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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers amazing advantage use modern day age They easy learn use connect old friends even learn going online school college offer Computers amazing advancement use one Who nt like computers They easy learn use variety forms Almost every college student computer laptop They could never used one learned easy Most computers come already installed necessary programs including form virus protection software simple software Moving hard leave place many friends place new Computers make much easier letting connect without wait mail writing letters There email facebook myspace let chat old friends new friends even parents Some people say things dangerous start talking people nt know People keep coming even ways stay connected nt miss opportunity These people smart figured way school online This helpful somebody injured trying get another degree get better job People get assignments class takes one two months People get job enjoy nature still day open busy Sure people nt get enjoy campus price gasoline days s worth So nt person sitting around nothing buy computer stay touch technology Remember computers easy use stay connected friends go school This technology help hurtSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this Perpatually transforming approach. There are a plethora of individuals who are very keen to know about History regarding their living space. A fraction of individual have so much curiosity and Different techniques to found out about particular building, monuments and house's history. In forthcoming paragraph, I have elaborated few queries regarding this issue.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost reason is people like to have a hobby related Archaeological survey for some people history and Asian culture is very fascinating thing. That is why some enthusiastic people always trying to get knowledge about information of the place where they live. Whether it is town ,city, home, or building.Furthermore, knowledge seekers always searching and digging their surroundings to add their name in the page of history by finding new kind of locations having ancient relationship.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand there are few ways to get information about any location. Firstly people can contact their local authorities to getting knowledge about what kind of incident, events or great people were linked with that place. Secondly people can use internet to found out the details of history of that location. There are several internet sides, like Wikipedia YouTube Google and so on which serves a plethora of information about any places. Finally, people can visit local library where descriptive books, newspapers, magazine and articles stored, which have a lots of information of any local historical place. \r\n\r\nTo conclude this phenomenon individuals are very keen to know about ancient history and their forefathers linkage with that place via finding about knowledge of location or place.Also there are multiple ways like internet,library,and local government department can provide sufficient information of a place .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood Created author memoir admiration First felt proud parents share Cooking duties work around house felt knowing cuban background proud parents cuban admire parents proud cuban two These mood created author momoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All materials library shold check library anyone take library Which librarian make sure anything goes library checked student take materials library topics going talked materials checked library happens check materials happens lose materials check library Materials library everyone check want check anything library So librarian able tell student want book music movie magazine ect librarian tell student material checked library Then student able check material ask librarian hold material comes back student Then whole school running smoothly senice librarian keep track materials library If check materials lis library nobody able see materials Which checked materials library librarian track So check librarian able track material library So librarian tell student materials materials library noone check Then librarian wait til person took materials library brings materials back library able check person wanted library If check something library lose pay When lose something library means noone able check eithers gets returned pay librarian money new one Then next person wanted wait even longer get lmaterials lost libraries copy materials check Then librarian make sure next person wanted materials able get ever came back library Then person lost material able check anything library anymore thay sit library reas materials either want read read project grade one classes Also check materials library lose librarian able track materials anyon wants check These many reasons check materials library There alot reasons hve check materials library So librarian able keep materials library person check material either want need class stay library ever wantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a good idea. They are safe and haven't had any accidents either. Driverless cars have to be driven bye people that will pay attention to what the car is doing instead of doing other things while its driving to though. If the car is driving and need the person to take over and the person is not paying attention then something could get damaged in this process, but you have to pay attention period when driving anyways. The questions why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? And wouldnt divers get bored waiting for their turn to drive? i dont like if they dont want the car they dont have to buy them nobody is forcing them to its a option!!!\n\nThe only problem could be that people might let the car do everything and take edvantage of the car. Maybe only busnisses workes should have it .... people you know you can trust with cars like that because everyone isn't responsible enough for this car. When the pasage asked who should be in charge of what happends with the vihical the owner should instead of the company because the person is the one who bought it and decided to drive it. And i understand what it says in the artical about most dirving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and law makers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers....... but everyone who has bought a car isnt that so theres going to always be car accidents nomatter if we use the driveless cars or not. So i just think theres not goning to be a difference if we buy the driveless cars. But if they want to make it be illegal in California etc thats there oppinion that it isnt safe but everyone has there own oppinion.\n\nMy opinion about this is with all the car accidents that happen in the world already the driverless cars isnt going to make a differce the only differences it will make is good differences. They should make it ligal for the cars and like it says in the artical they plan to have cars that can drive themselves bye 2020. Alot of things are upgrading in the future technology is goning to be used for alot of things. What do you think?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Inorder to convince people that the \"Unamasking Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform I would give evidence to prove that I'm right. In the artical they explain how the face is just a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\"\n\nI also give evidence by telling him about the pictures in the artical that they took in 2001. The picture just shows us that the \"face\" is just a cluster of rocks in Mars that happen to look and resemble a human, or pharaoh.\n\nAnother reason the \"face\" isn't real is because there weren't any civilizations to build or make any of these creations. The planet Mars had no life forms on it on the first place to begin with, and there is little to no evidence to ever prove there was any life on Mars in the first place.In other words the \"Unmasking Face on Mars\"\n\nis just one thing.... a mesa.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "twin brother waited excitingly line concert hated going place sister weird CAPS whined CAPS asked take earbud car CAPS I come asked impatiently CAPS could learn patient smart one said looking see many people line put ear bud back car blasted CAPS The Of allstar weekend Allstar weekend awesome band would see concert always patient twin fact everyone called complete oppisite impatient twin almost enjoyed waiting made excited thingsWhen time finally came see concert glad patient ten time excited anyone elseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should keep the electoral college because. It will allow votes to have a certainty of outcome, Requires a trans-regional appeal, and finaly to avoid run-off elections. This list will be baised on reasons and facts that i think will be sutible for my reason you may have your own facts and opinions but remember anyone can say what they think so this is what i think. Now let us begin.\n\nFirst off i want to start with on how it will allow votes to have a certainty of outcome. In the source 3: in defense of the electoral college: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president by: Richard A. Ponser he talks about that a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible-it happened in 2000-but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. Also he talks about winner-take-all basis, and that even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in the state. From what i understand is that electoral college helps create a winner-take-all basis.\n\nSecond i would love to disscuse how it requires a trans-regional appeal. In source 3 he talks about how the electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region (south, northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite such as Romney was in the south, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different thoughts about museums . Some think that the purpose of old buildings is to entertain folks but others are opposed that museums are made to teach people. I will discuss both points of view in upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,nowadays most of the people like to explore different areas. There are games which have different kinds of lights and music that help community to entertain themselves and their children. In this era, the government is making a good amount of money through the tourism industry. Most of tourists visit old buildings on vacation so that they can refresh their minds from their workplaces. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, museums are meant to teach people. Old buildings are the signs of the ancestors. They make those buildings in their time . So, young generations are supposed to learn from them to get knowledge for the future.Also, if parents encourage their children to visit museums. In that way, they can put their learning from foundation in their school assignments.For example, the museum in Anandpur sahib which is called virsat e Khalsa is good to learn from the 10 gurus of Sikhs and the history of India before 1947. That museum includes different kinds of pictures and videos which is helpful to know about history.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, gallery are the best way to get knowledge about history. So government should spend more money on building so that future generations can learn about their ancestor's struggles and time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ended story Winter Hibiscus Saeng vowing retake test He ended way show themes story One theme story never give The winter Hibiscus last long winter survive inspires Saeng keep trying Another theme overcome obstacles The flower faces many dangers still manages blossom Saeng wants overcome obstacles pass test Therefore ending story displays themesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art has become increasingly popular across many countries.Some people believe that it is an important subject for students at school while others believe it is not. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, many people think that art is a crucial course at schools for various reasons.Although it is an extra effort apart from regular courses, individuals believe the future is bright for the employees in these fields since the salaries are high.For example, citizens who are good at theatre arts can get an opportunity to work in Hollywood films where the remunerations are high. Secondly, people specialized in certain artwork will become familiar personalities in the world.This will bring them huge name and fame which will remain even they are not alive.For instance, famous books such as Shakesphere novels will remain in people's heart forever.\r\n\r\nOn the other side, some people think that art is a waste of time which is spoiling student's future.Despite there are few people who are successful in many arts, the ratio is relatively very less. To illustrate, though photography is a creative skill, very few people will become successful.Moreover, students believed in particular art and ignored their academics will regret that they have wasted a lot of time if they are unsuccessful.To give a clear example, pupils who ignored studies and concentrated only in skills will become unemployed since the success rate is very low in these creative skills. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, this essay has discussed whether art is an important subject for students or it is a waste of time.In my opinion, though there are certain drawbacks, art is an essential subject for students at school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How times use computer one day A lot right I think computers definatly benefit society The internet helps lot people conveniant computer give people The computers also lets people talk online people Computers help people internet The internet makes alot peoples live easier One way school I know experiences internet helps If I dont enough material study internet help Another reason internet helpful jobs Did know people age jobs internet The internet also help people find jobs The last reason internet helpful shopping I remember time needed special book school book store bookstore mum ordered fine internet helpul many people My computers beneficial society people ability faraways places many people offerd go lot places outside united state With computers people team places places Sometimes even snow experience Another reason using want learn Once family got wedding nt know much went online find things like The foods eaten weather like lastly people learn family corner form If people know place ancestors came look crime computers They confind recipes food relign practice holidays celebrate Obuously computer help people faraway places My last reason computers beneficial society allow people talk people Sometimes good friends wants together loss touch one friend people find online take Did know many sites tell people went highschool Also sites like facebook people connect Another reason people meet people online many dating sites connect people losing internet Did know people dating sites set Sometimes people call long distance Being able chat onlinee sites like google chat helpul Without dubt computer helpful I think computer help many people society People use internet help People learn places people ccan chat online CAPS dont think body computers impaced society greatlySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there has been a consensus among society members that advocate that adolescents ought to perform voluntary missions in their leisure time, since these missions will have an imperative role in the development of their interpersonal skills and the amelioration of some society issues. I am in agreement with this notion. In the following essay, my contention will be further scrutinized.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the engagement of young adults in charitable deeds has a pivotal impact on the growth of their interpersonal skills. This is because when they enrol in missions which involve assisting others, they acquire self-devotion virtues and improve their communication skills. An eminent example of this is the initiative which has been conducted by Cairo university ,which involved a plethora of university students during their summer vacation, in order to support under-privilaged families in upper Egypt with food and clothing. Thus, not only does this trend allow its participants to enhance their skills, but it also fasten their maturation process by the acquired sense of fulfilment.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, some divisions of the sociologists community and I propose that this tendency is a pragmatic approach to mitigating a myriad of social problems such as poverty and famine. To illlustrate this, young people always aspire to achieving the sense of fulfilment; therefore, if they conduct missions to destitute areas to alleviate their problems by supplying nutritionous food, they will meet nations needs as well as satisfying their passion towards fulfilment. For instance, missions launched by World Health Organization has solved a myriad of problems that destitute nations encounter there. Hence, what can be said is that these arranged programmes for helping communities are indispensable.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that although many countries have not adopted this approach, those who integrated youth in charitable projects ,whether during their leisure times or summer vacations, witnessed a positive development of youth communication and social skills and benefited their communities as well as other communities in need. I am a staunch believer that governments should subsidize such projects in order that adolescents be motivated to join them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The communities state that gadget usage by young people will impact their future when facing advanced technology. But some others explain that is a bad situation for kids if they depend on gadget usage. In my opinion, I believe that the parent will protect their family from gadget usage illness. I will discuss some reasons why people must protect themselves from the bad habit of using the gadget. \r\n\r\nI start with the lack of conditions on psychology the person has devoted time to the phone. This situation puts the consumer in their comfort zone, and they feel that they do not need other people to communicate. In the long situation, this condition will make that people be introvet. For example, a kid with his/her gadget playing in the room but their friend playing too without a gadget. This situation shows that the kid with a gadget does not want to follow their friend together. \r\n\r\nNext, I will discuss how gadget usage correlates with our health indirectly. The person who devotes much time to gadgets will have less movement. For instance, They play with gadgets rather than do exercise. This condition will improve the risk be obesity in young period. This old needs a rich movement to increase their bond density and muscular mass. In fact, the younger ones only stay in their room and do not have any movement, just lying in bed for a long time. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a child who devotes time to the gadget harms psychologically and biologically.