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"content": "You may be questioning yourself, why is limiting car usage a good thing? How does it benefits us? Well, have you ever heard of global warming? Global warming is caused by air pollution. Global warming is destroying our planet. Therefore we need to act before its to late. How can you help? Its simple drive less, walk, and inform others about the situation. But there is other ways the government can help and that is by limiting car usage. The less amount of cars in the city the better it is.\n\nHowever, countries like France, China, and Colombia have banned driving in order to clear air pollution from their cities already. In Paris they banned driving due to smog. Those who violated the rules were fined 22-euro which is $31 dollars in America. However 27 people had their car impounded due to their reaction to the fine. And around 4,000 people were fined. Then after five days of intensifying smog, the smog arrived to Beijing, China. China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. They faced major issues and blamed diesal fuel, since France has a tax policy that favors diesal over gasoline. Appearently Colombia seems to be the country that succeeded on reducing the smog. The day without car is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota, Colombia in the mid-1990s. Everyone seemed to join the movement to redue air pollution.\n\nIn other hand, president Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions will get fortuitous assist. Has America passed peak driving? According to Elizabeth Rosenthal, recent studies suggest the Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16 to 39-year-olds getting a license. No one seems to bother to get drivers license. Many prefer to walk or take public transportation. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Does this mean we care? I hope so.\n\nIn conclusion, the way I see it is that people dont care. Someone is trying to fix the problems while other make the problem even worse. Its like you're trying to fix you car and the next day someone destroys your car for no reason at all. Yes, some people are helping but it not enough. With your help we can help stop air pollution. Limiting car usage will definently help, because the fewer cars there are the faster we can reduce greenhouse gas. Its not the same when you have millions of vehicles in the city than when you have hundreds of them. So less car will help. We need you to join now. And dont forget to inform others what going on the world. That way we can have more people joining the fight to stop greenhouse gas.",
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"content": "Nowadays social work has become more popular in society especially in a generation -Z. a plethora of commentators are of the view that voluntary work is essential for social well-being. I strongly agree with this due to the fact this benefits both youngsters and the community.\r\n\r\nGenerally speaking, human is one of the greatest creatures who are social. In our society, there are a lot of varieties of people live. There are a number who get privileges, some are not. In that situation, teenagers play an essential role for build up a better community. For example, Young pupils can teach the lesson to non-privileged uneducated people. It should boost up country’s literacy rate.On the other hand, the young generation can do some social works in their leisure period voluntarily like they should help farmers grow crops, clean the house premises where they live. The most vital thing they should help the society to tree plantation.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, in recent times drug addiction is oneof a the rising danger in the community. Most of the teens become targeted for addiction to drugs.But keep themselves busy as much as possible civil charity works, bad habits will not be formed in them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with this topic for two reasons. This is due to the fact adolescents are able to learn vital skills such as communication and communal structures, and enhance school learnings, and the community is animated by them. on the ,contrary teenagers may choose to task for free and help others, but in my opinion, we should not make this compulsory.",
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"content": "The new technology available all people but there are difference connect of condition as like the rich and the poor. In my opinions, the range of technology is different, so if we take new model telephone, last version can buy only the rich people, but the poor people too have telephone but with less memory and without any function.\r\n\r\nIn the other hand, firstly there are new technology buy the rich people for example if Iphone is advertising new version all people who have many tenge go and harryup nuy new telephone. Secondly when rich womanon TV see new technology in kinchen as like gase store, in fact they want buy this things. Thirdly, children of rich people stdying of school on lesson they see new model of watch their schoolchildren, actually they ask their parents to buy that watch. \r\n\r\nThe other hand, we can notice the porr people don't buy an expensive things. Firstly, all situation connect with money. Any factors influence that condition, some poor peoples have problem with health and they don't work. For example, if they have problem with eyes in fact don't change work place. Secondly, now I knew some famaliyes have problem with elder parents or yanger children have problem.\r\n\r\nIn conclution, the new technology available to people all condition all connect of mind condition.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph Saeng failed test It takes time hibiscus bud It sound like good end plus would want take test snow",
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"content": "It is undeniable that the presence of spacious public areas, including squares and parks, holds great significance for every urban area. In this essay, I will express my agreement with the claim that all towns and cities should prioritise the provision of ample public spaces for their social, environmental and cultural benefits, leading to a better quality of life for residents and fostering a sense of community.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the establishment of large public spaces promotes social interaction and strengthens community bonds within towns and cities. These areas serve as meeting points for people from diverse backgrounds, allowing them to engage in various activities together. For instance, parks provide a conducive environment for recreational activities, such as picnics, sports, and group exercises, where individuals can interact, socialise, and form lasting connections. Moreover, spares often serve as venues for community events, fostering a sense of togetherness and unity among residents.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the presence of public spaces contributes to the preservation and enhancement of the environment. Parks and squares act as green lungs within urban landscapes, providing areas for vegetation to thrive and improving air quality. Additionally, these spaces mitigate the heat island effect by reducing the ambient temperature and serving as natural cooling systems, thus creating more pleasant microclimates for both residents and visitors.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, large public areas play a crucial role in preserving a city’s cultural heritage and identity. Squares often serve as historical landmarks, showcasing architectural masterpieces and monuments that represent a city’s rich history. Parks can also be designed to reflect the local culture and traditions through the incorporation of indigenous plants, sculptures, or artworks. By preserving and showcasing cultural elements, public spaces contribute to a city’s unique identity and attract tourists, thereby boosting the local economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I firmly agree that making room for public places is of great importance for cities and towns because they foster social interaction, enhance environmental sustainability, and preserve cultural heritage. Therefore, it is essential for urban areas to allocate adequate resources and planning to create and maintain such public spaces, ultimately improving the quality of life for residents and visitors alike.",
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"content": "It is generally said that the behavior with adults as well as youngsters should be similar regarding committing crimes. While, adults commit the crimes intentionally, but for youth it is unintentionally so,I personally believe that the level of punishment should not be similar.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, youngsters are getting involved in a plethora of criminal activities that are somewhere due to watching criminal scenes like TV dramas,crime petrol, and so on; therefore, criminal scenes impact to their mind and stimulate them for such kind of activities. Secondly, adults do crime for getting a revenge from their friends or some other persons that is performed with full attention, moreover, they involved the other persons to act the crime.\r\n\r\nIn other words, these days the act of crime has become popular and passionate among adolescents, they participate in unusual activities and commenting to their nearby youth just for the sake of provoking them, so these things accagerate and leads to criminality perform for example, students in school has more conflictions and provoking that somewhere deterious for them\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I pen down by saying that either both are involved in crime but it's the duty of government that they should keep the youngsters in seperate jail where they can learn something and make their mind not to perform criminal activities.",
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"content": "Throughout process construction Empire State Building contractors faced couple obstacles quest dock dirigibles First safety huge factor quest When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated areas downtown New York baloon dirigible may appearance two completely structured differently Helium causes balloon rise dirigible uses hydrogen fly highly flamable Secondly already law put effect air trafficking could get close enough tie forceful winds Fearing wind would blow dirigibles onto sharp spires buildings area would puncture shell If dirigible ever get punctured could collaps streets New York causing mass destruction Thus concluding many obstacles way landing dirigibles Empire State Building",
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"content": "Once upon time boy name Hawell right secretary state patient walked took number got paper woman At front desk started got counting slow hes getting angry And time its theres front leave go get secretary card person front lady behind desk opened call greeted took picture got licence ends",
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"content": "Having the facial action coding system computer in a class is a good idea and valuable. One reason it is because you can tell how someone is feeling and how you cna help. another reason is because you can tell if the students learning or not. Last reason is it can brighten up the day to make someelse happy who is feeling sad or not. I think it is useful and who do good in a class room.\n\nJust by telling if someone is down or not can really help alot with this computer. If you a teacher you can help your students be great. Having a bad morning can ruin your whole day. not even sleep can and being hungry can also if the teacher can see these things in there students it can make there jobs much easier. To help them not be sad or mad so they can clear there mind and learn .\n\nThis can aslo help for the kids to. They can get help if something is really wrong with them. if there sad or mad or if something going on at home if there not safe and etc. They can also tell there classmates mood. this can prevent things from happening such as fights and agurements ,conflict with anyone. becase everyone know how each other is feeling that day.\n\nThis computer can relly help without. it can help with kids who wanna grow up and create them computers who does that type of technology. maybe if one school get it and try it new schools would to and it can be in every school. maybe just not schools wanna try it , it can be for doctors to. it can be for everyone just to try out and figure each other out and be helpful.\n\nin conclusion this computer the facial action coding system would be very helpful in a claaroom. For kids and adults, it can prevent things from happeing i. this computer can help other kids how needs help. and can see if kids are learning anything. and you can just see how everyone is feeling. so yess i think thr facial coding system is valuable for classrooms.",
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"content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents many positive and negative aspects of the driverless cars. The driverless cars display many preventative safety elements, while the cars also show a numerous amount of issues. The following paragraphs will dicuss the negative and positive aspects of driverless vehicles.\n\nThe text discusses the safety of the vehicles a numerous amount of times. The article reads, \"GM has developed a driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" The driverless car promotes safety. It is wanting the driver to avoid wrecks and damage to their vehicle. The driverless car will decrease numerous amount of wrecks caused by senseless acts while driving. \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" also discusses the postive trait of a decrease in fuel use. According to the text, \"the cars he forsees would use half of a decrease in the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" The decrease in fuel use could save families hundreds of dollars spent on fuel each year.\n\nThe article informs readers that the vehicles are not completely driverless. The text states, \"in fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" The cars are able to do nearly everything for you, but you will still need to be paying attention. Many people will take the cars for granted and will not pay attention when you are in difficult situations. One mistake in the car and the driver can injure many people.\n\nThe article discusses the issue people may encounter when getting into a car crash. An example from the text includes, \"still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" The issue of not knowing who to blame can cause many issue in the disciplinary field. If the crash becomes expensive or injures others, the court of law would be challenged deciding who is at fault, which can affect the operator and the manufacturer of the car.\n\nThe text, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" presents positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Although, there are many positives, negative consilations seem to rule over them. The driverless cars seem unreliable, expensive, and can cause many issues in the courtroom.\n\n\"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" displays a numerous amount of positive and negative aspects about driverless cars. The driverless cars can change the future world we live in.",
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"content": "Job interviews are commonly undertaken by companies of all sizes seeking candidates to fill a role. They often consist of dialogues between a Human Resources representative of these organisations and the professional interested in the position. During the conversation, the applicant's profile in terms of qualifications, skills and work experience is assessed against the criteria and employer’s expectations. However, some people argue this approach is insufficient for capturing the right employee. In my opinion, to ensure a more accurate hiring process, other methodologies should be explored along with interviews, such as group activities and personality quizzes.\n\n \n\nThe importance of interviews when it comes to selecting new individuals to integrate a team cannot be dinned. It has proved to be the most traditional and practical framework largely adopted worldwide. They can offer vital insights about an applicant and lead to more informed decisions. However, individuals often act like robots when being interviewed, answering questions in a way recruiters will be happy about. In this sense, other approaches should be introduced for a more holistic understanding of the candidate's capabilities.\n\n \n\nModern organisations are already introducing new techniques to choose4 the best matches for their teams. These contemporary assessments evaluate professionals during activities designed to capture the candidate's behaviour in complex situations where pressure and conflicts are common. In this case, applicants tend to express their real selves, values and logical thinking. The findings are often combined with the interview results in a profile-matching exercise.\n\n \n\nAnother way to further assess the job seekers' profiles is by assigning them personality quizzes. Quizzes are powerful tools that can be used to gather information about a professional’s strengths and weaknesses. In addition, these tests can detect which professionals can naturally act like mediators and which need to be led by others. Thus, they can assist in allocating workers to the right team and role.\n\n \n\nIn conclusion, interviews will always be important as they are still insightful, simple, and straightforward, demanding minimum resources to be executed. Nevertheless, when combined with other methodologies, the hiring process may become more precise and efficient. In this case, companies need to invest time and money to introduce these complementary approaches, which may make sense for some businesses and positions but not the majority.",
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"content": "In this article, the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, despite the seemingly impossible conditions of surviving on the planet. He/she supports this claim multiple times in the article, saying that,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This proclamation suggests that Venus was once like Earth before becoming so inhospitable, implying that scientists could understand a great deal about Venus's fate if it was studied. This understanding of Venus's transformation into the wasteland it is now would help scientists make predictions about the causes of Venus's destruction, allowing them to warn humanity to not make those same mistakes.\n\nThe last paragraph in the article states that, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavours.\" What the author is proclaiming here is that overcoming the obstacles associated with analyzing Venus is good practice if we want to achieve similar undertakings with Mars and possibly even planets that are even farther away, like Mercury and Jupiter.\n\nAnother point the author makes is that there are multiple ways to safely study Venus without risk. The first would be utilizing a blimp-like vehicle capable of floating 30 feet above the ground for extended periods of time, allowing the crew inside to bypass most of the hazardous ground conditions of Venus and analyze the surface. \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so mile above the roiling Venusian landscape...a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" Not only that, but NASA has been testing how silicon carbide electronics react to the simulated chaotic conditions of Venus's surface. NASA has proved that the electronics can survive for about 3 weeks under those conditions. With further testing and refinement, it's possible that more complex electronics could survive for up to a few months, allowing more time for further data extraction from Venus's surface. \"...some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"",
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"content": "Dear state senator, I think that we should change to start voting by popular vote because it will be easier for the voters and is a more realistic way of voting.\n\nWhen voting and following the rules of the electoral college, many voters get confused. As is says in source 2, many voters vote for the wrong person. They also don't always get controll over who they vote for. Say they voted for one canidate to be their state senator, well with that one person comes many people that have \"pledged\" themselves to that canidate. They would be voting for the canidate and these many people that have pledged themselves to him and they don't even know it.\n\nAlso as they say in source 2, the election of 2000 was a huge mishap in presidential election history. In states like Louisiana, they had people replace democratic electors so that the popular vote that would've went to one of the canidates, didn't actually go through. Although the electoral college is good for getting exact numbers and helps solve disputes( source 3)it is an uruly and untrustworthy way of voting and should not be used anymore. Voters are easily confused when voting and many do not follow up on what is happening during election time. I think that a better way to votee would be to vote more often and give the electors another chance to be relected so that after a few months if voters changed their mind then they could reelect someone else.\n\nPopular vote is a much better idea not only becuase it is more realistic, but because it is easier to understand. Even some of our presidents like Richard Nixon and Bob Dole have thought that this was the way to go. Not only do they believe this, but they lost their presidency votes becuase of the electoral college. I think that they are just trying to scam voters and pick someone that would be best for them, not for our country. I think that by using the electoral college method, they are cheating into picking the winners, but if we used popular vote, this wouldnt happen.\n\nThank you for your time.",
