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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the electoral college should be taken away because presidents that have won the popular vote have lost the election due to the electoral college and to me that just does not seem right \"Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency\"(source 2 Plumer 9). If it was not for the electoral college Gore would have won the election. If this country really is a government by the people and for the people then the government would get rid of the electoral college.\n\nThe electoral college is very outdated it has been in use sense the founding fathers made it \"The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise\" (source 1 OFR paragraph 1). it might have worked well back then but now it is outdated it has been three hundred years since it has been changed and it simply does not work that well anymore.\n\nIf there was no winner take all system it might just be a little more fair \"the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all-system\" (source 2 Plumer paragraph 13). Candidates do not even give every state a chance they usually just skip the state that they know they will not win over \"candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning\"(source 2 Plumer paragraph 13).\n\nThat is why iI think the electoral college should be taken out it is outdated, and it is unfair. If this country was really run by the people than the people would really get to pick the president. Those are my only really big issues with the electoral college, but that does not mean that I do not want to see it go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While planets in the solar system each have a unique characteristic that defines itself, Earth is the only known planet to support life. It is finally proven that Mars has water, but what about Venus? There is more to the hottest planet or Earth's \"twin\". The author agrees to the idea of studying Venus, despite the dangers present on the planet. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" says that it is similar like Earth, that is is potentially livable, and a good idea to build a spacecraft.\n\nVenus is similar to Earth based on its physical characteristics, such as dentisy and size. If life on Earth is safe with the density and size, why not Venus? In paragraph 4, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" This proves that Venus is similar to Earth, but could it mean it is livable?\n\nUnlike Earth, Venus' surface condition is very hostile, the temperature can liquidfy metal and the pressure can crush the spacecraft, even though both the planets' sizes are close to being the same. In paragraph 5, \"Just as our airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying and out their way.\" Another factor would be that \"...the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth's levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" Life on Venus will be challenging, but that doesn't mean it is inhabitable.\n\nBecause of the intense pressure and temperature on Venus, special types of spacecrafts will have to be made in order so that the craft does not melt or be crushed into a metal ball. Paragraph 7, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Technology is expensive, but that does not mean a person or a team should give up. \"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovation.\"\n\nOut of all the planets in the solar system, Venus is one of the trickiest especially with building a spacecraft that will not melt or be crushed by its immense pressure. Venus could potentially be habitable for spacecrafts and human life. The author supports studying the planet further in hopes that humans can have a second home if Earth is no longer sustainable. The author of \"The Challege of Exploring Venus\" says that Venus is similar to Earth because of its characteristics, that it is potentially livable for human life, and that building a spacecraft is a good idea as it can help scientists learn more about the planet. It is not a bad idea to research from curiosity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is starting to have a popularity among some countries,people try to find out the information about the past of the building or house they are living now. In my opinion, the only reason is the interest inside citizens about the history. Because they are doing that even if it is hard to make research about this. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, why it can be so interesting for someone?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever felt books offensive Maybe depends angers Somepeople think books music movies etc offensive way I know effect amount people together understand problem I think several ways take books libraries From I hear people go angry things question CAPS gets angry different somepeople others For example fan reads book author makes fun teases That way make someone offended angry book others get mad movie discriminates races kinds Like movies characterized stubborn ignorant human beings In view actually sort aggrivates none less shouldnt argue one major amendment freedom speech depends angers also like back world war people characterized short fat people big noses taking money away That offensive used usually talk people side I think something offends lightly time shouldnt worry get offended heavily none stuff say topic true maybe get someone else read dislikes likes That could help determine truly offrnsive people general Then main question would ask would CAPS next If I someone book I m reading offends massively I would contact library came ask read think offensive would likely take shelfs Now someone likes sports team reads book book talks trash team dont tell library thats waste time Just simply pick another book read I understand people get mad racism disrimination sports team So I hope people someday understand limit something actually offending Or maybe common nature us offended something like gets made fun That I think books taken shelfs good reasons silly one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper This letter I feel effects computers I think computers great interact family friends learn things going around world could help school work First I would like say interact family friends You go facebook myspace talk send pics comment peoples things There many groups join wich allows talk people meet new friends You also interact family facebook The second reason computers bad many websites find different information like science math history kind stuff There alot different topics learn You find information weather family history comes My last reasoning thinking way many kids homework computers people saying computers bad parents going allow use computer educational purposes like homework projects There many reason computers positive effects people But interacting family friends learning things around world education depends computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nI wanted to write you this letter to say that we should keep the electoral college. Because they tally the votes fair to elect the goverment and president that the people of this powerful country have elected to be their leader. The electoral college was one of the rules that our founding fathers made for our country which has kept our country stong in the past so why would we want to take away that cause that would be like erasing our countrys past and our fathers rule. The electoral college consists of 538 electors for the electoral college so if we take away this process cause its not a place then we are putting 538 people out of a job.\n\nFirst things First, we should keep the electoral college cause it is a great process that lets our people choose a leader of this brave and powerful country fairly by having the electors read the votes and tally them up and pick the leader the most people voted for but sometimes its not the most cause if bigger states with more powerful people vote for a diffrent president and the one president has the most votes but if the other one has the more votes from bigger states and cities like california then he gets the popular vote. The electoral college has never technically failed us it has gotten close in the John F. Kennedy election when state legislators were technically responsible for picking electors and that the electors could defy the will of the people so say like if John F. Kennedy got the popular vote then it could possibly not go to him cause the electors could get replaced with new ones that could oppose him. The mistakes were never to the point that it messed up our country just little mistakes that got fixed by a direct election which we have now a day so that these little mistakes cant mess our whole voting system up. We should keep the electoral college because it is proven that people have out voted electors in the Gore vs Bush election cause Bush got the electoral votes but Gore got the popular vote by the people.\n\nSecond of All, we should keep the electoral college because it was one of our founding fathers rules and processes and they were the people who founded and discovered this brave, powerful, and beutifal country so if we throw that away then we are betraying our fathers and our anceistors. Another thing is electoral college has of america and they aint running for president and they are aloud to vote which is fair cause it's everyones president not just only the people not appart of the constitution. The great rule that our constitution made for the electoral college was the mal-apportionment which means even if the large states has a bigger population they still could lose by virtue so if we dont have an electoral college that will not be possible then we would just get out voted by heavier states and electors. The electoral college is a great process for fair voting for our goverment and president and if we keep that running then we keep our country running as a healthy country.\n\nTo Wrap it up, I think we should keep our electoral college for many of reasons. one because its the fairest most strongest process of voting. two because it lets everybody vote including the electors. and last but not least it keeps our founding fathers rule going and keeps us loyal to our brave and powerful countrys leader.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The owners Empire State Building faced quite obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock mooring mast One first obsticles faced modify strengthen steal frameThis essential order building able support mooring mast dirigibles supposed dock Another great concern safety feared accident similar Hindenburg thought much worse accident could paragraph occurred city like New York The greatest obstacle faced however nature The violent air currents caused wind constantly shift would cause docked aircrafts swivel around around mooring mast paragraph A law prevented airships flying low also made dream great fear overcome This prohibited docking even approaching area Although dream may seemed possible begin builders realized many obstacles making dreams quite impossible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood happy Because They The boy Loved parents They leave friends Some family They would miss parents wanted better life thier children They Move", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mistaken Face\n\nNASA is a space program in the U.S. It has been for quite some time now. NASA has sent numerous things into space but one in specific has caused a great deal of curiosity through out the world. In 1976, a NASA spacecraft, Viking 1, took pictures of Mars and something unusual happened. A face apeared in a picture. At first NASA thought of the possibility of it being a foreign life form. But that possibility was stopped when scientists found out that it was just another Martian Mesa. A common landform on Mars. When the pictures were released to the public, many thought that NASA was lying, especially conspiracy theorists. They thought that NASA didn't want the public to know about an alien life form. That was very irrational.\n\nMany people don't like the idea of space exploration because they say it's a waste of money. If NASA encountered foreign life forms, it would only be benefitial to tell the public because then NASA would gain popolarity and skeptism of the program would decrease. Many people would be curios about it and would want to know more about the race. Therefore NASA would have a better reputation and be more popular because of their discovery.\n\nSecondly,technology has changed significantly since 1978. The original picture looks more like the face than any other one because of the old technology. In 1998, the picture looks more detailed. In 2001, it looks even more detailed. In 1976 the camera that took the photo only captured 43 meters per pixel making it much less definated compared to the picture taken in 2001 that captured 1.56 meters per pixel. This technology makes it less of a face.\n\nFinally, because of the newer and more advanced technology, NASA's scientists could look further in to the so called alien face. After studying it, the scientists concluded that the \"face\" was a mesa. A mesa isnt't only found on Mars. It can also be found on Earth. There is one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho and it even has the same height as the Face on Mars. The \"face\" is more of a natural landform than anything.\n\nNew technoogy, comparable lndforms, and the explanation of how alien races would benefit NASA helped the space program prove conspiricy theorists and the public wrong. All of these supports are hard evidence that the face was a mesa in disguise. Although the finding of an alien race would be revolutionary, it's safe to say that the \"face\" isn't the discovery of one. We'll just have to wait until the future to encounter a race that isn't our own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is Some argued that museums should be built to entertain people,while others believe that their purpose is to educate. As for meIn my opinion, I believe the role of gallery’ role should be educational.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the reason why most people many think it should be an enjoyable place museums are mainly for enjoyment is that they regard it as a photo-taking landmark opportunity. With the development of media fields various media and technology, encourages more vloggers individuals and infleuncersor ‘ups’ visit the imposing signature buildings which help them to produce outstanding photos., as they have the relatively popularity, yMany of these younger people are popular and not interested in the deeper youngsters will ignore the true meanings of the museum and follow their steps, .some of them require museums to build up some spectacular ornaments to have a superior site that good for selfie For example, in China there have been recent petitions online to build or renovate museums to enhance the quality of exhibits for taking selfies with famous works of art and historic artifacts .\r\n\r\nNonetheless, I agree the latter view that which the museums is are to for education educate people. It is respectful that people built up museums is for yearning the past most museums were build for exactly this reason. For example, in Peking, the Palace Museum is the a powerful landmarks of ChinaChinese history. It represents the history of the Ming and Qing dynasty and is regarded as the most educational foundation for people both Chinese and foreign tourists interested in the history of China.no matter is Chinese or the tourists in different colors to know more about the country and the story hidden back. Individuals who come away from such museums can apply their deeper understanding not only to their life but also feel their cultural identity is clearer. Paying the revere is the basic requirement for people their entering the museum as we are facing our ancestors’ story and learn to be grateful and understand why we need to cherish the memory of the dead soldiers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people many regard museums as a kind of real-life history book for youngsters and a place we need to protect well. Therefore, I agree believe the museum is to educate people to understand the past and to be grateful for it", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these modern times, individuals are able to find out more about their surroundings. Knowing more about one’s home is also an interesting topic. This essay will outline possible reasons for this situation and explain how may citizens achieve the information they seek for. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there might be two main answers to this interest in the history of buildings. Firstly, the ageing process may add more value to a building, so folk can feel more special about their houses. For example, there are many videos about historical buildings on Youtube, which is an online streaming platform, and these videos are highly on demand. Secondly, because of overpopulation, available housing is quite hard to find, so prices are rising almost daily. Because of this, old buildings are becoming popular too. For instance, in some urban cities, authorities are now giving permission to reconstruct these buildings, and also giving funds. So, more citizens want to know about their buildings, in order to achieve these opportunities. \r\n\r\nIt can be said that there are various ways to find out more about the history of a house. First of all, one can easily achieve many resources on the internet. Local administration websites, for example, can be a good start for searching. Also, most town councils are now able to give a city plan, and sometimes they may provide old records to local inhabitants too. Before the internet, these records were the only formal papers, and now they contain a part of our history.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, interest in history is rising day by day, especially when it comes to our buildings. Being able to add value to our living quarters is one reason, but also overpopulation matters too. One can use the internet or ask town councils, in order to find more information about this delicate subject.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The government of every nation takes steps for continuous growth and development. Nowadays, people are debating on the topic of the government priority. Some people believe that the top most priority of government is to continue growth of the economy. Whereas, another group of thinkers supports that the government should focus on the less fortunate or poor condition. I would like to discuss both the views in the following paragraphs.\nEconomy is one of the crucial elements of a country. If economic growth increases, it means nation is developing which impacts around the globe. However, Other countries want to make good business with the nation and it also shows that becoming strong nation. It also represent that people of that nation are creating opprounties and hard workers. For intsance, India's economy growth rises every year which helps to make more business other countries. Apart from that , Economy growth reflects developement of infrastructure, technology , education and living status of people. Therefore, economic growth is important.