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"content": "Have you ever wondered about Venus? This planet is somthing that we as humans haven't figured out yet. We are facing the challenge of Venus, it is really valued not only because of the facts and information we get out of this planet. Instead, humans are curiose and looking for more evidence of what we are going to face in the futur. We should learn more not only on the outter shell, but more deeply in the inside.\n\nVenus is the second planet in the our solar system(Milkyway). Also ot is one of the brightest points in the sky at night. As the closest plant to Earth in terms of size, density, and distane. The surface of it is full with valleys, mountains, and craters. Not even one single spacecraft have reached to it before. 97 percent of the atmosphere is carbon dioxide, forming a blanket for the planet. This planet has the highest temperature in the whole entire Milkyway. NASA(National Aeronautics and Space Administration) have not stop sending spacecraft to land on Venus.\n\nIf we could lend on Venus later on in the generation, could there be any living organisum that lives on that plante? There could be a possible chance since Earth is not the only planet in space. There are more things tha we need to discover. You would never know if there are creatures like ous that have a abiliy to explore space. We should keep trying even if there is only a 0.0000001 chance.",
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"content": "These days, pursuit concerning the past properties is increasing by their dwellers in some parts of the world. There are a couple of reasons involved in this controversial issue and also some ways that could be taken to find proper information about a dwelling's history. \r\n\r\nIn fact, there are several reasons concerning people's tendency toward the history of places they live. Initially, and maybe the most important is that the value of a dwelling could be affected by its past. For ,example some things such as the past building owners or the architecture of the condo have a significant effect on its price. Resulting to this, some are likely to spend more money on this type of accommodation. The second reason is that residence history searching gives extra info about it. data like previous ownership documents and the materials that a mansion comprised of would be valuable for most populations. In the first place, nowadays, there are prohibitions on some materials which are used in houses, also people maybe become the victim of a fraud case, if they do not have enough details about past ownership documents of a condominium. As a result, these problems put new buyers at risk of losing money or extra charges.\r\n\r\nIt is possible to access past building records in a number of ways. The most important and trustable way is the document held on the municipals of each city or its districts. Moreover, thanks to the advent of new technology, society can search for everything on the internet. In addition to that, in some cases, the public, especially elderly ones who have lived in the same neighbourhood have valuable data in this regard. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, crowds in some countries are more willing to know about their housing past in order to know about the real value of their property and eliminate the probability risk of losing their assets.",
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"content": "To improve the quality of education many people have the opinion that, students should be allowed to evaluate teachers to improve the quality of education. in contrast, others say that it will lead to a loss of respect for teachers and will lack discipline. This essay will discuss how teachers should be allowed to carry out their work.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, granting students to make comments or evaluate teachers will lower their respect towards them. In other words, when students try to correct teachers they will have the feeling that they have more knowledge than the teacher which results in a lack of discipline. Furthermore, Teachers will not be able to teach students properly, which ultimately affects the student's academic performance. For ,instance in China, a recent survey revealed that institutions, where students are allowed to evaluate teachers, have poor academic records and lack moral value.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, granting students such freedom would mean giving them access to a lack of respect and order in a classroom. To put this in perspective, upon correcting a mistake by their teachers, a pupil might begin to assume that he knows better than them. The resulting impact of this route is an indisciplined student who lacks respect for his tutors. Take ,for instance, a survey conducted by the ministry of education in Malawi on the impact of student comments on the classroom environment, it was determined that many pupils lost respect from their teachers. No wonder the present education system deters any student from making comments or criticizing during lectures.\r\n\r\nBy way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that not giving chance to learners in high school to comment is key in maintaining law and order at the classroom level.",
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"content": "Dear The say people spending much time foucusing computer homework getting fresh air outside I say people Computers giant step new technology For example use computer research school communicate friends online give children time learn far away places people If research paper school checked books subject paper suddenly relized forgot one important books You race back library find closed Computers come handy You google book find online copy book make grade paper Also possibly trouble math homework home alone That computers So easily go teachers website would explanation specific lesson Children commonicate friends extent Such homework question talk fun Without friends children would knowhere Statistics show children permitted talk friends school stay drugs promote stronger education grades The internet created heck It invented people communicate childeren reaserch fun exploring well For example learning far away places people culture exploring animals even online shopping availble These necessities people access Without computers would know important news needed information needed specific moment Computers future yes I repertative computers lives communication shopping learning purposes teaching research places animals people culture Also email purposes get important news around everyone applicable This continue forward computers technology future So people keep computers important stepping stone needed growth moving onto future technology Plus would want good computer game",
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"content": "I think the author supports the story good because, In the first paragraph he introduces you too what Venus is and tells you how challenging it is to observe. The second paragraph he explains how venus is very similar too our atmostphere and how we could land of venus and explore it but we failed. The author really brings out what venus is about and how we could easily inhabit venus. He does a really good job explaining how we could inhabit venus but we would have a hard time concidering the temperature gets up too 170 degrees fahrenheit and the air pressure would be close to sea leavel on earth, He also explains how it is very hard to study venus because they do not want to risk taking people up to venus and landing on it and them not making it back, it is also very hard for them to study it because the atmostphere is very dense so therefor they cannot see anything through the dense atmostphere.",
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"content": "Creating these driverless cars are amazing, but with technology today, it will need a lot of security systems, the car has many cameras to it but if one bad person who knows a lot about those cars, they will try to hack into it, if they succeced, it could do harm on the streets. People can hack into bank accout with ease, by only a couple of numbers, if the people who create these driverless cars don't understand that, then many cars are going to be hijacked or worse.\n\nMany of these cars can also have a malfunction also, no matter if they say it will, if any of the sensors that are on the car gets hit, then it may malfunction. Would the car need an upgrade just like a computer? My computer take a very long while and multiple tries for it to successivly upgrade and i only had it for a year, would that same thing happen to the cars? It says in the text that the cars would use half of the fuel today, would it be priced right to even sell? Many people have had the same car for many years and never had a accident in it, some people would have the money, some people don't, if the people who create the driverless cars must know a good price where they can make a living and keep making more and the buyers are pleased with the price and how well they are developed. If the cars become semi-automatic, if a person sleeps on the interstate, how long will the car go before i needs a human to take the wheel? Many people get injured or worse by falling asleep behind the wheel and I hope that the driverless car will solve that problem.",
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"content": "There are many efforts from different countries to reduce car usage. Countries like Germany, France, Colombia, and the United States are trying to raise awareness and get people to not use their car as much. These countries are raising awareness for example by having car-free days, banning driving for a day, turning suburbs into car-free communities, and rasing awareness about how cars affect the enviroment. These counrties are making the efforts to reduce car usage because they know that there are great advantages if citizens limit their car usage.\n\nIn Vauban,Germany, low-car suburban life is their motto. Car ownership is allowed , but with a price. As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars and 57 percent sold a car to move to Vauban. Heidrun Walter says that she is happier without a car and when she did have a car, she says she was always tense. Vauban is an example of the efforts and new idea that Europe, United States, and elsewhere have to reduce car usuage. Some advantages of this low-car concept is that now stores are being placed in walking distance and malls and resturants are also within walking distance and close to each other.\n\nBecause of air pollution and smog due to cars, Paris had to start banning people from driving certain days. If you were caught driving when you weren't suppose to, a fine was inforced. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters. Diesel fuel was the blame of the smog because France perfers diesel over gas. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France according to Reuters. Paris has more smog than most European capitals. This is really hurting the enviroment. While Paris was banning cars, congestion was down 60 percent. Besides car congestion being down 60 percent, other advatages to this car banning was that non-hybrid car companies lost revenue while hybrid and plug in cars were not. This shows how people are aware of the pollution of cars. Also, because of the reduced driving, the smog in Paris was cleared enough to stop banning certain vehicles from driving.\n\nA big event in Bogota, Colombia is their car-free day. Only buses and taxis were permitted. Violators of the car-free day faced a fine. The turnout was large even though there was rain. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from participating\", said the Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus. Citizens of Colombia were happy participating in the car-free day.\n\n\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", said buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode his bike. Municipal authorities from all over the world came to see this event. The city's mayor also says that the day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid- 1990's. The advantage of the car-free day has made parks and sports centers more popular to go to and other advatages is that the old sidewalks are being replaced with new paved ones. The traffic has also reduced.\n\nIn the United States, President Obama goals are to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions. The Enviromental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities. The efforts to reduce driving is paying off. A study found that driving by young people has decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Mr. Sivak's research shows a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39 year olds getting a liscense. In New York, there is a new bike sharing program and that can help people to choose to take bike instead of riding in a car.\n\nAll these efforts are helping people make the decision to limit their car usage and based on the facts, there are alot of advantages if you limit car usage. This is only a start to raise efforts to reduce car usage, but I feel in the future we will be seeing a lot more people walking and biking than riding their car.",
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"content": "The setting desert summer affects cyclist For example caldnt go fast The speed limit mph I waterdepleting mph affected ability find water The setting also really hot cyclist hard time getting water needed keep going For example I pumped handle several minutes water wouldnt cool down setting got needs water badly The desert setting also affects cyclist mind He believed seeing mirages afraid going swallow stone might hit bump The desert setting affects cyclist ability function",
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"content": "This kind of technology would be very useful. Not only would kids not have to be bored or confused anymore by having a computer change the lesson into something fun. But it could also help those that could be sad or depressed.\n\nThis could actually help people that could be depressed get better. If there was something where it could warn teachers or a guidance counsler about the person who is depressed then they could get the help that they need. If you are bored in class and the computer does something to get your attention for even 5 minuites, it could make you learn something that otherwise you wouldnt have. I believe that test scores would go up along with people doing homework. Homework is boring, so if we had something that adapted to us instead of we having to adapt to other peoples teaching, I believe many more kids would enjoy school. I also believe that kids would join more clubs because they would have homework done on time. More people could be interacting with others and doing things outside of the house.\n\nSo in conclusion, I believe that the facial action coding system could bring a whole new light to teaching, helping others, and getting motivated. It also brings a whole new light to having more time to socially interact with someone and participating in our class.",
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"content": "Although skeptics are proclaiming that there is life on Mars, NASA has scientifically proven the true, less exciting conclusion: the mysterious face seen on the Red Planet is just a natural landform called a Martian mesa. Photographs from different spacecrafts have revealed an image on Mars that appears to have a \"shadowy likeness of a human face\". Shadows on the object give \"the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Many believe this is a key piece of evidence showing past or present alien life. However, NASA has examined multiple facts to turn down this claim.\n\nIn 1976, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft captured the first look at this mystertious figure. While looking for landing sites for Viking 2, its sister ship, the spacecraft came across the Face in a region on Mars called Cydonia. Scientists conluded that the formation was a Martian mesa with shadows creating facial features. Although the claim was made, the image created suspicion in many. What if the Face was an alien artifact? However, on April 5, 1988, Mars Global Surveyor took another photograph, and this image was ten times sharper than the 1976 picture. Again the Face was shown as the same type of natural landform. Finally, in 2001, a third picture of the Face, taken by the latest Mars Global Surveyor, created solid evidence to the past conlusion. Also, a discovery of life on Mars would benefit the comapany of NASA. Therefore, the organization would not hide a discovery of life on the planet, as many skeptics believe the comapany would do so.\n\nThe most plausible theory is that the Face a natural Martian mesa. Three photographs from spacecrafts support this claim, and the fact that the landform is in Cydonia, an area with many of these formations, further backs this conclusion. NASA has no reason to hide new scientific discoveries of life on different planets, and the company is not doing so here. Although the discovery of unknown life would be an extraordinary feat, scientists must continue to research into different areas of space, hoping to find evidence for such conclusion.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist dont ride much anymore dont know best routes take So take old routes thinking still better way use realize tiring bad",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock harsh The builders theory thought everything would work perfectly They face enough see would problems dirigibles dock As I read I noticed building never fulfilled s purpose This dirigibles outside united states used hydrogen helium hydrogen flammable On May owners Empire State Building realized much worse fire could happen densely populated area downtown New York So reality idea safe builders go building done Then realizing idea pursuable",