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"content": "As I read article also called memoir I nt much find certain mood author created This memoir indeed heart warming touching though inspirational It teaches least taught dream something Narciso s parents likely dream coming america raise family accomplished little hope hard work If I say mood author created I would say happiness The reason Narciso rich sense money rich sense love happiness family cultures For example article said parents talent cooking passed Narciso grateful Another example filled joy happiness family neighbors spent life living around",
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"content": "The setting main affect cyclist He said hot lost The cyclist clue going hot side He seemed strest made worse He thirsty riding heat trys get water water pump The water horable He called substance flavor battery acid If lost cool outside would water would upset The setting hot lost place huge impact cyclist",
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"content": "Venus, sometimes called the \"evening star\"is one of the bightest points of light in the night sky.\n\nBut, the nickname is misleading because Venus is actually a planet.\n\nVenus is a challenge place to examine closely.\n\nVenus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus could potential have life forms, can be the nearest option for a planetary visit, and people can gain others things from it not only information.\n\nVenus could be the nearest option for a planetary visit if something happened to Earth.\n\nThe article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" it states,\"recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long frames of space travel\"(4).\n\nThis shows that if reseachers find a way to visit Venus without trouble, it can change the world.\n\nThis ties in with the thesis by doing this could be dangers,but it can open the world by new ways.\n\nAlso this shows that if something could have happened to Earth, people could go to Venus.\n\nPeople can gain other things from going to Venus not only information.\n\nThe article states, \"striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself\"(8).\n\nThis shows that we could gain other things not only just the planet itself.\n\nThis also shows that the dangers of getting this information is going to be hard, but in the long run it will be worth it.\n\nVenus could have life forms and feature if we don't go and discover it.\n\nThe article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" states, \"could have supported various forms of life\"(4).\n\nThis shows that Venus could have support life if we explore it and find out.\n\nThis ties in with the thesis by even if the dangers are big it will be worth it if Venus could support life. This also shows that if Venus has life forms we could potential could make it in the long run.\n\nVenus could have potential of having life forms, can be a closest option for a planetary visit, people can gain information these all are a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus is a challenging path but it shows promising stuff.\n\nIf the risk factors are great, we will find a way to get there.",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered about the Face? The one so talked about, movies and books were made about it? In the late 90's, there was a picture taken of a rather human like landform. But get this\n\n-\n\nit wasn't on Earth! The discussion of whether the landform was alien made or a common Cydonia Martian mesa was huge, and is still fret over today. But lets get real, the possibility of the landform being alien made is surreal - with our advanced technology today, we would know!\n\nAbout twenty-five years ago, an interesting picture was found with one of NASA's spacecrafts, Viking 1. From the region Cydonia of the 'Red Planet', Viking 1 had taken a picture of a large face that stretched almost two miles wide. The landform became better known as the Face. When the picture was released to public, it was a big deal. Scientists had begun to figure it was just another Martian mesa that just happened to have unusual shadows. In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", paragraph two even states this. These shadows caused many people to assume it looked similiar to some kind of Egyptian Pharaoh. The general public, although amazed by the coincedence it had been, couldn't have ignored the sayings of a scientist, especially when all the facts come into play with the logical explanation - not aliens!\n\nEven with the scienctists saying what was undeniably the truth, people demanded proof. Few scientists believed the chance of the Face being put there by exterestrial beings, but getting images became one of NASA's priorities. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia to take ten times sharper images of the Face. In the paragraph seven, you could find that thousands of people were waiting, waiting for an image that may decide what exactly the Face had been. After the image had been taking, not everybody was happy. This resulted in many suggestions as to why there was no proof of aliens having made the Face. It was winter and hazy. Reading through paragraph eight of the article, you can also find many of the excuses used to try and find proof of aliens exsistence.\n\nWith many complaints under their belts, Mars Global Surveyor went for another go. This time on a cloudless summer day. On Apri 8, 2001, they were sent in for another look at the Face. The images, taken again, did not show any proof of aliens. To many conspiracy lovers dismay, the images were rather like Earth Landforms. Instead of alien markings, they found that the Face is equivalent to butte or mesa. Even common to landforms in the American West. In paragraphs ten, eleven, and twelve, you can read through the precautions taken to find even clearer images of the Face, though nothing had changed. Without any other evidence to go off of, what could the theorists say?\n\nOthers, such as conspiracy theorists, say that NASA has found evidence of the other life forms. They may be right, stating things such as this. But they also say that NASA is withholding this information. While that may be a good idea for other people, NASA's budget says otherwise. With the information of alien exsistence out, their funds could go up a rather lot. Would it be a good idea to hold this information to the public? Especially when it will not only be informing the people, but also helping NASA discover more about our universe.\n\nAs stated the possibility of us not coming across alien lifeforms with todays technology is unlikely. With all the precautions they took to prove (or in this cause, disprove) alien exsistence, it is highly unprobable that we missed them. With the scientist, looking over the images twice, and then checking them, the answer is in lockdown. And even if we were, sharing the information is in almost everyone's best interest. If it had been aliens, we surely would have known, wouldn't we? Unless, of course, the aliens could were invisible. How about you tell THAT to the conspiracy theorist?",
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"content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System is valuable to students in a classroom.The system can be really beneficial. For example, in paragraph six it says, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts.\" Most people may suggest that the system might be false or that there is no way to read emotions with tehnology but there is a way. In paragraph three it states that the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, using all 44 major muscles in the face.\n\nThere is different technology used to ensure that the outcome emotion is correct. For example, video imagery tracks the facial movements and each expression is compared to a neutral face. In paragraph three it says Psychologists, Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS, has classified six basic emotions: happiness,surprise,anger,disgust, fear, and sadness. It can be helpful when trying to see if students are actually learning or are just staring at the words, not retaining anything. Dr. Huang predicts that if the system can recognize if you are bored or confused then it will be able to modify lessons to make the student interested again. Therefore, making a better leaning experience for the students.\n\nIn conclusion the FACS is beneficial and valuable to students in classrooms. By using video imagery the system can track the facial expressions could determine whether a student is confused or bored.",
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"content": "Dear Senator\n\nI have been burdened with the fact that our nation's president is not decided by us but rather by a slate of electors who we vote for. I sincerely feel this is unfair to the people of the U.S.There are many reasons to be against this its hard to choose, but I'll give you my three best ones. The slate of electors could change their political views, the decision for our president is not decided by us instead by other people and their views ,but most of all its unfair to most states because the candidates only worry about the swing states.\n\nTo begin with the slate of electors we choose could change their political views. In the world we live in nothing is certain so if we choose a slate of electors whats stoping them from changeing their view on politics. This problem makes it harder to choose a slate of electors because you are putting your trust in them to represent you, and they can change their views. However if the people got to decide their views would be represented by themselves so at least they know their vote counts and it wont be changed. This also takes away the worry of their vote changeing because they themselves voted. And this in the end will give you the president that most people need. So this is one potent reason to abolish the electoral college.\n\nMoreover the president being decided by thers and their views is another significant reason to end the electoral college. This country was made to be a nation made by the people,for the people,and by the people.\n\nSo if our vote is decided by others that aspect is destroyed. Also if there is a tie in the electoral college the house of representatives decides who is president. The decision will be made by the house of representatives views on politics so you are giving them more power than the people. So the electoral college should be destroyed and the people should decide the outcome. This will let the voice of the people to be heard.\n\nLast but not least most states wont ever even see the candidates because they mainly focus on the swing sates. This means that most states wont see the candidates. And if the electoral college is abolished people wont feel left out and they will know that their vote mattered. This will make people feel like their still part of the nation and that their not left out. Also the candidates foccusing on the swing states truly isn't fair to the states with little votes in the college. And that is why the electoral college should be destroyed. And then after this is done the non swing states will feel important.\n\nTo conclude I sincerely feel the electoral is unfair to the people of the U.S. There are many reasons to be against this it was hard to choose, but I gave you my three best ones. The slate of electors could change their political views, the decision for our president is not decided by us instead by other people and their views ,but most of all its unfair to most states because the candidates only worry about the swing states.",
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"content": "To concern The idea censoring books music movies anything else libraries public eye offensive There many things could come offensive individual Taking books anything shelf someone felt go certain morals beliefs writer s freedom speech It also start serious issues feuding religious groups persons different ideas This also shows library far country one certain idea ideas conflict oppressed One biggest concerns freedom speech taken away It something trivial CAPS s people keep taking books shelf find something wrong freedom taken away CAPS s brought mother actually gotten certain book CAPS s taken shelf child gotten scared halloween edition The fact something could banned something trivial frightening thought There nt many cases specific scene scaring kids need get banned When someone finds something even tad wrong want banned thrown away never allowed shown even find interest A big thing conflict censorship idea religion The published work whether religious Who s say ca nt banned What someone different religion found highly offensive This could cause even conflicts religious parties turn anything religious would banned together That small faint line state religion going get blurred solely censorship If works catholics get banned could published works wiccans muslims buddhists sources religion There would nothing religious spiritual person find comfort Not mention fear publishers authors publishing works It become topic far less talked would afraid getting legal social trouble expressing thoughts feelings spirituality religion This censorship cause future issues This could lead religious books banned anything strays social norms If someone homophobic start gay author s works banned book community banned That small sense security community books taken away Personally I find comfort sense alone dulled books There even possibility books necessarily books hold someone pit depression close It world someone loves enter hide confide To take someone s mental safety worse taking physical safety Most people realize sort trouble start censorship It mean nothing decide whether censor something think picture large Do lose customers keeping shelf Or lose customers stop giving rights freedom speech It heavy decision make decision could make break publishing group legal party",
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"content": "This article show us many emotions that each person have, and how our face expressed emotions by any situation. Also explain the most common emotions that each person used more, they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. One example of this article is the art of Leonardo da Vinci's \"Mona Lisa\" that explain the Mona Lisa have many emotions this is comproved by a software that show the Mona Lisa has some differents emotions. Scientifics of the University os Illinois. They are working in collaboration with another scientifics and anothers Universitys about if we can calculate emotions and all this process begin about muscles. Movement of body and movement of all the muscles this means that we are sad or happy or actually fear we can note or show to someone else. IN this article the example the how we can calculate our emotions is about the face's muscles if you are suprised the most common movement is raises your eyebrows or a smile when you are happy or also tightens your lips when you are angry. We have a lot of expresions that helps us how we feel or how exprese our emotions. This is important because we should know each person it is different and show how many people expresed their emotions by differents ways.",
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"content": "The setting affects cyclist lot windy would cyclist control bike So lot buildings people outside would lot traffic would allowed let cyclist go cyclist would turn back Then clear road nobody ad bulidings houses wold easy ride cyclist So see setting affects cyclist many ways",
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"content": "In the year 1976, when Viking 1 space craft was taking photographs of possiable landing spots for Viking 2 spacecraft, they found a formation in a rock that looked like a human face. The shadows made the rock look like it had a nose, mouth, and two eyes, like a human. This was found in a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. The \"Head\" was nearly two miles from end to end, and it seemed to be starring back at the cameras.\n\nThe controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab were probably quite surprised when this face popped up on their screens, looking them right in the eyes. This sensation was short lived. Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, which was common around Cydonia. The only difference with this one is it had unusal shadows that made it seem like an Egyptian Pharaoh. A few days later NASA unveiled the image for the public eye to see. The caption on this picture was \"Huge rock formation... which resembles a human head.... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose and a mouth.\" NASA'S reasoning was that the picture would help engage public attraction to Mars.\n\nThis public picture was soon a pop icon. It starred in Hollywood films, was in books, magazines, talk shows on the radio, and even haunted grogery store checkout lines for over 25 years. Some people think that this picture is evidence of life on Mars. Conspiracy theorist say that this is information NASA would rather hide. Defenders of the NASA budget wish that there was life on Mars, as this would make NASA more popular, and even richer, when people use the picture in books, movies, magazines, and more.\n\nAlthough most scientist believed the face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority to NASA, when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. Jim Garvin, cheif scientist, said that they felt like it was a right of taxpayers to see photographs of the face as soon as possiable. On April 5, 1998, Michael Malin snapped a photograph ten times sharper then the old one. This became popular with web surfers, as they were waiting for the first photo to show up on a JPL website. Only this picture showed what they were not wanting, a natural landform. This was not an alien momument after all.\n\nWhile most people were satisfied, others were not. They still think that NASA is still hiding evidence of an alien momument. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. The camera on board MGS had to peer though whispy clouds to see it. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden behind clouds on purpose, so that humans would not be able to see them. Mission controls planned to take another photograph of it. It is not easy work, and it is not easy to target Cydonia. They just do not pass the face very often.\n\nNevertheless, on April 8, 2001, a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, MGS drew close enough for a second veiw. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view.\n\nThey used the cameras highest resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans at 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Vikings photo.\"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size. So if there were objects on the ground such as airplanes or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could have seen what they were\" Said Jim Garvin.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, which are landforms that are common around the American West. \"It reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho\" Says Garvin. \"Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height of the Face on Mars.\" He added. So weather or not theFace is an alien landform or a rock formation, NASA does wish it was an alien landform, just to bring pupiclatiy to the Red Planet. However, it is highly imposable for it to be an alien momument, as they would have to have oxygen to survive,and they would have to find plenty of food and water to also survive.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens. The passage states that NASA's Mars Global Survey spaceraft revealed the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa. Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Gobal Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, eigteen long years after the Vikings missions ended.\n\nIn the passage, it says that on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing. . . a natural landform. There were no alien monument after all.\n\nThe pasage also states that not every one was satisfied. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien marking were hidden by haze. Therfore, researchers sent the spacecraft back to Cydonia, on a coudless day, and took more pictures of the Face. Malin's team captured extraordinary photos using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. What the picture actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. Proving that the Face was not created by aliens.",
