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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Spending much time computer never good thing Whether work things pleasure I strongly believe computer long mean spending less time excersising interacting real family friends rather internet computer long ruin vision Nowadays great advances technology peoples always glued computer screens Lets face go computer get pretty addicting fabulous things get addicted nt feel like things like excersising Studies show kids use computer hours day obese The cause problem obvious kids addicted computers Since addicted computers want go gym anything Another example school kids choice electives want take Many kids would rather choose computer programming class rather physical education This also cuts excersise time Computers wonderful things starts affecting health physical fitness enemies Interacting others computer looked positive since affects way interact real life For instance people develop habit interacting computer makes antisocial real life Furthermore kids pleasant people interact computer used real life quietest people world This happens comfortable interacting computer Also lost abilities interact real life Interacting computer great family friends countries nt much become uncomfortable interact real life Your eyes one important parts body besides vital parts Most people know computer long puts strain eyes bad This strain lead unpleasant things For example addicted computers large chance get glasses someday life A recent poll taken people use computers hours day gotten glasses Another example overtime strain build even glasses hardly see Imagine world vision bad like eyes almost closed s happens people use computers long Local newspaper think computers one greatest inventions ever right however nt use much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that using technoglogy to determine feelings is not always 100% true. There are students that can go\n\nthroughout the day looking miserable but in reality the are perfectly fine. Using this technology in paintings can be false too, because if it is an old painting then no one really knows what the person is feeling.\n\nThis technology can be used to trick people, for example; there are fingerprint scanner apps that tell a persons mood. This app can be downloaded on your phone, but the phone cant really register our finger print to tell us our mood, the app developers made the app to make you think they know your mood. Another example is \"palm readers\", they look at your hand to read emotions or predict your life. The stuff is not real and doesnt actually work, they are just paid to tell you the stuff. These are examples of why the technology used to 'read exspression' is not always 100% true. If you have a painting from the 1800's you have no idea how that person felt while they sat there smiling. The technology used to determine this doesnt know either. The computer is programmed to spit out a bunch of different emotions.\n\nIn conclusion, the techology used for this type of problem is not valuable because, people will always have mixed emotions and you cant use a computer to determine how the person is really feeling. Nothing can prove that besides the person themselves. You can put on a fake smile and no one will ever know if you sad or mad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Electoral College really benificial? According to \"What Is the Electoral\n\nCollege?\" the founding fathers established it in the the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. but, are those \"qualified citizens\" really qualified? And is\n\nThe Electoral College really helpful? Or should voters be allowed to vote directly? The\n\nElectoral College should be changed to election by popular vote.\n\nWhat makes a citizen really \"qualified\"? Electors are anyone not holding public office.\n\nAlso voters cannot always control who their electors are voting for. Sometimes voters get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate. According to,\" Source 2: The\n\nIndefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\", back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the\n\nDemocratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F Kennedy. Plus in other situations other electors have ocasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whom they choose.\n\nIs the Electoral College really helpful? At times it can be unfair to voters. Acording to\n\nSource 2 : The Indefensible Electoral College\" because of the winner-take-all system in each state, canidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all , and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. In addition to that, due to the electoral college a canidate could win the popular vote but lose the presidency.\n\nVoters should be allowed to vote directly. According to Source 2, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. If voters were allowed to vote directly then they wouldn't have to sit in wonderment of whether or not the canidate they like will be voted for by the elector. Also, voters would have more freedom of choosing who they like as a canidate for president.\n\nThus, the electoral college is unfair and wrong. Electors cannot always be trusted,due to them choosing who they please, also canidates can all together lose the role of presidency, and finally the majority of voters prefer a direct election. The Electoral College is out of date and should be updated. So listen to Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and the\n\nUS Chamber of Commerce and abolish the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "umm, maybe we can settle downoff the cars !!, i beleive that can be an good idea for citizens in the united states without cars this can be a better world for me and people in my community and my city , this can help reduce the amount of air pollution from cars and from other automobiles ,another way we can decrease the use of cars is by having a car-free week. these ways can make a big change in the way people use cars in thisx culture.\n\nthe reduce in car usage can help people from getting sick from trucks and cars from polluting the air, not only can people get sick but animals such as,dogs cats and some farm animals wat humans eat. the pollution in the air can cause plants to die what farm animals feed on,for example where i live i saw an horse suffering from dead plants. also, car pollution can sometimes cause crashes because of all the smoke from an bad engine or even car that fan can be over heated, for instance one time i was on my way to walmart on a very hot day , all of a sudden smoke started coming from my mom smoke pipe under the car, the cause of this was because her fan was over heated. there can be many ways an car can cause pollution in the air thats why we need to slow down on the car population or usage a day.\n\nair pollution can be a major way fror the president to pass an law about car usage. but, another way to stop people from using there cars. are by having an week off from cars and big trucks,if we have an week off from cars more people would be walking more or riding bicycles. for example, according to the seattle times in the city of bogota people had less stress from being jammed up in traffic and lower air pollution. ,moreover, this can help because it can slow down the amount of fuel people use in a day. just imagine one week without cars this people can be able to catch the bus instead of driving. without cars people could slive better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. The technology is something that for a couple of years before has evolve, and it is very advance right now; but it's not 100% dependable because is not perfect. Like the article said, \"people can imitate another person's expression. I don't think that a computer is going to read someone who don't show his feelings. In my opinion it is not dependable and it is unusable.\n\nI'll want to test one of that computers to know if that really works, but like I said, it is not dependeble. The technology is advance but it is hard to believe that a computer can read all your emotions exactly like they are. Dr. Huang said that computers need to understand that most of the human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. I don't think a computer is going to understand somthing like that.\n\nI'm against because the technology is not 100% dependeble; technology is very useful but not very fiable. Some people can just do fake emotions and the computer is going to read it like normal I think. In my opinion it is not a good idea to use it with students, they just can express theirselfs by talking and telling what they like or what they not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the classrooms students go through a lot of emotions. They get bored during class or something they are doing they enjoy. If the technology to read the emotional expressions of students was in the classrooms it would help with how classroom time is structured.\n\nThe use of technology to read emotional expressions would help teachers a lot. Being able for them to know if you enjoy how they are doing their lesson or are bored of it will make it better for them to fit the needs of the student. If they could know students are comprehending the information, then they can teach better. Or if they could know if students dont get the information or are confused they can better elaborate on the subject. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" says Dr. Huang. Some students dont feel comfortable asking for help. So if teachers could go to the student and help them without them asking, then it would create a better learning environment. If teachers could help shape their lesson plans based on how the students feel, it would create a more customized environment for the students.\n\nThe technology could apply to many different types of things but for students it could make classrooms better. Online school could be better if the computer could read if you are confused or not to help teach you better. In the article Dr. Huang talks about how he predicts \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrctor\". This is due to not having a person in front of you teaching to know how you are feeling on the subject. Or in the classrooms teachers could have special cameras that track how all the students are feeling. These cameras dont record, but they output onto a table if the students understand whats going on or if they are confused. Then the teacher knows that they need to help the students understand better.\n\nIf the technology was used in the classroom it would have to work in a certain way for the students to feel comfortable with it. If the technology was in the classroom some students might feel a little bit wary with a camera in the classroom watching them. So the technology can save film. It would have to just track the students expressions. If the technology was used in online schools, then they would have to have a pop-up warning to tell the student, that facial recognition is being used.\n\nThe use of the Facial Action Coding System for computers to track human emotions would be benificial for the classroom. It would enable students to learn better. It would also enable them to comprehend what the teacher is teaching. It would help shape a better classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Ranging from 0 medals to 2500 medals.\nOverall, the USA has the most medals, with a total of nearly 2500 medals. And on the other hand, Japan has the least number of medals, with about 300 medals, almost 4 times less than the USA. There's only five other countries which have another 500 medals, being the Soviet Union with 1000 medals, the UK with 750 medals, France with around 600 medals, Germany and Italy with slightly over 500 medals. While Sweden, Australia, Hungary, East Germany, Japan and China are all under 200 medals total.\nThe USA dominated in all types of medals, with nearly 1000 gold medals. over 500 silver medals and bronze medals. The Soviet Union came in second with almost 500 gold medals, and over 500 bronze and silver medals combined.\nAfter the Soviet Union, the next four countries have an average of 250 gold medals, 350 silver medals and bronze medals combined. The last six countries have an average of 200 gold medals, 250 silver medals and bronze medals combined. Japan has the least gold medals and silver medals and China has the least bronze medals.\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many materials libraries offcensive certain people I nt think taken shelves I believe put different section library Almost every thing life offends someone one way another It little blonde jokes major saying something someone s sexuallity I know little kids wouldnt understand types things parents ca nt keep kids hidden away forever If someone says something someone else I believe s wrong I mean think many blonde jokes A lot blondes I know nt take jokes seriously One good friends natural blonde probably smartest blonde I ever met Whenever hears blonde joke laughs say something funny go Probably one major things people get offended politics someones sexuallity Politics create huge problems people nt think something one way governer turns around says something someone else take way serious Many people different dont like suppose like always offended someone shape form It s like parents keep us away forever Little kids become teenagers teenagers young adults eventually become adults People learn deal different struggles life So conclusion parent nt want expose child things thing offensive good people like learn things people find offensive create problems I believe leaving books movies magazines shelves seperate area library nt bad idea Think take books away people want learn different things want know people get offended would nt feel offended took away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In light of the current rise in the number of obese people, some suggest that increasing the price of high-fat foods can be an effective solution. I mostly agree with this suggestion given the fact that it holds the potential to decrease the consumption of these foods although it may fail to tackle the factor regarding inactive lifestyles that contribute to obesity.\r\n\r\nMy first rationale is that an increase in the price of fatty foods can demotivate potential customers. It is true that many buyers are sensitive to changes in prices, thus an increase in the cost of fat-laden options is likely to discourage their purchase. This price surge will prompt individuals to reduce the frequency and quantity of their purchases, reducing overall consumption and eventually the likelihood of obesity.\r\n\r\nAdditional reasoning for my support of the price increase is that a major contributor to the rise in the consumption of fattening dishes is the appealing advertising campaigns. These are often run by restaurants and other food providers to boost their sales. However, the drop in consumption resulting from the rise in product prices will make these businesses less profitable, forcing them to cut down their budget on these campaigns. Consequently, with fewer advertisements promoting high-fat foods, fewer people will be tempted into buying and consuming them.\r\n\r\nHowever, I concede that higher prices for affected foods might not be an ultimately effective solution to the issue of obesity. This is primarily due to the fact that people can still become obese when consuming less fatty foods, if they embrace the sedentary lifestyle which involves a minimum amount of physical activity that helps burn the excess fat in their body.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I mostly agree with the idea of raising the prices of fatty foods to address the problem of obesity. The increased prices will effectively discourage consumers from making purchases and lead food companies to reduce their advertising efforts for such foods; however, this solution does not address another cause of obesity which is the lack of physical activity in daily life. Therefore, a comprehensive measure would be increasing high-fat foods prices while concurrently encouraging people to engage in regular physical exercises.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most recent trends in today's world is the upsurge in teenagers doing unpaid community work in their spare time. There is a wild split of belief among people that this is a popular subject of debate. In my perspective, doing unpaid community work in their free time has more positive impacts than negative ones.I agree with this idea for many reasons.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, critics may point out some drawbacks. They might say that young people can join together in small groups for charity work and do activities that are not compatible with society and are against the law, such as drug deals and robbery.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. Mainly, people who work in their spare time for an unpaid wage are responsible for society. That is the most preponderant one, and it has several consequences in various ways. They get an opportunity to learn time management. Secondly, they can get different experiences in society, such as how to communicate with diverse people, compassion for one another, and unity to work well together, which are essential parts of becoming a reasonable person. Furthermore, teens will have many activities to do in their spare time as volunteers. Therefore, they do not need to waste time. It will help them achieve their goals in the future.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the whole world is focusing on educating teenagers about doing unpaid community work in their free time.\r\n\r\nIn view of the arguments outlined above, one might conclude that, despite having certain disadvantages, the benefits of doing unpaid community work in their spare time in society are indeed too dire to ignore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they have both postive things to say about this and they have negative things to say about cars.\n\nFirst, my position on driverless cars to me is a good thing because if you have to parallel park in between two cars and you're not very good then thats when the car can do it and park it perfect for you.\n\nIt's also good because say if you're texting and u drop your phone and go to pick it up and there is a car in front of you...then the car would automatically stop for you so you dont crash.\n\nSecond, It's bad because you never know when the car can mess up on you. But f anything does happen then it wont be your fault it would be the manufacturing people's fault for not checking to see if everything is good with the car. Some people wouldn't even want a driverless car because they will get bored waiting for their turn to drive.\n\nIn the end it all depends on whether or not you want a driverless car, but there are going to be very nice driverless cars in the future. I would get one but I would want it tested before I buy it because I wouldnt want to spend a lot of money on a car that didnt work like the manufactures said it would. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars drives themselves by 2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez From Home The Blueprints lives mood conveyed happiness gratfullness sadness First mood conveyed mood happiness The speaker speaking community says All cultures come together great solidarity friendship paragraph When says came together shows happiness speaker must fealt story Secondly mood one grate fullness When speaker speaking parents said I always grate ful parents love sacrifice paragraph When says grateful This shows speaker alot respect parents lastly mood conveyed one sadness When speaker speaking parents says What much courageous thing I could ever done paragraph When says ever done feels sad wont chance repay Allinall moods conveyed story happiness gratefullness sadness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay mshan writes rough rodes timit cyclists overcome reach gole", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social publishing has been occupying most of the proportion of the human time these days. Most of the individuals are likely to use Social radio in order to stay in touch with others as well as current issues .I believe this trend is more advantageous for people using in the right way. This essay discusses both the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, its pros include, firstly, people can get updated with present news. For example, social news gives access to any sorts of news, so, people can be aware of what's happening around the world. Moreover, businessmen/women can promote their products, which may increase their sales.New entrepreneurs can effortlessly showcase their work, which can be recognized easily if it is worthy.Adding on, social publishing nowadays provides income for influencers. For instance, we are witnessing ample youtube channels, which in turn provide a living for them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, drawbacks of this trend include, initially, youngsters are being mostly addicted to the same. As a result, it directly affects their academics. Moreover, it affects parent-children relationships, if they spare most of their time on it or if elders restrict them from using it. To an epitome, there is much suicidal news, we come through regularly because of parents insisting their children not use it. Lastly, children can get access to inappropriate content, which they are not aware of. In other words, there may be some adult content showcased on social media. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe the usage of social networking sites, has more benefits if used in the right way, like providing employment , keeping updated about issues . Besides it has disadvantages as well such as it affects education and also family relationships.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author says this because Venus is a very interesting planet, quite like Earth. They want to dig more into this planet and its history for many reasons. Throughout the passage, the author explains these reasons.\n\nTo begin, the article explains how Venus is the \"most Earth-like planet.\" The text says, \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" and \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This clearly shows that one reason the author believes that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit is because of it's\n\nEarth-like qualities. They want to see just how similar to Earth that Venus was and possibly still is.\n\nFurthermore, the author also believes that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depsite the dangers because although numerous spacecrafts have been sent, none of them lasted for \"more than a few hours.\" Therefore, not giving them any information they were searching for on this planet. According to paragraph two, the text states, \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" This quotation clearly leads the reader to believe that since they cannot get a spacecraft onto Venus long enough to gather information, they need actual humans to be sent out to this planet to investigate and bring back the information along with evidence.\n\nOverall, the author believes that Venus is a worthy pursuit depsite the dangers because the planet's factors have caused so many issues towards the easiest route of gathering information. They want to discover things on this planet that were not able to be picked up by spacecrafts, however, they want to do it in \"a safe and scientifically productive manner,\" according to the author at the end of paragraph four. Gathering information from our sister planet would be a new discovery and yet one of the greatest since it has never been discovered in the way scientists had hoped.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding at schools?\n\nClass rooms with , Facial Action Coding , ? I think for a classroom with Facial Action Coding would not be such a good idea in a classroom. There are many reasons why it's not a good idea. There are many emotions in a student in a class room that a student wouldn't want to be recogize . For many student there always someone who is in love and does not want anyone to figure it out . In paragrahp 3 it tells readers that \" happiness, surpise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" can all be shown with the Facial Action Coding System. The student might be sad because the girl wouldn't go out on a date with him and show that emotion in class.\n\nFor many students I honstley think alot of students would not like it . Another reason why it would not be a good idea to put this new Facial Action Coding System in many classroom is it might distract many of the students. Alot of classroom students are already going through alot of things like stressing, grades, finals, and credits. They wouldn't want that to be pick up by the system for a example a student could be really sad about his grades and doen't want anyone to know. Our minds are only safe place to go where anyone can't go.\n\nOther places would be a better option for the Facial Action Coding like hostiptals and nursing homes. A good reason why I think it would be a good idea at a hostpital because it can help alot of people that are sick and feeling pain. In paragraph 3 it say the system can pick up happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. At a hostpital a patient could be help out with the machine and tell if she or he is sad or happy. At a nursing home he can help out the the old folks by making sure that there not depressed or angry.\n\nWhat if the Facial Action Cding system shows that 50% percent of the student show that they really get the work. And the other 50% percent do not get the work what would the teacher do? Would the teacher choice be right to choose to get the same work where the 50% percent doesn't understand it and give the same work to the other 50% percent of the class that already knows how to solve the work. I think it not a good idea for classrooms to have Facial Action Coding System at schools.\n\nAt schools it might not be a good idea and might be better in many other places. For many students it coulld distract them or if other dont want to show emotions because of there personal thoughts being shown to teachers. Would you want schools to have this new Facial Action Coding System at there school and on computers?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You are smile, but you only 80 percent happy, 15 percent board and 5 percent angry. Do you now how can i calculate you emotions? I use the some new computer software that can recognize emotions. that sounds really cool. and i think that technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a claaroom is valuable.\n\nIf a classroom computer could recognize students emotional. That will be really helpful for the class and for the student and teacher. Becasue if when student use the computer play video games or watch the video, the computer recongnize they are doing that, so that computer will tell the teacher, and the teacher will coming to stop what are you doing now, and then you will listen the class careful.\n\nAnd if you during the class you becoming bored, the computer recongize that and will tell teacher that and if a lot of student being bored, the teacher will try to know why lot of student in his class is bored and the teacher will change that, make the class more fun for the student, that is a really good things for the student. When you during the class you fell something not understand,the computer will recognize that and tell the teacher, the teacher will coming to help you let you understand that, that software is reallt helpful during the class.\n\nThat is a really good software for the class room that is very useful. so that technology to read the emotioal expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So some humans paln on visiting venus called the evening star. Some say its to dangerous to visit venus because\n\nits very hot many space ships can only be there for 3 hours. It is the closest planet to eath its the hottest planet even tho mercury is the 1 planet closest to the sun. Going to venus can liquefy many medals. On the planets surface the temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater then what we experience on our own planet. Weather presents additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. If venus is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can providwe olny limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere redering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. For example some simplified elecronice made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weels in such conditions. Travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles enormous steel framed balloons commonly called blimps dock One main issues pressure building caused dirigibles As said excerpt The The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way buildings foundation nearly eleven hundred feet paragraph Over worth modifications made strengthen accommodate new situation dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article\n\n\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it talked about using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. In my opinion it is a great idea, because the teachers would know what to do next to make them change their mood to happy. If a student is sad the teacher would know & would also want to talk about it with the student to make him or her feel better. The computer could figure out why students are bored and/or confused by identifying what the topic is about.\n\nThe \"Facial Action Coding System\" could prevent bullying too! It could identify two students or more by knowing if one is afraid or angry. The angry students would be the bullies & the afarid studens would be the bullies victims. It could easily stop a situtation between them both. It'd alert the teacher or just anybody with a loud noise to attract people to go near the students. When teachers arrive they could use the computer to detect how the students are feeling and would start solving on from there.\n\nThe fact that this is a new technology amuses me, because it could solve so many problems on this Earth believe it or not. Also, it could prevent many problems as well. We can use this technology to make others happy \"happy person, happy life\" is how i see it. Now then again it might not be helpful for some people. People are used to hving a serious face all of the time and smiling when its truthful and that's okay because not everyone is happy most of the time. Some people prefer to not show their emotions so they keep it to themselves until the time is right which is when they're alone.\n\nIt's time to put a stop to all of the negativity with this new technology called the \" Facial Action Coding System\". I find this technology very positive and helpful because not only humans can solve everyhting, but with help of other things like mechines. Making faces got to reveal so much about the science of emotions. Us humans could end up feeling someone else's emotional state by unconsciously imitating another person's facial exprssions.\n\nI find smiling, showing positive vibes, and actions making our lives a bit happier. Hopefully one day we get to \"calculate\" emotions some day, because i will definitely try it out! I was never a fan of being down or sad, I love being happy everyday. So hopefully this new technology is useful and helpful to everyone. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" are words from a wise man who will actually \"make America great again\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College gives certain states, based on their popularity, a number of how many of what I guess can be called \"points\" that will go to to the candidate that gets the most votes for themself out of that state. Now whether that is a good idea or not is completely based on your own opion which you can decide. But I disagree with the Electoral College, even though it did take me a while of thinking I came to the conclusion that an all out popular vote is more effecient when it comes to voting for a president than the electoral college, and there is three main reasons that swung me to side with popular vote,\n\nFirst of all, when you get right down to it the Electoral College just doesnt give perfect accuracy on who does actually get the exact most votes. Some people cant completely grasp this fact but imagine that there is Florida, Alaska, and Montana. The first candidate, which we shall call John and the second, Bill, are going for these three states. John beats Bill on Florida 5,000 to 4,999 and John gets all 29 electoral votes because of that, tough luck for Bill. Luckily for Bill he sweeps over John in Alaska 100 to 0 and Monatana 100 - 0 and gets 3 points from each state which gives him 6 points total. So now by popular vote Bill would win with 5,199 votes against John's 5,000. But since Bill only has 6 Electoral points because he still lost Florida, which was the state John won and got a whopping 29 points from, Bill will lose his campaign to John 29-6 because thats what the amazing \"wonders\" of the Electoral College are. Which beasically sums up how in 2000 Al Gore lost to Bill Gates even that Al Gore had more overall votes.\n\nThe Electoral College also makes candidates have to strategically plan out their campaign so they can focus on big states and swing states only. If a candidate knows he will not win a certain state he wont even focus on it because it would be pointless, even if he changes maybe a couple thousand voters' minds, it wont get him a single point if he loses that state 5000 - 15000 whereas with popular vote changing the mind of people so that you get yourself from having 10% of California's overall votes for you to 30% means more votes than literally all of Alaska's eligible voting population. So that drives candidates away from states they wont win and they go to states known as \"swing states\" that dont have a specific party that they vote for every election, and they will attempt to win these states votes the most because those points will make the biggest difference.\n\nThe final thing I'd like to touch on is that the Electoral College system takes so many peoples idea and erases it. We want our vote to mean something throughout the whole campaign, but it doesnt matter if you are one the few democrat supporters in an overall republican dominated state because when your state loses 5000 to 150, poof! There goes your vote floating off into oblivion because it doesnt matter now, your one vote doesnt stand a chance against 50 going against it according to the Electoral College. We want our vote to count for the candidate himself not be part of some majorly flawed point system that someone thought would help somehow when picking the right candidate to become the head honcho sitting in charge of The White House, Our Country, and be the overall leader of our military forces too. So we need our vote to be heard and for it to actually count, even if 5000 more people disagree with 2500 in the same state, those 2500 votes should actually count towards something instead of being overrun and erased by the 5000 which will earn some candidate a couple of points for their campaign.\n\nNow after all this not only has my own opinion strongly changed in favor of popular vote but I hope yours has too. Electoral College just doesnt provide that actual perfect accuracy of who wins that popular does, it forces presidents to only visit and campaign in certain states that they have a chance of winning, and it takes citizens votes and throws them down the drain if more people in the same state vote differently. It just makes you sit and wonder whos idea it was to accept this system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our century how technology develop, is a very debated topic who divides opinions.Some of us think that this technology has a big impact over our life, while others think that there are some drawbacks in this.In my opinion we have to keep a balance betwen what is modern and sistematic and what is traditional .\r\n\r\nNowadays, more and more peolpe become dependent of technology, children and adults have phones and others gatgets in their home.This is not a bad thing if we do not forget to spend time in free space and do not let that this divices acaparate our time.Some parents use this kind of device to entertain their children, for example the scientists invented a robot called Alexa who is capable to tell stories to children or to interact to a person.I believe that a parent can not be repace by a robot and we have to look after aur children and to try to spend time with them.Many children became addicted by this divices and that cam lead to some disfunctions in their behaviour.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand we have to accept that our society is in continuous develeopment and that robots have their place. For example in medical area there are many robots who help medical personal in their job, we can use robots to in many areas in fabrics, kitchens.Depsite the related negative impacts ,I think that we can find positive effects in using robots in our day life.\r\n\r\nTaking everything into consideration ,I believe that the positive effects of using Robots in our societies overweight the negative effects with one conditions to keep a balance and not let that this kind of device to acaparate our real life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars is way over my head. Some of the positive aspects are they use less fuel. If you get in a accident you won't get hurt as bad. The cars they are talking about have driven a millon miles without getting in an accident. Companeys like google have been developing cars like this since 2009 and our technology is way more advanced now. They have made sensors that can see all around the car.\n\nThey are also some down sides to the making of driverless cars. The frist car they made ran on a track with a electrical cord under the road that the car could follow. The only thing wrong with that is that they would need to ripe up all the old roads and put in eletrical wire under them and that isn't cheap. Then there is the sensors and thats great but they cost a lot of money. Even if there is sensors to help drive they aren't going to stop a car. They would have to make brakes that can sense the danger and stop themselves. Even if they did makle a car there is still going to be traffic jams and construcstion sits that the car would have to go through or around. Plus some of the states haven't given the ok yet so that means no smart cars in those states. So what would happen if you did get in an accident. Would it be the cars fault, the drivers fault or the manufacturers fault. Theres some positive sides and theres also some negitive sides as well. If they do deside to start making the cars great. But if they don't make the cars thats also fine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am a scientist at NASA, and it has come to my attention that many people believe the Face on Mars that we spotted was created by aliens. Well, that is a horrible assumption if you do not have the correct facts to support that claim.The truth is the Face was not created by aliens. There are facts to support that such as, there were no human-like objects spotted,the face was showed as a natural landform, and NASA has done lots of research to get information on this Face.