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"content": "The advancing of technology is unstoppable. When the driverless car is fully driverless, it will be revolutionary. That's why I believe that driverless cars are a great thing that will be fully added to our world one day. The driverless car could benefit the people of this world in many ways, it conserves gas, it's more safe than other ways of transportation, and it would cost less.\n\nOne very important thing about the driverless car is that it conserves gas. The world is already in a mild gas problem as oil is a nonrenewable resource. This is because the people of the world use way too much gas every day for driving. These cars would use half the fuel that cars today use. That would make the price of gas go down and it would help our gas problem and make gas last for many more years.\n\nDriverless cars will be extermently safer than the cars we have today. I say this because it would cause less accidents. Let's say that someone had a little bit too much to drink but he or she is still alert enough to drive. Instead of taking the risk of crashing, he or she can get into the driverless car and only control it at a few moments. There would be a way less chance of he or she crashing and would make the roads way safer for every one else.\n\nThe driverless car will save many families a ton of money. Instead of families buying their own car, they can call a Google driverless taxi when they need to go somewhere and not have to worry about the cost of gas. They also wouldn't have to worry about the price of buying a new car. The only places that would be losing money out of this is car dealerships. When the driverless cars become mainstream there wont be much need for car dealerships or even man driven cars.\n\nDriverless cars are going to be one of the biggest inventions in human history once they break their way into the mainstream. They would help out the world in many ways by conserving gas, making the world a safer place, and it would save familes a ton of money. When driverless cars are finally released to the public, the lives of almost every body in the world will be improved.",
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"content": "Saeng concluded story paragraph shows feels could go If fails driving test use plants overcome problems She actually pass test time The unique plants show stronger thinks believes feels comfortable plants bring back memories childhood",
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"content": "These days, the historic background of the apartment or building in which residents live has been becoming their favourite activity. In this essay, I will explain the reason leading to this trend and some ways people can research this. \r\n\r\nThere is a piece of evidence that proves understanding the history of a building brings people benefits. The people who are keen on finding this research are knowledgeable about how this building was constructed, which materials were used. As a result, this is beneficial for house improvement features like doors and windows. Furthermore, this type of information may be useful in making adjustments to the house's layout, such as adding new walls or a new floor. Hence, it is helpful for the future design of the building's heating and cooling systems. Nevertheless, this information might avoid any diversions caused by weather conditions such as wind, typhoons, or showers.\r\n\r\nThere are several methods that residents can use to do research on these things. Firstly, people can get further information from the local library, the museum, and different forms of multimedia, such as television, all newspapers, and movies. In addition, if citizens cannot access the internet, they can take advantage of some kinds of libraries' feature books that contain current-residence literature.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is the true reason behind people’s intention to seek out their dwellings past, and there exist means to see the history of the house.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates mood appreciation happiness starting w background end moving lessons learned parentsFirst describes wounderful enviornment paragraph My young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen My parents passed love cooking still today I eternally grateful Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air continues describing wonderful place grow parents showed genorosityNext says hard parents leave everything knew children In states paragraph came selflessly give children better life continues writing strong showing value family friends genorosity This shows apprecitive Overall communicating mood able honor parents much",
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"content": "In libraries bookstores worldwide books written published subject matter ranging odd inappropriate serious violent These books written target emotions reader spark excitement humor horror empathy among many others However though books made specific purpose sometimes unclear book appropriate eyes young reader even mature reader These books appear unappealing offensive However though nt appeal reader could book censored without unanimous disapproval everyone Censorship books unjust right free speech press subjects deserving written importantly target audiences deserve books written interest regardless approval The first reason censorship novels works literature writers deserve freedoms speech press They aloud voice opinions write subject matter interested Though many times used subject matter highly provocative inappropriate still capacity legal ability write wish To stop writing opinionated stories similar censorship books nazi Millions books burned hundreds thousands writers executed conveying opinions work conflicted ideas government Even though books written ages still deserving reader The next reason books censorship new ideas cover topics never discussed Books stories meant push mark written written The variety literature reason popular For thousands years written text way understand connect cultures people written language And though stories written manner would appropriate child nt mean story nt written read Its use simply monitored capable accepting understanding message capable reading Lastly censorship simply unjust without better chance discuss attempt describe stories target vast crowd people Though materials found story horrific parent preferred form literature different group people And limit literary subjects people prefer could parallelled limiting person s voice opinion It simply nt reasonable allow single category work varieties messages select group people Variety seperates person s opinions makes different another s Therefore censorship literature enforced Writing topics open people whether offensive convey purpose And writers right illustrate points literal medium never limit rights That censorship never able remove piece literature shelf",
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"content": "Trippin fences I years young short years I ever remember laughing hysterically Whether something stupid I best friend something stupid time got together something outrageous Someone said Laughter shortest distance two people With best friend I s exactly case I always get good ab workout whenever I m I m always bursting laughter It grade year I hanging best friend lunch break outside I showing new jeans I d gotten day I also telling note passed boy apparently crush sometime boy also asked note asked could see I handed sudden chucked note fence Clearly guy nt approval I could nt leave guy hanging without answer especially time I liked back I begged give note back refused What I supposed let unanswered note lay side fence No The solution hop fence grab So I new jeans might I add practically straddled fence ripped big hole inner side thigh brand new jeans I mad I grabbed note climbed back fence new improved hobo jeans On way back I lost balance fell fence I ended losing note planting head first pile mud pine cones What idiot I I d climbed stupid fence ripped jeans biffed lost balance lost I frustrated I started laughing I m sure I embarrassed I randomly started cracking Then started laughing laughs I laugh laughter contagious Pretty soon hysterically laughing like couple dorks Laughter really shortest distance two people day Even though I probably mad But laugh That s life living With silly funny memory ll stay forever Especially moved away It seem stupid funny us I guess really one CAPS kind moments But reminds good old days It s good memories filled laughter If nt life almost feel dull without Even laugh smallest things life That s anyways Laughter shortest distance two people",
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"content": "Dear state senator, I believe that we shouldn't keep the electoral college process because it should be in favor of the popular vote for the president of the Unites States instead of how it is now. I believe this becasue for example with this system voters don't vote for the president but for the slate of electors even though this system does come with some positives like it allows them to focus on their campaign efforts but can turn into a complete disaster factor.\n\nTo begin with,the system of the electoral college does not allow the voters to vote for the president but only for a slate of electors, they are the ones who elect the president. There is always an off-chance that those electors that won the statewide election would go to Congress and the opponent recieves more electoral votes. The electors are chosen from the state they could be state conventions, or the state party's central committee and even sometimes the presidential candidate themselves. This system then leads to several cons such as the voters can not control whom their electors vote for and also the voters tend to get confused sometimes about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\n\nAlthough, maybe we should be able to keep our despised method of choosing the president because, it comes with several pro's like for example, a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible like in 2012's election when Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the votes that came from Romney. In this election the winner is aware with the electoral votes which induces the candidates and allows them to focuses on their campaign efforts. Lead them to the toss-up states which basically mean they are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign so the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\n\nLast but not least, this system is also known a the disaster factor like for example the 2000 fiasco which was the biggest election crisis in a century because they had to consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking the electors and that they will always define the will of those people. Many of the electors have occasionally refused to vote for their own party candidate and even cast a deciding vote for whomever it is that they want or perfer to please. this method should not be prohibeded any more because of the causes it is doing which is affec\n\nIn conclusion it is official the the system of the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and also it is concluded to be an irrational system. I still believe that the electoral college should be elected by popular vote for the president.",
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"content": "In the story \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" Luke Bomberger is a boy who crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times. He also crosed the Pacific Ocean twice. His friend Don Reist invited him to go on a trip with him on a cattle boat. In his point of view he thought it was an opportunity of a life time, so he couldent say no.\n\nDon and Luke signed up to sail over seas to ship animals to other countries, states, cities, and more. On one of there trips they received their orders to New Orleans. But Luke turned 18 wich ment he could be drafted to military service. Luke kept going on his journies over seas instead of joining the military. Luke was verty exided that he went to a lot of places and crossed many seas.\n\nOn one of his missions it took about 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. But they loved caring for the animals and sailing it kept them busy. Luke and Don had fun on board they made up games. They liked when after the trips when the animals have been unloaded. Luke thought being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more then an adventurer. Luke and Don loved what they were doing.",
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"content": "In the story of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\". The author is planning to move people to the planet. If people where to live there it is going to be to hot. In some\n\npeople often referred to as Earth`s \"twin,\" that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in the terms of the density and the size is occasionally the closest in the distance too. When Earth, Venus, and Mars, are the other planetary neighbor, that orbit around the sun at differnt kinds of speeds. Venus is also sometimes called the\"Evening Star,\".\n\nWith how thick the atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets over the planet of Venus. Some other challenings are the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid on Venus`s atmosphere. Also on the planet`s surface, the temps are also averaged over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, it has a atmosperic pressure that is about 90 times greater than what we have expected on our own planet. This planet also has volcanoes, and has a verity of earthquakes.\n\nThe NASA uses mechanical computers to study with about Venus. All of these devices where first envisioned in the 1800`s. It also played an important role in the 1940`s while World War 2 was going on.\n\nOn our travles on Earth is beyond should not be limited by all of the dangers and the douts but should be expanded to meet all the very edges of imagination and the innovation.",
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"content": "Reasons to Join the Seagoing Cowboys Program!\n\nOne reason to join the Seagoing Cowboys program is because, you get to help people. Helping people is a good deed so why not. The Seagoing program has many people help others. Luke says,\" There where 44 nations that came to help care for people that needed animals, food, and shelter.\"\n\nYou should also join the program because you can visit unique places. Luke said that he got to see the Acropolis in Greese which was special. Luke said, \" I got to go to Europe, China, and Greese.\" I think that it would be fun to go to those places. It would also be like a vacation but not.\n\nAnother reason to join the Seagoing program is because you won't be alone. Luke said, \" There where 44 nations helping in the Seagoing Cowboy program.\"\n\nI personally think that you can make a great impact on others.\n\nOne more reason why I would join the program is because I like helping others. I aslo think it would be fun to go to different places. My final reason is because I have always wanted to be in the army and save people or places from destruction.",
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"content": "There's a new car coming out and its called \" The Drivless Car\". This cars is bad for you. The car can handle driving functions at sppeds up to 25 mph. This car can't do alot for you. It also can't help you when your lost but it also can kill people. Driveless car can get out of control, this car is not the ony car that can talk, its more cars that talk to you and take you places.\n\nSo let me tell you a few things about this so called fancy car. First off the Driveless car are bad for you because its alot of sympaths that the car can do. Not only that it have a GPS. You still can get lost with or without a GPS.It come with cameras. You can put a camera in your own car. Plus it's a Google Car. Well other cars can provide the same things, so it dont make this car no better than any other car or good.\n\nThis car drive for you, it can steer. Even tho special touch sensors make sure the drivers keeps hold of the wheel. It can lose controls while doing a turn and can kill a child or a person. It still navigate through work zones and around accident. Even tho in the passage it say while the driver watches the road the car watches the driver. The driver can get into an accident because lets say if a deer was cross the highway and the driver slows down but the car jump back. Then the driver is in trouble for killing the animal and mostly injured at the same time.\n\nI dont think people should buy these smart cars, because sometimes these cars will take over you. you should'nt text or call anyone while driving because if you to loud it destack the driver, but some people think its stay and still put in these cars. Its not good while driving. It will tell you what to text or who to call like a smart phone a do if you press the wrong button.\n\nMost driving law focus on keeping drivers and pedestrians safe, but why make these up to date cars that nobody know how to drive yet. I know I wouldnt because it seem dangerous. Do this car even have good senses? Do this car tells you what you need to do? In my opinion i would tell other people not to get this call neither because you can lose you life and others too.",
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"content": "Emotional expressions\n\nAccording to the article there are new ways to find out how a person is feeling such ass computers.\n\nComputers can tell how someone is feeling according to the article ''some new computers software that can recognize emotions''.\n\nYou might ask how can a computer tell how we feel.\n\nThey can tell how we are feeling because of our face expression with our face expressions they know if we are feeling good or bad.\n\nHumans can tell how a friend or family member is feeling aswell by the same way computers can tell by our face expressions if your head is down or your face just doesnt look like youy wanna talk that mcould mean that your really not happy or when your face is heald high and you want to talk to everyone that can mean your really happy it all depends on your face expressions.\n\nThe mona lisa demonstration is one of the paintings that showes how someone felt Accordig to the facial feedback ''theory of emotion movig your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them''.\n\nStudents should have the technology to see how they feel because they would actually understand the emotions people are going through putting a happy face sometimes is not your real happy face it could just be a fake smile.\n\nyou can see how fake your smile can be by looking in the mirror and doing these three things.\n\n1. Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth 2. Then squint your eyes slightly to produce wrinkling at the corners of your eyes.\n\n3. Holding that,raise the outer parts of your vheecks up toward your eyes.\n\nDr. Huang even knew individuals showed degrees of exprssions he used video imagaery to track the new facal movements on a real face. this software tracks all the facial movments and mixed emotions every face they get is compared to a neutral face.\n\nDr. Huang is a colleage expert at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nImagine being able to communicate with a computer and being ablle too see how you feel. thats why now technology is getting better for us to interact with them and be able to communicate.",
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"content": "It is believed some people that to halt ailments and probable illnesses, pollution and housing issues have more importance than other problems thus governments ought to increase their interests. I mostly agree with this suggestion because environmental pollution leads to corrupt raw materials of foods and housing problems give rise to increasing of unsheltered people who are more likely to get illnesses.\r\n\r\nFirstly, governments should tend to the affair of environmental pollution. In recent year, most people have become more vulnerable to get disease because of air pollution and soil pollution. Especially, soil pollution is proved as the most destructive factor for nature by scientists. This type of pollution causes to corrupt plants as well as kill insects. Many livings have affected negatively these situations. To illustrate that, as we the humans are at the top of the food chain, we get poisons by plants, fishes and livestock. Subsequently, these poisons lead to some diseases and illnesses and we may contaminate each other. Thus, environmental pollution takes an important place to be prevented by governments.\r\n\r\nSecondly, housing problem is considerable factor in terms of people’s health. Numerous individuals have not got any place to live in cities and this situation entails to be solved by authorities. In these circumstances, they catch cold and get many microbes which lead to variety of ailments. Hence, whether having a house or not, people may suffer from these diseases. In extreme cases, contamination risks of diseases may slightly increase in the long term because of increasing of people contact. \r\n\r\nThus, governments should focus to solve this problem as a prior.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with this suggestion. Although, there are many problems to be solved for public health, in my opinion, environmental pollution and housing issues should be handled by governments as most effective factors due their critical hazards. 47 dk.",
