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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I pashit I math I cold figer The ant I quit That poit time I pashit I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art is a beautiful creation.It is considered by some people that art should be a needed subject for students.However,others believe it is non-valuable.Before arriving at my position both sides of the argument will be elaborated further.\r\n\r\n To begin with, discussing the first viewpoint,art can develop gross motor skills in children.To explain it, there are so many various types of art as well as tools such as a pencil, brush, and colours required by an art class.For ,student it is a real struggle while drawing to develop their muscle and hold, and use objects correctly. Art class teach children to hold the method of paintbrush,pencil, and marker, build their muscles while playing with paper.Moreover,art can generate artists feeling.To explicate it, during drawing creator has to concentrate. and have an inside feeling.For example,in 2018,revealed by the world art system that 70% of artists regulate their own minds' feelings such as their lives problem or happier movements in the drawing.\r\n\r\n On the other hand,also art subject has some drawbacks.Firstly, with the graduation of an art subject has low chances to get a higher salary job in future,a few artisartistsomes successful and famous among the public,only some creators get higher money regarding their work.For example,the survey has found only 20 out of 100 art artists are famous as well as higher salaries.The very famous artist Luis mark has 400 dollars per art.\r\n\r\n In conclusion,it is true that art has less popular among people.I largely believe that it has its own merits like improving motor skills, generates inside feeling in the paper.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to determine an emotional exprecion of students is very valuable and intersting. Would you ever want to know how a person is feeling without having to ask? Knowing how a person is feeling by techlology is very valuable because its a very interesting process to be apart of, it also teaches many people about technology and learning about the action unit of a person, lastly, Its just a very fun job to do and a perfect way to learn about the human face reactions.\n\nFirst, being able to tell how a person is feeling with technology is a very intresting job/thing to do. The software is the latest innovation form Prof wicth makes it very intersting to work on just becaue its the latest and not many people get to use it. Being able to tell a persons emotions by technology also benefits the person by meating all the experst and better ways in developing for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nNext, the Facial Action Coding System is not only a fun thing to do but it can also benifit a lot by learning any diffrent ways to use technology. Many people may also learn about all types of computers that are able to tell the face experesions of a person. Not only that the person can learn all the diffrent types of like human face muscles. A person could also learn the 6 basic emotions.\n\nFinally, Being able to tell a persons emotions may get very fun to do. For example, In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Slto shows how The Mona Lisa was a very fun itersting to bring a smile on a persons face. In the article the authors give an example of how they where able to tell how Mona Lisa is feeling in her portrate. He found out that Mona lisas smile was not real and how she faked it. Although it might be a very fun thing to do it might also not be the best because some people can be emotional and not be abe to take amd figure out how a person might be feeling .\n\nIn conclusion, being able to be a part of The Facial Action Coding Sysytem is a very fun interseting job to do. However people may not like this job beacuse lets be honest thers some people out there who just dont care about how a person might be feeling in a picture.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays career is very crucial to everyone.Many people argued that completed education is good for better future , while other believe that doing job is more important after completed school.\n\nIn this easay I will discuss both these views and give my own opinion.\n\n On the one hand , Parents believe that earning right after school is good for our\n\nfuture because, you start earning in your young age that after two or three years you will be the independent. For example, my cousin started his job after completed his matric and now he earn handome salary and also he have a lot of experience.Moreover,Jobs are very limited and its good that you find job in your early life.\n\n On the other hand, people believe thats ujobs after completed intermediate or bachelors is leading to a successful life because you get a job with excellent position and good earning because of you degree and many companies hire well educated people . For Intanse, My sister completed her higher studies in her own country Karachi but after completed her education an international company offer her a job with double salary because she has well educated .\n\n In conclusion, many people doing job after school because want to be independent in quite small age and where as, many students prefer job after completing their higher education.I experience the later one because for me completing education and then doing you dream job is very crucial and leads to a successful career", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The role of colors in our psycological life is crucial. Some people suggest hence to pay attention on color schemes when workplaces or hospital are decorated. I agree that colors affect people's psychological health. A particular place's decoration can arouse a determinate feeling that could favour or penalise the capacity of people in a work place.\nColors affect our psycological life. They possess an extraordinary social role. It is not a case that the famous table of emotions is presented in different colors where the different colors represent different emotions. For instance, blue incline people to be sad while red is said to be the color of passion, and move strongly the emotions of a person by setting of her pleasures. Lastly the grey's shades stimulate anxiety. Therefore, I think that the hospital's walls or officies cannot be decorated in grey or blue as long as it is better to stimulate their positiveness and productivity. Thre is a curious story about Princess Sissi, that confirm the impact of color in our life. She was obsessed about her wight and fitness. For this reason, she decored purple all the walls of her appartmanets. Indeed, pourple is said to be the color which stimulates the absence of hunger. Thus, when the princess was there it was easier for her to be fast.\nBy contrast, there are also some colors that stimulate fantasy, creativity and peace. Green is one of that color. Then, to decorate hospitals with green shades could be a good way to produce positive vibes in people who are sicks. Moreover, yellow is defined as the color that describes the feeling of being proud, aware and confident. Then, using this color in the walls of the officies will stimulate workers to do their better. Their capacity in the work-place will be maximased by the general environment.\nIn conclusion, I believe that colors affect our psychological life and then people should pay attention in the feelings they stimulate when they decore a room or a building intented to welcome a particular type of people like sicks people or workers. Psychological life is important and relevant as the physical one and colors can affects our moods as well as physical accidents do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders fact could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The Steel Frame Empire state Building would modified Strengthened accommodate new situation The greatest reason safety dirigibles outside united states used Hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flammable The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around around mooring mast existing law airships flying low", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Visiting Venus might be challenging but it is fun to Study and talk about. According to the article, \"While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely\". In this statement, it shows that Venus is a close planet to earth but we can only see it from distance because people cannot go there.\n\nVenus is a planet that is dangerous for people to go because of its climate weather. In paragrapg 2, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived that landing for more than a few hours\". This article shows that because Venus is a dangerous place for visiting and everyone that went their cannot survive it for two hours. In paragraph 3, \"A thick atmsphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challanging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". This article proves that Venus climate is very bad because their temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nAccording to NASA, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. This means if NASA wants to see how Venus looks like they need to send a jet or other flying machines\n\nthat would overcome every obsticles on its way. \"It also shows that flying thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degress Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels\". This statement clearly shows that in this climate weather, most humans would not be able to survive in 24 hours. It shows that with this weather people would be sick and people would not be able to breath because of the high temperate.\n\nIn paragraph 8, It shows that we should not give up on visiting Venus because of the climate change or because of the challenges that we have to face before we survive.\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is the closest planet to earth and it is also the secound planet from the sun but it is a very challenging place to visit or see how doing are doing. Venus has the average temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and it also have a very bad climate. According to NASA idea, Venus hostile condition would allow scientist to float above the fray, which means they can go to Venus but they would have to face some challenges like avoiding rocks and other hard materials coming their way in order to survive the journey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I going drove whole day went wrong direaction mom got made night trying find hotel I one aware three brothers caman sleping back van sister front I got really angry guy Look last room I really angry patient really room next day went stay going water parkmusment park new ride scoping tail butt wait hour go ride I really patient mom getting tired mad took long next day rained rained went indoor fool hotel couldnt go many people wait I wasnt patient I wanted go swimming almost halve hour got go swimming next day leave time took almost two days get us back home time got I patient enough help parents get stuff house finally got go bed I happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these days,we have more and more suger-based drinks,like juice,coffee,tea and soft drinks.becouse we spend more time out and do diffrent activitys .that make us thirsty then we drink much more when we inside our home.\nPractically, we are spend more and more of these drinks in our live without a control.when some one drinks that drinks all time ,that make him unhealtheir ,become a fat espacially when he did not get exercises.in our world 90% of people have this bad habite,if we want to the world become healthy,unlisess,and clean .we have to change that bad habits to do more goog habits like do exercises every days in our life ,drink less sugar -based drinks,talk with people about risces for these drinks ,talk with companies to give us more solutions like put less sugar in drinks ,made new kind ofdrinks without sugar.\nOn another hand ,we can talk with the maker desgin in the media .put more advertising on TV,radia ,social network eathier newspaper .so the world knows the dangers of sugar- containing drinks. also we can make charities to help people how are gitting fat becouse these bad habits.\nAt least we can use any body have a publicity to help us at this project.people like to tradition any body famous .we can use those people to learn sociaty a new and good habits.\nFinally, in our live we have many bad habits we have to do but also we can chang thes bad to new and good habits .to make our life easier,heatheir and longer.Human can do it he want to do eather good nather bad .we can di it eveery thing in this live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir calm It s tense depressing An example calm paragraph words parentheses s like person talking Also Just states facts Another example calm happy sad It flow", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter I believe laughter shortest distance two people When things loved one get fuzzy making laugh always help break ice When I get angry boyfriend knows order happy must make smilelaugh That exactly The first time made angry nt know It I started dating I remember asked I hungry I said I m hungry continued ask Since dating short period time really nt know much nt know I type girl gets annoyed easily I really low temper He continued ask I hungry thirsty bored tired nt realize point I really annoyed hour half passed still asking I going crazy I nt want tell I felt I knew I going make feel bad I thought said know going worst later relationship find I like nt like rather telling I went told every single little detail good bad first listened towards end exploded told nt I straight beginning That made really upset I trying honest anything worse happened guess I stayed quiet longest time kept asking s wrong tell I wrong I told really made upset flipped reason really I trying save us larger argument looked told I something wrong He said already together two months took long show true colors I kind understood coming time I nt agree point already known I mean nt take long know person especially girlfriend In end agreed around He busted saying ouch charlie bit accent made loose I laughed days completely forgot thee whelming discussion The point laughter tool breaking ice things get tough nt necessarily loved one even complete stranger person shy making laugh help construct great friendship You make anybody s day go great little grin put face simple hello hey even make smile I believe person smiles often lives longer This true little world I smiling making people laugh Honestly I hate seeing people walk around angry faces like friends really want someone make smileand would In conclusion nt laughter relationship would still standing point None always arguing always wining never laughing expect relationship last Like I said Laughter shortest distance two people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is widely claimed that the most urgent environmental issue is global warming, some argue that deforestation has a more pessimistic effect. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that people should pay their most attention to global warming will be elaborated on in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it might seem sensible for some to believe that climate change has affected temperature all over the world. This is possibly because it has contributed to increase in extreme weather events such as heavy storms, downpours and flooding. Studies carried out by Oxford University, for example, revealed that hurricanes are likely to become more intense, on average, in a warming world. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, opponents of this idea might propose that deforestation should be taken into a consideration as the most pressing ecological matter these days. To put in other words, they consider that individuals should opt for promoting tree planting and restoring forests. In this and age, for instance, many countries are more likely to experience unhealthy air pollution caused by deforestation. From this perspective, it is understandable why some would prefer deforestation to be the most urgent environmental issue.\r\n\r\nPersonally, I would argue in favour of people considering global warming as a crucial issue on the sustainability of the environment, seeing that they tend to disregard the ecological consequences of their actions. For example, if human activities incessantly release large amounts of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases into the atmosphere, this could cause detrimental effects on the world, such as burning fossil fuels from car emissions. Consequently, assuming that individuals have a more awareness to select alternative energy, it could reduce the planet-warming effects of fossil fuels.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although it is undeniable that deforestation should be considered as the most important problem of the environment, I am of the opinion that climate change should be taken into a problem solving as a priority in order to mitigate the pessimistic effects of environmental damage contributed by the human activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the industrial revolution, people are using fuel to live and bring the disaster environment to plants and animals. The number of plants and animals is dramatically decreased by the dispearling nature environment. Although, the damager of environment is irreparable, some people still do something to save the environment. \n\nIt is true that the extinct species never back our life. For example, Dudu bird has been endangered over 200 years, and no one sees it again. So it is pointless to make a change for the extinct species. However, the change people making for our planet is never too late to save other endangered species. \n\nThe best way for saving the species living on our planet is every individual and government working together to improve our environment and make the action such as reducing plastic goods, recycle garbage and decreasing pollution from industries. I believe that if All the action of benefit nature environment can keep into the long term plan, the endangered species will survive in the near future. Furthermore, the climate change will be controlled and the diversity of animals and plants will be recovered, whenever we make our planet better.\n\nAlthough, some people think that the change we making for the environment cannot bring the extinct species back, I prefer that improving our environment to protect the endangered creatures by government and people together will avoid the disaster to plants and animals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke should join the program because. It was a oppurtunity of a lifetime. And it would take care of the hurt or starving animals that were niglected during world war 2. we love animals and it would be a good paying job. It would make a huge impact on the enviorment. we also would travel across the world were they never have been before.\n\nIt would keep me busy during the day instead of being graduate and sitting at home doing nothing. It would help luke if I ever had a pet because he would know how to take care of the pet. I will know how to taim animals and know how to be patient.\n\nI would have fun its not like im\n\njust gonna sit there.\n\nI would have to be tough and whatever gets thrown at me ill be ready.\n\nI would be remebererd for what he did to keep these animals alive and protected. And also I would make new friends because there is 44 nations joined together with skills and its a great program. If you dont let me join then your missing out of life i will sacrifice my life for these animals and make sure i can do anything to help.\n\nNow that ive joined the segoing cowboys i get to go sight seein and see amazing places all over the world. Plus i can play games like ping pong and all sorts so im not bored all the time. I sail the dark atlantic and take care of my favorite animals. One time i fell off a ladder landing on my back and next thing i know i was sliding down about to go overboard and only thing that stop that was a peice of metal.\n\nWhen your apart of the seagoing cowboys you have to be tough. Even if its storming out you still have to stand in the rain and watch the pets. It took 2 weeks to get from the atlantic ocean to the eastern coast of the united states. Helping at my aunts farm made me prepared for the storm it also made me tough. It was much more than a adventure.