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"content": "Yes, it could be useful! It could be used to do a lot of good things. For example, we could use it to help us determine whether someone is lying or not during an interigation or in a court. However, in order or both of those to be accurate we would need to make some adjustments.\n\nNevertheless, the technology could be used to show how and when students in school become confused or bored with a subject, just like the author stated. It could also advance our understanding of how emotions work. The Mona Lisa, who we saw in the picture, looks like she has a weird cross between a smile and a frown. It is very fascinating how this all works. This can also tell us if celebrities and politicians are being truthful.\n\nIn conclusion, it could be very benifical to study this subject. It could further advance the science of the human face and emotions. Like the author said, who knew faces could reveal so much about our emotions.",
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"content": "I am against driverless cars being made. I think it will be too dangerous. It's cool that they are being made, but it will not end well. There are too many things to worry about with them. I think it's a bad thing because there are dangerous drivers out there, there are many road hazards, and weather conditions can make it even more dangerous.\n\nSome drivers are already making the roads more hazardous. They do things like speed, illegal turns, and do not use blinkers. With a human driver behind the wheel, if they see this they will most likely avoid the person the best they can, but what will a driverless car do. It might not be able to detect them so if it makes a turn, not knowing about the wreckless driver, it can cause an accident. The car can follow the rules of the road, but without human instincts, it's just waiting to get hit. This can very bad and effect a lot of people's thought about purchasing one of these vehicles.\n\nIt says in paragraph 7 that the driver must be ready to drive, just in case the car approaches a work zone, but what about small hazards. While the feature alerts them about work zones, it doesn't say anything about alerting the driver about a pot hole or dangerous material in the road. If it's driving in a small city, there could be some kind of hazard that needs a human to know how to avoid it. How would the car know to alert them if it hasn't seen anything like it before? It can alert for simple things, but for things like pot holes, it's better just to have someone behind the wheel instead of risking falling into the hole because the car didn't alert you to take over.\n\nDriving in bad weather can still be a problem. In paragraph 5, it states how it could react better than a human, stopping individual wheels and making it a lot less likely to skid out, but its not fullproof. What if the car was to be damaged in a incident of bad weather? It may be able to stop from out-of-control skids, but would snowfalls affect sensors? If there was enough snow on the ground, it could potentially affect the wheels, and sensors around the car by covering them. In the event of a hailstorm, they could get damged if the storm was bad enough to where hail was the size of softballs, which seems unlikely, but stills remains a possibility. Flash floods could also be dangerous if the car isn't programmed to know where the areas of flooding is possible at. There may be a solution to all these scenarios, but I doubt any one of them is perfect, due to the variety of storms and snowfalls there can be. In bad weather, it would be a lot more safe if the driver just drove instead.\n\nIn all cases, it would just be better to drive yourself. Your instincts will get you out of possibly fatal prediciments. You can avoid things like pot holes than can tear up a car. Your knowledge of the weather is most likely more than the car's knowledge. You can depend on a robot to do certain things for you, but I don't think driving should be one of them. We technically are in risk everyday we drive, but it's our choices that gets us through the day. I wouldn't put my life in a driverless car's hands. Just drive yourself, and it can be way more safe.",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is considered that foreigners' responsibilities in protecting both the culture and the environment to the places where they are in are being paid attention. In contrast, several people convey that there is no possible way to be a responsible tourist. In my personal opinion, I strongly disagree with above statement, as tourist should understand their personal choice as well as having sense of possesion. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, becoming a responsible tourist is a personal choice in order to respect the local traditions and cultures. For example, tourist folks who are coming from Western country, when they want to visit Eastern country, mainly temples, they should grasp the local rules before entering them. Wearing a sarong, dress appropriately, tie their long hair are vast sums of nice examples of respecting the local culture. Therefore, if tourists are aware about small things happened in their surrounding, becoming a responsibility tourist will be not a challenging demand. \r\n\r\nSecondly, the tourists are supposed to have strong feeling of possesion to the places they visit. This feeling leads to responsibilty of tourist to keep the cleanliness of the places they visit. For instance, if they visit new temples and they fall in love with the exquisite scenery around it, admire how green it is, and spend plenty of time in this place, they will be connected with this place. As a result, they will not make any harmful things such as throw rubbish recklessly, and feel guilty when they are unable to keep the area look more beautiful. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while other people say it is impossible to be a responsible tourist, however there are two major acknowledgements that can help improving the tourists' responsibilities.",
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"content": "Would you think anything that is not man made\n\nis some kind of alien artifact or a natural landform.The enormous head found on mars was nearly 2 miles from end to end, it could have been a mesa, and it has a shadow that makes it look like a face.\n\nIn a few days NASA unveiled the photo for all to see. The caption was \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head and a shadow illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth\". The face has become a pop icon and has starred in a Hollywood film. It has been on books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted the grocery store checkouts.\n\nMany scientists belived the face was an alien artifact. photographing became a priority for NASA they launched the Global Surveyor it came into mars Orbit in 1997. Jim Garvin chief scientist explained \"We felt this was important for taxpayers\". The scientist photographed the face as soon as they could get a good shot of the face. On April 5, 1998, When Mars Global Surveyor flew over for the first time, Michael and his camera that he pu ton the Mars orbiter snapped a photo ten times shaper than the oringinal Viking photos but reavealing a natrual landform. There was no alien momument after all.\n\nMany skeptics were not satisfied because the face was located at 41 degrees north martian latitiude. On mars it was winter and it was a cloudy time of years on the red planet. The skeptics said that the camera had to peer though wispy clouds to see the face. The skeptics said alien markings could have been hidden by haze.\n\nWhen the photo was unveield many conspiracy theorist think the face is a bona fide evidence of life on mars, evidence that NASA would rather hide form us. Mean while defenders of NASA budget wish if there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion scientist investigated more into the face and got a perfect photo of the face in maximum quality and showed no signs of writings or sgins of life. Scientits proved that there was no civilization on mars and that there were no writings on the face and it was only a natural landform. The scientists concluted that it was a butte or a mesa- landforms common around the American west.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock For example someone attempted publicity stunt would tie deliver bundle newspapers Empire State Building The workers moring equipment never installed putting workers catch bundle papers rope dangling blimp great danger Also wind top building put workers great risk falling dying",
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"content": "Back roaring New York City popular place needed adapt ways modernizing travel A new fashionable form travel blimp dirigible These balloons nowhere dock solving solution harder expectedAl Smith architect Empire State Building decided could use top tower mooring mast dirigibles After adapting entire building change Smith ran problemsThe first issue surfaced German dirigible exploded New Jersey This let Smith know would bad idea allow blimps near nonAmerican crafts filled hydrogen highly flammable leaving possibility catastrophe Another snag winds top building shifting due air currents would cause dirigibles freely dangerously sway wind With wind could crash towers would dangling pedestrians valves also came play preexisting law airships flying low urban areas would make dirigible activity Empire State Building downright illegal",
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"content": "Many conspiracy theorists say that The Face On Mars is proof of alien life. Some even say that NASA is trying to hide evidence of aliens. The face is nothing more then an illusion though, caused by shadows. Although technology was not advanced when the first photo was published, more recent pictures have proven that this is nothing more then a crater with shadows, creating eyes, a nose, and a mouth.\n\nIn 1976 when the first photo was released people quickly began to theorize that alien life was on Mars, but this is simply not true. The picture was taken in low resolution and was very blurry. The Viking 1 Spacecraft was circling the planet searching for landing sites for The Viking 2, when a landform that resembled an enormous face was spotted. This enormous two mile long \"face\" is nothing more then a mesa.\n\nIn 1998 a new picture of the mesa was released, but people were still not satisfied. Since it was winter while the mission was launched there was a thick haze over the Red Planet. Many think that NASA is trying to hide evidence that there IS lifeforms on other planets, but this is not true. We as scientists wish to share information on space with the public, but we will not spread false rumors about alien lifeforms when there are none.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 we launched another mission to take a more high-resolution photo. Since it was summer there were no clouds to hide the mesa. Mars Global Surveyor rotated 25 degrees to center the Face in the feild of view. They then took a photo using the camera at maximum resolution. After all the hype about alien life on Mars since the first photo was released, it was clear to see that the Face was nothing but a mesa.\n\nAfter years of research and three missions to take photos of Mars, it is clear to see that the Face was no evidence of life on another planet. The Face is very similar to something like on Earth. Although the mesa has not proven there is life beyond Earth we as humans still do not know what is beyond.",
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"content": "Generally, in our real lives, failure and successful events usually are seen in workplaces, sports and in families. Actually i completely disagree that the act of failing is caused by a lack of desire and motivation. There are many different factors which influence our failure and success.\nFirstly, the most recent event which affected significantly most of people's motivation, is the Covid-19 pandemic. The last two years there the number of business failure increased significantly due to lockdowns and victims by pandemic. For example the first lockdown in Europe happened in Italy in 2020, which restaurants, leisure facilities and shopping centres were obliged to close for more than one year. The consequence of this, was the loss of customers and the accumulation of debt, which led to many failures, because people had difficulties paying their bills and taxes.\nOn the other hand, failure could happen if people has no desire to expand their horizons. For example many developed companies that accept paying their employees larger amount of money, this action could cause laziness to company's members, even they could be absent from work. All that happens because of complacency. Consequently this can amount in dismissal and ruin their job's career and reputation in terms of work experience.\nTaking all of this into account, failure it doesn't only depend on peoples' personality and behaviour, but is also caused by external factors, influencing dramatically people's lives in terms of profit.",
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"content": "The builders hard time located dirigible dock Their first problem fact tall hard work Another problem fact blimp would pulling building reinforced The final problems made unreliable choice wind conditions fact tail end blimp could swing freely These contributed make mast Empire State Building bad idea",
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"content": "Nowadays, people in several countries are interested to know more about the background of their house or building they stay in. They may just be a general curiosity, however, they may also have specific purposes. This essay will look at the reason and give alternative ways to do background research on a house or building where people live in.\r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why people want to know the past of a place, first, they are just curious, and second, they want to know the track record of the house which will reflect indirectly the quality of the construction. Curiosity is one of the human beings, people being curious on the history of the house such as who had built this residence, who were the owners before, or even why this house was being sold. Moreover, the second type is people who want to know the track record of the building, this mainly comes from a broker who wants to sell a residence. For instance, the information about the house will help a broker to understand the age and quality of the house.\r\n\r\nIn addition, to know the history of a house, people can do several methods such as asking the neighbourhood, reading the certificate of the house, or if the building is famous enough they can search on the internet. For instance, when a person wants to know about who was owning a house before buying it, the old neighbourhood around it can be asked, such as the track record of how this house was renovated in the past.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people seek the history of a house or building because they are just curious or they want to know the track record and the quality of the building. Several methods can be used to research the house such as asking the neighbourhood, reading house certificates, or surfing on the internet.",
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"content": "Have you eveer been in an argument with somone before and they dont got any proof to show you that they are right.That is what is happening to me right now my name is jhon and i work for NASA, I got a friend that works with me his name is stan he is something else every time we find something new on a planet he automaticaly thinks its an alien or sometype of life form.\n\nStan is a space fanatic and he is absessed with everthing he does and all he does is look for aliens, Its not a bad thing but its not a good thing, either its actually kinda annoying. Right now we are trying to find a landing spot for one of our ships to get a closer look at the planet. We caught something on the camara and it looks like a face so we look into it. You know stan\n\nhe thought it was an ailen. Now i got to prove to him that its not an ailen its just a rock.\n\nOne of our ships has a scaner and could scan the whole planet to see if any life was their, So we had the scanner take a picture of the rock in the max resolution and on the max rsoulution you can discern things in a digital image 3 time bigger than the picel size so, If there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were. So we took a picture of the thing that\n\nstan thought was a ailen and it was just a rock with shodows on it make eyes and mouth. So Stan this time i proved stan wrong but mybe one day he will be right.",
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"content": "I patient one time grandma store Trying build whole store I go bathroom real bad I started get real mad I thought store person ringing stuff tryed go slow I couldnt use The reason I didnt complain stuff bascket mine That time I patient",
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"content": "The builders Empire State built two floors passengers drop luggage They view floors idea nt work wasted money extra roomsThey started working build attempt make dirigibles dock top wasted alot time money waste altogether",
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"content": "I , Luke Bomberger, am a memeber of the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThe Saegoing Cowboys help people who were affected by the war.\n\nI believe everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys program for three reasons.\n\nNot only do you get that warm fuzzy feeling from helping people out, but you also have a once in a lifetime chance to go sightseeing have the time of your life onboard, and explore the most beutiful and amazing places on Earth.\n\nBy becoming a Seagoing Cowboy you get to help out the less fortunate explore go sightseeing and have fun.\n\nWe help people by bringing them animals from overseas such as horses, cows ,and mules.\n\nWhen we bring the people the animals it gives you that warm fuzzy feeling of acomplishment.\n\nYou should also join because after our missions, we have some time left to go sightseeing in the area.\n\nSome of my favorite things to see were the Panama Canal and \"seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\"\n\nI also had the opportunity to expore much of Europe and China as well as taking a gondola ride in Italy. I also got to take a tour of a castle in Crete. If you think that the fun stops when you climb back aboard for the ride home, think again.\n\nThe stables where the animals were kept becomes a baseball field and a volley ball court.\n\nWe also have table tenis tournaments as well as boxing and fencing matches.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is fun as well as important.\n\nIn conclusion, \"the cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy.\"\n\nI reccomend becoming a Seagoing Cowboy because not only are you helping the world, but you get to have fun while you do it such as sightseeing and exploring.\n\nI myself have gone on nine trips as a Seagoing Cowboy and loved every second of it.\n\nIt also opened up my eyes and \"made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs.\"\n\nSo,unless you are doing something useful with your life, become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nYou won't regret it.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist major way For one desert deserted mountainous area California cyclist would problems By changing anyone features setting would change cyclist would behave setting Thus changing entire plot story If cyclist say entry mere develop area would face dangers mountainous region The settings features huge affect cyclist",
