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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be comfortable with the safety of your family and your loved ones in the hands of a computer or a robot? Would you trust a computer over yourself or another human just because of pure laziness? This is what you are saying when you suggest the idea of driverless cars. Driverless cars could be beneficial in some ways, but in my opinion the bad outways the good.\n\nDriverless cars have a lot of positive things that could come from them,\n\nbut they have more lingering negative affects that are waiting to happen. As mentioned in paragraph 8 of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the psychological aspects of automation are a challenge. Drivers becoming bored at the wheel and not paying attention is exactly what will cause accidents and injuries. Drivers will have the short term pleasure of not having to manually drive, but run the risk of a not so pleasent long term affect.\n\nThere are many risks that come with driverless cars. Safety is obviously the number one factor in creating driverless cars. The list of possible situations that the driverless car could come upon are endless. It is impossible for the car to be prepared for all the possible situations. I do not think it is worth it to run all the risks for the simple pleasure of not having to manually drive the car\n\n.\n\nOne of the solutions to all the risks was smart-road systems. Having sensors and magnets on the road as well as the car could get rid of some or most of the risks, but that comes with a price. According to paragraph 3 of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming', the price that would come with all these upgrades to the roads is simply too expensive to be practical. The cost of creating these upgraded smart-road systems along with the price of the cars, is way too expensive. Wasting all this money on a system that may not work is just not worth it.\n\nDriverless cars could be beneficial in some ways, but the bad outways the good in this situation. With all of the risks and safety issues, it is just not worth it. Along with that, the price isn't practical. All the effort, money, and risk-taking it would take to create driverless cars, I think they need to stay in movies and off the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Vroom, vroom goes the 1998 Chevy Impala next to you at the stop light. Driving has become apart of culture that is standard to the developed world. But the culture is slowly changing because the driving epidemic is becoming limited. Cars can be very expensive, harmful to the environment, and troublesome. Limiting car usage can help the environment, help finances, and reduce stress.\n\nCars are defined as metal cases with lether seats powered by gas or diseal. Gas and disel are fuels that are harmful to the Earth and can cause harmful emission and greenhouse gases. These gasses can cause smog, or smoke and fog mixed together creating a grey cloud of unbreathable dense air. Smog is very harmful for the environment and can heat the Earth which is not the ideal for the human body. In France, smog, caused by car emissions became unbearable, thus causing the entire city of Paris to ban cars for five days. According to Robert Duffer, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog\" (Paris Bans Driving due to Smog Paragraph 14). Therefore cars and its horrible blow can cause a blanket of harmful reactant. Cars can also cause greenhouse gases which is when the heat of the day and the cool of the night trap in the harmful emissions of a car. These greenhouse gases can also heat the Earth and can harm humans. Elisabeth Rosenthal states, \"Passenger cars are responible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Euorpe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (Car-Free Cities Paragraph 5). In effort to save the Earth and the human race many cities and communties have adotped car-banning, reducing the amount of population caused buy cars.\n\nA 2014 Lincoln MKX runs about $45,000, which is the equvialent to the salary of a high school teacher annually. Cars can be very expensive to buy, maintain, and to fuel. The price of oil is about $2.45 today. But over the past few years gas prices have fulcutated up to almost $4.00 a gallon. The average driver might buy gas every two weeks at 20 gallons, that equals $116 a month for gas. The money used to fuel the car has turned into a gas bill, not to mention the sparatic mishaps that can happen while on the road. Cars today have become an invesment instead of a luxury. Although, \"transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions,\" does not mean it should remain. The advance in technology and resources has allowed people to reduce the use of cars, and ultimately save themselves money. For example, many people have co-workers that live near one another. Thus, both persons can carpool on alternate days. Mimi Sheller suggests, \"the Internet makes telecommunting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends (End of Car Culture Paragraph 35). It is much easier and cheaper to carpool, take the bus, or take the subway. Limiting car usage would save money because more young people are \"interested[in driving], but it's not a prority.\" Therefore, parents do not have to spend $30,000 on a new car for their 16 year old. \"A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009,\" which is putting money back into the pockets of parents and public transportation companies (The End of Car Culture Paragraph 39).\n\nRoad rage is the disease the that overtakes a person when another person is driving idiotically. Road rage is sitting at a green light at a complete stop because the person in front of you is too busy texting their BFF. Road rage is caused by driving. Driving can cause stress because cars are out of your control, traffic is out of your control, and time is out your control. When things are out of control, human nature is to panic. Driving is not the time nor the place to panic. Limiting car usage can reduce the effects of this stress caused by driving because there would be less people on the road, less traffic, and less crashes. Heidrun Walter says, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (Car Free Cities Paragraph 3). Less cars means less drivers which then means a safer environment for pedestrians. Less cars means less traffic which means no more road rage. Less cars means less cars because there are less reckless drivers grazing the road. Limiting car usage can also make people come closer together because it forces them to interact in order to get around. For instance, instead of hopping into you 2013 Camry you call an old friend who happens to work on a different floor of your office building. This interaction can spark a new realtionship and brightens your day. Cars and driving causes stress because it is out of control, but if cars are limited then the stressed caused by driving will be reduced.\n\nRoad rage, smog, and tickets, driving is the mush pot of the many problems of this world. Limiting car usage can save the planet, save money, and save you blood from boiling. The priviledge of driving has been taken advantage of and has caused the world to decay at its own expense. The human race has the ability remit from the tragdey of cars one city at a time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Participating in community is a form of self satisfaction through out the world.Whether the teenagers should involve in such activities or not ,is always a debatable one.Major of the younger generations may not agree to this notion,but in my opinion it is always preferable to encourage service actives for college going people,as it profitable for society also.\r\n\r\nFirstly,humans at the age of 13-19years are not only vulnerable , but also gets influenced quite often.Volunteering for non profit works increases communication,boosts confidence ,and provides a sensation of satisfaction.Epitomes to support my work are,when the students step out of there little world ,and starts to help the crowd around them the way they interact with others gets elevated.once there way of expressing raises ,that impact will be positive on their confidence levels.\r\n\r\nSecondly,they gets out of there tiny world of college,house,and mobiles.Mental health boosts rapidly,as kids of this age are prone to anxiety and depressions.wide spread of information can be obtained by help outs.\r\n\r\nOn the other way,community will also get benefited.For instance,numerous members are willing to help the needy,but when they do so by hiring paid employees;financial burden a raises.In spite ,we can take assist of teenagers who are quite strong physically.\r\n\r\nIn contrast,courses that benefit students can also be done in there leisure time.Does it leads to prosperous future? In one way yes but not in other way. Doing part time works yields them money for fees and commodities.\r\n\r\nBased on the previous mentioned paragraphs,engaging in service activities is beneficial for both one who does it and also for who receives it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, spending money on appearance has increased in order to look younger among adults. This issue comes with some reasons, and I think this affects almost positively.\r\n\r\nPeople tend to look younger by expending a great amount of money, because, firstly, beauty is one of the important qualities for individuals, everyone wants to be accepted by others, and as a result, the more a person is beautiful, the more acceptable he is. And when people get old, they lose their signs of youth, so, by buying cosmetics and luxury clothing they cope with it. Secondly, the way someone appears indicates much information about him. A businessman who invested in several projects can not wear sports clothes, he has to suit up and purchase expensive outfits to gain more respect.\r\n\r\nThis trend could improve people's mental health, although, exaggerating in any field impacts negatively. For example, elders who think they do not have any seat in society due to their looks, after having a haircut and wearing a nice dress, can believe they are not too old to hang out with their younger friends. In addition, looking smart is essential in offices, if an employer wear always suit and clean pants with a shaved beard, according to my experience, he is able to get a promotion sooner than others. However, as I mentioned before, if someone does not has enough money it can bring several problems such as bankruptcy and debt.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, spending a great load of money can be beneficial for wealthy elders and bosses or even workers, but I do not recommend it to people who are penniless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay I will try to give an overview and comparisan between men/women in Australia and their group of ages in terms of empoyment and sees how things were in 1984 until now.\nFirstly let us take men;\nit seems that men from 33-44 of age always required and with have the best employment rcored over the the years with stable precentage which is almost 90%.\nFor the eldest, 60-64, there numbers seems to be grown over the years, started from 30% in 1984 until 2001 and jumbed into almost 55%.\nFor the youngest, boys from 15-19 seems to have a better numbers on the past wich maybe related to the rules and reglations that we have today.\nAs we can see that there number drooped from above 60% to 50%.\nSecondly, women;\nWomen with ages 60-64 are now have more chances of employment, in 1984 there were only 10% and they got increased over the years with a double figure in 2001 with 20% and now in 2014 with over 40%.\nThe prime age for working women seems to be 35-44 with above a 40% over the years and getting increasing year by year until it reachis 90% in 2014.\nLast group are the 15-19 employed women, with a balanced recored since 1984 until 2001 they were 60% with a slight change in 2014 drooping only 5%.\nIn cnculsion, We could say that the group of 35-44 are the most employed in Australia weather it's women or men where the group of 60-64 are the bottom list.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author talks about the challenge of exploring venis, he talks about how astronomers are interested in venis because it may once have be the most earth like planet in our solar system. The fact that there is a possiblity of there once being life on that planets surface, that is amazing.\n\nThe facts abouts about venis and how the author shows that it can be dangerous to be on venis. The first fact, the atmosphere of venis is 97 percent carbon dixide. If there was life on venis at once, then the life like creatures didn't last long. The planet venis could be the twin of earth. On the suface of venis it is about 800 degrees fahrenhiet.\n\nThe chance of there being life on venis, there is about 50/50 chance of there once was life. the fact is that the pressure of the planet being 90. that could crush any lind of living thing. There can't be a creature that live on a surface that is hot. The pressure of the planets atmosphere is 90, humans can be crushed easily.\n\nThe distantce from venis to our earth. the planet venis is rearly near our earth. it is in the orbit in our solar system so yes it is close by to the earth. Just about anything in the salor system of our is close to us.\n\nThe author is right, the dangers of life on venis is very risky. It can crush anything with the pressure. It could kill anything that goes past its atmosphere. the athor despites the risk and the way venis is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affect cyclist At first cyclist thought journey go going good one soon changes For example Never accept travel advice collection oldtimers havent left confines porched since Carter office This quote tells first cyclist thought journey going good one getting information two old men soon changed The features setting affect cyclist essay Rough Road ahead Do Exceed Posted Speed Limit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Drivless cars would be an improvant for multiple reasons. First, there would be less accidents. That is the main issue rigt now in society because many drivers are using cellphones and not paying attetion to the road while conducing a vehicle. Next , there would be less pollution in our environment. Lastly, it will help citizens transport in a quicker and safer manner.\n\nWith the drivless cars there would be less people getting hurt in car crashes and drivers be more cautious with the help of car sensors. Just like the 2013 BMW has a \"Traffic Jam Assistant\".\n\nIt is said that these new drivless cars \"would use half the fuel today's taxis and offer far more flexibillity than a bus\". Driving a further distance and use less fuel would help many people out, even those who cannot afford to be buying gas every 2 days. This would help out our environment more less pollution for example in California where there are many cars.\n\nBeing able to travel from one place to another and be there on time without any worries would be great. The driverless car woudl provide you these exceptions.\n\nThese are the three main reason why we should make the driverless car available for citizens to buy. Less car accidents, less polution, and traveling quicker.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people reveal their opinions about the negative effect of climate change that causes bad time in business. Meanwhile, others think this environment issues could lead more creative opportunities in the business. According to this statement, I believe that climate change is the importance issues induced by human especially in the industrials which involving in business. Climate change can make the business need to restrict their rules in their industrial factors to adapt to globalize environmental issues. However, it the sign of an improvement through the business models to live as a sustainable business and harmless to the resources of the planet as much as they can.\r\n\r\nIt is a tendency to believe that climate issues are the big factors that cause a negative effect on business. For example, many industrial factories such as water drinking companies are now facing to the problem of massive draughts and rare of freshwater to manufactured. This reason is from the climate issues which including greenhouses effect and the increasing of ocean levels and destroyed balance of freshwater in many locations around the world. The water company has less production than the consumption requires. This is why climate change issues are affected the business.\r\n\r\nFrom another point of view, There are the greatest opportunities for business to create their ways of a sustainable company. For instance, the big department stores such as Pink N Pay or Wall Marts are now reducing the plastic bag and encourage the customers to concerns more about environmental issues. These company will change the money for whom that need the plastic bag when they come to the shopping center.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I read article paper debating whether computers positive negative effect people Even though I love computer I know computers bad effect people Computers cause people lack exercise lack family friend time lack enjoying nature Although computers help people many ways also make things worse people In obesity rate reached time high A computer non active activity use get exersise One time I played computer two whole hours gained two pounds Your health also important When become overweight get risk diabettes high colestral heart failure liver failure My uncle overweight diagnosed diabettes regrets time gave computer Lastly people say computers create great handeye coordination Computers might handeye coordination ever used No person busy playing computer see computers effect health Eighty eight percent voted important thing life family friends The twelve percent said computer cell phone important thing life live without Not spending time Family friends awful thing When mom lost contact one new friends regretted spending much time Also spend time people could lead socializing problems If thing talk people computer develope speech problems My neibor I never talked never really came house always seemed computer one One day someone came started talking outside When I overheard little conversation I could words trouble saying good vocabulary Lastly also develope relationship problems Not able see real relationship That computers negative effect family friends In daily lives observe nature s beauty Spending time computer instead enjoying nature awful For example I go outside whole day I got spend time computer I would miserable Nature gift given everybody Also air good body Without air would taking chemically changed air good body Lastly everyone reads internet warming take action If spend time computer would able help nature I remember I read warming computer So I took action cleaned lakes That computers negative effect people Computers great many ways much time give computer badThat computers negative effect society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph author feels saeng pass test hibiscus thinks hibiscus something unique And also gives memory used live moved Saeng seemed place know", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The callenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Would you like to explore Venus? Many ships have already went but as it said in the article \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author and others believe that long ago it may once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system because today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on eath.\n\nThe author is very much for a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, saying in the article, \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\". Also adding \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The author also believes scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up and close despite the risks. \"Maybe we should think of the as challenges.\" he added.\n\n\"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit except for the crucial long time frames of space travel. If we were to send people there we should have them plant trees all over to see if the would last and how long. If the planet was earth like before it could possibly be like that again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers that can read emotions. People are against it and people are for it. Here are the reasons why these computers should be across the world every where.\n\nThe shcools should invest in laptops that can read your emotions like if you are bored or tired in school to spice up the lesson to make you concentrate more on the assignment like you have your own teacher sitting infornt of you teaching the lesson only to you and no one else has the same lesson. It would help with people who have depression or suicidal thoughts. The computer could read how they feel and then they could seek help and then we wouldnt have to worry about people killing them selfs because we could have a computer to read how they are feeling and save their lives. Computers should just always have them installed and run the test at different times to see how people are feeling on certain days.