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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traffic congestion has become a ubiquitous challenge in urban areas, leading to increased commute times and environmental concerns. As urban populations continue to grow, the search for effective solutions intensifies. One school of thought asserts that providing free public transportation is the key to alleviating congestion, while an opposing viewpoint argues for alternative measures. In this essay, we will explore both perspectives, examining the advantages of free public transportation as well as the feasibility of alternative approaches. Ultimately, the goal is to weigh the merits of each stance and offer a comprehensive view on the most viable strategies to address the ever-growing issue of traffic congestion in our cities.\r\n\r\nSome proponents argue that providing free public transportation is the most effective solution to address traffic congestion. By removing the financial barrier to using public transport, more people are likely to choose it over private vehicles, thereby reducing the number of cars on the road. For instance, in Singapore, the implementation of free bus services during peak hours resulted in a significant decrease in traffic volume, offering a practical example of the positive impact of this approach.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, skeptics believe that alternative measures are necessary to combat traffic congestion. Congestion pricing, for instance, has proven successful in major cities like London and Stockholm. By charging drivers for entering the city center during peak hours, congestion pricing not only discourages unnecessary trips but also generates revenue for improving public transportation infrastructure. This demonstrates that a multifaceted approach may be more effective than relying solely on free public transportation.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, while free public transportation can be a valuable component of a comprehensive strategy, it should not be the sole focus. Combining initiatives such as congestion pricing, the development of cycling infrastructure, and the promotion of carpooling can create a more sustainable and adaptable solution. This balanced approach addresses the diverse needs of urban populations and offers a more realistic path toward reducing traffic congestion in our cities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the debate over how best to mitigate traffic congestion in urban areas is complex and multifaceted. While advocates of free public transportation emphasize its potential to reduce the number of private vehicles on the road, proponents of alternative measures, such as congestion pricing, highlight the need for a diversified approach. After considering both views, it is my contention that a balanced strategy, incorporating elements of free public transportation alongside other measures, presents a more realistic and sustainable solution. By embracing a comprehensive perspective, cities can not only enhance mobility for their residents but also contribute to the creation of more environmentally friendly and efficient urban environments. The path forward involves recognizing the intricacies of each approach and forging a synergistic strategy that addresses the unique challenges of individual urban landscapes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience important help successful many things In school patience important things wait Being patience game chess checkers important persons makes move thinking move make counter attack Patience important playing games schoolwork Patience also waiting For example everyone excited eve cant wait till morning patient wait till morning Also birthday dont know youll get instead peeking patient open presents Patience helpful skill", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The advansing technology showing negative affect people Because computers people spending much time computer less time things better First spending much time computer bad health many ways For example looking bright computer screan min time extremely bad eyes The brightness damages eyes lead severe loss vision Also spend time indoors computer get exersize need aware every min computer spend min outside It important get fresh air sunlight exersize Moreover another problemwith computers nt get much interaction people With online chatting ca nt know person feeling like even talking person think re talking It much better interact people person face face To good social health need hang friends laugh good time sit dark room talk online friends people need interact real people Furthermore computers distracting many people For example say needed type article paper computer decide play game min look something talk friend You say take minute type article But stop sudden played hours Then stay later finish Computers extremely distracting People ages problem distracted computers gettind work done In conclusion computers although advance technology negative side affects I feel job tell people negitive side effects computers It job help people come side affects computers Please need help people writing article paper warn terrible effects computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are several arguments with regard to the financial support of retirements. Although there are some people who think that it is a waste of money, I believe that governments must support them .\n\nOn the one hand , Some argue that paying wages to aged people who stopped working is not essential and governments should invest this money in other parts. There might be more priority in which officials should spend the national budget on them . For example, in underdeveloped countries where there are not enough schools and hospitals, paying pension might be considered a last priority such as in Africa people even do not have anything to eat or drink . In these places, so, it would be better to improve their sanitation and education systems as well as facilitating hospitals. Moreover,society should be modernised in terms of transportations to make commuting much easier for every citizen. Because, If these infrastructures are not developed or even repaired, a lot of accidents might happen. \n\nOn the other hand, I agree with those who give the right to old people to receive their pensions. There are a lot of scientists and professors who dedicated most of their precious adolescence to study and improve the life quality of their fellow citizens through their innovations . If they did not do all these activities, now we would not have a prosperous society. Also, as they used to work hard and handle so much problems and pressures , they might suffer from several illnesses. Thus, they can not work and if they did not receive at least their own right, how can they afford their life. Furthermore, these individuals did enough for their community and now it is a time to enjoy more from their time and have some relaxation .\n\nIn conclusion, while it might be argued that it would be better that the national budget goes on more important issues, I believe that paying the pensions to the elderly is essential and it is their right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I Think that the technolgy really can't tell ore actual emotions. I believe this because some people can just pretend to be smiling and look happy but you really dont know what they are actually feeling. They coukd be sad, angry, depressed we can never know what they truly feel just by the look of someone. Some people just pretend to be okay because they dont want people asking or worrying. But also sometimes you can tell that there is actually wrong with them because the maybe try to act like they are okay but they really cant hold it for so long.\n\nTechnology can maybe believe that they know someones emotions by their faces expressions but the inside is what actually matters if you really know how someone feels. But also sometimes it can be very confusing because they are showing a lot of diffferent emotions and they are maybe confused themself. But thats okay a lot of people feel that way. Technology is very smart and uts becoming bigger as time goes by but i know and believe that technology cant really know how someone is actually feeling. They can tell by the face but not the true feeling.\n\n\"Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?\" Maybe if you're looking at yourself in the mirror and you're feeling sad maybe you can see it in your face because its actually you feeling sad. But someone really doesnt know just by the face just you cause its you. And its the same for technology they really cant tell what your emotion is just by looking at you. unless you're really happy and sometimes you can actually show an emotion inside and out and if your computer can tell an actual emotion thats true well maybe because you really are feeling happy, sad, Etc. So I believe that technogly really cont tell someones emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are a good idea for society. The reason i believe this is because, as it states in paragraph seven and sentence four, They can steer, accelerate, and brake themsleves, but when all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. I think this is a greaty idea becuase it will lower the risks of crashes. Since it would be lowering the risks of crashes then, it would be less people dying every day.\n\nI also believe that it would be great idea because, if society was to have driverless taxi's as it says in paragraph one, then there would be less murders happening. Because, in some cases people get in a taxi thinking they are going to their destination and the driver takes them off somewhere and kills them. Also, if the car was drivereless the, it would have to have some form of paying machine. If the car didnt get paid by the passenger then the car wouldnt move, which would lower people cheating others out of their money.\n\nAlso, as it states in paragraph seven, the car will alert you when it is coming to part of the rad that is too complicated for the car to handle. I think that is great, because people still need to have a part in the world where they can drive and be apart of society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe certain materials books movies magazines etc removed shelfs found offensive I think offensive books movies music etc removed shelfs becasue basically encouraging young children see something innoproperiate okay watch I would want brother sister watch see anything thing approperiate I remember time I thirteen years old mom step dad time agree I television They thought I young watching innoproperiate opinion I disagreed I thought I right watch I liked shows interesting watch Everything bad opinion When I would watch music videos every song played edited version I argue prove point I Parents different opinion good bad children In case mom want watch anything bad She knew like young She thought maybe would think see bad thing I thinking oh well young eventually learn long run good bad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if teachers couldn't teach anymore and we had to rely on technology? The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because, it can help educate the children. There's technology out there that can help people learn.\n\nWith this new technology children can learn faster and better. If a computer can realize when a young child is confused or just plain bored of all the school work, then why shouldn't be able to reteach the information a better way so they understand. The key to sucess is having a good base of knowledge. With better education comes better and greater opertunities.\n\nTechnology that can read emotions of students in a classromm is valuable because it can lead to a high education. With a higher education comes better job oppertunities that others can't get. It also helps them retain more information compared to staying up all night to study for a class they don't pay attention to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason astronomers are so fascinated by Veneus is may have been the most earth like planet. More Earth-like then any other planet in our soler system. The astronomers think that a long time ago Venus once was covered largly with oceans and could have supported many typs of life.\n\nVenus has a lot incomin with Earth being its size almost the same.And if the thing that the Astronomers say are true it once had oceans like te Earth.And if it is all true then Venus would be great place to explore to gather more knowledge form Venus would help us further uderstand are own planet.\n\nBut while geting to Venus isent the problem its landeing on the Evening Star that is. Venus is said to have a temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and a atmospheric pressure 90 times greater then or own. And any spaceship sent to Venus well be ether melted or crushed. So a maned spaceship is inposseble untell we finde a way to make a ship that can take the pressure and the heat. But even with all those problrems the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) still want o learn more about Venus. NASA plans to have a blimp like ship to hover over Venus away from its deadly ground and on the plimp have people abord the ship taking picters and examening the planet.\n\nBut with this plan comes drow backs the ship cannot land so there vew of the planet is limated.Because most formes of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering stander forms of photography and videography usless.\n\nAnd researchers cannot take samples of rock or gas or anything els. Even though they can not make it past Venus atmosphere they still wat to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus and to do that they would need to get up and close to Venus despite the risk or what they call them challenges.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. For exampe simplified eletronics mad from silicon carbide have been testedin a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface and had lasted for three weeks. there was a computer made in the 1800 witch is shocking but it ran on gears and levers to do there caculation not electronics witch has a better chance to servive harsh lands like Venus.\n\nEver day NASA or even regler people are trying new things no matter the risk so who know one day we might just land on Venus. Just becus its dangres dosent me its inpossoble if anything it should drive us to to it more. And when we do we will learn a lot not only about Venus but about Earth aswell Venus is worth the risk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What Lies Ahead\n\nIt will be a scary day when driverless cars become the new normal. Imagine roads filled with cars, but the drivers are like unalert zombies. Sure having cars that drive themselves sounds splendid, but would the benefits really outweigh the cons?\n\nFor many people learning to drive and getting their license is a huge milestone. It is like one step closer to becoming an independant adult. I can't imagine teens growing up and never learning to drive. That would be like not learning to swim!\n\nDriving is a skill that people need to aquire even if driverless cars become popular, because machines fail. You can't always depend on machines to be accurate all of the time. You might be thinking that machines don't make mistakes as often as humans, but humans are the ones that make the machines. What happens if you are riding in a driverless car and it just stops working? Will you just sit there and wait to die?\n\nIn the passage it says that most driverless cars aren't actually driverless, they need assistance from humans. The fact that the car does most tasks like steering, accelerating, and braking makes it easy for humans to get distracted. Most people get distracted by their cellphones alone! If they thought they could totally rely on the car to do what they needed, they would probably be totally unaware of their surroundings.\n\nThere is a reason that only a few states allow the use of semi-autonomous cars. The laws are written for cars that are controlled by humans. The laws in place currently would not be suffecient for self driving cars. Sure the laws could be changed, but who gets to decide what the guidless to self driving cars should be?\n\nHuman brains are easily adaptable, but machines need to be programmed. What happens when a car faces a situation that it isn't ready for? Also, what happens if someone hacks into the car's system and makes it malfunction? There could be a computer virus that would cause all the cars in the world to crash.\n\nAlthough I do think there are lots of cons to driverless cars, I do acknowledge the benefits. Early versions of semi-driverless cars have been somewhat successful by driving half a million miles without a crash. However, that doesn't mean that totally autonomous cars will be successful.\n\nI think certain feautres on cars like cruise control are a huge benefit, but I don't know if I'm willing to trust machines to take the steering wheel yet. Who knows, maybe fifteen years from now I will own my own driverless car, but there are some huge advances that need to be made first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present, huge public green areas are currently replaced by several buildings in the cities, since people do not give importance to those spaces. Nevertheless, some people believe that having public locations do not create as many benefits for people and society as having buildings for business activities. From my point of view, public spaces should be built because of numerous reasons.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, creating squares improves the mental and physical health of people. For the mental side, it assists people to alleviate stress, since they can have more time to make a long conversation about their problems and lives with their peers and families. Moreover, it strengthens relationships among families and friends, and make individuals relax and enjoy their life as they spend time on activities such as picnics and playing sports. Furthermore, they have a chance to meet strangers to share perspectives and experiences, helping them to have inspirations or new ideas. In terms of physical strength, establishing squares or green places encourage people to play sport or exercise. For instance, people can create sports clubs such as yoga and gather at the park.\r\n\r\nSecondly, governments can use squares or parks to support careers in special fields and local populations to generate income. To clarify, the ministry can launch a campaign to promote art or music by allowing a group of artists to establish exhibitions or clubs to attract interested crowds and gain revenue. In addition, the governments can encourage locals by creating markets, events and concerts, so local people will have opportunities to sell local products and tickets, and can also attract tourists to travel towns to gain more income. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, creating public areas provides numerous advantages to an individual and families as it helps people to relieve mental well-being, and enhance physical fitness. Additionally, the governments and societies also gain benefits from parks by creating special events and gaining revenue from them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do exceed posted speed limit cyclist journey Yosemite National Park stops advice quicker route When asks old men says Never accept travel advice collection oldtimers havent left confines porches since carter office Along using advice faces abandoned ghost towns said thriving spots The cyclist overcomes rolling hills terrain mirages heat day June California deserts Finally sees bait tack shop sees men place older guys stares Based quote infer cyclist ignore advice best map", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people opine that the historical artefacts should be returned to the country of origin which were captured during wars or colonialization while others argue that it should remain where it is right now. I agree with the former view and this essay will discuss the reasons in brief.\r\n\r\nFirstly, many people have sentiments and emotions attached to the objects which were taken away from their country in the past. Besides, this also exhibits the nation history and cultural values. For example, during the British rule in India, the idol of Lord Vishnu was stolen from the temple and is now being displayed in a museum of London. Many people believe that the ideal place of the statue should be the temple from where it was stolen rather than a museum. Due to this many Indian citizens are putting pressure on the government to bring those items back.\r\n\r\nSecondly, these items can be used as a remedy for building and improving the relationship between the two countries. Also, it helps to bring peace and harmony between them. For example, when the ties between France and Egypt were not at their best, Prime minister of France decided to return mummies which were captured during World War I to Egypt in order to normalise their relationship. Due to this gesture of goodwill, bilateral talks resumed between these two sovereign states after a decade. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, bringing back the historical artefacts not only boost the relationship between states but also brings happiness in the society as many sentiments and culture values are attached to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. I believe that it is valuable because you can tell what a student is going through and how they really feel even if they are trying to hide it.\n\nIn the article it states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" this could help teachers out a lot. If the computer can show that many students are bored or confused the teacher can see the results and help the students undersatnd more or just change the lesson plan and spend more time actually trying to help the studens instead of just making them understand something that they dont know how to do.