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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concluded story Winter paragraph order imply Saeng give By allowing audience know Saeng sad failing test take test infers Saeng determined person It belief concluding paragraph added convey feeling Saeng determined despite hardships", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am going to be talking about how the use of technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Have you ever wondered how technolgy can sense how you are feeling? Well I am going to be explaining if I am for or against the value of using technology to read students' emotional expressions.\n\nIn the text the author says, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that, too.\" Technology could also be very helpful for learning. The author says, \"A classroom computer could recognizd when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. He also says, \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This technology could help sense if someone is in danger but they do not want to say that they are. In paragraph 5 in the text the author says, \"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. I do agree that technology would be valuable to read students emotional expressions.\n\nSome students do not like explaining or expressing their feelings because maybe of what other kids might think of them or just because in general they may not know how too. In paragraph 4 the author states, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly).\n\nI am for using techonology to read students emotional expressions. The technology could detect your emotions and help others also to know how you are feeling just incase of an emergency. The technology would be able to sense if you are in danger by your emotions. The technology would also help those students that are not opened up about their emotions and explaining or expressing their emotions.\n\nIn conclusion, I am for the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. The technology is valuable because it can help students open up about their emotions rather than keeping all of their emotions inside and making their emotions worse by keeping them to themselves. Most students like talking and expressing their emotions so they will not have to deal with all of their emotions and that way they are relieved of stress about their emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have both their prositives and negatives. The idea that cars will be use half of the fuel today is good thing for air pollution and that they will offer more flexibility than a bus is also. Some negatives would include that they will invade your privacy and that traffic laws might not advance as the car industry does.\n\nCars will use \"half the fuel of today's taxis\". This would be a positive because then there will be less air pollution. A person that is part of the fuel industry might bring up the fact that with that the fuel economy will start to decrease. There will not be much profit and that will not be good for them. Driverless cars will \"offer more flexibility than a bus\". This would be good for people that need to get to work fastser or get somewhere else faster. Buses have to make stops as they go whereas this car would not. Sergey Brin \"beleives such cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nThese driverless cars could potentially use \"cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" This idea would leave drivers with very less privacy in these cars. You will not know when you are being watched. One other big negative part of driverless cars is that they traffic laws might not advance along with the cars. In order for all of this to work out you would need for everyone to work along.\n\nDriverless cars may be the future that people will have to adapt to. Many people play a vital role in this because many things will have to change. I think that they should not be the future because I do not like the idea that they will invade privacy. You will not know who is watching you at any given time. You will not know if you are even being watched. This can make drivers feel as if they are not being trusted. Some people may disagree with that because after all it does have many postive aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what it would be like if the world had cars that drove on their own? This would be a bad thing, and could potentially cause more accidents. The three main reasons this is a bad idea are; the cost is extrememly high, people may not pay attention, and the cars can't completely drive on their own.\n\nThe first problem with smart cars, is that the cost for the equipment and technology is too expensive. According to the article, the track for General Motor's concept car required massive upgrades to the roads that exist today, and the price was just too expensive to be practical. Google's modified Toyota Prius has, and uses, a rotating sensor on the roof, position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a GPS receiver, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, an internal motion sensor, and four automotive radar sensors. Just imagine the money it would take to put all of that into each car that is made by google. The people just simply can afford it. Just the spinning sensor on the roof uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. It is the most important thing on the car, and probably the most expensive.\n\nThe next problem with these experimental cars would be that the human inside the car may not be paying attention. The cars are designed with entertainment and information systems on the inside of the car, for the driver to use while waiting for their turn to drive. They do have a button to turn them off instantly when the driver needs to take over, but what if the driver continues to use them while drving.These may very well distract the driver, and could lead to an accident. The car has warnings , but what if the driver thinks that the car can handle driving on its own, even with the warnings? The driver may think that he or she is safe because they are in a smart, driverless car. Even with all of the enertainment systems, the driver will have nothing to keep them alert and awake in the long stretches of time that the car will be driving on its own. The driver may very well fall asleep.\n\nThe last and final problem with these smart cars are the fact that they are not completely driverless. The driver still needs to be at the wheel when the car is in motion. The cars can not control themselves at speeds over 25mph. This means that on most roads, the car would not be able to drive itself. The cars cannot back out of driveways or work their way through work zones, and accidents, so the driver would still have to be ready to take the wheel in times of need.\n\nIn conclusion, the idea of a smart, driverless car is very dangerous. The production of thses cars may lead to over expensive and too high prices, distractions/ falling asleep while in the car, and possible accidents because the car cannot drive through certain obtructions on its own. The cars could be very dangerous to society, and may cause many more accidents than are currently happening in today's world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving The mood memoir loving Narciso s home reminds old country The author talks grand parents able come Narciso s house turned home reminded Cuba", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an undeniable fact that the education of children is of paramount importance in this age of fierce competition. However, some people are of the opinion that more money should be spent on educating adults who cannot read and write. I partly agree with this statement. I will explain my ideas in this essay. \n\nTo inaugurate with, the progress of the country depends on the level of education of children. If there are more children in the country to get an education, then there will be more engineers, teachers, doctors and scientists. All these specialists will help boost the country's economy. So, we must ensure that more children are educated to secure the future of the nation. \n\nHowever, the adults who cannot read and write make up a significant portion of our population. If the money is not spent on their education, they will not be able to make a living in this competitive world. As a result, many of them will eventually turn to crime, leading to an increase in crime rates. Therefore, it is imperative that we take urgent action and invest in the education of these adults so that they can find decent jobs for themselves. In the end, they will be able to support the progress of the nation, and not become a burden. \n\nIn conclusion, I believe that an equal amount of funds/ money should be spent on the education of children and illiterate adults, because the contribution of everyone is necessary for the overall development of the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challange of Exploring Venus\" is how the mayority of astronomers call the investigation of the planet Venus. Not a single spaceship has touch the surface of that planet, even if Venus is one of our neighbors is almost impossible for us to get there. So, why would we care about this matter?\n\nIn this article, the author tries to give us a bright side about this proyect, and why we should keep continuing with this investigation. However, the author gave a really complex and long explanation, making the whole article boring, the author also did not talk a lot about the positive side of the challenge of exploring Venus. Even if we had a great chance of settling a colony in Venus, we would not have enough materials to evolve it, and our technology is not that advance.\n\nIgnoring the bad side of the of this article, the challenge is pretty great, and if we think in the many other natural resources we could get from this planet it sounds like a marvelous deal. Also, we can imagine finding life on Venus it makes the proyect impressive.\n\nIn the end, I found the topic pretty intresting, and even something I will like to study in a future. However, the article did not show how wonderful the the investigation it is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Politicians and the public have argued for years over one burning question: Should the Electoral College be discontinued? I believe the Electoral College should not be used in the United States anymore. To understand the faults within this system, one must understand the system at its basic level. The Electoral College is a system that consists of 538 electors. Each state has a different amount of electors, granted on the size of that state's population. When the election is held, the voter votes for the electors, not the candidate directly.\n\nThe first fault one can find while examining this system is the \"winner takes all\" policy that most states have. In paragraph seven of the first souce, the article states, \"Most states have a \"winner-takes-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidental candidate.\" This system seems unfair, especially in states where the vote for electors is won by a small margin. The votes cast for the candidate who lot the electoral votes in their state are not counted in choosing the president, which hinders the ideals of democracy in this country. In paragraph nine of the second source, the article reads,\" according to a Gallup poll in 200, taken shortly after Al Gore, thanks to the quirks of the Electoral College, won the popular vote but lost the presidency.\" This crisis in 2000, when George W. Bush won the electoral college, but Al Gore won the popular vote, displays the lack of clarity with this system. This election was a prime example that the president is not chosen by the popular voice, but rather by the Electoral College, which does not accurately represent everyone.\n\nThe second fault with Electoral College stems from the first issue: people are not voting beacuse they feel as if their voice is not being heard. Stated as a counterargument in paragraph 23 of source three, the article states, \"It can be argued that the Electoral College method...may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for carrying their state - Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California.\" People are choosing not to vote because they feel as if their voice is being shadowed by the major polictical thinking in their state, and this mindset corrupts the institution of democracy in the United States.\n\nAn argument made by those in favor of the Electoral College can found in paragraph 20 of source three, \"Voters in toss up states are more likely to pay attention to the campaign...They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average and the most thoughtful voters shoule be the ones to decide the election.\" This argument is opinionated and has no substantial evidence behind it. According to source 2 in paragraph 13, \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all.\" This was due to the candidates spending their time, money, and efforts to win over \"swing states\", the states that could go either Republican or Democrat depending on the candidates that year.\n\nThe Electoral College is a system that should not be used anymore because it does not properly consider the opinions of all voters, turns away voters who believe they will not have their voices heard, and leave states without seeing ads or candidates during the election because these candidates are trying to win over other states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the 1900's cars have been an integral part of our lives. It seems everyone has one nowadays. But this overuse of cars is starting to have a negative effect on our enviroment and is causing mass traffic jams that put cities on halt. We as a society must start limiting our car usage to help save our enviroment and to stop traffic jams that do not let the city run smoothly.\n\nCars were and still are one of the best inventions man has ever made, so it is understandable why people would have such a hard time letting go of something that is so useful. But one must understand that although the car is useful it is also hurting other things, whether it be inadvertant or not. Cars have always been bad on the enviroment, now so more then ever. According to\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars passenger cars are responsible for 12 % of greeenhouse emissions and up to 50% in some car intensive areas in the United States. This shows that we as a society are one the of the main reasons why are enviroment is crumbling around us. These greenhouse emissions and mass pollution by cars are hurting the enviroment whether we want it to or not. Everybody must take a look at these numbers and see the negative effect they are having on the enviroment and realize that by simply not using a car they can help save the enviroment. Another example of the bad effects cars have on the enviroment can be found in the article\n\nParis bans driving due to smog.\n\nIn the article it talks about how Paris had to enforce a driving ban due to the amount of pollution in the air from cars. The fact that a driving ban had to be implemented to stop pollution is absolutley ridiculous. This alone should show people that refuse to see the negative effects they are having on the enviroment around them that car usage should and must be cut down. By simply cutting down our usage of cars we as people can help save the enviroment. Who would not want to be a part of that?\n\nCars have always been viewed at as the best mode of transportation. Everyone believes that their car can always get them to the place they need the fastest. But what most people do not think about is the mass traffic jams in cities that the usage of cars can cause. If people simply cut down there car usage and try out other forms of transportation it actually could get them to the destination they want the quickest. An example of this can be found in the article\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota.\n\nIn the article it says when they banned cars for the day the huge traffic jams in the city suddenly went away. This allowed people on bikes and buses to actually get around quicker than they usually could with their cars. So by not using cars people actually got around to the places they needed to be due to the lack of traffic jams in the city.\n\nThe amount of cars driven on the road per day has risen to an astronomical number over the years. Although cars may be efficient they also have many harmful effects. Two of the worst are the effect they have on the enviroment and the mass traffic jams they cause. We as a society must recognize that by cutting down our usage of cars we can actually have a positive effect on our enviroment while also allowing ourselves the ability to bring traffic jams to a minimum.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advantages of limiting car usage\n\nThis exert is about the enhancing effects of not using cars. The \"smart planning\" movement is one in which people have abandoned the idea of using auto-mobiles. the movement probably began because the town of Vauban charged forty-thousand for a parking spot. this and a few other key points cause these people to walk, but also the point of the movement expanding has became another topic to asses.\n\nThe movement began in the small town of Vauban. this happened because of the outrageous prices for parking. Although that is a huge factor, there many other topics of the early movement. as a result of the parking situation seventy percent of Vauban's population do not own a car, and fifty-seven precent of the popullation sold there car to move there. \"When I had a car I had a car I was tense. I'm much happier this way.\"(paragraph 3 lines 4 & 5) The people in this town enjoyed the idea and started this movement.\n\nlets talk about sex baby lets talk about you and me lets talk about all the good things all the bad things that may be lets talk about sex a little bit alitlle bit baby all through the night ill make love to you like you me to i guess its the woman in you that brings out the man in me i know i cant help my self ohhh it feels like first time it feels like the very first time like virgin touched for the very first time oh nanana come on come on ilike it like it come on come on, oh i may be bad but im perfectly good at itthe taste in the air blah blah blah blah blah sticks and stones may break my bones but chains and whips excite me\n\nI found your hairband on my bedroom floor the only evidence that you've been here before and i dont get waves of missing you anymore its more like tsunami tides in my eyes never getting dry so i stay high drink on days sleep on the nights i dont drink like everybody i do a few things different about myself stuuble and fall with a headspin im null my minds on you but my hearts just num so am i close to you right now if its over and if theres no cance we'll work it oooouuuuuut oohhwhoa you and I\n\nIt ended over you and i and i said thats fine but your the only one who knows I lie im under pressure 7 billion people in this world trying to fit in keep it together smile on youre face even though your heart is frowning but hey now its no good we both know its a cruel world but i will take my chanceees as long as you love me we could be starving we could be homeless we could be broke as long as you love me ill be your platinum ill be your silver ill be youre gold as long as you love me i figured it out i figured it out from black and white seconds and hours seconds and hours it takes time to see it right, i know how it goes i know how it goes from up and down man the mirror he sees things in a different light like us do they ever like us ohhhhhhh you and I!