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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Evolution of Cars!\"\n\nDo you feel safe knowing that a computer is driving for you?Technology is a big part of the world nowadays.Scientists work 24/7 innovating new technology to keep up with the latest and popular trends.One innovation they've made is a self driving car, driven by a computer.My opinion on the whole thing is it is a very bad idea .I have three reason why.The three are the cost,overall support , and lastly safety.\n\nThe first reason is the cost of the whole process. It is very costly to program every single with all this high tech technology .They spend so much money making the car when they sell it they won't make little to nothing profit wise.Think of all the money the manufactures would have to pay because up computer malfunction accidents happened.Companies will be out of business and into debt before they really can start .\n\nThe next topic is overall support of the driverless car. Some people ,including me, will feel it is a big safety hazard and wouldn't even thing to get in a car where you dont have to drive.Also the car will be to expensive for regular drivers anyway. Do you think celebrities want to in a toyota? They like the luxury and fancy cars like lamborghinis and porshes.So like i stated in my second paragraph i believe these companies won't make alot of profit from these cars.The reason i dont think these cars wont get alot of support because in the article it said some states such as California, Nevada, Florida , and the District of Columbia it is illegal to drive computer driven cars. It is a large population in all of these places so they will miss out on alot of money because the rescrictions and laws.\n\nThe last reason i think this is a bad idea is because of the safety hazards. What if the computer malfunctions and the car spins out of controls and kills pedestrains? The car doesn't know how to deal with different road conditons as said in the article.What if a driver goes to sleep while driving, and a bus stop to drop of kids ? The car does know to stop so it keeps going and hits a young innocent child walking across the street. I believe the manufacturing company should wait till they have innovated the car to perfection before trying to sell it to the public.\n\nMy conclusion is it will be bad for companies to sell to the public when the car is not fully developed and ready for the road.Another reason i dont support the cars because you dont know what will happen while you are driving to the store with your hands off the wheel. From the looks of things hey won't making very much money from these cars in the first few months.The last reason is the safety of others and yourself .Are you that lazy you can't drive to stay alive?Yes , i know since you read this you have a whole different outlook on the self driven cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More driverless cars are coming starting in 2016. The fact about driverless cars are starting to be invented more that can either be a good thing or a bad thing. The manufacturer can make any car they want but the thing is how many people would be able to afford the new driverless cars? Making the driverless cars cen be terrible for many reasons, because the car can possibly have a malfunction while driving. And not all driverless cars can do everything they would still need a human for certain things.\n\nSome important bad things about a driverless car is that no matter how smart the car is they would still need a human.For certain things like if there's a traffic jam they would need a human to drive for that part. For example the Google cars those aren't to much driverless cars. In the article paragraph 2 gives a great reason why Google cars aren't so driverless. in the article it says \" they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffice issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\"\n\nAnother bad thing about driverless cars is that in the process of making them the manufacturers are going to spend a lot of money making the cars. Besides the fact of them spending a huge amount of money on cars it would most likely be best to stick to regular cars.Because either way if something bad happens the car would need a human to take over. Another thing is if the driverless cars was good in marketing each car would have a whole lot of sensors.\n\nA good thing about driverless cars is it can probably reduce accidents since most people are alwasy on there cell phone or texting.In paragraph 5 it says \" automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes.\" It also says \"within the 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" So basically everything that would be something good is the sensors to reduce the amount of accidents. Also in peragraph 5 it says \" the information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce the power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"\n\nThere are more negative things then positive statements about driverless cars. To most people they would say it's a waste of money because it not only take the fun out of driving it makes it boring. The smart cars can steer,accelerate, and brrake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The driverless cars have to go through a big process of not breaking the laws and with regular cars that humans can drive doesn't have to go through all that.\n\nDriverless cars can be dangerous that's why they are already illegal in California,Nevada,Florida,and the district of Columbia. The driving laws focus more keeping the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. and if the technology in the driverless cars were to fail and someone got injured who would they be able to blame? The driver or the manufacturer? The manufacturer would be the one to blame that's why it would be best to stick to regular cars that people can drive on their own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do i think the emotion identifer can be valuable in a class room? Yes i do think it would be valuable. my first reason is some people be lost in class but dont ask for help. With the computer that tells your emotion teachers can help a student without them asking because the computer is going to tell you who need help and who dont. my second reason is It takes work off the teachers dest and could help the classroom move at a faster pace.how you ask ?well the teacher want have to keep teaching the same stuff over again for those who dont understand but dont ask.my third reason is making a certain face produce certain emotions. if\n\nthe computer since that you nervous or scared the teacher could tell you to smile then you woud be happy. My conclusion is yes we should try the emotion computers just to see if things would change like test scores and gpa's.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy. You should be a Seagoing Cowboy because they get to see the ocean alot. They get a really good veiw. You also get to help people by making more cows to eat. You can help them alot to by skining them and making fur for covers. You can also give them mules and horses to ride so they do not have to walk.\n\nYou can also travel to alot of countrys,and states. They have alot of animals so if your a animal person you would love the job. It is kinda like a real farm but not on land you feed animals twice or three times a day. You put hay out for them and things like that.\n\nYou can have fun to it is not just all work you can play table tenis. You also play volly ball and kick ball to. You play boxing and fencing to. You read and whittl to pass time. It helps to know that you are helping someone in need in a other country. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is a adventure and thats why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist many ways First climate affected thats became hot drank lot became dehydrated So energy dehydration Another one built road Thats rocky bumpy winding hills dehydrated road tempting give die Then heat got shade water left sun beating", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author in the story well explains how Venus is a worthy pursuit because venus is like he second planet that is like Earth. The only reason humans can't live on Venus is because of their high tempetures that reach to 800 degrees Fahrenheit.Also venus has the hottest surface temperture of any solar in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to the sun. Also NASA tries to send something to Venus to try to see if they can discover something on Venus but they tried sending stuff before and they wouldn'tlast due to the hot tempertures. Venus also has 97 perent of Carbon Dioxide blankets.\n\nVenus also has a challenging of clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in it's atmosphere. and the pressue on Venus is 90 times greater tha what we experience on Earth. At this substance would even crush a submarine accustomed to diving into the deepest parts of our oceans and would melt metals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is a significant increase in the number of people turning seriously overweight. Some people believe that a possible solution for this issue is to increase the price of fattening foods. From my point of view, I firmly disagree with this solution due to the fact that this is not efficient and can lead to malnutrition.\r\n\r\n First of all, if we increase the price of fattening food, it will be harder for people with low income access to food sources. Due to the fact that low-income people do not have enough money to cook meals for themselves, while fattening food now sells at an affordable price. For instance, to cook a meal we need to provide other fees such as electric and water bills which make the cost a lot more expensive compared to fast food. In addition, this solution just can reduce a small proportion of people who consume fattening food. That also means that not only food which contains fat makes people overweight but food that provides a large amount of carbohydrate is also a big contributor to obesity.\r\n\r\n In contrast, instead of increasing the price of fattening food, the governments should raise the residents' awareness about the drawbacks of fattening food such as fast food by propagandizing the information on television or social networks such as Facebook or TikTok.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, we should not extend the fattening food price because it is not efficient and can make it hard for people with low income to access food sources. Instead, we can raise people's awareness through social media.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Facial face Coding System is a good thing because it can tell other peoples emotions. Also not everyone will have the same emotion. Another reason would be that the face scanner wouldnt mess up because it gets all of your face bones. Their is a doctor who studies all the basic emotions what are called happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear and sadness and the doctor who descovered these are Dr. Paul Eckman and they all had charcterastics movements such as your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrow when your suprised. The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. We always perform this same impressive calculation every day. For instance you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look of their face. Meanwhile muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crows feet around your eyes. According to the faial feedback Theory of Emotion moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Some of this may happen because we unconsciously imitate another persons facial expressions. whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that most people benefit students contemplate at an institute or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.\n\t On the one hand, most companies desire to get a highly educated worker. Due to employees play a key role in exceeding other competitors and running a successful company. Therefore, these ways are opening up by going to institute and improving your education. For evidence from the most successful people graduated at an educational institution. Another argument is that if they study at the educational institution, they will be bosom friend who come from other countries of the world. Thus they will be able to work in a team and adapt to anything. \n\tBy contrast, opponents of this view point out that not all pupils live in a situation where study at the institute, or even possible. Examples can be seen in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a seminary may be hard. Finally, it must be said that not all young people actually desire to study at the educational institution, because their interests lie elsewhere. For example, some of them want to work after school.\n\tOverall, it is logical to conclude that a highly educated worker, unearth the culture of communications should be positive of our enterprise. It would appear that it serves the interest of both the offspring and family's environmental.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Doctors and scientist have come up with a new device that can see through fake and real smiles and tell them apart from one another. This device can detect emotions just by the face you are making. Some professionals from this field have even sugested that we may use this in the classroom. Some people may think this will just distract us or it is a way for the government to track us but this new tech has alot of benefits. The Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in the classroom to help with engagement in the classroom,keeping track of students and by helping students who are having troubles in their life. Kids are always having trouble paying attention but with this new tech we can keep them exicted to learn. The tech can scan and notice if a student is not enjoying this subject or if they are bored and will change the lesson or modify it so it is more interesting. According to the article it is can help the student if they start to falter. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This shows that the device can help keep kids focused and attached to what they are learning so they will remember better than on a normal computer. Students sometimes do dumb stuff or are just reckless but with this new tech we can keep an eye on them and make sure they do not slip up. With this tech we could keep a better track of the students and see what devices they are on. According to the article it could do this by mapping out a highly accurate map of your face and it could use this to track emotions and keep track of what you are doing. \"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely\". This shows that they have made this device highly accurate so it could map out a students face and keep track of the device they are on or see if they are doing something bad. Most students nowadays go through alot in their life and using this tech we can see when they need help and we can try and help them before things get bad. The tech can see if you are hiding your true feelings under a fake smile and with that we can see what you are truley feeling and try and help the students before they do something serious. According to the article the tech can track all of your facial muscles and see if you are faking a smile. \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\". This shows that this tech can track your true emotions and it could be used to alert an offical if they detect that something is wrong.\n\nSo through the ways of seeing through fake emotions, tracking and engagement this tech can be valuable in the classroom. This tech can detect if you are sad or happy and can be a great helped in learning so thaat students pay attention. Still some people think that it is just a way to push so new tech just for\n\nalittle bit of money. But this new tech is more than that it can be the difference in some students failing or someone passing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is indubitable that technological advancement has led to an easier life as compared to what it was 10 years back. However, there are a few drawbacks of technology in people's life. In this ,essay we will discuss both aspects of technology advancement.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, technology has developed enormously in the last 2 decades. This change has made peoples life easier. For example, People does not have to commute for activities like buying food, withdrawing or depositing money in the Bank and communicating with people across the globe. Also, there are many jobs which are now done by giant and advanced machines and computer-based systems. This advancement has curbed the need for manual work and thus led to higher production, accuracy and increased speed which can meet the market needs.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Due to the maximum use of machines and computers, the need for labours and employees has reduced. Initially, jobs in factories and corporate sectors had a requirement of manual labour and paper-based processes. However, the profiles and demands are now changed. Nowadays, there are more requirements in IT sectors and technical services. Earlier, people use to give customisable services and hand-crafted products but now the scenario has changed. Because of the use of machines, the authenticity of handmade products is lost. For any complaints related to the product, people have to wait in a telephonic queue to contact the customer care department.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, there were few cons with regards to computer and machine use. However, the positive points cover up the benefits of technological advancement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Students Expressions\n\nEveryday people are coming up with new technology to help the students learn in class. They give them computers and let them use phones and calculators. But the new software that can identify students emtions is going to help in so many diffent ways. The Facial Action Coding System will not only help the student but also help the teacher. If a student is feeling a certain emotion and doesn't want to participate in class that day then the teacher can help them due to their emotion. One other reason FACS could help, is with all the school shootings that are happening you could detect that a student was mad or sad because of a bully and help them before they do something disasterous. Another reason FACS could help is to stop a bully. If the software can dectect happiness it can detect hatred and it would be helpful in many schools if they could stop a bully before the bully found a victim. These are the some of the many reasons why the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in school.\n\nIn many classrooms students hardly ever show up to school ready to work and learn. With the FACS teachers could use it to help those students and make sure they do their work so they student can suceed. Then on the other hand if a student is ready to work and very energetic the teacher can help them learn at their pace. Most students would agree and say that learning is hard if its not at your own pace. With FACS the teachers can learn what the students pace is and teach them accordingly.