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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\n\"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens\"(Office of the Federal Register1). Thus, the Electoral College is a balance of votes that includes many different sources for which the President is elected. For this, the Electoral College should be retained due to its contribution to successful elections even though there are some instances which occur and to help the elections remain fair and equal. Additionally, this process should be continued, but there are certain aspects that would argue for changing the aged process.\n\nIn Richard Posner's, \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,\" he incorporates in his defense, that the electoral votes are awarded in a winner-take-all basis, which means that the states play an important role in the deciding factor of who will become the next President. Posner explained theoretically, \"In [2012's] election, for example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 perecnt of the popular votes cast for him and Romney... even a slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state\" (Posner 1). With this, this shows that the state votes are important and essential to the canidates who are trying to obtain electoral votes in the states. Thus, this method or process is successful in ways many people do not aknowledge. The citizen's votes do matter, when every aspect is put into a big picture and taken into account. Furthermore, the Electoral College alllows for everyone to have the chance to be apart of the elections. The Office of the Federal Register explains, \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress\" (The Office of the Federal Register 1). This adds suppprt that at the end of the election, almost every part of an election including votes, is taken into consideration, thus making the election a sucessful one.\n\nIn The Office of the Federal Register's excerpt, \"What Is The Electoral College,\" there is certain reasons that further divulge how the Electoral College is fair and equal to the canidates and the citizens who are voting. This is reliterated when The Office of the Federal Register statees, \" Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional Delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators...(Office of the Federal Register 1). In addition this means that each state will receive an opportunity to have a meaningful vote to the elections because every state has the same kinds of members being awareded to them. Each state will have a different number of members due to the size, but they will all be of equal value to the canidates. To add for support, Posner says, \"No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president\"(Posner 1). With this, all the states understand that their vote is crucial to the election and the canidates. Fortunately, the Electoral College is fair and equal to all the state's voting in the election, sometimes even more than some states know. For example, Posner states, \" Voters in toss up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really listen tp the competing candidates-knowing that they are going to decide the election\"(Posner 1). Ultimately, the Electoral College is the most fair way to decide and vote for a future president who will be our leader of all the citizens.\n\nLastly, the Electoral College is the best way to determine a president, but there are some flaws. For example, Plumer explains, \"... Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but list the presidency over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now\" (Plumer 1). The elecotral college could alter the outcome of an election dramtically. Another issue that Plumer wants people to know is that, \" Under the electoral collge sysytem, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors...\" (Plumerr 1). This is true but also could be a little dramatic. Ultimately, the citizens are the ones who are voting for the candidates not the electors. Without the vote from the citizens there would be no electors. The Electoral College process should still be kept even though there are some issues.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is very important to our modern day elections. The citizens and the states determine who the next Presidents will be. The process provides successful elecions which are fair and equal to not only the people, but the states. Posner states, \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a poltiacl preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election\" (Posner 1). The Electoral College makes sure that every person and state vote is accounted for and will be contributed to who the next President will be. One day maybe there will be a process that will exceed the Electral College, but for now, we will trust our founding fathers and keep the process that has been with us since the start.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders empire state building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock First illegal aircraft flying close city existing law airships flying low urban areas Another obstacle buildings structure blimp docked would stress building would add stress buildings Frame The last obstacle wind would push blimp around every way docked tower The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar chart illustrates the scores of teams A, B, and C over four different seasons. Overall, there are variations in points in all teams from 2001 to 2005. In addition, it is clear that team B dominated the highest points in all seasons.\nTo go into detail, team B started point 82, in 2002. This was the highest point in all seasons. Afterwards, the points reduced to 60, and 43 in 2003, and 2004 respectively. And then the points resulted in 55 in 2005.\nWhen it comes to team A, the points started at 5 in 2002. It was the lowest point among the three teams. The points soared to 11 in 2003, and a considerable increase in 2004. It was 35 points. In 2005, the points suddenly plummeted to 8 points in 2005.\nIn terms of team C, the points had 10 in 2002 and increased to 15 in 2003. In 2004, the points slightly reduced to 12. Moreover, the points finally dropped to 5. This case was caused only in team C which had the lowest point in the final season in 2005, compared with the first season in 2002.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Advertisements have become an inescapable part of people’s daily lives. While the positives they have on us are pronounced, I believe the negatives of adverts also should not be overlooked.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the accelerated growth development of the advertising industry has produced generated economies of scale the economic effect of scale that benefits both advertisers distributors and suppliers of products and services. First, it has forged a reliable and sustainable revenue stream that ad companies rely on to expand businesses. As a result of the increasing public recognition and varied distribution formats, the value chain of the industry has become more fragile but organized on the back of more specific occupations that emerged. Second, producers benefit from the high penetration rate of the advertisements by monetizing the public attention to real purchases of their goods and services.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nHowever, I would argue that, from a societal perspective, there are several problems caused by the widespread advertisements waiting to be addressed. First of all, given its fundamental target of helping clients make profits, many ad videos and articles we see on the market are aiming to pursue people a lavish lifestyle, which could cause additional financial pressure on families. On top of this, the propaganda of abundant consumption costs much of the social purse since it conveys an idea of excessive buying that rests on over-production, which leads to a massive waste of resources and energy, in turn, deepens the negative impact on our planet Earth.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though the wide use of advertising tools to present companies’ brands indeed has created huge economic benefits, I am all for that people should start rising awareness of the drawbacks it can bring to societies and individuals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that in today's society, young people have more ability to take control and give influence on the ever-changing world compared to those who were born in the past period. This is due to the mastery of using technology which overtake old people positions in many areas.\nThe young people in this era are able to take more advantages of using technology compared to the old generation, providing opportunities for innovation in an unconventional way and to increase income. For example, in the past, people were more engaged to TV programs and become passive consumers. However, because of the existance of YouTube, many young people can actively and creatively making contents such as cooking, music, or motivational videos and making it as a source of income. A YouTouber who have subscribers over than 30 million people such as Atta Hallilintar, for instance, has approximately more than 50.000 Euro income per month only by inviting people to watch his videos. Furthermore, by becoming a famous YouTuber, the person has a sigfinicant role as an influencer by showing his lifestyle, values, and even political views. He can also create new businesses such as food or clothing business, and it is easy to get into the market as followers will tend to be happily purchase items from their YouTube idol.\nDue to the advancement on technology, many old people have difficulties of following such trend and thus, they are easily left behind. Many of them are still working on their conventional way by not taking benefit of technology. For example, an old man who has a clothing store cannot use social media for marketing his business resulting to only attract local people to buy his items. This issue has limited the old generation to compete with the young people in terms of source of income.\nTo conclude, the young people have more control and ability to influence the global economic progression by replacing the conventional ways from the old generation and resulting them having less important positions in a global competition.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever heard of a driverless car? Google has had driverless cars like this since 2009. These cars have driven more than half a million miles without a single crash. These types of carsstill have to have a human operate them when pulling into drivways, going around accdents, or having to deal with complicated traffic issues.\n\nMy position on driverless cars are, they should not be a thing. There would be more car wrecks than there are now. What if the car ends up turning at the wrong area and does not pick up that there is a car in front of them. The car would end up crashing and could the result could be life threatening. The car could have a bad sensor and just keep driving straight. Then, the car would end up hitting a pedestrian or another object.\n\nThere are positive sides to the driverless cars though. The cars will save individuals more on gas money. The driverless cars use only half of the fuel of today's taxis. They say that the driverless cars are also more flexible than a bus. You also would not have to have your hands on the steering wheel at all times. You can relax and just watch your surroundings. The car will alert you when you need to take control over the car again. You also would not have to buy a car because you could the driverless cars would be a public transportation like taxis.\n\nThere are more negative things about the cars then there are positive. What if the car just shuts down in the middle of the highway? More people are going to hit you and it will affect more people. What if the sensors are very sensitive and will detect a branch in the middle of the road? The car will stop and people will hit your bumper. There are a lot of dangerous and life threatening things about the driverless cars.\n\nThe driverless cars seem very neat but, they also seem very dangerous. Too many things could go wrong, like a sensor could go out and you could hit another vehichle. The car could miss the turn and you could hit a pedestrian or another object. If the sensors are very sensitive, they could detect the smallest thing like a small tree branch and cause your vehichle to stop in the middle of the road. These cars will cause more crashes than the regular human driving cars. They also say that the safest vehichle, is a human driving vehichle. In my opinion the driverless cars are a very bad idea to bring into this world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This passage will be about reasons to join the program. This program is and adventurous opportunity. You would travel all over the world to different countries.\n\nOne reason you should attend this program is because it is a once in a lifetime event. You'd get to visit places all over the world. It would be very interesting and fun.\n\nAccording to the story, you could even help some countries that are poor and in need of food and supplies. Plus you'd get to sail a boat across the Atlantic ocean. While on this journey, you could learn so much different countries. If you are a traveler and a person who loves to learn about different countries, this program would be perfect for you.\n\nThis is why people, and you, shoud attend this program. Its adventurous, learnful, and exciting. This program would be great for travelers and learners. You could learn so much about how countries spend their holidays also. These are all the reasons that people should join this activity. Maybe someday, one of those people will be you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Seagoing Cowboys\n\nKindhearted people please consider joining the UNRRA. (United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration)\n\nThe UNRRA has a group called Seagoing Cowboys. The Seagoing Cowboys go overseas to help people and animals from the wars.\n\nI've thought of some reasons why joining the UNRRA would be good for you and the country. My first reason is, it's a once in a lifetime chance to help your country. How many times do you get to get on a boat and save people and animals in your life? My second reason is, you can become more aware of people of other countries and their needs. By helping others you'll see the pain in other people's lives and become more aware of what they need.\n\nI've thought of some reasons why you wouldn't want to join the Seagoing Cowboys. The first one is, there is the risk of dying if I'm a Sea Cowboy. There are experienced doctors onboard. A while back I cracked my ribs and the doctors onboard patched me up. The second one is, I could get lost. As famous leaders have said \"No man is left behind.\"\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys could use some more help so please come and join them. The Seagoing Cowboys are a hard working bunch and would be quite pleased if they had more hands on deck. Please consider joining the Seagoing Cowboys your help could be the difference fom success to failure.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Everyone and even myself thought this thing was some kind of face created by the aliens. But all this is a land form on Mars called a butte or a mesa. Because it is not a face or an alien object it is just land formation on Mars.\n\nFirst we all thought it was a face made by aliens from a monument. But \"there was no alien monument after all after upgrading our cameras to get a better view of this so called \"Face of Mars\". Then after twenty-five years of looking at this thing for many years people thought through those twenty-five years that it was a sign of life of mars. On April 8, 2001 we got to the spot to were the face is and every pixel of that picture took that day proved that it was no face but a lava dome that is common around the West of America. A few people at NASA said that it reminds them of the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nAll those years of hoping and trying to believe that there is life on Mars all just stoped after we all found out it was just a big land formation. Twenty-five years of making a camera better in every way imaginable just to take a sky view picture of a rock!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars can be unsafe to many people, but there are people who support the idea 100%.\n\nSeregy Brin states,\" he envisions a future with a public transportaion system where fleets of driverless cars from a public-transport taxi systtem. The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus\". Since the car will be driving around with no human driver and offer a wider range of transportaion, then, that could lead to many harmful occurances. There have been many things that were technology based that were not the safest thing to have. A stove magically catching on fire is one example but another example could be a plane crash due to malfunctions and not because it was shot down by another country. If the car has to tel the driver that he or she needs to take over then the car is not needed.\" They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues\". There are so many downfalls to having driverless cars that there does not need to be any type of driverless cars on the street.\n\nIf there were to be driverless cars in the near future then no one would have to drive anymore , but some people may not have the money nor the right resources to go and buy a car that drives itself. Many people would be terrified by the idea of a driverless car because the idea has not been around for hundreds of years. Some ideas are not worth sharing with the rest of the world. To have a hightech car such as the driverless car means, it would have to be as smart as a human driver to uphold those type of responsibilities. if Google can create a smart technological car that can drive a car the way a human coould then there could be some exceptions made.\n\nMany people agree with the making of the car because ti will relieve alot of things and no ne will have to worry about driving 15 hours to another state becasue, the new and improved car will do all of that on its own. The traumatic thing about that is, there can be glitches and the car can freeze. The car could glitch, or, freeze in the middle of the road and create a terirble accident that could lead to death. ther are too many negative outcomes towards the car , that, changing the world that much right now, or, even in the near future is too much to try, and handle. There are too many other things going on in the world then to worry about making a car that does not need a human driver to operate it. Even if the car is made correctly , many people will not have money to pay for it. Other than safety there are other things to worry about such as exspenses. then after exspenses ,how much mooney wil be going into having enough supply, product, and inventory for many people to have the car. Then, they would have to worry about how much fuel the car would need, or how much elecricity the car would need in order to be operated. People try to come up with differnt ways to make so much money, they try to make it seem like they are right in what they are doing but in all reality some things can be a joke. The driverless car tempts death. the car does not sound too convincing for many people to pay for it .