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"content": "In the recent times, the idea that artificially intelligent robots will take over jobs is gaining traction. While it is perfectly possible for computers to perform menial jobs, it's unlikely they will be able to accomplish the tasks that require human intervention. This essay will ponder why all jobs can't be done by computers.\n\nRobots might eventually take over the jobs that do not require complex and critical human thinking. Because having robots in the workforce is far more advantageous than having humans, since they can work relentlessly without having to experience any physical exhaustion like their human counterparts. Moreover, you don't have to go through the process of recruiting and training which are often time consuming. And the best part is we don't have to pay robots. In united states itself many employees lost their jobs due to automation. Cost effectiveness and the ease of management are the key reasons robots will flourish in work places in the near future.\n\nOn the other hand, it is simply impossible to enlist robots in the work that requires human touch. These jobs include medicine, education, counselling to name a few. It is simply illogical to expect a computer managed robot to perform the things that involve critical and analytical thinking which are major traits of a human mind. So, it is unlikely, at least in the near future to produce robots that accurately represent human intellect and logical thinking.\n\nTo conclude, there is every possibility that robots will eventually replace all the unskilled jobs, but it is unlikely that robots will ever take over the jobs that needs the emotional intelligence of a human being. Ultimately, not many jobs are safe with the advancements in the fields of artificial intelligence and robotics.",
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"content": "Computers great technology terrible impact peoples lives Computers cause children fail lose exercize The children also put self danger joining different websites Dont waste time boring computer screen I almost positive students poorly school students go home throw back packs hallway start playing silly games online My mom use go dad spents much time would go one minutes day talk family members Now mom created said gona go family plays pointless applications cafe world waste time whenever home could going spending quality time family friends Something I havent mentioned I use one students come home throw stuff hallways turn computer difference I didnt go online play games I would go talk friends I saw I relized I got report card gades horifyingly terrible My dad disconected I beleive grades gone At first I hated dad disconecting I want thank breaking disapointing hoby online whenever home He also mentioned sister much exersize loosing wanted play online In alot ways computers pointless Do know dangerous websites I watched television show aunts house old creepy guy started website teens video tape themselfs choking themselfs ever longest About hundred students died playing deadly game There s also website blogtvcom teens go online go live webcam anyone watch I remember week cousin denise best friend wanted see get veiwers The two girls unaproprient things webshows flashing dirty dancing showing body parts The two girls banned website people screen shoted posted pictures girls This allowd anyone s disterbing Stop wasting life people Go fun dont let keep home The unsafe pointless",
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"content": "The machine by Thomas Huang and Nicu Sebe is very helpful in the classroom in many ways, as the article helps explain. It can help to determine what lesson plans are working for the students and what lesson plans are not working as well. Also, it can help how another student is feeling about something non-school related.\n\nThe machine, as said in the text, uses the 44 major muscles to understand how a student or any other person is feeling. An example is when it says in paragraph 6 that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This is significant because this can tell if a student fully understand what the teacher is teaching and if he or she is learning. Also, it can tell what kind of lessons or lesson plans the students will react to the most.\n\nAnother way the machine is significant is because if a student is getting bullied or getting made fun of. The machine will know and that can further help and get the help the student needs without saying anything. This could prevent stuff going too far and prevent further cases of this type of thing happening.\n\nIn conclusion, there is many ways the machine by Thomas Huang and Nicu Sebe can be a significance for students and teachers in the classroom. Two of those examples are to understand how to make a lesson plan work for the students and also to help students that aren't showing that they need help in school or out of school.",
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"content": "Some people think that exploring a diffrent planet can be fun but their are some dangers things to explore a diffrent planet. In this story it talks about NASA sending humans to Venus. Venus is the second planet from our sun but that planet can be dangerous to explore. The author supports the main idea because he is talking about what are the causes of exploring Venus.\n\nIn the article it says that \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner, in\n\nspace terms, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason. Since no spacecraft survvied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us\"\n\nIn the text it states that \"Perring at Venus from ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorought mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\"\n\nThis conludes that there are some dangerous things that people discover in Venus. The author supports the main idea by explaining what Venus looks like and how researchers were able to know about the plannet and discover it a little bit more.",
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"content": "This story is about Luke Bomberger a boy who rode the waves had no idea that his life would change soon after his graduation. He was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and at a bank when his friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He couldn't say no he knew it would be an opportunity for him. It was 1945,world war 2 was over in Europe and countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover 44 nations came together and started UNRRA {The United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration}. UNRRA hired seagoimg cowboys to take care of the horses,young cows, and the mules.\n\nThe first reason to join the program is because they came together and started a group of 44 nations to help Europe. They hired ''Seagoing Cowboys'' to help the animals. They are trying to get the nation back together. Luke and Don signed up for it to. Heading over seas in August 1945, they recieved their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived ''August 14,'' Luke sayed,the day the Pacific war ended.''\n\nThe second reason you should join the group is because '' The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,'' he said.''Besides helping people, had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,'' he says. ''So was taking a Gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water.'' Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to china.\n\nThe third reason why you should join the group is cause caring for the animals during the crossings kept luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hayand bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared luke for hard work.\n\nIn conclusion I think you can still help with or without an reward. He did that from heart to help and sign up for that, also he liked watching the animals every hour and taking care of them so did his friend. He really liked the trips around the world too, just help to be nice somtimes for other people.",
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"content": "When looking at the Face over the years, you can clearly tell that it's a landform. From 1976 to 2001 the Face has lost almost all features to make it look like a face. For example, in 1976 you could clearly see a nose and eyes. By 1998 you could hardly make out the form of the nose and there was a crack where a mouth would have been bplaced. Finally, by 2001 you could hardly see any of its features. In the following paragraphs I will discuss detalis and characteristics into further detail.\n\nWhen I took a first looked at the Face, in the photo from 1976, I saw a clear face with a nose, eyes, and the feature of a pharoh.\n\nBy 1998 I could no longer see the eyes and nose look caved in. I did however see the form of a mouth that I didn't see before. A martian couldn't make a face out of the ground because nobody knows for sure that they're real. No one has ever seen a martian so how do we know that they're even there? Land however could completely make this. If you look at Earth and the mountains that have been formed, not by man but by the land, you know that there's no way martian's could've built this.\n\nAlso, nobody has proof that this isn't just shadows reflecting onto the ground. There might not even be a landform there but the shadows are forming an allusion that makes it look like a land mass. In paragraph 9, Garvin says, \"We don't just pass over the Face very often.\" When Garvin says this, it makes me believe more that it's just a shadow because they don't see it very often. The sun might have to be placed just right to cast the shadows onto that specific spot. Lastly, how would martians know what an ancient pharoh looked like?\n\nNow I'm going to sides with the martian's. If martians were in fact a real living thing, why couldn't they build something to look like a face? I'm sure that they would have hands, fingers, feet, and toes just like humans. If this Face was martian made, maybe they were trying to send a signal to someone like, \"Hey, we really are here and we need your help!\" They could've known that there were space rovers going around their planet from somewhere else. There's no telling who built the Face.\n\nThere's no telling how the Face got there or why. The most realistic and logical explanation is that the land formed it. There are many conspiraces out there as to how and why the Face is on Mars. I choose to believe that they had a \"Mars Quake\" and the face just appeared. But in reality nobody knows how it was formed.",
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"content": "I strongly disagree on the technology to read students emotional expressions. It's no ones business and it could also be wrong. Technology doesn't always work all of the time. Plus, with people being experimetned on, would people really be happy at all?\n\nFirst, yes! This Information excerpt provides resonable states like, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a stdent is becoming confusedor bored,\" Dr. Hauuang predicts. \"Then it coud modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" So obiviously this doctor knows what he/she is talking about. Which seems like it can be effective. There's no doubt that this experiment won't be useful. But, this drill could become controlling and prison like. Nothing would be your business anymore. There are various reasons why It could be resonable. Could possible stop someone from commiting suiside and doing anything of some sort. But, This experiment can be harmful and based on assumptions half of the time.\n\nIn conclusion, this is why I believe we shouldn't have this Facial Action Coding System. This is a tough debate because this experiment can be useful and harmful. I stronly believe that were just fine wothout it. We have enough thing in this world that can tell so much and that is taking away our freedom. Why take our emotions away from us that isn't no ones business in the first place? So there you have it. NO! It is not a good idea to have this detector.",
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"content": "Today, almost every household is subscribed to a newspaper, which enlightens individuals with daily news and affairs. Moreover, the information it provides has the ability to influence one's perspective. I strongly agree that this is a negative situation for readers who have newspapers as the only source of information.\r\n\r\nThe main idea of a newspaper is to present its reader with facts and information about global or local issues. A reader shall be able to comprehend and develop an opinion about a topic with the information provided to him. According to a study, about 60% of generation z readers have newspapers as their primary source of information, which is a severe concern as they are not able to gain a broader perspective of a situation as they source information from only articles. To illustrate, The Guardian, an Australian newspaper, labels treading cryptocurrency as gambling, which later turned out to be completely untrue. In my opinion, one should explore different platforms such as news channels and podcasts to garner information and explore an idea rather than relying completely on newspapers.\r\n\r\nI believe it is a negative situation, as many corporations buy newspapers which can easily influence one's buying decision. For instance, newspaper companies sell big columns for advertisements to popular brands. Moreover, some of these articles are published to shape an opinion towards a specific topic. For instance, Tesla, an electric car company, is viewed as an environmentally friendly car, whereas according to many types of ,research its carbon footprint is not very good as advertised. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, newspaper plays a vital role in one's daily life and they can easily influence their reader's perspective.",
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"content": "I think that the use of this technology in a classroom would be very hepful. In the article the author suggests that it would be helpful to a class. The computer could see what the teacher can not.\n\nIn the article the author said that the technology could see if a student is confused. Sometimes if a student is confused they are to afraid to say anything. As a student, I know from experience that kids can be really shy when it comes to asking a teacher a question. With this technology teachers would know if a student is confused and can talk to them without everyone else making them so nervous about it.\n\nA teacher can also help if the computer saw that something was upseting someone. Maybe this technology could help with the bullying that happens in schools by showing that a student is upset or depressed. The teachers or cousiler can talk to the student about whats upseting them.\n\nSo yes, I think that this technolgy would be valuable in a classroom. I think that the technology could help with a lot of problems in schools. It would be helpful in a lot of places and with a lot of problems.",
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"content": "Have ever gone computer Have ever sat computer long time I writing I concerned health town people computers go daily It fun could also health Computers addicting cause us play hours people exercise anymore Most busy thier computer You least minutes exercise CAPS kids sholud anywhere min exercise average per day A lot kids playing video games computers time instead exercising says sereno kids nt go outside enough either Did know minimum min sunlight day You get vitamins sun When last time took bike went camping went beach All fun things could missing learning computer I know I absolutly love going beach Hearing waves laughing ocean waters feeling cool heaven If I computers I would able enjoy My thing like fun going family I computer dont person Can imagine never actually seeing hearing person re talking Thats communication billions people rather talk person phone talk face face I feel people spend time exercising going outdoors spending time friends family Remember minutes exercise minutes sun day stay really healthy Please consider write article improve town s social overall health Its",
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"content": "Censorship tricky concept It word ban music stores books shelves movies theaters Katherine Paterson author said things reading listening materials removed nothing would left I thoroughly agree statement If someone finds one aspect work offensive qualify work banned discarded I believe offensive material removed following reasons suppresses feelings author nothing left shelves defining line offensive Now I understand vast amount people position I assure I understand feelings Some audiences feel removal offensive material good shields ears handle verbage context Others feel sensitive audiences comfortable text In addtion many people believe exposing people violent risky material dangerous habits evoke behavior young children Though valid opinions enough automatically think okay throw shelves Contrary opinions others I believe one reason material kept shelves shelves thoughts feelings writer suppressed For instance book To banned long time Harper book slurs find offensive today However way people time spoke Who fault people articulate words By banning To time frame banned generations robbed powerful beautiful meaning entire book That meaning punish innocent done nothing wrong The done book one reason I believe stay shelves Next works literature music stay shelves Katherine Paterson said everyone removes book books left shelf us true Many books banned book list For instance To CAPS PERSON like What book removed shelves next Once society relieved literature next step music Look singersongwriter He made sexually themed music When people bought records covered placed brown papered bags They considered censorship one step away banned His record company refused produce music name scandalous lyrics Because changes name unpronouncable symbol What next Finally last reason offensive material removed say whether something offensive A novel song pleasing people extinguished record store library one person I think There many words concepts socially accepted centuries However appalling concepts become accepted uncommon habit If offensive material given time become unoffensive years come For reasons I stated I agree removing anything shelves something finds unacceptable offensive If everything removed opinion world arts Then people wonder left us We nothing mass narrowminded ignorant individuals know nothing books music magazines movies etc Now I pose question If deemed offensive material would left",
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"content": "In the artical\n\nthe author talkes about the studys on Venus and its danger. The author also talks about the similarity between Venus and Earth. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author suggests that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.\n\nIn the story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is important. In the\n\nartical the author says\n\n\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" In the\n\nartical the author also says \"Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ... The\n\nplanet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Both of these two quotes show how the author fealt about the studyes of Venus.\n\nIn the\n\nartical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying\n\nthe danger Venus presents is important. In the\n\nartical the author says \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" in the\n\nartical the author also says \" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThe both of these quotes shows why the author thinks it is important to study the\n\ndanger Venus\n\npresents.\n\nThe\n\nartical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is about exploring new places and geting more knowlege. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author propose that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.",
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"content": "I think author s mood kind like I said going along memoir end statement mom dad turn simple house home That statement tells author feels well inside home inside home family members I Also say author feels grateful great culture heritage came",
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"content": "With the development of economic and the progress of technology, people’s living level have[has] been greatly improved. At the same time, The government provides many[much] assistance with some professional talents, such as artists. Some people think that all kinds of artists are[Should be] obtained financial help from the government, while some others think that this is not necessary. I disagree with this opinion.\n\nOn the one hand, the government should allocate funds to artists. The reason is that art can improve people's lives. It can not only enrich people's spiritual world but also strengthen the cohesiveness of the people throughout the country. Of course, this fund can also better inspire the artist's creative inspiration and make them better to achieve their personal value. The government should develop some art-related policies. The forms of art are diverse, and it is difficult for different kinds of artists to succeed, so these artists can better develop and contribute to the country only with the support of the government.\n\nOn the other hand, it is not necessary for the government to invest a large amount of money in artists and it should use this money for more important things, such as technology. The development of science and technology can enhance the country's overall national strength and the country's competitiveness. At the same time, some people are likely to pretend that they are musicians or writers to get help from the state, which will lead to a serious economic burden on the country. As a result, the country’s fiscal spending will increase and income will decrease.\n\nIn conclusion, although the government's help to all kinds of artists has many negative effects, this does not stop the development of art. At the same time, art is also very important for the development of today's society. Actually, the success of artists means the development and prosperity of all kinds of art. Therefore, in order to create a good cultural environment, the country should provide assistance to these artists.",
