screaming I sitting waching teacher comes sees happening I sitting I amazd stuiped acting Then I waching get trouble get calls home I thinking good thing I part I might get kicked cross country team The kids getting suspened lunch I hope never happens I witness thet get kids even troubleySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s world, the fierce rivalry among business entities has given rise to a proliferating number of advertisements broadcast on almost every means of media. While this phenomenon is not without positive influence, its adverse implications are more significant. Therefore, there will be some solutions proposed in this essay to diminish its negative effects on consumers.\n\n \n\nNeedless to say, a rise in the number of advertisements has allowed viewers to be more well-informed of the newly-launched products. Given the unprecedented rate of technological advancement in recent years, without these means of marketing, consumers may fall behind the most innovative features introduced to the market, which may impede them from making sensible purchasing decisions. However, such surge in adverts may bring about some underlying effects on purchasing behavior. Since consumers are constantly bombarded with advertising in various manifestations, they are more prompted to make a purchase without thorough consideration. It stands to the reason that promotional campaigns are designed to prey on humans’ insecurities such as their inferiorities in physical appearance or their desire for social inclusion; as a result, viewers are more liable to fall victim to buying unnecessary items out of spontaneity. Moreover, the competitiveness among companies has led advertisers to resort to dishonest tactics with the sole aim to boost sales. The most widely adopted strategy seems to exaggerate the true values of the advertised products, which induces the consumers to take preference of them and may lead to future purchases.\n\n \n\nThere are some possible solutions to tackle the problems engendered from such a trend. The most prominent responsibility should lie with the government since they are those who grant permission for adverts to be broadcast on mass media. Therefore, there should be a board of experts whose job is to screen, monitor and cross-reference the advertisement contents and their actual effectiveness. The public should also take actions to protect themselves. It is recommended that before buying an item, one should do some research by either consulting the previous buyers or taking their needs and affordability into serious consideration. With all of these measures joining forces, consumers are more liable to be well-protected from the invasion of misleading advertising.\n\n \n\nIn short, advertisements, with its genuine nature , should provide useful information about new products in the market. However, given the tough competition between companies, this marketing tool may provoke spontaneous purchasing decisions. Therefore, both the government and its citizens should take proactive measures in order to foster a healthy society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that aliens are real? Some people do and they think that they created the face on mars. Some other people think that it was made natrally by winds.\n\nPeople think that aliens made it but the people at NASA wasnt trying to find aliens and they didnt. the face in mars was just a common mesa that is found in that region. the first thing that seen it was viking 1 it was trying to find a landing place for its sister ship viking 2. People only think it was a face because the tech wasnt atvanced enough to see the image clearly.\n\nSome people think that it looked like a Egyptian pharaoh. The face on mars was in some movies,magizins,and on the radio.Some conspiracy theorists think that NASA found aliens and are hiding it from the public. More than one spacecraft was sent to take pictures of the land formation.\n\nWhen they sent space crafts up there the land formation was hidden by clouds. That made people go crazy they started to make storys about the clouds. The space crafts where built to only take pictures of a cople meters so it took them a long time to get the pictures. Finally they put it to rest when the last ship went up there to get pictures and they did that showed a rock formation.\n\nTherefore, many people where fighting about who was right about the mesa. Some people was arguing with NASA. NASA said that the have no busniess finding aliens. People think that they are lying about the whole thing while others think that it is all true what they are saying.They had to prove that it wasnt true so they kept taking picures untill they had a clear picure and they relesed it to the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it talks about how scientists should focus on exploring Venus our sister planet. They want to further explore Venus because of how facinating the planet is. The only problem is that the weather, atmosphere, and pressure on Venus is very deadly. No spaceship has ever lasted a long time on Venus, so not much is really known about what is hiding on its surface. That's why scientists thing that we should explore more into Venus. By exploring Venus our understanding of more planets in out solar system would expand greatly.\n\nThe author gives many claims and examples of how we can further explore Venus with little to no probelms. The first claim is that a blimp-like ship could hover over the planet at a safe area to achieve more information anout the planet and atmosphere. The temperature would still be hot and crazy, but it would not be as hot as the surface of Venus is. Also the pressure would be safe and would not kill anyone like it would on the surface of Venus. But the only probelm with this idea is that the people can not get any physical samples of rock, gas, and any other material on Venus. They would only be able to observe from the ship that is hovering over the planet. This idea would work, but the information that we would get wouldn't be as helpful as acturally going onto Venus's surface\n\nAnother claim that the author gives that we could try is that, scientist have made simplified electronics made out of silicon carbide already that can survive up to 3 weeks in the conditions Venus has. Along with this is by looking back into older technologies and how strong and stable they are. And how we can incorperate this into ships and other things that could travel to Venus safely. This would work but it wouldn't last forever and would eventrally melt and or something would happen to the objects that are preasent. This idea would work up to a certain area and would give us only limited information that we could obtain.\n\nThe author is all for exploring Venus and that we should try harder and focus more on the exploration of Venus. The author does give some decent claims about how we could take it into action. But the claims he gives don't really show how we can get to Venus. The claims that the author has given in the reading are well but together, and they seem like they would work up to a certain extent. In the reading the author makes it seem that we should put all of our time into exploring Venus, and he gives many reasons why. And what information we would gain out of exploring Venus. The author gives many helpful ideas that would not be as dangerous as just going to the planet's surface. Overall the auhtor gives his support to the exploration of Venus, and his claims are very well towards that idea as well.\n\nIn all not just the author thinks that we should explore our sister planet Venus. There are many people that have thought of this idea and that we should work towards it. Venus is a very interesting planet and has many things that have yet been discovered about it. Overall the author fully supports that claim that we should further explore Venus for many reasons that would be successful to us and help our knowledge grow.\n\nVenus is the only planet that could've looked like earth many years ago, and still has many similar features to this day with earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No,I couldn't imagine a world with driverless cars. There are safety concerns malfunctioning and self readyness for this project that strike a major problem for the community .The driverless cars seem very dangerous for our community.There are many more reasons that i can think of that make this a bad idea.I don't support the deciesion for driverless cars.