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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An often debated topic is whether a government should provide its country’s artists with assistance or not. Many believe such assistance is a prudent use of a nation’s wealth and should thus be supported. However, others feel this kind of spending is wasteful. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay before a conclusion is reached. According to many, government funding of the arts can benefit a country’s cultural identity. A good example of this is the anime art culture of Japan. Today, anime is a globally recognized art form and as such, a huge draw for tourists. As this shows, providing government assistance to artists can have positive ramifications across different channels within a country. It is thus understandable why many people support this stance. On the other hand, many argue this kind of spending is wasteful. The core of this argument typically spotlights developing countries. People basically feel that among these countries government money may perhaps best be used to solve social problems, such as establishing safe drinking water and roads to rural communities. When looking at the discussion in this light, the merits in not utilizing government funds on artists can be seen. After examining both sides of the question, it is felt that in most circumstances government assistance to artists begets greater benefits to the country at large. Thus, it is hoped nations around the world responsibly tailor financial aid to their artists in a manor that best benefits the needs of their people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "US energy production and consumption.\nFollowing energy consumption and production in the US from 1950 to 2000 we can draw several conclusions.\nFirstly, the US consumed more energy than it produced from beginning to end. And the number of necessary import is only growing.\nSo according to outlook for 2025 the difference between produced and requare energy will constitute about 50 quadrillion of British thermal units.\nSecondly, bouth of these parameteres are increasing at an incredible rate. At 1950th the US produced about 25 quadrillion of BUT's and consumed about the same. The graph shows that the production almost tripled, when the consumption even beats it.\nThe most comparable this parameters was at 1970th. Then the requared import didn't exceed 10 quadrillion of BUT's.\nIt makes it possible to assume that the US energy industry will continue to develop but due to excess consumption it will need to purchase imports.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What s Laughter Would best friends ever laughing That would negative I honestly think laughter biggest part What kind two friends never laugh If people world nt laugh I bet nt friends well least true friends I feel sorry people I ca nt even imagine life laughter All friends I laugh time Especially When I around usually non stop laughter I laugh almost everything We many inside jokes even funny well upstairs john john john john See things people would nt think funny whenever one us blurts one stupid inside jokes start laughing ball eyes If I imagine never laughing would worst I hate even think us never laughing sounds horrible If never laughed likely would friends I m glad I much laughter life I nt know I would", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the auhtor did not make enough evidence and information on why it would be of great value to explore our twin planet, Venus. Most the article was relaying challenges, or risks, as some might say, and probable solutions to those risks. The part in the article on why it would be of great value to study Venus does not give us a lot of reason why.\n\nFor most of the articel the author was giving was reasons why there unmanned missons to visit and why a single spaceship has not touched down on Venus in more than three decades. One reason as he explain was Venus's atmosphere. Another was the enivornment of our neighboring planet Venus.\n\nMostly the other part of the article was soltuions to Venus's challenges. He talk about how NASA had an idea to use an blimp-like trasnportation to avoid Venus's harsh enivorment. He also explained NASA's othe plan to use mechanical computers some modern technology wouldn't burn up and melt due to Venus very humid temperatures.\n\nAt the end of the article, in the last paragraph, is where the author briefly gave he reason for why studying Venus would be a good idea. He brings up recieveing insight on the planet. Also he brings up the hunger human curiosity and that it will lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nBased on the information explained in this essay, the reason is now known why the author did not do a good job supporting why explorating Venus would be of great value. He mainly just explains the challenges and solutions to explore Venus. Hardly anything is say on why the value of studying Venus would be of great use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On year brother worst birthday headache ever We lived nice big brown house great loving parents nice big back yard brother I loved stars making brother school lunches school It brothers first day school happy I mean birthday also starts school day thats awsome let brother walk school road The school brother went called When got school I could tell brother worried School nt seem bad I nt one caught eating glue ether Yeah brother caught eating glue arts crafts lunch When I way office I say window He turned head smilled I could see glue still wet s everywhere My brother always good relationship mad laugh time If brother I nt laugh probable would nt talk Laughter importent part kind relationship It alows poth people share emotions positive way It also helps people see kind sence humor As approched house saw sitting porch waitting us After got home brother went straight room get cleaned birthday brother dishes I vacuming living room She always wanted house cleaned even people dont come said whole family coming My brother happy new grandma coming When everyone got happy Grandma showed alittle dad hurry wanted see brothers face saw birthday cake When grandma comes always brings gifts us birthdays When brother table brang cake I always see brother happy like I could tell nothing could make day happier When birthday cake presients brother went back yard play kickball My brother wouldnt use new soccer ball stuck basketball play grandma watching us play fun We laught every time I kicked ball wrong missed tried kick ball As kicking ball I got idea I wound leg back ball came close kicked I kicked ball hard fast insted ball going feet went head When ball conected head back flip ground grandma aw frozen still When got looked straight laught started laugh grandma still frozen I finaily went time I started couldnt stop funny got pickup ground hit head ball still laughs When time everyone go said good byes grandmas turn Grandma gave brother first kiss forhead As grandma leaving brother sat moms lap gave big hug said I love tcking us bed leave brother said head hurts I love family even today look back laugh This joy write hope think Short story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are a few advantage of limiting car usage taled about in the passage. Some say that not having a car is mcuh better. Heidrun Walter says, \"when had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way\"\n\nThis movement also helps to reduce greenhouse gas from tailpipes. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill to be approved this year says Mr. Goldberg.\n\n80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport. Also you can save lots of money not having a car.\n\nIt cost $40,000 to buy space for the car.\n\nSome Vauban's families sold their car just to move there. Stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in mails along some distant highway.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I just finished reading the Challenge of Exploring Venus. The Challenge of Exploring Venus explain what is Venus, why is call the \"Evening Star\", and many more. I'll explain how well the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nI'll explain the Earth \"twin\". A thick atmosphere. of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nI'm also going to explain the NASA the National Aeronautics and Space Administration.\n\nThe Earth \"twin\".\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in the same density and size, and the closest in distance. Venus and Mars those two are orbit the sun at different speeds.\n\nWhich mean that sometime we are closer to Mars and Venus.\n\nEverytime human has a mission to touch the Venus it doesn't work. they sent numerous spacecraft to the land each mission was unmanned. The spacecraft has only survived the landing for more than a few hour.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 persent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nThe most challenging about the Venus is that the clouds oh highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet, even though Mercury is closer to our sun Venus is still the hottes surface. And high pressure, heat, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes , and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land oon its surface.\n\nThe NASA (the National Aeronautics and Space Administration. The NASA is the idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA is the solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. That would allow secientisits to float above the fray. If Blimp hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscarpa.\n\njust like our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude. While hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly\n\nground condition byb staying up and out of their way. It not an easy condition , but survivable for humans.\n\nI agree that the author think that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger. Why, because i think that studying Venus would be fun and probably will help you learn something about our solar system. And it really challenging .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience way big city go specil baseball game Can guess I game Its LOCATION tigers stadium CAPS excited first time ever CAPS much longer till get I asked About hour mom replayed because boring siting four hours strait I know patient CAPS I thought bad I wounder I could patient I though moment Then minite boom I cold two hours I slep Then I woke hit trafic I asked are yet hope dad said So I sat waiting pacently About min later I asked turn radio CAPS mom said sat Then finaly sarted moving handest anoing I going I got game I thinking mabey Ill get bit exspenedve bur time I thought anything else I hurd were CAPS I skeamed So got walked mile ticket booth As walking I though I guess take patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The snow shimmered sunlight like sequins I rushed bedroom window get better look A blanket white covered ground Quickly strapped airrestricting snowsuits She opened wooden front door chilly air stung nose hurried graders paradise I rough times past months I shielded fact recently muscular brown horse put death giant bolt light loud thunder clap learned parents getting divorce Being best friends trail tears year forgotten legs hit cold wet snow We raced garage panic find sleds As ran house back door stopped short tan mom She refused let us go outside ate breakfast We chomped bowl always tasty gulped tall glass juice flew back door sleds There giant hill waited us It slopped downward perfect degree angle turns The wood piles thorny blackberry bushes lined sledding course taunted us As eyes wandered path snow I heard yell CAPS I saw whipping way slope I grabbed red racer sled took I approached first turn It hooked around left like start figure eight With ease I glided around corner saw snapshot woodpile sat right I looked see old pond bottom hill The sun shone slivers trees surrounding like moonlight dancing ice Confidently I approached second turn I spun around corner sharply I stared ahead see bright blue sled reaching finish line That eyes caught glimpse neighbors bay horse happiness floated away As I got lost thoughts I also lost focus My shoulders hit snow concrete My legs tangled knots I could feel head pounding The sled abandoned I tumbled hill like avalanche Eventually kind hands blackberry bush reached stop The thorns stabbed neck Carefully I plucked thorn neck retreated bottom hill foot By time I reached final destination could nt breath With head buried snow abs bouncing rhythm laugh She looked bright green eyes flushed pink cheeks told silly I looked tumbling hill She started laugh one last time giant snot bubble burst nostril She started crack I fell ground burst laughter I could nt look anymore Every time I glanced direction became even funny I nudged head snow done earlier Finally control looked Our mascara smeared around eyes cheeks We resembled either clowns horrible makeup job strange looking raccoons Our laughs started grow quickly died Together stood We spotted bright red sled frozen pond CAPS like nice hike I said started journey forest retrieve When I came shooting hill like meteor shot snot bubble nose like rocket ship I forgot everything It first time months us felt ease hardships Laughter biggest connection When I laughed mind shut whole world On snow days laugh remember cold day day laughing forget", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus would be very hard and espensive, and it would take some very brave vounteers to do this. It would take quite a few years to plan everything out and get all the money. People would be spending there lives to be commited to this plan to visit Venus. Whoever would be the first person to touch Venus would make millions of dollars.\n\nI do think going to Venus would solve a lot of questions that scientits have for Venus, considering we have only gone to the moon. People have been trying to travel other paces in space for many years, but it's just to dangerous. The atmosphere in venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide with even more challeging the clouds of highly corrsive sulfuric acid, that is very dangerous. With the information that we could get traveling to Venus could help out wolrld out in places we don't even know yet. And just to travel to Venus is very exciting and thrilling. If we could make it to Venus i'm sure we could make it to many more planets around space in the future. It will take a long time to try to make a rocket for this envrinement like Venus. Venus has lots of dangerous things like the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closer to our sun.\n\nIf we ever tried taking people to Venus there could be much more things we still don't know about Venus that could be dangerous and end up having peeple dying, that is the risk you have to take while traveling in space. If we took someone to the moon and back safely i'm sure there's some way people could visit mars and come back safely, we just haven't made the perfect rocket yet. NASA is working on other approcahes to studing Venus. Like some simplified electrnics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. We should never stop exploring our world no matter how dangerous because no doubt should keep us from our imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As an opinion i think that the Electoral College should not be able to elect the president. I think it should be a coice of the people. (In source 1) paragraph 6 when you go to vote you actually are voting to pick the electors when you vote for the president each state has electors so you help pick the electors. When people vote they are voting for presidents not the electoral college its not right to have a electoral college. Because it should be the peoples choice.\n\n(In source 2) Even presidents want to get rid of the electoral college that is saying something. People would rather have a direct election then the kind we have now and I agree. See when the people are voting for electors they dont know what that elector is going to vote for they can only hope for what he is going to vote for. (source 2) Paragraph 13 \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\" I agree with this source it is what my opinion is, the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. i think that the electoral college should be abolished. Who knows maybe some of the presidents woukd have been different because the electoral college could have changed some peoples votes. Say some wanted Obama not to be president but the state elector picked him that could be a game changer. It is suppose to be a democracy the people make the choices this is not a dictatorship.\n\nWhat if the state all voted for one president then the electoral college voted for the other that would throw off everything. There would probably be riots to be honest. This is making our country sound like a dictatorship. We the people of the United States of America deserve to pick our leaders. But say if you were part of the electoral college you would like this situation. So put yourself in their shoes would you like it or not. Of course you would you hold the power of picking the president. Its honestly probably the most stressful job in the world.\n\nSee if we had a vote to see if we should have to electoral college i think alot of people would vote no. I dont see why we cant have this vote as a country then there wouldnt be a topic to argue about. The electoral college is a decision that was not in the constitution i believe so it can be removed very easily. My opinion is that we take the electoral college out because it is causing nothing but arguing. We deserve to pick if we want to have a president we want or not. We deserve this power atleast, we dont have any power as regular people we deserve this. They shouldnt have the right to take this away from us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph narrarator willing accept adapt new environment like flower flower would Geese like warm cold flying south winter Saengs comfort tone many childhood memories including grandmother hibiscus flower She used flower warm environment So geese come back spring flower blossoms ready adapt life take drivers test The geese hibiscus flower symbolic memory old home misses much After things come try adapt ways life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Money places a vital role in each sector of the economy because it is the life blood of development. It is argued that capital should be spent on new public facilities such as historical museums or public halls instead of repairing existing ones. I totally disagree with this statement because is thought that there are some other important aspects to spend valuable resources of ministry such as the discipline, fitness and the defence.\n\n\nRegime earned income from taxes paid by the citizens so it is significant to spend such resources on most valuable aspects. There are various other departments such as the learning the strength and the defence which are primary important that public parks, museums and town halls. In most of the country's the present situation of education is degraded only because of lack of sufficient budget. As a result, the illiteracy level is up to the peak. Therefore, in such countries state should not spend their limited income on construction of the new buildings they must spend their capital on most needy sectors to develop their nation position in the world in lieu of education and health.\nMoreover, the country's power should focus on the renovation of old historical monuments because it will not put a financial burden on authorities and they can manage it in easy way. It will provide them assistance in two ways. Firstly, administration can save their huge resources which they can use them in the future for public welfare. Secondly, after restoration, many tourists will attract towards historical buildings which will help to generate tourist revenue for the union.