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear People like computers known fact They much like dry addicting irrestable Despite people believe though computers good daily lives You communicate play listen music watch movies even learn language computers So ways computer anything bad fun They help us relax In todays age nt give people joy experienced younger Computer replacement Imagine playing baseball friend lives miles away still kid set exercise adventure Computer broke border giving higher level You got mail Many people hear sentence everyday By many I mean millions alert saying someone sent email messages Sent faster service Instead waiting days letter In matter minutes message sent friends Microsoft electronic messaging systems superior form communication let us speak world Although sounds silly wanted could send message anyone message box Lets say went watch certain movie nt With computer dose drive watch Better yet download movies media available able watch click mouse Computers filled top gadgets accesories make life easier movies anything likely computer They perfect tolls modern societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author introduces an informative article about driverless cars. The good aspects of driverless cars and the bad aspects. I would say that I am for the use of driverless cars. Although driverless cars may cause accidents, handicapped people can finally get around without depending on other people.\n\nWhen people first arrive to a new place, they don't know their place around and may often get lost. This is much less likely to happen if google is driving for them. And handicapped people, for example i have a big cousin who has crerbal palsy, so he cannot drive. Therefore he catches the bus and walks alone. Well with the google self driving car, he can just tell google where he wants to go and he's in a good position to make it there. Much safer and faster than walking or catching the bus.\n\nWhile self driving cars have been known to need help in hazard areas or accident areas, they are great for teenagers trying to learn the road. A question i have is if there is an accident caused by the self driving car is it the \"passenger\" or the manufacturer. I say the manufacturer because before the car is released it should be perfected not to have accidents but driving in driverless cars would decrease accidents among drunk drivers and texters, so i am and forever will be for driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI am in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States and I know I'm not alone on this one. \"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their life time agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electorial college!\" That's not enough well, \"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" 60 percent is more than a half, now it says over 60 percent which would be past 60 percent. Remember the disaster factor , it is unfair to voters, and what if there is a tie in the electoral vote.\n\nFirst of all, lets just take it into thought that it is unfair to voters. How? Well, \"Beacuse of the system winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance in winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" state.\" In 2000, the campaign that was going on, well 17 states did not see the candidates at all. Also, including Rhode Island and South Carolina. What about the fact that, \"Voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\" Not even one. Some might say that it doesn't matter if they have a campaign ad or not, believe me, I've heard it before. Having a campiagn ad shows people what you want to do, how you want to help, how you want to make a change, ect... I don't understand how unfair it can be to people.\n\nSecond of all, what would happen if there was a tie in the electoral vote? Well then, the election would be passed to the House Of Representatives, state delegation vote on the president. \"Because each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represnt 35 million voters.\" The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\n\nThird of all, lets just go back to memory lane and revisit the\n\nDisaster Factor . This was the single best argument against the electoral college. \"The Americans people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century;the system allows for much worse.\" State legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors. \"In the same vein, \"faithless\" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please....\" Want that to happen again now?\n\nThank you for reading and understanding my point. You have an opinion and I respect that, but I also have one too. Sometimes they just need to be heard. So lets just say that it s unfair to voters, there could be a tie, and lets not forget the Disaster Factor. \"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. Have a good day.\n\nThank you for your time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As time has gone on, technology continues to advance. Whether this be televisions, cells phones, etc, technology has became more complex and has changed the way the society functions. This includes cars as well; their development has advanced well over the years, and continues to do so. People now have the luxuries of getting their learners permits, and eventually their license, as a means of easy transportation. However, cars without drivers has became a controversial topic, as manufacturers have tried to think of new ways to further move forward with technology. Cars without drivers though, would pose problems such as having to create new laws to regulate them, the ability to hack into them, and the overall expense and alertness of the \"driver\".\n\nAs of right now, traffic laws are written for cars that have human drivers. The vast majority believe that the only safe car is one with a driver, so states such as California, Nevada, Florida, etc, has made it illegal to even test computer driven cars. If driverless cars were to become a norm, new laws and codes would have to be created in order for them to be regulated. This could prove to be difficult in the case of what type of regulations would need to be made and passed. \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the maunfacturer?\" This shows that it is very possible to run into legal trouble with these new cars. The argument that these types of issues can be sorted out can be made, but there again, companies and people would still have to battle it out in court.\n\nAnother major issue that these cars would have is the easiness of overriding or hacking into them, since they are computer driven. People are known for hacking into social media accounts, government files, and so on. Who's to say that they wouldn't hack into a driverless car? \"...they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" This explains that drivers have the ability to take over their car if they need to, suggesting that in the case of a hacker they could override them and take control, but the result of a crash could still easily become common. With this, it would also just prove to be more trouble legally because investigations would have to take place if there were a crash.\n\nDriverless cars would not only be difficult to manage, but the expense of manufacturing one can prove to be costly as well. They would most likely be difficult to buy in the first place, especially because of all the sensors that go into making it. \"For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors. Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" This not only proves that the cost of these cars would be high due to all of these sensors, but that a malfunction in even one of them can cause vehicle accidents. It is said though that sensors have become more advanced alolowing for better control than a human could have, but they would still be costly and technology has proven to not always be in our favor. Plus, drivers not having to take over unless the car signals them can also prove to be dangerous, as most \"drivers\" will probably not be paying attention. They will most likely be fixated on other means of entertainment or could even fall asleep at the wheel as they are no longer being relied on to navigate themselves, or people with them safely.\n\nDriverless cars overall would not be a good investment, time and money wise. Though technology is certainly always advancing, this type of upgrade in cars will not be necessary. They would be dangerous, costly, and difficult to manage legally. People would have a hard time driving with them since they can not control themselves a hundred percent, and hacking into a car and causing crashes would be a new problem society would have to deal with. The development of these cars would not be a very smart decision.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driveless cars is it shouldn't go past a point where a human driver can not take control of the car. Technology can be faulty and if a human can't take control of the car some dangerous consequences will happen. Also if a driver can take control of the car, if an accident occurs they will be responsible. Then the business that created the car will not be liable. Finally the cost will be a major problem, a mass majority of people will most likely not be able to afford this vechicle. Which can be a marketing problem, when introduced to the mass public.\n\nTime has shown that technology does have flaws, some very dangerous ones. Now imagine these flaws happen when you're on the highway surrounded by other cars. A consequence paid for these techonological errors could be death. If the car glitches out, a human driver will be needed to take control and keep the sitaution in control. Cars already have faults, and technology also can have significant errors. Would you put your life in the hands in some possibly faulty piece of technology? This is why human drivers need to be able to have control of the car if needed.\n\nResponsibilty for accident is a subject that's in the air about these vechicles. If the human driver has overall control of the vechicle, the possibility of an accident would be in thier hands. This will pull out some major possibilties of a manufacturer being taken to court over the car. If full control of a car is given to the hands of technology, the manufacturer will most likely be sued on multiple occasions if an accident occurs. If the overall power of the car is given to the person in the driver seat, the final verdict of an accident will fall onto them.\n\nCost is also a mojaor factor. When introduced to the masses who will be able to afford this car? The price of a driverless vechicle would be very expensive and most likely not affordable to the evryday middle class people. What's the point of making this car if not it's gonna have a huge market? If the car is partially driverless it most likely be less expensive to make and would be more cost effective to the masses.\n\nThere is no need for a completely driverless car. It would cause a landslide of problems. If technology is faulty it could cause injury or death. If its completly driverless, the manufacturer would be responsible for accidents. Finally the cost would be way too high for the average person in this economy. These are allsignificant reasons there should not be a driverless car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The potential for the global media to shape the views of the today's youth is considerable. However, while some commentators think that the media has no place within secondary education, other analysts defend the idea that international news should be studied at school. In this essay, I shall examine a number of studies which show that both the view points, to some degree, are justified.\n\n\nTo begin with, the global media undoubtedly enriches teenager's understanding of contemporary affairs. This is because television reports provide a concise summary of international affairs. For example, a study showed that the media heavily influenced teenager's knowledge of contemporary affairs. Since any secondary school education is incomplete without an awareness of such events, it is therefore clear that media can play a vital role in assisting education.\nOn the other hand, many critics argue that teenagers are negatively affected by the global media's focus on war and civil unrest. This is because exposure to violence often leads to depression. For example, recent surveys have discovered that depressed teenagers usually cite the dismal state of the world as a source for their depression. Since, mental health is an important objective of secondary education, it is therefore questionable whether the study of international news wouldn't be a destructive and wasteful use of school resource.\nIn conclusion, it should be clear that there are reasons for and against the study of news at school. Thus if media studies are to enter the school in the future, schools will have to think about how the negative aspects of the news can be decreased, and positive aspects maximized.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper name I m go I m grade I m writing letter tell opinion technology believe technology positive effect people My opinial computer good Keep reading change people lifes NUM My first reason computer teach hand eye coordination For example I grade I would go libary She website named To learn It help learn learn without looking keyboard My second reason compute give people ability learn faraway places people For example I grade I write And I want I found wonderful pictures And I saw live I watched specail like weeks ago said people would use look people number mor personal things My third reason give people ability learn faraway place people For example want talk cousin live I would go internet talk webcam I clould talk I read artice like month ago That people use computer chart people In conclustion people might say experts concerned people spending much time less exercing enjoying friends family However computer way sdfyer go outside More kids people would salfy Next post news paperSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would think even riding bike long bad behind But also good exercising especially legs strength get muscle To know going could take forever But I know would face types weather long gear harm could comeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is so many of emotions, and only we know if we want to show them or not. Emotional expressions help us to show how we feel, or we can only pretend them, that is why I am against with the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. We have to think if they really want us to know what are they feeling? We all are humans, so we know that sometimes we feel embarresed of something, and we do not want to people know that. Adding to these we have to have our privacity.\n\nOur emotions expressions help us to show how we feel. If we are sad we have a sad face, if angry we have a face that reference that we are angry as on the paragraph number 5 says \" for instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\". So there is no reason to have the Facial Action Coding enables computers to identify human emotions.\n\nEmotions expression can also being prentend them. Every single person has problems, and sometimes we are shy to let them know to other people, so we need our privacity, and we have to pretend that everything is all right, when maybe is not like that. If someone is sad, but he/she wants to look she is happy, so there is nothing to do, because is her/his decision. We have to think in the point of view. We can see on paragraph number 6 says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becaming confused or bored\" what about if the student feels emberresed, if everybody that he is the one who does not understans a topic?\n\nBut also the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions can help, but if the person wants to. Because people sometimes does not know how to tell people how they feel. Also it could help in differents ways to different careers. For example the police career, when they interrogate people, they can notice if they are telling the truth or they are just lying.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System anables computers to identify human emtions have to be used only in a special case. We have our own emotions, and our unique forms to show how we feel. If we want to be reserved is our desicion, and if we want to show our emotional expressions it is okay as well. Only we decide how to feel, and if we should show our emotions up. We have a right that is call personal privacity, we have to remember that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is venus a worthy pursit? Venus is the planet that is closest to us, which is Earth and has a lot of characteristics that relate to Earth too. But the surface is hotter than all of the planets in our solar system. Even the ones that are even more closer to the sun. The author thinks that Venus is a worthy planet to pursuit even if it brings alot of dangers of exploring it. He thinks it's a good idea because it resembles alot to Earth and also because we can visit other places instead of jus staying in Earth.\n\nThe things that resembled Venus to Earth was because of the conclusions they have made by how related Venus is. The text states, \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" Furthermore all the data they have collected doing research being facinated with this planet there was possible things that Venus had in store like planet Earth. Which means this would be a great atlernative to a \"second Earth\". Just in case if somethings happens to human race or even if something happens to the Earth.\n\nThe interesting part is the author would like other people to see the beauty of Venus. In the text it states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" If astronomers are interested about Venus so as well as other people. And if they would want to visit NASA could start business, which means money income. They would be getting the money back that they have lost trying to get to Venus and collecting all the data they have.\n\nIn conclusion, the author thinks It's a fantastic idea for this to become possible. Even if it is dangerous, it could help on the long run and becoming way more familar with the other planets than they already are. Plus it could bring more business in.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill purpose In short excerpt The Mooring Mast many obstacles clearly stated mast good idea The building mast rushed Al Smith realized close losing title worlds tallest building quickly put mast mind Problems quickly arose The first problem arose lack suitable landing area Al Smith stated passengers could safely swing breeze This problem ignored soon problems arose building mast continued The greatest problem thought building mast nature The winds horrible height building architects soon realized landing would major issue The mast still questioned architects engineers could make work something brought upon law It illegal airships fly low urban area The law realized marked end Al Smith s idea late s idea using mooring mast dirigibles passengers quietly disappearedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by many people that government should responsible for the arts, while others argued that spending money on fundamental human rights such as health and education is a responsibility for the government to safeguard. In my opinion, the argument that it is better to spend money on education and healthcare is an argument that is both advantageous and disadvantage by many. The two views will be thoroughly discussed and analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many several benefits that government should spend a large sum of money on healthcare and education. Firstly, low-income families provide a chance to have an effective medical treatment such as the exorbitant cost of medicine. In addition, the authorities can maintain the health of the population by increasing a spot for checking their health problem. Secondly, children and university students is an important role in developing countries. If all children and university students, the most significant resource for the country's development, have more education opportunities, the country will be more competitive at an international level.