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"content": "Athough cars are an important part of everyday life driverless cars would be an influeintial addition to public and private transportation.Driverless cars would help traversing through traffic easy. However I don't think that driverless cars should be aloud to be driven unless fully tested. The safety of people should be considered while making the cars.\n\n\" He envisions a future with a Public transportation system where a fleet of driverless cars form a public transport taxi system. The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and pffer far more flexibility than a bus. he belives such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" This would be usefull to people around the globe who don,t have cars or cant afford one. Driverless cars can be an important pat of sociaty.\n\n\"As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars...manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe. Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident.\" This Exert from the passage supports my claim that they should only be aloud to be driven if they are fully tested and safe. Laws have been passed in some states to make this sure to happen.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree with Sergey Brin that driverless cars would be influeintial to the future of public and private transportation through out the world. However they should only be aloud to be driven if they safe and fully tested. Lastly I think driverless cars should be manufactured and tested thoroughly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In these 3 sources they're talking about electoral college, I beileve electoral college is a good and smart way to handle elections. AN electoral college is a process made by the founding fathers and they estabilshed it in the constitution. Some people planned on abolishing it, I think thats and i'll show you why.\n\nFirst,I beileve they should not abolish it because its so origanal and whats the reason it needs to be abolished. They're probably planning on making a new system or doing it for a personal matter. Either way, its all depending if the congress and the president himself to agree on this. Overall abolishing a this from the constitution where its been for too long is wrong. Even though this method is not democratic its still not right to abolish this from the constitution.\n\nAnd, I also know why they are some reasons why they wouldn't want this method to be here. In source 2 it stated \"voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of the electors\". Everything depends on the state because it decides most of the voting standards of the whole state. This method can also defy the will of the people, sounds anti-republican and just wierd for legislatures to screw with the votes you jotted down. This practictly almost made JFK not a president apparently he got lucky. Richard Nixon voted aand validated his predidency.\n\nIn a nutshell, electoral college has its upsides and downsides and is still up today. I beileve its an easy thing to say it all depends on opinion and beilefs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It has been frequently argued that urban areas ought to keep space for playgrounds or public parks. I completely agree with the statement as it could bring ample benefits to the life of dwellers and the same would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, if all cities would construct beautiful gardens, specifically for each area, it could have the following benefits. Initially, parks or grounds, which have been maintained properly with flowers and trees would provide the best view. Consequently, they could visit frequently there and get relief from mental stress and fatigue for the whole day. Besides, these places are merely sources of fresh air in developed areas as most of these areas are covered with buildings and roads. For instance, the harmful gases or the pollution exhausted by vehicles could be purified by planting trees since they consume carbon dioxide and exhale fresh air that is oxygen in surroundings, subsequently, inhabitants could consume fresh air.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, human beings could utilise public parks for spending quality time and it is useful for them in plenty of ways. Firstly, children could play outdoor sports on a daily basis and it would provide a plethora of advantages to their health. For example, in concrete areas, they could barely enjoy as they have to play video games or operate electronic gadgets in their spare time, whereas, open places would encourage them to play. Apart from this, adults could go for morning and evening walks, therefore, they could get relief from health problems.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if councils would provide space and build gardens for dwellers, it could provide them with many benefits and they could lead a healthy and happy life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many manufactures are working to make driveless cars more of a reality. The company Google has made driveless cars that are being monitored, but the cars do not need a human to really drive it. Driveless cars are going to change our future. Driveless cars are good on saving gas, have more flexibility than our public transportation today, and can be very effective to human use.\n\nWith cars that need a human to fully drive it waste more gas. Also gas is becoming more expensive and is harmful to our planet. In the article it states, \"driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" This can help a lot with saving money and having to use less gas which can greatly benefit our planet. Without having to always fill up on gas, the passenger can get to their destination at a good time and not having to waste much money on gas.\n\nDriveless cars a far more reliable and flexible than our taxis and public transportation today. With good flexibity the passengers can get to their work place or just anywhere at a good time without having to wait to get on a bus or to catch a taxi. Also with this people would not have to buy cars, cause of the new form of public transportation. It would be much more easier and effective to the public.\n\nHuman drivers can get very distracted, bored, and restless with driving. Driveless cars can help drivers get to their destinations quickly and safely. In the article, some driveless cars cannot go fully without the driver, but when the driver is not needed they can tend to things before they are needed back. For example, children in the back seat would need minor attention which drivers can get distracted and get off focused with the road. With driveless cars they can quickly tend to their children and get back on task with the road.\n\nIn all, driveless cars can be effective and good for human use in the future. With saving money, and not having to use much gas, with having better flexibility on public transportation, and being very useful for human use. Driveless cars can help and should be further developed for the future use. With cars like this anything could be possible, but it is definitly something that can be useful to our everyday life on the roads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, businesses have always tried to make a profit, but companies have to exist some social obligations. I completely agree with this argument that businesses should help to more society than making money. \r\nOn the one hand, I believe that businesses must support in order to survive in a beggarly society. If a company cannot pay its bills or loss of customers, anyone might not be think about such kind of responsibility. However, if business organizations achieved successful, they would invest to improvements, innovations and so on. In other words, almost all companies can only contribution to society if it is in good financial health.\r\nOn the other hand, companies should not be run with maximising profit, they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to provide medical care for low-income families, supply of expensive medical equipment and services, environmental projects and education initiatives. For instance, each company consist of free training course for decrease of unemployment rate. Finally, company bosses should be happy to contribute to society. \r\nTo summarize, companies play a vital role in society. Therefore, it is clear that company masters should never stop from assistance to competitive world. After through analysis on this subject, it is predicted that businesses will always be greater than previous results by social responsibilities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Mr. senator i think we should get rid of the electoral college and change to popular votefor the presidency. I know im not even old enough to vote yet and your probably thinking what is this kid talking about but i dont think it is right to vote for the president of the united states canidate and really not even vote for him. The electoral college should vote for us because believe it or not it isnt always the right desicion sometimes. They say people of age and an american citazen that we can vote then let them vote for who they want they shouldnt have to vote really for an elector people want to feel like there vote matters. The peoples votes should go right to the box and count the votes and see who wins. The electoral college is of no need for the election process we the people can vote for ourselfs please just let us. And i know it isnt really in the writing format the way they want it i just want you to know my oppinoin and i know your probably going to just skim right over this but please if you have the time just please read over this and take the time to understand were im coming from.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus, sometimes called the 'Evening Star,\" is so seeable, that people can spot it by looking through a horoscope. Many people see venus as a star because of its sharp brightness, but venus is actually a planet.\n\nMany people are against landing in Venus, because of the danger it could cause. for example, in paragraph three, venus is stated to be \"Temeratured above over eight hundred degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" But despite all this, the study of Venus is a worth pursuit, even of all the danger it presents. Venus is the closest planet on earth, making it easier if people wanted to land. Just like Mars, venus is known to be an earth-like planet and could have possibly had oceans and supported various forms of like.\n\nAs more technology advances, NASA has a compelling idea to possibly land on venus safely. In paragraph five, it is stated: \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile onditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" This means that there could be a bump-like vehicle used to hover 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian. The vehicle would be a safe thing to use, because it is made for the rocky textured planet.\n\nVenus is a planet that many people call the \"Evening Star.\" Usually, it is so visable, because people usually see a sharp, brightness. It is known to be spotted easily by looking through a horosope.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although Venus has a reputation for being difficult to study, scientists have tried numerous times with unmaned spacecrafts. Each time, however, the spacecraft has not survived on Venus for more than a few hours. The author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" suggests that Venus is a worthy puruit despite its many dangers. The author does this by describing the planet's similarities to Earth, Venus's location in the solar system, and by describing the vast differences between Earth and Venus.\n\nVenus is often referred to as Earth's twin due to its many similarites. Both planets have similar sizes and distances from the sun. Scientists also believe that Venus was once a hospitible planet due to its similarities to Earth. Scientists have discovered that Venus has some features that are similar to those on Earth, such as land formations. Even though Venus is so hospitable, it is the closest planet to Earth and is the quickest travel throughout space. If Venus were to once again become hospitible as it was before, humans could potentially travel there.\n\nVenus has a similar distance from the sun as Earth, meaning that it should be similarly hospitible. However, Venus has high temperatures and pressure which does not add up to the distance from the sun. The temperature on a planet is determined by the planet's distance from the sun and how much heat and light is able to travel to the planet. Since Earth is hospitible at a similar distance as Venus, then why is Venus plagued by severe temperatures? This and other mysteries about Venus are being questioned by scientists, but without the ability to get close to the planet, most exploration is impossible due to the thick atmosphere.\n\nAlthough Earth and Venus have many similarities, their living conditions vastly differ. Due to Venus's acidic atmosphere and severe heat, living on Venus is impossible, while Earth is currently populated by a variety of creatures. Venus has temperatures that average over eight hundred degrees Fahrenheit, while the pressue is about ninety times greater than that on Earth. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any of the other planets, even hotter than Mercury. Venus is also plagued by volcanos, earthquakes, and frequent lightning. These differences may seem confusing because Mercury is closer to the sun and should, in theory, be the hottest planet in the solar system. Venus should also have a surface temperature and pressure similar to that of Earth.\n\nIf scientists were able to figure out more information about Venus, it may provide more information about the solar system and about Earth. Since evidence suggests that Venus was once more similar to Earth, studying the planet may provide insight as to why Venus was turned into such an inhospitable planet, and if it could happen to Earth. Scientists could also potentially develop a way to live on Venus or turn its living conditions back to how it once was in the past. In conclusion, the author uses this evidence to support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its many dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I met best friend kindergarten At time shy looked one another comfort Little know acquaintances made would soon blossom wonderful friendship full good memories plenty laughter Last family took trip grandparents house My grandparents usually used house year home parents decided take advantage empty house Both siblings twenties busy college parents invited attend We excited first time together I many activities planned I could nt wait show around LOCATION The downside trip would driving would car hours I known since used go lot I little I brought along notebook could draw write By time got notebook filled cover cover drawings funny sayings I quoted I odd kind humor think everything funny together It ridiculous thing burst laughing one know Finally good hours later arrived late though unpack therefore I would nt showing around next day That nt mean night nt exciting backyard house pool house order keep someone home one grandparents rent pool house My parents known man named lived pool house None us met heard stories brother lived main house attended college That night mom asked go get dad back yard dinner ready dark outside I made come When got outside saw dad introduced looked exactly I imagined red shorts shoes peach colored tshirt He sandy blond hair pretty scruffy looked like big beach bum quickly made way introduced He pretty nice goofy Throughout whole conversation I could nt keep straight faces CAPS said go wanted teach us handshake made He stuck hand curled index ring middle finger towards palm remaining fingers sticking pinky thumb He gestured us thing We told us stuck hands center standing tapped pinky thumb pinkies thumbs said good evening ran back pool house It odd funny dad I still occasion The next day I took downtown showed around When way back stopped inside craft store I ever When walked looked like average craft store explored little noticed huge section armor helmets soldiers wore Us big dorks decided put put helmets armor stood windows front shop waved people The ladies working craft shop laughing us us laughing We fell laughing hard point people working laughing anymore mad fallen wearing armor They came told us take needed leave We told us By end trip made many memories could nt wait return following year In opinion laughter important relationships healthy means sometimes nt need words express feel This I returning looking forward many new memories laughs shareSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is quite common these days, that government should to use stricter punishments in order to reduce large number of accidents and protect the safety of drivers. From my perspective, this solution may sharply decrease the number of accidents, however there are several other methods to solve this issue.\r\n\r\nThe major reasons, which cause accidents are inattentive focus of drivers and due to save time drivers violate law such as running red lights, speeding or driving drunk. Thus, strict punishment plays an important role in improving many adverse problems related to traffic accidents. These disciplines, such as paying a heavy fine or banning them from driving for a period of time. Additionally government should increase number of security cameras in roads, which can determine the speed and violation of laws. Hence, drivers in order to not get strict punishment would drive carefully.As an example in some countries drivers, who get same punishment, get deprivation of their driver license.\r\n\r\nMoreover, inattentive focus of drivers is another reason of cause an accident. Many people use mobile phones, eat or speak with someone, while driving, consequently it is huge risk of accident. Government should implement some steps against of these, and drivers should prevent do something else, during driving. Strict punishments can solve these problems. Additionally corruption should be reduce in order to decrease the number of accidents. Due to corruption, some people get driver licenses in illegal form, consequently the number of inexperienced drivers increases. There are should be strict punishments for corruption, which can dramatically fall number of accidents.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from my point of view strict punishments would sharply decrease the number of accidents, nevertheless other measures also contribute to heightening people’s awareness and improving road safetySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued by some people that because nowadays people live longer than they used to, retirment age should be raised. In my opinion, I think that companies should use other measures to determine the right time for retirment.\nIn recent years, many companies have set rules for retirment age. This is because these companies believe that when people reach a certain age they do not performe as good as younger employees. As a result, many experianced employees lose their jobs, which can affect both employees and companies. For example, some companies require experianced employees to retire at the age of 60, which can lead to loss of valuable knowlege that can be used to train younger employees. To solve this problem, companies can use different measure to help them decide when to ask their emplpyees to retair or resign.\nOn the other hand, I believe that companies should focus on their employees performance and work quality, rather than their ages. The reason for this is that companies should retain well performing employees, which has nothing to do with age. For instance, companies can monitore their employees work quality as a way to meaure their ability to continue working. As a consequence, companies would have a stronger performance compared to other companies who use age as a measure, this is because they will have experianced and well performaing employees at the same time.