\nTo sum up, although, the idea of building new public facilities is not bad politics should focus on other necessary aspects of citizens if they have limited resources. Every nation should grow themselves of their citizens are sound in the basic needs of life such as a sound education, and a sound well-being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a widespread belief that voluntary community work should be mandatory for young individuals. Although charity work does provide some value, I am more convinced that forcing them to take part in these activities is rather unfair.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the positives, a crucial advantage of unpaid services is that they inculcate a high sense of responsibility towards the community among teenagers. Indeed, without involving in charitable organizations, they miss the chance to experience and gain insight into the underprivileged in real life. As a result, they would not propose adequate solutions to solve these social problems in the future. Furthermore, a volunteer program is a chance for youngsters to develop various skills, which can be seen as a beneficial asset for their resumes. For instance, their communication and teamwork skills can be improved when they collaborate with friends to help the elder or orphans.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are still some disadvantages when forcing young people to take part in unpaid jobs. Firstly, the time devoted to community services can be time-consuming. Undoubtedly, students have to set aside their studying time to join these activities. The second drawback is that if this policy is mandatory, it can pose a stressor for the young generation. Besides studying, most of them already have multiple responsibilities to tend to, like developing their own project, working part-time, or implementing the activities of their club. Adding public service as an obligation will make them feel being stripped of their freedom. Then, the values of voluntary spirit will be lost.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite some benefits in terms of a sense of responsibility and skill development, charity services are still overshadowed by the downside.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I would like tell computers without world would fall apart For example peoples jobs fix make sell also people work home need computer jobs Without soo many people would jobs geting paidless Also kids need education reasons example broken finger couldent hold pencil would type In addition student needed answer question help could go online get answer learn Theres many ways computer run help person For example could need directions ones phone number answers Also buy line live far away favorite stare fast der line Also I believe kids get computer go side exercise day many weight people people walk instead siting computer day woulden many weighted people In addition people need exercise without people would get faty lazy sleepy sick angery deppression would every ones benifit people would exercise In addition without computers alot peoples lives would fall apart people need exercise everyting fine", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "its The woman asked third time CAPS hall left bathrooms I said fiftieth time I grimaced walked showroom didnt say anything My dad worked small company produced giftshoplike knickknacks like snow globes like offered job sixth grade year helping work Little I know saying meant traveling standing middle hallway huge building telling people showroom When working manufacturing trade industry often dont meet smartest welleducated people You really need patience want get anywhere CAPS dollars hour dollars hour I muttered middleaged man walked read name tag blue and white company logo youngs incorporated CAPS youre youngs asked Do know show room I could tell thinking Why adolescent working cooporation CAPS hall left bathrooms I said robotic voice CAPSt little young kind work asked You expecting maybe intern I thought hastily I instead replied complacent CAPS sir CAPS old asked quizzically CAPS sir I lied I knew I could pass high schooler I knew believe I really wishing would move along I getting pretty edgy I already beginning imagine would happen I grabbed tie yanked hard I could Doing day healthy Are getting paid enough put likes I thought I took deep breath answered yes sir But its lot Its like volunteer work really dont ask questions I thought smiled walked thanks son Youre welcome I said partially clenched teeth I think well agree I patient day And I hope man bought boatload stuff dads shop didnt I put That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that having electorals college is a great idea for our counries because they also help the voters with thier votes also because all the other people have candidate which makess it easy for electors who democrafts in texas because they know this will not have any effect in them otherwise they wouldnt vote but the electors need good reasons why the voters should vote for them so you would need to have specific facts and good source and why would you make a great president or why you think your better than the other elector all this questions and more you have to persuade them in any possible way but with truth no lies like if you promise the world for better oppportunities you have to prove to them youre actually willing to do this and be part of thier lives by changing the way they live not only that but you have to accomplish your goals . At the end whoever has more votes is the winner the people who voted for you are especting the best out of you bascally thier putting all thier trust in you, someone they have no clue who you are and why are the exact reason your thier or what your goals are,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story like ready move life When everything turns back take test move But flowers gone worry school For example wrote Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quiet repetition season upon season almost familiar like geese This means use change accepted situation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern world, the importance of higher level of education grows. Many people debate to justify empowering students to challenge their teachers is harmless, while others may feel uncomfortable doing so. Analysing the fact that the benefits of a liberal classroom outweighs the negative impact of having poor manners will prove the point.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, allowing students to question their teachers may encourage creativity in the new generation. For instance, pupils in westernised classrooms are given the privilege to ask and talk back to their educators. This form of teaching enhances their ability to think out of the box. Without any doubt, students will understand the importance of freedom of speech, which aids them to tackle this fast paced society. Hence, it is understood that students should be encouraged to challenge their teacher.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, students should simply follow instructions as disobedience is deemed to be rude. For example, in the Chinese culture, no one even talks when teachers are speaking as they will be punished if they do. In such an environment, students learn to become an amazing listener as knowledge is being fed. Students develop great characteristics to succeed in life with the trade-off being caged up by schools.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is believed that students should be given the permission to question their teachers. Instead of being trained to be book smart, they gain from learning flexibly flexible learning. With that being said, it can be suggested that students should respect their teachers, understanding that in any circumstances, speaking in a disrespectful manner shall not be tolerated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are the next step in the future, but are they the safest step? Google has been working on these cars for a long time and have had cars that work properly since 2009. With all the technology in the world today it is possible to make these cars, but like cellphones and other devices cars can make mistakes or malfunctions causing the car and person inside to be in danger. If the car were to go wrong, the makers of that car could get in a lot of trouble. Instead of driverless cars to save fuel, there should just be regular cars that are more fuel efficiant. This will keep car companies in buisness, people safer, and driverless car companies out of trouble.\n\nIf driverless cars were made, not every company could keep up with these cars. Everyone would want the newest thing and it would cause the smaller car companies to go out of buisness. Making cars that save more fuel would be easier for the smaller comanies to supply than making driverless cars. Driverless cars could also go wrong and put people in danger. If the person was seriously injured, people would see that and not want to buy the cars. This makes all the money the companies spent on cars go to waste because the driverless cars went out of style. Lets say a person was to get injured off a driverless car. That person could then sue the company because they were not the ones driving, the car was. Driverless cars are a bad idea.\n\nDriverless cars should not be made but instead cars saving more fuel should. Cars like a Prius are getting around 50-55 miles every gallon which is amazing. If car manufactions made other models of cars getting the same or close to the mileage that a Prius gets, traveling would be a lot easier. Even though google has been working on these cars for so long, nothing is perfect. There will always be some glitch in a system that could cause the car to go wrong. Driverless cars should not be used and people should stick to regular cars that we use today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i was a scientist at NASA and i had to support thr fact that i think the face is a naturual landform I would empasize that, Life on ars is not likely becuase it has not beeen proven. Just because there are items or land marks that lead to life on Mars does not mean there has been any. Theface is indeed a natrual landform, how? because if you go by the diffrent images included in the article you notice the cleared the images,the face slowly dissapears or fade away. The Face can also appear by things in spaces or objects reflecting unto the mesa.\n\nThere are many landforms in Mars and the Face happens to be one. For people to say that aliens are the ones causing it to look like a Face is also a arguement. Why ould support this detail? because of so many life forms on Earth people assume that someone had to make that happen. Perhaps aliens did indeeds have something to do with the \"Face\" , why would they make so clearly and if they did , why did updated cameras show that the clearer the image the face slowly decided to dissapear.\n\nOn the other hand there are people who support the fact that the Face is just another landform on Mars. Well as you can tell Mars always had many landforms and The Face happens to be one. How can you prove that? people might ask. Well when Viking caught the images of the Face, ot certainally goes along with the fact that it does look like a FAce but agai the clearer the image got, the face slowly dissaper. When the face does disspear, slowly the landform starts to look like all the other landforms on\n\nMars or mesas.\n\nMant people doubt the fact that it is alien, why? because you usually do not see aliens in sight, unless you are watching a movie or reading a book about them.\n\nAliens could hav eindeed built it , but there has not been an actual sighting on aliens anywhere on Earth, and aliens are usually portrayed as bad people or ting sin movies or books so seeing that a Face on Mars is created by a alien would be kind of frightning because if they are portrayes as bad thing , why would they want a face on a landform. What does that mean?\n\nNow on my side of the story or opinion it clearly looks like a landform and the way it got it's \"face\" was by something reflecting off an object and making it seem like someone had of built that,\n\nBut again. those images do not show anything about a face and how could have \"aliens\" buolt something so clearly and so presised. The clues just don't go together.\n\nIn conclusion until realistic facts are proven i would stick wit the face that these are natrual landforms and \"aliens\" had nothing to with the fact that they built it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you heard of the the viking 1 photo from 1976? Well if you havent im going to tell you about it and that its a lie what\n\nthe skeptics were saying.\n\nThe viking 1 photo was a so called a\n\n\"human face.\" But really it was a mesa on the planet Mars. The reason skeptics were calling this real was because there were unusual shadows. Those shadows made it look like a human face or even a Egyptian Pharaoh. The shadows gave the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\n\nThen, on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and the Mars orbiter camera snapped a picture ten times sharper than the viking photos. The photos reveald a natural landform. This natural landform was called a mesa. The skeptics still didnt beleive that it was a mesa. They said this because the camera had to peer through whispy clouds.\n\nFinally, again on\n\nApril 8, 2001 a cloudless day on Mars the Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a closer look. Malin's team had captured an extraordinary photo. they did this by using the camera's maxium resolution. Also the camera's pixels were better in 2001 compared to 1976. In 2001 the pixels image span was 1.56 meters compared to 1976 viking photo. The viking photo had a pixel image span of 43 meters.\n\nFinally, now if you think the images are real still then I dont know what to tell you. But beleive what you want the images taken in 2001 proved that the \"human face\" on Mars is fake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a wide notion that teenagers could work for the public in their spare time without financial compensation. This is a rather controversial argument with pros and cons, which will be explored in this essay.\r\n\r\nEmployment nowadays is a major issue concerning the quality of life. Teenagers, also, face difficulties in having sources of income. However, one can hold the opinion that a youngster could profit from working without a standard wage. One of the advantages could be gaining work experience through hardships. Additionally, apart from money earning, an adolescent may learn through cooperation to expand social skills and furthermore, to strengthen personality traits quite useful for later stages of life. This kind of industry could also prove invaluable for the rest of society and the economy of a country, as it is translated to budget cuts for a workforce.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, a job without a salary could bring up morally unacceptable matters. Such as job ethics and employee rights. That has to do with social equality and it is an issue of societal justice.\r\n\r\nWhen a person offers to the community, it is imperative that he should get money in return, so as to have a quality of life. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion unpaid work cannot be a mainstay for community employees of any age. Especially for teenagers which could lead to a sort of discrimination called ageism. Even young people could benefit from participating in community affairs, but they should as well have secured a stipend for any activity they are involved in actively. An example of paid job in the community for a teenager is caregiving for the elderly, a youngster could benefit from the interaction with older people and earn money, too.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I hold a critical position against uncompensated labour. I strongly support the idea that adolescents could benefit from working in the state, but they should train themselves to demand morally acceptable standards of employment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aooooh seven I wer going able ride hoder hunt able hinting ever said alex mictiory advernter wea fun place routenas I waiting line ride I getting this mybrother said calm half way thor I cant long line replied alex speer tire try tell reason hand behave talk us ok replid alex I talk reple front ever ridi already lot I thnked brother infounationi master find reson Thats patient time alex help brother", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar charts presented illustrate the division of age groups in two countries, India and France, in 1984. The charts are divided by age group and gender. Overall, it is possible to noticed that both countries had a roughly equal division for the population percentage between males and females in all ages.\nWhile India's largest population in the given year was composed by children aged 0-5, France largest population rate was adults aged 30-35. People between the ages of 60-65 represented India's lowest percentage at about 1% for both women and men. Males that were more than 85 years old were the ones with the lowest proportion in France (less than 1%).\nWhen analysing India's population, we note that there was a tendency of shortage in the percentage of the population, both for male and female, as the age incresed. The only exeption of this trend are people aged 70 or more, that had slightly higher rate than the previous age (65-70).\nRegarding France's population, the percentage rate fluctuated between all ages, the lowest being for men aged 85 or more (less than 1%) and the highest for females between ages 30 and 35 (4%).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System to detect and identify human emtions can be valuable for students in a classroom. The use of this technology in the classroom can help students on a more individual level and help the students that may straggle behind and help them better while getting many students done as possible. The computer can be like an effective human instructor which helps students when by themselves or working by themselves in a classroom. The same technology can be used for video sugery in a different type of situation in a classroom where a person would be learning about surgery.\n\nThe detection and identifying of human emotions can help a student when the student is using a classrooom computer and the computer recognizes when a student is becoming confused at a subject and not understanding it, the computer can modify the lesson to become easier to understand. The same could be said for other emotions a student can display such as becoming bored and the classroom computer can detect this as being either the lesson is too easy and boring or the lesson is boring and can modify it until it improves and fit the student. Other emotions can help the classroom computer indentify any problems a student is facing automated on a more individual level catering to what level a student is at rather than compared to the current classroom environment where a teacher has to focus on a group and takes time to focus on each person. With these tools and the computers a large amount of students can be helped individually rather than one at a time with one teacher.\n\nIn other use of the technology can be valuable for students varying in different classes, grade levels, and can help others learn about emotion in a class related to or about emotions. The use of this technology in every classroom and every grade level is not limited by any means and can store a large amount of data easily retrieved to help a student whether they are in elementary school or high school or even in a university.\n\nIn conclusion,\n\nthe Facial Action Coding System Technology can be extremely valuable to a student in the classroom although having a few downsides such as cost for a computer than can handle the technology and the amount of comptuers for a classroom full of students, but the benefits outweigh the costs signifigantly in that every student can learn better no matter what level they are at or who they are. It can help in guiding on an individual level at any time without the assistance of a teacher which can only focus on one person at a time or talk generally to a group.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it will open up the world for you, it opened up the world for me. One thing I learned is to be aware of people of other countries needs.