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"content": "It is argued that it is not possible for people who travel, to maintain their culture and care for the environment when visiting other places. This essay disagrees with this statement because individuals are taught to protect the world and investigations are done first.\r\n\r\nThe main reason for this is that there is an increasing concern about protecting the planet. So people in their own country, at schools, looking at the news and in other ways are taught about how important is to protect the place where they live. So they have in their mind what they should do and what not, and destroying the environment is one thing that they cannot do. Recent research concluded that in Germany although there are a large number of tourists every month there is almost no trash on the floors, and there is not increase in contamination and global warming even with the huge amount of visitors. \r\n\r\nAnother reason is that when people decide to travel to other countries will look for information about that place. Normally the internet has lots of information about the culture of the nation and if there is something that individuals should really consider, it can be easily found on the internet. Also, when people decide to visit somewhere because they like those places, then they are willing to follow those cultures if needed. For example, there are more and more people travelling to Asia, but their culture is very different from European one, nevertheless, most European people are disposed to not do what is not allowed and follow their culture.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, travellers normally will carry out research in advance and they know from their own city and town that individuals should not harm the planet, I, therefore, believe that it is possible to be a responsible tourist.",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are a good and bad idea, because they can help us but they can also be a safety hazard if not used properly. Although palces such as California, Nevada, Florida and the District of Columbia have been using driverless cars more states will start using them as soon as they get more data and information on the cars performance not only being tested in a lab but in the real world. Also with driverless cars new laws would have to be made and people would have to learn them to make the streets safe not only for them but also for the other cars and pedestrains around them. Even\n\nthough driverless cars arent that new to the modern world there can also be errors in new produts, we see it all the time with hoverboards and such.\n\nDriverless cars can help use in many ways such as helping use make good timing going somehwere for instance if you are driving back from a trip and you are tired and need some time to chill and not pay attention to the road you can just\n\nsit back and let the car drive for you. Another reason they can be helpful is what if you get hurt and you are alone and need someone to drive you to the hospital just get in your car type in the destination and go. if your car goes out of control due to snow or if it just rained your car can help you regain control of the car and make it safe to drive again.\n\nThere can also be some flaws with driverless cars considering they havent been out that long errors can still come around in all new products even if they are teststed 4575654 times. Maybe the automatic brakes dont work and you get in a server car accident and kill yourself or others, or if your sensors dont work and you hit someone crossing the street you never know with new technology.\n\nPeople may have different opions about it but either way there are good things and bad.",
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"content": "The scientists here at NASA has uncovered a new discovery.\n\nThe NASA Viking's 1 spacecraft picked up an unusual picture.\n\nThe result was a face. People lately have been curious about how it was created. Some believe aliens did it while some believe it's a landform. That's why we're here for. To prove that it was just a natural landform. Who was here at that time is trifle.\n\nFurthermore, there are evidence proving that it's a natural landform. First of all, do aliens really exist? Are there evidence showing that aliens really do exist? We haven't concluded a lot of evidence about that topic. Some scientists are blabbermouth here so they'll say anything to attract people. Here is an example, some will say it's created by aliens to attract some curious eyes. Face here is another thing to be experimented on. Let's go farther, shall we?\n\nIn addiction, other people who are into fantasies might say they disagree with scientists. There is a reason to believe that statement. People objects because they think since it's Mars, aliens live there. But in reality, theres no such thing like that. According to the article, it's said that\n\nMOC snapped a very clear picture of Face and it was revealed that it was a natural landform. No aliens built it in the end.\n\nScientists at NASA didn't know what it was at first because of the poor image. We tried to do anything to learn more about the Face. It was really hard because of how it was shaped and where it is,\n\nCydonia. That's a really hard place to find. We, first, thought it was just a rock and shadow. But a high class spacecraft proved the theory wrong.\n\nIn conclusion. Face was revelaed by the NASA scientists that it was a natural landform. Some will still disagree but scientists proved it right. In the end, aliens had nothing to do with it. It was just Mars and Face. Looks like the scientists unmasked the Face and revealed what it really was, a mesa.",
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"content": "In this period of development of globalization, many communities believe that the young generation must get an education. Whereas others believe, the government should teach the elderly community to read and write. In my opinion, I partially agree with this notion and my points of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion. \n\nFirstly, I believe it is very necessary for a youngster to do their higher study. As the government highlights the new generation. Moreover, the future is in hands of the next youngsters. To cite an example, a recent survey in Canada shows that families under the age of 27 tend to learn faster as compared to elderly people. As a result, those under 27 have sharp memories and tend to seek knowledge faster and will try to be more innovative and energetic.\n\nOn the other hand, mature people should not be forgotten. As they might not have the same facilities at an early age. For instance, 35% of seniors can’t write Hindi which, is the first language of India. Therefore, it is important to be educated in order to become a role model for the youth in your family itself. In addition to ,this the key factor is that once, you become senior you will have to deal with everyday problems and family issues. Which as a result, will affect you when you continue your study and can distract you easily.\n\nIn conclusion, it is necessary to spend more money on youngsters for a better life ahead. Whereas, older people should not be forgotten and must get the privileged of basic study. I believe that the aforementioned points are strongly supporting my viewpoints.\n\nYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.",
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"content": "Are you against of this technology to read people's mind? I am against it because there are people out there that suffer and want to get over their life. If that technology read their mind and the world knows it they will suffer more and never get over it. Also, there are many good reasons to agree it and there are many reasons that I disagree. The technology might ruin every person's life.\n\nIn addition, I disagree with this technology because in the text, third paragraph says in order to read the expressions your face bone has to be different, but there are a lot of emotions that people don't show, you might be happy or sad and your face still the same. I don't think that tecnology can comprehend people's emotion and people's mind. Basically, the third paragraph says that emotion are base on your bones but I notice when I am sad, happy, disgust or mind blank my face is the same: a face that's blank minded. Most people can't read my mind and I don't think the technology can either.\n\nAnother reason that I don't agree with technology reads mind is because there are people who don't want people to know what's in them. For example, if there's a girl is unhappy and in order to make her friends to be happy she do everything and maybe no one will notice and her friends will be glad for her. If the technology reads her minds and let her knows about it, their friendship might be in chaos and ends.\n\nAlso, why I am disagree with it because I remeber one time my teacher told me that science is not always 100%. I don't think this technology is accurate because I notice when one of my friend is sad I can tell by the way she talks but not her expressions. In the text says that not only your facial muscles knows your emotion but also produce them, but what if your bone is twisted and have an unhappy seems face but you are actually happy. The article says that facial muscles produce emotion, I disagree with it because when I feel sad or blank most of the time my facial bones still the same.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology shouldn't invented because it might not be accurate and says false about people expresson. This technology can only read expression only by bone but not voice or heart so I don't think it's accurate. That's why we shouldn't use this technology because science is not always 100% correct. We should get to know the person's mind better instead of use technology to know theirs. If you don't know what's in them then, that means relationship is not close and it's better to learn their minds and know each other better.",
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"content": "Technology is the main reason for the different changes in modern reality. Some people think that artificially intelligent robots will do all work in the future. From my point of view, it is impossible that robots can replace a person in all employment sphere. In this essay, I shall elaborate on the reasons for both views on this topic further.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, nowadays it is very difficult to imagine real-life without technologies. Those devices helpful for doing tacks such as clean up a house, drive a car and so on. However, during the last decades, robots also have opportunities to do medicine operations and collect important information. For instance, NASA's robots make research on Marc. Therefore, we can unbox fact that the surface of Marc has water particles.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the robots are emotionless and cold machines which can do the task only based on programs. They do not have the ability to make logical decisions or totally understand the feelings of a person. That is why the robot can not replace the body if he works in the type of job where the worker should support or give life advice. For example, teachers are not only people who help students to rich academic achievements but also individuals who explain moral normal in the community.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I believe that robots make our life more comfortable and easier. However, I confidence that they can not to do all work for a person.The reasons for that and for the opposite opinion was demonstrated above.",
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"content": "Minfong Ho author Winter Hibiscus concluded story Saeng vowing retake pass drivers test spring geese fly back plant rebuds The author concluded story paragraph signify Saengs willingness start After failing test Saeng visits green house misses old home Vietnam She buys hibiscus plants comes home noting geese flying south Winter The plant signifies memories When first sees its blossomed In spring rebud form another blossom growing bigger This parallels Saeng getting sadness homesickness rebuilding better memories growing stronger When gets chance The birds flying overhead headed south winter shelter cold In spring return start raise goslings rebuild home start last spring Saeng planning start pass drive feel accepted Minfong Ho chose end story paragraph signify characters starting rebuilding good memories",
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"content": "Dear glad see debate computers good bad human society Well I would like state opinion good In letter going tell bad stuff computer good society Well I dont think computer good society dont workout much use I say fact I use workout computer games came I spent hours day playing I time spend family I outside commaction like topic life Plus I know lot people feel way The computer like addiction I say hit power button cant get All commution website hard get starting put games wont log fast THe different website play video things funny Like find click things look thing else Dont get wrong see talk family members dont see dont ime go park fun enjoy nature like looked I dont think get rede computers spend least tine know I know people going upset waht I say society addicted computer Every look theres computer I going leave one would pick computers life",
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"content": "An unordinary photo captured on Mars had everyone in much shock an excitement. Laying on the red shaded sand, a figure shaped similar to a face brought to haunted grocery stores, Hollywood movies, novels,magazines, and radio talk shows. Although this image has brought good business to people, I'm here to explain to you that the image is false.\n\nWhen this land form was first viewed by the Viking 1 spacecraft, the viewers back at the staion explained that the object was a huge rock formarion, and the shadows around it made an illusion of an eyes, nose, and mouth. This means that no one would know if it really had human facial parts unless you were actually on Mars. Although there was research being done to the photo, many authors explained that the \"face\" would be an easy way to engage attention to the planet Mars, therefore using this discovery for their own personal use. Authors plans definetly worked too; it explains their business with the movies, magazines, novels, etc.\n\nAnother explanation on why I believe this head shaped object was just a landform is because every time they took a new photo of the same object, it changed. What I mean by this is, in 1976 the object had human face-like characteristics. Then, in 1998 and 2001, a photos taken both these years, the land form didn't seem to look like a face anymore. It appeared to have lines that looked like cracks, similar to ones on the street. This could lead to the conclusion of the object just being shadows that attracted the Vikind 1 and 2 spacecrafts.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that the \"face\" on Mars is just a land form. People used it for their own ammusement and business, and the object lost its human characterists after the first photo that was taken in 1976.",
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"content": "In the article when they had first said that they invented a machine that hepls read people's and pieces of arts emotions I\n\nwas kind of confused. Not becayse I didn't understand what they were saying but because i'm not really understanding why they would need too?\n\nThe way we feel should be kept to oursleves , our emotions should be kept to ourselves , if were mad or sad that should again be kept to ourselves. They say that they would use it to read students emotions during school. I feel that it wouldn't give you a proper reading. Only because that student would have been sitting in the classroom all day and most likely not feeling like he/she would out of school\n\ndoing something they like to do.\n\nI'm not saying I am against it but like I said I don't feel like it should be used on students at school. Also then again i'm not going all for it, like I feel a lot of people are. It would be nice eevry once in a while when say your friends are down and you know for a fact they are but they juts won't admit it that's one of the few times I would use the device.",
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"content": "I believe that the Face was a natural landform. Now in this esaay im going to state 2 reasons why I believe that it's a natural landform.\n\nThe first reason I believe this is because in papragraph 7 it says\" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waitin when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing....a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This part of the prompt tells that alot of people wanted to know what the faces were and they found out that the faces were natural landforms. This sentence also shows that they went out and found that it was a natural landform. That is just one of the reasons why i believe that the faces are natural landforms.\n\nThe last reason I believe that they are natural landforms is in the 11th paragraph it says\" As a rule of thumb, you can discern thigs in a digital image 3 times bigger tht the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they are!\" This paragraph tells how there was no way that with that camera they couldn't miss the fact that it was a natural landform. So, if there were alien prints they could see them with that camera though the lences.\n\nThose are just some of the reasons why o believe that the faces are natural landforms.",
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"content": "The mood memoir Narciso appreciates parents done So better life also appereciates turned simple house home thinks wat courageous Marciso thanks parents For Sacrifice life Cuba To make life better",
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"content": "The driverless cars could still be dangerous. Maybe it stops working, or maybe something goes wrong. You can never trust a car because eventually everything stops working at some point in time. But how you know if this car is stable and good for you to drive. I guess we will find out.\n\nYes, it tells you have you make it and that they will test drive it for you but how exactly do you know that its safe to driver. A car driving all by itself coud go wrong i mean you still have to help stere it when there's like construction or a car accident up ahead. But if the car is sepposed to drive by itself if should be able to do that to because the car drives by itself. Driverless cars are scary if you think about it because something could go wrong when you're driving it. It could stop stereing by itsef and what are you going to do nothing because you can't if a car stops it's stereing. What would you do if the wheels stops sensoring the brakes and you need to stop everything could go out and you would be able to fix it. If you stay with the cars we have now you could take it into the shop have them look at it and tell what's wrong with it, and they can help you fix it. We have enough laws as it is, added more for a car that needs a law for liability in an accident just for the car, no thank you. If you get in an accident is it your fault or the manufacturer? The manufacturer because why is it your fault when the car can stere itself answer that one for me.\n\nSo why would you want a car that is not for you? You dont. Do you want to get in to an accident and them ask you if it's the cars fault or yours, cleary its the cars, because \" it can driver by itself.\"If the car can drive by itself then why do you need to take control for construct or a accident up ahead we shouldn't have to do that, that should already be programed into the car. So i will gladly not take one in 2020.",