\n\nIt could also tell you if the students is going through a hard time in their life at the time. The author states in the article \"the software can even identify mixed emotions\" so if a student gets scanned on the computer and it shows they are sad you can ask them if they want to talk about anything, or you can just be there for them to make sure that they are ok, and they they get through whatever is going on safely and not by themselves. In conclusion thi is why i belive that this technology to read emotional expressions of student in a classroom is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Topic write story way patience ever seen someone good patience well I neighbor couldnt wait till soccer try outs score He practesd day jugling pasing moves The day came tryouts He went jugled talked coach shaved moves went home it couple weeks see team coach I cant wait long After got back told it I wait couple weeks So I told patience The complain I worst get disippointment So went home practiced move couldnt make A days later I walking side suddenly friend came screaming side saying I made it smiled I patience patience works", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverlesscars should not be manufactured because they are run by computers, they can be dangerous, and they are unrealiable.\n\nAll driverless cars are run by computers. Computers can't be realiable because most are due to malfunction or fry at the very least. They use sensors to view the surroundings so the car wont run into anything, but what if the sensors don't catch something and the driver goes flying into a ditch or hitting the car infont of him. With conspirises of goverment spying on people nowadays, this is just giving them an even easier way of doing so with all the cameras and computers the maufactures use. Also with how easy it is for people to hack into computers and softwares today, just imagine someone hacking into a drivers car and either killing him or using him for something.\n\nDriverless cars can be very dangerous. If/when it malfunctions a driver would have no control over the car and he could end up driving off a bridge or into oncoming traffic. What if the driver falls asleep at the wheel and the car can't wake him up in time for him to go around construction, he'd go right through it. This also just makes it easier for people to drive drunk or underage kids driving undetected. It is just causing dangers to happen to the driver and everyone around him.\n\nSince the driverless cars are run by computers they are less realiable. One simply does not soildly realie on just their phone to store all their photos and music, they will back it up with their computer. You can't do that with a car. A person can't just realie on a driverless car to pick them up or be on time. Or if someone decide to chnage where they want to go mid-route. Computers simply cannot be trusted to do a humans job.\n\nOverall, I am againt the development of driverless cars. If this comes to happen, soon people will expect things to hlep them learn, then that leads to not gong to school anymore, and then we'd just be making even more stupid people famous. It even making people more lazy than they already are. How bad is it that they are so lazy that they can't even drive their own car. Driverless cars are run solely by computers, they are dangerous, and unrealiable, which shows they should not be manufactured. Does the U.S. really want to be known as the laziest and dangerous country on Earth?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should ge rid of it because if people vote for a preident and then they dont get what they want there gonna get mad and revolt aginsit the government. and heres why i think we shoul get rid of the electoral collage.\n\nIn the electoral government voters dont vote for the president but for state of electors and i thinks thats wrong and then they turn and elect the president. It is called a disaster factor in 2000 there was al gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60%of the voters would prefer a direct election. They dont want the one we now have. If you vote for a president youd vote for a slate of democratic electors pledged to the president you want to vote for. The elcotors can be anyone not holding public office. And it depends on the state you live in on who is a elector sometimes people get confused and vote for the wrong cantidate.\n\nThe electoral collage is not a democratic methode of selecting on who WE WANT AS PRESIDENT and we dont get a say on we dicide on who we think is best sutible for running the united states. and we have to get other peple diciding on who runs the country and manyu people think we should keep the electoral collage hers why i think we shouldent. Its not fair for small states becuse they have less of a voice then big states and the dont get much of a say in we they want as a president. Ther are some good reasons on why we should keep it but its what the people want.\n\nSome good reasons on why to keep it is becuse it can avoid run off election the electoral collage requirws candidate to have trans regional appeal. A dispute over the popular vote compared to only 51.3 precentas steated in source 3 number 2. The electoral collage is overall unfair to voters becuse of the winner takes all system in each state candidates dont spend there time on states they cant win. so they go stright for the swing states and that not sair to the smaller states. And thats why smaller states feel left out cuse all the candidates want to go to the big states and try to win them over insted of allthe smaller states.\n\nOver all the electoral college is unfair outdated and irrational and that why i think we should get rid of the electoral college its not fair to any voter that wants to vote and think taht there vote isent gonna matter so they dont vote. This is why i think we should get rid of the electoral college and why is is unjust and its not what we want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates mood First The author shows feelings part My parents shared cooking duties un wittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen The author shows feeling warm wonderful household music cooking Next author shows feeling nice warm child hood Here innocence child hood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompass formed backdrop life warm home The author enjoyed nice childhood filled friends family enjoying wonders home That author sets mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traveling outside of our planet ,we call Earth, seems bizarre. Unless NASA sends a couple astronauts out to the moon, traveling to any other planet is not something a person would be used to hearing everyday. Imagine going to a planet where it is surrounded by a carbon dioxide atmosphere and a corrosive sulfuric acid atmosphere combined. While it only gets up to a little over 100 degrees in many places aorund the world in the summer, this planet gets over 800 degreees Fahrenheit year round. Obviously, it seems impossible to live there without dying immediately. But, isn't that why we have spacecrafts to go off and do missions? Many spacecrafts only make it a few hours when sent to this planet, making it nearly impossible. Surprisingly enough, this planet is known as Venus. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density, size and distance, which makes sense why so many scientists and employees at NASA are so interested in studying Venus.\n\nVenus is known as Earth's sister planet. Earth being very similar to Venus, Venus is extremely different in ways it is hard for a human being to imagine. But, once upon a time, Venus was more Earth-like than ever before. It was covered in large oceans with a suitable way for forms of life to live there. Today, Venus has some similarities, such as a surface of rocky sediment and has valleys, mountains, and craters. Being so similar to Earth, scientists decided to take up on diving deeper in the world of Venus. Venus has an incredible amount of dnager, which is why NASA has options for making the mission safe but also scientifically productive.\n\nOne of several options would be to send humans to study Venus floating above the fray. With this option, the humans would be able to survive, but still have to go through 170 degree temperatures. An obvious disadvantage to floating above the fray would be the distance barrier. It is very hard to collect samples of rock, gas, or photos from that far of a distance. Rendering standard forms of photograph and videography become ineffective because floating from such a distance provides limited insight.\n\nThe right but more difficult path to take would be figuring out a way to reach ground level on Venus. Not impossible, researchers are working on innovations that would let the machines last long enough to contribute meaningfully to get more knowledge on Venus. Some of the simplified electronics are made of silicon carbid and have also been tested in some of the extreme dangers that Venus has. A second similar machine would have been similar to mechanical computers used base in the 1940s during World War II. These type of devices make calculations by using gears and levers without the need of electronics. Today's modern technology would be fragile to be able to sustain any type of conditions in Venus, although it is way easier and faster to use modern day technology for this specific challenge.\n\nHaving danger limit the human brain is one of the \"easier said than done\" situations. After a while, humans will become to curious and will want to know more about Venus and about all of the dangers that come with it. There is no other way to figure these things out other than figuring out a way to see all of it for ourselves. Using our curiousity, researchers and those who work at NASA might be able to create new innovations or ways to see all of the dangers that are within the scary planet of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock In reads Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s frame work This designings Mast going take time Another obstacle almost called end mooring mast In Architects The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill pose reasons pparent befrore even constructed The greates reason one safety Most dirigibles outside used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flamable huge owners thought densely populated area New York People could get hurt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" there is a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This inovation is a computer program that is able to read human emotions by reading a persons facial expressions and muscle movement. The new system has been able to read the emotions of the model for the mona lisa, but just\n\nbecause it can be used doesn't mean it has value. Using this program on students in a classroom is not valuable. Ultimaltley only a student can know his emotions, the best way to teach is an one on one human connection, and just because we can do something doesn't mean we should.\n\nComputers and technology are becoming the center of the world in todays soceity. They run are homes, infrustrature, economy, and just about everything. Using this new Facial Action Coding System on students could just cause more harm then good. If a student is sad, that student is going to know weather other people do or not. He would not need a computer to tell him how he is feeling. When trying to show how benefical the new program is the author said \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" Saying this only proves that the person and even people around the person can already tell what their emotios are based on the way they look, talk, and act without any need from a computer.\n\nThe hope for this program is not only being able to read emotions, but replecating them as well. Dr. Huang predcits that they can modify the software to make learning programs. He says that \"A classroom computer could regonize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" As Dr. Huang points out at the end of that quote, a human reconize emotions and would be able to help that student just as well as a computer. There is no need for computer help because the best way a student is going to learn is from another human. Sometimes computers mess up or is wrong, with a teacher you can talk and discuss the problem. A computer would just tell you how you are feeling, even if it's wrong. The article asks the question \"Can we actually ca;culate emotions-like math homework? And how csn a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?\" It then goes on the explain the sciece behind the program, which talks the connection out of it. Humans are more complicated then just a program. The way it is explained, it is saying humans are so simple we can be read by a program. Doing this makes us seem less unique, it takes away the segnificance of human contact. Teaching a student can not just be done by a program it has to be done by another human.\n\nLife is full of opurtinites and chocies we could take and make, but sometimes we shouldn't. In the intro to the article, it explores the idea of \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions.\" A student could be having a bas day, but gives the illusion of being happy because he doesn't want anyone to know he's having a rough time. Using a computer program to determine how he is feeling is an invasion of his pravicy, almost like reding his mind. Even though techonigacally we can read someones emotions, it doesn't mean its morally right. A person's thoughts is basically the only thing kept private, and emotions is one that could be kept private. It might not stop there either. As technology advances, even more programs could be invented, that go even further thn reading emotions. There has to be a line that is drawn, and reading emotions is passed the line.\n\nMany people might be excited about the Facial Action Coding System and what it can do. Sometimes things are made that shouldn't be. The debate about wheather this is benefical to the classroom or not should be a simple decion of no. Things that can be done shouldn't always, a student can decide for himself what he is feeling, and human connection is more valueable than anything a computer can do. All in all, students do not need a computer telling their emotions to learn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author thinks that we will studied more about Venus do too human curiousity. But knows its very dangerous to study Venus\n\nIts dangerous to study Venus because its air is much thicker than earths and isnt even oxygen and the temprature is greater tha earth,Venus has the highets ground temp even tho Murcary is closer to the sun than Venus. Venus might be a good option to sudies tho becasue it says that it may at one point have been like earthand had oceans but we cant get too its surface to to our ships not making it threw the gasses and the ships just burning up. Scientist are working on a ship that will hover over Venus and take recorderings of it but the ship wont be able to land on the surface to stuided it. Scientist have made a cilicin that can go trew the rought terain and weather of Venus,they tested this with a special chamber simutlation,The rover lasted up to three weeks.\n\nScientist will study more about Venus and make new invetions that will be able to with stand the chaos of Venus. One day we will learn what Venus use to really be like and learn about its histroy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mar couldn't been made by aliens. The monument was another natural formation. It is stated in the fourth passage, that it is giving an illusion to the shadows and making it look like it has eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Evidence say in the fifth passage say that NASA would wather hide, and say that conspiracy theorists.\n\nThe monument has properties tht make it look like is has a natural human face. The shadows give it a 3D effect to look like a person from Earth. to eally see that it is not a face you will need to focuse on the picture, to not let the shadow make you think it is a face. The face is only a illusion of the mind, some people say the face looks like a Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nNASA thinks that if there were a alien civilization on Mars that it would be a popularity increase for the big red planet. People that still think that their was life on Mars defend by saying that it would help the budget for themselves. The Face on Mars became popular and started to get on talk show, radios, and magazines. Soon NASA wanted to let the conspircy take place and leave the Face alone.\n\nThe Face of Mars could have been made by alien because of the unexplainable things on Earth itself. In the last passage it states that i could have been made bye aliens. Compared to all of the things on Earth. It could be a possiblity of aliens making the Face on Mars. For example, in the last passage it says that Garvins say, \"That it slike the lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on a Mars.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars was not created by aliens, and there for the case of the Face on Mars was a natural monument after all. It compared to West America for all of the weird thing that they have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days famous personalities, such as film stars and reality show stars, are gaining popularity because of their colossal wealth as well as glamorous appearance rather than their outstanding achievements, and this trend negatively impacts youngsters. I agree with this viewpoint as after seeing these celebrities' lifestyles, sometimes many children not only go through cosmetic surgeries but also adopt wrong methods to become affluent. \n\n \n\nTo begin with, these days, many young boys and girls are undergoing beautification surgeries in a lure to look more attractive after following their beloved stars. Since many famous personalities give their highest priority to looks, they undergo several types of plastic surgeries to become more charming. While following these surgical procedures similar to these personalities, sometimes young fans distort their appearance, which has a life-long impact. For example, a recent survey found that many millennials are pushing towards facial fillers due to their desire to look like their famous film stars, which may result in their facial deformities.\n\n \n\nMoreover, many teens tend to become overnight affluent to experience the pleasures of their favourite personalities' lifestyles. Sometimes they get trapped in wrongful practices, such as thefts and shoplifting. Consequently, these malpractices not only spoiled their lives but also shattered the trust of their mothers and fathers as these parents would have several hopes for their children’s future. For example, a recent study showed that after watching the reality shows of lavish celebrities, the incidents of juvenile delinquency surged by twenty-five per cent in New York City.\n\n \n\nTo conclude, nowadays, many adolescents are blindly imitating public figures who are well-known for their enormous wealth as well as charming appearances. However, this would have several negative consequences on young generations because while copying these stars, they sometimes distort their physical appearance and start doing wrongful acts to make fast bucks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People hold different opinions about whether to pursue advanced study at university or go to work directly after graduation from school. From my perspective, though both choices have their advantages, university education are more significant to an individual's career success.\n\nIn one hand, it is argued that getting a job straight after school is more beneficial to one's development. To begin with, it is helpful to promote technical skills. Through repeat practice at workplace, people are more likely to put the theoretical knowledge learned from classes into actual application and adjust it according to diverse situations since practice makes perfect. Moreover, since office staff is more exposed to diverse people than students, the communicative and interpersonal competence that is essential to a successful career could be more sufficiently acquired, which even contributes to broaden interpersonal network and lay the foundation of proud success.\n\nIn the other hand, receiving advanced education at colleges is recommended to be the brightest path to win professional triumph. Universities provided students with more systematic and specialized education, so that they can set up all-around and multi-layer knowledge network. For instance, compare with the common history courses given to senior-high school students, the specialized history courses taught to undergraduates and postgraduates cover a wider range of content and involve deeper levels, which offer those undergraduates and postgraduates more opportunities to achieve higher achievements in the future. Having obtained university education is beneficial in strengthening graduates’ employment competitiveness and rising their initial employment level. For example, university graduate could win more chances to endeavor to a higher salary, to be employed as a manager and to be promoted than holders of the General Certificate of Education.\n\nIn conclusion, whether it is direct employment or further study, there are certain benefits to people. Going to work directly is very helpful to improve an individual's working ability, but further study at university would be more rewarding to his or her long-term development due to the opportunities brought about by a higher level of knowledge. Hence I believe the later is really the most recommended way to make a successful career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since time immemorial, many people believed that having kids in the past never be a better option than to up bring them in the future life and they rated advantages of it to be more than the its disadvantages. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to have this. In this essay, I will highlight some of its positive and some of the challenges that need to overcome. \nLet’s start by looking at the advantages of up bringing children in up coming era rather than in the past life. It is because, children are the future dependent to their parents, when they grow older. Considering things fact, once always want to have sons and daughters in the age when they will no longer remain physically and mentally stable. For instance, there are many examples of this sentiment truth and the most popular one is in the life of famous Microsoft office founder Bill Gates, who is no doubt one of the richest men ever born across the globe. He served most of his precious time for helping his parents when they got older. Furthermore, if you stand by with your parents in the circumstances when they need you the most, you will gain pile of virtues which ultimately lead to a bright future. \nMoving towards the negative side of this statement by considering having teenager kids at the time when you are spending a memorable life and you are not desperate of getting anything that you don’t have. I reckon, in this situation getting a new member in the family increase the expenditure of money and time and that is always not a good thing in once’s life. Moreover, we can find several examples in the history that people fall from the upper-class level to lower-class level just for the sake of doing too much expenditure for the up bringing of their newly born baby. In addition, people never feel pleasure when anybody come and reduce their profits in the form of even a child.