\n\nThe safety concern is a big issue to drive and not be safe would also concern everyone else to. There are questions such as \"What if I don't grab the wheel in time to turn it at certain point\"? There would still have to be a driver ready at all times to drive in case of emergency cause the car might need assistance.If you have to help turn at times or brake then an all acualilty the car is not completly driverless.That causes more vulnerabilty to accicents and injury.\n\nThere is a chance for malfunctioning problems while driving. Driverless cars still will contain batteries and oil gas, and etc. When riding in these driverless cars at time what if your battery dies while driving then what happens to you cause your in the car that can cause accidents. The brakes in the car could jam or anything and there is really nothing you could do cause the car would still be driving and you can't alert the car then . The function of a car is very important things can happen at anytime so if your driving you don't want a malfunction from a driverless car.\n\nThe last concern for me is the self readyness for driving that car.There could be a time while the car is going that it needs you to take the wheel randomly and there isn't time for you to grab it. Does the car pull over if you have the police behind you signaling for you to pull\n\nover cause if not then you're at fault for something you can't\n\ncontrol. Alot of times cars slide during ice how can you control it if your car is sliding and it needs you to take over to late. The self readyness system should be a concern for all driviers who are goint to drive in there car formats.\n\nIn conclusion the driverless cars are not a safe idea. The cars face safety concerns ,malfunctining and self readyness problems. These are the main objects you need to drive a car. The supplier of the cars should reconsruct there design for the car. Driverless cars are not a benifit to the community and they can be a harm and or threat to the citizens of the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world of large cities and distant suburbs, transportation is crucial, but is personal transportation truly necessary? Shouldn't there be a way of getting from point A to point B without expending an unecessary amount of harmful gases that could one day bring around our demise? As specified by Elisabeth Rosenthal, Robert Duffer, and Andrew Selsky the answer to these questions is yes. Yes, there is hope for a healthier future without the use of BMWs, Toyota Corollas, Mercedes, and other modes of personal transportation that pollute the Earth. These answers have been noticed by our World's leaders and they are finally taking initiative to save our planet.\n\nAccording to Elisabeth Rosenthal, writer for the New York Times, Germany is one of the many countries beginning to take notice. This is evident in the building of a small suburb called Vauban where \"life goes on without cars\". Although approximately 30 percent of the residents in Vauban do own a car, it is clear that the 5,500 people living in this small town are happier residing in a place where vehicles do not crowd the streets. As said by a mother living in Vauban \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\".\n\nThis idea of a \"car reduced\" community is not only seen in Germany but might very well soon be found in other countries such as the United States. These ideas today might just be seen by the public as what they are: ideas. However, serious action must be taken now. Although personal transportation might be seen as a necessity by your average citizen, it is not. Personal vehicles are a luxury that we use at, no only our own risk, but at the risk of everyone forced to breathe the intoxicating fumes of these polluting machines. According to recent data, 12 percent of green house gas emmisions in Europe come from passenger cars but this number is not nearly as shocking as that of the United States: 50 percent!\n\nAs stated by Robert Duffer and Andrew Selsky, writers for the Chicago Tribune and Seattle Times, Paris and Bogota have come to understand the consequences of the use of personal cars and are taking small steps to better the circumstances brought on to the human population due to the car pollution. In Paris, however, the city had to undergo a hard blow from reality for the french government to understand how crucial this change is. After suffering near record pollution, Paris enforced a partial ban on the driving of passenger cars in order to clear the air. If the ban was not respected by an individual, he/she would be forced to pay a 22-euro fine. Although there were a few who did not follow the terms of the ban, the majority of the people did comply and the smog soon cleared.\n\nFor Bogota, however, the ban of passenger cars for a single day has been seen as more of a holiday. The people of this city have come to enjoy this somewhat stress free day away from cars. According to the Bogota mayor, Antanas Mockus, event the rain has not stopped people from participating in this day. This day is not as small of a step as you might think however. For it is a program set to spread to various countries where, for a single day a year, people will bike, hike, roler blade, etc. In other words, everything they MUST do to get from point A to point B.\n\nFinally, as countries around the world begin to take initiative towards the better of our planet, the United States, one of the world's super powers is starting on it's path towards recovery. In the past years, data has come to support the fact that there truly is a shift in the American \"way of life\". As seen in recent studies, Americans are buying fewer cars , driving less and getting fewer licenses as times goes on. Although the United States peaked in miles driven in 2005 it is evident that, with time, that amount gradually declined and hit a low in April 2013 where the miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak. As a cause of this sudden hit on the use of cars researchers are beginning to ask: could the United States truly be entering a new era away from the pollution of passenger vehicels or is this just another phase?\n\nPassenger vehicles and the gases they create could very well be the demise of our existence on Earth. This is unless, as a human poopulation, we begin to take action now. Although scientists everywhere have stressed the negative impact on the Earth brought on by cars, people are blind to see that these vehicles are not a necessity but rather a luxury. For this, it is crucial that countries and leaders around the world follow what others have done and begin to enforce the protection of the planet's health and ensure our survival as a species.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author shows this by referring Venus as Earth's \"twin\", nearest option for a planetary visit, and travels not being limited.\n\nThe author says that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and by showing that this is true he refers Venus as Earth's twin. The author goes to say that, \"Often referred to as Earth's 'twin,' Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" The author also gives an example on why it isn't Earth's twin. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" These pieces of evidence show the real dangers of Venus and it's environment.\n\nThe nearest option for a planetary visit is Venus. The author says, \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" He also goes to say that, \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" With these pieces of evidehce it shows that the planet shows features of planet movement.\n\nThe last thing is travels should not be limited. The author says, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The author also comments, \"Out travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Not limiting travles can expand reasearch and these pieces of evidence show that they want to do what it takes to study this planet.\n\nIn conclusion, these are the reasons why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving cars would be easier than having to drive a driverless car. Because imagine people having to drive these driverless cars. What if the car had elcetrical problems and had messed up the GPS and it didnt know where to go. And what if the sensors were broke an then people would have no signs of danger coming thier way.''In fact,none of the cars develop so far are completly driverless.''\n\nHow are people going to get around when they so much stuff for these car. Like sensors for an example,''General motors created a concept that a car could run on a special test track he tested on. The track was embedded with electrical cable that sent radio signals to the front and the end of the car.'' but these smart roadsystems worked surprisinlgy well ,but they required alot of upgrades to exiting roads, ut it was to expensive to be pratical but with out smarter roads they can they need a whole lot of sensors.