\n\nIn this program people are sent over seas with hundreds of\n\nanimals. After the war in 1945 was over in Europe many countries were left in ruins, this program is helping other countries recover food supplies, animals, and lots of other things.\n\nIn this program 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation).\n\nI think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it might change the world for you,\n\nwhen you join you are not just traveling you are also helping other people in different countries.\n\nIt takes about 2 days to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States.\n\nIt took 1 month to get to China.\n\nOne of you will have to check on the animals at night, the animals need to be fed or watered about 2 to 3 times a day.\n\nOn the way back\n\nsince there are no animals you can play games like tabletennis tournaments, fencing tournaments,boxing tournaments, reading, whittling, and many more games in the empty stalls. Games help you pass time while over seas. The cattle-boat trips are great opportunity to go over seas, help other people's countries, and to get to travel to China and other places!\n\nThe most trips that the Seagoing Cowboys program has ever had was nine trips. If you turn or are 18 you could be drafted for military services. Caring for the animals during the crossings will keep you busy. Bales of hay and bags of oats have to get pulled up from the lower holds of the ship, for the animals to snack on so they don't starve over seas. The animals stalls had to be cleaned. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a opportunity of a lifetime!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Almost everyone effected computers sort way Some people think computers bad people spend much time computers The thing computers help us everyday life If want comunicate people around world send donations places need like use computers We chang people s lifes third world countries help computers Computers also help us school When student write report bad handwriting type print Or student research essay find information easily computer Maybe kid forgot homework go school website find My last point would computers huge help buisnesses When files lost misplaced worker use computer bring backup file When need order supplies times go web site order online Or updates posted coming events company email sent found using computer Many people think people overuse computers users fault We choose long using one computers Many jobs would impossible computers It s overusing So I say computers good useful used right hands", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are the Future\n\nEver been inside of a driverless car, do you want to? Driverless cars are now starting to emerge. Driverless cars are cars that do not need the assistance of a driver. Many companies and places have come up with the idea but yet to sucessfully have one that functions indepentdently. Driverless cars I believe are a great idea. But some people disagree with the idea. I believe that driverless cars are a good idea because I think that there will be less car accidents.\n\nOne reason I believe that driverless cars are good idea is because I think that they will prevent less accidents. They would prevent less accidents because they could control speed limits and such things. As said in the article, the Google Cars have been driven over half a million miles without a crash. This means that their technology is so far up to date that it can navigate through so many obstacals. But also mentioned in the article, Google Cars aren't truly driverless.\n\nSome people have come to the assumption that Driverless Cars are dumb. Why you ask? The reason is becasue what if two people who are driving these \"driverless cars\" get into an accident, is it the owners fault or the manufactures fault? Also another reson why people may not like the idea id because all of the roads would have to redone. That would cost a fortune. The reason all the roads would have to be redone is because, some if not most of the cars, they would require a electrically controlled field of magnets to keep these driverless cars on the roads.\n\nAnother reason why people would disagree is because they think that having driverless car would increase the risk of having an accident or being in one. The reason is because all of these younger teens who are just getting their licences, they will think \" oh yeah this car can just drive itself i dont need to do anything,\" and once that happens the next thing you know they are either going to end up in a hospital or in an accident.\n\nI don't really care weither people get or have a driverless car, yes it would cool but there would just be some many problems. Most people either choose to like the driverless cars or they choose to hate them, but me, I'm in the middle I don't really care honestly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I peronally believe that driverless car should not become a \"thing.\" I think that it could become easier for teens or even younger kids to get in a car and just take off without knowing what they are doing. I am pretty old-fashioned with a lot of things and this happens to one of them.\n\nVehicles were made for transportaion purposes, generations of millions of teens 15+ have been waiting their whole life to be able to get their license. I love this because it is mostly always parents who teach their kids how to drive and I think it is a great bonding experience, even if it goes badly. We learn from out mistakes, so why would we want a car to drive for us. I think it would be cool to see but I also think its just laziness.\n\nThis is a bad idea all together in my opinion. Sure it might sound cool, easy, or safer and it may make you not feel that bad about yourself if youv'e been in or caused an accident but driving cars has been around for a very long time so why try and introduce something thats just gonna make the creators rich and the people more lazy. Dricing a vehicle may be scary or you may hate drving, but it's important. It is a part of frowing up to me, I would hate to recieve a car that does all the work for me basically. I want to learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why does electoral college still have its defenders, Abolish the electoral college!... Electoral College was a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. I am writing to the state senator of florida to argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. I am certain that we should keep the eletoral college because of three simple reasons. The Electoral College is a way of certainty of outcome. Swing states, and to Aviod run-off elections.\n\nTo commence I say the system of electoral college should stay because it has a certaint of outcome. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible. This has happened before in 2000. In 2012 election, for Obama he received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney, the Republican nominee for president in 2012. electoral votes arenon a winner-takes-all basis. A tie in the nationwide electora vote is possible because the total number of votes 538 is an even number.\n\nTo continue the second reason why I think th electoral votes should stay is becasue of sing states. The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign to really listen to the competing candidates knowing that they are going to decide the election. The most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\n\nLast but not least electoral voting should stay because to aviod run-off elections. The Electoral College also aviods the problem of election in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 are good examples, they both only a had 43 percent plurality of the popular votes. Some potential voters who have no hope have less in centive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular votes.\n\nTo briefly wrap up I argue in favor for the Electoral Votes to stay because of the certainty of outcome, swing states, and lastly to aviod run-off elections. In some people's opinion's they would disagree, but they will not have enough facts to support why they disagree, because honestly Electoral Votes is always the way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although art is recognized as a versatile subject around the world, there are people who think that it is an important subject for children at school, others argue that it is a waste of their time. I agree with the former argument that art is impeccable for holistic mind growth in children.\nOn the one hand, it is often argued that there is no tangible benefit of studying art. This is because there are very limited career prospects for people who study art. For example, people with a qualification in the arts often find it difficult to secure a job which is permanent and well paid. In contrast, people with a credential in other disciplines such as business, engineering or medicine, conveniently find jobs which are not only permanent and well paid but also highly recognized in the society. \nOn the other hand, I would disagree that since art is a useless subject because it does not offer a well awarded career. Teaching art at school level is essential for a holistic mind growth in children. Art allows children to not only explore their creativity, but also enable them to express their ideas and emotions. This not only improves their communication skills but also enhances their emotional quotient which helps them substantially later in their future careers.\nIn conclusion, while other people’s opinions may vary, I think that art plays an inevitable role in the overall mindset development of children which helps them to enhance their communication skills and emotional quotient for their future challenges. Therefore, art should be taught to children at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features affect cyclist big way For one heat beating made sweaty hot tired The heat also made thirst led drink lot water little amount time ran water next town Also fact desert trees give time shade could rest There also people around help give water So ride struggled thought could", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think its time to get rid of Electoral College? Or change to election by popular vote for the presdient of the United States?\n\nAn Electoral College constist of 538 electors but a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. To win so easily by just getting Electoral votes just seems really unfair. We should change to election by popular vote for the president of United States because it seems like a more fair challenge to earn the title of President of the United States.\n\nEach candidate running for presdient in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generaly chosen by the candidates poltical party, but state laws vary on how the electors are slected and what their responsibillites are.\n\nWhat the electoral college system does is you dont vote for the president, you vote for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. As an example of Electoral college system , Stated in paragraph 10 \"If you lived in Texas, for instance, And wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, You'd vote for slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry. On the off-change that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to cocngress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes\". The electors can be anyone not holding a public office.\n\nThat just doesnt sound fair to win an election just by having more electoral votes, when you have less popular votes.\n\nBasically the Electoral College is unfair to voters, because of the winnter-take-all ssytem in each state. Candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. 25 if the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the prsidency in the hands of a few swing voters Ohio, They have yet to make it.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. It doesnt make sense to have such a thing for out presidents. They should win by popular votes because it will be fair to let out people choose who should win not only 270 electoral votes, out of thousands of people that want to vote normally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story winter hibiscus Minfong Ho I believe author ended story paragraph shows Hibiscus plant enough strength come back flourish enough strength come back take test For example story says but strong enough make cold months This quote shows hibiscus plant strong And Saeng sees plant strong enough return cold winter return test failing Overall I think Saeng hibiscus plants strong", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does not support his idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The author includes positive encounters for astronomers if having the chance to travel to Venus, the author also includes the dangers of going to Venus, but he or she never connects the two opinions very clearly. Lastly, the author gives multiple statistics on planet Venus, which does not present in any way whether or not he or she believes traveling to Venus is worth all of the danger it upholds.\n\nIn this article, the author makes many upsides for reasearchers having the opportunity to go and see Venus. Like all the spectcular things you would never beable find or discover anywhere else. The text states, \"Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance.\" The text also states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" These two examples from the text correlate to the statement that the author only lists reasons that traveling to Venus will positively affect the world today, and in no way does the author relate back to the dangers it presents.\n\nThe author also includes, in this article, some of the dangers of traveling to Venus, and even questions why astronomers, and researchers, do it. The author says, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This example shows that out of all the spacecrafts sent to Venus, not one has safely made it back to Earth. The author also says, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" In this statement, the author questions why astronomers keep trying to put themselves into danger when Venus has openly taught them how unsafe it is to do so. These two pieces of evidence represents how the author includes some of the dangers that traveling to Venus brings, and how the author somewhat questions the point of making these travels himself.\n\nThis texts is mainly made up of statistics. 'Interesting' facts about Venus today, and what it was like long ago. The author also compares planet Earth and planet Venus to one another. The text shows, \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar systerm even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" The author also includes, \"Venus, sometimes called the 'Evening Star,' is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\" These examples show a couple of facts about what Venus is like today. The text also states some facts about Venus from years before our time. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans.\" Another example from the text is, \"Long ago, Venus could also have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" These two examples show a few facts about what Venus was like long ago. All of these examples from the text shows the inclusion of statistics about Venus much rather then the author using details to support his suggestion of Venus being worthy despite all of the danger.\n\nThese examples from the text support the claim that the author does not do a very well of a job supporting his or her idea that 'studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.' The author mainly focuses on the statistics, dangers, and positive sides to visiting Venus, although, he or she never clearly relates these ideas back to one another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The concept of the automobile in the early 1900s was enough to make others pursue the dream of having one. As car dealerships made better looking, faster, high performance cars, the more people wanted them. After World War II when cars became inexpensive, more and more people had them. But it's also becoming an issue. Recently, that trend is going down.\n\nTo begin, the car industry has been at an all time high. We're making cars so fuel efficient, it almost seems impossible. We even have hybrid cars, which run on electric and fuel (respectively). But with all of the cars out there, especially in the US, the pollution in nations and our own cities are at an all time high. China's air pollution is the worst in the world. Nations have been taking the initiative to partially ban car use for a few days. Paris for instance, banned motorists with even-numbered license plates from using their vehicles, switching to odd-numbered the following day.\n\nFurthermore, we have Bogota, Colombia who took a different approach to the rising air pollution. Instead of what Paris did, they banned automobile use in general, for one day. Buses and taxis still ran, but private vehicles did not. This seeminly little feat over time has done wonders on the city. More and more cities, including nations, are beginning this practice.\n\nTo sum things up, we see that there are advantages (and of course disadvantages) to limiting car use. Companies may lose money if they transport items. But as a whole, it's only a few days. Or even one day, that no one drives a vehicle. It's a perfect time to ride a bike, and lower air pollution in a city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For year two months I d devoted life horses school We started friends grade escalated relationship grade We ended breaking later year continued remain friends Obviously I still cared I nt believe d felt But apparently I wrong began new relationship pm It perfect start perfect relationship He I inseperable get go literally everything together I irrevocably love Between two us shared crazy memories inside jokes I could probably write best selling novel memories I honestly believed I going together forever I thought everythign going fine till lay liked someone else At point I idea relationship I stood I nt want know I couldnt keep putting heart open going get stomped I loved willing anything make work I stayed night talked till He I decided attempt make work guarantee going The next day everything seemed fine I still extremely irritated liked another girl I using power make best We decidded take dog walk We held hands walked quiet Why He texting By time I decided final straw It felt like I getting way I felt choice I left leave I walked door hour later absolutely devistated I cried till I felt I could nt cry anymore I would cry At time I truly felt world ending right My life My days became long depressing I felt I could give My heart shattered everytime I saw made even worse people constantly asked happened I could nt tell nt moment I would want relive I could nt stop thinking memories d shared That year two months greatest period life Almost everytime I thought I would cry I could nt stand thought thinking time made walking zombie I could nt eat I could nt drink I would vomit stress But I sat alone thinking memories miracle happened I laughed I shocked made realize I needed keep living I nt regret time I spent changed life He taught much loving someone I knew small laugh things going get better A spark hope I would happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives mood created one love family friends The author explains parents reasons immigrating love devotion hard feel way The author describes everyone would eat together often many people eating The author says countless extended family members came went continues describe family lets family members come stay get back feet The author really shows mood excerpt loving way saying always grateful parents moving The author shows truely cares family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People all over the world are saying goodbye to their cars and saying hello to different, old-fashioned ways of transportation. This new trend involves walking, bike riding, and other types of public transportation. Certain cities, like Vauban and Paris, have started to set limitations on car usage. These limitations include days where cars with specific license plates' are not allowed to drive that day or even complete days where no driving is allowed, failure to follow these rules results in a fine. Most citizens of these towns have been following these rules and have found to be quite rewarding. These advantages include stress relief and a happier attitude, less greenhouse emission into the atomosphere, and a overall better environment. Limiting car usage is more beneficial than it is negative.