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"content": "Apparently, there are many natural disasters happening around the world as consequence of climate change. Some people suggest that global warming should be combated, whereas others think people should accept the current fact and adapt to changes. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\nMany activists around the world try to urge people to stop behaviours that cause the greenhouse effect. Many people contribute to find strategies to mitigate climate change; however, this is unable to be successful without governments’ support ; therefore, governments need to deliver effective climate policies such as carbon footprint reduction, clean energy, sustainable lifestyle and so on to all organisations, factories and individuals to be able to follow them in order to prevent the increase of the worse situations.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think that climate change is acceptable and people should be adaptable to all kinds of situations. In the last few decades, there were different natural disasters happened in different parts of the world such as floods, sea-level rise, the melting of the polar ice sheet, droughts, extreme weather and earthquake which are the effects of global warming that cannot be avoided to encounter in some countries. For example, Japan is a countries that earthquakes occur the most, however, Japanese people still live in their country and learn how to live with it. In addition, their houses and buildings have been built with resilient structures to withstand earthquakes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people should be adaptable to unexpected natural disasters, in a meantime, climate change cannot be ignored and allowed to get worse in the future by human behaviours. Both government and individuals should take actions to tackle this problem and mitigate carbon emissions to order to make our world the best place to live.",
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"content": "Few people opine that world news should be a part of the curriculum of the high school children as it helps the students to know the important happenings across the world . However, most of the public consider that to be a mere waste of time. In my opinion, although being updated with the international news is beneficial, it doesn't have to be included in the curriculum and it can be followed in televisions or via internet in the free time\r\n\r\nThe people who wish to include the international news as of one the school subjects are usually of the opinion that being aware of the situations and developments of other countries broadens the knowledge of the student, especially to crack civil services. However, not every student will be interested in knowing the current affairs of other countries. Additionally, including such subjects in the curriculum might trigger boredom and the students might not be able to concentrate on other subjects as this subject involves a lot of memorizing and rote learning. \r\n\r\nInstead of adding this as part of the schedule, it will be good to conduct discussions or debates among the students on this topic. Students should be encouraged to choose a topic, research in-depth and share it with other students in their class in the presence of the teacher. Moreover, conducting such exercises help the students develop a habit of reading the newspapers to be on top of the latest information which helps to develop their linguistic abilities. Moreover, discussing and participating in debates helps to develop a rapport among the students as well as improve their soft skills to a great extent. Personally, in my secondary school, we used to have a time slot dedicated to discussing the international news and it helped us a lot in the longer run.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, adding international news as a subject might not be very useful and there are other better methods to improve the general knowledge of students. Schools should encourage students to develop a habit of reading and keeping themselves constantly updated by telling them the importance of this exercise .",
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"content": "I belive that the Author does provide a good arugment. In the start of the essay the author starts off by giving some basic info about Venus and how it is the closest earth-like planet we know of so far. Providing such information will give the reader a good idea on what they're reading. The author also talks about some of the threats of exploring Venus, such as \"No spacecraft sent there has survived for over a few hours\" \"On the planets surface the tempuratures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit\" which are some good points and can even be used as a counter-claim to his argument that we should pursue Venus. Although the author does provide alot of the risks of exploring such a deadly planet as Venus is, they make some good points such as \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\" and \"Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\" which is a good point. If we're left with no other choice (considering the global conditions we have now) we must have another option to leave so we're not wiped out. I belive that the author has supported his claim well and also aknowleged the counter-claims of this article.",
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"content": "Imagine you are doing school work and it gets boring. what if there was a way that your doing a lesson and your confused and it is boring and the computer see's you're emotions and changes what your doing or gives you help on a problem. Just by looking at your muscles in your face this softwear can see things like that.So yes i think its a great thing to have in the classroom. Students might not fall asleep in class or if a student needs help the teacher wouldnt have to.\n\nI think its a great idea because it would be very helpful for the teachers and the students. Okay, lets say a student is feeling sad and having suicidal thoughts or there getting bullied but everyone thinks there happy. The administration could use the coding system to identify if anything is wrong and help the student. It could turn a lot of things that could be bad into good and help students in schools.\n\nI also think its a good idea because the teachers can use it on kids that are confused as stated in the article. Lets say there is a student doing an online lesson and they get confused but the teacher is busy and the computer reconizes them struggling and helps them. It could save a lot of time and even help students pass classes without trouble.\n\nThere are a lot of schools that could use computer programs like this one and i think its a great idea to introduce this one into schools. It could be very helpful to everyone so i agree that it could be very useful.",
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"content": "Cars have become an extravigant part of our daily lives, to helping us with transportation or just taking us out for a ride out in the city. They have made their ways into our world.. But are they truly helping us and our enviornment.?\n\nOut in Vauban, Germany- Residents of an upscale community, and other grand cities all around the world have given up one of mankinds best teleportation invention: You guessed it... their auto-mobiles.\n\nIn one of the excerpts from\n\n\"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars.\"\n\nthe city of Vauban's streets they have officially gone \"car-free\" - except for some of the main thoroughfare, in which the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge of the community. As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not whatsoever own any cars at all, and 57 percent of the residents here have sold their car just to move here. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two said \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" she quotes. Middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. That, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Passenger cars are now responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 52 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. \"All of our development since World war II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\" said an official of Transportation America, David Goldberg. In tghe United States, the Enviornmental Protection Agency is promorting \"car reduced\" communitites, and legislators are starting to act cautiously.\n\nOther cities are also starting to take after Vauban. After many days of near- record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving banm to clear the air of the global city and are trying to have a smog free city.\n\nIn the excerpt\n\n\"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota.\"\n\nby Andrew Selsky. Bogota, Colombia has taken noticed also an has a program that's set to spread to other countries as well as theirs. It was the third staright year in which they have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day without cars in their capital city of 7 million people. Their goal for doing this event for a day is to promote alternative transportation and to reduce smog as well. As for the United States of America some people have take a toll for this ambitious goal in other countries that has left many researchers ponderwing a fundamental question: Has America passed peak driving? Researchers say in American Behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewwer licenses as each year goes by. But as of April 2013 the economy has been able to risen and now many people can start buying new cars. Part of the reason why driving sessions were decreasing was because residents could not afford cars, and unem[ployment were't going to work. But by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downtuern and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way. Only the next few years will be telling how our enviornmental world will be.\n\nAs for this, depriving cars out of the road can lead to a free smog envionrment where more people can be healthier and think smart about their world, and it might just actually help keep the planet clean and other ideas like getting rid of cars for good. Only we can lead how our future generations will view this world, so why not benefit earth instead of destroying it...?",
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"content": "Is the \"Facial Action Coding System\" really going to be able to read and react to students emotions? Well this new technology can read the facial expressions of a student therefore it can change the classwork based off how the student is feeling but, a computer can't really read a students true emotions just based off their facial expressions.\n\nThe \"Facial Action Coding System\" created by Dr. Paul Eckman is used in a new innovation created by Prof. Thomas Huang, Prof. Nicu Sebe and their collegues. This Innovation is a sort of program that allows a computer to read a persons emotions based off their facial expressions The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, states Dr. Huang. Although the facial expressions of a person are similiar to another like smiling for example, however we may unconsciously have an expression even though we are not feeling the emotion that expression conveys.\n\n\"Empathy (feeling someone elses emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another persons facial expressions.\" this shows we may show an expression without truly feeling that emotion the expression suggests. Therefore can this technology really help a student in a classroom setting?\n\nA classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. with this said it may become frustrating or irritating to the student with the constant changes. This technology sounds very convincing but think of an emotionally challenged teenager can the computer keep up or truly read the emotions of the teen just by facial expressions alone? \"Eckman has classified six basic emotionshappiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadnessand then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\". The technology can always improve but at the state it's in right now it may not be as accurate as needed to be in a classroom setting with only having the basic emotions proggramed. Although the technology is advanced and helpful to an extent it may not be something we can use right now.\n\nThis technology is helpful but also not good enough for students to enjoy and be helpful. This technology as previously mentioned can alter the classwork a student is doing based off their emotional state. According to Dr. Huang this technology can read mixed emotions as well but with only six to go off of it may not be a truly accurate answer and may make the student feel another emotion because it could not respond properly. This technology should be tested and improved on before going in a classroom setting.\n\nIn conclusion the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is a technology not ready to be put in schools but is still a good innovation. The new technology can't read all their emotions just based off expressions alone but in the future change accordingly to a students emotions hopefully based off not just expressions and be ready for students to utillize.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System sounds like a great tool that should be used. If your computer could customise the way it works on how you feel that would be great for many different people. It would be more effective for computers to give you a more comfortable setup on a home or school computer. On a school computer the system could detect if the student is bored or comfused the system could use a different way the student could learn the materal. If the student was bored the computer would customise the way the lesson was being taught and give a more intrasting aproch to the subject. If the lesson was to confusing the computer would give a different way of teaching the lession by showing step by step how the information all fits in together. Alowing the student to learn the subject and get better grades.\n\nThe value of this system is very great. The computer could tell when a student is sad or angry and could tell alert someone who could help of give support with whatever the student was struggling with. This would make schools more effective by alowing students to open up to people who can help and make school a more comfortable and enjoyable place. This would give schools the ability to help identify depression in students. This would prevent situations like students taking there own lives by providing help. It would also identify anger in the student and would alert the people who are prepared to handle this and get help for the student. This would prevent things such as fights between students or even teachers. Preventing these things would make the student body feel safer when coming to school.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a very promising system that shows many different ways to help students. Providing a way to make the lives of students in a very stressful emotion filled place like school would be an amazing benifit to schools all around the world. Many techers care for there students and this system could help teachers connect more with there class makeing the classroom more effective in learning. The class would be more comfortable with the techer alowing the class to run smothly. The tacher would know how the students rected to different methods of teaching alowing the teaxher to customise a learning plan to help kids learn more effectively.",
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"content": "Cars have become an important part of our world. From their rising fame came consequences that effected our daily lives and our enviornment. Limiting car use can have advantages, like reducing greenhouse gasses and making ones community better to live in.\n\nBy limiting car usage, the amount of greenhouse gasses- gasses produced by exaust, carbon dioxide, etc.- would be reduced. Greenhouse gasses effect the ozone layer of the earths atmosphere and that in turn effects the health of everyone breathing in the earths oxygen. Greenhouse gasses, albiet the healthy sounding name, is not good for people or the enviornment. By limiting car usage, people can put a dent in the amount of greenhouse gasses being produced. \"Passenger cars are responsible for for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (5) This means people can change the world by simply reducing their car usage.\n\nChanging the way one lives can change the way they look at life. Some people in the community of Vauban have found happiness just by reducing their car usage. \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two\" (3) In this community people get to experience walking down the street, hearing people instead of the constant sound of a running car. \"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" The people living in the community don't have to go out of their way to buy something when they can just walk down the street and purchase it. The town of Vauban entertains the choice of effeciency and health over inconvienence and unsafe air.\n\nLimiting car useage can have many advantages, like reducing greenhouse gasses and making one's community better. Although cars are convienent the people in the town of Vauban would rather live in a reduced car community.",
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"content": "The value for this technology to read students' emotional expressions is a bad idea. Because then we would be in there faces every day trying toget them to feel better and what if they don't want help.\n\nAn example i could use is the fact that what if they have a blank expression and the technology doen't work. Then what would happen if they're anrgy with you because you don't leave them alone. Also we don't need this technology to tell what is wrong with our friends, like whats it says in paragraph 5 it says \"you can probably tell how a freind is feeling simply by the looking his or her face\". And another thing we do not need the software to get in people faces with. Iust cause Dr. Huang can tell your facial expression by a certain way we smile doesn't mean his soft ware will always be right.\n\nIn conclusion I think this software is not a great idea to do any thing for the human enviorment. Because we are just fine without this software update.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nElectoral college may be a despised method to some people but it has been the system established by our founding fathers and remains until this day. It may not be perfect but every method has its flaws, including popular vote, respectively. The popular voting system is not the best method since it can end up not defining certainty of the outcome. Electoral college has prevailed until this day and it should remain this way for the United States of America.\n\nAlthough electoral college may be called outdated, irrational and unfair (Brandon Plumer 14). This isnt true because if it were so outdated and unfair it would have been substituted or changed by another system but it has remained because of its effiecency. This system is certaintly not unfair because as stated in a article by Richard A. Posner,he explains \"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed).\" As for the irrational portion of the opposing view, as stated in \" in defense of the electoral college...\" article has mutiple reasons but one of them is \"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.\"\n\nNo region (South,Northeast,etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\"\n\nThe single best argument against Electoral College may be called \"the disaster factor\" as claimed by Brandom Plumer in his article opposing the Electoral College. Certainty of Outcome is a strong point for Richard a. Posner in his article defending the electoral college and carefully states \"A dispute over the outcome of the Electoral College vote is possible-it happened in 2000-but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.\" He (Richard Posner) also reminds the reader that the Electoral College avoids issues in elections in which no candidate receives majority of the votes cast and there is no pressure for a \"run-off election\" when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast.\n\nAnother factor brought to our attention by \"the indefensible electoral college...\" article is that since the Electoral College uses the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont lose time in states they are most likely to not win in and they focus mostly on \"swing\" states. Although the \"swing\" states system is used, it is simply utilized becauseit induces the candidates as seen in 2012's election. But the voters in toss-up states are most likely to pay more attention to the campaign, and it is decreed that the most thoughtful voters should be the chosen ones to decide the election.\n\nUltimately with all the information cited it is quite obvious which option is best for the U.S. Electoral College may have it's cons but the pros outweigh it. This is not a new method. It was defined by the Founding Fathers that wrote our constitution that has held our country in unisom until this day. Now in 2015 it is still the leading force in the government and should be kept that way. the Electoral college is the best suited for America and should'nt be altered.\n\nSincerly,\n\nA future voter",
