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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Abolishing the Electoral College may be the best choice because the most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the elecetoral college. Also at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\n\nIf a tie occurs the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representating 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represents 35 million voters. Because of many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, The House's selection can hardly reflect the will of the people. For exapmple a tie would have occured in 1976 if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voter in Hawaii had voted the other way.\n\nThe electoral college can be unfair to voters because the winner-take-all syntem in each state, candidates fon't spend time in states the know they have no chance of winning. For example during the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\n\nThe elctoral college can have many good things but it still is not good enough for us to keep it. If the winner-tak-all systm didn't exist candidates would spend time in states even if they know they have no chance of winning, because they will not lose anything or maybe have at least a liitle chance of winning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator\n\nIn the year 2000 there was a presidental election. The two canadate runnning were Bush and Gore. In that election there was a problem, Gore had won the votes of the people but Bush had won the votes of the the Electoral votes. Now the question is asked who should win, should the person who had the most votes from the people win or the person who had the most votes from the Electoral College win? This is something that has been going on for a long time, does the Electoral College over rule the people? This is an importain question that we the people should be asking, do we realy pick the persendent or does the Electoral College pick it and we are just there for show? The Electoral College is an out dated sistem that we keep because the goverment wants there to be a clear winner, but we know that is not what the people the people want the right to dicide.\n\nThe Electoral College was established by the founding fathers and made as a \"compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualifies citizens.\" The Electoral College vote on the President and the Vice President. It has 538 members and for there to be a winner a canadate, has to get a majority of 270 electoral votes. Your states allotment of electors is equal to the number of members in its Congressional degation. The problem here is that there is 300 million people in this contery and only 538 people get to vote on who is going to be president.\n\nAlso most states have a Winner takes all system were the winner of the majority gets all of the votes. For example florida has 29 electoral votes so if one canadate get 15 which is the magority he will get all 29. Because of this there is not an acurate repisentaion of what the state thinks.\n\nThe last reason it is not a good system is because the people's votes do not matter. In the 2000 election Gore had won the peoples votes and Bush had on the Eletoral votes. now Bush became president even tho Gore had won with the people. The biggest problem with the Electoral College is the fact that it over rules the people. If the Eletoral College wins it does not matter how many people vote for the other person running it will not matter. Now the question is acked, What is the point of voting if it does not matter who we vote for only the Electoral College votes matter?®", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear think excersizing nature becoming less less I nt think opinion I think computers positive effect help connect people different parts world Learn different stuff s make life easier Be intouch faraway relatives First I believe computers positive effect connect people different parts world You talk thier culture About whats thier tradition marriage etc The schools ask questions Secondly I believe computers positive effect learn stuff s make life easier Because learn easier different standing better Study s get school Thirdly I believe computer positive effects far away relative If talk long time wondering life When meet catch In conclusion technology basically help future well The marvolous computer help intouch really good familys friends Now time fancy technology till years come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a major aspect of transportation in the twenty-first century. Having the hottest, newest, model of vehicle is all the craze in todays car-loving society. But new research shows that cars are becoming a leading contributor to the pollution of major cities world wide, and cities all across the globe are doing whatever they can to help prevent the pollution.\n\nEupore has always fancied its luxurious cars, esspecially in upscale communities. But in recent years countries such as Gremany and France have made efforts to reduce the amount of cars on the streets in order to reduce the amount of pollution in the air. A new upscale community in Vauban, Germany has been built competely on the basis of no cars. Seventy percent of the residents of this community do not own cars, and those who do own cars, must keep them outside of the community. Many residents here feel that having no cars gives them a little peace of mind. Heidrun Walter, a resident of Vauban says, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" A major up-side to not owning a car is the relief from stress. Many people have many worries about their cars; whether it will work, the amount of gas in it, the cost of gas, and so on. Getting rid of the problem also gets rid of the worry. Getting rid of cars also allows new opportunities for better city building. Makeing cities and suburbs denser discourages the need for cars and promotes the idea of walking, biking, or skating to a destination.\n\nThe United States has always loved its cars, but recently many people have taken to the side-walks instead of taking to the streets. Transportation is the second largest source of emissions in America and it seems to be declining. Studyies find that after 2005, many Americans began to stop buysing cars and started to find other ways to go from point A to point B. Many people credit this fact to the recession around 2008. After the down turn, people became more money contious, and the unemployed didn't need to go anywhere anyway. With no cars, Americans can save thousands of dollars a year because of no payments and not having to pay those expensive gas prices! The fewer cars on the street has also had a postivie impact on the enviornment. Less greenhouse gases has made the air in the suburbs and some cities much cleaner. Technology has also made a huge impact on our commute. People connected with friends and family without even having to drive and visit them, and teleconfernces across countries and continents have reduced the need to drive or fly places to do buisness. Many mojor car producig companies have also rebranded themselves in order to make personal transportation a thing of the past and make mass public transportation a obtainable goal.\n\nSmog is a big issue, not only in the United States, but also in places such as Erope and Latin America, both of which have started to make efforts on cleaning the air and redcing the amount of cars on the road. In the 1990's Bogota, Colombia started a tradition in which the citizens find alternative ways of trasportation to work and shops one day out of the year, and for three straight years, cars have been banned in the streets on this \"holiday.\" Because this event has grown so poular, many people have started to practice life without cars on a daily basis. New parks have formed, hundreds of biking paths have been added throughout the city, and upscale resturants and stores have began to pop up in the city. The car-free lifestyle has definitely effected Bogota, Colombia. Europe has also had a great quarrel with its smog problem in recent years, and Frane has been making an effort to stop the smog problem from getting any bigger. Paris recently put a ban on driving in the city in effort to reduce smog. On Monday, divers with even license plates were asked to find other ways of transportation, and on Tuesday drivers with odd license plates could not drive. The population did not have a very positive reaction, but the congestion of cars in the capital did go down sixty percent on both days, and the efforts worked so well, the city was able to lift the ban after on week.\n\nCar culture has been a part of our societ for a long time. However, large strides have been made all across the globe in order to reduce the amount of cars on the road and the amount of pollution in the air. These strides have had many positive impacts on the communities they have served in and continute to make tomorrow a better and cleaner world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, Driverless Cars Are Coming, in the first paragraph it ask you, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" In response to that question, I believe that the future does have ideas for such things, Why? Technology has taught us to be creative, we live in a world where you almost have to do nothing for yourself. So computer operrated cars are no shock to my eyes and ears, well until it actually happens...\n\nI will begin talking about the risk being ensured, I say ensured because it is almost bound to happen to have reported accidents and or malfunctions.\n\nIn the article it mentions people testing out and making assumptions to these self driven cars. One statement caught my eye when saying \"They worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" That is one example of why we shouldn't be putting self driven cars on the road, they're going to be expensive and always needing an upgrade, what if you're driving, well your car is driving itself, and you run into an issue while on the road with others out there, could the car malfuntion and cause you to lose your life?\n\nI do believe that people only do things because they feel as if they need to be up to date on what the new and improved inventions: Not saying I wouldn't have fun, but am I wiling to risk my life along with others?\n\nThere are some positive perks about these self drivin cars... One being The necessititaes the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention when the car is about to run into, on going traffic, construction sites, and or a route to which a human is needed to attend the wheel.\n\nHave they thought about giving examples on when a good time to use these cars instead of an everday drive? I think more advice would help give a good responsible outlook on these cars. I mean it all sounds fun in games to have something to futurisitic, but let's be realisitic and think about the cost, and how much you will need to update on it, do you need a certain type of insurance to purchase this car? Is my safety guarenteed?\n\nThese questions i asked would need to be answered before i ever think about buying, everyone needs to know the answers to these questions before not even thinking about all of the above.\n\nIn conclusion I would like to say that although it sounds fun it's too risky for me to try. I hope when these cars have passed the laws that the laws aren't broken... I will be sticking to my own driving for myslef, i like to have control and know whats ahead for me. I think driverless cars are ignorant and no needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It said way How ever nt include part obstacles go For instance way docking dirigibles Empire state building architects nt work possible problems idea Like fact American dirigibles used helium instead hydrogen Also wind currents stronger force high air regular life level Also unideal place trying use They ve taken heed businessman s slogan CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order to have a brigther future, some people argued that it can be achieved from high education while other is from working directly after finishing high school. Having a higher education degree offer professional qualifications and networking opportunities. Meanwhile, having a job after studying in senior high school also can be beneficial for earning money and gaining experiences. This essay will discuss more about both opposing views based on the writer’s opinion.\n\nTo begin with, going to college is the best way for enhancing the quality and ability of the university students. By gaining a better level of study, the university graduates can have the opportunity to get a professional certificate based on the special field of study which is very useful for having a better job. To exemplify this, getting a degree certificate of accounting study helps people to work in a bank or administration office because they already have the required skills for being an accountant. Not only does it offer a specific skill, gaining experiences, internship and organization, in university can nurture students’ real work experience and offer opportunities to establish networking in the industry. \n\nOn the other hand, looking for a job also becomes the best option for fulfilling people's needs. Many people choose to find a job when they finish their studies in high school instead of continuing to study because they want to earn money to support their life. Not only does it benefit in earning money, but also by working in the industry can help people to improve their abilities of a specific skill such as managing time, teamwork and other professional skills like writing reports and public speaking. For example, by working in different division might be fostering people experience of leadership and team-communication skills.\n\nAll in all, the writer totally believes that the way to be a more successful person in the future can be getting from either higher education or working straightly after studying in high school. As long as they can take the opportunity for gaining experience to enhance their not only basic skills but also professional skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion computer ars benefit socient reasons I talk wit friends I homework I olner things computer First reasons I talk friends I talk family facebook myspace msn I se family camera msn camera allot help lik family I chat every instead sending pictures videos going visiting Next reasons I homework I write big letter I lot work computer easy Final reason I lot things like find question project", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on self driving cars is as good as anyone elses, but my thought on self driving cars maybe different. I think that self driving cars would be beneficial to society. There would most likely be some bad thingsalong the path. Like what if the cars can not perform and hve the necesity that humans can do. People would be able to do more things while in a vehicle than to just watch the road and other vehicles. Say you were in one of these self driving cars and you had a call on your phone you would actually be able to take it instead of just letting it ring, or if you got a text you could message the human back. Now people might say thats not always good, but say you got a text from a family member saying that one someone in your family got into an accident if your were in a non-self driving car you wouldnt know till you stopped and checked your phone. On the other hand if you had a self driving car you could answer it and you would be able to text the human back. Ask where are they taking them and you would be there in no time instead of not knowing. Thus completes my thought on self driving cars hope you liked it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology of being able to depict someone's feelings, or traits, could do so much for the world we live in today. Most human interaction is conducted through emotion, internet, or even just faces. If we could tell just from a computer how someone felt, it would be inevitably amazing. This technology could help us perform so many acts, especially through schooling systems, doctors, etc. (Paragraph 6)\n\nBeing against this technology is okay, but think about how much it could do for the world if it actually could work. Being able to change a school lesson, due to someone feeling bored/mad with it. This is extremely important for us to know about, just for the fact that it could change so much. We could tell if someone was lying, mad, happy, because nobody is emotionless. (Paragraph 6)\n\nIt could show how doctors are under pressure with surgeries, shots, etc. Knowing how someone acts while doing something important enough to where you devote all of your concentration to it, would be the best thing ever. You could spot criminals because even actually even spotting them, in some cases. The Mona Lisa is such an old paintint, if we can detect emotion through that from a computer, we can do anything. (Paragraph 1)\n\nThe 44 muscles in our faces move very differently, some the same. They all come together to form a certain face, or \"emotion\" in our every day lives. Knowing if someone had a certain emotion could help scientists find more ways to improve life for us, here on Earth. As said in Paragraph one, it can tell what percentage of each emotion you feel, think about that.\n\n(Paragraph 3)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock For example mentioned paragraph thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The difficulty stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet Wind another obstacle builders overcome The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents And even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around mooring mast Dirigibles moored open fields could weighted back lead weights using led weights Empire State Building would safe would dangle high pedestrians street", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I aprove of driverless cars because, I think it's way safer. If you are disabled and you want to go on a long trip, you dont have to drive the full way there. It's cheaper, and better for the economy.\n\nIn paragraph 7, it explains on how the car is very helpful at keeping people safe. None of the cars are completely driverless yet. Although they arent completely driverless,theres a big part of them that are, and are safe. The car would be able to steer, acelerate, and brake. The brake is the big one. If the car knows that it will run into something it will brake by itself, if the human is not capable. Also it explains in paraghraph 7 that when the car is backing up, the seat will vibrate if it will hit something. That way the driver knows when to break.\n\nJust think about all the times you were worried that an elder or disabled person would drive a car. I think that the driverless cars, will put that worry away. If the disabled feels tired or in pain, the car can take over for miles on end. Although probably they would still be on alert, that is good incase the car comes to construction. The car also lets you know when you have to pay attention to the road. So that helps in a big situation, when they just needed that break.\n\nI know that I always complain about the gas prices. In paragraph one it tells us that when the driverless cars are all set to go, it will only use up half of the fuel that we use for regular cars. Keep the earth Green right?! This can help with the polution problem. It's just cheaper in general. For someone who cant keep affording to pay for gas every other week, it helps in a long run.\n\nIn conclusion the driverless cars would be safer for the disabled and the kids in the car. It helps keep people rested and just have a good time on the road trip they are taking. Its better for the enviorment, and it helps keep the air clean. It saves us more money. The future and the world is evolving. The best way is to make sure that we have better technology and that the world is a safer and cleaner place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is the most important part of our lives today.Through technolgy humans have created robots whcih is very important for the development of our future ahead as our lives our getting busier we need extra help for our parents and household work vice versa few people thinks the inventions of robots are dangerous because we will forget the value of humans.In my opinion i believe rrobots have negative impacts of our community in terms of jobs and health.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the robots are everywhere and do help us with our daily chores like house cleaning and other esstienal jobs in our lives for example now robots serves in the restaurants and self billing counters and taking jobs of lots of young candidates who need jobs as an career.And also it has a vey negative impacts on health as growing techlonogy of robots will make humans lazy and unmoviitated.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robotics are very important for humans in comming years as everything is controlled by AI systems our goverment, finances an d defense they work faster then humans in terms of gathering information and data.