\n\nIf the therapy office ,counsling ,and or schools invest in these computers they could not only read emotion but tell an adult what is going on and or tell if a child is really sad or really mad or any of the emotions that the humans have. It would be a really good investment to go into school and to counsling offices or therapy to tell if the sesion is working or to get kids from being bored or distracted in school", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be convincing you today to join Seagoing Cowboys. When working for as a Seagoing cowboy you are able to do many things; such as you are able to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped over the seas. You are able to vist many beautiful places like Europe and China. We can not forget you will be helping people after World War two, people left in ruins without food supplies, animals, and so much more. After you are finished reading this I hope that you understand what its like to be a \"Seagoing Cowboys.\"\n\nIn addition to caring for horses, young cows, and mules we enjoy hard workers to help take great care of the cattle. You should be a hard and caring worker such as in times when there are heavy seas. You check up on the cattle to make sure they are alright. To pass the time you can come up with fun games to play since the long trips may get tireing. Just think of where the cattle is being taken to see the beautiful sites.\n\nAfter a long wait to finally reach land you walk out to see beautiful places. The sky prettyer than you may have ever saw. You relize all the hard work that you have been thourgh has payed off. Site seeing in these places are memorial you will never forget them. This is just one of the benefits of helping others. \" The cattle-boat trips were an unbeliveable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" as I said.\n\nJust take a mintue to think about what a change you are making for other people. How they will look up to you in a very important way, that no one will ever think. By you helping these people that are left alone feel helped and you will feel appricatable. \" I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" I said. \" It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nThis are many reasons why you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys.\" You will help cattle. You are able to help other people when they need it. You are able see many beautiful things in the world with your help and support. You will enjoy the great opportunity that you will have with joining the \" Seagoing Cowboys.\" This is why you should be apart of the \"Seagoing Cowboys.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Mr. Senator\n\nThe Electoral College is a process not a place. There's nothing wrong wit people voting for the president . Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO, in their time , agreed on? Abolishing the electoral college. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\n\nWho picks the electors? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central comittee, sometimes the presidentail canidates themselves. Voters can't controls whom their electors vote for. Well not always .Voters sometimes get very confused about the votes in vote for the wrong canidate.\n\nThe best arguement against the electoral college is called Disater Factor. The Americans should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in a century. Back in 1960, segregations in Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratics with new electors that would oppose John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the canidates who recieve the most votes. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, it happened in 2000, but it's less likely than a dispute over popular vote.\n\nThe Electoral College requires a presidential Canidate to have trans-regional appeal. No other region ( South, Northwest, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes. The electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For an example, nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" tell us that NASA has have not solved all the condition on Venus, but they say that if you put a hover vehcle it would go 30 or more miles.\n\nThe author supports this idea of this article because on what the NASA are doing is that long ago in our solar system Venus if most likely to plant earth. Venus can sometimes recall to us, so thatb we may visit plant Venus in the future.\n\nNASA has studied the surface of Venus and if it really has moutians, valleys, and etc. Also NASA is thinking to send humans to Venus to study the plant landscape and if it can handle the technology as well because of all the heat, pressure and, other types of forces as well.\n\nThis is why NASA is trying to send humans to plant Venus over there is because they want to see if all the technology and etc. If it can last more than 3 weeks with out getting ruined and while they are on thier way to study the plant as well so that we may have communication with them while they are over there and trying to slove the answer.\n\nThe conclusion of this article is that once NASA send humans to other plants and beyond the limit and dangers that they have humans can lead us so many ways and challenge their selfes while they are in space trying to figure out the question.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving a car that can control itself is pretty amazing. It might have it's difficulties, but you have to admit it's amazing! People would only have to drive like 30% of the time depending on the traffic. It'll tell you when its time to take over too so you'll have to be alert at anytime. Everything isn't going to be perfect. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" are about cars that drives by themselves which is spectular because it's car that can drive for people.\n\n\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" can possibly change the world. The driverless cars helps people save money on gas. People always complain about how gas is so high. If people get the driverless car, they save twice as much money. If the person who buys the car end up having kids, they can save the money they've been wasting on gas and can finally spend it on their children. They'll also have enough money for a family trip! Another example, the driverless cars went more than half a million miles without a crash. That's amazing considered it's drving by itself. There would be times where the person might have to control the car like when its to much traffic on the highway or driving in and out of the driveway. Other than that problem, it can drive on its own without any help and not get in any accidents. Last example, the car will alert the person when it needs the person to drive by many different ways. First way it'll alert the person by, the driver's seat that vibrates when the car is in danger of backing into an object. The other way, the flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up display. The Manufacturers are thinking about using camers to watch that the drivers are paying attention to the road at all times.\n\n\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" may have its flaws, but every single thing has their flaws. It may need you to take over at times, but thats all. The car helps people save money on gas and it's also keelping people safe while they're relaxing in the vehicle. Hope people wouid consider buying the driverless cars. Driverless cars are going to change the world!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being Patient A years ago I started horse back ride I love muc h About month ago I ordered new riding boots This time I defien tly patient Me mom went stake line tackcorn ordered new boots When arrived small sent back Days days went I waited boots They didnt come I patient Another day went mom finally called They said reship something I goes fourteen day processing Both mom patient Weeks went still boots My mom gotten new credit card week Another week went mom I getting impatient She called company said tried change shipping credit card said declined But problem fixed Im glad I patient enough wait boots riding comfortably new riding boots", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To the fact,parents are the first teachers to their kids,it is commonly believed that,storytelling by parents is really important.Whilst,others argue that,reading books and watching television can be done by the younger generation and parental intervention is not required.In this essay, I am going to discuss both the views and share my personal opinion.\r\n\r\nParents are the first persons who spend more time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the stories taking some time out from their other work,children will be motivated towards the good manners and they will carry it when they grow.As we know,the first impression is the best impression.Furthermore,apart from morality,the bond between the parents and children will become very strong which creates a lot of positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childhood with parents behave well in school and on the other hand,youngers who did not spend their time with their parents act oddly.\r\n\r\nIt is also argued that,nowadays,children are capable enough to manage their work,including,reading books,watching television of their choice like cartoons or movies.If the parental impact is missing then it may lead to several negative ways on the children.In other words,children give importance to television than parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 percent of children prefer to spend their time in front of the televison by enjoying their favourite program than seeing their mother or father.\r\n\r\nIn a conclusion,parents killing time with the children is very important for their children personal growth rather than allowing them to do their activities of their own.It is also suggested that,the more time parents spend with children in teaching them stories,the more good manners their children learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going to be talking about driverless cars and my oppinion or position on them, I think they are a great idea, they keep people safe and notifies when they need human skill required.\n\nDriverless cars keep you safer than if a human was driving, human error can make the difference between life and death when it comes to driving, if there is a car that doesnt need to be driven by humans, we need to fund it for safety and the advamcement of our society. Driverless cas are also safe for when they have problems that the car's computer cant handle then it notifies the driver when it does want human skill, eventually we will have cars that will need no human skill and fatal car crashes will not happen as often. If the car can drive itself and not crash nearly as often as humans do then what if everyone had one, will there be no more fatal car crashes or even crashes, will crime rates go down because the car will most likely have a sensor that is related to the owner of the vehicle so they cant get away from the police or car owner.\n\nIn a perfect world there will be no more car crashes of any sort, yes there will be the occasional fender bender, but with no more death because of fatal car crashes and saftey will rise and crime rates will go down, these are all what if's, but if these were to come true the whole world will change completly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people have different opinions about what happens on the planet Mars. During a recent discovery many people had the idea that the face on mars was created by aliens. Scientists had a different theory. Scientists believed that the face was formed by something more believable. Aliens was not one of those.\n\nOn May 24th NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was on Mars. The spacecraft was going about it's regular mission until it noticed something interesting. The text states, \"..when it spotted the shadowy likenss of a human face.\" The text states, \"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see.\" Once NASA revealed the images for the world to see, many of them claimed it was from aliens. Scientists had to quickly do their research to clear up false accusations. The text states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" Once NASA cleared it up that it wasn't an alien monument they quickly found out what the face was. The text states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---landforms common around the American West. NASA was able to put an end to the false accusations, and also support their conclusion with nautral landforms.\n\nWhile many people do have different opinions about certain things, sometimes those opinions can chhange. By being able to provide people with evidence as to why something is the way it is can steer thier opinion in another direction. NASA had many followers who felt that the face on Mars was caused by aliens, but NASA was quick to provide them with correct imformation on the formation of the face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views on whether a government should support the elderly and retired people financially or not. I believe that it is mostly an individual’s duty to save funds for their retirement, but I totally disagree that elderly people shouldn't receive any support from the state. The combination of personal support and the government’s assistance could be the best possible solution for the retired elderly people.\n\nI think the regime should support the elderly people financially as this is the part of a social democracy which states the equality of opportunities and distribution of resources fairly. For example, many developed countries like Germany, the United Kingdom, and the United State are following this strategy by allowing some money to be cashed for elderly people upon their retirement. Moreover, it is their right to have some financial support as they had paid their taxes throughout their lives. So they have to take some of their money back when they need it. The government should allocate money to take care of its citizens no matter what are their ages.\n\nOn the other side, those elderly people do not have any alternative way of earning, as their chances for employment is quite low in contrast to the young people, they should be taken care by the savings they have, by their own children and by the government. \n\nThe people should always have savings and relatives who would be taking care of them when they become old. The parents take care of their kids and sacrifice a lot. The children should always be ready to take care of their elder parents. A prudent person would have some savings for his older years and thus it is also an individual’s obligation to save for their future need. Furthermore, the government can’t deny its role to take care of the elder people. The combination of these three can be very effective to take care of people when they become old.\n\nIn conclusion, governments should take the responsibility of providing senior citizens with all their financial needs as part of ensuring their well-being and at the same time it is an individual's duty to save money for their hardest time and their sons and daughters have some responsibilities as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despit the dangers pretty good but needs to take more time and or planning on \"The Challenge of Exploring. The first pargraph was a great start with enterducing the topic. And in pargraphs two through six had great detial and reasonings about Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger.\n\nI didnt believe that the last two pargraphs stayed on topic. I think that the auther wanted to write more but didn't have anymore information on the topic at hand.I feel as if the auther got distracted about computers and technology.\n\nThe auther goes from taking about NASA working on other ways to studing Venus to the history of computers and technology. Brings up about the 1800s and World War II. Then talks about cell phones and tablets.\n\nI believe if the author took more time on this then it would be a lot better on staying on topic and there would be more to read then just 8 pargraphs. I feel as if the auther was really in to this topic and should continue on it. If the auther took more time and rewrote this I would read what they came up with. So yes the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despit the dangers pretty good but needs to take more time and or planning on \"The Challenge of Exploring\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is rapidly becoming more and more advanced. We can no do things with computers that were considered magic in the past. One such thing that computers can now do is carry out processes and calculations that were thought to only be done by the human subconscience. One such process is the detection and quantification of emotion, a task that can be completed by the Facial Action Coding System, or the FACS. This system reads faces and facial movement and determines what emotion the face is expressing. With this new technology, people are looking for effective ways to best utilize this technology. One such environment where this would be applicable is in learning environemnts. A Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to read the expressions of students in the classroom because it can make in-classroom instruction more effective, make online teaching more responsive, and allow schools to help emotionally at-risk students.\n\nThe FACS would be useful in the classroom because it can make instruction more effective. In a classroom, feedback from students is important in order to effectively deliver material. For example, if a teacher teaches something, and the students show confidence in the subject, then the teacher will move on; conversely, if the students convey confusion or boredom, then a teacher can reteach or modify the lesson. However, a problem might arrise when students do not properly voice their current emotions. If a student is confused, yet outwardly confident, the teacher has no way of knowing that the student is confused. The FACS could solve this solution. If this system were put in the classroom, it could monitor the faces of students. If students were confused, this confusion could be conveyed to a teacher without the need for the student to voice this confusion. If a teacher knew what his or her students were feeling at all times, then the teacher could better present the material and help students learn.\n\nNext, the FACS would be useful in teaching online. Today, there are many oppritunities to take online classes. The issue with online classes, however, is that they are unresponsive to the student. Unlike a classroom setting where there is another person actively teaching, a computer has no way of understanding what the student is feeling or doing. Because of this, online classes cannot teach as effectively as an class taught in person. However, if the FACS was integrated into online classes, then they could be more responsive to the student. For example, should a student look confused. The computer could modify the way that it teaches, similar to how a real teacher would do. The article claims that most human communication is nonverbal; therefore, it is important that a computer teaching an online class can understand this and accomodate to the student.\n\nFinally, FACS would be useful in schools so that they can detect emotionally at risk students. For many students, school is very stressful. Prolonged stress like this can lead to emotional issues like chronic stress, anxiety, and depression. It is a challenge for schools, especially large ones, to keep tabs on their students. However, with an automated system like FACS, a school could monitor its students for emotional problems like anxiety and depression. If this system detected students like this, a school could provide better outreach to its students. This could improve the well being of many students by effectively providing support to students that need it.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System can be useful in schools because it help teachers modify their teaching skills to better accomodate students, in online courses to make them seem more responsive to students, and in schools to provide better outreach to students with depression or anxiety. With this tool, schools can more effectively serve its students by teaching more effectively and providing more support.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a debate over whether the personal possession of a gun should be justifiable or not. Both views will be discussed in this essay and I believe that the latter view is more persuasive.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are some reasons why people can legitimately possess a gun. For one thing, people can protect themselves with a gun, especially when they are in a hazardous situation. There might be a moment where public power, such as police, is vacant. For example, if they are threatened by robberies, they can use their gun so as to immediately escape the danger.