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"content": "a time in the futur where no one needs to buy cars because there will be a fleet of driverless cars is not a safe futur. In paragraph nine the article says \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Making a driverless car removes the alert driver wright out of the eqation. And a car without an alert driver isnt a safe car, at least not in law makers eyes.\n\nIn states like California, Nevada, Florida, and the district of columbia it is illegal to test computer driven cars. The rest of america should follow suit though the article says, \" manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" For the time being there not safe enough. though there are constant development being made to the driverless car. There are still to many hole in the ideal to make a safe apperance on the road.\n\none of the advancements is that the cars have \"Traffic Jam Asstancet.\" the article say they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" If the driverless car cant handle a workzone or accident. Then it diffinitly can't handle roads with wondering children and dogs.\n\ndrivers get distracted while driving there self driven cars. they couldn't handle a driverless one.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper people lot computer help us planet Like letting us dive cars stuff Learninging easyer every one computers Then comunications people computers We hate box information glad something like home Why nt needin us cars sometimes computer Like people desided busniss us computer make one Then nt want waste time driveing buy teshirt go computer buy one Next drive polution git atmisphier If computers planet get pulluted Each year Now want happen world Last wont wasting gas cars using computers If computer taken away people still choose lasy way drive cars Learning easyer every one computers like nt look book find something Then different learning programs teach us different language Like lots people college people Last help us homework I realy second brain Now lot Third communication going hole lot computers Say dont send lot The computer help allow talk talk people like japaness know english life You ask people question Or fun play mind game people I got alot chating old friend I miss way I talk parents yelling bacause phone bill high The greater go computer make us know nt many stuff Like polute air Then learn fast without book Last alow us talk old friend every one beleve computer bad",
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"content": "A time I patient I little brothers two cousins This going take lot patience One day I got phone call aunt She said needed sitter two year old seven year old cousins said would pay I would So I said sure I hut n I I getting A couple days mom CAPS turned piclity good",
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"content": "Over decades, there has been a belief that adults should support adolescents to work in a company or travel to another country at least one year before going to university. Despite the fact that there are many positive aspects of having experiences in terms of working and travelling before studying at university, with a careful consideration, there are also negative points of this.\nIt is true that working or travelling before starting a university program positively affects juveniles’ development. A classic example of this is an effective way to truly understand their academic preferences. When juveniles have work experiences, such as having a one-year internship in a company, they tend to learn a wide variety of work functions, helping them know the academic discipline they want to learn at university. Another benefit from taking a long journey to another place before studying at university is the opportunity to get exposed to new culture. This is because while adolescents are on an epic expedition to other parts of the world, they tend to meet new people with different nationality and belief, leading to valuable life experiences that they cannot receive from a professor at university.\nIn spite of the aforementioned advantages of working or travelling before starting university courses, there are also drawbacks. A common example of this is graduating from a college late, compared to juveniles who immediately start a university program after they finish high school. This is exemplified by Thai culture which believes that young people who graduate from university later than their peer would not have a successful career path. In addition, opponents of this notion might argue that working before finishing university is not well worth doing. Since most works require a strong academic foundation in order for juveniles to deliver results with fewer mistakes, the juveniles should study at university instead.\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that having work experiences or taking a journey before starting a university life has many benefits for young people with respect to knowing the academic fields they want to study and learning new cultures outside a classroom. Nevertheless, doing this could also have drawbacks in terms of the delay in university graduation and an ineffective performance in working.",
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"content": "Even though driverless cars are coming in the near future and have alot of postive and nagative aspects in my opinion I support the devlopement for driverless cars. To convey why Driverless cars are a good thing is becasue is can save alot of time and fossil fuel and is a lot more convient. For instance when the author states that, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and far more flexibity than a bus. This line states how driveless cars can change the world for better and are going to be more aparant then riding the bus.\n\nSome more interesting facts about the smart cars that makes me more support it is when the passage talks about the Driving and the Assisting. For instance author talks about how,\"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" \"The can handle driving functions at the speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch senseors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" I think this is a good thing becasue it makes driving more alot more safe for the driver, but at the same time does not sacrifice the drivers control of the car and it will alert you if you need to take control of the car, which I think is very important so there won't be any accidents.\n\nTo argue why would you need a driverless car if you can just drive yourself is an very improtant question. Driverless Cars can be helpful and can maybe even save your life if you come across some reckless driver on the road. For example when passage states how, Some manufactures hope to do that by bringing in-car entertiainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned of instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not avabilable to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" This line describes how the driverless Cars have many safety features and can be automatical turned off just in case of emergencys, which makes it even more convenient and alot safer for the driver.\n\nTo summerize my argument on selfdriving cars is that I think it's going to be a huge advancement for humanity and will improve our lifestyles for the better. The features in the passage that describes these smart cars such as the heads up dsiplay, which is entiretantment system and information system which, can be turn off automaticaly in case of emergencys. Also the Antilock brake and driver assitance, which can save a lot of lives.\n\nThese safety features are going to make driverless cars a sucess. Driverless cars are going to be aparent part for the future and will imporve the way we drive and our action as well and save many lives.",
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"content": "The electoral college is how presidents get elected. But when people vote for president they do not dierectly vote. The electoral collge does not work and is irrational. It does not help anyone and can cause a candidate to lose the presidential election. It just does not work anymore.\n\nThe ellectoral college does not work. \"The Indefensible Electoral Collge: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are worng\" By Bradford Plumer says \" The single best argument against the elctoral college is what we might call the disastor factor\". They are talking about how Al gore got the popular vote yet George bush won. This is a prime example how the electoral college doesnt work. The voters were cheated into there win. This just shows how unfair it is. \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are worng\" By Bradford Plumer says \"Can voters control whom their electors voe for? Not always.\"\n\nThis basically says it is possible for u to have no input in what u vote for. If your vote does not count then why should u vote. The system doesnt work and needs to be tossed. The whole point of americas goverment is that your voice matters but apparently the electral collge is free from the rule.\n\nThe electoral college is out of date acorrding to the article. \"In defense of the electoral collge : Five reasons to keep our despised method of chhosing the presidant\", says \" The elctoral College is widley regradred as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a presidant out to be [Overruled} by declatring the candidate who recives the most popular votes the winner\". This article speaks the truth. Being a democratic like america the people rule and if this method is not democractic then off with it. It does not benifit us and will do more harm then good. \"In defense of the electoral collge : Five reasons to keep our despised method of chhosing the presidant\", says\" The electoral collge avoids the problem of elections in which no candidte recieves a mojority of the votes cast.\" But that should be the reason one is elected. If they are most popular than why do they not get the vote. If they did the best campainge they should get the victory.\n\nThe electoral college is old and illogical. It is tired and needs to be replaced. AMerica is a new country and americans like new things. Change may not all ways be fun but it may be right. WHy should americans go through this hell anymore. Elctions are you as an individual trying to get the one who you approve into office. This is wjhy the electoral college is old and needs to retire. For america.",
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"content": "The face is just a natural landform because of the environment. You can't just look at an unusual figure then automatically assume that it's something totally different without even observing the details around that object. Few scientists believe the 'face' was an alien artifact, though it was just a mesa.\n\nIt takes a lot of time and money for the correct equipment to take in and to judge whether or not this is a face. People have taken many missions and explorations to Mars snapping photographs as soon as they could get a good shot of it.\n\nIn today's generation people have a better chance to prove somebody wrong or right by getting evidence. Luckily technology is more advance and accessible, so the evidence will be more clear and approving to your target. Though it's very hard to spot your target in outerspace, the Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine. The Mars Global Surveyor was close enough to get another view. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the firld of view. They captured a photo using the camera's maximum resolution. The picture was better than the phone that was taken 30 years in the past. The picture was actually shown to be the Martian equivalent of a mesa.",
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"content": "In this competitive world, educational institutes designs their curriculum to cover broad range of subjects and try to teach the ones which are not related to specific stream such as an art. According to a few, this can be beneficial to students while others believe that it is waste of time. In my opinion, along with main subjects, learning an art will be an added advantage. \r\n\r\nThough science and commerce subjects are being considered more important, an art plays vital role in person's education. In bygone days only main stream curriculum were the top choices for leaners while in this contemporary world artistic subject plays an equal important role because learning them in parallel can cultivate an interest and young ones can explore thier potential as a second career. To illustrate, an engineering student who learnt graphics design is now able to create non fungible tokens for their artworks and sell them in cryptocurrency market. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people thinks that teaching non main stream subject can not be helpful because person will never implement that learning in their professional career hence that will be a time wasting. For example, teaching sanskrit language to a sceince student could not aid in their post study life; instead that time can be efficiently utilised for other scientific study. Hence, more they focus on related subject matter, better they excel in their path.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, learning an art subject during schooling might require an additional effort but it may lead to explore other opportunities for students hence there is no harm in getting an additional knowledge.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in this challenging time, teaching all subjects can be treaky, especially including art in main curricula. While some people think that it would not serve any purpose, according to others it could be competitive advantage to pupils and so do I opine the same.",
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"content": "The author details supports it's idea on the suggests of studying venus is a worthy pursuite the dangers it presents. In this passage called the challenge of exporing the venus .\n\nvenus is getting referred as earths \"Twinn\" over time humans have been sending numerouse spacecrafts to land on the cloud-draped world where no spacecraft is able to survied the landing for no more the a few hours . There a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxdie blankets venus in our solar system. But did you kniw the avergae temperature is over 800 degrees one hot planet. Did you also know that farenneit and the atmosheric pressure is also 90 times greater that what humans experience on our own planet . Notable venus has the hottest sureface temperatue or any planet in our whole solar systam. They say that the weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probe seeking to land on its sureface. Wow our planet is so inhospitble it includes valleys and mountains and craters . so instand od sending spacecraft out they used a computer that was made in the 1800 cause that computer that does not require using electroics this computer goes off on of calculations by using gears and levers modern computer are enormously powerful , flexible and quick to extreme physical conditions . Humans will likely lead us into many equally intimdating endeavors . to where it should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and invaion to the challenge of exploring venus.",
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"content": "A time in the future where no one buys cars because they don't need them is a contradicition waiting to occur. As people believe that driverless cars would change the world for the good, I believe that it would bring more damage. If we can't control the damage on the roads now, what makes companies think that we can control the roads or cars to become smarter? By creating automatic cars we are causing humans to lack any skills and adding even more laziness to the population of people.\n\nThe required age for a teenager to get his/her permit is fifteen and a half if they take drivers educaiton, making them capable of getting their license at sixteen. If we make driverless cars we are telling young teens that they don thave to make an effort to work for what they want. The ability to drive is a privel age not a given. Would any parent want to send their child out into a world of driving with no experince and let them go anywehre they want? The answer should be no, the parent wouldn't have the knowledge of what exactly a driverless car is capable of, why would the teen? This leads to responsibility.\n\nResponsibilty means that one is trustworthy enough to know what they are doing. Driverless cars are an advantage to many people in the wrong way, we want to prevent the amount of crashes that occur with drunk or reckless dirvers. Are they really even being punished? In today's world drunk driver's are being easily spotted, this is not only saving the lives og others but the driver as well. With driverless cars we are telling these people that it is okay for them to drink and \"drive\" without actually driving. We aren't taking into consideration that they still need to be aware if they have to take over the car or not.\n\nIn my personal opinion driverless cars are not a good idea because they could shut down at any minute and could malfunction. They wouldn't bring anything more than the damage we have now, which is why we should stick to manual driving.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are going to be part of our future. It's almost for certain. they can cut down on fuel consumption and can form a global taxi system so you don't have to own your own car. It seems as if driverless cars or, \"smart cars\", are the next big thing. With lots of testing and developement im sure they could be. They are very helpful benefactors when it comes to helping world issues like, people without a from of transportation other than there feet, or gas guzzling cars that use way to much fuel. think about it, if you wanted to take your family on a road trip and your behind the wheel getting pretty sleepy. All you want to do is lie back and catch a little nap. With driverless cars, this is very possible. eventually developers are hoping to have a fully functiong driverless car that is ready for distribution. Granted the price tag will be rather high but with all of the really cool features you cant beat it. For instance wouldn't it be nice to sit in the drivers seat and just relax, rather than having to focus on the road and be stressed out through endless arrays of traffic and other people with road rage? Of course it would be nice, because anyone who has that oppurtunity to just ease back and let the computer take the wheel, would most likely capitalize on that oppurtunity. However driver assiting cars are also very helpful. they are helpful for the same reasons driverless cars are. They just cant do certain road manuevers, such as, pulling into driveways or changing lanes or passing. But they can get you where you need to go. Just the same as a driverless car can. Nevertheless these cars are going to be very beneficial to future travelers of the road because eventually there won't even need to be a steering wheel in a car, all you would have to do is hop in and say your destiniation and then it will take you there. Obviously tech like this has yet to be developed, however this is far from impossible, and is very likely to come about in the future. With all of this being said I think driverless cars are an excellent idea for the future of traveling. Not only do they help with fuel consumption, they can also help with decreasing drunk driving, driving while tired, speeding and, wreckless driving. These can all be cut down significantly by driverless cars.Thus making my conclussion of, Driverless cars are the future of road travel.",
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"content": "It should be valuable in classromms because it could help teacher, principle , or even school security. It could help techer figure out if they turn in home work or do not know the lessen because now most children don't want to speak up for a question and teacher would not know if they are telling the truth when asking a student if they know the lessen becasue most students would say yes. In paragraph six explain how it would be used\n\n\" A computer would recognise when a student is becoming confused or bored\". Then the teacher would give the student assistance. It could help a principle like in finding out who did what like when someone gets in trouble and then there is lots of witness and no one speaks up then they would use the device but not only that would be the case we could figure out people who bully others and put a stop to it. It could even help a school security in the way of finding out crimes in school like recently there have been school shootings and if school security or teacher or even principle use that technology around every week we could probably prevent school shooting before it even happens . Counsler could use it to help and understand students better like in depression.",