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"content": "The obstacles builders empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock winds top building always shifting violent air currents Also dirigibles use Hydrogen highly flammable So blows gon na lot bad things going New york Also law airships flying low Urban areas The building would modified strengthened dirigibles could go",
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"content": "It is true that, living in a polluted environment will cause lots of health issues.This has always been an argumentative topic amount people on whether government should focus on environmental pollution and housing problems. In my opinion, by simply improving the environment and housing problems will not cure or prevent people from being sick or improve public health. \r\n\r\nIndeed, environment pollution and poor condition raise many health problems. For example, air pollution is a major problem in urban area. Due to increase of cars usage and expansion of manufacturing sector, many people suffer from respiratory ailments especially people with asthma. While, in rural area, lack of access to clean water and unhygine surrounding is their main problem. Their living condition is surrounded by mosquitos they have brought the spread of disease. Overall, if the government mainly forces on improving their housing facilities and pollution disease of such can be avoided. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, simply forcing to the problem surface will not prevent the disease from happening again. The government will need to do more than that, they will need to allocate a portion of its budget to investing on vaccine. This will prevent disease to becoming pandemic. Besides that, launch health awareness campaigns and educate people with basic medical needs will improve public health. Even if the government provided housing of such disease will still be a factor affecting the society. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are no doubts that reduce pollution and better housing facilities benefits public health. At the same time, government should also launch health awareness campaigns and provide citizen will health check-up every year to reduce the number of people being sick.",
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"content": "Quality of high school education become the most important problem in every country in the world. There are several inputs for education ministry to improve, one of them is make evaluation for teachers from their student. However, this solution can be subjective and not relevant for the teachers and school. This essay will explain advantage and drawbacks of both sides. \r\n\r\nTeachers need to improve their skills of teaching and how they communicate with students, however they do not know which aspect and subject that need to be improved. One of the solutions is evaluation from students to teachers, this solution not to criticize but to help growth's their instructor. This tool can be one of many steps in order to make better quality of education which the students also can contribute and speak up their opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, this evaluation can be boomerang to school because the students can be subjective to evaluate their teacher. For example, if the students do not like one particular instructors, they can give bad score to him/her which make the survey not reliable anymore. Moreover, they can be lost their respect for their teachers and feel like they are in control of their education. \r\n\r\nIn conclusions, evaluation survey can be one tools to improve skills of the teachers, but this step needs additional socialization to make it as objective as possible. Without those additional step, the teachers can be lost their respect.",
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"content": "Learning the history of an individual place is an essential part to gain knowledge regarding any country's heritage. For plenty of years, numerous people have wanted to do some research regarding the history of their accommodation. There are several reasons behind this situation, which are discussed in the further essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are a number of reasons, which have increased the curiosity of the people to find such information. The first one might be to know about the previous owners who used to live there. For instance, how many owners had left at that place, for how many years, how was the nature and so on. There are unusual touts to get in one's mind when one purchased the house. Moreover, information regarding construction is the second reason for this approach. For instance, if a building is getting weak by passing time, the recent folk, who live there want to know about this to find out the solution or help.\r\n\r\nApart from this, people can use a plethora of techniques to do some research and two of these are worth mentioning. They can talk to neighbours, Who lived for many years to find out about the past householders. He might be in touch with them and used to meet each other once in a while. Thus, they can provide brief information. Additionally, if they want to know about builders, then it would be easy to find former owners all from the government. Authorities take all important data regarding such as blueprints, maps, details of the contractor and so on regarding that place. Besides this, it is a leisure trick.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there can be done some research on places where the public lives by not only talking to the neighbours but also the government.",
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"content": "The building nt designed carry extra weight dirigible attach top And dirigibles weights drop back keep place wouldnt safe lead weights dangle feet air The mast built Glass could dangerous dirigible couldnt stop went straight tower Also electronic winching stations nt seem like would work well",
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"content": "During my life i have watched meny presidental elections on my telivision. To me the Electoral College on papper should work, Should being the key word. As I read the paragraphes on both why the Electoral College work and does not work I have decides the side with not haveing the Electoral College.\n\nHistorical evidence and evidence from this paragraph piont to not haveing a Electoral College. One reason for this was when Al Gore lost the presedency but won the populure vote nation wide as stated in Source 2. Anouther piont is that if the people have so munch power over who is voted to be presedent then how do we have a presedent that the people did not want the president but the person is still elected, its an outrage! One example of how the Electoral College chould be a distaster waiting to happen is that rthe votes are tied which may seem not likey at forstn glance but say if the votes are tied the presedency is thrown into the House of Representatives which lets face it, in the end the desision will not be approved by the people and the people will then barly have a say on who gets to be presedent or not. Another thing is the Electoral College can also be vary bisest towrdes one party or the other. This is evident because if a certine party got more electors than another party which whould led to a canedat from one party have more support then another.\n\nSource 3 talks about how sure thats its posssable for their to be a tie in the Electoral College but its unlikey supports what im trying the say in my earlyer Paragraph, that even though a tie is unlikey it is still possible to happen the chance is still their. This paragraph also says the everyone is a president but if that is the case then why dose the poeple that \"we\" vote for the eclectoral College help vote for the presedent insted vote for the other canadate is an atrosidy on its own. The winner-take-all system is one that only afects the swing states because if thoughs states have already voted then the staes the already votes whould be for not because the numbers for who gets voted whould be already in favor of one state or another. The fact the larger states have a bigger say in who gets voted on is not fair. the is becuase if all the big states vote for someone and about 1/4 of the smaller states vote on one end of the scale and the other states vote towrdes the other end of the scale then the ballence whould be off and one side would overpower the other side by fact of shear numbers of votes compared to the other side.\n\nAfter reading over my responce and the evidence that I have profided form the paragraph hear I have with great pride that i have argued my point across to you that the Electoral College in papper is good but in reality is only a crumbleing castle waiting to fall into the tiny bites and pieces that it should be.",
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"content": "To begin with, is that reducing advantages of limiting car usages can help reduce the 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and reduce 50 percent of the gas in areas like the United States. We must lessen the space for parking so instead of stores along a distant highway you can actually just walk to the store. 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport.\n\nWe have to try harder to make the United states more like Vauban.\n\nThen,\n\nWe need to get rid of cars to help get rid of pollution. Cars also causes smog, which we can get rid of if we reduced the usage of cars. Also so many cars causes congestion and a lost revenue in delivery companies. A good idea would be to fine the people like Paris did to reduce so many cars on the street.\n\nNext,\n\nThe goal would be to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. So only buses and taxis would be permitted for the time being without any cars roaming the streets. Also any violaters will be faced a $25 dollar fine. This idea would be a really good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution. We could also build bicycle paths to help travel. We could also have restrictions which could dramatically cut traffic.\n\nFinally, if we got rid of cars it would have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment. New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities. It is said that young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. It is proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions, and improve safety.",
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"content": "WHAT NO WAY!?!?! OH YEAH! The results have been shown: I am 83 percent shocked, 9 percent impressed, 6 percent apprehensive, and 2 percent curious. Mostly shocked due to the fact that there has been a technology developed to read the emotional expressions of humans. Impressed because of how cool it sounds to have my emotions read based off of a computer. Apprehensive because there are pros and cons to this. And curious because I want to know how this works.\n\nIn most cases I feel this kind of technology would be of great value to our society.\n\nThis new technology could really help in classrooms.\" Most human communication is nonverbal ,including emotional communication,\" notes Dr.Huang.Whenever kids require assistance with work, most just keep quiet about it and that leads to them not doing what they need to get done. But, that can be solved. The computer technology\n\nof the Facial Action Coding System could provide the teacher the emotion the student may be feeling,which could result in that person getting the help that they need.\n\nThe process begins when the computer creates a 3-D model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.There are six classified basic emotions: fear, surprise,disgust,surprise,anger,and happiness. Each emotion is associated\n\nwith characteristic movements of the facial muscle.When your eyebrows raise it may show that you are surprised or when your lips tighten it may reveal that you are angry. Using video imagery , the emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements.Although this computer can read,it makes me think whether or not someone could be feeling an emotion different from what they are expressing.However, this doesn't stop the software because it can also identify mixed emotions (via by weighting the different units).\n\nHaving this software could help people in need who are afraid of reaching out and getting help.It could also reveal whether a politician has a sincere smile on their face, which could lead to the result of them possibly not being truthful.Just imagine how much this technology could change our society.Think about it.",
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"content": "The Face of Mars\n\nThe Face on Mars is a intersting land fromation. Some belive that it was amde by aliens and that its proff of alien life on mars. That acusation has been proven wrong yet conspiracy theorists still belive that it is proff of an alien species. These people will defend their accusation with \"evidence\" but NASA has given the public enough of their own evidence to prove them wrong.\n\nThe first piece of evidence that NASA has provided is that if it were created by aliens they wouldnt want to hide it. The Face of Mars has brought NASA much fame and the face itself has made it into the spot light of hollywood. It has stared in its own movie and was put on magizine covers and even made it on a talk show belivie it or not. With this outburst of fame NASA was able to make some money and thye put it toward keeping their space program alive. Theorists still claim that is \" bona fied\" evidence of aliens but if that were true NASA as a company needing funding would milk that money cow dry.\n\nNASA tried to clear the mix up with the skeptics and they took a picture ten time sharper than the original. The skeptics saw the photo and claimed that alien markings were hidden in the haze that the camera couldnt see through. That is not the case its not easy to take pictures of it and they do not pass the face very often to get the perfect shot nor did thay have the best equpment at the time.NASA held to their claim that it was just a land formation casting a shadow.\n\nFinally in 2001 on a cloudles summer day on mars the Mars Global Surveyor was able to capture an amazing and clear photo of the face.Each pixel spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. NASA says that the photo is three time greater than the original and if their were ancient alien temples and pyrimads we could see it. Just in case skeptics could find another way of saying its of alien origin they said excatly what it was. It is actully the mars equivalent of a butte or mesa.\n\nNASA would never try to hide things like this. They tried every thing in their power to prove that they were not lying and that it is juat a land form. NASA wouldnt even have benefited from lying about it so there was no reason to. NASA never had diffrent motives or were trying to hide alien civilization they just didnt have the best equipment but they finally got a perfet picture that was able to put all the theories to rest.",
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"content": "Dear I think computers positive effect people You lots stuff computers help people learn new things almost everything Also programs computer allow talk people Also adults take care finances bills online taxes I think computers definitely positive effect people A lot people use computers learn new stuff things people Nine ten people go computer least month learn something new Also kids school use computers time school work learn new things Kids school use computers school time projects experiments learn new stuff people things world Computers definitely positive effect people learn new things Another great things computers programs allow talk people Eight ten people talk another person almost every day computer This good thing theyre able talk friends family long distance enjoy It also good thing family moves away still talk computer Another positive effect computers adults pay bills finances computer also Seven ten adults pay bills online computer This good thing adults hand computer definitely positive effect person I think computers definitely positive affect people many ways They help people learn new stuff things Also allow talk friends family internet And finally allow finances pay bills online instead hand There many ways still computers positive affect people Ive stated I hope take side opinion computers definitely positive affect people",
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"content": "In memoir author created upbeat mood He clearly grateful family happy childhood He pointed parts home situation could negitive growing cancelled negitive things noting positive aspects situation For example memoir wrote family immigrated United States good jobs Cuba start lowpaying jobs got He said hard found positive way look situation He writing parent s situation taught always work hard never give So overall made could depressing story upbeat happy mode He even made story teach lesson hard work importance family giving others",
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"content": "Many believe that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. There are many conspiracy theories, but scientists say the Face is simply just a natural landofrm. Cydonia was first discovered in May of 2001, and since then has had people baffled by the human-like structure. Though it may be easy to believe that this landform is the creation of aliens on Mars, it is just a natural rock formation on the red planet.\n\nAliens not been proven to be living in the universe with a secret ancient civilization. Though some people might believe this is untrue, NASA has yet to find evidence to support it. If scientists knew Cydonia was created by aliens, they would definetly want to investigate this further. With this new information, just like any new discovery, it would open up so many different ideas about the universe that do not exist today. \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger thatn the pixel size. So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" With the extremely advanced technology we have today, scientists have been able to take more pictures of this landform, further proving that it is a natural creation, and that there is no alien civilization hiding in the depths of it's shadows.\n\nCydonia has many conflicting opinions on how it was created. Many citizens still strongly hold on to their ideas about this landform. It has been proved by NASA that this formation is not created by aliens, nor is there any living organisms with secret colonies on Mars. People have the choice to believe what they want, but scientists know the truth behind the Face on Mars.",
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"content": "Last researches, parade marked raising in obesity rates in the world. Some thoughts assume that we could reducing this issue by impose higher cost on unhealthy food. However, it's not a surefire way also not fair.\r\n\r\nPeople who reap high remuneration don't care about extra-taxes as money don't constitute any impediment for them, to illustrate, increasing fatten food few dollars is nothing for them. Consequently it could influence just low income people.\r\n\r\nMoreover, by applying such solutions, it will generate a financial problems for a numerous ventures as well as economic issues, because processed food not only important industry it is economic changer. so, huge companies in this sector for example, kfc, macdonald's and pizzahut, will not obey this measures.\r\n\r\nThere is always another side to a coin. so for sure increasing price for processed products such as, burger, pizza and instant pasta, might regulate this phenomenon, because it will minimize the desiring in such products, in other words, it can change the consumer conduct. also this extra levy could use in improving obesity health centers, furthermore make conceived advertising companies to expand the knowledge about overweight matters.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although levy more charges on fatten foods could manage the issue, it is not the optimal solution. Thus, we should looking for other ways to cope with this matter.",
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"content": "Venus the plant has very bad heat witch makes it hard to be on for a lonf time the air crafes we would send there would be crushed due to the presure in the atmospher and even if you could go to the bottem of the ocean it wouldnt be as bad as being on venus the eathquacks are 50 times worse there and the lighing storms are very bad to so its hard to learn anything about thing plant the condisons make i hard to and the heat is bad due to how close it is to the sun there is soome many thing paying a role and why its hard to learn more about this plant and we wont to know more becaues its a lot like our own plant at one time venus had oceans this was a time way befour us but it did and as probably more lik us they what we know or could find out one day we will find out what ts like and how much this plant is like us.",