\nIn conclusion, while companies uses ages to measure when it is the right time to retire, I believe that other measures such as performance and work quality should be used.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on Mars could never be created by aliens if it had then NASA would\n\nhave seen an alien by now this proves that the face had to be a natural cause. Jim Garvin head cheif of science for NASA Mars Exploration Program explained that even he thought it was a natural cause like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nThe landform he is talking about is a lava dome that is an isolated mesa that has about the same length as the Face on Mars. Jim and his workers have made some success in getting some good photos the first time they tried it, it was winter time on Earth so Mars had been covered with wispy clouds that covered some of the face up. The scientists have worked hard but stopped taking photos after two years on April 8, 200l it was summer time so Mars had been the clearest it could have been.\n\nThey took the photos with a camera of absolute maximum resolution the pixels comparedto the 43 meters in 1976, they were 1.56 meters in 2001. The truth is, is that the Face on Mars is a natural cause on April 5,1998 was the first photos that the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia. Michael Malin's team took photos ten times sharper then the original Viking photos to prove a natural cause. From 1976 to 2001 the new photos prove with the help of there new 3D altimetry NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft revealed the Face on Mars was really a mesa.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think libraries remove books If parents people dont want read type books dont But shouldnt removed I agree books inappropriate bad language thats part book story made When book made way already published shouldnt changes made If story contains certain scene person believes shouldnt book person needs put book back choose another book think appropriate Some people like read stories details picture mind I know I In libraries books inappropriate language scenes discribed certain age I think thirteen older read thats good thing age know things better parents shouldnt worried So opinon I dont think removed libraries On hand movies scenerios disturbing removed Movies whole different thing books They show material described I dont think teens watching They unappropriate disturbing people like I wouldnt want watch front mom dad especially younger sibbling Then opinion If parents okay child children watching shouldnt problem Music isnt bad There lot parents dont want child children listening sertain type music religion believe I totally agree My parents beggining wouldnt let listen music would sing sex curse As I got older didnt care much I wouldnt listen much Im teen I also believe music days appropriate anyone age Some sing doesnt even make much sense In libraries I think music realates books Magazines really problem Most magazines talk beauty fashion tips They horoscopes give advise A lot magazines keep people updated celeberties life style It gossip There mostly older teens grown ups For younger teens kids s appropriate magazines talk younger celeberties This point view things I know lot people dont entirely agree I think I also know lot people agree ll likely give reasons I support choiceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Children’s education has always been a matter of great concern for parents. In today’s world, this has grown exponentially, mainly due to the constant changing world. One of the primary reasons for this, relates to a child’s concentration and small attention span. This essay will attempt to dissect this cause and propose some reasonable solutions that could help with mitigating this issue.\nDue to a child’s small attention span, conventional ways of teaching are inadequate in keeping their interest. In order to get through to a child, it is important to keep their interest for the duration of the study session or class and ensure they view it as a fun activity. Moreover, most schools find it hard to move away from traditional teaching methods such as dictation, using white boards, etc., especially in some developing countries, and as a result fail to engage their students. \nFurthermore, with massive technological growth in recent years, children are attracted towards their phones, tablets, computers, TV, etc. and provide a major source of distraction for them. Many studies have even linked the use of these devices to the release of endorphins resulting in a further dependency on technology. Combine this with the lack of engagement in classroom and education provider’s resistance to adapting to the changing world results in children having difficulties in paying attention. \nThis issue needs to be tackled on two fronts. Firstly, parents need to monitor and limit the use of technology outside of school hours. A structured schedule would be a good start and usage of phones & tablets may even be incorporated into a reward system. Schools should take responsibility for the second front. It is vital for them to coach themselves on changing technology and how it can be utilized for providing quality education to children. For instance, the use of interactive applications, modern teaching methodologies or structuring and creating custom curriculum for each child, based on their learning abilities, interests, etc.\nIn conclusion, it is important to acknowledge and understand the problem, as well as its root cause, utilize modern solutions and creative thinking that caters for the ever-changing modern world. Parents and teachers need to understand children’s interests and how to keep them engaged, while delivering quality education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars that drive themselves? Sounds like an amazing thing right? Wrong, in my eyes there aren't many pros to this not so new advancment in our technology. Yes it may sound good and like something we should persue but I just dont see this being a good thing, here's why.\n\nOne question. Can a car even truly be driveless? They say that the roads would have to be \"smarter\" to even make this possible. That would just be making life much harder for people. That would mean closing multiple roads at a time causing more traffic which leads to more accidents. It would takes years to redo every road to make them \"smarter\".That would cost our already stuggling economy billions of dollars that we don't have to spare. Money isn't even half of the problem.\n\nWhat about our safety and well being? Will these driveless cars prevent accidents from happeneing? What if we do have an accident , who would the blame fall on? I'm almost 100% sure that these cars will not prevent accidents from happening and when they do occur the drive will be held accountable some how. What's the point of having a car you don't have to drive and it still makes the same mistakes as a human.\n\nEven if these cars do become a real thing, who's to say these states have to pass the laws to drive them. I'm going on a trip from New York to Florida I dont want to have to take a longer way because I would have tp pass through a state that doesn't allow these types of cars. It would simply be too much all for a car thats does what i could do myself.\n\nIn closing, the cars we have now are perfectly fine. The technology we have now is already enough and they get us from point A to point B and then some. So why try to fix what's not broken?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why would you go to a planet that is always hot like the sun? Well if you were a scientist you would want to find out for yourself. In fact planets like venus\n\nis extremely hot like the sun. Some reasons about venus, knowbody can land for more that a few hours and temperatures are over 800 degrees fahrenheit.\n\nWith spacecraft going to venus it would be hard for the craft to stay in ine specific area.In spacecrafts for landing the metal of it would melt and burn everything. In paragraph 2 it states that, \"..no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\"\n\nThis means that not many spacecrafts can go to venus because of its high temperatures.\n\nWith the high temperature on venus no person should be able to walk on the ground. Also the temperuture on the planet is like the suns temperuture because venus is close to the sun. In paragraph 3 it states, \"On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,...\" This shows that\n\npeople would burn if they would walk on venus.\n\nWhy would you go to a planet that is always hot like the sun? Well with these two reasons why you should not go to venus beacuse of 800 degree temperatures and spacecrafts wont last over more than a few hours.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The first obstacle safety people The author states Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York This would major problem Another obstacle violent air currents made hard land In essay says Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This quote shows landing would dangerous Finally illegal fly airships low urban areas The text explains This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area shows even everything worked would nt able These three obstacles prevented builders Empire State Building docking dirigiblesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Team sports at school are believed to be the most optimal way to teach children to cooperate. Personally, I disagree with this notion. In this essay, I will explain my justification in detail.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, team sports are incredibly effective when it comes to teaching youngters to cooperate with others. Through a competive environment, players can develop problem-solving skills, self-esteem and strategizing. For example, they can recognize the strengths and shortcomings of each teammate which can be used better to compete against their opponents, especially in sports which have more than 5 participants such as football, volleyball and basketball. In addition, team sports provide a working environment where players work together to achieve a common goal. This can be achieved through verbal communication, body languages and hand signals. In other words, regularly participating in team sports enables teenagers to develop their communication skills which are essential to cooperate effectively.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is important to acknowledge that cooperation skills can be cultivated by other activities beyond team sports. Firstly, communitive learning strategies, group project, community activities and even creative activities like theatre and music can also provide valuable opportunities for young people to develop their collaboration skills. In fact, these activities promote cooperation and ability to work effectively in a group setting. They encourage youngsters to understand different perspectives, value teamwork and appreciate the benefits of collective effort. Secondly, not only children may be inclined toward or have the opportunity to take part in team sports. Thus, it is crucial to create a range of activities and environments that cater to diverse interest and ability, ensuring that everyone has a chance to develop their cooperation skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while it is true that team sports can help children to develop their cooperation skills, I believe that this skill be developed through a variety of activities and environments . By providing a balanced approach that contains all activities, we can effectively nuture the value and skills in cooperating among adolescents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Human expression and emotion is something you see in everyday life. You see people smile and you can tell when someone is in distress. But what about the emotions you can't seem to read? Technology over the years have become more and more advanced.There is a new tachnology called the Facial Action Coding System; which enables computers to identify more emotions of humans. This technology to read the emotional expressions of school students is valuable.\n\nDr. Huang reveals reliable information in how the process of the technology works.The computer conducts a 3-D model that has mimics the entirety of a human face. The model has 44 major muscles that look like human muscles. Phychologis, such as Dr. Paul Echman,and the creater of the Facial Action Coding System(FACS), classified six emotions.\n\nThose emtions are happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. He then associated each of them with movements of facial muscles. Examples would be how the musscle above your eye, called the frontalis paras lateralis, raises when you're surprised and the muscle around your mouth, called the obicularis oris, tightens your lips when you are angry.\n\nYou can easily tell when someone you are close to is acting different. Whether it may be that they are happy that they got a good grade on a test they didn't study for or they are sad that they didn't get the job they wanted. Teachers can also easily tell the emotions of students who are loud and expressive in their words. Even so, it is harder to tell the emotions of someone you aren't close to, and it is harder for teachers to tell the emotions of students who are more quiet and conceited. This technlogy can teachers learn more about students who are truly struggling in their class who are too afraid to speak up, and it can help students learn more about classmates who could need a friend and who want to reach out but can't.\n\nThe first demostration of the technology was how it could read Mona Lisa's face. This machine could not only be used for others in school to read emotions, but could also teach students. Human interaction and phychology is used everyday, but rarely do students learn about it. Knowing that it could read a famous painting's emotion, it can read a lot more. It could read the expressions of the presidens and could read the emotions of people in the renassance paintings, to convey how they felt during that time.\n\nThis new technology is valuable and can be used in so many good ways. It can go from simply reading the expressions of paintings to knowing the signs of certain feelings in students and learning more about technology and how the brain works in cerrtain situations. This shows how far technology has come and how it could give us better understandings of human interaction and emotion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people have different thoughts and beliefs about the true explanation of the \"Face on Mars\" and why each belief makes sense. Some think that it's an ancient civilization, and others think that it's just a unique landform on Mars. Many other beliefs have been thought about too. There are many opinions about each belief, but I believe that it's just a unique landform.\n\nFor years NASA has been studying this object they call the \"Face on Mars\". They have gone through and tried to prove many different theories and havn't been able too. NASA has also photographed the object several times, but it's still not enough to tell them the explanation for it. It has appeared on Hollywood films, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines.\n\nI only believe in one theory. I believe that the object is just a natural landform. There has yet to be any strong facts that the object is an ancient civilaztion, or a place for aliens, so the evidence that the scientists recieve to prove its just a natural landform is right there. Scientists don't seem to be getting any type of evidence that the \"Face on Mars\" is something else besides a natural landform, so to me, the proof to show, and convince people, that it's a natural landform, is that they aren't getting any strong facts, or pictures stating and showing that its something else.\n\nSome accuse scientists of hiding what they do find, because they believe that it's something else, but why would scientists hide it. If NASA had, or has found anything to prove that it is for a fact an ancient civilization, or something to do with aliens they would let the people know because it would benefit them.\n\nThis is my proof to show people that what I believe could absolutely be true. There are many other theories, but this is the only one that I believe, and that actually has evidence to back itself up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph alot different reasons One reason author could concluded story paragraph might try A second reason author could concluded story paragraph probably wanted try make mother proud A third reason author could concluded story paragraph probably really felt really disappointed In conclusion mess something try maybe alot betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time I patient I go eye doctor I rush I running late It appointment I least minutes away place When got basically I missed appointment I wait waiting room long time mother I wait people made appointment wer finished We waited least hour half As I patient I talked phone went internet Lastly I listened music rest time called name In conclusion time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming\n\nAs technology evolves, there are better things that come into this world. Not only are the positive effects from a great technology, but there is also negative effects. Some technologies have more negative consequences than positive. One example of this includes driverless cars. Although they have not officially come out yet, they are still working on it. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Though it might be a great technology for the future, it might not be the best technology to release just yet. Having a driverless car has way to many negative effects. These negative effects include: it could cause an accident and no one is responsible, a person can not enjoy driving, and if we have driverless cars there will have to be new laws that have to be put on the cars that could take a long time and most people do not like waiting.\n\nA new technology always has consequences. One consequence of having a driverless car is that when an accident happens no one is to blame for the accident. In the world there is always someone to blame. That is just how the world works. One day a driverless car hits someone with an actual driver. The world will still have regular cars because not all people can afford such a luxory as a driverless car. Who is the actual driver suppose to talk to if he or she gets hit? There might be no one in the car and what happens from there? If these cars get released, the owner should always be in the car just in case this situation happens. One might say that it is a driverless car for a reason. Where is the car suppose to go if no one is in it? The car has no where to be unless there is someone going to another place. This is just one negative effect of driverless cars.\n\nSome people really enjoy driving their car. The new car smell and the feel of how the car moves against the pavement. The thrill of the speed and adrenaline that the car has. No one can enjoy these feelings if no one is driving the car. Driverless cars might have electronic intelligence, but they do not have any feelings toward what is actually going on. If the world switches over to driverless cars how is anyone suppose to enjoy racing? Racing might be boring to some, but it is not boring to others. Racing is one of the true American sports. People who drive cars for a living really enjoy driving. That is why they have the job. If driverless cars come out on the market, it will put millions of people out of a job and then they can not provide for their family. Having a car that people can drive is very important and if a company takes the joy of having a car and a job away from people, that will be wrong.