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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, these three planets are very simuler. Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\". But Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers study. I mean Venus is dificault to a there and study. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket's Venus. In article dais, on the Venus's surface, temperatures average over 800 degree Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our Sun. This mean, we can go live there, because Venus has hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. However, NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. But I think its impossible to study Venus. I mean NASA will not succeed this project. Because, Venus has 800 degrees surface temperature, and almost 97 percent carbon dioxide in their air. So Venus is dangerous and dificualt to study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I student I think certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive students read book daily basics reading also keep students trouble The I say find book might interesting book might share youger sisters brothers keep wrong things Also books offensive shows students things see book Some books offensive show people bad thing pay cost people learn people mistakes Some books offensive show people pay cost something wrong Also music offensive curseing songs music sometimes good listen songs speak takes action certain wayThe offensive part music music calm music keeps motivated inside music bad vibes make bad thingsMost time music make happy undertsand alot life listening music Music description life meaning life ful offensive things selfcentered understand Some movies also offensive actions movies Movies enjoyable also relate movies way At times movies interesting actions drama movies The titles movie also offensive nt mean movie bad relation story Magazines also offensive things inside magazine Some magazines shows appropriate things children adults relate Also different things like activitys things family freinds enjoy Many magazines different way depends cover person created magzine Some things good magazines show posters super stars music career There alot things offensive world learn seperate negative things life Also things offensive relate books music days The important thing nt listen magazines movies telling mind People nt listen books etc going things talking false information So thats say believe cartain materials removed shelves found offensive Sincerly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would not be a great idea. There are many issues and concerns against the development of these cars. There are reasons why people have a driver's license. It makes having one pretty obsolete. All the work people have done for them and the practicing of driving will no longer be needed. The driverless car seems to be a lazy way of transportation and can cause problems on the road. The driverless car can cause and have problems such as navigating through roadwork or accidents and laws about faults.\n\nThe driverless car can have problems fucntioning and navigating through roadwork or accidents. So far they are not yet perfected in going completely driverless. Someone still has to be behind the wheel in case of something the car cannot do. The closest thing they have to driverless is not as one would expect. The cars can only do so much. As stated in the article, they still have to alert the driver to takeover whenever the car cannot do it itself. This is not very efficient considering its called a driverless car. The cars would need to be completely self aware in order to surpass these obstacles like road construction or accidents that have occured on the road.\n\nThe way laws would work are not yet established and if someone were to be in an accident, who would be at fault? This is another issue concerning these cars. Laws pertaining to this subject would need to be made. If someone were to crash the blame would be on the driver, of a normal car. When you birng a driverless car to the conversation the question then becomes, was it the driver or manufacturer of the car. As stated in the article traffic laws would change and new ones would be added. This branches off to more problems with the manufacturer and driver. The driver could make the argument that the manufacturer's vehicle is defective, and that is why they crashed. The manufacturer could say that the driver let his guard down and was too careless. Either way laws would be of concern.\n\nThe driverless car can be seen as a good thing, but the problems and defects it still has are a big concern. The car can have problems navigating through roadwork. It can also struggle driving around an accident that may have occurred nearby. There would need to be new laws and changes to the already made laws. The driverless car would be a pretty unefficient thing and could be dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, it is a smart decision to say that it is valuable to use the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. I support this claim for a few reasons. The reasons I support using this enhanced technology in a classroom environment is because it could help students become less confused about the concept they are learning, it could be used in a school counselor's office to help students identify their emotions and what they're feeling, and lastly, it can keep students focused and ready to learn in the classroom.\n\nIt would be valuable to use the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom for students because this technology could possibly help students become less confused about the concept they are learning. Throughout the world, many students are in pretty challenging classes, and most of the time, they are smart. Some of the things in these classes however, are not always easy. Many students struggle with the concepts they learn and are often confused. With this new face reading and emotion detecting technology, the scanner will be able to detect the students facial structure and what they show will predict these emotions. Imagine a student learning something and he/she gets confused. This happens all the time, and most students show a face that shows they do not understand what's going on. This face may look something like a furrowed brow or a side smirk with the mouth. Whatever it may be, the student is confused, and needs help. The Facial Action Coding System will be able to detect this, and the teacher will see the results, then will be able to clear up the student's confusion over the concept. Problem solved! This especially would help with students that are not as outgoing as others and are reserved in class and are not comfortable to ask for help in front of the whole class.\n\nAnother reason that the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable for students in a classroom is because in places like a counselor's office, it would help the student to identify their own emotions. A lot of students, especially after something has happened in their life that has impacted them in a negative way, need to talk to someone. Their emotions need to be expressed, and this new technology would help students identify these emotions. Picture a student walking into a counselor's office that is having a rough day. The student sits down and explains that he/she is having trouble identifying what they are feeling, or they don't know how to feel about what has happened. The counselor would talk to the student, then for extra assistance, use the Facial Action Coding System. The system would then give the emotions for how the student is feeling, so now the student will know, and maybe feel better. If not, at least the emotions are now recognized/identified.\n\nLastly, this Facial Recognition will be able to tell if a student in class is bored. It can also tell how many of the other students are bored. This can tell the teacher that maybe how they are teaching the material is not the most beneficial way to the students. In many cases, the students are bored with what they are learning, so they may put their head down or even have a bland look on their face. When students are bored, they tend to give up and not pay attention at all, and they are not motivated to learn anything. Therefore, they do not comprehend the material like they need to. This can help teachers know that they need to change up their lesson plan to keep the students occupied and attentive with the material, so they understand it better. This will then have the potential to raise grades and be more successful with the classes they are taking.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System would be a valuable source to use with students in a classroom for these reasons I have previously mentioned. This new technology would be very beneficial in an environment at a school. It has proved the emotions of the Mona Lisa painting, which many people are confused about, so it clearly has a lot of potential! This will allow students to learn in the most beneficial way possible, and will cause them to be more successful in the classroom, and in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certainly there are many different opinions about the Face found on Mars. Some people believe the Face was made by aliens, while other people believe it is a natural landform. I strongly believe that the Face is a natural landform because there is scientific evidence to prove that a landform could be formed on Mars and there are similar landforms like the Face on Earth.\n\nFirst of all, there is scientific evidence that proves landforms can form on Mars.\n\nFor example, scientists have found that mountains, canals, and volcanoes have formed on Mars. Scientists have also found that Mars, like Earth, has tectonic plates. Tectonic plates cause many different landforms to form when they shift and move around. If tectonic plates create landforms on Earth that no human can, it should be reasonable to think that tectonic plates can be the cause of landforms on Mars.\n\nSecondly, Mars has similar landforms to the landforms on Earth. Just like Earth, Mars has volcanoes, mountains, and canals. Scientist have found that tectonic plates are the cause of many of the landforms we see on Earth today. For example, mountains are formed when two tectonic plates collide and push against each other, trying to push the opposing plate underneath. If none of the plates budge, the plates will begin to push each other up tho form mountains. For canals to form, water would have to run over the land for a while and erode the rocks until a ditch forms. Even though there isn't water on Mars now, scientist have proved that water has once been on Mars. Since water and tectonic plates cause landforms on Earth, the same elements must cause landforms on Mars as well.\n\nEven though I believe that the Face is a natural landform, many other people will disagree with that statement. Many people with opposing viewpoints from mine will say that aliens built the face. Firstly, there is no scientific evidence to even prove the existence of aliens. Secondly, the pictures from the space crafts show no sign of any civilization near by the Face. On Earth, we may have ancient Pyramids that weren't formed naturally, but there were civilizations around those pyramids. Around the Face on Mars there is no sign of any villages or aliens living there. With a Bird-eye view, the face does't seem to have any human facial features. Only when there is a shadow, the features of a human being appear. This makes the Face seem like it was just a coincidence that it had terestrial features. With the lack of evidence to support the claim that aliens made the Face on Mars, it is hard to believe that such an idea could be true.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe the Face on Mars is just a natural landform because there are landforms on Earth that are the same as those on Mars and those landforms were made from tectonic plates and water. I believe that you look at the evidence provided to you before you draw any conclusions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are a great form of the new technologybut some people are for and some are against this great piece of technology.Automakers are working hard to solve problems that many people have with transportation .lawmakers just want to achive the best for the safety of people that't why the law is more focoused on keeping divers safe.\n\nDriveless cars are the new way the the world is improving the everyday life.Many people hate this time of technology as they think it could harm many people.Other people have fallen in love with this new idea of cars and want it to develop more and more till it's world wide.we cant denie that the briliant idea of driveless cars is a great and amazing piece of technology. Auntomakers are working hard to develop this amzning piece of technoloy.Most humas want this piece of tecnology to get more advanced so they can use it to its full potential.\n\nAutomakers have garanteen that the problems ahead will be solved as it states in parahraph 10 of this article.\"Automakers are conyinuing thier work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\" many people celebrate of hearing this but others hate that they are creating this type of technology.many humas protest everyday to this new piece of technology but are not sucessful at stoping the project of the driveless cars.The law supports both ways of this new technology but they have some good questions for this new piece of art as it states in the article \"if the technology fails and someone is injured,who is at fault- the driver or the manufacture?\".\n\nThe law cares the\n\nmost about humans rights and safety.The article states \"most driving laws focus on keeeping drivers,passengers, and pedestrians safe and\n\nlawmakers know that safety is best achived with alert divers.\" meaning that the law makers dont really agree with this type of technology as they want alerted drivers behind the wheel to keep people safe.The new technology was alert systems as it states in the article \"...but are\n\ndesigned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires muan skills...\" meaning that drivers have to remain alert at all times and if not the system will alert them.Most of these new technologies will help drivers be alert at all times and\n\nwill improve the life of some bussy humans that dont even have time to drive.This type of techonology will help improve many lifes and would do a great danger to thers that dont like new type of things like this.\n\nDriveless cars are a great part of the new generation and a great way to improve the life of many people.these technologies will help people and worry others as they dont like the idea of driveless cars.As many people say everyone is difrent and has their own opinions in the new technologies that the world is creating for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by explaning how it is on Venus like howin the text it says \" often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" \".Which means if anything happens to Earth Venus is our second option to go to but we need to study Venus if its live able and if we could grow food and other nessacary needs to survive. The author explans in the text how Venus is like in the text it says \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbod dioxide blankets Venus\" and how \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\" so this show the author is right that this is worth studying Venus this could be really amazing if we can survive on Venus and do the same things over there in Venus like on Earth but even greater.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A modern technology has brought a big boom through the social media applications which are used by the majority of people to gather information about the national and international news, and to enhance their interactions with their families, friends and neighbours. In my view, the merits of the advancement in the different modes of communication are much more in numbers than demerits.\n\n\nOn the one hand, a competitive world has made really challenging for the people to find a leisure time out of their professional and family commitments to meet their contacts and read newspapers. However, social media such as Facebook and WhatsApp have helped to interact with their families and friends irrespective of distance and time within a fraction of seconds rather than writing a letter and posting it. Secondly, the digital media gives the update on the current affairs, upcoming technologies, weather forecast, job vacancies, or any other major incident occurred in the any part of the world instantly rather than waiting for the newspaper in the next morning. Hence, the digitalisation has escalated the level of awareness among the people about their vicinity, and strengthen the interactive bond among the communities.\n\n\nOn the other hand, the several fake news or misguiding information is showcased on the social media which can create a huge chaos and panic among the public. For instance, the personal lives of famous personalities are scrutinized with the unconfirmed news, and several are defamed with such unlawful acts. Moreover, there are lots of security issues resulting in stealing the personal details, hacking, malicious acts, and thus increasing the rate of cyber crimes. \n\n\n\nTo recapitulate, I opine that social media is acting as a great source of spreading the news in the various categories of health, technology, sports, national and international fields, and additionally helping the people to build their relations and strengthen them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the Evening Star is a gorgeous planet to look at in the night sky but is a deadly planet to step foot on. Scientists and astronomers are finding various ways to either put a human on the planet or send another spacecraft over to sit in the air longer than a couple of hours like the past ones that were sent.\n\nFirst venus has a lot of flaws and conditions where humans wouldn't be able to outstand. In the text it states, \"On the planet's surface, tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus) No human would be able to outstand that burning tempature without some type of aircraft or special suit. Also in the text it states, \" and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus) You would just crush if you were placed on this planet. These condition are way more extreme than anything us humans have encountered.\n\nSecond, even though scientists and astronomers know how dangerous venus is and how terrible their conditions are, they are fascinated and want to learn way more about it. They believe venus is the most Earth like planet in our solar system. In the text it states. \"Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus) If so, this would be a good reason to explore and find out more things that used to be on this planet. The text also states, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus) After reading all of this, it can show that Venus can be our only closest option for a planetary visit in the furutre.\n\nIn conclusion, there are a lot of pros and cons in sending a human or spacecraft to the planet Venus. The planet Venus is deadly and if someone steps on the planet without the proper grear or spacecraft, it will lead to a tragic but obvious death. But soon, curiosity will lead us humans to the planet to evaluate and study the planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To:Mr. State senator.\n\nFrom: PROPER_NAME\n\nDEAR:Mr. state senator.\n\nThere has been many contraversies over the electoral colledge. The contraversies have been wether America should keep the this form of electing presidents or abolish it from our humanity. The electoral colledge,for many years,has been a effective and conveinient way of an election. As was stated in source three,\"the electoral colledge is widely regarded as an anarchronism\". this means that this way of electing a president has been around for many years and was meant for this country. There are three reasons why it is important to keep the method of an electoral colledge. For one,professional slate of electors can be trusted to vote for the party's nominee. Two,this method is more convienient,and lastly posses more acuracy.\n\nThe first reason why keeping the electoral colledge is important is because of professional slate of electors. these people or voted on by inndividuals to vote for there nominee president. these people can be trusted on a high level because of there preactices over the years.\n\nThe second reason why keeping he electoral colledge is important is because it is far more convieneint for most people. Reular individual voting may take up someones day by haveing them wait hour at a time in lineat a polling station. this is very unconvient to the person,especially if there day is buisy. what the electoral colledge does is take that persons vote into the hands of someone else. this save time and money for the averadge person.\n\nThe last reason why keeping the electoral colledge is important is because it pposses more accuracy than a regular vote. As stated in source three,\"because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner takes all basis\". this means that a person with more electoral votes than popular votes may win an election. this is because electoral votes way more in a way.