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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe true many people use computers many use future Computers standard buissnes world hevily depended People even needing internet access cellphones stay date stocks shipments important emails Some computers also home use used contact family members find information need instantly would nt able find Computers still developing becoming faster better day day likely never put use mean permanently restrict othere activeties It true people spend much time computer everyone people work home computer help job I implore consider resonse computers used much understand computers used help hurt people Computers helpfull simplying things useful information I stand strong use computers strongly disagree negatively affect hte way human life Computers th things people would normaly example someone would go look every thing needs know look certain facts looking would also easy compare contrast information computer rather reading several diferent books So truly think computers save us tremendus amount time things Once I say computers better owe life hurt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was a big thing in pop culture. Too bad it is not actually a face. The first photo of it was taken in low quality, NASA stated that the face was actually caused by shadows, and NASA's budget would get raised if it was an alien artifact, they would be able to go to Mars more often and take pictures.However, the Face on Mars is just a mesa, a natural landform.\n\nThe first time a picture of the Face was taken, it was with a low quality camera. The 2001 image shows a high definition version of the Face without the shadows. Jim Garvin, NASA's chief scientist for Mars Exploration Program, states \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to the 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" He also says that if there were objects on the ground besides the face, they would be visiable in the 2001 photo.\n\nAnother thing that proves the Face is a land form is the shadows. NASA states when they unveil the image, that the shadows give the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. The 1976 photo was taken when the Viking 1 was trying to find landing spots for the sister ship Viking 2, so the photo of the Face was not intended. However the 2001 image was intended, the Mars Global Surveyor went on a cloudless day to avoid capturing an unclear photo and rolled the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. This means that purpose of the 2001 photo was to show if there was truly a face and no face appears in the photo.\n\nThe 1976 image does make the mesa look like a face, but it is just the work of shadows. NASA's budget would increase if the face was actually an alien artifact. They would get large ammounts of money to go to Mars and take more photos. NASA waited eighteen years until they got the Mars Global Surveyor to go back and take photos of the Face, if they really thought it was made by aliens, why would they wait so long to go back? Jim Garvin also states that \"We just don't pass over the Face very often.\", if they thought the face was created by aliens then why wouldn't they pass over it more often to observe it.\n\nThe Face on Mars is just a natural landform. The first time a picture of it was taken, it was with a low quality camera. NASA released the photos with a caption stating that the Face was an illusion made by shadows. Taking more photos of the Face was only made a priority eighteen years later, when they got the Mars Global Surveyor in 1997. The last image they took in 2001 was high resolution and showed that the Face was actually just a mesa, like the ones on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I disagree affects computers kids Computers lets kids want They dont travel far see certin things Like wanted see going get plane fly could get pics information right computer couple minutes Its good want see person wont want pay money plane tikets travel really far see home Computers lot fun stuff like myspace games also got almost everything think So travel see computer I think computer sometimes little adictive got learn stay time easy learn stuff computer Computers used billions great way learn stuff whole world things It information web sites like google bing look anything want look Computers almost everywhere phones Ipods even put car like police cars Computers useful people world I bet people make make new ones go almost everything They computers almost every building like hospitials fire stations police stations electronic stores like radioshack Your going learn lot computers travel places school In mind computers fun learn everything could think So think computers useful teach lot things go world day I disagree scientist people say computers affects certin people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alot factors effected cyclist Temperature terrain directions gave cyclist doubt The temperature high deserts california left cyclist feeling hot parched irratable Through story slips water left Knowing running low water to feel sorry himself The cyclist biked far terrain started change flat rolling hills This could impact someone greatly never biked different levals Lastly feeling hoped could effected Not believing hardest thing overcome Having liesurly taken instructions old man cost cyclist hours torture The author great job using hyperbole exagerate cyclists feeling lost hope He also used detailed text paint reader picture These literay elements made easier understand effect temp terrain hope biclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are good arguements that you can have to be against the developement of driverless cars and for them. There would be benefits going either way but there would also be some downfalls. In my opinion, I argue against these cars.\n\nFirst of all, the developement of these cars requires a lot of money and time. The manufactures of these cars could be using that money and time much more effectively. A lot of these cars require new special roads that use magnets or electrical currents. These roads cost a lot of money and would replace regular roads that are perfectly fine. Not to mention, most people would probably still have normal cars so the roads would only be for the few who get these self driving cars.\n\nAnother important issue is safety. Self driving cars aren't always going to accurate. Technology isn't accurate all the time and driving is something that I feel like shouldn't be left for technology to do. People should have to be aware of their own surroundings and drive their own cars. I feel like people wwould get used to just having technology do everything for them and eventually people wouldn't even have to learn to drive to have a car. These self driving cars are not able to drive in work zones, construction sites, or any type of accident which is where you need to be the most cautious. Not to mention, these cars allow you to do other activivties while you're driving since you don't have to be actively driving the car at all times. People could text or be on their phones or do soemthign else that distracts hem completely. Having a signal might not always be effective. People might also have to wait periods of time to drive themselves and this could cause people to get bored and start to get tired. If someone fell aslep at the wheel and then needed to direct the car, it would just cause an accident.\n\nWhile on the subject of accidents, those could be a problem as well. It could cause many legal problems if there was some type of accident in the car. People could say that it was the person in the car \"driving\" or they could say it was the car's fault. Once you blame the car for the accident that brings in the makers of the car which starts a whole legal mess.\n\nIn my opinion, these self driving cars aren't a good idea and peopleshould just stick to driving the cars themselves. I think that they would do more bad than good in the long run.They could cause problems with safety, legal issues, and finacial issues. We should just stick to driving the cars like we always have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At the present time, it can be easily seen that most people are overweight. To control this issue increment in fatty food can be one of the ways according to the question. But, I don't agree with this opinion and my view will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe idea to increase the fattening food price can be the reason to reduce this type of food consumption but it can affect society in other ways like difficulty for those people who really need it. It can result in out-of-reach for poor people. For example, fatty food can be very important for skinny people to gain weight and increasing costs will affect their budget.\r\n\r\nAlso increasing the price of junk food or fatty food can reduce the market of this kind of food and will bring the market down for those people who are getting direct income from this sector. Farmers or restaurant owners can be the people who can be affected more with compared to others.\r\n\r\nIncreasing the fatty food price can affect in another way nowadays so many charity works are going on by many NGOs and people who really want to help others, are providing food for free. so once the price is increased charity work may be reduced and needy people will not be able to get food and will need to suffer in daily life.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, my opinion is increasing the cost of food never can be a good idea as it can result in unaffordable for the poor people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well today going talk censorship books Music Movies Magazines libraries pretty grafic things talk story But yes grafic others doesnt mean take self Ya everyone sexual book people like read stuff But people like read murders gangs selling drugs thats fine Its like everyone taste like novel Sports true story happen someone etc thats part world would everyone liked things pretty boring right yeah deffentally So therefore dont think books takin shelfs could next best story somebody never know Now music yes called rap today music kids listen All talks sex drugs achole etc But desnt give right take shelf thats people like listen music dont talk oldies country jazz hip hop etc part music good better others lets take country instents ya talks sex achole thats whole song manly talk country boys things happened time pretty much right So music good without music dont think world would nice place people listen music time working work driving siting home So good music bad muic make call But movies movies made reason call intertainment adults yes kinda pointless prolly wont ever leave movies made sex drugs achole thats part life everything perfect So matter gota tell children stuff stop watching younge age think taking big role teen pregnecy beacuse see hey looks fun shoud try sexual content easy get web etc like drugs easy get meth labs meth weed arund gota tell kids watch cant Disney great shows kids parents boss stuff Now get Magazines millions magazines aound world one thing never leave world carry news intertainment comics tips somethng thats going world till world ends But yes take caution magazines children never look till adults doesent make bad people injoy looking kinda magazines thats people like like going stop son looking daughter looking porn apart life stop happening younge age gota get clear child look stuff till older cant stop everything But trying say yes bad things alot good things doesnt give right remove", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In most countries, teenagers often travel or do a part-time or full-time job for a certain period of time before entering the university. The advantages to this are that they get work experience and proper saving for, paying their tuition fees and it also brings some disadvantages too.\nOne of a positive side of taking a gap before continuing higher education is getting a valuable work experience by doing part-time or full-time employment. It is true that in many countries a candidate with no experience always struggles to get a good job after finishing tertiary education, whereas, a candidate who has a small experience before entering university often does not struggle to get a job in future. Another positive aspect is saving of some fund. This is because the higher education is so costly that most students do not continue their education, and with such savings not only do they continue their studies, but also do not have to depend on their parents or bank for a loan.\nThere are many negative sides to this but one of them is losing interest to continue the studies. For example, in China, 65% of students who took a gap of 6 months or a year never came back for their further education due to an interest in earning money. Another downside is that getting involved in bad activities. It has seen in many western countries that few students who travel or work for a certain period seem to get involved in bad influences such as, drugs, shoplifting or robbery.\nIn conclusion, even though travelling or doing the job for some period gives an opportunity to have work experience and a small saving, downsides to this is showing an interest for earning money rather than continuing study further.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fuel consumption has become extremely common these days with the advancement of technology, creating an unfavorable environment to live and breathe. Moreover, some people are suggesting that the government should charge higher for such kinds of energy resources to alleviate the associated problems. Although this trend will offer some help, however, it is not very effective.\r\n\r\nCosting higher spares people with high socioeconomic statuses as they do not worry about their finances in general. Moreover, their businesses continue to run at the same pace and energy, unaffected. However, it only affects people belonging to the lower class or economically unestablished families such as taxi drivers, who feed their children by driving taxis around the place. \r\n\r\nSecondly, charging pricier for energy resources will not do the job alone if there is not enough general awareness and the required education regarding pollution and its harmful consequences on the atmosphere and ecosystem among the population. For instance, people who throw garbage in the streets and waters will not stop to contaminate and polluting the environment regardless of the petrol and gas prices.\r\n\r\n To conclude, it can be reiterated that even if the rates for energy resources used in modes of transportation are set higher to solve environmental problems. It is still not an effective way and may give birth to many other significant and intense problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the article\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", I have come to the conclusion that the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) would not be of value in a classroom environment. This is due to the fact that most students get bored at least once during the class period. Most teachers even become stressed or bored during a class period. It would be hard to change the whole lesson to accomedate for that one bored or distracted student.\n\nAssuming that all participants in the class have prior knowledge of this system being implemented in their classroom, I feel that the system itself can be a stressor for a student or teacher. Students will be forced to stay focused, and cannot get confused because they run the risk of the teacher noticing. In the high school environment, it is difficult for a student to always be ready for a day of constant learning. Sometimes, teacher attention is the last thing you need. Pressuring someone to always be focused every day is way too much to ask.\n\nFor instance, if one student is seen as bored or confused during an explanation of a math problem, the system will recognise that and report their confusion to the teacher. I can see why at first glance this might sound extemely helpful, but no human can always understand everything being taught. No human can go to school or even place of work completely interested, every single day.\n\nAlso, if a student is confused on a math problem, the system cannot change the process of solving. Math has one way to be taught and cannot be changed becasue of an uninterested student. The moment a student is distracted, the teacher would see this and be stressed themselves because what they are teaching is comming off as \"boring\". Also, I know for a fact that one system does not have the capabilty to understand all subjects to the point where it knows how to modify the subject to change one's interest in the topic.\n\nMyself being a student, I know that I do not like math. I am not interested in math, and I am not pursuing a carreer that requires mathematics. I never have and never will. Also, I am diagnosed with ADD, which reduces my ability to fucus. So obviously, I can get a little lost or distracted. No amount of modification can be done to a math course to make it appeal to me.\n\nSo in conlusion, I feel that implementing a program that can read and state the emotions of students in a classroom, is not a good idea. It would promote stress among students as well as teachers, which neither of them need. There would be a constant struggle to be focused and attentive in class every day, even if you are having personal conflicts. This could cause some students to ditch class or school. And lastly, implementing FACS would be counter productive as it would create more negative emotions than positive ones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is sort of valuable. It can either help someone or not. But it doesn't hurt to try.\n\nTo begin with,\n\nI say sort off because, for one, you never know what a person is going through. If the computer can tell someones emotion why not see how they're feeling. If they're sad or depressed maybe you can help them in someway. But also, people might not want you to know how they're feeling. So using the computer's app, that is kind of disrespecting them in a way because they dont want you to know their emotions.\n\nAlso, I still think it is valuable because like a I said if they're sad you can help them. Even if they don't want you to know, you can still help them secretly though. They will recieve help without even knowing that they're getting help. Little do people know, alotof people who are sad tend to smile the most and just look happy. So, honestly i do feel like it is very valuable, people should use it. But not just anyone, maybe like doctors or specialist.\n\nI think specialists should be the ones to use them because they can be the ones to help people and they actually know how to do so. In the passage it talks about how in some people it is easy to tell by their face expression what they are feeling. But sometimes it is hard, and i agree. That is why I do think it is very valuable to use the computer.\n\nLastly, I do think its useable. It helps by letting us know who is depressed or stuff like that. But like I had said, I belive it should only be doctors using it and not just anyone because people and kids are immature and we would not want others to make them feel worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think take test going spring She going try pass But want cry front mother I think going make pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting affected cyclist surrondings changed lost hope making Yosemite National park Such riding first town looked abandoned wasnt sure shold keep going As well didnt see anyone buildings got worried wanting lose hope But second road sign appeared relieved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology, to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable. The reason for this is because this technology can read the students facial expression showing if that student is having a hard time trying to answer the question. Also it could help the teachers out by having an extra pair of hands helping them with the students who are afraid to raise their hands to ask questions.