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"content": "Although it is considered by some people that the best way to secure a good job is being a university graduate, there are others who think that starting work after school is a better option. From my perspective, deciding to work is beneficial in the field of business, whereas completing university coursework is the most useful in an academic career.\n\nOn the one hand, it is attractive to find work after school, according to some people because they will have the opportunity to gain hands-on experience related to their chosen profession and acquire top soft skills such as time management, leadership and flexibility. This results in promotions and a successful career. For example, not only has the job market been increasingly becoming competitive, but there is also an overwhelming number of applicants for one position in a company. Therefore, it is commonly believed by some people that learning key soft skills can be valuable to a company and having relevant experience in that line of \n\nwork , which can put one ahead of the game when they apply for the position. \n\nOn the other hand , some people think that it is more advantageous to pursue higher education after school. Since obtaining a academy certificate is an indicator of perseverance, passion and commitment needed to study a degree course for three or four years, a university degree is convincing proof of the competence of the applicants. As a result , most employers will be more impressed by candidates who have qualifications from a academy than those with fewer qualifications, which in turn leads educational institution graduates not only to better job opportunities but also to higher incomes.\n\n In conclusion, even though community may vary in their opinions, I think that being a successful career requires a relevant background either in tertiary education or effort experience depending on the type of endeavor and field.",
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"content": "Do you really think aliens exist? It is belived by some that on mars aliens shaped a type of face on the planet. Others belive it is just a natural land form with a funny shape that looks like a face. If you are one of those people who think aliens shaped it you will think differnt by the time your done reading the essay.\n\nSomething very mystereous happened in mars 25 years ago. NASA discovered a landform in mars that looked like a very large face. When NASA looked closer in they decided it looked like a pharoh, which is like an old egyptian god. Ever since NASA revealed the mysterious face has become a big pop icon, has starred in movies and multiple talk shows. There has been only very few scientists who belived the face was made by aliens. NASA was very interested in the face so they started taking closer and closer looks. NASA used more powerful lenses which let you get a better look at it. NASA finnaly figured out it was a natural land form. They even went back more than one time to check and everything still proved it was just a natural landform.\n\nWhat do you think, Is it an alien or is it a natural land form? Facts have proven that it is a natural land form. But all people will never agree if it is an ailen who made it or not. Hopefully this essay proves to you that this face is just a natural land form, but the world might never know.",
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"content": "Should censorship libraries Many people answer question differently I feel absolutely censorship libraries Allowing censorship libaries intrusion rights It contradicts freedom press If someone wants opinion read right I also feel censorship libraries goes freedom speach What writing written speach If someone wants say something able say If mute person wants get point able writing What people consider offensive others If someone finds offensive simply read",
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"content": "People today always seem like trying find something offensive The problem always feels like needs appease people The truth many country going many different ideas thoughts likes dislikes Libraries places knowledgee They keep many differnt books magazines movies people different tastes enjoy library Most people books figure early genre books authors long books like So books usually hard offend people people usually tell right away like book Magazines like books away People know want With magazines though people ususally flip threw pages skim articles They keep skiming magazine find perfect article want read Usually done magazine Music around almost long mankind around There something music soothes human body Music one things ais constantly changing time Before instruments music purely voice centuries went music became advanced Now would nice one type music everybody liked nt There many types genres music would hard find person world liked every type music There people hate change Likewise thet nt like change favorite music types But people changed time would really types music But since many types music always going someone world nt think song nt played Just last century movies came along way advancement Movies use simple would simple plot everyone loved But many people love see technology advance want movies change Movies today special effects love sex alcohol parties fighting list could go Directores try make best movie possible almost like try put enough one thing keep audience movie But go overboard subject least one person red flag go head think offensive Movies suppose enteraaning something people get offended Movies good though They created rating system try give audience fair warning heads audience knows suspect movie It nt matter book magazine music movie always going someone nt like offended There nothing s bad thing It s simply means everyone world So I think come conclusion one person nt like something nt mean next person",
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"content": "ThE author concludEs story paragraph bEcausE mEans whEn thE shovEl grow spring whEn thE snow mElts gEEsE rEturn hibiscus budding shE takE thE tEst So shE wait thE nExt spring takE thE tEst",
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"content": "Books That Are Offensive view point books taken shelfs taken offensive one person Sometimes people get help books offensive others somebody something wrong book help person Everybody able read book want library In library everybody right read every book The idea taking book shelf bad people want read books like Some people problem type book nt like tell people read take shelf If anything put different area move put type book one area mixed When people need help read book look So book offensive help somebody problems nt even move People reason read books offensive We nt know reasons alot If movie good children horid need put place nobody look Kids grown ups nobody needs see movie really bad Usually somebody takes something offensive guilty something know admit People think people write things offensive purpose nt write somebody guilty something live Sometimes reading read wrong misunderstood Everybody book thought offensive next person read might think funny The biggest problem people ca nt read people read fast comprehend correctly I nt feel like certain materials taken shelf found offensive person feeling guilty something If materials moved moved different area shelves totally If taken offensive tell librarian many people say offensive taken shelf",
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"content": "It is a common belief that the students should give a free year after high school graduation. Other belief supports it increases their academic knowledge. I will briefly elaborate in terms of different opinions, by supporting its positive effects.\nIn the modern life, many graduated young people prefer travelling or make their dreams rather than apply a university. Therefore, they discover their real interest and what kind of job is suitable for their characteristic. For instance, the youth have travelled all around the world with just a backpack, particularly Interrail or other programmes have encouraged them in order to survive not belong in a comfortable zone. \nOn the other hand, some people concern about their education without studying any more after their graduation. Due to the travellers get habits not belong anywhere, they cannot adapt the past life. While, this space time year can learn the reality such as responsibility across all living organism. For example, after this discovery, one of them chose in order to be a scientist who keen on the nature. He is a well-known biologist, also a highly rated university lecturer nowadays. To study with high concentrate gets successful, especially if individuals work at their dream job, they would product with a high profit.\nIn conclusion, in my perspective, if the youth has an opportunity to visit abroad or other culture, they would be before beginning something. This gap year can supply an amazing change to them in order to observe and solve the world and humanity.",
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"content": "In todays world students often get board in a classroom. Therefor students dont pay atention when the teather is teaching. The result of them not paying atention leads to them getting bad grades. It would make a great diffrence if schools would use the FACS. There are many reasons why schools should be useing FACS but here are some of the main reason.\n\nOne of the reasons schools should be using FACS is because it would be able to tell if someone was getting frusterated and were to imbarest to ask for help. If teacher knew that one of their students were getting upset with something they would be able to help them to complet there assiment and not just sit there and not do it. If they did not use this they could not tell if the student was getting upset and didnt know how to do somthing and didnt fell comfortable asking for help in front of the class.\n\nAnother reason is they could tell if the students were liking the subjust that they were on. The teacher would be able to see if the students were likeing the way that the teacher was teaching thing so the teacher would know for the next years. This would improve the students grades by the teacher knowing how the students like to be tought.\n\nLast but not least the teacher could tell if something was going on either outside of schools or in school. The teacher would be able to tell if they were upset and they could ask them what was wrong and they could try to help solve the problem. This could improve grades as well by helping the student foces more and help them not be upset.\n\nIf the schools were to use FCAS they should would become a better place for students to learn. The schools would become higher in rank because the studente would get better grades. there for FACS should be used in schools.",
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"content": "There is a new age coming,and with that means change. Most people dont like change but ths change is a good one. Its useing your car less and use other means of transportsion around your city or town. This leads to less smog around a major city and a safer inviorment for children.\n\nTo begin , changing how we travel around the citys and towns of are country's is esental in this time of age. The world is changing how we think and do thing is changing. We are loseing some of are ignorence. The world we live on is running out of oil and that means no more gas powerd cars. To conserve the resorces we have we need to start takeing the bus to work or school. Or Rideing a skateboard to the shop down the street instead of wasting presious resourses that is going to dissaper in 20 to 30 years. And not useing your car is a go thing ,that means less stress on you mind a body. imagin not having to worry about a car payment and having that extra money tohave fun with you'r kids. Useing your car less also means less smog and cleanier air around. For exsample, in Pairs there was alot of smog so they put a ban on cars for two days and it cleared up the city. Now if started doing this more we would help are invierment so much.\n\nSecound off, Not useing your car as much also creates a much safer enviorment for kids. And they can live a more helthy life. And thats what we want, we want to protect are kids a give them a child hood they can look back on. This means you can let your kid outside and not worring about a drunk driver comeing down the street and hitting your kid and killing them. We want the best futer for are grandchilderns children, and know we set them up for good. We need to start designing are towns and city's like Vauban ,Germany. It will make a better and cleaner world for us.\n\nIn conclution, we need to put down the car keys and pick up the bike , or hop on the bus. Because Time is running out. And we dont want it to be to late to change. This is the only thig we got . So lets do it right the firts time and not screw it up.",
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"content": "Introducing this new technology that allows us to see when students are telling the truth on how they feel about an assignment would be very beneficial. With this technology we could see how students respond to certain types of activities and what they find interesting or boring. When a teacher ask a student feels about a particular lesson or assignment they might lie and say the enjoyed it or they found it interesting because that is what he or she thinks the teacher wants to hear. If this technology were introduced into classroom envrioments students would actually recieve education in a way they would find interesting and productive.\n\nStudents can often become bored or loose focus in a classroom envrioment if what is being presented to them is not fun or interesting. With this new technology teachers can truly find out what their students enjoy the most. One of the leading creators, Dr. Huang states that \"'A clasroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored'\". With acess to these types of programs students wouldn't get bored or confused. The author of this article, Nick D'Alto states that \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". If we can tell the facial expressions of a painting from hundreds of years ago, imagine the endless possibilities we could do on livng students. With the acuracy and many beneifts of this tecnology clasrooms would become not only more interesting and maybe even fun but they would be more productive than ever before.\n\nOverall the Facial Action Coding System would be a very useful tool for both students and teachers. With students becoming bored and confused less classroom productivity would increase and even the students grade would increase. Without testing these technologies in actual classroom enviroments we will never know the true impact this technology could have on our learning experience.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted a driverless car? Well then you are in luck engineers are coming up with many new ideas to create such a brilliant car. Almost everyone has seen the crzy automatic driving cars from the movies well its not a fantasy anymore.\n\nGoogle is working really hard to make that fantasy a reality. With driverless cars many things will change, pollution, traffic accidents, adding onto traffic accidents texting and driving will not be such a problem if the car is making it so that you can not be on the phone when the car is running. These driverless cars will be running on sensors, basically helping the car steer its way around objects.\n\nThese cars are not so much driverless then they are just assisting the driver. This \"driverless\" car thing is a great idea but every great idea has some negatives. The car will make sure that the drive has complete control of the car the entire time. Sitting in a car watching it do the work for you could get boring and even tempting to want to take over at times. These driverless cars could malfunction at any given time and with that the driver will also have to be very cautious. This is a no brainer with a car that drives itself the cost is not going to be the price of an average everyday car.\n\nAll in all these driverless cars are going to be a great way to enhance the quality of life. Helping save the world with not as much polution\n\nfrom all the fuel we put into our vehicles. Saving many people with the traffic accidents happening per year this will be really good. This car is all around a great car to keep everyone safe. The car will not even run if the driver is not paying attention to the road, adding on to that the car also will not run if the driver is on the phone at any given time. Driverless cars are our future and I look forward to them and so should you.",
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"content": "Venus is called the \"Evening Star\" for it shines bright in the midnight sky when we can see it. Venus could've supported life at one point in time. Venus is very close in density and size of Earth, some call Venus our sister-like or twin planet.\n\nThe Astronomers are so fascinated by this planet because is so much like earth it could've had life on it at one time. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth,\" the Author stated. Venus also has mountains, craters, and valleys just like Earth. We don't know much about the planet, so we might as well get to a lot more about to see what the possiblilities are of our planets end. \"Our travel on Earth and beyound should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" We should explore and find new things instead of just in our solar system. To know more about space and get a better idea of what is to come an will happen.\n\nVenus could've supported life at one time, some say this is why it's so close in size. It's our \"twin,\" it has a lot of features Earth has. Even though we don't know a whole lot about Venus we hopefully will in the future.",
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"content": "In this modern era, technological advancement plays vital in keeping in touch with our friends and family.It is also a great source of keeping ourselves updated with the latest news.However, it is always sparking debate among the community what is the outcome of this trend.I believe that the pros can definitely outweigh the cons and I will justify my view in upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost benefit is it saves time and maintains good relationships with both family and friends.To explain it further,due to globalization most nation have lived in different states or countries so, it is very day-consuming and expensive if they just travel hundreds of kilometres to meet their relatives.In addition, they also contribute to environmental pollution with the usage of fossil fuels.Therefore, if they just prefer the digital option to keep in touch with their loved ones they save a great amount of time.For example, due to study reasons if students live in other states and every weekend their parents talk to them using video calls or other social media instead of physically going there every weekend they not only have money or time but also help to save the environment.\r\n\r\nAnother reason is 24*7 availability,to elaborate on it ,the new innovation of social news and apps provides around-the-clock service which helps individuals use day anywhere.Apart from that, the news available in apps are up to date.For instance, in the weather ,app people can know upcoming and current weather which helps citizens to decide on their daily chores.Furthermore,in the digital ,mode most of the work is done on the laptop so less amount of paper is used which helps to reduce our dependency on the tree for paper pulp.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some downsides also, individuals are addicted to social television which is very detrimental to their mental health.Sometimes they became the victim of cybercrime and lost money.\r\n\r\nIn addition, usage of this type of publishing isolates them from the real world and they become introverted.At the same time, due to higher amount of screen time also creates many health-related problems such as obesity, eye weakness, and back pain.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are some demerits of using social media to connect with relatives and get the news.However, the merits like easy availability, time and cost saving outweigh the demerits.If people can make some measures then they can save from these negative effects.",
