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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years there has been a great deal of discussion about competition. A number of people are of the opinion that competitiveness ought to be in a modern society. Personally, I assume that it is a great opportunity for people to develop their skills, relationships, imrove the level of knowledge and become a leader in different spheres. In this essay, I shall examine the way it has an influence on people and inderstand whether it is a beneficial quality.\nAnalyzing the impact of competitiveness, I agree that it helps people with trying to give all the best and not let another person to win. Moreover, if there were no competitiveness at my school, I would not try to do various projects or developing my skills to be an excellent student. This quality helps me always raise the bar even more. Also, I know that many famous brends such as Louis Vuitton and Gucci compete with each other all the time to take a leadership position in a fashion world.\nAs for being positive or negative, I am of the opinion that competitiveness is a positive trend due to numerous reasons. First of all, analyzing sports competition, I understand that it is a social process, depending on the biological and social changes that all people are going through. Secondly, in an age of social media and growing individualism, time spent interacting and communicating with others is reducing. However, our ability to work with others to achieve a common goal is an essential skill to develop, not only in sport but in life.\nIn coclusion, a competition can improve people's all-round development while it can give exceeding pressure on them more than they can deal with. However, in my opinion, I tend to believe that the benefits of competition outweigh its disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the majority of children in school feel it hard to focus on their classes at school and there are many roots for this problem. In this essay, I will give some crucial reasons why it is hard to attend their teacher’s lectures and find suitable solutions for this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, research has shown that every student at school now has a private cell phone. The main problem is that when pupils feel boring, they tend to use their mobile phone in class in order to divertissement and once the activity starts, they are not only distracted from the lessons but also hard to return to the original concentration state. So, the school board should bring in some regulations prohibiting using electronic devices in the classroom.\r\n\r\nThe second reason cause this question is at the present there is more theoretical content than practical classes, therefore, the students feel that the curriculum is monotonic and get bored easily. That is why the teacher now should innovate the materials and the teaching methods. They should interact with the scholar rather than read them the definition in the textbook. Furthermore, more games or quizzes should be added to the lessons so that increase the pupil’s curiosity which can make them pay more attention to the lecture.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a great number of students are losing concentration while studying in school. In my opinion, distraction happens when the pupils find the syllabus uninteresting. To avoid that the teacher has to get attention and inspire students in their studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are a unique idea and they are very helpful but they can also be not so helpful. According to the article, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. So what is the point of having a driverless car when the vehicle requires a driver at all times for safety reasons.\n\nAccording to Dr. Werner Hubner, a BMW project manager states \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\". The passage informs us that some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertaniment and information systems that use heads-up displays. This will hopefully help solve our few issues we have with the driverless cars. The passage also states that \"such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over - something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell-phone.\"\n\nManufacturers are doing many things to make sure that they have no problems with the driverless cars and they are working to solve any problems thye have with them. According to this article, manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" I feel liek it is a great idea that manufacturers are really trying to fix all the problems that we may face with these new driverless cars. It is alwyas important for us to be safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When attempting add mooring mask Empire State Building people adding faced several impediments Right away builders took size dirigible account If something large top building frame would warped To solve problem spend sixty thousand dollars change original framework suitable one Another obsticle faced builders mast made sharp edges building could damage drigible attempting dock Also realized mast large urban area would accident bad situations would take place There also law aircraft traveling low City The drigible mooring dock atop Empire State Building meant", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I disagree hole computer thing I think s wast money s wast time kids That kids get fat kids never want go side want play video games eat junk food If stay computer long make eyes week sometimes give canser die canser get really sick die hike sick year pain Mostly kids stay computer mores playing stupid games never go side stay side days never go side play friends When get sick games want try hang friends wont able fat slow My aunt died useing computer much brain cancer died lived year cacer I felt bad cousin watch mother die used computer everyday cause job Therefor I state computers used houre day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage has so many benefits to it, you may think \"Oh my gosh, I need my car!\" when in actuality this is better. Limiting car usage is great because you can save money on gas. We all know gas prices are going up, why worry when we don't need cars? Just think about how much money you spend on gas.\n\nIn addition, conserving car time can be beneficial to our health. If we don't get our lazy butts out of bed just to sit in a car and get fatter then we would be so much happier. Remember that new years resolution you made to lose more weight? Well ride a bike to work everyday, or ride a skateboard to school. We will stay in shape this way.\n\nNot to mention, fuel creates pollution in the air, someof us are OCD about the air we breathe. By biking places, you can keep the air cleaner. Thi s is also quiter and brings us all closer. What if you biked to work with your friend instead of by yourself?\n\nIn conclusion, there are so many reasons why limiting car usage is the way to go. Think about how many times you can talk to your neighbor besides the regular \"Hey, how ya doing?\" when you see each other. The world can become so much closer to itself, just by not driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient birthday coming I wanted party come sooner But parents kept saying party came I got presents exept ones parents They said everyone left would give But one left till ten So I fell asleep When I wook one So I still wait I hate waiting mum got I asked I could open presents said wait till father gets dad finally got NUM I finally got open presents It worth wait", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology that has been developed, about how computers can now identify human emotions is something that could really benefit students. The technology that has now been developed to read emotional expressions could be very valuable in a classroom because every student has their own type of learning style, it could help teachers develop new teaching styles, and could help the students academic wise.\n\nDifferent kinds of students learn different ways, there are people who learn visually, there are people who learn by repetition, and there are peoople who have to physically do it. I am more a visual learner, I like to see how things are done, and then I learn how to do it myself, but everyone is different. Since everyone has different learning styles, the teachers can't do all of them and since students don't really like to speak up because tehy're shy or another reason they'd rather stay quiet and not learn the material. By using this facial action coding system, teachers and administrators could see how they could apply more lessons to students, different learning styles.\n\nIf this kind of technology was available for students at school it could help improve student and teacher interactions. Like Dr.Huang said \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" I know their are some teachers that teach certain ways that students get bored with, and since they find the material boring they would rather not listen. With this technology it could help teachers spice up their lessons and interact more with the students.\n\nFinally, if this type of programming were to be accepted in school environments I think it would help on a major scale. Think about how much more engaged students would be, because they are understanding what they are being taught. And if a student likes, and understands what they are learning it could help them do better on assignments, quizzes, tests. And what kind of teacher isn't happy seeing that all of their students are getting good grades, and the parents would be happy to see that their pupil is doing good in school.\n\nSo as you can see by including this kind of software in schools, there could be an increase in learning, student and teacher interaction, and academic wise. The facial action coding system could be a big step in the school system, that could really turn out benefiting everyone in a good way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For the past decades,traffic jam has been one of the issues that many countries are often facing. From my standpoint, there two major causes of these problems are transportation is getting more affordable and we are currently working in a mobile society.Therefore, the main point of this essay is to discuss these troubles to the solution.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,for the last 30 years, transportation such as cars and motorbikes are rated as luxury items. However,as the world develops with a growth in GDP and more new car industrials are being introduced hence quite a people nowadays are managed to afford a car or even more. Moreover, it is convenient for people to travel by cars or motorbikes because of its saving time and energy also comfortable feeling. Hence, the pavement is filled up with numerous kinds of moving thus leads to plenty of logjam cases, as a result, people will get frustrated and suffered from waiting in order to continue on their journey. Yet,this troublesome complication can be tackled by encouraging citizens to travel by bus or MRT to eliminate the bottleneck as well as the number of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide for instance.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, another reason for transportation has become prominent is the ambulatory of labouring. For example,a commercial business company is presumably to locate at the centre of a city so it is understandable for pupils to have an excursion from home to office.Nonetheless, since the culture of working time has a lot in similarity hence at some peak periods, countless folk have been sailing at the same moment, as a result,as a result, this position precipitating a chaotic movement along the highway.A solution to this concern is to have a diversity of running time for each district in a state,in that event, a strong reduction is expected to obtain for the sake of well-organised traffic.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,these informative details are to indicate the main leads to concerns.Although they are feasible to deal with,still ,the best prevention to this trouble is indeed one's awareness because even governments are endeavoured to convince them to drive civilly ,there are some individual can be reckless on their driving and attended to a snarl-up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting effected cyclist rough roads cylist hard time pedaling roads The snake cyclist got scared snake ride town The fact running water water found tasted like battery acid The setting rough cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We library point life Have ever looking around seen something offensive something didnt agree What chance takin shelves good Or someone else choice Would allow In opinion I would say Someone right take reading material shelves offensive way life I say like look simple For example rap hip hop culture someone finds offensive Would give right keep Or would really want someone else Lets say christian atheist finds offence untruthfull takin shelves Does sound fair If someone like certain topic culture finds offensive would simply stay away The point take something shelves would adventually nothing left Respect cultures ways life stay away offends Would like someone like takin shelves I would people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The two picture show us the plats of two different options of accommodation for students in the Australian university.\nFirst one is the room for two students, as we can notice as soon we enter from the main door, on the left we have the bathroom and on the right a small but fully functional kitchen with all the appliances stove, sink and microwave.In front of the kitchen we have a table with 2 chairs and next to it a study desk next to it on the right we can notice a tv on the wall, and on the other side, of the desk, the two beds separated from 2 cupboards, useful as a storage and eventually provide for a bit of privacy. Next to the other bad we have an other study desk and a bookshelf.\nThe second room, organized for one person, have a lot of similarly with the second but it's for jut one person, so why we have just one study desk and no cupboards or bookshelf, and obviously just one bed.\nWe also have a fully equipped kithchen and same television like the double room.\nOverall the two room presented similar features with some more foritures for the double accommodation.\nWitch is reflected in the minimum differenc of price between them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ever-increasing number of bullying activities in numerous schools. Although it is widely believed that the potential cause is seeking social attention, it is unlikely to be true that school bullying is the appropriate method to build personal branding. Nevertheless, I firmly hold the opinion that every stakeholder shall uncover the most suitable solution to prevent those dreadful actions.\nTo begin with, the primary reason for school bullying is to express students' envy or frustration feelings. There is no denying that those students are bullied by their relatives, occasionally associated with the highest grades or prestigious achievements at school. Another essential consideration is the bullies occasionally have a lack of psychological well-being and look forward to damage other students' skills with dreadful aggression. This provides a typical illustration of the achievements that were achieved by my siblings.\nApart from this, some of the proper approaches could lend support to overcome bullying actions. It is often the case that dealing with oppressors is bitterly cumbersome, particularly for those students who are less capable of winning by standing up against bullies. However, I would like to reaffirm that they still have an opportunity to confront it, for instance, by documenting everything or finding someone in authority and explaining them thoroughly in order to take shelter.\nIn light of this evidence, it is crystal clear that school bullying is able to be eradicated with the presented techniques. Additionally, it might be better to leave the school and move into high-qualified schools rather than confront the bullies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars would be something wonderful as most people\n\nwould say. Driveless would be a good thing to have but it could also cause a lot of problems. It might seem good now as you sit and think about it, but you also have to think about other things that come along with it. Driveless has a lot of things to it to think about. They also have many positive and negative aspects.\n\nWhen it comes to driveless cars I'm against the development.\n\nTo me driveless may seem or sound nice but I think that they will cause many problems as time goes on. One thing is from reading the passage it says that the cars are driveless but you still have to pay attention because when the car isn't able to do a certain thing, it may need human help. This a major problem to me because people don't pay attention to the road now with cars that they have to drive, so this isn't going to make anything better than it was. Another that will happen is that this could lead to many and more deaths if people aren't serious and cautious about what they are doing. These two things are major t reason why there shouldn't be driveless cars, but there are definetly many more.\n\nDriveless cars isn't the way to go if you want things to get better. I think we should keep it the way it is and have human contolled cars. From what movies and television show, driveless car are our future. I just hope some people sit down and think before it happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez sent loving inviting mood memoir He wrote great home family He showed happy everyone together nothing went wrong Narciso tells parents sacrificed everything Cuba The whole neighbor tightknit loved Family defiantly huge part Narciso s life expressed writing His home traditional Cuban home By heritage surrounding childhood pleasant Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life new home Narciso sets loving mood great family home memories", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" I disagree with the authors claim strongly. One of the reasons I diagree with this claim is because in the passage it says\"Each previous mission was unamnned ,and for a good reason,since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This tells me as a reader that why should we take such a big risk on losing so much money on a mission if we can barely survive on the surface for a few hours. Also the clouds on venus are made out of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The surface tempature on venus averages 800 degrees Fahrenheit,and the atmospheric preasure on venus is 90 times greater then what humans experience on earth. This tells me as a reader that trying to explore venus would be a great challenge and would have a lot of consequences to it.