\n\nAlthough, in many peoples mind, the idea of a driverless car seems to be more efficient, does not mean it is more safe. The driverless car can change the world really quickly and it can change the world into being alot worst than what it is. The next invention might be robots for every household, and that can lead to many downfalls. The driverless car is inspiring many other ideas that are not safe . What can be depicted from the passage is, that, transportaion isses will be handled more efficiently. Anyone who is in their right mind would not buy such a product. Risking many epoples lives just so that an \"interesting' product is out on the streets is not an idea that needs to be supported at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "How would you like your camero to drive you around all the time. You can have a car like this and let me tell you: driverless cars are a good idea. This is proven by several high points in this article. Driverless cars currently have set backs also pointed out in this article.\n\nRigth now people are working too bring a new mode of tranportation into play, the driverless car. These machines have the ability to cut gass price too half. They can go on while a driver rest. These machines can make deliverys without a driver, which would help the economy.\n\nOnly one problem, they not ready. Currently the car can only do so much without needing assisance. It cannot navigate complicated traffic and, it cannot drive around roadwork.\n\nYet this is not to be worried about . As technology advances we make more improvements to the system. Soon driveless car will be able to handle all problems thrown its way. Untill then keep your eyes on the road we are still waiting.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is perceived that the effective way to remedy issues relating to the environment is to increase the pump price of gas for vehicles generally. Although some people believe that this move would resolve the environmental crisis, however, I vehemently disagree with that statement. This essay will elaborate that petroleum products such as fuel is not the major cause of climate disasters and increasing the cost price will not yield their intended purpose.\r\n\r\nTo start with, research has shown that harvesting trees without replacing them, mining and poor waste management are the major causes of environmental problems. Besides, if we fail to address \r\n\r\nthe aforementioned causes and concentrate on fuel alone, I am afraid that the situation will be worse in the future. For instance, the government should legislate a law that prohibits the cutting of trees, wrongful disposal of waste and regulate mining companies. Despite the fact that increasing the prices of gas would to some extent aid in protecting the environment, nonetheless, it will not have tremendous a benefit as one may think. \r\n\r\nMoreover, even though an uptrend in the prices of gas to some extent will curb about 10% of environmental problems, that in itself is not sufficient, as it will cause hardship on the people as most of them will resort to other activities such as coal mining which will be detrimental to the environment. To exemplify, in 2021, the authorities in Sierra Leone increased the cost of fuel from 10,000 Leones to 20,000 Leones per litre in order to discourage vehicle owners from using their cars. Sadly, the transport fare for public transport shot up and the prices of groceries and other goods became a big challenge for its citizens. In addition, curbing fuel in isolation will not be beneficial to the climate. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though some people believe that increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles in my estimation, I totally disagree with that position.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Would it be a good idea to use technology such as computers to read students emothinal expressions. Some people would argue that it is not a good idea beacuse what if some students dont want the computer to tell waht ther felling, they would think it was a little weird. I think that it would be a good idea here is why.\n\nI think it would be a good I dead for computers to read students emotional expressions. I think this because say if somebody is falling be hind in class and the computer can tell. The computer could change the chapter or less he or she is confused with so they could understand it better. The student would no longer be confused and could catch up.\n\nSome people would say that what if the computer thinks the kid doesn't under stand the material that he or she is learning. The computer would change the lesson up a little bit so they could understand it better, but in the long run doesn't. In that case the computer would make it harder for that paiticular student to learn the material given to them.\n\nSome stundents would like it because it would help them ina way that makes them understand the lesson or chapter better witch also would help there grade. If I had the chance to use this technology I would.\n\nSometimes I am a little lost or cunfused and if you dont get that lesson you could fall farther and aferther in the hole. and never catch up. Whith this technology u would nerver fall behind.\n\nWith all the infomation we have the technology could ether help out a student or make them fall behind. The information we have concluds that we would still be etter of we the technology. So not so many people are falling behind and getting confused. You would be able to keep up with your class and not get losed. This is what I think about having this technology to read students emotional expressions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am a scientist\n\nwith NASA discussing The Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens but it really is just a natural landform in space. As it says in the artical it states that the scientist figured that it was just another Martian mesa and only this one had a unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nAfter a few days of studing the unusal object NASA unveiled the image for everyone to see and the caption noted in the article a \"huge rock formation. . . resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Ever since the authors thought it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars The Face has became a pop icon. The Face on Mars was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98.\n\nApril 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look and they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view.\n\nThey finally figured out that actually what the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa which is landforms common around the American West. So there are some facts about how The Face is actually just a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technology has slowly been evolving and adapting to our needs as humans. These advancements improve our way of life and make things easier to do. Technology can help drive a car, state the weather, and give reminders of\n\nimportant dates and events. It can even help a teacher in a classroom. This technology is an advantage, and one that must be used completely.\n\nIn today's world, school is not the most exciting or easiest thing in the world. Students are always complaining of how they do not understand what the teacher is teaching. What is the solution? Schools can use the software \"Facial Action Coding System\" to make their classes easier and better to teach. This program would \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" and could then \"modify the lesson\". This would benifit the teacher extremely and help them teach class in a more efficient way.\n\nThis Software could also help prevent tragedies from occurring. For example, a child could have many problems at their house, which in turn could lead to them feeling unwanted and alone. Feeling unwanted or alone could lead to the kid doing something that they will regret for the rest of their lives. The software at school could read the facial emotion and send a message to the teacher. This allows the teacher to assure the student that everything is ok, that it will get better, and that they are loved and will always be cared for.\n\nTechnology is very valuable in school districts. It is helping shape the minds of the future people who may have an important role in the world. Without technology, many minds could be going to waste and not being used to its full potential. That is why it is important that we use technology to the max and develop the minds of the kids completley. This allows for a better comunity and city.\n\nTechnology is very important and valuable, and something that should be used to its full potential in a class setting. It allows for teachers to teach more efficiently and in a more interesting way. It could also stop tragedies from occuring and affecting the kids family and friends. It is shaping the future of the city, and the lives of many people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author one happiness love caring Not show style author also gives details really create vibe In paragraph author describes food rich culinary skills love cooking music passionate Cuban music mixing aromas kitchen This creates homely affect scene along paragraph many family members came meals The author describes explains possible despite nation s racism parents worked hard get faith children would better life With details author creates loving cultural affect found great family friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One problem strengthen rest building order put mast top This process would costly author says sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Another problem attempt allowing dirigibles dock winds top building The air currents violent high Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast therefore would safe people streets city Finally laws city interfered plan mooring mast The law said illegal airship fly low urban areas If dirigible able dock mooring mast would breaking law The builders Empire State Building faced many problems plan never actually followedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir kind loving It showed kindness paragraph memoir described parents made whole house feel sweet nice He using words like innocence celebrations warm home create feel kindness Love shown author told way parents welcomed anyone every race live got back feet This shows love welcomed matter problem deminstrates love everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast author describes many obstacles builders faceded allow dirigibles dock The first problemb modifications made buildings framework Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made showing expensive product going A second potential problemb The winds top building constantly shifting This could cause many different complications One would wind would blow dirigible onto sharp spires consiquence feared piolet Los Angeles Another problemb brought winds shifting would ship spinnig potentialy resulting catastrophe They acomidated use unpractical things eventualy leading downfall mooring mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.\n\nHow far do you agree with either of these views\n\nSeveral representatives of contemporary society deem that children should embark to go to schools at the age of four whereas others argue with this position and allege that juveniles are ready to be school students at seven or eight years old. From my perspective, it cannot be denied that these positions are composed of a fraction of the truth. Therefore, I am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such an issue and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my own opinion.\n\nTo sum up, I woulds stress that having made these points, it is true that such a trouble incurs criticism. Nonetheless, only parents must decide upon for themselves, in which age they prefer send their offspring to school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The existence of robots in human life has generated diverse opinions in society. Some people believe that robots are crucial for humanity, while others argue they are dangerous. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my view regarding the roles of robots in shaping humans' future.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, technological development is an inevitable aspect of human progress, particularly for medical purposes. Nowadays, several medics use robots to assist in medical surgery. For instance, complex surgical procedures now employ robotic systems that offer 3D visualisation and precise tool control. This technology can reduce the risk of errors in medical surgery.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the rapid advancement of robotics technology raises concerns about its potential negative consequences for society. One of the concerns is its impact on employment as robots are increasingly capable of replacing human workers. For example, the emergence of artificial intelligence with a language-processing system has raised questions about the viability of human jobs like content writing and publishing. Media companies now can utilise robots for content writing in a short time which suits their target of content production. While industries may benefit from cost savings by employing robots, this development is a significant threat for people's job security.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the presence of robots in our society has created more innovation in appliance science like medical surgery which can prevent the potential errors in medical treatments. While concerns about job displacement are valid, it is essential for society to adapt and gain potential benefits of robotics. By adapting these technologies responsibly, I believe humans can create a better future where humans can take benefits from robots and increase overall human’s life qualities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author fully supports the idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit because of new technology and innovation.\n\nThere are many things to consider though.\n\nThe simularities between the two planets, the dangers of Venus, and why scientists are so amazed by Venus.\n\nThis means that pursuing Venus is a challenge.\n\nThe simularities between Venus and Earth are the size.\n\nIn paragraph 2 the text states that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in size and density, also the closest planet in distance too.\n\nWe are closer to Mars and other times Venus.\n\nBecause of the different speeds.\n\nThis means that Venus is close so it won't be a long trip.\n\nThe dangers of Venus that are harmful to humans.\n\nIn paragraph 3 the text states \"Venus has a thick atmosphere made up of 95% of carbon dioxide.\n\nThe clouds contain corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere.\"\n\nThe average temperature is over 800 degrees Farhenheit.\n\nThe average temperature is 90 times greater than Earth.\n\nThese conditions are beyond what we experience on Earth.\n\nThis means that Venus is uninhabitable compared to Earth.\n\nReasons why scientists are impressed by Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 4 and 5 the text states \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it was the most Earth like planet.\"\n\nLong ago Venus was filled with oceans, mountains, and creatures.\n\nThis means that scientists have things to consider before going to Venus and things to understand before going again.\n\nThis concludes that pursuing Venus is a challenge for everyone who wants to know more about it because of its dangers conditions, the scientist's fascinations about what life is like to be on Venus, and the simularities to Venus and Earth.\n\nThis means that we have a long way to go before we really see how it is on Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Robots, one of the modern technologies that has been the topic of discussion by many people lately. One of the topics for the discussion is the impact robots will have on society. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons as well as my point of view.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, robots have several benefits. As an example, robots can help human work and could reduce the productions expense. As a result, it can increase the job effectiveness and help massive productions.\r\n\r\nMany others, however, are opposed and believed that robots are dangerous and have negative effects on society. For example, if the amount of company who used robots as substitute to human work are massive, it can increase the number of unemployed people. As a result, it can increase the chance of another casualties, such as criminality because of the large number of unemployed people.\r\n\r\nNot only that, before using robot as an option to help someone work, they should take a consideration whether their work suitable for using robots or not, because not all work is suitable using robots. As an example, for several arts industry that need detailed work.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the benefits of robots, particularly the effectiveness and saves production expenses, robots can be a tool to help people do their work. However, there are some negative impacts too, such as the increased number of criminality cases and not too detailed work. Nevertheless, in my opinion, as long as we use it wisely, we could prevent and lessen the negative impact of using robots.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The prevalence of environmental issues has been a growing concern in the past few years. Many people believe that the cost of fuel for vehicles should be increased to tackle this problem. While I consider that this might be an alternative solution, I would argue that there are still some measures should be contributed greater impact. If the national authorities raise the taxes on petrol, this will address two environmental issues. Firstly, in terms of the private cars and vehicles, this policy reduces the limitation of the number cars in the roads by motorists. This leads to the decline of gas emissions into the atmosphere. Secondly, from the perspective of the government, by providing this policy creates an increase in the number of people that use public transportations. This leads to the government would be forced to upgrade and expand the infrastructure transportations which use the friendly petrol for the environment. On the other hand, while this rise in fuel prices might be a useful stopgap measure, authorities could adopt other policies which would be more effective in the long term. From the perspective of the industrial field, state authorities could promote incentive taxes to the companies which use green power in their productions. By establishing the incentive, strategy contributes more firms changing their visions on green-house effect into the environment. Another policy would be to introduce free bus and train passes help in the effort to combat global warming. In conclusion, even though the increasing price on fuel for vehicles can contribute to reducing the environmental problems, I would argue that more measures have been mentioned above which can be more effective to tackle this issue.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate mooring mast rather building utilitarian mast without ornamentation architect designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside steppedback design imitated overall shape buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hi im Luke and I joined the Seagong Cowboy program before. Its really fun we get to go on trips and really have fun. You can go on how many trips you can, but\n\nI went on 9 trips in the Seagong Cowboy pogram. Baseally all you do is help people and go on trips. You help people by helping with there animals,unloaded the animals.\n\nThey also have some fun time too. I found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. We cowboys played baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped pass the time. Like i said its really fun.\n\nThe Seagong Cowboy program it open up the world to me, Im really grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs,and that awreness stayed with me leading my family to host a number of international students and exchange vistors for many years. It can do the same to you if you just try.