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"content": "It is a general perception that monetary gain is the most significant driving force that keeps an employee or an entrepreneur working. However, in my opinion, this is certainly not the only reason to keep it up.\r\n\r\nTo begin, Happiness and self-contentment while working are the most underrated but paramount measures. For instance, a person who feels truly satisfied carries on with his performance quite consistently and efficiently. On contrary, if he is not content working, money alone cannot put him together any longer and he might switch his current job for a desired one.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the nature of tasks and personal moral values should not be contradictory. This means that a person can only carry on with his effort if it falls within his moral limits and virtuous boundaries. For example, A man with the right upbringing and values cannot stay longer on an earning platform which is not legit. In other words, those banknotes cannot be a consistent motivation in a situation like this.\r\n\r\nThirdly, mental well-being is as important as physical strength. One cannot perform better with compromised mental strength. Moreover, no amount of money can attract him. The working environment matters to some people more than financial values. These are the righteous kind of people who are enough considerate of their mental well-being. They cannot function in a sick or toxic environment where dirty politics is being played and there is no act of justice or fairness served.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although, one cannot deny the importance of financial statistics, the attributes like self-satisfaction, happiness, mental fitness and quality of work are equally or in some cases more important.",
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"content": "I am against the idea of having driveless cars.There are many flaws to the idea of driveless cars. Although the idea of driveless cars sound exciting, there are also many things that could go wrong with them. It is better to be safe than sorry because you can not go back.\n\nDriveless cars can be a great danger to many people. They can always malfunction or go out of control. Technology does not always work the way we plan for it to. In the article it was mentioned that the cars can cause crashes but it would be hard to determine who was responsible for the crash. Can you blame the manufacturer or the driver?\n\nThe driveless cars are illegal in the following states: Califonria, Nevada, and Florida. The cars are illegal in those states until the cars are proven to be more safe. The lawmakers of these states believe that safety is at best with alert drivers rather than driveless cars. The cars can not fully drive on their own and still need help to navigate through traffic or construction.\n\nDriveless car be harmful to many people. The are mostly useless because they still need humans to control them through certain situtations. They can also malfuntion and lose control. They are not proven to work one-hundred percent of the time. If one of the cars were to cause an accident it would be hard to determine who is at fault. It would be much safer to wait until we know for sure that the cars will not malfuntion and figure out all of the flaws of the cars to increase the safety of other drivers on the roads and pedestrians.",
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"content": "As cars become more involved in the technology world, the roads will become a dependable environment to get from point A to B without risking danger. The develpment of the driverless car is a postive advance in technology because of its ability to create a safe, comfortable and smart environment. With roof and wheel sensors, GPS receivers and in-car entertainment centers, self driving cars will save lives and the death rates of driving will decrease.\n\nDriverlesscars will lower the driving death rates dramatically because of their sensors that detect sudden motion or objects near the veichle. The more the sensors advance, the more they are able to respond to danger in a way that is inhumanly possible. Once danger comes into play such as an out-of-control situation or a sudden skid, humans become less dependable to respond correctly in result of the stress they are put under in the rapid situation. The driverless car's ability to make motions based on its surroundings is a positive advance in the technology world because of how many lives it will save.\n\nDeaths caused by texting and driving will also be reduced because of the entertainment systems the driverless car's manufacturers are installing. The entertainment system's ability to shut down once a driver needs to drive will create a safer environment rather than those who have the abiltity to text and drive in their manual driving cars. The heads-up displays in the driverless cars are an effective way to safe lives because it takes away the purpose of needing a cellphone.\n\nAs self driving cars become the norm they will also create a better future for drivers. The driverless car's advances add a positive light to the technology world with its high chance of making roads and highways safer for drivers and decreasing the driving death rates. If all of the features to the driverless cars are safety features, then the environment created for the driver will be impeccable.",
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"content": "Do ever like waiting line store Well I dont also Well I going tell time I inpatient patient Every morning I take bus school I usually get bus stop min early I talk mother Try I got early I made bus stop early min later I decided go back home By time I got home I going late I hurried door I late bus gone I patient On day I going burger get hamburger bacon cheese toaster When I got peace I decided wait turn line like I later I people payed cash regester I finally I ordered burger I done worth wait In conclusion patient everything Sports school home even public I hope story made relise important patient",
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"content": "Do you like to travel around the world, help people from World war II and keep cattle calm, and like to explore?\n\nIf you are intrested in all of theese or even one you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program like I did.\n\nIf you like to travel then you'll love to be a part of the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you will get to travel the world on a boat.\n\nA benifit was I had the chance to see Europe and China. If you join you will probably get to see plenty of new beautiful places you haven't seen before.\n\nAlso\n\nthe view when your on the boat is just magnificent.\n\nWhen your a seagoing cowboy you will be helping people who had damage from World War II by giving them cattle.\n\nThis helps them because these places took serious damage from world war II.\n\nEurope and China probbably had most of their cattle killed so we help by giving them horses young cows and\n\nand mules so they can have milk and meat.\n\nThese cattle will also provide them with clothing to wear.\n\nI took care of the cattle in my years of being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSo if you like to help people and keep animals calm then you might be intrested.\n\nMy last and final reason you should be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you get down time and you get to explore the area.\n\nIf you you're in one of those jobs that gives you no downtime and sll you do is work I suggest you quit and join us.\n\nWhile i was a Seagoing Cowboy we stopped in Greece and I saw the Acropolis.\n\nThis was a breath taking sight.\n\nIn your downtime youmight be able to see\n\nsome amazing sights also.\n\nyou'll get to see thing like you've never seen before.\n\nIn clonclusion you should become part of the Sea going Cowboys program because you get to travel the world, help people that had damge from World War II and comfort the cattle that your shipping to them, and you get downtime to explore where you are and see breathtaking sights.\n\nIf you do join i might be able to teach you more about being a Seagoing Cowboy. I hope you'll consider joining.",
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"content": "Driverless cars in the future would be a sight to see.\n\nDriverless cars let you go to the places you need to go without having to pay attention and letting the car do all the work.\n\nThese high-tech cars would offer a more effecient way of transportation.\n\nThey would provide a more flexible way of transportation than a bus would.\n\nUsing taxis as a way of trasnportation uses a lot of fuel compared to a driverless car that uses half the amount of fuel that a taxi does. These driverless cars could fundamentally change the future of transportation.\n\nOn the other hand, these cars cause some issues.\n\nConsidering how high-tech these cars would be, the prices would be very high therefore not selling as well as a normal car or taking the bus or taxi as transportation.\n\nBuilding the roads for these cars would be extremely expensive to build because of the materials that are used to build them. Some examples of what are used to build these roads are sensors, wires, GPS receiver, and motion sensors.\n\nPlus, due to the lack of a driver's attention, the car could get into traffic jams and then cause wreckless driving.\n\nThese futureistic cars would be both uselfull and damaging to the human race.\n\nDriverless cars are an experience everyone is waiting for.",
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"content": "Since the rise of suburbs nationally and globally, car culture has been an important component of our history and of the typical human experience. Every teenager anticipates the excitement and freedom of a driver's license, our country is \"the birthplace of the Model T\" and \"the home of Detroit,\" and mothers across the globe rely on SUVs and station wagons to haul their children to and from school, soccer practice, Sunday mass, and the like (Source 4). In recent years, however, there is a growing trend of limited car usage around the world as countries promote vehicle-free neighborhoods and as in nations like the USA, \"there has been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year olds getting a license,\" (Source 4). This trend, while seemingly alarming in our technology-dependent universe, offers several advantages, from a better environment to healthier citizens and communities, and encouraging and promoting this pattern may just be as revolutionary for the planet as the introduction of the first car over a century ago.\n\nFrom France to Colombia, first of all, governments have been encouraging limited car usage as a means to better the environment through the reduction of toxic emissions into our atmosphere - after all, \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\" (source 1). As debates have run rampant around the world about global warming and air pollution, several nations have taken initiative and experimented with the effects of this idea. In the district of Vauban, Germany, for instance, \"street parking, driveways and home garges are generally forbidden,\" and as a result of expensive parking spots for those who do choose to operate their vehicles - upwards of $40,000 a pop - \"70% of Vauban's families do not own cars,\" (Source 1). Limited car usage and public transportation is alternatively being promoted in Germany and elsewhere as an attempt to live our day-to-day lives in a way that is healthier for ourselves and the planet. France is one such example - in Paris, for instance, \"one of the most polluted cities in the world,\" \"near-record pollution\" led officials to impose a driving ban to help clear the air, and almost 4,000 were ticketed with a $31 fine as a result of not following orders (Source 2). Free public transit was offered, and a result of the actions of the ruling party, \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog,\" (Source 2). Likewise, Bogota, Colombia annually hosts a program known as the Day Without Cars that has attracted interest from neighboring countries and cities and provides an opportunity to \"take away stress and lower air pollution,\" according to businessman Carlos Arturo, who spent the day bicycling with his wife (source 3). Globally, limiting car usage has resulted in exciting changes for not only the environment, but, surprisingly, public health as well.\n\nThe obesity crisis and lack of healthy social interactions, secondly, both are looming global issues due the rise of supersized fast food and innovations in social media and the Internet, and this trend of limited car usage serves as an unseen, advantageous remedy by promoting healthier people and communities. Without cars, people must find alternative forms of transportation, and in Bogota, for example, during the Day Without Cars, \"millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated...to work,\" and since this campaign began in the mid-1990s, it has seen \"the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" and has resulted in parks, sports centers, and broad sidewalks; considerably less traffic; and the emergence of \"new restaurants and upscale shopping districts,\" (Source 3). A mother of two in Vauban, Germany, Heidrun, Walter, claims that, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" (Source 1). Alternative forms of transportation also allow for increased social interaction - walking with your neighbor on the way to work, your kids interacting while en route to school, or striking up a conversation with a stranger on a public bus or tram are all examples of making connections with others that do wonders for our mental and social health.",
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"content": "Features setting affect cyclist great way His journey would difficult factors crossed path Climate location population effect cyclist In story told cyclist dry climate California heat JuneTheir also lack water must pace sips carefully Therefore also towns making hard get good advice supplies supplies The cyclsit also comes across snake making affected native wild life The dry climate lack water affects doubt The cyclist constantly worried passing dying dehydration The cyclist also gets doubts sees road signs reminding slow going The snake also depressing effect dangers journey All things setting affected cyclist His journey teach though trough determination rewarded You want things bad enough put effort The author also teaches always positive attitude get success",
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"content": "In text features setting greatly affect cyclist For example text states There one sight building structure kind This made cyclist lonely started lose hope finding water Secondly text stated In ironic twist building abandoned years easlier looks ithad Welchs Grape Juice factory This made cyclist lose hope thought building would people got excited Lastly text states GRAPE AND FISH CAMP The sight building gave cyclist hope happiness finding place get drink The settings features greatly affect cyclist s feelings",
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"content": "I believe that the use of this technology would be valuable to use in a classroom full of students. I believe this because instructors must know what their students emotions are like toward the subject being taught. For example, let's say a students emotion is bored, the taecher would then know what his students emotion is like. The instructor may be able to give a 2 to 5 minute survey to his students based on what he can do to improve his teaching skills. Which would therefor give his students a better environment to work.\n\nThe prompt explained a somewhat new computer software that could recognize emotions. It explains what the software can do and how it works. 'The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscle. Movement of one or more muscle is called an \"action unit.\"'(D'Alto), this quote talks about how it reads ones face emotion. Which brings us to a students emotion and how its read. This is where it is valuable, 'But if you frown, the next ad will be different. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming counfused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human insstructor.'(D'Alto). This is where it is valuable this software, it will be able to tell an instructor their students emotion toward the subject and how they'll be able to improve/modify the lesson.\n\nWith this software many instructors would be able to improve on their lessons. Thanks to Prof. Thomas Huang and his colleage many students would be able to focus on their lesson and not be bored again. This is why I believe this technology would be a valuable use in a classroom full of students.",
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"content": "Certain individuals declare that granting the economic assistance and caring of the old population to be catered by the state, while others object this notion, saying that it is the responsibility of the person to preserve the money for their retirement during the youth. My personal perspective is although it is a burden, the authority should fund the elderly crowd because the state has an obligation to do so.\nTo begin with, arranging the financial assistance and looking after the whole elderly community is an extremely difficult task for the government. This is because, the ruling authorities have a plethora of other domains such as health, education to develop, and deploying a large sum for funding the elderly can compromise other sectors. For an instance, recently, Sri Lanka restricted the large annual budget, which was devoted to granting living allowances the elderly, and diverted this budget to the sector of education to be more benefited and productive. However, I disagree with this notion because disregarding the older population is ethically incorrect.\nOn the other hand, implementing strategies to comfort the life of old people is an obligation of the government. In fact, these people productively contributed to the nation during their youth through involving the workforce, and neglecting them in their old age is morally unacceptable. Hence, the country should facilitate their life during the old age. For an example, recently in India, people have protested against the ruling party and compelled to give a pension to all retired individuals because they have served and contributed to the country during their youth. Therefore, I agree with this school of thoughts because the state is responsible for the every category of people in the community.\nIn conclusion, national policies should be established to care and fund the elderly population. This is because, the nation has a strong accountability to safeguard these people, who work for the country, despite the fact that devoting a large budget for the elderly is a great hardship for the ruling party.",
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"content": "Can you imagine a world where no one has to ride the city bus or try to get a taxi? This could happen in the future if companies like Google continue to try to upgrade their driverless cars. This idea is just in the very early steps at the moment, but with more regulated test-drives and advances in technology this could be a reality.\n\nThere are many questions like: If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault? If this technology was put into action before it was ready for every possiblity then the blame would fall upon the manufacturer and the government for it's approval. The only cars that are close to completely driverless still require the human to be in the driver's seat and remain focused at all times if needed to take over in certain situations. Computers do not make mistakes, humans do. If not laced with the best programming and top of the line technology, this car could be a failure.\n\nEverything falls back on the maufacturers. If they can provde the world with a driverless car that is reliable and keeps humans out of harms way it would be amazing. Until the driverless cars are perfected they should not be used by the public. The blame if something goes wrong should only be placed on the maufacturers who were relied on to make a safe and easy alternative to human-controlled cars we use today. riverless cars is an idea that can soon be achieved with the right research and testing.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It can be so teachers are more aware of how their students are feeling, to help produce emotions, and to be aware yourself and friends on how you or they feel. Using this technology in school classrooms is valuable.\n\nTeachers are can be more aware of how their students feel by using this technology for their students. It can help see if the teachers students are interested on the subject they are teaching. Using the technology can see if students are bored with what they are learning. Also it can show on who is feeling down or good. It can help teachers make improvements to benefit both their selves and their students.\n\nThe technology can help produce emotions. Lets say a kid is feeling 50% sad and 50% bored, this piece of technology can help them pe positive. In the text it says \"putting on a happy face actually works\". This would want a kid to be happy and feel a certain way towards themselves. It would improve low self esteem students have. By them having good self esteem or even producing emotions, it can inspire their peers, and others to do so.\n\nYourself, and your friends can be aware on how you feel. You can know how you are feeling to help get to what you would like to feel. With your friends sometimes you can not speak and they won't know what emotion you are feeling. It states that mona lisa on the portrait was feeling \" 83 pecent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This shows the accuracy of the data colllected. Showing that the use of technology helps yourself, and friends be aware, and just know to help, get better, and understand how you or their are feeling at that particular momment.\n\nPersonally this can benefit anyone your family, parents, teacher, recources, friends, and even yourself. I would enjoy knowing of how I am feeling or at least someone knowing how I am feeling. It will benefit for many people and will be a positive change in the world resulting in good feedback. Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.",
