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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph presents information on the time spent by both parents while taking care of their children in the evening hours during the year of 2022. Overall, men tend to have less involvement in the mentioned job; however, they spent more hours if the job was performed together with their wifes. Women do the majority of the work alone.\nIn more detail, men rarely got involved in dressing, while women in fact has the major part in dressing with approxemately 75%. Although men put 10% of their time helping in homework, women put five times more doing the same job. Both parents made up togther slightly less than 40% when teaching their children, where as both of them spent almost half of the time in dressing.\nMoreover, both parents accounted for 70% having a pleasure time with their children during playing games, while playing separatly accounted for around 30% for both. Mothers also put the major effort in preparing their children for bed, while fathers spent significantly less time doing this task which was around 5%; however, this task was mainly performed by both of them with a percentage of 50%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social media provides people all around the globe not only with the communication service but also with a variety of information and I believe that social networking brings more benefits than drawbacks. This essay will present some positive and negative sides of this issue supported by the relevant examples and give a conclusion. \r\n\r\nOne evident benefit to web communicating is that, this is an exiting and less expensive way of connection. To illustrate, as a lot of people nowadays have an access to the social platforms such as the Facebook and the Instagram, more people can afford to hold international phone or video conversation via social media services due two its cheaper price in comparison with old-fashioned calls via home phone. Moreover, a public platform like the twitter has an innovative format of interaction such as posting twits, which allow people not only to be more aware about current interests and concerns of their friends but also about latest news. Another advantage is that social media is a convenient and fast way of getting information you are interested in. For example, visiting the website or downloading app of the one of the media platforms such as Google, BBC or Flipbord gives you quick and handy access to the world’s mas-media. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages of utilizing high-tech for communication and reading press. Firstly, some people became addicted to social network. For instance, people tend to spend most of their time in the net. Consequently, those people can suffer from lacking of emotional connection with friends in the real life. Furthermore, concentration of the technology-addicted people might be destructed during the workday. Secondly, due to the huge amount of information on the web, it can be difficult to track the source of articles. Therefore, straggling with distinguishing between fake news and trustful statements may result in disinformation. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, technology in the field of the media network influence people to communicate more and be aware of news. Despite of some drawback related to this issue, I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages mainly because social technology save people’s money, makes their communication exciting and allows them to use convenient and quick way to get necessary information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Vauban,Germany where the trees grow ,The suburban pioneers and soccer moms live in but wheres the cars near the city of freiburg just across the french and swiss borders the streets of Vauban are car free . Car free? but wait at the the main throughfare tram downtown is where all the cars park well a few cars park there.\n\nVroom Vroom if your going to buy a car you need a garage and a house dont you you need a house to store all your belongings and your family inside and you need agarage to put your fancy new car in all the cost comes up to about $40,00 thousand dollers. About 70% of the people who live in\n\nVauban,Germany do not own a cars and the other 57% sold there to move here. but once you come here all youll see if bicycles and people having good convosations and children just wondering about the streets of gemany. The city of Vauban finished in 2006 growing a trend in\n\nEurope the suban city of\n\nGermany isnow called smart planning.\n\nOther suburbs in other countrys have to have to pay gas its about 12 percent of the greenhouse gas in\n\nEurope .\n\nWhile in the city the government is trying to make the city denser and for people and kids to walk around in a health enviornment about 5,500 within a mile have a low- car actually live in a low car suburban life. In the new life thats going on now its goinf to be easier for people to walkin in and out of malls they can finally walk in the main street rsther than walk a long distance way to get to their destionation.\n\nAround the world where they have tight spaces like\n\nNew York and maybe\n\nGeorgia are starting to look like these little surban cities in\n\nGermany and\n\nFrance . In the cities that we have talked about about 80% of people have gone to law highways and the other 20% use the transportantion that there to bring them around.\n\nIn\n\nParis they have banned the clear air globe city people who ride on motorcycles were orderd to leave their transportant at home or they wouold have to suffer a 22 euro finr the the united states that means about $31 dollars\n\n(hey thats not bad at all )\n\nabout 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their car impounded.\n\nIn\n\nBogota,Colombia large grey clouds are caused by cars and people not giving a care ( you know what i was about to say) about their country its like they dont even care this is like the third year that the city of\n\nBogota has been banned of cars the only thing they have right now are buses and taxies i guess they dont want cars anymore just tell them (the government of bogota that they dont want it ).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What hiding Is personal expression really bad Questions come mind topic censorship libraries arises In personal opinion I believe forbidding works art libraries destroying people created Censorship general way hide reality sugar coat struggles within life One learn unless given oppurtunity face problems society world By banning certain pieces world destroys opportunity expand knowledge every individual With removal materials books music libraries ruin time spent heart creators placed trustfully within Although people use materials strictly entertainment writers musicians created self expression show pain struggles It could even said expression theraputic specific individuals How would react form art dibbed unsuitable public audience Would hurt taken back Many artists probably feel placed state seclusion hatred With creation art always deeper meaning behind The biggest question eyes deems material unsuitable libraries What wrong specific material must take away everyone At pace world going today individualism left within next fifty years If people even allowed listen specific types music sooner later people wo nt able wear certain types clothes even dye hair different color The human population s greatest gift ability different If society even handle freedom expression art handle type Libraries created place expand knowledge If materials censored anyone learn Every individual way thinking interpreting subjects A book seen entertainment downtime reading one person thing strikes world changing idea mind another A human s greatest idea comes strictly knowledge accumulated throughout life time interests If certain forms art censored individuals never able find form interest certain subjects Everyone strictly forced believe learn things restricting world magical ideas one man could formed information obtained art censored In discussion based class I previously took read article discussing decision ban information related loss terrible things society done attempt complete succesion Through ideas taking knowledge also implanting lies heads next generation In specific situation created hatred false sense childrens eyes How one specifically influence beliefs child years old based personal selfish beliefs Through censorship destroying truth knowledge individual deserves determined find The biggest thing censorship cover reality Do libraries think publically display controlversial topic one know Knowledge around us No one needs book tell world perfect For know book censored could saved millions lives I fully grasp concept head hiding materials public There soon come time expression censored If getting rid art remove people I relate censoring books censoring people based personal experience A teacher told I would ever achieve career I piercings Opinions could kill person s dreams I known I wanted lawyer since I seven years old working better education based goals How tell someone good enough based specific beliefs There always something world like Each library decided censor different type art individual location Eventually world art left people chose suitable everyone I almost guarentee individuals lived worse experiences covered The world sugar coated portrayed perfect lfe Everyone struggle point works art really get us Sometimes relate case art music makes feel better I hurt The pain always Going reality struggles makes individual Censorship libraries hide anything public destroy oppurtunity grow Censorship libraries destroy world No individual say material suited public public Every person poses opinions life By banning works art banning individuality whole If things like continue planet become mindless zombies personal opinions Libraries taking knowledge everyone ruin chances greatness many people There true way hide reality world Let people display feelings art share world The struggles one person saves another allows ideals world whole grow", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automobiles have proved to be very convenient to our modern day society. It allows people to travel 20 miles in ten to fifteen minutes. By foot, it would take about four hours to travel that distance. Although cars have been beneficial, the limitation of car usage would outweigh the benefits of constantly relying on them. Decreasing the amount of time we spend in them would improve public transportation, improve air quality, and create less stress.\n\nCutting down the amount of car usage would encourage the use of public transportation. According to Source 1, the essentially car-less suburban, Vanbaun, has made public transportation more accessible. Increasing the use of it would decrease the time it takes to commute from place to place. Less cars on the roads mean less traffic. In small towns, not as many people currently use the system on a regular basis. With the limiting of car usage, public transportation could become more popular in suburban areas, not just metropolitan cities. Some may not want to take this form of transportation because it may not meet their sanitary needs. However, if the popularity increases, cities will be obligated to improve the conditions. Public transportation could be the new primary form of transportation if we limit the amount of time cars are allowed to be used.\n\nAdditionally, a large problem in the world today is air pollution and globabl warming. Automobiles cause the majority of this ongoing problem. Less time spent in the car would eventually lead to better air quality. Source 2 states that in Paris, France the smog in the city was near-record pollution. This caused Paris to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air. Congestion was cut down 60% after this action was taken. Vehicles release numerous harmful greenhouse gases that we have been trying to reduce. These gases not only harm the environment, but the people as well. New and popular alternatives to the common diesel cars are hybrids and electric cars. Less car usage would result in reduction of pollution.\n\nAlso, using a car less decreases stress levels. According to Source 3, in Bogota, Colombia, citizens participate in the very popular car-free day. A businessman in Colombia said, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress.\" Cars do not allow people's mind to stop and rest. A driver's mind is constantly thinking and attempting to get to their destination as fast as possible. If cars were barely used, people could take a serene stroll to their destination, allowing the mind to slow down, think, and relax. Parks and recreation would expand and improve as well due to the smaller vicinity we can reach by foot or bike. New and improved public areas would become more enjoyable, making us less stressed. Stress levels decline as car usage declines.\n\nThe increased use of public transportation, improved air quality, and lower stress levels all result from the limitations of car usage. As beneficial as a car may be to people, limiting the use of it is more advantageous than not. Car companies are still widely developing as highways and roads are expanding, but our society should go the other direction and find healthier sources of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to it's surface?\" is what the author said to introduce the discussion that scientists have been having. One of the ideas that the author supports their claim was the conspiricy that venus might have been earth before earth. \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and include familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\" and there are some evidence of previous forms of life. On the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. So that would be a set back on the idea of exploring the planet and also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\n\nNASA's possible solution to the such hostile conditions is to have a blimp-like vehicle floating above 30-50 miles in the air to study the planet. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many unfriendly ground conditions. This possible solution would put them at like 170 degrees Fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\".\n\nHowever, flying over Venus from a ship or hovering object would be safe but it would only provide limited \"insight\" on groung conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, More importantly researhers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else form a distance. But for me I think its a great idea, I like the solution to the issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason I think computers good people like work children likes games computers The second reasons adults likes jobs online Finally people computers probably happy computers good thing everything My opinion computers good people everything like play game go myspace facebook twiter alot websites", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the driverless car is a waste of time because of time because you do not even get a insure that your safe when you get in the car. In the text it states in most states it illegal to test compuer made cars. What driver would want to be in a csr thats not even tested to see if it does not shut down on commands or to notify if you are in danger of getting hit or close to backing up on a car.\n\nThe car can not even drive on its own around construction sites or around heavy traffic jams that what type of car people would buy without question. If the car can not move around or hit the brakes when your in serious danger than why even get it. Its jus a waste or your money and time and you can not inusre your safety.\n\nThe biggest thing that about the cars is you do not even know if you can sue the company for car failure. What if it just stop working and you hit someone than its going to be on you not the other person. The law might say it was on you for buying a car that was not tested but it was their design and if it could not be tested why are they on the street.\n\nI believe the only the car good for giving your leg a rest from the peddle but that what we have cruise control for. The car is junk and have no need for people daily life and should not be out for a drive. alot of people will get hurt or worse for a untested car thats legal on the street.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unfortunately, climate change is a bitter reality in the contemporary world. Some people believe that it is time to eliminating climate change, whereas others oppose the argument and wanted to learn new techniques to survive with it. This essay initially will discuss both views and further, I will write my point of view. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, it is imperative to understand the causes of changing the environment in the world. To illustrate, countries must identify the issues that are provoking different humidity. This will help them estimate the problems that aggravate the matter and then assist us in solving the issues. Hence, it is significant to find out the prevailing circumstances and then identify the resolutions. \r\n\r\nSecond, learning the tactics to live with the severe weather conditions is also important. However, this might intensify the issue rather than minimise the problem. For example, planting more trees without minimising the carbon emissions will only solve half of the problem. Hence, without restricting countries on the carbon issue, nations will not be able to fix the climate conditions. In addition to that, with the sudden changes in the environment, it is impossible to learn to live with it, as the weather conditions and worsening on yearly basis. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, it is imperative to take actions against the changes in weather as it does not only affect one nation but the world and this will continue for the generation to come.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, nations need to make efforts to work on temperature change and people should also learn to survive with the different weather conditions. In order to, save the earth it is significant to focus on the issue of temperature transformation than to expect people to live with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" is an article in which the auother describes the new technology Facial Action Coding System. This newly invented technology can detect your mood just by your face. It constructs a 3-D computer model of your face, all 44 major muscles. Using this technology to read emtional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nIn the article it said, \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" When students are on a computer atempting a lesson, it can calculate their expressions and send feedback to the teacher. If the teacher wants to, they can modify the lesson if the feedback wasn't good. For example, the students can frown if they don't like it, and smile if they do. It's a good way for a teacher to get feedback of what the students actually think.\n\nMost schools are turning to you do everything on computers. Some schools make it where you have to purchase a computer and you take it home. They don't have to buy textbooks, everything is just on the computer. When you miss a day because of snow you aren't actually missing a day. You do the lesson for that day on Elearn at home and you don't have to make up that snow day. Even at home you can get feedback from students because they do their lessons on their computers. You can learn a lot from facial expressions and Facial Action Coding System is a good way for teachers to learn what students like and what they don't, even from home.\n\nSome people will argue that students won't be truthful and they will just make it a joke. The Facial Action Coding System can tell if you are being truthful or not. For instance, the article says, \"in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways, using the sygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. Faces don't lie. These muscles are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity is being truthful.\"\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a good way for teachers, principals, and guidance counselars to get feedback. It's valuebale in the classroom as well as outside. Maybe the next move is putting it in big cooperations or little companies!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Compared with the past, the number of visitors is increasing all over the world. Each country has a sightsee which shows their culture and history. Museums are one of the sights. Some people believe that a museum should become a place an entertainment that is enjoyable for the population. However, others think the aim of a museum is to educate. Basically, I support the second view for one major reason.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the basis of creating museums is to learn. Whether you be a student or a visitor, museums are the best way to know about the arts, history, and culture which those are you've studied or you want to see in the country that you've traveled.\non the other hand, some of the crowd believe that museums are a kind of entertainment to make people enjoy where they are.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, museums are the best and simplest way to learn history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People think that driverless cars are in our near future. I think they are not going to be because people still have to drive them, they are not safe, and they will cost a lot of money. I think that driverless cars are pointless.