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The driverless cars seem to be a big topic right now. They are yet another example of how our world is changing. 150 years ago we didn't even have cars, and now we have cars that almost drive themselves. This is a giant leap for us. It astonishes me to think that not that long ago people had to walk or ride a horse to get somewhere. This seems like the best invention ever, right? Like any new invention though, the driverless cars have their pros and cons.\n\nDriverless cars could change the world. There's so much having driverless cars could do for us. It would allow for a lot safer driving conditions. A majority of accidents are said to happen because of distractions, These distractions include things going on in the car, outside the car, and inside your head. Emotions tend to have a huge influence on how we drive. With driverless cars you eliminate a lot of the multitasking that goes along with attempting to drive and deal with these distractions. With driverless cars you would only have to grab the wheel and take over in complicated situations the car can't handle. The car would do most of the driving for you, which lessons the likely hood of you having an accident because of the distractions. Having driverless cars would give just about anyone the ability to drive. Driverless cars would allow for a lot easier way for transportation. You just hop in the car, program the gps, and hang on for the ride.\n\nWith all these pros to having driverless cars people might not notice the cons of these cars. The driverless cars will eliminate a lot of accidents that occur everyday, but it could also give rise to a whole new set of issues.\n\nAccording to the article, \"safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" The article also tells us, \"traffic laws were written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" So when an accident occurs, who takes the blame? Is it the manufacturer who programmed the car? Or is it the driver who let the accident happen?\n\nAfter considering the pros and cons of this car it's easy for me to see that this car is a terrific idea. Yes, we are looking at a lot of issues with seeing who's at fault in the result of an accident. However, if we could work it out and develop some guidelines for who's at fault during an accident we'd be looking at one of the world's greatest inventions.\n\nIn conclusion, I stand behind the driverless cars. I believe that the pros out weigh the cons in this situation. If we just figure out a system for deciding who's at fault in an accident, then we have a something could change the world of transportation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I nt think nothing taking shelves libraries s educational child certain way stay Children learn alot books libraries If need help answers certain things always find looking library answers You get everything internet stuff look opening book As I growing I able get I needed done school library It s many things libraries s educational know looking For adults hard time looking needed library mean child Sometimes children better time understanding age Parents please nt take away good things libraries could really help child times If helpful would never put library start There things would better finding book everthing enternet So many sciencest found information book easier You learn many good things libraries The books things library help much research Taking materials library I would disagreeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The founding fathers established the Electoral College in order to compromise between elections of the President and vice president. This process has help us to elect great presidents in which changed and make our Americas history. The Electoral College is a great process in which we should keep doing it. I favor in keeping the Electoral College because it is a faster and reliable way of electing the president. For instinct, \" The Electoral College process consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President.\"(Source 1) All the 538 electors that is part of the Electoral College represents millions of people. In order to count all the vote takes a long time so, the Electoral College is a faster way of electing the president.\n\nThe Electoral College has a certainty of outcome for who is going to be the president and vice preisdent. But, the electoral college has an invariably exceeds their share of the popular vote. What that means is that, if the popular votes get 55% of your votes but, the electoral college get 62% of your votes. The votes from the popular votes and the electoral votes have different percentage. For this problem you cant really predict what the Electoral College will elect.\n\nThe electoral college in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign. Because of these states like Texas, Florida, California, New York, and other states that have large amounts of Electoral College; they are more likely to vote knowing that their votes are more important because of the winner-take-all method. \"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution.\"(Source3) This explains that the electoral college is a process that is relivent in keeping some power to the people.\n\nThe bad the thing about the electoral college is that the people dont vote for the president , but they vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. This process is not always fair because if you live in florida and you wanted to elect James but slate of 29 Democratic electors pledge to Don, so that means none Replubican electors pledge to James. This means your vote dont really effect the election. This problem is argued and complained with many people. The problem of a tie could happen too but the probility of that happening is not likely.\n\nOverall, the electoral college is process that is fair in most terms. It is a fast and reliable way in which I personially insist and favor of keep doing because the electoral college has help people to reconized the importants of people views and making people reconized how important it is to vote for their government.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders empire state building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The first obstacle builders faced building would need modified The architects charge adding mooring mast realized add mast asis start mooring dirigibles would much stress put empire state buildings frame For reason first make worth changes building order sufficiently strengthen s frame paragraph The second obstacle builders faced trying make possible dirigibles mast empire state building general safety After hindenburg disaster took place became clear architect charge project truly catastrophic accident like would occurred highly populated place paragraph It nt possibility catastrophic disaster added worry safety though Considering constant violent wind gusts happen height mast architects realized dirigible moored would constantly swinging rapidly around mast The way problem solved mooring dirigibles ground hanging weights s back yet would present yet another safety issue weight fall people could easily kill somebody paragraph The final obstacle architects faced law outlawing dirigible flying low near urban areas first place In end fact many obstacles prevented idea mooring dirigibles ever becoming realitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper I understand computers becoming must peoples everyday life I believe great thing If re computer type helps improve peoples handeye coordination Also learn people places cultures much Lastly communicate online friends even meet new people To begin I think computers good idea helps people improve handeye coordination My cousin big time baseball player used trouble catching younger He kept trying never gave Then birthday parents bought computer He excited came typing papers nt best Not practice baseball also typing His family realized buying computer best ideas It improved baseball career throwing catching ball increased grades school However one gained hand eye coordination computers A recent study yale college shows people use computer atleast month gains sort hand eye coordination teacher computer class high school states CAPS freshman I get class tells computers made sports careers easier better hand eye coordination Computers two things one learn type help hand eye coordination Do want lacking positive ability life In addition computers help learn people places cultures I heard couple nights ago earthquake I also learned powerplant explosion How I know ask The front page But m one gained knowledge internet many took poll many use computer research answered Does society really want take away knowledge whats going around us history In conclusion people communicate friends relatives This great nt seen recently want stay touch For example mycousin found facebook I nt seen eight years abut I talk time We talk visiting family s But also talk friends Studies show ages eleven eighteen talk friends facebook daily basis Dr teen psychiatrist says I think great idea communicate computer It gives chance interact different way good lifestyle want feel guilty ruining Finally people perfect opportunities right front Computers help improve hand eye coordination helps learn It also lets people interact others different way Do think golden ideas bad societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders state building faced many problems attempting allow dirigables dock Their first problem would add lots stress building This means dirigible tied building wind would put weigh building pull around Nature greatest obstacle unsafe something like hanging crowded streets New York In atemp make building stronger builders spend sixty thousand dollars improvement skeleton frame There also laws place allow large aircraft fly low crowded city This tells us even build mast would illegal dirigibles land There many problems landing dirigible empire state building never happenedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technology in recent years has gone through many incredible advancements .In the past few years it has been making things that seemed impossible a reality. Things such as self driving automobiles. These wonders of technological beauty have the abilty to control and operate themselves without a driver. This is a truly marvelous feat that shows how far we as a society have come however this driverless cars should be seen as a mere fun idea. Driverless cars should not be used in our society as the will cause far to many proplems just so we can be lazy behind the wheel.\n\nMaking a driverless car is no simple feat it requires numours things to operate effectivly. One item that these cars require are senors and lots of them. Senors are used so that way the car can tell what is going on in\n\ntraffic. However what happens if one of these systems fail at one point on the road. That right a tragic accident will occur that could lead to the loss of lifes for no reason just because a stupid glitch occured.The senors may be tested to make sure they dont malfuntion, but so is everything in this era and yet gliches and mistakes still happen in all of our everyday technology.Our phones which are simple compared to a driverless car still have proplems all the time, and they have been tested and improved upon for far longer.\n\nThese driverless cars arent even truly driverless. Humans are still required to be behind the wheel to handle certain situations such as construction or road blocks.So whats the point of having one of these cars if at any point you can be thrust onto the wheel unprepared for what might be on the road at that given point.This fact truly ruins the convience of owning one of these cars as they fail to do their key function which is to operate on their own. These cars are also still only considered safe at 25mph which drastically reduces their overall usefullness to the consumer if they need to go anywhere at a reasonable pace.\n\nDriverless cars also are not practical in todays time. Imagne how many new types of tech stores would have to be opened to keep the senors on these cars running properley. How many times a year would someone have to get these senors checked? More importantly how much would it cost to fix one of these cars? The awswer is that we dont no as these cars are untried and untested. These Cars also couldnt fit into our soceity where barley anybody will have the money to afford to keep one of these new cars.\n\nSimply put driverless cars are intesting and facinating to watch. They are true marvels of the 21st century and show how far as a civilazation we have come. Thes smart cars truly are driving us into a new age of wonder and increbile ideas however the day when these cars are used in everyday life still lies far over the horizon.Driverless cars should not be implecated into our society because they are to impractical, expensive, and dangerous.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, climate change is the main global problem and it is widely believed that people try to adapt to climate change and its consequences instead of avoiding it. However, I disagree with this statement due to the reasons below\n\nTo begin with, climate change can cause other types of global problems. Because of climate change, the average temperature of the earth has been rising over the years and this is leading to problems such as droughts and forest fires. Also, it makes ice in the Arctic and Antarctic melt which increases the sea level and causes floods. In fact, compared to the former century, droughts have doubled in Central Asia in the 21st century. \n\nFurthermore, climate change is also one of the reasons for health problems from which people are suffering. Climate change can probably affect individuals' physical conditions badly and they may be more likely to have illnesses. For instance, blood pressure, which is the main factor of many diseases, may probably be coming out of the effects of climate change. \n\nTo conclude, climate change is considered to be the main cause of global problems and some people believe climate change is adaptable. However, I totally disagree with this opinion because the consequences of climate change are enormous.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is urged by some people that companies should have responsibilities for society as with making profits. Although organizations need to get good finance, I believe that companies should consider having a good moral obligation to society. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is clear that the main target of each company in the business area is making money. In other words, organizations can be run for a long time by getting inherently adequate incomes and it makes more local people get job opportunities. For example, if there is a big industry in some regions, the people in this region do not need to migrate to other cities in order to get a job and they can able to get a job in their local factory. Therefore, companies or factory must need to get higher profits to extend the companies for reducing jobless rates and to pay extra incentives to employees. \r\n\r\nHowever, having a great obligation to society plays a vital role in the business area for getting both companies ‘reputation and a better environment in our civilization. Most industries should consider how to protect the environment from getting the effects of production and industrial waste that come out from their factories. For instance, as for paper industries, most raw materials come from trees and this can be harmful to the earth we liveon . Therefore, authorities in factories take into consideration recycling or upcycling to protect the environment. Moreover, enterprises are able to keep a high profile and improve the reputation of organizations’ names or brands by setting up a charity and donating money to the public who are really in need such as the homeless, orphans and nursing homes. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, nevertheless getting a significant amount of money in enterprises is paramount to running a business for a long time, it is also important to have social accountabilities to achieve success in enterprises.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives magnificent mood A family move United States Cuba could better education They nice home nice friends good caring family The neighbor landlord friend Alegria makes dinner times Also friends go dinner often bring food They familyfriends Spanish Cuban Italian people They always door open friend family friend would go every night They would let people stay house needed help rest The mood magnificent storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Censorship one many important issues facing world today Many argue materials considered offensive damaging society tolerated Others believe freedom speech universal right extend forms human expression The issue complicated concept appropriate children Are materials acceptable adults kids Questions plagued humanity hundreds years simple solution Today many people think censorship bad word In fact nothin inherently wrong concept censorship It people begin abuse power censor materials censored problems arise For example many countries restrictions selling owning copies PERSON book wrote sort mission statement While many ideas contained within book horribly offensive still censored People right read book form opinions teachings government s place decide While oppressive dictatorship massmurder crimes reading There materials available rightfully censored taken adult hands If someone understands reading able form educated opinion material nobody right stop expanding knowledge expressing themself creating similar material However issue changes completely one considers children If adults want view pornography read accounts extreme violence business However concepts obviously inappropriate children decent parent would nt want young kids filling heads things Children need slowly gently introduced concepts fully understand In case children careful censorship necessary healthy development When comes libraries materials banned If libraries meant places learning one right limit information contain However mean limitations Libraries offer children s section many would contain materials appropriate youngsters Then becomes parents responsibilty ensure child stays section When parent believes child ready explore adult section free take kid This system gives parents ability keep children away harmful material without taking hands adults Many would argue unsupervised children could gain access inappropriate material really issue needs handled parents library After s better kids see something nt adults read censored material In conclusion censorship concept place society must used carefully When goal protect people especially children harmful material used sparingly However power use censorship attack ideas disagree becomes form oppression Above else people must free educate form opinions express If someone nt like piece material leave alone never try take someone else s handsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus often reffered to as the Earth's twin is a close panet like Earth. It has about the same density and and size of Earth too. So Venus should be a worthy pursuit to explore.\n\nIf anything ever happens to Earth the closest planets to explore and possibly populate are Mars and Venus. But there are some dangers to exploring these planets. For example on Venus a single rover has only lasted a couple of hours on the planet. So we dont know much about the planet. But that does not mean we cant explore and gain new information about the planet that mey help us out in the future. But the reason scientist and astronomers are looking more into the planet is because in paragraph 4. It states that Venus was probally a planet like Earth that had oceans and could have supported life. Another plus to explore Venus is the chance to figure out what happened to the planet. In the articel it says it used to be just like Earth in a way. So our natural assumption is to asume that our planet will end up just like Venus. But if we take some time and continue exploring the planet we might find some new information and could possiblly save all of humanity in the future.