\n\nFor example people want to be able to drive with out someon e driving for them, and people should not have to wait their turn to drive when the car need human asssatance. ''In 2013,BMW anounced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car can handle driving functions at the speed up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think about this emotional expression technology is that I don't think it's too important. The reason I think this way is because there isn't a point to having one in the classroom why would the class want or need an emotional expression. Yes I do know some of the classmates would like to use one but it wouldn't be so important, but\n\nSometimes you can know how your friend or a person feels just by asking them or just by the look on there face. I know this because in the story it also say's \"For instance , you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" what this tells me is, another reason why a class dosen't need an emotion expression I feel like it might just take up there time just by using that type of technology and the class might not have much care for the class.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Society always dealing appropriate We witness things nature every day even trying It classic argument two parties trying prove eachother wrong admissable We try efforts keep inapporpriate books shelves hands young population People influenced anything There many tales pick even one The interesting thing people affected someone indirectly Whether television music books man molded something conditioned believe The influences one encounters either positive negative As lowly person wants best society I know movies criminal acts explicit images help anyone become better citizen It different books Books politically incorrect messages sense better movies achieve goal I way reading books rather I quite contrary Reading overall good mental social health allows us explore things deep inside us often rendered useless fastpaced world But one constantly overexposed books human nature removed good people around us If one find book read deemed appropriate needs take look There millions books exciting stimulating also positive influence one well We members already enough trouble financial troubles We need add table let population gain access obsene books would typically make someone rebellious society If something making people lands riotous immediately censored removed society general Believe ways fun get good message across timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though driveless cars are a gateway to a new world promoting them can lead to pyschological complications and more commotions.Though these ideas help the evolving framework of technology, it doesn't help the revolution of the people.These complications alone are reasons to be against the development of these cars.\n\nFor example, \"the pyschological aspects of automation are really a challenge.\"This statement supports the claim that driveless cars lead to pyscological complications for the people. People will be so use to not having to drive the car one might forget. So many people will go on everyday doing the same thing that it will become a habit and not actually driving the car would be habitual.\n\nNot only driverless cars affect the pyschological aspects of a human it leads to complications with each other. In paragraph 9 under the subtitle \"Waiting on the Law\" it questions rather someone who gets in an accident is to blame or the manufacturer.If someone did get into an accident this not only cause commotin but causes law suits, the mourn of the people that have been lost, and hatred.Not just hatred for someone else but for yourself as well. This will cause havoc everywhere.\n\n\"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\" What problems exactly? Sure some may suggests that driverless cars are a great way to revolutionize the world, but it is not. Driverless cars supports the evolution of technology but what about the evolution of the human mind? Having cars that work entirely on their own doesn't even challenge the brain at all. Having technology for everything will lead us to laziness. Soon we'll all stop trying and stop challenging ourselves to learn something new.\n\nFurthermore, supporting the driverless cars will lead to the destruction of the world. It changes the pyschological aspects for each other. Not driving a car will become normal someday. It can also lead to hurting one another. Rather its verbally or physically. It also deters from the evolution of the human race. It only focuses on evolution of technology. It doesn't help strengthen the human mind at all. Technology can only take us so far. Its up to us to challenge ourselves if we want the world to really evolve and be safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes studying venus is a worthy pursuit because you never know what we might find just like the author said their could be another form of life. Studying venus might be a very dangerous act but i mean look at who we have as our president. Just walikng down the street is dangerous in some parts. I think it could be a very interesting study.\n\nThe author said that venus has very high conditions but i mean scientists have found a way to live on mars so i mean cant we do that too. Yes it could be very hot and dangerous but what if we found the creators of life not saying we would ut you never know. I just think it is a good idea t study venus. Everyone has questions about how we got here what made life or even who made life but not one person can answer that because we dont know but if we study venus imagine what we could find.\n\nYes this might be a very dangerous act but it could also be a very useful act too. I think studying venus it a great ideo and i hope people agree. So yes we should study venus and try to find a way over the hurdles of venus and figure some things out.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage will benfit this world in many ways. The reason we are thinking of this is because in this world today pollution is getting out of hand. We are smart enough to realize this though and are trying to fix this problem.\n\nIf we limit car usage the death toll will not be as high, death is supposed to be natural, car crashes are becoming natural. Everyday I hear sirens and i assume there has been a car crash, on the radio instead of playing music they have \"stress-saver traffic\" which tells you what major roads are closed because of car crashes. I get using a car if your work is more than 5 miles away, but if you live close why waste the money? or take the risk? We can't be that lazy. Driving cars causes stress too, like road rage. \" 'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two...\" (Rosenthal, Source 1, Par. 2). This explains how cars stress people, this risk of car crashes etc.\n\nLimiting car usage will also eliminate getaway vehicles for crimminals. What better way to identify a car with less cars on the road? There are benfits everywhere obesity would go down because people would be forced to do some type of excercise to get to their job instead of using a car. In some ways New York, USA has already done this by creating subways. Lots of people use subways to get to their jobs or bikes. Then again it has the most polluted city in the U.S. using subways will reduce that pollution dramatically or just walking somewhere instead of taking a cab.\n\nHaving a car-free day would at least open our eyes to the differnce it would make. Imagine the glorious sounds of birds chirping, verbal commucation between people while they walk, and the smells. The smells of flowers you couldn't smell before or the orange tree down the road, the fresh grass, all of it. The daily noise would come to a halt, you would be able to hear things you couldn't hear before. Live life to the fullest. People would start going outside more instead of being indoors. Not using a car makes us even with everyone else, there wouldn't be any jealousy of who owns the best car. We wouldn't kill as much nature as before, we have ran things into extinction just because we wanted to build a highway. Maybe nature might grow back from the things we destroyed from it. Hey I mean look how long we survived without cars, we are barely surviving WITH them, car crashes are at a all time high.