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only healthcare policy but also diets and a clean environment that government should spend money on.To start with, the government should play a role in an individual's diet. For instance, if citizens have a lack power to buy a healthy diet, they can provide health problems such as high cholesterol and high level of sugar. This mean government should pay attention to the human diet. Moreover, it will provide many benefits if the government spent the money on this such as free healthy meal \r\n\r\nTo summarize, education and healthcare is a significant part of human right that government should have a responsibility with.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do you think of when you are driving your car? Do you think of your surroundings, the other people driving there cars, or where you need to go? You could sit there in your car and think of all those things without having to drive. Those are some, of many, resons why driverless cars should be developed. Driverless cars can be useful for not only doing things while on the go, but they are useful as well as safety goes.\n\nDriverless cars are sensor designed vehicals that can drive you from place to place. As safety goes, people want to feel safe with or without being in control of driving. These cars are designed to also have an atomatic brake that stops when it sensors other cars, stop lights, or even stop signs. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This by itself helps the safety of people who arent paying attention, or even if they are, they have that ability for the car to sensor stop better than you would driving a normal car.\n\nAnother good safety quality is, we still have control over the car if we chose to. Yes, parts of roads may require human control over the cars, but it has a built in vibration system to alert you if you need to take control over the wheel. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"They can steer, accurate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents.\" This explains how we still are required to drive the car during these times, but on most occasions the car can drive itself. If you don't want the car to drive itself, you can drive it as long as you want, and when you let, it will notify you straight away when you need to take control to navigate certain areas.\n\nThese are clear examples of safety reasons and how driverless cars are useful. They can sensor their surroundings, have great breaks, and you can still have full control over the car if needed. Driverles cars are cars that should be devoloped more today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Economic development has been capturing a great deal of public attention in recent decades due to its ramifications on both humans’ living standards and environment. Despite its benefits of addressing poverty and hunger, economic growth could be fraught with more environmental drawbacks.\n\nOn the one hand, it is true that a better economy could put an end to poverty and hunger. Frist, the developed economy means higher disbursements on agricultural sector. This would feed into reliable crop-yeilds and increased productivity, saving many lives from the cycle of food shortages. Second, economic growth correlates with the rise in employment opportunities for citizens especially low-class ones stemming from the installments of industrial parks and outsourcing activities. Consequently, this would ensure stable payments, thereby helping individuals escape from chronic poverty.\n\nOn the other hand, economy would develop at the expenses of environmental destruction. First, this pattern could come at the costs of the mushrooming of manufacturing factories and delivery vehicles, emitting noxious fumes. It is proved that the higher concentrations of carbon dioxide and CFCs in the atmospphere must be inevitable, making citizens more susceptible to irreversable diseases including tuberculosis or lung cancer. In addition, the economic growth correlates with the overconsumption of resources for energy or trading. This acts as an incentive for the overexploitation of national elements, shaking the environmental equilibrium and decelerating the rehabilitation.\n\nIn conclusion, humans could not prioritize economic growth over environmental balance. This would result in the consequence of environmenal deterioration,which directly affects human health adversely in the long term.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some cities create new housing for their growing populations by constructing a smaller number of high-rise buildings. Other cities create more of low-rise buildings. Which solution is better, in your opinion?Sample EssayRising population in urban areas leaves governments with no choice but to build more houses to meet the demand. However, when it comes to construction, there is more than one way to build new homes. Some cities prefer to construct fewer residential towers, while others build a larger number of low-rises for their residents. In this essay both options will be discussed and a viable solution will be suggested.One advantage of tall buildings is that they can accommodate a large number of people while having a small footprint. This type of construction is popular in central city areas where land is scarce and expensive. For example, in New York City high-rise buildings have significantly reduced housing problems, by as much as 55% in the last few years. As a result of this strategy, rents tend to decrease which has a further positive impact on the economies of such cities. However, tall buildings offer little or no privacy, they force certain rules and regulations upon residents, and attract higher maintenance costs.Given a chance to voice their opinion, many individuals would prefer to live in low-rise buildings or even build their own houses. This option might be more attractive for big families and for older generation people who like to have their own personal space. Accessibility is also a concern for the elderly as taking the stairs when the lifts break down may not be an option for them. In addition, one or two-story houses are easier and cheaper to maintain compared to modern apartment towers. The downside of this type of dwellings is that they occupy much more land, and since land is cheaper on city fringes, new estates tend to be built away from city centres. This increases commute time to work for their residents and negatively affects their quality of life.In conclusion, high-rise and low-rise buildings have their unique advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, high rises are more suitable for younger residents and should be built in the areas where young population is prevalent, closer to the city centre and employment opportunities. Senior citizens should have a supply of lower dwellings available in quieter locations. Such flexible approach can be a good way to address the needs of growing city’s population.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy mood s sort calming The author explains house comfortable Narsico explains parents caring selfless time I think creates calming caring mood Also paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice creates caring moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a matter of debate that a group of people who support adolescents have to be available to do unpaid work for the community in their leisure time. from that perspective younger youth get an advantage as well as the community. I strongly support and agree with this laid statement. my inclination is argued further in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with support, it can be explained that when younger children meet new people who are elder than them consequently ideas of thoughts get exchanged with them. That's why career-related and the experience as they gain valuable information which helps in the future. ,,moreover if elderly people work in a multinational company, so therefore that group of teens get references for finding a job.\r\n\r\nIn addition, the other view to prove my point is that children learn time management in their life that how all work to do on time. That's why that teenagers becomes responsible in their family, it will help them. apart from that if a scholar child help poor children in the terms of academic so community get improved. For instance, last year my scholar friend went to a rural area and taught all poor children throughout one year. So eventually all weak students got cleared the board examination due to my friend. So this is the way the community will develop.\r\n\r\nOverall, to conclude with the discussion and it can be said that if younger youth do work for the community without taking any money. So definitely the city can improve and at the same time these adolescents gain different experiences, learn communication skills and so on.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During Winter Hibiscus written Minfong Ho young girl mother new place daughter Saeng hard timeSaeng found plant called dok faengnoi reminds home So bought took home show mom At first mother upset bought dollar plant hearing daughter disappointment found joy beautiful plant Saengs mother cooking dinner Saeng planted beautiful plant told geese return hibiscus budding spring retake test She found strength courage better I think author wanted show gained respect end passage That author ended likeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages on limiting the usage of cars in many Country's around the world. For example, the United States, Paris, and even small areas like the German Suburbs. Because of the usage of cars we are starting to get a lot of pollution, and lots of tax money going towrds our roads.\n\nAccording to source 1 \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\" says that \"In Previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highway and only 20 20 percent to other transport.\" Beaucse of this many expect public transport serving suburbs to play a largerrole in a six-year federal transportation bill to be approved sometime this year. also, as found in paragraph 5 \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 pecent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe . . . anfd up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" there for is causing problrms to our invierment.\n\nParis is also having problems with pollution. From reading \"Paris bans diving due to smog\" by Robert duffer. tells us reads that after days of near-record pollution Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air in the city. And that the congestion was down 60 persent in the capital of France, after five days of smog. In Reading paragraph 17 \"Paris typically has more smog than other European Capitals . . . [Last] week Pairs had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" from reading that you can tell that Pairs has a high level of polloution.\n\nfoud in source 4 \"With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result to the habit.\" Meaning if everyone walked or biked instead of using cars we would be use to it and not depend on them. From the same source in paragraph 36 you can infer that in New York that many people are starting to use bikes insted of cars, as found \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing brige and tunnels tools reflect those new priorities, as do proliferation of car- sharing programs across the nation.\" Then in Paragraph 38 , it tells us that the population suggest that the trend of demographic shifts in driving may accelerate.\n\nFrom reading the sources and adding up all of the information it is vary easy to infer that we would have a lot of advantages if we didnt use cars. we would have less polloution and would be paying less for roadways.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Eloctoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Why should people give thier time and effort if not all the time they get to control whom they choose. Worst part about some states to even get a chance to choose the electors. So what's the point of doing it, if your just going to be cheated on by the Congress or by the electors who dont even, sometimes choose thier own people.\n\nSource 2, states that\"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but the for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president\". This statement is saying that the voters of each state are not really voting for the president, just really being cheated by the system. So why should voters give time and effort if thier vote is not truly going to make a difference to the system. All those hundreds and thousands votes are giving to electors so they can make the vote for us. Wow that's how system works, taking the people votes what a shame.\n\nSource 2, it states that \"Faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candiate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please...\" It is stating that, some electors will disrespectful and a candidate who is not even that party. What was so hard to choose a candidate from your own party and then want to be aynamous about it. Why would an elector join a party just so they can stab them in the back.\n\nIn conclusion the electoral college system should be shutdown beacuse obviously their are some diffcults in running the system and the most the voters think that it is a diasater factor.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We times thing happened thought nuisance But looking back occurrence laugh silly I recall one experiences I went motorcycle camping trip It bright sunny day dad dropped beginning main logging road area I decided keep pace slow steady enjoy beautiful scenery Later day I found picturesque place camp nights river In I remembered spurs main road I driven brother woods decided go explore near camp I decided go check one across river looked like fun ride As I crossing front tire hit lose rocks causing fall water Thankfully I fell away motorcycle I nt could well fallen woods would put quite predicament After getting water I headed back camp dry clothes seeing I brought one set While reading book waiting clothes dry I fell deep sleep When I woke I realized sun time I decided I better get going another ride day s This time I stayed side water went steep road lead top ridge As I climbed became increasingly warm I broke woods witnessed glorious sight The sun cresting ridge front I stop bask sun shine After sitting I got going The road I started taper valley At bottom flood waters washed large quantity s silt road still muddy As I crossed wheels started spinning flinging mud result I ended dirty Once I headed back camp wash clothes river This time I nt fall sleep quite time I fit full oneupon waking I packed meager supply s headed complete journey Most day got half way destination I forced stop rest night Just setting tent getting food dinner breakfast nt take long Having little occupy time I sat fire pondered trip life general When I fell asleep I slept soundly Waking sound birds chirping river rushing delightful invigorating It took hours reach dad going meet take homeThis trip helped think gater thoughts It also helped enjoy little things life often take granted Looking back always makes laugh realize errors could much worse turned minor set backs All good time gather thoughts renew soulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The year is 2041, and astronaut Jeff Goudard has just landed in the region of Cydonia. He is extremly exited becouse he will be the first human to see the only alien artifact known to man. As soon as he lands, he sees the face. Jeff's jaw drops practically to his feet. He relizes the \"Face on Mars\" is really just a plain old mesa, just like the ones out in the American West. Now just like this astronaut, there are probably hundreds of people that think that the \"Face on Mars\" is some sort of alien monuent, but in reality science and logical thinking has proven that in reality, the \"Face on Mars\" is really just a Mesa almost identical to the ones found out in the American West.\n\nFirst off is the logical thinking portion. In the region of Cydonia mesas are incredibly common.\n\nNow this particular mesas is oddly shapped, I will give it that, but it is just a mesa. What gives it human fetures is just the shadows. Just look at 1976 Viking one photograph. You can clearly see shadows Just look slightly below it, you can see a long shadow protruding from the mesa. Now on the flip side, look at the picture captured on 1998 when it was cloudy out and there were no shadows at all. The image just makes it look like a weird rock, not like a human face at all.\n\nWhile still on the topic of the photographs, the one snapped on 2001 also proves that the so called \"Face on Mars\" is really just a mesa becouse of not the actual formation, but the surronding area. It was taken by a very high quality camera. In fact, it's pixles spanned 1.56 meters whereas the best Viking photograph the pixles spanned 43 meters. That ment that you could zoom in around the area of the mesa to scan if there was any other evidence of alien life. So scienteists and analysts could scan the sourrounding area for pyramids or buildings, but they found absolutly nothing that would sugest that aliens are present in the region.\n\nLastly, lets all say that the so called face really was an ancient alien structure, why would NASA keep it a secret. I mean, NASA is really short on funding, but if it was proven that there was aliens on Mars, then that would mean NASA funding probaly would go through the roof. What better goal could NASA have then to make conatact with extratrestrialls. This must mean that the \"Face on Mars\" is just another mesa. What organization would pass up the opprotunity to get through the roof funding.\n\nSo just face the facts. The \"Face on Mars\" is just a mesa that had well placed shadows that are one in a million. So don't be Jeff the astronaut, and just face the facts early on as oposed to having high hopes and dreams just to have them crushed by even more scientifically proven evidence. If you don't remember anything from this article, remember this: don't be Jeff.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that the government should pay closer attention to environmental pollution and housing problems in order to prevent people from health issues. From my personal angle alone, I believe tackling pollution and housing problems are indeed able to improve citizens’ health, however, other measures are also required to cope with people’s illness in the short term. \n\nFirst of all, one of the reasons to reduce pollution is that it has a direct impact on people’s health in many circumstances. For instance, air pollution may severely pose a threat to inhabitants’ life since they are prone to respiratory illness and other chronic diseases, for taking heavy smog in Beijing as an example. In addition, Poor air quality may also give rise to an outbreak of airborne diseases, such as summer flu more likely to occur, widespread and infect a large number of city dwellers, especially for those living in densely populated cities where without a good ventilation. \n\nSecondly, it is obvious that housing problems can influence city dwellers, predominately disadvantaged ones in particular, in aspects of physical and emotional. Those who are from deprived backgrounds are hardly able to afford decent places, and usually live in slums enduring terrible living conditions. Where sewage and waste are not managed effectively, is a perfect habitat for bacteria’s growth, where mice and cockroaches develop their communities, provides the media for bacteria to spread, and where people are stressed and live under pressure in most of the time. \n\nHowever, if the authorities give priority to solve problems of environmental pollution and housing issues for the sake of public health, this probably will not have an immediate payoff as these are strategies in the long-run solutions. By contrast, investments in medical facilities and boosts to health care services can better provide instant treatments for patients, alleviating their sicknesses \n\nIn conclusion,in my opinion, I am of the opinion that profound changes in the environment and accommodations can truly prevent people from illness and diseases, but there is in no case should the government neglect the importance of health care services on residents’ well being.