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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays teenagers learning a large number things from different sources which they get easy access. Also this view is supported by some other have a strong counter argument that youth should be educated at the learning centre that they do not make waste. However, to contrast these other opine that adolescents should teach by their families. In my point of view youngsters should learn at home. Both sides of these debates analysed in this essay before drawing the conclusion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as the economy is facing a plethora of threat from the disposal, garbage it is advisable for parents that they initiate and make an effort to resolve issues. It is possible if they taught to their children that how rubbish can effect for several diseases. For instance, they might show the list of diseases that brought by waste. As a result, teenagers can understand how dangerous it is. Apart from this, parents themselves be an example for tackling this one. For example, they can start a community service to clean their city. Which lead to make an even more clear concept in their mind. It is obvious that why this point of view garnered support.\r\n\r\nHowever, if university start to campaign it would be much more efficient as active as a group can be even much better than as an individual. Such as, if children are doing this in a group they can learn that this is the major responsibility of them. Despite this, the institution also adding their effort in such campaigns. Which make them self fulfilment of their duty. Therefore it is comprehensible why this is popular among many.\r\n\r\nTo conclude with, after musing both sides of the argument I believe that children should learn to avoid waste at their home. As it is difficult to learn at school. There is sufficient demonstrate that this is not the case.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist putting unwanted places starting man took advice many older men dont even know area anymore So riding man seems lost trying follow advice comes across many unknown unwanted areas He starts good comes Rough Road even says sometimes life feel cruel Then come large snake middle road scary enogth slow ride past thing taking road Coming thing strong hard young man", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A face on mars sounds kind of creepy right? How much do we really even know about it? Many scientists believe aliens created it. Others like me believe it is just a natural landform.\n\nIf it was to have been created by aliens it would have been more detailed. The Face on Mars isnt very rare as you think. The face is equivalent of a butte or mesa like the one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. The whole thing is just a conspiracy to increase\n\nNASA budgets. The NASA took a picture that if there was any sort of airplanes, pyramids or small shacks they would have been seen, but none were found leaving no proof that any alien civilization reated it.\n\nDo you still believe there is any sort of connection with aliens? I dont believe so because we would have discovered them by now. NASA has given enough information to prove it is just a natural landform like any other on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "my position on driverless cars is i dont think that they will be a good idea because technolgy isnt always reliable and something could go wrong.i also think that there will be more accidents with driverless cars. i also think that driverless cars will be more expensive than regular cars. Driverless cars will most likely be electric because of how much technology will be added to the driverless car.\n\nthe positives of a driverless car is people that hate driving wont have to drive because all they will have to do is put the location they want to go to in the GPS and just sit and wait. Another positive would be that driverless cars would come with traffic jam assistant which would help with traffic jams. the negativesw of a driverless car is that technology is not alwaysw reliable and if something went wrong there would be an accident. Another negative would be that drivers would get bored waiting to get to there location.\n\ndriverless cars has some positives andf negatives. i dont think that driverless cars will be a thing because its a stupid idea and there would be alot of problems with it. so i dont think that driverless cars will be a thing ever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My Opinion on Electoral Vote, is that we should have a direct vote with all americans to be able to pick not just other people that are with goverment it is not fair, we vote.. yes? but we don't get anyhting out of it. They say we can vote but that vote never counts, only Electoral Votes do. We are like basically thorwing a vote to nothing.\n\nWe should have us Amercians to be able to vote. Not just politicans, it should be the land of the free, not something that is keeping us from changing or helping are country that we think it's right. Well not I like it should be are turn. Over 60 Percent of us Amercians want change in this and I think we should have it, you must be 21 years old or older and it should just be U.S.Citizens only, you have to be born and rasied here.\n\nPopular votes don't even matter now because to be honest there not even counting them. So really what is the point here? Direct vote for U.S. Citizens or have the Goverment choice for you in a way they choose there Politicans. The most votes should be able to have a a goat voting and so on. The Electoral colledge has plenty of problems like, People in there get the wrong Electoral votes mixed up which is a big issue and needs to be fixed right away.\n\nThe majority of the Electoral votes are 270 there are 538 electors its required to elect a President each state has an enrollement of which each state can have or obtain pretty much if the state is bigger the Electoral votes proceed to be higher and higher, which isn't excalty fair we wanna go with our own votes etc. We deserve to makeour lifes easier not the goverments or anything like that we are equal and it should stay that way.\n\nThe president election is held every 4 years and a big deal and which is a problem is, voters cannot vote for who they want vote for, but the state electors, can make the president and give him this so called power, anyways that's a state issue, change should be here soon but, thats a little of my input on here for which Electoral votes or Directs are right, change will be soon so just keep your hopes up and keep your head up straight.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it statesdiffernt types of dngers from the planet. So when I read this article the author I knew good points and facts about venus. In paragraph 2 the text states that we have \"sent numerous spacecraft to land on the plant but not a single one has survied.\" The dangers of landing on the planet is very high so taking percousion is needed in this state. The atmosphere, the surface and ect. all are very risky to us humans.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth. But there enviroment is somewhat similar to ours. In one point in time Venus could have supported forms of life. Now it is just a hot rocky planet with valleys,moutains and craters. If humans were to go there we would surive, but it wouldnt be in any good conditions as paragraph 5 states on the last line. Hovering above is the only way we would be able to get a decent look at the planet.\n\nIn conclusion,\n\nVenus has vaule and Scenitis has gained alot from it. But we only have our curiosity. In the future it will lead us to more discoveries to the planet. The dangers of the planet can be expaned to meet many more vaules. Earth will make it one day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many obstacles building mooring mast Empire State Building One thing simply building would strong enough hold dirigibles weight Due fact strengthen framework entire building They put sixty thousand dollars worth modifications framework Also right equipment dirigibles served problem The dirigibles nt right docking tools dock newly built mooring mast The back dirigibles could also swung back forth docked also served issue When came docking Another problem dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen highly flammable nt want something could easily catch fire near building like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought there was a possiblity of going to venus? Yeah i didnt either but i completly agree with the autors point of view on this article i agree about going to venus for more information cause it would help us understand what happened to venus and if one point and time it was like earth.\n\nThe challenge of going to venus with anything is its massive air pressure, solfuric acid rain, and really hot surface temptures and we currently dont have anything to actually be able to survive those condtions for more then maybe three weeks or less so what i say we do is that we look at metals that are restiant to stuff like that and see if we could try combining the atoms to make an alloy.\n\nIn conclusion in my personal opionion i think yes we should try a little harder to get to know more about venus cause it would explain a kot and tell us if one day it was like earth and what happened to it so we could avoid it so that doesnt happen to earth and on top of that the more we learn about it the more the possiblity of it maybe becoming a hospital planet to go to if we need to ever move off of earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that solving important national issues like housing shortage should be decided by the government itself. I completely agree that governing bodies should resolve the growing problem of housing insufficiency in larger municipalities.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in this contemporary time, the lack of housing in some places is unfortunately still an on-going problem. For example, in the Philippines, numerous people are still awaiting accommodation services promised by the people in power for years. In other words, past administrations have pledged more housing units that have left people desperately expecting for nothing. As a result, parents with their children are seen roaming around the streets begging for food and shelter.In addition, several organizations have tried to help people with nowhere to stay by collecting donations. However, this is obviously not enough as many people still need accommodation support. \r\n\r\nFor this reason, in my opinion, numerous people are paying taxes every year and the authority should allocate more funds for those who need shelter. This is also to avoid locals getting sicker from living in the streets. Moreover, this will prevent homeless people from accidents and also from doing illegal things along the streets. Thus, with these people facing poverty, government should provide more help and support until they find jobs and earn money to pay for their own housing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, with the continuous support of the government bodies, housing shortage can be determined if only certain measures will be in place and annual funds will be ensured to provide lodging to their citizens who need it most.