\n\nI'm just saying wouldn't it be nice to live longer? not have to risk your life while driving? or being that innocent pedestrian on the sidewalk who got hit because the driver was drunk or fell asleep at the wheel? Or wouldn't it be nice to be able to look up into the beautiful night sky and actually see stars? these are all things that can't happen with people driving these days, what we need is a car-free way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Book Censorship Censorship libraries major problem The question Should age limit people check Or another question CAPS let child check commonly asked questions attention put toward In oponion books age limit My reasoning becuase kids years age place find good books thier age group There plently books age groups A kid able check book magazine movie music offensive language racial slurs dirty behivor character artist Another reason libraries age limit things check becuase kids get wrong idea Lets say book statment says CAPS I went bestfreind s house drank alcohol would somthing child able able read It would give child wrong idea could The age limits book shelves followed CAPS books age groups would probably help stop refrain parents worrying kid reading Plus would help kid deciding read I really think books age groups stop commotion Censorship major problem With everything I listed I pretty sure questions Should age limit people check CAPS let child check answered Age groups books great ideaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine driving on I-69 on just an average day. Everything is perfect. Then out of the drivers window you see a car pass you, but this isn't a normal car. This car has no driver. I belive that these cars will be a great addition to the automobile industry.\n\nThe Idea of a self driven car creats a magnitude of possibilities. These, \"cars of the future\", have the capability of fixing this world both economically and phisically. If these cars stick to Sergey's dream, of being both fuel efficient and more flexible than a bus, then they can help save the world's ecosystem. These cars can be used like a taxi service and use less than half the fuel that taxis use presently. These cars would give of half of the emmisions that normal cars do now.\n\nNot only will these cars be more eco friendly but they will also be more work friendly. Self driven cars have the chance of reinventing the automobile industry. Big time auto mobile companies like General Motors and Tesla have already been working on similar ideas of these Driverless cars. Even Benz, Audi, and nissan also have plans to release driverless cars in the next decade. With these cars many new Jobs will open up creating\n\nbetter work force.\n\nWith these, \"Future Cars\", there ale limitless possibilities. Have you ever gone on a road trip to some vacation resort maby 250 miles away. It gets boring and sometimes they leave you exauseted, but you don't want to stop at an Inn and lose more time that you could have on you vacation. With these cars you could sleep right in them and still keep driving. They would also allow you to spend more time with your family on the trip itself. While the car drives you can play as a family.\n\nBut the cars have more capabilities than just that. Imagine the capabilities those cars would have on Jobs, and not the work force but actual Jobs. These cars could make moving alot easier. With these cars you move and pull things with out you actually having to be there. All construction Jobs could be completed alot faster because all hands could be working while the cars go back and forth collecting rescorces.\n\nThese Driverless Cars are the future and they open our world to many new possibilities. They can create not only more Jobs, but a cleaner ecosystem in the process. They can make road trips more enjoyible while also make work easier. These cars are the solution to many problems, and this is the type of things we need in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars pose a great advancement for the future generations and create a safer enviorment for the drivers and pedestrians. Technlogy is always advancing, and this makes life much more convienent and this is what car companies aim for in the driverless car advancement. Google is most advanced in this subject creating a car that uses sensors, cameras, and a GPS to make this car safe. The car's sensors enable it to create a 3-D model of its surroundings making it able to contemplate where to go and how to get there in correspondance with it surroundings. Other companies have made advancements also such as anti-lock brakes and systems that will assist you in a traffic jam. Although some oppose the thought of these technological advancements they can't stop it, it was bound to happen eventually.\n\nThe driverless car is a big step in car technology, this could increase traffic effiency by syncronizing a fleet of cars together with the traffic lights this would cause less stress and faster destination arrival time. This efficency could also work for delivery trucks and taxi's. This may cause some job loss but this will better the economy and in turn create jobs. This car advancement makes it safer and will decrease the amount of accidents happening each year saving lives and money. This new technology is for the good of everyone.\n\nThe driverless car is very convinent not requiring any human assistance this will allow us to get more work done, drive over night to distant states, and get you to your destination safely. If someone is late to work and not done with a status report for the company they could work on it on the way there with this car. If a family needs to get to Florida by tomorrow they can set the destination and sleep and arrive there in the morning. So much can be accomplished with this advancement the possibilities are endless.\n\nGoogle is the first to create a prototype of this car equiping this car with motion sensors, cameras, and a GPS this helps it get to the destination safely. But, they are far from completing this prototype due to the car arriving at complicated situations such as a traffic jam or pulling out of a driveway or parking space. This driverless Toyota Prius has driven half a million miles without crashing which make it very safe. This puts the dream of a driverless car one step closer.\n\nThe driverless Toyota Prius is equipped with many technological mechanisms to make it as safe as possible. The motion sensors and camera scan the area surrounding the car and process the inofrmation creating a 3-D model so the computer can contemplate where to go and how to get there as quickly and safely as possible. Other companies such as BMW created a program that helps you as best as i can to get out of a Traffic Jam , also antilock brakes have been announced to be in development.\n\nSome oppose of the idea of diverless cars seeing them as accidents waiting to happen and complications in the court system but the truth is this cannot be stopped technological advancements will be forced upon us and we will have to conform to these ways.In conclusion the driverless cars will be a great advancement to our daily lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I were a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens I would use facts agenced there theiries.\n\nAs a NASA scientist I know that the face is just a natural landform not created by aliens. Now it would be cool and all if the Face was created by aliens but we all know there has been not trace of alien life. Also if their where aliens, why would they make Face looks like an Egyptian Pharaoh? How would aliens even know about that? There is just no logic in these therioes, what so ever.\n\nHowever NASA has evidence that this Face was no created by aliens but natural landforms. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveypr flew over Cydonia and snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original picture taken by NASA's Viking 1 and 2 spacecrafts. This photo taken by, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC),revealed that the Face was only natural landform. Of course everyone was not satisafied, believeing that alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nBut mission controllers looked again, with some hard work, and only gained more facts that the natural landforms made more sense about how the Face got on Mars. Its turns out natural landforms are common around the American West. Also just another reason to have believed NASA is that the buget defenders wished there was an anicent civilization, so if there where Aliens dont you think NASA would have been making money off of the rumor if it were true.\n\nAnyway in conclusion, even though rumors of alien life or civilization would have been cool and all, it's not. Nope,no aliens, just a natural landform!