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"content": "This was what the 21st Century looks like.. People using cars more and more every single day to the point where half of us don't even want to take a lovely little stroll through the garden, over the bridge, and straight to the tree house. Nope. Nothing like that anymore. Ever since cars were created, it's given us a form to transport easier, but it's taken out a lot from the people. Among all the things they could be doing, they choose to sit in the car all day. Not anymore. There are people in different countries and states who are making a wonderful change in the world.\n\nIt all starts in Vauban, Germany. People have no cars within their non-existant garages and people are paying thousands of dollars to park their car. Why? Well, consider it as a way to help the environment. Places like Germany, France, and small sections of the United States have banned cars because of the greenhouse gas emissions. With a law that prevents cars, the states and countries can clean up the air quicker without any more polluting gas entering to make things worse.\n\nOne of the greatest advantages for car bans is that there are less accidents. With rarely any cars on the streets, it prevents people from dying in car accidents or hit-and-runs. With this, we'll have less deaths and more people coming home safely to their families.\n\nWith the majority of the population gaining weight from no workouts, car bans puts us in a different track. Whenever we need to go somewhere, we do it with a bit of exercise. Walking, biking, all that sweet jazz. We can become a better generation with just a little push and removal of something that restricts us from certain things. We've taken advangtage of cars by not putting so much work into getting the strength we need to keep us walking for more than just 20 minutes before our legs grow tired.\n\nThe future is close, but we've still got a long road ahead of us to get to our goal. To cross that road, we've thrown all the cars off to the side and we'll walk, we'll ride our bikes, we'll dance our way over the other side. Whatever it takes to get to the other side, we'll take it.",
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"content": "In the story I just read talked about a new technology. The new technology that I am talking about is called \"Facial Action Coding System.\" The new system is supposed to be able to read students facial expressions in class by a computer. The system can tell if the student is sad, happy, bored, tired, etc. The artical says that if the student is bored or confused, the system could modify the lesson, like a real human intructor. The artical also said that it can detect a real smile to a fake smile.\n\nMy truthful opinion on the situation is that I think that this new system is unneeded. I honestly think this way because I would not want someone in te computer, seeing if I am happy or sad. I think that it is an invasion of our privacy. Think about this as an example, your sitting at home watching TV and some person is in your window looking to see what your facial expression is. I can see the other side of someones opinion, thinking that it is a good idea; because someone might be having the worst day of their life and the computer could put something on to cheer that person up. That is the only way that i agree with it. But, you could be watching a movie at night on your computer and the system recognises that your tired; so the computer puts a program on that will wake you up. I do not think that I would want a computer waking me up at night if I am tired.\n\nIn conclusion, the artical that I read was very interesting. But, I do not think that the system is a good idea to put into computers. It is an invasion of someones privacy and the system can do something that someone does not want done, like if a person likes the ad that they are watching but they have any expression on their face, the ad will be changed to make sure that they person does have a smile on their face.",
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"content": "The pictures give information about two ways of protecting houses from flooding. Overall, the houses or buildings are constructed on stamps.\nThe first way of protecting buildings from floods it to make them far away from the water and not to close to the hill or mountain to avoid any water coming down. Additionally, the stopbank should be place close to the water as a protection wall. At the bottom of the stopbank a floodgate is allocated so that water can pass to the internal pond underneath the house without touching it and a bem is situated to the water side which can open and close depending on the water level.\nThe second diagram does not have a stopbank and the house is positioned closer to the water. The house is built on higher stamps, so that the water can flow underneath it. Between house and water, a freeboard of around 300mm can be found where no water should be, so that the house remains dry.",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car usage. ''When I had a car I was always tense i'm much happier this way'' said heidrun walter p3 source 1 ,experts say it is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically ruduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes p5 source 1,mini sheller a sociology professor at drexel university and director of its mobilities research and policy center. she cites various factors: the internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected with out driving to meet friends p35 source 4.\n\nThe reson heidrun walter is tense is becuase he could of been norvise about crashing. Now that he does not get in a car he does not have to worries about crashing. Not spending money on gas or pay damages on a car. That is proable why was he is tense.\n\nThe reson experts say that it is reduce greenhouse gasses. The less gas people use have the less amout of gobal warming chanes are. Your car give of alot of gas a day.\n\nmini sheller a sociology professor at drexel university and director of its mobilities research and policy center. she cites various factors: the internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected with out driving to meet friends.\n\nIn conculeson the advantages of limiting car usage. people feel less tense. experts say it is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically ruduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes.\n\nthe internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected with out driving to meet friends and that is the advantages of limiting car usage.",
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"content": "\"The Challenge of exploring venus\" it talks about space administration and the national aeronautics (NASA) they talk about tecnical use and the things that go on in space. the authors is studying about things that are good and bad up there he seaches and sees what goes on up there in pharagraph 3 he talks about how atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus is more challangeing are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere.\n\nthe planet surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet . venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system even erupting volcanone, powerful earth quakes and frequent lighting strikes. temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenhket. solar power would be plenttiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels. not easy conditions.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying venus, some simplfied electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and lasted for last weeks in such conditions venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth these differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars our other times to venus. venus is someties right around the corner a thick atmosphere of almot 97 percent carbon dixoide blankets venus temtures. these conitions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth.",
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"content": "Personally I am both for AND against driverless cars.\n\nI think they are an interesting idea that can be created and improved upon.\n\nDriverless cars could help people while they are going to work, on roadtrips, or even visiting someone.\n\nDriverless cars could also be hazardous in some cases.\n\nAn issue with the technology could cause crashes that could have been prevented by a human driver.\n\nAS MENTIONED IN THE READING, driverless cars could form a taxi system that could help transport people through cities easier.\n\nIf driverless cars are used to make taxi systems, they would also put thousands of taxi drivers out of work.\n\nTHE READING SAYS that driverless cars would need many sensors; some sensors could be easily tampered with by some criminals.\n\nMany intelligent criminals could even strip the cars of necesary peices, so they parts can be sold illegally. If there were to be a police chase, involving a driverless car, the manufacturer of the car could shut the car down, ending the chase.\n\nDriverless cars could also be used by intoxicated people to get home safely, reducing the amount of drunking-related accidents.\n\nSome mechanical or electronic malfunctions in a driverless car could cause crashes that a human driver could have prevented.\n\nThere is one such case that involved myself.\n\nOne time my father, Mark, and I were riding around in Mark's truck; the truck's brakes broke and we couldn't stop.\n\nMark, the driver, had to swerve off the road to avoid an oncoming car, but when he swerved, he almost crashed into a large stump.\n\nHe was able to press the gas hard enough that the back of the truck spun around, spinning the truck, and we avoided the stump.\n\nIn this case, a driverless car might have attempted to brake, crashing into the stump where somone could be injured.\n\nOverall, I beleive that driverless cars shouldn't be used.\n\nThe driverless cars could be dangerous, take away jobs from working citizens, and malfunction.\n\nAlthough driverless cars are an interesting concept, they are also a dangerous one.",
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"content": "I disagree with everything this passage has to say.Cars are suppose to hold responability, but if we have cars that drive on their own there will be no more responability!\n\nThink about it, You wont have to worry about having your turn singals on, turning into lanes and parking! Sure it will be nice and relaxing but life isn't suppose to be relaxing and easy. Life is suppose to be hard, with problems that you have to solve. If we have a car that drives on its own, people are going to get more lazy, their not goning to want to get up and help guide the car. They are going to think the car can do everything and anything! They might even fall asleep in the car and if the person whos driving the car they could be a heavy sleeper and the chairs aren't going to wake them up so they might die! They are going to be more lazy then they are today! For example, they wont wanna clean their houses, take their dogs for walks, anything like that!\n\nThis is why I disagree with this pasasge and we should not have cars that drive we can drive by oursevles!",
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"content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage. Elisabeth Rosenthal writes \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" to show that limiting car usage helps to \"reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes...\" Their goal is to reduce the amount of greenhouse gases being released into our atmosphere because it is destroying Earth. The gases are destroying the ozone layer drastically, and if this continues Earth will be gone. She also wrote \"The End of Car Culture\" explaining that the number of cars bought has reduced, bu in reality it is a good thing because it reduces the amount of pollution in the air, and money could be used on something more productive. Cars have not been the main priority of in America. People began to carpool, ride bikes, ride the bus, etc. This will \"save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" Additionally, Robert Duffer writes \"Paris bans driving due to fog\" explaining how \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals...\" In Paris, many people are using cars, and they release the bad smoke into the atmosphere. By all the gases being combined together, it creates smog which is deadly. It can cause many health problems to humanlife and the nature. Another article to support that it is better off to limit car usage is \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky. Selsky quotes a business man Carlos Arturo, \"'It's a good oppurtunity to take away stree and lower air pollution.'\" Even citizens agree that it is necessary for people to limit how much they drive because it streeses people out. They don't have to worry about spending a drastic amount of money on gas, or repairing the car. It is easier just to ride a bike which helps you save money, and even get a good execrise. It also limits air pollution because less cars are being driven and not alot of harmful gases are being released. Overall, there are benefits in not having a car.",
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"content": "The idea of these \"Driveless Cars\" does sound intersting and at the most fascinating. But however i'm going to say i'm all that for that particular idea for a few reasons. And to start off I don't see how it would be called \"Driveless Cars\" if there is still human assitance requried . To me this isn't all the way driveless driving its more like the car assistaing you most of the time. And this could also cause problems betweem the drivers and the companys responible for these cars .\n\nThe way I may see it is why spend thousands of dollars creating something the requries human skills you might as well not even make it . And with this creation is something not everyone can afford . If one driver has this creation but the may not this would most likely lead the driveless car driver to accidently hit the car or drive that has a driveless car there are also still chances of acidents. So if not everyone can afford a driveless car why even bring it out for people.\n\nAnd the fact that manufactures want to use camera to watch the driver can be uncomfortable to the drivers. And by also having to change laws here and there if this vehical is realsed nto everyone may follow or agree with them .There's people now that can't even follow the simple rules of driving.\n\nAnd this could also lack people's precaution or alterness in any type of car or anywhere else. And if its times for the driver to do his or hers part what if they are on there cellphone like most days now and when they are alterted they look up and its to late. Its relly important that a person is alert at all times and take their own responibility.\n\nWhile the details and positive benefits these \"Driveless Cars\" may sound great but the neagatives can also affect people. And the negatives can also put someone in the chance of danger .",
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"content": "Schools are places where kids end up spending the majority of their childhood in. Most kids end up disliking school for one reason or another, while others might love school. To have the ability to know how a child is feeling and map their patters can become useful in more ways than one. The use of reading a students emotions is valuable in many ways like helping with possible depression, enhancing the material, and creating a better enviroment.\n\nSchool can be a stressful time for many students and also a time of growth. Especially in high school and even middle school, the childs body is going through puberty. This chemical change in the body can lead to mood swings and other issues especially when school stress is added on top. This technology is capable of indicating \"...the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one\"(paragraph 7). With the aid of this technology the school can help students before they develope mental illnesses like depression that often go unseen due to hiding true emotion.\n\nAlso, in many schools students usually find the learning material to be sub par or boring in many cases. However with the aid of this technology \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (paragraph 6). If a teacher was able to pin point when exactly a lesson becomes boring it would majorly help with being able to reconstruct it as well. For difficult classes being able to know when the students are lost would help significantly in increasing the understanding of the material as teachers will be able to know exactly what the students dont understand, and thus be able to help them achieve better grades.\n\nBeing able to understand students emotions in a learning enviroment can also help with improving the school overall. SInce the technology would be able to understand the basic emotions like \"...happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" (paragraph 3), this can give a school tons of feedback on how to improve. For example, with negative emotions, a school would be able to improve its cafeteria food quality from knowing what foods are highly unpopular, and as a result save food from wasting. Or during school events, even though the event might be a success knowing how each of the students felt about the event would help with improving it for next year. The addition of this technology would allow a school to be the best the possibly could.\n\nThe addition of this facial technology can be quite revolutionary in a school setting. As students often dont share their true feelings, issues can be confronted and the students mentality can be improved. Also a better, and positive learning enviroment can be created. The ability to remove student confusion and make learning interesting would go a long way in helping not only the students grow and move forward positivly, but also the school as a whole.",
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"content": "Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it could change our futute for the better along with the way we see each other. \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad\" the article stated. This could really change things on how we see technology and each other.\n\nThe software can help a person better understand what their classmate is truly feeling. Like the article stated, \"Even though individuals often show varying deegrees of expression ( like not smiling as broadly)\" with the new software it can dectect what the students is feeling and finds ways to help them out. It can help notify a teacher or another student so they can find solutions to cheer that students up. There are many students in schools that are quiet and are always distant from people so with the help of the software it could help show what really is going on so we could make them socialize.\n\nThe technology could even be useful to help students with their education. In the article it stated. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\". This could help the students because it could modify the lesson , like an effective huan instructor. With the software doing this, it could hel students understand what is going on in the lesson or their homework so they won't be as confused. It could also find ways to make it more fun so they won't be bored either.\n\nLastly, I believe that the new software innovation could help students speak up and not hide their true emotions anymore. \"Of course most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" with the software it can explain to you how you trully feel by also calculating the percentages on which emotions you feel. Also, with the software telling you, you can not be afraid or shy to show them. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" Dr. Huang said. Even if students are sad they can speak up and find someone to talk about how they feel so that way more people could do it.\n\nTherefore, the new software innovation can help with many things. I believe it can really change our fututre for the better along with the way we see ourselves. It can really help fugure out our true emotions and find ways to show them instead of hiding them. It could even help students fit in more with people. The software could also even change the students educational experience and make learning fun for them. I believe more schools should starting having this software.",
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"content": "Nowadays, in our society consumers are more likely to be get in touch with advertisements. Many of customers are tend to buy anything they see on adds. As far as we observe, companies put more effort into their adds and try to lead consumers to action. Further, some adds of their's might be tricky and lawgivers should start to add new regulations to media. \n\nCurrently, today's modern world is more about purchase and consume. For that reason, we are more likely to come across with any type of advertisement. Evidently, a huge part of our society is influenced by the adds and purchase what they see on TV. To be more specific, people are more into products that pretty women wear or handsome men hold in their hand. More importantly, whenever individuals have the products, they come up to a conclusion that, they also become one of those handsome men or beautiful women. Clearly, the desire of wanting to be what is shown on the adds, leads individuals to consume more. \n\nCertainly, lawmakers and governments should take action in controlling the commercials. The main reason for this is that, adds are most likely to capture the intension of customers and many of what is displayed is a hoax. There is no denying that, Redbull does not make people to actually fly. Governments should warn or even charge these kinds of adds. Authorities should firstly warn them if not, they should charge them with immensive fines or even may close their firms. \n\nIn conclusion, in our civilized world, we are tend to see more adverts. Besides, many of us totally believe what is displayed on billboards because of them being really distractive. On the other hand our centralised authorities should begin to add restrictions and limitations into the sector.",