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"content": "The author of this story is talking about the procations of how bad it may be on Venus. He goes on about how maybe venus may have been like earth and had wild life and all other sorts of vegation. But he talks about how the conditions are far more extreme than anything humans have encounter on earth. \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar aystem\" even though Mercury is closer to the sun. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earth quakes, and frequent lighting to the probes seeking to land on its surface. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even moore challenginging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric scid in Venus's atmosphere. But at thirty miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close to that of the sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy contions but still survivable for humans.",
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"content": "I would hate driverless cars. Now the only reason why I would hate it is because, I love to drive it is one of my favorite things to do. I would not be able to enjoy that if we had driverless cars, I mean yeah it would be cool but whats the point you will be spending more money then having a car and driving it yourself. No offense to Sergey Brin or anything not trying to crush your dreams but you have to think, this idea takes time, money, people willing to drive, and the strange one on one contact of who will be driving. I personly would only like it is if it would just pull up for you yeah the car driving by it's self would be cool but thats with only the car no one else, see when I read driverless cars I think of someone driving you around like \"uber\", but I what I would like to see is what I saw in The Avengers 2 Age of Ultron when Tony Stark pressed the button on his key fab and his orange convertible Audi R8 drove out of the garage and pulled up next to him. Thats what I want to see a car that can drive it's self but if it can only roll up to you then I would like that to but having someone drive you around would be weird, if it was a limo now thats a different story but other then that, I personly think this is a bad idea until they can master the car that can drive it's self until then keep trying.",
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"content": "Government has many roles and responsibilities to play in the development of a nation and offering better living condition to its citizens. People often tend to contradict whether the primary role of Government is to build its economy or to work on helping the financially weaker people. This essay discusses both the notions and expresses my opinion in the end.\n\nOn the one hand, a section of people believes that governance should be made to accommodate major contribution to the economic boost. This will keep the country stand among the developed nations and increases the overall value of its products and resources in international market. For example, China has seen a greater rise in its overseas market after investing majorly in the improvement of its economy. Hence, investing most of the country's resources in economics enhances its position globally.\n\nOn the other hand, there are different sections of people who think that the focus of the members making the governance should be on providing better living condition to the poor people of the state. Since the masses are the backbone of any state, offering good education, health, accommodation and working conditions will improve the overall performance of the country. For instance, Nepal has allocated 75% of its budget to provide better living facilities of its people, which drew the attention of developing nations to start new businesses in that nation. Thus, making efforts in improving the living conditions of underdeveloped sections of people is highly beneficial. \n\nTo summarize, the two major areas where the administration can be targeted is discussed briefly. In my opinion, the Government should work on balancing both in improvising its economic status and in making the condition of under-developed people better.",
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"content": "The author supports his idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despiting the dangers by explaining how its the closest planet to us. Venus used to have oceans just like earth. Tare some details the author give us in the passage about enus being an worthy but dangerous planet to explore.\n\nIn paragragraph 2 he explains how its the closest planet to earth in terms to density and size. Its also closest in distance to us at certain times. Its dangerous because they sent several space craft and it only lasted a few Hours after it landed. Thats probably the reason why not a single spaceship has landed in more than three decades ago.\n\nIt would be hard to land there and stay ther because of the heat and the carbon dioxide. the atmosphere is almost 97 pecent carbon dioxide which would make it impossible to breathe in. The average temperature is over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit. the pressure is also ninety times greater than what we experience.\n\nThe scientitist wouldnt be able to take rock or gases off the planet so they would have to get close and take huge risk. NASA s working on studies for venus like they simplifie electronice and made silicone carbide that has been tested in chamber simulatin wich could last up to threee weeks. He thinks its because of human curiosity and will likelyy lead to many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThese are some of the examples of the author using details in the text showing why he beleives ecploring Venus is worthey other than all the danger.",
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"content": "Several individuals opine that all youngsters should do some work voluntarily to help society.I consider this approach to be positive owing to its clearly seen benefits such as improving the social circle of young ones and reducing the burdens of governments.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the numerous benefits juvenile can acquire by doing social services for free, the primary one is improvement in the social circle.To be more specific, there are always more chances of development in working together instead of doing everything all alone so adolescents will be able to improve their social circle by helping society in their leisure time.For instance,a survey was conducted by a news channel underlying the fact that 80% of volunteer teenagers accepted that they came across many different ideas to solve problems while working in society. Hence, adolescents are getting benefits like meeting new people, getting more knowledge and developing their friend circle by doing free services in their surroundings .\r\n\r\nMoreover,I agree with this trend because it is working as a helping hand to the government.To be more precise ,when individuals work for society, automatically,they are reducing the work pressure on the government. Consequently,that time and money can be used to improve any other particular field. For evidence,the prime minister himself admitted in an interview broadcast on national television that volunteer work is helpful in making new policies and they consider these services for sure before planning any new project.Therefore, the attitude of working for helping society even for free is highly beneficial for the government.\r\n\r\nIn recapitulation, I agree with this notion due to its merits such as developing social skills in juveniles and helping the government indirectly.",
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"content": "Using the same technology configured using the Facial Action Coding System into school technology would be a valuable tool in the classroom because the often hidden signals or vibes students show can often give teachers mixed feelings about the effectiveness of their lessons or how student are being treated emotionally by others, but this is still something that we must not make this something that interfears or plays with the personal feelings of the students. It would be a valuable addition to any classroom for its in-depth look into how the information is reaching the students, how they are reacting, and what the teacher can do differently to get the most out of thier lesson plans.\n\nEspecially in the mornings and end of the day, students' laziness, tiredness, or anticipation to get home can often disturb with how teachers percieve how their lesson plans are effecting the child. With the same Facial Action Coding System in our own school computers, online activities and assignments can track the emotional responses of the students while they work such as their attentiveness. Since this technology is, \"compared against a neutral face\", teachers will be able to witness firsthand their student's reactions. Oftentimes, early morning weariness or late school day excitement can fool the teacher's perception of the situation, but with the analyzing of the six basic emotions using \"video imagery\" of the, \"characteristic movements of the facial muscles\", this technology would be able to offer to give an accurate conclusion to the student's reactions to each lesson.\n\nAnother commonly addressed situation is when students become \"confused or board\" with an assignment; both of these natural reactions show that the challenge level is not suited to the student's level. Teachers often want to offer help to the confused and challenge or entice board students, but these emotions are often not shown to the human eye. Especially with confused students, they hide this sense of confusion from the teacher to avoid embarassment. However, with this new technology, students who need more attention can be noticed. With the software's facial recogntion using minor muscle movements, it can make a conclusion without the student fully showing the emotion. With this in depth look, teachers are able to provide tutoring for those who need extra explaination and modify of their lessons for individuals who are not finding interest or challenge in the current lesson. With this technology, teachers will be able to realize how challenged each student needs to be even when they put up a ficade.\n\nAnother way that this teachnology can offer help to the students is with the daunting and huge school problem of bullying and depression before it leads to events much more serious. Since this technology picks up on feelings such as fear or saddness, these indications could be the first warning signs of when a student is taking their first steps into one of these two situations. Such as with the example of politicians and celebrities, even fake smiles are attributes will be able to be seen through. This is a serious problem in our day and age, so if these signs are reported reguarly and continuously, this may be the closest a student comes to calling for help. With this information not being able to be tricked through false emotions, students can recieve the mental and emotional help or stability they need.\n\nDespite this great new innovation as well as all of the new data teachers can gather on their methods of teaching, we must ensure that this technology does not dive into the personal emotions students want to keep to themselves. Because many schools are now having take-home Chromebooks or Ipads, the school board needs to make sure that the students have thier own emotional security when at home. Teachers need to be careful and be reminded that there is a boundery between checking up with these emotional resonces for lesson planning and interfearing with the student's personal life. Otherwise, stuents will feel insecure both in and out of school because their core emotions such as a recent breakup might be revealed.\n\nFacial Action Coding Systems for schools would allow teachers and students to more understand each side's perspective, so the students can be helped to the fullest extent they can be taught. This simple idea is building off of the simple idea of everyday empathy into the perspective of our school technology. This new technology would come with a pricetag, but being able to more effectively teach in the classroom would be well worth the money. Human emotions can be a difficult factor to implicate seen with examples such as the varying emotions with The Mona Lisa, but this technology will allow us to revolutionize our schools into an education build by the reactions of students and the lesson modifications of teachers.",
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"content": "Material achievement has been discussed at a high frequency in some countries; people widely involve this topic in every aspect of their lives. This essay will give two possible reasons for this phenomenon and explain the negative impacts on society.\nTwo major causes keep people lingering on this topic. Firstly, the difficulties in earning a living in some countries have significantly drawn people's focus on finance. For instance, more job opportunities are needed for job seekers in countries with low productivity. Besides that, in many low-income countries, people have to endure low pay; in some extreme cases, their earnings can not cover their spending. Therefore, tremendous anxiety cause people from these countries constantly talk about their financial situations.\nOn the other side, flaunting is becoming the mainstream mindset in some countries. Commonly, in some countries that just escaped poverty, the increasing spared money makes showing off possible. People in these countries display their wealth by owning luxurious items, such as branded bags or jewelry. Therefore, money naturally becomes essential in their conversations.\nAlthough the reasons for money focusing vary, it might develop into risky societal factors. If the frequent discussion of finance is due to insufficient employment or inadequate wages, it is an alarm to the governments to carry on measures of boosting industries' development. Otherwise, riots might be expected and harm social safety. Furthermore, this widespread discussion highly leads to material comparison, which harms morality and even allows crimes to occur. When individuals obsess with showing off, they feel the shame of disposing of the downsides. To maintain a perfect image- especially a wealthy appearance, some people even turn to crime, such as stealing or robbery.\nTo conclude, folks popularly discuss money for various reasons, such as the demands of work or psychological factors. However, the phenomenon is not a positive sign to society and most likely indicates the upcoming crisis.",
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"content": "I believe that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers because its the closet planet to the Earth . NASA is thinking about sending human to study Venus . Wouldn't it be fun to go visit Venus ? Think about all the stuff you coud learn about like how warm it is , Whats there , and what made people start calling it\n\n\" Earth's twin .\"\n\nBecause Venus is near the sun its very hot there . The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit , and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then Earth . In Paragraph 3 it states \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth ; such as environment would crush anything a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our pceans an would liquefy any metals . \"\n\nVenus is referred to as Earh's twin because its the closest planet to Earth in density , distance , and szie . Since , Venus is around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world . An spaceship hasn't touched down on Venus o more than three decades .\n\nSee learning about Venus is very worthy despite the dangers . Its always great to learn about another planet . Especially the ones near us .",
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"content": "Using cars can be a damage to our enviroment. It could cause smog and that can damage our lungs. According to the article \"Paris bans driving due to smog\", it says that \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" What Paris is doing is correct they want to get rid of the smog and the only way to do it is to get rid of the cars. Paris has more smog then other European capitals. Somes other type of trasportation a person can take instead of cars are hiking,skating, take a bus and also walking.\n\nIn the article \"In German Surburb,Life Goes On Without Cars\" Heidrun Walter states \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Having a car is always stressful you always have to think if your car needs gas or your always stuck in traffic. Without a car we don't have to worry about things like that. Not having a car is always helpful for people's body, they go out more for walks and that helps them be more active. in the article \"The End of Car Culture\" they are asking them self \"Has America passed peak driving?\". In these year there are not some many cars in the streets as there used to be. People perfer to take a bus or ride there bikes to work.\n\nUsing a car can also be a benift. How can people get to places that are far away, not by walking or not taking the bus. What happens if the theb route your taking dosen't go where you need to be. The perfect solution is getting a car. You can car-pool your friends. However the gas price keeps going up. All the money you spend on your car bill. Use it for taking you family to eat or the one year family trip. In the article\"\" a mother says that her 19 and 21 year old are not interested in getting there driver license \"They are interested but it's not a priority. They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public trasportation or car-pool with friends.\" I would perfer to take the bus or walk somewhere then to go on car. In the bus you can meet new people and make a friendship. And walking is a good form of exercise.\n\nIn Conclusion limiting car usage is good, there would be less smog and it can be a health environment for the oldest and youngest persons living in this planet. Limiting car usage you can also take it as a form of exercise, walking, taking your bike to work or school. And also,why waste all your money on your car bill?.SAVE UP!!.Lets limited our car usage.",
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"content": "Some people consider that technology has made people's life difficult so it is better to not to use it. I strongly disagree with this statement because it has made life easy and united people which helps to ease the life of people.\r\n\r\nFirstly, technology has made life easy by reducing physical efforts at difficult jobs. Labours had to carry heavy loads at construction work. Automated machines that carry heavy weights had made such work easy. Further, housewives used to wash clothes with their hands but now they can easily wash these in washing-machines. For instance, in warehouses automated machines load heavy products earlier men used to perform this. Hence, technology has made difficult jobs easy and made the life of people easy because they do not need to preform difficult work with huge physical efforts.\r\n\r\nSecondly, technology has connected people through social media. Now they can share thoughts and ideas with their closed ones. They can stay in touch with relatives and friends. This all is feasible due to technology. This has become a medium to exchange thoughts. Humans need to be social to feel relax and better. Social media platform helps them to stay interacted. For instance, a recent research stated that social websites help people to fight against the sense of loneliness. Therefore, people can share their thoughts and feel better which make their life less complicated. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, technology has made life easy not complex. I disagree with this statement that this should not be used because this made difficult jobs easy and connected people globally.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nWe should not keep the Electoral College. Every year it is a close election due to the Electoral College. In the system of the Electoral College the voters don't vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors, whom the slate of electors then elect the president. The Electoral College is a disaster and is very unfair to all of the voters, it's outdated, and irrational. I know the Electoral College has been around awhile but it seems to make things difficult. Things should be kept simple when it comes to voting for the president. It's unfair to people because there vote could not even count, it's up to the slate of electors. The Electoral College consist of too many voters, it's not public getting to vote, it's pretty much just the slate of electors. It's almost like they are telling us that we have no choice in which kind of method people want to use. It's not fair to of how they elect the president. The method the Electoral College should not be in use anymore, it should be changed to a popular vote. The Electoral College cause the biggest election crisis in a century. It focuses on the tight races in the \"\n\nswing\n\n\" states. That is my arguement of why we the people of America should not keep the method of the Electoral College system. Abolish the Electoral College!",