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, robots are importants for our future for the development in confidential securities and dangerous because we will not value human talent anymore with developing technology. In my opnion i believe the robots can take over humans intelligence very faster.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes I believe book found offensive person removed book shelf You think person s perspective put shoes Say went library certain thing constantly felt like constantly hanging head would tough problem deal every day visit library Also everyday life One reason find book shelf offends another person knows affends likely use say mean harsh things Another reason believe offensive book removed shelf place often I mean see book every day dont think would start get nerves little bit So I trying say I beleive offensive book shelf remove Music much issue books Music something listen hear Books things read I say music big issue music see like books Books usally says right black white Also posibality right front words picture So I saying find something offensive fix instead letting bother every day life So get fixed get ever find offensive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez feels great amount passion love He goes detail culture says much means He also feels love love family friend always He says That family goes blood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people insist that volunteer services like charity activity should be introduced to the high school curriculum, whereas others think it should not be treated as part of mandatory education. Nonetheless, I personally lean more toward the latter view, simply because the level of benefits is heavily affected by the individual point of view or circumstance.\r\n\r\nThere are several cases that unpaid service would be beneficial experience for high school children. For instance, they would be able to develop a sense of community or meet new people regardless of their individual skill or aptitude. According to a research paper issued by Cambridge University last year, the majority of successful people in business intentionally participate some volunteer activity at an early age in order to create connections for the future. Considering that childhood is a preparation period for a member of society, it is no doubt providing them such opportunities are more practical and fruitful idea.\r\n\r\nTurning to the other side of the argument, it could be acknowledged as a just hindrance for achieving an individual goal. Firstly, for the people who are considering to go to the university as their future plan, their top priority may not make connections but building up academic knowledge or conquering examination. Secondly, there might be students who dedicate their time for part-time job to set aside money as a tuition fee or provide their family. From their point of view, volunteer work is just wasting their time and not necessarily essential. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while some people say imposing unpaid service for high school students is significant, we cannot ignore the fact that it has not only a positive aspect but also a negative side. I believe that as long as it has some drawbacks, it should not be a compulsory subject and needlessly deprive student's precious time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, my name is Luke Bomberger, and I am here to tell you why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The first reason why anyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is because when you join, you can meet lots of new people that can become your lifelong friends if you are willing to be friendly. Also, if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can travel all over the world and experience beautiful destinations in the world. Finally, when you join, you have the opportunity to help save millions of lives and prevent families from experiencing a lifetime of sorrow.\n\nFirstly, when you are on the ship for almost a whole month, it can get pretty boring if you don't make any friends. Just being on that ship with all of those people for so long, they become your family. When you are playing baseball with your brothers or having fun competing in a table-tennis tournament, you forget all about your troubles. On my trip, although I had only been with these people for only a month, it felt like I had known them since I was a little boy.\n\nSecondly, my favorite part of this trip was that I was able to travel the world and experience new and beautiful places like the exotic Panama Canal or the breathtaking Acropolis of Greece. When I was on my trip, there was not much color inside the ship, but when I stood outside, I felt like I was on my vacation! The sheer beauty of the world excited me so much that on one trip, I took a break and experienced a fascinating and romantic gondola ride on the water streets of Venice, Italy. Every place I went, I felt like a small child discovering a brand new world.\n\nLastly, if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can help save lives and even families. During my experience in the program, everytime we unloaded our animals, I felt proud knowing that I had just helped save lives, and I am here to tell you that knowing that you have just saved lives can be the best feeling in the world. If the Seagoing Cowboys program had never started, children would have been left without their father, and mothers without their son. If you join this program for just one month, you can save a family from a lifetime of sorrow.\n\nFrom my experience, you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can create lifelong friends, experince some of the most beautiful locations on Earth, and you can also save millions of lives. I have said this lots of times before, but this experience has helped become so much more aware of suffering people in other countries, and I am very grateful for this life changing adventure.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created happy All people story happy sad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process that has been used for presidential elections since the Founding Fathers established it in the Consitution. This system does not necessary give the voters a direct vote, but rather a vote for a slate of electors that vote for them. The voters intrust that their elected slate will vote for their favored presidential canidate. It brings up the argument whether this system of voting should be changed or kept. The Electoral College has some of its good points, but over all, it needs to be changed. Voters need a direct say in their vote, and this system turns off the interest of potiential voters.\n\nThe voters of the United states should have the ability to directly vote for who they want as President. After all, the people are what make up the country and should have say. \"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational,\" says Bradford Plumer in\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong .\n\nThis means that the Electoral College is unfair to the people because the slate they vote for might not even vote for their canidate. Also, in the same article, Plumer states, \"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" This means that there is a chance that the electors could vote for whoever they please.\n\nThis system of voting does not give the voters a direct say as to who they want, but also turns off the interest of voters who should be voting for their country. \"Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know that have no chance of winning...\" as said by Plumer. People within those states would have no motivation to vote for their president because their potienial president did not come to their state to convince them to vote. The canidates are only focused on getting majority of the electoral votes, and not who the people really want. \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets ddin't get to see a single campaign ad,\" Plumer had stated. These states lack any information about the potiential ruler of their country just because the canidates are focused on the states that will help them win.\n\nAlthough \"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for a party's nominee,\" as said by Richard A. Posner in\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , the possibility of having a winner based on electoral vote and not popular vote is very much possible. For instance, the 2000 election, Gore had won popular vote but due to the electoral vote, Bush had won the election. Gore won the vote for the most popular all over the nation, but because the electoral college had a majority of Bush, it was like the nation's actual vote did not matter.\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair to the people because they do not get a direct say for who they want, and the canidates only focus on states that will help them win based on electoral vote. The people need a say exactly who they want and should not depend on others to do the vote for them. Canidates should not only appeal to states that would make them win, but also to other states so the whole nation knows exactly who might be ruling over their country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit statements kind pointless put One sentence essay couple word dont need used In sentence forty miles pedal I arrive first town I dont think into pedal needs describing anything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There´s nothing better than the Seagoing Cowboys Program! There´s no doubt that you´d feel great about joining it. The Seagoing Cowboys Program is a program designed to help other nations after the struggle of the Pacific War and WWII. Seagoing Cowboys deliver food and animals to areas that have devasted by these wars.\n\nFirst, an obvious reason to join is that you would be helping citizens of struggling nations, and helping to make them prosperous again. After reading that, there should be no doubt about the good you would be doing.\n\nNext, you would have free time to do whatever you wish in whatever nation you visit. I myself have seen wonderous things from China and all over Europe! You might see even more impressive things than I have!\n\nAt last, I think you are beginning to see things as I do, not only are helping others, you yourself are having a blast as well! So what what are you waiting for? Get out there and make a difference!!!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author Narciso Rodriguez creates passionate mood experiences home rather house growing different community shaped man become today Narciso forever grateful parents willingness give good lives Cuba move sake The selflessness thoughtful choices Narciso s mother father made truly nt words able describe Narciso feels nt related background believe things order family The loving atmosphere living neighborhood Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants created feeling coming together good time despite differences Narciso cherishes memories kept childhood much always admire parents sacrifices made", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Infrastructure developments are a major investment in every country. A segment of society claims that the capital from the construction industry should be spent in building new structures rather than renovating the existing ones. I entirely disagree with this idea.\n\nFirstly, traditional buildings have an irreplaceable historical value. In addition to the unique materials, techniques, and design implemented, most old constructions have several political and social facts related with it. Consequently, having these constructions preserved assist new generations to acknowledge the history and culture of peoples. Moreover, the value of historical sites can reflect on an increase in tourism rates. To illustrate in numbers, research conducted with tourists in Paris showed that the city's architecture was the main motivation of visits for seventy percent of them. Therefore, replacing old constructions instead of renovating them results in clear financial and historical losts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is natural for humans to be curious. We always face challenges presented by our environment.\n\nIn this article, the author explains one of the presented challenges: \"The Exploration of our planetary neighbor Venus\".\n\nThe author describes Venus as unhabitable place for humans. With high temperatures and preassure, saying \"Venus is the hottest planet of our Solar System, even though Mercury is closer to the sun...and its atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet\". Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volvanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seaking land on its surface. Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nIn the article, the author explains that we've tryed many attempts to land numerous spacecraft on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, since no spacecraft survived for more that a few hours.\n\nHe also meansure that NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\n\nIn the 8th paragraph, he concludes that we should explore and discover new things, and don't get limited by the dangers and dounbt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argument is about how the landform is just a natural occurance. I may have proof to why it may just be another hoax N.A.S.A. may be involved in. If you look closely at the pictures took within the time period of 1976-2001 you can tell there has been a mistake because you look at the (Face on mars) and you think what!? is that true?. I do not think it is real because if you look at the pictures from 1976-2001 you can tell there has been a increase in technology such as photography. If you were to look at the pictures then you can easily tell its not a face because for one there is no face there anymore another reason is it looks like a mesa as one reporter said.\n\nMy personal opinion is that it was just something to get the community aroused and it did indeed. In the passage it said \"It even haunted grocery lines for 25 years!\" and also it played its part in movies and things like that. And only recently in 2010-2016 has there been ANY proof there has been any life or there may be any life there what so ever. The reason of that is they found a river or something I can't exactly remember. And also they (N.A.S.A.) don't believe that there could be any life there because the atmosphere is so hin and so hot they believe that it would be hard for something to grow and live on the planet mars. That is why I believe it was either a hoax or a mis-understanding. Thank you very much.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "STREET_ADDRESS\n\nCITY_STATE_ZIP_CODE\n\nSTREET_ADDRESS\n\nCITY_STATE_ZIP_CODE\n\nDear Senator,\n\nToday I have been thinking about how we elect our prisedent. I have done some reseach and found out that we use the Electoral College. Some people thing the Electoral College is good. Other not so much, like Bob Dole and much more. Well I also think the Electoral College should be abolished. The Electoral College give people the allusion that they have no chance and give bigger populated states more power.\n\nTo start off, \"people in the United State of America vote for president\". When in realaty they attualy vote for slate of electors and then that goes to the president. \" Under the elictoral college system, voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" says in Source 2 (What is wrong with the electoral college). Giving the feeling to people that the president they want will not win. Let me give you an example from source 2 \"thanks to the quirks of the electoral college -won the popular vote, but lost the presidency , over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direcet election\". This mean the voters voted for him ,but he still lost. What if eveyone in you state vote for that guy and still lost, doesnt that give you the allusion that your vote has no chance?\n\nTalking about states , did you know the electoral collegs also works on state population? Each state has a population, giving them their electoral votes. President will target the bigger populated states to win their votes. Giving the more populated state more power to do what they want.\" a larger state gets more attention from the presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does...\" in source 3. Since the president wants to win and needs the electoral vote he will go to the states and do thing for them. Like donate money for schools or help with businesses so they can have their votes. Some state that get more attention/power have are Texas(38), Florida(29), and Califonia(55). Saying in Source 3. \"Obama , who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes\" from Florida said in souce 3. You know why? Because a week before he came to schools in Florida and helped them. I know because he came to my school.\n\nThe Electoral College should be abolished. It make people think they have no chance of winning and give more populated state more power. I think Dole was right we should of abolished the Elctoral College along time ago. Can you do something about it Senator?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, in several countries, most of the population are interested to know about the history of their accommodations. In this essay, I will discuss the reason for this growing trend and expresses my opinion on the matter. Firstly, I will give a reason for why people interested to know about their lodging, and secondly, I will explore the way of researching for this view.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, many of menkind like to understand the mystery of the place that they live or will live there. One reason for that could be to humans have an interest in everything and like to explore, and it comes from the beginning. furthermore, people want to no is there any bad situation that could be put them in danger or harassment. For example, one of my friends bought a house 2 months ago before purchasing he didn't ask anybody about the building but now he is really regret because his neighbours are really nosy. Moreover, we have to research everything before buying it and in this case, the thing is home, and we will pay a huge amount of money, moving on, our family will live there also, our children will group and goes to school there. That's why populations becoming interested in finding out the history of the house they live in or will live in.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, one of the ways we can find information about lodging we want to buy or rent is the internet, and this is one of the most popular methods, for example, we can read the reviews of the building. Also, we can ask to the manager of the building because the manager should know everything about where he/she managing. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this is good to know the history of the place that you and your family will live there and with this view, you can find the proper accommodation in your taste, and I agree with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Evening Star, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. Venus is the second planet from our sun. As Earth’s “twin,” Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance.\n\nEarth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThe author wants us knowing why we cant land on venus or why venus is so great to learn about, we can learn so much about it and why scientest are so amazed about it. They have a theroy that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nEven though, Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology over the years has been growing greatly. There are many things technology could do for us now that it couldn't do in the past. In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System or FACS enables computers to identify human emotions and how it could potentially be used in a classroom to help students or people in everyday situations.\n\nIn the article, it states that this new technology can be helpful in reading the emotions of students in a classroom. I believe it could be helpful but I do not think that it should be used in a classroom. Even though it states that it may help students by reading when they are confused and modifying the lesson for them to understand it, it beats the purpose of teachers. If they are confused, students could ask a teacher for help and teachers could explain it in order for them to understand it as it is wriiten and there is no need for any modifications and they know how to do it if it is worded in the same way in some other point in time in which they encounter the same problem once again.\n\nTesting is another issue. During a test, even if students are confused, the question can not be changed or modified in any way, so it wouldn't really serve much of a purpose at that time. If it were to help and it changed or modified the problem in any way, it would be unfair to the other students that, that specific student had an easier question than they did or it was modified or worded any different than it was for the rest of them.