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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage in America, and all around the world. As the future grows near, gas prices are skyrocketing and frankley, gas is being all used up. Cities and communities are building subburbs that dont allow cars and passing laws that ban driving. Many people may read this and view it as unfair or irrelevant, but we should be applauding it and considering these ideas in our own communities.\n\nVuban, Gerrmany is one of the pioneer subburbs to try the following idea. In this Subburb: Street parking, driveways, and home garages are all not allowed. Instead, when you buy a house, you buy a parking space at a large garage for 40,000$. You keep your car there while you live in the homes. Some statistics back up this movement as well. In Europe, cars are responsible for 12% of gas emissions, and in the some parts of the US, cars are responsible for up to 50%. Cutting down on driving helps the enviroment and lowers accidents and fatal driving deaths each year.\n\nParis, France is having some conflict with automobiles as well. The smog caused by the surplus of cars was filling the city and harming residents. As a result, Paris had to ban driving that day and fine those who drove anyway. This was all in effort to reduce smog and pollution from the city. Once the smog cleared they lifted the ban. Many counties along with Bogota, Columbia have participated in banning cars for a day or week to reduce it bad effects on nature.\n\nEven the United States is getting in on the action. Over the last few years, citizens are buying fewer and fewer cars each year, suggesting Americans best car days are behind us. If this pattern persists it will have major implications on carbon emmision and the enviroment. People taking the bus or biking to work have played a huge role in car sales dropping. There has also been a drop in 16 - 39 year olds obtaining drivers licences. Instead, they prefer getting rides and car-pooling with friends.\n\nAs you can see limiting car usage has global effects on safety and the enviroment. America and many other cities and communities around the world realize car's effects and are moving on from them, and from what I see, im very excited.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is obvious that driverless cars are the future of transportation. Self driving cars not only provide you with a more comfortable and convinient way of getting place to place, but also a safer and more eco-friendly way of transportation. The development of driverless cars are a neccesity in moving into a safer and overall better future.\n\nDriverless cars are equipt with the latest in sensor technologies. Used collectivley, the sensors provide a model of the world around the car and not only enable it to mimic the driving of a human, but more effectivley and precisely navigate roads. This makes the car safer than if it were operated by a human driver. Current driverless cars aren't even properley driverless. BMW developed a car that can handle basic driving functions at slow speeds, but sensors in the car's driving wheel make sure that an alert human is able to operate the car in dangerous situations (i. e. car accidents or work zones). Even if cars are not fully autonomous, the technology being developed for driverless cars can assist a driver and help to avoid crashes. Google's test cars alone have independently driven over a half a million miles without any crashes.\n\nFuture driverless cars can make traveling a more enjoyable experience. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin imagines a day where public-transport is not gas guzziling buses, but a fleet of driverless cars that only consume half of what modern car's do. Not only will these cars allow you to travel somewhere without having to worry about the road and even allow you to work or interact with family member, but will take you to a specific destination unlike current public-transport. Such cars could fundamentally change the world.\n\nDevelopment of driverless cars are the future in automotive transportation. There are little to no cons on the the development of such cars as well as an enormous amount of pros. Technology and research engineered for the production of these cars not only benifit the automotive industry, but can have applications outside of the industry even if driverless cars are not eventually commercially avalible. The future is self driving cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever awkward situation lightened mood laughter I many I find laughter makes people comfortable allows person Laughter even help attract positive friendly crowd enjoy funny happy people Laughter work way everyone ways helped I homeschoolers group years ago nt know anyone After walking around girl talked She funny able laugh made comfortable I fun time I fin right person Another time laughter might ve helped I invited birthday party friend I nt seen two years Several others I nt seen long The whole visit awkward I wanted blend I acted like everyone else I d laughed comfortable I would ve person When I first came public school I nervous meet new people kind people would After week people got see personality funny happy laughable person inside clicked lot people That s I m friends people I m friends alike personalities matched Laughter brought good place life Laughter make lot people happy comfortable awkward situations It encourage people show personality attract people like I think world would happier place everyone could laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last few years vehicle emissions have been heating and even destroying our atmosphere. Cities and even whole countries are taking precautions to lower the amount of fuel emissons recorded in the air. It's not only that people are trying to cut back to help the enviroment they just arent driving as much anymore for some reason, even in areas that driving would be more useful than other forms of transportation. You may want to cut back after seeing why they did too.\n\nIn Germany there is a suburban city that has given up their use of vehicles. One of the local residents stated \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much happier this way.\" You may not notice it but the hustle and bustle of everyday life and commuting may just be putting more stress on you. Cutting out personal commute will not only be making your life less stressful it will also help clear the air in some cities as well. Passenger cars are responsible for nearly 50 percent of greenhouse gasses in car intensive areas in the United States. Something as simple as not driving as often or cutting back totaly can help you and others.\n\nIn Bogota, the capital of Colombia it has been the third straight year of\n\nDay Without Cars. Day Without Cars is one day that all Colombians hike,bike,skate,walk or took public tranportation to get to work. The goal of\n\nDay Without Cars is to promote alternative transportation and reduce fines. A citizen talking part in the action stated \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nNow in America it has been recorded that Americans are buying fewer cars and getting less licences each year. The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and have been slowly and steadily dropping after. Transportation is is the second largest source of emissions but you can help lower that. More and more people have been choosing alternative transportation than ever before. Also more people have left the sub-urban enviroment and moved to urban ones so alternative transportation is even more needed than before. Also whats the point of driving if you live near the place you work cutting down on emissions is one of the most important objectives right now.\n\nMany great things can and have come by cutting down private transportation. It conserves resources, cuts down on emissions, and also improves safety. Multiple people say that commuting less has made thier lives less stressful than ever before. The amount of smog in cities have decreased, helping to get cleaner natural air those compact areas. Anything you can do to help make your lives easier you should and cutting down on emissions can help make that easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and how he was saying different things about how Venus is and was shows that he really does have an interest in studying Venus and he defends his argument well because he goes into detail on what he wants to do and what he wants to know.\n\nAlthough the passage is having to do with exploring Venus theres nothing much said about them doing things because they failed multiple times and by the looks of it I don't think its going to happen because of how the author talks about Venus.\n\nThe author seems to be doing everything he could to actually try to explore Venus despite the difficulties they are having, that even if it is dangerous the author will still try to do something about it.\n\nIn my opinion I think what the author's doing is very dangerous because he doesn't know what the outcome is going to be, it could go both good and bad because there is a possibility that anything can happen, as said in the article though, they are only looking at sending technology to try to explore Venus not humans so it wouldn't be as dangerous and I think thats why the author is still open on exploring it and not giving up so he can try to find some answers to what hes been questioning.\n\nIn the last paragraph (8) the author states that the challenge presented by Venus has value because of human curiosity because it will lead them into many equally intimidating endeavors and just basically saying to think of it as an imagination but at the same time something you can do and want to achieve.\n\nIn conclusion if the author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit then that's what hes going to go for, some people are also curious on that and so the author trying to do that will be helpful to others and himself and if he does succeed others will be satisfied with what the author came up with besides the dangers the study presents I do think that it will all be worth it at the end of the day, because that's a goal they've been trying to accomplish for sometime now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that people should take steps battling against the climate change, however, others argue that it is not their matter of concern and should leave as it is. I advocate that small change in human activities can save the earth from bad energies of global warming. In this essay i will discuss both views by analyzing how collective action of humans can bring big change, even though the climate change is a natural process.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, although the change in environmental weather making life difficult and harming in different ways; Many creatures are in endangered stage, few think that it is out of control and can not make any change. As a result, many creatures are in endanger stage. Furthermore, It is a part of natural change and prefereably not changeble. Such as volcano, tsunami, earthquake these are natural calamities and happens as a part of its process not because of human activities, so it should be left as it is.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, many argue that this an effect of luxurious living style and if the way of living is changed, it can be minimized. Peple can contribute their interest by requesting the government to make certain rules and relurate accordingly, suport scientist and encourage them to research more on how to reduce the consequences of global warming, and techonologist to invent new technology, which can stop the bad effect at the atmosphare. Thus, people should take part in saving earth from climate change. The Tesla car can be taken as illustration, which is run by battery that do not emit carbon gas .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although action of people discharge little or no carbon gas as comparision to what amount natural disasters emit, it can be managed by human power since they are able to think innovatively and invent new technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The president is a serious job. Approve laws, representing our country, and he's very influential. So if it's such a big job, why not let the people of America choose their president? It's the right way to do things.\n\nAmericans fought the Revolutionary War to give us the right to choose our leaders, and if the Electoral College chooses the president, then we do not get much of the right that was fought for in the 1770's. If Americans don't get to choose the president that they want, then what's the point of voting? The answer is: there is no point, if the Electoral College votes the candidates instead.\n\nThe citizens of America chooses the Electors to represent their state. Then the Electors vote for the president. It seems simple, but what happens when the states are not properly represented, i. e. the electors do not vote for the candidate they were suppposed to? Why does the system still exist, but is majorly flawed? For one, it's confusing, two, it's a not practical, and three, it does not properly represent the states they are from.\n\nSome might say that the Electoral College is an easier method to count the votes, maybe so, maybe not. It all depends on how the votes are counted. If they are counted by hand, then yes, it is a whole lot easier. If the polls are electronic, then there would be no difference, because the computer would do all the counting for you. It is also more efficient as to what the people really want rather than the Electoral College.\n\nThe Electoral College should be done away with, finished, no more. The American people need to vote to abolish the Electoral College, with no one voting for them this time. That way, the American people can finally be represented without any barriers interrupting them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Introductin,Venus is actually a planet.In our solar system,Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth,it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Since no spacecraff survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nBody, A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even thought mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, poweful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surfaces.\n\nConclusion, More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas,or anything else, from a distance. Therefore,scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understant Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challrngers. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly believed that the ecological disasters are enormous to tackle by a single person whereas some people think that the Government should support to humans to solve this issue. In my point of view, both play a major role to eradicate the eco problems. However, I shall discuss both notions along with a rational conclusion.\n\nOver the last two or three decades, in this globalized world, due to urbanization and industrialization, man-made activities are the causes of environmental problems such as pollution and deforestation. Nevertheless, some people opine that it is impossible to tackle by individuals but we can achieve it. One clear example is that, nowadays most of the society are using plastic bottles and covers inspite of that we can encourage recycled paper cups and reusable covers and it is very beneficial to the nature. \n\nOn the other hand, other public think that the Government should coordinate to putting end to this. However, the public sector forbade the use of plastic to support ecology but, still public is using them. Hence, it shows that not only government to handle but also everyone should encourage to eradicate the enviranment hazards. For instance, public sector should bring stringent rules such as high penalties against man-made actions and society should co-operate with this.\n\nTo sum up, the public and Government are the major roles to save the earth from natural disasters so everybody must encourage natural actions such as planting the trees, using plastic free, and gifted energy resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it's a bad idea to make driverless cars. It doesn't seem safe, and a little bit dangerous. It says that \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\" It would be both because the driver bought the car when they shouldnt trust a car to always be perfect and drive for itself, and the manufactures could of messed up at some point creating the car.\"\n\nAlso, it is a bad idea because it says that it will only drive automaticly 90 percent of the time. There is a chance that the sensors on the car that tells the driver when it's there turn to drive won't work. Then they won't know that they need to drive, and something bad could happen. \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\"\n\nFinally, I think that it is a bad idea because it won't drive the way you want it to. It could go way to fast, or slow compared to how you like it. You would have to know how long, or how fast you would get to your destination.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that the driverless cars are a really bad idea. They don't seem safe; they only drive 90 percent of the time, so its technically not driverless; and they might go completely different speeds then you want it to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Usuage of cars should be limited for many reasons. Many people in different countries agree that cars should be either baned or not used as constantly. Pollution, Economy, and people's health are all a factor to limiting car usuage.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany, people have given up their cars. There is a fee to park in Vauban which is a coast of $40,000. No one is going to want to drive do to that outrageous price. 70 percent of the people living in Vauban doesnt own a car and, 57 percent sold their car once they moved there. \"'When I had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way' said Heidrun Walter\". This quote shows that cars just bring you done emotionly and you'll feel better with out one. In Vauban, cars are causing 12 percent of greenhouse gases. The percent of greenhouse gases are four times higher in the U.S do to car's gas emissions.\n\nIn Paris, there is a smog problem going on. There is so much pollution in the air that there was a forced ban on driving. If anyone was found driving they were fined $31. 4,000 people were fined and 27 had their cars taken do to not wanting to pay the fine or being difficult. Paris had the most smog out of the European country; in Paris there was 147 micrograms of particulate matter, Brussels had 114 and, London had 79.7.\n\nBogota, Colombia has an annual car-free day. A day full of hiking, biking, skating and bus riding. If found driving on the car-free day you are fined with $25. \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said businessman Carlos Plaza\". President Obama is getting envolved with the limiting car usuage aslo. His goal is to curb the greenhouse gas emissions. There have been less cars bought and licenses given out as the years go by. Lastly, there has been a 23 percent decrease in young peolple driving from the years 2001 to 2009.\n\nThese are some reasons why car usuage should be limited; and as you can see many countries are starting to make a difference.