\nTo sum up, it has to say that having kids in the past is usually created trouble in that is loss of precious time for making their future bright and also the significant money that never get back while to have them in future will lead to the most needy life for parents as they usually not able to spend life with their own due to loss of strength. I personally believe that the pros in the form of old life partner outweigh all its negatives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion I think more people should join and participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. There are many things you can do to help others out. You will also see many amzing things as you go to different places while helping.\n\nOne thing you can do if you participate in the progam is take care of animals that are being shipped overseas. From my experience, its not always easy taking care of the animals. You have to feed and water them two or three times a day. You also have to clean their stalls. And check on the animals every hour.\n\nYou don't always have to work while doing this job.There is some fun games you can play. After you have returned the animals you can play games such as baseball. volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, and boxing are some fun games you can play after returning the animals.\n\nOne last thing you can do while your doing this job you can get a chance to see many different things in all the different countries you visit. I had the chance to explore countries such as Europe and China. I also had the chance to visit and excavated castle in Crete.\n\nIn conclusion, there are times were you have to work hard while working and taking care of the animals. And there also times were you can have fun and explore the different countries you visit. So I advise you to join and participate in the this program because you won't regret it at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new software called Facial Action Coding System (FACS). FACS is trying to make it's way into classrooms for students and teachers. Some think this is a good idea to quicken lectures if students are uninterested or extend lectures if students are interested and having fun. I am not one of those people. There are many reasons why Facial Action Coding Systems should not be brought to the classroom.\n\nThe main reason Facial Action Coding System should not be introduced into the classroom is that it is not needed. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored and then modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This is not needed at all because students could not be interested in the topic the classroom is discussing and the computer would modify the lesson to make it shorter then students would miss out on some of the more important discussions the class is talking about. Another example on why FACS is not needed for modify lessons is a student could have stayed up late the night before and is falling asleep in class. That will register as boredom to the computer and the computer will shorten the lesson and other students will miss out on an educational learning experience.\n\nAnother reason why FACS is not needed in the classroom is some students would feel as if it was an invasion of privacy. In the article, the author states \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This could cause a huge problem with privacy. If someone is on they're computer and the software can track your facial muscles, it has to be using the camera. Who knows how good the defense system is on the FACS software to keep out hackers. Someone could hack into the software and see everything through the lens of your computer camera. I do not think anyone wants that to happen to them.\n\nThere are a plethera of reasons as to why Facial Action Coding System should not be introduced the classroom or any learning environment. Just a few examples were given in this passage. In the long run, I do not want to see the FACS system being brought into schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many cities around the world have already learned the benifits to limiting or getting rid of car usage. A few of these cities are Vauban, Paris, Bogota. These cities experience less smog and pollution.\n\nPeople in the places that have limited car uses do not seem to mind. A quote from\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars by Elisabeth Rosenthal explans how giving up their car has improved their live, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\". Cars do cause alot of tension and stress from being in trafic and having to deal it bad drivers on the road. Many people are already too stressed and anything that can limit stress is good for you.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia the city has ond day that is car-free. This day people hike, skate, or used public transportation to get where they needed to be. Violaters are fined $25. The over all goal of this day is to promote diffrent forms of transportation. Even though weather can be a factor it didnt seem to affect people.\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky states how this is true \"The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogota.\" This quote also shows that people are fine surviving with out cars.\n\nParis baned driving for diffrent cars on diffrent days because of the near-record pollution. Moday cars with even-numbered license would be fined 22-euros if they drove and the next day the rule would apply to odd-numbered licences. There were exceptions for cars that are plug-in, car pools with three or more people, and hybids. Robert duffer, the author of\n\nParis bans driving due to smog showes how well the ban worked in this quote 'The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to riscind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday\". This is a great example of how much polution would be cut out if we stopped or limmited useing cars. Just one day with out everyone using cars and there was a diffrence in the smog amount.\n\nLimiting car usage also will cut carbon emitions and help the enviroment. In\n\nThe End of Car Culture the author, Elisabeth Rosenthal states \"...transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions...\" With a limit on cars, trucks, and other moter veicals greenhouse gas emissions will lower. America is already lowering it's car usage by it's self. People are buying fewer cars, getting fewer licenses, and driving less all together.\n\nOver all the affect with giving up moter veicals and finding other forms of transpertation are very positive. People would have less stress, reduce in greenhouse gasses, and lower pollution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions is decribed in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto. This technology is interesting, however, it is not valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classrom as it would turn into a distraction, have many complications, and likely be misused.\n\nThis new technology would simply become a hinderance to the focus of children in a classroom. Kids have already become so addicted to phones and computers that their focus has deteriorated drastically. Technology has been proven to stop the process that lets children focus deeply on what they are reading. Adding more in the classroom would be a mistake. The article states \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" This statement implies that the computer would be teaching students instead of real teachers. Are we as a society thinking about how our technology use is harming us? If we are fully taught by computers, it will be impossible not to become consumed by technology and cause reading and writing with real paper to become obsolete.\n\nThe coding system might also lead to many complications in the classroom. Schools that have already implemented technology such as iPads and laptops have to take time out of lessons to help students fix bugs and simple confusions with the technology. This disrupts the learning process and steals time that the students should be using to comprehend what they are being taught. Many schools have technology help desks because of how many issues there are and how few teachers are apt to deal with them. A new technological addition would simply add to the confusion, especially since even the students themselves aren't familiar with it.\n\nThe technology would also be misused at school. When talking about how the computer analyzes emotion, the article states, \"It's all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" Knowing that the computers are meant to be able to tell even the smallest difference between emotions, students may test this and turn it into a sort of game. They could spend class time trying to trick the computer into thinking they are bored or angry with the lesson, as it is easy to put on a false frown. Students are always looking for ways to get out of working in class and this system would be an easy way to do so. It would cause frustration to all the teachers having to deal with the misuse.\n\nWhile the Facial Action Coding system is very intriguing at first glance, many complications could arise if it was implemented in schools, making it of little value in the classroom. It must be severely scrutinized before being allowed into the computers of children who are always looking for a way out of work. Sticking to teachers who can analyze their students expressions may be the right choice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people in the community believe that youngsters should do some kinds of charity in their leisure time; therefore, both these precious minds and the public favouring this habit. I fully agree with this argument and the details will be discussed in the essay below.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, a person should realize the importance of being a part of the society; besides, he should understand and always remember that populations should only stand still with a sense of humour by knowing the meaning of living in the same neighbourhood. This habit will penetrate into the personality and become a spontaneous behaviour of the person if it is learned in the early stages of life as a routine lifestyle. \r\n\r\nFamilies or teachers can support the youngsters to attend to some activities related to the benefits of the community such as helping the old people’s groceries. Meanwhile, a teenager can participate in to any kind of environmental cleaning activities in his free time either for having a good time with his friends or to make his vicinity cleaner, which are helping his community to become a better place. A group of researchers from Oklahoma State University Social Psychology Department have concluded that a teenager’s mental health would become better if he/she attending a couple of organizations related to the public without taking any money from that.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young people should help to their community in their spare time so that not only their mental health and the community’s well will become better as well which I also fully agree with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author seems to not support the idea of exploring venus.. The author describes the good side to exploring venus as well as describing the bad. The author states venus is like earth and could have inhabited life at some point.\n\nUsing the good examples it seems like the author sides with exploring venus despite the dangers. But after further reading it the author describes a lot more of the harsher outcomes of exploring venus.\n\nAccording to the article, the author states, \"peering at venus from a ship orbitinf or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Which means it would be useless to just hover above the planet and not get very much information.\n\nAlso the researchers would be able to gather samples from the ground. The planet is way hotter than ours which makes it difficult for ships to land on its surface.The author is making exploring venus look like not a good idea. The planet is just too dangerous for us to explor and the author want to make that message clear.\n\nIn conclusion the author does not support going to venus. The planet is way to dangerous for humans to explore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author states that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because, venus is a really hot planet and the earth is in between venus and mars but venus is closer to earth. Scientists start to study venus but it's very too hot to go to venus so scientists try to make inventions that will get information on why venus is so hot. Venus is dangerous because it is soo hot and you wouldn't make it in the conditions there.\n\nIn paragraph 3 the author states \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments\". It also states some examples of the dangerous things like \"erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning strikes \". Scientists are still trying to visit to venus surface even tho it's inhospitable because they are fascinated by venus because venus use to be the earth's most-like planet in our solar system. Scientistist wants to know what it is that is making venus sooo hot because like in paragraph 4 it says \" long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". Then scientistst study that venus is the hottest planet and they are now trying to study why venus is so hot.\n\nNow NASA is trying to send humans to study venus. NASA also has a solution for scientists to go study venus in paragraph 5 it says \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\" NASA made this solution so that scientists would study venus but at the same time they would be safe while doing it . NASA is now workin on other approaches to studying venus. In paragraph 7 the author states \" some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\". This also shows that tying to study venus is dangerous because you wouldn't make it very long on the planet even if you've invented things to try and help.\n\nThe author is trying to get out that studying venus can be very dangerous because of the conditions venus is going thorugh. Venus is the most hottest planet and it is not the best planet to be studying because it is very dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the industial revolution the demand for cars has grown. Cars have been needed for transport to go to work, school, or just plain traveling. But recently the demand has decreasing. All around the world \"no car suburbs\" popped up and people are dying to move. In source one a German city named Vauban only have 70 percent of families owning cars while 57 percent sold their cars to move to Vauban. This new trend of no automobiles is said to lessen stress, reduce smog/ greenhouse emissions, and make cities more accessible. \"America's love affair with its vehicles seem to be cooling\" says source four.\n\nGreenhouse edmissions wither away with the less cars that ride up and down streets. In Paris, the typical smog reaches to about \"147 microgram of particulate matter per cubic meter\" stated by source two. This makes it harder for traffic to see and causes an unsafe enviornment for walking. Paris was said to have banned half of cars one day and another half the other and the smog was cleared enough to rescind the no car rule. Greenhouse edmissions, like carbon, can cause acid rain, raises the temperature, and can clog up breathing pathways making it unsafe to go outside when the smog is strong. Carbon can be admitted through the fuel of cars. In France, over 50 percent of cars use diesel fuel which causes a greater amount of greenhouse gas edmission. If society can walk or ride bikes to work or school then the amount of automobiles needed will decrease. The lessening number of automobiles can help create a safer and healthier enviornment.\n\nNot only is the 'no car' trend happening in Europe and developed countries but it is happening all around the world. Source three talks about Bogota, Colombia using a no car program. Once a year Colombia participates in a no car day. \"Million of Colombians hiked, bikes, skates, or took busses to work\". The ones that did not were given a 25 dollar fine. This day in Bogota has gotten so popular that people from other countries have traveled just to witness. The idea of no cars can improve city dynamics. Bogota alone has built 118 miles of bycicle paths. The open area away from cars has created room to build parks and sport areas, restaurants, and shopping centers. While the revenue of cars are decreasing these new areas are increasing in revenue. If using no cars for a day can have this large of an impact in a developing country than it must create a big impact for developed countries.\n\nEven though a no car program can be a huge benefit there are still people disagreeing. A growing crime rate can make it not be safe enough to walk or ride a bycicle to work. For some, work may be to far away to create a short enough walk or ride. Some places, like here in Florida, does not have a transit station close by. But even the idea of car-pooling can lessen the the use of cars. Picking up just a couple of friends on the way to work or school can lessen the amount of cars on the road. This can create less traffic and carbon emissions and is safer than walking or riding a bike alone. While some argue that the demand for cars has shrunk due the recession it can also be said that cars may not be the top priority. Source four states that between 2001 and 2009 the amount of young adults driving had decreased by 23 percent.\n\nWether your on your way to work, school, or practice it would be smart to find another way of transportation. If your new years resolution was to get fit and go to the gym, ride your bike or run to work. Bicycling and walking can create a healthier you. Cars have done more harm that good to the enviornment but it is not too late to change that. We can use places like France, Germany, and Colombia as a great example of a new way to change life. Lets do ourselves a favor and maybe pick up a buddy on the way to work, or ride a bike, take the train, or walk. Lets take part in the new trend of no automobiles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Life is very precious, and many people die annually around the world as a result of reckless driving. Most of the experts believe that imposing heavy penalties for unlawfully driving is the better solution, whereas others argue that there should be other methods. I believe that the first argument is a better method. However, there should be other actions too to produce obedient drivers.\n\nUndoubtedly human errors can happen, and should not ignore. Even though it is a human error, the driver should be punished, with a warning. These warnings can accumulate in a point system and could provide negative marks. Heavy penalties will increase the stress of the drivers and ultimately lose confidence in driving.\n\nNevertheless, there are many scenarios of unlawful driving. To name a few, young drivers seek thrill while over speeding, bike riders enjoy riding on a single wheel, and few people even drive while they are drunk. As long as these offences are done deliberately, there should be heavy penalties to control this behaviour. These penalties can be in the form of a large sum of fines, suspending the driving license, and even imprisonment.\n\nHowever, all the drivers should be appropriately educated on road rules and regulations before providing a driving license. Not only that, there should be a probationary period to observe a new license, and people who will be caught with driving offences should not be allowed to get a permanent driving license unless they go through a proper driving test again.\n\nIn conclusion, much strick punishments should be imposed to improve road safety while the governments should take more precautions on educating the drivers on road rules and regulations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aproximately about twenty-five years ago, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was orbiting planet Earth. While trying to capture priceless photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, the camera spotted out a deceiving, mysterious, shadow-like figure that looked similar to a human face. Soon enough scientists discovered that this was just another Martian mesa or as we may know, a natural landform. Although, there was something unique about this landform. It had these keen, unsual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah. The quarrel that many of us can make is whether or not this face we have discovered is simply a natural landform that eroded and formed itself over time, or constructed by the hardmanship of aliens. From evidence and research, we can come to a conclusion that this has to be just a landform. What many people do nont realize is that they are basing their information off of not only psuedoscience, but theories and made up thoughts of what they think took place. For example, the theory that the American Flag was not indeed put on the moon, that it was hollywood editing skills that made it seem like it. This is a connection that you can create knowing that these are simply made up thoughts which is fake science.\n\nTheories may be convincing but take into consderation that there is clearly proof behind the pudding. According to research, it states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equiavalent of a butte or mesa; landforms common around the American West.\" If this does not guarantee to float your boat then hear out how silly of what the conspiracy theorists have to say is. \"Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars, evidence that NASA wold rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on mars.\" If the face was assembled by aliens in space then NASA would be the ones to want to figure this\n\nand be encouraged to want to crack this code by using real facts and evidence instead of thoughts and predictions.\n\nIn a nutshell, the Face found on Mars is simply just a landform. The situation was blown out of porportion for example, it has starred in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and haunted grocery stores for twenty-five years! This has not been the only case where these theorists have came into play. It is more reliable to understand and trust facts from hard research opposed to what's going on in the abyss of someone elses mind. You can bet that this will not be the only false assumptions from conspiracy theorists. Watch out!