\n\nIn conclusion the option to explore Venus still remains untuched but the positives and possibilities that could come out of this exploration are vast compared to the dangers it represents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The last paragraph Winter Hibiscus add author want show feels bad pass test She feels disapointed mom disapointed knows pass While stares Hibiscus geese flying air thinks chance passing test Now determined take test going take time next year believes going passSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion, i do like the idea of the Facial Action Coding System and then i dont. Here are my reasons why i do.\n\nThe reason i do like it is because its a cool experiment. It reads emotions off of pictures. I could just put any picture of there and it would tell me how hes feeling. Like is he sad, mad , amazed? This experement is really cool. Like is said in paragraph 3 \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" They said that because when your reading an Ad and you smile, it will read all that.\n\nBut there is one reason why i dont like it. They said in the passage in paragragh 6 \" if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar add might follow. But if you frown the next ad will be different.\" This is pretty much saying someone is watching you through the little camera in the computer. They would be watching you if you are going to smile or frown to change your mind and if the kids found out about that, I think they would be scared and not want to try the program.\n\nMy final decision of this program is that its a good idea and that they should keep it. I think its cool that is knows when your smiling or frowning.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This is not created by aliens, it was created by landforms and only landforms because aliens are not smart. What would they do with a face, just make a rock out of it? Scientists agree that is was created by natural landforms.\n\nThe only way it could have been created is by natural landform that happen way longer than when they dicovered the face. In paragraph 7 it says \"Revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien minument after all\". That states that there was no aliens involved with the face. What would aliens use to make the face in the rocks?\n\nScientists say that in paragraph 12 \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-- landforms common around the American West\". So this means that it doesn't really have any evidence that aliens made it. This just means that it very well could be just natural landform creating things.\n\nBut, some people may think like the people in paragraph 8. \" The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze\". So right now it shows that there could be a possibility that aliens could have made the Face. This one piece of evidence could be the evidence they are looking for.\n\nIn conclusion, no one knows what made this interesting Face on Mars. But we do have a lot of information about what could have made it if it wasnt aliens. When we don't have a lot of information here, we can not really think what this Face was made by. All in all we think this Face was made by simple natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I agree with the passage and encourage that students have their visual expressions checked for their individual emotions. As long as they get consent from them to use such technology on them.\n\nI agree for several examples. One example(although not stated directly in the passage) A counsiler could for example use it on a student if they showed signs of depression or high sadness and properly diagnose it, helping them that they couldn get previously if they kept a fake smile on. Next is because it would help teachers with information on their students is they enjoy their material and what they could do to help improve the material used. Lastly it was stated that it can improve things for video surgerys and video games, showing the expressiveness of human emotion so the game or surgery would be more realistic and relatable.\n\nIn conclusion, that is why I agree that this facial/emotional technology would be useful in peoples lives, with things such as diagnosing mental illnesses like depression. Public education improving to adapt more to student preformace and behavior. And lastly that things such as video games and video surgeries could get better facial expression for humans to make the games or informational surgeries more useful to the creators.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Fellow citizens it is important that we talk about the advantages of limiting car usage. In the first story it says \" there have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking ...\" it also says that \" passenger cars are respondible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" David Goldberg said, an official of Transportation for America, a fast-growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the U.S....who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars, \" all of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change\".\n\nIn the story \"\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\"\n\ntalks about how after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. It says that on Mondays motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day, I think that this should happen all around the world, so the world can be a better palce to live in. Here is a fact form the stroy, \" Paris typically has more smog then other European capitals . . . [Last] week Paris had a 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London\". The 3rd stroy was about how in Bogota, Comlombia they do a car-free day, now that should be done here in the U.S.. It says that millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during car-free day, that the streets of the captial city eerily devoid of traffic jams, and that the rain has not stopped people from participating.\n\nThe last stroy talks about how the car culture is coming to an end, but i really hope not and i think not. It is here ,in the U.S., the birthpalce of the Model T, a classic car that i love and i would hope so that a lot of more people do too; the home of Detroit, what i know is that they make cars up there; tha place where Wilson Pickett immortalized \"Mustang Sally\", I do not know what that is but it does sound important. It also says that \" driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009...\" I mean the highest it went was 2009, we are in 2014, almost 2015, im a young person and i love to drive i think and feel like i can go as fast as light. What all four storys are saying is that cars will be gone sooner or later, i hope later, but the cars is what we need to go places. The car will enither be gone or be impovred some how, the fliying car maybe, but in till that happens, because i live in now, the car is what we have, i know that it's bad for the air, so instead of not using the car we can make it better, better for the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "An array of people believe that retired people shall be supported by government and not left to their own meager resources. While other think that they should take care of themselves. Meanwhile, in forthcoming paragraph both view and opinion will be ellaborated. \n\nThe foremost reason many support government backed retirement plan is the dire condition of senior citizen. There are numerous reason deserving the attention. Some elder people are without shelter and staying on foothpath, some may be war veterants and having trouble in finding jobs due to their physical and psychological inpairments,other still may be victims of economic downturns. Without support they must get mercy of socities and wind up in soup kitchens and seeking for chronic charity or even begging. Simply put, authority is their last refuge and favorable position to lend a helping hand. \n\nDespite the rare instances mentioned above, nationis ought to encourage ownership of one's future. If all citizen knew that administration would provide them better superannuation fund for them , they would have little incentive to work hard, save money, and put wise investments. Regulation compact with gigantic sample size and, granted this would not happen with responsible adults, but still it posses a sizeable national risk. An analouges example , how parents raise their kid , and provide them early on, much like authority offers free schooling , but then children are expected to take responsibilty on their own. Parents who coddle their babies too much end up spoiling them like that only national retirement plan would deprive individual of the opportunity to become self reliant. \n\nRegarding opinion, advantage of self assured , mature citizenry outweigh the odd unavoidable case of desperation. There should be a degree of balance to allow for these exceptions while still nurturing more life affirming.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Good day state senator in this letter I would like to talk to you about changing the Electoral College to a popular vote. Even though the Electoral College is a good way of selecting a president. This meathot has his flaws, under the electoral college system the people that vote are not voating for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. And I think that the people that vote shude vote directly for the candidate they have chousen.\n\nThis makes more sense that voting for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledge to the candidate.\n\nI think at the most basic level the electoral college is unfair to voters. Since the voter are not voting directly for their candidate of choise, I personaly dont think this is the best way to go. The popula elections provide a better way of voting for president. Since it means that the people that vote a voating directly to the candidarte and not the electors. The popular elections is a safer an more fair way to vote. By thid we could evate the disaster factor, for example the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century and the system allows for much worse.\n\nBy this I want to thak you for taking the time to read this letter since I imagin you mus be veary buisy. Thank you for yout tine directly...\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "According to the articles,\n\n'In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars'\n\n,\n\n'Paris bans driving dye to smog'\n\n, and\n\n'Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota'\n\n, there are many advantages that can come with the limiting of car usage.\n\nElisabeth Rosenthal mentions many of these in her article about Vauban, Germany. One woman she quoted in the third paragraph, Heidrun Walter, says \"\n\nWhen I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\n\n\" Not everyone may feel less tense after getting rid of their car, but it would definitely be a great thing. Another advatage that came with less car usage in Vauban that Rosenthal mentions in her article, is that stores started getting built about a walk away instead of in malls miles away. This is obviously an amazing point because everyone still has needs they must buy or tend to and it's much better if the places they buy the things they need are in walking distance because no one would need to use distance as an excuse to use their car.\n\nIn the fifth paragraph of Duffer's article, he makes sure to mention that car traffic was down 60% in Paris after they decided to enforce a partial ban on driving to also clear the air. If we limit car usage, their would be way less traffic, which means less time sitting in our cars aggravated about the fact that we're stuck and need to get to school or work soon or else we'll be late.\n\nIn the third article, which is written by Andrew Selsky he reports that in Bogota on their \"\n\ncar-free day\n\n\" there was little to no traffic, and the annual event has reduced smog. In the fifth paragraph, he quoted a businessman named Carlos Arturo Plaza. Carlos says that the event is \"\n\na good oppurtinity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\n\n\" The day without cars inspires you to find alternative transportation methods, which can be as simple as walking or even riding a bike which are both really healthy and great ways to get your excersise in! Selsky also notes that the day without cars has sparked the construction of more bicycle paths, bigger, nicer sidewalks and more parks and sports centers have popped up around the city. Clearly in Bogota they are taking advantage of keeping their air healthy by trying to inspire their residents to be and stay healthy as well.\n\nLimiting car usage is not just a great way to reduce pollution and keep the planet we call home healthy, but a great way to keep us healthy, both physically and emotionally. Those are just about the best advantages that can come with anything.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Lukes's point of view is that he joined the program because he wanted to be helpful to help the people with the horses and that the town was going down because of the war so people all over the country was helping them and they ended up haveing a group calling it the UNRRA.\n\nAccording to the passage it says the UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses,young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas Luke and don signed up.\n\nI fell my argument is right because he fells that you should join the UNRRA to help people with animals and be helpful. You also get to travle to places and see alot of exciting things on the boat and he know alot of things because he use to work on his aunts farm when he was a lillte boy. Luke was not just a seagoing cowboy he was more than that because being a seagoing cowboy opened his whole world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The idea of being able to understand someone's emotions everyday is an extrodinary and very difficult task. Everyday people constantly hide their emotions where others blatanly show them whether it be at school or at home. The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) can solve this problem and I agree that it could potentially help read students emotions, but I also disagree with what it has to offer. The program is a very interesting concept that could help students who are confused at school and draw out hidden emotions, but it could also become a privacy issue and innaccurate.\n\nThe FACS is created to be used as a tool for students that could be installed into the computers used in schools. One major pro for this program would be how effective it could be in the classroom. The system could detect when a person is confused during a lesson or lecture. Dr. Huang states that it could modify the lesson and potentially make it feel as if a human instructor was helping the student. This could be seen as a positive outcome because if their are a group of students that are confused during a lesson, the computers would be able to help them immediatley instead of having to wait for the teacher to help 5 or 6 different students.\n\nAnother positive outcome of this device would be how it could draw out certin emotions that our human eye cannot detect. In the text, it states how certain muscles such as the zygomatic major and the risorius are the ones used in producing a false smile which can be received as a real one without proper inspection. This ability would make it useful to see if someone is hiding something or is not being truthful, but this could also lead to the next point which explains why this would not work due to privacy and inacurracy.\n\nThere is always going to be a privacy issue with technology, and there can potentially be a major one with this program. Many people hide their emotions and never get them off of their chest would could cause stress. If this system was accurate enough to read that, it could notify teachers and other adults about the student's problems and they would be upset that the teachers are able to see this without asking directly. Certain emotions are meant to be kept inside the person and not out in the world for everyone to see. Others are supposed to be expressed like happiness, but the ones that are supposed to be kept inside should not be drawn out because of a computer technology that can read someone's expressions.\n\nThere are both pros and cons to this new computer system, and could help students in school, but also pull out information that is not supposed to be drawn out. I agree that this technology could help students who are lost and could also help them learn by teaching them the topic in a different way. If its main focus was for learning purposes and learning purposes only, I would be completly fine with the idea reaching schools. The only thing that is holding me back from unanimously agreeing is how it can read all emotions and the ones that are meant to be kept inside can be shared to other people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\" What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college! Well i think otherwise. Electoral College is a process, not a place , which the election of the President is by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College do consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.\n\nThe start of the Electoral College is well handingly choosing the electors, which consists of 538 electors each of course must be qualified. Most of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. The number of members in its Congressional delegation is equal to the entitled allotment of electors in your state, one is for each member in the house of Representatives plus two for the Senators. For the purposes of Electoral College, Columbia District is allowed 3 electors and is treat like a state. and when i say \"state\" for this topic i mean the District of Columbia.\n\nWell backed up reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president, A outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, just look back at the year 2000 it was less likely then a come over the popular vote the Reason for that is the winning candidate's share of the Electioral College expanded his share of the popular vote. For example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\n\"Electoral College is a process, not a place \" each and every step of the Electoral college method comes out to be a well handed system. Its more then enough fairness included when choosing the Presisent and Vice President. Popular vote is more based on \"winner-take-all\" System thats awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate, unlike the Electoral College which is a process that consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Could facial enotion technolgy be the future of our computer software one day in the future. based on the study and explanations made in this artical it is very possible you could one day be getting judged while taking a look on the computer. In the artical Dr. Huang was intriged by the painting of Mona Lisa and did a basis study on the emotions that was identified on Mons Lisas face. image learning in school and if your frown while on the computer because you are not intriged by eht is showing on the computer are you are not in an understanding of what is going on it will be instantly modified based on how you feel.\n\nEvery student deserves to be happy when they learn and every child learns a different way. \"Imagine a computer thst knows when you are happy or sad. For example,if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, asimilar ad might follow. But you frown, the next ad will be different.