\n\nOne of the most beneficial parts of not using a car often would be the loss of stress and a increase in a happy attitude. Most people who have participated in the limitation of car use have had positive feed back. One woman in Vauban, Germany, where most citizens are giving up their cars, said \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.\" (Rosenthal, 3). Another man in Bogota, Colombia participating in their car-free day said \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress...' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\" (Selsky, 24). All around people who have joined this trend have started to become happier and less stressed as the start to leave their cars behind.\n\nAnother advantage of limiting car usage would be less greenhouse emission into the atomosphere. Cars play a huge part in greenhouse emission into the atomosphere, so limiting the usage would have such a positive result. According the the article\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive ares in the United States.\" (Rosenthal, 5). Knowing that, cutting out cars would minimize the greenhouse gas emission a huge percent in certain regions, like the United States. The article\n\nThe End of Car Culture discusses how the amount of people who own cars keeps getting progressively lower each year, which will help with greenhouse emission. After discussing statistics of the amount of people who own cars in America, the article goese on to say, \"If this pattern persists - and many sociologoists believe it will - it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest sourse of America's emissions...\" (Rosenthal, 34). With limiting the amount of car usage the atmosphere will be exposed to a lot less greenhouse emission.\n\nOne huge advantage of limiting the usage of cars would be a overall better environment. Many cities are so polluted and have air filled with smog, like Beijing and Paris. Some of this smog comes from cars. Paris is doing something to stop their smog from becoming any worse, they are banning driving. \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\" (Duffer, 11). A similar situation is happening in Bogota, Columbia. Bogota started a car-free day to help with their situation. \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines.\" (Selsky, 21). These new limitations on car usage are going to help save the environment.\n\nOverall, the limitations that are being put on car usage have many advantages. The lack of car usage in certain areas is helping to create a better environment, give out less greenhouse emission, and give people a happy attitude. Putting limitations on car usage has benefited many areas and continues to benefit them now. Most of these places are continuing to progress and put more limitations on cars as they head into a nicer, brighter future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many poeple visiting another planet has always been a dream for them. Imagine visiting a planet that is so simular to earth yet so differnet. This planet is called venus, \"it is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closests in distance too\"\n\nsays the author. So if its so close and so similar why arn't people there right now, well even tho venus is simular to the earth it is also very differnet and very dangerous. For mamy people this would be a dead end, how could you have hope and modivation to study something that cna kill you and is almost \"untouchable\". this was a big thing tht needing to be overcome.\n\nSo how dangerous is it you may ask? very dangerous. It is so dangerous that every mission that has been done to venus us unmanend because its even almost imposible for the spaceship to make it. The planet is very hot and the pressure is too high for any human to handel. However Venus is not just a useless hot planet. Venus was most likely covered in oceans and valleys just like our earth and it could have helped many forms of life. The author thinks its important to study this planet because it could help us later on. A way that nasa is thinking of solving this problem is to use a car like ship that will fly around venus up to thirty feet. This is might sound like a great idea but there is a problem, it it is not easy and will not really benfit us because we will only be able to see it from a distance, not actually going down there and getting rocks and other things to study them.\n\nIn conclusion if we can't to study venus we will have to take risks like loosing our lives. Most importably we have to have faith and be patent because good things come for those who wait, maybe 10 years from now we will have figured out a way of going to mars or maybe we will already be there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think teaching how to do this to students is a very good idea. Because if we teach this to students we can tell if a person is having a dad day and you can help them out or not. You could also tell if someone is happy or sad. You could tell if they are havin g a dad day and you could try and make them have a good day. You could tell if someone was having suicidle thoughts or is just joking. If you see someone that is happy you could try and keep them happy all day. The author also tells you could not do this with your home PC because it coundn't handle the complex algorithms that you would need for this to work. He tells you what muscles to look for that are bieng used if you try this on a lab partner. He tells you what muscles that are needed for a genuine smile and what muscles to look for on a forced smile. Like in a real smile the person would be using Zygomatic major(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. But in a false smile the person would be using the muscles called the Zygomatic muscle and the risorius muscle also.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, some individuals are more likely to start having children when they are much older. Even though spending moments together as a couple is a vital part of building relationships, it is more important to meet one's overall set goals rather than having private time alone. In the long run, goal achievement will eventually include success in most of the basic aspects of life.\r\n\r\nGenerally, young adults are usually advised to get married at least by the age of thirty in order to help them plan their lives better. Part of this strategy will include having offspring because the medical professionals support this due to the fact that older couples may give birth to heir with certain abnormalities and older mothers usually have a higher risk of complications in pregnancy. Eventually, the parents may be unhappy with their situation which could affect their mental and emotional well-being as well as their overall productivity at work and at the home front. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when couples decide to start childbearing at a later period than usual, there are usually many years to work, strategize and save up for all the necessary resources to train their wards. For example, education these days have become very expensive in addition to other materials that young people require to achieve optimal education. Individuals whose parents are able to provide them with good education usually become very fulfilled in life. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we live in a society where most people have huge commitments in various areas of their lives. Hence, many individuals choose to start bearing their offspring at a much older age compared to before so as to afford them more enough space to work towards achieving their expectations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates nice mood The mood creates comforting yet time grateful happy The author creates comforting mood talks home family grew He talks parents played Cuban music cooked Cuban meals turned Simple house home When talks generous wonderful people parents reader feels sense comfort Also talks lived neighbor hood closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need The reader feels sense comfort The author also creates greatful mood always talking always grateful parents love sacrifice The author greatful things parents done leaving Cuba jobs family everything behind left could better life well raised things child hood Throughout memoir author constantly creates comforting grateful happy mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers it represents.\n\n''Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system''\n\nEven though Venus is not the nearest planet to the sun it has the hottest surface that mean that if the humans land on Venus the astronous would died instanlly because of the difference of the weather in Venus.\n\n''Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters'' That's some of the reasons why humans want to explore Venus, beacuse the planet is very similar to the Earth. In three decades non spaceship has touched Venus that means that humans are interested in exploring Venus because they want to know why the spaceships can't survive more than few hours in Venus. And how the vegetation can survive with the hot weather.\n\nIf the humans get to Venus again they will have some challenging stuff ''A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus... On the planet surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirience on our own planet.'' The difference between the Earth and Venus is notable and maybe we don't have the tegnology to go to Venus jet.\n\nIn conclution if the humans get to Venus they need to be prepare because some of the tries that they'll have will go wrong, NASA need to be prepare to sacrify some people to complete their goal beauce is not going to be easy to complete.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I simple house myparents welcomed refugees celebratetheir arrival country whenI celebrated first birthday I thewarmth kitchen humblehouse cuban feast always filledthe air scent loveIt learned thereal definition family And I never forget house I never forget house s graciousneighborhood many things learnedthere love I never forget house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Looking back over the article, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages to the Facial Action Coding System. Starting of with disadvantages in the FACS, thinking about a computer that is so intelligent, it knows what kind of mood you are in ands thats in your house. As a human being that can be kind of scary or keep you on guard a lot. Another disadvantage of this high end technology is when humans know their face is being scanned they can cheat the system and flex other muscles in their face to create another type of mood for the computer to read. Can face scanning really be acurrate? Imagine theopening of a whole different line of technology with the FACS. That is another whole different part of advantages and disadvantages. Opening up FACS to the world for some people would be difficult, but to others that are very interested in technology and coding could easily quit their job, move on to the FACS program as a computer engineer and work on Face scanning for the rest of their life. The only problem with that sort of technology is how many people would be able to go into that line of business and what all would you have to go though to be a certifited FACS engineer.\n\nAdvantages of the FACS, Imagine if the FACS were to be used in court to tell if someone is lying or if they're scared. There is already such thing as a lie detector test but in some cases those aren't always as accurate as they may seem. Using FACS would blow a lie dector out of the water with how intelligent and how more advanced in technology it is. Another great example of a advantage to using the FACS would be when someone that doesn't belong on a computer the FACS system would reconize that and shut down the computer so no harm would be done or no innapropriate searches could be made. Within years FACS could be more advanced then it is today, research and development, higher intelligence level and more investors wanting and willing to invest their money to make money.\n\nAs of now there are more advantages than disadavantages and The government will find a way to get their hands on this technology and push it past the limits to developing what no one ever thought could be done before. Money won't be a issue and cyber-crime will be cut in half with the new FACS technology. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" there was a lot of opinnionated statements and unsupported statements. For example the author said that making a happy face in the experiment would make us \"slightly\" more happy and then puts it on the FAcial Feedback Theory of Emotion, that it can help produce facial expression.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s world, the fierce rivalry among business entities has given rise to a proliferating number of advertisements broadcast on almost every means of media. While this phenomenon is not without positive influence, its adverse implications are more significant. Therefore, there will be some solutions proposed in this essay to diminish its negative effects on consumers.\n\n \n\nNeedless to say, a rise in the number of advertisements has allowed viewers to be more well-informed of the newly-launched products. Given the unprecedented rate of technological advancement in recent years, without these means of marketing, consumers may fall behind the most innovative features introduced to the market, which may impede them from making sensible purchasing decisions. However, such surge in adverts may bring about some underlying effects on purchasing behavior. Since consumers are constantly bombarded with advertising in various manifestations, they are more prompted to make a purchase without thorough consideration. It stands to the reason that promotional campaigns are designed to prey on humans’ insecurities such as their inferiorities in physical appearance or their desire for social inclusion; as a result, viewers are more liable to fall victim to buying unnecessary items out of spontaneity. Moreover, the competitiveness among companies has led advertisers to resort to dishonest tactics with the sole aim to boost sales. The most widely adopted strategy seems to exaggerate the true values of the advertised products, which induces the consumers to take preference of them and may lead to future purchases.\n\n \n\nThere are some possible solutions to tackle the problems engendered from such a trend. The most prominent responsibility should lie with the government since they are those who grant permission for adverts to be broadcast on mass media. Therefore, there should be a board of experts whose job is to screen, monitor and cross-reference the advertisement contents and their actual effectiveness. The public should also take actions to protect themselves. It is recommended that before buying an item, one should do some research by either consulting the previous buyers or taking their needs and affordability into serious consideration. With all of these measures joining forces, consumers are more liable to be well-protected from the invasion of misleading advertising.\n\n \n\nIn short, advertisements, with its genuine nature , should provide useful information about new products in the market. However, given the tough competition between companies, this marketing tool may provoke spontaneous purchasing decisions. Therefore, both the government and its citizens should take proactive measures in order to foster a healthy society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am writing a letter to my state senator in which i'm arguing if i'm in favor of keeping the Electoral College or Changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United states. I'm in favor of the election by popular vote for the president of the U.S.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair to voters. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. For instance if you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to kerry, they would go to Congress and kerry would get 34 electoral votes. Also its Unfair to the voters because of the winner-takes-all system. In each state candidates dont spend time in states they know have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. In the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all. In defense \"The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates, to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states.\" Ok but the winner-take-all system is still focusing on the ststes knowing that there going to vote for you, and notthe other states that possibly will or will not vote for you.\n\nAnother reason is that the Electoral college is just a disaster factor simple as that. In the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not actually gone to Kennedy. Also what if a state sends two slates of electors to congress? It happened in Hawii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who presided over the senate validated only his opponents electors making sure to do so ' without establishing a precedent.\n\nIn conclusion the Electoral college is unfair, irrational, and just a hotmess. Like Bob Dole said \"Abolish the Electoral College'.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people say it was created by aliens, some people think it is just a rock. That thing is The Face on Mars. In 1976 a spaceshuttle named the Viking one was taking pictures of the Red planet also known as Mars. To find a possable landing place for its sister Viking two. Vikking one was scanning one day and found something on the surface of Mars that resembled a face of a human. The people who were getting the pictures of Mars that were back on Earth were shocked to see a human face appear on another planet.\n\nIn the passage it says \" It looks like something that aliens made\". Like I said some people think its from aliens but, thats not logical. If aliens were real than I would believe it. Than again in the passage it also says that The \"face\" could be a mesa. Whenever they took a picture of it ten times sharper than the one before people still wouldn't believe that it is a rock and not an alien creation. When they say alien creation they think of an alien standing there and cutting into rock to make it look like a human face with a really big head.\n\nIn the passage it says that it is just a mesa. Some scientist think the way the shaddows are it makes the mesa look like a Egyptian Pharaoh. The passage says that they don't see it often and that they use cameras that go small strip by small strip all over the planet and take pictures. Since the Face on Mars has been discovered it has been popular it starred in movies, books, magazines, and people talk about it in talk shows on the radio, also people talk about in the line at he grocery story. It was discovered just about fourty years ago.\n\nIn my opinion I think it is some rocks that got covered up by dust overtime. If people think that it was created by aliens than that's their opinion. It has been scientifically proven that it was not created by aliens. If it was made by aliens then why would the aliens want us humans to know that there is life on that planet. But some pictures of the Face on Mars actually looks like a face but, that could just be the way the planet is getting light and reflected by the sun. So in my opinion I think it is a rock and all the people who think other wise they don't have proof to show that it is a alien creation.