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"content": "Should books music movies magazines etc removed libraries found offensive My opinion In essay I explain opinion hopefully change peoples opinions I also explain past effect present day In cases books music movies magazines etc offend race sertain sex happened history Some offensive shows past others plain racist sexist Those show history education sorce learn mistakes Here exactly I state opinion taking material shelves like taking someones freedom speach away I hate I music disrespects women im going try get taken away might expressing artist song loved someone history family In conclusion I believe material taken shelves After explaining opinion think offensive someone expressing past memory If past offensive something tody might offensive I told earlier life treat others want treated I hope caught attention changed opinions alot offence today resulted past",
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"content": "Nowadays, males have more prestigious jobs than females. It is always said that women should be a stay-at-home mom whereas men should bring home the bacon, but now the opinion is changed. Well, there are many reasons which will be discussed in this essay why government should give or not give that working places to women.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, the high-level jobs occupied by the male decreases the balances of opportunities and also power between male and female in some companies. Due to the fact that we live in the most developed and supportive century women don’t have to suffer from discrimination. So to establish the equal power of both genders women actually should work in such high-level positions. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, government should not take any actions for reserving positions for females. They can create the comfortable surrounding for them by making sure that women have the access to the education which makes them powerful and fully-prepared for their future. In addition, women don’t have to suffer from sexual harassment, any discrimination and so on. Moreover, government should provide strict law where humans of both genders coexist with ease. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, by analyzing that information both women and men should be viewed as equally capable and the top positions should never be reserved based on gender. Government should ensure that they put enough effort to protect women from complex problems and they should not encourage a certain percentage of any employment places to be reserved for them .",
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"content": "The given a mobile phones displays a comparison between old phone and new phones.\nOverall, it can be change and I will say what is the diffrent between them.\nstarting with early mobile phone, ear phone for calls or lising, black/white display and we have a keyboard, function select button, the mobile tall is 130mm and the display 50mm weight is 150 g this is realy havey.\nAnd we have another mobile phone in the first we have ear phone it's look like the same on and we have full-colour display and in these it's diffrent than the other, camera with video capability and this is new thing to, extra functions e-mail + internet music player multi-player gam facility and thes, and the tall is 90mm and the display is 4mm it weight 70g and these is the diffrint between them.",
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"content": "Is it worth to vist Venus at great dangers. It is worth visting venus even though we've tried many times to land at Venus and the last time we had landed was 3 decades ago.\n\nIn paragaph 3 the author is saying that the conditions are greater than the earths conditions. It could take us year to finally land on Venus but for now the author says NASA is going to send a spaceship to hover 30 miles or so over Venus but to send rovers. NASA wants to be 30 miles or so above venus becuase the conditions are still going to be bad but not as bad as if they were on Venus. Scientiest think exploring venus it could help people like technology or to think in different ways.\n\nThere are theroies that venus was once a planet like earth and was probably covered with largely with oceans and was supported to have various forms or life like earth. If one day we are able to land on Venus we might be able to see if one day other planets were able to have some type forms of life. Venus is the second planet closest to the sun but Mercury is closer and we don't know why is Venus hotter than Mercury. And if we do find out why did life forms on Venus died out we would might be able to prevent it for us becuase earth is also getting hotter everyday.\n\nIs it still worth to explore Venus with the dangers it presents? Will Venus help anyone in some type of way. We will have to find solutions to the dangers of Venus's atmosphere with temperatures over 800 degress Fahrenheit. The 800 degrees temperature will be able to burn most things we have on earth.",
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"content": "One day school I told I doctors apointment I say mom said I dance school started I say I dacen said bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla lest I herd I mite rong CAPS mom its first dance I said anger asked get car time whent wher waiting room hour Ive ready missed hafe dance I queit finnaly officec gone home get ready dance blast",
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"content": "While it is believed that higher fuel cost may improve matters, I would argue that this is not an optimal solution, and there are other ways to mitigate the impacts on the environment.\r\nA rise in the price of petrol would disadvantage individuals and the society as a whole. If gas prices surged, there would likely be significant increases in the costs of other household appliances and products. However, these people rely heavily on menial jobs and agriculture to make ends meet. Therefore, they would have to make cutbacks in household budgets to make the most of their incomes. From the perspective of society, as fuel costs soar, consumer sentiment plummets. Consequently, people would put off discretionary purchases, namely recreational activities and accessories, as they only have a limited ability to change how much gasoline they consume. This can have detrimental impacts on business and weaken the economy.\r\nAlternatively, there are better solutions to environmental problems. Firstly, governments should impose restraint policies on cars and other motorized vehicles during peak periods. This is known as road space rationing which has successfully reduced traffic congestions and carbon emissions in cities, namely Beijing and Sao Paulo. Secondly, governments should also improve and expand the public transport system. The problems with public transport at the moment are that they are inconvenient and people have limited access to them in some regions. Therefore, solving these problems can minimize the use of private vehicles, which can be done by offering membership cards and vouchers, cleaning the vehicles frequently, etc.\r\nIn conclusion, while increasing the price of fuel has serious consequences, there are more efficient measures to tackle environmental problems.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding system is valuable in the classroom. This technology can tell how a student is feeling even when they do not say it, which is good becuase some students may feel unfortable telling the teacher or class they do not understand the material. Not only does the system know when a student is confused, it also works on everybody and is very accurate.\n\nFirst off, this technology can tell weather a student is confused or bored. Many students, including myself, find it difficult to addmit when they do not understand something. If this system was in classrooms teachers would know when students do not understand the lesson. Instead of students being in the dark, and end up failing the test, teahers could pull the students aside and give them extra help.\n\nNot only can this technology tell when a student is confused, it can also tell when they are bored. In the text Dr. Huang says \"Then it could modify the lesson\" which I totally agree with. A student is not going to tell a teacher that they are bored, but with this technology a teacher can still find out. Finding out that a student is bored is great because teachers can modify the lesson to make the students engaged. The students will have more fun being taught with a more engaged lesson, which will raise test scores. Some people may say have this technology in class is werid or creepy, but if they students, teachers, and parents do not have a problem with it there should not be a problem.\n\nSecoundly, the Facial Action Coding System will work on anyone. In the artical it states \"the facial expresions for each emotion are universal\". This means that it does not matter who you are, or what you look like your results will be spot on. Since we all have the same muscles in our face, this technology will work on everybody. Not only that, but this sytstem is accurate. In the text it says \"she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry.\" It could have just said she is happy, because it is the highest percent, but this system goes into detail. It also has a psychologist that Dr. Huang relies on to make even more sure the results are accurate.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System should be in classrooms. It can help students get better learning experience, it works on everybody, and it is accurate.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI would like to take this time into explaining why having the Electoral College is not a good idea in determining who would become our president. Why should anyone be voting if in the article it states\n\n\"\n\nIt's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\"\n\nIf the Electoral College is irrational and outdated, then why do we keep using? Popular voting can be a better idea then using the Eleortial College, with the popluar voting we can the president that makes the United\n\nStates a better place to be living in. For the past century there has been war and terroist in the U.S, and the cause to all the violence is because when Senators are suppose to represent our state they say what in their favor. IF we focus on what the people want we will have a better chance of stopping all the battle. People that are serving the armed forces can come home to their children and family, the local news will not talk abou the next war and the disagreement that this country has aganist another.\n\nIf we begin to use popluar vote we can begin to have more and more people voting. Many citzens do not vote because they think that their votes do not count or aren't counted. With popular vote they can be sure that they will be counted and that the votes are for the people not for the Senator. As we get older, this country will not ben the same as before or how it was in the 1800's, we are goinmg to start changing the things that we think are best for this country, we do not want to start the same wars we did centuries ago. Improving it would mean to take risk and if we have to change Electoral College to popular vote, then so be it and let's change it.\n\nI suggest for now on instead of using Electoral College we start using popular votings. If there is ever a case where the votes come out teied then we instead on using Electoral College, this would of be if there were to ever be a tired in the voting session. If this country is all in choices of the people and for the people why can we start to use popular vote instead.",
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"content": "A lot of students all across the United States have about the same mind set when it comes to school, and that is that they're tired or bored. Although some students do enjoy learning and being at school a lot of the students don't really enjoy it and get very distracted or tired very easily. With the technology used in Facial Action Coding System we can help the teachers who are trying to give their students an education the attention they deserve.\n\nBeing tired and bored is becoming very common in the school community these days, espessially with high school students. Ariving at their very last years of schooling before heading off to the real world, or the world of further education, students seem to think that they can lack off when in reality these are the most important years of their lives. Using the technology of the Facial Action Coding System teachers will be able to detect when a student is bored or tired and use that ability to do something to get them back on track, stay focused and get their attention. In the passage it states \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions - ... - and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" This information lets us know that the machine only has 6 facial expressions which can be used to tell the user of the persons current facial expressions. It also states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This quote provides and/or gives us proof of what this software is capable of doing.\n\nIn conclution, there are multiple ways of using this new software and analyzing a classic painting is just the start. Using this software will bring better education to our students who will bring upon a better future. It will provide attention needed for our teachers. Students, teachers and school is only the beginning of what this software could bring to the table.",
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"content": "Unemployment and poverty are indisputably the major reasons for crime. Providing vocational education to prisoners inside penitentiaries would definitely reduce joblessness and destitution. However, I disagree with the given statement that providing education to inmates is the best way to reduce crime. it is a good method, but there are other better methods to curb crime. To begin with, the main purpose of prisons is not just to punish criminals, but also to rehabilitate them if this rehabilitation part is not looked into, then the majority of criminals would re-offend after coming out of prison. This is because, such criminals are not accepted by the general public, and nobody likes to give their jobs. Therefore just educating them is not enough to reduce crime. The government must ensure that they are given jobs to fend for their basic needs. Another important fact, which has to be considered, is that these penitentiaries are very costly to maintain. When these inmates are taught vocational skills such as carpentry, a lot of infrastructure is required. While all this expenditure may help a few prisoners, but it may be futile in the case of those hard-core criminals who are not in there because of illiteracy or unemployment. Their trust has a criminal bent of mind. They would never become useful members of society even after such education. Rigorous imprisonment would be better to deter potential criminals. The best way to reduce crime would be to never let it happen in the first place. Laws should be enforced so strictly that people should think a hundred times before resorting to crime. Compulsory primary education should be given to all children. Youth unemployment should be dealt with by creating job openings or by encouraging entry pre ne u rs hip. To conclude, it can be reiterated that while educating the prisoners and trying to make them self-sufficient would be good to reduce crime, the better methods would be to stop crime from happening in the first place.",
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"content": "Diverless cars would be a very bad idea. This could not only cause many accidents, but it could also be a reason for anyone to not drive. Also driverless cars would never be driverless because in the passage, paragraph 2, they talk about how the cars still need drivers for the cars to go in and out of driveways.\n\nWhat will happen to drivers ed? Will the next generation ever learn to drive a normal car? The next generation needs to know how to drive a normal car just in case something happens. Such as, they are not financially stable to buy a driverless car or they simply just want a normal car.\n\nWhen driving you need a seat belt to make sure you dont go flying out of the car in an accident. In paragraph 8 they mention safety. How do you know your children, friends, or family will be safe riding in a driverless car? Many accidents could happen. You could be risking yourself to the car breaking down or taking control on its own. Maybe even catching on fire. They mention putting cameras in the car to make sure are paying attention to the road instead of being on your phone texting or being distracted. If you are buying a driverless car wouldn't your intention of buying that car would be of not driving at all and enjoying the ride?\n\nAlso in paragraph 9, the question is mentioned of who will be responsible, in case of an accident, of the injuries of a person, the driver or the manfucaturer? In case of an accident this would be the real question. Who is responsible? The driver for buying the car? or the manufacturer for making it?",
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"content": "Exploring venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers. This is what the story is all about im only here to show you textual evidence that that is what the story is really about.\n\nIn the story the author says venus is our sister planet its surface is the closest to earth but its atmosphere is dangerously hot, 800 degrees to be exact. Therefor we would not be able to survive on this planet. not only is it very hot the atmosphere is full of carbon dioxide which is very bad for us to breath in.\n\nIf we explore venus what would we find, in the story it says that the surface is full of \"rocky sediment\" and includes familiar earth like features like valleys, mountain ranges, and craters. The only reason they are still studying it is because it might have had past life on it, and if the atmosphere was'nt full of acid and carbon dioxide we would be able to enhabit the planet if earth was ever destroyed.\n\nNot only is the surface and atmosphere dangerous so are the clouds. The clouds are ful of sulfuric acids and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than earth.Venus is a worthy pursuit because, we would get to learn about what type of life this planet used to hold and because it is so much like our home plane earth. Exploration is worth the dangers to figure out if we are the only life in the galaxy. Close exploratio must happen\n\nin conclusion NASA must find a way to make heat proof suits that are able to withstand the rough pressures of this planet we all know as Venus. The author made many valid points on how dangerous it would be to explore te surface of the planet and all we can do is wait for the technology to advance enough to make indestructable rocket ships.",
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"content": "This technology could be useful for students in a classroom. A reason this technology could be helpful is because students might get bored in a classroom. This technology could detect that the students are bored. With this technology a teacher can give them an assignment to were the students are no longer bored.\n\nThis technology can help the learning process because students dont learn when they are unhappy are even angry.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding system would improve test scores, learning process and much more. In the text it states how moving you face can improve your emotions, \"Accoriding to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions. moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but also may even help produce them. So if a student is unhappy and the Facial Action Coding System detects it, a teacher can help the student with the problem that is making the student unhappy or try to undertand why the student is unhappy and just put a smile on the student's face to make them happy so they can procced on with their work and duties.\n\nIf this technology can read the emotions of a painting, then is most definetly can read the emotions of a human student. This technology can be the beginning to student learning for every student sad or happy. This technoloy can really bring out the improvement teachers have been looking for.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expresstions of students in a classroom, is not a very possible idea. The factial program is great, and it could help out in may type of things and or other jobs, but it's probably just as it could help, at the same time it wouldn't do much help at all.\n\nThe use of this new technology would do a good, in certain kind of jobs. Such as in a police department, it could be used when interogating suspects. As to having this technology used in school in a classroom a stated in the text \"A classroom computer could recognize\n\nwhen a student is becoming confused or bored...THen it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Yes it could help the student understand but it could so accidently ruin a lesson for the student. I'll explain what I mean by using a senario.\n\nPicture a student in class and this facial action coding system is in the class as well, a lesson is being taught and the students understand with the exception of a couple that are lost and or confused about the lesson. The FACS (Facial Caton Coding System) helps out those students by explaining the lesson in a why the students understand but, there's another student that's frusterated but not about the lesson. The student undestands that lesson, but the reason he's frusterated is about something else, possibly something personal. The FACS will detect the boy's frustrations thinking it's about the lesson, comes to help the student but just frustrates him even more. If it was a regualr human teacher, the teacher would was if the student understood the lesson, as the student tell the teacher that he did the teacher then would ask \"What's wrong\" and if not. At least the teacher would know that it's something else and nothing to do with the lesson being taught.\n\n\"In fact we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday.\" This quote in the beginning of paraghaph five is telling us that, we as humans can do the same task as a computer. What we don't do that the FACS can its detect every single emotion that a person shows as stated in the first paragraph, \" 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". We as human don't measure emotions being showed by percentage like the FACS, we only see the emotion that mostsly being shown. And that's good! If in a classroom while looking at students we see their main emotions, the emotions that stands out the most and not worry about the other emotions that aren't as noticable. It's not that the other emotions are less impartant, it's nothing like that. It's just that the main emotions come first and slowly make our way to the other emotions,\"One step at a\n\ntime\" let's make it one emotion at a time.\n\nA computer, or machine can be better than human depending on the situation. But one thing is for sure, a machine can, and will not be better than a human on detecting emotions. Us having emotions and being able to detects other human emotions is what makes is human. Being able to detect other's emotions and have sympathy, helping other and understanding human emotions is something a machine can't do.",