\n On the other hand, people think that government should focus on other poor thing. Firstly, pollution and climate change. In the present, pollution is major problem to every nation. It causes dangerous to human kind as well animal kind. The air pollution is producing diseases which deagrading the health and environement. Secondly, poverty is also a major concern. Due to poverty, people are dieing and not things for survivals. The government should focus on these problems. Foe instance, In india thousands of people are died beacuse of poverty every year. And everyone have right to live\nIn conclusion, The government should have top most priority is economic growth but they also make more efforts to slove the problems. They havee to launch some schemes, rule and regulation for improvement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all i would like to say ,\"For one aliens are not real at all so thats out of the convo\". I aloso would like to know why is it so crazy for mars to have a face like figure on it. We have volcanos weird rocks all type of stuff , even in las veagas its a figure on the mountens that form the face of the devil . Thats way more scaryer then having a face on mars . But still how do u know aliens are even real ? the face could've came fro anything such as mars getting to hotand starting to brake apart . Neverthless, on april 8th, 2001 a cloudless day in cydonia, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look . they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras absolute maxuiam resolution . Each pixel was in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Computers today negative effect people The valuable time getting daily exercise reduced see family enough costs outrageous Owning computer surely good idea sitting around day idea workout Having computer would bad physical lifestyle Clicking mouse typing away moving hands whole body An individual nt use computer daily f large amounts time would healthier someone always uses computer I remember seeing commercial children lives eneded later life computer usage tween Not unhealthy antisocialism probable Many kids even adults spend precious family time playing sims creating ideal family This however acceptable Spending time family something precious When asked computer usage said could easily became addicted turns addicted family suffer They stop inviting places You would nt want loose people going ther another CAPS shouts computer You another virus uh oh s deleting hardware scholastic essays important bookmarked websites sentimental photographs Do idea much would cost even try retrieve data Well d alot I know youre probably thinking This could nt happen reality yes storing things computer much riskier hard copy It also save money Furthermore appliances use electricity re even plugged outlet So get electric bill nt surprised computers costly s worth one Computers another unnecessary thing life It take away overall health reduce family time cost big bucks It fact survive without computer But without hjealth Well d dead I consider ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i don't think that the new technology is valuable. I don't think it's valuable because there is really no need to check how people feel. I think that would be valuable in other situations, like for depressed people, or for like an aslyum to check how these people feel. I think that it would be a waste of money, it would be to much money for all the features to add. The passage said that it Facial Action Coding System would have to scan your face and i think that would be a lot of money for just making something that would be able to check how you feel. You could sell it to certain people that help people out with emotional things, so like they would scan their face in the begining to see how they feel, after the meeting they have the person in charge would have to scan their face to see if that meeting changed the way they felt from the begining. It would be good for certain uses but to have it in schools wouldn't really help. I think it wouldn't help in schools because i don't think people would just like it if you just had to scan there face to see how they feel, i think you have to ask them first and if they say yes you can see how they feel. I don't think we should have this around because there is really no need why you need to check how people feel if you don't know who they are. Even if they are just students doing what they need to do i don't think they would like people knowing how they feel, i know i wouldn't like people scanning how i felt if i don't know them because some people don't like people knowing the stuff they feel and how they feel unless you know them and can trust them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear In world changed much better Technology become advanced new cures different diseases Computers one great benefits They let communicate quicker You keep family members old friends You also talk different people live another state country continent These quote says communication key I ll put details next paragraph I remember one time long ago way communicate letters would walk Now wih computers one email instant message Someone get messgae By sending letter take Even call one home answer But get emails instant message ways It also nt cost send long distnace Which bring yo next topic A profressor said Computers taking time But think s actually reconnecting family members old friends For example move able see Then get new phone number forget people number If computer go great social networking side called look old friends name distant realtives find s really Than family members know Now I ll bring topic The world wide web big place peolple On world wide web meet new people live state country But find starting click meet person different rare Thats ok learn new thing different cuture While two something common share things like try re learning something new fun time Now ll see s time get computer rather never experience With computer communcate quicker You reconnect distant relatives old friends You also talk different people like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit important events occured story For example story set highway set cyclist able This signifigant events story since away lot cyclist led almost dehydration Plus hilly This led excution cyclist one could see setting important outcome story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke wants to convince you to become a seagoing cowboy. I am here to tell you that no one has to listen to him but im going to write an argument about luke trying to convince you.\n\nSo luke is trying to tell you to become a seagoing cowboy but luke qutoes that he had experenced being a cowboy but some of you might not of had that experince like he did so when your working you might get hurt really bad. Also if you are sea sick which means that you really cant go on trips like luke does because you might get sick. Luke tries to convince you by telling all these great things you would see but the captian might have you a different job on then you will be missing out plus i would rather go with my family how about you?\n\nIn this paragraph ill be talking about the dangers of becomeing a seagoing cowboy. In this story luke claims that he got hurt on night watch. On night watch you might get hurt because it was to dark out and the the floor was slppery and you fall and get hurt. Another danger is crashing say everyone is sleeping in their cabins and your boat gets drifted and crashes right into a iceberg. There is also another possibility is that your boat gets drifted into the middle of nowwhere and no one knows where there at so you just get stranded at sea. Another possibility is that if your crew is on a long long journey you might run out of food for the the humans and the animals which will lead to starvation and some humans might die but most of the animals probably will die.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driveless car are not good at all because we will have nothing to work for. But at the same time there are postitive effects and negative ones as well . Driverless car would make a huge change in our world today. There would be alot less bad things happening if they were driverless. People wouldnt have to go through the trouble to push the gas to make the care go or anything.\n\nThe postitive effects of turing to driveless cars are very high. People want this to happen so they are going to try to find all the positive thing about it and let other people know. The cars that Sergey Brin are creating would use half of the fuek that todays taxes and offer more flexibility than a bus. The cars have been driven more than half a million miles without crashing but the thing about that is that google care arent truly driverless. The cars still alret the driver when they are pullin gin and out of driveways or dealing with traffic suchas getting aroung roadwork and accidents.\n\nThe good thing right now is the cars are not completely driveless becuase you can steer, accelerate, and brake themseleves, but they are still designed to tell the driver that the road ahead requires them to something like get through work zones and around accidents.\n\nThere are many negitive thing to having driveless cars as well such as making sure that the automatic will happen at all times. What if what its suppose to do doesnt work out and then you do something else and you hurt someone or yourself.\n\nThe person would have to stay alert at all times just is case it doesnt do what its suppose to do. Even though its a drive less car you still have to keep your hands on the wheel at all times so you could not do anything that you wanted to do. They said that you had to take over when the car gets into situations and i dont think that is fair becuase its suppsose to be all driverless.\n\nSome thing make me think that driveless cars are good but I don't agree at all. I feel like you have to put in just as much work as you do now to dirve the \"driveless\" car. You shoudn't have to keep your eyes are the road at all times because its suppose to do what it is suppose to do when its happening. The article said that it will cause less wrecks and i disagree becuase if people are doing what the are suppose to be doing you can get in a wreck so easily. I think that we should be able to control it whenever it is needed. If people dont want to us the \"driverless\" car they should be able to have an opition to turn it off and on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having driverless cars will better mankind in a number of ways.\n\nFrom safety to gas usage; there are more positives than negatives to driverless cars.\n\nThe advancement in this technology will contribute to the many unimaginable human feats that have once been called impossible\n\nFirst, safety is the main factor for these cars.\n\nSome of these self driving cars at the moment have a radar attached to the roof of the car to scan the area around itself do determin if it is safe.\n\nWhen the car deems there is a problem it alerts the driver.\n\nAlso having a car that can drive on its own does not mean you are free do not pay attention to the road because there are light displays that can turn on instantly and that will require the diver to take control from that point.\n\nThis meaning a driver texting and driving can be caught off gaurd if not paying attention to the road as they should.\n\nAs the passage states in paragraph eight \"In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\n\nNext, with the advancements that these self diving car manufacturers have mad over the short amount of time that they have there is no telling what they can improve on with more time.\n\nGiven more time theses companies have a chance to have a car drive on its own one hundred percent of the time.\n\nThe passage states \"There was no way, befor 2000, to make something interesting.\" They are talking about self driving cars.\n\nThey go on to say that they didnt have the technology (radars, computers, mapping) to do so. The fact of the speed in which these advancements have come show promise.\n\n\"So just how driverless will the cars be in the near future?\"\n\nLast, another key factor with these self driving cars is the amount of gas consumption.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system where driverless cars form a taxi system.\n\nHe believes that the cars would use have of the fuel of today's taxis.\n\nIf what Sergey says is true he can change the world by conserving gas by applying these cars to nations around the world.\n\nThe begginging of selfdriven cars just shows humans how far we have come with our technology.\n\nThere are problems and improvements needed to be made but they dont outwiegh the many positive aspects of having these cars.\n\nSelfdriving cars are the the future today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth.\n\nTherefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value.\n\nOur travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nA vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditios by staying up and out of their way.\n\nAt thirty plus miles above the surface, temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degrees, but the iar pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\nVenus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nThe value of returning to Venus seems indisputable.\n\nLong ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life.\n\nVenus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\n\nAstronomers fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system.\n\nVenusiam geology and weather presents additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent ligtning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even to Mercury is closer to our sun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The industrial era has improved human's life on a new level, but at the same time, damaged the Earth at an alarming rate. The more resources are exploited, the more vulnerable the ecosphere is. This essay seeks to analyze the roots of the matter and give out a solution.\n\nTo begin with, every activity of the world industrial system functions solely based on natural resources. From the small food packaging to the gigantic plane, it was these production enterprises that utilize the majority of the raw supplies. For this reason, when the market needs are on the rise, more materials will be used and thereby, leading to resources exhaustion. Moreover, the production procedures discharge emissions and waste into the environment, resulting in air, water and soil pollution. Therefore, the increase in the demand for goods leads to incessant exploitation and exposure, which subsequently debilitate the ecosystem.\n\nUnder the circumstances that the world industry relies heavily on the environment and is constantly exploiting the resources, it is unfeasible to thoroughly resolve the problem within a near-sighted future. However, applying some methods can help improve the situation. For example, many businesses are encouraged to substitute renewable energy, such as electricity, hydro, or wind, for limited fuels. Many world-leading corporations like Tesla has been pioneering in producing electric cars instead of conventional gasoline-based vehicles, which has helped to reduce harmful emission. Besides using engine transportation, people are also incited to travel on foot or by bicycles as it also contributes to improving the situation.\n\nIn conclusion, by taking advantage of natural resources and releasing pollutants to serve for producing goods, humans are imposing burdens on the Earth. Cutting down the polluted discharges is a temporary solution, and to absolutely solve the problem requires more time and effort.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it would be unethical to have technology that reads students' emotinos; that is if the technology is sharing this information with the \"outside world.\"\n\nOn the other hand if the technology is just reworking lesson plans that seems alright, but it also seems like that can be easily abused and taken advantage of.\n\nSo ultimately I suppose that I am against technology that can read students' emotions; also if we take into account that technically teachers being able to use this technology themselves, thanks to evolution, and them already being able to do this, as stated in the article, with this \"technology\" then what is the point?\n\nMy reasoning behind being against includes: it is a violation of privacy, it would most likely just end up offending a lot of teachers, and it would be completely pointless.\n\nThis is totally unethical!\n\nWe would be setting up a device that could read a student's face then discern how they feel about the class in the moment.\n\nBut what if it is not the class that they are having feelings about.\n\nNot only would the computer now know this, but because of, most likely some law, that private information that it is obtaining is now shared with other people.\n\nAlso how do you think the students would take it if they found out that their personal feelings were being shared; we do not like it when our friends do it how would this be any different.\n\nAlthough I do understand why this would be helpful, seeing as it help to determine many different catalysts of events to come; one example of this being the school shooting that was in Florida in February 2018.\n\nBack to the point of this information being shared with others.\n\nThis machine of sorts is recording the emotion of the students, accurately hopefully, well if a teacher sees this recorded information then who knows what could happen.\n\nFor example say I was really fed up with my teacher,\n\nbut I did not show that emotion openly and therefore they did not know.\n\nThen this machine records my facial expressions, and then procedes to inform the teacher of this finding.\n\nI could get into a lot of trouble.\n\nAnd not only that, but a teacher that a lot of people like could be left feeling very hurt.\n\nThis could bring down the number of people who want to be teachers, and have the really good teachers leave teaching thinking that they were not liked as a teacher.\n\nThe other side of this argument does make sense though to have a teacher be able to adapt their lesson plans to better suit the student would be great, but again someone could get really hurt this way, either by a misreading or maybe someone's emotion was not about the class.\n\nWhatever the reason I still think it would be a bad idea.\n\nIn all honesty this would be just plain stupid to have.\n\nAs stated in the article teachers already do this.\n\nBecause of how we have empathy for one another, and are able to read the emotions of another person teachers are already able to determine if their students need a change in lesson plan or not.\n\nAlso, and this leads into my next point, if a student has a serious issue with a class they will probably just talk to the teacher themselevs, and work it out that way\n\n; instead of having a computer do it for them which also seems more offensive for a teacher to have to find out that way.\n\nNow, on to the next point, student could just abuse this.\n\nAs stated in the article these could be used to help teachers make lesson plans, or in this example not teach at all.\n\nFirst of all abusing these would be so easy; all you would have to is act like you hate everything about said class and bam!\n\nThere you go you have successfully eliminated any hope of that acutally working properly.\n\nThe teacher will get the report and feel\n\nso defeated that they, in this case, will not teach anymore.\n\nIn conclusion I strongly vote against having these installed in schools; that is if the notion would ever actually be considered.\n\nMy arguments stand that it would be unethical, possibly offend a lot of people and with that ruin shcools, and it would be completely pointless.\n\nThis would be an awful idea in my opinion, although I am sure that there are people who would disagree with me and I understand why.\n\nI just do not think that these would be taken well by the students, the people who this would be used on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief that the money has to be ready themselves before people quit their job because they are old. However, there is a more persuasive argument that people should be supported by the government.\n\nOn the one hand, most people usually save their earned money for any reason. One of them, most important reason is that when they do not have a job for their age and the aid of government is limited also the budget of the country is not fully so they have to effort to gather the money. For example, the government offer some money to retired people but it is very insufficient to manage their house because they should be paid many parts such as buying food, paying rent and medicine.\n\nNevertheless, the organization have to support the retired people because there are some people who do not prepare the plan for their's life after retirement. Moreover, these people mostly can not be working for a long time or be getting sufficient money. For instance, when the government stop giving assistance to people, many nations are not able to continue and can suffer to their life because they do not have enough money.