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From what I've read, I believe that the Face is a natural landform. There are three reasons that I think this, and I'll explain them all in this essay.\n\nMy first reason for believing the Face is a natural landform is that if NASA knew anything about aliens or artifacts, then they would probably tell us. In paragraph 5, the author states, \"defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" It's their job, and they would get paid more if they discovered something about aliens.\n\nMy next reason is that even if the first photo taken of the Face looked like an alien artifact, the second photo proved that wrong by having a much higher quality.. According to the author in paragraph 11, \"if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were,\" which proves that the Face isn't an alien structure or artifact.\n\nMy last reason is that the Face is a mesa, just like the kind we have on Earth. In paragraph 12, the text states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West,\" showing how the Face is just a normal landform with strange shadows.\n\nIn conclusion, there are probably many other arguments that prove that the Face is just a natural landform, but the reasons above are the most convincing ones I found in this article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of three planets that orbit the sun at different times and speeds. Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees ferenheit and the atmospheric pressure is about 90 greater than what we get on Earth. These are the reasons why Venus is worthy despite of all the dangers. From the text \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states that \" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth's leves. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" (Paragraph 5). So even with the high radiation levels humans can still survive on Venus. In the text it also states \" Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in the chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and lasted for three weeks in such conditions\" (paragraph 7). To summarize why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of how dangerous it is scientist have found and made devices that could help pick up and look for sediments on Venus due to hot it is when standing on it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author describes \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" and how a new technology called the Facial Action Cording System enables compures to identify human emotions. Because the author is trying to tell us how the technology can make us feel differents emotions. In this article we can find too many differents emotions that the Mona Lise had. And how the techonology can do it too.\n\nFor example my first evidence that i found in this article is when said that \"Mona Lise is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". So, is trying to tell us that to making Mona Lise smile can be a difficult way, because she had too many differents emotions at the same time,but nothing is impossible. But also the people trying to describe a new technology to identify humans emotion. The new technology is called FACS ( Facial Action Coding System). This is the new technolody that the author wanted to used to find the humans emotions, , and see which one of the two option that they had can be more easy or more faster to find the human emotions.\n\nMy other example that also i found in this article is when said that \"according to the new computers softward can recogniza emotion. The softward is the least innovation from Prof. Thomas Haung, of the Backman institute for advanced science at the University Illions.\" The author is trying to tell us to describes the new tecnology was little complicated because with he wanted to describe that technology to see if will be more easy to identify the emotions. Also in this article said that the process begings when the computer construct a 3D computer of the face, all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. That why i think that describes that new techology wasn't eassy because the new technology need to identify all about human.\n\nIn my conclution is about the computers and how Mona Lise demostration was really intended to bring a smiles to your face, while it show you just how the computers can do. If you smile when a Web ad appears to your screen , a similar somputer could regnize too. Like said Dr. Haunght he predicted that the computer could recognize when a students or another person is becoming confused or sad. And acording to the Facia Feeback theory emotion, moving ourfacaisl muscles can make us feel not only expresss motion, but also can even help us to feel like some differents emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying planets is often hard because of the conditions in space, and also on the planet Venus there are also very harsh conditions that humans cannot survive. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Exploring Venus can be a very risky planet for us to expore until we get better technology.\n\nVenus is often reffered to as Earth's twin because it is the closest planet to be like Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Venus would be hard to expore becuase of the planet's suface reaching up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet of solar system and if we tried to land a rover there the metal would just liquify because of the extreme temperature's. NASA however, still wants to try to study the planet but they would have to hover over Venus because of the extreme conditions on the planet's surface. Even at 30 plus miles in the air in Venus the temperatures can reach up to 170 degrees Fahrenheit. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Rendering standard of photography and videography ineffective. The solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth's level.\n\nMore importantly, reasearchers cannot take samples of rock, gas,or anything else, from a distance. Threfore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Many reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow the machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, sometimes called the “Evening Star,” is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually the second planet, in our solar system, from the sun.\n\nHumans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on Venus’s atmosphere which has clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid with a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide that blankets over Venus but each previous mission was unmanned, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why a single spaceship hasn't landed on Venus in over three decades. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans have encountered on Earth, but NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions, another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, and not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because a human's curiosity will most likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond shouldn't be limited by dangers and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children's behaviour is part of kids learning, and parents have a responsibility to pay attention to their kids, be cautious to observant and do the right things. From my point of view that I agree with punishing their heir by their own parents, but it should in conditions. \r\n\r\nThe action of children mostly come from mimetic vision, which watches surrounding people, teaching from home or school and copying from online media. Accordingly, the duties of parents must have to talk in terms and teach in primary, about what to do in daily life, including imposing conditions when there misbehave. Should impose the conditions with reasoning with their child, if they act mistake in sometimes, parents will warning. But they are doing a mistake several times, and must have infliction in each case. All of the above, in ,terms do not harm children, should be talked about the reasons before and after punishment, to explain the reason why have punished. Punishment at the present time has plenty of definitions from teaching discipline to aggressive torture, in terms of teaching discipline can consult with a kids' psychologist to suggest how to punish in the right way. Moreover, aggressive torture is abusing a child, affecting them mentally and physically, from their acting and wording. The acting of parents conducts the behaviour of children in the future.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, I prefer to agree with punishing kids if their break the rules, in terms of no abusing and having a consult before inflicting, that does not affect them mentally and physically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock That architects simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building They would also modifie strengthened steel frame Empire State uilding going worth sixty thousand dollars modifications Theese engineers try dope Practical workable arrangement also government People washington figuring safe way mooring airships mast This idea neither practical safe things would dang ling high Pedestrians street This could never happened either existing law airships flying low urban areas Theese obstacles builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Looking at the world it is clear that we are flooded with countless commercials every day. But it is a dilemma whether they bring more harm than good. My perspective is that television ads are useful in general.\r\n\r\nTV commercials can positively contribute to the economy in many ways. For enterprises, successful advertisements not only boost sales but also develop brand awareness, loyalty, and preference. For instance, many people were amazed by the presentations made by Steve Jobs. And as a result of Steve's success, Apple is one of the most valuable companies nowadays.\r\n\r\nLikewise, for the whole society, appropriate promotions make the local economy more prosperous. The reason behind this is that more consumers are keen on shopping after watching advertisements, which means that more job opportunities must be created by firms to meet the demand. Hence, this is a win-win situation for everybody.\r\n\r\nThose who harbour the view that TV ads may have a negative influence on the public may argue that adverts compel people to compete in a material way. Indeed, it is not uncommon to see that many citizens especially teenagers impulsively purchase goods and services that are beyond their purchasing power after watching misleading TV commercials. Nevertheless, the government could shoulder the responsibility and introduce more restrictive laws to prevent misrepresented marketing information, which seems like a reasonable compromise.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while advertisements could benefit society, they can also make us become superficial shopaholics. As a consequence, companies should promote marketing materials only if they are informative and reliable. Only by doing so can we have a better shopping atmosphere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fake Face\n\nIn 1976, in the mission control room, the scientists founded something eerie on Mars, there was a human face on it! Many scientists said that it was just a Martian mesa, but many people still stuck to their primal thoughts instead of the scientists' well-educated minds. Scientists stated that the face was just founded out that it's just a mesa. Also, Earth have a similar structure as the \"Face\". And finally, if scientists discovered extraterrestrial life on Mars, what will prevent them from talking about the upcoming major event in scientific history. Many conspiracy theorists may state that this \"Face\" is a clear evidence that there are life on Mars. But how could there be life on Mars just judging that there is a landform that looks like a face? Therefore, this states that Mars don't hold life.\n\nIn Mars, there are many landmarks, canyon, mountains, and, of course, mesa. Life on Mars would be impossible due to harsh weather going down below freezing, and absence of liquid form of water. Then how could a creature make a monument that is two miles long without getting burned, frozen, or starve? With these harsh environment we can conclude that nothing can create this except that it got created naturally. With these reasons, we can conclude that this \"Face\" cannot get created by extraterrestrial lives.\n\nFurthermore, Earth also have similar landforms as Mars. In the Western America, there are hundreds of butte or mesa. Mesa is a structrue that consists of elevated area with a flat top. Scientists say that the \"Face\" is just a mesa. In fact, a lava dome mesa that have similar quality with the \"Face\" that is located on Mars. Also, human brain is linked to analyzing faces. When you go to a sightseeing area, you may see some rocks that are shaped interesting, or during your way to work, you may see many non-human objects that looks like a face. So how could a structure that is present on Earth be a proof that life exists on Mars? In conclusion, Mars cannot hold life that many peoples believe.\n\nAnd finally, scientist would not keep a vital discovery as a secret. Many space-related articles state that discovering life outside of Earth would be recorded as a major event in history. And if a scientist discover an alien, then he or she would be rewarded tremendously. Will anybody tries to prevent this \"once in a lifetime opportunity\" probably not. Also, scientists would be delighted for an advance in technology, they would not leave the aliens alone, they would attempt a communication to the aliens and try to learn many things about their life. Consequently, this shows that aliens don't exist in Mars.\n\nSome may say that the \"Face\" is a clear example to show the life on Mars, and that these creatures created this landform as a sign or as an art. However, with art or sign, they would live near the structure, but there are no sign of a life around the area. Also, it is not reasonable to believe what the conspiracy theorists are stating. They do not have clear evidence, they are just following their primal thoughts like a primitive life. Clearly, it is not wise to believe the conspiracy theorists over the scientists in NASA.\n\nAll in all, this proves that life cannot survive on Mars. The \"Face\" is proven to be a mesa that is common on Mars. Also, there are similar landforms in Earth called as the lava dome mesa that have very similar properties with the \"Face. And finally, scientists would not attempt to keep this amazing discovery as a secret on their own but share with the world instead. It is unwise to trust yourself and not the others to make you well informed and educated. Should we spend our time, money, and our thoughts on the devious, sycophantic conspiracy theorists who don't know what they're saying?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many times memoir author created mood One time author created mood described traditional cuban home In kitchen heart home Also cuban music mixes aromas kitchen This gives mood hunger great food Another time author created mood described lived closeknit community This shows author grew helping people While helped return This gives mood wanting help someone need A third time author created mood described parents caring people His family always helped people considered family This creates mood hope family knew people would Clearly many times authour creates mood reader", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A man approaches a sleek new vehicle, he enters and the car starts still with his hands at his sides the vehicle begins to accelerate and turns on to a street as the man sits calmly. Self driving cars... an odd thought, however these vehicles may no longer be a fictional things seen in a cartoon or popular film. Right now developers across the globe are working towards a Self operating vehicle, one that could change the lives of people everywhere for the better. These \"Driverless Cars\" could prevent dangerous accidents, allow the driver to enjoy a safe and easy trip, as well as save precious fuel while cutting down polution.\n\nDriverless cars programmed to obey and follow the rules of the road all while keeping its passengers safe. The average licenesed individual has been in or witnessed an accident, and they know how horrifying and potentially hurtful one can be. That can be stopped the new technology being developed can allow the cars to follow all driving laws, allow the passenger to take over in a state of emergency, and if the streets are filled with these law abiding vehicles there will be virtually no violations that could result in a fatal or harmful accident. Where as drivers today panic, drink and drive, as well as text and drive which leads to several hundreds of innocent lives lost every year.\n\nImagine sitting back relaxing listening to a great song that just came on not having to worry about other cars around you beacuse the one your in can handle itself. If these new revolutionary vehicles are allowed to take the streets constant worry of unsafe drivers will be deminished. Crash and acident rates would be at an all time low and travel would be so much more enjoyable. Yes these vehicles in there current state may ask for the drivers help every once in awhile, but the Google car drove 500,000 miles accident free, Remarkable.\n\nFinally they would allow us to save and cut down on fuel use, and with supplies fading this could be a huge factor in saving what reserves we have left. They also could be powered by electricity which would remove the fuel factor as a whole and reduce polution rates to a minimal. Earth provides the human population with everything we need and have today. What better way to repay it then to save it from the harmful polution cars produce everyday.\n\nIn conclusion Driverless Cars are the cars of the future. Providing us with nothing but benefits if allowed on the roads of The united states and roads across the world. Saving lives, preventing the death of innocent people, allowing safe passage for the passenger, and cutting down on fuel use and polution. Driverless cars are the cars of the future and could provide peoplke with much better lives if allowed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do we have driverless cars? Driverless cars can be both harmful and helpful. One reason an driverless car can be helpful is if you dont really want to drive.A reason a driverless car can be harmful is it has a mind of it's own. I disagree with having a driverless car because there are many reasons you can get hurt. The car has a mind of it's own and is more exspensive, can stop working, or it can crash at any time and will be blamed by the manufacturer.\n\nAlthough driverless car has a mind of it's own.It is basically computarized and will not be able to do things at certain times. Driverless cars are actually more exspensive because they use alot more technology than any normal car. Driverless cars also need a whole lot of sensors if they want\n\nthe car to work as planned. Now driverless cars need those sensors to make the car more safer.\n\nThe sensors can cause the car to apply brakes or individual wheels to reduce\n\npower from the engine.