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless Cars are not a good idea for some people and other its ok for them. It should be a choice for the person who wants it or not. The reason why they arent a very good idea is that a person can crash and you wont know what happend, was it the car of was it the person driving. When you want to instail a radio you dont know what you can do about the wires in the car Should you cut that one or should you not. Its just a lot of worries and a lot of what's going to happen to the car.\n\nIt's nice to know some people are trying to change the world and a lot of people support it.In the story it says that. \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph.\" What if a person has to get some where why would you want to just go 25 mph. There should be some switch that you can turn on and of so you can drive over 25 mph. they should make a\n\ncar tht just park for you not one that drives for you.\n\nIf their going to make a driverless car they might want to make a driverless semi to. They do not know for sure whats going to happen to the car in the real situation on the road. They talk about a \"If the tehnology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the diver of the manufacturer?\". Thats proof that they do not know what is going on and they will some day. But is that day to day that is a question that you ask yourself?\n\nThey think that they will make a car that is able to drive themselves. If I could i would ask them If they have it done yet. They say that they did not have the technology to do it bace then. That means that they should get the technology and get it right the firs time. Will it make you battery go down faster or will it use more gas.\n\nIt's harder to make a car that needs a lot of technology than one that does not. It takes twice as longer to produce the cars that they need to sell. People want to buy a car that is cheep. They want to know how to start the car and drive in it. That's why I think that a car should not be driverless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy prsuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports the idea to some day visit Venus. They start out by saying Venus this the \"twin\" of earth. the thired paragraph explains some conditions of Venus. Fourth paragraph says on why scientist even discuss some day visting to its surface of Venus.\n\nThe aothuer supports the \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" because she says how is has value. The author goes on saying on paragraph 8 \"not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" that is a good support but she back that up like use a survay. They go on saying that the travel should not be stopped because of \"danger and doubts\" and they should expand there imaginations. Venus is referred also to Earths \"twin\". \"Venus is the closest planet to Earths in terms of desity and size\".There is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbom dioxide that covers Venus and a temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. the atmospheric pressure is 90 times more greater than what we experience here on Earth. That does give a good point of view.\n\nWhy are scientist discussing further visits to Venus if it dangours to us ? it is because Astronomers are intrested by Venus because it may once have been like Earth.(That was a good support idea).Venus was maybe coverd with largely oceans, but Venus still has some features that are like Earth. The planet has a rocky surface, valleys, moutains, and craters. The aothor says that \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\"\n\nThe auhtor gave information to explain Venus. What the author did not do was give much support on why should we persuit on studing Venus. they gave dangours reason making it we should not persuit on but they did give some reasons like calling it Earths \"twin\", and explaining on why scientist are still trying to get to some how visit Venus no matter how dangours it sounds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper editor computer home use facebook type social networking site Well like majority respectable caring country probably answered yes questions likely also believe computer great tool teach handeye coordination well awesome way talk people online Not notice great potential computer showing us distant faraway lands cultures What would able without hand eye cooridination Nothing could Without hand eye cooridination computers video games help develop would nt even able go outside enjoy peaceful game tennis baseball even basketball without hand eye coordination clumbsy depth perception If nt handeye cordination would nt even able pick things hands would nt go eyes looking Even though computer nt way learn hand eye coordination still important stragedy takes effort perform If social butterfly love converse people simply must computer Computers cell phones pda s s form computer When think country would without spectacular devices These computers helped industrialize grow great superpower country Can imagine drive people s houses talk These machines get messages vices people way across world seconds They great inovation technolegy Imagine paper college assignment work due tommorrow messy handwriting There way get done time legible worse ll fired expelled s done But savior arrived The computer improves peoples hand writing speed research click buttons With computers need long tedious hours handwriting seaching books library What would happen us wonderful invention The time come decide like time saving teaching invention socialize would rather go back stone age", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many differences in telling which is a geniune smile and which is a false smile, and technology can help with differentiating the true meaning of smiles. The professors in the article help show how computers can understand what people like and dislike. The professors in the article explain how computers can identify facial expressions and the result could be a long term effect. According to Professor Huang and Professor Sebe, a computer would be able to identify if someone is faking a smile or is geniunely happy in their life. A computer that can recognize facial expressions can greatly help people by showing if they are unhappy or depressed, and show advertisements that people are interested in.\n\nFaking a smile can mean multiple emotions are present. If someone is faking a smile, then that person could be depressed. In paragraph eight, \"in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ... using a different muscle.\" Computers and facial experts can tell if someone is unhappy by examining the subject's face and deciding whether they used their zygomatic major and the risorius muscle to smile. The subject's life is affected by an expert or computer telling the person that they are unhappy, which can lead to the person getting help. Achieving better health could all be from the idea that a computer is able to tell if someone is unhappy and a result of that is the person seeking help. In paragraph nine, \"moving [one's] facial muscles not only exresses emotions, but may also even help produce them.\" Computers can recognize if someone is making a facial expression and that works by making emotions for the person to feel any type of feeling. Because of computers recognizing what a person is feeling, computers should be able to communicate with a person and express to that person what they are feeling or experiencing.\n\nAdvertisements also help show emotions. In paragraph six, smiling when a Web ad appears, might make \"a similar ad ... follow.\" Computers can tell if someone is enjoying the advertisements and might add another similar ad that could be enjoyable for that person again. Advertisements can add to the health of a person by allowing that person to experience happiness and adding another ad to the web is just increasing their health. However it is different for a person in a workplace or classroom, according to paragraph six, such as a classroom computer can \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Boring ads can decrease a persons health by making that person have less motivation to do their job or work. Advertisements have an effect on people's health in which so adds to why computers should be able to communicate with people about their feelings.\n\nComputers should be able to communicate with people about their feelings, because it can help people greatly in the aftermath. Computers can help by discovering if the person is unhappy in life or can increase their health by allowing that person to experience a happy moment. A person who discovers that they are depressed from a computer that tells them, can expect so much. A person can expect to achieve happiness by seeking help. Computers also increase a persons happiness level from the advertisements that pop up on a computer. What goes to show is that computers should be able to continue communicating with people about their feelings for it helps people recognize the greater meaning in life such as happiness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like helping animals and taking them to safe places?Well thats what we do,we take the horses, Young Cows, Mule and other animals that were shipped overseas and take care of them. You can be hurt, worn out, tired,and even afraid but it still dosen't mater because think of how afraid the animals are before peple like us helped them out.\n\nDo you want to become a seagoing cowboy? Well I bet your like what's a seagoing cowboy. If you participate to be a\n\nSeagoing Cowboy then you get to explore the world, help others, create memories and get an amazing once in a lifetime oppourtunity.Or you can be like Luke and have a friend convince you or even join with you.\n\nYou could be going on vacation but also taking tasks all around the world. For instince say you have to check on the animals every hour, well on your freetime you could be exploring. Being a seagoing Cowboy can be risky but your doing a good deed and at least you tried. In paragraph 7 Luke got hurt but did that stop him from helping? No he jus waited to he was all better and went back at it.\n\nThink about Luke he had two jobs and left to help the UNRRA with Don. Just remember your not choosen to do this you have to have the courage and sign up yourself. Yes , your taking a risk to lose your life, family, and childhood but the animals dont. You have to have patients, time, and love animals. n\n\nWell now that you know what a Seagoing Cowboy is and what we do, maybe you should think about becoming one. It's not really a hard job, its actually entertaining and shocking. If you do sign up and participate you could learn new places and animals. You get to ride the waves, take care of animals, learn new things and meet new people. Think about it and spread the word with your spouse or even family and friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood created author memoir would sad remembering really good time life knows wont happen time happy good childhood misses good times feeling greatful parents hard work things looked bad thats I think authors mood would memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against this Facial Action Coding System because how diffcult it will be for these teacher to put this modification in every school and computer. How long would it take for this project to happen, will it work, going through all this can be a problem, why would we need all this if we can ask one simple question to all the students \"Are you ok?\" Even if the school wants this we will need to take each of the students picture and modify it into a \"3-D computer model program\" as said in paragraph 3 we have 44 major face muscles which they will need to go into to that program and modify it. Every kid has mixed emotions one day they can be happy one day they can be sad, angry, and or stressfull. This Program can not improve or prove how us students are feeling, We would be happy and the computer program pops up with anti-depression pills, Computers are like us humans we mess up sometimes and we arent always right.\n\nLike what i said we can ask the students directly without any expensive computer programs, with one little questions \"are you ok?\" \"Are you doing fine?\" \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on his/her face. we won't be needing these 3-D facial modifications, sometimes people can be smilling but deep inside they could be mad,sad, angry,glad. I don't think it matters about the face it matter about the heart, nobody can tell how you're feeling with just a face. If you're watching a sad movie and you're crying your happy but sad at the same time how can a computer program no that you're really not sad but happy. Just be cause our muscles movement proves how we feel it can be impossible for this Program to work in the future, it may sound like a good idea they can test but we have billions of people millions or schools how can this one program improve a school yes it shows and might help but how can it be possible.You can have 40 people in one room and have a computer look at there faces and see if they are mad,sad,or happy. They all will have\n\na straight face, In my opinion \" We as in humans can tell and sometimes not tell if he/she is happy or sad\n\nBut computers can't tell either but one thing we can say in my previous sentence.\" Ask \"Are you OK?\" thats easy as that.\n\nIn my statment, Computer are advancing but they go farther where they learn humans constitics, It will be scary where we look into the webcam feeling happy and it tell us to go out side how ask why you are happy. Being paranoid as we humans are we would report this to somebody we dont want to be messed around with, we just wanna be ourself and not want others to know how you're feeling, If where sad or even depressed we have friends and family to help us, Why should a computer tell us how our friend is feeling and if they need help where we can do it ourselves. If computers are smarter than us how are we going to improve more. As i close my statement against The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) these computer will not help or even improve with our life style just go in a class and ask \"How everyone is doing\" and there's your answer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast I Marcia Amidon Lsted constructors empire state building faced many obstacles trying create docking place tall building Obstacles law airships flying low nature made hard create place paragraph says The practical Reason dirigibles could Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas There alReady strong argument building mast Al Smith ignored This law made illigal ship ever tie building In paragraph author tells nature problem says The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Already showing signs danger ahead pursued idea farther Drigibles moored open landing fields could weighed lead weights However using Empire State Building would dangling air nt practical safe All Reasons contribute Reason docking nt allowed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some that art is an important subject at school while others think learning art wastes time. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and explain why art is an essential subject to learn at school. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some people consider art as a useless subject that children should not learn. People find subjects like science, history, and maths are more useful for children. By studying general subjects for, such as maths and science, children can apply the on a daily basis. Even though learning general subjects like science, maths, and history has several benefits, children also need to learn other subject like art and music. How can learning art benefits children?\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, art is a useful subject for children to learn. Art helps children develop their creativity and imagination. Furthermore, by learning art, children can learn how to be creative, how to create their own art, and how to use their imagination and creativity into a good use. For instance, children can pour their thoughts and emotions into drawings, paintings, and comics. This way, they can learn how to express themselves more. Moreover, by learning art, children can obtain a new skill that might be useful for them in the future. For example, if a child wants to be a designer, they can apply the knowledge they earn when they learn art, even though they also need to master maths. \r\n\r\nFinally, in my opinion, even though many people believe that learning art is useless, I believe that learning art is beneficial for children. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, learning art is very beneficial and useful for children, despite the facts that many people think it is useless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some parts of the world, it is becoming increasingly popular to know the history of the property that individuals live in. Some homes can be hundreds of years old so the background can be quite relevant to some people. I will be discussing the reasons and how people can research their own home.\r\n\r\nOne of the reasons would be to try and establish the true value of the property. Especially from an investment point of view. This is because knowing the value of a home can help potential buyers negotiate with the seller to get a better deal on their new home. For example, if a house was sold for a hundred thousand five years ago, they buyer now has a better idea of the true value. Additionally, it gives them some peace of mind as some homes can be quite expensive. Moreover, it gives them an idea of when they would need to renovate the property, as this is usually a requirement after a certain period of time for most houses and buildings.\r\n\r\nThere are a few ways in which a person may be able to find out about the history of a particular building or house. The easiest would be to use the internet and find out as much as they can online. Not to mention, they would also be able to find out about the entire area or region, not only one specific building. Another way would be to ask the real estate agent what they know about the property as they tend to have the most knowledge about the properties they deal with. Lastly, contact their local library and try to find some historic books about the area.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, fraud is becoming a lot more common than people think. Therefore, it is no surprise people are more interested in their homes. As time goes on, it is important that the government regulates ways in which the history of each residential property is open to the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience important house My mother always says able patient succed anything One time I home computer I surfing web enjoying My mom yelled across house come see I got chair Walked kitchen hallway bedroom She said go get groceries She wondering I wanted go I said asked would make sanawich She replied yes left While gone I cleared room Folder laundry watched television It still wasnt home I hungry beginning become worried I tempted call I remembered always says patient succed About half hour got home She bought lunch meat I could make sandwich While I eating told proud patient I gone I think patience important I also think everyone could use little", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Companies around the world are coming up with the idea of driverless cars. Driverless cars are just what they sound like in the name, cars that don't require a driver to drive. While some are for it there are some people against, and I'm part of the people that are against it.\n\nFirst of all, why would people be called drivers if they're not driving? The idea of driverless cars are going to be the start of laziness. Drivers will feel as if they wouldn't have to drive then they wouldn't have to pay attention. So if they don't pay attention they're going to turn their attention to their phones or technology, which is going to be prone to accidents and recks. Manufacters haven't come up with cars that doesn't require any kind of human interaction, so therefore there will be some kind of human interaction. So drivers would still need to pay attention, but they wouldn't know that because car companies would make it seem like their cars are so smart and powerful juist so they could be ahead in the car competition.\n\nSecond, if there are number of accidents there would be a ton of conflict. Law makers wouldn't be able to decide who would take the responsibility of recks. Not only just that but also a lot of money being given to accident victims and customers sueing companies.\n\nThird, driverless cars would start other ideas of major things that need human interaction to not have human interaction. Then sooner or later everything would be run by robots or com puters. So if everything would be run by technology then people would start losing their jobs and would stop making money. Also people wouldn't use their hands to eat or drink or even wipe themselves after using the bathroom. Not only that but people would also get very bored and not have anything to do.\n\nIn conclusion, if companies really do go ahead with making driverless cars then they should raise the prizes sky high. I say that because if they raise the prices high no one would be able to afford them, therefore there wouldn't be a huge domino affect created.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience words able wait along time something angry raise blood pressure Patience good thing didnt patience would probably never able accomplish anything takes time I think patiente would help succeed many things For example mom drive thruogh lady front us yelling people line go faster something like its likely gon na speed My mom outstanding patience wait things hours get frustrated I rarely patience I cant wait around ten minutes something Patience great thing must likely want get things done Most family I dont best patience sometimes I think patience good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez I believe goes calm mood proud mood He starts describing life far family How used live oneroom apartment Cuba family lives Newark New Jersey along Spanish Cuban Italian immagrints Then talks neighborhood together great solidarity friendships Also honest hard working community mostly immagrints He also said I always grateful love sacrifice paragraph I think Narciso feel thankful proud Cuban wonderful parents I never forget parents turned simple house home last sentence", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe driverless cars are a good idea.