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"content": "My positions on driverless cars is that I am for driverless cars that still have the driver in the car and fully alert on whats going on while driving on the road. Having a driverless car means that a computer is driving for you that does not make mistakes sence it was programmed to drive to a certain destination and follow a particullar path and guide lines on the road.The driver must be in the car to have this function work of course. This is good to have the driver in the car because the driver still can take control over the car while the car is in auto drive mode if the driver is needed to saftely guide through the obsticles there may be such as construction or fallen debris on the ground. Having driverless cars can cause less car accedents in the future because the car is keeping the driver in check and also kepping a safe distance from other vehicles around it. In the near future of having driverless cars there would be better improvements on technology that can be updated more frequintly and bugs that the drive assist mode may have can also be properly fixed if needed so. So in conclusion I am for driverless cars to help people and keep the comunity safe.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the way of the future.\n\nAs all things do, they have their pros as well as their cons.\n\nThe driverless car could potentially put taxi services out of business, however, put new jobs out there for mechanics or service people for these cars.\n\nThe driverless car would eliminate the dread of long drives to far distance places as well as save in fuel economy.\n\nPeople will see driverless cars in a decade or less and this is why.\n\nA driverless car is optimal for more reasons than not.\n\nIt gets rid of dreaded cars rides and makes crashes much less often.\n\nA computer can comprehend things much quicker than a human can and therefore, could prevent a crash by simply realizing another car is headed towards it before a human could even recognize danger. A huge thing on these cars is the safety.\n\nThe cars themselves are not 100 percent driverless as they need people to ocassionaly take the wheel in tough spot situations like a crash or up and down driveways.\n\nA person could be watching something entertaining and the car could instantly turn it off when they need to take the wheel.\n\nAs stated in the text, a cellphone could not do this.\n\nAnother pinpoint on safety could allow the car to watch the driver to make sure he or she or paying attention to the road in need for the driver to take over.\n\nThis would prevent a driver from falling asleep at the wheel or simply not paying attention to the road.\n\nThe only major thing preventing these cars from getting in the hands of people is the law.\n\nMost states do not allow self-driving cars to be driven legally on roads.\n\nBut soon, other states will legalize this when the cars become more reliable and safe.\n\nThe driverless car will start a new era in the world of technology.\n\nPeople will begin to realize that the human race has come a very long way.\n\nThe cars themselves are\n\nvery safe as Tesla has said, but the people don't have their trust in them yet.\n\nWhen the people believe that the cars are reliable, they will become legal in all states and everyone will be able to get their hands on one.\n\nThe people have the power to say that the cars are safe by simply saying that they are.\n\nIf everyone agrees they are okay, then they are.\n\nIn 2020, drivers will become skilled workers and the common man will not drive.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempted allow dirigibles dock One obstacle builders faced harsh winds The Empire State Building tall winds fast would constantly change direction due violent air currents This made hard dock Dirigibles Also another obstacle pedestrians buildings around Most ballons filled hydrogen highly flammable If dirigible got caught fire crashed lot damage would done city people The structure building also proved obstacle The dirigibles large buildings structure danger failing destroying building The final obstacle building faced law made illegal ship ever tie building even fly low urban area Although attempts Empire State Building never able dirigibles dock",
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"content": "It is widely believed that one solution to address some environmental issues would be for the governments to raise the prices for petrol. Although I consider that this might be an effective measure, I contend that other measures have more considerably profound effects \nOn the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why raising the fuel prices is beneficial in addressing some environmental issues. Firstly, in terms of private cars, when national authorities raise taxes on petrol, motorists will have to limit the time and length of their journey to compensate for the extra expenses . Therefore, governments will then be forced to upgrade and expand their public transport provision, as people still need to go to the office, school or other medical health services. Secondly, from the perspective of the freight services, more goods will be transported by rail rather than by trucks. As a result, both these measures will therefore cut down on emissions stemming from vehicles and alleviate the greenhouse effect. \nOn the other hand, while this rise in fuel prices might be an appropriate measure, governments can adopt other transport policies which may be more valuable in the long term. For instance, the local authorities in London have announced a congestion charge on all vehicles visiting the city centre. Thus, they can be use that money to subsidize some health awareness campaign or to expand the transport infrastructure. In turn, this may improve the air quality in the city and the establishment of closer link with a general decline in exhaust fumes, stemming from cars around the city. Another policy will be to establish some free bus and train routes, as the increased use of public transport will reduce pollution from private cars and help in the effort to combat global warming\n\n\nIn conclusion, a sharp rise in petrol prices would be a useful environmentally friendly transport measure, although in the long term other steps would be more effective.",
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"content": "Electoral voting is a voting system that is trash. No one likes it, its not fair for the people to have somone else (The Electors) vote for them. How do we have freedom of speech if were not the one's who are voting? Electoral votes are not what we need if we the people what a good president. The majority of the popular vote in the united states should determine who sits in the\n\nWhite House .\n\nAbolishing the Electoral College is the best thing the the United States could do. Under the Electoral Cololege system, we the voters (people) vote not for our president but for a slate of electors that hopefully elect the president you want. We can not controll who the elects vote for, plus we somtimes dont know the electors we are voting for. If the people of the state of Florida wants to have a Republican president but the elector wants a Democratic president then most likely thats who he is going to vote for is the Democratic candidate.\n\nThe popular vote is fair and is more likely to get sucessful persidents that people will like. It's like \"\n\nAmerican Idole\n\n\" you have to perform good, you have to sound good, and u have to be sucessful. You have to get two out of the three judges to say yes in order for you to go to Hollywood. Same thing with the popular vote system, u have to get two-thirds of the popular vote in order to be persident. It's alot better than to worry about who your elector is going to vote for, all they care about (sadly) is the money. We look beyond the money and look at things like: Food, Education, Gas, Roads, Highways, Trade, Money,etc...\n\nLets make a differnce as a country and not let people do things for us because thats takeing our freedom away. Lets get rid of the dumb electoral system and lets use the popular vote becasue thats when your voice is herd and your vote counts.",
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"content": "I think the use for this technology is a good idea cause you can get a understanding of how students feel. This technology could be used in a lot of different ways. I feel like this technology should be valuable in on students in a classroom. They stated that \"the facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often showing varying degrees of expression\"A classroom computer could recoginze when a student is becoming confused or bored.\n\nThis technology should indeed be used more offen cause theres so much you could use it for. With this type of technology we could figure out a lot about one or more people. The more we use it the more we will know about it and other people and we can use that informion to find different emotional expressions and we can make this techonology even better. That is why i think we should use this technology more in are class rooms or even are work space.",
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"content": "One day little boy named He really hungry mom slow cooker She would take forever get done cooking starving getting real unpatient mother went outside play friends He came back home wishing dinner ready He went kitchen said mom dinner ready CAPS right now said mom It wont ready another hour thinking dinner ready went go play video game It space ship game The space ship shooting space ships survive got bored went kitchen see dinner ready His mom wasnt finish patient mom finish less five minutes",
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"content": "Their are many reasons to join the seagoing program. You get to travel the world and see many\n\nsights\n\nand go to places you'v never been. You would travel the ocean to other countries and see diffrent styles of life. You would get to see ans those are some of the many types of places you would get to go. You would get to see the whole world the good part of the world and the bad part of the world.\n\nLukes claim states that it was an oportunity to be a sea going cowboy and great to be able to go to places like\n\nEourpe, China, New Orleans, Luke got to vist greece and venice italy these are some of the things you get to do by becoming a seagoing cowboy. luke i quate said But seeing the Acropolis in greece was special,'' Being a seagoing cowboy has it's ups and ans those are some of the many types of places you would get to go. You would get to see the whole world the good part of the world and the bad part of the world. some off the bad part off the trip is that Luke almost fell off the boat in to the deep dark ocean.\n\nLuke had the longest year than any seagoing cowboy. He traveled for 9 years dilivering animal across the world. he saw many sight in his travels like the acropolis in greece. He whent all over the world saw many thing good and bad. Luke had lots off fun on his trips around the world, he did good thing for good people and their countrys.\n\nLuke was a good seagoing cowboy he was a seagoing cow boy for nine year's. That is the longest years in seagoing cowboy history. He\n\nliterarley made history. he was a great seagoing cowboy and he tried as hard a he could and did his job to perfection. If his friend didn't tell him him about the seagoing cowboy he would off never helped out his country and all the other countrys he helped out.\n\nWell i guess this is the end about our good friend Luke.Luke was the best seagoing cowboy there could ever be. He risked his life to help the other countrys after the war. He dileverd them cows and other animals so they could get food. He was a great seagoing cowboy luke was not that old whe n he was discharged in 1947. In conclousion Luke helped many people during his years as a seagoing cowboy",
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"content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nWhat's recently been rated the most despised way of voting? Electoral college. It's outdated,unfair,and irrational. If the people are really voting why is it up to eletoral college to decide. I think giving the people the power to vote is a great idea,but popular vote should really be the decider of who gets to be the president Popular vote can be changed though,we could make it a safer and more truthful way of voting. We can live in space for months,discover all sorts of life forms, and so much more. Yet we keep advancing,it's about time for some change in voting. I think electoral college should be aboished.\n\nThere's so many ways we could make popular vote work. Basically the citizens don't really vote,it's all up to senate. It's everyone else's opinion not really socitey's. Which i think is very unfair. Popular vote can be a good thing. It can be made safer. We can use technology,a camera in the voting booths to monitor cheating, and the upcoming electors have to be watched to make sure there is no cheating or voting fraud. Even though there shouldn't be voting fraud,we can prevent it. I'd like to say the people of the nation should be able to vote for their own president,not someone else who is probably paid off by the electors. Cheating will go down if popular vote is used instead of electoral college,the elector can't pay everyone in the U.S off. We need some type of change.\n\nElectoral college has been around since our founding fathers,it's even in the 23rd amendment. It's like a tradition but some thimes you find better traditions. I'm not saying you have to change everything about elections, i'm just saying you could use some little tweaks. Electoral college is a process, along with everything else in life. Most U.S citizenz don't even vote, they think their opinion doesn't matter. I think the U.S government should embody the U.S and their citizens, not just senate or electoral college. Electoral college had a good run now it's time to change. We need to take action. If our vote is overruled by senate why vote? Electoral vote is anachronism. It's the 21rst millenium let's make it the best yet.",
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"content": "With the advent of Internet, the usage of social media has increased largely over the last two decades, where it is seen as an opportunity to be updated with other people and the news events around us. However, in spite these benefits, there are few drawbacks of wide access of social media applications.\r\nThis essay explains why advantages of applications of social media outweigh the disadvantages.\r\n\r\nOne of the benefits provided by social media is that it is easily accessible. Not being able to communicate long distance has become obsolete. Nowadays, one can always stay in touch with a relative or a friend, be it from any part of the world just a click away. For instance, I can stay connected to my friend over any social media platform to do a combined study even when we are away from college. Another advantage is that browsing has become easier and indispensable part of daily routine. Intuitive modifications to applications has made it easier to browse online irrespective of age. For example, I can check for news updates or log into my social media accounts whenever I want.\r\n\r\nTurning towards drawbacks, individuals have become more socially active online than in real life. Interaction with the local community or the person sitting next to you has become an activity of the past. Moreover everything we see on the internet cannot be blindly trusted, including certain news and promising advertisements can be misleading. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although social websites play a pivotal role in our day to day lives, it certainly has its demerits. One should be able to authenticate the information available online before accepting the truth.",
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"content": "Artificial intelligence is believed to have its impact on the coming future. However, most jobs require human contact are unlikely to be done by robots, while, only few demanding less of intervention can be taken over by machines. This essay will discuss the reasons why only particular jobs will be replaced. \n\n\nRobots are indeed a great invention to support human effort, but there still are certain chores where, there can be no replacement. It is because, every individual needs his or her time, pace and flexibility to perform their activities, whereas, machines work in a set pattern and function in a structured manner. For example, automated door locks with finger punch systems have proved to be efficient but at the same time have given hard time opening doors during emergency. Hence, dependence on artificial intelligence is not practical.\n\n\nAlbeit, there are certain professions where the possibility and scope of automated robots is wider and can replace humans entirely. For instance, big manufacturing plants like Honda and other such units install robots to manufacture multiple number of cars and other vehicles in no time. Indeed with the help of robots, many complex and physically challenging tasks are being done already. However, multiple routine jobs and activities require the interference of man, without which, it will be difficult to even operate and command these automatic machineries.\n\n\nTo deduce, not all jobs can be carried out by the artificially intelligent machines. Most control will remain under man's hands and without the supervision of an individual nothing can be fully automated.",
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"content": "The Face? Created by Aliens or just a landmark?\n\nDid you beieve that the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was just created by aliens. NASA has given us many reasons to believe what they say, and not many reasons for us not believe them. I am a NASA researcher and I'm telling you why the \"Face\" is actually just a landmark.\n\nThere are many reasons why the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is a natural land form. The first reason is that NASA took three different pictures, one picture was in 1976 in the picture you can't really see anything. Scientists just thought it was another Matian mesa. At this time the cameras weren't very 3D like. So how do we know it's an actual face?\n\nThe seacond reason it is a landform is because NASA\n\nsent another crew to take more pictures of the \"face.\" The crew took ten pictures that were sharper than the first one in 1976. In this picture you start to see something appear. They even say \"when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. People were not very happy when they heard it wasn't a alien monument.\n\nAnother reason is that they thought alien markings were being hazed. So, when they went back it was a cloudless summer. In the text they say \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That is a huge difference from 1976. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa.\n\nIf you really think about it though, how come they jumped to conclusions so fast? In the passage it says it would be a good way to engage the public to Mars. Wouldn't it just attract more people to NASA to though?\n\nIn many ways there are more reasons to why this \"Face\" is more of a landmark than anything. From the different years they took the years, to the landmarks being hazed. You could probably think of a lot of questions to ask NASA about the photos and what the scientists are saying, but until you go up to Mars we will only know what they are telling us. Which is that the \"face\" is a mesa. They clearly say many times in the passage for people to believe that they are not trying to trick you.",
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"content": "To start off, changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States elections would be better to prove who wants who presidents and people be happy baout who they voted for.\n\nWould you like to have a president by popular vote or by the electoral collage choosing the preident. Im sure i would love to pick my own president. being an american is a privalage that most people in the world would die for, the land of brave and free. people come to asmerica to be able to be free. picking a president and voting is a privage. to be able to have popular vote is so that the american citizens can pick there own preisend by popular vote, not the electoral collage's vote. according to the article Al Gore, was runnoing for presidnt and got the most populare vote but not the most electoral votes. The majority of the citizens of the united states chose Al Gore as presient but the electoral collgae took that away.\n\nAccoring to the artical bob dole annoced that the electorial collage is unfair with these word; \"Its offical: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the aruments against direct elections are spuriours at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right; Abolish the electoral collage.\" in these words Bob dole explanes about the unfairness of the electoral collage. As stated before the electoral collage chooses the presidents not the american people.\n\nIn conclusion the electoral collage sholiuld be abolished",