\n\nIf a computer modifies a lesson because a student is confused or bored then what's the point in learning. Teachers try their best to make learning fun and some even achieve it but what the computer will do to make a lesson more fun or less confusing, is what really matters. If the computer gives a student a break because they are bored and allows them to play games, the student will be less bored but once the computer switches back the student will be bored again reguardless.\n\nPrivacy is also another reason that could cause problems if it were to be used in the classroom. Some students may not be comfortable with the computer watching them and reading their emotions the whole time that they are in front of the screen. Lots of people would like to keep their emotions to themselves no matter what they are and if a computer is reading their emotions the whole time, then it is a violation of their privacy and their comfort.\n\nMany schools don't have enough funding to even afford textbooks or even computers, so there would be no use for that type of technology if the school can't even afford it. Many schools barely have desks or chairs for their students and if a technology like that comes out, they won't even be able to aquire it, much less use it to help students. So it wouldn't be of much use in those situations. Especially, since the majority of the schools barely have funding for even repairs.\n\nNobody said learning was fun all the time or easy either. Teachers have their jobs and many do them well. A technology such as the FACS is not needed for school and classrooms. Many won't even help in making any lessons any less boring or confusing and human instructors are best. If a student thinks the lesson is boring or confusing they can inform the teacher and they will modify the lesson in a way they know would be fun because they were young once and they know that when they were their age, they wished they could do certain things in order to make learning fun and they can make those wishes come true now that they are a teacher.\n\nSo either way that the FACS technology may help, it isn't needed because everything that it may help with can be solved by a question or a statement or even just the creativity of others. Why would FACS be needed now if for the past years it hasn't been needed in any way? The answer is it isn't. If we have gone this many years without it then we still don't need it. Teachers and current technology have all assisted and have not required FACS. So therefore, FACS isn't valuable and it isn't needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\"the author suggests that studying planet Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents. Since Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, the distance are similar too. This planet has different speeds. Though, humans have sent many spacecrafts to this dangerous land. Each mission was unmanned sicne no spacecraft ever survived the landing for a few hours.\n\nSome dangerous this planet planet presents are, the atmosphere is thick and is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere and the conditions are more extreme than human encounter in Earth. \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system, even though Mercury is closeer to our Sun\"(Paragraph 3). It has so much heat and pressure and the weather presents additional dangerous which are, erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and excesive amount of lighting strikes.\n\nThis dangerous can really affect humans and humans won't really be able to survive in that planet. Scientists believe Venus was once covered largely wiht oceans and could of supported forms of life. Since scientists are now able to knwo more about technology and ivent new spacecrafts. We now have new information of the Planet Venus. Now, we know it's surface is rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclusion, I think the more we learn the more we can be able to experience more things and have more knwoledge. Technology has been playin a big part of this situations and expriences. The more technology advances the more we will be able to exprience more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, it is being more popular that certain universities tend to suggest their classes through online webinars, and they claim that it can be appropriate to the courses on campus. In this essay, I will look through some pros and cons of this issue.\r\n\r\nFirstly, regarding the advantages of online courses, it should be admitted that online lessons are much cheaper than the ones on campus, because the university authority could be able to spend no investment on any facilities in a university building. In addition, they can economize the expenditure on the salaries of the staff members. Thus, the universities might gain considerable profit through online lessons. Moreover, online lectures and seminars would prevent the problems with an infrastructure.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are certain drawbacks of utilizing online interactions in an education. We can see this when these types of courses seem to be boring to do regularly, or to emerge some technical difficulties with an access to the Internet. In other words, not all places do have available amenities or facilities to be involved in online courses. Furthermore, online lessons might be harmful to the visual ability of its participants, on account of the requirement to be front of the screen stably.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, albeit there are manifold positive sides of online courses to the university authority like less expenditure on the staff salaries and the opportunity to avoid problems with the infrastructure, there are certain negative sides as well like the lack of the Internet access and damage to the visual ability of the participants. Personally, I believe that the advantages of this issue can outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world as driven as ours, technology is constantly exploding with new advancements. The ideas that we thought of as fantasy are now becoming reality. However, not all advancements are good advancements, as a new idea does not always equal a good idea. This may be the case with the Facial Action Coding System, also known as the FACS, which is an item that helps recognize emotions by scanning a human's facial expression. This technology is suggested for advertisers or lie detector tests, but one slightly different angle on the item is to use the facial scan in classrooms to assess how students are feeling during a lesson. However, his could lead to many miscommunications and misunderstandings. The negative aspects of this product being used in classrooms far outweigh the postives, which is why the Facial Action Coding System is not a valuable tool to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom.\n\nOne large issue of the Facial Action Coding System being used in classroom is that fact that not every student will want their emotions to be known. In some cases, it could become an issue of student privacy. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" it is proposed, \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions.\" While this idea is very intruiging, it could be an invasion of an individual's privacy. If someone does not want their true thoughts and emotions to be known, then they should not be exposed. Classrooms are supposed to allow students to feel safe, and should give all pupils an outlet to express themselves. If the Facial Action Coding System is implemented into classrooms, it could destroy the quality of a school environment. Because it could be an invasion of privacy, the Facial Action Coding System would not be valuable when used in a classroom.\n\nNot only could the Facial Action Coding System impede on students' privacy, but it could also have times of failure. In the article, it is said that Dr. Paul Eckman only has six basic emotions that the FACS can recognize. If someone is showing an emotion that is not on that list, it could be read incorrectly. Plus, not every human has the same face structure. While the average person has similar muscle reactions, some people may have a disorder or disfigurement that prohibits the FACS from reading their face correctly. So, because the Facial Action Coding System has too much room for failure, it would not be valuable to use with students in a classroom.\n\nFinally, the Facial Action Coding System would not be valuable in classrooms, because it does not help teach students initiative and agency. In the article, Dr. Huang says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" If students are constantly exposed to something that adjusts based on their interests, they will never be able to thrive in the real world, as the jobs they obtain in the future will likely not adjust for an individual's preferences. When a student sits through a boring lecture, they must learn how to look past the boredom and build skills to keep obtaining information. If a student becomes confused during a lesson, they must learn how to take initiative, and build their agency skills by asking questions. If the FACS was implemented in schools, students would no longer have to build their agency skills, and would fail in a real world scenario where that ideal is required. Clearly, the Facial Action Coding System would not be a valuable tool in schools, because it would deteriorate students' learning abilities.\n\nFinding new technology advancements is always exciting, but it is clear that not every idea is a good idea. The Facial Action Coding System is a unqiue product, but the ideas that come with this machine can lead to a quality deterioration in student life, especially if the FACS is implemented in schools. The FACS could invade students' privacy, or restrict their agency capabilities. On top of these concerns, the FACS will not always be one hundred percent correct, and there will always be limitations holding it back from being truly useful in a classroom setting. Overall, the negatives of the Facial Action Coding system are much too concerning to be of any value in a school classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think mars actually have a face on it? Funny right? Well jsut listen to what i have to tell you. NASA'S Viking camara got a glimps of a face on mars they think alines made it. Crazy right?\n\nBut here in the passage it states \"a huge rock formation ...which resembles a human head,eyes,nose,and mouth.They thought it would attract attition to mars but oh boy it did ! But i think the rock formation is just the way the land forms because i see weird formations of things all the time they're just thinking of it the wrong way i belive.I agree that land formats can be the most convincing because your never going to know what you'll see. However i think that this is just an must understandment of photos. NASA has to research and discover such a thing or land format i strongly believe that this is just the land formation the way the rock is shaped and structured. In the passege is says that landforms are common around the american west so the landfromation NASA said that they aliens made was actually land formations because were there most common its going to happen often.In paragraph 7 it states \"There was no alien mounment after all.\". In my Conclusion i'll present to you that after all the alien monument was actually land formations because there most commen in the west. It could be some alien's work but not quite yet is there time. The land formations can create some of the most beautiful work. I Strongly agree with NASA that there were no alien monument at all because why would an alien come to mars to build a giant face like sculpture just to get attiton on mars. Kinda funny right ? Okay so now do belive that mars does not have a face on it ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The modern world dreams of many whimsical ideas that one day might be attainable. One of these dreams that is becoming a reality is the idea of driverless cars. Driverless cars are safer, cheaper, and allow more flexibility than modern cars.\n\nNew cars nowdays are expensive, with driverless cars there would be no need for a personal car because the driverless cars would form a public-transportation system. Also, driverless cars would cut fuel requirements in half due to their precise steering and breaking systems. The self-driven cars would remove the flaws that people make in driving further reducing wear-and-tear costs. Driverless cars are a step in the direction of cost free transportation.\n\nDriverless cars are not only cost effective, but they are also very safe. They showcase many safety options that optimize the safety of those in the car and those in other cars. They will be able to sense and react to disasters much better than people do. The information relayed from the sensors better adapts the car to make the best possible decision whereas if a human would go by the fight or flight instinct and possibly hurt themselves or others.\n\nDriverless cars are not only safer and cheaper than modern day cars, but they offer more flexibilty than them aswell. The idea that a car does not need a driver will enable the person in the drivers seat to do other things such as reading or doing thier homework. BMW is working on an assisted driving program named \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" that will enable the driver to do other activities while the car is driving itself and when the time comes that the car cannot overcome the obstacle that it has encountered, it will notify the driver to take control of it. The car company Tesla is working on a vehicle that is planned to be released in the year 2016 that is capable of driving on its own ninety percent of the time. These improvements are groundbreaking and will better the future.\n\nThe driverless cars of the future will better the world because they are cheaper, safer, and more flexible than modern cars. The possibilities that driverless cars bring are indefinite and are soon becoming a reality. The dreams of the past are becoming a reality in the present.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In words patience com quiet And hyper annoying Patience controling And rude disrespectful others", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what the face on the moon actually is? It is a huge rock formation. The rock formation certianly looks like a face, but this does not mean that there is life on Mars. The rock formation has been brought very much attention. The attention has people asking if the face is evidence for life on Mars or just a natural formaion.\n\nAs said in the article, \"Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This tells us that the defenders of the NASA budget tells you that if NASA found life on Mars; they would most likely tell it. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" This sentence is telling us that a web surfer found the image of the face to be a natural formation. Both of these support my claim of the face being a natural formation.\n\nEvidence that supports my claims are in the article. \"There was no alien monument after all.\" \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" \"Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists.\" NASA also unveiled an image for the people to see and it was captioned, \"huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\"\n\nWhen some people keep saying that it looks like a face; it sure does, but it is not one. The \"Face on Mars\" is nothing more than a natural rock formation. The rock formaiton doesnt show any evidence for life and if it did, NASA would tell everyone.\n\nWhen someone is reading things from magazines, the internet, etc, it does not mean they are always going to be true. People need to not blindly trust the internet, magazine, etc, they need to do more research.\n\nThe face is a natural rock formation. It has had lots of questions raised about what it is, but we have figured out now that it is a rock formation. This is no evidence for life on Mars, we still have yet to find that. NASA has let us with the truth of what the face actaully is. The face we see on Mars is a rock formation; now kids know the truth about what it truly is and now so do you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think we need driverless cars? The cars Google founder Sergey Brin makes would use half of fuel of today's taxis. All of the driverless cars today need a actual driver. There are both positive and negative things about driverless cars but, I think that they are not neseccary.\n\nI perosnally think that driverless cars are not worth getting because you still need a driver incase of bad road conditions. Whats the point of buying that very expensive car if your gonna have to eventually drive the driverless car. Say your in a rush for work and your on the phone with your boss butting on eyeliner and then it happends... you run into roadwork and your hands are all occupied and then you don't know what to do. That is another reason because you can crash and it wouldn't be safe for you or for any other people on the road.\n\nIn conclustion I believe that driverless cars are not neseccary nor safe enough to drive. I can see were people would think its good idea because they are efficent and can be a big boost in technology but Its not worth the bad saftey issue it has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that watching TV is not good for young adults in every way, while others would argue that TV provides a good impact on teenagers, as they get older.Although, watching TV enhances a child's curiosity as well as knowledge, I believe that watching TV is bad for their health.\n\nOn the one hand, many individuals believe that watching television is beneficial for heir during their growth stages because that offspring get different knowledge and it enhances their curiosity about various aspects of the World. Television contains different genera of shows and programs where children learn new social skills as well as get knowledge about different cultures and traditions from society. For instance, there are various programs such as Science of Stupid on National geography, Minecraft, best from Waste and many more, from these types of shows they develop new skills.\n\nMany people opine that watching TV is harmful to young children because it is cause various health problems. It is observed that many children suffer from serious health issues regarding their eyes where they have low vision problems or blindness as well as suffer from mental illness due to overconsumption of television. Moreover, it is seen that many adults have anger issues because of their addiction to TV. For example, in India, children watch around 6 to 7 hours of continuous TV which is seriously affected their eyes and health due to this behaviour around 35% of children suffer from low vision problems in their early life stages.Therefore, I believe that watching TV is not good for children.\n\nIn conclusion, I reiterate my view that TV is on the whole advantageous for children, ,,however the effects of television viewing depend on the program, genre, and the time limit allocated to TV viewing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, Viking 1, a spacecraft, was in search for its sister ship, Viking 2. When searching, they snapped photos of various Martian landmarks including what is now known as \"The Face on Mars.\" They took this photo from an angle where it look as if a face was coming out of the ground. At first, NASA thought this might possibly be an artifact from Martian civilization, but were disappointed when they found it was just another landmark. Conspiracy theorists believed NASA was simply trying to hide the truth from them, but all of NASA's research proves the face is just an unusually shaped landmark.\n\nViking 1, the initial spacecraft to spot the landmark, didn't have the best technology. compared to today's technology, the picture would be considered blurry and out of focus. Yes, at first a few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact, but instead of jumping to conclusions, they did more research. this meant another spacecraft would be sent to get better evidence.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, NASA sent the Mars Global Surveyor to get the better quality pictures to conclude their research. At this point in time, the technology had improved tremendously and the picture turned out ten times sharper than the first picture taken by Viking 1. This helped both scientists and some conspiracy theorists to understand it was simply just a landform. Still, there were some people who believed it was an artifact. They complained they took the picture during a cloudy time of year, and that this might have affected the picture quality.\n\nAgain, even though it was becoming quite an expensive mission for NASA, they returned to get another picture. On April 8, 2001, Mars Global Surveyor came close enough for a second look. The 2001 one picture was such a high-quality picture, it was said if there were any objects on the ground, they would easily be able to zoom in and identify what it was. Now NASA had proved that this brilliant \"face\" was only a landform.