\n\nIn my opinion they are more dangerous than human drivers.\n\nAlthough I also know that people will creat driverless cars no matter the danger becuase people are selfish and they want to be rich and everyone respect them.\n\nWhat better way to do that better than inventing something as high tech as a driverless car.\n\nI believe these cars are dangerous becuase they can't drive under certain circumstances.\n\nIn paragraph seven, it states that in work zones or around accidents a human would need to take over.\n\nIf it is suppose to be \"driverless\" then it should be able to drive through work zones and such with needing help.\n\nIf it needs a human driver's help then it isn't driverless.\n\nAlso in paragraph seven, it states that drivers must be alert if they need to take over.\n\nEveryone knows this, Americans are lazy.\n\nThat's why we have cars and we don't bycicle everywhere.\n\nAmericans don't want a car so they have to stay alert more about the road.\n\nThey want a robot to drive so they don't have to focus on the road.\n\nSo they can sleep, eat, or get ready for work in the car.\n\nI also believe that the last thing the world needs is more pollution.\n\nThese cars may or may not take up less gas but they still use gas, which means they still polute just like any other car.\n\nIf a company comes out with a driverless car and it's a hit then that company is going to polute the are with smoke and chemicals trying to build all these cars to meet the supply of the demand.\n\nThe world already has enough factories poluting the world, why add more?\n\nBut what do I know?\n\nI'm just some kid taking a stupid Istep test at school.\n\nWrong.\n\nI'm a kid of the next new generation.\n\nMy generation will be the one's to clean up what the adults left behind that is destroying earth.\n\nOr we'll ignore it like the generations before us then our great grand babies will die from polution or the effects of global warning.\n\nI don't like the idea of driverless cars.\n\nTechnology always messes up one way or the other.\n\nBut that's just my opinion against many others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views on how to improve road safety. While I accept that implementing harsher punishments can help solve this situation, I strongly disagree that this is the only measure because there are alternative ways which are effective and need taking into account.\nOn the one hand, it is undeniable that stricter punishments could deter motorists from driving dangerously and carefully. The full weight of law should be applied in imposing a variety of non-custodial sentences such as heavy fines and the confiscation of driving licenses. Furthermore, for serious offenders such as driving while intoxicated should serve a prison sentence, because they endanger innocent lives. As a result, it is undoubted that people are less likely to commit a driving offence because of those harsher penalties.\nOn the other hand, I would believe that there are several measures that can effectively improve the road safety. Firstly, national and local authorities can help tackle this problem by installing speed camera. This, consequently, could raise the awareness of people about the need to follow the speed limits. In addition, regular vehicle inspections should be conducted, which can play a significant role in reducing the number of accidents caused by mechanical failures. Finally, people should be offered better education about the importance of road safety, especially young people who are more likely to break the rules. This, therefore, could make individuals adhere to the driving rules.\nIn conclusion, I would maintain that strict penalties are not the only way to improve this situation, and they should be implemented along with other steps to completely tackle the road safety issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship libraries inportant thing schools public It inportant beause movies books magizines bigger influince kids people think Like really gory movies always people movie gettin cut shoot Do really think kids dont think hat stuff Somtimes kids get head see read Like movie beating killing people colored And kids think ok And go librarie get shelf check go home watch Now r using thing teach kid way things use wrong ok You teach kids want make sure wright thing And magazines schools public librarie kind thing kids looking Like gun magazines hunting magazines show ok carie gun ever go And hunting magazines show go shoot stuff And kids confused need lisense You least put age limmiet stuff Go s sameway books always start good turn big mess gor vileance Like spere started group people going water explore ship And find big shpere go get powers imagin comes true Well kid reads think start imaging eather hurt really damage someone And find wont work So come show censor stuff libraries take least put age limite", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the research and development of Dr. Huang and his colleague, computers are now able to understand what people are feeling based on the muschle movement on their faces. These muscle movement can be classified into basic emotions that human are experiencing. With the help of this program, computer can detect the emotions of people and make changes accordingly. I think this technology should be brought into classrooms for students as this can help them understand better by interpreting whether they are confused or not.\n\nIn Dr. Huang's prediction, he claims that the use of this technology can recognize the emotional status of the students. When they are detected to be confused, the computer can make changes to the lessons in order to make it easier or better explained. This can accelerate the progress of the study as teachers will not be worrying about which part that students do not understand. More specific explaination can be made immediately when students seem to be confused, and skip easier parts when students become bored. Classes will be become more efficient for both teachers and students: teachers will not be guessing what students do not understand and waste time on easy parts while students will always be learning what they actually need to understand.\n\nNot only is this technology valuable in teaching students, but also crucial in finding out the feelings of them. Because this program records muscle movements on our faces, students will not be able to show an unreal emotion or it will be detected. Therefore, when teachers are trying to help students on their emotional difficulties, such as anger and sadness, they can understand what they are actually feeling. Students will not be able to hide their feelings by making false expressions that may help them escape from the help that they actually need. Teachers can understand what students are really feeling in their real emotions, and provide help as soon and helpful as possible. This technology can be crucial to students' lives even though they may try to avoid the help that is provided as they may not understand the outcome of those bad emotions. Therefore, I believe that besides the efficiency this technology can provide in education, the importance of it for teachers to communicate better with students should also have a considerable power in deciding whether or not it should be brought into classrooms.\n\nThe development of this technology can truly help the communication between people as they are able to understand what others really feel and express. Misunderstanding can be made right through this program as people can read the expression of others. In the classroom, students' expressions to different ideas can be detected and analyzed by the teachers. They can then give extra help based on the understanding of those expressions. Students feeling upset can also be understood, and teachers' immediate attention can be provided to them. This can save much time and effort in interpreting the real feeling of the students, making the school progress much more efficient. Therefore, I think that this technology will become very valuable in classrooms with its various ways in helping students and their teachers understanding of each other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy One way My mother fathe come country courage without knowledge language culture came selflessly many imigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind ther families friend carrers country loved For example Parents coming carange Second way I always grateful parent love sacrifice For example always thanks parent something The author describes mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is my variation of the essay for \"Driveless Cars Are Coming\". I think that it is a great idea, but it should only be for the elderly that can't drave and for the handycap. Regular people want to drive, but some don't because their \"tired, or busy, or its to much work.\" But I believe that driving is a responsability that people signed up for when the got their license. If you don't want to drive, then why did you get your license.\n\nMy second paragraph is about why would you want a driveless car? I personally would never get a driveless car for several reasons but I'll give you three. My first reason is i would like to drive because it gives me a freedom I never had. My second reason is what happens if one night an E.M.P. goes off for some reason and my car locks down, I can't get out with the doors being sealed shut. And finally my last reason is I want to some day listen to my favorite song in my 1970 Dodge Charger Supercharged down the highway to my old house, but if driveless cars are the only cars then i cant live my dream.\n\nMy third paragraph is about which car company should be able to make these \"driveless cars\". Honestly i beleive only Dodge and Chevy should make these cars, because their one of the oldest car companies around and they know cars like Bill Gates knows Microsoft. If you allow them to make these cars then they'll make them better. Imagine a driveless car in every vehicle type, from muscle cars to exotic cars to trucks to RV's to boats to planes to spaceships. We could be the most advanced nation in the world, no we would be the most advanced world in the galaxy.\n\nThis is my conclusion to this article. I believe that we could do this, but we have to be smart about it. Driveless cars must be in safe hands, not reckless drivers. The government just has to let us do this. If we don't then we'll be trapped in our variation of the stone age. So who wouldn't want a Driveless car, but it has to be a great Driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience quality characteristic person It easy patient people patient Especially know want mad someone dont My older brother always patient especially time I look back wish I could erase It night I going stay aunt uncles I always trouble staying places I got home sick cried That exactly happened night I regret I playing games room I couldnt stop thinking mom I told stiff upper lip I forgotten feeling came agian I thought much fun I would tomorrow I stayed night It didnt work tears rolled faster falls I want go home I managed sniffle I ran downstairs tell older cousin babysitting finally opened door brought upstairs get phone My mom answered relized voice said CAPS grouchy I sniffled said I want come home I miss you sniffled Someone pick soon Be packed ready said hung I sadly told I packed waited wooden bench door Soon enough car came driveway honked It I said bye went cold wind hopped car CAPS didnt want stay asked calmly I dont know And wasnt brought I walked front door I already knew punishment staying night somewhere couple weeks", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since our inception, we humans have dedicated our lives to improving the lives of ourselves, others around us, and our children. Making life easier is the reason we work, and driverless cars are the next great innovation. Transportation will be revolutionized by this vital step in our path of conquering what we once thought was impossible. Through careful planning and development, Google's driverless cars will be a great leap in human progress.\n\nDriverless cars will be safer than cars on the road today. So far, Google's cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. This shows that accidents on the roads in the future will only decrease with the introduction of driverless cars. The article also states that \"further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software...make driving safer\". Progress in technoloogy will make cars much better drivers than they are now. In fact, \"information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes...allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Cars without humans drivers are a boon to those who care about safety on the road. With this amazing new technology, there is no reason to be against these overwhelmingly fantastic new features.\n\nGoogle's driverless cars will also be a better experience for the driver. Driving is a mundane task; many people must commute for hours just to drive to and from work. Fortunately, manufacturers of driverless cars hope that there will be \"in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays\". Because these displays will also be able to be turned off instantly, these will not subtract from the safety of the car. These entertainment systems will be great for those who do not enjoy driving. The future of driving is one that will bring fun along with its plethora of safety features.\n\nGoogle's new cars are something to be excited about because they bring safety and entertainment, which will benefit the lives of drivers around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author creates peaceful mood memoir Its peaceful picture admiration voice talks family One reason loves family parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would This means family always watched one another protected everyone needed help Another reason loves family parents specifically much author They came selflessly give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country love This means even though everything known Cuba wanted children better lives chances happy left everything moved These examples author set peaceful mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present world, many folks prefers to deliver their offsprings when they are aged. Although having heir at old age might come with some difficulty such as pre-eclampsia, preterm delivery etc however it helps the parents to be financially ready for it, which I believe outweighs the disavantage as the problem can be corrected with adequate medical interventions. However, lack of finacial preparedness can lead to mental damage of both parents and offsprings.\r\n\r\nMoreso, large number of people believe that having children at an older age help spouse to discover themselves before bringing children to the world to avoid broken homes that can affect the offspring psychologically and mentally. In addition, others believe it's a good idea to acquire wealth before childbearing in other to be able to take care of basic needs such as education, feeding and clothing which makes them marry late. However, they can make wealth while raising kids because fund is never enough which is not enough reason to marry and produce kids late. Majority of people also believe having children when they are aged will make them look physically younger in stature compared to those who gives birth early. In my opinion this is just a myth. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, problem can arise in late childbearing which includes: chromosomal abnormalities, miscarriage, preterm labour, neonatal death etc which can also lead to maternal death. Life is more important than the thrive for money to take responsibility for the child. If the mother should loose her soul in the course who will take responsibility for the kids? This is one of the reason why women should go through the course of childbearing when they are still a youth to avoid complications that can not be reversible with medical treatment. For instance: if an elderly woman loose her child in the process, it can affect her mentally n might not be revisible. Likewise, an older adult who has miscarriage might loose lot of blood in the process of evacuation and might die instantly because it's risky. In addition, a young lady can give birth early and also earn money to take responsibility for her wards.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, raising funds while giving birth at a younger age to avoid complications that are threatening to both mother and child is better than producing offsprings when one is older and financially stable because the disadvantage outweighs the advantages as it can be claim life's, therefore life should be guided taking safe precautions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist trips sees lot features would discourage She riding high desserts california June kurmaskie We know desserts steaming hot dry especially june She also encounters hills kurmaskie make matters wose travelling hills extreme heatThough cyclist goes many perilous obstacles makes camp lives I could seethe horizon telling I could make par I d fine kurmaskie This shows author s dedication tgive fine", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial reading technology could be considered as an invasion of privacy. Seeing it in this light, it would essentially reveal emotions to others when one may not want them to be perceived. Although this technology may seem invasive to some, it could benefit classrooms in a variety of different ways because of how perceptive this technology is. The Facial Action Coding System would be a vital improvement to the classroom because it would allow the teacher to know how the lesson went and make improvements upon it, make students happier, and check on a student's well-being.\n\nMany times in a classroom, students are not willing speak up to tell a teacher that he or she is doing something wrong. However, with the new facial techonology, teachers will recognize how their method of teaching is affecting their students. With this new feat of technology, teachers will be able to know how their students are feeling. They could recognize flaws in their lesson plan if students became too bored and disinterested with the topic; they could have the ability and knowledge to make it more engaging the next time they teach it. While many people have the ability to fake an interested or happy expression, this technology would be able to tell even the slightest of differences. They even have the ability to tell \"when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\" (D'Alto 8). Considering these are people who are always in the spotlight, these miniscule differences would be difficult to detect without this technology. In classrooms, even the best of actors would not be able to fool a computer system. Therefore, teachers would be able to make drastic improvements upon their classroom if they wished to do so.\n\nIf teachers recognize what they are doing wrong and would be willing to change it, students would be happier overall. If a teacher said something wrong or especially demoralizing to a student, they would be able to identify what it was and apologize or learn from their mistakes. The class would be more engaging and fun for students which would then prompt them to be more attentive in class. They would have more fun and learn more from the teacher. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" watching others emotions can make someone feel the same as the other person. They could create empathy among their students if they smiled more and would be able to create a better and more light hearted or elated atmosphere.\n\nWith facial recognition technology, computers may be able to recognize when something is wrong with a student so that others could go get help. Improving a student's well-being is an important factor for many teachers. If something is wrong with his or her home life, a computer may be able to tell and alert someone before a drastic situation occurs. Many problems could be prevented by checking in on a students well-being such as bullying. It would be more effective then students going to tell adults because many are afraid to do so. Depression among teens is at a record high, and this could help prevent students from suffering as much; it would also be able to detect anxiety and teachers could use this in turn to help reassure their students.\n\nThe classroom would drastically improve if The Facial Action Coding System was implemented becuase it would be aware of the atmosphere of the classroom and the people within it. By seeing how students react to the class, teachers could help make the learning environment more engaging. Through this creation, students would be happier in the classroom and would essentially learn more if they were more interested. This techonology can benefit many students under emotional duress who might be afraid to speak out otherwise. If schools implemented the Facial Action Coding System, it would improve the lives of the students and the classroom as a whole.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever babysitted little kids If know much patience requires It little cousins third birthday party oldest child responsibility watch younger kids At first everything going fine The kids quietly playing plastic kitchen offering fake food Then one started play ball popper Of course one child new toy rest immediately stop theyre go play toy So little kids gathered around ball pepper giggling delight machine spot plastic balls air Suddenly little girl reached snatched ball air causing kids fight balls scream I yelled stop ignored kept fighting I realized would require lot patience I calmly took ball popper away waited settle Thankfully little cousins stopped fighting able play ball pepper quietly I learned important lesson cousins birthday party babysitting requires lot patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A nation is known as a vast garden and children are the flowers of that garden, those play an essential role into the development of the country, therefore some mobs think teenagers should get the opportunity to do voluntary and unpaid work for the welfare of their society, where others opine differently. I would agree with the former statement and will expand my perceptions in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nKicking off, it is a salubrious way to encourage juvenile to learn about their social responsibilities, as they get the chance to interact with various character of mobs while working with them.Moreover, it also expands its resistance towards the outside world and makes them more abroad. Second of all, social activities and unpaid work is proved as a boon for them in their tender stage, as they learnt good manners and antiquates from their mentors, which sharpen their personality traits. Moreover, they get a chance to develop their unique identity in society by inparticipating various seminars and social fundraising campaigns. To epitomize, a Khalsa aid is the world biggest nonprofit organization, which encouraging millions of teenager and youngsters to take part in social activities and teach them valuable skills in life. \r\n\r\nOn the flip side, some school of thoughts opine differently they believed that parents should not insist their child toapply these kind of activities. First of all, the childhood stage is a time of entertaining and focusing on academic things, whereas social activities could distract their mind from their study and they could also lose the earlier charm of life. Second of all, teenagers are very sensitive and it could be increasing their stress level, which leads to being give births physical impurities.