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"content": "Most people might suggest to keep the electoral college work. Yet some other people don't. The method \"Winner-Takes-All\" is only fair enough, because why should the person who lost earn a reward , the people made their desicions, and whoever lost, goes back home.\n\nKeeping the Electoral College also avoids problem of election, because once the votes are in, and they count the votes, there are no more talking but to accept the winner.\n\nWinner Takes All, when competing in for election, its not right to share your reward with the opposing component. Once you win, you take it all. when election comes and the citizens vote, \"They are likely to be most thoughtful voters, on average(and for the further reasom that they will have recived the most information and attention from the candidiates), and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\" (source#3, paragraph 20). Although people may disagree and say \"Candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the\"swing\" states.\"(source#2, paragraph 13). Yes, that may be true, but again, when the people vote, they only want what they want, no jokes.\n\nThe Electoral College is helping to avoid problems of election.",
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"content": "Car's? everyone has one right? or at least knows someone that has one. Do you ever think if car's are bad for the world? When i was younger i always wanted to have a car. Do my own thing and go where ever i wanted. Then growing up i heard all the bad things about them. How they hurt are environment. How the creat so much smog. They harm us everyday. That's why i think we should limit the car usage.\n\nlimited are car usage right like how will beable to do what we have to. They might say i'm crazy for not wanting people to drive car's but in actuality i'm just trying to help and make the world a better place for the kids of the next generation. In a article i read \"paris bans driving due to smog\" \"by robert duffer\" He tells all about how car's were making so much smog that on monday paris enforced a partial ban to clear there air of the global city. That everyone had to leave there car at home or get a ticket of 31 dollars. Almost 4000 drivers were fined and twenty seven had there car impounded.\n\nEven in other places like germay it's ether a car or house. Everyone would take the house thats somewhere to lay your head every night were your kids make memories that you will forever cherish. Car's there isnt know really point to them but just to drive and get somehwere. You can take a bike or even walk while at the same time helping the world and helping your self. I'm not saying stop using car's there so bad you will die if you use a car no. I'm just saying use your car when you really need to.\n\nIf something is close by you just have a nice walk and enjoy the air the beauty of being outside. If your going somewhere far? take a bus it might cost a dollar or two but just think about it. You dont have to drive your not using your car and your saving the world little by liite. Even encourage your friend's and family memeber's to do what your doing. maybe by 2040 we would have a whole new world.\n\nWe would be feeling better, breathing better. There is a endless possibilites to how better we could be. Have you ever thought about being a supr hero? or helping people? for one you can stop using your car so much. Then you would be everyone super hero, even mine.",
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"content": "We all have that friend that always hids their emotions. As friends we know when something is wrong them. What about when your trying to figure out how they're feeling and they continue to be stuborn by telling you that they're are perfectly fine and that nothing is wrong what do you do? Imagine if we didn't have to express ourselves anymore. What if something as extraordinary as a computer could detect how we felt! Wouldn't that be amazing! In my opinion the FACS is a valuable way to read a student's emotional expressions. The FACS tracks facial movements both through a real face and a painted face. This system identifies more than one expression. The FACS can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). This would be a great way to find out how a student feels without them actually having to say it themselves. Many times students have alot of things going on in their lives and it's hard for them to express themselves and it becomes even more hard for them to actually talk about some of those things. The FACS is a great way to find out how the student is feeling without getting into details. This system can also tell when a student becomes confused or bored. The creator of the FACS is Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Him and his colleague Prof. Nicu Sebe are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. What do you think about the FACS? Did Pro. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe do a good job at inventing this ? I personally love this idea.",
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"content": "The setting affect cyclist features cyclist riding around june affect harsh But overall setting begin hot place limited water good thing Thats cyclist affected setting",
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"content": "Cars have dramatically changed the way human kind lives and they have not been ran by computers, only us. Humans have always been the one in control of cars. People can operate a car perfectly fine without assistance, so why are there people trying to make cars that drive themselves? A number of things could go wrong with a computer car. Technology always tends to crash or shut down unexpectedley, so what happens if our computer car does that in the middle of traffic?\n\nTo start off, the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" seems biased. There are many paragraphs backing up the new Google Cars, and only a couple backing up how dangerous they can be. What is hard for me to understand is the whole point of the self driving cars. Why do we need them? Do certain people have better things to do in a vehicle than drive it themselves? If someone were to buy one of these cars, i would assume that they would be in a constant fear that maybe the car would take a wrong turn and run into a tree.\n\nCars that we drive today can already malfunction in many ways. The breaks could go out, the tranmission could go out, the headlights could go out, the tires could fall off, etc. We can fix the tires falling off, we can fix our headlights, but does everybody know how to fix a computer when it crashes? We could be on the road eating food while our car drives itself and the car just completely stop because the computer in the car crahsed. Instead of paying 60 dollars for a tire repair, getting the Google car repaired would probably cost a few hundred that nobody would want to pay.\n\nGoogle cars could cause a stir between the manufacturers and the drivers as well. If a driver was positive that the crash they had was the computer cars fault, that would cause problems. The car manufacturers would definately not want to admit they are at fault. The car would of course be very expensive, too. Many people will not even be able to afford a car that drives itself, but why would they want to? A self driven car can take away the fun in operating something big.\n\nWhy do we want to take the fun out of driving and feeling in control, or pay a big price for our computer car malfunctioning? Why do we want to put ourselves in even more danger by making an untrustworthy computer in charge of our lives? A computer car puts our lives at stake, and if a computer car proved to be at fault of a murder, that would also put the car creators in a bad situation.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph Maybe show confidence would everything For example When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test basically s saying s willing take step chance The author ended story confidence couragement",
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"content": "Join in the Seagoing Cowboys program! We help countries recover thier food supplies and take care of horses, young cows, also mules that are shipped to us over seas. It will be a wonderful opportunity for small town boys (Luke's words). 44 nations joined together to form this group UNRRA (the united states Relief and Rehabilitation). And they hired us to help them.\n\nIt will be an adventure to travel all over the world helping people and animals (also Luke's words). We have alot of fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Besides the benefit of helping people we travel the world we go to different countries with friends that soon become family on this adventure.\n\nWe play games such as baseball, volleyball, boxing, fencing reading, whitteling and more! Once you join you will realize all of the good things you have done for people animals that are in need of our assistance. this job requirs alot of work and we keep you busy! But most importantly it is a job to help animals and people in needs.",
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"content": "Diverless cars are a plus in today's society. They have many advantages for current drivers and soon-to-be drivers. They have functions that help with the surroundings of the car. They help take over and perfect functions that take place inside the car. Finally, they also increase the amount of safety while in the car.\n\nDriverless cars have functions that help with the sensing of the surroundings of the car. The text states, \"Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings\". This shows that the car can sense when something is about to or needs to happen; at which that point the needed function could be enabled. The text also states, \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object\". This shows that the sensors are aware of the car's outside surroundings at all times.\n\nDriverless cars also can take over certain functions of the car to help out the driver while he or she is drving. According to the text, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel\". This shows that some, but not all functions of the car can be aleviated from the driver's responsibilities as the driver. Second, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zines and around accidents\". This excerpt shows as well that most fucntions can be relieved from the driver, but not at all times.\n\nThe driverless cars can be seen as a large saftey feature, and safety is an improtant matter to all those as drivers in a car or as a passenger. In the text, \"In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern\". This quote from the text shows that the driverless feature actually increase the safety of the car. Furthermore,\"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own\". This excerpt from the passage shows that driverless cars' functions are a large safety feature that people enjoy.\n\nWhile driverless cars are supported by most, others see that driverless cars are not the way to go. One example from the text, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driver cars\". This example from the text shows that driverless cars creates a new obstacle with creating laws that focused towards driverless cars. Although; driverless cars will require a different set of laws, less laws will be broken because of their safety feature, and their accurate timing of when to enable certain functions.\n\nDriverless cars are beneficial for today's society. They assist current drivers and soon-to-be drivers. They have stupendous safety features that benefit all those in the car and those in it's surroundings.",
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"content": "The new Facial Action Coding System, which can now detect the emotions of people, can be very valuable to a classroom. This technology can help teachers know if students are paying attention, how the kids react to a specific lesson, and if the emotions are more different than the way they act. But the use of the system can also get students in trouble now. There are both advantages with this new technology and also disadvantages.\n\nTeachers will now be able to tell if the students are paying attention, which can also get the student in trouble now. They can detect if the student does not want to do the lesson and will cause the teacher to get mad. Advantage for the teacher but a disadvanatge for the student. It can be easier to tell if a student is being truthful now.\n\nTo see how the students react to a lesson can help the teacher determine if they should continue with that specific lesson or not.The author states that the software can determine mixed emotions. If most students are detected with positive and happy emotions, the teacher knows they are doing good. Knowing how a student actually feels about a class can also make a teacher feel very let down if they think differently.\n\nA student's emotion can be very different than what that student shows. They could be going through something traumatic and might not even show it.\n\n\"Most of us would have trouble describing each facial trait\" is very true for most teachers. Someone could be distracted and not paying attention, and now the teacher will know why without having to just yell at them for not listening. But also, will that even change the way teachers feel? If you're having a bad day, maybe a teacher will finally understand.\n\nHaving a new teachnology system to detect emotions of people can be very useful for a classroom. Useful for teachers, principals, and the school system. Some students may not feel the same way but most teachers would feel the same way. There can be more reasons out there that we just don't know about this technology yet. Hopefully more information is soon to come!",
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"content": "Have you ever thought about purchasing a driverless car? Well In this passage it states that there is some bad flaws to having one. Like in 2013 BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The driverless car that can handle drving functions at only speeds up to 25 mph. But the google car, only tells the driver when they still have to steer the vehicle in some many ways these cars are not safe to be released to the public. Because if they do more laws will have to be made and will cost money. Also that will take some time to be passed. Like even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone were to be injured then who`s at fault the person who drove the car or the manfacuture. So in this case The author made sense of it being a negative aspect. I believe there may be one day there might be a driverless car in the 8th paragraph but maybe passed 2020. So in conclusion the author stated hard facts that prove right now in this present there not safe for us to drive in, but maybe in the near future they will be safe enough to drive passed 25 mph, also work sites or work zones and or other accidents the car will be able to adknowlege a accident to prevent another one. Also the cost of these cars will sky rocket to only the high end rich people will be the ones purchasing one. High end computers already cost over 30 thousand dollars, thinking about a car theat drives for you will be in an anmassive price range. Another thing is what would happen if one of these cars got into an accident to think how much damage to them? Would it do and how much will it cost to replace a car that will barley come out. Would they also have to make changes to the roads to make them drive or will they know exactly where to go?",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to go to another planet like Venus? In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" talks about how people should go visit Venus but there is a lot of danger in going there. The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by showing ways people can go there and the kinds of technology they have to look closely into Venus.\n\nIn the article it talks about the different ways why people should go there to explore and the discovery of it. In the article it says \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, nut the air pressure would be close that of sea level on Earth.\" This tells us that the planet Venus's temperature would be very high for them to go there but the sea levels of the Earth would be close so the people would be able to survive in the planet. The article also states that \"However,peering at Venus from aship orbiting or hovering safely far above only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" This also shows how NASA can go the Venus by the help of the light of the Earth and help them survive in the planet. This is how the author helps support the idea that it is worth going to Venus.\n\nAnother reason why the author proves that going to Venus is worth going despite the dangers it presents is that NASA has technology where they can explore Venus more closely because of the kind of technology they have.\n\nIn the article it states \"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such contitions.\" This shows that NASA has the right technology to look closely into Venus and have lasted for three wekks very good conditions. This is how the author shows us how NASA has the right technology to explore the planet Venus and it is worthy to look closely into Venus because it's one the planets where people have not went or look closely at it.\n\nIn this article it tells us the different ways how we can go to Venus and to discoverly into it more because its one of the main planets in the Solar system. The author shows the reasons why it is worthly to go there despite the danger it has by showing the different ways we should go there and the kind of technology people have to discover the planet. People should allow this to happen because Venus is a planet where nobody really studies about it and has nobody been to it.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI believe that the United States deserves someone who will lead this country to do the right thing, to make independent choices, and to be the best version of ourselves we can be every day. Now, how do we know when choosing a leader to represent us if thats what we will acheive when voting? We don't for sure, but we can make judgements and calls that will give us a better understanding to whom we are choosing. One of the biggest fought over rights was the right to vote, in which everyone wanted. Now that we have that vote, we should be able to use that freedom and have a say in who we want to represent us. Therefore, I think we should change the election to popular vote for the President of the United States rather than relying on the Electoral College.\n\nThe Electoral collge consists of 538 Electors and a majority of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party and given their own says and responsibilities. That being said, I think that getting rid of the Electoral College will eliminate all biased decisions and will create more freedom and responsibilities for the people of the U.S. to use their own judgement and choose who they think will best represent the country. Being in the electoral college and being selected to have a heavy say in who will be chosen is a big responsibilty and in that responsibility are duties to not only look at each candidate with one mind set and one point of view but to make an unbiased judgement. To make an unbiased call would mean to put away all your own thoughts and judgements and really get a good understanding of who the people truly need. Back in 1960, it states that segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. How can we tell that something like this will not happen again? Well if we choose to keep the Electoral College it very well could and the people of the country would not be making decisions for themselves as well.\n\nMost worrying comes from the fear of a tie, in which the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Because each state casts only one single vote. That single vote from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters could have as much say as the 55 representatives from California who represent 35 million voters. So therefore the election is really only a few swing voters away from a disaster. Because of the winner-take-all system, candidates really dont spend time campaigning in states they think they have no chance of winning, really only focusing on the bigger states with more votes. This is also unfair because then the people with the right to vote do not get a say in who they want to represent their country. The Electoral college really takes away many rights and freedoms to the people of the U.S. and doesnt give us the chance to have a say. Studies even show that 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now!\n\nAs well as having such a biased voting system, this is such an unfair system due to the fact the the popular vote winner could loose because of the Electoral College voters. This would be a very bad decision to keep the Electoral College especially if these Electoral voters have had their decision swayed by something. Then we will have a president that is only the president because of some voters biased and unfair judgemented calls. If one Electoral College voter has a certain view on a candidate, they could very well share that and somehow persuade the other voters decisions due to one persons thoughts and points of view on the candidate. One person can easily influence many peoples own judgements, which would cause them to choose poorly and only go under the pressure of that persons thoughts. The Electoral College has so many cons which would make it such a bad decision to keep this system and go by a biased and unfair advantage. So I believe that the best thing for the U.S. voting system would be to abolish the Electoral College and to keep the popular vote system so that everyone has their own say on who will acheive great things for our country.\n\nThank you for keeping my thoughts in mind,\n\nMadison",