\n\nwe dont want to be like them we could make it till the end nothing can come between you and i", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My newest botfriend dateing well almost months year We lot fun together talk anything dont rreally ride bikes go jogging started work togther My parents love call son law think kinda cute anyways blast new years eve hanging one joes friends name randy normal thing hanging bbqs everything It around like ready go bed well randy idea going stay night nither did Randy owns hotel place grayback extra beds house asked randy could use hotel room said yeah coures The day pay little bit money yet went hotel room Me looking big hot tube bath bed king size bed jumped best So pair shorts bathing suit inside hot tube blast well trying get hot tube slipped caught iam glad fall face thing kinda funny really time Me really hungry bag chips cheese dip eating chip making funny noise like star wars person chubaka best time ever watch sadalight tv dont house watch dvds maybe vhs s anyways brought us We room playing game called metal honor kinda like war game lots gun kinda tv think loud guess nehbordid After mintues heard knock door nehbor asking everything ok cause heard loud noises gun shots coming room said yeah course everything ok game playstation sorry bother sir think loud So turn tv played game like hours time went bed lik moring tired day go school day We took shower whent back randy s house sat breakfast I think bicuts gravy best I lot fun After breakfast went home ate house like around decited going take little nap winded sleeping untill day I could fall asleep sp stayed playing video game like hours get go school went inside dads house took shower ready school went house dressed school clothes brushed hair brushed teeth stuff together relaxed around went bus stop waited bus reilized one went back house laughing I asked laughing said know today nt school like crazy thought said best new years life hope another one like maybe still together birthday might something fun hopefully But think treated well appreciate He also one best friends ever hopefully betogether long time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One problem strengthen rest building order put mast top This process would costly author says sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Another problem attempt allowing dirigibles dock winds top building The air currents violent high Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast therefore would safe people streets city Finally laws city interfered plan mooring mast The law said illegal airship fly low urban areas If dirigible able dock mooring mast would breaking law The builders Empire State Building faced many problems plan never actually followed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who wouldn't like to be a Seagoing Cowboy? You get to see other country's you've never seen before! You also get to take care of animals but at the same time you can see the huge ocean. Also people from the war binifit from it too. So why wouldn't you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy?\n\nIf you become a Seagoing cowboy you would see other countrys that you've never seen before. In these countrys there would be beautyful temples and citys with no streats but water ways to get around. There would also be delishous gormay foods. Beautyful pantings from thousands of years ago.\n\nYou could then take care of animals and also get to see the vast ocean's at the same time. Then you could feel like a real cowboy. But when your done taking care of the animals you can sit down and look at the astonishing night sky and the huge blue ocean. Playing with The animals would be so fun. There would be tasty cows beautyful horses, and stubern mules.\n\nAlso when your a Seagoing Cowboy other people would be binifit too! The common towns people, and the solders from the war. You would bring them cows for food, horses to ride, and mules to pull carts of goods. That would prevent people from starving. It would also help move reckage from the war.\n\nSo far you've seen how amazing it would be to be a Seagoing Cowboy. You could get to see country's from thousands of miles away. You could get to take care of animals but still get to relax.\n\nAlso you could help people from the war and solders. So why wouldn't you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A world of less pollution, less costly wages, reduced congestion on the roads, healthier ways to venture around, and less stress and danger. That would be a world with limiting car usage. May not seem like a rational idea but when you see all the good that could come out of the reduction of cars on the streets it could change your way of thinking.\n\nA city in Germany by the name of Vauban, 70 percent of their families do not desire to have cars. Over half of the percentage of people had sold their cars just to move here. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". Those were the words of a women by the name of Heidrun Walter who is a mother of two and is also a media trainer she finds bicycles and sound of children running about is a much more tolerant tone then the sound of a motor rolling by. The enviromentalists from the Enviromental Protection Agency favors the idea of car reduction. They stand for cars being limited would reduce pollution and be more friendly the mother earth. From the reduction of cars on the roads the congestion percent soared down a plump number of 60 percent. That's truely a magnificent amount.\n\nI strongly believe that limitng the car usage would reduce death rates, reduce smog, put people in less tense moods keeping them more happy, and lastly reduce moeny going to greenhouse gas wages. More places worldwide should limit relying so much on cars, to allow us to function in daily life without them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the second planet from the sun, has long been known as a desolate, barren, and hostile environment. Venus is devoid of any potential to support humans for the next several million years. Long story short, both manned and unmanned missions to Venus are expensive, time consuming, and provide no meaningful information that can't already be determined from earth, or a low-orbit probe.\n\nThe author presents the feat of missions to Venus as a \"challenge\", and rightfully so.\n\nParagraph 3 provides plenty of reasons to keep away from the second planet. The surface of this inhospitable rock is plagued with crushing atmospheric pressure, temperatures of more than 800 degrees, and highly corrosive clouds of sulfuric acid vapor.\n\n\"The challenge\" isn't much of a reason to toss away millions of dollars of research, no matter how large of a rush it gives humanity. The author also mentioned the value of scientific research conducted on our neighbor planet. Except, in paragraph 6, they outright state, \"peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely above the ground can provide only limited insight on ground conditions\".\n\nFinally, an analysis of paragraph 7 doesn't give us any information that we weren't already aware of. Except, an interesting point was made. Using older, mechanical devices to take the place of electronic ones could negate the issues imposed by fragile silicon chips. Mechanical macines still need power, provided by batteries or solar panels, which are controlled by computers. A mechanical computer has just as many, if not more potential issues than an electronic one.\n\nThis article is fun to read, and is an excellent source of information about the planet Venus, but the author struggles to find valid reasons to go there. This article is a fluff piece, a feel-good piece of writing. If I were to create a similar writing, I would include more appeals to logic. \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" would have been far more appealing to me had it included more actual reasons to venture to a mysterious planet. \"For Science!\" just isn't sufficient in this particular case.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, some people think that art is not a necessary field for students however others thinks it very essential to have it. In this ,essay we will discuss both the sides of having art subject for children and also my opinion.\r\n\r\nArt is a prosperous way to describe our feelings. A report says that 80 per cent of people when drawing some piece of art, so they are trying to show their inner feeling whether it be happiness or sorrow. For example, A friend of mine was interested in drawing paintings and I used to ask him the reason to draw painting. Therefore, one day he told me that he try to narrate his inner pain by drawing and painting.\r\n\r\nHowever, this is also true that with the advent of technology people have started focusing more on the development of new technologies. Parents find subjects like arts useless because they know that technology is flourishing and so they also know that their kids can have a good future if they focused more on technology rather than the arts. To illustrate, when I was doing my bachelor of technology the total number of seats available was only 120 in every field. So, in information technology and computer science there was not a single seat of admission left whereas the other branch was approx half vacant. Parents usually say if they studied art subject they will not be able to concentrate on technological subjects.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, I think it is very much necessary to have art subject as it makes child body and mind relax. To conclude I would say students feel energetic by doing painting while after looking at today scenario it is also necessary to have these subject classes once a week as gaining knowledge in the technology field is foremost.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One aparent problems urban area lot pedestrians walking street They didnt want dirigibles flying close knowing wha s gunna happen Another thing German dirigible destroyed fire They think worse could mooring mast possibly killing people completely destroying building Also much construction money would take Empire State Building hold dirible There many problems nt think process s mooring mast nt successful planned", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think the use of this technology would be very ethical, when you think about the things that most people would use it for, because of ads. America runs on brands, everywhere you look, brand, brand, brand. I could be sitting at home in my Ikea couch, playing on my Microsoft Xbox, while listing to music on my Alienware pc, with Spotify. People could use this technology to shovel ads into your face, and they will. I do have another thought on this though, it could be used to help people in need, people such as abuse victims. A lot of people try to hide deppresion, and this technology could be used to make the growing suicide rate in America plummet like a bag full of cylinder blocks, in the ocean. Surely this tech is flawed in many ways as it is made by humans, and we are not perfect by any means, I mean you can't always tell how someone is feeling based only on their face. This technology, can be frustrating, as well as life saving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author s tone memoir appreciation displayed three important places First Narciso Rodriguez author creates mood appreciation talking parents lef cuba He explains came selflessly many imigrants give children better life NUM This description shows mood appreciation shows author s parents left selflessly give children better life implies parents wanted come knew would best place came anyway clearly creates mood appreciation Narciso s tone Additionally mood appreciation created Rodriguez declares I always greatful parents love sacrifice NUM This informs reader outright rodriguez greatful parents creates mood appreciation tone Finally mood appreciation created Narciso states I never forget parents turned simple house home NUM This statement insinuates appreciation Rodriguez informing reader never forget parents done carries message changed life creating mood appreciation tone In conclusion Narciso Rodriguez creates mood appreciation tone memoir parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is improving more and more as time goes by, each year that goes by the technology we use gets smarter and smarter. Soon we may be in a world where everything consist of technology and requires technology. The future will be nothing like now or the past and the future generations will be born in futuristic society.\n\nThis text talks about driverless cars becoming a thing that'll soon change the ways of drving and how driving is. If there starts being cars that can drive without someone driving, maybe that'll prevent less car accidents and cassualties. Perhaps if there is cars that can drive by themselves when a person goes on a roadtrip they wouldn't have to worry about stopping to sleep and it would make getting from point A to point B a lot faster. Driverless cars seems like a brilliant ideal but there could many flaws about it.\n\nI am for driverless cars because I believe that'll beneifit a alot of people. People who have disablities or are disabled from the waist down could actually be able to drive. Driverless cars could also help teens with driving and prevent teen car crashes from happening. Less drunk driving accidents would happen if there were driverless cars because if the cars drove by themselves that means a drunk person wouldn't be in control and there would be less deaths. driverless cars has its benifits but it also has its flaws.\n\nThe flaws of having driverless cars are that if something bad happened as said in the text who would be in the wrong for the accident, the driver or the manufactuerer? If something bad was to happen with the car, would the person be able to sue the manufacturer or would it be all on the person in the vehicle? If the weather got bad and the driverless cars wasn't progammed to be ready for the situation that could havoc. The manufacturer of the car would have to ensure that the car is smart enough and capable enough of driving through harsh weather conditions. Also how many people would actually have the money for a driverless car, assuming that it'll be expenisve.\n\nIn conclusion I do believe if maufacturers put in a lot of work and effort into driverless cars it'll be a success without a doubt. Driverless cars is a brilliant ideal and would actually benefit people. Driverless cars would be one of the first steps into a technology based world and society. The future will be here before we know it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is very important because, it can save a lot of money. Some places doesn't allow cars because of the space that they have. Such as in Vauban Germany, some people even give up their car. Vauban's streets are completely car free. 70 percent of Vauban's familiies do not own a car, and 57 percent old a car to mov there. In order to stay in that community they could not have a car therefore they had to sell it. Some are even happy without their cars. Having a car can have a lot of stress on some people. Every week you have to worry about gas. Gas now is a lot of money that you hae to spend. Think about it if you didn't have to buy gas every week or every other week you would have a lot of money saved up. The gas you put in your tank could of went to more grocery in the house. Something that is important such as a \"want\".\n\nSince World War II people have been depending on a car to get around and that need to change as in today. In the United State the Enbironmental Protection Agency has beem proting\n\n\"\n\nCar Reduced\n\n\"\n\nand if they do not then they will play a much lager role in a new six-year federl transportation bill to be approved very soon.\n\nLimiting the cars will even be better on the road as well. The congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after just five days of intensifying smog. The gas that the cars release is very dangerious as well, diesel fuel was even blamed since France has a tax policy that favors diesel ober gasoline.\n\nIn Colombian people as in the city participate in a car-free day every year whichthis is the Thrid year and the city has made a lot of money by doing that. The turn out always be large, despite gray clouds. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from participating yet\". It's also a great way to take away stess from people and lower the air pollution. The day without cars had began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. people started using bicycles or walking.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I patient difficult task without hep Not one comeint It hard I one hour finish I needed three hours finish It hard even collage student could finish I t hardest match test I ever done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with the project for these cars, I would love to live in a future where i could call a car from anywhere and it would come ready to take me to my destination. Imagine the time people would be saving if the place they are supposed to be would automaticaly be known to the car and it could just take you. Of course everyone would have to test it out and make sure its safe enough but after that part the cars will be a huge breakthrough in our technology.\n\nI feel if they are going to make these types of cars they should take all the time they need to make sure its working right so no accidents happen. if we all had cars that moved for us and knew the surroundings then there would be less car crashes and accidents.\n\nIf these cars were made then we could solve most of the problem of car crashes, they could even go as far as to make a solar powerd back up so if the car ever runs out of fuel it could switch to the suns energy. in conclusion these cars are a step towards a better future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is studying Venus worth the dangers that it presents? The temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The metals liquifying from being on the surface. The atmospheic pressures 90 times greaters that are Earths, that can crush a submraine. Exploring Venus will allow us to learn about things that we have never seen before and to many new things.\n\nVenus may have once been like Earth. This would have been long time ago. The author says, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varioius forms of life, just like Earth.\" The author also says, \"... has surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Exploring Venus to find out wether or not it was once like Earth and knowing if they was other life forms on another planet seems worth the risk.\n\nAnother reason to make the dangerous trip is that Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary vist, given the time frame of space travel. The author says, \" The value of returning to Venus seem indisputable...\" This detail from the article means that we have so much to gain from going to Venus and learning about the planet.\n\nNASA has one compelling idea for sending humans. The articles says,\" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" The article then says,\"... a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above roiling Venusain landscape.\" This is a great way of getting away from the dangers of unfriendly ground condition and storms. The scientist in the blimp-like vehicle would have to sit in around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would close to sea level on Earth. they would also have plenty of solar power and wouldn't be affected by radiation.\n\nExploring Venus will allow us to learn about things that we have never seen before and to many new things. The dangerous that we face getting the Venus are out weighed by the good things to come from exploring Venus. The real question is when are going to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the auhor explains that a new peice of technology can calculate a humans emotions called the \" Facial Action Coding\".But is it really worth the students time to use technology just to learn about theirs or other feelings?. its just a waste of time. The technology can only do one thing as the article shows and its just to show what one's emotion are.