\n\nSchool shootings are becoming a regular thing in America and most of America feels the way I do; they need to stop. Students have emotions that lead them to committing acts of terror like this and the FACS would be able to detect if a student was sad or mad because of a bully. All the teacher or adult would have to do is talk to them and it could be avoided. The most effective way to stop a disaster of that magnitude is stop it before it happens. With the Facial Action Coding System it could easily be stopped.\n\nBullies are everywhere in schools: classroom, hallways, cafeteria, bathrooms, etc. The Facial Action Coding System is able to dectect emtions of a bully, such as hatred for another student then the teachers can talk to the potential bully and make sure they don't become a bully. If the bully is mad from something at home then the FACS would detected that emotion and an adult would be able to help in anyway they seem fit. The FACS can help stop any potential bully or even stop a current bully.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be such a valuable tool to use in schools and these reason prove why. There are tons more reasons why the FACS would be a valuable tool in schools but these, in my opinion, are the best reasons. Helping a student learn and paticipate in the classroom easier, helping teachers stop a disaster from happening, and stopping a bully from ruining a students life are some of the many things that make the FACS the next big thing to help students in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember time I went I saw little girl patient When I got I excited first time going It colorful loud I went rides got hungry family went go get cottoncandy I eating food I saw cute little girl She stood line like little angle All sudden I saw bunch teenagers cut front little girl She patient stood standing behind teenagers cut front The line got longer minutes I left go rides I came back poor little girl still More people cut front nt say anything All mumble I couldnt stand I wondered could let cut like If I little girl I would lost patience time ago I amazed much patience She finally got front line Out came closed sign I couldnt believe eyes didnt even get mad I kept watching end She finally walked stand exact thing I couldnt watch anymore I left family thought girl In end I hoped great patience like thinking makes amazed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given charts displays information of 3 different teams, namely scores over a period of 4 years.\nOverall, we can conclude that the Team B has always the highest number of points than the 2 others teams whereas those 2 teams are always in opposition to have the second highest scores.\nFirstly, Team B is always first which may depict higher skills than others. For instance, even if this team had a sizeable gap of points for the first 2 years, it seems to decrease until 43 points in 2003. As a result, Team A was not far to be ahead of Team B which over the 3 first years had a steadily growth of points.\nFor the Team C, it is more complicated because it stagnated between the second and third place due to its variation over the four seasons. Contrary to Team A which stood out in 2004 with a threefold increase, there were not boundaries for Team C over all the period. At the end of the period, Team B remained the first team with the highest score even if every team had a lower score than previous seasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The first and foremost priority for children is to focus on their studies. It is vital for them to spend quality time on their studies and ensure academic success. However, it is often noticed that children find it hard to focus on their studies and tend to move in a different direction. This essay will discuss a few of the root causes and their potential solution. \r\n\r\nOne key motivation for good education is to get a better job and to settle well in life. As a consequence of increasing population and competition, there is a limitation in the number of jobs and hence creating an increasing trend in the unemployment rate. For instance, in the developing world, in spite of getting higher college degrees, students find it hard to earn a deserving job and end up doing ordinary jobs, leaving no value for their hard work. This situation can be mitigated if authorities can oversee the unemployment trend and create more job opportunities for the younger generation matching their skill set. \r\n\r\nMoreover, in the contemporary era, there are a plethora of bad habits that can deviate children from their education. These negative influences are available both online and offline, providing easy access and making kids addicted to it. For example, the teenage is the time when the child starts to feel independent and is attracted to these traps. Society as a whole, must ensure that children are provided guidance in avoiding such materials. There must be stringent regulations in place to avoid easy access to these items by youngsters. \r\n\r\nIn addition, family relationships play a vital role in the upbringing of children. A stable family can stand alongside the youngsters and mentor them. For instance, in broken families, children find it difficult to focus on their studies, as they are more concerned about their safety and stability. Parents and grown-ups in the family must ensure that the young ones are taken care of and the struggles in the family do not have a direct impact on their kid's education. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are several contributing factors impacting kids' education, and this includes employment opportunities, negative influences and family relationships. The role of family and society is critical to building a generation of well-educated individuals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It should be able to be used in the classroom because, people like themselves or the teacher should know how they are feeling today or want to know how they are feeling on certrain days, and what emotions they aren having. It also can be used in science so we should be able to learn this especially sincewe all have emotions and why not spice science up since we do have a science class. It can help us learn more about emotions and how can we actually can tell how we are really feeling. I think we should also have them because it said in paragraph 6 \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", and I think that will help us cause the teachers can then see we need help trying to understand or need to take breaks becuase we have became bored and or confuse. I also would love to use this to find out how my friends emotions are on a certain day because I wouldnt want to bother them if they are angry or sad. I would also use it for my teacher. I think it would be fun to use in school and it would actually catch the children atttention in school. In my opinion this would be great becuase just like they used it on the Mona Lisa picture we can use it on many other pictures and find out alot more and how people emotions were. I know i would love to use them on slavery pictures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "wouldnt know would faceing rider road something bad might happen bike one bikes wheels might fall bick would set tired cant go might give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i was a NASA scientist discussing the fase with someone who thinks it was created by aliens i would tell them that the face was not mad by aliens because it could of bin made by dust and wind or a deid person from milions of years ago also it can be a rock formed as a face .\n\nfirst i think that the face could of ben made up of dust and wind along time ago because we do not know what was in mars for a long period of time untill we invented satelights, rocket ships and space shutls next i say it could of also ben a deid person. one of the resons i say this is because in space a deid bode can not row or reprodus .\n\nlast but not lest a rock could of den formed or a medeor crash thes are some of the things why i think it could not be aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you think of a self-driving car, you could automaticaly think science fiction, what if it now becomes science reality? Recently Google has been in development of such a vehicle. There have been multiple tries and have been great improvments in this project. The lawmakers feel this could undermine their rules of driver responsiblity. So the development of a driverless car seems not far off, but there could be unforseen consequnces.\n\nGoogle cofounding member Sergy Brin has been developing a driverless car also known as \"The Google Car\", for quite some time now. This project has been work in progress since 2009, and the success rate for it is exceptional. This car has gone more than half a million miles. Unfortunatly, these cars still due require a driver, it will alert the driver to take the wheel when pulling in and out of driveways.\n\nIn the late 1950's, there were roads outfitted with a electric cable that set out signals, the car was equipped with a reciver to move along the road, but this technology could not be apllied to all roads. Berkeley engineers tried something similar with magnets having alternating polarities that sent out messages via binary code (101010...) which worked rather well, however it was to exspensive.\n\nThe driving laws are mainly focused on the safety and well being of the passengers and driver. Lawmakers believe that these laws are best enforced with alet drivers, fearing the driverless car will cause irresponsible drivers. Most states have banned testing of computer driven cars. States of Nevada, Florida, and California have allowed limited test/ use of semi-automous cars. Self driving manufacturers believe more states will follow, once these cars are fully proven safe.\n\nThere are some consequnces to driverless cars, but I believe that this will benefit the transportation game. Lawmakers seem to be leaning towards the possiblilty of the cars being permitted to be on the road. Advances in the inventing of said cars is developing quite nicely. Google and other manufacturers stated the cars will be ready to use within the next five years. So I'd say I believe this science fition to become a reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People chattering as they walk down the payment, buzzing conversation on who will win the coming election. Large bulleton board's towlering above the city streets and towns a smiling face firmly drawn on them with the caption, \"Vote for me for President.\" Television's fills with compains and speeches. How is it we come to the conclusion of voting a president? and which way do I favor? Among our rapidly growing population and country every 4 year's \"we the people \" cast in our vote for president and who might I ask count those votes? The electoral college, which some think it's a place but acually it's a long process to chosing our next president. The electoral college consists of electors, there meeting is where they voe for he president and also vice president by counting the electoral votes by congress. When you vote for president you are really choosing your candidate and actually voting for your candidate's electors. I strongly disagree with this mythed because I favor more that the president chose be chosen by popular vote not by electors we chose.\n\nWhat's wrong with the electoral colledge? You run into multiple issues with the electoral college as you slowly go into it's process and how the president is chosen. One big issuse is the Disaster factor. Considering that state legislatures are technially responsiable for picking electors. If we chose the president by popular vote like we should, it would be more resonable because it's a way so that the people of our country are happy. The eclectoral college is unfair to voter's also. With the \"Winner takes all\", system is each state candidates don't even spend time in states they know have no chance is winning, there only focus is on the swing states and the ones who have a more lickly chance of winner with there voter! This is highly unfair to the people! Our votes should count more then what electors chose. This is our nation, our country, our home and we should get to decide on who will lead it in a fair way, electors should count all the votes and then chose the president by popularity and better man.\n\nThe elector collegde is said to be a non-democratic method to be overruled by declaring the most popular votes for the candiate the winner. When your voting you acually voting for the slate of electors who will chose the president and vice president.\n\nChosing our president should be up to popular vote, electing electors who will chose the president is a unfair priocess and the electoral college is very out dated and it's system and ways should be over thought about. Counting our votes on president and chosing the president by popluar vote is the best way to go. Firstly it allows for the president most wanted to become president. Second it's a easier process then having to vote for a elector, wait for there votes, and then wait for there decesion on president. Think about it? We the people, should chose our president souly on poplation votes.\n\nTo conclude, the electoral college is a unfair, outdated, and irrational way to chose our presendent. We the people should be able to chose the present by poplar vote not only because it's our chose on who should lead are country but also it's a easier and better way to chose our president. I highly agree that we should be able to chose our next president by poplar vote and rething the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think offensive materials shelfs libraries People ideas opinions offensive material like shouldnt around libraries children read offensive material might help someone one day Some times people think offensive material think bad good people read watch treating people right Then also offensive material like videos movie fun make movie great watch Today im hear tell offensive material help students high school research project also show us offensive materials back old days also teach us offensive material Today generation alot studing projects school know subject As high school student would research topic offensive material Why would ask Because researching offensive material learn Like come people offensive could probably find know thats good thing finding dont know So take away offensive material would never get learn know came Its good still books offensive material get educated offensive Going library fun exciteding get read books Well choose book choose recent one one back old days In case offensive material shelfs libraries Lets say went library today wanted research paper offensive material old days Well library generations books offensive material This provides us offensive material back old days So library good thing need know happend back old days Everyone one goes library learn like read really good book Well know alot people would love learn offensive material Offensive material people like good book read learn Some people think learning much bad thing exspecially offensive material Learning much even discusion people learn whatever want If libraries take away offensive material like talking good book People think want think offensive material Like said libraries take away offensive material book like taking away good book reader People need learn offensive material thats still books If didnt want know offensive material publish books videos This think offensive material shelfs libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology to read students' emotional expressions is a great idea.\n\n\"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused and borde.\" \"then it could modify the lession, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nthe same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive --- for video games or video surgery.\n\nIt would be a good change, it could cange our lives for the better. A computer that can tell our emotions could bring us so many opportunities.\n\ni see why some people might not feel the need for it simply because , we have teachers and they can tell our emotions or some perople just might think there simply isn't a need for computers to know how me feel by our facial expressions, they may feel as if its pointless.\n\nBut i do truly feel as if is a good idea to have them, they seem fun and really cool . something that can benifit our lives in so many different way , and it could possibaly be used as a fun little toy on the side. but all together the idea is great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph illustrates the unemployment rate of the graduates by genders, who are between 20 and 24 years old and who are living in a European country, between 2008 and 2009.\nOverall, it is clear that the graduate unemployment rate showed a fluctuated feature in the time period, both genders unemployment rate was slightly decrease till the end of 2008 and at the end of 2008 the percentage was increased and reached to highest point, and same characteristic was shown in the year 2009 as well.\nIn January 2008, the percentage of the men and women unemployment rate was 10% and around 7% respectively. And in April and July 2008, their percentage was decreased sharply till October 2008, and in October 2008 the percentage of the men increased around 17% and women increased around 12 %.\nIn year 2009, between January and October, the percentage of the men was slightly decreased and in October it increased sharply around 23% and reached to the top point of unemployment rate in 2009. The rate of the unemployment women was not so stable and it reached to the lowest rate in April with a percentage of about 3%. And it started to increase in July and reached to the highest point in October 2009, which is around 14%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People choice types literature want read wether offends chose read Books removed shelves librariesThey need try avoid books offensive Now cant thats libraries fault Books removed many reasons One many reasons books removed know risk take entering library s decision making sometimes decisions consequences When offended know types books offened would little better job avoiding books Another reason would libraries dont know offends people one little thing book nt mean book removed shelfs Also cause one person tihnks offensive nt mean others People ar nt offended thing people offended little things meaning re offended easily ar nt offended easy means make take serious things book offend person Another reason books shouldnt removed students need projects school assignments Some school assignments require getting little offended exspecially african american get assignment slavery something time But need learn past experiences history couldnt people trying remove books shelf You get offended reason remove book others need sometimeFind another way solve problem There ways solve problems like tagging books yellow small sticker would warn people book offended someone There need completly remove book Another solution would maybe seperate books meaning put books diffrent location library get couple complaints offensive Also someone check book librarian warn book tagged yellow sticker possible offend Thats removing books shelves ar nt cause", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and supports this idea very well by explaing different aspects of Venus that make it highly worth studying. when the author explains why we should explore Venus one of the statements that i was most intrigued by was was when the author stated that \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth\", the reason i think this is a very good reason on why we should explore venus is because it could help give us a better understanding of our universe, mabye human like creatures lived on venus at one time, maybe there were buildings on venus, the possibilities are endless. This is why i think that the author makes a great claim about exploring venus and why i think we should further explore venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some locals that voluntary work can be an advantageous option for teenagers and start serving their community could be an option. Personally speaking, I agree with the statement because in a community people have to work together if they want to live in a high living standard. \r\n\r\nWorking for their own community, teenagers could broaden their social skills and become aware of their role in a society. During that time, those people could get along with some senior locals and exchange experiences, for example. It is also the perfect way to start developing working skills when delivering the mail, walking pets for their neighbors/the elders, cleaning pools, to start with. These are some services that an unexperienced teenager could get involved. In community service, teenagers do not have to have previous experience and it is not a demanding job which teenagers could easily learn from and understand the value of working. \r\n\r\nIf, from one side, one can number lots of benefits, on the other hand/side, some people can have bias against those kinds of jobs because they give the false impression that those who are serving the community are required to do so because they might have done something wrong or harmful to others, since these kinds of services are currently being used as punishment. Working for a community should not be a punishment in any circumstances. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we can see that motivating a teenager to do voluntary work is a posivite win-win attitude and, as result of this kind of job, community leaders could invest their effords in other important needs such as providing better heath and education structure in a feedback wheel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The problem of whether or not some countries should establish sports facilities for achieving a good range in the sports industry has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that creating a building specialised facilities is necessary for people, I claim that it would have a positive impact on the development of sports skills and keeping a healthy lifestyle for all dwellers. \r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why allocating money to sports construction is a useful decision for all countries. One of them is that sports facilities would be affordable for everyone. Sometimes people can't allow buying a subscription to a gym or activity circle. It would be a great contribution to maintaining an active lifestyle. Another cogent reason is advancing some talents among the young generation. This phenomenon could prepare sportsmen for different kinds of international competitions. For instance, according to the statistics of the Worldwide Sports Community the countries which support and promote sports buildings for citizens have special respect on a national rank. \r\n\r\nI personally believe that establishing specialised equipment is relatively positive for several reasons with the main one being that it extends longevity. In addition, the promotion and propaganda of sports objects can lead to plummeting in smoking and an addicted population. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, establishing and improving this kind of activity would lead to positive effects. Nevertheless, recognizing the importance of this irreplaceable part of social structure, it is advisable to encourage the government to be more generous to their dwellers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My warm The stars nt cloud seen As usual weekends family well friends I little girl loved everyone everything especially laughing Anyone could make laugh smile good time One person however could make laugh hours straight That person My came hang rest family friends house He talking laughing really good time Of course I five six years old time aside dad coolest person world That I playing friends really paying attention adults All sudden came gave big hug started talk I happy Since I loved joke around laugh I thrilled attention I used call laugh attacks Anytime talked I started laughing I would laugh hard I could nt stop That I one My I joking around making fun Then nowhere I realized I laughing hard stomach hurt went hour straight That long left went back adults My friend sat next tried get stop laughing She laughing much Finally long hour I got calm The rest great every often I started laugh There absolutely way I going stop giggling I went bed After long good time everyone left went home When came say goodbye I upset leaving I knew I would see The next day I right able stop laughing I still smiled hung family I nt laughing uncontrollably My still huge part life He always person make laugh forget worries Even though I nt live near anymore I still talk phone laugh joke around When I go visit seems like pick things left We nt even think fact nt seen really long time When dad passed away always He one male figure I still life After everything I ve gone I could always count brighten mood make laugh least smile People really need person like lives really help know someone loves brighten day All talk My relationship close one thing kept way laughs shared years Laughter huge part anyone s life I grown around laughter thought always happy Throughout life I deal pain loss sadness However everything I come I always come laughing When I eleven years old dad passed away At even younger age parents got divorced No matter much things hurt I never stopped laughing moving life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience patience whatever cames If dont patience somethings happen sisters firend wanting cross rode didnt want wait didnt look ways car caming ran frot got hit car She cuts rode burn took hispoteli sister mom went go see day acciecd She cut couldnt really walk She much cuts someone help walk later maybe mouth got hit went docthers kept getting really bad head acts They said something called coma atices like lilttlel coma So thats happens dont patience even something samll like crossing road patience But patience good things like story like mom told wait car windows air So I I getting really bored I get I seen guys trying open car window So I garbed cell phone went back sat gorond called They way drive way Now got cars ran guys get soon found guys guys looking I got money awared catching The money awared dollars So patience geting car got money Saved live would killed seen helped find bad guys So something patience save lifes help find bad guys never know could get patiences thats story patienes gave So always patiences", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Consider the idea of your kid visiting Venus. A planet with extreme temperatures. Your kid's effort, and bravery represents him. He was the one to step forward when the NASA asked for a volunteer to go explore Venus from closer despite the risks. All to collect information from this planet. Venus has information that would benefit human race. Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nPlanet Venus is concidered to once have been the planet most similar to Earth in our solar system. It is thought that long ago Venus had oceans which could have supported many different forms of life just like Earth. Venus still has some features similar to Earth. Including valleys, mountains and craters.Temperature is what has changed. We could say that for a planet visit someimes Venus is the closest.\n\nNASA is trying to collect information which will be benefitial. It is not easy to enter Venus and land. NASA has tried before but no spaceship has touched Venus ground it is destroyed before it gets there. Now the NASA has a possible solution which will allow scientists to float since they can't go down to Venus themselves. The temperaure, radiation is not easy but humans can survive. This will keep them 'safe' but their resorces will be limited. From above the scientits cannot take samples, even if they wanted to take pictures or videos the temperature makes it impossible.That's why the NASA\n\nhas a device made of silicon carbide which has been tested with the conditions/temperatures of Venus and it has lasted three weeks. Scientists are one step closer.\n\nIt is difficult to visit planet Venus which is now inhabitable by humans due to it's temperatures. Learning more about it is important for scientist and maybe for everyone. Substances from that planet might help human race.\n\nThings could be made from substances from that planet, things from there could influence people such as artists. Just being able to visit this planet is a big achivement for some. Thats why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist greatly First beating sun The heat dyhydrates almost kills The rocky road also factor It takes time energy preform Another key ingreedient setting desert There one help nt place get water In conclusion setting big factor story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe Facial Action Coding System is very valuable to students it helps tell where the student is confused, if they don't get any of it at all or if the student totally gets & doesn't need extra help.\n\nI think that Facial Action Coding System is important because, teachers can help students where they left off at. Some students may understand half of the assignment but not all of it & why re teach it all of it when the teacher could just help the student where the student left off. This is also very valuable because some students will say they get it but really don't so they won't look a certain type of way in front of their peers. This makes the teacher job a little bit easier & the a lot less stressful to the student, knowing the teacher knows he or she needs help without saying it out loud.\n\nThis would cause less students to fail & higher grades for sure because everyone in the classroom is getting the help that they need.\n\nThis Facial Action Coding System also is very valuable because, it lets the teacher know if the students don't even get it at all. A lot of students will not raise their hand for help, to not look like they don't get it while everyone else gets it. This Facial Action Coding System would benefit those type of kids that are shy to raise their hands in class for help. All together this would lead to much better grades for all the students for everyone in the class, it would help the teacher find new ways to explain the assignment using another method. Which is a plus for the students, this Facial Action Coding System works not only for students but for the teacher to.\n\nOne last reason i think the Facial Action Coding System is very valuable is because, it focous on the students that really need help. If one half of the class gets the assignment then the teacher doesn't need to keep going over it again if that side of the class already understand. This helps the teacher a lot becuase a teacher goal is to pass everyone in the class & by doing so help the students that need it the most. This would make school a lot less stressful.\n\nThis invention helps tell where the student is confused, if the student dosen't get any of it at all or if the student totally gets & doesn't need extra help. I think this invention is one of the best inventions we have ever came across. This invention takes so much pressure of students, they don't have to worry as much about not learning the assignment. This helps the teacher job a lot more easier the invention works hand & hand. This would for sure bring grades up if the student is willing to put in the work to learn the assignment that the teacher is teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "About twenty five years ago, NASA was taking photos of the landing site for sister ship Viking 2 on Mars. This region they were taking photos on was called Cydonia. While taking the photos, they saw a big face like structure just on the surface of Mars. NASA soon found out it wasn't a real face, but a Martian mesa. They posted the image for the public to see thinking that it was cool and interesting. The public didn't think the same though. This brought up a lot of conspiracy theorists, and people went into a small panic.\n\nI am a scientist at NASA, and I can tell you that this little rumor of the Martian mesa found on Mars being a face that aliens created can be proven wrong. The first picture ever taken of this \"face\" was very blurry, and not clear enough to really tell what it was. So, on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his team got another picture. This picture was ten times sharper (better) than the original photos. These photos proved that the \"face\" was nothing other than a land form.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, they went to see the \"face\" again, due to the public still not believing NASA. They took a extraordinary photo on this trip of the \"face\". This photo proved that even if there was a bit of haze over Mars, if there were objects in the picture, you would be able to see it very clearly.\n\nAfter twenty five years of trying to prove to many people that this \"face\" wasn't built by aliens and that it was just a natural landform, some people still don't believe NASA. There are conspiracy theorists still to this day that just don't want to believe no matter how much evidence we give to the public. Martien mesas are common around the Cydonia, and if the landform was thought to be made from aliens, then NASA would intend to figure out what to do with it and how to keep citizens safe. Why would we hide this from you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Homework provided by teachers and lecturers is a vital factor in developing children's essential skills. However, most people hold the view that teachers should not give homework to children and while others believe that homework is a crucial factor that plays a huge role in children’s education. I agree with the latter view of the argument and the reasons for this will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs will examples. \n\nTo commence with, it is true that assessing homework for children daily will make children exhausted in education because today most teachers are putting a huge pressure on subject material taught in the school time period as a repercussion offsprings come home tired. Thus, providing extra assignments or thesis for children will lead to serious consequences of children not being able to socialize with family members or friends. As an example, 35% of children refuse to go to school and learn, and they tend to drop out of school at an early age. Thus, youngsters should be given free time to relax their minds after school. \n\nOn the other hand, I believe that juveniles should be given homework because today most schools are not teaching according to the given time period and some children are not paying attention in classrooms. As an example, if it is the school sports day many children from the classroom go for sports practice thus they neglect their subject materials. Teachers providing a number of homework materials for children will not only enhance their knowledge but will refresh their skills in what was taught in class. \n\nTo conclude, although there are negative effects of providing children homework such as they do not have free time, but engaging youngsters in homework will allow them to enhance their skills in education and knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The era of development and evolution created wide opportunities for people chasing their dreams to reach them through travelling and living abroad. Thus, a significant number of citizens choose to immigrate and live far away from home, consequently leading to the separation of families and the breaking down of the bonds between them. This essay will discuss further the causes and the consequences of this aspect and gives relevant examples.\r\n\r\nTo start, the evolution made people more aware of their limits and goals leading to an increase in the rate of immigration and a significant movement toward cities where most of the reputable universities and international companies are located. In fact, students have a chance to study for free at the top international colleges if they met the required criteria, and workers might find suitable jobs with high salaries and wide opportunities for promotions. Moreover, citizens might prefer to move away from urban areas due to the lack of amenities and basics of living such as transportation and healthcare and move toward more developed areas. For instance, a recent study showed that the population in cities is increasing yearly by almost 20%.\r\n\r\nconsequently, this aspect is leading to the breakdown of families' bonds and the separation of beloved ones. For example, the usual family gatherings over weekends and holidays are becoming an old trend and disappearing gradually due to the separation of their members. In addition, it is noticed that a significant percentage of children are staying away from their parents due to educational purposes, therefore leading to the lack of a source of support and love. In fact, there is no doubt that family is the greatest blessing and is the main supporter for youngsters during their journey and their absence might result in a lack of care and confidence.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the modifications in our lifestyles made families apart from each other due to several reasons. Therefore, children might suffer from social problems as well as families' bonds are ruined gradually over time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been said that increasingly people in some countries are becoming interested in looking out about the history of the home or building they attend. This topic will describe the reasons behind this approach and explain the method of finding this informationinformation. This essay will discuss these tendencies of finding the history of the house followed by examples for its benefit on people’s psychology.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, recently, human getting more interesting in knowing small details so, having information about the house’s history contribute to filling the missing gaps in the individuals brain. It is also can utilize to explore the problems of this property which make it easier in the future to fix these issues. For instance, if they found out that these places were renovated, that can tell them it might need some other construction work. \r\n\r\nSecondly, some houses need insect treatment as they can have s ome harmful bugs like bedbugs or some other type. These bugs can cause some diseases plus it is not peaceful to have them around you. For this reason, knowing ahead of time about the department's history can save such fundamental work for the owner from being in the house without having a clue about the damage that would show up in near future. This information can be accessed by doing some web research on Google and looking up the date of building the house.