\n\nthis concludes my reasoning why the electoral colledge should be kept in the American way of electing presidents. the reasons for this is,for one,proffecional slate of electors can be trusted. Two,it is more convienient,and three,it is more effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State Building never achieved goal They failed predict potential problems would face First could nt proceed attempt land dirigible Mooring Mast would dangerous Indeed Most dirigibles outside United States used Hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable paragraph They realized complications would imply incident like one New Jersey Also nature obstacle project The winds top building constantly changing due violent air currents paragraph Consequently due winds back dirigible would swinging around mooring mast would huge danger streets As final point dirigibles would nt able moor Empire State Building preexisting law concerning low airships could fly urban areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Election by popular vote would be a much better system because Electoral Collge can be unpredictable and is an unfair method of voting for voters.\n\nTo begin, The Electoral College isn't always predictable. In the article\n\nDoes the Electoral College Work states \"laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilites are.\" This shows that Electors from every state may not be chosen correctly or by trustworthy sources. These Electors may also have different requirements to do their job or how to become an elector, so states will may have diffrent respones from their electors. Another example of this is shown in\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong which states \"Electors could always defy the will of the people.\" This demostartes that the people who vote for these electors can easily be betrayed by the people they voted for. At any point of time these electors that should be voting for the candidate they are chosen to can change their mind and vote for whomever they please. Clearly, the electors for the Electoral College can be unpredictable and by the time are chosen it may be too late this is why we must change to popular vote.\n\nIn Adddition, The Electoral College is an unfair method of voting for voters. In the article\n\nThe indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong it states \"Candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance winning.\" This shows that candidates aren't even going to certain states because they believe the Electoral College points won't be given to them. This is unfair to voters because they can't even make a proper decison on the president because they may only see one candidate. So this entire state is not fully informed on the election and may chose the wrong candidate when there may be one that shares more of their beliefs in the election. Futhermore, in the article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep ur despised method of choosing the President it states \"The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\" This explains that potential voters may not vote because they know that candidate will most likely not win for their state. Depending on what type of people there are in that region (race, religion, political point of view) they may not vote on a certain candidate. So most voters know their one vote probably wouldn't make a diffrence. If we had popular vote everyone would have say in who is chosen for our president.\n\nTo conclude, We should change to popular vote because by using the Electoral College we allow unpredictable people to vote for entire states and inable voters to have an unfair election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the planetary system, and the second closest planet to the sun, which makes it dangerous for stargazers to explore. The author believed we should explore Venus no matter how dangerous it is because, Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideraton given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nVenus is one of the hottest and dangerous planet, but the author believed that we should still explore the planet becuase it is Earth's twin in terms of size and density, and also in distance too. The author explained that Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth making NASA intriguing to study more about Venus. The author also came up with ideas on how to visit Venus to avoid the dangers of the planet, according to the text, \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" The author gave a possible solutions to NASA that might make them avoid exploring Venus, by getting a vehicle that act just like the jets airplanes on Earth to stay up and out of the way of Venus unfriendly ground conditions.\n\nIn the story, the author supports the idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author believed we should think of it as a challenge, because Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Katherine Paterson author said I think trying tell us books shelves children read I agree statement I read book mature content It vulgar sutable age maturity There lot books like need hide children society They young hear read adult actions war violence sex drugs sorts things If take mature books types media shelves children better lives There would less teen pregancies drug ussage multiple factors effecting society Children would behave better would greatly influenced media I think nt get rid book though We keep libraries If people want read kinds books search elsewhere An easy way solve problem put age limit books media content put separate store section libraries A great author said children exposed adult content media But also said people read watch type media every right This needs age limit type media But content adult agree nt read watch", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Occupations will be done by machines such as Artificially intelligent robots in the future. It is possible that unskilled jobs may finally be done by robots, while some other jobs which require expertise and experience will be taken over by individuals. This essay shall discuss why some jobs are going to rely on humans rather than robots. \n\nRobots may eventually substitute all human labour that does not need any talent or complex human skills. Numerous companies will be addicted to intelligent robots because not only can robots be significantly beneficial in terms of finances, but also time-consuming. In supermarkets, for instance, countless cashiers have been replaced by automated systems that cost enormously less than employees and it works much quicker than humans without being exhausted. Besides, these devices require no vacation and most importantly no holiday pay. For these reasons, machines and intelligent robots will be involved in people's lives more frequently in the future.\n\n\nOn the other hand, some specific workforces cannot be replaced because technology and machines will never achieve the capacity to do them since they require 'human touch'. For instance, psychology, medicine, and education will need the expertise and study. Robots will never be able to achieve what has taken thousands of years of study, research and experiment from explorers and experts who sacrificed their lives in the battle of science.\n\n\nTo sum up, it appears to be that infinite menial jobs will be taken by robots. However, sophisticated jobs that require human skills, experience and science will always exist. Ultimately, I am inclined to believe that jobs that are expertly done by humans may not be correctly done by machines.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facial action coding system would be a really good valuable tool for students in a classroom because it can teach them the impact technology can have in the world. In the article I learned that the facial action coding system has many ways to process the human facial expressions. I also learned how they can be very valuable.\n\nIn the text it states \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" This product could be really good for students classroom because if the student's face shows the computer that they don't understand something then the computer itself can pull of something help them out. Also another reason why this product can be valuable for students in a classroom is that it can teach them the importance of technology and why having technology can lead to better understanding on things. In the text it also states\"\n\nThe same technology can make computer animated faces mor expressive for video games or video surgery.\" This line right here tells us that is can lead to better things such as making faces with more expression.\n\nThese are all the reasons why the facial action coding system is vauable for students in a classroom. It can show them the advance in technology and help them with things that express on their face. This is why this product will be vauable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is outdated, unfair, and irrational and should be motifyed and uptated so it is more fair to voters and the rest of the citizens.\n\nThe Founding Fathers created it during the Constitution as a compromise. This meaning it was made and disigned for when it was needed. It did help the way presidents were voted for then,but its not suted for the population and other ways it has changed and is different in this time period. Over 60% of voters would prefer a new and direct election rather than the system that we have now.\n\nUnder the Electoral College we the people vote for electors, anyone not holding public office, who are chosen depending of the state by either state conventions, state party's central committee, or presidential canidates themselves. While voters are supposed to control who the electer votes for, sometimes they can make a mistake and vote for the wrong canidate. Its not very ofthen that mistakes like these happen, but they do occur. If a mistake like this was to happen the wrong canidate would be voted for that the people didn't choose, resulting in the posibility that a canidate we didnt vote for could and has the possibility if winning.\n\nSomething simmailar to this that happened back in 1960 was the biggest election crisis of the century. Segregationists, who favored separation based on race, in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors who opposed John F. Kennedy so the popular vote would not have been given to Kennedy and he would noyhave won.\n\nIn defense of the Electoral College it was very helpful when it was needed at fisrt, but now it's in the wrong time period. It exceeded Obama's share of the popular vote when he received a 61.7% of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 perecent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney in 2012.\n\nIn conclusion the Electoral College should beb changed so we have a new and improved way for the people to vote fairly for who they want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars had always been only a fantasy.\n\nHowever, recent developments in transportation make this fantasy a possibility.\n\nStill, people question whether the development of said \"drierless cars\" would be beneficial or detrimental to society.\n\nIn the article, \"Driverless Cars are Coming,\" the author's report on the growing developments on driverless cars shows a more positive than negative trend for the future of automobiles.\n\nExamples from the the article attest to this observation.\n\nThe creation of a driverless car represents a stepping stone for the evolution of transportation to motorists, futurists, and manufacturers alike.\n\nIn the third and fourth paragraphs, the author gives readers the history on the development of autonomous cars from customized tracks to \"Google's modified Toyota Prius.\"\n\nThis brief history of the innovation of the automobile shows readers the already impressive progress that researchers had accomplished so far.\n\nBy comparing present driverless cars such as \"Google's modified Toyota Prius\" to the very first autonomous prototype tracks such as General Motor's special test track, the author enables readers to appreciate how far humanity has gone and how close humanity was to being able to construct autonomous cars.\n\nLater in the article, the author informs the reader of BMW's \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\"\n\nAlthough the traffic jam assistant can \"steer, accelerate, and brake themselves,\" \"this means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\"\n\nThe BMW Traffic Jam Assistant shows the extent to which automobiles can drive autonomously.\n\nAlthough the car still requires the full attention of a driver, the BMW Traffic Jam Assistant serves as proof of researchers' accomplishments over the development of \"driverless cars.\n\nAs seen in the various accomplishments that might be able to make driverless cars a reality, the construction of a truly autonomous car would be remembered as a landmark of human achievement, a final stage in the evolution of the autonomous car.\n\nAlthough autonomous cars appeal to the public eye, the introduction of driverless cars bring about some concerns from the law.\n\nAs \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe,\" it will be imperative that the possible construction of these autonomous vehicles be flawless.\n\nPeople to this day still doubt the reliability of the driverless car as seen how \"it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars\" in some states.\n\nHowever, the current automobile technology was centered around the safety of the passenters as seen when the author quotes, \"in this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature.\"\n\nWhen explaining the purpose of the google car, the author states, \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\"\n\nThe fairly autonomous Google car was developed for the sake of making roads of the future safe.\n\nBased of the trend in the developments of the autonomous car, the cars of the future will not only be more technologically advanced, but the cars will bring about a safer environment for both drivers and pedestrians.\n\nThe reliability of the autonomous car should not be of concern to skeptics as the cars will continue to evolve to suit the needs of the driver as \"safety is a big concern\" to developers.\n\n\"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\"\n\nIn the article, \"Driverless cars are Coming,\" the author's reports on the hopeful introduction of the \"driverless car\" presents a positive trend in the future of travel as the fiinal development of the first autonomous vehicle would be both a memorable and benefical achievement.\n\nAutonomous cares have been made for the sole purpose of tending to the operator's safety and as research progresses, the safety of drivers across the continent shall improve as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it mentions using a new recognison software, called \"FACS\" (Facial Action Coding System), in schools for students. This is a not a very important aspect for students, and doesn't benefit their learning in many ways. In Paragraph 1 it mentions that the technology is new, and we all know there are several problems with new technology. The technology is new so its going to be expensive for any willing school to buy, and on top of that its going to be hard to implement that into the school's computer network. Having a giant program like FACS could slow down any other important processes, this is mentioned in Paragraph 7. The idea for FACS being used in schools, is mentioned in Paragraph 6, as stated \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored - Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" there are a few things wrong with Dr. Huangs idea, implementing an entire 3D facial regonision software into the school, just so students won't be bored or confused on a lesson. Helping students with learning and understanding the lesson could be very usefull for helping some students with disabilities, like being mute or blind/vissualy impared. But we do have other ways of helping regular students and students with a disability in different way rather than FACS. Having students have acsess to this, would most likley end with the students messing around with it all class period instead of using it for its intended use, (This point only works if the program is on the physical device, rather than used as an Admin tool, like GoGuardin). It is also mention in the quote, \"Like an effective human instructor\" wouldn't it be cheaper and easier to hire a willing teacher instead of going through all the trouble with a program? Having both FACS in and out of classrooms has its pros and cons, but FACS isn't nessacary to have in school for students use and would be better used elsewhere, rather than in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the environmental conditions become worse which impact to the earth and other creatures because of the people unscientific process.A certain number of the public believe that the occasion was delayed already to repatriate the things like old days.This essay will study on this topic as detailed in the following paragraphs and my opinion will be noted in the conclusion.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost,the entire world struggles to live in the weather situation turns as pathetic compared with past decades since the unethical things made by the society for their lives.Moreover,it has been affecting the natural resources deprived as bad.For instance,as per the new survey,the Amazon forest boundaries becoming decrease year by year due to cutting the trees and mining in an unlawful ways.Secondly,the flora and fauna have been losing their habitat since man used these areas to make an inhabited places to live through the machines and other explosive things.Even though, the population is increasing everywhere which doesn't sense to destroy uninhabited lands to survive.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,a number of the communities debates that it's not an easy task to bring back the pleasant atmosphere in normal way since most of the places seen as dirty than the past days and the healthy resources became unhealthy in these days.For example,In Kerala the rainy season is normally for three months in a calendar year but now it has changed tragically to six to eight months and it causes many problems creating such as floods and landslides for the last couple of years.Several experts still think that it is possible to stop if the government and the families come forward to save the nation by themselves.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we are already late to take necessary actions to catch the old earth and our gifted resources immediately to avoid abolition of this time and the authorities must take indeed steps and the implementation of the plans to create a good future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are cool because you can have someone come and get you like a taxi. Driver's wouldn't be bored of waitin on their time to drive , because they would have they're on vehicals to take other other people to where they need to be . (Ubers) are alsosomeone you would call to give you a ride to where you need to go for cash .\n\nBecoming a uber or a taxi you have to be ready to run aarons because you going to have a good amount of customors if you are in a big city or somewhere with a higher population, it's also\n\na touch sensor on the streering wheel just in case the driver let the wheel go . GM\n\nhas created driver's seats to vibrate when the vehicle is in some danger.\n\nSensors are'nt new , in the 1980's automarkers used speedsenors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. It's alot os sensors around but just in some places you can't find them or even reconized them until you put your hands on it , then it would either go off or beep but you would kno if its a sensor or not. Manufactures have camearas for the people thats driving and make sure they are keeping their eyes on the road. The cars he going to use wuold use half the fuel of today taxi's and offer far more flexibility than a school bus , he believes sucj cars would fundamentally change the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Boom Boom I knew cousins door heavy handed So I ran stairs opend door Then got van read fun mom replied bouring van I patient After got ohio stoped got food After mins got van When got point excited going good day I thought I also knew going take time patience Next got park whent straight reptor It half hour right This going take lot patients wated wated got realized worth They got lot ride but best one diagster When got van said fun Then I relised I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nRecently I have begun to research the difference in effect on the people of Ameirca, between the Electoral College and the result of popular cote for President. I have found out that our founding fathers created the Electoral College in the Constitution, so that while the votes between Congress and the people may be different, ther could be a compromise. Our country; well our world, is evolving with the changes in generation. 2015 has come upon us, and with this year brings a whole new change in cutural diversity and tehcnology. So while I believe sticking to our coutry's Constitution is vital for some reasons, I also believe it is outdated in others.\n\nToday, people are slowly coming out of the shells of the past and embracing the change of the future. Every year, children grow older, new children are born, and people pass away from our fine Earth. Though this new generation we have built is going to, one day, become the generation that decides who leads our country and who doesn't. I believe that the Electoral College puts a restraint on the freedom our people, new and old, should possess. Our people have to vote for a party, a group of people that don't show either their faces or their true personalities, to trust well enough with their vote to go for the President they think is right for the Country. Although that is very rarely ever betrayed- as noted by my recent research -I do believe that it is against our certain rights as a United States citizen not to know who exactly we are putting our faith in. Also, even if we do put our full faith in these mysterious political parties, like we have for years and years, who's to say that our vote will even matter? Al Gore, in the year 2000, had more popular votes from the people than Bush, yet he received fewer electoral votes, which decided the winner of the election. Why have us put in our vote at all, if it means nothing to 538 politicians?