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story paragraph shows Saeng prepare test accustom place seeing plants reminded home knowing spring time blossom ready take testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A thick Atmosphere containing 97% carbon dioxide, Venus is a dangerous planet. It's extremely high pressures and dangerouly scorching surface, it is beyond comparison to Earth's environment. Although its proximity to us is closer than that of mars, its reputation precedes it as a challenging planet. Despite the dangers, Venus is a worthy pursuit because it was once an Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nTo start off with, it's geographic features are similar to that of Earth. In the article, on paragraph 4, it says, \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various life forms.\" On paragraph 4, further down, it says, \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and inlcudes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Based on these two evidence, Venus's features; which once included rocks and oceans, can be found on Earth.\n\nNext, the technologies provided by Sophisticated Organizations and companies can help through the exploration process. On parargraph 5, it says, \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions...would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" As we move further down the paragraph, it says,\" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" From these two evidence, NASA's solution can be benefical because the explorers wouldn't be exposed to the surface; they can avoid the unfriendly conditions, and they can gain acess to the solar power needed to power the machine, it's a win-win.\n\nThen finally, the studying process. On paragraph 7, it says, \"\n\nSome simplied electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venu's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditons.\" From the same paragraph, it says, \" Systems that use mechanical parts can be more resistent to the pressure, heat, an other forces.\" From the simplied electronics to the mechanical parts; which both have been proven useful in the conditions of venus, can be used to collect data. the mechanical parts won't melt and 3 weeks for resisting the conditions is extremely useful, these are the solutions that can be used o study Venus.\n\nTo end this essay, Venus is worthy due to the similarities it posesses. From all those planets, it was Venus's proximity and it's features that are analogous to that of Earth. Scientists can learn what happened to Venus through the technologies given. These technological solutions provides safe ways to travel and to collect data from Venus. Despite the dangers, it is the only planet that was Earth-like, it's time frame for space travel is much less than that of Mars. This is an opportunity of the time, and the author is trying to inform us that we should take the opportunity and explore. We have the technology, we know that venus is close to us, and the fact that it was once a twin of Earth, that's fascinatiing. Aren't you curious to find out what happened to Venus?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the new technology \"Facial Action Coding System\" is a great idea to use in the classroom. The new techology is perfect for teachers to use because it could give the teacher some insite on how the student is feeling, Lost, Confused, Distressed, Bored, Ect. Those are the main resons people do not learn much about what the presentation or lecture is about.\n\nIn the passage it states the teacher will be able to see if a student is confused. If the student is the teacher would be able to stop the lecture and ask some questions. Even if they are not saying anything about their confusion the teacher could ask them after class and save them from loosing a day of notes just by being confused. This new technology not only could save students from bad grades in class but it could tell the teacher how the student is feeling or even thinking.\n\nIf the student shows and emotion on his face like depression or anger the teacher would know and could ask that student what is wrong. The teacher would be able to comfort that student or even help he/she through that rough time in their life. The student could have just lost a loved one or got into a fight with a close friend so they may be only thinking about that and not about their classwork. Teacher could tell that students parents about what is wrong and their parents could comfort their child as well.\n\nThe Facial Coding System could you used worldwide around schools from elementary all the way through college.\n\nThis technology could help many schools that are big and many kids in one classroom. With this technology the teacher would even be able to know if the student has a question. This could primarily help many students with their grades. I know that when I get confused I do not stop the teacher to ask the question, I wait until the end of class and forget that I had a question. The teacher would know this and I would get that question answered either during the lecture or after class. That is why I think that this new technology is revelutionary. This could help thousands if not millions with their grades and school life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When we use facial expressions it lets the person you are directing the expressions to know how we are feeling. We smile because we are happy, we frown because we are sad, we raise our eyebrows because we are shocked or surprised. We use usually identify those pretty well, but a computer can identify them better. I am for the value of using techology to read student's emotional expressions because teachers need to know what bores them or what excites them.\n\nWhen I first began to read this, I thought how can technology read our emotions? Then it states in paragraph 3 that the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. With all 44 major muscles in the model that must move like human muscles. This computer can identify 6 basic emotion: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. With that type of skill, teachers can know what students like and don't like.\n\nStudents get easily bored when it comes to school. When they come into the classroom, they don't want to do the homework or the classwork that was given to them. They want something that will entertain them and help them learn at the same time. With this new technology, student's facial expression will be identified when they like or don't like something. Teachers then can change the way the lesson is taught without changing the lesson at all as told in paragraph 6.\n\nThis is a new way to change how schools teach. More students would want to come to school and teachers would have an increase in successful students. Knowing what we didn't know is creating more ideas to the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers progressing lives These machines help world become easier place work pay bills even entertain ourselfs things weighed negative effects like online dangers increasing reality obesity problems face With new advances people spending time sitting around outside udds obesity problem face Kids teens today would much rather account go run shoot hopps Also ads web unhealthy foods making kids likely eat junkfood Finally internet fools people believing go easy diet eat become skinny worries Along computers users comes increasing dangers threats Viruses hack computer steal personal info destroy computer You huge bills things nt even buy Cyber bullies also new dangerous threat These people threaten taught inosent people I remember story girl took life bullied someone turned another girl mother Finally online predators great threat teens These people brain wash people convince meet rape kill Last least todays computers interaction young minds increases ignorance ads negleck education reading Many kids even would rather online read book homework computer take people s likes neglect school important things like homework studing credting weaker minds future Also ads website false information fall youth even ignorance ignorant belifs Finally kids computer interaction cause belites like shout vote black racist ignorant statements Computers help advance bettering world understanding world certain aspects create ignorance danger people yound old mindsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I, Luke Bombeger, crossed the atlantic ocean 16 times out of my life. I wanted to help people in need, and I did. I am proud to be a seagoing cow boy.