\" Most communication is nonverbal now so computers need to know that as well. This could be a vital piece in the future in a way that may be unexpected in the results it produces. based on the artical the \"FACS (Facial Action Coding System) Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and associated each with characteristic movements of thw facial muscles.\"\n\nOn the down side of this argument to usea this advanced technology in a classroom can make computers much more expensive. Also one clould feel that she does not want to be monitered and watched every seconed that she is on the web. You could feel as if that is is a right of inavasion of your personal space and that it could make you uncomfortable to be put in this situation.\n\nIn conclusion, schools should consider this style of learning by letting technology take over to get a better understanding of how this works. This would be effective and would be able to modify the lesson as a human teacher would.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of the FACS is both valuable and not valuable. Humans are very complex, and they can learn to adapt. Humans can learn to be more deceitful and learn to hide thiings better. I know because, I, myself, am a human.\n\nThe ability to detect human emotions is not valuable because some humans are embarassed when others know what they are feeling, and they would learn to keep their face neutral while feeling because they don't want to constantly be read like a book by some robot.\n\nThis technology could be valuable because you could tell when kids in school are getting mad or even have depression or anxiety. Facs could help us to help the future generations of students to talk about their emotions because they won't have to state how they feel, but a robot would be doing that for them.\n\nFACS is not the best idea because some kids like to keep to themselves and just the thought of eveyone knowing how you feel constantly would give them anxiety and make them fearful to feel because of what others may think and so on and so forth.\n\nI dont think that using this technology is a valuable idea because then the government could end up taking the technology into the real world and using it against the people. I am not okay with being read but a robot, personally.\n\nThis technology could also help to keep schools safe, by letting the administration know when someone if looking guilty or even if they are starting to get angry because of something, it could help to stop some school shootings because the students would have a certain emotion to them and then we would know to pull that student aside, or it could help students who have anxiety to tell when they need to step out of class and go for a walk or use their coping skills.\n\nI don't have a straight forward opinion on the new technology because it has alot of pros and cons. I talked about a few in the paragraphs above and while rereading my writing, I realize that I have a neutral perspective on all of this due to how many pros and cons there really are, and the ability for humans to adapt.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author said studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of the climate. This is true because if we, humans, decide to go well will be more likely to die than going to mars. Venus is the closest planet in shape and size to Earth, although the Earth and Venus are close to being twins Venus can be a challenge to get close to because of the climate.\n\nOn Venus the atmosphere is pretty thick. Almost 97% carbon dioxide and the temperture is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Don't forget that it is 90 times more that we have experenced here on Earth. This environment wouild destroy a submarine and turn it in to liquid. Although almost exacly the side of the Earth, Venus has the hottest surface in our solar system.\n\nThere is stories that say there use to be large oceans on Venus that covered half of the surface where it could support life like Earth. NASA is coming up with solutions to study the planet without sending humans. The built a vehicle that hovers 30 miles or so above the roiling Venusian landscape. Reseachers cannot take samples of rocks gas or anything else that far away. This is why it could be a risk for humans, we need to be up close to study the planet but if we do de might die from the heat.\n\nThis is some of the reasons why in \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author said studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on Mars wasn't created by aliens. The face is a natural landform and it was probably created by something other than aliens.I mean come on now let's just think about this for a second, why would the aliens or \"Martians\" (as NASA likes to call them) create something on the surface of their planet that would lead you to believe that Martians live on Mars.\n\nThings like this are common in Cydonia, because scientists believed it was just a Martian Mesa at the time, But now they believed it\n\nresembled a face. The original photos taken by MGS ( Mars Global Surveyor) was blurry and wasn't very sharp enough for people to really get a good look at the photo.Scientists just went off this photo saying it resembled a face.A new sharper image, released in 2001 , shows that the \" Face on Mars\" really is just a huge rock formation or a natural landform and not a face on mars,alien artifact, or whatever else you would like to call it.The picture that was given to us (the people)in 1976, was only 43 meters per pixel, but the newest photo released in 2001 is 1.56 meters per pixel. The number of meters per pixel is higher in the 2001 photo vs. 1976 photo, Giving a better view of this \" Face on Mars \".\n\nIn all truth the \" Face on Mars\" was nothing more than just a misconception of scientific evidence that was believed to be a face,\n\nbut in reality it was only a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this article the author clearly shows that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author uses logical reasoning and facts that make his claim valid. In the passage there are many ways that suggest the advantages of exploring Venus despite the dangers of the mission.\n\nIn the passage provided the author states both sides to this arguement but shows how exploring Venus could benefit us. In the passage he states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuse of the insight to be gain on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" With that being said, humans have been capable of accomplishing many things, if there is a problem we always find a way around it.\n\nAlthough there are dangers to exploring Venus, there are benefits that cannot be denied. Discovering new ways to go without harm is no doubt a work in process. But the author here portrays the ways it can be accomplished.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator, I heard that there are people thinking on wanting to keep or change the electoral college.\n\nwell in the electoral college you have electors,senators and we use them for when we vote for our new president. But what I think you should do is change the electoral college as it is now. You want to kno why well here I will tell you what I think you should keep it.\n\nFirst, the presidential election is held every four years so you can vote for the president you want to vote for. Also when you vote for your candidate you're actually voting for candidate's electors. Some people that are voting don't know that they're voting for their candidate's electors. In some states they have different decisions in the electoral college. Like for example in state conventions,state party's central commitee,and sometimes even the presidential candidates. Voters can get confused on these kinds of things in the electoaral college because the electoral college sometimes hasn't made a decicion yet on how or what they want to do or say.\n\nNext, the electoral college is unfair to voters because of th winner take all system. In each the candidates don't spend their time in the states that have no chance of winning. On the year of 2000, the campaign of seventeen states didn't get to see the candidates at all including Rhode Island and South Carolina. Not even the largest media markets got to see a single campaign ad. But in ohio they probably have a chance on having a good argument for putting the presidency in the hands of a small amount of voters. These are some reasons why some people might want to change the electoral college because it's unfair to some states and people.\n\nIn addition,the they're outcomes in the electoral college like in the year of 2012 an outcome happened. It happened when they were voting for Romney or Obama. Obama recieved a 61.7 percent of the electoral votes compared to 51.3 percent of the the popular votes for him and Romney. That happened when the number of votes possibly was 538 thats an even number of votes. But having an even number is kind of good but it's higly an unlikely number. when that happens the state creates a landslide electoral vote victory the state.\n\nThe electoral college avoids the problem of elections in where no candidate recieves a high number of votes. Like with Nixon and Clinton they both had 43 percent of popular votes. In winning the electoral college 301 and 370 votes there is pressure for run-off elections when tere is no candidate wins.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Healthy lifestyle is paramount to leading a long and happy life. Some believe that governments should shoulder the responsibility for its citizens health. While others believe, it is should be an individual choice. It's a very commendable if an individual is able to make right choices in the matters of his/her well-being. However, the problem stems from the fact that many people fail to make right decisions pertaining to their health.\n\nEvidently, putting the responsibility of healthiness in the hands of people, clearly doesn't have a good success rate. In today's world, diseases like obesity, diabetes and cancer has become global epidemics. The majority of these illnesses are attributed to abysmal eating habits and lack of physical exercise. And there is overwhelming an amount of research out there that could support these claims. However, if governments take the responsibility of the healthiness of its citizens, it has better chances of combating these diseases. The reason being, governments can easily get access to the best research available out there to combat these conditions. Also, it has the best doctors and research facilities at its disposal, which makes it easier for them to come up with the solutions to eradicate these diseases.But\n\nBut, there are also quite a number of people who advocate that the decision of lifestyle should solely rest with the individuals. They claim that the excessive indulgence of government in the lives of people might come off as controlling. And nobody appreciates being constantly told what to eat and how much to exercise. In fact, there is a chance people would do the exact opposite as a form of protest towards the authority.\n\nThe government that strives for the welfare of its citizens is more likely to build a strong country. At the same time it should refrain from being excessively invasive on the health related decisions of its people. No matter how much effort the government puts in, at the end of the day every citizen should possess his own individual accountability. We as responsible individuals, should put our own sincere endeavours in leading a sickness free lifestyle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "the pursuit is alway worthit to some, but some feel different. venus can not be explored by humans naked eye. and even probes and other exploration vesles have dificulty. the temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit on the surface, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than earths. the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide making inhapiting the planet without a suit imposible. on venus their are volcanic eruptions, powerfuls earthquakes, and lightning all the time on the surface, but scientist think it wasn't this bad a realy long time ago scientist think venus was like earth, having vast oceans and could have had life on the now inhospitable planet. scientist want to learn more, but since the dense atmosphere previnting the light from geting to the surface taking photography and videography are ineffective. scientist can't take samples either since the atmosphere is so dence the rovers would get crushed. therefore the study of venus is a waste.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think author concludes story paragraph end talking new begining Also its going new begining says going take testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I read the article ''A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\" This article is about the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program is people that help recover food supplies for places that just got done with war and to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. I think it's good to help people in need. There are three rerasons why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Those reasons are that your helping people in need, to expeariance other countries culture, and to for the adventure and amazing views.\n\nThe first reason why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is that because your helping people in need. It is good to help people in need because it shows other people that they are loved. It is also good to help people in need because they just been through a lot. They just been through war, and war is not pretty. It is also good to help people in need because it shows that you care.\n\nThe second reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is that its good to expeariance other countries culture. It is good to expeariance other countries culture because it is good to know what they do in there country. It is also good to expeaeriance other peoples cultures because it is goood to know how they live or if the countries poor. The last reason why you should expeariance other peoples culture is that it is fun to learn new things about other countries.\n\nThe third reason why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys is for the adventure and the amazing things you get to see and expeariance. You get to go to China, Greece, Europe, Crete, italy, and many more countries. It would be fun to see The Great Wall of China, or the Panthenon in Greece, or other amazing sites in other countries. It is a honor to see an amazing site that most people don't see everyday.\n\nIn conclusion, I think it would be really fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It would be fun to help people, expeariance other peoples culture, and see amazing sights. People should really consider being an Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock safety nature law One greatest obstacle safety Since blimps needed lighter air filled helium hydrogen Most dirigibles outside used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This big obstacle blimp high ground catches fire could end badly another obstacle nature due violent air currents made buildings sway This also bad blimp moves building sways building one could break The last obstacle law airships flying low urban areas So build mast would even illegal get dirigible close So obstacles builders faced building Empire State building dock blimpsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt Narciso Rodriguez sets mood relaxation happiness joy overall feeling satisfaction unity The describes feelings home much made feel overjoyed In paragraph says Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home In particular sentence tring get mood like heaven earth thing The tring give reader factual information home also tring exagerate emotion make paradise In paragraphs emphasizes courageous kind selfless parents always greatful He shows statements like They came selflessly give children better life Generosity selflessness two lessons parents tell They showed lives The sets mood story paradise everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the modern world, many people believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally, and financially unable to look after themselves. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.\n\nOne of the most important reasons why younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members is when they are physically ill. For example, according to the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that children should take care of their parents when they are sick. For example, taking them to see a doctor at the hospital or buying some medicine for them. There is the possibility that reduces the rate of illness of their parents. This example shows that the younger family plays a major role in the health of the older family. \n\nAnother reason to support this is the fact that adolescents should take care of their parent’s emotional well-being. This is due to the fact that adults want their children to show interest and take care. To illustrate this, in recent news, it has been reported that children who take their parents out for outings every week bring more happiness to their parents' emotional well-being compared to the group of children who never take their parents out. This case makes increase emotional well-being.\n\nIn conclusion, it is undoubtedly true that younger family members should take care of and support older family members because parents will increase happiness both physically and mentally.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting affects cyclist lots hills little waterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Building Laughter early age uncle would bring funniest cards mine brothers birthdays see reaction Then uncle moved west coast near us would piss see others reaction We always known bad day lift When family I would go back early age would always celebrate others birthdays uncle He would bring funniest cards give us would sit laugh hours Then moved older brother I started get funny cards see best one We got cards sexual humor gross humor We would come others birthdays grin one ear waiting person open card One year birthday I got card older ladies sexual humor towards Lets say nobody beaten card My uncle I work building way different jobs He sales manager I put items together sell When I walk work I always pass see For part either laughing pissed something day On days upset walks outside make label I start make fun right away Sometimes gets even angry But always seems laugh fact come back rude remark Everyday happens always seems brighten days We bought two season passes year At first I nt good skiing would always fall When I would fall would board laughing I would get upset We would laugh way home talking I would always fall But time went I slowly got better would waiting bottom run One time went could nt seem stay board would fall nonstop This time I could finally get back times laughed able stay skis I never laughed hard life ride home Coming making remarks able stay board one warming things I ever felt It nt warming make rude remarks It warming see could nt say anything back time finally came made fun My uncle I relationship today impact early age Him able make laugh jokes knowing brighten day one best things happened date Changing life best changing personality best These laughing experiences turned unclenephew relationship friend relationship My life full laughter full laughter life one personSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author believes that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents to us humans. Venus moves at a slower pace then earth but not as fast as mars. Its one of our closes planets next to mars. Venus has a atomsphere of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and its pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on planest earth.