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"content": "Today many people believe that the facts about the history of the building they live in are interesting. As far as I am concerned there are many reasons that somebody may be concerned about this issue one of which can be curiosity and the way that people can research these facts maybe by asking the neighbours or through city counselling offices.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons which can make history seem appealing to people one of which is the sense of adventure it may hold. In the past humans everywhere tended to look for exploration in different areas of their lives. This awakens a strong curiosity over the matters that can be hidden or are less obvious. On this occasion, the secrets of previous homeowners which you are purchasing or living in are an enigma and may interest anyone. Another reason might be the effect that some people may believe that the past of a place might have in mental ways which may be mostly presented by horror movies. For example, a simple joyful backstory seems to change the way people purchase properties for years in real estate businesses.\r\n\r\nBut how can people reach appropriate results while they are exploring is mostly based on the platforms that are trusted and supervised by the governments like the city council offices or other organizations. Local people also may be able to answer questions about the past of the building and also landlords who held the ownership for years.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, many people are driven by their sense of exploration into the background of their homes, this may be caused by their sense of curiosity or maybe the influence of media or movies, nonetheless, they can be led to the knowledge of the past by the city information centres that are supervised by the governments in any location.",
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"content": "In the artical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy puursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nVenus is called the \"Evening Star\" one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. However, this nickname is misleading because Venus is actually a planty. Venus is the second planet from our sun.\n\nPeople referred that Venus and Earth are twin because Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, also the closest in distant too. Earth,Venus,and Mars are the planetary neighbor, orbiting the sun at different speed.\n\nVenus has a little trouble for a visite, here's why. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These condition can cause Earth to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\n\nLong ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. But it's not too dangerous to land on Venus\n\nbecause human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.",
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"content": "Teamwork has become a valuable virtue in many countries to the point that they try to bring up children with this skill. There is an argument that doing sports in a team is the best way for children to acquire that at school and I mostly agree with this idea.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it seems to me that there are also other ways for children to learn teamwork other than team sports. They can get tasks such as cleaning their class as a team or playing some games. For example, grouping students by their teacher and playing pantomime is a way to learn that thinking together is more beneficial. Another way is taking a group examination. In this way, each student should answer just one question but everyone will get the same score. Therefore, all of them will be panelised if even one pupil cannot answer correctly. Consequently, they will all study together for the next exam.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I almost agree that learning cooperation through team sports may be the best way for children. They will find out that the smallest disharmony would result in losing the game. For instance, if a defender passes the ball to a player from the other team, they may receive an irrecoverable goal and lose the game. Therefore, the importance of teamwork and harmony will be revealed to them. Cooperation in a team sport also simulates a workplace atmosphere for them when they should work with their colleagues to achieve their goals.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are many ways to teach children to cooperate, I approximately agree that participating in team sports at school is the best way not only for their childhood but also for their adult life.",
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"content": "Humans have not visited all of the planets in the galaxy. All most humans know is Earth and according to science life on Earth is the only life out in the entire galaxy. But what if we could go to Venus and observe further life? Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers according to it's simliarities to Earth, Safety vehicles being developed, the technology is possible.\n\nFirstly, Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit becuase of it's similarities to Earth. It has been observed that Venus has a lot of Physical features similar to Earth. \"Often referred as Earth's 'twin', Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" (2) One can see that Venus and Earth are almost identical. It is a necesity to be able to explore Venus because if Venus and Earth look alike, who is to say they are not? Astronomers are curious to find out what more is similar and different about Venus and Earth. Secondly, Venus has a lot of geographical land features that look similar to earth. \"Long ago, Venus was probabably the covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" (4) It is blatant that Venus is of intrest becuase of the fact that it could have life living on it. People are curious if Earth and Venus are actual identical in many more ways, and if Venus does have humans living on the planet.\n\nSecondly, Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because it can be done safely. with vehicles. Vehicles can be used to observe Venus in a way that is avoiding the ground. \"...a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. \" (5) Clearly, the danger of Venus' can be surface avoided by the vehicles that are being developed. These vehicles can allow for people to observe and collect information about Venus in a fashion that is no way risky or a safety scare. The Vehicles can also help with the temperature. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" (5) It is shown that the vehicles allow for the trip to be safe and the degrees would be similar to Earth. Humans could comfortably gaze at Venus from abovr and collect information one would neeed to one day be able to explore Venus at a more intimite level.\n\nLastly, studying Venus would be a worth pursuit becuase of the new technology. electronics are being tested and astronomers are seeing successes. \"...some simplified electronics made of cilicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" (7) One can observe that this technology will be able to greatly assist Venu's exploration if it can survive up to 3 weeks on the surface. Humans may not need to set foot on Venus and still obtain information they would've gathered if they were at that intimate level. Also, mechanical computers can be used in the exploration as well. \"...these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" (7) It is clear that these computers are able to make calculatiosn about Venus in an efficent way while still in space. This technology can be used to help with the exploration greatly, and do not require electronics as they are of the use of shifts and gears.\n\nIn conclusion, the exploration of Venus would be extremely worthy besides all the dangers. Venus' similarities to Earth open up the possiblitlies of life living on Venus. The Vehicles allow for the exploration to be safe for humna's breathing and physicality. And the technology allows for calculations and for on level explorations.",
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"content": "There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around online games, whether gaming has beneficial or adverse impacts on children’s maturing process. Many claim that computer games are detrimental to children’s health, while others regard this hi-tech entertainment as a way to facilitate children’s overall development. After consideration, I lean toward that video games can do harm to children.\r\n\r\nComputer games teach children oodles of great things and help them develop intellectual skills. While playing games, teens have to immerse themselves in a complex storyline in virtual worlds with ample challenges, which can trigger their imagination and curiosity as well as encourage them to enhance certain skills such as problem solving, logical thinking, and decision-making. With reflexes improved through these missions, children can more effectively demonstrate daily tasks. A salient example appears in a game that has players navigating mazes or strange jungles in a digital space may greatly improve their ability to navigate in their everyday surroundings.\r\n\r\nDespite this, it is undeniable that too much gaming can affect children’s both physical and mental health. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours trying to progress their levels, which can make them more prone to health problems such as obesity, back pain, eye strain, and sleep disorders. This type of addiction can affect children’s concentration and performance at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. Moreover, exposure to the extreme violence that is commonly found in video games can desensitize teens’ emotions and even lead to young people committing acts of violence.\r\n\r\nIn recapitulation, although people have every reason to support the benefit of playing games, it cannot disclaim the several potential dangers of video games to children’s health. Accordingly, I firmly support that playing games is a negative trend.",
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"content": "wat i think abou drivless cars, i dont think we should have them and i think we should beacause its not fun haven someone drive you around all the time and how much would we ahve tp pay but the eldery could ude this a advantge and there would be fewer recks less people off the road. but it would be dangerous wat if a storm comes wat would the google cares do keep driving or wat or when kids are getting offf abus would the cars stop and just last week a google car got in a wreck how safe are these cars really and thhey say they been around since 1950 so why are they getting in wreacks im a tenneanger and i dont want someone driving me around i want my own car so i can say i havee the best car .but why are they motion how can they ssee the whole road , it doessnt add up wat are traffic cops gonna due put people out of there jobs then peoplw wolund be out of a job\n\nand how would people pay for these the wealthy yeah but even the poor have cars and the pay taxis so who rally coul ddo it\n\nso i dont think we should have cars like that just for the eldery thats all we should have them for and no i dont want the eldery to just ride in them ethier but they have to have a way to get ouround and its hard for them but it is a sekf driving car so thtas my postive and negative",
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"content": "The author is using this article to suggest the idea of exploring and studying Venus. Venus is a very dangerous planet to study because a thick atmosphere cover the planet and it is the hottest planet in our solar system. However, the author still believe that studying Venus is going to beneficial despite the dangers. In the article, the author is suggesting that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because we can use a vehicle that can hover over the ground and it's the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nOne reason why the author suggest the idea of studying Venus is because NASA has an idea for sending humans to go over Venus and observe it closely. Even tho Venus is the hottest planet, NASA can use their technology to make it survivable for humans. \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\"(Paragraph 5) That way, the scientists can study Venus up close without touching the ground. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth... Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\"(Paragraph 5) The temperature would still be very hot but it will be survivable for humans.\n\nAnother reason why the author think it's worth the risk despite the dangers is because Venus is our sister planet. It is the planet we should study because Venus has alot of stuff in common with us. \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\"(Paragraph 4) Venus has alot of features that are familiar with Earth. It is critical that we study Venus because it might just be the planet we have the option of visiting. \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\"(Paragraph 4) We can also learn alot from Venus that can be beneficial to us.\n\nIn conclusion, the author used this article to suggest the idea of studying Venus, our sister planet. We have enough technology to study Venus closely while not touching their unfriendly ground. We also have alot in common with Venus so it's worth the risk of studying that planet, Earth can benefit from studying Venus and learning what to avoid.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph When came back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test emphasize overcome defeat failure waiting season come reendure Basically hibiscus plant meant much narrator mother dying dug hole help grow grows proves living better So Saeng relates test opportunity past test The story paragraph symbolizing new beginning take place This actually means situation came help get needed missed The story paragraph emphasizes life budling cycle",
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"content": "The original plan Empire State Building tallest building world feet Everything going well competition The Chrysler Building threatened steal title When Al Smith announced going mooring mast top Empire State Building obviously changed architects designs The architects desighned shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside steppedback desighn imitated overall shape building The rocketshaped mast would four wings corners would rise conical roof would house mooring arm Lsted Two months workers started new plan celebrated finished framing entire building The Empire State building destined never fulfill purpose reasons apparent ever constructed The greatest reason safety Lsted",
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"content": "Nowadays, people's interest in their homes' past is higher than ever before. There are various causes leading to this phenomenon as well as methods for the research process.\r\n\r\nThere are two possible reasons why more and more people are wanting to find out about their houses' history. One of the major causes of this is that a person's natural curiosity would make them wish to know more about their current accommodations. Moreover, when someone moves into a new residence, the desire to find out about its profile such as when it was built, who is its previous owner. Another reason is that house-owners look into the history of the place they are living in possibly in hope of feeling a special connection. As such, they can feel more spiritually and emotionally safe indoors.\r\n\r\nIf people needed to know about the historical details of their homes, they can turn to several sources of information locally. Mainly, they can discuss with the senior citizens in the neighborhood, and get knowledge about the valuable experience that they spend old age. In addition, they can use reliable sources are published in libraries about those homeowners while going through with the building plans that are approved by the councils. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the main factors for the phenomenon can be explained by human nature and safety while people can know more about their houses' stories through local residents and libraries.",
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"content": "Cars are starting to get more and more unpopular, due to enviromental issues, people wanting to get excersise, money, gas, traffic is a problem, I mean there are varieties of reasons why cars are not as popular as they were a decade ago. These passages have included information of why cars are affecting our society, environment, and health, and why people are loving it. There's only one downside that I see to this and that is getting to your destination in a very short period of time. That's all I can see that is a problem. In this essay I will explain 2 advantages of limiting car usage with support of the articles.\n\nCars are really affecting our environment, and pollution is a big probelm with our global issues. Cars are exploding tons of diesel fuel and fumes to get into our air, and where does it all go? Well it just sticks around up in the air for us to breathe in, and for trees to die out. This isn't good this really puts an impact on humanity itself and animals. According to article in source 2, it says \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" That is bad, that shows you how much people are driving and affecting the air, first of all just the ammount of pollution that is put into this is crazy, Paris has to ban driving for so much time just to clean a little bit of air. Basically what that is saying is Paris had to do that becuase they knew something bad was gonna happen real fast, so it was smart for them to ban driving, less driving leads to a better environment, and a better environment leads to a better world to live in. That is one of the main things that we should really be opening our eyes about.\n\nEveryone wants to be somewhat healthy, when people get unhealthy they complain, moan, and whine. There's a solution to this, next time you want to go somewhere take a bike, walk, run. Get excerise we live in a nation of complete obesity, and it makes us look bad, America is a place where we need to show the world why we are the greatest nation, and health also plays a role in it. America is acting now becuase in 1 in paragraph 9 it states \"In the Unites States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car reduced communities\" it is already starting and it is a good thing to look forward too.\n\nThese 2 explanations of why we should play a role in helping our environment and our health are very important, so my advice to anyone would be, yes you can have a car but don't use it all the time, think about what your doing to yourself and this world when you drive all the time, especially when it's not needed. Just think next time you drive.",
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"content": "Many different people views want children exposed whether books movies music type media So libraries strict remove certain items might come across offensive vulgar parents even students I believe completely depends library advertises allow check I know certain case specific mother like reading specific series becasue thought appropriate reading material Because mean marched library demand get rid books written author She respected fact others enjoyed reading books asked steer clear find something appropriate read In many libraries I know certain areas specific age groups people like children teenagers adults Within specific designated areas kind subarea seperate educational entertainment Let s say one parent gets offended specific section sex education section ask library remove completely I think help anything students use topic areas studying parents use educational tools children I believe libraries put stamps notices different types media saying certain age group aloud look able check An eight year old able go get movie whenever want There restrictions areas like someone come say take movies ridiculous thing others enjoy type entertainment Libraries respect fact different types people different interests try make environment comfortable everyone possible They children s videos seperate adult videos even whole seperate section books discover journey The thing I believe libraries vulgar magazines videos A library still public family area child accidentily stumble upon raunchy article So libraries completely remove areas media I think I think distinguish adult s children s materials Katherine Paterson says But I right remove books shelf also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us If continue take books shelves eventually nothing read",
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"content": "To laughter shows importance life I always felt situation whether bad laughter completely change way people handle situations When comes relationship simply laughing help anyone Laughing symbolizes happiness important people relationship happy I many horrible situations laughing helped us work Laughing always changed mood helped situations When get worked little things forget things life begin lose patients happened lot A time happened boyfriend way seemed like everything trip going wrong We went vacation away hectic home life s ended wishing anywhere They booked hotel car broke credit card account help hours seemed trip biggest mistake ever made There much tension us could nt even look without getting fight We ended going cheap hotel spending cash The next morning things got bad room made us want lash kill He ended leaving day nt talk came back even got back together day still hard around The next morning woke time fed enough The thing mope around fight made us realize really stuck vacation could longer called vacation There one knew around loan us money banks realized dream vacation destination like nightmare We pretty much given lost faith actually CAPS vacation given We done wanted nothing nightmare anymore This nightmare ruined thought longer looked happy couple anymore two people completely despised The next day I decided call bank see going account turned forgot changed pin number access account The entire time kept entering wrong pin locked account sure someone trying break I could even describe dumb I felt I knew soon I came back news even though seemed like things would alright would nt When arrived back hotel I could feel tension soon I walked room I began packing stuff caught asked I going I replied luxury Instantly face lit asked I explained happened instantly began laughing hugged I knew soon saw smile face heard laughter things us would alright We finally money rent car get dream destination When arrived hotel things going great smiling laughing actually enjoying I honestly say even though horrible situations happened I enjoyed trip I strongly believe everything happens reason reason led us week full laughter true happiness",
