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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view might be that it was fun but i just can't be the only thing that ido in life. By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips themost of any Seagoing Cowboy. He was proud to break a record but he was alsovery mad because of him being 18 and still doing the trips on being a SegoingCowboy. He was also working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldnt say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. But luke thought of it that way and not by how many trips he was going to make or the number of places he was going to go. He knew that it was going to be a opportunity of a lifetime because you hardly ever get a opportunity of a lifetime when you are working to part time jobs and trying to raise moeny for your own self to live life. And when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldnt say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. But luke thought of it that way and not by how many trips he was going to make or the number of places he was going to go. He knew that it was going to be a opportunity of a lifetime because you hardly ever get a opportunity of a lifetime when you are working to part time jobs and trying to raise moeny for your own self to live life. Also when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat trip if luke would have said no then his friend Don Reist that invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat trip would have tought or asked why do you not want to go because because you wil get to go a lot of places that you would not be able to go also because you would get to havea full boat ride there and a emty boat ride back. Plus i will be there with you the whole time that you are there so you do not have to be scaryed if that is why you don't want to go. Also because you will be able to go and see part of the wolrd that you may never agin get the chance to go and see agin so we don't leave for anouther 2 days so that will give you a chance to think about the trip we are really hopeing you can make it but if you can't then we understand why because it is your chose so just please just think about it because it would mean alot to me and the other guys if you came. So he got Luke to say yes but he was only going to be there for a little bit because he has other things to do like get a house and also get a better job then the ones he already has so only for one year. But after that one year he had made it clear that he wanted to stay longer because he had stared to think that this was his job and after a while one of the boys came to him and asked him what would you think if you could stay here because our captian says that you got a job working with us if thats what you want to do is work with us but you do not have to if you don't then we have to take you back because we can't just let you stay like work for us. So Luke sid of couse i will work with you guys but we have to stop so i can get the rest of my stuff plusemy colth and i can just keep it in my bedroom right of couse you can. But no break able stuff is allowed on the ship oun less you don't have any where else to put it then we have a little bit of room were we can put it where it will be safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been argued that the state should pay attention to environmental deterioration as well as accommodation related issues, in order to prevent illness and disease. I totally agree with the aforesaid notion. In this essay, I will discuss, in the first paragraph, how it would be feasible for the government with the support of levy paid by the community and in the second paragraph, the needfulness of huge infrastructure and a large number of efforts which are only within the reach of government fundings.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, the taxes paid by citizens of a nation are crucially significant and this collective amount which directly goes into the government's bank account should be utilised for people's benefit. In other words, almost every nation collects legal taxes from their citizens such as property tax, water fine, housing contribution, business tax and taxes on the purchase of gold and allied elements. So, it is a moral responsibility of a country to look after the basic necessities such as a proper and livable environment along with housing facilities, especially for the people of the lower economic groups. For instance, in India, the city called 'Chandigarh' is the most well-organised city which is planned and monitored by authorities as far as environmental pollution and dwellings are concerned. As a result, the population in Chandigarh are more healthy and living in a spacious and clean atmosphere than the rest of the places.\r\n\r\nSecondly, to control pollution from various modalities and to provide decent living place needs extravagant resources, which are within a reach of any national fundings and it is not possible for a single individual or a group of people. To make it clear, I would like to exemplify that, air pollution can be controlled by applying stringent rules, to next water pollution can be controlled by providing excellent sewage control channels, then noise disturbances can be minimized by no horn policies or setting appropriate regulations, after that farming which is the largest industry providing food could be supported with infrastructure, knowledge and subsidies to farmers. Finally, the slum areas could be converted into neat and clean apartments with basic amenities like electricity and water. All these things can be only done by democracy as it requires huge money.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a country should be responsible for providing a clean atmosphere and a healthy living place to their citizens. In my opinion, I believe that it is absolutely within the capacity of a nation and the taxes paid by people should be justified by giving them facilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been in the news all the time in the past few years. Many advancements have been made in order to make this new technology possible. The continued development of driverless cars will benefit in the world today. Car companies need to keep making progress in driverless cars because it wil eventually lead to a safer way of transportation for all people.\n\nMany people die each year in car crashes. Most of these are due to distracted drivers doing things like texting and driving. Driverless cars would greatly reduce the number of these accidents. The article gave details talking about how driverless cars could be activated to take over driving when the driver needs to do something like send a text message. A driverless car is just another high-tech safety feature a newer car could offer just like air bags. Nearly all car buyers are influenced by how safe their car is and how expensive it is. The price on a car with this technology is unknown right now but it may drive many buyers away with a high pricetag. For many people though, safety is a bigger concern over price. People would rather be safer driving around even if it did cost a little more. They would be attracted to a driverless car which could assist them when they needed on the roads. Safety is a major concern in cars and new driverless cars could help improve road safety greatly.\n\nAs well as safety concers, the roads need to improve also to further the driverless car experience. There is a large amount of progress that is still to come in order for these cars to be safe. As the article refered to, the roads need to be smarter as well. This was the first way that there were strides made toward driverless cars. According to the article, these pratice tracks with smart roads sending signals to each car worked perfectly. The only problem with this idea was the amount of money needed to fund this project. Companies are already spending large sums of money to make cars with newer better technology. Why not focus some of that money on making these smart roads which would help the driverless cars run. Obviously it is not reasonable to install this technology on all roads, but if it is on highways, busy roads, and throughout cities it would make a difference. This would help prevent drivers from having to take control of their cars due to the car avoiding tough situations altogether. Overall, smarter roads would help these cars and make them better for the people around them.\n\nLastly, people are always wanting the newest and best technology advances pout there. Each year millions of people swarm to get a new version of the iPhone. These driverless cars would be the iPhone of car industry. Cars have not changed much in the past one hundred years. People put in air bags, seat belts, or navigation systems but nothing major. A driverless car would be something major that no one has ever seen before. Boat loads of people would want to be the first to own this new technology and not have to even drive their own car. Many would see the appel in being a passanger in your own car. These newer driverless cars would be loved by many buyers and sell like hot cakes which is why they need to be manufactured.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are becoming a reality that will be loved by many. It is more of a safety feature for many drivers which will help to reduce the amount of accidents. With newer technology being created and used, the cars and roads will both need to be improved before these cars can work well out in the everyday world. Millions of people around the world will flock to car dealerships to buy this new technology though. Driverless cars will change the car industry for the better. This is the future of transportation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers negative affect peoples lives Computers occupy lot people s time could used matters The internet also contains alot unappropriate content children viewing But many petafiles online preying young children These ways computers negative affect peoples lives Computers occupy much valuable time could used important matters The childhood obesity rate america climbing There doubt electronics play huge role event For example brother plays computer everyday barely goes outside He allowed computer internet occupy life leaving room anything else Also alot content Ranging song websites containing pornagraphy sites nt even alert need older view content little acctually ask proof There millions sites containing content It really pressing matter needs deal Above else millions creeps internet preying children young teens Its truly disgusting There millions chat sites people meet Petafiles go websites alias pretending teens children Their motive lure young teens unto meeting secure location commit rape Some victims enough speak sadly afraid ashamed made possible internet For reasons I say computers negative effect computers lives positive sadly cons outweight pros mention occupation time content internet I truly believe planet would better computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It high cheerful mood It made feel I In paragraph said I never forget parents turned simple house home That means thanks parents hard work The made Also paragraph said mother father come country courage without knowledge language Culture He proud parents coming country speaking different language learning new one hard All high cheerfull mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We live world inundated persuaded media Ever since little young minds filled opinions others history present Whether reading book watching motion picture even listening new music artist lives affected media The art world considered one controversal businesses work Each piece literature movie shared vast community critics We given right opinion pieces Every piece art judged criticized However many find certain pieces offending way shape form It quite impossible produce piece fit everybody s satisfaction For example religious pieces often scorned nonfactual information director s author s opinion matter Since live diverse community religions pieces never satisfy audience Movies criticized decades represent sort life lesson truth appealing audience Why learn reflect No piece media possibly directed satisfy opinions world As personal example I see novels books war heavily criticized The men women fought country enjoy see pieces written war protesters peace keepers see insult cause wrote book name This book heavily criticized topic censorship The world lived dramatically affected impact peoples opinions If book movie offensive group people burned books History books slavery war burned others found topics offending Nonreligious groups thought religion offensive burned works religion Their government wanted world peace community every man equal diversity longer existent denies book written censorship book gives generation great lesson For generations grown world diversity Every mind special different never share identical thoughts neighbor Therefore must recognize survive live together We escape diversity live The books see shelves movies see big screen music listen earphones make generations history next We need accept neighbor opinions born equal If throw away history accomplishments man left nothing improve nothing leave marking history We accept others ideas build improve life s As stand world filled diversity must move reflect It time offend offended time learn move", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New Planet, New Home\n\n\"It is hard to leave something that you really loved.\" my mom stated, Rebecca Sulayao. Here, in this case it is really hard when the things they get used to will going to be dissapeared or gone. When something gone they need to get or find another one. They can find the same as like this or just like a duplicate of it. But, in this case leaving home or finding new one was hard. Because, all the memories are there. Finding a new one was hard they need to transport all the things that they left in there home. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggest that studying venus is worthy to pursuit despite the dangers it present because it is same as earth, human curiosity, and the planet Earth will dissapeared after how many decades.\n\nFirst, In some cases planet Earth and Venus have some similarities. The Venus has some good nature too. In paragraph 3 it said there that \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" It explain here that the planet Venus has more atmospheric pressure than Earth. Also, In paragraph 4 it said there that \"Long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eath.\" it explain here that even the scientist discovered that the Venus and Earth have same similarities and the nature of Venus can supported life.\n\nSecond, because of the human curiosity the scientist want to know what is going on to our neighbor planet. In paragraph 8 it state there that \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" It explain here that the people should not make a story. They should know their limits when it comes to imagination and telling story that is not true. In paragraph 7 it said there that \"NASA is working on the approaches to studying Venus.\" it explain here that because of the curiosity the NASA or the scientists that work on that try to explore things outside the Earth. Since the people are curious on what is happening on some planet they used technology. Because of the curiousity they used some technology and invented new one that has many gears so it can reach the Venus. But because of the heat of the Venus the gadgets they invented was not working. It will work in how many decades then after that it will crashed again because of the Venus temperature.\n\nLast, the Earth will slowly dissapeared after how many decades. It is hard when the Earth dissapeared.That is why the scientist try to investigate new things outside our Earth. They trying to figure out when or where the people will live after the Eart dissapeared.They should examine fast as they can so the people can move on different planet. Because who one knows when will planet Earth will explode. In paragraph 1 it said there that \"Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" It explain here that they trying to figured out the Venus. Because the Venus should have same characteristics as Earth because if not the scientist should try to search more information on other planet. It is hard to examine something when it is new. In paragraph 2 it said there that \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of densitity and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" It explain here that this a good sign because the people need the same characteristic as Earth have. Until now they still working on it they try to figured it out more so as soon as possible the people on Earth can move to Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, The planet Earth and Venus have same similarities. While Venus is more on danger because of the characteristics and material of it. Still the process of exploring Venus was still on process. The human curiosity lead the scientist to search more on what is outside on Earth. The Earth will exploded after how many decades because of the global warming and the people on Earth should evacuate as soon as possible. Life must go on even if we are living on different planet!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Senator, I believe that voting for the president of the United States should be based off of the popular vote by the people. Not the Electoral College. Voting by the Electoral College does not allow the people to have the final say. It altimately gives the elector the choice. \"The 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century\" (Bradford Plumer, paragraph 14), it was a disaster factor. The electory went against the will of the people and voted the opposite of what they said. Whose to say something like this can't happen again soon?\n\nSome people say that the Electoral College is a good thing. It allows a certainty of outcome and is a fair, reasonable way to vote for a president. But it is based off of trust, that the elector won't betray the canidate's party and people. Trust. Are you really going to put your vote for the president of your country in someone eles hand based off of trust?\n\nHaving an elector represent your state based off of population is ridiculous. One elector representing 500,000 people in Wyoming. Wouldn't you sleep better at night if you could represent yourself instead of someone representing you and thousands of other people all at once.\n\nIn 2000, a canidate had more popular votes, and less electoral votes and lost! Even though the people had more votes! How do you feel knowing that your vote doesn't even count? \"Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate\"(the Office of the Federal Register,paragraph 7). Because of this system, canidates will not spend time in certain states they know they have no chance in winning in. \"During the 2000 campaign seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all\"(Bradford Plumer, paragraph 13)\n\nNext time you go into that voting booth, remember that you're not voting for a president, you're voting and are supposed to trust an elector.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think ends story paragraph wants take test time wont hard It warm its quite cold", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood author set loving The story says love cooking passion Cuban music Just endless celebrations brought life warm home Narciso Rodriguez also great sense family nothing blood relative In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere although cultures came together great solidarity friendship How parents always arms door open many people knowing would I always grateful parents love sacrifice I never forget parents turned simple house home The mood set story loving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that child should be taught in school to recycle unused material, while others say that this training should be given at home. This article will discuss both views before a final statement.\r\n\r\nFirst, the people who hold the notion that universities are responsible for educating students to make most of their time can claim that it is the professors who are capable of imparting this knowledge. There is no doubt that the teachers who, at the proper level, can tell the students and the adolescent about the advantages of reprocessing material and the disadvantages of not using waste, which even pollutes the environment. For example, in international level schools like DPS, teachers use a variety of graphs and pictures to give a demonstration to younger ones so that they can understand each and every aspect of recycling with the help of visuals and put it into practice in their life.\r\n\r\nDespite the fact that some schools are putting efforts to enhance the knowledge of adolescents in reusing non-usable items, Parents encourage their teenagers also. It is generally observed and true that worthless goods such as plastic items, cardboard items, are also found most at home, which has ceased to be used. Therefore, parents ought to help their adolescent in understanding , how to recycle this material by illustrations. As a result, juvenile's awareness of the subject will increase, and they will be more aware of reusing such junk at an early age.