\n\nPeople will still have to drive the so called \"driverless car.\" According to the text, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" The cars will not be totally driverless because if there is a work zone, an accident, when pulling in and out of driveways, or dealing with complicated traffic the person in the driver seat will have to take over the car. This means the driver will have to stay alert at all times.\n\nIf you get in a car accident with a driverless car, you will not know who is to blame-the driver or the manufacturer. The text states, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" No one will want to buy a driverless car because they do not want to get in an accident. The driver's of the car will say it's the manufacturers fault, but the manufacturer will says it is the driver's fault.\n\nDriverless cars are going to be so expensive. No one will want to buy them except for rich people. The text also states, \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack.\" This shows that it cost a lot of money to build driverless cars, so the selling price is going to be even higher because they have to make a profit from them.\n\nOn the other hand, some people believe that the driverless car is the next best thing. An example is, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bring in-cer entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instanly when the driver needs to take over-something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" Some people like this idea because they will not be bored when they are waiting to drive.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that driverless cars are pointless. They are not even \"driverless cars\" because people will still have to drive, it is not very safe, and it is going to cost a lot of money. There will lots of accidents and then people will stop buying them and trying to return the ones they have bought.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be very useful in the near future. When we all recive one, that can be alot more safe for us but only if we all get them. Having a computer that is programed for our safety can be very helpful protectiong our lives. We all should have driverless cars as soon as they get out because they can save lives and help free up our very bussy scheduals.\n\nIf we get driverless cars everyone has to have one for this to work the best in my oppinin. If we all have driverless cars on the same roads as some other normal cars, that can bring danger to us. Trafic can't move as smoothly as wanted because the driverless car would have to worry about the normal car and consily deal with his driving decitions. This will end up slowing down trafic and possible making the human take over which is not the goal.\n\nIf everyone had driverless cars they will be no chances that the cars will crash. They are programed and in comunication with the other cars relaying information back and forth of where it is going and what lanes it needs to be in. The cars will let you in and you will never be hurt in a car crash again.\n\nHaving a driverless car can free you up to get some much needed free time, or get some last minite work done. If the car is driving you can sit back and relax. You can even just sit and look out the window and see all the things you would have missed driving with your eyes always 100 percent focest on the road. No more consitly worring about what the person ahead of you is doing or some one comes out of nowhere and hits you, causing your death. With the computers everyone will be driving the same, meaning you can get to your desination fast and safe.\n\nAll in all the driverless car is the safest and smartest idea I can think of when it comes to the future of driving cars. It has so many advatages to it you couldn't cover it all. To the safety of your body, to getting what needs to be done. Taking away driving is the most resonable thing you can think of doing. Driverless cars is just the smart way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hey! The names Luke Bomberger,And it's really \"cool\" to be a Seagoing Cowboy,How bout' you be one to? When your a Seaging Cowboy you can go and explore places that look interesting to you,oh...and I went to Veince,And I guessed it was pretty intersting and also,Italy and China. I \"graduated\" in highschool and I had two part jobs until someone offered me a job as a Seagoing Cowboy,Well..I couldn't resist,but to say yes.\n\nAnyways....\n\nTheres also different reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys,its not all about exploring new things if you already knew, You can learn play stuff like \"sports\" or learn values or get some pointers of working as a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nWill you ever help someone,So we can make it seem like were \"useful hard workers\"? Hope so.. :\|\n\nBut....\n\nIm glad to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\",And I hope join us and we can do lots of things together to help eachother out,remeber im Luke Bomberger and Im a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nBye Bye :P", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Why becuase it has been called the \"Evening Star.\" It's one of the brightest points of light. Venus is the secod planet away from the sun.\n\n97 percent carbon dioxide blankets is made of Venus. On Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees. Thats 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. The weather Venus experience is different. The range to volcanoes and earthquakes happen more.\n\nVenus is very rocky sediment. Venus has many valleys, mountains,and craters. Such as Earth does. So Venus is really just like us. Venus seem indisputable.\n\nNASA has been sending humans to Venus to find out more on Venus. To see what more it has to give to the world. Researcher plan on putting machines on Venus. For more data.\n\nIn Conclusion, I feel that the author was right. We will start looking at Venus a different way. Hopefully this can help us in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a good invention to have because they can prevent night crashes. Many car crashes occur when a person is tired or drunk. This car will take care of your driving if you're drunk or in a bad situation when you can't drive such as, being pregnant and alone.\n\nFirst of all, let's say you are on a road trip with your family, its really late at night, your kids are asleep and you're really trying to stay awake. You remember you own a driverless car so you know you can sleep for a bit and if the car needs your assitance, you will be notified in some soart of way. For example, it will shake your seat, or even make a noice and alert you.\n\nDriverless cars will help pregnant women when they have no one else with them and they're going into labor. Since pregnant women can't drive , especially if they are about to have a baby, it is a good help for them to have a driverless car. Mostly because they would not have to assit much on the driving part and they can just tell the car where to go if they have a GPS in them.\n\nThese type of cars can be a positive huge help in the future whenever you are drunk driving or pregnant. They will prevent crashes and keep pedestrians safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember time sister used go cream sundaes mom drive around day dad sick meant CAPS cream girl come along mom knew long day car drove past thats little sister decided loud Im hungry I want That said yelling five minutes straight Thats mom yelled you speak another cream getting sister face meant cry even worse mom gave cookie would stay content started driving home heard song radio sister loves put word CAPS cream every song started squirming holding tounge stayed way afternoon didnt speak word entire day So drove past started cry enough I want cream messing went back got thing wanted CAPS cream patient entire day knew hard work little sister learned important lesson day Being patient means good things come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the preferences of many people are increasing constantly regarding the historical background of their residence. This essay will explain the causes and the method that they use searching in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThere are two reasons for this phenomenon. First of all, they believe in faith in terms of religion. Most groups in Thailand are always interested in the places for avoiding the bad situation that goes against the traditional belief. For example, the position of the spirit house is the important rule of the building particularly in Buddhism, they will not be able to relocate automatically. Secondly, they are aware of the safety of their place. A few places might be established for a while and have not ever had any maintenance. As a result, they can perceive that information and find better materials or equipment to fix it as soon as possible.\r\n\r\nThere are many methods of discovering historical backgrounds. The primary one is questioning the neighbours. In many cases, these people have known the root information because they have been living there for a long time. Furthermore, they are able to examine the public record including the blueprint of the structure and the person who is the latest owner from the supervisor directly. These data can be reliable and clear evidence to understand the related history. In other words, they could search by resources such as on the internet or the library. This method will help them to know wider information in a limited time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, humans want to know the background of their living because of some belief to do the appropriate management and security through asking the people in the neighbourhood and checking from trustworthy resources", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People from the NASA think that aliens built the face on Mars, but actually it is a natural landform. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it llook like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nA few days later NASA unveiled tthe image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\n\" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store chechout lines for 25 years! But not everyone was satisfied.\n\nThe Face on Mars is located as 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. Mission controllers prepared to look again. \"It's not easy to target Cydonia,\" says Garvin. \"In fac, it's hard work.\n\n\" Mars Global Surveyor is mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. \"We just don't pass over the Face very often,\" he noted.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common aroud the America West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River PLain of Idaho,\" says Garvin.\n\n\"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same heigh as the Face on Mars.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempt allow dirigibles dock included able put mooring mast top building fear dirigible held single cable would add stress buildings frame amount dirigible wind buildings frame would strong enough would modified strengthened Another obstacle attempting get dirigibles dock wind The building high wind currents volatile constantly shifting result back dirigibles would swivel around around mooring mast obstacle faced builders trying build mooring mast urban area buildings close dirigible could pierced would also dangerous pedestrians city", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars has been said to be created by many things. \"Some people think the face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars.\"(paragraph 5) Other people believe that it is a natural landform. It could have been aliens, but we have yet to find life on Mars. The reason that makes the most sense as to why its there is that it is indeed a natural landform.\n\nSure the land may look like a face but it is simply a natural landform. It is possible that other life-forms were on this planet at some point, but it does not mean that it was created by them. Landforms like these occur here on Earth too. They are common around the American West. These are called buttes or mesas, and buttes are simply \"a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa.\"(paragraph 12)\n\nThis landform even reminds people of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. These two are roughly the same height. The pictures of this mesa has changed over the years. In 1976 it strongly resembled a face. In 1998 it didn't appear as human-like as it did in 1976. And lastly in 2001, it just looks like a simple mesa, no face, no alien markings.\n\nI do realize that it might make sense to you and other people that it could be made by aliens. But we have yet to find actual life on mars, let alone have it be made by non-existent creatures. This object object may seem extraordinary, but it is simply just a mesa on a planet we haven't even found running water on. I would love to say \"Yes, this was actually made by aliens!\" but sadly I cannot because it is simply just a landform.\n\nTherefore it could not have been created by aliens because these landforms appear on Earth. It looks similar to landforms on Earth. It also has been photographed many times over the years with better cameras each time. Scientist can gladly say \"This is only a landform, in fact these also appear on Earth as mesas or buttes.\" In conclusion, this is just a natural landform that was not created by other-worldly beings on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood happiness The congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life warm home This quote explains much loved child hood home The last sentence memoir says I never forget parents turned simple house home really shows much apreciates parents hard work home made The author memoir seems look back childhood happily though family struggled finantially personally", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The smile of the Mona Lisa has\n\neluded people for centuries. The slightly smug look suggests an\n\nemotion that not many people can detect. Luckily, there appears to be a software that can detect one's emotion based off of the facial movements one makes.The software was developed by Dr. Huang of the Beckman Institute, and there could be so many uses that this technology could be applied to. One such example is the classroom, where teachers will know when a student is becoming confused or bored. However, one must ask the questions that this technology brings. In essence, this software is not useful, applicable or effective inside of the classroom because of the cost of the software, the intrusion of privacy, and a host of other problems. Computing technology could have the ability to be useful inside of the classrom, just not this kind.\n\nThe first point that would make teachers unsure is the cost of the software. In the article, there is no mention of the cost of the newly developed software. There are numbers, indeed, but they are simply percentages or single numbers. Based on what the article said, one could assume that the cost of this technology would be high. This would not be a very effective tool for an average American school, but the tech could be applied to richer schools or universities.\n\nSecondly, the software is an intrusion of privacy in the school. Although most public schools are indeed public places where civilians expose themselves, it also has a private element to it. Think of it as a small shard of individuality and alone time, like when one is at lunch. The software, if mounted on a camera or a tripod, would be able to observe every single student and every emotion in the room. Schools do need safety, indeed , but the use of this technology in an academic situation just seems proposterous. An alternative use would be to use this technology in hospitals, where nurses could percieve the emotion of patients, and whether they are in pain or not.\n\nAlthough the technology developed by Dr. Huang and his colleagues is certainly impressive, the use of it in a school enviroment seems odd and misinformed. Schools are still meant to be relatively private places where people can feel safe and secure. The costs of this technology is unknown, but it is likely that it is not cheap. Artificial intelligence is meant to be used as efficiently as possible, and although scientists do have free reign on what they use this software for, applying it in schools is not the best way to make use of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is debatable whether young adults are tremendously influential by their friends in terms of behaviors and daily life situations, which is called peer pressure. I would argue that youngsters might addicted to unhealthy substances and lessen the interest for education because of the bad friends, and these disadvantages far outweigh any potential advantage.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, one downside of the peer pressure might be that they could lead to addiction of illegal substances such as, alcohol and cigaratte smoking. To be precise, if one addicted substance friend is in their social circle, it is enough to persuade others on using them. For example, according to police reports, most youngers, below 17 years age, are rehabilitated due to coccain addiction which first introduced by their best friend. Another negative reason is that peer force could lessen the interest of education. In other words, they may always have more willing for chatting, spending more time on phone screen or even engaging with risk associated activities such as, swimming in the unknown place, which ultimately pay less attention for study. Therefore, this will tend to alter children’s way of thinking, behavior as well as personality to a great extent.\r\n\r\nHowever, although having similar aged partners may bring many drawbacks, they may also help to overcome such bad situations. That means interlligent and skillful friends guide their peers to perform well with more difficult subjects, when it comes to struggling mathematics. For instance, when I was facing difficulty in some maths, all my friends always supported me to overcome it and was able to higher score in final exams. Hence, this might a great way to boost their skill, confident and personality.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though good relationship with peers would make positive environment in one’s life, I believe these drawbacks greatly overshadow the the upsides that they may tempt to behave poorly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say that there is a face on Mars, but actually it is just a rock formation called a mesa. This mesa was first discovered in 1976 by NASA and their project Viking 1. They thought that the mesa was actually a face that was made by aliens but they were wrong.\n\nAt first they thought it was a face because it showed signs of a human. When they took the first picture of the face it looked as though there were facial features. The first picture they took in 1976 showed the face had eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Although it looked like a face the facial features were just shadows that were cast off of the face.\n\nAfter further research NASA found out it was only a mesa. Viking 1 had made a mistake in taking the picture. They decided to take the picture when there was a\n\nfog that made a haze on the picture which caused the mesa to look more like a face. That is why NASA said that the mesa was a face on Mars, because the fog made it have facial features.\n\nWhat made most people scared about the face on Mars though were the conspiracy theorists. They made it sound like aliens were the ones that made the face on Mars. It spread around so quickly that it was made into a movie and it haunted people that were at the grocery store checkout line. It also appeared in in books, magizines, and evev in radio talk shows, but after NASA had better equipment and was more prepared they took a better photo of the face and concluded it was in fact a mesa.\n\nSo now you know the truth behind the face on Mars, and why it went on for over 20 years. You know that it is not a face that was creatd on Mars by aliens. It is just a mesa that was created naturally on the surface of Mars just like on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals suggest the society must take actions to live with the global warning rather than to avoid environmental-related issues as climate change. I fully disagree that people think it is better to develop technology to live with rather than try to decrease and solve the climate change.\nIn my opinion, if human could think about a way to live with climate change, it means that they have already thought, they failed to repared damages of global warming. Everyone should reduce their greenhouse gases thanks to their actions as wasting less, taking more public transports or stopping overconsumption. Even if local scale is a significant part to decline climate change, there are also governments and corporations which should decrease their polluting actions. Moreover, it is not as it could not work because during Covid's period when each country minimized its actions, the climate change slumped back and it is essential even crucial.\nFuthermore, if people suggest to find a way to live with it, it illustrates that the entire Earth's planet could be collasped or may be destroyed. It depicts a negative perception of our forthcoming living's environment.