\r\n\r\nIn spite of the reasons mentioned above, I reckon that private guns should be illegal. This is because, firstly, it leads to unsafe surroundings, causing abuse of the gun. To be specific, it would give rise to not only serious injuries but also jeopardy of life provided that someone accidentally shoots others. In fact, there are a lot of random shooting accidents in countries where the government grants to carry a gun, case in point, USA. Furthermore, the probability of a shooting accident is much greater than encountering burglars. Secondly, the legitimation of guns is deleterious to educational aspects, making children exposed to gratuitous violence. Children who grow near arms are more likely to be tamed by drastic ways to resolve the problem compared to the other kids who live without guns.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, although some people contend that a gun is needed for self-protection, allowing to keep guns has more demerits of safety and education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These two charts illustrate how many men and women are useed doing housework and also how many time they spend on it per day in one particular country. At the first glance, it is clear that the number of femails who are involved in some kinds of home tasks are higer than the figure of men houseworkers, while the percentage of time that people useally spend on this kind of work accounted as proporsionally simmelar.\nThe first chart depicts that women cooke and clean by 20 per cent more than men, but the latter repairs house more often than the former. Pet caring involve femails and mails approximately the same.\nThe second chart shows that the number of hours spending by citizens in there household is proportional with first chart figuers. Avarage time to cooking for instance is the same. 80 per cent of women spend 80 minutes per day for cooking. And above 20 per cent of men spend almost 20 minutes for house repairing every day.\nSumming up, more women than men deffinately work harde in households in this country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Myths. Fables. Tall tales. What do they mean to you? People just want to believe things that are not true. Some may say NASA is just not wanting to tell people about the Face that was created by the aliens, but NASA claims that it is not true. The Face found on Mars cound just be the seasons changing, it is the size of a natural landform, and there is no actual true evidence that it is extraterrestrial life; however, some may say that in fact there is no real evidence and the Face looks like an actual face. All in all, the Face is just like any other natural landform.\n\nStrangley, the author of \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\"\n\nsuggests that the season changing might have affect on the Face that was found on Mars. To clarify, in the text the author states that in April of the year 1998, it was the middle of winter in Mars. The author also explains this was \"a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet,\" referring to Mars. By this strange thought, the author is trying to explain that the landform might have just looked like a face through both the clouds and the winter being in full swing. Although, several years later, scientists returned on to take a closer look at the Face with newer technology and to find a better view with the clouds being gone. At this point in time, scientists found that the Face was the size of normal land form that would exist on Earth.\n\nUltimately, the Face is the size of what a normal land form on Earth would be. In the text, the author stated, \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West.\" What the author is trying to explain is landforms including volcanos, some mountains, and rock sculptures (like Mt. Rushmore) are about the same size of the Face. Chances that the Face is just a landform is extremelly likely. If you truely think about it, what creature is as big as even just George Washington's face on Mt. Rushmore?\n\nAll in all, there is no \"true\" evidence that the landform was a real face or creature. There is no recorded history of the face moving. Also, what \"face\" is the size of man made Mt. Rushmore? In the text, the author states, \"Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" The author is trying to explain that technology has grown with the landmark, and a sharper picture actually reveals an alike picture of the landform that had no sign of any life. The author explained in the text that the high resultion camera was so strong that pyramids, airplanes on the ground, or even the small shacks that you see when you drive down the interstate were crystal clear. This means that the Face had to have been landforms that one person might have mistaken for life on another planet.\n\nOn the other hand, some may also say that they is no proof. The Face could just as well be life on another planet, but there is no true evidence to prove so. In fact, scientist have came up with more ways that the Face is not life rather than if it was. For instance, in the text the author stated, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West,\" and, \" Michael Malin and his MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" With all this said, the Face could have a slight chance of being real life; however, it is highly unlikely that it is true life on another planet.\n\nUltimately, the Face shown on Mars is just a nautral landform. The Face cound just be the seasons changing, it is the size of a natural landform, and there is no actual true evidence. All in all, life is changing all around us. New technoloy is being formed, but with a new generation who is ready to show the world what really is in the solar system. The future is in your hands. Find out what is next. Make your mark on the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From what I have read, I think that driverless cars is a bad idea. I, and other people, would be a lot a safer if there were sensors to stop the car, warn the driver, and overall preventing the car to crash. If the world were to continue the road of driverless cars, most people aren't going to get a lot of experience in the field of driving. My overall answer to this passage is that I would argue and disagree on somethings, becuase driverless cars is not a good idea, a lot of people wouldn't get a whole of experience in driving a car, and that it is safer to use sensors.\n\nThe wonders of having car with no driver is a bad idea. Becuase there is going to be a lot more instructions on how to operate, what the warnig signs of the car, and the overall layout of the car and it's contents. More energy and money is being spent to build a car without a driver than needed. You can't really rely on the car to do the driving almost 100% of the time, because you could be in a car crash/collision if the some of sensors go out. The engine wouldn't start as often because of the battery has to produce more energy to run the entire car, include the sensors and other gizmos. The only good thing that a driverless car can do is stop if the driver were to have a stroke, a heart attack, or just pass-out for some particular reason.\n\nIf the car is driving on its own most of the time, how would the person learning to drive gain any experience? The driver would hardly gain any experience because the car is mostly the driving. The drivers out with a car that can drive similar to the average driver, will only know how to shift gears, turn the car on, and follow the road and the signs next to the road. Most of the people who want to know how to drive don't want to read a manual that is probably more than 300 pages long. For example: the first 50 pages explain how to turn on the car, move foward and stop. The next 50 explain what buttons to push and when to use them. The 3rd set of 50 explain what and how the gears of the car. The 4th set of 50 exlplain what the car should get, how to read the things on the dashboard, and pictures of that car. The rest of the pages explain what the car has, what sensors there are, and a few contacts if something bad were to happen to the car.\n\nSince most people believe that driverless cars is the best thing that was ever invented (but not made the cars public yet, only the information), I prefer to have the person in full control over everything and have the sensors do there best to warn the driver. I don't like the idea of having the cars drive themselves most of the time, because what if something that the car is programmed to do, happened at the wrong time and place, and you can't do a thing about since the car does what it is programmed to do. That's why I prefer a warning because it's the drivers fault for either ignoring or not paying any attention to those warnings. Granted it may not be the safest way to the SOCIETY's standards because of the number of auto collisions per year. If SOME teachers were cold enough, but still have a kind heart, they would make there students not screw around on their phones or TALK to other people and distract others from there work, then we wouldn't have this type of problem.\n\nIn the first paragraph, last sentence, I said that driverless cars were a bad idea because of several things could go wrong, drivers will be even more inexperienced, and that sensors are better. I feel that America, and other countries, might follow the road of corruption because some stupid policies, and how we favor one thing that doesn't apply or effect of the world in any way, shape, or form. I think nobody is going to step up to the plate and change what messes we have made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear People many hours day spend active Now answer much time spend computer To many today sitting front computer laptop ecetra enough lacing shoes jog Computers ruining us deter social skills damage health cause us lazy They unbenificial society To start millions people sign website like reconnect people Do realize means Now one get car go visit one else There longer need interact life forms want Lets say s woman sitting couch All sudden face lights thought friend She gets go start car hey eye catches computer She bites lip trying decide wether go see online chat Feeling lazy sits Do really want happening everyone To late already Moving along d like take moment talk health As us knows fresh air good us Imagine re walking woods trail The crisp cool air tickles skin breathing makes smile Your entire body feels energized treking With passels days like ahead CAPS wait Now imagine sitting front computer hot stuffy room You back aches posistion long Plus think getting cold migrane You d get another app request You feel like moving back reality prefer Above beyond s exercise worry I mean s last time went bike ride I m sure know s good body exercise busy computer I think s safe say half would rather update get move It s crucial health get active To sum alot us pondering wether spend time compuer Well s answer CAPS CAPS Not enough people interacting days spending best years lifes stuffed house importantly let s face getting fat Computers taking lives s never make change better satisying lifestyle Please turn computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting the use of automobiles would make a drastic impact on the world in many ways, such as decreasing pollution in the air; and providing citizens a healthier lifestyle.\n\nBy limiting the use of car transportation, you are decreasing the harmful gases that automobiles release into the air. In passage two, it states that Paris initiated a temporary driving ban to clear the air of the global city, known as \"The smog\". Which is a great thing, because it motivates citizens to provide new ways to get around, such as walking or riding a bike; and it provides the area with freasher air to breath. France's actions caught the attention Beijing, China, one of the most polluted cities in the world.\n\nAnother significant reason why decreasing the use of cars is a great thing, is because it allows citizens to interact with each other; and to promote alternative transportations to travel around the city. In passage 3, it states that millions of columbians, in Bogota, Coulumbia partake in a car free day, which they hope will inspire others all around to do the same. The citizens of columbia used more effiecient ways to travel around the city such as, hiking, biking, or skating. It provided them a great exercise, reduced stress and air pollution, and a chance to interact with their community and environment. Columbia's event recieved a great deal attention and widely influenced other countries and cities all over the world.\n\nAlthough, automobiles provide an easier, faster way to get around it is the cause of toxic pollution in the air. So limiting car usauge will provide fellow citizens with a healthier lifestyle and freasher air. One small step to decrease pollution could spark a revolutionary change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay intitled Rough Road Ahead Do Not exceed speed limit setting changes mood essay well mood cyclist For example towards begining essay reserve essay states At resevoir campground outside Lodi California I enjoyed serenity early summer evening This shows towards begining essay cyclist happy woke getting reading go nice bike ride however changes gets directions cople oldtimers From point trip goes hill essay states About forty miles pedal I arrived first town ghost town The sun beginning heat This also shows setting ghost town setting sun beating effecting mood essay mood cyclist well goes another miles different ghost town rusty water pumps containing acid flavored water At point cyclist worried hot water knowing another miles go miles rolling hills hot sun shile seeing A Rough Road Ahead sign diamondback snake sure going die However changes different sign one baitshop This author Joe Kurmaskie uses setting effect mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Librarys filled hundreds materials many like dislike Books Those books offend re educate subject Censorship youth adult open everything You make desicons live If feel like book song movie offensive stop reading listening watching everyone gets offended I believe citizen right remove anything library every one diffrent outlooks I conclude saying censorship enforced shouldnt great extent us learn learn In school forsed learn learn believe right side knowledge way get data bases computers books music art etc", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we limit car usage\n\n?\n\nThe debate on weather or not we should limit car usage have being going on for years now and it is still going on to this day. The reason being that cars play a major role in our society and most people can't get throught their daily routines without one.\n\nCars play a mojor role in our society but they do also play a mojor role in poluting the environment. In Europe cars are responsible for about 12 percents of greenhouse gas emission.... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states. This has a mojor impact on our enivironment espicially the atmosphere, the exhaust that our vechiles put out are being taped in the atmosphere which is why we have global warming. Cars put out so much of this stuff that the ice glacies melting, temperatures rising and drought throught areas in the world but thats doesn't mean that even thow they cause so much damage we dont have to rid of them.\n\nGranted, vechiles are responsible for getting us to our destinations form point A to point B, we depend on these machines wheather it is to get to work, school transporting the sick..ect. Our daily lives have a certain time range depending on how fast and how much time we can spend on a certain objective, car limit the amount of time it would take us to walk or bike thus giving us more time durnig the day. they come in really helpful in emergences too such as when someone is need to be rushed to the hospital.\n\nTherefore limiting car usage would be the best idea. Paris has more smog that any other europen capitals, so they enforced a partil driving ban to clear the air of global city after a week smioglevels went down cangestion was down by 60 percent it was thhat bad that it even rivaled bejing chian. The smog cleared enouf to rescind the ban for ood numberes plates on tuesday.\n\nSo you can see that limiting our car usage can have greately help our eniviroment and thus making it last longer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly , in this present world life has become more convenient and comfortable due to the advancement of technology . However , a couple of people thinks that life without technology is easy-going while the involvement of the latest equipment in our life makes it hard . I disagree that simple way is the only solution and this essay will discuss how machinery had made our lives easier . \r\n\r\nIn the early days , everybody lives their life without luxury because of the non-availability of facilities . \r\n\r\nTo explain further , people travelled miles and miles on foot owing to unavailability of means of transport , as well as people live without smartphones , as a result , in case of emergency they were not able to contact their family members . Furthermore , ladies perform their regular household chores manually , such as mopping the floors , blending spices and cooking food on coals . all the above illustrations clear that life at an early age was so difficult and people had to do more hard work as compared to the present generation . \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , continuous science research had shadowed all the globe with its latest advancements and providing feasibility and ease in everyday life, to elaborate, latest and fastest means of transport system make individuals life easy as one can travel without any hassle. Smartphones connect people in a glimpse and easiest mode to receive all the latest news around the world. Along with that, the latest electronic equipment makes lives heaven, for example, vacuums, electric blenders, coffee machines, electric stoves and whatnot. Although, it makes the nation lazy and less physical activity is performed by every individual which raises several health concerns.\r\n\r\nTo conclude , I agree that advanced automation makes everything so easy that you can do anything at your fingertips, however , a person should not depend on these gadgets entirely as this can cause severe health concerns in the long run for future generations. Everyone should balance their routine accordingly and also perform some tasks manually to keep themselves more active.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author talk about Venus sometimes is called the \"Evening Star\", Venus is actually a planet. Venus is the second planet from the sun.\n\nThis proved a very challenging. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms to of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too. Sometimes they are closer to venus. because Venus is sometime right around the corner. Some numerous factors contribute to Venus'reputationac a chanlleging planet for humans study. The atmosphere of almost 97percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The planet's surface temperatures over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric is 90 times greater. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruptions volcanoes and powerful earthquakes.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because is it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Venus is probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one in particular idea about humans to study Venus. solar powers would\n\nbe pletiful, and radiatin would not exceed Earth levels, is not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. sciences seeking to conduc athorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nThe NASA is working in other approaches to studying Venus, for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbie have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. Another project is looking back to and old technology called mechanical computers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So I'm driving in my nice great black colored Handa with black rims and green neon lights. But let me stop there I do not want to get into all of the details of the car. Like i was saying i was driving and next thing you know BOOM!! I collided with a nasty old rusty out fo style truckand ruine my car. I called 1800-411-pain and they will handle it. I guess i have usage for this car anymore and I can just walk. my point i\"m making is that you don't need a car to get you where you go all the time. citizens can use other sources of transportations. Citizens need to take advantages of limting car usage for the u. s. and the world. i'm going to i'm inform citizens about advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nFirst of all, a lot of citizens love their cars like i did. What some citizens don't know that cars are dangrous. Well I think everybody know that because of all the accidents and crash but I'm not talking about that. I'm talking about the pollutions. That the air is being polluted. Secondly, That is not the only thing. Riding bikes, walking, taking the bus, and taking a cab can help stop pollution. Now I'm not talking about taking away all cars. We have to take advantages of limiting the car usage.