\n\nIn the article paragraph 5 it states that \" in fact, we humans preform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\". This cleary shows just by looking at a friends face you can tell if they are okay or not, so we dont need a device to do it for us. in paragraph 6 it states \" For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a smilar as appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.But if you frown, the next ad will be diffrent\". This shows that just a facial expression can chnage a ad , but is it really that helpful?, not many people watch ads as it is, they skip them. in paragraph 6 it also states \" most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". this shows that human communication is nonverbal for a good part but why does emotional communication need to be useful? what would we do with the results we got when we test the emotion device? text a friend and show what youre feeling for a quick second?. students will maybe use it at first , but will get tired of it because it just shows emotions and nothing else.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it states \" your home PC cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode mona lisa's smile\". this states your home computer cant show the emotons. So by that means you will need a certain device and that will be expensive. Why would a school spend lots and lots of money just for a dveice that shows emotions thta nobody will enventually use. Also is paragraph 7 it states \" these are the instructions for a face that looks happy.... they even indicate the diffrence betweena genuine smile and a forced one\". this shows the indication of a forced smile and a real one , but which people can tell if thier friends have a real or fake smile.\n\nIn conclusion we do not need a device to tell us our emotions. we can tell out emiotions and our freinds can too. This device is a waste of time and money for students. The students will use it a couple of times and wont use it because its programmed only to do one thing and thats to show our emotions. This device is not valuable for students just to show emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist affected heat hills lack people For example cyclist growing short water wide rings dried sweat shirt could drop heatstroke The hills must forced use energy lasely land people If towns still people cyclist wouldnt affected setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density\n\nand size, and also closest distance. In the article, \"Earth, Venus, and mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes weare closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration forcing for sending humans to stody Venus. The NASA says, they possible solution to the hostile coditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\n\nThe challenging to study Venus is that in the article, \"since no spacecraft survived the landinf for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"\n\nAlso, the challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperature average of on the planet's suface is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit including the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater than our own planet.\n\nAccording to the article, \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of anyplanet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" They also discussing to visits to ots surface because Astronomers are fascinated by the Venus. So, It may have been the mostly like Earth planet in our solar system. In the article, \"the long ago, Venus was probly covered largely with oceans and could have supported variuos forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus still have some feathure just like Earth.\n\nIn conlusion, It's challenging to study Venus but It's helpful of imagination and innovation. Also, human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors according to the article. It gave us a lot of experince and gain knowledgeable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now that news is instantly available on the Internet and social media, gone are those days when we used to sit with the newspaper, starting the day in the morning. Also, owing to the advent of mobile applications like WeChat and Line, the heartfelt letters that we used to write to our near and dear ones have become extinct. Though there are both advantages and disadvantages to this development, I believe it is more beneficial than harmful. \r\n\r\nThe first and straightforward advantage is the reduced use of printed materials. Consequently, fewer trees are cut down for paper making, imposing less pressure on the environment. Secondly, the internet makes news available to the public sooner than any conventional print media. Thirdly, social media has become the most effective means of communication. People from all over the world can come together over WeChat or Zoom without having to spend much money. It used to be very difficult for us in foreign countries or even in other cities to attend familial gatherings and ceremonies. Nowadays, thanks to technology, we could stay connected no matter how far we are from each other. \r\n\r\nHowever, when there are merits, disadvantages are also bound to be there. One major demerit is that electric gadgets are so addictive that human beings no longer know how to live without their smartphones. The young generation does not talk in person as long as they chat online. Even during social gatherings, it is not uncommon to see people glued to their mobile phones without showing any interest in the person sitting next to them. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although there are both pros and cons in using the , in my opinion, it has brought us more benefits than harm and hence the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system can humans could survive in its atmosphere and high temperatures? Scientists and Astronmers are fascinated by venus and they have a idea sending humans there to study venus. NASA wants to get better views of venus rocky and earth like surface. It's to dangeles to send humans to venus because its overall tempreature is over 800 degrees Fahreheit.\n\nIf NASA sends humans to venus they have to worry about the hot surface, Atmosphere and the acid rain. Even if the make a blimp-like vehicle that hovers above venus surface that is around 170 degrees Fahrennheit and the air pressure would be close to that sea level on earth. They will still have to be worry about the blimp-like vehicle because the metal that it's made of will probelry, start to get liqufy but if its some type of metal that can take 800 degrees we could problery have a chance of studying venus but not live on it. The ship will have to stay a distance away from venus because the planet can provide only limited insight on\n\nground conditions becuase most form of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of the photograaphy and videography ineffective. NASA has been working on a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. There other projects are looking back to old technology called mechanical computers. If NASA does end up making a new type of metal that has resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces theres a chance we could study venus even more.\n\nIf NASA does end up sending humans to venus with a blimp-like vehicle that has a type of metal that has resistant to hot tempreature and also can hover the suface of venus mankind has a chance of studying venus and to live on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Possibility of Exploration on Venus\n\nIn the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author explains the research done about Venus, and possible exploration to this neighboring planet of ours. Throughout the entirety of this article, the author gives thorough reasoning in explaining why the risks are worth this exploration to Venus.\n\nVenus is one of our neighboring planets along with Mars. Venus is closer to the sun. We have had the chance to send many spacecrafts to some parts of our solar system; the moon, mars, in Earth's atmosphere. We have attempted to send some in the direction of Venus. But because of the extreme weather on the planet, no spacecraft has lasted more than a few hours on the planet. This planet has harsher storms, burning heat, and lightning has struck the space craft some times now, it seems like the planet just does't want to be explored.\n\nVenus's climate is very harsh compared to the climate here on Earth. With the planet's surface tempurature at an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater. It could crush a submarine, even one that could sustain the pressure of going all the way to the bottom of the ocean. If the sub was strong enough to sustain the pressure, it would still most likely be melted by the heat. Besides the climate and pressure, there is also the thick atmosphere containing almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. Plus the clouds of highly currosive sulfuric acid.\n\nAstronomers are really pushing this exploration because it is believed that Venus was once an Earth, filled with large oceans and has sustained life. It seems there have been signs of rocky sediments in the surface, along with valleys, mountain ranges, and craters. This is quite a motivation for astronomers to find out if there was once a planet out there, just like us, that once sustained life, and could still be a possibility of life remaining.\n\nNot only are astronomers striving to gain more knowledge, but also to because this could be the next step into further exploration out there. \"Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth should not be limited by danegrs and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagingation and innovation.\" The author explicitely gives reason as to why this exploration is so important, not just for knowledge, but for the possibility to learn from this and move forward with research. We could gain new technology, make more discoveries, and even find a planet out there where our life could be sustained.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock building lack area populated area hydrogen highly flammable Also known today blimps dirigibles actually enormous steel framed balloons envelopes cotton fabric filled hydrogen helium make lighter air Hydrogen dangerous s flammable Empire State Building located populated area s dangerous risk Also German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey proved owners Empire State Building s dangerous looks Other reason dirigibles could nt moor top building existing law agains airships flying low populated areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be great and all, but we all have to think on the smarter side. Almost all the time, machines that human beings make can potentially make a mistake. What if that mistake is fatal to the consumer who buy their product?\n\nIn my opinion, I think that driverless cars could be a great danger if one model of a certain car makes a vital mistake and causes a fatal accident. This means that everyone who bought that model of a company would potentially have the same problem. Even in the article, the safety of drivers is best achieved with alert drivers. This can be found on paragraph 9. Even in the article, it says that the google car has a lot of important parts like the dubbed LIDAR, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. All these important parts of a smart car can just make one mistake and cause the driver to get seriously injured or cause the driver to even die. Plus the article never stated what alert would pop up if any of the smart cars parts would ever fail. This probably indicates that the car brands could potentially be hiding safety regulations to their consumers.\n\nIn conclusion, every machine or creation made by a human being or even another machine will not be perfect. Therefore, this indicates that there can also be potential problems soon or even early to come. Are driverless cars really that safe?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered if your just seeing things or if something is actually there? I know I have done that plenty of times myself! I would like to sit and talk with someone on this topic so I can tell my explanation of it, I also would like to talk about their side of it, and I want to explain if they agree or disagree with me and explain why or why not?\n\nFirst, I will be sitting down talking with a fellow friend who beleives alien life has made this landform. I think that it is unexplainabe for someone to think that this could be made by an alien. My side of the explanation would have to be that it is not a man made object. It is on one of our solar systems planets and with this type of atmosphere it couldn't have possibly been made by humans. As said in the passage \" the shadows have appeared to make a face.\" If NASA hasn't sent people to Mars before, then how could it possibly be a face.\n\nNow, my visitor here today with me has began to explain there thoughts on it. I disagree with the reasoning they have given. My visitors side of the story was that they for sure believe an alien figure made this shape. They believe that it had to have been alien life due to how long ago it was. This picture was taken only 25 years ago and no one could have known how long it has been there before its discovery. My opinion on their beliefs are strongly leaning towards the fact they are very wrong on the explantion for the face.\n\nAfter our conversation on the topic has ended I think that I have still failed to convince my visitor that it was just a landform. They are so stuck on how realistic it appears to be of a human face. I still stongly disagree with them and I do beleive it have just been shaped naturally by the planet. We have still yet to discover how to properly make it to Mars and back safely. I just don't understand how they believe something could last out there on the planet. I also think that if there was one face of a creature, shouldn't there be more than one. Something had to produce that alien and there would be a greater chance of there being more than one.\n\nIn conclusion my visitor kept the dame mind set and there was no change in there belief. My thoughts remain the same, what they have towards it remians the same, and they still fo not agree with my reasoning and explanation. So, yes I still think that it was nature made and a landform. It would be a huge break through in the scince world if we officially knew dwhat kind of face it was and how it got to that state of matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do you believe the face was created by aliens? When looking at this image, you can think about that at first but if you believe it immediately, then there is something wrong about that. I will explain to you why the face was not created by aliens though i will also explain why someone may believe that.\n\nThe face is an image we found in 2001 that was taken by our Viking 1 spacecraft that was circling the Mars. The face is an area of land on Mars that has the illusion of a face. The illusion of the face comes from the shadows making the land look like it has a nose, eyes, and a mouth that resembles a human face. It was a surprise for most people here at NASA but we didn't believe it was alien works immediately because we didn't have any real evidence of it. It just so happened to be a patch of land that looked like a face.\n\nWe couldn't say it was made by aliens because we needed proof of that and we haven't studied Mars' enough to prove that aliens made the face. We know Mars is similar to Earth but it's still a different planet in our solar system. Although we hoped it might've been an alien civilization, we studied the face more and it was simply a landform similar to a mesa or butte of our world.\n\nEven though we know it was just a landform, there are reasons we could see people saying it might've been made by aliens. We know Mars is able to sustain life because of it's conditions and there has been few deposits of water found there, but we have never found an actual living species on the planet itself. We as humans still don't know if aliens live on Mars or if aliens from other worlds exist at all. Many people believe there are aliens from other planets and some don't really care about the subject at all but it is possible that there's life on other planets.\n\nBecause we haven't figured out if Mars has life, people believe the strange and convinient findings on Mars (like the face) are works of alien beings. Although we have confirmed the face was not a work of aliens, we still don't know if aliens exist. We can conclude that the face is not the work of aliens but there just might be unearthly beings on our neighboring planet, Mars. Before we can confirm there are alien beings on Mars, we would need evidence to explain they do exist at all. But we can conclude, the face is not made by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would paying this exploration be worth it?\n\nIn this article \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it talks about how there are many struggles just to go their,but venus is so close to Earth. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has an intrest in studying Venus too. Accodrding, to this Article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it is stating even though Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers.Their might be human live living in that planet that we do not know about.\n\nEven though their are many risks involved in this exploration. There are many positive sides to this exploration too. They had previously stated that in the artilce there might be a chance that if the Nationa Aeronautics and Space Administraion finds a way to solve the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus we would be able ot float aboce the fray. Accodrding to the article, the arthour had said \" Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling venusian Landscape.Just as out jet airplanes trave at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\".