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, everyone has the right to know the history of the house or department that they need to buy so knowing the right information at the right time can save people time and money for their own advantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From reading I understand difficulties building mooring dock atop structure Empire state building numerous obvious one structural stability throughout entire building Paraphrased passage tension dirigible pulling tether would cause stress building s frame another controll dirigible docking The passage explained winds empire state building would shift violently frequently Safety well issue especially Hindenburg accident New Jersey German zeplin caught fire exploded", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals consider that attending higher education is better for a successful career, while others think that entering workforce right after high school. Despite the writer contend that continuing to study is the best way for academic jobs.\n\nOn the one hand, there are several reasons why having a good job after graduation is more appealing to teenagers. First of all, they can acquire soft skills that are required by the firms. Teenagers will be more independent and enrich their life experiences. Secondly, young people do not have to obey any school rules. They had been controlled by the school’s discipline for many years, therefore, they might think that it is better for them to get a job immediately after finishing high school. \n\nOn the other hand, studying at university or college will have more opportunities to have a high-paid job. First, there are many occupations required specific professional knowledge that they have to study further for those knowledge. For instance, it is crucial that people who want to be a doctor to gain a good qualification in medical field. Secondly, a variety of firm employ people who have professional degrees more than who do not. What I mean is people who have degrees are one step further than who do not. \n\nIn conclusion, having a job after high school or continuing to study is a controversial problem in the society, that would depend on their own financial issues. If teenagers have enough ability to studying university, I think they should continue their advanced education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist ran many issues hisher travel They dismiss many hardships lack water lost immense desert heat plus minor things like snakes road conditions The setting California desert June intense hardship That lack water Though heat starting powing cyclists brain making see mirages etc The heat entire setting made cyclists travel much harder", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Overly usage of cars not only has drastically harmed the environment but humans as well. This is why many countries have now leaned towards limiting the usage of cars. It might seem absurd especially if you heavily depend on your car to get to places, but the truth is cars harm. They're killing our world and therefore they're killing us.\n\nCars release carbon monoxide into the atmosphere. If humans or any other living beings are heavily exposed to such gas they will die. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse emission in Europe...50% in the U.S\"(source1,p.5). Everytime we turn on our car engines we are harming ourselves. For small countries with little abundance of cars this might not be alarming at all. For huge economic countries such as the United States and France, car abundance is a serious deal. \"Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France\"(source2,p.14). The more abundant cars are the faster we are deteriorating ourselves. Cars cause broken acidents, broken highways, and heavy traffic, which leads to...acidents. Either way cars cause death so we might as well not have them at all. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Getting on a car is dangerous from whichever way you look at it. There's either angry drivers, drunk drivers, crazy drivers, and you're emitting monoxide gas. A world without cars is like our own little \"world peace\".\n\nNo cars would mean more space, simple as that. \"Parks and sports centers would bloom\"(source3,p.28). People would have more places to visit and spend time with family and friends. \"Restaurants and shopping districts have cropped\"(source3, p. 28). We woulld have safer and prettier landscapes. A healthy yet fun world.\"Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\"(source4, p.43). Many cars lead to heavy traffic which causes people to freak out and speed. No cars would mean that people would begin finding local jobs. Jobs that they could go by walking, riding a bike, etc. We would be healthier because at the same time we are exercising, and keeping our air clean. Having less cars is better for us in any way you look at it.\n\nLimiting car usage means we would have a safer environment to live in. There would be more space for fun recreational areas. And our lives would be less at stake. Our bodies would be healthier as well as the world that we live in. Limiting cars sets better steps for the next generations to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is just another landform that was formed naturally. Many landforms that occur on planets are formed naturally. The first pictures that were taken of the natural landform were very blurry due to the bad quality of the cameras 30 years ago. But in 2001, the quality of the land form was better and it wasn't a face at all, but rather a natural landform.\n\nFirst, the \"Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens. The landform is 2 miles in length. To build something as massive as that and it be made from the same material of the planet itself is absurd. It wouldv'e taken a long time and the face would really look like a face. With the highest quality photo that was taken in 2001, it is clearly seen that there is no face and it is just another natural land form with bumps on it.\n\nSecond, the \"Face\" is just another naturally forming landform. It is a landform that is called a mesa because it is really steep. There are many mesas on Earth and are naturally forming. Because of their massive size, they can't be formed any other way. There are also many strange formations on Earth but they couldn't have been created by aliens either because natural landforms are, for the most part, massive and can't be changed.\n\nThird, movies, books, magazines, and newspapers that claim that the \"Face\" was created by aliens are either fictional or don't have any proof. Movies that are made about this landform and how it was made by aliens is fake becuase there is no scientific proof that it was made by aliens. The movies are usually fiction and are trying to make money off of a hot topic that most of the audience is interested in. Books, magazines, and newspapers try to make the impossible sound real without any proof of there actually being aliens. Making the possible sound real is just another marketing strategy for companies to sell their products to people that believe in whatever they are told.\n\nIn conclusion, aliens did not make the mesa on Mars. Aliens are just used as an excuse for publishers and directors to get money off of people that believe in aliens. Mesas are huge landmarks that are formed naturally, which is just what the supposed \"Face\" is. If there were aliens that really wanted to create a face, they would created the face in musch more detail than just bumps along a mesa. Also, an aliens face would be very unlikely to look just like a human face. In the end, people that say that the mesa is actually a face have no scientific and factual proof to back it up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author chose conclude last paragraph story show given It shows given says overhead geese honk familiar Saeng second last paragraph buys hibiscus holds many memories home keep going Her mother still making omelet slices bitter melon made math water reminding home gave hope give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education plays a fundamental role in the growth years of shaping a child during their high school years. While some believe that students should have the liberty to offer criticisms of the teachers and a few debate that such action may give way to discipline and disrespect for teachers. In this essay we will discuss both views however in my opinion being disrespectful to teachers and offering criticisms can affect their moral values and disrupt their personalities.\r\n\r\nHigh school years are building blocks for children where along with education other attributes such as honesty, respect, love & care are taught to children. This helps them to be a better person and citizens in future, incorporating or encouraging children to criticise their teachers in class would contradict the values taught to them. They would replicate the same behaviour elsewhere, enabling them to differentiate when to draw a line. For instance, a child constantly sharing remarks on the teacher would leave the teacher agitated, enabling her to focus on the curriculum for the class, making the rest of the students suffer too.\r\n\r\nTeachers play a very important role in building and shaping a child not only intellectually but also shaping their behaviours too. They look up to their teachers as role models and reach out to them during doubts or any discomforts they have. For example, Children spend a lot of time in school, where discipline and adherence to rules are conveyed by teachers, children will follow rules only if they respect and love teachers.\r\n\r\nTo summarize, the relationship between a teacher and student is very crucial, they act like building blocks for their growth years, allowing children to back answer and criticise them in an open forum can put an adverse effect on their minds hence such behaviour must not be encouraged.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist doubt lessen chances survival cyclist determined survives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the passage I came to the conclusion that some ways I think it's not valueble . FACS would be a smart tool for case workers or counslers . Some case workers deal with people who have emotion diseases such as post dramaic stress diseases in that nature . I feel like the creator could've made the tool for more serious reason, not that the emotion FACS was pointless but who would want to just find out their emotion and they can already feel it or going through it.\n\nI feel like people would want to find out things more important like , whats going with that person , is the person feeling sick , is the person healthy . FACS could been about how's the day going to go , whats the weather going to be like . I feel like FACS is all hype in some way because it's basic , like yay we can see how we feel right?\n\nThey took all this time and objects figure how someones doing or feelings , instead of how we're living . Anyone can figure out someone's emotion expresses by their body language , their tone , how their speaking , when their speaking and etc. Often people may not want to speak on how they feel , alot of times teens want to keep their problems and emotions to them selves. Students are diffrent from adults, and also handle emotions diffrently.\n\nFACS would be valueble if they come with conclusions to that person emotion at the time , plenty of ways technology can do things. If the FACS were a solution to a person with a bad day it would be valueble. Due to the fact their making this like it's a cool invention when FACS is exposing peoples feelings and then wat after that? I feel like the FACS should be upgraded and do more with it .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To start builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Many obstacles delt dirigible For example dirigible highly unsafe flammable s When German dirigible destroyed fire New Jersey May realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York Another obstacle builders faced nature The winds constantly shifting due violent air currents It would highley dangerous dirigible fly close mooring mast winds like Also dirigibles could fly near Empire State Building due existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building approach area Al Smith s dream make Empire State Building suitable transportation sometimes dreams nt always go threw", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it is unfortunate that today, juveniles find it daunting to focus on their study in school. This phenomenon has manifold responsible factors nevertheless can be mitigated with certain rigid actions. \n\nThere are numerous reasons why children are not concentrate on school study. To begin with, children cannot feel fresh and active because, cause of sleep deprivation. According to new research it is happen along increasing technology they live in satured culture where everyone rely on technology. For instance, children spend more time on play video games, facebook and WhatsApp use for communication with their friends. \n\nThere are also other causes of this situation. Children are not able to cope up with though academic competition then they do not take interest in their study. Moreover, they cannot study in noisy atmosphere and in school they district to activities of other learners. What is more, such children affected by medical condition such as attention deficit disorder. \n\nThere are certain solution to alleviate this complication. Initially, parents and teacher ought to learn to be responsible and they should help student in studies. Along with this, children need break after 30 minutes therefore, they do concentrate on their study in better way and not feel dull. Besides of this, teacher must be give school work in limit and easy. Additionally, parents should try that their children gets at least eight hours uninterrupted sleep and they should talk with their children doctor and have a routine physical performance. \n\nTo concluded, children of this contemporary society have many distrations on account of which they find it challenging to concentrate at school, this can be dealt with very nicely by combined efforts of parents and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am all for Thomas Huang new invation. I think that the FACS is a grate invation we finaly have a way to see how people are feeling just by this computer. How this device works is that the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, then studys all 44 major muscles. Moving one or more mucsles is called an action unit. After that Dr. Huang relies on Dr. Pual Eckman, the creator of FACS to find out how the preson is feeling.\n\nThe FACS software can track facial movements even if your not smiling as broadly. Just when you think that is all it can do it can also identify mixed emotions each exspession is compared to a nertarl face showing on emotion. We humans can also do this, but we would have trouble describing each facial trait. Dr. Huang wants to do a test on Mona Lsa to see if she is really smiling or not. There going to use the software to see if it can tell use if she is or not.\n\nas you can see this software is a grate tool i can see this devise helping use out a lot in the futer. If you are interested in doing this then go look at your self and then ask your partner if he or she knows what your feeling right now. I fell like we should have more people like Dr. Huang, and Dr Paul Eckman cuase the world is changing and we need to try to keep up and not fall be hind. Life is a intresting thing and what you do with it is all up to you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive author concludes story paragraph She wanted reader know failed doesnt mean lifes She requperate thing next year", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of having driverless cars is quite the phenomonon. Not having to touch the wheel of brake or even look out the windows of the car. This is all very possible in the next ten years or so. The problem that lies within this idea is, how safe will the cars truely be? you can only trust techonology so much before it will fail on you and people could die. I think it is a geat idea if we could get them to be where there would be no wrecks or accidents involving them.\n\nThese cars copuld be a major blessing or a dreadful curse to humans. A lot of humans already hate driving in the first place, would they even listen to the car telling them that they need to take over the wheel. It all seems like such a lot of time and money to do so. The world is working perfectly fine without driverless cars. Nothing is more trustworthy than the human hand itself. Creating new laws to accompany the liability of the wrecks and all the lawsuits that would be filed if someone were to be injured or even killed in a wreck involving a driverless car. A lot of manufactureres woiuld be going out of business because of the fines that would be put on them. Its not as small a deal as forgetting a screw that could cause damage, you could end someones life becasue of one tiny mistake.\n\nIt is a good idea and all but the amount of work that would have to be put in is immense. The lives that would be lost or the people that could be hurt is not worth the luxury of being driven by your own car. Some people disagreee, they will most likely change their mind when they realize how catastrophic driverless cars really are. Besides, right now, the so called \"driverless cars\" still need a driver in many situations becasue of difficult road conditions that the car cannot evaluate quick enough to maneuver around. All in all, driving isn not too terrible w-to where we would need to risk someone elses life because we did not want to drive. Driving is fine and I am sure people can deal with that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is very challenging to the people who want to make venus a place we can call home. Many reaserchers or people who study Venus will be testing out materials that can last long for it not to melt or break down into parts, when they try to make it to Venus. and of course it wont be very easy because of the conditions, but can be survivable to human. My three reasons for this is the tempeture, conditions and how the materials will last long enough to survive these conditions. and of course there are pro and cons to this challenge.\n\nWhen you try to get to Venus it will be a little hot. the good thing is that we can survive that, maybe not for some of use. The bad thing is that if the spaceship breaks down into parts then we all die. That's why we need to make sure that the ship is good. \"at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on earth\". This to me is very shocking becuase the \"air pressure would be close to sea level on earth\". (paragraph 5). This would support becuase of high the temp is.\n\nThe conditions for this can be very risky becuase you never know wwhat might happen when you get close to the atmosphere. The atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Anything could happen, it can be unexpected. Some small machine that have ben been on venus and only lasted for a while. \" Image of a bimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\".(para 5) This woulld support because NASA has been doing things and discover on what is on Venus.\n\nmy other reason is the conditions. the materials can effect the conditios of the spaceship. in world war II they also used computers to help them make the things to", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I had so much fun being in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I would tell anyone to try it, and I am going to tell you why it is such a great thing to do.