\n\nTo sum up, it is apparent that people prepare the money for before retirement. On the other hand, it is more undeniable that a different one to ready for the individuals, the organization should be support nations. In my opinion, the government have to assist people because it is the reason the country part and why they are existence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper editor opinion effects computers people staying computer bad rot brain like video games good reasons computers good help Sometimes computers help handeye coordination You use computer homework search stores etc Some computers really slow new ones computers also help read better little You could play talk people like friends Listening music easy thing could website songs like listen yo many people use computer find jobs use look ways eat right work paying bills online easyer paying real The computer easy way pay agree opinion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I support driverless cars or am I against driverless cars? Although in the passage, they talk about positive aspects of creating a driverless car, I do not agree in the making of them. Many consequences can come to play when manufactoring and purchashing these cars. I am against the development of driverless cars because, in my opinion they are a waste of time and a waste of money.\n\nFirst of all, there can be a technology malfunction. When the development of the generic car is happening, the car gets tested to make sure that it is safe enough and won't be dangerous to the passengers. Putting more expensive technology into a car can be dnagerous and even deadly. Everyday technology even fails sometimes such as; celular devices, computers, kitchen appliances, even cars that already have a touch of technology.\n\nWhat make you think that a car with more technology is safe for you. How can a diverless car be proven to be safe enough to trust a person's life. If an accident were to happen, due to a technology malfunction, what will the developers and the \"driver\" use to defend their case with. It is to risky to make a car with so much technology involved.\n\nSecond of all, what if an incident did happen? Whose fault would it be? If it were a normal case, with a normal car, it would be more simple to say which person to blame because both people would be driving. If technology was involved in the incident and it was a malfunction, it would be the driverless passenger. Then that passenger would bring up the developers as the one to blame. The develpoers have more money and more power than the person who bought the car. So they're going to do anything to not be the ones to blame.\n\nLastly, it is very expensive to keep up with such a luxury car. The parts would be more expensive. The development would be way more expensive. Where are they going to get all that money? How much would it be to purchase one? What if you get into a wreck? How much will it be to get everything fixed? All unanswered questions that people will ask when they're in that situtation. All those problems can be avoided by simpily buying a car with not as much technology in its interior.\n\nIn conclusion, I disagree with the development of driverless cars. They would be very unsafe. It would be more difficult to figure out who to blame for the accidents if they were caused by a driverless car passenger. And it would be very expensive. Other people would be exulted knowing that they dont have to drive, but keep in mind that a trip to the market, could cause you your life. My point is, technology is great but, would you really trust your life to it ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being pactient Well I baby cousin coming adopted call I never sean befor I seen hillper photoes So I heard voice phone sound sound cute Im missing ant uncle I havent seen years Out still past waiting come tomorrow today Its surpize I pashing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, education is crucial for the overall development of humanity. However, the academy provides an atmosphere for learners in the simplest way but the new generation is unable to concentrate at school. This essay will reticulate some of its problems and propose some possible solutions to alleviate this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the modern Era is of educated people; so education is considered the chief concern among parents as well as the government. The scarcity of education leads to unemployment and reduces the growth of the nation to a huge proportion. Youngsters, who are the future of any country, need to be educated for betterment. They are not able to focus on their studies at institutions because of the old teaching methods. for example, in India majority of states are in a developing situation and lack advanced facilities in all aspects; one of them is the old teaching method of reading books again and again with only theoretical way. old fashion brings Monotony to recruitment.\r\n\r\nfurthermore, mostly in all schools in India still use an old method of teaching \"beat and teach\". Lack of confidence among students feels anxiety to attend the institution. To tackle this issue and create enthusiasm in toddlers, modernisation in teaching is necessary and it will arouse the productivity of students and teachers as well. Not only the corporate sector but also the regime should provide an exotic experience with up-to-date technology.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, modern learning and teaching methods are alluring and appealing which creates zeal between learners and teachers and help to reduce the dilemma to focus on studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are Here!! Some may like them and some may not. The future is here and no more buying cars. I believe that this is newest and biggest thing yet.These car are safe and easy to use.The Google cofounder Sergey Brin has a public transport taxi system with these amazing driverless cares.\n\nEven though these cars have saftey rules they still are easy to use. For saftey rules drivers must be alert.I know that drivless cars and regular cars must come with saftey rules. It say that human drivers must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.This means when the human driver is ready to drive they would be able to shift over from driveless mode.\n\nThe driverless cars may sound good all good ,but it does have some negative aspects. Drivers would have to make sure if there's any computer problems.In only few states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars.In my opinion I feel that what's the point of getting one of these cars and it not being legal for them being tested. Many peope would believe that these cars may not even be such a good idea.\n\nIn conculsion future is here and they have created driverless cars.Driverless cars have mostly positive aspects in my opinion.Even though there are some negative aspects as well.The driverless cars does have saftey rules many would think that it wouldn't come with saftey rules.These such cars would fundamentally change the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting indeed affect cyclist First story describing setting says there one sight building car structure kind basically giving hint foreshadow something bad going happen hes alone Another description setting affects cyclist says Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit pretty much saying danger ahead something bad happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One christmas year two ago drove grandparents house They live cold water took hours All relatives dads side All presents tree I couldnt wait open The parents talking nonsense I opened big mouth said can open presents stated open presents adults go first They slowest gifts openers ever I rip presents hands open presents I didnt thought I patient After finished I said yes course thought little cousins open next Let tell arent fast either After I finally got open presents In end worth I got xbox That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In s world evolveing new technology s comeing age One tecnology s Dirigible people thougt expand s use One idea s moring mast Empire State building This great idea things stood s way made impossible A major problem safty consdiring feet Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen instead helium hydrogen highly flammable If thing caught fire everyone inside would burn death crass ground kill everyone Another huge problem winds ease pushing corse The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents These winds made simply impossible happen One problem bee looked beging law The practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State building existing law airship s flying low urban areas moring Mast fantastic idea many things standing s way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This \"Face on Mars\" should'nt be a big deal, I mean its only a natrual landform why do we need to keep going back and take pictures of it because you and other people think that it was created by aliens. The\"Face on Mars\" was not created by the aliens and if it was wouldn't that mean that they were trying to reach out at us, if the aliens were trying to reach out to us dont u think they would of done it a while back and if so have a better plan then putting a face on mars.\n\nWhen NASA unveiled the image for all too see the caption note they put said \"huge rock formation....which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Even NASA didnt thing much of it other than it was a huge rock formation that was on mars. If NASA thought that it was a formation created by aliens they wouldnt of ever let the \"Face on Mars\" star in Hollywood films, appear in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store check out lines for over 25 years!\n\nSome people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, Just like people say that their keeping Area 51 a secret.\n\nIf it was really evidence of life on Mars then they would of hidden it like you guys say they do with Area 51.\n\nThe people who went out and took another look at Mars because people said that it was cloudy and that perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze said that\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can dicern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" they went on by saying. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" What they found out is that the picture actually shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-LANDFORMS common around the American West. I hope all of this proves my point to you that the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natrual landform and not a marking created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author said that venus was a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents because venus might be are only place to go to if we have any prblems over here because venus is the only earth like planet out there. The author said a long time there were sightings from there that resimbled that of earth like there were plants,valleys,mountains,and craters but it aslo looks like there was oceans there.\n\nVenus is often referred to as earths twin because it almost resimbles the earth a bit like its density and size and the second closest too the sun. Mars is our other platetary neighbor, they also orbit around the sun a different speed then us. That means that we'er closer to mars sometimes and sometimes vneus. Though venus gets close to us it is very hard for us to land on it that its been more then three decades since our last spaceship has landed on venus. Theres a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide on venus. The even harder part are its clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus its suface temperture is average of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and it atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience here on earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring unfamiliar destinations with families or friends has always been considered one of the best approaches to enjoying a holiday, whereas, the problem aroused by this phenomenon has been obvious that individuals should be accountable for the consequence of their behaviours. As I am concerned, responsibility for cherishing and preserving the surroundings during the tour ought to be taken by everyone.\r\n\r\nFirstly, cultures and environment are priceless and irreversible resources for humans, that is to say, only protecting them from unforeseeable influence brought by increasing touring demands is the most effective way to prolong their lifespans of them, like minor ethnic culture and splendid sightseeing. Secondly, human actions possibly affect cultures and the environment. For example, visitors need to abide by the customs and conventions which the locals always do, otherwise, unpredictable conflicts or risks would be triggered to cause damage whatever is tangible or intangible. In short, the preservation of culture and the environment is essential.\r\n\r\nHowever, the responsibility should not lie to tourists only, namely, authorities also should issue relative laws to define whether the action taken by tourists is legal or not based on the principle of keeping cultures and environment safe. For instance, the local government could build tour centres for guiding visitors to tour in a good manner and set warning signs to alert visitors in case they misbehaviour unintentionally.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly support the idea that tourists should raise their awareness of protecting cultures and the environment from harm rather than posing potential threats to them. Meanwhile, the local administration ought to take measures to maintain the present status and assist foreign tourists to actively conform to the regulation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few argue that the importance of customs and traditions should not be appropriate for behaving in modern life. Although I reject this viewpoint to some extent, I largely concur with the idea that the originality of customs and traditions should not be diminished because it is a part of cultural heritage, and this essay will justify my stance with examples.\r\n\r\nExploring my main stance, one pivotal point to consider is customs and traditions are created from rigid configurations, but it still alive and ready to adapt for innovation in the modern era. When nations pose threats from external culture, it leads to the process of assimilation where both conventional things and new things are mixed to create new traditions without changing the originality. For example, Japan, the most prestigious country, has a special attitude to always giving honor to the older one, even though the world has changed, the inhabitants believe that older people are part of their ancestors who worked as successors in the past. Customs and Traditions show the uniqueness of the nations is additional justification to support this side. If the country diminishes its local customs and traditions, then the originality of the country's behavior would be lost.\r\n\r\nShifting to the minor side, it is important to recognize that sometimes customs and traditions should not be the way of thinking about behavior because they have many drawbacks, such as praying to statues and sacrificing people for ceremonial events. Not only does it prevent the country from modern development But also it can be categorized as negative impact on society. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the relevance of customs and traditions not truly working amid the change of behavior, my significant accordance is that both of them need to be preserved because each country has specific customs and traditions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have many postiive and negative effects and ideas that they could have on our world.\n\nThe driverless car that Google cofounder Sergey Brin invisions \"would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" (P1)\n\nThis would allow for the United States to purchase less fuel and in the end prevent us from spending so much money.\n\nThese kind of cars would be a great help to anyone making a long distance trip.\n\nYou could begin your trip one day and fall asleep and have driven several hours.\n\nThe idea has been tested by many different companies and is still being developed to this day.\n\nDriverless cars would be a great benefit to the people of America, it would allow for people to save money on gas, and not have to worry about crashing because the car would drive itself.\n\nWith all of the sensors and other driverless cars, it would seem that the manufacturers could prevent accidents.\n\nI believe that driverless cars could be a great benefit to this country, but they cannot replace all cars with them.\n\nWe still need fire trucks and police vehicles to keep people safe, but they would have a great impact on our nation.\n\nOne way that some companies are making driverless cars is by using \"smarter roads.\" (P3)\n\nGeneral Motors for expample designed a concept car that could run on a special test track.\n\nThis track would send radio signals to the front end of the car.\n\nAnother way that some companies are trying to make driverless cars are by using sensors.\n\nGoogle modified a Toyota Prius with \"position-estimating sensors, a rotating sensor, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" (P4)\n\nGoogle used all of these sensors in different ways to begin to develop their own version of the driverless car.\n\nThe driverless car has been attempted by many different companies and each one has their own version with their own flaws.\n\nDriverless cars seem to be a thing of the future, but in reality it could be here before we know it.\n\nWith all the different technology and all the money some of these big companies have it is a wonder the driverless car is not invented already.\n\nThe different companies have designed driverless cars now that still require the assistance of a driver.\n\nThe cars can brake, accelerate, and stop by themselves.\n\n\"All are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" (P7)\n\nThis allows for some people to argue that driverless cars are not reliable, and it is not that at all.\n\nDriverless cars have no way of knowing what to do in a situation like that.\n\nThe smart thing is to have the driver take over in that spot and would prevent a potential accident.\n\nThe problem with this is that the car needs some way of notifying the driver if he falls asleep.\n\nSome designers have thought to use a vibration in the seat to alert the driver.\n\nThe Google car for example has a voice that announces when the driver needs to take over.\n\n\"Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\" (P7)\n\nOne big argument when it comes to driverless cars is the potential for an accident.\n\nThe worry is that if the technology in the car quits working and the car crashes, who do you blame?\n\nTo me it seems like the manufacturer should be blames since they designed the car with the technology that failed.\n\nThe driver had no control over the technology, he just had to wait until the car needed his assistance.\n\nThis argument is one of many when it comes to driverless cars and it is an important one.\n\nIf the car crashes somedbody has to get blamed and if the driver is not actually driving why would he get blamed.\n\nThis could be one debate that pushes back the release of the driverless car until someone comes up with a compromise.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that driverless cars would be a great benefit to our country as a whole.\n\nI assume and hope that a company will release a driverless car in the next few years to allow me to experience such a thing.\n\nIt would be like a roller coaster.\n\nYou do not know how you are going to get where you are going and do not know how bumpy the ride will be but it will be an adventure.\n\nThat is what intrigues me the most about driverless cars, the adventure that is coming.