\n\nAccording to the article, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...... then it could modify the lesson..\" (D'Alto). This part of, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" shows that this technology can easily help a student in need, without having the teacher stop the lesson to help that one person. It's also like giving the teacher an extra pair of hands because it's helping the teacher understand who they need to work with more on that subject. Sudents may sometimes be a little shy; they won't ask the teacher for help because of their shyness. According to the article, \"Most humans communication is nonverbal, including emotinal communication\" (Nick D'Alto). So that shows, the emotional expression technology would be able to help by telling the teacher who is having a hard time and who is not.\n\nEmotional expression technology is valuble. The students need this so they can learn what they need to learn without having to worry about asking questions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face was just made by the sand moving around. The face shouldn't be this big of a deal. Just because it looks like a face doesn't mean someone made it like that. But to others it may seem like aliens did do it. But they think what they want but aliens don't exist.\n\nThe face is not that big of a deal. The face is a way for organizations to sell their products. As it says in the fifth paragraph, \"The 'face on mars' has become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\". All the face is is sand that has been moved around by sand storms and now it looks like a face nothing fun about it. All I'm saying is the face is not as great as it once seemed.\n\nEven though the face really means nothing, some people thinkthat the face was made by life on mars. They say that they made it to show that they were there. \"The face is bona fide evidence on mars\". But we also know that sand storms are very common on Mars, how could it not just be one of those that did it?\n\nThe face is not as amazing as everyone was making it out to be. It is just sand that happened to make a face when it blew together. In conclusion, I feel that the face is not as big of a deal as it was made out to be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" I have been asked to tell weather or not i think the author did a good job supporting and evaluating his ideas. As i read through the text i looked for key moments that stood out. This author beleives it is right and just to continue our missions to try and explore our neighboring planet. I feel that he does a very good job backing up his statement because he has an interesting introduction, middle and end. The author also does a very good job explaining his theory through lots of detail and background. Finally, the author doesnt just use his knowledge but he goes out there and finds information from experts. To me, those are three componets that will really prove what you believe in.\n\nThe article starts out with some basic background information to get you hooked onto the topic. It reads, \"IN our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point from earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" those few sentences hook the reader on their claim and make you want the author to prove him self. therefore, the author does exactly that throughout the body of the text. He gives detail, background and outside sources but, we'll get into that later. In the end, he raps up the text with his claim once a again and that final kicker that get any strageling readers that dont quite believe him. It states, \"Our travels on Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nThroughout the body the author illustrates textbook detailing and informing. He makes a claim and then back it up with information why. It is all organized very well also. Each paragraph goes over something new and intriging. For example in the second paragraph, \"Venus... occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus and Mars... Orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mena that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\" As you can see that quote gives one of his claims and then goes deeper into explaining it. After doing this he will turn around onto a new topic in the very next paragraph. \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These condition are far more extrem than anything humans encounter on earth.\" To make his detailing even more interesting he gave his information first and then followed it with his claim. I feel like this way of orginization kept the reader hooked.\n\nIf you remember I said earlier in the text that the author doen't just use his own brain to help hsi claim. He will go out and get help from experts known as NASA and are th eleading group in space exploration for the United States. I feel like this is always a key to underatnding and convincing your claim because it can prove that you care and that you arent the only one that believes in the same picture. Paragraph five states, \"The National Aeronatics and Space Administration has on particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus.\" Shortly after that he goes into detail on NASA's idea for Venus exploration. He uses their ideas toback up is own. NASA obviously is for the exploration of Venus and I htink he chose a very good company to do research on to find out more about his own claim.\n\nTo wrap up, my claim in the begenning was that the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" did a very good job supporting his own claim. The author did this by carefully organizing his information into a begginning, middle and end format. he also uses very good detail and description throughout the text along with ideas from a different perspective. This is why I believe he did a very good job evalutating his claim and if he were here right now i'd give him a pat on the back. Hopefully, the article you just read had the same care and interest as \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know about 25 years ago a funny face has appeared on Mars? Did you also know that the funny face became a pop icon? The funny face has appeared on lots of things. It became popular after the scientists and researchers found out about it. It went on tv shows, movies, magazines, and stuff like that.\n\nSome scientist think that it was some kind of alien artifact, even though aliens do not exist. Some of the scientists or the Mars Orbiter Camera took a lot of pictures to get a really good picture of it. The scientists did this because they wanted to be able to study a lot better and they would get a better view of the face, if they get a really good picture of it. It took a while for them to get the picture on this JPL web site. It turns out that the face was not an alien's artifact after all.\n\nThe scientists wanted to get another picture of the face on Mars. They wanted to have a second look at it, to make sure that can get the right information on it. Like where the face is, what degrees it is at, which it is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude. They wanted to find good information about it. They wanted to get better pictures of it so they could study it more, so they could get research on it.\n\nSome people think that the face on Mars looks equivalent to a butte or mesa, which is a landform commom around the American West. So now people know what it looks like. Some people might think it still looks like a face to them but other people might not think that anymore. They think it looks different now that the scientists figured out what it looks like. The scientists figured out that the lava dome, isolated the form mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nThe scientists might still be trying to figure out how this face appeared on Mars how it got there. Some people are trying to figure out what the face looks like, even some people think that the face on Mars doesn't even look like a face. Scientists might look at this differently now. They might as well keep trying to figure it out if they want to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that employees should be forced to comply with a specific dress code or it is their outcome that matters. Personally, while I agree that the way of dressing should be considered as an irrelevant factor in many workplaces, I believe that dress codes still exist for good reasons in some professions.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, staff's productivity is much more important than how their appearance is. If employees have been restricted to a certain regulation related to clothing, they might not feel that much freedom to produce creativity. For example, there is a furniture company in my hometown which is famous for its avangard design not determining any dress code to curb its staff. Moreover, by introducing any form of dressing, workers might lose the chance to present their personality to their co-workers and that company therefore would not have a progressive, positive atmosphere to boost applicability.\r\n\r\nHowever, it has been proved that in some careers dress codes are effective factors. Firstly, a certain, well-known uniform can provoke a feeling of trustworthiness in people's hearts. For instance, we would not rely on a fireman or a police officer if they did not dress up in their specific uniforms. Secondly, in some places like hospitals certain clothes are not only pivotal to cleanness but also inform people of data like how they are talking to whom they should refer to by their differences. Finally, similarities in the way of dressing could lead to a sense of unity in any company. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although the performance of workers is vital to employers and dress codes should not be forced, I believe that there are still positive aspects of following dress regulations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir proud This mood showing thanks things learned childhood proud One example author talks Cuban heritage still loves Cuban music He also proud parents immagrating start better life He also proud even though people lived neighborhood different backgrounds everyone accepted eachother Another reason proud parents would help give many people home stay The author proud parents tier love sacrifice They loving sacrificed lot get The mood author memoir proud parents done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever woner what the Face on Mars really is? Some people say that it is a rock formation that resembles a human face. Some say that it was an alien artifact. I think that the Face is just some kind of rock formation. If the Face has anything to do with an alien, we would be as suprise and intrested as all you guys would be.\n\nFirst of all, if the Face relate to some kind of alien things, why do you think we would keep it a secret? Imagine that it actually had to do something with alien and we told everyone. That would be a benefit for us because more people would be intested in NASA. It will make us get more money make good profits. We as a scientist would actually want to see some kind of alien artifact too but that is not what we are finding right now.\n\nSecond of all, the people who said we are hiding something don't even have any prove. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, said that \" We felt this was important to taxpayers\". That shows that we are not hiding anything. We send a spacecraft twice after the first picture which was in 1976 with a better camar to really make sure what we say is true. We even show the would all the picture. The people who said we are hiding something have no idea what they are talking about.\n\nIn conclusion, I am telling you that the Face we saw on Mars was nothing but a rock formation. Don't believe in everything you hear because some of them do not have prove of what they are saying. To make sure it was what we think it was we send Mars Global Surveyor in April 5, 1998 and we send it again on April 8, 2001. If we find some things that have to do with alien, we will tell you guys. But for now that is not the case, so lets not think that the Face have something to do with aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be expensive with all of those sensors? Also not every one is going to have a diverless car so if a accident happens will the person with the car that has a driver have the fault for it? Driverless cars are maybe coming but will every one allow it to happen.\n\nI think how cars right now are fine they make it easier for us while on the road with safty and other things. Sensors are expensive period but a lot of sensors on one car, Cars now are expensive enough already. How much will they cost while being driverless.\n\nAlso cars are fast and slow, what kind of cares will be driverless. Will there be driverless racecars and semi trucks with heavy loads be next on the list?\n\nNow talking about people with and without driverless cars. Let's say two cars are on the same road heading toards each other on a sharp turn. One care has a driver and one has no driver. The driverless car hits the car with the driver. So will the driver of the non driverless car be at fault for the accident. And gets all the bills. Or will the person or manufacture of the driverless car get the fault as the article says. If the manufacture is at fault the company would have to recall all of models of that car after a certin amount of accidents with those models of vehicles.\n\nWhen driverless cars come we have to be prepared for it, everyone will. The Drivers, Manufacturers, Law makers, and other drivers without the driverless cars. So do you think driverless cars should come in to play?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator, we should do Electoral College because it will be easier to vote and will only use votes of qualified citizens. The Electoral College has a consist selection of the electors, the meeting of electors where they can vote for President and Vice President, and counting electoral votes by congress.\n\nThe Electoral College has 538 electors, and majority of 270 electoral votes that is required to elect the presedent. Also, under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the distric of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for this reason, the word \"state\" also refers to district of columbia.\n\nPlus, the presidential election is held every 4 years on a Tuesday after the first Monday of in November, and when you choose your states electors when you vote for president, you also are actually voting for your candidates electors. After the presidential election, the governor of your state prepares a listing of all the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors called, \"Certificate of Ascertainment\".\n\nYour state also sends a Certificates of ascertainment to the Congress and National Archives as part of the official records of thee presidential election. The Electoral College is also a widely regarded as an anachronoism, which is a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by the candidates who recieved the most popular votes the winner.\n\nThis positions are correct in arguing that the Electroal College method is not democratic in modern sense, but it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When people vote for the president they are actually voting for a state of electors. The outcome of this meathod is that the Electoral College vote is possible but its less likely to dispute over the popular vote. That is why we should do Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think technology to read students emotional expression in a classroom is valuable. The reason why i think technology to read students emotional expressions is valuable because students should always be happy and never upset or confused. In the article it said \"By weighting the different units, he software can even indentify mixed emotions.\" (Nick D'Alto 4) If the teacher sees that the student is not happy then maybe they can help them. Students have been hurting them selves and with technology like this could save many students lives.\n\nTeachers could help a student in a classroom if they are upset and talk to them about it. I think this technology is very valuable and it can inspire students to create technology like this in the future. This type of technology could also let students know how much technology can really do. This technology can help help teachers understand if their students are confused or not. In the article it said \"A cassroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" (Nick D'Alto 6)\n\nThis could improve students grades because if a student is confused it can let the teacher know so that they know to reteach it so that the student understands.\n\nTechnology like this can imrove many things like how a student feel and even the teachers. More technology should be introduced to students in class rooms to help them improve to make the world better like this technology. This may even inspire them to create technology and making it their job. It said in the article that if a student got confused it could help. In the article it said \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" (Nick D' Alto 6)\n\nTechnology that enables computers to identify human emotions is cool and i think they should install this technology in every students computer. This technology not only helps student but teachers too.\n\nThis could help improve many things i dont see why they wouldn't. This could help students know how they are feeling every day. In the article it said \" In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" (Nick D'Alto 5)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people consider that leadership a skill inherited from ancestors. Conversely, others claim that coaching can be formed through experiences in life. Therefore, from my point of view, captaincy is a balance between gifted abilities and developed capacities.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, to be a chief demands some skills given by nature. First, a successful head is a person who can attract people. It means that their tone of voice is strong, fully powerful, and reliable. In addition, a leader needs sharp characteristics, a business mindset, and a far-seeing ability. Therefore, they can make decisions that benefit their business or country. Take Donald Trumps as an example. He is a businessman, according that his personality is extremely sharp. When he became the American President, he helped the United States back to the number one country in the economy, compared with China.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a few comments that leadership can be learned and trained. Because, nowadays, the programs to change an ordinary person to a leader are very popular. They can access the Internet and find an appropriate course such as communication skills in front of a crowd, people management, etc ... Through these studies, future managers will shape the skills that talented people possess. However, to become an expert, they need to practice persistently.\r\n\r\nTo sum up everything that has been stated above, in my opinion, if a modest person wants to be a leader without having any innate skills, they could also achieve their goals through hard learning and training.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last few years, the debate regarding museums has been raised. Some people believe that museums are a place where you gain knowledge and education. However, Some others claim that historical places like museums should be attractive and enjoyable to the public. I believe that museums are educational places but also they can be entertaining to attract more visitors. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, a historical gallery is a place where the visitors explore the history of nations. In addition, they can learn about the tools as well as the methods that had been used in the ancient era. For instance, the Louvre museum exhibits ancient Egyptian clothes and statues. As a consequence, such galleries should not accept any entertaining activities that will disrupt the tourists. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, recreational activities inside the museums will attract more community members to come and learn about our history. Furthermore, such activities will enhance the people experience as well as encouraging them to bring their children. For example, display a relevant adventure movie with high-quality sound, this movie may focus on some historical events in order to gain youth attention. Moreover, some ancient venues organize competitions to bring more participants as well as more media coverage. As a result, more revenue can be generated to support the employee's salaries together with expansion projects.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, museums are a great venue to gain knowledge regarding ancient events. Although it is an educational zone, we can include some enjoyable shows. Such activities will motivate more youth and children to visit museums. This can include movie shows and competitions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though Venus is the \"sister planet\" of Earth and is closer than Mars, it has a extreme environment. Dispite the environment, studying Venus may help us develop better space travel and planet colonizalion in the future to help our human speices as a whole to evolve and adpat to much harsher encironments than we are used to. Venus may help us learn about how the universe, our solar system, and galaxy were made.\n\nVenus might have alloys and metals that don't exist on Earth. Venus might be the first step to colonization of our solar system. It will improve our space craft knowlegde so we can be ready for the unpredictable environments on other planets. Who knows we may colonize Venus then Mars. If we do colonize Venus, the human population will be able to expand without over-populating Earth. With our knowledge of Venus traveling to other planets will be easier, because of the exploration to Venus the hull, or outer plating, of the craft would be able to withstand extreme temperatures, harsh weather conditions and extreme pressure.\n\nEven though Venus is harsh, I believe that we would be able to over come this challenge and be ready to take on the next one head first with a better understanding of what to expect.\n\nIf we are able to get rovers, space crafts, and/or people on Venus, it may help us learn about our solar system and if aliens did one live in this solar system before we did and if so what happened to them and where did they go. Venus is still a mystery to us. Who knows what lives down on that alien, unknown, surface. Venus might be a key to unlocking the secrects of our solar system.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its environmental dangers that it holds under and in its atmosphere. It may be the first step to the human race as a whole to live on other planets and explore the galaxy we call home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Offensive Books music magazines movies commericals Is right types shown ages I disagree A variety people could take offense content contains I think designated area alarming removed everyone peace library watching television home Even though people take offense type think parents A majority parents would want children surrounded effects brings Some content suitable younger kids Whether going movies going library children see violence misbehaving going world today I believe drugs alcohol curse words big influence kids days I think responsibilty protect age make judgements Religion Our religion plays big part think right wrong I taught always treat people respect try hardest get along others A lot contradicts I taught If see something television favorite actor actress tend believe acceptable behavior If ever movie theater know certain ratings The ratings protect younger kids getting adult movies They enforce rule extent I nt think enforce enough At least libraries movie rental places could designated area adult rated content respect disagree A years ago little sister two three watching movie curse words She never heard often nt sure meant For next couple days went around saying word parents nt happy She idea anything wrong heard movie could say could Children sometimes nt know better would happen say stranger would offended harmless also offensive The safest way keep new generation respectful shield young learn right wrong When come real world wo nt difficult put proper manners No one ever agree things end need right betterment community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates variety different moods memoir In paragraph two author tells much culture put home young parents created traditional cuban home also tells thankful parents instilled love cooking Cuban music This gives feeling home warm comfortable alive In paragraph three athor tells family nothing blood relatives Growing enviroment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative memoir really start see authors opinion definition home family In paragraph six see grateful author towards parents I always greatful parents love sacrifice It gives mood greatfulnes In paragraph three four author talks sense unity parents would always door open people need whole community like family cultures came together great solidarity friendship My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family The general mood moods coming together creat generas senseof home community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel letting kids days feel ever want We making think nt care involved thats true We need set boundries kids nt able We need show know I think age policy libraries If books types adult content adult section If ever wanted check books movies magazines section would eighteen older If much ask least parents sign concent form Book movies magiznes type adult content harzardess child whether actions behaviors It effect lives depending age introduced things We need show care I know personal experiences exposed drasticly changes people time quickly Now days media portarying money alcohal fame drugs good things This putting movies books magazines putting children heads We telling ok certanly These reasons put cencorships restrictions libraries We letting children grow fast introducing things way early In way brain washing live destructive live adult oriented things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People right descide weather childs books censorship Some parents dont want child read books like till get older Kids grade school dont know book getting profanity I think grade schools middle schools books censorship Yea parents dont care child reads Think ones Not every one guts say something school If ask would books censorship childs school Then high school students old enough look threw books descide want get book Yea parents still care child get high school high school students old enough make descions Some students relize book grabed untill start reading thats turn around exchange I think high school students smart enough choose books This I think bout books magazines etc censorship removed grade schools middle schools high schools If agree YOU something Talk childs school", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not have any exact feelings towars having driverless cars , but I can most deffinantly see where it could be a problem.Driverless cars as the author has pointed out does have a lot of pros but it can also have a lot of cuns. The idea of this product needs to be well thought out for all sinariose. Will the people benifit or will they lose at the end of the day?\n\nThe idea for smart cars is fantasic. However, they could also cause a lot more probelms than they are worth in the long wrong. The author gives examples such as who is to blame if there is an accident, and I believe that is an outstanding point. Will the owner of the car or the manufacturer have to pay for the damage that was caused, and how would you determine which car was at fault if the two cars that were in the accident were both driverless? Another example iwould be how the cars react if they are put in harsh weather conditions such as getting caught in the middle of a storm. Will the cars be able to recive the satalight signals if there is a tornado or a hurricane? Another thought to consider is the price of these cars. There is no doubt that the driverless cars will be high end pricing so who should be able to afford these cars, and are they even safe enough to consider driving in the first place? You see these are all questions that need to be asked and thought of before marketing distibuting this iteam to the public.\n\nIf sociaty will benifit in the long wrong is hard to tell, but as a whole sociaty should take a long hard look at the idea of driverless cars and try to figure out if the whole concept of this product will be woth the investment. The cars are just a peice of machenary, will we be able to trust it with our lives or even the lives of our families. There are many sinariose that should be thought out and taken into consideration before getting a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowdays technology is almost the base for everything; for medicine, for entertaniment, for research and everyday technology is developing faster and faster.\n\nSince technology has become something for must people, a very essensial tool in order to live, they have decide to create even more things from it to make their lives easier; which this leading them to depend on technology in aspects of their lives like work, doctor, school, amusement, etc.\n\nBut what would happen is technology shuts down one day or even a month? People who depend on technology will be forlorn.\n\nIn relation to the arcticle and the question about technology shuting down, if we use this technolgy called Facial Action Coding System in students to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom, we can have advantage when it comes to understanding and helping the students. But when it comes for technology shuting down then what? Teacher of superiors are not going to be able anymore to guide students by themselves. They would depend on the program to detect how can they act in order to help the classroom.\n\nThis program can be useful but in even more important aspects as reasearch is. For example, that they tell us about how miguel angel created Mona Lisa, with this program they could analyze Mona Lisa's expressions behind the painting.\n\nWe humnas are smart enough to read someone facial expressions and analyze them. The need to crate a program and to waste money that can be used in more important investigations, is not really something required for society in order to develop.\n\nMaybe detecting people's emotions can help the government or they would be the only ones to get a benefit from it, so they can control easily the citizens.\n\nOverall, the creation of technologic programs like this is really not helping schools but research, and the less we depend on technology in order to survive, everyone would be more conected to earth and would use more the riches a country has, rather than creating more tech grabage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car usage can be so stressful sometimes. People are in a confined a space for a long period of time, it could smell weird, there's traffic, and then top of that people have road rage. While getting from point A to point B is important people don't have to use cars to do it all the time. Citie's would be able to have all the stores right in one place because there wouldn't need to be space for parking, there would be a lot less pollution in the air, it would be a great source of excersise, and it would be one less bill that people would have to wrry about.\n\nLimiting how much we use the car would have a huge positive effect on the enviroment. It would make the air more breathable, pure, and reduce the amount of smog in the air. For example, in Paris they recently had to ban people from driving in order to reduce the amount of smog in the air. (source 2) People would also be able to save a lot much money too. Imagne never having to pay for gas or the car bill ever again. People would also be able to have more space in their homes, because we wouldn't need the garage to store the car.\n\nTake Vauban, Germany for example. They have given up cars in their city. People can still own cars but you have pay $40,000 just to park the car \"at the edge of the development ...along with a [house].\" A mother of two, who lived in Vauban, said that \" when [she] had a car, [she] was always tense.\" (source 1) If the U.S. started doing this stores would be able to be placed on a main street, rather than on a highway 20 minutes from the closest nighborhood.\n\nMaybe, other countries could follow Bogota, Columbia's example and just ban cars for a single day every year. It's a good cway to promote people to excersise and stay in shape. It'd be a great opportunity to have fun, spend the day with your family, \"take away stress and [reduce] air pollution.\" (source 3)\n\nSo, whether people are reducing their car usage because their city banned cars, they just want to stay in shape more, they want to reduce air pollution, they want save money or they found out that excersising is a great stress reliever. There are a lot of advantages to limiting people's car usage", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles attempted allow dirigibles dock The first problem overall safety Dirigibles built outside U S required use hydrogen Hydrogen extremely flammable gas poses great danger An example Hindenburg destroyed May Lakehurst New Jersey It finally occurred dirigible destroyed densely populated area could potentially hurt lot people A second obstacle builders face nature At altitude violent air currents causing winds constantly shift This danger landing dirigibles Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back would keep swaying It would harder dock passengers allow inspections Also dirigibles would typically weighted lead weights However high practical safe The last obstacle builders face laws One specific law allow airships fly low urban areas It also illegal airship tie even aproach building Overall obstacles denied potential mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because this program helps other countries during World War 2. We help these countries with their supplies.\n\nWe went to these countries when the Pacific war was over. Our ship even provided us something to pass time. This is why I think you should join the program.\n\nThe UNRRA hires Seagoing Cowboys to help take care of animals before we get to the countries. To pass time you would play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games. You are able to do a lot of sight seeing, like seeing Europe and China, or seeing the Acropolis in Greece. You help countries with their food supplies, animals, and more. You even talk with people with other nations that help you.\n\nThis is why I think you should join the UNRRA. You are able to see Europe and China. You help other countries recover their supplies. You talk to other people from other nations. This is your opportunity of a lifetime.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My grandma patient months big check kept haveiry mastakes like spelled last name wrong called back retiped everytime retipped would make mastakes five times row takes long time prosses needed pay pills wouldnt get kicked We also needed new car clothes Our car ready break clothes grow When grandma finally got check went strait got brand new car clothes I think grandma pretty patient five time I know wouldnt able patient without loseing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless cars are dangerous and useless for people . In the article ¨Driverless Cars Are Coming,¨ the author compared both positive and negative aspects. But in my opinion, the negative aspects are far more greater than positive aspects. The bad aspects are such as the car not being completely driverless and still need to be assisted by the driver. Also, the price is going to be too expensive to be practical. That ´s why people should not buy such things as driverless cars.\n\nFirst, to get in or buying driverless car is frightening. No matter how much science is devoloping today, it still can´t mimic the skill of humans. The driverless cars they are talking about here is not completely driverless. They still need assisting. According to the article, the purpose is to make people relax and help accidents rate get smaller. But how can people relax when they know nothing about what´s going on? It will only just help people grow anxiety. Also, take over when the situation comes? There is no gurantee that the drivers will be able to get adapted and know how to solve the situation right away. It doesn´t really seem to help people if this is the actual situation.\n\nAlso, the price is not going to be that cheap to be pracitical. According to the article, a lot of things are needed such as position-estimating sensors, rotating sensors, video cameras, automotive radar sensors, GPS, dubbed LIDAR, and spining sensor. All those things are needed just to be on same skill with a human behind the wheel. So the expenses are definitely not going to be average. So for normal people who live their days working and doing house chores can´t afford them. Maybe rich people will but it won´t become a hit or something that totally needed.\n\nSo people doesn´t really need the driverless cars. People don´t need a car that need people assisting when they can drive it just fine. And the money isn´t going to just fall down to earth to buy it. Maybe some people will get interested in them. But as there is no significient to be proved of, it will just be an amusement without no purpose.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most pressing problems in the world nowadays is environmental damage. When it comes to tackle the problems, people think that government should increase the price of fuel, however, this is not the only solution to solve the problem. This essay will take a closer look at the side view.\n\nFirst of all, the increase in fuel cost directly discourages the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity in public transportations, so the released emission into the air is lessened, and it impedes the process of air pollution and global warming. For example, if gasoline is more expensive, people will tend to use the bus or train rather than their personal cars. Besides, it is able to improve the efficiency of house appliances such as air conditioning, heating, cooking and so on to lead the greener life, meanwhile the government could pass laws to limit the emission from manufacturing operations by using renewable energy from solar, wind and water power.\n\nThe cost of fuel is proportionate to higher production, which depends on machines generated by fossil fuel. For the inhabitants, especially ones living in poor countries may struggle with higher living conditions. I believe that the government play a paramount role in investing more in alternative energy for sustainable growth, and the most effective solution is to educate people for everyday awareness of our energy use and the carbon dioxide emissions.