\n\nThere were no human-like creatures or objects spotted when NASA memebers and myself captured photos of the Face on Mars. In fact, we even took a second look later on in April of 2001 and captured a photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Yet again, nothing was found other than a briiliant photo of the Face. You can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were any objects or creatures in this picture, you could see where they were.\n\nAlso, there is proper evidence to support that the Face on Mars is a natural landform. In April of 1998, Michael Malin and his MOC team captured photos ten times sharper then the original Viking photos. Soon after, the photos were linked to an website reveal a natural platform. As the article states, \"There were no alien monument after all.\"\n\nNASA members have done lots of research to get information about this Face on Mars. The first time they spotted it was about 25 years ago,on accident. Viking 1 spacecraft was circling mars, snapping photosto find Viking 2 ship. Thats when they spotted the Face on Mars. Later, in Septemeber 1997, scientists went out to photograph more pictures of this landform. April 5, 1998, more scientists went out and snapped pictures ten times better then the original. Also, in 2001 pixel photos were taken of this Face. All pictures that were taken proved that the Face on Mars were a natural landform.\n\nOverall, the point that I am explaining is, the Face on Mars is a natural landform. The facts that support this claim are, there were no objects or creatures spotted on Mars, the Face is a natural landform, and NASA has done research to get information on this Face. NASA members never stopped investigating this natural landformon on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To cyclist surrounding setting either cause triumph despair The cyclist given old directions He given back roads abandoned These towns people normally would matter was traveling high deserts California June NUM If shade breeze weather would fine pedaling bike desert summer A ghost town good water could killed A cyclist needs know surroundings prepared nature throws", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local I think computers effect people bacause I believe actually benefit people way people live computers games In cases help gain knowledge computers used entertainment jobs research projects Not games Computers help peopel job For example work lawyer need computer type documents If bad pemanship joblike lawyer You need refer something document ca nt read s problem So case role comuter steps I also think computers effect people garde schoo sometimes kids need internet Some people nt option library ther nt one near By using computer inofrmation project homework I think benefits effects I one reason I think computers benefit effect I believe chance meet people world Just could learn something could learn lifestyle things thier cultureThank reading letter hopefully rethink decision", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Age differences between people in a family have been common in today's time. Hence, the gap between people and the heir is generally seen nowadays more than in the past. I believe there are many advantages and disadvantages to this. This essay will elucidate with appropriate examples. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the World has been intensely competitive and people often opt to chase their intended dream career first then settle down and get married. Due to the World being immensely demanding, generations in today's life pursue higher and higher studies and get married later than their usual age of 24 or 25 years. After getting married, when their heir is of five years of age or the age where they can comprehend worldly matters, the life gap is huge. \r\n\r\nThere are many merits of having a huge maturity difference in understanding offspring. For example, when families are successful, they can spend enough time with their children. As a result of it, children when they grow up can look up to their parent's successlife and learn many things from them to achieve their goals in the field they are interested. Furthermore, their parents play a vital role in helping their heirs gain their desired goals. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe the life difference is not that paramount of importance between two generations as long as the gap turns out to be a boon. becoming their inspiration, motivation and guidance. Apart from all the aforementioned matters, youth differences have been common in today's time for the world demands skills one requires to lead a life one intends to be successful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Passenger cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to fifty percent in places in the U.S.\n\nLevittown and Scarsdale, New York suburbs with spread-out homes and private garages, were the dream towns of the 1950s, and still exert a strong appeal. But some new suburbs may well look more like the German town of Vauban, not only in developed contries, but also in the developing world, where emissions from an increasing number of private cars, owned by the burgeoning middle class, are choking cities.\n\nIn the U.S, EPA (the Environmental Protection Agency) is promoting car reduced communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously. Many experts expect that the public transport serving suburbs, will play a much lager role in a new six-year federal transportation bill to be approved this year, In previous bills, eighty percent of appropriations have by law, gone to highways, and only twenty percent to other transport.\n\nAfter days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\n\nOn Monday, motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home, or suffer a 22-euro fine (31 dollars). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the next day.\n\nAlmost 4000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters (an international news agency), 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. That's easier to imagine than a car-free Champs-Elysees (a famous street in Paris).\n\nCongestion (car traffic), was down 60 percent in the capital of France after five-days of intensifying smog. the smog riveled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities it the world.\n\nCold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe, according to Reuters.\n\nParis typically has more smog than other European capitals. Last week, Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter, compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\n\nDelivery companies complained of lost revenue, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers. Public transit was free of charge from Friday-Monday, according to the BBC.\n\nThe smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Therer are many reasions why you would want to join the cowboy riding the waves program. One you get to meet all diffrent people from all around the world. Another one is you get to visit all diffrent countries around the world. You also get to try great food and macke good frends qand learn new games and,you get experiance with animals.\n\nLike luke said during the free time you got to play games. Such as baceball,voleball,table ping pong/table tenis,boxing and all difrent games you learn. But like luke said there are risks. Like when he fell and almost went overbored. And he also cracked a rid and,was out of work for a few days. If you get sea sick ezely this is not fore you you go over very rouph waves in the Oichan. And if you get home sick this is defenetly not for you you will be far from home.\n\nThese are some reasions why you might or might not want to join. It is fun but you also take a risk. and that is what luke did and he loved it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir expressing like something like happened Also explaining really happy parent gave everything Cuba come children Also didnt even know speak english first moved cuba So pretty much whole family lives close eachother see eachother Even parents ca nt find jobs looking going whatever make family happy Now family together They spend rest life happy together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with the development of driverless cars. Driverless cars are going to benefit a lot of people. Driverless cars can be safe. Every year there is an upgrade in everything, also there is always new developed technology.\n\nDriverless cars can benefit a lot of people in many ways. The people who can't drive can benefit with these cars. The \"driver\" can just sit and observe where the car takes them. Of course the driver can take over a situation of an accident or work zones, the car will always need some human skills, as it's states on the article. Even though these people aren't so familiar in driving they can still do it in these small situations. How? Because the car is going to have a lot of new technology, the car can explain what to do during those situations.\n\nDriverless cars can be safe. They can be safe because its going to have a lot of technology that can warn you when you and the vehicle is in danger. The car is going to be equiped by vibrating seats when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The car will also have flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. The article also states that the car is also going to have cameras watching the drivers and making sure they are focused on the road. This driverless car can be safe in many ways with the stuff equiped that helps prevents any danger.\n\nThere is always an upgrade, new technology, and new inventions every year or more. You don't think everything right now is going to stay the same? Obviously not. These past 16 years i've observed the drastic changes in everything. I can see the future cars coming, driverless cars is one of them! The article also states that we only thought these cool stuff can only be in fascinating movies, it can also be in real life. These future things are going to change the world completely.\n\nThese are my reasons why I agree with driverless cars being developed. Driverless cars are going to benefit people, the driverless cars can be safe in many ways, and also every year or more there is new developed technology or an upgrade. Things right now are not going to stay the same. New things are always made. We might not see it but our next generations will.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to go anywhere without driving would be a lot easyer going somewhere. The idea of driving a driving less car sounds nice but if the driver has to look out the window for it to drive then the driver will get bored. What would happen if the goes to sleep and doesn't wake up for the next three hours or so.\n\nI think having a car that can drive its self\n\nwould be helping people for exsample, if someone didn't have legs or arms and they needed to go somewhere like getting the food it would be helping those kinds people. It can also help people by saving them money. It states \" The cars he foresees would use half the feul of today's taxis and offer far more flexility than a bus.\"\n\nIn the the future by 2020 I hope I get to see and use a driver less car and go anywhere without driving. I hope it can help the people around the world, and I also hope to see myself driving a driver less car and going to places in the U.S.A.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the world and technology keeps on developing, there are many changes and advancments being made to make life easier, or so we think. Google cofounder Sergey Brin has made an envison come to life, and his envision is something you might see as impossible. He envisions a future of public transportation; but with driverless cars. Many may find this development as dangerous, the fact that the cars are not truely driverless, makes the human take control of the vehicle at certain times, major road construction for the car to drive safely, and some states finding it illegal to test computer driven cars might have something to do with that.\n\nFirst off, these cars that claim to be \"driverless\", are in fact not driverless. In paragraph 2, it clearly states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" So the fact that the car are truly not driverless and that you need to be alert the whole time and take the effort to make sure you don't crash into someones mailbox is quite sketchy.\n\nIn addition to the cars not being fully \"driverless\", the cars would need to work on fixed roads. In paragraph 3, it states, \" These-smart road systmes worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to exisiting roads, something that was simply too expensivre to be practical.\"\n\nNeedless to say, the fact that you are spending over what you need to be for this technology, and the roads with the wrong sensors is too expensive and unnessecary.\n\nAlso, in paragraph 9, it says \"As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have lef the country in allowing limites use of semi-autonomous cars; manufactorers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" Proving that these states to not allow the use of self driven vehicles because they are very dangerous.\n\nIn conclusion, the \"driverless\" vehicle is a bad idea for many reasons. Not truly driverless, making you take control of the vehicle at any time under conditions such as traffic and reversing, major road construction, and being illegal for you to test in certain areas because of the risk that the idea puts out to the public. Driverless cars should not be the future, you should not have the depend on them to get you from point A to point B if you have the ability to drive with two hands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why author conclude story paragraph I believe author concluded paragraph tells going future For example story told mom I failed When putting flower hole garden flock geese flying heading south", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created article joyful mood He says parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I exernally grateful This shows grateful received mood joyful Also says Passionate Cuban music I adored day filled air mixing aroma kitchen Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home I mean mood lighthened little says stuff", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a driverless car is one with many benefits that has the potential to propel humanity forward. Not just in literal terms of being propelled to a destination of the user's choice, but in terms of being able to focus on other things rather than putting effort into how to drive properly and not get into an accident constantly. Innovation on this subject may result in fierce competition between varying companies and corporations on who can make the best and most reliable product to sell in the modern market. Such marvelous technological leaps are surely craved by those with the rescources and capital to buy and invest in such products.\n\nIn a commercial front, this holds a bounty unrivaled since the days of the invention of the automobile itself. With the prospect of a driverless car on the horizon and certainly in the near future, groups like Fed Ex or U.P.S. may be some of the first principal buyers of said products due to the ability to save money instead of training a worker in driving a commercial vehicle properly. Now, do not think that I am in favor of those workers being tossed aside in order to save money, heavens no, I would think that they could be able to help a driver incase he or she is tired and has to do a long journey across states and the many miles they encompass. As an example, say a truck driver has a 48 hour journey to x location, they could use an automated driving software to take the wheel while they are sleeping during the late hours of the day, and then resume manual control during the day. It would cut down travel time and reduce the cost of fuel if the software is programmed to save fuel.\n\nIf the average person is busy and has to finish up his/her work at home, but their child needs to go to school, the driverless application in said automotive vehicles could safely drive the child to school while the parent finishes their task, whether it be work or another item is of little importance, but the concept certainly is one of use. This software could aslo help plan a more efficient route to your local workplace and accoutn for road maintenance or accidents along the route, and readjust accordingly. This concept is certainly going to resonate with the common man since they no longer must plan their days so tightly and have to be stressed if there is an accident on the road and they are late to an event taking place at a predetermined time.\n\nHumanity as a whole would be able to be transported and transport things such as goods or people much easier if they had these types of devices installed. With said device in vehicles, humans could focus their brains on other matters, such as science or politics and be able to grow in intellect and strength as a people if the enormous issue of driving and its subsequent accident risk entailed was removed. With that issue removed, people could put the tasks at hand in the forefront of their mind in their automotive vehicles, instead of making sure they are not speeding due to emotional distress or simple human error, and be able to focus on their other priorities.\n\nIn conclusion, the benefits of a semi-autonomous automotive vehicular device are of a weight that simply defeats the counterarguements put against it. With such boons as cost reduction and time restraints removed, humans can grow as a people and need not worry about such a mundane issue as driving. All in all, this concept has appeal to all aspects of living beings, not just in America or the European Union, but anywhere with the ability to be travelled to or with the potential for growth that such bounty would entail. Thank you for reading my work, and have a pleasant rest of your time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was at his part time job when his friend Don came in and said (do you want to come on a cattle boat trip with me.) Luke knew it was a opportunity of a life time and couldn't say no. Luke was 18 before he arived in Greece which meant he could be drafted for military service.\n\nWhen the draft board learned he was on a cattle baot trip they said that he was able to keep going on the cattle boat trip. The cattle boat trip was an unbeleivable opportunity for a small towns boy like hime.\n\nLuke helped out on his aunt Katie's farm whch prepared him for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. Luke also found a way to have fun on board even on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.