\nI am convinced this environment is not the quality of life that I would share to my offspring. If I had the power to solve the climatic issues, I would do everything I can and offer a better condition and prosperity of a healthy environment to the next generation.\nTo conclude, I extremely disagree to think about living with the climate change instead of solving it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of driverless cars is a decent idea, although it does have it's downsides. The idea of drivers and passengers not having to drive themselves would provide a luxury feel to most participants in the driverless car \"movement.\" This could also help with very common safety issues: texting while driving, intoxicated while driving, or just flat out not paying attention.\n\nIn paragraph 10, we see that not only is the driverless car and idea, it's happening. If these manufacturers are still running on track, then we should start to see the sprout of driverless cars this year. This implys that people need to start thinking and making decisions on whether they want to sit back and let a computer do the work or not. While I can see the problem of boredom, stated in paragraph 8, I think that this would empower the driver more. He/she would be able to kick and and enjoy the ride without paying 100 percent of their undivided attention to the road. Long trips and vacations would be made much easier with this, or even for truck drivers who drive late at night.\n\nThe United States has been exposed to a large amount of deaths from texting while driving, this could be the end of that. While they would still need to pay slight attention to the warning signals given that they need to grab the wheel, if the driver picked up his/her phone while a computer drove them around, it wouldn't be too bad. Another issue imposed on drivers is being intoxicated and driving. This would also be solved with a driverless car. The driver wouldn't pose a danger to themselves or the passengers in the vehicle if being almost chauffered around. This however could still be an issue if the car needed the driver to take control.\n\nI believe that a driverless car would most definitely benefit drivers everywhere. It could solve many issues that stand due to full attention driving and would cut the death rate from car accidents by a large chunk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As crazy as living without a car sounds, more and more people are doing it. One popular reason for it is for a healthier and happier lifestyle. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's short story titled In\n\nGerman Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\nHeidrun Walter reports \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Her and many others like her in the town of Vauban, Germany have experienced the difference and felt stress go away. The city has banned driveways and home garages, encourging the rule of living \"car-free.\" The people rely on public transit, bicycles and their own two legs. While many people are stressing to get a car, the people of the town feel stressed if they have a car. Over half the population sold their cars to move there, and don't regret a thing. In the article titled\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota , Andrew Selsky quotes Carlos Arturo Plaza as saying \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress\" as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\n\nAlso Carlos Arturo Plaza goes on to say \"[it's a good oppurtinity to] lower air pollution.\" People are realizing how many pollutants that cars emitt into the atmosphere. One example place is Paris, known for their terrible smog, has finally done something to clean it up. Robert Duffer wrote in\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\n\n\"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" The law stated even numbered license plates couldn't drive one day, and the other, odd liscense plates couldn't. A little thing like this had a big effect. Duffer then reported \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\" Elizabeth Rosenthal in the aritcle\n\nThe End of Car Culture showed the idea \" if [these] patterns persists...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions.\" Americans are partically to blame for pollution. Our need for the newest, biggest, best things, has come at a cost, and more than money. Green-house gases are stacking up, and we have to take a stand some time. Rosenthal goes on to describe political leaders are working to fix this too, \"President Obama's abitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions [were] unveiled last week.\"\n\nIn places already practicing the no car rule, environments have improved; more than pollution wise. Andrew Selsky reported of \"the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" and \"uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks.\" These two additions of Bogota, Colombia have inspired many people to turn in their keys, and take a hike instead. Not only have these changes made people more happy, but it makes their city more beautiful and they are starting to get outdoors and see it. The author reports that \"municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event [car-free day] and were enthuriastic,\" amung the people visiting was the Mayor of Paraguay's capital city. When more people see the effects, they want to do the same thing. Columbia's one day event has brought about much talk in neighboring towns and even \"two other Colombian cities, Calli and Valledupar, joined the event.\"\n\nOn the other side of the argument, many car industries are trying to compete with these new ideas and technology. Rosenthal quotes in\n\nThe End Of Car Culture\n\n\"But it could have negative implications for the car industry. Indeed, companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves \"mobility\" companies with broader product range beyond the personal vehicle\" As humans advance into the ideas of walking, biking, or taking public transportation, car companies strive to become known for things other than cars. They want to be able to sell you things still, even if you don't want or need a car. Later she writes how Bill Ford proposed the fresh idea at the Mobile World Congress that car dealers should \"partner with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which 'pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" This long quote simply means having all forms of transportion and the new technology in communications to be one, for the better of the people.\n\nWith or without cars, we all are always on the move. Some cities have adapted new ideas to get from place to place, or simply old ideas, being put back into action. Although Henry Ford would probably be dissapointed at his invention being faded out, Mother Nature would be pleased of us taking care of Earth. We never know what the future holds, but we do know, we'll always only have one home, so we better take care of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This was not made by aliens because if you think about Mars, could have had a civilization long ago.This could have been made by the dust or it's just a rock covered up by dust. Also if you look at the picture you can see a wierd looking object in the picture right next to the face. So, both of these things are really much the same. But, if you look at the strange object next to the face you can see it could be something else. If you look at the the 1976 photo you can see that it is a an object but, it is covered up by dust. Now the 1998 photo looks more like a face now at ths point, I think NASA is up to something just look at it the 1976 to 1998. Plus in the text it says \"when the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform.\" \"There was no alien monument after all.\" But a reason people thought this was because, alien incidents were happening around this time starting with Betty and Barney Hill but that's another story. So now NASA can't find it no more because, my opinion it got blown away because it was a rock. To support my claim in the text it says \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian pyrimamids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" Thats true so no one made this it's just a rock and dust from the enviorment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are obviously cars without drivers. Many have envisioned such an idea as revolutionary like Sergey Brin. As a matter of fact google has bulit such cars since 2009. However some people see this as a flawed idea and see this as a bad thing. I'm honestly split about each side.\n\nDriverless cars do have a lot of positives. They are ecologicly friendly, so they save both gas and money. Also, they are way more flexible than a bus could be, since it can go anywhere. Not to mention they are way more safer than normal vehicles, alerting people who are distracted by anything while on the road. Speaking of safety, that seems to be a marjor area that is adressed. For instance, when there is a problem the car would state it and giver the passenger the option to take over. Another way is the cars expensive sensors that detect when there's going to be a problem, and automaticly breaks the car to avoid any damage.\n\nHowever, there is some glaring issues that must be adressed. First off people will get bored beccause they are passengers. Plus being alarmed of this everytime your dozing off, by the car itself, isn't going to help anyone, just annoy them. On top of this driving cars is a rite of passage into adulthood. Taking that freedom away is just wrong. Not to mention, whos to blaim in an accident involving two of these things from different companies. It's stated in the paragraph that new laws must be made for these kinds of cases, and that could take years.\n\nIn conclusion, I'm split about this idea. Driverless cars might be the next evolution for the motor companies, but it is flawed in some rather serious degrees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After graduating from school, students have a dilemma, which is whether they should pursue higher education or look for a job in order to have successful career life. While two of these career paths have many advantages , I believe that getting academic qualifications before going to work is the best.\n\nOn the one hand, studying in universities brings us various benefits, that many choose to have a better career. Firstly, it gives students great opportunities to gain academic knowledge, which is the basis for career development. The courses and curriculums at university teach students the basic knowledge and therefore they gain a deeper insight into the fields they major in. This knowledge would play a vital role in helping students do their jobs better at the workplace. Secondly, students graduating from university would be officially qualified by academic organization institutes, thus, they would have more chances to get high-paying and position jobs than those who do not have university degrees. It is common that companies would consider candidates background knowledge as their top priority when hiring employees. \n\nOn the other hand, students gain a variety of benefits when having a job instead of pursuing an academic path. The first benefit is they would have more time to improve their practical skills, which are crucial for their jobs, they spend at least 4 years more than their peers, training and learn from their colleagues, work environment and their own experience. That would give them a higher chance to succeed in their career. A salesperson would have much more time to concentrate fully on building up relationships with customers and improve social skills , for example, rather than wasting four years at university to learn too many irrelevant courses. The second benefit is they will be likely independent and able to overcome difficulties better than the other groups. Students starting their jobs earlier have to deal with many problems, for example, covering their expenses, earning a living, without supports from families , coping with stress at work. By means of these experiences, they become more mature and will-experienced, which is also primary for their success at the workplace.\n\nIn conclusion, individuals have their own decisions when choosing a career path, whether having a job earlier or gaining qualifications in the academic world, in my opinion, the former has more positive aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" you can infer that the development of driveless cars can be an issue. The article tells us how the driveless car will benefit us, but we don't truly know if it will help mostly in a positive or negative way. The article never grabbed my attention on how safe it the driveless car may be or what harm it can and may do. Overall, the article is informative but many would want to know the facts and if it would benefit them in a positive way.\n\nFirst, many would want to know, is the driverless car safe? In the second paragraph in the article it states,\n\n\"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\" but it should depend on how many tests they've taken and how many crashes occured during the testing. As you read further into the article it does not discuss the reliablity and safety the driverless car provides. I believe that the safety of any individual who\n\npursues to purchase a driverless car, needs to read for more information than the article has provided. The article doesn't continue to discuss the safety of the driver or what could happen, they inform us with facts and early history to the development of smarter cars which is why it would be an argument to ask if the driverless cars are safe.\n\nSecondly, I believe many would question whether the driverless car benefits us in more of a positive or negative way. The article does speak about additions as to why it is a driverless car and what it can do to with hold the name, but it does that mean it is a good thing for many individuals? I don't believe that one article will be able to supply all information on whether the driverless car is benefitting anyone mainly in a positive way. It may be great that the driverless car has come with anitlock brakes, taking us wherever we desire, special touch sensors and only being able to drive on its own on certain roads, but it doesn't have further information on how many times it has been tested or approved that everything the article is saying is true. Therefore, I believe that we should be questioning or having second thoughts on to whether the driverless car benefits us in a positie or negative way.\n\nAlso, I would want to argue or question to whether the driverless car is beneficial to the environment and others around us if they are ever passed by the law to be driven on the roads. In the article, they give information about driverless cars that would make them seem like the better alternative. As I read through the article there were only two paragraphs talking about safety of others but never did I find any detail as to whether it may be beneficial to the environment or others around the driverless car. If the driverless car was had a negative impact on the environment and others that surround it on a daily basis, it may need to be questioned. Many know already that the environment suffers enough from other pollutants and could possibly get worse over time, so why add another negative impact on not just the environmet, but OUR environment. Therefore, I believe that many should look into whether the driverless car is beneficial to the environment and others as well.\n\nLastly, I would want to oppose the development of driverless cars. Based on the article, there is not enough important information containing whether the driverless car is truly a helpful new development. It describes new additions with new technology and how cars have developed over the years, but mainly I would rather know the safety it provides. Safety is always important when it comes to transportation and coming out with a new driverless car may be a risk many are willing to take, but overall I would argue as to whether the driverless car is a great benefit to others and the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hot topics in today's world are pollution and global warming. While there is still debate, many people agree that cutting down society's use of cars would help the world be a better place. Greater limitation of car use will reduce pollution and better society.\n\nTo commence, reduction of car use will reduce pollution. Pollution is essentially hurting the planet as a whole, as well as all the organisms living in it. In fact, Paris, France, has recently taken action against car use effectively. According to Robert Duffer, \"[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" In only a few days, after banning half of the diesel and gas-run cars in the cities per day, \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\" If such a change can happen in under a week, the entire world could benefit greatly from adopting similar policies. In the U.S, things are also turning around for the better. According to\n\nThe New York Times\n\n's article, \"The End of Car Culture,\" \"transportaion is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants.\" This is largely due to car culture in the U.S, which is fortunately declining. In fact, in the same article, it is said \"As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\" This shows that America is well on it's way to becoming a greener nation without having to make dramatic changes to it's way of life.\n\nContinuing, more limited car use can better society, or at least work in a community. Society is currently too dependant on cars. However, Vauban, Germany is starting to change that. In another\n\nNew York Times article, Elisabeth Rosenthal states, \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\" The remaining thirty percent of people hardly use their own cars for anything more than distant traveling, as most of Vauban's streets are \"car-free.\" This can show that a population of people, (in this case over 5,000 of them) can survive without constantly being behind a wheel. In another case, in Bogota, Columbia, there is a designated holiday to celebrate not using cars. Appropriately titled, \"Day Without Cars\" is an annual event held in order \"to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog,\" according to the\n\nSeattle Times's\n\nAndrew Selsky. While it may sound silly, the event had a huge turnout in spite of bad weather. Other cities joined into the fun after a few years, and also in the article, Enrique Riera, the mayor of a Paraguay town, said of the event, \"'These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders.'\" The simple effort to better the world has brought people together for a good cause.\n\nIn retrospect, the idea of declining the use of cars will help humanity as a whole greatly. Doing so would simultaneously slow down the destruction of the Earth for all organisms inside of it, and also help the human race better itself socially.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine, a world where there is nobody driving the car because it revolves around computers telling the car where to go, or how tall it is. Then again, what happens if there is a miscommunication between the main power source providing the route and location, and the actual driverless vehicle itself? How will the vehicle know where to go if it does not have the modern technology. If something was to happen, how would it do something different if it is programmed to follow specific orders, demands or reasoning. Driverless vehicles should not be allowed to drive unless it has a 100% rate. There are multiple people dying from car accidents, or car malfunction.\n\nThere are multiple ways in which cars and their receivers can be disconnected. For example, the Internet works 99% of the time, but there's always that 1% to were the Internet is no longer functioning. This can be accounted towards all technology. If a car is on the road, and it has to make a turn from either Chicago or Detroit, people would expect it to turn the direction they are trying to go. But if the server becomes disconnected, people might be heading to Detriot instead of Chicago. Malfunctions happen all the time with vehicles, and when the control is no longer in the drivers hands, the only one that can be blamed for a tragedy taking place is the company monitoring and directing the vehicle.\n\nCompanies also seem to forget that the new technology is increasing, but does not fully know everything. Imagine, telling the car to go to the grocery store, and on the way there a kid runs in the middle of the street. Can people really rely on sensors better than their right foot slamming on the brake? Company's have to think if the issues as \"what if.\" They need to master the technology and also needs to run multiple successful test in order to get prototype up and running. Still, there are years to come before the world can handle driverless cars.\n\nIn the conclusion, driverless cars needs time to look at all the different possibilities on how they can improve safety and performances. Drivers need to be alerted when there is a malfunction with their providers company, and also needs to be aware of things that could possibly happen while on the road in a driverless vehicle. Eventually, after all the necessary actions are taken into place, the evolution of vehicles will improve jurasstically. But until then, lets see how things go from here.