\n\nTaking everything into consideration, increasing the tax on fuel cost is a short-term solution to address the environmental problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once I patient I want go football dad didnt want So puting shoe I would ask come play football would take shone Then I wait two half hour get one shone When putting second shon I didnt say anything We faihl play football Thats I learn use patience able safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently debate whether computers benefit society Some people say computers enable internet conversations friends computers pass information faraway places people However I tend believe computer necessary People exploit time comptuers reducing exercise time Not many pay attention nature instead talking friends internet meet park Many people use computers reducing metabolism This one reason highest obesity rates world In addition less exercise less healthy pair ll recieve feel tense muscles exercise If continue lack exercise wo nt many possibilities us future Is nt difficult know people pay much attention computer endangered species nature Pandas polar bears whales different types creatures need help fight extinction problem Unfortunately pay much attention computer consideration humans make things possible help creatures need survive generations Perhaps learn creatures take time computer Perhaps find nature interesting Why text messaging computers ability talk frinds park We freedom speech Our families need help occasionally sometime re available While reducing social life computer hours becoming important distracting s mos important In conclusion computers hours must think done nature health family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays technology is playing a key role in every individual’s life. They are tending to depend on Internet and phone for everything. In this essay, I will discuss how the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.\nMobile phone and internet usage by anyone and anywhere in today’s life. That is, people are using technology in every walk of life whether it is bill payment, entertainment, travel, news etc. For instance, to watch a latest movie you do not need to walk to the cinema hall rather you can sit at home and watch it on your computer. In an another example, to pay the mobile bill you can do it by using your phone and you do not need to stand in long queues to do so. All in all, technology is playing a prominent role in helping people by making the life easy.\nDespite, having lot of benefits, there are various drawbacks to it. People cannot completely rely on technology as it has negative impacts. One of them is, technical error while doing some important transaction. In addition to that, fake information by various channels can lead people into wrong direction. Therefore, people cannot depend on technology for everything.\nTo encapsulate, though technology is very much necessary to keep up on the plethora of things, at the same time it can cause negative results. Hence, it would be safe if we do not rely on technology for everything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. This technology can read and tell you how you feel, but is it accurate? It can read your expressions but that is all. No one really knows how you feel deep down inside but yourself. This technology is just taking a guess on what they think how you feel.\n\nSomeone can make a facial expression but that does not mean how they feel. A lot of people smile but they do not really mean it because they could feel sad they just want to cover it up. Some do not like to express how they feel so they just keep a serious look. The article states \"Using video-imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\". A facial expression could be taken the wrong way too.\n\nWe do not need technology to tell how someone feels when we have people. Why would someone want this if it is not all the way accurate? If this were to be used then it should be used for fun not for accuracy. This over all idea is good but does not really help. Any one can know that when someone smiles it means that they are happy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers really made impact society Some people think made good impact others think opposite I believe good thing lives made drastic great impact Some reasons support opinion computers basically helps us keep touch people make easy find needed information make school lives faster much simpler First computers pretty much people keep touch There many ways keep touch computers Tere videochatting email chat websites etc There many people really enjoy ability keep touch way It step talking phone On computer webchatting talk see When comes chatting websites millions people belong incredible website love Kids adults really enjoy access something like For since I moved leave friends behind computers saved relationships I thought I would lose nt want I email friends even see look like much changed Computers helpful piece technology helped many people keep touch Another important reason computers wonderful technology item make easy find needed information From word means directions get computer help I talked mom said Computers make information I need knew brother s diabetes easy information books take long You go library bookstore find book need correct information read whole book find information needed On computer google need find read article map etc Computers made information breeze everyone loves simple The last reason supports opinion computers make school lives faster much simpler deal In school times need write lengthy composition take forever write With computer typing composition would probably take around half time writing composition I took survey three kids typed composition three kids wrote I asked kids long took The kids wrote paper said took around two hours The kids typed composition said took around hour Also things typed usually easier read makes easier teachers grade wo nt take long Computers make school easier students teachers The opinion computers benefit society nt make sense Yes I know disadvantages But think advantages compared disadvantages There lot good bad things Without computers people would incredibly stressed hard time making life easier Computers amazing benefit society Everyone agree people stayin touch computers computers make easy find information needed make school lives aint easier faster students teachers Computers made extremely large impact changed ways life better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever through of somethig simple in life like studying venus. \" The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because they are so many risks. Venus still has some features than the other planet on the earth and because most of people called it \"Evening star.\"\n\n\" The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" because they are worthy pursuit some condition. They are price etc. we need to buy gas,sample of rock. The scientists seeking conduct a through mission to Venus would need personal despite to risks himself it is a danger place. They are such conditions are far more extreme than anything humans on the Earth. As we know that Venus has teh hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closet to our sun.\n\nWhen we talk about planet it is about Education. An environment or our surrounding would crush even submarine accustomed to diving because some of them they are so deepest parts o the Ocean and it would be quality of life. Education it based on everything we study like etc. Earthquakes,Volcanoes ,Venus, Mars,. Numerours factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study , despite its proximity. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nIndeed the article has something which is really important. I agree with the article but they are other thing he did say about planet. As we know they are geology and weather present and additional. They frequent lighting strikes happen when it is dangers to go anywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses paragraph brings back memories Saeng put soil winter hibiscus flock Canada geese flew When Saeng failed test first time dare look mother She depended hibiscus helped want retake test rebud", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that doesnt need a driver? For many years I thought I would just read about it or see it on tv, but now they actually built a car that can drive it self. I believe this would be one of the best inventions on earth. I support this project because its highly possible but as long as it has the saftey and laws i believe it will be a suscessful invention.\n\nA driverless car can be highly helpfull an extremly useful to every one.I believe it would lower the number of accedents and deaths due to cars all over the world. We wouldn't have to worrie about our teenagers going out and getting into an accedent because they were texting or calling someone while they were driving.We wouldn't have to worrie about drunk drivers as much iether because the driverless car.There are alot of people dieing from texting,calling,and even drinking and driving and even if the driverless car lowers the death or accedent ratio number then i think its worth having.\n\nAs we know it takes alot to make a driverless car.Google co-founder Sergey Brin has been doing alot of reaserch such as in 1950's General Motors created a car built a car that could run on a special track with out a person but the road had a cable\n\nconnected to the car that sent radio signals to the car,Engineers at Berkeley\n\ntried something similar,but they used magnets with alternating polarity.The car read\n\nthe positivee and negative polarity as messages in binary codes.They worked well considering there time and they required massive upgrades to exsist in regular roads with traffic and people all around.\n\nWith this people might say what if theres some problems or even some mis-signals with the driverless cars and thats highly possible and it could be big problems as such as law suits or accidents or even death.Rest assure the law isn't going to let this car on the road if there not completly sure its safe for everyone that uses it.But people could also abuse the power of the driverless car and be absolutly careless of the car and just not pay anyattention to the road or the things in its surroundings.But really that already happens with regular cars but the driverless car the like a better line of defens.\n\nOver all the driverless car will be a great help to the people all over the world and will help stop the accedents and deaths from happing all over the world.We should all come to gether and embrace this idea.Its a step up in history and it could save the next persons life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In selectian family defined Narciso Rodriguez gives whole new definition Narciso Rodriguez recognized clothing designer child also great life ful laughter love She grew two family home within Newark New Jersey I smell hear picture inside Narciso grew My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally gratefull This sentence gives image happy family puts good mood While reminds family memories share among kitchen Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen This sentence puts really excited mood reminds house filled loud music summertime Narciso Rodriguez definitily created mood selection good one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When the first photo of the face on Mars was released, many people were intrigued, and they all had different opinions. The most common opinion was that the rock formation was created by aliens and there is human life on Mars. As a scientist at NASA, I can clearly state why this mysterious rock formation was not created by aliens.\n\nFrom far away, the rock formation does appear to resemble a human face. To further examine, on April 5, 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cyondia, the area where the rock formation is found, and Michael Malin took a picture that was ten times sharper than before. The image was released and revealed to be a natural landform. However, on that day the camera had to look through thin clouds to capture the picture, so come skeptics were content with the theory that some of the alien markings could of been hidden. A cloudless day came on April 8, 2001, so the Mars Global Surveyor took the chance to get another look. The camera's maximum resolution was used to capture the photo. Since the photo was closely zoomed in, it would of been possible to see what was on the ground near by. Since nothing was found on the ground nearby, it doesn't support the conspiracy theorists who claimed that NASA was trying to hide alien life. The picture shows that it is like a mesa or butte, a landform that can be commonly found in West America. To further help people understand, Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mar's Exploration Program, describes the land form as \"It reminds me of most Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain Idaho.That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" There very well could still be life on Mars, but unfortunately it has not been found with this information.\n\nAll in all, the face on Mars is simply just a landform that is similar to some landform's on Earth. It is understandable how people could think it is an Egyptian Paraoh because of the unusual shadows;however, closer up images reveal a mesa. Although many people are disappointed with this conclusion, this information can lead NASA to more discoveries in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate concern has been major concern all over the world. People come to opinion that they need to live along the climate change instead of taking preventive steps.\n\nI totally disagree with this. This essay will look into details\nMajor factor for climate change is global warming . Emission of many harmful gases into air can cause increase increase in the levels of co which is really harmful for human environment.\n\nWhich causes depletion of ozone layer . ozone layer protects earth from Uv Rays, hence in its absence sun rays directly reach skin causing many skin problems.\n\nAnother major issue would be melting of glaceirs causing increase of sea level . And in next years many coastal regions may submerge .\n\nFor example mount everst had reported many melting.\n\nOn other hand, Uneven rainfall can destroy many crops along with no rainfall lead to drought. Harmful waste released to river can evaporate and cause acid rains causing damage to\n\nboth mankind and animals. There is also change in season pattern like we are not intendedseasons. Excessive floods can cause soil erosin taking away all fertile soilFor example hailstroms in winter can effect \n\ncrops and cause loss.\n\nIn conclusion, I would say there needs to prventive measures along with getting used to living like that", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story paragraph things isnt going give onShe trying say everything believes successed thats going take driving testHer mother says flower never going ti give its strong enough live winterThe geese going always come backThat exactly going testShe going give test going keep trying untill passes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a teacher that always helps you because they know how you feel about the class. Well this dream might not be too far away because prefessor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, and his colleagues have made software that can precisely calculate human emotions. This technology can be especially beneficial to us students because it conveys our exact feelings and emotions to our teachers who can then help us and give us feedback on the material. This new breakthrough in technology could mean massive changes in modern education.\n\nAs Dr. Huang coherantly demonstrates, there is no reason to doubt that computers can accurately read your emotions. People say things like \"Computers will never know feeling\" or \"Emotions aren't just ones and zeros\" but the facts hold true, this new mathmatically based software is both trustworthy and accurate. This new technology is a game changer because as Dr. Huang says,\n\n\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (Huang) and to students that might be shy or not clear when they talk, this means that they will be heard. This means that nobody is left to figure it out on their own.\n\nAs we all know, there are some teachers that are not the best. But with Dr. Huang's new software, every classroom could be at maximum efficiency. Dr. Huang ensures us that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" and that this would cause immediate action because it would then \"Modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (Huang). The time of students suffering through class is over, personalized lesson planning is in.\n\nAs you reflect on this article, try to imagine how easy it would be to communicate with your teachers if they could read your emotions. New technology is the future of the classroom and as shown, it can be more than beneficial to both teachers and students when it comes to conveying emotions. Nobody should have to make a big effort to tell someone how they feel, and nobody should be left behind because their teacher can't understand what they are trying to tell them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many studies have revealed that most of the offenders are not educated. Therefore, a few individuals think that educating accused, behind the bars, is a great way to lower the crime rate. Because, when they finish their tenure in jail, they will be a better person having enough education that they can get a job right after their capture time. I fully concur with the idea of providing education to the convicts.\n\nIt has been seen that crime rates in countries, having lower literacy, is comparatively higher than literate countries. The most significant factor behind this is, uneducated people do not have any employment, and they follow the path of wrongdoings to earn their bread and butter. In addition to this, children of economically weaker sections are mostly deprived of education due to financial problems and they cannot fulfil their dreams. Which leads them to adopt an illegal path to satisfy their needs and visualize their desires.\n\nRehabilitation of the prisoners is a decent solution to avoid recurring crime. Mostly after completing the one sentence, same accused is caught red-handed committing exactly the same kind of offence. The reason behind this is they are oblivious to other methods of earning, which they can learn only if they are groomed during their jail time. For example, during a test rehabilitation derive it has been found that criminals accept that they want to live a better life now.\n\nTo summarize, certainly, education makes everyone independent and opens the doors of opportunities to earn well. Which results in lowering crime rates as people will not follow the evil path to feed themselves and dependents. However, Even if this happens then situation can always be improved by providing adequate resources to prisoners during their confinement time and enable them to earn a decent salary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The proponents of the view that climate change could be harmful to business may believe that the increasing frequency of extreme weather events occurring as a result of climate change, such as drought, flood, earthquake, and typhoon, would disturb regular production and consumption in the market, thus destabilizing the economy. When disasters occur recurrently, people could hardly engage in commercial activities, but to struggle for survival. Besides, the financial loss caused by these disasters, usually on a large scale, would reduce business viability. For example, expensive facilities and equipment in companies and factories would be destroyed by flood or earthquake, and thus more money has to be spent on repair or purchase of new replacements. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary, other people believe climate change would bring more opportunities to business. This is so probably because governments always seek partnership with the private sector to develop novel technology and new means to combat challenges like climate change, and this will grant companies sharing the same goal more resources and support. For example, governments may make substantial investments in the green industry and thus sponsor firms aiming to research and produce eco-friendly products. In addition, as people have to change their lifestyles either to adapt to the new weather or to attempt to mitigate climate change, new demands will be created, which could be opportunities for business to develop new products and services accordingly.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, disasters brought about by climate change would not be a big deal in the future, because human beings are smart and hardworking enough to cope with all sorts of challenges brought about by climate change. And this has been sufficiently proved by the human history during which people were recurrently confronted with challenges and continuously overcome them. The commercial sector could contribute to the discovery of innovative solutions to problems facing human beings, and, in return, gain more chance to make profits. Therefore, I tend to believe that business would obtain more opportunities created by climate change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are a rising project that may actually be revolutionary. To begin, driverless cars that are just in beta now, are not totally driverless, but are specifically independent and keep the driver alert. The idea is that driverless cars will improve the safety of the driver than the regular self-driving cars can. With the more so manual cars, the driver has only themselves and maybe anyone in the vehicle with them to be sure to keep a look out and be as safe as possible. With the driverless car, the car is manufactured to sense any dangers and alert the driver to be prepared when should need to.\n\nI believe that driverless cars can be a helping technology for the world. A large fraction of the worlds death come from car accidents. If this project will help reduce that fraction then yes, I am all for the car. Humans can be easily distracted from simple actions like, turning on music, checking their phones, grabbing something from the back or rear seat, or just checking their mirrors. These driverless cars will help sense danger and alert the driver to be prepared for anything that may be coming. Safety is actually a big concern when driving, and I believe that this project may help all drivers come back home in healthy shape.\n\nAs a driver myself, driving while being alert and trying not to be distracted can be a huge problem. With the driverless car taking over in small situations like driving in traffic, I can take a break and practice being able to remain aware or prepared to take control for anything only a human can control. The vibrate function could easily be a simple solution from getting in a small accident when back ending a car. If a driver can be easily distracted from simple things, than the alerts on the driverless car can be easily seen by the driver themselves. Especially with drivers that can be distracted on the phone, the in-system safety feature will be a great touch for people who need a heads up when coming into any dangers.\n\nActually, this type of car would be perfect for the more elderly, who from age, are sure to decrease in hearing, seeing, etc.. With the driverless car, it will be a much safer place for elderly, and those driving along side or coming into these drivers. Human driving cars, can really stop the eldery from being fully aware of the conditions around them, and make everyone vulnerable to such driving. With the driverless car, it would be much easier for the elderly to take control of what they need to, which will benefit everyone on the road.\n\nYes, I agree that driverless cars should be a high-rising hope to the future of driving. If everyone is driving a driverless car than it'll be much safer, with less deaths a year. I mean for now, human drivers are the safest things being there isn't any advanced technology on the roads, signs, lights, etc, that a driverless car cannot sense. Only the human can work out the words on signs and color of the lights, until everything is upgraded so its compatible with the sensory car, its not the best, or safest. In the near future, I am on the side of driverless cars and hope that everyone agress when presented with the fact that this may be the safest possible idea for man.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State building faced many obstacles allowing dirigibles dock Some obstacles included fact law airships flying low urban areas This made impossible ship tied building would illegal Also line three paragraph thirteen stated would unsafe many dirigibles countries used hydrogen instead helium hydrogen flammable would put people inside dirigibles everyone near around great danger Another obstacle mentioned excerpt perhaps largest one violent air currents causing wind top building always shifting making nearly impossible unsafe land Overall excerpt made clear sensible way dirigibles land would open field", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World War II was a very difficult time in the world.\n\nMany contries were destroyed and grew weak. Europe was effected by it the most.\n\nContries such as Germany, France and Poland were devestated by the effects.\n\nThe seagoing cowboys helped many of these contries rebuild there animal, economy, and farms.\n\nWorld War II destroyed 15 diffrent contries.\n\nMany of the contries lost lots of thier crops and farms. Without thier farms they can't get food or vegitables.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys bring Horses and cows and other live staocks to these contries.\n\nThey give theses cntries an extra boost in growing back there farms.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program takes ordinary ranchers and bring them and horse cows and other livestock and bring them to other contries.\n\nThey also bring hay and feed so they can feed them while they are on the boat.\n\nWhile you are at the contries you are allowed to visit some sites on you free time.\n\nSo while you work you can alway plan your next trip. Stated in paragraph 5 it talks about the benifets of traveling to all these diffrent places.\n\nHave you every been in need of help and you had that lonly feeling.\n\nThat is the same feeling that these people have.\n\nThey feel lonely and abandoned. The Seagoing Cowboys take away that feeling and relace it with joy. They make foriegn farmers happy that they can finally farm and take care of their animals.\n\nThe program helps so many people in so many ways.\n\nYes, it might be hard to leave home, and go to another country, and work. The feeling of helping people fills that heart with a much better and richer feeling-the feeling of love.\n\nIn the end all your hard work will pay off and you can sit don knowing you did a good thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is am opinion that celebrities are known as for glamour and wealth are famous than achieve.While a reckon that this is a bad example for youngs,I believe that the others can occupy cool role models\n\n On the first hand, crucial meaning that many people do achieve without really hard working for it.Lots people ,who do not do correct hard-working,can take significant achieve by their opportunity.They may be inherited by money from parents,married to eminent partner,or they may be on gossip journals on a really TV projects.For example,Antonela Roccuzzo who is a wife of legendary football player Lionel Messi.She is rich and wife of the most famous player in the world.Antonelo goes to Messi's matches and morally support him.They have being married since 2017.The wife of football player became famous by her husband,but she did not exertion be herself.The allusion for young people is that success can be achieved easily,and their projects and school works are not necessary for it\n\nOn the other hand,there are as least as many examples to role models by hard working,whose accomplishments can be glorious example for young people.Musician,athletes,actors and social media stars make considerable achieve only by their really diligence.They work for more than 5-6 hours per day for their target and in the future they will get resultat of these endeavor.For example,Will Smith.He is one of the most famous people in the world.He tried to be on main roles and worked for result in the future.Nowadays,I believe that he earns millions of dollars lying at home being a celebrated and achieved actor.If the youth watch connection between trying and success,they will want to start their programmes and projects for their goal.Because,in my opinion that this type of celebrated talents can pull youth to the good side\n\nIn conclusion I recommend everybody to try to do for achieve ,who knows, maybe you can too?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I elevator tapping foot smooth jazz music humms speakers Eventually familiar click head smooth metal doors slid open reveal well furnished hallway many people waiting turn departure I slipped trying become trampled massive crowd silence My footsteps echoed I searched room Finnaly finding destination I open door step inside many squirring children waiting I remove coat hang nearby hook trying draw much attention I continue searching magazine section torn magazines delicately handled sports illustrated flipped I find interesting looking article swimming Magazines arm I choose seat far corner wait Minutes pass I tell child next becoming impatient fast taps mothers jacket repeatedly asks thing minutes ago much longer The mother checks watch closely annoyed tone replies not much longer dear little boy slumps back seat jams thumb mouth keep occupied I roll eyes cant help crack smile actions Somewhere across room girl age frowns texts cellphone quick glance clock scowls continues Just glass door slides open woman homemade perm tired eyes steps Across waiting room patients look eyes full anticipation hope doctor ready see now I avoid angry glares patients follow door You know its funny says well snapping gum CAPS someone So young patient person I merely nod head grin I understand patient people experience difficulties without complaining I grateful Im patient person stand", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Health issues have recently become a major problem for our society and our top concern, and the government health sector needs to act to address this. Some people, however, disagree with this approach since they believe that it is their option as to what kind of food they will consume. Due to the fact that many people today suffer from diabetes or other illnesses, I do not agree with this statement. In this essay, I'll talk about both of my opinions.\r\n\r\nFirst off, people have the freedom to consume whatever they choose. What they will want to eat is a matter of personal preference. Some individuals consume virtually exclusively meat because the like eat, some people also, only eat vegetables Nonetheless, due to the fact that more individuals in some nations are dying relatively young from health difficulties and eating unhealthily, health issues are currently our society's top worry. For instance, due to excessive consumption of unhealthy foods, about ten percent of the population in my home country suffers from high blood pressure and heart attacks. Government should step in to address these challenges, creating programmes to promote the consumption of healthy foods as well as legislation to restrict the availability of harmful foods.\r\n\r\nIn my conclusion, the government should intervene to prohibit harmful foods and create initiatives to urge people not to consume them, even though some individuals think that consuming certain meals is a matter of personal choice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Study of Venus a worthy pursuit or a dangerous one?.In The Article \"In The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author constrats that the study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.In This Essay examples will be given\n\nof how the author claims that the studies of venus is a worthy pursuit,and how it's also a dangerous pursuit .\n\nIn the Article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author talks about the dangers of studying Venus Because no matter how great the discover will be we humans can last minutes on venus even tho it is our sister planet.In the article the authors gives us examples of how\n\nVenus(Sister Planet) is so Dangerous\"On the planet's surface,temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Another example of how venus is a dangerous idea to pursuit is that \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy metal parts.\" These quote explains how dangerous this experiment would be if human went up to venus.\n\nIn The Article \"The Challenge of Exploring venus\"The Author talks about how Venus is a worthy pursuit. The author talks about why we need study Venus and explains why scientists are so intrested in venus and also gives us the readers plenty of examples.The author says \"Because it may well once have\n\nbeen the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.Long ago, venus was problay covered largely with oceans\n\nand could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" Another example of how The Exploration of venus might be a worthy pursuit \"The planet has a surface rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Those example support why we need to study Venus.Because if it was just like Earth why does it look like that and could that happen to earth.\n\nIn conclusion of the \" Challenge of Exploring venus\" It is very dangerous to Explore Venus.because no matter what we do can cant change the atmosphere of a different planet. But Scientists may find a way that we can survive it's atmosphere and maybe we couls live there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a world where we didn't have to drive ourselves anywhere. All we had to do is tell the car where to go and it would take us there with little or no worries. Would that be a world you would like to live in?\n\nThe idea of the so called \"driverless car\" would not be the greatest thing in the world because even though people have tested it and still are testing it and saying there would be little or no accidents is still a risk to take. Even so the car are not completely driverless you still have to have hands on the wheel and be ready to take over if there was to be some sort of accident or back up.\n\nEven if the driverless car were to come to the world there would have to be a whole set of new problems, laws and safety needs to bring our way. It is said that \"the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\". So to have a computer driving you somewhere would increase the chance of being at risk of an accident.\n\nSo the idea of the \"driverless car\" wouldn't be the best thing for the world because it would be too much of a risk, they still have many flaws that people have to mess with and simply the peson in the driver's seat is the best man for the job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the concept of the phenomenon has become widespread, referring to people who have become famous for their lifestyle. Sometimes the youth try to pretend to be like them. To my mind, it may have several negative consequences.\n\nIt is a simple supply-demand pattern, in which they try to provide the audience with something more required. Unfortunately, youngsters prefer glamorous celebrities instead of talented ones. Those who come to the agenda with their scandalous and rich lives are in the spotlight. For example, the Kardashian family has not any specific achievements; however, for a showy lifestyle, they have a huge following. They make unnecessary expenses and take part in meaningless events. This could be a bad example for teenagers who take them as role models. When the life they want is not offered, they can become depressed and, worse, rebel against their families or can behave inappropriately. \n\nIn fact, some celebrities are often found in smoking advertisements, charged with drugs and other criminal activities. A young person who chooses this kind of famous person as an idol will be able to damage their health. Another example can be the impact of a particular celebrity's bad roles in films or series. For instance, Sanjay Dutt, Bollywood Actor is well known for his money and roles as a villain, his terrorist acts in different movies have given rise to violence and crime in the streets of Mumbai, all these were committed by adolescents for thrill and adventure.\n\nIn brief, because of the information age, children and adolescents are informed by watching TV, using social networks, and can follow celebrities on these platforms as their role models. If the younger generation is not properly guided, such things can have bad effects on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertisements have now played an essential role in everyday life that they can be seen anywhere, on streets or in the media.. In my opinion, the advertisements bring both pros and cons for the improvement of the modern society.\r\nOn one hand, advertising has brought a number of benefits for not only consumers but also businesses. First, it appeared to enhance job opportunities. In fact, many companies and business have created their own advertisements to introduce the latest products and popularize them to their customers. Thus, they need to employ a team that has professional qualifications to do jobs such as designing a logo, writing content to attract the attention of their customers. Not forget to mention that they are likely to hire a famous celebrity in order to show the best image of the products. Consequently, these businesses partly help to solve several problems of unemployment or in other words, one advertisement can not only create a job but also many chances for society. Second, it is undeniable that people enjoy seeing advertisements since they could entertain them and lecture them lessons about life by building meaningful stories while advertising. Even coffee advertisements can be an excellent source of advices for the officers to have a better environment in their workplace, for example.\r\nOn the other hand, there are certain disadvantages viewers need to consider. Most of the advertisements aim to persuade people that buying a product will make them happier. A successful advertisement means to stimulate people to purchase products that are being advertised, although those products might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy and in reality are of little use to buyers. Besides, advertisers often aim their marketing at children. When they can easily be influenced by beautiful and attractive toy or food advertisements, they put pressure on parents to buy them the items to keep up with their friends. As a result, advertisement could affect children’s behaviour negatively.\r\nIn conclusion, individuals may gain both benefits and drawbacks through the growing prevalence of advertisements. I believe that governments and business should take measures to minimize the negative impacts of the advertisements on society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is not created by aliens and here are a few reasons why. It was a mesa, or maybe even a shadow. but aliens is not a logical reason for this face to exisist on mars.