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"content": "I believe laughter joy key elements bring families friends together Being able company make laugh greatly valued thing Sometimes sitting around telling old stories playing board games leave sore gut laughing hard Many people days become caught lives sometimes forget take moment laugh I feel sorry people missing joy enlightenment could sharing people around Family vacations always chaotic least family always turn memorable experience one way another Every winter family gets together goes stay cabin A long weekend full good food trips mountain snowball fights family games great environment spark laughter Every year bring big family games My family members I tend competitive people volume room game played tends escalate almost roof The whole house filled laughter funny arguments things like world picture sock That s fair know actual definition I enjoy times memories hold onto forever Laughter part happiness happiness needs part life Spending time make laugh worthy time Wiser people say life short I m starting realize statement true If life short time spent best way moments filled laughter",
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"content": "It is commonly believed that modern technological advancements are widening the gap between the upper class and the lower class. Others, however, believe the opposite. In my opinion, certain technological innovations are available to all people in the society and make contributions to bridging the wealth gap, nevertheless, certain innovations are inaccessible to poor because of their high cost.\n\nOn the one hand, some people think that certain innovation and discoveries play an integral role in filling the gap between different income levels. This is because they are accessible to all people among different social class due to their easy availability at cheaper rates. For instance, the internet technology is available to almost all sections of the society. It is affordable to all the people and certain places such as railway station, bus station and airport are wifi hotspots where the internet is freely available. Besides this, modern technologies have provided great opportunities for the poor to get rich. For example, the internet has already made many people become billionaire by setting their own commercial website. Compared to traditional industries, which require large initial investment and higher operational costs. Hence, the internet is much better and cheaper platform to make fortune for people from all social backgrounds.\n\nOn the other hand, many people argued that certain advancements in technology is not affordable for the poorer sections of the society. Modern medicines, for example, is expensive. Certain new drugs and diagnostic procedures are very costly. Certain affluent people who developed cancer took treatment with special kind of protein which was very expensive but had fewer side effects compared to conventional chemotherapy. Rich people can access these treatments by spending only a small amount of their income and improve their health. Poor people, on the other side, have to spend all of their money for conventional treatment and yet there is no guarantee of returning to a state of good health. \n\nTo conclude, although some claim that modern technology magnifies the gap between the rich and the poor, I strongly believe that it could narrow the difference between social classes.",
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"content": "Alot of people may think that the Face on Mars is just an alien artifact but , their are many things that point to that its just a natural landforms. The texture ,weather ,and all other factors that happpen on a planet to make\n\nup its features.\n\nPeople may think that the Face on Mars is a part of a one ancient alien civilization. Wich might be true but its a higher possibiity that it was just a rock. Mars is known to be a dust rocky planet . In fact they even have dust storms on mars. It very well coulfd have just been a dust storm and the dust uncovered a rock tht happen to look like a face.\n\nAlso the weather also could have had something to do with the Face on Mars. In paragraph 8 of the article the writer shows that the weathe on mars was not all that good. He says that it was cloudy and the camera had to get past wispy clouds. If you put this into factor this could have just as well tempered with the photo of the so called Face on Mars. They picture could have came out blurry so it might have looked like a face but couldnt see what it really was.\n\nThese are all factors that can lead to the Face on Mars not really being a face. At the end of the day its your opinion. But before you choose a side atleast look at the information and facts given to you.",
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"content": "In the recent years the state of the country has been a major issue. The enviornment is a growing concern and the econmic condition of the citizens is a pressing matter. One way the alliviate the stress on these factors is to limit car use. Doing so will help the enviornment by limiting greenshouse immisions, and not having a car all together or limiting car use will save money for those who are econmicly weak. Limited car use would alliviate all these problems.\n\nThe enviornment houses us along with everything that supplies us with the means to live. In recent years that has been under attack by pollution. Acording to Robert Duffer one of the major issues of Paris, France is the increasing smog and pollution that has decended upon the city. The level of pollution rivaled the most polluted cities in the world: Beijing China. In order to combat the smog French officals have placed a ban on drving, and for those that chose to disobey recived a fine. The smog then cleared up to allow the ruling French party to rescind the ban. This should be an example for highly poluted areas everywhere. Not only does this perserves the enviornment but it also takes the health and well being of citizens into account.\n\nThe limited use of cars would help those who are finacialy weak to strengthen themselves, because not having to use money to pay for the expenses of a car would leave you money to take care of other necessities. Elisabeth Rosenthal wrote that in some German suburbs there is 70% of the people residing there that do not have cars. And there is only a few places where they can be parked, and for the places that allow parked must be purchased for 40,000 dollars, along with a house. Just not having a car itself would be much more affordable! 57% of the people who live in that suburban area sold their cars to move there. As shown by Rosenthal's report, not having a car would prove to be more econmicaly sound and benifital especially to those who are struggling.\n\nThere are many advantages to the limiting of the usage of cars. For one thing it aids the enviornment by adding less pollutants into the air, which harm the enviornment and the people in it. Also people that use their cars less save money, which would benifit those whoa rent in the best possible econmic situation. Many say that limiting the use of acars would prevent many from going to work, school and other obligagtions, but there are other means of transportaion including bikes, buses, subways and monorails. Think of the disadvantages to excessive car use, high pollution, expensive expenses such as gasoline and maintence of the car. Limited car use would remove all these burdens.",
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"content": "The books libraries I read far dont seem like would offensive anyone I hav nt really listen music libraries watch movies magazines seem fine That doesnt mean nt offensive people I think take libraries I think someone found something like would probably put back go If took every book music movies magazines people thought offensive I bet alot would wouldnt fair people maybe want listen read watch would really mad found taken peoplr thought offensive Some people would probably understand could hurt someones feelings offensive people theres ones dont care I think taken really bad I would nt want little kids reading gettin feelings hurt anything bad I nt gone I nt think people would really care stayed If thiers ones really bad stayed libraries probably one would want come back libraries sooner later less less people would stop going So best thing probably take keep people keep going libraries alot people enjoy reading thats fun would really upset couldnt go something stupid",
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"content": "You would get a lot of different answers from a lot of peopleif you were to go up to sme and ask them on what they think about the driverless car. But if you were to go and ask me that question i would have to say that I don't think we need to really be focusing on that as much as we should for other thngs in this world, it isnt as safe and could be very dangerous, there isnt anything wrong with having others drive themsleves.\n\nFirst, I personally believe that there are more serious issues going on in this world that we should be focusing on more and putting more ofthe money twoards that then spending millions trying to get a car to drive by itself. A driverless car is not something we need to be worrying about when we can keep it easy and simple like it has been for many years and just have drivers driving the car.\n\nSecondly, it has yet to been passed by the law due to safety percautions. As of right now the driverless cars are not as safe as a car that has some one driving the vechile. So with that reason whhy there I dont feel like what the need is to try and create something when we are all doing fine and would be doing even better then the driverless car.\n\nLastly, why fix something if it isnt broken? i get that driverless cars could be helpful for some people at times but to solve that problem that's what taxi's are for. Everythng has been fine with having the people drive the car themselves. People will be more alert then the driverless car itself so it is just best to just keep it as the way it has been going and let the people drive the car themsleves because there isn't anything wrong with doong it like that.\n\nIn conclusion, if you were to want to hear my opionin on what I have to say about the driverless cars I would say I think they are neat and could be somethng big in the future to come. As of now though I think that there are bigger things going on in this world right now that we should be focusing on, they are not proven to be as safe then what it is with having someone driving the vechile. And there is not a big problem on having people drive the cars themsleves so there isnt a big need for a solution like this.",
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"content": "Computers topic ask Sure arnt good dos nt mean use correctly souce life Computers helpful many ways information post The social networks help kids get interactive world During school kids projects without computers Read I explain details Computers know one worlds greatest information posts ten people survayed said computers value everyday life The earthquake haiti recovalng half world wouldnt know computers heart dont take away valued info world Secondly would say I told kids socialy retarded ever Well true Over worlds people rely intractive websites comunicate Fact children friends internet ever You dont want ar know person kept kids living I dont think Lastly people school use computers projects instance horrible hand writing bigest project year So turned computer type gets But CAPS computer would gotten project In fact teachers wear tell kids type hwprojects says CAPS year kids pass class typing would flunk got point importantly To sumit lazy enough read story essay Computers used everyday needs finding information Makeing friends projects So gon na person sits back lets happen going get stop maddness Its choice think socity retarded dumb kids fail grade year",
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"content": "Dear I rencently started researching effects computers people found shocking facts I belive computers benefit society Three reasons I believe makes people lack exercising enjoying nature interacting friends rising problem major factor towards computers In fact statics people spend time exercising looking electronics day actully live longer lives So first reason computers benfit society lets people lack exercise People need exercise live computers becoming lacking ever Also exercise give interfines makes happy live life exercising instead watching violant things web lead less violant future My second reason computers cause lack enjoying nature Nature beautiful thing filled simmering lakes beautiful scent balsam fine thosands creatures With computers thoshands kids missing fresh air adventures nature store My parents nt computers little say enjoyed running around neighborhoods playing sports fun activities Finally computers lack interacting friends Remember little called friend hang sleepover well computers caused people call hang friends Instead email conversation without even looking person In closing computers cause lack exercise enjoying nature interacting friends Please help encourage others help put stop computers Thank time I hope learned shocking interesting facts letter",
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"content": "The author coNcludes story paragraph tryiNg say siNce hibiscus plaNted goiNg see winter ANd wheN spriNg arrives s still staNdiNg caN go take test I thiNk author compariNg hibiscus life aNd obstacles go hibiscus still staNdiNg theN meaNs everythiNg fiNe caN go back aNd take test",
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"content": "Do think inappropriate offensive books magazines movies music found public library Some books could offensive people take children younger siblings library nt want looking Others prefer looking would anger taken away Not parents find things libraries offensive even Having music magazines movies books nt appropriate children put different section taken away enjoy Even though children look something nt could bad s also bad unfair come library view things It nt taken away If parents nt want children seeing things nt take section Some adults nt enjoy seeing understandable No matter someone would nt happy decision In libraries usually adult section kids section If adult nt want child seeing something could simply take children s section wo nt seen In children s section s hard find things would considered offensive adults For adults teenagers enjoy viewing things could section far away children Taking things people like away someone wrong would mean take away enjoy Recently world turning something nt Some disgusting cruel things happen every day could probably find news library It s understandable would nt want child around I s wrong take away things people love stuff For example scary movies could disturbing violent young child could adults favorite thing watch Thats put offensive things different section kids would nt notice even If children put different section would nt even notice offensive things adults find Taking away things adults find offensive like taking away children s section unfair It would nt fair take away something adults teenagers come library Not adults would understand sides I see sides coming If I children I would nt want seeinig things offensive I would keep away instead promoting Having music magazines movies books nt appropriate children put different section taken away enjoy",
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"content": "In excerpt THE MOORING MAST Marcia Amidon Lsted many obstacles workers face allow Dirigibles dock top empire state building One many obstacles workers faced could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State building Also thousandfoot dirigibles moored top Empire State building A single cable tether held dirigible would add stress building s frame The biggest obstacle workers would face mooring mast top building winds shifting due vilent air currents Another obstacle dirigibles moored open field weighted back The problem dangling high pedestrians street Those obstacles workers faced",
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"content": "In my opinion, i do like the idea of the Facial Action Coding System and then i dont. Here are my reasons why i do.\n\nThe reason i do like it is because its a cool experiment. It reads emotions off of pictures. I could just put any picture of there and it would tell me how hes feeling. Like is he sad, mad , amazed? This experement is really cool. Like is said in paragraph 3 \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" They said that because when your reading an Ad and you smile, it will read all that.\n\nBut there is one reason why i dont like it. They said in the passage in paragragh 6 \" if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar add might follow. But if you frown the next ad will be different.\" This is pretty much saying someone is watching you through the little camera in the computer. They would be watching you if you are going to smile or frown to change your mind and if the kids found out about that, I think they would be scared and not want to try the program.\n\nMy final decision of this program is that its a good idea and that they should keep it. I think its cool that is knows when your smiling or frowning.",
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"content": "To concern To many people much fun become obsessed lose much loved My stand computers hurt peoples Money weight sleep My opinion opinion I stand strong I My father favorite financial deal With five kids one laptop would want happy With people sitting staring computer game day bills keep billing lose everything house family money ect But cares obsessed computer My favorite overweight problem Yeah I agree nice sit soft cushy chair computer bowls chips boxes pizza sooner later fatty food catch least expect get take jog run treadmill go walk Probably computer game running That wright keep coming ca nt even move Sitting really eyes brain muscles important bodyparts due lack sleep want I relate brother dis The gets home boom maybe oclock Eventually going get sick I m blame When sit computer eventually going make sick cases die late Now common teen love go computer one thing I sit watch movies play games every hour every day I get outside run I fall victim weight Financial body problems like people So nt waste life game chat room get something like sports get fresh air",
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"content": "Is competition instructive or toxic for children? There is a debate around this topic. There are those who believe that a sense of competition should be supported. On the other standpoint, there are those who believe that rather that compete children have to learn how to co-operate. I believe that supporters of competicions are partly right but also that co-operation between children is essential. The two strategy can be taken together to give to childrens all the tools they need to became useful adults.\nOn the one hand, there are people who believe that to compete is essential for the growth of children. They believe that competitions rise the ambitions of children. They develop certain attitudes thanks to which they will have always bigger dreams and desire. The idea, therefore, is that children who have grown making competiions will became important managers because of their instinctive desire to be winners and successful persons. It is true that competitions permit childrens to develop their ambitions and to do the best they can in order to win. However, I strongly believe that a good understanding of the aim of competitions should be taught before they start to compete. Indeed, children have to understand the instructive role of competition and how manage the possible distructive consequences that could derive if a child is not ready to lose. Children should start a competition being aware of the possibility of lose and the possibility to win. I believe that is important to stimulate children in doing competitions but teaching them the important role of defeats and the role of coperation. This lead me to analyse the second standpoint.\nThere are, indeed, people who dislike competitions at all. They believe they are toxic for the growth of children. According to them, it is negative to teach children to be against between each other. Rather, children should learn how to work together and co-operate. Surely, co-operation is a vital skill in workplaces. The ability to work in team is one of the most searched by different businesses. To learn how to work together means for children to understand their role in a group and also to think about the ideas that should support the team itself. Co-operation then permits children to develop fundamental social skills. However, co-operation alone is not enough for children's instruction. I believe that co-operation is possible just if a child is also learning how to work and produce something alone. Children, in order to advances ideas and give a good support in a team, have to learn to be ambitious and this is possible thanks to competitions.\nIn conclusion, I believe that an instruction in which single competitions as well as team-works are encouraged is the most useful and productive in order to grow up efficient adults.",