\n\nAlso another reason why i dissagree with driverless cars are because it can stop working at anytime.Driverless cars can\n\nbe harmful to the driver because what if the car just all of a sudden stop working. If you have a driverless car and you are on the highway and u weren't aware of the road. That will be an accident waiting to happen. Just because driverless cars worked in movies for driving half a million miles Doesn't mean it will work in the real world.\n\nThe last reason i dissagree with driverless cars is because it can crash at anytime. Also it will be blammed by the manufacturer. If someone gets hurt driving a driveless car everyone will be looking at who made it and they will be in trouble for a mistake they made. In most states driving a driveless car it is illegal. A driveless car is another type of technolgy that can fail at any time.Someone can also be ingured if something who fault is the manufacturer not the driver because the manufacture is the one who made the car so they should be blammed for it.\n\nIn conclusion having a Driverless car is not good for your safety. It is one of those technolgy that they are testing out which is very dangerous. By having these driverless cars it will reduce more car accidents, stop working and the car will still be managed based off a computer programm and will get more and more exspensive. As the technolgy grows and they figure out new ideas to put on the car to try and make it more safe. I dont think that Driveless cars will change make the future better because there are many reasons the technolgy can go wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do know square box screen Or rectangular snaped objected letters Or rectangular box put disk usb turn All computer Yes fun play games go internet watch videos check mail If computer everything would easy reasons kids go computer home cause addiction inaproprite could exspensive Pleases near reasons give fighting chance The first reason computers bad cause addition child problem child bother say CAPS I go computer pleace And say yes let thom happy say CAPS time act computers say CAPS I stay little longer I dont wan na act middle game finnally act thir nexted day ask CAPS I go computer say CAPS cry throw temper And let wan na stay say CAPS get The second reason bad thing computer inaproprite inaproprite child growing go ento internet lat things like nude pictures videos world lead child sexual intercorse There age years old inaproprate computer last least last reasons computer bad computers cost days broth computer cost lot get fixed get new one even press trust I know computer isnt always good thing Now hav heard reasons I hope take info consederations think really want computer good easy also bad side effects All facts true ans I say people world go threw computers every year think hard Do", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, the given statement stands partially true. Many of the married members of any family, prefer to have children at their early ages. Over the period, the decisions are changed. There could be many reasons for taking such decisions. For example, the raise in the cost of living. Due to increased prices of all the basic needs, people are finding it difficult in raising them, providing them the basic education, and taking care of them.\r\n\r\nI believe this is the major reason behind taking such decision. Talking about the advantages and disadvantages, there is a wide scope for advantages being outweighed.\r\n\r\nPlanning for children after certain period of time, from the marriage day, it gives the couple/family a lot of time, to think about the future. Also in laying a path for their (children) lives. Parents will be able to plan according to their financial status, balancing the requirements. It given an advantage of planning their education, the best institution to chose, and also a strong support with some savings made.\r\n\r\nTalking about the disadvantages of having children at early age, it becomes a big challenge in taking up such big responsibility. One should become more stabalized in terms of finance, and ready to spend a lot on education and other expenses.\r\n\r\nBeing a family of 5 members, with 2 siblings, I really found it very difficult for my parents in rising us. Since, they were not financially stable, and they had to make many debts for providing us all the basic needs like clothes, shelter (rented house), education fee, etc. It took them almost 20 years for them to clear all those debts. Hence I believe, and advice to the point of having children at right time, when couple are really ready to take the responsibility.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that the idea was outgoing but you cant hold technology forever or always profound it as good yes I can be valuable and a pretty cool equmeint. But to say if this facial action coding can be relibel and give you accurte resluts is hard to believe. because just cause a machine tells you one thing doesnt mean its ture one can be happy and it can show the person mad. I just think for a fun a silly thing to try or do yes its valuable. But for something to speak on as if it acutlly works and did work and is giving accurte resluts no its not valuable. Like he said \" she was 80 percent happy 9 percent disgusted 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Yes you can have a lot of mixed emtions but to have one after another by a machine telling you come on now. it then again could be ture but I couldnt see that unless she presented that to us her self how she was really feeling at that moment and time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State Building faced inside dirigibles hydrogen highly flammable The builders want risk lives damage buildings They realized much worse accident could took place town New YorkThe greatest obstacle wind top building The winds constantly shifting due air currents Also dirigibles would dangling pedestrians streets belowThe last reason law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal tie building even approach", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read students' emotions and expressions would not be valuable in a classroom. As a student living in a generation that is becoming dependent on technology, the ability for computers to read our emotions would not only be a waste of our resources but also a detriment to our education systems.\n\nThere are many consequences of using technology to read our facial expressions at school. Distractions are prevalent in a classroom and adding the emotional recognition would only be adding a game for students to play with while the lesson was being taught. According to the article if the student was paying attention, their lesson could be modified based on their facial expression. This may confuse the child or present them with material in a way that has never been taught before. They then would have different information from their peers and teacher. Not only would the customized lesson confuse the student, but it would also promote the selfish lifestyle that other technology is by giving the student exactly what they want when they want it. Our students are growing up in a world where technology is providing them with everything they want, and that has made them needy, spoiled, and reliant. If the emotional recognition technology were implemented, then in the future the child may not be able to sit through a job interview or meeting because it would not be modified for their enjoyment.\n\nIf we were to use technology that reads expressions, we would continue to create people who are not satisfied until everything is catered exactly they way they would like it. The use of technology to read humans' expressions would not be beneficial in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bumberger didn't have an clue that he will ride waves. Before he started riding waves he work a partime job at the grocery store and bank , his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat he wouldnt say no because he knew it was a lifetime opportunity. In 1945 WORLD WAR TWO was over in Europe and many towns and countries was left in ruins. To help those countries recover their food supplies, animals 44 natoions joined together to form UNRRA the United Nations relief Rehabilitation Administration hired the seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke always wanted to ride waves because it opended up the world for him he said im grateful for the opportunitys, before luke and his family host a number of international students and exchange visitors for lots of years he said I found time to have fun on board the cowboys played table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. But after Luke realized after being a Seagoing Cowboy he wanted everyone else to ride waves ,and explore and have fun while doing it so that's why him and his parents wanted to host students to be succeful and succed in life and to do what they dreamed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember time older sister patient fo birthday fourth man patient every time I ask birthday said yes I birthday I cant untill birthday DATE untill fourth happy I cant believe wated birthday went freinds house shoping fire works air sister well sister patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Taking about bullying its more important every day. I think that now a days our society is experiencing a transformation of values and with these transformation a lot of thes important values are saturating to get forgotten.\nI think that the first solution has to come from the house, with the parents. It's critical that parents are properly informed about these situation and have the correct preparation to Handel it.\nContinuing with the idea of the first step has to come from house, the school were your child is attending they could give a seminary about bulling and the consequences. And inform parents that the school will have zero tolerance in this cases.\nAlso i think that you have to make aware your child about these situation and talk to them. Explain why its not good to bullying someone because there race, color or the way they think. Tell them that a show of maturity is to learn to respect the different thinking of people.\nLike ones president Benito Juárez said \"The respect to the right of others is the peace\".\nWhen i was at elementary these term wasn't around but it doesn't mean that bulling doesn't exist. In may days it was common that someone was bulling another student but the times it happened these students, stand for them selves so that's were it was over.\nSo also teach your child to learn to defend themselves and to no tolerate these type of behavior. Tache them that they will always can come to talk to you and help them solve these types of situations and also if they are wittnes of these type of behavior, to don't be indifferent and take a posture of defend the other child.\nThese could be by going with a authority ( teacher, principal, etc) or to try to stop it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI am writing to you to tell you that we should change to popular vote because for one there is less likely to be a dispute over the popular vote rather than an Electoral College. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. In 2012's election, for example, Obama recieved 61% of the electoral vote compared to only 51% of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of ir are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tigth races in the \"swing\" states.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. theres a thing called the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system allows for much worse.\n\nThe electoral college systems has lots of flows and is way too outdated. We should switch to popular vote and life will be easier.\n\nSincerely,\n\nJulia", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a public debate about whether to get a job or continue their education. This essay will elaborate on both angles of this highly contentious view at issue, and from my perspective, they are equally important.\n\n Let's start by looking at the advantages of keep studying at university or college. First of all, the most obvious one is gaining specific knowledge. On top of that we have to mention is academic ability because there are many professions requiring specific academic such as doctor, lawyer. Thus, there kinds of curriculum have to be learned in the colledge. One of the foremost impacts is that they have to self-study, vast their knowledge in a specific field. A good example to explain this is that every developed countries like Japan, China consist their courses reasearch based after school. In this way, their youth continue their study after that they become professional. Secondly, we need to make our educate experts towards in speciaziled in specific field. This plays an important role in social development. For instance, inventing a cure of coronaviruts wuold be impossible isf its founders never studied after school.\n\n On the other hand, some people believe in direct working. One of those advanteges is they work the more soft-skill they get, so these people will have more experience in working compared to the one in the same age. For example, the artists do not require a college diploma or entrepreneurs and learn by trying and marking a lot of mistakes.\n\n In conclusion, there are several benefits both in future study and going straight to work. From my perspective, learning at university is the best solution. It seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is how America votes for the President and Vise President, which is a process that the U.S. shouldn't have. Intially, if people are voting for a President, they know what they want and have done their research. Along with that, it gives the Electorial College more rights than the actually people voting for the President and Vise President. Lastly, it's just down right unfair to the voters. The U.S. wants every person to have equal chance at the election for a president and if about 500 people are voting compared to the millions, it's just unfair to the citizens. In the world now, this process is taking away the freedom of decision or making it seem useless to the people. The Electorial College shouldn't be a process we use for voting.\n\nMost people voting, actually care who is running the country and they took the effort to make sure they got the vote in. The votes from the actually people should count because, evidentally, they know what they want. Most people do not go to a place if they do not care for the purpose, but if citizens are voting for their president, it should count, not having other elected officials vote. The elected officials voting, are in the government and that creates a biased vote which is uncalled for. The votes need to be from the people because they see the actual truths of what is happning to the economy, salary, taxes, the process of the government, and much more. It is obvious that having the people vote is a more efficient choice than pre-elected officials.\n\nSecondly, the Electorial college takes away the rights to choose what president they want. Yes, they get to vote for which electoral college member they want but, it doesn't actually add up to the number the citizens actually participate in. As stated in the Constitution, citizens of America have freedom, and they should have the freedom of choosing the Preseident and Vice President they want without out any ifs,ands, or buts. America has the freedom to choose and the Electorial College shuts it all down, which is disrespect to citizens and to the country.\n\nLastly, it is such an unfair process. As said previously, it geneuinly takes our freedom of choice away. People need to be heard and listened for what they actually want but the government lives their own way and doesn't take into count what the people, that make the country up, want. \"Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\"(The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the laid-back defenses of the syster are wrong by Bradford Plumer). This here proves that the candidates are only in for the game and not the real true choice in who will be a perfect official that runs the country all together. Clearly, the process all together is a complete unfair, brutial game to the people.\n\nIn Retrospect, having the Electorial College is a disaster and having it as a process makes we use every four years is unbelieveable. It treats the Americans like there freedom is worthless and makes the voting process unfair. If the people take the time to actually stand in line to vote, they hould earn the right of having their vote count in full picture. This process shouldn't continue on, for it is 500 or so people voting for the President and Vise President for over millions. That itself, is outragious and shouldn't be apart of the American voting process anymore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world. Although the idea of co-existence with climate change appears pausible, people should find out some feasible solutions to combat climate change instead of accepting it in the long run. There are a number of reasons explaining for the co-existence with global warming. First, since it is believed that natural disasters are unavoidable, trying to resist them is hopeless. For example, Japan is particularly susceptible to earthquakes ,or some Asian countries get hit the most by typhoons due to their geographical location, thus combating global warming is in vain. Second, the expense of space projects is extremely high ,which discourages people from investing it to prevent climate changes. In fact, some people suggest that government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard of ordinary people in lieu of investing in space projects, which means they accept to live with global warming. However, it’s human’s duty to find out practical approaches to prevent climate changes because of it negative impacts. First, climate changes is largely shaped by human’s activities rather than the nature itself. If people don’s take responsibility for what they have been doing to environment, natural disasters will get closer to them, causing a big loss on human life such as global warming or frequent typhoons,... Second, natural disasters occurring in a long run will wipe out biologic diversity including human being. Therefore, people need to act now to stop global warming. In conclusion, people should find out other practical approaches to prevent climate change. By considering all substantial effects of climate change on human life, everybody will find out the ways as well as be highly aware of protecting environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want your car to drive you in the future? or perhaps would\n\nyou rather do it your self ? Google cofounder Sergery Brin wants to have driveless cars for public -transportation taxi systems . The driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and off far more flexibility than a bus but what would happen if the car ran out of gas. No one knows how dangerous this could be for humans in everyday life . Driveless cars shouldn't be aloud on the road.