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do you think the \"Face of Mars\" was made by aliens. I think it is just part of the landscape. I don't believe aliens created a \"human face\" on Mars. Idon't believe it because the mouth and eyes are fored by shadows and NASA is based off research and theorist are based off conspiracies.\n\nFirst, the mouth and eyes are formed by shadows. You can see the face from a far, in the picture tooken in 1976. When the picture was taken up close in 2001, it just looks like a mesa or a butte. Up close on a pictures, taken in 1976-2001, doesn't look like a face. It looks more like a messa or butte.\n\nSecond, the NASA is based off research and the theorists are based off conspiracies. NASA have checked three or four times. Theorists only think they know. They were just guessing. Jim Garvi, the chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, says he looked and it was only a mesa.\n\nBased on the evidence I have, I think the \"Face of Mars\" is apart of Mar's landscape.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear edditer local newspaper In opinion computers positive effect people I support advances technology I believe positive thing teaches handeye coordination gives people ability learn far away places people even allows us talk online others In following poragraphs I share opinions right opinions believe Firstly handeye coordination plays big part lives many us sports Now sports nt best getting better best Sports take alot practice way computer games though I bet nt know games help develope handeye coordination Defeating monsters really helps sports Catching throwing big part alot sports thats handeye coordination think get practice computer games So next time computer play som games like practicing sports help devolop handeye coordination need suceed sport Secondly favor computer use gives us oppurtunity learn places people around world Think computers want know something might locate around book tells could take type want know google bing theres answer This ability quickly find looking allows freedom learn spend precious time things want take locate read right book As see ability big help need know something fast So help use computers make life easyer Thirdly computers way communicate let talk people around might usaly able This great way stay contact wen people move go away buisness trip go vacation even meet new people Say cany get hold someone phone important talk could email online ahave could message This would save hessle keep calling Also want see could us webcome see instead talking As paragraph shows internet computers open ever As I wrote I showed even fraction computers good My reasons computers positive thing ever negitive thing followed help us learning things could nt communicate others help us develope hand eye coordination I hope I write conclusion opinions heard letter helped see computers great thing bad one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of things have been changing with technology. Things have started to get way more advanced in the technology field. People have been coming up with all sorts of things, for instance they have robots, very advanced cellphones, among other things. Now they are trying to make a car that can drive itself? That's a little extreme.\n\nWhat's going to be left for humans to do on their own? Not a lot by the sounds of some of the things they are coming out with. These cars should not be allowed, they should be illegal, or not even have been made to begin with. What would happen if something were to go wrong with the car while someone was in it? These cars sound way too dangerous. The article states that \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". That doesnt really prove anything, something could happen with the car. Even if the car tells the driver to take over the wheel if something were to happen, what if it didn't? These cars are too dangerous and technology has taken over way too much, and it's getting way out of hand. Humans need to be left something to do. Teenagers get so excited when they finaly turn 16 and are able to drive, why let a car like this take that excitement from the teens? These cars are not a good idea.\n\nA driverless taxi system would ruin a lot for some people. Think of taxi drivers, what would they do if they got ripped from a job that they have been doing most of their life? These cars are a dangerous and unnecessary invention to bring into this world. Humans are already lazy, now they wont have to drive? Driving is fun, and useful in this world, we can do it on our own. We dont need a driverless taxi system. Technology is already as advanced as it needs to be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what other planets are like? Have you ever gotten the questioned yourself about these other planets like... Have scientists found other lifeforms? Have scientists found resorces on other planets like they have on Earth? well then if thats the case let me explain you why \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" There could possibily be other life forms on other planets and even Venus, how there's life forms on Earth, typicaily Humans, Animals and even Bacteria like Algy and Fungi, In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" In paragraph 4 it says \"Venus could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Another reason why Venus is worth studying is, like the Sun its the hottest thing in our solar system, what if Venus is not as hot as the Sun but what if Venus is hot for anything to be on there, in the article \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" In paragraph 3 it says \"Venus tempreture average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\", or what if it relates to Earth in many ways? In the article in paragraph 4 it says \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans\" This is all the evidence on why Venus is worth discovering dispite the dangers while, Scientists may have discovered a bit of Venus and a bit of Mars unfortionatly for now some of those planets remain a mystery while some are on the very peak of changing from the unknown to the discoverable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Holy Avacadoes! A new computer software has just come out, and it is designed to insure that this software can recognize our emotions, feelings, and best of all... FACIAL EXPRESSIONS! You may think this is a good idea, or maybe even a bad idea. Never the less this was not intended to be a quote \"AS SEEN ON TV\" commercial promoting a computer software for $19.99. It may be a good piece of technology, and a smart way to see things from another perspective. While many may argue that using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is valuable. This may be the best idea I have ever heard of, espcially in an age where people are using facial recongnition to recognize who is coming in and out of the schools, and people can track others medical histories, and so on, and so forth. Classrooms should be more reliable when it comes down to facial recogntion, and cyberbulling.\n\nOne example on how classrooms should be using facial recognition especially with students, can be shown on paragraph #7 whenever the author mentions that home computers can't always rely on facial recongiton, but that school computers can and should. \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions.\" As this paragraph is shown to readers, the author is trying to mention a point that home computers can be slow, and may not recognize faces easily, and that right there can lead to stalkers, and hacking occuring as well. Not only that but school computers can get hacked too, but with facial recogonition, they can stop that from happening.\n\nAnother example on how classrooms should use facial expressions especially with students is displayed fully in paragraph #5 when the author states that quote the \"calculation\" to recognize faces is so complex now that you can recognize everyone's face on a computer no matter if you mention there name. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look at her face.\" This shows us the readers that we can identify peoples faces, on either a computer, or in person. It can be very useful for counslers because they can identify who this person, or people are walking into there offices.\n\nFinally, the last example on how classrooms should use computer facial recognition especially with students, can be traced to paragraph #9 they claim that quote \"(Putting on a happy face\" actually works!) this shows us the readers that whenever the computers try to recognize your face, they can also see how you were feeling, whether it was happy, sad, or even emotion. And pictures can be a good recource to identify a cas, or in the case a student.\n\nIn conclusion these examples I showed were good whenever it came down to finding out what students are in where, but it can help not only in a classroom, but aslo in the world of law enforcement, and our phones. But if you use it incorrectly, you may have serious trouble in your hands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have been significant developments in relation to communication in recent years, however it is often argued that this technological progress had had a detrimental effect on many people’s relationships. Although in numerous cases damage is being done to social interactions, I also strongly maintain that there are undeniable benefits that have been brought by internet-based methods of communication.\nCorresponding online can clearly be a hindrance in many situations. The principal drawback is that social websites such as Facebook can be very addictive, therefore people spend less time communicating face to face. It is commonplace to see group of friends or family members who are gathered together in a social situation, however their main focus is frequently their smartphones. Secondly, the anonymous nature of online communications can also be very damaging. Due to the fact that posts and group messages are often sent without the recipient knowing the sender personally, users are frequently more thoughtless, or even abusive, compared to what they can be held accountable for their words.\nDespite the aforementioned harmful aspects, the latest communication devices are also advantageous in a variety of respects. Firstly, prior to the introduction of the internet, there were limited opportunities to keep in contact with others. Many examples have been seen of childhood friends who lost contact as a result of moving to a new town or attending a diffrerent university. With the introduction of social networking, this situation is now easily avoidable. In addition, social media also provides opportunities to build new relationships with likeminded people. By taking advantage of social groups and mutual friend recommendations, connections can now be built anywhere across the world. Looking back 20 years, it was uncommon for friends to be made outside of a local community.\nTo conclude, there is no doubt that communication methods have been revolutionised over the last two decades. Whether this progression benefits or harms people socially, however, depending largely on individual circumstances. To avoid the potential issues presented above, it is vital that sufficient time is also devoted to more traditional forms of socialising.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I Think is a great technology to now the students emotional expresions,and now their felings with that technology and can prevent allout of things. the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like humans muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit. Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologist, such as Dr. Paul Eckman,creator of FACS [ Facial,Action Coding system]. Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happines,surprise, anger,disgust,fear,and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. In my conclusion imagine a computer that knows when you' re happy or sad that is awesome in my opinion that is Great we can prevent bullyng in the future bring help for students and other people, we can now if the student or person is in difficult times in her life or is happy in my conclusion i think that this technology will help the people in the future, the New Software is A great job that is my conclusion Thanks you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience something someone like waiting someone something patience part life I sometime dont patience I patience without patience get something lift want patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the idea of driverless cars is a good idea at some points but it also can be dangerous because what if the cra messes up when its driving its self and you hit something and the person dies that was in the car who would be held responsible for that person loosing there lives over a silly mental mistake but i think its a good idea also because if you go on a trip and you feel like resting with outh pulling over to the side of the road you can just make your car drive for you.\n\nBut i really like the idea of what google did when it said that the seat vibrate when you are in danger or you are about to hit something. Or maybe when you have an important text all you have to do is let your car drive its self while you text whoever back i think it would stop mostly all the wrecks from texting and driving. Or another positive fact is what if you had a baby in the back seat and it was crying you can let your car drive while you stop the baby from crying or ETC.\n\nOr if you were smoking or eating something your car would drive for you i think that would stop all the wrecks from people. But how does your car know where to go do you put a address or a destanation where you want to go.\n\nAlso another good idea is if you had an disabled human being that cant walk or drive then that would be good for them cause they dont got to worry how to get places or depend on a ride from somebody.\n\nI like how some of these cars have sensors to alert the driver of something there about to hit or someone is about to hit them, another negative thing is what if a child gets in a car and they get the car starts to drive by there self and the child dies or something. And would this effect the age you have to get a liscence?\n\nBut overall I think it should be up to the person that purchaes the car and it should be there responsibilty and there risks, I dont think that the dealer ship should be held accountable for there risks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everybody knows that school time is very important in people's life. Everybody learns life begins in school such as relationships, friendly, coulter, economic system e.g. that's why I disagree schools goal is only to be a good citizen or worker. İt has some reasons.\r\n\r\nFirst, schools give us politicians people, economists, doctors or engineers. İf we don't go to school that couldn't be this job. For example, Ali is from Ankara he went to school and won a medical university and he is a good doctor now. İf he thought of school only for being a worker or a good citizen, can he be a doctor?\r\n\r\nSecond, schools aren't only for jobs, İt mainly pass time with friends, learning life through games ( because we begin life by games in school) learn some of our coulters at school. For instance, many people go to school then finish school and they don't do special work then contusion life. many people merit with a friend of the school. İf they didn't go to school while they didn't meet their wife or husband.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, every people must go to school until the 12th. class, it is rool in many countries. İn my opinion, school is very important, every country have to make power their education system, it is very important for a developed country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affected cyclist terrain ride determine ride For instance hills dry weather like said flat road replaced short rolling hills The one easy terrain made difficult added frustration dehydration water Also heat contributed plenty whole time Sometimes didnt seem notice feel taking energy Like said The sun beginning beat I barely noticed it He didnt know took drank water affected ability take enough complete ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that most green public areas are currently replaced by several buildings in cities, since people do not realize how those areas are important. However, some people believe that benefits of parks and squares for people and societies are more than those of business buildings. From my point of view, public spaces should be built because of numerous reasons. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, creating parks improves mental and physical health of people. People currently stay alone in small square rooms condominiums in the cities, and there are a few public spaces where people can use to do activities. Hence, having squares and parks assists people to alleviate stress, since they can gather with their peers and families to do activities such as picnics and playing sports in huge green places, making them feel relaxed and enjoy. Furthermore, establishing green places encourages people to play more sports and exercise as in the cities, spaces are limited for some popular sports such as football and running, so green parks will be new places where attract people to enhance physical health.\r\n\r\nSecondly, governments can use squares to support local people in certain careers to generate income. To clarify, governments can launch campaigns to promote art or music by allowing groups of artists to establish exhibitions or clubs to attract interested people. This not only appeals to locals but also tourists to understand and inspire in art and music. In addition, locals can use these public areas to create and display innovative events and concerts to enhance their opportunities to sell local products and tickets to domestic and foreign customers to gain more income.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, creating public areas including parks and squares provides numerous advantages to individuals’ physical and mental health. Additionally, locals also gain benefits from parks by creating special events and gaining revenue from them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First as a scientific NASA scientist i would explain that there is no life at the planet mars and the pictures tooken by the advanced camera showed proof that there is no life forms, but an illusion caused by the planets shadows, that formed a human shaped face in which made citizens of earth wondering is there life on mars, but this is just something that happens on the planet earth in comparision to mars.\n\nThen for example that mars couldn't be created by aliens for example there are many illusional landforms are common around the American West including placeS like Idaho, and etc. It also included historical times when the same thing happened when unusual shadows that made it look like an Eygptian Pharaoh in Cydonia.\n\nIn conclusion there is no life on earth and that it is just shadows that was shaping into a human face, which can be similar to illusions on Earth, and was given proof that the faces were just landforms by technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As cyclist makes journey towards Yosemite setting causes much worry concern In beginning narrator content excited He something lovers heading beautiful destination found short cut save hours time He confidentin directions given old men However continues winding road environment makes doubt theirjudgement The first town comes entirely desertedThough first laughs laster realizes much trouble nt come civilization soon The cyclist runs across ramshackle shed shut factories water supply sinks lower road seems tantalize He passes water pump needs yet water something close toxic A road sign reminds go fast though die nt pick pace He forced look picture ofa happy boy guzzling grape juice dehydrates All features setting addition overpowering heat sun drive narrator breaking point", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When young people finished their studies, they eager to find a work in their chosen career.But in this new era of generation the new graduates are hard to find a job.In this eassy I will discuss my opinion, that the youngsters who is newly finish their studies are not easy to find a job.Because of the high demand of the company and higher demand of experience.\n\nTo commence with,The high demand of other employer to the new graduates are the most huge delimma nowadays. As the result,many young people who is new graduates now are not easy to find work.For an instance,the Engineer,IT,and Law this is higher demand now of our society,that the new graduates are difficult to find a good job in company.Moreover, The company they are essential to understand the situation of new graduates in all university.\n\nA part from from this,The higher experience also of the company is the huge problem of the youngsters.when they are new finished to choose their Fields in their institute, because of this issue some students that newly graduates are stress and feel more tension,when they are want to apply a job.For example, today the famous company are not hired a worker, if the new graduates are not smart and intelligent.Nevertheless,the company they are necessary to understand, the capacity about the experience of young people in this new era.