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"content": "The technology to read emotional expressions of students in a clssroom. If you want to know if your students are happy or feeling a type of way and you just don't know if something is wrong you should get the Facial Action Coding System. The Facial Action Coding System can see if you're happy, angry, and smiling.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System computer help you to figure out and tell you why you're happy by just showng your face to the computer. If you make a happy face doesn't that make you feel a little happy? The computer can tell if you forced to put on a happy face or if you're really happy. If you have a real smile and happy the zygomatic major(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. A false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\n\nWhen you're angry your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. The computer can tell when you're angry by when you just put a happy face on and try to be okay and not be mad. Your face cannot hide how you feel sometimes and show how you're feeling. You might want to hide in your face expressions and feeling angry and don't want to show it but the computer can tell.\n\nDo you ever just put on a fake smile and think that everything is okay? The Facial Action Coding System can tell when you're smiling and happy. When you smile in the computer didn't you want to be smiley and all happy? When you smile when a wed ad apprears on your screen a simiar ad might follow. But if you fown, the next ad will be different.\n\nIn conclusion I think the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify humans emotions is valuable because, it could tell when you're happy and sad and all the emotions you're having. The computers could help the teachers by if the students are confused or bored the teacher could fix that. I think that would help the teachers out a lot becuase if some kids are confused but don't want to rise their hands or ask question. The teacher already know that they're confused.The computer can tell if you're actually happy or if you're forcing a happy face. The Facial Action Coding System can see if you're happy, angry, and smiling.",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming\n\nImagine a world where you dont have to worry about how fast your driving weather you need to stop or need to continue driving you wont even need to steer.\n\nThis is all possible with self driven cars what are self driven cars you may ask well they're cars able to steer,accelerate,and brake themselves but all are designed to notifiy the driver when roadahead requires human skills. This sounds amazing and great thats why I sopport them. I will quickly explain to you some reasons why you would need your car to steer,accelerate and brake by themselves.\n\nFirst I will talk to you about the car self steering. Not only will it be easier on you but easier for people and police. How you may ask well have you been cut off or ever seen someoe who is swerving .I know I have and its really annoying and dangerous. With self steering it takes all human error away when it comes to that. This self steering car will still need a driver though. Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver you may ask? Its simple tha car drives itself till the driver is needed such as driving through accedents and through any danger ahead. As stated \"The google car announces when the driver should take over\" now on too cars being able to accelerate themselves.\n\nAs this sound dumb and maybe stupid it will actually help out our country by letting cars and manufacturers decide how fast everyone goes in a certain\n\nroadway. Why though you ask because one deadly murrderer that is leading our country is cars and the people driving them. Letting the cars programmers decide how fast we should be going to obey law would be great.It would reduce killings and make people feel safer. Now on to my final point cars being able to brake by themselves.\n\nThis idea backs up on ther car being able to manage its own speed. Cars being able to break byt hemselves would save so many lives. This idea works on the car being able to sense when the driver isnt taking control of the wheel and is coming on to somthing dangerous and being able to stop on a dime. Just imagine how close you were to running a red light or running over something that could hurt you. With this mechanic things like that would just not happen.\n\nSo finally these self drivin cars would not only help us but help or communitys to be safer and more efficient. They would make driven easier on us hopfully you see it my way and are looking foward to self driven cars.",
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"content": "As the development of industrialization, people use more and more machines in factories and farms. I believe there are more benefits rather than withdraws for human society.\r\n\r\nThere are lots of advantages to using the machine instead of using manual work. Firstly, it will be more effective and productive to use a machine to do the repeat work, especially in an urgent situation like making masks. The news said there were hundreds of mask-making machines taken on board by textile factories overnight to make masks to keep people safe from the Covid-19. Secondly, using machines will benefit people who own small businesses such as dairy farms, fresh organism vegetable delivery, and fresh juice factories. Owners can use the advanced machine to cultivate the seedlings or making lemon juice automatically instead of hiring many people to work for them. \r\n\r\nIt will be an optimistic circle for people to use machines profitably. For example, workers can be stimulated to learn how to manipulate and maintain the modern tech machines imported from another country like USA or China. Workers can be survived from the intense physical work, which may cost their health and safety. Instead, they can be trained as a skilled worker to manage the machines in the factories. Furthermore, people can use machines to do dangerous work in a severe environment, such as making gold in extremely high temperatures. They can less mistake than human bodies and reduce the human-made risks.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are more advantages and positive effects for people to use machines, which can develop human’s health, wealth, and well-being.",
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"content": "The reasoning concluding story way state season flowers held spring give author point heshe end story begin new one flowers come back spring inconclusion author ends story paragraph chose",
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"content": "It can be seen that AI and robots are getting more common because of the automatization of simple and low-quality labour which people have been doing for quite a long time. From my perspective, this trend has more benefits than drawbacks because monotonous and exhausting work is done by machines instead of people. Besides, it will spur individuals to develop new skills and as a result complete more advanced tasks and hence it will lead to a better quality of people’s life. The ideas will be discussed in the essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, machines have started substituting people in a variety of manual tasks which is definitely a positive tendency because employers do not need to do physically difficult work thanks to technology. For instance, sewers in India used to use exceptionally manual labour to sew clothes that caused harm to their eyesight whereas nowadays technology has helped them to automate the exhausting task and create more items per working day. Therefore, machines help make employees' work easier and hence it enables them to be more productive.\r\n\r\nMoreover, robotics and AI are highly likely to lead to the fact that quite a few vacancies such as drivers and cashiers will cease to exist. However, it will be a trigger for new professions with higher salaries to emerge where computer literacy and other marketable skills will be essential. For example, such job opportunities as moderators and you-tube bloggers are getting more popular on the market because they are getting more and more relevant. Thus, low-skilled jobs disappear and there is a demand for new professionals related to technology and robotics.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, replacing workers with robots is rather a positive trend because difficult jobs are done by machines. What is more, new working places appear due to technological advancement.",
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"content": "Libraries normally safe quiet place people go set drink cup coffee read bookmagazine search internet listen favorite music But people nt use They think time goof around disrespect people trying time selves children away bad day regroup get ready next day But ask selves people want set library read Why ca nt check book cd magazine take home Why people think big deal able check books magazines music movies library I nt see big deal Most counties public libarary That meaning accept anyone interested looking stuff Yes I see libraries making person checking book sign letter document giving personal information telephone number address credit card number The letter would saying much time book needed back certain date else need bring back get renewed ca nt accuse anyone stealing book want little bit longer Most places call late fees Normally someone late fee nt going get book back nt want pay I feel giving credit card number keep charging account get money way late fees Because answer phone call throw away letter recieve mail libabry trash I know school library always problems getting books back paying late fees This problem sometimes never ending process certain people nt care Yes internet would little diffrent everyone money get internet house I writing letter gripe annoying I trying tell ideas I keep library running junkey My ideas good ideas I feel like put Libraries good use around county",
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"content": "The humidity of the region impacts it in many ways. The climate faces several major issues such as snowfall, heavy rain, fog, and smog. The climate has been dominating the nation in many ways. People believe there are two major ways in which the community can be affected. Firstly, the group belong to the thought of its impact on daily routine. Secondly, it also leaves an impression on the economy. \r\n\r\nFor the first cluster of people, regular activities such as washing and drying clothes may highly be suffered from the conditions with snow and heavy precipitation. Moreover, this could also create problems with the availability of food items. In addition, individuals can also feel difficulty in travelling from one place to another. In addition, traffic disturbance could also be noted as a result of the worst climatic situations. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, the second school of thought is associated with the effect of a poor atmosphere on the economy of the country. Furthermore, the seasonal outcome of Gross Domestic Product is mapped to the availability of the livestock, the products for import and exports, and the travel business may slow down for a limited time period. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the major problem of climate change has seen a big impact on different avenues. Not only does it affects the living style but it could also be bad for the business and growth of the country. Both the groups are valid to some extent, for the first ,group the living standards are more valuable than the sustainability of the region. On the contrary, the second portion of individuals is focused towards the evolution of work and the currency of their country.",
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"content": "What is the Face on Mars? Is it an extraterrestrial being or form?\n\nThe Face on Mars is not something alien like, it is not an Egyptian Pharoah, and it is not anything other than a simple rock formation that was shaded as though to look like a face by coincidence. It is a landform. As a matter of fact, it is much like those you can find here on Earth, and it is normal as you and I.\n\nHow would finding an ancient civilization on Mars be something we would want to hide? It wouldn't! In fact, it would be amazing if we could discover something so wonderful. Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars (5). If we were able to find something so incredible as that, it would be very beneficial to the NASA program. There's absolutely no reason to hide something so intriguing and beneficial from anyone!\n\nNow, I see where the confusion may come in. When the first picture was captured back in 2001, it seriously resembled a human head! Sadly, the sensation of finding something new lasted only for a short period of time, because it was soon ruled to be just another rock formation, common enough around Cydonia (2). Shadows can do funny things, just like they did in this situation. For a short period of time they had us believing that perhaps there was something to be found on Mars! We went to Cydonia three times, and I promise you there is nothing out of this world about the Face on Mars.\n\nSo, you might be wondering what was found on those trips back to Mars. Well, let me tell you. On the second trip back to Mars to capture another picture of the Face, it was found that it was simply, like I said, a plain old rock formation (7) . Since some people were not satisfied with the photo, we went back to take another one on a clear day,using the camera's absolute maximum resulotion, and got the best picture taken of the Face (8). The picture proves that the Face is no more extraordinary than some of the landforms we have here on Earth.\n\nNow, I know there for a minute we really thought we had something. Too bad that after all the research was done, it turned out to be just another everyday kind of thing. I hope you realize now that the Face on Mars is simply a mesa, a rock formation, a land form, and that we have no reason to hide any discoveries or advances. Finding an ancient civilization would be wonderful. Maybe someday we will, but the Face on Mars is not it.",
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"content": "The Face on mars is a natural landform on mars and it wasn't made. The \"Face\" is just there and wasn't creted to shrine anyone or some kind of special species. The Face was a landform that doesn't just appear on Mars. The Face detail has also been seen in the American West by humans. There is a chance that this is just a natural landform.\n\nThe Face is a natural landform. According to the JPL Website, \"Revealing ... a\n\nnatural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" There is just a landform that happens to look similar to a face that someone revealed on Mars. There are still theories that people think that there are signs of a un-human like species living on Mars, but this landform was not created my aliens.\n\nAliens might have a chance of having a life of survival on Mars. But, that hasn't been proven. The Face on mars is natural and wasn't created.",
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"content": "I believe books banned books For example many good books banned little bit cussing I believe ok I mean nt like child would nt hear words maybe even worse turned But book talks certain things banned hate races talks negatively someones religion For example I read famous book called The This good book reason banned I could nt check I go get I nt understand wrong The banned This book talk mischevious youngster runs away alot differnt crazy activites even smokes worst exposed If I administrator I would look meaning behind book trying express For example book offensive one instance book written piece nt aloud shelve But book view slavery would ok Because book hate anything instance promoting isnt right But book view slavery part history shows differnt ways thinking time nt really know right wrong believed So point I trying express piece nt hate book maybe language events agree judge book message trying expressHopefully agree But book talks certain things banned hate races talks negatively someones religion I expressed opinion matter I hope agree maybe convince need take second look kind books keep shelves kind books take shelves",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nKeeping the electoral eollege method shouldn't be appropriate for electing the next president. In source two it says that when you use the electoral college system and you vote,not only do you vote not only for one person but other people pledged to that person. Now,I don't think it's the best idea to choose this method despite it being a more simple process but using the popular vote method sounds more fair,source two also says that someone won the popular vote but the electoral college prevented him from becoming the next president. The electoral college causes too much confusion,its unfair and it's caused more problems with voting.\n\nAlthough,using the elctoral college method is more simple,it can cause a lot of confusion. If you vote for one person then you automatically vote for the other people pledged to that person. Many people who have ran for persident have lost due to the electoral college method but they've won the popular vote. Its possible that when you are voting you don't know who else you're voting for.\n\nTo continue with,the electoral college method can be unfair because of the people who lost due to the system. Some people that ran for president won the popular vote but lost the electoral college vote. Others also lost because of the \"winner-take-all\" system,it awards every elector to the winning presidential candidate.\n\nThis method has caused problems with voting because of it being unfair. Some of the problems its caused was how others win automatically if the president they pledged to won the electoral college vote. This method of voting has to go.\n\nIn conclusion,the electoral college voting system shouldn't be used again in the future becasue of its confusion. It can have you voting for someone pledged to the preisdent that you didn't wan to vote for. It can also be unfair. Many people lost because of this method but won the popular vote. Last it's caused too much problems as a voting system in general.",
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"content": "It is often a debated topic that the government should spend revenue on constructing new structures such as museums or town forums rather than restoring the existing monuments. Although I agree that it is essential to protect constructions from the past, I also do not think spending on public buildings is a waste of money.\nThere are several reasons for spending a significant amount of budget on the restoration of historical buildings. First and foremost, they stand as a sentinel of time representing the worth of our ancestors. For example, pyramids of Eygpt are piles of mystery yet to be solved. Every time they explain something related to it, they are discovering unique attributes of our history. Every remain of them at present often represents our cultural heritage. Secondly, they can generate income as tourist sights as well as creating jobs. So many survey statistics have already proven it.\nHowever, it does not mean that the construction of new buildings should be neglected. To begin, it is not possible to protect all historical buildings, some of them are unrepairable and so should be demolished, so a better architecture can be built. Moreover, maintenance of new buildings is a lot easier when compared to their counterparts. On the long term, the government can solve a lot of money which can be used for the better good.\nTo sum up, there are clear benefits of ensuring a large amount of investment into these old buildings as they will influence our present generation. That said, I do not believe spending money on new edifices is a waste of money as this provides essential benefits as well.",