\n\nDriveless cars shouldn't be aloud on the road because of safety hazardous. One example of this is that the car could malfuction its self while driving automatically. In the article it nevers explain what the car would do in a car accident or even when damaged. It could hurt the driver and other drivers on the road. There is no such thing as a driveless car because it doesn't have the smartness and the physical view and skills as a human do. \" Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\"\n\nDriveless cars could be a better for humans to sit back and stretch and give time for the driver to eat something maybe check a text message. It could also be better if the driver doesnt realse something near by. Thats why they have\n\nsensors that can that detects\n\ndanger and out of control skids or rollovers. The would accelerate and the car would stop. However driveless cars can't drive through workzones and around accidents. If the driver was looking for something and happen to look up and the car did not alert the driver that he/she\n\nis in a construction work zone and is about to get hurt that would be the car and the companies fault.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin wants to have driveless cars in the futue. He wants to use them for public transportation. Driveless cars are very dangerous and could be a risk to everyday life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most of the jobs done by humans can now be done by robots due to advancements in technology. While most jobs done by human labour can compete computers, some people believe that getting this task done by artificially intelligent robots will have its own repercussion. This essay will discuss why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this progressive age. \r\n\r\nHaving maximum job done by computers is much more beneficial than using labour force to get the same job done. This is because, machines can perform faster in more velocity than humans can ever be able to achieve. For example, biscuit manufacturing units today, bake, cut and pack tons of biscuits every day at a higher speed than a man could ever have accomplished. Another advantage is that having robots makes it very convenient for people to do their tasks. In this era, most people look for things on the go and book travel tickets online, making it more accessible for people to do it at their own time and space, rather than earlier where they had to stand in long queues to get the same ticket. It is therefore best to have most of the jobs done by use of technology than involve humans in completing tasks. \r\n\r\nHaving said that, some people think that having robots do most jobs can have its own disadvantages. One of the cons is that this will drastically take away employment opportunities for many humans that will endanger the human space. For example, today most petroleum pumps across a few countries are automated and don’t need a human interface to give away petrol or diesel to vehicles at the oil station. This has taken away a lot of jobs of human beings and led to unemployment. Another reason is that if most jobs will be executed by robots then people will become lazier and eventually make them prone to many ailments. For example, if there are robots to do household chores, then fellow humans won't work hard to mop the floor, clean the house or cook in the kitchen. This will take off the struggle that used to keep them physically fit to do daily chores. In a nutshell, the disadvantages are considerable, they don’t stand much value in today’s era as there are successful solutions to these problems addressed by the globe. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, technology today has proliferated to an advanced stage that most jobs done by people can now be done by man-made robots. The benefits of having robots do most of the jobs is the most wanted things that human beings are looking at, it certainly outweighs the disadvantages at all fronts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nWhile I normally don't have any complaints, and being the person I am not many things \"bug me\", but I recently found that I disagree with a certain argument. And while it is near voting times, I believed it's best for me to send you my side on this continuous debate to change your mind on the matter. The electoral college has had its share of arguments and I would like to make my side seen knowing I have quite a bit of logical arguments. Please read with an open mind.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair in many ways, this one however can be seen as minor. The electoral college gives an easier way to get tie, and although a tie hasn't been a main focus, it can prove to be a problem. I read an article stating that if a tie were to happen the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. This would anger a heap of people for many reasons, one stating it would almost rule out their vote.\n\nSecondly, the electoral college simply takes away from voting in general. An example of this is lets say Obama won popular vote, he should win because thats what America wants right? No, because what if another president won electoral vote? that president would win and take away the point in voting. This is unfair because we the people would like to have a better say in who becomes our president.\n\nIn the article I read, it stated \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. unfair, outdated, irrational\" I agree completely. How is it irrational? Well simply because it is just an extra step added on. In all reality our country would be fine without it. Popular vote is exactly what we need, and that alone is enough. And while I do believe it's good to go an extra step, it shouldn't go when not needed. This to me is most important because I could argue all day long and in the end this would be my argument.\n\nThank you for your time and please take this into consideration, I realize that it has its upsides but it is just unfair, outdated, and irrational. And please notice the other downsides aswell, while I did not have the time or room to include them.\n\nYour friend,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future for the world. There is a need for driverless cars that is slowly being filled by prominent car manufacturers. Although the government makes assumptions that there is no safe car without a human driver, the steps being taken towards a future with driverless cars are showing a different alternative to human drivers.\n\nMany of these driverless cars still require a form of human drivers to guide vehicles through special situations such as road blocks or work zones however, there are now many driverless vehicles that can transport a passenger without any problems. As these vehicles become more popular, affordable, and practical in everyday life it will cause a change in the driver laws for human controlled and driverless cars. With projected release dates for these modern vehicles approaching so fast it is now time for us to begin thinking about the future. Driverless cars are the future.\n\nThere is a future for driverless cars and that future is now. Driverless cars have the ability to change lives positively and remove many of the dangerous actions we face now in driving. There will be no more fear of texting and driving or an adult not being able to focus on the road while checking their child. No more fear of drunk drivers or operators under the influence. Driverless cars are more important to the safety of our country than many realize.\n\nSo let's begin to take the initiative to bring driverless cars to the forefront of technology and make these technologies accessible to the public. There is a great need for these products that must be filled as soon as possible. Driverless cars are the future and that future is now the present.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you drive a car you are putting out emisions that are harmful to your children or your family members. So when you think about you could do to limit that, the answer is in the question. When your child goes to school they should ride the bus or if close enought ride a bike or walk. As stated in Source 1:In German Suburb,Life Goes On without Cars; they have elminiated the facor of the building up of smog.\n\nNow as that is a good thing,not everyone should have such restrictive laws or rules that make it almost useless to have. A car-free city that is losing money on the gas that is need to use the cars, are losing money and they are making the money back by feeing you when you dont listen to them. in paragraph 3,there is a quote that states - \"when i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" that cant be intirely true. When foced to find a diffrent way to work,or school,or home you are putting a burdan on yourself and community.\n\nYou are putting stress on your body that can result in back,leg, and knee injury when you have to walk home. Not everyone is fit enough to walk home or to work or wherever you have to go.\n\nIn Source 2: Paris bans drving due to smog; they have fined 4,000 people for this issue they are trying to solve. It will never be solved. they are making more money while in the process of trying to eliminate he smog that will alway be there. But it sure has help with the congestion of the capital of France. It haas gone down by 60% after just five days. As they banned diesel fuel in france they have also lost the money that they need to be safe from the inpending fear of something horrible happening and making them lose money.\n\nWhen you ban something that makes p for 67% of vehicles in france you must find a diffrent way to people from point a to point b in such a big city. When they have to use the subway or the bus or taxi there will need to be more of them so everyone can get on.\n\nWhen fining people for there \"mistake\" of haaving their car in use the day of car free capital day,they are making money off of you and what are they going to spend it on? more tanks or weapons for there military? How about for the debt that they trying to pay off? In every country there is something that they need money for.\n\nAs in the Source 4: The End of Car Culture; \"the american love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling.\" Many people will be losing there job because of what is going to happen when no one wants a car anymore. The reason older people still keep their license and car is because they know what it is like when you have to march your way to the store and buy food for your family and then lugg them all the way back by yourself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authour feels venus could be alot like earth wich means extra resources that could expand our life. \" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" There are also things being done to help be safe while gaining information on venus. \" Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying out of their way. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" All of this has shown that there are still chances to get to venus, there are reasons to want to go there, and there are things you can do for saftey there. So i agree that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, by telling us the dangers of visiting Venus but then describing how they would study it without it being as dangerus.\n\nAlthough visiting Venus would be dangerus they have ways they would do things without getting to close and without it being so dangerus. Some of the dangers that would stop scientist from from visiting and not being able to study Venus is, Venus has \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxid\" and the planets \"surface tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" These would cause the scientist not to be able to land on Venus because it would be to hot. \"such an envirioment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liqify many metals\" this shows how hot the planet is and why we wouldn't be able to land on Venus.\n\nScientist would try to over come these problems by using \"old technology called mechanical computers.\" they would use these because \"systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" So the scientist would try to use this becasue they would be more heat resistant.\n\nNASA has one idea for sending humans to study Venus. The solution they have came up with to help with the hostile conditions of the surface of Venus would \"allow scientist to float above the fray.\" Imagine blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" this is what the scientist want to creat so that way they wount be close to the surface of Venuse. The tempatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, this would not be easy tempatures for humans but it would be survivable for humans.\n\nAlthough the conditions on Venus are not that safe NASA has an idea to try to prevent the scientist from being exposed to all the high tempatures and presure but will still be able to do some reaserch. They still wouldn't be able to \"take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance but they would still be able to do other reaserch.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technolgy is now able to read the facial expressions from a human face to see how they feel. Computers can recognize subtel facial movements that we humans express how we feel. The computer first constucts a 3-D computer model of the face, and with the help of scientists and psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman we can now classify six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear. and sadness. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\".\n\nThe question is, how can this be valuble in a classroom in which this technology is able to read the students expressions. In schools there are always problems with students in which they are not focused, get bored and do not pay attention to class. The problem is that the teachers cannot see this and address the student aferwards. If you were to create an online lesson how can you be sure that the student taking the lesson is paying attention, sure you can have a camera following their eye movement so you can make sure the students is looking at the screen and nothing else like their phone, but what if the student is bored and not listening to whatever you are saying of teaching? This piece of technology can help you see whether or not your student is paying real attention or not. This is realy helpful for teachers so if the facial expression of the student seems bored, than they can change how they are teaching until you see the facial reactions of the student changing so you can classify him/her as happy or surprised instead of anger, disgust or sadness. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\".\n\nWhen you are teaching a class you can now be sure that all your student will be more interested and will understand more than before. There will be students who would want to fake to seem that they are having a good time just to get the class over with, but with this new technology you can now tell the difference between a genuine interested look or a fake one so you can spot that person and pay more attention to them. I feel that with this technology more students will learn things faster and will have a higher grade or gpa now since you know they are paying attention to class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you looking for a job that fits your hobbies but can't find it? Well don't worry, being a sea cowboy offers lots of jobs and opportunities, just ask me, Luke Bomberger. You can care for animals, have watch duty, steer the ship, and many other jobs that are needed when being a sea cowboy.\n\nJust take it from me, Luke Bomberger one of the most famous sea cowboys in America. Thanks to my stories you'll know all the possible careers and benefits from being a sea cowboy. First, lets talk about some of the jobs that probably fit your interest. First of all if you want to watch animals, or nurse them back to health if they get sick then this is the job for you! Normally, on just one ship there can be up to 350 animals. That's a lot of sea cowboys feeding, cleaning, and nursing animals. Not interested you say, then you can ask for some extra watch time. Everybody has to do at least one night watch per night and you could do someone else's work, while they clean animals. This job is perfect if you enjoy getting some fresh air. Just don't be afraid of heights! Still not the right job, then you can take over or be the captain. This job is perfect for anyone interested in being the captain of a boat, for a career. You will most likely stay high up, but you can't accidentally fall to your doom, doesn't that sound safe?\n\nNow you've finally picked your career, good job! Now you can look at the benefits of working as a sea cowboy. It might seem boring on the way to Europe, picking up after animals that relieve themselves everywhere, but with the animals gone and the stalls empty you can play games to pass the time. You could just simply play a board game, or maybe set up a ping pong table that you had to move because the chickens kept pecking away at it. Heres another benefit, while your ship is being loaded with food for the trip back you can go sight seeing! You can see the Panama Canal, or a castle on the island of Crete.\n\nThis is marvolous, even I myself am jealous of what you might get to do.\n\nYou have now seen the great benefits of becoming a sea cowboy. All that's needed now is for you to sign up, be drafted and not only will America thank you, but all the people of Europe will. Bonjour!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people have substantially paid attention to climate change by reducing plastic, CFC and a lot, whereas others think that we should learn to adapt to it. This essay will discuss both views and put my opinion.\r\n\r\nNowadays, there is a great amount of pollution in the air, which has produced using cars, plastic, CFC and others. However, some people want to have a better globe, so they have made efforts to change our Earth, that they have generally kept many tasks on a road or elsewhere including reducing plastic caps and other ways. In addition, climate change has affected everything in the world, for example, increasing temperatures over years have melted icebergs, which are located in the North pole and South pole, including if someone unable to adapt to this problem, he will die from many reporting. Therefore, these are reasons why they decide to protect our Earth.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others think that is unnecessary to prevent it, and they should learn how they will stay in this climate change. Moreover, they do not care about this problem, \r\n\r\nas well as have increased more pollution, that plastic and CFC should use to be enough to cover their money. Additionally, they might be convinced that, in the future, there are many projects to observe a new planet that resembles our Earth. To illustrate, Elon mark has a schema for observing Mars, that will habitat for humanity in the future.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, I personally think that we should protect or treat it by reducing things which worsen the world, and the government is supposed to persuade its population to be more careful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever speculated on a friend's face, not knowing if they were being truthful? This new technology could definitely improve and benefit students and teachers alike. It can create more creativity for students, allowing them new ideas to tackle and overcome obstacles with. This new technology in schools, could prove priceless for many.