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"content": "Based on the positive footprints that graduated folks can have on societies,some individuals believe that studying does not have any advantage for the person,who has pursued that.However,in my point of view,it similarly can have some affirmative impression on people's lives.Nevertheless,both sides are uttered here.\r\n\r\n One of the most highlighted benefits of education for juveniles has to do with their social communications.As a vivid case,not only their personal activities but also their professional roles would undergo drastic changes for the better if they had the experience of interacting with others,which is provided as an opportunity in pedagogical centres.To enlighten,they can either convince an employer to recruit them or make a connection with whom they are absorbed .Furthermore,it plays a critical role in both their future occupations and likewise their financial situations as offspring.For instance,if pupils have enhanced their knowledge during their education period,they would conquer their rivals in grasping a vocational vacancy,or even they may utilize the linkages that used to emerge in classrooms.\r\n\r\n On the other hand,they would have an ignorable effect on the flourishing of societies while they would participate in scientific research.To illustrate,more inventions in the realm of engineering and, as well, revolutionary steps in medical sectors would be witnessed if the majority of folks have completed their university courses.Moreover,the dependency of countries would plummet sharply,when the number of experts skyrockets.For example,adequate experts are prepared to be exploited for prosperity in various realms,from economic to military,which has taken place in China.Quite contrary to their crowded population,not only do not they require other vicinities to support them but also they export their products to other parts of the world.\r\n\r\n To conclude,while some people allege that pedagogical institutions are just beneficial for societies,to me it is vital for both nations and folks themselves.Although it provides the infrastructure of flourishing for the whole of a country,its merits for individuals' success should not be rejected,something such as better occupations and higher salaries.",
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"content": "It is argued that there is no chance for tourists to take responsibility in protecting the environment and culture of host countries. However, I disagree with this view and believe that this is a worthy aim that can be achieved by various ways.\nFirstly, if everyone was equipped with the knowledge of cultural diversity and the vital importance of the environment, they would be more aware of their behavior. For example, children should be educated to avoid throwing rubbish into surroundings or touching fragile historical objects in museums when they travel abroad. Besides that, western holiday-makers who flock to tourist destinations in Asian countries should wear suitable clothes because they are insensitive to local youngsters there. This could prevent children from copying negative attitudes such as rowdiness and outbound tourists may set a good example of good manners.\nSecondly, it is possible to promote cultural differences through both local and international media in order to reduce the risk of having unintentionally offensive actions to indigenous practices. The clearest example of this is that cow which is an edible animal in most countries is a sacred animal and is worshiped in festivals in India. Without such knowledge, tourists may bring with them cow meat and this could leave a bad impression on locals.\nFinally, local authorities could enact and enforce strict rules on protecting the environment and core traditional value, which could act as a deterrent. In Singapore, for example, throwing away garbage, even a small thing like chewing gum could be fined severely and this rule is widely-known in many nations. As a result, every tourist coming to this country abides by rules and makes efforts to preserve historical sites as well as natural scenery.\nIn conclusion, I would contend that sustainable tourism development could be achieved through education, media, and laws, and tourists could definitely become culpable for the environmental and cultural problems.",
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"content": "People say laughter shortest distance two people A I saw true I met girl named Three years ago I city swinging wondering would hurt I jumped I took chances let go swing chains flying air noticing unbalanced feeling falling chest everything slowing temptation happen I hit ground vast Sticking landing fail getting nt much success either I felt hands upon shoulder arm I looked helper saw girl Not girl gorgeous girl A girl green dazzling eyes stop angry rhino charging toward hair flowed wind soft gentle skin would make think could hurt soft was CAPS Was I could squeeze CAPS okay asked concerned tone CAPS I m fine forgot stick landing Thanks helping um whats name I returned welcome whats name giggled said name CAPS want walk around I struggled vocalize CAPS I mom soon stated walk around stopped monkey dome started asking random question s person answer I figured years old favorite color baby blue always wanted doctor walked around playground talking past memories something happened past I asked brother sister response brother two sisters While I listening I noticed deep thought asked thinking quickly replied CAPS wondering I m happy well could I m making feel good laughter Or could charms working I replied accent CAPS definitely barely got words cause laughter Suddenly car horn honking said goodbye s left I sat watching car go road hoping see way I knew wouldnt mom I moving city small town half way across country Turning around walking back toward house last night city I could think little bit laughter became friendship",
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"content": "When I nine years old I took homework home I showed one older brothers homework He look started helping Then couple answers To show I I didnt really know homework So homework told home work So I started homework I questions correct But realy hard question T wanted ask older brother But instead I didnt work So I",
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"content": "The make of Mona Lisa smile will be tough because she had 2 percent of anger and 9 percent of disgusted. Mona Lisa is only at 83 percent happy, so she need to remove those anger and disgusted. People makes many emotions, so they can express how they feel. When people are in a fight, they showed their anger which include emotion. Eckman have many basic emtoions, and it can also associated each with characteristic movements of their facial muscles.\n\nFirst, people have many different emotions. Most of humans would have trouble describing each favial trait. Whenever someone tightens their lips that mean that they are in anger. Computer can recognize the subtle facial movements that human use to express how they feel. When someone make a movement of one or more muscles that is called \"action unit.\"\n\nThen, many characters can make a movements of facial muscles. For example, when you are surprise, you have your mouth open and raises your eyebrows. Each expresseion that people makes is compared against a neutral face. Muscular action units indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one.\n\nFinally, making a communication with others will also showed your facial expressions. You can tell how your friends is feeling by looking on their faces. Computers can tracks your facial movements and expressions. Computers stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. For example, computer can recognize when you are becoming confused or bored.\n\nIn Conclusion, Making a facial movements and expression while communicating with others is important because it will tell the others how you feels. Mona Lisa don't smile often, but the computer can make her face smile by using the imagery. Facial impression and movements are not just for communicating it can also be in while looking at someone or reading a books.",
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"content": "This technology could be the next big thing.\n\nIn the article they tell us how \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition sofware tracks these facial movments-In a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\n\nBy weighing the different units, the sofware can even identify mixed emotions.\"\n\nIt also gives examples of the what the pros are, such as \"a classroom computer coud recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" this was predicted by Dr.\n\nHuang.\n\nthis would help many teachers figure out were exactly thier students are in thier classes and were they are confused just as the quote states.\n\nIt even gives insight onto just how powrful the program is with \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"\n\nWith all the teen suicides and pressure from work and such this could be really benaficial twards getting to the scource and asking if thry are alright.\n\nAgain this code could be really great for students, giving us more insight into what they need and dont understand and then developing farthur into that.",
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"content": "Classrooms are a place where students come to learn, typically by a traditonal teacher. The teacher can she change what he/she teaches depending on how the students are feeling, but for the most part their job is to teach the lesson that they are assinged to teach. They are also supposed to comply to their kids about grades, student-student relationships, etc. If a computer takes the job of a teacher and bases how it changes the regimen of the classroom on facial features, it still could not hold the value of a human teacher.\n\nTo begin, what would a computer do if all the students were malcontent about the lesson? Based on the article, the computer would \"modify\" its lesson based on the classes emotions torward that certain lesson. Would the computer scrap the lesson as a whole? Yes, the computer would modify the lesson but it could not possibly know how much is too much. A good teacher would stick to that lesson even if the lesson is deemed \"boring\" by the students. The lesson could possibly be important later on a test, ACT, SAT, ISTEP, etc.\n\nNext, a computer such as the Facial Action Coding System, could not reason with a student if they miscalulated a emotion. If there was some kind of glitch or malfuntion within the system and it doesn't recognise if a student is confused. This would cause a major problem, as it would likely end up in that student's grade being effected.\n\nLastly, the computer could reognize the students emotions, but it couldn't help the students out if their was an in-classroom issue that needed to be adressed. What would happen if a student is sad for other peronal reasons? The computer would take those facial expresions and altar the lesson due to something that has little to no realtion to school. A teacher could adress the situation and talk to the student if him/her feels that it is nessesary.\n\nThere is nothing like human comminication, and computers are growing to be like humans each and every day. A teachers value does not only come from teaching. Their overall role has much more value than a computer will ever have in a classroom, even if they can read a student's emotions.",
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"content": "The lack landing area Also body dirigible Swing Is another obstacle Empire State Building faced The obstacle faced The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The dirigibles flying low urban areas law airships The Los Angeles could get close enuff tie dirigible wind Alot went wrong transportation Passengers stoped",
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"content": "In memoir mood created author heartwarming apperciative There many parts story made feel warm made want say aw For example paragraph states closeknit community honest hard working immigrants extended hand people nessecarly kind clearly need This line showed much love must ve Also everyone cared everyone else When author showing parents left country come tell grateful author shown extremely clear paragraph states I always grateful parents love sacrificeI think story made realize need apperciate others This author greatful parents shown clearly memoir",
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"content": "Can I read round world asked asked question right read want childern alound There books children young adult read read This vary depends age way reader understand content books There cursing smut books children read In highschool books like CAPS cursing For highschoolers older alright read Highschoolers understand heard words If teacher gives book grader would understand full potential hold learning Childern age range understand man handicaped childern would understand killing handicaped man done friend killed Will parent let year old read smut novel This depend way parent raised feel effect childs development An book would approprent child age child understand book self The book one part smut There gothic romanic writing books A child years old would developed mature way think book CAPS answer Everyone heard saying This say said followed Young adults play video games read books school related ORGANIZATION s nt book colored teenagers going white school This book giving kids see things A child elematenry would think funny cartoon played someone gets hit The children game enough background maturity stand really happening wrong For watching tv show hit punch child think ok Over cursing smut novels The thing depends parents maturity level personchild There wrong right way right let underage read curse voilents smut",
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"content": "In memoir PERSON Home The prints Lives mood created author nt happy moving first home loving family liked Even though work immaigrant happy The reason happy family thats important He Cuba immigrated Cuba The mood story happy happy sad mood created auther",
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"content": "The author wrote this article to show how technology is getting very high tech to even read your emotions. This is an upcoming thing that might be coming to your school. While reading this article, Dr. Huang predicts that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a students is becoming confused or bored\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective instructor\"(D'Alto). This shows that this FACS program could work for teachers. Say a teacher records all of his/her students in the classroom while they teach their lesson, and once the day is over they send it to the FACS program for the video to be analyzed. When it comes back, the teacher will recieve feedback on if the students were engaged, or very bored during the lesson. This would be a great tool to use to help students and teachers. It would be beneficial to the teachers, by making them a better teacher and will help them further their skills in teaching students. It will be beneficial for students by helping them recieve information in their classes and it will also make them more attentive in class instead of getting bored and/or not listening. If, in the class there is one student that is not paying attention or just isn't focused and seems to have bad emotions, the teacher could pull them aside and help with how to get that particular student to participate and be a better student. The teacher could also be a helping hand with that student, because in school, you might not get attention at home, or its a bad enviornment at home. Usually teachers don't see what's happeneing, and with this program it could help with teachers asking students if they're okay, and hopefully helping those students that wo't speak up about what's happeneing at home. Overall, i see this as a tool to help schools imensly, it help both parties and gets work done and could help students get out of a bad enviornment.",
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"content": "New technology is being made all around the world, that is changing society as we know it. One example of this technology is called Facial Action Coding System. Many people are wondering if the world should put something like this in schools so teachers can read students emotions. I think we should give this technology to teachers because this could help prevent casualties, and even the lack of school work students will do.\n\nOne reason I think the Facial Action Coding System should be in schools is because it could prevent casualties at home or at school such as school shootings and suicides. This technology could help prevent these casualties by letting the teacher know if a student is happy or upset. this meaning if a student is upset a teacher could get the student help or even help the student themselves by talking to them on why they are upset. For example students all around are getting bullied and not letting other people know how they feel or let them know they are getting bullied, so these students leave school being upset and they go home a commit suicide thinking they aren't important and thinking nobody wanted to help them. Therefore if teachers had this new technology I think teacher would be able to prevent this from happening by seeing how the student feels and therefore the teacher can talk to them and hear about what is happening. This will also make the students that do get upset feel like there are people out there that want to help them and that notice them.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System should be in schools is because the lack of school work being done because students are upset. This technology could help teachers get students to do their work or to even study, by letting the teacher know if the student is having a bad day. I think this will help because if a student is having a bad day then they won't want to do work because they are upset and just most people don't want to do work when they're upset, so if teachers had this technology I think they could talk to the students and try and get them in a better mood for themto do their work. Another reason why teachers should ge this because if a student is upset and they want to do their work, their work isn't going to beas good as if they were happy, and all teachers like to see their students with the best work.\n\nThere is new technology being made all around the world, that is changing society as we know it such as the Facial Action Coding system. This is why i think this technology should be put into schools.",
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"content": "The The The Do titles sound familiar They beause tiny fraction literary masterpeices people enjoyed since publications These wonderful books also share another characteristic banned certain libraries across country around world When child goes school ecah day parents left think getting quality education meets stadards core values morals But certain parents become outraged see books shelved schools library shelves see wrong nt want precious children exposed immoral concepts go idea right In reality though helping anyone By keeping student away book subject person causing censorship limiting student learn By censoring things people kept ideas might shock also ideas might make think If person think draw conclusions things When one think oneself make decisios oneself person considered free individual Infamous dictators burned books keep citizens thinking want think By banning book school library parent also keeping child thinking want think And want book shool library ot keepig child reading book everyone goes school reading book How fair So instead wanting certain books shelves childs school I say Teach children careful read If nt wan read The tell read book Tell children follow moral guidelines want follow certain books keep thoughs instead tell look nt bother everyoe else",
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"content": "I think the states should have a vote on what the people want, either popular vote or electoral college. Popular vote would be the way to go for me because if it is electoral college you as a citizen arent actually voting you are picking certain people to vote for you. By popular vote it means you get to have your say, or one of your powers for being a citizen.\n\nElectoral College is for the people that depend one higher level people to make the right decision for them instead of doing it themselfes. If you are a small state you dont have that much people going in for what your states want, like Rhode Island for example they only get around eleven through fourteen electoral votes for them. For a big state Like California they get fifthy-five electoral votes. Big difference right? Since the state of Florida a big we get twenty nine votes, Not that much right. Now if we do the popular vote way it only depends on how many people vote, if Rhode Island has 200,000 that vote they have a lot more say in the presidental election. What would you take?\n\nNow since presidents only go to states they know they will win in, so if your state is small the better way to go is electoral since it doesnt matter. The state of Florida does matter because we are big so both presidents will try to win us over. In the end I think it would be a good idea if the state has a poll on which one will they choose, but it all depends on the state and the people.\n\nWe would all think that the state want to hear our opinion, but some arent like that. Now if a tie breaks out, which is slim, now that isnt in the hands of the people but the hands of the people in the House of Representives. The chance of having a tie is unusual but it can and will happen some time soon. If that happens the HOR must try to be far and not only pick in there bias but for the better for the community.\n\nAs the state of Florida it would be a better solution of we go to the Popular vote method, because we are a large state and we would have a lot of votes the election",