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"content": "Imagine yourself taking a gondola ride in Italy. Maybe instead, you want to visit the\n\nfamous Panama Canal. You can do all of these things if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program helps horses, young cows, and young mules that were shipped overseas. It may sound like an unappealing job, but I, Luke Bomberger, can tell you first hand the wonderful experience of being a seagoing cowboy.\n\nBeing a seagoing cowboy isn't just a title, it's a responsibility. You must have a love for animals and a mind set to do hard work. Feeding the animals and staying up at night to make sure they are okay can be nerve-racking to some. It also takes bravery to leave your family and go overseas. Just like any job, you have to love what you do and work hard.\n\nBy now, being part of the Seagoing Cowboy program may see like all work and no play, but there are many perks to the job. For example, when I was eighteen, I could've been enlisted for the service, but I was told to continue my program work as my service to our country. You can also travel the world and visit many countries with rich histories. I toued a castle in Crete and sailedto China. The exciting journeys I took effected me for the rest of my life.\n\nSome people may say that being a seagoing cowboy is dangerous. Yes, it has it's risks, but all jobs do. Animals may be rowdy or the sailing may not be smooth. In my case, I was injured by slipping on the boat and almost falling out! This is why you must be ready for mishaps. All jobs have their pros and cons, but that's okay.\n\nTaking part in the Seagoing Cowboys program means taking part in a life enriching experience. You can help others and travel the world. For many years, I have hosted numerous foreign exchange vistors due to my wonderous adventures. You can form bonds with other members also. Being a seagoing cowboy is being a hero.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new use of technology called Facial Action Coding System (FACS), tells what emotions your using my theory of the FACS Is that It will work, but It's not telling the truth.\n\nMy theory Is that they are wasting all their time and money, and the FACS is not telling the truth the reason beaging Is you can never have a computer tell you your own emotions, also \" If It Is some how ture about your emotions than you just got luckey for It to work but that's the only time It will work\".\n\nAnother reason Is the time and money, who In their right mind would spend all there family time, and most of their hard earnd money on something that wouldn't work. To me I would rather sit at home whrn I'm done working and spend time with my family, and I wouldn't speed a penny on that sofeware that Is not granted to work.\n\nThird of all what Is the stictist there Is none In the reading that I read so, judt why not get something up and running and, not put any stictist It Is dumb on their part.\n\nIn conclusion there Is nobody that Is going to change my mind about this soft wear working If It does then I'll chang my argument about It untill then It's not going to work, and that my opiotion.",
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"content": "I think you should participate in the, ''Seagoing Cowboys'' program. Don Reist invided him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke could't say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nYou\n\nshould participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because, Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. Also the United Nationals Relief and Rehabilation Administration hired the ''Seagoing Cowboys'' to take care of the horses, yong cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. In August 14, 1945, they recived their orders to report to New Orleans. They arived on August 14, the day the Pacific war ended. It was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.\n\nThose are some reasons you should participate in the ''Seagoing Cowboys''program. You should participate in the ''Seagoing Cowboys'' program because, there are so much stuff you can do if you participate in the, ''Seagoing Cowboys'' program.",
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"content": "In the article the author talks about how many spacecrafts have landed on Venus but none of survived for more than a few hours. This was due to the climate and how Venus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide and the highly corrosive sulfric acid in the atmosphere. Do to the fact that no spacecraft has survived more than a few hours theres a lot the scientists probably don't know.\n\nEach mission that they had sent to Venus was unmanned due to the climate and the atmospheric pressure.The scientists want to discover more about the planet because it could have been just like Earth at one point in time. The surface is very rocky and includes stuctures similar to Earth. Venus is so dangerous that scientists cant even get samples from the planet to conduct a through mission. The sources that we have now don't help woth the understanding of what Venus is like and wether it did or didnt used to be Earth-like. Scientists believe that Venus porbably was covered with oceans and could have supported various life forms.The fact that peering from a ship can only provide so much information about the planets ground conditions. The planet its self has value and information about that we still dont know yet, and the curiosity that we have is what will help find new imformation, and lead them to build something that could help with discovering of new imformation about Venus.",
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"content": "I do agree with the statement that the community problem must be finished by making a higher price of fuels.\r\n\r\nOverall, the person who is busying and full of activity on their activity of daily living should understand that pollution around them is developed day by day. Furthermore, there is a special way to decide from the government. In spite of the health problem, people still choose transportation as the mean of their life. Moreover, for people whose jobs do not engage with transportation, they do not use the equipment related to this.\r\n\r\nFor instance, society in the urban area depends on their business every day. However, they did not realize the bad impact of the cruel habitual.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many people should consider the advantages and the disadvantages of having good or bad habitual particularly regarding the use of machines to transport them to every destination. Subsequently, the situation is better than before. Thus behaviour is just peace of cake for a man who committed to making nature back to us",
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"content": "The setting cyclsit takes journey effects cyclist The reason I say story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclsit came upon conflict setting The conflict waas hot use little things survive witch These reason I say setting cyclsit takes journey matters",
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"content": "Artificial intelligence and mechanical electronics have been the core of contemporary advancement. Robotics is now a field that is not unknown and the spike, we are seeing in its implementation is something huge. Today, robots are present everywhere whether it is at home as your cleaner and vacuum or in the operation theatre as surgeons' assistants. However, the opinions on it are quite the opposite. Some believe that it is the best invention in the history of mankind while some believe otherwise. I opine that its benefits are weighed higher on the scale as compared to its drawbacks\r\n\r\nTo begin with, robots have taken the world by storm through the outcome and their performance. The first and foremost advantage is it has never been so easy to solve complex problems as it is today. robots have the innate ability to do various tasks together and to provide accurate answers. Secondly, they are now sharing the workload of human beings by performing various levels of work thus providing them with a sense of relaxation. For instance, many surgeries are now performed by Da Vinci which is a specialized robot to assist surgeons and in this way, half of the burden has been reduced.\r\n\r\nOn the other side, there are drawbacks that should be taken into consideration. One of them is the industry will soon be converted into an AI-driven workforce and as a ,result millions of people will be jobless as e!employers will prefer this one-time investment instead of paying an amount every month to the employee. Another thing that is alarming is the lack of power to change decisions timely. These electronics work on the installed and manufactured intelligence therefore they do not have the capability to switch their mode according to circumstances. For example, if a robot is teaching a class that is not disciplined, it has no power to process how to keep children motivated.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that in spite of a few deficiencies, it is going to help human beings in great ways in the near future . All we need to understand is that these creatures can take up our responsibilities but can never give us emotional support. So, use the robots but stay connected to the people",
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"content": "I want say I found tex right away I didnt I learned something though yeah took CAPS intelligence piece together But love love patient rtun probably wont stay wait patient maybe maybe itll come I make sure Im somewhere find me said church year later CAPS whats thhhiiis said I know is I shut door night Patience waiting replied comes now I found I church CAPS found Capture wait hes in do think wait unlock When unlocky openy thing I dont know wait see That open",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the future. It is essential for the human race to keep moving forward with the technology they are creating. Not only are these cars smarter, safer, and more advanced, but they don't need humans to drive themselves as much.\n\nHumans error is such a common occurence. Some people forget to turn on their turn sigals, while others make a wrong turn and get stuck in traffic. With these new driverless cars, though, they don't have to worry about making small mistakes such as these. Not only does it make it easier on most everyone, it makes it easier on their insurance company.\n\nHow many driving accidents happen in a week? A month? A year? Everyday too many people are injured due to driving accidents. With smart driverless cars, these can be limited to almost none. People can feel safer driving with their children and they can feel safer themselves\n\nTechology itself is always advancing, and if people can't accept that, they will be left behind. These cars will eventually be the normal thing for most people. People with non-smart cars will be the blamed for accidents and will be ridiculed for not having advanced cars. If humans don't accept these cars, we will be stuck driving human driven cars, and they will get nowhere\n\nAll in all, these cars will be for the better of all people. Accidents will be next to none, it will be much easier for humans to drive, and technology itself will become more advanced",
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"content": "In recent times, it is usually believed that the government setting up free learning for six years is the superior way to reduce poverty in developing countries. In my view, I completely agree with this statement because of the free schooling, residents have the opportunity to learn the fundamental knowledge, contributing to the growth of the country.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, free school fund allows dwellers to acquire the basis of awareness, making an attempt to develop the nation. Regardless of their background, everyone can access basic education, having the ability to read, write and use numbers. As a result, they are able to have more career opportunities with their high-level labour and better wages. For instance, the survey in Vietnam showed that those with high levels of education are paid 3 times higher salaries than people without literacy levels. Due to the free study, the quality of life as well as the homey's growth will be better. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, the government's investment in education for people, especially those in highland areas, brings positive effects on the development of the country. In fact, the population in mountainous areas often have fewer educational opportunities than the community in plain areas, leading to economic difficulties, and causing a gap between rich and poor and economic imbalance. Free teaching for people here gives everyone the opportunity to acquire basic knowledge, bringing more effective income, and shortening the economic income gap between the highlands and the plains. Thanks to that, poverty in developing countries is also significantly reduced.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, free education for up to six years for people is an optimal method for reducing poverty in developed countries, it helps people access basic knowledge, brings great job opportunities with higher income, and contributes to national development.",
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"content": "Patience one important things life Patience understanding tolerant For example kids mom left work takes hours come home The kid said that quick That patience",
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"content": "Have ever walked library hoping find good book picked volgar inapropriate article Were dissapointed see children could easily get hold place back onto shelf simple thinking nt style book In essay I would like discuss views censored books I believe censored People world vastly different From color race size shape personality single person planet excatly like would interest reading music Some enjoy romantic novel makes heart skip beats prefer thrill horror story Either way everyone opinion makes great book The thing accures question whether censored items allowed public library Many say yes people right choose observe listen If nt like style item protrayed nt pick say The library suppose safe nt worry children seeing hearing things nt In personal opinion I believe parent figure right although I also understand opposing opinion As opposing opinion I understand think censored items ok libraries If personal choice author writes book still makes great story I believe book alright long reach child Many people different ideas censored means could consequence loosing many books always consequence every choice good bad In personal experince I taken ten year old sister library barrow movie books She scholary comprehinds things quickly Futhermore found book thought interesting The book turned full curse words profanity Think would say child learned curse words place expected safe enviroment To rediculous search every single book cd movie magazine profanity make sure safe sister read Kids days changed majorly attitudes language responses things I believe big part take worldly materials If books music read listen offensive rude else would know follow lines something cool Therefore I believe censored books library parents right ask removed When I sit back realize I would want kids reading listening I wonder people would even chance fact child could negativly influenced Why tempt someone reflects profanity offensiveness could much Parents everything make kids best person I believe right protect children reaching full potential Therefore end books censored",
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"content": "I think the driverless car is a bad idea, because if and when someone is injured in a car wreck who is to blame. you can make a law about that, but its just gonna turn into an arguement with everyone who is paying attention to it. If a driver is injured in a car wreck with the dreiverless car the person to blame is the manufacture. the manufacture put this car into the world and said it was safe and the \"most of the time\" nothing will happen. If the driverless car comes out into the world, its gonna be ran off some sort of technology back at the manufacture, if so its gonaa be hackable by anyone who is smart enough to do so, or if someone who works for the manufacture wanted to they could hack it them selves and get a lot of people hurt just by turning it off or turn the direction its going a little bit. they may even be a little mishap in the driverless car and the manufacture just skip it and move on later that mishap may get a bunch of people killed or injured.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of exploring Venus\" the author very well suggests that study of Venus is worthy despite the dangers. The author does this by stating the dangers and the way NASA is trying to over come these dangers. NASA is doing reserch and test to try to find a way for a mechion to last up there. There is a lot of reason why the author very well supports the idea studing Venuscis a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nA reason why the author supports this claim is in the texts its states,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" We can maybe learn more about Earth by learning about Venus because they are simlar in a lot of way. That is why it is important to try to find a safe way to explore Venus.\n\nAnother reason is beacuse in ghe texti s states,\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" If Venus only could have supported life if we explore it we could find fossles of creatures we mever knew exsited. That is why that is another reason.\n\nThese reason and so much more is why this is worth the dangers to explore Venus. The author put reserch into this artici to bake it up and they did it good.",
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"content": "In the findings of earth having a close plant that is similar but he enviroment is very dangerous. For example there is highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. not a singlr ship has landed and been there for more thana few hours.\n\nThe National Aeroautics and Space Administration have been working on ways to get to the \"Sister plant\" for a little while but not over a year. So far they have only sent nonhuman space shutles but they want to send a human to study venus but no ship came back that didnt have a human on board. The conditions are extreme just getting close tot he surface is around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, and the air pressure would be likethe sea level on earth, and solar power would be needed these dont seem like conditions for a human to live in but, they are it wouldn't be easy but its possible. but you may think what about from the area just above the atmosphere since in the atmosphere is deadly, it wouldnt be possible because lights cant penetrate the atmosphere. but NASA is determined proof of this is that NASA has made a chamber that is close if not like the conditions that Venus would proved to you and your body.\n\nSo after all that information my conclusion would be that NASA is working on the best way for a human to live on Venus for a time but, the conditions are extremely intence but are possible.",
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"content": "One time I patient teacher tell something So I wated door go office I wate When teacher came back told thanks patient Patients really means wait Some kids dont patient get made example kids one group playing game would get made didnt get called lol But game radom pick stick ever sticks went So patients mean able wait",
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"content": "I believe offensive books music movies magazines libraries I think taking shelf people want children s reading looking thing looking Today I m going againt views censorship libraries I think fight libraries build children read The materials libraries offensive put another area older poeple Not children s go libraries I m asking newspaper help us fight libraries shelf young people children s And type s book children part libraries shelf We right s take book s children side And rights put offensive materials side older people like books music movies magazines young children read The point I m trying make think children s learn And know young person They grow fast like people We need make better young children s So self children s day",