\n\nIt openend up the world for me and made me more aware of other peoples needs. It stayed with me i was leading international students and exchange visitors for many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for driverless cars because they're more safe, they're more advanced and there has been no accidents reported according to the data. I would personal buy a driverless car for all of the reason listed above.\n\nDriverless cars are more safe because they alert you when you are about to hit something by vibrating the drivers seat .They also brake on there own when you are to close to a car or an object. They have sensors that sense when a stop light has changed colors. They also can steer themselves and hold accelerateion. Also the self driverless cars are good because alot of people are texting, eating, and putting make-up on while driving and this would decrease accidents having to do with distraction.\n\nDriverless car are more advanced. The driverless cars has been around since the 1950's just not as advanced as they are today. They are more advanced in technology because they have updated sensors, cameras and GPS receiver. The driverlees cars are becoming more advanced every day because people are finding out new technology almost evey day. That's why driverless cars are more advanced.\n\nDriverless cars has been around since about 1950's and no accidents has been reported for those owning a driverless car. Driverless have been tested and are a great way to help us.\n\nDriverless cars have alot of positives. Also driverless cars helps saves alot of live. so think of the next time you want to put a little make-up on because you're running late or texting somebody because you haven't seen them in a while, just think could this driverless car save my life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My story way patience like people front line ceter point You patient lines wait turn line go thats called cutting get kicked places u dont want happen like say want something eat wait turn line dont get kick rides wait turn dont get secrety", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI believe that rather than having the\n\nElectoral College , we should have elections by popular vote. A popular vote can be a better source of election because it gives the people of the state a better chance to express themselves and have a free, independant country.\n\nThe process of the Electoral College consists of a meeting of five hundred-thirty eight selected electors, where they vote for the President and Vice President. This situation can be considered unfair to many people that do not get selected as electors because there opinion is not put into consideration. It is said that over sixty percent of voters would perfer a direct election verses the Electoral College. This statistic goes to show that people do not feel that they are involved in our country. How can you consider this a free and independant nation if we do not all get the privelage to vote?\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, many people all around the world rely too heavily on their cars. There are many great reasons that car usage should be limited. Car usage should be decreased because owning a car can be stressful, dangerous, and cars give off unwanted gas and pollution. Although cars have been used for many years, it is not too late to take action on this problem.\n\nMany people today would agree that buying and maintaining a car is very stressful. It is very expensive to own a car, and it takes a lot of hard work to keep the car in good shape. \"I am much happier this way,\" states Heidrun Walter (Rosenthal, 3). Walter states that she is much happier without a car due to all the stress that comes with owning a car. Walter also states that while she had a car, she was \"always tense,\" (Rosenthal, 3). This is probably because of the expenses and time she had to sacrifice while trying to take good care of her vehicle. This includes buying the car, paying for gas and insuance, repairs, and washing it. People will save themselves a lot of time and money if the amount of car usage is limited.\n\nNot only are cars are stressful to maintain, but they are also very dangerous to operate. People run the risk of severe accidents every day when they drive their car. In Source 4, the author states that new forms of public transportation will \"improve safety,\" (Rosenthal, 43). The most occuring accidents are car accidents, which happen everyday. Families will have to worry less about losing people they are close to. There will be less unecessary accidents, such as drunk driving, and using phones while behind the wheel. By reducing the amount of drivers on the road, the risk of these accidents will become much lower.\n\nOne last reason that car usage should be limited is that cars give off lots of unwanted gas and pollution into the air. Recently, Paris faced \"near-record pollution,\" (Duffer, 10). This was caused by the extreme amount of emissions from their cars. The main cause for people wanting to reduce the use of cars is because of this unhealthy gas. Cities all over the world are making efforts to help reduce and prevent the emissions. The only way to do this is limit the usage of cars. \"Transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions,\" (Rosenthal, 34). If the change can be made, then it should, in order to keep the environment safe. There isn't much time before the pollution gets out of hand.\n\nAlthough so many people rely on cars so much, they do not see the advantages of not using them. Most people don't put into consideration how harmful these vehicles are to the environment. On top of that, they cause uneeded stress and danger. Because of these reasons, the usage of cars should be limited.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying is one of the most crucial parts of people's lives. If a question about the main objective of the school is addressed, it will be challenging for us to make a decision. Some people are firm believers in changing pupils to good citizens. Others, however, had shown devotion to not necessary. This essay agrees that schools have to turn students into good workers because they can learn to follow rules and social skills.\r\n\r\nThe first and most obvious one is that students spend more time at school than at home. As a result, pupils can learn how to respect other people both in the same ages and older people such as teachers. Moreover, in school, teachers can obligate the student to follow the rule, for example, to be on time and be honest in tests. Consequently, kids will know the fundamental rules in the school and will learn the punishments if they do not follow these. Therefore, they can learn how to be a good citizen in the future.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, another reason is that students can learn social skills. According to the research in a local university in Bangkok, it indicates that kids who lack friends will become introverted and might have mental problems leading to a crime. In contrast, School is the place that many kids staying together to learn how to survive in society using social skills such as communication and negotiation. So they can learn how to work as teamwork.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are several objectives for the school however the most important one is teaching junior to be good people in the forthcoming. In my perspective, as children are the foundation of the future so we have to attend to the younger generation and hope that they will become good citizens in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a bad day, and no one knows whats wrong with you or why you are mad, you friends and family are trying to look at you and figure out whether your mad, frustrated or worse, but because you've been hiding your emotions all day they can't seem to realize why. The day is over and they finally realize that you are mad based on your facial expressions and how you've been acting lately, but had they been using the Facial Action Coding System they would've known before hand.\n\nI believe that the Facial Action Coding System is a brillant idea and should be used for everyday purposes. Not only can it read and detect your emotions, but it can also give you an result of how your feeling for any occasinal day even if your hiding your emotions. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" This detail shows how efficient this can be for many people and students as well.\n\nTo be aware of the feelings that different people have everyday, the Facial Action Coding System will have to do accurate calculations to determine whether a person is having a bad day or not. Some of these calculations can determine and even find new information about a person as well. \"By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\" This detail shows that even though the computing sysytem might know the person's feelings it still needs to perfrom calculations to prove these results.\n\nWithout the Facial Action Coding System we as people could never excalty calculate and tell the exact mood or feeling a person could be having everyday. These computing systems are the best resources we have to identify the mixed emotions that a person could or may have. These computers could be great tools for teachers to use in the classroom. Such as a student having a bad day, using\n\nthese computers can help a teacher identify whether to help a student or not based on different expressions a student is having. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\"\n\nLast but not least I truly believe that Facial Action Coding System is valuable in many ways, and can help solve, and face any problems that people could be having everyday, thanks to the Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear [state senator]\n\nI would have to urge you to keep the Electoral College. Without a voting system as organized as this, it would be anarchy. Some people believe that election by popular vote is better, but it is not. They believe that the Electoral College is non-democratic and outdated. But there are many reasons why it's not.\n\nThe Electoral College process is in use currently, and though many people disagree with it, it would ultimately be better than popular vote. We have to put faith in the electors we vote for, this makes it less likely any of them are crooks. When people vote for an elector, they're voting for who they hope the president will be. While that may not always be the case, it's very likely the elector will vote for that candidate. With this, we'd have to trust the elector with our votes.\n\nIf we were to use the popular vote system, people could vote for candidates who run for fun, or joke. Or if a candidate decides to pursuade an overwhelming amount of people with a certain point, people will surely vote on that candidate, even if the point is invalid. This can bring the expectations for the president lower,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to rising issues in transportation and housing in a lot of cities, some authorities advise companies to be set up in the countryside. In my opinion, this has more benefits than drawbacks.\r\n\r\nThere are numerous benefits for organizations and society. Firstly, production costs are minimized due to lower prices of electricity, water and other resources. Also, governments provide huge incentives in the form of tax exemption and land at a cheaper price for the organisations that are willing to have their offices in villages or towns. As a result, companies can make huge profits which in turn will enhance the economy of the country. Moreover, this provides employment opportunities to the local people, which will prevent workers from migrating to cities for jobs. Additionally, rural areas will be developed and people living there will be financially stable. Besides this, metropolitan cities are impacted in a positive way, for instance, issues like traffic congestion, housing and pollution will be resolved as the population density will be low. Thus, the government ought to promote businesses to shift to the village or remote areas for the benefit of both society and organizations.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some downsides to this, it will be challenging to find experienced staff and great skillset which could lead to a slow down of the process. It will be an extra burden for companies to train employees with limited knowledge. In addition, transporting the produced goods will be expensive. To give a good example, fresh produce may get stuck in transit due to poor transportation, which may incur huge losses. On top of it, corporations face challenges with regard to setting up the infrastructure due to a lack of facilities and services.\r\n\r\nTo conclude , though it has some disadvantages, governments ought to strive for shifting businesses to the villages or towns as this will be more beneficial for the public and the business firms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper Some people say computers nt benefit society But I think diferent Computers benefit society would think They help people learn makes work much easier They help prevent acidents save lives Computers help people learn make work easier fact You type plan sedual You make presantation check email All things make work easier And tons things As I said help people learn You learn trillions things internet You learn everything internet quite amazing You could get medical degree internet Makeing work easyer helping people learn nt extent computers abilitys Computers prevent acidents anything moves For example cars millions road today practily drive selves And done computers Also planes reason piolot case something gose wrong Same thing trains Furthermore completly computerized humans tell computer want Almost everything moves within power computerized point time And makes world safer every one Finaly computers save lives completly true In hospitals without computers people would dieing every day They use keep records record vital signs asist surgery In surgery computers help haveing make tiny insision much acurate human sergons save lives Also computers mak sure operating room completly sterial reduces risks infection As see computers benifit society lot might think They help people learn make work easyer They prevent acidents reduces people going hospital And go almost garenteed survival So think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one, if not the most interesting planet in our solar system. Next to Mars, and the moon, we have put all of our scientific power into studying this very strange yet interesting planet. At one point in time along the scale of our vastly universe, Venus had the closest living conditions to our home, Earth. The planet has mountains, valleys, and space material impacts. Venus is so fascinating and important to us that we, as a race, are willing to put our lives in danger to explore the unknown planet.\n\nIn the passage it says, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The meaning behind this sentence showcases that we should not be afraid or unwilling to explore the unknown just because we are scared of what we do not know that is out there. We can not stay on Earth forever. The planet is going to die eventually. We also have concerns of natural resources, over-population, and food density. Which indefinitly means that we need to find a new suitable planet for us, as a race, to strive and survive.\n\nIf we do not adapt and overcome our stay on Earth we are smuthering and destroying all the hard work, as a race, that we have put to this planet. Just like in nature, animials are forced to moved from their natural habitats and have to adapt to just simply survive. If we can not do the same we will end up with a much more impactful, dangerous situation. That's what we, as a race, strive on is knowing the unknown. In conclusion, we must always be evolving and adapting to stay ahead of the game.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally I think that driveless cars are not such a bad idea. There are positve and negative things about it but thats with all new things that are developing.\n\nI actually think that self driving cars can be more safer in some situations such as parking. In crowded areas with very few space left self parking cars might be the best option. One reason I think that is because they would have multiple sensor which will indicate the car to stop where as a human would have to rely off of how far they think they are from a car or etc. Another situation would be if one is trying to multitask on the open road. If there is really not that much traffic one could possibly make an neccesary call or things as such. Driverless cars brings alot of oppurtunities, it could possibly help make driving alot easier for student drivers stimulate parking or simply driving at 25 mph making turns.\n\nEven though i support the development of driverless cars there are some negative effects. One would be malfuntion, the cars with this technology wouls be really advanced but also could be faulty. The car could possibly freak out and make an mistake but they're aware of that so thats why it requires your hands to still be on the steering wheel. Another thing would be some people would probably not pay attention while the car is self driving which could cause an incident but they talked about having cameras that actually watches the driver ensuring that one is paying attention to the road. The last thing is whom would be responsible for the accident, this would be a very tough case if they dont have the cameras to watch the drivers and also if there was to be a malfuntion how would one get this fix and how affordable would it be.\n\nIn conclusion of my essay about driverless cars I think that with the advanced technology we have the development of these cars could possibly be almost flawless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, but the author does not supports this idea, and only gives a few reasons why it would be beneficial to study it. The author suggests that it is a worthy pursuit because it is the closest planet to Earth, in size and in distance, there might have been life on Venus previously, and humans should not be held back by the thought of danger, but the author does not show why each of these reasons make it worth to study Venus.\n\nTo start with, the author states that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in size and distance. This statement does not support the idea that studying Venus is worth going through all of the dangers. Yes, it may be the easiest planet to get to, but Venus is not an easy planet to land or conduct research on, especially with the \"high pressure and heat\" and also \"additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes\" shown in the third paragraph.\n\nAdditionally, the author states that humans should study Venus because it \"was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,\" shown in the fourth paragraph. Although Venus has features similar to Earth's like \"valleys, mountains, and craters,\" it does not mean that Venus supported life. Also, in the text, it says that Venus was \"probably\" covered in oceans, which shows that there is no proof that this statement is a fact. The author does say that it would be beneficial to study Venus for scientific reasons, but in the second paragraph, it shows the conditions on Venus are not sustainable considering \"no spacecraft (has) survived the landing for more than a few hours.\"\n\nLastly, the author states that human's travels \"should not be limited by dangers and doubts,\" in the eighth paragraph. By stating this, the author shows that he/she understands the conditions of Venus, but that does not mean humans should be held back. This statement, again, does not show why it is worth it to study Venus, just that humans should not be held back.\n\nIn conclusion, the author does not support his/her idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. The author does give reasons why it would be beneficial to go to Venus and study it, but never shows why it is worth it. Yes, it would be helpful to know if Venus did support life at one point in time, but the author never showed if it would be worth all of the time and money. To wrap it all up, the author did not support his/her idea at all; that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this artile it talks about if Driverless ars safe enough. It talks about how car companys are trying to make cars morre automatic and driveless and lots of companies have tested their idess on how to do\n\nthis such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi and Nissan.\n\nDrivless cars could have a very good result on America it would decrease traffic death rate and be better public transportatio. According to this article the problem is no the cars its roads. It tells how along time ago people had the idead of using cabels on the roads send signals back and forth, and today they tried the exact same idea. They tested there theory of having cars that respond to the magnetic signals the road sends and it was succesful but the problem wasnt making these vehicles it was to much of a cost to remake every single road in America.