\n\nNASA did endless amounts of research in hopes of finding evidence of martian life, so why would they hide something like that? Releasing this to the public would benefit them more tahn if they hid it. The latest picture the spacecraft took of the landform proves that it simply IS only a landform. The research NASA has put into may not have given them the results they wanted, but it may later benefit them in finding life on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In academic groups, some people believe that economic increase will not make that country's citizens happier. But there are people that oppose this idea because they agree that in this case, those people's level of life will increase, too. Moreover, wealthy countries will be able to have a bigger contribution to medicine, technology, space and other important fields for the human species. Due to these reasons, I completely oppose this idea. \n\nFirst and foremost, the level of life of citizens will increase and more workplaces will appear. This means that number of unemployed people will decrease. Also, the average amount of salary will increase. As an example, in wealthy countries such as the USA, UAE people earn much more money compared to not developed and poor countries such as Chad, Syria and etc. Therefore, it will be able easier for people to realize their ideas, or just travel or buy a house without any mortgage. They will able to study in universities without any student loan which is quite popular among American students. \n\nSecondly, countries will be able to invest more money in science, medicine, technology and other areas which need development. Thanks to the investments scientists will be able to find cures for lots of diseases. Also, they will be able to improve technology to make people's life much more easier and productive. And one of the most important fields for surviving the human species is space. People will be able to colonize other planets, too. \n\nTo sum up, economic increase for developed countries will have an impact on every country on Earth because of the technological, space, and medical development. Those developments will help everyone on Earth. But also, I would like to mention that citizens of wealthy countries will be happier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author describes both positive and negative aspects of these cars. With examples from both of these sides, one can form their own assumptions regarding if driverless cars are a positive or negative for the future. Though an equal number of examples were given for both sides, the negative impacts of these cars seems to be extremely prominant. Two examples of why driverless cars are a negative aspect are that they still require drivers and that these cars can't always be tested due to state laws. These two examples are able to demonstrate as to why driverless cars a negative aspect of society.\n\nTwo reasons as to why driverless cars are a negative aspect is that they still require drivers and that the cars can't actually be tested in some states due to certain laws. As said in section seven, \"[the driverless cars can] steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills\". Because of this statement, one begins to question whether or not driverless cars are a positive aspect, given that they can not actually drive themsleves completely. Also, in addition to the fact that the cars can't acutally drive themselves, the cars can't be fully tested in some states due to specific state laws. In section nine, the article discusses that \"in most states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars\", which helps to affirm that the driverless car is not a positive future aspect. Due to this idea one wonders if the safety of these vehicles are very high, and if their reliability should be trusted as well. The fact that these driverless cars are not completely driverless and that they can't be tested demonstrates as to why driverless cars are not a positive future aspect.\n\nThough the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" seemed to demonstrate both positive and negative aspects of a driverless car, the negative aspects of driverless cars were more prominant throughout the text. After studying the text, one can note that the negative aspects were far more significant than the positive. With both the ideas that the driverless car can't actually drive itself and that the cars can't alwasy be tested, one sees that the positive impacts of these cars are far less than the negative impacts. Because of these two ideas, the driverless car has a far greater negative aspect than positive future aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates love unity The author shows For home country Cuba He says much loves culinary creations culture music celebrations extened family As result shows sense home even another country The author also sets love filled open family people His family would let many people home build great friendship regardless race cultural beliefs The author sets unity well This result different people neighbor hood even though come different countries always worked well together showed outmost respect one another This author set love unity memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, there has been a high rate of crime in big cities. In some nations, individuals are allowed to own a handgun on their property. Many community suggest this is a good idea, while others disagree. Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, I totally agree with this viewpoint and suggest that owning a pistol can also bring many benefits. The most important thing about having a handgun is self-defence. For example, many populations who keep a handgun in their accommodations can protect themselves from crime. Secondly, the urban area has a more dangerous environment. Many communities are more at risk of staying in big cities. Furthermore, some society who own guns feel comfortable when they live at home. They can protect themselves and someone they love. \r\n\r\nHowever, some community suggest that having a revolver can lead to violence. For instance, if some people have a gun, it has the potential for misuse. In addition, it increases the number of accidental deaths caused by guns Moreover, firearm owners can escalate conflicts and be dangerous to others. Lastly, owning a firearm can increase expenditures such as trainer costs and equipment for the handgun.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to keeping a firearm on property. The main feature is personal protection. However, owning a handgun can increase the gun-related death rate. Besides this, the government should release law enforcement for having a firearm to protect other people who are non-gun owners.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features cyclist affect many ways One way features affected ran water buildings like ghost town He said one sight In story says the bulding abandoned years earlier If I I would turned around went back I would take chance dieing middle abandoned area", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays it is true that various companies put advertisements to every corner of our world in the case of promoting their products. Some people think that it has a negative effect on individuals minds. However, others believe that the pros outweigh the cons. In my opinion the right advertisement is the best way to promote a product. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of commercial and provide a logical conclusion. \n\nOn the positive side, advertisement increases companies' income and helps to raise the economy. In other words, competent advertising attracts new customers. Hence, people under the influence of advertising buy a product and involve new customers. To illustrate famous brand “Apple” spend a billion dollars in the case of promoting their products. Their last product iPhone 14 was promoted in different platforms such as YouTube, Instagram and on billboards. As a result, the company’s sales and revenue increased. Another advantage is that it makes people's lives comfortable. Obviously, in the 21st century people get information from phones. Commercial is one of the sources of useful information. For instance, while surfing the web individuals can see information about business courses, sign up for them and gain new knowledge. \n\nBut advertisement also has some major disadvantages like advocacy of harmful substances like cigarettes and alcohol. First of all, teenagers who have sensitive psyche can succumb to propaganda. Moreover, it can cause problems with health. For example, commercials on the packaging of cigarettes which warn about health problems it can cause. But it cannot stop the smokers. Another drawback is that not all sources of information taken from advertisements can be true. Also, there are a lot of fraud and swindlers who want to deceive people and take their money. Namely, financial pyramids and bets. Individuals believe that they can easily earn money, but in fact they become victims of fraud, and bad advertising. \n\nIn conclusion, although commercial can have certain negative effects like fake information or advocacy, it has an extremely positive effect on economy and income. I believe that these benefits outweigh its drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about what the world would do without cars? and we just used bikes or trains or skate boards or even buses? well in Bogota they have a day where you dont use your car and millions just biked or skated and took buses to work or school on the car free day. Its the third year cars have been banded in Bogota and the goal is to reduce smog. The people who didnt perticipate in this were charged with twenty five dollar fines.\n\nBogota isnt the only place that banded cars. paris actually banded driving due to smog. In paris the people were to leave their cars at home or they would have to pay a 22-euro fine which means thirty one dollars. You would think people would listen to them, but four thousand people decided to drive so they were all charged. All though this seems good becuase there would be no air pollution it wasnt so good for delivery componies because they complained about lost revenue.\n\nAlso in Germany they permitly banned cars. seventy percent of the familys do not own cars. But fifty seven percent sold a car just to move there. People say they are much happier this way like a Heidrun, a mother of two \" when i had a car i was tense. im much happier this way\" as she walked the streets. David Goldburg said \" All of our developements since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change\" he is an offical of the transportation for america, its a fast growing coalisition with hundrends of groups in the US. They are promoting new commuties that are less dependent on cars.\n\nI feel that if the United States start doing this then the whole world might start. It would make the world a better place. There would be less air pollution or \"smog\" and you wouldnt have to pay fro gas anymore. Its also a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution. If you need to go somewhere just ride you bike or if its far take a bus, its as simple as that. There would be less taxes and you wouldnt have to pay anymore car payments. \" recent studies suggest that americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses asa each year goes by\" most people dont drive becuase they either cant afford a car or they dont have a job.\n\nIn the end this may actually start happening. Bill Ford which is th eexecutive chairman of the Ford Motor Company was talking about a business plan in which vehicle ownership is impractical. he said that cities that \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network top save time, and improve safety.\" and he is completley right there will be no more car crashes or drunk drivers anymore, the world may become a better place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Will techonolgy driven cars take over the nation? Many people will say yes and many people will say no. There are a lot of positive and negative aspects of having a \" driveless\" car. A positive reason of having a driveless car is having another \" set of eyes\" to watch you while you are driving and to help you sense when somethig is wrong while a negative reason effect of this driveless car is if the technology dails and causes an accident. My posotion upon having a driveless car is against it.\n\nMore so, in this article it explains both positive and negative effects of this car. One of the few reasons my position on this article is positive is because of the increased saftey of this car. In paragraph 8 the author writes about the saftey of a driveless car, they explain, \" In this way, the in-car system is actually a saftey feauture, and saftey is a big concern.\" In this passage you can conclude that the auttor is very into having the car with a saftey feature to keep the driver safe at all times.\n\nHowever, there are a lot of reasons why my postion of these cars are negative. Yes, having a driveless car can take away a lot stress from driving but there are some negative aspects of having a \"self driven car\". In paragraph 9 the author expresses their concern about thses cars. They state, \"Most driving\n\nlaws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe...Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone in injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" In this passage you can surmise that the author has a very valid point about the negative effect of a driverless car. You can infer the dangers of an acident and the controvesy of who is at fault.\n\nTherefore, my position from this article is clear that it is negative. I understand the driverless car and how it can bring so much more safety and helpfulness but you also have to think of the negative effect of it. My reason against these cars is that you wouldn't want to have technical difficuties while driving which will cause an accident. Also my reason against it is that the majority of the people are already accoustomed to driving a car without any help so why change it?\n\nIn conclusion driverless car can be less stressful and fun while it can also be hazardous. In this article you read about the positve and negative aspects of having a driverless car. I concluded that my postion upon this is negative and how it can become a problem upon others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now in these days, technology is at its boom. Because of, communication is part of technology, Consequently, communication is also at its boom and wide spread. Actually, there are many free communication means have became widespread. For instance, Facebook, Whatsapp, Instagram, telegram etc.\n\n\nFirstly, to discuss the advantages, many, who were disconnected for years with their friends and relatives, are connected now. Actually, It is bringing close to family, friends and relatives and making the strong bonding between each other. Thus, we can discuss, learn and can grow together. In present scenario, because of this lockdown, students cannot attend the college. But, online classes are going on now. For example, I left India and went abroad for my bread and butter. Even though, I was far away from India, thanks to communication, that, I was in touch with ALL and was connected. \n\n\nThere are some disadvantages also are there with the latest communication. For instance, Vmate, and some other dating sites are causing people to have cross relationship. Also, sometimes even the married couple is getting trapped into, by entering various different sites into bad relationships.\n\n\nFinally, to conclude it is up to us, how we utilise it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree a little bit that there's gonna be driverless cars in future. I know that there will be more electric cars to preserve more gas.\n\nThere are advantages with driverless cars. There will probably be less accidents, have less careless drivers out in the streets. It'll have sensors to where if someone backs up to something to close the car will automatically hit the brakes. Driverless cars will probably have a better and engine and suspension system. But i just dont think that driverless cars are gonna do the trick because what if the car breaks down out of nowhere and you cant start it back up or what if you have to drive manually and the steering wheel doesn't work? What are you going to do? I would prefer more on electric cars than driverless cars because you wouldn't have no worries about gas money or anything like that.\n\nBut I would probably go more towards elcetric cars to save gas because driverless cars you would still need gas money .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter mystery Happens ever pleases It puts smiles faces Laughter happens many ways Although mine happened end crazy situation huge mess follow Things got extream unforgettable Things could never forget Around two months ago cold It birthday I threw little party house Though I little treat everyone arrived smirk faces Nobody would tell whats going I started become distraught Until buddie boyfriend walked kitchen pound bucket full spaghetti ten pound gallon tomato sauce Next thing I knew mouth agape I could nt believe eyes understanding much Also My mother walked exclaimed CAPS cars let s go approached I funny feeling pit gut I looked around noticed sister law holding video camera Right I knew something going happen Something big extraordinary extream I right Spaghetti flying everywhere getting peoples hair faces Clothes getting stained messy Not mention cold wet rainy outside The fog made hard see u hitting throwing By end noodle war I looked worse Even shoes wearing stained got back house wash hose I swore going get sick cold water running face I could feel noodles falling outta hair clothing sauce steaming face Laughing laughing Everyone laughing others badly covered noodles sauce Eventually got hungry We decided nachos So mom poured two family size nacho chips table followed two ten gallon cans nacho cheese jalapenos olvis You think noodle sauce messy well s I went wrong My friend dropped nachos couch threw nacho cheese threw chips tossed cheese ended dog Let s say living room cheese fest I could nt believe nacho cheese got stuck dogs fer girls hair Chip crumbs couch cheese floor tree So finally said CAPS nachos cake time Ginger thought nt going another mess Well wrong They started singing happy birthday song cameras flashing mother background crying She cries birthdays says year closer kids moving I figured would use knowing already two kids move All sudden frosting face I rubbed frosting smeared face Though rubbed back onto mine My mom grabbed plate threw tossed Chocolate frosting everywhere along nacho cheese Soon played video games Of course I played live I got irritated someone game ended throwing controller television broke Mother nt pleased Oh well still got watch movies room Eventually people started leaving Saying goodbyes ill see peace dude We said I looked back living room say nothing huge mess chips nacho cheese cake Not mention broken tv I got stuck cleaning mess three hours Though laughing entire time happened Having greatest time ever If I could I would go back fun laughs Laughter everywhere You see right away Though started laughing brains Laughing puts everyone good moods smiles faces It also make mess put things crazy situation You ca nt deny crazy situations would go back Laughter greatest thing world call", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would it feel to actually know that cars can drive themselves?Just crewing down the street, with no one in it ? As we know from previse tv shows cars are able to drive with alot a person physically in it. Transformers for example, it a movie full of cars in action. If there not driving around alone, there physically fighting mone another like real people. As it said in the passage \"Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system,\" and so forth. It could My arguement is best on how smart cars already are, the dangerousness of this situation, and lastly how easily this can turn into a big situation.\n\nFor starters, cars are already smart as it is. It said in the passage \" the combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of human at the wheel.\" Why do\n\nall that just so it can drive by itself. The purpose of getting your license and permient is to be able to drive a car. It wouldn't really a purpose of none of this if the car could drive on it own.\n\nSecond, this can become a dangerous situation. One glitch and some masive can happen. It might even be the smallest thing and the car can destruck. Or maybe event he car is going to fast and", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increase in technology on a daily basis, the production has transformed drastically. Machines nowadays are employed to produce products replacing humans. This essay will explain the possible benefits and drawbacks that are linked to this situation.