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"content": "The mood created author joy The reason I think Narciso s parent s immigrants works hard They could ve stayed country wanted better future Narciso When Narciso realized felt happy filled joy In paragraph says I always grateful parents When re grateful feel happyness This mood I think author created",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System is technology that is able to detect emotions from different facial expressions. The integration of the technology into a classroom would be great. The technology would benefit the teacher so he/she would know if the students are interested in the class, it would help the students get engaged more, and their could be an instructor on the computer that can more accurate human-like expressions.\n\nOf course, when a teacher is teaching a lesson the could be many different expressions on the students faces. Some students may have a facial expression which could be not interested. but it my be hidden so well that the teacher may not know. In the article, Dr. Huange is quoted saying, \"A classroom cmoputer could recognize wheb a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This provides detail in how Dr. Huang thinks it will help the student. It will improve the class behavior toward the lesson because the teacher would know how to change it based on the technology telling him/her how their students feel.\n\nAssuredly, the students may pay attention more without being upset. The students will know that the teacher would want them to pay more attention and they use of the FACS may appeal them more. The students would want to act try to act interested and they may become more interested just because they are trying to pretend they are. The article states,\"Most human communication is nonverbal, inlcuding emotional communication.\" This effects everyone in a classroom also.\n\nAdmittedly, a electronical teaching assistant may be useful for a classroom also. The asstistant expression would more lifelike and would not make a student feel like the are watching a robot. The assistant would adjust the lesson based on the expressions that the students are making. Dr. Huang states in the article, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This shows the beliefs that Dr. Huang has for the improvement of the classroom.\n\nThe help of the teacher, the engagement of the students, and the visual and mental\n\nappeal of an electronic teaher would make the FASC a very important piece of technology to a classroom. The students may begin to help out each other more. The average grade of the class may become higher because of the technology engaging more of the students.",
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"content": "Today, Google cofounder Sergey Brin has invented a driverless car. The goal is to make a car that can drive by itself, yet still have a driver inside. The car isn't made to be one hundred percent on its own. There is a lot of pro's and con's to this idea. These pro's, similarites and con's can be seen in the next couple of paragraphs. The driverless car is such a great idea and should become a thing.\n\nFirst, the pro's for this idea are good. With the driverless cars, these cars will \"use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Which means less money to spend of gas and less air pollution. Also, these driverles cars, \"Have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Ecspecially with sensors on them, there would be a less chance of car accidents. The car will vibrate your seat when it's time for the person driving, to take over. The human would have to pull in or out of the driveway, drive around a car accident or drive through roadwork whih is very understandable.\n\nSecond, having a driverless car would be so much easier than having a non driverless car. Most cars today don't have sensors to tell you when you're about to back into something or alert you in any way. With the driverless car, you'll be notfied when backing into a parking space or garage and it'll stop you from hitting something. Having this car will help you save money on gas (use less fuel than todays cars), and car accidents (sensors everywhere on the car).\n\nThird, there are some downsides of having one of these cars. There is a big concern about who would get blamed for if in a car wreck with one of these cars. There are two ways to look at this problem. If they blame the manufacturers, they could say the car alerted the human to take control, so the car would have been intheir hands, not ours. But if they blame the human they could say, the car didn't alert them fast enough and something didn't work. This is a big problem.\n\nIn the conclusion of this, the driverless cars should happen. Although there are still some mistakes, those mistakes could always be fixed later on. Clearly, there are pro's, cons and their differences and similarties in this idea. The cars could save money on gas, car accidents and less air pollution. Without these cars, most people wouldn't be alerted when they're about to back into something or bump anything. Having this car would change everything.",
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"content": "In today's modern world, daily use things are launched in market on regular basis. It is believed by, many folks that most of the nations have similar shops and items is good while many says, it has a negative impact on society. In this essay, I will explain both sides and give my view. \r\n\r\nTo commence with, same brand around the globe, not only promote the global expansion of company, but also provide the employement to citizens. To explain, when an organisation expand around the globe it will help to built relationship between two nations. Moreover, it will not only open new ways for trade, but also contribute to the country's finance. For example, in 2009, Apple sign an agreement with India to establish their first business there and found it was a great victory for them as well as for the public. Hence, it is proven that the same industrial development is fruitful for everyone. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, although similar goods provide equality to the population across the borders, but still have some drawbacks such as differences in the prices. To explicate, people face the problems of huge rate shift for the exact stuff. Due to changes in places their is a huge shift among the prices for goods because of several factors such as tax on importing the things. For instance, in a survey it is found that people ask their friends or relatives to buy products from another place at cheap amount. As a result, people avoid to buying items from local market and get the same at low rate from other nations, which results in loosing economy. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the demerits of the aforementioned statement, in my opinion, it is hard to ignore the merits and positive impact of having same shops and products.",
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"content": "I am against driveless cars becuase so much time and technology will be put into theses smart cars, when we could just drive them ourselves. I think people could invest there time in making something more safer for the enviroment and safer for humans, safer just by warning you when you need to stop and when you are in danger. Some of these vehicles could even have an automatic stop to help prevent a crash or could alert you when almost hitting\n\nsomething.\n\nAlot of money would also be spent on these cars making it harder for people economically.With so many wiring and technology put into these cars, You would have to spent a great amount of money for them to be fixed. These cars could also fail to give you a response when you need to take over or could just fail to work safely, as stated in the article\n\n\"If the technoloy fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacture?\", This is also a good point because if these cars were to fail who would get blamed and if the manufacture was to, They would also have a great hit economically. They would not only have to pay for the cars but would also have to pay for the person who was injured. If one of theses cars was to fail, you also wouldn't have the benefit of knowing you're safe becuase if it happended to a car similar to yours might also fail. These might also make the jobs of other people why harder because it would affect a variety of people, Not only that but new laws would have to be passed for these cars to be able to be driveable on many streets.\n\nI think we should keep our cars how we have them now and we should just invest some time in making them safer and better for the enviroment and for us as well, this will not olny prevent many incedents but it will also give us\n\ntime to imporve other things that could use it. Finally i think the technology on cars has improved over the years alot and i think we could get further thanwere\n\nwe are right now but we should do that when neccessary.",
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"content": "Being patient means understanding tolerant A patient person experiences difficulties without complaining One time I patient parents know half day school One day elementary school half day parents didnt know After school I waited parking lot close minutes waiting parents pick I starting think parents werent coming teacher asked I After I explained situation teacher let call parents My dad appogized went get I explained I could finally go home",
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"content": "Crime rate is a matter of considerable public concern. There are several types of research to show that a low level of education causes many criminals. So people think that the practical way to reduce crime is that criminals should be educated to make sure they can find a job when they jail. As far as I am concerned, I think educating criminals is a good approach to reduce crime to some extent.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, education can help criminals find jobs. People who have to not acquired more education are harder to find a high-income or stable job than those people who have a high level of education. When they have no method to make living, they are easier to become a criminal, like a thief. So these people in jail can be educated in some practical skills to make sure they can be good at something in some fields, which can help them find work in the job market when they leave jail. It can reduce crime especially reducing the number of people who leave prison to try again to become criminals.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, education can ensure that criminals know information from the outside world. Educating criminals can make sure that they can fellow the pace of society. Criminals are punished and stay in prison so that they have no approach to acquire information about the development of the world. Thus, criminals know news about another area only in some regular ways. In China, criminals are permitted to watch TV, read books and have lectures about how to involve in society at the prescribed time. Also, they are educated to have a special skill like fixing machines, making shoes and so on. These methods can make sure those criminals know information about other areas and easy integrate into society when they leave prison.\r\n\r\nAll in all, educating criminals can make sure they have practical skills to make living is a good way to reduce crime. Besides, education can make sure they can follow society’s pace when they leave jail.",
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"content": "Up to this day, the negative impacts of humans on the environment are actually evident. Besides, it is also debatable whether offering solutions to overcome this phenomenon has become too late or not. From my perspective, nature is still able to be ameliorated by our timely interventions. This essay will elaborate on my belief.\r\n\r\nPerhaps for many, human beings’ destructive actions on the earth get out of control. First, in some cases, ecosystems have been severely degraded and it is almost impossible to restore them to their original state. To elaborate, the world is facing the mass extinction of numerous species due to habitat loss, which is supposed to be the result of industrialization and the greenhouse effect. Even worse, hunting also contributes to exacerbating this reality, for instance, the West African Black Rhinoceros was declared totally extinct in 2011 because many fool people believe its horns can cure some diseases. Second, there are several insolvable environmental problems that cannot be solved by an individual or even by a single country. To be specific, these include thawing due to climate change and seawater pollution from plastic waste, which damages the habitat of creatures in the Arctic and the ocean. In actuality, it is difficult for the actions of one nation or one person to have a significant impact on improving this situation.\r\n\r\nDespite the valid arguments detailed above, I still believe that it is never too late to act. The most pertinent point is that numerous animal species which are on the brink of extinction need to be protected. People still constructively influence nature to protect plants and animals through habitat reinstatement as well as breeding projects. Many successful conservation stories demonstrate that it is possible to make a difference, such as the case of humpback whales. Another justification is that macro-environmental issues can be handled by the hand of the whole world. International cooperation can help create effective global movements in retaining biodiversity through public awareness campaigns and supporting environmental policies. Thus, the efforts of individuals will be multiplied and encouraged to alleviate environmental destruction.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is indisputable that humankind has caused a variety of harmful effects on our planet, which are irreversible or difficult to mitigate. Even so, I strongly agree with the positive view that there are a range of other parts of the world that can still be recovered if people strive to cure it.",
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"content": "Dear editor I think people spending much time computer Because people getting less exersice spending enough time outdoors dont spend much time family friends Exersicing important part one s daily schedued I friend exersices everyday She healthiest person I know rarely spends anytime computer But knows someone almost compleate oposite He hardly ever exersices spends hours computer day He also diagnosed diabeties obese These type health problems faced lack exersice much computer time Experts say people get least minutes exersice every day But people spending time computers almost impossible Studies done show kids age obese risk becaming obese getting enough exersice You nt want number increase There problems people face much time computer People spending less time outdoors time inside desk My friend spends way much time computer enough outside She failed science poject computer rathern outside comparing leaves different trees Doctor child phycologist asked kids would rather play outside computer said computer This shows people computers young want computer outside This number opinion high Lastly problem people spending enough time family friends By I mean face face time video chatting friends facebook This caused tension relationships My friend nt go family reunion stayed home computer next family get together ostrisized nt go reunion High guidance counselor says friendships ruined kids dont spend enough face face time friends computer These god reasons less time computer time exersicing outside family friends make life happier healthier",
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"content": "The tourism industry has boomed in the past decade but is somewhat suffering due to the ongoing pandemic. Tourism is now playing a prominent role in thriving businesses and pushing the economy.Some countries like Dubai, Thailand are heavily dependent on the visitor for their economic activities. Awareness amongst tourists has increased to preserve the places they visit, culturally and environmentally. As every coin has two sides, this one has it's too. Many people degrade the culture and the beautiful environment.\r\n\r\nFirstly, there have been many incidents that prove, not all visitor intends to harm nature. Due to a group of persons not valuing the local customs of the destination doesn't mean everyone is not respectful. A report from NDTV magazine claimed that around 95% of tourist try not to damage the place. For example - I have been to many places across the globe but our group never tries to exploit any natural resources at the destination.\r\n\r\nHowever,not all tourists are the same. Not all people care about saving the culture and nature of a place. There is a saying for these kinds of people, \"where there is a city there will be trash\". The concept of a responsible traveller is a myth for many.Many opinions of mass support that it is really difficult to become a responsible traveller. For example - While travelling around the world, I have crossed so many wanderers that don't follow the necessary protocols.\r\n\r\nI would disagree with the fact that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist due to those facts provided above and a few personal experiences. The essay provides enough explanation of both the topics and relevant past experiences.",
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"content": "I disagree that this Facial Action Coding System is benefical for the classroom. There are many things about this that could go wrong. This type of tecnonly would not be valuable to our schools.\n\nAlthough all of the facial recognition sounds good, there are some parts to it that could be bad. There are many things that could turn out to be negative. Here is a question to think about: Is he downgradeing teachers? In the sixth paragraph Dr. Huang of the Beackman Institute for Adveanced Science predicts, \"A classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becomeing confused or bored\", he continues with, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I believe he is trying to say that teachers don't do enough so we have to bring in a computer instructor to make it less boring. This is not only bad for the students, but also the teachers.\n\nThis also can be a distraction in class. While the teacher is giving a lecture about an important skill that students need to learn, there are students in the back of the classroom trying to mess around with the facial coding system by trying different faces and causing a disruption. Kids are easily distracted and this is just another distraction from keeping kids engaged and focused on the studies that they will need for the rest of their life.\n\nWhile a child is learning, for instance, a math program site, they could be trying to get in it but there are ads that pop up ,in paragrah 6 it states that \"if you smile when a Web ad apperars on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" If a child looks away from the computer at his/her friend to wait for he ad to be over that he/she doesn't want, and smiles while glancing down to the screen to see if the ad is over, the computer could take this as a happy signal for the ad. So then it will play another one that is similar to the ad that the child did not want.\n\nSo, no, I do not believe that this technology would be a very good tool to express in the classroom. I believe that there are lots of things that could go wrong, and not enough right. I don't think that this Coding System would be valuable to our schools.",
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"content": "Artificially intelligent robots have taken place of manpower in most of the workplaces day by day. Though, mechanical devices will takeover huge portion of workforces still, there will be some jobs which will require operations by the human touch or power.\r\n\r\nGradually, robots will takeover most of the non-skilled and non-complex human work. Large number of companies would prefer to invest one time in a mechanical device to handle their work load rather hiring individual and paying them every month for the same work. The famous companies like the Amazone prefer to have an automated infrastructure and their robots are performing precisely speedy taskes compared to human power. Due to these reasons, there are lot of chances that number of jobs will be performed by an artificial intelligence .\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some taskes which can never be replaced by robots as it only requires human touch and brain. Robots will not be able to cope with such highly demanding task because , robot only respond to the things that are programmed in their system. These jobs include doing experiments, surgeries erc. Robots will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution hundreds of thousands of years to achieve.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are majority of chances that large number of employment will be taken over by robots instead of humans. Unskilled worke will be executed by automated machines where as, skilled work will always be done by human power. Finally, there will be few jobs which will still require human execution rather than robotic power.",
