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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The content of movies and computer games is a primary concern in any society. While some people claim that this type of entertainment has a variety of disadvantages, others believe that it is just an innocent kind of relaxation. I tend to agree with the former, because, from my point of view, the violence presented can influence people. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, during childhood, children are in constant development not only physical but also mental. Furthermore, young people learn based on examples. For instance, some international research demonstrates that if a little boy has access to violent content at a higher frequency, he may present more likelihood of understanding a hazardous situation like being normal. Another pivotal fact is the excess of violence can contribute to the development of mental disorders such as depression and anxiety. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some individuals claim that violent games are just a simple form of leisure. Although to some adults this assumption can be true, considering the growth of children is a torrential reason of preoccupation. Moreover, this part of the population does not believe in the influence of social media and influencers that promote this type of violence, therefore, they cannot realize how perilous it is. Nowadays, the impact of social media on the lives of anyone is remarkable. For example, using the internet children can access not only games but also videos and online communities that endorse behaviours associated with Nazism like ordinary. \r\n\r\nAs far as I am concerned, the presence of online violence can cause damages in a long term and this is a situation completely uncontrolled. Governments, authorities, and parents ought to have more cautious in relation to online games since they can sway individuals to promote inappropriate behaviour. In addition, there are a plethora of educational online games much better to be learned. For all these reasons, I concur that violent movies and online games should be banned. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, entertainment using movies and games can be an excellent option for learning, however, if there is content using violence the consequences can be appalling. Good examples should be incentivized so as to create a better world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the driverless cars. The only reason that I say that is because I think we would have a lot less car accidents and we could be way safer on the road. One detail that I have is there are laser beams to form a constant 3-D model update\n\nof the car's surroundings. what's the point of the 3-D system is for the diverless car to mimic a diver at the wheel and to see where the cars are located around the car. Also, another reason that i'm with this diverless car is because at any time you can use the sensors to controll the car at any time.\n\nAlso, another reason that I like the idea of self-driving cars is they can sterr, accelerate, and brake themsleves. But all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The necessitates the car being ready to alert car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a promblem occurs. When the driver needs to be alerted there are more than one way to alert the driver instead of just giving an announcement to the driver. This is my opinion on self driving cars and why i would be for this tyoe of technolgy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author included concluding paragraph hibiscus shows Saeng comfort time discomfort She would possibly feel comfortable hibiscus budding misses homeland hibiscus reminds fail test first time comfortable new place But spring comes shell confident comfortable hibiscus budding", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although it is thought by some people that adolescents need to spend their certain leisure time to the society and the community without getting paid, as such actions are not only beneficial to the youngsters but also to the community .In my opinion, I completely disagree with this perspective due to the inimical impact on the pupil's studies and future .\r\n\r\nThere are a variety of reasons to explain this issue, it would not be a good decision to force them to do welfare tasks as they have extravagant homework and assignments to complete before deadlines which make difficult to them to do charity jobs during their spare period. These exercises will divert their attention from classes and result in poor academic performance at school and can have a detrimental effect on their future in the long run. For example, it has been proven through research which was done by the UK government that students involve in donation jobs fail to complete their assigned work at a time owing to fatigues. \r\n\r\nAnother point to consider is that this job belongs to those people who are indulged in organisations and aiding companies and are sponsored by the government and private companies. while young children lack the experience to perform such manoeuvre. They can hurt themselves and sustain serious injuries for a lifetime. As a result , the outcome achieved by immature children can contain various irregularities and mistakes as compared to a professional and skilful person. Hence, such work should be presented to those who can handle them with full responsibility.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as some people consider that youngsters ought to be part of social services ,but I believe that school-going children are already under tremendous pressure due to homework and other activities ; therefore, they should refrain from doing this and focus on their subjects for better future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The faceprint on Mars is not really a faceprint, It's actually a landmark on Mars. It was a 3D landmark that was changing in 1976, 1998, and 2001. NASA was proving they would find it was a landmark. That is why NASA is proving that the faceprint is a type of landmark.\n\nThe faceprint is totally a landmark. First of all, something funny happened around Mars, the faceprint. Second of all, There must have been a degree of suprise among the print. Lastly, It looked exactly like an Egyptian Pharaoh. In conclusion, all of those reasons are why the faceprint is a landmark on Mars.\n\nThat faceprint is not a landmark on Mars. First of all, all a faceprint can be is a faceprint. Second of all, There is no way there was an image regarding the faceprint. Lastly, it looks like a faceprint and is a faceprint because they told us that it has eyes, a nose, and a mouth on it. In conclusion, all of those reasons are why the faceprint is not a landmark on Mars.\n\nThose reasons above were why NASA proved the faceprint was a landmark. Everybody had seen the image of the print and where it came from. In conclusion, I think the faceprint on Mars is really a landmark on Mars, it is really clever and smart that astronauts found a really neat print on the planet Mars when it really was a landmark.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There several obstacles success construction Perhaps main obstacle obstacle nothing could done wind On paragraph mentions winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents These giant balloon like machines would constantly swivel around mooring mast even tied The Hindenburg disaster May also proved dangerous would blimps filled highly flammable hydrogen gas densely populated area like downtown New York The project also held back existing laws flight urban area It illegal ship ever tie building even approach area says author paragraph Incoming blimps would simply flying low law work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some interesting books I ever read offensive way I even read excellent books offend If nt books stories offend us would never really find offends us That I nt think books magazines music anything nature found offensive way remover shelves If think almost books offensive hurt feelings It depends feel written Something offensive one person group people found offensive another person group people If took books shelves someone said offended would books left Writing something want express feel tell story someone else Some authors offensive manner Others try sugercoat feel person certain idea Either way could still find something writing offensive In conclusion feel books found offensive hurtful left shelves took would wide selection books left", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that students face obstacles to focus on school's subjects. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and also explain some solutions that may emerge of this.\n\nAs we know that children tend to be active during school time because movement and social interaction are their way to recharge the energy. They are easily to get anxious and bored by sitting for a long time and listening to the teachers explaining materials, so they do another activity. As a consequence, when it comes to studying, it causes them tired. Secondly, it is a natural that the amount of children's attention time is not as much as adult, they may spend less than 90 minutes which the adult usually have. For instance, if children are encouraged to focus on linguistics lecturers, it will surely lead them to a distraction. \n\nHowever, every challenges could be addressed by including parents to help students overcome their problems. Children's guardian can give time management training, so children have a clear border on which occasion they should focus. As a consequence, they spend an effective time to study in a class and reach an optimum result. Besides, parents have big authority to discipline their children by giving them reward and punishment systems. For instance, if children is attentive to study in a certain time, they would receive a present so it motivates them to make a progress day by day.\n\nTo conclude, by nature, children have limited capacity to absorb school materials straight forward, because the lack of attention power, however it can be solved by contributing parents in a way of time schedule and rewarding schemes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng get feel called fil Buying something could help also missing And mother get little mad prags pay It vowed silently spring take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Among most of us assume that we have to live with climate changes rather than avoiding it. In my opinion, we cannot hide from the unexpected changes by nature. \nAs our world grows, new technologies emerge everyday, we heard about new innovations. It's great that we are evolving, but is it only we are evolving? No, environment is also evolving with us because of pollution, technologies and so on. It's hard for a person to leave his country because of weather, if the money he have is not sufficient enough to make him able to stay in some new region. It's hard for a person to leave his homeland, so many people does not seem like the idea of leaving everything behind. Like, in our country summer becomes unbearable and extremely hot. But from the population of 100% only 10% would be able to eliminate this, rest of them need to live with it.\nAlthough it's hard to survive in an abrupt change of an atmosphere around us but thanks to technology we find the enormous amount of solutions to beat this. In hotter countries people often work at night and in colder countries people work at noon. They often use Air-conditioners and heaters according to their needs. People always find solutions to make their life more comfortable.\nTo conclude, it's not essential for one to turn over because of climate but to adapt, is the key to grow more. Because change does not always guarantees a liveable environment, sometimes it bring more worse than betterment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" describes a new technology that can depict the emotions of anyone simply based off of their facial expressions. The technology, created by Dr. Huang, can calculate the percent of different emotions that a face is conveying. The technology could possibly be effective in classrooms, but people are not sure how truly effective the system would be. Some people believe the system would be useless, while others believe the system could bring a new view to learning. In my opinion, The Facial Action Coding System produced by Dr. Huang would be valuable in the classroom because of the many benefits it could bring to learning.\n\nBeginning In pagraph 6, D'Alto describes the benefits of what the system can bring to the classroom. D'Alto includes a quote from Dr. Huang that states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (D'Alto). This quote reveals that the system could advance the concept of learning. The system could allow students to stay more engaged in their lessons and not doze off or sit in confusion. The technology could allow students to enjoy learning more and could make school a less stressful environment. The modified lessons would allow students to have a learning experience that fits their knowledge and capabilities and would advance them in their experience of learning. The evidence provided in the article shows the true effectiveness the technology could have in the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Coding System produced by Dr.Huang is revolutionary. However, the possible effectiveness of the technology in the classroom is pondered by many. Overall, I believe the technology would be valuable in the classroom because of the many benefits it could bring to the capabilities of learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that the face might have been an alien's. I think that the Face is a natural landform because scientists beleive that the eyes,nose and mouth were cause by shadows. Some scientists believe that the face was an alien artifact. Scientists have used better camera that could even show a small shacks. Some say alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nFirst, I think the Face was caused by natural landforms because the eyes,nose, and mouth were caused shadows. A few days after the the picture, NASA unveilded the image and the caption noted \"Huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\" Some scientists still disagree saying it could have been an alien's face. When looking at the picture, there is a shadow of the rock. If it was an alien, why haven't scientist found any other alien like?\n\nSecond, the face was formed by a natural landform because when you look at the 2001 picture it is more clear than 1976 or 1998. The clear version shows that it had no eyes,nose, or mouth. Garvin said \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" Scientists are able to see pictures closer than before. Garvin also said \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" All the new technologies can get the actually picture more clearly unlike the picture from 1976.\n\nThen, scientists have better technoloy, they are able to go to Mar with new machines. Scientists can even go near the Face with new spacecraft adn get a better picture. Other scietists think that alien markings were hidden by haze. Even if they were hidden, scientists would be able to find it by now.\n\nFinally, the Face was formed by natural landform because it was caused by shadows, and scientists have better technology. On 2001, scientists used a camera which were better than the camera they used on 1976. This is why the Face was formed by natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that the history of one place plays a role major in people's lives. It is a fact that the number of people who try to find some information about their house is higher than before. The following paragraph will explore and provide some relevant examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some populations consider that the history of their home will affect their lives in a negative impact. Firstly, some communities look for some information about the house where their live just to make sure that it is safe and a good district. They also believe that happiness depends on many factors, and one of the most important things is a good condominium. Such as home does not contain bad stories or experiences. As an illustration, in Indonesia, the young spouse will invite their neighbour to pray in their new residence. Secondly, this can happen when citizens feel or remember what they have seen such as horror movies and are afraid that it will happen to their lives. \r\n\r\nLooking in more detail, society will struggle to collect their news by asking for some neighbours like who is in front of or maybe beside them. In addition, they can go to the oldest person in the area because they must know about the story around them. It can be used as a consideration when they want to buy or rent a building. Finally, they can also see the certificate of ownership, and find some information by themself. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this habit can be beneficial that will give the family convenience and quietness when they want to stay in a residence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a very complex system when it comes to electing the president. The system is called the Electoral College. Citizens of the United States think that they are 'actually' voting for their new presient but the are not. They are merly being led on by the government but their vote does count for someting. I myself think that we should keep the system of the electoral college because we vote for who we want through the electorals but not everybody agrees on the concept of the Electoral College.\n\nElectoral College is a very boring concept but it is one way how the nation keeps running. In\n\nWhat Is the Electoral College?\n\nit hepls people understand what the electoral college is. \"The Electoral Collge process consisits of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the elctoral votes by Congress.\" But before the electors vote they have to 'get' their votes from the votes of the citizen on who they want as president. So we are still voting but by people (electors) who base thier votes off ours.\n\nMany citzens disagree with the system of voting a president. From the article\n\nIndefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong it states that \"..according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore...won the popular vote but lost the presidency.\" How is that even possible? The reason Al Gore did not win presidency was he did not have the 270 electoral votes (thats how many you need to win presidency). Citzens were furious because they want Al Gore as president not Bush. None the less even if the government fixed the so called problems people would always find something they do not like about the electoral college.\n\nSo based of everything ny opinion does not matter and nor does yours becuase our nation has had the Electoral College for at least 100 years. Of course people complain that it is not fair but it keeps the nation running. So it comes down to wheather our votes count or f they do not. But what if the United States did not elect the president by the Electoral College or by popular votes how would the president be elected?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story spring snows melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test saying new year For example failed first time wait tries Another example want try get driving license", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is describing about how much do we need the tecnology, and we can't lose the various machine, becuase we're always using some tecnology in own life, and that article alomst decribe about car. Car also need to our life.\n\nFirst reason is, When who want to travel somewhere, then if we don;t have the car or bus, we couldn't do the long trip, like this we can't lose the car.\n\nNext reason is, if we don't have some time, and we have to go to just call time, then we use car or bike, as vehicle can\n\nmake the fast spped than walker or runner, so we can't lose the the vehicle.\n\nLast reason is, we ofen have used the vehicle, because we want to use important time. then we use the car, we can curtail some time for us.