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"content": "People have different views about the attitude towards robots. While some people argue that robots are detrimental to human’s society, I believe that human’s development can benefit from the proper use of robots.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I can understand the view taken by many people that robots may be harmful for human. Firstly, job opportunities, particularly in manufacturing, may be occupied by robots, and this is likely to result in a higher level of unemployment.For example, robots can be seen as a perfect replacement for workers in the assembly line because of their high efficiency and low cost of maintenance.Secondly, an increasing number of road accidents caused by robots or artificial intelligence have been witnessed in recent years, and the safety of the widely use of robots is still under debate. Finally, criminals or terrorists may operate terror attack remotely using robots with bombs inside, which is a serious threat to humans’ safety.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I would argue that robots will be vital for our future if we use them under proper guidance. They can also play an important role in doing dangerous jobs for human, including searching people in a collapsed building after an earthquake, and opponents of robots will feel differently if a member of their families is saved in this kind of circumstances by them.Another key consideration when judging the effects of robots have on society would be its widely use in space project. For instance, robots allow scientists to collect rock species and operate scientific analysis on Mars, which is important for our understanding in terms of space. Furthermore, governments should introduce laws to regulate the proper use of robots for both corporations and individuals, and any kinds of illegal use will be strictly punished.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that under proper regulations, the benefit of robot far outweigh its drawbacks and it is crucial for the future development of mankind.",
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"content": "Knoleg one greatest quests mankind always trying figure things happen natural ciricusity made amazing leaps Technology years ago seemed imposible possible And one many thought impossible find anything want matter seconds I think computers great benafate society becaus learn things around world blink eye allow talk people around world give better hand eye cordenation The first reson I think computers great modern society learn instantly foren countrys years ago way could learn places far away read newspaper many nt tell faraway lands Now internet learn around world happening ware want know CAPS modern techolagy people informed rest world ever befor stated expert university CAPS computers ability colect information quily compared years ago computers would nt known anything recent earth quake computers talk istantly people internet A century ago talking people instantly seemed impossible But technology thing avarage part lives many advancements dicisions made talk online even worlds gratests leaders make hard decisions becaus advansments stated reporter new times CAPS technology many decisions made would nt made many solders would died result final reson I support decision help teach hand eye coordination One ways computers teach hand eye coordination throug video games simulations In video games people make react movements notes order compleat objective In computer simulations teach soldiers react many different situations Through situations many sledres learn servive combat save many fellow comredes The simulations invested improved combat effectevness stated general CAPS theise simulations many american lives weold ben lost recent wars heard resons I support computers I hope much informed topic computers would nt able learn foren lands talk people instantly good hand eye cooordination I hope everyone else see resons supporting computers",
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"content": "Not only is this new technolgy for reading facial expressions wierd but it also a waste of money. We do not need this in our classrooms you can easily tell when a kid is mad,happy bored or sad. Everyone already knows how to tell how someone feels, it is something we lean from our parents. No classroom needs this teacher can or at least should know how to tell how a kid is feeling and doesnt need a computer to tell them this infromation.\n\nWe have become to relient of computers and electronics. This would make things worse. People today already are addictid and rely on electornics for everyday things. Having this in a classroom will only make this or future genorations lazier than they already are.\n\nAlthough this could be useful it most likely will not be useful instead the oppsite. Classrooms should be electronics and technolgy free so students can learn. Teachers should teach not give websites or say\"google it\" so putting facial reading computers in classrooms are a terrible idea.",
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"content": "In nonfiction memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates curious warm mood talking origin talking upbringing talking memories First author talks Cuban family raised Newark He tells reader lived twofamily home Cuban immigrants The author s origin makes reader curious want know author Also author talks life immigrant community exposed Cuban music foods culture parents The author s upbringing makes reader curious warm want know learning cultures celebrations gives reader warm feeling Last least author talks loving parents Cuban feasts The author s memories make reader feel warm love heartwarming As see author creates curious warm mood",
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"content": "In many countries, there is an ongoing debate about whether the government should allocate more resources to improve education for adults who struggle with reading and writing. However, learning is crucial for both young and old generations. This article will delve into my ideology before making a conclusive stance.\n\nTo begin with, teaching kids is imperative to build a strong base for their future. In other words, youngsters are great at learning, and they pick up lots of useful things that stay with them for a long time. A good education for children and teenagers makes them smarter, helps them make friends, and boosts their creativity. For instance, a well-renowned school DPS in India is famous for its top-notch learning. They have spent a lot on teaching little kids, and that has made a big difference in how well they do in school and how healthy they are. Thus, it is a good idea to focus on teaching the young ones.\n\nNevertheless, one compelling reason to invest in adult education is the significant impact it has on a country's economic growth. When the elderly learn to read and write, they are better equipped to participate in the workforce. This, in turn, leads to an increase in their income-earning potential and, consequently, contributes to the overall economic development of the nation. For example, in India, the government has launched the 'Saakshar Bharat' campaign to address adult illiteracy. As a result, millions of adults, particularly women in rural areas, have gained the ability to read and write. Hence, financial support for educating elders is beneficial in the development of a nation.\n\nTo conclude, having discussed the topic in detail, I agree that literacy for young people is undeniably important; nonetheless, the regime must acknowledge the significance of investing in adult study. Therefore, it is crucial for governments to educate both generations ensuring that no one is left behind in the journey towards progress and development.",
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"content": "Dear people world use coumputers know computers used like surching internet games work school Some people think computers good use help teach hand eye coordination learn places world talk people online I grade mystic middle school I think computers good people think Have ever heard computer camps This kids go addicted computer At camp kids pulled away computer pritty much forced join gropes activitys like fishing working together solve mystery This camp pritty much known reliable kids addicted computer Another reason computers bad internet The internet dangerous Place chat people dont even know You never know people could messed head And try find like come always carful talk wise could get Nothing eve really goes right computers alway getting slower slower every time use About every two years kid parent could go throw computer Also computer nt right could get vins cost person hundred dollars get fixed Any thing could happen time computer could die work data gone forever Now I explaines part computers people think different Would want end like one people camp computer much Or never know could forever never found I alread know much coomputers get fixed might find hard way That I think computers cause truble peolple",
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"content": "Just I finished eating hamburger I noticed old crude excuse bus parked outside restaurant window CAPSs I asked sgueky sevenyearold voice My responded That bus takes people palace across street playing CAPSt cool go I questioned I saw mom whisper something brother It told going show Excitedly I climbed back seat car drove across street palace It huge All I wanted enter marvelous building kept telling wait About fifteen minutes later two pepsis I drinken earlier made system CAPS I go bathroom I said Finally took front doors The inside building even fabulous outside However rail red rope blocked way CAPS son use bathrooms asked lady sat behind front desk She gave cold ro forced return back car Another fifteen minutes passed The concert would start soon returned building This time red rope gone replaced line nearly fifty people waiting get metal detector It took almost minutes made front line passed metal detector took seats That true test patience worth I finally allowed use bathroom",
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"content": "After reading the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" I had someone come up to me and say, \" Sir I believe that it was aliens who put the face there\". After that comment this person had me thinking, I didn't believe what he said was true. After I considered it I had a long talk with this young man, here were my arguments. If there were aliens and they put the face there, dont you think they would've came to earth already, Mars atmosphere is too strong for an so called alien or human to be on there, and also the face just could be a natural landform made from weather changes. In the next few paragraphs I will explain my points.\n\nFirst, why would there be aliens and why would they pick mars, just to make a face. If there were aliens don't you think they would've came to earth already where every resource is. See the rumor of aliens has been spreading like wildfire for years, because of so called UFO sightings; and no evidence has been found so why would a lie like aliens come to a planet to make just a face. People make up stupid reasons for non reasonable things such as aliens. The definition of alien means a person coming from another country, when did it start to become a ugly looking creature coming from a different galaxy to invade and plant faces on planets.\n\nSecond, Mars atmosphere is too strong for any living thing to be on it, not just that, space period! The air in Mars has to many chemicals and gases for anything to dwell there, also the atmosphere can crush you. How would you have enough time to do anything there, in that enviroment. They should just call Mars the Death Planet.\n\nLast but not least, The face could just be a natural landform from the planet's extreme weather. Mars has very extreme weather, it has volcanoes everywhere, tornados almost everyday, and earthquakes. All three of those things could result in the face. You cant always expect it's aliens or something fictional.\n\nIn conclusion everybody has their opinions about everything. I got the guy to eventually change his mind. Don't always think the impossible things, think facts. These creatures could be real they could not have been real, the world will never know. Thank you.",
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"content": "In middle school dirty muddy science classroom boy named another named cleaning mess made earlier mudball fight For years trying patient twins trying patient twins trying figure could calm DO though Often wondered went though minds got angry When teaching science never understood When wrong things nt know wrong progressed class understanding little But principal said CAPS patient learn eventually months passed believed husband By patient getting angry something wrong grades started picking soon end year plus students passed class On last day school went husbands office She advice worked great principal All replied",
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"content": "Driveless cars would be above one of the nations craziest inventions ever made. They have been working on this for many of years but just havent made it final yet. My postion on driveless cars is that i think it would be good for handicap people but thats it. The author made a huge point stating that \"in the case of a accident whose fault will it be, the drivers or the manufactuer.\"\n\nI respect that they have done lots of data throughout the years and they come to find out that more and more people have lost their lives because of bad driving or failure of being sober. They have tried to put more police on the road and made alot of new laws but its just hard task to complete with trying to get drunk drivers off the road. They have made soberiaty checkpoints and stuff like that but there still seems to be, that people are driving under the influence. If thats the case then i dont think there is any point in making driverless cars because no matter what someone is always driving bad on the streets.\n\nThe feeling of not having to drive your car and being able to sit back and relax in your car is nice but, I dont see how that could possibly work because if you were to get into a accident then whats coming back on you, what are you first to do? Sue the manufactuer or is it in your fault since you own the car. The last thing , If driverless cars were to be on the streets you would think everybody would have one? I would think the pricing would be a ridiclous amount of money because of how much time they invested in making driverless cars succsessfull.\n\nDriverless cars was defeintly a brillant idea but at this point in time i dont think they have a strong enough impact for it to workout. Transportation has become a huge impact upon the nation today because without it people would have to walk everywhere and that would be time consuming. I think this essay has a great arguement wheather or not that this is a good idea but in my postion i think the best way to go is just to try and be as safe as possible on the roads and pay attention at all times on the road.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast certain obstacles foundation support nature safety challenged building docking station dirigibles The first problem architects faced docked dirigibles placing much stress building To combat problem drastic changes building would made The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation CAPS This change stated cost sixty thousand dollars Another obstacle builders faced upon constructing mooring mast nature At height wind currents violent unpredictable Despite tethered building dirigibles would spin twist around mass unsecure dangerous aspect Lastly except claims greatest reason successful safety violations mast great Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident would densely populated area downtown New York CAPS The moor provided severe risk safety people New York This problem served serious problem thus serving obstacle builders mooring mass The building s foundations nature safety violations served problems builders creating mooring mass",
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"content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nI believe that we should keep the Electoral college for our compromise between the election of the president. I argue this because with the Electoral College we get to vote for who we believe is gonna help us out during thier years as President not the choice of the president who we might not believe or trust in anymore to vote for us or the other side. So I argue to keep the Electoral College to select our presidemt for the U.S.\n\nThe Ellectoral College lets us People who are able to vote vote for who we want. In \"Does the Electoral College Work\" Source 1: What is The Ellectoral College? written by the office of the federal register states that\"by a popular vote of qualified citizens\". This displays that we the peoplewho are suppose to be here in The U.S qualified and a citizen are allowed to vote four our people because those are our rights. So Mr. Senator please keep the ellectoral College by helping to keep it for the people of the U.S just like me.\n\nIf we are voting for president the majority of thr votes goes to the president who earn it which says that these people of the U.S need the president they voted for which is the president who won. In \"source 3: In defense of the electoral college:five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" it shows in2. Everyones President that\" The ellectoral college requirs a presidental candidate to have trans-regional appeal\". So it not possible for a president to cheat its what the people choose for them to help them so the president they choose does what the people wanted or needed. Si I argue for you to do mea fovor and vote for the ellectoral College to stay as is.\n\nIn \"source 2: The indefensible Electoral College: why even the best laid defenses of the sysem are wrong\" they tell us wee voting for someone we dont want. But that is why you learn about your electors and who they want so you choose the one whon is going for you which is your president. Its as easy as doing a little research to find out who your really electing for as president of the U.S.\n\nI believe that Us americans should keep the Electoral College so we can keep our rights as our nation for the people. That is what we fought for for our freedeom and our rights. So I argue Mr. Senator to favor in keeping the Electoral Collegeso we can get our electedpresidents for majority of people in the U.S. SO lets stay away from the presidents choice because that is not our rights we are the people for the people to vote for who we want as qualified citizens.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. If a student becomes confused in class, the software can recognize that modify the lesson in order to better help the student understand. This can greatly improve a school place enviroment. While if a student is bored the software could also recognize that and change up the lesson plan in order to get the student more focused.\n\nThe computer software constructs a 3-D model of the face with all 44 major muscles in the human face. It then compares the face of a person to a neutral face in order to calculate the emotions. With that it then gives a percentage of what emotions the person is feeling. This is useful because the muscles to faking a smile and a real smile are different. Meaning that that tecnology can be used to detect if a student is pretending to understand the cirriculam or not.\n\nWhile the tecnology is still in the works, the software can already detect happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and if someone is faking those emotions as well. While that may seem like a drop in the broad spectrum of emotions this is still a giant leap for this kind of tecnology. This tecnology can not only detect and help students in need, it can also be a better lie detector. The possibilties this kind of software brings is vast and can better the life of students with it.",