\n\nFirst, you get to help others in need. It was felt amazing being able to help those who were hurt in the war. I also got to visit beautiful Europe and China. It was unbelieveable too seing the Acropolis in Greece. Taking a gondola ride over wonderful Venice, Italy was breathtaking. I also had a tour through a castle, how great is that? I was also marveled by the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nIf you enjoy animals, you'd love this job. While on the two week trip crossing the Atlantic, the animals kept me very busy. I got to feed and give water to them about two or three times a day. But, stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nIt was always fun on board, especially on return trips because I got to play baseball and volleyball, which were held in the empty animal holds. We did many other activities, like table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games.\n\nMainly, this experience made me more aware of people of other countries. This awareness even lead to my family generously hosting some international exchange students.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys is an amazing program. There a many reasons why I believe this, and I tried to list most of them. If you do not try this fun, great, wonderful thing, then you're missing out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming more popular to think about, lots of states don't let you even test a car that is computer-operated, but in some places, such as California, Nevada, Florida, and the district of Columbia allow some use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nDriverless cars are not safe, they are run by technology that can always fail at any point in time. They are also not always going to insure your own safety. Since it was never you driving the car yourself, how is it your fault that you were in an accident in the car? wouldn't it be the maker of the car's fault since they were supposed to insure that you were supposed to be driven somewhere safetly? This type of problem would surely become an issue between makers and consumers of the Driverless cars.\n\nSome cars can alert the \"driver\" when their is a poblem on the road and they may need to take over driving, but over time as more cars develope and ideas develope and become reality, the skills to driving manually would soon be forgotten. New young drivers would never of learned how to truely drive, and being in a bad enough situation that the car can't drive for them would be a difficult task for someone who hasn't even driven on a normal road that often, this would result in many accidents. Driverless cars may prevent accidents such as people texting while drivng or being intoxicated, but would not fully insure their safety, and would become a bigger problem for more than just the drivers of an accident.\n\nYou may be for driverless cars, so you can get your work done on your way to school or to your job, even eating breakfast or lunch on the way to a place. but would you be willing to put your safety, your life, in the hands of technology? are you willing to trust that you wil be completely safe? and if it were to fail you, who would you blame? yourself or the person who created the cars? I believe safety is a big issue with these ideas for cars, and how accidents may become more difficult to handle than they are now, so these cars should not be made or be allowed to be used unless they are proven to be safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been in use ever since World War II. Yet, more and more people have been limiting their usage of cars. Many take the alternative of bikes or buses, which ultimately creates benefits for not only one's self, but as well as all of the other people within the area. The benefits of limiting car usage are lowering pollution, creating less road and city congestion, and stress relief.\n\nFirst of all, people have known for years that cars are a large source of air pollution. However, what most don't know is that \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car intensive area in the United States\" (Rosenthal, Elizabeth Paragraph 5). \"Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions\" (Duffer, Robert Paragraph 15). Therefore, not only do the car emissions go into the atmosphere, but it gets trapped there, so the more cars being used, the more emissions get built up and added. By limiting the usage of cars, the car emissions in the atmosphere that create air pollution can be reduced.\n\nSecondly, many big cities have to deal with cars and traffic congesting the area. \"BOGOTA, Colombia-In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\" (Selsky, Andrew Paragraph 20). This allowed more room for people to move along the roads and without having to worry of being hit by a car. \"Rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic\" (Selsky, Andrew Paragraph 28). In doing so has allowed for pedestrians to be safer when crossing roads. A benefit in which prevents a hospital bill.\n\nLastly, stress relief can come from limiting the usage of cars, including relieving stress. \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked the verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor\" (Rosenthal, Elizabeth Paragraph 3). Heidrun isn't the only one who agrees that life without a car is less stressful. \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife\" (Selsky, Andrew Paragraph 24). Arturo and his wife were participants of the Colombian car-free day program. When you live a stressless life, it is proven that you can live longer, especially when replacing your car with exercise.\n\nIn conclusion, the benefits that come with limiting car usage are a healthier world. One, by replacing your car with exercise and relieving stress. Two, by lessening road accidents. Three, by lessening air pollution, which is not only better for the environment, but yourself. By limiting car usage, all of the benefits work out in your personal favor.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is my belief that the author has done a good job of suporting his claim that we should study Venus even with the present dangers. From the article I read I have three pieces of evidence from the text that will now support my claim.\n\nIn the first paragraph, lines 1-2, it is stated that Venus is oftencalled Earth's twin. this would be a major reason to study it, so we know what to do with it if we need to use it. It was also said in the same paragraph and lines that Earth is the same Density and Size of Earth, therefore it would be a good planet to study so we can learn more about planets that share sizes.\n\nAnother piece of evidence I have from the text is from paragraph 4, lines 3-5, \"...It [Venus] may well once have been the most Earth-like planet on out solar system.\" That would be a major reason to study this planet, later in that paragraph it goes on to say how it may have had been covered in oceans and wildlife like Eath. Why wouldn't we study it.\n\nThat is why I belive the author did an excellent job of supporting his own claim that we should be studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I think having a Facial Action Coding System in schools would benifit them? I believe having a Facial Action Coding System in the class room would be both a good idea and a bad idea and heres why. The upside to the system from my stand point, would be that you would be able to know the emotional satus of the student which could in turn help the student out greatly. Lets say a student is having trouble at home and they're\n\nexperiencing depression because their parents are spliting up or whatever the reason may be. The teachers or school officials will be able to see that the student is depressed, and could then maybe ask the student whats going on and offer them the support if they want someone to talk to about whatever may be effecting them in their life. The teacher could take a huge amount of stress off the students back or help the student understand what to do or help the student with the heartache if they decided to talk. This could make the student feel better about the situation and keep the student from feeling lonely, like no one cares, or keep them from thinging that hurting themselves would be a way to solve the situation. Another upside would be if a student was getting angery and was going to do something like get in a fight then teachers or school officials would possibly have the chance to detect the anger and calm the stuation before it caused any type of problem. Teachers would also be able to detect fear which could possibly lead to being able to easily detect when a student is lying.\n\nNow lets move to the downsides, sure it would be great to be able to detect a students emotion but it could also present problems. Lets go back to the depressed student whos parents just split up or whatever the case might be, if the teacher detects that the student is depressed or sad and trys to talk to them, sure it could help but it coul also just make the matter worse. If the student is depressed and the teacher approaches them and brings up the question of why hes depressed and asked if he needs help, the student may then become embarrased and refuse help. If the student then refuses help and feels embarrassed it may lead to deeper depression and may cause him to take harmful steps or something of that nature to \"feel better\". The student could also tell his parents that the teacher was attempting to \"pry\" an answer out of them as to why they were feeling sad or depressed which could cause alot of problems between the family and the teacher and could in turn cause unneeded violance or drama. Not that this is really a negitive affect but it could get students in trouble for alot of diffrent reasons such as maybe a student dosent have their homework done and they tell the eacher they forgot it at home hoping\n\nmaybe they would say just to make sure its here tomorrow. The machine may show the student being nurvious which could bring the teacher to asume maybe the student is lying even if they may not be. It may not be a bad thing since it would possibly catch a student lying but what if the student was being truthful and the teacher acused them of lying.\n\nThe way i see it the system has many advantages but at the same time has many disadvantages but if I had to choose a side, honestly i might have to go with no it would not make a postive impact having the system in the classroom. From my personal stand point I just believe that it would cause more conflict then it would soultions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the electoral college should be changed and be ended oncce and for all.\n\nI think that the electoral college is a certain way of cheating in a presidency that you dont want to win. When people in the states vote for a new president they're giving all of they're votes to the electors. This is one of the biggest reasons I think its not fair. They're trusting the elecotrs with all of they're votes when they dont even know who the electors will vote for.\n\nAlmost nobody in the states even know's who the electors are. Why should everyone be putting they're trust with votes into people they dont know? Even when I read the passage I saw that the electors could possibly get confused and vote the wrong way and if many of them end up doing that you can ultimately end up with the wrong president.\n\nAnother big flaw that the electoral college consists of is what if it does end up getting a tie? then we would have to pass it all onto the House of Represenatives. If the house of rep, end up picking the wrong president, it could be even worse. I'm personally not into politics but I can already tell that if I was I would hate the electoral college, I dont even understand how you couldn't.\n\nThe electoral college I feel is something that first started out helping the elections for when it was first created but has changed massively over time, and it hasn't changed in a good way at all. It's almost as if our own american citizens can pick they're president. We have to leave that all up to our electors, which I dont this is FAIR at all to all our voters.\n\nIf it wasn't for our electoral college, we would've never had George W. Bush as are president. He didn't even get the most votes! but since our electoral college can vote for whoever he ended up winning anyways. I think this topic is obviously a one sided question cause there's obviously a right answer here. Abolish the electoral college!\n\nThank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sometimes electoral vote elects the right president sometimes. But knowing u can have more individual votes than the other canidate and lose to that person all because they have more electoral votes sounds wrong.\n\n2000 election biggest presidecial controversity since 1888. Al Gore vs. George W. Bush 2000 election Al wins majority individual votes but Bush wins since he had majority electoral votes(271 to 266).many people beleive the electoral colledge should be demolished because the people are supposed to vote for the person they want for president not the state.\n\n538 is the number of electoral votes. But only 270 is needed to automatically become the president. The problem is there are states with 3 and there are states with 20 it seems unfair to some states because they may be small compaired to some states but isn't fair if we just abolish the electoral colledge. it gives the people what they want and it puts the right president in charge.\n\nIts a great idea to abolish the electoral colledge it makes the people happy and if we make a wrong choice its are fault we can deal with it we've been through way worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are swiftly becoming a viable possibility for the near future. They are capable of outperforming many human drivers, as well as being able to return control to the driver in the case of a more complex situation that requires more thought than the car can handle. This duality is the main factor that makes self-driving cars appear to be a good plan for the future of transportation. The car is manageable and not overriding the human input, and yet it still mantains a feeling of helpfulness and convenience.\n\nWhen it comes to transport automation, control over the process, and the ability to halt or override it, is a chief concern. A system that controls itself and denies all outside input cannot sustain itself for long. That is why, to quote the passage, \"Google cars are not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" In short, the car is not perfect, and therefore has to fall back on the driver's help in some situations. This prevents crashes due to the car's incapability to surpass a unique situation on the road, as well as promoting driver awareness even when the car is operating itself. By doing this, the self-driving car model itself promotes safety and good road etiquette.\n\nWhile the car may not be able to do everything a human driver can, it has proven to be much better at the tasks it can do than an average driver. The cars provide \"far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This can be coupled with the fact that these vehicles are being constantly upgraded in order to allow for \"more and more [automated] driving tasks.\" Perhaps in the future there will come a car that is capable of doing every driver task there is, leaving the driver to sit back and relax.\n\nIn conclusion, while the industry has yet to truly take off, self-driving cars are a definite viability for the future of human transport. They provide comfort in the fact that you are in control, and they also perform better than most human drivers would on average. Overall, they promote a higher level of altertness and safety than the average modern vehicle. These facts together provide a strong argument in favor of the autonomous, or self-driving, cars of tomorrow.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Nick D'Alto's writing of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" he talks about a computer software, developed by Thomas Huang, that can detect spacific muscle movements in order to identify diffrent emotions. Nick argues that this technology will be revolutionary to many aspects of life, such as education, film and video tech careers, and maybe even politics. I believe that this advancement should not be implamented into a school enviorment for three key reasons, it is an invasion of privacy, it doesn't provide any academic assistance, andI don't respect the idea of robbing next generations the right to interact with an actual human teacher at such a young age. For these three reasons I plan to despute why I disagree with Nick D'Alto about implameting this kind of software into education.\n\nFirst, I disagree with Nicks idea because its an invation of privacy. Imagen that you were in elementary school again and this tech was installed. You would go through the day with this unconfortable sensation that you are constantly being watched but whats even worse is that your thaughts are also being monetered. imagen your children in this situation. This would then lead on to teaching them that they shoulden't produce thaughts or emotions on there own even if they were negative thaughts.\n\nSecond, I disagree because there is no academic assistance that this technolagy would assists students there for it is not nessasary. This tech dosen't provides instructions or academic reasoning it just reads emotions.\n\nThird, I don't agree with D'Alto's claim because I don't respect the idea of robbing next generations the right to interact with an actual human teachers. If we allowed this tech we would deprive human contact from kids at such a young age. Because kids brains are like sponges at such a young age we shove so much information at such a young age that if we take human conntact away they would become socialy deprived of that connection to humans so thats why I believe we should not implament this tech into education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The question has been brought up: what is the best way to achieve a delightful career? Is either getting a bachelor's degree at university or college after school? Or getting a job right after senior high? In my opinion, both options have benefits, and both could be useful in its own way.\n\nOn the one hand, some believe the best way to get a good job is by studying at a university or college. Because you will have a higher education on your resume, and that is what companies are most looking at when you graduate. Also, in the university, you can choose the most interesting major and learn; thus, you know what you want to do in the future. The environment around you is also a key to helping you be successful in a future career. Going to a well-known college will get you in touch with more people who can help you to achieve a better career and more chances to get a good job. \n\nOn the other hand, some believe getting a job right after school is a better plan for achievement. Some people might know their career in high school, such as working in the fashion industry, where you don’t need as much academic knowledge as others so that they can pursue their dream right after. Moreover, you can earn your salary earlier in life, so you don’t have to spend lots of tuition on school. Going to work right after can also help you to adapt to social life faster.