\n\nOne more consequence of having this new technology will be new laws. Everything great always has to have laws and consequences. Just like anything else in the world, there will be restrictions. One important thing about passing a law is that it takes a long time to get it into actual power. Time is what no one has. Having patience is good, but in a society where everything is moving 100 miles per hour, this law will take to much time to get into action. These driverless cars will need to have many laws. These laws will have to state who is responsible for a crash the owner or the company, where these cars can be and not be, and who can actually be behing the wheel of the driverless cars. New technology can be good, but in this case having a driverless car is obviously not the best idea that America has ever had.\n\nIn conclusion, having a driverless car has way to many negative effects and consequences. From this article we know that if we take away the joys of driving, people will be upset and maybe they will be without a job. We also know that if there accident no one will be responsible and that is not human nature. The world just not work in this manner. Also, new laws will have to be put in place to keep the world safe and are own precious lives. Laws take a long time to pass and patience is not one of the best qualities that everyone might or might not have. To have the power to put in a technology so great in society is awesome, but knowing that people could lose their lives and the enjoyment of having is car is not something society needs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is a worthy because Venus is closer to earth and it's a good planet. Sometime people called Venus is a Evening Star. It's the one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and it's making it simple for the amateur stargazer to spot it. It's on paragraph one and two that saying all the things, how nice is Venus. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioside blankets Venus. When that even more challenging for the clouds for highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. People thought that Venus is a star but it's the planet that by earth.\n\nWhen peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited sight on ground conditions because of the most of forms light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere and rendering standard forms of photography or videopraphy ineffective. The more importantly researchers cannot take like samples thing of rock, gas, or anything else.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my oppion they should use the Electoral college to desied who wins the Election.\n\nThey should always use the Electoral college because it wouldn't be fair if they went by the population of a state, just the simple fact that some states are more populated than other. For instance states like New York, Florida, and California are more populated than, states like Hawaii, Rhold Island, and delaware.\n\nThe electoral colleged should always be the proses they use to elected a President of the the U.S., in my opinion the electoral colleged not only right but fare. Its equal rights and justice.\n\nThe Electore college states that you live in texas it right to voted for your own candidated.\n\nOr in any state that you live in.\n\nThe single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisism in the century; the system allows for us much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of people. Back in1960.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars have always been used to get from point A to point B. That is how the people in society know what cars are for. However, there are other alternatives when is comes to going form one destination to another. Citizens should limit their car usage. It helps with the terrible traffic on the street. Also, there will be no more pollution in the air. In addition, citizens can be able to enjoy the world.\n\nEveryone has been caught in traffic, whether it is going to work or school or meeting up with someone. Everyone has been in traffic before. People can prevent traffic form happening. There is carpooling, it can help limit traffic on the streets. Just like it states in source three, \"...millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" There are other ways to avoid and stop traffic. Not everyone needs to take their own personal car to work. They can either car pool or take public transportation to save money because gas isn't cheap these days. In addition, traffic somtimes end up leading to accidents. There are several people who died in a car accident due to someone speeding because he or she doesn't want to wait in the traffic. However, if everyone just finds another alternative way to get to his or her destination, then no one has to die. Just like it explains in proclaims in source four, \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial, and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emission and improve safety.\" This qoute listed some alternatives way to get somewhere. By doing these things it will not only limit the traffic but the resources and the safety of other people. Traffic isn't a fun place to be in, so find another way to get to his or her destination can prevent traffic.\n\nAir pollution is everywhere we go. Whether someone travels to Japan, India, or South America. There willbe air pollution there. It might not have same amount of air pollution as other countries but there is still pollution. Why? Because there are people who uses his or her personal car not thinking about what happens to the air that they breathe. However, there is a solution to limit the pollution in the air. Limiting car usage or find another way to get to the certain destination. Mr. Sivak even claims that \"A car is just a means of getting from A to B...\" Cars is just a means of transportation. So are bicycles, trucks, buses, traind. However, all these have one thing in common, they are all going form destination A to destination B. Biking, walking, skating are some way to stop the gas from the vehicles from polluting the air. Actually, by using these methods pollution can be reduced. For example source three states, \"...uneven, pitted sidewalks have bee replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic...\" When people don't use his or her car and decides to find another way to get to their destination it helps reduce the traffic.\n\nThere are several people who say that they know what the real world is since he or she travels all the time in their car. However, do people really know the sounds of kids laughter when walking down the side walk or a bicycle bell violently ringing at someone to get out of their way? Not a lot of people know this because they are usually used to their vehicles getting them places. People will argue that they have heard all of those before and that they were happier. But Ms. Walter thinkgs other wise, \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Ms. Walter has been walking on the streets and she hears the swish of bicycles and the talkative children and occastional a distant motor. These help people better appreciate the world that they live in because not everything will last forever. In addition to this, less cars means more people walking which means that several people will end up walking pass a shop and look what is inside. For instance in source three is explains, \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed through the city; uneven...and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" It helps by walking to find new stores or restaurants people never heard of.\n\nSeveral people believe that the only way to get somewhere is by car. That isn't necessarily true. Skating, walking, biking, car pooling or public transportation can help get anyone from point A to B. Yes, it will take longer on foot than by car but it helps the environment, it stops from the air getting all the gasoline form the cars. It is faster than being stuck in traffic. Someone who is biking to school can be five minutes late while soneone who is took their car and got stuck in traffic can be an hour late. Limiting car usage is a way that everyone can explore the world than being stuck in that four or tw door car. Limiting car usage has its downs but it also have its perks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Everyone knows that traveling outer space can be risky. Some many even say it is danergous. Others may say that we can come up with better technology to improve safety when traveling other planets in outer space. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author gives their support to the idea of exploring the planet Venus.\n\nTraveling Venus would be dangerous in many ways. For one, it is the second planet closes to the sun so it would be extremely hot. Next, the air pressure would be quite hard for humans to handle as well. In the passage it states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" This clearly gives enough information to say that these conditions are more extreme than what any human can handle.\n\nA way we could be able to visit Venus is if we had better technology. NASA has had quite a few ideas for sending humans to Venus. In the text it says, \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" By using this sort of vehicle humans would be able to make the trip survivable.\n\nThe author of this passage seems to be very open and supportive of the idea of studying and visting Venus. In the paragraph 8 the author claims, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovations.\" From this authors statement we can infer that they are on board with the idea of the travels to Venus and that we should not like dangers or doubts hold us back from being able to study this planet. Although it may be challenging we must not let that stop us.\n\nAlthough there may be many conflicting dangers and concerns with space travel, it is possible. As the author said, we should not let doubt stop us from discovering a great planet. We can come up with the technology to some day visit this planet. With the correct technology anything can be possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many researchers are working on innovations that will advatually allow computers to enter Venus crusail atmosphere and one project lasted three weeks.Now Nasa has taken an likeing to our sister planet. Venus which is the hottest planet in the solar system even though, mercury is closer to the sun. Nasa has decided that tempertures of Venus are to extreme for astronauts to explore, but they did come up with a some what better solution. See they choose to instead, of trying to land on Venus they wolud just hover 30 miles or so, over all of the dangerous storms and other atmospheric dangers.\n\nSo they decided a safe way of doing this and this is why I would support their idea. You see they decided instead of wasting money and technology that would just use older more sturdy tech. Which will in turn, keep all of the researchers safe.\n\nThat why I say why not because they would be learning new ways of preventing downfalls upon Earth such as green house gases and more.\n\nplus we would be receving more intell on our solar system and on how are sister planet got in such a state that it is in now, like the unbreathable 97% carbon dioxide atmosphere or how it is hotter there than on mercury which closer to the sun.\n\nSo should we edure the challenges of exploring Venus,Earths sister planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Builders faced many problems dirigibles dock empire state building The first problem faced wind top building When Navy dirigible Los Angeles tried dock building wind would nt allow get close enough without moving control like hitting another building This made impossible dirigible dock Los Angeles gave Another reason builders faced problem dirigibles dock empire state building law said airships fly low urban areas This law would prevent dirigibles coming near building therefore would nt able dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is called an evening star and is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,It is named Venus. Venus is the second planet in our solar system it is proved that it is a very challenging place to study and It is also the closest to earth.\n\nEvery mission to venus has been unmanned for good reasons because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours this explains why no spaceship has touched down on venus in three decades. Venus had a lot of analogus features like earth like rivers, valleys, mountains and craters.But looking at venus it has more dangers than worths even if it is one of our options if we consider visiting the nearest planet.either that or Mars.\n\nIt has a thick atmosphere of 97% of carbon dioxide which is considered toxic and harmful to humans .The clouds are highly corrosive sulfric acid in the atmosphere and the temperatures average is over 800 degees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our own planet the conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth. It also has the hottest surface in the planet after mecury. Venus was once like earth before it was covered with oceans and it could support various forms of life just like earth that why it is considered a planetary visit. Scientist are looking for a way to make mission to venus possible .They found out that it won't\n\nbe an easy condition,but if humans stay out of the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way it will be survivable for humans.\n\nNASA is still researching other ways to survive venus but for now it is dangerous other researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.The author says that \"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" so we should expand our knowlegde and not limit ourselves about the dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author s story happy gratefull Happy even though new country came purpose living culture past family family My mother father came country couage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind family friends careers country loved Also greatfull sees parents could happy I always gratefull parents love sacrifice I warmth kitchen humble house cuban feast always filled air scent music life loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this article, the author talks about the dangerous it presents in Venus. Venus is Earth like planet, it supports some forms of life. It has some valleys, mountains, and craters, similar to Earth. It would be a great option for space travel. However, the author discusses that there are many challenges to study Venus.\n\nVenus is almost impossible for human to live. The atomospheric pressure in Venus is 90 times greater than it is in Earth. The temperature is 800 degrees fahremheit average. The author says that, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes makes researcher harder to approrch.\n\nAuthor did a good job of showing specific number to makes reader easier to understand his idea, such as showing 800 degrees or 90 times more. Also, he showed \"dangers\" by making many comparasion to Earth, which is very familiar to us and it ade easier for us to understand.\n\nIn conclusion I think author well supported his idea. The author first showed why it is worthy to study Venus. And then, he discussed what type of dangers are present.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars may seem like a good idea, if it works. But what are the negatives, sure being able to tell the car where you want it to go and then just being able to sit back and relax the whole time would be nice. But on the other hand would it really? Driverless cars mean that we rely solely on technology to keep us safe and get us to where we need to be and lets face it, technology rarley works perfectly. I don't think that driverless cars are practicle because of safety hazards, money concerns, and it goes against our cultural norms.\n\nSafety is the main concern when it comes to driving, I mean most of our laws concerning driving is about keeping the driver and possible passengers and pedestrians safe. But we all know that there are always going to be people who brake those laws and cause a safety hazard for everyone else on the roads. But is a driverless car really the answer? I dont think so, when does technology ever run perfectly all the time. The article states \"...traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal to even test computer driven cars.\". So relying on technology to safetly get us where we need to be in a timley manner and in one piece is just unrealistic. How often do GPS systems take you to the wrong location, or how often do the brakes on cars go out? Too often to be putting our lives in the hands of these technological systems.\n\nMoney is another big concern, because even if we were able to fix all the little bugs in the manufacturing aspect of it, how much would these driverless cars cost? Could they be put into a reasonable price range for the average Americans? Whats the point in even imagining them up if the average American could never actually posses one? So though in the begining it may seem to open up many job oppertunities for the american people as a whole, in the end if they have to close down factories or out-source the jobs then what's the real gain? Because how many American dealerships actually manufacture their products in America? Few to none.\n\nAnd lastley our cultural norms, in American when someone turns 16 they get their license, now though this might not be the same for everyone, for the majority it is. So what happens when suddenly thats no longer possible because there are no more drivers needed? Suddenly a huge mile stone is taken out. Its a right of passage, something to signify the freedom they are able to have now that they are growing up?\n\nSo in conclusion, driverless cars, though really cool in the bigger picture, are probably going to be more work then they will really be worth. I dont think in a practicle stand point that they should become something we see in our day-to-day lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The number of cars and the usage of fuel is increasing dramatically every day which causes environmental issues. Some argue that if the price of fuel is increased, then the environmental issues can be controlled. I completely disagree with this statement, because this is not a practical solution for all environmental issues.\r\n\r\nFew people think the usage of fuel is the main reason for all the environmental problems which may be because of some propaganda. Primarily, the inflated usage of private vehicles leads to the release of carbon monoxide into the air which leads to the greenhouse gas effect as well as gradual global warming. Secondly, the utmost utilisation of natural resources to produce fuels is an irreversible one and it causes irreparable damage to the earth. For example; the amount of coal mines is decreasing exponentially.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the reasons for environmental problem are not only because of fuel usage but also many others. For instance; water pollution, the construction of large buildings in sensitive areas and deforestation are examples of other causes of environmental issues. So, it is not possible to control environmental pollution only by reducing fuel usage. Despite it is a sum of many activities on different areas of the earth. In addition, if the cost of the fuel increases, people will buy the fuel by giving that price.\r\n\r\nIn summary, some comment that environmental problems can be controlled by escalating the fuel cost of vehicles. Whereas I entirely disagree with this, because the reduction of fuel usage is not only a reason for all the environmental problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It's a good idea that the author is creating an idea about build and engineering driveless cars, but is it really necessary? The idea is good but what if something bad happens like something could wrong with the engine, or the stearing wheel could lock in place while the driver is trying to take control of the car when he/she is getting in a situation. There's a bunch of things that can go wrong.