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"content": "The offensive things found library In many libraries days kinds vilent bad books talking vilenst Should libraries take books movies music shelfes find The library take tipes things library If bad related books make different section library For rated movies library You years age For music sticker rent If parents dont like dont get They make different sections library offensive books Kids surtain age allowed read books If still want book get parents permissition rent Rated movies allowed library You go area adult If want rent movie need parents permissition You also watch movie adult Music sticker rent You still rent parents say ok They make behind counter So little kids see front cases If parents dont like libraries rules dont rent anything library So dont take offensive books movie If head library would Take offensive things put different sections",
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"content": "The setting effected cyclist bumpy lot hills means work harder Also heat getting dehydrated story cyclist Been rideing long time says I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state kurmaskie The cyclist little water long trip",
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"content": "Dear world nobody handeye coordination try cath ball slips away There friendships communication countries Is really want Computers positive effects people For example help handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people Computers positive effect people society First hand eyecoordination something people However make better using computers fact Computers said computer help handeye coordination For example mom used horrible handeye coordination uses computer much better Oprah said I young I couldnt catch ball Im older using computers Im best people agree computer help handeye coordination Next computers help people learn faraway places For example didnt computers people wouldnt travel agree would never travel werent computers fact people use internet learn countries educational purposes Wwwexploretheworldorg wrote people use website students Computers help people learn far away places Finally computers allow people talk online people facebook least one friend live country It fact countries better allies people get alongWwwinternationalfriendshipscom wrote users talk people countries example friends mother born talks online many friends Dr said CAPS friendships best kind learn cultures Computers wonderful way talk people Now world every country got along online friendships Where adults could play game baseball got hand eyecoordination back Where students could learn distant places didnt know existed Doest sound great Computers teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway people places allow people talk online So computers benefit society",
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"content": "I am against this claim because that means someone could potentally be looking at you through a computer monitor. In paragraph 1 it states how the \"computer\" can calculate what your emotions are in almost exact percentages. Also in paragraph 6 it says how the computer can adjust what ads to put on the side of your computer just by you smiling at the webcam or being able to tell your chiild's emotions and knowing if they are bored or even confused they can change what they see on the screen to try an change their mood and make them less bored. Some subjects may be made fun but it should not happen through a computer screen. Emotions happen on a daily basis but it should not change the way you live your work life of home life and it definatly should not change the way children learn. Emotions are real life problems that everybody deals with so why change the internet because of it.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez internationally recognized clothing designer offers following definition family In memoir mood set Narciso Rodriguez gratefull person rich culinary skills love cooking still today He also grateful parent love sacrafice nt love sacafrice come would days That s grateful person",
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"content": "Nowadays some nation peoples are more curious to search the previous story of their living place. I think they do research for many purposes, perhaps, out of interest or find a connection. For finding the answers they should turn to the seniors in their neighborhood and can also use the internet.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, in the current world people are more curious to know about their history related things because of that many individuals search stories that is related to their home. For example, if someone’s current home was a place for any popular celebrity, and then they love to know about this house. If they sell this house in future they will definitely get a much higher value. Secondly, some are interested to find some relatable connection their ancestors, for instance, individuals love to find stories that is related to their grandparents and great grand-parents. Moreover, they also find how they lived in this house or how they survived there in their crucial time.\r\n\r\nThe best way to explore history about home to ask the aged people who live in neighborhood and have a lot of knowledge about the story related to society. For example, when a man’s age is 85 or 90 then he must know enormous things about his living place and houses and by asking them it is possible to know a detailed history of living place. Furthermore, it is also a great way to find information about houses on the internet as it has a large source of data then it is much easy to explore history.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, people are curious to know history as well as they loves to find connection that relates them. Consequently, possible way to do that is to get knowledge from seniors in society and search things on the internet.",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I agree experts say people spending much time computers The reason one people nt get enough exercise Two new websites made people want see works Three teenage kids new technology Their time nt realize spending time family Now know lets move first reason First people spending lot time computer nt time go outside exercise More people probably figure nt need go outside Really important get body moving blood flowing body Another thing nt always need get answers computer east find friend play game Find something play games computer Now know let s move second reason Second computer network came new ideas computer They facebook More people use facebook This right shows us wo nt get play also means kids wo nt homework Another thing either parents set time computer take way Their much amount time computer get bored Now know lets move last reason Third I would like say people spending time computer family The reason I say important spend much time family friends instead computer We need know also s going daily life Another thing family way better game computer go outside family play game wiffle ball Now know lets moves conclusion In conclusion You read essay talking people spend time computer rather go outside exersice new website keep longer spending enough time family friends important time limite computer get moving Do nt lazy couch potato sit computer day get spend time family friends I hope agree",
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"content": "There has been controversary on whether the development of cars should or should not happen . The development of cars shouldnt happen . This will cause drivers to relie on the cars system , forget how much problems they could put theirselves and forget about safety.\n\nDrivers will start reling on the car system to do everything for them but in reality the cars can not posibly to that . Research shows that technologist still havent found a way that cars can work with out a human \" Their cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash , but so far, Google cars arent truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out drive ways or dealing with complicated traffic issues , such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\"(2) Driver would still have to be able to take control at anytime , so you would not be able to just think that your car will be able to just take care of everything . Therefore cars should not be upgraded because drivers will relie on the car but what happens if your doing something eles while the car need you to take over and your not prepared ?\n\nDrivers will have problems if technologist upgrade cars to driveless . People could possibly get theirselves in to tricky contracts such as you signing a contract that says that your fully respondsible for and injurys or accidents but the accident would not be your fault because the car was in control the whole time . That would be a messy problem that you wouldnt know how to get your self out of because you wanted a car to drive its self . You should not delvelop cars to put your self in sticky situations .\n\nThe development of cars would make people froget about safety .The main reason for laws is safety of the people \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers ,passagers , and pedestrians safe, and law makers know that safety is best achieved with alerted drivers .\"(9) How would we be able to enforce laws if people are not even driving anymore ?\n\nSafety will slowly be forgotten you may be able to program safety in a car but every once in a while technoglogy has errors . Cars will not always be able you to alert you in time. It is better to have a person behind the wheel with alerts for safety than a machine behine the wheel that alert a human in help of need.\n\nThe development of cars should not happen because this will cause humans to relie on car systems ,forget on what problems it might bring and also forget about safety . Such things could be really dangerous .\n\nIt should not happen because if anything it would be a major set back it would not\n\n\"fundamentally change the world \".(1)",
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"content": "I believe that use of the Facial Action Coding System could make immediate impacts in a classroom setting. The idea of being able to see someone's inner emotions could show lots of value for teachers in the class. This machine, after being tested in the classroom, could be used to make even more accurate and in-depth machines that could go even deeper. All it takes is it starting off.\n\nThere are many benefits to having a machine that is able to accurately find someone's emotions. The applications in the classroom would help make the day for a teacher run smoothly if there was trouble with a student, or if there was something upsetting a student you could use this device. The value of knowing what your students feel could help mold a curriculum that would be the most effective for their learning. Paragraph 6 mentions that classes could have computers that could detect these emotions, and change the way the lesson is and mold it to work for that specific student.\n\nThere is no reason that the FACS shouldn't be implemented into classes. The FACS is just a more accurate way of processing and recognizing someone's emotions and feelings. We, as humans, are always performing this calculation every day, as listed in paragraph 5. We cannot tell every emotion in someone's face, as they could be hiding their emotions behind a fake smile, or hiding sorrow or sadness behind a snarl. With the FACS knowing the emotions of a student in class who is struggling could maybe help the student and teacher find a way to stop the struggle. There is nothing wrong with knowing a student's emotions so a teacher can assist them if they are struggling.\n\nThis understanding of emotions and the creation of lessons that could help with those emotions could help graduation rates for schools go up, and help the GPA or work ethic of a student to increase. These benefits all could come from knowing students' emotions as long as the FACS is put into a school's classrooms.\n\nSome may be worried that the FACS could be unaccurate and tell wrong emotions, but claims in paragragh 3 state that muscles in your face also dictate what emotion your feeling. These muscles can also indicate whether your smile is real and you are really happy, or if your smile is fake and that your feeling something different. Trained psychologists and others in their respected fields have contributed to the FACS to try and help create accurate assumptions based on the muscle usage in a person's face.\n\nThe evolution and effectiveness of the FACS could increase with the help of its use in the classroom, and the readings could become more accurate and more beneficial to the teacher and the student. The FACS could be used in almost anywhere, but I believe that it would have the biggest impact in the classroom. The effect it could have enourmous, and all it would take is one computer software.\n\nThe FACS should be put in classroom, not only to further the research needed to help develop the software more, but to help students who may struggle with lessons in class. The FACS's ability to read emotion will benefit student and teacher when the time comes, all it needs is to find its place in the classroom.",
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"content": "I don't think it would be worth the money to put in technology in a classroom to see what a student is feeling, because not everyone wants everyone knowing what they are feeling. What if that student just wants to be left alone? When I'm mad I don't want everyone knowing what's going on, I'd rather not talk to anyone unless I ask them for help about the situation. If they did put the technology in a classroom to tell what every child is feeling everyone would know each others business.\n\nIn the article it stated that it could help teachers know if the child is bored or confused, but does that child want the student to call him or her out on it? Probably not because if that student is struggling in class they don't want everyone knowing, if that student is struggling or confused then they need to ask the teacher at a seperate time if they don't want everyone to know how they struggle academically.\n\nNot everyone is a emotional person they don't know how to share their feelings but they probably don't want some machine telling them how they feel and how they are feeling by how they look. Because anyone can fake a smile or a happy moment, but if that student doesn't know how to express themselves without a machine telling them, then they most likley don't want everyone else knowing what they're going through.\n\nTechnology has advanced majorly in just the past few years, but we are humans and we need to be able to show our emotions without a computer telling us how were feeling by how we look on that day. We all have bad days and we all have good days but on the bad day if that computer tells me I'm depressed then I could believe that and my mental state not be stable anymore because that computer told me I was depressed based on how I looked and felt one day.\n\nWe as humans need to learn how to express ourselves without using an emoji on our keyboards. Technology has made our lifes easier but again has changed too many things in todays world.",
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"content": "I think Luke Bomberger's point of view covincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because to help the people from the other countries and states to get food,aniamals,homes, and a place to have a good life so Luke and his friend Don Reist join the program to help and to have fun there like have a tour at the Castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal.\n\nIf I was alive then I would join to help the countries to get their food becuase their children and familys.If nobodys joins this program the kids will be starving and be thirsty and maybe get sick and got nothing to help them so they can die. Even if he do he will need to try to hurry and get done before the times run out. Maybe when Luke was on the ship and the chrildren already sick could just die already and just vanish.\n\nThats why we need help for these countries if we dont they wont have their kind and live in it anymore. Then the others countrys like China may take the space and you will be alone with none of your kind will be there to cheer you up so the China's people have to but maybe that will get worst.",
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"content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is important in many ways. The author does it by stating why it's important, stating facts, and comparing it to other planets. The author also states highs and lows of studying venus.\n\nIn the text it states \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\". \" This explains that the author is trying to make people think that venus is just like Earth. He wants to make people think that Venus is just like Earth because he knows if people like Earth they will like Venus as well.\n\nThe author explains studying Venus is a worth pursuit in paragraph 7 by saying \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" This proves that the author wants us to study Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author has supported thye article with many details regarding how impotant studying Venus is.",
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"content": "I think that new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions, would be valuable for students in a classroom.\n\nAs a student I am aware of all the times in a classroom when learning or reading something becomes very boring and hard to focus on and actually read. Lots of students have long days and nights and don't get much sleep, so when it's time to read things that aren't of interest your body cannot really focus and it's very frustrating. I think that if our school computers were actually able to tell when we were engaged or bored or happy or interested it would be much easier to learn the material. The article also states how if the computer recognizes that you're confused or bored it can modify the lesson to help the student be able to learn it better.\n\nWhich I think would be very valuable to help students actually focus and stay on task and learn. It would probably even make school more fun. I know things are a lot easier to learn when you're engaged. Even though these computers would probably be more on the expensive side I think that in the long run they would be worth it.\n\nIn conclusion I think that the new Facial Action Coding Systems would be very valuable to students in a classrom that way they can stay enganged and focus thorughout the day.",