\n\nThe path to accomplishment is not a single railway. You can get a higher education by going to university or going straight to work after secondary school as long as you know your goal. I believe there are many ways to succeed, and it all depends on your own will and what is best for each individual.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "my mind on driverless cars are not good at ll heres why. dangerous cars could reck them selfs and or loose connection and crash. or inter fear a connection with another meachien and crash. so what i think is the people should drive them selves and pay attention to the road. not have a computer or a connection to help you on the road. yes it might be better and a hole lot safer but not a good way for transpertaion thers nothing wrong with the people trying it but it just might not be a good idea because when some people use these cars they could get there alot faster and for people not to fall asleep at the wheel because if they are not driveing and the car it self is they could pass out or just go to sleep and then the car crashes but how would the car know how to turn or stop at a red light and know when to go when it is green but dont let your kidas get to it or unless they have a free ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless car may sound amazing to most people, but to others it has trouble written all over it. Little do people know that using a driverless car can be dangerous, scary, and cause people to become even more lazy than what they are now.\n\nThis new technology can be dangerous for human use , because if the technology starts to mess up the human can get hurt or possiblie killed. Also the biggest question is if an accident were to occur whose to blame for it. In the text it states \" if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer?\" This means that accident cases will take longer and will be much harder to solve. Plus on top of all of that we will have to come up with a whole lot of new laws.\n\nNot only would this be dangerous , but it would be scary for the human driver. Like when it is the humans turn to drive how will they know if they have full control over the car. Even on top of all of that how will the human driver know when there is an accident waiting around the corner. Situations like that can pop up at any time andthe driver might not be ready for them , because they are to relaxed and are being driven around.\n\nIn additon to that this type of thing will cause a person to become more lazy. Driving is already a lazy way to get to where you need to go , so way make it any lazier than what it already is. A driverless car can get people to comtable , and they wouldn't be alert at all , because they would be bored and would probably fall a sleep at the wheel. Then when there is a time for the human to take over they won't be ready for it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, also known as autonomous cars are dreams from the future. We have all seen them in movies. Today's innovations are begining to make autonomous cars a tangible concept. In fact,they are already being designed. Driverless cars have been imagined since the General Motor's concept car. The first autonomous cars were driven by radio signals and magnets, but these things proved to be too impractical. The development of futuristic cars are a contraversial topic. I believe that driverless cars should be developed because they are gas-efficient, time-saving, and safer\n\nDriverless cars save time. During the time spent driving, someone could be doing their homework, or reading a book. Drivers can continue their daily life by drinking morning coffee or eating breakfast. Drivers would not need to be alert and focused on the street when their attention could be better used elsewhere. Instead of the time spent driving they could manage their time. For example, on a roadtrip, the mom could be preparing dinner instead of driving. Instead of driving an EMT could already be working on an inured person. This time would allow faster medical attention and save lives. These concepts are entirely possible with future innovations. However, is still room for improvement. Cars still require human assistance to navigate through tricky areas. GM vibrates the seat and Google simply announces it.\n\nWhich brings us to our next topic, gas. Gas is an unrenewable resource, meaning once it is depleted, it is gone forever. Sergey Brin says that the new driverless car will use half of the fuel of a modern day taxi. These cars could change the world. If we consume less fuel, as a result, the fuel will last longer. This will also reduce emissions and pollution. With pollution reduced, the effects of global warming will also be reduced, preserving endangered animals. Autonomous cars would allow for time for scientists to search for a new sources of fuel. Driverless cars are also more flexible than buses.\n\nSome people may argue that driverless cars are dangerous. If the car were to malfunction and the passenger is unable to assist, it could result in a crash. The liability is huge, for on whom would the blame be placed? Once a perfected model of a driverless car emerges, this danger is eliminated. Many accidents are made while the driver is texting, or under the influence. Many driver's get distracted. With autonomous cars, these factors do not matter. The car will safely navigate you to your destination no matter what you are doing. Automatic functions have already prevented numerous accidents. Antilock breaks detect danger and prevent uncontrollable skids or rollovers.\n\nMaps, sensors, computers, and radars, are Innovations we did not have in 2000. At the rate we are learning and inventing new things, driverlesscars will be here in no time. BMW's \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" can already steer, accelerate,and brake themselves. I support the development of autonomous cars, because they are time-saving, pollution-reducing, and safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One main feature setting affects cyclist heat day If ride bike heat day going use lot water Another factor limited supply water The final factor wrong directions aged men Aged people arent always wrong info Can date", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood created author memoir happy remember important peoples life poor house lives first birthday different kind people place family live grateful everything parents gived little boy education parents give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the information the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" covers, this advancement in technology seems extremely unnecessary and could potentially have negative effects even with the good intentions behind it. As far as what is explained in this article the only benefit to this technology is that computers will know what you are feeling, and the question that needs to be asked is; do we really want them to? Secondly, there was no mention of how much this kind of technology costs or if it would even be plausible for it to be in a classroom setting. Lastly, why is it be necessary for a computer to overtake yet another aspect of a teacher's job of human interaction and communication. Technology being able to read emotional expressions in the classroom sounds wildly ludicrous in terms of use, cost, and personal connections\n\nAlthough all seems harmless on the forefront of this idea, the side effects could turn very sour very quick. Nick D' Alto says \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad.\" The author of this article talks of how it will improve ad placements by whether you smile or frown, however I know for a fact social medias, especially Facebook, are already basing information on preferable ads by just what material you look at. Why is it necessary for a program to constantly scan our face just to see if we like something or not? This gives the computer so much power of constantly knowing what your exact emotions are on everything. It is just so unnecessary that it causes one to question why in the world would we risk giving computers that kind of power. Also, is it appropiate to constantly scan childrens' faces as they are trying to learn? Would there be a security system in place or parental agreement necessary that would allow the permission of constant invasion of privacy in the name of education? There are many ethical questions and unknown future outlooks that one would not want to subject children to that sort of test of safety and security.\n\nHowever if this technology was to be used in a classroom, the next question is of course the cost of such a new computer process. All computers would have to have facial recognition in their system and although there is no mention of cost in the article one can imagine that this new technology is not cheap. Is it realistic to expect that schools will pay great amounts of tax payers dollars just so that we can invade the privacy of our children to figure out if they are bored? It seems much more financially sound to not steal the jobs of millions of teachers and let them get to know their students, opposed to scanning their face.\n\nTeachers are necessary in the classroom not only to impart knowledge but also to make those personal connections that tell them how to best teach their kids. Every student is different, learns a different way and reacts differently to every aspect of the classroom. The article says a computer will be able to detect if a student is bored, but teachers have that ability already, minus the cost and invasion of privacy. Teachers are in the classroom so that they can make those personal connections with each student and ensure that they are doing everything they can to provide the best education possible. If a computer detects boredom it will just try another lesson without knowing what is best for the student. So the question that needs to be asked is why would this sort of technology be useful in the classroom?\n\nIn conclusion technology that scans your face to read your emotions has too many ethical questions, financial problems, and no personal connections for this computer process to be acceptable in the classroom. Although this advancement is impressive, the classroom setting is most definitely not the right place for this type of computer process.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It shows time doubt overcome In story plant showed hope showing gave hope All memories recalled made sad first end gave hope", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is one of the new technologies of this century that is very complex and futuristic. It uses algorithims and muscle knowledge to discern the emotion of people in reality, photos, and other facial sources as well. The system can calculate how much you're happy, sad, suprised, and angry. Knowing other people's emotions is a great tool and can be used in many different situations. This new technology is good for a lot of things, and being used in a classroom is one of them.\n\nStudents need to be focused and engaged at all times in the classroom because if they are neither engaged, nor focused then they will struggle with learning new things and excelling in and out of the classroom. A computer in a class constantly scanning students' faces could become a distraction, but it would solve more problems than it could create. These days students are more vulnerable to distractions, and there are a lot of uncontrollable factors they are standing against. Some do not get enough sleep, some do not get enough to eat, and some do not have good health, whether that be mentally, socially, emotionally, or physically. These factors can take a toll on their ability to focus and be receptive to new information being taught in the classroom. They easily can become \"confused or bored\"(D'alto 6) or even distracted in a class, but if there was a way to track the behaviors that coincide with those emotions then it would be easier to assist the students. With the computer scanning their faces students emotions would be much more clear, and, as D'alto said in paragraph 6, the needed adjustments could be made to help students pay attention so they can learn.\n\nMany teachers find it hard to keep their lesson plans exciting and engaging because of their lack of resources, but with this computer it would be easy to recieve real feedback from students emotions on what they like and dislike. Moreover, even though the computer might present itself as a distraction in the beginning over time it would become a useful tool for the classroom, and be a huge asset for both students and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. In paragraph 4 he says that \"Astronomers were fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered in largely with oceans and it could have suppported various forms of life, just like Earth\". He then proceeds to explain that Venus has some similarities to Earth which would be valleys, mountains, and craters\" In this paragraph he tells us that Venus has the same similarities that planet Earth has.\n\nIn paragraph 5 he proceeds to tell us that \"tempertaturess would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" In this sentence he is telling us that the conditions to explore Venus would be pretty risky but it would be a little safe for a scientist to explore and research on since its survival for humans.\n\nIn paragraph 6 he says \"researchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas,or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\". In this sentence he is telling us that if a scientist wants to research or take samples from rocks, gasses, or anything else he/she will need to personaly research Venus despite the risks. it is safe and not safe to explore Venus due to the risks of danger but also because many people could end up injured due to the dangers it presents but since the author says that the human curiosity will likely lead them to many equal intimidation it wouldn't stop them from researching the planet even tho it's risky and dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "dinners ready okay mom one second click click click Are hearing children usual Well need listen upcoming message We believe children adults spending much time laptops computers They re exercising enjoying nature interacting family problems could lead begger problems already taken affect like financial problem depression So keep reading think hear could happened huge thing worry kids computer outside Ever day I see nephew computers I see getting fatler fatts every day Studies shown children adults facebook myspace account gaim pounds every moths If re even hours day ll gain pounds every month Sooner later state going level people obesy This could lead loss jobs laziness When people spend time facebook myspace could lose job s More state citizens facebook myspace So people addicted re spend time thatn steff jobs So ll get firm one ca nt pay bills loans mortage This tead depression Depression state even country People losing jobs left right cause computers internets People even comiting climer like murded even attemps suicide cause loss jobs family members Some people even addicted internets girths new born family member This depression needs stop So fight right stop addiction internet use live great life Drop computer sead book meet friends family keep jobs Do nt let reson come life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article Unmasking the face on Mars, people were debating if the face was made by natural causes or if it was made by aliens. Some people thought the aliens made a monument like the Egyptian used to. In the article it states \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" \"A few days later NASA unveiled the picture for all to see. The captio noted huge rock formation which resembales a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The picture actually shows is the Martian equivlent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. So in the end the human face was not actually made by aliens making a monument it was made by natural causes. The human face remnds people most of Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Under the development of sophisticated advanced technology, some higher education institutions can provide courses learned through the internet instead of traditional classrooms. In my point of view, this trend would create several benefits but there would be some drawbacks arising.\nOn the other hand, attending indirectly interactive courses is immeasurably beneficial to both professors and students. In other words, online courses bring so a wealth of convenience to learners since they enable students to save their quality time and finance as well. To be more specific, students can take part in any courses that they are interested in regardless of geographical distance or travel cost, which helps to reduce various burdens and enhance the gross enrollment rate significantly due to this flexibility. In contrast, a fixed curriculum in traditional classes makes students arrange their time and own schedule passively, which can limit their time management skills. In Vietnam, for instance, during the quarantine, online classes offered to students enable them to acquire knowledge sufficiently in safety without any time pressure or extravagant price of traveling.\nOn the other hand, there are also compelling reasons why this trend may bring some disadvantages. To start with, students may lose face to face interaction in unsociable learning hours, which can lead to non-comprehensive development in several immensely essential skills including interpersonal and communicative ones. Therefore, students are not able to be well-equipped in seeking jobs in the future which can affect career path negatively. Also, without competitiveness among peers, learners can easily lose the drive to try their best in order to have their desired academic results. An illustration of this is that, in some local high schools in my hometown, students usually have better performance at school compared to the online courses.\nIn conclusion, e-learning can bring so many pros to learners. Nevertheless, the downsides would emerge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph Saeng feels like right time take driving test hibiscus budding And another reason would authors wants show determination", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe that the masked face was made by aliens. I believe that in a varety of reasons.\n\nFirst, if aliens built the face then NASA would have found where the living area was and they absoulutely did not see any people on Mars. Unfortunetly they did not find living organims living on Mars. Wind is always blowing on Mars so that doesn't mean that aliens made it.\n\nAccording to the text is states that there are multiple landforms on Earth just like the one on Mars. They When NASA took a picturee that was three times bigger they saw that there were objects that looked like airplanes on the ground or Egytptian - style pyramids or even small shacks. The article states that landforms ae common around the American West. Garvin states that' It reminds him most of the Middle Butte i the Snake River PLain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that tkaes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nThen many peope around the world were waiting to see the Face on Mars on TV, but when they saw the picture nobody believed that the face was created by aliens. As it states in the article \" As a rule of thunb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size.\" Sometimes when you take a picture, the picture might add adjustments to the photo to make it look more realistic.