\n\nIn Conclusion,the young people are they are need to find a job in their chosen profession so that they enhance their skills or knowledge.So that in the future they share their experience about of their job.in my opinion, they should understand the situation of new graduates young people in their chosen career so that they can be a good leader or model in future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree that is is a piece of landform. I agree because of what NASA is saying. I agree with them for what they have said in paragraph 7 which was \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all\".\n\nIn pragraph 12 it says that \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West\". In paragraph 10 the text says that \"Each pixel in the 2001 imange spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo\".\n\nWhen they first looked they saw a face, then the second time they looked closer it was just a regualar piece of landform. The person that wanted to publish it so that way everone can see it wanted it to be every where. Well it crtainly did go every where, a lt of people were talking about it and looking at the newspapers.\n\nIn the text it says that \"The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars\". In paragrap 7 it says that \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all\".\n\nIn paragraph 7 it said this \"When they flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper then the original Viking photo\". Also the \"Face on Mars\" has since to become a pop icon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are alot of\n\nnew innovations being made. One of which is driveless cars. That may sound weird, but some car companies such as BMW, Audi, Mercedes-Benz, and Nissan plan to all have cars that are able to drive themselves in a couple of years. How would you like it if your car took over, but alerted you when needed? Crazy right. This might sound cool, but there are also downfalls and regulations to inventing these \"driveless cars.\"\n\nEven though some driveless cars come with antilock brakes and driver assistance, these cars can still have a mind of their own. Some car companies take it to the extreme and spend billions and trillions of dollars to make sure the car is safe and secure, but accidents still may happen. So would it be the driver's fault or the maufacturer's fault? That question is yet to be answered because the car was controlling itself, but also the driver might or might not have been alert and caused the accident to happen. Most people would blame the car simply because it was supposed to be driving itself. There's no surprise that with these type of high-tech cars, accidents may happen because anything could go wrong. It's more important for the driver to be very alert bacause it's just a car, it doesn't have a brain and is not built to do what a human can.\n\nAnother problem would be the sensors. Yes, sensors could be very helpful in any technological situation. There are also downfalls for this too. What if it has a glitch and makes the car turn or stop in a sudden? The driver would lose control of the car because it is doing what it wants. So the most that driver could do is pull the emergency brake in hopes that the car will stop. It might and it might not. Not saying this is a usual everyday situation, but it could happen anytime without expectancy. Alot of problems come with things that are built with many things and high-tech products, anything is bound to happen.\n\nThere are alot of questions that are un-answered about these cars. The most the companies can do is test a couple tie for glitches and setbacks. Accidents due to the car can result in a untasteful lawsuit to the company.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are one of the main accomplishments modern technology has been able to achieve. I believe they will become a cornerstone of computer science on which many other projects will build upon. Although these cars pose a few problems, the possible benefits far outweigh the possible flaws. The myriad uses of computers is rising rapidly, and these excellent pieces of machinery will contribute to their number in the future.\n\nDriving cars can be a somewhat dangerous endeavor. There are multiple distractions that can cause the driver to make a potentially fatal error, chief among them being cellular devices and alcohol. With computer driven cars, both of these issues are nonexsistent. Due to the hands-free nature of computer-driven cars, the ability to use cell phone while being in the driver's seat becomes feasible. Also, computer drivers don't get drunk or distracted by their surroundings as human drivers would. Computers are primarily more efficient than the average human at calculations in math, memorization, and pattern-finding. The same applies to a computer's ability to drive compared to a human being. At this point in time, cars are not completely driven by computers, but they rather assist the person driving with features such as automatically braking, sensing potentially dangerous incoming objects from all direction, and detecting road signs. The technology is beginning to reach a level of dexterity in which they will be able to take complete control of the car, which will ultimately lead to a decrease in car accidents.\n\nAs I stated in the introduction, there are a miniscule number of cons regarding these vehicles, none of which permanently hindering the progress of these cars. One prominent argument withing the prompt is the idea that the technology could malfunction and harm the passengers. However, the way computers work as of the creation of a quicly accessable internet is that many updates are sent to them via networking. This means that the cars can receive a stream of updates for whatever flaws were not ironed out by the companies' rigorous testing process prior to launch, these flaws most likely being few and far in between. Another common issue is that there still needs to be some driver input depending on the situation. This driver input is for the overall safety and integrity of the vehicle. However, as this technology matures and becomes more efficient and consistent, the car will be able to make decisions about the road better than its human counterpart could. The final issue I would like to address is that cell phones or other portable devices not specifically meant for use with the car can not be turned off by the car. Firstly, if the car is self-sustaining, there would be no need to turn off other electronic devices. Secondly, in the event that the vehicle did need to alert the driver while using a cell phone, there are a plethora of methods the car could get the driver's attetion, including, but not limited to: vibrating the seat, making an alert noise with the cars internal speakers, connecting the cell phone in use to the car with an application that has wireless communications access and send an alerts via the aforementioned app.\n\nThese cars are rapidly progressing in their ability to handle situations that could befall the road. If everyone begins using these driverless cars, the cars could communicate with each other and gain information from one another, making car accidents and illegal driving behaviors a thing of the past. This technology is evolving rapidly, and it will only continue moving forwards in consistency.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From some humans perspective, all teens should work in the unpaid employment. They should be demanded to assist in the regional teams in their leisure time. They rely it may profitable to both of the persional junior and common public. Both of them can take gain from this organization. I completely disagree with this opinion and I will explain my viewpoint with relevant examples in this essay.\n Initially, the teenagers which their age from 11 to 19are more flexible than other people. Due to, this period must be spent more beneficial. Because, it may influence to their future life. The adults and also olders should educate them to the forthcoming period. This action is more important than working. As a reason, If youth consume their free time to working, they cannot learn and totally manage own life without knowledge. For example, they cannot find a good job or they can never be masters and always become the ordinary assistants. So it is harmful to working them in the social communities.\n On the other angle, the employment without salary is wrongful situation. They should be paid to their labour, If they work. As a reason of that,in these ages most of their needs provided by their parents.Additionally, maybe some of them don't exist parents. For instance, their mother and father are died or divorced. So, they should take own wage without any obstacles. It is injustice, If they are not paid. Moreover, the money which they took for their work may encourage them to the next time. Instead of the free labor, the managers should inspire them with extra fees.\n On the whole, the teenagers shouldn't be required to work in unpaid employments. They should be busy with their study and hobby. Furthermore, they should be disbursed, If they need to work or money. Additionally, all reasons and examples which I mentioned above are evidence of my perspective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thanks to the development of our society, individuals can now travel to isolated areas, namely the South Pole. Never has this area been exploded before so researchers could discover crucial information for thesis and tourists could appreciate a fabulous landscape. However, discovering those faraway environments could increase environment-related issues such as climatic change.\nSouth Pole is a place which has ever seen human activities before, and it seems to have numerous discoveries to make. Indeed, scientists which fauna and flora are the current studies, could find new mode of the marine life and discover new species. Moreover, people who are interested in travelling to South Pole might now do it, children who dreamed about polar animals could see them. Thus, the tourism should create new jobs and develop economic growth.\nNevertheless, as each breakthrough that the society does, there are repercussions. In this case, the harmful effect of this discovery is global warming because when humans go somewhere, they let a carbon footprint which directly changes the environment. For instance, if individuals had to travel to South Pole, they would only use air or marine transport such as cruise ship which pollute the area with greenhouse gases. As a result, those greenhouse gases can warm nature which, unfortunately, would melt the ice and have a detrimental impact on the landscapes. As a consequence, in the forthcoming decades, this panorama may disappear. Thereby, if scientists want to study this natural area, they could not or in a limited way.\nTo conclude, the advantages could be to discover new landscapes and how species can live in this hostile area. However, just going into this remote natural environment could destroy it before discovering something.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about which factor affects children the most in their lives. While there are many factors which have significant impacts on their development, I believe that the most important one is their family.\n\nOn the one hand, children are influenced by a wide range of factors due to the way that they acquire knowledge. It is scientifically proved that youngsters learn primarily by observing and imitating what they witness. This is the reason why everything going on around children such as television, music and friends can bring enormous effects to their development. For example, there is evidence that if a child watches violent TV shows on a regular basis, he or she will be more likely to become a school bully, in comparison with the ones who do not.\n\nOn the other hand, family performs the most vital role in children’s maturity because of their lack of moral awareness. According to research, although children are able to learn new things rapidly; they, especially the younger ones, normally have a poor sense of right and wrong. As a result, it is essential for them to be oriented by their parents, who are in the closest proximity to them, to become respectable citizens in the future. For instance, in order to help their offspring have a solid academic foundation, which is apparently crucial for their future careers; parents can easily encourage them to spend long time studying both in and after school by giving them suitable rewards.\n\nIn conclusion, I can understand why children are affected considerably by a variety of factors. However, it seems to me that family is the one having the most powerful influence on their development as a result of the above-mentioned reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I younger I liked go fishing lot I always went two friends loved catch head sometimes We lot fishing camping One day fishing head going well It cold even snowing We leave hooked one last cast He yelled going catch I jumped fourwheeler ran When I saw fish I thought It far biggest head ever seen While reeling said strong I could see trouble After minutes started get fish shore We started relax think day going good Right told get net slipped fell right river let go poleAt time I thought lost fish pole thinking straight jumped water pole Once I saw swimming struggling decided jump help catch fish The three us swimming fast could cold water pole I almost Right I got foot pole fish started swim faster While I trying get pole I focused I going I got caught tree get pole The chase floating fishing pole gone five minutes us far river Now close pole I catching Suddenly yelled got pole swam shore reel fish At time happy went ice cold river fish could wait get home dry After minutes still reeling huge fish He said know going get shore Once fish got close shore jerked pole hard could get onto bank pulled line broke fish got away All hard work anything After decided time go home sit fire A lot people I tell story think funny personally nt see anything funny swimming snow break fishing line One good thing memorable day fishing I ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although, abound individuals believe that institute are responsible for teaching children to be better citizens and workers rather than developing themselves. this essay will highlight that this certainly is a rational approach that needs to be opted and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.\nTo start with, there are myriad reasons which will further explain this arguments, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that preparing an individual for a particular future work at an early age extremely imperative. Because, it would help him to earn a decent living. It would mean that institution teachers always discipline to kids, which always turn children into effective workers. Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that juniors go to the institute and they learn lots of new skills as well as observe the knowledge. this is to express, the leaner daily meet new students in academy time. So, easily learn new things. For example, In university life children are learning what is right and wrong for themselves and academy instills the cultural value that are shared the society. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.\nElaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits, but one of the crucial effect is that students are able to choose the subjects that best suit them. Therefore, academy education, children able to develop an understanding about the world in which they live. For instance, the tutors are trained to help children understand their strengths and improve their weaknesses. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of this trend.\nIn the nutshell, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of study in university because, always provide positive things as well as teachers teach to the students about their rights are indeed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There books music movies magazines etc appropriate children Having banned shelves shouldnt even question children shouldnt read watch listen parents responsibility make sure dont I dont think take kind books movies music shelves teens like grown ups also There gon na take children lose buisiness grown ups teens That doesnt make sence I think either child know read watch listen cant parent grown around let know choose A way solve problem seperate offensive books music movies ones appropriate children That would make everything alot easier nothing comes shelves knowone loses buissiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of people give their opinion that marketing brings positive economic influences, at the same time, another group of people think it exerts negative social impacts because not everyone is happy with their position and what they have. In this case, I think, it has some good effects on economical growth because advertisment helps to grab customers attention that can be a good reason of making a good profit and on the other hand, people may get depressed to see the product because they do not have it. Moreover, this essay explores the both sides of advertisment.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in terms of attracting customers interest, advertisements play a significant role. Furthermore, if a person gets to know about a product, she will buy it to try and that assists a company to make a good income. For example, I use skincare products. If I get in touch with a new one through advertisment, I will definitely buy it.\r\n\r\nSecondly, if we discuss about the bad effects, people's depression is one of them. after seeing a advertisment, an individual may have desire to have the thing that they are showing. It make them feel insufficient and that lead them to depression. For instance, my cousin had a cycle but after knowing the updated one is arrived, it ignites his ambition. as a result, he ended up getting sad and depressed due to his lack of money to buy it.\r\n\r\nTherefore, from my perspective, I think, it mostly offers a positive effect since people are being able to know about the new goods in the market, and also they are purchasing them that contributes to make a very good profit. Additionally, it also enhances the economical condition of a country.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, as I mentioned, both facts are true in a sense such as advertisment is a great way to get buyers which is good and the bad effect is people feel incomplete with what they have. In my opinion, the positive effect is more stronger as it expands the economical growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming a thing of the future. Why is that? The world is upgrading itself. From people driving their own cars to the cars driving them. Now is that just plain laziness or is it something completely amazing.\n\nGoogles cofounder Sergey Brin envisions these driverless cars. he has a vision\n\nwhere these cars rule the future. Now are these cars a good thing or a bad thing? Mr. Brin sees theese cars taking less fuel than the cars we use today, but would that really be the case? Would they really use less fuel? Driverless cars would probably use more fuel to keep the car going. How would the car know where you're going anyway? It's not you.\n\nHow would the car know exactly where to take you. By a\n\nGPS? GPS's aren't always right, no matter if you even put in the right address. GPS'S can always get the adress wrong. Then where you be?\n\nAre these driverless cars really a good thing for the future of the world? Do you think the worlds future should have driverless cars or do you agree that driverless cars are pure lazy. GPS's might not work. The car could break down on you easily. Is it reall a good thing to have driverless cars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many families are sending their children to private secondary schools. Part of people believe that are advantages to private secondary schools and the second part of people say that if you send your children to private schools it is not good.In this ,essay we will discuss the two thoughts with examples and will give our opinion.\r\n\r\nThere is a portion of people believe that there are advantages to going to private schools. First bors of the private school that gives a high-quality of the education because small number of students and can be controlled and that will reflect on the quality directly.The second benefit, is that are using new and good methods in education. These advantages make some people believe that private schools are suitable places for their children.\r\n\r\nOn the opposite side , some people say there are negative impacts for private schools. The first bad thing in private schools is much expensive and not all people can send their children to the private schools. The second con for private schools , are places for the students who coming from rich families, that means private schools are not suitable for common families.Because those rich families have their live standards and style of their life and that could not be acceptable for the common families if their children try to behave like them.\r\n\r\nFinally, there are positives and negatives for private schools and my opinion is that private schools are good for some families and not good for others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator I feel like we do not need to keep the Electoal College and we need to change the election to popular vote. Even Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agreed on abolishing the Electoral College and I agree with them. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. Most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown in the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote for the vice president. The electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the\"swing\" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all. It's offical the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best known arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. It's ghard to say this but Bob Dole was right, we should abolish the electoral college.\n\nThe electoral college is a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocate of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense, it is the electors that elect the president, not the people. when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidates share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Watching television has become one of the most favourite past time activity of children all over the world, and there is no doubt that they are influenced by it in some or the another way.People often argue whether it is the content of a TV show or the time spent watching it, that really has an impact on the child's behaviour.According to me, what children watch on the television influences them more as compared to the amount of time spent watching it. The following paragraphs will discuss both views in detail and will further justify my opinion.\r\n\r\n Children today have the option to choose what they wish to watch on TV, as a result of the availablity of several different types of shows to select from. It is no doubt that their behaviour gets influenced by their favourite TV programme. Many children dream of becoming like their favourite character, and start doing things in the same way as that character does on TV.However, since they don't know what is good and what is bad, they also adapt the bad traits of that character.which is extremely dangerous for their future.For example, my little brother loves to watch the cartoon Shinchan , and whatever mischief he does on the TV , my brother does it in real life without realizing that it's inappropriate to do so. The content of the TV program makes quite a significant impact on the child's thinking and behaviour.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, as compared to viewing a TV show for a short period, viewing it continuously for a prolonged period of time affects a child's behaviour more.Watching TV for a long time makes children lazy and distracts them from their studies. For instance, now-a-days children prefer to stay at home and relax on the couch rather than going out and playing with their friends.If children focus on one thing ( TV programme ) for a huge amount of time, their sense of reality gets clouded and they began to act as if they are a part of that show.This can be easily avoided by limiting the amount of time a child watches TV and encouraging them to do physical activities.\r\n\r\n To conclude, I believe that more the amount of time for which children see a particular thing, more is its impression on their actions and thinking. TV has become a part of daily life and it does influence our life and personality. But, to prevent the children from getting absorbed into the world of TV, their access to it should be restricted and controlled by the parents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you feel if the computer you were using at this moment could read your emotions and use the feedback from it to change what you was learning. Thats what Proffesor Huang at the Beckham Institue of Advanced Science is doing.\n\nI think using the compiuter program would be a great way to learn. Imagine thinking that the lesson you are learning was boring, and then the lesson changes itself to fit your style of lesrning. Itd be a new revolution in the way we learn. IT could make the experience of learning fun and more intrigueing.\n\nThe student could be more attentive and enjoy learning. Proffesor Huang introduced this idea to make learing more interesting for students. HE also used the program to take the place of a human instructor.\n\nSo next time youre bored or upset at the lesson youre learning think about the future and about how in a few years you might be learning in a new manner on the computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Unmasking the Face on Mars\", there has been an argument about whether or whether not it is a natural landform. Some people suggest that it was formed by alien life on Mars and some people believe that it is a natrual landform. I believe it is a natural landform because of what the scientists have found.\n\nThe text states, ...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Not only was the Face formed but it was also and illusion. The text also states, \"...snapped a picture ten time sharper than the original Viking photos...revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" The scientists had taken a better picture after they viewed it again proving it was a natural landform. Lastly, although not everyone was satisfied, the scientists had stated, \" It's not easy to target Cydonia...In fact, it's hard work.\" This shows that just because the supposed \"alien markings\" were hidden by clouds or haze, doesn't mean they are alien markings. The text states, \" It's not easy to target Cydonia...In fact, It's hard work...\" So to prove that the \" alien markings\" was just a natural landform, scientists took a second look and captured the best photo they have and proved that is was just a butte or a mesa which were \" common landforms around the American West.\" This evidence shows that is is a natural landform that is an equivalent to America's common landforms.\n\nI believe that it is a natural landform because of what scientists have found. Scientists have taken pictures and second looks of those pictures to prove that the Face isn't \"alien markings\", but a natural landform. All this evidence proves that the Face is a natural landform and while my evidence shows something else, there could be evidence that shows it is alien markings. So what is your view on the Face?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers can do many things beneficial in the classroom, but having a computer read a students emotions is debatable. I believe a computer able to read emotions on a students face is essential in a learning environment. Some teachers aren't adept at reading a students emotions, or are completely blind to it. Dr. Huang predicted that \"a class room computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" which is a necessary reading to gain a full learning experience.\n\nIn a classroom setting, a teacher must monitor 20 to 30 students in a single period. There is a high chance that a few of these students may not understand something, and refuse to ask about it in fear of being laughed at, or disrupting the class. If a computer in the classroom could read the faces of every student and display the emotions to a teacher, it could let them know what students do and do not understand, and help them determine what they should review. Also, if a computer could read emotions, it could determine if a student is bored. If the majority of a class is bored, it could suggest to the teacher that they may need to change their teaching habit. A student who is engaged is more likely to understand and do better in class.\n\nAlso, some students have issues at home. Some students do fake a smile daily, and sometimes, it's good enough to fool anyone besides a professional. In our state alone, the suicide rates are high, and it could protect them as well. The article also says that Dr. Huang suggested that \"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" so it is an essential part in understanding how someone feels. If a student is upset or distraught, it may make it harder for them to participate in class. A teacher could then pull the student aside and talk to them about how they're feeling. Especially in those with depression, they are able to have many skills, even more than an ordinary person. However, those with depression do not see themselves able to use those skills from a sense of defeat. Talking does help them to an extent, so in a depressed student, if their mood improves, they will be able to use their skills in the classroom to the fullest extent with everyone else.\n\nIf expressing emotions can produce the emotion, it can also make a student feel better as well. In the article, it suggests that moving facial muscles doesn't simply express emotions, but it can produce them as well. In theory, someone who is smiling can make someone actually feel happy, too. This could increase atmospheres in school and allow everyone to feel safe if they have a problem. It could resolve fighting in schools as well, if emotions are explained. Sometimes words aren't enough to convey how we're feeling. Most fighting and the feeling of uneasiness comes from poorly conveyed emotions by words. The standard student can't read other's emotions aside from basic emotions, such as happiness or sadness.\n\nUltimately, I genuinely believe that computers in the classroom that could actually read the students emotion is extremely valuable. It could create a better atmosphere in school systems when they get the help they require, and test scores in the school could improve as well. Students could actually be reviewed with if they do not understand, simply by the look on their face. It saves the socially anxious students, or the introverted students, when they don't understand something. Instead of asking and being embarassed, then unable to concentrate due to the embarassment, it could be read on their face, and they can be reviewed with later. Every student deserves a good education, regardless of who they are. And with a computer that could recognize emotions, I believe it is more possible for everyone to receive a more equal, and superior, education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Faicial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotion. The decussion about the Faicial Action Coding System being good or bad has been brought up. I agree with the clame that the Faicial Action Coding System is actually good and could be usefull.\n\nOne sorse of evidence suporting why I agree the Facial Action Coding System is a good thing. It states in the selection that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This would be a good thing to have because now in days almost all class lessons are starting to be set up on computere. Say the teacher is looking at her computer and the students are all looking at their computers how would the teacher be able to look at everyones faces and see their emotions towards the lession because your face emotions say it all they say and tell exactly what your feeling. It also states \"The computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" With this technology the teacher wouldnt have to worry about is her students getting the lession or not or if its to easy and boring for some students. The computer would do it for the teacher. This would also allow the teacher to persicely point out who knows what they are doing and how need help. With most students they wont say anything if they arent getting the lesson because either they are afraid to say something or dont feel comfterable asking for help. With the Facial Action Coding System the student wount have to say anything because the computer would pick it all up just by the face your making. Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" meaning the Facial Action Coding System could change the lesson acording to your face emotions. To eitther make the lesson harder cause the computer picks up that you are bored, or make the lesson a little eaiser because you face emotions show you are confused and not getting it.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System is a good thing is becaue it could tell what the subject of some paintings are. Most famous paintins the artist is dead so they arent here to explain what their painting means or is showing so with the Facial Action Coding System it can do it for us. Take the Mona Lisa for example everyone always says that not a smile what is Leonardo da Vinci trying to exspress with this painting. She's 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. This was able to be identified by the Facial Action Coding System. Allowing us to know what everyone has been asking about the painting the Mona Lisa.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea is the computer can pick up not only one emotion but yet pick up mixed emotions. This computer wont just allow you to pic up if the person is happy, sad, or mad. It could pick up if the person is worried or anciest at the same time and you would be able to know exactly how they feel. When you look at a person you can only pick of mixed emotions if the person tells you exactly how they feel but with the Facial Action Coding System it can tell you without even having to ask. Also it could tell you if they are hiding their feelings and dont want to tell you how they really feel.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a good thing and a good idea because it can denifit teachers in class to be able to tell if their students are getting the lesson or not, be able to explain art when the artist is dead and cant tell you what hes trying to exspress, and can also tell you exactly how someone feels even when they dont tell you exactly how they feel. These were just a few examples of how the Facial Action Coding System can be usefull and im sure there are plenty more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If Empire State Building dock dirigibles would many problems way They lack landing area almost onethousand foot blimp This dirigible held single tether Empire State Building would put large amount stress building s structure risking possible collapse continued If use Empire State Building They would modifiy use thousands dollars process Even dirigible held onto Building back blimp would sway high winds might risk safety passengers All idea landing dirigible gigantic building bad idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion author concludes story saying retake drivers test take drivers test also comfortable life The drivers test main problem its adapting new environment causing Saeng much heartache For example lines Saengs thoughts A wave loss deep strong stang Saengs eyes swept and warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng brake wept This piches Saeng trouble readjusting new life reminded old memories used live cries its gone I think failing drivers test little thing finally caused cry stress said and hibiscus budding I take test again It means overcome move", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There would be many reasons why driverless cars would be better. For example, the cars can us there radar and other features ,such as the Google car to stay in the right lane. Also, these cars can stop themselves when you may not be able to.\n\nDriverless cars would increase the saftey of humans in many ways. For example, a person can be driving and start to drift form one lane to the next. The car could turn itself back into the lane and make a noice to alert the driver that he or she is drifting in and out of his or her lane. By the car having this ablity; it could safe the lives off many.\n\nDriverless cars could reduce the number of colitions. The driverless cars have sensors that can detect when your car is coming to close to anthor car or object and could stop itself posible saving lives.\n\nDriverless cars would be the solution to decrease the amouts of crash each year. Driverless cars will be the future as said in the article because they can react faster and better than humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there are tendencies that people will have their own child when they get old. Although giving birth in old age might come with several problems, it helps the parents to have money to cater to their children's education, and basic needs and to be psychologically ready for it which I believe outweighs the disadvantages as the childbirth complications can be treated with adequate medical intervention, however, lack of preparedness can lead to mental illness of both parents.\r\n\r\nTo start, late childbirth comes with some issues which are detrimental to the mother's health. Complications like Ectopic pregnancies, miscarriages (early pregnancy loss) congenital disorders, high blood pressure, and chromosomal condition in the child such as Down syndrome. For instance, one of the Federal medical health care centres in Nigeria; reflected in a recently published report that; 70% of women who got pregnant at the age of 35 years has ectopic pregnancy and preeclampsia. However, complications that come with giving birth in old age now have solutions. A scientist has found a way of preventing medical problems with the use of certain medications.\r\n\r\nIn addition, one of the very important advantages of having a child late is mental preparedness and financial stability which helps both parents to be able to cater for their basic needs after birth. when both parents are mentally prepared, they tend to have peace of mind and also cater for themselves, forming intimacy together. For example, in a survey conducted by World Health Organization(WHO), it was published that women that gave birth late in Nigeria are more responsible and care for their children more than others. Afterwards, women that gave birth at an early age abandon their children due to insufficient income and lack of mental preparedness which affect their children's education and mental well-being . Therefore, waiting till old age before having a child is better.\r\n\r\nIn summary, despite the several complications that follow giving birth at an advanced age, the merits outweigh its demerits as both couples would be more prepared mentally and financially.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face was just a natural\n\nlandform because a few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a ''huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human haed . . . formed by shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, noes, and mouth.'' The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael and his Mars orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. But not everyone was satisfied. The face on MArs is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98--a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are dealing with different views about economic development. While there is a belief that it is the sole method to discontinue starvation and impoverishment, others claim that it does serious harm to the environment. Although it can be stated that the expansion of the economy plays a crucial role in eradicating some domestic difficulties, I believe that its effects on the environment are completely unacceptable. \n\tTo begin with, the development of economics creates more job opportunities and increases the supply of goods. This would provide the inhabitants with plenty of job vacancies, which may resolve the unemployment problems within a country. The unemployed would have better careers with higher income, and their salaries are capable of taking care of their family members. In addition, the vast extension in the quantities of products supplied might reduce the price of most consumer products. Thus, the impoverished are affordable to purchase more products and their living standards significantly get better. \n\tHowever, the surrounding environment in recent years is progressively devastating due to some undesirable attempts to grow the economy, and it must be strictly prevented. For instance, an enormous amount of raw sewage and industrial waste has been reported to be discharged by myriad industrial factories, which may contaminate the sources of clean water and then possibly cause cancer to people living nearby. Therefore, governments must enforce strict laws and policies to stop these activities.\n\tTo recapitulate, effectively may economic growth help better people’s lives, I reckon that some destructive activities to the environment must be banned stringently.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents becuase the author thinks that they are \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\".\n\nIn the text it states that \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for mote then a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity us.\" and what i think the author means that venus would be a very challenging planet for humans to study despite that its proximity to us.\n\nThe second thing that the author states is that \"such an enviorment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest part of oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" meaning that the temprature in venus is so hot that it would liquefy so many metals. The author says that \" tempratures would stillbe toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. not east conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nThe last thing that the text says is that \" Our travelers on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovations.\" meaning that when humans go to venus and they should expand the very edges of there imaginations and innovations, that they will discover wonders about Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author presents both positive and negative aspect fot driveless cars.\n\nHonestly, I'm against the development of these cars.\n\nThe reason I am against the development of these cars because they will be changing the whole world fundamentally.\n\nEspecially taxes fees and the half of the fuel taxis.\n\nAlso, companis are making computer cars that is too expensive to be practical.