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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been a huge advancement in technology in the past 100 years. Although they make traveling much easier, cars are a big reason for economical displeasure. Limiting car usage can help us in many ways. It will reduce pollution, more building space, and death rates will decrease.\n\nInitially, limited car usage can play a major factor in pollution for the world. In \"Paris Bans driving due to smog,\" it says that 147 micrograms of particulated matter was fount in London. This is causing sickness and illness in alot of countries. If we would reduce car usage there would be alot less smog and greenhouse gases in the air that we breathe every day. Who wants to live in a cloud of dust?\n\nMore so, cars are congesting the roads and towns of almost every city. In France they had a day where they didnt allow you to drive your vehicle a certain day, and the congestion rate was down 60%. With less vehicles on the road, it gives more space for buildings to be built. Parks and sport centers will be built, giving more kids the chance to grown up being healthy and fit. As you can see limiting car usage can help in more ways than you thought. Also the less cars being bought and made, the more money we can have to better the lives of the sick and poor in the world. to use the money for events in the world aswell. The jobs that would become available to people for building more bicycles and sidewalks would increase tremendously.\n\nTherefore, the limitation of car usage will drastically change the rate of death in America and throughout the world. A study shows that driving by young people has decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. If there are less people on the road then there will be less devastating fatalities on the road. The road is a path to your next door, not soppose to be the last path that you take. I dont want to be remembered as a statistic in this world, so less people driving and more people living is a great thing. Maybe we can see more good news than bad news whenever we turn the television on on sunday mornings after all.\n\nIn conclusion, The reduced limitation on car usage in the world can drastically improve our pollution problem, help with more buildings, and the death rate. Now let me ask you, if you had to choose wheither to drive that Mustang or to walk. After reading this passage, which would you choose? Like i said, i dont want to be remembered as a statistic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that sending children to co-educational schools have more advantages than sending them to single-sex schools. It reflects in their later life. Although, it is the personal choice of parents to do so. But, in my opinion, children should go to co-educational schools only.\r\n\r\nCo-education has many advantages. First of all, a common school for boys and girls reduces the burden on the government to provide the state with more schools. Additionally, when a child studies in a co-ed school, it helps him or her in boosting their self-esteem and social skills. Altogether, the better understanding of the diverse world where both the genders live together inculcates in them. \r\n\r\nSecondly, a free exchange of ideas between boys and girls give rise to a healthy relationship between two sexes. A free interchange of ideas between them would make them friends and good companions. Moreover, If the boys and girls study together they get a chance to learn about each other better. For Instance, girls are good at needlework, while boys are good at electronic gadgets, in which they can help each other whenever required.\r\n\r\nCo-education should be encouraged right from the kindergarten so that child grows up with the right attitude towards life and opposite-sex children. Although, there are many schools in India where co-education is not a practice and they are quite successful in the long run. However, nowadays co-educational schools have started becoming popular.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I believe that studying in a single-sex school does not prepare students for the real world. Children of such school encounter a lot of problems in life in areas of communication and confidence, compared to the one studying in the co-educational schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features setting affect Features affect cyclist water help saftey Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirsty allowing spit circulate This quote desperate need water saying sucks rock drink spit The rough terrain abandoned road old men sent date made unable ask directions even know travelling correctly Along road meets snake Being far away civilization gotten bit would one help save dyeing side road Also heatstroke water help Safty help water factors contribute features effect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Immigrating to other nations for business purposes has been a popular tendency for many families recently. Therefore, it has been debated that whether this trend would obtain positive influence on offsprings of one family who resolves to establish their life due to profession's requirements in another country or not. My essay will analyse both of the perspectives and demonstrate my views at the end of the paragraph.\nAltering to a new foreign neighbourhood is believed to deal pessimistic effects to a child, and in fact, this is true in some cases. A survey on several teenagers whose parents moved to a completely unfamiliar place just to maintain their financial status when they were younger suffer from many mental sickness like depression, autism, or anxiety disorders. Numerous children who suffer from this case feel lost when they live in the new environment. This is because the ability to adapt to elsewhere new limits for a child, and therefore, they are unable to communicate, or have new relationships. This consequently directly affects their education, state of mind, and physical development.\nHowever, it does not mean that changing new living surroundings is bad due to certain reasons. Once the children are used to the conditions of their new home, which means that they have already overcome their problems they endured initially. Furthermore, these young individuals virtually become successful in their future carried because the ability to handle pressure tasks was laying a solid foundation already. For instance, in the USA, most children who have already experienced such a change in his life find himself more resilient in making crucial decisions which involve in their career.\nIn conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of switching living places for busy parents are even. In my opinion, it creates the opportunity for their children to harden themselves in terms of patience as they adapt to that unaccustomed place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author well supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, although unfairly to the amount of dangers it could possiably cause. The author supports the fact that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit with alot more opinions and a minimum amount of evidence. Is it a neccesity?\n\nThe author greatly shows his concerns for the dangers despite ending them with words and prases be-littleing his support such as \"but\" and \"however\". In paragraph 5 the author expresses the worries about the pursuit \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earths levels.\" Then proceeds to finish it off by stating \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" Athough the doubts about the prusuit to Venus is said, its unsignificant to the large number of reasons of why the pursuit is worth it vs. to why its not.\n\nHe/She has provided many factual pieces of evidence as to why the prusuit is worth it, supporting his facts with dates, numbers and precentages making them even more meaningful. One of the first facts of why NASA should take this pursiut is in paragraph 6, the second-third sentence, \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understan Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\"\n\nIn conclusion the author ends one of his final senteces with the words \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiostity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driveless cars safe? Are driveless cars going to the best technology ever invented? Do you think driveless cars is a good or bad thing? Google cofounder Sergey Brin envinisions a future with driverless cars. Brin and a lot of manufactures are working together to invent driveless care for the future. Posibbly ass early as 2020. I am for sure against the idea of the devoelopment of a driverless car for the near fututre.\n\nAlthough, the invention of driveless cars have been dreamt about, it should not become a reality. Driverless cars would come with more risks than just having a regular person behind a car wheel. An actual person behind a wheel will havbe more control over a car than a computer. A computer can have a numerous amount of different malfuctions. What will happen if the computer malfunctions? What will happen to the car? How will it affect the people aound the car?Some people believe that driverless car would be a great addition to the world. But the risks of a driverless cars malfunctioning is much more high risk than just keeping a actual person driving a car. An actual person will know what to do if a car spins out of control, another car beside them lose contol, or they if there is a", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The computer good way contact family friend People send messages world fon People like playing video games websites like People world laptops travel one place another Everybody nt computer think go people like one sending messages hang one another talking day Many people want computer enough money one Some computers cost lot money like even depend witch one get Around world many people sell computers get money different stuff like shoes clothes games They always sell stuff ebay get less money instead ca nt take computer back get money get new computer People want classic computers come new ones like touch screen ones Many people buying Every seens new computers came people buying lot company making lot money making touch screen computers Every new year company make new computers get thousands Company world make different computers bring new styles people like New styles make money make Some people make companies get money like companys get money make goes government The money give government take care homeless people Computers used leaning fun People share computers people ca nt share would nt fair Some people take turne using Some people nt like taking turn one another Everybody share use ca nt force server somebody wants net Some people lie say geting People like joking around others Parents always say computer tag play computers cost lot repair get fixed people spill water computer mess people mad maybe heshe got new computer When computer first came people bought see like Many people liked got world people talking company made got stores world The computer got famase company made newer styles everyone else People bought lot computers everytime come new style Many people home Companys made company mad companys making better styles People ordering online get new computers And company make making lot money Company stopped making came new computer one ever When came one company mad mad better one Some company joined make one together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are great. Our world is constantly moving forward. Technology is advancing everyday, like with robots in Japan. Driverless cars are another great technological advacement for the world.\n\nThe first reason why driverless cars are good is stated in the first paragraph, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis...\" That would be excellent for the environment. Yes, there have been many challenges, such as still needing a driver for more complicated driving situations like road construction, and of course safety concerns. But driverless cars would be so much easier to get around with.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are advanced, environmentally friendly, and would make the world a better place. In the final paragraph, it says, \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" So these cars should be further researched and produced. As it says in paragraph 10, \"The road to the truly autonomous car strecthes on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It one morning wisconson last day deer hunting I got dressed dad friend sitting eat pankacs milk Out side buttered headed I kind scary worst night nt know whats whos got He stand ways went away After hours stand dad tells CAPS time get back eat right l said CAPS said dad l guess I ll see latter came back wa right around bruch came buck l wating So l bought gun shot went right I never proud life The", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents very well. He used many ideas to support his claim including what others think, facts, and his own thoughts.\n\nThe text states \"while Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely (p1),\" pointing out the challenge of exploring Venus. The author also states \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us (p2),\" telling us how dangerous Venus is. He also states \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface (p3),\" pointing out the dangerous gases, pressure, temperature, and natural disasters of Venus.\n\n\"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface (p4)?\" The author states \"often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too (p2),\" meaning that Venus would be the fastest planet to travel to. He also said \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system (p4),\" meaning it could truly be a future habitat for the living - and may have been inhabited once. The author also said \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters (p4),\" suggesting that Venus may have truly been Earth's \"twin.\" He also mentioned that NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus in a blimp-like structure (p5), which could work. The text stated \"striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation (p8),\" suggesting that finding a way to safely allow humans to travel to Venus will not only help us learn more about the most dangerous planet, but also will lead us to more exciting and intimidating endeavors. Not only that, but traveling to Venus will make us no longer be limited by dangers and doubts, allowing us to expand our minds.\n\nTo sum everything up, the author did well with supporting his idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. He mentioned many dangers that Venus has. He also mentioned possible solutions to the problems Venus throws at us and reasons why Venus is worth studying, using facts and thoughts as support for his claim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, advertisement becomes a crucial part of a company's profit, and many industries are using it above and beyond to attract many customers. However, many people believe that commercials war between companies leads to some serious problems for consumers. The given paragraphs will illustrate the effect of advertisement on payees, and the solution to make people's life easy.\n\nWith the rapid growth of competition between growing industries, it becomes harder for companies owners to attract customers. The only and the best way they can make people buy their products is by commercials, and for the sake of profit, companies using a wide range of advertising methods. Most of the time, it is about brainwashing customers through mesmerizing advertising products. For example, on television, one can see delicious-looking foods and snacks, which influence kids by creating the temptation to buy and eat that food. The company's advertisement group is an expert in making this kind of illusion. Eventually, kids fall into this trap and end up getting health-related diseases like obesity or laziness, and in the worst cases, they die of a severe illness.\n\nNo company can grow without consumers, so the health and safety of customers should be the priority over the profit of companies. The government body should take serious action towards unhealthy advertisement by implementing strict laws on certain products. There should be a permanent ban on a product that advertises fake information of product. As well as liable companies should charge with a big chunk of money as a penalty. On the other side, the government should spread awareness among people regarding fake advertisements, so customers know what steps to take to save themselves and their family's lives. Kids are the future of any nation, so a product which is not healthy should be ban as well, and encourage companies to launch healthier products for kids. Companies who advertise healthier products should get awarded to influence other industries to do the same.\n\nIn conclusion, the rapid growth of an advertisement can harm people live. However, some precautions and restrictions on promotion can lead to profit companies as well as customers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He is going to jion becusae he is 18 know and he has to go to the military service. He seling the Atlantic Ocean ti takes teo weeks they are going to China. He helps out on his Katie's farm as a boy had prepared .Luke for hard work but no not for the dangers at sea. Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nBales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holdsof the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. One rainy night after makeing his hourly report to. The captain the slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Table-tennis tournaments ,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an abventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up tho world to him. he is grateful for the opportunity. It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs. And that awareness stayed with him leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First announced in 2009, as the article stated \"google has had cars that could drive independently under sprcific conditions. Many car factories to make this dream come true. Many used different methods. General motors from the article that create a test track for a car to run on. the track uses an electric cable and send radio signals. The track is way too expensice to make.\n\nFot that, manufacturers turned to smart cars. Its need a lot of sensor to GPS to mak it work. Sebastian Thrun, formal of google car project, believe that the technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream in the articl driceless car are coming. In 2013, BMW announce the creation of a smart car that can go up to 25mhp. So far, non of the cars devekoped so far are completly driver less. Dr.Werner Huber a BMW project manager driver stated \"won't driver get bored waiting for their turn to drive.