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"content": "Why dose the author support the idea of studying venus? The author supports the idea that studying venus is worth pursuit the despite the danger venus is a place that we can't get close to but NASA wants to get a sample from venus to see if we can live on the planet and they are planing to take the risk it even when they already sent spacecrafts but they never made it but they say veuns was probably covred largley with oceans and could have supported life like earth.\n\nThey say every mission was unmanned,and for good reason because no spacecraft have never survived the landing for more than a few hours a spacecraft have not touched venus in over three decades and numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and it makes it even more challenging and the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere.\n\nThey said that venus was probably covred in oceans and could have supported life earth dose they also say venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on earth venus has a rocky surface such as valleys, mountains, and craters they say venus can be are nearest planetary visit considering the long time space traval the value of returning to venus is indisputable like they said \" what are the opinons for making such both safe and scientifically productive?\".\n\nNASA has an idea to send humans to study venus NASA's solutions to the conditions on the surtaces of venus would allow scientists to float above the fary. They are thinking about making a vehicle hovering 30 miles above the rolling venusian landscape.Thirty-plus miles above the surface temperatures would be toasty they around 170 degrees fahrenheit and they the air pressure would be close to the pressure of the sea level on earth solar powr]er would be plentiful and radidation would not exceed earth levels not easy conditions but surviable for humans.\n\nI asked Why dose the author support the idea of studying venus? and the author supports the idea of studying venus because it can help us many ways can see if it is livable and see if it carryed any other living things and see how its like earth in alot of wayand\n\nthe author supports this ides because its a good idea.",
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"content": "In this modern era, few masses think that museums thought applies enjoyable places to entertain the community. But others believe the purpose of the museum is to educate. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention and I will explain its views in the upcoming paragraph thus will lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are myriad applied arguments in favour of my context, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that people should be extra careful with their decisions. For example, according to a recent survey done by Stanford University, 45per cent of the masses take benefit from the above-mentioned notion, whereas 30per cent of the population faces demerits due to it. Hence, it is apparent why many citizens are in favour of the above stance.\r\n\r\nAnother argument in support of my view is that communities worldwide have become more active in dealing with this situation. To illustrate, as per apply academic research carried out by the Australian government, 60per cent of society gained immensely from the museums. They improved their existing scenario tremendously and that paved the way for a better economic future. Therefore, not only will this make the public more careful and pragmatic in their approach, but also it will lead to a better living standard.\r\n\r\nBefore hammering the last nail, one can conclude that museums should be applied enjoyable places to entertain the public. While others believe the purpose of the museum is to educate.",
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"content": "Not many details are in the passage to support this idea. There are actually many reasons not to sudy this planet. For example the atmosphere is tpp thick with carbon dioxied. The author supports this claim by saying; \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxied blankets Venus. Dispite all of the reasons not to sudy this planet, the author privides some interesting reasons on why we should.\n\nVenus might be habital by humans one day. Even though Venus conditions are not standard to earths they are livable. To support this claim the author states, 'Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.\" There must be some way humans can survive in these rough conditions. Technology, that can support us, to live on Venus can be invented. In order to makes projects like this we would need a closer look to the surface.\n\nVenus is extremely close to the sun. This planet is actually the second closest planet to the sun. Venus being so close to the sun is very benifical to us,we could get a obundant amount of solar energy. supporting this claim the passage states \"Solar power would be plentiful and radiations would not exceed Eaqrths levels.\"\n\nVenus is similar to earth thats why it has the nickname \"sister planet\". The planet got this name based off its density and size also it is occasionaly close to earth. Because this planet is so close it would be easier to explore. many spacecrafts have been sent to this planet to study it.\n\nDIspite all of the challenges of exploring Venus there are also sone good that comes from it. If cobnditions of this palnet are stablized for humans we can one day live here. Venus could also have many helpful resources. The planet would provide plenty of solar energy. Human curiosity continues to drive us to explore this hot gas like planet.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building deal multiple problems involving safety Because Al Smith wanted build building larger Chrysler Building decided put mooring mast dirigibles top The building s frame modified construction mooring mast could begin putting top would stress frame bring Another issue landing dirigibles They could weighed flat land top building would many people could injured something went wrong There even law dirigibles flying low urban areasThe builders work way around The biggest obstacle seemed safety people",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a new and upcoming thing in our world today. Drivers having to constantly steer and brake is a thing of the past. Now, cars drive themselves and humans are no more required to be the drivers, but the passengers. But many people don't believe that this is the road we should go down. Could going completely driverless put humans in even more danger than we are today? After reading the article, development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more crashes, prove technology is unreliable, and show that who to put at blame is unknown and will cause problems.\n\nDevelopment of driverless cars need to be stopped. These cars not only seem to not need human drivers, but means that we're in trusting these cars with our lives. Today, car accidents are a variety of reckless driving, simple mistakes, etc. But what they have in common is they're all accidents that humans have committed. In the article, paragraph 7, it says humans will be notified by the car when a situation gets too complicated or diffcult for it to handle. But by the time the car notifies the passenger, won't it be too late for the human to react and take over? Driverless cars putting us humans in situations like this will only cause panic for us, when we aren't even suppose to be driving, but passengers,\n\nand cause even more crashes. Driverless cars don't need to be developed because they'll just put us in more danger than we're already in.\n\nTechnology is the main component these driverless cars utilize to actually be able to drive by themselves. In paragraph 5 it says, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on the individual wheels and reduce power from the engine...\" In our world today, technology and manufactured devices malfunction all the time. It's just what happens because humans don't know everything there is to know about everything. What if to say this happened to the sensors in the driverless cars. If the sensors just stop working, causing the car to stop, putting the passenger in a great amount of danger. Technology isn't reliable, so why should we have to rely on technology to drive our cars? It's just more danger being caused instead of being prevented if we develop these cars. We should rely on ourselves to drive our cars instead of technology because it can just malfunction at anytime, without a warning.\n\nDirectly in the article, in paragraph 9, it posed the question: \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" This is a very important question because it's basically asking who's taking the blame if someone is injured by these driverless cars? This could all be avoided if we stop the development of those cars. Forsay, if someone's injured, would the guilt lie on the passenger who's suppose to be watching the driverless car drive or the manufacturers who made the car in the first place? Chaos and problems will arise if this situation takes place. Both people should be at fault though because they're giving technology the wheel and the path to do what it want, even if it's programmed to do one thing. But like I said before, these accidents and questioning who's at fault can be avoided if we take away what causing this all: technology. Stopping production of these cars will take the blame away and make accidents more clearer as who's to blame.\n\nThe idea of having driverless cars in our world today isn't not going to go away anytime soon, but proving why it shouldn't be develop and not even being an idea anymore can keep them from being a thing in our world to come. Driverless cars not only take the control out of the driver, but take control of the fate of the passengers' lives too. Development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more accidents, prove technology is unreliable, and cause questions of who's at fault for crashes. Taking driverless cars out of our streets and sticking to man-driven cars will make the world a safer place not only now, but for our future too.",
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"content": "There was no technology back when the Mona Lisa was made. They had pictures and the picture showed emotion. There are some people that can see the emotions of people and some are herd to see then others. They are making technology to read the emotional expressions and that it knowns when your lieing. There are pictures that show emotion, people that see other peoples emotion, and now there making technology that reads emotional expressions.\n\nFirst, of there are pictures of people and there always will be. In those pictures you can see someones emotion and how someone is feeling. Back then they only had pictures to see. From theose pictures most artist and people could see peoples emotions, but it was meanly the artist that could read someones emotion. The artist could see throw someones fake smile or if it was real. That's why there pictures showed how many emotion she had.\n\nNext, there are some people that can read others emotion and for it's hard or they can see them. Everybody is different most people that read somebody's emotion is because there a love one or a every good friend and they can read your emotion. There is just other people that don't care. Most people should be able to see if your angry, sad or happy. Those emotions are easy to see, kids show it all the time even when there not feeling so good.\n\nFinaly, there is technology being made that reads someones emotion. The technology even know's when it is a lie. So somebody can just take a picture of somebody and there emotion. There is going to be a person that lie's the technology. Technology isn't going to make you feel better. That person is going to need a love one or a close friend, to help them out.\n\nThere always going to be somebody close by that will help you out. Could be throw a picture and that could help you. Or a friends that sees you happy, sad, or mad. The technology might tell them there emotion, but wont help them out. There are pictures that show emotion, people that see other peoples emotion, and now there making technology that reads peoples emotional expressions.",
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"content": "The article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\" tell us about how our world and technologies are coming to a creation of cars that need to assistance. These cars that need no assistance are said to be able to drive better than a human body present behind the wheel can. Though these cars haven't actually came to driving completely by themselves, they can do specific things. The cars alert the drivers when they need to take over due to dangerous altercations or when they approach something than can damage the car. Some car brands are working to make their cars available to transport themselves, a few states are forbidding it. alot of questions are going around from these states commonly asking \" is it safe?\". Well, I am here to give you my personal opinion on \"Driverless Cars\".\n\nMy position on drieverless cars stands at a non supportive stand. I feel as if this type of car should'nt be produced into our world. There is no proof that these cars are 100% safe to drive on their own, or even specific driving. Someone should be behind he wheel at all times. Creating this type of technology gives people the thought that they should no longer have the reason to take a drivers test. It creates laziness around the world. It may even spark some controversy.\n\nThe states that are temporarily banning these cars ferom being released have absolutely all rights to do so. we are not for sure if the creators of these cars are actually sending the right directions of making the car the correct way. Though some states are completely on the driverless cars bandwagon, you should remain cautious. Every state should have a rule for cars that can put us humans in danger unintentionally. The television shows and commercials are not reliable eveidence that these cars are to be trusted.\n\nAlot of work will be cut loose if these cars make it out. It would technically mean nobody would have to be behind the wheel when a way to make the cars 100% driver free comes. How can we trust that one day these cars would'nt cause any serious damage? we can't, becuse we have to be alert. Alert, to where our car is, what state of condition it is in, and alert of what this car can do. There really isn't any relief in creating these kind of cars. We must be worried about something because everything has it's flaws.\n\nTo end my position on Driverless Cars I will say be careful. Think about what all these new and imporved cool inventions can do to our world. It can take away something very nice because of something that looks nice. Remain behind the wheel, don't take away your driving skills over something that has very few skills. These cars can destruct us, drag us down over its temporary unique abilities. It will also destruct our pockets. Driverless cars are just an image. Stay behind the wheel, trust non other than yourself for your own safety.",
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"content": "Can you believe there's actually technology that can identify your emotions ? There's a new technology that can show a how a human is feelings. It's called the Facial Action Coding System. This system can be used to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom by showing when kids are getting bored or confused, showing if fake emotions are being used, and help produce emotions.\n\nFirst off, the system can read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom by showing if the kids are bored or confused. By the computer allowing to show how the students are feelings, the teachers can look at that and they can actually change things up a bit in class. On paragraph 6 it says, \" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Therefore, the FAC system can feel the same emotions as the students are feeling and show how the students are feeling.\n\nOn the other hand, the FAC can also identify if fake emtions are being used. When you fake a smile the system can tell when it a real smile or a forced one. On paragraph 8 it says, \" Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis pars palpabreaus make crow's-feet around your eyes.But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideway using the zygomatic major and different muscle, the risorius.\" Which means the FAC knows when the smile is real or fake when the way your smile is being structured.\n\nLastly, another way that expressing emotions in a classroom is valuable is helping produce emtions. Making an expression can also help you feel an emotion. That way this can help the students show their real emotions. On paragraph 9, the author says, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emtions but, also may even help produce them. \"Therefore, that can change whole mood and emotions of a students. Helps students change what they are feeling.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom showing that the system is valuable by showing when kids are getting bored or confused, if fake emotions are being used, and to help produce emotions. So yes, this technology is very valuable for a classroom. FAC can be a great use to read humans.",
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"content": "It first day sophomore year I moved I nervous new school like kid would I walked school checked surroundings Everything seemed normal enough I saw Near middle sea tables cafeteria four tables around people one CAPS fact caught attention They dueling cards right middle cafeteria could see I baffled I mean I used duel I younger elementary school game newer I quit cause everyone school stopped dueling I looking least highschoolers dueling away What surprised right open everyone could see worst judge I moved table nearby began watch kid named later become one best friends mop floor opponent I quickly caught back rules went home day thinking I m gon na get back game So I bought deck continued recon tables deck sitting front waiting someone challenge s master A days went I continued silent observation duelists Finally duelist named another one good friends challenged I accepted began He proceeded thoroughly kick butt space seemed like five rounds game taught play better became best friends He really funny guy day I cant hang around without laughing Through I met tons great friends Even I wonder high school life would like CAPS attend new school",
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"content": "In selection Do exceed posted speed limit lot great details area around cyclist In text makes clear route cyclist traveling deserted drinking water explained oozing tasting like battery acid tell people hadnt awhile Also informed traveling desert June I able understand thirsty Also traveling miles rough terrain crippling hills according text ovely exhausted I could understand upset getting wrong directions based troubles encounters finally reaches camp drinks water glad reached somewhere wasnt empty deserted",
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"content": "Laughter key I think happy big part life happy feels good If I relation ship happy I would like In happy relationship comes laughter first thing I wen I meet someone I always smiling telling jokes I tell jokes laughing know I happy person If meet person weather grown friend person want go always enjoy laughter Lets say girlfriend I first saw sitting desk history class crying I asked okay told story told story I told feel I told joke laughedAfter got done laughing ask phone number night started dating I asked likes said way I make laugh I always love make family friends laugh smile makes smile I use laughter way make people feel better self If world learn laugh happy would better place I rather laugh happy mad sad something I growing I time learn keep happy I would think funny stuff I seen said past try make story workedWhen I got older started stand comedy It made feel good seeing people laugh show seeing people walk big smiles faces night I never forget nightIf pick I wold want fun I wold comedianThank reading nice day",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is they have less greenhouse gas emissions, being less tense and more accessible to public transportation.\n\nThe good thing about less greenouse gas emissions is the air is more dense and is a huge impediment to currrent efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Also another advantage is being less tense and a good thing about being less tense in can reduce high blood pressure, lesser chance for heart attack for people 40 or older, and you won't be so stressed because stress is a main cause for heart attacks and high blood pressure. Finally, the good thing about it being more accessible to public transportation is its just like carpooling everyone can ride in one vehicle and use less gas to make the air more dense and clear so the less gas you can use the better the air will be more clear so everyone can breathe in clean air for their lungs but if you don't like to use public transportation use you can always walk, jog, or even run because it's a great way to excersize your muscles.",