\n\nIn conclusion this idea of this kind of change is meeting all the requirements of the law of keeeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe but the it says that safety is best achieved with alert drivers which is ver debateable. Overall America simpl does not have the funding and workers to make a dramatic change about the traditional roads to meet the standard in which the driverless cars need them to be at.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral college provide different types of way to learn because your own person. Taking down electoral college will only do us harm. By taking this down you are disgarding the fact of presidential election.\n\nBasically, destroying a dream of one of many people ever becoming president. \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors\", \"the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President\", \"the counting of the electoral votes by congress\". These reasons are why electoral college should stay. Therefore, Electoral College has a big impact on presidential voting and elections. Counting of the electoral votes is important because the total amount of vote on both electors can be shockingly close. Counting the votes will prove the win of the next president. Another reason as to why Electoral college should stay is \"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors\". Considering that they're so many , this shouldn't go down without a fight. Another reason why the college should stay is the \"Electoral College requies a presidential candidate to have trans-region appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" For example, Romney was in the south, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A momma bird laying eggs She layed butiful blue perfect eggs Days went eggs hatch The momma bird got upset She talked papa bird said CAPS patient Weeks went momma bird got agrevated Again papa bird said patient In spare time momma bird would keep busy twiddeling wing shopping cooking cleaning nothing could get mind eggs Months went Years went Decades centurys milleniums went But momma bird still patient Finally one day eggs cracked happy Almost immediately oldest birds took flight The third asked CAPS ca nt I fly yet momma said patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir nt change alot Narciso Rodriguez mood happy end says I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love also says I never forget parents turned simple house home I think Narciso happy The mood mostly calm happy telling courage parents Thats mood author gave", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My relationship laughter Well first time I came face face laughter I met boyfriend first time Before I met I depressed time friends could nt stand anymore But friends introduced I fell love first time I happy depressed alone corner crying time When happened first time almost year I smiled I nt smile day I met That s friends knew found someone take care love I Later relationship laughter came play I laughing time I around upset time That s started hanging took friends us hang After stated hang got know better beginning first met It took freshmen year us start dating That I found I suppose ably dating someone else I nt believe first guy came started yelling He came comforted front friends said CAPS cheating s guy met Then tried telling I told We never dating first place My friends walked saw tears asked whats wrong tried find someone new By time I another guy I m happy nothing change always matter happens us He best thing ever happened makes laugh I m upset mad says nt worry everything okay I promise believe Laughter relationship almost year nt plan change unless one us messes messed many time nt know anymore If leaves I nt know I m going s apart life relationship lets see keep together messing time around This part relationship best wont change least I hope wont would make go back living fear step dad I m glade I found someone I hope nt change laughter comes I m around makes laugh one ever able make laugh I crying even friends family Now laughter almost time I ca nt wait day sorrow goes window So together happy hopefully nothing goes bad us much love I m bubbly self s around Six friends say losing bubbly self nt let disappear guide road also told dad I nt really hang anymore reason I nt bossy tell I ca nt ca nt people understand relationship nt going work keep getting middle think life revolves around nt My relationship laughter nothing friends family boyfriend s I told relationship laughter Lets say relationship laughter always nothing change even parents parents promise much ca nt relationship happy ending anyone anything trying get middle I wish world could run away anyone knowing s world Well say nothing make relationship ever go bad unless start fight I hope nothing tear us apart knows happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt author creates loving mood It mentions Narciso always grateful parents love sacrafice That s telling us get along well really care eachother And siblings live different parts apartment They help set table eat I tell really loving caring enjoy family together This I believe author creating loving peaceful mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other transportation modes is considered by some people as one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem. I believe there are positives and negatives to this approach which I will analyze in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I agree that increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles is one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem, because nowadays there are too many cars running on the roads. Almost everyone has a car and do not like to use public transportation because it is difficult to go to work by bus or metro especially from the suburbs. However, if the government raises the price of petrol and make their public transportation systems more enticing, it will make citizens more likely to utilize it.\r\n\r\nThere are multiple methods that the government could implement to persuade people to make more use of public transport and stop using their own cars. For example, if people can get a discount for taking public transportation, they will be willing to do it from time to time. The government could also implement and build infrastructure and systems for people to ride their bicycles. If it is convenient for everyone to rent bikes from one place and return to another, it will become more popular for people to use it and will reduce the amount of time they spend driving their cars which will have a positive effect on the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only because of people driving cars and the resultant carbon dioxide emissions that the human-race is having a negative impact on the environment, there are a plethora of other factors which are also contributing to this impact. According to many studies, climate change is caused by many different factors which include(s) making (processing meat) products related to meat, manufacturing factories, agricultural fertilization to grow crops...etc. Therefore, all of these factors and different areas of human activity cause environmental problems which results in climate change.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are many issues which contribute to the environmental problem, I believe increasing the price of fuel will have an overall positive effect by encouraging people to utilize different modes of transport and consequently reduce the negative impact on the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of the light on the sky at night. Venus is a planet, Also Venus is the second planet\n\nfrom the sun. Venus is a simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point on Earth. It proved that a very challeging place to examine more closely on Earth. It is reffered to Earths twin. Venus is also the closeset planet to Earth and has density and size.\n\nEarth, Venus, and Mars, are neighbors because they are close to each other. They all have different speeds around the sun. These difference mean that we are closer to Mars and the other times to Venus. Venus is right around the corner from space,In space terms. None of the spacecraft survied the landing for more than a few hours. 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets in Venus. It is challeging because the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atomsphere. The temperatures average over 800 degrees. The atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater that we experince on our planet. The conditions our more extreme than anything humans encounter on our Earth. There is many metals on the Earth. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been most of Earth like planet in our solar system. Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported in various forms. The planet is very rocky and includes familiar features.\n\nNasa has a humans studing Venus. Venus would allow scientist's to float above the fray. temperaures would still be hot\n\nand around\n\n170 degrees Fahrenheit. The air pressure would be close to the sea level on Earth. The Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. The conditions are not easy but the humans can still live from it. orbiting or hovering safety far above the planet can provide inly limited insight on the ground conditions because it forms of the light. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of the rocks or gas. Scientist\"s seeking a conduct a through mission to understand the Venus.\n\nThere is many things in space that we all still don't know obout. Scientist's are trying to find new things about the planets and Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear our state Senator,\n\nI am writing to you for not only myself but for the citizens of our state. I do not agree with The Electoral College and I think that our way of voting for president should be based off of popular vote. I know our state and our country has been using electoral college as our way of voting for a very long time throughout our nations history. But Electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrrational. and i'll tell you whats wrong with the electoral college.\n\nAs you may know we do not directly vote for our president. we vote for our electors who will (hopefully) vote for the president we want. when the time comes for voting the state legislature are technically responsible for picking our electors. We the people are not always in control of who they vote for and the electors could always defy our will. We do not always control who they vote for. So is it really fair if we vote for an elector who doesnt even support us and our say in who we want to lead our country?\n\nAnother reason why i do not agree with the electoral college is for the smaller states. they do not have as much of a say in who runs our country like we do. luckily we are one of the biggest states along with california. but in smaller states they almost have no say at all. they dont even see campaigns because no one running for office pays attention to the smaller states. For instance, The campaign in 2000 seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all.\n\nOne of the biggest faults in the electoral college even though it is very unlikely but not impossible is a tie. As you already know if there was a tie the election would be thrown to the house of representatives,where state delegations vote on the president. because each state casts only one vote, the houses selections would hardly even show the will of the people. the people would barely have any say whatsoever. does that seem fair to you?\n\nThose are the reasons why i and many other citizens do not agree with the elecotral college. its unfair to us , the people, and smaller states. America is known for being the country of freedom and choice, but if we the people barely have say in who runs our country, are we really elligble to be called that? thats why i think we should use popular vote as our way of electing our president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Finding ways to improve educational quality is often one of the top priorities in every country. While some believed that students should have the option to give opinions and feedback on their teacher, others feel that this will negatively impact the education system. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I agree that adolescents should not be encouraged to evaluate their teachers.\r\n\r\nThose who support the concept of evaluation done by students feel that this may improve educational quality. In many cases, the level of comprehension of students relies not on the content of the lesson but on the way teachers conduct it. If, for example, the class is slow, it will be ineffective for teachers to teach too fast so that most students fail to retain the information. Indeed, if learners did not give comments, it would have become arduous to know whether the speed of the lesson is appropriate for the class or not. Ultimately, this feedback will improve the quality of studies and teaching methods.\r\n\r\nDespite these arguments, others, myself included, feel that such criticism and feedback will adversely affect the atmosphere in the classroom. Certainly, teachers can be vulnerable to the negative words of students, and the classroom may be in chaos due to the massive number of comments. As a result, the student-teacher relationship would get disturbed, and their emotional bonding will become weak. Furthermore, such an atmosphere would be impractical for teachers to work out a teaching method that can satisfy all students, and they will pay less attention and care in the classroom. Overall, this could affect studies and the whole education system.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay discussed reasons why some people support teachers' assessment by students and others oppose. In my view, criticism is not a solution for implementing a proper education system. Instead, we should find other solutions to tackle the problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the athor of this story did a good job explaining himself on why we should try to pursuit Venus. In the sencond paragragh he explained that Venus is the closest plant to earth in terms of density, size, and sometimes the clostest in distance. Then he explain some issue of landing on Venus because each previous mission was unmanned and the spacecraft could only survive for 2 hours. Then he started to talk about Venus thick atmosphere, clouds along with the temperatures and the atmospheric pressure. The reason saying all of this about Venus is a good idea becasue it gives the reader more information about why Venus would be hard to explore.\n\nHe also explains that Venus has the highest surface temperture of any the plants in our solar system. He also said that Venus geology and weather present additional dangers like erupting volcanoes, earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on the surface. Then he starts tlaking about how Venus at a point could have looked like earth. Venus long ago could of had oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. The plant has a surface of rocky terrian and includes familiar features like valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nAll of this is why I think the author of this story did a good job of explaining why it would be a challage exploring it. He gave good facts about the plant and talking about what nasa is doing to try to explore the plant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "every school year I wait patiently vacation It fell like terify waiting werth", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The scarcity of land to build new houses is a problem that many countries are facing around the world. This issue is more evident in big cities and results in serious results such as high cost of living and poor quality of life. Therefore, many experts recommend that only the government can take the required measurements to handle it efficiently. Personally, I strongly agree with the given statement as it is only the regime can plan a city in a better way and provide better opportunities to its residents. \n\nThe foremost reason for supporting the above statement is that it is only the state that has the authority to plan and organise cities as well as their infrastructure. Thus, in order to save space, it should discourage building single-storey residences by constructing multi-storey buildings equipped with all facilities and providing them to the public at reasonable prices. For example, to solve the issue of unavailability of homes, the Singapore government built vertical complexes with the collaboration of the housing department which were not only cheaper but also well organised. Besides, the state can implement laws in this regard. To illustrate the Canadian government, in view of the increasing prices of apartments, brought the law to restrict purchasing them by foreigners.\n\nAdditionally, to discourage people from migrating to urban cities, better amenities can be made available in the countryside only since many folks move to urban areas in search of opportunities related to education, medical and employment. For instance, when the authority levied less tax on companies which would establish their offices and factories in rural areas, fewer people migrated to city centres. As a result, it solved the issue of congested spaces, especially in the centre of the city.\n\nIn conclusion, it is evident that it is only the state which can take proper steps in order to solve the problem related to the shortage of housing in urban spaces by investing more in the countryside and encouraging people to live in vertical buildings instead of landed houses. I also highly suggest taking mentioned steps to solve the above problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "more people die in car related accidnts then almost anything else each year. yet we still choose to drive everyday. We choose to put our life in danger to take the easy way out.\n\nSome places around the world does not allow cars to be driven. this does everyone a favor. gives the community a piece of mind while taking a walk. it also forces people who doesnt get out very much to walk where they needed to go. this would help with people being overweight as well. But we are not just hurting ourselves by driving we are also hurting the planet we live on, Earth. Driving is the main source og pollution to our atmoshere. Pollution causes the air to be vey dirty that we have to breath in it also changes the climate. Climate will begin to warm, this has a big effect on everything, even animals.\n\nI also realize some places in the world this is not possible. there is many factors that go into this wether it be saftey reasons or if your like me everything is so spread out. But with that being said cars is not the only means of transportation, subways, railroads and buses are all possibilities too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On Earth our scientists have always been trying to be successful with landing on other planets within our solar system. The want to one day be successful without any casualties or lost lives. The author of this article feels that Venus is their next best shot. It has been stated that Earth's astronomers are intreged by Venus\"s Earth-like structure. Scientists have also been working on a mission to collect things like rocks and soil from the grounds of Venus. NASA has also been talking about an ol technology they used a long time ago. All of these ideas all present a risk but scientists are willing to take them.\n\nThere are rumors that say that Venus is a lot like Earth. Structure wise.\n\nThe text says, \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familier features such as valleys, mountians, and craters.\" All of those features are things we see here on Earth. Our scientists think that all of these features appear on Venus. They are lead also to believe that Venus was once made of many oceans. These oceans also could lead you to believe that there were also different forms of life on Venus.\n\nScientists are so eger to get on Venus they have been trying to construct a mission to travel there. This mission would consist of them collecting samples of things on Venus. the article syas, \" More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance.\" That is them saying they need to be able to get up close and get the real samples thet need. This trip could result in some casualties bu they are willing to take the risk.