\n\nSo in conclusion this face on mars isn't a alien creation it is just rocks. In the passage it says that its a lava dome that takes place of an isolated mesa about the same size of the Face on mars which is two miles. So to all the people that think that it is an alien creation, its not. To be honest I think its just dust build up in some places, so when theres a shadow it shines off of it and makes a face that everyone freeks out about. Its just a big rock that does nothing I don't see why it would be a big deal in the first place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Increasingly, more individuals are keen to know the routes of the places they stay in. This might be because of their need to become aware of their importance as well as special maintenance requirements. There are a variety of ways that can be achieved. \r\n\r\nTo begin, there has been an increase in the need for people to understand the routes of the places they stay in. For some, it is just to know the value and importance of the houses and buildings they live in. This means that people will learn to attach value to these premises and therefore take good care of them. For example, knowing that one's house is of national value may influence their decision to keep it. In addition, knowledge may also understand how they have been constructed and the type of material used. This knowledge has an implication on the type of care given to these buildings.\r\n\r\nTo acquire the required information, I believe that extensive reading by occupants may assist them to know the history of the houses they live in. For example, the Second Pope found out intriguing information regarding the mansion he inherited from the first Pope while he was searching for the history of the establishment of religion in Asia in a local library. First-hand information could be another way of acquiring information about one's habitat. This is one very reliable source of information as this information can be passed on from one generation to the next and may save people the trouble to search as this could be done as tradition.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it has become quite common that more individuals to seek to understand the history of the buildings they live in. I believe that for the seekers, extensive reading, as well as generational first-hand information,first-hand information is a reliable way of getting what they need to know about their homes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear residents come attention controversy whether computers good thing andor helpful society I strongly believe computers helpful resource make day day life easier Computers help us many ways including making learning easier helps students better nad serves great teaching tool One reason I support computers make learning easier You might ask hao screen keyboard make learning easier sounds crazy true Let s say re middle student assigned write paper designated topic instead spending hours upon hours looking right information library could google search topic You exactly need know front within seconds prettty cool right Still nt believe computers helpful What I told allowed students better That s right computers allow students better Websites edline allow teachers post students grades quickly How helpful When take quiz treacher grade quizzes And things like absentees weekends vacations day get quiz back gets delayed Sometimes kids nt get quizzes back two weeks took By time get back time chapter test grade found nt one sections This lowers ability test But grade posted internet days time study know study test As see computers helpful students good teachers The answer yes computers good teaching tool Has ever happened No matter much teacher explains seems like speaking another language showed cool video youtube explaining Would learn better visual front I sure would Computers also great teachers gives ability email teachers problem get latest information s going Do understand computers useful I hope realize useful computers make learning easier allow students better great learning tool These many reasons computers useful I hope keep using community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a driverless car is utterly fascinating. As a society, we have often dreamed of a futuristic world with such ground-breaking technologies. But the actual driverless car is a work of fiction and could not possibly be incorporated in our world.\n\nDriverless cars cannot be achieved in their entirety and would be a waste of resources.\n\nIn paragraph 3, the author discusses how General Motors attempted the a driverless car on a specially-made road, but this idea could not work due to such massive expenses.\n\nThis is a major reason why driverless cars would simply not work.\n\nThese cars cannot be made or tested without millions of dollars. The research into self-driving cars would ruin the companies that produce them, ultimately negatively affecting the economy.\n\nAlso, if a driverless car was released into the public market, it would be too expensive for the average buyer.\n\nThe concept of the driverless car could also never come to manifestation due to the numerous states who currently require a driver in control of a moving vehicle. As stated in paragraph 9, \" California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of\n\nColumbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars[.]\"\n\nThough the passage takes an idealistic look at the changing of traffic laws, the truth is that such laws take a very long time to be changed through a very tedious process. Many government officials will see the driverless car debate as less important than current global issues and will not take action. The incorporation of driverless cars into day-to-day traffic would also raise many confusing questions and would place additional problems in the already hectic roads of today's modern world. The article itself raises a very good question,\" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nThe technology is bound to have a glitch somewhere down the line, if not a total failure. The American court system would not have a clear method of settling civil lawsuits.\n\nOnce that happens, there would be wide-spread controversy and the recalling of many driverless vehicles.\n\nEven if driverless cars could be made and put on the road without a problem , many people would not want to make the switch.\n\nMost of the American population strongly associates with his or her vehicle.\n\nMany families have a named car and thousands of people enjoy the sport of racing. As young adults, people view owning and driving a car as a new sense of freedom. Many people love the feeling of a steering wheel in their hands. Self-driving cars would take away the sense of pride,freedom,and control since the car would do almost everything without the need of personal skill.\n\nIn conclusion, the concept of driverless cars entering our day-to-day lives is a work of fiction.\n\nIt could not happen in the real world due to the series of problems it would raise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author actually supports this idea that venus is worthy to pursuit despite the dangers it presents very well. They do give us some information that may make us think its dangerous but he give us more information that supports his claim. In the passage the author talks about how Venus is very much like earth. It states that \"Often refered to as earths twin venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closest in distance too\"This shows how the author believes that Venus is like earth and if it is it means that was the authors suggests is very true.\n\nDespite some dagerous things in venus there was also beauitiful things. In the passsage it states 'Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth\" .This sentence explains to us the wonders of that Venus may have been that shows us and makes us see that venus had beautiful places and they had nothing to do with danger. Although yes Venus may not be safe now it was safe long ago. People who would have studided it before were not in danger because Venus was very much like earth. If venus is like earth than it is not dangerous because earth is not dangerous. In the passage it also states \"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet had a surface to rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters\". This statment explains to us the safe things venus has because mountains and and valleys and craters arent meant to be dangerous they are meant to be a place where people can go and study and see the beauties of the planets.\n\nThe Author does do a very good job suggesting what he believes. There is no doubt that Venus would be an amazing place to pursuit despite all the dangers. Some examples of why it is a good place to pursuit are it state in the passage\" venus can sometimes be our nearest option for plantary visit,a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\"This is saying that Alot of people love to pursuit earth so why not venus if its the next closest thing to earth. It would be good to pursuit beause there can be new features that can be found there may be life over there that we may not know about and if people would pursuit studying venus they can be the ones to find out further things about venus. Thats why stdying venus is worthy to pursuit because you can find very interesting things. There are more better things than dangerous things it outbeats it .All this evidence from the text is showing what the author suggests about venus and how it is very much true and he gives very good expmples of that and how he supports this idea very much.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dr. Paul Eckman (creator of FACS) has divided emotions into six main categories, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. Every day we recognize and use these subtle cues to comunicate everything from ordering coffee to\n\ndirecting the most powerful nation on the earth. Humans are naturally good at detecting these cues, as we need them for everyday living, but until very machines were not capable of this.\n\nThis technology has many applications, and putting them in students devices might one of the most practical and realistic of these aplications. A computer that can recognized when you are bored or confused can adjust the lesson and not lose valuable learning time explaining something over and over again. This sort of technoloy could e the future of learning if implemantated correctly this technology could be the futureof learning. Students of the future might just look at their computer and have a readjusted lesson plan in minutes, this would be a revolutionary in our antiquated learning system.\n\nThereis one drawback of this\n\nsytem however, the computers most students currently have do not have the power to run the extremly complicated algorhithims that are neccesary for Dr. Huang's emotion detection program. But this problem will eventually solve itself as procesing power be comes cheaper and cheaper and computers get more powerful everyday.\n\nThe computers that detect feelings in could become staples of modern education helping teachers and instructors worldwide. As computers shrink in size we could eventually see this emotional computers in every class helping each student progress.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times people are adhering to the culture of giving birth at older age. Most importantly this phenomenon affects the children in one aspect or the other. Therefore, this essay will highlight the pros and cons of giving birth at later age.\r\n\r\nThe pros of procreating at an early age leads to substantial consequences. Moreover, this arises as a result of people graduating at late age or those that are attaining to become prosperous people in life tend to settle down late thereby causing them to have their young ones at late stage in life, therefore the advantages of this is that their children are well brought up, have better attention and love and have the best life. For instance, a person who came out of the university at 30 years of age, such an individual would want to be financially stable before he would start his family.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn addition, the cons of having children at older age is due to the fact that such a person would not be able to have someone to attend or take care of him at his older age because most of his young ones will still be at a tender age, also, most of this individual are already close to their menopause especially the females theirby leading to no child output. For instance, those that engage in this practice are people who have no choice than to get married at late periods of their life, especially the late bloomers in marriage.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though the high rate of giving birth at higher age is becoming alarming, individuals should try to make sure that there is equilibrium in human affairs by giving birth at early age because it reduces health complications such fibromyalgia, heart risk and the likes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some masses admit that economic development is the only solution to eliminate world's poverty and hunger. While, other believe that economic revolution is demolishing the environment and should be stopped. In my opinion, economic growth is the better for any country's overall development and it helps to prevent poverty and hunger by generating employment opportunties. I shall discuss both the views further in the subsequent paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some people think that there is only one way left to eradicate the poverty and hunger by doing economic progress. Firstly, economic enhancement creates more jobs for people in the country. Due to this, they can easily afford their expenses and stay away from poverty and hunger. Secondly, profits made by the corporations who are responsible for this financial growth will be converted into the financial benefits to be enjoyed by the straving and needy. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary, there are countless examples to support this view that economic growth results in environmental destruction. To increase the industrialisation in the developing countries, many lowland rainforests have been cleared and plethora of unsustainable agriculture practice introduced to produce cash crops for export. What is more, there are many factories developing in countries to increase the international trade and it also enhance air pollution, which damages the enviornment at extreme level. For instance, continued use of fossil fuels, which provide energy for growing industrialisation, is causing global warming. It can lead to a rise in sea level, which will make millions of people in Bangladesh homeless.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, i would like to opine that economic growth must not be stopped unless, it is based on damaging the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should always save money for the future because this will add a better retirement and much more confortable life in the future by not needing to work so much. Saving money is a complex thing and it is important that people save money by doing the wright choices on spending less on useless things. Not paying taxes to the state it is a very riscous and inapropriated thing to do instead this would probaly give more trouble and more expenses to the person. There is a phrase that says \"You pay taxes when you are making money\" , this is an intrigant phrase that try to show that wheater you are earning money you are paying more tax and that is how it is supposed to be. Paying taxes may bring you indirectly benefits like a better life quality since the state will provide with with benefits and infrastructure, so in a way it is an investment that you do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter great thing except instances We Having good time friends laughing making new memories Then take drink something start laughing Next thing know re choking ca nt breathe You re coughing much trying stop It s little embarrassing get little awkward You ca nt stop let nature take course Everyone stares asking re alright The moment feels like forever exactly I felt I two best friends It decided little movie night house We fully prepared candy soda pops best pizza It added great night We decided watch movie It s favorites I nt think could ever grow tired I found comfortable seating arrangements started watch movie We eating laughing hardcore making comments along We great time Then I decided take drink I swallow luck one funniest parts movie I started laugh knew I issue I put cup table quickly got couch took two steps mouth came flying onto floor I could nt breathe coughing I kept running destination kitchen sink I two feet away sink I close Then I felt something come mouth I could nt control I nt going open mouth d floor I grossed I basically threw sink My mouth opened went puke sink I continued cough wondering would would end CAPS okay ran kitchen started hitting upper back trying help hit three times I could finally breathe CAPS I hard time started laughing I still disgusted nasty taste left mouth I put head faucet trying clear little I grabbed towel made way living room We entered room find sitting couch laughing hysterically sat started giggle little along I got knees started wiping spill floor There nt much still good amount I started chuckle little cleaning I thought CAPS must I always one choke CAPS nt go bathroom sink I mean s right pointing door still laughing I nt think I ran kitchen I ve house plenty times bathroom slipped mind I laughed much blond moment I CAPS gosh laughed little continued CAPS When I saved CAPS watch movie I told jokingly finished laughing enjoying movie peace They still tease I nt mind It goes show things laughter unexpectedly bring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it states in Paragraph 6, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"( D'Alto Paragraph 6). In this statement from the article it is saying that basically if you get bored with a lesson, the lesson would change itself to make it more interesting for you. In a way this is pretty cool. I think that using this technology in classrooms would be pretty helpful. If you think about it, if you're not interested in something you will most likely give it the time of day. But, if you think something is pretty interesting most likely you are going to pay attention to it. Most kids nowadays dont event like coming to school. They think it is a waste of their time. They go into their classess knowing they are going to be bored. But, If we introduced something that would interest them they would not be as bored as they were before. Teachers do a good job by makeing their lessons less boring by changeing up their lesson if they dont think the students are enjoying it or they think that they are not understanding anything that they are teaching. So if the computers at the schools could tell when a student is not interested, bored, or confused and would change the lesson in a way that helps the student understand it better in way that they like. It is a good idea. Its an inivative way to get students interested in school. Teachers are not doing a bad job. Just sometimes kids get confused or uninterested. So introducing technology that is programmed to make things more understandable and more interesting wouldnt be such a bad thing. Overall the technolgy that Professor Huang is talking about is fascinating. It would be really cool if this technology was in school computers around the World. It would make schools more interesting and less confusing. Kids will come into school knowing that they are going to be doing something that intersts them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen on televsion the cars that people arent driving? Or how you dont need to constantly keep your hands on the wheel or your foot on the gas pedal? Well these cars are coming to your dealier ship, knowing that you dont have to stay focused on the rode and paying attention to what other drivers are doing makes me not like the idea of having driverless cars. If the driverless car is doing what is it supposed to do doesnt mean that the driver on the oppisite side of the rode is doing what they need to do.