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"content": "I patient I went hunting dad I blind long time waiting deer come He said come night towards late afternoon We waited forever finally came get one Some guys shot one run way We waited maybe ten minutes went I patient whole time",
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"content": "With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers can know the exact emotion each student in their class is feeling. By using the FACS, a teacher's understanding of the class can be significantly better. No student will be able to hide misunderstanding of any content being produced. It will also be harder for them to hide any trouble they may be thinking of starting. The Facial Action Encoding System would be a valuable asset to teachers in the classroom to help them teach better, help students with personal issues, and make students happier.\n\nIf a teacher is able to know when a student is having trouble with a lesson, that teacher can tend to that individual student's need. In paragraph 6 of the article, Prof. Thomas Huang states “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.” This makes teaching more effective because it ensures that a student learns everything and does not skip anything important because of being too afraid to ask. This makes students learning experiences more individually tailored. Success rates in schools will go up because each student will have a better understanding of each subject.\n\nGiving teachers use of the FACS can also help studenets with personal issues. If a teacher notices a change in the emotions of a particular student, they might find out they are having issues at home. in paragraph 7 it says \"It’s all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" A teacher might not notice anything is wrong with someone if they are hiding their emotions, but one with the FACS can tell if there is something wrong. They can get that student help and because of that the student can learn better.\n\nHaving the FACS in the classroom may also indirectly cause the students to be overall more happy. In paragraph 7 of the article, it says \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" If students know that the teacher is always reading their emotions, they will frequently try to show a face that is genuinely happy. This in turn will cause them to be more happy because that is what they are trying to project. Being happy will make the students more cooperative and effective in the classroom.\n\nHaving the FACS in the classroom would make students better learners because teachers would teach better, teachers would help students with personal issues, and the students would be more happy. Performance rates at school would be at an all time high with access to the FACS. Students would pay attention more and be on their best behavior. Knowing emotions in the classroom would ensure optimal effort being is being put forth. Would'nt you want to graduate knowing that you did the best you could do?",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers its present because its 97 persent of cardon dioxide blanks. The temperature of Venus is even worst them Earth. Why would a scientist need people to Venus to make us die from the air and the clouds. Being at Venus won't do anyting better for living there. Some reasons why people shouldn't stay in Venus is the air, the clouds, and planet's surface.\n\nThe reasons why Venus is so dangers is because of the air. the clouds, and the planet's surface. Venis thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket. The clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The plant's surface temperature is average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Our sister plane is so inhospitable. I don't know why scientist are talking about further visites to the surface. They think that long away that Venus had everything like Earth but it might not true. Why is NASA going to send people to Venus to study it? It's a bad idea to do it because all they going to do it die.\n\nIs Venus really a twin to Earth no its not. This is why Venus has so much danger because of the air, the clouds, and the planet's surface. NASA should just send robots to Venus instead of people. Making a person to go to risk their life is not fair. Robots are the better answer.",
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"content": "The idea of driverless cars is extraordinary and could be a great plan and a great source of entertainment. Who would not want a car that drives by itself? The idea is great but it could potentially bring a lot of bad baggage along with it. The world does not need driverless cars because it is unsafe, defeats the purpose of driving, and is a waste of money.\n\nDriverless cars are very unsafe. In the article it talks about all the things they can do, for example, it can steer, accelerate, and brake all by itself! Somehow, someway this is possible, but is it consistent is the question? Throughout the article they talked about tests they did and the results that came with the tests. While describing them the author used phrases like, \"It worked well.\" Only one paragraph in the article they were 'for sure' that it worked. For someone to drive such a car they should have specific clarification that they would be safe while inside this vehicle, and they can trust that they have no worries and that this car will do 80% of the work for them. Also, if the car does most of the work for you, then what is the point of having a car?\n\nDriverless cars defeat the purpose of even having a car. All of the processes you go through as a teenager with getting your permit or license is diminished, and in a sense you did all that work for nothing. The point of driving is having a quicker way of getting to the places you need to be instead of walking, biking, etc. In paragraph 10 it says that an automaking company named 'Tesla' is making a car that can be on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Ask youself, why would you waste your time on getting a car like that when you can ride the bus, train, limo, or taxi that would do 100 percent of the driving for you? That would just make me feel like I'm wasting my money on senseless things.\n\nDriverless cars are also a waste of money. Automakers spend millions, maybe even billions of dollars making prototypes of these cars and testing them. Every time one of the test cars do not work they have to go and make a new one which is money that could be used for something a lot more efficient. The automakers to this day are still doing this, which is throwing money out the window. But not just the automakers are wasting their time and money, if people were to get this car they would be wasting their time and money also. People would waste thousands of dollar on one car that is pointless. Rich or poor this would be a senseless investment, because there are cheaper ways to get where you need to go. Taxi's, limos, buses, and trains are all great affordable ways of transportation. The automakers could find something that is a lot better and cheaper that could change the world.\n\nDriverless cars is again a wonderful, awesome idea. It would definetly have a lot of popularity and publicity but is it really worth it in the long run? The automakers can find a lot of things that could change the world, and this is something the world does not need. The world should not have driverless cars because it is unsafe, defeats the purpose of driving, and is a waste of money.",
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"content": "In recent decades, females have taken duties which have been traditionally done by males in many places. I agree that social opportunities should be given equally regardless of gender because the world has changed. This essay will discuss this issue by using examples to support ideas and demonstrate points.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, nowadays, a social stereotype that women ought to be encouraged to do domestic tasks has been significantly shifted by allowing them to choose professions freely. In addition, females can easily participate in occupations which require a physical workforce, compared to the past when they could not actively take part . For example, these days, we can easily find that women engage in outdoor working activities such as carpenters or construction site workers which used to be processed by males. Thus, followed by the world's changes, social prejudice against women also is being transformed.\r\n\r\nSecondly, by admitting females' advantages such as sensitivity and detailing of work duties, wider opportunities to work in various occupations are allocated to women. Furthermore, different working styles and needs between genders enable them to support each other and have a variety of visions to advance a company. For instance, an experiment proves that a combination of two different genders is easy to draw out approval when companies make a contract by providing assistance rather than a solemn gender. Therefore, as people realise each gender's role in society, a transition of traditional duties has been applied, depending on situation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as the world is changing, prejudice against women also is transformed, as time goes by. Even though men have traditionally done specific tasks so far, their duties should be determined, depending on situations or gender's strong points.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a thing of the future.\n\nThey are said to hanndle conditions under a twenty five mile per hour speed.\n\nAlso they give the wheel to the driver to make sure that the driver can be in complete control over the situation.\n\nShould driverless cars enter the development stage?\n\nDriverless cars should not be in development for the follow reasons: malifunction error of the system or programming and not enough regulations for driverless cars.\n\nAutomakers have been battling with the lack of regulations for a long time.\n\nMost automobile laws are focussed on keeping the passangers and others safe from harm.\n\nBut what laws are inforcing driverless cars?\n\nToday, laws are in place under the assumption that there is a human driver always behind the wheel.\n\nIn fact, it has become illegal to test the driverless cars in California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia.\n\nThe lawmakers would have to put new laws regulating driverless cars in case of an accident.\n\nAutomakers are still working on the self-driving car thinking that the problems will be solved ahead.\n\nWill the government actually buy into the idea?\n\nDriverless cars rely heavily on the technology built within them.\n\nWhat if that was a problem? What if the technology within the car was to mallifunction?\n\nAutomakers rely heavily on the sensors arround the car.\n\nThe sensors arround the car are there to insure the safety of the passangers and others arround the car.\n\nIn the article, it didn't hint to the performance of these cars in extreme wheather.\n\nIf the system were to mallifunction would it give the driver complete controll and shut down the systems, or would it lose control causing an accident?\n\nHumans have relied on technology for a long time, after a while the technology starts to decrease in performance.\n\nWhat would be the cost to replace parts of the system of driverless cars?\n\nThere is also the problem of convincing others to buy the car if it starts to sell.\n\nWould every American want to buy the car, or would they stick with driving the car themselve?\n\nHumans driving cars are not a thing of the future.\n\nIn fact, the very first car to sell always had someone driving the car.\n\nHuman drivin cars have been arround for a long time and the introduction of self driving cars have been arround for roughly fifteen years.\n\nDriveless cars should not start development for the following reasons: malifunction error of the system or programming and not enough regulations for driverless cars.\n\nUntil automakers insure one hundred percent liability, then develpoment of the cars will be taken into consideration.",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming!\n\nThink of all the movies you seen about cars driving by themselves, well they're becoming real. I actually like the fact they're making driverless cars, just like at the beginning of the article, imagine a new future full of technology. By 2030 they'd probably have robots cooking home meals, and tubes passing through out the sky and connected to other tubes for transportation. People wouldn't have to use so much money spending on gas trying to fill their cars up.\n\nToday's world we have better technology where these driverless cars are getting better. There are cars with the ability to start up without an key, just push a buttion. We have cars now that knows when a accident is about to occur, or when an padestrian is near. Imagine driving in your car, and you take your eyes off the road for just a second and a child is in the middle of the street. Driverless cars will break itself and prevent injury to you and the child. Even for emergency vehicles or construction work, it will alert you that it's near. Some cars have self parking, meaning you could get out your car and watch it park itself just by hitting a button. Without hitting other cars, reversing on it's on, and even controlling the headlights if it was to park into a place somewhere dark. It's amazing what our future is becoming!\n\nI believe they have a car that could drive itself. Say you're going on a roadtrip, and the vacation spot takes 24 hours to get there. Your car would drive to that destination while you rest. If your driverless car sees a human, animal, or object in front it will stop it self, there's sensors all over the car to detect that. Some driverless cars have cameras, you would be able to see your blindspot if you were driving. If you wanted to back up into a spot put couldn't see, they will turn on the camera video and you could watch how close you get to an object. These cars even make loud noises or make your seat vibrate to alert you of being to close. If you have a text or call come in, instead of taking your eyes off the road to reach for your phone, they have voice command where you can say \"answer imcoming call\" or many other things. There have been over a million car accidents caused by the drivers or even the car itself, but with the driverless car your safety is garenteed. The driverless cars are much safer for the driver, passengers, and even the outsiders. This is why I'm not against the development of these cars.",
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"content": "People are dealing with different views about economic development. While there is belief that it is the solely method to discontinue starvation and impoverishment, others claim that it does harm to the environment. Although it can be stated that the expansion of economy can help national governments eradicate some difficulties, I believe that its effects on the environment are completely unacceptable. \n\tTo begin with, the development of economics creates more job opportunities and increases the supply of goods. This would provide the inhabitants with plenty job vacancies, which may resolve the unemployment problems within a country. The unemployed would have better careers with higher income, and their salaries are capable of taking care of their family members. In addition, the vast extension in the quantities of products supply might reduce the price of most consumer products. Thus, the impoverished are affordable to purchase more products and their living standards significantly get better. \n\tHowever, the surrounding environment in recent years is becoming devastating due to some undesirable attempt to grow the economy, and it must be strictly prevented. For instance, an enormous amount of raw sewage and industrial waste has been discharged from myriad industrial factories, which may contaminates the sources of clean water and then possibly cause cancer to people nearby. Therefore, governments must enforce strict laws and policies to stop these activities.\n\tTo recapitulate, effectively may economic growth help better people’s life, I reckon that some destructive activities to the environment must be banned stringently.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph shown several reasons First author needs conclude story without leaving questions readers mind happens This achieved incorperating geese hibiscus drivers test last paragraph Next last paragraph adds theme perseverance story The main character driven take drivers test memories Vietnam lastly adds character saying take test shown realistic overconsistent These ways last paragraph enhances story",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered what is the closest planet to earth? Well if you did here is your answer! Now if you look up in the sky with a mircoscope at night you might see something very very bright. This bright thing that you see in the sky, sometimes you might wonder what it is. This bright thing is a whole other planet that is right next to the amazing earth. This planet is called \"Venus\". Now Venus might not be as known as Mars, Jupiter, extc... But if you don't really know Venus is the closest to Earth. In this article the author also talks about how important it is for us to study the importants of Venus and our near by planets. The author mostly talks about Venus in this article though. Although he only talks about Venus he has some very important stuff to say about it. In this article the author says a lot of important stuff that we can learn and he distruped to us correctly. One example of what the author said to make it important for us to learn about Venus is \"tempatures averge around 800 degress,Fahrenheit in Venus, that is 90 times more than what we have on earth'' (Challenge of Exploring Venus). I think this is an important quote because, since now we are getting more advanced in technollogy we are always traveling planets and seeing new things in inner Earth and out in the space. I think that this quote was important because he tells us to be ready for how hot it is down in Venus, than what we have here in dear Earth. Another example is \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most like planet to Earth\" (Challenge of Exploring Venus). I think this example is another quote because if we again are ever going to need to go to Venus we are educated about it. In this quote the article says that it is the most likeable to our earth. So it may have a lot of similar things that we do on earth. Like trees and other stuff that we might need on a day to day basis to survive. A final example of why we need to learn about Venus is \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by danger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (Challenge of Exploring Venus). This is another example of why we need to learn about other planets and Venus. This example shows us that wht if something happens to our Earth we know what to do. This is a good example because if something happens to earth, we can always have a backup plan. In conclusion I think that it is important to learn about other planets in the world. In this situation I think it is more important to learn about Venus. It is more important to learn about Venus because it is the most similar to earth and is the most easiest to learn. But I also think that it is important to learn about Venus because we shouldn't limit our selfs not to. It is very important to learn about the world and outer space.",