\n\nNASA has been looking back trying to find a way to ge their technology on Venus. they found an old technology called mechanical computers. they were made back in the 1800s and were used during World War II. The article says, \" The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" these devices can help them be able to get their technology onto Venus.\n\nAll of these risks are dangerous and risky, but the author feels that it is worthy of them pursuing the risk. they feel that they have they technology they need. They also are so passionate about the idea of it that they are willing to take the risk of sending people to the planet to collect samples. The author believes that Venus is worhty enough to take the riskand doesn't seem like he is one to back down. Alll of these ideas present a\n\nrisk but Scientists are willing to take them and that's what they are going to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's going to be a time one day when driverless cars will come. There's new technology every year and engineers are starting to make a run on the future. Driverless car would change the way humans get to places but, do people really feel safe in them? If the technology fails and someone ends up dieing, then that would be the manufactures fault. There's so many problems that could happen with these cars that no one could even see coming.\n\nInventing driveless cars are a complete no to me. Eventhough they sound \"cool\", driveless cars could lead to big disasters all over the road. Having driveless cars does sound like a good idea but, you never know what the outcome could be. I think it's more about the safety of the people and not to have them in harms way. In the passage it says,\"They can steer,accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". If your going to make a driveless car might as well make it where it does everything by its self and it takes no human skills.\n\nIf these cars ever got in an accident, who's going to take the blame? I'll tell you who will take the blame, the manufacturer of the car will. If someones sitting in the car and the cars driving them, what happen if the car fails and drives off the road and crashes to another car? Everyone in this world doesn't want to but a car that leads to crashes and fails while there driving down the road. Im not saying these driveless cars wont be successful, but people dont know what it could lead to when there driving down the road.\n\nThere's so many problems that could happen with these cars that no one could see coming. These cars are not a little toys to be playing around in. Eventhough they sound like a good idea for the future you never know if it will lead to crashes and deaths.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to travel different countries? Do you love animals & helping people? Join the Seagoing Cowboys! If you are intrested in joining please keep reading this & find out what we Seagoing Cowboys do on the cattle boat.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys are participants who are helping countries who went to war. We are helping them by giving them food supplies , animals , & much more. While we are on the cattle boat we have to do jobs. My job is to feed the animals three or two times a day , and pull bales of hay and bags of oats from the lower holds of the ship. You could do that too. You would be able to be around the animals you love! When we arrive to the country that is in need of help ,we drop off the animals and the food supplies. When that is done we might have time to explore the country for a little while then we leave for another country. Once every country is done we go back home. On the way there all the animals and food supplies are gone so we have time to play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals have been housed. Boxing, table-tennis tournaments, fencing , reading, whittling and games also helped time pass on the cattle boat. Being on this boat is such an adventure. It's something to do if you have nothing else to do.\n\nThis trip is so great! You would absolutely love it if you love to help people , travel , and play sports and games. We Seagoing Cowboys would love more people to come and help out. Please come join us. Thanks for your support if you decide to come and help!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports that going to Venus is a worthy pursuit by giving information as to why it is important. He describes the importance of it for humanity and the future for humanity. The author says the importance of going to Venus and the dangers that come with trying to get to it. Imagination is one thing the authors says to support the idea of going to Venus, as it is dangerous and even though it is dangerous people shouldnt let danger get in the way of their imagination and curiosity.\n\nThe author states many things that contribute to his idea of not being afraid of danger. In the text it says, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This states and supports the idea that the author has as to why people should travel to Venus. The author is saying to not let danger or doubt get in the way of imagination that we could accomplish\n\nimpossible tasks as getting to Venus.\n\nAnother reason the author explains is that information that could be gathered from Venus. It could give knowledge as to why it is the way it is or many other types of information. Much knowledge can be gathered from the planet. In the text it states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but talso because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This staes that it is important to gain insight on the planet and as a way to lead us to as equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThe author states another reason as to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers and the reason is that innovation in technology can be improved making technology that we dont have. Innovating technology can help in the future. The text states,\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" \"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" The text also states,\"Another project is looking back to an an old technology called mechanical technolgy.\" \"Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"\n\nThis explains the reasoning for needing to go Venus. There can be innovation in technolgy that can be improved to make it better than before. To not let danger or doubt get in the way of challenges being accomplished to not let the danger in the impossible stop humanity from extending into more things. This is why the author supports the idea of traveling to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to explore the world? Have you ever wanted to get a fun job? Well, if you do then I believe being a seagoing cowboy would be great for you. There are so many reasons to join. So I will tell you them.\n\nOne big reason to join is that you get to explore the world. This is a job where you take animals across was to different countries. I myself visited many countries and loved it. You get to see such beatiful sights while getting paid.\n\nAnother reason is its fun. As I mentioned before you go to such wonderful places. Plus, when the ship returns from one destination the shipmate have fun completions the while time, and when you are at whatever place you are you can visit anywhere and have fun anywhere. All while being payed.\n\nOne of my favorite reasons is that you help people. Being a Seagoing Cowboy means that you help people. You give to countries in need. Not only do you help them, you also help yourself. I never realized the need of other countries before a became a Seagoing Cowboy. I just love to give other countries animals that are in need.\n\nI hope I convinced you to become a cowboy of the sea. I think you should become one, just because it is so wonderful. I bed thee farewell with hopes that you become a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, international cooperation has become increasingly common, and it yields tons of advantages in many aspects. Some people claim that the primary merit of international cooperation in environmental protection, while others suppose that the main strength of such collaboration is stimulating global trade. Before presenting my perspective, this essay will examine both views.\r\n\r\n Admittedly, it is reasonable for some to argue that environmental protection needs global efforts. If governments from all over the world endeavor together to enact stricter laws and regulations on the discharge of pollutants and gas emissions, the space of global warming will slow down effectively. Furthermore, the multinational collaboration will be a wide-open door for many environmental organizations and scientists to exchange viable solutions and advanced technologies that could be tackle environmental issues. For example, they can discuss methods to exploit renewable energy resources to replace fossil energy sources, which may be a practical solution to minimize environmental pollution.\r\n\r\n When it comes to global business, cross-border cooperation plays an indispensable role in the international market boom. First and foremost, many enterprises will have a chance to conquer new markets and territories and reach more consumers, thus increasing sales and achieving the goal of maximizing business profit. In addition, global trade facilitates developing countries to approach modern techniques and professional skills, which can foster their economic development. Furthermore, international trade activities may create more employment opportunities and lessen the shortage of labor. Without economic collaboration, many countries can be challenging to address these hurdles.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n In conclusion, multinational collaboration is a required element to protect the environment and impulse the development of global trade. However, I believe that such cooperation should pay more attention to environmental issues to catch up with world business development.\r\n\r\n(290 words)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", It seems to be more of a postive outlook than it does negative. Driverless cars can be helpful in many ways and good for the people who use them.\n\nIn the passage it talks about driverless cars and how technolgy around us, is advancing. Driverless cars can be helpful to the people in many asspects for example. \"Their cars have driven more than half a millon miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars arent truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" It can solve driver accidents. People who texts and drive would be okay, and not likely to cause an accident. The driverless cars still alert you when needed so if the driver is unawear. It can help people when they need to finish bussines or students that have work and finish as they are in the car and still warn them and be alert, if they need to take over if necissary.\n\nAnother way driverless cars can be useful in peoples lives is as technology advances the cars can get even better and further help people in their daily lives. \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to dect and respond to the danger of out-of-contro skids or rollovers.\" Just in \"10 years\" the technolgy of sensors became better so possibly in another 10 years, technology around us will only further advance. Sensors in the car help with applying brakes, to reduce power from the egine, to allow better response and do even a better job at it than a human can. Which can lead to cars advancing further on and being able to handle more on their own.\n\nDriverless cars a postive asspect for peoples lives. The cars arent even all the way driverless for those people who still would want to take the wheel. As it says in the passage, \"In fact, none of these cars developed so far are completely driverless, they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills...\" People would still be aware of the surrounding and take over when ever needed too, it just further helps people be more aware and more safer with the roads they drive on with a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars can be a postive outcome on peoples daily lives. We as people should be able to have contact with driverless cars because it only makes our lives easier, especially for people who dont really pay much attention to the road, and help those arround them as well. It can only further help make roads they drive on safer, and cause less accidents. As technolgy in our world further advaces through out the years, it will only get better, and have a more postive impact on peoples lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It indeed appears true that the frequency with which advertisements for charities appear both on television and the Internet seems to be increasing. There can be various explanations for this and it can be seen in both a positive and negative light.One explanation for the increase in the number of charity advertisements is that the charities themselves are becoming more aggressive in their marketing. This can also be seen in the common strategy nowadays to encourage a monthly donation, rather than a one-off donation. The increased marketing is apparent too in the increased numbers of ‘street salespeople’, who stop passersby and try to get them to commit to this monthly payment.A second reason for the increase could also be that there have been more charities started and the number of advertisements would therefore increase and become more noticeable. If these charities are all legitimate, this would mean that more help will be getting to causes that need it. The increase in charities could also be explained by a possible increase of humanitarian awareness. People might be now adopting different ideologies that take into account people in less advantageous positions.If the number of advertisements for charities has risen due to the fact that there has been a positive shift in people’s compassionate principles, this surely has to be seen as an optimistic development. If it is due to the fact that governments have been cutting back, it could be seen as a pessimistic development. In addition, if there are more charities asking for more money, this will inevitably mean that the amount of money donated will have to be more thinly spread, which would be a negative development.There could be several reasons for why there are more charity advertisements today. Whatever the reasons, as long as any money is helping people in disadvantageous positions, it must be seen as a positive development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that is similiar, in certain ways, to earth. Earth and Venus both orbit the sun and Venus can be spotted from Earth. In this story, The author supports the idea of Venus exploration with great ideas and facts to support his claims. The authour says how visiting Venus could be both good and bad for humans and gives great reasoning on both point of views. The author never gives their opinion on the subject, but instead gives the reader reasons for both sides of the arguement.\n\nIn paragraph 3, the author says how Venus has a very dangerous atmosphere and supports that by saying that the clouds in the atmosphere are full of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. He says how the planets average temperature is over 800 degrees fahrenheit. The authour uses those facts to support the claim that those conditions are far more extreme than any human can withstand. In paragraph 4, he then goes on to say that long ago, Venus could have possibly been the closest thing to earth, being covered with oceans, valleys, and craters, possibly being able to support various life forms. He explains NASA? idea of a bimp like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the planets atmosphere for closer exploration, although the temperatures would still be very harsh.\n\nThe author ends off the writing by aying that humans must meet the challenges of Venus in order to conquer space exploration. Human curiosity could possibly come back araund and hurt us in the end, but we must know whats out there in case our planet is no longer inhabitable. He closes the story by saying that our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited, but we should exceed them in order to be great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do you think this discovery is that appears to be a face in the crust of one of Earth's neighboring planets Mars. Scientist at NASA have proven with evidence that the supposable Face on Mars is not alien made. The Face that has appeared on Mars is not a sign of life on Mars, but really is just the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, that are a common landform on Earth.\n\nNASA has conducted three missions to the red planet just to inspect the giant landform and each time they have came back with the same result. Thirty-nine years ago the Face was discovered and was realized to be just a Meas. Twenty-one years later NASA launches it's second mission to inspect the Face once more. Michael Malin and is Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original. The results of this mission were the same as the very first, the face is a natural landform. Just after that in 2001 NASA used a high quality camera with maximum resolution. Just to reveal that the Face was what they had suspected all along, the landform they had concluded on thirty nine years ago.\n\nThe area where the Face was discovered,Cydonia, is actually known for having landforms that are similar to the one that some believe to be of alien realtion. There could be mutiple of these landforms that look like a huge face, but they just haven't been discovered yet. These landforms are most definetly a mesa because they are the exact same heighth and width of the mesas that are found here on Earth.\n\nEven if this hoax that people say that the Face is a sign of life that used to be on Mars was true NASA would definetly release it to the public. The reason being is because this would be a huge benefit to the space program. The findings of Martian life would be amazing to hear and would bring much more funding to the exploration of the planet, but this isn't the case.\n\nIn conclusion after three NASA space missions, three similar pictures, and the smartest people together they all reach the conclusion that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. What more evidence could you need, millions of dollars have been spent just to try to convince the public that the face was obviously not any kind of sign that there is life on Mars. The theory is very illogical that the Face on Mars is something of alien or Martian decent, when its just something that you can see here on Earth in the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would it be a good idea for a computer to tell a students emotion by the look on their face? I think this would be a good idea in my opinon. A reason that would be a good idea is if the student is falling behind it can let the teacher know. And it can try to change the lesson so that theywill understand. Here are two reasons why it would be a great idea.\n\nThe frist reason is that during a lesson if a student does ot get what is happening the computer can notify the teacher and she can ask him whats wrong. This would benefit both of them because the student would not be behind anymore. The teacher can continue teaching knowing the student is caught up. So this would help everyone not to fall behind.\n\nThe second reason is that if a student is in a bad mood the teacher will know. Sometimes students will get a adittude towards teachers and they don't know why. If the computer can tell them that peice of information the teacher would know why. Then after the student gets over what he/she have been through the can apoligies.