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"content": "Nowadays, universities are accepting all the students, as many men as women in every subject matter. I believe that being open to all students is fair. The university must allow everyone to study what is interesting for each individual, regardless of gender.\nHowever, I think that the numbers of equality in each course are statistically speaking unrealistic. Even though, in general, I completely agree that there must be equality and human rights.\nNowadays, many are the organizations created, to support equality, sex discrimination, with the aim of helping people to get their rights. However, despite enormous positive changes compared to the past, still, some people reckon that some jobs are for women and others for men. What does it even mean? Should a woman only do house chores and raise kids? As can be seen, based on women's experience, a woman can be a businesswoman and a great mother at the same time. There is an old saying, 'Give me an educated mother and I will give you an educated nation'. Therefore, I disagree with some people's beliefs. Men and women can be great in different jobs and positions.\nHowever, having the same number of students in each course is impractical for universities. Realistically speaking, there are some courses which attract more one gender than the other. In terms of numbers, if we think that, for instance, in the nursery degree there is 50 % of females and, then the other half will be waiting to be filled form males, it would be harsh for the university to close the course with the same parity of future students.\nIn a nutshell, universities should not accept only one gender for a particular course or most of that gender with a fixed number. As the applications arrive at the university, they should select people based on their skills, knowledge, and merits. No matter if the course will be 80% females and 20% male or vice versa.",
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"content": "I beleves censorship libraries aloud If cersorship parents child child dont need censored By censoring something small books movies I think give people fake sense really happens Just something isent censored doesnt mean taken context eather Think like walking street going censor people say bad words show bad habits even go far seeing death Being kid really never censored anything including books ive learned alot I feel I went librarie get book censored taken shelf I shown fake world Once life cant censored shouldnt consor anything else A censored book movie whatever could also determin much someone could learn People go liraries learn hard facts proff evadience depending subject witch looking This meny reasons I think cendor libraries shouldnt aloud Consorship chosen outher people In end never know whats better till try",
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"content": "Information regarding the millions of overseas journeys from five different regions every five years from 1990 to 2005 is provided in the table.\nOverall, it can be seen that the total number of international trips grew substantially over the 15-year period. Of those millions of travels, Europe represented the highest and the Middle East represented the lowest.\nOne of the most notorious characteristics of the table was the increase in the total of travels from 448.9 million in 1990 to 693.7 million in 2005. European travelled the most during the 15-years period, accounting for 400.2 million in 2005, accounting for around third-fifths of the total. Those in the Middle East went to overseas more too, but they remained with the lowest numbers from 9.8 in 1990 to 15.8 million in 2005.\nIn Africa, Asia and the pacific regions the international visits experienced growth during the 15 years. The former grew by 10,000 milion and the latter by more than the double in 2005. Similarly, those in America travelled more during the first 10 years, however, they experienced a slight drop of 5 million at the end of the period.",
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"content": "With the rapid increase in the number of vehicles on the with hush and rush lifestyles of drivers today, traffic accidents seem to be escalating in our society. partly to number of traffic accidents but surely not as the main factor.Those who agree with would view young drivers assuming under 18 years old and older drivers to be reckless and therefore would be more prone to traffic accidents on the road. Lack of experience, forgetfulness, carelessness and poor fitness condition may be reasons for limiting age of drivers.On the other hand, I would think that age is only a small determinant and we need to look at more effective measure such as reducing number of vehicles on the road through car pool, implementing more stringent regulations on alcohol drink driving and possibly to revise on the standard of driving test for young and old drivers on the road. Many drivers who are stuck in traffic jams also have busy lifestyles and therefore tend to become very stressed or distracted on the road. Thus I would think the government may have to look ways to improve road infrastructure and traffic jams to deter or reduce accidents on the road.To sum up, age is only one of the many contributors for accidents but I do not agree that age for the elderly and raising age limit for the younger drivers is the best method. As mentioned in my third paragraph, we need to look at other more effective measures which deal with the underlying problems in the society which lead to traffic accidents.",
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"content": "Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.\r\n\r\nSome people reckon that it is an extravagant waste of time to beef knowledge up, instead of this they would rather boost interior confidence and quarrel with their mentors. While their contestants suppose it would be a reduction of respect and submission among students. I believe that teachers must not diminish the quality of education, but solidifying and inspiring also should be intruded into the educational system\r\n\r\nTo start, preachers don't have the right to keep information from students , they have to teach them knowledge as well. For example, if the child is confident but not clever enough he or she will never pass entrance exams or make further decisions. Secondly, another reason is self-esteem does not give them superb predicaments to broaden their horizon of knowledge. Thirdly, in spite of the fact that studying sometimes might be monotonous pupils are not eligible to cease doing hard work in order to create their desirous luxurious life in the future.\r\n\r\nTo reflect the fact that a lack of self-confidence combined with an impeccable brain might not satisfy the competent's demands of an employer or in life as a whole. For example, the learner who hesitates would rather not show their capabilities fully and properly. Firstly, loss of certainty in humans might turn them into grey mice who are scared to endeavour new things and steps. Secondly, individuals who don't dread something and had a great formation at school time could transcend all barriers. Finally, in general,durability unified with the ability to exhibit in front of the public or outpour feelings will lead to unbelievable results\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, mentors should not only teach unity but also make them certain in expressing ideas",
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"content": "Many features cyclists surroundings effect speed confidence He one road There cars bikes motor cycles even buildings Its like hes countryside So makes want go faster wont hit thing The fact hes alone wide open spaces boosts energy level makes feel confident",
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"content": "studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite of danger because there is some really bad stuff that can happen in venus like earthquakes lighting and cause its hot but in the passage it says it is survivable for humans so i think it might be a good thing for scientst to researh more about venus \\.venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size each mission was unmanned and for a good reason since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours maybe this issue explains why not a single sapceship has touched down\n\non venus in more than three decades what is more challenging is the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in venus atmosphere the temperture is not the same as in our planet it is very hot in venus it has volcanoes and lightning and even powerful earthquake solar power would be plentiful and raditaion would not exceed earth levels it would not be easy to live there but it is surviavble for humans",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states positive and negative aspects of driverless cars.\n\nThe development of these cars would be a total waste for the economy.\n\nThere is no need for driverless cars when the cars we drive today, on our own, are just fine.\n\nIf the driverless cars were manufactured and sold, the roads would have to change, the driver would get bored not feeling in control, and the money to build the car is too expensive.\n\nThat's a lot of twist and turns for the car's road ahead.\n\nFor example, if the cars were to develope, all the roads would have to change to safely fit the requirements of the car.\n\nIn the text the author states that the cars require massive upgrades to existing roads, something that is simply too expensive to be practical. That statement just shows how in order to create these cars, the roads would have to improved for safety, and that amount of money is horriftic.\n\nAnother reason why we shouldn't have driveless, the driver in the automomous car becoming less needed in terms of driving.\n\nThe driver is required to have his/her hands on the steering wheel at all times in the car.\n\nThat means the car gives off the illusion of the driver being in control, but the driver may also feel inferior to the car's abilities.\n\nThis would cause less people buying the driverless car.\n\nThe equipement needed to make the driverless car safe and secure is sensors.\n\nIn the article the author writes how Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotatin sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\n\nThat is a lot of equipement for just one car!\n\nNot to mention the safety sensors also may be unappealing to the cars' design and to the buyers.\n\nThe sensors used for one car can also add onto the amount to manufacture the car which causes the prices to increase.\n\nIf the prices increase, less people will buy the car.\n\nIn the text it states that the cars simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\n\nWhich means the cars have a notificatin system that notifies the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\n\nThat system is a good thing to have in the car, but what if it breaks. The driver is at risk of an accident if not alerting about upcoming driving obstacles.\n\nThen the law would have to determine if the driver or car was at fault.\n\nLess people would buy this car to avoid the uncertainity of being at fault or in an accident.\n\nOverall, driverless cars should not be developed because there is not a safety and money-efficent way to do so, yet.\n\nUnless the time comes, cars should stick to being controled by the driver.\n\nIf the cars change, it doesn't mean people are going to buy the autonomous car.\n\nThe road ahead for this driverless car is shortly coming to a dead end.",
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"content": "Using new technology to \"calculate\" peoples emotions will be a new and very advanced way to comunicate wiht others. For example, someone could just scan a person's face and tell if they're worth talking to or not. Also , some people may not want to be scaned and get told their emotions. The only people that should get this kind of technology is either , police , therapists or, people who willreally use them to study people.\n\nMost people will not wants to be scanned by this new type of technology because , will probably not know what its used for. For example, the person may be scanned without their consent or the person can be a lot older and could make a big deal about it. Also, someone may not approve of this software being used by anyone because it will be to advanced or not good enough. The FACS software is going to be the new way to read a persons facial expressions.\n\nFACS (Facial Action Coding System) can \"constuct a 3-D computer model of the face and read all 44 major muscles. Movement by one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\", this new type of software cannot be used by a normal home PC becuase of it complex algorithims.",
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"content": "My position on driverless cars is i think that this is a good idea.\n\nI yhink this is a great idea, and could help a lot.\n\nIt could help a lot with mothers on the go with a lot of kids, the simple fact of a major improvments on cars for the future, and people that like to text and drive or put on make up while driving.\n\nThe driverless car concept could help a lot in the future.\n\nIt would help those mothers that need to turn around or reach back to give there child something while she is driving. It would help because she could just put it into driverless mode and do what she needed to do.\n\nIt would be a major help for those people that happen to text and drive, or put on make up while driving.\n\nThe driver could then put the car into driverless mode, and send that last text or finish their make up before work, and prevent them from crashing.\n\nThe overall concept of driverless cars is a big acomplishment and could bring us closer to bigger, and better things for cars in the future.\n\nThe concept of driverless cars is far from being a every day thing, like it says in paragraph 10.\n\nOnce driverless cars are finished, and everyone will use them it will be a whole new thing for driving on the road.",
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"content": "America: land of the free, the brave, and millions of proud citizens who live in a country that prides itself on its preservation of human rights and everything else that makes up a proper society. However, in order to remain a fair republic that truly takes into account the opinions of all citizens, we must make one major change. The flawed Electoral College must be abolished and replaced with election by popular vote in order to ensure the well being of our country.\n\nProponents of the Electoral College would gasp in horror at this suggestion, arguing that their systematic method is virtually foolproof. Nevertheless, with a voting method as complicated as the Electoral College, the room for error is far too great. Just look at what happened in 1960, when racist legislators tried to replace the democtratic electors chosen by popular vote in order to sabotage John F. Kennedy's chances. Then yet another electoral disaster occured in 2000. Both of these events could very easily happen again and the consequences of such mistakes are unfathomable. History has been proven to repeat itself, and this is no exeption. Who's to say that electors won't just ignore the wishes of voters or that legislators won't manipulate the system? When it comes to choosing our leade, whose actions will ultimately decide whether or not America will continue to survive and thrive, it would be a huge mistake to leave this resposibility to one group of individuals. After all, nobody is perfect.\n\nFurthermore, advocates of the Electoral College make a major fallacy when they claim that voters in swing states are more informed on election information, therefore it's good that the electoral system causes candidates to only focus on them. Just consider the fact that by completely ignoring all of the other states, campaigners are ignoring millions of individuals who deserve to have a say in who will be in charge. Through this one argument, advocates are essentially assuming anyone who doesn't live in a swing state doesn't care about the election as much and therefore they shouldn't have a say in the matter. This is simply not true. In fact, these advocates fail to acknowledge that if voters in other states are not as educated or interested, it is a consequence of the Electoral College. While politicians are focusing all of their time and effort on the 'thoughtful' voters, other citizens don't get the information they need from seeing campaigns and meeting candidates. They are deprived of the opportunity to make an educated decision like swing voters and that is a fault of the college, not the voters themselves.\n\nThe problems with the Electoral College only go on. If a tie were to occur, the election would be determined by members of the House of Representatives, who do an even poorer job of representing the people considering each state casts only one vote. Also, due to the fact that the Electoral College mainly operates with the winner-take-all rule, it is easy for individuals in Democratic or Republican states to feel as if their vote doesn't matter.\n\nIt is also important to note that at the end of the day, election by popular vote accomplishes the goal of reflecting the opinion of the public far better than election by Electoral College. The popular vote is a clear statement of voters' opinions and is virtually unable to be tampered with. On the other hand, the Electoral College only complicates the situation by introducing a middle man who is prone to bribery and mistakes. Why should we allow candidates to win because of the electoral vote if they do not recieve the overall approval of the public? Compare the opinions of 538 electors to the opinions of hundreds of millions of voters. Evidently, the opinions of all these voters cannot be properly represented by these 538 electors. It's just impossible both logistically and logically.\n\nFor all of these reasons, I urge you to change the system to election by popular vote. It is without a doubt the only way this country can continue to be the great nation that it is for centuries to come.",
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"content": "In this new generation, people believe that we are experiencing changes in our weather. Is there any chance that we can prevent it or just go live with it? In this essay, I will discuss that we can still find a solution to this problem.\n\nTo begin with, the community believes that we cause why we are suffering from climate change. Some thought that it is due to all the modern technologies that are invented, our environment is highly compromised. For example, before our land is full of trees and different kinds of bodies of water, like lakes, swamps, rivers, and many more. Our surroundings is having colourful flowers and shades. In addition to that, most of the community are enjoying the greenery scene and breathing fresh air. \n\nFurthermore, because of the huge buildings and different projects thus, to improve our society they are destroying our nature by cutting the trees and covering the water with soil which causes the effect on our climate. It is true that in order to live in this modern life we need to sacrifice our nature. \n\nIn my conclusion, we are the ones who caused these changes. There is a saying that \"what are we doing will come back to us\". We can still help to prevent worsening the situation by joining the clubs which help to save our environment. At an early age, we can contribute by not polluting our surroundings and proper disposal of our garbage. Us, individual can also be part of sharing our knowledge to save the earth.",