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They author conclued sentence coucluding sentence saeng thinks deserve another chance taking garden test failed test mother disappointed And Saeng say end story s gon na confidence garden test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table is presenting that amount in litres of milk production at these four diffrent coutries in specific three each year during 20 years term.\nNetherlands and Australia are producing significantly big number of litres milk, compare with those other countries. In 1990, Netherland and Australia is almost same amout of milk production was done, then in 2000, Australia is slightly less than Netherland which is 50000 difference. In 2010, those two countries have big differencies of number of litres wich is more than 2 milion litres.\nOther two countries are much less production than First two countires. Nevertherless, Tanzania is still the one of the big producer of milk which is third place of this table.\nGuatemala is small producer, but those 20 years, production is much increase which is 60000", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the second planet from our. while Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point the earth, it has proved a very challening place to examine more closely. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such a environment would crush even a sunmarine accustomed to diving to mthe deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals, also notable, Venus has he hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated bby Venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar syetem. Long ago, Venus was probably coverd largely with oceans and could be supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifcally productive..", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The usage of Facial Action Coding Systems will change the way learning has been viewed traditionally. Students will no longer be bored or destracted from learning. The requirements are simple, having a face and 44 major facial muscles. simple right? Anyone is able to benefit from FACS.\n\nThis software works based on its ability to detect human emotions by detecting an \"action unit,\" which is trigered by the movement of a sertan muscle. Even you do similar things to this software, for example; you might be able to guess the emotion of someon based on their face expresion, right? This software works the same way but in a more accurate level.\n\nThis technology would benefit classrooms the most, for example; if the software detects a sad emotion ond the user when learning the software could make the lessong more intersting and making the student stay on track with others.\n\nFACS could also alert teachers of students that could be having problems outside of school based on their emotions. This software can detect \"diferent types of emotions\" like happines, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadnes as Dr. Eckman stated.\n\nIn conclusion this software would precent many benefits for schools and users. this would also make better and more interestign ways of learning for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exercise is always playing a vital role in humans life.It is believed that parents should encourage offspring to invest less time academic and more time devoted to strong workout.I completely accord with this statement and the reasons for my opinion will be elucidated in forthcoming paragraphs with relevant illustrations.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, why guardians need to encourage their juveniles to spend more time in body workout, the reason behind is that children always live fit if they do more focus on the exercise and never survive with any health issue.For example, everyone knows that education is very significant for pupils.However, if students participate in any sports activities, the former could not find any difficulty with a medical issue.Moreover, if the person will not fit then it is not possible for him to give an examination if he or she suffering from a fever\r\n\r\nTo add more, children should participate in sports activities.Due to the fact they could learn many things from there such as discipline, communication skill and team spirit.For instance, cricket has 11 members of the team.Everyone knows their own responsibilities over there.People can learn how to play with teamwork and how to stay calm in any circumstances.Apart from this ,it will help to expand their friend circle.Therefore, paying attention to strong exercise always crucial in humans lives.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, owing to the reasons such as children always live fit, fine and strong with the body activities and always learn teamwork and more socialize in their life.I am in favour of who opine parents should motivate to their wards to do more focus on physical strength activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is getting closer and closer every year. Certain car manfucaturers are paving the way in technalogical engineering. They are creating driverless cars. This means that the car can drive it self. No longer will people have to spend several hours constantly driving on a long road trip. With these new cars the future of drivng will change forever. There are many positives to driverless cars. They are efficant, safe,\n\nand easy to operate.\n\nDriverlass cars will be able to manage themselves in every way without a human having to worry about it. Since the cars are self driving they will just need to know were to go and they will\n\ndo it. With a GPS they can find the closest and fastest way to get to its destination. Humans will not need to worry about getting lost or making the wrong turn, the car will do all of that and more for them. And with the new technology that cars have now these driverless cars can become electric as well. Some already are. That would make it the ultimate future car.\n\nSafty is the number one rule for car manufacturers, the driverless cars are one of the safest cars around. Their sensors can detect when the car is going to fast, slow, or getting too close to other cars. If one of these things happen then the car will alert the driver so they can take over. Most if not all driving accidents are casued by human error, with these driverless cars that will no longer be the case. Diverless cars can also help disabled people drive and get them to their destination safer and faster.\n\nEase of operation is another big thing for cars to have. Whether is new drivers learning how to drive for the first time or people who just want to try out a driverless car, they will be easier to opertate. The controls would be simpler than regular cars, although still similar. The driver will only have to take over when they need to or want to. Putting in the address of the destination will be easy. From there the driver will just have to wait until they arrive or they are needed to take over. With how easy to operate a driverless car will be, more people that were not driving before will be encouraged to get one.\n\nSo in conclusion, Driverless cars are efficant, safe, and easy to operate. If these car are made and become the new standered for driving, it will benefit everyone. Especally if they are also electric, which most of them already are. The benefits are greater than the negitives. Besides who would'int want to have a future car that drives for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph paragraph wants try The author saying hibiscus planted work trying grow hibiscus plant She pass test succeds spring That author concludes paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of transportation.\n\nThese cars are programmed to drive safe and responsible.\n\nThey have many built in features to ensure maximum safety.\n\nUnlike human driven cars they are robots, so they will not do potentially reckless actions and habits.\n\nNot only are the driveless cars are our future, but they are our solution from our reckless driving habits.\n\nDriverless cars have a virtual 360 degree area of coverage when it comes to vision.\n\nThey are able to sense and detect oncoming traffic and adjust according to the situation.\n\nSystems like LIDAR are examples of technological advancements of sensory technology that allow these cars to better know their surroundings.\n\nThere are blind spots when a human drives and misjudgements, but with LIDAR, the car can see its surroundings and make an effective choice.\n\nThere are several fatalities each year in the U.S. alone when it comes to automobile deaths.\n\nWhether it be a freak accident or it was an irresponsible actions.\n\nEither way many people have died from cars driven by people.\n\nWith this system you potentially have the solution to lower car related deaths.\n\nDriverless car have driven for more than 500 thousand miles with no wrecks or deaths.\n\nThe statistics are here to prove it's safer to have driverless cars.\n\nWithout the human variable within driving itself then you'll have a lower risk factor.\n\nThough there are some negative responses to this idea, not prove a strong point.\n\nStates are scared of possible malfuntions or inability to adjust.\n\nThere is also a chance that many people will have no job if the smart cars are taken to affect.\n\nPeople like bus drivers and taxi drivers are no longer needed.\n\nDriverless cars are our future.\n\nThey are safe and reliable for theyare robotic.\n\nThey are all universal and follow the rules of the road.\n\nThey are aware of everything around them.\n\nThey will not make rash decisions for they calculate everything they do.\n\nThe smart car will be the reason why it will be rare for people to get injured in a car accident and why traffic will be smooth and safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face that appeared on Mars was something that all of us would never forget. We didn't know how it appeared or why it appeared, but we were going to figure it out. Some scientist including me think it was just a natural landform. Other scientist think it was created by aliens,but I highly doubt it was.\n\nI'm here working with one of the other scientist, and we're talking about the Face that appeared on Mars. The scientist thinks that the face was madeby aliens but I think it wasn't that it's just a natural landform.\n\nIt was a natural landform because the caption that we put for people to see was \" huge rock formation..... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The face was just a rock formation that gave the illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth becuse it was just a shadow that we were seeing.\n\nHowever the scientist doesn't think that. He thinks that the face was made by aliens. He says that there is no way it was just a natural landform that aliens made this as a sign for something.\n\nHe believes that it was a sign for something that the aliens were going to end up doing. But I told him that it was a natural landform because when we waited to get the best picture in 1998 all we saw was a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nBut of course not everyone was satisfied.