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"content": "The author supports his idea of exploring venus even though there are many challenges to complete the task. Some challenges that come with exploring Venus is that it has harsh conditions for human and and robots, but the NASA has been working on other approaches. Scientist would like study its surface because at some point in history Venus was somewhat like Earth. The author has answers for all the challenges that scientist have with exploring Venus.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun which makes the planet the planet very hot reaching 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus also has a very thick atmosphere of almost 97% of carbon dioxide blankets, and as the author states \"the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our planet\" that pressure would easily destroy any metal. Another fact about Venus is that it has the hottest surface of all the planets in our solar symtem even though Mercury is the closest planet to the sun. So far scientist have been working on alternatives to explore Venus.\n\nHumans have sent many spacecraft to land on Venus, but none of them have survived this shows why non of the missions have been named. but in recent times the NASA has been working on using electronics made out of silicon carbide because they had been tested in a chamber simulating the conditions of Venus. Another approach that NASA is looking foward to is sending \"mechanical computers\" this devices use gears and levers to make calculation and do no need electronics at all. Mechanical computers can be made more resistant to heat, pressure, and many other force unlike its counter part, modern computers, they can very flexible, powerfull, and quick, but they are more delicate being in extreme conditions.\n\nHuman survival can be possible in Venus with a space ship hovering 30 miles above the ground of the planet, the pressure would be very close to the one on Earth the temperature would be around 170 Fahrenheit also they would be plenty of solar power, and the radiation would no be more that what it is on our planet. In these conditions human life can be accomplish. Millions of years ago Venus was like Earth, how do we know? because Venus has features of Earth such as rocky sediment, craters and mountains.\n\nThe conditions in Venus make it hard to survive in the planet because its temperature can reach 800 F and the pressure is 90 times grater than what it is on Earth, life on the ground cant be possible on the rocky ground of Venus. Even though the conditions has very dangerous conditions exploration can be possible with mechanical computers. Life can also be possible if we find a way to hover 30 miles away from the ground because the temperature can be 170 F and the pressure would be like Earth. Life 30 miles above the ground of Venus can be possible.",
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"content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy let Luke see all over the world and help people in need. He had the most fun on his home with the other Seagoing Cowboys. They would play Base baseball and volleyball in the empty hold of the animals been housed. They would aslo play table-tennis touranments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games. When he turned 18 he wsa his way to Greece (as a Seagoing Cowboy) and he got draft. When they found out he was a Seagoing Cowboy they said he could do his service as a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIt opend up the world to him. He got to see the Acropolis in Greece and he rode up in Venic, Italy were the streets are water. Helping out on his Aunt's farm helped him for the hard work as a Seagoign Cowboy but it didn't help for the danger of the sea. It made him more awar of peole in other countries that need help and that stayed with him for life and he shared that wiht his family. He always said it was more than just an adventure.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can be fun at times but can be realy hard at some parts. It helps for life like school does. I think that more peole sould get a try to become a Seagoing Cowboy just to learn soem of the same thing Luck did or see the things he might have seen. So give it a try it can be fun!",
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"content": "These days a large number of couples decide to have babies after spending at least few years since their marriage. According to some experts, there are various reasons which urge parents to have children later in their life. Career, changes in social belief, women empowerment, escalating living expenses, increased life expectancy are some of the major causes of this trend. In my belief advantages of having children later in life outweigh its demerits.\n\nFirst, a growing number of parents are very passionate and enthusiastic in terms of career development and their profession is the primary reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage. It is intuitively obvious that in this age of huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their career and job promotions. As a result, parents decide and determine to postpone their first childbirth. Second, women empowerment has changed the old way of life where a woman's sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they decide to take babies after they reach a stable job position.\n\nFurthermore, social belief regarding giving birth of children has changed dramatically and people are more concerned about the living expenses than the number of babies they have, unlike older generations. Additionally, parents who study full-time in universities can not concentrate on their studies competently if they become parents. Enhanced life expectancy and changes in the social belief are two other reasons for this trend.\n\nUndeniably people who either work or run a business can reach to a stable position before becoming parents. Thus they can take better care of their babies which would have been impossible if the baby was born earlier. It is often a fact that having offspring early in life can escalate expenditures and financial responsibilities of parents. In particular, if the parents cannot allocate time for them, they grow up with psychological issues. Such young parents often lack the knowledge and time they need to properly take care the baby. Ultimately, parents might put their career at a risk as well as the future of their children if they become parents before they are mentally and economically stable.\n\nReversely, having offspring in early life have few advantages. Such parents have new members in their family and their isolation would be extirpated and they will become more family-oriented. \n\nIn conclusion, despite the pleasure of having a new baby in early years of marriage, parents who decide to have babies later can primarily, readily and precisely focus on their career, can easily fulfill financial requirements and have sufficient time to persist, strive and struggle in order to have a stunning, and illuminated future in life.",
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"content": "Computers good get infermation play games get pictures But computer might find something someone bad viris If ther vris might want shut computers get worse The websites kids like games teen games adult games Also pictures bad kids time lead inapropreit pictures You look infermation need things like wepons knifes Also differnt kinds companies like good place get computers",
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"content": "Dear agree I m trying tell people use computer exsersise Well first people use computers benifit Secondly spending much time computer exercising Finally spend less less time family active First people use computers benifit Computers adicting technology makes lazy slow Does using computer problems family CAPS Well I know ex perience My mom always face book I hate I figure loves computer want kids think As days pass time computer increase sitting needing homework m thinking YOU See thiking cause I said s rap trying say computer went benifit anyone way Second I want inform paper people spending time computer exsercising The obeast rate higer ever I believe COME ON people come home fast food go computer eat Over time get bigger apperence change You began look sloppy nobody wants You look back regret Finally spend less less time family This causes grow apart family kids pick bad habbits opposite want This tells computer good In conclusion I informed I dislike computers They benift Makes lazy keeps kids So oyou local paper agree",
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"content": "Many people know would upset wasnt anymore books shelves library I think books offensive wants read book boring excitingThe libraries lables books people go check books would lable says book right sertin people contain bad language Thats example There adult children sections library maybe sections every type books like murder mysteryThat also goes movies music magazines I love going though books library never know expect book",
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"content": "The author truly believes that studying Venus is well worth the risks. Comparing Venus to Earth and stating what Venus once was helps convey their thinking. The author is informing that studying Venus is a challenge for humans, the knowledge of its Earth-like features, and would help in the development of furture Earth exploration.\n\nThe author believes that if scientists could successfully study Venus then mankind could make exploring the rest of our world easier. In paragraph 3, \" On the planet's surface, tempeatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" If science can find a way to survive this that will increase how much further we can dig down in the earth. In paragraph 3,\"... the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" The ability for a machine to stay intact in this condition would result in the capability of exploring the bottom of the ocean.\n\nThe author also conveys that learning about Venus' Earth-like features could give man a better estimate of how Venus' change came about. In paragraph 4,\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported carious forms of life, just like Earth.\" Having this knowledge supplies scientists with knowing what lived on Venus or what happened to the life. in paragraph 6,\" More imortantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" The fact that researchers can't easily take materials from the planet shows that if we can collect things from this dangerous planet we can do to the rest of the planets.\n\nFinally, studying our \"twin\" planet would be one of the greatest challenges for mankind. In paragraph 4,\"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" There are risks with going back to Venus, but the chance of information\n\nwidely outweighs the risks. In paragraph 8,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors.\" The task of studying a very dangerous planet could lead to itch of science to do even greater tougher tasks.\n\nThe author strongly supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author gave evidence to support that studying the present Venus could help understand past Venus and furture Earth. the evidence also strengthens that overcoming this challenge will aid further exploration of Earth and space.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez certain mood I believe mood supposed seen joyful uplifting The whole memoir describing rich child hood author home family nothing great things say When talking home says Within walls young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I externally grateful I would say pretty enlightening He also says grateful parents The mood memoir nothing good",
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"content": "In the modern era , news media play a pivotal role in human life,and there are several reasons why it is important. Hence, I strongly believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks.\r\n\r\nFirstly , news platforms assist the society to have more information about the world around them. To elaborate, details related to various topics can help a individual in their day today life such as watching a weather forecasts or business news can provide assistance to the personal growth . Therefore, vigiling those kinds of information , people can recognise various weather patterns or business tactics that they can utilise in their personal life . For example , most farmers in India start to harvest their crops by studying weather variation in atmosphere so that , they can get more yield from the cultivation.\r\n\r\nMoreover, it is obvious that news sites have a great beneficial influence in society . Today , people can use the news media for informing the problems that they confront in their life. Thereby, higher authorities can aware of the issues that the communities face in their life and eventually , provide nesscary assistance to the citizens. In addition , people can make use of news platforms for knowing different cultures and talents of individuals among various countries . It is apparent that many regions have various cultures and custums and those details can only be delivered through news sites . Thus , people can recognise those rituals of different lands , and Consequently become aware of these traditions . For instance, in India there is a show called Indian Ideals were different person's can showcase their talent and skills to the whole world.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is clear that news media 's are really important in each individual life because it provides acess to so many information to people . Therefore , I strongly assume that it has more advantages than disadvantages.",
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"content": "Youngsters are the back bone of the every country because they have energy not only physical or mentally as well. Half proportions of the society consider they should do some voluntary work to utilize their leisure time. I agree with this statement which will help them and society in future, will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, they could do numerous of activities to make spare time to fruitful. First and foremost, they can teach slum area children who cannot pay schools and colleges fees because of financial condition. They can learn team work, leadership and also learn teaching skills which will help if they want to be professional teachers, they can understand their responsibilities toward society and cannot indulge into anti social activities.\r\n\r\nSecondly, they can grow trees on public places which will help to environment cool and clean and surrounding green and help to reduce the level of pollution. Moreover, they can organize awareness programs to encourage others to do the same, this give them opportunity to interact with local folks and make strong social bond and improve communication skills. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is just like kill two birds with one stone as it will help both the public and adolescents, so parents and teachers should encourage them to use their free time wisely.",
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"content": "In today’s life, many people suppose that if young individuals take part in voluntary jobs, it will bring advantages to both themselves and the community. Although this is partly true, I argue that we should not force them to do these if they do not want to.\r\n\r\nThere are some reasons why parents should not require their children to work on a voluntary basis. Firstly, it is obvious that school-aged children already have enough pressure from their studying. For example, in many schools, students are forced to attend a number of extra classes; moreover, there is a huge amount of assignments from their teachers that they have to finish before classes. Therefore, not all of them are such that free to spend time on other activities. In addition, because of this studying pressure, parents should encourage them to unwind in order not to suffer from depression or stress. For instance, They should hang out more with their friends, play some sports and participate in extracurricular activities to develop their physical health as well as mental one.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that if volunteering becomes a must for teenagers, they will lose their right to freedom. Undoubtedly, in most countries, it will counter the value of a free and fair society if any individuals have to do work that they do not want due to requirements from others. It is a fact that people will absolutely do their tasks without their highest ability and devotion because they are obligated. As a result, the government and society can not gain anything from them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in spite of some personal and social benefits from volunteer teenagers, these works should come from their desires instead of forces from others. This is because teenagers are having enough burden from their studying as well as it will against the right of humanity to be free.",
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"content": "It has be at least 40 years since the viking 1 picture was taken i cant begin on how to tell you how it was a natural landform but the Face on mars is just a buttee becasue we took a 3d image using the most advanced technology.\n\nnasa has used the most advanced technology to discover what the face on mars was reall is. back in 1976 we had viking 1 orbit around mars to find a perfect landing spot for viking 2. by the year 1998 we had more technology avalible to start looking closer at\n\nthe face and we wstarted to see that it was not a face all.We later put the image on the internet and conspiracies were started saying the the martians started this to show that there is life on the planet after alll. tha picture helped everybody\n\nto startvbeing intrested in mars after the picture was put on the internet it was famous it was in movies,radio talk shows, and even haunted a grocery stor for 25 years! now picture this its almost 2002 and we have one more shuttle got sent to mars and we found where the face was. it was really hard though to find becasue we thought we were looking for a face. then we realized sonething. this was the exact coordinates were the face was it was a butte or a national land form! this happen to look at limke the face when we first saw it becase of the shawdow form the sun so it looked like a human face.\n\nin concluasion the \"face on Mars was just a butte and the reasin it looked like a face is beacse of how the shawdow reflecting off of it made it look like a face.",