\n\nI wanted to help people who were affected by the war. Sure, there were many hardships. And at one point I almost died. But it is all worth it. I got to help many people, and I also helped solve the food problem in Europe.\n\nOn the boat trips I had to care for many animals, it kept me busy, but it was good to do work. When the animals were unloaded, we would play around in the stalls and play games. It was a good time with my team mates.\n\nI encourage you to be a seagoing cowboy. I had so many good oppurtunities and I helped so many people. I feel blessed to go from country to country and help others in need. If you help, I think you might be surprised at how much you can accomplish in life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Competitiveness is a desirable quality for individuals. This essay will analyse the effects of competitiveness on people and illuminate my view as to whether the eagerness of competition represents an auspicious or ominous tendency.\nThere are mainly two types of influence exerted by competitiveness on people. The most prominent repercussion resides in that the desire of competition drives people to work or study more diligently in order to stand out from the rest and achieve success. Such diligence enables people to accumulate sufficient experience that helps them improve capabilities and obtain better results. Apart from that, another important effect of competitiveness is that competitors may seek considerable pleasure in competition, especially when defeating competent rivals and obtaining hard-earned victories. Such success makes people realise how excellent they are and gives them tremendous satisfaction. Even if losing the competition, people may still be satisfied with such a precious opportunity that helps them understand their disadvantages and thus, encourages them to work harder.\nAs far as I am concerned, I opine that competitiveness is a positive phenomenon, because it not only helps people become industrious learners or workers with sufficient experience and great potential of making progress, but also makes their daily lives more enjoyable as beating strong opponents may give them a unique sense of satisfaction. Therefore, I think that the importance of competitiveness should never be underestimated.\nTo sum up, the effects of competitiveness can be manifested by the impetus driving people to work or study harder, and the unique pleasure of competing against strong rivals. Personally, I hold that this is an auspicious trend.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus in one of the brightesrt points of light in the nigt sky, this nickname is misleading\n\nsince venus is actually a planet, venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. numerous factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly carrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere . on the planet superface, temperatures average over 800 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greaer than what we experince on our own planet in ine condition for everyone than humans.\n\nthe national aeronautics and space administration (nasa) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus . the nasa is working on other approaches to studying for example venus study the surfaceand have lasted for there weeeks in such conddition, by comparation, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nearth and beyond be expanded to meet the very edges of imsginstion and innovation one big example is the exploration of planet vanusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author states that Venus is a worthy pursuit desipite the dangers it presents. It is a worthy pursuit because we could compare information and data to that of Earth, since they are similar, and maybe discover more about both planets.\n\nTo support this claim, in paragrpah 2, the author explains one of the reasons we should \"explore\" Venus is beacuse it is the most earth like planet. In terms of density, size and most landscape. Venus is also sometimes the closest planet to earth beside Mars, sometimes only meaning that all planets rotate in the solar system and when they pass is when they're close. Another reason why Venus is a worthy pursuit is because of its value, and the insight to be gained on the planet itself as well as because \"human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\" as said in paragraph 8.\n\nA human trip to Venus would be dangerous because of its intense heat which is over 800 degrees farenheit. Anything within the atmosphere of venus would melt, or die. This adds huge consideration and debate to why we can't get close to venus. Even within 30 miles of Venus, it is around 170 degrees (paragraph 5). The atmosphere around Venus is so thick, you wouldn't even be able to see the surface. Which gives a challenge to NASA.\n\nThe author states evidence very clear in this article. Why should we visit Venus? Because it is beneficial, not only to science and astronomy, but to everyone. A trip like this does have many dangers, which is why the author explains how NASA is figruing out how it would be possible. NASA has been trying to discover a way to deliver humans to Venus and survive. But because of Venus' thick layer of Acid like clouds and heat, its difficult. The challenge is figuring out how to safely get close to Venus without dying. And as the author says in the text, they aren't afraid of the challenge.\n\nA trip to Venus would be worthy because not only is it the most earth like planet, but we could also learn. Especially, if there was somehting to happen to Earth, and all people needed to escape, what if Venus was the only option? Astronaughts could already have acceptable information about Venus, we could most likely change it to be suitable for human survival. We did it to Earth, it could happen again.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso happy grateful He proud parents His parents left behind thair family friends give A better life When Arrived start They got A house And fixed upto liked They fixed house look like A cuban home His parents All ways took people came cuba And let stay untill got back feet Thats pround And grateful parentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir emotional describes childhood grewSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Modern tendency when the majority of people decide to build a family and have children much later than in the past has many factors like financial or as a way to self-actualize. Actually, merits outweigh demerits in this decision.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n\tNowadays, the average age when couples give birth is shifted after 30 years due to some individuals realizing that nurturing a child will change everything and trying to prepare consciously. It is related to this fact that many people tried to build their own career and got financial independence to avoid difficult financial circumstances in the future. As a matter of fact, baby-minding requires a lot of family’s budget, for instance: contribution in each stage from a kindergarten to a university. Moreover, a stable financial situation at home allows a kid to grow in a healthy home’s atmosphere surrounded by love. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n\tBut, the main demerits in this decision is the woman's health. Many science researches show that if a woman gets older then childbearing will be harder. Moreover, a child’s well-being is directly influenced by the mother’s health. For instance: The poor eyesight is a common problem which occurs in late birth of children. Nonetheless, this problem is solvable with glasses or a special eye’s operation. And myriads of couples do not afraid by possible health aftermath and they are confident the end justifies the means.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n\tIn a nutshell, for a couples who decided build a family and have a child in later age exist many pros which help to establish healthy and lavish surrounding to their kids, those are definitely eliminated the cons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of Driverless Cars sounds like a cool idea. But to others, like me, are against the idea. Just cause the car drives itself, doesnt always mean it is 100% safe for the passengers, other drivers, or pedestrians. Lawmakers even agree that \"The only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\".\n\nDriverless cars can be a little too pricey as well. It can start problems with the buyers of a driverless car, and the company. Especially when an accident takes place. Whos the blame...? \"If the technology fails and someone is injured. who is at fault, the driver or manufacturer?