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"content": "The neighboring planet to earth, known as Venus has been considered a land of danger. This however, does not stop astronaunts from searching for the unknown answers behind this magnificent planet. Venus represents itself hotter in tempature than Mercury (the closest planet), and is known not to be hospitible to any outside objects. This essay will be explaining few of the reasons why Venus is in fact an intresting discovery in the universe, and depict why it is yet so dangerous.\n\nThe first reason why Venus is a worthy pursuit towards the information it consist about, is because if NASA were able to test rocks and other materials, then it would impact the history of science. Science is an amazing attribute to society and if NASA could develop the technology to be able to enter the Venus atmostphere then all the lost questions will be answered. It is also, very similar to Earth.\n\nIf the danger of Venus could be determined to an exact pin point then we could use the results to fix and calculate other situations. Each time Earth as send a space aircraft to Venus, it had only lasted moment before it melted. If the substance could be tested then it would influence the world in a scientific way.\n\nIn conclusion, despite the critical mess of Venus, many people find it special and unique. The more scientist that get involved with making new technology to show Venus' value, can also help bring the world closer. This is true, because the more that are influenced are the more that will make a difference to society. If NASA exposes continually how similar Venus is to Earth then the way we look at things scientifically will conjure our thoughts",
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"content": "Books library many book children decide read suited Many parents allow kids read type books re use But book nt children Now days kids mature knowledgeable read higher levels kids go library look book catch attention Some books nt thats opinion Most authors write things sex drugs bad thing child looks things like get ideas book talking try things read Im saying kids read books decide try things read Some kids minmic certain things hear see even read Kids always going look people see try I beleive things like books kids shouldnt read put away Books taken shelves put places adults could get Just like video games certain age group could play game things game The things kids see soon try They also make rate book like rate movies video games things All books nt bad children I notice many parents nt care kids read long re reading People shouldnt think way alot crule people world I even seen news author wrote book killed lady So many teens read book found interesting And even gave young boys ideas killing people girl friends That book hands someone mature mind really knows right wrong Its parents world would nt allow kids read books bad things Most parents find offensive book stores places sell type books children The things authors talk books include read Books nt good certain age groups inaproprate things removed shelves But certain people interpret words different veiw different Its many books world parents grandparents hope kids grandkids never take shelf But going keep going someone speaks",
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"content": "A The warm friends I planned spend We decided walking around looking cool stores Eventually would get lunch go park near river right next We agreed great plan would wonderful To start met bus stop movies I We decided go look inside first crazy things love Inside store I found dress die small grey skulls Unfortunately costed left Next went see store us I created black teddy studded leather jacket We gave awsome top hat named We thought pretty funny teddy bears supposed cute one kind scary We paid continued little adventure We decided lunch time went got chineese food left headed park next river Before got park stopped go see like bridge There towers rocks place decided build one We stacked almost tall toppled almost crushing way We followed little path away rock towers river lead us little beach next water There huge pillar separating trees bushes water We decided eat lunch instead going park After eating lunch full energy started pine cone war tagging back head one After minutes us involved We used giant pillar bridge shield nt quite work better aim us hitting everyone left right rest us teamed We threw pine cones one untill start backing away As reached edge shore tripped big rock fell backwards shallow water Instantly busted roar laughter continued good couple minutes finally decided helping water He unhappy situation quite pleased Jesica managed get vidio whole thing played back could nt help laugh us After went park Immediately ran slide I wan na go first screamed made jungle jim slide All us pushed shoved get slide I finally suggested going big swirly slide together Everyone els thought great idea attempted first wanted I second followed We started realy slow progressed speed us piled onto slide We ended pile bottom laughing histarically When came back reality realized time head home grabbed things headed bus stop In end turned even better expected The whole full joy laughter whitch key aspects life Without laughter would way extremely happy think something funny Happiness one thing need live fun fulfilling life I feel like ability laugh one thing makes person fun around Do think laugh often enough",
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"content": "The mooring mast seems like great idea A landing dock dirigibles would jumped travel future As turns however architect Al Smith bit could chew First fate Hindenburg put worry owners heads owners Empire State Building realized much worse Hindenburg accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York The second problem existing law airships flying low urban areas As stated paragraph This law would make illegal ship tie building even approch area The final problematic part mooring mast actually revealed nature As turns wind top building violent unpredictable Even dirigible tethered back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Overall seems like great idea gone bad",
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"content": "The idea of driverless cars would be a beneficial addition to our future as the programming and technology has progressed. Driverless cars would push our innovations far beyond what has previously been accomplished in our world today. Benefits from having driverless cars would include helping the environmentand better flexibility in the way in which we travel.\n\nDriverless cars would significantly improve the environment in our gas consumption. In today's world when you don't want to drive yourself you take a taxi or a bus. Taxi use in the last five years have tripled in the fact of how many people do not care to drive. But what about those taxi drivers who don't particulary care to drive when they're off duty? And he amount of gas that they consume going to and fro? In Paragraph 1 the statement was made that, \"...cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today’s taxis...\" The air pollution made by taxi cabs has gone up significantly since the use of the taxi is now being quite more prominent. The less gas consumption equals the less air pollution. Less air pollution means cleaner air. It seems like a win-win situation so far.\n\nAlso, along with helping the environment, these cars would provide a more flexible means of travel for the person in which the service is needed. People in our days time don't care to take a bus and have to wait for all the stops of other people before they reach their own personal destination. they want to just go to their own place that they desire to be taken to and thats it. No middle man, just a \"me and me only\" type of mentality. With that in mind, driverless cars would be their own personal taxi. Just like Uber is designed to pick up and drop off people to their destination that's just what these new driverless cars would do also. Another statement said in this article reads, \"offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" If you've ever ridden a bus you would know that getting to your own destination isnt as flexible as just driving there yourself. You have to wait and accomodate others on the bus along with you. You can't have the \"me and only me.\" mentality that we've discussed previously.\n\nDriverless cars are the way of the future. We always say in the papers and on the internet that we want new and effective ways in order to make the environment healthier and in turn \"happier\" so to speak. So with the invention driverless cars and less gas consumption and less air pollution, isn't that a new and effective way to make the environment better? It certainly sounds like it. When people are sick of having to wait on others in order to get to the place that they want to get to they have another alternative, the driverless car! The innovation of the driverless car will help shape our world for the better.",
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"content": "The Facual Coding System enabling identification of human emotions.\n\nI agree with an idea that it's valuable to use thi technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\"This means that when a student is not feeling well at all the classroom computer could let the teacher know and and the teacher can find solutions to the student. This can help both a teacher and a student because the teacher can know when the student(s) is ready to learn and can contribute to the academic performance.\n\n\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"This means that the classroom computer is something very important becase students can understand the lesson which is benefitial.\n\n\"The classroom computer could also read when students are stressed/no concetrating.\" The classroom computer can let the teacher help student get out of stressors. This is the moost important to students because can contribute to the future of student by identifying whoever needs help.\n\n\"Prolonged sadness for some students.\" The Classroom computer can help student in many ways, some student can't identify their feelings or emotions. Depression is something that can harm people mentally and some students including me don't we don't want other people/teacher know what's going on in ours life. So the classroom computer can identify us and notify the teacher which can help us get help.\n\nTherefore the classroom computer is something to consider in schools or classrooms. It's helpful to both teacher and a student.",
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"content": "Dear local Newspaper People spending time good way people connect one But also way people get trouble things online like looking things nt looking strangers nt talking typing even predators could online kids adults go computer either getting school day getting work day getting work night computer check upon things kids either entertainment like chatting friends king program even playing game online Three fourths kids age go online adults age interest People sometimes say oh I go computer check things It takes minutes But lying Most people dont go couple minutes like hours effect relationship connection ones family friends says people spend hours computer looking ever want people stop sake persons family friends also said like addiction Do really want addiction I nt think instead sitting storing screen hours aday go outside fun friends family go beach even take walk park Nothing beat feeling friends family fun",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood author created memoir mood made feel like homeThe mood author created mood made feel like home One quote memoir helped set mood Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing withe aromas kitchen The second thing mentioned also helped set mood Growing enviorment instilled great sense familly nothing blood relativeI conclusion mood created make feel like wer home Thats set mood",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is trying to explain how the planet Venus is an intresting mission that is dangerous to human life, after many attempted unsucccesful missions NASA is still finding ways to land a spacecraft safely on this planet so information can be collected. Scientist in NASA are very intrested in the planet. It is considered to be \"Earth's twin\".\n\nVenus is one of the brightest points of light in the sky. Made of up 97 percent carbon dioxide, clouds of highly sulfuric acid in the atmosphere, not to mention average tempratures of 800 degrees fahrenheit. Many question NASA about making trips to this planet due the highly unsuitable conditions for humans. In the excerpt it states. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth, such an enviorment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans.\" It shows how harmful to life Venus can be.\n\nPeople wonder why Scientist are trying to further investigate the Venus's surface if the planet is so inhospitable. Turns out people from NASA and Astronomers are very fascinated by the planet. Researchers say it may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could've supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" It is very obvious why researchers want to further investigate. This is very important and could impact all of life on earth. Also NASA are in the process of trying to build protective spacecrafts hospitable to Venus.\" It will not be easy conditions, but it is survivable for humans.\" stated in the article.\n\nIn conclusion, NASA researchers should furthermore investigate into this planet, we never know, it could change our life. Traveling should not be limited by something that can be dealt with if possible. As people in this society we are trying to meet the edges of new inventions, discoveries, and innovation. To make it to that point risk have to be taken.",
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"content": "While constructing Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle builders overcome law prevented airships ie plains dirigibles flying low urban areas In paragraph learn law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Another obstacle building crew Empire State Building faced constructing mooring mast nature Because violent wind currents near top building way wind blew constantly changed causing great difficulty dirigible connect mast properly In paragraph told possible connect mast dirigible back would swing Dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighed back lead weights using Empire State Building would dangling high pedestrians Street neither practical safe Because many obstacles enough safe options mooring mast project shut proving construction builders faced many obstacles",
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"content": "The diagrams show the plan of a ground level of a house at present and after a presented refurbishment.\nThe most noticeable changes between the two plans regards the living room, which, in the prospective plan, is widened by removing the internal wall which is placed on the eastern side of the plan, the hall is joined with the living room and the internal doors are displaced at south entrance’s left.\nIt can also be seen that in the proposed plan, the stairs structure is rearranged in a half circle shape and placed on the north side of the house, propped up onto the western internal wall, whereas in the current plan it stands in the centre hosting a storage underneath.\nThe kitchen in the projected plan is embellished with a forniture set which surrounds the left wing of the house, although this may cause a shrink in terms of space availability .\nIn conclusion, the building works of the proposed plan of the ground floor are aimed to change the spatial layout, turning the living room into a full-fledged open space, by relocating the stairs. Amendments are to be made regarding the kitchen furniture, making it more comfortable and enjoyable compared to that of the existing plan.",
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"content": "In today’s modern society, various new employment opportunities make the younger generation change their occupations every few years. Although changing jobs has a certain merit, I am firmly convinced that its demerits are more significant.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a major benefit when people change their occupations several times is that they can have more experience with many kinds of jobs. This is mainly because during the same time, if they have different jobs, they can obtain more working experiences and skills. Thus, they can discover their potential and passion more easily. For instance, Jenn Im, who is a famous youtuber, had tried many jobs such as writing or teaching before becoming a beauty blogger. Therefore, changing jobs often may bring experiences that staying in one job cannot provide.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that there are some drawbacks that cannot be neglected. The first significant drawback is that people do not have enough time to have profound experience. In today’s world of work, a fundamental condition which applies to many positions in a company requires a minimum of 2 or 3 years of experience in the professional field. As a consequence, people who change their job every few years may find it hard to find a decent job. Another major drawback is that employees who change their jobs often may lose non- salary benefits such as health insurance and bonuses. To illustrate this point, in Vietnam, employees can receive an amount of bonus on Tet holiday, but staff who work for only a few months may not receive that money.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while changing jobs may help people get more experience and find their favorite work, I personally think that its disadvantages including the lack of profound experience or the loss of non-salary benefits are more significant.",
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"content": "Human activities have indeed damaged many animals and plants. Although it can be argued that there is nothing we could do to tackle this issue, I firmly believe some resolutions can proceed from different stakeholders. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are two reasons to argue that it is overdue to undertake the adverse effects of human activities on nature. Firstly, many wildlife habitats have been destroyed due to deforestation for economic purposes. We destroyed enormous rainforest areas and over-exploited natural resources, thus, demolished the nutrients, water, and shelters for animals and plants. As a result, thousands of species are reported lost to human activity. For instance, Western Black Rhino went extinct in 2011. Secondly, despite advanced science and technology, there have been challenges to revive various extinct species so far. The de-extinction programs require billions of investments, not only for genetic technologies but also for habitats conservation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the collaboration of international and domestic stakeholders can deliver effective resolutions throughout regulation, intervention programs, and financial aids. The government should introduce laws to protect natural areas, such as logging or trophy hunting. These acts will not only conserve wildlife habitats but also deter species from extinction. Moreover, non-governmental organisations like World Wild Fund for Nature have a critical role in environmental protection. Intervention programs collaborated with local authorities can enhance the community's awareness about climate change. Various international funding can help domestic organisations to conduct practical projects against pollution or deforestation. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, albeit various species have been endangered and lost to human activity, it is better late than never to have intermediate call-to-action from countries to save the planet.",