\n\nHowever, car is having\n\npossibility of crash, because vehicle could make too much speed, so we ofen crash with something, but employee of car is made various idea for lose the crash number. For example, Toyota is making the smart senser, GPS, airbag, etc...\n\nIn conclusion, we can't lose the tecnology by these reason, and vehicle assist for us, but car is having the possibility of dangerous. Because worker have thinking various idea for lose the crash, we will may be able to lose the die by crash.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Systems in Classrooms\n\nUsing facial action coding for students in a classroom is valuble. This is becuase it can be used to help better teach students. Its especially valuble becuase the software can modify lesson plans, as well as be used in simmulatons, and the software can be easily implemented in classrooms. This technology would also boost productivity in students.\n\nUsing facial recognition would be important because it can be used to modify lesson plans, based on the emotions detected. In other words if a student is bored or confused, the software can detect it and can make the lesson more attention grabbing, or use a different teaching method. An example of this was mentioned in the article when Dr. Huang said, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" (D'alto, 1). This is important becuase it gives direct evidence of the plans for this technology, and a method it could be used effectivly on students.\n\nThe technology can be used in learning simulations. This is valuble becuase more human communication is non verbal. Dr. Huang notes, \"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication...So computers need to understand that, too\" (D'alto, 1). In using this technology we can create more human like and responsive simulations, that can be implemented in classrooms. This could help create more life like surgery simulations or anything envolving human interaction or communication.\n\nSome might argue that the technology would be difficult to implement, but despite popular belief it is relativly easy to implement. Despite most technology not being able to decode somewhat incripted messages in famous works of art such as the Mona Lisa it can still be used to encode different emotions. Nick D'Alto writes, \"we can still write down some simple instructions that 'encode' different emotions.\" (page, 1). This quote shows that it's not difficult for a larger span of people to begin using this technology, and our schools education could be significantly changed at a relativly low expense.\n\nTo conclude facial action coding technology is valuble to classrooms. Not only can it be used to modify lesson plans, and improve simulations, despite common belief it can also be easily implemented. Overall it can be used to amplify productivity though easily implementing this Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are coming may be sooner than expected. Googles cofounder has a dream of make every car to be driverless and run on half the gas taxis use. Since the beginning of the 21 century technology had a major boost computers, sensors and mapping are now up to date with the real world doing things people would dream about in the 1980's. Now that the technology is capable of doing what we want, we should try to progess the technolgy of the world only to help with accidents, and make lifes tasks easier.\n\nMaking the driveless car is a challenge that can be accomplished it just requires time for it to happen. Google has already made a car that drove half a million miles without crashing ,but it nedded very little assisstants. Knowing this its only time until they finally make the car that doesn't crash and can drive without any assisstant from a person. Google modified a Prius that has a spinning sensor on the roof that makes a 3-D picture of everything surrounding it. With this and other cameras that allow it to see its blind spots it has the capacity to go a step further in\n\nhaving the car a reliable source on the road.\n\nMost states outlaw the test of computer driven car such as California, Nevada, Florida and the District of Columbia. The minds of people change once shown it trustworthy. So that once everyone sees that the car is safe to use on everyday roads it would be another step into making driveless cars. But some might say that if the computer crashes that runs it that would end up crashing the car. Well with problems there is always a solution and the only thing would be to add a backup computer that lets it reset itself so then it's able to continue on its route.\n\nFor the reasons wirtten driveless cars are no more a thing of the imagnation it would be able to have one in tthe near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The studying of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The studys of Venus has almost the same features of Earth, using old technology that could help, and might danger humans.\n\nOne of the reason studying of Venus is a worthy prusuit despite the danger it presents because it might almost- like features of Earth, but its hard to get close to Venus to see if its true. For example,\" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrennheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than whatwe experience on our own planet\"(3). This explain that its too dangers to see if Venus has almost the same the features of planet Earth.\n\nAnother reason worthy prusuit depite the danger is using old technology fromt he pass. From the article,\" the thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and lever and do not require electronies at all\" (7). This quite says that even tho NASA might use old technology from the past that technology don't require electronies from today. It's hard to use old technologly from the past with new things.\n\nThe author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" that studying Venus is worthy pursuit depite the dangers it presents. Useing old technology and seeing if Venus has almost the same featuresas Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The debate over whether it is better to own or rent the property in which one lives is one that has strong supporters on each side. There are persuasive arguments for both points of view.One of the main advantages of renting a property is flexibility. Usually, a tenant only has to give a month’s notice before changing where he or she lives. If a property is owned and a change is needed, the property must be put onto the market and it is frequently a long and stressful process to get a sale completed. Sometimes, the wrong time of year or a bad market can mean that a sale is not possible. Another advantage of renting is that a large amount of a family’s capital is not tied up in the property. Property can cost hundreds of thousands of dollars and often a lot more. If one rents, this money can be spent on other things to help improve the family’s quality of life. If the property is on a mortgage, then the deposit, also often very large, is tied up in the property and the pressure of having to make substantial payments every month can cause a lot of stress.Owning a property does have various advantages, though. Even though people usually have to service a mortgage every month with payments, this money is then built up with the property. With renting, the money is lost to the landlord, but at the end of the term of the mortgage, the whole property is owned by the family. This makes the process of living in a property a type of investment. In addition, the property’s value often goes up after time, frequently creating a substantial profit. Owning the property where one lives can also create a sense of well-being and self-actualisation.The decision to whether one rents or owns the property in which one lives really boils down to individual preference. My opinion is that it is much more preferable to own a property, mainly because it creates a valuable asset for the family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the era of advanced technology, robots are more and more common in our lives. The issue of whether robotics can benefit or hurt humans is widely debated. I believe that robots are crucial to human's future development, but they can also make negative impact if we do not regulate them.\r\n\r\nIt is generally accepted that robotics can assist the advancement of mankind since they are automation tools and thus they can significantly simplify our lives. In other words, robots or machines are able to extricate people from performing regular and repetitive tasks. For example, automatic manufacturing devices can accurately form and assemble products, which saves people lots of time and energy for production. Eventually, because people spend less and less time in boring works, people will have extra energy to carry out more valuable and meaningful affairs, such as inventing new items and formulating strategies for protecting environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robots may hurt humanity if they are poorly invented and regulated. As we may know, robots or machines are basically sets of programs and mechanisms developed by people. If codes or mechanical parts in robots are not well crafted, catastrophic results are highly likely to happen. For instance, robots that serve the purpose of cleaning can hit and even impair people if their moving systems do not function correctly. More serious accidents can occur if robots are not examined and checked carefully before they are sold to the public.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, robots are greatly beneficial to the furtherance of humanity. However, a great deal of disasters can happen if robots are not correctly designed and monitored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many years, there has been a disconnection between students and teachers; part of this is due to the fact that some students simply just do not like the taching methods of the teachers they have been assigned to, but what if that could change. Recently, a new technology has been developed that is called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology enables computers to identify a variety of human emotions. This system could accomplish many great things. If used in schools as personal tutors for students, many things could change for the better.\n\nImagine getting an A+ on every single one of your geometry quizzes because you actually knew what was going on. If the Facial Action Coding System is incorporated into a tutoring program, this could enhance the students knowledge of their prefered learning styles. If a student is learning a lesson in a class and FACS picks up that the student is not enjoying the way it is being taught to them or simply looks disinterested, FACS could continue to bring the lesson to the student until the student looks satisfied. The student would finally understand how to solve something in a way that they like meaning this would be a win for both the school and the student. This is just one of many ways that FACS could be used in classrooms across the world, potentially enhancing them.\n\nWith the evedince shown above, it has been shown how useful it would be to incorporate a Facial Action Coding System in schools. It would be a smart choice to have something that connects with a students emotions when it comes to learning something new. This would not only mean a higher success rate for schools, but also the student would be satisfied in knowing that they understand how to do certain things that they did not prior to FACS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every province has different traditions & cultures and that would aid child to grow & evolve in a discreet individual. Some folks suggest that, if a ménage migrates to territory with their children, it’s a remunerative act for their fate while others argue that, it will create an uncertain situation for them and detrimental to their curriculum. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, people move from one to another region, they have to face up some adverse effects. For instance, when students attend their varsity in another state or country, they feel discrimination between them and fellow students. They might have a problem linguistically and this approach might end up with a disappointing behaviour and homesickness. In addition, their different tradition might not usually as them. Their folks may not as helpful as in their province. For example, many families choose to move in developed territory for their growth on a monetary basis, but, they feel humiliation from the natives and irritate with their adamant state of mind. With these bizarre events, they do not choose to move from one to another.\r\n\r\nSecondly, choosing another country for further curriculum activities or for own purposes is a reasonable reason for moving into a foreign area. It’s a remunerative way to learn discrete cultures and traditions. In terms of comparison, developed countries have adequate tract to lure the individuals via their fascinating schemes and their per capita income ratio.\r\n\r\nFinally, as per the views, I believe in the opinion of, when people relocate their residents in other provinces, it’s quite an arduous effect on children, but overall, it’s beneficial for both child and their household members to move for better & prosperous fate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is frequently believed that the content which children watch on television affects their behaviour, while there are others who assume that watching duration on television gives the worst effect. In my view, what adolescents enjoy on television definitely influences them a lot compared with the time spent. \r\n\r\nSpending a long duration keeping their eyes on the television drives at least two effects on adolescents, both physically and psychologically. Toddlers are exposed by dangerous light from television and this provokes a hazardous impact on their health and might lead to temporary blindness if they watch the television excessively. Moreover, they might suffer from obesity because they extremely enjoy it and limit their body movement. Another impact generated from this phenomenon is their interaction with their peers. It is better for them to hang out with their friends and bond the relationship instead of wasting a long time rooted facing the television. \r\n\r\nIn tandem with this, television content is getting developed right now. People of vary ages can easily access the show on television including children. The advertisement published in the media persuades them to spend their money on unnecessary goods such as toys and unhealthy food. Not only that, the worst impact is the crime that possibly affects their behaviour. The massive publication of alcohol, narcotics and pornography increases their curiosity to try. Undoubtedly, if parents only paid little attention to them, this might increase the crime rate in the country. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, advertisements and inappropriate publications on television highly affect toddlers' behaviour in comparison with the long duration spent, and parents should guide them a lot to face this challenging phenomenon. The lack of attention of the parents might provoke the children to commit the crime perpetually.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting your car use could be a great way to enjoy nature and life. Walking is a great way to work out. Even riding a bike around your city, or town is a great way to work out. Some advantages of not using a car is that you don't have to worry about getting in to a car wreck, you don't have to smoke up your area with all the carbon dioxide that comes out of your car, and you actually work out for once. Limiting your car usage will have you not in a hurry. Heidrun Walter said, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". She feels that not using a car would make her feel better.\n\nCars are just a waste, I see that in the future there is going to be like a lot of over weight people. No one hardly work out nowadays. Just get in the car and go somewhere instead of walking around the block. It's going to be the real version of \"Wal-E\" where the earth is full of trash and everyone is going to live on a spaceship and their all over weight.\n\nBeing in a car will pollute your city so fast if everyone around had a car. As it says in the article, \"[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\". It is that way because a whole lot of people live there and almost everyone has a car over there in the two cities. Using a car will only make things better for the people and for the environment.\n\n\"BOGOTA, Colombia... millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets o fthis capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" This excerpt from the article explains some of the advantages of not using a car. All of them sound joyful. Hiking, Biking, Skating and no traffic jams? This sounds like a field day in the city. What could go wrong with all of these delightful activites goin on?\n\nThe excerpt clearly says that without cars you could have multiple and multiple things to do besides being lazy. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" - Carlos Arturo Plaza. Less stress and lower air pollution, I think that's the best combination of all. New york even has a bike-sharing program so you could ride your bike all over its city. Wow ! sounds like a deal to me.\n\nNot using a car is a great way to be yourself and do something with your life and to help others. No one likes pollution, and no one wants to be out of shape. As said by Carlos, he's stress free from cars. There's multiple sources out there that you could join and be apart of without having a car. The United States people are not using cars as much now, and all over the world people are starting programs to stop car usage. Without cars I believe that the world would be a better and healthier place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beleive that we should just stay with the voting we have. Because many people are used to that way of voting. I trully think we need to just stay the way we areif we do the other way of voting people will just stop voting all togethar. and all the hard work of the electors will be for nothing.\n\nIf you were in charge of the voting procces would you changa it? If I was I wouldint do a thing. to many people just would hate the goverment for what they have done if they change it. My parents for one thing are some of those people.\n\nif we were to change the way we vote. Many people would be lost because the government would just wont explain the new voting way. Just how many people do you think would agree with me? too many people wont be able to feel like there voting if this new way of voting is passed.\n\nJust how would you feel if you had to do something you do every day differantlly this year? I would feel so weird if I did something differant. Every doesnt like change that much. I would hate anyone that would change something i do every year.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features settings effect cyclist obstacles settings A obstacle object way trying go Some obstacles story hills forks road also rough road In story CAPS Road Ahead Exceed Posted Speed Limit rider runs into large highway sign jumped read Rough road", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing opinion effects computers people I believe good bad effects Computers make things easier people also dependent Mankind use books research also computers Computers helpful people For example really wanted see certain movie nt want stand line people go movie ticketscom purchase tickets Then get movie theater s left walk kiosk redeem tickets Another example computers allow people pay taxes There special software able downloaded onto computer Once software installed usually lead step step process paying bills It s much faster much easier paying manually These really good effects computers people Computers also flaws Over time computers caused people lazy Some people become dependant computers Business owners businessmen women general laplops blackberries Everywhere look another adult internet email Not adult s though Students becoming dependant internet For every assignment practically students use google bing Sometimes use wikipedia Students take time use extbooks The student body would rather watch play video games text homework This understandds homework boring pays end Taking extra minutes use textbook wo nt kill anyone No one died yet using book instead google Also using textbook understand whatever re That nt bad Computers see good bad effects It s easy use internet homework nt really help Making purchases fun though It saves gas money time I hope readers paper see point view", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. President,\n\nAfter reading informative essays on the Electoral College, i believe the Electoral College should be retired and change the election to popular vote during the election of our United States' president.