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I understand that although a number of people argue that the whole responsibility for a child's mental development regarding recycling lies with the school, I think schools and families may work together for a better future for their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI believe that the Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote. The reason I say his is because we, the people, should be able to decide who we want as our president. In \"source 2\", line 10, it states that \"Under the elecoral system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the presedent\". While it's true that the slate of electors should also be involved in the process of voting, i believe that our vote should count more than the electoral vote, because we are the ones who will be affected the most depending on which presiden is chosen, for that reason, it should be us, the voters, who have the most power over who is elected as our president.\n\nIn addition, according to \"source 2\", \"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is equired to elect the President\". In my opininon, this is not fair to us, the voters, because a whole naion should hav more power over who gets chosen as a president than 538 electors. I agree with what \"source 2\", \"line 13\" sates wich is the following, \"At the most basic level, the elecoral colleg is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spent tome in states hey don have a chance of winning, focusin only on the tigh races in the \"swing\" states\". I agree with this part of the text because, the electoral college is in fact being unfair to the voters.\n\nAnother reason why the the Electoral College should be \"\n\nAblolished\n\n\" is because of the \"disaster factor\", as it says in \"source 2\", \"The American people should conside themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest elction crisis in a cenury; the system allows fo much worse\". This was a problem because \"faithless\" electors refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the auther is right about studying venus is worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents, because if Venus is so close to the sun it and is one of the hottest planest because is close to the sun, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life just like the Earth.\n\nVenus is similar like the earth they have valleys,mountains,and craters. But we don't know if they have food. they mayhave alliens because of the tempertures. And it can be dangerous to the Earth because we are the closest one to Venus.\n\nscientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contibute meaningfully to our knowledges of venus.\n\nNASA has the power and money to send people and invest about all these things.\n\nNASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\n\nNASA's posssible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to flot above the roiling Venusian landscape.\n\nOr maybe Venus is just a start because of his nickname and is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,even though Mercury is closer to oour sun.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present addicional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent ligtning strikes to probes seeeking to land on its surface.\n\nNASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to flot above the fray.\n\nVenus i the closet planet to the Earth in term of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance to. Should be more easy to study but the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission.\n\nwe should invest if in Venus exist phone or tablet or system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces.\n\nwe all have questions like \"if Venus move around just like the Earth does\".\n\nWe all want to konw \"if Venus produce live\".\n\nwe should keep invest why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus\n\nThe temperature that Venus has is too hot for humans is more extreme that anything and the weather present additional impediments like erupting volcans.\n\nWhy venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\n\nMy conclusion is that yes we shoud study Venus because it may have humans been in their planet, because they have water,sun,just like the Earth does. and our travels on Earthand beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubst but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. And sent more people to Venus and see what they have as a planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would it be like to have a driverless car? If cars could drive on their own many of the mistakes that humans make on the roads would be eliminated, causing less accients and less injuries from car crashes. Driverless cars would make the roads a safe place and cause less stress on the person controlling the car.\n\nDriverless cars are built to allow the car to steer, accelerate, and brake on its own. With these features it would cause less people trying to speed passed each other for going to slow, or cause the driver to not have to take a sharp stop because they we going to quick for a yellow light. The car are also built with a laser beam the would show a 3-D model of the surrounding of the driver, which allows it to know everything that is happening and how to react. If there is some construstion going on ahead or a crash the car also alarms the driver to take control.\n\nNot only are the different types of cars that can cause accidents, but the person behind the wheel too. With there being so many different types of people driving everyday such as: new drivers, elderly, and careless drivers, it would be great to have a car that would control all the different gears that the driver would usually have to do. Since so many teen drivers think that they can text while driving or goof around, an accident is bound to happen, some worse than others, but still they then have to pay for the damage, but with the driverless car it allows the vieicle to take control of the wheel and cause the crash to never happen. Also when it comes to elderly or drunk drivers they never fully have an eye out for what can happen and are not quick enough to react to it, so if the car can pull the brakes on its own then that would save another situation to never happen.\n\nSince the road is such a dangerous place there is no room for texting or making a mistake. It seems like driverless cars are the right thing to do since so many people get in crashes, or cause death from an accident. Driverless cars seem to be the safe choice, and can save many lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow can you believe if you take a picture on your phone or social meadi it can tell you what your emotionals are now thats pretty wild i dont care who you are.\n\nMy opion for this topic i think its pretty stupid because its non of there bussines what my emotionals are and im sure others agree with me. Maybe they dont like to smile but they sure can be happy my dad always told me never juge a book its cover and thats what their doing.\n\nI wouldnt like it because i dont want them to know what my emotions are because its my emotion i will deal with them i dont want know one eles to. In pargraph two it says \" can we actually calculate emotion like math homework\" emotions are not problems and just part of life you cant fix that the person who has the emotion problem if there sad or angry there the one that will fix.\n\nThere is one good thing about this emtional problem if somone takes a picture and there sad and there thinking about ending their life somone can see it and contact someone and they could change their life around thats is on good thing i like it about.\n\nThis picture emotional thing it can help alot of people if they dont even know what there feeling and it make save people and some people might just hate it but everyone has their own opion and thats my.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This I went part cucry one forgets hour plane ride We group familis friends When become plane exited gate scattered So I sat favorite friends trip We loaded electicails enemes As foot I thought going breeze thought wrong At first fine talkes played games I pods sort like hours started setting itchy I pods died So decided watch movie mind dvd player starling irn low battery plan broken The thing died still like another hours got watch one movie On back seat tv forced one We started see really getting late We nt know hopeless We sit wait sit true talk patience We home longest horrs ever We nothing wanted bolted seats air read We nt patient longer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given bar chart presents how many unpaid-work hours are weekly spend by married females and males. These kinds of work include childcare at home, housework, gardening and other forms of such activities.\nIt is clear from the chart, that married males spend constantly just below 20 weekly hours on average on unpaid work, regardless of the number of children they have. On the other hand, married women spend more hours than their spouses, and this period seems to increase proportionately with the number of children in the family.\nAs is shown by the chart, married women without children attribute 30 hours on average every week for unpaid work. Compared to childless married women, women with one or two children spend around 50 weekly hours on average in those activities. Turning to women with more than two kids, they have the most time spent on unpaid house work, with 60 hours per week.\nOverall, this gender related trend can be related to the traditional premise that women ought to pursue most of the work at home while men are supposed to work outside earning money for their mutual survivorship.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "FACS\n\nUsing this new technology in the classroom will not help the children learn. How can changing the lesson plan based on a students face even work. Most people dont enjoy doing worksheets in class, but thats how they learn. Teachers would have to make even more plans in case the student is sick or isn't enjoying the lesson, this just simply will not be helpful.\n\nFirst of all The article says that this is \"new computer software\" so it is destined to have a few bugs and issues that come along with it. For example what if the student is in the middle of an long essay and is working hard ,but gets some bad news and has a sad frown on there face, like the article says \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". And then the whole lesson changes and the student has to start all over, this would be working agianst the student unlike how its said to be trying to help them.\n\nSecondly the passage also states that \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithims used to decode mona lisa's smile\", then how is it possible to involve this new technology in schools if home PC's which cost around seven hundred dollars cant handle it. Schools might not have that kind of buget to afford such technology like that. And even then they would have to buy hundreds of them so classrooms around the school could use them, Even replaceing\n\nall the other PC's that the students have come to understand with new complex versions. Not to mention how expensive all this could be.\n\nThirdly this is just weird, having a camera always looking at you and by what this article says \"reading your Facial Muscles\" doesnt sound appealing to every one. Some people are very camera shy to take even a photograph. So do you think they could just stare at a computer camera thats taking photos and studing your facial features. Not to mention this just downright creepy. And is this new technology safe? Does it just save your pictues in its databank or does it spread its research of your childs face to all kinds of sources to just study on? We need to know much more about this new \"FACS\" technology to even consider using it.\n\nFinally, we simply dont need this in our school system. we just got used to all kinds of different computer programs in our schools today, and we surtainly dont need this one to mess everyone up. Just keeps schools simple with a teacher showing the kids how to multipy and divide in math, and balancing chemical equations in scinece. Keep all this creepy, confusing and \"useless\" technology out of our schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Narciso Rodriguez The Blueprints Our Lives mood short story grateful reasonable In story man named Narciso Rodriguez twentyseven years old migrated Cuba parents come United States When came live one bedroom apt could afford nothing else But Narciso greatful Even though nowhere work places bigger pay So little pay feed family Narciso greatful paragraph says They struggle personally finanacially braving harsh northern winters settle given time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So to start here is a letter to my state senator, in which I argue in favor of keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. The electoral college is a process, not a place. The electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors. The electoral college consists of 538 electors. In the 23 Amendment of the constitution, the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word \"state\" also refers to the district of columbia. Next, each canidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.\n\nThe electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party,but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.\n\nThe president election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Also, most states have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate . However, Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of \"proportion representation\".\n\nAbolishing the electoral college! But don't worry they're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore.\n\nThanks to the quirks of the electoral college, which won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voterswould prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\n\nYou might not know this so if you dont here is something very interesting for you to know. Who are the electors? Well they can be snoyone not holding public office. Here's something eles you might know, Who picks the electors in the first place? well here's the answer it depends on the state. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.\n\nThe American people should consider themselces lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for must more. consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and thats those electors could always defy the will of the people. Black in 1960.\n\nPerhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the hose of representatives, where state deegations vote on the president. Okay to end my letter, my con conclustion is that this is my letter to my state seator.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story high deserts California June At first cyclist seemed really confident excited journey It changed mind The cyclist running low water supply s stops pumps water water pump gets acid taste So way nearest town miles away thinks make So heading towards nearest town terrain starts changing It changes flat road short rolling hills During time cyclist starts loosing hope He thinks going die dehydration birds going pick apart Then thought couldnt make saw sign said Gary fish camp He ran shop took long drinks sink bathroom went store older gentle men asked needed help said I really good map The thot temperature rolling hills negative effect cyclist I mean goes confident thinking seeing mirages dieing It states story I wiped sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage I going die birds would pick clean So brought self doubting behavior", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article called \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" talks about how they make her smile and what it is made up of. They have students and teachers from different universitys study this with technology we have today.\n\nWhen you read about this they talk about the percent of what the smile is made up with. When they but the picture in the computer it said that eighty-three percent was happy, nine percent was disgusted, six percent was fearful, and two percent was angry. The way they found this information was that they put it into a computer software that can recognize the emotions that the painting has.\n\nSo when they ask, for the claim for or against the value of using this technology to read the students' emotional expressions it's a good idea for this. If you look at this students think so much and teachers don't know what's wrong with them. So now we can get a picture of them put it into a computer and read their face to see what is wrong with them. So back to the question they ask, I'm agreeing with them because I think this would be great for schools to do this to some of the students that we have in todays world.\n\nWhen you read this they do so many test, examples, reading, reaserch, and other things to do with this picture. Like the teachers that are teaching in the universitys teach the kids on how to do this and what they need to be looking for also how to find the information that they need to have about the picture. They wouldn't be able to do this back then because they didn't have the technology we have today and the kids can also learn more and more about the career they want to prosced in life.\n\nSo after reading this article they have the right technology to show them everything then need to learn about this picture of the Mona Lisa. They wouldn't be able to give us any information like they did if we didn't have the technology because we can't just look at a picture and say \"oh this person is six percent angy or like he's eighty-five percent happy\" just things like that. So I would claim this emotional expression for the computer software we have today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sometimes success can be a challenge, and sometimes you have to innovate and uprade to get there. Venus, the second closest planet to the sun, has some things that scientists want to study. The only problem is the unlivable conditions they have making it harder to do. So why not come up with solutions to help get there? It also has similar Earth-like qualities that are actually liveable conditions, so why wouldn't they want to study it? The author supports his idea with solutions proving that Venus is liveable and the fact that it has similar qualities as Earth, despite the challenges that they have to face while studying Venus.\n\nVenus is known as Earths twin. Only because they have the closest size and density and are closest to each other. The author says \" Astronomers are fasinated by Venus becasue it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\"\n\nThis helps prove why scientists should do further study.\n\nThe planet itself has some harsh conditions, but does that mean we can't survive it? The answer to that is no. Humans can survive staying 30 miles or higher above the planet. Even though that is pretty high up, it is still 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but in a blimp like vehicle, they can survive. The author says \"Not easy conditions, but surviable for humans.\" With the solution of 30 miles in the air, they have a chance of surviving Venus.\n\nEven though Venus has what we would call \"harsh\" like conditions there are still ways to study the planet. The author proved how it was possible. With research, the author supports his idea with livable solutions, and similarites to Earth. In conclusion, Venus is a studiable planet because it is livable and similar to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sometimes hard patient especilly tolerant little kids Well I sometimes I go visit little cousin eight years old get nervers She asks dumb questions stupid things I nt like My mom says When grow two best friends right I nt think When ever I visit I tolerant patient For I deal grow might become friends maybe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational. On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions. On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life. In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever wonder what is a \" Electoral College? Like what is that suppose to mean?, A internet campus, Tech class, or etc. Well its not actually A Electoral college is made for up coming presidents. That differrnt selections of people go and meet the president and vice presdent. The congress. The College consits up to 238 votes and only 270 on select for the presidecny.