\n\nIn conclusion this would be a great idea that will benefit all. teachers can now help students that are struggling. And students can now not be left behind. and this will hopefully help with the teachers be aware of what a students mood is and try not to get them anymore angyer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock build structure stable enough top able hold dirigible Once Chrysler Building became taller Empire State Building however idea dirigibles slowly faded away unnoticed For example paragraph Al Smith said would put top hat building make taller The problem instead dirigibles docking would sit next point building If Smith wasnt competitive blimps would nice platform dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Corrupt Censorship occur censorship decides remove block showing certain media readable content pertains creator In cases distributor less author director publisher opinion whether display product made habit making enjoy store person etc display materials Libraries exponential option publicly put shelves stock restricting graphic material depended eduacational rules library equipted Any type content art art never even considered changed enhanced pertains one artist You never remake rewrite recreate visual material provided creator And aloud unless given permission creator Censoring removing hand permitted distributor Their choice publicly demonstrate something made someone choice Libraries example show given media readable content publicly displayed anyone see long audience fits rules criterias In instances partial side audience run across unexpected media inexecptional pursuasion accept demonstrated Though creators fault ensure content diplayed audience s fault whether see material It choice read see whatever d like nt forced upon follow distributorlet alone creator offering Enjoying topic material optional When options front given topics subject read follow chose read see Enjoying even harder library s limit basically sky force throw book censorship isnt level It library blame Everyone different views certain content isnt obligation view When take materials intended chose view enjoy destroy art creator made joy filled viewers taste Libraries shouldnt exceptionalize certain people s expectations everyone finds censorship solution Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book shelfthat work abhorthen also exactly right deos everyone else And books left shelf us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You need to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You need to join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it is an excellent opportunity to see other foreign countries. According to Luke Bomberger, \" Besides helping people, I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nOne reason you need to join the Seagoing Cowboys program is to help others in need. Paragraph 2 of the article on the left says, \" It was 1945, World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.\" The United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration hired Seagoing cowboys to go over to Europe and China recover from World War II by bringing food supplies, animals, and other badly needed resources to help Europe get back on it's feet.\n\nAnother reason you need to join the Seagoing Cowboys program is to experience the thrill of seeing other countries. According to the article, Luke had got to see Europe and China, take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, see the Panama Canal and the Acropolis and an excavated castle in Greece. Luke says, \"It was an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy.\"\n\nA final reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboy program is that it helps you learn to work hard. According to the article, animals had to be fed and watered two to three times a day, their stalls have to be kept clean, you have to give a report to the captain every hour to see if the animals are doing ok, and you have to pull heavy bales of hay and bags of oats from holds in ships.\n\nYou need to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. There are lots of reasons to join, but every decision you make either benefits you or someone in Europe or China. But, if you want to help someone in need, join this spectacular program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The anuthor in this passage gives us a lot of information about Venus. He says that Venus might be dangerous,but it is a worthy pursuit. Although we have gathered a lot of information about all the planets in our solar system, Venus is the one scientists are researching the most.\n\nVenus is worthy of studing because It is the most Earth-like planet. It is also the closest planet to Earth in the terms of density and size. It is a worthy study because Venus can sometimes be the nearest option for a planetary visit. Since long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, scientist can find out if it is still possible that it can support life. The thing is that scientists can´t get samples from a distance so they would have to get really close despite all the risks.\n\nEven though there is proof that humans might have lived in Venus, the 170 degrees is survivable for humans. It is also very dangerous because Venus has the hottest surface temperature than any planet in our solar system. The conditions in Venus are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. An an environment this dangerous would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of the ocean. It could also liquefy any metal. The enviornment is so bad that all the space craft that were sent to missions on Venus didn´t survive for more than a few hours.\n\nNASA has been working on new technology that will be able to survive for more than a few hours on Venus. They want scientists to be able to get as close as possible to take samples of rocks. NASA hs bee working on simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that have been tested. They test their technology by placing it in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus´s surface. All the technology they have testes has lasted for three weeks. They also want to incorporate old technology known as mechanical computers. These computers were used in World War 2 and could work.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a very intresting, but dangerous, planet to explore. It is worth exploring and finding out more about the planet. All the new technology can help scientists not make it a risk to explore it. And it won´t be all that dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot people huge debates think appropriate children teens reading watching listening topic opinions discussed logical explanations people think proper things kids exposed First kids watching rated movies even vulgar content sexual content violence etc Even though parents allow movies magazines still huge impact child possibly act future Secondly children still good number movies watch learn better education career etc Finally teens young adults exposed genre movies books music media based entertainment likely make destructive decisions teenager nt Although always case increase chances wrong decisions influence younger minds In conclusion young adults teens children able watch media contains vulgar content sexual content voilence etc without parent supervision permission", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Globalisation has become a significant aspect of the world’s modern economy, with countless industries and businesses expanding in various countries. This has led to the debate of developing a world currency with many people believing it could drastically help further develop economies and assist in the development of many countries.A worldwide currency could bring on effects similar to when Euro was developed for Europe. Trade could be significantly encouraged, as there would be no exchange rate fluctuation risks between different currencies. Moreover, tourists would not need to exchange money when travelling.However, there are certain risks to a global currency, which definitely do not make it an “unquestioned benefit”. Countries in debt would not be able to lower their currency value to make consumer goods more desirable, which could develop into a severe economic issue. For example, the US regulated its interest rates to increase the money resources in order to diminish the effect of a recent recession. Also economic problems, such as in Greece, have actually been made worse by the use of the common Euro. If applied worldwide, many countries’ economies could be very similarly negatively impacted. Finally, many countries around the world do not have a stable enough economy to be able to enter a common currency. If weaker countries were to adopt a world currency, this could be disastrous to their economy and to the economies of other countries using the same currency.In conclusion, the extent to which a global currency would be beneficial is quite low. It seems to me that the risks outweigh the benefits, as if a country were to lose economic stability, the world would be impacted as well. For that reason, I feel that in present circumstances, it is best to have separate currencies to protect countries from economic recession.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has been on the rise as of late. From phones to computers, technology has become incredibly advanced, even\n\nadvanced enough to read our emotions. After everyone is done with their collective gasping, let me explain. A professor named Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science, which is located at the University of Illinois, has developed new computer software that can recognize emotions. Out of all of the emotions, it can recognize six basic emotions, happiness, anger, surprise, disgust, fear, and sadness. The professor has said this could be used in several different ways, from educational to practical needs. I belive that this technology will become incredibly valuble in the near future, as the many ways it could be used are quite revolutionary.\n\nThe reason I support this technology is for several reasons. For one, it can have the potential to change the world. I am one of many who get bored or confused in certin classes, such as chemistry. Professor Huang explains that this technology could be used in the future to determine if a student is paying attention\n\nin the lesson, and if not, can modify the lesson much like a human instructor would to gain the students attention back. Same goes if the student is confused, the computer will modify the lesson as it did to gain a students attention. I also think that the ways it could effect everyday life. Professor Huang also explains practical effects of this sowftware. He claims that it could be used to find your preference for web ads. Such as if you smile at one ad, than it will play a similar one next, if you frown, than it will play a different one. And this technolgy is has been coming for several years, as we already have computers that can unlock themselves by simply scanning our face. The benifits are almost limitless. Professor Huang also explains this could be used in video games as well, which could improve graphics and would make many gamers happy.\n\nBut this technology does not come without its problems. No doubt someone could figure out how to use this technology for personal gain or evil. Even I have to admit it is a little creepy to have something reading my face to figure out my emotions. Most people get freaked out when they are being simply recorded and I doubt that having their emotions calculated make it anymore comfortable for them. But that does not outweigh the benifits that this technology can give us. Maybe one day they will have it so when you walk into your house, it scans your face and if you are sad, can play a type of music or sound to comfort you. I am excited to see where the future goes with technology like this. Who knows, maybe this is the start of a new world?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is beacaues you get to travel to places you never went before.Luke liked the job Don which is his friend, had told him about.Plus Luke like adventures,and like to go to fun places.Another reason is it's fun, I say it's fun because you get to be the look out like Luke,did and yell so the people can hear you,so no animal will come and eat the people. Luke also want to be a Seagoing Cowboy because he wanted to help these countries( it say that in paragarph 2, line 2).\n\nIf I was a Seagoing Cowboy I would be the lookout, because I would like to help and sever my contry just like Luke.\n\nLuke had made nine trips, the most trips any Seagoing Cowboy ever did.\n\nAlso I think Luke is a brave young man to be a Seagoing Cowboy.After Luke had craked his ribs he have not been doing work for a couple of days.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus is indeed dangerous but it does have a lot of fasinating things to learn about. Venus is a planet that has a lot of unanswered questions, and exploring it might give us those answers. Dangers are all over the world might as well take risks and find out what is going on in Venus.\n\nTo start, venus sounds really intresting and amazing by all those things that we read aboout the planet itself. Studying venus could bring us a lot of oppurtunities. In the story in paragraph 4 it says\" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may have once have been the most Earth-like planet in out soslar system.\" this shows that Venus has been like Earth in the past and it could still be.\n\nSecondly Venus has been set to be really dangerous because it can have \"Erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on its surface.\" But without actually going up to venus and finding out what it really has thats all just talk. For sure Venus can be dangerous but is it really a planet not a person can walk on? In paragraph 4 it say \"Venus was probably largely filled with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" If venus once may have had life and ocean on it Their may have a chance of still being able to have that.\n\nLastly Venus has very of intresting things to it. In paragraph 8 in the first sentence it says \"Striving to meet the challenge by venus has a value, not only because of the insight gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will like lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This is telling me the enough people have so much Curiosity on the planet that one day people will actually want to know what is going on with it and will want answers. Yes the author is right Venus brings up a lot of dangers to it like acid or heat capable of melting tin, But NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. But all of the dangers are going to be worth it once People figure out all these amazing things about Venus.\n\nIn conclusion I do think that Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. I hope you can read this and think that Venus would be an amazing planet to explore and find out good things about. It could have it's dangers but what you get out if it will all and up being worth it because of how much Venus\n\nwas so Earth-like, and how much good things can come out of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Author Nick D'Alto composed an article surrounding a software program that can read human emotions. In the article, D'Alto suggests the concept of using the new technology in classrooms to determing the emotions of a student. Doing this, teachers would be able to relate to the student and increase their ability to learn by knowing how they feel. For instance, if a child is depressed or anxious, the teacher could tell a happy story relating to what they are leraning or play a game with the class to engage the student and lift their spirits.\n\n\"'A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" (D'Alto, 6). Nick D'Alto uses a quote from Prof. Thomas Huang to asist his claim about the software being used in schools. Just like Dr. Huang relays in his message, children working with online resources or learning programs would be more engaged in what they are learning because the computer would tailor the lesson based on their emotions. This could really help out ADD or ADHD kids because the computer can switch the activitys as soon as it can tell the child is getting bored of it, which would keep them on track.\n\nD'Alto also gives many examples of the different muscles in the face that work to create the look of different emotions or fake ones. For example he tells us that, \"...your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises you eyebrows when you are surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" (D'Alto, 3).Staying put on the idea of using this in schools, high school or college anatomy or phsycology students can use the software the help them learn how humans convey emotion and how to tell which emotion they are trying to convey.\n\nOn the other side of this idea is the is not the reasining. The reason for putting this in schools is great and would help a lot of children who have different learning styles; the concern for schools all around the world, even here in America, would be the cost. Many third world countries and and citys may not have the resources or money to input the software into every school. D'Alto says in his article that, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode [emotions].\" (D'Alto, 7). Since normal everyday computers or laptops cannot handle the algorithms of the software, the cost would be extreamly high due to the added cost of new computers.\n\nAlthough implementing the software in schools would be a challange, putting it in video games wouldn't. D'Alto tells the audience, \"... we can write down some simple instructions that 'encode' different emotions.\" (D'Alto, 7). Knowing this, schools can think about possibly using the software to help convey emotion into games and or learning televison shows. The software would make animaton look more real to engage students. As for TV shows, producers could use the software to increase the number of people who watch. For example, shows like Blues Clues, Mickey Mouse Clubhouse, and Super Why would be able to look more realistic and engage their followers in learning.\n\nBased on the evidence presented, schools should have the FACS ( Face Action Coding System) in classrooms to better students education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The figure illustrates the changes in museum space provided in 2008 in compatison with 1998. It can be clearly seen that the area of permanent exhibition was decresed and more additional facilities appeared.\nGetting back to the details, facilities that had been placed to the right of the entrance were replaced by a part of permanent exhibition. Shop and room for keeping bags and coats were transfer to the left side instead room for temporary exhibitions and the new WC was opened inside cafe area. Tempopary exhibition room is currantly located to the left of garden and restaurant was opened juat beyond this exhibition room. The space of current temporary exhibition room and restaurant was previously occupied by permanent exhibition. So this space was decreased after modernisation of the museum.\nThe garden placed in the centre of the museum was also modernised. There are cafe sitting area and fountains now in the garden.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who would have thought that our world would be where it is today in the automobile feild. We started out with simple horses and buggies, and now we're sporting driverless cars. The future is here, and i'm super thrilled to be a part of the generation of technology.\n\nApparently, Google has developed a car that literally drives itself! Who wants to worry about puting the car in drive, and wondering if you're driving alright...you'll always be driving great! The google cars \"have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\" which absolutely amazes me. Safety is a very important issue that I personally worry about often, but with this out of this world invention, I wouldn't ever have to worry about crashing, to an extent. Also, since these cars are basically crash proof, you'll always have a designated driver if you're unable to succesfully drive yourself home.\n\nYou always hear about crazy people driving recklessly under the influence, and taking thier lives, taking others lives, and harming themselves and the well-being of innocent bistanders. With this breakthrough car, drunk driving rates would hit rock bottom. People wouldn't have to put others, and themselves in any sort of danger, because you're not the one driving, your car is. Again, safety really plays a gigantic role in these vehicles. These wonder machines also have sensors, so that if for some reason traffic is too much to handle for the smart car, the car will send a vibration through your seat to alert you to take over.\n\nTo me, that's the only problem...the cars aren't fully in control. Evidence from the article states, \" Google modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an internal motion sensor.\" Seems like alot of sensors! I would really love to nap at the wheel, but it seems as though I would be unable to proceed in doing that. So that is something I would definetely encourage manufacures to establish...no sensors, just pure driverless cars.