\n\nFirst, A mesa, a mesa is a very common landform found around the American West. Even so there is one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, USA. Which is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on mars. If something on the earth can have a mesa about or the same height had the face on mars it is very likely that it was a mesa.\n\nSecondly, shadows We all knows that shadows can be very deceiving just like in this instance. A shadow could have been reflecting off the viking 1 while it was taking this photo of the \"Face\", or maybe the shadows were from a bigger land form. that was infront, behind, or on the sides casting a shadow onto this mesa.\n\nAll in all, From these facts you can conclude that this was a natural landform and not some type of alien thing. If you still do not believe that it was natural. Another spaceship went into space and found the \"Face\" and took a very detailed picture and there were no markings or signs of aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming more popular in today's society. Driverless cars can be very useful to people today. They can help prevent many accidents on the roads today. They can be used by someone from every age group that is able to drive. Young adults, middle aged people, and the elderly can all use the driverless car to help improve the roads in today's society.\n\nFor example, many parents might feel better knowing that their child is on the roads using a driverless car that is less likely to cause an accident. Teen drivers today are distracted when they first begin to drive. With a driverless car, however, teens could possibly get distracted but would not cause an accident. The car could continue driving for them. If the cars could accelerate for the driver, they could also prevent the driver from speeding. This would prevent many young adults who are less experienced on the roads from being pulled over by a police officer and given a ticket. Many parents may also become distracted while driving with young children. Young children need attention from their parents, and while in a car children tend to distract their parents more often usual. When a parent looks away from the road and to the backseat where their child is sitting, even if they are only looking away for a few seconds, they could run into the oncoming lane of traffic or possibly a ditch. With driverless cars, these accidents could be prevented. As long as the parent or teenager has his or her hands on the steering wheel, the car will drive itself. With BMW's \"Traffic Jam Assistant\", the driver would be able to look away from the road and the car would still be able to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Incase of a work zone or accident, the driver would be notified and they would assert their attention back to the road. This \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" would be useful while a mother needed to tend to her child in the back seat or while a teenager talked on the phone to their friend. The driverless cars would not be justt for teenagers and middle aged people, they could be used by elders as well. Often you will hear on the news or radio about how an elderly person fell asleep at the wheel and rear-ended the car in front of them, sometimes causing a bad accident. With the driverless cars, elders could possibly fall asleep, or they could be just as distracted as a young adult on the road, and still not cause an accident. As you age, your senses start to dull and that impares your driving. This could possibly cause an accident. With the driverless car, elders can still drive and not have their dulled senses impare their driving. Driverless cars could save many lives each year and prevent numerous accidents.\n\nDriverless cars could be a huge advance in today's society. Driverless cars are safer than a car driven by a person. They could possibly prevent accidents and many deaths each year. By using a car that could drive itself, you could make today's roads safer and easier to navigate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what transportation would be like in the future? In the article \"Driverless cars are coming\", it explains that transportation may be coming sooner than you think. A lot of people today are either with or against the new \"driverless cars\", but as for me i'm glad were gaining the technology to make driverless cars.\n\nFirst, the article explains all the pros of driverless cars. One of them is that they can be more money friendly. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, envisions a future where these smart cars are more fuel efficent and money saving. Sergey believes they could come up with a new taxi transportation system. This taxi transportation system uses less fuel and is more flexible. This means more money is conserven when refueling and/or reduce less accidents.\n\nNext, I believe that driverless cars are will be more safe than the cars we have today. These new smart cars can drive up to half a million miles by themselves, but human drivers are also occasionally. Although these cars can drive themselvs, human drivers are also needed in case there are any construction ahead. Also, the driverless cars alerts the driver in case if the he or she is needed. These cars have multiple alert systems such as lights on the window, vibrating seats, or the car could talk to you to alert the driver in case they are needed.\n\nAlso, these cars are more \"people friendly\" or \"passenger friendly\" you could say. Although the driver still needs to be in the car while it is driving itself, he or she can still do basically whatever they want as long as they're paying attention to the alerts as well as the road. Many people today in today's cars are risking other peoples lives by texting and driving. These new smart cars can allow the person to do that as long as they are not needed by their car.\n\nMany people have reason to believe that this new technology is unsafe. Many people also believe that this idea should be trashed and forgoten about. They believe this because they believe this could be a major accident risk. Also, they are conserned as to who to blame if the car was to get into an accident. Although this is a major concern, I believe that we can get past these concerns. I believe we need these cars because to me it makes a much safer place. Many people are not as educated as others on these new smart cars, but they might change their mind if the were. Many people don't know that there are alert systems and sensors that sense every little detail in the environment. These facts are just another way of saying that these new cars are people friendly.\n\nSo, these new smart cars, in my opinion, are pretty safe for the new world. They save time, money, fuel, and even lives. I believe these new cars can make a great and better transportation system. These cars are safer and can only become better as we start to use these cars and learn about the mistakes and how we can fix them. We will never know if these new cars are truly safe enough to drive until we actually drive them for ourselvs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though, driverless cars seem to be easier and better than a self driving car, they have possible negative outcomes. Some people would get a driverless car because of lazyness or not wanting to driving. A driverless car could have good and bad outcomes. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driverways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" Whether the driver wants to drive or not they still would have to stay aware and watch the road at all times.\n\nThere are many reasons some people wouldn't get a driverless car.Driverless cars are created to further lazyness. People would start texting and being on the phone as the driverless car drive. That can still cause an accident, technology have issues and powerdowns often. You can't depend on technology for everything. The main reason some wouldn't buy the driverless car is because of safety reasons. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" People feel as if anything can happen and go wrong dealing with a driverless car. It's as if you are risking your life for a free ride with no safety guarantees. Another reason some may turn down a driverless car is because they are expensive. \"The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary codes. These smart road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Theseare just the main issues dealing with an driverless car.\n\nOn the otherhand, some may think a driverless car is way better than a regular car. Only because they don't really have to do anything. They can relax in the driver seat and cruise around. It's nothing wrong with having relax time while your car drive you itself. They are still developing new safety ideas for the driverless car. \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the roas, the car watches the driver.\" These ideas will insure safety to the people. Aslong, as the driver stay alert while the driverless car is driving everything should go well. People have their different reasons on why they should and shouldn't buy a driverless car, but even with a regular car you can still have accidents. To be on the safe side, always pay attention to the road for your own safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay I will either be arguing whether the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable or if its not valuable. I personally think that the \"Facial Action Coding System\"\n\nwould be benifical for the teachers and other students in the room.\n\nIn paragraph one it states that \"Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" the Facial Action Coding System figured out these percentages from the Mona Lisa painting. Computers do know your emotions while looking at ads just like it says in paragraph 6, \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar d might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" I think that if a computer can detect what your emotions are that it could possibly be doing bigger things. If you know what your students emotions were you could either change what you are teaching to make it better, or to keep doing what you are doing if their emotion is mostly happy.\n\nThis is my essay on if the use of using the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in a classrom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about going places? If you have you should paritcipate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will feel the same exciment that Luke did. You will not regret it. You will be on a ture of awesomeness. Insted of just sitting down on the couch at home.\n\nIn the story Luke goes place's with his friend. When his friend asked him he says \"it was an opprotunity of a life time\" that is you are you going to be saying when you are done. It will be fun you can bring some one to just like Luke friend did. It would be nice you and your friend out going places.\n\nIn the story Luke goes to a lot of places like China,Europe,New Orleans,etc. Think of how you will feel going to all them places metting making new friends. it sounds like fun. Did you know people almost all over the world will meet you.\n\nYou might learn new stuff and you might get new stuff.\n\nSo you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will be able to do a lot of stuff just like Luke. How fun will it be just you and your friend going to diffrent places. So don't sit on the couch watching t. v. go to the Seagoing Cowboy program. You love it garunted just go and have the time of your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They want people to go study in Venus but it is a darngeous planet. is it even woth to risk their lives on this mission. But their i many sloution to that problem. Thesis :The problem studying a venus is the risk, dranger, tempeature but should not should not stop us.\n\nIn the Article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" reported Venus is dangerous becuase they sent a spacecarft to space. Not many people surivied\n\ndied in a few hour. In a lifetime no one has been able to land on life time. Venus it is a very hot planet include Powerful earthquakes and lighting that Strike to the land of Venus surface. There temperature is around 800 dergree that is 10x tempearutre what were use to earth. No wonder why Venus it is very darngeous not able many people could not survice.\n\nIn the Article\n\n\"The Challenge Exploring Venus\" reperoted\n\nVenus was not always a dangerous planet becuase long time it use to be earth life. Example the rocky surface some Feature are include what we have life on eath. Valley and Mountains it make scientists want to go back to study in venus. NASA are coming up with some ways Scientist can go study in Venus. Then we can know more about the planet. One day Venus might go back to earth life won't be as dangerous.\n\nIn the Article \"The Challenge Exploring Venus NASA\"reproted NASA is caming with intvend For Studying In Venus. One is Vechile above 30 mile above surface It would help by not staying on the groud because the bad effect it had. The temperature would be close to earth level won't be easy but human would be able to survice. But also ned to get close to the planet even know that risk their going to take. inculding their going to be a machine allow know about Venus. The machine were made in 1940 in world war 2 were very imprortant. By using the Machine the tin wold not be able to melt.\n\nConclusion: Even through Venus is very dareous planet to Study. Those people should just take the risk to Study at venus. NASA is coming up with many ways to keep the people safte. Maybe one day Venus can go back to earth lice", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Something big is beginning. Cars are starting to be a questionable need. Of course we need them in some situations. But the sales of cars are declining. People are becoming more united as one. The way it should be. If we worked together, we could accomplish many things. But besides that, cars give off emission that gets trapped in our atmosphere. We need to conserve the ozone layer. Without it, skin cancer is sure to hit hard with the UV rays beating down on us. I believe that cars are becoming outdated. We still need them, but do we really need so many? So many giving off harmful gases and destroying our home? The smog must be clouding our perception of things because we aren't thinking straight. We're destroying our planet because of money. I get off topic because the truth is here and this essay is a way to spread the truth. United as one. We can do anything. We're all equal. Nobody is better than anyone else. No country is better than any other. Anyone's beliefs do not overpower anyone else's. So yeah, cars aren't so bad, but they're not all that good either. We drive past others every day not wondering where they're going. Don't you want to know what you're doing? Yes. You! We're all the same person.\n\nGreat minds think alike huh? Well...shouldn't we address the real problem then? Money is a piece of paper. Material. Why do we need it. We PAY for food and water. The things we need to survive. I can understand why we do. But what if we worked manually for a good cause then got payed in food and supplies for that? It could work. We don't aknowledge eachother. It's like we're scared of eachother. I don't why. We're all animals trying to achieve happiness. We can do it. If people stop boxing in their beliefs and limit themselves. The mind once stretched to new ideas, will never return to its original dimensions. Expand your mind. I'm not saying do drugs. Just be more open-minded as we all go home at the end of the day and wonder what everybody else is doing. How do they live? The same as you. Our body is an extension to our soul and our mind is what puts energy out there. Imagine this, your mind is a garden. Your thoughts are seeds. Decide what you want to grow and let it be put out into the physical world.\n\nI don't care what I make on this writing test because, maybe, just maybe my thoughts will be heard by someone who thinks the same. Studies show, there is an increasing talk about something you'd hear in a prophecy type of movie. Indigo children are being born every day into this life the government has set up for us. These children have a keen learning ability and natural IQ of 140. They won't like this new world we are forced to abide by. I, an indigo child, awoken by my own thoughts and the ignorance of this world, must say that through all the things going on out there. There is a change coming to balance out the world again. I'm about done with this because my hand is starting to cramp up. But how can a 16 year old who grew up in Fort Walton Beach, FL, know all this? It's a big world out there and there's a lot to see and I don't plan on leading a government based life. I'm going to live my life the way I want. Money in my pocket or not. I advise you do the same, and find inner peace. Meditate and be spiritual. Not religion-wise. You don't have a soul. You are a soul. You have a body. Goodbye. And have a great day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The dream Empire State Building allow dirigibles dock On top It sounded like great idea builders faced many obstacles trying reach goal dock The first problem faced dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted buildings foundation would nt stress building s frame To sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made A glass chrome nickel steel tower made illuminated inside The building floors Even though hard work building never used docking purposes safety One safety obstacles dirigibles wer highly flamable one caught fire New Jersey owners Empire State building nt want happy highly populated New York City Also another big obstacle caused terrible winds Even though landing sight dirigible could never tied passengers could get Also law stated air craft s ca nt fly low urban areas Through money obstacles builders go make dream possible never achieved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "many people believe that our environment is nurtured by international cooperation,however,some people think that they show interest in world business. Here i will write about some facts which are related to both views. Firstly, the advantages of cooperative institutions are providing protection to the environment by giving advertisements related to pollution-free nature by producing and marketing vehicles and other products which are less pollution-free. For instance, some vehicles run by electricity and less air pollution are achieved. In addition , they initiated to sustain nature by preventing deforestation are considerably successful in later years. However, electric vehicles cannot be afforded by commoners mainly those who have whitecollar jobs. So, we may consider that these cooperative institutions are widely focusing on their business itself. for example, marketing and advertising a product cost much irrespective of its benefits. Furthermore, to maintain a business and for a further ,development they need to focus on income as well. In conclusion, all the cooperative world businesses are indeed focusing on environmental benefits ,hence, they need enough capital to sustain as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author was talking about how Venus is a planet that is so smailler to Earth the one we are living right now at this moment. But though out the article the author started to say that Venus is so smailler that who knows maybe sooner or later we could make Venus our new earth. But as he started to lay out some facts about Venus that \" atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dixide. More clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, planets surface temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure 90 times greater than our own planet.\"\n\nI feel and think that if we could send a RC robots car out in Venus then we could for sure make sure if Venus caould be a stable place to make it our new earth.