\n\nMeeting these challenges might be hard at first,but it would all be worth it. The human race would have the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also our curiosity to explore would likely lead us to many things that we don't know about yet. Like in the 1800s they had the though of computers existing in those days and it sounded shocking to people. These devices would make calculations by using gears and levers do not require electronics at all. It was just an idea back then and it also had positive/negatives sides to it. Then an exploration to Venus would be a downhill and their would be many uphills to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is fierce competition between nations to host major international sports events like the World Cup or Olympics as it is a unique opportunity to boost the national reputation of the host nation. In spite of its undeniable benefits, I believe that the costs are too great and therefore governments should prioritise other key issues to better benefit their citizens. \n\nOn the one hand, becoming a host nation for global events such as the World Cup or the Olympics brings a number of economic and infrastructural benefits. During these events, there is an influx of tourists from all over the world who need places to stay, restaurants to eat in and traditional products to purchase. The efforts made to cater to these tourists will remain long after they have gone. The cost of renovating a hotel might pay for itself during the event and then begin turning a large profit in later years. The other main area of development is related to the rapid expansion of quality infrastructure. Nations will be forced to invest in new sports facilities like swimming pools and stadiums as well as make renovations to pre-existing infrastructure like roads and airports. For example, China used the Beijing Olympics as an opportunity to modernise old buildings and roads. \nOn the other hand, these competitions use up tremendous resources from the host nation for a temporary competition. To ensure the success of these prestigious events, governments must waste a large percentage of the nation budget in the years leading up to the competition, oftentimes in the billions of dollars. The newly constructed facilities usually fall into disuse after each tournament. A salient example of this is Brazil as many of the swimming pools and sports facilities that were used in the 2014 Olympics are currently abandoned and becoming decrepit. Meanwhile, there are other pressing issues that have been festering including the need for new schools for underprivileged students and quality healthcare for the elderly population. If the government had prioritised these issues the country would be in a better position and its citizens would have a higher standard of living. \nTo summarize, due to the exorbitant costs, I am of the belief that the government should not allocate such a large percentage of its financial resources to hosting global events with negligible long-term impact. Instead these events should be hosted in the same countries year after year so that the new infrastructure pays for itself over time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I house celebrate cousins He turning years old So played games played trampolenc They came inside relax watch television We played dog Then lot people came We went outside third time played We come inside dinner We ate turkey baked potatoes cheese potatoes squeen beans That pretty good Then wanted us project It jon candle We cover tisue paper uses lots glue I wait patiently I last one domine So I walled waited finally I got project I Only one sitting table project It actually turned pretty good Being patient con get far life You patient job restraunt lots So remember patient ll okay Being patien guide hole life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all the photo of the Face was no face.\n\nThe photo was acttually a photo of a huge rock formation which resembles a human face.\n\nThis resemblens is formed by shadows that give the formation an illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. The Face was not created by aliens\n\nApril 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his Mars Global Orbiter Camera team took pictures of the Face. these pictures were ten times shaper than Viking's photos.\n\nThe images made it to a JPL web site and thousand of anxious web sufers were waiting.\n\nThousand of people seen the photos.\n\nThe photos revealed the information of the face having no alien monument after all.\n\nEven after these pictures not everyone was satisfied.\n\nFrom1998-2001 Mars Global Surveryor has been prepared for a sencond chnace to take piture of the Face.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 - A cloudy summer day in Cydonia, Mars Global Surveryor drew close enough on this day for a second look at the Face.\n\nMalin's team captuerd an extroadniary photo using the camares absolute maximum resolution.\n\nEach pixel in the 2001's photo spans 1.56 meters compared ot the Viking's photo of 43 meters in 1976.\n\nAs a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times better than in a pixel size image.\n\nSo say if there was an object in the picture like an airplan on the ground, or an Egyptian-style pyramind, or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\n\n2001's photo was the best picture yet.\n\nThis picture would be able to teel truley if the Face was created by alien or not.\n\nCome to find out the 2001's picture acttually shows the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa landform common around the American West.\n\nIt remindes people of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nThat's a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face of Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am on with the position that is against these \"driverless cars\". These cars are not truly driverless and I don't believe that they ever will be driverless. Not only that, but with all the technology and wiring put into these cars something could go wrong during the production process. If something were to go wrong during the production process then how can we be sure these cars are completely safe?\n\nFor example, in the previous passage it says, \"Google cars aren't truly drieverless; they still alert the driver to take over when dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" These cars cannot navigate through certain \"difficult\" situations. For theses cars to be completely driverless they would have to know how to navigate during the difficult situations on the road; technology can only do so much when it comes to human activities. On another note, these cars may not be completely safe or carefree. If the car were to take part in an accident who would be at fault? Either the driver/passenger or the car manufacturer. Since the car isn't completely driverless it could be the driver/passengers fault, but if the car did not alert the driver of the situation as the driver was not paying attention, then who is at fault for the accident. There could be a problem with the wiring someplace in the car. What if the wiring were to be, not quite right; if there was a leak of sorts onto the wires as they spark would the car combust?\n\nThese cars cannot be completely safe. They might save you a little bit of work as far as driving goes, but in the long run these cars could possibly cause more damage than good. The passage states that safety plays a big part as to why they want these cars to be around. If these cars have even the tiniest bit of malfunctioning something terrible, such as an accident, could happen. If these cars were to become the only vehicles you can buy, then mechanics would have to go back to school and learn about the build of these cars. Some may not want to go back due to all the technology in it. Just think, they would have to forget everything they have ever learned about cars so that they can have a job in the future. These cars could pose a very large problem for a very large amount of people. I am against these \"driverless\" vehicles because they pose a safety issue as well as the fact that they're not truly and completely driverless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's growing world to many it may seem as if living without a car would be impossible. Our ever evolving lifestyles and cultures though may prove otherwise. Across the globe it is becoming more likely for people to leave their car at home, and walk opposed to driving a short commuit. The benefits of this decision are incredibly impactful on the enviorment, improving human health and saftey, as well as on our, the people's bank accounts. Becoming a society nonrelient on cars will prove not to be easy, but justifiable when those three points are taken into account.\n\nThe effect that cars have on the enviorment is no suprise to most. If you turn on most news channels, global warming is talked about by the hour. Thus proving drastic measures need to be taken to secure our planet's future. What better way of doing so then by reducing the amount of greenhouse gas emitted into the atmosphere. Source one line five states \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" The article goes on to state in line seven our lives being centered around the use of cars will have to change. Our planet needs it's inhabitors to treat it with the same respect people do to the dignified, and a car free world is one way to do so.\n\nBy decreasing the number of people using cars as their mode of transportation good health and safety will soon be boosted across the globe. The effect of walking instead of drving will decrease obesity and increase positive moods. According to source one line 3 Heidrun Walter believes she is much happier and less tense without a car. If she a working women and mother of two can live without a car I find many other people could find ways to also. Limiting the use of cars would not only improve health but safety. By limiting cars you limit the amount of possible accidents. Whether an accident results from carelessness, accident, or intoxication there is no arguing the fact they take many innocent lives daily. By reducing the amount of car usage this will no longer be a major factor in the premature deaths of people. According to all four sources the idea of leaving cars parked in the garage at home, or choosing to live a car free lifestyle is catching on now more than ever. Personally I hope we soon have healthier, safer pedestrians.\n\nIn today's economy money is tight. People looking to save a dollar will justify almost all reasoning to do so. Throughout the world many countries have decided to become less relient on cars. By making cities more compact people are finding it very possible to live a life without cars. Imagine cutting the price of not only a car, but car insurance and gas out of your life. I can promise you your wallet would thank you. Source four line 35 states \"We are witnessing a long term culture shift.\" The internet has made it possible to connect with friends and family without meeting face to face and because of this the use of cars is rapidly declining. Source four also states many of America's youth are declining the possiblity to be licesnced and drive. Suprisingly enough Mr. Sivak, a socialogist's children do not drive; their ages being in the early twenties. This is yet more proof of our ever evolving lifestyles.\n\nFellow citizens, at times our lives can deal us many unexpected difficulties that make living in this day and age problematic. Cutting out the use of cars however would not be one of them. Deciding against the use of cars would impactful the enviorment, improve human health and safety, and our bank accounts from draining. All four sources prove the possiblity of a car free society throughout the entire world. So my question to you is why not stop using cars now? The world and your future self will surely thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Poisonous snakes mirages rolling hills dry dead tumbleweed features setting cyclist going greatest effect They showed trecherous path took obstacles surpass prevail The purpose including features setting like poisonous snakes mirages rolling hills signs life water show impact bad conditions If left sectives audience could saythink traveling old trail know cyclist could traveling along windy river passing threw nice developed towns see features setting help set mood also reveal confident story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting essay affected cyclist many ways One ramshackle shed several rusty pumps corral couldnt hold lamest mule greeted me Kurmaskie The cyclist expecting small town people type good water supply However instead found deserted ghost town rusty pump didnt even supply water It made cyclist feel depressed running low water could easily dehydrate without The speed limit I waterdepleting sometimes life feel cruel Kurmaskie The cyclist possibly passed cars highway going going probably makes feel getting It would reason give But keeps trying reach destination The feeling passed cars makes determined continue finish journey", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By quote author explaining Saeng eventually ready test When geese return re ready return From migration hibiscus budding ready turn beautiful flower Saeng believes spring since flower geese ready ready", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, anthropogenic activities have become a major ecological concern as it has led to a loss of global biodiversity. There are people who think that we are too late to conserve the dying flora and fauna whereas others believe the contrary. I strongly believe that effective steps can be taken to protect these species. This essay will discuss both sides, my opinion followed by a comprehensive conclusion.\r\n\r\nTo commence, many would argue that we are too late to protect these species as we have already lost two-thirds of the plants and animals. For example, the population of vultures and leopards is such that it seems impossible to conserve them. Also, many would claim that human development is more important than protecting natural habitats like forests. As a result, we are experiencing further loss of such organisms. Hence, as per this ideology, we should not focus on this issue as it is beyond recovery.\r\n\r\nOn the flip side, a part of society argue for protecting these species as it has been achieved in many parts of the world. For instance, the population of tigers doubled in India within a span of two decades. To elaborate further, dedicated protected areas can be built to provide habitats to the forest-dwelling organisms. To illustrate, National parks have been established in India to protect endangered species. Hence, there are ample number of ways to solve this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, it is popularly noticed that social skills are becoming very valuable. In some industries, the recruiters feel that the interpersonal competencies of most job seekers have more value than their academic qualifications. I moderately agree with this opinion. This essay will discuss reasons for my point of view.\n\nTo begin with, it is important to note that communication is an integral part of every work environment. Apart from interacting with clients, an employee needs to demonstrate social competency when relating with their colleagues to foster a healthy work space which in turn breeds organisation success. For instance, in my place of work, I have noticed that there increased productivity when we work as a team with little to no conflict. However, in cases when there is a disagreement, there is less efficiency in achieving tasks . This proves that good communication which results from good social skills promotes productiveness in every business establishment.\n\nOn the other hand, the educational accomplishments of an individual seeking a job are equally essential. This is because most professional jobs require a certain amount of skills and knowledge that is acquired through learning. To illustrate, only individuals that have received academic training as a nurse or a medical doctor should be allowed to carry out medical treatments and procedures for ailing individuals. Anything otherwise would result in hazards or loss of life whether the employee has good interpersonal skills or not.\n\nTo sum it up, this essay has explained why social skills as well as academic eligibility should equally be considered by employers when they decide to hire for a role. I hereby recommend that organisations should arrange training or workshops on good communication among their staff members.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Packing of goods has become a noticeable issue nowadays, especially in terms of environmental concerns and sustainable development of society. In order to reduce the amount of packaging, some people believe that manufacturers and supermarkets are more responsible for taking measures, while others insist that customers play a more critical role in reality. In my view, the effort needs to be made by the supplier and the consumer both to guarantee the achievement of the goal.\nOn the one hand, the problem of over-packaging is often caused by commercial strategy. The supplier attempts to use beautiful packaging to make their products more attractive to customers. It is fairly easy to imagine that people would be more likely to choose a product decorated gorgeously than the same one with a plain appearance provided that there is thus no significant increase in price. Following that, producers would try to make every effort to obtain more competitive packaging for their products, which probably leads to excessive use of the wrap. Therefore, it is undoubtedly the duty of the producer to partake in reducing the amount of over-packaging by finding another way to improve the competitiveness of their products instead of merely attaching more value to their appearance.\nOn the other hand, the behaviors of customers give rise to over-packaging as well. The more attention that people will pay to the appearance of goods, the more encouraged producers will be to exert themselves on wrapping. Moreover, the public awareness about the harmful influence of over-packaging is also profound in decreasing the amount of packaging. As customers take the problems caused by over-packaging into account, they would be more willing to purchase the goods with less packaging, which is a highly practical way to prevent producers from wrapping unduly.\nIn conclusion, it is clear that suppliers and customers both are responsible for the trend of over-packaging. Therefore, the success of altering the situation needs the participation of them both.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the world's climate keeps changing, some people suggest that it is better to adjust with the climate instead of preventing it. I personally think it is impossible as climate changes affect not only human beings but also everything on the earth. This essay will highlight why we cannot find a way to live with the climate change.\n\nFirstly, an important thing to note is that we cannot adjust with the changes of the environment as human beings have been using nature in this world. For example, the University of Queensland shows that we live on lands which only occupy 30% of the earth. Furthermore, we eat animals and plants which grow well with the current climate so it might cause starvation around the world. Therefore, it is not easy to find a way to live with the climate changes such as the rise of the sea level and global warming because it will impact on the levels of animals and the livable land. .\nIn addition, it is easier to prevent climate change than find the way to live with the changes. As I mentioned above, Changing of climate would affect to any kind of environment, such as the ecosystem and the environment. Once we accept the change, we need to keep adjusting the changes which would affect everything in our lives, as it is unstoppable. \n\nIn conclusion, I personally think we should keep an eye on climate change and try to prevent it since it is impossible to keep adjusting. Moreover, we keep living with nature and using the environment, therefore, putting some effort into keeping the climate is much easier than inventing new ways of living with changed climate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Readers I understand people concerned people spend much time computer bad I disagree computers help keep family members live far away touch You also see pictures things cant see everyday Finally helps school work I know family son fighting He brought laptop ask video chat family It seemed though never left Without family would wonder worried You nt family member war talk computer Have ever wanted see looks like You nt travel find All search computer If live city lot nature see like outside computer Seeing sights make travel travelling family brings closer A study shows families go vacations strong relationships Having computer mandatory school It best thing research students failing nt use computer homework There also websites use studying There student school failed classes He never used computer His friend suggested using one home trouble tries He used computer help study test next day He ended getting test used computer It nt matter using computer homework talking friends familym one important inventions ever made", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that this would be valuable because this Facial Action Coding System really work because in the text it stated that they found out what was Mona Lisa moods. And they figured it out so if they put the computers in a classroom for kids they will find out if they need help or not. Another reason why i think that this computer is valuable is because it can help out the kids and to see if they need help and to also see what they are struggling with so they can fix the problems that the kids are having. Another reason why i think that the computers coding system is valuable to the classroom is because if they feel sad or anything going on at home or somewhere the computer can tell what is they mood and why they have this mood. I also think that this coding system would be good for a classroom because it can help teachers and what i mean is that if the student is struggling and the teacher dont know why the student is struggling but the coding system do the system can tell the teacher what she need to do to help the student understand i really think this would be good for school all over the world the world need this new technology and it need to help us get through school. This concludes my reason on why i think that the technology to read the emotion expressions of students in a classroom are valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the diagram, the steps needed to obtain a dough for a pizza are shown, figures are given for grams and time required for the process.