\n\nIt was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nI think even though some people still may think it was made by aliens, we all know that it is just a natural landform and it wasn't made by aliens.\n\nI after all did convince the scientist that I was working with, that the Face was just a natural landform and it wasn't made by aliens . But all we have to do now is to convince everyone else that it was just a natural landform. I believe that the Face is just a landform because of so many reasons. So what do you think?\n\nDo you think it was just a natural landform or it was made by aliens?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a growing belief among some individuals that teenagers should be obliged to participate in unpaid community work during their leisure time. While this may have some advantages for both teenagers and the community, I believe that it should not be mandatory.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the proponents of mandatory community work argue that it can provide several benefits for teenagers. Firstly, it can help them develop a sense of responsibility and belonging towards their community. Secondly, it can expose them to various social issues and challenges, which can enhance their awareness and understanding of the world around them. Finally, it can provide them with opportunities to acquire new skills and experiences that may be beneficial for their personal and professional growth.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, mandatory community work can also have several positive impacts on the community. For instance, it can address various local issues such as littering, environmental degradation, and poverty. Additionally, it can promote social cohesion and encourage people to work together towards common goals.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe that teenagers should not be compelled to do community work, as this may have some negative consequences. Firstly, it may lead to resentment and resistance among teenagers, who may view it as a form of forced labor. Secondly, it may undermine the voluntary spirit of community work, which is based on the principle of free will and altruism. Finally, it may divert teenagers' attention and time away from their studies, hobbies, and other interests, which are equally important for their development.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while mandatory community work may have some potential benefits for teenagers and the community, I believe that it should not be imposed on teenagers. Instead, they should be encouraged and motivated to participate in community work voluntarily, based on their interests and aspirations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, driverless cars are a good idea. Having driverless cars can help us in many ways, including preventing crashes, and increased safety. However, driverless cars can also hinder us because technology can always fail, which could have catastrophic consequences.\n\nFirstly, numerous crashes can be prevented. General Motors once created a concept car that ran on a track, therefore creating smarter roads instead of smarter drivers. The only forseeable problem with this is that it would be extremely expensive to redo all of the roads in the country. Another way that crashes can be provented is by improved sensors. Google modified a Toyota Prius with many new sensors, the most important being a spinning 3-D sensor on the roof that scans the surrounding area to see the road conditions. This scanner can inform you if a car is coming at you way to fast and inform you if you need to sspeed up or slow down, or it can have the car do it for you. Both of these are adequate reasons to standardize driverless cars.\n\nAnother reason that driverless cars are a good idea is that they improve people's safety. As previously mentioed, the improved sensors will increase safety. There are all kinds of sensors that sense all different things such as the 3-D sensor, position estimating sensors, GPS reciever, and many more. all of these sensors can tell you if you're to close to the edge of the road, if you have a caar in your blindspot, if you're driving to fast, or to slow, the road conditions, and many other things. All of these sensors are so helpful in informing your car upon what to do to keep you and your family safe. Also, driverless cars take away distracted driving. Recently, a friend of mine recieved a text, picked up his phone to reply, and ran over a trash can. Imagine if that trash can had been a child, or a car containing you and your children. If he had a driverless car, then he would not have hit that trash can, in fact he would never run over anything again. Having driverless cars would infrease the safety factor for everyone.\n\nOn the other hand, having driverless cars could be a bad thing. Technology could fail, leaving a catastrophic mess in its wake. The GPS system could misjudge a distance, causing the car to turn to soon, and run headlong into a building, killing people inside. Another thing is that the self-driving system could fail all together, leaving someone who doesn't know how to drive eiter stranded, or having to drive themselves. Therefore, driverless cars could be a bad thing.\n\nIn essence, driverless cars can be both good and bad for mankind. They can reduce the liklihood of crashing, and increase safety, but the technology can fail, and harm many people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire state Building faced obsticles attempting allow dirigibles dock The greatest obsticle safety pedestrians building Most dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen flammable They didnt want dirigible explode fall pedestrians catch whole building fire Safety main obsticles builders Empire State Building faced trying let dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir mellow unintense subdued almost sad mood emphesized hardships Rodriguez family parents faced struggle give children better life Although slightly depressing mood happy way cheerful author describes kind welcoming Rodriguez family paragraph four But memoir create depressing mood paragraph due explinations families struggles moving give order selflessely better childrens lifeOver cheerful mood memoir sad mood memoir memoir generates mellow calm serene mood throughout article", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has it ever seem hotter than it usually has to you? The sun's heat just burning the skin on your body. Does it feel like if you want to get any where you have drive in a car because it's to far to walk? Cars are our main source of transportation but it is not helping our enviroment. Gas that is used in cars send off green house gas emissions that hurt the ozone layer, a layer of gas in the stratosphere that protects us from the sun's ultraviolent rays. Many cities have started becoming car free because of this harm to the enviroment.\n\nOne of the cities that has become car free is Vauban, Germany [Source 1]. This city has found a way to become car free so that it is good for the enviroment and people can still go to stores or their jobs. What this city does is they make suburbs more compact and make store easily a walk away from a store. It mentions in Source 1 that Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of green house gas emissions. In the United states it is at 50%. All those green house emissions put a hole in the ozone layer making it hotter around the world and letting the ultraviolent rays from the sun hit our body which can cause skin cancer. The design of Vauban is used to structure other cities allowing those cities to use less cars.\n\nThe acumilation of smog can be very dangerous. in Source 2 in talks about Paris having to ban driving due to the amount of smog in city. The people driving would be fined 22 euro. The congestion of the smog dropped 60% because of the ban on driving. Source 2 states that France uses diesel fuel instead of regular gasoline due to a tax policy. Diesel makes up 67% percent of vehicles in France. Diesel fuel is harsher than regular gasosline to the ozone layer because it uses different chemicals and burns quicker than regular gasoline.\n\nIn Source 4 it talks about the United States using less cars than normal. In April 2013 the number of miles driven per person dropped by 9 percent compared to the past. It also states that the amount of young people driving has dropped 23% between 2001 and 2009. This drop in amount of people driving is very good due to green house gas emissions being the second largest source behind power plants. This drop in cars driven also causes less harm to the ozone layer. Source 4 also says that because of technology and the internet people do not have to drive to see and speak with each other. Instead they can e-mail, call, or text each other.\n\nTo conclude, with people driving less cars it becomes better for the enviroment. It allows less smog to build up and hurt the ozone layer allowing ultraviolent rays to harm us. Cities will be designed differently to acomdate the fact of using less cars by making jobs and stores closer to houses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The transition from school to university presents a formidable challenge for many students. This essay will explain why this is the case and then suggest several measures to overcome these difficulties.\r\n\r\nThis shift in academic rigour can be attributed to several key factors. Chief among these is that university courses are characterized by a greater depth of knowledge and a faster pace of learning compared to school. This demands a higher level of critical thinking, independent research, and analytical skills, all of which freshmen may severely lack. Another contributing factor is the newfound independence that comes with university life. Unlike school, where there is often a structured timetable and close monitoring by teachers and parents, university students are expected to manage their own time, which can be a daunting task for those unaccustomed to this level of autonomy.\r\n\r\nTo address this issue, higher education institutions can adopt a range of strategies. One such approach is the implementation of comprehensive orientation programs designed to equip incoming students with essential study competencies, effective time management strategies, and awareness of available campus resources. Additionally, by creating smaller tutorial groups within larger classes, these institutes could provide students with a more conducive environment for asking questions and seeking clarification. Moreover, universities should promote a culture of open communication between professors and students, encouraging them to seek help when needed.