\n\nOur country is made up of millions, upon millions of strong women, men, and children and they should be the deciding factor in the elections. It's our country just as much as it is the men that make up the Electoral College. A requirement of 270 electoral votes must be made in favor for one presidential candidate over the, though why should such a small number mean more against the millions from the citizens of this great country, the same people that make up the great state of Florida.\n\nI understand the need for the Electoral College, when it comes to some decisions. Like avoiding a national catastrophe when it comes to the nuber of swing-votes. While I am a woman of passion, I do allow myself to see both sides of the story and I think while the Electoral College can do good, it can also do bad for this country. It is outdated, overused, and wrong.\n\nOur founding fathers built the Constitution and this country we call home, and while that is a great thing...times are changing and the power of the House, and the Senate, should now be moved on to the people. Some states, like North Carolina and Rhode Island were even unable to know close to anything about the current eection between Gore and Bush in 200. I say every state deserves to know the news circling around their country and how it may affect them. The power should now be given to the people, allow them to decide and make decisions. Let the people know they are heard, they have the freedom that our founding fathers gave them in the Constitution. They can speak and let their minds roam for the good of this country.\n\nThe Electoral College should be taken down and gicen too the hands of the people, for the good of our future.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA woman who cares both for her state and her country.\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone uses their emotions to project how they are feeling. There is a new technology that could tell everyone's facial expressions. It is called Facial Action Coding System and it works by constucting a 3-D computer model of the face, looking to see what muscle the facial expression is using, and then producing the outcome. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Nick D'Alto, the author, talks about a new technology that is valuable in a classroom by being able to detect if the student is being confused, bored, or suprised.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help recongize the students expression and tell the teacher if they are confused and where they were confused at. It could be really useful to know whether or not a student is confused. D'Alto expresses that they use video monitoring to detect the emotions \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\" (D'Alto 4). If you can play the facial movements it will show when the child is understanding and then will show the moment when the child becomes in fear and confusion after the teacher has said something they do not understand. Also, it may help the teacher in a way of where they see all the children becoming confused and they might have to switch up their way of teaching that part in their lesson.\n\nThe computer will also be able to detect when a student is becoming bored with what they are working on or learning about. Dr. Huang predicts that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto 6). If the computer detects that many students have become bored, then the teacher could change up the lesson that they are working on or they could try having some fun with the lesson. Then, the students facial expression may change and the computer will detect if they are producing a happy emotion or a unsatisfied emotion.\n\nThe computer could also tell if a student is suprised. Some of the time students are not paying attention that when you call on them they are suprised and in a panic mode. D'Alto says that suprise is one of the six classified emotions and how to show suprise with muscle \"for example, you frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised\" (D'Alto 3). Knowing that the new technology candetect suprise can help because you can tell if a student was not paying attention. Also, it can help for if a student answers a question and he answers right, but the computer detects that the student is suprised then the teacher may be able to help the student,see if he took a guess as his answer, and then if so see what the student is being confused on.\n\nD'Alto shows many ways for this use of technology to be valueable. Everyone uses their facial expressions to comunicate to each other. The computer can dectect if a student has become bored or confused on a subject and suprised in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the 1950's everyone's dream was to have a nice car but it is coming to a point in time where the car culture is coming to an end. You might be thinking that this is horrible and how will i get places without a car. No, it's not horrible at all, it's actually very beneficial in other ways. It can help people become free, less dependent, and it reduces the amount of greenhouse gases tremendously.\n\nThe first reason that limiting car use is a good thing is because it can help people become free and less dependent. It has caused people to not always be in a hurry and made them less stressed. In Bogota, Colombia they had a car-free day where people hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work. People felt so free and they felt they were doing a good deed so some got rid of their cars for good. Cars are becoming less popular in the world as we speak. For example from 2005 to 2013 the number of miles driven in the U.S. has reduced by 9%, which is equal to where the country was in 1995. Another example is that a study last year found that driving by young people decreased by 23% between 2001 and 2009. Also shopping centers are moving to places where they can be walked to rather than on a way off highway somewhere. \"What intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person has started to come down two to three years before the downturn,\" says Micheal Sivak who studies this trend at the University of Michigan.\n\nThe next reason is that increasing the use of cars will help the environment greatly. Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gases in Europe and 50% in the U.S. All of our development since World War 2 has been centered around cars and it hasn't helped the environment any. For example, in Paris they were going to have two no car days to reduce the smog. The first day they said that no one with and even numbered license plate were allowed to drive and odd would be the next. After the first day was over the smog was reduced by so much that they didnt't even have to use the next day. This is just a small number of people. Imagine if everyone would participate even just for small periods of time.\n\nIn conclusion, now that you have learned that life without out cars can make you feel free, less dependent, and have the environment. Have you changed your opinion? \"giving up cars is a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-sear bicycle with his wife.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has come a long way to create a Facial Action Coding System. This system can make it easier for a lot of people to figure out what emotions people are feeling. Putting this technology in schools would make it easier for teacher to understand how students are feeling about their lessons. The Facial Coding System would be a great idea to put on school computers to find out what the students are feeling.\n\nMaking technology like this is very advanced and clever. Many students want to be nice to their teacher when they ask if they like the lessons. Putting this technology while they are teaching the lessons would be a good idea for how the students actually feel. There would probably be some cons with this technology though. The students could be thinking of something else or being distracted while it is scanning their face. making the scan inaccurate because they're not reacting to the teache they are reacting to something that happened earlier that day or soemthing else on their computer. Although the technology would have a lot of pros. Scanning their faces when they are paying attention could be very helpful. Teacher could learn to make their lessons more interesting with this technology. Knowing if the student are happy during a lessing could make the teacher do more of what she was doing. Also using this technology could help teachers understand if their students aren't feeling well during their class period. This could be helpful for teacher because pople never want accidents in the classroom. Using this technology could helo teacher recognizze when students are nervouse or anxious to help them calm down and be more relaxed in the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a great new tool for teacher to use in the classroom. Teachers always need new ideas for teaching new information to a classroom. Using this technology would make it a lot easier to understand the students. Teachers often forget about the feelings of their students. This is a great reminder of the information that they're giving their student is important for the students to understand and comprehend. Reading students' expressions would be a great idea for the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that if people desire to have a successful life, they need to face challenges and should not recoil from failure. From my perspective, even though facing risk means one might suffer from setbacks and the apprehension of making the wrong step, I believe the conducive effects which derive from it can outweigh the disadvantages.\n\nTaking risks is by no means an easy task, people might fringe themselves from the consequence of failure. However, without these challenges, an individual can lose the chance to succeed as well as know one’s limits. If people surmount the difficulties and reach the goal, the fruition is incompatible, and the experience of success can also enhance one’s confidence in facing different scenarios in the future. In addition, if failure really occurred, lessons can also be learned and experience can be amassed through the mistake, which can further avail people in averting the same mistake while preparing themselves for better performance.\n\nPeople who stand on the opposite side might assert that taking risks could result in pressure, which can turn out to be detrimental for individuals, leading to underperformance, eventually. However, they might overlook the fact that on most occasions, failure is unavoidable; the way to overcome the fear is to face it. People who are always trying to escape from facing failure will stand no chance to improve themselves, as mentioned, failure can be conducive if people are willing to accept it, the experience accumulated in the process can avail oneself in dealing with manifold situations while remaining calm in the future.\n\nIn conclusion, though taking risks means failure might happen, I believe the experience and lessons which one can learn in facing risk decisions can outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This face is not because of aliens it was just a landform. \"Nevertheless on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Sureyor drew close enough for a second look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 merterd per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\"\n\nOther reasons, \"as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\n\nMore resins why, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" These are all reasons that this is no because of aliens but it is a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Now, is this technology needed in a classroom? It really does not need to be in a classroom, but it can be used for more important task like using it to see other old painting expressions.\n\nFor most children in school they all have mixed emotions, and what does seeing how happy they are change anything. Children go to school to learn and get education. Some children are happy to be at school, while some are not happy to be at school. And thoes children already show their expressions. When a child is happy and wants to do work at school, they are the ones to always raise their hands and are bubbley. While the children that are not happy to be at school are usually the ones to not sit right, slouch, and do not raise their hands. Most schools say that they want their students to be happy at school, but with all the work that all children have to do and how they are taught to learn, they do not show the same effect on all children. Some children like things to go one way, while the other children like it the other way, so in that case not all children could be happy at school, unless they were to slit things up to make evey child happy and they still learn the things that they need to learn. In the article, it states,\" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's slime. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions,\"(paragraph 7). If our computers at home can not handle the power that is used to detect one of our emotions, how can so many more computers on one software be able to do that. Schools need to spend money on other things like maybe new floors for the gym, or new lockers, what ever it is there are more important things that need to be done before spending money on a computer that can detect wheather we are happy or not.\n\nA way that the Facial Action Coding System can be used in our schools is to see how every child likes the way they learn. Some children can be so comfused in a clas but they never ask for help because they are too embarresed to raise their hand so they hide behind a computer screen and never get the help they need. And if others can see his expressions and notice he needs help they could help out. There are children who need help but are too scared to raise their hands because then they will stand out, and maybe even made fun of. They hide behide a computer screen so people will not know who is confused or needs help. In the article, it states,\" By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece),\"(paragraph 8). This states that it can identify if a child is confused, mad and/or sad about their issuse and their communitcation skills. It can help out the adules on the school help out the children of the school. If they had the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms, it could help a lot of children come out of their shells and maybe even change in a fantastic way.\n\nOverall, the Facial Action Coding System is an amazing thing that can identify people's expressions, it does not really need to be in a classroom, but it can definetly come in handy. Maybe just in the libraray but not in every classroom. They can be very helpful for old paints and seeing those expressions. But there are people out there that put on a fake smile everyday to show others that they are not in pain when they actually are. A lot of people put on an \"act\" for others, meaning that they smile and looks so happy to others, while actually they are hurting and are in pain on the inside. Most people would not notice because they only see what other only show.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a large number of Individuals being interested in exploring local accommodations’ history.In this essay, I will list my reasons and methods for finding out the history.\r\n\r\nIn terms of the reasons why people like to know the history of accommodations, on one hand, people want to study local culture. Through getting to know architectures in local, ancient people built houses mostly due to local environment. For example, Eskimos live in the Arctic region. Their traditional buildings are snow houses. That is because they could not use wood to build houses in the snow.On other hand, understanding history a lot for buildings can make residents generate a sense of belonging. To be specific, people can find many stories such as legends or real stories when they researched the history.The appealing stories can deeply impress people and touch them to live in location. \r\n\r\nIn regards to the means for helping civil to learn about local architectures can visit local museums of Old Buildings. These museum can introduce the evolution of local architectures to visitors. Take an museum of old building in Gulangyu island as an example, in Xiamen province, local historic buildings are turned into a museum. At the island, people can see fujian traditional accommodation, European architecture and so on. Different architecture styles eventually formed Xiamen building styles. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reasons behind the phenomenon are expecting to learn about local history and make residents have a sense of belonging. I propose that those who are keen on researching local architecture can visit the museum of old buildings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore? I cannot imagaine a future like this. I see a future where we all learn to drive safely and without pollutuion. I do not believe that driveless cars are good for the future because pollution may increase. Also with drivers not needing to drive could cause more accidents. And expenses will increase on buying the driverless cars.\n\nThe first reason a future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore is a bad idea is because people won't want to learn driver safety. If we make cars that drive on their own why would someone want to read or learn how to actually drive? With cars that doesnt require you to focus on a road people will text, play games, talk to other passengers in the car and not even realize what's going on on the road. Without driver safety people will question why we need driver tests.\n\nMy second reason a future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore is a bad idea is because accidents could occur more often than usual. With the need to not pay attention to the road people will be more likely to roughhouse within the car or argue over who can sit in the front seat. Everyone knows, technology fails from time to time, if we allow these cars to be made then what does the driver do if the car malfunctions? Drivers and passengers will not see the need to wear a seatbelt because they believe that the driverless car will keep them safe because machines can't make \"human error\".\n\nMy final reason a future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore is a bad idea is because expenses will increase on buying cars. With the way the economy is who is to say that everyone will be able to afford a car with such technology? The way that families and jobs are it is not to say that a person may have enough money in the budget to buy these cars. If they we to buy the car how will they get the money to recieve this veihcle? Saving, the people will save all their money so once they buy the car the will be broke and it will be even harder to keep a house or food on the table or even to wash their clothes.\n\nSo to conclude. The reasons why I believe a future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore is a bad idea is because driver safety will be ignored. Accidents will occur more often. And Expenses will be to much for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using this technology to read the emoional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nThe technology could help teachers and other school staff know how school or their lessons make students feel.The knowledge the teachers would help make school and lessons more exciting or entertaining, It could even help with those students who dont un derstand because they would see stress and confusion.\n\nSchool life with this technology would improve because they would know how the students feel. Example would be if a student was upset or angry,The teachers could tell and be able to help them before something would happen. this could prevent teen suicide or even school shootings because you would be able to know what their emotions were.The only real downside would be that some of the studednts would think this was an invasion of privacy, or parents wouldn't allow the teacfhers to use the technology on their children.