\n\nThe president electron is held evey four yeas an the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When you are about to select a presdint you vote for your candidan\n\nTwo guys named Rich, Jummy carter, Chamber of Commerce and AFL-CIO and they are not alone according to Gallup poll in 2000, after Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Under the electoral college system voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors. The single best argument agianst the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The election would be thrown to the house or Representatives, where state delegations vote to the presdient. Because each state casts only one vote to give th voters vote to the president and another for the congress,\n\nThe House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the wall of the people, And if an electoral tie seems unlikely. A the base level the electoral colloege is unfair to voters. Because of the winner takes it all system in each state , candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chances at win at these king of states for the president. They focuse only on the the tight races in the \"swing\" states. There many things in the Electoral College that many people on they outside don't know what the Congress or the up running presidents are struggling it looks easy on the inside bu on the ouside wow they have a lot to work on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Evening Star\", while being a planet it still shines bright in our solar system, and it has the heat to back it up. While being the closest related to Earth out of the rest of our solar system (Even refered to as Earth's \"Twin\", Paragraph 2) , it still is nearly unlivible to most if not all forms of life in its current state. Some scientists however believe that venus was very life sustaining a long time ago, it is believed that it even had oceans! All of this and people still believe that we should make this endeavor and try our hands at getting there and getting back alive, and it is possible; while being extremly difficult. The author of the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" also believes that we should do our best to get there despite all of the challenges.\n\nWhile Venus is a very hot place, the author lists ways to overcome this obstacle. In paragraph 5 the author talks about how \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.\" their idea was a blimp like vehicle that would float above the fray of many of Venus's obstacles such as the hell-like heat. The blimp would put the vehicle 30 miles above the surface making the tempature only 170 degrees Fahrenheit, instead of a boiling 800 degrees Fahrenheit. This vehicle would also help stay above the hazardous ground conditions. Making this a reliable vehicle and a good point to make in the authors passage.\n\nThe author points out in paragraph 2 how similar Venus is to Earth, and how it is sometimes the closet planet to Earth out of the universe. This point it helpful because it points out how Venus used to be very inhabitable, and how it still could be today with some help from modern technology for life. So for the author this was a very helpful point to include for the arguement.\n\nThe author also included how the landmarks on venus point towards it used to having oceans, and this is amazing because so far it has been extremly if not impossibly rare to have found water in other places in the universe. In paragraph 4 the author states that \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" This is a very compelling point because it proves that Venus was hospitable at some point in its life time, poking at the curiousty of the human race.\n\nHaving said all this I believe that the author made a very compelling point towards exploring Venus. Even though there are many dangerous obstacles in the human races way, the author believes that it truly is possible to explore this beutiful planet. In paragraph 8 the author states \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This part of the passage I believe came from the author's heart, and the arguement made throughout was truly a tremendous one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In towns cyclist arrived ghost towns In text author said it fit traditional definition ghost town It affected cyclist towns deserted cyclist couldnt refill hi water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting made cyclists ride longer harder expected When cyclist first headed road flat smooth Halfway trip Flat road replaced short rolling hills The cyclist continues pedel even though slowed mph The hills made ride slower harder hills Tuoards end hills make Over long crippling hill The word crippling used show phisical affect hill The hills feature setting made cyclists ride longer harder phisically demanding", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, you are reading this because you think the Face on mars was created by aliens,well,This passage is going to prove you wrong, not only will I state facts, but I will also state some opinions. By the end of this you will know by fact that the face is just a landform.\n\nNASA took three images. One was in 1976, this was the first picture of the face and the people\n\nat the Jet propulsion lab\n\nwere surprissed by this face, after they reseluted it of course. But this wasn't the only image NASA took. A couple years later in 1998 NASA took another picture with a slightly higher resolution camera. This image was taken on a cloudy day of mars, the image seemed more detailed. A\n\nguy named Michael Malin who worked for NASA\n\nand his Mars Orbiter Camera team took the picture and this time the picture was ten times sharper than the picture from 1976. The picture was put on a JPL web site and reavealed that it's just a natural landform, but of course some people argued that it was still made by aliens because the picture was taken on cloudy day and believers said that perhaps the alien markings were hidden by these clouds.In 2001 NASA took the final picture of the face.This was a cloudless summer day and the Mars global surveyor took a picture using the cameras absolute maximum resolution. Garvin a NASA worker of some sort stated \"As a rule of thumb, you can\n\ndiscern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size\" but he also added \" So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes or Egyptian-style pyramids, you could see what they were!\" He means that if there was anything, anything at all in the picture we'd be able to see it, but there isn't.\n\nIn conclusion, based on the information I gave you, aliens did not make the face and there is plenty of information to inform you that it's just a landform and there is no sign att all that aliens made the face on mars.\n\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hobbies are recreational activities that are pursued away from one's school or work. They are meant to be an escape from the mundane and a way of keeping people sane and happy. Unfortunately, they have become almost a luxury in today's fast-paced world.\nSeveral reasons can account for this massive decrease in the pursuit of hobbies. One such reason is the fact that hobbies require time and money which are two very dear resources in today's world. Social sophistication and technological advancements have brought about changes in hobbies. What used to be called hobbies in the past are now considered obsolete and the new ones, including video games and virtual reality require financial commitment in their pursuit. Even if one has the money to pursue such, he or she would have to set aside time in his or her busy schedule to enjoy those hobbies. It is therefore no wonder that most people found to pursue hobbies today are either wealthy youth or comfortable pensioners.\nSecondly, lack of interest may be an important factor why people devote little to no time to hobbies. Most of the educated lot are taught from a tender age only to concentrate on their studies in order to secure a comfortable future for themselves. Such children are discouraged from enjoying anything away from anything extracurricular and therefore grow into hobby-less adults who work all day and do nothing else otherwise. This is seen in a lot of Ghanaian homes where doing anything other than studying after school is deemed a taboo. Consequently, many grow into adults with little humour or mirth.\nMoreover, many people get exhausted with school or work, which have become extremely intensive nowadays, as compared to the more laid back past. After a tiring day, most people like to crawl into their beds to catch a night-long rest only to return to their busy life the next day.\nThis lack of hobby pursuit, though understandable, does the individual and society more harm than good. Many individuals today are being treated for one mental health or another. Hobbies are a good way to relax and destress through leisure and can go a long way to improve mental health. Its absence will only wreak havoc for the society, which will only consist of tired and apathetic individuals who could not care less about each other and their surroundings.\nIn conclusion, it is important, albeit difficult, to pay attention to hobbies in order to improve the health and psyche of the individual and society as a whole. More effort should be geared at encouraging hobbies at school and at the work place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An Introduction\n\nVenus, sometimes called a \"Evening Star,\" as nickname. In the night they were one of the brigest light in the sky. However the nickname could possibly not called as \"Evening Star,\" because the Venus is second planet from our sun. Venus Often refferred as Earth twin because Venus is the closest plant to Earth, But at different speeds Earth sometimes closest to Mars and other times to Venus.\n\nA Body\n\nHuman become more curious about Venus and plan to visit Venus, and its like no one could survived for few hours. In the text says, \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner in spcae terms human have sent numerous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched\n\ndown on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's repuation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\"\n\nA Body\n\nScientist had discuss about Venus that, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various from of life, just like Earth. In the text also says, \"Long ago, Venus was porbably covered largely with ocenas and could have supported various from of like, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\"\n\nA Body\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration also known as (NASA) has come up with idea of sending huamn to study Venus. For example, \"NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\"\n\nA Conclusion\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained in the planet itself, but also because human couriosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond shouls not be limited by dangers and doubts but shouls be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont see the point it in. I honestly wouldnt find it helpful at all, its basically a lie detector test on your emotions and/or smile. Whats the point in seeinf if someones genuinly happy or not? Is the person that is doing the Facial Action Coding System on me going the help me become more happy? Help me make make my smile more genuine? If theyre not going to then i dont want the Facial Action Coding System done in me and i do not suuport it or see the point in it.\n\nIn the passage it tell you how to smile. It says raise your lips at the corner of yours mouth, then squint your eyes slightly, holding that raise the outer parts of your cheeks up toward your eyes. If the passage tells you how to smile the obviously dont care if your smile is genuine or not. Most importantly theyre not thinking about helping you, if your smile isnt real. It also doesnt say anything about helping or getting help if it does turn out to be a fake smile. Therefore i know thats not their intintions.\n\nIn conclusion i do not feel like this is valuable at all! I support my decision because if youre going to have me sit and smle to be analized, just to find out im not genuinly happy. You should then take a further step to figure out why and help. Not just use it for data, its just a waste of time and money in my eyes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying the fact that public spaces in towns and cities can be an arguable subject. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals believe that outdoor public spaces it is important for towns and cities. there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that public spaces it is crucial because they can be used as venues for cultural events, and festivals.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, parks and squares can help prompt community interaction like social hubs. In other words, it serves as a space where individuals from different backgrounds can interact, fostering a sense of community and belonging. In addition, it can assist in elevating the levels of health and well-being. For example, it provides environments that encourage physical activity and relaxation, which are essential for maintaining mental and physical health.\r\n\r\nAnother point to consider, outdoor public spaces have an environmental benefit. It is also possible to say that, it helps reduce urban heat islands, improve air quality, and provide habitats for local wildlife. Moreover, it can be used as a landmark for economic advantages. For instance, Well-maintained public spaces can boost local economies by attracting tourists and increasing the value of surrounding properties.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that I tend to believe that public spaces such as squared and parks it actually important for all towns and cities because they will help boost the economy and increase community interaction, I suggest that the government make programs that help in building beautiful public spaces.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hunting one favorite hobbies Hunting requires think lot patience When sitting tree blind experience one boreing minutes life definetly requires lot patience After settle quite wood come alive around I admit I dont lot patience hunting requires different kind patience Hunting something many might think sitting around nothing But patient enough quite rewarded whatever hunting This one thing I definetly think requires lot patience kind patience would think its entertaining patience That I think everyone patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it says thaqt they found a landform on Mars. People believe it not to be a land form and they believe it to be something that was created by aliens.This essay will be outlining: how there is no proof that aliens are real so how can the object be created by aliens, techology was better now so they can look closely at what the object is, and land moves so it should not be a shocker that there is a object/landform made. There are many ways why people believe the way the believe but you have yo think about facts in things like this.\n\nIn science there are many things to help figure out problems but we need to think that if aliens were real then how would they be able to create something like that. There is no proof that aliens are real, so therefore aliens making this thing is pretty much impossible. In the beginnign ther was a thought that aliens could have biult it but now it is not. Ther is no way that a alien/aliens could have made that on purpose without us seeing them or them seeing us. If aliens were real we sould have saw them befor then and been able to take pictures of them, just like us taking picture of this object.\n\nTechnology was better and got a better look at the picture. In 2001 they had another picture taken and the picture does not look like the one taken in 1976 or 1998. In the picture the landform has changed in the shape by becomign a little wider. the new technology helped them by finding that the alienated object was just a landform.\n\nLand moves on it's own all the time so we just can't expect us not to think that another planet's land doesn't move. The landform shown in the essay shows it is comign up into a hill and movign closer together. If the lanform keeps moving it could make a even cooler landform. We need to consider that ther not alaways something alien going on.\n\nThis essay has shown you and proved that the object in the picture of the face is a landform. You might not agree but you can't just think crazy you have to think smart and use the information you have. This essay outlined: that aliens aren't proved to be real so we cant use that as a prediction, the technology was better than in ther earlier times, and that land moves on it's own and we cant change that. I have showed you my side, your turn to choose.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are coming\", but what does that really mean. These cars are suppose to intail so many features to make life eazier.\n\nManufacutures and society think these cars could change the world.\n\nI dont believe\n\nthese cars can change the world. Although many belive this will help us i think it will just cause a plauge of more problems to come.\n\nWhen first reading this article I was shocked to know manufactures are considering on inserting cameras to make sure the dirver is coherent and aware at all times. In the article the writer states \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\" (Driverless cars). How do we know the car is really the only one watching?\n\nSupposevely\n\nthese cameras are to insure maximum safety by monitering the driver, but it can also be interperted that one wants to keep an eye on the driver. With all the new features on the car, our freedoms are slowly disipating.\n\nThese cars are suppose to make life easier and assest the drive; however the driver has to be concious to take over in some situations. I think driverless cars would be of most value if the driver wasnt concious. Many drinking and driving\n\naccidents happen ever year; and this car would be the perfect solution. Except\n\nyou couldnt use this car in that situation because you are not fully concious. Perhaps it is just me but a driverless car since it is so new would be quite expensive, i know i wouldnt spend my money on it if i cannot use it when i really need it.\n\nWith these new cars new law and addtions to streets will have to be made. That means more money will come out of the taxpayers pocket even though they might not have the care. Why have a machine do something you can do yourself, with less hassle.\n\nThis type of technology is up and coming however still very new. Often like regular automobiles accidents happen. In the articuld the writer points out a very big negative in this type of car. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or themanufacture\"(Driverless cars)? This is a strong argument to why these cars to potentionally be more of a problem than a solution. Often drivers have enough trouble trying to get their insurance companys pay now they have to go after the cars manufacure too.\n\nAll of this trouble for one little car, that calims will proved more reliably safty.\n\nThis article has many great points, both positive and negative. However the diffrence between the number of pros and cons is subsantial. Although this car is said to change the world, i believe it is for the worst. With these changes come sacrafices of all things. Simple freedoms such as privacy, money, and time. Considering everything i blelieve\n\nthese cars would be a detrement to sosciety if actually made a sold.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Going to study at a university or college is a good opportunity for those who want to be fully equipped before leaving for work or to start a business and it is the best route to a successful career, while other people believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss the mentioned issue and will state my opinion.\n\nSome people might think that before they let their child start their own business, the children need to study at a university or college in order to equip themselves to be ready for work and it is necessary for them to study all levels of the education system. Because of doing that their child might be successful in the future and that makes them feel proud, so they send their children to college or university because they think that once they learn, they will surely succeed. Thus, letting your children study at college or university might be the best choice for most parents. \n\nBut other parents and students think that it is better to get a job straight after school, maybe they don’t have enough money to study higher or study at university or college is hard for them so they must leave for work after they finish school.For example, in my country, if you want to have permission to study in university you have to take a test and if you fail you can not study higher so some parents and students think that getting a job straight after school might be better. Others think that university and college is not the only way leading to success so they encourage their children to do whatever they want.\n\nIn conclusion, from my perspective, the road to success has many ways and you have to find the right way for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would it be like to live in a society without the use of cars? Well some cities and even countries have begun to limit car usage such as VAUBAN, Germany where \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars\"(Source 1). There happens to be many advantages to limiting car usage such as: less polution, less stress, and better cities. The positives of limiting car usage are very great and would have a positive effect on any city willing to set up these limitations.