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"content": "A contentious debate surrounds whether the qualities of leadership are innate or achieved. While some argue that people are naturally born as leaders, others contend that these skills can be learned later in life. I strongly believe that the skills for being leadership are inborn, and can be trained over time.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, people claim that leadership is not something that can be achieved. To expand the idea, while considering leaders as people who exert a great influence on people, their powerful presence can not be developed. Being articulate, and having oratory skills, which are supported by several scientists that they are inborn, to influence people through words is essential for being a leader. Furthermore, it is unavoidable that some people are born with a charismatic personality, which is a requirement for leadership. To cite an example, Mozart was a well-known composer in the world, and he composed music at the age of five. This exemplifies that inborn abilities are on a factual basis.\r\n\r\nRegarding the view of the opposite side, there are many affirmations by people who advocate that everyone can be a leader for the rest of their time. What is more, the more effort we put in, the more we practise skills, the better we become. While taking life experience as a significant factor into account, assertiveness to stand up for what you believe in and having confidence can be learned through practice and training. For instance, Bill Gates was a computer scientist 30 years ago, but if we look at the current situation, he is a renowned leader and owner of Microsoft, which emphasises the possibility of learning anything through time. I firmly opine that skills that are related to leadership can be achieved by people as success results from determination and hard work in any field.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although many believe that people are born with desperate character, the importance of industriousness and practices can not be disregarded. Consequently, I am on the side of people who believe in the power of learning without respite.",
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"content": "The tecnolagy being created to read students emotions is an invation of privacy ,\n\na waist of time, and also a waist of funded money. Instead of supporting a tecnolagy that may creat more problems we need to creat solutions to the problems we already face.The reading of emotions from a computer may not even be spot on i just dont see benifets from such a usless tecnolagy.\n\nThe new tecnolagy that is supost to\"detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide there emotions\" the artical states. That is invation of privacy! The avrage human dislikes school and the teachers in it. Some students hide emotions to avoid conflect, if a teacher can read how much the student dispises them it will only creat conflect. Above all any human being should be able to express the emotions they want to express and not be read by a computer. Some students prefer to hide emotions for personal resions most would belive it should stay that way. This tecnolagy is invading privacy.\n\nInstead of waisting time on a tecnolagy thats invading privacy the funds could be supporting a greater cause.The artical states in fact humans preform this same impressive calculation every day\". If a human can \"calculate\" expression why is so much time being consumed to creat a tecnolagy that is natural instinct to a human. The time could be invested on globle warming and polution. Both are things that the entire world could benifit off of. The human body is capible of reading emotion so why invest time to have a computer atempt to do the same.\n\nThis tecnolagy can only be created with the help of envesters . Without money new tecnolagy can not be made. Meaning some one or maltuple investers are putting there mony into tecnolagy that can already be done by an avrage human body. Not many people will pay tor this technology becouse they can do it themselfs. The investers dont profit and the money is waisted. The artical states\"your home PC can't handle complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" Not only do you have to accuare this program but youll also need another PC to process the algorithms. More mony the consumers wouldn't be willing to spend for somthing they can do by them selfs.\n\nIn conclution this technology is an invation of privacy, waist of time, and money. Not many people will injoy being read by a computer. All the time that was used on this tecnolagy could have been used to discover somthing new . Lastly the money also could have been used to benifit the people.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders faced many obstacles They trying get Dirigibles land empire state building They faced many problems trying accomplish feat If going Dirigibles land atop building would add floors building Another one The steel frame Empire State building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Which means would waste even money Then something found later could nt even first place due legal matters If would getting trouble legal system Once realized I think realize project failure told world The yet unsolved problems mooring air ships fixed mast height made desirable postone later date final installation landing gear",
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"content": "Do you think teachers should have the technology to read the emotional expessios of students in a classroom? I think it is valuable for teachers to be able to read the expressions on our face, because if a teacher can't read what a student has trouble with then they will keep geting it wrong. Or if a student is sad the teacher need to know so she can try to help you. Also a teacher should be able to tell when we are happy so they know we are going to try are harded to keep up the good work and make the teachers and prantes pround so we can be happy all the time.\n\nLet's say your getting fustadued at a teacher and the teacher can't tell so she won't help, beacuse your afraid to tell her then you get in trouble because you went off on the teacher. The teacher send you to the office and then your parents have to come in and talk and you tell them what happend then they wont beleive you because they would of thought you would of said something or at least asked for them to help.\n\nIf your happy and a teacher can tell thats always a good think because then they wont try to make you mad because they dont know what made you happy or how. so the hint is just teast others like you want to be treated because if you don't karma will come back your way. The way the teachers see it the more work your willing to turn in the less the will give you so dont burn your bridges.\n\nNow do you think we teachers should be able to read there studens face? Well i do because if there not able to school can be so much harder and there will be conquinces like grades drop and you just don't want to do anything anymore. So therefore thats why I think teachers need to have the technolgy to read our faces. Students would like school so much more if the teachers were able to understand what has happened and how much pressure it would take off of us.",
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"content": "Have you ever wandered about self-driving cars? I believe that they should be the next step in the automobile industry. Some reasons why self-driving cars should be part of the future is because of the traffic jam assistance, in car entertainment, and the safety of the self-driving vehicle. How does a car assist you in a traffic jam?\n\nIn the self-driving cars vehicle manufactors have built it to be able to drive in conditions below 25mph. When a person is in a traffic jam they begin to get bored and eventually sleepy. Instead of a person now continuisly have to push and release the gas the car now does that for you. Also when the car is driving the person is required to keep their hands on the steering wheel at all times. This feature also alows the car to react if the driver falls asleep. Wouldent in-car entertainment just be another distraction to the driver?\n\nMost people would say that having something else to watch while behind the wheel is a distraction to driving. For this in-car entertainment the feature would only be avalible for the driver when the car is in traffic jam assist mode and would instantly shut off when the driver needs to take over the car. How is all these gagets safe for the driver and all other drivers?\n\nThe safety of these self-driving cars has been checked over and over. More and more sensors are being put into the car to make it able to detect other cars and to stop/go when needed. Although one arguement about safety has been brought up about not having a human driver controlling the car at all times.\n\nHave you wandered what a self-driving car would be like? I believe that self driving cars should be the next step for the automobile industry. Some reasons why it should be the future of cars is because of traffic jam assistance, in car entertainment, and the safety of the self-driving cars. What would it be like to have a self-driving car?",
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"content": "Contrary to popular belief, the Face on Mars is not a face, but a natural landform on the surface of Mars. Now, this may be hard to agree with, but the Face is actualy a structure similar to a butte or a mesa, a semi-flat landform common in the American west. It should also be noted that the area around Cydonia (a region on Mars on which the Face is located on,) is extremely cloudy around the time the pictures were taken by the Viking 1 in 1976. Also, Cydonia has many other mesa-like structures that are quite common in the area. The manner in which the Face was formed is unknown, but many scientists belive that shadows formed from outcrops in the area created the illusion of the eyes, the nose, and the mouth on the structure, giving it it's facelike apperence. There were three diffrent gruops of photographs taken of this structure. The first was taken by the aformentioned Viking 1, in 1976. The second was taken on April First, 1998, by The Mars Global Surveyer. The last one was taken in April of 2001, again by the Mars Global Surveyer. If this was a face, would'nt all three pictures be the same, insted of the last two being clear eveidence that the Face isen't a face at all, but rather a naturaly forming landmass? So, in conclusion, there is a scientific explanation to just why and how this strange and peculuar structure came to be. Even though this unusual sight looks just like a face, it's just a rock structure on the face of a red planet we call mars, not an ancient Martian temple.",
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"content": "Throughout construction Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock building one obstacle builders encountered fact dirigible attached building single cable would add much stress buildings framework combination dirigibles load wind pressure atop massive foot structure To solve build sixty thousand dollars worth modifications frame building Another obstacle encountered safety docking dirigible One problem many dirigibles United States used hydrogen highly flammable gas instead helium This made owners realize much worse accident happened Hindenburg could densely populated area Another safety problem high wind speeds even dirigible would docked mooring mast back ship would violently swing around strong winds feet Also usually dirigibles would able weighted field lead weights prevent movement using Empire State Building would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe two reasons already law airships height urban areas talking dirigible building would break As seen paragraph many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock",
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"content": "I think that it is good that smart cars are being made because say if someone is paying attention to the road and doing something with there child like giving there baby a toy or something and there eyes are off the road then nothing is there to help stop the car. A smart car is a good thing to have because it will most likely lower the amount of crashes that happen even year and even drop the death rate per year. So i think smart cars are a good idea because say if your having a hard time parking your car then the car can do it for you? If someone is drinking and driving or texting and driving then that car can save someones from causing a death or injury. another reason is that the businesses that are making the smart cars are getting extra money for making these car so they can have extra money to add better advances to there car and it will be safer for teen to drive and for younger kids that are in the back seat enjoying there time and they can be safe and enjoy there time.The main resson i am saying all of theses thing is that i want are cars to be more safer so that we want have to worry that much about are family members getting into crashes because they were paying that much attention to the road and they didn't have anything to help them from preventing them from crashing or even the kids in the back of the car can just sit back and just have a wonderful time enjoying there lifewhy they are in the car.That is why i think making driveless cars are very important in the world today.",
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"content": "with facial action coding this techonlogy can recongize human expressions and decied there expression. this techinogogly could be used for positive responses for humans and when used properly can be great for this era of humans.\n\nusing this techonlgy in schools would be great to decied if a student is having mix emotions during class can help them better learn in the enviorment.\n\nknowing this echonogly can be used to dected emotions the home land security can use this for suspects to decied if a emotion from a intergation and deiced if someone is lying. this can also be used on crinamals to dectect emotions in court and see the true side to someone\n\nwhen a psychartist is using this on a patient this can help further develop a person in need of help. if a patient would feel confused feelings or feel sad the DR. would know his/her emotions.\n\nthis could also be used for art work! knowing that this dectect human emotions we could scan painting to see true depth to them. if scanned on a painting and more expressions are used we can further develop the true meaning and background history to art work its self.\n\nin concullison this techonogly can be used for greater of good and can help todays world though schools, art work, homeland security and goverment work, and be used in the line of health.",
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"content": "In The Mooring Mast many contractors exceedingly determined construct mast Empire State building sanction use dirigibles blimps way air travel future There great amounts obstacles way making reality Allowing dirigibles dock Empire State building fantastic idea time proved impossible theoryThe first problem weight blimp combined malicious winds eventually shatter beautiful framework building The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet Architects soon fixed problem impulsively spent sixty thousand dollars changes building support flaw problem The second major concern hydrogen would filling blimps Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Hydrogen easily create fires top concern densely populated city New York City The immense obstacle mother nature The winds top buildings constantly shifting due violent air currents With dirigible flying thousands civilians uncontrolled aircraft due high winds safe The last impractical reason idea realistic law forbade airships fly low urban areas All obstacles made building mast The Empire State building dreamAl Smith architect The Empire State building came fascinating ideas Although great work Between environment winds hydrogen use safety laws dream hoax These obstacles made impossible proceed construction Al Smith amazing imagination bad luck",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One daylight sun bothers cyclist Another one nothing around felt frustrated There one sight building car structure kind If something wouldnt feel frustrated least would hope find something",
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"content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the article is about the future for driverless cars and new technology that has been improving in our cars. The question is, should we allow driverless cars or not? In my opinion, I think we should have driverless cars. My reason for this is that i think it would be pretty cool to have driverless cars considering how our technology is changing over the years. Although, in some cases driverless cars can't be good but i'm sure that our technology can fix that.\n\nOver the years, cars have been getting better and has features the car can do itself such as: alerting the driver when accidents are about to happen, built-in GPS to get around easier, automatic steering, accelerating, and braking. For example, say if you were taking your daughter to school and your daughter asks \"dad, I would like to be dropped off here\" and the dad looks at his daughter and says \"It's fine I can drop you off at school\" and before he knew it, the car automatically stops before he could. This means that his car braked by itself and if his car didn't have self breaking then he would have been in an accident. This proves that technology took place in this situation. Although, sometimes driverless cars aren't a good idea.\n\nSometimes, driverless cars aren't such a good idea, but why? In some cases driverless cars aren't such a good idea because as it says in paragraph 9 about Waiting on the Law for trafficing, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" This means that not always is the technology is up-to-date. Also, sometimes it would be boring if there were driverless cars because if you were just to sit in the driver's seat and not drive then it would be boring because what would be the point to be in the driverless car and you couldn't drive? If you ask me, I think maybe soon our technology will improve and we would have an auto pilot mode or something that can have an option for us to drive or not.\n\nSometimes, driverlesss cars can be a good idea, but why? Well, like I said in paragraph 2 our cars are getting better every year and car companies are coming up with new ways for our car and for us to purchase it as well. Also, it's always good to not drive even when you are tired and that way we have automatic acceleration to where the car can drive by itself. Cars also have little things that improve with accident alerts and that is a seat that vibrates everytime you are close to an accident.\n\nIn conclusion, my position for driverless cars is I think a good idea because of my evidenvce that I provided above. For some people,",
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"content": "Some people say that virtual games are worthwhile for kids, whilst others say that they can cause negative effects. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nThe first opinion of this issue says that video games bring benefits to children. Firstly, video games can gain creativity. Some adventure plays are hard to solve and it demands deep logic and instinct to find a way to get the rewards. For example, Lego harry potter that appears in iPad, in some stages, it requires the participant to think out the box to get the clue to finish this step, and it is very hard for children who do not like to think differently. Secondly, it is the pleasure that they get after they finish the challenge in those virtual worlds. It likes an accomplishment of their hard work by using their logical thinking that beyond their daily basis. Also, it can be used as entertainment to relax after a tough day at school. \r\n\r\nHowever, some may think that virtual play can bring drawbacks that jeopardizing the future kids. One of the main issues is the kids' mental health. It supports by the fact that young people that spend most of their time with this digital world have a physiological disorder. For instance, it is very common to see some adolescents from 10-20 have emotional problems, such as excessive anger, that lead them to be a nonchalant and an anti-social individual. Therefore, this group of people has a problem with maintaining their relationship with other human beings and it becomes a really big problem after they are an adult. This occurrence can generate many communication problems in the workplace and lead them to suffer in crowds. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the drawback is quite gruesome for the children development, the positive effects are wholesome for brain development. So, as long as we are careful to keep the importance of face to face interaction and limit the duration of playing games, the virtual play can be totally useful.",