\n\nThe scientific part of all of this is complex being that you would have to program the codes into the computer that would probably not be able to handle most of the complex codes.Then the next tricky part would be teaching the staff to use the program. \" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\"\n\nSchool would be less of a soul draining, anxeity causing, stress giving place, If the staff could tell students emotions. The Facial Acton Coding System could benifit us the students in many ways. The technology could help cause less homework and stress, or maybe pointless subjects that we dont really need to learn.The faster we get to learning more about this technology and bringing it into schools, the greater school will be for the future generations of children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist affected change terrain flat hilly elderly mens directions importantly thirst He tries save little water left time really needs He looks place cool get water finally end Hes also little bit angry disappointed old mens directions Hes really going lot miles according directionsand s beginning wonder theyve lost", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit many features setting affect cyclist journey The rusty water pump highway sign abandoned juice factory seemed make trip difficult already First author stumbles along ramshackle shed surrounded several rusty pumps corral couldnt hold lames mule anylous check pump wellneeded water When finds luck drink bitter tasting water hope droop little It sun taunting telling cant make Secondly passes large road sign reading Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Once begins feel hopeless turns angst determination finish journey He says sometimes life cruel notices speed limit continues pedaling hard Lastly author sees lone building distance almost doesnt believe eyes It turns last hope water abandoned grape juice factory He reflect irony position saying situation should please sadists reading Therefore features setting affected reader highlighting negativity situation turn drives continue pedaling", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": ", and indeed, the importance of relationship between human beings and their pets has been proved to be slightly exaggerated in some nations. However, although problems regarding may affect the health conditions of old people, the benefits that these lovely animals bring to them, physically and mentally alike, are clearly undeniable.In of physical benefits, the well-being of elderly people with pets compared to those without pets, since not only do they have to take care of themselves, the responsibility ensure their one fed and well looked after encourages them to become even more active. Due to these extra activities, this might not have an obvious influence on their health, but at least this could help them to avoid bad . Coupled with physical side, their mental wellbeing will also be improved, and the reason is that having someone to take care of would reduce the chance of feeling . Therefore, their could be minimised.In spite of the above advantages, the interaction between pets and vulnerable old people still exist. One of the major concerns is the of these animal on their tracheas, especially those asthma. virtually invisible in the air, many asthma symptoms are caused unconsciously by pets. In addition to the fact that old people might experience difficulty in looking after their pets, as their health conditions are limited, could become even more when they try take care of others.In conclusion, it is true that obstacles still exist for elderly people in adopting pets, but the benefits of this topic its . For such reasons, instead of , further support would be far more beneficial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should change the elction to popular vote. we should get what the people want not what the government or the system want. under the electoral college system, voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. a dispute over the outcome of an elecoral college vote is possible, it happend in 200 but, its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.\n\nNo region has electoral cotes to elect president. So a solid regional favorite, such as romney was in the south has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful presidat. the residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfrabchished that the new president will have no regard for their intrests, that he really isn't their president.\n\nThe winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates as we saw in 2012's election. voters in toss-up states are most likely to pay close attention to the campaign. they are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, average and the most thoughtful voters hsould be the ones to dcide the election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The autor winter Hibiscus conclded story paragraph shows saeg going give test another try The author wanted slow saeg going giving thing important complete would take test In sory says saeg dare look mother eye Instead stared hibiscus important", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be a cool concept but when it comes to functionality they are useless. At this point they aren't really needed for public use. The cost to productivity rate is unneccesary. There are so many ways that this concept could go wrong.\n\nFor starters, the whole thing is isentially a computer with wheels and are now prone to cyber attacks. For instance, the GPS reciever that is attached to the car could be taken control of remotely. Aswell the viseo sensors inside the car could be transmitted to a remote location and be used as blackmail. Lastly, the rotating sensor could be remotly shut down or even fried causing a repair fee. Another problem could be the practicality of the product.\n\nAswell as cyber attacks the vehicle could be damaged on site. One way that the sensor could cause trouble for the owner is by being broken by hail or even an angry nieghbor possiblely. Another way a person could be burdened by this device is by it stopping for trash in the road. Considering this device makes it to open roads why would people want to pay attention to the road. Especially since thay are paing an extra cost to have the capabities of driverless driving. Lastly, the problem of having the laws necesary for this would be a hassle.\n\nThe law making process could take a while when it comes to getting the laws necessary for drivers. That and the question of who is liable in the case of an accident. would it be the distributor or the drivers. If its the drivers the prices for insurance are going to increase alot. If it not the drivers fault how woulf they prove it. The companies making the cars would be liable for alot of crashes that arent there fault.\n\nThere are many reasons not to continue with the making of driverless cars. One being the cyber threat that these vehicles pose. Another being the lack of productivity compared to the increase in price. Lastly, the laws and other cosiquential problems that will occur. All of these and more are why I feel we should not continue to make driverless cars. I hope these problems have been brought to light by this paper. have a nice day :)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "News consumption has become increasingly uncommon amongst today's generation. These people claim that reading newspapers and watching the media on television is a total waste of their valuable time. Many believe that it has nothing to do with their lives. This essay somewhat disagrees with this statement as to become a better citizen, it has become crucial nowadays to be up to date with what is happening in a nation.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, audiences do not resonate with the content available on major communication mediums like newspapers and television. Because media providers display irrelevant rumours and, people tend to lose their interest and ultimately they see it as a wastage of time. It is the responsibility of providers to broadcast only important and urgent messages. For Instance, recent research discovered that these industries are money minded and tend to focus on their TRP growth, statistics found that 78% of the population avoid consuming news.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Avoiding broadcast completely is not an optimal decision, as it is a prime source of knowledge. It is awareness, which makes a person a better citizen of a nation, and it ultimately contributes, toward the overall development of a country. However, there is a need to become a responsible consumer, while looking up the news. Also, research showed that many who have been reading newspapers, have a better command of the language and tend to make better life decisions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, citizens should not completely avoid the consumption of news, as it increases awareness and knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the definition of risk? Sometimes when someone says that doing something is risky, might not be at all. In paragraph 6 it states ¨Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.\" Creating new things and new techonoly is a challenge for many engineers. The author defines the term ¨risk¨ as a challenge, and that´s what it is. Not only do scientist want to see what the planet is made of, and get to discover new things, they also want to see if venus is survibable to humans.\n\nScientist have discovered that long ago Venus was very much alike to Earth. It had oceans and very different forms of life. Stated in paragraph 4, ¨Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have the most Earth-like planet in our solar system...Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.¨ Another idea that the author indicates for his opinion is in paragraph 6 it states ¨...researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to undestand Venus would need to get up close and personal.¨ Scientist are still not quite knowledgable about the planet Venus. So thay are taking their time to have further investiagtions.\n\nAfter time goes on, scientist and many different people try to make new technology, an example like NASA. Imagine a room which people say not to go in. Like many people curiosity wins. Exploring new things is what people do. Sometimes knowing the risk. It´s just a challenge for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Arts have its own importance in the world. Nevertheless, there are predominantly two opposite views where a section of society vehemently deems that art is more necessary for pupils in school; others emphasize that major subjects are important and craft is just a waste of time. In my view, there must be an option in the educational system to choose such subjects according to willingness.\r\n\r\nOriginally, various factor makes a section of society commend that craft is important, and have many reasons for the assertion. Firstly, art is the subject of the leisure category, which provides relaxation and refreshment to an individual. After the intense burden of the study, students want some sort of refreshment for which craft is the best option. Secondly, Innate talent of the students always remains dominant during their academic progress. For example, many children have a keen interest in drawing and painting, so they often choose such type of minor subjects. \r\n\r\nHowever, others claim that this is merely a time wastage. Chiefly, other subjects are becoming more significant due to the introduction of modern technology. Subjects, like science and maths, acquire a higher place in several aspects of the world because the job opportunities in these fields are wide and everyone easily acquires respectful post. Moreover, the craft is a minor subject in many institutes, so there is no need to focus profoundly on it. If the student wants to focus on the major part of the study deeply, he/she would neglect minor subjects from their routine.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many consider art as an essential part of the study, yet others believe another part of the study is more crucial. In my opinion, students who are willing to pursue arts as a carrier opportunity must go deep into it, but otherwise, individuals must focus on major topics", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is much like earth and it is also the closest planet to earth in terms of the size and density. Venus is also called the cloud dropped world. it is a very challenging plac to study and the author gives plenty of reasons as to why. Here are a few reasons.\n\nTemperatures on venus can be a big problem for the scientist trying to study it. For example the autor states in paragraph 3 that temperatures on venus average 800 degrees fahrenheit. No spaceship has landed here in over 3 decades because, it states that no spacecraft survived the landing for longer then over a few hours. The atmosphere there is 97 percent of carbon dioxide that blankets venus.\n\nThe author also states that the atmosphereic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. That could crush and even possibky liquefy multiple typesof metal. He states that the conditions on venus are far more extreme then anything we have encountered on earth. This makes it very hard for the scientist to actually be able to land and collect things from venus.\n\nVenus may have some earth like features such as valleys, mountains, and craters , but it also has hurtful things to. These things consist of active valcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning that strikes seeling to land on the surface.\n\nThe author gives plenty of evidence as to why it is hard and challenging to study venus. He also eplains that NASA is thinking aboiut sending humans to venus so that they can study it, but then he states that the scientist would have to huver over venus so they wouldnt be able to collect any rocks or things to actually study. Temperatures for the scientist even if they huver over venus would be around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea level of earth. The author states that the conditions on venus are not easy but it is survivable for humans.\n\nthese are the examples as to why venus is so hard to study for scientists that the author gives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring,\" In each paragraph the author presents a detail why exploring Venus would be good although it has some dangers. One of the explames come from paragraph 2 , stating that Venus is stated as \"Earths twin,\" and that Venus density, size and sometimes even closest in distance to Earth. Another detail that the author states that exxploring Venus is a good idea comes from paragraph 4. In paragraph 4. The author talks about how probably long ago Venus was covered in larage oceans and supported by various life because of finding very similar qualites that are Earth has. Such as valleys, mountains and craters.A third detail the author uses is stated in paragraph 7. In paragraph 7, The author talks about the technology that is called \"Mechanical Computers,\" that was first created in the 1800s. Later on it states that they improved this device so it would be more resistant to pressure, heat and other forces. The last detail the author presents is that Venus being difficult to observe, Makes it more interesting to figure out what all occurs on Venus. Overall in conclusion, Throught the text the author compares what features Earth has and has done to similarites Venus has. It also includes what scientist have done to try and help make it easier to vist\n\nVenus although it has alot of dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There lots times I patient One time I taking test long time different parts test I always done early I couldnt go next part Also couldnt talk get sets I really wanted go next part I much time left nothing Every one class got done early sense couldnt talk sat weighed testing time I think every one wanted go next part didnt body complained said anything day every year Every year Im alway patient That story Im patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From Lukes point of view saying that he wanted people to join participate is that in the begging of the story it said that Luke was working at a grocery store and at a bank. his friend named Don Resit invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke said yes because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nIn 1945 world war ll was over in Europe and a lot of countries were left in ruins. so that sentence can tell you that if you participated you could help fix countries.\n\n44 nations joined together to form the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation.\n\nIn August 1945 they received their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived there on August 14th.\n\nLuke was 18 when he arrived in Greece. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean. when Luke was helping out on his aunt Katies's farm it had prepared him for hard work. Luke also found time to have fun on board especially on return trips after the animals had been housed.\n\nLuke did a lot of things on his free time like, Table-tennis tournaments, fincing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. But being a seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. it lead his family to host a number of interrnational students and exchanged visitors for many years. Luke bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. So I think that from Lukes point of view he might have wanted people to participate in the seagoing Cowboys because it might be nice to help our countries and support us and also to help others around the world who needs help. That's what I think is coming from Luke Bomberger point of veiw.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that using technology to read a persons emotions could work. I think it could work in lots of ways like being able to read a students emotion might help you make them feel better.\n\nThe article states that if a person is down a happy ad of some sort might make them feel better. Using technology to read peoples emotions is also a good way to tell if somone is mad and would rather be left alone or sad and would like the support of friends and family. Using technology for emotions is a very good way to tell if thats why somone is not doing their very best at work or at school you can use that technology to tell if they are sad. using technology is a great way for people to see other peoples emotions because emotions are universal and knowing someons emotions is important. Emotions are a big part of life and emotions can almost determine how are day goes like if you're happy you might be happy the rest of the day or mad you might be mad all day or even suprised you migh be in shock all day. Emotions are apart of who we are so being able to tell another persons emotions might help us. It could even help us with doctors one might be sad and down all the time but not look it but with this new technology a doctor could tell that the person might be depressed. A persons emotions can change every day like being frightend if we had this new technology people would be able to detect if somone is frightend. Some people have trouble explaining how they feel and we wouldnt have to worry about that anymore because we have thought of a new way to tell. Using a device to help tell a persons emotions this is a great new way to help everyone. Thats why I think that using a new device to detect a persons emotions would help alot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "think relationship think Do think laughter big element relationship Laughter meaning laughing sounds indicating merriment derision Many people relationship excellent bad knew laughing enjoyed enjoyment one another First couple laughing enjoy together therefore makes want spend time one another Laughing s self let s couple better beyond The couple would obtained better connection Thus would able understand example couple excellent time would want keep sharing wonderful beyond Another reason laughter element relationship end letting couple stronger relationship thy would marvelous connection therefore would able understand Therefore things would succeed stronger better relationship Next time relationship think laughter element enjoyment connection time stronger relationship benefits laughter So next time laughing boyfriend girlfriend think guys benefiting laughing one another", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that aliens created the Face on Mars. Do you belive that to? I think that The Face on Mars is a natural landform here is why. \" The caption wrote huge rock formation\" which would most likely mean a natural landform from what N.A.S.A. stated when they unveiled the photo of the rock formation. Also has not found any evidence of life on Mars to this day.\n\nN.A.S.A. had also said \"That if there were objects in this picture like airplanes, on the ground or Egyptian-style pyraminds or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" Also in the pictures that are in the article ther are no signs of any homes or camps or signs of life.\n\nThis also proves the theory that it is a landform \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West which would mean that this is somthing similar to what we have seen on earth before. The Jet Propulsion Lab said \" Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nAlso if this was something created by aliens or an ancient civilization wouldn't it be deteroryating over time. From the rearch that NASA has done it seems that it has not changed at all over the past 25 years. So do you belive that aliens created The Face on Mars? I don't but mabye you do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This conclusion story provides sense hope future The girl upset failed test still hope happen next In story narrator says She lifted head This quote showing going quit give try succeeds The conclusion story leaves readers wonder try harder pass test second time When says when snow melts geese return shows us like geese going back hand fought journey Also says and hibiscus budding saying everything comes life its highest peak take test confidence The author concludes story show hope future going give Although upset failing test certainly ready pass spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the increased incidence of juvenile delinquency is being widely witnessed in most of the world. In this essay, I shall discuss why this change has occurred and propose feasible solutions to deter and penalize wrongful adolescent behaviour.