\n\nAlthough the Electoral College was established by the founding fathers in the Constitution (What is the Electoral College?, 1) it can cause something known as the disaster factor. This happened back in 1960 and 2000. John F. Kennedy was almost replaced by the Democratic electors who nearly succeeded opposing him (The Indefensible Electoral College, 3).\n\nAnother worry factor of the electoral vote is a tie. This could mean putting the election of the president into the hands of the Senate. This also makes Wyoming, who has one representative, have equal say with a state like California, who has fifty-five represenatives (The Indefensible Electoral College, 12). This allows for the opposite of the will of the people. Isn't that what we want? The will of the people.\n\nThe winner-take-all system in every state also makes the electoral college unfair to voters (The Indefensible Electoral College, 13). Putting the decision of our US president in the hands of a few voters in one state while others don't even get to see the candidates is absolutely unjust.\n\nAlthough, there are a few reasons we should keep the electoral college. With the electoral college there is always a certainty of outcome (In Defense of the Electoral College, 18). This means that a candidate's electoral college votes exceeds popular vote. This cuts out the factor of a lanslide electoral vote in only one state; keeping in line the will of the people.\n\nThe Electoral College process of voting during election time is old, outdated, and unfair to our voting population. As a United States citizen, i think we should leave the election of our president up to popular vote; everyone will have a say and it takes out al the complications of electoral votes and representatives and most imporatantly takes the exact decisions of the will of the people.\n\nThank you for your time and taking my claims into consideration.\n\nSincerely,\n\nAimee Iorio", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author talks about the ups and downs of getting to know venus as a planet and having human life live their.\n\nNow, even though their are good parts about exploring venus there are many bad and dangerous parts about venus. Like for example, in the begining of the article the author talks about how, every mission was unmanned because, they couldn't even surive on the planet for no longer than a few hours. Also , they even talk about how Venus has a thick atmosphere of nearly 97 percent carbon dixide and thatn just blankets venus.This tells us that we have a less chances of even surving on venus. Venus weather is also horrible their teamputer averge is over 800 degrees, they have things like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes , and frquent lighting strikes. I know that these are things that happen on earth nearly everyday or every now and then but, with all that plus the heat ; we might not even be able to surive on there. The author does talks about how we and ahve a ship orbiting or hovering over the planet safely but, researchers wouldn't be able to take\n\nsamples of rocks,gas, or anything. So,what would be the point of even going down there if we can't even really explore it.\n\nThe postive things about venus, is one: Venus is already one of our\n\nsister planet and is referred to as Earth's \"Twin.\" It is the closest in distance, size ,destiney, and it even the most Eart-like planet in our solar system. So, we do have many things alike that well help [people feel better about even getting to explore venus. Another, thing is that in the article the author states that \"we havent touched Venus in more than.\" Meaning that we don't know what down there things could have changed drasctically we would never know. The authour also includes, how the planet has a rocky surface of sediment and has many features such as valleys, mountains and craters; plus Venus was proplaby even cover in largely oceans that could have supported many forms of life.The author use these facts to show us what we can benfit form exploring venus.They evne put in how NASA is compeling the idea of sending researchers down to study Venus. The last thing the aouthor states is how we should'nt keep our limits small just becuase were afraid of the dangers that migh happen but we should expand them and think of them as challenges too.\n\nSo,include Venus can be a worthy of studying and exploring. Just with a little more reseacher and better technogly; the authour shows us that we might actually have a chance of living on venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From story girl moved Vietnam United It hard girl understand anything anything bring memory back Vietnam The author concludes story paragraph fail test see wants see hibiscus budding II failed test Saeng said mother Her mother actually understand happen let Saeng keep hibiscus make Saeng feel better Saeng miss Vietnam lot like try best overcome obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, more and more people are willing to find out about the history of their house, at the same time thinking about what method can lead them to the final answer. Under essay will discuss these topics.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the rapid advance in technology plays a crucial role in why people are curious about the history behind their accommodations, in other words, due to the booming of information on the internet, the speed of getting to know the answer is faster than when in the old days which is a massive incentive. Additionally, the number of documentaries about the past of houses or regions are steadily rising, meanwhile, the variability of society’s taste in TV program is widening, therefore it is imaginable that more and more people are influenced by trying new shows. Last but not least, the history behind the department varies from country to country, it is imperative to know the reasons and creativity of those who decide to build it, in other words, it might lead you to better understand your nation more thoroughly.\r\n\r\nThere are multiple ways of finding out the answers. In the beginning, researching on the internet might be an efficient way to result from the blooming big data. After summarizing the information from whether internet or documentaries on TV, it is suitable to discuss with the elders who might know the region well. In the end, asking for help from people in related professions is more likely to confirm the final stories.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, society during this generation is passionate about the stories behind their hometown, at the same time, with the broadening variabilities of tools and methods, people are more likely to reveal the mask of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fellow citizens it is important that we talk about the advantages of limiting car usage. In the first story it says \" there have been efforts in the past two decades to make cities denser, and better for walking ...\" it also says that \" passenger cars are respondible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe ... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" David Goldberg said, an official of Transportation for America, a fast-growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the U.S....who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars, \" all of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change\".\n\nIn the story \"\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\"\n\ntalks about how after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. It says that on Mondays motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day, I think that this should happen all around the world, so the world can be a better palce to live in. Here is a fact form the stroy, \" Paris typically has more smog then other European capitals . . . [Last] week Paris had a 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London\". The 3rd stroy was about how in Bogota, Comlombia they do a car-free day, now that should be done here in the U.S.. It says that millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during car-free day, that the streets of the captial city eerily devoid of traffic jams, and that the rain has not stopped people from participating.\n\nThe last stroy talks about how the car culture is coming to an end, but i really hope not and i think not. It is here ,in the U.S., the birthpalce of the Model T, a classic car that i love and i would hope so that a lot of more people do too; the home of Detroit, what i know is that they make cars up there; tha place where Wilson Pickett immortalized \"Mustang Sally\", I do not know what that is but it does sound important. It also says that \" driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009...\" I mean the highest it went was 2009, we are in 2014, almost 2015, im a young person and i love to drive i think and feel like i can go as fast as light. What all four storys are saying is that cars will be gone sooner or later, i hope later, but the cars is what we need to go places. The car will enither be gone or be impovred some how, the fliying car maybe, but in till that happens, because i live in now, the car is what we have, i know that it's bad for the air, so instead of not using the car we can make it better, better for the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author Winter Hibiscus concludes story Saeng main character vowing attempt driving test spring hibiscus blooming This way showing reader even story ends Saeng give The author adds thought hibiscus bloom hibiscus symbol strength Saeng The hibiscus flower common home country hibiscus bought reminds everything left behind came Vietnam Saeng trying accept new life style uses hibiscus tool help tougher times After Saeng buys flower vows retake failed drivers test spring comes Spring symbol fresh start Saeng also feels hibiscus make winter Saeng The conclusion story uses lot imagery suggest Saeng strong continue live", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author, starts by talking about how Venus is part of our solar system and some facts about the planet. They try to support thier ideas on studying Venus as a worthy pursuit and dangers by first listing the similarities it has with our earth and then transitions toward thier topic. The author explains very well, many times by using examples and facts to support their idea about how Venus is a worthy pursuit in the scinece field, but at the same time they also counter with the many dangers that are eminent.\n\nFirst, the author describes the dangers with facts and statistics about Venus and the amosphere and how dangerous and harmful it is. Like in paragraph three, they stated \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide\" Which readers know is impossible for humans to survive under. Then they talk about the temperatures which is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The author does a really good job at then comparing the temperature on Venus with the temperature on earth by telling us that is is over 90 times greater than what is experienced on earth. Comparing is an effect way of making readers understand the difference and especially when it shows the numbers written all out. Then, they continue to support thier cause by talking about frequent natural disaster that cause havoc which some already excist on earth. This makes Venus looks so much more harmful and uninhabitable than it already did.\n\nLater in the passage, they transition to the benefits of studying about Venus and it is a somewhat smooth transition since the aurthor has already set up thier claim in paragraph two by stating plenty of similarities between the earth and Venus so readers can get and understanding of Venus. So in paragraph four, when the author entered, it was very smooth with a question on why the scientists even bothered and they countered by answering the question which helped support the authors overall claim. Another thing that shows how well the author has supported the idea of Venus worth studying is they list more similarities like in paragraph four they talk about how Venus had similar features like \"valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This gave readers a sense of imagery and later supports the imagery and landscape by giving a reason of why that is important like it is out nearest option for travel. This make the author sound much more credible.\n\nFinally, in the article, the author supports both of thier ideas by talking about NASA and thier ideas on the space travel. Paragraph five and six help explain why traveling to Venus is so hard, but still so worthwhile. They state, that it is diffcult by listing the extreme conditions even if they were to get close and still survive. Then in paragraph six they list the risks and the sample and different pictures they could have taken but the dangers were too high. This helps show readers the real limit and possiblity at the same time.\n\nTherfore, the author throughly explains thier idea and supported it very well with different techniques and different ways of explanation. The author has already done very well in adressing how traveling to Venus had its advantages but getting there and actually surviving the dangers is very hard. They did very well in explaining the dangers with facts and statistics. Then later also explained throughly with claims and backup information. This shows that this author was very prepared and supported thier idea exquisitely.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is this technology in a classroom valuable? Would this be useful in a classroom? Does this effect the students?\n\nThis technology in a classroom is very valuable. In the article to author says \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions--happiness,suprise,anger,digust,and sadness...\". Technology like this is rare in a classroom so it would be valuable and also helpful for the students and also teachers in some type of way. A reason for it to helps students because in the article it says \"... coulde recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" this mean it can help student on what they are cpnfused on so its helpful for the teachers an students.\n\nI feel like this technology would be useful in so many ways. Imagine you being a teacher with over 25+ students, there is no way you can get to everyone fast in a hurry. With the technology being there it can also be its job to help the students understand what they are taught not only by the teacher. This technology takes lots of stress off of teachers backs by helping with students,but not also tht if a student is embarrassed to ask for hep the technology knows their feelings so it could notify the teacher about that. This technology would make a big change in schools.\n\nThis would effect the studets in a couple of ways. First, it effects them by giving them a better learning environment because your basically giving your communication to a computer. Second, this can effect student in some what a bad way. Some students get happy for new things and for this being cool and new it can effect them from learning and they would get easily distracted. This could be a good thing or bad things but would help the our learning environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to live on another planet? Venus may have once been the most Earth-like planet and may be survivable for humans. Which is why Venus is a worthy pursuit.\n\nIt is the closest planet to earth so it would take very little time to get there.\n\nIn the text, \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\". So if we end up going to another planet it would likely be venus for times-sake.\n\nIt could be inhapitable soon after we reach it. The text states, \"thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\". So if we were to discover a way to Venus and a way to fly above it we could live (technically not) on Venus.\n\nPeople love challenges and this currently seems one of the most challlenging of all. In the text, \"researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\".\n\nI would rather think getting something without being able to reach it would be quite challenging if you are not psychic.\n\nThis is why Venus is a worthy pursuit. It is the closest planet to earth, it could be livable, and it would prove a challenge. Can you see any reason Not to go to Venus?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the face on Mars is just a natural landform. I think this because there has because the time the picture was taken, it was a time when Mars was cloudy. Even though my opponet may think that there is life on Mars and NASA would rather hide this information, the conspiracy would instead help NASA with their budget. The face located on Mars would indeed look alien-like, but according to Jim Garvin, cheif scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum reolution.\" Each pixel in in the 2001 imae spans1,56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. This is saying that the 2001 image of the face on Mars was more clear and easier to see than the image of the face in 1976. There is even landforms found common around the American West that show relation to the face on Mars. Many speculations have been made about the face on Mars, but most have been inlogical or unreasonable to the information at-hand. The facutal evidence that has been shown is more reasonable than the evidence of the ones who think that the face was caused by alien act.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new idea circulating among some experts which states that teenagers should do charity work on their holidays in order to gain a deeper appreciation and help their local communities. Although I believe that there are some merits to such arguments, I have to disagree with such notions and in this ,essay I will try to reason my perspective and draw a conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is foolish to assume that teenagers are not able to help their societies. The bright mind of such young humans can instantly learn and practice new talents in new circumstances. For instance, I experienced this first-hand when a teenager learned how to analyze some experimental data almost overnight and was able to help us reach our conference deadline. Therefore, these individuals are capable of helping their communities in meaningful ways.\r\n\r\nHowever, I think that teenagers should be reimbursed for such jobs. First, I believe that if they are not paid sufficiently, they are going to lose their motive and will not do the task up to standards. For example, a teenager might feel that the task is imposed upon him/her and as a result do not perform satisfactorily. Thus, it is of utmost importance to motivate such individuals, and money can do this very well. Second, I think that such notions might harm these young humans by avoiding \r\n\r\nthe opportunity of studying in their free time or learning essential skills that might prove useful in the future. For one, I learned basic programming in my free time when I was a teenager. So, I believe that it will be cruel to force teenagers to do such things without any kind of pay.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is indeed obvious that younger generations can be useful for their societies, however, if one has to work one must be reimbursed for it so as to raise their motivation. Additionally, any form of work should not devoid them of their valued time. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, governments should legislate rules in order to use this young workforce and pay them in preparing their attitude and behaviour.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, due to the increase of reasonable concerns in society about global warming, different opinions emerged and some suggest that, rather than prevention, it is better to adjust to living with climate imbalance. In my opinion it is completely wrong, due to its slaughtering effect on inhabitant's life even with minor changes .