\n\n\"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\n\nMercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" (P10)\n\nThis just makes me even more excited for the release of driverless cars, it could happen in the next 4 years.\n\nA driverless car would be a great invention and would allow the United States to make money if they were able to produce it and sell it.\n\nDriverless cars are coming to us soon and they are going to excite many people because of the technology put into it, and also the seemingly magic wayt hat it drives you.\n\n\"The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\" (P10)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"No one cares about the environment.\" said no one ever. The environment we live in, wether its a crowded city like NewYork, or Paris, or even a regular suburban community, is a wonderful place. There is one issue though that has spread among communities, and that is the high amount of car usage. Having a car and being able to track to great distances in a short amount of time is great, but look at what cars do to the environment. Also when it comes to buying a car, you're basically throwing your bank account out the window. And dont get me started with the worries of having your children play in the streets.\n\nNow, lets discuss the crazy amount of money you have to throw away on a car. You either throw away a fortune on a good car, that runs good, and then end up taking years to pay it off, or you buy a cheap, beat up car, that is always in need of repair. Either way it is a lose, lose situation. Why buy these isanely priced cars when you can buy a nice bike that moves perfectly. At around five hundred dollars, to a thousand dollars a bike is easily the way to go. A bonus to buying a nice bike instead of a car, is that while you ride your bike, you'll get into shape in no time at all. Now if you need to track a great distance that riding a bike can not get you to fast enough, buses or mobile transport have bike racks on them so you can ride a bus to the nearest position to where you need to be then simply ride your bike for the remainder of the distance.\n\nThe main issue here with cars for most people, is that there is a large amount of pollution that comes with driving a car. In Paris the pollution from cars were so bad that Paris had to put a temporary ban on driving to help clear out all of the smog that was in the sky. Also, in America car pollution is the second largest source of pollution emissions. There is no other way to say it, cars make up a lot of the earths pollution, and when the time comes that people start to die down on using cars the world will be a much healthier place to be in.\n\nNow you can not tell me that there is not at least one parent who will read this next statement and not agree more. Less cars, safer streets. Every mom, dad, brother, sister, or any kind of other relative have worried about their family playing in the streets. There are millions of accidents every year in the world that result in people getting hit by cars and killed, or seriously injured. With less cars on the streets the world will be a much safer place for kids, and even adults, as there is drunk drivers you have to look out for, or reckless drivers who dont even have a license.\n\nAll together limiting car usage will have multiple benefits to the world, and even your own community. One being you dont have to pay for a car when they start going out of style, another being the worlds pollution will lower at a huge rate, and last that the roads we live, and breathe on will be a much safer place. Limit your car usage and make the word a better place on step at a time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers because the researchers want to be able to see and study the plant, it also was the closest planet to being Earth-like, and they want to be able to study\n\nVenus' geography.\n\nBecause Venus has always had such a high temperature and a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets, the researchers have been trying to send droids and robots to the planet. But, barely any of the Rovers can make the landing. In the passage it states ' Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft has ever survived the landing for more than a few hours.' it also states 'Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more then three decades.' This shows because Venus always had been a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nVenus, sometimes, is called the 'Evening Star' even though it isn't a star. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\", and it is the closet planet to Earth. In the text it states 'Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.' Venus also seems to have familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. This shows because scientist are saying that Venus still has some features that are analogous to Earth, as of today. It is also the nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nScientist, in the passage, also can't get close enough to Venus to even study it's geography. In the passage it states 'Hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.'. It also states' Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. But, the researchers would like to do a thorough mission to understand, despite the risks. This shows because they are willing to work on new innovations that would allow their machinges to lat long enough to at least get some knowledge of Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, scientists are trying everything that can, despite the dangers, to try and come up with a mission to take people or rovers to Venus and study it. Maybe get some samples and study the rest of Venus' geography. Then they can decide if it really is a sister to our planet Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that museums have multi-functions, while some people hold the idea that these places should be enjoyable and others think they need to spread knowledge. Personally, I agree with the point that a museum is a container that collects advanced technologies and knowledge, allowing people to learn a lot.\r\n\r\nThere are some reasons why some people think that museums ought to provide joy and happiness. Firstly, the primary reason is that museums are public places and aim to attract visitors. This means that these places need to provide tourists with stunning goods and impressive things instead of education. In other words, people are less likely to visit a museum with the purpose of learning something. Secondly, the average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum's exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine life with little to no cars, think of all the sites that you will see because now you walk everywhere you go. Think of all the people you will meet along every corner, when you go to the mall, the grocery store, and on your way to a friend's house. You will notice and appreaciate things you haven't before, this idea is all thanks to a suburban town in VAUBAN, Germany. Now, we will be able to enjoy the sites of our surroundings and the people in it, produce less gas emissions, and a better outlook on the future.\n\n\"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" said Heidrun Walter, a resient of VAUBAN, Germany. Getting rid of our cars may sound like a scary thought but in reality it can bring great things to us. When we stop bundling ourselves up in our automoblies we get to explore the world better, we get to touch and smell the things around us and appreaciate them. We advance our knowledge on the things and people around us because of walking to our daily commute or day off. We also meet new people, around every corner will be a new face, maybe they or you will ask for help and from there spark a friendship. You'll find a sea of people that have the same interest as you or don't but because we no longer rely on cars we are introduced to the world more and are truly exposed to the people and things in it, giving us a better understanding of where we live and all that it has to give to us.\n\nGlobal warming, we hear about it a lot especially today where green house emissions are high, however, when we reduce the usage of cars the world, along with us benefit.\n\nIn Paris, after days of near- record pollution a partial driving ban was in order to \"clear the air of the global city.\" \"Four thousand driver were fined and twenty- seven people had their cars impounded for the reaction to the fine.\", by Monday the smog had cleared enough and the French party rescinded the band for odd numbered plates on Tuesday. Meanwhile in BOTOGA, Colombia, it has been the third straight year that cars have been banned in the hope to promote alternative transportation and smog. This event has been so successful that \"for the first time two other Colombian cities,Cali and Valledupar, joined the event.\" We all dream to live a long, happy life but in order to do so we need to treat our Earth right. When we reduce our usage of cars we can fulfill this dream.\n\n\"Parks and sport centers also have bloomed throught the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" Imagine living in a new nice community, better economy, and better health. With all the walking and biking everywhere we are faced with physical workouts, benefitting considering that America is considered the most obese nation. And with all the walking and biking, stores are made closer to walking distance instead of on a distant highway, bring in more consumers. Without cars there is less deaths due to them aswell. In result, we have a better look into the future then we might have if we didn't decide to get rid of cars.\n\nIn conclusion, getting rid of cars would benefit the world and the people in it entirely. We would we more aware of our surroundings and citizens, reduce global warming, and have a better future to look upon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On cyclist way Yosemite National Park given directions group old men direction arent good The desserted place affected stop eat refill water bottle There one sight building car structure kind There rusted water pumps hot water nothing cool His surroundings led state dehydration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I think that it would be fine because if it could help lower the risks of wrecks, then it would be a good idea. Google cars have driven more than half a million miles without a wreck.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car would control its self at speeds up to 25 mph, but the driver had to have their hands on the wheel at all times. The car could tell if you had your hands on the wheel with special sensors inside the wheel. They also tell you when there is something that requires human control ahead. It tells you by vibrating the seat if you are about to back into something, and things on the windshield when your about to run into something from the front.\n\nMost states don't allow driverless cars but California, Nevada, Flordia, and the District of Columbia have let limited use of these. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have plans for a driverless car for 2020.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that driverless cars would be a good idea because they could lower the ricks of accidents. We get closer to driverless cars every day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir Love In paragraph It says Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This means always love happiness home respect friends loved ones Life would good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is just a mesa. It was not built by aliens, and I can prove it. When the face was first photographed, NASA did not have very good cameras. They were up to date but not very powerful and had bad pixles. The 1976 Viking 1 had 43 meters per pixel in the best photo.\n\nWhile some people say that this is definetly alien activity, they have been proven wrong. In the 2001 photo, the great pixels showed that this was nothing more than a mesa with weird shadows. There wasn't even anything around it. There were no planes houses nothing just a big lump of rock.\n\nThis kind of mesa can be found on Earth too. There are a lot in the U.S.A. one especilly good one is a lava dome in Idaho. Even though this mesa on Mars is not lava it is a rock that looks like natural earthly structures.\n\nBack then nobody was positive that it wasn't aliens that had built a really big sculpture, but as tecnology got better, NASA was able to say for sure that this odd thing on Mars was not aliens. Only a big mesa that was isolated on the Red Planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The writing first person narrative The sets tone How proud cuban relationship haritage He also happy proud great parents great house fund memories things He also explains talks people hard leave cuba come america That sets tone story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I state that my argument is that it was made from natrual causes. I understand what some are going at about 'aliens'. It seems like its the only answer but its not. The discoverd that it was all natrual. Many would think not. But to defend my case scientist have figured out that it was just another Martian mesa. Which is common around Cydonia. Their are many other facts.\n\nIt has become pop icon and all the conspiracy theroies are getting in you head. And to think that aliens made that. Wouldn't NASA want that. We are canstanly looking for life out side of us.Its not an alien artifact. Its a mountian of space rocks. Similar to the mountains we have in the USA.\n\nMaybe it is the fact that we dont really see a face on mars that often. And you create theroies in your head. We all get them. Through the years from 1976 and 2001, people would create stories on how it was really formed. And through the year they would have been modified and changed to something different that the start. In 1976 the cameras they used were poorer than the ones used to today. So the look of the mesa would have changed to be clear than the first picture. MIchael Malin and his Camera, Mars Orbiter took the picture on April 5, 1998. When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia the frist time. It came out a lot sharper the the first on back in 1976.\n\nWhat the picture really show is that the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa. Which are landforms common around the American West. Some people have compared it to Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. A lava dome that takes the from of and isolated mesa about the same hight as the face on mars.\n\nI say I did well on exsplaining my case or argument. You might want to listen to the facts and not what your TV says. Aliens, Its not the only anwers to how or what The face on Mars is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether parents or other aspects such as television and friend is more effective on a child's development. In my opinion, I believe that although the family has the biggest impact on children, overall the environment and media are more effective. This essay will consider these different elements of powerful influence sources, before concluding that they are all vital.\r\n\r\nFirst off, some insist that while education starts in the family, it has the biggest effect on a child’s development. As younger children are more affected and they spend most of the time with their family, parents have great obvious influences on the children. For instance, children may behave similarly to their father or mother in the next ages. Additionally, there are some genetic effects on these heritage behaviours. Although genetics mostly remains in the phenotype, many scientists who have studies conducted on behavioural genetics, state genetics plays a big role in personality. \r\n\r\nConversely, many think that the impacts of media and friend environment are bigger than the family. Since there is a variety of news on social media and traditional sources and spending most of their time online, children are more vulnerable to resistance. Also, youth people can influence emotionally by famous people in movies or even songs of their favourite singers and it can affect to change their character. Taking scientific research as an example, it can be seen that the biggest proportion of children's role models are celebrities. Furthermore, kids are generally being a friend who has similar features to them and when they feel more close the friends, they can copy others' thought or disparities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is a debate about the biggest factor in a child’s development. From my perspective, even though both have many contributions to the child, the most powerful influence of the source is other factors such as friends, television and music rather than family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story \" The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\" was all about venuse. The story explained that Venus is\n\ndangerous, it's not safe for people to go up to Venus and they are thinking about sending technology to Venus.\n\nVenus is very dangerous. In the story it say that \"venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system\". That is not good imagine a (NASA) researcher going to venus to get information they would not even make it back because of how hot it is. Venus is something were people should not go. Also in the text it says that \"Venus would not allow scientists to float above the fry\". That quot from the text is very important because it is clealy warrning you that it is dangerous.\n\nVenus is not very safe for humans/researchers. In the story it says that \" beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seekinhg to land on its surface\". Just reading that littke sentence you can tell Venus is no joke it is very dangerous. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration would not even send a human to study Venus.\n\nIn the story the author talked about sending mechanical computers to Venus to get the information they need. That would be very smart to send old technology\n\n(Mechanical computers) insted of humans it would be way safer. In the story the author states that \"These divices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II\".\n\nSo I belive that if these mechanical computers did the job back in 1940s then it can do the job now because we have better technology no then we did back then. Also it states in the story that \"modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible and quick but tend to be more delicaye when it comes to extrem phisical condidtions\". If they send these computers they can really get their information andit would save more human lives because then the humans would not have to go to Venus toget the information they need.\n\nIn conclusion Venus is dangerous, its not safe for humans to go up to venus and they are thinking about sending tecnology computers to get information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sugar-based drinks has become a popular beverage amongst the people especially in today's generation, the millenials. This essay will outline possible reasons on why people are consuming such drinks and also some ways for them to consume less.\nTo start, sugar is the main component of this beverage. Study shows that consuming this can boost a person's energy levels. Hence athelete ae addicted to this refreshments such as energy drinks. Furthermore, this can increase mental alertness especially to working individuals. For instance, not all workers has the capability to maintain their energy at work, sometimes they tend to get sleepy leading them to buy sugary drinks like milk teas. Not only that, advertisement can also be a factor. For example, young people gets curious whenever new sugared drinks is advertised especially if this is shown by their favorite icon. Lastly, consumer's lack of knowledge and misinformation regarding their product as evident by the coca cola lawsuit.\nAlthough it may be difficut for people to stay away from this. There are ways that can help them drink less. One solution is for government to impose a price hike. Meaning high price can discourage them to buy this drinks. Second, just like alcohol, buying sugar-based drinks at malls or grocery store should have time limit. For instance, whoever will buy and sell beyond the allotted time should pay a fine. Also, Educating the public about the health issue of drinking too much sugar-based drinks should be prioritize. Finally, government should encourage company such as pepsiCo, and the Coca-cola company to be transparent of their nutritional facts.