\n\nThe idea of Nasa of having a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape is basically pointless. The humans that would live on these vehicles would have to live through harsh conditions but they can survive. Why would you put someones life in danger and have them suffer for a planet that we cannot live..Even if we did this mission we wouldnt be able to take photographs and videography since the atmosphere is so thick. In The passage also says\"More importantly,researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas,or anything else from a distance\". This means that we wouldnt be able to take anything off the planet and all the mission would be good for is sightseeing.\n\nIn conclusion I disagree with the author and his claim saying that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The reason i say this is because exploring venus has to many risks and it could cost lives of humans. In my point of view humans are priceless and they should not risk their lives on a planet that is not habitable. Also even if the mission was sucessful we would not gather many samples on venus due to the fact that the atmosphere is so thick and the conditions on venus is unhabitable. I personally believe that maybe in the future we should have a mission to venus ,but right now knowing all the risks that exploring venus has, that we should work on the technology more and make sure that in the future exploring venus and learning more about it will be possible in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The things find libararies nt offensive anybody It s choice make rather wo nt read Nobody making look things nt want Do nt look think s offensive The best thing keep shelves Some people like looking reading things like People nt go library pick book movie know would nt like If happen would nt library around anything get library I bet find something offensive People find stuff like entertaning watch read stuff like That hurt people make books movies offensive feel like thats people wa nt see True enough thats people wo nt see long s effecting kind way That see daily basic tv offensive things sit watch tv nt problem reading watching book I see stuff offensive tv everyday nt bother reading book anything else like I woud nt care m use seeing tv Nobody make read stop reading things like You nt look think offensive It nt problem anyone thats hear see everyday No matter people find entertaning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Narciso Rodriguez mood auther created peaceful It saying traditional cuban home passionate cuban music filled air There also mixing aromas air coming kitchen There s tons loving people around house Which makes home comfertable The mood always happy everyone loved cook would always together even though wernt blood related Within walls young parents created created traditional cuban home every heart kitchen As tell family loves together enjoys eachothers company", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people may say that the \"Face on Mars\" was created by aliens. But scientists say that it was just a misunderstanding. There are reasons why the face isn't made by aliens. And the reasons are that we didn't have a good shot on the face when it was back in 1976. And there have never been any other signs of life on the planet mars, and it is just a martian mesa.\n\nOne reason why the face was not made by aliens is because we didn't have very good cameras back in 1976. We couldn't get a good shot when we took the first photo that was in 1976 because we didn't have that good of technology back then. Many years after the first photo was taken, we went back up there to do some more research. We took some more photos with better technology and realized that it was just a mesa. The first photo made it look like a face because of the shadows that were shown on it. The shadows made it look like it had eyes and a mouth.\n\nOn top of not having good technology to take photos, the face just turned out to be a mesa on Mars. A mesa is a natural landform that isn't man-made. If we found out that it wasn't a mesa then there still might be talk about it today. What helped us find out that it was a mesa was the fact that we had better cameras to use and we could just zoom in on the face.\n\nThe final reason why the face was not created by aliens is because that there have never been any other sightings of strange things on Mars. It would be safer to say that the face was made by aliens if there had been signs of alien life before this matter. But, there haven't been any other signs of aliens. If there is a time where we see another strange thing that might involve aliens, then we would have to be for sure that our theory is true.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" has changed the way we see things as humans because we always want to find new things out. People just want to jump to the conclusion that aliens are real without even doing any research. Luckily there are some people out there that do want to take the time to do research. I want to thank them for doing so because if this world thought that aliens were real then everyone would be scared or really excited. So this world needed something like this to happen so that the people that live here feel safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology called the Facial Action Coding read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it will be very benefitile for the schools. The schools needed this technology to identify the emotional expressions of the students. Sometime things happen in school that the teachers don't know about; they don't know how their students are feeling. There are three benefitile about this technology. The Facial Action Coding System help the teachers identify the emotion of their students. The second is, it really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much the computer can do. The third is, it will help you tell if the person that is the most important to you is sad or happy.\n\nThe first reason is the Facial Action Coding System is valuable because it help the teachers identify the emotion of their student. It said in the article \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". Some of the students in the school won't talk about how they are feeling in the classroom, and some of them would be scared to ask question when they are confused. The new technology would help the teachers so much on how to find out if their students are understanding the works they did in the classroom.\n\nThe second is, it really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much the computer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. Everybody in this world needs someone that could tell if they were happy or sad, so they would feel like someone is understanding them at lest. \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\". These are the great things Eckman has classified that can help us and make us smile.\n\nThe third is, it will help you tell if the person that is the most important to you is sad or happy. Sometime we can tell that the person is happy or sad, but we can't not tell it all the time. We can makes the wrong assumption about a person by the look on their face.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is very valuable to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. So we need the new technology to help telling us about a person feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What memoir A memoir writing someone s feelings experiences life This memoir Narciso Rodriguez tells life simple home Newark New Jersey Throughout memoir Rodriguez sits distinct mood love care learned parents back childhood The mood mainly set memories environment friends culture All things described Rodriguez make feel mood expresses The mood love care incorporated memories childhood beginning time born Rodriguez begins draw mood paragraph two describing home made traditional Cuban home parents She describes rich culinary skills Passionate Cuban music And congregation family friends begins describe love friends neighbors felt family Last Rodriguez describes influence Cuban culture She talks parents helped others kind made today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should come participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because there are many huge exsperiences in life and this is a huge exsperience that I promise that you will not forget about. Some reason why you should join this program is because it is a great opportunity. Another great reason is because you will learn a lot about responcibility and hard work. More good statements baout why you should join this program is that you will go to many different places and not only see the place but learn about the country/state to. So come join because you will get an exsperience of a lifetime.\n\nI believe that you should come and participate in this program because in the article Luke said, \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy,\" so if Luke liked the exsperience himself then I bet that you will to. Some more statements why you should come to the program is because most people dont get an opportunity like this one to come to amazing trips and places like this. Its also great because in the article at the very bottom it says that it helped with knowing other peoples needs. These are great reasons why you should join. not only does it an excperience of a lifetime but it shows responcibility.\n\nSo it might sound dangerous to but going to these places and learning about them and also learning responcibility is an exsperience of a lifetime. So those are many good reasons why you should come participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do think libraries right take books movies shelves find offensive In opinon I agree I think able take shelves Many people different thoughts opinons I going state mine next paragraphs To begin everybody likes read watch types books moviesSome like romantic scary myserious many selectionsFor instincts one person reads something agree mean next person read going like either Sometimes I enjoy reading books people get hurt sometimes killed someone else reads might think horrible offensive Another reason I go library I expect get book I want read others like One time I went library I looking romantic book read I could find So I went asked lady counter said anymore I asked told lady found wrong children reading In opinon maybe lady even like romantic booksThey one person believes The next reason library put movie book shelf first place thought people would enjoy The writer producer would happy found hisher movie book got taken library found offensive Just give book chance see everybody likes I understand everybody thought really offensive take one person To end belief book library one time stay till gets old falls apart The library open every type books boring onesSo I believe books get taken sheleves stay right suppose beIf like book movie suggest peoples family read read see reaction", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In mood I think author trying create Well I think happy I believe nt use depressing words ephrasses Also great family He stateted enjoyed lifestyle home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern times “education” is something unseparable from children’s life. It can be case that children may enjoy their educational activities. However , children used to tired with educational activities and they transfer their attention to other activities for leisure time. It is completely acceptable and reasonable.\n \nFirstly,\n \nNot every child in the world has same habits and hobbies. Children are suppose to enjoy their childhood, in our society education is must nonetheless education can also be stressful for children.\nSecondly,\nFun time is something related to getting rid of stress and regain the energy for work. If children are suppose to do same as they do whole day in their free time. There are possibilities they may lose energy, concentration and capacity. As a result the main purpose of fun activities is destroyed.\n \nIf students do they what they please to do in leisure time, it can reduce burden. Being timepassed it is also possible to transfer their hobby into a successful career. Even though it may not be concerted into career it can have a vast effect in student’s educational profile.\n \nIn this world every kind of talent is needed like we need singer, painter, artist, businessmen and science. If every child in the world will aim to be scientist what we will do with so many “Einstein”?\n \nSo in my opinion let leisure time be meaningful and worthwhile, it is advisable that parents should not interfere in children’s play time until it is harmful and let them enjoy their precious time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As Mrs. Crown was wondering around the classroom she had noticed Marcel's computer showed him feeling upset today. \"Marcel i am going to go grab you a cookie from the cafeteria to cure your sadness.\" New computers could have the ability to allow teachers to read the emotion of their students face through Facial Action Coding System.Teaching methods are crucial to the ability of a student to learn and so is knowing how your student feels, and that gives the Facial Action Coding System great value to society.\n\nBeing bored of the same teaching style everyday really takes a toll on the desire students have to want to learn because no one adjusts to the way students feel about certain teaching methods. Inbedded in the article the author states,\n\n\" \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" \" As a student we all are tired of looking at the same boring lessons we get from our teachers each and every day. Having something that would adjust to our likings could become crutial in our education making children want to learn everyday.\n\nContradictory to the above pro of Facial Action Coding System there could be many downfalls of the computer changing whats on its screen based on your facial expression. In paragrpah six Alto says,\"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" As the author explains this it could be a great thing because who wants to see ads they do not like. But the downfall to this is even though your computer can give you what you want based on your emotion what if you are already upset about something else? An ad you like might pop up but when the computer reads your face and sees you are upset it might change it to an ad the computer thinks you might like but really you are just upset about something else. The emotion on your face does not always eximplify what is going on that moment it can still be the reaction to something hours ago.\n\nOverall this Facial Coding System could enable special needs teachers to figure out more about a special needs student that is acting upset but can not speak their emotions. The article states,\"By weighing the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.\" This would create a whole new world for sepcial needs teachers. With the mere frusteration they face each and every day trying to assist their students but not actually knowing what they are feeling could be cured with this extrodinary invention. With one scan of the face they could help an upset student quickly become satisfied again.\n\nTeaching methods are crucial to the ability of a student to learn and so is knowing how your student feels, and that gives the Facial Action Coding System great value to society. The computer allows teachers to know the emotions of their students. \"Thank you Mrs.Crown. This cookie sure did make me feel better and is allowing me to focus more on my work.\" Marcel whispered while taking a bite out of his cookie.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay its all about Venus and how hot it is and what it would be like to live there and what it would take to live there. So im going to start off by saying in my opion that it would not be fun to live there because of how hot it is. Despite the dangers in this artical it explains how hard it would to be there becuase of the sutdys of how the scients.\n\nEven tho that it looks like a cute little star from where we see it on planet earth. This planet can reach the tempature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit thats pretty\n\nhot if you think about it. It takes up to about 350 to 450 degrees Fahrenheit it make an average pizza at home now think of that twice as hot. Because thats the only the average tempeture on the planet. And did you know that Venus is the clostest planet to u. Its also the next planet we go to for us to live on if we ever get that far in science. in my opionn\n\ni think that we will eventually get there now i dont know how long it will take us but i firmly belive that we we will get there. Venus is also known as earth twin. Because of terms of density and size. But we can't forget about our nerighbor by the name of \"Mars\". but the weird thing is that we all orbit the sun at differnt speeds. some cool things is that we have sent mulitple things to venus called \"space crafts\" but the sad thing is that non of the space crafts have lasted any longer than a acoulpe hors on venus. That is why we have not done any unmanned missions.\n\nThe planet venus has almsot 97 perdcent carbon dioxide blankets. a couple rason why i dont think that we could live there right now is because. the atmsopheric pressure is 90 percent more higher than the earths is!!! So this means that the things on planet venus are way more extreme than anything we have ever encounterd here on earth. Back to what i was saying with the tempature it is has the hottest surface in our solar system. A fun fact about venus is that it use to be fully covered in water which is kinda weird if you think about it because its the hottest surfaace a plantet surface has.