\n\nThe first advantage of limiting car usage is the effect it will have on the enviroment. According to Source 1, \"cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\". All this polution and emission not only effects the enviroment but also leads to \"intensifying smog\"(source 2) wich is not only bad for the enviroment but also bad for people. The use of cars may not be the only source of emmision, but it is \"the second largest source of America's emissions\"(source 4). Many cities have already realized this and have begun limitations on car usage. Just think if all cities put a limitation on car usage how much fewer the percent of emissions would be and how great of an effect it would have on the enviroment.\n\nAnother positive of car limitation is its impact on cities, towns, and comunities. Bogota a city in Colombia participating in the limitation of car usage has seen the positive effects on there city. Bogota \"has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" wich means more people biking wich means less people using cars wich means healthier people(source 3). This city also has seen an increase in the building of parks and sports centers, restraunts, shopping districts, and smooth sidewalks. Limitations on cars also leads to an improvement of the town's people, because people such as Carlos Arturo have used the limitations as \"an opportunity to take away stress\"(source 3) or Vauban's Heidran Walter who just feels less tense and \"much happier\"(source 1). Not only will these limitations positively effect cities but positively effect the overall mood of the people too.\n\nThere is a long list of advantages of limiting car usage. The advantages include: a healthier enviroment, improved cities, and happier people. Limitation has already started in many cities arouend the world, because these cities see the many advantages to limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the time that we live in technonlogy is constantly developing. We are finding new and more efficient ways to do things that has never been done before. One dream that has always been shown throughout the generations is the evolution of the automobile. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" a part of the dream that is presented is the idea of a car being able to be fully operational without the need of human intervention. Although this idea may accumulate the support of many individuals, I for one, am against the idea of \"driverless cars\". This idea that is being announced has too many unknown factors and variables that could ultimatey put people in danger.\n\nThe writer illustrates these ideas of uncertainty by showing some of the negative aspects of the driverless car. The writer tells the truth about these types of cars, \" Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\"(2). The writer is explaining how that these cars are not fully independent. He tells the reader that these cars will not know how to do simple function that a human driver would be able to do such as pull forward or backward out of a driveway and avoid traffic jams. This negative would prove to be an inconvenience to the human and they would ultimately want to to drive than to constantly be alerted over minor deterences. Also these new cars would be presented and seen as \" overwhelming\". Through these cars people would lose their driving skills and the enthusiasm that comes with driving, \" Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" (8). With this new technology people would be bored with sitting and not actually driving their car. Also, if the car occasionaly needs a driver then why would they not just buy a regualr car? This negative would hinder the advancement of this new technology. Lastly, there are still questions that remain unanswered about this technology. One question that can arise is what is the cost of these cars? The cost of these cars would determine their success and their acceptance into society. Another question that is presented in the text is, \" Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" (9). This shows that there are no laws that protect the safety of citizens if this technology were to fail. Also the question arises that who will be responsible for this accident, the driver or the creators of the cars? This question still remains unansweres which can hinder the safety of our citizens.\n\nThe idea of \"driverless cars\" is one that should not be brought to reality. Their are too many aspects of this technology that are unknown and unpredictable which could ultimately hinder our safety. These casr should remain a figmant of our imagination until we can be sure with all certainty that they will not put us in danger or hinder our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the self driven cars are a great idea , but i do not want to see them on the roads and highways until they are more well designed. They do pose a somewhat of serious threat to us as of now. You could be driving along and it could see something as a threat and make the vehicle stop when there is no real threat and that could cause a crash resulting in serious injury. I do think however no cars should ever be driverlesss because that bascially out the unreliailty in eletronics and computers into the hands that can do serious damage and harm to people and property.\n\nAs the article stated who would be at fault if an accident occured the \"driver\" ir the manufacturer ? and i put driver in quotations because who is really drivng the car is it the car itself or it the person sitting inside the car", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether increasing dependence on modern technologies presents a problem or advantage of the modern society. Although I agree that positives of living in the world of advanced technology might predominate, it is important to consider the negative effects it can have on our lives. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from the UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments.\n There is ample evidence that the loss of money is a major drawback of placing too much reliance on online network and phones. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly criminals are increasingly using internet to steal people’s property. Secondly, in order to use ever improving mobile applications people are driven to spend a considerable amount of money on the latest brand devices, such as iPhone and Samsung smartphones. For instance, recent empirical research by the UK Government demonstrated that an average Brit may invest up to 20% of his/her yearly income in phone accessories and web services. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that the largest disadvantage of relying on advanced technologies is a waste of money.\n Although there is a case of disadvantages attached to the usage of internet and phones damaging people’s budget, the beneficial impact of the latest technology on the way we communicate, cannot be overstated. This is largely because we can keep in touch with our friends and family by email or instant messenger services like Viber and Facebook messenger. For example, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that video messaging is becoming common for business meetings in over 80% companies world wide. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that the mobile and networking technology has revolutionized the communication benefiting connection between friends and family.\n To conclude from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that if the internet network and cell phones are used wisely there would be more positive than negative effects. It is predicted that online communication services will increasingly grow in importance in decades to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the economic development, an increasing number of population flooding into big cities to pursue their dreams. A large number of them are suffering from housing scarcity due to the ever-accelerated housing price. Some believe that this problem can be only solved by government interruptions. To my mind, authority plays a role in tackle this problem, while there are still other alternatives that can be applied. \n\nFirst, The real estate developers should transform their strategies by building more economically affordable houses rather than the luxurious villa which is out of ordinary community’s financial ability. By doing so, a majority of folk could afford the expenditure on houses with the help of banks or make use of the government policies. \n\nAnother effective way is that people should abandon their traditional thinking believing that a property is the only symbol of success or home. The mass media have the duty to alter the public’s mode of thinking. If people cannot own their property in a short time, renting a house for a short time to raise money for the future house investment could also be a plausible solution. \n\nIndeed, government can serve as a deterrent in restraining those real estate developers from inflating the house price as their wishes. However, a large proportion of citizens in big cities are still experiencing home scarcity due to the inequity of wealth allocation. The wealthy group or speculators still have access to buy a house prior to those common house buyers. only when house speculations is limited can the ordinary people have an opportunity to pay a house. \n\nTo conclude, I believe that it is superficial to draw a conclusion that the house shortages can be solved rely solely on the government policies. Actually, house developers, government, and the public should made joint effort on this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Step in the Right Direction\n\nCars are a great means of transportation. Unfortunately nothing is perfect. Cars have many advantages, and like everything, disadvantages too. People rely too heavily on their private vehicles especially with the easy accessability of public transportation. Limiting the use of cars limits pollution, which is a growing issue among many people. Among that, there are many other advantages too. Limiting the use of cars is certainly a step in the right direction.\n\nAs the ice near the poles shrink, the problem of global warming grows. Global warming has been linked to car emmisions. Limiting cars will limit emmisions of harmful gasses into the air. Sadly people seem to like their cars more than the environment. This is unfortunate because there are so many other ways to get around. For some reason people are just too close minded to try something else. If the amount of cars on the road shrinks, then the amount of pollution going into our envirenment will follow. Car-free days in major cities is a good way to get the car-free trend started. With large turnouts, it certainly gets people open to the idea(Source 3). Saying that, this will not work long term. Getting the ball rolling and keeping the ball rolling are two completely different things. Car free cities is a better long term strategy(Source 1).\n\nNow lets talk about our economy. Most people probably wish it was a little better. Jobs make a strong economy. If people didnt have cars they would be in need of some public transportation. Instead of paying that monthly payment on your car, go take the bus. The demand for public transportation would rise immensily thus the supply would follow; opening more jobs.\n\nAll in all, limiting the use of cars has more advantages than disadvantages. Most of the potential problems could be easily fixed with a little bit of brain power. Opening more jobs and cleaning up the envirenment should be reason enough to switch over to a car-free lifestyle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt main obsticles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One problem architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State building s flat roof It would add unwanted stress building frame Another issue gas used fill dirigibles Hydrogen flamable could cause dangerous fire densley populated area downtown New York Towards top building violent air currents caused another problem Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mast A final delema existing law prohibited airships flying low urban areas New York Due obsticles ability dock dirigible top Empire State Building destined", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship books Should books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive Yes certain things need removed shelves example many things nt need seen public Personaly I think censoring certain things alright certain books nt seen music either swearing talking drugs things movies kids nt see like rated CAPS NUM either blood nudity somethen line magazines magazines many types magazines like example adult children cooking cleaning house things stuff dogs cats outside stuff But censoring things could offensive I ca nt understand books offensive books talking history something happen Like example lets say colored kid comes reads book CAPS slavery kid right going get offensive kid going say You owe something anscetores slaves wrong kid either read book wrong nt understand I done couple times either I got offensive started getting angry tose trash I got mad I got offensive Do nt get wrong I love reading like I said certain things ment never read never found But getting offensive couple books movies music magazines I nt read magazines I ca nt get offensive books movies music I take offesively like I read lets say CAPS I watch movies I take offensively nothing nt tie books person nt direct right For books like I said I love reading books nt get wrong I take offensively like something character something I wished I nt done something like character dies reminds close friend mine teacher something line I either cry I stop reading book period Music I could go day example I used love rap passion rap becoming horrible rapper either talking killing someone drugs sex s like I said horrible thats one thing needs go away long long time But many types besides rap There punk etc like I said I could go day music The people censoring things like tv shows like example seriously nothing wrong show people censoring adults think bad people nothing bad show I watching since I five years old nothing bad would something bad All grown man acting like child s like going tell husband wife kids CAPS I m sorry I censore bad person I m saying I would censore I m saying maybe people take time look shows censoring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso mood growing UP Cuba moveing US When finds house later famliy makes house home The also explaning life like dose like cooking famliy dose free time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many contend that historical assets should be returned to the country they originated from. While I partially concur with this opinion, it should not be a universal rule.\r\n\r\nProponents of the return of these relics point to their historical importance. This can be explained through the hypothetical scenario of Japan discovering a diary written by Ho Chi Minh during his stay there on his journey to seek national salvation. As the Japanese are generally unfamiliar with this historical figure, the diary possesses minimal relevance to them and limited commercial value for local public display institutions. It naturally should be repatriated to Vietnam, where Ho Chi Minh is revered as their greatest leader. Vietnamese historians would gain valuable insights into his revolutionary journey through the diary, and the museum exhibiting it would attract more visitors eager to witness his handwriting and explore the accompanying narratives.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are also historical objects that do not require repatriation. For example, after the Vietnam War, the United States withdrew the majority of its military weaponry, a part of which would already suffice for reutilization for exhibition and other purposes. It is therefore unnecessary to reclaim the American tanks currently on display at the War Remnants Museum in Ho Chi Minh City. These foreign exhibits have long been the essence of the museum, drawing numerous visitors, enabling them to experience the war more authentically, and inspiring them to learn history. This, coupled with the substantial costs concerning specialized approaches to transporting such large, rusted vehicles to the United States, justifies their retention in Vietnam.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, origin should not be the sole driver of historical artifact repatriation. Other factors, such as delivery expenses and the specific needs and interests of each country involved, should also be taken into account.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock docked means electric winch wihich houlad line front ship tied mast Also dirigibles body could swing breeze yet passengers could safely get get dirigible walking gangplank open oservation platform Finally architects engineers Empire State Building consulted experts taking tours equiment mooring operations US Naval air Station Lakehurst New Jersey", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a very usable objects in the kind of society that we are living in today. But with great things comes bad things too. The limit of car usage in any places of the world would have an effect on every one . It could be good, it could be bad. But when it comes to the envirenment, limiting car usage can even help prevent certain problems that people don't realy pay attention to. Prolems like pollution and the government wasting money in highways for cars than trying to find safer ways for transportation.\n\nLike many factories, cars give out bad smoke from the pipe under the back of the car. When that smoke goes in the air and get mix with the air, it would create pollution. Now the pollution would create bigger problems like the rise of the greenhouse gas emission and it could also create global warming wich could lead to much worse stuff that I would not get into. All you have to know is that global warming could lead to the destruction of the earth.\n\nIn France, their government decided to enforce a driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Based on facts cited in source two, the city of paris was near-record pollution. On my personal experiances, I know what car smoke can do to people. One of my uncles died in Haiti because he inhale too much car smoke. It knind of messed up his lungs.\n\nPeople are suprisinly over the crisis of cars. But apperently the government deosn't realise that, since based on source 1 it stated \"80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport. Bycicles are a much safer way to travel. Though cars are faster, but it is way easier to crash in cars, and bycicles does not release bad smoke that can culminate to pollution .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 2005, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked. All of those miles contributed to global warming by emitting green house gases. Germany, France, and Bogota have realized the effects of driving cars and are taking action. There are many advantages to limiting car usage.\n\nSince the mid-1990's Bogota has has been celebrating The Day Without Cars. This program had millions of columbians hiking, biking, skating, or taking buses to the places they needed to go. Car-free day left the streets free of traffic jams. Once Bogota stated to reduce car usage, they replaced the narrow, uneven sidewalks with smooth, wide ones. Throughout the city new restaurants, shopping districts, and even parks and sports centers have bloomed. About 7 million people participated in Bogota's Car-free Day.\n\nA city in Germany called Vauban has given up their cars. Vauban's streets are completely car-free. \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here,\" says Elisabeth Rosenthal. Vauban is a growing trend in Europe and the Unites States. Since there are no cars in Vauban, stores were placed withing walking distance.\n\nParis, France banned driving due to smog. Robert Duffer states, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" The car banning started on a Monday. Drivers who did not comply were fined 22-euros ($31). Nearly 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded. After five days of intensifying smog, congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France. However, citizens did complain about the inconvenience so exceptions were made for hybrids and plug-in cars. The smog cleared enough for the ruling French party to rescind the ban.\n\nBarack Obama's goals to curb the United Sates' greenhouse gas emission unveiled last week and will make a shift in American behavior. Recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars and getting fewer licenses. Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. Limiting car usage has many advantages. The advantages include less greenhouse gasses, less smog, closer shopping areas, less traffic, and a healthier environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens it was a natural land form. There a many reasons that make it seem like the land form could have been made by aliens, but on the other hand there was no signs of any living thing that could have done this. there are many thing with this object that could lead you to beliveing either it was made by aliens.