\n\nThe author states that venus could have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Venus long ago was most likely covered largely with oceans. The planet could have supported many means of life form on it just like earth. Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration has a idea on sending humans to try and live on venus. The way it would be done is using a blimp like hovering vehicle floating 30 miles or so off venus landscape. This would let the people onboard to never have to step foot on the harsh landscape of venus.\n\nNASA is working on other ways to study venus. Some electronics with silcon carbide could lead to the answer to NASAs problems. Looking back at a old technology call mechanical computers. These devices were used during the second world war and could lead to the way scientist explore and survey venus in the future.\n\nThe way the author uses the evdience given is able to support his idea. Venus may be dangerous to normal humans to step foot on. Venus may be way to hot and have a very thick atomsphere. Venus maybe able to support life once again and to start a new there. Venus IS a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar chart below gives information on employment rates for male and female workers in 6 countries which are Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, UK, New Zealand and USA. In years between 1995 and 2005.\nOverall, the employment rates have increased for both genders during period of ten years in all six countries.\nFirst of all, the trend of male workers in UK have increased more compared to other countries during ten years from 55% to 72%. with rate of growth equal to 17%, while in the USA, the rate was the lowest with only 10% in 2005. However, the rate of growth in the male workers in the rest countries were fluctuaed from 11% to 14%. Furthermore, the trend of female workers have increased more in the USA and New Zeland compared to other countries during the ten years with rate of growth reach to 16%, while the rates of gowth were even in UK, Iceland, Australia and Switzerland approximately 11%.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting car usage is a great way for our pollution to decrease. With limiting cars we also will be able to walk place to place without being tempted to drive there.\n\nLimiting car usage will clean up the pollution by a lot. There have been \"efforts in the plast two decades to make cities denser.\" Some places have started to do that by limiting cars, and they have decreased the ammount of pollution where they live. Paris has \"enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" They only did that because days have been so close to near record pollution. They had limited the days people can drive and only after five days the congestion was down sixty percent. If there is a decrease in pollution the air would be much cleaner to breathe for everything, plants, animals and most importantly us humans.\n\nThe other good side of limiting car usage is that we can use other ways to transport and enjoy the outdoors by doing that. We can ride bikes or even walk from point A to point B. New York has started a bike program and it is skyrocketing. People can ride them to work or anywhere they want to go. People say \"the trend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in the percentage of young people getting there licenses. Young adults that are nineteen and twentyone have not bothered to get a license, even though they live in a place where it can come in hand most of the time. How they can get away with doing that is that they have summer jobs not to far so it is in walking distance. Some people have a car but choose other ways to travel from place to place. \"Mr, Sivak's son lives in San Francisco and has a car but takes Bay Area Rapid Transit, when he can, even though that often takes longer than driving.\" There is other ways then taking a car.\n\nUsing other ways to transport is a good way to start cleaning up the areas yo live in. You can clean up the pollution dramaticaly. You can also just walk to where you want to go. If it's not in walking distance you can carpool, take a bus, or ride a bike.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Allowing dirigibles stock Empire State Building never possible obstacles architects faced First nature builders The strong winds top building constantly shifting proved hazard dirigibles Mooring dirigibles would lead weights question danger pedestrians Another obstacle already existing law prohibited dirigibles flying low urban areas This law made illegal dirigible dock Empire State Building The final obstacle dirigible could accidentally ignited fall New York The destruction Hindenburg made clear possible dirigible dock Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think computers positive effects peole People find important news online connect people nt see often Also order anything world online These three reasons I believe computers positive effect people Computers inform people important news If blizzard people find ahead time stock food If burglar going around people find lock doors windows And knowing information helps helps people plan events like birthday parites Finding important news helpful conveniant And people less inconveniances know news Another way computers positive effect people allowing connect people nt see often This provides easy way share events tha taken place time talk face face With video chat show new newborn baby You share want people barely see Experts say freindships last longer talk ohter often computers possible A third way computers help allowing order anything world online If need japanese someone ohio order online If re old ca nt go grocery store anymore order online I seen people order everything online nt lot driving saves time money gas This also convendent less stressful waithing lines purchase item These three ways htat computers positive effect people find important news connect people nt see ofte order anything world s I believe comptuers positive effect peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this contemporary world, people have many routes to choose to develop themselves. Some of them are in favor of working or travelling instead of attending university’s lectures. There are many merits and demerits of working instead of learning.\n\nFirst of all, people may find schools and universities are theoretical and costly. Some cannot afford the cost of 4 to 5 years of studying. As a result, some students leave school and start finding a job. They can gain practical experiences while working. Secondly, those students can soon become financially independent. However, because of lacking qualifications, the occupation they found will be manual jobs with minimum wages and no prospect of promotion. Also, in this era of modernization, manual labour will soon be replaced by machinery. \n\nOn the other hand, pursuing higher education will bring more benefits. When people attend universities, they will probably end up with a bachelor’s degree, which is a requirement for professional jobs with high salaries and chances of promotions. So, the investment in higher education will offset the amount spent on tuition fees. Despite the less exposure to practical experience, students can still gain practical experience through internships in big companies. Besides, college life can be an opportunity to meet and connect with different individuals as well as enlarge their network, which will be of great assistance in their future careers.\n\nIn conclusion, we cannot bear the advantages that leaving school and having a job has but there are still a lot more to take into consideration when studying higher education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator,\n\nI believe that the electoral college should be dissolved and replaced with election by popular vote. The electoral college is a flawed system that has resulted in several unfair elections such as the 2000 election in which Al Gore won by popular vote, but lost the election because Bush had a majority of the votes from the electoral college. Also the members of the electoral college are not obligated to vote for the candidate chosen by the people but could willingly vote for the candidate of their choice. Also, \"Most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate\" this system could greatly off set the election.\n\n\"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president,\" this system goes completely against the constitution in that \"We the People\" don't elect our own president. I thoroughly believe that we should move on to election by popular vote, because there would be less problems with the presidential election.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Author of the story thinks that exploring venus is a worthy idea, because Venus has value. The Author tells the reader about how Venuses extreme waether is a challenge\n\nOn paragraph 7 it explains what NASA is planning on to take down the challenge of the weather, and what approches to take, The conditions of Venus is very inhospitable. On paragraph 3 says the temperature of the surface is over 800 degrees fahrenheit. The conditions are enough to liquefy many metals in matter of seconds. Exposing cell phones and other normal day to day technology would melt in an instant. The temperature 30 miles above the surface would be 170 degrees fahrenheit, survivable but a human would feel like he/she is being baked in a oven.\n\nScientist are discussing about visiting Venus because their belief that it was once a Earth-like planet a very long time ago, and figuring out how to tackle these challenges. Venus has features that resemble Earths moutains,valleys and craters. With limited ideas and sources hovering over the planet wont be enough to research to understand and explore Venus. As of right now many researchers are working on innovations to allow the machines to last long enough to gather information to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nThe author makes many interesting details in the article to support his idea. Human curiosity, hunger for exploration and adventure, is apart of human nature. Exploring Eaths \"Twin\" Venus to the Scientist would be a big step for exploring any other dangerous planets out there. Something like this can expand the human race, knowledge and imagination when the time comes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As crazy as living without a car sounds, more and more people are doing it. One popular reason for it is for a healthier and happier lifestyle. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's short story titled In\n\nGerman Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\nHeidrun Walter reports \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Her and many others like her in the town of Vauban, Germany have experienced the difference and felt stress go away. The city has banned driveways and home garages, encourging the rule of living \"car-free.\" The people rely on public transit, bicycles and their own two legs. While many people are stressing to get a car, the people of the town feel stressed if they have a car. Over half the population sold their cars to move there, and don't regret a thing. In the article titled\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota , Andrew Selsky quotes Carlos Arturo Plaza as saying \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress\" as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\n\nAlso Carlos Arturo Plaza goes on to say \"[it's a good oppurtinity to] lower air pollution.\" People are realizing how many pollutants that cars emitt into the atmosphere. One example place is Paris, known for their terrible smog, has finally done something to clean it up. Robert Duffer wrote in\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\n\n\"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" The law stated even numbered license plates couldn't drive one day, and the other, odd liscense plates couldn't. A little thing like this had a big effect. Duffer then reported \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\" Elizabeth Rosenthal in the aritcle\n\nThe End of Car Culture showed the idea \" if [these] patterns persists...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions.\" Americans are partically to blame for pollution. Our need for the newest, biggest, best things, has come at a cost, and more than money. Green-house gases are stacking up, and we have to take a stand some time. Rosenthal goes on to describe political leaders are working to fix this too, \"President Obama's abitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions [were] unveiled last week.\"\n\nIn places already practicing the no car rule, environments have improved; more than pollution wise. Andrew Selsky reported of \"the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" and \"uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks.\" These two additions of Bogota, Colombia have inspired many people to turn in their keys, and take a hike instead. Not only have these changes made people more happy, but it makes their city more beautiful and they are starting to get outdoors and see it. The author reports that \"municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event [car-free day] and were enthuriastic,\" amung the people visiting was the Mayor of Paraguay's capital city. When more people see the effects, they want to do the same thing. Columbia's one day event has brought about much talk in neighboring towns and even \"two other Colombian cities, Calli and Valledupar, joined the event.\"\n\nOn the other side of the argument, many car industries are trying to compete with these new ideas and technology. Rosenthal quotes in\n\nThe End Of Car Culture\n\n\"But it could have negative implications for the car industry. Indeed, companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves \"mobility\" companies with broader product range beyond the personal vehicle\" As humans advance into the ideas of walking, biking, or taking public transportation, car companies strive to become known for things other than cars. They want to be able to sell you things still, even if you don't want or need a car. Later she writes how Bill Ford proposed the fresh idea at the Mobile World Congress that car dealers should \"partner with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which 'pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" This long quote simply means having all forms of transportion and the new technology in communications to be one, for the better of the people.\n\nWith or without cars, we all are always on the move. Some cities have adapted new ideas to get from place to place, or simply old ideas, being put back into action. Although Henry Ford would probably be dissapointed at his invention being faded out, Mother Nature would be pleased of us taking care of Earth. We never know what the future holds, but we do know, we'll always only have one home, so we better take care of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter important part family We laugh together breathe together ll die together When comes family important thing brings one besides fun loving spending quality time together makes laugh keeps close For siblings parents always good time laugh whether one upset mad It nt matter situation always time best times even points one us nt want see one another I spending adventurous day one close friends decided time go home get ready I could go spend night house When I stepped house much commotion going yelling decided maybe sit figure going As sat began bust laughing sight step dad yelling oldest sister We nt know happened really wanted find I ca nt believe ca nt go next door house ask toilet paper I ve sitting anxiously toilet hope would bring toilet paper hour Yet came house asked plunger far embarrassing said As soon words violently came mouth started cracking laughing It felt like stomach tightening much I could nt breathe With much attitude put tone voice said CAPS nt need toilet paper clean could easily hopped shower used shower head wash poop point going back said My step dad furious would even say thing Without hesitation quickly picked phone dialed mothers number Waiting waiting pick Suddenly I heard voice phone began screaming telling mom situation It got point said words nt said As words rolled tongue began stutter spoke CAPS toilet paper would nt go grab house Unfortunately I get get hand wet wash hands I wiped butt hand stopping us laughing hard could I never heard something disgusting made want throw leather couches anxious take sister s phone away immediately asked confronting mother nt care even mom told could nt take away wanted possession knew sister would feel Not take away phone took away right use toilet paper using bathroom I nt know long I laughed felt like I going pee As I continued laughing ran stairs fast could rummaging bathrooms house get every last little square toilet paper Sad part even took shower head sister would nt able use also clean My mother got home nothing say embarrassed heard wiped butt hand Not put story status saw I nt mention names besides I s fact knew story made cheeks turn red cherry began wonder My sister said toilet paper asked napkins also said started looking cabinets soon found napkins mad time laughing really hard felt like look brighter side situation A week gone step dad still nt put one roll toilet paper bathroom said CAPS think s funny happens ll funny nt toilet paperSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The position and role of businesses and companies have long been the topic of numerous debates in modern societies. In this regard, many experts are of the opinion that apart from financial activities, businesses are also responsible for other aspects of their society. I, personally, completely agree with this point of view for two main reasons.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the fact that most important businesses have a broad variety of customers can not be denied. This means that they have a direct or indirect influence on their users in many aspects. For example, huge media companies, like WayStar, benefit from a significant number of audiences not only in America but also in Asia and middle Europe; therefore, alongside making a profit, it would be great if they could inform individuals about the most critical events and affairs in the globe such as global warming, air pollution and poverty in underdeveloped countries. This is beneficial since the perspective of people will be formed in a far more efficient way and they can contribute more to their social activities.\r\n\r\nIn addition, on an economic side, there is a reasonable argument that prestigious enterprises and industries which always have a huge amount of mandatory resources can involve in either domestic or international wide campaigns to enrich people's culture by preserving their nature and the habitat of other species. They can also introduce plenty of job opportunities in local communities in order to provide a chance for the local crowd to escape the cycle of poverty. For instance, Apple company could establish a local branch in small cities in poor countries like Iran. In this way, not only do they create a new market, but also they can help unfortunate folk to make money by working as labour or engineer.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, due to the countless number of users in conjunction with strong financial conditions, I firmly believe that companies and professions could take more responsibility in shaping our lives in a proper path, only if they impose strategic plans at an international level.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine driving on your new car that can drive itself with the help of your \"assistance\" only at certain times. While you are paying attention to the road your daughter or son may need your help with spilled drink, unlocking a device, or even a \"quick\" glance at them. You gave the automatic driving system your trust just for a few seconds, but in those few seconds anything can happen; an acciedent can occure while your back is turned. Now with this example the people should think twice before buying a driverless car.