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The\n\nfirst thing that i should include in my discusion would be that there was a spacecraft circling around the plant and there was know sine of anything that could have really caused it un natturaly.\n\nThen i would include facts on how the camra did not spot anything that could have been alrming to anyone. An that there was and is know sine of life at all on the plant so there for it\n\nwould not really be anything to be worried about.\n\nThen\n\ni would have explain to them that the way in witch that plant moves and shifts we really arn't one hundered percent sure on how much of a differnce it is between earth\n\nand mars so we have to estmate one how the weather is and\n\nhow much water it gets if any there has to be water ona plant for there to be life on it.\n\nHow\n\nare we sure on what mars is really like because we as people have never been there. So in order to tell people anything about mars we would have to have more recrosses and more information.\n\nwhat we do know about mars is that there is little to know water, and that to have anything living there would be nearly inpossible. There is know proof that anyting can even live on mars and the face was mostlikely made by a small astroide hitting the plant or land shifts there are multiple ways the face like figure could have been made in the plant.\n\nBut it most definletly was not any kind of differnt life forms or aliens because there was know kind of indcation that there was even anything on mars to crueat somthing like that know sine at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am here to tell what you should do with the rest of life. You need to go on a Adventure help others. Even be a hero. thats is exacly what I did whit my life, so you should come try it. Come join the UNRRA. To start off you get to go see many places. It is a neet expirince. I have been over sea 16 times. Thats alought of times for me. If I do say myself. I have went to China seen many coutries. It is worth to sighn up. Trust me you will want to join.\n\nNext what I want to talk about is was being a cowboy was so worth it. I saw so many anmials. I even got to hurd cattle. It was preety amzing. I am very grateful for that oppotunity. It was worth to take a pen and wright my name, to have such a exprince like that if just wow.\n\nWhen its get boring on board I always find a way to have fun. When us cowboys got board we would play volleyball or bascketball. We would also read, play tabil-tenis,fencing and boxing. If you join know you wont get board. The fun games and reading helped pass time.\n\nOne of the major reasons that it was cool was helping other. Helping out my aunt Katie helped me prepare for it. It might have been hard work but sure i liked it. One part was hard when I brookemy ribs. I could not work for a while but when it healed i started getting back to work. In counclousion you should really sighn up. Its preety cool to go around the and become a city boy to a cowboy. Sign up now if you want to have the adventure of a life time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin with, a lot of people believe they can earn higher incomes by working overseas. As a result, living standards and economic conditions for their families will improve, especially for people who migrate to developed countries from third world countries. There are, by comparison, other negative aspects that people should remember. The family members have a chance of a cultural shock, because there could be certain rituals and practices that do not suit them. To overcome this problem, families should learn common language about the land to which they are going. It will minimize the \"cultural shock\" and help avoid unpleasant accidents. Family members should also have an idea about the country's laws and rules prior to travel. This should avoid law-related issues. Photography of government buildings or monuments, for example, is a criminal offence in some countries.\r\nSecond, living far away from your loved ones could cause depression in some people. It takes time to get to know an area and make friends, particularly at the start, so people begin to feel lonely. For example, if the person is older, beginning a relationship becomes much harder, because everyone else has already established their social circles. In this case, however, employers do play an important role. Since businesses recruit people from abroad they can plan for a smoother transition. Employers, for example, may require monthly offs for workers so they could visit families, at least for the first months.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, history is one of the topics that people are interested in. This leads to the claim that numerous individuals are fascinated in learning about the past of their place of residence. Here I will analyze the reasons for this argument and provide the method to unearth the information of their homes.\r\n\r\nOne reason why people are intrigued about the history of their accommodation is owing to superstition. In other words, people are curious about what events happened in their house and what sort of people used to live there because they believe that such events or people may have an impact on their fortune. For example, people in East Asian cultures believe that if their home was previously occupied by royal or aristocratic families, they would become wealthy like the previous owner. Therefore, tracing the past of their home may help them avoid negative energy that affect their own wellbeing.\r\n\r\nMaintaining the soundness of the accommodation is another reason why people search for historical information of their place of residence. Indeed, learning about the prior events of the house may allow dwellers to evaluate the condition of their living space and to make plans for future maintenance when discovering structural damage. For instance, many homeowners in America do thorough research on the electrical plan or sewage system of their house for better preservation. By doing so, residents can take necessary steps to ensure their accommodation is structurally sound. \r\n\r\nThe best method for people to obtain information about the history of their home is to interview local dwellers. In many cases, neighbors have been residing in the area for a certain period of time and have a wealth of information about the previous owner or events. Hence, talking to local residents can assist homeowners to discover historical traces of their house. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people delve into the history of the house or building they reside due to superstitious and maintenance purpose and locals are the best source of information about such buildings. This research process is advisable for the sake of the owner and the authorities should encourage such fact-finding steps.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On April 5th, 1998 is when the face was first photographed. The face was photographed by Michela Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera. Very soon after the face was photographed the picture went viral. The face became many attractions over conspirecy stories, movies, and magazine articles. Everyone had there own side to what the face was and where it came from. In the end Nasa realised a story to solve the delimia between everyones thoughts. It turned out that the face was just a natral landform on mars.\n\nSome people believed all the conspirecy story and some people believed nasa. As the face got more popular more people decided that Nasa was lying about how the face was just another natural landfrom. Everyone believed that nasa was trying to hide something and accused them of \"hiding all alien markings by haze\" said skeptics. Everyone had there own idea on what this photograph was. Some people believed it was just a mesa, a face, an alien, \"Some people even thought the face was a Bona Fide.\"\n\nThe following question is a question all people were wondering. \"Why would nasa hide this from us?\" The answer to that is simple, they wouldnt. Why would nasa hide a whole ancient civilazation from the people? When nasa has been trying to find life on mars for years. Nasa hasnt lied since the face was discovered in 1998. The people asked for a second shot of the face. Nasa did that. \"We photographed the face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" In that sentence you see that Nasa was even excited themselves to see what could come out of this picture of the face. Nasa would not lie about the face ending up to just be another natural landfrom sadly for both the people and Nasa that what it had to end up to be.\n\nBoth Nasa and the people where both hoping that the face would end up to be more than it did. After the second picture of the face that was found in 2001. Nasa came to the conclusion that the face was just another natural landfrom on mars. Nasa tried there best to get the best shot possible so they would know for sure if the face was a true story or not. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinry photo using the camera's absolute maximum reslolution.\" In that sentence it proves that nasa tried there very best to see what the face actually was. Sadly the face couldnt be one our best stories we would pass down from generation to generation. With years of study and hard work the face was just another natural landforn.\n\nThe Face is a natural landform because nasa tried there very best to get the best picture they could get. They used there maximum resolution on there camera to try to reach the best level of clearness they could get. In the end they got the picture they needed and brang that picure to close examaniantion. They studied the picture for years and the picture did end up being just another natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the value of using updated technology to identify a students emotions could be a great start to a new beginning. The \"Facial Action Coding System\" also known as \"FACS\" could help teachers and students in so many different ways. One way it could help, is to determine wether a student is sad or not. Knowing High School students and how they act, i know that there are a couple of kids that are sad, and go through depression. The Facial Action Coding System could help save so many kids that are sad, and that way they wont feel alone. Someone and something will be there to help. \"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\" ( D'Alto 1).\n\nAnother great value of using this technology is it will help teachers immensely. By using FACS teachers will be able to tell if a lesson they are doing is bland, and boring students to their death. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts\" (D'Alto 1). Knowing if students are zoning out is great, because then the teacher will be able to switch their plans over and make it more exciting. No teacher wants their students to fail, so why not catch them before it is too late! FACS could also improve the way teachers teach over time, because they will be able to learn what works for them and what doesn't. Improving lessons could mean that test scores and class grades could go up significantly. With grades going up, teachers will help with each new generation, and bring in smarter kids each year. Teachers are what make students great.\n\nTeachers fill each any every single one of their students buckets, by pouring knowledge from their buckets into theirs. Teachers are the ones that ignite a students fire to drive for success, and what they are passionate about. So why shouldn't we let teachers get to know their students a little bit better. FACS is a great stepping stone in my opinion. The technology there is now opens so many doors, to so many possibilities. The possibilites are endless in this new Era. I mean i guess you can say it would be a Renissance. A Rebirth, a new era of technology and greatness. Just like the Mona Lisa, a painting of the Renissance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am a scientist at NASA who is trying to tell you that the landform you saw on mars is nothing more than just a natural landform. It may look like a face but it is really not. What it really is, is a natural landform that our viking took a picture of on one side of mars. The picture that you saw is nothing more than a picture taken at the right moment so that it makes it look like that mars has a face. The reason why it looks like it has a face is because the picture was taken at the moment on when the landform had a shadow at the certain places of the landform to make it look like it has eyes,nose, and a mouth. If you look at the picture from 1976 you can see that it shows more of the face and that it does look like a face. But then if you look at the picture taken at 1998 and 2001 you can see that the natural landform on mars is starting to break up and that the shadow on it is now sarting to fade away. So you won't have to worry about aliens giving out a message to us saying anything bad. It's nothing more than just a natural landform and a picture taken at the right moment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people admit this century is the intelligence, technological era. Some people believe read the news in the newspapers and watch television news programs are wasting time. I partly agree this statement due to several reasons which will be mentioned in this essay. \nTo begin with, reading or watching the news is beneficial and essential factors in our soul. People who also knows the news, they are able to easily understand the world especially, politics. Currently, overriding news is global pandemic CoVID-19. Every day, even every hour was updated this news. This intelligence is fascinating to everyone. Cause of everyone wants to know how it is increasing onward and how to beware of this virus. Another benefit of TV, on this condition, namely in quarantine pupils are studying via TV or Internet. Because everyone is staying home, no one can go out without permission. In addition, reading, a wide range of news categories such as politics, economy, and entertainment will broaden your spectrum of knowledge. If you are specialized in any fields like medicine or science, medical and scientific news will intensify your knowledge accumulation. \nOn the other hand, read or watch too much news, it is really wasting time and it will be detrimental. The cause of it is reading or watching much out of the norm, it will face clue flow. As a result, these things will distribute of our personal activity. Hence, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news. The most popular one is that the data from the news does not directly connect with their lives. It is obvious that we cannot recognize any relationship between a worker's heart and a report about the status of the war in the Middle East or the change political system of a country in the all the side of the world. However, I believe that it is just a lack of the perspective of how crucial knowledge could be in one's growth. \nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that, read the news in the newspaper \t\nAnd watch television news programs have several advantages, while some people claim that is wasting time. \nI would strongly recommend people read newspapers every day to keep up with the progress of social developmentSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe driverless cars are not needed in our world. Cars have been around for many of years, and they get us from place to place with no problem. The technological advances imported in cars would take a lot of money and in the end could be a waste of money such as, \"Google's modified Toyota Pruis uses position-estimating sensors ont he left near wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.\".\n\nNo matter what, there is always going to be a driver in the car. The driver would just not have to do as much work, which is pointless and lazy. I believe it is safer to drive a car on your own rather than to have a machine drive it. If you were to get in a wreck while you were driving it would be your own fault. If you were to get in a wreck while in the self driving car it would be your fault and the car's fault. Basically, a driverless car is just a person sitting in a car making sure it doesn't get out of control. It is not hard for someone to steer a wheel and make a car go. The article states, \"Manufactures are also considering using camera to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" I don't see the point of sitting in a car and doing nothing when you could drive from place to place just as easily.\n\nI believe our society is taking technology too far and that we don't need driverless cars. It is just another reason to waste money when we already have the type of transportation we need. The driverless cars do not seem very safe and would just cause problems between people and their insurance companies. Driverless cars would just be another money problem out world would have to face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "people world use computers one time lives Wether s looking information sightseeing clothing friends people computer They use computers work games children use computer learn Some scientists suggest computers improve handeye coordination others think makes people smarter seeing new things You Newspaper staff use computer type news You probally also use things stated Most jobs world one part computers Farmers need keep reports money income Mechanics use computer create blueprints officers use computer keep track license plates Baby sitters need homework As see jobs use computer How people know met someone friend computer I know I people meet freinds computer Ever heard macth people together There sites chat freinds All reasons come together say computer benefit society They help people number ways I agree spend time outside also spend time insideSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that it is a good thing for everyone. If we had a public- transport taxi system, we wouldn't have to use as much fuel if it goes the way Sergey Brin envisions this. In 2009 Google had them independent under specific conditions. These cares have been driven up to half a million miles without a crash. These cars would change everyones daily function in a positive way.\n\nGoogle has also modified Toyota Prius to use position- estimating sensors, rotating sensors on the roof, video cameras mounted near rearview mirrors,there is alot of technology in this car but there is something way more important in this car. It is a spinning sensor on the roof, Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings and you could use that if the car was driverless. You could do this to see where to have the car go if it is auto.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 Mph, but special sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. These can steer acurate and break themselves, this is a machanic that driverless cares will have to have. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving- Driverless 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have plans to have cars to drive themselves by 2020.\n\nDriverless cars will help tramendasley with everyday people that need to go somewhere but cant drive, teens without a license, elderly people who cant drive anymore many people. When this gets here I hope i can test this out for myself because it would be a positive side to everything driving. By 2020 many car brands will have this in there hands and everyone elses hands.