\n\nWhen Luke got home he was very grateful that he was able to go on the trip. To the cowboys it was an adventure but to Luke it was a opportunity to open up a whole new world. And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host of intternational students and exchange visitors for many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many years ago people sought new practical mode transportation Upon introduced dirigible blimp believed small aircraft could transportation future Plans made mast constructed atop Empire State building located New York City The project soon underway without obstacles along way Hazards nature construction Empire State Building differences American dirigibles hindered success mooring mast It wellknown fact nature unpredictable incredibly harsh This makes transportation especially transportation air difficult dangerous In construction mooring mast violent wind currents noted It would nearly impossible allow dirigible dock atop Empire State Building windy day front portion aircraft would secure This endangers pedestrians Secondly noted Empire State Building s roof required improvements order dirigibles dock Upon secured one cable tether weight dirigible would press building This could potentially hazardous cost fix Lastly dirigibles countries would able fly United States American dirigibles filled helium made light easy fly models used hydrogen happens incredibly flammable After German dirigible damaged beyond repair fire determined models could used Ultimately dangers associated using dirigibles travel outweighed benefits It determined many accidents could dirigibles Empire State Building used another way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a software being able to tell you wheither a person is feeling sad or happy is just a fascinating thing to even think about. By using Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa- they figured out that she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. That just absolutely blows my mind! Would there be any type of misdetections using this software? How much would it cost schools to use these types of softwar?\n\nI personally support the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. They say the web cams on computers could recognize when a student is confused or bored. They also say they it would be able to modify the lesson like a human instructor would. This could be the next step that we could take into making education better for the kids and for the schools. The only problem that stands in the way for many schools is whether or not they would be able to afford such software. What if these softwares could be used for other purposes?\n\nWhat if there is a possibility of using this software to not only help out in schools but help out in other major sinerios? One major one that comes to my head is using it as a lie detector. If the software is able to detect how someone is feeling and what their emotions are could it be able to detect whether or not someone is lying? The software would still use the 44 major muscles in your face but they would only have to tweak some things to make it capable of doing such thing. With the same software they could quite possibly make this happen. Or maybe something like this has already been invented but i haven't heard about it.\n\nit's just amazing.\n\nIn paragraph 7 of this article they give this information of how you can tell the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. I never knew that by looking at these small detals of someones face you could tell whether they were happy or not. This article not only informs me about a new software that can tell you how you're feeling but it also gives you on how you can tell by just looking at someone's face. It just really blows my mind.\n\nAll in all i think that using the software in the classrooms would be a great idea. It would be very helpful in the classrooom and quite possibly in other areas. If you guys do think about using the same software into making a lie detectorthen count me in. I'd love to be the next person to help out the community or even the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I understand one trying decide whether computers bad people I one thing computers turning society antisocial becoming obese alot cyber bullying happens via computers You learn read stated earlier computers many problems social lives You see much population spends least hours ween computer When typically watching videos tweeting friends This swim like activity really pulling us away social lives There many sites allow chat friends leave messages wall really communicating In way taking away social skills need later You ca nt get job instant messaging person talk face face But able email Plus much prone using thus nothing bad grade Now problem see occuring You work computer This activity monitor lets everyday since comes home plays computer time exercising Finally come last issue cyber bullying Over teens faced sort cyber bullying life When teens sion facebook twitter signing depression When teen starts get bullied usually become sad leads grades go lower due lack concentration leads depressed could make either commit suicide join gangs andor start making bad But prevent time people spend computers And I think benifit In conclusion I believe bad society I think amount time could lives I think look deep say understand need healthier", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir homeyheart touching mood To know family helped immigrants time need culture really getting point across That live house make home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Case of the Driveless Cars\n\nHow many movies have you seen that depict the future with advanced technology such as holograms or even driveless cars? How much of a reality could that be? The case of driveless cars has been something that has been going on for awhile. Even around 2009 Google came out with their first almost driveless car. Although driveless cars are depicted as futuristic and magical, really driveless cars seem like more of an endangerment to our economy, our safety and our time.\n\nTo begin, the manufacturing of driveless cars is insanely expensive. Where would all this money even come from? We would have to fund it to provide research for a car that doesn't know how to back out of a driveway yet. There has already been 200 million dollars spent on radar a device on a hiltop. So why waste money on something that only goes up to 25 mph and won't even drive if you don't have your hands on the wheel? It seems like driveless really just means assissting. But assissting to who? Obviously not the wallets of the buyers.\n\nSecondly, the driveless cars are supposed to help for the better of the people, they say it would be \"safer\". But where is the proof that it is safer? Many states have already banned the use of any self-autonomous cars, just leaving out four states who have left them limited use to test out the cars. How can the world just expect for these cars to be safe when we already have superstition over these cars and those who don't will barely let them use the cars too? They also suggest since the driver will probably be bored that they should put in some entertainment in the car. But what happens when, the car stops and has the driver do what they're supposed to, but they aren't prepared because they were entertained by something else? It's unsafe to assume that having all these distracting things around people who are supposed to be driving won't effect how they do in a sudden situation. There is also the hastle of having to reconstruct the roads, which goes back to the point of money and also safety. It is never safe when there is construction going around, especially when they have to reconstruct the whole road in order to make the driveless cars work. This also leads to the third point.\n\nTime is very limited in this day and age. We barely have time to do anything, we have so many errands to run, so many things to do, but it's like we never have enough time. If the expansion of driveless cars would continue we would have to reconstruct the roads, delaying many people with getting to work or going to school, or just everyday things. Then we have to go to the government too, to repeal the ban put over on many states. So, naturally, that will take forever too, because when does the government ever get such controversial things solved super quick? Why waste the time of millions for something we aren't sure of yet?\n\nAll in all, the manufacturing of driveless cars is pointless when the car isn't even really driveless. It seems more of a hazard to the economy, the safety of many, and the time of others than it does as an ensuring safe way to get around. In the case of the driveless car, the driveless car lost. There are too many negative effects for it to ever succeed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you rather walk or drive a car going to work?\n\nit would be much more easier to drive a car, right? In today's generation people use their car for transportation going to work or just driving around. All their going to do is pay more gas and spend more,but gas today is more expensive than years ago. Many people need to realize that their are to wasting gas and it can create more traffic jams because many people need to get to their destination on time or not on time. The fellow citizens needs to have an advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nTo begin with, Car can create more gas usage because many people just go to shorter destination or longer destination. But the things is that people just waste gas because they dont realized how they are spending a lot of money. For example, a girl is going to the store closer to home, she is thinking if she going to drive her car or walk and she is thinking to drive her car, why? because she would rather not walk or she is to lazy. The girl is wasting her gas. In today's society many people need to open their eyes and realized thing on how much they are spending on car usage.\n\nAccording to this source 3: \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in\n\nBagota\", \" Bogota, Columbia-In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, bikes, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jam (paragraph 20)\". This quote states that many of the Colombians are supporting their country car usage. They would rather hiked, bikes, skated or took buses to work. Also, it cannot lead to traffic jams. The fellow citizens need to look over what many people are trying to do to limit their car usage because other people cannot afford buying a car. For example, many years ago only people who are wealthy can only afford cars and those who cannot afford it, they would make an effort to make things as possible to get in their destination and enjoy walking rather than riding car.\n\nFurthermore, walking and riding a bike could make things possible for everyone. People need to notice that driving a car could make things much harder. According to this source 1: \" In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\", \" In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities, and legislators are to act, if cautiously\". This quote states that the United States are planning to reduce car usage because it looks like many people today are having a lot of car accidents. For example, driving while texting. This can create less accidents.\n\nIn conclusion, Fellow citizens need to set their limits on car usage.\n\nthey need to realized on how it can create a mess in the world full of car transportation. Also, knowing on how much they pay for gas and also it can lead to massive traffic jams. They need to have advantage of using car usage. They could ride a bike or walk to go reach their destination.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "yes, we should use the technology because in so many ways its beneficial it helps us tell how your feeling and hows your day going. In a school emotions are thrown everywhere because this is a really stressful place for a lot of kkids and adults and some days kids might not wanna be bothered or they might actually need the atention. when reading kids you dont want to make the wrong asssumption and mix the child up this face scanner will relieve you of so much stress.\n\nWhile trying to live to a positive vibe looks can be very deciving for most they may show tou one thing but inside it may be another. Especially in the classroom nobody knows what a kid is really going through at home until he shaterrs him self an show it and that may take forever. the face scanner will allow you to pick up on it easier and faster. By reading a face faster it will allow you to help the kid faster and provide for him or her.\n\nNo kid should go along this path alone and feel helpless ever. Bring this face scan to life and you might save more than one,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 NASA captured a picture of Mars with the Viking 1. This photo was taken of a Martian mesa which resembled a human face. When this was shown to the public, people went crazy. People said that it was created by aliens, but others say it was\n\njust a landform on Mars.\n\nFor my evidence that this photo is in fact a normal natural landfrom on Mars. We shall compare the dates these photos were taken. When Viking 1 first took the picture of the \"Face\" we weren't able to see all of the details. Remember at the time photography wasn't as superb as it was in 2001. In 1998 when MGS took the picture of the \"Face\" we were able to get a clearer product, but there were clouds in the way. If those clouds were not in the way we would have evidence it was a landform sooner. At the perfect time NASA was able to get a clear photo with better technology we were able to see the \"Face\" for what is really was.\n\nAt the time conspiracy theorist said that NASA was hiding the truth from the public saying that life on Mars did exist, but they were relunctant to show it. Even if they did find life on Mars it would be a huge scientific discovery. Why would we be forced to hide the truth from the people and not answer the biggest question in\n\nhistory. Are We Alone. Just to add on, these conspiracy theorist did not have enough evidence to prove their claim either.\n\nNow this ties in with my first claim of technology at the time. if you compare the photo from 1976 and 2001 you can see a major difference. Shading. In the Voyager 1's photo the lighting is not the best. Shadows in the photo make the illusion that there is a face in this rock. In MGS's photo there are features that are more defined than the 1976 photo.\n\nEven though it would be amazing to have life this close to our planet. Mars is not just the right place for life. Sometimes we just have to accept reality. We may really be alone here in this huge universe. Maybe someday we will find aliens. Maybe not. The Face of Mars gave hope to some and brought them back down, but there will be a day when our visions of extraterrestrials will come true.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers give reasearch distance But good Those support advances technology believe computers positive effect people I believe correct I believe computer used finding things far distances also give hand eye coordination I also believe ok use computer using reasearch needed actions When useing computer gives advantages researching studying far away places This good people intrest places around world Also need computers adays thier teachers give write typed assignments power point presentations Also parents computers work maybe get away work take vacation need took book Also say using computer give Hand eye coordination Well fact type Some know hut typing skill people type fast type slow average typers Also teach little kids maybe even adults people created typing game computer teach kids type Also people type super fast go get test see fast type test gives numbers like seventy words minute People naturally type thirty words minute I believe people able go computers needed actions research Many kids learned websites facebook I tunes youtube twitter Some become addictted never got Also websites try give things give virus Viruses come many strengths crash computer send boat loads popups monitor I feel ok go computer research bok vacations If addicted websites stop crash computer one click mouse Over I believe computers great source get information addicted called toy Computer positive effect people Just dont addicted got outside exercise friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship contraversal topic Some believe necessary others would disagree My personal opinion would censorship necessary Everyone entitles believe others maturity accept Censorship necessary offended material nt read listen It simple Everyone offended something everything removed found offensive someone would nothing left If things organized sections stated offensive material likely almost everything would offensive section Because censorship contraversal many different thoughts subject It ranges censorship complete censorship view one many Censorship truely matter maturity person goes dealing material The person let offened therefore censorship necessary library people need mature", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, arts, health and education are the most paramount factors for the overall growth of a nation financially and socially. Some people advocate that spending more earnings on arts is more beneficial as it protects the native people's culture and customs.On the other hand, some people think that the government should pay more for health and education, as these are primary factors for the development. I believe that spending on health and education is more beneficial because it can improve the financial condition of a nation.\r\n\r\nOn one side of the argument, there are numerous people who preferred to spend more money on the arts.There are many reasons behind this. Firstly, they think that this is the best approach to preserve native people's culture and customs, because due to the detrimental affect of modernisation, local population is moving forward and do not care much about their inherited traditions. Moreover, if the ministry construct more museums and promote handmade ornaments, this will definately encourage local authorities to promote their amcient and antique arts. As a resul, people can earn more money and become financially independent.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that the legal authorities should invest on the health and education as these are prompt factors for overall growth of a country. For example, the developed countries giving free education and free healthcare services which encourges new generations to gain more education and promote their nation world wide.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite of the above arguments, I think that the legitimate agencies should invest more dollars on the health and education, as these are the roots for the overall growth of a country, because educated and healthy people are the symbol of healthy and developed country. Therefore, the government should invest more on this as it has more monetary values.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys Program. If you think you shouldn't I will give you two\n\nvery good reasons why you should. But remember it's a once in a life time thing.\n\nFirst of if your the kind of person that likes to save the community or help others this is the perfect job for it. If get you join the club you'll be saving lots of animals, people, plants,and habitats. The cows can be saved by building a farm. The animals like dear, wolfs, and squirrels and all the other animals can be saved by the forest. Sharks and fish and the other sea living animals can be saved by not putting polluted thing in the water. Snakes and the coyotes can be saved by helping the desert animals.\n\nSecond, if your the kind of guy or women that likes to climb, or go on journeys, and swim then this also the perfect club. You'll go climb mountains and sail on huge boats and for fun catch fish.\n\nThose are the two amazing reasons now i'll see you there hope you have fun!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a world where there were less accidents, less pollution, and faster transportation for everyone. This may sound too good to be true, however this just might be a reality in the near future. Many car manufacturers have been pushing to have autonomous care be developed and sold. While some people may not be convinced by these claims, autonomous cars are a stepping stone towards a safer world. The main reasons why these cars would be beneficial for our future are increased safety, less pollution, and faster transportation.