\n\nMachineries in industries can be beneficial in many ways, among them, faster production and cost effectiveness are the most significant ones. To elaborate in detail, machines take very less time to complete certain tasks, when compared to a person. Knitting, for example, takes 4 days for a human to make a beautiful sweater, but on the other hand, a machine takes only 10 mins to do the same. Moreover, there is no payment required to employ a technology for doing menial jobs, which cuts the cost of salaries for any industry. Hence, it is in favour of organizations in terms of profits.\n\nAlthough there are above mentioned advantages, conversely, there are issues such as maintenance and update expenses. To be able to use automobiles, it needs the staff to be trained to operate, additionally, any technical issue or update in technology will lead to extra charges. What's more is, by using gadgets in production agencies, it causes a problematic situation of job scarcity. To prove this, a research reveals that 50% of people have lost jobs in past 10 years due to technological adaptation in the industries. Therefore, it is clear that, sometimes it leads to unplanned dangers to businesses and society as well.\n\nTo sum up, Welcoming technology in the fields is unavoidable, even if technology is taking away jobs of many people, due to convenience of producing goods at greater speed, organizations will only consider as a major advantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring venus, would be deficult for its thick atmosphere of 97% and its 800 surface temp, Venus is really cloudy for the spacecraft to see where its landing venus is not a flat surface it has moutins trenches and other numerours land marks.\n\nScientest have been studing venus for a while, they made a test chamber simulating venuses surface and lasted for tree weeks, and no spacecraft or a vehical would last a few hours on the planet because of its hight temps and carbon dioxid blanket around venus.\n\nVenusian geology study the heat and weather conditions and additional impediments like eruping valcanos, earthquaks, and frequent lighting, NASA possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray, the planet can only provid samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance, to risk life or death and many reshearcher are working on innovations that allow mechines to last longer to meaningfull to knowledg of venus.\n\nVenus is a difficult planent becaus of its heat and weather conditions and the second palnet close to us, onc venus could suported life with its oceans and less heat an dweather conditions and a highly corrosive suferic acid, venus atmospheric pressure averge is 90 times greater than earh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles architects never realized building docking station dirigibles One obstacles faced height lack safety arose In German dirigible Hindenburg use highly flammable hydrogen caught fire New Jersey described paragraph thirteen Should happened dirigible docked high New York City airship would plummet ground many New would going day The largest obstacle faced though nature Air currents storms would cause dirigible teathered mooring mast rope swivel around around mooring mast dangling high pedestrians street As pointed paragraph fourteen neither practical say The third obstacle faced preexisting law airships flying low urbanized areas Even tall Empire State Building still impossible legally dock new mooring mast Al Smith s idea finally abandoned due safety nature state law", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mars has been a planet that we have been exploring for many years. We have discovered many abnormal objects on the planet. In 1976, we took a picture of the region Cydonia, and we found something that seemed to look like a human face. Our eyes are adapted to recognizing faces and that is why we recognized the face on Mars more easily. Higher quality images that were taken in 2001 show that the face on Mars is no sign of ancient civilization on Mars but in fact a mesa. It is a natural landform just like it would be on our home planet of Earth. Although some conspiracy theorists say differently, and think that is some sort of ancient civilization building these objects.\n\nFirst off, the cameras that we have today are more advanced than the ones we had. The first picture that was taken of the face on Mars was taken in 1976 and the quality back then was not as good as it is now. The picture that was taken in 2001 was a higher quality picture and scientists figured out that is was just a mesa and not a sign of any ancient civilization on Mars. For example the camera used in 1976, spanned 43 meters compared to the camera NASA used in 2001 spanned 1.56 meters. In the picture of 1976, the shadows that were present that day formed an illusion that made it seem like there was a face. In paragraph two of the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it says that, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"\n\nAnother thing is that, Jim Garvin, a cheif scientist from NASA's Mars Exploration Program, compared the Martian mesa to natural landforms that occur here on Earth. In paragraph 12, Garvin said, \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about thye sane height as the Face on Mars.\" Jim Garvin is saying that these formations on Mars are very similar to the ones that we have here on Earth. He is also saying that there os no face on Mars.\n\nIn contrast, conspiracy theorists say that there is a face on Mars and that there is ancient civilization on Mars. In paragraph 8, it says that, \" The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings we hidden by haze.\" Conspiracy theorists also state that NASA would rather hide the evidence that there is an ancient civilization on Mars, as it says in paragraph 5. Also stated in paragraph 5, is that the defenders of NASA wish that there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\n\nThe face has been a pop icon ever since the discovery of the formation. the face will always be a piece of history and will always been known to man. If there was an actual face on Mars then that would be a sign of life. The face ended up eing a mesa and nothing else besides that. Although it would have been an exciting discovery for NASA, we still have much more of space that is unknown and unexplored. NASA is bound to find some kind of incredible object. We will have to wait until that day comes and find something incredible and will be part of the incredible true story of space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well i think we should chang them becuase some people can get confussed about who they vote for. I think it be good to chang them becuase a president could get a lot more votes but when the other voter get one or two more Electoral College votes then they would win. I think they should be chang becuase there could be 500,000 voter but then for california 55 voter represen 35million voter. Like in 2000 seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all even Rhode Island and the 25 largest voter didn't even see a campain ad.\n\nIt not even the people who elect the president it the electors who elect the president. It says that Gore had more populare votes then Bush but lts electoral College votes that help him win so they say that if u have more electoral votes then populare u win. When he increased his plurality in some states he increased his votes that shows a bad president to people and he won't now what to do the people don't feel like he there president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine transportation without any human work and having no worries on driving safe, well this all possible with driverless cars. Driverless cars would have a very positive effect on people. These driverless cars allow alot quicker transportation, safer transportation, and would require no work from a human.\n\nThese driverless cars would allow faster transportation because they would know the quickest routes. They would allow safer transportation because they would nv be on the influence of alchahol or drugs and because they would always have control of the car with things like sensors and automatic brake systems. These cars would would require no manual work from a human because would be computer driven cars this takes the worry of driving safe.\n\nOverall driverless cars would a great invention that would have a positve effect on the the people. They are going to allow very quick and worryfree transportation. These driverless cars are the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez tried create warm feeling heart remembering pleasant childhood memories think sacrifices parents made try give us good life They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers said trying explain parents want give children good life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Us citizens have advantages of limiting car usage. We have advantages because in Freiburg \"street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg.\" This phrase basically talks about how the people in that district don't have any car/driving privleges. Unlike in the United States the people in that district can only park their automobiles in a large garage at the edge of the development,where the person that buys the space spends $40,000, along with a home. I mean if i lived their i would be carless too. Also Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother of two said \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\"Not having a car makes the people so much happier because they dont have to spend thousands of dollars to park their car.\n\nIn the United States we are lucky to be able to drive because in Paris, after days of near -record pollution they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. The United States knows that we are polluting the air but they still give us the right ot drive what we pay for.\"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\"In the United States we are lucky to be able to drive our car anyday and everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that males and females differ in many aspects due to their natural genders. Therefore, many people firmly believe that some kind of works is suitable for men, and women are good in other types of jobs, whereas some think that there should be no discrimination between males and females in case of job opportunities. I agree with the latter thought for several reasons, which are discussed in the following paragraphs.\nFirst of all, gender stereotypes no longer exist in modern society. For many years the majority had been insisting on the belief that women were fragile and therefore, they should not have done tough works. For example, practicing in farmlands considered to be a masculine task. However, now the situation has changed to a great deal of extent, and more women are seen in jobs which require physical abilities. For instance, it will not be surprising seeing a woman on top of a skyscraper supervising a group of male workers.\nSecondly, with the appearance of feminist sects, it has been ages that the definition of masculine and feminine tasks has altered. In fact, the borders of what used to decide whether a career was proper for males or females have blurred. As an example, if a company decides to announce a job advertisement, it is not allowed to put a limit on the gender of applicants.\nTo conclude, although it has been believed that some jobs are particularly for men and women could not be successful in, the definition of masculine and feminine has vastly changed. Once again, I reaffirm my position that there should be no gender discrimination in offering individuals a specific job just because of expired thoughts of the previous generations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you heard the scoop about \"driverless cars\" yet? well many powerfull people in the world actually are. They actually have some very good points about them, but there always is a bad in every good too.\n\nFirst I'll explain the good fetures about these driverless cars in my opinion or \"position\" if you will. these cars are very good for using the telephone while driving. Also if you would like to eat a snack or have the ability to be mobile inside your car you can.Many people have a hard time getting around because of there limit to things they could do in their past such as one exzample as navigation. Another good feature about these cars are the gas ability is less. There also is sensors that allow the car to be able to detect when there is danger of an accident around. Those are just a few of the good features of the driverless cars.\n\nNext i would like to share some of the bad features of the driverless car in my opinion or \"position\" if you will. I believe that one of the biggest arguments twoards these cars is accident responsibility. Many manufacturers will become upset and astonished when it is their heads on the line if i may. They dont want anything to do with the causes of accidents made either by the cars or the drivers. The people want to blame others but themselves for the accident causes. Thats just how the world is today. Some other reasons that really affect these cars are that poeple have said things like, \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver\"? and these questions need to be answered. The people most likely would get bored and tired of waiting around all day waiting for the car to need to be assisted and i agree with that. Also this is just a start to a completely far ahead future, and nobody can predict it. Those are just a few of the bad reaons about the driverless car.\n\nSo there you have it, now that you kindave have an idea about these driverless cars many people can do the reaserch on them more and really dig deep into what many powerfull people in the world are saying about these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are more and more people trying to figure out the history of their house or building. They research those information for many reason and there are plenty of methods they can approach.\r\n\r\nThere might be some interesting clues in historical buildings. For example, traditional Chinese buildings often decorated by wooden and stone cravings and pantings about plants and animals on the walls. While learning the history of the building, people could find out the stories about those art works. In addition, when people studied history of their houses they could gain knowledge of their ancestors. They would know how to improve their life and how to avoid some troubles.\r\n\r\nAs technology technic developed rapidly, people could collect data easily via internet. They could find out almost everything thruogh their computer or smart phone. However, some notes and pictures which had been recorded dacades ago might not be shown on the internet. In this case, people could go to libriary to borrow some books, especilally local libraries. It is another way to learn history of people's houses by having conversation with the elders who lived in their neighbor hood. \r\n\r\nA lot of people wanted to know the history of the house or building they live in. It can tell them who they are and gain some usefull adiveces of life and fun stories from their ancestors. People can get those informations in different ways such as doing research on the internet, borrowing book in libraries, and talking to elders who lived next to them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Educating children in an all-girls or an all-boys school is a debatable topic. Globally, many parents have the additional option to choose co-educational schools for their wards. This essay will argue why, despite providing world-class education, a single-gender school is not recommended as such adolescents lack holistic development and do not develop the sensitivity required for the opposite sex.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in many countries, mono-sex institutions had gained immense popularity a few generations back since the quality of knowledge imparted by them was top notch. Their curriculum not only focused on application-based knowledge but also encouraged sports as a career option. For example, the all-girls Loreto Convent institution in Kolkata has a rich history of churning high-class students who have been extremely successful going ahead in their careers. Therefore, the rationale to continue educating their children in such institutes even today is totally understandable. \r\n\r\nHowever, students studying in unisex schools tend to develop introverts and are highly vulnerable to committing gender-based crimes in the future. They do not get a chance to socialise with their opposite gender and as a result, many of them eventually form a shy attitude when confronted with their counterparts. Moreover, they fail to acknowledge the existence of their opposite gender and are susceptible to committing crimes against them . For example, Harvard psychologists have clearly substantiated that a majority of the crimes against women in India are committed by those who have attended an all-boys school previously. Hence, children in unisex institutions fail to develop a gender-sensible mindset and also fail to groom themselves. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, in many countries, parents still prefer unisex schools for their wards. This essay argued why this is a flawed approach in spite of the fact these schools have a rich heritage of providing high-quality education. However, in my opinion, such a thought process is completely preposterous as students in such institutions fail to develop gender sensitivity and are unable to groom themselves for the holistic development required to succeed in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a pretty good idea to a point. From what the article says they seem to have more ups than downs. They would be very helpful for people who don't know how to drive well, but if their computers malfunctioned then bad wrecks could happen. If you just had to charge them it would be very good for the environment. These cars could be great for the earth and very convenient for people, but the manufacturers need to take extra precautions to be absolutely sure that the computers won't mess up because that could cause a plethora of injuries.\n\nFirst, these cars could be very helpful for people who do not know how to drive well, such as people who are taking drivers ed. If they had a little help keeping them from wrecking that might make people a little less stressed about it. Furthermore, this could also be helpful for people that cannot use their legs, if the manufacturers put a technology that would sense if the person wanted to go or stop this could help them drive.\n\nSecond, the only bad side I see about these are if the computers malfunction, this could cause the car to lose control and cause wrecks in the process. Also they could stop traffic if their machines stopped working. Stressing people out if they had somewhere to be.\n\nLastly, this could be a wonderful thing for the environment. If these cars ran on electrical charge other than gas this would heavily decrease air pollution. There would be no natural gas harming the earth if this became a global trend. But if they made them run on oil instead of electrical charge this could be very bad thing for the environment because they most likely won't stop for a long period of time if they keep picking people up thus creating more air pollution than there already is.\n\nThese driverless cars could be a very great thing if used wisely. If they choose to make it run on electricity that would be very great and make this a fantastic idea. Also, they should be absolutely sure that this is safe because if it malfunctioned it could cause many injuries and even deaths.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood auther happy The reason It happy talked Being And living apartment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Rick Scott,\n\nEvery four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday of November, the Electoral College casts their votes to elect the new President of the United States of America. These voters are chosen by the citizens of their state (Florida, Texas, etc.) to vote in their favor of their preferred party. For example, a Democratic voter in California will vote for Democratic Electoral College canidates to vote for their preferred President. Though many people are apposed to this method of voting, calling it an anachronism & taking away the vote from the citizens of the United States, American citizen's votes still count, the Electoral College can avoid problems popular voting could result in, and the Electoral College listens to those with the initiative and right to make a smart vote. For these reasons I would like to keep the Electoral College.