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that the face might have been an alien's. I think that the Face is a natural landform because scientists beleive that the eyes,nose and mouth were cause by shadows. Some scientists believe that the face was an alien artifact. Scientists have used better camera that could even show a small shacks. Some say alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nFirst, I think the Face was caused by natural landforms because the eyes,nose, and mouth were caused shadows. A few days after the the picture, NASA unveilded the image and the caption noted \"Huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\" Some scientists still disagree saying it could have been an alien's face. When looking at the picture, there is a shadow of the rock. If it was an alien, why haven't scientist found any other alien like?\n\nSecond, the face was formed by a natural landform because when you look at the 2001 picture it is more clear than 1976 or 1998. The clear version shows that it had no eyes,nose, or mouth. Garvin said \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" Scientists are able to see pictures closer than before. Garvin also said \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" All the new technologies can get the actually picture more clearly unlike the picture from 1976.\n\nThen, scientists have better technoloy, they are able to go to Mar with new machines. Scientists can even go near the Face with new spacecraft adn get a better picture. Other scietists think that alien markings were hidden by haze. Even if they were hidden, scientists would be able to find it by now.\n\nFinally, the Face was formed by natural landform because it was caused by shadows, and scientists have better technology. On 2001, scientists used a camera which were better than the camera they used on 1976. This is why the Face was formed by natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know for sure that in my opioion I know that the face on mars was not made by aliens in doing so. The text explain so artifical evidence that the face on mars was surely to be believe to be created by aliens.In the text it states that the face on mars was possibly made by the land formation that they had on mars. In the text it states that it is the Martian equivalence of a butte or even a messa that are landforms common around the west. In the text it also states that there are lots of different things in earth that have no explantaion on what has to be done like differen things in the earth that may seem weird to us humans. If the text were to explain the theme with aliens then I would be on track with you\n\nhowever you are. Many people believe many different things wheather its a religion or etc but this article doesn't have enough proof that its a\n\nalien artifact. It would be best if they could explain why the couldn't dig it out and examine and compare the artifacts and see if they have anything in comon.\n\nI am with the author that it is more likely to be a landform error than for it to be n alien artifact. These are some examples on how I know that this thing on the moon is not a alien artifact but a landfrom error. I strongly suggest that you don't believe that it is a alien artifact because it does not prove enough evidence in the text.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that they should change the election way of how they are doing it. I think that the president should be chosen by the most popular vote. i aslo think that they shouldnt do the voting thing if they are gunna end up chooseing it them selfes. in the passage it said that, the electoral college is made up of 538 electors and only the majority vote is 270. So i dont understand why they thousand of people to vote if their vote doesnt really mater its what senators choose overall. i think it would be fair if what the peple choose the most shall win. What if one of them gets more votes and the senator picks the other because they had more votes in there group, thats not fair. i just think that the overall vote of the people should count, and not make them wast there time. it also says in the article when you vote for you candidate you actuall voting for the candidates elector, so they are trying to trick them into thinking that there votw would count. what if the persident that the senator choose didnt know how to work stuff and had bad disitions, the election is every four years on a tuesday on a november. thats a pretty long time if you ask me. I think that half of the people votes dont cont cause of the sentors that choose. i know it would be long to count everones vote but i dont think it matters because in the end it would be chosen by the people that wanted that president not what the senators wanted.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are differing opinions on whether attending an academy or a college is the best path to successful development or if getting a situation straight after faculty is a better opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide my own perspective. \n\nOn the one hand, those who believe that studying at an educational institution or college is the best route to a successful line argue that higher education provides students with a wide range of awareness, skills and experiences that an essential for success in their chosen field. They argue that attending educational institutions or colleges allows students to gain specialized judgment, improve critical thinking skills and develop communication and interpersonal skills. Moreover, graduates with an academy or college degree often have better employment opportunities and higher ceremony potential than those without one.\n\nOn the other hand, those whose advocate forgetting a work straight after seminary agree that practical know-how and more valuable than theoretical familiarity gained in the classroom setting. They claim that graduates often struggle to find work to their luck lack of contact and practical skills, which can only be gained by working in the field. Furthermore, they argue that earning money, which can help them to support themselves and their families.\n\nIn my opinion, both paths have their neurites and the best approach depends on the individual’s circumstances and system goals. For some, higher education at the academy or college may be necessary to gain the grasp and credentials needed to enter certain professions. For others, getting an assignment straight after faculty may be more practical and financially feasible and they can gain valuable involvement and skills in their career.\n\nIn conclusion, whether attending a university or getting a place straight after the hall is the best route to a successful program is subjective and depends on individual circumstances. While higher education may be advantageous for some, practical skills gained in an assignment may be more valuable for others. Ultimately, the most important thing is to have a clear understanding of one’s race goals and to ankle informed decisions based on those goals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that poverty and hunger can be reduced by economical growth, whilst others have an opinion to stop the economic advancement as it harms the environment. While I understand people’s concern about environmental damage, I still believe to get rid of poverty and hunger economic growth is needed.\r\n\r\nThere are multiple reasons why people support the ban on economical growth. Firstly, owing to industrial growth, air and water pollution levels are shooting. For instance, recent surveys depict that industrial waste is one of the main reasons for polluting clean water resources. Moreover, carbon emission has been at its peak in the last decade due to the rise in the number of industries, which is essential for the economy. Secondly, deforestation, which is done to provide space to industries, is also a huge problem. Cutting down forests results in hampering the water cycle. Floods are also a result of these deforestation activities. For example, North-east India is facing devastating flood situations as the result of deforestation in the Himalayas. These points make the public believe that economical growth has a bad impact on the environment.\r\n\r\nDespite these causes, I still believe to end starvation and hardship strong economy is vital. To start with, economical growth leads to hundreds of job openings, which is quite essential to fight against poverty. If people are earning well, it will be easy for them to provide with the basic needs of their family. Recently, Amazon has declared to open a warehouse in Orissa creating thousands of jobs in the state. In addition to this, a rising economy will help to provide more funds for deprived masses. To explain, Navin Bharat is one of the central government schemes in India to provide cheap food and accommodation to poor individuals. Hence, expansion in the economy is thought to be the main solution to these situations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while people side with the idea to stop economical growth, I am in favour of boosting the economy to end poverty and hunger.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "THE FEATURES OF THE SETTING AFFECT THE CYCLIST BY IT BEING SO HOT OUTSIDE THAT HE COULD HAVE HAD PASSED OUT AND DIED ALSO HE SAW A SNAKE THAT SCARED HIM TO DEATH BUT HE PASSED THE SNAKE ALSO HE SAW A BUILDING THAT COULD PROBABLY HELP HIM BUT IT WAS ABANDONED IT WAS A WELCH FACTORY THEN AS HE RUNS FURTHER DOWN HE SAW A FISH PLACE AND WENT TO THE BATHROOM TO GET SOME WATER somebody asked going tined totzy still map decided going use instead listening peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is an excellent idea! In my opinion, driverless cars will make life much easier due to you being able to kick back like you are a passenger. As long as the necessary steps are taken in regards to safety. Which they do, it says in the passage that you are able to take driver control whenever you want and will be required to when needed. Such as when there is an accident or roadblock of the sort.\n\nHowever, I understand that technology does fail. It is very possible that the alert mechanism might not function properly causing an accident. Plus, what happens if it malfunctions on a very populated highway or innerstate. I do believe however that more car crashes will happen by drivers then if the technology did malfunction. Technology as long as it is programmed properly then it shouldn't malfunction as much as people panic and crash. Plus, with this kind of technology it can open up so much more. Like, if your tire runs flat eventually they will have it to where the robot can fix it while still driving you to your destination. Driverless cars would be extremely convient for people that are on the road a lot. They can get a break from driving without even stopping.\n\nFinally, I think driverless cars would be a great idea because of how convient it would be to so many people. It could reduce the amount of car crashes we have per year. It even takes the safe measures needed in particular situations such as in a roadblock or accident. For all these reasons I think we should switch to driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are cars becoming more of the past and less of the future? People arent driving as much as they used to, and might be of some benifit to our everyday life. Places like Germany, Paris, Columbia and more are joining up to use less cars and use more pedestrians, public transportation, bycycle, ect to form a connected way of transportaion to save money, save resourses, lower polution percentages and improve safty.\n\nAccording to the passage \"In German suburb, life goes on without cars\" written by Elisabeth Rosenthal \" passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissionsin Europe. And up two 50 percent in some car-intesive areas in the United States.\" Imagain what would happen if we reduced the car rate use in just the US. We could conserve a large amount of fuel. That can be used for public trasportation, and also reduceing the price per gallon. It can also protect our enviromet. Alowing us to protect wild life, and breathing in chemicals that shouldn,t be inside our bodys. Just by doing this it could greatly effect or life lives in a positive way.\n\nThis means for a new way of live. A connected network that relies on everything and everyone doing there part. In doing so, it provides a safe and money saving enviroment. First of all you dont have to worry about paying those incompetent car bills. And you dont have to pay insurence for the car. Second you save money not paying for gas every week. alowwing yourself to move from place to place in your community, by public or comercial transportaion, or even bike riding is good, and safe. you dont have to wory about hitting somone or something. Or mabye someone hitting you. this could cause less trips to the hospitals and prevent less death. In the passage written by Elisabeth Rosenthal it says \" public transit was free of charge from friday to monday, according to the BBC\" So as you can see limiting car use is very effective, efficiant, and enviromently safe.\n\nThis is also a time savior. No worries about your car breaking down, cause riding the bus ensures you that ist regularly checked and regulated. walking asrrues you that its exercies so there is no need to waste time. All around limiting car use is better for life. You save money, help the enviroment and the communites wich you live in, and improves safty. So I ask you are you willing to not drive?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "yes, we should use the technology because in so many ways its beneficial it helps us tell how your feeling and hows your day going. In a school emotions are thrown everywhere because this is a really stressful place for a lot of kkids and adults and some days kids might not wanna be bothered or they might actually need the atention. when reading kids you dont want to make the wrong asssumption and mix the child up this face scanner will relieve you of so much stress.\n\nWhile trying to live to a positive vibe looks can be very deciving for most they may show tou one thing but inside it may be another. Especially in the classroom nobody knows what a kid is really going through at home until he shaterrs him self an show it and that may take forever. the face scanner will allow you to pick up on it easier and faster. By reading a face faster it will allow you to help the kid faster and provide for him or her.\n\nNo kid should go along this path alone and feel helpless ever. Bring this face scan to life and you might save more than one,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting essay Do exceed posted speed limit dry sandy hot deserted On way Yosemite takes short cut desert When first leaves hot flat part desert His mood high confidence Things began well enough I rode morning strong legs smile face With arrives first town hes wasnt worried bad plenty water moves The terrain starts working search water Flat road replaced short rolling hills large high way sign jumped It read Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed posted speed limit This lowers confidence especially everything deserted heat stroke one would around find He keeps determination sees factory yet moves When see first comp overwhelmed relief terrain flattens When asked need direction say map keep stick terrain knows rest He keep hopes follow true set directionsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI am writting this letter to give my opinion on whether or not we should keep the electoral college or change to election by popular vote. I believe that we should change the election to popular vote ,because I feel that the people know best .\n\nI agree with the statement the people know best because to me it true. If the majority of the people all vote for the same person its because the person is or has done something good and they would like to see that continue to happen. Also , I feel that the president should be elected by the popular vote because the people are in which what makes the country run. We the people have to work and spend money nd recieve money back in order to make our state or our country be successful. If no one spends then what is are country proffiting from? I strongly believe that the the president should be elected by the people because without the people it wouldnt work. For example, when a candidate runs for president his job is to attract more people and or do something to make people want to say \" I really like what he or she is doing and i think that we should vote for him or her\".\n\nEven though , the electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance it dosent reallly stand out as the people do. The people in which, watch the candidates closely they acknowledge what they hear and or see. They will make their decsion based upon what they see the candidate doing right or wrong. The people are the ones who will have to live by the rules that the candidate makes so why not let them vote on which who will run this country and or nation better.\n\nIn the article , it states that the electoral college isnt a place it is a process. If you really look at things the whole concept of voting is a process. A process that would not run without the people. The process usally is that when its time to vote for a president we the people must go and vote in an orderly fashioned line in which you must be eighteen or older. If we the people are the ones making this country and or state run then we in which should be the ones having the final say so in which who are president should be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The Experts say computers taking people I strongly disagree People spend amount time need want become active spend time family friends Computers allow people learn allow people communicate family friends Also people use computers work jobs I believe computers allow people like learn You learn also things computer You learn countries read articles news also You learn different languges world Online people communicate others There skype allows communicate others internet use webcam also instant messanger like conversation person s right next Then email send letters photos comments people use computers work Microsoft allows type stories type letters people job reports Also internet helpful work Websites search engines help lot Websites contain information working people need To finish letter I want say Computers allow people learn They allow people communicate friends family Lastly working people use computer work reports I hope I influenced see computers nt badSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some argue that machines with artificial intelligence are critical to improving people's futures, while others argue that the invention of robots is a risk that can have negative consequences for society.I believe robots are crusial becouse without robots we cannot be achive the production that is required.\r\n\r\nIn many countries, robots have become crucial to the development of the economy as they engage in not only manufacturing but also service industries. Robots can survive in conditions that humans cannot, for example,roots are working in a mining area where the air contains poisonous gases and they extract valuable resouse to use for human . In addition, automated machines are used in car manufacturing because they can work long hours continuously and, in most cases, are more effective than humans.Therefore, global productivity has increased significantly, which is good for future human development. I believe this is a great advantage of robots.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robots can be used in military and anti-social tasks such as causing harm to people and other tasks because the machines only obey their owner's rules and may not consider human feelings or other humans' values. For example, a major Japanese corporation built military robots; after an experiment, they deactivated those robots; however, one of the robots automatically reactivated and connected to the Internet to gather information and become stronger.I believe that this negative impact of rebots can be eliminated by taking strong regulatory measures\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, robots can positively influence human future development by increasing global productivity; however, they might be dangerous unless controlled by the govenment .