\r\n\r\nThere are numerous compelling reasons why this is happening and the prominent one is decreased school attendance. Education plays a crucial role in shaping an individual's character, and going to school can teach youngsters good behaviour and discipline. As a result, fewer youngsters going to school can be attributed to the increased crime rates among teenagers. Additionally, vulnerable adolescents can be instigated and incited by bad companions on various social media. For example, many offenders of recent ram-raids confessed that they were instigated by others on Facebook. As can be seen, the increased incidence of juvenile delinquency caused by those factors is prominent.\r\n\r\nThe solutions are not simple but they do exist. People need to realize that the purpose of punishment is to deter the younger generation from committing more crimes, so making school attendance compulsory and restricting the use of social media is critical to eradicating this predicament. We can curb juvenile delinquency through education, which enables minors to discern right and wrong. Furthermore, imposing restrictions on social platforms can alleviate the adverse impacts on students. For instance, a recent survey conducted in Japan revealed that high school students that have limited access to electronic devices have a lower crime rate compared to others. Therefore, these measures can have a profound impact on this conundrum.\r\n\r\nGrowing crimes committed by children and teenagers are ubiquitous these days. This essay discussed how this phenomenon was caused and suggested methods to prevent the situation from worsening.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology is becoming majorly innovative as we go on the 21st century. In this article we learn about aa new \"Tool\" about face recongition acoording to the new software developed by Thomas Huang a professor at the unniversity of illinois. In the reeading this software claims to be a new sort of \"Da vinci code \" for face recongition. What this new technology does is it recongizes your emotions just by looking into your face, The tool would be able to tell how happy ,sad ,mad etc. you are. They do this by catching the movements of our face muscles to know what is going on in our emotions. Prof. Huang believes that this might be the next huge thing and can help us in our daily lives such as for example-video surgery, video games, classroom computer. The use of this technology for me for students in a classroom me being on in partciular i believe is not the most needed tool or necessary if we're being honest here. In the article it begins to state that we may use this in a classroom. I state that if a child in the classroom has a confusion or question they would ask for themselves that they are having trouble. I think that the facial recongition might be a little to personal for the students for example, They might be having a troubling day and they might get called out for being out of zone just because the facial emotons he portrays. I believe that this computer device software doesnt really have a life changing meaning to it. This might help some people if they want to know how someone feels, We are humans though will a computer really tell someone how were truly feelings inside . I think our eyes are as real or as close as it gets. What do you get having a whole software just to tell you or let you know what you already can see. Technology like this can be cool but if we really want to change the world we need to take charge and make better innovative ideas. What ever happened to verbal communication for others, This will take apart just another piece of communication we have eft towards each other by the way this 21st century is being held, All im saying is that is this tool truly necessary? With that having in mind i can get it predicting how someone can use this for other pruposes as such for video games or computer softwares so they can have a much surreal facial development for them. If we want this all over the US then it will not only be expensive but a waste of time. In the article it was stated that \" Most human communication is non verbal, including emotional communication ,so computers need to understand that too\" we get that we are getting used to so much advancements for us because the use of technology but seriously where does this get us ? us as humnas have such more deeper emotions than \"sad\" \"mad\" thats just surface hitting from what we actually feel and seem to show throughout our faces and body language. This is going to take away from what we can communiate with someone and try to make them feel better ,humans arent computers so we also need to understand that and stop trying to incooperate every single litle thing of technology i our lives when we dont need it despertly. In Conclusion i feel like this article from the perspective of prof.Huang can make me realize how maybe this can help game software development for a more real life like experience, But it doesnt take away how i feel that there is no such than better than our human instict when it comes to these things and we need to have more communications skills if this even becomes an ' Issue\" rather than ruining it and making this computer read how we \"feel\". Computer technologies are not humans they might help us in other things,but it should never replace our instincts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders faced building mast dirigibles dock detailed One obstacle builders faced go attaching The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress buildings frame Another obstacle would accumulated cost renevisions due first problem Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made buildings frame work These obstacles prevented mast ever used intended purpose", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Global warming and greenhouse gases are the biggest threat to the global environment and governments are working on different strategies to control the emission of greenhouse gases and save the environment. On the other hand, some people believe that raising fuel costs for combusting engines and fossil fuel using industries will overcome the problem, I am against this idea and discuss the Pros and cons of the price change in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst, a hike in price will not only affect cars and other vehicles but will cover all the transport system which depends on fossil fuels from cargo trucks to railway engines,which will bring the value of daily use products higher ,ultimately leading to inflation.Secondly,it will put an unnecessary burden on middle-class families, who either have to compromise with their living standards or use up their savings.Additionally,such increment can make people against governments.As recently I heard on the news that one government of the country need to resign after a fuel price increase and violent protest from citizens.Furthermore ,there is no guarantee that this decision will solve the problem.Because those people who can afford costly cars for them little more fuel prices not going to change anything\r\n\r\n supporters can argue that extra revenue from price differences can be invested in generating clean energy for vehicles but that can be done by redirecting other resources too.In spite of all the exercise of fossil fuel price, the problem stands still and make peoples life harder,so why we should go for such a solution?\r\n\r\nIn final say, I strongly oppose increasing petroleum products prices and look forward to other rational solutions for environmental problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt builders faced many obstacles allowing dirigibles dock Empire State Building As paragraph greatest reason safety The important issue blimps used hydrogen highly flamibale An accident would tragic heavily populated downtown Also nature proposed big obstacle well The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents existing law flying airships low urban areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would exploring venus be dangerous? Well first of all in the text is states that the planets surface is an average of over 800 degrees fahrenheit. Thats pretty hot compared to the temperatures that we get here in the US. Some countries may be hotter than others but no one is near 800 degrees. That would be a very dangerous trip for any one knowing how hot it is there. It also states that the atmospheric acid pressure ios 90 times greater that what we experience on pur own planet. It also states that this type of environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Yes I agree that many people would want to see up close what things are on Venus but now in time there is no way that we could get a human up there and get samples of things mainly becuase of the pressure and the temperature.\n\nStudying Venus is a definant worth pursuit but like i said earlier the teperature and the pressure is to hard for any human to get up there. Getting even a rock from Venus would help us learn things about the planet that we may not even know about today. They said in the passage that they have gotten robots out to venus but that is still hard to tell anything because Venus is a very cloudy planet, but even with a robot it is still hard to tell anything because of the fact that robots are good but they can't always work the way that you want them to work. In the passage it asks why scientists are discussing further visits to its surface? thats a good question that I would even ask them. The answer to that question is that astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well one have been the most Eart-like planet in ur solar system. It says that long ago venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. From what people and scientists have said today about Venus it doesn't sound like it has that anymore. If it is 800 degrees on that planet all the oceans are gone and I don't think that they will return because of that. If your planet is 800 degrees all your oceans are dried up and any type of water is dried up as well.\n\nI agree with the claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. If you go to Venus you will most likely die but if you don't go how are we going to study anything from that planet, and how are we going to learn anything about the planet itself. It says in the passage striving to meet the challenges presented by venus has values, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but shold be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. In the is paragraph is is saying that even though venus would be very hard to research that we should saty with venus and one day be able to go their and study. even if it is dangerous, some sientists want to go their even for the danger that it may constist of. Going to Venus would be awesome but at the same time I don't know if going their for the risks that it has would be the smartest thing to do. You could go their and 5 minutes leater be dead. I wouldn't want to do that because I would want to live. Some people are different than me because they like adventure and getting out of their comfort zone but for me that wouldn't be the case.\n\nGoing to venus would be a huge sucess but the risks that it has I don't know if going their is worth it. Being able to study everything that it has on the planet would be huge. Learing about the things that go on there would also be huge to know. In the end If you as an individual would like to go the Venus and study the planet and the things that go on their you should go for it even at the dangers that it holds. If you are the type of person that enjoys adventure and learning about new things, I would say that this is the type of adventure that you would want to go on. I say this because of the simple reason that Venus has never been searched in depth, I mean in paragraphy two it states that spacecrafts that have landed their have only been able to survive for a few hours. obviously you could explore a little bit with this amount of time but with an entire planet it would be hard to only have a few hours to explore. you could definantly get a decent way with a few hours but because its an entire planet it would be very hard to discover new things because the craft can't go very fast and the craft can't move as fast as a human would be able to with a few hours. would you rather have multiple humans go out their and research or would you rather have one spacecraft go and research only one way for a few hours. Even if the humans know that they most likely would survive for very long. they could grab somethings that they could put into the shuttle and then the shuttle would return home and the scientists would be able to study later wen the shuttle returns home with all the possible things that the astronauts found on Venus. If Humans went out on a mission to study it states that 97 perscent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmostphere. (Paragraphy3) You know how hard it would be for someone to survive in that type of weather. If you send a astronaut to go and research you are basically asking one of you men to go up there and risk his life to study what is up there.\n\nIn the passage it says that Venus is often referred to as Earth's twin But I disagree with that statement. Venus is way more toxic and way for dangerous for humans to go up and study. For one thing the temperature is way to high and the amount of chemicals that could possibly kill you are things that are way to dangerous for any human to go and study. If you send a man up there you are asking him to die to research things that could be useful. if you step onto venus's land you are most likely going to die because of the difference on everything from what your used to. even is suits you are most likely going to die because of the differences. I know I wouldn't want to die.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, it is observed by some authorities and politicians that people have been preferring to be a parent later mid-ages when compared to the past. Economic reasons and career ambition have caused that the people postponed having a child. I believe that having a child in later age has more advantages not only individuals but also for society.\r\nFirst of all, the human population has been increasing rapidly for a long time. Due to the locations’ high density, the living cost has increased suddenly. Moreover, the cost of having a baby is extremely high. So, most of the couples have decided to birth a child after they stabilize their economic power. On the other hand, especially after the idea of liberalism have been spreading all over the world since 1980, people have become more selfish and only focused on their career. For instance, if a woman has a baby at 30 years old, which is the most important age for her career, she has to pause her career for a minimum of 2 years.\r\nHigh population in big cities mostly decreases the quality of the education system. If a society has a low number of students, the teachers are able to teach them more efficiently and productively. In other words, to have selected and quality people increase the production and profitability around the country. Moreover, to find a job is heavy for the citizens in the countries which have a huge population. If parents would choose to be parent later age, the population decreases, but at the same time, the unemployment rate will decline. On the other hand, the only disadvantage of this issue is a low workforce. But, after industry 4.0, there will be no need people to work in factories because of the robots and machinery powers would do more work than a human being.\r\nIn conclusion, in this contemporary world, people tend to have a child in a later age if compared with their parents. I am strongly convinced that, thanks to this situation, the countries and individuals have been benefited in many ways as aforementioned.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Intro:\n\nI know some people would love not to have to drive cars around and that's all well and good, but what people don't understand is that driverless cars are dangerous in my opinion. I would rather be safe driving in a car, than to be riding in the car with no driver\n\nBody:\n\nLet's just say that if someone driving a regular car and someone were in a driverless car, it would be the person in the driverless cars fault. Why? Because they don't think they did anything wrong and that they're following the driving laws. I don't think the person that was actually driving in the normal car is at fault, they may seem old fashioned but at least its safer.\n\nBeing the cofounder of the Google company doesn't mean you know everything, especially about transportation. This is just an idea but it doesn't mean it should actually happen. I understand that some people love cars that drive for them now but at least they still have steering power. I do however like that cars can brake for you when you're not paying attention. And I know that even driving in normal cars is dangerous, but its much safer being behind the wheel than to be just sitting in the car doing nothing.\n\nDriving shouldn't be fun. It should be about learning, and to me learning isn't very fun. Driving to me should be a symbol of growing up not so you can go pick up your friends and go out. Maybe on some occasions, but overall its just a means of transportation from one place to another. But hey, this is just my point of view.\n\nConclusion:\n\nSome people may not agree and call me crazy, but at least I know I'll be safe when I'm actually being the steering wheel. I would rather not see so many people in the hospital or dead because they wanted to not have to drive to their destination on their own. Driving isn't a terrible thing, it's when people start getting fed up is the terrible thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My dad girlfriend named She two kids one thats seven years old one four years old The oldest one loves skateboard The youngest one kind spaz jumped airplane would This one day I going go skateboarding park wanted come didnt even know ride skateboard went park got realized didnt skateboard I let use skateboard I didnt problem useing its I didnt get use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The Facial Action Coding System can help the teacher, helps students bring a smile to their face, and helps people tell how other people are feeling. The technology will help a teacher understand how some students are feeling so the teacher can know what to do differently. It can put people in a better mood by just smiling. The technology can also help people see what kind of emotion other people are feeling.\n\nThe new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can help a teacher understand how their students are feeling. For example, if some students are bored, the teacher can try to do something more exciting. In paragraph 6 it states, \"A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This shows that a teacher would know if a student is confused and could explain to a student more to help them. This new technology helps both students and teachers.\n\nThe technology can help students bring a smile to their face. By just smiling even if you're in a bad mood, can make you feel better. The text says, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\"(paragraph 9) This means that moving your facial muscles can help you be in a better mood. It may help students smile more, which can make them feel better.\n\nThe Facial Coding System can help friends and family recognize each other feelings. Instead of wondering if someone is not in a good mood, the technology will tell you. In paragraph 5 it says, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" This explains that you can tell how someone is feeling by the look on their face, but the technology will help you know how they're really feeling. This can help a person cheer someone up if their depressed or sad.\n\nThe new Facial Action Coding System will be valuable in a classroom to help read the emotional expressions of students. It will help teachers understand how students are feeling, put a smile on people faces, and help people recognize how other people are feeling. This new technology can help many different people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time patient train dog sit boy I command puppy My dog instead sitting runs jump grabs treat hand I go try grab treat back gulps While walking grab collar take walk bolts away After chasing hours finally stops looks waiting run CAPS Im done chasing lets go walk please I say slowly loose patience I begin walk toward slowly I get close enough grab collar dog bolts leaving bunch dust behind CAPS done I scream walk away anger I begin leave go hill house I go room ready sleep The next morning go outside try train dog I lost patience yesterday stormed today ready work hard keep patience CAPS I yell waiting dog running doesWith first command tell dog sit I dont give treat I say sits Finally progress waiting I give treat starts waging tail To see understood say He sat got another treat After work dog I begin ask things sometimes doesnt listen times That time I patient dog teach train definently paid", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am arguing against the development of these cars. Because I believe that they are not safe and they shouldn't have made them. The car could mess up and cause the whole car to wreck and the person thats inside of the car\n\nI am really against this idea This idea is an amazing idea but its dangeous because it's rsking other life's. For a car to work right and to know wehich way to go its going to need a whole lot of sensors. But what if one of the sensors mess up and makes the car get into a accident.\n\nIn conclussion I say that us humans should not have a car like this because we are also putting ourselves and others in danger. And im pretty\n\nsure that nobody wants to get hurt or die over a malfunction with there automatic sensor car. I think that we should just stick with the basic cars and let the owners control there vehicle how we do in this world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally, I feel that the technology called the Facial Action Coding System is not valuable. It may seem interesting that a computer can tell what emoitons someone one is feeling, but it doesn't make it valuable. We can also tell what emotions people feel too.