\n\nThe value of this new technology could be priceless for students and teachers alike. You remember those teacher who have slow, monotone voices giving dull hour long lectures? Boring! Imagine, if you would, instead of a boring lesson that could never obtain your full attention, you had something that made you actually think and keep you productive through the whole class. That is what the Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, could give a classroom. From this articel, the author even states, in paragraph 6, how FACS could improve the classroom, and raise the production levels of the students and teacher!\n\nIn conclusion, the value and benefits FACS could provide for people, could be priceless. No more dull lectures, and more interaction, production, and creativity for students in class. Wouldn't that be great?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has flourished by leaps and bouds in multifarious fields, especially agricultural, and as a result, food products are imported enormously as compared to the past. Some believe that buying other countrie's agricultural goods providing more benefits, while others opine that people should support their local farmer's goods instead of imported. I agree with a latter opinion and this essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people should purchase their domestic food products rather than foreign goods because they should be supported to their local farmers unlikely any corporate companies that to make many profits by this. For instance, when the public consumes other nation's food stuffs while price of the agricultural products might be risen tremendously due to including the imported tax and travel expenses. In addition, this trend might be continue in future many farmers could be lost their employment along with the agricultural land will be substitued by companies and enterprises, as an consequence, air pollution will be increased and some pesticites will be also eliminated. Therefore, consuming the local farmer's product might be helped their livelihood development. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, importing food products bring more positive effects to society. Many nations have unlimited resources to cultivate crops and food items but some nations do not have that while this import system help to fulfill their market demands. For example, in Taiwan is an itensive island with unlimited resources, they import many crops to the USA to satisfy their market demands. Furthermore, it will help to balance the food supply around the world and every people can get food equally without any food scarcity. Therefore, importing the agricultural goods provide the positive effect to society. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although importing food products can satisfy to other countries food item's demand as well as can be balanced the food supply, food products price can be increased by the import tax and travel expense as well as consuming the local agricultural items might be improved the local farmer's livlihood. However, I agree with people should consume their local agricultural products rather than imported food items.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The abilitiy to read the emotion of a student in a classroom is a posotive thing that might come about in the future. There are multiple reasons why it would be a good thing.\n\nSome reasons are benefits to students and some are benefits to the teacher.\n\nFor the benefit of the students wouldn't it be great if the teacher could tell if someone was confused. If the teacher could tell that then the teacher could offer some one on one help or have a classmate explain it to them. If a student was having trouble with something and they were contemplating just giving up the additional help could work to push them forward. If the student is a high school student and they were strugling in class and got some help and things became clear maybe that would motivate them to try more resulting in better grades and that would lead to possibly scholarships. If students realized something and then it became easy and possibly even fun for them they might find what they want to do in life. It would aslo help to lower dropout rates if students enjoyed what they were doing.\n\nNow moving on to the benefits for teachers. If a teacher could tell that a student was bored with their class they could try to add some fun to it. They might play kahoot to review which would make the students happy and also maybe seeing the students happy would put the teacher in a better mood. If the teacher could tell someone needed help they could step in and provide that help and possibly change the course a student was on. This could help the teacher to feel as though he changed a student's life and make them feel great and like they're doing the job they were meant to do. They might realize that it could work for more than one student and that could improve their teaching skills. If their teaching skills improve so does the experience of the students. This would also help to show someone what they should do in life and also help keep them motivated and in school.\n\nSo in general the idea of a technology that could read a students emotions is a promissing prospect. It will have many benefits for both students and teachers. It might help to cut dropout rates and increase the amount of people getting college degrees. It would help to improve the lives of many people and the increased amount of educated people would improve the country. So yes if the technology to read emotions ever becomes available we should use it in our schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that there were definitely alians there. I might not be able to prove it, but I do believe and will someda prove that there are aliens in space. When it comes to the Face I have a hard time proving the whole alien things. I mean like don't believe everything you read. So to me studying the Face is hard\n\nOk, so NASA is saying 25 years ago they noticed something funny that happened at Mars. I think the thing they spotted was aliens. Besides the red stuff the only weird on Mars would be aliens.\n\nIn my opinion, I dont think the Face was created by aliens. So far scientist haven't even see aliens in space so if that's the case how could aliens have created the Face. You know humans had to create that one.\n\nI do think there are aliens in space but I don't think they made the Face. Until scientist find out they aliens exist I'm keep thinking that it was a really smart guy. So come on sicentist lets find out if aliens exist.\n\nSome genius Enstein has made the Face up and blamed it on aliens. But when I grow up I'm going to do more stufy on aliens and fidn out if they really were the ones who invented the Face. But for now whoever the guy is played a really good prank.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are a great idea for our future.\n\nFor many years prople have bin working on cars to drive by themselves , from 1950 to now. But there are many things still being worked on, for example, the driverless cars are still needing the passanger to drive out of driveways or take hold of traffic situations like bblockades. Many sensors make the possible as well. Another simple subject of the matter is that the driver will be notified when to take over such as a vibration of the seat tells them when.\n\nIt is not like the self driving cars are dangerous if they malfunction the car should be able to let the driver drive\n\nhim or herself. It is a matter to look at about the safety situations of the cars, wether it is a brake malfunction or an engine malfunction. Even if there were problems towards the car we still have engineers and scientists developing ways to complete these cars and make them completely safe for everyone around. They even plan to make them completely safe by 2020 not far at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These driverless cars should not be developed becuase technology can crash, safety concerns and lack of knowledge. These 3 reasons all tie up to each other on why these cars should not be developed.\n\nFirst reason why driverless cars should not be developed is becuase technology is not one hundred percent reliable. Technology can crash causing these cars to possibly not be functioning well which could lead to various accedents and who will take initiative for those damages? ¨If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?¨ paragraph 9. With this being said anyone can buy things that make their life easier, thats what everyone wants right? Not just becuase it makes your life easier means its safe.\n\nSecond, these cars should not be developed becuase of safety concerns. As already mentioned technology can crash leading to serious injuries, the sensors could stop working leaving huge possibilities of many crashes. Does this also mean that if these cars replace actual cars does that mean people will become lazier and or not be requiered to drive or have a liscence if indeed this project becomes successful?\n\nLastly, these cars should not be developed because of lack of knowledge. Again, if these cars replace driver cars does that mean people will become lazier, and or not be requiered to have a liscence if this porject indeed becomes successful? If so, soon it would not be required to know how to drive which would lead many people to not know how to drive which is requiring less knowledge that should be there. It would make our lifes so easy to the point where it might make us lazy, not everyone, but mostly everyone. I beilive we need the most knowledge possible instead of creating more and more things that isolate us from learning.\n\nIn conclusion, these driverless cars should not be created due to technology crashes, safety issues and lack of knowledge. Drivers should keep driving and learn more everyday. A wise person once said ¨Life isn´t easy, so dont try to make it¨.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives proud happy mood This memoir heritage home When talks heritage speaks food home music gives reader sense pride This also happy sort memoir talks unity neighborhood despite fact different parts world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine taking an online lesson, slowly becoming more and more bored, then suddenly without any warning, your entire lesson dynamic switches to become more fun. Such was the intent of Professor Thomas Huang from the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Prof. Huang created a computer program that can detect emotion in a human through a facial recognition simulator. Essentially, this program can \"read\" someone's emotion based on the small hints our faces give away when we react to something. However, this system could be problematic.\n\nFirstly, using computers to detect emotions could be problematic in the sense that computers can't necessarily understand human emotion. Although small triggers in our faces could give emotion away, these don't always inherently dictate our mood. For instance, in doing any assignment, one may come across as bored in their facial expression, which is normal. This doesn't necessarly mean that a student needs a new way of learning, it could be a combination of environmental factors that have nothing to do with an assignment itself. Therefore, switching the lesson plan may only confuse a student further or cause anger. Should a computer read an emotion wrong, the student would be the one that suffers, which is why technology is not always trustworthy on something that is human instinct.\n\nFurthermore, the value of a student's emotion in a classroom, although important, doesn't automatically mean the student should be tended to immediately. We, as humans, need to learn how to balance our emotions and handle them effectively in a workplace, which school prepares us for. However, if our school computer reads our emotions constantly, it could cause us to have a warped sense of the real world. As adults, we will not be \"babied\" everytime our feelings are hurt, and therefore we shouldn't be taught that we will be. Admittedly, there is a line where intervention may be appropriate in regards to one's emotion, however that's what we rely on friends and family for. If we trust our computer as our confidant, we may grow to lack human connection later in life.\n\nOne may argue that computers detecting emotion may be a good thing. This could detect early signs of depression or anxiety, and therefore we could take precautions against such things. A computer could be handy when a student is too scared to speak up about being bullied or speak up about something happening at home. Again, though, we can't rely on computers to do everything for us. Our communication skills are dying out at an alarming rate due to new technology; in result we don't use them as we should. Children and especially teenagers are quickly learning that devices can do anything for them; therefore adding another innate human quality to that could be harmful to one's sense of humanity.\n\nIn conclusion, although helpful in many fields and practices, this system is not valuable in school. This system admittedly has it's perks, however the flaws definitely outweigh them. It is necessary that we keep means of communication alive, and we give children real, human resources to discuss their feelings. If humans rely on electronics to deal with emotions, we may just turn into electronics ourselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe question at hand is, \"Does the electoral college work?\" My answer to that is simple \"yes\",but the reasons why I say this gets a little more complicated. As you may know the founding fathers established it, the Electoral College in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens (Office of the federal register, paragraph 1). Also, A majority of 270 out of 538 electoral voters is required to elect the president. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equal the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representitives plus two for your Senators (Office of Federal Register, Paragraph 3). Which only goes to show that everyone gets to vote.\n\nSome may argue the Electoral; college is an anachronism, an old and out of date method, or a non-democratic way of selecting a presedint that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. and according to Richard A. Posner they maybe right in the arguing view that the Electoral Colleger method is not democratic in a modern sense. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee, and that trust is rarely betrayed however, it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. (Richard A. Posner, 16) All the college is trying to do is set a number of people who can be elected not elect the president on their own.\n\nUnder the electoral college system voters vote not for the pesident but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. No one is saying leave it up to the \"state\", the distict of columbia to decide alone who our president should be but just to let them help in narrowing it down to those who fits the qualifications we need in a good president, The person who is going to run our country. Bradford Plumer said it himself voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate so why put the humans that always make mistakes in charge of choosing who out of \"billy joe bob from the swamp\" and \" steve boy from the country club\" to run our country. I say let the qualified pick the qualified. Its easy to say this, Bob Dole was wrong don't abolish the electoral college let it LIVE!\n\nSincerely, A concerned citizen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After highschool Luke Bomberger never thought his life would not change. He was worked two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn’t say no. He knew it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.\n\nDon and Luke went to help they people my taking care of their cattle after everything is left in ruins. Right before arriving to Greece, Luke turned eighteen. Now that he was a legal adult he could be drafted for the army. When they heard of what he was doing they told him to carry on.By the time he was discharged it was 1947 and he had made nine trips most as a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nAfter the animals had been unloaded they had fun playing baseball, volleyball, and many other activites. Being a Seagoing Cowboy opened the world to Luke. Like said that he was greatful for the opportunity and he is now aware of the people and countries in need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When young people are choosing what subject to study at university, most of them hope they will find a great job upon graduation. In reality many fresh graduates fail to find work in their field and some are even forced to take up a below graduate level job. In my opinion, the root of this problem lies in the outdated higher education system that should be modernized. Traditional university education does not prepare students for their first job for a number of reasons. One of them is that many programmes are too theoretical. It means that highly educated graduates lack simple skills required for employment, for example, the knowledge of IT software. Employers, therefore, prefer candidates with hands-on experience. Another reason is that universities offer too many courses in popular fields, such as business and law, and do not recruit enough students for engineering and science programmes. As a result, the UK labour market has an oversupply of law graduates and a deficit of engineers. A reform of higher education could alleviate many of the problems but would require joint efforts from universities and the government. If universities worked closer with employers, they could teach students practical skills that companies look for. Meanwhile, the government could develop guidelines on how many students universities should recruit in each subject in accordance with the market demand. In conclusion, a likely reason why many graduates cannot find a job in their field is because university education might not have provided them with the right skill set or an in-demand profession. I think that universities and the government could improve the situation by updating the content of the programmes and limiting the number of students in each subject in line with the market demand.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, I am here to tell you why I believe that people participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I think that would be a good way to see the world and go place you never been before and you can go over seas and help other countries in need.\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves it state in paragraph 4, in World War two over in Europe and many other places they was left in ruins so 44 nations joined togethere to form a UURRA and they hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the animals they was shipping over seas. That is why I believe participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is a good thing cause you can help other countrys in need.\n\nIn the story it sate i paragraph 6 that the boy Luke that was in the Seagoing Program he was over seas for two weeks before he had got to china. That is one of the reason why i think that being in the Seagoing Cowboys is a good way for you to go places you never been before\n\nLast, the passage state in paragraph 9 that being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more that a adventure for Luke Bomberger. This is why I choose to think that it is a great idea to be in the Seagoing Cowboys program cause you can see stuff that you never in your life seen before and have adventures.