\n\nIn 1976 the Vikking took the picture that was bellived to look like a face. In 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor flew over mars snapping pictuers that were ten times sharper than the first picture of then the first picture taken. By increaseing the sharpness of the picture it showed that it was a land form. The time of year that the first picture was taken it was a cloudy over the Red Planet. This could have made shadow that made the form look like it had eyes and nosie.\n\nThe last time the picture was taken (2001) the picture was taken in maximum resolution. This maximum photo if taken of earth you could see the pirimds in Egypt. So if there was anything weird the picture would have shown it.\n\nIn conclusion the picture taken in 2001 '' actually shows is the Martin eqivalent of a butte or mesa----landforms common around the American West.''(paragraph 12). All signs are now pointing to the fact that it was a natural landform. In the end NASA found out what it really was and that alines making this figure was false.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story winter Hibiscus Saeng fond Beautiful flowers grew home land Her favirte flower winter Hibiscus beautiful red pedals velvet She also failed test taken story trying say nothing good whats home sometimes need another chance something", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we have driveless cars or cars you can dive , like we have today? I think we shouldnt have driveless cars we should stick to the cars we have today. Its many reason i think we should just stick to driving cars our selfs cause to me thats very unsave to be driving and your not behind the wheel. For companies i think its bad cause what if the car messes up and get in a crash.\n\nIt want be the person who own the car fault it would be the commpay fault who made the car.I think it would be there fault cause they made the car and if the car goes wrong its there technology thats going bad and the person thats in the car it not controling it so how could it be they fault.I also thinks its not save because why would you put your life in somebody else hands , well in somebody else technology and you dont even know how it works or what they did to it. How would you know when to stop? The car wouldnt know how to stop cause how can it tell the light red or theres a stop side or for some other reason you would have to stop they coulnt because cars dont have eyes so they wouldnt be able to see.How would you get from one place to another how do they know where you goin? You cant unless you have navigation but most people dont know where the place is located so then how can they get there they want be able to do nothing. For the people who do think it should be driveless cares its dumb cause then you want able to know how to drive cause.If you had a driveless car you want have to get your permit or your licence. To me thats not teaching nobody how to drive just putting them in the car where they have to do nothing thats not learning.\n\nShould we have driveless cars or should we have cars we can drive? Other people might think its cool to not be able to drive and have a driveless car. For me i think its dumb cause i want to learn how to drive .\n\nIf i get in a crash i want it to be because of me i dont want to take the risk of trusting and company technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars may be a good source of travel, but, unknown to some, are dangerous to Earth and it's inhabitants. Limiting car usage to bicycles, walking, or any other option is a good idea. The reasons for this being that it makes traffic safer and, more importantly, reduces pollution.\n\nTo begin with, limiting use on cars makes traffic less of a hassle. For example, in the text, \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" the author of this source reports that the effects of not using cars is, \"-leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" (Source 3 Selsky) Notice how, even in a big city, the effects of not using cars are extremely noticeable. If that car-free day makes it to EVERYWHERE in the planet, no more traffic-related nonsense will occur. Furthermore, in the passage, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" a citizen by the name of Heidrun Walter states \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.'\" (Source 1 Rosenthal) Even she finds that the lack of a car makes life easier for her. This statement, though some would prefer not to admit that they were tense drivers, is true, as being behind the wheel in a large amount of traffic could be stressful. It is agreeable that the effects of not using cars shows how much better life would be if they were removed permanently.\n\nIn addition to reducing traffic, limiting the use of cars could decrease the amount of pollution. To illustrate, in the excerpt, \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" Robert Duffer reports that, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" (Source 2 Duffer) It is shocking that the amount of driving in that city caused so much pollution that they needed to enforce a law banning driving, a TEMPORARY law. It is baffling how Paris didn't keep that law intact. To add insult to injury, according to \"The End of Car Culture,\" Obama plans to curve the amount of greenhouse gas emissions in the United States, seein how \"-transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants.\" (Source 4 Rosenthal) Wow, driving causes such a large amount of emissions to the point that it is near the amount of power plant emissions. It seems rather unbelievable, and some would wish that the article wasn't true, but the use of cars is practically killing humanity. The point is that car usage is damaging Earth and preventing use would reduce the damage.\n\nTo wrap things up, reducing car usage would make traffic less of a risk and decrease pollution. Perhaps it will make the planet a better place, or fail in the end and continue to hurt the land some would call \"home\". Just remember this, when you continue to use whatever car you use, remember the dangers it may bring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood mixture things s really hard say withe emotions author throws around But however strongest feeling unity familyI m Not sure family called emotion I think something described several One course unity says great solidarity friendship s rather sweet charectorizes family something bonds make withe people contrast cultures family blood ties family always first So way I think way thinking comes cultureBut also puts bit sadness overall seems extremely thankful As say happiness nothing without appreciating says I learned real defnetion family apparently knows real happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "imagine kids schools run able research computers Would okay kids option typing homework Do think adolescence would want waste paper messy handwriting mistakes I would hate live like I hate live like I know peers would agree This one many reasons computers positive effect people Other reaasons include citizens world need easier way communicate people work home I know would want upset many people taking away computers would First think schools runs Now picture kids turning eight page essays teachers typing would taken three Imagine kids night scribbling words away cramped hands typing write quickly possible These children computers therefore teacher take time try comprehend illegibal students handwriting I almost see kids screaming eyes darting around struggle finish high priority papers If computers would happen children Also students use computers research learning different parts world As I doubt say research negative affect school kids I mean unless nt want learn Secondly I want close eyes Think calling best friend lives He pick walk clean shiny black computer You hear clicketyclack keys write message wooshing sound moniter maes press send It kind amazing advanced technology send message matter seconds You could nt possibly say hard work put makng computers positive effect could I know I talk friends time telephoone You see family long distance calling I nt computer I would never able talk I know lot friends issue time difference locatiions makes hard call people Have ever problem Would want effect could nt talk friends anymore Most importantly I would like tell story When five daddy used tuck bed every night It favorite part everyday But I six dad got job required work late every night He stopped coming home tucking I nt understand young I I cried every night three weeks After three weeks dad s boss told could work home computer His work gave computer back tucking every night still If nt possible effect I nt know Many people able work home computers another reason computers helpful citizens world I m needs computer work Although I see people oppose computer I completely utterly disagree Computers help people working learning even communication People think computers cost much find almost price range I agree citizens spend much time computer still totally positive effect people world I know agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is that it helps the envirornment to stay healthy, it helps bring the rate of high car usage down and lets people take bikes, skates, and ect. and so people can be more actice, and cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath.\n\nThe advantages for limiting car usage is that it helps the envirornment to stay healthy because with so many countries with over populated cities have alot of cars which causes smog. Like in Vauban Germany they have gave up on there cars so they have baned cars, and that most of the population has got rid of their car, and or sold them to stay in Vauban which has a population of 5,500 residents. The people now in Vuaban walk of side walks, and are more actice most of the citizens like it that way. which that is a good way to get over car is to use bikes, skateboards, and ect. So that people can be more active, and social. It is also good that they do that so they can get a exercise than just sitting in a car, and driving to a location.\n\nthe advantages of limiting car usage is that it help prevents harmful chemicals and gases thar are bad for the air we breath because if we keep polluting the streets with cars those harmful and deadly chemicals, and gases go to the atmosphere and come back to us as air we breath, and those are not good things to put in your body. The cause of over populated cities like in paris, or bogota have cause alot of smog. So now what they have to lower the smog is that they have days when they dont drive cars, and that if you rode a car you would get fined. In Colombia Bogota they have time where that the people didnt mind not driving cars, and they would hike, bike or even take the bus.\n\nTo end off the advantages of limiting car usage is that it helps the envirorment to stay healthy, help bring people together and make them more active by taking bikes, skates, and ect. and also cars have harmful chemicals, and gases that is bad for the air we breath.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The news media has gained a lot of importance in our society. Through News media we come to know about the daily issues of the community. The news is readily available through newspapers, magazines, television, radio and the internet. Each and every media is a powerful medium, in itself. I personally feel that there is a positive impact of news on people.\n\nNews help people to learn something new every day. In addition to that it helps people to develop an open and critical mind. As a citizen of a country we all should be aware of our country's economic situation, sports, games which are very well provided through news media and not only one's country news, News about the whole world is presented.\n\nProbing further, we can say News allows us to have a broader understanding of local, national and international affairs. News is not only limited educational purpose. It has also come up as the source of entertainment. We can get to know about the release date of the new films and what's going on in the lives of our favourite film stars.\n\nHowever, there are other aspects too, whereas on one hand News is considered as a medium through which we come to know about the economic situation of our country but nowadays the focus of the News has shifted to some less important aspects such as news about film stars are coming to light instead of some serious issues. \n\nAll in all, I strongly feel that the news media play a crucial role in the society. Internet has emerged as a strong medium of news. Because of news media more awareness is spread among the masses, especially the youth of the country is more enlightened.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the FACS is good idea. I feel as if this could be useful in many ways to the public. I ecspecially think that benefit towards the teenage community. Believe it or not, there are a massive amount of emotionally damaged teenagers that have a hard time expressing how they feel.\n\nThe F.A.C.S is could make huge impact. People that have gone through emotional tolls in their lives, and don't know how to express how they feel would finally have an outlet. This could be of major use to psychiatrist with patients that have a hard time expressing themselves.\n\nNot only could it benefit you at home, but it could be of great use in school. Such as, when you're in class and you don't understand the lesson. The FACS could recognize that you are confused about the subject and simplify it for you. Or say your being bullied and you are to scared to tell. Well the FACS could sense that and help you with the situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "why should we stop driving cars? cars take us places way faster than we could be riding bick or walking. yes i know cars cause polltuion but we have made more advance cars that run on electricity and it takes where we need to go at the same place and doesnt do harm to the atmo sphere. cars help you ge tot any place faster and if a reallybad accidnent happen and a hospital was too far away how are we goona help them if we cant find a way to get to one as quicly as possible. cars are one of the best transportation devices so why would you try to get rid of them even if they just cause a little daamge to the earth it really isnt that bad. we really need cars for a whole bunch of things like going to any of your families houses that live and going to a road trip that might be a couple of hours away , so imagine if you didnt have a car, how would you be able to do any of those with out one.\n\nif we didnt have cars to use you wouldnt car sales men and gasoline stations and car repair companies and car was businessesnlose alot of money and make them unemployed and it would be hard for them to look for a job in the disasterous economy of ours and it would make it worse than it already is . honestly to me i think this is outrageous for us to do that. there is no way that we can all just driving cars either we just have to find a better way to fuel up the car without hurtung the enviorment. and when that one day come we would stop this worldwide problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear know someone lives faraway Or ever used These techniches computer Computers benefitted society greatly It helps people things allow people talk goin skills playing games images easier As I mentioned computers allow us communicate people This way nt talk people person would get annoying every time wanted talk someone three things would happen without computers would either getting trouble school memorizing phone number dialing talking person Clearly computers make easier talk people Next computers allow us talk faraway friends family You could write email talk chat This helped I talk one friends recently sent email aunt Without doubt computers make easier us communicate people matter far Secondly every computer I seen able play sort game whether disk website These games teach us many skills The first skill could learn typing days ago I playing game seconds type many words fast If make mistake one second decreases time It also gets harder go getting three letter words five letter words even seven letter words Also class information processing computer Once finished assignments could play type learn That also typing game As see games teach us type Another type games need guidethinking able win This teaches nto ready almost anything Also teaches us process around decide decision In reallife situations seconds react Games help reallife situations The last type game tower defense This shows us teenager think like lives depended If evr join army become sort captain would able organize trops best mannor could think tower defense games also teach us think plan ahead In types games costs money bag upgrades buy towers One decision either buy weaker upgrade save stronger one little bit Tower defense games make us make better decisions Games fun teach us skills Lastly computer make things easier images One thing computer makes easier", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I really patient I baby sitting going great kid started fighting It two little brothers course They hiting kicking youngest one biting I told stop They started toy So I went back room told stop So stoped good little brother started copy everything everybody said I said stop youll go room So stoped everybody good rest night mom dad got home whole different story So thats time I patient little brothers sisters", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face\" that was found on Mars is not an aliens. The \"Face\" is simply just a huge rock formation which resembles a human head. If it was an alien the head would have anteanas on it and the head would be shaped differently than it is. Even though it was eighteen long years after the Viking Mission ended that we took a photo of the head doesn't mean that is is and alien.\n\nOn April 5,1998, when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) flew over Cydionia for the first time,Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera(MOC) team took a picture. This picture was ten time sharper than the original Viking photos. When the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landforn and not and alien.\n\nWell not everyone was happy about it not being an alien. It's not easy to find the Cydonia. We just don't pass over the \"Face\" very often. But on April 8,2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia MGS went for another look. This time we rolled the space craft 25 degrees to center the face in the field. Malin's team captured an extradinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\n\nIn conclusion, what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. The picture was never an alien head.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driveless car are safe and harmful.I thinl they are reliable enough to be used.\n\nI think that if i had a driverless car that it would be helpful. it would be helpful because it drives itself it uses less gas or if eletrical it doesnt use gas at all.You could probably get alot more done within the day you may be able to even make it on time to wherever you have to go.The driveless cars offer more flexibility than a bus.These cars could change the world.but the bad outcome is what if the drive in the car is paying attention to the traffic stops or car wrecks.The driver of the car could be notified by the seat and couldnt grab the wheel in time. The accelarter may break and you cant slow the car down properly.If there was a problem with the car the manufactures would only be held accountable for it if the system caused the accident.My opinionon the cars is that they need to be tested longer before being road ready.\n\nIn Conlusion to this statement, are the smart cars ready for the road or to be used? My answer is no because there are many details that should be fixed and replace. smart cars need a little more work if ther going to drive people around without causing damage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Movies and computer games contain violence. Few individuals assume they have a negative impact on society and should be banned.while others claim they are just a source of relaxation. I think this demerits because many movies are very informative for every people , while the masses also face many interpretations by watching violent films due to criminal advertisements.\r\n\r\nMovies and computer games can be proved constructive in many terms of learning others' opinions , language as well as culture and with providing society with a great massage. It means, gaining knowledge they can use where they want. Secondly, due to a swamped ,schedule everyone needs relaxation and a refresh of the brain. For instance, people can spend some quality time with their friend's members by watching films and children spend time with their friends by playing computer games. As well as child's brains become sharper by playing games As a result, they relieve stress by watching movies as well as they can share movie experiences with others.\r\n\r\nDue to spending more time on computer games children become lazy because they do not take part in outdoor activities. In other words, nowadays children easily develop violence by watching movies because they have not majority that what is good for them or not. To quote an example, rap is increasing dramatically because mostly in movies have this scene.Therefore, They do crimes at school with friends.