\n\nThis technology that they are using only calculates what emotions they feel. For example, in the first paragraph it says, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" They've used a computer to analyze what the Mona Lisa was feeling in the portrait. The computer predicted but is not all accurate. She might have felt more fearful than happy. Most facial expressions are universal. That meaning, that if someone smiles you can't think right off the bat that they are happy. They may feel hurt therefore not so happy as you thought.\n\nWhat's the point of the technology if us humans can tell how a friend is feeling, based on the look of their face. We may not be 100 percent accurate, but we may know how they feel. For example, say you've known someone for a while now, you would probably know what their expressions look like. The only thing you won't know what their thinking but you will know what they feel. Another thing we have an advantage on, is the way our friend speaks. Emotion isn't just based on our looks, it can be based off of the way we speak too.\n\nOn the other hand, I also feel that the technology can useful too. I feel that it can be well used in painting espically in a portrait. I say that because it can be difficult to see what a person felt in the portrait. The technology that they use can be used to scan the portrait and tell us what they might have felt. It can go though a deep scan and could scan the 40 major muscles that we have on our face that shows our expression.\n\nIn conclusion, I personally feel that the technology called the Facial Action Coding System is not valuable. Eventhough we can't fully tell what somone is feeling we can still predict. The technology that they use is also predicting. It's just more accurate. Therefore it's not all that useful to us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "stepped warm house cold blowing air He slowly walked staggering ice barn The barn unlike It pitching barn trained many softball pitchers catchers barn including I already barn I turned heater I warming wrist flicks ks one leg throw arm circles screw ball flicks My catcher caught ball everytime said Let see screwball rise ball I took place mound threw screw ball It curved right glove cracked CAPS Excellent Hey Give high five said I slapped hand said CAPS CAPS good Now throw rise said I threw one gave pointers I thrown three rise balls You good Just keep legs open arm flicking little said He never lost patient Not ever one rise ball almost hit ceiling He kept working After many pitches I finally got We finished pitching session ten minutes later told I great He said would work Right I asked CAPS day said cheerfully He gave hug I love Not dad Also great man Happy funny sweet patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? Venus poses several dangerous obsticles to pursuit because of how dangerous the planet actually is, which makes the time of pursuing the planet not reasonable and not worth the time for scientist. The author says, \"studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" It is hard already to study Venus because of its atmoshere, which is made up of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide, makes the planet Venus the hottest planet in our solar system. Which creates big problems for spacecrafts to land on the surface of the planet because of the intense heat that Venus produces.\n\nIn paragraph 2, the author says, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this isse explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more that three decades.\" The author gives good reason to why trying to land a spacecraft is not the best option to obsevre the planet. Instead, focus on another planet that is well worth the time and money of a spacecraft. It would only take moments for the spacecrafts to be liquefied after standing on Venus's surface. Spending more time on a different planet that has an atmosphere and geological features similar to earth would be ground breaking for science and especially NASA.\n\nIn paragraph 3, the explains, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenges are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" Venus is too hot for us to explore. Landing a spacecraft would only last moments because of how severe the weather is on Venus. An environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals. Also, Venus's geological landscape and weather like erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes.\n\nIn paragraph 6, the author states, \"Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective\" Since entering Venus's atomsphere is deadly, even hovering over the planet is not enough for finding more information and observations about the hot planet. Hovering will only give scientist limited details about the planet. Also, having no light shining out of the planet makes it difficult for scientist to observe the planet.\n\nNot being able to observe every characteristics of Venus would not make it well worth the mission to study more about Venus.\n\nPursuing Venus is not well worth the time and money for NASA or any other scientist, which does not make it reasonable for scientist to study and want to go more in depth about the hot planet Venus. Venus poses several dangerous obsticles to pursuit because of how dangerous the planet actually is. Overall, Venus is just too dangerous for people to explore, its not convienent for astronomers and NSA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Architects constructing Empire State Building encountered many obstacles mooring mast During s dirigibles hailed transportation future The idea making mast wasnt farfetched first As construction neared completion many concerns arose Many dirigibles outside United States use highly flammable gas known hydrogen Another problem docking blimps winds Empire State Building constantly shifted forced rear dirigibles rotate around mooring mast Lastly law formed restrict airships entering urban area low altitudes When problems came together idea mooring dirigibles quietly disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions sould be valuable. I would want to see people's different emotions from the face from the past and today. This could be a new science technology that we ever made. It's just like a math and science subject, but trying to figure out more of different people's emotions. They could be angry or happy or have any other emotions.\n\nThis technology would be great for school education, maybe in college. It could be a new subject for a science class. For these six emotions for the class, it would be a great class to pass a high school class. Doing this is pretty cool to do. Out of all the science classes and math classes it could prove that emotions for humans would be great.\n\nThat is what we should do for the future science class talking about emotions. It would be great for it to pass a science class in high school, or college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by many people that government should responsible for the arts, while others argued that spending money on fundamental human rights such as health and education is a responsibility for the government to safeguard. In my opinion, the argument that it is better to spend money on education and healthcare is an argument that is both advantageous and disadvantage by many. The two views will be thoroughly discussed and analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many several benefits that government should spend a large sum of money on healthcare and education. Firstly, low-income families provide a chance to have an effective medical treatment such as the exorbitant cost of medicine. In addition, the authorities can maintain the health of the population by increasing a spot for checking their health problem. Secondly, children and university students is an important role in developing countries. If all children and university students, the most significant resource for the country's development, have more education opportunities, the country will be more competitive at an international level.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only healthcare policy but also diets and a clean environment that government should spend money on.To start with, the government should play a role in an individual's diet. For instance, if citizens have a lack power to buy a healthy diet, they can provide health problems such as high cholesterol and high level of sugar. This mean government should pay attention to the human diet. Moreover, it will provide many benefits if the government spent the money on this such as free healthy meal \r\n\r\nTo summarize, education and healthcare is a significant part of human right that government should have a responsibility with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is exploring and studying Venus a great idea? The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Human curiosity has gone beyond on willing to do anything to find out how Venus was created and find out the purposes it has, and to also collect any natural resoures it has to study them.\n\nVenus is a challenging planet to study but it is the closet one to Earth. The author compares these two planets by their density and size, including the distance. They go on explaining why it is hard to study Venus by describing the weather and geology, and comparing to Earth's impediments. In paragraph 2, it states, \"... not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades...\" meaning spacecrafts don't even last more than a few hours there because there are possiblities that they might get destroyed and lose researches.\n\nIn paragrapgh 6, it states, \"... researchers are working on innovations that would that would allow machines to last long enough...\"\n\nThis is another reason why researchers work hard on inventing machines that are capable to last in Venus to collect data and resources to bring back on Earth to study them. The author goes on telling us that some electronics have lasted three weeks in that condition and they don't require electricity at all unlike modern devices that are sensitive to extreme physcial conditions.\n\nTo sum it all up, Venus is a worthy pursuit\n\ndespite the dangers to study. This rises up human curiosity in wanting to learn more of Venus. They will take any risk to get close and learn what the planet is made up of and what to use to get information from it. It is proved to be the challenging planet to oberserve closely and why it is risky to do this misssion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A classroom isn't always everyone's first choice of being in when one is bored or confused. So, what if a student's emotion in a class can change just by a computer? It can change one's perspective on the class. Knowing the feelings and emotions of a student is valuable and can improve their learning ability.\n\nThe better the environment for the student the better the ability of learning and staying on task. Being able to know a student's expression is an enhancement from automatically assuming how they are feeling just by their facial expression without analyzing it \"professionally\". In the article the author states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D' Alto). Just by\n\nanalyzing someone's face, it can change the lesson for them in order to be more alert and attentive. For some it is difficult to change a lesson because not everyone works at the same rate. So being able to change the lesson can boost up their learninig comprehension, making it better for the student to get a higher grade in the class. Higher grades mean good college options, and good college options mean greater opportunities.\n\nThe technology of detecting one's emotions can have a positive effect on the person, the impact it has on people can help out not just for classrooms but it can also help out for different types of environments. Being able to control how an environment works creates a better place for everyone. Instead of just assuming one's emotion, the computer can help to analyze them, allowing for them to adjust to their surroundings and enhance their understanding of what they're doing. Althought it might seem extraneous to use a computer for emotions, it can lead to great advantages for people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time volleyball team went I one last people bus means I one last order I stayed patiently everyone ordered I talked friends waited Next I figured I going eat CAPS cheese burger fry large drink CAPS I watched clock eyes got droppy CAPS lady said CAPS I take order said I told I wanted put register I began wait A couple minutes later I got order Finally patient I got food That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Hold on! Can we actually 'calculate' emotions---like math homework?\" Prof. Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institue for Advances science at the University of Illinois made a software that recognizes emotion. Prof. Thomas Huang's product may seem not very useful, but it has plenty of potential in the ways society can use it. The software of Prof. Thomas Huang is valuable because the software can improve time used on the internet and it can also improve the effectiveness of classes.\n\nMany people, in today's society, spend a lot of time on the internet. For shopping, playing games, or doing assignments. With the program the Prof. Huang made the time used on the internet can improve and give way to a new kind of advertising. If someone was playing a game on the internet an ad will pop up. If the person were to use the software or the software was applied to the internet then, \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" With the software, the time used on the internet will be more pleasing as people will see ads that will benefit them rather than receiving ads that have no relevance to them. Companies could also take advantage of these and see which ads are received well or are received badly. They can stop producing the products that are received badly in ads and promote the good products more resulting in more success for the company. Although using the software of Prof. Huang for the internet would be appreciated, it would not help us learn more.\n\nA machine that identifies emotions can point out whenever a person is in need of help or is not interested in classes. When Prof. Huang created his software, he predicted it could be used for classroom computers. He said, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" As Prof. Huang predicts, having students interested in the lessons will improve grades and cofused students do not need to face social anxiety when approaching the teacher. Instead, the teacher can help them without having to wait for confused students to ask for help.\n\nThe software of Prof. Huang calculates the emotions that are shown to it. Then it gives percentages of the most likely emotion that is shown. If this software were to be distributed around the world, how would it be used by people in other countries? How would people use it for their own personal uses?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think tecknology like this would most defintely help teachers understand whats going on with students. most students are good at hiding their true emotions they will come to school with a smile but really they are feeling depressed.\n\nThis tecknology would help teachers read their students better and be able to help with any issues. Why would this be good tecknology to have? It would be great because teachers then would be able to prevent fights allowing more students to be at school instead of suspended or expelled, Would make students open up more if teachers knew what kids were sad and which ones were happy.\n\nI think this could be the answer to school bullying because the kids with the most anger are probably the blulliers and the kids who are felling sad or the ones who are felling fearful are the kids who are being bullied.\n\nThis tecknology would be very useful for schools, teachers, and students. with tecknology like this I dont see why every school could'nt be a safe happy enviornment where all kids feel safe and content, and even teachers would feel content cause they will understand how every student is feeling during that class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a very interesting article. In it the author talks about the planet Venus and the struggle of people and scientists trying to explore Venus. The author even goes on to say that exploring Venus is a worthwhile idea. I do not believe that the author does a great job supporting this idea because they don't bring the idea into context until the very end of the article and then they give no solid evidence or backing for this idea. It is just an idea that the author throws out at the end of the article to make the reader imagine and think of the future.\n\nThroughout the article it talks about the exploration of Venus, what attempts have already been taken to explore and what could be done in the future to explore and yet it never really talks about the benefits that could be gained from the exploration. A clear example of this is in the fourth paragraph, \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe, and scientifically productive?\" This piece of textual evidence shows just how the author makes a claim about the benefits of exploring Venus but has no clear evidence to back it up. They explain how Venus is much like Earth and is very close and could be the easiest to reach and even says that \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable...\" and yet the reader is still left with the question of Why? Why would it be so great to return to Venus? How would we even be returning in the first place? There are so many questions left unanswered.\n\nThen there is the very last paragraph of the article. This is where the author makes a bold statement but does't clarify anything and just leaves the reader wondering. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). In this statement the author again states that exploring Venus would be very worthwhile and yet they have nothing but an opinion with no solid evidence to back it up. When the author says, \"human curiosity will likely lead us...\" that is nothing but a maybe or a possiblilty. With all the dangers and expenses it would take to explore Venus, I would hope for more than a possibility of the exploration actually being beneficial to mankind.\n\nExploring Venus is something that I see as interesting and extremely cool, even with all of the dangers that it has with it, I hope some day exploring it is an option. Yet before I would send any man on an exlporation to Venus I would need to know how exactly it could be beneficial. I would need to know the benefits to science that could be made. I would need to know more than just a 'maybe' or a 'possibly'. This is what the author would need to do to more clearly support his claim. If they want to persuade the reader to believe in their own opinions and ideas they need to add more solid evidence and backing to their claims. Never state an idea without giving good support to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think computer one inventions ever They help education make everything traveling It helps education always use computers help kids learn important information example study something websites specialy made studing Also sites teach little kids read write Allmost computers days Some even give computers kids use study use computers textbooks get high test scores Thats computers help education A second reason generally makes everything For example instead writing essay school take hours hand findout filled missspelled words Instead type quick use spell check I never heard one person say computer nt make life Another example find information new dog Instead goind library spending minutesYou simply open internet search find info need seconds That s computer make every thing The last reason one Traveling without computer With go buy tickets In fact I nt even remember like online computer go parts websites easy areselfs places traveling mail also I nt sent card years Instead I email It quicker reliable That traviling people mail Over computer one helpful things ever technology upgraing daily soon even things While much computer bad people sould nt interact internet The computer games handy almost time That think computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes useing this new technology for facial action coding system can help identifing human emotions. Just like looking at a freiends face you can tell what they are feeling and how they are. Reading a person emotions can be helpful in most case seeing if they are having a good day or have a bad one or just a regular one. By looknig at a face can tell a whole lot about that perosn.