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the transition from high schools to tertiary education poses a significant academic challenge for students due to the differences in terms of curricula and greater independence required. By initiating specialized orientation programs, cultivating smaller learning communities, and advocating open channels of communication, universities can help students overcome these challenges and thrive in their academic pursuits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This use of this new technology to read the emotional expressions of sudents in a class room could be helpful a little bit. I would say if it could change how the class is was taught by the expression of every student to make it more fun to participate in class and to stay awake in a class then it would be great to use for schools. Like an example no one likes math ts boring if a computer could tell how to make the class fun for people who don't like it then everyone could enjoy thir classes that they hate and they would do a lot better in. It can also be a negative thing to it someone people probably wouldn't want a computer knowing how they feel in a class. It would be kinda creepy if u sat in a class and your computer told u was 30 percent angry, 40 percent happy, 10 percent fearful, and 20 percent disgusted. it would be kinda cool to know the percentage but its still a little creepy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In I spent two weeks aunt s house At time cousins living My cousins I close liked spend time together On evening decided watch movie I remember called bestfriend s girl So started watch movie super funny laughed constantly My cousin named awesome laugh everytime started laugh I could nt help laugh We watched movie afterwards went go get food We good mood making jokes crazy things make laugh funny My cousins would change voices making higher lower repeating lines movie making things That night ate When got back aunt s house none us tired decided watch late night program called It program composed bunch short cartoons They funny We would make fun laugh mimic characters We stopped watching I tired cousins For awhile sat couches talked continuing make jokes say stupid things would make us laugh About hour later fell asleep continued watch movies hang two weeks I staying It probably best time I happy enjoyed two cousins time spend together I laughed much stomach would hurt time I nt care I happy I still spend time cousins laugh lot I believe time spent together shared laughter brought us closer involed others lives A person laugh knows good time fun around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I think people get less time computers time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends If people spend time computers get stuck computers spending time like going park mall For second opinion people get computers ever leave somewhere far able contact If computer could get computer say s free labtop could take far like On airplane north carolina virginia wasington party road trip ferry boat long island sound For third opinion I agree people computer might plan trip far away place new house planing anerveriry new spot hunny moon gorgest place like ona peek hill hotel bed shape like heart For fourth paragraph I agree people computers count location person house location might particular spot person For fifth paragraph I agree people able get computers I tell planning birthday party child going someone house visit like tennessee Or going see basketball team another team call lakers us caverlars My conclusion people able get computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i believe that smart cars, or driverless cars, are a thing of the future. only the future.\n\nsmart cars seem like a good idea to some, mostly the people that can not drive, due to handicap.\n\nthe cars wouldnt be driving themselves, they would only do simple tasks. such as, steer, accelerate, and brake. humans can do all of that, and more, just fine. the cars \"heads up display\" can work miracles. yet, if the driver isnt paying any attention to them, then the whole thought goes down the drain.\n\nif one of these \"smart cars\" where to get in a road accedent, would it be the manufacturers or the drivers fault. i beileve that it would be the manufacterers fault. if the car has a faulty sytem. then there may be more danger in these cars, than any good. Also, google had announced its first smart car accident, March 1st, 2016. thankfully no one was hurt, but it just shows these cars are not perfect, by any means.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Face on Mars a mesa or is it made by alien life? Well, the answer to that world-wide question is that it is a mesa. In other words, a natural landform that has been there or been made over time by the planets rotation. I strongly believe that the Face on planet Mars is just a natural landform, because we have almost like it on Earth, there are no signs of alien life in the pictures or scientific research, and the pictures taken, show that there are shadows that create a facial look in the natural landform.\n\nFirst off, we have a natural landform located in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. The one on Mars is almost equivalent to the one here on our planet. In paragraph 12, it states, \" That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" This is plainly saying that the one on planet Mars could just be a lava dome of some sort just like the one here on Earth.\n\nAlso, there are no signs of alien life through the pictures taken from the cameras. How could this alien life we talk about create this Face, when there is no evidence of this alien life? The pictures were taken mutiple times in different years to make sure of this. They had people questioning, so they did further research. For example in paragraph number eight, \"...peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by daze.\" The skeptics that wanted the benifits of actually finding alien life wanted actual proof that it is merily only a mesa. They ende up being proved that it is only a mesa.\n\nTo also say, the photographs that were studied have been intereprted. They have been interepreted to the point that they can pin-point certain material. They proved that by when they said that is merily shadows that the mesa has, from depth, that create the face like look. For example in paragraph number three, it states \"The captain noted a 'huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.'\" The images were showing that there were some dips in this mesa that created it to look as if it were an actual face.\n\nThere are people who say,\" Just because the cameras say that there is no life on Mars, doesn't mean that there is no life.\" To prove that wrong, it states in paragraph number 11, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" Also later on in the paragraph, \"...if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian pyramids... you could see what they were.\" Meaning if there was any 3-d image, it would have been picked up and been able to ananlyze. The Face is obviously a natural landform that has been there from the beginnging. Also, people used to say and still say \" look at the man on the moon.\" There is no man on the moon, there is a mesa that was shaped that looks like a Face. The Face n Mars is just another incident of what happend with the moon.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars is just a natural landform like the one here on earth and the one that appears on the face of the moon. I strongly hold my belief that the Face on planet Mars is just a natural landform because there is almost an exact replica here on earth, there are no sientific signs of life, and the pictures that were taken, that have been analized, show that shadows create the face. Will there one day be life somewhere else besides Earth. I will never know, but as of right now and the scientific records that are based on this essay, this Face that people say might be made by aliens is not logical. This Face on Mars is a mesa. Once you can find scientific data that proves there is life on earth, than everything said for years ca be proven wrong. But as of right now, no.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "READING OUR BOOKS Our book movies scary unessasary much violence disterbence young kids scary books movies give maresBooks like good books teenage kids teaches past used like parent need make shore kids watch right shows movies also need watch important movies Hitler treated people bad killed many people I think good lesson kids watch movies read booksAlso I think good book girl guys forceing something someone wrong right Young kids never go called help noone could physically mentally abused noone would listin wrong She never spoke could see pain way looked quietnessMovies like teach kids never mistreat another person Parents stay kids watch read always cautious kids give book going teach something", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well since guys want hear funny story I got couple I m going tell one This one starts I living gets pretty hot I lived couple summers I know hot gets This I wanted get pool fun stay cool But I nt want pool I could hangout I wanted get really nice pool everyone I already knew kind costed bunch money I wanted get big pool I could friends come hangout swim play favorite game marco poloI went go talk dad pool idea He said would love get pool cause would come swim hangout like I saying expensive exactly dad said I told I would pay half ever costed My dad finally agreed go walmart look pools There cheap small ones lot huge expensive ones I looking one right middle small much money I found one eight hundred perfect I wanted I went go asked dad I could get one He said I pay four hundred like original deal could get Like I told I said I going needed We finally came agreement get money first I went back house make plan get four hundred dollars dad job hard cause gets paid lot harder cause I job I decided fix bike go looking around jobs available I went door door find people needed help around house I found couple people needed stuff done agreed pay fifty bucks I could get hundred right batI haul bunch old tree branches garbage away When I done I put money pool savings later I also went place called I good friends one kids related I talked asking I could work little cash said I could go every tree put pink tag agreed give eighty five bucks I took deal bike ca nt go threw mud trees planted My friend said I could barrow little fifty dirt bike take put tags trees I borrowed got eighty five bucks I gave friend ten cause let borrow dirt bikeI m almost half way four hundred When I thinking I got caught buying pool I forgot birthday coming tomorrow I told dad I wanted pool birthday like yeah I already knew I already bought I happy I got pool Now I like two hundred bucks spend I nt know buy I bought bunch food stuff pool party On birthday I invited bunch friends house We got pool even parentsWe decided play marco polo Cause I wanted play My friend dad huge dude playing I said marco lunged I moved kept going went straight threw pools wall everyone fell pool laughing hard I also upset cause pool already broken Luckily dad rich bought another pool He seen crushed I birthday knew I wanted pool He also bought new bike sick During I blast pool I nt pool I new bike", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Ye haw!