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"content": "On the driveless car I think that they should full test them out before they make more. Like to see what's safe or what's not & they should have rules for the cars like don't go to sleep while in driveless mode cause that mode may turn off it self. Someone should have likea training car place for driveless cars so when they actually get on the road they'll know what to do. Like if they had got tired or something the person teaching them would tell them or show the what will happen. Driveless cars should be more worked on because we don't know if they fully are safe. Enginers should have a full experince if the driveless car stops working or something is wrong with it so they know that the driver & the driveless car are safe and fully sucure. Google makes cars that drives on it's own but needs help parking it so it ain't all the way driveles. The brakes on the driveless car should be checked every month cause if It's not it can have crashed into something and camera's should be checked and other things that are important to car should be checked and made sure it's working the way it should be .",
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"content": "In the article the author tells that even though there is alot of dangerous challenges in exploring venus and that he is willing to face them challenges. In paragraph 2 the author starts out saying how venus is earth's twin and that venus is the closest planet to us in terms of density and size. In the body paragrpah i am going to talk about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems.\n\nIn this paragrpah i am going to talk about the challenges author states in the story about venus,\n\nNASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems. Some challenges the author says that venus is thowing at us is that venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that is covering the planet. In paragraph the the author also states that venus is on average 800 degrees Fahrenheit, that is hotter than mars and mars is the closest planet to the sun. The author also states that the atmosherpic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. If the earth had that muh atmospheric pressure than there would be no one left on this planet because that is so much pressure that it can crush a submarine. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes to land on its surface. Next, i am going to talk about how NASA asspects on venus. Some thing that NASA is saying is that there only possible solution for how hot it is and how much pressure is in the air is that with these hostile conditions that venus shoudl allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the rolling Venusain landspace, with that venus would avoid the unfriendly group conditions by staying up and out of the way. The temperatures over the ground would still be 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. These conditons are not easy, but thye are surviable for human's. Finnally i am gonna talk about how we can solve the high pressure and high temperature. The first way we can solve these conditions are if we started having people go and live on venus and took some other living organisms with them. The second way we could solve it is if we found away to connect venus to earth and that would take away all ot the problems.\n\nI would have to agree more with NASA's ideas on how to solve the problems venus is dealing with. i agree with the author it is just i don't think his idea's will wokr as well. One day i think we will be able to live on Venus and have it connected to Earth. In this essay i told you about about the challenges author states in the story about venus, NASA's asspects on venus and how we can deal with these problems.",
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"content": "The mood created author Narciso Rodriguez memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives happy thankful mood This happy memories Rodriguez describes memoir gratitude expresses family end describing hardships family endure himFirst Rodriguez brings happy mood story many happy memories describes memoir One paragraph says The passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen CAPS gratitude expresses family last two paragraph conveys thankful mood For example paragraph Rodriguez says I ve thanked repeatedly But reality way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends CAPS describing hardships family endure Rodriguez furthers conveys thankful mood Rodriguez devotes entire paragraph describing unselfish kind family thus thanking themIn end happy memories described gratitude expresses family describing hardships family face conveys happy thankful mood",
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"content": "In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" , the image or \"face\" on mars you seen was not made by aliens. In passage 7 it said \" And so April 5th, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mar Orbiter Camera {MOC} team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking Photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, recealing .... a natural lamdform. There was no alien monument after all.\" So there is proof that it can't be an alien marking.\n\nIn paragraph 12 , it says ,\"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West. \"it reminds me most of Middle Btte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. \"That's a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa about the same heights as Face on Mars'.\"\n\nSo with these supporting details i conclude this argument by saying the \"Face on Mars\" was not an alien marking.",
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"content": "In Germany, Life has been going on without cars for years. Street parking, driveways and home garages have been generally forbidden in this experimental new district they have going on. Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\" -except for a few streets on one edge of the community. Vauban's families usually do not own cars, and some sell their cars to move. Vauban, completed in 2006, the united states was seperating the suburban life from auto use, as a component of the movement that is called \"smart-planning.\" Gas emissions are huge to current efforts to make cities denser, and better for walking but these basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make public transportation more accessible. Experts expect public transport to be much larger in a new federal transportation bill.\n\nUnlike Paris, Paris is banning driving to clear the air of the global city. People were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a fine. A lot of drivers were fined. Beijing, China were both known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel was blamed, since France has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Paris typically has more smog than any other capitals. Because of the smog public transit was free of charge.\n\nBogota on the other hand had a car-free day. Millions hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during this car-free day. This car-free day devoided traffic jams. The goal for this event was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines. Car-free day turned out to be large. Even rain did'nt stop people from participating in this event. Car-free day is also a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution. Cali and Valledupar joined the event for the first time. Other countries came to see this event. These people who invented a car-free day are generating a revolutionary change to today's world. The day without cars is part of an improvement in Bogota in the mid-1990's.\n\nIn today's world, President Obama has ambitious goals to shift in American behavior. America's love affair with it's vehicles seems to be slowing down by population growth. The internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet new friends. Cellphones and car-pooling has been more flexible. Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commerical and public transportation are woven to connect network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\n\nWith all these changes, it all reflects to new priorites across the nation to fellow citizens to limit car usage in the future.",
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"content": "Recently, the extent of the environmental problems we are facing has become so vast, that major policy changes are required on a global level. Several people believe that one of the most feasible solutions to these problems, is to increase fuel prices for vehicles. I personally disagree with this idea, and in this essay, I will elaborate on the possible hindrances that it could cause to the general population of a country. \nEffluents released by the combustion of fuel in automobiles is definitely one of the leading causes of air pollution. Often, the degree of damage done to the environment is so extensive, that it is either difficult or impossible to breathe with ease. This is especially true in large cities having a high population density, where innumerable vehicles hit the roads on a daily basis. However, increasing fuel prices would definitely not aid in solving the problem at hand in a way that benefits the public, especially in developing or underdeveloped countries. For example, in a developing country like India, the average per capita income is far below the poverty line. In this case, increasing petrol and diesel rates would make the commodity entirely inaccessible to the common man. Furthermore, this would lead to an increase in fares in public transport, thereby discouraging the public from using the service. An overall hike would be seen in the price of goods, due to the increase in their transportation costs, and low-income houses would face serious difficulties to make ends meet. \nSecondly, let us look at the adversities faced by countries where the constant rise of petrol prices is a pressing issue, by considering India as an example. The inflation of oil prices was a major cause of public outrage, as citizens claimed that the tax being placed on the product was excessive, while the government claimed it was essential. Hence, it is clear that though increasing gas prices seems like an airtight solution on paper, it would inevitably cause numerous difficulties in the lives of the public. Therefore, we must first consider educating people on the processes of car-pooling and the benefits it could have to both the environment, as well as their savings. Another possible answer could be the odd/even method, wherein citizens must alternate between using private transport and public facilities. \nIn conclusion, even though this method might bring about the desired result, it would give rise to several other issues. Therefore, I strongly believe that while the proposed solution might seem obvious, it is not possible to implement this on a global scale without putting the middle and lower classes under serious strain.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to know how the person you like is feeling? Well, now you can find out with the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. I think using this on students in the classroom is valuable because it can tell emotions, is itended to bring a smile to your face, and can even help your emotions.\n\nTo start off, FACS can tell your emotions through a process. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. In the text it states, \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" This explains the process of finding out someones emotion. The software can even identify mixed emotions and is compared to someone showing no emotion.\n\nSecondly, this demonstartion is intented to bring a smile to your face. In Paragraph 6 it states, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" This shows that this technology can bring a smile to your face. Lastly, FACS can even help your emotions. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Some may question how a picture with Mona Lisa can help find emotions. But, it is proven that FACS can tell your emotion based on tests and their process.\n\nIn conclusion, Facial Action Coding System can help read emotional expressions of students in the classroom. It can tell emotions, is intended to bring a smile to your face, and can help your own emotions. If you ever want to know how the girl you like is feeling, just use FACS.",
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"content": "The setting story plays huge part final outcome The author makes mention travelling high deserts California June This sentence alone tells reader hot And hot standards gets degrees maybe noon That means day starts By noon s past Also author comes sign marked Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit makes note hes going mph Before reaches sort civilization already drunken water last tentalizing sips This main problem lack water He drank beginning ride thinking hed okay regretted later",
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"content": "It is true that there is a declining number of young people who opt to work in the field of agriculture. There are a number of reasons for this, and I believe that the idea of whether to encourage more of the young to do farming work should depend on the goals of each country.\r\n\r\nTwo main factors are to blame for the shift away from farming among the young generation in many parts of the world. Chief of these is the adoption of machinery in farming activities. In fact, most labor intensive tasks in farming are now done by machines such as trucks, forklifts, automatic sprinklers, and even airplanes. This means that fewer workers are needed to run a farm. Added to this is the fact that the income of farmers is notoriously unstable due to the unpredictability of weather conditions. As a result, more young people are moving to cities to look for jobs with more stable streams of income rather than doing farm work.\r\n\r\nThere are countries that should incentivize young people to do farming work more, while others should not. Regarding the former, if these countries wish to become independent regarding their food supplies or if agriculture is the key sector driving their economies, they should encourage more of their young to get involved in farming. However, as for countries that wish to develop other sectors such as science, technology or tourism, there is little point in having more young people involved in agricultural activities. Instead, they should be encouraged to develop their skills and gain knowledge related to the target driving forces of the country. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the main causes of the waning popularity of farming work among the young are primarily the adoption of machinery in farming and the unstable nature of such jobs. I feel that it depends on each country to decide whether to motivate more of their young citizens to work in this field.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives mood created author memoir together family organized My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today parents really together thing organized family That mood created author memoir",
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"content": "Today live world many different political religious personal views time views going become varied wide spread Unfortunately always easy cater every single persons individual takes world When comes libraries even harder different books different opinions offend people opinions Let s take example There many different races people different religions living This place already fought racism slavery Although things country overcome still going arguments disagreements problems When different opinions always going different books topic multiple points view As readers books need know point view coming choose book goes personal beliefs This offensiveness comes We live many different people need understand everyone going views life When I eighth grade I friends One pulling eyes back like someone would imitating person itchy A pregnant woman walked took offense friends eye movements She yelled us said I would thought parents raised better first understand woman talking realized friend pulling eyes back This showed us different people take offense different things heritage There nothing expanding cultures country We change views certain people order match beliefs change fact different people going voice opinions view right However change way view people We need understand right dealing multiple opinions point need embrace everyone else believe nothing change beliefs So next time pick book library read summary check see author agrees take book home going disagreements views If get book nt agree offended one mad checking see author s stance topic started reading",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing talk effect computers people Since I two computers one laptop I agree every person likes look stuff computer Everyone computers look different things play games like checkers computer somebody else last reason chat people different states even countries I know everybody likes talk one another Everyone computers search different things You search places people Basically search anything internet right website One time I wanted go web look see I went askcom typed CAPS It said yes showed information It told address phone number name manager Looking places sometimes Everyone play types game You could play internet game checkers solitaire even freecall nt types games always go gaming games Since I use computer everyday onto When I six years old driving game Since I website I got play checkers computers one day logged onto played first driving computer game Everyone computer chat people Instead always using phone calling texting people raising phone bill use computer chat want without wasting minutes cell phone I know everybody likes talk text cell phone Instead go internet find chatcom start chatting bloging friends One time I ran minutes phone I nt internet I asked dad I could use computer He said yeah I went local chatroom internet My friend acount would easy us talk wanted I joined chatted In conclusion I think everyone likes look places play games chat computer",