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors mood memoir grateful tells us much appreciates parents done appreciates parents immigrated United States better life said came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved grateful parents happy parents made house like Cuba originally came said Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love thankful sacrifice parents needed make grateful ca nt express gratitude The author thanks parents ve done make happy That grateful author towards parents make better life learned word family truly meansSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir one mood There love friendship happiness Narciso expresses love parents friends paragraph In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship The author saying everyone comes together care eachother She expresses friendship paragraph When says babysitter first friend Finally expresses happiness In paragraph saying never forget parents turned simple house home You could tell happy grateful parents Those moods memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many NASA scientists were shocked to see the image of what looks to be a human face on the surface of Mars. It was believed at the time that this formation was created by aliens, but that theory was soon ruled out by scientists. \"The Face\" is simply a natural land formation that even occurs here, on Earth. It was mistaken to be a human face due to shadows that were cast that made an illusion that resembled a human face. Paragraph 5 states that \"defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Which states that if there was, NASA would be benefited, so NASA would definetly not want to hide something as big as an ancient civilization on Mars. Paragraph 7 states that during April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor Michael Malin flew over Cydonia with his Mars Orbiter Camera team and took a picture that was 10 times sharper than the original Viking photos. Which soon proved the image to be a natural landform. Given this information, it is very simpily ruled out that \"The Face\" is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME and i am here today to talk to you about wether or not you should keep the Electoral College. In my opinion i thibk that it would be easiewr to vote for the president by the number of popular votes that he recieves. In this letter i am going to explain to you why i think that its easier if we do this so please make sure you can read through this whole letter.\n\nThe first thing we need to know before starting to read this letter is that the Electoral college is basically a widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democractic mehtod of selecting a president that ought to be rules. Many people in the United States and in other places all over the world always face difficulties wether or not they like the Electoral College. If you acually think about it, in the electoral college system voters vote not for the president but for the slate of the electors who then vote for the president. So the people that are voting for these electors are not getting the direct vote. They are not getting sufficent amount of power to vote for the person that is going to rule their life.\n\nA very important key that we asll have to know is that the electoral college is unfair for the voters. Candidates dont spend time on states that they know have no chance of winning. People cant put the fate of the presidency in the hands of a state that only have candidates because the candidates know that they might have a chance on winning!! And i do understand that we cant change this because some people dont like it but that is because people do not understand what the Electoral College is in the first place.\n\nSo dear mr.senate please do something to abolish the electoral college. Its is unfair and irrational. Thank you for taking your time to read this letter and dont hesistate to call me whenever you need to.\n\nSincerly,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\nPHONE_NUMBERSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of the advantages of limiting your car usage? Do you even know what driving does to the enviroment? Limiting the amount of times you use your vehicle will reduce the pollution in the world.\n\nTo begin with, In 'Source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog' by Robert Duffer, it is stated on lines 14-16 that \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog\" explaining that without cars, the amount of \"congestion\" in other words pollution will decrease rapidly. The popular use of cars and motorcycles have forced France to ban driving to clear the smog in their city. Pollution in this city has obviously grown over the years, by reducing the use of these machines has helped the enviroment.\n\nIn Addition, 'Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota' by Andrew Selsky records that there is a day banning vehicle use as well know as the Day Without Cars in Bogota, Colombia, with an exception of buses and taxis. Selsky wrote \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" With this city of 7 million, the rate of pollution will decrease throughout the years, even with one out of 365 days of not driving.\n\nLastly, 'Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars by Elisabeth Rosenthal, It is explained that the \"Residents of [Vauban,Germany] this upsca;e community are suburban pioneers...they have given up their cars.\" Rosenthal notes that many families are happier without vehicles.\n\nIn Conclusion, limiting the usage of cars and vehicles will decrease the amount of air pollution in the world. These 3 sources all gave examples of scenarios without cars and motorcycles, how people have made things work and how pollution has reduced since then.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think they should develop the driverless cars, because it would be something new and most likely be safer then normal driving. People say the car could malfunction or go out of control but if they think that then why are there self drive airplanes. (auto pilot). Planes would make a even bigger accident if it were to malfunction. So I think driverless cars should have a chance. If the something happens to the car then it is the drivers fault, because he/she should have been paying attention and making sure nothing is going wrong.\n\nIt wouldn't be the manufacturers fault because they just develop it and make sure everything is in order, they don't have control over once a customer buys a uses one. In 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" If the driver is not co-operating with the driverless car then an accident or something worse could happen, and would be the drivers fault. In passage 7, it says \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing up into an object.\" If failed to do so an accident will accur on be blamed on the driver for not paying attention.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless car should be developed. If an accident accurs then it would be the driver's fault unless something goes wrong in the car itself.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" the\n\nchallenge of exploring venus\" is a text that tell you that venus is a worthy pursuit, how\n\nvenus is dangerous and some difference between venus and our own planet ,i'm going to tell you some of them to suppor the author's\n\nidea.\n\nthe science say that venus is the second planet from our sun in the univers, they\n\nalso called venus \"evenig star\" because venus is one of the bightest point of light in the night sky, venus is like the earth twin in terms of density and size but venus is also a dangerous planet . venus have the hottest surface temperature of any planet because venus is so close to the sun ,that is one of the all difference that exist between our planet and venus.\n\nin the paragraph 3 the author say that venus have different condition of weather\n\nand additionnal empediments like powerful earthquakes frequent lightning strickes and eruptine volcanoes that is a reason that human cannot go and live in venus.\n\nthe national aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particucaly idea for sending humans to\n\nstudy venus\n\nfor some reason they didn't do it but now the NASA working on it ,they\n\nuse some machanical parts that can be made more\n\nresistant to pressure,heat, and other forces.\n\nin coclusion , i think the idea to go to venus is a bad idea because this planet is very close\n\nto the sun and people can lost their life but if the NASA can fabrique a machine that can go to venus sna take the infomation that we need to know about this planet that will be a great thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to civilization people were cutting the forest to make houses and this will affect adwaresly to animals by disturbing the whole eco-system . Some people thinks that taking action now would be futile as the damage is more and it is impossible to repair it . \r\n\r\nSince ages , to quench the thrust of becoming superior than nature . Curiously making use of natural resources for his benefits . To begin with , building the shelter from the wood to fossil fuel to run the car .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever found books movies music magazines drugs sexuality violence I think books movies music magazines removed shelves libraries anything drugs sesuality violence There many reasons I think books movies music magazines removed shelves libraries One reason little kids get ahold book kind music movie kind magazine contains drugs sexuality violence learn kinds things A second reason I think removed shelves libraries I feel like library place kinds books magazines kind music kind movies parents kids read watch even listen music contains drugs sexuality violence The third reason I believe removed form shelves libraries thoes kinds materials belong another building building far away form children certain people get building look books magazines watch movies listen music contians kind stuff The last reason I believe removed experience one time I found book drugs I looked unappropate little kids look pictures drugs look like certain durgs body In conclusin I hope ever reading realize books moveis music magazines people reading watching listeningSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The claim taht I will be making is I disagree with the FACS. I don't believe that there is any technologgy that can tell someones feelings by an image. There are people that walk around looking mad, but that doesn't always mean there mad. I see so many people walking around with a smile on there fae when in reality they just want to break down and cry. No matter how happy, sad, or mad someone looks technology will never be able to detect how someone feeling through and image.\n\nA part in the text says \" can we actually calculate emotions? Like math homework?\" those are questions someone has asked regaurding to the FACS. The text states that a computor constructs a 3-D computer model of the face and all 44 major muscles\n\nin the model mus move like human muscles. The movement of one or more muscles is what they call an \"action unit\". The texts states that the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) has only classified six basic emotions. Those being happiness, surprise, andger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Dr.huang believes that the facial expressions for each emotion are universal. The text sort of explains that in order for them to be able to know what and how your feeling the look at all of the muscles in your body and shows the percentile of your emotions, breaks them down, and predicts which one you are the most.\n\nThe conclusion to my story will be that the FACS isn't realistic to me. I dont believe that you can take an image, observe it, watch the muscles move like human muscles and tell a humans emotions. The eveidence that is supporting that claim is good but I still don't think that it is so accurate it told the absolute correct percentage on Mona Lisa's feelings. I don't agree with this subjusct at all and I dont feel as if someone can tell someones emotions though a picture. All you could do is assume and try to find out hoe someone is feeling. Not observe there facial muscles and tell.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you were observing the road in front of you, not driving your car, what would you see? There's a chance you could see a car going 120 miles per hour heading in your direction. Would you want to be in control of the next thing that happens, or would u rather put your life in the hands of a driverless car? I am against driverless cars because they could be life threatening, the driver could lose all sense of ownership, and have problems with the driverless car's language.\n\nEven if a driverless car has antilock brakes and sensors they could fail at anytime. Which could result in serious body injury or even death. For example, the antilocks could break and while that car that is going 120 miles per hour is roaring towards you, you could try to serve but you wouldn't be able to stop. The sensors could fail to work as well. An example, a child no more than 5 tosses a kick ball into the air and scrambles to catch it. While the child is trying to do so your driverless car is backing up to park and doesn't signal any movement. The next thing you know the child is hurt serverely. Not only could it be life theatening for one, but for all.\n\nThe driver could lose all sense of ownership. They could be so adapted to driveing a vehicle that sitting aside and not driving could effect them in ways some people might not realize. They could become depressed, lazy and the United States obsese percentage could raise beyond means. When that person becomes depressed and lazy they could forget about their daily needs. Having driverless cars could be a domino effect that has no good end.\n\nThe binary codes that would be used with driverless cars could be difficult to understand by some. They could have some problems comprehending the messages that are given to them. They also require massive upgrades, and that could take a toll on a persons budget.\n\nTo have these driverless cars could be hectic and outraging. They could\n\nput not only one but many peoples lives in danger. These cars could destroy ownership, and cause money issues. They are a bad subject to consider. As the Constitution says, we the people. We the people should get a say in what happens in this world. We the people should take a stand. We the people should have a say, because it's our future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe Materials good materianls thats good stuff thatBook yes nt book ca nt leave If nt book people know readMusic said yes time music good time people need music work I say know magazines much thatIt stuff thin sould seeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Increasing the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles is proposed to be one of the best ways to mitigate the issues in our environment. However, in my opinion, I am absolutely in disagreement with this statement. The reasons for this will be tackled in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, increasing the price of fuel will only have a minimal impact on protecting our environment from pollution or climate change and will have a significant rebound negative impact on an individual level and on microenterprises. This will cause financial strain for the less fortunate, while the wealthy and large-scale business owners will most likely be unaffected. For these reasons, there will be a clash of temperaments and an increasing poverty level for those affected and could possibly lead to other issues like a rise in looting and crime rates.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are other effective ways to address environmental issues, such as increasing the use of renewable energy and encouraging the use of recyclable materials.By doing such things, society can benefit more as recyclables are a more practical way of saving money. Furthermore, making use of our renewable energy sources such as solar, wind, and water energy will help reduce the amount of fossil fuel circulating in the atmosphere. Thus, this will help aid in protecting our nature.\r\n\r\nTo summarize, repricing crude is not a practical or optimal solution to the environmental issues we face today. It will only hurt the poor and benefit the rich, which could create tension and, worse, lead to other societal issues such as a rise in crime rates. It is then imperative to consider the use of renewable sources of energy to conserve and aid the earth from pollution and climate change by reducing the amount of fossil fuel accumulation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author chooses end story wit paragraph symbolizes closure The plant represent home But realizes sight geese flying sooth evenyone leave home point She come terms happening try drivers liscence soon When hibiscus buds symbolic ready trySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author ended Saeng vowed iS commited She failed first time know really want pass waiting snow melt geese return hibiscus buddin come backSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System is a new piece of technology that can help students and companies worldwide. Using this technology can benefit many. This technology is vaulabe to everyone and is a step towrd the future.\n\nThe author describes a new technology called Facial Action Coding System (FACS), as a way to identify human emotions. The way FACS works is a computer constructs a 3-D computer model of a face. It can move all 44 major muscles of the face like human muscles in correspondence with emotion. FACS has six basic emotions such as, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nEach emotion is chracterized with the facial\n\nmuscles according to paragraph 3. According to Dr.Huang in paragraph 4, facial expressions are universal, even though some indidviduals show varying degrees of expression. Scientists use algorithms to calculate emotion in people. These different algorithms can be useful to all.\n\nStudents should use this technology to read emotional expressions. This technology can benefit fine arts students greatly. Theatre kids can use this technology to define their character more and use the correct expressions and emotions. Art students can analyze art with this technology and create more similar to it. Some students who prefer science can also use this. AMny facial expressions move muscles in our face and anatomy students can use this to figure out how the face creates expressions. This technology is valuable to students and should be available to them.\n\nIn conclusion, FACS technology is very beneficial. It can be useful to students and is very valuable. Adults want kids to succeed and technology is the way to help us. Technology is easily available to us and can help us later in life with the right skills and development.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did not really have a set tone. He argued for both sides a lot of the time and there was no one specific side that i could see that he sided with. The author gave specific details for both arguments and made very good points for both sides. He made points such as its very similar to Earth and It might have no contained signs of life. He also said things like ¨Its too hot and the atmosphere is too much for a human being to handle.\n\nIn paragraph 4 the author writes, ¨It may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.¨ They also say ¨The planet has a serfave of rocky sediment and includes familar featured such as valleys mouthains and creators.¨ The authers tone in this suggest that he thinks the idea that we could travel to venus would benefit us greatly and it might actually be like Earth.