\r\n\r\nPondering over the topic, it could be seen voluntary work is a marvellous way to inspire teenager and youngsters to brings the affection and responsibilities towards their society to overcome and remove the all sinful debasements by providing quality instruction and measurements.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving is both one of the most enjoyable and dangerous activities. Most people do not realize how dangerous it can be to drive simply to the store. Even with all the technological advances that improve the safety of cars, human error is always an issue. Recently, smart technology has been popping up everywhere. The trend in technology has become make everything \"smarter.\" Cars have not been unaffected. There have been many additions to cars that make them both more entertaining and safe. While some argue that this takes away from the driving experience, most agree that it makes the cars safer and better for everyone in general. Even though driving can be enjoyable and exciting, the development of driverless cars is a positive to look forward to. Developing new and more efficient driverless cars benefits the environment and improves the safety of both passengers and pediastrians.\n\nThe environment benefit of driverless cars can be profound. With driverless cars replacing public transportation and the need to own cars, as shown in paragraph 1, fuel usage could be reduced dramatically. The quote, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus,\" shows that by cutting the amount of cars and reducing human error, fuel usage would decrease greaty, benefitting the environment. Also, the technology within driverless cars may prevent traffic jams or allow them to proceed more rapidly. In paragraph 7, the article discusses how BMW has come up with a car that can navigate through traffic jams. By allowing cars to clear the traffic jam, backlog and carbon emissions are greatly reduced. The environmental benefit of driverless cars can be huge. It can make a large difference to the constantly decreasing environment of today. The development of driverless cars can improve the environment.\n\nSafety is another big problem with cars that can be solved with driverless cars. Driverless cars can avoid accidents due to their ability to make decisions without hesitation and always watchful eye on the road. The quote, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash ...,\" shows that humans can make mistakes, but machines can be much more precise. As people want more an more safety features in cars, cars begin to operate without the driver. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" These cars, as they become safer and safer, are also becoming more and more independent to the point that humans are only needed to steer through complx situations that sensors cannot yet pick up. At the rate of technological advance experienced today, driverless cars are easily possible, and they make both the occupants and people around them more safe as well. The current focus on safety easily paves the road ahead to developing driverless cars. A few years ago driverless cars were a concept; today, driverless cars are a reality. Safety and driverless cars go hand in hand. Without driverless cars, people will not get the safety they ask for, and without the need for safety, their is no need for driverless cars. Safety has become a big concern, and the path to improving the safety of cars is the path to developing driverless cars.\n\nThe development of driverless cars will both benefit the environment and improve safety. Although these are huge benefits of developing driverless cars, there are many people against it. They believe that driverless cars will contradict the meaning of cars. To them, driving is both an exhilerating and leisurely experience that they have lived so long with. But, these people ask for improved technology within cars and do not realize the road to driverless cars is the same. Driverless cars are the future of cars and with so many companies investing heavily in them, they are sure to become accepted rather quickly. Driverless cars have many benefits that regular cars cannot hope to offer. With all of this data, evidence, and information backing the development of driverless cars, the positives will outweigh any negatives that could arise. The development of driverless cars was an unavoidable event. Driverless cars are technologically sound, they are beneficial to people and the environment, and above all, they are needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are a lot advantages and disadvantages of limiting car usage around the world but let's talk about the advantage of limited car usage right now if cars were limited there are a lot of great things that can happen for one greenhouse gases emissions will reduce drastically, the streets will be more safer no more accidents, people will save more money from not buying a car, crime rate will go down, and people can get exercise if they walked or biked to places instead.\n\nFirstly, if cars get limited then greenhouse gas effect will go down that means less pollution and to destory the ozone layer which means a lot of pollution needs to disappear if we don't want the hole in the ozone layer to get bigger then it already is which means more UV light is coming in from the sun because our protection is slowly being eatten away from all this pollution that means we can get burned more easily from the sun and eventually the world can catch fire more easily when even more UV gets in that is why a lot more forests are getting burned it's because all of this dry weather doesn't mix well with a lot of UV light coming in and also all forests can destoryed and not come back and the animals will go extinct .\n\nSecondly, if cars are limited the streets will be safer because less and less people are driving that means no more hit and runs, drunk driving, accidents in the road to cause a blockage making people late or stuck for an hour or so, less lives taken, no more traffic, no more texting and driving, no more cras explosions or fires to cause anymore damage, kids will be able to play more often outside then inside, and no more damage to buildings.\n\nThirdly, if cars are limited people will have more money if they buy a car a lot of people in the United States are having financial issues where they don't have money to pay certain bill or get things that they need because they have a car which means gas money when it needs gas, when gotten into an accident you gotta pay to get it fixed while its being fixed you gotta get a rental car, and when it breaks down and doesn't work anymore you haft to get a new one but if cars were limited money will be easier to save.\n\nFourthly, if cars are limited then people can get exercise obesity has increased over the years because of all of the fatty food we have people are gaining weight fast and it doesn't help that people have cars which makes it easier to get around and get even more food to stuff their faces with but if cars get limited then people can either bike or walk to places giving them the excercise they need to lose all that weight and obesity rates will go down and everyone will be healthy and not a lot of people will die from a heartattack.\n\nFinally, if cars were limited then crime rates will go down that means less DUIs, no more theft of cars, theft of household items, hit and run, speed chases, drive by shootings, life will be safer when cars are off the streets, worry free environment, and people won't haft to worry about getting objects getting destoryed in any wreckage of a criminal who is running away from the police.\n\nIn conclusion, if cars get limited pollution will drop, no more accidents on the street, financial issues will go away, crimes will slowly go away, and obesity rates will go down from the excersise that people will get if cars were limited people could live a simple life, worry free but they can't because no one stops the productions of cars that people are afraid of because they are dangerous to people and the world so it would be easier if cars didn't exsist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that the environment is changing from year to year.The greenhouse effect causes plenty of problems such as global warming and makes animals in danger.Numerous people defend climate as much as they can,however, every time are those who have no clue about this problem or think that it is not their business.In my opinion,individuals must be aware of the consequences of their actions and try to be more environmentally friendly.Of course,there is an idea that people are able to adapt to changes,however,it is only making the problem worse\n\n Firstly,there is a notable change in the global climate.Winters are shorter and less cold,on the other hand, the summer period significantly becomes hotter.Everybody hearts about that,however,they don't care.Of course,plenty of people who care not only about their future but also for their children,try to fight for peaceful and perfect conditions.Nowadays,well-known companies try to make their products more eco-friendly.However,that is mainly for staying in the marketplace.All they do is for business.That is not rocket science to understand that if they would not show that they are environmentalists they will be cancelled.In my point of view, the community has to get rid of those companies because they only work for themselves.The main mission now is to save our planet and stop destroying it.\n\n Secondly,while one sort of person fights for a bright future others don't really care.A big number of individuals believe that their action doesn't cause something.Moreover,they damage nature by throwing garbage everywhere.In my ,opinion this type of person has to be isolated from others.The main reason,I think,why they don't want to protect nature is because they weren't taught properly.Schools must provide classes where students can learn about human's impact on the planet.Besides,they can do some eco-friendly things.Scientists declared that countries, where those classes were provided, have a surge in the natural condition.\n\n In conclusion, the best way of protecting nature is not planting numerous plants or picking up trash all day long.The best way is to teach individuals that spoiling the planet spoil their life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After Luke Bomberger graduation, he had two jobs he worked ar a grocery store and a bank. so when his friend ask him to go to europe on a cattle boat. in the passage luke said that he could not say no. It also includes that it was an opportuity of a lifetime.\n\nIn the passage i said that unrra hired \"Seagoing Cowboys'' to take care of horeses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas. and Luke and Don sighned up. I think luke sighned up because he was helping out on his aunt farm. So he knew alot about helping with animals.\n\nI think that Luke and Don had a good reason to join that program.\n\nWhy i think that because they get to see alot of different things they never seen before. Also in the passage is states that Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been uploaded. He said being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke. It opened up the world to him. He says \" i'm gratefull for the opportunity.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are lot of countries in the world who are using great amount of money on advertisements of their teams. I agree that they should start spending money on children sport activities in that way they will start the encouragement of early stages in their life towards games.\n\nto start with childres sports , children now a days are spending more amount of time in online games rather than offline games . this is effecting their heath coinditions also. in order to overcome this one countries should start using money on childern sports activities . take an example of china , using money on children at an early for their sporting activites. this is very useful in childhood, because so many of them are deciding their future goals at an early age, like participating in some games such as swimming,running,cricket and many more to list out.\n\non the other hand many nations spend their most economy on people who are representing their country worldwide.it is good upto some extent , when they achieve something it would bring fame to the nation.but some are misusing it by promoting some advertisements.this may lead to some dissatisfaction among some people around the world.take an example of some favourite player giving suggestion of using some worst brand for its usage.everyone is benefited from them except the users who used showed some disaggrement.\n\nin conclusion, government should start spending their amount on children sport activities when compared with other thing named spending money on sport competitors.because if we spend money on the first purpose it would bring great future to the childs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone loves staying computer I would surprised one I believe whole issue machine distracts things life also enjoyable People learn much It changes peoples whole life The computer like disease virus controles gaining freedom perfectly possible I understand people agree however I propose side best This horrible How It distracts people life I makes blind enjoy nature Spending much time computer horrible disease The hard part get freedom able know ocntroling That way door freedom open The tecknologie keeps away fun homework school fun friends I know break free I experienced thing Technology beautiful thing indeed I many information wont even think person I know even However also foul Once I came horrible seen computer I shut Michines mind anything Changing persons life easy You become complitely new Sometimes changes good sometimes bad But michine make change ten minutes Once see like want change If see something want bad I cant get forced get stealing It horrible thing learn All learn controle self Machines bad influence people There book need information Computers make lazy nt read anything It take life You become It teaches bad thing changes life What path would take", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, something everyone should look into right? Well I say no to that statement. I am clearly against the use of driverless cars. People, might often say,\" but we are becoming more advanced, why are you so against that?\". I am not against us becoming a more advanced civilization, but I just think that the cars are worthless and not a good idea, and here is why.\n\nDriverless cars, require you, the driver to still be alert, even though there is a computer driving it. This is because the comuter cannot travel through obstacles such as tough terrains, or bad roads that call for a,\" human's experience. So if the car is driven by a computer, that should actually make it able to handle any situation right? No, but yest people still want to produce it.\n\nThis is also a bad idea, because, think of the money that will have to be spent on creating all of these automobiles. This project could cost billions and billions of dollars just to equip the technology within the vehicle itself, let alone the cost to actually make the cars. The technology might not be an issue at all for many people around the world, but the money is deffinately an issue, the taxes and monthly revenues might go up even higher, just to fund the project to make these cars.\n\nFinally, cars should not be driver less, because,they cost way too much money, which it states in the article that,\" radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars\". If this is true, then think about all of the money that will be paid in the future, due to the many of advancements in technology. The cars still call for a driver's touch, so the thing is that these cars are not fully able to drive without someone, and it is just a waste of time and money, to make something that still has to require that a human opperate and control it. Also, if an accident occures, then who is to blame, shuley not the manufacture, they weren't in the car, but wait their technology was. If an accident happens, then this could cause problems between people and the manufactures because the technolgy was the on in control of the car, but yet the person was in the car fully capable of driving it at the time, so exactly who is to blame for the incident.\n\nHere is why cars should not be driverless, because they cost way too much money. They also need you to be alert at all times just in case there is an obstacle in the road. And finally, they could cause problems between manufactuers and people, because if an accident happens, then who is to blame for it. Simple cars, should not be driverless", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As time goes by, many technological advances come about and many change the world we live in. Within a few years there have been many new inventions that have completely revolutinized the way we live. Some people like the new ideas that are brought up and some don't. It all depends on who has a purpose to use it. The idea of cars that can drive themselves have came up and have some scratching their heads. Many do not want to have one of these cars and the developers are trying to find ways to improve them. As they continue to test them and see if they are ready to be sold to the public, the public can only wait and see how this will turn out.\n\nVehicles have been improved year by year and there always seems to be a new model that comes out and is said to be the 'best' that has ever been made. The people want them and no matter what, there are always some things that bug the owners. As new models come out, the prices of the vehicles go up. Just imagine the price of a new car that is able to drive itself. We have no idea how the cars will affect our everyday life and what changes it will bring as well. I personally believe that these brand new cars will not be a good thing to have. It could cause anger and we could only imagine the price to get one repaired if it were to be in some sort of accident. With a slow limited speed, it would cause the other drivers on the road who drive normal cars to be very aggrivated. The weather also brings up a new con in the public's mind as we wonder how the car will run in something such as snow or heavy rain. The car is drives itself until it reaches things like moving past an accident and moving through work zones. It may have the driver bored out of their mind, waiting for their turn on the wheel and has people wondering if others are able to be in the car with them. Could the car cause accidents and will be available to all who are able to afford it? There are so many new ideas that can have positive and very negative affects.\n\nThere are still many questions that stay in our heads that we want to be answered. The car still has some time until it is publically released, but we are all anxious to see what this vehicle will do to our lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology plays a vital role in the 21st century, which led to a series of revolutions and numerous big changes in human society. It is said that people in the 21st century will have much more leisure time than before. I will delve to explain with sufficient details according to my own experience and also providing specific examples to this statement in the following passage.\r\n\r\nFirstly, as well known, Technology is the symbol of advance produce. For example, machines can replace many jobs that people did by hand in the 20th century. Besides, the advanced information communication technology can contribute to people’s remote cooperation work and conferences quickly. And it helps to decrease time consuming comparing to the past when people spent most of the time on the journey to the meeting, for instance. \r\n\r\nWhat’s more, recently, AI has become an efficient tool regarding to what is considered to be a repeatable process by human beings, such as the challenges of human’s brain power to solve the great amount of arbitrary information. With the assistance of AI, people now can select the key proportion of work and leave the surplus for AI, which will significantly release people from the heavy and duplicatable daily routines.\r\n\r\nOverall, I concern that Technology will provide much more free time in the future, like the last two industry revolutions. People’s prediction for it is true and forward-looking, and I hold a positive attitude. Nevertheless, Technology may produce some new breakthroughs, like finding a new material or building a new system, which all will change the current environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents like the author suggests. The author says Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. I agree with rhe authors statement.\n\nVenus is is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Which makes it easy to see. Venus is the closest to Earth in terms of density and size. And it is occasionally the closest in distance too.\n\nVenus had a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. Temperatures om the planet average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater than our planets.\n\nVenus may once have been the most Earth-like planet in out solor system. It has a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable but the NASA is working on approaches to study Venus.