\n\nThe first advantage is safety. Who doesn't want to live in a safer world? Autonomous cars can greatly incresase the safety of transportation. If we all got autonomous cars that were all programmed nearly the same, they would drive themselves in a safe way and less accidents would occur. For example, many deaths occur in the U.S. due to drunk driving or wreckless driving, however, with these autonomous cars we can prevent these factors from claiming lives.\n\nNext, less pollution is a wonderfully positive characteristic of these cars. These autonomous cars use half of today's taxis. This would decrease the amount of fossil fuels being burned which will greatly decrease pollution caused by automobiles. If these autonomous cars were to be fuled by some other resourse that harms the environment little to not at all, pollution would drastically decrease. In the future cars may never cause pollution again. This would help us conserve our planet and insure that our children's children will live in a safe world.\n\nFinally, the last reason why autonomous vehicles are a good idea is faster transportation. If someone were on a road trip,\n\non their way to an important meeting out of state, or if your just extreamly tired in the morning, autonomous cars can help. Human navigation is required in some situations, however it may not come up that often. If you ever get tired while driving for many hours, the autonomous cars can help take you to your destination. This insures faster transportation and increases safety. Many people have to drive for many hours a day, when these people start to get tired they slowly drift into sleep, this could cause many accidents. Autonomous cars can eliminate this problem immediatly and it will also increase the amount of time you drive so you can get to your destination faster.\n\nClearly autonomous cars are the way of the future. It may take a while for these cars to be developed, but the advantages are too great to over look. We can saves lives with the save autonomous technology the cars use to drive themselves. We can save our planet by creating less pollution and we can travel longer and faster. We should encourage car manufacturers to create these cars so we can life a better life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present, every individual has their own choice of living style. Some people believe instead of eliminating changes in the climate, they are adjusting to stay with it. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the topic as it has more complications which may affect the people by air and water pollution. This essay will discuss why preventing climate change is far more effective than living with it.\n\nTo commence, air pollution is the major problem which the world is facing at the moment. Most of the pollution is released by the vehicles which are affecting the natural air and contaminating the nearby places. By inhaling this polluted air is causing issues to the lungs and it is damaging public health. For example, Trucks releases a lot of smoke in the air which can live for almost 2 hours, moreover, it kills the purity in natural resources. Instead of adjusting to the climatic conditions, one can control the pollution by imposing strict rules and regulations on vehicle manufacturers.\n\nIn addition to that, one more issue is water pollution which is caused by the waste releasing by many factories. This dirty water gets mixed up with the regular consumption resources such as lakes, rivers, ponds and a few more to name, it is due to a fact that it is affecting the human organs by drinking this unfiltered water. For instance, A cardboard manufacturer uses a lot of water to prepare the cardboard and release the water to nearby rivers which will consume by local villagers who do not have filtering options. By using appropriate techniques to save the water and bring laws to factories to dispose the waste to different areas rather than regular ones.\n\nTo conclude, This essay discussed what are the problems caused by not preventing the weather conditions despite following them. From my point of view, it is clear that one should totally take care of climate as it will protect our next generations too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A library place go read write relax Nowadays many people take granted knowledge obtained Even knowledge learned stripped away cut censorship Censorship eliminate many varieties reading materials people learn enjoy First removing classics shelves libraries offend certain people completely unwarranted If offend read It simple Many books offend people agreement morals beliefs A great example series bestselling series million copies sold worldwide however corrolate many people s beliefs Therefore people boycott series I remember several years ago I attended party local library celebrate next book series released While I library gigantic storm brewing Now people would think storm people town like books blamed party They said worshipping devil brought storm tell us wrong I know many people like series witchcraft wizardry mean blame natural occurences book Even great novels like banned content For reading material school morality police banned crazy person Books required meet everyone s personal standards Consequently Katherine Paterson states true If ban books agree find suitable eventually left check library Although could way compromise If books questionable content sticker telling reader could benefit sides In conclusion eliminating books good idea beneficial us especially children When I young I would always want read I continued age I would always read While I middle school every day I would book read Books allow reader travel far places see would like walk someone else s shoes Books gateway another world Why take magic away children", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood author good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring MASt The builders empire state building faced many obstacles allow dirigibles dock One obstacle expanded use new york city lack suitable landing area Another obstacle getin passengers dirigbles safley In conclusion I showend obstacles builders faced", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars are something people have only been imagining and seeing in movies for a while. Now with all the technology and expeirence manufuntioners have, a diverless car may be something that can actually be done. Sergey Brin, a Google cofounder, envisions a future that could use diverless cars everyday and even believes it can change the world forever. Autonomous cars have been undergoing this picture since 2009. Yet these cars are not yet completely driverless; they are on the way of becoming just that.\n\nSo really imagine being able to be driven around constantly without ever having to do your part. These cares would be able to use half the fuel that modern taxi cabs use and offer a lot more than any street bus. With the help of sensors the car is able to do much more on it's own. BMW project manager, Dr.Werner Huber even quotes \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Which does make the car seem as if it would be a fun way to change. You'd be able to do so much more on your way to places and have much more time to get things finished.\n\nEven though the car does seem like a very good idea to have; there are still many downfalls about this. First thing off is that the car would be way to expensive to ever make, let alone sell. With the amount of sensors and cameras that would have to be set up, the price would be too much for any middle class person to afford. The cars would also still need astiance from a driver and are not really self driven all the way. A major factor in problems that has been arrisen is safety, which seems to be the biggest one yet. Who would be blamed in the sense of an accident? The car or the person inside? Laws would also have to be changed and alterd and it is even illegal to test these cars out in certain states of the US.\n\nAll in all it's clear that the cons out weigh all the pros. There are too many problems and too many risks. An outlook from a teenagers point of view is that the car seems like it would not last. People driving them selves is scary enough now a days, let alone some robot or sensor drive around. Safety is the biggest part of it and driverless cars seem very unsafe. The promt also fails to mention anything about speed limits or signs such as one ways or no turns on right warnings. Since it is never brought up in the promt has it been brought to mind at all yet? Diverless cars just seem way to unrealiable and unrealistic for the time being of now.\n\nSo maybe in the future the driverless cars will be something so safe and affordable for everyone to be driving around in one. As of now though this tranportation system does not seem realiable enough or needed to be made into something real. Manufunctioners will proceed to make the autonomous car better and safer until the time is right to let the cars be out. Right now it's not the best idea to have the cars but eventually in our future it would be a big part in our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Think of how many car crashes a day steal loved ones away from us. Think of all the mothers and fathers, sons and duaghters, and friends that are gone as the result of someone's careless mistake. The resaons behind most crashes is plain old human error. Well, what if we removed human error from the equation? If we take the driver away from the wheel and put them in the passesnger side, imagine how drastically the rate of crashes would decrease.\n\nIn todays modern world of advanced technology, we already have cars that can nearly drive themsleves. As the artical points out, there are cars that can drive themselves except when complecations arise such as traffic jams and roadblocks. Google's Toyota Prius has multiple sensors that moniter the area around the car and allows the car to funtcion as if there was a driver behind the wheel. Sensors can also allow the car to brake faster than a human could in emergencies and reduce the power of the engine.\n\nThe laws reguarding computer driven cars are all concerned about saftey, as they should be. Although, if a company, such as googlel, could create a perfect driverless car, shouldn't those laws be changed instead to any driverless car must be thouroughly tested and cleared by an organization or group not apart of the company itself to make sure there are no problems whatsoever. Also, in the event of any accedent caused by the car, the blame should undesputibly fall onto the company. The risk of crash would be outweighed by the benefits of driverless cars, though. Even in the event of an unlikely crash, there would still be fewer crashes than ever before.\n\nAnother benefit driverless cars offer is the time saved. How many of us have been late to work, a meeting, or school bescause of traffic? Traffic is genereally cause by wrecks or roadwork. While roadwork cannot really be avoided, with driverless cars, there would be nearly no wrecks at all. Then no one would need to sit in a mile long traffic jam as someone else gets their promotion at work becasue they are not there. Also, no one would miss their turn or get stopped for running a red light and have to wait to get their ticket. As the saying goes, time is money.\n\nEven thoug a toatlly driverless car has not been invented, we are very close. Along with the extra safety that comes with humans no longer driving, time wil be saved, along with money. Las wouold aslo be changed so that the passengers in the car would not be to fualt in the instence of an unlikley crash. With driverless cars on the rise, we have a safer, more adnaced future ahead of us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock issues thought construction began At height whirlwind issues could push derigible undesired directions The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air current CAPS After Hindenburg exploded concerns thing happening large safety concern The owners Empire State building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York CAPS Line", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face was dicovered on May 24, 2001. It was discovered by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. \"NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" But the Face is just a natural landform discovered on Mars by NASA.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took a picture of the face. It was discovered that there was no alien monument. On paragraph seven, the text states, \"snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos....There was no alien monument after all.\" This proves that they found out the Face was not an alien monument.\n\nBut many people were still not satisfied so, on April 8, 2001, Mars Global Surveyor went to Mars for a second look. On paragraph ten, the text states, \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" On paragraph twelve, the text states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West.\" So, the Face that they found on Mars was just a natural landform after all.\n\nUsing evidences from the texts, we learned that the Face was discovered on May 24, 2001. We learned that many people believed it to be an alien monument, but it was not. The Face got looked a second time, on April 8, 2001, but with the camera's absolute \"maximum resolution.\" In the end, they found out that the Face was just a natural landform and not an alien monument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aurthor concludes story paragraph In ways One reason aurthor concluded story paragraph story sad something really wanted So took home showed mom Then mom look weird story said you Her mother stared increously So explains failed drivers test didnt give So end story said take test So conclusion aurthor concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is a normal day to you? Waking up, brushing your teeth, eating, then getting into car to go to work, right? That last object in that list, getting into your car, puts a strain on the environment, commonly known as pollution. Although the amount of strain that an individual may put on the environment is miniscule, the combined output of all cars in a city may be enough to damage your lungs! In Beijing, China, people wear masks outside to prevent inhalation of the dense smog surrounding the city. This has led to the development of the \"smart planning\" movement, in which city planners build dense suburbs in which cars are unneeded. Shops are a walk away, and your neighbor lives five minutes from your home. You may be asking \"Why do I care about this? I don't have heavy smog in my city.\" Well when car use starts to increase in your city, that will affect both your health, and your happiness.\n\nFirst off, limiting car usage will make you happier. \"How will this make me happy?\" Think about this, you go through your usual morning routine, and you only have five minutes to get to work. That's perfectly fine because, good news, your job is a three minute walk from your house! This drastically reduces stress as said in this quote from \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars.\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal. \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.\"\n\nSecondly, the smog from cities with high car usage is becoming unbearable. \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals...[Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" In Paris, after a few days of \"near-record pollution,\" enforced a partial, temporary driving ban. \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following da y.\" The congestion levels of Paris were down by an astonishing sixty percent after five days of the smog. Imagine that, in five days smog levels reduced by sixty percent. Imagine what the whole world could do if everyone pitched in to this trend. \"[Automobiles], experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emmisions from tailpipes....Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmisions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\"\n\nLastly, a reduction of car use can vastly improve the economy. In Bogota, Colombia, the local government have begun to enforce a \"Day Without Cars\" in an effort to curb rising pollution levels. This has been happening for three years, and has increased profits for small shops and eateries in the area. Because of the large number of walkers and bikers, shops were able to make a larger profit with walk-ins that just happened to pass by the store. This is what caused more stores to open up, thus boosting the local economy. Even businessmen are enjoying these days as stated by Carlos Arturo Plaza. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nTo end this off, cars use can be greatly reduced. It is a matter of willpower, which everyone has, but some are too lazy to tap into it. The reduction of car use will have long term effects on both you and the globe. By minimizing the time you spend in a car, you are increasing your happiness, decreasing pollution, and helping boost the economy! If you think cars are a necessity in today's shrinking world, think again. New York is a perfect example in which rush hour traffic makes it impossible to get to work on time by car. Even in new small suburbs, cars are becoming a thing of the past. Tomorrow, instead of driving to work or to the store, try walking. You just might enjoy it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Moderen computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick. But tend to be more delicate when it comes extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars and others times to Venus.\n\nVenus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Making it simple for even an amateur stargazor to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. more importantly, researchers cannont take simples or rock, gas, or anything else, from distance.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, venus was probably\n\ncovered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today , Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable.\n\nStriving to meet the challange presented by Venus has value. Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human corisosity. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts. Should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightening strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusim geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you evr wanted to help take care of animals on a boat, or even go see places that you have never seen before? Well then, you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Thia will allow you take care of animals travel to different places, and trust me I have been on there it is very fun. If you are not persuaded enough let me give you 4 reasons why you should join.\n\nThe UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) hired ¨Seagoing Cowboys¨ to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. Now imagine that, while the animals were over seas the probably got hurt. Wouldn´t you want to help them I know I would. There were night watchmen, his job was to check on all the animals every hour. That sound like alot of work but it´s not.\n\nHere is another reason, besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. I bet you haven´t seen Europe or China. Wouldn´t you like to see there lifestyle there clothes and all the other stuff they have. Probably learn a new language. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. It really was special all of ther colors were beautiful.