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"content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage, for exmple, it lowers the amount of emmisons present in the atmosphere which can lead to a better planet. All around the world people have started using cars less and less because of the problems they cause, such as polution and traffic, and have started moving to a better idea of society where everyone lives in a closer area with stores and jobs within walking distance. The life of cars is ending but our life is just getting better.\n\nSince the times of World War 2, people have had the idea of spread-out homes and private garages but with new times come new ideas, new ideas of closer centered, compact cities. These new cities would have most shops and businesses in close quarters with housing to reduce the need for automobiles and have walking as a more reliable mode of transportation as well as a small amount of public transportation to assist with the more lengthy distances between home and work. In this new approach stores are placed closer to home along walkways rather than in malls along highways in the distance. This would reduce the space needed for the shopping centers as well due to the fact that they would no longer need large parking lots for all the vehicles that were once needed to commute to and fro.\n\nEmissions and greenhouse gases have been a problem in modern society due to the fact that almost everyone has an automobile. This has been creating a large amount of stress on the enviroment and can lead to problems in the near future. Because of these problems, many enviomental agencies have started regulating car usage to try to keep the enviroment safe. Some of the ways they are doing this include promoting \"car reduced\" communities, which rely more on public transportation serving the suburbs than personal transportation. This helps to cut down on traffic and in turn the amount of emissions produced by cars on the road. Another way to prevent this is to ban the act of driving all together. Paris has done this in the past to combat the amount of smog accumulating in their city by banning the driving of certain license plate numbers which reduced the amount of traffic and emissions.\n\nCar free cities are also very popular. an example of this is Bogota, Columbia. They have had cars banned for the last three years, minus buses and taxis. The goal of this project was to promote alternate means of transportation and reduce smog. This has created over 118 miles in bicycle paths as well as broad smooth sidewalks. The amount has traffic has also been cut in half during rush-hour thanks to new restrictions. New retaurants and upscale shopping has also come up all around the area. The amount of smag has also been reduced significantly and air quality has made a huge jump.\n\nOverall, the age of the car is coming to an end, but it is making our life better and easier. Hopefully these new restrictions and ideas will help us to reduce smog, cut down on traffic and produce a better, more stress-free, lifestyle. Then, maybe we can all become \"Urban /k/ommandos\" someday. The term \"Urban /k/ommando\" is trademark of the /k/ Branch of 4Chan. org and is not to be used by any parties who do not assume the responsibilities of carrying this title.",
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"content": "We all plan to get cars when we get our licenses right? Wrong! The relationship between people and cars throughout the Earth is changing with fewer people buying cars and governments supporting the use of more eco-friendly methods of transportation. Two advantages of this change that I would like to point out is first the improvement in health, and second the fact green house gasses have gone down. These may seem like great ideas, but you may be asking yourself are such advantages possible?\n\nBegining with the lack of pollution, cars can produce Carbon dioxide which causes problems in the atmosphere. The gas traps sunlight creating greenhouse gasses which is responsible for global warming. This would cause problems for future generations with an increase in flooding and other factors that can destroy areas of living, not to mention the fact breathing in the fumes is bad for health. The scary part about the relationship between green house gasses and cars is that twelve percent of green house gasses caused by cars are in Europe. This may no frighten you, but when you take into account fifty percent of green house gasses lie in the U.S., you realize how seroius and frightenning the situation really is.\n\nAnother benefit of the lack of car usage is the improvement of public health. It's known by many scientist and psycohlogist that an increase in stress is bad for health and can lower a person's life expentancy. In Vaubun Germany a mother's words about their Vaubun progam was \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" meanwhile in Bogota, Columbia a bussiness man said \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" during Bogota's car-free day program. Aside from the stress, people are getting far more fit as they walk or take a bike to their destionations, even in large cities like New York where you'll see people joining bike programs. Bicycle lanes are increasing greatley and in Bogota, 118 miles have already been built.\n\nIn conclusion, I would like to point out that out our world is improving. The awareness of government and the people has lead into the creation of bicycle lanes, a lowering in the stress level of the people, and a decrease in green house gasses. This will in turn provide a better future for countless generations of people throughout the entire planet. It's as Bill Ford, executive of the Ford Motor company stated \"pedestria, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\"",
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"content": "What is the purpose for driveless cars? In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author gives us many details on why driverless cars aren't as safe as people make them to be. In my opinon, I feel like the practice of driveless cars should not be allowed because what is really the main purpose or goal of driverless cars. The author provides many details on what is the purpose of a driverless car, driverless cars have many sensors, and the law changes set up just for the driverless.\n\nFirst, why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? The author explains to us that even if they were a such thing as driveless cars, invidiuals would still have to control the car. In my opinon that is not a driveless car nor is it a safe car if it still needs the skills and knowledge of a human being.\n\nSecond, according to the article this so called \"driveless car\" is going to have many sensors on it to prevent a car accident from happening. What if there was a manufacturing error and one of the sensors does not function right? The question that everybody is asking what if you got into a car accident who do you blame? Do you blame the owner of the manufacturer or do you blame the driver? This question still remains, and there is still no answer. Lastly, most of the driving laws focuses on keeping the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. These laws were written assuming behind the wheel is a human being in control of the wheel at all times. Lawmakers would have to make new laws in order to cover the liability in the case of an accidient or if somebody gets injured . The question still remains who will be responsbile if something bad happens the owner of the manufacter or the driver?\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not our safest route to go as human beings because essentially you are putting your life in the hands of technology. There are still many questions that remains still with no answer. As many people would say the safiest car is when the human has control over everything at all times.",
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"content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI personally believe that we should stick to and continue the idea of the Electoral College. For one, there are trusted electors in the Electoral College that are trusted to vote for the right candidate. Secondly, there isn't much that can go wrong in the Electoral College. Last but not least, by electing a president of the United States through popular vote, the right person may not be elected to be president for our country.\n\nTo start off, there are trusted electors in the Electoral College that are trusted by the parties to make the right vote for president. The Electoral College is a system that was created by the founding fathers created in the Constitution. When voters go off to the polls most have the thought in their mind that they are voting for their next president when they really are not. In the Electoral College there are 538 electors, which ever candidate gets the majority of 270 electoral votes wins the election. In source 3, the passage states \"When you vote for a presidentisl candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors\". The electors that are in the Electoral College are selected by a certain party and the party trust that the person will vote for that certain party's candidate. With this process, the candidate that ends up getting elected is more likely the right candidate for the president spot.\n\nSecondly, when using the Electoral College there ins't too many things that can go wrong. Most people that choose to go against the Electoral College would say that \"with the Electoral College its not really our choice when we vote because in the end the electors from the party vote for the president\". In source 2, the passage states \"Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote.\" If a tie with the electoral votes is to ever take place, the House of Representatives would handle the election and state delegations would have the final vote for president. Also, if a tie does take place then the Senate would vote for the vice-president.\n\nLast but not least, if we switch to the popular vote election process then the right president candidate may not always be elected. This point can go against both sides. The side that supports the Electoral College may say \"the people may vote for a certain candidate because of his color or race\". The side that supports the popular vote system may say \"when we go out to vote it doesn't count towards anything because of the electors in the Electoral College. So why are we even going out to the polls to vote?\" Also, with the Electoral College there will not be any run-off elections. In source 3, the passage states \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast\".\n\nIn conclusion, I believe we should keep the Electoral College system going so we can have a more fluent election process. For one, there are trusted electors in the Electoral College that the parties trust to make the right vote. Secondly, when using the Electoral College there isn't too many things that can go wrong with the election process. Last but not least, if we switch to the popular vote election process them the right president candidate may not always be elected. Senator I hope that we can continue the Electoral College election process",
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"content": "The first time I baby sat little girls A toddler named baby named After parents left everything fine That started crying like crazy At first I thought saying CAPS I realized saying CAPS Her blanket I handed stopped immeadiently Now I realize patient I Im glad I figured wanted Hopefully next time Ill patient",
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"content": "The mood used memoir joyful motivating times The able paint marviles painting parents using words brave courageous strength perseverance loving carrieing gracious shows reader wants paint serious mood Also went describe home gave sence loving joyful enviroment mood For example able experince real friendship endless celebrations love strength helping others childhood The used powerful since mood show pashen parents home",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered if Mars has natural landforms? Well NASA has done some research in outter space and found a face on Mars. Now, they don't know if the Face is just natural or if it was created by aliens. In my opinion I believe that it's just a natural landform.\n\nIn this essay I will convince you that it is just a natural landform.\n\nMany people have wondered if Mars has life on it. I see why, because NASA has found a landform on Mars that is a Face. NASA is trying to determine if it is just natural. It is natural because in the text it says, \"What the picture actualy shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa-landforms common around the American West.\" This text shows that if the Face can relate to common landorms on Earth then it can be natural.\n\nThis essay shows that the Face on Mars can be natural and not be created by aliens. NASA is still trying to determine if it is natural or created by aliens though. I still believe that the Face is just natural.",
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"content": "In process building dock dirigibles builders faced obstacles The first obstacle builders faced lack suitable landing area If nt area land reason way build Also builders would remodel whole building After building framed th floor could nt build mast roof done took even longerThe greatest obstacle mast dealt nature winds tops buildings constantly shifting way dirigible land stay place without crashing The final obstacle builders faced law airships flying low urban areas made illegal ship ever tie even approach buildingAs see many obstacles mast nt useful It great idea But opinion waste time money",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist greatly The features old abandon towns hot temperatures Also abandoned buildings This makes cyclist think All hope lost The essay says Over one long crippling hill bulding came view I hung head smoky blues tune summertime rattle around Then happy mo In ironic twist please sadist reading building looks afit welchs grape Juice factory bottling plant I hung head smoky bluees tune sumertime rattle around Then happy mood states As I stumbled ra ther modern bathroom drank deeply sink overwhelming urge seek Gary Wilber kiss",
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"content": "As we enter a world where humans want to depend on technology for everything, even the simplest of tasks, the idea of \"driverless cars\" is introduced. What sounds like a great idea now, doesn't have as much potential when looked in to. While these \"driverless cars\" are envisioned to use \"half the fuel of today's taxis\" and \"offer more flexibilty than a bus\", there are still some aspects that don't make the cars completely \"driverless\". Before driverless cars make their huge impact on the world, some of the \"minor\" details need to be further developed.\n\nHow often do you hear of people calling for transportation services, such as taxis or Ubers, because they aren't in a state of mind and being good enough to be able to operate a motorized vehicle? If taxi systems were to be replaced with driverless cars, who would drive those people home? A major flaw in the driverless cars is that they might require human assistance sometime throughout the trip. If there were to be a spontaneous accident, or large work zone ahead while the only human in the car was intoxicated, that would pose a lot of danger for that driver and every other driver around. The safety of other drivers on the road has to be taken into consideration.\n\nMaking cars driverless means no one would be completely in control of the vehicle. Keeping that in mind, in the case of an accident, who would be to blame? The driver could be at fault, but then how really driver-independent are these cars? With the possibility that the car will more than likely need human assistance, the driver themselves is only slightly benefited.\n\nJust because \"driverless cars\" are assumed as completely \"driverless\", an actual human capable of thinking and doing for the car is indeed necessary. Where I'm sure there are certain groups of people that will benefit from being able to get from point A to point B without having to think anything of it, there's still that larger population that will find almost no practicality in watching their vehicle drive itself when they are capable of doing it themselves. Aside from the safety features that comes with a car having a mind of its own almost, I think we're better off without this technological advancement.",
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"content": "The setting story greatly affects cyclists attitude adversities The path cyclist California deserts dry hot This first presents major conflict story danger cyclist getting heatstake In reading author says I hitting water bottles pretty regularly If setting cooler climate author would likely drank often would face dehydration The trip would dangerous cyclist climate different Another element setting affected cyclist terrain In reading says Flat road replaced short rolling hills The rough road would take toil authors body also mind While riding author thinks I waterdepleting mph This shows attitude getting less less optimistic well keeping mind thirst Thinking thirst would get thirsty The small change terrain large impact authors journey Perhaps influential element setting isolation Only end story cyclist run another human Up point He alone deal thirst fatigue If setting urbanized area cyclist could gotten help people would made ordeal easy Also known nobody going help played large role mental state author In conclusion conflict story set setting If setting hot rough isolated cyclist would easy journey story would exciting interesting A different setting opinion would ruined story",
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"content": "I patient last time I went doctors brother wait outside waiting room called us shots Everybody else getting go head stayed patient It got really boring sitting stayed patient After two three hours patient couple hours ago So decide go ask going We found forgot sign got",
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"content": "The author supports the idea that venus' charastics, such as being Earth-like and being the closest option for a planteary visit, are worth studying despite the dangers of the thick atmosphere, deadly temperatures on the surface ans the pressure. A question the author asked was, \"What are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" This question supports the authors idea becasue the question is wanting more information so the trip can happen.\n\nVenus is the closest planet in our solor system to Earth. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms oflife, just like Earth.\" Venus' rocky surface, valleys, mountains, and carters are all alike to what we have on Earth.\n\nVenus is sometiems right next to us. \"...Venus can sometives be our nearest option for a planetarty visit.\" The speed of orbit for Mars, Venus, and Earth are all different. So, sometimes Venus is next to Earth and sometimes Mars is next to Earth.\n\nThe question, \"what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" is a very important question. They have to have precosions with the dangers of the planet. For the avoidence of the unfriendly conditions on the surface, they will hover in a blimp-like vehichial 30 miles or so off the surface. The articale states that the researchers would like to be able to use robots to study the plants surface to they can get more informations.\n\nWith these reasons that have just been stated, the author does in fact support the idea of exploring Venus despite the dangers.",
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"content": "Pursuiting a study of Venus is a really great idea, you learn that its like earths twin. Venus has been called Earth's twin the Evening Star, because its one of the brightest points in the night sky. But the problem with Venus is that its nicknames misslead you. In paragraph two, it talks about how in some past missions they have sent space crafts that haven't survived the landing and if they did it was for only a few hours. It has been three decades since we sent anything to Venus. In paragraph three they talk about how Venus's surface temperatures are over 800 degrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater than Earth. With that environment its posible to crush a ship or submarine. Studying Venus can be a great thing but we still don't know alot about the planet sending some one up there is crazy. Eapasually because we haven't sent anything up there in three decades, sending a human would be crazy.",
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"content": "Technology has been vastly improving these past couple of years. With all these new technological improvements it can also play a major factor in classrooms. All teenagers these days are very \"tech-friendly\". Therefore it would only make sense that we should incorporate some of these technological adavances\n\ninto the classroom so students could be more engaged during class. It would greatly improve many homework scores, quiz scores, and even test scores\n\nthus overall having many improvements to their grades in all.\n\nThe new software \" Facial Action Coding System\" has been a huge technological improvement to this time.\n\nIn the passage it states \" Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements---in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotion.\" This can show how in a classroom if students are being active during a lesson and participating. Or if they are dozing off somewhere else with the help of this technology then the computer can change its algorithms to change how the lesson is being taught therefore making the student pay attention during class.\n\nIn a classroom filled with some kids that just can't focus and/or do not understand then this technology can come into great use. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" the passage states. This technology could help students that have trouble with some classes or just are not paying attention whatsoever, in the passages it also states,\n\n\"Then it can modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" With this technology it can highly improve on keeping the students attention at all times, this can help the students with making sure they know whats going on during class at all times instead of zoning out then missing something very cruical and overall messing alot of things up but instead keeping them highly engaged at all times.\n\nIn conclusion the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is greatly valuable. The use of this technological advancement would greatly improve students comprehension of some classes in school that they might've not understood before. It would be more personalized to that specific person, the more confused you look the more different ways it would look to make sure you understand the concept. Thus making the student very proactive and improving their overall grade.",