\n\nThese cars are nothing short of amazing, and I can't wait to own one for myself one day. They are safer than your typical car, and also super cool and intereesting. So if you want more safety, and more reliablity, definelty go with the Google cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do people want to study Venus? Venus is a pretty dangerous planet so why do people want to study it? Is it worthy? Vensu is a planet closest to Earth and could resemble Earth a long time ago. Venus also is closest to Earth in density and size. It is a pretty dangerous planet because of its temperatures. Scientist are debating weather to study it despites its dangerous qualities it possess. In the article The Challenge of Exploring Venus The author suggests to study Venus despite its danger so we can truy find out how venus was and what we can do with the discoverings.\n\nFirst, the author suggests to study Venus despite its danger so we can truly find out how Venus was. This planet could of been the most Earth-like planet long ago.\n\n\"Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those of Eath.\" says the author. The author also states \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feature such as valleys, mountain, and craters.\" Since Venus had all these traits that are resemble Earth its no stretch that Venus could of been just like Eath a long time ago.\n\nLastly, the author suggests to study venus despite its danger so what we can with its discoverings. Since we have discover some of its obvious traits we can do something about that so we can later use it a Earth-like planet. The Author sates \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planeary visit.\" What we can do with its its discovering is truly find out if we can make venus a \"home planet.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the author find it interesting to study Venus even though it is dangerous because we it could be a loneg time ago and on its discoverings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, the consequences of unhealthy lifestyles are warned by several experts. Although people are aware of health importance, they find it difficult to stop doing unhealthy activities which leads to a higher risk of health problems and serious living effects. This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some solutions to tackle this issue. \r\n\r\nThere are different reasons to explain this problem. This can be, firstly, explained by the fact that people are too engrossed in work to forget how important health is. Many adults not only work eight hours per day, but also they continue to do other part-time jobs with a stable income desire. Therefore, they have trouble balancing work and personal activities. Sometimes, addressing big workload requirements leaves them with hardly any choice but to do unsound activities, such as an irregular sleep cycle and erratic eating habits. Secondly, once people are addicted to unhealthy habits, it is difficult for them to regulate. For example, people with smoking habits cannot reduce their dependence on cigarettes due to their high addictiveness. Besides, it is also unable to bring people with a sedentary lifestyle to be more active because doing exercises or other physical activities seems to be bothering them.\r\n\r\nTo solve this problem, solutions are presented suggested as below. One of which is that a healthy lifestyle should be promoted in the working and life environment. For instance, educating and self-educating about the influences of lifestyle should be stimulated by launching online competitions involving healthy activities. In addition, employees should apply smart tools to manage and build scientific working schedules. Nonetheless, companies are suggested to raise bonuses or support for difficult family circumstances so that they can feel less pressure to have better incomes. On the other hand, an unhealthy lifestyle should be strictly criticized in the media as a method to raise awareness of its consequences. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are indeed various causes regarding unsound activities, yet, they can be solved once measures are enlisted imperatively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents some positive and negative aspects of driverless cars, but that idea of bring cars onto the roads should be allowed and not against the law.\n\nAccording to the text, driverless cars from google are being imporved and developing so that they can reach the goal of one day no one buying cars because people wont need it. Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\n\nOne of the benifits of having driverless cars one day in the future would be going to places far without getting lost. People sometimes when they are in a hurry or trying to find their destination to where they are going is getting lost. Not every one in this world knows where every place is at and how to get to them, but GPS receivers within the car can help them get there and staying on track without getting lost.\n\nOn the other hand, some if not many people would think that driverless cars should not be put on the roads due to the fact that they can maufunction at anytime and at any place. First, most people probably wound't want to still drive if in any case being told to drive due to cautions on the roads. Second, in most states its illegal even to test and drive computer-driven cars. But also in some states they do allow but limited use of semi-autonomour cars. However, people would be happy even if they didnt like the idea of driverless cars on the roads because they could enjoy their rides where ever they are going to.\n\nOne day in the future there will be cars that will be driving themselves after the passenger puts in all the correct details about where he or she is going to. The author wants to see a day when there will be driverless cars on the roads, which could happen at anytime when they get improved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that going to a place of further education is the best way to have a successful career, whereas others think that it is preferable to go to an activity immediately after leaving school. It is the opinion of this writer that the former and latter choice is the best opinion. \n\nOn the one hand, if you go to an educational institution or college, you can apply for an activity easier because of the degree. If you study at an academy, you can gain more opportunities to endeavour with a good abroad community and it will help you to have a good appointment in another country. Furthermore, you study at an academy and you have a big amount of knowledge which will help your produce for many companies that need it to develop. For example, after you had finished your education programme at an academy or college, you achieve high results while studying so a host of big companies will apply to you for important jobs and you will get a big salary.\n\nOn the other hand, there is a small majority suggesting that starting a task early at the age of 18 can be more successful. the belief is based on some millionaires around the world do not go to educational institutions. But, they do not know that millionaires inherited a huge fortune from their parents and if the nation does not study, they will not have the qualification. Therefore it can be one of the barriers preventing them to reach their love business. Another point is that starting to struggle too early can make a nation get stressed. They apply for some companies without a degree and nowhere to agree with them. they easily feel upset and the nation will be likely to be unemployed.\n\nLastly, the crowd should go to the seminary if they want to stand a greater chance of landing a well-paid place. This essay has shown it is mỏe effective to attempt and complete yourself every day through learning more and more at home or school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is studying Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? This planet is sometimes called the \"Evening Star.\" Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus is proved to be a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because of the fascination that Venus might have been Earth-like planet and that NASA has a particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 4, it shows how Venus might have been earth-like planet, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Venus has some features that are similar to those on Earth such as surface of rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, given a long time of space travel. However, returning to Venus seems indisputable. The options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive to return to Venus is pretty challenging.\n\nIn paragraph 5, it shows how NASA has a particularly idea for sending humans, \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" The possible solutions is that the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. They are basically trying to create a vehicle that's hovering 30 or some miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Scientists are going to be hovering safely far above the planet it can only provide limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\n\nHowever, while scientists are hovering above of Venus they will not be able to take samples of rocks, gases, or anything else, from a distance.\n\nIn conclusion, studying Venus is worthy. Venus might be challenging to study but researchers and scientists are trying to figure how we can study Venus. This planet has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because of human curiosity. So yes, studying Venus is worthy despite it's dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead author goes many seneries All places author goes make even determined wants find water wants get Yosemite The determination pushes keep going And determination finally pays goes around turn sees place get something drink place cool", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This diagram illustrates the connection between different types of English language.\nOverall, English has two big branches - American English and British english, that divide further in to subbranches. Furthermore, British english has more subbranches tan American english.\nIn terms of American English, it divides into two main subbranches - USA and Canada. Canada further divides into two types of language - Angelophone and Francophone Canadian. Whereas, USA branch divides in to six types of languages, such as Philipines, American Samoa, West coast, Mid west, North-east coast and Puertorico.\nBritish English has three times more subbranches than American english branch. One of the subbraches is West indies, that divides into Jamaican and Barbados. Similarly, Far east and Australian subbranches also divides into two subbranches (Malay and chinese, and Australian and Newzealand respectively). West african, Angelophones and East African are three languages that belong to the African Subbranch. Last two subbranches - Indian pakistan and British Isles each divide into four types of languages, British Isles into Irish, English, Welsh and Scotish, and Indian Pakistan into four different forms of indian english.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about whether we should take action to improve the living environment of animals and plants. While some people think it is too late to change this situation, I believe that we can do a lot of things to effectively protect wildlife.\r\n\r\nFrom my point of view, humans can take many measures to promote the protection of animals and plants. For example, through the establishment of nature reserves, we can protect forests and many endangered plants, and improve the habitat of wild animals and gradually eliminate the risk of extinction. China's protection of giant pandas is a very successful case. Also, governments can introduce legislation to prohibit illegal felling of trees, the trade of wild animals and wild animal products, which can greatly reduce the number of endangered wild animals being hunted. By these measures, many species of plants and animals can thus avoid the fate of extinction.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I can understand the arguments against the protection of plants and animals. The main reason for this view is that the survival and development of human beings are more important compared with protecting wild lives. Humans need a better living environment and more natural resources, so we have to occupy more forests and the habitat of wild animals. Another possible reason for this opinion is that many kinds of wild animals have become extinct, and we can no longer change this situation and we should focus on more important things.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although human beings are facing great difficulties of raising such a large population, it seems to me that we should do our best to protect plants and animals, these actions can improve the environment of humans in return and better support the development of the globe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology to show a students emotional expression is not needed in a classrom because not every kid wants everyone to know how much percent are the happy, sad, and angry you really are.\n\nThe FACS program can even tell if you the emotions you are feeling even if your trying to hide them.\n\nNot everyone wants people to know how they are feeling or their emotions.\n\nAccording to the text a drama coach express differnt emotions to make people feel a difernt way but he makes them he doesnt naturally feel like that he canges his facial expressions.\n\nThe text also says \"putting on a happy face\" helps so that people cant tell what you are really feeling but what you are showing.\n\nThis proves why the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) does not belong in classroms for teachers to make students use every single day.\n\nPeople put on fake faces every day so people do not know how they really feel.\n\nPeople just do not like people know how they are actually feeling everyday so they put on a new face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" there are many key points made about facial action coding systems. Calculating emotions can be difficault but it's not imposible. Also that this system can be used in classrooms to help students who don't understand something or is bored is outstanding. Sitting in class and not getting something but are to scared to ask about it will make students a lot more comfortable with what they're learning. Or take he same scenerio but the student is bored out of their mind, this system would make it a little more challenging for them so they didn't just sit there.\n\nStudents may be sitting in class or taking a standerized test and are bored out of their mind cause either they understood it really fast or already knew it or just don't want to have to deal with doing or taking it. Either way the system created would help them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy always gratefull everything parents done Narciso Rodriguez My opinionI think Narciso Rodriguez told us students adults little bit life might want people understand went life see got way got Where today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many advantages of limiting car usage. Millions of people use cars on a day to day basis, but if we were all to limit car usage then a lot of things would be different and better in most cases. In German Suburb, hardly anyone uses vehicles. In Paris, they banned driving due to it causing smog. They even have a car-free day in Bogota, which is a surprisingly becoming a big hit. People everywhere are trying to end the car culture.\n\nIt would stop twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and around fifty percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. In Germany, seventy percent of Vauban`s families do not own any cars, and fifty-seven percent sold a car to move there. A lady named Heidrun Walter said, \" When i had a car i was always tense. I`m much happier this way.\" People find it less stressful and better to the Earth by limiting the usage of cars.\n\nParis enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. On cold nights and warmer days it causes the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Congestion was down sixty percent in the capital of France, after five days of the intensifying smog. If everyone were to limit car usage, none of this would occur again. The air and our environment would be better for us to be in.\n\nColombians had a free-day of no cars, they hiked, biked, skated or took busses to work or wherever they needed to go during that day. Due to this, traffic dramatically dropped and new resturants and upscale shopping districts have copped up. This day is a really big hit in Columbia because how much it benefitted from this.\n\nThere are so many advantages from limiting the usage of cars. Its greatly effected Germany, Europe, France, Paris, Columbia and other places. It would stop some of the greenhouse gas emissions, the smog causing bad air surrounding us, drop traffic, and build stores a lot closer by. These are just some advantages on stopping the usage of vehichles world wide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The reason is that it will help teachers out, students can get more help, and you can get to express your feelings.\n\nIn my opinion this technology that reads your emotions can be good. It says \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This is the reason that this technology can help out the tecahers. It can help them by knowing if they are not doing such a good job in explaining or teaching things. For example if students get bored the teacher can enlighten the lesson next time. Also if students get confused but they are too shy to ask questions or to tell the teacher they don't get it the teacher can begin to explain and try to make the lesson less confusing. If you are happy the teacher will know that he is doing a good job at teaching.\n\nIf they used this technology in school it would even help the students out. One way is that just by showing emotions the teacher will understand and try to help you out more. Another way is that if you aren't feeling so well the teacher can read your expression and give you a pass to go to the nurse. If you are feeling angry the teacher will back away and let you have your space. Lastly, this is why this technology can be good to have.\n\nMy last reason why this computer can be helpful is because you can get the help you need. The way this computer can help you is by if you are having a bad day and you don't want no one talking to you the teacher will know and let you use the restroom to calm down a bit and give you some privacy. Another reason is that if you aren't feeling safe or someone is bothering you your teacher can help you out and communicate with you and do something about it or let you see your counsler. Also if something is going on with you the teacher will know and let the counsler know and that way you can let everything out and talk to your counsler and your counsler can help out.\n\nIn conclusion, this is why i think having this technology to read expressions can help the teachers out and even you could help out your friend. It can help teachers out, students can get more help, and you can get to express your feelings more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I People spend much time computer A lot people computer whole day They spending time family friends People never enough time activities Also computer mostly used talking family friends homework research games bored work To begin people need spend time family friends rather computer For example mother father asked wanted go dinner said I m computer would mean obsessed going computer A lot families bing broken apart people spend much time computer friend say I bored play games computer rude friend bored So need get computer spend time loved ones Previously I stated people spend time loved ones well people need spend time activities well A lot humans sit computer eat time eventually get fat gaining weight computer need go activite fat teen given idea play sport computer important serious obesession computer As result computer used wisely The computer used talk family friends homework research work bored play games little games computer Those probably important things likely used computer A lot things I listed important go computer watch people talk s point wasting time computer could much different things computer For example homework vocabulary need definitions go wwwdictionarycom find need define simple word In conclusion people spend much time computer They need spending time family friends Also people need activities lives Lastly use computer useful things like homework even important research So see humans spend much time computer rather much important things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Usage of cars has been decreasing due to the effects it can have on the environment and the opinions of the public. Driving has had a major impact on the atmosphere due to it's polluting effects. Smog covers highly populated cities where driving is just another way of carrying out everyday-life. Though transportation by car has been a huge help in economic progress, it still comes with a price.