\n\nWhat im trying to say is that Venus would be so cool to live on but would also be really akward to live on because of how hot it is we would prolly have to wear hot suits to stay alive but i dont think ill be alive by the time we get thre because we cant even send machines there for a couple hours without them breaking so hopefully in the future we will be able to because it would be such an expirence for someone to live there and just be able to feel what its like to live on another planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driveless cars. The author talks about what a future with self driving cars would look like with both the pros and the cons. One of the pioneers of driverless cars is Google, Google has had cars that could drive by themselves since 2009. In the future, we should invest more on deveoping driverless cars because of their advanced technology aspects, saftey feature, and overall comfort.\n\nIn the future, self driving or driverless cars will become a common thing. With technology becoming more and more advanced as humans evolve what seems new to us now will in five or ten years become part of our lives. Google, who is partaking in ground breaking research of their own already has a driverless car with many different technologies. \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" Google may prove to be one of the first big companies to have a self driving car in the near future. Another major positive aspect of its immense number of safety features. As technology becomes more advanced, we see more and more deaths due to texting/calling while driving. \"Displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over--something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" Driverless cars will more than likely cause a decrease in the deaths from texting and driving. Driverless cars are closer than we think, Tesla has projected to release a model in 2016 while Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have their own cars by 2020 (Unknown 10). These and many more are all of the positive aspects to self driving cars.\n\nBy investing and taking advantage of the new technologies that lie ahead with self driving cars, we will begin to revolutionize the way we look at safety on the road. As technology moves forward, we as a people must adapt as well. The next time there is a huge car accident on the news, think if this were to happen in five years, could it have been prevented?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using this type of technology of emotional expressions will be very useful for teacher and parents to help their students or children to see if something or someone is making them feel happy, angry, disgusted, or feared. Having this technology in schools will also help parents because the parents don't have to buy a computer that can try to handle this type of technology.\n\nIf teachers do a test on students that are getting bulied or getting picked on, this type of technology will help teacher get students to speak up and or find the person that is bullys other students. By showing the student that's getting pick on a picture of students the teacher thinks who maybe the person bulling the student, the student may make a fear face on the picture of the person that is picking on the student.\n\nIf teachers see that a student is failing their classes and don't talk a lot in school, the teachers can make a test on that student to see if they are going through things back at home. Teachers can have the students parents to come to the school while the student is being tested, they can have a converation on what makes the student angry or depressed about.\n\nThose are some example why I think this type of technology can really help teachers and parents learn about their students or children that they don't want to speak of. This can also help parents that can't afford this type of technology at home and having this technology at school, parents can bring their children to the school and have them get tested on what's bothering them at school or home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of Mr. Carter's most important jobs is that of public relations director. The purpose of this job is to establish a good attitude toward his country among the public (people) of the origin country. As part of this job, he supervises the writing and distribution of press releases (news stories) for the media. Media refers to all the ways of spreading information, such as newspapers, radio, television, and other means of communication. Media is a plural word, meaning it refers to all these means. Radio is a medium of communication; it is one of the media used for advertising. Public relations people place special news stories in the media to help build interest in the destination country. Advertisements in the media, paid for by the tourism department, also help establish interest.\r\n\r\nEmployees in public relations and advertising must be fluent in English if they work in English-speaking countries. \"To be fluent\" means to speak, read, and write a language almost as well as the natives do. Mr. Carter's staff members write advertisements, news releases, and brochures to promote travel to their country. They give lectures (talks) and show films about their country to groups of people. They answer questions about travel to their country.\r\n\r\nMr. Carter holds press conferences whenever something of importance or interest happens in his country. A press conference is a meeting attended by reporters from newspapers, magazines, radio, or television. At a press conference, someone makes announcements that their readers, listeners, or viewers might find interesting. Whenever an important person from his country visits, Mr. Carter holds a press conference to introduce that person to the representatives of the media. Such news items help to build interest in and knowledge about his country.\r\n\r\nInformation offices also give tourists and immigrants helpful information. The clerks give them any necessary documents or visas that may be required for entrance. The staff can also tell them about different laws and regulations in the destination country.\r\n\r\nMr. Carter and his staff also work with businesses and industries that might be interested in either moving to or doing business with the destination country. Mr. Carter's country wants foreign industries to come and help build industry there. The country is also interested in exporting some of its products. In turn, the country is anxious to get the best prices on products imported from other countries.\r\n\r\nWherever they go and whatever they do, the information staff members represent their country. \"We are the face of our country to the rest of the world,\" Mr. Carter says. \"Before they know anything about our country, people form their impressions and attitudes about it from the things we do and say.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author happy A sense security friends families neighbors His parents sacrificed careers leave behind friends family basically starting life benifit children Where Narciso lived nice twofamily blond brick building There learnd cuban culture cooking music filted house child Narciso tons families Not necessarily blood related neighbors mostly immagrants thoes cultures came together great solidarity friendship She lived close community helping hand always needed Her parents always kept arms door open Alegria land lords daughter came kitchen often Also aunts Bertha Juanita along cousins Arnold Maria Rosemary Often someone would stay temporolly Even hard times parents would sacrifice anything And Narciso greatful Greatful parents makeing simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are concered about enviroment problems these days and think that they should try to solve the issues. Some people think the government should increase the cost of fules for automotives and other vehicles in order not to worse the air quality of the earth. However, other people suggest that there should be the other ways of keeping our planet clean and beautiful.\r\n\r\nThe government can expect the lower emit of carbon dioxides by introducing the higher prices on oils because by doing so, some people cannot afford to drive a car. Those people who cannot afford the gasoline price increase will use the public transpotation instead of their own cars, then the total amount of fuel usage will be lowered therefore it will lead to better air quality.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think there shoud be more other ways to solve the environmental problems. For instance, bringing up the fuel costs will create the unfairness between the rich and the poor. It is so clear that only the poor people sacrifice their lives by not driving their own cars but the rich people have no impacts on it. Furthermore, there are so many other environmental problems that human should actively work on, such as ocean pollution. To protect our ocean, some people are already working on to reduce the usage of plastic materials. In fact, we use the paper material of straws at Starbucks, which is actually preventing a lot of sea turtles from dying because of swallowing the plastic materials.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, additional charges on fuel would be effective way to stop the air pollution, however, I believe there are many other ways to solve the environmental issues that humen being should be involved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives author creates mood memoir In paragraph speakers shows readers much love happiness flowed family s house How cooking loving parents eventually pass culinary skills How passionate Cuban music played loved friends endless celebrations This showed happy mood author creating cooking music parties happiness flowing air In paragraph Narciso parents came country wanting give children better life even though left behind country loved This show love parents happy life In paragraph author grateful parents love sacrifices This shows love apperciation parents truning simple house home always rember In conclusion author creates mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what the electoral college is? If you answered no I would say me to, but in this essay im going to explain why i am for it. I havent heard of the electoral college till now. So sit back and read this.\n\nI think that we should do the electoral college, so everyone has a say on who they want to be the state senate. Under the college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. While others might say no we need to get rid of the electoral college, because the senate might be bribing the voters, so he knows that he/she has their vote for sure.\n\nThis is where it gets tricky. Alot of people might disagree with you because you have a different point of view than them, but it is ok if you disagree with them, because its your vote that counts. This might be what they say \"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational\". The biggest arguments are, because people say that one of the runners in the campaign did something they wasn't suppose to do.\n\nAt the most basic level, The elctoral college is unfair to voters. That is probaly something you would say if you was against the electoral college. It's ok to go for what you believe in. You might get judged but who cares it's your opinion don't listen to them.\n\nI personally think that we should keep it. The Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. It's the electors that elect the president not the people. When your voting for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. it's nearly impossible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. Believe it or not its has happened very rarely. It happened in 2000, when Gore had more votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that's the first time since 1988.\n\nThere is 5 reasons for retaining the electoral college despute its lack of democratic pedigree. It may have ripped some people off, but at least we got people as good presidents. You may not like them, but they have helped us over the years that we were in debt and need. Like right now the president's wife is helping the obese kids at school by putting in whole grains and healthier foods. Those are good reasons, but not as good as these.\n\nCertainty of out come.\n\nThe reason is that winning candidate's share of the electoral college invariably exceeds more than enough. Because almost all the states award electoral votes on a winner take all basis, even a vey slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible. But the stakes are highly unlikely to happen.\n\nEveryone's President\n\nThe electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. There is region that has enough electoral votes to elect a president. some people has no incentive to campaign heavily in the states that they are regionally favorited, becuse they will not gain any electoral votes by increasing their plurality.\n\nSwing States\n\nThe winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. Voters in the toss up states are more likely to pay more attention to the campaign. So they know that they are going to know that they are deciding the election. They are also likely to be the most thoughtful voters.\n\nBig States\n\nThe elctoral college restores somke of the weight in the political balance that large sates lose by virtue of the mal-appointment of the senate decreed in the constitution. The most popular vote in 2012 was by the state of Florida. Obama won that election with only 29 electoral votes. Bigger states get more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a smaller state does.\n\nAvoid Run Off Elections\n\nThe electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which the candidate recieves a majority of the votes by the cast. When neither of the candidates recieve majority vote it becomes more intense, because they start trying their hardest so they can win the election. Well there is the five reasons.\n\nIt can be argued but only one will be victorious. Will we keep the electoral vote? Or will we get rid of it? So if i persuaded you to keep it pick, then keep if i didnt, then pick get rid of it. Which one will you choose.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think The Author finish story girls sees plant As A symbol straidth And fAith tAke test Next year When comes Back truly likes plant And hopes Bring lack", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted There many obstacles builders To allow dirigibles dock One main obstacles builders frame work They design building could bear stress dirigible The stress dirigible s load wind Pressure would transmitted way building s foundation In order make work would use diffrent Steel Another obstacle builder would safety Winds hydrogen main focuses Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable The winds top building Constantly Shifting due violent air currents They would also careful pedestrians would dangling high pedestrians street Those two examples builders Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Throughout excerpt author states dirigibles hailed transport future paragraph This means builders work harder figure ways get work Architects engineers talked experts equipment needed build dirigibles The author also states asked people test dirigible They work mooring mast order get dirigible work properply Getting mooring mast work difficult builders In paragraph says greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Dirigibles basically given s", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that sudying Venus is a worthy pursuit, which means that theres many challenging things on the planats surface that we don't know but have to learn.\n\nIn paragragh 3 it says \"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\" meaning that Venus isnt the only thing that is challenging also meaning that, clouds highly corrosive are more challenging to learn or even study about. Venus is the secound planet from our sun, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely its often referred to as Earth's twin. In paragragh 4 it says \" venus was probably covered largely with oceans\", so maybe we didnt even realize we had it because it was covered by oceans or maybe it just didnt wan to be seen.\n\nThe author says in paragragh 8 that \" Venus has vaule , not only becasue of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becasue human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people are of the opinion that if they want to be successful in life, they had better get a university education, while Some segments of society reckon it would not be long lasting benefits to succeed in life. As far as I am concerned, effective education in universities prepare individuals for a bright future and guarantee professional qualifications.\r\n\r\n To embark on, getting experience or doing something you like can help you become professional rather than having academic degrees. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In This way, people have numerous options for finances. Firstly, students have a choice to admission in some institutions and emphasise on practical knowledge and duration of some courses have only one year after that they can try with different companies according to their skills. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. Secondly, some people have more work experience, software skills such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills that will also be beneficial in people's careers as some companies hire based on their confidence level and soft skills and provide scholarships to the students.\r\n\r\n A University is a place where “pebbles are polished, diamonds are dimmed” itself signifies the importance of university education. In a sense, applying for prestigious establishments can assist citizens to achieve their ambitions and give them the best chances to improve their knowledge. Because the universities have well-known professors that they have professional experience and can help people to become successful. For example, when people have gone to universities, they have developed their practical skills such as communication skills, time management and leadership skills and these skills can influence their future lives. In my opinion, going to top universities provide students with comprehensive educations that we cannot find in any place. Consequently, becoming more successful in life can result in effective education in educational institution.