\n\nFirst of all, the arguement of finding a way to live with climate change, could only be claimed by those, who could not understand the destructive impacts of small changes in globe's temperature . As many experts claimed, after the water level surge, so many cities would expected to be swallowed by oceans. Although some people could not acknowledge this matter, all living creatures are collectively under risk . Since the ice masses started to melt long while ago, this era seem to be so late for tiny resolutions. The bigger damaging factors, such as overuse of fossil fuels and waste methods other than recycling should have been adressed so long ago by the governments.\n\nConsidering the probable and close effects of the climate change, the only matter mankind may get used to is the new lifestyle, which is more friendly to the balance of atmosphere. This meaures can be exemplified by sun pannels and wind turbines for producing energy and developping sustainable recycling methods for wastes. Although there are some efforts for returning this destruction, obviously it is not enough. More powerful restrictions on humankind's dangerous actions, should be implemented on war footing, in order to saving our kind and other inhabitants of the whole world.\n\nIn conclusion, the climate change is an upcoming disaster unless mankind would not adress the issue effectively. Therefore, everyone should adjust to the measures instead of facing the irreversible effects of destroyed climate balance .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college,they decide what we vote on based on what they think our state would choose for president. To me the country has it all wrong, I think we as US citizens should let our votes decide on who should be president. Even though things may get done quicker I think everyones voice should be heard. People like Bob Dole Jimmy Carter and Richard Nixon have tried to get rid of the electoral college. Plus the electoral college cost Al Gore his presidency would've also liked to have their voices heard in the 2000 election. and im pretty sure people would agree with me the 60% of the population of voters would like their voice to be heard.\n\nThe electoral college has a weird way of how they run and choose. Like the example in \"whats wrong with the electoral college\" it saiys that \"if someone lived in Texas and they wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to John Kerry and then John Kerry would have 34 electoral votes.\" If it were based on popular vote the points would be split to the person based on the number of votes they got.\n\nEven though other situations like in 2012 when obama won the election he recived a 61% of the electoral college's votes while the popular votes he recived was 51% a 10% difference, even though he still would've won it would've been more fair to let the popular votes decide. Some say its best to have a bias voter choose because they wont choose someone based on what everyone else's opinion is, like how the south favored romney over obama but to me that could be bad beacause what if who we choose actually has good ideas the college wouldve just go for the other guy.\n\nThe \"winner-take-all\" method happens in swing states like Florida,us and other states have a big part on who we choose to run our country we usually pay attention to all the debates and campaings because we think our leader should know what he's doing swing states and big states are places a presidential campaign would take place the like to ensure they get their votes where it counts to guarentee a lead. the electoral college doesnt go to good for people who dont agree to their sides view like \"republicans in California or democrats in Texas\" their voices arent heard the popular votes might've gotten some points to save their canidate.\n\nin conclusion the electoral college is blocking the right to vote for who we want and have their voices heard even if that person were a republican in California. the popular vote should have some say on who will run the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many things books music magazines ect causes problem acts children act different say everything stay library things causes acts things listed Many children get acts books movies magazines get acts something different Children gets acts television viewing home wich causes think parents nt care watching s okay view everSo causing acts viewed homes movies So I really say s okay children read watch evers legal television But libraries s whoms ever controling decide ages like legal things legal adults I say s adults childern starts argument ever see expecially around friends When children around friends feel s cool ever And s coming thing based violence books children reads often So I say shouldnt okay viewed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We have two neighbor planets Venus and Mars. But Venus is the closest to Earth in density, size and sometimes the closest in distance. Also Venus is called Earth's twin even though they are a lot differant.\n\nBut some people think that if we can get past all the bad weather sometime in the fucher we can go on it. We have sent space crafts their but none of them have lasted longer than a couple hours. The planet is very hard to study but, scientist think long ago that Venus was like Earth with large bodys of water and could suport life.\n\nThe plants weather is horrifiyng constant lightning, earthquakes, and even volcanos erupting. But their is silicon carbide that has been tested and represents Venus like chaos so scientist can study a little bit of how maybe Venus weather is and how it works. The atmosphear is 97% and with the clouds with high corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphear. With all of these varibles it would be rally hard to study. In the artical and like I said earlier long ago scientist think that Venus was alot like Earth and it might be possible to live on.\n\nIn the futer scientist beleive that we can study Venus better and understand how it works right now it is know as the hardest planet to study because of the condishions. And the planet has a rocky suface with valleys and, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe authors artical is good on how we should care about going and exploring Venus. And learning what happens and why and maybe even sometime in the futer living on Venus will happen, because it is so similar to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever had to drive in a car, but just relax while your driving? Well the workers of google are coming up with that. Its called a driverless car. There are some positive, negatives and my position on the driverless car.\n\nThere are many really good positve parts about the car. You can relax and chill in the car till a roadblock or a crash comes up in the way. It puts less stress on drivers that are in traffic jams. Google's driverless car they made went half a million miles with out a crash so, it would cause less wrecks.\n\nThis car has some negative stuff that would make you want to get a car you drive. Its not fully driverless it won't pull in or out of a drive way. Not everyone would have one so, there still would be alot of wrecks. You can't just go to sleep and let it take you somewhere you still have to be alert and awake.\n\nMy position will be different from somebody else but, who cares. I probably won't get one in my lifetime so, I don't really care for them. They would be nice to have during a traffic jam so, I could just sit back and relax. These cars aren't for everyone so, not everybody would like them.\n\nDriveless cars would be nice to have in the near future. They will be a very high dollar car that not everyone could buy. Some maybe trucks and some maybe cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the year of 1976, an object was discovered that looked like a human face on the planet Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars and taking pictures of possible places for Viking 2 to land. This 'human head' as they call it stretched two miles from each end of Mars. The passage states, \"It seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.\" NASA believed that there must have been a degree suprise among the mission controlers at the Jet Propulsion Lab when this 'Face' appeared on their monitor screens.\n\nDays after this what seemed to be 'human face' was released for all to see. The authors say, \"It would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" It did! NASA decided to call it \"Face on Mars.\" This 'Face' became a popular icon throughout the world. The text states, \"It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" This object on Mars lead people to think that maybe there really was life on Mars.\n\nWhen the MGS arrived at the Red Planet in September of 1997, 18 years after the Viking missions ended photogrpahing, Cydonia was still a big priority for NASA. Chief scientist, Jim Garvin says, \"We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" Jim believed it was important to taxpayers. One year later on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time takig a picture that was ten times sharper and more clear than the photos taken by Viking. Thousands of people were waiting for the picture of the Face to appear on their monitor screens any minute.\n\nNot everyone was satisfied with the picture of the Face that was taken that day. The author states, \"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\" The mission controllers were prepared to look again and noted, \"It's not easy to target Cyndonia,\" says Garvin. \"In fact, it's hard work.\" NASA does not pass over the Face very often, in fact, they scan the planet in 2.5 narrow strips.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, MGS drew close enough for a second look at the Face. Jim Garvin states, \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" The picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa which are landforms common around the American West. The passage states, \"You can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" If there were any objects in the picture taken of the Face in 2001 like an airplane or the ground or a house or pyramid, you could definitely be able to see them!\n\nThe Face found on the planet Mars is an extraordinary icon that will always be popular. Few believe that the Face could have been an alien artifact. The picture that was released for all to see noted, \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Could there really be life on Mars? It is possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Old age is the age which compels someone to rely on others for their needs because in this age person is not able to do their work by themselves. Some persons believe that ministry should help them to survive or on the other hand, few think that it is their own responsibility to feed themselves. This essay will discuss both the facets of this proposal reaching a logical conclusion.\n\n\nTo begin with, people who think that the authority should not take care of the elderly are not capable to decide the difference in working or retired people. In old age, they have a plethora of diseases that are preventing them to work or walk. Facilities like health care, pension, and subside in transport are compulsory and initial for the elderly, because they are not able to handle the extra work burden. Secondly, aged people are most commonly affected by atrocious diseases which put them in a dilemma where they are not financially capable to get proper treatment because of the cost, for example, the cancer's cure is very expensive everywhere, the government should pay them for their care and treatment.\n\n\nOn the other hand, some individuals are opposed to this notion, they think it is not right to give them any support because they should take care of their self from their saving or insurance. Secondly, it is the responsibility of their kids to take care of their parents. Everybody who worked in the government sector could get their pension from their organization as old days funds. For instance, in India people taking care of their parents in their own home, they are not leaving them in old age home and spending from their own pockets on their treatments.\n\n\nIn conclusion, the government should give them some facilities because of their age requirement and should allocate some parts of their pension to support them by not affecting other factors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are pros and cons to this. Cons, it's going to cost hundreds or maybe even thousands of dollars to get this program on everyone in the whole wide world device. People often hide their emotions for a reason, some don't want rhe sympathy that comes with being mad or sad. Others, just don't want to be embarassed by the fact. Pros,while students are at school and the device detects that the student is losing intrest in the topic they can modify the lesson. I think that will be pretty cool actually, because in World History not all the things we talk about can be interesting, so jazzing it up a bit might have students more interested in the topic. I'm kind of leaning on both sides of the fence here, because this is another privacy thing when it come to the negative emotions, like crying or being angry. Not everybody wants Dr. Paul Eckman in their business. It's not like he's going to jump through the screen of the device and help that person out, so again I think it'll be pointless. But like I said, it would be pretty cool to change up different lessons in school when a student doesn't show intrest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features california fact cyclist neave Yosemite made terrain rugged dangerous cyclist california hot climate neove desert need water cyclist much greater man cyclist In story cyclist travel desertlike conditions limited water supply The cyclist even mentioned story many hours ride land changed short rolling hills would made harder pedal making work harder story also mention sun beating would alos serve factor thout helped deplete hydration Through problem cyclist faced nowever managed stay determined people faced problems might able make Also story notices different stages struggle authours tone ananger confidient unsure desser", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology advancing every day One main technilogical device popular computer More people using however everyone agrees benifits society I believe benifit us One reason explore things home Before computers would go library find book need search found information needed Those things alone could take hours especially nt live near library However computers could type search engine find looking That could save gas money nt drive anywhere Another reason communicate online free Without computer would either go see person driving talking phone texting wich expensive On computer email many All communicate different ways If want look pictures take quizes play games talk thats And finally email send people letters videos talk people typing like others", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is whether the education of youth on cooperation should be taught through team sports at educational institutions. \r\n\r\nA commonly held belief is that all kids sense responsibility when they think that they can lose the game and can let everyone be down in the team. From the start of the game, the thinking process of each player is stimulated to enhance the game to be more agile and to win a final. Not only can they feel responsible for each team member but also for a coach and all who cheers for the championship. Each person of the group knows his own role and put a lot of efforts into fulfilling the task. These kinds of roles and targets within a group, show children how to work jointly to reach the aim of a command. That, as well, can be projected to real life situations when they grow up and live in society. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people claim that there is no such team sport in institutions that can bring up a man who would be able to cooperate. The explanation lies in the fact that a team sport is only the task within the group that each one needs to reach and no sense of joint work is revealed. Only regular life situations when there is no scheduled plot or rules, can show a kid what cooperation is all about. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that team sport is something that can teach children to act cooperatively as it clearly shows the reality when everyone depends on you and you are a dependent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus which is sometimes called an \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest point of light in t he night sky. Venus is a member in our solar system. Venus is a Planet. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it have approved many challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is worthy to pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space many humans have sent numerous spacecraft to this land but th missions are always been unmanned and as a result no spac craft has survived on this land for more than few hours. Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus for more than three decades. This is not only affecting the waste of money but also losing people's lives.\n\nThe thick atmosphere on Venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The clouds are highly corrosice sulfuric acid in Venus's atomosphere. On the planet's surface the temperature avarages over 800 degress Farenheit, and the atmosphereic pressure is 90 times higher than what we experience on Earth. These temperature are more than enough to harm any human being who tries to go to Venus. After all these results scientists should not discuss further to visit the surfafce of Venus.\n\nMany astronomers are shocked because once Venus used to like Earth. Large areas covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nNational Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has a solution for sending humans back on surface on Venus which would allow scientists to float above the fray like imagine a blimp-like vhecile hovering 30 or some miles above the rolling Venusian landscape just like our airplanes. This will avoid the a little less teperatue affects. It is challenging and hard.\n\nStriving to meet this challenge presented by Venus has value. Even thought\n\nNASA is trying to find the best solution to go on Venus still, we can't forget in past many people have lost their lives and the mission has been unsuccesful. Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When one thinks of transportation, the first idea that springs into a persons mind would be a car. A car is used almost daily for many people. It helps us get to point A to point B rain or shine. However, complications arise from the use (or overuse) of cars. The advantages of limiting car usage includes reduction in pollution, promote public transport, and cut off traffic.\n\nPollution has become a growing problem as the world continues to industrialize. The greenhouse gases emitted by machines, such as cars, have been proven detrimental to the enviornment. In car-dense citites, smog, a mixture of smoke and fog, has become a nuisance as it covers cities. In extreme cases,it makes the air citizens breathe toxic! According to Source 1, \" Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emission in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\". To establish limits to car usage would then, therefore, reduce the emission of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and clear up conditions not only for the world, but make the over-all city more enjoyable to live in. In order to reduce pollution and clear the air, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the international city. Source 2 states that \" The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescing the ban...\" proving that limiting car usage benefitted the city and the enviornment as well.