\n\nIn paragraph 3 that author states that ¨A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide balnets Venus.¨ He also says that ¨Its far more extreame that anything humans will encounter on Earth. This means that going to venus might be able to kill and it might not be sutable for humans to live on. Its so hot on Venus that it would liquify most medals so even if we got there we couldnet expand and build anything.\n\nThe author makes valid arguments for both sides but i had a very had time deciding what side he was arguing. There was just as much posative as there was negative. He had no one clear side throughout the whole article he was arguing why we should and why we shouldent go to Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against this claim because that means someone could potentally be looking at you through a computer monitor. In paragraph 1 it states how the \"computer\" can calculate what your emotions are in almost exact percentages. Also in paragraph 6 it says how the computer can adjust what ads to put on the side of your computer just by you smiling at the webcam or being able to tell your chiild's emotions and knowing if they are bored or even confused they can change what they see on the screen to try an change their mood and make them less bored. Some subjects may be made fun but it should not happen through a computer screen. Emotions happen on a daily basis but it should not change the way you live your work life of home life and it definatly should not change the way children learn. Emotions are real life problems that everybody deals with so why change the internet because of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Different settings effect well bycycle ride goes If hot lots hills makes hard If hills sunny breezy day makes nice ride In essay biker water left going hill The going hill part probably easy fact water left good thingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college been around for a long time. Some of the states don't like it, because most states doesn't even see the campaign. Sometimes people don't really know who there voting for. when the candidate promiss may be the compleate oppsite once there president.\n\nMore of the smaller states aren't to happy with the electorial college, Because of it the canidates dont want to go to the smaller states. They would go to the bigger states so they would have a bigger number of votes then with a smaller number. Thats why the smaller states are up set with the electoral college. One thing people dont like about voting is once you have a president they don't follow what they promiss.\n\nWhen the canidates become president after getting all the big states. They dont do what they promiss. What people thought who they picked was all for change, and just makes their own rules that not helping,but hurting everyone is why the smaller states are up set about it.\n\nThe electoral college needs to change, because their not being fair to the other states that only have a few people living in them. They could of make a difference in what the out come is. The electoral college been aroud for a very long time. They need to come up with a new way to find our president.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usages is a suggestion idea about car-free cities. Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use, as a component of movement called \"smart planning.'' The reazon why they are trying to expand this plan is because the use of car in the cities is growing every day like five times more than the usual. Cities are full of of car and you dont have to read these to see that. I know that these is a period of time in which tecnology is what take the first place in are life, and am talking about those new model of car. In one part of the view we can see that those care are very atractive and they dont cause any risk to society. But in the other side I will like to show you what especialist people think the cities full of cars. Experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emission from tailpipes. Passenger cars are resposible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emision in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\n\nLet see these in other point of view. Think about your son or your little brother or sisster or just tink about any little baby that is born in those cities full of cars . The greenhouse gas emission is reduced by 50 percent so the other 50 percent that those kids are breathing is just toxic air. Taths why the hospitals are full of people whit pulmonary cancers and asthma. While there have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking, planners are now taking the concept to the suburbs. But its basic precepts are being adopted aroun the worl in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, whith les space for parking. In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main steet, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\n\nSomething that also affect the society is the obesity. People depend a lot on their cars and forgot about to walk. It is a simple example but it had cause a lot of death and heart attac in the past two decades. ''All of our develpment since World War II has been centered on car, and that will have to change,'' said David Goldberg. In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoring ''car reduced'' communities, and legislators are starting to act.\n\nIt was just an informative essay to let the people know about the adventages of limiting car usages. I hope this essay help you to understand and realized about all risk that cars can cause includind cars accident. The limit car usage will help every body starting with those who accept the Environmental Protection Agency promotion ''car reduced''. You can be part of taking care about the environment, and remember ''How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid. (David Goldberg)SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people show more tendency to have a tour to other lands around the world. From my perspective, this advance has both positive and negative aspects.\r\n\r\nFirstly, by virtue of airplane improvement and development, any destination abroad is accessible with affordable cost and lowest time. In addition, these days, holiday destinations have many advertisements and promotions to attract tourist globally; is that, the number of people choosing foreign countries has been increased significantly instead of local ones. \r\n\r\nAnother reason for travel tendency to other countries is the people’s high demand of studying, working and living overseas these days generally. Not only there are many parents taking peril to support their children to study abroad, but also there are many teachers encouraging students to pursue their targets in other lands. Thanks to the global process, many hurdles such as culture, language and frontier have been narrowed and leads to society’s enthusiasm in travelling to other countries.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the reasons described above should be seen as a process with both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, holidaymaking provide high rate of wealth which promotes tourism industry dramatically. Furthermore, it boosts competition in jobs, culture adoption and conventions homogenization, which raise development in many social aspects. On the other hand, it will undermine rare languages and small cultures since many people attempt to adopt popular things.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly agree that travel abroad is necessary incentive, which can cause positive and negative effects for aforementioned reasons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the problem of an increasing number of people suffering from obesity is of concern to the government and citizens . Some feel that increasing the price of fattening foods in order to address the problem. In this paper, I will argue that there are other methods that can do a better job .\r\n\r\n First of all, raising the price of junk food can certainly help to shape consumers eating habits to some extent. Consumers would seek alternative options over sugary and fast foods because of a limited budget . If unhealthy foods such as pizzas , burgers and soft drinks cost too much, people would rather buy cheap and healthy products so they can minimize the expense which in turn modifies eating behaviours . In addition, increasing the price of junk foods is one way to tell grocery industries to manufacture ,for example, sugar-free drinks and free sandwiches which concern people's health conditions more .\r\n\r\n Secondly, simply raising the price of junk foods can not eliminate the problem because people who favour fries or chips will not change their dietary habits easily. Therefore , more methods are required to ease people's weight problems.To start with, the government should consider investing money in fitness facilities . For instance, building more fitness centres and sports stadiums will encourage people to exercise . Physical activities significantly assist trainers to burn fat and calories inside their bodies , thereby effectively promoting activating lifestyles and reduce overnight problems . Besides that, professional counsellors should give advice on a healthy diet to the general public so that people can pay attention to their dietary habits.\r\n\r\n By way of conclusion, raising the price of unhealthy foods is not the only way to help obese people.The government should put more effort into the improvement of public facilities or services to solve people's weight problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is indeed the fact that few cities across the globe experience the severe challenges of the high amount of traffic on their roads. This essay will discuss the potential reasons of this issue followed by the solutions to tackle them.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the reason why some towns suffer from the increasing number of vehicles on the streets is no existence of a law related to driving restrictions. It means a law that prohibits people to drive their vehicle on a specific day or at a certain time does not exist which provides a liberty to drive anytime and anywhere. In addition, the inefficient public transport is the another major reason. It means that the distances across different destinations are not efficiently connected via public transport. As a result, people experience inconvenience while availing public transport to travel whereas opting to drive a private vehicle becomes a feasible option for them. For instance, due to the absense of direct connectivity of Delhi with Gurgaon, millions of employees residing in Delhi, drive to Gurgaon every day to work in their private vehicles which causes longer hours of traffic congestion at toll. \r\n\r\nHowever, the above-mentioned concerns are certainly be dealt by implementing the following methods. Firstly, public transporttransport can be improved which should connect all the major destinations in a city effectively and efficiently. This will definitely encourage commuters to shift to public transport which can increase their possibility of on-time arrival at their desired destination. Secondly, a law that prohibits people to drive their vehicles on roads, can be issued in which a driver must be penalized with the heavy challans upon violation. Consequently, the number of vehicle on the roads of a city will decline drastically. For instance, considering the concerning increment of vehicles on the roads of Delhi, the government implemented an even-odd rule which reduced a traffic by 40 to 45 per cent.\r\n\r\nConsequently, although the increasing traffic in many cities is the result of the absence of required regulations and an effective public transportation, the improvement of the transportation system and implementing driving regulations can certainly address the issues.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is sometimes argued that younger adults should participate in volunteering because it may prove beneficial for society. While society emphasizes to volunteer wor, but I believe that this can either help society or individual. \n\nThere are various reasons why society should not force young people to take part in unpaid activities. Firstly, students always find themselves busy with homework and exam revisions; even sometimes it seems like full time job as their school schedule follows tuition. For example, in India, school children stay from 9 am to 3 pm in schools, and after the visit , tuition to cover up their homework, which is quite hectic. Secondly, they do not have enough time to spend with family, relatives, and friends and that their childhood should be meant to more playful, stress- free and full of leisure activities. Despite that, society still, believes in getting unpaid work done through poor children who do not have time for themselves. \n\nOn the other hand, volunteering is helpful to develop excellent characteristics in a person, and also useful to get a job in the future. Although there are good reasons to do free work, society can not bide rules or push youngsters to participate. If society takes actions to increase unpaid work involvement, this will not benefit them; perhaps it can affect severely on their reputation. It can be assumed that young people might choose social welfare or social services after their studies completed. As a result, individuals should be given choices because they could feel pressurized, which can lead to suicidal mental eagerness. \n\nIn conclusion, the community could benefit from volunteering if youngsters show willingness for involvement in the social activities instead of push over by people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be used as an advantage in the following ways. There is a substantial amount of usefulness in the medical field with driverless cars. The mentally disabled in many ways can have a new type of freedom. Overall driverless cars are more safe.\n\nThe medical field is advancing rapidly. The transportion for hospitals, health clinics, in home nursing etc., can be greatly efected in a positive way. In an emergency situation a patient does not have a moment to spare, and a driverless ambulance does not spare a single second. The driverless ambulance will send out a signal pulling over all other driverless cars, leaving an open path, and another patient with thier life. The medical personel can have all hands on the patient. The driverless car is more effecient in the medical field than a manual car.\n\nThe mentally disabled strive to be more independant, and what better way than giving themselves thier own transportation. Granted they could take the bus, but the driverless car is infiantly safer for them. The people that care for them can take driving them to the doctors off of their checklist. In an emergency all they have to do is tell the car where to go and it will asist them. Once again the driverless car can save lives.\n\nThe main point of the driverless car is to be a safer alternative to the manual version. The built in automatic brakes have already been proven useful in todays vehicles. Built in GPS systems can be of great value when all a human has to do is type in a location. A human mind turns to panic in an accident, but not the computer program of the driverless car. The driverless car can save lives.\n\nThe driverless car can save lives. The driverless car can grant a new sources of freedom and independece to the mentally disabled. The driverless car gives a second chance to human beings that were moments away from death. The driverless car is an atvantage for not only American's but for the whole world. The driverless car is not only an advantage, but a hope for a newer brighter future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author informs us on how new vehicles are being built that would take away most, if not all of the driver's control in the vehicle. The idea is fasinating but, with every new idea, there is always more than one fault, because nothing is perfect. Is taking the risk of mass producing these automobiles in the future worth a human life, or many?\n\nFirst and foremost, cars were just a show of status and new inventions in the 1920's when they first started ot come out, only men could drive them because there was no power steering to help a weaker person turn the wheel. Now, about a hundred years later, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states, \"He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\" Which would have never been a thought even fifty years ago, but because of how technology has advanced, now the Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, can now dream of complete lathargicness. What he does not see is how dangerous cars already are with the human brain at the wheel. Statistics can support how many accidents already happen a year, and half of them will be because people aren't paying attention, the other part could be drunk or buzzed driving, and a \"new\" cause that has occured ould be texting and driving. Having no human influence on the car's action \"90 percent of the time,\" as shown in paragraph 10, could lead to problems in the car gaining a mind of it's own, there are a handful of movies out there that showcase the dangers that technology can posses, I believe that the car companies need to watch those fictious films and be more careful when they're messing with new machienes.\n\nTaking away the need for constant attention to a vehicle could be problematic because people could start to get lazy since there is no need to always pay attention. When the vibrating seat, the announcement, flashing lights on the windsheild, or other heads-up displays fails to work a single time: what happens then? America is a lazy country in general, eating McDonalds constantly and having the rate of obesity go up 200% in the last 50 years. The addition of self driving cars may just be another cause to why people kick the bucket early on, decreasing the population at a higher rate than it is going up. I say this because people would stop walking or running places, most likely, if the public transportation is affrordable on a day-to-day basis then that would add to their weight gain and laziness to eventually lead to physical problems. If a person does die from an accident or even a health condition and they used the self-driving cars everyday, would the company be responsible? If not, what kind of reputation would that send to other states and people? Not a very good one, meaning sales would decrease and maybe the idea will just be another mistake of the rich taking advantage of the poor.\n\nAlso, new laws being put into place to help satisfy the saftey concerns brought with the new car could be too restrictive and anger the people. Some states, if they declare the law unconsititutional could choose not to abide by it, what will the government do if they don't enforce it? Violence? Peaceful compromization? It is a risk too big to take because once the government gets involved, esseintally everyone loses hope because most of the time their decisions are not fair to all. Money is also a problem, we could be sent into another Great Depression if too much is spent on new roads to accomodate. Pollution of the air will also still be a major problem because fossil fuels would still be used, even though the tank is only half as much as taxi's now, the exhaust would add up if everyone used this new transportation.