\n\nThere are many places aroudn the world that has matured over time due to landforms. The Grand Canyon, Rivers, Volcanoes, and high pieces of land that look like animals are all examples of things that cahnge over time due to the changing of the Earth. People aren't the only things that make mountains, rivers, and canals most features of the world come from landforms that change over long periods of time.\n\nIn the article the Face on Mars changes in a couple of weeks adn that is due to the changing of Mars. The turning of the planets is also another reason of how landforns change. When it is cold, the freezing tmperatures can cause things to ctack adn split open. During the hot weather, the hot temperatures can change things by heating up the land land until it eventually starts to sink. Whe there was a lot of cloud cover on Mars the first time they took pictures it was really difficult to seek out.\n\nI do not believe that aliens had biult the Face on Mars. Eventually they will find the truth and when that day comes then there could be more information and new discoveries. Until then there are more things to learn about Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our world is driven by technology. While there are different technologies available with capabilities beyond our imagination, some people think that it makes the gap between the wealthy and the poor bigger whereas others think that it actually has reverse effect. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nSome technologies are made affordable only to the rich people. The possible reasons are there are too many resources involved, and it is not a necessity. As a result, these technologies are seen as the exclusives to the top few, extremely wealthy people in the world. For instance, we have heard about the millianaires paying a visit to the moon. Without a doubt, this is using some top-notch, advanced technology that will safely bring someone who is not a trained astronut to the moon and back, as well as hundreds of people to work on this project. For these reasons, not every one can afford for this technology, but then, does every one need it?\r\n\r\nVarious technoloiges are made available to people from all kinds of financial backgrounds nowadays, especially those technologies that are essential in our daily lives. Whenever a new techy item comes out, it would be expensive at first but it will eventually be affordable for most of us after the market competition. For example, when a smartphone was invented a decade ago, it was expensive and usually, only one person in a high-income family can afford to have it. However, more affordable smartphones became available in the market from different manufacturers around the world which makes the price of smartphones go down significantly. Nowadays, almost everyone, both rich and poor, has a smartphone.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although it is true that some advanced technologies are only available to the rich people, there are still lots of them that are affordable by people from any background and usually, these are the ones essential in our lives. Therefore, I believe that technology reduces the gap between the different social statuses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI would like to inform you of my place, and arguments for changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.\n\nI am in favor of changing to the electon throught popular vote becuase if you really think about it, who is getting a president? it's the citizens. The citizens that are qualified to vote are voting on who they think is going to support us best based on our every day lives. so therefore it should be the citizens choice on who is THEIR president rather than the factor of both the votes in congress and votes of citizens. It should be the votes of the citizens that decide wether or not this person should be elected to run OUR country!\n\nThe Electorial College is completely unfair. it basically defeats the purpose of us even voting becuase electors have the power to go completely against what the people say, and a lot of the time they will just because they can. That's the way everything is, the government will do everything in its power to try and to the complete opposite of what the people want to happen.\n\nWhat the people want to happen is not selfish, it's what they, the people, know what would all around help everybody. But once again, the government will do everything in it's power to do the opposite of what we want to happend and what we know id right for all the people not just a few, or one.\n\nThank you for your time,\n\nSincerely, PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the younger generation is more responsible than the old days. It is often argued that some people think this could be beneficial to the growth of youngsters, while others hold opposite views. This essay will discuss the opinions from both sides and give my own opinion.\r\n\r\nPeople agreed that it is not helpful to children's growth if those youngsters bear more responsibilities with several reasons. Firstly, too much responsibility which could depress younger generation by taking many tasks, could destroy their childhood. For example, in many families, many kids about merely seven or eight years old already do houseworks so that they don't have time to enjoy quality time with their friends. Secondly, due to the occupation of time from those houseworks responsibilities, students show the incapable of studying missions. Finally, mental illness affects children's developments without parents or teachers properly guidance by explaining responsibility.\r\n\r\nWhereas, people believed that responsibility could mould younger generation to the better levels. Those adults who own more responsible during their childhood, could be more understandable on the value of the law. For instance, many studies indicated that kids who take responsibilities at their early ages are unlikely become criminals. This is because they fully understand ethic and moral from the lesson of commitment which lead them to have the sense of justices.\r\n\r\nFrom my point of view, I believed that children should bear more responsibilities because of they will show understanding of their parents and build up a strong connection to their relationships. By contrast, these kids could not have a better improvement and always rely on their parents like a giant baby.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although there are some negative implications, I believed that the aspects of positive of children taking responsibility are overweight the negative ones. To make them become more reliable and independent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author explains how it would be a worthy pursuit to explore Venus but some what dangerous for humans. Based on this article the author does a good job evaluating the task for humans to seek exploring Venus. Some strong points the author brought to my attention is that the ground level temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then earth. In most cases, a temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit would melt anything and a atmospheric pressure that is 90 times what we experience would crush us and anything that we would bring to it. The author suggest a method that would fix that obsticle, the author says if we were to fly a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles we would be able to survive in Venus.\n\nA couple things that the author didn`t bring to my attention was the cost and time it would take of the misson. In the article the author gives us a method of how we would be able to suvive in Venus, but the author did not inform us about the cost and time. In my opinion I would feel like the mission would cost a lot of money,\n\ntime and to build the mission . Another obsticles that the author did not bring to my attention is how would the fueling system work if we can not touch the surface of Venus. Would we be able to carry enough fuel from earth to venus and back all without touching the surface of Venus? I still support the claim the author is trying to show us but is it enough to have NASA use it as a method to venture Venus? The important part of exploring a new planet would be be taking samples of rock, gas and other things that would point us to the direction of finding a way to make venus survivable, but the author brought it to my attention that we would not be able to do such thing. My conclusion to this method is it would be a good way to venture a new plant but it has more obsticles then just the article suggest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should keep the Electoral College because it helps the people choose a president easily then just by popular votes. The process that helps the people choose a president is easy thanks to the Electorl College. According to the source 1 \"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" (source 1).\n\nThe process for Electoral College is very simple for our Nation. The process as stated is \"The Electoral College process consits of selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress.\" (Source 1). That is why we should keep the Electoral College because the process is that simple.\n\nThe reason we shouldn't get rid of the Electoral College because just electing a President on popular votes is not far to the states that don't get to many votes. As stated in the article \" The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.\" (Source 1). The disaster that comes with the electoral college can be catastrophic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Celebrities play a vital role in modern society. Recently, there have been many celebrities who became famous for their talented singing voices or sport skills like baseketball. These celebrities include singers, athletes, basketball players and even politicians. Clearly, such significant celebrities can spread any ideas and go trends around the world though they may convey false information to young people.\n\nSeveral celebrities are considerably rich and glamorous though their wealth and glamor are likely to misunderstand young people. That is, the more wealth and glamor celebrities have, the more likely young people would like to become these celebrities. Many young people consider that celebrities are so wealthy that they are able to purchase a tremendous amount of the luxuries. Young people affected by materialism prefer to buy products of expensive brands inclusive of Chenel, Supreme and Apple. Moreover, teenagers who want to be celebrities may take unreasonable videos onto social media websites involving Youtube and TikTok. However, such unreasonable videos can attract many viewers to see and increase the click rates on the Internet.\n\nIn order to solve these biased behaviors for teenagers, celebrities should set an example to donate their wealth to charities. In addition, governments are supposed to establish a law to control illegal videos on social media websites and punish those who violate law. In that way, not only celebrities can build a wonderfully personal image in the society but also youngsters are capable of following celebrities with admirable behaviors.\n\nIn conclusion, celebrities definitely have a large influence for individuals in daily life. They can bring considerable thoughts to everyone. Nevertheless, teenagers may show off their wealth and make unreasonable videos on social media websites because of these celebrities. If celebrities donate money to charities and governments establish legislation to punish people who upload illegal videos onto the Internet, youngsters can follow the remarkable steps of their favorite celebrities and do help for the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart indicates the amount of Olympic medals obtained by twelve different countries. Overall, it is clear that the USA won much higher medals than the other countries. In addition, Soviet Union follows as the second-highest number of medals and much higher than the third country, the UK. In contrast, there is significant different in total number of medals from he t4th largest number of country, Germany to the lowest number of country, Japan.\nThe USA got extraordinary high number of medal than the other countries. It is approximately 2,300. In addition, all types of the medal, gold, silver, bronze, remarkably higher than the other countries. For example, even gold medals are close to 1000 in total and this means that it is higher than the third highest country, the UK. The UK is approximately 700 hundred medals, including gold, silver, and bronze. 4th\nAnother notable feature is the fourth largest country, Germany obtained around 500 medals, but other countries had close number campared with all countries. Even the lowest country, Japan also got close to 350 medadals. Therefore, other 8 countries got totally similar numbers and no significant change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles efforts make possible dirigibles dock mast One problem safety Some dirigibles filled hydrogen according article highly flammable dirigible catch fire right populated area would dangerous Nature another factor Violent air currents made difficult maneuver dirigible bring close enough mast dock Yet even frustrating conditions extant would still impossible dirigible moor mast illegal A law prohibited airships flying low urban areas included dirigibles These obstacles overlooked plans create Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As we all know driverless cars are coming. Do you agree with idea? and would you feel comfortabel ina driverless car?. Well im here to discuss with you why I don't think driverless cars are needed.\n\nThe idea of having a driverless car is a fantastic idea until you begin to think about the consequences and similarities it has against cars we drive now. There's many differences but also a lot of similarities between both the driverless cars and the cars we drive now.\n\nDriverless cars are not a good because why create a car that drives on its own but still needs assistance from a person. Driveless cars does come with special sensors such as; position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor, but with all that technology why does it need assistance. The cars we drive today does not have all that fancy sensoring but it does have some that really comes in handy. Driverless cars can steet, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills such as; navigating through work zones and around accidents. To save the stress of you having to take control of the wheel if you run into a problem than why not keep you car, the cars we drive now. Without any navigation or all that fancy stuff we will always have our eyes on the roads and knowing when to turn, stop, go and all that good stuff.\n\nNo matter how good a driverless car sounds I still don't think its a god idea. I feel as if its just a waist of money and products when there's more importnat things going on in the world that still hven't been fixed. Driverless cars are safe until a drunk driver or a persons who's high off something get in a dosen't pay attention to what that navigator is telling you, the same with texting and driving. So why risk someone lives when if they are driving the cars we use now more people pay attention to the roads, not many drink and drive, more and more people everyday are paying attention to the roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In library s censorship conrtolled people go library If public library visitors right choose books go shelf The libraries take books shelf due beliefs one person libraries take books give rateing reader decide book music movies magazines etc offensive Of course books adults wish child read talk librarian set boundry rateing book child check Organizing books way anbody read anything want though books nt want read even see shelf need stop minute realize one books like someone else might want shelf In end books shelf choice library people purchase books prevent power struggle way comittee set decide books purchase still deal people wanting certain kind book people deal The books libraries banned book list libray also books books weather read choice The one exception school libraries schools money purchasing books administration school board choose books go library In short veiw book censorship library choose books go library To make things easier books rateing system would national standard public libraries Like I stated previously books books choice read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ugh! Politics are so boring why must we study or do them. But then again there is an upside to it. We get to choose who the president is and how he is going to run the country. Also if we Electoral College vote it would be harder for us to vote.\n\nTo begin with, If we changed it it would be harder for us to vote because it is a process made by our founding fathers and it is established in the constitution. It is a compromise between the election of the president and the vote of the citizens and a vote of Congress. The Electoral College process is long it consists of many sections like the electors, meeting the electors so they can vote for the President and the Vice President, and counting the votes everyone thata voted. The Electoral College comsist of 538 vots but thwey only need 270 votes in order to elect a President. With that amount of votes they can become presidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People see libraries good place knowlodge information place many people like dread fact hearing word CAPS To honust I know handful people use libraries life source information days Can information libraries offencive others The answer based opinion quite honust yes I think iformation picked local rather disturbing per say Theres books information wish would never picked whole life thats everywhere Now music movies etc sort way agree heshe picks know might interested Can offencive people The answer coarse people people You agree something friend might think entirely different thinking everyone titled opinion anything well normally Now graphic movies explicit music shelf little sondaughter grab I could see major issue Some parents want children listening music young age even though way things america child hear see things s life If case five year old pull graphic movie cd parent nt want see hear I dont nessasarily think banned I believe handled well mannered moved easy reach five year old These common arguements people many places simular disagreements Yes I agree things found found offencive answer stays No nt removed unless really offencive If something offencive mutiple people find offencive community I would take people charge local", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars. If I were to be a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks the face was created by aliens. I would prove them wrong, because there are many objects that have some sort of illusion in them. This story tells how the Face is just a simple landform which I believe it is. It's a natural landform because when astronauts were circling around the planet they found it to be a simple landform. Seeing new things that look just like human things can just be an illusion to our eyes, for example the red planet could have had the \"Face\" carved into it.