\nIn the initial stage, the staple ingredients, namely, 4 coup of 00 flour, 325 gr of water ( roughly one and a half cups) and a half teaspoon of dry active yeast respectively, are blended together in a cup.\nAfter being placed in a stand mixer, the primordial dough undergo through 3 mixing stages, with the first and the third at slow speed for 2 minutes each, and the second at medium speed for 5 minutes.\nSubsequently, the dough is going to be left to rest as long as its thickness has increased twofold, which it would takes at least 2 Hours.\nHaving gotten rid of the bubbles by squeezing them manually, the resulting portion of dough is either divided thoroughly into 3 slices equally sized or making each of the three parts weigh 275 grams.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's participation in the Seagoing Cowboys effected his life and how he saw things. He got to see unique things, participate in the recovery of other countries during the war, and it impacted his life forever. Other people who want to help the world should definitely participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThe first reason why other people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because they would get to help recover other countries from the war.\n\nThe text states, by the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. On all of those trips, Luke was helping deliver cattle to other countries to recover their food and animal supply. Many countries were in ruins and they needed the help that the Seagoing Cowboys provided.\n\nNext, more people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because they would get to see and visit many unique and interesting places around the world. The text states, Luke was able to see the Acropolis in Greece. The text also states, on his many trips, Luke got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nFinally, others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it will change their lives. The text states, after his great adventures as a Seagoing Cowboy, Luke's family was lead to host a number of international students for many years. The text also states, this experience opened up the world to Luke. Luke also got to bond with new people on board the SS Charles W. Wooster. He got to spend lots of time with them including times of playing volleyball, baseball, fencing, and many more activities to help pass time.\n\nThis shows why more people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. They would get to see unique things, participate in the recovery of other countries during the war, and impact thier lives forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that studying Venus is really worth a try due to the opportunities that we might be able to study its surface.\n\nEven though we do not have the ability to send machines or humans, we would be able to see what things are on its surface\n\nThe author shows that it's a worth pursuit in paragraph 7 when he talks about machines like mechanical computers which might be able to make it there.\n\nHe says, \"systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"\n\nAnother example the author gives in paragraph 5 is that humans can go see Venus with its atmosphere with a technology to keep them safe.\n\nThe solution would \"allow scientists to float above the fray\" which is not a bad idea to keep them from getting hit by flames of radiation.\n\nTraveling to Venus would be good because we humans could see how far we can go and we could expand our technology to a whole new level to study other planets too.\n\nIt would expand our goal to many horizons to study its many surfaces and this idea to see what's inside of the most dangerous planets in the universe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a huge step in technology and may workout to be very useful, but there is always that percent chance that it will fail. For example if I were to own one of these Driverless cars I would\n\nBe worried about one thing, and that is running into other cars. I wouldnt want to own one of these because I personally do not trust them.\n\nA huge problem for me would be liability. For example, If I am in one of these driverless cars and a surrounding car near me runs a red light and I go head on with them because this driverless car could not react in time because it doesn't have the senses of a human. If my life was not taken would it be my fault that I got into a wreck or would it be the manufacture's fault? Just like the article said new traffic laws will certaintly be needed in order to make this possible. There is a reason why only 3 out of our 50 states are currently allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars and that is because people do not trust these things. If these companies are releasing these cars in 2020 then they better change the law to make it safe for the driver and the companies by four years. I also do not think that they can make these cars as aware as some human drivers are. For example if the car gets hit it has nothing to lose, but the human inside the car is trying to protect their life.\n\nI personally believe that they should prohibit these cars from coming out in the United States. They could possibly release them in another country and then bring them to the U.S. if they workout in other countries. The reason for that is because our liability laws are not where they need to be yet in my opinion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\" Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). He has classified six basic emotions - happiness,suprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness each characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raise your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbicularis oris(around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an efective human instructor.\" The same technology can make computer -animatedfaces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. Muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. I belive it can read your emotional expressions better than a average human can because it can scan your face and see what your emotion is even if you pretend to be happy and your not. I think its a great creation soon everyone will use it and believe to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that we should get ride of the elecoral college because its not what people want. The popular votes lets you pick which president you want. The electoral college is when you pick your candidate but your picking a elector and they bring in the votes. The people that vote should be able to pick who they want and then yea. So we should have popular votes then keeping the electoral college. So we need a popular vote and not a electoral college where you dont actually vote, you vote for a elector and then you tell them which candidate you vote for and then they bring in the votes. For exaple, if i would to say that the candiadates are George washington and john kerry and i pick george and 34 others pick him the elector would bring 35 votes to the congress and then he would have 35 votes. You dont know the electors you dont know anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today we already have so many technical advances, and technology is in everyday lives. This technical advance is one of the best one's in our day and age. Schools and so many buisness incooperate technology in our lessons and tests and just everday task, that technology is taking over. I think that the FACS would be a great idea to have within schools because it would be a great benefit to those students that may have harder times learning. I believe this new technology could make a difference for the greater good.\n\nIf the FACS machine was incooperated into todays schools, it would be one of the greatest accomplishments. Students who struggle, like IED students, could maybe enjoy their everyday lessons. In the writing it says that the FACS machine would be able to recognize that a student is becoming confused or bored. When this occurs, the FACS machine would be able to change the lesson and make it a better fit for the person to understand.\n\nThis technology wouldn't only help the needed students, it could help the students that maybe have a little patience problem staying focused at the task at hand. It also may help the kids feel more enjoyed to come to school because they can learn at their on rate and pace. If the FACS were to help student like this, schools may have higher percentages with test and other important task they fulfill.\n\nI think this machine would help the teachers connect more with their students as well. If certain teachers let their students work with technology like this, this would help the teachers learn how every student is different and how they learn. It would also help the teacher learn how to teach better and more suitable to make sure their students succeed and understand things in real life.\n\nThe FACS could also help create confidence and self-esteem in certain people who think lower of themselves and who feel alone. If the FACS can understand your emotions, it could maybe help you feel better about yourself by maybe helping you link up to somebody else who has similar emotions so you could have somebody to maybe talk to.\n\nOne reason I would think not to have the FACS machine in schools, is that it may be distracting to some students. Also, it may feel intrusive to some students because they may not want their emotions told. And for the easily distracted kids, it could hurt their grades and cause their focus to be on something else like how that the FACS machine can do the ads by determining emotions on them, they might get distrated by this.\n\nIn all seriousness though, I do think that the FACS machine would be a great enhancement within the schools. I think this because even with the few cons and repurcussions it may have, I think that the pros outweigh the negativities. I think the FACS machine will be more beneficial then destructive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our world today people have so many emtions they use on a daily basis. Emotions can help someone figure out if a friend is upset or how their day is going. On the other hand Dr. Thomas Huang of Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois wanted to decode all human emotions. The way that he could decode emtions is through a system called them Facial Action Coding System. Being able to read peoples emotions can help people under stand and learn what someone is feeling.\n\nDr Huang wanted a better way to read peoples emptions, instead of reading every indavidual muscle in the face. Then having to figure out the emotions of thr person on their own. Having a computer system to detect the emtions is faster snd easier to detect. Dr. Huang and his collegue Dr. Sebe are \"exsperts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" The computer is built to construct a 3-D computer model of the face and all 44 muscles on the human face to detect what emotions. One reason why the system was built, was for class rooms. The system would identify the mixed emotions of the students and help solve the problems. The system would observe the students to see if they are bored, upset, confused, and more. Dr. Huang states \"Then it could modify the leason, like an effective human instructor. This system would help so much in the class rooms. Even tho the system would cost alot and would be awkward for it to watch your every face muscle. But the system would help in class rooms and to help the students with their problems and needs.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding can help generations of people in the future and their emtions. The system can help with fixing problem for students and even passient of doctors. Even tho people normally communicate through talking, alot of our communication is from the faces that humans make. The emtion system will forever change the way scientists look at peoples emotions and the way they feel emotionaly forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the start of human civilization males and females have coexisted together and supported each other. It has been observed that most high-level jobs are being performed by males. Some are of the opinion that women should be provided reservations by the government, while a vast group of individuals are against such practices. I am of the opinion that reservations for women for a limited time are helpful in looking at the global picture.\r\n\r\nProviding reservations to high-level jobs to women against men is helpful in many ways. First, it brings parity at work and improves the level playing field between co-workers. It also enhances the stature of women in society, thereby uplifting and encouraging more girls to follow that path. Moreover, it gives a sense of safety and confidence not just at home, but also at work ,to perform and excel at their job duties. For instance, Mary Barra who is the CEO of GM company,is performing wonderful and leading GM to new heights. Hence, reservations can help in uplifting the women's community by instilling confidence and providing an equal playing field.\r\n\r\nContrary to that thought process, there are reasonable oppositions to any form of reservations to any group. First and foremost, people perceive this as a form of bias against men, and not having equal opportunities. They rightly say that individuals should work up the organization structure instead of any unjust reservation for benefiting a specific group. Moreover, promoting reservations gives a ray of hope for similar demands from other marginalized communities in the future. For example, OBC reservations in institutions, and government jobs have led to significant unrest in the peace in India. So it’s hard to neglect the negative implications of the reservation.\r\n\r\nOwing to most elite-level jobs occupied by men, the idea of the government providing reservations to women is definitely a good way to enhance women’s representation at the top levels. However, looking at the downsides, this should be granted only for a specific time frame to allow women's community to uplift themselves, so as to not lead to any form of discrimination against others ,or encourage such requests in future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We as people want to explore to new levels that no one has ever been to. Some of those things could be going to Venus. You would be the first person to go, everyone would love you, and you would get so much fame. Here's some things that you don't know about. It's exreamly dangerous and your chances of survival and very slim. By slim I mean next to none.\n\nThe planet is 97% carbon dixoide so we wouldn't be able to breath and you have have to be in a space suit with limited oxygen supply. Next, you wouldn't be able to touch the surface considering that the average temperatures and 800 degress fahrenheit. When you're there you won't be able to collect materails such as rocks, gases, or even anything else because you won't be able to get to there surface and anything you use to try to touch the surface will melt.\n\nWhen you are there you will be experiencing 90 times more atompheric pressure than you would here on earth. It would literally crush you to be present on the surface of Venus. Not to mention you could be the second fatherist away from earth and that'll make it longer to get back to earth than normal. Also, when you are there the planet is rotating faster than it would on earth and make you very sick.\n\nSo, before you decide to make big leaps and explore new places you got to know what you can and can't do. The author from the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" gave me my information and did an amazing job explaining and getting me to understand how harse Venus could really be. You are limited to far heights and it's your choice to find them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who do you vote for.? or what whould you do if there was no president?. well i think we can find out. But not to worry most states have a \"winner-take-all\"system. It's for giving awards to electors to the winning presidental canidate., But every canididate has its on electors & if u are becomeing the president then u have every 4 years then you have to be relected.\n\nThe Electoral College consists of 538 electors.,And a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president.\n\nBut even so your state's entitled allotment of electors is equal to the numbers of its congressional delegation, for each member in the house of Representatives plus 2 for senators.\n\nEach candidate running for president is your states has his or her own group of electors, But\"Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral college.\n\nYou can help choose your state's electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors.\n\nAfter the presidental election, your governor prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\". It lists all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.\n\nThe Certificate of Ascertainment also delcares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of electors in december of the election year.\n\nUnder the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote, for (John) Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Demorcratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the state wide election.\n\nBut 34 electoral votes go to Congress and kerry whould get 34 electoral votes. But who are the electors., You might ask we will never know because it can be anyone not holding public office.\n\nBut back on the electoral college. The single best argument against the electoral college is what is call the disaster factor.\n\nThe american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century;. The system allows for much worse.\n\nLets consider something, Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that thoes electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960, segregationists in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors\n\nElectors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please\n\nOh, and its happend before a state send two slates of elsecotrs to Congress., It happend in hawaii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the Senate, validated only his opponent's electors.\n\nThe Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, A non democratic method of selecting a presdent that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\n\nThe advicates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage would be great for both you and the environment. If we didn't use cars as much, we would get more exercise, save more money, and limit the amount of air pollution we produce. We would start to notice changes for the better in our health, our budgeting, and the condition of the environment. I have gathered evidence from a few different sources to back up these claims. \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\", \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Botogta\", and \"The End of Car Culture\" all go into detail about the benefits that did happen or could happen while we limit car usage.