\n\nI think Striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value. We could find many new things and maybe creatures that had once lived there. The author says Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been suggested that topic for discussion, more people believe that art is a necessary subject for children in different places such as school, on the one ,hand the others believe that it is a waste of time. I am to admit that there are both correct and incorrect points on this topic.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I am of the opinion that art is indispensable for more people because this activity can help you to develop your worldwide, thinking style, comments and so on. Moreover, many prominent artists commenced this process from childhood and they have been unforgotten yet. As a matter of fact, the art is being used by people like(as) both profession and hobby. That many people can earn income from it. Personally, I believe that art helps to affect to become creative. Briefly, I think that art is crucial and indispensable.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, as a matter of fact, in this day and ,age some people claim that it is a waste of time. It seems to me that there are more reasons as a pattern they think that essential subjects are to enforce by people. A human believes that there isn't meaning on this action and the young or the others must be realized more decisive acts than art. For ,instance they should separate more time for resting, relaxing, learning lessons and so on.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, my own view on this matter, we can't deny how is an important art in people life so I believe that art is essential for children at school. If they don't desire to engage with this activity, they will enforce their opt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Viking Face of Mars Real or Fake? The face of of mars is claimed by lots of people to be real, the people say it might be a landbulge, ancient arifacts, aliens created it? In arguments like this there are other sides to every story then theres a great sum of people who think its fake that they faked it to get attention or get the community on this fact ,Because they might be working on something else so no-one looks into it.\n\nIn 1976, they first found out about this so called face. A spacecraft for NASA was circling the planet, taking photo's when spacecraft 2, spotted the shadowy likelyness of a face of some sort. The face looked like it was looking back at the camerafrom the region of the planet called Cydonia. The Face was also nearly 2 miles long from end to end! But everyones opinion is different. My opinion is that its a natural landform on the planet, Because why would some aliens make such a thing like that to just leave in the ground on that planet.\n\nI think it was just an astroid hitting the planet and flying some of the debree's to a pile that looks like a face in a certion type of year. The shadows go over the pile of planet chunks to make it look like a human face. Also when that photo was taken in 1976 the camera's back then were very pixellated not high definition where you can see the detail, in 1998 the camera's were getting a little better as you see on the article about this \"Face on Mars\" it looks like the so called face is deforming because it has been there for 12 years since the last un high definition picture.\n\nIn 2001 the picture shows that the face looks cracked maybe, Because back then the camera's were not as good you couldnt see the detail, But now in 2001 the cameras start having greater detail so is that why u couldnt see the cracks in the other pictures? The world may never know until someone goes to mars to investigate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cell phones and the Internet might have a lot of advantages for the older generation. Nevertheless, this age group is less likely to machinery. \n\nTo start with, one implication of the challenge could be pointed out as following remarkable shifts in automation tendencies, the circumstances in which beneficial site of technological facilities for a society, especially for older adults, have become more widespread. Sufficient findings show that the Internet enables the old generation to communicate with others via social media, such as Whats app, Vk and Skype, in a more convenient way. To give a clear example, the Internet plus the digital phone with a camera allow grandparents to converse with their children who are located overseas by video calling, with the help of social media. Thus, hardly anybody can refuse to accept that it is exceedingly difficult to get rid of this. \n\nHowever, the older generation is less likely to use technological appliances. Therefore, some experts who deem the situation worrisome may suggest tech-savvies to organise free lessons for elders in order to encourage them to use this advanced technology. Elder scholar course called Medicare is a glaring example of this suggestion. I firmly believe that both younger and older generations will gain valuable lessons during these classes. Nevertheless, it is necessary to weigh all the facets of every particular situation. \n\nTo sum up, the advocated solution is reasonable, since it is backed up by my own experience, for I am a volunteer of the Medicare organisation, who understands that it is essential to encourage older people to use new technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt faced multiple issues theory It took lots time people begin realizing reality For example Airships law preventing getting low urban areas Also realized major would play negative role Wind would cause swing around Docked They thought way rear ship soon realized unsafe many people They heard New Jersey Destroyed fire Due hydrogen Also unsafe New York population Overall began realize saftey issues unpractical", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Home The blueprints lives solidary mood The family happy free longer Cuba It loved environment friends family always coming table They caring family They always arms door wide open refugees They got back feet They happy loving caring family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion effects computers people world spend time sitting computer day day If someone I knew spent day long computer I would tell head sould go side get fresh air get exrcise Some times way make contact talking computer Although computer quit helpful looking important artifacts important information medical plans tutorials fix make biuld things meet new people But computer dangerous place well meet someone lieing age person might rape miurderkill If spend twentyfour seven computer could paralized lack exercise get lumf ophemia thats body pears exercise would need special treatments Like masogise Computers also good give hand eye coordination useing still looking sometimes people useing computer videos video websites You get computer uloaded quality Some systems howe computers connected computer like There games called pc games pc games comeucicate childern teach write read spell pronounce words There also spiecal computers andor websites search tutorial speaking different langueges There also sites search tutorials playing instroments Some people use computer fill emptynis inside inistead eating Some people obeuse compeuter dug like re addictied Imagine someone addictied computers every heshe goes would take laptop Many people died useing computer thats obeused Everyday people buy computers invention helpful time goes sciantists makeing new things save llives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that these days a number of technological devices available are rising the conflict between the wealthy people and the poverty people. While some people think that it has an opposite impact, I would argue both aspects and believe that the advantages are more dramatic.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are several reasons why this issue causes an increase in the gap between the two classes of society. First and foremost, the increasing level of automation may lead to a higher unemployment rate. Driverless cars, for instance, are gradually replacing the human in the driver area, particularly, taxi drivers, truck drivers, and so on which means low-income people may earn less money than the past. As a result, they could struggle to fend for themselves and also support their families. Secondly, just the rich may equip themselves with modern facilities such as air conditioning systems or smart items, which may improve their productivity, while the weak people could not afford to do this.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I would argue that why this phenomenon could decrease the conflict between the poor and the rich. First of all, more and more having modern technology would generate new kinds of jobs for all people regardless of their financial backgrounds, which means people from all financial platforms could have a better job opportunity. A ride-share driver, a typical example of this, is more prevalent over the world. Furthermore, due to the development of the internet, people from all backgrounds may approach to a wealth of information. As a result, poor people may acquire an adequate amount of knowledge which helps them earn money in the future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although having negative influences because of the improvement of gadgets, especially, the distance of two classes of society, there are also a couple of benefits that falling that gap significantly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist mentally physically positively negatively For instance Grape Juice Factory bottling plant A sandblasted picture young boy pouring refreshing glass juice mouth could still seen This affected author mentally making remember water Which inturn affected physically becoming dehydrated moments passed So overall setting features negative direction affect cyclist Another example One ramshacked shed several rusty pumps coral could nt hold lamest mule greeted This sight troubling This affected cyclist mentally making think never going see civilization It also affected physically water tasted like battery acid put deeper dehydration state This setting features negative affect cyclist The setting features affected cyclist like environment person adised makes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes response saying spring comes hibiscus budding take test I think feels hope faith I say girl moved away home feels horribly lonesome deppresed wants go home She I nostalgic past sees plant gives sense comfort like home When says In spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again I think says upset failed test plant gives sense comfort gives faith hope pass test spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars. In my opinion, they are useless. In the passage, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author mentions positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. I agree with the negative aspects. The author mentions that the drivers would still have to take over the cars under some circumstances. The author also mentions that most driving laws are for drivers not cars.\n\nOne negative aspect that the author mentions is that even with all the features that the driverless cars have, drivers would still have to watch the road. They would still have to take over in circumstances such as driving around roadwork or accidents. The name 'driverless car' means that the car does not need a driver to drive itself. The driver having to drive around certain circumstances, takes away the whole point of driverless cars. Some people would want the driverless car so they could go on long roadtrips without having to worry about sleeping while driving. If the car needs the driver to be alert all times, the driver has to worry about sleeping. What if the car needs a driver but the driver is asleep and the driver sleeps through the alert sound? Then that would result in an accident.\n\nAnother negative aspect that the author mentions is laws. The traffic laws, road laws, driving laws, are all made for human drivers. Laws such as the ones of accidents. If there is an accident that involves regular cars, the driver who is at fault gets penalized, whether it is having to pay for the other car's repair or getting a ticket. If there is an accident involving driverless cars, who is at fault? The driver who wasn't alert because he bought a driverless car, which means the car doesn't need a driver or the manufacturer of the car, who should've made the car completely driverless. Having driverless cars also means having to make new laws. They would have to make laws to somehow control the recklessness that the cars can cause.\n\nI know that there are positive aspects to it such as technology that can sense objects around it, but these technologies would only alert the driver to take over. They wouldn't be able to control all types of situations on their own. Why? Because they are simply machines. Machines can't do everything a human can. They can't react to things right away, like humans can. Sometimes, they can stop working under a lot of pressure. They can have faults in them or have an important part, that makes them work, missing. Last, but not least, a human makes a machine, and under these circumstances, humans can make mistakes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I blive computers lot effects people example eyes body mind First eyes set next computer close eyes gets effected computer screen lose eyes woudnt able see read alot fun staff like playing want set near computer Second body set computer whole day exersice get fat word body become fat able ran lot stuff set computer whole day Thrid watch computer like video play new game mind thinking go school think forget every thing wanted thinkin Fanilly I telling every spened much time computer exersing fun act side working school work homework exersice I want everyone good life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studdies have shown that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and 50 percent in the United States alone. Many people see this as and eye opener to life in the suburbs without motor vehicles. There have been actions on car deduced communities in Europe. Also France baned Driving do to smog. Sounds Extream, but it is very effective.\n\nThere have been some countries that have reduced the usage of cars to almost nothing. In Vauban, Germany Residents of this community have given up their cars. This may seem a bit insane, but the way the government did it is varry smart. Street parking, driveways, and home garages are generally forbidden. Their streets are completely \"\n\nCar-Free\n\n\". The government made it that if you still wanted a car you would have to pay an aditional $40,000 for a spot when buying your home. The result is 70 percent of Vauban's Families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. In the United States, the EPA (\n\nEnvironmental Protection Agency\n\n) is promoting \"\n\ncar reduced\n\n\" communities. Legislators are starting to act as well. Bogota has a car-free day where the only motor vehicles running are busses and taxis.\n\nSome countries are even going to harsh measures by banning motor vehicles all togather. In France they had so much smog that they baned driveing all togather. France desided that they where going to order even-numbered license plates owners to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Same for odd-numbered cars the following day. almost 4,000 drivers were fined, and 27 had their cars impounded because of their reaction to the fine. But congestion was down 60 percent in the capital. In Bogota, Colombia they have had three straight years where cars have been banned with only buses and tavis permitted in a capital of 7 million. Their goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines. A businessman Carols Arturo Plaza said, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nBased on all of the previous information givin, we can conclude that driving bans, and car-free campains have helped our environment. These countried have reduces the smog in their air. They have goten people to partisipate in their community. Also They have gotten other countries to get involved in this cause. Diffrent countries have Made their own style of these programs to their advantage. This idea of car-free suburbs is changing the way the population reacts in the community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car usage all over the world has reduced and been reducing slowly. Some of the advantages of limiting car usage may be the reducing of pollution or just to save moeny. Also due to many different reasons, even if it's for their own needs, or to just minimize the pollution going on in different parts of the world. In many places car usage has been being limited for countries all over. If it's China, Spain, Columbia, Paris, Germany, or even the United States of America. Not all countries have taken part in trying to reduce the use of cars to an all time low. That may just be their own choice. While other countries are sure trying to cut the usage of car for a variety of reasons. Some places in the world are doing it so they can cut some of the pollution done to the world. And if you think about it if half of the world tryed as hard as they possibly could to try and minizie pollution the world wouldnt be so pulloted. I know cars aren't the only things that cause pollution, but its a pretty big part of the daily life for any person no matter where they are.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany a suburban area has almost completely given up driving and even owning a car. \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park\" (Rosenthal 2) but it cost a lot of money to even own a parking space. \"Car-owners can buy a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" (Rosenthal 2) That price may just be enough to keep people from owning a car all together. According to the article \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, 70 percent of Vauban's Families don't even own a car and 57 percent sold a car just to move there. Isn't that crazy? Imagine life without cars, it has advantages and disadvantages of course but advantages can lead to a positive outcome no matter what the reason is. By people in Vauban not owning cars they are most likely saving a lot of money because they don't have to buy the car, pay the ridiculous amount for a parking spot, and pay for the gas thats going to end up pollution the world anyway. Just a few of the many advantages in reducing or cutting out car usage completely.\n\nDue to all the terrible and mass amounts of smog in Paris, France, they enforced a \"partial driving ban to clear the air or global city\" (Duffer 10). For example, in this article called \"\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\n\n\" by Robert Duffer, on monday motorist with even numbered license plates were told to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine which turns out to be $31 U.S. Dollars. And then the same thing would happen to those whose license plates ended in an odd number the following day. This had to have cut pollution a huge amount. If you think about how many people are living in Paris, and you think about them all staying off the road due to a ban then you may be able to understand the amount of pollution that wasn't produced during this ban. Now Paris, did this for the advantage purpose of reducing the amount of pollution they had in their air and by not adding more to it. It couldn't have a negative impact they were doing something good for the enviornment even if it didn't really help that much. Out of the whole city of Paris about \"4,000 drivers were fined,\" and \"27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine\" (Duffer 12). Another advantage that Paris had due to them banning car usage was that \"Congestion was down 60 percent\" (Duffer 14). The ruling French lifted the ban when the smog cleared up enough.\n\nBogota, Columbia turned what they did as a tradition, into a big hit to tons of poeple in other countries. \"\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\n\n\" by Andrew Selsky informed the public about what was started a few years ago back in Columbia.\n\nFor a day cars except for buses and taxis were banned. In the city of \"7 million, the goal is to promote alternative transportation and also reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines.\" (Selsky 21) Due the day without cars, the city of Bogotas has \"118 MILES of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American City.\" (Selsky 27) One advantage they had was that because of the day with out cars the parks and sports centers have been in the best shape they could possibly be in. They also did have to reduced the amount of pollution that was being put into the air, because it was such a big hit to other cities and countries.\n\nYet another article by Elisabeth Rosenthal called \"\n\nThe End of Car Culture\n\n\", is stating the advantages in the United States and what has happened with the reducing of cars. \"Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" (Rosenthal 29) The minimizing of cars in The U.S. has some advantages those being, \"Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions\" (Rosenthal 29). New York City for example is home to the heart of public transportation due to all the taxis and the subway. Not many people in New York city drive or even own a car due to the congested streets, and the ridiculous amount of money you have to have just to park it like it was in Germany. Crazy amounts of money to park a car is just an outrage. The advantage here would be the money saved by not even owning a car and storing it. Another one would be the traffic is bad but not as bad as it would be if more people had cars. Public transportation is huge in New York. It's already expensive enough to live in New York imagine if there werent as many taxis and if the subway wasn't there at all. Picture all the pollution there would be.\n\nTo wrap up everything, as stated there are many advantages to reducing car usage all around the world. If it was to reduce smog or pollution of just to save money they are still advantages to decreasing the amount of times you use a car. If something is in walking distances why not just walk instead of taking a car and wasting money and also polluting the air (unless it's a hybrid). The limiting of car usage is slowly but surely growing all over the world. Yes, cars are faster to get places, but why waste the money and clean air to be somewhere quickly? Think of all the advantages there are in reducing car usage not the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You use driving in everyday life such as the school bus, cars, trucks, etc... Today manufactors are smarter than ever and today the have driveless car! That is crazy isn´t it, now you still have to have your hand on the wheel but for the most part the drives for you.