\n\nHonestly, walking is not that bad and so is riding a bike. It is really good workout. It is also safer than cars if you don't trip or fall off your bike.\n\nAlso citizens won't cause congestion. Citizens don't also have pay bill and loans for their cars if you don't have one. Now i know some people have job to get to, so all you have to do is to wake up early for work ride a bike or take the bus arrive to work on time. If you was late and something comes up just make up a lie about why you are. At least you are helping out the world. Most of all, when you drive a car then a cop stops you and give you a ticket even though you didn't do nothing wrong. You can avoid that by just taking a bus. Also going to waste money on gas and the bus only 2 dollars. Like I said I'm saying that you should get rid of your car. i'm saying take advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nIn otherwise, in Vauban, Germany life goes on without the usage of cars. As a result, 70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. They had to give residents ticket if they drive their. All I'm trying to say is take advantage of limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that in order to avoid illness and disease, higher authorities ought to focus more on minimising environmental pollution and housing issues. I agree with this notion. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my point with relevant epitome.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there is no doubt that the major reason for spreading disease are pollution. In other words, due to industrial factories and vehicles, hazardous gases have spread all over which affects directly the health of the peoples. They might be diagnosed with harmful diseases such as Asthma and various respiratory diseases. For instance, recent forecast demonstrates that the air quality of Delhi is 385 which is no doubt considered very poor. Moreover, due to the increment in the number of cars on road not only pollution is increasing but also it becomes a serious life threat to human life. Thus, reducing environmental pollution should be the first priority of the government.\r\n\r\nBesides, it is undeniable that there is a huge gap between the demand and supply of houses nowadays which leads to the growth of slums in cities. To elaborate, due to less availability of residences, individuals are forced to live in slums which are not hygienic, and also there are no sanitation facilities for drainage systems and garbage disposal. Consequently, people's health might affect. Therefore, if people have provided adequate housing facilities, the possibility of illness would be overcome.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that government should concentrate on pollution and housing concerns due to widespread gases and smoke which would become a severe problem for human health and also sufficient homes should construct.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would feel wrote story life someone found offensive took book shelves I feel censorship libraries becoming controversial problem following reasons wrong take away freedoms people different opinions views books magazines songs trying make people aware dangers One important aspect censorship becoming controversial takes away freedom speech In right speak minds If everything read censored would nothing read The liberties freedoms citizens taken away something thought inappropriate Another reason I believe censorship wrong different people completely different opinions things One person might feel book sexual assault victim offensive another person might think book informational helpful No one base censorship one belief idea never belief idea everyone approves A third reason censorship inforced much takes away awarness dangers everyday life Stories people kidnapped car crash person driving influence drugs good thing Eventhough story accounts appropriate could influencial convince someone make right choice If censor stories abduction drugs alcohol people making wrong choices one able read story make right choice instead making mistake person Although stories magazine articles seen vulgar looked upon help make people aware give people freedom speech allow opinions Censorship libraries media abolished", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Government spend money on various amenities and facilities for the people of their country.However, there is always an ongoing debate on how government should spend their money. Some people believe that money should spend money on arts and others believe to spend money on health facilities and on betterment of education system.\r\n\r\nSpending money on the arts would bring various economic benefits to the country. By using money to renovate old art and develop new will attract more tourists to visit the country and help our economy to grow. With the profit gained from tourism we can use that for the overall development of the country.For instance, One of the most profitable sectors in todays world is tourism and by developing arts we can boost the economy of our country which would help in the progress of our nation.\r\n\r\nHowever, spending money on health and education would improve the quality of life. By spending money on the welfare of the society the life of the citizens improves gradually.Providing better health facilities to help people to survive for a longer period of time.Improving education facilities will help the youth to study efficiently and would eventually help them to become successful in the future. The government increases the quality of life by giving citizens the basic rights.For instance, in a survey, it is proved that improving quality of education students can improve themselves by 15%.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, providing better health facilities and improving education should the priority of the government as giving them basic amenities would improve the quality of life and would increase the expectancy of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless car can be really interesting and cool, but that does not mean that it is the right way to go. There are many serious flaws that a driveless car can have and most of them can put you in harms way. You would have to make sure that the driverless car is safe, that you know how to drive and know all about it, and if it follows the law.\n\nMy first arguement is the safety of driverless cars. A driverless car can have all of this fancy equipment like cameras on the roof and back and everything but the real concern is how well can a driverless car withstand? A driverless car can be the coolest car on the planet but that does not mean that it is safe. A driverless car can malfunction at any time and you would have no clue how to control it. The most important part is what if you have kids in the car with you and you get in a crash? The crash could injure the kids very badly or even possibly kill them. Driverless cars need to be 100% checked if you are going to drive it. The other thing is that, what kind of gas does it use or is it a solor powered car? If it is solor powered then that is another flaw because you would not be able to drive it in the night time because it has no sun for it to be charged from. That is one reason why a driverless car should not be used.\n\nMy second arguement is that you will have to know just about everything about the driverless car because without knowledge then you will have huge problems. First things first, you will need to know how to drive a car in general before you get a driverless car because in paragraph 7 it states, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.\" This means that you will still have to know how to drive just in case of emergencies. Also something that you have to make sure you know is the car itself. You need to know how to fix minor problems so they do not become big ones. You also need to know what part is what because if you try to call someone and they tell you to take off a part, but do not know what to take off, and you accidently take off the wrong part without knowing it then that is going to be even a bigger problem than it was before. So you need to know how to work the car and how to fix minor problems before they become big problems. That is why you need to have knowledge about the driverless car.\n\nLast but not least, my third arguement is is the driverless car even going to be street legal because what if you pay all that money for something you will only use a few times every so often? It would be a waste of money and time if the driverless car is not street legal. We have no clue if it even follows the rules of the road because, most driverless cars that have people in them, people wont be paying any attention because they think that the car can do all of the work and tha will not have to do anything. In paragraph 9 it states, \" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" That is why we do not even know if driverless cars will be legal.\n\nAll of these are reasons why driverless cars should not be allowed because of the safety hazards, if people have any knowledge about it, and if it is even legal. Driverless cars can be very dangerous and that is the last thing that we need in our community. So please help stop people from making driverless cars because it could ruin or society really badly and really quickly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a new develpment for the future. Driving these cars is known to be a better, and safer way to drive while on the road. Many car manufatures have started to develop cars with many tools that could help drivers who own driverless cars. It is a benefit for new drivers and experienced drivers on the road.\n\nAs new drivers learn the rules to the road, they sometimes get intimidated and scared of the multiple events around them. For example, there may be loud honking from cars and trucks, accidents getting cleaned up, or construction workers at work. Driverless cars can help solve this problem as more people engage in them. Although it wouldn't be required to drive in a driverless car, people are still to be cautious and alert while in the car so they could take over when things start to get challenging and out of the car's ability. Having a driverless car is safer than having a manual-driven car.\n\nDriverless cars can cause less accidents for many drivers. For example, in the 21st century, a majority of people are on their cell phones because of work or talking to a family member or friend. Sometimes they feel that they have a very important email or text message to send and the message can't wait. They pick up their phone and shoot them a quick message and by the time they look back at the road, they are too late. They had already ran into another car.\n\nMost deaths on the road are caused by texting and driving. Driverless cars are said to be safer because they have certain gadgets that help the driver know when to take over and when there is danger ahead. For example, driverless car manufatures developed dirver's seats that vibate when the vehicle is too close to an object while backing up. Having that source of warning can help the person in the driver seat know when to take over. Another example is the in'car entertainment and information system. This replaces the need to text and drive, which is something not available to people who own manually-driven cars. This develpment is safer than the cars we use today.\n\nAs this new develpment is processed, there are many ways that driverless cars could help people who are in a hurry to go places and have many things to do. For example, if someone is in a rush to get to work and their tie is not tied or their make up is not done, they could just start the car and not worring about driving and waiting until they get to a stop light to finish getting ready. With all the gadgets that the driverless car has, it benefits the many people who are used to running late.\n\nDriverless cars benefit people of all ages, who can drive. New drivers will have more confidence as they go on the road for the first time and experienced drivers could finaly relax in a way that they haven't before in a car that requires manual driving. Driverless cars are in ways safer that many manual cars that are sold today. Although there are many steps to make this new develpment officialy real, and with the help of new technology, it can happen real soon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers great help society I believe CAPS know something could go online look Also sick CAPS time go buy things need stores buy online right door My final reason computers save paper buy lot document computer My first reason CAPS know something could look A lot times could watching talking someone wonder something means instead letting whatever CAPS know pass could look computer educate possibly others My next reason sick CAPS time go buy things need stores buy online right door This great help people sick sometimes said CAPS leace home instead starving death food anything click couple buttons computer Now also could help people busy go stores right leave could press buttons get home stuff sitting Back dad mom vicepresident drug producing company sold oxycofin grocery ship foods house They happen worked long hours CAPS time go grocery food house huge help My last final reason computers help save lot trees paper A big thing go green right instead cutting trees computer CAPS paper These reasons computers help society I could come many ideas CAPS fit story finally rember people whole lives computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Becoming a seagoing cowboy means that you would take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that are being shipped overseas to other countries that need to recover their animals from World War II. It may sound like a lot of work but is can be very rewarding. On my many trips as a seagoing cowboy, I was able to spend a lot of my time with friends and was able to do some sightseeing in other countries. I was also able to learn a lot about animals just from taking care of them. I hope that you choose to become a seagoing cowboy.\n\nOne reason for becoming a seagoing cowboy would be that you would learn a lot about animals. I was able to learn a lot of body language from the animals. I now know when an animal is nervous or angry. I can tell when a horse is calm and happy. Knowing animal body language may help you not get a broken bone from being kicked by an angry horse or cow. You will also learn how to take care of the animals. I already knew how to take care of some of the animals from working on my aunt's farm, but I learned how to care for animals a lot faster from doing it hundreds of times everyday.\n\nAnother reason that was fun about becoming a seagoing cowboy was that I was able to spend a lot of time with my friends on the trip back to America. All of my friends and I loved playing sports, like volleyball and table-tennis, in the empty holds where we kept the animals. We also shared stories and games that some of us had never even heard of. I learned many fun stories and games that I now pass on to others today.\n\nMy last reason to convince you to become a seagoing cowboy would be the sightseeing. While we were in another country, we had some time to go sightseeing. I was able to tour an excavated castle in Crete. I took a gondala ride in Italy and saw the Panama Canal. I also learned a lot about culture. I learned how bad things can be in other countries after wars. It made me more aware of the people and their needs in other countries.\n\nI loved the opportunity to become a seagoing cowboy, even if it was for a short period of time. I was able to learn animal body language and more about how to take care of the animals. I was able to see many great things like the castle in Crete and the Panama Canal. I also learned about culture in many other countries and some of the hardships of living there. The trips made me more aware of the hardships every person in other countries face every, single day of their lives. I hope that all of these reasons convinced you to become a seagoing cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring venus is is that the atmospheric pressure is over 90 time greater then what we have here then what we ever will have here on earth. The normal temperatures on venus is about 800. The most we every get here is about some where in the 100s if you go to venus you will cook like your diner would. And there is way to much mercury on the plant. The plant havs a rocky surface. It has valleys and mountanins. It is kinda like earth.\n\nNASA has an idea thst they want to send people up to go and study the plant but not put then not the plant cause you can't land on it. They want them to fly above it and study it. And see what they can learn about it and see about it. But still being that far away from the plant it would be 170. The air pressurse would be sea level on earth. They would be hovering about 30 miles above it. It would not be easy for them them but it still be survivable for humans.\n\nNASA is working on a study on Venus with a diffrent approaches. One example is the silicon carbide that have been test in chambers. The have looked back at old technology. One called mechanical computers they where frist made in the 1800s. But they frist played a role in the 1940s.\n\nThey are looking for stuff that will give them more power. Modern computer are more powerful, flexible and quick. They need it to suroivoiur the heat of Venus. because it is not use to that much heat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author support of the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger of it has enough support for it. In paragragh 1 it stats that \"Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun.\" my opinion is that Venus could be danger to Earth or other planets.\n\nThe main reason why I think that this article has enough support is that in paragraph 2 it talks about how the Venus is often reffered to as Earth's \"twin\" and it talks about how that Venus is the closes planet to Earth it has the same density and size. Even though that Venus isn't the only neighbor to Earth because we still have Mars. Venus and Mars are the closes to Earth the only thing that is different is that they go at different speeds. In paragraph 2 it stats \" These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other time to Venus. Because of Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" this is talking about how we send things to planets to see if anything is going on there and if there is any life or anything but the spacecraft has never been able to land on Venus. They even say that a spacecraft haven't land there more than three decades.\n\nIn paragraph 3 and 4 it talks about why hasn't our planet sister is so inhospitable and why scientist haven't gone any further with the research like the different tempatures and the atmosphere of it. Paragraph 3 talks about the thick atmosphere of Venus is 97% carbon dioxide and it is 800 degres Fahrenheit and that it is 90 times greater than what we have experience on our own planet. The next paragraph it talks about how Venus was exactly like Earth for example Earth was covered in oceans and Venus was the same way. They say that Venus has fimiliar features like Earth it says in paragraph 4 that \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" which means that Venus is our nearest option for planetary visit.\n\nLast main reason why I think the author suports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is that in paragraph 5-6 it stats some more facts about NASA sending humans to Venus and that researchers are working on investigating the knowledge of Venus. In both of the paragraph it stats that they want \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape.\" it stats that in both paragraph because they want to see if there is any light or insight on ground. NASA thinks that the conditions aren't easy but survivable for humans.\n\nOverall, I think striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has it's value of showing. I honeslty think that these paragraph supports the idea of stufying Venus in multiple ways. The aurthor include a lot of facts and research about Venus that gives it enough support to why they should investigate Venus. It would be fastinate to see research about Venus because you can compare and contrast to why it;s similar to Earth and why haven't it been discovered yet?