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people have numerous opportunities for a career path with the help of a high degree whereas students have also an option to register in less duration courses that will help to gain practical skills. However, I believe that university degree is the most important to become successful in life as graduation is one of the basic requirements when it comes to recruitment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, thanks to the influence of globalization, the phenomenon of students are allowed to express their opinions on teachers' performance has aroused concerns among various circles. Although there are compelling arguments in favor of making a criticism would impact the conduct of students, I concur with the view that making criticism on a teacher's performance can bring more positive effects.\r\n\r\nOf all the reasons why criticism could bring negative impacts, probably the most significant one is that not only should educational schools teach students on academic subjects, but also teach them to be all-rounded individuals. According to Confucianism, it is of paramount importance that pupils should always respect their mentors by all means. If pupils are encouraged to give feedback to their teachers regarding their performance, a sense of apprenticeship would be disrupted as students would treat themselves equally important as teachers, in terms of the teaching role in a school educational system. Worse still, students would not listen to their teachers anymore, that in turn would lead to misconduct behaviour or even violence, due to the loss of discipline.\r\n\r\nDespite the aforementioned negative effects of making comments to the teachers, I am personally of the opinion that it could facilitate the learning progress of students. Regarding the roles of a teacher, they are responsible to understand the needs of every student and, hence, develop individualized learning materials for students to make their own answers in their assignments. By giving feedback on the teaching performance of teachers from students, as a result, teachers can able to modify their teaching styles or plans in a bid to improve the student learning process. For example, most of the students are required to fill out the evaluation form regarding the teaching material, in different high schools, in order to improve the educational quality of the classroom to better examination results. And therefore, by having appropriate feedback from students, the teaching quality can be effectively improved.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, although making criticism on teachers' performance may lead to student misconduct behaviour, it is of uttermost significance that this could enhance the teaching quality of a school in an efficient way. It is hoped that this topic could be made worldwide in order to increase public awareness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author shows a lot of support for the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers in a multitude of ways some of which include interesting facts, to ways how it could be done. He even tells us in the first paragraph saying \"it has proved a very challanging place to examine more closely.\" so it is not very easy to do but it is possibe.\n\nThe author even talks about how humans have already sent numerous space craft to venus in paragraph two \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" and just a sentence after that it tells us \"numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challanging planet for humans to study, despite its proxmity to us.\" so the author tells that us despite the issue of how dangerous it is to land there, it still tells us as readers that we are still studying it despite how much of a challange it is, and just because we are close to it doesn't make it any easier to study.\n\nIn paragraph four he starts telling us why its worthy, despite how hard it is to study by saying \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like plane in our solar system.\" and then continues on to say \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" so he is implying that benefits of studying Venus would be that we would be able to see if there were other life forms on the planet in the past, and that we would be able to find out what happened to the past earth like planet. The author also keeps telling us that Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary visit, so that it would be cheaper to get there and we could try to study it more without spending too much despite the dangers. Cheaper then its counterpart Mars at least. He even tells us of some ways that NASA has ideas for sending humans to Venus so that we would be able to study it without that much effort despite the dangers.\n\nThe author even supports his claim in paragraph eight by saying \"Striving to meet the challange presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" by saying that he tells us some of the benefits like how studying the planet has value, but he also tells us that we will likely be studying other dangerous planets and that this is just one of the many we will be studying so doing this one is no different and that it would be well worth the challange, but also the insights we would earn from the planet itself. In the next sentence he tell us that \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" the author is telling us that we should not be scared of the dangers and doubts, but that we should improve upon ourselves and shove ourselves to the edge of imagination and innovation, despite the dangers and that it is well worth the risk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did the author support their idea well in this article? I do believe he did. I saw many reasons as to why we should at least try to go to venus. He gave many reasons as to how Venus is very simillar to Earth and could be inhabited one day. He also gave many reasons as to how it could be dangerous, and why people haven't really been able to do so yet. They mention things about what Venus has done to other space crafts in the past, and what it can do to others now even.\n\nThe author gives many reasons as to why Venus is reffered to as Earths \"twin.\" He says, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" In this he tells us that Venus is like Earth in the ways of how dense it is and how large it is. He also says that it is occasionally close to us, so that shows us that it could be just like Earth, but with some differences. The author also says in paragraph 4, \"it may have once been the most Eath-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported many forms of like, just like Earth.\" With this he is telling us that there could be fossils, or we could one day maybe inhabit Venus if needed, with adaptations of course.\n\nThe author also says that the journey would be dangerous. He mentions in paragraph 2 \"each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no space craft has survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" In this he is telling us just how dangerous it is, because tipically you would think of a machine being tougher than the human body, but as you think about it you can see just as fast as that machine was destroyed. If that machine was destoryed so quickly imagine how quickly the human body would be. He also says \"not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" This also lets us know how hard it would be to get there and how fast, if the right materials aren't used, something can be destroyed during the trip.\n\nThe author then gives us NASA's plan as to how somebody would be able to access Venus in paragraph 5. He tells us that \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would be to allow scientists to float above the fray.\" He gives us this idea so that we can think about it being a safer route and that maybe with this method somebody could be able to make it. With his evidence in the previous paragraphs we can conclude it would be very dangerous to land on Venus, but not to be above it. He also gives us a scenario of what it would be like for the scientists floating above. He tells us, \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up out of their way.. temperatures would still be toasy at arounf 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth... radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" By telling us this he is saying that it wouldn't be the most comfortable thing, but it would be liveable. He is showing us that it would be possible, and if they really wanted to, they could explore Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 8 he mentions that the \"scientist floating above would only give limited insignt,\" with this we can see that there still wouldn't be everythig solved, but we would still be closer than we've ever gotten. He also says in paragraph 8, \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Meaning that the scientists wouldn't be able to photograph anything on Venus to look at later. The scientists would only be able to look at things closet than anybody ever has, but not be able to document any of it. With this we can also see that we wouldn't be able to see what Venus looked like from Earth, making it hard to report back on findings and research.\n\nAll in all I beleive the author did support his idea well. He gave the pros and cons and was able to explain everything out. I myself don't know it it would be worth all the money in supplies, but I do think with NASA's idea we can get closer than we've ever gotten before. The conditions would be liveable, but maybe a little uncomfortable, and we could get some good information on Venus. If Venus is as closely related to Earth as the author makes it out to be, then maybe it could be worth a shot, but I am still debating on it. It's nothing the author did, because he did explain and support everything very well, but I've always had very strong opinions on everything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "INTRODUCTION\n\nThe Mona Lisa is one paint that is famous in the world, according to some new computer software can reconise emotions in people, this system is a innovation of Prof. Thomas Haung, of the Beckman and is working with Prof. Nicu Sebe, they will have help from Dr. Paul Eckman institute of Advanced Science at the University of Illinois man, creator crator of FACS.\n\nBODY\n\nThis system has some questions that people thikn, howcan a computer recognize subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? Dr. Haung said that the procces begins when the computer structs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness - and then assosiated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" observes Dr. Haung.\n\nA classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Haung predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. Most human communication is nonverval, including emotional communication, notes Dr. Haung. According to the Facila Feedback Theory of Emotion, muving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also help to produce them. whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the scien of emotions.\n\nCONCLUSION\n\nIn conclusion i tink that this program fantastic because can know how we feal, it identify human emotions just looking our face, it is a nice system because i can know if one person that a love is sad, happy, angry, etc. i thik that this system is goin to be important in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On this article the author is decribing the plant Venus and how is is dangers for humans/NASA to study the plant. Also the author is talking about how Venus is the brightest night sky and \"Venus is also referred to Earth twin because is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size\" (paragraph 2). Gives out reasons why Venus is a dangers plant to study. Said a history about NASA studying Venus and things has gone wrong. Venus is twice or 80 times as dangers as Earth.\n\nThe author said that Venus is dangers to study at because the carbon dioxide is 97 percent and average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\"(paragraph 3). So it's saying that Venus might look like Earth by no where near the experience. Venus temperature is higher that an human can't take. As well as the clouds is highly corrosive sulfuric acid.\n\nAlso on the article says that the Earth and Venus so alike on how they look. By terms in size, density, and occasinally the clostest distance in too and Venus is also referred to as Earth's twin. The author explains that the pervious spacecraft did not survived landing on Venus. No other spacecraft or none of above as landed on Venus on the past decades.\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus reputation as a challenging planet\"(Paragraph 2).\n\nThe author says that NASA is going to send more people to study Venus and will find other suggesting on how to. According to the article it says, \"NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus\"(paragraph 5). They had an idea of hovering 30 or so miles above to see Venus landscape. As NASA says is will still be around 170 degrees hovering arounf 30 miles or so, which could be a problem beacuse it's still too hot for humans. As not an easy conditons but could probably be the same sea level on earth but still survivable for humans.\n\nAs all the dangers said could be caused or worst by studing Venus, NASA is still by this day is working on other approaches to studying Venus. By the article saying, \" Example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber\"(paragraph 7). Which those devices that they are studying was made at year 1800s and during World War ll. By all so said by the article is dangers to study Venus because they had failed missions in the past. Also know that Venus is not even close to Earth and their temperatures and oxygen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reasons on wy the Auther suggests that stuying Venus us worthy. Venus is the 2ndmplanet from our Sun. but the problem is venus is more dangerous to examin close up due to how close Venus is to the Sun\n\nVenus is also erfered to as Earths \"twin,\" Venu is also the closest planet to Earths density and size, and occasionally th closest in distance but their are some downsides Venus is pretty much a thick cloud of cabon monoxide and we have sent unmanned spaceships their before, but when thye landed the space ships woud eventually break 3 hours or more.\n\nAlso Venus can reachup t 800 degrees fahrenhiet and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we exspearience on Earth. the conditions are far more than what a human can exspearience on Earth. Such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepist part of our oceans.\n\nNASA has an idea on how to get humans to Venus the safest way possible, imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering over Venus 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. but at those high altitudes it would stil be a little toasty from tempachers that can rech to 170 defrees Fahrenheit but the air presser would be close to sea level on Earth solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. not easy conditions, but survivible for humans.\n\nthose are some things on pros and cons about trying to habitat to Venus one the tempacher is very high at 800 derees fehrinhiet and with the radiation levels be dramasticly high but it can be a could place to go if something ever happend to out planet Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story last paragraph shows spring ready retake test It shows like geese care come back time study pass test In story author includes last paragraph truly show dedication eventually grow comfortable new home pass drivers test good time Saeng wants comfortable new life isnt yet one misses But knows go back try like geese often winter This effective way end story really communicated Saengs message dedication longing overcome obstacles new home driving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient important skill You need live life With patients life would crazy One time I patient wait time felt good One day years ago I went And know long lines They hour half I waiting turn go haunted hause It looked like would lot fun Then I got looked like people line time My mom asked CAPS want go different ride come back hannah I love I told got line After hour line people front mom I Then finally turn I got sit chair buckled felt good know waiting long time I I patient I peeping asking turn I stood patient That time I realized I patient I knew en I really could patients Its important skill help live life well without crazy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The increase in petrol price has been thought to be one of the most ideal solutions to deal with detrimental impacts of vehicles on environment. In the following paragraphs I will give my point of view from both negative and positive sides of this statement.\n\nOn the one hand, there are manifold brilliant benefits that we should pay attention to. When the cost of petrol climbs it means that those who travel by private vehicles have to pay more money on their transporting. So as tho save money for other needs, more and more people are likely to choose public transportation or motor vehicles which work by using alternative source of energy. For instance, without a high amount of salary, employees will choose to become train passengers to go to the office as they can save large amount of money. \n\nOn the other hand, there are many noticeable drawbacks should be taken into consideration, One those who have to use public transport they are more likely to face dozens of issues like unable to go to work on time because the delays of train, bus ... Additionally, in developing areas such as Asia, Africa... there are not enough route to meet the requirements of residents to travel by public transportation seemed to be impossible at all.\n\n To draw a conclusion, every coin has its two side so that the given solution is really engrossing but al should be considered carefully before applying to reality", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program that takes care of: horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. The Seagoing Cowboys were hired by UNRRA. The program started when World War 2 was over in Europe in 1945.\n\nYou should join the program, because it helps the lost animals. Another reason is you get to explore more of the world and meet new animals. When you are bored or have nothing to do for a while just join the Seagoing Cowboys. If you do this it would be generous to the animals who did go through all of this pain. That is just a few reasons to join just think of the other posibilities you can do to help animals.