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"content": "Is Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers of studying it ? Well in the text it is stated the ¨Venus is the second planet from our sun¨ and mostly it is referred as the Earth´s twin. So the author claim´s that it is a challenge to meet and presente by Venus having value, but the travel on earth should not be limtied by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the imagination and innocation.\n\nSo the author talks about how it is the closest planet to Earth in the terms of the size and density and of course the closest in the distance too they are like planetary neighbor. There are differnce because somethings it changes we are closer to Mars and sometime we are closer to Venus. There have been previous mission that was unmanned, but they were for good reasons. According to the text ¨snice no spacaft survived the landing for more than a few hours, and numerous factors contribute to Venus´s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity for us.¨ so the author tells us why there have been many fails and why they are still studing for it.\n\nThe another thing is that how Venus is a thick atomsphere that is cloely by 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. That it is more hard for the clouds to have highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atomsphere. According to the author ¨ on the planet´s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet.¨ So this is more far extreme than something else humans encounter on here this earth so trying to move up there is going to be a little hard and diffult.\n\nLast thing to support the idea of studing Venus is long time ago they said maybe there was ¨probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth today.¨\n\nAlso now that NASA has one idea that sending humans to study Venus though they said it will be challenging because of the temperature will be toasty that will be around 170 degress Fahrenheit. Also the pressure of the air would be closer to the sea level on Earth. They will use solar power and radiation that will not exceed Earth levels, but that will be survivable for humans. Also with many of there new teconology and new modern computers that are powerful, flexible, and quick, but becomes more delicate when it comes to extreme phyical conditions.\n\nOverall the author made many supports and the idea of studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author also stated that the travels on earth should not doubt but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovations and how they are making NASA working with a person to study on Venus and travel there and also the modern computers.",
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"content": "Due to the importance of education there is always a debate on how best to teach. The biggest discussion point is homework. Even though it sometimes can apply too much pressure on the students, it helps process the materials better and prepares students for adult life.\nOne of the main drawback of homework is the amount of time and effort it usually requiers. In a lot of schools homework takes at least several hours to do which can be a lot after a long school day. Another issue with homework are the mark that students get because the can affect a mental health of a developing child a lot.\nHowever, homework can help students work on their skills and give a deeper understanding of the subject in question. Homework can be very helpful when a student is sick or absent in the class to process all the materials at home. It is also very common situation when a struggling student raised his marks by doing homework which improved his skills in a long run.\nPersonally, I think homework is essential part of schooling. It teaches you responsibility, for example by meeting your deadlines, and helps process knowledge that you gained in class. In addition, homework teaches teenagers to learn which is the most important skill everyone should gain at school.\nThus, even though homework can sometimes take a lot of time and don't give a desired mark in return, it prepares students for an adult tasks such as projects at work and strict deadlines.",
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"content": "Have you every wondered that you have different emotional expressions at the same time? I know I have and I thought it was weird to have different ones at the same time but, it turns out, it's completely normal. I will be talking about a calim for or against the value of using this technologhy to read students' emotional expressions. Are you with the claim of this technology?\n\nAs I read this article on \"Making Lisa Smile\", and it would be beneficial to the students because it's a different part of science that very few people don't know about. The value of using the technologic advancement on emotional expressions would be limitless because of the way of showing emotions that you like you might not have at the time. For example, say that you're happy and you think that is all you are but, you test yourself with the technology to read facial expressions. It turns out to be: 90%, 4% angry, and 6% disgusted, More than you thought you were. I think it would be cool?\n\nTo calculate the percentage of someone's emotional expressions is done by a computer the contructs a 3-D computer model of the person's, perhaps a painting in this case, face. All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. You also could probably tell if someone is sad, happy, angry, or even bored just by lookung at them but, you can't tell the percentage of someone's emotional expressions because you can't tell the actual action unit of a muscle in their face. They could be having a different emotion as well of happy, sad, angry, etc. Are you for the claim?\n\nI hvae talked about wheather or not I am for or against the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. I am for this claim, are you?",
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"content": "The use of this advanced technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable from three reasons in the article that the author tells us by reading this article.\n\nIt's interesting to think ahead and create something big that no one can do. In paragraph 3, the author says, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" The 44 muscles can tell how the human is feeling, by seeing how the person is moving. For example, when the person is moving really fast, it means that the person might be angry or aggressive. But when a person is moving slow, it means that the person is sad or depressed.\n\nThe author tells in the text, \"We humans perform this same impressive calculation every day.\" But comparing a human mind to a computer is different. A human mind can think that the friend is feeling sad, but the computer can have more than just one idea of how the friend feels. The computer can have more than one idea by scanning the face of the person and calculating how the muscles of the face look. It may seem amazing to try to use the technology.\n\nFrom the picture of Mona Lisa, when you just look at it, many ideas would pop up in your head from trying to guess how she's feeling and how she looks. There would be multiple guesses on how her face looks. In paragraph 6, the author says, \"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.\" Some people might say that she looks mostly happy, a bit disgusted, somewhat fearful, and a little angry. Or they might say all of them and more. We all have different minds, different thoughts, and a different sights at describing a picture.\n\nMoreover, the article gives us a lot of information of the advanced technological computer that constructs a 3-D model, to scan a human face and tell how the person feels emotionally. It's amazing and interesting to even read about Dr. Huang and Prof. Sebe ,his colleague, are both experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.",
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"content": "Nowadays people think that news has no connection with theirs lives, so reading and watching the news are a waste of time. Although the first reaction to some people is to concur to such claims. Nonetheless, there are several reasons to refuse this statement. In the following paragraphs, there are a number of perspectives to discuss this issue more in-depth.\n\n\nFirstly, the main reason to support my position is that with the help of mass media we can know something new. For example, some new programs on my favourite channel, called BBC can tell about different countries, their economy and traditions. Sometimes I read newspapers for studying Engish, because news helps me to learn some words for my future career. So, news can be useful for foreign students, which want to learn this language and for others, who interested in economy and politics. \n\n\nAlso, another reason for my belief is that watching the news is useful when going on something large scale. For instance, now all over the world, people have ill, which called COVID-19, so others must know about this virus and be careful. With the help of mass media many of us can save ourselves and our relatives. Moreover, for example, when people follow the news they will be more knowledgeable with something than the rest.\n\nIn conclusion, it is not to say that other points of view are totally without merits. Nevertheless, the reasons I have presented could support the position of reading and watching news programs is not waste of time.",
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"content": "I am for the value of using this technology to read people emotional expressions. A few reasons I am for this experiment is because you can see how people feelings are, if a person has a hard time showing/ expressing their emotions to others, and see how others feel about you or another person.\n\nThis experiment can contructn a 3D facial model on a computer and pop right out and see how that person is feeling. The computer can classifiy the six basic expressions on a person, such as happiness, surprised, anger, disgust, fear, and saddness. Scienctist did a lab experiment on the famous Leonardo da Vinci's painting Mona Lisa. The experiment was to see if Mona was trying to smile or if she was being serious, so they experimented to see her expressions.\n\nThe technology associates with facial movements and mussles, that the computer can detected a false smile and a netural expression. The technology of the computer can detect if a person has a real smile or a forced smile on their face. A way to see if a person is forcing their smile is by looking at the sides of their mouth because the smile is stretched on the sides of your mouth using a different mussle, the risorius.\n\nThe theory of the experiment is not only tp show and figure out you expressions/ emotions but it can also help you with producing them. The whole story is talking about showing the emotions of your peers.",
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"content": "The developement of the computer cars are not a good idea. We have yet to find out if these cars are safe enough to have our family in them. These cars are supposed to warn you but what if they don't warn you on time and you get in a car crash. It is better to just drive your own car and be much safer than to have a computer car.\n\nFor one these computer cars are not safe enough I don't feel like. The only thing that people know are that they will drive for you and warn you when it is time to take the wheel. What if the warning does not come fast enough and you get in a car crash. How do you know that your family is going to be safe while driving this car. We dont know that. They are supposed to do all these kind of test but if they have to do so many test than what is the point of even making them. Also by not doing this project it could safe a ton of money.\n\nBy driving your own car you could be a lot more safer. You have total control of what your car does but in this new computer car you really don't. All you have to do is just type in your location and it will choose your path for you. Driving your own car will help you keep you and your own family safe. Also when you do get involved in an accident with these computer car no one will know whose falt it is if it is the manfacturers fault or yours. By not having these computer cars it can safe you a lot of much more money if you are ever invovled in a accident.\n\nIn conclusion it is better to be safe than sorry. The devolpment of these cars do not need to happen. It is okay if they help out a little bit but having a computer car tak over is not such a good idea as all og these car developers think it is. Lets keep our family safe and lets not build these computer cars.",
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"content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because it is one of our planets in orbit, and also is the closet planet to us. Like in paragraph 2 \" Venus is the closet palnet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance. Even astronomers are fascinated becuase Venus could have been like earth covered with various life forms like earth.\n\nVenus is still a dangerous planet like how its describe in paragraph 3 \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets\" which is very dangerous and also havs degrees up to 800 Fahrenheit. and atmosphere pressure 90 times greater than ours. \"These conditon are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\". Venusian geology also say that the weather is very extreme, with bug earthquakes, erupting volcanoes, and alot of lighting which destroy probes tryning to land.\n\nVenus and Earth do share simalarities. Like in paragraph 4 \" Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. Venus also has features like earth with rocky features mountains, valleys, and even craters. They even said \" Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a plantary visit\".\n\nVenus is dangrous but scientist are still trying ideas to examine it. Like on paragraph 6 \" scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\". Venus could be examined by a ship hovering safely up above the planet but only little sight becuase the light can get through down to the crust which means no standard froms or video are getting through.\n\nVenus is a planet that can be landed on soon. Like in paragraph 6 \"Many reaserchers are working on innovation that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\". Scientist are still working on landing probes safely on Venus. Lik on paragraph 7 \" some simplified electronics made of silicon caarbide have been tested in a chanber simulating the chaos of Vensus's surface lasted for three weeks in such condtions. The next step scientist are going to do is use old technolgy used during World War 2. These machines used to caculate gears and does not involve eletronics.\n\nVenus is worth trying to explore. If we can get to explore Venus crust imagine the more we can do. Like on paragraph 8 \" human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\". There will be more dangers planets in the beyond other than Venus which is why we should thrive and explore Venus.",
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"content": "Driving cars are something that many people are looking forewards to in the future. These driving cars are being invented and take alot of money to make. Some of the questions that you may ask yourself are how do they work, where will they work, and are they safe? I personally like the idea of having cars drive by themselves. The reason why is because ther wouldn't be that many accidents, people wouldn't have to worry about getting ran over, and if the driver is drunk or ill they wouldn't cause any wrecks.\n\nThey started to put these cars together in the late 1900's. In 1950 GM made a concept car that would run on a track with an electric cable that sent radio signals to the receiver on the front of the car. GM tried to imput these electric cables on the roads but it costed to much to remake the roads. They tried many different methods to make these cars drive but they didn't succed. Until around the year 2000 when technology was starting to advance and played a huge role in our society.\n\nNow these cars have highly imputed sensors that help the car run and keep the driver alert if something malfunctions. These cars also have implied brakes to stop the car in an emergency and vibrating sensors to notify the driver that it needs human skill to help it. These sensors will help detect that something is wrong and to keep the car on the road. There would also be less accidents. Teens would have help from the car and parents help too and wouldn't get in many wrecks.\n\nFinally these cars have pass certain laws and have certain laws put in order to put the cars on the road and also help if the driver gets in a wreck.. Driveless cars have to have a lot more technology imputed so in case of a major emergency it will be able to protect the driver and passengers in the car.\n\nIn conclusion many car companies are starting to make driveless cars so we have to be more opened minded and keep up with technology, because our world is going to be changed dramatically and we have to be ready for big changes. These cars are only the beginning of something big. That will change our society in the furture. So what are your thoughts about all this new information?\n\nAre you for or aganist driveless cars?",
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"content": "The United States has ways of being civilaized, and thats by electing leaders. Those leaders that take role of the responsiblitiy are President. Presidents need candidates to vote for them. The only way the President will get elected is by the Electoral College or by popular vote. Although both ways are effective, only one way is the best. The U.S should stick with the Electoral College because its a game changer and trust worthy.\n\nTo start off the Electoral College is a game changer for Election Day. In the article \" In Defenese of the Electoral College\" the author states a good claim. Richard states \" the reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote\". From this quote Richard points out the even when a candidate has a good amount of popular vote it all comes down to the Electoral College. The reason is the Electoral College is part of the candidate's team, whether its Democrat or Republican. In the article from Richard he gave an example, \" Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney\". In this peice of information Richard clearly states on how the Electoral College is stronger then the popular votes. Now in the article \"the indfensible Electoral College\" which was written by Bradford has a different claim. Bradford states \" because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning\". From this Bradford wants to express that the Electoral College is not fair to voters, and that it has cheesy methods. But even thought Bradfort disagrees with the method, Bradfort still stated the obvious. In the article Plumer states \" taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency\". Although Plumer disagree with the electoral college, Bradford still notices on how the electoral college makes a huge difference. Basically the Electoral College is just a big game chnager on Election Day.\n\nFuthermore the Electoral College is just a trust worthy method to use. Also it was like the first method to be used. In the first source \"What is the Electoral College\", the author gives some great information. The office states \" the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their resposibilities are\". In this statement the Office is stating on how whichever party a person might be in, the electoral college will come through. The reason is because each state has an Electoral college and those states are in differnet parties. If the state that a person might live in is Democrat then the electoral college will go for that party, and same thing for the Republican party. From the other side of Bradford again wants a comeback. In his article Bradford states \"in the same vein, faithless electors have occasionally refuesd to vote for their party's candidate\". Now no one would know if this is true but the electors might have their reasons. But Richard A. Posner comes back and states \"no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. In this quote its supports the fact that the electors do choose who they please. Plus this makes it fair because candidates wont be getting votes all over the places. Also the electoral college will be trust wirthy because the college follows the majority of the people's vote, and then makes a vaild decision. So the electoral college just gives people want they want from trust.\n\nAll in all the Electoral College is just the better method of voting. The Electoral College will give what the people want. Also the electoral college represents the states votes. The reason is because electoral colleges are game changers and a trust worthy method. Certainly it wll be easier to choose a president and break ties.",