\nIn conclusion, sugar-based drinks has become popular due to advertisements and society's thinking that it can replenish their energy levels. In contrast, goverment should take the first step educate and encourage individuals to mimimize drinking this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, some people believe that the government increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles is the primary way to solve the environmental problems, whilst others hold the reverse viewpoint. I disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain my viewpoints in details in the ensuring paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the front and centre in this favour is that cars are necessary means of tools for commuters due to inconvinient public transport in rural area.Morepver, it is undeniable that the exhaust gas emitted by the usage of automobiles causes environmental pollution. However, raising the money of fuel does not solve the root of the phenomenon. For instance, people need to pay more for fuel in order to get to the specific location, which does not change the probability of use. The indicate that this policy would not improve much for environmental issues.\r\n\r\nAt the other end of the spectrum, transportation indeed plays a vital role in our daily life. Considering carbon dioxide emission, it is the leading cause of air pollution. Therefore, the government may divert some budget to build more facilities of public transport. On the other hand, if they provide some discounted ride plans for taking ones, it would be better way to decrease chance of the use of the private vehicles. Monthly passes is a salient example. Based on such compelling evidence, it appears that government incentive may improve the air pollution. \r\n\r\nIn summary, growing use of the automobiles is an issue that needs to be addressed. It is widely believed that the promotion of public transportation can solve environmental problems nowadays.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I m tell moments sometimes even adventures boy named brown hair neck loves swoosh around like movies definitely nt like bangs cut short wise swoosh turn way brown eyes seem sparkle smile seems fool everyone CAPS adorable say CAPS cute say CAPSC cute things amaze Things would nt think kid age could make possible Like always say CAPS ll make work money The thing years age well right loves attention almost anything Yet lovable sometimes sweet CAPS loves comedy cartoons candy video games works lots fun believe say ll never get bored I think NUM adventures began would always go refrigerator egg cartons double check anyone around Then grab one toss say CAPS chicken baby type accent adorable try another another another eggs splattered place run knowing re coming close hide I must admit nt know first I kind thought nt sure That one mischief CAPS also loved aquarium bright light seem attract get closer closer fishes Watching swim different pretty colors The rocks little toys seemed attract When one around tank stick hand carefully say CAPS trying attempt grab success When heard someone coming getting closer run fast like bird cartoon loony toons always smarting coyote There would mess course Though everyone knew trouble start walking cute thoughNow ages loved picking people fun thought attention d go drop go run What grab something valuable certain person go say CAPS Of course go run sometimes d careful toss wham It would brake s things I m pointing reality much ore exciting might explaining age workout One day decide lend touch entertain busy things discovers tube loves show called In words calls CAPS go watch tv shows touch use apps smart comes using electronics add The day ask touch almost frequently every time denied using go methods getting Of course lights everyone asleep finally pillows grab take The next morning told us yet would Then went drastic measures hid touches else years age whoa well opinion I think calmed little Others think know Anyways means starting school hear quite entertaining involved They love sometimes little much ha loves roaming around loves great time admire well say one little short story year old I d pick matter always defend brothers wont let one bully brothers matter odds admire", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is studying Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents?\n\nThe author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus could sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance, and Venus has the most hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\n\nThe text states \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valeys, mountains, and craters.\"\n\nThis shows that it could be possible to go and visit to see if we could one day live on Venus.\n\nThe text states \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\"\n\nThis shows that scientists are trying to develop the right type of tools to take the risk and find out what's on Venus.\n\nThe text states \"n the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we expierience on our own planet.\"\n\nThis shows that scientists have to figure out the temperature of Venus before we can take the risk of possibly living there.\n\nIs Venus worth taking the risk to study despite the dangers?\n\nVenus is an interesting planet and scientists are continuing to take the risk of studying Venus each day and that's why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI've come to the conclusion that most U.S. citizens want to abolish the Electoral college. For the reasons being is because the american people vote for the presidents we want for our country, not the state electors choosing for us. As in the source of \"what is Electoral college?\" (The Office of the Federal Register), state's, \"you help choose your state's elector when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors\". what's whrong with the electoral college you may ask? Accordingly \"under the electoral system voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president\" state's source two \"The Indefensible Elctoral College\" (Bradford Plumer).\n\nWhat Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and etc. had in common was abolishing Electoral college. Supposedly they are not the only ones; \"according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency\"(Bradford Plumer). As most peolpe believe: the electoral college is unfair, unreasonable, and just simply outdated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont know what is out there but I know what is happining in my own back yard. There is no way the face on marse's surface was made by aleans because we have photographic images that prove so, and by telling it was made by alien it would just help us. So if you really think that that the alience made the face on mars then you don't know any of the facts.\n\nFirst of all we have the picktures to prove it. So maybe the first one wasn't as clear becaus of the times, but the next one was ten times better. It doesn't sound like a lot but for what the first one looked like was like eating fake oreos to the real ones. But that was on a cloudy night and because it was you still don't belive it. So we went and took an other one (even thought it was hard sence we dont pass it very often). Nevertheless we got it in all of its NON alian glory. With the next picture we got in 2001 you have to belive us that it was a rock. It was 43 meters per pixel compared to the first that was 1.56. If you dont know what that means then let me just tell you it was way better.\n\nAlso why would we ruin a great oportunity like that. If we had said it was from alien we would have goten so much money. Imagen all the questions that would have been asked that we might have not have been able to answer on earth. People would start demanding their questions be answed and we would not be able to do it. So we ask for money we would get the best to make it posible for us to get to the red planet and boom we are on mars and we make an other small step.\n\nSo if you want to look stupid and belive that the aliens made a face on mars then do so, but the facts are that there is not one.\n\nWe have pictures and a want to go to mars that wont happen to prove it. And if after all that you dont belive me then writ your own paper convincing everyone it is a alian made Mount Rushmore and maybe NASA will Get to go to mars sitting on a rock.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Flordia senator,\n\nI would like to in favor of keeping the Electoral College for many purposes. The Electoral College know the process of becoming a president and some of the people voting dont really know how the process works. The eletors are the one to elect the president and not the people,people's vote will not have any affect of the election of the president.\n\nThe electoral college knows the process of becoming a president ,some citizens dont really know the process of becoming a president. what if we the people just vote and we dont know if our vote counts. The excerpt states\"when you vote for a presidential candiate you're actually voting for a slate of electors\". This indicates that we think our vote if for the election of the president but its not. Therefore,we should pay attention of who we elect and knowing how the voting system work out. keep on mind that the electoral college is a good system and that we should count on them.\n\nDo you know who elects the president? well,its the electoral college the one who elects the president,many people think that we the people choose but,they are actually wrong. \"270 electoral votes is requierd to elect the president\",this indicates that we dont really have control of picking the president. \"it's possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote\", but does'nt often happen.\n\nIt all comes down to one point,we should let the Electoral College choose who they want to elect the president. We all want different people to be president but at the end we have too choose who will help the U.S to be powerful. Our nation wll be ruled by the people and for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I was reading this article, it brought to my attention that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nIt says that \" venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. I think the author supports the idea because, he talks about how he got so many reasons why the mission was successful or not, this also has a reputation.\n\nThis was very previous when i decided to support this idea.\n\nAlthough, this author is very intelligent and experienced alot of things, i will support him in many reasons because The National Aeronautics and Space Adminstration has one part compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, he thinks its so good that now he telling people to check it out. If he had gave up on this support that he had, Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying uo and out of their way.\n\nI agree with him on alot of things that hes done that's why i support him, he tries to provide healthier weapons and materials that would be safe to use. When he intervented this it says that many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to distribute the forceful interaction to our capability of the since of Venus. I support him because he makes it recognizable to see his point of view on this.\n\nIt must be scary to live up in Venus or mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist water plenty setting seems smooth easy riding This means doesnt use much water still uses anyone rides miles bike need plenty water matter terrain like The features setting affect cyclist toward middle end trip greatly gets rough hilly needs water doesnt And since planning able get water first stop didnt conserve well left less water really needed He became dehydrated first stop didnt get water caused dehydrate So seem features setting affect cyclist plenty water doesnt really need terrain smooth easy ride drinks water terrain gets rougher worse So features setting affects greatly dont help get worse needs get better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain books magazines music movies put shelves library Children learn rude nasty things parents might find alright child There things offensive library like prejudice books music Often music uses swearing language states certain views politics Libraries need take control issue right way Getting rid material done Libraries need keep better watch certain sections library They could letting children leave parents side That way parents know control children seeing Then issue offending people These problems could resolved simply putting signs different spots library These sign could big bold letters stating Certain things section offending CAPS control needed past point Libraries aware people feel way set presented public Libraries put selves publics shoes see would like things showed children Also looking things point view things could offending fix problems Once I library I offended book title religion After seeing I thought sign something around warn I would see Other things like occured library like one time brother rented movie parents approve But way libraries set controled brother able rent movie sneak past parents Other children like brother could things worse like look inappropiate magazine read certain books parents would approve These types occurances need stop something really bad happens Libraries need take control show know present things public proper manner Actions happening todays libraries alright Putting signs requiring control reduce elliminate unapproved occurances", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We could nt control selves eyes watering stomachs hurting much ca nt move I choking words I talk best friend Every time talked one would say something thought funny would start laughing laughing When I look back things talked said nt make sense I nt know laughed hard One day bus stop said something funny laughed bus came Than I said something funny laughed whole bus ride school This happened almost every day us On particular day could nt stop laughing even got class room Our grade teacher lots pets class room one pets tree frog named That week week take care When went feed grabbed made dance cage We thought hilarious thing ever Our eyes started watering chocking words took seats class We laughed teacher giving instructions class work Eventually teacher come us tell us quite This nt stop us laughing We tried tried stay calm work could nt stop On day lots people class chatty one laughing hard I We loud I thought people class us would hear us sure It nt us loud whole class Our teacher stood front class yelled us quite nt stop us In fact made I laugh even I thought I going pee pants I laughing hard Now I nt kind girls giggled quiet things We kind girls laughed really hard loud eyes watering stomach muscles hurting us rest day Our teacher wanted whole class quite got front class math problems She told us put pencils push chairs stand behind Then told us take really big deep breath Next told us let breath big cold Lastly suppose five times sit back chairs math problems silently talking anyone When I taking five deep breaths fast short get We thought funny rest class saw us The class started laugh heads teacher nt know told us would stay recess nt behave Eventually class settled back started work quietly Except I We kept laughing bell rang school We got bus started talking much fun day funny breathing really fast slowly like suppose Even day every time teacher someone tells us take deep breaths something I look start laughing breath really fast Now sophomores high school still times laugh uncontrollably reason I think part best friends someone Some times even laugh day long like day grade Through friendship learned much quieter breathing laugh class something important I believe I always best friends always laughing moments together weather s class bus driving college phone Laughing something everyone needs experience life time Not giggle small laugh loud really hardy laugh ca nt control eyes watering stomach hurts bad move like I grade", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well in my favor I would have the Electoral College reason why is because it keeps all the votes for the presidential election and etc. And each or any electors in your state has his or her own group of electors. And the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party , but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what is their responsibilities are. But the Electoral College it consists or has 538 electors but the majority is to have 270 s that you can vote for the president. By the way once you have voted for the president or senate or governer etc. The system will count how many popular votes or from a vote from Congress and the qualified citizens. But my reason for the electoral college to stay is that once you have voted you can count from the system or it does it for you but if you dont want the electoral college then it will take alot longer for the votes to be process and be accumilated.\n\nWell so there's people or citizen that want the electoral college to keep going but some don't reason to that is in the story this is what it says, \"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostky assertins withoout much basis in reality\". And its unfair cause it has the winner take all system in each state. And they sometimes have problems getting the votes from some states and they couldn't see the candidates at all including Rhode Island and South Carolina and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. And the story says from someones opinion \"And the arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality.\" And once a state has voten it counts as 1 vote.\n\nAnd some people and the people from the government or like congress,senators,representatives, and more hope that one day while they are voting that the score or number of votes is not a tie. But some citizens arn't into the technology of the electoral vote or how it works. But in that case I would like to not want the electoral collge to keep going mostly due to unfairness, outdated,irrational.\n\nSince the electoral college is still working the method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-- Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. But of course no voter's vote swings a national elction, and in spite of that, about one-half the eligible American popluation did vote in 2012's election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood article happy grateful I think s happy Narciso tells much fun parents close family much Narciso likes living lives I think grateful Narciso got education wanted everyone around proud Narciso I feel like mood mostely happy grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Television programs have been rapidly increasing these days due to the technological advancements and wide acceptance of public.\r\n\r\nFew people believe its good to have more number of Television programs as it gives more options to choose, whereas some believe it diminutes the quality of the daily soaps.\r\n\r\nNow, I'd like to discuss about the positive affects of more number of television programs due to certain reasons, which are stated as below:\r\n\r\nVariation - More number of daily soaps will increase the diversification of genres in which they are made. Example - Nowadays, people have started scripting daily soaps on biographies of a person or a crime series which is based on a true story.\r\n\r\nCategorisation - Earlier children's were not been able to choose from variety of programs and had to be a part of a family daily soaps. Having said that, those daily soaps were not meant for their ages. However, due to the increase in number of programs on television. Children's can watch series/programs of their category which suits their preferences and IQ.