\n\nMost driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrian safe. These safery are best achieved my alart drivers. In most states, it is illegal even to test computer-drivven cars. if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer, stated the article.tesla has a project that will be released soon. A can that can drive auto 90% of the time.Nissan plan to have a cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The road to driverless is near and we are getting sloser to it every day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI'm\n\nNOT\n\nin favor of keeping the Electoral College. I wouldn't like to keep the Electoral Collage because under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.We are used to voting for the president and along with that president we would also have the counting of electoral votes, it's wrong. For example, If you lived in Texas, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who pick the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state coventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themeselves.\n\nAll i know that it isnt fair. All of are hard work voting shouldn't go towards them. It should go towards the person we are voting for. Isn't thats why we voted for them? So we can see them suceed. Making us feel like we suceeded because we made them feel welcome and worthy. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always, and that's the problem. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes. And that's why\n\nTHIS\n\nneeds to stop. At them most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend thime in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it.\n\nIn conclusion, It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best argument in faor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. Bob Dole is right: Abolish the electoral college!\n\nI hope you take sometime to think this over.\n\n- PROPER_NAME.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the important part of life is a work. In general, work divides on two kinds: paid and unpaid. Some people believe that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community, while others disagree. I think, it has benefit for both the individual teenagers and society; however, people should not restrict the rights of teenagers and use them instead of salary workers. \n\tOn the one hand, it is a good opportunity for teenagers help the local community. I think, they can find several hours per week to do something; for example, cut the trees, collect garbage or painting fence. In this case, teenagers will know that it is their common home and they will take care about it. Teenagers can meet new good friends to spend their leisure time together. In addition, this work should be unpaid to people to feel the importance of the social part of it. Moreover, the local community can save money for developing their district; for example, they can build new playgrounds for children. \n\tOn the other hand, the local community can use teenagers instead of hire workers for some kind of works. They can use students in their private aims and save money for themselves. In this case, the government should control the local community and not allow any discrepancy with the law. I think, teenagers should know about all kind of agreed works that they can do for the local community to avoid injustice. \n\tIn conclusion, it is a good practice to require teenagers for work to help the local community. They will take care about environment and elderly people as well. I think, this type of work should be voluntary to involve more and more teenagers. In addition, the local community should follow the rules and prevent to use of teenagers for their own purposes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars do not seem like a bad idea, although it could stir up some serious problems if its not fully operational. My position on \"driverless cars\" is that it would be a bad idea. For me, to know that these cars aren't excatly \"driverless\" defeats the entire purpose of it. It would be good to know that these can be driverless, except when it goes from good to bad. The reasons why I don't agree on the idea of \"driverless cars it that it's not fully capable of driving by its self, that the manufacturers can mess up and could cause havoc, and that it would be depending on a machine to keep us from getting into problems may seem like a bad idea.\n\nThe first reason that I stated is that these \"driverless cars\" are not fully capable of driving on its own yet. To know that these cars are suppose to be driverless defeats the purpose. Sure it may seem nice at first, but once you look further into it, you could understand what im trying to say. We could always drive on our own, basically the same thing as the \"driverless cars.\" At this rate, its better to just not go out a buy one.\n\nThe second reason would be that the manufacturers could make a mistake, causing some problems for the people. Sure, these manufactures were picked for this job because they understand its mechanisms and other things, although mistakes can happen. We were not designed to be perfet creatures, keep that in mind. If something were to happen because of the vehicle, that could be a problem. Not only for the manufactures, but also the company in all.\n\nThe last reason would be that depending on a machine to keep us away from problems may seem like it could be a bad idea. These cars can backfire at any given moment and could cost us not just money, but lives as well. Technology is far more superior than most of the human population, which may seem intimidating. Imagine that your famiiy just bought this brand new \"driverless\" vehicle and you are heading out for a family trip, you decide that its a good idea to not worry about it and let it drive \"on its own.\" Moments later you black out and you are slowly waking up in a hospital, to see your entire family has been injured, all becuase you have given so much trust into that vehicle. You wouldn't want that to happen to your family, do you?\n\nIn conclusion, My position on \"driverless cars\" isn't that it is a bad idea because it is not fully capable of driving on its own, the manufactures could make a mistake, causing some serious problems, and that trusting technology to keep those safe could possibly be a bad idea. Sure, my reasons may not sound as good, although keeping your safty and the safethy of others is something to keep a mind of. Its best to be alert about anything, cars or not. People make mistakes, those mistakes are transfered to technology, technology ends up taking something with it. In the end, just keep in mind that, anything could happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" and is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from our sun. It has also proved a very challenging place to examine. It is the closest planet to Earth, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. The clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere is more challenging. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Astronomers are fascinated by venus. One of the reasons why they are fascinated is because it have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar ystem. Venus\n\nwas covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Venus still has some features. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\n\nNASA'S possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels, not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless wow that would be cool to see someday. As for right now though i think we should stick to cars who have drivers because if the cars aren't made correctly then something really bad could end up happening. In the artice it says that \"Assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\"\n\nIf the car that the companys made the completly self driverless and a major accident were to happen and the human was not alowwed to take over then how could the driverless cars be safer than when a human drives the vehical.\n\nIn the near future the driverless cars may be come safer by for right now the car should always have a drive with them. If they come up to road constructionar an accident then the human driver has to take control so that the cardoes not crash.So if would have not taken control then they could have crashed.\n\nIf the cars were ever made truly driverless then it would be a site to see but as of right now i dont think were any where near the succses of truly driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you get to participate in many things while saving lives in the world. You get to travel and sight see, help animals and humans, and you can even have fun!\n\nThe Seaging Cowboys program is a program that you can sign up for. In this program you transport animals to different parts of the world on seas. Luke crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times, and he also crossed the Pacific Ocean two times durring World War Two. In this program you save people's lives by helping them. Also, by transporting animals to them.\n\nIn this program, you take part in helping the animals, but you also get to travel to many places. You travel all around the world. When you have free time, you can visit famous monuments, museums, or just have some quiet time. Luke went to the Acropolis in Greece, and he got to take a gondola ride in Venice! So, there are many fun things to do when you are a Seaging Cowboy.\n\nSpeaking of fun, you also have time to have fun onboard. You can play table-tennis onboard, volleyball, boxing, reading, whittling, and even more! You would mostly play these games on your way back from unloading the animals because you would have no more animals to take care of.\n\nSo in concusion, you should become a Seagoin Cowboy beause you get to participate in many things while saving lives. You get to travel and sight see, help animals and humans, and also have fun!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People believe censorship impotant Libraries They believe things released bad subject matter They feel sending bad message children teaching horrible things say I disagree reasons I feel booksmusicmoviesmagazines nt taken shelf cuss words inside feel continue sell even bad words inside I feel way alot horrible things world Children learn feel like cussing anything subject matter isnt big deal much worry couple bad words children read listen I listen music cuss words inside also read books bad words doesnt infulence kind way So nt always try control every one let shelfs let parents decide s innaporpate notin conclusion feel shelfs people allowed listenread whatever want doesnt harm anyone themselfs let go happen let want", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Living in a century that is influenced materialistically, we are inundated with an array of advertisements. In my opinion, the excess practice of it, whether on TV, internet or print media, could be menacing as it invigorates people to spend more without thinking cautiously. Hence, there should be some protective measures to avert over-spending. In the following essays, I shall discuss this in detail.\n\nTo begin with, compelling advertising, showcasing attractive products and services, forces people to spend even when it is not necessary. In the present scenario, companies with massive budgets have adopted varying methods to advertise their offering, ranging from TV commercials to flyers in newspaper that it is becoming strenuous for people to escape from these activities. For instance, if you are watching a cricket match, it is very likely that you will come across logos or advertisements of sponsors. Similarly, if you are watching a web series or a movie, you will find a promotional product. At the very least, even if you are just scrolling through social media in your free time, you will find hoards of advertisements or influencers promoting products. This volume of advertising simply means that we, as consumers, are profoundly cajoled into purchasing such products without giving them enough thought.\n\nAs far as the regulation is concerned, it is not a piece of cake to decide how the advertisements can be regulated. Evidently, governments have to restrict advertisements for such products that could pose health threats or are harmful, such as tobacco, alcohol, and more. Considering that the government doesn’t have significant control over other advertising forms, consumers will have to use their common sense. This includes brainstorming over the need of a product than giving up in front of the desires or wants. Waiting for 24-hours before buying a product can help as well. This means not scrolling through products on the internet mindlessly or not giving in to the temptation of buying the latest smartphone.\n\nIn the end, it could be concluded that while it is difficult to escape entirely from advertisements and their effects, people should control their urges to purchase anything unnecessarily.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the new technological advancement known as the Facial Action Coding System, emotions can now be identified by using a computer. Within the software, anatomical information is stored away for it to access later when trying to search for emotions. To determine specific feelings, the person in question is compared to a face that is showing no detectable emotions. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the technology is tested by determining the emotions of Leonardo da Vinci's famous painting. By doing so, it demonstrates its ability to understand emotions by reading the positions of various muscles in the face.\n\nWithing the article, the author includes the fact that the new technology might be able to assist in classrooms. By using the software, computers can detect the emotions of students and can change its data to match the student's mood. If the student is becoming confused or disinterested, the computer could potentially alter its lessons to fit the student's needs. Personally, I think the technology could work well in a school environment. If it succeeds, it can change the way it teaches to appeal to more students and could help them understand a difficult lesson if they get lost.\n\nWith the Facial Action Coding System, computers can now be able to detect human emotions. By using its technology, it can understand how a person is feeling down to a percentage. If it was used within school, the software could learn to understand the needs of a student by reading his or her face during a particular lesson. I believe the computers would be useful for teaching and keeping students engaged. With having computers that are considerate of one's emotions, I think that learning could be more interesting and exact.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests studing Venus because its a planet and there trying to figure out what it is made out of. Another reason they want to go and study it is is was at one time it was the most earth like planet that we had it was coverd with oceans and land and it was supported with reasons it coiuld have life on the planet Venus. They would have to get up close with Venus grond to get a sample of the soil ,but the problem is that they would have to build a machine that could last long enough to get all the way to the soil and get a sample and come back up. ''Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very eges of imagination and innovation.'' NASA says they dont want to study the Earth forever they want to fing a knew planet to study and go from there because just mabye we can have another planet that we can live on eventually.NASA will get there one day they say it is just a matter of time before they can send the first peoplke up to venus to expoler and bring back information for use to use to see if we can start something on planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been around for many years. They have always been able to take you to and from places much faster than walking or running. Cars have always required\n\na driver, but now some people want to change that. These people want to make driverless cars. Cars that don't need a driver to operate and take you to and from places. This is not a good idea and should not happen.\n\nDriverless cars may still need the assistance of of a driver and \"are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead reguires human skill\", but what happens if the driver of the car is not paying attention when the car signifies that it needs human assistance? These cars will apt drivers not to pay attention to the road and focus all of their attention on something completely different. The cars would have to drive on a smart-road system instead of actual roads. So the smart-road systems would have to replace regular roads. That would take a lot of time, money, and everyday commuter's patience. The driverless cars would end up taking over regular cars and soon everyone would have one. With all of the new advancements in the car, the car would cost a lot of money. Some people might not be able to afford all of that money.\n\nWith all of the new technology coming into this car, it will end up making people lazy. Some people are already lazy enough as it is, but this will make it so much worse. Actual driving might become too much of a chore for some people. Going to get your license might not even be a part of the world anymore if we have driverless cars. These cars are also working like computers. Computers sometimes aren't perfect themselves, so what happens when we put them into a car? Computers have glitches, so will these cars. The car might just stop in the middle of the road and cause a dangerous collision.\n\nDriverless cars are not a good idea and should not happen. They can cause people to not pay attention, become even more lazy, and may cause even more dangerous accidents than there already are. These cars could take up so much of people's precious time and money. Normal cars with a normal driver have been around since the early 1900's, so why change it and change the way we operate normal, safe cars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial coding is cool, but it is not valuable in a school setting. Why would one ever need this at their school. Students do not go school to get their emotions checked, they go to learn about history stuff or about anything else. Also we do not know if this computer will truly work on a human because they only talk about attemping it on a painting not a live physical humans. Also how can one produce something so complex that a PC can not even keep up with it. To one it might might be cool, but in reality it is not that interesting for school use.\n\nWhy use a computer? Using a computer to find people's emotion is uneccessary because Alto mentions the brain does this calculation everyday with even more acurracy and it will help build comunication skills and put oneself on a deeper level of thought. There is a person that this boy likes or has a crush on and he wants to talk to her, but he doesn't know what to say. Later he notices that she is obviously down about something, and he walks over to her and says \"Hey, are you alright you look kinda down?\" This is the skills we need to work on we need to not rely on computersand learn to read emotions.\n\nWhile people agree and disagree with this idea the opposition has some good points. If there is kid that has been mentally abused or is depressed. Having this imagery can really help get students to open up and talk about it, so they can prevent what is happening. Another thing it can do is help depict the mood of a painting like previously stated in this article by D'Alto. Also it could help teachers more on understanding their students so they can buils a more positive and stable relationship. By knowing what people are feeling it could effect the mental state of the mind and body and not cause stress.