\n\nIn conclusion, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The UNRRA hired us and we need to help them. You get to help lost and injured animals either in the ocean or on land. This program first started in 1945, the year that World War 2 ended in Europe. Can you consider joining the Seagoing Cowboys programs?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nI have done research and I would like to change the Electoral College to the popular vote for the President of the United States. Source 1: \"What is electoral College?\" explains that \"each canadate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.\" Many people do not know what that really means. It means that the people of the United States do not actually vote for who their president will be. They are voting for someone who gets to choose who the president will be. Having the Electoral College is very confusing. I think it is more fair to have the people of the United States vote directly for their president instead of voting for a slate of electios that then choose the president.\n\nBy getting rid of the Electoral College, the vote for the United States president will be more fair. We, the people of the United States, would not be voting for a slate of electors. We would actually be voting for who we want to become our president. These votes would be more direct and accurate.\n\nSource 2: \"Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" states that voters may get confused and vote for someone that they didnt want to vote for. The people should be the ones voting for their president. It is unfair that only the electors get to vote in the end. Voters of the electors cannot even control who the electors vote for. The people have to put their trust in the electors to vote for the president. It make smore sense for the people to have a say and for them to have the ability to vote directly.\n\nWhen I turn eighteen and I am allowed to vote, I hope that my vote actually matters. I hope that my vote does not just go towards an elector. I hope that my vote will count towards whom I think will represent our country well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It would be a good idea to buy a driverless car. It's a great way to reduse accidents.\n\nWhen drivers get tired they can just let the car drive itself.\n\nThere would be less pollution.\n\nWe wouldn't use as much fuel which mean we'll waste less on fuel.\n\nIf Google has made driverless cars since 2009, I see no reason to stop or not aloud to use driverless cars.\n\nIf, we can use the technology to make better, smarter, and safer cars why not make them?\n\nGeneral Motors created a concept car in the late 1950s, that could do special trest tracks.\n\nIt all started with a concept car.\n\nWe've become smarter as well and they'll find ways to creat a perfect driverless car before 2020.\n\n\" Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\", \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\", Pargraph eight.\n\nPeople will still want a car that they can still control at anygiven moment.\n\nDrivers might get bored but at least they know they are save.\n\nThe driver doesn't have to stare at the rode avery second.\n\nThey can do other things while the driverless car is driving itself.\n\nIf the driverless car needs the person to drive it will notifly the driver.\n\nAs for the laws that focus on keeping drivers, and anyone in the car safe.\n\nI get those laws are made to keep people safe.\n\nOnce it shown that driverless car are safe you should make it legal to drive them.\n\nOr should I say let them drive us.?\n\n\" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" Pargraph nine.\n\nIt would be the both of their fault fault. The driver of buying and or maybe not paying attention.\n\nThe manufacture for not make the car right.\n\nIt all depends on what happened in the Accident.\n\nYou can also make the person who buys the driverless car to sign an agreement.\n\nThat says if a accident were to happen that it wouldn't be the manufacturers fault.\n\nHe or She will take all responsiblity for what happens in the accident.\n\nAll in all this is a very difficult argument.\n\nYou can go eithre way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of the passage suggests many reasons why Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. In this essay there is going to be many reasons to help support the author. Scientist could learn more about different planets if they ca successfully study the surface of Venus. Then scientist could try to discover new planets and galaxys out in the void of space.\n\nThe author explans that Venus is a very dangerous planet to study due to its surface temperature and its atmosperic pressure could crush about anything that trys to land. In the passage the author tells us facts about Venus, \"a thick atmospere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Which shows that Venus could melt any metals with ease and could crush submarines.\n\nThe author also states that long ago Venus was probably like earth. In the passage it states, \" the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Which both Earth and Venus have the same kind of surface sediment, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclusion this eassy will support the author's idea that in the furture we will be able to go to Venus for more studies. We can gain more knowledge of space and can explore more of space. Mabye in the future we could find more hospitible planets to continue human life. Thats why this essay supports the author's passage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience really help life times its thing keep us sane Patience important Just like dog ran away Im waiting come back Sometimes ll get sitchation waiting someone always one choice wait patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary society, increased shelter and transportation shortages have affected individuals of all ages who are living in megacities. To handle the serious societal problem, businesses have been proposed to move to country areas. While the plan provides undeniable pros, such as the improvement of road congestion and decreased housing insufficiency in urban areas, and stimulation of the rural economy, its cons, including deprivation of parental care for some children whose parents have to work in some industries, located far away from urban regions. Moreover, a threat to those kids' psychological health careful consideration. \n\nOne of the compelling merits of location change of businesses, addressing traffic congestion cases happening, such as the lack of parking areas, and car accidents. Consequently, most of the residents can save much time, spending in handling the diverse array of annoying traffic issues. In addition, crowded housing almost will be solved, because some families have family members who are employed in some big businesses that will be moved into rural regions, and these households definitely follow their companies and live in regions, far away from suburban regions. As a result, the rest of the individuals will get more space to live. Lastly, the plan may stimulate the economic development of country regions, relying on the number of inhabitants has surged with an influx of business, especially, bringing more commercial behavior, such as merchandise purchases; thus, benefitting both local individuals' life standards. \n\nHowever, the disadvantage of the idea is equally pronounced. it may bring a negative influence on younger mental health. Advanced educational sources that are located in the metropolis, have become a major reason why most parents choose to live far away from their children when they need to work in suburban areas. Moreover, although it is beneficial for the development of kids' independence, obviously, damages their psychological health due to the lack of emotional support. Hence, business relocation may allow some younger parents stuck in a dilemma.\n\nIn essence, the proposition of business relocation from the city to the suburb definitely offers an effective solution for housing and traffic issues in the metropolitan, while encouraging the development of the economy in country areas. Nevertheless, exacerbating mental health for children living without parents, cannot be dentable. To strike a balance, local governments and authorities must allocate more funding to foster the richness of the educational system in rural regions, while encouraging businesses to move.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting begining story flat easy path becomes unfamiliar turns many hills turns This effects cyclist lot low water begining become dehydrated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries.\n\nSeeing expressions or moods in students' would make it easier for teachers. They can help the students with whatever problem and can tell if the student is upset, angry, or happy. People can detect others emotions and will be able to help in a way you probably couldn't without knowing their emotion directly. This system would make everything in life better, people could become more interactive with others because others know what they feel. Everyone hates it when they can't figure what's wrong with someone else. They feel helpless and it bugs them knowing they can't do anything about it. People who are feeling depressed can have a easier life, they'll always have someone there knowing how they're feeling.\n\nWe should use this system for everyone, it could even save lives. Most of all, talk to the person that is having a bad feeling or an emotion that is crucial. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a vaiety of industries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine you are having trouble in class then all of a sudden the lesson is changed to better suit your needs. With FACS (Facial Action Coding System)\n\nyou could do better in class just by showing how you feel. This technology could help students in need, Could detect if someone is actually showing how they feel, and is very acurate with how someone feels. This technology would improve student learning and attention in the classroom.\n\nFirst, Not all students like to speak or are scared to speak to someone about troubles they may have. FACS could improve their learning without them having to say anything. Dr Huang states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Without anyone speaking a computer could teach and change how a lesson is taught quickly to better help the student.\n\nSecond, The technology can detect if someone is showing a true emotion or just faking it. The article states that, \"In a false smile, the mouth is strectched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" These \"false emotions\" could help to better understand if a student is actually having trouble or just trying to confuse the system or an instuctor.\n\nThird, The technology is able to detect the emotions of a person very well. Dr. Huang states that \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.\" If a student is bored and confused it would detect those two emotions and work around them to solve the problem quickly to help students succeed faster.\n\nIn conclusion, FACS would improve student learning and attention in the classroom. It change based on how students feel, can change quickly to save time and is accurate at how it is able to detect faces and emotions. With this technology we would greatly improve student learing in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face on Mars\" is nothing but a natural landform. There are no signs of any alien life and there are no other \"Faces\" on the planet that could give any indication to believe that the Face is anything other than a natural landform.\n\nThere were pictures taken for a second time in 2001 to get a better view of the Face and again there was no sign of alien life. If there were \"object like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The day that the pictures were retaken was a \"cloudless summer day in Cydonia\" so there would have been nothing wrong with the pictures taken because nothing was blocking its view.\n\nAny speculation of the Face being anything other than a natural landform would have been proven wrong on April 8, 2001. The Face is a natural landform, nothing more and nothing less.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be good because there are people who are lazy and dont feel like driving in the mornings can just get into there smart cars and tell the tech to drive them to work. They would help get to the destination faster, the cars are independent they will help with other purposes such as if ur in danger the seat will vibrate. It will also alert the driver to take over when pullin in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. We would have smarter roads less car accidents, when the people dont pay attention the car can alert them of a incoming car from the other side of the road or highway.\n\nBut on the other hand the Manufacturers can accidently miss something in the car to make it malfunction and stop working when driving and could cause accidents or purposly drive into a oncoming car or truck. The law would have trouble with imature people who just want to drive faster and have the advantage because they are in a smart car. They could just blame it on the driverless car, and sometimes it would be the cars fault even tho the human is driving it.\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems will be solved ahead of time. They have projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on auto pilot 90 percent of the time. Sooner Mercedes Benz,Audi, and Nissan are planning to have the cars manufactered to drive themselves by 2020/ the road truly autonomous car's.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All around the world different countries have been noticing some things in life that are just better without cars or atleast less cars. With less cars things are more calming; its also better for everyone, including the enviroment.\n\nTo begin with, things can be way more calm in a life without cars. Many people happen to beleive that cars can change how you feel for example \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way\"(3). Heidrun Walter always felt tense with a car now she feels calm and relaxed. Life with less cars can be so much more relaxing without all the loud annoying noises cars make. In Vauban they are making some changes to how the people live so they can live more easy and calm. \"Vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in a low-car suburban life.\"(6). The way this civilization is all the people live close by and everything is close by so you dont really need a car. If everything is close by everything can be more fluent and calm.\n\nIn addition, it may be more calm without cars but it is also better for you and the enviroment. \"passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emission in europe... and up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\"(5). Wherever you are in the world greenhouse gasses will most likley affect your environment in some unnatrual way and that is not the best thing for you, the people you know, or all the plants and animals. Without cars polluting earth we would be way more healthy and many animals may not be endangered or extinct like they are today.\"how much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\"(7). If you drive less its not just better for the environment and your health it can also be better for your wallet. If you drive less you save money on gas that you can use for many other things. Overall driving less turns out to be better for everyone.\n\nIn conclusion, people driving less can make life easier and calmer, it is also better for people, plants, animals, and don't forget your wallet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "BOOKSDear staring tell books libraries adults find offensive kids These books taken away kids wo nt read second part adults protest libraries could get maganzines away etc last thing libraries get books let kids take could read themThe first example giving I founded books things I search offensive kids And libraries letting kids read without ID adults reading sections These books need away kids wo nt read offensive things trying They pbs books age children could read parents nt worry kids reading free timeThe second example parents protest books etc things could rid Parents need protest thing find offensive get shelve Or another thing make list books offensive let adults read ID could sound little better books etc nt get rid booksThe last example libraries let kids take home read themThey kids need read like educational books school things Adults need see kids read days Kids need understand books good age otherwise brain start confusing ageThe conclusion libraries need make something children nt read kind books thing mess brain parents need pay children could take therapy others kids brain could better So please libraries something parents nt need worry kids read days Like I wo nt like kid read offensive things start doin things libraries something offensive things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face of Mars is just a natural landform. These things happen all the time it could be caused from a volcanic eruption or even from a meteor. All planets at least have some kind of indention in it. This doesn't mean an alien created it. This kind of stuff just doesn't happen to planets either. It could also happen right here on earth. Really no one has proved that aliens are even real and until that happens im not going to believe that they are. If you think about it how would aliens even get to planet to planet. How are they supposed to make that big of an indention. There really isn't any givin facts about any of this really no one really knows.\n\nIn the article they say the rock formation resembles a human head which is formed by shadows giving the illusion eyes, nose, and mouth. If ou really think about it how could you get all that from just a picture thats not even really close up to it. You would have to get a really good picture that is close up and examine it abunch to get that kind of thought. Maybe the rock for mation just created over the years. That kind of stuff really does happen the older the thing gets. Really anything couldv'e happened to it. I really don't understand, people also could be just making that up for some attention or something you never know. Very few scientists believe that the Face was an alien artifact.