\n\nOne advantage of limiting car usage is the increase in exercise it will give you. Did you know that 70% of America is overweight? An advantage to walking or biking places that driving doesn't have is that walking or biking will get you active. It will help you burn calories and it will give you the self-confidence of being in good shape. Sure, it might be hot out when you walk or bike places, but this problem can be solved by simply dressing appropriotely for the activity. Wear something that you know you'll be comfortable getting excercise in. One business man riding a two seat bicycle with his wife (instead of driving), said, \"It's a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution\", (Source 3). Walking or riding your bike to get places rather than driving to them will give you more time to think. If you think too much on the road, something dangerous is bound to happen. Walking to places is a great alternative to driving not only for your body but for your mind, and this, to me, is a strong advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nAnother advantage to limiting car usage is you will start to save money. Gas bills start to add up, especially considering the constant inclination of prices. Not only gas, though, but other costly needs such as getting your car's oil changed or tires replaced can also turn out to be expensive. Cost plays a huge role in whether or not teens and young adults will get a car when legally eligable. \"There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds getting a license\", (Source 4). A large amount of teens just now getting their licenses are unemployed, making the car expenses impossible for them to pay on their own, making them rely on usually a parent or relative. Money has always had a significant effect on how people transport from one place to another. Limiting driving all together would save you gas and repair money, and saving money could never be a bad thing.\n\nFinally, a significant advantage of not driving as much is that it would limit the amount of air pollution on this earth. \"...a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions in Europe\", (Source 1). Though we may not notice it, air pollution is constantly contaminating the earth. Air pollution is extremely harmful to inhale, almost like how smoking is extremely bad for your lungs. Reducing the amount of driving that we do would reduce the amount of air pollution we produce with it. Walking or biking does not pollute the earth the way driving can.\n\nAdvantages of limiting car usage are not only good for the environment but are good for us both physically, mentally, and financially. If everyone started to limit the amount of time they spend driving per day, just imagine the change we might start to see in the community. We could start by walking to the grocery store or our friends' houses instead of driving, and then maybe bring on a long-term change, such as walking to school if it's close enough, or walking to the bus stop so you can ride the bus with other kids instead of driving your own car, creating more air pollution. There are other advantages to limiting car usage, but these are the top three advantages we will begin to notice if we act soon enough.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author want to show you all the data he picked up good and bad. Howabout the fact that venus is one of the most challenging planets but on the pther hand venus has struck the curasidity of many people.\n\nvenus is looked at and called the \"evening star\" for being very bright but it can also be refered to the \"twin\" for having simaller charchaterists like in terms of density and size. on the other hand venus goes a very differnet speed then the other planets. leaving the abillity to go venture very dangerous. venus can have an atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which can be very harmful to humans along with the fact that it is 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nall in all its hard but worth it to find out what we can on venus. and be aus eof this NASA hasnt given up yet trying to figure out ways to safely travel there and back.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars will be a great aspect to everyday lives once they have been finalized. Automatic cars have a lot to offer in today's world. They can help transport those who dont have a car, they are easier on the ecosystem, and they are more beneficial to people who aren't capable of driving themselves. After a little bit more work of programming, these cars would be great to have on the road.\n\nLike subways or buses, people will probably be allowed to by a card that allows them to buy rides while discounting them the usual price. People can ride these driverless cars to work across town and save their money to buy necessary items for their families or themselves. You could save up money to pay for a college education or a new home for your growing family, instead of paying your monthy car payment and they ever so \"Little\" mechanical bills. Also the cars would be great for teens who have jobs, but cannot drive themselves. A lot of families require teens to get their own job to have extra cash to spend with friends. Many cannot get one because their parents work when they need to be there or it is too far away to walk or ride a bike. These cars would offer a safe and easy way to make it to work.\n\nHaving many people use one car intead of one car for each person is lighter on our ecological footprint as a nation. The small auto-cars would use less gas because they are hybrids and there wouldnt be as many because it would be easier to car pool somewhere. Normally there are problems car pooling because its hard fining someone at work who lives close enough to work with, but with this system, grabbing a few people who work at building in the same vicinity would work great. Hybrid cars are known for emmiting less fumes and getting more miles to the gallon, so, virtually, you could go as far as you need with out worrying about those black plumes you see every once and a while.\n\nNot everyone has great vision or excellent preception skills. For those people who couldn't pass the drivers test, they have ways to get around. Also, these cars would be great for handicapped people, or those who need medical attention. Say a woman is alone in her house and she is going into labor, she doesn't have the money to call for an ambulance, and is in too much pain to drive herself. If she were to hire a taxi, they might freak out and drive in a not-so-safe manner and end up hurting both parties. The non-biased, non-emotional automated car would be able to make it to the delevery room in a manner that is as safe as it gets. No speeding, no running red lights, and no forgetting to check your blind spots.\n\nIn the end these cars would be super helpful to today's society. They would help acomplish more as a nation by bringing us closer to technology. They would be helpful for those who can't drive, and those who can't afford a car on their own.\n\nIn times of slight emergencies, they can be a cheaper, safer alternative. Hopefully, driverless cars are coming sooner than later.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir grateful First author reveals greatfulness complimenting mother father She states mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immagrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved NUM The author grateful parents came But grateful nt come came They gave everything Next thanking shows grateful The author tells parents admiration strength perseverance NUM thanked repeatedly NUM The author reveals gratefulness tells parents She grateful perseverance strength whole process thanks Finally grateful leaving house She reveals I never forget parents turned simple house home NUM The author grateful recognizes house lived house parents worked hard get And grateful enough money bigger home The mood created author memoir grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is a significant rise in business and cultural relationships across different countries which has it pros and cons. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of development as well as my opinion.\n\n\nFirst of all, interaction between different nations can produce good outcomes that can improve the economy of the people involved. For instance, the western societies have benefited from trading with other African communities, as they import crude oil from Africa, which is refined to produce petrol that is in turn exported back to the underdeveloped countries.This kind of exchange has been known to better the economy of both parties. Additionally, developed countries also send financial aids, to fund education and feeding in poorer countries, which is as a result of cultural contact.\n\n\n However, this kind of alliances has its draw back. A re\ncent study showed that a lot of languages die yearly, which is the result of international relationship between different countries. Language reflects people's identity, but when it becomes extinct, a lot of local, national will also lose their culture. For example English has become a lingua Franca among non English speakers which is a demerit for the nationals.\n\n\nFinally, my opinion is that the benefit of the rising business and cultural relation outweigh it drawback, therefore it should be promoted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Both diagrams involve a 100-year flood level, both diagrams tell us that a raised building is involved, there's a freeboard of 30mm, the building is raised and both diagrams show that there's flooding involved. However for diagram 1 it tells us that the water level is closer to the ground as compared to diagram 2 so that means it's less likely for the house to get destroyed in diagram 1 compared to diagram 2 this is because there's a stopbank present in diagram 1 to reduce the amount of flooding. The Berm in diagram 1 allows the water to take a steeper path so that it reduces the risk of flooding so that the house in diagram 1 is less likely to get destroyed as compared to the house in diagram 2. In diagram 1 there's a floodgate to control the amount of water flowing and it's not present in diagram 2.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In setting lodi California That part desert The desert effects cyclist real bad For one really hot Two heat making thirsty running water Then last near towns cant get anymore water setting effect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many ways that limiting car usage is good for me, you and just everyone in genereal! Yes cars do have their advantages but like everything else they also have a few disadvantages. People should limit car usage more all around the world and heres a few reasons why..\n\nAuto mobiles help in many ways they help you get to where your going faster and in a comfortable sitting condition, but although your body is comfortable are you really relaxed? i presume not! Having a car is a big responsability which can also be very stressful. Think about it when you didnt have a car as a kid and young adult you didnt have to worry about if the insurance on your bike is payed , or if there was any mechanical problems with your legs. cars are expensive to buy and they continue to be quite the hefty financial load after youve bought the car too especially if no well maintained. In the article \"IN GERMAN SUBURB, LIFE GOES ON WITHOUT CARS\"' Parragraph 3 sentences 4-6 Heidrun Walter says \" When i had a car i was always tense...\" This quote proves the point that having a car is quite stressful , but thats not all she goes on to say \"i'm much happier this way\" Why is she so much happier? cause not having or needing a car lifted a huge load off her shoulders thats one less thing to worry about on a daily basis.\n\nAlso lets not forget one of the biggest issues in the world POLUTION! Pollution is a huge problem that we constantly see on the news , hear on the radio , and we see every day. One of the worst forms of pollution is the kind thats in the air we breathe to live and cars play a role now alot of people may say \"my one car cant possibly cause that much pollution\" but if millions .. billions of people think the same way then thats billions of air polluting cars driving around the world polluting the air we breath to live! Paris made a great arangement as stated in the article \"PARIS BANS DRIVING DUE TO SMOG\" they talk about how paris banned certain cars driving from one day and other cars the next . All the cars with even numbered liscense plates were to not be driven on monday and vice versa for the odd numbered liscense plates the next day. this was good because it only allowed about half the amount of cars that usually drive on a daily basis to drive. In time this should make quite the noticable difference in the smog and the overall experience of breathing the \" fresh air\".\n\nIn conclusion we should all limit car usage because it is less stress not having a car helps financially and lifts a great load of responsability off of our shoulders and also if less people drive on a daily basis then there will be much less polution in the air and i dont know about you guys but id rather live longer than drive and die young, but thats just me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argued that voluntary work must not be a matter of choice for young people and would result in a positive impact on both society and teenagers themselves. Personally, I do not agree with this view for several reasons.\r\n\r\nFirstly, most young people are students, which means they are under enough pressure without being adding the responsibility of work. Also, I would argue that schools are as tough as a full-time job, with high demands from teachers and daily lessons, so students rarely have spare time and if they do they mostly spend it studying for the next exam or solving their daily homework. Secondly, there is a common saying that says \"time is money\", and for young people, time is a precious resource that can be better spent on exploring their interests, building relationships, and gaining life experiences. Thus, limiting their free time by forcing them into a job can hinder their personal growth and development.\r\n\r\nFinally, compulsory work is against all meanings of freedom and fairness, and obliging part of the public to do something against their will may result in resentment and frustration for that part of society and may even cause insurgency; thus, everyone should have the right to choose how they spend their time and pursue their own personal goals without being forced into work or other obligations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is important to respect individuals' freedom and choices when it comes to work, and forcing teenagers into jobs may lead to negative feelings and outcomes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect setting affect cyclist Dehydrating due heat lack water see mirages And loses strength going many hills And large snake ride could bitten", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy The author uses words warm describe things Warm homes gives happy feeling two gives happy mood overal It makes think happy author knowing still family memoriesskillsIn author using many words set mood happiness like warmth kitchen humble home scent music life love gracious neighborhood simple house home These choice words used author give good feeling put happy mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that many residents in several countries are becoming more and more interested in finding out about the history of the house and building where they have been living in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this phenomenon as well as severaland approaches which people can use to research these histories.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, there are three main factors are to blame for the situation these residents behave in these countries at present. Firstly, modern people live in a better and better conditionsway in these countries. That is to say, they don’t nervous about the lack of food, water or other living facilities. Therefore, they will feel bored and don’t know what to do, then the survey for habitat history just meets them. Secondly, they are curious about these histories, because, as we all know, the human is a kind of creature who has a strong curiosity for anything they don’t know, then they will research these while they are equipped with enough situations. Finally, people all would like to know more and more about themselves, even these histories about the house and building they live in.\r\n\r\nPeople can use several approaches to research this. At first, they can research all old buildings and houses which are relative to the place they live in, this can get more information. Then, they can interview some old people who used to live in the same place, these people may know more things about these old buildings. After getting some pieces of information, they can research some materials in the library and prove the information they get, this is important for us, we must be strict with history. At last, they can ask for some experts in these areas, this is history, and get the final result for the survey plan.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people do have more and more interest in the history of their habitat and they can use a series of approaches to find out those.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper would feel someone wrote book bad newspapers tore bad one wanted touch another newspaper Think something found offensive avalible thousdands thousands people read I believe certain materials books music movies ect found offensive allowed removed libraries book shelves let alone even shelves Now lets think momentWhat sexist book fell hands inocent childs hands could read enough get book That child could end living kind life book protays If I parentt I know fact I would never want children exposed harmful reading materials know right wrong clear judgement Or another perspective one book black people bad nasty fell wrong hands purpose lets say drunken old fashioned man Who happens think continue slavery That one book could stimulate white mans thoughts could try put thoughts action Throwing book says black people young black womans face Then continues seeing alone done rapes beats Only let live make whore slave aslong shes living Can imagan world knows bad woman hurting one know long deal painBefore stops fighting life Just think I told gave examples started one single bookThe offensive book towards sexists towards black people reasons book ban libraries least glued shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While building mooring Mast builders Empire State Building struggled many difficulties issues First make sure dirigible would nt tear framework building Because dirigible large heavy dirigible added wind would transmitted way building s foundation bottom This addressed building would destroyed Even workers learn dirigibles worked could docked buildings They consulted experts taking tours equipment order learn dirigible flies would docked Probably important thing workers keep mind safety public This difficult unfortunately nt possible build mast would safe public This eventually led mast never used docking station", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that they dont have enough support and they are not something that is necessary for our society. I dont think we need driverless cars, because they would cause too many problems and be too much work to take care of. Driverless cars should not be a huge focus in our society, because we do not need them and we should be focusing on being more productive. We should not focus on driverless cars but rather on the safety of the cars and roads we have now.