\n\nReduction of car usage would lead to the promotion of public transportation. Public transport was free of charge during the ban in Paris which stated was a success in reducing pollution. Limiting car usage would then correlate in the promotion of public transport which, according to Source 4, \"...public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions [of greenhouse gases] and improve safety\" This not only benefits one's safety and environment but allows time-efficient traveling as buses and other public transport run along a contiuous schedule. Public transport also produces carpooling, which allows the reduction of cars on the road. This also eliminates a distributor in the production of greenhouse gases within the atmosphere which benefits the world.\n\nLimiting car usage will take one annoying factor from our daily lives-- traffic. As a suburban citizen living in Florida, traffic has become a daily nuisance of mine, one that not only is frusterating but stressful. It wastes time that I need to invest in being somewhere of importance. Residents in Vauban, Germany have given up their cars in their experimental new district near the French and Swiss borders. 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two says \" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" In Paris, \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\" during their ban in response to reduce pollution. This would make the lives of many citizens much more happier and time efficient as there are no worries about arrving late to an area of importance!\n\nLimiting car usage in many large cities accross the globe is not impossible, it has been done successfully in globally impactful cities such as Paris. This reduction of cars will not only benefit a community or a city, but the whole world! It will reduce pollution, promote the usage of public transport and carpooling and cut down on the rush-hour traffic leaving condtions in cities much more enjoyable to live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" describes a new, upcoming technology that can do something no computer can. This new technology, called the Facial Action Coding System, can read the muscles of someone's face to somewhat determine thier emotions. This new technology can both help and hinder us in differnt ways.\n\nThe FACS can be used to help in many ways and for many different people. As writen about in the article, the FACS can be used in the classroom to see if some students are confused or bored so the teacher knows what to explain more and when he she try to regain everyone's attention. This will help both students and teachers by increasing the amount of material learned and taught to students. While ths is the biggest reason, there is another way this can be used for our benefit. This can be used to make better facial emotions for anything computer-generated, like video games and things of that nature.\n\nWhile the FACS can be used for good as show above, we must be careful not to misuse it. When the excerpt talks about using it to read other people's emotions, we must take into accoount whether that person wants us to know how he feels. Some people may be having a hard time and are sad but don't want everyone to know until what is happening is over, but this may pick up on it and release it before someone is ready.\n\nThis new technology can be used for many good things as long as we use it wisely. The FACS may become a big things in everyday lives sooner than later.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet venus is kinda like a extra star in our soler system, in the article it says it's \"sometimes called a Evening Star\" and it also said that \"venus is a planet\" and it is the second planet from the sun it's a good pursuit.\n\nThe people of start to work on spacecraft so they can see what is out there and the first place they went to was the moon then mars and now venus in the article it says \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\" and the article also says that the challenging part is the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere so for the people that want to pursuit the planet venus it would be a good idea to look for information online or ask for information from any space programs that might be happening near you or if that doesn't help you ask people that work with stars planets and constlation at the planetarium.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, environmental pollution has become one of the most severe problems that the human race has to face due to the hazardous impacts that this phenomenon can have on people, society as well as the ecosystem. A mass array of elements relating to industrial manufacture and deforestation are believed to be the prominent reasons for the increasing issue of environmental contamination. Therefore, in order to successfully address this predicament, it is necessary for the government, industrial firms and individuals to put in a large amount of effort.\r\n\r\n To commence, one of the predominant factors of pollution is the tremendous amount of industrial waste discharged into the environment by factories. One good illustration of this is the hazardous effects that industrial effluents can have on bodies of water such as lakes, rivers and the ocean. This is due to the fact these aforementioned effluents have not gone through proper treatment, meaning they still remain incredibly toxic, which can result in the contamination of water and the demise of many aquatic lives. In addition, it appears environmental damage can also be attributed to deforestation. To be more specific, the act of removing forests and jungles in order to make room for agriculture and infrastructure can be detrimental to a myriad of fauna and flora species, as a result of their habitats being wiped out. This may lead to an imbalance in the ecosystem as a whole.\r\n\r\n Therefore, the authority, industrial firms as well as individuals should take appropriate measures in order to tackle this predicament. First of all, the government should promulgate decrees that prohibit contaminated material from being dumped into the environment and encourage manufactories to find an alternative to dispose of their waste, which can greatly alleviate the number of contaminants released. Furthermore, policymakers should enact laws that force manufactories to thoroughly treat their waste before discharging them. While the impacts might be smaller in comparison to the aforementioned remedies, each individual can help to ameliorate the situation by performing simple daily activities, for instance, recycling plastic bottles or planting more trees around neighbourhoods.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, it is evidenced that aspects associated with industrial manufacture and deforestation can be detrimental to the environment. As a consequence, it would be advisable for the authority, corporations as well as citizens to conduct practical measures in order to improve this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist travelling far going For example About forty miles pedal I arrived first town good thing taking water knows would survived I think biggest mistake asked probaly someone ever road directions When asked person ended sign said Rough road Ahead Do exceed moment I felt sorry probaly effective feature happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name views censorship libraries material found offensive take shelves I never came across material offensive maybe someone else really offended I m type person would start argument type person speak whats mind tell believe People concerned libraries take certain kinds books books left shelves anyone else I say places buy books beside libraries stores etc Like said never came across book think pulled shelf course nt read whole lot either books read never came crossed terrible Books like people kill people get pregnant pulled shelves child library shouldnt even adult book section anyways kids book section I never heard kid book terrible pulled shelf Most authors smarter least would hope Music whole story self In opinon nt want kids listen adult music nt let I know lot music bad would never let children listen know well enough nt want listen m going play around I grew around rap music thats listen kids know able listen wont able listen Movies one problem libraries places book stores put movies EVERYONE see nt matter s cover s called Now movies bad covers bad titles could pulled shelves CAPS movies The name movies nt bad movie self child see even shelves kids see want watch Magazines etc nt big problem libraries nt bad ones book stores playboy play girl usually put back back behind magazines children ca nt see adults The way child would see point I think ve said say opinions experiences books music movies magazines libraries nt pulled shelves I hav nt lot experience maybe s nt kids yet guess find kids I happy explain experiences opinions people really care want know", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Mona lisa simle in mona lisa picture that evryone see she is always smile she never mad or said or depressed. technology people try to make a new software so the computer can show weither you are mad or sad or happy it will tell you that and some ads will pop up and let either you are happy or sad. The computer will tell us what are emotions are and i kind of like that because the computer is leting me know if i'm mad or not or sad or not and if i am ann ad will pop up tell mad or sad .But some people wouldn't like being told their mad or sad some people are different from other people .Like when i look at the mona lisa picture it makes happy it makes me feel good about myself make me wanna look up to her like row model. moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them. But that is good idea to come up with and see how it works .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to be burned at 800 degrees Fahrenheit? No, that just sound to painful you might say. Scientists at NASA speculate that Venus's surface on the planet can average those temperatures. In this essay I will talk about how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit and evidence that backs my claim up thoroughly.\n\nGoing to another planet seems so dangerous and so far out of our mind that we don't think about this idea on a regular basis. The text states in paragraph 3, \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures avereage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouter on Earth.\" This quote shows how much more dangerous Venus is than Earth just simply based on the atmosphere of the planet and that harsh conditions that cover it. Another piece of evidence is this in paragraph 4, \" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such asn valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. The value of Venus seems indisputable.\" This quote shows how Venus is so close geographically and distance wise to Earth based on some land features. Researchers find that getting even 30 miles from the surface of the planet the temperatures would still be at roughly 160 degrees Fahrenheit, but the pressure would be close to Earth's sea level.\n\nVenus is a worthy pursuit because it is so magnificant of a planet because we have never experienced a planet so much like our own. Our travels shouldn't be limited by dangers or doubts that we may have but should meet our endeavourous wonders and imagination of the planet and travel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future where driveless cars exist?Such cars could fundamentlly change the world.From my position I don't really think that they are a good idea.\n\nEven though they can be be fasinating ,in most states it is illegal to test computer driven cars.It could be dangerouse and something could go wrong.Not evereybody approves driveless cars.\n\nTraffic laws would have to change.A lot of people would not be happy if traffic laws were changed just so other people could have driveless cars.There could be alot of accidents if the traffic laws change.\n\nIf the technology fails and someone is injusred whose fault is it,the driver or the manufacturer?If the manufacturers were blamed they could be sewd and they could loose alot of money.On the other hand\n\nthe driver could get blamed without fault and that would not be fair to them.You would not know who to blame.\n\nEven though driveless cars can be fascinating to people they might not be the greatest idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an on-going theory that the Face on Mars was something created by aliens, However, this theory inaccurate. This is inaccurate because there is no such thing as aliens, and it is the Martian equivalent of a mesa. Therefore,the Face on Mars was not created by aliens.\n\nFirstly, aliens are not real. Although there have be \"sightings\" of UFO's, there has always been an explanation; such as the military was testing out flares and/or airborne vehicles. Furthermore, there has never actually been a sighting of aliens on Earth. People have only found strange creatures that they believe to be aliens. Also, we have sent rovers to Mars. Wouldn't you think that if we sent rovers with camera footage to Mars, we'd see at least one alien there? There has never been a sighting of alien life forms on Mars. Therefore, The face was not built by aliens because aliens don't excist.\n\nLastly, scientists have said that the Face is just a mesa. Scientists say that they know this because they are common in the Western areas in America. It also is a close representation to the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Also, scientists have sent Martian Surveyors to Mars so that they can take pictures. In 2001, a Surveyor, with the image span of 1.56 meters a pixel, took a picture that clearly shows no face after all the shadowing is uplifted.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face was not created by aliens because they do not excist, and it looks to be a mesa, like the ones in America. Scientist have proven for the Face to just be a mesa not created by aliens. Therefore, the Face is just a mesa not created by aliens, but by natural accurance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's time, it has come to trend that many communities are fond of finding out the history of the place they are living in. In this essay i will try to depict the reasons to this including possible measures by which finding history of a house gets easier.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, many people take finding history of the place they live in or are planing to as a hobby this adds up to the joys of living at that place. In addition to this finding about the past where one lives becomes crucial for safety purposes as well. Furthermore, It can also help the seller while selling the building for example, if the ex-resident of the house is a famous celebrity then providing this as an additional information while selling it can get sold in more cost. \r\n\r\nSecondly, if i talk abount the ways which can help one in finding about the place, then the most popular one is through internet as its most feasable. However from my point of view i would prefer getting information from the neighbourhood as they live close by the place. however it's difficult to get full information from neighbours in some cases still it can provide more data as compared to websites. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think this is just as a hobby for many citizens. Although should be taken as a primary task when thinking of to live in a place, specifically for safety purposes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a comuter recongize your emotion is pretty high-tech. As far as it telling if your lying could be used in a variety of ways. I would generally like that. We could use them for video games, counseling/school and for painting/drawing. We have a lot to explore about us and the technology, its unlimitless.\n\nFirst off Video Games, a whole large portion of people play games. The fact that if you use this new coding could help put more emotion, or show more emotion in a character. We see ourselves and other peoples emotion everyday, so you could actually tell what the character is feeling. In chapter 6 of the passage the author said, \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotion communication.\" Then he said that computers need to understand it to. Which i believe they do, like i said before it could help in the video games industry.\n\nSecond Counceling/school, say you have gone throughout your day hiding your emotion or that you get bored in class. Sure yes, you dont suspect people to see cause your force a smile. But this high tech can notice if you force or not. Its not like you studied the human body for years on years. In chapter 7 of the passage it explains to do something to force a smile, you do so. You use those muscles to make a smile. Say your in class and you are super bored because the teacher is tecahing tiredly, the computer can pick it up.\n\nLast to not least, Painting/and drawing, a lot of people di it everyday. Yea so you cant draw a cat but i bet if the cat was big you would see way more emotion. In paragraph 5 how leonardo sudied the humsn body judt so he could paint it out. He watched the vrins regurly.\n\nHi my names is STUDENT_NAME.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be helpful and dangerous. But, I think driverless cars are found to be more dangerous than helpful. If a person that has a driverless car falls asleep because they are bored and do not have control of the car, it may harm them in many ways.\n\nIn my opinion you can't always rely on technology to do work for you. Computers can break down and have mishaps at any giving time. In the text it states \" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe\". Having a car built off techonology wouldnt keep everyone safe. Technology can fail. The only way to keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, is to have a human driving, that can steer, accelerate, and brake for themselves.\n\nPeople can be in more danger because of the roads as well. Roads are not always so much secure and safe. Roads are bumpy and have holes in them that can cause accidents. In the article it say's \"all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This means the driver will need to be awoke and alert at all times, but if you're driving for about 5-6 hours how can you stay awake if you have a car that drives itself and all you have to do is nothing?.\n\nDriverless cars are dangerous, useless, and a waiste of money. Why have a driverless car that still needs a driver?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I heard people say smile makes big difference first meeting relationship walking past people street If someone bad smile make better also laughter along accompany sincere smile I enjoy walking street nice beautiful walking locals I know smile laugh give little wave show enjoying much I Walking past someone I know also positives One look see face tell good bad Either way I give smile A smile show good smile encouragement let know get better I enjoy feeling I get I meet someone I know connected great A good first impression important determine friendship go long last I know I enjoy around someone like enjoys smile laugh I ca nt really seem see around serious person I know I would clash problems I loud serious would problems able collaborate decisions I first met friend I nervous scared set blind date mutual friend It double date friend cousin guys first picked us I got car first thing I remember seeing big smile guy s face I ended getting nervous began stutter started talk As date went seemed like earth guy always seemed smile face laughter seemed flow right As time went became closer I would ever thought I sure friendship would lead us soon became noticeable liked I liked We took slow rushing things We long conversations would last us hours time always seemed laugh everything He made everything seem better better every time talked Pretty much personality always smiling laughing helped us connect right away Just night mutual friend came visit cousin house We laughing enjoying others company decided go store buy things using car Since nt going gone long I decided wait inside Minutes sat talking run house looking flushed breath scared nervous something would nt look us told us go outside something happened car As stood I realized car sight driveway I became suspicious We asked car pointed road dark could see faint outline car ditch I expecting get mad say something seemed know say instead smiled walked towards car said CAPSt worry car fine said started laughing amazing laugh I still state shock I heard laugh I turned looked realizing happy nt seem mind accident I began laughing well less seconds beginning laugh us four laughing also two cousins joined us outside Laughter made situation better I enjoyed fact could laugh smallest unexpected worst well best What also made happy fact night incident asked question I hoping hear way said made laugh caused laugh I answered question hug yes brought banquet roses As walked inside cousins aunt started applaud started laugh smiles faces", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sure technology is great but, can we really trust it? Self driving cars are quickly approaching, so before they are here we must go over the negative aspects it will have. My stance on self driving cars is, they are unsafe and not perfectly created\n\nA few problems we might encounter with a self driving car is, problems with the law, and technology issues/malfunction.