\n\nAfter thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting whe the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nAfter all that research the NASAS has done they finally figured out that it really wasn't an alien artifact. This should be a lesson to everyone that is reading this, you can't believe everything that everyone says to you or anyone else. People do this all the time time to just get attention. Really if you think about it they like to make people believe something that is not true because after its all over they make the people that did believe them disapointed. They thinks its funny.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the places of museums should entertain people or only educate. In this essay, I will explain both possessions and I am going to tell my belief about this discussion.\r\n\r\nThe primary factor we need to take into consideration is that museums must be amusing place where people get entertained. First and most importantly museums need to make money. To do that their exhibitions can’t be boring. The workers of this institutions have to figure out how to make their museum stand out from all the others, make it unique to attract visitors. This would led to making bigger profits, which allow to invest into museum facilities also it would help raise workers' wages. The second reason why museums should bring joy, and not only educate is that museums have to be interesting and understandable for people of all ages, especially for children. Getting young people to focus on learning is difficult these days. Therefore, one of the goals of museums must be to combine education with entertainment and teach children, otherwise they will simply be bored and uninterested. In contrast, some others may claim that the only purpose of museums is to educate human beings. Museums reveal to us past events or help us understand other world cultures. We have to respect history and other nations, so depicting these things through an entertainment view would not be mature.\r\n\r\nHaving considered both views, I think museums need to have balance. I mean it should be enjoyable, entertaining and educational at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you take the risk and go to Venus in a spaceship? That's a question you should ask yourself while reading this passage about the challenges we can face if we go to Venus. The Author has a key point saying, \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\". What the author is trying to put out there is that Venus is a trip that would be amazing, and worth going but he also is saying that this trip could be dangerous. The author wants us to read this passage and understand that no human being has stepped on Venus, but its a trip that we should start planning for in the future.\n\nVenus, also called \"Evening Star\" is a one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and making it easy to spot. It is referred to as Earth's twin because in terms its the closest due to size and density. It has a thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide. Every previous spacecraft that has tried landing on Venus has failed. Venus is a planet that scientist have challenges studying because we haven't landed a spacecraft there. Venus also has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in the solar system, even though Mercury is closer to the sun.\n\nThe author stated that this trip is worth going but there is some dangers of going but Why are Scientist now starting to plan further visits to Venus? Scientist are wanting to study Venus because it once might of have been just like Earth with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Scientist are saying with research and visits from the past that Venus has surfaces of rocky sediments and valleys and also mountains. Scientist state that Venus might be our nearest option to planetary visit. They also say that returning to Venus seems indisputable, but is there an options for a safe and scientifically productive trip?\n\nA trip like this will bring dangers because we haven't landed a spacecraft in Venus, and every spacecraft that we have tried to send, were unmanned. Venus is a simple planet that we can see from Earth but it's proved a very challenging place to examine. Venus's geology and weather is pretty challenging too because they present: Erupting valcanos, earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes. Venus is a really challenging planet to just visit.\n\nVenus will bring risk and challenges but NASA has prepared to see if we could send a spacecraft to Venus. Like Author said, \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\", this trip will be great to learn from but we need to be prepared to do it more than once if something wrong happens. Just like they said in the passage, this trip shouldn't be looked at for its challenges but it should be looked at by our imaginations and innovations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Accommodation availability is always become serious issue for all. It is believed by few individuals that only government can able to resolve housing shortages by their serious efforts. I completely agree with this notion to the significant extent, and in the following essay, I will shed light on my view point.\r\n\r\nHousing requirement is basic necessity for every citizen. To begin with, Government forms by election by promising to solve locals various problems such as accommodation and safety. To explain it further, local ministry has all socio economic powers to eliminate any kinds of issues that people used to face currently. For example, Year 2014 India’s new central government focused and provided thousands of accommodation to settle community. Moreover, Government control's and can able to do townplan in order arrange community living so all people can live coherently and piecefully.\r\n\r\nBecause of shortfall on house also helps economically. To elaborate more, In order to construct more accommodation, goverment needs to comeup with new projects, which ultimatley leads to increase foreign invenstment and boost economy. For instance, During 2014-2021 In India statewise , rulling party invited and signed memorendum internationally and generated billions of invenstment. Furthermore, This way government not only helps the people, but also make their position stronger as they can get statstics information on poverty in order to consider them to issue new houeses. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, By looking overall perespective, I would believe that authority by utilizing their power can able to come out for effective solution in order to support locals various issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to go around the world helping other countries in need?\n\nIf you join the SeaGoing Cowboys, you can do all of those thing in one easy job.\n\nIt includes many traveling to many places such as the United Kingdom and China in this program. Travel over seas to countries that need help with food, water, and shelter.You can take care of a horse, pig, sheep and many more animal to care about. So what are you waiting for, come and be a Seagoing Cowboy today!\n\nThe Traveling here is outstanding and the touring all around the entire globe.\n\nI have even went to Venice, The Floating City, they call it, and we took a gondola ride there. We helped out in WW 2 in Europe and they left many countries to ruins\n\nWhen we boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster with a group of 335 horses and there food for the horses. One ofd his quotes was \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nHelping out countries was great moments for me to enjoy every day with Don.\n\nWe tended the animals that we where going to give them with caring and joy to remember.They needed to go to New Orleans right after the Pacific war has ended to help them recover from the war. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy.\" he says. The 2 weeks to China\n\ntrip with the animals gave him a lot to be busy about for feeding the animals 2 or 3 times a day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although it seems tempting and futuristic in theory, driverless cars would be a headache legally and financially and grow Americans accustomed to technology taking over everyday activities even more than it already is. There are too many details that factor into who takes the blame for a car accident. Who is at fault for the accident is usually one driver or the other, and adding the vehicle to the equation as a culprit if it were to malfunction would make it that much more difficult to come to a conclusion.\n\nDeciding who takes the blame and foots the bill for a car accident is already a legal and financial nightmare for those involved, and implementing driverless cars regularly would result in the car manufacturers and the drivers pointing fingers at each other and may drag out the legal process even more and put the drivers through more grief. Who untimately decides who takes the blame? Regular, driver required cars malfunction everyday and it is difficult even then to come to a conclusion. The passage states that new laws would be needed to cover liability in the case of a car accident involving driverless cars, which would require more funds. It seems like this is creating more problems than it is solving.\n\nModern technology tends to take over regular activities in our everyday lives, so much so that we can almost be replaced at the touch of a button. Having a sense of control and manual operation is very important. It's a matter of pride, and there's not much pride in having our computers do everything for us. According to the text, the cars would have features that tell us when to take over and operate the vehicle to execute a minor maneuver. The driver would need to be alert anyways. Advocating for awareness on the road, only to invent something takes over all operation is a bit of a condradiction. Driverless cars would only aid in the progression of an era in which man isn't really useful for much anymore. Man makes technology, not the other way around.\n\nThere are too many semantics and things that could go wrong with driverless cars on the road. Americans should stick to cars that they fully operate to ensure safety and legal ease if something were to go wrong. Growing used to technology doing everything for us is not healthy and is not something we should be proud of.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join and participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. If you like helping others this would be a good thing for you to do. Why would u want to go? You would probably want to join because you get to help people affected by the World War II. You also ge to help out animals like horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Who doesn't like that?\n\nMany countries were left to ruins in Europe, so to help them the UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to take care of things. It was a big opportunity! One of the Seagoing Cowboys, Luke, said that he liked helping the animals on the ship. He loved taking care of the horses and young cows they had. He mentioned that he also enjoyed taking care of the people in need, it made him feel good! He also said he is really grateful he got to have the Oppurtunity of his lifetime!\n\nIf u would like to do any of these things I mentioned in this paragraph then being in the Seagoing Cowboys program would be perfect for you. But these are only a few reasons why you could or wanted to join.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the epoch of rapid technological advancement, the ubiquity of robots has ushered in the allocation of tasks, both in domestic and professional spheres. While an argument between the merits of robots and their demerits is processed. This essay delves into the multifaceted implications of this contemporary phenomenon, unravelling the confluence of positive and negative faces it embodies. Meanwhile, giving reasons to explain my opinion which supports the use of robots. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, humans are liberated from the shackles of mundane and monotonous tasks. This is because numerous dexterous machines definitely help individuals to finish and streamline arduous chores. For instance, dishwashers can help citizens save washing time after meals and chat with their family members because they just put tableware into machines. Moreover, it is constructive for a family to build a stronger bond with each other; therefore, robots are beneficial for human society, especially family members' relationships. \r\n\r\nIn addition, if an increasing number of individuals decided to use robots, especially domestic robots, they would have more chances to manifestation of human ingenuity, such as creative work, including painting, story, song, and even philosophical thinking. Moreover, those can create constructive technologies or knowledge (e.g., policies), benefiting individuals' future. \r\n\r\nHowever, one of the compelling disadvantages of creating robots is the increased unemployment rate, particularly in physical jobs, such as coal miners. As a result, compared with human beings, robots have excellent performance to finish these kinds of jobs. For example, high tolerance for fatigue. Apart from that, using robots can help employers reduce the cost of labor, due to longer work time. Moreover, loss of employment opportunities may cause social instability, for example, violent events happening. In short, from this perspective, the invention of robots do are dangerous for human society. \r\n\r\nIn summation, although robots certainly result in a higher unemployment rate for physical jobs, obvious advantages, such as human closer relationships and more inventions, have more profitable comparing its disadvantages. So I do support that robots can stimulate human social growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways For example feels dehydrated tired riding desert lack water I often feel way jogging extended periods time The men story who havent left confines porches since Carter office also add story Due role cyclist takes unmarked shortcut turns horrible The Welchs factory affects cyclist increases thirst causes think The sign showing grape juice looks irrisistable drives keep forward search anything drink The terrain charge also affects cyclist causes work ever harder get hills rather ride flat terrain", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The pi charts illustrate the comparisons the average of household expenditures in 1950 and 2010 in a country. Overall, a considerable reduction in housing can be seen, while the expenditures in food remarkably soared in 2010.\nHousing expenditures occupied nearly three-fourth, in 1950. In contrast, the expenditures plummeted to 22 percent in 2010. Alternatively, the expenditures for food tripled, compared with 1950 and 2010. Specifically, the percentage of food used to be 11.2 percent and drastically rose up to 34 percent.\nIn addition, there are some expenditures increased. For example, transport, and other. These percentages were 3.3 percent in transport, and 4.4 percent in other in 1950. But both percentages grow up to 14 percent and 19.2 percent in 2050 respectively. Interestingly, when it comes to expenditure in education, there is not a significant change. It was 6.6 percent in 1950 and it is 6.3 percent in 2010. Health care also slightly changed, the percentage of expenditure was 2.4 in 1950 and increased to 4.5 percent in 2010.\nhousing\nfood\nother\ntransport\nsame = education,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created The author happy warm tone In paragraph recalls enjoying cuban music learning cook He also recalls making friends imigrants learning love help everyone NUM In paragraph recalls learning true meaning family means make house home The mood created warm loving teaches true meaning family selfless behavior home The family space", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people deem that the corporations not only just cheasing money, they are obliged to the populace and ought to make contributions for the society. I utterly agree this view, because enterprises are the vital part that compose our society. Its duties not merely involve in the fincial aspect, but also relevant to environments, citizens and communites.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, stemming from the necessarity of survial, managing higher profit that not need to be blamed. Neverthless companies recruitions, expenditures of rents or payments for bank’s loans, cash is the key of thoes items. Enterprises also demend funds to pay dividends to shareholders to mantain businesses managements. Meanwhile, Among the developing progresses of firms, taking researching new production to satisfy nowadays customers’ requirements as an example, the plenty investment is a cricial factor too.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in view of establishments occupy a large amount of social resources, so it is accountable for social responsibilities. In the opinion of labor force, it is duty-bound to prove scienceable salaries and treatments that make employees’ basic requirements can be settled. Moreover, corporations should build employees supporting system that offer aid when they face chanllenge. In the angle of nature, that firms would be expected to use energy-efficent equipments and ecologic friendly materials can reduce wastes affection to the public.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, although we can not deny that the reasonability of companies approach profits , most of time we recommed they take public duties too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From a long time ago, newspapers have become an essential thing in our life. They have an influence on people’s ideas and opinions. From my perspective, newspapers bring both positive and negative impacts on humans.\r\nThere are many reasons explained the influence of newspapers. First, people tend to follow the idea of articles. When writing an article, the writer usually pursues readers to agree with their ideas. Thus, if a person doesn’t have enough knowledge about the article, they can easily be convinced by the writer. Second, newspapers are convenient to access. Nowadays, people can read online newspapers everywhere and every time, which increases the rate of people reading newspapers. The more people reading newspapers, the more influential they are.