\n\nThis idea of driveless cars is good because that way the drivers dont have to do as much anymore they just sit back the only time they'll do something is when they are about to get in a situation. In the article it says \"the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" that means that cars in the future are going to use less fuel. That's anither good thing about this idea is that cars are going to use less fuel. Some companies are already thinking about the idea of making driverless cars. One major thing about this idea about making driverless cars is that it's going to cost a lot of money.\n\nIt's going to cost a lot of money to make these cars. It says that in the article \"in the late 1950s, Gerenal Mortors created a concept car that could run on a speicla test track\" so I'm saying that the rode are going to have to be different now. These cars could be smart like they will need to have sensors to be smart. Driverles cars probably won't be toching the floor, they could just do something with the ground that way cars won't have to touch the ground.\n\nIn some ways the cars cxould be bad. Like something could happen with the engine. People could lose control if they are trying to stop. Something could go wrong while they making it. There's a lot that can go wrong.\n\nOverall this idea is a good one it just has it's advantages and disadvantages. The future could probably be better with driverles cars. I just think that this a good idea, and that the future would probably slightly better with these cars, becasue we wouldn't have to use that much fuel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are becoming an increasingly popular topic as each day passes. There are many people that have been waiting decades to see this previously thought work of fiction to come to life. However, there are many people who are opposed to the idea. I am one of those people. Driverless cars sounds very futuristic and to an extent they seem like a brilliant idea. But there are some things involving it that I just don't trust.\n\nFor instance, if driverless cars are developed within our society, the Human race will become more or less obsolete. People need stimulation everyday, and driverless cars take that away from us. On average, people spend more than 3 to four hours in a car a day. Operating a car takes skill and practice, not everyone is allowed to drive one for the heck of it. You have to take tests. Driving a car provides the person with stimulation, keeping them aware of their surroundings. It also helps multitasking skills, like holding a conversation with someone while you're driving.\n\nI'm not going to say that driverless cars would be completely bad for society, because that would be a lie. There are indeed some things that would benifit society if they were implimented. In the article it says, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" I'm not against those features as long as there is some human interaction still there.\n\nDriverless cars may infact be the furture, but would it really be a safe future? There are criminals with amazing technological capabilities that have the ability to hack into almost anything. So if all cars become driverless and only operate with a machine, then there's a huge possibility that your car and maybe even your mother's car would be hacked. A hacked car can't be controlled by the computer itself anymore and only responds to the commands the user controlling it is giving. Currently, there are no systems in place that protect someone's car from being hacked and controlled. In fact, there have been a few cases of that happening in recent years.\n\nI admit that driverless cars sound amazing, but I believe the dangers outstand the opportunities. At any time, the government or the car companies themselves, would be able to stop your car. You might be on a highway or you might be on a back alley way, regardless you might get seriously injured if that happened. Seeing as there are no laws yet on driverless cars, people can basically do what they want with them. It would be anarchy.\n\n\"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakes know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" This is very true. If driverless cars become a thing, the driver would become less alert. So if the car malfunctions and you have to take the wheel suddenly, the driver may not know what to do. If driverless cars are implemented, will driving lessons become obsolete?\n\nAs of right now, driving classes are mandatory for anyone who wants to drive or at least own a car. You need a license, but you may not need one anymore thanks to driverless cars! The driver will esentially become another passenger. You enter your destination and off you go! Will there be any sort of \"new license\" in the future that will let people know if you are able to buy and \"operate\" a driverless car? I don't know. That wasn't even discussed in this article.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are too much of a risk when it comes to safety. No, I do not think we should have driverless cars. In the future I may be able to be persuaded from my current position, but I would need substancial proof to indicate both the safeties of the cars\n\nand the dangers of the cars. If the amount of safety the car has outnumbers the amoutn of\n\ndangers the car has, then maybe my opinon might sway in a different direction. For now however, I am sticking with my above statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When go library think going place good influence Your thinking send kids s going bad things Most people go library study use computers But people I went library saw racest books adults would find offensive especially afracan american The thing people would also go check books sutdy old times s offend people Some books infromational people need study learn past doesnt happen Another peroblem people adult books parents defantly dont want children looking checking thoughs books But noone stops checking books really anything I believe libraries age limit checking certen books The last thing music bad language kid check even trying hard Most parants sheild kids good use dirty language go comunity plase listen anything causes peopblem Personially I think gives library bad name therefore get little business You know parent really would nt want kids grabbing racest adult books music would like government take books music library I believe vote see could thoughs books amd music removed atleast put adult section back My main point essay either need voting goes library need start censioring books put library make accessalble comunity The side library would get mor customers means government would make moneySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The chart indicates information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by eight regions. Clearly, three regions contribute to global wealth remarkably higher than others, while the five regions' distribution of wealth is all less than five percent.\nTo begin with, these three regions, North America, Europe, and Asia-Pacefic can be seen much high percentage. Specifically, it is close to 35 percent, 30 percent, and nearly 25 percent, in North America, Europe, and Asia-Pacefic respectively. Noticeable point is that North America's population is the sixth highest. In contrast, the distribution of wealth percentage reached a peak of nearly 35 percent.\nSecondly, China has the highest population. Specifically, it is close to a quarter, while the second and third countries have approximately 15 percent. In contrast, the distribution of wealth is not so larger than other countries. Although Europe's population is 15 percent and the distribution of wealth is 30 percent, the percentage of distribution of wealth in China is approximately three percent. This is only one-tenths, compared with Europe. Another noteworthy point is Latin America and Caribean. This is the only region the percentage of the population and global wealth is not significantly wide. It is more than six percentage of the population and around four percentage of global wealth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Would you join a seagoing cowboys program? Just imagine how good of a idea this would be. It's a good idea to join because you can visit many unique places, experience adventures, and there is travelling if you work.\n\nFirst, you can see many unique things during the Seagoing Cowboys program. You can also visit unique things while traveling, and find unique stuff during this program. This proves that you should join this program.\n\nSecond, you can experience adventures. You can experience adventures by going over the oceas. You can slso experience adventures by taking care of the animals. This is another reason why you should join Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nFinally, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becasue there is traveliling if you work. So you work to experience unique places and things. Also experience adventures and all you have to do is work a little bit. This is the final reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nIf you join this program it is a good idea because you can visit many unique places, experience advcentures, and and travelling if you work on the ship. So you should really consider joing this program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think it was create by aliens, and why is because when Viking 1 spacecraft was going around and taking picture if Mars for it sister Viking 2 and they had have found a look-a-like human face on the planet called Cydonia. It had looked like a humans face with a shadow and it had a nose, mouth, and eyes. In 1998 when we had the MGS fly over the face on Mars, it was cloudy on April 5 when we took a picture of face on Mars. When it was 2001 we when though it again and it look like it form as if isolated mesa and about the some height like the face of Mars. Now sthat we had improved on the MGS we where able to look at the face on Mars better than we did on 1976 and 1998. People believe in it so much that radio shows, books, Magazines, and it was even in a hollywood film. It felt that it was so true that it had grocery stores check out line haunted for at least 25 years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to know what a Seagoing Cowboy is? Well, today you a going to learn what a Seagoing Cowboy is. You should join the Seagoing Cowboy progam because its a progam that delivers Animals, Food Supply, and or car parts. The Seagoing cowboy program was started in World War 2 it offically launched bussiness with the UNRRA to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nIn paragraph 1, it states that,\" Luke Bomberger had no idea that his life would change soon after his High School Graduation. He was working two part-time jobs when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a Cattle Boat.\" Also in paragraph 2, \"It was 1945, World War II was over in Europe, and many Countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. UNRRA hired \"Segoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nNext, In August 1945, the received their orders to report to New Orleans. They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece-with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nLuke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which mean he could be drafted for military service. By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips the most of and Seagoing Cowboy\n\nThis is why i think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys Program because they help people with the food supply, water, and many other thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars were created to transport humans to their desired destination. I see no need for driverless cars when cars were ment to be driven. Why do we need driverless cars anyway, we don't know how reliable the technology is, the driver still has to remain alert, and no one knows who to blame when someone gets hurt.\n\nComputers crash everyday, elevators breakdown, escalators stop escalating. Technology breaksdown. If all of these things can happen everyday who's to say something like that won't happen to these cars. The brakes could stop you right in the middle of a busy intersection or the Google car wakes you only 2 seconds before you run into a semi-truck. \"For the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\", exactly they \"mimic\" humans which is unreliable.\n\nWhat is the point of a driverless car if the human driver has to stay awake. The only reason one could see a driverless car as useful is if they were only created so that the passanger could sleep. This also means that the cars aren't equipped to handle difficult situations and if they aren't advanced enough to handle that, then they shouldn't be allowed on the streets. \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" What if you are a deep sleeper and you don't hear the warning?. You would die, that's what would happen.\n\n\"It's your fault!\" \"No, it's your fault.\" That is what judges across the country, across the world would be hearing if the driverless car went to market and had an accident. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" Who is at fault, the person who made the car that malfunctioned or the person who interviened trying to save themselves and the car only to have it backfire, making things worse? This would then lead to a long trial draining both parties of a lot of money. Why would anyone put themselves through that? Just so they don't have to drive themselves places?\n\nPeople should not subject themselves to a product run on unreliable technology, that keeps you awake, and leaves you bankrupt at the end of the day. There are other luxuries in life that come with less conditions. Try them because continuing the development of driverless cars is pointless.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today, teaching art in schools is the subject of dispute between people who regard art as really necessary for children and individuals who find art a waste of time. In my view, art does not play an important role in a child's development.\r\n\r\n Many people consider that art should be taught in schools since children need it to change and make fresh their brain. Because art can be a factor for them to learn how to concentrate their mind on one thing. During art lessons children are required to focus on one particular thing, so art can help to learn to pay attention to also their other necessary works. As a result, they can be productive in their other subjects. Therefore art is vital for everyone, especially child's development. \r\n\r\n On the other hand , there are also people who believe art subject is not required from children in school. It can take the child's most time which must be spent on their more crucial subject as realm-related ones. As a result of this, they do not have adequate knowledge of their vital subjects since they spend their precious time on art. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, nowadays, while many people argue that art is not a key factor to a child's education and should not be taught in schools , others believe art has a big influence on a child's school life, and later also. I am of the opinion that art should be taught in schools as the second statement is that art should be taught in schools as it can help children's improvement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is Venus dangerous as people are making it seem ? Venus is the planet the is closest to Earth . Venus has a very hot surface actually hotter then what the Sun's is . NASA is trying to find a way to study Venus without anyone getting hurt even if it takes technology to depend on it . Venus being thought of worst then what it really is .\n\nVenus is the planet closest to the Earth . First , with Venus being the closest planet to the Earth it could be more of a easy travel to anf from . Next , with Venus next to Earth Nasa people or scienetist can travel there learning new information. As an example , they may learn if Venus are having causes of climate , eruptions or rather if things from Mercury are coming down from Earth . Lastly , Venus is actually Earth's twin making almost as if it could be like Earth when scientist get there . Venus the twin of Earth almost just like it .\n\nVenus having a very hot surface can affect trying to go there . First , Venus isn't even the closest planet to the sun but yet still the hottest . As an example , the closest planet to the sun is Mercury and Venus hits higher numbers then Mercury . Next , Venus has very high pressure which could be cause volcanoes , earthquakes and plenty more explosions . Finally , Venus may have the bad temperatures but you can lanf on the surface . Venus temperatures may make it a dangerous place to explore or travel to but it'll give new information about the planet .\n\nNASA trying to do anything to try and figure parts of Venus out . First , as much as eveyone else wants to know what's going on at Venus NASA does to . As an example , NASA looks at old technology which was actually able to survive on Venus . Secondly , silicon carbide has been sent there actually lasting two weeks with nothing happening . Fianlly , NASA wants to meet the challenge of going to venus becuase it could clear up all the confusion of what's really going on , on the planet . Is NASA going to give the facts the world's waiting for ?\n\nVenus actually not being very dangerous . Venus being the closest planet to Earth changes up the game because it can help get even moredetails about Venus depending on how long it takes to get there . Venus having a very hot surface actually has nothing to do with people get harmed or going there . In the text it states \" ships can land on Venus . Now as my last detail comes into play NASA is studying Venus very hard realizing Venus doesn't really have anything wrong with it . Stating in the text \" in a chamber silicon lasted for two weeks \" . As bad as everyone wants Venus to be it isn't .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "obstacles builders went threw using hydrogen flammable Another one wind top building constintly shifting due violent air currents third one back ship would swivel around around mooring mast last least law airships flying low urban areasSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is true that many towns and cities built in old ages for our ancestors exist in the modern world. These historical towns cause several problems and methods should be taken to solve them.\r\n\r\nTowns with a long history have led to a few troubles. Firstly, houses might corrupt and be dangerous since walls and other materials might not be stable after a long period. It is likely that electric wires can not afford the huge burden brought by so many domestic machines like air conditioners and refrigerators. Secondly, roads might not be wide enough for vehicles to pass through, because they might be constructed for pedestrians and horses. It is inconvenient for dwellers living there to move around. Thirdly, there might be little space for recreation and infrastructures, especially those places used to the city centre. \r\n\r\nInhabitants and governments should carry out solutions to these problems. To begin, citizens living in the houseware are supposed to examine it thoroughly . Once a crack on the wall is found, they should repair it. Electric facilities should be renewed to make it a safe place. Besides, it is the authorities' duty to get cities well planned. On the one hand, they might relocate some citizens to make room for roads and leisure areas. On the other hand, they might preserve the original appearance of towns and turn it into a historical site.