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although watching movies source of entertainment we cannot ignore its drawbacks such as violence and being more dependent on computer games.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Space is a strange place with an unlimited amount of possibilities, one of which is the possibility of alien life. Because of this, I can understand why you might think that this is evidence of alien life. In hopes of debunking this suspicion, I am hoping you will read through my provided evidence that supports my claim that this \"face\" was not created by aliens.\n\nFirst off, NASA would not be trying to hide the existence of aliens from the public. Their budget is primarily based on the tax and donation of those who are interested in space. If aliens were to exist, and NASA knew this, telling the public would give their budget a massive increase. So, to dismiss the accusation that NASA is hiding proof of evidence from you, I assure you that they would have told us just to get the much needed rise in their budget.\n\nThe picture of the \"face\" was taken forty years ago, just seven years after we first landed on the moon. As stated in the article, this was, in fact, the best resolution they could take the picture with. If you put two and two together, you can conclude that the highest resolution at the time was not very high at all compared to modern day photos.\n\nFinally, you must take into considerationg that Mars is just like Earth, a planet. This means that it will have geographical land marks just like Earth. This \"face\" has been confirmed to be butte or mesa, which are common here on Earth, as said in the article. If we were to colonize Mars in the future, and someone were to observe Earth and see such a land formation, do you think they'd call it proof of aliens? Of course not!\n\nWith the evidence I provided above, I hope you are able to make your own conclusion. As said before, the vast emptiness of space is impossible to predict, and the existence of aliens is likely. Everyone is entitled to believe what they want to believe when it comes to aliens, so I am only able to hope that you are convinced by my essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people in the world today think that cars and driving everywhere is a necessity; however, many people feel that owning a car is \"impractical (and) undesirabe.\" (paragraph 43) There are many advantages to having cars, but there are also many more advantages to not using cars wherever people go. Some advatages include conserving resources, making people have a little more money in their pocket and it also improves safety in many suburban cities.\n\nIn the world today, a major problem that still exsists is greenhouse gases. Cars emit a lot of gas that isn't good for the enviroment. In the first source, it says that people living in cities \"is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes... passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent...in Europe...and up to 50 percent... in the United States.\"(paragraph 5) Exports mean to say that it is better for people to live in cities so they don't have to drive everywhere. This means that the more people that live in cities, the less gas goes into the air. In Paris, the city issued a ban for driving to try and reduce the smog. The second source says that \"congestion was down to 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\" (paragraph 14) Only after five days of the no driving ban, more than half of the smog was gone in Paris. It also says that the amount of smog was almost as polluted at the city of Beijing, China, which is the most polluted city in the world. Bogota also did the same thing. They have an event called \"A Day Without Cars.\" Participant Carlos Arturo Plaza says it is a good way \"to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"(paragraph 24) They also got other cities, and even other countries, to follow suit and join the event. America faces the same problem as Paris; too many greenhouse gases are being put into the atmosphere. President Obama has a goal that he wasnts to achieve and that is to try and make the enviroment healthy. The last article says that driving less \"will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants.\"(paragraph 34) This implies that the amount of gases let into the air will be reduced. If peolpe didn't drive as much from place to place, the world would be a happier, healthier place.\n\nApart from the fact that cars give of gas, not driving everwhere also means people save more money. In Vauban, Germany, nobody has any cars, they walk or bike to wherever they need to go. \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park-large garages at the egde of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\"(paragraph 2) People would be more inclined to not getting a car rather than spend an extra 40 grand on top of getting a house for a parking space. Also, in Paris, a fine was issued for people who drove their cars during the car ban. The second article says \"even-number license plastes were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine..\"(paragraph 11) If people didn't drive their cars around when they weren't supposed to, they would still have the 22 euros they lost. The same type of fine was issued in Bogota, Columbia. If people drove their cars on \"A Day Without Cars\", then they would have to face a $25 fine. However, in the United States, \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\"(paragraph 29) Without having to pay for a car or gas money, Americans are saving way more money they had been when they first got a car. Wit people not having to worry about payments or gas prices, they have more money in their wallet.\n\nNot only does not driving save money and reduce gas, it also improves cities and people's lives. Heidrun Walter, a German media trainer, says that \"when (she) had a car, (she) was always tense. (She's) much happier this way.\" (paragraph 3) She likes not having to drive everywhere, it makes her feel more calm and less tense. It's not only changing peoples lives, but it's changing the cities. Cities are attempting \"to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with eless space for parking.\"(paragraph 6) Cities are changing their apperance in order to intice people into driving less and walking or biking more. They intend to make the stores closer together rather than having to drive across the highway to get to the next store. Also in Bogota, there has been a \"cunstruction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" and \"parks and sports centers...have bloomed throughout the city.\"(paragraphs 27&28) With more people walking, the city wants to make the outside apperance different and more appealing than what it looked like before people just used cars. Not driving is not only good for personal well being, but for the a city's well being.\n\nThere are many advantages to driving cars, such as saving time and getting to places faster but, not driving cars is way better in the long run because of a better enviroment, saving money and better cities and personal health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the colleg now has votes for vice presidant and there are 538 electors but 270 electors are what we are suppos to have 3 were picked by the state they have a presadent election for evry for years if you run for president you get your own group and you get alot of responsibilities and it is held evry tuseday and first monday and the winner takes it all and they have other cannidates to worrie about and the govener prepares for the presidans election and there are about 60% of voters if your the presidant you need to defened your titel back in 1960's in lousiana we almost succeeded but then they hired other electors to go agianst John F Kennedy and then evrybody was faithlessand now their are 500,000 voters and it has increased drasticly and we half to make a congress if your presidant 35,000,000 go to just pick a presidant 41,971 are in deadlock in 1976 there were about 5,559 elections back then there are 25,000 media markets texas hade the most voters in 1987 and all of are presadents have at least 2,000 or more canadates bush hade the least votes sence 1888 61.5% of votes was compared to a voteing persentage of 51.3% and that was in the north and south 2012 they have boosted their companie and their attinstion by ads and some build boards 29 elctoral votes 3 were passed through their were 301 votes now there are 370 votes and this all happened in 1992 and there are more dimacrats in texas than there are in florida there are 20 in florida and 33 in texas and all of the elections are nation wide and voters do half of the work for just voteing and the pepole are going through the votes to see hew there new presidant is for the new year and all the votes came from Electrol colleg and all of the campains are in the small states and in texas they have turned off votes in texas and now there is less attenstion in the compainey and they do politicl votes and the pepole think that the voters should be the ones to decid the election and up state voters pay close attention to see hew wins.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI am writing this letter to inform you of how I think changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States would be better than keeping the electoral college. Back in 1960, in the Louisana legislature, segragations nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. Occasionally, electors have refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. The electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system in each state. With an electoral college it's the electors who elect the president, not the people. The Electoral College method of selecting the president can turn off voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to exspress a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story about Mona Lisa and her smile is a very popular topic. Alot, of painters use her as a drawing. The details from the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" has alot of good ideas. Example, new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This would be very useful technology for us humans or aniamls to use it for. As, shown in her picture Mona looks to be always sad but happy. This system maybe better for the world.\n\nFirst, you have people's statements as \"Can we actually Calculate emontions\". The process begins the computer is a 3-D model of the face. There're 44 major muscles in the model must human muscles. The movement of one or more muscles is called an \" actin unit\". Yes, they can cauclate your emontions by a computer.\n\nSecond, they have gotten a long ways to bulid the technology and had gotten to read what emontons people are feeling. In the passage it states \" the facial expresssions for each emontion are universal\". No, it can help in many ways to seeing if your freinds are feeling mad, sad , and or happy.\n\nTherefor,Yes, this technology would be really good for this planet. This could be a very good way for a doctor or a therepist. They\n\ncan find out what the emontions the patcients are feeling. They could also try for aniamls such as gorillas. This is another way of\n\na great buying product. So, it should be out and for people to see othere's emontions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some cars are to loud and causes alot of polution in the world today. The most problem is the polution thats coming out of the cars. Limiting the usage of your car can become a big help in the community today, not only that it can help our atmosphere and the air that breathe from sun up to sun down. For years people have been using the cars that run on fuel that polutes our air. some countries do not like speacialy Paris. Lets find out more why Paris dont like fuel using cars.\n\nParis enforced laws that ban car usage to clear the air of the global city. Motorists that has driving licences were ordered to leave their vehicles home. If they did not follow that law they would have to pay a $31(22-euro) fine. Some people had their car impounded due to their reaction for paying the fine. THAts when they came up with an idea by making cars that run on electicty or solar to cut down fuel usage. For this reason, car traffic was down atleast 60% in the capital of France. Thats one reason why you should limit your car uasage.\n\nBogota, Colombia made up an event, they called it car-free day. Thats when everybody leave their cars home. Thats the day when you would had hiked,biked, skated or even took the bus to work or where ever you were going. The reason for them making that up was to promote alternative transportation and to reduce smog. If you didnt follow this event you would have to face a $25 fine. Even though on somedays it would rain, it hasnt stop people from participating. This was a way to cut down stress on people and to reduce ait polution. THis event has spreaded through cities. This is an another advantage for limiting car usage.\n\nBasically these are somethings that you can do to help the communtiy. Some people may not like the idea, but it doesnt help to atleast try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story a big part is wanting to explore Venus because it's important to see what is outside of the world. The author of this story said that our human nature would most likely take us to Venus to see what's out their for us. There is vaule in going to Venus because we can discover new things and it will help us gain insight in on the planet. Venus is the closest planet to earth.\n\nA good and big reason we should go to Venus is that we would want to go out and see what other planets have in store for us. Venus is a good place to start because it's the closest that is to Earth. We have already tried to go to Venus but man could not indure the mission for example if we take tablets or phones it will be like if we pour acid on to them . We sent out spacecrafts that have been unmanned already so just imagin in a coulpe of years what we could do to go to Venus.\n\nI think human nature will take us to Venus. Us as humans are willing to go beyond to find out things no matter how dangerous or even if we have doubts. It has big vaule if we go we get to find out if their is human life,diffrent structures. We need to meet the challenges that are presented to us by Venus. We already might have some of the tools for example one of the computers that helped us during World War 2 could help us now because these computers don't need to be electronics they are gears and levers and they are better because they can endure in the physical conditions.\n\nScientists have been discussing and they have stated that Venus is one of the most like Earth solar system. They think a long time ago Venus was covered in oceans and could even have formed life. That's even better readons on why we should travel to Venus.\n\nThis is why we should travel to Venus all of things we could discover like life structures. Even humans are planning to get ready to for the travel. I think if we give it a couple of years we should be their and maybe even discovered new life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Click click click CAPS computer froe going Computers positive effect people teaches information socialize improve skills Without computer d hopeless Have ever needed research project nt access go local town library No problem computer home You could sit type things get information need You research anything everything computer Maybe want learn something new nt many books well go computer friend Many people assume computers entertainment play games fun free time What nt know research engines like google netrekker All loaded knowledgable information Some people sit home read become smarter right You computer would probably even entertaining boring ad book library Have ever thought computer way people get away everyone else time thought way thought wrong There many ways socialize others computer email instant messaging video chatting etc There various ways communicate people computer It amazing technology even someone different country communicate click button Ever heard social networking The name selfexplanitory You socialize people across world network For example myspace facebook twitter tumblr etc That fun way connect others like relatives never met live far away friends friends friends etc You even really social meet new people long safe You thinking point computer nothing research socializing Again thought wrong Computers good way help skills For example handeye coordination You look screen type words look screen clicking mouse That really improves coordination Also hand movement get better When type fingers moving around keyboard creating hand muscles Not physical skills computers help research skills There certain ways research information effectively This help future researching school purposes Without would nt person missing something Computers play big part everyones lives matter age Computers definitly positive effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I claim for the use of technology that reads students emotional expressions.One because it would help a lot of people know whats wrong with them or others if they aren't good at reading expressions.Second it could help detectives know weither the person faking or not(a smile,anger, ext).\n\nOne way it can help others find a way to know if someone sad, happy, or any other emotion is by the computer analising its data and seeing the 44 major muscles that help express emotion, to tell you what emotion the person feeling right now\n\nAnother way this could help is when detectives or police men would need help reading a person, which would really help by showing the person is faking the emotion or not, by reading the certain muscles need to make person actually smile or just a fake smile which fools everyone.\n\nWith the fact and reasonings i;ve shown u dear reader I hope u see that haveing a computer that know how to analyse your expretion can be help for and the concludes that we should have a F.A.C.S", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Road safety is major topic of concern in today’s society. Although I accept that punishing those who violate traffic laws severely is an important means of protecting road users, I contend that this is not the only way, as there are several other solutions to implement.\n\nImposing stringent punishments on traffic lawbreakers is undoubtedly an effective method of guaranteeing road safety. This is because this may deter drivers from disobeying traffic regulations. If there are fewer drivers flouting traffic laws, the roads may become safer for all road users. This can be seen in the situation of Hanoi in early 2012, when a new fine for running the red light or overtaking without giving the left turn signal was introduced. As a result of this heavy fine, both the traffic accident and the traffic-related mortality rates in Hanoi fell considerably in that year.\n\nI would, however, claim that it is an exaggeration to state that the aforementioned policy is the only viable way of keeping drivers safe, and there are other resolutions to adopt. The first is constructing designated lanes for different types of vehicles, namely cars, motorbikes and bicycles. This measure is crucial in many cities in the world such as Jakarta and Bangkok, where most fatal traffic accidents happen when cars and motorbikes collide. The second is enhancing the safety standards of all vehicles on the road, which can be done by setting higher criteria for examining the safety of these vehicles before issuing number plates for them. Cars, for example, should be legally required to be equipped with at least four air bags and an anti-lock braking system.\n\nTo conclude, while I agree that punishing driving offenders can help improve road safety, I am firmly of the opinion that there are many other ways of ensuring safety for drivers, including building dedicated lanes for different kinds of road vehicles and raising the safety standards of these vehicles. I recommend that all these measures should be adopted simultaneously in order that drivers can enjoy the safest driving experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing letter explain I think computers good My three supporting reasons computer time s chance might gain weight becom obese You would rather computer hang family lastly wo nt friends talk Please read hear story First always computer going get go outside little wo nt important Also going eat get exited going want eat Then ll start getting overweight nt want exercise Secondly would spend less time family You would think going hang later So play get addicted So family would grow apart And would lonely gave family play game computer For last reason matter wont friends I think wo nt friends computer time wont even bother go park play go gym try get sports wo nt meet anyone The friends would likely friends computer That never meet real life wo nt socialize life hang In conclusion I think good idea computer become obese spent less time family wo nt friends talk I hope enjoyed letter take consideration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and the closest in distance as well. However, the Venus has proved a very challenging place to explore or to examine more closely. In this exploring process, it will has a variety of stumbling blocks to make scientists stop to explore it. But actually, striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. So that's why people studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nHere're some evidences regarding why the people still to explore it. For instance: Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation ( Paragraph 8). According to this evidence of the article, I can see innovation can help people discover more meaningful things and make country's development gradually more flourishing than before. \" NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" \" The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" ( Paragraph 7) From those evidences, I know they've met important problems to solve when they were exploring Venus, but they still work on this project and try to use different ways or technology to solve those difficulties in not good conditions.