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"content": "One time mom took test become That means certified nursing assistant After took test nervous She waited waited A phone call would come soon patients The first day took test hard patients I understoond I get feeling Im waiting test results It nerve racking exciting The next day hard She went day The third day waiting started wondering call would come Later day phone rang A smile spread across face She passed test This time mom showed patients three whole days",
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"content": "I agree with using technology to read sudents emotional expressions. It could prevent students from being bored in a class. If we had computers to tell us when were bored and upset it would make our mood change. It would probably change the way you act everyday. You would get tired of seeing you be in a updet mood all the time so you would want to change that. The computers would try giving you entertaining ads or funny ads. They would make it to make you not bored in class and not so tired. They are just trying to make your day a little bit easier. In the passage it said that it looks at the muscles you are using to see what mood you are in. They compared it to the Mona Lisa painting becuase she is barely smiling but looks kind of upset. She could have many moods.\n\nI think it would be really valuable and useful. It would put kids in a better mood than they were. If the computer makes the day a little bit better why not do it. It cant harm anyone it's just trying to show that computers can help kids with bad attitutudes. They are making school computers do this so when kids get to school in an updet mood it can make there day better and they wont be upset all day.\n\nIn conclusion i think that the computers would be really useful. There would not be a lot of issues it should run smoothly. Kids are not going to like the idea because they will think that someone is spying on them when it is really just being used to see if your in a bad mood or not. I think they should add these to school computer s and see what kids think of them. Take a vote and see if kids like the idea or completely hate it but, i agree and think they should use them.",
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"content": "It is argued by some citizens that the opinions of undergraduates on their lecturers should be supported in order to enhance study qualities while some populace believed that it will result in a lack of admiration and indiscipline. This essay will discuss both views and outline my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some individuals feel that the quality of learning can be improved by allowing scholars to question and criticise their tutors because it will make them comfortable and give them a sense of belonging, thus encouraging various ideas from both teachers and students, which improves learning and bring about advancement in education. For, instance when a lecturer teaches about a certain topic, students will be allowed to give updates on such subject and can criticise a system of teaching if it does not go in line with their thinking, such a scenario can give permanent storage of knowledge due to active participation and therefore bring about changes that will benefit the society.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, few human beings objected to the above statement and said it will lead to chaos in the learning system whereby there will be no regard for tutors and a lack of control among pupils. Education is the process of receiving systematic instruction, in which instruction is listened to and carried out when it comes from a higher authority and tutors are built to have more knowledge and be at a higher level than their pupils, therefore when students are given free will to contest and contrast their teachers, then there will be no authority as everyone is on the same level and some scholars can be sentimental and base their critics on personal issues and not facts. This will further result in deteriorating the schooling process rather than improving its standard. In my opinion, I think the schooling system should be left the way it is, maintaining the order of hierarchy but strict supervision should be carried out on lecturers and a review of curriculum and methods of teaching which could be changed from time to time to elevate it standard.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while a few individuals think the process of educating undergraduates can be improved by allowing them context their masters, others believe that order and respect for teachers will be lost which I agreed and the suggestion that the existing authority should be left untouched and proper supervision on school scheme and strategies for tutoring.",
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"content": "Can you imagine living in a time zone where no one buys cars because they are no longer needed ? The world depend on nothing but technolgy. How would you spend your time? Although there are positive apsects to having a car that drives itself there are also negative aspects to this car. The cars can drive themselves but are unable to drive through traffic jams or raod work . Therefore I am against cars that drive themselves.\n\nEven though the cars are smart enough to drive themselves they are not smart enough to drive on non-smart roads. In the late 1950s GM ,General Motors created a car that could run on a speacial track but the track was enbedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to the car. Therefore all roads would have to require upgrades and this is something that is too expensive. The passage says that the cars can't drive through traffic jams,road contruction and when the vehicle is around danger . So if the driver is not paying attention to the car , the road and others around it then how can the car ,the car would be unable to save itself from crashing. With this being said I believe driverless cars are dangerous and would be way to expensive.\n\nAs i said there are benefits to this driverless car , while the car drives it self it provides enteratinment such as sound but when it is time for the driver to take over it turns everything off. This is a great idea because it creates less distraction for the driver.\n\nImagine driving a driverless car and it shuts down in the middle of traffic ,there is a person driving behind does not notice you are having car troubles and hits you. Whose fault is this accident ? Whose going to pay for the damage?\n\nI feel that there are more downfalls with this idea than great ideas .It is dangerous , too expensive , and takes as much energy and time as driving yourself around. It sounds like a disaster waiting to happen .",
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"content": "I believe that FACS is vauable, because it helps us understand ones feeling, which could be happy, sad, excited, angry, or nervous.\n\nFACS (Facial action coding system) can help students the most in school, because schools are becoming more advanced in the world of technology, where everything you learn now is on a computer or tablet. But every once in a while it gets boring, and if your computer can detect that you are getting bored with what you are doing, the computer or tablet and change something to make it less boring, which helps the student stay on track.\n\nLike in the reading, there are computers that can tell what emotion you are feeling, because of the muscle movements on your face. and even can detect mixed emotions like happy and nervous at the same time. And at school if the teacher can monitor you computer from her computer that shows how you are feeling can help out a lot. Like for example, your computercan detect you are stressed and tired, then that information is sent to your teachers computer, then she can see that you dont understand what is going on, or if somethig if bothering you. because teachers don't always know what you are feeling. Like in the passage \"Your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens when you get angry.\" Which the computer can detect,and the computer can change something or pop up something funny to calm you down.\n\nFACS (Facial action coding system) is indeed smart, and should be used in schools, but there is a problem,which is that it will be expensive to by. Because some schools dont have the money to buy all new computers. But honestly it still should be used in schools, because it will benifit the student and the teacher. And it could possibly help prevent students commiting suicide due to bullying, because the computer or tablet can detect the the student is in destressed, ad then the teacher and comfront that student, and then the teachers can handle the bullies without it being too late.\n\nIn all FACS it's very useful, in helping to detect someones emotion, because it can potentualy save some suidical, because the computer he or she is using can detect what the are feeling. THen in which someone can speak with him or her on how to handle it in a postive way.",
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"content": "Can Driverless Cars become reality? Possibly. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public-transportation taxi system, using driverless cars. Telivisions and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\n\nSince 2009 there have been cars that could drive independently under specific conditions, the cars have drivn almost half a million miles without a crash. But the cars aren't even truly driverless yet, the cars will alert the drivers when they need to take over, for reasons like pulling in and out of a driveway, and complicated traffic issues, such as roadwork or accidents.\n\nDriverless cars aren't a good idea. The cars they have now are not even totally driverless, the cars still need to be driven by a human at some point while driving. The car alerts the driver when the car needs assistence while driving, but if the driver doesnt relize this, or has gone to sleep, the car could wreck into something and could injur or even kill someone. A driverless car could malfunction and take someone off of the road. The cars will never be flawless and something could always happen to get someone hurt.\n\nMany people, on the other hand, want driverless cars to be everywhere. There are many ways to make a car drive by itself. One of those ways will have to work out, either it be magnents or radio signals, there can even be sensors on top of the car, giving it a 3-d surrounding.\n\nWill Driverless cars be a normal thing soon? Driverless cars probably wont be normal, but there will be alot of people using them. Meaning that there will probably be alot more accidents and injuries also.",
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"content": "Books good things always good They teach us things entertain us sometimes good pillows also bad things When book inappropriate reader shelves library Music way The library absolutely take book shelf found offensive someone Some books offensive religious ways A person believe something strongly book goes makes fun trashes way Some say person nt read book I would want book gone nt remind said everytime I walked Books even inappropriate little kids It language parents nt like People said make section books little kids ca nt get nt know childs parents like could think word bad think s fine Everyone different Furthermore book contain images suitable children It comes back I saying ca nt make section books say heck Libraries could even consider censoring books Some religions believe types music devils music I know experience mother thinks screamo devils music She says right sing like would nt like Other peoples parents feel way Magazines also words images someone could take wrong way Although I nt believe libraries remove still watch reads They could even put little label front cover magazine says suitable everyone Books usually good things although bad In end libraries consider censoring books book bad enough gets enough complaints take shelves completely",
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"content": "My crew and I have just gotten back from a mission to space. The mission was to find and photograph what the people of NASA say is a mesa. People of the public have a different idea though. We have gotten multiple reports of people saying that it is an alien artifact.\n\nI was walking home today from work and I was stopped and questioned by a friend that lives near me. He says that he believes that the figure on Mars was an alien artifact. He asks me how I know that it is not an alien artifact. I respond, \"Due to our new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft we can see the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.\n\nThe man then asks, \"How are the people in the public supposed to know that NASA is not lying to us so that we will not be frightened about the thought of aliens taking over our planet?''\n\nI then say, \"NASA wishes that there was an anchient civilization on Mars, so that we could see how they lived and survived on Mars.\"\n\nThe man then replies, \"I guess that NASA would want to know about an anchient civilization, I am thinking more and more that NASA is telling the truth.\"\n\nThe man then ends the conversation by saying, \"If anyone asks me about the Face on Mars I will tell them what you told me. Hopefully we can get everyone to quit believing the non-sense that conspiracy theorists are trying to tell us.\"",
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"content": "The author concluding anything happen story Saeng planted winter hibiscus mother getting mad Saengs mother mad spent money whole plant instead planting would lot cheaper When mother mad disbelief Saeng started crying mother forgave actions This shows anything happen",
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"content": "When driverless cars come up in convesation must people will be like \"wow so cool\", but most people do not know what they are talking about and they think they just want to look cool in front of people with their cool new gadgets. Driverless cars are easilly a good thing, but why? Most likely driverless cars are safer with more advanced technology than we have now and they also can prevent some pollution that the public transportation system gives off in the major cities. Most people think that driverless cars are dangerous or they think they are just some cool technology.\n\nDriverless cars are a good thing to come, but not anytime soon. Driverless cars can prevent accidents from happening. Teenage drivers are the leading cause of accidents worldwide because they are knew to it or they are on their phone while they are driving. Just think if teenagers had a driverless car the accident rate would go way down and the teenagers that are so young would stop getting killed. Driverless cars are not just for teens, but for everyone think of the elderly, in some peoples opinions old people or senior citizens should not be able to drive. Driverless cars could help get elderly to their bingo games safe and on time. Paragraph nine states \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Now people know that teenagers are never going to listen and put their phones down because they think they are smarter than the last person who was texting and driving. It says that \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.\"(9). Well one way they can do that is with driverless cars.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin believes that driverless cars can replace public transportation such as taxis or busses. Major cities in the United States have the highest pollution globally and that is to blame the public transportation system along with many other things, but public transportation is one of the main factors. Sergey Brin envisions \"a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\"(1). We do not know if this will be happening some time in the near future or years down the road. Sergey claims that the driverless cars would \"use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\"(1). Well since we know that major cities usually have some sort of public transportation system now they are letting off huge amounts of pollution and using a lot of fuel each and every hour of the day. Something has to change Sergey Brin says he wants to cut the taxis and busses feul in half by using driverless vehicles instead. He states the vehicles would \"offer far more flexibility than a bus.\"(1). We do not know what this statement means, but if it means that he can make driverless busses that recieve better fuel economy than a regular bus that is polluting the earth. That would be a really big improvement if he could accomplish that. Stopping global warmming should be a big topic of discussion and driverless cars could have a big impact on stopping global warmming.\n\nMost people do not think about how the impact on society that driverless cars can bring to the table. People do not think about how the cars could potentially save teenagers lives or their family or anyone for that matter. Also, they do not think about the fact that driverless cars could replace the public transportation system and stop one of the main factors contributing to the pollution or global warmming. Some instances driverless cars could be a bad thing in our world and some people just want to look cool. Citizens have to look at it from a different prospective and imagine a safer and less polluted place. Driverless cars are the future and they are only going to raise more conflicts.",
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"content": "Does studying Venus is a great adventure?\n\nStudy Venus is a great opportunity,reason why there are so many things that we can learn about it and trying to understand how human could live their,but at the same time there are so many dangerous thing that we can face while exploring it.\n\nSome of the thing that the author state to explain how,\"its simple to see in a distant but safe vantage point of earth\" meaning that Venus is a\n\nplanet that save us human on heart from having disease.The writer give many details to explain us how is it a great adventure.On paragraph fourth the author state that how it could,\"support various forms of life,just like earth\".\n\nHowever,even if Venus is so inhospitable but there are great thing to explore,there are thing to understand how can we live on heart if venus is not at this place to separate us from brightness of the sun.Its also has a surface with familiar features like earth,any further as the author is trying to inform us that sometime Venus might be our nearest option of planet to visit.\n\nNeverthless,have the posibility to challenge himself\n\non Venus has a great value,its not only because they have things to explore their, but for humanity to be curios and might make them equal in their value.For those who are exploring other planet as the author state their travel should not be limited by doubts and dangers but should have a positive mind to have a great adventure in other planet,and so fourth It is a worthy pursuit to study venus.",