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the existence of old towns and cities have caused ample problems which require the efforts of individuals and governments. Repair, renew and rebuild is necessary under different circumstances.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator:\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME im from a lil town called LOCATION_NAME.And I saw where you was trying to see if yall should keep the Electoral College or change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. Well I think you should change it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.\n\nSo I think you should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.Because if you elect a president by slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Thats not fare to the other person that was running, because what if the other person was winning and they lose because the slate of electors elect the person that was losing. For example Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\n\nSo Mr. Senator can you take what i told you and try and change Electoral College or change to election by popular vot e for the president of the United States. Because it's not fare to the other runner up.\n\nSinserly PROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The made mood memoir nice feeling story motivating story It s nice actual story family moving establishing home The family nt live like friend like brothers sisters nobody excluded family It s motivating even wer nt race would still lend hand people clearly need Everybody community acted like like blood related reality nobody Everybody cared love eachother like parents brothers sisters The mood memoir nice feeling motivating storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are a few reasons why it's good to not drive your car. One, is that your car emits so many greenhouse gases. And greenhouse gases are baad for the enviroment. Two, is that it promotes the use of bicycles and/or public transportation. Three, you really don't need your car anyways. Those are the reasons why I say that it would be good to limit car usage.\n\nMy first reason why I say we should limit car use is because of the greenhouse gases we are releasing into the air. In article, \"In German Suburd, Life Goes On Without Cars\", paragraph 5, it says, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United Sates.\", which means that 50 percent of the greenhousse gases that we release comes from cars.\n\nMy second reason why we should limit car us is because if we use cars, we would use something else to get around like a bicycle. And if we use a bicycle we wouldn't be releasing any greenhouse gases.\"It has seen the construction of 118 miles of bycicle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor.\" stated in article, \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\". This is prety much encouraging us to use bicycles instead of cars.\n\nMy third and final reason why we should limit our car usage is because we really don't need cars. We only use our cars to get us from place to place, stated article, \"The End of Car Culture\", paragraph 40 which says \"A car just a means of getting from A to B when BART deosn't work.\" And why use a car, when you can use public transportation instead.\n\nNow that yo know my reasons for limiting car usage, maybe you can try doing it. Limiting our car usage will give us less air pollution and give us a reason to ride our bikes instead of driving our car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the present day, the natural environment is inflicted negatively due to the rise of consumer goods manufacture. This essay attempts to identify the causes of this matter and provides a solution for diminishing the consequence to the environment.\n\nThe harm to the environment derives from the companies’ release of vinegar and the lack of people’s awareness. For the former, with the dramatic growth of population, more and more products have been manufactured in order to severe individual purposes in many aspects of life. This act leads to mass production which requires enterprises to operate at full capacity to satisfy the considerable consumption of billions of people throughout the world. If those businesses are run without stopping to handle chemicals from manufacturing, these tonnes of chemicals, which contain contaminating substances, will be discharged into the rivers and beaches which causes adversely to the water habitat. Furthermore, another cause can be mentioned as the deficiency of residents’ awareness. Some people hold the view their consumption on clothing, plastic products are not sizeable so they do not need to take action to recycle after using those products for once. For that reason, their waste can be the pollutants to the environment from the processing methods, namely burning which results in air pollution. For example, it is recorded that around 90 million pieces of garments are thrown away annually across the globe. \n\nBesides that, there is a vital solution which should be taken is to give obsolete things, especially clothing and books to charitable organisations so that they can provide for the needy, such as the minority. Each year, there are parts of people in the mountainous regions who are short of clothing and education. Thus, giving old clothes, and books to charity not only reduce pollution but also helps underprivileged people to have better lives. \n\nIn conclusion, while the removal of vinegar from firms and the lack of awareness are the causes of goods manufacture, utilising obsolete items for charity is what could be done to alleviate the environmental problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The message coming from these four passages is that with the amount of driving it's causing what some say \"smog\". The \"smog\" is caused by the amount of cars, all the exhaust is bad for the air. In the first passage, second paragraph it states that some people gave up there cars. There's not a lot of driving and there's only two places to park, a large parking garage at the end of the development and if someone buys a space for $40,000 which comes with a home.\n\nIn the second passage \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" they enforce a small ban on driving to clear the air of the city. During the couple of day that this occured 4,000 people were fined for $31 for not leaving there cars at home, along with the 27 people who had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine. After five days of no cars, the smog in the air had decreased. After about a week the smog had cleared enough for them to clear the ban.\n\nIn the third passage \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" it says they went three years with only taking buses or taxis for the Day Without Cars in a city of 7 million. If people drove cars they were fined just like the people were in Paris, only in Bogota it was a $25 fine. Some people in the city of Bogota state \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\". New places have been built, old things were made new in this city, it seems to be a better place there.\n\nIn the last passage \"The End of Car Culture\" It talks about the driving and the cars in the US. Studies show that Americans are buying fewer and fewer cars, less driving, and less people are getting their licenses as the years pass by. Since 2005 the number of miles has been dropping year after year. many sociologists believe that if this type of pattern continues it will have benefits for the carbon emissions and for the enviorment around us.\n\nAs you see there are many differnt things going on around the globe that have to do with the amount of driving and how it's not entirely good for Earth. In some cities the amount of smog has decreased, some cities have become better with new buildings and things that were rebuilt. In one of the cities people enjoy the \"Car-free days\" it relieves stress in people and helps clean the air of their enviorment. There are many different ways that limiting car usage is an advantage to us. Less stress, cleaner air, and a better enviorment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The development of a driverless car is a unique way of transportation. A car that would actually drive someone to their desired destination safely and surely would be an incredible breakthrough of human engineering. I belive these cars would never be devloped for the daily life of many busy people.The cars would be too expensive for everyone to own, and the thought of one trusting a robot to their precious life is not worth it\n\nThe companies making these cars vison that these cars would fundamentally change the world but which direction. Many people wouldn't be able afford these cars for themselves. The technology the cars require are really expensive and high value. Expensive sensors, computers, are going to have to be implemented to a driverless car no matter what. Many people would not buy it and will stick to their own car that they drive themselves.\n\nFinally, there are too many obstacles blocking these cars development for the companies to overcome. Laws and the peoples' trust in these driverless cars are things that would trample down these cars implemation. For example, if a person sees a busy street and is in a driverless car, there would be that thought where fear lingers, his trust would not concrete. People would want to trust their own life to their own hands. Also, the laws for these new cars would be unclear and difficult to create. The safety of the driver is very important and the lack of laws deciding who's fault is\n\nin an accident, these cars should not exist.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In opinion I believe purpose read library Magazines comics books music movies one hundred percent accessible library mainly many people learn many different things many different ways visual leaners people learn better looking observing topic The listeners people would rather something read instead trying read And lastly readers read I know people literate maybe visiting library awhile would help order happen library must something things read many illiterate citizens work way able read I hope understand point view All I m trying make sure everyone chance learn read able read opens many possibilities people havent gotten reading stage yet Why start learning nice calm relaxing township librarySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My opinon on driverless cars is, they are safe to have driverless cars. My first opinon is, they will make the streets safer.All the car accidents that are happening will slow down the death rates for the car accidens. The car will have a human at a human but the person will not actually be driving the car like we do now.The invention in 1980 would be agood help for the driverless car because, it has antilock brakes.\n\nDriverless cars will be a big help to get people places and things will get done faster. By the car being able to brake on itself,steer itself, and accelerate itself it reqiures for the human to be navigation through a work zone. The car will be ready to take any sitaution and be quck to get the drivers attention whenever needed. If the human belives that the car is going to slow we are able to take the wheel at any time needed. By using driverless cars people can have more fun when they go places and get places.\n\nThe law agreeing with the driverless car is was a good idea. In other states such as, California,Nevade,Flordia by using semi-automous cars and a start for the driverless cars.The car being a reliable safe thing will be a help to prove that the driverless cars are a good invention to help humans out.If the driverless car in invented fully then the laws will be changed into different ones.I believe the roads will go a lot smoother and things will bw done faster from the roads being clearer.\n\nThose are my opinons on why i think we should have driverless cars. First reasoning is they are more safer. Then, i think it will help people get around more and faster way.Finally, the law is argruing that the roads will go alot smoother with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The population in various developed cities today has greatly increased markedly today due to the provided conveniences and thus traffic has inevitably become a considerable problem in proportion to the growing number of people. There are several underlying reasons behind this development, such as improper changes in cities, but the problem is manageable.\r\n\r\nThe main reason can be pinpointed towards the infrastructure of cities and the amount of people. Some cities have more people than they can accommodate and this situation also has a negative impact on traffic. So, the traffic problem may not be a priority problem in a city with a small population compared to New York. Since owning a luxury car is considered part of people's prestige and people are addicted to self-comfort, people are encouraged to buy a new car. A second reason why traffic is a huge problem is that the infrastructures of cities are not suitable for the large number of cars. In some cities, the roads are so narrow for vehicles that there is no second option for people to reach their destination. As a result, traffic jams can sometimes stretch to the horizon and people are forced to sit in their cars for hours to reach their homes or workplaces.\r\n\r\nThere is no magic formula to solve the massive traffic problems, but some precautions can be taken to ease the congestion on city roads. One of the most effective ways to solve this problem is to make public transport more attractive to people. For example, the authorities can advertise to people the importance of using transportation or develop the stops of subways, trains or trams. In this way, when people realise that their travel time is reduced, they will be more likely to use public transport. On the other hand, municipalities can introduce various legal restrictions on the number of special vehicles. For example, some people own more than one car, and this number can be reduced to one car. Nevertheless, these measures are not enough to solve the traffic problem completely.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the traffic problem has become one of the biggest problems in many cities due to the high population. The interesting thing about this problem is that there are plenty of places to live all over the world, but people choose to live in crowded cities. Nevertheless, governments can alleviate this problem by making some adjustments.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technology and enhancement in vehicles have come a long way. Each year companies come out with new cars and new features that gives people the desire to but them. Driverless cars have been in discussion for many years and have been worked on for those many years. Corrperations, such as GM, have developed a system that vibrates the driver seat when the vehicle is in danger of hitting another vihicle while backing up. Other ideas, such as the windshield having flashing lights, have also been discussed. But this is just the beginning of driverless cars. Driverless cars should not yet be implied in today's society due to lack of technology developement.\n\nDriverless cars cannot be released into the world because of lack in testing the cars to see if they function correctly. Many states have made laws that provent companies from testing these cars due to safety laws. Another point to look at is how much the driver would actually pay attention if they have a driverless car. If one is behind the wheel of a driverless car, they would not want to operate, but rather do something of importance to themself. If the driverless car is put out there, the driver would not want to have to take over, which they would have to at some points of the journey. Most laws are made to provide safety for drivers, passengers, and pedestrians. If the technology and functions behind the driverless car fail and cause injury, whose to say is at fault? The driver or the technology could both be at fault for causing injury. Of course driverless cars would be convenient and better for gas usage, but our technology is not developed enough to pursue driverless cars.\n\nAlthough driverless cars have been in discussion and worked on for many years, we are not yet ready as a society to begin the idea of letting them on roads. Because of lack in technology developement, safety, lack of testing, and the careless drivers who would be behind the wheel, our society is not ready for this function to be on the road. Yes, the car itself has benifits, but the negatives out weight the positives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There one time year I m patient something I never wait come I got see brothers uncles aunts cousins every body It best time year night next birthdaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "THE A couple weekends ago cusin grandmas house She lives woods bunch quads motorcycles All cusin ride airsoft gun wars build giant forts We planned staying one night ended staying three So first night built fort woods The fort seemed really good time next morning ideas So next morning getting ready go outside work fort He got done went first By time I got half way I heard scream come running fort He yelling MICCCCEEEEE So figued must little problem laughed So I walked see sure enough bunch little running around That end forts ground us The next day decided airsoft wars guns shoot little plastic bb s We alot fun shooting eachother mainly hurt Like I said alot fun I decided try hid little tree He found shot I fell tree broke gun That end wars plus I almost broke leg I guess payback laughing mouse thing After wars ending decided go ride quads There alot trails around house ride He road dirtbike I rode quad I road quad I could make new trails We made really good trails It really muddy wet While way woods long ride I ran gas So I walk way back house gas walk back The last day got early We wanted go look place build new fort This time going make tree fort didnt worry critters We spent time got till time went home awsome tree My granndpa alot wood dos nt use really old build anything never ran woodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Everywhere in today's world, parents or teachers are pressuring kids to do better in their academics. Children also spend a lot of time and they have an interest in a variety of curricula that they might pursue during that time. Some local communities claimed that encouraging teenagers to participate in unpaid community service during their free time would benefit them in the long run. They also stressed how beneficial these voluntary performances are to society. I shall analyze these two points of view in this essay and then offer my own viewpoint.\r\n\r\nTo start with, when some of them attempt to participate in financial duties during their free time as opposed to performing other tasks. These kids undoubtedly have a greater understanding of their obligations in life. For instance, a child who participated in community service was able to make the most of his free time while also opening the door for him to develop good morals. Children have therefore made an effort to complete their goals in these activities in an effective and efficient manner because they are helping to develop their personalities in a positive way.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, such charitable activity has help the societies. These activities open the door to providing and also for those in need, especially where young people are willing to do so. As a result, students are attempting to comprehend the pressing issues facing our societies in order to solve issues and grasp the importance of aiding others.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion there are more benefits for students and the community. Children that attempt to participate in these social activities can gain greater advantages for their future development.