\" screamed the cowboy. Now that WW II is over, many European countries are in ruins. Because of this, the UNRRA is sending coboys across the oceans. You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can help people, go site-seeing, and still have fun.\n\nFirst of all, you can help people. Some people might argue that it's to much work. But, you ship cows and horses that could save peoples lives. Many countries in Europe are in ruins and its our job to help them.\n\nSecondly, you can go site-seeing. Others beive that you can only do work on your trips to Europe, but on my trips I was able to seethe Acropolis in Greece and the Panama Canal. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. i belive everyone would want similar expiriences.\n\nFinally, you have fun. A possible argument is that travling overseas is dangerous. But, we found lots of time to have fun an board.We had table-tennis, boxing, and fencing tournaments. We also put aside time for reading, whittling, and writing.\n\nIn conclusion, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can help people, you can go site-seeing, and it's fun. Join now to help all those European countries in ruins and in need of our help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless car in my opinion would be a perfect aspect for many people who cant afford or even drive a car. Think of a world where you wouldn't have to pay for gas or have to use hard earned money on fixing a broken part in your automobile.\n\nDriverless cars would be a great addition to the world because of the money the world would be saving.The world can be made greater by funding towards additions and improvements for a driverless car. Without a driver you would save money by not having to tip anymore and you do not have to deal with crook taxi drivers who will do alot of things just to charge you extra. With a driverless car you would have to pay a predetermined amount of money, most likely thats elecronically used. You would have your own privacy in the car, can listen to what you want, enjoy a nice relaxing car with noone to worry about, no annoying aspects of a driverless car would occur. In the article it showed that with the use of a driverless car there are bigger safety features used than in cars that require a driver. With the funding put towards a driverless car we can fix the faults the car has such as needing a person alert when there are consruction and other wildlife and unexpected stops and turns.\n\nThere would even be a lower amount of fuel used for these cars that can be used for offroad adventures for civilians, such as: planes, trains, boats, offroad sports, and more. The future consists of making ideas that can improve and amaze the lives of everyday people and the driverless car would be a big aspect of the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was a natural creation. It is similar to the Middle Butte landform in Snake RIver Plain of Idaho. The facial features was created by shadows makily it look eerely like a face. The features of the Face are an optical illusion. NASA concluded that it was not made by aliens.\n\nThe Face is similar to teh Middle Butte. The Middle Butte is a lava dome that takes the form of a face. The landforms are common around the western parts of the United States. The picture shows a face that could only be like the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain in Idaho. This is how the Face could be a natural feature. The Middle Butte from Idaho was formed when lava and the earth combined and made it look like a face when you are on Google Earth. The Face on Mars is just like the Middle Butte that is in Idaho. It is possible that there was once lava or a liquid that combined with the surface to make a facial feature that you see when you look at the Face on Mars. The Face on Mars is also not very well detailed. If it was a monument then it would have detail. It would have eyebrows or details around the mouth and eyes so it resembled a certain person. This is how the Middle Butte on Mars is a natural figure.\n\nThe Face was an optical issusion. There was shadows that made the Face look relatively similar to a human face. The shadows also could have been formed by the clouds that were blocking the view of Viking for a while. The Viking had to get closer to take a picture of the natural landform. The landform could have been just a pile of dirt or a pile of rocks that had holes that made it look simillar to a face. Some people argue that the alien markings were hidden by the hazey clouds. When the Viking went over the Face it only took a few pictures. When the Mars Global Surveyor went over Cydonia for the first time they snapped a picture 10 times better than the original Viking picture. The picture from Mars Global Surveyor had better quality than the picture from Viking. This is how the clouds and the camera on the Viking made an optical illusion.\n\nNASA concluded that the Face was not like the Egytian style pyramids. They came to a decision that the Face was just a landform that under the certain circumstances looked like a face. The people at NASA also said that the camera had zoomed in so that if there was a shack or an airplane or a person on the ground that they would be able to see it. NASA even used a different camera that has better zoom than the one used in 1976. The camera used in 1976 was 43 meters per pixel. The one used in 2001 was 1.56 meters per pixel. If they didn't find any proof of alien life with the 2001 image then how can you argue their is any aliens?\n\nIn conclusion the Face on Mars is a natural figure. NASA verified that the Face was just an optical issusion. The camera on Viking was not very good compared to the camera of later explore Mars Global. The camera on Mars Global was able to take a picture 10 times better than the one on Viking. The face and eyes and mouth were created by shadows. This is how the Face on Mars is not an alien monument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the technology is improving, more people are seeing to become reliable to the computers\nWhat things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?\nComputers are a relatively new invention. The first computers were built fifty years ago and it is only in the last thirty or so years that their influence has affected our everyday life. Personal computers were introduced as recently as the early eighties. In this short time they have made a tremendous impact on our lives. We are now so dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine what things would be like today without them. You have only got to go into a bank when their main computer is broken to appreciate the chaos that would occur if computers were suddenly removed world-wide.\nIn the future computers will be used to create bigger and even more sophisticated computers. The prospects for this are quite alarming. They will be so complex that no individual could hope to understand how they work. They will bring a lot of benefits but they will also increase the potential for unimaginable chaos. They will, for example, be able to fly planes and they will be able to co ordinate the movements of several planes in the vicinity of an airport. Providing all the computers are working correctly nothing can go wrong. If one small program fails disaster.\nThere is a certain inevitability that technology will progress and become increasingly complex. We should, however, ensure that we are still in a position where we are able to control technology. It will be all too easy to suddenly discover that technology is controlling us. By then it might be too late I believe that it is very important to be suspicious of the benefits that computers will bring and to make sure that we never become totally dependent on a completely technological world. As a result, the computers do give people all kind of convience including quickly knowledge and repeatable education. However, the dependence to the computers is really harmmful to both of students and teachers..", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is not an iota of doubt to say that the corporations should provide favourable working conditions such as giving a better opportunity and at least thirty days personal vacation time. It is argued that is an affordable development, while others disagree and consider it will lead to adverse ramification results. I totally agree with this statement that, but some other measure must be taken to minimize the stress conditions as well as build a better future for labourers. The following paragraphs will analyze the pros and cons of giving vacation for employees.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, while many occupations have become under the stress, many owners should contribute a good workplace and better possibilities. Moreover, the government should introduce a special arrangement annually for vacations for employees. For example, the majority of people think that a certain of group people are looking for a good opportunity in their job such as adequate holidays time within a year. However, while some companies are offering manifold benefits to people about this, others believe that workers' efficiency decreases after the vacation time.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, there are numerous merits to this topic along with certain demerits as \"very rose comes with thorns\"; for instance, some employers are concerned that is mainly because personnel are passive after a long period of a break since they are not doing their regular tasks such as customer service and commercial communication. Further, some small industry cannot afford a low efficiency working regardless of whether affected global issues and because of ,that they would rather not comply with this request. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, having clarified the outlooks above, although many people are keen to support that granting workers' vacation, another advocacy group of people think that this is a negative tendency that the decreasing employees' prolificacy on this situation. I recapitulate my opinion by saying with giving at least a 4-week holiday a year to occur employees better at their jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir relaxed proud The author showed proud parents culture He talked relaxed feeling loving everything home culture Also mood grateful He grateful neighbors came together Also grateful family friends apartment The author proud life parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Introduction: The reason why you should join the program Is because you will help the animals when they are on a ship going across the ocean. They are helping\n\neurope and china because they just got done with war. The animals will help produce food. So I hope farmers or anybody that knows how to take care of animals join the program.\n\nDetails from the story to help support my anwser is they take care of the animals every hour. They also have to be on a boat for two weeks or more. I also know that It Is not a easy job sometimes you get to play games but it is still dangerous. It is dangerous because in the story he almost slide of the boat and whent in the ocean but he luckely hit a pole to stop him. The bad thing is he broke his ribs.