\n\nMy last reason is, after we unloaded the animals we had alot of fun. We played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. Now that is fun, all the time you were takig the animals back you had to keep an eye on them, but when they were unloaded you would have alot of fun.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world to me. I´m grateful for the opportunity, it mad me aware of people of other countries and their needs. This is why I think you should come and join Seagoing Cowboy program, trust me you will have fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that several wild species are adversely influenced by human activities. Under such circumstances, some contend that it is pointless to address this issue because no solution will be effective, whereas others believe that people can still implement visible measures to overcome the problem. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the idea that there is nothing for humans to do to lessen their detrimental effects on the natural world is grounded in some valid points. The proponents of this perspective argue that numerous wild species have become extinct before human intervention. This is evident in how the dinosaurs were killed by an asteroid that attacked the Earth 65 million years ago, a long time before the presence of humans. In addition, many endangered creatures are predicted to vanish despite measures taken by people. This is because the food chains are negatively affected by the disappearance of vegetation and other animals in the ecosystem, causing a shortage of food and an unstoppable death of other organisms.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I do believe that people can still implement some measures to improve the situation. Firstly, governments around the world have the power to enact and enforce laws and regulations aimed at protecting wild plants and animals and their habitats. For example, the Vietnamese government introduced laws on industrial waste management in 2001 to deter factories from discharging waste into rivers and oceans without proper waste treatment progress, thus successfully improving the water quality in industrial areas to protect aquatic species. Secondly, many conservation efforts have shown that it is still possible to protect and restore endangered animals and their habitats. Examples include the recovery of the bald eagle in the U.S. and giant panda habitats in China.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while some damage is irreversible, it is not too late to take effective measures to improve the situation. Human actions are the primary factors contributing to the decline in wildlife animals and plants, it is our ethical and moral responsibility to deal with this matter. By implementing conservation efforts and enacting strong legislation, we can mitigate the issue and work towards a sustainable coexistence with the natural world. Although the challenges are immense, they are not unsurmountable and our future depends on our commitment to preserving biodiversity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the facial action coding system enable computer is not good to be in the classroom because ... why would you have something in there that can be wrong i dony know why people aways think computers will always know it all because they dont.\n\nPeople in this world always going off on what people say or showing them computers dont always be right , i would never go and get a computer to help me with my problems because they dont know everything plus why would you want it in the classroom anyway , someone can come steal it or anything you never now a days people is doing all types of stuff\n\nBut again i think it will be good for to be at school because when the students walks in the classroom they can just have them come to the computer and scan them to make sure they are having a good day and nothing is bothring them. Also they should check them when they come into the classroom because they probaly can be having a ruff day and just going to a hard time , but you can make them happy when they walk in the classroom ny, for example\"\n\nusing the zygomatic major and different musle , the risorious \". But to be honest i really think its not a good idea because why you have a computer trying to sovle people problems when you can just have them talk to someone about it , it dont make sense to have extra stuff to help kids when its a soical worker there. They need to do something better with they money at the school instead of trying to by nonsense and bring it to the school. All tho they trying to help the children out and make them better or whatever they trying to do its not not worth paying alot of money for a mixed emotion computer when you can just send them to they soical worker .But the moral of the story is that no i would never but this comuputer its a good brand to the school and all but i would just not get one.\n\n- but we all know i would never get one of these computers\n\n-This is what i think of the Facial Action Coding System Computer\n\n-Hope you liked my essay guys", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author leaves the reader to infer that exploring Venus' surface is a good idea. I believe that the author did very well supporting his claim. In Paragraph 4, the author states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" If this is true, then could Venus become like Earth once again? I believe the author is trying to say that Venus is worth exploring to see if it is able to be like Earth once more. In Paragraph 6, the author suggests, \"Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough misson to understand Venus would need to get up close and person despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.\" I believe the author is correct in this statement. If we start looking at exploring Venus as a challenge instead of a risk, it could possibly give researchers more motivation to get out and explore. In Paragraph 8, the author claims, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The author brought up the word \"challenge\" again, and I believe that he really thinks the challenge is worth it. I agree with him in this claim because if humans can explore Venus, I also believe we can go on to do bigger and better things with exploring our solar system. The author did a good job in making his claims and then proceeding to back them up with evidence and facts. Although he had some opinions, the article was overall well written and well put together. The author convinced me, as the reader, that exploring Venus is definitely worth a few more tries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a new software that has been developed that improves the accuracy in percieving the emotions of others. This new software is used to detect how someone is feeling by using the position of the 44 major muscles in someones face. For example, the software analyzed Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting the \"Mona Lisa\". The software used the way the paintings muscles were positioned and determined that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. If the software could figure this information out on a painting, then couldn't it be beneficial to use in the classroom?\n\nAs a student, I know personally that lessons can get boring. Many times a day I find myself day dreaming in classes when the teachers giving a long lecture. I can also feel my expression changing during confusing moments of the lesson, when you have chemistry for an hour you begin to feel the confusion physically. Dr. Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois states that: \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Every day we use more and more technology in classes. Teachers can only change the way they teach a little bit since everyone learns differently. It would be beneficial if the computers we are using would change up the lesson so that it was no longer boring and it is easier to comprehend.\n\nThe argument could be made that using the new software wouldn't be accurate, and may change a lesson when it doesn't need to. The technology is actually very accurate, and is more effective than a human can be. Humans can identify that someone is happy because they are smiling, but we can't always tell if it's a true smile or not. Computers are able to identify that a smile is sincere, and can tell if other emotions are trueful. This technology is very reliable, and uses the same muscle clues used to identify if a politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nI am for using this new technology in our classroom computers. Students such as myself could benefit from the technolgy being able to read our facial expressions. Our lessons could be enhanced, resulting in us understanding information better and retain what we're told in class. We will be able to pay attention more, and not be losted when we are recapping what we learned. By paying attention more, and understanding the material being taught, test scores, grades, and I.Q.s may increase at a high rate, which everyone can benefit from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I want go see movie There movies home I want see CAPS dad I go movies someone I asked CAPS answered I looked movies pretty good selection I pick movie I wanted see Then I realize I need someone go I called friend asked wanted go see movie I wanted see Ended wanted see said yes After I got something eat relaxed All sudden time leave I running behind I ready really quickly went picked Unlike calm patient In place I wouldnt Thats one reason I like friend", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If offinded book library would want took shelf I would nt point removing lot books offend people one book nt towards goes movies music Books able written everything interests people Some people find thing offending like everyone dont think alike If books made towards emotions people would look would nt many books world today This free country write speak write whatever want get Movies anoter way getting emotions expressing People find movies offending neither movies made people feel We able express everything whatever movies No one race center attetion movies people feel thats personal thing people go Music produced even rapped sung many different ways get people Music found offending days music also away getting emotions freedom speech I ve never felt offended song ve heard anything people going say feel want Freedom speech goes long way world people either got ta het used stay offended Books music movies magazines wont pulled emotions I look way art expression shows people think respond things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ability dock dirigibles atop Empire State Building initially lucrative major obstacles The problems facing development mooring mast would cost flammability dirigibles weather feet air The structural cost problems facing Al Smith The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet In order overcome obstacle The steel frame Empire State Building would modified sixty thousand dollars worth modifications would made This problematic Al Smith must spend time money originally planned Furthermore another problem Most dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This huge obstacle fire explosion densely populated areas downtown New York would catastrophic could put thousands people harms way Finally weather top Empire State building unsuitable docking dirigibles The winds top building constantly shifting back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This dangerous structure building surrounding buildings people close Due problems Al Smith engineers could complete Mooring Mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In quote telling saeng glad back Saeng also states would ready", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago the world was amazed by the Face on Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when the Spacecraft had spotted a shawdowly likeness of a human face. It had an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.\n\nA few days later NASA started studying the face and unveiled the image for all to see. NASA caption the photo \"Huge rock formation.. which resembles a human head.. formed by shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, a nose, and mouth. This engaged the public and attracted attention to Mars. The \" Face on Mars\" had became very popular.\n\nFew scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mar Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet. When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photo's taken.\n\nThousands if web surfers were waiting for the image. The image first appeared on a JPL web site. The image reveaked a natural landform , evidence showing that there was not a alien monument after all. Because it was winter when NASA went to go capture the image it was some what cloudy and not many people were satisfied with the image.\n\nNASA has provided evidence. Nasa also proved that the \"Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens , in fact it was created by human form.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author say's About the Venus's what is diffrent than other planets and is like twin of earth because it has the same density and size it it says in number three.The tempertures are really high 800 degrees fahrenheit, is really hot to live there with almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide.It shows how dangrous is to live there the surface is the hottest than any other planet in our solar system that mean no one one can't live at Venus.\n\nLong ago Venus was like Earth it probably had ocean and clouds and it looked like that Venus has mountians vallys. this is why scientists are looking forward to study more about Venus and its origans it had in the past long ago. NASA are planing to go to venus but they have to on the frey and it would be away to the ground\n\nand condition. NASA they'er testin the matieral if it could last long for venus and if would not melt the matierial they tested is \"electronics made of slincon carbide wich lasted three weeks\" it been tested in a chamber simulating but they'er looking back on a \"to an old technology called\n\nmechancal computers that were mad at 1800s\". this shows how they have to choose for their matials.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hey, being a Seagoing Cowboy isn't that bad. It can actually be pretty fun. Taking care of animals and seeing new places that you never would've have thought you would ever see.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can be pretty fun. I know what you're thinking, being one of those you'll have to be picking up poop constantly. But wouldn't be it better than having a lousy job at a supermarket. Another reason is that you see new places and beautiful scenery. And you might learn stuff that you have never known before. Like some of the different religions in Europe. You might even find love on these voyages. You''ll also have many stories to tell when you get back home.\n\nHey, this job can change your life forever. You can find new animals that you never new existed. And you can meet new people that you can call your friends. You can learn about history in the different countries in Europe. And you can also go to historic places.\n\nSo being a Seagoing Cowboy isn't as bad as it sounds. It can be pretty fun. And it will change your life forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Florida State Senator,\n\nI have read many articles that either fight for or against the decision to replace the Electoral College with election by popular vote for the presedent of the United States. After reading these articles, I have come to the conclusion that the Electorial College should indeed be replaced. I understand that the Electoral College was created by our nation's fathers but nontheless, election by popular vote would give our people of the United States more control over who is chosen for the President of our amazing country.\n\nMost citizens think it is unfair for for them because they dont even really have the oppurtunity to vote directly for the next president of the United States as said in paragraph 10 of Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer \"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president... Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state coventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. Can voters control who their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes.\"\n\nIf we didn't have Electoral College, we wouldn't have to go through all the confusion in making sure we're voting for the correct electors. People wouldn't accidentally choose the wrong one. If we had the option to choose our president by popular vote, everything would go much smoother with no confusion at all. People would be able to vote for the president they actually want with no problems and everyone would be happy.\n\nAs Bradford Plumer said in his article Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, paragraph 13, \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\" And again, i seriously consider switching to election by popular vote.\n\nThank you for your time.