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 1976 a surveyor caught a absurd picture coming from the face of Mar's planet. By face, it was literally a face. NASA didn't know how to explain but with the explanation that it was a mesa or some other landfiorm on the surface. Is it or is it not? Many people think its aliens, but let's look at the big picture. There is pure evidence that what you're seeing is a landform and I have some examples.\n\nAfter close survey of the \" face \" NASA has concluded that what we are seeing is a mesa. In the text it says, \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa-landforms common in the American West.\" That is proof that scientists who specialize in this wwork confirm that what we are looking at are just mesas or buttes.\n\nBut really if there was aliens on MArs then we would've seen some evidence by now. If aliens built this then why didn't we see any tracks or signs that the aliens built this thing. NASA has taken photographs of the moon and Mars many times. In those times if there was alien life then I would think that their would be some sort of sign that leads us to believe that we are not alone.\n\nEveryone knows that the alien theory is just fun in games. People just let those kinds of pictures out mainly for the enjoyment of the people. In the text it says, \" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" That shows that NASA just released this photo so that the people would have some entertainment theorizing what this is.\n\nAnother big piece of evidence was shown in this story. In the text it says, \" Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cyodnia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah.\" Thats the sole cause. It was just a mesa that was photographed at the right time. If the shadows weren't there then it would just look like a regular mesa on Mar's surface. Also if you look in that picture you will see other mesas or landforms surrounding it. So that tells you that that area is full of landfroms.\n\nIn conclusion, there is so much evidence showing that this was just a landform. And if you still believe that thi is aliens then you need to look at the facts. Aliens might be real but we need to find evidence that they did this before we go and say that they did. Based on evidence we can conclude that this picture is of a mesa taken at the right time to where it looks like a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed limit cyclist expirenced life threating times adventure The first feature deseret temptures degrees lit bit water tasted like battery acid As tried keep going lost hope thought going die This affected lost hope thought negative things didnt think would make got agility move In story setting affects characters dramaticallySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features affected cyclist many ways one highway sign ROUGH ROAD AHEAD DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT The terrain short rolling hills would make harder cyclist pedal hills would take lot effort energy Also roadblocks at point tumbleweeds blocked path ridiculously large snake These roadblock would danger biker hed manever around losing time energy resulting drinking water No water great danger June hot day risking getting dehydrated There also nobody around desperatly needed water couldntSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my oponion, I think the state senator should not change the Electoral College by popular vote for the President of the United States. I think it should not change because this process consists of the selection of the electors. This is where they vote for President and Vice President as well as the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The majority of the electoral votes is to elect the president. This also makes things much easier because each candidate running for president for your state has their own group electors where the electors are chosen by the candidates political party. It is also helpful because you actually help choose your states electors when you vote for your candidate you are voting for your candidates electors. At the end it makes it easier on the governor to list all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The electoral college is a part of the constitution, it's has been used to decide who will be our president froever as long as the constitution has been on paper. Why get rid of it? Is it because we live in a world where everything is new and improved? Or because it geneuinly does'nt work? Electoral colleges are widely regaurded as an anachronism, and non-democratic method of selecting a president. So why do we need to cange the way we do things.\n\nWhat if something tlike the disaster factor happened again and someone voted for someone that wasnt in their party. Or if an election came to a tie what would happen then the election would be thrown to the house of representitives, where the state delegations vote on the president, because each state casts only one vote ,the single representitive from wyoming, represents 500,000 voters. but the electoral college avoide run-off elections meaning no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. Another good thing about electoral college-SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When I I wanted one thing wold You know girl would want baby ball I want rex toy bigest meanest dinow plant well I little It cool ti could walk talk run bit Ever time I go story I would go toy part story find rex look eyes say you mine one day You know relly want somthing mom says chismist coming When ant comeing till months But I wont months So I thought I get rex befor months I got I clen walk bog better school hopefully work So I ask mom mom I start good stof I get chismast thing week said no get thing chismis I mad I cry But month long I opening gifts time I thought I open gifts I look arond one good time I But I dont see rex I said even thow I like gifts I still dont rex So I sidely walk room My mom came room big box Could I jumped bed fast mono dont see I looked box lot babys doll Then said go stars ther rex looking happy seeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think that the face was created by aliens or is it just a landform? I belive that it was just a natral landform and its just one of them illusions that looks like something but its not. In the passage it said that NASA had unvield the image for everyone to see with the caption \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the ilusion of eyes ,nose,and mouth\n\nNASA believed that people would pay more atention to mars acording to the article \" The authers reasoned it whould be a good way to engage the public and attract atention to mars.\" \"it certanily did\" the faceof mars has become a pop icon it was in hollywood films ,books,magazines,raido talk shows even in haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25\n\nIn conclusion peope today still believe that it was created by aliens but I still believe that its just a landmark on a diffrent planet. What do you belive? Was it aliens or is it a landmark?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A large number of people believe climate changes mitigations if the important duty of humanity, and on the other hand, we should live together with this phenomenon. I strongly agree prevention movement is important to reduce climate change, we as human beings should solve this issue, because it will give an undesirable effect on the environment worldwide in the future.\n\nFirst and foremost, climate change might influence many negative effects on the environment and humanity as well such as the glasshouse effect in one of the impacts of this phenomenon. For example, industrial pollution will improve the carbon dioxide gases and it will affect the earth’s atmosphere. As the result, the ultraviolet light from the Sun is trapped in the earth, and the earth’s temperature will increase slightly every year. The other impact is, the melt of the north and south poles and will affect the sea level, sea level will increase and small islands around the world will sink in the future. As a result, many communities that live on that island will lose their properties or even their lives.\n\nClimate change is an inappropriate condition, humankind will never live together in this situation. Accordingly, the government should develop an adequate regulation to organize the communities to elevate their sense of belonging to the environment. For example, regulation to control the carbon footprint of all industrial companies, or create Sustainable development Goals for all nations worldwide. Thus, it will assist the earth in order to decrease the direct impact of climate change. On the other hand, provides incentives to private or public sectors to establish renewable energy. For instance, the authorities might give extra funding to the industry if werethey able to solar energy systems on their activity.\n\nTo conclude, climate change is an important issue to humanity and communities should take immense action to preserve the environment. All countries, through there, the government should build a rule of thumb to mitigate and create a new way of life without neglecting mother nature. However, this action will be successful as long as people support the government.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people argue that government can get involve in sorting out housing shortage in cities which has led to several social problems. While I agree to this sentiment in general, it is important to understand the limits of state intervention on this issue. I will discuss my reasons in this essay.\n\nTo begin with, there are several factors behind housing problems in many countries. Foremost, the increase in population in some cities have a direct impact on this situation. Consequently, the limited resources available in cities such as land, water and food availability does not matched with the increase in demand. Therefore, it is the duty of the state to find solutions to this, in order to minimize social consequences. A good example, is health officials can take steps to encourage couples to have family plans that do not become a burden to the city, they live in. On the other hand, the government can implement efficient housing schemes in their countries with the help of international agencies.\n\nHowever, there are other parties that can solve these issues effectively. For instance, media professionals have a bigger role to play in this kind of a situation. Actually, they can assist public health officials to educate people on family planning by promoting several programmes in this regard. Moreover, certain charity and non government agencies can provide additional funds to authorities to build appropriate housing complexes in populated cities. In addition, academic professionals can help the state to planning of such housing projects in more environmental friendly way.\n\nIn conclusion, it is clear that limitations of government agencies can be easily overcome by third parties such as media and academic communities to overcome housing shortages in a country. This question, reminds us of citizen's responsibilities towards society as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article it says that technology can now read the expression of a person using a software called \" the Facial Action Coding System\". I think this would be valuable in a classroom because it can read when a student is bored or confused and when it reads that the computer would modify the lesson like a human teacher would. The FACS would also help understand how the student is feeling in the classroom. It could aslo help in many ways by understanding how the students feel about like a lesson that is given or feel throughout the whole classroom time. There is pros and cons to this, the pros are that the computer would be able to a students feelings. Facs would also be able to help out the student if the student is confused during the lesson and would be able to modify it for them. The cons is that the Facs software might also not work at time by reading thier correct emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is an oppurtunity of a lifetime just waiting for you. You would get to enjoy fun, games, travel, and you'd get to help people. You could change someone's life. You could become a hero! This oppurtuntiy is to become one of the UNRRA's Seagoing Cowboys. Seagoing Cowboys travel all over the world to to recover countries that were left in ruins from wars. You would travel on a ship with animals and other cowboys to help people who's life seems to be in ruins.\n\nIt might just change your life, like it changed mine.\n\nIf you become a Seagoing Cowboy you won't regret it. It was a whole lot of fun. I got to meet other cowboys and you never get bored. When I was on board ships, especially on the way back, we played games and had some pretty fun competitions. We used to play baseball and volleyball games in the empty space that used to house animals. We fenced, boxed, and held table-tennis tournaments. It was a lot of fun!\n\nYou get to help people; this is a big reason to join. You get to become part of an organization that helps people who need it, desperately. You could become their hero. Becoming part of something like this changes your whole life. It made me selfless and aware of the world around me. That awareness has been with me through my whole life. Although I'm no longer a Seagoing Cowboy, I'm still aware of what's happening to people around the world and how lucky I am. I let international students and exchange visitors into my house as an effort to help.\n\nYou get an amazing expereince along the way. I got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, see Europe and China, tour a castle in Crete, see the Acropolis in Greece, and even get a view at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I wouldn't have been able to have any of these experiences if it weren't for being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nNow that you know all about the Seagoing Cowboys program and the benefits of being part of it, go sign up! You could be a person's hero. Mend the hearts of those who feel like they have nothing left. Feed those who hunger with no way to recieve food. Take the oppurtunity of a lifetime, and, maybe, it will change your whole life, like it changed mine.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are becoming a thing of the future. Why is that? The world is upgrading itself. From people driving their own cars to the cars driving them. Now is that just plain laziness or is it something completely amazing.\n\nGoogles cofounder Sergey Brin envisions these driverless cars. he has a vision\n\nwhere these cars rule the future. Now are these cars a good thing or a bad thing? Mr. Brin sees theese cars taking less fuel than the cars we use today, but would that really be the case? Would they really use less fuel? Driverless cars would probably use more fuel to keep the car going. How would the car know where you're going anyway? It's not you.\n\nHow would the car know exactly where to take you. By a\n\nGPS? GPS's aren't always right, no matter if you even put in the right address. GPS'S can always get the adress wrong. Then where you be?\n\nAre these driverless cars really a good thing for the future of the world? Do you think the worlds future should have driverless cars or do you agree that driverless cars are pure lazy. GPS's might not work. The car could break down on you easily. Is it reall a good thing to have driverless cars?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Sharing Our Future with Technology\n\nDriverless cars will be more of a negative thing for the human race, because they spy on you, lead to distractions, and would add on to the idea of the \"robot takeover\".\n\nDriverless cars would not be a good thing because, yes they do the work for you but they will be spying on every move you make in the vehicle. In the article it says that \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". That is in invasion of privacy. A person's car is like their second home. There could be a time where something need to be said and left in the moment. Not recorded for later use.\n\nAnother reason the Driverless Cars are not a good idea is because people would get bored in a car waiting on their turn to drive. Humans usually try to preoccupy themselves when passing the time by and waiting on other things. Driverless cars would in a way increase the risk of accidents because people may try to text or do something that will distract them from paying attention to when they are being signaled to take over.\n\nThe last reason that the invention is bad is because, the cars could be a great addition to the \"Robot Takeover\" that is so popularly expected. A great amount of developement has to go into these cars, because they are driving themselves so they have to be really smart. They could possibly turn into the expectation of the takeover that will put humans to end. It is not smart for humans to create something that will demolish us.\n\nThe idea of driverless cars is a bad idea because you would not have private moments in the car anymore, they lead to distractions, and could possibly be a factor in the end of all man-kind.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I dont much patience Ill tell story time I It sunny day outside school I homework So I invited friends going landslide skate park We home wasnt My mom said CAPS hes two minutes go him So I mad I writing note put door reads CAPS go late Sorry time next time CAPS But I signing note pulled That story I patientsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program is the best thing to join. The program has been around since 1945 after World War ll was over in Europe. At this time many countries were left to pieces. To help these countries 44 nations joined together to from the UNRRA. UNRRA then hired the Seagoing Cowboys program to help them out. In my essay, I will say some reasons why joinging the Seagoing Cowboys program is a great idea.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is fun and you get to meet new people and try new things.The program gives you the chance to see many different parts of the world. Without signing up to join the program you probably would never this chance again. Also, you get to have a lot of fun with new people you meet along the way. Another benifit that the program offers is you get to see many other cultures and you get to try new foods. This program offers many great things.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program offers great opportunities to many people. You get the opportunity to take care of many different animals, which is always a joy. You get to help people in need which is a special thing you get to do. There are many other benifits to being in the Seagoing Cowboys program, but here are just a few that are the most exicting.\n\nI know that some people think that feeding animals on a boat all the time is not fun. However, in your free time you get to tour many places where you visit to sight see. One time I got to go to Greece and saw a beautiful Acropolis. So this option lets you not be bored because you are feeding animals while on a boat.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a great program to join. You have fun while helping others and yet still enjoying what you are doing. Overall the program offers many great opportunities and is a lot of fun.