\n\nAll in all, the idea of vehicles performing the task that a human being does is incredible but, it is not safe for the manufacturers, the public, or even the government to indulge in this need to keep on improving technology. We are scraping by now with accidents happening on a daily basis, deaths are at an alltime high due to lathargicness and obesity, and laws are not always welcomed by the people. The addition and satisfaction of the self-driving car should not happen anytime soon because there are too many negative issues that need to be sorted out before the public is welcomed to all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting dramaticaly affect cyclist Everything fine ran water reached hills Now callada woudnt dehydrated But hills sure play mind The import setting welchs grape juice factory He would grape juice wanted abandoned An ironic twist as calls And last one hte bait shop sawes life old man offers directionsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An increasing number of people move to urban area for seeking opportunities for better lifestyle. However, living in metropolitan areas is challenging, authorities should take actions to address problems.\r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that making a profit plays a prominent role in business survival. Besides this, they should possess social commitment. I strongly agree with this notion.\r\n\r\nSome authorities place a premium on developing of economic. While citizens believe that improvement in other aspects such as health and education is equally necessary. Personally, I am strongly inclined to the second view.\r\n\r\nNowadays, high-risk recreations are becoming increasingly popular among people, and they take part in sports such as rock climbing and snowboarding. There are several reasons why people tend to attempt these unusual activities. Since there might be some undesirable physical side effects from them, sports providers, I believe, should take the necessary steps to tackle the problem.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why individuals show tendency towards extreme sports. To begin with, the main reason justifying their belief is feeding of excitement. That is to say, they assert that by doing action sports they would experience a feeling of joy as well as outleting for energy. Take an average university student who encounters various stressful situations range from low pay for part-time job to studying long hours for exams as an example; this would help them to escape from the stress and monotony of life. In addition, there is another reason which is by no means negligible. To be specifically, well-known people endorse these entertainments which increase interest between others and motivate them to attend more. \r\n\r\nHowever, there might be some drawbacks involved in these pastimes which could be controlled by introducing some regulations. In other words, as these actions seem to be life threatening there should be a health insurance that covers (in-action ?) harms. To put it differently, attendees can take part while they are provided with medical insurance, and this move one step forward in improving safety which in turn decreases the damage posed by the danger of these sports. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the main reason people care for extreme sports is to provoke a feeling of joy, and despite the possible risks, having insurance provides security.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that that this new technology to read people emontions is a great idea,and i will be expessing mt thought in my body below.\n\nThe author gives great examples of this inthe article,like in a classroom setting a student could be bored or confussed but with this new technology the teacher can fix this.This can also help when a person is having a bad day or is going thought something the computer can srnce that and someone can go and help them.This new technology may even help with crime with telling if the person that did the crime was sad about doing the crime or not,and with that could lead people to judge him differently.All of these pros with this new thchnology can lead to new things that we would have never thought of before this technology.\n\nand that is my reasons and thoughts on why we sould invest into this new thchnologyand all we can do with this new technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features california fact cyclist neave Yosemite made terrain rugged dangerous cyclist california hot climate neove desert need water cyclist much greater man cyclist In story cyclist travel desertlike conditions limited water supply The cyclist even mentioned story many hours ride land changed short rolling hills would made harder pedal making work harder story also mention sun beating would alos serve factor thout helped deplete hydration Through problem cyclist faced nowever managed stay determined people faced problems might able make Also story notices different stages struggle authours tone ananger confidient unsure desserSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I tink computer good idea people online like talk family see video cam When dont want go go online pay us Like would like watching movie like like oh go clean room go like oh wait movie good The computer best system go online every body use computer Witout computer going cheak yahoo My moom love How going check message u dont know computer If lake computers sle every body going try make one people walmart going like making money llike people buy got good computers one make people get people offline Apple store people go buy computers When spending time like online If like onlie going take computers say u searching mor computer But bout computers mom ways house boring go bu computer whne get moneySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aliens or a Coincidence?\n\nI have a strong belief that the \"Face on Mars\" was a natural landform. I do not think that the face was created by aliens. It could be a possibility but there is no proof that would back up that statement. Although, the fact that that the face was a natural landform doesn't need much backup because it's something that naturally happens. The only difference is that it's not usually a face that is usually created.\n\nHow could aliens know what to make a face look like? And not just any face, a human face. As the caption noted, \"a huge rock formation...which resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusions of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" I doubt that the aliens could make an exact replica of a human face because they have nothing to reference it off of.\n\nAlso, theres another question. How the face could have been made by aliens? What could the aliens possibly have made the face with? Im sure they would have required some tools to make this face on the planet of mars. Their hands would not be likely to complete that task because of what the planet is made of. The NASA didnt say they found any tools or objects that could be used as to make this \"face\".\n\nAnother doubt i have towards the aliens creating this face is what aliens? In the passage it said \"Manwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This implies that there is no civilization on Mars. So if there is no civilization on Mars, there is no one or nothing that could have made this face. How would they have made it if there is no one there to possibly make it?\n\nThere is reasoning I have to back up my opnion that it was a natural landform. Natural landforms happen here and there, almost everywhere. They come in any shapes and sizes. The form of a landform could be in any kind of shape. It's whatever it comes out to be. In this specific case though, the landform has captured the form of a face, somehow, with the correct facial features in the right places.\n\nIn the passage the \"Face of Mars\" is compared to the \"Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" If there are other more specificly shaped landforms in the world, why cant it be one on mars? Theres no difference in the form that natural landforms come in. They all can come in any type of way. It doesn't make a difference where they're at or what they're made of. A natural landform is always going to be a natural landform.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that the \"Face of Mars\" is a natural landform. There is no evidence disproving this statement. I do not believe that it was created by aliens. That was just an assumption that was made about the making of the \"face\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern times, old leisure activities for children, such as sports, reading and board games \r\n\r\nare being replaced by a more appealing forms of entertainment, such as television, video and computer games. This has arisen countless controversies on how such a shift in leisure activities could affect children.\r\n\r\nFirstly, it is important to recognise both the benefits and drawback that spending time on television, video and computer games can have on children. For instance, one of the benefits that children could receive from such activities is that it allows them to get better at using new technology. We are living in an age where the use of computers are more important than ever, having access to such devices through the mean of computer and video games can help children have a better understanding of how to use a computer, or even develop a special interest in the device and spark their interest in the ever-growing field of computer sciences. \r\n\r\nAnother advantage of watching television or playing video games is that it encourages children to stay at home. Now, this would be a good thing as it prevents their exposure to potential physical injuries from taking part in traditional physical leisure activities, or even protects them from the bad influences other kids might pose. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, an advantage of watching television and playing video/computer games that would often be overlooked is the fact that it is a great form of entertainment. This ranges from meaningful and comedic cartoon shows that would give children a good laugh to many thrilling adventures in video games that would ignite their creative minds.\r\n\r\nHowever, with that being said, playing video/computer games and watching television has been shown to release a high level of dopamine, a 'feel good' hormone, which is associated with the use of drugs and alcohol. Studies have shown that a sudden peak in dopamine release, would cause the body to produce drastically less dopamine afterwards, and the dopamine level could even decrease below the initial level. Leading to children feeling bored almost constantly after playing video games or watching television. Additionally, this could also lead to the body blocking dopamine receptors in an attempt to balance the hormone level, resulting in children enjoying the activities less and less, causing them to resort to indulging in more of the same activities to receive the same level of enjoyment that they did before. This is called an addiction, which would have a detrimental effect upon the mental health and physical health of children. \r\n\r\nAnother vital drawback is that the refusal to participate in physical activities would lead to an unhealthy lifestyle, as children would prefer staying at the same place for many hours over exercising or playing sports. This together with an unhealthy diet will lead to numerous health problems, such as obesity, diabetes and cardiovascular disease, once the children become an adult. In addition to that, prolonged exposure to a television or computer screen could cause children to develop vision problems. With regard to the issue of addiction, these conditions would only further deteriorate as the addiction would reinforce these behaviours in children, creating a positive feedback loop.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the many benefits that watching television and playing video games can provide children with, it is crucial to strictly monitor and regulate their time spent on these activities and maintain a balance between these and traditional leisure activities. Which allows the children to have a healthy lifestyle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" there are different sides and reactions to driverless cars. Personally I think that driverless cars are a bad idea. They can cause crashesand problems, costs lots of money and need more modifications.\n\nDriverless cars can cause alot of crashes because if it is a contructions zone, the car does not knowhow to get through it or manuver around it. A problem that might happen is you can tell the car where you want to go but it might not take you there. That can be a dangerous situation. If you have a driverless car, the driver is not going to pay attention to the road at al, so if something does happen in the car, the driver will not be paying attention enough to take control of the car.\n\nMaking these cars cost losts of money because of all the sensors you have to put on them. Not just the sensors, but you have to get someone to install the sensors. And if the car malfunctions then the car company will face alot of court issues which also costs alot of money. Spending all this money on making the cars will not be worth it all when people come to complain or get hurt by the car.\n\nThe driverless cars need more modifications because they are not completely driverless. You still need the driver to assist the car. If you need the driver its not a driverless car because you still need someone to take the wheel when certain points come along the road.\n\nThis articke shows me that driverless cars are an bad idea. Too much money, more modificatio, and crashes are only a little bit of the priorieties that need to be ficed with driverless cars. When these get fixed then driverless cars may be a better idea, but until then they need to try to fix these issues.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The increasing competition in modern businesses causes advertisement which has appeared in many audience gadgets. However, this strategy is to influence either their customers or make more guests, in fact, it works.\n\nLooking around us, everything is online and the majority of working people have at least one social media account, particularly Facebook, which we can not deny that we have got some benefits from it, such as it is easier to get in touch with peers, impressing with memorable posts which including photos and videos, hence we sometimes using it by not recognise that we have been tempted from many propagandas.\n\nIt is obviously being seen that those social-media companies receive income from advertisements which means that there are numerous ads out there on online platforms. As a result, the normalised dairy habit of inhabitants is using those platforms they have been manipulated by enormous influencers who possibly have a role as brand ambassadors, which affects directly audiences, consequently purchasing such products, even imitating their actions. Eventually, it will strike people in expenditure, hence an up-to-date regulation by the state could force the issue in an appropriate route. For instance, established caveats on whether adolescent users can access some of the sites or can not.\n\nTo sum up, propaganda is increasing to follow the number of the race of businesses which has an impact on those purchasers, which they are becoming more and more interesting ads to catch viewers' attention, so the government will have to track this transition.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to several reasons, in some places in the world, a large number of people are more curious in finding out about the back story of the place they are in sheltered. This answer will explore why this trend is becoming popular among people these days and how can these people find the answer for their curiosity. \r\n\r\nTo embark on, nowadays social media has influenced people’s daily lives in many aspects. Accordingly, there are many social media influencers posting about how they discovered a secret room, secret box, or secret door in their very own houses. These kinds of content have an effect on people’s curiosity: whether there were something in their house. For instance, my distant brother who has always been a fan of secret stories, he inspired by these kinds of content and tries to conduct research about his home and his apartment, yet he finds nothing. In other words, driven by curiosity imposed by influencers, more and more people tend to be interested in the background of their house. \r\n\r\nMoreover, to conduct findings of something is not difficult in modern days, anyone can search for anything online. Many search engine platform such as Google or Yahoo has broadened the people’s scope of exploration. Searching of the building backstories is not an exception, people who are curious about the history of their house could find it online as well. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the fact that more and more people are interested in the history of their own homes is because they are influenced by social media content. Further, it is not hard to answer their question, those who are curious can find it with only one click.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever since we found this face, many people like you have believed this to be an alien artifact. This is not an alien artifact, it is just a natural landform. I am here to explain why this is just a natural landform and clear up all of the confusion.\n\nWhen we first found this, we too thought this was some kind of alien artifact, but upon closer inspection, we found out it was not. With the pictures we took, we found out it was just like a butte or mesa on earth. Buttes and mesas can be found in the American West and we suspect that is what we are seeing with this face. It is just a big coincidence. We know that is was cloudy when we took one of the pictures, so you thought we may have missed some markings, but we took another one and there were no markings that we could see at all. Trust me, if this was an alien artifact of some sort, we would've made sure to tell you!\n\nIn conclusion, this face is no alien artifact, just a big coincidence. What is really is is the Martian equivalent to a butte or mesa here on earth. Mars has many craters and rocky spots, so we are not surprised that we found something like this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New public architectures and existing ones are all integral parts of a sustainable city or town. I support the idea that a limited budget should be allocated to both of the above-mentioned buildings in an appropriate way.\n\nThe established or old houses witness the history of an urban area. They are living archives who are telling memorable and exciting stories in the past. In particular, when old generations pass away, they are few of the remaining proofs that our hometown has splendid culture, history and customs. For instance, a normal local residential community located in the Hongkou district in Shanghai has become a non-intangible cultural heritage because it saved a lot of Jewish people during World War II. Some of the refugees left China after the War, others passed away, and the municipal government refurbished the local houses to commemorate the unforgettable legend during which the heroic citizens in difficulties rescued the Jewish people's lives. \n\nOn the other hand, newly built libraries or TV towers reflect the vibrance and development of a metropolis. They provide citizens with a friendly living environment. Take Shanghai Pudong Library as an example, it covers a large area with numerous books, magazines and newspapers in both physical and digital versions. The Library is also equipped with the most advanced technology, such as artificial intelligence(AI) robots. you can search for the books you want and wait for the AI robots to bring the books to your desk. Another example is Shanghai Oriental TV Tower which is as high as over 480 metres. Once a visitor stands on its top, he or she will enjoy a macro view that the existing and old buildings represent the past of the mega-city, and young skyscrapers herald the bright future. What a dynamic and promising metropolis it is!\n\nIn conclusion, the old and the old architectures are two sides of a modern city or town, we should maintain the former and create the latter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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