\" Its something that people and the makers of the car are unsure about, the quotations back that up.\n\nThat could result into the companys to go out of bussiness. Causing all the money put into the driverless cars to go to waitse, when the money could have been investied into something wise.\n\nAlthough, it would be nice to get to relax in the car to your destination without physcialy driving, the idea still takes responsibility. Meaning the Driverless Car still involes human altercations while driving. The article states that \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". To wrap this up, I disagreee with making driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.Venus sometimes called the evening star because it's one of the brightest point in the sky making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.Venus is the second planet from our sun.Venus is the closest planet to earth.\n\nVenus is a challenging planet for humans to study.No spacecraft survived more than a few hours on venus.Not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more then three decades.On venus its over 800 degrees fahrenheit.These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth.\n\nVenus it the hottest planet in are solar system.The value of returning to venus seems indisputable,but what are the options for making such a mission.Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating.They also called venus earth's twin because it's the closest planet.A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus.\n\nEven more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere.And that's the challenge of exploring venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you seen the picture of the object on Mars that some people believe looks like a face? Do you believe it is a natural landform or a face created by aliens? This paper is to help explain why some people believe it is a face and others think it is a natural landform.\n\nIn 1976 NASA´s Viking 1 was circling Mars to see where its sister ship Viking 2 could land when it arrived on Mars. It was snapping photos when suddenly it spotted something that looked like a human face. It looked like the head was staring right back at the camera. It was from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. The people controlling the ship\n\nwere surprised to see an object that looked like a human face. Scientists then figured out it was a Martian mesa but had an unusual shadow that made it look like a Pharaoh. A few days after seeing the image NASA unveiled the image to the public. They thought it was a good idea to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. In fact it did attract the attention of a lot of people. It has become a pop icon. It has stared in a Hollywood film, in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even in the grocery store. Some people think the face is evidence of life on Mars,which is information that NASA would want to hide from people. It became a priority for NASA to get more photos of Cydonia. In 1998 the team snapped a photo ten times sharper than the original photos. Many people were on the Internet to see the image right after it was put on the web. It turns out that it was just a natural landform. Not everyone was pleased though. Some people said that the camera had to peer through clouds so the alien jmarkings were hidden by haze. In 2001 there were no clouds in Cydonia so the team took another picture. This photo is very clear and shows no evidence that it is a face. It shows that it is a natural landform.\n\nHas your viewpoint of the object changed? If you still think that it is a alien created object then look at the picture from 2001. There are no clouds to block anything that would make you think it is a face. In the first photo it is a shadow that makes it look like a face. Also the\n\nphoto is very blurry. The less blur there is the more it looks like a natural landform not a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr./Mrs. Senator,\n\nIn light of previous research I've done on the Electoral College, I would like the opportunity to voice my opinion on how the voting system should work in this country. Based off of the information acquired and with the best interest of the country at heart, I believe that the system should be changed to the election by popular vote for the president of the United States.\n\nFirst and foremost, when voters vote, they aren't really voting for their candidate, but a slate of electors, which in turn elect the president. Don't you think that this method is a little impersonal? As well as the matter of possibly having one's chosen candidate not win the presidency-even when they've won the popular vote- as a result of losing the electoral vote. According to 'The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong', the best argument against the electoral college is what we call the disaster factor. The system allows room for crisis; technically state legislatures are responsible for picking electors, who could always defy the will of the people. An example, would be in 1960, when segregationists almost succeeded in replacing electors of the Democratic party with new ones who opppesed John F. Kennedy; as well as the case of some faithless electors refusing to vote for their party's candidate and pick whomever they like.\n\nAnother valid reason as to why the system of voting must be changed to popular vote is due to the unfair winner-takes-all way the electoral college works. In most cases, candidates do not see all states as important, only those they think they have a shot in winning over. A way to look at this, according to 'In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep out desspised method of choosing the President', is that a regional favorite, such as Mitt Romney in the South during the 2012 voting, has no incentive to campaign in states outside of the region because he gains no electoral votes. However, this is also a disadvantage, for he cannot expand his popularity to other regions of the country. If he does so with the new popular vote system, winning the presidency will be guaranteed. Neglecting voters that are potential supporters of one's campaign is, in my opinion, the worst way to go about winning.\n\nIn summation, the Electoral College should be replaced with a popular voting system. I assure you that even though this system might have worked in the past, but in the ever changing world of politics, some things have to be done away with, and the Electoral College is one of them; with holes in the way the system works and outcomes that could possibly do more harm than good leave the Electoral College with nothing more to offer the future of this country. Thank you for your time.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA skeptical citizenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient means bad situation dont complain Some people arent vary patient patient In eyes patience important I likes think sort patient I think I One time I patient family drive fourteen hours get fun One bad thing always go bathroom Once privillage go want get taken away want even But I kept saying patient well stop next place Another thing alway hungry thirsty We stopped three times fun Also whenever got food enough But I didnt complain Lastly really want get couldnt wait sandy beaches waves It seamed like would never get best experience When finally got I realized trip like big test patience I pasted actually wasnt nearly bad trip backSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the future many people want cars that are driverless. I disagree with this life changing creation. Even though it may be fancy driverless cars are a watse of money, and isn't helping society. We should not have driverless cars because it may cause more accidents, drivers will never stay focus, and these cars can be very dangerous due to not enough research.\n\nFirst, driverless cars can cause more accidents. I make this statement due to paragraph seven the story claims how the car needs assistants from a driver when there are different activities. These \"activities\" the car needs help with is help with work zone and around accidents. This can cause many accidetnts if the car does not alert the driver in the right time. Due to this many accidents can occur.\n\nNext, human drivers would have to stay alert twenty-four-seven. Having to stay alert is a problem for many drivers due to the fact that most drivers text while driving. This means if the car is driving for them they will only pay attention to there phone or other things around them. Due to this many of the cars should stop being developed for the safety of the driver.