\r\nOn the one hand, newspapers do have positive effects on readers. They report fresh information and stories that happen around the world. These can inspire or encourage readers to donate to those who need help and understand what others are going through. For instance, many newspapers had reported about the fire in Australia, so it inspired people to donate to recover the losses caused by the fire. On the other hand, newspapers still have some drawbacks. There are many miserable articles about war, tragic or crime that is posted every day. Reading this news can make people have less trust in their country or encourage people to do dangerous things.\r\nIn conclusion, there is no doubt that newspapers bring enormous positive impacts on humans. However, we should choose good sources to read newspapers to limit their negative effects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I were a scienctist I would tell people its not a face, its a landform and that its a shadow that makes it look like a face. When the photographers took a picture of it, it was as soon as possible. Plus the camera was at its absolute maximum and so u can obviously tell it is a shadow that makes a face. What the picture really shows is the Maritan the same as a butte or mesa land form which is common around the American West. If there were a peron on Cydonia we would be rich finding the greatest discovery of all time. why not have more then just a man lets have a whole colony right?\n\nWhen Michael Malin flew over it the team got a picture Ten times sharper then the first picture and when people on the internet who just couldnt wait to see what it was guess what they found out it was? A natural landform there is no alien monument after all. There is absolutly no aliens at all at least not that we have found.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We are in the year 2016, do you rememebr years ago when you thought by this time we'd have all sorts of flying cars and pictures of what you thought the future would look like? I read the article \" driverless cars are coming\" and i cant say that we are close to what we predictied as children but almost. Manufactercers are inventing cars that are almost driverless.They have many cons and i want to explain my point of view to you the reader. I am not for the\n\n\"driverless\" cars . I do not stand behind these cars\n\nbecause they are not complety driverless, They need to change many factors to make the cars devolpe , and people are not complety safe in these type of cars.\n\nThe cars required upgrades to the already existing roads which would take away very usefull money to other projects and organizations. Many manufacturing companies had to\n\nadd many new adjustments to the cars which chews up alot of more useful money. What is the point? Even with all the adjustments and new technolgy being added to the cars the cars simply dont run by themselves. They give signals to the drivers when the car cant preform a task that the human can. When you hear the idea of driverless cars you think you'll be able to kick back and let the car take control and you'll be fine. Wrong, the driver must remain on edge and alert at all timems because the car might run into problems and the driver must now take over the \" driverless\" car and handle the situation. These cars are a big safety concern. Most laws really focus on keeping the people safe and with these cars around thats a big problem because there is no gaurnteed safety.\n\nWhen the situation turns hairy and someone's life is on the line who is to be punished the owner of the car, the manufacturer, or the actual car itself ?These are all serious questons people need to keep in mind when thinking about purchasing on of these \"driverless\" cars. We want a bright and happy future and even the hint of making these cars a reality doesnt really seem like a smart choice. These cars don't bring on a happy mood with them. We have to look forward to making the future safe and more ecofriendly that i understand.I just think another alternative is in order anything but a \"driverless\" car.\n\nThey cost alot of money , they would require a lot of changes in the the streets and roads used by everyday people,\n\nthey are not complety driverless , and the people who are inside\n\nand the\n\npeople outside of the car are not complety 100% safe with these cars around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My dad went teach drive recently getting permit I nervous beginning ofcourse quickly became comfortable behind wheel I drove town completeing errands along way Now time go car wash first time carwash control I didnt think car wash would difficult achieve driving around town wrong After hard time pulling right spot wash could start roll windows fold side view mirrors Before could wash started As hurricane soap swirled around car rushed fold side view mirror succesful Unfortunately due slow reaction times could also roll driver window soap came back around enveloped white foam My dad wet inside car got cleaned even though wasnt plan first I finally rolled window looked dad He looked back saying anything car silent After minds finally developed wat happened broke laughter We stoppped laughing whole car wash rarity situation All could say people go whole lives without type car wash incident happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars? It seems to be a major advancement in technology, but whats the purpose? In all honesty, it is a very cool idea. This idea though, has a lot of thinking to go behind it. Is it neccasary? What about the safety issues? How is this going to help the environment, safety of others, driving issues, fuel usage, and many other things? In this essay, i have many things to discuss and question as to why the development of driverless cars don't seem like something neccesary to fund.\n\nIn my eyes, cars are some of the coolest things ever made. I consider myself to be a \"car guy\" if you will. I have had a passion for cars since i was a little boy and I have always liked the idea of going fast and making the car faster. Driverless cars, in my eyes, are like taking the racer out of an INDY Car. Who is going to replace that skilled racer? Sure, we have the technology for it but is it really neccesary? Excluding calculators for math answers and Google for searching up history, I would rather put myself behind the wheel of a car rather than a computer. I trust myself to drive an interstate more than i do a computer to do it for me. A computer doesnt have the same reflex skills as a human would. If another driver swerves in front of me while driving, am I going to have a better chance of dodging them quicker than the computer and cameras would? I believe you cant always depend on technology to save you. Sometimes you have to take it into your own hands. Personally, I belive that driving a car myself is more enjoyable than someone or something doing it for me. I have always wanted to experience the rush and adrenaline of driving a Top Fuel Dragster at the NHRA. If i had the opportunity, i would never let a computer do that for me. There are many people who think this way as well.\n\nAnother issue with this technology is the safety of it. As i stated in the last paragraph, who is going to dodge a swerving car faster; the computer, or myself? If im paying attention then i have a much better chance of doing it quicker than the computer. What if it malfunctions? No technology ever invented is fool proof or issue free. At some point in time, something breaks, needs replaced, or just gets too old. Its the same thing with original car parts as well. Everything gets old and needs replaced at some point in time. What am i to do if my driverless car malfunctions on the road? Safety is always a major concern.\n\nI agree that there a many pros to go along with the Driverless Car. But with most pros, there is a con to go with it. A pro of the driverless car would be the stress relief. Technology is something that makes life easier. But the con is that you cant always depend on technology to work 24/7. Another pro would be simply how amazing it is that a car is actually driving itself. The con for this is the actual cost. How much will this technology cost to develop? The economy is always changing paces and it isnt always possible for everyone to own the lastest and greatest technology. Im also very sure that the maintenance and repair cost of something like this would be through the roof just like any other technological advancement.\n\nIn conclusion, I disagree with the production of the driverless car. I believe it takes away the joy of the ride, along with the safety of it as well. The human factor of the driving machine will always play a vital role in every day transportation. The human could be the deciding factor between safety and reliability.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Honestly truth be told there is a valuable cause in this because alot of technology today will ask you to rate this website or did you like this song?.The computer will read only what u tell them. Although the computer cannot read how you really feel because sometimes people lie about what they do and dont like. So just because you rate that website a 7 doesnt mean you like it you might just want them to think its a good website. The computer would have to be very reliable and trusting for it to be valuable. The students these days is hard to tell because they just don't care anymore. If they don't care then there is no way to tell if they like something or not.\n\nIn the article it says \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is call and \"action unit.\" In that paragraph its technically talking about how the computer will recognize facial expressions but in my opinion I feel like that would take alot of work for computer technicians to actually put more devices in a computer just to see what people think about them.\n\nSo in my opinion no I don't think they should use the technology to read emotions because it will make things more expensive and less people will buy them. Some people wouldn't like technology to read their emotions because alot of times people wont be angry at the computer they would be mad because the computer is trying to tell them how they are feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard of NASA or know what NASA is and what they do? NASA works with space and spaceships and shuttles. NASA also explores new things in outerspace and find and figures out what it is or what it does. Like on May 24,2001 NASA´s Viking 1\n\nspacecraft was circling around Marsand they spotted something unusual.\n\nIt seemed to be a face like figure in the ground of Mars. That made the public go crazy. People wanted to know what in the world it was,NASA said,¨ it was a huge rock formation by shadows and an illusion to the eye¨ (paragraph 3.) To me I think it was honestley some weird rock that just happened to be shaped as a face.To me I think after all these years it would have eroded away after so long. Paragraph 7 says that ¨it was afterall a natural landform.There was no alien formation.¨\n\nAfterall like I said it would have eroded or decayed away after it being there on Mars for a long time. Also if it were to be an alien figure or something along those lines wouldn´t you think there would be more of the faces in the ground of Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driveless Cars Are Coming\", The author presents both positive and negative aspects of driveless cars. The good things that come with the cars are very helpful but at sometimes are very dangerous. The negative things that come with the cars are very life risking so if something happens and someone gets hurt its can either be your fault or it can be the manufactures fault.\n\nThe good things are that the cars can drive by theirselves,stop at signs and red lights. Also they alert the driver when there is danger ahead or when there is work been done to the road so that the driver has to take control of the car. With the driveless cars you car do things that you ever get to while driving a operational vehicle. Say for instance driving and texting or driving and eating you can do all the things you want to do in the driveless car but you can't do it in a operational vehicle.\n\nThe bad things are that you have to make sure if somethings happens like been involved in a acciedent and someone gets hurt you can be held responsible for that person. Also you have to make sure that the driveless vehicle is in good condition to where you don't have to fix anything before you drive it. It can be a life risking type of car because you can get in a reck and you are hurt really bad and can't move or you pass out then you will have to be rushed to the hospital. Another reason is that it can hurt your pockets because you have to get everything that was damaged repaired.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough road ahead exceed posted speed limits The setting long road no one sight building car structure kind cyclist could affected rough road ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I always gratefal parents love sacrifice Ive often told They wa sa much conrageous thing I could ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is worth noting that health problems are haunting the general public, both physically and mentally. Though many assert that installing more sports equipment could tackle this issue, others, however, advocate that we should find other solutions. I concur with the view that governments and colossal organizations together should take more responsibilities.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there is no doubt that constructing extra sports facilities could enable citizens to do more physical exercise, hence, leading to a healthy lifestyle. With the increasing pace of life, modern city dwellers’ schedules are largely occupied by sizeable workloads, they often need to do overtime or do shifts even at the weekends, making doing sports extremely time-consuming. Had more gyms been introduced, folks would have been given more access to exercising.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is fair to say that more efforts should be made in order to improve folks’ physical health and mental well-being. Despite sports activities, other aspects with respect to public health, namely food security, air pollution and waste disposal, should also be addressed fundamentally. For instance, the higher prices of sugary foods could refrain people’s purchase desire, giving rise to fewer sweet food lovers and accordingly declining the overweight population in the long run.\r\n\r\nFrom my perspective, I strongly believe that authorities should make more efforts to ensure our people can enjoy a good health condition. This is because only the entities like governments and colossal organizations have the power to implement large health projects. For example, they could introduce mandated control on the scale of trans-fat foods or ask factories or education institutions to provide better and cheaper access to nutritious foods, therefore boosting citizens’ fitness.\r\n\r\nIn summary, from what has been discussed above, we can easily draw the conclusion that in order to improve people’s physical health and mental well-being, introducing sports infrastructures alone is not efficient, thus more contribution from authorities and other entities is needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" describes throughout the passage that we should explore Venus, we should send spacecrafts manned or unmanned to explore venus. But Why? The author never gives nay clear reasoning on why we should explore Venus. Most of his \"supporting evidence\" comes from Paragraph 4 where he states how Venus is similar to Earth, but he never gives any clear points as to why we should explore Venus.\n\nThroughout the passage the author decribes how Venus compares with Earth. As he states in paragraph 2,\"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". Ok, so the author describes that Venus is very simalar to Earth. Same size, closest to Earth, and also same density, but the author never gives clear reasoning on why we should explore Venus. Their are plenty of other planets that could easily be similar to Earth, why dont we go explore them? Why does it have to be Venus.\n\nWhy does it have to be Venus? Well, in the passage the author states that Venus is the closest to Earth so it would make it easier for us to visit and explore Venus right? Wrong. Every spacecraft we have sent their hs not survived for more than a few hours. As it say sin the passage in Paragraph 2, \"Each previous mission was unmanned and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". So if Venus is dangerous, it's that dangerous that we haven't even attempted to send anyone or anything their, even though its so close in 3 decades, what's the reason for exploring it, what do we want so bad? is their anything even important their tht coudl help us? The author never gives any points on why we should explore Venus despite of all the dangers.\n\nThe author has given us no reason to go explore Venus depsite of all the dangers but finally in Paragraph 4 he states,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". Ok, Venus is very simalar to earth an was, \"Probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". The author finally gives a reason of why we should go visit Venus. Because it it simalar to Earth.\n\nThroughout the passage the auhtor decribes the danger sof going to Venus, all the past attempts of going to Venus, and all the simalarities between Earth and Venus, but he never gives a clear point of why we should until the 4th Paragraph. This brings me to conclude that the author doesn't support his claim with as much evidence as he could've. The auhtor should've given evidence after each of his points, not just explaining similaraties. Why is it important they have similarities? What could we gain from exploring Venus? What do we know already and how can we us ethat to our advantage? These are all questions that the author can use to strenghten his argument of visiting Venus. Overall, i believe the author didn't support his claim very well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboy Program\n\nThere are many reasons you should\n\njoin the Seagoing Cowboy program.The reasons why are because you can help people in war,you can travel in many places around the world,also if you are a animal person you will love it.You should really enjoy the opportunity of being a Seagoing Cowboy just like Luke Bomberger.