\n\nAll above, despite the danger presents, we can use imagination or innovation methods to create and explore new works of our life, because that not only is able to help us improve our technology skills and the Venus is a valuable science achievement but also it desveres to explore the Venus. So that's why the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. As a Seagoing Cowboy, you get to explore many new places such as the Atlanic Ocean, new places in the United Stated, and China. To cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States, it only takes around two weeks, and about a month to get to China.\n\nCaring for animals always kept me busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship we were traveling on, and all of the stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out on my aunts farm helped prepare me for hard work, but not for all of the dangers of the sea. Takes my word for it, being a Seagoing Cowboy, was one of the best expiriences of my life, and I know you would enjoy doing it too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology is pointless, why do people need to know someones emotions. How will knowing if a student is happy help teachers know if a student is understanding the lesson. How can schools properly use this kind of information. Will the imfomation of a student's emotions help schools in the future.\n\nHow will know a students emotion help teachers better educate their students?\n\nKnowing someone is bored in class can't really help in knowing what the student needs to better themselves. Like stated in the passage,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Although knowing if a student is confused on something does somewhat help in knowing what a student needs to work on, it isn't specific on what certain thing it is.\n\nHow can schools properly use this kind of imformation? Knowing a student is happy or sad can't really help in telling people if they are understaning the lesson.Someone could be happy because the class is almost ending but still not understand a single thing that was just taught or visversa. Another great example would be when a student is preparing for Istep or a final, the student may be understanding the lesson but them worrying about fail won't help anyone.\n\nWill this imformation help schools in the future? This type of technology might actually be useful in the future when thing are a bit more advance. Schools will probably know how to properly use this kind of information for the students well being. By them maybe more emotion codes will be added or modified. But one can not tell the future so who knows.\n\nIn conclusion,at the moment this techology seems useless and a waste of time and money, but one never know it might actually be very useful in the coming years. If this type of technology will be used in school the producer of it should show staff how to properly use it so that the imformation can be used. Perhaps knowing if someone is feeling do can help schools provent horrible incidents to happen. The use of this technology is useless at the moment, why do people need to know ones emotions to better them in education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The greatest reason one safty dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The greatest obstacle use mooring mast nature The top building constantly shifting due violen air currents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face of Mars is not created by aliens or an alien artifact it is a natural landscape.\n\nWhen scientist first saw the face they were probably shocked but scientists figured it was just another martian mesa they are common around Cydonia Cydonia is the place where they found the face. Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrieved at the Red Planet in September 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. On April 5, 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbitier Camera (MOC) eam snapped a picture of the face it was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousans of people were waiting for the image when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealed the face of Mars was just another natural landscape and there was no alien monument. What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa they are common landscapes around the American West \"it reminded me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" said Garvin.\n\nThat is why the face of Mars is a natural landscape it is a butte or mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI read all these articles about some states having to vote for the president's electors. They say basically when your voting for a president, your voting for his/hers electors. My opinion is there should be no need for electors. It should be easy and not too complicated. A presdient, a vice president, and a secatary. No electors or nothing. I think a president can do alot of his own work and think of ideas alone. If he need help than instead of us wasting our time with voting for people to give the presdient ideas and help him out. Well the President always say's God Bless America. Shouldn't the President be listening to the voices of his country. America. Yes, I think the candidate with the most votes should win. But, If they say that their going to do something for our country than they need to keep their word. Make it a better place not for himslef but for everyone. For instance, Barack Obama. What's the need for this unessarcy work that he has done. America is loosing their mind and doesnt know what's going on. Why is he doing this? The president is to make smart decent relevant choices. And if he listen to the voices of Americans than he would have lots of ideas lots! Instead he listens to who? His electors. People complain saying to themselfs, Where does he come up with these ideas? Well if you payed close attention to the presidents background and know what he really wants to do than you would know why. Honestly to me I dont think the Electoral College should keep going its just a bunch of mess that just doesnt make sence. Elelctors dont matter to most American's. Take the electors and the Electoral College away we dont want something we dont need. All we need is a President, a Vice Presdient, and a Secatary.\n\nSencerely, America", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology might actually not be as valueable than you think. After reading this passage i got alolt of facts that couldn't be argued with but some others definetly could. This technology is supposed to tell the different emotions of the human while just looking at the face structure. A problem with the new technology is sometimes, people love to hide their expressions from people. That being said, you can't tell someones emotions by just looking at them.\n\nIn the article it explains how Mona Lisa emotions were 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. What we don't for sure know is that she isn't hiding it all inside. A lot of people do that so people don't ask them questions or if they are too embarressed or even to act tough. A person at a funeral who lost his wife can be out of their mind depressed but he smiles through it all just to hide the pain from the guests and maybe even his children. The passage says that emotions can be picked up just by watching someone get happy or one who is sad. It's empathy, and a lot of people use it to feel bad for one another or to make one feel happy at the same time. The kids who just lost their mother might be very sad and upset but when they see that their dad isn't crying and is smiling, they might feel better. They could also start to smile just like their dad. Therefore the new technology that they are using can be somewhat effective and also couldn't. I guess it would just depend on how the person is actually feeling. Weather they are hiding their feelings or might actually be sad, happy, depressed, suprised, etc... Maybe even in the future they will be able to tell even if they are lieing. Time will only tell.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recent years have witnessed an unprecedented growth of homeowners showing propensities for having a deep knowledge about the history of a place they live such as: house, building, and so on. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving force behind the curtain before outlining a number of methods people can discover their accommodations' past.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there are several reasonable explanation for why people are inclined towards understanding the advent of their house. The key rationale is associated with some concerns over potential building problems. It is essential for owners to examine past records involved to the house like when it built, what its outline was or how long it existed . In other words, most important information can be verified. Moreover, some people keen on exploring that high-quality products are used, for instance, ancient artifacts or pottery items. Another significant reason is beliefs of homeowners, especially for some Asian countries. In fact, the older generations tend to believe that the former owners or some events happened before will have considerable influences on the fortune of their own . As an example, if the prior owners was a successful person, they are likely to succeed afterwards.\r\n\r\nIn the light of the aforementioned reason, accommodators have an ability of figuring out the information in two simple ways. First and foremost, having a meeting with the former dwellers and neighbors about the secrets of their house. In fact, these trusted sources would be beneficial to give insights on incidents, which do wonders for current landlord to prevent upcoming troubles. Secondly. due to a momentous technological leap, homeowners are capable of doing research about the construction stage or major occurences in the past. Thus, it is easier to make an decision to leave or not.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some compelling reasons can be witnessed to a surge of tenants being interested to discover the origin of their house or buiding. Additionally, it is possible for them to do some research about their accommodation as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sustaining productivity at the working place relies on several contributing factors out of which money is considered to be a paramount reason. I agree to some extent with the notion. The subsequent essay will highlight not only arguments in favouring but also some opposite prospects of it.\r\n\r\n To begin with, Innumerable aspects are attached to how other reasons rather than salary improves task performance in the working area. First of all, If the working environment is not only friendly, but also has appropriate cooperation and coordination among colleagues, the efforts required to achieve any task could be minimized. Completion of a particular target under a definite deadline, therefore, could be ensured. Furthermore, When the working pressure is less, it causes a reduction of stress level which enables workers to perform appropriately. In addition, Job security which brings financial stability is beneficial to carry out actions effectively. Moreover, Leaves offer an opportunity for the employees to accomplish their personal jobs or spend time with family members. Perseverance towards their profession, therefore, could be strengthened. For instance, maternity leaves offered by many organizations to the mother during pregnancy time encourage their attraction towards their occupation. Additionally, other amenities such as medical and commuting facility, the predominant motivating factors in the industry area.\r\n\r\nDespite having many pivotal factors, wage has a vital role. Since a handsome salary is indispensable to fulfil their own and family desires. It leads to a strong family relationship and, provides sufficient funds that could be spent in an emergency. As a consequence, payment fascinates the workers towards their vocation. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that although salary is a colossal factor for improving task efficiency on the job, other lucrative factors are more advantageous to prompt employees for their assigned actions at a job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboy group/program because it could really help other people . Then once you have helped at least one person you start feeling a little better about yourself. I also think that you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you could trave to different places in the world. i think that you should be eighteen or older to join the Seagoing Cowboy program because you cant really travel anywhere until you are eighteen or older . You should NOT I repeat NOT join the Seagoing Cowboy program if you don't like animals,don't want to feed animals,don't want to bathe animals,don't want to pick up animal poop,or basiaclly do anything with animals , then you are not the right person to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI think that girls should be able to become a member but of course they have to like animals. The girls should have their own program but should be called the Seagoing Cowgirls. I think that the most kind of people that would join this is like people that grew up in a farm or that love animals. You could also join this program if you like to help or like to unite with other people that like to help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author is right in this passage because in paragraph 8 nassa is trying to shut down all the towers and the author about this story he wishes nassa could go away but that will be inpossonle these differences from nassa are in speed mars and other times to venus because venus is sometimes around the corner cloud drapped world each previous mission is unmanned and for a good reason cause nassa can handle there men unmanned they all survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why venus spaceship hasnt touched down in almost 3 decades. So nassa is concerned about venus spaceship. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. if our sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing futher visits to its surface there wasting there time for all the importanty of nassa....the surfce was rockey and couldnt be walled on because of that reason or drove on there was mountains and craters furthermore. the nationL aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter one many ways share memory It also key component story telling shows listeners enjoying say When share laugh smile someone almost sharing deep secret one else knows Laughter something common nt matter much money old person always ability burst laughter Inside jokes laughter s best friend second made slightest mention always bring smiles giggles everyone s face As person I feel duty make people laugh One example would I seven years old spending night friend house We gotten done watching super hungry lunch As turns big sister one home nt going anything baby sister fend Being young nt want boring old sandwich wanted make cupcakes This might sound like ridiculous objective two seven year old girls surprisingly ambitious tackled problems thought In reality disaster idea mixer mixed everything hands worked I brought flower From I never think flower manner every time I open jar flower I think mess I made day Lets say disaster enough flower successfully make cupcakes approximately whole bag As I getting ready pour tremendous quantity flower bowl I slipped vegetable oil spilled measuring cup flower went everywhere started laughing soon white powdery cloud filled room As I still shock mention covered felt like enough batter feed entire world Now I quite bit older I nt think I could taken tremendous mess lightly considering I would definitely one cleaning But little girl laughing thing mattered could nt stop giggling looking whole body covered white We started play flower picking throwing air confetti When sudden came stairs took one look kitchen started yell CAPS clean I upstairs hour manage make big mess Mom home twenty minutes better kitchen cleaned I looked back kitchen Then hit much work All sudden I started laughing uncontrollably felt I care world It turns I completely ignored continued play flower short twenty minutes We middle building fort kitchen surrounded called snow I heard slam front door mom walked house It sounded like paper towels ripped right dispenser Because nt clean anything fact made kitchen much worse made split second decision run basement pretend done nothing wrong That biggest mistake soon mom saw kitchen heard scream PERSON What Slowly climb stairs kitchen starts explaining I choose stay quiet I never gotten trouble someone nt mom When done telling story mom tells us go downstairs Both us verge crying sudden starts laughing I could think nothing would possibly funny moment says still flower hair From experience I learned sometimes laughing thing make feel better Even though I moved away since cupcake fiasco I know I ever talk begin laughing mention story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a car that will drive on its own is cool and all, but when you think about it it could be very dangerous. People in todays society are very lazy. All most people do now in days is sit at home, sleep, eat, or watch televison. So I dont think having a driverless car is such a good idea.\n\nSee people today get used to things quick without really noticing that they are used to it. For example television, its a great invention but people over use it. Some people make television their top priority. People even use television as an excuse. It stops them from making interactions with the real world, because people have grown to be lazy.\n\nAnother example is a cellphone. Everywhere you go everyone has a type of cellphone, wether it's a smartphone or a flip phone. People are so drawn to their phones especially teenagers. Everyone is on some type of social media sight, wheter it's facebook, instagram, snapchat, etc. Again everyone is making technology their top priority.\n\nHaving a car that can drive itself isn't really a good idea. We as humans get lazy over just little things, so imagine having a driverless car. What if someone in the driverless car falls asleep? In the passage it says this \"driverless car\" isn't so accurate. Meaning it can't drive itself completely. The driver still has to be alret of whats going on. So knowing us as humans and how we are why would anyone want to make a driverless car.\n\nI honestly believe this car will be dangerous. SOmeone could fall asleep from getting too comfortable, again us being humans and getting used to things, causing the driver to possibly get into a car accident not only risking themselves but other pedestrians.\n\nI am not in anyway shape or form trying to say technology is bad, but if it isnt used correctly it can be a dangerous thing. I beleive only people who are responsible and mature and know right from wrong are the ones who caan handle this type of technology. These \"driverless cars\" are not for everybody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is about a small town near the french and swiss borders its name is Vauban. Vauban ha a unique community they have no cars!. yeah thats right no cars there is a no automobile law in this small town which makes a lot of people like the mother of two ms. Heidrun walter. she says that she is \"much happier this way because when i had a car i was always tense\". people could walk down the street and not worry about wether or not a person is going to lose control of their car and smash into them or even worse.\n\nIn 2006 the united states and other areas started to try these things and they called it \"smart planning\". car ownership is allowed but there are only two parking areas-large garages at the edge of the development where a car-owner buys a space for $40,000, along with a home. vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, is the most advanced experiment in low car suburban life. \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" said david goldberg.