\n\nLastly, driverless cars can be very dangerous due to the fact that there was not enough research for them. I make this statement because it doesn't tell you what will happen if a little kid run out the street or if a deer jumps in front of your car, as it would with a real driver. These situations is a huge\n\nreason to if this driverless car should keep developing. The final thing the article doesn't tell you is what will happen to the car if it gets watter or a liquid on the inside.\n\nIn conclusion, heres a scenerio what would the driverless car do when a car comes out of no where and you have to make a sharp turn? Does the driverless car have fast reflects like a human being? Driverless cars should no longer develop because it may cause more accidents, most drivers willl not stay focus, and these cars can be very dangerous, due to not enough research.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If there were Driverless cars that drove among you would you fell safe? How about Driverless taxis? It would not be safe if a bunch of driverless taxis driving through the cities with pedestrians and cars in their way. What if they crashed? Who's fault would it be? Would it be the drivers even if they were not the ones who were driving or would it be the manafacture's fault for making a vechicle that isn't safe. There is still many questions to be answered before these driverless cars can even touch the road.\n\nWhat would happen to all the other taxi companies that hired actual people to come and pick people up. If those people arn't needed and they are just more money out of the companies pockets then they are going to get fired or even worse, the companies are going to go bankrupt. Thousands of people will lose jobs and they won't be able to take care of their families. Would it be worth losing so many jobs just because it sounds cool and it can drive itself.\n\nWhat if the driverless cars are misused? People could learn how it works and fuctions and use that for their advantage. They could find some way to hijack it and take over the car or worse and hijack someones taxi while some is in it. People could steal stuff from it or tear it up. People could put something in it that could harm the next person that comes in it. Someone could hack in to it and control it without even being near it. If the driverless taxis released to the streets then it would make a new type of hackers and make new types of criminal. New laws would have to be made because of the one type of car.\n\nHow much would it cost? Could people afford such a futeristic car? Could people still use them if the just got out of a bar or a hub and was drunk? How many people would be able to be in a car at once? It would also probably bankrupt bus companies and other travel companies becuase even if it was more expensive people would still rather be in a driverless taxi then a normal way to travel. How would it refuel? Would you have to go to a gas station yourself and spend even more money or would it do it itself for free but still waste your time? What would people do while the are just sitting there doing nothing?\n\nIt would not be safe to let driverless taxis rome the streets were normal people go. Nor would it be logical because of the damage it would do to the economy because of the taxi manafactures and other travel companies going bankrupt. There is too many questions to be answered before letting driverless taxis become legal. There are to many reasons that this could possibly go wrong or get out of hand. It would also be to harmful and dangerous for people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke seems to like the program, because you help people of other countries,you also play baseball,volleyball, you can fence, table tennis, boxing, reading, and whittling. You can actually see what happens around the world and help other countries.\n\n\"It made more aware of people of other countries and their needs,\" Luke says, you can help countries that are in ruins after World War II. You get to take care for horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. It is a huge responsibility, but it is worth doing. You get to feed the animals, which is like going to a petting zoo for free, besides all the work. You also get to travel to places while you are at a certain country. I wouldn't think it is so easy, because you have to do a lot of work it is harder than it sounds, but you are doing it for a good purpose. It is certainly a great opportunity to help animals get good care and to travel to other countries. I would love the sight seeing and feeding the animals. Although it seems like a lot of work, Luke seemed to have a blast.\n\nI think Luke had a great time and so will you when you get the opportunity to help animals get special care and to help the countries of the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay features setting affected cyclist The cyclist used words discribe setting like flat road short rolling hills There also example The way cyclist discribed setting gave reader visual picture I think cyclist affected settingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, in my opinion, I think driverless cars would be a great idea once google and the car manufactuers can get the right programming, and correct computers for the cars and have them correctly drive in any weather condition or situation every single time without any problems. Now I see people who drive wrecklessly and careless, and I really think that computer driven cars would be for the best, rather than people driving and causing problems and getting into accidents. Even if you have to be in the driverless cars without driving sometimes, it would still be a pretty good idea. I have seen some of the worst drivers ever. For example, google has cars for the future that can drive by themselves, but they are going to have an alert system for when theres road construction, or anything that the car needs to have and actual person to guide the car through whatever the problem is. In conclusion, I think for the future, driverless cars will be a big improvement in safety, and all around better for pedestrians, and other people in cars. Maybe google and the car manufactuers will come up with even better and more ideas past the year 2020. Less gas and more safety is the way to go.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many things life seem like could brilliant ideas reality many flaws One ideas using Empire State building mooring mast dirigibles This Al Smith governor New York time discovers excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted In excerpt builders Empire State building face serious obstacles allow docking dirigibles building Empire State building many blue prints changed One thing changed skeleton building They needed way support drigibles dock The skeleton place put much stress top half building would result breaking Another thing builders deal safety If highly flamable helium inside dirigibles would putting thousands peoples lives jeopardy Finally builders deal violently shifting winds This put stress frame building since winds strong also fear would blow blimp pointed mast break blimp Overall many reasons Mooring Mast never became realitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars will be a good thing. Some industries have already began there experiments with driverless cars. Driverless cars will be a huge improvement for technology. It will also help keep traffic moving.\n\nSome industries are ahead of the game. The industries that have started working on them will be more successful when it comes to selling them. They will be finishing everything up while some companies will just be getting started. Most of the driverless cars will be the same in my opinion.\n\nThey are more positives than negatives to the driverless cars. The negatives out weigh the positives though. Some people will buy these cars and be careless and not pay any attention. If something goes wrong the driver might not be paying attnetion. That could result in a bad wreck. The drivers could sue the companies.\n\nThe law should stay the same for drivers. Some might even be added. The safety of the people in the car is a serious deal. The drivers or assistants should be awake and alert at all times in the car.\n\nDriverless cars will be the next big thing. It is a big improvement and will help out a lot. The safety is a big deal. Drivers shouldalwyas be aware in the car. I believe that driverless cars is a very good idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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