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One opeadatire Is I little kidwas patience mom cousin cindy talking my cusin told mom I done talking told wait yourturn I wait turnWhen talking I ask mom I go bike I told mom I ride bike without training reals My mom came I going sargeyI waiting sargeyThe sargey kind So I waiting entell doneIt funSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One time spending night wanted sleep oustide tent always tryed seeing eachother anytime possible go back boarding school alot So mom set tent us deck ate dinner grabbed things went ouside She phone boyfriend phone mine best friends like two best friends dating two bestfriends closer ever My boyfriend get phone work phone I started saying really funny things started laughing hard snorted time still phone boyfriend At point cracking laughfter started laughing even harder saw laughing pee d self phone boyfriend For reason forgot phone started laughing even happend going around one surprised mom nt come yell us loud When looked saw pee d self yelled CAPS god pee d self funniest thing dont think ever laughed hard entire life So boyfriend finally got attention said CAPS probably go take care got phone She really embarassed mean would happendSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over the affection of robotic machines in human society. While some claim that robots are very necessary for humans’ future development, the opposite makes a statement that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. I would contend that both views are valid to some expands however invention of robots do more good than harm\r\n\r\nWITHOUT A SHADOW OF A DOUBT, robots PLAY A PARAMOUNT SIGNIFICANT ROLE IN housework-related. Nowadays, robotic machines can run errands. It is a life-saver for people who are hectic-scheduled people, they have no time to do the household chores. We can mention the robotic vacuum, which is cited as a compelling example. It makes house spotlessly clean without putting effort by humans. Hence robots are necessary in people’s lives.\r\n\r\nWHILE THE IMPORTANCE OF ROBOTS IS WIDELY ACKNOWLEDGED, the negative influences of robots on society ALSO EXIST. We all know that robots have a lot of potential but on the other hand it can lessen the importance of human labor workforce , leading to people becoming redundant. The experience of technological transformation makes people who are white-collar workers not determining components, this movement is inevitable. THUS, ROBOTS also have bad aspect on SOCIETY \r\n\r\nIN MY CONCLUSION, ALTHOUGH robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society but the significance that robots bring to humans' lives is still overshadowed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom could be valueable. It can help actors learn how to make a smile or frown look real, it can help a teacher figure out if a student needs more help just by scanning his or her face, and it can help us figure out what our friends are realling feeling.\n\nFirst, movies are a big part of our life. It is never fun to go to watch a movie and see that the actors arent good they either look like they dont know what they are doing or they try looking sad and actually look like the happest person on earth. with this technology like the arthour says \" Drama coach, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage\". This shows that even just practicing a fake smile for a movie or for when you are on stage could make the play seem better than it already would be of the actors didnt know how to put on a real smile.\n\nFacial action coding system can also be helpful in the class room so when you have a kid on the computer you can see if they are strugging and they need more help or if they are powering through it and need a bit more of a obsticle to go through. like in in the article \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confussed or bored...it could then modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This could help a teacher out cause they cant always tell of a student is having trouble. they also dont always see the when they are doing their work at home. This is like the teachers second hand man when coming to helping students get the help or challenge they need.\n\nLastly, you may have a friend that you cant tell if they are sad or happy because . The article states \" Most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc\". You never if a friend is putting on a fake smile to keep you from getting down, but thats just hurting them even more so you sometimes have to do things yourself and get them the help they need.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that being about to see someones emotion just by scanning their face could be very helpfull to get kids the help they need or the challenge, helping a friend get through a rough time, and making movies better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If i was to choose a side or not to have driverless cars, i would say yes.By reading \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" i figured out that they are really excited and more better to drive. driverless cars can mimic the skill of a human at the wheel, and it has a sensor to sense thing on the driverless car.the sensor help detect and response danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers, it can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, by allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.By letting the sensor taking over these items, we can be more calm on the road, but still be wacthing the road as well.The driverless car can handle driving at speeds up to 25 mph,But the people can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills,like riding through work zones and around any accidents that occur.i think we should have these driverless cars because it makes people more relax and hands on to more things than worrying about to keeps your hand on wheel and not being able to do anyhting.If we have driverless cars in the world then we can not worrying about keeping our hands on the wheel and being able to go places more quicker without an accident, and we know that the sensors are helping us as well to make sure we dont attwnd to any accidents.Driverless cars should be able in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many times I patient one long ago In fact yesterday I taking meap I sat finished read drawed It absolutely boring lame seconds felt like hours It terrible I didnt complain I sat nothing And probably worst time I want talk couldntSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When meet new people like alright cause everyone needs friends like people say friends come go true friends wouldnt go I remember met beautiful girl name friend knew wanted life people say love cant come true turn upside cause way around love doesnt go love comes I remember first talk like god telling one knew save getting hurt love first looked eyes like felt way heart feeling falling apart told heart wouldnt broken half cause ill replace mine told one want one need one got ta succed wan na know like one else know name forever like tattoo heart apple tree never cut wan na stand mountain show im different guys im faithfull like one else Your amazing way woundnt change nothing cause love everything love eyes love smile love personality told take chance know threw much dont let come said yes happy like dream came true guy show like others guy thats always faithfull honest truly never lie cheat So told shes superhuman happy came life said changed whole life changed mine heart belongs one else cause one heart heart toy brake told never cold always warm day night arms body temperture told wishes came true one im finally lonely got told like shes finally wifey I told every girl dated played heart true living life way wanted one day told girl even planet one thats always honest faithfull truly trust never lie cheat told ill keep looking special girl say found cause girl name told never sad million tears running precious little face told always one phone call away two one happy said paradise whole wide world finally made dreams come true want one else trust ill trust love never die never fall love always alive love stand high tell hits sky high tell sun doesnt shine anymore I m crazy shes crazy key heart open finally know love feels like made bad days good days never brake heart wouldnt brake mine either told sun doesnt shine forever doesnt shine look stars cus still shining star biggfest one sky To never gone always heart love strong sitting phone waiting call always To friend friend angel girl shawty wifey everything till world ends realize love strong ment You re friend need im glad found true story everSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article,\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick S'Alto, They've created a machine called the \"Facial Action Coding System\" that can sense human emotions by their facial expressions. The machine reads your face and uses muscles to sense what you are feeling. I am against the Facial Action System And I will tell you why.\n\nIn the article it says,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Kids might not be comfortale in a classrrom that has a machine that can identify their emotuons. That is very nerve-racking and would make it hard to focus and learn. Is students can't focus then this machine will not be helping.\n\nThe article also says,\"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" If we perform this everyday, why do we need another machine to do it? It is a reason that it is an emotion and Not actual words. Kids might not want anyone to know how they are feeling. This machine invades peoples privacy and should not be allowed.\n\nIn Conclusion, this machine has a lot of abilities that may be too advanced for us. Kids want their privacy this \"Facial Action Coding System\" Will effect it. This Machine will make then nervous instead of focused like they should be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "For the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" I am against the development of these cars.\n\nI am against the development of these cars because, It's driving itself by computer program.\n\nIt may not seem all that bad but programs can crash and get hacked, if everyone had a car like that I wouldn't buy one because look at the accidents we have people speed through red lights when you have a green light.\n\nI love the feel of driving i wouldn't wan't a computer to do it for me.\n\nFact of it is, what if you get in an accident who's fault is it? the car or you? That can cause major sueing, car payments ans sueing of the car company who made the technology.\n\nBack in paragraph 8: Yes, this could be helpful when needing to call or text someone, but when people text they take there eyes off the road and even with a driverless car crashes can still hapeen. Too much technology is taking over our world because it comes to an end where that's all we have now, we keep advancing to the biggest and fullest.\n\nCould these driverless cars help support hadicaps, people with arthritis who can't grip the wheel very good?\n\nWhat about young children? Kids like to be ambitious, they could hop right in the car not knowing how the vehichle works, but that's ok the car is driverless computer programed.\n\nIn conclusion this isn't the best thought out technological program. You need to write up pros and cons and go from there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It's already hard enough expressing your own feelings, but trying to figure out someone else's can be a real challenge. Feeling so many emotions at once can make people angry, frustrated, or even depressed because they don't know how to handle it all. Emotions are hard to explain, after reading the article and seeing that a computer can read them in the blink of an eye than it might be safe to say that it could help people more than they think.\n\nThe article says that the new program can tell even if you're faking a smile or pretending to be happy. Being a teenager, knowing when someone is unhappy or pretending to be happy can be big thing. They might need to talk to someone but don't want to show it because they don't want to seen as weak or feel more emotion than they already do. If teachers had this technology in the computers to know how a student is feeling in class it could be a huge adavantage. That way a teacher can try and talk to the student or keep a close eye on them to make sure they get better. The article also says \"... you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\". It's easy to fool someone with a look but this technology can analyze each muscle in the face and tell how the person actually feels. Isn't it important for a teacher to know how a kid feels? They can't pay attention as much if something on their mind is taking most of their attention.\n\nWhen walking into a class, you can tell what kind of day it will be by seeing everyone's expression on their face. Throughout the day though, there can be so many different emotions going around. From a bully you can feel scared, sad, worried, depressed, and so many other emotions but you can't say anything because you're also afraid of the situation getting worse. Anyone can fake emotions and people do it everyday just to get through it all. When no one is around though that's when we can let it all out and hope the next day will be different. How this technology can help is seeing if a student is feeling the same everyday whether it be a personal problem, bullying, feeling alone, or even depression. It can get worse everyday, but if a computer can see that it is faster than anyone else and alert a teacher that something is wrong then thats one kid saved from a whole life filled with those emotions. It could prevent the emotions after being bullied, after a loss, or even suicidal emotions. The hard thing is trying to connect with that person so they have the trust and strength to open up.\n\nIt's not easy opeing up to someone. People go around saying \"it isn't hard\" or \"the sooner you do, the sooner you'll feel better!\". What people sometimes don't think about is that how hard it really can be. The person trying to help can't feel those emotions; they don't know what the other person is thinking about. The student could have a hundred thoughts going on inside their head but they don't wanna talk about it because if they do then they have to deal with all the emotions at once. It's easier to hold it in than letting it all out. The technology is great and could help a lot of kids in need of someone or something to show how they truly feel. When a teacher sees how the kid feels, they can try in every way possible to make that kid feel safe so they feel compfortable opening up. The article says that the software reads the different muscles in our faces to show how we feel even if we are faking it. It's like a lie detector for emotions! If a kid had someone walk up to them and ask if they are okay then the kid might lie; this program could help show what's wrong without the kid saying a thing. It shows all the emotions the kid is feeling and then someone can help get down to what is making them feel that way.\n\nPeople feel different emotions everyday, and we, as people, make those emotions. We can create laughter to make someone feel happy or we can bully to make someone feel like they're nothing. How people feel is something that seems only humans can explain, that no tech in the world can feel the same as we do. Fortunetly, this tech doesn't have to feel, all it has to do is show what we feel. All we have to do is decide if we want to give it a chance or keep putting on that fake smile.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders empire state building deal many obsticles trying allow dirigibles dock The author tells us readers dirigibles actually enormous steelframed balloons envelopes cotton fabric filled hydrogen helium make lighter air While builders trying droop mooring mast top empire state building s flat roof In excerpt tells us reader thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building frame The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building foundation nearly eleven hundred feet All though dirigible light air could mess frame building Another obsticle buildors face German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire New jersey May The owner empire state building realized much worse would accident happened New York populated downtown Most dirigibles outside united states used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Even though empire state building nt get put moors top building still became world s tallest buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph inform hole meaning For example returned felt great bc came back belonged One reason vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding meant coming back probably best thing could doneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Integration of robots with AI technology has become increasingly common in recent years. While I believe this trend will continue in the future, I am also convinced that certain jobs are unlikely to be easily replaced by this advancement . This essay will discuss why AI will not be able to take over jobs that demand human expertise . \r\n\r\nIn many industries, a staggeringly increased use of artificial intelligence has replaced human workers greatly, Moreover , many suggest that this trend will persist in the foreseeable future. Many businesses are turning to artificial intelligence, due to the better and less costly procedures it can carry out. For example, the world's highest-ranking car factories have adopted the use of machines with AI technology that can execute 90% of the production procedures, thereby minimizing the majority of human labour, therefore, reducing substantial costs. This phenomenon will lead to major job layouts in many industries in the very near future, and result in devastating losses for many. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it will be immensely challenging for AI-powered machines when competing with humans in certain aspects, simply because of the fact that they can only be programmed to act in certain ways. Many jobs in existence necessitate a ‘human touch’. These include professions such as therapists, artists, judges and so on, all of which require intricate moral principles that AI does not possess. Simply put, even though AI is known to excel in performing basic repetitive tasks, it is very unlikely that it has the ability to replicate the complex ways of human minds, meaning that it is not powerful enough to diminish the significance of human importance in specific industries. \r\n\r\nOverall, while there is a likelihood that artificially intelligent robots may take over a considerable portion of the human workforce, many jobs will remain unaffected by this transition. Primarily due to its inability to replicate human nature.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered about the Face? The one so talked about, movies and books were made about it? In the late 90's, there was a picture taken of a rather human like landform. But get this\n\n-\n\nit wasn't on Earth! The discussion of whether the landform was alien made or a common Cydonia Martian mesa was huge, and is still fret over today. But lets get real, the possibility of the landform being alien made is surreal - with our advanced technology today, we would know!\n\nAbout twenty-five years ago, an interesting picture was found with one of NASA's spacecrafts, Viking 1. From the region Cydonia of the 'Red Planet', Viking 1 had taken a picture of a large face that stretched almost two miles wide. The landform became better known as the Face. When the picture was released to public, it was a big deal. Scientists had begun to figure it was just another Martian mesa that just happened to have unusual shadows. In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", paragraph two even states this. These shadows caused many people to assume it looked similiar to some kind of Egyptian Pharaoh. The general public, although amazed by the coincedence it had been, couldn't have ignored the sayings of a scientist, especially when all the facts come into play with the logical explanation - not aliens!