\n\nThe system identifing your face just by the muscular parts moving. In pargraph 7 it tell's you to look in a mirror by raiseing your lips at corners of your mouth, then squint your eyes slightly, and holding that raise the outer parts of your cheeks up toward your eyes this shows you are happy. the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the faced and looking at all 44 major muscles. It has classified all 6 major emotions in a person/human happiness, suprise ,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness an associsated ech iwth the characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\n\nThis technology an aslo tell when a person is lieing there are muscles called orbiculais oculi pars palpabraeus that makes crows feet arounf your eyes but in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic witch is a major different muscle and to experts when a smiling politican or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nHaving this new techology in the world opens up lots of ne thing for reading a students or persons emotion they help with a lot of thing and reading the mona lisa smile or tell if she was not happy reading rach muscle was terific example on how this new system could work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Rather than saying that we are living in a modernized city, it is better to say that we are living in a congested city. With the development of many buildings and Tech parks, it resulted in narrow places left for building homes. However, in notable number of nations, more and more people are becoming fascinated in finding about the history of the house or the building they live in. There may be varied number of reasons for this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, some people believe in the times what people experienced while living at this place. For example, if a family wants to shift to a new building, they will enquire the old tenants, how the time went on, while living in this house. However, if they feel good after listening to them, they will shift to the house without any fear. But in contrast, if they figure out something bad happened to that family, they will try to search for another building. In addition, some will try to know about the history, in order to say something great about their living place, and make others feel unlucky for not having such a house.\r\n\r\nMostly people try to find out the required information from the neighbors, who might be living there for a long time or may be from someone who knows completely about the history of the building. For instance, an individual mainly wants to know about the history to get awared of the facilities available, and also to know the consequences that result from certain actions. Like mentioned earlier, they can get the relevant information from the neighboring flat members, if in case of an apartment.\r\n\r\nFinally, to conclude, recent statistics by various house brokers show that people are interested in finding about the history of houses. Some people may do it for not getting into trouble in the future, while some will do it for other purposes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When talking censorship libraries I nt think people work libraries decide goes shelves The people community say goes shelves ones thats going library anyway I believe everybody intitle opinion I think certain materials removed For example music could offensive therefore I m saying music nt totally removed libraries I m saying offensive music removed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit many ways The cyclist affected setting depressing frightening When cyclist first sees speed limit sign mph says Sometimes life cruel Because go mph considering s bike After seeing sign snake crosses path Hes frightened looked like diamond back trying keep balance ease past Since main problem cyclist faced lack water dry long hills seem make weak tired Tumble weeds crossed past water sight That features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are coming and I think that the development of these will bring a positive impact on life. Driveless cars will help people go where they need to go.I think\n\nIt will also help them with gettting through traffic more safetly. I think it will also prevent more accidents form happing.\n\nDriveless Cars will tell people where they need to go. For instance if someone lives in a crowded place like New York City and he is a new worker for a big company he\n\nwill not know probably how to get to work. These driveless cars however will tell him what street he is on and what turn he needs to make.\n\nDriveless cars will help get people through traffic. An example a person is on the interstate and something is in the road and you don't know if you should drive over it or not. As paragraph 9 states \"The driveless cars will have senors\" that move the car toward a safe position to where he neither runs over the object or it goes underneath his car.\n\nDriveless cars will prevent more accidents form happing. As paragraph 8 states that Some manufacture add information systems that use heads up displays. For an example if someone is driving alond a road and she has to pick up the erugent phone call form her mom and she gets destracted by all of the talking they are doing and she ends up in the wrong lane. The driveless car will have the senors like in paragraph 9 that help her shift to the lane safetly and efficently.\n\nDriveless cars might be the game changer of the future. These ideas could lead to more new infentions that could help the economy. This car to could help make\n\npeople change there minds on what type of car they want to buy. A driveless car or would they want a driving car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the developement of driverless cars. I have always been a worrier and this would push me over the edge. This would make me so anxious to be in a car or even driving next to one. There are so many things to think about when we decide to use these driverless cars. I am also a germaphobe. I don't feel comfortable in taxis and Ubers. Public driverless cars are just glorified taxis. There are a few pros but if you think about it, there are more cons.\n\nDriverless cars would be a hazard. Even though there is a 3-D model of the car's surroundings, the technology could fail. Technology has always been a skeptical source. It could be programmed wrong or the user might do something different than how they are supposed to. The model of the surrounding that is feeding to the machinery could be off by a little (or a lot), and crash.\n\nAnother problem about driverless cars is the blame. People get in car crashes now and sure, they can get in arguments about who's to blame. With driverless cars, Is it the car or the person in it not doing anything? In the article, the author mentioned \"GM has developed driver's seats to vibrate when the vehicle s in danger of backing into an object\". In my opinion, you shouldnt have to have your seat vibrated to notify that you might be hit or hit someone. You should be very aware of your own safety. Plus, if you have to sit in the driver's seat anyway, might as well drive!\n\nOverall, I think it would be more efficient and easier to drive yourself places. You wouldn't have to constantly worry about crashing. Your safety in the hands of technology. This might scare some people. Better off let humans get the blame for hitting someone than a machine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Competitive sports are increasingly becoming part of the core subjects in school. The inclusion of such sports is a highly controversial issue as some people believe that competitive sports have a profound impact on the child’s overall development whereas others say that they have an adverse effect. I will shed some light on both the views and then give my opinion in this matter.\nOn one hand, competitive sports are highly beneficial as they teach many of the life skills such as teamwork and acceptance of failures. The main purpose of these sports is to leverage ones’ potential and build unity. Moreover, they teach how failure is a stepping stone to success. These skills are immensely useful later on life. A good illustration of this is a survey published by Harvard Business School, which states that 80% of today’s successful CEOs were active competitive sports players in their childhood. In other words, lessons of sports learnt in the childhood are undoubtedly useful subsequently in corporate life. \nOn the other hand, there is a negative connotation attached that such sports increase the stress levels. Since competitive sports are highly performance oriented and winning is the ultimate goal, students are likely to remain under constant pressure. Recent statistics published by UK Education Board states that institutes that have introduced competitive sports in their core curriculum have seen a 40% increase in anxiety levels amongst their students as compared to those that have sports only for recreational purpose. Although stress is a concern, it could be argued that it is a person or situational dependent and could be addressed by the school and parents by taking appropriate measures.\nAfter having discussed pertinent points of both views, I have drawn a logical conclusion that competitive sports should be part of the school subjects, however, it is important for the society to teach children to manage the negative consequences associated with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Through the development of driverless cars, there are many postive or negative aspects that can be contributed to their manufacturing. Overall, I beleive that with these developments and engineering that has gone into the manfucaturing of driverless cars, we have improved the safety of regular automotive vehicles and the standards that safety should be set at. While the development of accessories that are created for safety are commonly used in these driverless car, these safety measures can be used in development of everyday vehicles.\n\nWhen creating the idea of driverless cars, many furutrists have come upon the idea that we do not need smarter cars; we need smarter roads. The development of roadways that General Motors and engineers at Berkeley tried to use were incredibly advanced. The roadways at General Motors provided the invention of an electrical cable that was to be embedded in the track, this would send radio signals to a receiver that was on the front end of the car. The engineers at Berkeley used magnets that had alternating polarity. With this new-found developments, these people created smart-road systems that worked incredibly efficently. With these developments that were made, the realization that smarter roadways may not be the correct option, but smarter cars truly hold the future. This lead to a new wave of developmental ideas.\n\nWith the development of smarter cars, automakers had come upon the manufacturing of accessories that would help everyday cars. While smart cars really do need an abundance of sensors, often times regular cars can be improved with these added. With the development of anti-lock brakes, the sensors were able to exhibit a better response and control compared to that of a human driver. The development of smarter cars has lead to furthering the improvements in sensors and the computer software and hardware that makes driving safer.\n\nIn 2013, BMW had annouced the devlopment od \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" This vehicle was able to drive partially by itself, but int he event of work zones and accidents, it needed the assistance of human drivers. Soon, automotive companies realized that it was a necessity to have a way for a car to gain a driver's attention. Some of these companies had seat that would vibrate, an announcement system, and flashing lights on the windshield and other displays. Through this abrupt realization, manufacturers have begun the merging of these concepts into everyday vehicles.\n\nThrough the creation of driverless cars, we have made everyday cars safer and more reliable. They are now less liekly to cause accidents. If we further the development of driverless cars, who knows where the roadways will be in twenty years? We could have the ubiquitous use of driverless cars, perhaps they could become further assimilated, maybe laws will change for safer roadways. Perhaps our everyday cars will be the safest as can be. We really don't know, but so far, the develp,ent of driverless cars has seemingly revolutionized the automaking world and planted a new seed in everyone's minds about the future which only we can change.\n\nIn conclusion, because of the devlopment of driverless cars, we have made roadways safer with the creation that have come about through their manufacturing. Without the thought of using driverless cars and making vehicles and roadways smarter, there would be a lack of development in the technological safety of vehicles. There would be far more accidents because of the lack of ability to brake, which has been stopped since of the perfection of anti-lock brakes, and there would be a lack of ability for driver's to remain focused on the roadways without the development of vibrating seats in order to gain a driver's attention when they are veering off the road. They have truly revolutionized the car manking industry and the future that we will hold.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the media and its offshoots are playing a vital role in everyone’s life. Because of which, there is a widespread criticism that states the role of advertisements being telecasted in television or shared in any of the social media seems to be demoralising and carry little benefits. While I concede to this belief about the maligning impacts of commercials, I have some reservations in completely banning those. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, we have been acclimated to watching advertisements since more than 3 decades. Interestingly, the role of media has become enormously aggressive such that most of the times it annoys people when they are watching any interesting content on television or in any electronic gadgets. For example, there are multiple brands of shampoos and hair dyes being endorsed by various film fraternities. It is a regrettable fact that being a social icon, the celebrities support such products without assessing the ill nature of the additives present. Furthermore, when people start to use these products, it leads to skin irritation and rashes instead of giving the promised outcomes. \r\n\r\nHaving said that, are advertisements really behove to the benefit of people? If it does so, it would not need any sort of endorsement to be made in the media. For example, there are no such posters made for buying food from any established food outlets such as McDonalds or KFC. Therefore, people should not fall into the trap of buying those advertised products without weighing their health or skin compatibility with those chemicals. However, if any, of the products are supported by the government or any civic societies, then we can buy those products after careful consideration. \r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, advertisements are made only to reap revenues by hoodwinking unbelievable benefits to the layman. It is our imperative responsibility to examine the advertisements before deciding whether to buy the product or not. Therefore, I agree that advertisements are always deceptive to consumers and people should not fall into their traps.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock A one thousandfoot dirigible attached single cable tether would add stress buildings framed dirigible placed top building The buildings frame would strengthened modified accommodate situation Over worth modifications would installed framework obstacles builders faced safety The dirigibles ran hydrogen flammable Another obstacle weather The winds shifted top Empire State building shifting due violent air currents One last obstacle existing law airships could fly low urban areas The idea dirigible quietly disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph wants tell people shes going take test try Shes going like flowers needs time budd", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming more popular and breaking barriers when it comes to inputing technology within vehicles. Manufacturers have been coming up with new ideas and gadgets to improve the safety of transportation for the individual driving, passengers, and pedestrians. Many people believe that these advances will improve safety while others believe it can be detrimental. My view or position on the development of driverless cars is that these cars will be more beneficial than damaging to human's safety.\n\nWhen looking at the features of driverless cars I believe that these nuances are what drivers are in need of. Many accidents are caused because of drivers being fatigue, under the influence of some sort, reckless driving, weather conditions, or a dangerous road. In the article it states that automakers are creating sensors that will allow the car to detect upcoming \"out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" Skids and rollovers can be caused by weather problems but, the sensor can brake and reduce power from the engine which can prevent a fatal accident. Braking and reducing power from the engine can also be beneficial to drivers who may fall asleep or\n\nunable to control the wheel properly. This fea will be able to stop before they crash into an object. The article states that this is \"allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This statement makes me believe that driverless cars can be a better crash preventer than humans adding onto its safety qualities.\n\nThe aricle states that General Motors or GM is one vehicle that has created seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. Many aren't capable of looking through their rearview mirrors or back window to see if there is enough space for them to back up resulting in them hitting another car or maybe even a person. When the driver feels the vibration in the seat it will allow them to become aware and brake before they cause an accident. I believe that this improvement in car vehicles is a another positive aspect of driverless cars.\n\nThe driverless cars aren't also the only one controlling the vehicle. Driverless cars provide what some could call help. The article states that \"Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" This feature is beneficial to drivers that may just want to put their car in cruise but, when the car feels that it needs some human assistance it will alert you.\n\nConcluding my viewpoint, I stand strongly behind the further development of driverless cars. In my opinion, the positive aspects of driverless cars outweigh the negative aspects. The saying \"humans are humans and they make mistakes\" also, makes me believe that having technology inside vehicles will lessen the percentage of mistakes occuring. Driverless cars will make roads safer and supply the human with comfort that if anything is going wrong, their car will be able to prevent any damage that could be caused before they could.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is becoming increasingly common for people to want to discover the history of the houses or buildings in which they live. This essay will explore the reasons for this phenomenon and how people can research the history of their homes. \r\n\r\nOne reason for this growing interest in house history is the desire for a sense of identity and belonging. With the busy and fast-paced lifestyle of modern society, people are often looking for ways to connect with their local community and feel a sense of purpose. Discovering the history of their homes or neighborhoods is one way to achieve this goal. For example, in Taiwan, street tours to explore the local history have become popular, especially in historical districts such as Dadaocheng, the central business district of Taipei in the 18th century. \r\n\r\nAdditionally, modern technology has made it easier to research house history. People can use the internet to search for information and academic research on the subject. They can also connect with former residents or community members through social media or other online platforms. Furthermore, movies and YouTube videos provide entertaining ways for people to learn about the history of their homes. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the desire for a sense of identity and belonging, along with advancements in technology, has led to a growing interest in discovering the history of the houses or buildings in which people live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that it is of crucial importance to keep both home and workplace tidy and clutterless. I strongly agree with the statement mentioned above, as it helps one in saving time and money. Also, it helps in leaving a long-lasting impression on the people around them.\nKeeping things clean and well-organized in both personal and professional lives can help one in keeping track of them. This, in turn, facilitates one in saving time, especially in crunch situations where one needs to act promptly. Morning is an excellent example of such situations when people usually to go to work. Disorganized people spend several minutes in finding essential items like keys, wallet and mobile phone, thereby wasting valuable time. In many cases, the items are never found, leading to further frustration, as it results in the loss of money, apart from time.\nIn addition, keeping things tidy and clutter-free at both home and in the office provides one with a chance of leaving a long-lasting impression on others. The qualities, as mentioned earlier, are always linked to one’s personality, which is continuously being judged by others. Neighbors and workplace colleagues always feel attracted to one that keeps their personal belongings clean and in an orderly fashion. Based on such good qualities, one might be able to establish good terms with the surrounding neighbors or with bosses, eventually helping them succeed in both personal and professional lives.