\n\nI dont´t mind the idea of moving cars, I just wouldn´t buy one because I like to be able to control the car and not a computer. I just don´t think i would trust it. The price on these car are probaly going to be very high and if you wreck who are you going to blame it on, the car or yourself. Plus we would have to make new laws about the marst cars as well.\n\nIf there are these cars I beleive there will be more wrecks because of machanical failure in ther car, Those wrecks will lead to lawsuits of the people who had the car and is trying to the maufactors and the people have a good lawyer they will probaly which might put the car business in a strugle if the give up all this money from lawsuits.\n\nIf we have driverless car there will be more wrecks and mor lawsuit out and I don´t think it is worth all of that. So I think we should just stick to regular car and make them more safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Of course, to reach a more sophisticated and more developed society, daily inquiries are essential and crucial. Although any government pays attention to such an important issue, it doesn't seem to be enough, to support post-graduate research. However, good financial donations , sometimes, are allocated to less worthy projects. In this essay, we are going to discuss and take into account the pros and cons of this weak policy of some dignitaries.\n\nFirstly, as we all know, and aforementioned, a modern community demands an immense amount of routine research, often done by postgraduate students of any major. Certainly, any research needs money to be accomplished and lead to useful results. But this budget, sometimes, is not sufficient and though, it may be quit and remain incomplete. Since the government is in charge of promotions of the country, then they must consider it and devote enough money to it.\n\nSecondly, there are many subjects with less gravity, which can be easily ignored. A big fraction of these projects never make any significant contribution to the citizens. These subjects, not only squander the treasure but also waste the precious time of numerous scholars. Personally, I think, politicians should assess all the subjects by some erudite people and eliminate unuseful cases.\n\nIn conclusion, it is so important to make inquiries about different matters. All community needs to promote these efforts. But we must be aware, of how to spend the country's income. In other words, by allocating a sufficient amount of budget to postgraduate research, we can expect the realm to advance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This software could help millions of people out around the world in classrooms, work spaces, jobs, schools. Even in the community. If they could put that software in cars to help whenever people are sad or angry. To keep them from going and not only harming themselves but other people by driving like maniacs. This software could help save millions of lifes too. It could help with depression also. So i was that i had this software on my computers because it would be cool to always know how im feeling and how my friends are feeling. I am completely for this product.\n\nThis software could help a lot of schools out in their students grades. By getting facial expression recognizable computers whenever a student is bored or confused on how to do something it changes the whole lesson. Also it can help make animated faces more expressional like video game characters. Anime charcters. If you smile at a specific ad that pops up on your computer screen your computer will show more ads like that. Also if you frown at that ad the computer will show differents ads.\n\nDid you know whenever you are surprised or angry your muscles in your face tighten or move on their own? well whenever you are surprised your frontalis pars lateralis raises your eyebrows, and when you are angry your orbicularis oris tightens your lips.\n\nThis new software can now decode old painted faces. Like the Mona Lisa, the world famous painting created by Leonardo Da Vinci. The software found out that, that day Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\n\nThis product is helpful and could help doctors, teachers, parents and friends with people around them. The product should come out with this on computers and cell phones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorial college should be thrown out and the popular vote for the president should take its place because the elctorial college is unfair and the people don't really have a voice.\n\nThe electorial college should go away because it unfair. Electorial votes are unfair because the canidates only focus on the bigger states, \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campain ad.\" Votes dont even get to vote for the president, they vote for state electors. \"Under the electorial system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" This is why we should despose of the electorial system and just go off popular votes.\n\nAnother reason why we should replace the electoral college for popular vote is because the people don't really have a voice in the electorial system. Voters do not directly vote for the president but they vote for the slate electors who then vote for the president. We the people should have a direct vote for the president. \"Consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" so in other words we have put our trust in people to have a voice for us when we could just do it ourselves. \"voters sometimes get confused about electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\" Even though the electorial system is all kinds of messed up there is an upside to it, \"perhaps most of the worrying is the prospect of a tie in the election vote. In that cases, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.\" They use the Representatives to break a tie so there wouldnt have to be a run-off election. With popular vote you wouldn't have to have a run off because there is not an even number of people registered to vote in America. So i urge the popular vote to take the place of the electorial college system.\n\nIn conclusion, the electorial college system should be exicuted and popular votes should be subsituted because the electorial college system is unfair and the people don't really have a voice in the election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen an illusion where it looked like a figure, but then you realize it was just something else?\n\nEveryone has had that happen, and that is because your brain is being fooled. Recently, research shows that your brain assumes something when it looks like what you think of. For example, the pop icon, known as the \"Face of Mars,\" has fooled many scientists as NASA, making them believe that aliens were trying to give out signals. Unlike the other scientists, I believe that this \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform that looks similar to a human face.\n\nFirst of all, I believe that this peculiar face was made from the winds on Mars. It is true that when erosion occurs on Earth, tiny sediments of rocks are moved away from the original rock. I believe that erosion also occurs on Mars because a rock that looks like a face does not show up all of the sudden. Also, as you can see in the picture Viking 1 photographed, you can see tiny holes on the forehead of this rock. It is my opinion that this rock was eroded at some time and started to form a figure of a face.\n\nSecondly, the picture resolution of the rock was not as clear as it is today. So because of the resolution, the image looked similar to a human face.\n\nAlso, at the time of 1976, scientists still believed in the theory of aliens. However, about 22 years later, the workers at NASA captured the image of the rock again, but this time they used higher resolution. Then scientists were putting it all together by finding out that this rock was not a signal coming from Martians. So because of the resolution of the picture, the sceintists assumed that the rock came from aliens.\n\nHowever, just because this face-like rock is from aliens doesn't mean that the theory of aliens isn't true.\n\nThere are still many beliefs that aliens exist. For example, in 1957, there was a group of aliens coming toward a farmer. However, they left Earth and there were no other signs of aliens from then. Then there was the flying saucer in the sky in 2013.\n\nMany people assumed that it was a UFO, and there are still some research about that incident today. So even though that there was no sign of life on Mars, there has to be life somewhere out in the universe.\n\nIn conclusion, people still believe that the \"Face on Mars\" still came from aliens. Some people are like me, who believe that the rock was formed from erosion and that scientists didn't have the resolution at the time to figure out that it wasn't really a human face. Overall, the rock was just a mesa on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face can speak more than words. Most communication is nonverbal, its emtional communication. Although we can fake a smile or fake an emotion some people might not catch on, well with new technology computers can now read our emotions. Dr. Huang, has come up with new software allowing computers to read and understand a person's facial expresions. This software allows a new connection to be made with humans and computers; and help each other communicate better. This new technology is a great idea for making our future with technology more enjoyable.\n\nWith technology on the uprise in todays age, it is becoming more of a neccessity in our everyday lives. Most schools teach with electronics, many jobs rely on technology, and the average person spends half their day on their phone. This software can make our experiences more enjoyable on electronics, for example \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\". This makes the time spent on computers more enjoyable as we will see more things we like. Not only is it a good idea for consumers, its also a great way for bussinesses to advertise.\n\nIn schools it can be hard for kids to enjoy lessons or subjects if they don't undertsand them. If we have computers that could detect the students emotion, then that would better the students learning experience. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" , understanding the students emotions could help their education. As this computer could read if a student is confused or bored, it can just as esaily make the lesson understanable or interactive. With this type of technology it could change the way education is handled all together.\n\nToday's mainstream media is all about faking it until you make it, but with this new technology it won't be as easy to get away with. This software can tell a real smile from a fake smile, it's all about the muscle movements. If it can tell a fake from a real emotion then the media will really crack down on today's mainstream stars and politicians. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebirty isn't being truthful.\", this could be a turning point for the media.\n\nWith technology becoming more interactive we are going to find new ways to make our everyday life a little easier. Spotting real and fake emotions can be really difficult these days as we have actors and actresses everywhere. It can also be difficult in learning environments, and even our everyday life. This technology can really help us start to understand each other more and make a more personal connection with technology. This great idea can sprout many more technological advances, who knows what else is instore?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The things you can do to help yourself, and others is just don't drive ride a bike, or take public transportation. Never the less having a car is a great responsiblitiy, like driving the right way, and not driving reckless. That could end up bad, because you know how law enforcement is they will pull you over for anything. Then on top of that they will give you a big fat nasty ticket to pay, so that really ruins what you have to like pay your bills or something. Plus its always better to just take public transportation, because trying to get a car that's worth $40,000, isn't even worth it, if your still paying for it, then you will have to take really good care of that car.\n\nThe car is at its lowest did you know that, because nobody buys them anymore, or nobody gets there permit. Cars are becoming nothing anymore, the roads America bulit will be soon for nothing. Like I said your better not buying a car, then spending all that money, and you have to spend more money on it later, Like if you get a ticket, or you have to pay to get it fix. Pointless absolutly pointless cause most people just uses cars to get from A to B, nothing else like what's the point of having a car if your not going to use it all the time might as well just take a bus, and spend like 50 cents, or something.\n\nIf you really want a car, at least use it instead of just showing it off, and letting it dust in your driveway, or garage. People in other countries like say Germany, all they use is bikes. They live a life without cars, and look at them saving all that money, and what if it is a poor country at least there not greedy and selfish. Also the cars are literally a poison to the enviorment, we are literally killing off our enviorment, and for what the nicest car that you have and probably won't even use that's pretty dumb as if i should say. Having a car, and showing it off doesn't make you cool it make's you look like a selfish greedy person who could have nothing else to spend his, or her money on but who am I to judge right? Soon you will realize that all that money you spent was all just a waste, and you could have done somethimg else better to spend it on.\n\nI'm not saying don't buy a car, Like I mean don't buy the most expensive car ever cause like that's just herendous. Like just buy something that's nice and cheap like maybe a Nissian not a Ferrari. Imagine if you run out of money what are you going to do ask people to help, Your going to have that fancy car, and be like \"oh what will i do\". You will realize that you messed, and that when you were being all selfish and greedy, nobody will care to help you. It's like all these other regular people who use there money wisley and not be selfish. The car is nearly at it's end cause soon there will be no more gas, what will you do. It's at the time where you make your own desisions, and think about do I really want to spend my money on a car, or do I want to be smart and ride the bus, or a bike and save my money and help the enviorment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To letter concerns Computers apart daily life You many things play games watch videos search web even communicate people world They useful people go school bacause complete save work classes Sure maybe people addicted computer others use need Computers massive affect peoples life Sitting around computer day harmful informative many ways One informative ways learn new information every time log That I think computer great effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Have ever wondered like spend time front computers Well I believe front computer day As mom says hour aa day good One reason important need enjoy life offer You could stuff like play catch dogs walk dog play friends house Yes playing computer fun execise know reason end somewhere even need go You could also make lots new friends going doors Like s I met trees animals beautiful senery You could feel like time The last final reason get lot could use could make snowmen winter s raining could watch movie could build lot In conclusion building playing jumping list could go You enjoy outdoors Just rember three good reason could use wonderful lovly outdoors Go walk dog friends ober even family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times ,most of the end users feel irritation by upsurge amount of commercials from marketing companies. I personally believe that consumers have huge impact by the different types of adverts, however some points can be considered to shield them . My opinion as well as solutions are seen in further paragraphs.\n\nThe first and foremost reason behind consumers have influenced on advertisement is that firstly because of the informational aspects of the products which, is related about size, appearance , colour , how to use it gives information to consumers to buy this product or not. Furthermore, another reason is that some advertisement gives transformational tought in individuals mind . For instance, if some advertisement is taken by a well-known celebrity then they may think in different perspective ,by seeing others celebrity use this product some of the people tought that they should also buy this product.\n\nHowever, some of the solutions can be taken for this trend. First one is government should make some laws or policies regarding such types of adverts. Moreover they should monitorized some commercials like if it is harmful for youngsters for example, Alcohol beverages related. Furthermore some individuals also have to take some steps by searching the product reviews on internet or else they should chek the ingredients the products contain as well as by seeing some vedioes about the product which they think to buy, therefore they may get an idea that of such product is reliable to buy or not .\n\nIn conclusion , I think that end-users are influenced by variety of advertisements due to informational aspects ,however some steps should be taken by them to protect themselves from any harmful contains.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a few ,nations an increasing number of people are getting interested to find out the history of the homes or apartments they are living in. There are plenty of ways to discover these details such as websites provided by the government. The most significant cause for all these investigations is the keenness, to get to know the back story of the place.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, nowadays, the majority of society members are interested to find out the history of the place they are residing at. Well, there are a plethora of sources for research such as websites provided by the government. Along with that, the buyers should cross-check all the details presented by the pre-owner. Other than that, neighbours are the go-to option for collecting information or details regarding the property. For instance, in a television ,programme there is a scene in which one person goes to buy a house and it was going smooth however when neighbourhood members told him that it is not worth buying the land as cheap material was used during construction. Therefore, neighbours are the most appropriate and trustworthy option.\r\n\r\nIn order to avoid these problems more and more people are inclined towards verifying the property prior to buying it. Moreover, there are plenty of cases around the world where people land in serious trouble like getting stuck in a cheap quality house or in a haunted house just because of not investigating before buying it. For example, a person in the United Kingdom got arrested right after 3 months of possession as several dead bodies were excavated from his backyard, although he got bailed through court everyone is not so lucky. Henceforth, running a background check for the targeted land piece should be done. \r\n\r\nBy way of conclusion, I strongly advocate that, everyone should definitely run an investigation prior to taking possession of the property through the mentioned ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article I was given is \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". This article is about how venus is proved to be challenging. Evidence from the article says that you cant take the tocks from venus. That must be challenging if you are trying to explore and know more about Venus.\n\nThere Is a new machine in the making. The purpose of the machine is to last long enough to make enough contribute meaninfullt to the knowledge of the scientist. Things that are needed to be tested are things such as the rocks, maybe anything living in venus and the surface of venus. This could all be a help to scientist to know more about venus than what they already know. This is all a challenge.\n\nThis could be dangerous because what if you dont have enough gas to survive in venus if scientist went there like they do in space with the space helmets. There can be many what if's of trying to figure facts out about Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We live in an age when many celebrities are famous for their rich lifestyle rather than for the work they do. While I agree that these kinds of personalities in the world set bad example for the younger generation, I also opine that other well-known people can be considered positive role models.\n\nOn the one hand, it is generally acknowledged that more and more famous people achieve financial freedom without really struggling for it. They might have inherited money from their parents, or been a social media phenomenon showing merely funny moments of themselves. Thus, they are rich and famous for the wrong reasons. The main problem in this situation is that they manipulate their followers, in particular, youngsters in a way that making more money and being popular is not difficult as they think. Therefore, children feel dependent on them because it sounds straightforward to do simple tasks to live a wealthy life. For explanation, the message to the young population is that to succeed in life forever, you do not need any educational background or hard work.\n\nOn the other hand, I have to accept that there are also many celebrities who earned more respect from society for the useful work they do for our community like demonstrating a helping hand to poor individuals or investing a great amount of money in education. Hence, they were approved by the public as an excellent role model in the world, since they have strived hard and gained real abilities to reach their current level. One clear example is the entrepreneur and philanthropist Jeff Bezos, who has almost 150 billion dollars worth with years of discipline and practice. This kind of self-made celebrity may inspire children to ameliorate their modern skills through application and perseverance.\n\nIn conclusion, although I admit that some well-known people have a proclivity to convince youngsters with only their glamorous lifestyle, I also concur with the supporters of good role models for their beneficial influence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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