\n\nOverall the effect to this product would be not having the ability to actually depict how one is feeling without using the coding system which could make human intereaction almost artificial. Later on down the road this could be useful, but as it is today it's not the greatest idea for a school atomosphere, especially with the distraction of social media and technology in general.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I friend house dog going crazy She would run stairs fast could one idea I thought funny getting super mad So eventually room see would calm dismay She running hot laps back forth around room harder I laughed It like funniest thing I ever experienced life This dog obviously gotten hold kind energy source happen Yet still could nt figure sugar high something So I went stairs see mom knew acting ridiculous She clue So went asked dad convinced dog crazy Obviously dog issues nt problem never usually acted hyper Then sister came stairs told us shut dog could nt running fast catch way crazy try calm So took back room laughed laughed nothing else sit wonder heck wrong dog To honest never find wrong insanely hyper world So calmed hours later I went walk We friend I trying explain story went crazy nt find funny I thought hilarious thing I ever seen life And I explaining warned I trip curb I laughing way hard notice I fell That like icing cake I sat ground laughed It pretty funny I nt laughed hard since The end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of driverless cars. It's 2016 and our technology is allowing us to have much more advanced objects. For example, the Google Watch and the Smart tv. Being in a more advanced society means we should make the most of it and use to our advantage. Driverless cars are advanced technology to the maximum. Driverless cars use less gas and they still alert the driver if they need to take over, so it will not be completely driverless.\n\nPeople use way too much gas. We fill up at least twice a week and most cars aren't energy efficient, meaning it adds to the amount of pollution in the air. In the article it says, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world \". Using half of a taxis fuel, we could cut down on pollution and gas in general. Focusing on America, we have oil reserves but, we don't have enough to comply with all of our needs and demands. So we have to pay money for another contries oil. Cutting back on fuel means saving money and the Earth. Also, driverless cars still alert the driver if they need to take over the wheel. The article says, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires \". These smart cars know when the driver needs to assist and they'll notify them. Authority isn't sure about the safety of a driverless car but, as mentioned before, these cars work with the help of humans. And let's face it, no one wants to be driving for a long period of time with no breaks. The article lists some ways that a car will notify the driver, \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle\n\nis in danger of backing into an object. The Google car sinmply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other otions under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield ans other heads-up displays \". This way no driver is completely free of driving, you'll always be on guard.\n\nDriverless cars are not a thing that we can only imagine, they're here. Living now, with so much technology, means we need to use it. These cars will reduce the amount of gas that people use in their cars everyday. Reducing the amount of carbon dioxide in the air. These cars also allow the driver to take over when needed. So techically, they aren't fully driverless.Just like we don't use horse and buggies anymore, we won't need physically driven cars either. No point in staying in the past when we're moving into the future. Time changes and so does technolgy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In response to driverless car technology I am personally against it. I think there are certain things that we can't be lazy about, and I strongly believe driving is one of those things. Now I commend the enginers who have worked so hard on this facinating technology. But just because I think the invention is cool doesn't mean it is effective in our everyday lives. As great as technology is in the times we live in, it can always make a mistake. I think that risking people's lives by them not having to drive is a risk I wouldn't personally take. Yes, I do see how it would be nice getting to be driven around but it could only be a matter of time until mistakes start to arise.\n\nA point I find very important to make is the danger with mishaps occurring. This isn't just the type of technology can have a small glitch and then be fine later on. If a small glitch were to happen with this technology and results can be devistating. Now I do know that these cars can signal to the driver to take over when something goes wrong, but sometimes it only take a split second and then its to late for anyone or anything to take over.\n\nAnother very important topic is the deal with the legal system and that just seems like problems on top of problems just waiting to happen. When I say, \"the deal with the legal system\" what I am refering to is who would be responsible for an accident? Would the blame go on the driver or rider you could say, or would it go to the manufacturer? Know I realize that laws would be put in place, but I can't help but feel that these laws would be in favor of the big companies that produce these machines.\n\nWhat I have been trying to say is I have come to the conclusion that the list of cons on having a driverless car are much greater than the list of pros. One thing I am sure of is that if these cars do come out that they will be quite expensive, which might be a hidden blessing. What i mean but that is that while some people might be sad they can't afford this vehicle, they might actually be saving themselves from possible injury and complications. in the future I hope that if these vehicles become available to the public that people will seriously consider the risks before investing their money into a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Statistics show people every year geting exercice computer talking frend face book space something like Will people go side sit type Here people use computers every one agrees benifits society Those suport advasas tecnollogy belive computers positive afect peoples life Well I belive positive ofect people My reasons people youse computers dont get exercise get fater put Your name adress computer slite kidnaped murderd final reson dont spend much time familiy Obiseity gone least people arent geting thir exercise spending much time computer nothinka says Their meany People dont get exercise They need The says CAPS people like internet people dont know thir bad people whould like get thir hands info see I belive whould wise idea wrot articol tecnology Because obesity america safty never You wriet articol probobly mack hunders dollers get pick pencil write people thik Computers fun yes You reolisinig Your You chould lbs one day lbs next remember whould abad thig wrote articol", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood Home The Blueprints Our Lives Narciso Rodriguez warming caring From memoir tell lot love understanding patience gratitude family He greatly affected parents selflessness I m sure loving wonderful family taught", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist different ways The woman listen older men get going made run water almost died thirst As going place seen snake At point tumble weeds crossed path ridiculously large snake really look like diamondback NUM She started see things wasnt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think books taken libraries found offensive Something offensive offensive another Although I right world object book I find inappropriate somebody else might believe book completely appropriate The main issues people books foul language sex difference opinion These three catagories sensitive issues comfortable disscussing issues Many books library systems today contain foul language Surprising enough majority indecent language found young adult section I nt believe parents would happy know children reading In modern day world bombarded images sex indecency Books containing obscure acts different television magazines Most romance novels descriptive leave little room imagination wrong hands lead prompting questions Difference opinion big problem libraries patrons like message book sends Religion politics morals lead nasty debates sometimes agree disagree Can teenagers handle kind language sexuality responsible way Should books taken shelf basis agree says Should sensor ca nt put libraries I dont think books taken library shelves If nt agree book nt read Instead blaming libraries children read perhaps look parenting make sure ar nt reading something nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a seemingly fast approaching concept. Sergey Brin had the idea and invisions them as a supposedly more fundamentally acceptable. Although he states many pros of driverless cars, there are also many cons that make the cars seem like a very bad idea to proceed with.\n\nPersonally, I am against the idea of driverless cars. The driver still has to be at attention with the road to be able to quickly take over when the car has trouble navigating around hazards, as stated in the passage. The cost to create the millions of cars that would be necessary and the cost of fixing the cars when they have technical problems could quickly make the driverless cars a large debt. The availability of cars could also be a problem in the case of emergencies. In the passage, the writer states that Sergey's vision was the have a large public-transport taxi system, and when people are using the taxis for daily tasks or just joy rides then this could prevent another person from having access to a car when it is needed for an emergency.\n\nWhile for some aspects, driverless cars seem like an excellent concept, there are still very many flaws to work out before the idea becomes a part of daily life. Instead of having the cars work as a taxi system, people being able to personally own the cars would be a great idea in the case of an emergency and there being no taxis available. I believe that the amount of time and money that would go into this process would contradict the use of only half the fuel a taxi today would use, as stated in the passage, rendering the whole idea of driverless cars a hender on the economy and to human's daily lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar graph illustrates male and female employment rates at 1995 and 2005 at 6 varied nations.\nOverall, it is certain that both gender experienced an increase in the percentage of employment after a decade. The highest increase in employment for males is in Iceland. The graph showed a peak at approximately 80% at 2005, which is higher than their previous employment rates at about 70%.\nIn contrast, female employment have shown the highest scarcity at New Zealand in 1995. It started with only less than 30% of employment. However, despite having the lowest percentage of employment , they rised by more than 10%, which are slightly higher than the percentage of female employment at Australia in 2005.\nOn the other hand, the percentage of male and female employment after 10 years in Switzerland, UK and USA showed a consistency in the ratio-increase before and after 10 years.\nIn conclusion, it is estimated that the percentage of employment for men and women will continue to surge regardless their nationality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "first of all, the picture show (A Wave- energy machine) we can see that there is electricity generator its the machine that take the energy from the waves and it contain two turbines so the air could flow throuh it and from what it shown we can notice that there is two of wave energy machin: the large waves and the small waves.\nSecondly,the small wavs had low output since its for the small waves, in addition it also had low installation costs because its smaller.in the other hand the large waves had high output and high installation costs since its also large.\nTo sum up we can say that the air flow to the turbine so the turbine could move and got the electrisity , there is also air come from the water levels which hepls the machine get the elecricity that it needs so the people could use it like a solar power.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every day is an opportunity for people to become better. Many public think that the state should have the authority to choose how their constituents live, while some believe that it is up to individuals to decide how they want to live their lives. I believe in the latter notion, and this essay will discuss both positions and my opinion that each person should be sole-decision maker of individualized existence. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, some groups support the notion that the government should change the living conditions of their own community. It is true that the ministry is the head of a nation, and they have the power and authority to govern how they want to run their country and impact the lives of their citizens. For example, they can be authoritative, which means they can organize and structure their action of living so that everyone in the society will be equal in their position and possession. If everyone can obey and submit, it will be easy for the community and the authority to live happily and worry-free. Personally, I do not support this argument because the government can be corrupt, and if it reigns, many citizens will suffer from the poor decisions of corrupt officials.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many believe that it should be the individual who will decide how they want to run the course of life. This is a democratic world where the public is given freedom of choice, rights to life, autonomy, and independence. For instance, every person has a different drive, wants, contentment, and passion that needs to be cultivated for improvement. One can be fast and effective in achieving their dreams, while another is contented with the little resources they have. Moreover, the congregation will be responsible for their accomplishments which is why I support this kind of thinking.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I totally believe that democracy is best for a country where society has the right to live how they want to enjoy their everyday practices, it will give them more chances of growing and being effective citizens. On the contrary, if governments are structuring the family where equality is observed, there would be no chance of personal improvement and can suffer from corrupt politics.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having technology to read students' emotions is awesome technology and should be used in todays society.\n\nIt all starts when Prof. Thomas Huang started working with Prof. Nicu Sebe to develop better ways for humans and computers to communicate. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; it uses your face muscles to identify what you are feeling at that moment. Dr. Pual Eckman created this new software called FACS (Facial Action Coding System). He classified six basic emotions -happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, sadness.\n\nBy having this kind of technology, teachers, parents, bosses, coaches, etc.. can see what their child/student is feeling, also what their learning; some people dont like talking about their feelings or their grades. So when people you trust know whats going on with you without you telling them is way easier. With the knowing, now they can get you the help you need because obviously you're scared to get help on your own.\n\nAll children around the world are going through something in their lives, fear, sadness, anger, boredem, confusion. When children become sad for long periods of time, they become depressed, which leads to substance abuse, isolating themselves from others, eating disorders, and injuring themselves by suicided or cutting. When children become angry this effects their learning and they start to become confused on what their learning in school so some of them drop put but, dropping out isnt always your best option, in fact; dropping out isnt a good option at all.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"- this helps children get to a learning point in school where they can understand basic tools in life, if a child does not know what they're doing and they dont want to feel embarrssed telling the teacher then the computer can identify that and help them and know one else will know so they have no reason to be embaressed.\n\nUsing a commputer to generate your emotions is unbelieable and should be used today. By using this technology it could prevent students from doing things they might regret in the future, and helping them succeed in life through not only schooling but living on their own when their older and getting a job, knowing what to do within their occupations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nI am a 15 year old concerned citizen and I would like to address a serious problem. Our country's process of electing our president, the Electoral College. I beleive there are certain aspects of this process which are both good, and bad, but still need to be revised. To fix this unfair system of election, we just need to change a few details of it, in particular, the states' \"winner-take-all\" system.\n\nOf course there are people who agree with this method of voting, but i am not one of them, and neither is Bradford Plumer. In Bradford's excerpt from \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\", He explains to us the injustice of the electors that we vote for. Most of the time electors stay with their party's candidate, but sometimes they can be persuaded to switch sides. How would you like it if you and the majority of your state voted for a certain president through your states electors, and they went and stabbed you in the back(figuratively) and voted for the other president. You have just been cheated out of your vote! That doesnt sound very democratic to me.\n\nPeople do actually believe in this system of voting though, hard to believe, I know, but Richard A. Posner's \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" gives us a pretty good reason of why they should. Richard explains to us the method of how a larger state with a large population, which would have a larger popular vote, has more weight than a smaller state with a smaller population and a smaller popular vote. He also tells us how there will always be an outcome, no matter what. Like how Obama recieved 61.7% of the electoral vote and 51.3% of the popular vote. Cutting it a bit close there? Enough of that percentage of popular votes lost during the \"winner-take-all' method could change the election of the president.