\n\nSo if NASA has something up there sleves then we could all be looking at the new fatuer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I strongly believe that school should teach their students to manage their money as early as possible. There are two main reasons behind this and there are reasons and example to support it. These two areas are bad spending behavior and the future demand urgency.\nChildren are unable to manage their funds wisely without any guidance from their closest environment, school. Most children would probably spent their money based on what they want. Consequently, a child that have been given a pocket money for school may spend it all on junk food. As a results, it leads to bad eating habits, obesity or consumerism. Teachers could avoids these by only provide healthy food at school environment for example.\nOn the other hand, the challenge ahead for these children is more difficult than their older generations. The cost of education is increasing steeply from time to time. My university fees ten years ago for example is fifty percent cheaper than fees coming from the same university. Despite the parent’s financial support, children could only continue their education by scholarships or taking loans from the bank. \nTeaching them the value of money in school however may also give a bad influence to children. In spite of their success in managing their finance, they may never want to do or appreciate something if there is no money involved on it. This of course could be balance by teaching children other values in life more important than money.\nIn summary, the two main reasons on how the children spent their money and the urgency to prepare for future challenge have outweigh the bad influence the bad influence of teaching financial management in school. Therefore it is suggested to schools to keep an eye on these points for the goods of their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many ways patient like wating lunch line pat line leav room Heres time I patient It time trip go skating I talking I wanted go right away I say I knew I patient Then got I wanted get skate tell us rules I said nothing Then walked skate long line skates I push shoke way I waited patiently Then I skated ate left patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram shown gives a pictorial view of the process of electricity generation via solar panels for domestic use. The energy is transferred through 5 major points, as shown by the diagram.\nOverall, the process starts with energy absorption from the sun. The subsequent stages are followed to generate and distribute electricity in the household, with the last stage being the storage and reuse of stored electricity by the utility grid.\nFirstly, the solar panels which have been placed at appropriate locations for receiving sunlight absorb the sun's energy. This energy is converted to DC current, which is in turn converted to AC current by the inverter. This inverter is responsible for production and electricity control.\nAfterwards the electricity is transferred to the electrical panel which distributes the acquired electricity throughout the home for use. Not all of the electricity is put into use and this excess is sent through the utility meter to the utility grid for storage. In the event that the household consumption exceeds the amount produced by the solar panel, the utility grid provides electricity through the utility meter to meet the deficit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did not support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. I think this for multiple reasons. Yes NASA may have a possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus which could allow scientists to float above the fray, but you don't know for sure if it would work or if you would make it back alive. Why take the chance? I know I wouldn't.\n\nIn the atricle the author states \"Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" This would mean that you couldn't really experiment anything you find there and it would be pointless to even go to Venus. To be able to study Venus like they want they would need evidence and samples of different objects from there. The article also states \"Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becuase most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standards forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" This would mean that you would need to stay so far away and even when being that far the pictures or videos you would want to take could not be done. Also with additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface makes the chances more slim to surving on Venus for even a few short hours.\n\nIn conclusion, I would not say studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Venus is the second planet from our sun which is why it's proved to be a very challenging place to examine more closely. Especially since no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours. Trying to go to Venus would be pointless and not worth it. Not only are clouds in Venus challenging which are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere, but a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. It would be way too dangerous to go there. Even despite the dangers you don't know if the bimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape is even reliable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argument against driverless cars, would be that first of all it would be really dangerous, many kids play outside how are the driverless cars going to see a young kid run across the street? Next is that yeah it might be gas saving but think about how much gas is already waisted in our world? lots plus, he saids in his artical \" fundamentally change the world \" or are these driverless robotic automoibles going to change the way people live today? think of themselfs not to good enough becusae you might not be able to afford these 'cars' or for the wealthy who knows he can buy tons of them feel way to good of themselfs? other words better than others in there point of view. plus many people bought many cars. WHAT are they going to do throw them away not many people going to automaticaly leave all these cars and right away move on to these driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Havening little bit patience Do patience know one does well thats exacually I going talking way Once little girl spoiled wanted wanted There something nobody knew She patience Everybody always woundered something special One day family going couldnt wait know patience Also wanted go get something store She wasnt like children couldnt wait always bother parents sat patiently When left went rich went She couldnt wait leave know got patience store get pacific thing wanted When got store finally got wanted lips glass five pairs jeans shirts go She nearly go mom dad started looking around patience got home tired went room went sleep And lived patiently ever I made story say patient wait thats accedents problems happen little girl got every thing wanted one thing patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast By Marcia Amidon Lsted builders empire state building faced several obstacles attempt allow dirigibles dock One obstacles faced fact lack suitable landing area The dirigibles thought able anchor mooring mast refueling service however another obstacle way nature That greatest obstacle The wind top building always shifting violent air currents The builders afraid back ship would swivel around around mooring mast With said came conclusion would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe In order safe came another obstacle The entire building would modified strengthened dollars worth investment Lastly already stood law airships flying low urban areas With obstacles faced never opened public", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars in my opinion should be made. In the article they ask a question \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" Many people should be glad if Driverless Cars come about, because that just saves he or she thousands and thousands of dollars.\n\nIf someone were to have a Driverless Car then they could just sit back and get comfortable. In the article it states that people have to stay alert , so that they can be ready to take over incase needes. In reality Driverless Cars could actually be safer than a regular car. With all the sensors and stuff there are more \"eyes\" to see whats going on. So maybe if the car behind you is going to fast and is going to ram into the back of you , the car could maybe move itself quick enough so you don't get hurt. Coming up with something such as the \"Driverless Car\" the world could be a more acident free world and everyone including yourself could be more safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles The Empire State building faced law That airships flying low urban areas The problems Empire state building faced The US Navy driigble los Angeles approached The mooring mast could get close enough tie force ful winds The first obstacle faced attempting allow drigibles dock existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever fly building The second Reason builder faced ob stacles attempting allow dirigible dock US Navy drigible Los Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie forceful winds They wind would blow dirigible sharp spires These obstacles Empire State building faced allow dockin", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, parents are very unyielding about the necessity of the subjects their children are learning. Some believe that it is an essential course for their child to learn at school, while some are strong in their belief that, the subject is a waste of time. I personally would have a say for both views, respectively. This essay will discuss both the arguments in detail and provide evidence as to why, people debate over the needs of art.\nFirstly, a factor that makes an individual assume that the topic is not necessary, is because of the future careers of the children. For instance, if I were to be a future pilot, my parents definitely would not think of the course as a requirement. There is a plethora of people who opine this way. Therefore, it is completely understandable for the area of people that think it is unnecessary.\nOn the other hand, there are folks who think that art should be a large part of everyone's life. For example, I have a friend of mine, whose parents always encourage her to take artistry seriously, despite her career as a physician. They very much enjoy it when their children make progress in artistic also other creative activities. These people view it as a pathway to tackling every other problem in life with creativity and passion.\nTo conclude, it is logical to accept the argument of both sides, as they all have crucial opinions. Regarding the problem, whether art is an essential subject or not, I personally think that, despite the debate, having the subject included in one's curriculum could do no harm but in fact, can possibly advance a child's imagination and artistic skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article \" unmasking the face on mars\" they are showing us a picture that was taken by a 1976 viking 1 photograph of the face on mars which is just a natural landform. In paragraph 2 scientists firgured it was just another martian mesa, which they state is common around cydonia. Another detail from paragraph 2 they state only because it had unusual shadows that made it look like an egyptian pharaoh.\n\nIn the Paragraph 3 it states \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.\" Which means that it's just a illusion it wasn't acutually seen or proven to be a human head.\n\nAnother fact which is from paragraph 7 it states Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and snapped about ten photos and it revealed a natural landform. In paragraph 9 garvin who is in the Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft he states \"It's not easy to targey cydonia.\" which means that they just can fly over cydonia and spot it right away.\n\nFinally in paragraph 12 garvin states what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. In this article \"Unmasking The Face On Mars\" it's just a unproven theory that its a face on mars, there is many details in this article that state that it's just a natural landforms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When want read one special book heard find considered offensive would The public libraries take offensive material shelves noone read Then one special book wanted read limits A book someone worked hard song movie stored away little contraversy Do find fair rights I find fact cencorship confusing topic public libraries If someone write publish book someone want read If find offensive one read fair people enjoy The way done dont like dont read dont take away would want read There material libraries think censored certain degree Such anything nudity adult content That dose mean though taken away The stuff content taken away seleted area adults view Many movie stores book stores idea dosent library adopt idea We right freely state opinions believe If someone wants write book think right allowed If censor something dont like say violation constitution You allowed express opinion taking away cause like wrong Do find fair people spend much money time writting book people find offensive noone view anymore I say someone spends time effort allowed enjoy Is really hard pick book find offensive Censorship good cases inforcing much someone calls offensive againts right freedom expression", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship Libraries I think censorship library fine people feel children nt need see certain things Which true lot things even adult nt even see If going bad things library owners might make section things People right able look anything want library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In lives narciso Rodriguez The mood calm I metiond Is To every one I like Back round story Like one story time line To happend That Is The mood CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are something that will very soon be a common part of our everyday furture lives. These cars have proven to be a time saving and fuel saving option. They also allow drivers to not have to be in full control as they would have had in normal cars today. Although these would be some very helpful things and would be more economically friendly, driverless cars prove to be very risking and there are just too many questions about ensuring safety for them to be allowed today.\n\nDriverless cars could possibly be dangerous to the driver, other drivers, or people walking around on the street. As of now no driverless cars have been developed that are completely driverless. At any point the car could run into a problem where it needs a person's assistence. This person may not always pay attention like they should and they may not be able to interfere with the problem quick enought to prevent harm.\n\nIn these cars the chances of something to go wrong is likely. An accident may occur and the person to blame would be a very good question. The accident may have occured because something went wrong technologically with the car. Another possible thing is the car did not give enough time for the driver to be able to quickly react to the situation. If this were to happen would the driver be at blame because he should have been able to react quicker or should have paid more attention? Or should the car be blamed because it should have sensed the problem?\n\nThe chance of something going wrong with the cars and the technology is something else to pay attention to. As of today we can see that there is nearly something that goes wrong with technology daily. The chances of something going wrong with them and causing an accident is very high. The cars review sensors may not detect a young kid laying on the ground trying to recieve his ball that just rolled under the car. This car would then sense there is nothing there and roll over the poor kid. These cars may also read the road wrong or navigate wrong. These errors could cause you to drive on the wrong side of the road or take you down a one way street the wrong way. When you are driving down the road and a situation were to occur that caused you to react quickly how will the car know what to do in the certain scenario?\n\nDriverless cars are definitely a good way in saving your time and energy, but they also can harm you. There are many questions about how safe these cars would be and who to blame if something were to go wrong. Driverless cars are another piece of technology and something could go wrong that could quite possibly endanger the lives of many people. At this time there are too many questions about the driverless cars that need to be answered. But once they are answered and proven to be safe, driverless cars could be the next way of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The culture of the car has been coming to an end. With many people now choosing to have other forms of transpertation. Now in Germany they are making cities where they help banned car usage. In the romantic city of Paris,France they are now starting to banned cars due to the overload of smog. The city of Bogota,Colobia is having a special day where they banned cars and see the effect of now having cars for a day. The car usage is now being observed to do damage around the world and due to that now cities all over the world is now banning the car usage. This will help to have a healthier earth and healthier people. The benefits of banning cars is going to help everyone and even our beloved earth.\n\nIn Germany the people have made a city where they have given up their cars. The city I believe has a better way to maintain a healty and cleanier enviroment than other cities in Germany. The banning of cars has been a great sucess with now people using bikes or walking as their means of transportation. Even though car ownership is permitted,the problem is that there are only two places to park which cost about 40,000 dollars along with your home. The result of that actions is that 70 percent of people do not own a car and 57 percent sold the car to live in the city. One person states \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" says Heidrun Walter. The citizens of this city have been feeling better about having no car you dont have the stress to have to drive you have the calm relaxing time by walking or biking. did you know that \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 perecent in car intensive areas in the United States.\"The greenhouse gas has been a problem ever since the development of motor power cars. Now that we are able to stop it lets take that chance to help stop the greenhouse gas and to make cleaner and healthier cities.\n\nThe romantic city of paris is having a bit of a problem its that its beautiful city is now being coveres in smog due to the overuse of cars. now that Paris has enforced a partial driving ban to help clear the air they can't help to notice that when there are fewer cars being operated the smog begins to clear up. The smog has always been a problem for Paris it usually has more smog than in any European country. The article states that \"Paris has 147 micrograms of perticulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London,Reuters found.\" The romantic city of Paris cant be as wonderful if it always has a problem with having too much smog I believ that the cars are the ones to blame for this matter that if the city of paris bans its cars that the smog will decrease and become a the romantic city that it is. The article states that \"diesel fuel was blamed since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France compared a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western Europe.