\n\nThe Founding Fathers established the Electoral College as a compromise between election of the President by a vote of Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens, meaning one vote almost relies on the other. A common misconception made by citizens is that when they vote they vote for a President, when in fact they are voting for people to vote in their favor for the President. So the more Republican Electoral College voters your state has, most likely the end vote will be the electoral votes go to the Republican canidate. Many people say that the electoral college \"takes away the votes of the citizens, and that their vote doesn't matter\" when in reality, they matter in every way possible. If the citizens do not vote, who will vote for the electoral college members? And without the citizens to decide who the memebers of the Electoral College will be, who will be in the Electoral College all together?\n\nNot only do the Citizen's votes count, but the Electoral College can help solve the problems that a popular voting system could have. The Electoral College votes with the majority of the state, meaning that the party with the highest request for its Presidency, the Electoral College will cast its votes towards. Meaning a highly Democratic state can count on their state's vote to most likely be for the Democratic candidate. The Electoral College also avoids run-off elections. This means that the election will always show a clear winner for the state's vote. There is a lot of potential pressure for a run-off election when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cats; that pressure could greatly affect the Presidential election process, which the Electoral College reudces, ultimatley showing a clear winner.\n\nAnd finally, the Electoral College listens to smart and eligible voters. Very rarely does a State's Electoral College vote against the wishes of their citizens. In fact that would be the exact opposite of their job. It's also an inetible fact that not every voter is an ideal voter. Many citizens do not keep themselves up to date on the issues candidates plan to solve, occupation backgrounds, or even their personality. Many voters in fact vote on astetics, which is ultimatley the most dangerous voter there is; an uner educated one.\n\nSo Mr. Scott, I hope you take into account that an in terms of an electoral college, an American citizen's vote does count, they avoid the problems popular votes could create, and they do listen to their state's smart, eligable voters. If the Founding Fathers created this tool for the balance in our voting system, then balance there shall be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building face attempting allow dirigibles dock The dirigible s weight held single cable tether transmitted way building s foundation far If cable tether ever break passengers dirigible civilians New York would grave danger This cable tether would risky use The builders could possibly overcome nature violent air currents winds top building These currents would cause docking potentially timeconsuming dangerous The builders architects try reverse obstacle weighing back lead weights This neither practical safe potential danger weights falling hitting New York pedestrians The builders architects grand project quarrel many gargantuan obstacles order dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The firsts obstacles make Empire State building worlds tallest building adding top hat make building little taller And second obstacle drop people mooring mast Empire State building s flat roof", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not to long ago driving a car was considered a dream to kids that were not able to drive. Driving a car was like a step towards adult hood and indelpendencs. I was one of thosde kids and now that I am able to drive I am loveing every minute of it, but as of lately companies have been designing and testing driverless cars. The idea is to drive the auto motive indeustry on showing people that there is a way that they can recieve transpotation and not have to do any work at driving the car. Personally I think of it as annother way for someone to be lazy.\n\nI love driving and I do not want a company that created a web site making a driverless car that will take over America's roads. At the begining of this article it says, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" I don't want to immagine that because I want the future generations to feel the sense of accomplishment that I felt when I first started driving my car, also there are so many different cars that it would be hard to make a driverless car that can replace all of them. How would a self driving car ever replace the adrenalin pumping speed of a car like a Corvette Z06 or Chellenger HellCat. The purpose of cars like these is to go as fast as you want when you want to. How would a driverless driving car give that is disigned to go the speed limit give you them type of enjoyment as the cars that I just listed.\n\nThen there are the offroading cars like the Jeep and the Ford Raptor. I would like to see Google explaine to me and the rest of the people that agree with me that they can build a driverless car that can some how be a better car for offroading than these. I think that there is nor possibe way that they can achive that kind of goal. Not only that but the cars that they have disigned cant even handle a traffick jam. The test says in paragraph 7, \" They can steer, accelerate, and break themsleves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" Why in the world would they make a partially driverless car! They don't even have the skill to make a car that is able to slow dow in a work zone or go arround an acident why even trust this car at all when you can trust your self instead.\n\nIn conclusoin Driverless cars are a bad idea because you can't get the excitement that you get form driving different tipes of cars. Also, kids wont feel the sense of accomplishment that we got driving a car for the fist time because that car will drive it slef. But most implortantly how can we trust the technology in the car when it can't even navigate itslef arround a car crash or slow down when passing through a work zone. So, in my oppinion lets not make a car that can encourage people to be lazy in a whole different way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the use of a car limit using can help in different ways as it could help us save the planet from a greenhouse effect or improve safty as it woul be a lower chance to get into a car crash with can result in injury or death but with limit usage it would make the wourld a better place and here to explain why limit usage is good.\n\nin the story its says that as the population grows more in american they has to be a production in cars to help the person to get to one place to another. but however in january 1995 many americans were cash-strapped due to the decrease in driving along with the unemployed wasnt going to work aanyways as they try to recover underway. in another story it tells how people could live without cars but in germany as one of the family said \"when i had a car i was always tense and im happier this way. As studys show that 70% of familes do not own cars but as well are happy just by walking or riding a bike beacuse cars make up the greenhouse gas. While in the vauban homes are being adopted in order to provide transportation with less spaced parking then walking all of the way to the mall. in america the agency of environmental are staring to promote and also want a \"car reduced\" area where they can help perserve the wild life as 80% of the law has gone to the highway and the other 20% is the transport its self. In other places they have a car-free day which means no cars or transport will be used through out the day as many people would take a bike or walk or even hike as one person said \"its a good opportunity to take away stress along the pollution in the air\" as it shows that there should be a limited usage of cars. As this could impact the world along with the enviorment around it.\n\nthe care usage limited idea is good because it helps people support the enviorment along with decreasing greenhouse gas and smog as people will either take a bike or walk to get from place to place without having the traffic jam struggle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states some different negative and positive aspects of the driverless cars. My thoughts on driverless cars are good. [Myself] thoughts are that I like these driverless cars. \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars becuase no one needs them anymore?\" Now, people now days can go out and buy a driverless car, and go anywhere they would like to go without driving. [Myself] personal thought on this is it would be a great idea to purchase one of these driverless cars.\n\nGood thoughts on these driverless cars are, they would use a lot less on gas, you could watch movies and television in your car also. Many people text and drive now days even with self driven cars. If you had a driverless car, you would be able to text and drive. \"These cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" People have bought these cars and not had a crash and [Myself] thinks that it would bea good idea to get one of these driverless cars in my opinion.\n\nDriverless cars have antilock brake systems and driver assistance. Google that has designed these driverless cars have dreamed about making one for the longest time. \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting.\" Google wanted to make something that has never been created before. Driverless cars have all kinds of different systems and sensors that we have never thought of building a car with. These cars have \"rotating sensors on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" Driverless cars have so much technology now that they will eventually and some now that will drive themselves.\n\nPeople that were looking into buying these driverless cars didn't want to be behind the wheel when driving. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" Why they still need to be behind the wheel is incase of traffic incidents or accidents on the roads for example. Some drivers still think to [Themselves] that they would get bored when not being able to drive and have to wait their turn. Some displays in the driverless cars can be shut off manually. These cars have \"Traffic Jam Assistance,\" which will alert you when driving and when you run into traffic. These cars also have alert systems when driving also. It would be a good and safe choice to purchase one of these driverless cars.\n\n\"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars becuase no one needs them anymore?\" Now that we have driverless cars no one would really need the cars that need a driver behind the wheel controlling the wheel, acceleration, and other systems in the car. More and more car manufactures are planning out and creating driverless cars. My position on the driverless cars is that I think that it would be a great idea to purchase one. They are safe, can take you anywhere you would need to go without driving, and would just be a wonderful idea to get one of these driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environment is the surrounding in which the lives of plants, animals and human beings survive and operates. Imperoving the environment is the duty of each and every living being living in the society, only governments and large companies together cannot make any difference. if all the parties get united as one anything can be done to improve the environment.\nThe writer disagrees with the statement than agrees. Environmental pollution, enviornmental degredations have shown a rapid increase in the past few years. The main reason to this disaster is that people have become more selfish and keep on passing the ball to other people saying that it is their responsibilty and not ours. Based on a recent research conducted by a group of Researchers in The United States of America, they have concluded that the most damages to the surrounding is caused by the activites done by humans.\nin writers opinion, there are few steps that can be taken to improve the environment. The main step is, supporting 3-R system, that is reduce, reuse and recycle. If we could promote this system, environment can be uplifted, because there will be less amount of wastage. Secondly, volunteer cleaning programms in the society can be brought up together with education systems to the community about how to keep your environment clean. These are the some of the main things that can be done to uplift the environment.\nIn conclusion, the habitat and the surroundings can be improved with the invovement of all the three parties, individuals, governments and large companies, if they work sensibly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think cencorship libraries nt needed The grounds basing cencorship opinionated biased ones Two readers one book could view material compleately differently The reader chosen read book thus likely know general plot read first page summary back People make decisions therefor choose wether read book begin The books would found innapropriate offensive would likely teen novels adult literature If case mature enough handle stumbling across material making decision put book back continue reading Saying material unsuitable younger age group correct age children adult checking books anyway The material people find unacceptable would almost certainly novel intended mature audience read younger age group would problem s self The teens adults would reading material surely old enough handle reading foul words scattered inuendos thoughout plot The material found innapropriate offensive viewed differently given two different audiences A teen high school probably heard worse halls durring passing adult worring children read certainly exposed enough thoughout lifetime either look past text put away The material called offensive one person s views rite The tough situations surroundings prepair us futures A person seeing bad life would likely power make good futures willing help make shure could prevented Should foul things life ignored Should child beaten home suffer silence seems graphic tell The man became homeless turn life around learned past story told troubles face seem disturbing I believe stories need told attempt teach around us prevent move past troubles life There always things wish see life But actions follow seeing misfortunes determine The libraries put cencorship open public wish dive stories Books written purpose purpose let people know things happening one thinks alone strifes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Proffesor Yado, and my colleague and I were discussing on the infamous \"Face on Mars\". My colleague believes in superstition and conspiracies so he stated that the face on Mars must be of extraterrestrial origin. I said that was porposterous, but my colleague continued to try and convince me to no availe. I told my colleague there are many reasons why the some scientists and people thought the \"Face on Mars\" looked like a face. I then procedded to tell him my reasons.\n\nFirst off, cameras at the time were not as advanced as they are today. The cameras of the day would \"distort the image and it would only capture the major features of the butte or mesa. The most recent image taken of the \"Face on Mars\" in 2001 looks very different from the original image taken in 1976. If there was a actual structure left by aliens, modern cameras would be able to see it. The the more modern cameras of today are able to see the more defining features of a object.\n\nSecondly humans are remarkably good at seeing faces when there is not one there. When you look at a wall socket you can see what resembles a face when there is not one there. It is the same thing with the \"Face on Mars\". With the aid of shadows from the Sun, are ability to see faces when none are there, and the angle the picture was taken, the butte or mesa looks remarkably like a face or some alien made structure.\n\nIn response to what I said my colleague had some things to say to try and disprove me. Due to my colleague believing in superstition and conspiracies he believed NASA and the government are hiding the truth from us. He stated they were hiding this from us because of what happened with H.G. Wells The War of the Worlds, which caused a massive panic. The government don't want another mass panic so they have been keeping us away from the truth that aliens exist. My colleague also stated that possibly alien markings were hidden by haze as some other theorists thing so. I thought that was perpostourous but my colleague still believed the theory of aliens existing.\n\nEven thoug hmy colleague still believes in the \"Face on Mars\" to be a alien made structure. I still believe it's only a butte or mesa. With my evindence of the \"Face on Mars\" only looking like a face due to the techonology of the time, the shadows of the sun, the angle the picture was taken, and our ability to see faces when none are there, I believe I have conclusive evidence that the \"Face on Mars is nothing but a butte or mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is software that can percieve peoples emotions. The software which goes by the name, the Facial Action Coding System, can detect feelings accurately. Some uses of this new technology is astounding. But would it really be helpful in the classroom? While this new technology seems promsing, it just wouldn't work in the classroom. This is due to the technology being inaccurate, flawed, and inconsistent.\n\nFirst off, the Facial Action Coding System could allow teachers in schools to modify lessons but that doesn't mean it will help matters at all. For example, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" While this technolgy can read the emotions and help notice when the lesson needs to be modified, that doesn't mean it will prevent students from becoming bored and actually get information from the lesson. Especially when its taken into considerstion that there are usually twenty to thirty students in the classroom. What may help one student doesn't always apply to the other twenty or so students in the class. Therefore the technology seems flawed as it can apply to one student but not necessarily twenty to thirty students.\n\nAlso, the Facial Action Coding System can be inaccurate like all technolgy. Human beings are very off sometimes when attempting to read emotions. Who says technology can be any better. The passage shows, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" This example shows how humans misinterpret emotions. Technology can easily do the same thing. Another example of this is the Mona Lisa painting. The text states,\"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.\" This example shows that the technology can be inaccurate because the technology may recieve one range of emotions from the painting, a person could recieve a completely different set of emotions. This example could very well apply to a student in class because everything is different from student to student.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System seems promising in a classroom but seems very flawed, inconsistent, and inaccurate. Students may or may not benefit from their emotions being read and lessons being changed in the classroom. Each student is different, so one change will not benefit all students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a new innovated world with cars that could drive itself! Crazy right!\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", I have read about the evolution of the driverless car and I think it would be a great and cool innovation in the near future. In this essay I will explain my position on driverless cars.\n\nOne reason why driverless cars would be a good innovation because it would be a safer way to get from one place to another. As it explains in paragraph 3-5, in order for the car to drive itself it would need sensors. The sensors will be advanced to detect the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. So forth, the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes and reduce power from the engine. But, the driver will always need to be focused at all times because the sensors will not detect other work zones and accidents.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars would be a good innovation because it would possibly help young and rising drivers have a little more understanding of road smarts and how driving in the real world works. Using driverless cars can actually be used in \"drivers ed\" in the future. Now that that the world is more advanced when students are learning how to drive, the students won't need a teacher to teach them. Companies could put a digital teacher in the driverless car with the same sensors to make the students more safe when they learn to drive.\n\nThe last reason why driverless cars would be a good innovation because it would just simply be cool to say that the United States have driverless cars that are more safe and durable. The most important reason to have driverless cars is to keep the citizens safe. I wouldn't say driverless cars would prevent car accidents , I would say it will decrease the number of accidents in the United States.