\n\nSo dont you see? \"Winner-take-all\" method just gained someone more votes than they deserved! Essentially robbing the other candidate of his votes! Once again Bradford Plumer hit the nail on the head with his description of the \"winner-take-all\" method. He understands the system and we are lucky enough he explains it to us in such easy terms. Instead of a candidate making his rounds to each of the states and raising his popularity, he ignores certain states that he knows he will get all of the votes for because he already owns a majority, 50%. It could be as little as 51% for him to gain all the votes of that state, and depending on the population of that state, lost more voters for the other candidate than an entire 's sum could give him. So candidates spend time in only a select few states trying to win the vote. Wouldn't this make you feel left out? Unimportant? Nothing but just a blip in the course of your country's history? I wouldnt want that feeling.\n\nAll ready a few states such as Maine and Nebraska have realized the stupidity of this system and have decided to change their voting method. This is why I write to you as our senator to help our state correct this process so we can fairly and justly choose our president, but what do I know, Im only 15.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does not support his idea well. He talks about more of the cons than the pros of visiting Venus, and not really about how serious this trip could be if we do the trip. He thinks that because it was once a planet like Earth that it would still be safe, yet it is very dangerous. It is more dangerous than safe. No spacecraft has survived the landing of the trip, so what expects the author to assume people will. Right, he thinks by studying more about Venus, and building protection machines will help, but with the weather of Venus it will most likely get destroyed.\n\nThe author does not supposrt his self much by saying it is the hottest, had a lot of water, and 97% acid . More sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. He saying that it was also onece like Earth, which is a good thing, but Venus is not Earth much anymore. The text states, \"Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting vlocanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on it is suface.\" So either way you are basically die having to go to Venus. He listed some more than bad. The fact that it is the hottest planet in our earth system is not good. Some of the good of having to exolore Venus is that it is sometimes our closer option to spce traveling, but a sad part is that there is a insisputable ways of you returuning.\n\nIf you do end up making it to Venus and landing, there's and small chance of you dying by the weather there.\n\nThe author did not support his idea because he put more of the cons into the article than the pros. He did have some pros, but they did not really halp with the argument because the cons just ruled over them. He should have done more research on the pros, or listed less cons. In the last paragraph, 8, the author states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" is technically not true. It is not true because if you are willing to out a life in a rocket and not have any doubts is scary. You are gonna have doubts, but it is not as though you want to have them. You do not want someone to loose their life because you did not care. By having doubts, you are pretty much shwing you care, and that you do not want anything to go wrong. By having dangers, in a way helps us to know how to be safe. So, there is nothing wrong with doubts and dangers because those keep us safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless car can make everybody happy. Old and young people would be happy with this car. They would love it because its feathers. Development of the driverless cars would be best to have by being safety, the date the car will be released, and how the car is designed.\n\nOne reason for the driverless cars would be the safety.The car goes the speed limit.This would make predestrians safer to cross the road or the parking lot. The cars are safer for the enverment. The car will have a lot of sensors to noteify the driver.\n\nThe second reason would be the date the car comes out. Tesle has the car coming out in 2016.Mercedes-benz has it coming out in 2020. Audi has the car coming out in 2020 also. Nissan also has it coming out in 2020.\n\nThe third reason is how the car is designed.The car comes with a heads-up display.The car also can come with in-car entertainment. The car can help you if you are lost with the information system. The display turns of when the driver needs to take over.\n\nWould you be happy with this car? I know I would love the interior and the exterior. Everyone would love this car for what it is. A lot of the displays are still in the process. This is why I beleive this car would be good for this wolrd.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming, so that mans that there will be bigger things in the future but, there will also be some negative things about this new technology. some people would loose thier jobs as a taxi driver because of the self transportation mode. it would also take time to fix the roads because the \"smart-road\" need massive uprgades. its also very expensive.\n\nThere are also cons in \"traffic jam assistant\". I thought that the smart car had everything you thought it had? no, you are required to have human skills such as navigating around work zones and accidents. If the car was smart, shouldnt the car done it itself? The car isnt so smart after all. You have to be alert and ready to take over the situation.\n\nMost driving laws focus on pedestrians and passengers but, it's only safe if the human controls the car. I thought that was the cars job? Will it be your fault or the cars fault that caused the accident? Things like these are the reason \"smart-cars: dangerous.\n\nIt's only safe if the people be more careful driving these new technology. Automakers are resuming to work on the assumption that the probelms in the future will be solved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. They make sure to introduce the pros and cons of the journey. Also, comparing Venus to Earth made the article much more imaginative. As they point out the challenge of studying this planet, they also make sure to keep your hopes up by assuring you that NASA is working through it.\n\nIn the article, it states that, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" One could believe that this investigation might be a huge step in finding sustainable life on other planets. This is an example of a pro that the author portrays. \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientisits to float above the fray.\" This is another pro.\n\nThe author is very clear about his or her perspective on the subject of Venus. While using factual evidence in the article, they also establish an excited mood. imagination is also a big part of the article. It makes you think or wonder. The author did really well writing this article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you ever think about participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program?\n\nWell, you should because you get to help people. The UNRRA, United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration, hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas.\n\nThey also help countries that were left to ruins after World War 2.\n\nI was caring for the animals during the crossings and it kept me busy.\n\nYou should really join if you like to care for animals or if you like to do good things for the world.\n\nIt might keep you very busy but you will love doing it. On my secod trip, I served as night watchman.\n\nMy job was to check on the animals every hour.\n\nThere was a rainy day one night and I slid down a slippery ladder and I landed on my backside, but did I quit the Seagoing Cowboys no I kept doing it.\n\nHere are some last few reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nOne reason is that you get to go around the world.\n\nThe second reason is that once you are done with your job you get to have fun on board. We played volleyball and baseball games.\n\nWe had table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and a lot of other games that helped pass time.\n\nI hope after reading this argument essay you will join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that making primary schooling free can be fundamental to guaranteeing everyone accesses to education . Some people believe that it can be considered an effective solution to poverty. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view and think that free schooling is the best way to fight poverty.\r\n\r\nFirstly, Government should make elementary studies free of charge because it can help students not abandoning school and then become positive and productive members of society . There are plenty of families in developing nations that cannot fully afford to send their children to school. Consequently, these students will be forced to abandon their studies and be exposed to be unemployed and in some cases criminals in order to earn money to afford their living . For example , researches show that nations in which the level of unemployment is higher suffer more from economic problems . That is why this method can be a useful solution to this issue .\r\n\r\nSecondly, primary learning helps children to develop several skills and abilities. In other words, education will help individuals to grow because they will obtain a better understanding of life and get more knowledge and skills . therefore , pupils will gain financial stability in the future because they may have the possibility to land a good job and a high paying salary.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , I strongly believe that making elementary free of charge can offer a long term solution to the country's economy because it may reduce the problem of abandoning schools and helps children to develop skills and abilities .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, a number of people stay in employment without retiring even though they are aged. In line with this, there could be various reasons for being encouraged to remain in the occupation while some individuals suggest that salaries are evident to be the most crucial factor which affects to make a decision which is mentioned previously. This essay only partly endorses this statement as I believe there are also other conditions which taken into account for making a determination. \r\n\r\nTo commence, there is no doubt that income plays a significant role in workers' motivation for performance. Principally, it is a fact that money is an essential part to survive in the current living society since to own a desirable product we need to pay the proper amount. It is possible to sustain life by only purchasing necessities such as food, clothes and accommodation, however, these are the components which are acquired by spending hard-earned cash from endeavours. Additionally, the amount of pay is the one factor which is commonly considered when people apply for a job. To extend, individuals who are likely to cooperate with the company for long term, highly preferable to obtain a well-paid occupation or to be offered a high salary.\r\n\r\nDespite the above-mentioned merits, I still believe there are distinct reasons which contribute the labours to motivated in their career. Firstly, job satisfaction is a major part to consider by officers whether it fits their characteristics, was the business that they aimed for the whole life or do they feel interesting and try to solve every day passionately. According to a recent survey from the Korean news, 73% of people revealed that they stayed without leaving endeavour for more than 10 years as the occupation was their dream job which caught their attention in their childhood or they genuinely loved to go to work days compared to other 27% labours indicated that who only attempt to handle their effort by considering the salary showed maximum or less than 5 years. Secondly, the work environment is viewed as a widely recognized cause for this as appropriate interactions with workers and bosses can tremendously boost the confidence and further commitment of employees. For example, if you are about to fall and have a hard time, you can stand up because there are people around you who will help you and give you strength rather than giving up the whole situation.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, generally, income seems to be the predominant factor which is determined foremost. On the other hand, many other elements, involving job satisfaction and a cooperative atmosphere should not be neglected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, many countries use a huge amount of money on providing lessons related to pragmatic skills, such as video editing class and coding class, and the government insist that this will helpful for entire people. Personally, I strongly advocate this view. In this essay, I will discuss the reason why I think this trend would be helpful with some examples. \r\n\r\nPractical education should be more emphasized because whatever they learn through the practical way that knowledge will remain with them for a longer period. This ultimately increases the effectiveness of learning. For instance, When we are cramming a lesson for a test, our brain tends to remember it for a short while, which can be shorter than the duration of your test thus not serving the original purpose. While doing it practically, it can be in form of experiments, real-life projects, or educational trips, the knowledge and the whole learning experience stays in our mind for a long. So apart from bookish knowledge, practical education is very important for students. \r\n\r\nMoreover, practical education through vocational training boosts a student’s self-esteem, knowledge, and skills, and enhances their transition into working life. With the competition for jobs increasing, employers are now seeking to hire candidates who can demonstrate their skills rather than reeling off a list of theoretical qualifications. ‘Earn a university degree and get a job’, this formula has worked over many decades, but increasingly many fields today the formula is no longer working. For example, people who have maintained a good degree of computer literacy, especially coding a skill which cannot be obtained by conventional education, are very welcome in the job market. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is clear that the benefits of practical learning outweigh the disadvantages, by providing more employment to people and enhancing the effectiveness of learning. Thus, the government should support this learning system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I grade student I reading paper I notice article people spending much time computer enough time going outside getting exercise enjoying nature nt benifit society completly disagree comments let explain Having computers definatly benifits students Sometimes kids forget text books school But computer google information That way get homework done nt take zero Another thing I sure heard website called study island If hav nt its website students take online courses math reading science They time consuming count huge chunk grade So get study island get one classes Not computer help students helps kind personal way I love piano But instructions area However program computer called synewnisia It helps learn kinds songs keyboard piano The piano helps handeye coordination well teaches discipline dedication Now synewnesia nt free instrument learning program There many others This helps people ca nt afford lessons learning instrument help acheive things later life Now one thing said article people nt getting enough exercise sitting front computer day This completly true In fact people go computer researching diet plans local gyms How I know Well one day I went google top search day weight watchers diet plan Also mom uses online video workout website bad back So computer help diets help physical therapy also So letter I hope realize computer benifite society yes spend much time But online learning sessions time consuming It helps many people figure right deit workouts stay happy healthy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undoubtedly the case that urban areas around the world increasingly suffer from traffic congestion. In this essay, I will examine the reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies the authorities could implement to reduce the level of traffic in our cities.\r\n\r\nThe first step is to understand why traffic has increased in towns and cities. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this. One is that cars have become more affordable for the average consumers and they are no longer a luxury item, but something that most families expect to own. A second reason is that public transport has become increasingly unreliable in recent years, not least because many bus and train services have been reduced because of the difficulty in funding them. The third reason is that society has, in general, become more mobile and this means more people are prepared to commute to work by car than they were before.\r\n\r\nThe biggest causes of traffic jam lack of proper road and bridges in cities. If there is an additional way for buses and large trucks in cities, traffic jams reduce in cities.\r\n\r\nThere is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to improve the reliability of public transport to encourage people to take the bus or the train rather than get in the car. It would also be possible to discourage people from driving to work by introducing special tariffs for using the roads, especially during peak periods.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are a variety of different factors that have led to rising levels of traffic in urban areas. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution but actions should probably involve encouraging more use of public transports.Furthermore, taxes on private cars should be increased and eco-friendly transportation like bicycles should be promoted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper name I years old I go called I really smart kid In opinion I benefit people using computers You keep reading essay I going tell good reasons I benefit people using computers first reason teach hand eye coordination give people ability learn far away places people For example I always using computer I m research always gives ability learn new places people Another example ever I watch says people learn learn faraway places people internet time second reason allows people talk online people example I computer everyday I visit facebook always gives chance talk friends people online Another example I go computer I search computersorg says lets people time talk others online reason allows students get information re project For example I always use computers allows get information example govina I benefit people using computers Another example ever I check magazine computers tells kids get alot information re projects time In conclusion I benefit people using computers teach hand eye coordination gives people ability learn faraway places people allows people talk online people allows students get information re projects Those reasons I benefit people using computers So please local newspaper please try make believable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people in todays society tend to travel by car, but there is advantages to limiting car usage. Limiting car usage can stop pollution, and puts people in general in a more active environment. So, there are many other ways of transportation.