\n\nMy conclusion for this essay is that if you are on the boat you will have a little bond with the animals. I also know that you are doing a good thing helping europe and china. It makes you look like a good person and you care about the contries and animals. In the story It also said that there was water on the roads. This Is the ending of my essay so I hope you like It.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They see eventually There reason censor library I believe I think sectioned maybe put offensive books back libarary enough censorship You look publishers view also They want sell advertise product right Libraries nt take product shelves someone stumbled apon something believe offensive We know offensive things could find library bookstore like Things show innaproperate pictures drugs firearmsect I believe already censored enough Most magazines many people find offensive always put back store secetioned people nt stumble upon childern flipping threw pages corrupting minds Some material even put plastic sleve person must puchase reading If decide write publish book nt think given right everyone else put shelves promote I reason nt able The library nt censor book someone else thinks feels s offensive That s fair I think libraries nt censor materials offensive write publish promote", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If there was technology that could read your emotion in a class room i think that would be benifishal for how the students learn. this could help the students stay on task if it changes the lesson. Another thing that it could help with is to tell the teacher if the student is staying on task or not by seeing if they are telling the truth. the system could also help to see if some one is sad or if there is somthing wrong.\n\nI think this system could mostly help with people staying on task during a lesson by changing it so it appeals to the student more. This is shown in the text when the texts states that \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" Also the system can also show what adds you like to see. For example for me i would like to see more game adds so when the pop up and i look happy about it it will show more of them and if a add pops up that i do not like it will not show there adds. It could also improve vidio game quality and or sugery videos to teach new sergent what to do. this is shown in the text when the text states \"The same technology can make computer animated ffaces more expressice for video games or vido surgery.\"\n\nafter reading this article i think the programe that can read your face could be vary usfull in the long run for teaching and gamming. like improving game quality, improving teaching methods and so on. i think it will be nice to have during school when we are taking a lesson and someone gets bord and there is nothing we can really do about that but this programe on the other hand can change the lesson so it is more interesting for that sead person. This also could teach people how to do jobs by showing them a video that has better graphics and better fashal feters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I writting article computers inferm oppinun computers positive negotive efects The reason computers succsesful beacuse great imformation Such directions place going home imformation subject pearson Althoug sound good one post imformation internet imformation misnt accrate Some reasons computer bud beacuse signs wich safe give pearsonal imformation comeing back bud future Also webite pop icon suttebul younger kids exposeing mature Lastly talking computer apart everyday lives emails almost every american whita computer A email great relie Also new sorse web witch giving ability see peaple computers wich raipidly growing article point veiw computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenges of exploring Venus are dangerous but worth it. Spaceships haven't touched Venus in over three decades. Venus is often referred to as Earths \"twin\".\n\nExploring Venus is challengeing due to it's extrem conditions. Venus travels at a differnt speed than earth meaning there are times when it is close to earth making it my convient to study because we wouldn't need as many resources. There are times when is is far away making it less covient. Humans have sent numores spacecraft to land on on Venus but no spacecraft has survied longer than a few hours. The challengeing problems humans face trying to reseach Venus is that 97 percent of the atmophore is carbon dioxide. Even more challengeing are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmophere. The surface temperature is 800 degress farenheit, and the atmosperic pressure is 90 times stornger that it is on earth. Those types of conditions would crush a subnarine and liquefy its metals. These conditions make it impossible for humans to land on, meaning they can't get samples of gas or rocks making it hard to examine. Scientist are fascinated by Venus because it looks alot like earth. They think it was covered with large oceans and could have supported life. It has a rocky surface, valleys, mountians and craters.\n\nAs you can see like stated in the introduction Venus is a dangours plantet but worth exploring .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is getting emotional facial recognization the best way to go with technology? Computers are getting smarter and it doesn't sound like it will be slowing down any time soon. When scientests and computer programers combine it can be a beautiful thing. Scientests are developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate. With new encoding and development of software scientests have now created a way for a computer to tell how someone is feeling by using their facial muscles. The new programing will be a positive thing, muscles in the face just act naturally, the encoding is complex, and the new technology could be coming to local classrooms.\n\nThe Scientests have a whole process. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face and has all 44 major muscles that must move like human muscles (D'Alto 3). All of the muscle units that work together as one is called an \"action unit.\" Since all facial emotions are universal the technology could go worldwide once improved. The software could also identify mixed emotions. The technology reads how major muscles move and show emotion. With each emotion that is showed they compare it to a neutral face. Every day humans do the same thing. Humans read the face of other humans to try and tell how they are feeling. If they are sad or happy. There are six major emotions within the technology right now, there maybe more encoded at a later date.\n\nWith the new technology comes new computers. A home PC could not take the proper encoding right now. The scientests are working on something much better to try and get the home PC's to where they can encode them. The scientests new computer software stores similar anatomical information as an electric code (D'Alto 5). Although the home PC couldn't handle the encoding, they can give simple encoding to your home PC. The encdoing that can be given is simple instructions for differnent emotions. The simple encoding would not be able to read mixed emotions.\n\nThe emotional facial reading could be coming to a local schools. The new technology would be able to tell if a student was bored, or if they got confused. Then the computer could modify the lesson for the student to help them learn better. The technology could act like an effective human instructor. Must human communication is nonverbal. Emotional communication is also nonverbal. The studesnts could improve with one on one lesson plans. The studensts could also work at their own pace and have their own personal plans.\n\nAll the technology needs to understand how to read and comunicate with a human through facial features. The anatomy of a human is complex and hard to understand and encode into computers. The new programing will be a positive thing, muscles in the face just act naturally, the encoding is complex, and the new technology could be coming to local classrooms. Scientests are hard at work trying to make the new technology common and natural for everyone to use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are beginning to see that cars are causing lots of greenhouse gases to be released into the atmosphere. These greenhouse gases affect our ozone layer in the atmosphere and causes global warming and causes high pollution levels that make it hard to breathe for most people.\n\nSome residents in a small suburb in Vauban, Germany are living life without cars and. This little change has helped to drop greenhouse gases in Germany. Many residents believed that at first they were not going to like walking everywhere but they have now realized that they are cutting down on greenhouse gas emmisions from tail pipes and it helps uncroud the streets.\n\nGreenhouse gases have a tremendous effect on our atmosphere and the air that we need to have to be able to survive. In Paris, government officials put out a ban on what cars could be used on certain days to try and bring pollution levels down around the global city. The first day was fining motorists with even-numbered license plates after they were oredered to leave their cars at home. The same would be done to odd-numbered motorists the next day. The smog around the city cleared enough on Monday that the French party decided to lift the ban for odd-numbered motorists on Tuesday.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia, Colombian officials took a day to have the city completely car free. Many people took buses to work, hiked, biked, or skated, leaving the streets of Bogota eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third straight year that cars have been banned to try and promote alternative transpotation rather than cars and to try and reduce smog around the city. Two other cities joined the event and participated to try and reduce smog around the smaller cities as well. Some municipal authorities from other countries went to Bogota to see the event and saw how much it helped and are now thinking of doing their own version of the event in their countries.\n\nIn America, recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. Many researchers are wondering if America has passed peak driving. America has been one of the worlds prime care cultures do to its inventions for the car. The United States peaked in 2005 but have steadily dropped thereafter. As of April 2013 the number of miles driven per peson was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. These actions have caused less emission of greenhouse gases from tailpipes into the atmosphere dramatically. Studies are going to see if the driving rate steadily goes down or if it is going to pick back up, to see if less greenhouse gases will be emitted from tailpipes to hepl reduce smog around many major American cities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to read human emotions is an invaluable skill that human beings posess. It is what helps us build relationships and nurture friendships. It is part of what makes humans human. To take away that ability and put reading another's emotions in the hands of a machine is a step back from humanity. It is a poor decision because it is stripping away what makes humans human, and tearing down relationships.