\r\n\r\nIncrease in numbers of the Television programs also have its affects such as their quality deteriorates and many more. I'd like to discuss some below:\r\n\r\nOff-track - Every daily soaps and their channels try to produce and present the best which their competitors are delivering, though they sometimes go obnoxiously wrong and portrays something which they even didn't wanted to.\r\n\r\nCommercialization - TV programs have been focussing on increased ratings and earning more money, irrespective of the quality they offer.\r\n\r\nConfusion - Enormous collection of programs on television has actually made people confused. Public is actually confused to watch which programs based on their genres preferences.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, more Television programs definitely gives freedom to choose from but still, the best TV programs restricts to very few of them because quality of the daily soaps decreases drastically. Therefore, lesser the number, lower the confusion and bests options to choose from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I argue in changing the electoral college , popular vote would be a chance for normal americans to get there voice heard in the government. A big problem is how the voters votes go straight to the electoral college and wouldnt make a change at all also how theres a bigger chance of a tie happening in the electoral college then by popular vote\n\nOne reason why the electoral college should go is because the voters votes arent really being heard. For example in paragraph 10 it says that ' under the electoral college system voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors who in turn elect for the president \" , thats techinally saying that the electors are the ones who are really voting our voice means nothing we could have wanted another president to have won but if the electoral college gets more votes then us then so be it , thats our new president! We dont even know who the electors really are they could have been picked by anyone like how it says in paragraph 10 they could have been picked by the presidential candidates themselves who knows. They say we control who the electors vote for but not always , theres a high unlikely chance that there would be more popular votes for one president like in texas for john kerry that all 34 electors would go to congress and vote for john kerry thats insane.\n\nA second reason is how theres a bigger chance of electoral college tie happening then a popular vote one like how it says in paragraph 12 \" in 1916 , a tie would have occurred if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and a 3,3687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe\". If the electoral college has a tie then theres even a bigger chance of the people voice not being heard at all. Once a tie happens the election goes to the house of representatives where state delegations vote on the president as said in paragraph 12 , a single representative from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters, would have no say compared to the 55 representatives from California that makes Wyoming have no voice in the election compared to Califorina. The house's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people.\n\nFinally thats all i have to say regarding how the election should be changed to having the popular vote determine the president , we want our voice to be heard! Sometimes the electoral college doesnt pick the president that we wanted and if there was a tie to happen in the electoral college which is at high risk some of the states voices wouldnt get heard at all , thats why we should switch over to popular vote maybe more people would actually get up and go vote because they would know their vote actually means something. Like it says in paragraph 14 \" Abolish the electoral college! \".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Heat dry flat features setting effected cyclist As cyclist driving desert noticed hot would become dehydrated quickley I also dry started get nervous thirsty The flat ground models nothing around help cyclist made scared The story also metions ghost town", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have u ever hit basketball face One day I playing basketball whit friends I school I think like pm We blast playing favorite sport making jokes The day going good I making hoops I good jokes every one laughing My friend ask question girl I turn face basketball hit right face hard first I tirent get angry accident good friends started laughing made day current stop I lost I wanted hit I started think one gotting hit face way I I would laughing tirent I I left home angry When I got home I still angry I went garage I punching bag I started hitting get anger s dad told I little kid angry nt take family go run hit something nt take family I like half hour I went inside kitchen get something eat mom saw face still red hit She started screaming saying happen I fighting stuff like I still angry screaming made angry I current take I left room put music I like hour phone ringing friends I like five miss call three messages saying I crying things like still making jokes The time went I still angry I current forget happen My younger brother came room whit food I still hungry I tirent get nothing kitchen mom screaming left whit food empty stomach eating front making faces saying best sandwich ever man I current take I took wanted I sat starting eating comes ask I angry I told started lough punching slowly ask I wanted go play video games So went play army game really good I suck every time kills starts saying jokes like s daddy stuff like After I forget happen I begging smile brother go outside house play soccer like ten minutes friends walking screams name I turn face I got hit brother kick ball hard going fast I saw I already got hit time stomach every one loughs first I tirent hearing every one loughs thinking get hit twice day way I turn face I tough funny I start loathing My friends came say sorry laughing funny one hit said fault I nt looking I like whatever I ask wanted play soccer whit us said yes playing like five minutes brother kick ball hit friend right face one hit whit basketball I start cracking I told nt looking goes around comes That put big smile face good fun whit anger s one time laughter change felt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificial intelligence is believed to take over most of the jobs done by humans in the future.\r\n\r\nWhile most unskilled jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, replacing humans in the jobs that require human contact is unlikely. This essay will discuss why eventually only a handful of jobs will be carried out by people.\r\n\r\nRobots may replace humans only in specific jobs where human skills are not required. Many companies are replacing people with artificially intelligent devices which are cost-effective as compared to hiring and training staff to carry out easy tasks. Moreover, these robots perform these jobs with more precision and productively which will eradicate the challenge of human error and the time taken to complete a job. To cite an example, supermarkets have replaced cashiers and stock checkers with bots which costs way lesser than employees. Furthermore, these bots can work round the clock and do not need any days off. For these reasons, jobs that do not require human involvement will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots.\r\n\r\nConversely, robots will not be able to replace jobs that require a human touch. The human capacity to perform certain jobs is much more than machines and robots will never be able to achieve that capacity. Some examples of these specific tasks are massage, education, health and social work. For example, machines can not replace doctors as it is impossible for machines to carry out an operation. These tasks require can be carried out by specialists with high skills and can not be matched by bots.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while some people agree that human employees will be replaced by machines, others believe that they will not be able to replace certain skills. In my opinion, artificially intelligent machines are capable to replace human workers to a large extent but it is impossible to match the human capacity to perform high skill jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A library public place ages They many different kinds books specific reasons For children nice comfy spot pick book sit read For adults coffe tables sofa seats many different things read books never library disclousre certain materials ages come Censoring library would make easier keep young children away certain materials offensive I feel child library go specific areas came also monitored library Most kids wold nt go book nt lot pictures colors way The library public place made ages even though book stores sell adult books movies magazines still nt throw library There equal rights yes even libraries The world full offensive things period Now child within library could home public place see things could also see book library The removal certain books movies magazines would nt really stop anything I think parents teach thier children right wrong nothing wrong library adult books movies magazines If I owned library I personally would mind kinds books appropriate certain exstint selction books I plenty libraries seen stuff I thought nt thier I right section I supposed This subject really nt bother I nt think remover certain books children library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why You should Join the Seagoing Cowboys\n\nThe reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because you will be able to visit many unique places and have an adventure of a lifetime. You will have the chance to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. When you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you can make new friends and if you wanted to go out in the seas you can. When you are on board the ship you will get bored sometimes but stuff will keep you busy like taking care of the animals, stalls had to be cleaned, and fedding and watering the animals. But it could be a little dangerous to. But when luke ws on board, they knew how to past the time. The cowboys played baseball, volleyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, reading, whittling, and games that helped them pass the time. Luke said \" I'm grateful for the opportunity\" and It made me more aware of people of other countries and thier needs\". And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. That is Why You Should Join The Seagoing Cowboys Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are over thousands of cars that exist today, and there are many more that are being mass-produced.\n\nCars are one of the most reliable forms of transportation.\n\nEach new model has a new advanced feature that either keeps a driver more safe or allows a more luxurious ride.\n\nMany manufacturers such as Google are advancing in the car industry by manufacturing a car that drives by itself.\n\nThis car appeals to everyone because of its effortless transportation, but will it really contribute to a better society?\n\nWill this new car become safer and a more effecient transportation system?\n\nAlthough this car would open this generation to new possibilities, I do not think it will be effective in our future and will most likely raise the risks for the people in these cars.\n\nThese newly invented cars appeal to everyone who drives because it recquires no effort and it does not require your full attention.\n\nThe driver could get many things accomplished during this time if they did not have to have a constant watch at the wheel.\n\nThis could be a successful advancement in cars, but it could also lead to major accidents and wrecks.\n\nCars are intellegent but they do not have quick decision\n\nmaking skills and they can make mistakes.\n\nIf a glitch were to happen while the driver was preoccupied, what would be the result?\n\nThe driver could experience a major wreck and be effected for life or they could die on impact.\n\nThese new smart cars would allow people to make reckless decisions in the front seat while being oblivious to the road in front of them.\n\nAdvancements in the car industry could result in many cars being sent to large dumps.\n\nWith the world being taken over by smart cars, what would happen to the thousands of old cars?\n\nThese driveless cars would replace thousands of cars all around the world.\n\nMajor polution would occur due to\n\ndecrease in driving old cars.\n\nPeople have the mindset that they need the newest model of everything which would result in them dumping their old model.\n\nThese choices will cause the earth to become endangered because of an increase in polution.\n\nAdvanced cars drive by themselves which would imply that a person of any age would be able to drive them.\n\nAlthough this could be a great thing for people who are not capable of operating a car or providing their own transportation, this could be a major downset for others.\n\nIn today's world, many people take classes and experience driving before being allowed to drive by themselves.\n\nWith new driverless cars, how would you be able to tell if the person could operate a peice of technology like this?\n\nThese cars may not need much experience or intellegence, but rare occasions can occur.\n\nPeople need to be ready for the worst which could happen in a car due to a glitch.\n\nSafety procautions make driving safer and without the \"need\" of them, these dangerous events could become even more life threatening.\n\nThese cars would not promote road awareness and could lead to a major increase in risk for the driver.\n\nTransportataion is one of the world's leading industries.\n\nNew cars are put into the world each day with new features and technology.\n\nEach model advances in one way or another, but drivers do not necessarily benefit from these additions.\n\nI think that driverless cars will provide more risk and complication to passengers in a car.\n\nWe need to work towards a car that will increase a drivers safety, not the luxury of a car driving by itself.\n\nA person needs to have awareness during a drive in a car and with these smart cars it will not happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Television has become an important part of many people's life. Some may consider it a bad source for children due to the addiction whereas others believed it has many benefits based on the knowledge gained from from it. In this essay i'll give my opinion based on the pros and cons of television for children. \r\n\r\nTV has been used since years for the purpose of political news, education, entertainment etc. It has many advantages for child development as it provides programs related to worlds history, giving information about the different things around the world such as various animals, arts etc which helps them to develop various skills and improves learning abilities. It also provides entertainment for the children which would help them have some relaxing time from the daily busy schedule. \r\n\r\nAlthough TV has many advantages for the child's growth and development, it has many disadvantages too. As long term use of it makes addiction for the children which leads to distraction from rest of the things as they find it a good thing to spend time whereas it leads to weakening of the bonds with family, friends and physical activities. kids may not like getting involved in social gatherings and meeting people. Long hours of screen time would have an impact on child's eyes, mental health and thinking ability.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion it has both good and bad effects on the child's health and development. But it totally depends on the parents how they allow the children to use it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving can be a difficult skill to learn, and you have to worry about how other people are driving so you will not get in an accident. Driverless cars would be a good thing to get because they are safe. Everybody should buy a driverless car.\n\nOne reason why they are safe because people will not have to worry about getting in accidents because of texting and driving. People would not have to worry about texting and driving because they would not be driving. A lot of people of people text and drive and their area lot of accidents because of texting and driving. Driverless cars are going to be an amazing creation to the world.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars would be safe is because they only go up to 25 mile per hour. That reason makes driverless cars safe because people in driverless cars wouldn't be speeding. A lot of people have problems speeding while driving and if they buuy a driverless car, they will not speed and chideren will stay safe.\n\nThe final reason why they are safe is because the person in the driver seat would still be in control of the vehicle. If a person is still in control of the driverless car, it would make the car more safe because the person can see\n\ncertain things that the car can not. All the person would have to do is stay alert because the vehicle can not see everything.\n\nDriverless cars would be a safe and amazing creation. If everybody owned a driverless car, the world would be a safer place. Driverless cars are extremely safer than regular cars. Everybody should own a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of people who are curious about the place they live in has increased around the world recently. The increasing awareness about safety due to the increase in natural disasters could be one of the main reasons for that. And also this essay will suggest advanced digital technology as a way to find out more about history easily. \r\n\r\nFirstly, it is necessary to make sure the building or houses they live in is safe. Especially, in some countries where earthquakes tend to occur often, residents should know basic things about their living places to stay safe. In fact, natural disasters have occurred so often nowadays and more people have noticed the importance of making sure the history of their buildings. For example, a massive earthquake happened in turkey. A lot of people have died since the construction of buildings is poor and no one cared about it. After this, people have noticed they have to research buildings more so that they would prevent these to happen. As more people are interested in the safety of the buildings, more people have started to research the history.\r\n\r\nSecondly,Using advanced digital technology could be one useful method to research the history of the buildings or houses they live in. Since society has become reliant on digital technology like phones, and automatic cars, the ability to collect massive data and arrange it has also increased. People could use this technology to collect data about history and search for it up easier than before. As technology developed, the cost decreased and it gets familiar to use technology for various kinds of research.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, most people seem to have an interest in their residences for their own safety and as technology develops , using these digital technologies has become familiar to more people. This can be a new method to help the research and has a lot of abilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I think that it's not a good idea at all. Driverless cars would have a better chance of getting into an accident than a human driving it. The car wouldn't know to go around things because they are used to following the road and not having objects in the way.\n\nFirst,a driverless car is just a bad idea. It's a huge harzard because how would a car know when to go when it stops at a stop sign if there are multiple cars around. The car could go right when another one goes and then there's an accident that happens. If there was a human they would know when to go or they would let the person go by signaling them with their lights. In the passage it states that they put a driverless car on a track with an electrical cable on the track. If the car needs a cable on the road to make it work then they would have to put electrical cables on every road in the U.S.