\n\nIn the article, 'Car-Free Cities' it talks a lot about the advantanges of not driving a car. For example, according to the passage \"Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occaional distant motor.\" This being said, you can conclude that more people are being more active. Furthermore, the passage says \"Passenger cars are respondible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States.\" This meaning that some places in the United states gases are half of the areas pollution.\n\nThere are many more advantages to limiting car usages, and if other people do it so will the world. For example, according to the passage \"Vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangle square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life.\" Moreover, in the passage it also says \"But its basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking.\" Furthermore, \"In this new approach, store are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distance highway.\" This meaning the world has a solution to solve the usage of cars. By making suburbs you will be walking distance away from your destination. This also saves so much money, if you were to drive you would have to waste gas. It is also more of a benefit for one who walks, rides their bike, or runs by giving them the benefit of exercise.\n\nBy limiting the usage of cars, bike trails, parks, and sports centers have been a big hit. For example, according to the passage, \"The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s.\" Moreover, \"It has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicylce paths.\" This being said, the need to make such a long bike path means that more people are joining in on the limiting usage of cars, which is a benefit for us humans, and the fresh air that we breathe. People are also becoming more active, for example according to the passage \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaces by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic;\" Since the parks and sports centers have been blooming people are being more active. New side walks are being replaced so people can actually walk on them, the cut of traffic means less people are driving. In big cities, it just might be faster to get to your destination by riding a bike.\n\nIn conclusion, there are so many advantages to limiting car usage. It helps by lowering the percent of pollution, on top of that it also helps save money. By walking or riding your bike to your destination can benefit you in many ways. It also helps by making the world a better place. People seem to be happier when they see other being active, so the next time one thinks to drive a walking distance, rethink your decision.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Someone argues that job markets are doomed to be dominated by artificial intelligence in the future. In my opinion, despite the high efficiency and low cost of automation, there will still be some careers that cannot be simply replaced by robots.\r\n\r\n Compared to usual human labour, intelligent agents do have several competitive advantages. They can outperform human counterparts both in efficiency and accuracy, since they can complete routine work much more quickly and with precise operations, while human workers may make some careless mistakes. In addition, a robot could operate only with supply of electricity and occasional maintenance. Humans, however, may suffer from fatigue, and cost more for their salaries. Therefore, with AI introduced in manufacturing, productivity can be boosted and companies are able to gain higher profits. Hence, the wide use of robots in production is not only unavoidable but also desirable.\r\n\r\n Despite above-mentioned advantages of AI, robots will never completely replace humans in the workforce. Firstly, current machine intelligence is based on some performance measures, which are designed by engineers and computer scientists. Since this process needs expertises, experience and intuition, it is not likely that AI can easily replace human in this area. Secondly, it is extremely difficult for an AI to truly understand philosophy, aesthetics and other fields closely related to cognition and thinking patterns, meaning that mankind is far more better at creativity than robots, and that would remain the case for a long time. Finally, no matter how smart an agent seems to be, it still need to be regulated and controlled by a human being to ensure security. Thus people continue to take role in the workforce.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, artificial intelligence does bring about many benefits, but in my view, us humans, will still have a role to play in the job market.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I have read a article called \"A Cowboy Who Rode The Waves \" it is about a boy named Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLuke was a town boy and some one convinced him to join. Now it is your turn to become a seagoing cowboy/ girl . They travel far away, there are big cattle ships.\n\nThey have to help people who need it, they can be called heros but in a different term. When they travel it take them a long time to get to there.\n\nLuke said hisself \"I'm grateful for the opporunity\" . It helps him aware of the people in the other countries and their needs.\n\nSecond, you can also lead your family to host a number of insternational students and exchanhe vititors for many years. Luke never stayed borad there was always something to do from Table-tennis tournaments, fencing,boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. The cowboys also played baseball, volleyball games in the emepy holds where the animals had been housed. They became UNRRA when they were hiring Luke and Don sighed up now they are seagoing cowboys and they are hepling people who need it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke Bomberger and I was apart of the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program. You could join! Have you ever wanted journey and see the world? Do you like helping people that need help? If you have I think this program may be for you!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a great one I believe. You get to journey the world and help people who really need it. You could all around the world to places like Greece, Europe, China, Mexico,Iran. Most of the time you're there you are helping people who desperately need your assistance and that have been affected by wars or other tragedies in their homeland. After helping, you may even get to see beautiful tourists sites in the places you travel to. You get a chance to help people in need and the satisfaction from it. On top of that, you get to see and visit different unique places! That is why I love this program.\n\nLike it states in paragraph of 2, \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\"\n\nmy first task I carried out was in 1945, World War \|\| was over in Europe, and many countries we're left in ruins. So the UNRAA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that we're being shipped overseas. It also tells you in paragraph 5 of the article that on top of being able to help others I had the wonderful oppurtunity of seeing Europe and China as well as the Acropolis in Greece! I even got to take a gondola ride in Italy and on my way to China I toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal! How great is that!\n\nI strongly believe that the Seagoing Cowboys is a great program that gives you oppurtunities to experice adventures and visit many unique places. Getting the satisfaction of knowing you helpled others is a great feeling and enjoying seeing unique and beautiful places is great too. I'm glad I joined this wonderful program and I think you would be happy if you joined to too. Go help and\n\nadventure!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there have been several laws to control the noise made by neighbors and surrounded places close to people's accommodations. Some people think that these laws should be strict and effectively enforced by authorities in order to avoid any small noise that might disturb the private comfortability. Others believe that such laws might entail a few disadvantages and negative repercussions on people's lives. In this essay I will be trying to count possible advantages and disadvantages of this legislation.\nIt is well known that home is the ideal place to rest, relax and bring positive energies to the residents. Thus, noise made by the neighbors might threat these unique blessings we are used to enjoying in our houses. Moreover, many people perform vital actions within their homes that require silence and high concentration, such as studying, reading and other forms of creative activities. Therefore, governments' duty is to guarantee that these activities are performed without any disturbance, by making specific laws to control the amount of noise and ensure optimal quality of life for all the citizens. In addition, if there were not laws to control the noise, we would encounter many more fights and inconvenient incidents among neighbors.\nOn the other hand, there is another aspect to be considered. Calling for strict laws and total preventing of any sounds produced by adjacent people could sounds unacceptable. People still have the basic right to arrange meetings and parties at their homes, and others need to listen to music as a vital action for their soul and wellbeing.\nTo conclude, in order to find the balance between the advantages and the disadvantages, governments might design flexible laws to meet the people's needs. For example, in some cities, noise preventing is valid only in specific periods of the day, periods in which most of the people supposed to rest and need silence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, overweight status become more popular all over the world. Everyone think high food prices will prevent this problems. In my opinon, there are more reasons lead to overweight of people.\r\n\r\nLacking of work out is a important factor. The body creates energy when we eat food and consuming them when we work out.\r\n\r\nWith society today, people eat many food and don’t do exercise lead to excess fat accumulated in the body result in people become overweight.We can conclude that less work out will help easily catch overweight.\r\n\r\nIn stead of increase the price of high fat products, goverment should annouces people to join activity such as go to the walk, do exercise, so on.Besides, at local should place many competitions about health and physical to encourage everyone play.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, increase the price make consumer purchase was much affected.\r\n\r\nEspeciall, people who needing them such as overweight or normal people. With normal people they can need them to enjoy. Although, overweigh people wouldn’tt be lose controlled if they didn’t have them.\r\n\r\nFor examples, in America the number of people who with obesity very high but the goverments didn’t apply this solution instead of they organised many sport activities and encouraged people to join it.\r\n\r\nHowever, for people suffering from obesity. If they don’t have a balanced diet suitable, they can die or lose of many other abilities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, i am disagree with increase the prices of product instead of we should encourage them join activities more and have a good diet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this sophisticated world, more and more young ones tend towards renowned personalities due to their name and fame. In this day and age, celebrities have become more eminent among adults owing to their lucrative living standards as well as their stunning looks rather than their victories which they gain by determination and hard work. The upcoming will highlight that this certainly not a rational approach that not needs to have opted.\n\nAt the outset, famous personalities always like to maintain their look and keeps as fit as fiddle to themselves. Due to this, the youth generation likes to follow these celebrities dressing sense like costumes and living standards which automatically put detrimental effects on today’s generation. Apart from it, when young ones follow renowned celebrities as role models then they adapt their culture and forget about their own culture and traditions which puts adverse impact on adults. Consequently, the whole family relations get disturbed. To cite an example, Nita Ambani who runs their own business like a non-government organization and social worker. She always wears expensive attires, shoes, and jewelry. That’s why the modern generation gets easily influenced by her.\n\nOn the flip side, there are some celebrities who can be an optimistic role model for young adults. If teenagers follow those celebrities who become imminent with hard work and determination then it can change their mindset towards their careers and goals. To illustrate, Mr. Dhoni who was a renowned celebrity of the Indian cricket team has had this status due to his dedication and lots of courage. Therefore, today’s generation should follow this spirit for accomplishing its goals.\n\nTo recapitulate, famous personalities put positive as well as negative impacts on adults. Indeed, wealth and glamour are not much important as the achievements of a person. Therefore, the young generation should adopt positive things for a dazzling future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper discussion around decades People agree whether computers good privelage society bumping year year I think computers positive effect people This teach handeye coordination give knowlege cultures around world allow people communicate one another Do think downsides really outweigh positives Handeye coordination something born You gain get older acheive practive Computers help goal PERCENT people go frequently horrible catching baseball going caught every time says biologist And helps baseball sports juggling golf tennis If get good sports play fun even proffessional Who knew playing could get far life Did know according Time magazine people go better able focus tasks schoolwork enables hands eyes work together one And everyone knows get good grades school almost job could qualified Then earn good amount money live dream life Oh great another hour day school Hhmm What I first block history What Yes We re culture project That means I easily go find great things place I m assigned That s another upput computers Easy access tons useful information I cheerleading everyday school If I project I nt hours hours look books find I need know Computers allow sport still get good grade school people use computers informational work faraway places It faster accurate You could search bookshelf find almanac But find would need check copyright Hopefully s recent If re trouble Would feel like prying shelves acccurate Facebook All new ways communicate people Just another useful effect people Forgot write homework Hopefully friend nt ask PERCENT people nt chat others online says expert Most reason another Such homework happened day nt seen eachother forever Do nt chat people online Trust gradesaver Maybe help conclude computers give positive effect society handeye coordination information chatting What would without", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alien signs on Mars? How could that be?\n\nIn May 24th, 2001 NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling arounds Mars taking picutres of landsites for its sister ship, Viking 2. When looking around a shodwy likeness of a face was spotted. This head stretched nearly two miles from end to end and seemed to stare back at thee cameras. When releasing the the images for all to see, few scientists thought it may have been an alien artifact.\n\nOthers such as I, a NASA scientist, think otherwise. I, along with many others think this landform naturally occuring. How could it be that for years upon years we just would not have noticed alien life? There have always been rovers roaming around the often cameras catching pictures. Over a progression of time the face has become more noticeable. Naturally occuring things come over periods of time, such as this \"face\" has. Alien life has never been proven or even found. There is no factual or scientifical evidence to follow up on such assumptions.\n\nUntil proven otherwise, I will continue to believe this face is a naturally occuring thing. If science comes along, or even the Aliens to prove this landform, I will then believe the Face was made by Aliens. With no other \"Alien signs\" or real evidence I will stick with my idea of nature.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience us It hard learn theme even harder master theme It ways good time use patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers for many reasons, the first reason will be because they are not sure what can they find there so they need to be very prepared for any visual or physical contact in Venus. another reason will be because it's close to the sun, so that means a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nAlso in paragraph 2 says \"each previous mission was unmmaned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nIn the paragraph 3 it says many reasons of why it is dangerous to go to study Venus more closer, it is dangerous to study Venus even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nOur sister planet is so inhospitable; Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, its important to know the risk are you gone to made cause of your actions, this information is a clearly example of cause and effect; the plans can be finished good or bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although the Facial Action Coding System in a classroom is usefull, it isn't very valuable. Their are pros and cons about have the facial coding system.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will tell whether the students taking tests are confused or distracted, but the state gives out tests that the students have to take because its still work their supposed to do no matter how bored or unhappy they get. In paragraph 6, it states that it could modify the lesson for the children if they're bored or confused which is helpful if its fun or freetime. The childrens facial expressions may not be how they actually feel which would make the calculations go wrong. Instead of a computer detecting if a person is sad or confused, the teacher should.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is not valuable, the teachers should detect whether the student should do a certain lesson no matter how fun or boring it is, not the computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There were many sport competitions organized after the World-War II since the first Olympic games was held in Athena, in 1963, to bring the world together again. Previously, sport competition was seen as an opportunity for the athletes to break the world records for the pride of their home countries. However, nowadays, people are more inclined to win the match because of money reward and glory. I believe that young people should be more encouraged to achieve their goals to become a champion so that the value of sport competition would not be purely for commercial purpose.