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"content": "Painting or music is a compulsory subject in most of the schools nowadays. While some think that there are much more important subjects, others believe that art is a very crucial field to learn. Though there are arguments, I radically agree that artcraft must be taught in school study. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, subjects like science or technology may sometimes outweigh the significance of drawing or craftwork for various reasons. Firstly, in the practical world, people are only looking for an education which could provide them with a better or secured job. For example, studying mathematics may ensure a better future than painting. Secondly, nowadays kids are very much pressurized by so many different tasks or extracurricular activities, thus parents may want to teach only what could be fruitful in the near future for the children. For instance, a kid takes lessons on mathematics, science, karate and swimming, as a result, any less important area may make an extra burden on the tiny shoulder. This sometimes may be an extra load for the children. Therefore, some think it is a complete waste of time.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, music or sculpture may help to grow a child's fundamental knowledge or heal mental stress. There are ample of important subjects a child could learn, however art is definitely one of them. It helps to express inner feelings, explore new things and nourishes minds. For example, an artistic mind is always innovative, hence a kid could experience many things by this. Also, if the student is interested in this, he could choose it as a profession. In other words, Leonardo Da Vinci was a great artist and there is no doubt about his extremely successful career. Moreover, there are so many positive aspects of learning art in school that it could never be a spared.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay has discussed both views. Although both views have merits and demerits, I reckon that it is very much needed to include artwork as a compulsory subject in primary education in order to build the students' basic understanding in this matter.",
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"content": "In the contemporary era, there is no difference between a guy and a woman. In some countries, society still believes that she can't do proper undertaking compare to her fellow. They think that their product is better done by her husband and others by her. I do not see eye to eye to give this statement and will my present view discuss in the following paragraph. \r\n\r\nIn order to justify my point of view, I would like to pen down that gender racism is not tolerated.\r\n\r\nThere are fields in all sector, where the girl and he are working together. They are no participating in the duty. According to me, the girls is a more hard worker and intelligent rather than the father. However, nowadays 75% of a wife are working in mechanical fields. The mechanic business is hard but they are showing themself.\r\n\r\nMoreover, there are myriad ladies pilot in plains. The pilot job is also serious and stressful. There is the huge nation that thinks that mother is not capable of the hard burden and they can struggle only at the home not outside. For example, in India, there is one city that is very famous. It's named Jaipur. In ,there most crowds are thinking about a girl who can stay merely at home. This is a narrow mind crowd. My parents taught me that God makes to all the nature and make us. We should not think of any difference between each other.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it can be said that crowd should not make difference between father and wife.",
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"content": "In the United States we have been votng for president for many decades. But now there are protest against the process of electing a president. Many argue that the electoral college should be abolished and others feel that we should elect by popular vote. I strongly believe that we should change to popular vote because the electors could defy peoples will, they are unfair to voters, and people arent necessarily voting for their president.\n\nTo begin with, the electors have the power to defy peoples will. State legistlaters are responsible for picking electors and those electors can defy the will of people. \"Electors have occasionally refused to vote for their partys candidate and cast a deciding for whomever they please.\" said Bradford Plumer .This is not right because the legislatures are picking electors that are using their powers for the worst.\n\nNext,the electoral college is unfair to the voters. \" Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state,candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\" said Plumer. For example , during the 2000 campaign only 17 states didnt see the candidatesat all, that includes Rhode Island and South Carolina. Electoral colleges are not being fair to the states and their voters.\n\nLastly, the election process should be changed to popular vote because voters are necessarily voting for the president. Most people think that when they go to vote for their president that their votes are what decides the final outcome, but thats not true!.Its the electoral college that decides that. Some people dont vote for that reason , because they dont think that their vote will change anything. And in the end it does not seem very fair that are votes count by very little.\n\nIn conclusion, the way we elect are president every four years should be changed. It should go based on popular vote not on electoral college because elector could defy people, they are unfair to voters , and people arent necessarily voting for their president. For all the reason people should be able to vote and they will know that their vote will be counted.",
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"content": "When faced prospect building tallest building world Al Smith refused give In order achieve goal decided build Dirigible docking mast atop new creation But genius idea came obstacle obstacle preventing idea ever taking flight One obstacle faced Al Smith far greatest safety Most nonAmerican Dirigibles used hydrogen within Dirigibles highly flammable The owners empire state building realized bad would fiery explosion happened densely populated area downtown New York Another great obstacle nature winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This made impossible Dirigible tethered without back ship swireling around mooring mast",
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"content": "The author tellus about the two planet that are right ext to each other. The author tells us how there one in specfic that a lot like earth. He tells us that for decades we have been wanting to find out more about Venus but its just complicated the temperature and eveyrhting about it. he thinks that it is important to learn more about the planet so that later in life we could send people and build things there for example the hovering vechiles he talked about.\n\nThe author suggests that studying Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers it present because out of all the other planet in the solar sydtem Venus is the that is more like earth. It talks about how dangerous it is how the machines that they send to Venus dont last long because of things are in Venus. Obvisouly he or she thinks that its worth it because the author tells us how \"researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" He says that \"our travels on earth and beyond shouldnt be limited by dangers and doubts but should expand to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nThe author had said that most likely probably at one point Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various of life, just like Earth. I mean in my opinion that would be smart to learn more about the planet because we never know the world might come to its end and we need to be prepared to move in somewhere new. It has some features that are analogous to those on Earth, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as velleys, mountains and craters that furthermore Venus might be our nearest option for planetary visits.\n\nThe autor want or tells us that NASA has one particulary idea for sending humans to study venus. Nasa's possible solution to hostlie conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float abovethe fray. Like a blimp lke vechile hovering 30 or miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. it tells us that \" solar power would be plentiful, and radiations would not exceed Earth levels , not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. If at one point there was living life in Venus i feel like that would be important what if there s living life there but we just havent found it there might others things in venus that could help earth in some type of way.",
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"content": "Can you picture a life without human in control of driving? Yes, it might sound like a good idea but its more realistic then you think. In the article Driverless Cars Are Coming it states \" Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of dring on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes- Benz, Audi and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020\". Humans have always been driving cars since say cars have been invented. The idea of drivless car is new since humans have always been in control manually. Driverless cars is a idea that is inot logical. There no point in making driverless cars for people to use.\n\nWhen it comes to a car there are so many parts that could go wrong. Imagine what could go on with a car that is driverless. A driverless car would have more technology parts then a normal car does. If a part goes damage you don't know what the damage could be. This idea is new and so many people will not be able to fix a part on their driverless car. Technology is still a very new idea and their people who don't know how to use it.\n\nWho really need a driverless\n\ncar in life. This idea will just increase the laziness people will have. People would depend on this car and forget how to drive a car. Life today is just fiding new ideas to make humans life easier. This car will increase the laziness in humans and make their life harder then they think. In the article is say\" Why would would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\". This idea takes out the fun in driving a car and makes it extremely boring.\n\nThis would affect finacially people. Not everyone would be able to afford a car that is driverless. Some people can barely afford a 2002 car let alone a new driverless car. What would happen to those who can't own one of these cars? Will their normal car cause a problem to these new driverless cars.\n\nIn conclusion, there is no need for driverless cars to be invented.There are so many factors to think about before jumping into the idea. Technology failure, increase in laziness, and the money need for a car like this. Would you really wanna see yourself siting in a car you cannot control?",
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"content": "An often debated topic is whether countries should invest a substantial amount on international sports competition as this allows a global recognition. However, some people believe financial assistance should be directed to youth sports to reduce crime rate among teenagers. Both sides of these arguments will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion.\n On the one hand, a nation that provides monetary support for its athlete in global events will be recognized all over the world. For example, US is widely known for its unbeatable record in women’s football competition having won the women’s World Cup two consecutive times and this can only be traced by the immense support provided by the government. This is evident that large expense on international event improves a country’s identity.\n On the other hand, many argue children should encouraged to get involved in sporting activities to reduce teenage crimes. For instance, provision of adequate facilities, sporting equipments, instructors and various scholarship opportunities youngsters will be motivated and preoccupied with relevant activities resulting in less chance of committing a crime. This is clear that financially investing on adolescent with the purpose of getting them involved in sports reduces unprofitable activities among them. \n Although, the above look reveals solids evidence of both views, it is felt that the advantages diverting a large expense on worldwide events outweighs youth sports. It is hoped that on the challenge to provide enough help to the athletes in the foreseeable future.",
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"content": "The memoir created happy mood Living great They better chance life cuba alot oportinitys staying together Having friends come relatives non relatives great You better mood day come",
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"content": "Healthcare is an important aspect of the growth and prosperity of any country,thus highlighting that physical well being should be the main objective of the exploration,whereas others think that there more essential problems should be investigated first.I personally believe well-being is more significant than other problems.Although I will be discussing both views.\r\n\r\nFirst of all Investigating and scientific advancement in the well-being care sector has become unavoidable in the modern era.It is worthy and beneficial in terms of the economic growth of a country,such as the discovery of medicines against various diseases.In this ,way it not helps make money but leads to healthy populations,which has long terms benefits on the health of the society.For ,example Ireland has strong research in medicine,therefore it has become one of the richest countries in nature.They are making new advancements in medicine and helping the fitness sector of the world,in collaboration with health care organizations such as WHO and UNICEF,they also provide free aid to the underdeveloped.In this ,way they are only growing economy one of the important hand in the well-being service sector of the earth.\r\n\r\nWhereas,the people think that it is useless to research in the medicine more investigation should be in space but my argument is that for suppose if we do research in space and technology,but we don't have knowledge about diseases and common pathogens how one will survive on the other planets.Making guns,bombs and fighter planes is will not make the earth a happier place to live, to due such action humanity will destroy itself.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,fitness should be the main part of our investigation,as it has an unavoidable and significant role.While doing a search in other aspects of science and technology as well.We should avoid wasting our time in making warfare tools.Thus in this ,way we can save our world from impending destruction and war.\r\n\r\no",
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"content": "The negative effects of human activities on plants and animals species is a most important problem that many countries face. However, some people think it is too late to do anything to change the situation, but other believe that we can improve it through effective measures. In my opinion, I deeply agree with this that people should realize the serious of this problem and do our best to resolve it.\r\n\r\nSome people think that protecting environment or animals is too late. It is clearly that economy is developing all over the world. That’s means lots of countries are focus on the rate of economical increasing ignore environment has been destroyed. So they think it is not useful to do anything. Some cities in China, for example, the solid has been becoming into sand because people destroyed forest to expand cities. As well as the population in these cities are raising at high speed but the plants and animals are decreasing very fast. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that we can do our best to contral and change the environment we are living. The reason is with technology developed, we can find more methods to protect plants and animals. In addition all the people have same realization to avoid environment be destroyed. \r\n\r\nMoreover, the biodiversity is extremely important subject that most of sciences are researching. Maintaining the healthy balance of the chin of food is our duty. So we should to try many ways to protect plants and animals because we can live alone without plants and animals. For instance, some developed nations announced laws to protect environment and encourage people to learn how to avoid to destroy it. This is the wiser way to deliver positive mind to people.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,protecting environment is one of the most important things that all the people should do. Although it is not easy to achieve, but we should to do it step by step.",
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"content": "I think everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboy program because it allows you to experience adventure and visit many unique places. In the story is says that his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Eurpoe on a cattle boat and it also says it changed his life.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy will allow you to to experience adventure. And when you experience something for the first time it can be scary and it can be really fun. Also you can visit unique places that some people will never get to go to. And when you go to those places you can tell really good storys. I remember when my family went to Flordia for the first time together and when I got back I had a lot to write about.\n\nBy doing something new it could change your future and you might realize you like doing this in sted of doing what you had planed. But you have to want to try something new and you have to give it a chance. When you try something for the first time it might not always work out but most of the time when you keep trying and not give up it will end up going really well and you could learn to like it.\n\nBut if you look at it at a diffrent way going into the sea is dangerous and you would have to be really careful. And if you where in a storm you would have to be careful not to tip the boat and you have to remember there would be cattle on the boat. Also you would have to be careful around the animals so they wont bite or try to kick you.\n\nHowever it can change your life by seeing new things. And you would get to see unique places that a lot of people can't go. You will get to experience adventure and be able to tell great storys about where you where and what you did there. So therefore i think everybody should try something new and be a Seagoing Cowboy.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to spend more time with your family? Well you may have that opportunity sometime in the future. Even as we go about our daily lives people somewhere are working to make that happen. With driverless cars we can spend more time with our family. The driverless car will no doubt help lessen the accidents caused by cars, it will also allow you to do something more important than driving on your way to and from work, and it will help keep your children under control because of you being able to talk to them about their actions in the backseat of your car.\n\nAutomated driving will help stop accidents from happening. Driverless cars are safer because they use sensors rather than the human attention span. Also driverless cars have an automatic brake system in a child or car got in front of the car at any time the car would be able to stop before collision. The cars will also allow everything to be more electronically inclined. If we get automated cars it will change how we live and our productivity.\n\nWhile driving a car you have to pay a lot of attention to any hazards that may come along, and you don't have any time to work on the project for your workplace. While you are driving you could have been working on said project, but you couldn't due to the fact that you had to pay attention to the road. If we develope automated cars it will help bring work productivity up and sales along with it. The economy could really get a boost from them. Which would help people get jobs and more people would come out of poverty. Which could help us pay more attention to the future generation.\n\nWhat are your kids doing half the day do you know? Do you drive with your kids in the car? How many life lessons could you have taught them if you didn't have to drive? I am guessing a lot. Your kids want to hear your stories and they want to know that they are loved by you. If you can't take five minutes out of your day to talk to them what kind of life will they lead.\n\nMy point is that with automated cars we will get more done, have more time to talk to our kids, and we will get into less accidents due to inattention. We could have a life like that. All we have to do is help each other and let them develope and test freely on our streets. Honestly, what do we have to lose? We kill each other more in car accidents than any machine ever will.",