\n\nSecond,the car is going to cost so much that people wouldn't even want to buy it. The driver would be bored because all they can do is sit there and watch as the car drives them to their destination. People are going to think that they can text but what if the car miscalculates and the driver isn't paying attention to steer themselves out of danger. Even laws have to be put into the new car such as liability as it's stated in paragraph 9. The liability on it would go out of control because of no one knowing whos fault it is if the car gets into an accident with a driver. The only good thing about it would be long road trips so people could sleep while driving on the road.\n\nIn conclusion,driverless cars are just a bad idea. The hazard on them is very high because miscalculations and the coast on them would be too expensive. The laws would be outrageous and people would probably end up getting in more accidents if they aren't driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authour suggests that studying Venus is a worth pursit despite the dangers it presents. Even though its dangeruse the author still thinks its a good idea to go and study Venus.\n\nYou can tell the author belives this to be ok evon though its dangerous when he said,\" Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intemidating eneavors.\" This means that he knows its dangruse but everyone is curuose about what they will find, even if its dangerous he thinks its worth it. The opertunity to find signs of life or rare metals it would prove tempting for some even if it was dangrouse.\n\nIf you continue to read the passage he goes on to talk about how Venus is inhospitable. He then says he still wants to study it by saying, \"Astronomers are facinated by Venus beause it may well once have been the most earth like.\" This means they are trying to see if Venus had life just as earth dose now.\n\nIn conclusion the author thinks the pros of going to Venus out way the cons. Honestly I think he is right my self we could discover so much if only we knew what secrets Venus holds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that day's teenagers always have free time, They spend their time on play video games, and movies or sleeping in they free time, but is the volunteering in charitable work something good. The question is,do you think is that young youth can be benefit community as well? In the essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusions.\r\n\r\nIn terms of agree teenagers should to know a help with out opposite ,and this period is a age for giving in all of community's, The some a aldolescent stay and don't do anything, this negatively affects them and may be caused depression so charitable work helps to relax and feel satisfied.To begin, I accept that free time most spend it on a work and it is good to learn dealing with adults and knowledge good things and ideas,make friends as well, secondly, to develop a sense of responsibility and compassion for elders and the kids, following this the best volunteer is at a nursing home. The main reason given to supports this claim is that should not be an abstacle to studying. To illustrate, viral mercy and patience.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that young people can benefit community as well, they can benefit a poor people and kids, in my opinion, the high schools \r\n\r\nAllocate a day of the week with organisers\r\n\r\nto ask the students how want a volunteer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The main problem original design mooring mast architects couldnt drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way buildings foundation Another obstacle builders faced construction mast could another example German dirigible Hindenburg With dirigibles using highly flammable hydrogen instead helium another Hindenburg accident could prove fatal highly populated area downtown New York perhaps greatest obstacle would nature The high force winds top empire state building would cause dirigible swivel around mooring mast Although dirigibles could weighted weights would hanging pedestrians neither practical safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of providing higher education to young people is of utmost importance in several countries. However, cultivating literacy skills in adults who lack the ability to read and write is equally essential for society. Governments should allocate more resources to address the needs of this population. In my opinion, I support teaching every adult and ensuring they attain a high level of language proficiency. Additionally, providing high-quality education for youths is also a crucial policy for enhancing the national economy.\n\nFirstly, leading all adults to comprehensively learn and study a language enables effective communication, especially among elderly individuals. If governments invest significantly in enhancing their reading and writing abilities, it not only addresses issues of word recognition but also reduces frequent conversational conflicts. For example, some elderly adults struggle to send messages with cellphones, leading to difficulties in communicating with their offspring. If governments are willing to allocate funds to educate seniors, generation gaps could be significantly narrowed.\n\nOn the contrary, some parents prioritize cultivating young pupils as nations require a skilled workforce to bolster future economies. The emphasis on education reflects the understanding that a knowledgeable populace is crucial for sustained economic growth. This proactive approach by parents underscores the recognition of the pivotal role education plays in shaping a nation's prosperity in the years to come.\n\nIn conclusion, while prioritizing higher education for young people is vital, investing in adult education, particularly in language skills, is equally crucial for societal cohesion. I advocate for a balanced approach that addresses both segments, contributing to a harmonious society and a robust national economy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles constructing mast would make possible dirigibles dock The greatest obstacle nature It unrealistic dirigible tied single cable tether remain intact winds top building constantly changing due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around mast hazardous pedestrians There nothing builders could alter nature ideas soon became unrealistic Another obstacle builders faced constructing building dirigible s weight would add much stress especially added wind pressure building s frame They decided way fix problem shift weight building s foundation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars sound like a good idea on paper, but in the real world they just are not far enough advanced yet for me to feel safe being in or around one.\n\nThey are not even fully driverless yet, a person still needs to be ready to take the wheel at any given time.\n\nHowever in the future when they become more advanced and safe they could potentialy prevent accidents.\n\nI think driverless cars are still a thing of the future and not present.\n\nAs much as I think they need work now, I am not against the development of them as they could bring many potential benefits.\n\nIn the article it states how movies and television shows have been fascinated with driverless cars for a long time, seeing them as a thing of the future.\n\nI think they still are a thing of the future because they still need a driver to be able to take the wheel at any given time.\n\nThe only way I can see them being the safest they can be, is if all cars are driverless and they could interact with each other.\n\nRight now the driverless cars are mostly just assisting like antilock brakes, as stated in pararaph six.\n\nWhen the technology eventually becomes good enough to be able to fully drive without a driver there are still laws to be discussed.\n\nOnly a few states allow them so far, and what good is a car that is only legal in three states and the District of Columbia if you do not live there.\n\nI think eventually the laws will change enough to allow them to function as long as they are safe and can pass certain tests.\n\nThen the question comes up about blame in the event of an accident, whose fault is it if a computer is controlling the vehicle?\n\nAs of now driverless cars seem to be more trouble than help.\n\nWith time I feel that they could become very safe and reliable vehicles with advancements in technology.\n\nThere are many manufacturers trying to make driverless cars, at least one of them is bound to make something good eventually.\n\nIn conclusion, I think driverless cars should keep being developed, however they still need a lot of work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To start of i would like to say how much you would like this amazing job. you get to do so meany amazing things. You will get to hang out with your friends if they joinny you. you get see the world or ny wher you go. You get to no all theas amazing animals. Let me show you what you could acomplish mentaly and phisicly thruw this breath taking job.\n\nFirst let see all you can acomplish thruw this job. one thineg you can acomplish is the calm state of mined. You will grow stronger and stronger as you lift bags of weat and oats. If you dont take your word on it take it from Luke Bomberger, he has made nine trips. That is the most trips eney one has ever done. If you do take this job you will help the people who need food.\n\nOn you trip you can explore the place you mite vist. Luke Bomberger visted europe and china and a lot of there most famos land marks. You can see vinice italy and take a ride thruw there water roads. Or go to the edjes of africa.\n\nA great part of the long trip is plaing games with your friends. Some games you mite play to past time are: Base Ball, Voly Ball, Socer, Table Tenis, Marbles ,and Tic Tac Toe. Luke Bomberger plade these games all the time. In table tennis he was almost as good as Forest Gump.\n\nSo if you feel like this is the right job for you ask around feel free to join the water cowboy exspereience. If this job is not right for you just you waight tell i tell you about being a Acontent that will sell you on being a water cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, among the number of issues people have to deal with, the historical topic is one of them and along with it arises something more specific – there are more people, in some areas, are becoming concerned on researching about the past of the house or building they live in. Within the scope of this writing, some causes are discussed and from then the ways to look for information are mentioned.\r\n\r\nAs the beginning part of the discussion, the reasons are worth mentioning initially. Firstly, we can see that nowadays, culture plays an important role in human lives. It means, the more societies develop, the more people tend to appreciate ancient values. To illustrate, some old villas that were built in Da Lat city of Vietnam in the Indochina period were bought with a lot of money, even they are more expensive than modern houses. Secondly, finding out about the history of the house or building helps people learn about design styles. Through this result, more and more people want to show their knowledge to other people. Finally, most Asian people believe in the spirituality of a building. In detail, directions and constructions of rooms, as well as the history of a house,history of a residence can affect to owner’s life. For example, in some countries, it is wildly believed that people will meet numerous unlucky and difficulties if they live in a building that had some detrimental problems in the past such as accidents, illness, divorce…\r\n\r\nResearching the history of the house or building, in some cases, is not simple. However, there are some steps for people to do. One recommendation is that they can chat with the previous owners of the building or receive advice from neighbours. Furthermore, there are forums or social groups on the Internet for people to get information about real estate. Thus, it is logical that we can share the story and discuss it in forums to collect more knowledge. In addition , a look further into this problem is that people can look for instruction from books, newspapers or experts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some reasons for the issue can be identified and there are some ways for people to know about the history of constructions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist made use water supply tested determination Sometimes life cruel implies horrible time coping setting To thought gon na die moment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was site to see and i think its a site to behold. Still there are some people that think the Face on Mars was created by Aliens,but its not. Conspiracy theorists might say this but i don't believe it, but my colleague does. So, I created this special report to show my friend that the Face is just a landform.\n\nFirst off, the technology back in 1976 wasn't very good. The 1976 photo of the Face looks very blurry from the looks of it.When tech got an upgrade in 1998, the image wasn't as blurry as the first photo. Then, in 2001, NASA took a another photo of the Face when the conditions on Mars were just right and proved it was a landform.\n\nSecond, Mesa and Buttes are area of raised land, so I bet that since the area here is higher than any other area, it could create a shadow over it.The Face is located in the north Martian latitude where it was winter, which is a cloudy time of year for the Red planet. The camera on the MGS had to try and see through the clouds to see. NASA said it was not easy to target Cydonia(the region where Face on Mars is located) because the MGS is a mapping spacecraft that looks straight down and ca't move anywhere else.\n\nLastly, NASA had to be in the perfect spot to take a picture. In 2001, the MGS was able to get close enough to get a look at Face. Jim Garvin's team had to center the craft to get a good enough angle on the Face. To prove for sure that it was a landform, Garvin used the camera's maximum resolution to get the best pictures. Garvin said that you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were any objects in the photo, you would see them.\n\nI think that is enough evidence to show my friend that the Face on Mars is a landform.Sadly, I wish it was truly created by Martians. That would be an interesting find if I do say so myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars safe? Can you trust driverless cars to keep a human being safe? Truely I say that autonomous cars is ahead of us but each and everyday we continue to grow into the peak of our destination of making driverless cars. In the articels \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states the good things about the development of these cars: they would fundamentally change the world and the driverless cars still need human assistance thus making it safe on humans.\n\nThe first example is that driveless cars would fundamentally change the world. For example, in the article it states that in today's taxis the fuel usage is very high, meaning it uses a lot of gas. Well the Google confounder Sergrey Brin canforsee that the driverless cars use only half of the fuel than what todays's taxis' use. This could really help our economy become stable and it could, most certainly, help our enviroment. The less fuel cars use the less money we have to pay the middle Eastern countries for fuel and we would not have to pay them more than we already do. The final reason is the less fuel you have in the air the freasher the air will be for us to breathe.\n\nThe final example is that driveless cars still need human assistance. For example, in the article the author stated that the car can only handle driving functions at the speed up to 25 miles per hour, but there is\n\nspecial touch sensors that make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. This means that humans still have to remain alert at all times because the driveless cars can only do so much of the driving. \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driveless... they are desgined to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" How will the car notify the driver? Well GM has developed driver's seats that will vibrate when the vechile is in danger. There are still options reamina but manufactures are considering of\n\nusing cameras to watch the driver is focusing on the road. The driver watches the road and the car watches the driver.\n\nIn conclusion, the good things about the development of these cars are that they would potenially change the world and they still need human assistaance thus making them safe. Becasue of this envention we can potenially make the world even more safer and healther. That is why I am for, not aganist, driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mostly everybody man focused today is when i become a teenager , get a job and get my first CAR .Cars are good to get around but there are some advantages of limiting car usage , like pollution and more money you have in you pocket for youself. Thats sounds good right? I know !\n\nTo begin with ,Paris has banned driving to smog (pollution towards the greenhouse).Contaminated air we breathe isn't good for are lungs-just are health period. Consuming to much carbon and make us very sick and ill. Somethings we need to get to are pretty far and to get to places on time is faster by car- which most people think but isn't the case. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Plug-in cars , hyrbrids , and or cars carrying three or more passengers would be good but what about are power plants , cant they be used for something else? Cars are a good tool to have but its causing problems in our greenhouse that we need to stop\n\nMeanwhile in Bogota , car free day is going in a great path. Many of us been in traffic jams before,right? Sitting at a light 3 times before you get to go .Do you ever think walking would be faster ? On car free day in Bogota,Colombia Colombians didnt use there cars and didnt complain about it ; they used bikes,skates or skateboards , even took a bus! Now, thats sounds like some good resources to me. We all like good days and not stressed one so leave the car in your drive way and start using other things to get you to where you have to go. This could be a community thing to everyone aound you , every citie , and every state.\n\nFouthermore , Car dealer ships need business to , start making that dont produce alot of pollution into the air we breathe , use resources that wont cause mot damage , the ozone layer isnt at its best and we need to save it before it gets worse , take action before its to late !\n\nIn Conclusion , can be very useful but why use them alll the time ? theres other things that can get us around like bikes , buses or even just walking . Driving all the time can be a bad habit . Pollution is a biggie as well , pollution are air is very unhealthy , but car makers are about what the car is about and not what its producing to are world. No need for gas today ; ill walk!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator ,\n\nThe stretegy we still use to elect our president is not always effective. During the times that the United States was becoming a country , many senators argued that having states with more electoral votes is extremely unfair. By doing so ,you are telling the people of that state that their vote is not worth as much as someone that lives for example in California. Using electoral college made George W. Bush president when most people preferred Al Gore. With the help of our advanced technology , we could accomplish giving equivalent votes to each person of the United States regardless of their location. If we wouuld have used popular vote since the beginning of history, we could have avoided having presidents such as George W. Bush that have caused catastrophes in this country. The winner-takes-all system portrays no justice. It is no coicidence that the president constantly visits countries with the most electoral votes.+\n\nSincerely , PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who is at fault when the technology fails and someone is injured? When there are positive aspects and negative aspects of dirverless cars, one should think about who will take responsibilities. Driving driverless cars could be seen as advantage to some but could also be seen as disadvantage for some.