\n\nSelf driving cars seem to be \"the future\" for cars, though many people do not agree with self driving cars. There is one big variable for these types of cars such as public safety. The first priority for the driverless cars should be for public safety, can people actually count on the many sensors and cameras attached to a car? As of today nothing is perfect, just like the sensors and cameras, there will be some type of system error at a point in time. After the accident, as stated from paragraph 9, \"who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer\"? The first accident will cause the public to go againts the public and the company will lose its only consumer.\n\nCars that can drive on their own can be very exciting. Since 2009 Google has started a project of a driverless car. As stated on the second paragraph, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" A big question comes along next to these big projects such as, what will the car do if it comes along an accident or a road construction? Google's answer to this is \" they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" Driverless cars can do many things a normal car can't do.\n\nThe driverless car that Google had tested is just a single individual that was properly observed and was better taken care of. For the half million miles it had driven, consider the half million people that might drive these cars compared to one test. From one to half a million is half a million more risks that Google had invented. Even the company knows that a car is not a car without the driver. The driverless car still needs a driver so that the car an alert the driver when needed. Now what if the driver was not alerted fast enough or not alerted at all do to a malnfuntion? There are many flaws about the \"future cars\" that manufacturers can not control.\n\nNow if the driver had just stopped at a rest stop or the side of the road to see what the child needed at the back of the car, the whole family would not have to risk their lives because of the driver trusting a computer for just a second. Think twice before buying a driverless car, because nothing is perfect in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this story A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves,I go on a trip with my friend to Europe and get a once in a life time opportunity, to be a Seagoing Cowboy. In this essay I will be covincing you to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I will talk about how you get to see the world, go site seeing, and get to have fun but also help your country.\n\nFirst off, seeing the world. in the story I talked about how besides helping people I got to see the breath taking view of Europe and China but seeing the Acropolis in Greece was just beautiful. I also traveled across the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States. Now who wouldn't want to see the world like I did and still help people in need?\n\nNext, site seeing. On my journey to help, I got to take a gondola ( a boat) ride in Venice, Italy a city with sreets of water. Wouldn't it be amazing to go on a gondola and to go explore Italy? Also,I toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. Is'nt that just amazing?\n\nLast but not least, what is a Seagoing Cowboy? I can't persuade you to be one if I don't tell you what it is! A Seagoing Cowboy takes care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas . Don and I signed up. When we were Seagoing Cowboys it was 1945 when World War 2 was over in Europe. We helped countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. If you like helping people this would be a great job for you.\n\nIn conclusion, I hope I convinced you to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Now that I've told you about how you get to see the world, go site seeing, and what a Seagoing Cowboy is I hope I've helped you make up your mind. In the future, I hope more people will sign up and help better our would.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Numerous characters deem watching TV and reading magazines as a wastage of time, as there is no correlation to citizens' lives; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm many necessary pieces of information get announced by the news program. I reckon we should not glean a public's daily news from the press, TV, broadcast, and other media. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, it got proved that affluent people and wealthy politicians pay to media and TV channels to deceive the population for various reasons. If one of the parliament members offends some major crimes, he or she can conceal the offence by using the power of media deluding people, which is a classical way how the press earns. There are countless incidences relating to this in Mongolia. One of these is Tuvshin, a member of parliament congress, who hid successfully the fact that he raped a girl, and stole a large amount of fund from the government thanks to the media, which is one example. Hence, it is crucial to do not believe news reported by media.\r\n\r\nSecondly, insofar as the objective of the press and webs is to captivate as many readers as possible so that they can profit. Many websites are posting many numbers of intriguing news, gossips, and other juicy info through the internet and social media every day. For example, you can observe that there are many trashy but juicy posts on Facebook uploaded by websites. Therefore, we have to react perceptively to these uncertain pieces of information.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I firmly believe that taking information from the media is utterly a wrong idea, as they usually provide citizens with fallacious news. Thus, I state again we should not rely on public news.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that governments ought to pay full institutional fees for students who want to obtain higher education. I would say that I strongly agree with this statement.\nTo start with, the cost of course fees nowadays is much higher than it used to be a decade ago. One of the biggest problemss for school leavers is to manage to collect a huge amount of money that is needed in order to enter the university of your dream. Of course there are some scholarships that are very helpful. But the problem is that they are only available for very talented students who scored only high grades during their educational process, or for those who come from low-income families. As the result, students who have passion and necessary skills can not afford to study in the university.\nOn the ohter hand, paying for everyone's course fee would lead to a huge hole in every government's budget. The possibility of free studying for everyone sounds naive and kind of impossible. Another problem is that those students who are more likely not to participate well during their studies and might drop off the university after the first year will have an opportunity to enter universities. This will likely lead to problems with whole educational system. The only solution is to select wisely whether this or that student is ready to spend his or her time studying new knowledge and skills.\nIn conclusion, paying for course fees is a good idea but only for those students who have enthusiasm for studyingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Sports, nowadays, have become an integral part of the young generation. In most schooling systems around the world, physical education is one of the components of the curriculum. However, this has become a controversial topic, as a part of society argues that sport is a vital aspect of education. Opposing this is the view that physical education as a subject is unnecessary. In this essay, both of these opinions will be discussed and a conclusion will be drawn.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, sports activities are considered to be detrimental to the student’s educational outcome as less time and money is allocated for academic subjects. In other words, should physical education be mandatory, students will have to devote a part of their time for studying to it, simultaneously, schools may invest money in sporting equipment rather than teaching one. This ultimately results in students not having the best academic education. Another argument is that, forcing students to exercise in school when they do not want to can lead to negative experiences and memories connect to it. Henceforth, sports are leisure activities that are not school-related and therefore should be practised outside of school.\r\n\r\nMeanwhile, physical education was introduced into curriculums as a means to promote a healthy lifestyle and ensure every student gets access to regular exercise and its benefits. For already active students, sports lessons might be redundant, while those who come from sedentary families largely depend on schools for exertions. Furthermore, physical movements can help alleviate the stress of theoretical sessions and promote better concentration and efficiency. Meaning, implementing physical education is beneficial for studying other subjects as well. \r\n\r\nTo recapitulate,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am Luke Bomberger and from my experience\n\nI will tell why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nMy first reason is that you get to help countries all around the world and seeing people's grateful faces always put a smile on mine. My second reason is if you love animals then you would enjoy this job beacuse we have to take care of animals in the first half of the trip which is transporting them to the other countries. Another reason is if you love being on the sea then the Seagoing Cowboys is for you because most of the trip is on the ocean's great waves. If that doesn't convince you, my final reason is that you get to go all over the world and see many great things. I've taken a gondola ride in Venice,seen an excavated castle in Crete, and even seen the Acropolis in Greece which is a very special experience for me.\n\nIn conclusion, the Seagoing Cowboys are a very amazing oppertunity to help various countries get back on their feet after World War ll and you can see all these different cultures and how they interact with one another. There is so much you can learn from going on these cattle trips and so much you can see and do. Being a Seagoing Cowboy opened the world for me, and I am hoping it will for you too. I am hoping you have considered joining and if you have I will see you there!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The higher calling mooring mast built put New York forefront modern travel builders needed solve obstacles way First building needed get stronger order support thousandfoot dirigible moored top building As result frame Empire State Building needed modified strengthened accommodate problem According excerpt worth changes made building s framework Another problem stress wind pressure The wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation This also solved least thought making changes skeleton building Lastly building needed space provide passengers come blimps To solve problem built shaft bring passengers floor baggage ticket areas would located The builders face many problems even attempting build mast dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I will be writing my essay on how i feel, and My postion on driverless cars. In my opinion on driverless cars are great in so many ways. I can picture a world with driverless cars. The rate of car accidents will go down for sure.\n\nThis will probably be one of the best thing that has happened to this world because people have been fantiscising about self driving car for forever. These cars can help alot. for example, say you and all your friend got drunk and you need a ride home the smart car will be of great assistance.\n\nI feel that the smart car will be great in the future. It will also probably will be one of the best selling things. It can also make people want to drive enen more because now they have to wait for there turn to driving, and people can get very impatient.\n\nSome downs to having a smart car is that it can make you lazy. You have to always be alert. You can sometimes get bored of waiting for your turn to drive. So that means no being on your phone all the time.\n\nIn conclusion, The smart car is great. it has some up in downs. if i had a chance to get one I would get one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this article of the \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" I wouldnt beable to choose which side to be on with using this technolgy to read students' emotional expressions. Is it good for us to know how other people may feel, or is it invading in our own privacy. Our expressions are key to alot, but does this technlogy work I mean what if someone faked an expression and the technolgy gave us the wrong data back.\n\nThis technolgy proves Mona Lisa's expression, \" 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". Do we know that for sure? That she was feeling that way at that time, it is a painting. The artist could easily make a mistake on her face and give the wrong expression. This technolgy can be right, but the exact percentage of the persons feeling, that person doesn't even know that so how can a computer tell us it?.\n\n\" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". There are six emotions this technolgy collects thats happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This technolgy can be good for our future to tell us some what of the persons expressions, but I domt beleive it will give you the 100 percent truth in things.\n\nComputers aren't smarter then the human poulation itself I mean we created them. It might be smarter then one human, but not at. Someone can move there face and it doesn't have to be an exact expression. Without this technolgy knowing all expressions how is it going to know are right one. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored; bored maybe, but some people don't show expression to those things. To an expert, \" faces dont lie\", but humans lie all the time and yes you can tell by there face most of the time. But people get a way with murder, robbing, stealing, all from lying I mean did they tell form there face there were? No, because nothings 100 percent and I believe nothing can be that powerful to come up with those kinds of calculations.\n\nFrom the short description of my thinkings, you tell me what you thing? I make these faces all the time, but yet doesn't mean im having the expression on what they make. No body should need a computer to tell what your feeling. Ask that person ? Don't let technolgy make up the world. There trying to find a expressions, movments, and etc. all with computers. Robots are being made from us, are world is changing so fast. When is this going to change ? Soon there going to have robotic figures working in businesses or fast food resturants or resturants period. We are left with what ?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I will be convincing you today to join Seagoing Cowboys. When working for as a Seagoing cowboy you are able to do many things; such as you are able to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped over the seas. You are able to vist many beautiful places like Europe and China. We can not forget you will be helping people after World War two, people left in ruins without food supplies, animals, and so much more. After you are finished reading this I hope that you understand what its like to be a \"Seagoing Cowboys.\"\n\nIn addition to caring for horses, young cows, and mules we enjoy hard workers to help take great care of the cattle. You should be a hard and caring worker such as in times when there are heavy seas. You check up on the cattle to make sure they are alright. To pass the time you can come up with fun games to play since the long trips may get tireing. Just think of where the cattle is being taken to see the beautiful sites.\n\nAfter a long wait to finally reach land you walk out to see beautiful places. The sky prettyer than you may have ever saw. You relize all the hard work that you have been thourgh has payed off. Site seeing in these places are memorial you will never forget them. This is just one of the benefits of helping others. \" The cattle-boat trips were an unbeliveable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" as I said.\n\nJust take a mintue to think about what a change you are making for other people. How they will look up to you in a very important way, that no one will ever think. By you helping these people that are left alone feel helped and you will feel appricatable. \" I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" I said. \" It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nThis are many reasons why you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys.\" You will help cattle. You are able to help other people when they need it. You are able see many beautiful things in the world with your help and support. You will enjoy the great opportunity that you will have with joining the \" Seagoing Cowboys.\" This is why you should be apart of the \"Seagoing Cowboys.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The cyclist went rough journey explaning tiering difficult going town town diel lack water poisonous snakes condition roadSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is often argued that making primary education free will decrease the illiteracy rate and reduce the poverty in all countries. In this essay, I am going to share my opinion about free education.\r\n\r\nFirstly, Governments should introduce schemes for free schooling. At least six years of free education must be provided by governments. In many countries, there are poor people who can not afford to school. Even if they join schools, they will abandon education because they do not have the capacity to pay the fees. After abandoning the schools, the children are forced to do child labour in order to earn money for their families. Many children wish to study and dream to get their dream jobs. They are ready to work hard and give their everything but just because they can not afford to school, they fail to chase their dreams. Because of this, the poor people will be demotivated and they can never come out of poverty. Because of not getting educated, children grow up in poor conditions and they hardly find any jobs. Even if they find a profession, the wages will be meagre. They can not look after their family because of the small amount of money they get and ultimately, they can not lead happy life. Many children even grow up to be criminals because they do not have awareness. They do not know what is right or what is wrong. To get awareness and knowledge, they must be educated.\r\n\r\nSo, governments should at least provide six years of free education for poor children who can not afford to school so that they can get education,knowledge and awareness of society. If poor children get free primary education, they will at least be able to read,write and use numbers. There will be better career opportunities for them in the future and hence, the poverty rate will be reduced. But as we know, the governments are not doing anything about the free education schemes. Even if they introduce schemes, they won't keep their promises. Even the people who are well-educated are not questioning this issue. Several private organisations come forward but they do not receive support. If this goes on, the poor will remain poor and the rich will get only richer.Everyone has the right to education but some are unable to utilize this. Education helps people to get a better life. If there are more educated people, they can help modern society in a very good way and shape this world into a much better place. A place where every person can get the things he desires and experience everything.