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Let mind wander place peace tranquility You world endless possiblities To side lies vast collection diverse adventures anecdotes You library book holds key door knowledge adventure Looking adventure drift section searching one suitable liking Turning corner eyes suddenly glance books magazines provocative inappropriate pictures blatantly open anyone gaze upon Quickly turning eyes unfortunate meeting offensive pictures race hallway different section You think unecessary images scarred mind In libraries find anything looking contained within confines book I believe libraries used everyone different ages races genders censorship put effect Some content found libraries censored due diverse group people world different views opinions morals This censorship narrowed inappropriate images religious political cultural innuendo well Censorship evident sections library I think certain books necessarily removed shelf violation rights speech includes written speech well I however think sectioned clearly marked warn unwanting eyes ears material found Libraries one number one resources researching reading gaining information knowledge Most everyone used uses use library life This includes children families Children need experiencing learning exposed content material found libraries I think books removed shelves put somewhere else child could find Children rapidly developing minds sometimes defined images exposed Something child sees commonly easily remembered longer time adult would see This shows good child see offensive things Censorship regard moving books new location child stumble upon best choice Another reason I believe books removed completely rather taken somewhere else library everyone right express opinions feelings toward subject Also others right express opinions toward another s thoughts Just find something offensive nt give right take away someone I think person desires things feels need read right choice Although people want see also choice somewhere come across This books open see taken secluded section In conclusion best solution dealing offensive material found libraries remove completely section everything else allow exclusive access desire material Everyone choice right see see certain material might find offensive In library I believe become better environment wish access use More people use library appeal everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nthe author persuades that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despiting the dangers. Even though exploring and studying Venus can be extreamly dangerous, it can can be a challenge but human curiosity will most likely lead to the studies of Venus by taking the risks.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth, they are alike in many ways. Venus can be right around the corner, many researchers have sent many spacecraft to land in Venus. But due to the extreamly hot surface conditions, no spacecraft has survived. In the article it states, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" In this piece of text eveidence it states that the high temperatures of Venus has the hottest surface of any other planet in the solar system, no human can survive those temperatures so they send spacecrafts to land in the hot surfaces.\n\nSimillarly, sending spacecrafts can only do so little before the hot suface of Venus destroys it. In the article it states, \" However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Scientists are finding ways to get up close and taking risks to research more abut Venus and working on machines that last long enough to contribute.\n\nHowever, NASA is working on other ways to be able to study Venus. In the article is states, \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" It also says,\" Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\" In other words, NASA is working on machines or computers that are long lasting in Venus's hot surfaces.\n\nIn conclusion, even though studying Venus can be extreamly dangerous due to the hot surface conditions, limited insight conditions, and sending spacecrafts that can only do so little, Venus is a worthy pursuit despiting the dangerous it presents. Human curiosity and challeges will lead to exploring and identifying the Value of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe the most effective reform to mitigate environmental issues is to increase fuel prices for vehicles. In my opinion, while this is necessary for the short-term, education acts as the priority solution.\r\n\r\nThose who advocate the need for the increased cost of fuel often point to the immediate effect on the environment. People are often driven by costs so more expensive fuel prices can discourage them to commute with their vehicles, creating the demand for public transport. For example, Vietnam has been experiencing a rise in fuel for the past 3 months, and the locals are making the transition from private cars and motorbikes to bicycles and electric buses. Accordingly, this has resulted in a cleaner atmosphere and fresher air in big cities like Hanoi and Saigon. However, officials doubt the effectiveness of this approach because the rise has caused a lot of frustration for the citizenry. \r\n\r\nThis is why I consider fuel increases can help improve the worsening environment for only a short period of time. A better solution calls for the urge to educate people about the long-term impact. Human activities have long been blamed for damaging the environment and there are many factors contributing to this. Toxic gases released by vehicles only account for part of the cause, while large-scale industries, deforestation and unsustainable farming are also the catalysts. If people were aware of the consequences that they made while operating in their fields, the environment would not suffer as it does now. Maybe instead of cutting down trees for residential housing, city planners can be more thoughtful by creating more green spaces for residents to live close to nature.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increased prices for fuel can somewhat prevent people from using their vehicles for a limited time, but we need to work towards long-term reform. I think once we educate people to be more responsible in their areas, we already help the environment not to be seriously harmed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For passage I going tell story patient person world In old testament long ago man named rich happy loyal god One day devil pointed devil said would easily I away god God denied devil said let crops livestock let dest camel god said fine hurt devil agleedWhen bad yet next day one said A great fire says CAPS livestock nicked wolves wear one left another I didnt ian ihand side livestock naked wolves arc one left another I didnt ran I hand said towel stolen cold servant self roof hall family killed I ever though begin become began dhowds living site eth would hot curse god soon devil came time made horribly sick even though next year still would curse god When saw sent devil away hedled blesse I wit A new family faltune happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the idea of having driverless cars, why? Well it's extremly dangerous for not only everyone in the car but also outside out of it. This may be seen in movies how people can have driverless cars and driverless bikes, all types of stuff, but in reality thats just not even a real thing. Yes, they may be testing it at google but it is not yet a REAL thing. Anyways, it may seem cool and all but safety should be our number one priority. Just because the car may have sensors or automatic breaks doesnt mean an acident wont happen. When the car is suppose to tell you to take control and your sleeping and don't, your'e gonna get hurt, your family is gonna get hurt, so many possibilities of dangerous outcomes. I agree with it being illegal to have driverless cars, it should be a law in most states.Also it would cost TONS of money to redo road laws just for something that is gonna harm our community, country, states, and cities. It says in this article that the most safest way for driving is by a human, a real person not a car with cameras or sensors. Anyways the moral of the story is that it is a bad idea for anyone to have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There actually one mood set memoir The important one though admiration The author focuses writing many positive actions characteristics parents childhood He admires courage come order start new life despite hard times rascism He also praises willingness help immigrants stick everyone create new beginning The mood memoir gratitude The author looks back everything parents many times He credits turning small poor apartment home teaaching true meaning family The author way reaches readers thanks parents making", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm against the development of the driverless cars. I just don't believe we will ever be able to transport ourselves without having to do anything at all. Also if this is the direction we move towards technology maufunctions will be a huge issues. There would have to be different laws made just to go along with this development. Another main reason I go against this development is because of different things that happen while driving whether its construction work or kids darting across a busy street.\n\nLawmakers seem to be leaning more on the against side as well. All the traffic laws we have written in today's world are with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driving the vehicle at all times. There would have to be many new laws added including traffic and even liability. With the many things going on I believe driverless cars are well on the bottom on the list, especially because it is not something needed at all it's more of a want that seems kind of lazy. We should stay with the traditional way that the laws are already set up to abide.\n\nTechnology is something that is very reliable but very unreliable at the same given time. As a society we are definitley moving towards technology versus the modern way we do things. But when I comes to something that can become so dangerous as driving, I believe that is something that should be controlled by the human hand. If we did develop and move toward this direction it would be dangerous becuase if almost any technology is damaged of messes up at all the car could even cost a life in a car crash.\n\nAnother huge reason is the different things that go on in the world. A human could easily detect a construction site ahead but a car might not be able to with the radar or sensors that are used within the car. If that was to happen the car would just keep going like nothings different at all instead of altering its route. Also children seem to always not pay attention to traffic and dart out in the road in which if a\n\nhuman saw they could easily break but if not detected quick enough by a driverless vehicle the child would be in serious danger. If the driverless car tells you to take over the car then its not driverless, its more of assisting. In that case the driver might as well just have control in the first place, seems like another example of being very lazy.\n\nIn conclusion I believe we should just stay with the way we have been doing things and keep the vehicles controlled by humans not sensors and radars. I think this becaues of the new laws that would have to be applied, the technology just dosen't seem safe enough, and because of the different things that go on in the world that humans just detect better than technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's a lot of stuff in space. Space is endless and there could be anything out there. While NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was traveling Mars, it came across a \"shadowy likeness of a human face.\" It was a mesa. NASA took photos as soon as they saw them, and later released them into the public. Of course, not everyone believes that the face-looking object is just a mesa, but that it is the face of an alien. Here are some logical reasons on why this could not be an alien.\n\nFirst of all, there's some reasons as to why the \"face\" is just a landform. The \"face\" is just a rock. The features (eyes, nose, and mouth) are just illusions. There are shadows covering the rock, making it look like a human face. The picture was taken at the perfect angle, causing it to seem like a face, but it is not. Also, this photo was taken in 2001, which means the camera quality was low. The evidence from the article is: \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh,\" and \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo... 'As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,' [Garvin] added. 'So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground of Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!'\"\n\nSecondly, conspiracy theorists believe that the \"face\" is actually an alien under the ground. They believe that NASA is covering it up, but why would NASA do that? NASA budget defenders \"wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" If NASA were to find something like this, you'd think they would not only want to publicize it to gain popularity and make more money, but to inform everyone else.\n\nThere are always doubters and theorists, but there is enough proof to support that The \"Face on Mars\" is just a martian mesa. There is nothing to worry about. Not on Mars, at least.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted architect builders overcome big obstacles trying make plan docking dirigibles work The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame With enormous dirigible air wind blowing around would hurt buildings structure The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet With wind dirigible would tugging back forth building The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework build docking station architects would transform whole construction building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the many factors to reach a successful career is studying at university or college. So, some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. Others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss both views. \n\nOn the one hand, studying at university and college gives more opportunities to people gain and accumulate more broadly knowledge even it is required time from them. Some people say that high educated people are walking one step ahead than others. They also have more chance to achieve to successful career in the short time using by education they possessed. Because, education can be one of the most important tools for obtaining a fluky life. If that branches which people interested in needed a special knowledge such as medical, people must to study at university in order to have successful career. \n\nOn the other hand, getting a job straight after school can simplify the way and route to a successful career. If there is not required to have special knowledge in the working place, people can get a job. For example, when people want to be famous carpenter and woodworker, they don't need to study at university or college. They need only to get a job and learn by practice. \n\nIn the conclusion, whether studying at university or college or not in order to get successful career depending on which working place and branches are people interested in?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, TV popularity among young people have gone through boom period and it comes with severe consequences. Some obey that TV program has contributed to the children's role while others believe an action of kids are influenced by the amount of time in front of the TV. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument along with my own perspective.\r\nTo begin with, children, who taps into the world of television, have brought negative impacts on individual kids themselves. Besides, it leads to the misconduct of children if they watch inappropriate TV shows, such as crime movies, violent shows or offender documentary. As a result, young people started to imitate an act of violence and brings them towards a criminal road. Furthermore, kids will gently isolate from others and contributes to the lack of interaction with other people.\r\nSecondly, others believe spending too prolonged time watching TV will influence a child's manner. One reason is that, if the amount of time is not limited, students will become an introvert. Consequently, the negative effect is generated in a kid’s life. Being an introvert made children transformed into an aggressive person and hardly perform tasks on daily lives. This has resulted from the lack of adequate instruction since they become isolated from the outside world by spending most of their leisure time watching television.\r\nTo conclude, both actions generated by kid whether spending a large amount of time or improper TV program has brought them to negative behaviour on their own lives. Therefore, it contributes to the lack of social interaction and start to become an introvert. Furthermore, their own behaviour also affected by watching an aggressive movement of people that will bring them to a criminal path.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I think kid s alowed go computers So talk relitives across The want I family members I talk evry day I laptop say I relitives I belive I email They told mother living So I asked seaid yes true I looked mom lived Thanks computer also I learned one The So I asked mom I go said yes So I went sister even visited family members point I tell looked exacly I pichered tall coverd trees Birds scwerwels climing trees thing surprised house top mountine For sale I wished mom thier love So ever time go rent house thanks computers Lastly even look people internet I herd criss rock almost died So I got home I went laptop looked I said nothing That say one thing surprised The seaid geting divorce From wife I think peorson said That almost died missed read So I look fraverit people Thanks computers time accet people computers use lern think everyone sayes So I hope make good chouse But befor choose think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "plan\n\nLuke Bomberger had no ideah what he was going to do with his life when he gets older after he goes tohis High schoolgraduation, So in paragragh 3 it says that, In August 1945 they have recieved their order to report to New Orleans. We arrived August 14 Luke says, The day Of the Pacific War Ended. They were talking about war so when i went to paragragh 4 it said that, Luke arrived in greece when he was 18 years old. hat means that he could be dravted for millitary service. So basicly his point of view was in the paragragh. By 'It was in the paragragh' I mean that Luke talks about his life and going to the millitary war.He argues with the and convincis the partaipant that to be in the Seagoing Cowboys. Which means he whabts the particapant to join the Seagoing Cowboys / Millitary.If u rea Paragragh 1 and also 2 you can see that they talk a little bit about the World War 2 andthis is what he is basicly talking about that he wants people....Here is an example lets say someone comes up to me and says I want you to be in the Millitary with us and serve are country i whaould say no because i dont want ot get killed Because i whould not know hoe to shhot guns whixh i know thar they teach you but im so dingy that is not evan funny. And then he goes Please Please Please, That is what Luke is trying to do to other people.So this is my point of view about Luke and the Seagoing Cowboys / Millitary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, Viking 1 spotted a \"shadowy likeness of a human face\" from a region on Mars called Cydonia. The Face became popular everywhere and people began to believe it was created by aliens. The face is just a natural landform and scientists at NASA have many ways to support that statment.\n\nThe Face was discovered in 1976 and was shot by the Viking 1 even though the scientists were a little bit suprised. They shortly figured out that it was just another Martian mesa ,which is common around Cydonia, but this one only had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Later, when NASA revealed the discovery they called it a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth\".\n\nAnother reason is that on April 5,1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera snapped more pictures revealing that it was just a natural landform.Then in 2001 on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia Malin's team got a better picture of the face with the help of the camera's absolute maximum resloution. With the rule of thumb you can discern things three times bigger so if there actually was something they would've seen it. The picture actually shows that the Martian is equivalent ti a butte ot messa landforms that are common aorund the American West.\n\nTo conclude, the Face is just a landform that has an Egyptian face. Scientists have discovered that it is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driveless cars is basically a waste of time and money. My reasons that apply to this is that:1. Why would anyone want a driveless car that still requires you to drive?,2. people might get bored and start texting and get a ticket because the police might assume they was texting and driving (which is against the law ) even though they wasn't the one operating the car, and 3. If the car gets you into an accident both the driver and the manufacturer is going to get charge because 1. the driver was in the car, 2. the manufacturer made the car.