\nIn conclusion, keeping belongings organized and neat saves one time and money. Besides, it also opens new doors for one to establish better relationships in both personal and professional capacities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting make cyclist feel hopeless realizing short cut The cyclist growing realization could drop heatstroke rides along Also building sees miles Welch s Grape Juice Factory The cyclist driven deeper despair feels hope lost sees building As rides song ORGANIZATION rattled aroung dry honeycombs deteriorating brain At point cyclist believes death inevitable He saysown death inevitable He says with luck Id hit bump lodge one throat talking pebbles placed mouth Finally cyclist reaches small bait shop hope returned drank deeply sink The desert setting lack water shelter people cause mans concern later panic life The hopelessness cyclist much like hopelessness trapped blizzard far civilization resorted eating dead survive While went extremes survival setting caused feel hopelessness cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly thought that it is preferable to eat at home because of personal hyiene. When food is being prepared in people’s house, cleanliness and etiquttes are taken as priority. Since the intention of cooking at home is not a profitable venture, people take their time to prepare meals. This is because they can cook to their satisfaction as well as maintaining a clean surrounding. A good example is Fade, the head chef of Crispy ligjt, who becaue who mm", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, I don't litke the idea of driveless cars. Have you watched iRobot? with all the robots, and driveless cars? That's how I feel like the world would be if we get driveless cars. I know it's not a real movie, or based on a true story. Without the robots, that's how our world would be set up like. Let me give my reasons.\n\nFirst, not many states have driveless cars. So, you know it's not that popular, or even out there yet. The first time it comes out everybody is going to be wanting it, then laziness walks into the picture.That means that since people don't have to drive, nobody is going to try and get there license/permit. Which can be a hassel. We can't let the electronic take over us.\n\nSecondly, the prices of the cars are most likely expensive. Teenagers are going to waiste their college money or even something more important than that to go purchase a car. Why buy something like that when it's more to the world? What if something goes wrong with the car that makes it not driveless anymore? Then that's another fee on you. Then wrecks/car accidents will be all your fault.\n\nThirdly, it will get boring just sitting there waiting on your turn to drive. Who would want a driveless car that still needs a driver? Like the passage said. Just sitting in a car not doing nothing can get boring quick. You would have to have the patience, and the time to have a driveless car.\n\nEventhough my reasonings might sounded good, what if having a driveless car wouldn't be bad after all? It just might be fun, and you just might like it. Even me perhaps. Not driving, or anything just sitting there can be fun. Instead of driving you can sit there blast music all the way up and dance. Who would love to do that? Also, you might be really tired one day, and you just have to drive somewhere. That would be a good reason to a have a driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars has been a fascination of the world for a great amount of time.\n\nAlthough it could have originally been a laughable idea told as a joke, it appears now that the dream of automated vehicles could become a reality.\n\nMany companies are creating cars that do not require a human to operate it, and despite the slow process of development, progress is being made.\n\nHowever, the public's opinions concerning the implementation of such cars in current society is varied.\n\nDespite the fact that there are those who believe that driverless cars are beneficial to the world, it is evident that the development of these vehicles should be discontinuted due to the issue with laws and liabilty, unreliabilty of current technology, and concern for peoples' safety.\n\nThe purpose of the law is to regulate society and to provide safety for civilians.\n\nCurrently, lawmakers agree that \"safety is best achieved with alert drivers\" who are \"in control [of the vehicle] at all times\".\n\nIf driverless cars were to be introduced and regularly used by the public, theres is no way to ensure the safety of both drivers and pedestrians.\n\nAs a result, many states in the United States have \"limited [the] use of semi-autonomous cars\".\n\nIf even the activity of semi-autonomous is limited, surely the laws concerning fully autonomous will be much more strict.\n\nTechnology is known to fail in certain situations and is not completely reliable.\n\nIn the case that a driverless car were to be involed in a accident, the liabilty of the case would not be clear, and it would be hard to determine whether \"the driver or the manufacturer\" is at fault.\n\nOverall the introduction of driverless cars would not be beneficial, if compared to current cars, due to the fact that it would have to result in the development of new laws, and the issue of liabilty would not be clear.\n\nIn order for a driverless car to work, it must have the capability to analyse its surroudings as a human would.\n\nAlthough sensors are extraordinary inventions to aid electronic devices to understand the world,\n\nthey are not extremely efficient, and do not match the human caliber of sensing.\n\nFor example, the modified version of a Toyata Prius utilizes \"a whole lot of sensors\" in order to function.\n\nThe sheer amount of sensors that are needed are simply ridiculous, and due to the fact that all the sensors must be used simultaneously while driving makes the car inefficient when compared to the five basic senses of the human body allow people to drive safely.\n\nIt is noted that \"the driverless car [can] mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\", but it cannot fully replace the role a human plays while driving.\n\nThe inefficiency of using sensors on a driverless car supports the notion that such cars should not be produced.\n\nLastly, safety is a big concern for the future of developing driverless cars.\n\nThe reason for the existence of vehicles is to travel from one place to another safely and at a reasonable time.\n\nIt is true that Google has created cars that \"have driven more than hald a million miles without a crash\", but \"Google cars aren't truly driverless\".\n\nThis implies that simply because a semi-autonomous car provides some level of safety, it is possible that the same level of reliabilty may not be re-created in a fully driverless car.\n\nThere is no data to support the fact that driverless cars and more reliable than current cars.\n\nBeing in a fully driverless car poses a great risk to the passenger, because there is always the possibility that \"the technology fails and someone [will be] injured\".\n\nFor that reason, it is not a good idea for fully autonomous cars to be developed.\n\nThere are many issues that are inhibiting the introduction of driverless cars\n\ninto society such as problems with liabilty, the unreliability of current technology, and the issues of safety that are involved.\n\nThere is still much research that has yet to be done before determining if the innovation of a driverless car would be plausible for everyday life.\n\nAlthough currently, the idea of a fully driverless car does not seem acceptable by many people, there may come a day when it will become normal for someone to own such a car.\n\nIf the level of technology continues to improve, and the changes of traffic regulations and liability laws are done, then the introduction of an autonomous car will be more than likely to occur in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know this because...the authur said in the story that luke wanted to be a cowboy who rode over the sea and to help ship animals across to frams in need of cows,mules,horeses to people and he had no problem with doing that In the story it says that it took about two weeks to cross atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept luke busy and they had to feed and water them two or three times a day luke also found time to have fun on board ,especially on return trips after the animlas have been unloaded\n\nthe cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds.. Where the animals had been housed ,but then being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger ands it opened up a new world for him...", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine is a good way to detect exactly how people's feeling, even when people wants to hide their emotions. To read the emotional expressions is also important and valuable for our students in class.\n\nThere is a technology called the Facial Action Coding System, it can able to help people to identify human emotions on the computers. It also has promising applications for a variety of insudtries. This technology can use 3-D to scan the face, there are 44 major muschles in the model must move like human muscles, and the software can even identify mixed emotions.\n\nDr. Huang said:\"The facial expressions for wach emotion are universal.\" In reality, our human are performing the same impressive every day, just like the article said:\"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" We can observe the emotions from people who are around us every day, we can describe they are happy or make something troubles.\n\nEveryone of us have a conversation everyday, we can learn the personality through people's emotion during the school. We can not only use the languague to talk, but also can use the emotion to have a communication, just like the people who can not talk to each other, but they still can use the emotion to expression their feelings.\n\nIn this article, Dr. Huang observes da Vinci also studied human anatomy to help him to paint facial muscles predcisely enough to convey specfic emotions. This imagine demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, just like the computer knows you are happy or sad. If you are following the Web ad appears, then there will have a similar ad comeout. But if you do not follow it, they will change a different for you.\n\nWhen we have a classroom computer, it will recognize us is bored or confused about it, then it could modify the lesson, just like an effective human instructor. The emotions have a big effect during the class, we should learn how to read the emotional expressions and also manage our emotion better.\n\nThe mirror shows in this article is important too, it suggest an emotion when we have expression. Actually it is all about the muscular action units. When we have a meanwhile, our muscle make crow's-feet around your eyes. But our muscle will change to stretched when we have a wrong smile. So the muscle makes our smile truthful beacuse our faces do not lie.\n\nA drama coach had his actors carefully produce smiling and creating emotions on stage. Your face shows happy even though you do not happy, but it still an help you to produce the happy muscle. For example, even you are not happy, but you are effected by the people who are making a happy face to you, you still can change your emotion even a little bit.\n\nWe cannot believe that technology teach us a lot, and we never think that making faces can reveal the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. It is valuable to express people's emotion, and it is also important to detect people's feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I\n\nthink our world would better if we had driverless cars. Today we have massive wreks and there are\n\ndrivers in the car. If we have driverless car we will have more accidents, the driver will not only be distracted because they think they dont have to pay attention, but the car could fail to preform its duties.\n\nWith\n\nsmart cars people would have to be fully alert and able to take over the wheel at any time. In the artical it stated \"They can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead reqiers human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\"\n\nI feel that there would be and increase of wreks caused by people thinking they can fall asleep at the wheel and the car will just drive and the car will alert them, or people just not paying attention.\n\nAs the article states they have talked about a heads up display. I think in some instances this could work but I don't think that it would be safe. If the driver is not paying attention and all of a sudden the heads up display comes on they could be startled and wrek. The heads up could come to late and the driver won't take control untill it is to late and they have already crashed.\n\nI dont think our world would better I think it would suffer from driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have always been used to get from point A to point B. That is how the people in society know what cars are for. However, there are other alternatives when is comes to going form one destination to another. Citizens should limit their car usage. It helps with the terrible traffic on the street. Also, there will be no more pollution in the air. In addition, citizens can be able to enjoy the world.\n\nEveryone has been caught in traffic, whether it is going to work or school or meeting up with someone. Everyone has been in traffic before. People can prevent traffic form happening. There is carpooling, it can help limit traffic on the streets. Just like it states in source three, \"...millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" There are other ways to avoid and stop traffic. Not everyone needs to take their own personal car to work. They can either car pool or take public transportation to save money because gas isn't cheap these days. In addition, traffic somtimes end up leading to accidents. There are several people who died in a car accident due to someone speeding because he or she doesn't want to wait in the traffic. However, if everyone just finds another alternative way to get to his or her destination, then no one has to die. Just like it explains in proclaims in source four, \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial, and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emission and improve safety.\" This qoute listed some alternatives way to get somewhere. By doing these things it will not only limit the traffic but the resources and the safety of other people. Traffic isn't a fun place to be in, so find another way to get to his or her destination can prevent traffic.\n\nAir pollution is everywhere we go. Whether someone travels to Japan, India, or South America. There willbe air pollution there. It might not have same amount of air pollution as other countries but there is still pollution. Why? Because there are people who uses his or her personal car not thinking about what happens to the air that they breathe. However, there is a solution to limit the pollution in the air. Limiting car usage or find another way to get to the certain destination. Mr. Sivak even claims that \"A car is just a means of getting from A to B...\" Cars is just a means of transportation. So are bicycles, trucks, buses, traind. However, all these have one thing in common, they are all going form destination A to destination B. Biking, walking, skating are some way to stop the gas from the vehicles from polluting the air. Actually, by using these methods pollution can be reduced. For example source three states, \"...uneven, pitted sidewalks have bee replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic...\" When people don't use his or her car and decides to find another way to get to their destination it helps reduce the traffic.\n\nThere are several people who say that they know what the real world is since he or she travels all the time in their car. However, do people really know the sounds of kids laughter when walking down the side walk or a bicycle bell violently ringing at someone to get out of their way? Not a lot of people know this because they are usually used to their vehicles getting them places. People will argue that they have heard all of those before and that they were happier. But Ms. Walter thinkgs other wise, \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Ms. Walter has been walking on the streets and she hears the swish of bicycles and the talkative children and occastional a distant motor. These help people better appreciate the world that they live in because not everything will last forever. In addition to this, less cars means more people walking which means that several people will end up walking pass a shop and look what is inside. For instance in source three is explains, \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed through the city; uneven...and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" It helps by walking to find new stores or restaurants people never heard of.\n\nSeveral people believe that the only way to get somewhere is by car. That isn't necessarily true. Skating, walking, biking, car pooling or public transportation can help get anyone from point A to B. Yes, it will take longer on foot than by car but it helps the environment, it stops from the air getting all the gasoline form the cars. It is faster than being stuck in traffic. Someone who is biking to school can be five minutes late while soneone who is took their car and got stuck in traffic can be an hour late. Limiting car usage is a way that everyone can explore the world than being stuck in that four or tw door car. Limiting car usage has its downs but it also have its perks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt key obstacles builders face one safety people dirigibles people two nature itselfThe safety people critical something safe would put use There many things could go wrong blimp hitting spire killing people belowThe Greatest obstacle nature If dirigible tethered mooring mast would get wraped around building getting mooring would difficult windOverall mooring mast practical Idea It something thought compete building thought aspects safety mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That technology would not help in schools because the fact that students are sometimes not happy with how computer ads put up. Teacher can also see how their students are feeling on the computer but one flaw about this is that what if it didn't work. The technology would have to have many updates to get the system right and make the experiance better. Someone can hack that computer and can be watching you or the government might be trying to watch us. How much is schools going to be paying for these compter? Maybe around a million dollars in buying and fixing it. Most schools don't have good internet or they have bad students that might break these computers and the school or stduent would have to pay for it. The computers schools have now barely even work now so why buy a computer that most likely not going to work no better than the computers they already have. Why take away a ad and putting a new ad is going to make a student happy? What if they dont like ads at all? what is the point of the putting a computer that can read people emotions by scanning their face and the students are not going get any happier they are going be excited about at first and then get bored with it. Computers are not good for kids at a young age they will get addicted to being on a computer won't go outside and then they are going to gain weight and then be fat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having emotional expression scanners in class can be very helpful. It would make it easier for teachers to read students without talking. And it possibly slow the bullying dillemma down because students would be able to tell how they made others feel.\n\nI think that having technology that reads emotional expressions is very valuable. We could be able to use that to be able to further help out the student if he does not like to talk. It could also help the students because they would be able to tell how they are making other students feel. By taking notice on how the student feels it would possibly stop the student from making a dumb decision and help that student out. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\", observes Dr.Huang, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression(like not smiling as broadly).\"\n\nI think that having computers that can also scan your face is also a pretty good idea. When the camera on your computer can tell your emotions by facial expression is a great thing, because it can stop certain ads from appearing on your computer when you smile or frown. The computer would also be able to tell when you like an ad so that it can keep showing similar ads. \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions.\" Now with the face ID that phones have I think that technology keeps amazing us.\"\n\nSo with the emotional expression technogy being available I think that it would be a more than amazing thing to be able to use or just to be able to have. With technology coming up with new all the time I think that it would help if we just kept moving along with it. The emotional expression technology should be accepted by more and more people and more businesses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient doctor cause I little I doctor I running around give care I guess time mom trust sat ever I went Mind girls around I got embarrased asked mom following replyed cause I dont want running everywhere That I told mom I older Im sorle years old Im muture She said go ahead I went sat next girls talked Thats got start walking around talking I felt little tingle head saying your mom still following I turned around So went snack room sat ate everything I happen look mom sitting third table away us Thats went back elevator original place sat surprise ready That I told girl I would back I sat next mom said was following replied yes I mean I talk came understanding Soon enough turn go see doctor That end story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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