\n\nDriverless cars could be more dangerous than the dangers we have now, revolving around the cars, traffic, and raidlroads all around us. We already have too many problems involving cars that we don't need to add any more. The people who are involved in creating the driverless cars should focus on making sure that the railroads are safe before trying to come up with anything new. I think that creating theese new cars is already to much work. It would involve creating the sensors, changing the breaks, and making new computer hardware and software. Theese things will not protect us from getting into accidents or having cars crashes which should be our main focus.\n\nEven though they are taking away the concept of people having to drive the cars they are not preventing anything that could happen or that needs prevention. People may think that having a driverless car would keep them from having to do the work themselves. Whn really what would happen is that they would have to pay more attention to everything around them, which would cause even more work. The cars would need to supervised more than they do now, because they would be moving and need us to take on more responsibility in controling the car. This could end up not working, because the cars could end up going out of our control. Which could cause more problems for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion I think that this \"Face on Mars\" is a landform. For one, we have never seen an alien or have any trace of aliens. I think that we think it has something to do with aliens because it is in a face shape like us. But honestly, huge rocks or huge meterorites could have caused it to look like that. Also there hasn't been any sight of life on Mars because of the conditions. If humans couldn't live on Mars, then how could aliens?\n\nHuge rocks and huge meters crash into the planets and moon all the time. I honestly think that it is the rocks or something in space that caused this. I don't think that there is any sight or any posssible way that there could be life or aliens on this planet.\n\nWhen they went to go see again and go check out the \"Face on Mars\" they didn't see anything, there was no alien monument. They also talk about how it is very hard to be able to see the \"Face on Mars\" I think that if there was a possiblity that it could be a bout aliens and this \"Face on Mars\" appeared because of aliens then there wouldn't onlly be one face. I think that if there were tons of face looking landforms then maybe there could've been life on mars for aliens. Since there were no other faces that could've been another alien, I don't think that there is a way that this has anything to do with aliens.\n\nIt also states in the passge that you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. He states that if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids that you would be able to see them.\n\nIf you could make things larger and see farther into the picture than I think there would've been more to find. There wasn't any other sign of aliens found in the picture. I think aliens for sure having nothing to do with this, but at the same time they could have.\n\nI think if scientists really were able to go and see this i think they should study the face more often to see if there is any evidence of any other alien or any other landform that has to do with them. My personal opinion is that it has nothing to do with aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To inform fellow citizens about advantages of limiting car usage you would have to tell them everything. Like how residents from Germany upscale community are suburban pioneers and they have given up their car's. Street parkng, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in there district. Why is this forbidden? i just don't get it. Car owners buy there own space, for $40,000 along with there home. In Europe passenger cars are reponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States.\n\nIn the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car reduced. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new federal. So fellow citizens should help them out with there limiting car usage. they sure have a lot going on. Like in the end of car culture. There expanses and suburban ideals had long been one of the world's prime car ciltures. But American's love affatr with its vehicles seems to be cooling. Its seens like they don't mind.\n\nIf i was a big huge fellow citizen i would help out with what there going throuh because i don't think this is right. For them to be having to pay so much more then what we have to pay is not cool. What would we do without car's we can't walk everywhere. That wouldnt be right. They say te day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid 1990s.\n\nWhat about if it was raining how are we suppsoed to get to work or get food. we need a car to get to places. They say the rain hasn't stopped people from participating. But i think it has stopped them. Therefore we need are cars to get to where we need to be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present day, people tend to use social media in order to stay updated with the world as well as with their loved ones. One of the main advantages of using social news is you can post anything freely whether it's some sort of news or images, whereas social media has a negative impact on our life as well. People can scam you or use your personal data.\r\n\r\nTo begin, using social publishing has many advantages because it is the source of conveying messages to your loved ones and it provides us with different platforms to stay aware of everything that happened in any corner of the world. For instance, in 2019, news of Coronavirus that originated from china spread all over the universe through social media apps. Thus, the other countries kept precautionary measures at that time to prevent themselves from the virus.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, social radio apps has also negative influence on human life because there are people who hack public accounts and blackmailed them to meet their demands. Therefore, in this , sense social television has disadvantages too. For example, nowadays a group is active on social media that is hacking accounts of political leaders of many countries like the USA and Pakistan.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, it is clear that there is more benefit to using social media as compared disadvantages. So, the disadvantages are outweighed by the interest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author ends story statement fail something need time dust try When Saeng fails driving test disappointed After failing test went greenery saw flowers homeland Then sh bought hibiscus It reminded things different And thing change go different place Sometimes nt pleasant first get use Like first saw geese flying V though strange But farmiliar After failing driving test Saeng learns even though things nav change needs able try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, many people are concerned to discover the history of their residence. This essay will explore what might be the causes and methods of how society can find out the information. \r\n\r\nThe primary reason for exploring their residence is due to the huge investment in owning a property. Therefore, they are keen on taking precautious measures to secure their financing, which can be threatening if the property has terrible notorieties. For instance, if a criminal act has occurred in a building or a place, such as murder or others, people fear such incidents will somehow happen in the future. This bad reputation could drop the market value of the place. Besides that, homeowners are more concerned about the durability of their house structures due to climate change that affects every continent in the world.\r\n\r\nThere are various methods to discover it. The first one is to find any news related to the districts you live in on the internet. Secondly, to interview local residents in the town as they have been living in a particular area for a long time, they must have heard many myths as well as experienced some by themselves. In this case, individuals can acquire first-hand evidence. Thirdly, paying a visit to the construction office as they can provide the details about materials to build the houses. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in many countries, people are more intrigued by the history of the places they intend to live in, for various reasons such as their families' safety and money investment. There are many approaches to find out how the houses are built: internet, local persons and offices.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New development for cars would be a great idea because the world is constantly changing. People who are developing new things like cars are making the world more advanced. It would be a great to have new technology so people can live easier.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author talks about both the pros and cons of having new devolopment for cars. They discuss types of cars that are newer, and how they could be better for the environment. Later the author talks about sensors. The author tells the readers that \"within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" That proves that even old technology can advance itself within short amounts of time.\n\nNew developments are amazing things that happen in this world because the smarter, and more advanced the world gets the easier people can live. Scientists should go beyond car and phone advancements, and move on to bigger subjects like finding more cures for diseases. Overall, new deveopments are a great idea, and should keep being pursued.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars of Tomorrow\n\nThere is something being bettered everyday, and in this case, it's cars! The cars of the future or also known as the \"Driverless Cars\" have been on road since 2009 and have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Different methods/techniques have been tested in the direction of the development of future cars, such as cables embedded in tracks that send radio signals to receivers in front of cars, magenets with alternating polarity, the list is never-ending. Although these automobiles have been driving to near perfection, there's always room to improve.\n\nThe prompt asked us to give our induvidual point of view on the \"Driverless Cars\", and in my opinion they're great, but like I said previously, they, just like everything thing else needs improvement. The cars have drove for nearly seven entire years on a perfet track record of zero crashes and that's pretty darn good. The thing about the automobiles is that they're not completely driverless, the cars need a person active while the car's active. That was a brilliant idea i thought, having an active person at the wheel while the car was on the road is so much more safe than to have a person in the backseat (theoretically) while the car is in motion. Adding up all aspects of the car, it's features, and feats, I say its a tremendous step in the technology world and I believe it will thrive in the modern world. There's nothing wrong with trying something new and especially if it has something to do with things people use eveyday.\n\nThe \"Driverless Cars\" will be great in the future and are perfect now, knowing that they've yet to crash or have an accident. Having cars that can drive pretty much by itself is a tremendous step, having those on the road would be a major feat to overcome. The Driverless Cars make the future safer and less expensive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think that completely driveless cars are a bad idea. As a 16 year old, I'm finally the legal age to receive my licenses, but I can't receive my licenses if I don't have a car to drive. With driveless cars, we are literally allowing cars to think for us.\n\nIf driveless cars do become the new thing to have, what would the driver do? The driver would simply stop paying attention to the road, and the car would do everything for them. With the car doing everything for them, more drivers would focus their energy and attention somewhere else, causing more accidents. With more accidents, who would be at fault? Would it be the driver, or the company?\n\nHow will the laws be made in order to keep others safe if the car happens to break down? With actuall drivers driving a car their attention, and energy is on the road they're driving on. If they do cause an accident, there's cars that are made to prevent an accident before it happens.\n\nBeing able to drive a car is a privilege, and with driveless cars, we're taking that privilege away for others who have waited so long to be able to drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all, if i were to inform citizens everywhere about the advantages of car usages, then i'll say this. we find ourselves to go to many different locations by car each day, and what i mean by this is that it is an advantage. while there are many countries who claims that cars are an advantage to us, there are a certain few places and citizens who want to make a change to this. By changing, they mean getting rid of or forbidding the use of cars. to many people, the first step to this is to forbid the uses of street parking, driveways, and home garages.\n\nEven though this makes a bit of sense, i believe that a good reason for doing this would be because of the harmful fumes that cars release that pollute the air that we ourselves breathe in. there is also proof for this as well, for example, It's said that in Beijing, China, is known to be one of the most polluted cities in the world. this is a shocking fact. although we recieve this devastating news, i believe that we can make a no-polluting world by not using our automobiles for the time being, i can say that although this might not permenantely make the air cleaner, but we can if we just prevent ourselves from using our cars.\n\nNext comes this, we are also aware on how in Bogota, Colombia, that there is little use for cars, since they are only permitting the transport of buses and taxis. however if a violater is caught driving his own vehicle, that person will recieve a $25 fine. there are even a number of people who have claimed that it's a great way to take away stress and lower air pollution. and if this keeps up at an average pace in the next few years, Bogota, Colombia will be confirmed as a clean and non-polluting place.\n\nThen comes a known fact of where people are starting to least often drive cars over the past few years, and this has been proven true since many citizens are realizing that it has to be the fact alone on that people are less likely to get their licenses or that they may be dealing with a bit of money trouble, and that the unemployed are less likely to work any longer.\n\nLastly, as it comes all down to these facts, i still believe that we may one day drive our automobiles without doing anything harmful to our enviornment, and at the same time, our automobiles are being useful every single day, since it is another way of getting around to places in where we need to be. such as jobs, going to school, and many more. it may be difficult to believe my opinion on this, but it will get much more simplier as it goes on to progress itself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars is thought to be many different things; a mesa, proof of alien lifeform,and some say it looks like Egyption Pharoh. I and the NASA corporation belief it to be a mesa.\n\nThe Face on Mars has been a hot topic for 25 years. The Mesa, a landform common around the American west, is just a natrual landform. The 1998 photo of the Mesa truely revealed that it was only a natraul landform that's shadow may apear as a face. The picture proved there was no Alien lifeforms.\n\nThere was few scientist who thought that it was a Alien artifact, but the picture of 1998 provved them to be incorect with there theroy. The photo of 1976 was prooven to be an illusion of photograghy.\n\nScince there was a cloudless day in cydonia there was a chance to get a better picture in 2001. This picture Prooved that even if there were little shacks or pyramids they would show up in the picure cleary. There was no shack or pyramids in the picture.\n\nThis prooves that there is no aliens on or around the Face on Mars. If there is Aliens on Mars they arn't close to the landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of driverless cars. I am against these cars because they are not completely independent, they could cause accidents, and they will develop conflicts between the manufacturer and the driver. These cars could cause a dramatic change in the driving society.\n\nI am against these cars because they are not completely independent. \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" This means that the driverless cars are not compatable to fully being able to drive alone. The driver in the car would have to be alert when a situation has approached. If there was an incident where the driver was not paying attention or the signals would have not went off , the driver would have never known to take over, which would cause serious incidents. The driverless cars should be able to be commited to the road fully.\n\nAlthough the Driveless Cars are tested, they could still cause accidents. Accidents could occur if the driver is not aware of the car being in need of help with specific traffic issues. Also, anything could go wrong with technology. These cars lack human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. These situations could cause an even more devastating effect.\n\nFurthermore, these cars will cause conflicts with the law between manufacturers and drivers. Laws would have to be changed in order to fit with the development of these driveless cars. If a situation occurs and the driver is hurt, whose fault is it? If the car is driving, will it be the manufacturer? Or, if the driver is in control and there is an accident, how would anyone have known? These cars should be more reliable.\n\nIn conclusion, I am against the development of driveless cars. I am against these cars because they are not completely independent, they could cause accidents, and they will develop conflicts between the manufacturer and the driver. These cars could cause a dramatic change in the driving society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. We think that Venus is like similar with earth but the one differnce is that it is hotter than the Earth. Venus is a amazing place to live but you can not live any longer period of time than a few hours.\n\nWith out question, we think that Venus is similar to earth but the temperature in Venus is hotter than earth. The similarity to Earth with Venus was not only the distance, also the density and zise too. It stated \"Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too\" ( The Challenge of Exploring Venus section 2). The problem to that is living in Venus would be really difficult, that even the spacecraft can only survive for about few hours and not more than a decades. In shows in the aritical \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus section 2). It tell us how Venus was similar to the Earth and how long you can you live in Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, that venus is more than amazing place to live but the problem is you can only live there for a few hours instead of a decades. That Venus is really similar to Earth but you can not live in Venus for really long. You can not live in Venus for a long time but you can visit there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again paragraph author uses conclude story In opinion author includes paragraph conclude story order show Saeng committed adjusting new home leaving old one For example story Saeng unable say I mean like kind home without bursting tears This illustrates sorrow inability let go past", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I bored I bored I know would pay iof I flit tookheavers In I hoven I went bathroom eat lunch plaed sellfon I sleped soller I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The faceon Mars it`s greatly known and very popular but thequestion most people ask is weather it was created by aliens or naturaly apeared. And that is exactly my focus. I going to talk to you about weather the faceon mars is naturaly or alien made.