\" That means that it is in fact the motor cars that are the ones causeing the overflow of the smog. If the the cars are able to to be banned in paris we will see a drop in the smog and Paris will return to the romantic city that it is.\n\nThe city of Bogota,Colombia has been celebrating the day without cars for over three years straight. The car free day help leave the streets of the capital city without any traffic jams. One problem of the road that many countries have in their capital city is that they have to many cars because of the tourist and the huge number of people who live there which causes traffic jams leaving cars in the streets for hours on end. They have the same problem in Brazil where they have one of the worlds worst traffic jams in history. The ones who delevoped the car free day was trying to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Someone states in the article \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" says businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. The stress of having a car in a countries capital can be stressful to some people and that bikeing or walking is a way to help calm someone after a busy day at work. Due to the car free day the city states that \"uneven, pitted side walks have been replaced by broad,smooth sidewalks, rush hour restirictions have dramatically cut traffic.\"The car free day i feel is benefitting everyone from getting rid of traffic jams to clearing up the smog. The replacing of cars for bikes and walking is not so much a bad idea if it will help benefit evryone around you.\n\nIn conclusion, the car culture is now coming to its end. That nations all over the world has seen the great benefits from banning cars. The greatest effects that banning cars has is that they are helping to get rid of air pollution,stress,and the grreenhouse gas. These are all benfits for everyone it helps the ither people beside u and the environment. The romantic city of Paris was covered in smog due to cars. In Germany where they have developed a city where there is no car in sight and has everything within a walking or bike distance. The city of Bogota,Colombia making a holiday that has been going on for three years straight to have no cars for a day. The people have been seeing that the effects of having no car is wonderful and that we should all do it to better ourselves and to better out enivornment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever driven on a long road trip and almost fell asleep? Or you just got tired of driving but couldnt stop because you had to get somewhere? Well there may be a solution for you. They can help you get from one place to another without trouble, there is less chance of a human error, and if you feel uncomfortable with a car driving you then you can take it back over any time.\n\nWhen you just need to get somewhere on time without taking a wrong turn or a GPS isn't working you can just go right to a diverless car. Or on those tiny roads that force you to go a lot slower then you would like the driverless car would come into great use. It could also be very amazing to adventure a car actually driving you for once. BMW is trying to figure a way to make it fun and reliable. For example the artical says,\" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Not only BMW but all car companies are trying to do that. You can relax even though your the one behind the wheel.\n\nAnother reason driverless cars should be on the road is becuase there is a less chance of an error.\"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and padestrians safe.\" That is what one of the car manufactures said, it although there is a chance of malfunctioning Tesla says they project a 2016 model to be able to be on autopilot 90 percent of the time. There is less chance of an error and it is much safer. Someone behind a wheel could be drunk or even half asleep which puts everyone near the car at risk.\n\nThere are some very good drivers out there though, they have been driving their whole lives. So for the people that think you will never be able to drive ever again then your wrong. Any time you feel unsafe or you feel the car may malfunction you can take the wheel over anytime. You may also have to do it during road construction if it is needed. Some people feel that driverless cars shouldnt be on the road but they should be because it makes my life and your life much more safer because your not totaly out of control.\n\nTo wrap it all up driverless cars are definetly something that should be in the road. They keep the roads much safer and there is much less chance of an error. If you ever feel out of shape with a car driving you then go ahead and take the car over yourself. So if your looking for a car in five or ten years go ahead and look towards the driverless cars, it might not save you money but it could save your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that employers consider wearing work uniform is far important than the the performance of their workers. In my opinion, I believe that the dress code is only applicable to certain proffessions while it is unrelated to work context in some jobs. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, there are some jobs requiring people to wear certain attire because it represents the nature and the responsibilites of their profession and enables others to recognize them. A typical example of this is that some medical professions such as doctors and nurses have to comply with a dress code because they help patients to distinguish them from regular people. This would result in encouraging employees to follow the rules and be more discipline toward their supervisors and clients. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, specific uniforms are not related to the work practice and identity because these occupations are more likely tied with achieving the organizational goals and better performance. Technical companies such as Facebook and Google, where programmers and designers have the freedom to wear casual clothes, value more the innovation and productivity of their worker. One of the significant outcomes of this is that workers would become more motivated to improve their skills and qualifications so that they could help their companies to record more profits. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, complying to a certain dress code is utterly related to particular occupations because they are considered an identification of the work nature whrease other professions place more significance on the job performance than job uniform due to the importance of achieving the company's objectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient mom take friends house play foot ball It long story I tell anyways It started friend called come play football So I asked mom ride said yes So driving get things grocery store She took hule hour The go else took hours therethen called said are coming what Then I said yes I kept cool waited Then I finally got It much story That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are really safe to have on the roads. I think that they are manufactured safe enough to have on the roads and may not be for a while or so. For example, the author tells too much about the benefits of driverless cars rather than the bad things or costs about them. Here are some of the things: automatic braking, acceleration, and steering, and many more as well.\n\nI think that if cars have already been manufactured to have built-in braking built into their systems, that they are already off to a good start to things. The most dangerous situation to me would be no being able to brake soon enough or if you are not paying attention. That is when we would ususally need it most.\n\nI think that acceleration would come in handy as well because some people on the roads just do not drive the way that they drive these days. Some people just do not drive fast enough and it makes some people on the road angry or agrivated at them. I think that acceleration would come in handy when it comes to driverless cars.\n\nLast but not least, I think that steering would be of great help to those on the road these days. I think that some people just do not know how to keep their car in between the lines. I think that it is a goood thing that cars are able to steer themselves instead of the driver going into the next lane or something like that.\n\nThis is my argument for driverless cars. I think that driverless cars are a safe alternative for cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is very important to recycle materials and reduce the amount of waste, and teach these principles to the children, but there is a disagreement among the experts about the appropriate place for educating the children. Some believe schools are the best place for teaching the value of recycling, whereas others consider homes as the best location. This essay will discuss both points of view and I shall argue that the children should be educated about this important issue at home.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some believe that like most of the other learning, the value of recycling waste should also be taught at home. The process of learning for a toddler begins even before he joins a school. Because, children spend much more time at their homes and tend to follow the habits of their parents, the home is the best place to teach this important value. For instance, it is well known that babies begin to form habits during early childhood. The foundation of many good habits such as reading and self discipline is laid at home. Therefore, they argue that the education about material recycling should be given at the home.\r\n\r\nOne the other hand, I would argue that these valuable habits should be inculcated at the school. It is well established that children listen to their teachers more than the parents, and at school they also learn by observing the behaviour of their peers. Schools provide the perfect atmosphere for learning because of a formal and enabling environment. If information about the value of recycling the waste is shared in school along with a practical demonstration, the children are more likely to retain this information and practice this at their homes. For example, a recent Swedish study demonstrated that on average the students retain more information which is taught at school compared to the one provided at home. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are convincing arguments on both sides, it is abundantly clear that because children are more likely to learn more and better in schools, they ought to be educated about this important issue in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I strongly think manypeople benefiting fromusing computers There many things people besides go computer By using computer people getting less exercise enjoying nature interacting family friends By using computer people getting many benefits As mentioned people use computers much getting less exercise By exercising could really affect people s health From recent studies people whouse computers much overweight That extremly high statistic By computers affecting many people s lives ridiculous This many people really nt weight If people nt getting exercise could become addicted computer If peopole getting addicted computer start bad things computer They could publish bad things go ridiculous websites watch horrible things The worst probably watching bad things It really puts bad influence everyone Lastly computer often could affect eyes If staring computer day eyes used seeing everything else It s hard eyes transfer seeing one thing next Clearly computer bad health Not enjoying nature also something people nt benefiting As know getting freshair good everyone Its always nice smell nice air school day Many people dont soon get home computer These people losi lot refreshment I recently interviewed told many people nt get see s world computers They never take look anything thats going around By keeping updated You never know topic pop school could always benefit checking mother nature Lastly always animals need help Have ever situation stray dog needs home helping animals re saving life Many people dont opportunity computer Obviously many people missing beauty nature My last reason hat computer re interacting family friends In cases person addicted computer parent If re parent need help family everyday chores I know innoying re helping family thats Also parent children always need help Some kids younger nt know find information project But s parent But parent computer nt able fulfill requirement I know brother always looking help younger Lastly family parties computers mix From past experience family come brother sat computer without even coming say hello anyone I find extremly rude I hope family members nt get offened Clearly using computers takes time away family In conclusion people limited time computers By using computers people nt enough exercise nt enjoying nature spend less time family Thank reading opinion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author concludes story paragraph saying could concentrate test wanted go back home country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every four years, the United States is turned into a political battleground by the campaign for presidency. The electoral College, the voting method used since the nation began, Is being highly questioned on its efficiency now vs the efficiency 250 years ago. However, the system has survived because it works. Despite its flaws, the Electoral College does a good job of simplifying the presidential election and eliminating disputes or a potential crisis. It produces a clear winner, it makes sure that the president is popular in all areas of the country, and it puts the weight of the campaign on the swing states.\n\nIn most presidentai races, the president wins only by a small margin. rarely is there a landslide victory or a complete vote for a president. This small majority can lead to many disputes over the credibility of counting the votes in the individual states. This is why the Electoral College helps the voting process. The Electoral College helps the voting process because it produces a more clear winner. For example, in line 21 it claims that \"In [2012's] election, for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote sompared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney\". This shows that while the popluar vote can be extremely tight, the winner gaining sometimes less than 1 percent of the popluar votes, the Electoral College helps the system by giving the winner a landslide advantage and therefore clearing up any claims over the credibility of the popular votes which the loser can produce. Also, the Electoral College helps prevent the situation of no president winning the majority of the votes. the introduction of third parties can sometimes mean that no party gains more than half of the votes. However, the Electoral College helps deal with that situation. In 1968 and 1992, Nixon and Clinton both had less than the majority, but won because they had the Electoral College in their favor. This is why the Electoral College still works today.\n\nThere are some areas of the nation that are very highly populated. The southern and western regions of the nation are becoming more and more populated, and the northern regions are diminishing in size. By popular vote, a president who wins the southern regions alone would have a good chance of winning the nation. However, that system does not work under the electoral college vote. The Electoral College is a good system for voting on the president because it requires a president to be popular across the nation. Under the Electoral College, a president can not suffice by winning the votes in a couple of states. They must get points from states across the nation and then will it add up to a victory. This is good because a president with only a regional majority will mainly focus on the region which he is based on. The other regions will be disregarded, and not paid as much attention to. The Electoral College prevents this outcome. This is another reason why the Electoral College is a good method of picking the presidency.\n\nMost states will have a tendency to almost always vote for a patricular party. The real difference in Electoral votes lies mostly in the states who will vote either way, or 'Swing States\". The Electoral College is a good thing because it puts the emphasis on the states who will vote either way, ensuring the credibility of the candidate. These swing states know that they are the ones who decide the election. Therefore, it is the voters in these states who pay more attention to the campaign, who research the candidates more, and who listen to what the candidates have to say. This is a bonus for the Electoral College because it means that the candidate who will be elected is the candidate who will do best for the country, not necessarily the most popular. Because of this, the Electoral College should remain the system of voting on the presidency.\n\nThere are arguments that the Electoral College should be abolished. That the system of sending electors to congress to vote for them does not work because they can't guarantee that the electors will vote for who they are supposed to do. However, the chances of that happening today and the elector getting away with it are very slim. Today, The people and the government know exactly how much votes each state gave to each candidate, and they know exactly how much electoral votes a candidate should get. So even if you manage to add a vote to your candidate, It's very likely that someone will do the math and figure out that something's not right with the votes.\n\nLike every system, the Electoral College has its flaws. However, the system is the best we can put in place to elect a new president. The system still is used after 250 years because it easily simplifies the disputes that can easily occur over the tight popular vote margins. So the next time you vote for the president, You'll know that you are voting in the most efficient democratic system to date.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The pie charts illustrate the reasons why people go to MBA programs and what employers find attractive in candidates holding this degree.\nOverall, better job opportunities is the dominant factor that stimulate people obtain MBA while employers value it for many almost equal reasons, however, surprisingly qualification obtained is not dominating.\nHaving graduated from MBA, 65% of candidates expect better job opportunities while three other factors are valued almost similarly. The next valuable factor is ability to do job better was chosen by only 15% of respondents. At the same time only 8% of MBA candidates said that they chose the program because it gives ability to help others.\nDespite the fact that only 12% of MBA graduates are looking for personal development, it is one of the two most valued factors by employers. Only previous work experience is valued at the same 25% level as personal factor. Presentation skills and network or range of connections, both were the next crucial reasons why employees prefer MBA candidates, gaining 20% of the pie each.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thinks author concludes story given paragraph show similar hibiscus geese First geese hibiscus goal survive winters Geese fly south winter stay warm This similar Saeng worse thing moved different environment must adapt Also Saeng must experience winter along hibiscus The hibiscus needs tobe strong overcome winter shows Saeng like hibiscus needs strong overcome test If hibiscus overcome its test winter survive cangner", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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