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"content": "Dear Who ever concerns Some people obssesed computers They usually stay night playing games going The people love computers rarely iteract people like left alone one bothering Some people go online research stuff probable lied maybe someones messing If love computers much stay night nt get sleep miss work get tired know problem quit You dont want stay al night Because could something important miss like childs party becuse husband wife typed wake But nt want go miss child never trust stop interacting people really got problem need want go get junk food soda Computers time bad sometime get cranky someone takes away need realize go get exercise need got get end unhealthy bad want stop habit get new one When write report tend go internet It agood sorce could lying could turn worst report ever copy pasted could still reliable sorce use use good good book The internet bad thing could consume nt use time people make computer shut computers world one week know internet",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are a good idea in theory, but in practice they seem impracticle, costly, and unsafe. Smart cars require quite alot of preperation for something that is so underwelming. Same thing goes for investing money into cars that are incredibly slow and dumb when compared to us. Lastly, smart cars aren't guranteed to not crash or accidently run off a bridge because it couldn't see that the bridge had been demolished later that day.\n\nSmart cars may be smart, but that doesn't make them better. Smart cars have to guess and assume what will happen based on what they were told by their programming. Smart cars rely a whole lot on electronics, so they could be in theory hacked or misinformed sending it into the wall of the house to it's left because it was told that everything was considered road and not impassable terrain. \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheal, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirrow, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\"\n\nEven though driverless cars are possible doesn't make it cheap. It's possible to build a skyscraper out of gold, but it would probably require more then all the money on earth to afford it. Even if you could build this golden skysraper, what would happen after that? Gold is a rather soft material so it would most likely weather away as time wore on and would eventually collapse, even if it wasn't destroyed what would you do with a golden skyscraper that you couldn't do with a normal one? \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at a Radio Shack\"\n\nFinally we get to the main issue with self driven cars, are they safe. Nothing is less safe then a machine that can act on its own, it doesn't require any input from the driver to accelerate or make a turn. Even with all the safety restraints in the world, these cars would still manage to injure or kill people. Artificial Intelligence isn't the same thing as a machine that can act on its own, AI actually thinks about what will happen if they do this or that, machines just do what their told. \"Presently, traffic laws are written wih the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\"",
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"content": "In this essay im going to prove to you why that electorial colleges should be gotten rid of. i think that elections should be won by popular vote.\n\nWith Electorial Colleges what the public wants or voted for really just doesnt matter because if the majority of the Electorial College disagrees well then the majority vote is irrelevant to the election and the canidate that the Electorial College voted on will will the election. \" The Electorial college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" I comepletely agree with that statement. the Electorial colleges are not dermocratic at all and when you vote for a presidential canidate well you're actually voting for a slate of electors. the Electorial College is also an unfair way to determine our president because well each state has a different number of Electorial College votes. Each state should have an equal amount of Electors to make it at least somewhat fair; its still unfair because of the fact that they can always out vote the popular vote from the citizens. when the Electorial College decides to out vote the actual winner that becomes problematic to the citizens because now a canidate that the majority of America didnt want to become president is now president and that can be problematic because the people may become angry or upset in some way because a canidate they felt didnt stand for a good cause or that was unfit to run the country is now in charge. also like what is the point of letting the people vote for who they want to become president if their vote may not even matter or make a difference because the Electorial College is going to do what they want anyways.",
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"content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus, why is it hard for us to explore. Venus is challenging becasue the surface of its planet has 97 pecent of carbon dixoide and the temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and also has volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and freqent lighting strikes. Venus is like Earth's twin beacuse back in the day Venus had large oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Thats why it's hard for us to get on that planet and study it further more. The three important themes in this passage is that why are scientists discussing futher more vists to this planet, why is it challenging for us to get on that planet, and how Earth and Venus are alike or twins.\n\nOne important theme in the passage is that why are scientists discussing futher more vists to this planet. \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth and Today the planet has familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.(author,4)\" The scientists believe that Venus can have life on that planet and possible live there. It did have what we have today like oceans, mountains, and valleys. This is important beacause one day we could\n\nhave planetay visit there.\n\nOne important event in the passage is that why is it challenging for us to get on that planet. \"The planet's atmosphere of almost 97 percent is carbon dixoide blankets Venus and also the temperature average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.(author,3)\" This planet is bad to visit because it has like eruting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frerquant lighting strikes. This is important beacuse the planet is going to be a challenging planet to get on.\n\nOne important theme in the passage is how are Earth and Venus alike or twins. \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.(author,2)\" Venus could of had life on that planet beacuse it it had oceans and other stuff like our planet. This is important beacuse it is almost like our planet.\n\nHow are Earth and Venus alike or twins, why is it challenging for us to get on that planet, and why are scientists discussing futher more visits to this planet, this is the three important themes in the passage.",
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"content": "In libraries books music magaizines apporiate put shelves There little kids want look anything get hands They mysterious comes There bad books also good books library If people found book type material library found offensive take shelf There children look anything want think looks interesting The library also least check book arrives library That way one would worry material offensive Movies matter really lot bad movies dont think people would find offensive They dont watch neither children There lot bad music I think censorship music music today drugs alchoal violance People would want see local library children see I seen news people get upset see something think inappropiate underage children I would get mad dont want underage child listening type music Children look song writers want become That good thing All magazines offensive people looking cover cover person Libraries would put inappropiate magazine shelves There magazines good magazines even children read I think libraries dont put offensive magazines dont want controversy People today came even good magazines anyone read inappropaite anyone I think people today dont realize library would want offend anyone putting offensive magaizines movies books music Putting censorship things would good thing materials good small children read hear watch The parents dont want children looking person involved violence drugs alchoal Censorship would way go materials keep away contoversy children safe",
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"content": "In the article\" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify emotion. This is an amazing feature that was created for computers. This technology has not been created before that can caculate how you feel in percents.\n\nI think this new technology should be used to read students' emotional expressions. I think this because it will help others know how you feel and how you feel about what you are doing at that time. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This would be helpful if a student would be to shy to tell the teacher so the computer would just know and could assist the student instead.\n\n\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" This would make video games look more realistic by having faces be more expressive. Having animated faces be more expressive would also make you have a connection meaning you can feel the same way as the animated face is expressing. For video surgery it would be effective because it would read how the patient feels at that time so they can see how much pain the patient is in.\n\n\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" \"So computers need to understand that, too.\" The program could identify how you feel emotionally so the program could try and cheer you up when you are sad like \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" \"But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" Which is a good examples on how effective this program can be.\n\nFinally, I conclude that this program would be good to have because of how the program can identify how you feel and try and cheer you up. The program can also identify how you feel even if you try and hide your emotions. It is so effective that the program can give exact percentages on how you feel like each perecentage for happy, sad, angry and other feelings that people have. It reads muscle movements to know how you feel like if you raise your eyebrows you are surprised. Reading muscle movements in the face is a good way to know how a person feels.",
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"content": "Hey everybody I'm Luke Bomberger and I'm here to convince you to join the\n\n\"Seagoing Cowboys program,I am going to list reasons why you should join by telling you my excpriecnces .I've had good and bad ones but at the end it was the best choice I've made.\n\nOne reason is that you get to help many people and animals have a better and here is my example,It took about two weeks to cross the the alantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China .Caring for animals during the crossings kept me busy. They had to be fed and watered two three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled upfrom the lower holds of the ship,Also stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nAnother reason is that you get to venture around the world and see many different things and places,like I got to see Europe and china,but seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special to me.\n\nAnd one final example is that as you venture around the world and take care of animals you also get more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nI think that this would be a great opportunity for you guys and you also get see many different places and people and thier countries.",
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"content": "VIsions of self-drivng cars have been around for awhile now, but with the technology that has been so greatly improved in the past several years, that vision is becoming more and more realilistic. I am against the development of these self-driving cars. Though the cars do have some benifits and are cool i think that the cons of having self-driving cars outweigh the pros. Having these cars is promoting our society to become even more lazy than we already are, so far the cars are not very efficent, and are just not very safe.\n\nMy first reason why i do not support futher development of these self-driving cars is because it is promoting people to become even more dependant on technology and lazier. Driving a car is not in any way a difficult task for the average person, the only physically demanding thing it requires you to do is step on a pedal and turn a small wheel. The rules of driving ar ealso not overly complex, and in most places as long as all drivers are alert and focussed it is not that dangerous. I understand that technology is becoming more prominant in every day life because of the way it makes things easier but it is getting to the point where nobody will have to do anything anymore.\n\nMy second reason for why i do not support this technology is because so far the cars are not that efficient. Yes they have all these sensors and in normal circumstances work perfectly fine, but when there is any situation on the road the human driver must take over. These cars are also set up so the human driver has to almost just as alert as they would be in normal car. If the human has to be just as alert and may very well need to take over if the road or traffic conditiions are out of the ordinary, what is the point of having a self-driving car? Even if they could work it out so that the car is one-hundred percent efficient on its own, it would take quite a bit of money for that technology and as simple as driving is i do not find it to be worth the effort.\n\nThe last reason i dont think there should be further progression on the development of self-driving cars is because it just isnt safe. It does not matter how much you improve technology, or how well the car is able to drive on its own, technology acts up and stops working without warning. Driving is something that if not done carefully can lead to severe damage of objects and people. If the technology were to act up, and not even be able to alert the human in the car that something was wrong, the consequences would most likely be severe, and since the laws are so muddy it would be difficult to determine anything legal after.\n\nI am against developing self-driving cars because i think it will promote laziness, i dont think the cars are very efficient, and i dont think they are safe. The amount of legal issues and possible complications that could arrise from further development of this product i do not think is worth the slight convience. Though the idea is neat i hope it is not pursued.",
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"content": "*point of view Luke*\n\n\"I just don't get why being a Cowboy is so interesting\" says Luke's best friend, Adam. \" Well I wasn't just any old cowboy you would I was a Seagoing Cowboy which is a totally different thing then being just any old cowboy,\" replied Luke. \" Well i'll tell you this, if you can give me a list of reasons on why being a Seagoing Cowboy is so great, then I will join the Cowboy's myself no questions or debates about it.\"challenged Adam. \" Okay, looks like we have a deal!\" stated Luke.\n\n\" Let's start with how many places you get to travel through out the journey.\" When I was a Seagoing Cowboy I got to travel to Greece when I was only 18 years old!\" Yes, I did have to care for a ton of animals along the way there because it was worth it knowing that I helped not only the animals survive that long journey but I also helped Greece.\" Wow!!!\" exclaimed Adam. \" But that's not it when I was also very young I got to travel to Italy and ride on a gondola.\" That's amazing!\" beamed Adam. \" What were some of your responsibilities on the cargo ship?\" questioned Adam. \" There were many responsibilities on the SS Charles like cleaning up animal manure, having to become a nightwatch, and hurting yourself because as you know ships can be very slippery.\"\n\n\" During sightseeings of animal drop off's sometimes us cowboys had extra time so we would play some time ticking games like fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling.\" Oh and yes, continued Luke, I almost forgot......\"\" Okay stop!!!!\" excalimed Adam.\n\n\" You have given me more than enough reasons to why I should join the Seagoing Cowboys, and I loved all the reasons!\" I mean being a cowboy sounds like a very good life opportunity that I would never, ever, ever pass up.\" expressed Adam. \" So, does this mean that you'll join the Seagoing Cowboys when the chance is right?\" \" Yes, yes,and yes!!!\" exclaimed Adam.\n\n\" Well i'm glad that my explanation of what being a Seagoing Cowboy is all about got through to you.\" said Luke. \" Well i'm glad that I actually decided to listen to you, so now i'm going to tell a bunch of people about the Seagoing Cowboys, so thank you Luke!!\"\" No problem\" replied Luke.",
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"content": "Everyone wants to go to the park with their children or grandchildren, or maybe just take a nice walk. With the way we live now everything will be too polluted becuase alot of people drive cars and dont take the bus,walk, or carpool. Yes, people should limit their car usage. They should limit their uses because owning a car is expensive, it promotes the use of walking and public tranportation, and it reduces smog/pollution.\n\nOwning a car is more expensive then you think. In a city such as Vauban in Germany that has only two places to park, a large parking garage, and a develment where the car owner needs to buy the spot for forty thousand dollars along with a home. In places like Bogota, Columbia on their national car free day all violaters will be fined twenty-five dollars. It may not seem like alot, but it all adds up at the end of the day. In places like Paris motorist with even numbered liscense plates recieve a twenty-two euro fine ($31), and the following day motorist with odd numbered plates recived the same fine. Almost four thousand drivers were fined. Thoose are just instances where fines have occured, other expenses are gas. Some people who are wealthy and have money won't be impacted by this the same way an average family with three children will.\n\nMost people take public transportation for granted. Imagine if we didn't have busses, trains, and subways. Imagine having to drive to New York City instead of the subway. It is not a pretty thought. In places like Bogota, Columbia that has a national day without cars people use public transportation or walk, unless they want a twenty-five dollar fine. According to Mayor Antanas Mockus \" The rain hasn't stopped people from participating.\" Cities such as Cali and Valledupar have also done what Bogota has done, and Municipal authorities from other countries came to see the turnout, and they were enthusiastic. New York is promoting a bike sharing program that allows people to ride bikes through the city and return them at any location. \"Mr. Sivaks's son lives in San Francisco and has a car, but takes the Bay Area Rapid Transit when he can even though it often takes longer then driving.\" Even though some people don't take public transportation beacuse they are too cool for it, they might just need to in order to save the place they live.\n\nHave you ever wondered why you can hardly see the stars at night? It's not because they aren't there, but it is beacuse the smoke from the pollution and smog is covering the view. After days of near-record pollution Paris has enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of all the polution. Congestion of the smog only went down sixty percent in five days. The reason was of diesel fuel which is more used because france has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Places like Bogota, Columbia who have a day without cars have a day for pollution and smog to be reduced, and places like Vauban, Germany who only have cars on the main thoroughfare virtually have no smog or pollution beacuse they don't allow cars in homes. Even though it's a hassle to change everything to do it, but by just doing one thing a time they are helping the enviroment.\n\nNow that we see and know that the people of Vauban, Germany live with no cars, and the people of Bogota, Columbia have a day with no cars. Thoose places don't have as much pollution such as Paris who had to ban driving so they can reduce pollution. We know that in Vauban you can park the car for forty thousand dolalrs, or get fined for driving on the one day you are asked not to. All thoose reasons only promotes public transportation or walking. So yes, people should limit there use of cars becuase it is expensive, it promotes the use of walking and public transportation, and it reduces smog/pollution.",
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