\n\nThis shows why I have stick to believe that it is good idea for people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are mny factors that influence using technology to read emotions in the classroom. The technoogy can influence certain lessons based on given understanding. Facial expression evaluated by these computers could help teachers. This kind of technology could benefit the future as well. Lesson planning, teacher help, and futue technology are three factors that contribute to using emotional expressions for the classroom.\n\nFacial exression are a elling sign of the current state of emotion a person is in. These emotionas are universal for people to understand, such as a smile representing a good mood of a friend. Now computers are able to tell emtions based of facial muscles, which has led to innovations in the classroom environment. For example, if a student is working on a homework assignment and gives off a look of confusion, the computer can tell that the student is struggling to understand whatthe question or problem is asking or how to solve the problem. This new technology could benefit the student in that the lesson could be mdified to help the comprehension of the learner.\n\nThis technology could help teachers ina sense that they have easier communication with their students. Since teachers have to teach a multitude of students, it can be difficult for the teacher to see who is struggling with the material presented, Most communicaton between people is done through that of emtional communication rather than verbal. From that this formof technology can help teachers know who comprehends themaerial, who is confused by the directions or the material, or those who simply do not understand the content. Using this facial expression technology can be of beneficiary to those in educaion.\n\nEmotion technology can be of benefit to not only the school evironmwnt but also can open new doors for the future. Even though the algorithm is not compatible with a normal PC at home, this technology could benefit in the future for new innovations such as helping a students interest levels for at home assignments. The only slight flaw that could go against this facial software is that computers cannot detect genuine emotion. Such as a person hiding certain emotions that are not shown on a facial expression. However more advancement and developments of this technology in the future could benefit many people in different circumstances.\n\nMany factors of Facial Action Coding System can help benefit students in a classroom. Three factors significantly hold value to the influence of this software. Students can be able to have customized lessons to maximize learning in that subject based of assinments completed on the emotiion recognizing software. Teachers will be able to communicate better with students in helping undrestand the content and what needs to be focused on more. Future softwares can be made from this intial technology that can recognize students understanding and comprehension of the material from at home assignments on possiby a PC. Overall, the ability to recognize emotions of students from muscle movements of the face is a great advanncemet for the classroom enviroment, and once more developments are made, man students will benfit in being able to understand the material beter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we dont need to keep the Electoral College because it is not a good way for people to vote.\n\nI think how we should vote is by a majority vote where whoever wins the popular vote from all states will win the election and become are president. So whoever gets the most votes per every state that is who will win. One reason why i dont think we need to keep the electoral college is because in the second sorce in paragragh 14 where it says \"It's official:The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" It tells you that the electoral college makes it to where no matter who wins the popular vote the canidate will not win if the electoral college wants something different to happen.\n\n\"The Louisiaa legislature early succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)\" i wanted to bring this up because if the Electoral Colege did what they were trying to do then Kennedy never would have been the president and who knows what the history of that presidency would be today. The electoral college is good at some times but i think that who ever wins th popular vote should automatically be the president.\n\nIn the second sorce paragraph 2 it says \"What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, The U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college!\" According to Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but did not win the presidency because of the electoral college.\n\nOver 60 percent of the people that vote for the president would rather have a direct election than have the electoral college becuse the electoral college does what they want and they do not listen to the people.\n\nI just think we need to no longer use the electoral college and just go by what the people of America think will be best for this country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table sheds light on the metro systems in six cities, outlining their dates of opening, lengths of route and annual passenger volumes.\nOverall, the earliest opening of underground system took place in London. It is also apparent that London has the longest metro routes. In addition, the number of underground passengers in Tokyo is larger than that in any other cities mentioned in the table.\nAs shown in this table, the opening of the subway system in London took place in 1863, which was earlier than that in any other cities outlined in this table. In Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto, the metro systems began to be operationalised in the 20th century. The latest opening of metro system took place in Los Angeles in 2001. As for the lengths of route, the capital of the UK has underground routes of 394 kilometres, which are longer than any other cities, such as Paris (199 kilometres), Tokyo (155 kilometres), Washington DC (126 kilometres), Los Angeles (28 kilometres) and Kyoto (11 kilometres). In terms of the annual passenger quantity, the figure reaches 1927 million in the capital of Japan, which is larger than that in any other cities. The second largest figure of passenger volume was in Paris, reaching 1191 million. The yearly number of passengers reaches less than 1000 million in each of other four cities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a controversial phenomenon heating up a debate over the fact that nowadays, people are bombarded with an eclectic mix of advertisements. This essay is devoted to weighing up the pros and cons of the perspective, followed by parallel reasons.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, people these days gain a lot of benefits thanks to the commercials. In particular, a great number of newly-launched products are informed to customers through advertisements, which not only help them be aware of the array of selections available to their demands but also create opportunities for the companies to approach prospective customers. For example, many technological entrepreneurs namely Apples, Samsung, Huawei, and Xiaomi have optimized the publicity materials in various ways so that people could know about their company’s latest product, which helps them generates higher profit and become top-ranked technology corporations. Hence, it is undeniable that these commercials have a tremendous impact in this day and age.\r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of advertisements are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. Nowadays, customers are complaining about the real quality of some products is way too different from what they have seen and known from the TV commercials promoting them. For instance, many marketers or sellers can employ some tricks and gimmicks to entice people to buy products that may be of poor quality, leading to great dissatisfaction among purchasers. Therefore, advertising could pose some threats to customers if they can not resist the temptation of products that are advertised way beyond their expectations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, commercials play a paramount role in business development and people’s selection of the product. To my mind, this trend is advantageous as well as detrimental.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ok so this talk about the solar oplanet this wiil be help to the planet because we nned the solar for the health and to others think what they going to helping .\n\nVenus is called the Evening star is the only one of the brightes point . venus is actually a planet . in the solar planet.\n\nThey two has a different speed mean that sometimes we are closet to mArs and others times to venus.\n\nThe thick of the admosphere is a big percent of the carbon dioxide,the temperature is so big like is so up because is in the around of the planet solar.\n\nThe scientist are try to find the weatherhow going to be on all the days is something similary with the solar planet they are triing to find some thinks .\n\nand the wen they find we going to know what is going to happen.\n\nThe NASA has the only one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study venus because they know how.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you looking for a job that gose oversaes? Then I have the job for you! You should come join me in the Seagoing Cowboys progam. We go over seas to all kinds of countries. Here is some information you might need before you decide to join.\n\nThis isn't one of those jobs you hate and want to get over with and go home. It is really fun and a lot of responsibility. Something that is really cool and I love to do, is go sight seeing when we drop of the animals. Since we go a lot of places to give animals away, there is a lot of things to see. That is something that is always fun, if you love going to foreign countries to see things. Like the time I went Crete and and explored an excavated castle.\n\nYou are always on a boat, so you can't be scared of boats or the water and you can't be a person who gets sea sick a lot. That's not the only thing you have to mind, though. Because we are taking animals overseas, there is alot of animals to take care of, like 335 horses, plus we have to have enough hay and oats to feed them. It can be a stinky, dirty job, too. You don't really have to be good with animals, though. You just have be good at remembering and giving them food and water up to three times a day. But it would also help if you were good with them, so then you wouldn't scare them. If you are strong then great! We would need you to carry a lot of bahles of hay and bags of oats onto the boat.\n\nJust think, sailing all around the world! You can see places and go to places that you've always wanted to go. If you're thinking like, oh! They don't need me. They've already got enough hands on board!, then you better think again. We can always use a new person to help us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist making way Yosemite National Park longer difficult dangerous way go He takes awee going way old folks says havent gotten porches since carter office I think tha tthere would reason listen though wisdom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would the author ignore the dangers of venus ?\n\nThe author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nBecause of how hot it is it's very dangerous .\n\nThe author says,\n\n\" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system .\" The author has believed that the ,\"Conditions aren't easy but humans can survive in venus .\" The author wants to explore it no matter how dangerous venus is it's like earth and if so they want to see if there is people living on venus and if there like us since humans could live there.\n\nReseachers can't take gas or rock samples from venus so that is why no matter how dangerous venus it's so interesting for the author.\n\nThe astronomers are planning visit so they can see the different things on venus or the earth like things on venus. The dangers of venus aren't dangerous to astronomers they are just challeneges.\n\nWhy is venus called the evening star? Well it is as know as that because it is one of the brightest points of light. Or the twin of earth.\n\nVenus and earth are just like each other same density, size, the closest distance. They both could have humans living on both planets.\n\nThat is why the author believes that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challange of exploring venus. Exploring venus would be hard but not easy because of there weather conditions. Venus does have alot of things on there plant that Earth has also. Venus is sometimes the Evening Star due to the fact that it is the brightest light in the sky also making it simple for amateur stargazer to spot. Now scientist say that it may be possible to live on Venus some day but they are having a hard time trying to study Venus because of a thick atomosphere that almost has 97 percent carbon dioxide.\n\nVenus is one of the closest planets to Earth in terms of density and size. One of the National Aeronautics an Space Administration are trying to send humans to study Venus. They are trying figure out a solution where the humans they send can be in a floating vehicle or some kind of way they can study Venus without Being on the plant. If they were to be on the plant they would be burning up because of how hot Venus is the degrees are around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nNasa will be looking to figure new ways on how to study Venus. They are working on making a some kind of object to go on Venus to see what information they can get. WHo knows Nasa someday in the future will figyre out more about Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel like it would be a good idea to have one of these in schools because, it can one tell how a student is feeling on any certian day. Along with that it can possibly predict how a student or a teacher will react to something that happens in the school or what another person says.\n\nIt can also help the students with their work if the computer can tell that a student is struggling with their assignement, it can give them easier question but still get the point across for the class. I also backed this from the article because it mentions that a classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoing confused or bored.\n\nAnother reason I think it woud be a good idea to have these in classrooms is, there are some students that learn better on a computer and this will help them if they do not understand a subject. There is also other students that can not learn if most of there course is online and to difficult for them. So this system could possibly tell a teacher or another staff member that this student does not work well on a computer.\n\nThese are my reasons to as why I feel like it would be a good idea to have the Facial Action Coding System in a school. I feel like it can benefit some students off the jump and, I also feel like it can help some students get to where they need to be if they are struggling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting make ride cyclist hard It lot hills would make use energy Also desert hot dry This makes author need water normally would The author said I traveling high deserts California June The author knew dangerous travel without water said I could drop heatstroke If setting cooler would much danger", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that if you're a seagoing cowboy you have a lot of free time on your hands because as they say rome wasn't bilt in a day and getting across the Atlantic or Pacific Ocean wasn't a short trip either.Especialy with the rain,lightning,thunder.It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States,and a month to get to China.\n\nSo why don't you get down here and join us. Did you know that we also play games down here,yep. The cowboys play volleyball ,and baseball in the empty holds where animals had been housed.Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading, whittling,and games also help pass the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is much than an adventure, it opens up the world to people. And so what people say it's hard work thats life and so what we get sick thats also part of life and well you know what some times you have to deal with it. Well so what if people say its just some old job, well i got news for you. It's not just a job its's a its a life experiance, and people I'm pretty shore would love to see the world and all of it's great beautiful animals. so join and be a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe in driverless cars. Driverless cars are the next big leap into transportation. Throughout the past there has been major leaps in transportation such as aviation, cars and trains. Although its not entirly a new thing it could become the next step to having easyier lives. But would it?\n\nIn the artical it states that new laws would have to be made in order to accomidate the driverless vehicals. They would have to change due to the unfortunate event of an accident or a collision. That could all be taken care of in a court of law but as safty issues go, what happens if the car malfunctions on the freeway or innerstate? This could very well happen but I supect that it will be a very rare occurance.\n\nThe benifits however outweigh the issues. Just some of the many benifits are less accidents, safer driving condtions, and most likely no traffic. Selfdriving cars don't need a driver so that means more free time for the person woam would have been driving. In the artical it adress the factor of boredom. Stating that entertainment systems would be put into place preventing a passanger from being board. The artical also adresses how states will not allow driverless cars to even be out and about. I suspect when all issues are ironed out and flaws are to a minum those laws will be dead. The only laws that need to be put into place would be if an accident occurs or a colission were to happen. As of traffic there would be a significantly decreased amout due to no accidents,and no random breaking. Not only would they not have accidnets but they would be able to travel at faster speeds and no crash. Meaning that a person would get there safe and faster than they would have been able to.\n\nFinally the benifit of not owning a car. You may not realize it but owning a vehical is very expensive. Some of the expences are fuel, insurance, the actual car, maintence, ect. But if there were driverless cars then it would be just like a taxi servce but with no driver, ariving at the destination faster, and not having to deal with an accident. However that is ways away and selfdriving cars still have quite a ways to go.\n\nAll in all I completely agree with having a selfdriving car.