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, my personal opinion is that poor children should at least get free primary education so that they can get jobs in the future. This also helps with the economies of all the countries and no one will experience poverty gradually.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Car, bikes, walking and such are many forms of transportation. Cars are the main favorite overall. But as time continues we see that the drastic need for cars is growing smaller and smaller because we are now seeing the bigger picture; limiting car usage is a bigger plus than a negative.\n\nIn Vauban,German the surburb is going \"car-free\". Rosenthal speaks about how Vauban allows cars but there are only two locations where they may park these cars. If you want to park your car you must buy a space for $40,000, and a home along with your parking space. Due to these facts 70% of Vauban families do not own a car. An advantage of this limited car usage is that people like Heidrum Walter speak about how she is much happier and less tense without her car.\n\nVauban is in an area that is more accesible to public transportation and closer to stores. The closeness allows people easier accessablity to buses, or walking and biking places. With everything close its easier to get to point A to B. Also reduces pollution and greenhouse gases due to the fact they aren't using cars to get to there locations.\n\nIn Source 2 Duffer, speaks about how in Paris bans are being placed against the usage against cars, due to the fact Paris has a high level of smog. Paris had motorists with even-numbered license plates on Mondays leave there cars home or suffer a fine. On Tuesday motorists with odd-numbered license plates were to leave cars home or suffer a fine. The advantage of this ban is that having so many people leave there cars home on Monday allowed the smog to clear enough that the ban for Tuesday was rescind. If Paris were to do this ban for a couple of years there smog issue would be completely gone. This would be a major advantage for them, it would give them less pollution, not as many people getting sick due to the smog, and a less car dependent city.\n\nAn event was created in Bogota, Colombia called A Day Without Cars. Which was to have people go car-free for a day. Colombians used many other transportations such as biking, buses, and hiking. This event allowed smog to be reduced due to the fact Colombians could not use a car this day or be fined. Also this event helped spark other areas want to pertake in this event. This was a huge advantage having many other places join A Day Without Cars; this meant more areas helping reduce smog and helping many more areas become aware of the fact cars dont have to be the only form of transportation people use.\n\nAll in all if areas become less car dependent, there shall be less smog, pollutions and lastly people wont have to travel as far due to the fact everything will be closer. The smaller amount of cars we have, the more positive outcomes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home Blueprints lives speaker shows many moods The moods gratefulness happiness lifeThe speaker grateful whole memoir But speaker grateful family oppertunity come It says I always grateful parents love sacrifice This shows grateful s saying parents willing sacrifice things would able go better life He also tell us parents left friends family jobs homes come better life childrenThe speaker also shows happiness He says countless extended family members came went This shows surronded people loved made happy It also said would help people spend time comunity people dinner time This also shows happy spending time many family members friends These example moods author created memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir warm lots love The author explains growing environment showed family nt necessarily mean blood relative Everyone neighborhood came together great solidarity friendship Whatever family members went authors home parents would take matter knew situation would welcomed also So always kept arms door wide open people considered family The author also mentioned would always grateful parents love sacrifice important family friends So conclusion mood warm loving learned real meaning family learned loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "An often-debated topic is whether it is the responsibility of or others to financially support elderly people or individuals themselves should have saved money for their retirement. In my opinion, being a farsighted person is very crucial in this society. However, governments and other people should also give a hand in this regard to elderly people. In the following paragraphs, I would justify my support in this regard.\r\n\r\nBack then it was a convention that the last-born son should stay with his family after marriage. He was responsible for the financial support of the family, and his wife was responsible for doing chores and taking care of other family members. As a result, nobody was concerned about their future. But the situation has been changing differently, and today, children become self-centered. They do not want to sacrifice their comfort for taking care of their parents. So, for this reason, people should be concerned about their future and try not to be dependent on others. Looking forward to financially help from governments also should not make a person close their eyes to the reality due to the fact that the situation and legislation of a country are always changing so no one knows what going to happen in the future. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, governments should invest more in practices that are helpful for the aged population. Some basic amenities could be free for them to make sure they could survive without any other income. We should not forget that elderly people were a fruitful tree for our society some days, and try to support them in all aspects to make their lives convenient.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, considering a part of the income as saving for the future could be a rational step. However, the government also has its own responsibility regarded to this matter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, more and more people are listening to different types of music and that make a good effect on them. However, others believe that the new music is affecting in a bad way to the teenagers. This essay agrees that teenagers can be affected gloomily.\r\n\r\nThere are a lot of teenagers who are listening to different types of music in which they feel that the lyrics are related to what they feel or what they had. In particular, in rap there, a lot of people are doing that type of music to express their feelings. This essay agrees that teenagers are being affected negatively. As an example, the rappers are showing one part of the story and singing it which could affect the younger.\r\n\r\nHowever, many agree and feel that recent music can have a useful effect on the younger generation by helping them to focus and relax. Specifically, People are working while they are listening to music to concentrate more. For instance, the students are being affected by the culture that everyone is listening to music, and that makes them want to explore modern music.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people see that modern music can be a good thing for this generation to listen to, particularly to help them relax and express what they feel whitelist others believe that current music types are harming teenagers in a different way. However, we need to be careful to what we are listing because not everything is true and that should not affect us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Emotions are a part of our daily life. We cannot avoid having them, and we cannot avoid seeing them. Humans are able to tell almost exactly what a person is feeling just by a look on their face. We can do this instantly and for the most part subconciously. Knowing how people feel is the first step in social interaction. If someone is sad, you dont want to make that worse by giving them bad news right off the bat. If its your friend, you would try to cheer them up or figure out how to help. The same may be ture for students in a classroom. Often times, online lessons can be boring. This is because the people who make them do not understand what fun is to someone in school. If a computer were able to recognize a persons emotions, and change the lesson based on that, i think it would make learning on a computer much more effective, which is extremely valuable to a students education.\n\nIn paragraph 6, Huang predicts \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Here he is giving this technology a use in the educational system, which i believe could work. If students are getting bored, they are less likely to want to learn about what is being taught. If this algorithim can somehow make the elssons more fun, it would be a valuable tool for education. This could also be a vaulable tool for school counseling. If someone comes in having a bad day, the computer may be able to diagnose the exact emotions someone is feeling. It then can either give an automated perscription, or relay that info back to someone for further analysis.\n\nIn conclusion, i think this technology has a place in classrooms. It provides a valuable tool that could help students stay engaged and willing to learn. It is able to detect what is wrong with someone, and try to help fix it. Although we humans are good at doing this, it would make things much easier if we could perfect a program to do it for us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt Narciso Rodriguez s book home reading last sentence I never forget parents turned simple house home reveals true mood memoir The mood author gives excerpt warm comfort happiness In first paragraphs Rodriguez describes simple apartment first lived really nothing anyone would consider special But memoir goes talks family friends really turned little house home His parents created traditional Cuban home mainly consisted kitchen cuban music traditional cooking always went What really established sense warmth community happiness memoir talks nt blood relative considered family everyone welcomed home All immigrants though hardworking immigrants created closeknit community Everyone s arms wide open speak The great act giving thanks contributes mood displayed within memoir The last paragraphs state Rodriguez s parents came selflessly give children better life even meant struggling personal hardships The author talked admires parents appreciates everything done teachings family traditions welcoming anyone matter background really turn simple house homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus spiritual confident paragraph show hope important part lives In story Saeng foreign chinese citizen touched flattened majestic plants nature living green house She ventures find plants remind home relate past experiences As walks green house whispers pronounces names nature sees Saebba Saeng whispered Madagascar periwinkle tag pronounced How strange see pot Saeng thought Back home grew wild But tour grew time soon relizes missing memories begins cry As reaches home greeted mother II failed test Saeng said Saeng s mother touched comment cheers planting hibiscus In end author shows strong expression writting one last paragraph bring hope emotion represent everyone deserves second chanceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based on the information provided from the article, the idea of driverless cars just doesn't seem all too good of an idea. The surface of the proposed idea is seems to be settled, but beneath that isn't covered too well. Since driverless cars lacks further information of car usage and its presence on the street is just not necessary, the idea has me questioning deeper thoughts and that makes me oppose this idea.\n\nFirst thing to mention is the part where the driver is needed to operate the vehicle due to decisive incoming alterations the car cannot make. This means the driver must be alert at all times just the same way with normal cars. What is the point of a driverless car if the driver is needed? From the article it states,\"Such displays can be turned off . . . and safety is a big concern.\" (8), which this disputes against my question, but there could be an easier way to assure saftey. For example, the cell phone use when behind the wheel of an active car could be more easily taking care of by having a cell phone connection with the car and that the cell phone will automatically disable during vehicle activity. In which could probably could be done with the use of bluetooth or such as that since safety is more important with the atentiveness of the driver.\n\nNext is about safety and liability. To rely on the car to proceed transportation for us is notibly concering. Since it is a daily issue amongst electronically active countries, it has been reported that technology isn't all too reliable. There has always been a problem with some sort of electronic device. So how will we know if this driverless car is safe enough, and if the technology fails, how bad can this corruption be? This seemingly beneficial technology can also cause significant damage to the enviornment or to the safety of humans.\n\nFinally to discuss the car economics. How expensive can this car be? If the car fails it's objective and causes an accident, then what will the deal be behind insurance? Also how will the vehicle itself be fixed if something breaks? To note that this questions can tie together. For example, after an accident can mean much more expenses for the driver and maybe the manufacturer.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless car isn't really a good idea. It may save the amount of gas usage and reduce the chances of accidents, but too many other questions need to be answered. All in all, driverless cars aren't necessary.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If I right news paper childing looking book shoud tacken shelf The reson I say cirlden geting ideads book aproprit I thank mane reson girls geting pragnit young age I thank tack notey book would less girls pragnet I realy thank could work would tack notey books shelf mack law hade sherton age look I would like see chang way look notey book I thank look books notey It would good thang try wiyel I thank woukd work would showin childer would whant babys teenager This way I thank done farist place We would miny probloms frist place The I thank thay thak well hard race chiled young age If would see thans shouldent seenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There Were many moods set memoir one moods happiness Narciso happy family They many friends Were thankful Another mood set Was proud He proud parents cared much selflessness A third mood memoir love Narciso family Were loved many also loved many back His parents arms doors Were open times anybody needed get back feet Narciso grateful great family including extended Throughout memoir moods caring loving grateful happiness Those Were moods set memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Globalization has been increasing for 5 years . Some folks think that the interrelation between countries in business and culture is a positive development . Although , others argued that in this situation countries may lose their internal identity . Therefore , I will discuss both points of view and also give my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand , there are numerous advantages of globalization . Firstly , when developed countries investing development it gives higher job opportunities and declines in unemployment . As a result , there is a significant growth in the economy in both countries . For example , McDonald's gives franchises in India . Hence , there are a lot of job opportunities for people who suffer from low educational qualifications. Secondly , the increasing business and cultural inter-exchange between countries that contain wide perspectives of multicultural\r\n\r\nOn the other hand , some people argued that globalization directly impacts national identities like culture , costume and languages . When youngsters go abroad for their higher studies and business purpose they would forget their traditions and ritual . In the near future particular country 's culture extinct . In addition , the global market invests its shares in developing nations consequently directly affecting small businesses.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my opinion, there are several advantages that outweigh the disadvantages of worldwide businesses. Globalization gives a better opportunity to rise bonds between two nations. Moreover, the interrelation between nations gives a hike in the economy in both developed and developing nations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 5.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "The performance of workers in completing certain tasks is considered necessary. Therefore, it is of concern of many institutions to diminish other factors causing adverse effects to the reputation of the employees including the internal ones such as enthusiasm to complete a job punctually. In this sense, it is strongly advised to consider their enthusiasm before recruiting them to do a particular job. To have high-quality products from a job completed, some experts in human resources have recommended hiring those with high motivation while others still maintain conservative ways of thinking to recruit any worker without considering personal matters. Newly recruited member, therefore, deserves an enabling environment so that a worker can keep pace with the requirements of a vacant position.\r\n\r\nToward both sides of arguments, in my personal point of view, I agree that one should work only for jobs that they like most because of some reasons. Firstly, having joy in the hearts of workers generates such amount of energy to do beyond than just getting paid at the end of a job completion. Such workers can put on more efforts to come up with innovative solutions so that results can be made even more attractive and beyond target. In this sense, not only is the worker's desire being fulfilled, but also an employer is benefitted by having such a quality product. To exemplify, when leading a pneumonia intervention, I was able to save 523 children in Central Lombok over 400 children targeted by the project. The achievement came in such a greater number because I enjoyed the complexity applied to solve for the mortality rate there. Secondly, the happiness derived for executing a job can create a more motivating environment of work so that many workers and other stakeholders can work in much more synchronized ways to reach a single goal. In that stage, a collaboration can be much easier, and operation of an intervention can be even much cheaper. This situation can be coined by having only one energetic worker who is able to inspire others with his/her charisma powered by an illumination of a cheerful conation. To illustrate, when leading each project, I always comprehend a project intervention to internalize the energetic excitement brought-about by the project before sharing it to my co-workers when building a common understanding among us. This strategy has given me more advantage to influence my sub-ordinates with positive energy and therefore, we were all happy at the end because of excellently demonstrating an extraordinary performance in our job completion.\r\n\r\nAll in all, jobs can be an opportunity to be prosperous and having internal satisfaction at the same time. One could not be much happier than having a single job in which wealth and happiness are mounted together.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 3.0",
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