\n\nFirst, reading emotions makes us human. It seperates the walking man from the crawling animals. We posess a special talent that enables us to look at the face of another and, in a split second, know how they are feeling. This is also what enables us to empathize with one another. Paragraph 5 states that \"We humans preform this same impressive 'calculation' every day. This goes on to show that it is not necessary for computers to determine how a person is feeling because it is already hardwired into the nature of humans to do so.\n\nSecond, leaving our feelings in the hands of a machine will tear down relationships. To push off empathy and genuine care for another human individual and toss their face into a robot is the essence of lazyness. Paragraph 6 says that \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" So, if most of our communication is through our emotions and we are no longer able to use them to our full extent, then we are no longer commmunicating with each other to our fullest extent. Communication is an absolute necessity in any relationship and if it is not used to its fullest extent, then relationships cannot thrive.\n\nAs a result of computers taking controll of reading emotions, we will begin to lose pieces of our humanity and close friends along with them. To leave behind our relationships to know what anyone else can know with just a picture and a robot is foolishness. Instead of walking away from life as we know it, we should embrace the emotional challenges of friends and family and fight through it. After all, the fight is what makes the victory sweet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I looking catalog store saw goalkeeper shirt I really wanted So I went mom showed I wanted She said bit pricy would get The next week long waiting shirt On came pale yellow red blue purple I finally goalkeeper jersey wear games make great saves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I friends house one afternoon couldnt find something needed So went sister phone sat phone sat patiently done We sat seven minutes us getting inpatient We moved go ask mom I guess busy told us sit quiet patient We sat seven minutes still working So got went back sister She phone friend asked sister nail polish mean inpatient tone CAPSs drawer Now get room yelled After looking looking finally found She isnt patient I learned Im patient either My friend still patient tone wasnt Thats time I know someone patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" some scientist says it was created by aliens. I think that it wasn't created by aliens because no one has proof that aliens are real. Also because they haven't checked the other planets to see if there was faces on them. If the face on Mars was created by aliens, did they go on Mars to check for alien footprints? Did they go onto Mars and looked closley at the face? If it was an artifact made by aliens what did they make the face out of.\n\nThe scientist sya the face looks like an Egptian but in 2001 it doesn't look like an Egptian anymore.\n\nThe scientist used a machine that can see if there were any objects, like airplanes in the picture you would see it cause of the machine. The face on Mars could just be an uncommon landform. Its probably not an artifact made by aliens because the face wasn't showing that much in 1976. In 1998 the face was getting clear but in 2001 the face was disappearing beacause of the cracks on the face. If it was made by aliens why wasn't the face clear enough if it was an artifact sign for the aliens. if there were aliens on Mars why wanst there any bones of aliens found. So maybe the Face of Mars could just be a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the short story \"Making Mona Lisa smile\" by Nick D'Alto, classrooms should use technology for students emotions. It would make school not so boring for most teens and kids. Students would become mor engaged with classes, they wont feel like they're alone with their inner emotions. The face on a human show a lot of emotions, even when you're trying to hide it.\n\nIn the sixth paragraph Dr.Huang staed, \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it, could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This would make things a lot easier to learn. when a subject gets boring, it reads the students faces and it changes how the lesson is being taught. That would skyrocket test scores all-around America schools.\n\nIn that same paragraph Dr.Huang also stated, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\" This is the most human communication is nonverbal, so a child who has had time expressing themself would benefit. The computer woud pick it up, and the teacher can communicate better.\n\nIn conclusion, students should have technology to pick up their emotions. Those boring days kids experience there would be no more of them days. This technology could revolutionize classrooms. This is a short story by Nick D'Alto, \"Making mona Lisa smile.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes sentence shows Saeng going try adapt new home He lets know Saeng gon na grieve sad anymore adapt continue life The author adds I mean like kind atat This Saeng come home talked mother sad thought old memories old home adding last statement story shows taht Saeng decided move life longer sad She set goal accept This reason author conclude story like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The newly invented program for seeing what your emotions are is a type of technology that can be very useful, it can determine what kind of person you are daily by just simply describing your emotions. This new technology is called the Facial Action Coding System. This program could help businesses with their employee selection and also help with school students.\n\nIn schools this program could help the teachers identify if their students are just not having or or they are happy and ready to learn. Although this program would have to be simplified for the school programs to get ahold of it it could greatly impact the normal day of school. Teachers will be able to tell if they have students that are ready to learn and are happy on a daily basis, or if they have students who are never happy and just don't care about being at school.\n\nThis technology could help with just anything honestly, if someone is always in a bad mood, someone who has this program can detect that and see why they are never happy and possibly be able to help with that. Doing so might make people notice that this new technology can greatly impact our society and help with anyone that isn't happy, even people that you never thought were always mad or depressed, this technology can help with that and have a huge impact.\n\nAnother example of where this could be used is in the business world. Business owners or managers could have this program and help with hiring, they could tell if their employees are happy, mad, depressed, etc. It could help with the outcome of how days at work go, by hiring someone who is happy and ready to make everyone around feel happy and good about themselves. Unlike others who are angry and holding a grudge, and ruin someone else's day because they're mad.\n\nThe new technology called the Facial Action Coding System or (FACS) is something all businesses or school corporation should have. This could help impact our society in a great way, Making the world a greater place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph I think author people read story know gon na next spring might make another storie know take test spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that the primary advantage of multinational companies is to the surroundings whilst, others disagree and believe that world business is their number one objective. This essay agrees with the argument that businesses are more benefited as they make a huge profit rather than the protection of the environment.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, many people say that big companies help to protect the environment by funding various programmes and projects. In other words, these business companies donate thousands of dollar to the cause that protect the natural environment such as helping for forestation. To exemplify, Coca-Cola, a world-renown multinational company spends 15% of its total profit (which is equal to millions) annually to plant trees in the deforested areas of the world. Hence, in this way environment is benefited by the big cooperations.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe that, the giant cooperations mainly focus on making a profit and their own business because millions of dollars are invested in the firm. This is to say that, thousands of people put their money on these companies expecting to get profit so the first and foremost goal is making money for the investors. For example, if a multinational company does not make a profit then the investors and shareholders begin to withdraw their capital from the business, which can result in the closure of the firm. Therefore, international businesses primarily target to earn a profit than secondly, contribute to protecting the environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, global companies can greatly help to protect the environment by funding various programmes that work to save the environment. However, international firms first work to get profit and benefitm the business world because of the pressure from the investors to raise the money back then only they can offer their help to safeguard the surroundings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In socioty lot people places take offense certain things In opinion librarys book stores remove things shelves becuase could offensive People right pick something look decide wheither s offensive If book movie someone wrote directed could get bad enough freak complain places selling book movie probably shouldnt made I agree somethings offensive someone dont know wrote directed dont let bother I believe music way people express I honestly nt think music censored s sold store If material graphic children people nt listen If need things censored words topics read listen watch maybe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Less cars are getting sold on a yearly basis, which is trimendously changing everything in the world. Countries have started noticing when the polution rate spiked up, causing people to make a change. Stated in the fist article \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in Europe\"(Elisabeth Rosenthal). This is saying that in just Europe alone cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions.\n\nThe people did not react as you would expect. After noticing the statistics of the rise of problems cars make, they where actually exited for the change \"As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\"(Heidrum Walter). What is being mentioned in this statement is that hardly and of the people that live in Vauban do not own a car and they are happy about it. Now because of situation like this people are going for a more healthier alternitive like walking and biking to there destination.