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"content": "Imagining a day without a car seems impossible if you are one of those people who depend on a car seven days a week. If you, my fellow citizens, take the chance to live at least a day without a car you would experience all the advantages of not having a vehicle. These advantages include, saving money, time and the enviroment. Not only will you be saving things we all wish to save on, we will also gain the oppurtunity to have more one on one time with friends or even family.\n\nExperiencing a day without something you always depend on may seem foolish, considering, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" (paragraph 5, Source 1:\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n) Living a day without your vehicle you can find yourself saving time,according to paragraph 43, (Source 4:\n\nThe End of Car Culture\n\n) \"Transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources,lower emissions and improve safety.\" If more and more people decide to live a motor-vehicle free life, then this could result in less traffic which can result in having enough time for that cup of coffee before work.\n\nAlthough, if you dont have a car to get to further places that means you would have to take public transportation, such as a bus. When riding a bus, it is obvious that you are not the only passenger which means that you are not the only stop, this could result in a longer ride. When heading some where, its common that the person needs or wants to get there at a specific time, this could be a reason why not having a car could not apply to you.\n\nApparently, using public transportation or car pooling can give you the opportunity to bond with your friends, who would want that before arriving at your eight hour shift? As mentioned in paragraph 35, \"The rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexiable commuting arrangements.\"(Source 4:\n\nThe End of Car Culture\n\n) This could be difficult for you to imagine but it is known that us, humans, are creatures of habit, \"people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit...\" (paragraph 36,Source 4:\n\nThe End of Car Culture\n\n) This means that once we start this amazing and life changing habit, we won't be able to stop.\n\nClearly, not having a vehicle could give you many advantages in your every day life. No more time being wasted or losing touch with close friends. Instead of viewing this as something negative, take it as something positive so that you could adapt and let riding a bike to work, a life changing habit.",
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"content": "A nation becomes more interesting and advance faster when the population contains a blended numbers of nationalities. This essay completely agrees with this statement, because this will lead every ethnic group to reflect their lifestyles , and also boost the tourism industry.\nOn the one hand, When every ethnic group reflects the society they belong to it. This will helps in creating postive representation of the society as they will learn about each others through several ways , like food, clothes and traditions. For example, a survey conducted by the minstry of tourism in Egypt showed around 90 percent of people agreed that this will helps to fill the gap of cultural differences, as it will facilitates communication across nations and enhance confidence and trust between both cultures.\nOn the other hand, tourism industry will benefit when the population is blended. This is because, alot of tourists will be attracted to that foreign destination. So, this will boost the economy of the nation as growing numbers of jobs will be available.As as result, unemployment rate will decrease. For Instance, Australia benefited from the tourism industry especially in areas like Queensland and Sydney, where a large number of vacant jobs is available which resulted in growing economy.\nIn conclusion , a society contains a mixture of nationalities will helps it to grow culturally and economically. As every ethinic group will learn about each others, it will also benefit the economy, as a result more jobs will be available and unemployment rate will decrease.",
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"content": "Do you like having to drive yourself ever where, everyday? Google has came up with a driverless car. Now, if you think about this, eventually no one will have to drive. We will not have to buy cars anymore. This driverless car has traffic jam assistance, antilock brakes, and last but not least they have necessities to alert the driver if the driver needs to take over.\n\nThe driverless car has traffic jam assistance. The car can only handle up to 25 mph. This is why the driver has to keep ahold of the wheel at all times. The car itself will notify the driver if at some point the road ahead needs human skills, such as navigating through work zones. This means the driver must remain alert at all times.\n\nThe car also comes with antilock brakes. The car has motion sensors when you are pulling in or out of somewhere and you get to close to an object the car stops itself. The car does not only come with motion sensors on the back or the car, the car comes also come with a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.\n\nThe driverless car come with necessities that alert the driver when the driver needs to take over. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\n\nDriverless cars would be a lot more convenient than the cars we have today. They practically drive themselves. This driverless car has traffic jam assistance, antilock brakes, and probably the most important are the necessities the cars have to alert the driver if the car is in need for the driver would like to take over. Driverless cars are the new beginning!",
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"content": "Much debate has sparked whether spending four or more years at university to get a degree really is better than simply getting a job, like it is commonly believed. In this essay I will present both views and give my personal opinion.\n\nFirstly, working a job is cheaper than studying at university. With rising study costs, one almost always has to take out a student loan, unlike working a normal job. In contrast to studying, where a student must be supported by society, a working person creates that value. The fact that too few people choose the latter path is the chief reason why study prices have risen so dramatically in the last half century. Even after getting a degree, a large fraction of graduates fail to find a stable footing in the industry which their degree is for. These young adults must then struggle with mounting student loan rates. Rather than start studying with no future plan and solid financial backing, it is far more logical to apply for a job instead.\n\n\tSecondly, working provides valuable experience that more and more college students lack. With fiercer and fiercer competition in the job market, employers choose from the best candidates. Simply having a degree just isn’t enough and having practical experience is becoming more and more common. What that means is that attaining a degree no longer has such a big advantage when compared to attaining no degree and working. Also, working immediately after finishing school does not mean a person will never get a degree. They can always do it later, after they have gathered the necessary experience and have become financially independent. Enrolling and graduating from a college or university later on is easier as well. Thus, working after graduating high school can set you on a path in life, which you can enhance later on, once enough experience and savings have been accumulated.\n\n\tHowever, studying at a university or college empowers one to achieve higher academic heights. Professor lectures, vast libraries and other academic resources transform a fresh high school graduate into a learned scholar. Some studies have shown that the human brain stops forming at around age 25. This is important because every piece of information is internalized far better until then. That means that while studying at a later date is possible, it does not have the same impact.\n\n\tTo conclude, working at a job does not put strain on the economic system, while studying does somewhat. Attaining a bachelor’s or master’s degree certainly increases",
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"content": "The face you see that is shown yu may think it has something to do wit an alien but the face is just a natural landform , that has be there for many years , and prolly decades.It has been shown over the world .Many people have been on the face of mars like the Vikings in 1976 to take pictures for their sisters ships .And like on April 5,1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, the man Michael Malin and his Mars orbiter camera , and they team moc team took 10 picture better than than the original Viking pics .Got put on websites ,and then thats when people found out it wasnt no alien monument. Thats why it has nothing to do with aliens.Its just a natural landform. But people still believe that it was an Alien there because ,where the face is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98 . A clouds time of the year on the red planet . so my people look in each 2001 photo spans 1.56 meters , compared it to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photos , to find out wat the pic actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa -lamdform common around the american west. The face on the mars is a landform not an alien monument after all .",
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"content": "When I really patient I wonti pcar mother cook lazuge I haved scence pass away My mom cook first birthday cooked first birthday party goned My mother cooked pans It good gone soon put I say soon I mean soon I turned years old My mother big birthday party My mom died open heart sergrey She years old She alto friends furnal The furnal nice But getting back I writing In I asked To cook She said ito girl coust much make I said want gived money cook food She said save little money I said its okay take money buy lazangae cook She said girl I say So I hurry put money pocket Then I keeping moving When got truck said I going cook I get money I pay bills In cooked The day cooked My antyes came got brother sister got got When wont I I stood watch get stop getting Selfer got I tell anoft I live house My brother sister lives The lanag lasted days When cooked I happy I brang school ate lunch",
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"content": "It is proposed that elementary schools should teach their pupils vegetable growing and animal keeping skills. Although there are controversial views towards this proposal, I believe that its benefits outweigh its drawback for a range of reasons stated below.\nOn the one hand, experiences of vegetable growning and animals keeping can help children develop some first hand knowledge and some key characters that would benefit them in the long run. Firstly, by involving in the process of vegetables growing, children gain in-depth understanding of the nature and its impact on the development of a life cycle. In this case, they are capable of learning some practiacal knowledge regarding how weather and seasons could either foster or destruct the growth of plants. Secondly, keeping pets or other animals can encourage the deveopment of the pupils' responsibility. As they learn how to rountinely feed animals, and take showers for them, their responsbility and empathy also grow hand in hand, which would lay a solid foundation for their future study, family life and professional career.\nOn the other hand, it may be argued that taking such courses could distact students from their intensive study. It is not necessarily true because the aforementioned knwledge and skills can be transferble to their academic study and social life in schools. For example, their first hand experiences of growing vegetables can advance their understanding of some theoretical knowledge about plants in the bilogy class. The empathy deveoped through raising animlas could be also taken advantage to strengthen relationships with teachers and peers.\nIn conclusion, it is understandable that some people oppose the idea of the pupils learning vegetables growing and animals keeping, but I strongly think that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.",
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"content": "For a machine to recongize how your expressions must be valuable. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" they are testing if a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System is able to read out your emothions. There might be a chance that the computer would be cable because they are testing it out with a famous painting, small details that could explain how your are feeling, and not only can the computer figure the expression out but also an ipone.\n\nTo begin with, they test it before they claim that the computer can read what your emotions are. They are testing it on a famous painting that is known for its smile called Mona Lisa. People believe that Mona Lisa is smirking in the picture but also feeling so many other emotions. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and\n\n2 percent angry.\" If the computer figured that out on a tricky painting surely it can read students' emotional expressions.\n\nSecond of all, the computer can only read simple expression such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. There are little this you do to show your feelings. For example, \"raises your eyebrows when you're surprised\" also \"tightens your lips to show anger\". Those small details can surely define wether youre happy or sad today.\n\nNext, not only can the computer figure out the expressions but also the ipone 8. The ipone 8 can simply unlock from show your face. it might not be able to identify your feelings but it recongize the person's face. According to all 44 majors muscles, the phone unlocks. People had tried taking a simple picture of the person but it did not work because the iphone can recongize it was not moving.\n\nLast of all, the Facial Action Coding System is cable of figuring it out. Reasons proven it could because its getting trsting on a painting, small details that can show your expressions, and not the only thing at that can recongize faces should as an ipone 8. These days technology runs the world.",
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"content": "You know what i do agree on what this article is saying why because people tend to use their cars all the time and yea what if we live far from town ok thats fine but i see people in my naighborhood driving two streets down just to hang out with there friends when one could simply just i mean put it this way if we were to drive less we would limit accidents , tickets, and polution so come with me as i explain my ideas.\n\nYou might ask your self how would this limit accidents well say you were driving one night to your best friend jeffs house and jeff lives three streets but you wanted to get there faster and the car on the oppisite lane the driver falls asleep and all of a sudden boom!! you dont know what just happen think about you could of been dead right in that instant but if you would of walked no accident you could of dodged the car.\n\nTickets and people might say \" man, police be racist pulling me over for know reason and now i have to pay a fine and go to court\" no buddy you were pulled over because you were being stupid on the road trying to act cool in front of your friend but see maybe if you where riding a bike or walking you probaly would of never got pulled over and wouldnt have to pay a fine.\n\nLess polution polution is really bad in alot of countries i mean its so bad that its kind of hard to breathe i mean it would suck if yoy were on vacation in the carrabians trying to enjoy a nice tropical day outside but you can't why because you can bearly breathe with all that polluted air around so yea.\n\nI mean its not hard to ride a bike or to get a electric scooter or a moped or walk it benefits you and our earth i mean i agree with driving just to places you need to go like traval or grocrey shopping not to race act dumb or black smoke people i we made a don't drive your car week it would really benefit our earth alot.",
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"content": "It has long been a subject of discussion whether entertainment depicting violence should be censored or not. In order to see whether the former notion outdoes the latter, we need to look at both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion that why sensible measured are required for media.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand some individuals believe games and movies are the major factors of enjoyment. They are also part of one’s social life. One can easily enjoy and spend some quality time with family and friends. For example, after a long day at work or school, young ones watch movies and play games either with friends or alone. This helps them to relax their mind. Furthermore, those films contain violence, give an insight into the crime and fiction world. People who watch these movies not only get to enjoy but also educate themselves, by knowing how the criminals work and how to prevent a crime. Similarly, children who play violent and military games, have described that they have better knowledge, how the police and military work.\r\n\r\nNotwithstanding the aforementioned rationalisation, games and movies which contain violence are not without concerns. The primary one stems from the fact that people really get manipulated by movies. They use their imaginations and try to apply the same scenario in their real life, which led them to do crimes, inspired by movies. A recent example of this was a Philippine thief who planned a heist just like a Netflix series \"Money Heist\". He was a big fan of that web series. Moreover, just like movies, games containing violence leave a negative impact on adolescents' minds. Since children’s minds are like sponges, it’s easy for them to absorb the information which they see and read, and whenever they come across a similar situation in real life, they behave just like models which they play in games. An example of this can be seen in America, on different occasions of the school shootings, children used \"Call of Duty\" game models and styles. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, even though these movies and games are sources of entertainment but their role in spreading violence in society is greater because people get the motivation for crimes from them. Therefore, these movies and games must be censored to some extent and sensible measures are needed to make them available in public.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a bad idea it is better to stick with smart cars because smart cars are alot more helpful they can help the driver alot more. Driverless cars require massive upgrades to alread existing roads which cost alot of money. Smart cars can help the driver know when he has to be more carefull or when the roads are bad in the area he is driving and he could do what ever it takes to prevent and accident. GM smart cars have vibrating seats to warn the driver when its going to hit and object when its driving in reverse. Smart cars could handle trying up tp 25 mph but the sensors make sure that the driver keeps hand on the wheel. Manufactors are considering putting cameras to see when the driver loses focus on the road. Driverless cars are alot more dangerous because the driver won't have control over the wheel so if anything happens and the driver can get injured he is hoping that nothing wrong goes with the sensors. Driverless cars are a bad idea and smart cars are a better idea because all they have to do is add more things to smart cars and the smart car will be better.",
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"content": "It is easy to identify one's emotions based on their facial expressions. If someone is happy they might smile or seem to have a sparkle in their eye. If someone is sad they might display a frown or a downcast gaze. Confusion makes a person furrow their eyebrows, and anger makes the muscles around one's lips to tighten. All these expressions are universal and are each characterized by the movements of the muscles.\n\nUsing the Facial Action Coding System (FACS), a new technology that enables computers to identify human emotions, has the potential to help students better learn their subject material. If a student's facial expressions indicate the slightest amount of confusion, the system will be able to modify the lesson plan according to where the student is struggling the most. This technology may even be able to help students better than a teacher since it can identify the precise facial expressions that indicate specific emotions. A teacher may be easily decieved by a student's smile that feigns understanding whereas a computer can be programmed to specifically catch false demenors such as these. Dr. Huang explains that \"Most human comminication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" A program such as FACS has the potential to make a difference in the way that a student learns that can benefit them greatly in the long run.\n\nAlthough the universal signs of happiness, sadness, confusion and anger may be easy to catch, there becomes an issue when a student tries to hide their emotions to avoid embarassment in not understanding the course material. They may feel embarassed to ask a teacher for much needed help that will prevent them from learning as well as they need to. Because of this, a computer program such as the Facial Action Coding System would make a difference in a student's learning if installed to school computers.",