\n\nThe law states that its main focus is keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. Laws assume the only safe way to acheive that is with alert drivers. How can we trust a robot to drive a vehicle, with no real thought process? What if they malfunction and someone gets injured, then we have discuss whos liable and its a big ordeal. The text states \" New laws will be needed in order to cover the liability in the case of an accident.\" The main message is who is liable for a mistake in the cars accident? The driver or the manufacturer?\n\nSecondly, Computer malfunction and technology issues have been occuring since the dawn of computers. So, whos to say it wont happen to a car? Smart cars are relished to be great and accident free but in the case of an electronic malfunction, I beg to differ. Also, are hackers able to tune into your car and mess it up electronically? YES! By bypassing your cars security system, they will have full access to your car from the inside, and be able to shut it down or cut off certain features. So the smartest move is to stick with manually driven cars for the safety and concern of our people. But they are currently working on these issues as stated \" Automakers are continuing their work on the assuption that the problems ahead will be solved.\"\n\nSmart cars may be a new intuitive way to drive a car, but they need to be more harshly critisized for the safety of young children and adults. Sure smart cars can be safe and effective but they MUST be one-hundred percent proven and out of technological disorder for the maximum protention of our countries people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, the influence of newspapers on people's decisions has become a controversial argument. Whilst the main factor that has encouraged their significant effect is their ability to reach the overwhelming majority of citizens' homes, I believe that this has positively influenced civilians' notions. In this essay, the main reasons behind this trend, along with its advantageous points will be further elaborated. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n To embark on, despite the fact that papers are endangered because of new means of publicities, the factor that has encouraged them to be highly influential is their ubiquity in a substantial proportion of homes. This means that when journals become accessible to the majority of countrymen, their influence will be excessively profound. An eminent example of this is the Egyptian famous newsletters Al Ahram which is considered to be the main road towards Egyptians' thoughts and opinions. Therefore, the impact of journals on people's notions has not changed over the ages. \r\n\r\n Furthermore, this phenomenon has a positive impact on nations' way of thinking because they are reliable and trusted. In other words, if youth read any news published in these authentic journals, they will believe that this information is trusted and take it for granted. This can be witnessed by the publicity campaign which was conducted by the famous football player Mo Salah which has positively impacted young people's attitudes. Accordingly, in a final analysis, newsletters play a quintessential constructive role in teenagers' attributes. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only does the availability of magazines help in their profound impact, but also they have an indispensable influence on teenagers' lives. Eventually, I am a staunch believer that without the help of written news, young people could not have been aware enough.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Some minor obstacles frame strength building Other obstacles major nature controlled In paragraph nine author explains thousandfoot dirigibles moored top Empire State Building would add stress building s frame Also wind pressure building s foundation would affected In order allow dirigibles dock frame building would modified strengthened As nature great affect use mooring mast would almost impossible dirigibles tethered onto building The wind would send dirigibles swiveling around mooring mast author describes paragraph fourteen Other obstacles builders faced dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium landing fields weighed back blimps would lead weight would nt safe dangling pedestrians last problem existing law againts airships flying low urban areas Though builders Empire State building faced obstacles allowing blimps dock still became well known building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are inclined to think that raising the price of petrol; diesel and motors is one of the effective approaches to overcome environmental pollution. I disagree to a major extent with this notion. My position is justified further with reasons and examples.\r\n\r\nThe foremost argument to justify my view is that increasing rates of fuel may arise a lot of financial problems for many public. As the youngsters are travelling from rural to city areas on a daily basis for jobs may face difficulty in managing their money. Also, most of the middle-class can not afford costly transportation so they may lose their long-distance work owing to the high cost of travelling. However, there are other measures which can help to ameliorate the problems of the environment without any negative effects. Firstly, the government should encourage mankind to use electric shipment. This means electronic vehicles are the best option as they will not emit any poisonous fumes into the air. The best epitome is the USA , a developed nation, in which the automatic transportation system (electric tram) is introduced by authorities decades ago which helped in the reduction of air pollution.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others claim that the high cost of fuels can remedy the situation of environmental pollution. The main reason is that it will restrict folks from unnecessary usage of personal transportation. It has been observed that in city areas most of the youngsters have their own transit ergo they use more frequently for commuting which will cause the air contamination. But, the high price of fuels may encourage them to benefit from public transport in lieu of cars. This will create a positive impact on the surrounding by reducing air pollutants. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, notwithstanding at some point increase cost of petrol can help to overcome environmental problems by putting a restriction on the public for unnecessary usage of cars, the demerits of this situation can not be overlooked. Thus, authorities encouraging crowds to use electric trams and subways can be a more effective way to mitigate the issues about the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the Challenge of Exploring Veuns the Author studying Venus is worthy putsite why does he/she think's so here's why \"Venus may as well have been the most earth like planet in our solar system\" that mean Venus might have had the same\n\nAtmosphere as earth such as runing water and sunlight if we keep on studying this we could have another planet just like Earth.\n\nScientists have been studying Venus and they found it's a lot harder than it looks to get to Venus the reason is because \"a thick Atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blanket sulfuric acid is in Venu's Atmosphere\" not only do they have to worry about that if they send a Spacecraft it wouldn't make it pass Venu's Atmosphere and even if it did make it pass Venus Atmosphere it won't surive that long.\n\nMany has tried to make it before us but we never made it the reason i know this is because \"humans have sent numerous Spacecraft on this cloud-draped world each pervious mission\n\nwas unmanned, and for good reason, since no Spacecraft Survived the landing for more than a few hours\" we have never seen the whole view of the planet because we have never made it.\n\nReason to why we are so fascinated by this planet is because \" long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth\" that means if earth somehow decides to stop working we can probably break through Venus clouds and somehow find a way to live there it might take a hundreds of years for us to get pass Venus clouds but we also have think about about how are we going to get that many people on one Planet.\n\nin conclusion we might be able to break through venus thick clouds and not die because if a Spacecraft can't survive that long then who say's we can but that doesn't stop us. We could make a thing for us to breath on Venus just like earth but we won't know until we keep on studying the Planet who knowns what could be on Venus it could shock the world but we won't know until we get there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this passage provides many reasons on why we should explore Venus. The author states many interesting facts about Venus and ways we could adventure the risky terrain.\n\nAccording to the author in passage two, Venus is the closest planet to Earths size and density. This meaning, if we were to explore this terrain it could be a possible place to start another biome like Earth. In passage four, the author mentions that Venus has mountains, valleys, and craters that resemble those we have on Earth. The author makes a good point in mentioning that Earth and Venus are very different but also very similar.\n\nThe author also reveals to us that Venus has an atmosphere made up of about 97% carbon dioxide. This piece of evidence is backed up with passage five, where the author also states that NASA is thinking about usinng the solution of allowing scientists to float above the harsh conditions of Venus' surface. This would allow our scientists to be able to explore and gather more information about Venus all while avoiding dangerous conditions.\n\nThe author does an excellent job at continuing to provide statements that support the idea of exploring Venus. At the end of passage five, the author states that solar power would be plentiful, and the radiation on Venus' surface and atmosphere would not exceed Earths levels of radiation. According to what the author states in passage six, many researchers are working on building machines that can withstand Venus' difficult conditions. This would allow the machines to collect samples from Venus' surface for the machines to bring back to earth for our scientists to analize.\n\nAt the end of the article, the author provides the idea that us humans exploring Venus could lead to many other great explorations. Overall throughout the article the author continuously provides valuable reasons on why it is worth it for our scientists to explore Venus. The exploration could lead to many great things accoriding to the information the author provided to us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy to go explore from the dangers that Venus has. An evidence that it says that the author is supporting this idea is in paragraph five. In paragraph it says that \" Solor power would be plentiful, and raidiation would not exceed Earth level. Not easy condition, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nIn the bottom of the second paragraph it says \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge plant for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" In paragraph the author is describing how Venus was like a long time ago, covered with large oceans and that it could of have supported various forms of life. The author also describes how the planet looks like today with rocks, valleys, and mountains.\n\nIn paragragh six it talks about how researchers and scientist are working on innovations that would make the machines last long enough while exploring Venus. Paragraph six also talks about how researchers can't take any rocks, gas, or anything that is from Venus, to no make it a risk and researchers can't take pictures or videos that well because the light of the picture or video cannot penetrate the dense of the atmoshere which is ineffective.\n\nIn the bottom of paragraph seven it says that \" Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, system that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" I think that reseachers and scientist are learning more and more about humans going to Venus to see if it is safe to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is a natural land form on Mars, though it may look like a face it is not. I know this because the story tells me that \"When the scientists found the face on their screen but the sensation was short lived after the scientis thought that it was just another mesa. Which were common around Cydonia.\" This supports my claim that \"the Face\" isn't actually a face because even the scientists who first saw this 'face' pushed the idea that what appeared to be a face was actually a face.\n\nThe author also includes this statement in paragraph 12 that states \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa which are types of landforms common around the American West.\" This also helps proove my claim to be a fact because since we have mesas and buttes on earth that look almost exact to these pictures, prooving that this is way more likely to end up being a mesa or a butte than an alien artifact. Another reason why I could convince someone that this is a natural landform and not a face is because the author wrote \"you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size\" This means that if the 'face' was actually a face, you would be able to see it with no problem.\n\nI know that the 'face' is actually a natural land form because in paragraph 7 that author informs me that \" The MOC team snapped a picture ten thousand times sharper than the original a picture ten times sharper\n\nthan the 1976 viking photos.\" This is important because this photo was posted on the JPL website, which showed the public that the \"Face\" was just\n\nan natural land form. This was important for NASA to do this so they could finally put the conspiracy theorists to rest so they would stop accusing NASA of hiding evidince that alien life actually exists.\n\nIf anyone still belives that NASA is hiding information regarding the \"Face\" even after I told them all of this, I would just give up and tell them to read the article themselves. Mainly because there is a lot of sources, especially on the internet, that has all of the facts on this matter and I think those who don't belive the article should go look at some of them. Some of the places that these people could look are this article, google, they could maybe look for anything on this face situation on NASA's website, and the list goes on. Since there is so much evidince behind the idea of the \"Face\" not actually not being a face, I have really no choice but to belive that NASA isn't hiding anything. But I don't know since I'm not a conspiracy theorist or anything like that so I don't get why they contimplate the universe or what ever.\n\nHow ever, in 1976, I would have speculated that it was a face because to be honest, the picture wasn't that good of quality due to the technology back then compared to what we have around nowadays. The author even mentions this subject in paragraph 10 by stating \" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters which means that NASA could get a much more detailed picture than that of the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient My mom told getting fo I happy come I opening presents So I asked said would get taxes came I patient wait months couple days I mad cause I thought So I go school wait wait came It seemed like days got longer longer I getting mader mader longest months ever I didnt even know could feel long like I though year went Ater went finally I didnt get like end month crushed little heart bodly wait thing long I wanted bad When I got fuh play games apps conqurors amazingIf something happen I would destroyed A expensive get take care Thats keeping special place away little kids I dont even let play I feel hide might play supervision thats time play That thing cost much money get lost broken Specially time I wait My little sister getting thing like its kind educational one My little brother getting dsIm happy getting thing stop asking stuff My mom getting games birthday I one little brother sister lost I angry cant play That defenitly thing wait patient Thats play Im saved il getting lost broke If mom wont get another one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My mother patient person I know When drops practice waits two half hours cheer fly dance whole routine When I go science programs waits atleast two hours untill its Every morning waits finish getting ready After school waits buy something table lobby All asks us return favor She doesnt rush us unless late And always hugs us leave", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The natural habitat of the fauna and flora is continually being destroyed by the humans, to compensate for their basic requirements of food, shelter and clothing. The demand for these is increasing with the passing days as the expansion of the population is not controlled. There are few problems areas which can be worked out.\r\n\r\nThere is an increasing need of products on the account of increased number of people. All of these are meant by the people involved in these sectors. However, the consequences are not good, as the forest is being cleared of trees to obtain wood for furniture and house. Furthermore, the dust produced while making furniture, pollutes air with its small size of the particles. In addition to it, the use of animals and their products to meet the human hunger is immense. More and more fishes are cleared from the water bodies, which leads to depletion in species of fishes, moreover the dagger like hazardous instruments causes damage to the surrounding aquatic life. For example, the Canadian coast, where there were abundant fishes is now permanently closed due to over exploitation of the aquatic lives.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nThe solution to these practises are many, if tried to follow then the results will be amended. The foremost solution is to properly using and throwing plastics, this will reduce almost 40% of the natures prevailing problems. Another, is putting a stop to excessive fishing and reducing these practise up to a certain extent. The best solution for the non vegetarians is to rely on the factory made chicken for a while. Although, exercising control of population is difficult, but a reduction in the size of houses is in the hands of government. These are the probable solutions.\r\n\r\n For example, on a place of huge mansion, building consisting of several floors can be constructed. This will redce the problem of space and need for more wood. Another, is resuing of the old furniture by painting or polishing it.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, we should join our hands together, to save our mother nature, and reduce the use of plastic and our demands for constant upliftment on the cost of nature.