\n\nIf we had no cars there would be less deaths, decreased enviromental instability, and shorter use for our limited amount of fuel. Texting/drinking and driving are some of the biggest causes of death in vehicles. The number of deaths caused by texting or drinking when driving has skyrocketed over the years. These areas where driving is prohibited are probably very safe places and the number of deaths brought about by driving are most likely little to none.\n\nBut life without cars can pose for some serious problems. Yes, it may cause fewer deaths and decrease pollution. But, it will also bring about issues such as; limited transportation of goods, infestation of the homeless (not a joke), and many inexperienced drivers when they are needed. In war, mobile transportation by car or truck is often needed. If people who can't drive are appointed to tasks such as driving, they won't be much help and could make things worse. Yes, they could be taught but time is not everlasting.\n\nBut all negatives aside, the suburban areas of the world could become much safer places without cars. No kids would get accidentily ran-over when their ball rolls into the street and the try to retrieve it. It would just be a much safer environment. Teens have no interest in learning to drive nowadays because they're either too lazy, or they see the effects it has on the world. of course trains and emergency transportation will be needed though. But regular cars and vehicles aren't a neccessary attribute to everyday life.\n\nIn conclusion, cars that don't serve a neccessary purpose aren't needed. What are the cars that do? Those vehicles would be firetrucks, ambulances, and other emergency vehicles. But cars ment for our own personal transportation can be left out of the picture. Now if only we could do the same about drugs...", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary era, mostly big organizations prefer conference as a basic method in order to choose employees for their association while, according to the rest of people's perceptions it should not be the only way to hire a suitable coworker. I think that it totally depends on the job and job duties which they are going to perform while on their work. This essay will argue why these both methods are equally reasonable.\n\nTo commence with, there are a lot of points in which account are a better option than any other method. For instance, it helps in judging an individual's actual viewpoint and confidence. Some international companies always interact with foreign people regarding business. If a person is confident enough then he or she would able to conversate with others and perform their presentations very well. In this way, interviewers can easily make a decision about the further selection process. \n\nOn the other hand, documentary business and online employment are the reasons to view interviews as not a reliable method for hiring employees. Firstly, being an introvert is the main cause of expelling them from the work. Most people do not interact socially but they have enough knowledge about their field. They have enough ideas to excel in the company but cannot express themselves . In that kind of situation, companies do not give them the opportunity to work because they fail their basic selection criteria. I opt that instead of interviews, the management of the company should focus on documentation and education in that fields where interaction does not matter.\n\nIn conclusion, interviews can be a plus point for an individual to be chosen for the company but they should not be in priority of the selection process. however, paper forms and qualification written exams can be preferred when selecting staff.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are a lot of young people go to do unpaid community work after school. Some people think that it is good for both young people and the community. My view is that unpaid community work can provide teenagers and the community with good benefits, but teenagers have their right to choose whether they want to do this work or not.\r\n\r\nFirst, it is obvious that young people can have a good experience doing community work. This is because they need to communicate with different kinds of people who are living in this community. So that they can learn how to communicate with other people and how to work together. \r\n\r\nMoreover, young people can build a good relationships with other people when they are doing the community jobs. For example, a young person can make friends with other people who are in the similar age. Therefore, the community can become a big family. \r\n\r\nThat is not to say that teenagers must to do community jobs without pay when they are free. This is not the only way for young people to benefit the coummunity, they can also help other people personally. So that community work should not be the only choice for young people.\r\n\r\nIn summary, I think that it is good for teenagers to attend some different events of community work without paying, but this should be volunteered by young people. However, parents should encourage their kids to attend some of the community work the gain experience and improve the community together.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Does your school have spy technology? Do you want to feel like you're James bond? Well, were not that far off. Scientist are currently engineering a new software that can detect your mood and emotion. Although this is not a facial recognition device that opens a vault door to your secret spy lab, this new technology can be very useful in many differnt situations. The makers of this great softwear intend to introduce it to a school setting and it is causing a major contorversy. This technology should be introduced into schools for many reasons, it could help keep students focused, and could help sense if the student is troubled and needs consoleing.\n\nThe creators of this software believe that their technology can help students and keep them focused on the task at hand. One of the scientist, Dr. Huang predicts \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor \". This new software can do what so many teachers cant, it can understand the student. This opens up a whole new way of learning, It gives us a guarentee of sucess. These students will now work at their own pace and individually get help in what they are stuggling in.\n\nMany students are going through troubled times and find themselves in difficult stituations. High School suicide rates are at an all time high and more and more school shootings occur. This new software could help prevent these tragidies from happening. The majority of school shootings and suicides are because the student is being bullied or feels helpless and alone. Dr. Huang states,\" Most human communication is non verbal, including emotional communication\". This makes it very difficult to know if someone is going through a tough time and needs help. This new technology is giving us a key to understand how the students feel and know if these students need some sort of help before it is too late.\n\nThis software is nessasary and is exremely valuble to a school. It can help teachers greatly and help the students themselves. This program helps students achive their full potential and stop tragidies from happening. The Facial Action Coding System can overall help these students live happier, safer and healthier lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you heard of the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System they use it to read peoples emotion? Well there is and it to be a great invention because the device checks all of your facial bones. That means after doing that they can really find out what your emotions are like they used on the Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci. However, is it really something you can use in a classroom full of students? Yes, because the teacher will use it in case there's in emergeny, help , or seeing if thier doing there work knowing if they fell asleep or bored.\n\nEven though it's a form of new technology it can also be a good thing to have in class. Like showing if a student doen't get what the teacher is teaching can help to show how their emotions are toward it ,\" A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confussed or bored.\" The new technology seems as a good thing because it can help out the teacher and the students. Another thing it can do is they can know right a way with the computer and they don't have to trouble knowing that their are students who don't get at all what's going on and who to figure out what to do. Even it find out your emotions it can also find out if there genuine.\n\nAlso the device and let know if your really \"engaed\" like a real smile if it really real or it's fake. In classrooms they could be haelpful because the teacher can use to know who is really in what they are teaching or if your faking sick it tell right a way your not feeling bad. An example of this is,\" It's all the muscular action units. They even idicate the differeces between a genuine smile and if it is a forced one.\" So what the device actually show is the student is feeling bad because the device show's what muscles they use and it know when it is fake and forced. The fact it can know if someone is genuine is great of what the emotion can tell if someon is lying or say the truth.\n\nThe fact that you can know emotion by a device facincating. I think it is a really helpful tool because it know the emotion and whether they are false or true. I know teachers would think the same way to because it can really help them find out what are the students they can help out. I believe that is is a good system to have in classrooms for the students and teachers. What do you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, even the idea of it gives me a massive headache. Thinking about all the promblems that would cause is just dreadful. I mean it's bad enough people now and days don't know how to drive I cant even imagine what it'd be like having driverless cars on the road. I think it's absoutley the worse idea I ever heard of mainly because of all the tremendous promblems it would cause.\n\nHaving driverless cars in my mind is very dangerous because anything could happen when a driver isn't in control. Today we already have so many accidents everyday with just everday people. People are not responcible enough to take on such a big task of having a driverless car in their possestion or on the road for that matter.\n\nIt's understandable to have the idea of having them because of how much technology has improved over the years. But even now the cars are not fully ready to be taken out on the road when it can't fully take on the challenge of driving around accidents, roadwork, and roadblocks. However it does say that the car can alert the driver when it needs the assistance but, who is to say when a person is paying attention they could be sitting back relaxing and the alert may not\n\nmake it to the driver in time. That is a acciedent waiting to happen.\n\nEven though we still have wrecks I think that its less likely to happen if we have people behind the wheel that\n\nare able to control the car at all times. With a smart car there is no telling what it could do and what it could cause. If a person needed to take over and drive and couldn't get the displays that control the car to turn off that could be really bad. If\n\nwe keep it like how\n\nit is now\n\nwe won't even have that as a issue.\n\nI fully agree with traffic laws saying that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. At least then there is a chance to prevent a accident. When\n\nyou as a driver are not in control of the car you are driving. It can become a scary and dangerous situation. You are not only putting yourself in danger but everyone else that is on the road with you in danger. I will stand by what I think and that is driverless cars should stay in the television shows and movies and keep reality where its real.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order dock dirigibles builders would face many serious problem These problems builders would forced deal city framework First building frame weak tied dirigible This would add stress frame could transmitted way building s foundation Due would forced spend sixty thousand dollars strengthen frame A second issue faced city Laws prohibited flying low urban areas let alone tie building Due fact would forced design way dock Finally violent air currents would cause issues The builders would deal building piece mooring equipment could stan wrath nature All plan would force many issues builders order function", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this present-day world, it has to be said that a younger leader is better than an older one;however, most organizations have geriatric higher authorities.In this golden digital era, the younger generation has the ability to handle technology rather than dotage people;although, the aged generation have life experience.I agree with the theme and the essay will enunciate this notion in detail with appropriate instances.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, it is indeed an irrefutable fact that technology has been changing day by day and younger people are updating more advancements than older people.For instance, a study was conducted by scholars of Harvard University about the speed of learning technology in dotage and younger adults.The result shows about 80% of youngsters learn technology fast rather than old age people.\r\n\r\nTo continue, it is paramount to consider health instead of experience.Younger people are healthier than old age because during old age, the chances to get health issues are more and there are chances to get Alzheimers and dementia that horribly affect your ideas.For instance, a survey was conducted by IIT,Mumbai about", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s world, it is believed by a part of the population that the complexity that technology brings is unnecessary and we should simplify our life by getting rid of them. This essay disagrees with this claim because technology has brought us convenience more than anything else and it is impossible to imagine our life without them.\r\n\r\n100 years ago, life was indeed so much simpler than today. However, without the help of technology; transportation, communication, and many more services were extremely poor and hard to access. So no one can deny that technology has revolutionized all those basic aspects; now we can travel to the other side of the world with just a few hours, see and talk to each other with just a few clicks. It is true that technology can somewhat turn our life just a bit more complicated, although in the end, it also makes our daily basics simpler yet much more efficient than ever before.\r\n\r\nMoreover, life without wonderful machinery no doubt is challenging as human has already got familiar with using them every single day. If we wipe out everyday object like smartphone, laptop, car, and bullet train, the economy would collasp within a few days due to the fact that a huge number of jobs are currently relying on those machine.\r\n\r\nFor instance, no sooner had the first mobile phone were born than companies and factories started to rise. This gave millions of citizen an opportunity to have a job and put their life standard higher than before.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is safe to say that there is no point in making life simpler by throwing away technology and we should thank them for giving us numerous of merits in the first place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast historical article Marcia Amidon Lsted made clear least three obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempt allow dirigibles dock These issues building s preexisting frame fire safety nature The plans Empire State Building intended mooring mast dropped roof building As result architects change entire plan The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation par This significant difficulty Also concern foreign dirigibles gas use made fire safety issue owners realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area par Getting around fire hazard would impossible Finally stated article nature mast s greatest obstacle Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast par The violent winds kept much happening mast With three aforementioned obstacles fate Empire State Building s mooring mast grim It would never Al Smith intended", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Help Change the World\n\nWouldn't you like to help countries recover from ruins World War II left? Well now you can the UNRRA is hiring \"Seagoing cowboys\" to care for animals that were shipped overseas. It would be nice to join and be known as someone who did something for a country, helped keep animals safe and healthy, and helped countries recover their food, animals, distruction etc.\n\nFirst It must be a good feeling to be known as someone who did something for a country. Although not everyone may agree, not only will others be amazed but you, yourself could be proud of yourself. Someone once made nine trips which was the most of any Seagoing cowboy. Also you can be a hero to millions by doing one great action. Overall this can be a great lifetime opportunity for many, and you can be one of them.\n\nAlso how amazing would it be to know you helped keep animals safe and healthy. However others may not agree, many inoccent little animals pass away because no one was able to save them. But you can make that difference. Caring for the animals during crossing keeps you busy. Especially if you are a animal lover this job is just perefect for you!\n\nFinally, helping countries recover their food, animals, distruction etc is like a miracle to them knowing someone is trying to change the world. Of course not everyone believes this is true, but put yourself in their shoes imagine you lost your house had no food and no one came to rescue. But then that one person comes and changes everything for the better. You can do it everyone can even just by doing the smallest kind of act you can make a difference. Keep that in mind it'll not just be a better world for you but all of us.\n\nDoing something nice, even the littlest act can lead you a long way. You earn respect, respect isn't given it's earned and it's not hard to earn it if you do it the proper way. So what are you waiting for there's a world out there waiting for you to change it. And joing the Seagoing cowboys program is a fabulous start! Good luck!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain people support the idea that some things that children are taught at school are useless, while other individuals believe that everything learned could be useful at some point. Although the complaints of the first group are understandable, in fact, children always benefit at least from the learning processes involved. And while I would like to see more practical lessons being taught, I support the idea that everything learned could be useful in some aspect.\r\n\r\nIt would be very good to see young students making good and practical use of most things learned at school. Many people could relate to some of the complaints around this topic because even when we look back at our past, we can remember learning many things that were never useful in any practical form. For example, even if you work with mathematics there were formulas that you learned that you probably never used in your whole life, the same applies to every other area of study. As a result, certain people and especially parents, wouldn't be supportive of some classes their children are taking at school.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, most of us do not exactly understand how the processes of learning work. Furthermore, we are not competent to decide whether something could be useful or not, because even when we don't learn something practical, the process of rationalizing and achieving the answer could be important to our brain development. For instance, the logical thinking is constantly used in our lives even without our acknowledgement. In addition, teachers can stimulate the interests of some students when they get involved in certain topics, such as the environment, animal care and protection, health care and many others.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I like to think that the fact that some things are not exactly practical to the students doesn't mean that they are a waste of time. Moreover, even though the lessons taught themselves could become useless in the children's lives, the learning processes are still valuable and important to both their development and their discovery processes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you like traveling and helping out then heres a job for you.