\n\nIn the passsage it say that 'none of the cars so far are completely driveless, they can do anything but navigate through work zones and around accidents.' If the cars are driveless then why can't they perform all the work that a driver does when driving a normal car alone? 'Most driving laws focus on keeeping drivers,passengers,and pedestrians safe', but how can a driver be alerted if they do random things while the car is operating itself and if something bad happens, it'll be too late to try to get into control of it.'Telsa has projected a car that only autopilot for 90% of the time', well that basically doesn't work.\n\nIn conclusion, I've stated my reason on why I think driveless cars are a waste of people time and money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage, such as it saves gas and it helps relieve stress. \"Its a ood opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\"(Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota) says a business man that goes by the name Carl Arturo Plaza. There are amny different ways to get from point A to point B and Back to point A in a safe, and helpful way. Such as taking the bus, taxi, carpooling, bike riding, or even skating.\n\nLimiting car usage saves gas because you can use someonjes elses gas instead of your own and you can conserve yur gas when ever you really need to use it to go to the store or get something that you really need later on tin the day when you get bac to point A and see and use your car. \"Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel overs gasoline. Diesel makes up 67% of vehciles in France,m compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engines in the rest of the western Europ, according to Reuters.\" (Paris bans driving due to smog)\n\nLimiting car usage also relieves stress for some stressful people. Some people that i know get really flustered ehen they drive and they have road rage, and they have to take pohone calls and get distracted from the road and sometimes some people just need to have someone else take the wheel and they neeed to get themselves together and take a moment and reliEze that. na dnoone needs a stressed driver that just makes all of us nervous.\n\nIn conclusion limited car usage is good because it save sgas and is tgood for reliving stress.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you agree with people who think smart cars are the solution to stopping car accidents? I believe they are. Smart cars can reduse car accidents by a huge toll. They can warn drivers when they need to pay attention to the road. And the cars can act like a human which will further enhance safety for our world on a newer level.\n\nSmart cars are built just like an ordinary car except they have a few more upgrades on them. Smart cars will be built with sensors which will receive data from radar which will cause the car to now whats ahead of it and behind it. Just think on how much it could reduse car accidents. We could have the percentage down by 20-50 percent. Just think on how the car can alert drivers who arent paying attention and save them from causeing a death in a family\n\nThe smart car will be built with all sorts of alarms. I believe it could stop and alert the driver before complicated and horrorific events that would have happend if the car hadn't alerted the driver. The car will be built with seats that can vibrate when the vechile is in danger of backing into an object. The car can also act like a human which could cause less damages and accidents.\n\nAlthough smart cars have many great functions, their best is they have characteristsics that act simular to a human. That characteristic is what could make or break the car when in a complicated situation. Smart cars, like humans have some basic skills. Those skills are used when useing a smart car. The cars have key characteristics that help us have better and longer lifes.\n\nSmart cars have great things that could be used in our world. We all could say we could use something that could cut polution and cut the death rate of future car accidents. I hope and pray one day those cars make it to our world in the future. Although I may never see it happen, I will continuously support the development of smart cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Voluntary works are thought to be beneficial to both students and the community, thus some people insist that it should be mandatory for adolescent to contribute their spare time into social activities. Personally, I completely agree with this suggestion as I believe that it would foster the growth of both citizens and society.\r\nThe majority of teenagers nowadays prefer to stay indoors rather than be active and participate in outdoor activity, hence through mandatory volunteering they would interact more with local people and the environment. It is likely that they would progressively become more active and socialize as they form healthy habits with new friends. By going to various places, they have the chance to comprehend different walk of lives and neighbourhoods. Moreover, students would learn valuable lessons involving in the activities. For instance, if they volunteer at nursing home, they would learn to respect and take care of their grandparents.\r\nAs the young become more enthusiastic in the community, the society as a whole will develop strong and affectionately. The disable and elderly will have someone that takes care of them daily or weekly which would improve their physical and mental health. Rate of pollution certainly will decline since teenagers have acknowledged its detrimental effect through practical voluntary trips. Juvenile crimes would not be a major problem as most of the students are working to help others in their free time.\r\nIn conclusion, voluntary activities encourage personal and communal development in a multitude of facets. Cities should implement social work for students to strengthen their skills and bond the community relationship.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day fair I patient I wanted ride bumper cars So I got line There people front I knew I patient So I waited line turn They let people time took get turn Then turn I wanted go friends let people got front us Then minutes turn picked car fun That s time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Picture come home one day work even enter house hear music blaring child s room As step closer begin hear lyrics go banging bass realize nt music s completely unedited expicit versions vulgar songs Now would want child listening songs make seem like drinking drugs various risky activities okay I know I sure would nt Music nt source offensive material today s society It found nearly anywhere In books magazines shows movies name All easily accessible children ages That censorship certain materials certain degree By I mean dirty book public library able rented people certain age Just s bad nt mean completely vanish face world There limitation view That applies everything could contain offensive material Kids kids There certain things absolutely limits explicit movies books music etc need know drugs sex alcohol young age Censorship definitely effect places like public libraries young children bound But mentioned earlier censorship certain degree Keeping childrens minds clean long possible would positive thing society general", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I believe vertain materials removed shelves libraries found offensive I believe types materials placed libraries satisfy different styles people like Censorship play role everyone opinions looked offensive By giving everyone freedom enjoy like make alot people happier The wants needs people varie one extreme What one person loves another hate This play role whether materials removed public places library Everyone right express art way Taking away art find offensive would fair enjoy By people satisfied everyone gets want Censorship take part library Entertainment always please everyone It judged many ways matter anyone say problem left alone Arguing take away material like cause tension rise make matters worse It understandable example parent would want child able welcomed media world everything postive influences That s life though everyone th outlook You think others respect view well Opinons vary I say I strongly believe people given right enjoy materials take interest Censorship definitely positives negatives part wrong role library Cutting people s availability interests lead frustration You please everyone case censorship looked beyond", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Finally day The new roller coaster michoggs adventure open couldnt wait Only one thing stand way go ride drive We cramed oursclues old minivan set After minutes Are yet brothersaid Finally arrived We waited ticked booth half got brother sister wanted go kiddy got another hour CAPS older brother wants go big ride mom said There best puer Only one problem people CAPS b worth it thought got line hours got eycloimed That avesored go I looked line Twice much people lined CAPS least wont much people rides I said paitent go ride even though lost hours", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have we seen any form of life on Mars so far? No, that's why it's clearly a natural landform. Plus, how do the aliens know what we look like. They could look completely different from us. It just so happens that the natural landform look's like a face.\n\nWhy would the aliens spend their time making a two mile long face anyways? These natural landform's are common in Cydonia, only this one had unusal shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. It is indeed interesting and cool to think that it was built by aliens, but it wasn't built by aliens. Don't get me wrong, everyone wishes it was made by aliens, but facts are facts.\n\nIn 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over the landmark and got a couple photo's that are ten times better than the 1976 photo's. It was confirmed that the landmark wasn't a face it was just the shadow's that made it look like a face. But of course, skeptics thought the alien markings were hidden by haze. \"It's not easy to target Cydonia\" says Garvin. \"In fact, it's hard work.\"(Paragraph 9)\n\nThen, on April 8, 2001, four years after the last photo, another couple of photo's were taken. These photo's were way clearer than the photo's from 1998. \" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" Garvin added. \" So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This is proof that aliens did not make this landform.\n\nAs you can see, there is plenty of edvidence that the two mile head is a natural landform. Their is way more convicing stories about this topic. But I hope that my side of the argument conviced you that the landform wasn't built by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to be great for the future. They will eliminate human error, provide for an easier driving experience, while still allowing for safety and human control. Here is the first example.\n\nHumans are a flawed species. We are not perfect robots that do not do anything wrong. All crashes stem from someone doing something wrong or illegal. Driverless cars eliminate the possibility of a human mistake. By using their sensors, driverless cars can see more than we can while driving. It takes blindspots out of the equation and allows for a further field of view. The text states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\". This is a testament to what is possible with these cars and the safety that they bring. Even though they still alert the driver of risky conditions, most of the time the conditions are not risky and drivers can just relax and stay back which would make crashes very few and far between.\n\nThe second example is providing a better driving experience. One of the worst things for drivers is fatigue during road trips. Imagine letting the car do all of the driving while the driver gets to kick back and watch a movie on the windshield. The article shows the possibilities here when talking about the psychological aspect of being bored when the driver does not have to do anything, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" Not having to be hyper focused on the road allows for less fatigue and a better experince overall. It can also help mothers or fathers that have to deal with young children. Not having to drive allows them to be able to help if their child needs anything. Here is the final example.\n\nThe final example is the room that these cars allow for safety. Technology is not always perfect. Sometimes it can mess up and fail. This is what many opponents bring up while in arguements about these cars. The reality is that the cars give over control to the driver when it either does not know what to do or is failing. The text states that here, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" These cars are capable of doing everything we can do physically, but when they don't know what to do mentally they give up control and alert the driver. This allows for the safety and control that most drivers want, but at a lower cost of fatigue or error as described earlier. The feature is a net that catches the car before it gets into an accident. Why not allow for these cars if at the end of the day the driver can still have control?\n\nOpponents of these cars say that they pose a safety risk and they are not worth the possible hazard just for the cool technology factor. They fail to see the safety features that these cars have in place. They also do not see how much of a benefit they are to the drivers. If they were to see how the cars give up control and allow for the human to take over whenever, they may change their tune and start changing their opinon about these cars.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are a positive thing for our society. The way that they eliminate human error, provide an easier driving experience, and still allow for safety and control make them a reasonable option for the future. Even though some people do not see the benefit, they soon will after seeing what these incredible cars can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The need for housing is higher and higher due to the constant growth of the population. It is reasonable for many people to have a place to live. However, others are even concerned about the historical traces of their accommodation buildings. This essay will discuss some key reasons behind this tendency and suggest a multitude of ways to uncover a property’s past.\r\n\r\nThere are two possible factors contributing to people’s inclination towards such investigation. From a spiritual perspective, people in some countries heavily practice feng shui, a pseudoscientific traditional practice originating from ancient China and this is the first reason for their curiosity about their housing history. They are concerned about which directions their accommodations are facing and the owners’ happiness even rests on the arrangement of everything in their living space, including trees. They believe anything that is misplaced is to blame for people’s mishaps. To illustrate, Vietnamese people frequently visit a feng shui master before deciding how to construct their homes. If any family refuses to follow this custom, their neighbours may all have a sense of schadenfreude if there is any misfortune that happens to so-called stubborn householders. From a practical perspective, the reason why homeowners want to discover the architectural history of these accommodations is rooted in the fact that they want to evaluate its condition for better preservation. Any long-lasting building may need a lot of refurbishments such as repairing a rundown roof or cracked walls, a dangerous electrical system or an ineffective sewage system. \r\n\r\nThere are probably three main ways that real estate owners use to find out the history of their house. The most directed method to adopt is asking former landowners who can supply a source of abundant and reliable information about the building. No one can know as well about the architecture as the people who used to settle in it. However, in case one is not able to contact previous settlers, it is possible to query dwellers living around the house. Information namely when the house was constructed, what happened to people living in the place before can be obtained in this way. The last but not least, it is the library that can possibly offer an assortment of estate records in the region. Those are land ownerships, rehabilitation records and untold stories that may be found in these materials. All one needs to do is to spend a couple of days in the regional library to seek relevant documents when precise information cannot be retrieved by the former two methods.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, one can see those spiritual elements and cultural values are the two main reasons that draw people’s interest in investigating the history of the house or building they live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly believed that a school is a place where people can obtain an education to make a better life. Some people think the main goal of the school is making the children good citizens and workers. whereas, others reckon that improve them as individuals. I personally agree with this opinion and this essay will discuss the reasons and relevant examples to support my viewpoint.\r\n\r\n Advocates of this proposition believe that education gives community knowledge and skills. Furthermore, people with qualifications are more likely to find work as this way children earn a higher salary and can contribute positively to society. In addition, Schools aim to teach young people moral values such as tolerance and sharing. For example, school curriculums include respecting teachers as well as junior and seniors through keeping the environment and loving in their life.\r\n\r\n Another factor to consider is the rules of civil behaviour. As a result, it will help to reduce the number of crimes and accidents the case in the country. This still has to teach them to follow not only the law of the country but also the religion. For instance, it can be seen in the situations such as littering in public and in many violations of traffic rules and environmental pollution. my opinion is that only an institution can effectively educate these positive qualities for a nation.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, I strongly believe that an institution is fully responsible for preparing the children to be good members of a society and make an organized people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here is my position on driver-less cars. I feel driver-less cars only work if you do. They should rename driver-less cars, to 2-driver cars because there's never going too be a moment in time when the car is driving by itself. You will always have too do your normal job, you'll just have extra help this time. You should never feel like you dont have too pay attention to the road because the car is not driving for you, it's driving with you. You should also never feel like you can focus on something else while in the car driving, you should always be alert but you should also always know the car has your back for anything else you cant see. For example, the car will warn you for traffic ahead, crashes, road blocks, ect.\n\nIn alot of states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. For example, California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars; manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe. Wich makes sense because all people want is too be safe. So if there is a car out there that keeps familys life out of danger lots of people will want it.\n\nIn conclusion, i feel like once the manufactorers of driverless-cars proves too the people it is safe, it will become very big in alot of country's fast.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line chart depicts the condition of jobless people in australia in the duration of 2012 in four different quarters .\nAccording to what is shown the proportion of workless individuals in the rural areas during the first quarter of the given year has drastically increased .\nOverall, the proportion of the jobless people in the rural areas has increased to 6.5 percent in the first quarter on 2012 although,in the second quarter of the year 2012 the percentage decresed to 4.5 percent. however, in the urban areas the first quarter of the year reached the lowest at 2 percent only,however, the figures rised to 4 percent during the second quarter of 2012,although, the in the fourth quarter on the year the proportion grow to 4.9 percent .\nTo sum up we could say that in the rural areas the figures remained stable in the last three quarters ,meanwhile, the numbers fluctuated many times in the urban areas .