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"content": "The Electoral College has been kept for centuries, established by the founding fathers and established in the Constitution. I think that the process should be maintained; so far, it has worked fine and I do not see any reason to rid of it. The Electoral College should be continued in use because there are at least five main scenarios in which it is helpful and reasonable.\n\nIn ways, the Electoral College could be dangerous to use unless you have electors that are completely faithful in their party, and do not take advantage of getting to choose where to place their vote. Basically, voters are voting for a slate of electors, who then elect the president. These electors can go against the people's majority votes and decide who to vote for. It could also be possible that a state sends two slates of electors to elect. If the election was a direct vote, there would be almost no chance for a tie to happen, but with the Electoral College, there is always that possiblity. Some states do not even see the candidates because of the majority of the people living there belong to a single party, and the \"winner-takes-all\" system completely affects this. If the elcetion were to be a direct vote, the candidates might visit the states in order to gather as many votes as possible. However, many of these reasons that the Electoral Collge should be abolished are just one time things, so consider the other side of the argument.\n\nSwing states basically decide the election and therefore, they are the most thoughtful voters. They know that they will be the ones to decide the election, so they pay more attention to the news, and the candidates' campaigns. The swing states receive the most information and attention from the candidates. Since they will end up deciding, the candidates want them on their side. Many sates are already pedicted, even before the election, as a majority of them are from one party. These voters think the most about who they want to run our country and who will do the best in that position, so they should be granted the honor of making the decision.\n\nElectoral votes help avoid run-off elections, by reducing the pressure that might complicate the election. Say that our government referred to the direct vote system, with a lesser system known as the Electoral College was for comparison, and during the presidential election, there happened to be a problem with the popular votes versus the Electoral College; this complication could be avoided if we used the Electoral College. This has happened with nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992, when they both had only a 43 plurality of the popular votes but were winning in the Electoral College.\n\nThe Electoral College could be unwanted by many minority voters in states that leaned completely one way. These voters hardly pay attention during the campaign because they know that their vote will hardly make a diffference in their state, but a voter's vote could not swing a complete election, and not the full population voted in the 2012 election. Voters usually just like to express their preference and have it known than decide the vote that will make an election. It is more likely that your vote will count if you are educated in the happenings of the government, and maybe your vote can make a difference.",
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"content": "The claim that this technology will benefit a wide variety of schools is almost absurd. Mainly in part that many schools would simply not be able to afford this technology. High income high population areas that have schools will most likely be the only ones to get this tech. Unless there is a strive to give this piece of machinery to low income areas I do not see it happening. Many places will be left in the dust.\n\nA good example would be my school. My school has low population and an economy divide in the middle. Though currently we have chrome books I doubt we´d get this device. If we acquired the FACS we would most likely have very little uses for it. As the passage was saying it would be in the computers we use, I see no point as we have a very low controllable population.\n\nA highly populated state or school would benefit highly in my opinion. Somewhere like California or New York would have the highest degree of succes with this program. In a highly density area this would work marvels. As there is less control and interactions, it could help out here more than anywhere else. Again going to to income in areas both of these states would have high income high population areas. With these being affected the most there is no doubt it work very well.\n\nGoing over what I have stated, I still still think these claims would most likely be true. That is if we every acquired this system. Though highly unlikely it could happen, meaning a very low use and almost a complete waist of an amazing technology. Therefore I find this advancement good in highly populated areas. Almost a complete failure in lowly populated areas.",
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"content": "When dad inline kencer hauck adventures I wait patiently get The line massive many people us shocking many line roller coaster waited seemed like hours minutes got closer getting hard patient Finally got ride ride insane waiting minutes seemed like hours rewarded",
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"content": "Durring cyclist affected setting frequently When cycling came hott first wasnt bad The sun begining beat dow I barely Noticed it This proves cyclist knows getting hot affect Another thing affected time travling I hitting water bottles pritty regularly I travling high dezerts califonia June This proves reader constantly drinking time day year All shows setting affected cyclist",
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"content": "The features setting story afects cyclist many ways For example story said At point tumple weed crossed path This saying desert somewhere hot I know usually see tumple weeds hot places Thus desert affect cyclist already low water place hot desert made get even dehydrated Another feature setting story affected cyclest hills climb This affected already dehydrated climbing hills made work caused lose sweat become even dehydrated Those two examples features setting story affected cyclest",
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"content": "Driverless cars are not a safe or good idea. I do not feel that they are a good investment, they are unsafe and exspensive. The cars we have now are already very exspensive and work fine.\n\nDriverless cars are very un-safe. I would not feel comfortable being in the driver seat of a computer run car. Computers have problems all the time, when your putting your life and others in the cars lives at risk I would not trust a computer. One little mistake in the technology and lives could be lost of loved ones and other drivers. When in a car for a long time and not doing anything lots of people fall asleep. If the driver falls asleep and comes to a construction area then the car does not know what to do in that situation. I do not think it would be a good idea to make a car with that much risk for a crash.\n\nCars are already exspensive as it is. It dosent say in the article the price of one of these cars but I can only imagine how exspensive it would be. With all the sensors and extra electionics in the car it would have to cost a lot of money. I do not think it would be worth it for the risk that comes with making and purchashing a driverless car. It talks about the government making laws with these cars and if they decided to make a law where if the technology fails it is the manufacturer's fault then I dont see why a company would want to sell these cars. That could cost them a lot of money.\n\nI just do not think making these cars is worth the risk. With how much money and time it takes to make just one of these cars. If I had the money I would not purchase a driverless car.",
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"content": "The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) that's used for detecting emotions on your face, I'm in between both agajinst and for the use of this on students in classrooms. Being able to detect emotions by scanning someones face isn't wrong because it's not hurting anyone, I just personally think we could be useing the money that would get used to make this for other, more important things than this. This FACS could be used for things outside of students it would be more vaulable, for example, this got used for the Mona Lisa painting to know how she was really feeling, this could be used for so many other things like therapy offices or research in phycology. I also support that if you are sitting in class and the teacher can see how you're feeling, like if you're board, or you don't understand what they are teaching but you don't want to say anything about it so they will be able to improve the lession to make it more fun or help you if you're struggling. I just don't think we should invest all into (if that's what the question is asking) putting these into schools, it does have value just not that much. It has value enough to help depressed people or anyone who needs it. What it comes down to is if we can already detect someones emotion in some type of way then why would we need these in schools?",
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"content": "Cars are an important part of American Culture, but a superpower country using them has big consequences. Pollution is getting worse and worse, and greenhouse gases are heating up our world. There are a few advantages to limiting car usage: safety is improved, and less pollution.\n\nParis recently enforced a tentative law that banned driving so as to clear the air of pollution. Warm days and cold nights were trapping the car emissions (Source 2). In the other side of the world, America's car selling stats are decresing. This could mean that cars will be used less and less in the U.S., which would definitely benefit smoggy places like L.A. and New York (Source 4).\n\nFun fact: automobile accidents are the leading cause of desth for teenage Americans.\n\nNow, if we were to remove that, then there would be no deaths. Thus, safety is improved. Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford motor Company, found that \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time... and improve safety\". (Source 4) Ford and Mercedes are already calling themselves \"mobility\" companies with a wider product range.\n\nThe world would be so much happier with less deaths and breathable air, so cars should be limited. Days where driving is not allowed would be a great idea for America, like in Bogota, Columbia. The capital city of Bogota was devoid of traffic jams and violators who used cars faced 25 dolllar fines (Source 3). The goal was to promote smog reduction and safety. America should follow this example and try to set one for other countries, because planet Earth doesn't have much time left and humans need to all they can before they become extinct.",
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"content": "Many said that educating inmates in prison is the most effective method to reduce the crime levels. Although this way could be associated with some benefits, I believe that the government should implement better alternatives to tackle the problem\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, educating criminals in prisons could be beneficial for alleviating the crime rate. For one thing, education for offenders in prison provides them some fundamental knowledge to pursue higher education programs and may change their awareness. Countries such as Singapore, where to allow prisoners to study during the execution of the sentence, regularly have the lowest crime rate among the parts of the world. For another, offering a learning program in prisons for criminals could be regarded as a way of assisting them to get a job after release from prison. In fact, some prisons enable inmates to learn vocational training such as computer programming, graphic design, which may facilitate them to earn a living. This is particularly important, especially when offenders re-assimilate into society and therefore prevent recidivism effectively.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some reasons why education could not be considered as a proper measure for offenders during their time in prison. Firstly, such a form of education is offered for those who engage in wrongful acts, and therefore this could diminish the crime level to a certain extent. Instead, equipping students with crime knowledge in school will help shape crime prevention thinking and awareness for students, which will significantly reduce crime rates in the long term. Secondly, for some criminals who could not change their minds by educating, harsh punishment or even serving longer sentences would be better. Indeed, for some white-collar crimes who have highly educated and high positions in society, such as lawyers or doctors, there is no point in educating them rather than implementing a policy of zero tolerance.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that although educating inmates in prison is an optimal way to reduce the crime level, it is not the best solution, as there are more feasible methods that could help such as imposing severe punishments and equipping students with crime knowledge",
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"content": "For the past few years, people have come to theories that the Electoral College is flawed. Citizens have come to this conclusion due to the fact that Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and AFL-CIO, all agreed to abolish the electoral college. Also, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind the U.S. is using now. Finally, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who then, in turn, elect the president. The election system should be changed to popular vote for the President of the United States because the system is more reliable, and the president is chosen by the people.\n\nDue to past problems in the Electoral College, people can come to a conclusion and say that the popular vote system is more reliable. As mentioned in Source 2, Bradford Plumer says that, \"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse.\" The Electoral College was to be blamed when in 2000, the electors defied the will of the people. On the contrary, as stated in Source 1, \"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" Even the Founding Fathers believed in the vote from the people to elect their leader, but it has shifted away from it.\n\nIt was always believed that the people elected the president, but it has been proved that it isnt that way. As mentioned in Source 3, \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide and election.\" Due to the Electoral College, voters, knowing their vote will have no effect, will have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were chosen by popular vote. This shows that if citizens knew that their votes were for voting for someone to elect their president, they would lose interest and stop voting.\n\nOverall, the popular vote system is more reliable because of the vote of the citizens, rather from a slate of electors. Also, it was believed that people elected the president, but in reality, people voted for electors to vote for their president. Next, the Electoral College has many flaws, one of them being that the electors defy the will of the people. And also, that electors may be replaced on purpose to go against a candidate. Finally, the Electoral College should be abolished because it is unfair, outdated, and irrational.",
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"content": "In the development of diverless cars I am against it. I feel there are too many negative things about this idea and that everything wont work out. Driverless cars are suppost to assist passangers without them having to pay any attention to the road or have to drive. My postion on driverless cars is to not put them on the road. There are things in the world that a driverless car isnt ready for.\n\nIn the article it states that the driverless car can steer, accelerate and also brake themselves. It also states the the car will need to notifiy then passanger when something is wrong. Something like a car crash, school zones, when its snowing will the car know when to slow down for ice? Will the car know to watchout for potholes which can cause a flat tire or even an accident?\n\nIn the article it says that they have tired to come up with ways to alert the passanger when they are needed to drive. The have tried a vibration, lights, and even a camera to watch the driver and make sure they are paying attention to the road. If it is supposed to be a driverless car why does the passanger have to pay any attention? The car should be able to handle all things, but it cant. If driverless cars came out and young adults who did not know how to drive were in the car and the car alerted them to drive what will they do?\n\nDriverless cars are coming and i feel the technology will never be created or even be trustworthy to put to the streets or even test. If something where to go wrong and there was an accident and maybe a child died. We cannot blame the parent or that child. The only person to blame is the manufacturer. They creater the car they tested the car they knew problems would accure but they still put it to the street. Now a innocent child or teen or adult has died beause of driverless cars and now more accidents are happening.\n\nI am against the development of diverless cars because of all the negative aspects. I understand that if the negatives are over the positives the idea should be out. Driverless cars will cause maybe more accidents, deaths, and sad families and also manufactures. Because of these possibilities driverless cars should not happen unless the technology is up to par and the car is cable of everything. Driverless cars should take the streets if the passanger doesnt have to be alerted. This idea can be a reality if there are no problems.",
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"content": "Venus is called the \"evening Star\" because it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet form our solar system that we have and it is not that far from Eath. There is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The tempature average 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThese condiotions can effect humans on earth. Astronomers are saying that Venus was probably like Earth with trees, valleys, mountains and a largely ocean on Venus. In Venus the Surface is at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. It could affect the atmosphere because of the carbon dioxide and the heat from the planet.Many researchers cannot take anyhting from the planet such as rocks, gas , or anything else, because it is very hot and it is too much for the astronauts also it is a high risk.Researchers are trying to invent a machine tht could take the heat, also last long for them so they can get information and study the planet. They have made electronics made out of silicon carbide and they have been tested in a chamber with the tempature ike Venus, yet it only lasted for 3 weeks.\n\nSpacecraft don't even last that long when they got to Venus because of the hot tempature, which is planet surface arounf 800 Fahrenheit. Venus has many values and could do something good for us humans on Earth because of many problems going on in Earth.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a great investment and idea for our country to encourage. Not only do the cut down on fuel usage, but also reduce the number of accidents. The futuristic automobiles could revolutionize the country. Drivereless cars are a fantastic idea, and could create several benifits for the country.\n\nDriverless cars have the potentiol to drastically reduce fuel usage. In the opening paragraph of the article, the author states, \"the cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" Less fuel used for automobiles would empower the United States to spend less money on oil and natural gas imports. Additionally, less fuel polution released by cars would help make the enviroment a safer place for current and future generations.\n\nIn the article, the author talks about the use of GPS and sensors used in the cars. Relying on computers to transport us is a much safer alternative compared to the current option. The driverless cars, that are largely computer powered, leave very little room for human error, which would drastically reduce the number of automobile accidents.\n\nOppontens of driverless cars may argue that these cars are not safe in the event of unforseen circumstances, such as accidents or road problems. However, driverless cars, as stated in the article, \"are designed to to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill.\" Thus, in an emergancy situation, the driver can take over the car can advance past the situation and continue to move along without any issue.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars could be the best thing to happen to automobiles since automobiles were invented. They could reduce the amount of pollution, and save the United States millions on oil imports. Furthermore, self driving cars can make the roads a safer place to be. Although it may seem scary to some, and there may be a few bumps along the road, driverless cars could make the world a better place to be.",