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"content": "You should really join the Seagoing Cowboys because they have lots of fun even though it might seem scary to be on a boat with horses then yes but it is actually pretty safe. Luke may have broke a few ribs and other stuff but he had fun and if you live on a farm then you would be good for it because you have to clean out stalls and feed them and put out bals of hay for them to munch on. You could be on the next boat to be a Seagoing Cowboy of Cowgirl. You may have to do night patroll but it don't matter as long as youhave fun. Maybe even bring a friend so you don't feel so lonely if you don't know anyone.\n\nIf you don't like boats then don't do it if you like boats and horses then your the one to apply and we will send you a ticket to get on the boat and be on your way. If you want to see the world or some parts of it then sign up and come join us because we go everywhere you can imagine like China, New Zealand, and Crete. These are just a few of the places that we go to so the horses can get where they need to be. We will go way across the world just to deliver horses.\n\nLuke had no friends when he came other than the friend that asked him to go with him to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Luke made many new friends on the boat. He made 9 (nine) trips all together from that whole career that he had with that job. He had fun and learned new things about boats and horses.\n\nHe thought it was going to be a chance of a life time but he changed his mind it being completely amazing better than what he thought it would be for someone like him. His journeys were amazing and he loved it and his family was very proud of him and his friend. He said he is grateful for the opportunity. He also said it made him more aware of people of other countries and there needs. The awareness stayed with him and it lead his family to host many of international students and exchange visiters and students for many years.\n\nThis is Lukes story and this is why you should join.",
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"content": "A school of thought has a perception that all the jobs will be done by robots in the future. In my opinion, however, the speculation is not completely true. Although the major laborious work shall be done by robots, the jobs where human intelligence and human skills are required can never be replaced by machines. This essay will discuss why not all jobs can be done with artificial intelligence.\nAlthough, many companies are going to make systems automated, and buying most efficient and smart machines to get the jobs done to eradicate human errors. In England, for example, almost all security guards have been replaced by hi-tech security systems. Moreover, almost in all over the world, conventional banking systems have been upgraded and ATMs have been installed for cash deposit and withdrawal, the major benefit of ATMs is that they serve their purpose twenty-four hours, seven days a week without breaks. Therefore, due to the clear advantages of artificial intelligence and foreseeable accuracy and efficiency, many jobs will be taken by machines from humans in the future. \nAs per my speculations, a variety of jobs will still be done by humans only, because it is impossible to completely vanish humans to develop the world. Jobs like teaching, research work, engineering, and architectural planning are just a few examples of jobs which cannot be performed by machines. For instance, the machines work on predefined algorithms installed in it, therefore, a machine can never perform a task which is not defined in its algorithm. This limitation simply indicates that a robot is made to perform a certain task and cannot play smartly if needed to perform some out of the scope job.\nAt last, although many of the jobs where not much pondering is required will be done by robots. This will be economical for companies, and humans will be safe to do physically hard work. On the other hand, however, certain jobs can never be done by machines and humans will always supersede machines to be on the dominant point. Humans will be driving machines and will use it for their own sake.",
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"content": "This time I patient A time I patient mom went go buy new pair shoes My mom buying new pair shoes I havent new pair shoes months I patient mom would get new pair shoes I know mom money I need something new gets I waiting patiently mom I confidence mom would shoes Then I heard knock door I opened door mom standing new pair shoes",
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"content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because it has proved that it is a very challenging place to examine more closely,so because of this they find that sudying Venus is a worthy pursuit no matter how dangerous it could be.\n\nOne reason why Venus is a worthy pusuit because it is one of the most chalenging places to examine. In the article it said,\"While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vintage point of Earth,it is proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" this meant that even though we are able to see venus it is very challenging to examine closely.\n\nAnother reason why Venus is a worthy pursuit is because venus is the closest planet to earth which makes it easier to get there but the problem is Venus is a very challenging planet for humans to examine and study even though it is Very close to Earth. In the Article it said,\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challanging planet for humans to study despite its proximity to us.\" this means that even though Venus is very close to us it is still a very challenging planet to study.\n\nOne final reason why Venus is a worthy pursuit is because astrononers were fascinated by Venus because it may have been the most Earh-like planet in our solar system. It says,\" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This means that astronomers like that Venus could have been an Earth-like planet.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a worthy pursuit because it is the closest planet to Earth and it may have been the most Earth-like planet. Venus many be easy to see but it is very challenging to study and examine.",
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"content": "It is widely acknowledged that natural life have been notably damaged from human civilization. Despite the optimistic believe, i do not agree that it is reversible damage for planet life. This essay aims to explore both views, which is sortable or not, and will provide supporting examples to arrive at a reasoned conclusion.",
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"content": "If i ever face to face with someone that tells me they were formed by aliens i would kinda believe them. Because there's alot of wierd stuff out in this world like, birds dying for no reason. But i would ask that person to show evidence or prove it to me, or explain to me how was he formed. But what happened with mars its just a natural landform. It's a natural landform because alot of things happen because of nature\n\nThey found a formed of Jessus Cross in a tree, that doesn't mean God was there and drew the cross. No , It was part of nature. Also if a baby was born with six fingers desn't mean that the parents wanted a kid with six fingers because they though it was cool, it was because of part of nature and thats how the baby was born. In my oponion what happen in Mars about the face and stuff i think it just happened because it happened. Like problbly there was an earhquake that made that.\n\nAlso they were saying that they think that was form in the ancient times. I think thats dumb because they just found out that there might be live in Mars. If ancient lived in Mars then since along time scientist would of none that there is live in Mars instead of sending ships. But people these days dont know anything anymore. Or it could be because of other stuff that might of happened and we dont know about yet?",
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"content": "I think its wrong to use the Facial Action Coding System on students in their classroom. One of the reason i think this way is becuase teachers should not have to use a machine is read their students emotions by simple just asking a student on how he or she feels can get the same results. Another reason is the money for a machine like this is very costy, and not every school could afford a machine like this. Also the machine is and invination of privites and some students might not want their emotions read\n\nMost students are under stress by school work and the could easly be read by anyone and it would be a waste of the schools money to read the emotion of a student. Also the student could be sad, angery, or happy about something totally differant from school work, and that means it could throw the machine off.\n\nI think the Facial Action Coding System should not be used in schools and never should be. Machines should never be able to read emotions.",
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"content": "It clear problems trying dock dirigibles Empire state Building The first reason s law flying airships low Empire State Building made hard Next thoughtes unsafe dirigibles use hydrogen instead helium hydrogen flammable A big reason german dirigible got destryed fire Lakehurst New Jersey owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could happened densely populated area suched downtown New York City The last reason thought would use lead weights hold dirigibles realized nt practical safe It clear problems docking dirigibles Empire State building probably much safer choice residentscitizens New York people ever work ed architects engineers aviation pioners",
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"content": "Pollution is a pestering problem worldwide and the biggest investor to this type of un-seen pollution is the automobile. wich can account for the first explanation why there several advantages for reducing and limiting the amount of car usage ,first to reduce emmissions, pollution and greenhouse gases. secondly being that there is plenty of other more peaceful means of commuting to where you are getting to.\n\nTo thrust this arguement forward that limitng car and automobile usage will have significant advantages over the world wide pollution problem is the first evidential excerpt in source four paragraph thirty four it quotes \"it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment since transportation is the second largest source of americas emissions just behind power plants\" this section implies that cutting down are vehicle and transportive uses will benficially affect or pollution and emissions problem cutting it down drastically. the second jerking piece of evidence is that in source two paragraph ten states that after days of near record pollution paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. this goes to prove that drivng , cars , and automobiles can significantly have a huge impact positively for our pollution and has contributed so much that we have pollutio almost like never before.\n\nAnother reason for needing car usage limited is that it will lead to a better life. in paragraph 24 it states that this is a good oppurtinity to take away stress. what this means to imply is that by taking away the stress using this method it will lead to a better more peaceful life as stated in the original claim. A secondary source of evidence is in paragraph 28 when it say parks and sports centers also have bloomed . these kinds of things happening because of the lack of car usage can sometimes make peoples life more fun and when life becomes fun life can beocme better demonstrating that the lack of car usage can implant in most people, a better life.\n\nwhether life becomes better or pollution goes there is a wide range of advantages to cutting our vehicle and motor usage to a minimum.",
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"content": "Driveless cars are coming. Whether you will buy or support this new idea or not is your choice. I think driveless cars are going to be the new thing everyone will enjoy. Getting around will be easier, and everyday life will seem a little less chaotic. Even though you may get bored and want to drive, you may now text without your life being at stake as it says in the last sentence of paragraph eight. The question that may pop up in a lot of consumers mind is what if something goes wrong wit the system of the driveless car? Manufacters not only want the people to be safe but want their product to sell as well as the story quotes in paragraph 8, last line. Why sell something messed up to the people to have them get seriously injuried and then no one buy it because of its bad reviews? Therefore, I believe manufacters would test and secure its driveless car product for safety before putting it out there on the market. When running late for work or school, you can easy just have your car start and drive as you are preparing for a meeting, answering missed calls or texts, or simply applying today's makeup for school. This also gives you a chance to sleep in later and be more rested. There are so many teens and adults who lose lives because of people who slip a text and look down from the wheel for five seconds. This could stop with driveless cars. With the growing software and media over the years, engineers have managed to do the impossible that we only see on television in the movies as it says in paragraph two. As it states in paragraph nine, \"most driving laws focus on keepng drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawakers know that safety is achieved with alert drivers.\" The driveless car law would not pass if this was going to fail or become reckless. We grow closer to driveless cars each waking day. In paragraph ten, it is said that Tesla has projected a release for a car capable for driving autopilot ninety percent of the time. You would still have to pay attention to the road but at least you would have more time to yourself. In 2020, Nissan, Audi, and Mercedes Benz plan to have cars that can drive themselves wihtout the work of a human. Imagine a world where there would be less accidents because of texting or new drivers scared on the road. Please take this new idea into consideration, and think. Our technolgy is already so sophisicated now, what would it be like after driveless cars making our world more organized and better?",
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"content": "In many communities, it is accepted that young people do free work for the community. I agree that this is correct, and in this essay I will try to explain it. \r\n\r\nAs we know, humanity has lived in communities for many years. Traditional values are passed down from generation to generation. And one of the most important qualities is the ability to work, because this is what provides people with the necessary things for their existence. The older generation of people usually teach the younger ones, because the younger ones do not yet have enough experience to do the job well. For example, many schools offer work education classes where teenagers can do useful things for the community like birdhouses for birds or prepare simple meals for charity dinners. At the same time, teenagers feel needed for society, which increases their self-esteem. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, they gain useful experience and knowledge. For example, the ability to cook is always useful in the future. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion I would like to say that unpaid work for the community among teenagers brings them together and distracts them from things like drugs and other addictions.",
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"content": "Dear,Senator\n\nI think we should in take concideration in the next few years about changing are election to popular vote. I feel that are state would benefit in a positive way with the way that popular vote is set up. looking at the past history the electoral college is not benefiting us in a positive direction. i qutoe this from the article \"over 60 percent of voters would pefer a direct election\"with that being said lets look at the cons of the electoral college.\n\nTo begin with the electoral college system the people like me dont get to vote for president i have to vote for someone else to vote for me in that i feel like my vote doesnt count because what happens if i vote for a elector and he doesnt go for my person to win. That just makes me feel dumb then if the elector does vote for the same person asme its not really even final becuase that vote doesnt go towards the president it goes toward the state elector and its basically there choice. another con in the electoral college system is that the same fiasco in 2000 will break out again. were the legislatures are responsible for picking electors and they dont take in to concideration of other people votes. the con that could mostly impact america is a tie in the electoral vote. another reason the electoral college is an stupid way to vote is that the big states get better privelges than the smaller states they out rule the smaller states. Its final the electoral college is unfair outdatedand irrational.\n\nthe only reasons the electoral college is alive now is the cetainty outcome,everystates president,swing states,runoff elections .run off electionsn means basically there will never be a blow out in the voting polls it will always be compitive with that being said with the presidents trying to run for president the will actually try to reach the peoples needs to meet there satisfactory. the swing states is sayiong that there one state isnt going to decide the whole election.",
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"content": "The chart provides information about air pollution rates and its various culprits in four different countries, namely China, America, Japan, and Australia, during 2021.\nOverall, the country with the highest rate of PPM was China, in contrary to Australia with the lowest rate. Roughly, electricity generation seems to be the least common cause of pollution, whilst transportation and pollution from industry seems to have similar levels of PPM.\nJapan and China's PPM trend seems alike, with industry ranking the first in PPM level contribution, transportation ranking second, and electricity generation coming third. China's industry, transportation, and electrical generation was roughly 80 PPM, 70 PPM, and 60 PPM respectively, while all of Japan's pollution causes levels are approximately half of China's, with industry contributing a little more than 40PPM, transportation with 30 PPM, and electricity generation with around 15 PPM.\nAustralia and America, on the other hand, shows no similar patterns to any countries in this chart. America's highest pollution contribution was transporation, with a similar level to that of China's electricity generation, with almost 60 PPM. Transportation and industry's PPM rate in America were alike, with approximately 30 PPM. Meanwhile, all of Australia's sources of pollution's rates were almost the same with 20 PPM, even though electricity generation's PPM level being slightly higher than that of transportation and industry's.",