\n\nSincerly, Concerned Citizen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many different perspetives censorship country This human race opinionative Different perspectives come different people young old parents children In libraries reading materials find offensive Offensive material libraries directed read young children They also inteded able get hands material Even though purpose material happens material ends hands someone nt No material held lock key also left lay child high shelf would seem appealing The problem removing material libraries would result empty shelfs except children s books The material would removed books meant people appropriate age group inform tell good stories If protected children censhorship would deny knowledge also get away general public anually go library movies books music materials labeled Some material appropriate children also inappropriate A rated NUM movie like rated CAPS movie one extra reference taken wrong way Even protective parents allow children view movies like long find appropriate Libraries remove material shelves If much issue could children books seperate room library There many possibilities keeping kind reading material away children All need removing books materials libraries shelves Censorship libraries contraversial subject There good arguement either side whether take offensive material shelves libraries I believe taken alternatives This essay proposed solutions problem without taking public reading right away everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I completely agree people think computers negative effect us today Even though computers great many negative effects people use Since new technology post pictures websites everyone see Also games computers people get hooked Lastly predator online The new technology amazing like webcams video chat cellphones could take pictures negative effects There many suicides cyber bullying This people bully kids internet Also people send naked pictures online even webcamming illegal absurd young even older people would actions Also websites people post pictures personal make huge difference life There many people games computer download games websites Most people actually get addicted game They would play day could arent playing wishing could This makes miss alot things They might get enough excersise homework make grades drop They could also spending time family It also might change person The important thing use computers safety There predator internet pretend someone school ask live You never tell anyone live full name online They likely come house It could likely cost even family members lives Computers fun learn abundant amount information long smart using Remember tell anyone live dont take pictures send personal They could internet next day Lastly worry family grades health useless game Be smart safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced numerous problems dealing mooring mast First I would say safety number one issue If dirigible catch fire could land main streets New York City posing hazard hundreds pedestrians Also weather another factor If windy fly time mast would waste When I read spend NUM CAPS modify building s framework I started thinking things town could There also existing law made illegal airships even remotely close Empire State Building Overall idea mooring mast poorly planned idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir authors tone loving The way describes Cuban heritage culture full pride Cuban In two states eternally grateful parents rich culinary skills love cooking passed Then end seven tone loving grateful In last sentence noticeable I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libaries everywhere might book two offensive reader I nt found book offensive readings yet Some people might think music movies magazines etc removed shelves library But people like Its going take one person remove music magazines etc library Music library good ca nt find old music like music store If someone finds music offensive libary might nt know history music came artist Say instance person offended hip hop music I m sure s book person look music came Maybe would nt offeneded Magaizines library really people love media There many magaizines interesting facts happen s going happen For example newest event something big happend one Then s advertisments would people get money nt put adverstisment people could buy product If nobody would buy products Movies library teachers show students Half stuff libary find blockbuster walmart It s library old movies current events happened years ago They might even movie go book reader read people visual movie So read books Overall I hope music magazines movies stay shelves libraries nt change way library things Some books might already shelves people complained got offeneded already So already late But going take one person aganist So s view taking music magazines movies library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of driverless cars for many reasons. Personally I feel as though people are starting to get more and more lazy these days with the help of technology. I believe it would be much more safe for someone to manually drive a car, rather than put your trust into a computer. There is a wide range of possibilities that could go wrong with driverless cars out on the roads.\n\nMy first reason is that the car could malfunction. Whoever programmed the car could have messed up and gave the car a defect. Then someone would buy that defected car and most likely get into a crash. Someone could be on a highway while the car system fails, crashing into a semi truck. Theres a possibility that the car could completely shut off, leaving you stranded in the middle of nowhere. Also GPS these days isn't very reliable, the car could take you completely off route trying to follow GPS.\n\nMy second reason is that someone could hack your cars system. Somebody that strongly dislikes you could get in your car and ruin its system. Even worse, people would start paying a hacker to destroy car systems. While you're out on the road relaxing in your driverless car, a hacker could take control of your car giving it directions. That means while your stuck in your car, someone is in control of your life deciding if they want to crash your car.\n\nMy third reason is that it's not very safe. I don't think putting all of your trust into a vehicle is a very smart idea. The sensor on the car could go out with your knowledge, causing it to crash. There could be road construction that the car is not aware of, potentially driving straight into the construction site. Your city might have certain driving regulatons that the car won't know about, which could give you a ticket from a cop.\n\nMy fourth reason is that you could be put at a higher risk of getting in a car accident. What if a little boy is getting his ball in the road? The car might not see him with the sensors, causing the car to drive right into the boy. You could be texting on your phone and then out of no where a car is comming right towards you. It's too late to gain control of the car because you were so busy texting, resulting in a car crash. Maybe you're tired so you take a nap while your car is on its way to the casino. Your car could crash at any moment, because you're not awake and not paying attention to the road.\n\nIn conclusion, there are multiple reasons why a driverless car wouldn't be safe. whether it's due to a malfunction, hacker, or even safety issues driverless cars are not safe. I hope after reading this you realize there are way more cons than pros with driverless cars. It's better to do things right by yourself, rather than putting your trust into technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As we look back through the records of histroy, humans have made and continue to make an extraorindary advancment in technology. These transformations in technology have worked and cooperated with humans to make life better. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" new advancements in self-driving cars are presented. Though there are many drawbacks of the idea as of right now, humans will make another historial breakthough as they always have. I believe the idea of driverless cars should be promoted due it being more safe, efficient, and helpful to our everyday lives.\n\nThe first reason of why I support driverless cars is because of how much more safer it is. If you look out to our world today, machines have replaced so much of what used to be the works of humans. That was because of machines being more capable of precision and safety. Many factory works have been transferred over to machines who do not have to rely on anyone else and additionally does not have to be concerned about safety. In the same way, we can see how much more safe driverless cars are. Google has proven this because their \"cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" In our world today, there are car accidents occuring every minute of our lives. If we can reduce the amount of accidents through driverless cars, then the lives of people will be more safe. Because of how driverless cars can ensure the safety of humans, I support it.\n\nThe second reason why I defend the idea of driverless cars is because of how dependent society can be towards these cars. Although driverless cars are not as developed as we wish to, they will be completed to perfection in the near future. With driverless cars being perfected by manufacturers, they will be more cooperative as they can coordinate themselves with other driverless cars so accidents will not happen, and they will find out the shortest distance and time to a certain destination. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin envisions of a more sophisticated car that enables more efficientcy than that of the human: \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" With the development of these cars, they can replace all the cars humans drive with a great transportation system for public-transport and commuters. I support driverless cars because of how they can steer the world into a better place.\n\nLastly, I endorse self-driving cars because of how helpful it will be to humans. If you were in in an emergency situation where you couldn't drive but needed to go to a hospital, driverless cars would literally save your life. Not only that, but if you are a child and you have no one that can drive you to your game, or grocery store, or friends house, you never have to ask anyone ever again for a ride. A driverless car would always be there to help you in your times of inconvenience. Because of how convenient driverless cars can be, it is one more step of why I defend driverless cars.\n\nNo matter how crazy an idea or an invention of technology may be, they were made to make the lives of humans better. Every invention had its own times of adversity: The lightbulb, computers, planes, and even the car itself. Every piece of technology had to go through numerous amounts of trial and error to become what it is today. This concept applies to driverless cars as well. We are merely in the stage of development and trial and error so that driverless cars can be made to perfection for the comfort of human lives. I support the idea of driverless cars because of how safe, efficient, and life-changing it will be to humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood auther Life good simlpe house cuba Do alot fun thing family grateful parents Love sacrifice I ve often Told much courageous parents told early age demonstarat important family friend", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am honestly against driveless cars. Driverless cars takes alot of techonolgy just for it to be able to be used. I can't say driverless cars are just so bad but as in my oppinon I would never want a driverless car and these are the reason of why I wouldnt ever see myself in a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars needs to much technology just for it to work and still with all of that technology you still have to steer the wheel. The cars takes about half of fuel today that taxis and buses use. Also I wouldnt want a driverless car because its way to exspensive for the car when its not all the way certain to work. It states in paragraph 9 in the second sentence that \"Presently, traffic laws are written the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" So why would i want a car that is not for sure safe to be putting myself into? Also if the technology wasnt to work all the way and i was to get injured that would be my fault for trying something new that took to much stuff to even work.\n\nDont get me wrong driverless cars does have some type of good use like when there is a crash or you are about to get in a crash the car can warn you. But safety is still better from a human to me. In plus you can save alot more money just driving yourself instead of buying a car that has camars in all. The reason I bring up camars is because why would someone in front of your car want camars pointing at there car. There is still work needed on a driveless car anyways so as for myself I wouldnt take the risk of getting one.\n\nSO yeah the driverless cars are pretty neat but there just not something anybody should want to get. Who wants to have to depend on alot of technology just for a car? Also why would someone want to pay so much money for a car thats not even proven to be safe. I know I wouldnt want to ever have to depend on a driverless car to be safe. I hope after you read my reason of why not to get a driverless car you think twice about getting one yourself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless or computer-driven cars are not practicle for everyday use, will end up costing the country a lot of money, and compromise the safety of the others. In order for a car to be completely driverless the roads will have to be changed, and senors will need to be added. However, adding sensors to the roads will cost the country a lot of money. Also driverless cars still require a driver to be fully engaged, because the car will not be able to steer in contrustion or difficult traffic situations. However, the driver of the car will not be fully engaged because the car will be doing most of the work, and this will compromise safety of the driver, passangers, and pedestrians. Lastly, the technology in the car could fail and cause an accident and put not only the driver at harm, but othes on the road. In the event of a car accident of a computer-driven car could also cause legal toubles, because instead of a person being at fault, the accidents could be caused by the machinery in the car not working properly. Driverless or computer-driven cars are not practicle for everyday use because they could potentially endanger the safety of the driver and others on the road, and driverless cars will end up costing the country a lot of money as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I disagree people enjoying spending time famimely computer nothing agree far Frist wast re time computer nothing nothing get done I notice many shildren computer every right school playing computer For example cosiun computer evryday wasting time still Secondly children studying computer playing video games going website allowed students children internet palying video games something done everyday also I seen many kids playing games computer Thirdly student never learn nothing wast time computer studing many students nt time wisely also many student useing comput sometimes everyday I notice many students nt learn compu studing tests mre stundent fail classes computer First people spending time friends teh important people aroun ud computers Are still Secondly friends important people I ever care love like re ther families wast youre computer know friends For example allways comput never goes see friemds amd friends never cares computer god get im saying Thirdly family also important computer care lease spend sometime family example many families stop spending time othe computer important Lastly help re community goal make youre city look nt want massy also many people quit help commicity servic around neighbor example I see trash grounds dont care Finally going sports starting fit important First playing sports far youve health people never play sports anymore computer example people stop playing sports secondly going import good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i was convincing someone that the the face on the planet mars is not a created by aliens i would say. That the reason it looks like that is because it formed a shadow giving the illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth. and if he still didn't believe me i would say that. They had sent a Mars Global Surveyer arriving at The Red Planet in Sept. of 1997 18 years after the Viking mission ended and then on April 5 of 1998 when tyhe Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time the Mars Orbitor camera team snapped a picture 10x sharper then it was on the original viking photos which would reveal that it was just a natural landform and that there was no alienmonument after all and just a illusion of a shadow. And this infrmation would prove to him that it's not a monument created by aliens and that i was just a illusion created by shadow reflecting light.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nTo my understandings, we still use our Electoral College to vote for the President of the United States. So basically, whenever we vote for a President, we're basically voting for a slate of electors. But you probably already knew that. I thought the whole point of voting was to vote for who we want, not pick someone on the side to vote for us. To me, it is only fair that we rid of the Electoral College and change it to an election by popular vote.\n\nWhen I am old enough to vote, I would like to see that my vote counted for the President and not a group of electors. One main problem with the Electoral College is the fact that the trust can be betrayed. What about what happened in Hawaii in 1960? When Vice President Richard Nixon luckily precided over the senate, validating only his oppenent's electors, but made sure to do so \"without establishing a precedent.\" What if it happens again? You are voting for someone that could be anyone not holding a public office.\n\nIf you really think about it, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. Think of it like this, you're in a class of 30 and you get to vote on who is your new class president. You all vote but the teacher only counts 10 of the kids' votes that have a higher ranking. It is not fair to the other 20 students because they all voted too, but their votes didn't really count.\n\nThe Electoral College can be thought of as unfair, outdated, and irrational. It would be so much easier if we just counted the votes from the citizens of the United States in a majority rules fashion. This way, everyones' vote counts and we wouldn't have to worry relying on someone to make the vote for us.\n\nI am writing to you State Senator to show you how we, the United States of America, really feel. Isn't it true in Amendment 1, that we as the people have a freedom of speech? Well I think my speech should be heard and I want you to listen.\n\nSincerely,\n\nRachel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We live in a world where the only way to get from place to place is to use a car. If we were to limit the amount of car usage all around the world we would be living in a much better place. Imagine how much pollution is going into the air as we use our cars, many people all around the world use their cars to get from their home to work or from work to home. All the polution that is going into the air is affecting us and the way we live our everyday lives.\n\nIn the city of Bogota Columbia they have a ''Car Free Day.\" This program is set to spread to other countries in the next few years. During the event of car free day millions of columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work or to their home. This caused the streets of the capital city to devoid all the traffic jams that they normally would have with the cars on the road. You would think the turnout would be extremely small for this event but no it was definitely not a small turnout. The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that occasionally dumped rain showers on Bogota. \"The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" said Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Imagine if the United states were to have a ''Car free day\" not many people would actually come and be apart of the event due to the fact that having cars is one of the most important things to have living in the United States.\n\nIn other countries or cities the people are worried about the air pollution that is going into our atmosphere. In the city of Paris, officials feel the same way about the citizens of there city using there car way to much and polluting the atmosphere. After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Not many people agreed with this ban when it started. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reauters. Twenty Seven people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. Except there are some advantages to this ban, congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of france. But the smog rivaled Bejing, China, which is known as one of the most populated cities in the world. Having rules or banning certain things like a partial driving ban could have a good turnout or a really bad turnout with the citizens of that particular country or city.\n\nHowever, some people may say that limiting car usage or banning certain things like driving won't help at all. They may state that banning something will make people rebel against it especially if it's with their car, and if that is how they get from place to place. Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.''Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term curtural shift,'' said Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason the resume the habit. Poeple in the Untied States have begun to decrease the use of cars in every state which means that everyday our atmosphere becomes less polluted.