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor I beleive computers good future The world made many chenges technology I know spending time exercising bad learning new things cant bad If humans nt technology us would nt heat fresh water We use computers life Computers good people use learn world Some people friends far away use computer talk Or even people ca nt talk use computers talk The uses computers save lives Computers save lifes many ways scary think gone could start dying We use computers hospitals nt computers chances finding cure something would take long person could die Lets say someone looks like normal fever say thats Two days later died disease one knew late We use computers purify water We use computers keep us warm winter We even use computers libraries library Some people medical illnesses ca nt talk little computers something typed would say Most people use kind computer talk chat text They might find easier computer The worlds big place many people nt know much But go online could find stuff never knew exsited plainly nt know Kids even use computers school school work So many people rely technology get life Computers even help people school people like broke arm take test computer Like Now many things military airforce computerized The miltary uses thermal sights guns tanks identify people even craziest weather It could even locate wounded soldier There even working computers make better bullet prove vest lives saved war The airforce uses computers talk people ground could protect They planes flown man far away would save lives even gets shot This also alows see people hiding could tell people ground stay whatever The uses radar see boats submarines coming near heads would attack We use help advances future could soon computer could help people far places like higher poverty rate Computers save lives alows communication good way research Computers use live need survive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The modern medicine is very important for living a long life. It on new technology. . Also modern medicine is human body. . Therefore I agree that the modern medicine to live longer.First of all, the modern medicine can prevent incurable diseases. Doctors can find some diseases very early. Then doctors can give suitable medicines to patients. New modern doctors . Also intelligent people in the world live a long life modern medicine. That is very important in the human society because their creative things are coming with them and they can help others for a longer time when they are living ., old population is increasing in the country. It is country’s economy and third world countries. But old people are very important in human society because their experience definitely helps to . ‘Experience is better than qualifications’ However, old people are living a long life; it is helping others to live a long life because we can get advice from them and they are covering our culture and society.Moreover, modern medicine is being addictive for some people, so that they cannot live without medicine. They should take medicine all their lives. Also modern medicine is very expensive. Therefore most of poor countries modern medicine and it has taken a commercial shape, also it is depending on money. In the modern medicine human kindness. People who have money can take modern medicine. But indigenous medicine has well human friendly shape. It does not depend on money.To summarize; in my personal view, modern medicine is helping to live a long life . Modern technologies are being supported to find diseases very early. So doctors can take immediately. Therefore, hesitate to agree with the above mentioned statement.Your essay has several confusing sentences, where your meaning is unclear.You mix advantages and disadvantages of the modern medicine in one paragraph when you should divide them – have advantages in one paragraph and disadvantages in another.If you agree with the statement, you should have 2 paragraphs supporting your opinion and one supporting the opposite opinion, in your essay it is 2 against and 1 for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The contribution of women from arts to science is remarkable. Still, there is one sector where women hold just one forth of the positions and, that is the Tech sector. Many feel long working hours and gender pay-gap are the main culprits. But there is a solution to every problem and tech companies should be more open minded and flexible towards women's participation in the technological sector. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that women tend to be better off, when it comes to managing work and personal life. And, one of the major reasons for less women entering in tech jobs is because of the poor work life balance. As many technical positions require long working hours and even working at client sites. In countries like India, women are compelled to either look for a lower salary job or get married. Thus, employers prefer male professionals despite plenty of well deserving women in the market. \r\n\r\nBut there is still a glimmer of hope and things are improving rapidly. Many companies have started flexible working hours along with work from home options. This trend has allowed women to continue their working even after marriage. For instance, women can now work from home and can manage their families and kids, without leaving the premises. This trend has just brought women back into the tech scene and created a pool of independent women. \r\n\r\nThis essay discussed the reason why only 20 percent of women join tech jobs because of family and work life balance issues. In addition, this discussed the solution of implementing new work policies and allowing women to work remotely, and can bring back women into tech roles again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir learned definition family She learned definition family calls simple house I know paragraph says It I learned definition family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cyclist first set fine plenty water As kept going sort got cause began come desert region He hot ruunning water This making dehydrated Also seeing tumbleweeds lack vegetation probably made even worse mentally maybe thinking never going get free When saw fish bate shop though probably relieved going saved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of technology. This is because it makes things alot easier and a whole lot more simple. think about it if you could relax at the wheel would you. With the driverless car you can. You need to be behind the wheel though because some situations require a human to navigate the car.\n\nDriverless cars are a good idea and a good way for technology to expand in our world today. This really opens up a new gate for cars and other things too. With this your able to predict crashes with the sensors the car has. The car would also be safe because its not really driverless all the way yet. The driverless car stil needs a driver behind the wheel, this is because the driverless car cant really work in tough traffic situations and\n\naccidents. The driverless car requires the driver to be alert and to have their hands on the wheel at all times. The car even has sensors that makes the drive keep their hands on the wheel at all times, just incase somethig happens that needs human help.\n\nNow i know that the driverless cars are not perfect. There could be alot of problems with the new car. Manufacturing errors are a big question mark. If an accident happens who would be held responsible. This wouldnt be an issue because there has been testing on these type of cars and they have driven half a million miles without a single crash.\n\nSo do you think that these driverless cars are a big issue. driverless cars are coming and it is the future of our technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author provided reasons on why exploring Venus is so important.\n\nThe author beleives that Venus should be explored because it is \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". (Paragraph 2). Another reason why the author believes that Venus should be explored is because \"It may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\"( Paragraph 4). These two reasons explain why it can be beneficial to explore Venus. To prove that Venus was and is so similar to Earth the author provided details such as, \"Venus was probably covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,\" and \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" (Paragraph 4). Providing these details helped support the idea that Venus is so similar to Earth. Proving that Venus is so similar to Earth can show people that it might be worthy to explore it. The author also talked about ways that could possibly make exploring Venus safer. In paragraph 5 the author says, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\" giving this information can show that there are safe options that are in the works for exploring Venus.\n\nThe author's use of supporting details was well used in supporting his idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. The author also stated possible disadvantages and dangers that could happen which helped improve his claim. If the author only used the positive affects and left the dangers out I think it would have hurt his article. Overall, I think this article was written well with plenty of supporting details.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that those days when teenagers face the barrier of deciding whatever to get a job or continue their education .While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school. I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.\n\nFirst of all, the option to start working straight after school is attractive for seral reasons.One of them , as teenagers necessary ,to had the money for various needs it so getting job support to earn money and become more independent.Thus , getting a job at a younger age to obtain personality because they facing different types of the community also there are companies who want beneficial skills to get perforation promotions and as a teenager ,employee they obviously had enough experience . Moreover , if you prepare your life earlier you have opportunities to outcome afford a house with numerous state of the art advantages.Thus, get a beautiful wife and gorgeous children to cement the family.\n\nOn other hand , i believe that is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Most companies in the world want employees who had a master degree or academic qualifications because that will impact them also to upgrade the nation .Thus , the salary to employees has high levels of education must be increased dramatically in order gaining knowledge for job marketing not easy as well as you think you must be intelligent .Therefore , the community of members would be useful to society.\n\nIn conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above ,it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their lives if they continue studies beyond the school level.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with driverless cars. Driverless cars are not a very smart idea, just becuase Google has made driverless cars since 2009 they have drove over half million miles without a crash, but Google cars are not driverless they alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of a driveway or dealing with something bad happing near them. The Google driverless cars are not so driverless.\n\nMy thoughts about the driverless cars is what happens if the car crashes whos fault is it the person in the car or the manufacturer? What if we get driverless cars what is going to happen to insurance for cars insurance people will lose money and if the car did crash its more money out of your pocket to fix it insted the insurance people having to deal with some payment. Car manufactures like BMW, Audi, ext. have made more of there cars safe for people and I do not think making them driverless would be safe. What if the car goes nuts and the driver has no control?\n\nI feel that if we get driverless cars more people will lose there life then without them. We can not always relie on driverless cars or the technology becuase one day we will not have it. So I think we need to just drop the whole driverless cars and work more on safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) should be used in classrooms because it would help to see the emotions of kids. Like see if they need help or if they aren't feeling good. Mostly things like that. You could also use it to see if kids are lying or not when they get in trouble and have to go to the principle or when they get in trouble at home.\n\nMona Lisa: 83% happy, 9% disgusted , 6% fearful, and 3% angry! When Mona Lisa was painted in 1503 we had no clue how she was really feeling. But with the FACS it is now easy to see how she was feeling. That is a good thing because it could help us in the future with life or death situations.\n\nWhen we ask questions like \"Can we actually 'calculate' emotions like we calculate math problems? or \"How can a simple computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans have to use and show how we feel? shows that we humans need this type of cool technology in the future to make things easier than what they are nowadays!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is really dangerous. All of \"The challenge Of Explroing Venus\" is about exploring Venus. If you go and explore it be ready to be hurt when your done exploring Venus. Nasa is trying to get a big blimp to hover over Venus so you dont hurt yourself inside Venus.\n\nHow Venus is really dangerous? People have been up their and said that there are really bad surface conditions. In Pargaraph 4 it is saying \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\". Thats how bad they are saying it could be really dangerous inside of Venus. So to fix the problem of people getting hurt now NASA is trying to get a 30 or so mile blimp to hover over the roiling Venusian landscape. At the endof the article It says that they strived to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endavors. At the end of all of this i would still not go because you dont know what is around it or in it to get you hurt.\n\nThe purpose of this essay is persuade people not to go to Venus beause its deadly. I dont kno if i would trust the inside of Venus or a 30 or miles so blimp floating of the landscape. Never go to Venus because of what can happen to you while your in it or out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "CAPS said little sister CAPS help practice kicking soccer ball gym I know how Of corse I said lets go back yard way I grab ball I set ground front say CAPS step forward left foot kick top right Ill try say daughtfully runs ball kicks misses thats trys againe another miss sits ground I go CAPSt give second try everyone good soccer try one time CAPS one try runs ball kicks The ball goes sailing goal CAPS teaching I pleasure try patient youll great soccer player I promes CAPS I want practice more CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays the situation about enviromental issues is getting worse. It is considered that amount of consumed fuel should be decreased by the cost of it. However, I strongly believe that increasing the price of fuel will not handle this issue and other mesuares should be required to save our planet. This essay is aimed to support this view providing relevant arguments. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, should be mentioned that increasing the cost of petrol for all the vehicles will not solve the enviromental problem and other measures should be required. First of all, goverments should start a propoganda of recycling, because recycling is one of the best solutions of enviromental problems and air pollution. Recycling should become more popular and common between people of all ages. If people start to recycle, it will help to reduce the amount of rubbish piles everywhere. \r\n\r\nAnother point that should also be highlighted is that some laws such as prohibition of owning cars among young people under 21 years should be accepted. People of this age category can esily change a car with a bike. It will be better not only for the enviroment, but for their health as well. By reducing the number of cars, the amout of gas emitions will be decreased as well. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, incresing the price of fuel to tackle enviromental issues will not work in the present, because there is a great amout of people who can aforrd to pay even twice more for gas. And other ways of solving this problem should be required.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the second planet from the sun. It is the closest planet to Earth of density and size. Venus is the brightrst points of light in the night sky for many can see it. Since Venus is sometims near Earth people have sent many spacecraft to land on it.\n\nEach times they sent a spacecraft it was not successful because the surface is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, clouds of highly corrosive sulfic acid, and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater. Even though Venus is so inhospitable astronmers are fascinated by it because it's once believe to been Earth-like long ago. In the text it said, \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary compeling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" They make the spacecraft hovering over Venus so it avoid the bad ground condition. It will be thirty- plus miles above the surface but it will still will be very hot around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but pressure is close sea level of Earth. People are striving to meet the challenge to show Venus has value, not because to gain insight on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars can result in many negative aspects on life and driving.\n\nThere are many positive reasons for self-driving cars, but there are more negative aspects of it.\n\nThe driverless cars can become very expensive.\n\nIt would affect society physically and the driver mentally.\n\nThe reasons why there shouldn't be self-driving cars are numerous.\n\nThere are many reasons against the development of the self-driving car.\n\nIt can affect the roads people drive on as well as the people themselves.\n\nPeople wouldn't be independent anymore; they would rely on the car to take them to the places they'd want to go to.\n\nFor example, in the case of an accident, if the sensors of the car are damaged or broken, the driver would have to take over the wheel.\n\nAs people become more reliant on the car, then the idea of people driving a car, in the first place, would seem ridiculous and stupid and therefore, nobody would learn how to drive a car in case of an emergency.\n\nAs technology evolves, so does the cost of certain items.\n\nit becomes more expensive to build, manufacture, and sell these items.\n\nThe driverless car would be an example of this.\n\nWith the new technology of sensors and binary code and magnets,\n\ntechnology becomes more expensive and high in demand.\n\nThe driverless car would be very expensive with these new improvements and technology.\n\nIt could even be unaffordable for a normal middle-class family.\n\nThe self-driving car would have an extremely expensive price and would be unaffordable for many families who wish to own it.\n\nAs technology evolves through sensors and innovated ideas, the world around these ideas change as well.\n\nThe world isn't perfect.\n\nThere are people who find ways to hurt other people; there are people who want to exact their revenge on other people.\n\nTechnology evolves, but sometimes there are ways to counteract those technologies.\n\nIf the self-driving car evolves, there will most likely be people who will try to counteract it and hack into the system and take full override control of the car.\n\nThese hackers could take over the entire self-driving car unit and harm the people inside of the car as well as the people outside of the car.\n\nThis can harm the safety of many people and this is also the reason why many people are against the development of the self-driving car.\n\nWith the potential to work by itself, the driverless cars could not be as reliable as they seem.\n\nIf the sensors don't pick up on the surrounding area, then there could be many problems, issues, and conflicts if anyone in and around the car get hurt or injuried.\n\n\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault -- the driver or the manufacturer?\" (9 \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\").\n\nThe safest car is when a human driver is behind the wheel and has full control over the entire car.\n\nThe people wouldn't be worried about safety.