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"content": "Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Sometimes students wont ask for help because they don't want people to think they are dumb. There also is just to many students for a teacher to notice when a student does not understand something or is bored. Therefore having this technology in classrooms would be good and helpful for the teachers and students.\n\nStudents alot of times wont ask for help, but with this technology teachers will be able to know when a student does not understand the lesson. It says in the article that \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" this would be helpful so when a student is bored or confused the teacher can help the sudent. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" this technology could help teachers help there students. Alot of times people do not say how their feeling and wont say that they do not understand, so they just struggle with this technology that wont have to happen anymore.\n\nWhen someone is upset, angery, confused, bored, or sad this technology can read their emotions and facial expressions. This would really improve teaching because it can tell when someone does not understand the lesson. It would help alot in classrooms. This technology would be very valuable in classrooms.",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper opinion computers positive affect people I think I know people excersise go computer mainly I nt think computers bad thing Some people learn computers They learn exercise Sure people chat learn far away place could go explore buety nature I think computers great effects people They help lot I know uncle came learned speak english computer He learned lot proud Some effects computers people lot People classes online go mothers single kids example get diplomas degrees computer online And aunts uncles go english classes online work A lot people classes online go time time teaches type fun also educated I think computer positive effects people All shouldnt one computer negative effects people But s opinion Computers robots lots us We type reports learn read online And theres also play games online educated games I believe lots resources You could search lot stuff For example could search mistery animals natures places You would nt beleive many results computer So would negative effects computer All trying help us education helps spanish sometimes So would people think computers ar nt good ideas Computers great everything I could go see weather tommorrow Also I could see news could contact teachers computer I think computer would always positive affect people",
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"content": "The The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted talks height buildings Empire State Building Chrysler Building The architecture built Chrysler Building secretly hiding something The secret constructed foot spire inside building shocked many people media hoisting top Chrysler Building Now s height feet feet taller height Empire State Building One obstacle expand use New York city lack suitable landing area Al Smith thought mooring mast added top building would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refueling service let passengers The mooring mast could nt simply drop mooring mast top building Adding mooring mast cable tether could add stress buildings frame They finally build mooring mast raised American flag",
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"content": "In memoir Home blue prints lives mood created author happy thankful also familyorented First says I always grateful parents love sacrifice tell loved new home loved appriciated everything parents herSecond instilled great sense family nothing blood relative Which treats acts like everyone family loves cares family nt blood relative neighborhood blood relativeLast memoir says endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home says warm home ment loved home familyetc And loved friends neighbors thats lovedloves therefore happy",
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"content": "Some people say that playing games can be bad for children. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.\r\n\r\nWhereas some individuals believe that video games are devastating for children's improvement,the opponents are of the notion that it is beneficial for them.Although in my point of view,its positive footprints surpass in multitudes aspects,different sides are uttered here.\r\n\r\n One of the most highlighted advantages has to do with its impression on users' knowledge.To enlighten,not only enhances it juveniles capability in utilising technology as the current affair but their lingual information would be fortified while they have to interact with others with divergent tongues from different nations.Consequently,both the awareness of technology usage and similarly knowing various languages would be beneficial for their subsequent personal and social lives, grasping a job vacancy for example.Furthermore,the youngster will be saved from the hazards that are awaiting them in society.As a vivid case,neither kidnappers nor drug sellers have the capacity to abuse them if they are entertained with their computers at home.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,various diseases may they encounter owing to the sedentary lifestyle that these smart boxes bestow to folks.To illustrate,Either:the risk of obesity or eyesight problems has swelled among people,who spent the majority of their time in front of screens.To explain,due to research,humans' eyes are sensitive to the light of screens.Moreover,ignoring the activities that used to be more conventional,like cycling,can have some detrimental effects on the mental and the physical realms.as a fact,the balance of body hormones stems from people's function during their lives,which would not be set properly if individuals deprive themselves of physical activities.Therefore,an inappropriate development may occur in their brain and muscles.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,while some undeniable drawbacks would be experienced by the young,who are attracted by computer games,namely:visual problems or obesity,to me its affirmative sides,such as enhancing adolescents' knowledge about other languages and as well technology utilization, outweigh drastically.Nevertheless,its related side effects could be eradicated by restricting the hour of playing game by children",
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"content": "Wouldn't it be extravagant to go and study another planet? That planet to explore, would be Venus. Venus is a lot like Earth. The most similiar out of all nine planets actually. There are risks of visiting Venus, but the pros out weigh the cons. There are ways of safely exploring Venus, from a distance away. There is a whole lot that we do not know about Venus. There could even be signs of a life form. Nobody knows. The author does a phenomenal job supporting that it would be a worthy pursuit, despite the dangers is presents, to visit Venus.\n\nVenus is the most like Earth. There is a reason that scientist call it our \"twin\" planet. (Par. 2) Although the living conditions on Venus are a lot more dangerous than Earth's, it is possible to come up with the technology to have a device on the planet. The device would help scientist from the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) study and find out a lot of information about the planet.\n\nScientist are intrigued about Venus. First off, it is by far, the most Earth like planet in our solar system. (Par 4) A long time ago, Venus was covered with oceans and maybe even life form. The author informs us about how it is filled with valleys and mountains. Sounds like earth to me. I think that the risk of another aircraft exploding would be worth finding another form of life on a different planet. As does, the author of this article.\n\nThey are talking about having a space craft go to Venus. That would be the first of many. There could even be human life in there. If there were to be human life in the space craft, they would have to hover around 30 miles above the surface of Venus. They would have to do that because the pressure is 90 times greater there, than it is on earth. It is also 800 degrees Fahrenheit, there. (Par 3) If the space craft could hover around 30 miles above the fray, the scientist could survive. It would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure would be the same as ocean level on Earth. From there, scientist could see if there is any life form, or oceans on the planet. Finding one of those things out would be worth it, despite the dangers that could come from it. These conditions would not be easy, but they are survivable. Another con about hovering above the planet would be that you can not get any samples of rock, or gas. (Par 6)\n\nI still support the author's statement, that it would be worth taking the risk of studying Venus, depite the possible outcomes. Venus is Earth's twin planent. We could see how close the two really are. If there were humans on Venus or not. If there is water on the planet. A spacecraft hovering over the fray of Venus would be a great idea. Then, we could study the planet, and get more information than anyone ever could imagine. The condiions would be harsh, but the outcome would be worth it. Venus is a planet that is extremely similiar to ours. It would take risks to be able to visit it.\n\nIf there was life form, or it was possible to live on, that would be life changing.",
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"content": "The Electoral College is a easy, yet hard way of a candidate becoming the President of the United States. The Electoral college was created by how ever many majority of the electoral votes will become the new president. This brings many issues within the U.S. . The popularity vote does not matter in a situation like this and is not likely relied on to decide who the president will be. The Electoral College is not right, it's unfair, and is very controversial. The argument though is that with the Electoral College the votes which are dominant have a better chance of the two nominees not having the same amount of votes rather than if it was relied on by the popularity votes. This still though does not resolve nor question that the Electoral College needs to be replaced.\n\nInitially, the Electoral College is not right at all. The electoral votes in the U.S. combined throughout all the states equals 538 votes. Popularity votes which are votes that have an advantage of the election are more than tens of thousands if not more. This is an example on how the Electoral College works. An example of this is in the source by \"Reasons to keep our despised method of chooosing the President\" it states, \" Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only 42 percent of the popularity vote but won through the electoral votes because they had bigger states voting for them making them win that election\". This shows how the Electoral College is not right and should reverse the value of electoral and popularity voting(Poshner, 22).\n\nAdditionally, the Electoral College voting is very unfair because many sources giving have shown to people that many candidates have had less popularity vote but have won through the majority of the electoral votes. This is unfair because popularity votes mean popularity votes which are votes that are of the majority of all votes. Unfortunately, the popularity votes do not count. As said in the source \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" it states, \" if you wanted to vote for John Kerry and you lived in Texas the vote would go to 34 Democratic electors that pledged to Kerry\". This is why popularity vote should be the deciding factor of who becomes the next President. If every election would be based on popularity vote the candidate won each of those elections would probably all change due to the fact that so many elections have won based on electoral vote(Plumer,10).\n\nTo end with, the Electoral College is so controversial. Out of more than two hundred years of elections many have been close and many have been a mile away from each other. The electoral vote decides it all though. The main problem with this process is how it is set-up. The electoral vote is dominent over the popular vote, but it shouldnt be. The electoral vote has made bad decisions yet good decisions throughout the hundreds of years its been around and the main reasin for electoral votes are to keep the candidates running not have the same number of votes so that they won't have to have another election and voting cast. \"It is also really controversial since the voting also might rely on the political party that the candidate is running for\", as stated by \"What is the Electoral College\". This Electoral College seems to go by how big the state is, the bigger the state the more electoral votes that state has; the smaller the state the less electoral votes that that state has(Federal Register, 5).\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is unaccurate, lazy, unreasonable, yet successful. This process by many sources of evidence have concluded that there are in fact many holes in this system. Yet some sources have proved how the Electoral College has helped decide the outcomes and have stopped run-off elections. The Electoral College is unfair, not right and controversial and has also proved that it has pros to all these cons as well.",
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"content": "Many uncommon things happen causing people to be very fascinated with a certain subject. Any time something to do with space occurs, many people freak out or become fascinated with the subject. When something to do with space does occur, then usually people believe alien life forms. But with a cleaner and better camera the photos revealed that it was a natural landform and not an alien monument after all.\n\nWith an even better camera lense than before the picture is still proof that shows it is a normal, typical landform. Even with small objects you would still be able to clearly see if the object is a landform or a alien life form. The natural landform is equivalent to a butte or mesa. The \"face\" on Mars is still a like to a normal landform on Earth.\n\nThe form can not be life like or be alien like due to the amount of information and facts that NASA has to back up its ideas. The conspiracy theorists don't have as many facts as NASA to back up their information and ideas. NASA has majority of the information and facts which over rules the conspiracy theorists information and facts.",
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"content": "intro: Today ill be telling you the pros and cons about having this technology in our schools from counslers being able to tell whats with the student to invading the privacy of what we humans have to preventng suicide and to be able to maybe stop someone from commiting suicide or knowing someone is going through depression.\n\nbody: so me personally think this would be some great technology to have in our schools espically for consoulers so say someone is really sad and depressed but they are to scared to open up about how they feel or whats going so you put the computer on there face and it shows they are depressed sad and scared well now you know how your student is feeling so then you cheer them up and work to make things better you dont know it but you just saved a life because who knows weather or not that student was about to comit suicide or say someone was threatned and they will not tell you that so they act like there fine but you put the computer on them and it shows that they are scared now you know they are scared and can try to work with them to open up, but from other people perspectives i can totally see how this is a total invading of privacy because we all have secrects and we dont want people knowing if were depressed or sad and alot of people dont like to communicate or open with anyone and also what if things get passed around about you being depressed the generatin today are bullys so i can see someone making fun of someone for being depressed.\n\nconclusion: inconclusion i think it would be some great technology to have in our schools just think about how many lives we can change or how many lives we can save by just knowing how the person next to you is feeling it would save a lot of time trying to get the person to tell you whats wrong when you can just take a picture of there face so yes i do think it would be great because itll make life better, you would save more time, and you could change alot of lives and save alot of lives with this type of technology.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports his ideas very well I say this because he is very informitive about his thoughts and facts, it's almost like if it is his dream to travel beyond Earth, and he is very passionate.\n\nThe author is very imformative to support his ideas that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because in the article it says,\" If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to the surface?\" or \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" These is some strong evidence he gives to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nIt almost seems like if the author's big dream was to visit Venus one day because in the article it says\" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" and \" Astronmers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\"\n\nThe author supported his idea very well that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.",
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"content": "Stating that Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry is a very wrong. They say they found this out using The Facial Action Coding to reveal what Mona Lisa was feeling as to when she was getting a photo shot. Im pretty sure that the information the recieved from the software wasn't true. She would have been feeling great to have a face painted by the one and only Lenoardo da Vinci. Having a program determine what a person was feeling at the time of the photo is complete nonsence. Having the program focus on a small set of emotions wont even get the full result of what a person was feeling.\n\nFurthermore, this Facial Action Coding System was based purly on Happines, Disgust, Fear, and Anger. Most of the time you cant see what another if feeling based on their faces. The only feeling you can see on their faces in my opinion is anger. I say this because people tend to ball their hands and lower their eyebrows. That is the only way i can determine if a persons angry or not.\n\nThey use math to figure what a persons feeling like which in my opinion is pure garbage. Having a program determine how i feel only by using facial musles wouldn't come out true. People could be happy and keep the same face they make everyday and people wouldn't notice. This is why peolpe should ask about how the other is feeling. Rather than having it be decided on a program of all things.\n\nIn all honesty i think it could work on the younger people such as little kids. They make faces that always show how the feel. They keep their emotions out for everyone to see and proud of it. So if this program were to be used on kids it would be nearly correct in every emotion. I still stand by what i said about the other part of the world that aren't kids.\n\nOverall i think this whole program is a bad idea and should never be mass produced to anyone. I think people should ask or figure out how people are feeling. This would cause people to think that everyone is feeling the same way as others all the time. That would cause problems that would cause frenzy to people who are mostly calm.",