\n\nThe face is it alien, well it could be and sense 25 years ago a lot of people think that it is but coinsadinces happen. In the story it says that,\"It would be a good way to ingage the public and attraction to Mars,\" and that right there shows that they want us to believe that and if we didn`t then Mars wouldn`t be as popular as it is today in all the blockbuster movies. So in a way this helped NASA and movie directers so it was a win win.\n\nBut was the face made by aliens it is highly unlikely because the face was descovered in 2001 and it is now 2016, and we still haven`t found life on mars. So my guess would have to be no just beacuse of the fact that we haven`t found life on Mars yet. So how did it happen there was probably a mountian that got chipped by rocks durring a storm and it just so happened to look like a face.\n\nThe face on Mars it`s still popular today and without it wewouldn`t be as educated or know as much about it as we do today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many movies and television shows have had many scenes where an individual is in a car that could drive independently.\n\nCitizens today talk about what will, or could, happen in the future with all of the technology that Google have discovered.\n\nA driveless car may be unbelievable, but it is said to be coming by 2020.\n\nIf this manages to take place, it will be one of the greatest inventions by Google.\n\nHaving a driveless car has many positive accessibilties for individuals.\n\nThe text states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify their driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\"\n\nThe car is in control, but whenever there is human skills that are neccessary for the road ahead, it will notify the driver by a vibration or other notification that is clearly noticable.\n\nNot only are the Google cars already big on technology and highly manufactured, manufacturers are continuing with this wonderful technology.\n\nIn the text it says, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\"\n\nAll of these future improvements on the driveless car will not only help driving handle more driving taks on their own, but improve the safety of the citizens.\n\nCitizens want to live up to the dream. These individuals will want to see what all magnificiant things their future has to hold for them.\n\nThe text states, \"Antilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire, but Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, believes that technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream.\"\n\nThe founder of the Google Car project, Sebastian Thrun, not only wants to finally come up with the almost unbelievable, but he believes he has.\n\nAlthough there are multiple amounts of pros to this amzing progect by Google, there happen to be some cons to the whole driving safety system.\n\nIn the text, it states, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nThis so called \"dream\" may come true, but there is a chance of this technology not working as a result.\n\nThe dream many citizens have for the future driverless car might happen to come true, just like in the movies or on television.\n\nLike Sebastian Thrun said, \"technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream.\"\n\nDriverless cars will be a wonderful experience by many individuals.\n\nThis will be one of the greatest accomplishments by Google.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree, this machine is not valueable in a students classroom. You don't need a machine to tell if a student is sad or happy or mad. You can just ask them \"What's the matter?\" You don't need million dollar tech to do simple reading. That type of tech should be used against terrorist or enemy threats. Not classroms full of harmless studetns.\n\nYou don't need a machine to tell a students' emotions. In paragraph 5 it says \"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" You don't need that type of technology to look a person face and tell them what they are feeling. You could make more friends just by going up and speaking and finding out instead scanning their face with a machine.\n\nYou should be able to just talk to them and ask them what is the matter if they are feeling some type of way. Putting this type of technology in a classrom takes away from the socializing in all schools. It takes away from kids or teens from speaking to one another.\n\nUsing this technology for student in a classroom is a overall bad idea. The things you can do with this million dollar tool shouldn't be used for educational purpose. it should be used to help in government purposes. This type of technology is not meant to be in the hands of careless teens and children so many would be broke in probably the next few months and it would be wasted money down the trash.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With a paradigm shift in social belief and people's fascination about having an enviable career, they tend to become parents at a later stage than the past. There are some prominent reasons for this and I personally believe that it has more negative consequences.\n\nTo begin with, the average year when people get married has increased than that of our ancestors. As a result, childbirth is naturally delayed. According to a recent survey, many young people who start their career after their graduation are more focused on their jobs than having their own family. Besides, a many young people are undecided whether to marry or not. Eventually, when they get married, they are already in their mid-thirties and they take some time to settle and have some financial stability before having their first child. Furthermore, the old belief that a girl should be prepared to manage a family and have children earlier has changed and more wives work in offices than ever. The decline of the joint family has also contributed to this trend as couples solely take the decision of having a baby, unlike the past.\n\nIf we notice the detrimental impacts of this trend has, we would surely try to reverse it. The most cynical outcome of this trend is the number of couples struggling to become parents. It is scientifically proved that infertility rate among couples is higher who try to become pregnant after mid-thirties. Some of the couples eventually break up their marriages due to this and it brings unfathomable social problems. Furthermore, having a child in the early years of marriage make the couple more family-oriented and this eventually help them have a better future.\n\nTo conclude, late marriage, nuclear family structure, and more focus on jobs are the main reasons people become parents at a later stage and this has undeniably more adverse results that the positive sides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenging of Exploring Venus\n\nThe venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to sun. But, long time ago, Venus was propably covered with oceans and it was also possible to survive. The life can be as simple as we are living in Earth. However, Venus still have some things which a living beings needs to survive. This planet has a rocky sediment anf includes such a familiar features like valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nVenus can also conclude as our second option, if we have to choose another place except Earth. But Venus's reputation is a challenging planet for humans to study. Not even a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Sometimes we are closer to the Mars and sometimes we are closer to Venus. This all is because of difference in speed. As Venus is sometimes right around the corner, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land.\n\nNASA has an idea to send humans to study about Venus. To explain the idea of NASA author has used few examples like blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. Author also uses jet airplanes as an example as our jet airplanes traveln at a higher altitude to fly over many storms. NASA explains about the temperature and solar power on Venus for survivle of humans. The temperature is around 170 degrees in Fahrenheit, but the air pressure is going to be close to the sea level of Earth. Solar power will be enough and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Conditions is not really easy but enough for the survival of humans.\n\nIt's important or it's wothy to study about Venus as this is the only planet on space except Earth where humans can survive. And it's research done by NASA explains that humans can also survive in Venus but it's not going to be as easy as we are living in Earth. Venus is often referred as Earth's twin.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human activities have had a negative impact on plant and animal species for a long time. Some believe that is it too late to reverse this impact ,however others think that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. I believe that it is never too late to start taking measures for improving this situation. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, as some people believe there has been a huge impact on the surroundings which cannot be reversed by any kinds of measures. Few such impacts were extinction of few rare species of plants and animals, deforestation, ozone layer depletion. For example, there is a rare plant species known as the Eucalyptus. The oil from this tree is used to cure many ailments and now this tree is extinct due to its vast usage. There are no more traces of this plant available on the planet. These kinds of acts done by humans have done an irreversible impact on nature.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that it is never too late to do something to save the environment. It is accepted that there is huge damage done to the environment but that doesn't mean people keep on damaging the world. There need to be certain measures to save the environment. We can plant more trees where there is deforestation happening, there can be measures to save the species which are about to extinct, we can reduce the emission of greenhouse gases as it affects the ozone layer. For instance, the world animal protection organization have taken measures to save the tigers as their number is decreasing due to hunting. They have laid certain ground rules on the hunters and are creating a safe environment for these species. Such measures help to save the damage done to plant and animal species.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, however how much damage has been done to the environment by human activities, there can always be some measures taken to save the planet. People need to care about their activities and need to keep in concern the damage being done to the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a contradictory view among the people in the current education system. Some believe that countries should prioritize vocational training over tertiary education, however, others oppose this view. As for me, money should equally be distributed to both courses.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, every country requires young talents in fields such as engineering, medicine, and economics. This helps the state to grow at a steep path and to be competitive with other nations in the world market. For instance, some countries such as the UK and USA are acting as a global leader due to forefront technology and highly talented manpower. The jobs available will pay well initially and be secure, but offer narrow scope for advancement and virtually no opportunity to switch career paths. A typical example is that an individual with a university degree, on the other hand, might begin from a lower position but has a higher ceiling on future earnings. It is also possible for them to explore a variety of fields.\r\n\r\nHowever, professional courses are equally important for each country because society requires qualified plumbers, cleaners, mechanics, hairdressers. The vocational courses help us to run a small business like running car maintenance or hairdressing shops. Thus reduces the unemployment rates across the world. For example, in some parts of the world, many people completed part-time courses on electric repairs, housekeeping, and settled in their life by running their own business.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, every nation needs to maintain highly qualified professionals as well as specialized skills individuals. A government should focus on both types of studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern I believe computers benefit society Computers wonderful household object make life easier many ways Computers allow everyday family see new places photos online people internet Computers also provide social networking throught community state even country Lastly computer another resort go trying accomplish something always something internet help There s famous quote goes largest room world room improvement In opinion computers could make room little smaller While experts say computers making people spend much time indoors much time seeing wonders nature outside computer prove wrong The internet wide ocean pictures wordes sounds The computer item organizes entertainment There picture anything imaginaeable internet palm shaped islands frozen tundra You able see penguins southern ice cap ricefields bird s eye view simply moving fingers It s also possible see places see people distance Today people sending pictures via emails People actually sharing memories thanks computer I hope I explained helps make Computers make lives Imagine talking friends ever leaving room This would even impossibility fifty seventy People s social relationship greatly progressed half goes allowed people family friends I ll always positive thing using right way Having house tell individually friend time disney world hastle If put pictures social networking system like facebook twitter memories stored litterally clicks aborton Memories shared thanks social networking ability computer Planing vacation trough job job could take place sport An entire vacation planned confirmed paid thanks computer Jobs would normally take hours researching calling done minuets less using computer This allows people time go fun lives worry plannings Computers allow people compress hours work matter minutes Experts say computers taking away people s lives I would disagree people new places people social networking advanced time could spent planning living", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affected cyclist rode conditions The rode messed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for this argument of these cars. I would love to have one of these cars computer driven cars. I feel like alot of people would love to have these cars becuase you dont have to drive all the time.\n\nthis is a good development of cars becuase alot of people dont like driving all the time when they have to.\n\nIf we have these cars and all the people who have them dont like drving all the time they can have the car that drives for them most of the time and tells you when you need to take control of the car. By 2020 people who dont like driving cars all the time wont have to because by 2020 Mercedes-Benz , Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselfs.\n\nI feel like this would be a great idea so im for this argument. I think that everyone would be happy if by 2020 Mercedes-Benz , Audi, and Nissan have cars that can drive themselfs i feel like everyone would be out in their cars becuase the cars drive themselfs. This i think is a good idea everyone would love for cars to drive themmselfs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming. Driverless cars would not be a great addition to today's modern technology. Today's technology is still progressing and is not yet ready to support a driverless car. Some may believe that driverless cars would be an amazing addition to our modern world, but those who do are wrong.\n\nDriverless cars encourage the bad habit of lazyiness, that too many people already frequently engage in today. With the possiblity of driverless cars, that can do 90 percent of driving, people now have to do less than what they already have to do. Driving has already made life easier for people, it is unnessary to do away with the little work people have to do. Driverless cars will only encourage more projects that will attempt to minimize the work preformed by humans. Thus, creating this attitude of lazyiness and not wanting to have to ever do anything that requires that slightest amount of energy.\n\nThe text states, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" This quote from the text is a prime example of even if technology is ready for driverless cars are people themselves ready for the responsbility that comes with driverless cars. Today, too many people already do not take responsiblity for their actions, so what is to happen if the technology fails and a car wrecks and kills the opposing driver? Should that person be tried for manslughter or should they get to get away with killing an innocent person? People today try to blame that wrong doings on anything or anybody, they are in no position to take on the responsiblity for any accidents involving diverless cars.\n\nThose who believe that driverless cars are a good thing for us would argue, \"Now the driving experience can be alot less boring and more enterianing.\" Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver, says \"The psychological aspects of automation are reallly a challenge. We have to interpret the driving run in a new way.\" Some manufactures want to successfully bring in-car entertainment to driverless cars to prevent people from getting bored. Driving, wether it be in a driverless car or not, should not be a \"fun and exciting experience\". Do people realize that they are in a machine that holds the capability of taking the lives of many? That should not be something fun for you, you should take it with a great deal of seriousness. Scientist, that study the brain, say texting while driving turns off one of the parts of the brain that is used for focusing while driving. What do people think all of the in-car entertainment will affect your brain when it becomes that 10 percent of the time that you must take control and drive?\n\nSome would also argue that technology is up to par and is able to handle driverless cars. The text states, \"Automakers are contining their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\" Technology is clearly not ready if automakers are just hoping that problems ahead will be solved. This mindset will get people killed once they decide to release the car to the public.\n\nDriverless car would not be a great addition to our modern day technology. Our already developed technology cannot support it. Automakers are hoping that problems will be solved. People are not mentally ready to take on the responsibility that comes with driverless cars. Driving should not be entertaing and the entertainment could affect our brains and the ability to focus when its the person turn to control the car. Driverless cars are not worth all of this trouble, so that people can be lazyier than they already are. Are driverless cars worth risking the safety or even the lives of innocent people?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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