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"content": "When NASA flew over Mars they say a piece of land that looked like a human face. It was about two miles from end to end. They began to take pictures of the \"Face on Mars\" and noticed it was just a natural landform.The Face was just another Martian mesa that had unusual shadows. Those shadows made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nThere was no alien monument. People still believed it was created by aliens. The Face had eyes, a nose, and a mouth. They took more pictures of it during a cloudy time of the year on Mars. Others, who were skeptics, said the alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nThen NASA went on a cloudless summer day to look. For evidence that showed it was not created by aliens, NASA went at different times of the year to take pictures of the Face using different cameras. They used the camera's absolute maximum resoluion. Using the carmera's absolute maximum resolution would help see extra objects. So if there was an object there, they would be able to see it.\n\nAfter taking pictures, they saw that it looked like landforms on Earth. They Face looked like landforms common around the American West. People compared it to Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It's about the same height as the Face on Earth.\n\nThe Face was first spotted in 1976. Skeptics thought it was created by aliens. They were wrong. The Face was a natural landform on Mars. It was compared to landforms on Earth to show that it wasnt created by aliens. It was identified as just another Marsian mesa that had unusual shadows.",
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"content": "The way we should change the way we choose our United States president. I am against the Electoral college. I feel like with the Electoral college my vote does not matter. The Electoral college is a pretty unfair way to choose out president. I think its time to try something new. A expirement prehaps. How do we know the popular vote system doesn't work if we had not tried it. You know what they say don't knock it to you try it. We can avoid what happend in 1968 or 2000. Im just saying and im not the only one saying this but the Electoral College is unfair and irrational.\n\nThe Electoral college is a voting castrophe. Many people fell like their vote doesn't matter or even make a differance. Their not the only ones. Some people just feel like the Electoral College is way too complicated to understand. Some just rather have their vote go straight to the president. Well they say their trust is rarely broken. Well thats still means it can be broken. Also, whats with the ''winner take all'' ? People here that say '' wait what?''. Well to start off its a little bit unfair. We the people just want to pick our president of united states not some electors who might not even be that loyal to the person you voted for any way. We young generartion should try something new in the future. Which im saying that the Electoral College is a little bit old and outdated dont yout think.\n\nThis Electoral College can be unfair and irrational at times. Also complicated as well. We voters wish their was an easier way to choose the president. well their is, we just haven't been useing it yet. They say they want to avoid another 1968. Or, even a 2000 election. Well i haven't seen any change or concern for this matter. Instead of chaging the rules , how about we change the voting systems in all. People have been trying to abolish the Electoral College for decades. People like President John F. Kennedy. Even one of our presidents was oppose to the Electoral College. Who is the Electoral Collage any way. Just some people who Dont currently hold office. Well whats the point of knowing who your voting for but not actully know who your voting for. Basiclly voting for someone who can not be trusted or not be loyal enough. We have to vote on trust and confidence. I know i want my vote to matter.\n\nSo you see why we should change the way we choose our president. The Electoral college is a pretty unfair way to choose out president. I think its time to try something new. Many people fell like their vote doesn't matter or even make a differance. I just want to seeif any change can happen in the future. This Electoral College can be unfair and irrational at times. Also complicated as well. If we want to avoid 1968 or 2000 lets make a change. Atleast lets try it out for a election or two to see how it works. Instead of going off of this is what we been using so we are going to keep using it. Im just saying and im not the only one saying this but the Electoral College is unfair and irrational.",
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"content": "In today's world technology has taken over. Driverless cars are starting to develop. Is this a good or bad thing? Some may see it as good, but in my opinion driverless cars are a bad thing.\n\nDriverless cars have more risks rather than a human operated vehichle. One of those risks or concerns that was pointed out in the article is what if the technology is to fail? If the car is operating on it's own and a wreck happens; who is to blame? Is it the manufacturer for faulty technology or the driver? Either way this would cause more problems with who's fault it would be if a wreck were to happen and could cause major legal troubles. Another thing that goes along with technology failur is the safety of everyone in the vehicle and everyone around. The technology would not be able to sense a problem or poor driving conditions like a human operator would be able to. The technology would not be able to react and adjust to these situations.\n\nAnother downside the article pointed out was the driverless cars are not entirely driverless. The car would still need an operator to be allert and ready to take over. So what is the point of a driverless car if they still need an operator? The point the article made, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" This is a relateable statement it would get boring sitting there having to be allert but not doing anything. It would get really tiring after a wile. The article talked about putting in-car entertainment in the cars, but if someone were too invested in the entertainment of the car they would not be allert if the car would need the operator to take over. This could cause crashes and put the safety of people in danger.\n\nDriverless cars are not a good idea. They have not figured out the legal work that would go along with it. If a car were to crash they have no way of knowing who is at fault. The safety of people is put at risk. The cars are not even completly driverless they still need an allert operator ready to take over if a problem occured. Driving should be the responsibility of a human not a computer. Driverless cars are not where our future should be heading.",
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"content": "What do I think about driveless? I feel like we should be getting ready for them. People and company's are talking about making them in the future. I feel like we should have them. I am with driveless cars.\n\nI would like to see myself in the future just sitting in a car and waiting to arrive where I am suppose to be at. I feel that having driveless car a good thing. I feel that people would like that concept and appreacite. More and more people are looking for to the future with more and greater technology.\n\nEven though having a driveless car, people may seem its a bad thing but it is really not. People may not be with it but they will have no choice but to accecpt and buy. All the driver has to do is sit there and be be aware of whats going on. That way there will be no crashes or anything.\n\nIt says in the article that the cars will have sometime of sensors that will let the driver now that something is wrong. It says that the windshield would flash or that the sit would vibrate. So there will be some type of way to let the driver now that something ois coming up or that something is wrong.\n\nBut the way that o see it is that we should be lloking towards the future and seeing more technology coming our way and helping us and to improve better too. So I say that having driveless car would be a great and positive thing to have in the future.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a technology of the future. If perfected, driverless cars can solve many of the problems caused by drivers today. Driverless cars will also benefit the environment due to the little gas they consume. Finally driverless cars will benefit those who are not in the shape to drive. The technology of driverless cars helps more than it hurts.\n\nFirst of all, there are too many problems when it comes to driving. Some are minor and some are major. When you introduce driverless cars to the road, many of the problems will be easily solved. Some drivers are stupid and aren't very aware of their surroundings while driving. They make lousy mistakes like running into mailboxes, running stop signs, and even crashes. When driverless cars are involved you are less likely to get into an accident. All commutes will be more efficient, and there'll be less accidents out on the road.\n\nWe all know that money plays a major role in everyone's lives. People try to save as much as they can and it will be easier to do that with driverless cars. These new cars will consume less gas, which will allow you to avoid spending all your hard earned money on just traveling. It isn't just money you're saving but also the environment. Using less gas means less fumes that are getting into the atmosphere. Pollution will be less of a problem, allowing us to live healthier lives.\n\nIts ineveitable that people drive their cars even when their not supposed to, when their drunk, tired and even on drugs. When these types of people get behind the wheel, you're not going to expect anything good from it. So driverless cars not only benefit those who aren't in shape to drive, but also those who were first at risk of danger. Less DUIs will be given to wreckless driver, assuring others on the roads more security. No more innocent people will become victims of dangerous driving.\n\nDriverless cars will be the next big innovation of our daily lives. They prevent drivers from making mistakes on the road which lead to bigger problems. Driverless cars also saves the consumer's money by being more fuel efficient, and saving the planet. Finally, driverless cars assure everyone more safety by preventing wreckless from getting behind the wheel. Driverless cars will benefit all of us, allowing us to live safer lives.",
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"content": "Many people are of the opinion that young people's priority to a successful career is taking courses from higher education. However, some believe that getting jobs after finished high school is better. This writer was in two mind, and will discuss in both sides in this essay.\n\nIt is vital to understand that the higher qualifications students have, the better job they will get. Students spend approximate four years on courses which taught they massive and professional knowledge in their field such as law, engineering. As a consequence, young people will gain expert knowledge and have more opportunities for promotion in their work. On the whole, a plan for further educating after high school should be set up by young people.\n\nIt can be clearly seen that late teens will gain experience from early jobs which is essential for their jobs. During their work, they can always learn from their mentors some skills such as communicating and networking. Hence, this leads late teens to be more mature and able to solve problems in working environment. Therefore, they can easily have better job due to their soft skills.\n\nPersonally, I hold the belief that student will gain more and more benefits from higher education. Although early jobs is attractive to teenagers, university not only give you specialized knowledge but also improve students' coop skills. \n\nAll things considered, although getting jobs an upward trend among students, more and more companies are likely to hire employees who have degrees or better qualifications.",
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"content": "Lukes ponit of view\n\nis to convince others to join the seaongoing coboys program.To do so you must be willing to go out to sea to feed people of the war that went on. It will take two wweks to get to Euope and a month to get to China.But you\n\nhave to make sure the animals are healthy. Also you hav to give them watter on very hot days on borad the ship.Last you have to check on them every hour.\n\nThe first\n\nreason luke wants people to join is to help people in need. So they can have more help and more hands to feed the animals on the journy ahead.And so there is more clothes and more aid to help injerd people.\n\nand to help unload animals. that is the first reason people should join.\n\nThe second reason people should join is because of the great seanery. You get to play games on the way back to get more supplys.And it can open the world.It can make people aware of the suffering of other people that lost there home. And maybe lost family in the destruction that the war made.\n\nThe tird reason to join\n\nis to be happy that you are helping people that cant help what the have lost. And to get thanks from people that you helped. Also raise awarness to let people\n\nget help. To donate caned food supplys.and new clothin to peple who need it more.\n\nIn conclusion\n\nit would be nice if outheres would join this program. Also you can help the animals. You will be fed on the trip. and you can get very good at helping others with social skills. And you will be very good at being a farmer with animals.",
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"content": "Do the advantages of not driving a car outweigh the disadvantages? As cities start to give options for transportation like buses, terminals, and taxi's is it worth driving and spending money on gas. driving produces carbon dioxide which is bad for the air so some cities have banned cars for a day or even banned cars forever.\n\nIn the city of vauban, germany the residents have decided to give up their cars.\n\nthe city provides transportation with buses but most of thew stores or places to work have been placed in walking distance. as a result people started to ride bikes more which is a pollution free way of transportation. in the united states the enviromental protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and expertes believe public transportation serving suberbs will play a major role.\n\nits horrible when there is so much pollution you have to ban driving for a day.\n\nin paris they had to ban driving because there was so much smog that they had clear nthe air. as a result the smog was clear just after one day just because half the city of paris didnt drive. in the city of bogota, colombia they ban driving one day every year to promote alternative transportation and to reduce smog. the people of bogota like the idea of using alternative transportation because it relieves the stress of driving. but for the first time two other cities decided that they wanted to participae in it so maybe one day the whole world will participate.\n\nthe idea of not driving might be a shock to some but not driving only has positive outcomes towards the enviroment and the only people that would suffer would be car companies. so what if the world stopped driving for the day how would the planet be affected?",
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"content": "Do you believe that driverless cars are better than normal cars? I would say driverless cars would be better. I think they would because the money, and smarter sensors, and offer more flexibility. Driverless cars might be the next big thing in the world. I will tell you why the money helps make the driverless cars better than the normal cars.\n\nDriverless cars will save you way more money then normal cars. It saves lots more money because you dont have to keep buying cars because no one needs them. The google cars are saving you money becaus they go longer then normal cars, and the longer those cars go the less you have to keep buying a new car. Buying a new car cost a lot of money and some of these cars break down easy. So if you bought a google car you would be saving so much money then having to buy a normal car over and over. In my next paragraph i will be explaining another reason why google cars would be better.\n\nGoogle cars will have an improvement in car sensors. The sensors in this future car are far more smart and less dangerous. Like said in the article, sensors are nothing new, of course. In the 1980's. automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. It also says the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone. These new sensors that are expected to be in this future car will be way smarter than normal cars and are far more safe and new. My last reaoning will come in my next paragraph. Do you think driverless cars are better than normal cars yet?\n\nThese future google cars seem impressive and liked very much. If you dont like the driverless cars better than the normal cars this might change your mind. My last reason is the google cars will provide more flexibility than a bus. Mor flexibility means more room, more space, less crowded. Being in a small car and having little to no room can irritate you and annoy you. I would love being a car where I have lots of leg room and space to put my legs. Being crowded is not fun for anyone. Your body just feels tight and its not the greatest. Being in a car you would think people want to be comfortable and realxed and having all the leg room possible. The future cars will make that dream come true. Do you still think that normal cars are better than driverless cars.\n\nTo wrap this up i will tell you all my reasonings again. Driverless carsare better than normal cars to me. My reasonings for this is because driverless cars save money, they have smarter sensors, and they provide more flexibility. Alll the reasons are reasons why i think the driverless cars will be better. So now that you have through all of this, Do you think driverless cars are better than normal cars?",
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"content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State Building faced build morring mast atach mooring mast frame Empire Building",
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"content": "These days, there is an ever-growing number of product manufacture that brings about environmental problems. In this essay, both causes and feasible solutions will be analyzed.\n\nConsumer goods are attributed to various factors. One main cause of this issue is that the factories would release toxic wastes into the air due to their production materials such as plastic or chemical emissions from the manufacturing process. Thus, the contamination could invade our nature and health visibly. Furthermore, some disposable goods become one of the most indispensable reasons leading to the living habitat threats because they are often made from long-term decomposing materials which have no way to completely deal with. Therefore, when utilized products are dumped into land or ocean, resulting in the deaths of many marine and terrestrial animals.\n\nThere are a number of viable solutions to help tackle this problem. To begin with, governments should encourage the citizen to the 3R action (reduce, reuse and recycle) since it could be in the cable of minimizing the released wastes for the environment. In addition, companies and factories had better not utilize the chemical by-products or chemical emissions in their manufacturing process like bamboo and paper in order to prevent out life from negative impacts. Moreover, actions must be taken as soon as possible by decreasing the use of the unalternative and unreusable materials, instead, we could apply eco-friendlier facilities on our accommodation for the fresh green atmosphere.\n\nIn conclusion, there are main contributors to the problem and several measures are suggested to put an end to the situation.",