\n\nLiving in a world where cars are everyone's number one priority is horrible. Using a car is one of the main reasons why our earth is extremely polluted. Limiting the amount of car use has it's negative side and it also has it's positive sides. Could you imagine what it would be like to have a non-polluted earth or living a better life by using bikes, skates or even just walking to places would be like. Limiting car usage would be the best thing anyone could ever do to make the earth a better place. The earth is our home make it a better place by only doing one step, not using your car!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a car that does most of everything by itself would be great. However, there is a few reasons why I wouldn't perfer a smart car over a car I can drive myself. It can be unsafe when you all the sudden have to take over, not driving yourself can cause you to fall asleep and become bored, and it's not always a good thing to depend on others. It's alot better to depend on yourself while drvining the on a electronical car that can possibly malfunction at anytime. That's why I wouldn't mind driving myself.\n\nAs stated in the article, \"Google cars aren't truly driverless: they still alert driver to tale over..\"\n\nis a very unsafe senerio. If a driver is depending on a car to drive them around with out there help they may not always be prepared to take over the wheel. Perhaps what if someone was putting on thier making up, doing thier hair, eating a sandwhich, etc. they may not have enough time to take over the wheel before a crash happens. However, having a car that can give you a slight break to do other things could be very help when your rushing and in a hurry because you didn't get ready on time.\n\n\"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting thier turn to drive?\" , stated in the article goes to show that since the driver is not doing anything they can get bored. A good amount of people happen to doze off and fall asleep when thier bored. If a driver \"behind the wheel\" falls asleep that can be very dangerouse not only for them but the drivers around them. They can go off the road or even slide into another vehicle. However, not having to drive yourself if your going on a long trip could give you a chance to relax for a little amount of time.\n\nSometimes depending on other people and/or things isn't very good. While depending on your smart car something could happen. Everyday some type of electrionical system breaks down. What if thats your smart car? If you depend on something electrional for exapmle your smart car anything can malfunction. You can be driving down the road and all the sudden a wire breaks and your car no longer has control of itself. However, any type of car can be unsafe and malfuction and you can end up crashing. Smart car or no smart car nothing is garunteed.\n\nSo even though a smart car can alert you unsafe situations like being to close to an object it can be dangurous at the same time. I encourage you to just go ahead and not be lazy and drive yourself around. You have a less likly chance of creating a crash or being in a crash. Its unsafe, it can make you tired or bored not driving yourself around, and its not always the best idea to depend on other things. This is why a smart car will not be on the top of my list anytime soon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear There lots talk arguments computers wether benefits society I belive benefit society One reson communicate others Another reson many things computers even world wide web Haveing computers always handy You talk web chat friends This one time online I found old friend I havened seen five years Whenever I come home school I ll go computer talk friends The computers great place make plans catch buddies My next reson benifit society much It s like home amusment park The internet wonderfull thing either home work play games even I ll sit two three hours play game But still exercise daily yes computers get addicting always good go outside exersise Many people say population computer check email go computer every ten minutes yes heathy dissition In conclution I belive computers indeed benifical I stated many resons They great communication friends also infinint amount things So nt computer go get one They worth wild", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, several people do a lot of activities and create a negative impact on plants and animal species. Some segments of society reckon that it is already too late to take any steps to tackle this problem; however, counterparts of the society insist that the effective solutions should take to tackle this situation. There are split opinions regarding to this topic, though both have their pros and cons as per everyone's perspective. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed.\r\n\r\nTo embark on, there is no doubt for some people who think that we can not do anything to resolve this problem in this cut-throat competitive business world. Because they believe that many species of plants and animals have already disappeared from our world and it is impossible to get back them. If we try to acquire them or strive to protect them, luxury facilities will be reduced and this would be difficult for people to live in this fast-moving world. for example, in 2013 various studies conducted in the USA found that several species disappeared from our ecosystem because of deforestation in order to give wide range of service to the society Thus, in this situation, it is better to do nothing to reverse the problem.\r\n\r\nWhy everyone should take corrective measures to curb this negative effects? The underlying reason behind this is that if we do not take care about environment then it would be more critical in the future so the government should impose some rules and regulation on such as if anyone causes harm or kill animals, he/she should be penalized. For instance, they should ban on plastic uses as it is more dangerous to animals, people should responsible to plant trees at their homes as it is not only helpful to save extinct species but also would help to protect our environment. The more liable about the plants and animals, the better life would be.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is still time to take the initiative to protect ourselves as well as protect our environment by doing a lot of activities. That is why I would say that although we can not reverse the damages, we can stop enormous further damage which is being done by humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been in class listening to the teacher but just don't understand anything they're saying ? Now there's a new technology called the Facial Acting Coding system. It can detect your emotions by viewing the movement of your facial muscles. If schools added this new technology they could understand better on how a student is feeling during lessons and such.\n\nHaving this new technolgy would benefit teachers and students because if teachers know most of their class isn't understanding the material they'll change the way they teach so the class could understand better. Some students are too shy to ask for help and they move on not knowing what was just learned. In paragraph 6, it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused\" it also says \"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nHaving the Facial Action Coding System would be beneficial in schools because it can make learning more fun and effective. By just showing a students emotions would be really helpful for teachers and they could become better at what they teach. Get a Facial Action Coding System at your school !", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of certain technology such as the 'Facial Coding System' would be a very nice and prominant object to be used in school. In this essay I will be covering my opinions on how I view this type of technology in three different ideas that I have. My first paragraph will be about how schools can use this technology. Following my other two ideas that it wouldn't be as useful to students as it is adults or people who understand that type of data. My last idea is that it wouldn't benefit the students, as my rebbuttal.\n\nI can see schools using this as a fun project that would actually help others see who they really are as an individual. Some schools could try and learn more about themselves but other than that there's no use in trying it because what would you do with that type of information. Other organizations such as hospitals would be better off with it because they can help target kids who are hurt mentally or who have depression to help them out. In the beginning some kids would find this amusing and can learn a thing or two but it's more benefficial towards a better cause.\n\nAs my rebbuttal it's not useful for schools and it would not benefit anyone other than to see of find out how their expressions or emotions work. This is why I chose to argue for both sides because I see potential arguments or disputes. In the end of the day both sides would have won and have no issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most conspicuous things in the world today, that are people thinks about children and their philanthropic activities in their leisure time, if it can be viewed as a benefit or detrimental to society. From my point of view, I partially agree with this statement, there are many arguments not in favour of teenagers doing free duty, but at the same time, there are numerous advantages to doing social job freely.\r\n\r\nThere are a plethora of arguments in favour of my stance. The main one is that it inculcates is sense of the brotherhood and closely-knit one of society. Moreover, teenagers are learning to working and at the future have fewer problem with work and money, because they understand how to better trial. For example, more than 90% peoples who have started work from young age, more industrious and have less problem at the workplace. \r\n\r\nOn the flip side, has a different point of view. I believe that it doesn’t can be successful in the long term perspective to have unpaid work. First of all, I think, that for any work you need to pay, by that people more value what they have and don’t devalue the labour of others. Secondly, teenagers who have opportunities to earn money make their financial independence. For instance, according to The New York Times The students who started to make money early, in their growth have more chances to success in life. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are huge advantages for children who do unpaid social work. However, there is the other opinion view does not do it well. People should do, what they think will be better for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the computer reading facial experssions in the classoom for students is valuable because if they see the student get bored or not intrested they can tell what to show in there intrest so they can teach the students. It will be more helpful for the teachers to keep the students on task while on the computer. The teachers wont have to worry about the students not learning anything cause they are not intrested. Being able to read face expressions is a good idea and it helps alot on knowing weather the students are intrested or not. Some students won't tell you they dont like the way you are teaching them and they just get off task and not pay attention whats so ever.\n\nThere are alot of times that students get bored on how the teacher is teaching the extructions and just get distracted and not learn a thing. Having a computer help them with that will be awesome for both teachers and students. They will both get something out it by one learning and paying more attention and the teacher doings its job on helping them understand. Most students will enjoy the fact they can learn off something that intrests them the most. There won't be alot of class distraction.\n\nWe will have more students passings classes. Have more students on task. Teachers wont have to be complaining so much on how students are paying attention. Also on how they are distracting the class cause they are beyound bored. That is my opinion on why getting facial experssion is valuable!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology used in the story is valuable while it reads facial structure, it can evenpin point what exspetion Mona lisa has. They can figure out what she has by the computers information.\n\nFirst, the calculations that this computer has made is reflecting on her facial features. Paragraph 1 says, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Tis shows how the computer calculates to her facial features depending on muscle in the face. In paragraph 3 it states,\" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer modle of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nSecond, the desciption of this software take out different inits of emotions by you face structure, In paragraph 4 it states, \" The new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements, in a real face or in painting face of Mona lisa. By weighing in different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions\".This shows how the device works and what is exactly calculates.\n\nFinally, the many ways the computer claculates your facial structure depends on how you feel. In paragraph 6 it states,\"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do\". This shows how the demonstration of Mona Lisa makes a person feel happy and how they choose to mrket their product. Pragraph 6 also states,\" The same technology can make compuer animated faces more expressive\". This shows how they could furtther their computer development.\n\nThis computer is valuable and helps people figure out how people are feeling. The computer will be a good peice of equipment on the market is it is able to be used by proffessions and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change indeed threatens the existence of humankind and the natural world, but some people argue that we should adapt to the changing. In my opinion, I do not support the latter idea because we still have time to tackle the issue, causing less harm to the Earth.\n\tThe first reason why we have to keep our fighting for our planet is that the verge of extinction would impact on many kinds of creatures. In other words, natural habitats have been dangerously threatened with drought, wildfire, and many animals do not have a place to live or food to eat. For example, in Vietnam, the giraffe was a victim to numerous of temperature change, made them not able to continue due to lack of food and pollution from local factories. Due to the loss of these precious animals, the globe may suffer the lack of biological diversity, and it is hard for us to live on as the environment cannot develop without these animals.\n\tFurthermore, people will take hard lives because of the disaster. It is can be seen that global heating makes the sea level go higher, which means that a lot of cities will have completely covered with water, so they have to shut down. As a result, dwellers will have to immigrate to another area, causing overpopulation. Besides, problems can be also shown as diseases, famine, increased homeless and poverty, and the government cannot always come down with all the issues at once. The price of living with global warming, it is true more horrible and hazardous. \n\tIn conclusion, we have to continue preventing and deciding what is good for the climate, not just let the pollution keep on progress.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story way plant leaving geese represent change Saeng The hibiscus nt remembers back home The budding hibiscus shows Saeng s happiness home This paragraph shows familiarity budding plant gives Saeng courage ability overcome obstacle The geese paragraph represent keeping time The plant budd time geese return spring If author nt included final paragraph full effect memories Saeng would nt fully portrayed This line implies Saeng unable overcome obstacle newness place budds bring sense home able defeat obstacle driving test She confident", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars can help the world for the better in many ways. Some may argue otherwise. These cars can help us by reducing care accidents. Also these care consume less fuel. Finally it's just simply an easier way to travel.\n\nFor starters, car accidents will be reduced tramendously. Google has been testing their cars since 2009 and have not had a crash yet, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Having less accidents on the road will decrease the mortality rate for driving and simply make driving a simpler and safer activity to do.\n\nAlso, fuel consumption on these cars are way lower. That can help the environment in an extremely positive way, and help slow down global warming by not producing as many green has gasses such as carbon dioxide. \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" These cars can really make a difference in our world tomorrow.\n\nFinally, it's an extremely easy and convienent way to travel. By having us not drive, we can do other things that we wouldn't be able to do while we are occupied by driving. It's an easy simple way to go about driving and can make long car rides not as bad, because you have other things that can keep you entertained while the car does all the driving.\n\nI know driverless cars will soon no longer be apart of the future, but as apart of the present. These cars will help our society and help environment greatly. I believe driveless cars are the answer to lots of our problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever felt bored learing off a computer? Having the computer adapt to facial expressions would get the kids excited to learn, give the teachers a break, and increase learning rates tramendously. Having FACS in schools would increase how quickly kids learn and how the obtain it.\n\nFirst off having FACS in schools would get the kids excited to learn. The computer would adapt to their likes and dislikes so they would always be pleasing them. How would it know if they are really bored or confused is a common question, in paragraph 3 the text states \"the computer contructs a 3D model of the face; all 44 major muscles im the model must move like human muscles\" this all meaning that the computer can tell with 100% accuracy what you are feeling.\n\nSecondly it is difficult for teachers to please each kid individualy and work with each child 1 on 1 and with this technological advancment it will give teachers a break and require them to give minimal assistance to the kids. In this day and age technology is becoming a bigger and bigger part of our everyday soceity and less and less people are wanting to become teachers, so having a computer do the job for them and do it just as good is remarkable. The author wrote in paragraph 6 \"imagine a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" this quote from the article showing that they would do the teachers job and be able to adapt and please each student individualy.\n\nLastly having this technology in every school would increase learning rates greatly because it would work in a way to help and assure learning for each child individualy. The problem with teaching today is some kids dont learn as fast as other and the teacher doesnt slow down to make sure they know what they are doing, but with the FACS program it will allow kids to go at their own success rate and insure they are really learning. And with all this the kids will learn quicker as a hole because they are the computers only concern.\n\nAll in all the FACS program should be in every school because it would get the kids excited to learn, give the teachers a break, and increase learning rates tramendously. So lets give it a shot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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