\n\nThe reason that i would disagree to have driverless cars comes from many viewpoints, what if the map that is located in the car doesnt see the aminal that is about to run in the middle of the road at night. like in paragragh eight it stated that why would you want a driverless car when you have to wait your turn to drive, it only needs you to drive when the car cant opperate on its own. What if you are doing something that forces you to not pay attention to the rode and then you need to help out and you need to take control, but you are doing something else, your hands arent by the wheel or gas pedal, the car needs your help and you cant be near it, what would happen in that situation, would it be your fault or the driverless cars fault? With the laws, how would your driverless car know the speed limits in the area when they change from different rode and interstates. you are the safest person to be driving the car because you have the eyes on cordation when driving and can notice traffic signs and speed limits signs.\n\nWith cars being able to drive themselves it would make the road more dangerous by not knowing the speed limits and not knowing road regulations. what if the speed limits changes from street to street, the driverless car doesnt have to know that. Not staying completely focused to the road will have effects on the cars that do reqiure the driver to stay focused. The idea of having driverless cars makes the roads more dangerous for other drivers and pedestrians.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I baby sit little cousin He little baby I knew started crying got upset I coud nt get frustrated s baby There times would start crying apparent reason I wanted scream I knew I could nt I patient I also knew I could nt get upset angry might make even worse I patient wait stop crying calm I could go anywhere near I understanding tolerant I nt lose patience Practicing skill important I proud able keep composure crazy chaotic situations like loosine cool patience anyone else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nacisco happy even though poor She loved heritage still adore today She proud cuban She good relations house She great neighbors Her parents hardworking supported Her family good relationship family friends She appreciated parents done They gave career beloved country move better life Her friends family refugees came house time Her baby sitter became first friend In celebrated first birthdays These event would stay memory She would never forget parents turned house home belongs Her life always filled music love So even though hard times still apreciated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At point viwe think materials books offensive reader reader shuld leve book allownBecause readers might wont read itSame thing music movies magazines thing else fide offensive wont right take away peopleAlso think offensive one person shuld taking away right people shuld step vote talk problemI think wont right us rest wrold look much work author hade put never wrot book also know s easy doHeres example family want eat dent eat every body thinking pizzy big brother dent wont dent go eat night one person dent wont thats fair So conclusino dont think wood ringht take away body fund offensive got look rest wrold got wont right rest us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Legally some experts argue that ,young people are obligated to care for the older folks when they are financially,physically and psychologically having challenges and cannot look after themselves.In this write up I strongly disagree with this position .\n\nTo begin with,those who are not in support of this argument believed that the Elderly should have an insurance policy against their old age ,so that they can depend on this insurance each time they need it ,instead of the younger people using their expenses for that .For instance, as one get older they are prone to a lot of disease so this insurance can cater for them.\n\nMoreover,the government is responsible in supporting the aged.This is because the burden of the aged if put on the younger members of the family will make it difficult for them to be financially free.The governments would raise fund to support the aged and employ people to cater for them. For example, Building of a geriatric home for the aged will relieve the burden from young family members.\n\nDespite the fact that it is the responsibility of the young people to care for the aged those in support of this argue that,the elderly have invested in the younger people ,so showing love and support is what they need from the younger ones.This point is not sustainable because there are elderly ones who do not care or invested in their children and expect them to do so as they are physically psychologically and financially unable .\n\nIn conclusion,the aged should have an insurance policy and the governments should support them it should not be the legal responsibility of the younger ones to support them in their old age", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of the tecnology emotional expression of the students in a classroom would be valuable because the instructor would be able to connect with the student, so the student who are confused or stuck may recieve the right amount of help they'll need to understand and comprehend the lesson.\n\nThe techonolgy of emotional expressions could show if a student is frustrated, happy, confused and ect. Then after the technology recieves the data the instructor can know mostly likely will need help. So, those student could recieve the right amount of help they'll need to understand the lesson or topic on hand. According to the text it states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr.Huang predicts. 'Then it could moify the lesson, like and effective human instructor.\" The textual evidence I provided show that the computer tecnology emotional expression could help the instructor modify or change the lesson to make it easier for more people to learn, and fr the teacher to connect with the students.\n\nAfter all I believe that the technology emotional expression can be a valuable thin for the students and instructor in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion\r\n\r\nSome people think that leaders are born with leadership qualities, but opposing this, some think leadership qualities can be achieved. A leader with leadership qualities, in my opinion, should have a good and strong personality, while the essential skills for leadership can be achieved.\r\n\r\nTo be a born leader requires natural skills and qualities through which he/she can encourage, motivate, and inspire people with lots of energy. Some people are born leaders. Leadership qualities can be found in singers, motivational speakers, and business managers who can manage and arrange big and crowdy events and inspire others with their knowledge, management, presentation, and personality,\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think leadership qualities can be achieved to be a leader. Like nowadays, a lot of leadership and mentorship training, workshops, and seminars are arranged by different institutions and people learn leadership, management qualities, learn new skills, improve their personality and communication skills, and improve their knowledge and confidence. Different politicians learn leadership qualities from experience to rule and prove that leadership can be achieved by practice and experience.\r\n\r\nSome leaders are born to rule, while some acquire skills for leadership. In my opinion, leadership can be achieved by skill, experience, knowledge, and personality, but leaders by birth are born with all these qualities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars. An innovation that was once only a dream is now much closer to being a significant aspect of our lives. Personally, I am all for the development of driverless cars. The pros severely outweigh the few cons and there really aren't many valid reasons to halt working on driverless cars.\n\nAccording to cofounder of multi-billion dollar company google, Sergey Brin, we could create a future of public transport that consists completely of driverless cars. Also, this solution would use only half of the fuel that today's taxis use. If fuel is being reduced and citizens are easily able to get from point A to point B, the only con here is that there would be less jobs available for transport such as taxi drivers. But proportionally, using half the fuel we do now would have a much stronger positive impact on our future than careers being lost for the miniscule fraction of people who work as a taxi driver.\n\nAt the moment, car crashes are one of the highest likely reasons of death ESPECIALLY in teens. And this doesn't show any reason to change. But in a handful of years when driverless cars are close to perfection, the amount of car crashes that would occur would drop drastically. That is, if we take advantage of an opportunity like this rather than sleeping on it for what little reason there is left. Once the driverless cars are improved enough and safer than the average driver, we will be able to make the majority of transport used with them. And then there will be no more reasons to worry about new teen drivers getting in a wreck, drunk drivers, drivers under the influence, etc.\n\nLastly, new drivers will have lots of time saved once driverless cars are everywhere. New drivers currently have to spend at least 50 hours driving with a parent or guardian before they are considered ready to drive alone (and let's not forget that new drivers have a 50% chance to be involved with a crash during their first year of driving with a license). So driverless cars will free up time for families with new or inexperienced drivers as well as save them money. Most new drivers take a driver's ed class (which first of all takes a lot of time) and they can be hundreds of dollars! There's no reason we shouldn't eliminate these pointless negative aspects of our current system.\n\nReviewing what's been said here, three significant reasons driverless cars should continue being worked on are apparent. One being that only HALF the fuel we currently use would be needed. Two: having these driverless cars would create a much safer environment since crash rates would nearly disappear. And finally, new drivers would save large amounts of time and money once these cars are here and ready. These are only three reasons of countless others that haven't been addressed yet. Driverless cars are the future of our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health. On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximizing profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimize their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, driverless cars might be a good idea especially for some people that likes to travel alot. Driverless cars does not sound bad but to others,\n\nthey might say things like the car will malfunction and hit another car. There will always be an argument about driverless cars, saying that they are to dangerous to the environment and it's a risk that others do not want to take.\n\nSome states right now are not to big on driverless cars because of the safety to others. Questions would be asked like what would happen if one of the cars malfuntion and crash into another car; what would happen if some nearby cars was programmed wrong or was not built properly. Many car companies has added more safe ways to drive, like cameras on the car to see better or auto park/drive; the human still has to control the car 98 percent of the time.\n\nIf the states wanted to have driverless cars, some laws will be changed and some added because of how the car is made and how it funtions. Laws like car accidents and certain things that the car is allowed to have and what the car is allowed to do. Having a driverless car, there are lots of things that can be added to the car's funtions. Some people might even try to add or change some features of the car.\n\nThe manufacters would have to test the vehicles many of times before sold to check for safety. Problems with the car like gps problems and people not liking the idea of cars that can drive themself. There are more accidents likely to happen with humans behind the wheel because of the actions others are often to make. Drinking while driving, texting and driving, and even sleeping while driving. Elders would not have to drive everywhere they go anymore, same as injured people.\n\nI would like to see driverless cars come into action, the whole idea just sounds great in my opinion. Everything just takes time and no matter what anyone says, there will be driverless cars in the future. New rules/laws will be made and slowly more states maybe the whole country will have driverless cars. Google is also known to own and make many things that has turned out to be good and a smart idea. In the future there will be driverless cars everywhere, all they need is time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a universal truth that education has a considerable bearing on people’s personal development. Given the magnitude of schooling, what should or should not be covered in the curriculum is a perennial debate. A school of thought holds that schools only offer subjects that students will be tested on, and practical skills are of little importance and, hence, should be excluded from the scope of the study program. Personally, I disagree with this statement on both counts. \r\nFirstly, it is a mistake to consider passing exams of all students as the sole purpose of academic learning, which pigeonhole the value of education. In the attempt of earthlings to make sense of the world, the knowledge acquired from subjects such as physics and biology helps us satiate this intrinsic need, more than passing the tests. For example, had it not been for Newton’s law of universal gravitation and other related radical theories taught in the study program, students would have had no comprehensive insights for the falling objects and how the planets moved around the sun. Furthermore, while academic subjects seem quite divorced from everyday life, they are actually highly applicable. Solving equations in schools can stand out as an example. Despite being often decried by students and completely pointless, this skill gained from this exercise prove are wonderfully useful in many real life situations. Thus, there is more meaning of studying academic subjects than just assessment.\r\nSecondly, I do believe that the practical skills should be incorporated into school curriculum. To begin with, it plays a dispensable role to help them to be better prepared for life by teaching this skills. For instance, giving student culinary know-how will not only enable them to meet their own nutritional needs but also be emboldened to live independently. Moreover, the students may be more excited and interested in learning through the study program including skill classes. After having exclusively academic subjects causing discouraged among students, a dose of fun and practicality in lessons of cooking, dressing and so on can be kind of entertainment and help them feel more motivated.\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly object to the viewpoint that academic knowledge should be taught merely for testing purposes. School also should involve class of practical skills in educ", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I think laughter important part life What would world like without laughter jokes It would boring dull place I ca nt even imagine would like The world needs laughter People need make jokes need laughter comedy life I lot laughter life One day fifth grade best friend I jogging around track gym class We running together talking telling jokes help pass time really boring I told one really awesome joke I ca nt remember started laughing hard We laughing together point crying He fell track rolled grass I said CAPS need keep going gym teacher get mad He said I ca nt I peed pants That made laugh even He got walked gym teacher The gym teacher told friend go nurse s office After gym class I met back classroom told called mom brought new pair underwear pants I wonder mom must thought It funny day We always talked day together I would always jokingly make fun peeing pants I told funny joke Our whole relationship based making laugh telling jokes Just around two us stupid together Jokes laughter made friendship much better gave amazing memories I might possibly rest life At time jokes laughter friendship make relationship boring lame If little laughter friendship fun person makes want hang around feels boring I friend named I occasionally go house hang play video games together The weird thing hardly even communicate We stuff nt fun There jokes laughter anything awesome like We play video games silently saying word person Its pathetic thing I ever seen It boring friendship two people could It really boring thing I nt really like going much I would rather different friends house fun I still go anyway I sure Without jokes laughter friendship makes things boring fun It something definitely need Laughter important element friendship also important element dating relationship If dating somebody absolutely need laughter relationship If look around always see couples making jokes together laughing time fun It makes relationship interesting enjoyable Think wants date boring person nt like laugh make jokes Nobody wants So dating relationship especially need laughter comedy friendship You want keep things going good person likes thinks funny That one key things makes couple close So see three examples laughter really makes big difference relationships life general If laughter friendship really impact relationship good way It makes interesting fun relationship Laughter makes people happy get along If feeling laughter always bring make feel better It almost like medicine If laughter really make things suck make relationship boring Nobody wants People want boring lifeless relationship somebody Laughter something bring people together good way It brings friends together makes us better friends We good time really enjoy Laughter great thing everybody needs life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It first game I pumped ready go coach yelled big guy I side Then said next play going Ther assistant said I wasnt aloud The whole time I didnt complain I never said one word anyone I helped people It still fun The whole time least I didnt complain make worth everyone else The whole time I side lines Never went ounce I patient Not say I wasnt mad At least I got exercise standing The whole time I suported team mates I encouraged I help way shape form I listend complain But I give suport There I mad I could killed I ready coach said It time shine That one stupid word stood way But least I learned something", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many ways to gain a successful career. People are in debating to choose which one is the better between taking a job straight after school and getting higher education. I believe that studying at university or collage is the best route to have a successful career.\n\nOn the one hand, when young people complete school, they get confused to get a job straight or continue study at university or college to gain more knowledge. Some people believe that getting a work straight after school is much better. Many reasons they choose to get a job after finishing from school which is always about money. They want to work to obtain money for their life. In terms their career, people working after school give a great deal of practice skills related to their current job. Thus, this may lead opportunities to get promotion and a successful career.\n\nOn the other hand, I believe that studying at university or collage gives people a good opportunity to have successful career. Firstly, high level education is required in many professions. Doctor as an example, it is impossible to become a doctor without having the relevant degree. Also, she or he has to have very deep knowledge about disease, medicine and others which are related medical problems. As a result, they have a high position on their job, so they can get ultimate high. Secondly, the job fair is becoming increasingly competitive. When it is opened, there are hundreds of job seeker to register.