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood could lot things The mood created author memoir mood first I know paragraph said wich I eternally grateful also said wich I adore Day How I know moode I say also nothing saying disliked Second would ways tell Parents I always grateful Parents fo thier love sacrifice also told I ve often told admiration strenth Perseverance There wood memoir two reasons mood author created", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It night eve I couldnt hardly wait In family eve go grandparents house When talk eat favorite open presents As mom dad I drove grandparents house I couldnt open car door fast enough I sprinted front door rang door bell hundred times CAPS hello grandpa said CAPS eat fast I open presents yah sure done eating I sprinted stairs fast I could I couldnt wait As I waited patiently old relatives opened presents finally turn I ripped wrapping paper saw game Since first present I open fast I waited paitently turn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I would like speak upon topic effects computers people My opion topic computers effect people Most people surfing internet nt keep track time What I mean I say people lose track time try keep track time web something pop catches intrest time focus something else Some effects computers people keeping house When many people web tend excersise much When house web people excersise stop excersising The reason occurs people computer chair feel relaxed calm nt want get This leads eating unhealthy foods Some chips donuts twinkies etc Some believe opinion The reason I say watching television day I saw commercial said quote CAPS active healthier stay computer day Most gain weight computer physically active Not physically active lead A obesity cloged arteries lazyness It lead three effects computer every day Most enjoying nature instead staying computer There lot life web Some playing sports Not playing sports fun tim also healthy Would rather live live And local newspaper I writing letter today I mean would rather friends lonely There weight surgerys rack thousands dollars And yes weight loss surgery effects death So come decison remember important part letter liveing healthy young dieing unhealthy suffer Its choice decide", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position is that driverless cars are a ggod idea if the human can take control at anytime. The cars seem like a good idea bacuse for one they can't get intoxicated and kil other people. The cars are also a good idea becuase technolgy is more efficient than any human is,but a human can take control at anytime which is important. In conclusion the technology will be more efficient and safe in the long term.\n\nThere are issues with technology that can imopact society in such a drastic way. Some issues include malfunctions in the car and it's sensors. For example in 2013 BMW came out with a self propelled car that coud handle driving functions up to 25 mph. It is very important that upkeep and testing are done with these cars. Testing will ensure driver's safety which is the biggest concern. The upkeep on a car should rely on the driver. For example,if someone gets in an accident because their tail light was out,the fault is placed on the driver. The same concept should be applied in the maintence of this technology.\n\nDriverless cars arent actually diver free .These new cars should be equipped with a human to take over when necesary. If there is not an alert person watching the streets the passengers take a risk of accidents .These cars are a good idea based on the idea that a person can blink their eyes and in the wrong scenerio get in a car accident. The effenciency of the technogy plays a big role in the safety and so does an aware driver. In conclusion,I beleive that driverless cars are a good idea if aware people,upkeep on vehicles ,and reliable technology are all in place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock excerpt The Mooring Mask The architects engineers Empire State Building competitive Building tall great plan used They wanted building great top wanted also useful wanted dirigibles dock They figured nt good idea looked history many accidents happened If accident happened New York like would big deal many people live The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around around mooring mask They felt would unsafe many reasons This reason builders went many obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The first initial issue faced stress blimp would put building As article states stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation building would modified strengthened accomodate situation stress prompted need improvements building obviously costs time money Another problem faced impracticality dirigibles The dirigibles require hydrogen highly flammable As result Hindenburg disaster owners empire state building realized much worse accident would densely populated area downtown Another great issue presented inconsistent violent air currents made safe docking blimps difficult This problem could combated lead weights neither practical safe And lastly already existing law airships flying low urban areas This law prevented blimps able fly low building let alone land In conclusion builders mooring mast faced many obstacles construction questioned safety prevented practical", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because he states in paragraph 1 that \"it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely this proves that even tho this planet is challenging it is still worthy to be examined more closely.\n\nThe author thinks that this planet is worthy to futher examine because it is known as \"Earth's twin,\" they refer to the planet as Earths twin because it is the closest thing to earth despite the \"temperatures averaging over 800 degrees fahrenheit.This planet is more like earth due to is geography like features because it was \"covered with largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life. The reason the text stats \"was covered\" is because we havnt been to Venus in over three decades and refering to the past. witch means that there still could be life living up there still today.this ties back in to the author thinking Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nTo continue, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, moutains, and craters.\" these are also the same forms that we have here on earth.Even tho Venus is very dangerous with extremly high tempatures and \"atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet and the toxic 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets\" venus can somtimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. this also support why the author thinks Venus is a worth pursuit.\n\nTo conclude, Venus is very dangerous in many diffrent way but is also very alike to our planet \"Earth\"\n\nand is the closet thing that we have for a planetary vist and taking the chances may be scary but studying any planet is going to be so since its the closest thing to us Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and that why the author thinks so as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the author article can be supported with his/her study and details. In my option I think that trying to explore further into the idea of entering Venus's atmosphere might be dangerous; however, it could lead to a whole new story and new exploration. Taking the time to figure a way to land on Venus safely will take time, the technology and spaceship that would be used to enter Venus atmosphere will need to be excellant, and it might take risk on peoples lives trying to enter and explore a whole new planet.\n\nScientist often referr Earth's \"Twin\" as Venus because it is the closest plalnet to Earth in terms of density and size, quoted in paragraph 2. If Venus is very similar to Earth, it could mean that life could live on Venus such as how life lives on Earth to this day. \"Long ago, Venus was probably cover largely wit oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\" (Paragraph 4). This shows that scientist have perdicted theories over Venus and are still currently trying to solve and prove their theory. Finding a way to get to Venus is the problem we have here on Earth. In the text it states \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\" (paragraph 2). This shows that Venus is very different than the Planet we live on and it will take time to create a space shuttle that is well fit to enter Venus's atmospere.\n\nThe technology and spaceshuttles have not been made or designed to enter an atmosphere so powerful yet. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\" (paragraph 3). The information that scientists are finding on Venus is amazing and will help other scientist find ways to design a spaceshuttle to get through the blanket of Venus. Venus has a very hot surface level of 90 times greater than the surface level than the Earth. We need to discover a way to allow our spaceships to under go the high pressure that it would have to go through to enter Venus.\n\nNASA has one issue that they struggle on besides buildling the spaceships that they would want to send to Venus. That struggle is sending a human to Venus, and not knowing what will happen on the trip there. Is it worth risking a life to explore or not sending anyone and forget about this whole experiment? If I had to pick, my answer would be Yes. I believe that finding a new Planet that life could live on just like Earth could continue the species of mankind. No man has under gone more pressure than the Earth's atmosphere, and Venus atmosphere could destroy anything that we create that enters its atmosphere including a human if we sent them.\n\nIn conclusin, I believe it is worth continuing to study and figure a way to have a spaceshuttle land in the planet of Venus. Eventually when it is safe and we have solved how to create a safe space shuttle that a human can survive and enter Venus. Being able to explore Venus and find ways to live on the planet could start a new way of life for mankind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to join the Seagoing cowboys and dnt know what they do or how many months they'll be gone? i think that everyone should join the seagoing cowboys because in 1945 world war ll was over in eroupe. The seagoing cowboys flew thwir si they could get their food stores back in order because everything waas tore down from the war. You should join because it helps other people and if you're a person who likes to help other people in their time of need then seagoing cowboys is good for you.\n\nIts shows you that not everyone has what you have. That people struggle sometimes for food. The seagoing helps them get their aniamls back their animals back or their houses either because they got tooken away or because somebody burned their houses down. Its a very good program to be in because it helps you learn things about other contries. You get to travel the world and hep people in their time of need. You get to explore the world and explore what sycitey is now. How the world is falling apart, Wars that shoot up houses and food so everyone can starve besides the people who started the war.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the text had said seagoing cowboys program allowed him to exprience adventurs and visit may many unique places. Luke had no idiea his life would change soon after his high school graduation. He would work two part jobs like the grocery store and the bank. His friend don will invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He knew the oppertunity of a lifetime. It was 1945 world war 2 was over in Eruope. To help these countrys recover their food suppleys,animles,and more. UNRRA hired \"seagoing cowboys\"to take care of the horses,younge cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and don signed up.\n\nLuke turnd 18 before ariving to Greece,which meant he could be draft in the military service. Luke had made nine trips. Luck traved the high seas. It took two weeks to cross the alantic ocean. The eastern coast of the united states to china. caring for the animals. They had to feed and wated two or three times a day. Stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out anut Katie's farm as a oy had to prepared. Luke had hard work. His was to cheek on all the animalsevery hour. After makeing an hourly report to the caption. He slied down the sleery ladder on his back.\n\nLuke also found time to have fun an the bored;The cowboys played baceball and vollyeball games in the emtpty holds where the animles had been housed. Talbe tennies tournaments,fencing,and more. Bing a seagoing cowboys was much than an adventure for Luke. Luke is grateful for the opportunity. that is my writeing is about Luke becoming a seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming in the future. They are cars that run semi-on their own and use senors to tell them what to do. They are being tested to this day by manufactures such as Google. I am for the driverless cars because they help keep drivers safer, have some negative outcomes, and are a good idea.\n\nDriverless cars will keep drivers safe. There are lots of car crashes now-a-days with cars controlled by humans. With the driverless cars, drivers still have the ability to drive on their own, but the driverless cars will alert them when they need to drive on their own. It alerts them when their are accidents and work zones that need to be navigated through. It is stated in the artice that, \" While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The car will turn off alerts instanly only if the driver is paying attention to the road. This will help keep drivers safer.\n\nAlthough, there are some negative sides to the driverless cars I still am for them. One negative is that it doesn't fully drive on it's own. It states in the article that \"They still alert the driver to take over pulling in and out of driveways and or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" So, they are not fully driverless. Second, there could be a malfuncation to the driverless cars. If, a driverless car\n\ndoes malfunction there is no law that states whether its the manufactures will be at fault or the drivers. So, there are some negative sides to the driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are a good idea. They are safer for drivers and give drivers alerts. The alerts come from sensors that are installed all over the car. The combination of sensors used in the cars are necessary for the driverless cars to mimic the skill of humans at the wheel. They also use up less fuel then today's cars. Which is helping the evironment. Cars that have multiple good reasons like stated before are a good idea and should be developed.\n\nOverall, I am for the driverless cars. I am for them because they are safer then today's cars by sending alerts to driver's. They may have some negative sides but the negative sides help with knowing about the cars. They are also a good idea overall. They should be developed and used in the furture.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being Shipped!?! A fun instersting way to take care for animals? A program that will let you take care for an animal while being shipped over the seas!? Signing up sounds fun! Now what is it really...?\n\nFirst of all, what is Seagoing Cowboys? Well Seagoing Cowboys is a program to help countries with food supplies, animals, and many more. When it all comes together it is called UNRRA or, United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation. This program will have the Seagoing Cowboys' take care of horses, young cows, and mules that will be shipped over a cross the seas.\n\nSecond, why should you join and what do you\n\ndo? Well being a seagoing cowboy might be fun for you if you like to help out and also if you like animals. You could go a cross\n\nthe sea and see new things. You will have jobs to do like: Cleaning, Feeding, watering,and some other things to do to take care of the animals. When you return the animals you get to play fun games with the other Seagoing Cowboys to pass the time.\n\nLastly, How long does it take and what is important to do? Two weeks to cross over the Atlantic Ocean and about a month to get to China. When you are sailing a cross the ocean, you will have stalls to clean. You would have to feed two or three times a day. When you have complete more than one trip, you would have more jobs.\n\nIn conclusion, Seagoing Cowboys could be hard and also a fun experence. Traveling a cross the seas could be an amazing time. Being on a ship for days with noisy animals will be a daily thing to hear. In the end it would be worth the travels. Hopefully you sign up one this journey!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some claim that a picture of a natural landmark and a shadow is really a sign of alien lifeform or a civilization. Nasa a billion dollar company dissagrees and has proof that this is indeed a landmark with a shadow and not any sort of alien life. That has not stopped some conspiracy theorists from saying that this is a cover up.\n\nNasa as we all know is a company that is paid to fly unmanned and sometimes manned aircraft into the sky and most excitingly space. That is a positive thing for us humans who have no idea why we are here and how are we here. People don't like to know or believe the truth and sometimes make up lies or takes something the wrong way and make everyone from the news to the everyday household hear about something that didn't even turn out to be true. That is the same case here, Nasa released a photo of a mountain during a time of day that would have shadows, and Nasa being a public and government company is forced by law to release photos to the people. Which leads to more proof if Nasa took more photos that showed aliens or other inteligent lifeforms they would have to release it they can't just magicly hit erase.\n\nConspiracy theorist still do not believe Nasa so they demand more photos and still Nasa has even more proof that this \"face'' is indeed a montain with shadows stratigicly placed to look like a human face. Theorist say that everything Nasa does is either faked or fixed to look like something it is not. In this case it went viral and many people still believe it was aliens that went there and did that but Nasa declines and this time Nasa has a little more proof.\n\nNasa would've got money to send a human or a robot to Cydonia if it were a human lifeform or an alien, and we all know the team that worked on it would've got some pretty heavy paychecks just by working on the case, just imagine that checks the team would make if it were a civilivation. But Nasa will not be sending over humans or a robot for a couple reasons, the best reason is that the already know that this is just a mountain, not a civiliation.\n\nIn conclusion Nasa knows this is a mountain and not a lifeform of any kind.\n\nNasa also knows that lifeforms like ours can not survive on the surface of any planet without an atmousphere like mars. So even if a lifeform can survive without oxygen unlike us that the proof of that area says otherwise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been observed that the majority of offenders obtain dropped levels of education,there are views about this crime is educating humans in jail they have the ability to get occupation after existing jail,l personally l agree with this assessment because this position helps individuals on have opportunities for change his future and make perfect mankind in society.\r\n\r\nFirst of all,choose study would assist in a lot of ways making times them busy as a result getting way about problems with each other,in ,addition to getting rid of nerves and becoming quiet and wise by asking them about their talent in technology or build or fixable cars ,if they love it,they will creative it ,should it be there step for stop crime with increasing protection,For example, the study illustrates US about criminals and as result is 90% charge way thought them also to become an influencer in the world.\r\n\r\nThe second, suffering a huge number of people when leaving prison reputation through to they have a degree in education because society does not trust them to reason their past here came the role of government in providing jobs for them in order to show them a new image of the world how they fell to might change without work?while mental health is essential for control of their actions.\r\n\r\nFor example ,in Snowden do government reintroduce develop the criminals and changed them with an understanding of the reason for jail.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,there are opinions about criminals having low education and if they study it will reduce reta crime, my ,opinion l agree because Avery one needs to learn culture and knowledge to get jobs with the help of the government for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida Senator,\n\nThe ongoing debate of whether or not the Electoral College process is fair or unjust is always around you, I presume. I would like to give some personal feedback in the matters of this situation.\n\nI understand that the Electoral College was created in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. (Source 1) However it is not a fair or even equal compromise. The people hardly have any political voice in this aspect. The electors that in return vote for the people generally aren't chosen by the people, the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party. (Some state laws vary) (Source 1) If you faithfully are going to vote for the Presidential candidate of your choice, you should be able to have faith in your vote. Those in favor of the Electoral College could make the remark that \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election...