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"content": "Why should you become a Seagoing Cowboy? Well first let me tell you about a boy named Luke who was a Seagoing Cowboy. A Seagoing Cowboy is on this boat with other Seagoing Cowboys. To go help Europe where World War II just ended.\n\nThey were heading over to Europe because, many countries over there were ruined. So they were coming over to bring them food supplies, animals, and more. If you love to help, this would be something for you that you would enjoy. Luke traveled through the Atlantic occean and pacific. Trying to help these countries that were left in ruins. When Luke was on the boat he had a job to do. He had to feed the animals and keep them healthy. He also had to clean the animals and keep there stalls clean.\n\nWhen your a Seagoing Cowboy you have a big responsibility. You also have alot of jobs to take care of. Another job Luke had, was a night watchman. That job was to check on all the animals every hour. Then make his hourly report to the captain. A Seagoing Cowboy wasn't always working. When they unloaded the animals and were heading back there was an empty space. So sometimes the cowboys played games. Like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fincing, boxing, and more. Luke always enjoyed that part.\n\nSo this is what a Seagoing Cowboy is and what he does. If your someone who's willing to be on a boat for a long time and take care of animals and if you also love to help people. This job is perfect for you. While your on the boat you get to make new friends and explore unique places. It was just a big adevnture. Also if you love dealing with animals this is another good reason to become a Seagoing Cowboy. Take the information that I gave you. Luke loved being a Seagoing Cowboy and if you have the heart like Luke, this is the job for you.",
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"content": "I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it would be a opporturnity of a lifetime and it would be pretty cool.\n\nAnother reason that you should join it is because you would get to see places and cities. If I were to join it i think it would be cool and fun and an awsome opportunity. If you were to join it how would you feel about it would you think it would be a good opportunity.\n\nFirst, his point of view was to persuade and convince people to join the Seagoing Cowboys program because he went and he had fun and now he's trying to get people to join is because it is an opportunity of a lifetime. In the story it says,\"He was working part-times jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his freind Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat, Luke couldn't say no because he knew that it was an expeirience of a lifetime.\" He really wants to persuade people to join but not every body wants to join.\n\nFinally if you want to join it might be really fun if I got asked I wouldn want to go because i think it will be really fun but then that's just me. If you read this I hope it persuades you to join if you like it.",
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"content": "The Author uses paragraph Story shows Saeng wants adapt country allready beging understand like When and hibiscus budding I take test again It metaphor begins bloom Just starting bloom This Author endeded passage",
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"content": "Dear,\n\nRick Scott\n\nWe dont need another voting crisis over the small states, the representitives voting how they want to vote to suit their needs. Our voting system needs to be perfected, so we dont have any more tie elections of complications. The Electoral College system is very easy to get unballenced and played arround with to get the outcome that they so desire. As a country we should abolish the Electoral College system and vote baised of off popular vote.\n\nWhen the whole country votes for the president, in reality we are really voting for a groop of electors to do this job for us. In artical 2\" Under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" This is saying that the people really dont directly vote for the president and in that time anything can happen to the voting data. Another clame to help that piont is artical 2 \"conciter that state legislaturs are technically responcible for picking electors, and those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" The excerpt from article 2 is saying again that anything can happen to the data and it can be easily tampered with. In article 3 \" its the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential canidate you are acually voting for a stats of electors.\" Again this still says that we are not dirrectly voting and the people want that.\n\nThe \"winner takes all\" voting method is not really effective because if a little less than half of claforna votes democrat and a little more than half vote republican, should all 55 votes go to the republican canidate or should that percent go to the canidate? In article 1 \"Most states have a \"winner-take all\" system that awards all electors to the wining presidential canidate.\" This system is qutie unjustice and not equal to the rest of the states expesilly for the \"swing\" states.\n\nThis system of electorial college is not the most balenced of the systems that our nation can come up with. In article 2 \" The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\" This so called \"amazing\" system has manny defaults and those defaults will cause huge problems tor the rest of the nation. In article 3 \" A tie in the nation wide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes -538- is an even number.\" So ties in the national voting for the president can have a tie and is not that efficent in the way that we find who wins.\n\nThere are some bright sides to this style of voting. In article 1\" The founding fathers established it in the Constution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election.\" A compromise is good for our country and it was created a long time ago - might be older than dirt. Also in article 1\" The electors are generally chosen by the canidates politicle party.\" So atleast the people in whom the people are trusting to put their votes in is by someone that the head of the politicle party trusts.\n\nTo conclude the electoral colege system needs to be retired and the country needs to vote off of popular voting. The people need to represent them selves and not by some random person who could mess with the voting data to get who they want to win the election. Each state has to give up all of its votes to one side of the 2 parties. When their is a tie on who should be Americas next president, tell me how is the government going to handle a mass catastrophe?",
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"content": "One oddest things life people different ways things anything I see laughing There laugh nt really understand bosses joke laugh really nt right time one favorite laughing best friend crying Sitting train weeks ago I saw lady friend sobbing boyfriend recently broke Quietly turning shoulder I try hear story Her friend nodded comfort said something gross ate Sort like cow eating grass As soon friend said girls face blushed giggled laughter still eyes red sniffled little slow smile washed face The woman giggle laugh could tell girl going okay someone make laugh remember life guy I thought second happens think best friend I feel like even seven years gone never gets old bust laughing Most time s something stupid strangely thinking thing s times like lady s behind One us upset know perfect thing say Friendship like And laughter medicine problem After watching two woman I turn front seeing teenage boy girl The girl looks slightly nervous keeps smoothing skirt Then boy keeps shaking knee And tell s trying think something say keeps taking quick sips water bottle The girl finally pointed window said something girl would play soccer He looked pointing said thought maybe played baseball one time She nodded head got silent The train came s next stop jerking little making boy spill water pants The girl quickly pulled tissues purse giving boy His cheeks flushed red started chuckle explaining nervous nt going help The girl stared quickly started smile Then began look started laugh The boys laugh deep echoed across train girls contagious sweet Now ice broken one awkward moment talking laughing This start could maybe even young love I smiled rested head window Watching trees blur I knew world always talked melancholy I think people forget moments like It s brief seconds another human relating Making laugh caring enough try make feel better keeps world completely going insane The train slams starts slow comes stop I slouch bag shoulder get train As I step outside I feel cool air kiss cheeks I looked around see people hurry looking next bus person pick I sit bench watched teenage couple holding hands walk As smile talk everything suddenly goes dark I throw hands eyes connecting another big cold hands I snap around see person blinded It dad smiling ear ear I stood bench hugged I started laugh My laugh high pitched muffled dads coat This best type laugh No action funny friend saying something happy sometimes let little bit joy You laugh reason happy And second everything bad stressed goes away Maybe little awhile s still something could make whole day better",
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"content": "In the the challenge to explore venus people go there despite of the dangers of being there. In my opinion I think it is a good idea becouse they get to figure out what could be good to put on the air craft so that hey will be able to there safly and not have anyone left\n\nthere and be safe .By going there and researching what to do to they will get and advantage to knowing what would be good thing to look for parts so they are\n\ngoing venus they are able to fix stuff and know what\n\ncould be wrong with it by going there and the disavantage to going there are the many death and the amount of time they have of being there ;there is only 97 persent of carbon dioxide and the\n\ntemperature can get to 800 degrees an the atmossher is 90 degrees greater than the the we get in our country and it is one of the hottest planets in the solar system.",
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"content": "You should be a seagoing cowboy because it is an adventure because you, get to go to diffrent places.Another reason why you should be a seagoing cowboy is because you get to see diffrent people and diffrent countries.In the text it states that being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger.The text also states that the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling,and games also helped pass the time.That is why you should become a seagoing cowboy that rides the waves. The other reasons why you should be a seagoing cowboy is because you get to see new oceans.You also get to se other islands that you never seen before.Being a seagoing cowboy helps you get more aware of how other people need help to. The text states it made me more aware of people of other countries and his family to host a numbeer of international students and ,exchange visitors for many years. When you are a seagoing cowboy you get sail on a boat alote.The other reason why you should become a seagoing cowboy is because when you are a seagoing cowboy,you can make people lives better by helping them.Getting to be a seagoing cowboy helps you change it makes, you want to do better things for other people.The text states he knew it was an opportunity of a life time.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because \"Venus sometines called the \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest point of ligth in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. however, this nickname is misleading since Venus is Actually a planet. in our solar system, Venus is the second plantet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, is smiple to see from the challendging place to examine more closely.\"\n\nEach previous mission was unmammed, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few houre. Maybe tihs issue explains why not a single spaceship had touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numeruos factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging plante for humas to study, despite its proximity to us .\n\nA thick atmoshere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sufuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. on the plante's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\n\"Such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\"\n\nIn conclusion even though Venus is a dangers place there are still things we need to know about Venus.",
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"content": "Would people believe that Mona Lisa is actually very happy in the painting by Leonardo da Vinci? According to Prof. Huang and Prof. Sebe, the Facial Coding System can detect how people feel based on six basic emotions. These emotions include: happiness, sadness, anger, suprise, disgust and fear. Based on the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, readers can understand that this technology would be valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom since it can detect untruthful smiling, confusion and boredom.\n\nMost of the time, students can fake a smile at school, when really they are in need of help. With this new technology, classmates and teachers can assist students in need. In the passage it says \"But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius\"(8). New technolgy is valuable in all aspects. The Facial Action Coding System could enhance teachers' abilities to know when a student is in need of comfort or simply just needs somebody to talk to. Since students spend most of their time in school, it would be very vaulable to have technology that can detect when a student is not truly happy.\n\nStudents in classrooms sometimes lack interest in what they are learning, which eventually leads to the student being confused and bored. Teachers can also lack the knowledge of their confusion and go on with their lesson without realizing that a student does not fully comprehend what they are saying. In the passage it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\"(6). This new technology could increase the amount of information students actually take in and comprehend from a lesson. With the new technology created by Prof. Huang and Prof. Sebe, teachers can change their lesson to captivate students' attention and lead them out of a state of confusion.\n\nStudents looking for a way out of sadness, confusion and boredom, have found it with the Facial Action Coding System. After reading the article, readers can understand how valuable this technology would be in the classroom, to read the emotional expression of students. With the advanced technology that helps detect emotions, teachers and staff could understand their students better and could help those that need assistance. Students will not go on with their day expressing a fake smile, without being asked if they are okay or need help. Students will not sit through an entire lesson without this new technology detecting their boredom and confusion. With this new information, readers will see the impact that new technology can make and they'll believe that Mona Lisa is in fact, expressing a genuine smile.",
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"content": "Dear Rick Scott,\n\nControversial. This is the word that can describe the Electoral College in recent elections. The Electoral College is composed of 538 votes, a presidential candidate must acquire 270 to win the election. States with large populations get more electoral votes so say, Rhode Island. California gets 55 votes while the puny Rhode Island gets a whopping 3 votes. The Electoral College has been debated since the 2000 election, where Al Gore lost even though he got more popularity votes. Many folks believe the Electoral College should be abolished. I believe that the Electoral College should be kept in the presidential elections, because it shows a clear winner, it ensures it is, \"Everyone's President\", educated voters count in the swing states and it avoids Run-Off Elections.\n\nWithout the Electoral College, some elections may be hard to decide a true winner. No matter the situation, the Electoral College will determine a winner, if the popular vote and electoral vote become tied, (which is highly unlikely,) the vote will be taken to the senate. Each senator counts as one vote, so no longer do bi states matter. Also, the Electoral College ensures the presidential candidates have trans-regional appeal. It makes the votes count, the president chose is surely, \"Everyone's President,\" rather than a favorite in just northeastern states. Furthermore, swing states are tremendously important to the outcome of the election. States such as Florida, New York, Texas and California have dozens of votes combined, winning all four of those states pretty much means presidency. The swing states not only have more electoral votes because of population, but because of their voters. On average, there are more educated voters in the swing states, they actually stay up to date, watch the news and know the means of each candidate. The Electoral College also avoids the disaster of which no cadidate receives a majority of the votes cast. A good example of this is when Clinton had only 43% of the popular votes won, yet he got a whopping 370 electoral votes, which made him president. The pressure of having a run-off election is nearly vanished by the Electoral College. Although others say that the Electoral College should be abolished, because in that system, voters vote a slate of electors, not the president. Well tough , the Electoral College ensures a winner, and that is all that matters.\n\nThe Electoral College should, for sure, be kept in the Presidential Election system. It consists of 538 total votes, and 270 votes have to go to a candidate to pick a winner. Although the votes may tie up, which is nearly impossible, the Electoral College ensures another method to decide the presidency. The Electoral College produces a sure winner, \"Everyone's President,\" is elected, educated voters are in the swing states and it avoids the disaster of a Run-Off Election.\n\nFrom,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "There has been a heated controversy on whether high school students should be free to evaluate and criticise their educators. While some people think that disrespect and indiscipline are the unavoidable aftermath of this approach, I would contend it would result in increased educational quality.\n\n\nOn the one hand, there is a common belief that enabling students to judge teachers may undermine students’ sense of respect and discipline. High school students are generally immature, inexperienced and impulsive; they tend to lose their temper and overreact each time they are disciplined by the teachers. The problem is even worse when all the students see their peers criticising the teachers. They may think of such action as a right way to behave and start to imitate it. As a result, the classroom learning environment can be filled with disrespect and indiscipline.\n\n\nOn the other hand, I side with those who believe that giving students the total freedom in expressing their thoughts and feelings towards teachers may enhance educational standards. Many countries are promoting students-centred teaching with two-way communication, where open discussions between teachers and students are encouraged. This approach has a clear advantage of making students become proactive in studying. It also provides teachers with a chance to better their pedagogical skills by receiving feedbacks from students. By this way, both the learners and the educators can achieve higher academically.\n\n\nIn conclusion, the educational of encouraging high school students to judge their teachers may undoubtedly lead to enhanced academic achievements, despite the possibility that a disrespectful and undisciplined attitude amongst the class.",
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"content": "It regular day That special day supposed start state writing tests I nt necessarily worried due fact I always done good state testing never failed test state testing pretty much regular day But I nt know awaited computer lab Thanks new state testing laws take writing test computer The place school enough computers whole class take either computer lab old computer lab I nt know used computer lab I already hyper mood sense humor normally cheers puts hyper mood walking computer lab started cracking jokes mainly everyone else add effect reached computer lab door locked waited lock door come computer lab made jokes little I know real humor awaiting computer lab When got door unlocked I come sit seat I desired followed next next I remember trick computer push goes different screen push put computer sleep I tried couple times looking would always swat hand away After I decided best way pull trick make forget least expecting minutes later I planned trick I tried I caught looking away I pushed went different screen I pushed My plan worked turned around right soon computer going sleep freaked He started cussing hitting I thought mildly funny I got couple laughs nothing could prepared happen After woke computer got started test asked I laughing I told CAPS seen I put computer sleep flipped laughed went back test Two minutes went tapped shoulder I looked asked CAPS kid said CAPS I sat straight looked asked CAPS computer This held power button shut computer right middle test I thought I going cry It funny started laughing loud possible course nt happy told quiet But nt matter A little scolding nt compare funny ended going back tests I hope I good I really need grade pass",
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