\n\nThe first reason I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboy program is because you can help people in war.The people in war need their animals ready to go out to war,you could be a life saver they need their rest so thst csn get ready for the war.They also can't fight and feed their animals at the same time,that's pretty hard.\n\nThe second reason is that you can travel around the world being in the Seagoing Cowboy program.You could go to China,Europe,Greece and even more places,maybe better.You shouldn't miss a good chance of being a Seagoing cowboy.\n\nThe last reason is that if you are an animal lover you could spend days,weeks,even months with the animals.You could be with the animals when they grow across seas.You can be a Seagoing Cowboy and a animal lover at the same time.\n\nIn conclusion ,you can be in the Seagoing Cowboy program.The good reasons why are that you can help people in war,you can travel in many places around the world,if you are an animal person you will love it.Do not miss a great opportunity to be in the program you might actually enjoy yourself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Public libraries able keep sorts content sorts people I feel strongly statement everyone world different Many people different interests religons customs If took certain books music library would defeat purpose calling public library But different sections books music etc people would able find wantneed easily one would worry getting offended It would fair anyone world took certain books materials one person got offended", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the ability for computer to be able to read and calculate human emotions is a step towords the future and is a good thing. I beleve this will help us as humans in unlocking coads in old paintings to better understand them. I also beleve that this new tecnology will help prevent suicide.\n\nFor example in the atricle it talks about how they can unlock the Mona Lisa's smile and calculat her emotions. This is one way that the new tecnology will help us better undersand just who the Mona Lisa was. for years the Mona lisa has remaned a mistery to all of mand kind along with many other paintings. This is why I beleve that this new since of tecnology will expand our mind as far as history,knologe and also it will help us better understand ourselfs as humans and why we think and feel the way we do. This new form of tecnology I beleve is the step towerds a new begining.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida senator,\n\nI argue you in favor of keeping the electoral college in florida. i think it's a easier and better process than popular vote. It seems like to me it would take forever to count all the votes and add them up in all 50 states. our government counts all the votes up anyway but they count them by just it's own state. I feel like everyones voice is getting heard because it counts your vote but it's your states that votes.\n\nThe one problem I have with the electoral college is that some states are worth more votes than other states, which in my eyes is alittle unfair but it's our goverment. As florida we have 29 voter points and it's very useful to the running president that they gain our state. maybe if I was in the other states that have like 2 votes for the electoral college, then maybe I would be alittle upset and I would most likely not like the electoral college. It goes by the population of the states which makes sense because we don't want a small state choosing the president. It makes a real good point that the staes don't have the same amount of points, because if a state for example has 2,000 people and the other has 3,000 people, then the bigger population state should have the more electoral points.\n\nIf it wasnt for electoral college we wouldn't of had the great presidents we've had like for example John F. Kenndy. John lost by popular vote but won by electoral college. That is our great history and what if the electoral college saved us from a terrible president because not most of them tell the truth and are two faced. But i think electoral college is a great thing for us now and in the future.\n\nWell thats our government and wether we like it or not their not going to change it. If it wasnt for congress and our government, America wouldn't be the same and were thankful for that. I just want to let you know senator that I like and agree with the electoral college . Keep up with all the good work Sir I know we can count on you .\n\nFrom,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Winter Hibiscus author sentence When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test I think rememberence home help take test She use geese plant remind home surroundings makes comfortable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The construction workers faced many obstacles building Empire State building One obstacles hieght Since wanted make building tallest building world make sure enough technology Also add extra seventeen flores building making floors instead original floors Another obstacle safety issues The construction workers never checked problems building mooring mast In paragraph author States The yet unsolved problems mooring air ships afixed mass height made describable post pone later date final installation landing gear author trying say designing production mooring mass overlooked certain issues make set back final date Due obstacles construction team managed succeed Building tallest building The Empire State building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientist are interested in exploring Venus but they find it very hard to explore it. Venus has high temperature that make it harder for them to be able to get a closer look at it which makes it a challenge for scientists for to even get a closer look at it. If Venus is Earth's sister planet why is it so inhospitable for us to live in it.\n\nWhy are scientist wasting their time trying to explore it and how would we know what is actually in Venus if we haven't yet explored it. I think it may be a bit to dangerous for any of us to actually be able to explore it without the right equipment and the right person to send there without knowing for sureif they would be getting hurt or not. I think it is to much of a risk to send someone up there and risk their lifes all just to be sure if Venus is safe or not.\n\nIn paragraph 4 it states that \"Long ago,Venus was probably covered lagely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like in Earth\"scientist could just want us to have a better future for our future kids and families along the way. In this pargraph it is saying that Venus could be another resource for us to use as an Evacuation if Earth is no longer safe for us we have a second choice.\n\nWe may never know if we don't explore it but I still think it is a bit to much of a risk for us to take because we never know something could go terrible wrong and we all end up no longer exsisting.\n\nEarth has many similarities and many differences scientist want to be able to study Venus to be able to come up with new vehices another project is looking back at an old technology called mechanical computers. These devises make calculations by using gears and levers and don't require electronics at all. in article 8 it says tha we shouldn't be scared of what may happened all that matter s is what's right for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone has their own opinion or view on certain things. Some people are having this argument or debate you could say on rather we should have driverless cars or not. Other people probably havn't even heard about this new possibility. From my point of view i dont think we should have them and i will give you some reasons why.\n\nFirst, Im going to start with the question that was also asked in paragragh 9. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" If a sensor fails or any of the technology and someone is injured who is to blame. Another big thing who is getting charged? Who has to pay for the damages of the car and or the person. Also it would be hard on the business as ill explain in my next paragraph.\n\nSecondly, How its going to effect the business or businesses. If there are reports of the driverless cars messing up and injuring people it would be bad for the sales. It says in the passage that BMW joined the \"program\" i guess you can say by adding traffic jam assistants. What if something goes wrong? Then the BMW business will be effected negitively by the bad reports on the cars they are putting out on the streets.\n\nIn conclution, I do not think that the driverless cars should be released and starting on the street. They could be very dangerous if any little thing went wrong. Also there will be many cases fought on the resposibility of the accidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author goes into depth on a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. In my opinion, I believe that this new technology is incredible. I like the idea of this technology because it can track your emotions in a photo of anytime. The emotion tracking with this technology can go as far as detecting exact feelings and hiding emotions. But i don't agree with this for the use of students.\n\nI think that it can be helpful with students at times, but not for every case. I believe that the students should have their own privacy and it shouldn't be invaded by anyone. The students are in the schooling systems to learn, and not to be experimented on. The feelings and emotions that they have should be talked with at home. If there are problems in the school, the students should advise their parents about it. This can be helpful in some cases with the schooling systems, but not for every problem they face.\n\nIn conclusion, I dont believe that the technology is bad, I think that it is an excellent idea. This technology can probably be used to help the police departments one of these days, but I dont believe that its meant for the school systems around the world. Many problems that the students face in school can be talked about and confronted, without this technology. As i said before, the technology is great, but for local schools not so much.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless car is the whole new way for the public transport .The car that can drive it self you won't have drunk or sleeping problem while they are driving.\n\nIf you have a driverless car that have bben control with the computer you will have less accident than what we have right now but what will happen if you get hack by the terrorist or that kind of people what can you do they can steal your car away really easy or they can kidnap you while you are riding the bus or they can do a car bomb without any chance to get hurt imagine what can the terrorist can hack to the main control system of the driverless car they can destroy every thing i will be a mess countless people will die the building and everything will get destroy and right now we don't have a way to protect the server from the hacker yet i want to know how can you prevent this thing from happening but if yo u can't you shouldn't do this at all don't put people live in to this kind of risk for your profit.\n\nI didn't mention about people that will lose their job to these driverless car what can you do about this the money that they get and feed their family are you going to snatch their job away and let them starve to dead just so you can sell your driverlesss car.\n\nBy the way what will happen if your main computer that command your driverless car error or overheated is that mean all the traffic will be shutdown and you cannot do any thing until you fix that\n\nThe last thing i will mention about is the signal that you sent back and forth from the car to the gps or the controller how can you control the car when there is a place that got a bad signal right now some place you can't even get a good signal with wifi then how can you do that with all this driverless car system\n\nI think their is to many problem to fix before you start this system you need to think about the people that work for the public trasnport and all the bad thing that will happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If we want driverless cars so bad why dont we just take a taxi or a train. I think that we shouldnt try and make driverless cars just yet because we dont have the money to do so.\n\nTo make driverless cars we would need millions of dollars to even start constructing the ideas. Like it said in the article no car today is driverless, they may say it is but there is some situations where the car will still need human assistance. I think driverless cars would actually be pretty dangerous because what happens if the panel where the car is running from messes up or shuts down, then your car would have major problem or go off course from where you wanted to go. Another reason why I think that driverless cars are a dangerous idea is because what happens if the car breaks down on road side? Are we gonna have a google engineer come from 1,000 miles away in 10 minutes to help us? Probably not.\n\nYes driverless cars would be nice, but what I am saying is that driverless cars could also be very dangerous, and put our lives in dangerous just to have luxury. To me i dont think that having a driverless car is worth putting my life on the line for. In conclusion driverless cars would be nice, but we dont have the money to afford it, and they would be a very dangerous project to construct and test out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted alot problems faced allowing dirigibles dock The obstacles faced would put peoples safety risk One problems tail dirigibles would swirvle high wind would violent Another problem stated paragraph forgeign dirigibles made hydrogen instead helium flamable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this face was created naturally.\n\nIn the article they give plenty of explenations on why the face was created naturally . LIke in the 1st paragraph they said ,''An enermous head nearly two miles from end to end seem to be starting back at the cameras from a region of the Red planted called Cydonia.'' That shows how they came upon the face. They took three pictures of the face . The first picture was taken in 1976, the second pictures was taken 1998, and the third picture was taken in 2001.\n\nA few days later NASA unvieled the image for all to see .\n\nThe authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The ''Face on Mars '' Has sense become a pop icon .\n\nIn paragraph six it said ,'' Although few scientist believed the face was an alien artifact photagraphing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept.1977, eighteen long years after the viking missions ended .'' '' We felt this was important to taxpayers,'' explained Jim Garvin, chie fscientist for NASA's Mars EXploration Program .\n\nThouysands of anxious wed surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural lanform .\n\n''There was no alien movement after all. '' stated in paragraph seven .'' . Malin's team acptured an extraordinary photo using th camera's absolute maximum resolution.'' Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters , compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo . What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the american West . That is why i believe that the face was created natrually.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical,\"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" it appears to show that there is a face on Mars.\n\nThere is a scientist that I work with that thinks that it was made by aliens, but I don't think so. I don't think so because there has never been any real sightings of aliens and there is not enough research to prove that it was made by aliens. Here's why.\n\nFirst off, there has never been any sightings of real aliens. People have been trying to see if there are actually is any and other life forms in our solar system. People have claimed that they've seen aliens, but there hasn't been any evidence that makes that true. I think that it is a natural landform because there has been many other objects on other planets that look like they had to be made from aliens, but they soon found out that it was not.\n\nSecond, there is really not enough research covering this specific topic. Yes, NASA has taken pictures of it through out many years, but thats all they've done. No human has ever stepped foot on Mars so no one really knows if it is really made by aliens. Though the pictures that NASA took looks like a face and people think thats there's no way a person could do, that makes me beleive that if humans can't do it, then neither could aliens.\n\nAs time goes by and NASA takes more pictures of this object, they will soon realise that this \"face\" is just an object that is on Mars, and that it is not created by any aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever read listened somthing disturbing wonder even got right published Well music books magazines days full garbage innapropriete thoughts children listen base life All resources kids find kinda material found libraries We put end find source censorship library resources A library tendency known boring plain place If kid school comes hallway saying found really good book kids become interested find drugs assume boring book like others would find library Then people get book books style materials discovered checked Now children popular books consider cool So children start making actions start behaving way characters book This leads disaster Music way Music recorded past ten years pick sexual references drug usage innopropriete behavior lyrics Why would anyone want put kind material masterpiece Well singers writers found pieces containing topics sold copies So every artist kind work puting references books songs Now singers starting make music videos along sings lyrics shows well Children see artist videos attactive mates lots money living perfect life So person try thing artist make life like theres Movies come along movies seen ratings go kind styles start puting film Now pieces garbage quite time How get How get children stop getting resources No parents want walk around hear children saying things actions So libraries censorship work work removed minors wont get wrong message What ever happened good old days music movies art special talent looked somthing would get children trouble We need get censorships libraries get back good old days things get hand already", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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