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"content": "Technology has changed the way learning establishments are teaching nowadays. A few universities have started online courses in parallel to in-person classrooms. Students have a choice to attend class online, go through the recorded lecture on their own time, or be physically present in the class. This is a positive development. In this essay, we will discuss the reasons for that.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the most significant advantage is that students can learn from any professor teaching in any part of the world just by enrolling in his online course. Learning does not have any physical boundaries. For example, many universities and colleges in Canada have an option for online courses for mostly all subjects, and any student can learn from their own house without travelling to the learning centre. Learning from the expert or preferred professor has never been simplified.\r\n\r\nSecondly, online courses have mostly recorded sessions. Enrolled pupils can go through them at their own convenience, at their own speed. For instance, a student living in India can watch and learn from the lecture the next day in the morning and does not have to wake up at night to be present in the class because of the time difference. Also, students living in Canada can work in the daytime and learn from the online course at night when they have time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we have discussed some positives of having online courses as an alternative to classes being executed on campus. Daytime differences and country boundaries do not hinder the learning experience from the subject matter experts around the world. Also, students can work in day time and study from the lecture on their own time. Hence, the advent of technology in classrooms has made a positive development on the whole learning journey.",
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"content": "Did you know there was such thing as a Driverless Car? People have wanted Driverless cars for so long, and now they have them, Cool right? Well most people would think so, but my opinion is a little different. Yes, there cool but also very dangerous. I am against driverless Cars because they can be very dangerous, there 's not that much of a difference between them and regular cars, and there not 100% smart.\n\nMy first reason for saying they can be dangerous is because there not all the way Driverless. I say thing because as stated in the article, \"None of the cars developed so farare completely driverless.\" It also states that, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" That mean that people must always be alert and ready to take over with necessary. In my opinion, when people hear about a Driverless car, there also here, \"A chance to text while in the driver seat.\"\n\nThere's not that much of a difference because the Driverless car can't drive in ways that a human can. Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? In my opinion people think a driverless car is a car where you don't have to drive so you can play on electronics, but that's not the case. Driverless cars can handle driving funtions at speeds up to 25 mph and in most cases, that's considered driving under the speed limit. So the driver would pretty much always be driving, so why not just buy a regular car?\n\nDriverless cars aren't 100% smart because in paragraph 9 it says, \"Traffic laws are writtend with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times,\" therefore how would a Driverless car know the traffic laws? It also states that, \"Even if the traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Which is very true, because if technology fails and somone is injuredm whose fault is it--the driver or the manufacturer? Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, so if technology fails, or the human isn't alert, one of those people will most likely end up loosing there life.\n\nIn conclusion,I am against driverless Cars because they can be very dangerous, there 's not that much of a difference between them and regular cars, and there not 100% smart. A driver is still needed in the driverless car therefore it's not completely driverless and there's not that much of a difference.\n\nAnd how would a driverless car know the traffic laws, therefore making the driverless car not 100% smart. Wouldn't you get bored waiting for your turn to drive a car that's suppose to be driverless?",
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"content": "There are some individuals who consider that their incomes should remain untouched by the government for taxation. However, if there is no regular influx of money, it means a country is condemned to be underdeveloped. Therefore, I do not support this point of view.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, some advocates deem that all their earnings should be paid to them without any deduction, inasmuch as people do not have trust in local authorities. Undoubtedly, nowadays in an ample number of countries where corruption along with bribery are rampant the federal budget is utilised on/misappropriated for the personal benefit of those in authority. Those monies/taxes obtained from ordinary citizens should be employed on public services. Another reason why people are reluctant to part with their money is the enormous rates of tax in concert with an incomprehensible tax system. These burdensome factors would certainly incline anyone towards tax avoidance and non-compliance. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some states combat this outrageous malaise and do their best to maintain a country in an unspoilt condition. Thus, to provide residents with essential public facilities such as hospitals, educational centres, sports facilities and public transport a government must possess financial resources. Nobody would argue with the fact that every human being is eager to reside in an enabling environment, hence to ensure the facilities listed above each town dweller is obliged to pay their share of taxes for the sake of their own benefit.\r\n\r\nIn summary, it is obvious that under no circumstances must citizens’ taxes be imposed inappropriately. Although keeping all earned income away from the government may enrich a person, it could be to the detriment of the enhancement of their country.",
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"content": "I believe that the author did supprt the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. In the story the author talks about many ways we could overcome the risky challenges that Venus has and what could happen if something does go bad. The author also gives good points on how Venus could be a nearest option for a planetary visit. Also how its often referred to as Earth's \"Twin\", and how Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\n\nThe atuthor talks about how humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus but none of them survived. He also talks about NASA has been working on other approaches to studying Venus, like a silicon carbide has been tested in caber simulating the environment of Venus's surface. It has lasted for three weeks in that type of conditions. If they keep testing and fixing or inproven the project then they maybe one day make a another one that can surive that type of environment and get the researchers the samples they need to learn more about Venus.\n\nThe author does support on how Venus is a worthy to study despite the dangers it comes with. The author talks about the cons about Venus but he also talks about how NASA can overcome themn by making and researching machines that can last long enought to understand the type of environment Venus has.",
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"content": "The mood boy story happy talking whole family could come house meal day Also friends could come While explainng nt ever get meet real grandparents Cuba nt sound happy text happy At end memoir boy said I always grateful parents love sacrifice When said mood went happy thankful everything parents gave life also like main thing cooking skills came parents thankful That boys mood story",
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"content": "Driverless car arent so driverless. The idea of a smart car is not at all an acurate distribution to human neccessities. I believe that the idea of a driverless car has its pros and cons so im not for or against it.\n\nTo begin with in the passage it states the cars have driven half of a million miles , but the car isnt totally driverless . The car still alerts the human when complicated sitution come about. This lets me now that the idea of the car being driverless isnt really acurate.\n\nIf this was supposed to be a political help to society , then I believe that in order for this to work it must first follow a certian method . That method needs to go along with the total background of its name .\n\nIf the car is suppose to be driverless then it shouldnt have to rely on driver to take on hard task such as the massive constructional roads.\n\nTo add to my first example\n\nthe pros I would say of this driverless car is the use of technolgy .\n\nIn this time period the advance of technolgy could lead our society to a greater cause in life. As stated in the passage before 2000 to make something as interesting as a driverless car wasnt even possible.\n\nThe computers, maping of the car and the money for the car wasnt there.\n\nIn the story it said in 2013 the car could handle driving at the speed of 25mp, but the special touch sensor technolgy required the driver to still have to hold the wheel. The car could steer ,accelerate and brake themselves,but the car still required human activity in order to continue through tough traffic.\n\nTo come back to the cons of this invention the main reason im not for or against is because as stated in paragraph nine since the car still required a human driver who fault will it be if an injury or accident occur. Manufactures belive that most states didnt find this car to be safe or reliable.\n\nIf the technolgy fails , but it warns the driver who will take the blame . This car has good feature and is a great idea but im concern more for the people then the car.\n\nIn conclusion im not for or against the car because in the end it was a good idea that hasnt yet been proven to be reliable or safe. Which leads me to the question you must ask your self . Is the car an actually distribution to our society? Or Will it be the reason\n\nwhy our society crashes . When you find your anwser then\n\ni will chose wether im for or against this car",
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"content": "Nowadays, playing computer games is popular among adolescents some people argue that this situation has a detrimental effect on children, whereas others assert that computer games can be beneficial to the development of youth. In my view, some of the games such as puzzles can assist them to enhance their skills.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, technological advancements have revolutionized people’s lives and youngsters have become the most overdependence users ,particularly in playing computer games. Due to the fact that becoming addicted to digital games might cause several mental and physical health issues. To put it another way, when youth spend abundant of their time playing digital games, they lose touch with friends and become isolated. Therefore, this situation can lead to anxiety and depression as well as obesity. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, computer games have an essential role in the growth of youth and teach them valuable skills for their future. Problem-solving can be considered the main element that youth can be learned by playing games. To illustrate more, games teach them how to deal with challenges or learn novel techniques to overcome issues. For instance, brain games can be a great opportunity for them to make decisions rapidly and become faster than normal time. Furthermore, according to research which was released by Cambridge University brain games could improve productivity and multitasking. In my view, games can assist them to boost their soft skills.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, several citizens believe that games have not been a positive impact on youngsters while others argue that computer games have positively affected the cognitive development of children. From my perspective, I am in favour of the latter view.",
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"content": "Patient tolerant understanding Many people patience others I sort middle heres time I patient It bright sunny The sun shining like theres tomorrow To bad I couldnt play outside I busy kicking back eating popcorn watching big event It could give bragging rights I figure I need hope patience brother yelled happy face loser lions winning steelers loosing he added CAPSt get happy theres still plenty time left I replied worried look face I afraid I d loose taking deep brother I patient The clock winding It The score lions lead I still bit worried I never lost hope As game coming end back I steepless made awsorde pass I screamed dancing jumping around I told brother who loser huh wow took patient hope I told Patient mean lot Not I learn brother get little competive wait tolerate whats happening around youll end getting rewarded",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This technology has not actually been proven yet on a human, only on a painting. This could be valuable when doing homework or study time, would not be very valuable in class though because a teacher can tell if a student is bored, and would be helpful if a teacher has something that might entertain the class to keep it interesting.\n\nThis emotianal reading technology would be valuable when students are doing homework or studying for something. It would be able to have the student take a break, or make the subject interesting so the student doesn't lose interest.The text states \" ...If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" This shows that it can help them stay focused on their task by giving them a tiny break so that students aren't bored out of their mind. Some students get bored when studying, or doing homework, and usually take a break that doesn't end. This technology can help students stay focused on the task and not get bored.\n\nThis technology might not be so valuable in a classroom because a teacher can tell if a student is not paying attention, bored or is just asleep. This technology will not be very valuable in a classroom, most students get bored and try to go to sleep during class. If their are students actually working, will the teacher have to change the subject to a more interesting matter for the few who are bored or alseep.The text states \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal... even though individuals often shiw varying degrees of expression.\"This shows that not all students have the same emotianal expressions so they will be different.Will a computer be able to distinguish each and every single student in that class as an emotional expression. This emotional expression reading technology can be exploited to where students can make themesleves bored and the subject will always become exciting or entertaining.\n\nThis emotian reading technology can be used however if a teacher has somepthing planned but wants to use it as like a break. Then students who are getting bored and zoning off would have something to keep them focused after the teacher does what they had planned.The text states \"A slassroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming cinfused or bored..., then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This shows that it would help the students stay focused. This would help the students because it is a sort of break that can be entertaing. Students would like this because it would relax them and cause them to pay more attention, because they are not bored anymore.\n\nThis emotion reading technology could be valuable if a student is doing homework or studying, or if the teacher had soemhting planned but wanted to use it as a break for the class, but would not be very valuable because a teacher can tell when they are losing their students to boredism. This technology can be helpful but at the same time may not be helpful. It can help keep the students focused for hoemwork and studying, but in a class that is typically boring, the teacher won't really need ot be told their emotions because they will already know them from experience. This technology would need to be given to soemone only for an important reason so that students don't take advantage of it.",
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"content": "The author concludes story say going grow season chang She new country failed drivers test She feels hibiscus reminds back home In story mother says Ive seen kind blooming along lake strong enough make winter I think Saeng relate flower make winter tha make new country",
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"content": "The use of the facial action coding system in a classroom is valuable because it can prevent fights in schools. The Facial Action Coding System can also help students understand a lesson better by adapting to what needs to be changed. The article states \"A classroom computer can recognize when a student is confused or bored and modify the lesson accordingly to the student's personal pace and speed.\n\nThere are six basic emotions which are happiness,suprise,anger,fear,disgust, and sadness. The article states\"the facial expressions for each emotion are universal \".\n\nThe facial action coding system works by scanning the movement of your muscles 'in your face to see and understand how a student feels. Another reason this will be a valuable tool in schools is because it could have prevented a school stabbing in Pennsylvania because the Facial Action Coding System could have seen that if the student wasnt happy and was angry the staff could have stepped in and given the kid help before he did anything dangerous to other peers and staff.\n\nin summary,The Facial Action Coding System can be valuable in a classroom setting by seeing if if a student is confused or bored and can modify the lesson accordingly. Another reason is it could have prevented alot of bad things from happening to schools. For example, the school stabbing in Pennsylvania by seeing that the kid was unhappy and angry and therefore, the staff could have stepped in and got him help before anyone was even hurt. The Facial Action Coding System is a very helpful tool.",
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