\n\nThe idea of a human behind the car is the safest idea for the roads and people.\n\nThere are many negative aspects of driverless cars.\n\nThe fact that they could be too reliant and not reliant at all is a huge problem that needs to be solved.\n\nIt can be used against a person and become unsafe.\n\nThe technology can have a flaw of not working properly; it could also have to potential to be hacked into.\n\nIt also has the potential to be expensive and unaffordable.\n\nThese are very good reasons why some people are against the development of the self-driving car.\n\nThese cars have too many cons and can be an issue to the safety of the people and their world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read emotions and facial expressions in class should not happen. There are many reasons for this, some of which will be supported.\n\nthere are also many reasons for it to be used as well. One could take both sides.\n\nStudents and teachers have reletivley the same thoughts on being in school. Both of them could definitly be doing something better, but understand the importance of learning. This helps teachers connect. With a robot telling teachers when to be interesting, or telling students when to pay more attention, the school day would only be rougher and less natural. This doesn't mean the idea of emotional recognition in schools is a bad idea.\n\nWith a massive rate of school deaths, these scaners placed in entrances and in large meetings could help detect when someone might be angry enough to do something aweful. Like in paragragh eight of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", muscle clues can show when someone is lying or what they are feeling. The thought of this tschnology in class isn't all that bad either. When teachers get evaluated, this technology could be used to help teachers feel pressured into being happy, like in paragragh nine of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", making fake emotions can cause real ones. But this shouldn't happen every day. Students learn better from a real live human.\n\nThe use of this technology should not happen in classes, but could help at school. There have been many supporting facts for this. Thank you", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is generally believed by one part of our community that, higher the gap between multiple age groups, the better it will be for society. I support the above-mentioned statement and opine that the difference surely has higher benefits rather than its side effects. Firstly, we will explain the pros in the upcoming paragraph and secondly, we will elaborate, how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, kids learn everything from their elder family members either by observing their actions or by adhering to their advice. A great gap amongst two generations might provide the teenagers matured learnings through guardians life experiences. Additionally, it creates a sense of respect as well as fear in youth, if their near ones are aged. For instance, my cousin is 12 years elder than me, because of that I listen plus implement his every suggestion, whereas I don't care about my real brother's opinions, as he is just 2 years elder than me. Thus, it is evident that it is the need of time to have the supervision of mature parents or adults for the younger generation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it can be clearly observed that inflation is at its peak, consequently giving birth to a baby without financial stability would be a dreadful situation for the infant. Moreover, it is easy to plan a baby in the early stages of life, but extremely difficult to take responsibility. It is quite common that immature couples spoil their relations, as they fight every day over either parent not giving proper time to the child. For example, a lady filed for divorce, as her husband was busy in his office works, also neither he had money nor time to give to the newborn baby. Consequently, we can call this approach of maintaining the period differences between a parent and a child a prudent one.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I am not rigid on the above point discussed that it is mandatory to have a huge variance, therefore, it needs to be reasonable enough to become mature, stable and capable, to be a good parent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "he supports this idea with interesting details . he gives deatails of venus to really capture the audiences attention. He explained that today there are still valley's, mountains and craters remaining on venus. Venus was once the most familiar to earth and still has many earth llike features. It is a planet to see even if it is very dangerous.\n\nIt can go up to 800 degrees fahrenheit and is the hottest planet in our solar system. The author supports this idea very well stating the pro's and cons of venus and making this statement . He explains the conditions there can be extreme . The atmospheric pressure over there is 90 times greater that what we experience here on Earth.\n\nVenus also has erupting volcanoes and powerful earthequakes.\n\nDespite knowing how dangerous it can be scientists still want to send people up there because it was once the most like earth and some of the features we have on earth like valleys and mountains still exist on venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if teachers were able to monitor their student's emotions during class? In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", by Nick D'Alto, D'Alto talks about a technology that was developed that can detect how someone or something feels based off of facial expressions. How the technology works is that there are certains muscle in a person's face that codes for different feelings and if they move a certain way, then the person is conveying a certain feeling, which the computer can detect. This technology is interesting, but it shouldn't be used in school environment. Sure, there are some positives but overall, the negatives outweigh the postivies. This technology is expensive and insufficient, not necessary, and invades privacy, which can be a distraction. The technology used to identify feelings and expressions should not be allowed in a clasroom.\n\nThis technology is too expensive to put in classrooms. It requires a good amount of money in order to install in into a classroom. Many classrooms do not have it right now too so it can be a huge blow to a country's capital or economy. Since many developing countries do not have the money to put this technology into classroom, they will lag behind in education even more, since they don't get the benefits that this technology may provide. Not to mention, investing a great amount of money into the technology is nt worth it because even in developed cuntries, there are bigger problems to worry about and more important issues that the government needs to fund for. Also, this technology is insufficient because as stated in the article, \"PC can't handle the complex algorithms used t decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" This shows that there are some computers that cannot handle the complex algorithm, so even if a school wanted to invest in this techology, they need good quality computers, whch is putting a bigger hole in their budget. Although this technology would be nice to have, it is a problem financially and insufficient.\n\nAlong with it being a financial burden, this technology is not really useful in classrooms. In schools today, many teachers plan out their lesson before the class starts. With this technology, if a student were bored, the teacher would have to either change the whole class plan or let the student be bored. Also, there will be occasions where one student is interested in material while another is bored. This info really isn't useful because the teacher cannot satisfy both students at once. And then there is the issue with techology these days. In the article, a line states \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Since many students are attached to their phones or devices, knowing their emotion really is not useful. They are either bored or not interested in the lesson. All in all, this technology really does not provide much in the learning environment today.\n\nFinally, this techonology can actually be a distraction and invade privacy. By being able to detect a student's emotion in class, the student may feel insecure. This can cause them to become paranoid and focus on their thoughts and assumption rather than the lesson the teacher is teaching. In the society today, cyber bulling is fairy common. If a student is already insecure, then knowing the teacher is monitoring how they feel in a classroom could cause the student to break down. And then there are the group of kids that want to be class clowns. Students can purposely activate a muscle in the face that codes for a different feeling than they are actually feeling. This could make students focus more on messing with the technology rather than paying attention in class. Another conflict that came to mind is if a student is feeling down because of something that happened in their life. Teachers may call on that student. With this device in a classroom, students can find this technology as more of a distraction than a use for the teacher.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology has more of a negative impact rather than a positive impact in the classroom. It can serve as a distraction to the class atmosphere, a financial burden to a country's economy, and does not make a huge impact overall in the classroom. Although this technology is very interesting and provide some positives, it should be used just for kicks and giggles and not incorporated into a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the development of society, people have been paying more attention to children's education. Every parent hopes that their kids can have better and more skilled to face the challenges in the future. At this time, extra classes came into being. Besides the lessons in school, children will attend different kinds of extra classes, such as classes on sports, maths, languages, arts. In my opinion, it is a worthwhile thing to do, but children shouldn't be given too much pressure.\nStudents in school usually have 5-6 classes, and after school they need develop their hobbies and have more time to do outdoor activities with their friends or classmates. In class , they get the knowledge from teachers and textbooks while after school they learn from experiencing the life, getting into nature and make connections by social skills. So I think students can have some extro classes not for studing the knowledge but for experencing, developing, and make themselves be themselves, become a whole person.\nMy son is an active boy who loves sports and he is into riding horses, play badminton and swimming. So I chose to take him to the club of horse riding on Tuesday after school . On Thursday, he will go to attend the swiming class with his friends. They not only learn the swimming skills from teacher but aslo have geat fun, and I always see his smiling face. I found that more sports and hobbies can really make the kids feel relaxed instead of some bored extra maths, languages classes. Kids need improve and learn new skills so as to have a better and brighter future, extra classes are needed ,but not too many or not too heavy. Be a whole person and be themselves is more important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I honestly nt think anything offensive removed libraries children nt really know offensive things meanThe library good place find information find book enjoy If take things seem offensive people people going hard time finding facts anything neeed People use offensive things time everyone means insult anyone way The library nt intentionally insult people The library gives us facts need know person anything like Some people nt know mature comes things like cant mature stuff like nt need library I would understand intentions insult someone magazines movies books music taken library Thats fair others trying get information Slavery offensive thing colored people cause colored people get called names say essay Most people matured years happened past Honestly I think people ok dont need get bent shape see something offensive need know wasnt intentionaly done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are something people have always watched in movies and dreamed about having ourselves. Now it seems like driverless cars could be a possibility. And while that's exciting, we have to ask ourselves, is it worth it? There is positive things about having driverless cars, there is no doubting that. But there is also negative things that could conteract the positive, and we have to carefully observe the pros and cons.\n\nThe article, Driverless Cars are coming, starts out by saying these cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than buses. That is obviously a reason driverless cars are a good idea. We won't always have all the fuel needed to keep our cars running and as a result it is quite expensive which makes fuel unpractical for some people, even though they may need it. Also, busses are a hassel, therefore, so far driverless cars seem like a good idea. But are they really?\n\nEven though Google has had cars that can drive under specific conditions and have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, they still aren't completely driverless. This is where we run into our first problem. The car will alert the driver to take over when dealing with something such as complicated traffic. Well that all sounds fine until you really think about it.\n\nI know it can already sometimes be hard to stay awake at the wheel, even if it's only for a short amount of time because sometimes, we are just tired. And if we don't have the respnsibility of keeping the car on the road, whose to say we won't fall asleep? It already happens, even without driverless cars. If you fall asleep at the wheel of this car and suddenly the car needs you to take over, there may be a problem. Even though you might wake up, you may not be able to comprehend what is happening yet. And it only takes a few seconds to crash.\n\nThen in 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. Sounds good right? Well yeah, but again we have the problem of the driver staying alert. This car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves just like other driverless cars we've heard about. And this car has special touch sensors to make sure the driver keeps ahold of the wheel. But even if the driver keeps ahold of the wheel, whose to say they couldn't still dooze off? Besides, this car can only handle driving functions at speeds 25 mph or lower. I know I don't know a lot about driving, but I do know there are places where that is just too slow.\n\nNow, I have to admit there is a lot of options to making sure the driver stays alert. One of them is to keep the driver occupied. Some manufacturers are hoping to bring in-car entertainment to the car. So maybe something like a movie or show to keep you busy. To me, that does sound like a good idea.\n\nThere are also many different ways to alert the driver that the car needs to be taken over. Those ways include flashing lights on the windshield, a vibrating drivers seat and more. Also, another idea is using a camera to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. These are all good ideas but still may not be completly foolproof.\n\nLike I said in the begining, there are some positives to having a driverless car. Do these positives outweigh the negatives? That I don't know yet. But we do need to look at both sides.\n\nTwo positives that I already mentioned are of course reduced need for fuel and less hassel than taking a public bus. Another postive aspect of this is that the information from sensors that would be on the car can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. That in turn allows far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nAnd, futher improvements in sensors to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more driving tasks on their own which in my opinion, is very important.\n\nSo in conclusion, do I think driverless cars are a good idea? Well, yes, I think that it could be a very positive thing for our future. But, there needs to be a lot more improvements before driverless cars are our reality.\n\nRight now, driverless cars aren't even allowed to be tested in most states and I think that proves that they are dangerous. There is just to many risks involved. Besides the obvious risk of crashing, we have the problem of who is to blame in an accident? The driver or the manufacture? I can already see that causing problems.\n\nSo, while I do think driverless cars are a great idea and could be a really amazing thing, I don't think they are ready yet. I want them to be a lot safer before they are released to the public. That being said, as of right now, I don't think driverless cars are a good idea. They just aren't safe enough yet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the 21st century, in some countries knowing about the background of the house or apartment that folks inhabit is going to be a trend among people.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, why they should be interested in the history of the place which they live in, so it can have several reasons. Firstly, in some undeveloped societies weird beliefs are still alive which could make folks attracted to the history of their home. For instance, The Indians believe, if a crime occurs in a house, It shows that devils are living there, so they are reluctant to live in such places. Secondly, sometimes it is important to know who built the house. For example, my apartment is built by Northenland, the best construction company in Cyprus, so I am sure that the building will be safe if an earthquake happens. Finally, some buildings have an absorbing story, thus it can catch the people's mind to know about Its history.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, sometimes It is hard to find information about a building, however there are several ways to gain data about it. To begin, they can search on the internet and they might find something about it. Moreover, they can ask individuals who live in the neighbourhood. For example, the old who lives for a long time in a neighbourhood is a good source of information. In addition, some organizations in cities have documents about buildings which can be helpful to address this issue.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in some communities people are getting more interested in the history of their homes which has lots of different reasons. In order to gather information about a house's background several steps can be taken which are elaborated on in the present essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I firmly believe removing books music movies ect shelf someone finds offensive solve problem A person find many things life offensive personal views remove To remove books music movies ect people find offensive could provoke chaos As Katherine Paterson stated And books left If everyone choose books music movies ect felt offensive placed library statement would probably true Besides point library sectioned different genres different view certain genre books movies music etc skip section go genre prefer In words things offend one person offend another person So remove one particular thing would unreasonable person likes finds interest particular subject So instead problem one person would problem two unsatisfied people Not saying right library done particular things separating books reasons like According Katherine Paterson All us think book hope none children children taken shelf The library section children Therefore worries problem like already solved The books music movies ect childrens section age apprioate child Books music movies ect also sectioned teenagers adults In conclusion removal books music movies ect found offensive others found offensive someone else It like library would purposely offend anyone books music movies ect shelfs If mature enough understand look something offend would offended Also library sectioned different genre easly pass particular genre wish avoid Problems easily solved dealt correct manner", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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