\n\nFor the reason mentioned it, I assume that the best route to get a successful career is to finish the university or college education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This statement shows author concludes story It shows theme story really It fail try This statement saying failed tasks spring hibiscus blooms attempt complete task The statement also concludes never gave Saeng failed test She said II failed test This shows sad depressed tone statement said sadder depressed tone Even though sad depressed Saeng knows next year attempt complete test Overall sentence shows author concludes think story Winter Hibiscus", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that they would be very beneficial to society. Although, there could be complications. No matter what type of product you make it will never be perfect. You will have to re-do or remake the product many times to make it the way you like or they way you think the buyers will like it. Sometimes you might even have to restart the entire product because of complications such as it catching on fire. There are many possible outcomes of new products that can give advantages and disadvantages to the people.\n\nAs mentioned above, while these new cars can be risky, I think we should take the risk and see how well the driverless cars can actually work. There are many car crashes in the world today caused by a variety of reasons. There are drunk drivers, people not paying attention to the roads or to the people around them. There are teenagers trying to show off their new cars. There are parents trying to focus on too many things at once, forcing them to lose concentration on the road. Given these possibilities, wouldn't it be easier to have a selfdriving car?\n\nUsing a driverless car can add many benifits to our daily lives. Having the sensors, cameras, and GPS installed in the driverless cars makes it that much easier for the car to protect those in it. Although some cars now have sensors in them and they are not new to the creation, the sensors have advanced. This advancement helps respond to danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. Information can be given to the sensors causing them to apply breakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. This allows better response and control than a human driver could provide alone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The scientists have to look from a safe distance at Venus because of the intense heat and pressure it has. They sent a few aircrafts but no people with it. Good thing they didn't because they aircraft only lasted a few hours on Venus. \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous was unnamed, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" (Paragraph 2)\n\nNo one knows what's exactly on Venus because they can't get ON the planet without being crushed or burned to death. \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" (Paragraph 3) They're could be totally new things that the world has never seen before. Things that could cure diseases that, right now, have no cure. New elements are a possiblity too. Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" because it has the closest density and size to Earth and sometimes, the closest distance too.\"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" (Paragraph 2)\n\nIn this day and age, technology is being improved VERY quickly. New inventions are constantly being made. So, it wouldn't be too suprising to scientists and inventors worked together to make an aircraft that could withstand the pressure and heat of Venus. Then we (mainly scientists) could find out if anything mind-blowning is on or inside the planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that we should not invest in these machines. I say this because not only would we have to make new laws for the machine it would also take out the fun of driving. Driverless cars would also either be far too expensive or/and be hard to access easily.\n\nThe driverless cars to begin with are not entirely so driverless yet and it would probably take many more years and more money for it to be so. This would mean there would have to be more investment in this research that we don't necccesarily need.\n\nThese smart cars could take the joy of riding a car out, a lot of people find peace and release when they are driving. Would these feelings be the same if it were just them sitting and watching? I highly doubt so, driving brings a exciting feel in the stomach that you don't really get from being in the passenger seat.\n\nIf these driverless cars do somehow be acceptable enough the government would have to take time into making new laws and whatnot for the new machinery. As stated in the article if there is a accident which of the two will be to blame? The driver or the manufacturer? Since technically the driver is not exactly driving they couldn't really take the blame, the driver in a driverless car is much similiar to a passanger and we do not blame the passangers for a accident.\n\nOnce these driverless cars have the to-go by the government and scientists how exactly do the companies plan on making money? Would they locate these cars at every corner of a block waiting for someone to call them? Would the cost be much similiar to that of a taxi and charge depending on miles? This would mean we would have issues with the price and the location of these cars.\n\nSo therefore I believe we should not support and ivnest in these driverless cars, they would take too long after its manufactoring to make laws for. There are possibilities of suprising accidents because technology isn't always SMART and could have a bug. The routine of how to get these driverless cars to the customers is also a big thought. A big thing is that they could cost TOO much money and people would not use them, thus wasting all the time and investments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus is a worthy puruit despite the danger it presents because\n\n\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\"\n\nThis quote is important because there most likely would have been ways Venus could sustain some sort of life. If Venus really had oceans and ways of supporting life we can study Venus and maybe find out what happened to it to prevent it from happening to Earth. If we find a way to get to another planet and study it why wouldn't we?\n\nIn the third paragraph of the article it explains the harsh environment of Venus which should all be taken into consideration when thinking about Exploring Venus, and in five and seven it explains possible ways to safely explore and study Venus. Paragraph six explains how we cannot simply just orbit around Venus to study it because the gas and chaotic nature of the planet it too thick for cameras and any video to be taken so we would have to go to the surface and to do so we can use mechanical computers which can survive the harsh environment since it doesn't rely on electronics.\n\nIn conclusion Venus is the only planet in our solar system that is almost identical to us it could have had the ability to sustain life many years ago but now it's environment is extremely dangerous and any kind of research would be hard to do. There is a new idea to get to the surface of venus for more than a few hours and that is mechanical technology because of it's mechanical nature it can last longer than electronics on the surface which would give researchers a chance to study venus. Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because before it was a chaotic planet with a dangerous environment it could have been just like Earth. Venus might have had oceans and because of the craters we have seen it could have also had mountains and different types of scenery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says that studying venus is worth it, except the danger that it has.\n\nOne of the dangers Venus has is that is really hot, hotter than what our planet is, so the author belives that its worth it because we get to experience new things during the exploration that way will get to see how hot it gets. According to the reading, ¨On the planets surface, temperaatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 ties greater than what we experience in our planet.¨ This means that the surface can go to 800 degrees fahrenheit or it can go even higher than that, you never know when the temperature is going to change. In our planet we dont experiece that type of temperature because we could die of how hot it is, the temperature is 90 times\n\nhigher than what our normal temperature is which is bad because everything in our planet would get on fire.\n\nIn conclusion we should experience or get to study Venus because we´ll get a lot of fun/good stuff to learn from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author probably used last paragraph show time next year going take The author writes paragraph show failed test geese going away winter hibiscus blooming", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "2,000 animlals dead! What if you had to go and help take them across the sea?! Well Luke does, you can play games, you get to see different kinds of animals, and help different countries and see different things. Would you do this or would you not even think about it?\n\nYou get to play games, such as volley ball baseball, and table-tennis. Also fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling games. The other guys will play with you and things like that. Luke also is with his friend so you can talk to one of your friends. An if they wanted to do it with you.\n\nYou get to see different kinds of animlas. He gets to go to a whole bunch of different countries that got destroid. So they may need to take a girrafe or a monkey you've never seen before. You also get to take care of thoughs animals, and pet. You kinda get to be the owner of the animals.\n\nYou get to help different countries out and see different things. Like Luke got to see the Acropolis in Greece. He got to take a Gandola ride in Vinece Italy, a city with streets of water. He also got to tour an excavated castle in Crete, and marveled at the Panama Canal. He was happy that he was able to help people out.\n\nI hope that you join this cattle boat. Hopefully you were inspired enough. Like I said there's a lot of things to do on the boat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay the author supports well the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author presents us wih many advantages there is to furthure exploring venus. Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in terms of density and size, and on some occasions the closest in distance to. Venus may very well have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system due to its very familar forms and possibly long ago could have had the same features and asspects that Earth has today. There have been many rising ideas that could help with a more thorough study of Venus. These are some of the ideas that the author presented us with in this article.\n\nTo begin with the author explained how similar Venus is to Earth. Although Venus is the planet closest to Earth in terms of desity and size it has been very difficult for us to study the planet. A thich atmospherte of almsot 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. What has been even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Here the authos has been giving us specific ideas on why the Venus us so hard to study. But the autgor has presented us with a very important detail. Venus is sometimes right around the corner from Earth in space terms, which can be our neartest point for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nNot only does the author give those deatils but also explains how Venus could have one been very silimar to Earth in many asspects. The author says that\n\nVenus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The author also includes existing facts. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe author also presents us with some possible ways to fix the prbelem of bein able to study Venus. The idea is that NASA has a possible solution that would allow scientists to float above the fray. Being able to float 30 or so miles above the planet could avoid the unfrienly conditions but they would be survivable for humans. There are also other ideas given by the author like simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that has been able to survivie in the conditions for 3 weeks. And mechanical computers. All of these could give the opportunity to better study Venus.\n\nIn conclusion the author has presented us with sufficiant details that suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Not only because it could be a great scientific study and make us more knowledgable. But the author says human curuiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The authors is saying that being able to study Venus which is the planet most similar to Earth could benefit us becasue one day Earth as we know it could chnage and could become as dangerous as Venus is to humans now. Knowing more about Venus could help us prevent futhure harm to the Earth and ourselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I writing let know many people spending much time computors rather enjoying nature People say advances technology believe computers effect people way saying Many people showed say use computers remember think nature nice things store us Im going saying experts right people spending much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends Im thinking points many family members friends see relative person companion much computers s like thinking maybe nt care anymore Caring nature loved ones great thing friends agree I say people less electronic devices effect brain maybe eye sight eye vision people lay yale university conducted extensive reaserch proven many computers used people damage using every time I strongly agree time limit something let later spaare time enjoy fun nature something different enjoy listening soft music I know agree I say maybe people spend less time effecting Whatsoever im hoping agree position possible break habit going computers time family friends start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author has a point that we should study Venus, it maybe an option to vist when earth is well populated. But first, scientise have to over come the dangers of Venus. Then find a way to make our machines to last long. Third thing is that they need to do is finding a way to overcome the many challeng that the planet has for humans to study.\n\nFirst thing is that scientise have to overcome the many dangers of Venus. Venus's has a planet \"surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" with a \"atomspheric pressure is 90 times more greater than what we experience on our\" planet. Venus being second planet from the sun, \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though that Mercury is closer to\" the sun than Venus. NASA has an idea that might be \"possible solutions to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus\" is like a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" A \"vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions\" and \"at thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempertures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit\" and \"air pressure would be close to that of sea levels on earth.\"\n\nThen scientise have to find a way to make their machine last longer.\n\nDo to how the temperatures on Venus are \"800 degrees\" and the machine would be melting to the that kind of heat. NASA is working on a solution to that problem by testing different type of meltal like a \"electronics made from silicon\" have lasted three weeks in a \"simulation of the chaos of Venus's surfaces.\" NASA have also look into \"old technology called mechanical computers.\" \"These devices make calculations by using gears and leavers and do not require electronics at all\", so they would better for the suface of Venus.\n\nScientise need to Find a way to over come the challenging planet for humans studys. \"Each misson to Venus ways unmanned, and for good reason.\" Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This could be the issue \"why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" An there are \"numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, dispite its proximity to us.\"\n\nIn conclusion Venus has many problem that contribute to the planet being challenging for human's studys. It is worthy striving to meet the challenge that has presented it self by Venus. \"Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuase human couriosity will lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My friend and I have been dicussing the Face on Mars. He thinks it was created by aliens, others think it was just natural.\n\nGarvin says, \"The face is like some of rocks we have in the American West and remind me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This is just natural because this stuff happens just like stuff happens of Earth it just amazing that it's able to create that figure. It also states that Micheal Malin and his Mars Obiter Camera said, \"There was no alien monument.\" It also states that that when the picture was taken it was in zoom and image 3 was bigger than the pixel size. This means that the face was small and was taken from far distance. NASA stated that \" huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth,\"\n\nI think it was natural made even if they said that there was weird alien markings. We haven't found aliens yet or proofed they are real so how do they know? This is a natural made rock that has been there for yers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper men women write everyday living I would like write rection computers They teach faraway places help build handeye coordination let talk online Computers part everyday life needs told First computer let learn faraway places without leaving rooms One mom s friends They decide move nt like computer nt look laws saying I ll find I got CAPS find laws nt find enough cause cause arrested multiple times first years A monthes last arrest came back could deal laws buetifull country arrests accidents nt know laws Ten minutes computer searching laws could kept Next comptures improve handeye coordination From survey children spend time computers better tennis baseball others gym teacher says CAPS kids spend time compture weak need get exerciseDear local newpaper local newspaper power say feel effects computers give people I believe computers give great effects people teaches handeye coordination gives people ability learn far away places allows talk people In people agree idea computers Firstly using computers teaches people handeye coordination For example grandmother told knows use hands eyes well using computer This types researches information day long In computers designed help eyes hands focus Secondly computers lot interesting information faraway places quotes I always use computers work helps learn many new things lets wife I search details trip want go people agree stated However people say computers give wrong information many times find wonderful website never lie Thirly use computers let talk online video chat friends family world How benefits seen relatives ages buy ticket visit video chat It gotten people much closer see world whole different way instead wasting cell phone minutes go buy laptop computer camera video chat Lastly taking people active peoples life important In conclusion great eye coordination able research faraway places always allowed video chat talk family online I want tell whole world computers useful people use everyday without problem Lastly best feeling ever make everyone smile knowing believe spending time computer teach lot From many students greater handeye cooridination enjoy good like tennis professor human body states Technology helps handeye Many use computers others greater games along lines This shows handeye exercise linked computer Furthermore computers help talk people When child goes college still able email famlies talk Talking others computers makes world go round World business need computers contact eachother decuss plans move toward economicly Lastly computers useful useful They teach faraway places improve handeye coordnation let talk people article made show pros computers people experience wonders", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many trying allow dirigibles dock The builders real hard time construction morning mast They deal frame work building A big obstacle nt suitable landing area dirigibles They nt deal man made nature s well The wind top building made nearly impassible land safely The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation CAPS The constructors building realized make plan possible would redo frame building The building nt even designed able allow dirigibles land top building The workers blind see possible problems design moorning mast The workers go much landing dirigibles never worked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars can help people life more easier. Even if it can make the environment much better than before. Because now we have many cars drive on the street and they will have some bad thing to make the environment be bad.