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"content": "The masterpice of\n\nleonardo de Vinci \" the Mona Lisa\" has the sign of happy's to all of use but there is more then anyone can see. To make one mood you need to make the other mood to show as well , but not in a bad way. There is the FACS( Facial Action Coding System) , this alones people to see the mood of there faces by just scanning them. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of student in a classroom is valuable because it shows what the students are feeling, why they are showing the mood, and what other moods they are felling in there mindes.\n\nthis is valuable to students because it shows how they are feeling. when it comes to something that they know that isn't right they will show there feeling for it, but they dont show there ture emotions to the problem in hand. in paragraph 3 of Making Mona Lisa Smile, it states,\" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fera, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the tacial muscles.\" find out that there was six different types of emotion is a lot to give a perosn, most likrly these student will use all six of there emotions.\n\nstudent are valuable to the FACS because it show them why FACS scans for there mood. before they are to able to use this they have to know how to use the FACS. in paragraph 3 of Making Mona Lisa Smille, it states,\" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face: all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more mscles is called an \"action unit\".\" to any of the student that will sound amazing, seeing how the computer pulls a 3-D model of so ones face shows that they will enjoy the FACS.\n\nstudent are valuable for the FACS because FACS shows wat other moods that they are having with out them even nowing they they are use all of there emotion. people in this world like to stay with one mood or more then one mood, most of the time its just one mood. in the 1 paragraph of Making Mona Lise Simle, it states,\" She's 83 persent happy, 9 persent disgusted, 6 persent fearful, and 2 persent angry.\" these are the results of the Mona Lisa and as we can see she has disgust, fearful, and anger in her moods as of right now.\n\nNow we hae been going over why useing this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because\n\nit shows what the students are feeling, why they are showing the mood, and what other moods they are felling in there mindes.think about how excited students will find out about thereself. What there wasn't no FACS, how would we find out how we are feeling, by what sticking wiht the moods we been using alll day and night or by telling the way someone talks, move, and act; how could tell.",
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"content": "I believe that driverless cars should not be developed or allowed the right to become apart of everyday life in society due to the many issues that follows behind. Many\n\ncomp[anies such as Google, Toyota, Berkeley, BMW and many others have begun testing driverless cars. While running many test on the cars numerous problems have been found.\n\nDuring testing producers have realized that the driverless cars may not actually be 100% driverless. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\"(7). In this situation it means that 'the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires'(7). Leading to a concern that drivers may loose interest\n\nwhile waiting on their turn to take over. A driver that is not alert can cause a huge safety issue going against what the companies are pushing for. While the manufactuers are pushing to prove that their driverless cars are safe they still remain with the law as one of their biggest roadblocks. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passenger, and perdestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best archieved with alert drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\"(9). Dr.Werner Huber ,BMW project manager, believes that they have to 'interpret driving fun in a new way'(8). This would be done by 'bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads- up displays'(8). Even with all the improvements to the driverless car ,including the tons of sensor that would be added to the driverless car to \"mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\" , there is still a risk that the technology could fail causing a safey issue to humans. If driverless cars were passed there would have to be several new laws laid down to protect both the manufactuer and the driver from who's fault it was due to some sort of mishap following behind the car.\n\nAs a result of all the negativity that can be brought with the driverless car they should not be developed. Driverless cars can lead to a huge debate over safety while putting lives in danger along with the companies reputation. Lets stop the development of driverless cars before it happens, save a life near you!",
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"content": "The setting reading affected cyclist hot dry nothing around Being hot one part setting affected drink water lot It dry every around couldnt stop anywhere cool Also things got hard nothing around ghost towns abandoned buildings This setting affected",
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"content": "Dear local Newspaper know computers teach many things You probably I understand would like know opinion whether computers positive negative effect people Well I think positive effect Computers teach type learn moun keys It also helps look things like people states etc Lastly helps interact students school encourage continue reading hear wonderful strategic ideas First I think computers positive effect people gives learning skills learn type I remember last year grade tech ed teacher told go website learning type It told us main keys A CAPS CAPS CAPS colon It helpful From I typed like I think learning type excellent thing Typing helps want become secretary even newspaper editor My mother secretary town low form called She works three houses learned type really fast Typing big part life You use project class essay lthat type apply scholarship ro colege Typing used everywhere even math class teacher types things pits In addition computers positive affect people help look famous people states countries etc I remember grade I project grade I powerpoint I ve also done project grade I one year music I m beginning one As tell I ve using computer basically whole life except I baby I think baby I got little fake computer know computers positive effect people When last time need computer help look something someone Priority long ago Computers real dael They help anything They ve helped whole life To continued computers positive effect people They help interact people students fa mily members contact I remember cousin moved away sad I nt went leave So gave email contact computer I could talk The computer many websites people interact like aol msn yahoo gmail twitter many like talking people country I talk friend I m home talk family members My favorite website I fanatic It CAPS spo much fun Do favorite interaction website interaction websites If nt get one This computers positive effect people In conclusion think computers positive effect people One interact others Two look things help Three develop sense typing Thank reading letter I m sure persuaded agree computers positive effect people",
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"content": "The mood memoir generally happy Narciso talks wonderful home growing Narciso speaks wonderful music food talks family s happiness house grew became home The mood happy makes feel love felt living parents home New Jersey To conclude mood happiness proudness fondness It brings back memory s anyone s first home love",
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"content": "I think author adds last paragraph story could use little part Saeng And planning next Also author added paragraph maybe thinking writing second story winter Hibiscus wanted write part could next story It would make wonder take test would pass time snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I think author added paragraph story",
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"content": "To service in this internationally linking world, many people have the opinion that students should learn about the major events which has been happening in the world by introducing the new subject into the official academic carriculum. However, others insist that young students are already fully occupied with exsiting subjects such as math, science, and additional languages which I also agreed with. \r\n\r\nSome individuals would acknowledge that students should learn the international big events and issues to build up their capabilities to accept which is based on worldwide knowledge. Introducing the new subject as the office procedure to teach students international news can support them to increase their comprehending of the effect from the other countries issues. As stduents might not be able to select the appropriate information from the internet by themselves, it would be greatly helpful for them to be prepared as the competent international human resouces by having the qualified guide from their teachers. \r\n\r\nDepite of this argument, opposite side of people support that having additional subject like learning international news would bring more burden on young people as they are already full of other academic work such as science, addtional languages, and mathmetics. As this is the fact that students has been experienced excessive academic stress with current curriculum, adding more study will result in unhealthy psychological condtion to students. On the other hand, it would be challening for teachers to choose the news which will be just based on teacher's onw perspectives reagrding politics, religions, and other personal beliefs. Students can be affected by teacher's opinion in prior to developing their own viewpoints. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although students can be equippted with the instant international knowledge by learning worldwide news, it cannot be ignored that students might have greater stress with having extracurricular activities on top of what they are already allocated to study. Furthremore, there would be a risk of installing teacher's personal viewpoint into the students before they estabilish their own views to see the issues which I am completely convinced with.",
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"content": "When a student is confused in school they are supposed to raise their hand. It's been taught that way since day one. Whether that is followed or not is hard to say. Some students are scared to raise their hand however, as they grow older and mature, they seem to find more courage to ask questions which is the way it has always been taught. Students generally make faces when they are confused, that can be beneficial to the teacher if they're paying attention. A recent computer software has been developed by Professor Thomas Haung that indicates peoples emotions. It was used on the Mona Lisa to get every percent of each emotion on her face. It was suggested that this software be put in schools to benefit students. However, this innovation should not be put into schools because of the varying ages of kids, how much it would actually be used, and the convienence of the schools budget and space in the classrooms.\n\nThis computer software that can tell every percent of what emotion on your face is a very fascinating concept but is not the most convienent for pre-school and elementary students. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it was said a classroom computer could recognize confusion or boredom from the students and then in which change the lesson for a more beneficial class (para 6). If this were to be put in place into an younger classroom it could be misleading. Younger kids have spunky behavior as their minds are still maturing and developing. They might find the software fun and amusing and make many facial expressions which would alter their lesson plan in class unaccordingly. Others may argue that little kids could possibly get bored of doing that every day and eventually calm down about it so then it would be useful. Though you never know when a little kid could find something fun again, it's just that easy and would then again rise to misleading lesson plans for the young students.\n\nIf this technology was put in a highschool classroom where students minds have better matured and developed it would be more successful. However, there would need to be a computer for every student and not all schools can provide that.\n\nSome students may even find it uncomfortbale to have their expressions and themselves being watched and analyzed all day. As a result of knowing they are being recognized as confused, they could easily act and prevent their expression from giving that result or not even use them. People can already do the work of this software, friends can tell how you're feeling based on your facial expression (para 5). Also mentioned in \"Making Mono Lisa Smile\" people use their knowledge to tell whether a politician or celebrity is faking a smile or being truthful (para 8), again proving that people can already do what this software is, just not as precise with numbers. On the other hand, if these computers were installed in schools and became a regular thing, then it could eventually be excepted by students and they would actually use the software to their benefit.\n\nTeachers would find this innovation helpful. They could argue that not all students express if they trully understand material or not. If they had this software it would accurately show them the truth about their students. But students could still refuse to use it which would lead teachers back to square one.\n\nMaybe even before a students first day of school they were taught to raise their hand if they had something to say, it's normal. So let students do that because the computer software that tells every percent of every expression someone is having is unecessary to have in a school because of the varying ages of kids, how much it would actually be used, and the convienence of the schools budget and space in the classrooms.",
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"content": "My best friend I close ever since We met lessons local dance studio We ve stayed close throughout years ve always done similar activities We re different though I m going I like speak mind I m carefree opposite conservative take things seriously But either way manage even Finals week gotten I planning sleepover week We needed time relax time When I gotten home school I gave quick call CAPS answered CAPS time wan na hang I asked I thinking CAPS good I quickly hung phone gathered gear I grabbed toothbrush pillow pajamas blanket I put shoes headed back door My dad dropped gear I brought pajamas pillow extra blanket I walked sidewalk door knocked waited Only seconds later answer big smile across face lead basement junk food set ready us attack gone store earlier day bought everything set old pool table nobody used There chips cookies sodas candy chocolate pizza I set stuff chair corner room feasted Of course could eat food We simply nt big enough After eating almost hour straight laid basement floor trying gain composure We started laughing silly little things came commercials big screen Eventually got talking finals went I soo good mine I m gon na get ALL A s bragged gotten straight A s every year since middle school I think I pretty sure though I said I laying upside floor CAPS ll see tomorrow We finally decided move couch opposite side pool table could face It already still sugar high We switched back forth watching old scary movie top music videos week That passed time knew I laying opposite ends Occasionally one us would get chips candy table We grew tired point could nt keep eyes open No one even enough energy turn overhead light We fell asleep fast When I wokeup next nt laying across anymore sitting corner chair I set stuff I looked clock already afternoon I looked back seemed somewhat upset I shifted around blanket I could face CAPS I grunted I stretching TIME said abruptly holding folded piece paper hand CAPS s I asked sitting couch crumpled piece paper threw I picked lap unfolded It report card I scanned paper looking grades received A s one gotten class I looked paper see hands covering face I walked kinda amused upset CAPS got crying I asked looked quickly I looked stupid face busted laughing felt stupid crying I stared laughing I knew grades far worse Heck I d glad get I perfect best friends We even I tell lighten tells focus ca nt take little things like seriously s worth stress Sometimes got ta relax maintain focus find perfect balance work play",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI think that Electoral College is not the way to vote in the future. We should make a change in our goverment and make elections by popular vote. For these reasons we should make changes. We don't know who the electors vote for. The Electoral College is unfair. Popular vote is more accurate.\n\nIf we are going to have Electoral College lets at least know who our elector votes for. \"Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always.\" By this I mean, not letting him choose who ever he's going for. As in of showing that he took everyones vote and made them all count. Even if the guy he's going for wins the election, we can say it was fair.\n\nThe Electoral College is not fair. First of all we don't know who picks the electors. We don't know if there truthful as in putting in votes. I'm sure they have to have certain requirments to become an elector but we are not the ones chosing them. In the 2000 campaign 17 states didn't even see the people running in the election. Also in an Electoral College ties exist so then it has to be thrown into the House of Represenatives where the delagations will vote on the president. Making our votes worthless because the people in the goverment get to chose whos next to become president.\n\nPopular vote is more accurate. By me saying this is that everyones vote counts. There's no electors invovled causing you to fall in doubt. Even though it says that Electoral College electors \"...that trust is rarerly betrayed.\" I still think that the people will cofide more in popular vote showing them that they didn't just vote for no reason.\n\nElectoral college is getting more and more complicated causing people to doubt. We should change because we don't know who the electors vote for. The Electoral College is unfair. Also because popular votes are more accurate. Electoral College is irrational and not accurate.",
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"content": "The author concludes story come back Saeng vowed silently offers reader conclusion That passage means Saeng try talking drivers test adjusted new life new country Once find familiarity surroundings feel home Throughout story detatchment Vietnam makes feel alone The hibiscus plant first offers sense comfort It felt smooth cool known would feel The ending paragraph shows Saeng find comfort plant couple geese",
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