\n\nI think that there are objects that can always fool our minds especially planets. There are certain planets that give us many illusions and we just want to go and figure out why they make us have such an illusion towards nonimportant things. The image of the Face that was spotted in Mars first appeared on a JPL web site, which means that the image was first taken by NASA. I believe that aliens do not exsist still and there could have been no way that the Face was created by one of them. Neil Armstrong was the first astronaut to ever be on the moon and when he came back from the moon he left his steps on the moon. The Face could have been created by someone who has visited Mars (Red Planet) even though the planet almost is the same temperature as the sun they could have taken a pocket knife and began to crave in a human face.\n\nThe Face was spotted on Mars, but the certain place that it was spotted was a lava dome, what is a lava dome you may ask?. Well, a lava dome is a place that is isolated from a mesa and can be up the same height as the Face on Mars. There are still some scientist that believe that the Face was someting that aliens created when it could've been a person or even people that wanted to leave a trace left behind. Maybe they left a trace left behind because there probably wasn't anybody who has been there before.\n\nThe Face was spotted by NASA and when NASA spotted the face they made sure to zoom in on what looked like Face. I believe that the Face was carved or traced behind due to a human being there, even though they say aliens live in Mars there could be no way that a alien did a cetain thing. Aliens could not have been the ones who left the illusion of a Face because some studies show that aliens were not exsisting at that time. The story also does not state anything towards aliens being on a certain planet especially Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that things you leave on a planet can not always be something a alien did or has done. Our mind has such a great technique to play with our minds, especially if we see things from above like the Face was seen from above. I do believe the Face was just a natural landform. I believe it was just a natural landform because there are some things on planets that have such and illusion into them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that the Face is an artifact from aliens, but the fact is, it's a natural landform. Natural things happen everywhere, so seeing something that happens to look like a face should not be automaticlly assumed to be from aliens. After all, Earth has some things that look odd or familiar to our daily life! NASA is sure that this phenomenon is not from alien activity. Wouldn't you think NASA would tell us if it was?\n\nThe Face is just a huge rock formation from the Red Planet. The shadows from at the angle it was taken gives it the effect of human features (3). They released the photo to \"engage the public and attrack attention to Mars\" (3). People have just gave it such an off turning idea that gives it even more attention than intended. People made such a huge deal out of it that more and more people think that there is aliens existance on Mars.\n\nFor the beliefs that the fog that appeared in another photo was due to alien activity; fog happens on Earth too. If we take this even farther, it could have just been that the lens were fogged up, or the area was getting something like precipitation. I do not know for sure, but NASA has been said to have some of the most high quality equipment. I am more willing to believe that it is a fog and not a problem with the equipment (7). Although anything could break at anytime, I beileve that the fog was just a natural thing and not something overall crazy.\n\nNASA's equipment is probably more successful than many would think. If you look at one of the older pictures of the Face, you can obviously see that it is not, whatsoever, the most high caliber evidence. Looking at a recent photo may help you or others see that it is indeed a natural process happening. I believe that most who have a say in what the picture looks like, did not see what was happening in that moment in which the picture was taken. Therefore, making the guess that the lens may have broke, or the foresaken fact that it is just fog (10).\n\nIn conclusion, I beilieve everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but I like to think the more logical side of this debate. More and more people can do as much research as they please, but with facts know that; the Face is just a landform, that fog can happen just about everywhere, and the fact that NASA has high caliber equipment. I would like to hope that if there was a signal of alien activity, that NASA personal would tell us so we would know how to address the problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My view on self driving cars are mixd. They are on the fence. I don't trust the tecnolgie right now but I know in the futre they will be a lot more reliuble. Now the computers are fast but not fast enough. The cars can't be matnecd by any old car shop and the car is not fast at all they are slow to slow. I think that smart cars or self driving cars are a good idea but wont ever work like they want them to.\n\nThe first reson is the tecnolgie it is not good enough to do what we want it to do.They can't predict or know what another drivers are going to do. I don't think tecnolgie will ever be able to know we are going to do that will be like makeing a human brain and that is imposble and will be for a long time. The camras are not powerfull enough to see things coming at it or going towreds\n\nother things fast enough.\n\nAnother thing is that is covenc and money. If your car breaks down or gets damged you can't take it to any old car shop you havr to take it to the new one that can charge any thing becaus they are the only one around. It is just a huge pain. It will be really hard to get evreone to change to a new car they cat afored.\n\nlast reson slef driving cars are not practical are the style how they look. They will look like crap. They will have a big camrea on the top and a bunch of sensers they wont come in evrey style of car there are. They will be to slow alsow they probley wont go past speed limint and if I need to go some where fast I need to drive a little bit faster. They are just not practical they are cool idea but not practiclal.\n\nThe care is cool but not a realitie. It has ups but it has a few more downs yea it can drive you without you having to do anything and you can go non stop. I would not take the risk or the tecnolgie. It also cost to much to work on and to much to buy. Also is way to slow for me. The car just has to many cons to over way the pros and I wont buy some thing that is more bad than good. How would other people like the car what I want to know what they think what do you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe good ending story When Saeng says When come back talking flowers When come back alive In spring shows flower come back When snows melt geese return saying winter snows melts geese return spring And Hibiscus budding She saying flowers blume spring Then I take test saying happens retake test spring This shows Saeng watching things happening count till spring retake test She ready spring study pass test work flower This goal winter till spring comes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The first obstacle expanded use New York City lake suitable landing area Because long one thousand feet length four blocks New York CityThe second dirigibles hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable And realized much worst accident could taken place New York located They rethink re plan And another one winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear brought attention people feel computers bad us Some people say distraction physicaland mental health Although I see people would think I believe computers good benifit society I believe computers help people learn stay intach friends family live faraway stay orginized Sometimes people computer learning nt even know Simply visiting homepage automaticly see news feeds things happening around world Other times people go online diliberatly learn If someone thinking going would probably go internet learn Simply searching equadore many choices pop climate sesonal weather hotel options farts But thats way people learning internet Now many college students option taking lessons online This students like calm quietness house distractions sitting class Friends could big distraction class stay intouch friends moved away I remember second grade bestfriend move away I sad I badey ever talked one day parents set us vidio chat I felt like I right This great I though many people could use talk relatives friends Another great way stay intouch friends family email By writing message sending make staying touch easey personal wants chat emails easey thing send world wide So many people love type keyboard well many different papers type could lost I hate clutter I many school binders papers lost This I take great advantage typing paper every chance I get My computer keeps orginiced I could never loose work File save idiot proof way keep files safe place Then press print get hard copy I sure many people love using computer reason Also I much faster typer I writer work lot needey computer As see plenty reasons using computer goof society learn stay intouch friends family stay orginiced Many people could agree Do nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a significant number of old people are becoming looner, they do not have physical activities as well. In this essay, I will describe the ongoing reasons for this issue and address the possible solutions. \n\nFirst, we cannot ignore the consequences of social media, the human being as a result of progress in technology becoming depressed and other mental health problems. Therefore, old generations do not want have any physical activities as they compare themselves to influencers on Instagram, They also suffer from loneliness as most children leave their parents and have their own life . For instance, sadly, old society in Iran has been suffering from being alone more than ever as most of the occasions their children went abroad. One solution for this matter is to participate in the majority of classes. Thus, they have less time for spending on social media and thinking of their children. \n\nSecond, one of the vital stuff which makes us who we are is our habits, things we are used to doing. Accordingly, many things we do when we are old are stuff we have done in the past in our youth time. As an illustration, young people rather than playing outdoor games prefer to play online and this seriously harms their bodies and minds. So, old generations should make physical exercise and socialise with other people their habits when they are young. This can be done by warning teenagers at schools to have these activities a part of their lives to not suffer in the future. \n\nIn conclusion, these days, a lot of old communities are becoming alone and they do not have physical activities as well. In this essay, I described the ongoing reasons for this issue and mentioned the possible solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is because its an opportuntiy of a life time,as said by Luke. There isn't just one reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program there are thousands of reasons. The main things are the locations,the people, and the experiences.\n\nTo start my reasoning, you could help thousands of people. You could also have fun on your adventures sailing to all these different contries and states. As you grow you will learn more about what you are doing. You could get really cool things when your traveling too. You could even help take care of animals.\n\nSecondly, you could do really cool things on board. You could get to watch animals, play baseball,volleyball,table-tennis touraments, fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games that could pass the time. All of those things Luke did on board. You can do all of those things in empty holds.\n\nIn addition, for Luke it was much more than an adventure. You have someone to look off of and to see a ture experienceof being a Seagoing Cowboy. Now you should see why Luke said it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nIn concusion,I see why its so great to be a Seagoing Cowboys. The places you travel to,the people who you travel with, and the adventures. Just think of all the fun you could have on that very special boat just wondering what lies on the other side of that island and what you could learn the points are endles. So join the Seagoing Cowboys and then you could get in for sure. How you will react when you take that first step onto the next part of your life\n\nSome of the parts to make this possible are ,''Luke could't say no. He knew it was an opportiunity of a lifetime. Paragraph 7 tells you that he lives with his aunt Katie and paragraph 8 is where i got how many things he did while he was on board and why they thought theose activities were fun. The end about how it was more than just an adventure , I got that from paragaph 9.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The structure on Mars is just a natural landform. In 1976 the first picture was taken and it looked like a face. In 1998 scientists took another picture but this time with better quality, but people still believed it was a human face. In 2001 the people at NASA took another picture with even better quality that clearly showed that it is just a landform, or a mesa. It could of been created by Martians, or naturaly formed. Simlar structures are on the Earth called mesa and butte usually are seen in the American.\n\nThe structure on Mars is just a natural landform, because over the years scientists have developed better cameras to get a better look at the structure. After years of studying and getting higher quality pictures, they came to the conclusion that the structure is just a landform, or a mesa. It was a big trend in grocery stores, radio talk shows, and even Hollywoof films, for 25 years!\n\nScientists also include to support their statement that if there were airplanes, Egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks, that you could see them because the quailty of the camera was so good. So if you could see small structures on Mars, then you could see a giant human face. But some people to this day still believe that this could be a sign of Martians. This is why you should believe that there is no human head on Mars and it is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affects cyclist many ways It makes feel hopeful determined alone completely exhausted The desert like terrain leaves feeling tired thirsty The bumpy road hard pedal endless stretches land make feel next town years away While travelling cyclist recalls At point tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake blocked majority pavement front me Kurmaskie tumbleweeds symbol dry desert death They remind cyclist completely alone vast stretch sand rocks Were snake path poison hed beaty sun unfortunate cyclist found However later sees sign Gary Wilbers fish camp hope restored back He yet determined waiting somewhere near water needs keep alive In end setting helped safely feel hope deep inside", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock brought The author brings The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The climate winds constantly changing height building The back dirigibles would swivel could well dangerous Also builders take account fact dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The Empire State Building middle New York highly populated State The explosion dirigible top Building would dangerous would lose lot lives The builders Empire State Building went many challenges trying allow Dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are getting more interested in establishing about the history of structures they stay in because of things like insecurity, availability of resources. They can always find out from existing tenants or talking to friends. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the public tend to find out whether there have been cases of crime in places they reside in. Some specific residential buildings within a certain neighbourhood might have been experiencing theft cases and muggings since the management has not employed guards, or there are no security features like CCTVs; therefore, it is paramount for them to get to know about such incidences. Eastlands, for example, in Nairobi is not a good place to live in as there are many cases of insecurity. In addition to the above, they also want to understand if the house receives adequate water supply throughout the week. Nairobi is a city, for instance, that faces water shortages, so in most cases, there is water rationing; however, some buildings get steady water supply. \r\n\r\nFriends living within a particular neighbourhood can provide information that someone might be looking for regarding a certain building. This is because they may gather it from either their workmates or neighbors. They know where there are issues like water problems or crime. Hence, it is crucial getting in touch with them. Another source of information is from existing tenants, and they will be truthful as compared to caretakers or property managers. In most cases, tenants have nothing to lose and some might be planning to move out, so they will definitely open up in case there are challenges they are facing. \r\n\r\nIn summary, people undertake research about the building they reside in as a result of various factors such as insecurity, resources availability. Friends and tenants are always good in giving such data.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This software is not valuable to others. The software seems pointless because why would you want to know a certain percent of how happy someone is? People can tell the emotions of people without using this software whatsoever.\n\nIn paragraph five the author says \"you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face\" which is totally true but you can also tell how your friends are feeling by talking to them face to face and not \"calculating\" their emotions on computers.\n\nIn paragraph six it is said \"while it shows just how much computers can do\" but some computers can mess up a persons emotion and take it in a completely different direction by making someone think the person is unhappy but they could've been having the time of their life.\n\nWhy would anyone need to know exactly how happy someone is? People can show emotions through many differnt ways and not just through their face but through communication, body language, the tone of voice they have.\n\nIn a classroom setting children do not need to use this because a part of growing up kids shouldn't be exposed to too much technology. Children shouldn't learn how to read others feelings/ emotions through a computer. What good would come from that? Learning how to profile others is a good trait of having. Forensic scientists don't even use this software so why should we?\n\nOverall this new software does not seem valuable to students, teens, or adults. It just shows how attached we are to technology. Yes, good things can come from technology but also pointless things can too. People need to live in the moment and not turn to their computer every second they have. We should be more worried about more important events going on in this world before calculating how happy the whole world is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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