\"(Source 3) In the world of reality people don't just want make a comment and expect no reaction, people want to be heard. This is similar to voting, people want their vote to count toward the candidate of their choice not the electors for the candidate.\n\nThis then runs into the problem of unfaithful electors. Their votes are never for sure. Although they claim to have \"trust that is rarely betrayed\" (Source 3) you can never be a hundred percent sure in the electors. \"Faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please...\" (Source 2) If this happens the popular vote actually wouldn't go to the thought candidate.\n\n\"Perhaps the most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote.\" (Source 2) In a case of a tie the vote would go to the House of Representatives. This means that each state would only be able to cast one vote. This is not a smart backup plan. It is not fair for states of different population sizes to have one vote- basically being categorized as one. Proportionally it is not right for a state who represents 500,000 such as Wyoming to recieve the same number of equally weighted votes as a state who represents 35 million such as California. (Source 2)\n\nThe Electoral College also follows the \"Winner-take-all\" method. This means that most in most elections the focus is on the swing states or toss up states, all the efforts go to these states. Even though \"the voters are most likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election\", as said by those who believe in the Electoral College (Source 3) what about the voters who have been faithful all along? How can you expect them to feel when they barely get noticed? Those are the ones the candidates should be thanking and having gratitute toward because they are the ones who will be supporting them and their campaign.\n\nI know that politics are filled with misconceptions and many confusing roles and aspects but please consider my thoughts and words. I speak for the voiceless and my fellow neighbors, but most importantly I speak for what our government was founded upon, WE THE PEOPLE.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\nSCHOOL_NAME Student", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempt allow dirigibles dock The first problem according excerpt A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress frame They would need spend order modify building s framework Another issue ofcourse safety mast Most zeppelins places besides US use helium Instead limbs used hydrogen highly flamable would caused disaster ignited densely populated area downtown New York The excerpt also states The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast already law place preventing airships flying low urban areas There fore would illegal blimp attach even go near Empire State Building For reasons stated builders able build mooring mast top Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that having driverless cars would be fun yeah, but i dont know if i would trust them at all times. Like what if you wanted to go to sleep? Would you trust a car with your family, or friends in it? I dont know if i would completly trust a car to get me where i want to be without it wrecking. I mean yeah i guess you can trust the smart people who made it, but i don't know if you could fully trust the car itself. Anything could go wrong.\n\nMy opinon is my opinon, other people may think differntly. But oh well. Most people would probaly buy this exspensive car just to look cool, but i mean would you rahter risk your safety? I dont know if i would. I mean look at all the people who do drugs, and other things just to look cool. They risk their lives, waist their money, and time just to impress somebody else. That's stupid! People can take over when they want to, so i think that that's kind of good to be able to have that protection. If somethings going wrong, then the car would make noises basically saying \" hey something wrong here\".\n\nI think its honestly up to the people, and how they feel about getting in a car that drives on its own. Yes, i kind of do think it would be fun to be able to have a car drive me, but on the other hand, it would be kind of scary too. There are some reasons why i'd pick to own one. I would own one, because they would be nice to own. It'd be interesting too! I think i could get use to having a car driving me around. Another reason why i think people would perchase this car, is to have it drive them home, or around place to place when they can't drive because they are drunk. I think that's smart really, because their not risking other people lives, when their out getting drunk, and try to drive themselves home. So yeah im 50/50 about driverless cars. I kind of have my opinon on owning one, and not owning them. So im not really against it, and im not fully sure about ever owning one. If the world decides to drive driveless cars, then i'd probally be more willing to own one myslef. I think i'd rather see how driverless cars go with other people before i purchase one. That would be smart to watch before you waist your money on smomething that might break, or you could possibly get hurt by or die in. I'd rahher be able to trust the car a little more, and see how things go, before i accually buy one for myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I did not know that there are driverless cars where being made. I think the cars will help us drive better. If i was driveing i would use one of this cars.\n\nI think that this cars will help us because some people drive to fast with the car it can speed up by its self with no problem. It can tell you when there is danger in front or behide you so you know when to take control of the car. They can help you streer so you dont take to wide of a turn and hit something. They can stop by themselfs so if you cant push on the break fast the car will stop for you.\n\nThey said they can make the car safer by adding a in-car enertainment and information system. This allows the drive to see headsup displyas that can be turned of instanly when the driver needs to take over. If you are doing something the car can get your attion abd you will be able to take control and safely drive. The diver wont be bored because the car has its own entertainment system so you dont fall asleep.\n\nI am not all the way with the cars becuase what happens if the car fails to warn the driver about something that can cost the diver their life. The cars may be to much money for anyone to get ot just to much money to make. They said if their was a crash who is to blame the peopel who made the car or the driver witch can cause many problems like law suet. What happens if the car stops working when you are driveing and you caome to a turn and you dont turn.\n\nAll in all i think it is a good idea and can help a lot of people,but I just dont think many people will bye the car because it cost to much. I hope they find a way to make the driverless car come true and less expenive so many people would like to get the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea for driverless cars is a good idea. The driverless car is still in the making. Todays driveless cars still need human interaction from the drive when certain situations arrive, such as a construction on the road or parking. People have always loved the ideo of driverless cars, because it has been shown in many movies thourghout the years.\n\nOne example of how the driverless car is good is how it can save money. The text states,\" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus.\" The driveless car will be able to let people gain money instead of wasting it all on gas.\n\nSecond example of how good the driverless car is that it is not completely driveless yet. This keeps the driver alert and responsible if anything happens. The text states,\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themsselves, but all are designed\n\nto notify the driver when the driver when the road ahead requires humen skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" As said before it will keep the driver alert and responsible while in one the cars.\n\nThird example is that entertainment will be provided while in a driveless car. This will make sure the driver does not become bored or sleepy so that they do not cause an accident when the driver needs to take over. The text states,\"Some manufactureres hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over...\" People need to be reminded that the car is not all driverless, it still needs human interaction.\n\nPeople may disagree for the idea of a driverless car. The people who disagree say it will be hard to change the whole law system of operating a driverless vehicle. The text states,\"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" This goes to show there are still some things to workout with the driverless car.\n\nThe idea for the driverless car is still a good idea. It will take some time and money, but it will revolutionalize how people are transported. The driverless car will mostlikley be availiable to all people at a fair price. Who knows maybe there might comeout with a resteraunt that does not have to use waiters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do like the idea that computers can read our emotions. because it can tell if we are getting bored in a lesson then it could change the lesson like it says in paragraph 6 . I think that would help alots of kids stay focoused and on tastc.\n\nAlso i feel like it would make alot of desions much easyer to make because it would know if u like something or not then gve you more options like that one. For examiple when your online shoping or looking for a video game to play.\n\nSomehting eles i think this emotion reading computer can help is when your upset and your on youtube or even socal media it knows your upset so it put stuff on your time line that won't make you even more sad or puts stuff on your timeline that will make you feel better. And that is why i think a computer that can read emotions would be very helpful in veryus ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast obsticles builders Empire State Building faced attempt allow dirigibles dock would able thousand foot dirigible moored top building without adding stress building framework They could nt add mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven thousand feet find solution modify strengthen steel frame Empire State Building Costing sixty thousand dollars worth modifications building s framework Also rather building utilitarian mast ornamentation built shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside make st floor glassedin observation area floor open observation platform", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today,I will be writing an essay that the author suggested Venus is \"worthy pursuit despite the dangers it epresents\"\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun and otfen reffered to as earth \"twin\",and the closest planet to earth.The only difference is speed that sometimes earth is closer to venus other times to venus. Venus has 97 pecent carbondioxide and over 800 degree farhaniet that\n\nexplain main reason that each mission was unnamed and not a single spaceship has touched down Venus for more than 3 decades even for humans the solar power would be plentiful and radiation of the sun it is not easy condition,but its survivable for humans.\n\nMany\n\nAstronomers and Scientists are interested in\n\nVenus\n\nbecause Venus has some features that are similar to those on earth it may have been\n\nthat Venus was once have been the most earh like planet in our solar system,Researchers think that venus was once covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of\n\nof lifes like earth,so why not try harder that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge and seeking\n\nto\n\nIn conclusion, to meet the challenge presented by Venus has worth, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet,but also for knowledge,curositiy for human being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that the rise in consumer production has detrimental impacts on the natural environment. This essay will discuss the causes behind the environmental damage and propose potential solutions to mitigate these consequences.\n\nThere are two primary reasons why the increase in consumer goods manufacturing poses a threat to the natural environment. Firstly, the extraction of natural resources leads to devastating ecosystem disruption. Consumer goods production heavily relies on the extraction of minerals, fossil fuels, and timber, resulting in habitat destruction, deforestation, and the depletion of non-renewable resources. For example, the widespread demand for electronic devices has led to increased mining activities, contributing to ecological disruption and soil erosion. Additionally, the logging industry for furniture production has resulted in intensive deforestation, causing a loss of biodiversity. Secondly, the energy-intensive manufacturing processes and transportation used for goods delivery account for a significant portion of greenhouse gas emissions, pushing the Earth towards a climate crisis.\n\nTo tackle these consequences, several measures can be implemented. The first solution is to encourage companies to adopt sustainable sourcing practices to ensure responsible extraction of resources and minimize habitat destruction. For instance, enterprises can prioritize the use of recycled materials and promote sustainable forestry practices, such as tree replanting initiatives. Furthermore, investing in research and development of alternative materials with lower environmental impacts, such as biodegradable plastics, and renewable energy technologies can help reduce the reliance on scarce resources. The second solution involves governments offering incentives, such as providing tax deductions and implementing regulations, to encourage industries to transition to renewable energy sources, improve energy efficiency in manufacturing processes, and adopt greener approaches.\n\nIn conclusion, various measures can be taken to address the environmental issues caused by the growth of consumer goods manufacturing. To achieve better results in environmental protection in the future, companies need to be fully aware of the negative impacts and adopt appropriate sustainable practices, with oversight and support from governments. By implementing these measures, we can work towards a more sustainable future and mitigate the detrimental effects of consumer production on the natural environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper People spending way much time computer right They excercising interacting friends family Having computer also distracts schoolwork Computers normally effects like people use Instead sitting computer people getting exercise The one coubtries overweight people Many teenagers inside computer waiting friends screename pop talk They nt need completely gone re waiting friend could exercising All need put fun music start dancing around get excercise need They also could ten pushups twenty curlups even wanted Instead sitting computer exercise Having computer effects owner nt lot facetoface converstions friends family You call friend come house instead If home computer hours probably hang real life Instead videochatting cousins another state lan come visit guys one That way actually talk see re You could also play board games hide seek etc It much fun someone real life talk online The last deffidently least effect computers peoples lives distracts school Once start talking one friends s pretty hard stop Many people nt know stop nt homework supposed nt study big test therefore end failing Some kids homework computer time homework probably wrong nt concentrating hard enough Having computer effects life many different ways positive negative Some ways stops exercising nt let facetoface interaction friends family distracts many kids school", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, in my opinion, I think driverless cars would be a great idea once google and the car manufactuers can get the right programming, and correct computers for the cars and have them correctly drive in any weather condition or situation every single time without any problems. Now I see people who drive wrecklessly and careless, and I really think that computer driven cars would be for the best, rather than people driving and causing problems and getting into accidents. Even if you have to be in the driverless cars without driving sometimes, it would still be a pretty good idea. I have seen some of the worst drivers ever. For example, google has cars for the future that can drive by themselves, but they are going to have an alert system for when theres road construction, or anything that the car needs to have and actual person to guide the car through whatever the problem is. In conclusion, I think for the future, driverless cars will be a big improvement in safety, and all around better for pedestrians, and other people in cars. Maybe google and the car manufactuers will come up with even better and more ideas past the year 2020. Less gas and more safety is the way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today there is a big problem in the world and that problem is car emissions. This has been becoming a growing problem around the world. In Paris a thick layer of smog had covered the city and its government had to take action. the government practically shutdown road traffic by telling the people with even plate numbers to not drive and the next day telling the people with odd plate numbers to not drive.\n\nMany of the problems that create this are the densely populated areas with high car usage. In Europe in 2006 there government finished construction on a town that had no garages or drive ways, the only place to park was a garage that you had to buy a spot in for $40,000 witch you payed for along with your house. This trend has been growing around the world, and with this trend spreading so is lower pollution in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author of the passage talks about both postive and negative aspects of drivless cars. Many people around the world may like the idea of driveless cars becuase, some people just might like the old fashion way. Being able to try something new can be exciting, and entertaining drivless cars could possibly change thw world some day. What some poeple dont know is drivless cars have positive and negative points about them, the car can function up to speeds of 25 mph, but sensors makes sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. A negative thing is that the driver must be alert and be ready to take overa situation at any time.\n\nDriverless cars do have postive things about them, that would make a person want to go and perchase one. The cars have been drivne more than half a million miles without a car crash, but the drivless cars can still alert you when thier is bad road conditions, traffic problems,\n\nnavigate you through accidents , and construction areas. The cars themselves are made to steer, accelerate, and brake themselvs, but the cars do have you use human like skills like navigating through work zones, and around accidents. GM has developed drivers seats, inside the car that vibrate when the vehical is in danger of backing up into anoher object. The car also has flashing lights on the windshield ,using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.The car is set up to watch the drivers, because tey dont want anyhting bad to happen to the driver.\n\nDrivless cars also have major probles or negative things about them. The cars work simply well, but they all required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was would be to expensive to be practical. Without smarters roads, manufacturers turned to smarter cars, but they wouldnt know how smart the car would have to be in order for that to happen. The sad thing is the driveless car still needs a driver, it would probably have the other driver upset and bored. The driver must stay alert and be ready to take over when the situation\n\nrequires. In some states like California, Nevada, and Flordia you aren to allowed to drive a test computer driven car.\n\nI wouldnt really want a drivless car due to the negative things i read about it in the passage. Anything could go wrong with the car, and who knows i might have to take up the blame for it because it is my car. I really wouldnt want to sit and watch someone else drive the car, it would get annoying and I would probably get mad.\n\nIn conclusion driveless cars have positve and negative things about them. They can drive up to 25 mph, and they know when their is a bad road condition coming up.The cars alert the driver when to pull over, or when it it is bad traffic. The bad thing is someone has to be in the car with you, and you would just sit there and watch them drive. The road would require more road updates to drive the car, that would take millions of dollers and its expensive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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