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"content": "The use of this techonology in the classroom is a phenomenal idea. Being able to identify facial expressions of students could be very beneficial to not only the student but also the teacher. This tecnology in the classroom would be an amazing thing for schools abroad as it may not only spark a level of interest and respect for technology by the student, but it may also create a much better learning evironment for all.\n\nTechnology, such as this, is an amazing thing to be able to use in your everyday learning experience. It will create a much deeper and more intuitive level of learning. Just as Dr. Huang predicts, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" a classroom computer would entail for a much more in depth learning experience. Often, students are afraid to admit if they do not understand something because of fear of being judged by a peer. With this technology, a teacher is able to see if the student understands it without the student having to face being ridiculed by others. Dr. Huang even noted, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" The use of this teconology in the classroom will create a much better mutual relation and understanding between teacher and student, and will make it much easier for a teacher to properly prepare a student for an exam. Computers are the future and many universities are turning to them, so we need to take any chance we can get to use them to our advantage. Just as Dr. Huang was explaining, we understand that most communication is nonverbal, \"So computers need to understand that, too.\"\n\nAlso, the use of this technology in the classroom may spark an interest of technology in the student. The of use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of a student is something that most students will not be able to get at home, as mentioned when the author describes how \"your home PC can't handle the complex algoorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" If we do not use this type of technology in the classrooms of our students, we are letting an opportunity go that most students may not ever be able to experience in their lifetime. The document even mentions how if an ad pops up and you smile then a similar add will appear again. However, if you frown, the next ad will be different. This can be applied to not only the reaction to adds, but the interest that a student experiences from his or her teacher's lesson plan. If the majority of students are intrigued by the lesson plan and they show a certain level of interest, then the teacher knows that his or her lesson plan is going to stick with the student better and less review will need to be done. On the other hand, if the student has very little interest then the teacher knows he or she needs to do better with that particular part of their teaching. If the teacher is able to fine-tune his teaching so it is better for the students, because of the new technology, it will make most students respect this type of technology much more. If it is better respected then the student is more likely to follow a career path or develop a passion involving techonology, which is needed since technology is forming our future generations.\n\nAs i have shown above with evidence and supporting statements, the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is priceless. It will give each student a better place to learn, and each teacher a better place to teach. It will also spark a much bigger interest and respect for technology, which is essential with how much technology influences our every day life. The use of this technology is vital.",
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"content": "I think that others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. There are lots of cool, fun things to do here. There are also lots of serious, dangerous things. You have to be really careful doing this job. It can be really fun here.\n\nFirst off, we have fun things to do including here for everyone. One of them is playing baseball with the other cowboys. We also like to play volleyball in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. We have table-tennis tournaments. Some cowboys even like to do other things including fencing, boxing, whittling, games, and more!\n\nSometimes, on my freetime I like to care for the animals during crossing. Being a Segoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world for me. I'm grateful for the oppurtunity. It made me more aware of pepole of other countries and their needs. And this awareness has stayed with me, leading my family to host a number of international students and exxhange visitors for many years.\n\nThe cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable oppurtunity for a small-town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that all men should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it allows you to experience adventures and visit many unique places.",
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"content": "How do feel about driverless cars? I don't really like the idea, but it's for the future and anything is possible. For me driverless cars has it's pros and cons. Driverless cars can be useful, but they can be deadly to other people who doesn't have the car or even be deadly to the driver. If the driverless cars will have sensors and the driver will have to have fast reaction times to help the car if needed. To me safety is more important then anything.\n\nDriverless cars are for the future, but anything is possible for the future. There are many possible things that could happen. The car could be a succesful invention. Then again it could be a failure. Nobody wants to be in harms way right? In the passage it says \" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020\" to me I think it will take more than four years to invent these cars and mass produce them.\n\nTo me driverless cars has many pros and many cons. For instance the passage says that \" New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident\" then, the passage goes on and says \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" What if one of the sensors become defaulted? Wouldn't that be a manufacturing problem?\n\nDriverless cars can be useful, but could be harmful to the surroundings if the technology malfunctions. What would you do if you was driving a driverless car and it maulfunctions and crashes into the car next to you and you find out the people in the other car are dead? Would you feel quilty or would you not? Driverless cars can be the future, but I think the inventioina and concept of the car shoukd be taken more serious. To me the maufacturers are just looking to make money.\n\nTo me as a person i take safety very serious. I think the safety concept of the vehicles should be one of the more serious things the manufacturers should look at if produced. They should only give a certain amount of driverless cars out incase the technology fails. There won't be much chaos if the technology malfunctions.\n\nDriverless cars are the future for the world. I don't really like the concept, but it's the future and anything is possible. Driverless cars have many pros and cons. The cars can be useful, but then they could be harmful to it's surrounding safety wise. If the driverless cars will have sensors then what's the use for the person to have to be cautious at all times for? Like i've said before I take safety very serious and I hope the maunufacturers take it more serious for the future of the \"autonomous car.\"",
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"content": "Driverless cars can be the next big thing in the world. There are many ways how technology could imrove in a future. Just imagine how esier it's gonna be for you to not drive a car when you tired, or you don't have to worry about drunk drivers, or people who driving over the speed limit.\n\nIn example these cars would know how to drive and take you whatever you want while you texting or speaking on your phone. They would know the speed limit so speeding wouldn't be possible. You wouldn't have to worry about car accidents.\n\nSecondly, as started in the article, these cars would use half of fuel of today's taxis and ofer far more flexibity than a bus. So many people complain about spending so much money on gas. Gas is realy issue but with these cars you don't have to worry about because these cars not only would save your money but also be better for enviorment.\n\nLastly, we need improvments in our world. You see on the news a lot of accidents involving cars. For an example, car crashes, people geeting hit by the cars, or drinking and driving are a lot of problems. Having these cars we would change our future by saving so much lives.\n\nIn conclusion, these cars could prevent accidents, stop drinking and driving, tale less gas, and improve our future. After hearing those reasons how could you not support driverless cars? Advancing to driverless cars could be the great thing for our world.",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author believes that studying the planet Venus would be a rewarding endeavor. The author presents his claim and supports it very well through the knowledge he already has about the planet, the knowledge that the exploration of Venus might uncover, and persuasion through relating to his readers. This allows for the author to very clearly and precisely get his point across to those who might read the article. It also creates a strong way for the author to connect to his readers.\n\nWhen the author uses the knowledge that he already has about Venus, he is trying to convey that what information we have on Venus is already important. In Paragraph 4, the author presents the idea that Venus \"may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". When the author introduces this concept, he also describes the surface of Venus to be \"rocky\" and \"includes similar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters,\". Becuase the author presents the idea that Venus might have been like Earth and then goes on to describe this, he strongly supports his claim of how rewarding studying Venus could be. He is also trying to spark an interest in his readers regarding the study of Venus.\n\nIn Paragraph 6, the author suggests that researchers need to get closer to the ground.\n\nWhen he says \"researchers cannot take samples...from a distance\", he is urging scientists to find ways to get closer to Venus's surface. To support this he also presents that scientists \"cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else\" without getting closer. He uses the curiousity of man to lure them into what he wants them to. This proves to be strong support for his main claim. This also leads right into the persuasion aspect of his support.\n\nThe author uses persuasion throughout the article, but in Paragraph 8 it is used excessively. Near the end of the paragraph, he introduces the idea that \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts...\". When he uses \"should not\" in that sentence, he is adding a strong opinion to his conclusion. In doing so, his opinion also contributes to the persuasion factor. This allows for him to call out to the reader individually and emotionally affect them. Using persuasion made way for the author to support his claim very well and influence the reader to think the same way as him.\n\nOverall, the author has a very well thought-out way of supporting his claim that studying Venus would be a worthy persuit, despite the dangers. The author hits the brick wall head on by first presenting the knowledge he already has. This allows for the readers to have a little bit of foreground to play on. Then, he introduces the knowledge that could be gained by studying the planet, giving the readers a clear-cut example of how studying Venus might present important information. Finally, he includes persuasion, making it possible to influence the readers one by one. In conclusion, the author supports the claim, studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents, very well.",
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"content": "Nowadays, is normally conceived for people, specifically family members that time spent in various broadcasting media such as television, YouTube videos and PC gaming have strongly bonds with the well-growth of theirs children. In opposite, there are people who claims that these kind of resources limits its integral health and intelligence and in consequence, deserve legal regulation or prohibition. In this essay, this positions are showed out and an personal opinion will be given.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the way parents guide and care their kids have been affected by the transformation of our world, capitalisms and globalization have connected most of the countries making them interact and mix its costumes and cultures. As a result, most of the trends and ways of leisure births in TV channels, YouTubers and gamers. Thus, as a social and rational animal that human being is, boys and girls consider these media an attractive way to communicate and learn each other. Furthermore, studies have proved that 80% of the guidance of infants are made by babysitters or mentors whereas their parents are working due to extended job schedules. Hence, progenitors trust the growth of their prole to these kind of media.\r\n\r\nIn the other hand, more conscious forerunners are aware of the hazards involved with the use of TV, videos, and PC games as a good way for their descendent spend the time. Particularly, with people who are not prepared in the teaching or even worse, any pedagogical skills. As a consequence, a bad knowledge of the infants could be a problem in front of the school life. It should be note, that anyone knows the real intentions of a person behind the screen. These factors concerns some fathers and mothers and are not quite convinced with this part.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, two ways on the road that can't be assumed as the better, each counterpart has pros and cons, but for me is crucial taking in count both sides because of the current mode of living, is impossible to obliterate technological communicating and gaming. But is mandatory for the progenitors instill the benefits and consequences and stablish schedules for their use. Remember that love is the strongest tool for the well behavior and growth of a human being.",
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"content": "As an introduction, due to the rising level of competition for University education, many children nowadays spend a busy life schedule in order to balance their studies and leisure activities. A fair amount of people suggests that teenager should participate in some unpaid community-based activities during their free time, and I strongly agree with the idea as it is paramount in developing their social skills and personality.\r\n\r\n Embark , students will be benefited in various ways by participating in social works whenever they are free. Firstly, such activities are important in socialising and personality development, which are qualities that lack in children nowadays. For example, many schools recently arranged several social service programs with the involvement of a large number of high-ranking professionals to develop such attitudes in students. Secondly, involvement in these kinds of activities is important in their future Carrier guidance and in building their personal contacts and skills. So, these benefits can be used to select their future studies and categories of employment.\r\n\r\n In contrast, many drawbacks are absorbed by spending time on community creative activities. To begin with, currently, the competition for exams in schools are getting increased. Therefore, many teenagers allocate their time to after-school tuition classes instead of other leisure things. It means that they do not get enough time for such work. Not only that, but also students earn money for their University education and for study materials by doing part-time jobs during their after-school hours. For instance, a study done at Harvard University concluded that 60% of college students in the USA are doing part-time jobs. This also will invariably lead to poor availability of time for community programmes. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, although there are some positive and negative impacts of teenagers participating in social services, in my opinion, I believe that it is a positive point for their future.",
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"content": "The Empire State Building built great potential would never reach fully The Empire State Building supposed reach feet inches taller Chrysler Building architect designed Building snuck stuck foot pole top Of course Empire State Building taller set new goal reached feet December Al Smith New York Architect decided Empire State Building needed cherry top decided put mooring mast zeppelins top This plan destined disaster foundation nt stable enough zeppelins could easily blown control onto sharp tip Building also since zeppelins hydrogen could explode fall onto densely populated All mooring mast top Empire State Building built disaster",
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"content": "The author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to idenify human emotions. I think the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a clasroom is valuable for these reasons.\n\nIn the article it says that,\" Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions which are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\" Then he will associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscle. Another reason that I think is valuable is when in the article it says that.\" In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by look on her.\"\n\nThis is why I think the use of this technology is valuable. So that we can test which of the six emotions we are in. The second reason is that we human are already perform the same impressive calcauation every day.",
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"content": "Dear The use computer benefits society due possitive affect people Such good handeye coordination ability learn far away places people well able talk online family friends Did know teenagers use computers often compared nt increased test scores This able look definitions faster research learn anything need fingertips Furthermore families friends live across country able keep touch due email video chats facebook It fascinating realize use computer increase hand eye coordination You probably wandering think I insane legitimate reasons Since I play basketball volleyball softball hand eye coordination extremely important One cold wintery I working long history paper essay meant countless hours computer typing At five oclock I went basketball grow best game life playerl Then week later another game time I went straight church Consequently I play well missed lot passes shots This proved things use computers handeye coordination improved Can imagine able learn people faraway places cultures ethicities relgion Well possible advances technology In history research world hunger crisis allied countries Through knowledge hunger I able start fundraiser church teenagers like eat hours Research proven children countries africa die day malnurutousment Now brought attention I going work four hours day give innocent children even portion I consume Thus use computers I able learn pain children suffer s Do family s across country rarely able see My aunt uncle live blessed beautiful baby boy Since graced presenced year begin miss But skype email facebook able stay updated success growth well recently traveled Also teenage population spend least four hours day tweeting using facebook stay touch friends Recently I moved staying contact fr iends extremely important Those people I grew known since birth The use computers allowed stay contact distant friends relatives To conclude due improved handeye coordination ability learn far away places people well able communicate online people use computers benefits society Through internet people learn places travel bike exercise enjoying nature Furthermore family friends want spend time together need plan logistics without email online becomes nearly impossible I appreciate taking time read hopefully take opinion consideration debating topic computer",
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"content": "I don't think driverless cars should happen. I could see that having a lot of problems with driverless cars. I can only see it being good for two reasons.\n\nI can see a lot of people not listenig to the rules like keeping your eyes on the road. I can see more people looking away and going on phones. With cars now, people look and text on their phones, which they should't be,but I can see more people looking on their phones with driverless car. The driverless car can have many problems with it not working corretly. And if the car does fail their are gonna be many problems to figure out who's fault it is. In the article it says, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacture?\" The only thing I can see it good for would be for drunk drivers, it would still be illegal but it would be safer.\n\nI think it would be better to have drivers driving the car then to have driverless cars. It would be safer to have a driver driving the car. Their wouldn't be new laws. Not as many cases of who's fault it is.",