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"content": "There are many advantages to limiting the number of cars on the roads. There are many reasons to not drive as much but there is still a lot of driving. People are taking action in decreasing the number of cars still being driven. There needs to be a smaller number of drivers. Driving isn't a life or death deal, we lived witout it for tens of thousands of years,\n\nThere are a lot of reasons to decrease driving numbers. The most important reasons in my opinion are environmental issues. There are so many gases produced my cars such as carbon monoxide that hurt our atmosphere. The air has been filled with pollutants that are devestating our whole world. Too much exposure to certain gases can be fatal. Driving is not worth polluting and hurting our atmosphere.\n\nMany places have alredy taken action in reducing the number of cars on the road. Vuban, a German suburb, has banned the use of personal vehicles. As a result, 70 percent of families who reside in Vuban do not own a car. They simply walk or ride bikes everywhere with only a few buses to transport the citizens. Heidrun Walter says \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Paris did an experiment with not letting even-number plated cars had to find another way of transportation for one day and odd-number plated cars do the same the next day. Each violator was fined 22 euros or $31. They repeated that cycle for about a week. The amount of smog decreased drastically. Even Bogata has their \"Day Without Cars.\" They've held the event for 3 years straight. Violators faced a $25 fine. In result of that, two other Columbian cities, Cali and Valledupar, have joined the event.\n\nIn the past couple of years there haven't been that many new drivers joining the crowd. A study has shown that there has been a 23% decrease of new drivers between 2001 and 2009. I guess that people don't have the need to drive everywhere now. The number of miles driven was peaked in 2005. Ever since then people have been driving less. We are now at the same number of miles driven as in 1995. People also haven't been buying new cars as often as they used to.\n\nAll in all, there are many advantages of driving less. There isn't as much of pollution being created. If we stay on the same track, we can stop polluting the earth with as many harsh gases and chemicals. There would be more healthy wildlife as well. I understand that transportation is a must, but find more ecologically friendly ways to do it such as car pooling or riding the bus or walking. There are many solutions, we just need to find them.",
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"content": "The features barren desert path make cyclist quite nervous also make determined escape He passes ghost towns abandoned buildings diamondback snakes These images traditionally associated lost deserts would enough instill fear anyone travelling alone The author even remarks sadists probably finding story pleasing He often mentions fears dropping dead eaten vultures one point even wishing death upon via choking albeit jokingly And yet determined live In spite odds stacked moved even losing what believed lost burst energy He even maintains sense humor throughout writing diary entry would left behind remarks wisdom old men In end finds place rest turns lesson hell surely abide follow map",
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"content": "Are some of you parents out there wondering how you can get your son out of the house because he has hit those teenage years. Well guess what i have the perfect suggestion for you. Well we have a special guest to explain to you how his trip was and to get you to sign up now herer he is. Hello! My name is luke, i am a high school grudating student fro mthis experinceice. Now you know what lets get right into it. The first thing i want to talk about is the first things i did or was doing before i got this oppurtinty aslo who gave me this oppurtinty. Well first thing first i was working just like any normal high school teenager was i worked at a bank and at a groccery store. Next this oppurtinty was gavinen to be by my great friend Don Reist. Now this oppuritnty was once in a lifetime how could i say now. Well now lewts talk about what you do before you get on the boat. Well real simplie you go to Eruope and get on a cattle boat. Some of you may ask what is a cttle boat? Well a cattle boat where you watch peoples cow,Horeses and more. So me and my buddy Ron we didnt pick the very best time to go we went in the year of 1945. Yea you can say it that's the year of Wold War 2, I know I know it is well also you may say this man is trying to get me to take my child to Eroupe and put him on a boat and have him go when a war is going on im not doing that i don't want my kid to die. Well you know what i'm still living standing strong to. Well how about we quiet agrueing and just get on to what i did when i was on the boat. Alright well i boarded the boat and i got on searched around and everything. Also i forgot to tell you this job you do how a couple months or years is called \"Seagoing Cowboys\".\n\nAlright so its August and we were headed to new orleans. We arrived on August 14 the day the pacific war ended. See i told you people that your childern wont die i was on the boat for a cople days or months. We had 335 horses on are boat. You might ask how did the boat not sink? Well the boat is perfectly safe no damages to it no broken parts if your childern sign up they will be perfectlyu safe. I had to feed the horses 2 or 3 times a dy wicgh it was very exouhusting but also fun At the same time. Well you know how i said your children will be saf well thats gets me into the part where i almost fell into the atlantic ocean. Well i was going to repoert to the captin because when i turned 18 i got a promation to night watch and had to report to the captin ever 1 hour. Well it was dark and rainiy that night and i tripped over some and i sliped all the way down to the back and the edge of the until a pice of metal stoped me. Well i was still happy to be alive.\n\nSee i told you that your son and dauhter will have agreat experince on this magnifcent trip. See im still alive. So come oont this trip will teach them how to work hard for things. And it gets you a week of no teenagers. So come on just sign your kid up and you will have a diffrent child when your back. Thanks for leisting to my story im luke Bye!!!",
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"content": "Potentially you would think OH GREAT DRIVERLESS CARS! But these cars aren't completely driverless as mentioned in paragraph 7 and the bad thing is you really don't know how great its' manufactured mentioned in paragraph 9 for these reasons im out. There are many negatives as well as positives the positives include so many great things like you have this car driving all by its self to a certain extent, we have all these cars in the time that has passed by and a sensor is one of the oldest safety tools we have used since the 1980's as seen in paragraph 5 and prices are sky high in 2016 so some people may not be able to aford these smart cars wheres all the safety they so called want its' more in favor of money regardless if your real goal is to be safe or not because these cars are the next step to a new generation. If you think it's cheap to build and program a smart car you have another thing coming because it takes many years to develope the idea anyway so thats including every financial risk the people who developed this car would be dirt poor if they werent approved or make enough money to finance all of the product for the car such as the newer Kias have beats systems installed in them which we all know the headphones are 300 dollars a pop so how much is it to be installed in the cars? I dont exactly have an answer for that but it should be figured pretty easily either its commercialized or they payed a lot and commercialized to have this product in their cars. Now back to the smart driverless cars like i said there are positives to this which include the ones that work right and all the safety they contain if you relax and still watch the road you can have a nice conversation with your family and not feel so pressured or rushed and as said in paragraph 5 the sensors i mentioned at the beginning are developing drastically as the years go by in just 10 short years which may seem like a long time but in that time the creation of antilock breaks was born and it only progressed from there with each sensor made a new idea came along and with each car that progressed people just want more but ask your self are you for or against? and is this smart car thing really a good idea?",
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"content": "Television and movies have been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves. theirs cars that have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far ,Google cars aren't truly driverless. Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer. The cars foresees would use half the fuel od today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\n\nWithout the option of smarter roads, manufactures turned to smarter cars but how much smart did the cars need to be? For starters they need a whole lot of sensors. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof which is called Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings. Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and softare to make driving safer are also leding to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\n\nAntilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire, but Sebastian Thrun, founder of the google car project, believes that the technology has finally begun to catch upto the dream. There is no way before 2000, to make something so interesting, the sensores weren't there, radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. So I think that driverless cars are a very good idea and its something new!",
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"content": "The world today is characterized by the free flow of information and commodity. The frequent interaction and growing interdependence among countries have ended the days of regional isolation and absolute national sovereignty, but they have also sparked off heated controversies over the positive and negative impacts that a global culture can bring into our life.\r\n\r\nSome people say that the widening international exchanges, both in the field of business and culture, have exerted positive influences to a nation as well as its people. To begin with, they promote business cooperation among nations. For example, large multinational companies spread the latest technologies and experience around the world, and international trade has helped so many less developed economies grow. Also, they enrich people’s lives because people of one nation are given opportunities through international tourism, exhibition and fairs, TV programmes and films, etc. to enjoy the achievements of other cultures across the globe.\r\n\r\nHowever, other people argue that these conditions also create the possible danger of undermining a country’s national identity. In the first place, traditional cultures might fall victim a global media and entertainment force. This is the most evident in some parts of the world where “Americanisation” is threatening the preservation of their indigenous culture. In Viet Nam, for instance, few youngsters like or understand “Hue Court Music”, the quintessence of Vietnamese culture; they go for Hollywood movies and rock music instead. Moreover, in the process of globalization, the world is getting less linguistically diverse, as a growing number of people give up their native language for the dominant language in the world – English.\r\n\r\nFrom my point of view, both arguments are the true reflections of the possible consequence of an increasing economic and cultural interaction among nations. It boosts economic integration and speeds up modernization but also creates tensions between global culture and a country’s national identity. Therefore, we should take the initiative in fighting to protect our distinct culture and identity from being submerged by other cultural or economic influences.",
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"content": "Many multinational and national companies select their staff after a lot of research. In that face to face interaction is the prime site for an employee hiring. Although, it is considered by few that interview is not an appropriate way of filling the vacancy and there are more reliable sources. However, I mostly disagree with the view. My point is justified further.\n\nIf it was easy to crack an interview of reputed establishments, then everyone might had got a place in each corporation. Moreover, it is not a piece of cake for all, it needs courage, dedication along with proper knowledge because all true colours flow out in front of interviewers. One of the many criteria judged is, crammed theory. For example, when a person is given a complicated situation and asked how will they put their learning into an action. Such is the time when the stars start surrounding around the head, because all they remember is what the theory says, but do not know the real life application of that intelligence. Thus, the individual gets rejected as they do not need a book, but a human engine to run their machines. Furthermore, other criteria to qualify is, communication skills. For example, if a product is needed to be sold, then the buyers should be provided with as best offer as possible, just for company profit. Whatever, the business it is running, the best way to buy or sell products is negotiation with the way of talking and persuading them with some schemes. In addition, introsceptiner also notes the practical exposure and change of facial express. For example, expressions like lies, fear, worry, anxiety and the capability of a man.\n\n The capability of a person is also judged by his past interest and achievements until now.\n\nOn the contrary, the era has changed and continuation of age old methods of employee acceptance needs a change. This can be bought by replacing the system with either questionnaire pamphlet or multiple short tests. For example, all the interviewing questions, exam can be taken or else multiple different field exam. By this the need for interview will also not arise and the manager can fully check the person, along with saving their time.\n\nTo conclude, the new system can be introduced, but interviews cannot be replaced by those methods, as it is the most reliable source for knowing a person thoroughly.",
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"content": "All arround the world countries are making an effort to reduce their use of cars to benefit the Earth. There are many benefits to reducing car usage all arround the world. Not only does it reduce polution but it also promotes getting out and being active. Vauban, Germany is a car-free community where the voices of a few children can drown out the hum of a car. Bogota, Colombia has established a program called the Day Without Cars where they promote alternate transportation and reduce smog. This promotes people to use transportation that runs on man-power like bikes or even walking. This also falls into the fact that as people use bikes and walk they begin to get more exercize. Although most of the time it is more convinent to use cars to get to a location some places have stores within walking distance so there would be no need for the use of a car.\n\nPollution has been a problem arround the world for many years, each country is responsible for their own share of polluting the Earth and cars are part of the problem. Cars alone are responsible for 50 percent of greenhouse emissions in America, if Americans made an effort to reduce that number by just half it would mean a world of difference to that country. It would result in America being less responsible for the pollution of the Earth and a safer environment for the citizens. However, other countries have been taking action to help the environment, efforts were thrown towards cities to make it more beneficial to walk and they are now settoing their sights on suburbs. Vauban, Germany is acommunity where there is an advanced experiment that focuses on eliminating the use of cars. Their efforts have proven quite successful as only 30 percent of the families that live there own cars and almost 60 percent of the residents sold their car in order to live there. Bogota, Colombia has created a day where everyone is encouraged to use bikes and walk instead of using fuel-burning cars, those who chose not to participate in this event were fined $25. The effort that was put into the making of thisevent has inspired other countries like Cali and Valledupar to do the same. This shows that people are making an effort to move torards environmentally beneficial habits that cause a chain reaction.\n\nAnother benefit to reducing the use of cars is that people will get more exercize than they usually do. For some people the most exercize they get is the walk from the couch to the fridge or the 30 minutes when they are at the mall. Unfortunatley, people do not walk arround the mall every day for their daily exercize routine. Decreasing the use of cars would promote people to use their physical energy in order to get to their desired destination. This would also result in having stores and other services of use closer by so people will be more willing to walk to them. In Bogota, Colombia parks and sport centers have been opening all over the city",
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"content": "Today, we depend on cars for transportation. We never consider walking or taking a bus until we realize it's our only option. As teenagers we use cars as a gateway to independence and freedom. Little do we know that there are many advantages to the limiting of car usage. Advantages to these limitations are it's better for the environmemnt, it provides a safer city, and it helps financially.\n\nCreating a better environment starts with the decisions we make. When we decide to take our cars for a 2 mile trip, that could be walked, we are polluting the air in our city. For example, source 2 explains that the air in Paris became highly polluted due to the overuse of automobiles. \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\". One day motorists with even-numbered plates would leave their cars home and the following day people with odd-numbered plates would do the same. This decreased the amount of congestion by sixty percent within five days. Source 1 states that cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to fifty percent in the United States. Source 3 states that in Bogota, Colombia, after their Day Without Cars, parks and sports centers flourished throughout the city and uneven sidewalks were repaved to make them more smooth and broad. The avoidance of car usage can improve our environment dramatically.\n\nSafety is a very important factor in our lives. Often times our safety is put at risk when we are in a car and we don't realize it. Without the use of cars, we wouldn't have to worry about car accidents, traffic jams, etc.",
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"content": "Venus or the \"Evning Star\" is one of the well known planets in our solar system.on previous missons to venus not a single spacecraft was able to survive landing for hours.This may explain why the callenges NASA is having for humans to study this planet,eventhought venus is pretty close to Earth.Venus has a thick atmosphere that is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide,that makes it even more callenging for humans to land on venus. Venus surface tempuature is over 800 degrees and the atmosphere is 90 times greater than the atmosperic pressure here on earth. The astromomers are intreged by venus because it is well-know for once having a similar earth-like fetures, to this day astromomers still think that venus could have been inhabitable at one point a long time ago But, for now all we can do is peer over the planet in our space crafts orbiting safly over the planet venus. If we strive to meet the difficult challenge of finally landing on venus we can meet our goal to explore more and beyond our limits.",
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"content": "I nt think remove anything thats offensive library cause honestly books author publish something offensive Its library s fault s children reading books offensive s parents fault letting read I ve library listened music watched movies even read magazines offensive content weer remove offensive content library library would half empty I ve seen parents discussing librarians banning content thats appropriate library would even matter ignore keep away honestly nt big deal comes type problems I discussed mom completely agree s My mom said wouldnt problem today could ignored Also music stay wether offensive cause people like express music listen The movies made days innapropriate content wether rated movie As argument going library s offensive content still kept library removed I m sure alot teens adults enjoy content s kept library If children end listening offensive music watching offensive movies think like need grow someday If s case parents keep away content",
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