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone laughs differently people laugh hard cry nt But one thing common laughter People use laughter way express feelings joy happiness even something really funny Laughing great way feel happier something instance maybe bad day one friends comes tells funny joke It makes feel better right Having good sense humor something help get tough situations embarrassing things even like I said bad day Being able laugh even something might done embarrassing good thing help get embarrassed Whenever I laugh I always feel better laughing reminds good things life Laughing reminds good times I spent friends family reminds inside jokes friends I come years still laugh hard used I believe laughing enjoyable everyone make feel better matter people even say laughing makes younger When laugh things creates long lasting memories never forget talk future still think funny Some best friends laugh everything think every little joke funniest ever laughs unforgettable always hear laughing Which another way shows laughter make anyone happy If believe funny person say something one I guarantee laugh feel funny likely start laughing well I enjoy getting spend quality time closest friends probably best time I went beginning going high school It two days promotion graduation middle school We packed family s car headed Not even halfanhour car ride already cracking laughing every little thing going We always create great memories one already books one best I sure car ride mom aunt fun sang songs danced much could buckled seat many songs could fit two hours Of course car ride got stopped construction decided jump car fire drill around All others cars watched laughed us even construction workers though funny We made boring moment fun Once finally got hesitate drop bags grab bikes take explore The weather nice cloud sky During exploration bike ride laughed told jokes talked excited middle school moving high school The next day decided wanted float river raft sounds like fun idea Well would actually knew going I used time family I idea go still five girls two rafts river maybe good idea During whole river raft trip jumped back forth two rafts occasionally splashing oars Knowing us laughed whole way river Whenever passed people I m sure thought something wrong us much laughing enjoying others company By time finished rafting trip hungry good thing mom prepared us lunch got home sat table could never keep straight face What made even funnier aunt mom nt know laughing could look laugh You know built good friendship look laugh already knowing friend thinking inside jokes All one little thing called laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people may think that the Face is not a natural landform but I am here to give you reasons why the Face IS a natural landform. The reasons I am going to give you are going to be in the paragraphs below, hope you like it and think\n\n''which opinion is better in this essay?''.\n\nThe first reason the Face is a natural landform is because 25 years ago something happened on Mars, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship ''Viking 2'', but when the camera spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face, then they saw an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a fregion of the Red Planet called '' Cydonia''.\n\nAnother reason that the Face is a natural landform is because after a few days , NASA unveiled the image which had shadows forming the illusion of eyes, nose and the mouth. But since it became so popular, the picture has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, etc. They also said that defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. But scientists believed that the Face was an alien artifact.\n\nThe last reason is that thousands of anxious people were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL website, revealing a natural landform. But not everyone believed that.\n\nThe camera on board MGS had to peer thrrough wispy clouds to see the face, they say perhaps alien markings were hidden by a haze. People are also saying, ''We just dont pass over the face very often''.\n\nBut not everyone can be right because some people think its not a natural landform because it could be just a haze from something that was there at that specific moment and time to show that the face was there when it could have really been just a rock and not the Face after all. More reasons to this is that,even though it looked like a face...it couldnt have been, people couldve just seen the face that wasnt really there.\n\nIn Conclusion, people have different opinions on what they see and what they dont see in certain pictures. Some people see the face, some people dont see the face at all and that can be a good thing and a bad thing for some people who have different things to say about a certain subject. The Face couldve just been a rock in some peoples opinions, but some people think that it wasnt just a rock, it was an outline of a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine You entered raffle child s school allexpense paid trip You excited realize know nothing You nt know weather like nt know kinds food eat You re quite sure prepare trip So go online learn everything anything You pack appropriatly great time All computor Computers help get better education matter age It also gives ability keep touch friends family necessary many jobs Computers help many people learn different countries cultures We know much places computers But computers teach much different countries They teach whole new language help understand science lesson better There many online colleges learn lessons online time good really busy The internet great way keep touch friends family You use email instant messaging video chatting make account websites like facebook myspace For example cousin navy years I got facebook I lost touch Now I talk time When people hear computers first thing pops head internet But s computer good Nowadays many jobs use computers Banks teachers even cashiers Computers longer luxury become necesity In fact jobs require computer Computers allow type book report make important letter look professional Computers changed world s changed s going back So looks like access computer made trip easier Clearly computers become part every day life You keep touch friends use job But importantly learn much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article there are both positive and negative views of the driverless car.\n\nMany companies are moving towards the innovations of driverless cars.\n\nHowever there are still many kinks and flaws that need to be worked out in the cars to ensure the safety of those around the car.\n\nGoogle has had driverless cars since 2009, and have driven independently for over half a million miles without any crashes.\n\nThe driverless cars concept has been around since the 1950s, where General Motors created a car that ran on a special track.\n\nThe track was embedded with cables that sent radio waves to the car to tell it where to go.\n\nBerkeley University tried something like this but with magnets with different polaritites.\n\nWithout smarter roads companies turned to smart cars.\n\nSmart cars have lots of sensors and monitors to help avoid dangerous skids and rollovers.\n\nThe sensors can tell the car to put on the brakes and reduce engine power, this has a better response time than a human and can therefore eliminate more wrecks caused by not enough reaction time in humans.\n\nMany of todays cars already have sensors and are slightly driverless in the sense of parallel parking assistance and can brake if a car is coming while backing up.\n\nMany of the driverless cars can handle most simple roads but still need assistance with construction and accidents.\n\nHumans can still be in control of the car making other drivers feel safer when around the driverless car.\n\nWith a human still in control there a lot less room for error of the driverless car to do something dangerous.\n\nManufacturers are considering placing cameras in cars the ensure that the driver is watching the road.\n\nHowever, there is still lots of safety concerns with driverless cars.\n\nLawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert and defensive drivers.\n\nMany laws are written that the only safe cars have human drivers in control of the car.\n\nMost states it is illegal to even test driverless cars.\n\nIf states allow driverless cars, the next question would ask who would cover liability.\n\nIf the car was involved in an accident who would be at fault, the driver or manufacturer?\n\nIn conclusion there are many positives to these driverless cars.\n\nBut, there are also some downsides.\n\nWith all of the new technology being created there will be more driverless cars and hopefully less accidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is a great article and makes a lot of great points about this product. My opinion on driverless cars is I think it's a great idea. Also there could be a down side to this product as well.\n\nA public-transportation taxi system that use half the fuel of today's taxis would be a great idea. It would be great for the environment, as well as us as people. This system woul for sure change the world. The Google cars that work independantly have driven half a million miles withough a collision. Which is great because there goes a lot of injured people and totalled cars that people need as transportation. At the same time, these cars still need a human to operate them under certain conditions such as, puling in and out of places, driving through construction places or car accidents. The idea of the cars running on a track is a grea tidea as well, but there is just no time to fix all these roads to make our cars driverless. Also the cost of this would be too expensive. Also if the car could opperate on its own, I would think that the driver would be even more careless than they already are and would pay even less attention. If the car would still need the driver to be alert in case of needing to take over, drivers would just be more tempted to look away and do other things while driving, and then if the car needed the driver to take over they will have already crashed because the driver was distracted by something else. In my opinion driverless cars is a goof idea in some ways, but in other ways they are dangerous. They are nice to have, but only if you are able to be responsible with them. You need to be able to have self dicipline to be able to operate a car like this and stay alert even if the car is driving for you. Anything can happen in a split second. A plus side to them would be if you are someone that works in the city and always has to sit and wait in rush hour, then this would be a good car for you to have. The car would drive for you in this mess, so you wouldn't get so tired of it. But something that I would worry about personally is trusting the car to do it's job. It is a machine, it could malfunction and make a mistake. Like if it doesn't stop when the rest of the traffic does and it rear-ends someone. Or it doesn't go when the rest of the traffic does and someone rear-ends you. It could be dangerous, and the car messing up like that would't be the buyers fault, it is just still something I would worry about as a driver of a driverless car.\n\nThe points made in this article are very helpful to understand the progress being made with driverless cars. They would definitely benefit us in the future, and make car pileups a thing of the past.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" The author suggets that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The author gives us a lot of information of Venus. Also, the author tells us why its so worhty. The first reason why its worhty to sutdy Venus would be because numerous of factors contribute that venus is a challenging planet for humans to study. The second reason is that in the article the author mentions that in \"venus is sometimes around the corner -in space terms-humans have set numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud-drapped world\" Lastly the author mentions that the NASA is compelling an idea to send humans to stufy in venus.\n\nIn the article when the author mentioned that it's a challenging planet to study would be because in our solar system venus is the second planet from our sun and Venus is actualy a planet. Venus is one of the brightest points in the night. Also another reason why venus is so hard to examine would be because it's occasionaly the closest to earth. Another challenging reason would be that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet. Therefor these reason add up doesnt seem like a safe place for humans to study\n\nThe second reason why the author suggets that studying Venus is worthy would be because the author mentions that it's right around the corner in space terms each have been unnamed, and for that reason no spacecraft has survived the landing more then a few hours. That tells us how Bad the planet is now imagine sending a human. Despite of the things that has happend the author makes a conclusion that maybe thats why no spaceship has touched down on Venus in more of three decades. If you think about it if a spaceship hasn't touched down there now why would a human want to.\n\nLastly , the biggest detail that came from the article was that NASA is woking on other ways to study venus. The reason why it stood out the most was that if the author why lying about it being so worhty then I dont think NASA would waste time on this project. NASA has some simplified electornics made of silcon carbide and they have tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of the Venus and it has lasted while being in good conditions. The athor also mentioned that NASA has much more projects in order to be able to study Venus.\n\nIn conclussion after reading the artcle the author has given enough information on why the author belives that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The way the author described Venus would be that it isn't a happy or chill place to be at but the author did point out that it's very challenging and awarding planet to study. Not anyone can go to Venus it's not safe. So far NASA might be the first to be able to study Venus well and they'll be the first to feel that big accomplishment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The youth are considered as the most important group to be educated in most states, whereas some argue that educating illiterate grown-ups is more crucial than youngsters and more money should be funded on this. I am in favour of adults being trained due to the fact that their chance to find a job would grow and crime rates caused by unemployment and poverty would reduce.\n\nTo begin with, unemployment is one of the most worrying issues among illiterate older citizens nowadays and supporting them to learn about an occupation by vocational training would help them finding a job. This is because most adults who are not able to write or read are less confident and more unwilling for applying for jobs which are already limited. If they are trained about certain occupations, they will be provided with new skills and find jobs. As a natural result, the number of adults without a job would reduce and these people could send their children to school easily owing to their financial stability. For example, Canada is one of the pertinent examples, which has escalated its financial support on illiterate older generations and saw a considerable plunge in the rates of unemployment among them.\n\nFurthermore, providing older generations who don’t have reading and writing experience with courses could plummet crime rates as well. It is a well-known fact that being jobless and impoverished stand out as the most likely causes of offences. If those people were provided with the necessary knowledge for a certain occupation, they would be less involved in illegal activities. For instance, statistics from the Turkey government revealed that crime incidents have dropped by 30 % since 2014, when occupational training campaign for illiterate citizens started.\n\nIn conclusion, despite the young are being more essential in terms of education in some countries, others including me assert that due to more job opportunities and fewer offence rates, people who can not read or write should be prioritized and more money should be spent on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a computer that can tell if you're mad, happy, sad or confused. The Facial Acting Coding System can read your facial expressions and determine your emoitions just as a human can. The system reads the movement of your face muscles to determine how you are feeling. The main feature is that it can help in the classrom to keep kids engaged by telling if there bored or confused.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author shows the use of emotion reading technology is valuable in the classroom.\n\nThe software can be extremely benificial in a classroom setting helping teachers and student adapt lesson plans to better help the student learn. With the system in your computer it can tell if you are mad or confused and can adapt the lesson to better fill the need of the individuel student. It individualizes each lesson to better fit the need of the student and to help them learn. This not only benifits the student so the lesson better fits them but helps the teacher teach in a way that gives each kid one on one attention \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" (6)\n\nWith this system in place classrooms can become more individualized and better reach each students needs while catering to the entire class rather than the individual. The System would act as a human to \"preform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday\" like humans do everyday accessing situations. If humans use this it can better expand our knowledge of each other and how each person works. The Facial Acting Coding system not only benifits the students learning but makes the teachers teaching more effective.\n\nThe use of emotional reading in the classroom is extremely valuable. The system increases the capability of the teacher and the learning of the student. With it classrooms become individually tailored without taking the time of the teacher on one kid. Every student is different and has different needs and this software can help make it to schools can better meet the needs. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author shows the use of emotion reading technology is valuable in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to travel the world and see different places?\n\nWell as a Seagoing Cowboy you have that opportunity.\n\nOne of the plus sides of being a Seagoing Cowboy is that you will get to see differnet places.\n\nYou can visit them and explore them.\n\nYou can also see different animals.\n\nYou can take care of them and play with them.\n\nAlso you are helping out with the damage World War II caused.\n\nFinally, you become a hardworker.\n\nBy the end of this essay you will be convinced that you should join.\n\nSome of the different places that we Seagoing Cowboys visit are places like New Orleans.\n\nTo help out with the Pacific War.\n\nAlso when I was was 18 I went to Greece.\n\nIt is a beutiful place.\n\nI went there because it meant that I could be drafted.\n\nThose boat trips were something different for me because I was only a small town boy.\n\nJust think.\n\nWhat if you became a Seagoing Cowboy?\n\nYou would get to travel all of the cool places that we travel to.\n\nWe also went to China from the Eastern part of the United States.\n\nIt took us two weeks to cross the Atlantic, and a month to get to China.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure it is also hard work.\n\nFor example taking care of animals.\n\nNext, the animals that we have to care for overseas take a lot of dedication and hard work.\n\nWhen we rescue them from the aftermath of the war we have to take care of them.\n\nWe have to clean them and feed them.\n\nWhen you do all of this stuff for a long time then you get to grow relationships with the animals.\n\nThey start to respect you and become closer.\n\nThe animals had to keep clean as well.\n\nI would clean their stalls.\n\nI also had to feed them three times a day.\n\nThe same goes for giving them water.\n\nI had to get bales of hay from the lower holds of the ship.\n\nTaking care of the animals is hard work but also very fun.\n\nFinally, joining the Seagoing Cowboys is a great opportunity to teach you hardwork.\n\nI had to learn hardwork with the animals.\n\nI also learned hardwork from helping with the aftermath of the war.\n\nSo if you think that we don't do anything but just visit places then you are wrong.\n\nWe have reasons why we go to different places.\n\nTo help out with the war.\n\nTo help out animals.\n\nTo help out people.\n\nVisiting places is one of the last things we do.\n\nHardwork is the essence of working as Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSo if you are lazy this is not the job for you.\n\nI am glad to work for them because without hard work I would still be working two part-time jobs at the bank and the grocery store.\n\nI hope that this essay has made you to believe that it is a interesting job for you.\n\nWe travel to different places.\n\nWe help out other people and animals.\n\nWe are hardworking.\n\nI was convinced to join the Segoing Cowboys, are you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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