\n\nEven though they may have some down falls I believe that they will redeem themselfs in the near future. And I look forward to not have to drive myself and enjoy my free time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There numerous features setting effect cycleist For example rough road A nother example tumble weed snake also affected cyclist In conclusion reasons setting affects cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has been elevating and with new innovations most of the labour work is being operated by artificial intelligence. Therefore, the machines have taken control over the jobs and tasks that required excessive physical activity. Analysing the role of machines, I believe that this is a positive development as it could provide more accuracy for production and do tasks which are not possible for humans.\r\n\r\nFirstly, to err is to human and they cannot do the job with the same accuracy as that of technology. Taking this into account, 100 workers in a factory of food making are not efficient to find the error being made which could be easily detected by the machine. Certainly, the precision rate is extremely high if tasks are being conducted by robots. Therefore, AI has more efficient as compared to manpower considering the accuracy it could achieve. \r\n\r\nSecondly, labour could do extremely difficult activities like repetition movement but somehow they lack in life heavy weights that are beyond human capacity. Although some workers have the potential to lift, not as much as lifting equipment can pick. For example, forklifts are a basic necessity of warehouses nowadays because of their power to carry bulk material around also, they could help store it to load at height. Consequently, this sort of task is not achievable by employees. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the development of equipment to work in warehouses has improved the quality of production and it can easily do the work which is impossible in the case of humans. Moreover, I opine it is completely positive growth and the advancement should keep progressing in future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The dessert environment huge effects cyclist He drinking water regularly would running Not realizing would refills pump giving tarlike substance said text With lack water dehydration beginning hit poor man An effect dehydration poor balance would useful pass ridiculously large snake seen A finale effect would mirages could loose judgement This man double checked eyes coming view building wipping sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage Through toughest desser obsticles character able take short cut survive heat dehydration animals dessert", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows everything changing adapting change Saeng decides change also adapt new life going back passing drivers test The hibiscus also represents something also homeland come america must survive When begins bud Saeng begin start adapting america passing drivers test Its trying become accustomed changes When Saeng feels bad failing thats something past comfort", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph The story girl missing home country This paragraph implies girl adapted new country next The story paragraph show girls strength overcome This author ended story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood good happy In artical mood peaceful positive It s secsesful mood also greatfull greatful everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, state senator\n\nThe Electoral College should be removed from our way of voting; we should change it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States because state senators are voting for our president and not us . As stated by Mr. Bradford Plumer in his article \"\n\nThe Indefensive Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\n\n\".\n\n\" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of elcetors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to cote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide elcetion, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes.\"\n\nThis claim tells how the president is choosen and its not by our votes its by the slate of electors votes.\n\nAlso,the Electoral College should be removed from our way of voting; we should change it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States because the electoral college is a disaster waiting to happen. Mr. Bradford Plumer states in his \"\n\nThe Indefensive Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.\"\n\n\"\n\nThe single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse.\"\n\nThe importance of this quote is because it tells us that there could be more disasters to come from the Electoral College.\n\nThe Electoral College should stay our way of voting because with it we avoid run-off elections. Mr. Richard A. Posner states in his article \"\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\"\n\nthat we avoid run-off elections. \"\n\nThe Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent of plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electotal College (301 and 370 electoral votes, respectively).There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner....\"\n\nThe importance in the counterclaim is that it shows that the Electoral College process had a clear winner.\n\nAlso, the Electoral College should stay our way of voting because of majority vote. The Office of the Federal Register states in their article \"\n\nWhat is the Electoral College?\"\n\nin the third paragraph. \"\n\nThe Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House od Representatives plus two for your Senators....\"\n\nThis quote shows how each state has so many electors.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is both good and bad for our voting system. Some systems are wrong and some are right but its a hard decision to make with the Electoral College because its both wrong and right. We dont need no disasters in the voting system we already have enough disaters in the world that we live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story main character vowing take drivers test symbolize moving forward Saeng felt shock recognition inffuse almost visceral A pone stumbling florist shop main character sees flower reminded home land Vietnam Here let help mother In relieving mother task planting seed bought began mature After reflecting memories past coming peace nothing left stoping moving forward when come back I take test again As sees geese migrating south winter v formation sets goal uses goal tool help grow move foward new country shes The main character vowing Winter Hibiscus symbolizes moving foward", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi name mason m writing wether take books self etc People differnt views differnt things Books books give differnt form lerning differnt peopleI personal nt learn books well I internet tv books nice every great Eeryone like sit read good book every Music nt really teach anything relaxs differnt ways Some people might learn listening music m one peole It influnce get movited say getting ready football game want get hyped well music get hyped game When sit watch movie I learn cause patien sit watch learn people differnt ways learning best way watch movies They get stright point nt waste time telling stuff alredy know Magazines helpful short artcicles get stright point I like magazines movies Even though magazines give helpful information ones help alot So I think music taken shelves nt really teach alot books movies magazine help certian point It people decide wether music taken shelves one person cause music might help people differnt ways one way many ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir grateful Narciso glad family In paragraph lines I always greatful parents thier love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly This mood created author memoir greatful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I heard concern many scientists computers Computers brought us improved society harming childrens health education Because computers children adults around world spending less time family friends enjoying athletic activities health problems Because increase technology children adults spending time families The computers ruining family connections For example study showed families computers houses communicated less The children talking friends online going social networking sites instead talking person family members Also computers making hard families meals together When children computer want leave This obsetion technology making harder families grow moved succesful school The computers children better education Athletic activities also suffering fresh air children They websites day insted Sports teams computers The electricity runs computers radiation Being exposed could lead brain damage possible death When aunt bought computer first time complained massive headaches kept returning This caused radiation emitted computer Another health risk obesity When children sit front computer many hours increase apetite These children eat nothing better While computer users eat gain weight loss exercise They could become obese possibly get diabetes Therefore less communication families loss excersise health concerns caused computers The consequences misusing technology devastating could life thretening Thus I urge whatever possible use computer less face consequences come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author love family The author describes love cuban cooking still author today Passionate cuban music I author still adore today The author got love parents Another way author created mood love talking parents always kept arms door open I know takes lot able let anyone home The authors speaking lovingly point story The author also says always grateful parents love sacrifice This also sets mood story talking loving relationship The mood author set story love I think really good mood set story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI favor on changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. It is time for change to our voting system. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. five reasons for retaining the electoral college is, the certainty of the outcome, anyones president, swing states, huge states, and avoidment of run-off elections. The first reason is, in 2012's election, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vot when romney only got 51.3 percent. the peoples popular vote wanted romney to win. I beleive it isnt fair that the electoral vote has the final say, there is more of the U.S citizens than the electoral college. The second reason is, the electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trnasreginal appeal. residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isnt thir president. The third reason is, swing states. voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay attention to the campaign, so the most thoughtful voters should be the ones who decides the election. The fourth reason is big states get more attention from from presidential candidates in a campaign than a smaller state which isnt fair or equal. the electoral college favorites of of bigger states. the fifth and last reason is that the electoral college avoids the problemof elections. The electoral college method of selecting the president, may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for carrying there state. voters in the U.S presidential election are people who are exspressing a political preferance rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe drivelsess cares are a nessity to humans as a whole. As we progress in technology, we lack in humanity. The human race is becoming liazier as we progress. I do however believe it is interesting that we have the technology to creatate such an invintion as a driveless automobile, but personally I dont believe that the they should be used for the public. Perhaps a means of transportation to go somewhere relivitly far away, but not driving yourself five miles to go to the mall is just pure laziness.\n\nIn the artical, it mentions of the fact of safty is their main motive for the driveless cars. The author state that a person may text or take a phone call while the car is moving on its own. I believe the most safe way to drive, is to not have your phone out at all. An individual should be focus completly on the road while driving. Having a driverless car just creates an excuse for the driver to be irresponcible behind the wheel, if they are driving or not.\n\nI believe that as a human race, we need to move on with technology, we should keep moving forward and progess. Understanding and learning new things is an important part of life. But maybe society should live a little in the presant we have crearted for ourselfs, before moving onto the future so fast.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm Luke. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program can be lots of fun. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. There are so many places to see and travel through. I went to Greece, Europe, China, Venice, Panama Canal, and Acropolis. I've been many places as a Seagoing Cowboy, maybe you should try it too.\n\nIt may have taken a while to get to those places but it was still quite fun. I had my friend, Don Reist, along with me. Don invited me to tag along with him. How could I turn it down? It was going to be the opportunity of a life time!\n\nThe sea can be dangerous too. I remember that one rainy night, after making my hourly trip to the captain, I slid down a slippery ladder on my backside. My heart raced as I shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped my slide, keeping me from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. I was happy to be alive but, I couldn't work for a few days since I had cracked my ribs during the fall.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy means that you can help others who were hurt in World War II and need food suplies, animals, and more. I'm so grateful for the opportunity I had. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. This awareness stayed with me, leading my family to host a number of international students and exchange vistors for many years.\n\nOn the return trips I had lots of fun! My friends and I would play Baseball and Volleyball games in the empty holds when the animals were unloaded. We would have table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and the games helped pass the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is fun, dangerous, and helpful to others. You should think about joining, Yes, it may be dangerous and you may get hurt but even though all that happens you know it's for a good cause. Imagine all the places you'll see, somewhere like, Greece, Italy, China, Europe, and maybe places I haven't been to. Think about how much fun you'll have losing but having fun winning and having fun when playing games with the others. Also getting to help others who need.\n\nThat's the main reason I became a Seagoing Cowboy. To help others in need. I'm not saying you have to join, just know, it could be lots of fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship Libraries I believe censorship libraries In society many kids hurting getting bad things There somethings kids see Censorship used libraries steer kids right direction take stress parents offensive movies actually offensive Censorship libraries steer kids right direction Odds kid sees role model front movie case smoking cigarette kid probably going become curious smoking This happened I saw kid I looked drinking I almost took drinking I right peers I nt The point kids see someone look certain thing great impact If movie case sensored kid would never even think smoking role model Every parent worried kid getting trouble law right Some movies kid get library actors illegal things A kid see probably think cool go thing I seen plenty movies made want go movie What thing see movie murder It maybe crazy think kid would go murder someone saw people movie could happen A couple years ago I remember reading article newspaper kid shooting father head This kid six years old thought playing guns safe saw movies Censorship take stress parents backs Parents stress time kids If library censors music movies kids watch parents worry much going bad things sees peers This makes parents feel good confident child s life Finally offensive movies actually offensive whether kid parents audience movie targeting Keeping offensive movies censored relieve lot hate kid s life I say experience In movies always see smart kids getting picked seems like athletes get attention Well I sort considered smart kid I feel movies peers watched find okay pick This creates hate inside hearts censorship used In conclusion obvious I feel censorship used libraries Censorship used libraries steer kids right direction take stress parents offensive movies actually offensive With censorship things accomplished This helpful kids parents well In experience censorship good thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think we should put facial action coding system in our classroo? I think using technology to read the emotions expressions in a classroom is a good thing because it tells you where your students are bord in class, see if they are mad in class, and tell someone is tired in the classromm.\n\nSee if the someone is bord in class is a good thing because you can make the subject or class more fun. That will make the student pay more attention in class because they won't be messing or not paying attention in class any more. In paragraph 6 it says \"A classrom computer could recoginze when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" What they meant by that is the computer would put a different lesson than instead making the student do the lesson being bord or confussed. That will help a lot of students because they are gonna learn more and get good grades.\n\nThe facial action coding system could tell a person if they are tired because the computer can tell by their muscles. It will tell the teacher wich student is tired so they teacher can do something about it. It will help out a lot of the teachers from telling who's falling asleep.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mr. senator i think we should get rid of the electoral college and change to popular votefor the presidency. I know im not even old enough to vote yet and your probably thinking what is this kid talking about but i dont think it is right to vote for the president of the united states canidate and really not even vote for him. The electoral college should vote for us because believe it or not it isnt always the right desicion sometimes. They say people of age and an american citazen that we can vote then let them vote for who they want they shouldnt have to vote really for an elector people want to feel like there vote matters. The peoples votes should go right to the box and count the votes and see who wins. The electoral college is of no need for the election process we the people can vote for ourselfs please just let us. And i know it isnt really in the writing format the way they want it i just want you to know my oppinoin and i know your probably going to just skim right over this but please if you have the time just please read over this and take the time to understand were im coming from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Three reasons Luke joined the SeagoingCowboy program was to help countries recover from the damage that happened in World War two. Another reason is so he can help the people that was hungry and their houses got damaged during the war. Also to take care of the aminals that they hade to transport by boat.