\n\nI believe that driving driverless car is more dangerous than today's car. The cars could have postive aspects such as the speed and the fuels uses. The cars could have negative aspects too. In paragraph 7, the article stated that the GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vihicle is in danger of backing into an object. If we can make an example, people could have not notice the vibrate if they don't sit at the dirver seat.They could be resting at the back of the car while the car is driving it self. On the same paragraph, it also said that Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. I think installing cameras inside someone's car is unneccessary because everyone has privacy that they want to protect.\n\nDriving driverless could be advantage for many people. The cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. That is something that would be able to change the world. The car can handle dirivng functions at speeds up to 25 mph. Sensors being advanced could be advantage to this driverless car. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power fromt he engine. That could help the human driver to control when they are managing it alone.\n\nDriving driverless could be dangerous as the founder of the Google Car project stated. The car would not need driver but drivers still need to control it. Now, that is not something that could be called as driverless car. Paragraph 7 stated \"special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" The car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to alert the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. Then, this means the people who drive must remain aleart all the time. This had lead to questions on people's safety.\n\nUltimately, there could be postiive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Many people may have felt more relief because they do not have to worry about speeding up more than they used to. In other way, there may be people who opposed to this idea. They may felt like there are more dangers in it. I believe that safety is a big concern when it comes to driving. The questions that is still lingering is that who will take responsibiites when accident happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience difficult Having patience difficult I patient wait things During school I always looking clock I cant wait class time Some times I think I rush things little bit much I wish I patient Im Im patient I think comes waiting I get curious For example class I get excited day ends Some day I want improve waiting style I dont think happen anytime soon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether by developing technology and artificial intelligent science all kinds of careers will be done by robots in the future. From my perspective, although in the future machines will have a huge impact on human life, there are many areas in that robots can not be considered as an alternative to human work. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, some people assert that in the next years, robots will be able to do most of the jobs in society and there won't be any opportunity for individuals. However, I strongly disagree with that statement. In fact, machines which work based on artificial intelligent are made by the human, as a result, they never have been able to do the jobs that need mental skills. For example, if a company face serious financial problems, only persons with skills like problem-solving, leadership, and teamwork will be able to solve them. \r\n\r\nThe second reason that we have to take into consideration is that the ways of communicating with other persons are a special ability of humans. Precisely, robots can not communicate with each other as well as with individuals. For instance, being a teacher needs to have many skills, but the foremost is that a teacher can make a strong bond with their students. Due to that, pupils will have convenient contact with their lecturers and it affects their learning outcomes.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I would like to conclude that the capacity of robots is limited and they never be able to do all kinds of careers which individuals do. Furthermore, artificial intelligence has many differences to the real one, based on that, there are always jobs for people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Shut libraries Yes I music movies etc could contain unnessisarry attire could also contain potty mouth language The words could corupt minds youngsters All librairies put needs customers The things make cash around agree They create seperate libraries type reader Still put things building They put sales kids movies adults librarians say books books I think I ll write sieries thank much However dull enviornments lack customers libraries close Make use thought I told I wonder books endangered species fish But kid s sieries dieing popular ones replaced family stories If little kid listen cursing hisher mind warped life What chiccursing loud front baby How saying CAPS CAPS ball meanie Maybe THAT give education However older boys girls teaching bad language young mindmaybe even learn good language Those dilenguents nt care minds Your honor I proof right I suggest reeducating teenage dilenguents acting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe computers positive effect people positive rots brain I think computer waste time excuse spend time family go outside enjoy nature This computer time reduced family time increased Absolutley computers type things kill brain cells spend much time Teenagers main cause get computer get myspace facebook wont learning anything kill major brain cells When go school take cmts going fail wont know anything computer Also This big problem familys dont hang always computer The excuse parents CAPS im computer never go children get upset This leads anger problems stop listening All cause effect My friends anger problems nt listen anyone family never hung Consequently peope spend time inside computer guessed right sister computer never goes outside enjoy nature People get haute go outside dont want eve Doctor brown says everyone go outside relax mostly everyday staying house good The computer defeating purpose On hand computer nifty device handy times like need perfect directions need question answered Sometimes want talk old time friends nt seen Computers good alot things much good us lastly d like say computer great purpose think makes excuses us dont spend time family dont go outside enough enjoy nature", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many studnets use computers in class but ther is also a large portion that do not on a day to day basiss. The thought of computers being able to read expressions is pretty fasinating, however seem unnessisary. Like hummans computers make mistakes; the Facial Action Coding System could inaccutartly change a lesson plan, missread an expression, or not pick up an expression .\n\nAt school students do get bored, but the teacher does not change the lesson plan so why should the computer. All the evidence is a prediction with no hard evidience backing it; \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts\". In class students ask questions or go to a teacher when they do not get it so a computer would not be much of a help unless it was for kids who did online school and did not have a teacher helping them through the lessons.\n\nMost students are not nessisarly excited about school so they quite regularly wear a bored expression throughout the day. Not to mention \"each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no expression)\". Some kids just do not show emotion especialy older kids who just want to get what needs to be done finished. What if a kid is genuinly confussed and the computre missreads the expression. that could either cause more confussion as the lesson goes on or make the lesson too easy.\n\nComputers make errors all the time they are no where near perfection. What if the computer does not have the sennsors to pick up expression. It is not like every school or home schooled student is going to go out and buy a computer that can do the same thing a parent or teacher can do. This invention \"stores similar anatomical information as electronic code\". The Facial Action Coding System is amazing to show expressions in art work, but not for students.\n\nWhile coputres do aid us at many things there are somethings that should just be left to us to do. Students get confused and bored by many things but that can all be fixed by a little bit of help. If the student is really that confused then maybe that program is not for them. As well as if the student does not show emtion while doing work on the computer. It is a neat idea but it should not be brought into the classroom. Its more trouble than what it is worth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI have read some articles and understand what the Eletoral College does for this contry. I agree that this state needs this system instead of a popular vote. I understand that people have the right to pick and choose the president but if you think about it how many people do vote? And how many poeple vote for what they truly think is best. I have leardned that most people follow the crowd. An Electoral College is just what we need to keep the poeple safe. As explained on\n\nWhat is the Electoral College?\n\nby the Office of the Federal register \"the founding fathers establsihed it in the Consitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by the popular vote of qualified citizens.\"\n\nThe Electoal College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote of for the president and Vice President, and counting of the electoral votes by Congress. Its a difficult process but it has worked again and again over many decades. The Electoal College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appel. which the canidate gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurailty. that is a desirable result because a candidate with only regional appeal will umlikely succed to be a president.\n\nNow each canidate running for president has his or her own group of electors. And they are generally choosen by the canidate's political party. I understand the positive and the negative part of popuar votes and Electoral College. I also understand that just one vote can change hthe futrue of most states. How could one vote change everything? It's quite simply one vote makes one person win the presidentcy. What if that one vote changes our basic ways to live. What if that one vote can take away some of our rights. What if one vote can make the world turn into yet another great depression. The Electoral College is the way to go. As said in\n\nThe Indefenisble Electoral College by Brandford Plumer in paragraph 13 \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in the states they know they have no chance of winning focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\" The Electoral has its flaws but so does the popluar vote.\n\nBut\n\nIn defense of the Electoal College by Richard A. Posner it clearly states that \" Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a polical prefrence rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election....\" No one wants run-off elections or an uncertainty on the outcome. Everyone want to feel safe that we're going to have a president and have no rebellons for it. The system has its flaws but it also has there advantages . Mr. Senator I strongly believe in the Electoral College system. And you should too.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA student of Deltona, Florida", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She going take test agan feels like She needs She snow melts geese came back means She wants take Spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.\r\n\r\nMore and more individuals are inclined to do perilous sports, including hang-gliding, mountain climbing, and car racing. From my perspective, I reckon there are a number of unique men who prefer to venture their life on particular dangerous activities in the world, and these type of riskful sports must get banned officially, as it has no virtue.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it is an inevitable fact 1 per cent o the population is special, as the point of view is distinct from the overwhelming majority of people. They do life-threatening sports to get satisfied, as extremists love the vivid sensation and intense feeling to feel they are alive. For example, Rayleigh, a skydiver from England, once said, I feel happy, when diving; I can not live without this type of vivid senses. Thus, some individuals advocate Rayleigh's view.\r\n\r\nSecondly, many adults get injured and even pass away because of their eccentric passion every year, as they assume gratification", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the view that celebrities have to accept the manner in which their private lives are made public by the media. lt is undeniable that they are in the spotlight and want to be popular by choice. However, their rights to privacy need to be protected as well, as they too are humans. I shall put forth my arguments in this essay. To commence with, celebrities are already under a lot of pressure to perform well, as they are public figures and are always in the public eye. Be it a politician, a sportsperson, a singer or an actor, all these professions require them to be at their best at all times. This stress of someone constantly following them affects the way they perform, which ultimately leads to a loss for the masses. Secondly, these celebs are role models for the people. When any negative side of their private life is exposed, their followers think it glamorous to do the same, which is definitely detrimental for the society as a whole. For example, if people come to know that the celeb they adore, smokes and drinks in private life, they think there is nothing wrong in doing so and also copy their idol. This is where responsible journalism is needed. Undoubtedly, the celebrities choose this life for the name and fame and to be ln the spotlight. Without the media, the term celebrity will not hold any meaning. However, that doesn't mean that the media and paparazzi have a right to stalk them at all times. To add to it, sensationalizing the news in order for the channel to get more TRP is unethical. Responsible journalism and some ethics need to be followed by those who get the news to the masses, as they may adversely affect someone's personal and professional lives. Who doesn't remember the unfortunate incident when the world lost a very eminent public figure, Lady Diana? That accident happened because the paparazzi were chasing the car she was travelling in. lt is something which could have been easily avoided, had the paparazzi been a little rational in their behavior. To sum up, it can be reiterated that responsible journalism means knowing its limits. Celebs too have their private lives and they have a right to privacy. The media has to be judicious in knowing what to report and how much to report, and should never misuse its power.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education has become an important issue for governments. While it is a priority to educate youth, in my opinion, teaching adults is equally crucial and I agree that governments should invest in this.\r\n\r\neducation youngsters would directly affect a country's development. They are the population who should bring a prosperous future to their nation. They are likely to have unique ideas that could revolutionize human life, but without learning state-of-the-art knowledge that would be impossible. For example, technological advancement, especially in the field of artificial intelligence, could not be achieved if people were not literate. Therefore, more progress and development may only be feasible if governments prioritize educating young adults.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that literacy is vital for everyone in society, including adults. Firstly, they are role models for children and youth. If they are not educated, they probably could not bring a literate generation and this possibly has a negative impact on the nation's future. Secondly, literacy is an aspect that is considered as a development of a country. Since adults contribute a high percentage of the population, the nation will not be considered a developed and educated one if this majority is not taught. Finally, they need to be literate to live in the modern world, where everything is dependent on technology and human-machine interaction.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is fundamental to have a majority of well-educated individuals in society and governments should not only concern with young people's education but also allocate a specific budget to literate adults who still cannot even read and write. It seems to me that these two groups are equally important to be educated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A long wait only four time I moved Yes moved Quite long way south I young little girl didnt care much So I lived went kindergarden made friends moved new house I seven That I found moving Again back Well I wasnt four anymore I lot amazing friends particular two I would start I didnt hate idea I didnt love either Of course It didnt exactly matter We moving anyway I knew beginning I would easily fun make new friends The thing I didnt want leave behind old friends memories stuff I loved place So I took along memories promised keep touch friends moved Novi different good There plenty changes adjust pretty easy overall I made plenty new friends I hang everyday Ive slipped life like slip bed every night What I fun feels like normal I living four years I exchanging letters emails events memories friends friends time But even I long go back visit I patiently waiting happen Now I think patience paying I finally get visit year My difficult I dont get see everyone But long I see friends time Ill get see older friends Yipee I cant wait For years waiting provided opportunity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it is not an alien face because in the text it states \" There was no alien monument after all.\". They used an digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, and because the text states that \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or measa landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nThe first reason why I say that it was not an alien head is because It was just a natural landform. That is because when the had the chance to take the picture they did and when it first appeared on a JPL web site showing that it wsa an natural landform, that it was nothing that you could now but not tell no one. Some people thought that it was still a alien head but had no proof abut it they had proof that it was an landform.\n\nAnother reason why I thnk it is an alien head is because they had digtial image 3 times bigger than te pixel size so if something was there they could see what it was, it was best Viking photo ever so they could not have said nothing. You could see almost anything out that picture even something small you could see it so there wa no way that it was an alien face.\n\nLast reason why is becase when they got a look it was actually a \"butte or mesalandforms common around the American West nd it's as common to see around there. I was very hard work in order to do that anyway so if they were wrong why would they waste so much time doing this anyway. When they came back everyone was waiting and when they got the picture it was just an landform and they had so much proof about it to.\n\nIn conclusion everyone has there opinion and they believe what they want and sometimes people had proof about that they think is going on and that some people don't they just think that it looks like something that it is always going to be what you think it is. You have to have evidence to back up your thoughts or no one will believe you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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