\nIn the last decades, there have been a lot of sport competitions being held from national to global level. The athletes were trained by the supported teams to do their best to become the world champion. It was the pride of such athlete to win and see their national flags were rised after the match. Over the years, sport has become more commercial following its popularity to attract global audiences. Many athletes are paying more attention for the opportunity to win the match for commercial purpose. For example, one wants to become a famous soccer player so that they could become the ambassador of Adidas and get more income out of it.\nDue to the temptation for getting famous and having more money, there are people who choose to play unfairly during a competition. Instead of focusing on increasing their skills, they would cheat to win the game for money. For example, a soccer player may use thyroid injection for boosting their energy level even though it is strictly prohibited. Moreover, sport is not seen anymore to promote peace and solidarity among people from different cultural backgrounds but for the chance to get the superficial gloriness.\nTo conclude, even if the motivation has shifted, the young people should learn to focus more on becoming a real champion and play fairly so that they can become the best athletes in thier expertise while the money and glory would follow them after.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present, social media has been widely used to communicate with other people and has also been used as a source of news. In my opinion, the upsides of using social media definitely outweigh the downsides.\r\n\r\nTo begin, social platforms have been generally used among every generation. One of the most significant concerns is that people tend to have less physical interactions with others in real life. For example, during meals, some members of my family were often on their phones, not having conversations with other members. In addition, since any person can post anything online, there is often a lot of fake news. So, some people such as the elderly are likely to be convinced and believe wrongful information.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are many advantages of social media to be considered. First, the platforms have made it easier for people to connect to each other. For instance, when I was an exchange student in Japan, I had to live far from my family, thus I would feel homesick. Having social media helped me to communicate with my siblings easily and made me feel closer to my home. Second, news can spread more widely and fast. To illustrate, in the past, people had to wait for newspapers every morning, but now people can read news anytime. As a result, people can be aware of harmful incidents or upcoming disasters so that they can prepare themselves.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although social media can lead to some problems including lower interactions between actual people, and fake news, it helps people from distant places to interact with each other more conveniently, and also helps news spread more quickly and widely. In my opinion, the benefits surely outweigh the drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As we all know our generation today is all about what new technology is in, Apple watches, touch screen computers, and self parallel parking cars. These are just some of the trends you see today throughout the world. In most cases people see these as positive effects that we will be able to grow off of. I see it as, I don't want to live in a world where one day eveything is based on technology. I want future generations to experience life up close and personal, not through holograms on the television.\n\nNow the new, trendy item is a driverless car. In some ways this may be helpful, but others not so much. Driverless cars can't do everything, you have to drive it through complicated traffic issues and when you pull in or out of a driveway. If these cars are able to stop at a red light and know when a car is to close, why can't the \"driverless\" car detect a car coming when I have to pull out of the drive way. Technology may be advanced, but is it the right solution for the future? I completely understand if you want to drive around the cool, new driverless car, but what will happen if you get into a car accident or hit a pedestrian? Is it your fault or the cars? Would it happen to be the manufacturers? It's hard to say especially if the law says, \"The only safe car has a human driver in control at all time.\" If that law does not change, think of all the issues that would arise if an accident were to occur.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I going inform people using computers spending time family I agree effects computer haves people one allows us access information two allows us interact people And three helps us updated happening sports everything My first reason use computers gives us information like weather reports school openings delays closings It also tell s us earthquake It tells us alot stuff It allow s go websites find information And allow s us fun play games internet It help us homework And help us find things like job stuff My second reason use computers ineract people We talk people weve never ever met We find information tell us life litte help police find info criminals track It better faster using phone talk And make people fun make stay computer long period time My third reason use computers would keep us updated love watch would tell us recent teams players And sports fanatic able watch live games computer And able post games chance see players talk fans In conclusion use computers give us information world two allow us interact people weve never met And three keep us updated sports like catch especially sports fanatic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System could be useful in a classroom. Student work become better based off of how the student is feeling. The computer will change things if the user is feeling a certain way. In the article it says \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Then the computer can help the student learn the same thing but in a different way. The computer can make student work less complicated. The passage states \" if you smile when a Web appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" The computer will react how people are feeling. So that can also mean that if a student is doing work and they come across a problem that is hard, the student might get mad or sad. The computer will recognize the anger and make the next problem easier or the computer make give you a different problem to solve. A item like this can change learning in class for better in the future. That is why the Facial Action Coding System is a useful peice of technology to have in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As soon cyclist gained information way go set tall cool pines They gave feeling confidence physically cooled body As headed road encountered various small townsnone looked promising gave feeling despair accordance lack water Even journey found one last town arundown welches factory This increased thirst gave feeling spite towards old men given advice However soon found bait house could get water escape heat For satisfied grateful owner It made realize never trust old men", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Museums have had been playing a significant role to magnify the glory of a nation along with serving educational purposes. A segment of society opines that the sole aim of museums is to entertain folks; diametrically opposed to this, others believe that these places are more useful in imparting invaluable cultural value to the young generation. Both statements may advance equally compelling arguments, but I inclined the second notion for the reasons which are explained in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, museums are the buildings that hold invaluable information regarding the ancient era of human civilisation. How the human species have had been evolved from the first phase of the life cycle is clearly depicted in this architecture with pictures. For instance, the national museum Delhi has diverse articles from the magnificent ancient era including the statues of the kings of that period and their accessories like jewellery and clothes. Thereby, apparent visuals of these articles longer last than reading; these structures are the source of knowledge for those who are keen on exploring history.\r\n\r\nMoving further, thanks to globalisation, it is easy to travel and investigate other countries around the globe. The popularity of these monuments attract tourists, therefore it would be cooler if these buildings have modern amenities like air-conditioned halls and better visibility of the accessories, safe security system where children can roam and enjoy themselves to the fullest with their parents.\r\n\r\nTo conclude then, whilst there exist contrasting stances on the matter, it is taxing work to decide which one have a more positive outcome, howbeit, undoubtedly, museums are the prime source of ancient cultures and can upgrade the youngsters with the history, but it would be impeccable if these buildings have offered some entertainment along with a safe environment to the sightseers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author makes a claim by telling how venus is a worthy pursuit. If we went to go visit venus,we would learn everything about what lived or growed on venus. But,If you were to go,you would have to watch out for carbon dioxide blankets,and highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus also has the hottest has the surface tempature than any other planet in our solor system. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters. If you were able to see venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safetly far ablove the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likelly lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. I thoink it would be a great idea to visit venus and find out things that happend on it a long time ago,but we need to get the right protection to visit venus before we examine it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his claim very well yes we can go to venus and that would be amazing to see but we cant with stain those condtions. 800 degress surface is very hard to be able to with stain is metals arent even to stay solid on it. But her does have a good point if we take a thick metal jet and fly over 170 miles in the air and just watch down. That would keep us in a nice area of heat becuase then we wont have to worry about being hot because how high we are up and how fast were going will cool us down. I feel that we shouldnt do it there use to be life forms there and oceans but it got so hot they arent there no more. Then we should just leave it how it is and mind our business. What if we do happen to revive this planet history always repeats itself\" doesn't it then that would be billions if not trillions burned into ash ... literally. Just because the world is way to close to the sun and we cant take having that risk we can lose hundreds of thousands of lives if we try that its already bad enough the world we live on suffers with world hunger and global warming imagine venus. Venus is a quite small planet and its already hot imagine if we do find some way to cool it off and we start making factories and global warming becomes a thing literally every thing will look like its silver just because if we do this everything will melt from either the planets hot surface or global warming making the planet hot again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been on a boat before? Well in this story the excerpt asked, \"Using information form the article, write an argument from Luke's point of vew convncing others to participate.\" His point of view is that it is fun to go sightseeing and you can also relax after the shipments of the animals.\n\nFurther more, One reason is that you get to go sightseeing. Luke says, \"Besides helping people, I had a side benifit of seeing China and Europe.\" Luke also says,\"But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\" Both of those are examples on why someone shold be a seagoing cowboy.\n\nIn addition, you are able to relax and play games with your teamates while on board, after the animals shipments. The Excerpt said, \"The cowboys played baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed.\" The excerpt also says, \"Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\" These examples explain why you should jon the seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nIn conclusion, Lukes point of view on being a seagoing cowboy are that he has fun on board, and has fun going sightseeing. All of the examples explain why someone should become a seagoing cowboy. So all of these examples and reasons are what Luke does.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The problem between in individual of the robot in the future is development will be effect society. However , I totally discuss it and share some my opinion.\r\n\r\nCurrently , the robot will be important with some one because like they do not have time to clean the house and buy them to help do everything. That is not bad idea for to some people think the robot s are very important in the future . On other hand , if they too much abuse make people more lazy to do something and that is a bad thing for if we produce robot. \r\n\r\nIn addition , they are think kind of some robot will be dangerous and effect to people because if like some problem when their are kids touch it and do something wrong with the machine will be explode. It does not mean the person can not use the robot just like thye need to control the time for that.\r\n\r\nFor me , I do not prefer we use the robot too much because will be make someone forgot to do that and easy to get some bad habit like do not do anything just stay on the bed call the machine come and to do something for them. For instance, do not let your self can not live without that and make your self passive.\r\n\r\nFinally , I think everyone have some opinion on theirs mine , so just do not abuse and make your life gonna be boring . On balence, I believe everyone can use that robot when they really need it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is consideree as a planet beause it's the second planet on hour solar system bt it have something difference to the other planets on our solar system, venus orbit at a different speed around the sun. we said the venus is the second planet in our solar system so that means it's the closest planet to the sun but sometimes it can be located right at the\n\ncorner.\n\nvenus has been a difficult planet to humans to study, it's so challenging.\n\nsomething that makes venus challenging is that a thick atmostphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanked venus,\n\nin my on opinion it's something good because it can protect animals and other things that live in venus bus i also think it's something bad because it do not let humans to visit and learn about that planet because it could be dangerous for humans because no body knows what can happen to humans if they try to live in other panets like if their were living at the Earth because the atmospheric preasure is 90 times greater than in te Earth, sohumans would'nt survive to the preasure of that atmosphere.\n\ni think that if humans start like experience they may one they visit other planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars, and I believe that the driverless cars are the future. Who would want to driver a car around when the technology are improving? Eventually, it'll take time for the \"driverless car\" to take place but is all for the good cause. Looking back at the article, it stated that, \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009\" ,which mean that they are taking their to see if it is safe enough and secrure for the people use. They are making sure that is smart like a human.\n\nFor example, Toyota Prius position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotatingsensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor for the diverless car. Does the combination of all this input is necessary for the diverless car to mimic the skills of a human at the wheel? My answer is yes. People are alot careless and never really know the outcome of the incident it might occurs. I believe that the diverless car will be a lot smarter and challeneging because there will be less accident. In another word, if i was driving my own car and most of the time, like a regular teen, i might be texting and driving. You can't say that i won't get into any kind of accident because I'm sure ar some point it will happen. Let's look at the outcome of the Driverelss Car. I'm sure the driverelss car will be more focus on the road and getting me to my destination rather than being on a phone like me and carelees about my life and put other in danger.\n\nIn conclusion, the law have yet not allow the driverless car yet, but I'm sure is in the future. Even if the LAW say is not safe, the automakers are continuing thier work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved. Also, Nissan is planning to have cars that can drive themseleves by 2020. Which mean, they are working on it and coming out with a big and strong outocome for the future ahead of us. Is not as easy as it sound, so there might be some negative outcome but it won't occur much since is the driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Minfong Ho included last paragraph story alluded fact saeng felt better confident reminded home saeng saw hibiscus got feeling intense almost visceral The flower creatively used Ho She said winter hibiscus strong enough make cold months made reader think reading last paragraph flower must give saeng hope confidence Also geese make V I infured would mean Vietnam saeng author trying get reader think That and geese return mentioned last paragraph Minfong Ho wants readers realize objects make us comfortable happy make us strong confident end The author great job placing last thought last paragraph perfectly sums lesson things feel confident feels like home You small fragile plant thrive confidence", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Providing discipline freely for up to six years is considered to be the best way to raise their residents' wisdom and knowledge in order to contribute to the evolution of any nation. Although reducing poverty depends on some factors; I totally agree with the statement that improvement is far more beneficial for individuals' advancement and economic growth. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, allocating the state budget for learning is fundamental for personal expansion in that nation. In fact, investing in discipline for the young such as providing voluntarily six-year schooling helps them easily access basic knowledge (reading, writing and using numbers skills) creating a foundation in order to achieve higher education. Take, for example, A study by the World Bank found that children who attend school for at least 12 years are more likely to be employed, earn higher wages, and have better health outcomes than those who do not attend school. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are several factors to decrease poverty in developing countries; however, providing free education is far more beneficial for long-term economic growth. Generally, having well-educated and skilled workers can result in increasing the average income of individuals, which contributes to higher tax revenues. For illustrate, Finland, a country that offers free schooling from preschool to university, boasts one of the world's highest levels of teaching and standards of living, with its highly skilled and productive workforce playing a key role in maintaining its robust economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undoubted that investment in pedagogy plays a vital role in the success of countries. Giving free education encourages personal development and the economy of the government.