\n\nThey also have special touch sensors to keep the driver's hand on the wheel but the dangerous consequences if driver's and society think about it.\n\nAnother reason,\n\nis that for an example even though a BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" there are always someone not paying attention to the road and i don't think a special car can save someone's life.\n\nLike the the BMW car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, no matter what there is always someone driving reckless.\n\nBut even tho none of the cars developed so far are completetly drierless a car can never actually have humn skills it's impossible.\n\nThe car would probably have to have a brain or something to have a human charaestic to have human skills.\n\nI think nothing could help reckless driving and change the world positively.\n\nThere is too many negative consequence in my opnion for it to prevent that or making the environment so much teriffic.\n\nEverything happens for a reason and especially car accidents. You can never stop\n\ndriveless driver from getting in a horifying car accident.\n\nOverall, I most defenitley dissaprove of the development of these cars.\n\nIt will just take our tax money and our tax fuel money. Especially it will take a lot of our economy away with the advance technology they are trying to do for these cars.\n\nI just hope in the future that will just keep it at an idea and nothing more or nothing else.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My view on driverless cars is that it's a good idea.But in the middle because their are positives to it and negatives to it.\n\nThe first thing is that the positives to it. The positives is that the car run by itself to a point. The second advantage is that if you don't know where your going it knows how to get there even though you don't know how to. The third advantage is that the car knows if there's a car wreck and it can try and avoid the crash. The reasons why I say that is because like the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" drives mainly on it's own but it has to have a person,s hand on the wheel of the car. Like GM they have a vehicle that the driver's seat vibrates if the vehicle is in danger of backing up into an object.\n\nNow there are disadvantages to a driverless car because they will have to reconfigure the roads so the cars can locate where they are. Once cars become fully driverless and people won't have to even learn how to drive because the car would allready know how to drive. If those cars break or just lose control nad the driver wouldn't know how to drive it because they are so used to the car driving itself. Plus if they do start making those cars the cars are banned even from being tested drove in states. So that are many advantages and disadvantages to the smart cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello. I am Luke Bomberger and after you read this article, you will definitely want to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It is a fun job, it is a job full of adventure, and is a very heartwarming experience.\n\nI said that being a Seagoing cowboy is a heartwarming experience. And there is no doubt about that. While being a Seagoing Cowboy, you ride the seas. And you also tend to animals to keep them well for the trip to other countries. These animals will be given to countries in need from the World War 2. It can really give you a good heartwarminng feeling when you help others. But you don't just give to the countries, you also get to viset them! Besides helping people, you can tour all the different countries that you visit. I got to visit many places like the Panama Canal on my way to China. And I even got to tour and excavated castle in Crete!\n\nAs I said in the previous paragraph, you will be working and traveling the world. And even though it is a hard working job and long periods of time on a boat, don't fret! There are a lot of fun activities and games that you can participate in on the ships while you are traveling. And sometimes, you can even play sports! After we took the animals to their destinations, we all played baseball and volley ball games in the empty holds where the animals were previously held. There were differnt games also. There was table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and other games too! But sometimes, I would like to read a book or whittle something. So you will definitely have a fun trip.\n\nSo do you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy yet? I bet you do! In this article, I said how it is a heartwarming experience, it's a job full of adventure, and has very fun trips around the world! I know I definitely liked being a Seagoing Cowboy, and I bet that you will love being one too!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, due to the advancement of technology, life has become complicated, however, I consider that living a simple life is not the only way to make life easier. In this essay, i shall elaborate supporting arguments of my personal viewpoint with the advancement of my knowledge, along with a specific conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are several problems with using technical gadgets. One of the most pressing problems is environmental pollution which is created by transport vehicles, machines and air conditioners. To be precise, nowadays, individuals are dependent on motor vehicles for travelling. These vehicles emit obnoxious gases, which pollute to air and it lead to an adverse problem is known as global warming. Due to toxic gases temperature is escalated and it put impacts on the ozone layer. It is researched by scientists, the ozone layer is depleted due to pollution. Hence, temperature and weather conditions are imbalanced, due to technological innovations. As well as, it gives birth to many health hazards such as cancer, liver and breathing problems. These, all problems are happened because of technology interference.\r\n\r\nThere are certain reasons, why i believe that it is impossible to live without technical equipment.First and foremost is that sophisticated technology offers various benefits such as in the health and education sector. The former advantage in hospitals, doctors use Artificial Intelligence to operate and for the surgery of patients. Several medicines are made by the use of technical machines. There are several machines such as scan, X-ray and test tubes which makes treatment easy and incline the life expectancy of people. As a result, the treatment of lethal diseases is possible only due to the advancement of technology. Latter benefits for education and business field, as nowadays, students do study via the internet and smart classes and employees conduct online meetings which are possible because of technology. For instance, during corona pandemic, all students and workers did study and meeting while sitting at home with the assistance of the internet, computers and mobile.These are the reason behind of this notion is that no one can survive without technology due to a plethora of benefits.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although, the masses have to face some problems due to over-dependence on machines and technical gadgets, nevertheless, technology offers numerous benefits such as in the medical, educational ad co-operative sectors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The biker many features story For example discriptive words put pictures head For example One long crippling hill I picture head There one sight All parts story put pictures head Thats good thing example want reader understand discribing words help", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I disagree would give kids children negative thing like rude listening loud homework computers Please listen I disagree reason I know computer mom every mins nasty things computers kids children looking never could learn kill someone computer I know I go computer I rude disrespectful I tell nothing I computer attention move computer Thats computers takes attention I nt listen I computer mom tell s get I say CAPS I thing tell get leave alone I computer I focus computer And I computer loud one could get attention I computer allways loud main focus computer I ll whatever later O I nt even remember happend I get computer Not school I know I telling mom let use computer I could school work I getting different things instead f homework mom like homework say I finish homework I know I finish homework I say focus ocmputer These reason society take back computer I hope undertand reasons I give society really stop giving computers first place If daughter son know said thease things know children always lied Know I could olny computer min day So yes take away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can driveless cars be the next big thing that comes out? Are they safe enough to be driven around? My opinion is no, they can not be safe for us to be driving around in them. Driveless cars are not safe at all they can not work properly, they can cause accidents, they can stop functioning out of nowhere, they can be such a danger to drive, and they can distract the people who are driving around or even the people that are driving the driveless car.\n\nFirst of all, driveless cars might not work properly they will have lots of bugs that will need to be fixed. And people can't be wasting money just to be fixing those cars. Do we really want cars that have problems? I wouldn't. We need to keep using normal cars even if normal cars use much more fuel than the drivless cars. We do not want to be having accidents everywhere as well as people getting hurt. We want our people to stay safe and not be harmed. Having driveless cars around is just a big problem and a big mistake.\n\nSecond of all, driveless cars can cause accidents, they might stop functioning out of no where and what can we do ...but what about if there is a problem with that, what about if the car automatically shuts off and we can't drive it.....it will obviously create accidents around us or for the people that are on the road. We need to think right and not let this driveless car be around.\n\nThird of all, driveless cars can be a distraction for those who are inside the car and those who are driving pn the road. Image youself driving normal and then out of nowhere you see a car that is driving by itself....you would freak out, and probably since you are looking at the car who is driving by itself you are not going to pay attention to the road and you most likely crash. Do we really want these cars?\n\nThis cars are not a good idea, they can cause so much harm to us. What about if the car does not notify the driver when it requires human skills? What will happen then? They can not function well and they can cause accidents as well. Driveless cars are so dangerous to drive and they will create issues that we might not be able to fix....So what are we going to do?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author positive mood said good things family talked grateful moved america", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building builders faced obstacles regarding laws safety even nature mast There law time prohibiting aircraft flying low cities In paragraph narrator says This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area This stop dirigibles attempting dangerous around buildings The next obstacle safety From excerpt Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammible An incident like Hindenburg city like New York would devastating The third obstacle mast simply suited holding dirigible The narrator points Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast There practical way hold back end dirigible In light issues builders forced admit mooring mast Empire State Building indeed destined fail", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI have very mixed feelings about the whole Electoral College or regular people voters. Honestly there are very good points / arguments for both sides. You could possibly say that the Electoral College is a \"cheat\" or you could also say that the people voting isn't the best idea based on immaturity / judgment people give.\n\nFrom the start everyone has learned how to play fair in the game and what a cheater is, I believe that the voting of a president is similar. Remember when you where a kid - or watching your kids - playing games, laughing, and having a good time, then all of a sudden, uh-oh, some one is being accused of lying or cheating. This is why I argue that there shouldn't be an Electoral College, the state can change the people in the Electoral College and start what is considered the disaster factor, in 1960 this occured in order to vote against John F. Kennedy. Although many members of the Electoral Collage are honest and refuse to oppose another canadet, many also will.\n\nI also believe that the Electoral College will do and has done what is right for the United States. If we did change the election to popular vote then I garentee there would be more conflict and the country would start to fall apart. Honestly though, the legal voting age is 18, and teachers, parents, peers, and even commercials are encouraging them to vote, at 18 you may be a legal adult, but in reality most 18 year olds are still in High School or just getting out of. With all the influence and responsibility going to there heads these \"adults\" are obviously going to vote as soon as possible. Not even just 18 year olds, but also actual adults will vote just to vote. Now, tell me this, do you really want the leader of your country chosen by the people? It's a natural thing that people will pick someone just because of there skin color or religion, people judge by instinct, I know I wouldn't want the president to be chosen just because if he was Catholic or Christian.\n\nAnother reasonof self conflict I have for the Electoral College is the time spand it has been. Times are always changing, from new electronics, maturity levels, and all around peope, so why have an Electoral college when it was made so long ago? Doesn't it seem very out dated? Then again, we have had it for so long and it helps many difficulties with the voting process, including ties. For example, what if there was no Electoral College and after all the people voted and there was a tie, what would we do?\n\nSo given this, think again who you want to pick who should rule over you, after all it is a \"winner takes all\" draw.\n\nSincerly,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you get to travel to many different stataes like Venice,Italy,and a city with streets of water.Not only you get to travel to different citys,and stataes you get to be aware of people of other countries and their needs.Before Luke got to become a Seagoing Cowboys he was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank.Lukes friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat.He couldnt say no because it was aopportunity of a lifetime.Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service.Beside Luke helping people,he had the side benefits of seeing Europe and China.Luke had made nine trips the most a Seagoing Cowboy would do.Luke had also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.Luke had also found time to have fun on the seas.Just being a Seagoing Cowboy was not just a advanture to Luke it opened up the world to him.Luke was very grateful for th opporunity.Luke lead his family to haost a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You are enjoying the view as your self-driving car is driving down a one-lane, cliff-side highway. As your car turns a corner, you notice that a bus, that is too long for the route, is heading staight for you. What happens next? Are you are driven off the cliff to prevent a bus full of casualities or does the bus drive off the cliff preventing your death but causing a bus load of casualities? If driverless cars are coming in the next four to five years then I wouldn't be satified with it until somehow that problem is sovled.\n\nIf you want a casuality free, mostly, driverless car system you should make it so the cars can communicate amongst themselves to slow down because a bus is coming around the corner or speed up on a rural highway that is barely used. To do this it would take billions of dollars if not trillions to invest in research, seting up satellites, constructing communication centers which are used to receive the signals from the satellites. This probalby won't happen as it is so exspensive but you never know until it does or something like that.\n\nAnother way you could make driverless cars is by giving the cars an \"instruction manual\" on rules to follow. This could include following the rules that we already have or a rule that in case of accident causing conditions one car had to veer out of the way. That rule would easily lead to the scenario stated at the beginnging. This is the way people will most likely take because it is way less expensive than the first way. Even though the first way is safer for everybody.\n\nA third way people could do it is, as said in the article, \"Egineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negagive polarity as messages in binary code.\" Do something like that where something would be under or inside the road that car reads. This is very similar to how a scanner reads a barcode. This would most likely be the most expensive option but probably not the safest nor the deadliest though.\n\nThe beginnging of driverless cars would definitly get a name in history but would it be good name or a bad name? \"The road to the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered about space and all of the mysterious things in space? It? a crazy topic with many mystery?. A big idea is that a face has been put on Mars from another life form. It? a rediculous thought with many people such as me shaking their heads at the crazy theroy. There is no way the another life form could put this face on Mars. It? just a cool natural landform that ironicly looks like a face.\n\nTheir are many different planets with many different natural landforms on them. Mars just happens to have one of the most interesting natrual landforms however. The face as people call it, is a huge rock formation that gives us an illusion of a face. Humans have claimed that Aliens have put this massive rock formation on there, but from a scientific side their is not a single piece of evidence suggesting that Aliens are real.\n\nYes, the face is quite mysterious, but their are plenty of queer landforms on every planet. The media is a place that has taken ¨The Face¨ and it has made it out to seem like Aliens have made it to scare us. I can understand why one who has no sceintific background might believe this, but these landforms can occur any where on any planet over a peroid of time.\n\nAs a scientist if you belive something you try and prove it. With the discovery of the face and people skeptic of the aliens scientist? launched a spacecraft into space to see if it could find anything. Nothing. No housing systems, no monuments, no building structures of any sorts, and most importantly no life of any sorts. Mars has harsh living conditions so to find any sort of life would be crazy enough, especially aliens!\n\nThe face is just another one of those amazing natural landforms that space has given us. It amazes me and others what things can happen in space. There are for sure no Aliens in space, however. All of the evidence proves to the fact that there is nothing on Mars or in space that could build something. Who knows maybe in a million of years space could amaze us even more with another landform similar to ¨The Face¨. I can assure you and the public that ¨The Face¨ was just another marvelous wonder of a natural landform no evidense of anything like aliens. Space is a crazy wonder that has many things to dicover.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Our travles on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should not be limted by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovaton\". I think we can be able to study Venus even more closley if we had more stronger and durable rovers and aircrafts. We have studied it and have found that Venus is avverge 800 dagrees Fahrenheit its 90 times more hot on Venus then on earth. I found this on paragraph 3 lines 4,5. \"Venus has the hottest suface temperature of any planet in our solar system\". Venus use to be like earth it had land and waters and lakes and valcanos but now theres just some features like moutins and in rocky terrians.\n\n\"The value of returing to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a misson both safe and scientifcally productive?\" NASA\n\nwants to send humans to Venus again to study the plant, but the problem is that its too hot for them to be on land and study it. Therfore \"NASA's possible solution to float above the fray\". Basicalily there gonna be studying the planet from above but close enough to not get in the hot weather \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" I think its smart to study it from above and all but woudlnt you find more things on the land but they can beacuse the of how hot it is. I feel like they should try to build some new machinery to go back and look more closly about whats happing on venus.\n\n\"Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of light\".Thats why we only have some pictures of Venus from far away.NASA is still trying to find new was to go back and study the planat Venus.\"Some simplifiled electronics made of silcon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's suface and have lasted three weeks\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay was written on a topic from “Target Band 7” book (page 54, reprinted with permission).You should spend about 40 minutes on this taskObesity was once considered a disease of adults; however, it is becoming increasingly common among children. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to help children stay healthy?Write at least 250 wordsFor many years obesity was perceived as a condition occurring only in adult life. However, in recent years the number of children suffering from obesity has grown significantly. There are several causes and numerous solutions which can be used to tackle this worrying phenomenon, and this essay will present a couple of them.While some reasons for childhood obesity are genetic, others include poor food choices exacerbated by easy availability of fast food, insufficient physical activity and a history of family members being overweight. Unlike the former, the latter factors can be changed, if the adults in the child’s life gain awareness and are willing to take action.To begin with, health is a complex matter which requires a balanced approach. In other words, there isn’t a single solution to maintain health, on the contrary, it is rather a mixture of multiple factors, such as and regular physical activity. For this reason, increasing the awareness of healthy habits among children is a responsibility of utmost importance. What is more, it can be easily achieved through the education system.On the other hand, children’s education might to stop the situation from worsening. Along with well designed health education schemes, we should also try to stop food companies from overusing sugar in products the young ones. It has been proven that more than 70% of the products available in an average supermarket contain dangerously high levels of white sugar. Sugar rich diet not only causes a significant weight gain, but also contributes to diseases, such as diabetes in young population.To summarize, emphasis put on the awareness of healthy living among children is invaluable. Furthermore, combining healthy habits with stopping food companies from in products which are easily children can be effectively implemented by the governments. Positive outcomes of such measures taken today will definitely have a long lasting effect on the future generations.This is a well developed response to the question. Relevant key points are included in the answer. Appropriate examples are also used to corroborate the writer’s point of view. Paragraphing is skillfully managed, information and ideas are logically sequenced. A wide range of vocabulary is used to allow certain flexibility and precision. Also, a variety of sentence structures is used. Accuracy of expression needs some attention (see corrections underlined in blue). Overall, the essay could achieve Band 8 in IELTS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some might say that driveless cars are the future, I on the other believe that they have some potential, but need an abundance of improvements before i could ever advocate for them. The thought of having a car that is controlled by a computer is truly scary! The ability to drive defensively, malfunctions, and even drivers dozing off behind the wheel are just a few problems that come to mind when i think about \"Smart cars\". Regardless of who may agree or disagree with my opinion i believe that driveless cars are dangerous in their current state.\n\nTo start off, your ability to be a good defensive driver would be completely disabled with these type of vehicles. Imagine sitting in your driveless car and some guy is a few feet away from you driving like a real jerk, speeding, swerving, playing music to the full extent of his speaker. Now imagine that jerk made a stupid, easily avoidable mistake, resulting in him crashing into you, and your 'smart car' was not able to give you control of the vehicle quick enough to react. That would be truly devastating for both parties, and since your the odd one out ( Because of your fancy smart car) youd probably be the one blamed for what happened.\n\nAnother thing, a car controlled by a computer, really? I understand the whole 'Computers are the future' movement but do we really have to input our lives into that equation? With all the problems we have with computers today (Hackers, viruses, ect.) do we really want to be in a machine going 70 mph that we have little to no control of? Think about it, some serious malfunctions can happen at those speeds, and the results can be lethal. With the vast amount of hackers there are today, it is very possible to end up on the wrong end of a nerds wrath. Suppose some computer geek had a bad day at school and wanted to releive some tension, if that person has mental health issuse's you just might be the victim.\n\nLast but not least, When on a long road trip in one of these smart cars, it would be very easy to just doze off. If you think about it, it would be very realistic that a person can slip into an unconsious state while operating one of these vehicles. I know if i was to remain inactive for a very short period of time, such as 8 or 9 hours, and had the white noise of an engine calming me, it would be somewhat easy to doze off into a deep sleep. Now if a 16 year old is saying that imagine how the average eldery person will feel, esspecially one that is deprived of sleep. All im saying is that there should be some concern with this possible issue.\n\nAs stated before, I believe that smart cars are dangerous in their current state. With work and improvement on various different issues, they might be suitable for the average person to drive. But as of right now, it is say to assume that these cars would cause alot of destruction and accidents if they were to be made legal and distibuted to the general population.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would people use this type of technology to read students emotions and why is it valuable. I'll tell you why it's valuable. I'll also tell you if it's wrong to do this. I'll tell you if it's right to do this.\n\nI think this type of technology is great to read students facial expressions. Because if a student is feeling sad and the school didn't know the school can help that kid if there is something wrong. They could figure out weather that kid is always bored in a certain class so maybe the teacher can make the class funner. They can use this technology to see if a kid is angry in a certain class and that the school can ask why the student gets so angry in that class like is he getting bullied or he just hates the class. Im all for this technology i think it's really cool.\n\nBut there are also the negatives to this technology. Lets say a student dosent want anyone to watch him when he's trying to do work or when he's at home doing stuff. Students don't want their privacy invaded. If students don't want people to know what feelings they are going thorugh then maybe they should'nt do this.\n\nThat is my opinion on this new technology. I don't know if it's wrong to do this or if it's the right thing to do. I think they should take a vote if students want this or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that using this technology would both benefit and slow down the education process. Knowing what a student thinks about the subject he or she is learning is great but they also just might not like that particular class. It would be hard to focus and try to understand what every students thinks and feels, they're not all going to feel the same way and the teacher would be going through a constant struggle trying to maintain a way to try and please everyone in that class.\n\nAnother point would be that some kids won't like be watched all day through class, they might find it to be a personal barrier that is being broke. The author said, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" That's going to be a problem for low budget schools to figure out because they're going to have to buy the technology that can handle the complex algorithms and buy as many as they need for how ever many students or classes they are teaching. The author stated that, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday.\" So why do we need to waste money on technology that does what we already do. So in conclusion, I believe that this would not help but just slow down the process of education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus would be a challege, but the author's argument is quite compelling as he has proven scientific facts to back his opinions up. The author says that scientits should visit Venus again because; Venus is very similar to Earth, Humans could visit from a distance, and jsut because its a high risk to take does not mean scientits should not make the risk to collect data and information.\n\nVenus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers because it its quite similar to Earth. The text states, \"Often reffered to Earth's \"twin\", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus,\" (Paragraph 2). Therefore, scientits should explore this planet because they could find out if it is survivable for humans, considering scientists havent vistited in about three decades or so. In paragraph 5, The author talks about how NASA found a way for humans to observe from a distance, or from the \"fray\". The text states, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans,\" (paragraph 5). To add on to that, it is more than possible to visit venus from a distance without any harmful contact with humans. Although the temperature is still high, scientits can wear special thermal suits to protect them from the heat. Scientists should take the risk of visiting Venus, although things can go wrong, they should take the risk to get the proper data the World has been wanting. The text states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation,\" (paragraph 8). As the text says, we should take this risk. It's important to get this data, and to know if this planet is sustainable enough for humans.\n\nThis trip is important for countless reasons as they have been stated previously in this responsive essay. There is so much data and information to be collected from this planet, as well as the surrounding planets as mars, saturn, uranus, etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.\n\nMost young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing\nsports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.\n\nAt the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.\n\nIn conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people today are under a lot of pressure, which seems to come from many directions. The problems they are experiencing happen not only at school, but also at home, and it seems that without adult guidance, our young generation will continue to struggle.Teenage years have never been simple, and many would agree that the amount of challenges has only increased with the passage of time. Bullying has been a problem for quite a while, and children and adolescents would have experienced it at school in the past, but then it would stop at home. At present, however, things have been made worse by social media penetrating the supposedly safe space of our teenagers. The unfortunate behaviour of their peers can now reach them even in their bedrooms, causing them constant distress.Another issue troubling many young people is the pressure to succeed by their families. Whether at school or at home, they often feel as if they are not smart enough, which creates overwhelm and despair. Understandably, their parents are pursuing a worthy goal of ensuring their children get a great start in life; however, many teens feel that they are failing their families when they don’t live up to their expectations. This often leads to dishonest and unethical behaviour, such as cheating on tests or plagiarising other students’ work. When uncovered, these incidents have a profound effect on young people’s future careers, not to mention their emotional well-being.It is hard to underestimate the importance of parental support to navigating life as a young person. From helping teens build a positive body image and self-esteem, to handling classmates’ difficult behaviour, to guidance where study is concerned, parents can make a world of difference. Talking to their sons and daughters about matters that worry them, listening and making non-judgmental suggestions are great ways to help. Getting a professional involved where necessary and engaging with teachers, councilors and coaches is another opportunity for parents to provide assistance. Last but not least, parents can make their children better and happier people by simply giving them unconditional love.To sum up, being a young person in the modern world isn’t easy. By banding together and paying careful attention to their teens, families can help them overcome any obstacles to becoming successful adults.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When day qualified perfect lot things go making Most perfect days people s teenage years beyond stress school My perfect day nt crazy break My perfect day middle It perfect day friendship founded A friendship best one A friendship based fun times memories story telling laughter By I spent multiple weekends However none hot weekend late We decided needed cool said set Down road went two redneck boys mutt truck bed Arriving peculiar I far comfort zone It also peculiar I nt met single soul introduce When I first lay eyes I could nt fathom met She athletic driven proper intelligent The boys shook hand things like big trucks fishing poles loud country band I nt think upon first meeting opposites could attract become fond one another As day progressed I found comfort zone As hours flew jokes laughs exchanged I realized similar really I nt think childish things would matter months roads When running dirty creek black lipstick painted war paint laughing hard cried I realized perfect situation If day would nt brought laughs lips mind s comfort zone would day long forgotten If go back every happy memory always one common ground A joke even funny face makes laugh extremely hard Every time I drive I think day sun hot sat fishing poles exchanging laughs I think I running trees laughing tripping feet I think laughing pointing attempted go swimming After crazy running swimming quite wound asked us take walk accepted went brush Within five minutes departure stopped walking Our walk put us top hill little round pebbles I m sure events lead pushing hill However I remember pulling I also recall sliding join battle Watching three boys wrestle play hill sliding rocks something like watching movie fifties Nobody texting messing machine Around us laughing serenity danced like music around us The day stress perfect amount sunshine It like something dream Once moment like little world pulling closer never want leave When laughing high disconnect brief seconds life s simplest form You simply racing thoughts rushing emotions You one person I never thought something small laughs could create better friendship On I realized laughs shared I would first memory come Every event every laugh day something I think I m doubtful world It ll always memory makes appreciate living Someone said Laughter shortest distance two people I would nt believed laughing made closer people I would otherwise avoided Laughs smiles bounded world world rednecks And made difference", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System should not be used in schools to help students. There are benefits to this system, but the bad outweigh the good. This technology used to reconize emotions will affect students in ways that aren't necessary, and cause unwanted problems in the classroom.\n\nFirstly, the article metions this system being used on computers while students are working to analyze their emotions. The author writes \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming comfused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (Alto 6). Having a computer watch students' facial expressions while working could make the students feel uncomfortable and give them anxiety. Being uncomfortable while working will effect the way a student learns. They will not be focusuing on the material they are learning, but instead the idea that they are being watched. This is a problem that's not needed in the classroom and can be avoided.\n\nSecondly there are tons and tons of emotions a human can express. The author writes \" Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" (Alto 3). Having only classified six emotions, is not a very wide range. What if for example, a student were to show an emotion that the computer doesn't have programmed and reconizes it as somthing else, changing the lesson to fit the wrong emotion? This would cause the lesson to be changed when the student didn't need it to be. This creates a technology problem along with the problem of fixing the lesson and wasting time the student could be using to learn.\n\nLastly, having a computer analize a students emotions while working would leave the teacher with nothing to teach or help the students with. This might seem like a good thing at first, but teachers create the classroom atmosphere and keep students ingaged in learning. Why have a computer analyze student emotions when teachers have been doing it perfectly for years?\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a great advance in technology, but when it comes to schools, the System should not be used. It only creates problems that are not needed. These problems could be avoided by not using the system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Keeping the Electoral College is not smart for the united states voting system. First, many citizens all over the country don't agree with the voting system. Second, the Electoral College may be swayed by bias. Third, citizens do not really have control over their vote. The Electoral College system should be changed.\n\nMany American citizens do not agree with the voting system. Citizens have grievances about the system being unfair and unreasonable. The Office of the Federal Register states, \"It's official: The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality\" (source 1). If American citizens are persistant with the issue, and continue to argue, then why is the government keeping the system? Why doesn't the government come up with a more rational voting system?\n\nThe Electoral College's vote may be swayed by bias. How can we trust total strangers with our vote? Bradford Plumer states, \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in the states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states (source 2). Voters do not get the full effect of voting because they are voting for other \"qualified\" people to vote for them. How is that possibly effective?\n\nCitizens do not have control over their vote. Once citizens vote their vote is out of their hands. The Electoral College chooses the president for them and there is nothing citizens can do about it. Bradford Plumer states, \"Your states certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives as part of the official records of the presidential election\" (source 2). The government has full control over how the election goes, not the citizens who voted.\n\nThe entire Electoral College system is completely irrational. The government needs to come up with a new way to vote for future presidents that is more fair. If we find a solution to this problem the government will not only gain favor of the American citizens, but also keep the balance that is established by the constitution. The American citizens will have control over their vote. The Electoral College should be abolished.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph want people know happened story Also want people know might mean say relation story The sentence means spring comes snow might melt plants budding next class next school year come brave take test That sentence means story might compared things different ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt these days, news is one of the most important parts in our modern life. However the question is, are we wasting our time when read the newspaper or follow it in television? In this essay I am going to argue that.\r\n\r\nThere are many people believe that, news is connecting to their lives. Firstly, follow news programmes is important to know what is going on the world and to be knowing what happens around them. In fact, they could be attention if there is any crisis appear in the world such as, nowadays the COVID 19 has spared in the whole world. Moreover, business men require to be attention about the economic news also political disaster, because policy has relation with economy, if any political disaster happens to the world, it will affect strongly in the international economy, so business men will run to buy anything that its price was affect. There are some other things to make following news being as this important.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many individual think that watching news let them to loss their time. In addition, many of them believe that if they read books instead of watching news, it might be more useful and that could retune to them significant knowledge. For instance, they think that while the news programmes are discussing and sharing the news they could finish two chapter of their book.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, this essay has argued that if is watching news will let them loss their time. In my opinion, watch news will not let you to waste of your time and maybe that make you attention what is going on around you and about your country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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