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars, in my opinion, would be a great innovation to cars in America. Driverless cars will allow safety on the roads, it could help young drivers, and it would just be cool to have a driverless car. I wouldn't be suprised if I see a car with no driver floating around in my area in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we keep the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the President of the United States? We should change to election by popular vote for the President. \"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL- CIO all agreed on Abolishing the Electoral College. According to a Gallup poll in 2000 shortly after Al Gore won popular vote from the Electoral College but lost the Presidency. 60% of voters would prefer a direct election like the one we have now.\"\n\nWhat is wrong with the Electoral College? The Electoral College system voters vote not for the President but also for a slate of electors, whom which in turn to elect the President. The Electoral College is an anachronism. \"The Electoral College is not a democratic in modern sense, its the electors who elect the president not the people.\" For exmaple President Obama received 61.7% of the electoral vote comparison to 51.3% popular votes casted for him and Romney.\n\n\"Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.\" 1968 - Nixon; 1992 - Clinton only had 43% plurality of the popluar vote, while winning majority in Electoral College. \"Pressure for run - off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; the pressure which would complicate the presidential election process, which is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner.\"\n\n\"Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\" In 2000 Fiasco was the biggest ekection crisis in a century. State Legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. The Electoral College is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state. The candidates don't spend the time in states they know that they have no chance of winning, they only focus on the tight races.\n\nShould we keep the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the President of the United States? We should change it to election by popular vote. The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and is irrational. Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole are in agreement for abolishing the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that more students nowadays are taught by the use of technological advances than it was in the past. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.\r\n\r\n\tOn the one hand, there are a number of disadvantages of using technological devices in lecturing. First of all, parents must pay a prohibitive tuition fee for state-of-the-art equipment. However, there is still a wide range of ordinary families that are challenging in paying the teaching fee. Secondly, teachers are gradually getting too dependent on software such as Powerpoint or video platforms. More specifically, if there is a day that has a blackout or some technical problems, the lecturer may get anxious and confused giving a total lesson.\r\n\r\n\tOn the other hand, there are several reasons why the use of technological advances is absolutely beneficial. The principal one is that students would learn more from many sources on the Internet to widen their horizon after school. In fact, the more they learn by themselves, the more they memorize it better than someone teaching it in class. Additionally, using an advanced piece of equipment like a television or a robot at school may captivate children a lot. For example, the teachers may use historical dynamic videos to indicate the context in the past in history class which is usually known as a mundane subject.\r\n\r\n\tIn conclusion, while technology has some negative aspects in teaching students, taking advantage of these modern-day devices would definitely bring a huge amount of benefits for lecturing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ah patients I know lot people trouble patient let tell story patientI rember last year I went trip go fishing week two hour drive staright thaught I really exited left exactaly six morning I happer lack go trip hit night way I ready get I dasn excited dad said dont worry bud get soon lets calm okay buddy I quit rest way There waiting see camp site looked like waiting patiently finaly got I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have always been conflicts about the policy of investing the majority of citizens’ taxes on motivating society to have a healthier lifestyle for future risks, however, others argue that it is vital to support patients who are in serious illnesses. In my perspective, I totally approve of the former promotion and this essay will explain the reasons why. \r\n\r\nThe investment in sustaining residents’ long-term health produces massive impacts on society. First of all, guaranteeing social healths should benefit the nation’s fund due to the reduction in hospitalisations which bring about the decreasing tendency of medical supporting fee and the remaining fund will contribute greatly to the up-gradation of public facilities. For instance, instead of spending a gigantic amount on medication and operations, having prepared hand forward, the country has better possibilities in avoiding crucial diseases as well as enhancements in the revenues donating to communal organizations such as orphanages or nursing houses\r\n\r\nHaving planned scenarios for future cases prevents the country from damages because of unexpected global diseases. Considering healthy lifestyles enhances the community’s immune systems that play important role in inhibiting sickness. This is analogous to the covid 19 pandemic that caused crucial consequences to nations both economic and physical aspects yet a variety of deaths are recorded to happen with patients who have underline illnesses that worsen the situation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the concentration on these promotions leads to inequality in revenues shared to aid patients who are in need. This rests on the fact that there will be emergencies when hospitals ask for donations from private organizations because of costly treatments. Furthermore, depending on governments’ incentives stop residents from actively creating methods in order to protect their health which in a long run will be harmful individually.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, despite the reliance on governments’ policies and insufficient expenses I absolutely agree with the statement that politicians should focus on citizens’ current situations that will be advantageous to the nation’s development in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral Voters\n\nCitizens of the U.S. have been voting for their presidents ever since George Washington was elected. They vote because they want their voices and opinions to be heard. So they can provide ways to make their lives better. But the truth of the matter is, we don't make the decisions. The Electoral College does. They should change the election to go by popular vote of the United States. Reason being is because what's the point of voting if they won't listen and they only hand pick a few people out of the millions of others. But keeping the College would make it easier to have votes counted.\n\nInitially, the point of voting is to be heard and to have things your way for once, but if it's falling on deaf ears, then why bother? For example, in 'The Indefensible Electoral College' writer Bradford Plumer states that, \"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" Okay lets say someone wanted to vote for the Republican, and they vote for one of the electors who pledge themselves to the Republican. We can't rely on a person's word. What if they change their mind and vote for the other? How can natural citizens know to put their faith into a random stanger. Clearly, the voter does not get a say in the matter.\n\nFurthermore, the millions of people who vote are reduced to a small amout of people. \"The Electoral College consists of five hundred thirty eight electors,\" and \"Two hundred seventy is needed to decide who's president.\" - The Office of the Federal Register. So states like New York and Nebraska only have three to six people voting since they are small. While on the other hand, California, Texas, and Florida have about thirty to sixty. And with the civilians living there, it's still not enough. Honestly, it wouldn't even matter if they voted.\n\nOn the other hand, the smaller amount of people, the quicker the U.S can get a president. In paragraph 4 of 'In defense of the electoral college' it's replied that, \"A tie is possible... but it is highly unlikely.\" The presidential vote in 2012 may have not been a landslide ,but at least it wasn't a tie. The small amount made it a lot easier to count the votes. And the majority of voters still got who they wanted ,so it wasn't all terrible. The electoral college hasn't all been bad.\n\nThe Electoral College has more cons than it has pros. A citizen's voice must be heard and that won't happen if only few people are heard. But votes can be counted faster if there's only a tiny amount.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show thatshe gotten use change new country When says When geese return faint honks flying overhead familiar season upon season Also hibiscus budding remind home Vietnam seeing flower hearing geese give confidence encouragement retake drivers test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affected cyclist condition surrounding hot got dehydrated needed water There lot hills pedal harder use energy get hills There cars building smog nature It peaceful relaxful ride bike thats setting affects cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Moving around place place always hard I hated thought never seeing friends family Never word I could hold point hope futile feeling I knew I would dearly miss sounded far twelve hour drive seemed like edge earth I visited boring tell truth top looking new house would bore furthermore I could think Now I moving When I first heard move I infuriated tried fight poor decision I sure parents making mistake As hard I fought I could win tears coulde nt move parents slightest way even In greatest efforts I broken confined moving van twelve hours felt like forever Finally departure legs sore tired I nt want manouver seat even touch soil The ground dirty tainted apartment complex old overly occupied rain mud nt help attitude much either Everything place digusting thought still sharing room younger brother made feel sick stomach I stepped foot side entered apartment went straight bleakly colored room I sat collected thoughts trying determine pros cons situation The walls caving seemed take shape bars I condemed fait I could escape untill I turned years away I stuck apartment three days I wandered outside nt horrible concidering raining time even end abnormal I nt want leave room apartment I wanted watch cartoons room I felt alone place I friends talk parents wouldent listen little brother wouldent understand There smiles I found I go school next day Aloha park sounded like school would great funding spoiled rich kids actually exact opposite It older school kids mostly lived lower income housing time In someways rather comforting knowing I lived way temporarily The first day school frightening first major transition new unfamilliar place My teacher old grouchy seemed major chip shoulder Suddenly blue held hand hallway humilliating definately comforting I heard new classmates giggle laugh saw I thought I would never make friends The humiliation withstandable thought class next nine months fear beyond belief My teacher told take seat far side room next three boys expression amalgamation alienated confusion territorial pride The feeling unwelcome would understament new nervous sensation surrounded I sat unaware actions three boys might deal surprisingly occurence series temporary stares aquard silence As day continued life become somewhat casual boys started talk opposite gender attention directly turned towards I sat quietly listened smirked inapropriate conversation I clearly supposed part They laughed snickerd covered mouths embarassingly I looked concidered amatures comical arts I wanted say something I held onto whole conversation I took chances add important joke quickly I muttered overly inapropriate sentence They confusingly looked asked I said I wasnt sure would take joke I risked another chance repeated The group boys grew silent noises students talking eachother suddenly bursted laughing I overjoyed sense humor I friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Click ok cool grandma thanks I say your welcome says When here I say I dont know dont know talking probably dont talking shoes I ordered online There called And boy I goin crazy things I waited days every day I would ask mom yet yet every time l werent I starting get mad So finally l rode bike around get mind I see truck I thaught yes hes probably going house shoes I raced home waited waited still shoes So next day l look online shoes said MI I flipping meant coming So wating waiting mom decided go somewhere So l went car leave I thaught l heard truck nope finally arive back house l looked left yup sitting front rough brown box I run pick dash inside tear open lies best shoes known man I try CAPS awesome I thank grandma patients flew away I felt happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created Narciso Rodriguez memoir Narciso Rodriguez greatfulnessThroughout memoir mood created greatfulness There many quotes memoir support mood created One quote I always greatful parents love sacrifice greatful parents giving better life raising good guy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not that long ago, the most famous people were venerated for their talents. In ancient times, people celebrated mighty warriors and great leaders; in more recent centuries they championed writers, scientists, and artists. However, it seems that in the twenty-first century the criteria for fame has been vastly reduced. This essay will demonstrate why this is a bad thing for today’s young people.\n\nIn every country, young people need role models to admire. Sometimes those role models are family members, friends, or teachers, but often it is famous person. While in the past this may have been a person with tremendous achievements under their belt, nowadays it is more likely to be a comparatively talentless celebrity. People are famous for all sorts of reasons now, and not all of these set a positive example for children and young adults. It seems detrimental to worship someone who got famous for little more than taking selfies. Young people learn that they don’t need to study or work hard in order to achieve their dreams of success. Instead, they learn that the most important thing in life is having lots of followers on social media.\n\nSome people, however, argue that it is not a bad thing that the barrier to fame has been lowered. They seem to think that this makes success attainable for more people. However, making money is not the most important goal in life. It is more important to do great things and earn respect. Today’s celebrity culture teaches the youth that being a successful person is about little more than fast cars, expensive jewelry, and designer clothes. It teaches them to cut corners in order to achieve fame, and to tactlessly boast about it once they have succeeded.\n\nTo conclude, I agree entirely with the notion that young people are negatively impacted by vacuous celebrities whose fame is predicated upon very little achievement. Our youngsters need positive role models, and today’s celebrities offer them a bad example of how to live their life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I used patience many times I use patience bus home school The first time used patiencewas I fishing I time I tweety fishing one hand bag salt viniger And I waiting fish I met friend bubbles norweigian goose also maybe week old When I met I fed bait I guessed liked warms I gave bait put pole And soon I grabed chips I bite I turned small sun fish But still day I see bubble year lives near favorite fishing spot And year side kicks two ducks I named There friendly love skittles kind shy around ducks content sitting next bench And bubbles loves cheeses cuddling duck buddies calm grass And story true The", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are two possible ways to interprete the significance of history experience for our everyday life.\nThe first point is to ignore the history experience. The main reason is based on the opinion that history never repeats. All historical persons that lived at the elder times never made their decisions in the conditions those surround us. The world has changed significantly. Technology, information, transport, medicine, human rights - all these important parts of our life has changed since the elder times. So, we can not directly copy the decisions of different problems of the elder times to our present life.\nThe second point is to use the history experience in our present life. This opinion is based on observed samples of very similar intervals of history. At different time periods in different countries there were some events or historical processes being very similar. There are a lot of examples illustrating this thought. All countries of Medieval Europe and Asia past through the feodalism period. Then leaders of that counties decided that the feodalism is not the most effective way to control the country and annuled it. Nowadays we know that experience and, I believe, there will be no attempts to buld the feodalism again. The second example is the practice of conquestions. There were a lot of great conquerrors in the world's history: Alexander Macedonian, Caesar, Chinggis-khan, Napoleon, Gitler. All the listed persons conquerred big territories, their armies were very strong. But some time past and their empires were broken. Sometimes their enemies united against the conquerrors, sometimes they just died and their successors could not save the empires. But always the empires died. Nowadays we have no any signs of old borders of that empires. Actually all state borders are based on nations' borders, not on the old conquestions.\nI think the second opinion is better. The reason is following. There are a lot of institutions in our life that we like. For example, human rights, property rights, education, medicine. All these institutions appeared as a result of historical experince. If our predecessors ignored that experience, we would never live in the modern society. In that case we would have no modern medicine and education, also we would live in the society with slaver. So, I think that we should thoroughly study the historical experience and use its conclusions in our present life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A cowboy who rode waves\n\nIt says that when Luke had to feed the animal he had to go when it was raining also and that he had to walk on a slippery ladder. Next he rode a cattle to Greece because he said it was a life time if he went. Then,the catlle boat trips were unbeliveable opportunity for a small town boy. Also,his second job was to take care of the animals every hour. For instance he couldnt work because his ribs wre crack. Then he rode to different countries. Its says Luke always found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Then it says,but being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke it opend the world to him. Its also explains he has to take care of horses cows and mules that were shipped overseas. Next it helps countries recover their food supplies,animals and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA.For instance he knew it was an opportunity of life time. Luke and don signed up for it. don invited him to Europe and they had to ride a cattle. They also went to New Orleans for orders. He said it prepared him for work because he had things to take care of something. He said it opened the world to him. Then he said he went to different countries all over the world he got different jobs also. Thats how he convine others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some governments are recommending companies to relocate to the countryside to address the transport and housing problems in cities. This strategy is believed to have both benefits and drawbacks. In this essay, both sides will be explored, followed by my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, one advantage of this strategy is the potential for economic growth and job creation in rural areas. By attracting more companies to the countryside, this area can experience an influx of investment, leading to increased business and manufacturing activities in this region which can create more employment opportunities for local residents. This can help revatilize local economies, reduce the unemployment rate and improve the overall standard of living in this area. In addition, this trend can alleviate the issues related to transport and housing in crowded cities. By decentralizing business activities, this strain on urban infrastructure can be reduced, leading to improved transport flow and less pressure on housing and public services. In other words, this approach can create a more sustainable and livable environment in metropolis. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are also drawbacks that need to be considered. One major challenge is the availability of skilled workers in the countryside. To be more specific, companies may have difficulties in finding a qualified workplace, especially in specialized industries that require advanced education and specific expertise. This circumstance not only pose a barrier to attracting companies to rural regions but also hinders their potential growth. Moreover, the countryside may lack neccessary infrastructure and amenities that support businesses, such as a reliable transport network, access to the market and adequate ultilities. These limitations have a profound impact on their competitiveness and viability. Another consideration is the potential influence on social fabric of local communities. In fact, this approach may lead to changes in local cultures, traditions and ways of life. Thus, it is essential that the development is sustainable and respects the value and needs of local people.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although encouraging companies to move to rural areas can bring economic benefits in this regions and address some issues in cities, this stratey also has some disadvantages that should be considered carefully. By striking a balance between economic growth, social consideration and environmental sustainability, governments can promote a balanced regional prosperity and create opportunities for both rural and urban regions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy is fun! My friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe in a cattle boat. It sounded fun, the chance to travel around the world and go see places I've dreamed about. I mean how could you pass up an offer like that? So, of couse I said yes. It was 1945, World War II had just ended in Europe, and countries needed help recovering from the war. To help these countries recover more than 44 countries joined together to make the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration or the UNRRA. This program hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" (that's what I was) to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules while the animals were on the ship. Don and I signed up of couse it sounded fun, and I had helped my Aunt Katie on her farm when I was a boy so I has some exspirence. Finally we received our orders to report to New Orleans, I couldn't wait to go out and help people. We had arrived on August 14, that's the day the Pacific war had ended. When we got our seaman's papers we boarded to SS Charles W. Wooster, we were heading to Greece, I was so excited. In cargo we had 335 horses plus enough oats and hay to feed of the horses.\n\nI had turned 18 before I had arrivede at Gresse, so that meant I could be drafted for military service, but when my draft board had leanred I was on a cattle-boat trip be just told me to keep doing what I was doing. In the service you help people and help to fight for your country and if he told me to keep doing what I was doing that means I'm doing something that is going to help people in a big way. The cargo is going to help feed people in need because of the war destroying their food supplies. Not only did I help people, I also got to see Europe and China. Seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. Also taking a Gondola ride in Venice, Italy was amazing too! The city with streets of water was beautiful. I also go to tour an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nOn theses trips I got to meet new people and see new places. I got to help people in need, and that felt good. It feels good when you see someone that's suffering because their home was destroyed and when you help them they have a smile on their face. Taking care of the cattle, horses, and mules was fun. We also found the time to have fun on board, especially on the return trips after all the animals had been unloaded. Us cowboys played baseball and volleyball in the empty hold where the animals were housed. We had table-tennis tournaments, boxing, reading, fencing, whittling, and games aslo helped us pass the time.\n\nThere are so many opertunities when you're a Seagoing Cowboy. \"It opened up the world to me.\" \"It made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs.\" I took an offer of a life time, and you should too! Most importantly to me I know I helped people and I made a difference!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is not a good idea and heres why,\n\nIt might be fun to go and help others in need but what about your job, lots of things could happen. You might have an exiting time but what about all the responcebilities you have if you go. I mean I wouldin't go because of that or because what if one person doesin't want to do it any more, our someone gets car sick. A lot of things can happen and you know what, I dont want to get car sick if I were you. Also what about home, theres opportuneities here. What about the people who are in need right now. There is so much you could do right here right now. You don't have to go somewhere els just too help somone I mean there are people out here that are in need bad but your going to Greece just too help other people. It's a good idea but just think about what you good do here. I'm one of those people who love helping others but I know that I could just help someone here because going to Greece!! I wouldin't want too because I already have more than enuogh people I could help, things I could see, things I could do. There is just so much to do, and to see. I know that if you just think there will be something to do for our community just like that. Like I said you don't need to got to Greece to see that!\n\nThose were some of my resons why you shouldin't go to Seagoing Cowboys program. Like I said,it would be fun but think about what could happen before you go and give it a try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The automobile was made a long time ago to help us move around faster and more efficient,however,have we really thought about the benefits that could come from limiting the usuage of cars such as:Saving money in gas and insurance,Less car crash related injuries and even because its better for the enviroment.\n\nWith limiting the usuage of cars comes many pro's such as saving money. On average,an American spends about thirty-five to fourty dollars on gas per fill-up and one hundred to two hundred dollars a month on insurance a month depending on age,experience,accidents,etc. By limiting your car usage comletely or even just a little just imagine the extra money you'll have aying around for the nessecities and maybe even a ittle you-time. Say you buy a bike and the only time you use your car is to drive to work and anywhere out-of-state,that means that you'll be able to go a week with roughly two gallons of gas. That puts you at about thirty-eight hundred dollars a year where if you were purchasing four or five gallons a week you'd be spending approximately eleven thousand dollars a year. Thats no chump change. You're insurance would gradually decrease due to safe driving and age so along with gas being cheaper,so would the insurance.\n\nFlorida is a state well-known for car crashes due to weather conditions like rain and fog and you can't do anything to change that other than take a different,much safer mode of transportaion such as a bus. Nowadays bus and semi-truck drivers are more experienced and cautius then they used to for one reason,CYB(Cover your Butt).You see major bus and semi-truck companies now that due to the size of their vehicles,if there's ever crash involving one of their autmobiles then they're likely to get blamed cause of the size of the vehicles and so it would make since for them to send their drivers to extensive training and make sure that their trucks are in good hands,which is exactly what they do. Studies show that you're chances of being in a wreck in a bus are one of every one hundred rides while being in a car driven by yourself puts you at a whopping one of ten ridesyur chances of safety are greatly increased.\n\nThe United States of America has no shortage of pollution and that's not helped by the fact that we have one of the largest populations of personal automobiles inhabiting this country. There are many other kinds of pollution that occurrs in the land of the free but most of it like factory smoke,large ship(boat)smoke and even resturant made smoke can not really be stopped or diminished by you or me but one form of pollution we can prevent is automobile smoke. In the US up to fifty percent of greenhouse gas is from cars(certain areas).If you stop using you car and ride a bike even thugh it won't seem like muchyou'd be suprised at the difference. Say a sall cmmunity around yur neighborhood gives up their cars that could account for half a percent of greenhouse gas which is more than it seems. Just ask yourself if you want your friends and family growing up in a dying,polluted world.\n\nIn conclusion,I'm not discrediting the huge help cars can be in our daily lives I'm just saying if we continue along this car-orientated path,pollution may be what ends our daily lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Think\n\nabout it, driverless cars, are they really safe? Can we honestly depend on a machine that can't deviate from it's given instructions? Do we even want a machine that can think, and do things better than us? Driverless cars propose just that.\n\nDriverless cars, it's an idea long thought about, but have we really taken in all the considerations?\n\nAcoording to the passage, Gooogle has plans of making a driverless car taxi system where people won't even need to buy cars \"the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\". By the sound of this it seems like there would be quite of bit of technology co-operating with each other,and where there's technology there's hackers.\n\nThe problem with this idea is for one, the current state of our country, and the world. With all of the terrorism going around, and the blood hungry fools with guns. How are we to stop one of them from hacking into the system, and causing complete mayhem? Plus, how can we even turst our government to not take control over it. The entire idea of us not being in control is what sould raise red flags in the minds of the people. Just as hollywood has shown us beautiful daydreams for driverless cars. We've also read about numerous all controling powers, and oppresive governments who used systems like this to thier advantage.\n\nTechnology of driverless cars is not something i'm doubting, i'm certain that if the technology doesn't exist now it will in the very near future. Especially since the economy is demanding more and more technology, for more, and more reasons. In the passage, we're told how General Motors tried to develop \"smart roads\" instead of cars. While they did succed in making \"smart roads\", the cost for changing all the roads was beyond practical. Thus, the idea of \"smart cars\" is the main focus of now.\n\nWhile I don't support driverless cars, I do support what seems to be the main cause for doing so, safety. the whole point of the driverless car is to keep people from getting into accidents, and saving lives. But, most of the technology in order make a car drive safely isn't truly quite perfected yet. We know this because the passage gives us along grocery list of the bare minmum of what the car needs just to operate without traffic! For example cameras, and sensors, mapping data, and programing. Another question to be raised is what will the cost of these driverles cars be? I highly doubt they'd be very affordable.\n\nIn the end, driverless cars aren't very reliable.Given all the gagets, and gizmoes they require to just barely operate, and the cost after all theses years of preparing can't be cheap. Not to mention that we'd slowly begin to forget how to drive ourselfs so that in the midsts of an emergency we might be stranded. The possibliliteis for this to go wrong is numerous, it's simply a bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever wondered life would like without computers Some experts concerned people using much time computers I believe still use computers Without doubt using computer helps us learn The computer helps us learn places world people say would love look beautiful places world Computers also teach speak language says taking spanish online helped im lot class Computers offer online study groups help us get college Many people would agree using computer helps us learn new things Its fact instead people computers You meet new people computer Most people live meeting people online You also learn social computer people say learn social computer People also learn personality use says I got computer I nt personality I feel like whole person As interact people computers Did know computer teacher life say need use computer one already says using computer helped type Using computer helped hand eye coordination You type lot essays college os help well So know computer helps future Without doubt people still use computers helpful many ways So waiting go go computer today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator\n\nI would rather want the changing of the election to popular vote because the Electoral college process causes many promblems. First is that it consists of 538 electors and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president(source 1). Also perhaps it leads into a tie in the electoral votings.... it could possibly lead into a deadlocked election(source 1). This process of electoral college does not give the full rights to the voters... its not fair.\n\nMy first reason why you guys should change the election to go by popular votes is it causes many promblems, 538 electors is consisted of and only 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. this tells me that NO people can vote which really does not give you the right to do that because people have always that right to vote. In addition to that it can lead to a big catastrophe. The electoral college process is unfair to voters.\n\nAlso why, all that can lead into a tie in the electoral votings. Which equals into a deadlocked election. Lastly, this process is outdated and irrational. arguments against direct elections are spurious and should completely vanish this process.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Obesity becomes a detrimental problem within society. While several people are advising to rising the price of non-healthy food, I completely disagree with that view since to overcome the phenomena, people should do more than just avoiding fatty dishes.\r\n\r\nObviously, increasing the price of several unhealthy foods can drive people to the healthier option. When people begin to realize their daily consumption of non-healthy products compel them to allocate a massive amount of money, that will make them think twice since they might have another priority. Nonetheless, it can make them to start looking for alternative ingredients or products that are cheaper, with almost the similar quality like they used to consume. Take the example when Indonesian people start to do home cooking trends to save their budgets because the government is increasing the tax price of fast food restaurant for around 10%. Even though almost three-quarters of the total population are following the trends, I personally think that it will not effective for the lasting period since the existence of online delivery services such as Grab or UberEats are offering several promotions to make the prices remain low.\r\n\r\nHence, several alternatives must be conducted in order to minimise the overweight phenomena. First, through campaign. By deploying popular platforms such as Instagram and TikTok, as well as collaborating with prominent celebrities to introduce and educate people about the risks of obesity, people can initially raise their concern to that matter. Second, do regular exercise. By exercising, the body will not only learn to control the food intake for overcoming obesity, but also how to unleash the calories from the food they consume.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although rising prices might be potent to tackle overweight issues I personally believe that it will not effective in the long run, thus some alternatives, such us doing campaign or exercise must be undertaken.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" , Luke joined , or signed up , for the Seagoing Cowboys. This job was to do hard work overseas to help with cattle and feed.\n\nOn their way, Luke went and seen different places,like China! Convincing others to participate in this important job would be hard. I think it would be hard because it is hard work. You also have to go overseas , away from your family and friends.\n\nIt would be hard to convince people to participate, or help. This is because, it is hard work, and your always busy. Here is an example from the article,\"His job was to check on all the animals every hour.\" That proves that he is always busy. \"But he couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.\" That is an example that he is hard working.\n\nThey have to go overseas to Greece to work as a Seagoing Cowboy. Here is an example from the text, \"They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece.\" People would miss their friends and family. They would also be sore from all the hard work they have to do.\n\nLuke was greatful from start to end. In the beginning he was greatful to participate. In the middle, he done hard work , visited and saw great experiances. In the end, he was sore but really greatful for his part. \"I'm greatful for the opportunity.\" he says. \"It made me more aware of people of other countriesand their needs.\" That was an example in the text.\n\nBut best of all, he helped. These were some reasons and examples of why it would be sort of difficult to convince others , or people, to participate and take part in helping.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To get from point A to point B, whether it be from home to the park or from school to the movies, the logical answer that pops up in everyone's mind seems to be a car. Automibles such as cars and motorcycles are widely used and are integrated into every part of society. But do automobiles really need to be so rooted into everything people do as a society? Cars and motorcycles create a myriad of problems such as congestion and smog. Some societies even legally limit their community's automobile usage to attempt to correct some essential problems. Limiting automobile usage is important, because not only is it practiced globally with tremendous success, but it also largely reduces pollution caused by diesel fuel and brings to light issues within communities and accounts for their resolution.\n\nAutomobiles are thought of as a daily commodity in most urban countries, but there are some societies in which usage has been reduced or even eliminated entirely and the positive results may be shocking. In the suburban city Vauban, Germany, residents have given up automobiles for a chance at a life free of traffic sounds and stress. This experimental journey within the town has acheived these and so much more. Their streets are essentially car-free and the lack of garages and parking space allows for up to 5,500 people to live in a single rectangular square mile with any necessary stores within walking distance (Source 1 Par 6). Simlarly-yet on a much smaller scale, Bogota, Columbia has initiated a car-free day in an attempt to eliminate the area's pollution as well as reduce stress. The day is on its third year and has done as hoped. Additionally, Bogota's once pitted and uneven sidewalks have been since replaced and made much smoother, and the city has introduced parks and sports centers, new restaruants, and new shopping centers which are blossoming and thriving (Source 4 Par 28). these changes have created a society both happy and strongly bonded. As wonderful as these positive shifts in society are, limiting autombile usage can do even more.\n\nA limit in automible usage can also benefit communities by reducing pollution-seeing as a large majority of air pollution is created through the release of diesel fuels into the air. Paris, France legally banned personally autombile use throughout the city in order to rid the city's air of harsh pollutants (Source 2 Par 10). France experiences a combination of cold nights and warm days that trap the emmisions from cars, scooters, and motorcycles (Source 2 Par 15). By significantly reducing the amount of diesel fuels rising to the air to be trapped, the smog had cleared enough within mere weeks that the city was able to entirely lifted the ban. This is a major example of the advantages limiting car usage entails.\n\nAltogether, limiting automobile usage is key to improving society and has myriad advantages such as creating a more bonded and pleasant community and reduces environmental hazards like pollution. Creating vehicular limits is a promising way to change the world as we know it for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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