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Authors use conclusions wrap story make reader think In story Winter Hibiscus author uses conclusion when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt ant geese return hibiscus budding I take test again uses conclusion show going adapt culture For example garden shop breaks crying says and warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke went It possible reduce crying uses fit didnt pass test doesnt think So motivates self end story try In conclusion author used paragraph show Saeng take test fit new world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that a colossal amount of food are wasted from all corners of the world. Reasons for this vary, and steps need to be taken to tackle the problem.\n\nFirstly, today’s surplus supply of food is to blame for the food waste. With the advent of agricultural technology, farmers are likely to yield higher crops. Therefore, food is produced more than the amount that the whole population could possibly eat. In addition, produce which is perfectly edible but the wrong shape or size is more difficult to sell. As a result, they are unable to appear in supermarkets, let alone going to waste before they are served on the dining table.\n\nAnother reason stems from the fact that people take food for granted. In this modern world, food is sold at a lower price, which makes people do not treasure the food they eat. Consequently, human tend to buy fresh ingredients without feeling the need to keep food in fridges and turn leftovers into a nice meal later. Discarding food right after the meals, for example, is likely to contribute to the gargantuan scale of food waste.\n\nHowever, the problem described above is not intractable. The simplest measure is that the government should launch campaigns to raise public awareness of detrimental effects of food waste. In doing so, citizens may understand the seriousness of harms by throwing food products away. Another remedy is that taxes should be imposed on the food industry. This solution may discourage people from buying or ordering more than they actually need. \n\nIn conclusion, the fact that wasting food happening on a colossal scale is attributable to several factors. This issue can be handled by adopting the above-mentioned suggestions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars has been something that the movies have glorified and try to make popular. Driverless cars could be useful of you start to get lost or tired but your safety and well being is going to be at risk.\n\nDriving is something that you can never be too careful about wether it is reckless driving, an animal running out into the road, or construction gone wrong. Today there are alot of dangers that come along with driving and that make it more dificuly for drivers to commute safetly.\n\nEverything has it's pros and cons but in this situation there are more cons than pros. With a car that has a mind of its own you can never be too careful when it comes to your safety and well being and making sure you and everyone around you will be safe. First of all the cars will drive on their own and that might make you very tired and cause you to start to fall asleep, but the cars haven't been able yo drive through road damage, wrecks and there are alot of those everywhere and if your asleep you cant assist your car through the damage.\n\nDriverless cars are most likely to be really small and in a small car you are more likely to get hurt in the case of a wreck.\n\nThere will be people to drive these cars but the car won't be a household car it will be the type of car that celebrities drive around and the price will probabily be through the roof.\n\nPersonally I dont think these cars would be a solid investment just for the simple fact its un realistic. There will be a select few to buy them but most of them will stick to the manual driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is an unamerican, and unfair voting process. In America we believe in the people living in our country having the right to vote for their leaders, but what if they're not directly voting themselves? The electoral college is an inacurrate way of determining the leaders of our country compared to the other actually accurate way of voting, a direct vote election. The method of The Electoral College cannot always be controlled by the voters from their state, and is unfair to states with lower populations whereas the population of that state might not understand what exactly they're voting for. This doesn't seem exactly the way things are supposed to be in our nation since \"...over 60 perecnt of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\"(source 2), does it?\n\nThough it is highly unlikely that a choosen elector from a state would not vote towards the chosen side their state decided and voted upon, they still have the opportunity to. This opporitunity is unfair to the voters of the state as they are not directly voting for the president, such as how things are in a direct vote. A direct vote allows the candidate to be choosen and voted for directly by voters knowladgebly voting, then the highest popularity perecentage from votes are then to have the candidate be elected, not by a group of people that have a chance to be bias from the voters in their state. This problem can occur by things such as state legislatures picking electors that may not vote in favor of the states population's choice, but their and state legislatures choice. Even though \"...almost all states award electoral votes on a winner take all basis,..\"(source 3) not all states electors must do so. They can and have the chance to choose whoever they want as the power to pick is in their hands, and out of ours.\n\nIn smaller states such as Hawaii and Alaska they are only given a total of 3-4 electoral college votes as their population is not as large as somewhere such as California, New York or Florida. This does not only matter due to the low number of votes awarded, but it also effects how much they may know about the candidates running for the position. A lot of candidates only choose to go to \"swing\" states (California, New York, etc.) in order to recieve more votes in the electoral college. \"...candidates don't spend time in states they have no chance of winning,..\"(source 2) this causes a lot of people in areas not visited to be unknowledgable about eligible candidates in the voting process, and what they could be voting for. These \"swing\" states help candidates reach their goal of the winning 270 majority votes out of the 538 possible. 538 may seem like a large number but compared to the population of the United States its not really all that large of a group of people. The population of our nation and the votes of our voters is much more larger then the decisions of 538 electors.\n\nNow hopefully it is clearer to see the many problems of the current electoral college system, as it is unfair and irrational. Our nation's voters are the ones who should be voting in a direct vote in picking the president compared to the electoral college. As the method of the electoral college cannot always be controlled by the voters from their state, and is unfair to states with lower populations whereas the population of that state might not understand what exactly they're voting for. These are only a couple of the large problems caused by the electoral college. As far as these problems I believe as Bob Dole said: Abolish the electoral college!\n\nSincerely,\n\nAnonymous Student", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates unified comforting also responsible thoughtful tone Within second paragraph Narciso Rodriguez provided sentence generally describe thoughts toward three room apartment claiming innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home The adjectives Rodriguez providvedes sentence innocence warm provide comforting feel congregation adds concept unity However also shows parents responsible hardworking coming United States selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers With self sacrifice Narciso Rodriguez expresses gratitude great amounts towards parents constantly thanking opportunities provided", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story quote shows determined Saeng passing driving test For example story Winter Hibiscus Saeng fails driving test says something forget fating said Lets plant right now said trying forget failing focus something positive In conclusion author ends quote example determined focus Saeng passing driving test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author trying create sense hope family happiness Hope family helped others letting temporarily stay got back feet provided hope extended family Family cause last paragraph explaining tiny apartment learned definition family welcoming refugees celebrating first birthdays loving careing enviroment Finally I think happiness explaining grateful parents coming america give better life also paragraph two explaining home environment filled cooking music factors happiness These moods author trying show", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars has always been an argumentive topic for us scientists and the conspiracy theorists. Is it just a naturally forming landform? Was it created by aliens? No one knows for sure but from our research, it is very unlikely that aliens could have assembled it.\n\nUs scientists here at NASA take our jobs very seriously. We research the outside world for a living and theorists are just taking guesses! Would you rather believe a NASA scientist or a conspiracy theorist's hypothesis of space? As humans, we always choose the craziest scenarios and we assume the worst. It could be something as simple as a landform for all we know.\n\nThere is no proof of aliens but there is proof of landforms forming naturally. Yes, the \"face\" looks like it was made to look that way and yes it is oddly accurate to the face of an egyptian pharoh but this could just be a coincidence. We have very high tech cameras that shoot pictures of mars all the time. The \"best\" picture of the face from 1796 was taken by a camera with 43 meters per pixel. In 2001, we used a camera with 1.56 meters in each pixel so if there were so called \"aliens\" that assembled the face, they would have been captured in the shot as well. As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\n\nWhat the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, which are landforms common around the American West. People sometimes say it reminds them most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Another thing that makes the idea of it being a landform likely is that Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho is a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa which is about the same height as the Face on Mars so they are both very similar to eachother.\n\nThere are a lot of ideas about what the Face could be. We will continue research and further our studies. Until then, believe as you wish but remember, scientists or theorists?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of visting Venus? Well you should make room for your plans and start saving up.\n\nVevus, sometimes called the evening star, it is one of the brightest points in the night sky. Venus is the second plant away from our Sun. Venus is so simple to see from a distant but safe vantage point of Earth.\n\nIt is often reffered to as Earht's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth because of the density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. When Venus is right around the corner humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each mission was unmanned, and for good reason no spacecraft survived the landning for mroe than a few hours. This is why not a single spaceship ahs touched down on Venus more than three decades.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. On the planet's surface, theh temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,a nd the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we have in our own planet. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouter on Earth. An environment would crush even a even a submarine, diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venus has the hottest surface tempertures of any planet in our solar system.\n\nWhy are scientists talking about visting Venus? They think Venus have once been like Earth-like planet to our solar system. Long ago Venus probably was covered with largely oceans and could have supported various forms of life, jus tlike Earth. Today Venus still has some features that are ananlogous to us on Earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valley, mountains, and craters. Venus can be an option of a plantary visit.\n\nVenus can also be dangerous because of the temperturese would still\n\nbe toasty at around 170 Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. These conditions aren't easy, but survivable for humans.\n\nVenus is our closests planet we should give it a try and try to visit. NASA just has to makeup or invent more robots so they can last longer. Venus can be dangerous but it was once an Earth alike planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am strongly against the development of these cars . First , Whats the point in making a car thats functions by itself ? Cars were made to be driven by humans not by themselfs . Why spend so much money and time in trying to develop something , when theres no garrented that anybody will buy them or they will even function properly . Its just telling drunk drivers or high drivers to get behind the wheel of a car , Nothing bads going to happen your not driving so nothings your fault .\n\nSecond , Are traffic laws were made to keep pedestrains , drivers , and passengers safe . In this article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming \" They give you a question \" who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer ? \" . When anything bad happens on the road , I feel as if its the manufacturer falt . They basically say there is no need in watching the road when you drive now are cars will take car or everything ; Eat , talk , text , sleep , smoke , do as you please . They have flashing lights , entertainment , information systems that use heads-up display to warn a driver when he or she must take over . With knowing this drivers really wont pay attention now a lot horrible things can happen , The only thing that will improve is how one can drive perfectly in a straight line .\n\nThrid , How do we even know the driverless car works right ? How do we know it wont malfunction ? KIll us ? or even catch its ownself on fire ! We know nothing of this driverless car and what its truly capable of . Can it stop correctly at a stop light or a yeild sigh , Can it reprogram to drive itself at the right speed limit . Slow down when a pedestrian , dog , raccoon , or even a squirral has entered the road .\n\nlastly ,\n\nMy question is why build something to out smart the system when the system is good already ? We already drive everywhere we need to go , If not driving we walk . The traffic laws are fine they prevent dangrous accidents already , Everybody follows then an know them ; and those who don't follow get a free trip the the police station . Why confuss people , switch , or even change some laws to protect the driverless car and its manufacturer . Im against the driverless car for many reason and I still have many questions about the development . You shouldn't take something so simple and make it into something so complicated ,\n\nJust leave things how they were mean't to be .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist surrounds affect In paragraph two cyclist describes I enjoyed serenity earlysummer evening To wonderful day begin parably assurance even thing would fine Confidence factory beautiful weather well knew short cut In paragraph cyclist mentions old men looked map pointed this breezy jaunt The cyclist thought life got little easier Then paragraph cyclist comes upon traditional definition ghost town This setting nothing like old men talking Twenty miles road came fork sorts In paragraph caused confusion worry This sight troubling I traveling high deserts California June The cyclist hitting water bottles pretty regularly This setting made cyclist uncomfortable well two hundred degrees The cyclist began puzzled distraught I notices terrain changing quote cyclist s settings caused confusion But end cyclist suceeded", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The created author memoir regular becacuse story Narciso Rodriguez explains life little reader explains lived cuba america boy also explains loves home celebration heritage america boy talks like kind smat tone beacse s really explaining like really hear likes theres anger story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scrrrrrrrr! Crash! Smack! Darkness, Silence, Boom, Boom, The sound of the nine year olds heart as she hears sirens & the sound of the fire truck. Theres smoke every where she feels arms touch her as she is being pulled up from underneath the big automatic driverless car scared for her life. Luckily her and her mother are both okay. driverless cars are to dangerous because they dont really have any control. we already have to many accidents in regular cars. finally they are way to expensive so its a waste of money.\n\nDirverless cars dont have any control. Many people already have problems with regualar cars i think it would be a danger for some one to be behind the wheel of a driverless car. what if you are driving down the middle of the road and something goes wrong with the transmition of the driverless car how would you stop? how would you know? would the sensor tell you? and if it dosent you are now stuck in a car you have absolutley no control over.\n\nAdding on driverless cars are way to expenxive the price on a manual car is already high imagine how mcuh it would cost on a car to drives you around. I think the goverment should be taking money and trying to provide money to the people out in california who dont have clean water to drink istead of spending money on driverless cars. accornding google.com driverless cars would be over 30,000 dollars. Thats money thatr could be used on more important things.\n\nIn Conclusion i think driverless cars and a danger and a complete waste of money. Hopefully i am not the only one who feels this way. If you agree with me go too www.driverdeath.org and vote for your opionion. You could also call 111-223-56 and speak your mind. Dont be a fool vote for whats right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people say that \"The Face on Mars\" is something that was built by ancient aliens, much like the theories that people come up with about the structures on Earth. Some people have even stated that the \"aliens\" could be trying to cover it up by hiding it during the time they take it. Then there are the firm believers that this is just a land mass that consists of the surroundings and resembles a mesa type biome. Since there have been developments over time, showing the different variations of the \"face\" and what it has become over the years. There are different arguements and different points of view, but there are different time periods with different variations of the same thing, so it will be proven that is is a natural land mass, and not a martian made structure.