\n\nA lot of people, they are smart. They think that in one day, we maybe making computer-diven cars. In fact, this is a smart way to make people llife easier. But this make more and more people to make smarter than this way to make people life easier.\n\nThen they find a new way to developed driver's seats and they have lights. It can help them drive on the road at night and make people to be safety.\n\nSo, my opnion is I believed that is the smart way to make people life more easier, But it will make people to be lazy to drive.\n\nI am not agree to make this type of cars. Because if people life to be easy, they will be lazy in their life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should start to join the group I am in. You can go see many new places and things all while traveling the world on a mission to help others. We are called Seagoing Cowboys. You should want to be a Seagoing Cowbow, it isvery benificial to all that are involved in this wonderful process.\n\nWhen you are a Seagoing Cowboy you will get the time to explore the current area that you are located in. In the program you will have free time and be able to do other things when away,such as sight seeing. At times when you are with the group you will be helping the people of that land who are in need of our service, regain their streingth as a bation and build thier natrual resources. These kind of things will be animals, food, shelter, and clothes.We will travel with all the resorces we plan to donate to the peoples including the animals.\n\nI myself have even thought, is it worth\n\ngetting sea sick this many times, I miss my family, maybe I should just go home. But I did not cave in to those thoughts, and I'm still here withthe porgram. You will have todo the same and persue with the action. I had to do it for myself to accomplish something. I had to stay for my family so I could still be their hero, and that means nearly everthing to me. Most importently though you have to stay for the people, to help them means the world for their sake. You have to focus on the positive.\n\nSo please take this amazind and outstanding oportunity and sighn up. I promis you won't be dissapointed at the chance of a life time. To help people and make this world a better place. To spend time with hundreds of animals. Also to see and do things you would normaly never have done or expirinenced before. So please take this oportunety at something amazing, and if you cant do it for your self do it fo the people. Please.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is starting to become a lot more common. People are starting to realize that their happier when not riding their car, in fact Heudrun Walter mother of 2 said \"when i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Walter now can walk the streets and enjoy the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children.\n\nUs humans rely to much on our cars for transportation, We should learn how to get to places on our own. Before we had cars we walked on our own 2 feet and didnt complain, its time for us to get back part of our humanity. \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change\",said David Goldenberg, an official of Transportation for America. If cars were to all of a sudden disappear would you be capable of getting around without a vechicle of transportation?\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia a program was set to have a car free day. The only way of transportation was through buses and taxis, and violators would have to pay a $25 fine. \"It was a good opportunity to take away stress and lower pollution\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. Not only does not riding your car lower pollution but it can also help lower emissions, conserve resources, and improve safety. The goal is to limit car usage and to start noticing the advantages of a car free life, like walking the streets and enjoying another beautiful day.\n\nFellow citizens I advice you to put down you car keys and go outside to smell the clean air, see the sun shining on your face and get a breeze of how life would be from outside the windows of your car. We can help make our environment be a better place all you have to do is start taking action and realize their are more advantages to limiting car use then car usage its self.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They say that emotions can be easy to read and even more right now with the new technology that is being discovered. For example, the new Facial Action Coding System ensures to be able to tell people's exact emotions, considering how they did Mona Lisa's. Based on the Facial Action Coding System Mona Lisa got 83% happy, 9% disgust, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. If someone were to look at the picture that is probably not what they are thinking her emotions would be. Now they want to branch out on this technology and use it more often. Now they are looking into it being installed in some classroom computers to help the teachers and be able to read the kids emotions.\n\nReading the kids emotions may be a good thing and come in handy for teachers when kids are doing assignments over the computers. The Facial Action Coding System would more than likely be better at reading the kids emotions better than the teachers are able to. This will also be able to help the kids move at there own pace and get the kind of help they need or in the way they need to be taught it. This could benefit the teachers in a major way. A class normally has about 20 or more students so the teacher doesn't have time to go around, and personally analyze each of the students reactions on whether they are understanding what is being taught. Dr. Hang also stated \" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" and that could make it harder for the teacher to anaylze the kids emotions to begin with.\n\nThey also show in this passage a glimpse of how the Facial Action Coding System works. For example, there are bones in your body, the orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus which makes the crow's feet around the eyes which is used to make you actually smile. Now in a fake smile the bone zygomatic major is being use. Whether you are trying to fake a smile you can't truly fake a facial expression because you can use mucsles as clues to tell if they have a genuine expression or is they are trying to find the actual emotions. That is another perk that supports the arguement on having Facial Action Coding Systems in computers or them not being used for school purposes. Students may be able to hide emotions from teachers on whether they are understanding the lesson or if they need some more help. They wouldn't be able to hide it from the computers that are analyzing them.\n\nI believe that having the Facial Action Coding System will have a positive affect on the students and even the teachers. This will be able to help the kids learn the assignment in the way they need it taught to them. It will also be an affect to the teachers who can not read the students emotions on whether they are understanding or not. The analyzing may not always be 100% accurate but probably has a better chance at being more accurate than others do at telling facial expressions. I think this could be a big advancement in the learning process in school and should be expiremented.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage result in a healthier environment for you and your children, exercise by walking or riding a bike, and saving money on parking and gas.\n\nLimiting car usage would be beneficial for the environment because the gas wouldn't polute the air. Green house gas emissions from tailpipes polute the air that everyone is breathing. If the car usage was limited, then the air would start to become fresh again. Stated in the passage, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" This exerpt from the passage \"Car-Free Cities\" explains that Europe's percentage is too high and they need to drop it fast or the percentage will grow and the greenhouse gas emissions will increase.\n\nLimiting car usage isn't a big move like most people are making it out to be. Walking to pick up your child from school isn't such a bad thing! It gives you bonding time to spend with them outdoors. You can walk or ride a bike to the park to play. Especially if it is less than 1 mile! Walking is a great way to exercise and its free! FREE! This component of \"smart planning\" could work if eveyone helped by reducing car use.\n\nHaving a car is expensive! You have to pay for gas, which is expensive, and you have to pay to park your car! If you live in the area where you want to go, walk! But if you're going to the grocery store, obviously you would take your car if you're getting a lot at the store. You have to pay to park in the parking garage and that is $40,000 with a house. The passage \"Car-Free Cities,\" states that \"70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57% sold a car to move here.\" In that town, everything is pretty close to each other so you don't have to drive anywhere. If you needed to go visit a family member in a different city, the the train! It's fun, free, and calming.\n\nAs you can see, you don't need to drive a car. Yes, you can drive a car, but why would you? You have buses, and trains, and other ways of transportation. This way, you don't have to pay for gas to go to the park. Not using your car is healthy for the environment and it's great exercise. It's a good way to get outdoors and have a nice walk. So please, just try using your car a little bit less everyday and soon enough, you will rarely use it, the air will be fresh, and you'll be taking some nice strolls in the park with your family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology to read emotional expressions of a students could be very vaulable. This would make students life in the classroom easier. There would be so many advantages for to this. It would know what that student is feeling and it could help change that.\n\nIf a student was sad then the computer woud know and it could help make a diffirence.\n\nSome students might not want to do work if and not learn if they are sad and this could change that and put a smile on thier face. The author says, \" if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This could make the student have a better time in the classroom.\n\nA student might be super confused and not know anything about what they are doing or they might just not understand the question, well this technology could help that. It says, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This means if the main teachor is telling someone else in a classroom how to do a problem but other people might also be struggling then the computer could help them and see their their emotion and it would change the question to try and make it more understandable.\n\nThe technology of this could help so many students and classrooms. So much more things could be learned in classrooms with out kids getting bored. It could help students in the classrooms get through so much more. Teachers wouldn't have to be trying to hurry and help the people that dont understand out and having the other people wait. This technology could be very valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Other people should get into the Seagoing program because they could help people that need to be helped. The text says,\" To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA.\" The text also states,\"UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" People should join the UNRRA so that they could help people out. Like a lot of people say, put other's needs before your own.\n\nA lot of people should get into the Seagoing program so they can go places they wanted to go. The text states,\"besides helping people, I had a side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" The article also states,\"Luke also toured the excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\" Those are also a good thing about the program. People could go places they have never been to before.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing program because you could see things you have never seen before. The article says,\"but being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke.\" The text also states,\"it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Being a seagoing cowboy can be very exciting. People should join if they want to help other people.\n\nBeing a seagoing cowboy could be dangerous, but if you have the right skills and luck it won't be dangerous. The text says,\"helping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared Luke for hard work, but not for the dangers of the sea.\" The article states,\"a small strip of metal along the edge stoped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic.\" That last piece of evidence is pure luck. That is why you should prepare for the dangers.\n\nThe main part of being a seagoing cowboy is to help people, not hurt them. If you hurt them that means you didn't care about others and you didn't want to help them. It is good for everyone that got into the Seagoing program and care for others that are hurt. People should get into the Seagoing program to stop violence. Violence does nothing good for anyone. Violence only makes things a lot worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable, it can detect the emotions of someone trying to hide their emotions, it can detect how you or someone else feels, and computers can find out if you like, hate, or confused about something.\n\nIf you smile when a web add apears on the screen of a computer a similar add will appear, but if you frown a different add could apear.\n\nIn a real smile the zygomatic major lift the corners of your mouth, but in fake smiles the mouth is streched sideways using the zygomatic major and the risorius.\n\nIt uses muscular action units to indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced smile.\n\nWith Facial Action Coding Systems people can see genuine or forced facial expressions, feeling of people with just their facial expression, and could allow computers to find out what you like or dislike.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph expresses meaning story Life continues matter hibiscus return spring The hibiscus like symbol Saeng s life The plant normally nt survive winter months one The mother says It s flowers nt pretty s strong enough make winter months Saeng mother like plant They strong lives continue even though new environment The author chose end story parragraph even though say hibiscus come back every spring deeper meaning Saeng mother like hibiscus continue live lives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some hold the view that rising fuel costs could be the most efficient way to tackle environmental problems. I disagree with this idea for two main reasons. First, increasing energy prices will not have a significant impact on the amount and patterns of fuel consumption. The second reason is that hiking energy prices will create more economic problems. \r\n\r\nThe first reason why I am against raising the cost of fuel is that it can not have a remarkable effect on fuel consumption. People cannot change the amount of fuel they usually consume since their lifestyle and daily needs cannot be easily changed. They have to go to the same places for work and other purposes every day. Therefore, the amount of fuel they demand for these needs will not considerably decline after rising prices. For example, a survey conducted in the United Arab Emirates has demonstrated that rising the price of fuel could alter individuals' consumption patterns in only 15% of the participants investigated. \r\n\r\nMoreover, making energy more expensive would pose more economic problems. The first area affected by hiking fuel prices is transportation, which plays a salient role in the economy. This will increase the price of other products and services, exerting a detrimental impact on people's lives. It goes without saying that this strategy will not have any meaningful contribution to solving environmental problems. For instance, a study conducted in Germany has revealed that more than 60% of environmental activists hold that rising the cost of energy is not an effective solution to their concerns. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, making energy more expensive is not the most potent approach to cope with environmental issues because this cannot change the patterns of energy use and will bring about further economic problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new revolution of a new way for us to drive cars, which can be not at all. New technology has helped us to start creating a new way of driving, without actually driving. This would a driverless car where the car actually can drive for you. Of course you would still need to be some what incontrol for the safety for yourself and others. Many do not believe in this new \"driverless car\" for there could be dangers to people and cause more accidents. This is most likely going to cost a great deal of money for everyone to be in these new cars.\n\nI believe this could be a good idea for those who might have lost a leg or have some sort of impairment and would be a good experience for those to drive a car without actually driving it. These engineers are working on making these car safe so every day people can be driving them with no harm to others. So far in California, Nevada, Florida and the District of Columbia have let some of these cars go onto the streets for testing. Tesla has projected that the cars will be releases in 2016 and will be ninety percent autopilot. There will always a portion of the car for the person to drive to make sure no accidents will occur. These cars can be able to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but will notify when there is trouble ahead to make sure the human can take control again.\n\nThese cars will be of the future. This can revolutionize the world for possibly the better, and make the world more efficiant. These cars will not be fully\n\navaible for the world till the manufactures know they are safe for people and no one will be put into harms way with these cars. They have been testing them for some time now and has caused no accidents, already this will be a good sign for the next up coming years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen the \"Face\" of Mars? The \"face\" is a landform on the side of Mars. Many people seem to believe the \"face\" was an alien monument. I believe that the \"face\" is just a nutural landform.\n\nThe group of people who believe that the \"face\" is an alien monument are mostly conspiracy theorists. Conspiracy theorists like to make people believe NASA tries to hides things from citizens. This group of people are the type to believe that the government does wrong in many ways. The truth about the \"face\" is that it is a natural landform.\n\nWhen NASA sent Michael Malin's Mars Orbiter Camera, it was revealed that the so called \"face\" was really a natural landfrom. Many people were shocked to find out there was no conspiracy behind the \"face\". NASA\n\nhelped prove all those conspiracy theorists wrong. With the help of the new images, NASA showed the world that there was never a mystery. Some people even compared it to the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nIn conclusion, the \"face\" is nothing but a natural landform. Various people believed there was this huge mystery behind it,but in reality it was just a regular landform. My opinion and the opinion of various other people on the \"face\" was proven right on the day NASA revealed those photos.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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