\n\nEven with the scienctists saying what was undeniably the truth, people demanded proof. Few scientists believed the chance of the Face being put there by exterestrial beings, but getting images became one of NASA's priorities. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia to take ten times sharper images of the Face. In the paragraph seven, you could find that thousands of people were waiting, waiting for an image that may decide what exactly the Face had been. After the image had been taking, not everybody was happy. This resulted in many suggestions as to why there was no proof of aliens having made the Face. It was winter and hazy. Reading through paragraph eight of the article, you can also find many of the excuses used to try and find proof of aliens exsistence.\n\nWith many complaints under their belts, Mars Global Surveyor went for another go. This time on a cloudless summer day. On Apri 8, 2001, they were sent in for another look at the Face. The images, taken again, did not show any proof of aliens. To many conspiracy lovers dismay, the images were rather like Earth Landforms. Instead of alien markings, they found that the Face is equivalent to butte or mesa. Even common to landforms in the American West. In paragraphs ten, eleven, and twelve, you can read through the precautions taken to find even clearer images of the Face, though nothing had changed. Without any other evidence to go off of, what could the theorists say?\n\nOthers, such as conspiracy theorists, say that NASA has found evidence of the other life forms. They may be right, stating things such as this. But they also say that NASA is withholding this information. While that may be a good idea for other people, NASA's budget says otherwise. With the information of alien exsistence out, their funds could go up a rather lot. Would it be a good idea to hold this information to the public? Especially when it will not only be informing the people, but also helping NASA discover more about our universe.\n\nAs stated the possibility of us not coming across alien lifeforms with todays technology is unlikely. With all the precautions they took to prove (or in this cause, disprove) alien exsistence, it is highly unprobable that we missed them. With the scientist, looking over the images twice, and then checking them, the answer is in lockdown. And even if we were, sharing the information is in almost everyone's best interest. If it had been aliens, we surely would have known, wouldn't we? Unless, of course, the aliens could were invisible. How about you tell THAT to the conspiracy theorist?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, governments around the world have been calling on entities to pay closer attention to food waste due to its far-reaching effects, both nationally and globally. Given that decomposing food waste can cause a whole host of environmental problems, identifying the reasons is key to finding solutions.\n\nThere is a number of reasons a large amount of food is wasted every year. First, since meat and vegetables are perishable, they always have best-before dates or expiry labelling on them. This means that if people don't consume them quickly enough before they go bad, food waste will occur as a result. Second, the way humans prepare food or cook also contributes to food waste. For instance, if people prepare or cook more than they can finish, the leftover will be more likely to be discarded.\n\nNevertheless, there is a variety of actionable solutions to tackle food waste. First, inedible foods or the leftover can be donated to farmers who can use them to feed livestock or animal. This would not only benefit the agriculture industry but also help reduce the environmental burden. In addition, instead of diverting wasted food into landfills or incinerations, humans can harness them for recycling purposes. In fact, organic matter such as fat and oil can produce renewable energy, such as biodiesel fuel, playing an important role in combating climate change.\n\nIn conclusion, although addressing this issue may appear challenging, individuals can take steps to diminish the amount of discarded food gradually. By simply donating food scraps for farms to live animals and recycling them into biofuel, humans can make a big difference in their environmental practices.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story cyclist starts lot confidence complete whole ride But left first town riding needed water stoped fork road get water pump tastes like battery acid Then progressed trip came sign said Rough Road Ahead Do exceed speed limit Joe Kurmaskie pg This part trip made challenging making face rough roads mountains cross sucked water Then came last mountain saw sign gart store So arrived got water got directions man best map So see going mountains sucks water cyclist relieved got water endSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story setting affects cyclist many ways He tries get directions people asked really didnt know talking Thats careful ask Then needs drink dosent work well water ends tasting like battery acid Then cyclist begins way finds difficulty road The difficulty road The road bad condition must slower speed limit At point felt like gon na die Lucky found bathroom drank sinkSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe driverless cars are an excellent idea for the world. Who wouldn´t like there to be less crashes and accedents. The diverless cars can also prevent people from crashing. In the article they stated that diverless cars aren't really diverless that humans can still take control when the car is in danger. The diverless car can save lifes and even money from having to fix your car when you crash or have any other accedent. Also people can benefit themself with the diverless cars.\n\nI believe this is a smart idea because in passge 2 they stated \" their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash \"that's something that can help alot with accedents. Another reason is that it helps people to keep track on the road because the driver is watching the road and the car is watching both. Another thing they said in the article was that they have cameras in the back now. Why do the cameras help? They prevent you from running into someone or into another car. The back camera helps you see what's in the back of your car or who is in your way.\n\nIn passge 9 it states that \"that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Do you believe that's true? I don't believe it's 100% true, Why your probaly asking. I don't believe it's true because of drunk drivers and people who are on their cellphones. When a person is texting or doing anyother thing on thier selfones they aren't focussing on the road. The diverless car will warn you when the car is in danger. That's a good thing because it can prevet people from crashing. I'm not saying it's 100% sure from stoping you from crashing but it's 50/50.\n\nDriverless cars are an excellent idea for the world. Diverless cars could lower down the percantage from people having accdents. We have the great techonolgy to help out the world why not use it on something that is going to help alot of people. Also it might lower down the percentage of death because of the smart cars.\n\nDiverless cars could be the next big thing if poeple would only think about all the accedants that have happened in the world. This idead could help everyone save money and save a life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This passage is talking about cars an how it's polluted. Then how we \"diving ban to clear the air of the global city.\"(10)How many cars are on the roads?\n\n\"Almost 4,000 divers were fined, according to the Reuters. Twenty-seven people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine.\"(12) \"That's easier to imagine than a car-free Champs-Elysees.\"(13) \"congestion was down 60% in the capital of France,after five-days of intensifying somg. Rivaled Beijing,china,which is kown as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\"(14)\n\nThe gasoline that was blamed was diesel fuel.\"Since France has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67% of vechicles in France. Compared to a 53.3% averagof diesel engines in the rest of Westen Europe,according to Reuters.\"(16)\n\n\"Car-free dayis spinning into a big hit in Bogota.\"source(3)Millions of Colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday,leaving the streets of this of capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\"(20) To me that's a good idea. With only buses and taxis permiited for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. This goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violattors faced $25 fines.\n\nThe End of Car Culture. Out of all that I care about what's going on in the world. We all should this is a place we live,breath,eat,sleep nad play on. Do the right thing try to make a differentes in the world around you.\"With all these changes,people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.\"(36)\n\nFinally I think sould happen peolpe should stop polluting the air that we need to breath. Because it's harmful to atomhisphare. If that gose we all will go with it. Everyone should do something nice for are mother earth. Witout her we all wouldn't be here today. How much do you care about her?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you every wanted to go visit Venus or just see it through a telascope? Well NASA have been tryign to go and see Venus, and sent robots and other things there to take picture or recording what is going over on the planet. The are a few problems with sending humans to Venus and things could go wrong if we are not prepared to go there. But here is a few problem with sending humans there.\n\nVenus is very common to earth and some call it our sister. It will be very hard to try to have humans walk on planet Venus. In the text it says that \"On the planet sruface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenhit, and the atmospheric, pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". That means it is going to very hard to withstand the temperature on Venus surface.\n\nAnother problem is that in the text it say that \" Beyond high presure and heat Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land.\" What that mean is that is very challenging to send human on Venus and it could destroy the space ship and other things NASA sends.\n\nEven though Venus has though things as well as earth they both are still very much in common. Studies have shown that Venus has have largely oceans and could have supported life on the planet just like Earth. But still Venus do have some landscape features just like earth. Venus have valleys, mountains, and craters all the same as earth.\n\nTaking a trip to Venus will be a challenge and it will happen some day. NASA will some figure out a way to get there. But Venus is still a little different from earth and dangerous. Venus do have some simliiar like features as earth do. And the planet will remain earths sister.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you believe in aliens? Some people say to have evidence and proof that aliens are real. Today I will talk about a particular piece of evidence people are said to have, ''The Face on Mars.''\n\n''The Face on Mars'' is a natural landform found on mars that resembles a human head, but people belive it's an alien landmark. ''The Face on Mars'' is a landform and not an alien because, in the images in the beginning it looks like a head but as technology developed over time and they were able to get clearer pictures it looks more like a landform.\n\n''The Face on Mars is a landform. I say this because if you look at the beginning pictures it looks like a human face, but towards the end it starts to look more like a landform. In the middle of the article it starts to talk about how in the beginning it look liked a face, but the article states, ''April fifth nineteen ninety eight when Mars Globlal Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper then the orginal Viking photos. ''That is proof that back then their cameras weren't as developed and that in nineteen ninety eight there technolgy wasn't perfect, but able to get clearer pictures to prove it was a landform.\n\nIn conclusion, ''The Face on Mars'' is a landform and not an alien landmark because in the images you can see at the beginning it may have looked like a face but towards the end of the pictures it looks more like a landform than a face. When you look at the pictures, I believe that in the beginning I would have believe it was an alien landmark because it does look ike a face. As we see in the pictures it does start to look more like a landform because there technolgy develops so they can get a more clearer picture.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no doubt that news is a vital part of our daily life, however, some people believe that newspapers and watching television programs are not connected with people and it is a waste of time. I completely disagree with the above notion, following subsequent paragraphs will elaborate on my answer.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there are many people around the world who watch the news and read newspapers as their daily habit, because people need to know what is happening around them. To illustrate, it is not only one country’s news as the world is connected people watch and read the news that is spread globally. As an example, individuals got to know about the Covid 19 disease because they were watching television, if people ignore the media articles still they would be suffering from the outbreak. Hence, newscast in both ways has a connection to people’s life as it provides daily information around the world and it keeps humans updated. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are many opportunities for younger children and other businessmen because the information which is spread through news articles improves the knowledge of children and adults which is important for their future. Secondly, business managers and owners get to know the status of the economy through the press and different programs. To exemplify, in Sri Lanka almost every student get to know about their starting and last day of school from the news. Therefore, children develop their knowledge skills regarding their education and business people always stay alert to the economic changes around the world since they affect them. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I completely disagree that people have no connection to news, because without the proper information delivered through programs and papers people will never get updated about the world and children’s knowledge will be at a lower level about common sense.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College has worked for many years but is becoming unfair to the average, everyday citizen. I've recently analyzed the following articles: \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even best-laid defences are wrong\" by Bradford Plumner, and \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" by Richard A. Posner. The United States of America should change to a popular vote for president to benefit the nation as a whole.\n\nIf we use the popular vote system, the nation as a overall unit will have some benefits in return. In, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong,\" by Bradford Plumner, it argues, \"voters vote not for a president, but for a slate of electors\". This statement is very much true. Citizens may think they vote for president, only to realize that he or she is chosen for them. The worst part of all, most don't know who the electors are. To strengthen, in, \"What is the Electoral College\", by the Office of the Federal Register, it claims, \"the meeting of the electors where they vote for president\". If this comes to be true, why even let citizens vote? Under this system, thier votes don't contribute to the presidential election. The presidential election should be by popular vote of the people.\n\nHowever, the Electoral College does have it's benefits. In, \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" by Richard A. Posner, it indicates, \"no voter's vote swings a national election\". This will allow the electors of each state to decide which president if better for the particular state. One voter's vote could choose the wrong president that harms the nation and doesn't help it.\n\nIt is clear to see that both sides have their own pros and cons, but the nation should use the system of popular vote. This allows the people of each state to choose which president benefits them.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "The illustration below is represnting the parts of a neuron. A neuron cell consists of four three parts, these are the Cell body, Action potential, and the Terminal buttons.\nStart with the Cell Body, otherwise known as the soma, it has shape of small ball in its center with tree-roots like lines surrounding it. These lines are called the Dendrites, and theu are responsible for the communication between the neurons. The Dendrites send and recive messages between neurons when physically contacting with each other.\nThe second part that forms the neuron, is called the Action potential. This section of the neuron consist of the Axon and the Myelin sheath. First of all, the Axon, which is formed as long line extending from the Dendrites, is considred the communication bridge between the cell body and other neurons, muscles, or glands. The second part og the Action potential, is the Myelin sheath cylinders, which are connected with each other as a chain. The Myelin sheath is responsible for covring the Axcon for protection and speeding up the neural impluses.\nLastly, the last part of the neuron is the Terminal buttons, this part recives the neural impluses from the Axcon and form junctions with other cells to send the message.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Hey, I'm Luke. I'm here to tell you about the Seagoing Cowboys program. I was a Seagoing Cowboy myself. It was a very unique experience. On the plus side, I also had a lot of spare time. I got to see Europe and China. My friend and I got to help a lot of people during our time, too. There is also time to play around on the boats after you unload all the animals. I loved to play volleyball and baseball. Also, we played table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling.\n\nThe program helped open up my eyes. It made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs. It might be a little hard at first ,and rough, but you'll get the hang of it. After all that, just think of how good you'll feel after knowing you've helped people. Signing up for the Seagoing Cowboys is a great opportunity for you. If you like to have spare time, help people, and have a lot of fun, Seagoing Cowboys is the job for you. Participate today!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 2.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "The table compares different percentage of people from urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities between 1990 and 2010.\nOverall, people from the two areas were more likely to do reading both in 1990 and 2010. Meanwhile, in 1990, reading and playing were the two highest activites for them. On the contrary, reading and playing photograph had become more popular in 2010.\nBy 1990, we can see clearly that 61% and 71% of people were like to do some reading in urban and rural areas respectively, which took the highest rate to other three activities. However, playing photograph seemed not so much popular in both areas, with only 7% and 14% of adults respectively.\nTurn to 2010, things had a llittle change in the percentage of playing photograph which became the second highest rate among people's four different activities, with 17% and 24% of people respectively. Of course, reading also take the first place of the whole activities, with the same rate of 78% inSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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