\n\nWhen Luke and his friend herd about what happened durin World War two they want to heip those countries that where ruine. So him and his friend Don signed up to be Seagoing Cowboy. Also in 1945 Luck and his friend Don received their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived August 12 the day the Pacific war ended. They also got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster.\n\nThe same day Don and Luke got their seaman's papers they got on a boat and headed yo Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy he \"says. When Luke was feeding the animals or something he almost fell over board but it was a good thing a piece of metle saved him. Luke wouldn't be able to do anything for a while because he has some broken ribs.\n\nConclusion: Even when u get hurt never give up on something u want to do or what your doing. Also it is good to help others if they need it or when they are hurt thats when they need you the most. Just like Luck and his friend Don they both went all the was to New Orleans to help others. They didn't think about themselves they thought about other people and there lives. Even tho Luke got hurt when he was on the boat on thing he didn't do was give up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are CAPS hear You never issue computers It come understanding dispute benefits computers advance Well I believe computers necesity average person Computers help everyone make life easier Sure cellphones helpful electronics always prove trustworthy Computers alwasy reliable whether s homework another reason Computers provide easy interaction without breakups make easier learn smart safe Without computers knows society would To begin computers allow people conversations others halfway across world There variety applications choose easy use My personaly preffered option email I family whole continent away Sure I could call phone bill would roof How else I supposed keep intact loved ones Do know many others face problem Through recent study families say relatives far away That population Imagine computer use Phone companies would money regular families would living streets Or worse would lose relationship famly Do want Computers easy access interact loved ones friends new people It nt get better So would choose losing family relations keeping touch via email computer applications If nt enough computers make easy learn new things accomplish tasks I know student students I need type homework least three times week Just yesterday I type response free writing choice entry history project Imagine go back using typewriters Either homework would nt done everyone would major lack sleep Both options unacceptable Plus computers great research If look new country look far away colleges find world visit handy computer You could learn college right without leaving house You could visit new country without leaving town Sure could read newspaper answer paper come Yup trees killed Computers easy environment friendly alternative If two reasons nt convince maybe one Most people think computers unsafe partly true But smart listen school like know nt always case In school taught risks computers prevent possible I m sure schools In fact nine ten students say comes safety computers rated A Everyone knows hackers avoid My parents even say thirty years never single issue risk safety using computer neither I CAPS powerful let let take control says expert subject So s safety worried nt The kids today tomorrow know stop minor So nt recap learned today Are computers helpful best way go communication Yes What best way learn things easily I believe correct answer computers What safe even nt agree It nt phones television oh yes computers I see might think outside well let tell cellphones tv keep anyway At least computers nt rot brain Well I done part I support computers advancement But nt No s So please part spreading word It s right thing You know want", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator\n\nIn my opinion we should abolish the electoral college because it's not fair to the people who vote, they vote on the president they want but aren't actually voting for them? Thats crazy we should be able to vote on who we want and it should be counted for. it makes everything much more complicated than it is. As it shows in these documents what would happen if a president won not because of popular vote but the amount of electoral votes.\n\nIs it that their scared of having a tie of votes? If that were to happen the election could go to the House of Reprsentatives, where state delegations vote on the president. What if the people dont like their elector? What if the elector chose one president because they wanted to? There are alot of questions to answer whenit comes to the Electota College,it makes everything easier and fair if we vote directly and the candidate with the most popular vote wins.\n\nfrom: Emily", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The public figures act as role models for teenagers and `influence their life in several ways. The youth get mesmerised by the popularity and wealth of cabrerites. I withstand the idea that some of the famous people indulge in flaunting their possessions and looks to gain publicity however there are some people who use their fame to inspire youth.\n\nTo begin with, there are influential figures whose actions or representations can adversely impact today’s new generation because the teenagers follow them blindly. These people convey the message of being rich and beautiful is the ultimate success of growth. For instance, the entertainment industry put a lot of emphasis on good looks which promote body shaming in society. Many youngsters follow diet plans to attain ideal body shape which resulted in eating disorders and low self-esteem.\n\nOn the contrary, there are people who show the right path to teens by setting an example of hard work, persistence and intelligence for coming generations. These kinds of people have high values in their personal domains which reflects in their work too. To illustrate, the Bollywood actor Akshay Kumar is a determined, hardworking and disciplined person who mostly do make movies on social subjects such as woman’s rights to access better sanitation; third gender rights to reduce the impacts of social stigmas.\n\nTo sum up, in my opinion, celebrities can influence teens in both ways positively as well as negatively. It is the moral responsibility of influencers to utilise their power to give the right direction to their followers and try to make difference in others life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, my postion on driverless cars is that they need to be more attentive and cautious. Some careless drivers dont pay attention when it comes to driving.It may be a car that we will have that might not let us drive at all even when your in situations. However, we still need to be attentive at all times when it comes to driving. The negative aspects of this article is that there is no point is having a driver in a driverless car. Drivers would still want to drive\n\nDrivers cant sit all day when it comes to riding in those driverless car. It's like they are the passengers inside the car and letting the driverless car take over. In the article it says, \"A human driver in a safe car, is in control at all times\" and always attentive when on the road for their safety. Even if the new traffic law does pass through, it still wouldnt do any good for the drivers in the driverless cars.\n\nPeople still need cars that they can drive. There would be no point in letting a car drive for you. if that happens, people could be just taking the bus to wherever their destination is. People shouldn't want those cars because they are pointless and could be dangerous. You see it on movies and television but people don't know what it really feels like in real life when you let a car take over. It will all just be too weird.\n\nI also disapprove because the only time the driver will be able to touch the wheel is when there is construction work, pulling out of a driveway, or in complicated traffic. It's a very pointless car to have. Why put in a lot of money in something that isnt even worth it? The article says, \"Google cars aren't truly driverless,\" It might as well be. Drivers will only be able to touch the wheel, so does that mean that they will be in control or will the driverless car still be in control but just having the drivers hands on the wheel?\n\nIn conclusion, I dont agree with these new driverless cars. Especially when a new traffic law passes by, it wont be worth the wait. These cars are pointless and wont be worth your time. Sure they can do a lot of things a normal car can do but, the one main thing that they cant do is have a driver in control.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although some individuals state that reading or watching the news is unworthy as it has no mentionable relevancy with regular life, I completely disagree with this statement because I think the news has an absolute connection with living and significant to enrich the knowledge.\r\n\r\nNews is based on the current happenings of citizens' lives. In the features of newspaper or media broadcastings, viewers actually see the daily utmost occurrences, great initiatives, or other attractive work, which are important and can allure the followers. Publishers get the topics and plots from the daily instances of humans, such as accident, innovation or significant political decisions. Thus, the press releases and media announcements are closely related to individuals. For instance, recently a brutal rape case is got viral via online which is not only a tale of the victim but also many of the women of the world.\r\n\r\nNews enriches the individuals' level of the horizon. If an individual is read the paper, magazines, or watch reporting focused channels regularly that person is likely to inculcate most information from them. Consequently, more data and experience will be stored in his memory and with the progress of time he will be more resourceful; this gathered knowledge will promote him to grasp opportunities. For example, a survey conducted by Wikipedia revealed that the percentage of being successful in the job interview is higher among those candidates who are regular observers of the published article.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people opine that bulletins are no relationship with daily survival; yet, following these would create no significant value. Nevertheless, I believe, watching and listening bulletins are highly required to enrich knowledge and grasp scopes. Hence, being a supporter of newspapers or channels is absolutely advantageous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of a driverless car is a unique way of transportation. A car that would actually drive someone to their desired destination safely and surely would be an incredible breakthrough of human engineering. I belive these cars would never be devloped for the daily life of many busy people.The cars would be too expensive for everyone to own, and the thought of one trusting a robot to their precious life is not worth it\n\nThe companies making these cars vison that these cars would fundamentally change the world but which direction. Many people wouldn't be able afford these cars for themselves. The technology the cars require are really expensive and high value. Expensive sensors, computers, are going to have to be implemented to a driverless car no matter what. Many people would not buy it and will stick to their own car that they drive themselves.\n\nFinally, there are too many obstacles blocking these cars development for the companies to overcome. Laws and the peoples' trust in these driverless cars are things that would trample down these cars implemation. For example, if a person sees a busy street and is in a driverless car, there would be that thought where fear lingers, his trust would not concrete. People would want to trust their own life to their own hands. Also, the laws for these new cars would be unclear and difficult to create. The safety of the driver is very important and the lack of laws deciding who's fault is\n\nin an accident, these cars should not exist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is under question that leadership ability is either innate or nurtured. Some people believe that it is only natural talent while others hold the opposite side that it can be learned. In my opinion, people can develop these skills thanks to learning and working progress and this essay will focus on this issue.\r\n\r\n First of all, it is undeniable that there are many children born with superior abilities that can allow them to become talented leaders. Leaders are usually charismatic, confident and persuasive, without these things, it is very difficult to be an inspirational and leading person. For instance, a salesman who often fails to persuade customers to sign contracts or make purchases have little chance of becoming a team leader or higher positions. This failure shows that the ability to make others trust and feel convinced of them is very low. \r\n\r\n However, there are many people who have demonstrated that leadership skills are achieved through training and effort. That is why there is a large number of courses are organized to help those who need to improve the skills required to become successful leaders as well as managers. People, especially those who are shy and lack convenience, can learn about public speaking instead of good body language, pronunciation and so on and it will make them better leaders. Besides, needed skills such as how to communicate better, persuade others, be more confident and teamwork can also be cultivated and practised. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, although some of the factors related to leadership such as attraction are innate, humans can still try to develop other skills to compensate for our weaknesses. Thereby meeting the requirements to become a great leader\r\n\r\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College has been around since America was born. The founding fathers established it in the Consititution. Yes, there are some problems and concern with the Electoal College, but aren't there problems with everything in the world today? The pronalems can be fixed with some time and effort, and in my opiniion the Electoral College is more beneficial to the election process than harmful.\n\nThe Electoral College was created as a compromise and was agreed on by many. Some things people don't like about the Electoral College is that it's like a \"winner-take-all\" system, becuse then canidates don't spend time in states they know they're not going to win. But, with the winner-take-all system we will have a certain outcome with no disputes. This gives the canidate a landslide electoral-vote victory in a state. Also, the artice,\"\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\"\n\nsays, \"There is no pressue for a run-off election when no canidate wins a majority of the votes casts; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential elecrion process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winer.\"\n\nAnother concern with the Electoral College that people have is that voters aren't voting for the president, they're voting for the slate of electors, who elect the presodent. But, each party selects a slate of electors who votes for the party's nominee. We the people get to choose our slate of electors, so you get to choose who gets to vote for the president of your choice, which is fair. And, just because the canidate you didn't vote for wins the electoral vote, that doesn't mean they will win the national popular vote. For example, in 2000, Gore haad more popular votes than Bush, yet fewer electoral votes and we all know Bush still won.\n\nThe Electoral College also give \"swing\" states to play A HUGE role in the voting process. Most canidates focus their campaign efforts of the toss-up states, because the winner-take-all system. The swing states decide who the next president will be. They already know the states that they will get votes from, but the swing states are never consitant and always win someone the election. Also, states with a bigger population have more electoral votes, and by this the Electoal College restores some weight in the political balance by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate ddecreed in the Constitution.\n\nAll-in-all, The Electoral College has more positives than negatives in these situations. It helps us have a certain winner, avoid runn-off elections, choose who we want to win the election, and gives states power. The Electoal College was put in the Constitution, and so poeple like Thomas Jefferson thoughht it was important that we have an election system like the Electoral College. In my opinion, whe you weigh out allthe pros and cons about the Electoral College the pros weight out all the cons. And, if there was a different system there would always be problems with that. People always try to find problems with everything, and you can never pleas everyone these days.\n\nThank you,\n\nEllyn Cowan", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting greatly affected cyclist He California desert month June There water desert use water He says sun began taking harder ran terrain turned short rolling hills The hills made work harder dehydrate guccherand since water desert could died dehydration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Respected Sir/Madam,\r\n\r\nAs discussed over phone 5577 Please update to I need to send my emirates id to LAD Security Please find attached I was given date till 31st for updating Eid but I presenting it 23 days before so it should not be problem.\r\n\r\nPlease let me know if anything pending from my side if everything is done.\r\n\r\nThanks and regards", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you ever ride a horse to work or school? That's a bit out of date , don't you say? Well, why don't we use horses as transportation anymore? In my oppinion, this is because we've adapted from horse transportation. I think, everyday products, such as, cars should always adapt. Therefor, I am for the developement of driverless cars.\n\nAccording to paragraph nine in \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it states, that states such as, Nevada, California, Florida ,and Distict of Columbia have allowed limited use for these driverless cars. This is good ,because they get to test these cars and fix the potentially spotted flaws. If these cars have been tested accurately , what is the problem?\n\nEssentially, these cars could potentialy save lives. Statistically, texting, drunk driving and sleeping while driving are the topmost factors to fatal car crashes. If we had driverless cars, I feel confident that the death rate in this catagory will decrease. Futeristic automakers are under the assuption that the problems ahead will be solved, According to paragraph ten in \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\". This year, Tesla has relesed a car that pilots 90 percent of the vehical, according to paragraph ten in \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\". Within 2020, Benz , Audi, and Nissan will have an offer on driverless cars. In order to adapt, these cars need to be given the chance to succeed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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