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can be very instresing.\n\nLuke is a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLuke enjoys being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLuke travels alot while being an seagoing cowboy.\n\nThey traveled on cattle-boats, he says it was an unbeliveable opportunity.\n\nIn 1945, World War II had ended in Europe.\n\nMany contries were ruined.\n\nUNRRA hired the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nUNRRA hired them to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nIn August 1945, they had gotten orders to go to New Orleans.\n\nThat day they arrived, the Pacific War had ended.\n\nIn 1947, Luke had gone on nine trips, the most a Seagoing Cowboy has been on.\n\nIt took him about to weeks to cross the Alantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States.\n\nIt also took a month to get to China. When he cared for animals during the crossings it kept him busy on the trips.\n\nAlough the sea can be dangerous, he liked it.\n\nOn Luke's second trip, he was a watchman.\n\nHe had to keep eyes on all the animals every hour.\n\nOn a rainy night, he acidently slide down a slippery ladder on his back.\n\nHe got super scared, his heart raced.\n\nHe shot down a slide, feet first.\n\nA small strip of metal along the edge stopped the slide, keeping him from flying overboard.\n\nHe had an injury, he had cracked ribs.\n\nWhen the boys had free time they had fun.\n\nThey played volleyball and baseball. They also liked to play table-tennis, fencing, and boxing. They also read.\n\nThey helped pass the time when he nothing to do.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can open up a whole new world to you.\n\nIt makes you more aware of people's needs.\n\nThat is what it is like to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nDo you become a Seagoing Cowboy now?\n\nYou should, it could be really fun.\n\nJust try not to get hurt like Luke.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After graduating from high school, people have different views to get the best job, between studying at university or college and getting a job straight. I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.\n\nFirstly, it is clearly seen that more and more students do not many money to continue studying or their dreams, they do not have more options. Furthermore, some students choose to study because they do not live up to school, class or subjects, and sometimes people can see some students have more great skills work than studying. \n\nTo be honest, getting a job after leaving high school is good, but it merely brings benefits in a short period of time. That is a reason why I agree that continuing their education is the best way to come to a successful career, and also have other reasons like academic qualifications are required in many professions, because a lot of big cities recruit employees with qualifications. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.\n\nIn conclusion, students who study at college or university are more successful than students who get a job after high school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is just a natural landform. As the old photographs of it might have looked like as if it was made by aliens. The new photograph of the Face just shows a regular landform due to the higher resolution. The media is just trying to make you believe that it is an alien monument. At that time, they didn't' really what know what it was exactly. I am here to prove you that the Face is just a natural landform.\n\nIf the Face is an alien monument, there could have been mysterious looking structures on the monument. The Face is just a butte or a mesa as it was said by scientist Garvin that it reminded him of a butte in Idaho. The 2001 image of the Face doesn't show anything phenomonal, it is just a simple landform. According to NASA, the shadows just give the landform a face. As for my last evidence, Michael Malin and his team took a sharp photo of the Face explicitly revealing that it is just a landform.\n\nAs the old photographs suggests that it is something made by the aliens, it is not. It is just a landform based on the newer photograph. A scientist claimed that the Face is either a mesa or a butte which reminded him of a butte he saw before. As it is popular within the media, no one knows what it is. Later on, a group of scientists took a sharper photograph of the Face and confirmed that it is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When it comes down to air pollution cars are one of many the factors that lead to air pollution. The pollution made by cars could start smog to build up in major cities and suburband areas. This can become a major factor in many other developed countries. There is one way we could put a end to this and that is to limit car use.\n\nThere are countries all over the world that are starting a new trend in order to limit the use of cars. The trend they are starting is a car less suburb wich bans all cars from the community. This method is better because they build things in walking distance so there is no need for car use. This is a good way of reducing the air pollution and also a good way in saving money. this is a great move for the poeple who are jobless so they wont have to spend money on a car or gas. These suburbs are a good place to live because the air is less polluted and you save money.\n\nThis movement is also starting in major cities such as Paris and Bogota. Paris was one of the most polluted places in Europe until motorist with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave thier cars at home and the same would apply to the odd numbers the next day. As the days went on the smog in the air had reduced and also the traffic had dropped. In Bogota motorist were also orderd to leave thier cars home. When the people were orderd to leave the cars at home they started to ride bikes and carpooling to get to thier destination. The other countries saw how this helped car pollution and traffic jams they started to ban cars as well.\n\nThis movement has vehicle makers to start changing the way they make thier cars due to these events. This new trend has redudced the air pollution majorly and the use of traffic jams have dropped. If they continue with this car banding the world would be a less polluted place and people would save money and live better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since World War II, driving has been the center of everyone's mind. Do you really think driving is a necessity? Many people will say yes, but most will argue no. Limiting car usuage will be great for us citizens and our very own planet Earth.\n\nTo start off, driving causes you a stressful day, but not driving will save you time and money. Gas prices are more than $2 a gallon. One car takes more or less 10 gallons. Filling your tank up will cost you around $60 or more. In my eyes, it's cheaper to take public transportation than to drive. While taking the bus or the train , all you really have to do is wait , pay to get in, find your stop, if your destination is a little farther, there can be another bus and you'll be at your stop. On the other hand, Driving, your worrying more. Your worried about if you have gas, is there a traffic jam, why is this driver driving so slow. You're getting fustrated rather than taking the public transportaion. In Colombia there is this program where you dont drive for a day. \"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\"(Source 3). Not only did it cause a less stressful day, it allowed them to get some exercise.\n\nFurthermore, I have a question. How many people like smoggy days? No one. Reason I asked this specific question is mainly because if you enjoy driving, you must enjoy the smog. \"After days of near-record polution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\"(Source 2). Although Paris has more smog than other European capitals, it isnt good for our very own health, but it isnt good for our planet either. When Paris did this \"No Driving\" campigan, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog\"(Source 2).\n\nOn the other hand, driving isn't really important as it used to be. We have all these technological advances, that honestly make driving not necessary. We all have a cell phone, we can all video chat. Some work together, some go to school together. We all can car-pool. There was this quote that I read, and after doing some thinking, it made me realize that driving isn't really important as it seemed to be. \"How much you drive is as important as whether you have an hybrid\"(Source 1). Hybrids save alot of wrong doings that we already do to this Earth. Along with eletronic cars. Driving a hybrid, yes it's saving the world but your still causing traffic, and wasting money. Some people have already quit driving. \"With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.\" (Source 4). America has went so far into the stopping of driving that on highways there's more tolls. Tolls that we can't pay to another person, tolls where they take a picture of your license, find out you information, and send you the amount you owe through the mail. Each toll is different some can be 75 cents or a $1.50. From your home to the mall, depending where you live, you'll pass by more a less 5 tolls. In total thats around I'll say $3.75 or $7.50. Public transportation saves you more money. Mall's have buses where it picks you up from a specfic location to the mall and back. That's saving you time and your money.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting car usuage can be an advantage to both young, old and even to our very own planet Earth. It can help our economy, save our pollution rate, but also help us lose the weight. Now its your turn, Are you willing to make the change ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our current,generation I Believe that parents should encourage her to spend more hours on physical exercise and less hour studying because nowadays heir is lazy to do any physical exercise.\r\n\r\nTo talk about the heir in the current people they are doing most of the things online which makes the public lazy and unhealthy example online study, online purchases, and online games. The previous human being if we talk they are more healthy than the current generation the reason for that community in current children play the online game but previous kids play outside the home they body to become fit by during playing time they running, jumping all activities keep them fit and current generation spending most of the age for indoor activities like video games, watching movies, spending time in social media.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the points mentioned above are a new generation of children who are looking for individual growth don’t have the mentality to help others because they are not connected directly with the population like before. The previous community know each other and always help others. They are having the capability to help others while interacting with all society around them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude all the online or digital markets make society lazy and unhealthy because they are not doing anything physically like the previous community that make a lot of changes in our life the current generation of the nation are getting sick easily because of not doing any physical activities. Studying is also important but if we don’t have good health we may not be able to focus on our studies too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, should all youngsters be required to do volunteer work outside of school times to support their local community, and would this be beneficial for both the individual teenager and humanity as a whole is still a subject of debate. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it’s compulsory for young people to take part in charity work.\r\n\r\n First, doing unpaid work teach teen about their responsibility. For example, if a teen takes part in cleaning the road of his neighborhood, he would realize the importance of hygiene. Consequently, he knows he must keep his living space nice and clean. \r\n\r\n Second, charity work helps teens become more skillful in social interaction. By staying in a work environment, teens are regularly meet up with new people who share the same goal. Once they get the hang of it, it's easier to reach out and make a new friend. Some reaches show that teens who do volunteer work feel less socially anxious than those who don’t. \r\n\r\n Third, young volunteers will grow up to be good citizens. Through charity work, teens gain knowledge about different aspects of life and raise awareness of social issues. As a consequence, this would create a society that consists of morally sound adolescents.\r\n\r\nTo achieve all of these benefits, schools, and parents should motivate teens to do unpaid jobs and give positive feedback. For instance, students should be given extra credits for their university applications if they have performed community service.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, young generation should be obligated to do unpaid jobs because it brings multiple advantages by helping teens to be more responsible, improving social skills, and overall creating a better community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the program and become a seagoing cowboy because you get to go to unique places and do easy and hard work.\n\nWhen you work for the seagoing cowboys you have a funtime. You also get to play sports like volleyball and soccer.\n\nI think you should go and become a seagoing cowboy becuse of a article I\n\n\"read called A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves \". Some details that show to help support for this article are,that on line 5 it sates \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable oppurtunity for a small town boy\" he says. \"Besides helping people I had the the side of the benefit of seeing Europe and China but seeing the Acropolis was special. this part of the text gives evidence to show that you get to go to unique places.\n\nThis text also states that it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the Eastern coast of the United States, and a month to get to the China. Carring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy they had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. This shows evidenece to support that some parts of the job keeps you busy, and makes the work hard too.\n\nHeres my last text evidence to show you why you should become a seagoing cowboy and this part of the text hel[ps understand how it could be casy and have freetime during work. \" Luke also found time to have fun on board, espicially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table tenis tounerments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitiling an games helped pass time.\n\nThis is why I think you should be a seagoing cowboy too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, gaining weight is a global problem. The increasing number of residents are becoming victims of obesity. Some people argue that to solve this situation, it is necessary to go up the expenditure of food which is high in fat. It seems to me that, being overweight is not only by food but also due to human habits. I will shed light on my opinion in the following essay.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there is no denying that pricing fattening foods at a higher cost can demonstrate some effectiveness in reducing the risk of obesity. Firstly, when unhealthy food items become more expensive, people are more likely to reconsider their choices and seek out more nutritious options. For instance, if a bottle of sugary water costs more than a bottle of water, people will choose the latter, thereby reducing their calorie intake. Secondly, this price growth will motivate individuals to reduce the frequency and quantity of purchases, reducing overall consumption and thereby the likelihood of obesity.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other measures with far-reaching impacts should be given greater consideration. Nowadays, a large number of people are leading a sedentary lifestyle which is considered as one of the major reasons for obesity. Therefore, physical exercise plays a vital role in maintaining a healthy body. Besides, participating in counseling sessions with nutrition experts can provide valuable insights into a healthy and balanced diet. For example, by gradually transitioning from fat-heavy to more nourishing food options, individuals can make better-informed choices for their daily diet, leading to a significant decrease in obesity rates over the long run.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it can be argued that while the rise in fattening food prices can be a viable solution to a certain extent, other measures still need to be taken to comprehensively reduce this obesity circumstance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many diffrenet views when it comes to driveless car, but im here to explain why it is a good reason to have driveless cars. ONe of the first reasons why driveless cars are a good idea is first that cars are getting smater, and saferfor the driver and passangers, plus they tend to cost about the same as much as a normal car. For example In 2013 BMW announced the development of \"traffic jam assistant\" and this car could handle drving functionns at sppeds up to 25 mph,but special touch sensors make sure the driver holds onto the wheel. A second reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because it will help people who are drving for long period of time. for example the \"trafic jam assisant comesto play so say a driver happens to fall asleep and lets their feet off the gas the car will keep drving and control the wheel unitl the driver lets go of it and thats when the car lets a alarm off so that the driver can wake up and hopefully pull over safely. One last reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because if we happen to make drvieless cars for people in general then we could do it for people who drive as their work for example truck drivers. usually they have to make it to a certain destionation at a certain time to deliver something. Usually this can be very dangerours not only to the truck driver but to the people is their cars trying to drive around the truck driver. Hopefully i have changed oyour mind about this whole is driveless car good or bad discussion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Browsing book local library ve read wanting reread enjoy sounds words You look shelf shelf locating anywhere You searched everywhere everything book would possibly listed You ve browsed paper backs hard backs eventually letting frustration take overGiving locating novel walk librarian ask She replies I m sorry remove particular novel due person finding offensive You re infuriated decide write article local newspaper outrage books movies music etc taken local library Personally I nt think media taken away library considered offensive How consider offensive A book could offensive one person another Different people different opinions reasonable remove book type media library contains offensive material ridiculous infuriates someone would If think could get hands child someone would effect rent item That s libraries seperate areas adults children children nt obtain items How determine something offensive I personally nt find lot things offensive something offensive nt mean I request banned people ca nt enjoy If find something offensive leave alone Do nt bother annoy hassle someone else nothing creation disrepectful individual file complaint artist created You right voice opinion sometimes nt voiced We live closedminded world We people nt even think approprite show one s arm I see people take offense things honestly mediocre report something becuase agree We vast knowledge s right wrong appropriate audience hear If nt appropriate honestly think would published Sure things book music etc inappropriate closedminded something banned use foul language minor sexual content violence unlogical You find worse hear worse walking street anywhere To answer question bluntly I think media banned offensive We right speak voice two different perspectives You argue something mediocre offensive I argue back I right voice opinion These reasons enjoyable media banned language violence add emphasis meaning emotion make reader dig much book song etc These authors see work want show people see even offend someone else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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