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"content": "Despite the popularity of prison sentences as the way to control illegalities, improvements in education have gained social endorsement as a means to eliminate the problem from its root. In my opinion, I disagree that discipline is the best one as it is rather impossible to compare these two method’s effectiveness owing to their distinct impacts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the reasons why prisons are of indispensable necessity for social security are varied. They are the place to keep people who have broken the law contained, ensuring the safety of other citizens. Especially, dangerous criminals such as murderers or rapists have to be imprisoned for their heinous actions. Furthermore, severe prison sentences act as a deterrent against crimes. Knowing there might be a chance of getting caught and condemned to jail, which also means losing freedom and living a miserable life in a cell, the ones who are having the intention of committing illegalities would reconsider going down the path.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, schooling serves as a remedy for the origin of crimes. Education contributes greatly to heighten people’s intellect and to form a civilized society. With access to better educational services, citizens would be well-informed about the damage that committing crimes would cause to their community and themselves, which eventually leads to the decline in crime rates. Additionally, the possession of certain qualifications through fundamental training like vocational training could secure a person’s stable life, which would dispel any ideas of committing crimes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe there is no absolute way to deduce whether imprisonment policies or better education would take the dominant role in dealing with crimes as they both tackle the problem just in different ways.\r\n\r\n(280 words)",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is observed that there is an upward trend among the societies in some different areas in the world that they want to realize the story behind their houses. In this essay , I will consider why this is happening and also explores some possible ways to research it.\r\n\r\nthe main reason for this trend could be that , people really keen on finding the identity of their home. What I mean by this is that some people especially younger people prefer to know the value of their home from a historical aspect. For example, in Iran, the majority of houses particularly the old buildings, have a history them behind. As a result, people know the historical value of their house and try to preserve it. Another reason is when you find out about your possession's value, you will try to keep it as a valuable asset. For instance, in some countries, people buy valuable houses which have a story and it could be a fine example of a good investment. Consequently, most people tend to know the history of their home.\r\n\r\nThere are some possible solutions to find about the past of a house. For one, people could go to \r\n\r\nmunicipality of their town as the history of every single house is kept there. For another , most of the community in some cities, especially the small cities, know about the background of the houses. It can lead to an acceptable result for the owners of these homes. Subsequently, people can use these methods and get some ideas about their houses. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, to reiterate there are some reasons for searching the history of some buildings which are the preservation and the financial investment. However, people can use some methods which are asking the people and municipality for more information. Should people consider these ways, they could find more impressive information.",
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"content": "Investing in sports is an important part of the government’s business to improve the physical fitness of the population, particularly young children. While it is necessary to train a few selected individuals to compete in major world sporting events, the government should do more to provide young people with plenty of fun activities. There are a myriad of benefits to be gained from funding sports participation at grass-root levels and excellence in performance at elite levels.\nTo begin with, to motivate children to be physically fit, they should be physically active with a lot of fun at grass-root levels, and the key is investing in a variety of sports facilities. Whatever their fitness personality, all young children can be physically fit through enjoying regular exercise, if only for the fun of it.. Generally speaking, if children start doing sports early enough, they will come to regard physical activity as a normal—and fun—part of everyday routine. The point is keeping the focus on fun because young children will not do something they do not enjoy. If they enjoy a sport, they will do more of it; on the contrary, if they do not, they may be bored and frustrated and therefore reluctant to exercise. This shows why money should be spent on giving fun opportunities to children who begin taking up sports at an early age.\nAt elite levels, it is not a waste of money when it comes to preparing competitors in major world sporting events because athletes are allowed to experience the winning spirit of competition on the global stage. For that matter, every government has a duty to spend money on helping its people fulfill their potential, and such events as the Olympics and World Cup can give athletes a goal and young people a chance to believe in themselves. At this point, the question arises about the wisdom of a country (with limited resources) spending too much money and not getting a good return on investment, suggesting that this money should be put elsewhere instead. Although the answer to the question depends on who you ask, there is evidence that investing in elite athletes is gaining support from a country’s people who like to see their stars shining in international competitions. That in turn is an encouragement for young children to do sports at an early age.\nIn terms of policies, a county has nothing to lose when spending huge money on encouraging young children to be engaged in physical activities at grass-root levels as well as on preparing competitors at elite levels. Both policies are worth investments from the government. And neither is a losing business.",
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"content": "The mood memoir relaxed happy mood Narciso always happy house always smell food parents cooking There always strong sense family house In pharagraph Narciso said growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative What saying nt related family Anyone close enough considered family He also felt always help people need That parents always help people need always willing share everything That mood instilled memoir family love",
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"content": "Robots plays an important role in everyones life. Some echelons of society believe that robots are very beneficial for the humans future development ,but others opine that robots are very threaten and put cast an adverse effect on society . This essay will delve into both views along with opinion in upcoming paragraphs.\nWhen it comes to why robots are more beneficial for humans .The prime view is that ,robots can do work in extreme conditions where humans are helpless . For example ,in tsunami robots are used for the help of folks because in those conditions people do not give help . Secondly ,robots speed up the production process and are very efficient in repititive tasks . For instance,leading products that are made in the developed nations like japan are manufactured by the help of intelligent machines . Inspite of this , intelligent machines not only beneficial for multitudes but also for the business employers because these machines can save the time of mortals as well as reduce the payment of labor.\n \nOn the other hand , why robots are dangerous and have negative effects on society . Firstly , robots can increase the rate of unemployment in the future . To examplify ,few robots have already started to teach children at school. others have been working as servants for several families. Moreover, if masses used robots for their all works ,then the health problems will be increased . They are trying to depend on the robots for works quickly. Most of the time humans give wrong command to the robots ,and it can cause big harms because robots does not have any feelings as well as it is not self reacted . It also depends upon the commands.\n\n\nAccording to me, nowadays robots are used in eveey field for working. Robots are well trained to do works in very attractive ways rather than humans . For example, in the harsh environment such as south pole and rainforests that may be full of poisnous insects .People donot works in that arenas because it ensures the lives of mortals.\n\n\nIn conclusion ,once again i would like to reiterate that robots have a more positive effect rather than negatives .The sooner the people understands the pros of artificial machines it is better for them.",
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"content": "\"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\".\n\nMy Claim: Venus is one of the most earh like planets.\n\nExplantion:The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes fimilar features as valleys , mountains , and craters.\n\nVenus is really an earth-like planet thats why researchers are interested in it most. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes fimilar features as valleys, mountains, and craters. Many reaserchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long on venus , so that we can explore more of the earth like features it has. sum things from venus have been took before for testing but didnt last long so reaseachers are also studying on how to make equiment from there last longer. Numerous of factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study,which it is but very worth it. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.(high pressure and heat). venus weather presents additonal impediments like erupting valcone's, powerul earthquakes, and frequant lightning strikes to probes seeking to on it surface.\n\nThis is why reachers want to study this earth-like planet It has many features that others don't and maybe if one day they could find the answers there could actually be human life there.",
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"content": "For many years, the automobile has become and remained a staple in the world as humanity's most popular choice of transportation. The number of cars manufactured by car companies has reached the hundreds of millions. Cars have been a trademark of American ingenuity and the evolution of technology. However, as we go into the great beyond that is the future, we must take into consideration the pains and risks of these vehicles, and if they are worth driving as the world population exceeds seven billion.\n\nFew people can recall a time where global warming wasn't the main conflict of scientists today. The Earth gets warmer as pollution levels rise as smog around cities like Paris and Mexico City reaches an all time high. The polar caps are melting at a rapid rate as hurricanes ravage the mainland harder and harder each year. What caused this stuff to happen? Why, look no further than our friends, the factories and automobiles! These two have been quoted time and time again as the catalyst of the global warming crisis. With such an adverse effect on the ozone layer, governments around the world have to do something to stop it from rising any further, with nothing short of success. Places like France have realized the extreme rise in smog levels in the city of Paris, that they had to do something. So, they made a ban on driving for people with even numbered license plates with only a few exceptions, and banned odd numbered licensed cars the next to try to curtail this occurance. After a few days, it worked. The smog cleared just enough for the French government to rescind its ban on license plates for the city. Such a huge difference in smog in only two days means that making a ban similar to this could be nothing short of beneficial for communities around the globe. So why don't more communities take up the hard task of making this ban a regular happening? It's a slow process, but it is happening, in unlikely places. Including over in our Western European ally Germany.\n\nVauban, Germany is a small community town located near the border of France and Switzerland. This town is best known for it's extremely unorthodox method of removing greenhouse gases from the ozone layer. People have decided to give up their cars, just relying on other transportation like walking and taking a local tram. Street parking, driveways and home garages are just not allowed in the district, and this has caused a huge difference between non-car owners and car owners alike. Seventy percent of the population in Vauban does not own a motor vehicle, a large portion of them sold their cars to move out to this small, cozy little town. Busy sidewalks and the chatter of civilians outshines the faint murmurs of the few odd automobiles in the city. What started out as an odd social experiment has turned into a great community full of happy people. Although this type of community is generally unpopular, other countries around the world have come to like the idea Vauban came up with. The capital city of Colobia, Bogota, has a neat program they like to call the Day Without Cars. The title speaks for itself. Civilians would take one day out of the year to generally not use cars, to promote the likening of taking other modes of transportation to wherever you need to go. Countries in South America have noticed this day, and are looking to replicate it themselves, which ultimately signifies the success of the Day Without Cars.\n\nCountries around the world have all tried to curtail greenhouse gas emissions, whether by making a community built around the non-use of cars, making a day celebrating the use of other modes of transportation, or just banning the driving of automobiles outright. As just of a cause it may be, Americans are still hesitant to enact such henious laws. However, if more communities are built around this clean idea, more and more people will flock to it. It just takes preserverence, a strong plan, and a whole lot of sidewalks.",
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"content": "Laughing key happiness Is moment remember many people You share many laughs friends family sometimes strangers When laugh someone shows something common think something funny could build strong relationship For laughing means lot laugh everyday I forget time really mad dad laughter fixed problem One night dad house kitchen arguing grades I told I could still fix solution He calling liar anger kept building He hard headed I could nt get thoughts He saying could fixed done whats done done I getting really mad I wanted go away thought ever going talk We lack trust wanted tell wrong I knew would got mad gon na end screaming It got mad could nt listen My dad said wanted best disappointed I got really sad dad kind guy ways telling jokes teasing everyone He always made day making laugh Usually would get trouble would end joke end The jokes made sad mad would build relationship stronger would always end laughing Later night family cutting niece s cake dad talking As singing happy birthday would glare look He looking tough Then saying CAPS le sople means blow candles All sudden uncle blows candle accident dad stared laughed hard We crying laughter could nt stop laughing It felt great laughing thing sharing moment together putting aside anger My dad would try laugh tried louder laugh It stayed laughing everyone else giggled As making dad relationship better build connection family I Its memory s gon na last life time yet important part dad relationship Although still upset grades better There connection us could still look back laugh I nt know night found incident funny As making relationship stronger distance nt matter build memory Something share building part part Our problem nt fixed important laughing made change helped us put aside Every laughing moment something share connection We laugh things share thoughts making us stronger Telling laugh things putting negatives away giving life meaning When know re happy sense humor Also moments others never forget The moment made laughing important part pass When funny moments become important s showed happy Its even better laugh time memories remembered happy moment I know times moments laughing key always look bright side Even though dad mad memory carry forever",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the auther suggests that studing Venus is a worthy persute despite the dangers it presents. I really dont know how to feel about this, there is alot of bad but there is also some good. For an example of the bad stuff there is a thick atmosphere of almost 90 percent carbon dioxide, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric asid in the atmosphere, and to top it all off the surface timperature avreges over 800 degrees, space craft cant last more than afew hours on Venus. In my eye im saying that i would not want to explor Venus. the good parts about it is that you get to lurn something new about a planet, if you huver 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian land scape it will only be 170 degrees fahierneit and it still has some Earth-like fetures (is the most Earth-like ).\n\nVenus is also sometimes called the \"evning star\"or Earth's \"twin\". Venus is the 2nd planer from our sun.",
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"content": "Polution not only for our well beings, but to think that if we contribute to the matter that is at stake than the overall wellness of our world will change not only for us but for our children. And therefore laws should be allowed to be in certain parts of the U.S, and there should be some sort of back up from the citizens aswell to what President Obama believes.\n\nLike mentioned in Source 1 last scentence in paragraph 7 \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\"; and this alone is why we should worry for our atmosphere. I mean think about it 50% is a huge amount and to think that it could be grealty decreased by certain laws that ban cars at certain times.\n\nAgain i find it amazing that our government has the thought of polution in their minds and plans for example \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gsas emissions. And studies show that fewer Americans are buying cars and getting fewer licences aswell which is beficial to the enviroment and overall wellness of the world.\n\nTo conclude Polution should be something to keep in mind therefore laws should be allowed to be in certain parts of the U.S, and there should be some sort of back up from the citizens aswell to what President Obama believes.",
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"content": "The authur supports the ides that studying venus is worthy pursuit because in the stroy the authur says\"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms density. They also say in the differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to venus. Astronomers are facinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system because long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life , just like the earth we live in now. also venus planets gots rocky sediment and includes familiar feature like mountains,craters and futhurmore. The Natinal Aeronatautics and Space Administration had an ides of making wants humans to study venus they also want some thing like a jet so they can fly over Venus to fly over many storms and also to look around planet venus.\n\nIn the article it says the nasa are working on other approaches to studying venus because how alike this planet. these are the projects that they are working n is silicon carbon, also they have been mechanical computers these devices were first envisioned in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during the world war 11.",
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"content": "Have you heard that NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus? In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" shows how our travels on Earth should be expanded and why Venus has a worthy pursuit due to Venus's value. The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present because Venus is worth exploring, it is Earth's \"twin\", and NASA studies.\n\nVenus is worth exploring because why would scientists discuss future visits to Venus. In the text it says,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This shows Venus is worth exploring because it is similar to Earth and sending off astronomers to Venus can help scientists with questions that have never been answered before.\n\nAnother reason why Venus is a worthu pursuit because it is Earth's \"twin\". Both Venus and Earth share similar characteristics and this help expanded the exploration from Earth. In the text it says,\"...Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" This explains the worthy pursuit to Venus because they are the same and sending off spacecraft to get futher information about Venus is good because it can also contribute to getting Earth travels beyond their limits.\n\nNASA studies for Venus is also a worthy pursuit because NASA technology and mechanical computers can help Earth's challenge to Venus. In the text it says,\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" and \"...simplified electronic made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" This shows the studies from NASA makes Venus a worthy pursuit because test and studies from NASA getting them closer for the challenge of exlploring Venus.\n\nSo in conclusion Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers because Venus is worth exploring, it is Earth's \"twin\", and NASA studies are getting them closer and closer of exploring Venus. Without the help of NASA or knowing Venus have similar feature to Earth the challenge of exploring Venus wouldn't be worth pursuit. Which is why Venus is a worthy persuit because \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but shoud be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"",
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"content": "The features setting would affect cyclist would want towns water restock theyre water They would want water even going hills They would also want palce gey something eat maybe rest",
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