\n\nThere is a lot of things that points toward this being a natural land mass and that it is not a Martian made structure, or that the Government is trying to cover it up. One thing that shows that it is a natural structure is when the article states, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough aroud Cydonia...\" This means that there are multiple things like this, but the only things that make this one different is the fact that is has \"unusual shadows\" in it that make it look human or like a structure that was built. After this happened and people got news of it and figured out it wasn't real, the Conspiracy Theorists came out and made it seem like a cover up, but this isn't true, because NASA could have gotten publicity from it, as well as many funds. This mesa is no different from anything that we have in Western United States, there we have many mesas that could look equally as strange, but we don't bother, because we want to believe that there is other life, or that there is something strange going on in other planets.\n\nOver the years, the images of this land mass have gotten more and more clear, and we have come to realize, that no, it is not a face, but it is a large point with shadowy parts in it. From the picture from 1976, it is really blurry, and you can't really tell what it is, which is what got people hopes up and thought it may be a structure, due to the shadows and the formation around it. The 1998 one is a bit clearer, but it still is a bit unclear of what it is or could be, because it does look like it could be something like the Sphinx in Egypt, but with the same formation around it. The 2001 image looks way more clear, and this one shows something completely different than what we expected, it is just a regular mesa, with cracks, dips and shadows, and the same formation around it as before. There is something you can tell about the 2001 picture though, if you look closely, it is the same image as all the others, because you can see the dips in it where the \"eyes\" and \"mouth\" are, just more clear so they don't really show up, and since everything is more clear, you can see the cracks, which could have added to the effect.\n\nEven after all of the theories that were made, and NASA defending themselves, as well as people trying to prove them wrong, and prove that there was something that the government did to cover it up. All of this could still be fought, who knows, there could be life out there somewhere besides on Earth, but as of now, there is no proof, and this image will still remain a natural land structure. Some people are dissapointed by this, others are motivated to keep moving and possibly one day find some signs of life, so maybe humans would be prepped and set in case of disaster. There is nothing wrong with personal opinions, but for the most part and from what pictures and plenty of evidence have proven, this is still no more than a natural occurence do to the way land forms over time. So even though people may keep looking for any signs of something that could be a conspiracy, or you just want to find something \"supernatural\" or strange, but the fact stands that there are many thing like this, and just because it is on a different planet, does not make it anymore special, and it doesn't make it any different.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever just sat in the classroom confused and lost? But the lecture is going to fast to raise your hand and ask a question, then you end up not knowing how to do your homework, and then its test time and you have no clue what your doing? Well i sure have, and with technoligical developments this may not be a problem in future. How great would it be for your teacher to know when you were dosing off and lost, so she will be able to help you after class, and you didnt even have to tell her, all because of the computer sitting right in front of you.\n\nWith technology developing every year, there might be a method to tell when students, absolutely understand, and if students are lost and confused, using the Facial Action Coding System. The system understands your emotion by looking at your muscles and by identyfying the position of your facial features. I think that if this was used in classrooms there would be less failing grades because a teacher could tell if a student understood the lesson, and if the student wasn't understanding the teacher could help that kid one on one to make sure the student understood what was going on. Some kids can't just sit in a class for an hour at a time and learn like everybody else, and this system will help the students stay on track by alerting the teacher about whats going on with the students emotions. It even says in the article that humans can identify these emotions but does a teacher or professor have the time to go around and look at every students face and try and tell their emotions? The answer is no, why not take a laptop or hand held device that is looking at the student all the time, and use that to tell the studnets emotions and send the feeddback to the teacher at the end of the day, this method will not only modify the lesson for the student effectively, it could also let the student and the teacher get to know each other.\n\nThe developing technology is changing for the better so i agree that it is very valuable to be able to read the emotions of students in a classroom. The teachers will not only be able to tell if a student is bored, not paying attention to the lesson, or actually confused. this will help students stay on track in the classroom. So pretty much the computer will modify the lesson to be more effective to certain learning needs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A spacecraft was launched into outter space. Outerspace consists of many planets, including Mars. On the planet Mars, scientists have a discovered a face. The Face on Mars is a natural landform.\n\nPeople say the Face was crafted by aliens. Because it was winter, the camera in the spacecraft had to look through clouds to see the Face. Due to the weather conditions, some people say that \"alien markings\" were hidden by fog.\n\nMany details support that the Face on Mars is a natural landoform. Jim Garvin, a chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, states that if \"alien markings\" existed on Mars, they would have been discovered because the image of the Face was enlarged 3 times the pixel size. Also, the Face resembles a butte or mesa, common landforms around American West. In fact, Garvin also says, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This is an \"isolated mesa\" that is almost the same height as the Face.\n\nProven with facts, the Face on Mars is just a natural landorm. Outerspace has many wonderful discoveries. With proper research and equipment,\n\nThose discoveries can be made just like the Face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many nations, many people are starting to show intrest in the history of their houses and buildings where they live. Well there are many wasy in which an individual can look up for they past information of their house because there can be many reason to do so, like nationalism linked to the architecture.\r\n\r\nThere are variouse reason for why a person is curious about a concrecte and wodden structure. One of the reason is that the history, tale, and stories of many countries is linked to its architecture of it beautiful structures. One great example of this is India and its rich past with disenty and kingdom states which is presented in the form of beautiful monuments, homes and towers engraved with \r\n\r\nastounding craftman-ship like Taj-Mahal, Mysore Palace, and homes in Kashmir. These is just one example for wht people are curious.\nThis is just the tip of the ice-berg, there are so many houses and building which represents so much about their nation. People are just one Google search away from knowing abut the wonders about their home. There are many people who found out that their houses were built so long ago, trapping the essence of that era. My friend found out that his house was constructed in early eighteen hundreds and as decorated with hand-crafted wood by just reading some books and searching about the contruction process of past on Google search engine.\r\n\r\nSo, there are multiple reasons and wasy to look up and research about a house because its all connected with the history of a country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire States Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Paragraph fourteen said greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature planning mast builders account high winds The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The greatest reason mooring mast Empire State Building never fulfilled purpose safety issues Most dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable On May German Zeppelin Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey Owners Empire State Building recognized incident take place New York lives would lost Builders Empire State Building failed recognize dangers mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The works of a car have created wonders to people as early as the early 1900s. Now people need to understand the advatages of limting car use. Pollution has gone down in cities from not using cars and people have reported less stress, which is due to the car rates going down. Many people have argued that jobs are going to go more down then we may need, if we stop using cars, but there is always a way to fix small situations such as that.\n\nStudies have shown cars have created pollution for the enviornment. Pollution can cause sickness and other affects that can cause a habitat to be inhabitable.\"Pasenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\"(Rosenthal,5). Though, we can fix that. Many cities such as Paris,France have experimented with the law involving cars to see if the country can have a pollution decrease and they did, within the first day. Duffer reported that on Monday Paris created a ban for the even-numbered plates and the smog was able to clear in one day's time. \"The smog cleared enough Monay for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday,\" (Duffer,19).\n\nPeople have argued that stopping car production may cause people to lose their jobs. There is a way to fix that. Selsky reported that in Bogota,Colombia because of the car distribution slowing down they were able to make parks and sport centers accessiable. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city,\"(Selsky,28). With that being said without people running any of those faclities then parks and sport centers wouldn't be that accessiable to the fellow citizens. So by creating more places like parks and sport centers, and less places like car factories we would be able to limit car usage without the worry of someone losing their job and not being able to get one.\n\nCars have also been known to cause stress. In the article \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" Rosaenthal quoted Heidrun Walter talking about how tense she was when she had a car. The constant worrying for gas and car bills may be a factor towards the stress in someone's life. Young adults have not worried as much for a car, making the somewhat more content. \"Mine (19 and 21) have not bothered to get a driver's license, even though they both live in places where one could come in handy,\" (Rosenthal,39).\n\nLimting car use can cause a major impact on today's society. \"Demographic shifts in driving population suggest that the trend may accelerate,\" (Rosenthal,38). It has many advantages that people should understand. Pollution rates can go down. Stress could go down once you start limting car use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is about the idea that venus is worth studying despite the dangers on the planet. venus is the seconed planet from the son making it close to earth. Acording to the author venus was often referred to as earth twins acording to the text it states \"Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size\". The author also states that venus has proved to be very challenging place to examine up close.\n\nFor many reason like \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxid\". Even more challenging reasons is clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere and temperatures over 800 degrees fahrengeit. Are just some of the reasons that it would be hard to explor venus. The author mainly just states the reasons its hard to vistit venus and the author really doesnt state why it would be worthy to go and study venus. Except for samples of rocks and gases.\n\nInconclusion it wouldnt be that worthy to visit venus its just to risky and a waste of time instead we could study other planets like mars. Which we already know alot about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the development of the world, there is a spike in damages caused to the environment. Some states that increasing fuel prices is the optimal method to fight this global issue of nature. I partially agree that the reduction of fuel costs may have a positive impact however, there are a lot of ways to accomplish the same effect. In this essay, I will discuss alternative methods to save the biosphere apart from meddling with the fuel industry.\r\n\r\nFirstly, when the prices of petroleum and diesel are increased, there will be a reduction in the number of consumers. If the usage of fuels enriched with carbon is less, there will be a significant reduction in the emission of carbon dioxide which is a direct toxic pollutant that intensifies the depletion of the ozone layer resulting in global warming. For instance, in 2022 there was a major drop in the supply of petroleum in Sri Lanka which led to skyrocketing prices and this resulted in many people choosing eco-friendly options like bicycles. The research studies later showed the emission rate of pollutant gases by vehicles was reduced by fifty per cent in that year. So, increasing the fuel prices will reduce the number of buyers thus, reducing the negative impact on nature.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, just decreasing the price would not address the root cause of this problem. Encouraging the use of natural energy sources like wind power and solar power would be a positive endorsement. For example, when people use automobiles powered by hydro or solar power, then there is zero toxic waste. So, finding alternative efficient ways to replace petrol and diesel could be beneficial in tackling global environmental issues. Moreover, if the concept of car-pooling and public transportation is developed, then there is a great decline in bad outcomes. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a price reduction of oils would aid in finding answers to international environmental problems but, there are a number of other ways which address the root cause thereby tackling a larger fraction of the problems in an efficient way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus also known as Evening Star Is planet no to different from the planet earth. However this planet shows many challenges that don't allow us to learn more about it. The author males it very clear that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger many times in this article for example in the text it says \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one paerticularly compelling idea of sending humans to stufy Venus.\" How are we gonna send humans down to a planet we dont know that much. This is just one of the many text eveidnce the author put in the text to show Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThe author from the very start of reading this article shows that Venus is well worth the time and effort we are putting towards it. In the text it says \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size\". Venus and Earth are alike in many ways for example Earth Venus and mars are our lanetary neighbors they orbit thr sun as different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times closer to Venus because how it says in the text \"Venus is sometime right around the corner in space terms.\" This is other example on how well the author supports his idea of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.\n\nWe have tried many ways to try to learn more about Venus but there are many things getting in our way of learning more about Venus for example in the text is says \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this could-draped world\". We are more then exicted to try to learn more about Venus but thats not the only thing stopping us from learning more In the text is says \"However peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limtied insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" As you have read normal taking photos will not be enought just to learn and see how Venus surface is we need to go down and see ourselfs however that will be very hard somce no spaceraft survived the landing for more than a few hours as stated in the text. The author shows why his statment of how Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present in many ways.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated with Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system a long time ago. If Venus was once like Earth maybe it can be again because our Earth will not last forvever we will need somewhere else to go and maybe that place is Venus. In the text it says \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life just like earth today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has surface of Rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys mountains and craters.\" This text evdience shows why we are interested in learning more about Venus and once again supporting the idea of the author that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.\n\nThe author has shown more than once that he strongly believes that Venus is well worth all the time and effort they are putting into it. However this planet shows many challenges that don't allow us to learn more about it. The author from the very start of reading this article shows that Venus is well worth the time and effort we are putting towards it. Astronomers are fascinated with Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet. We have tried many ways to try to learn more about Venus but there are many things getting in our way of learning more about Venus. In conclution The author never let up on his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day mom sister I going hair salon get hair done It many people talking It kind noisy The tv radio bunch people talking When got mother signed three us sign sheet sit wait We waited long time I really wanted leave come back another day mom said wait I got hungry I sleepy We waited hour I didnt let bother I turned player listened time us come next Then wait another hour I got even hungry I didnt say anything So waited waited finally next And got hair done Then left went get food hungry And time I patient hair salon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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