\n\nIn some places it is now starting to become a law like in Paris \"motorist wih even-numberd license plates were orderd to leav their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day\" (Robert Duffer). In the begining that law did not go well with most drivers. About 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine. In Bogota it was the third straight year cars have been banned, only allowing buses and taxis and the violators will face a $25 fine. But although some residents do not mind \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polution\" (Carlos Arturo).\n\nNow auto mobil companies are looking at the stats and seeing that every year their sales are lowering because of the changes going on. Now fewer people are starting to care about getting their licence to drive. The world is changing for he better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are said to be the best thing in the future but, \"Why?\". Is it becuase it's convienet , or becuase you feel like you don't have to put any effort in by driving the car. The whoel idea of a driverless car I believe will never actually be driveless.\n\nI do not agree with the concept of driverless cars becuase as the article stated the driver will be required to be alert while in the car even though they are not in fact driving just in case something happens that the computer can not navigate through requiring human effort. The fact that they expect the people in the cars to be attentive would not work because if a person gets in to a driverless care they are not in fact going to be paying attention at all since the whole concept would be a driverless car. No one can guarantee that a person will be paying attention even with all the vibrating of seats, flashing lights, and other things the car will do to get the drivers attention if the need to take over will work. This in fact could cause accidents and as stated in the article no one knows who is the blame. I feel that we should just stick to cars that require a driver to operate the vehicle so that there is no reason that the driver will not have to pay attention to the road and so that there is no confusion on who is to blame in case of an accident. I also did not read anything in the article talking about age limits on who can use these driverless cars. How do the company's expect a teenager who has never learned to drive becuase they live in a time where regular cars are not used supposed to be able to take over and drive the car.\n\nDriverless cars pose a great danger to a lot of people. The driverless cars are not guaranteed to be reliable at all times and are not safe when it comes to who can get in it by themself. The world should just stick to regular cars with requirenments such as the permit test, learing to drive with a permit, and then when of an appropriate age obtain a driver licence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding Systems is valuable in a classroom because it makes things in the classroom go more effectively if a student doesn't understand. It will also help if a student or your friend is not feeling ok this machine could help prevent anything bad happening, or help your friend or student have a better day. This machine can help in so many ways and it is very valuable in the classroom for many people. Yes, it might get distracting at times for some people but it is still very helpful. In the article it states \"His new computer software stores similar anatomical inmformation as electronic code.\"\n\nThe machene is so very helpful and is can help in so many ways. One reasone the machine is effect is because of school purposes, it helps the teacher make the lesson more clear to others who don't understand and helps kids who don't understand pass the class. in the article it states ' \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,'...'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" This reveals that the machine can help a student and a teacher all in one because it can modify things for you and it can help a teacher out by explaining it more to a student who doesn't understand. Another reason why the machine is so effective is because if someone such as a family or friend is having a bad day you can by the look on their face. Although can you really tell what they are actually feeling. The machine can do it all, it can tell you how you're feeling just by the look on you face wich most people can not do. In the article it states \"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial mucles precisely enough to convvey specific emotions.\" This unveils that the machine can show you your specific emotions and tell you exactly how you are feeling. This also proves that the machine is very affective and can be helpful in so many ways. This machine is valubale in the classroom and is very much needed. All of your emotions on the machine arwe compared to a nuetral face so that means all of your emotions willl be precise and really will tell you your exact emotion.\n\nIn conclusion the machine is very effect and can be used in the classroom. The the machine can also tell you if your being truthful about your emotions and identifies every muscle in your face. in the article it states \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This proves that if you want to find out if somone is lieing or not telling the truth you can find out by the machine. It all comes down to the machine and you will be very pleased by the results you get because the Facial Action Coding Sytem is very helpful. It will help a lot of people and it helps in a lot of ways. It is very valuable in a classroom and it helps students or other people find out some things that are helpful to them, thereofre it should be used in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by some individuals, that the authorities ought to elevate the prices of fuel, which are used in automobiles, in order to settle the environmental pollution. I partially agree with this statement, because only with increasing the cost of fossil fuel may not solve this problem, but there are many other options such as the production of more electrically driven vehicles, reduction of the import of fossil fuel-driven automobiles as well as implementing new lawsuits,should be considered to minimize this environmental crisis.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the mission of unfavourable gases such as carbon monoxide from petroleum driven vehicles is a great burden to the environment.These gases cause the \r\n\r\ngreenhouse effect which leads to global warming and many more problems. When the cost of fuel is low people tend to purchase more vehicles as their maintenance cost is lower. This can indirectly increase the traffic jam and subsequently elevates environmental pollution. For example, in countries with low oil prices, the annual sales of automobiles also considerably high. Therefore, by increasing the prices of fossil fuel, consumption will also be reduced and it will indirectly support the environment\r\n\r\nHowever, the elevation of the prices of fossil fuel is not the only answer for the environmental crisis but there are many more logical solutions for this. For instances, the production of electrically-driven automobiles, as well as reduction of the import of petrol and diesel vehicles can be considered. Moreover, it should be considered to plant more trees in the city areas and this will purify the air and reduce warming. Empowering citizens by means of protecting their own surrounding is one of the most important aspects to be considered. As an example, in Sidney,they have reduced the air pollution by 40% with the theme of \"go green \".\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, It is evident that, although environmental pollution can be controlled by raising the cost of fuel, there are many other successful methods to solve this global problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Durining s fierce competition arising constructing largest building To set Empire State Building apart decided put mooring mask dirigibles This would meaning make Empire State Building worlds largest building The mooring mask certin fail reasons For one forign dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium Hydrogen flamable would cause huge fire Another reason Empire State Building strong winds currents constantely shifting This would make difficult control dirigible Pilots unable control dirigible would great difficulty dirigible Lastly mooring dock failed law This law stated illegal fly air ships low urban areas On Clavan mooring mask By late s Idea dead", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea censoring books music libraries long debated Libraries places people go stray away norm get lost works authors musicians I believe reading ability express oneself powers music essential part lives Censoring would shelter lives keep younger generations discovering effect words emotions actions day day Books one oldest forms information ve throughout years I think someone remove piece information found offensive would open door people find excuses keep hard work authors behind closed doors Personally enjoy reading I think every book read opens door beliefs culturs would otherwise never learn Children need able explore world get know civilizations grow function function little world getting judgemental every day The way pick book someone lucky enough experience I always deep passion music When want relax music helps center open mind In opinion censoring music nt something people even consider Removing music libraries difficult even begin try accept Freedom speech huge part country Now seems everything ve taught great nothing false cover let government control live act choose express Music freeing way express oneself violent way During sixties seventies music way alot people protested things like war racism without violent Times changed though people charge country longer see appropriate option I belive one society believes something inappropriate nt mean actually way We worry enough already people think try judge others work ca nt accept fact different If accepted differences world s cultures would nt debate whether censor expressive emotional piece art deserves shown libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays numerous problems are increasing in children which adversely affects to pay their full attention in schools. According to several surveys conducted by educational departments clearly showing the reasons which hampering students focus. The following paragraphs evaluating such issues related to students and finding ways how to solve them for the benefit of their future life. \r\n\r\nThe number of students who are joining schools is escalating during this period. In addition to this, the tutors lose control over the students, affecting children to get attention. Although there are online materials and video lectures, some toddlers are facing troubles in academic learning. Moreover, indulging in lousy peer relationships leads to a lack of concentration in studies. For instance, some students bring mobiles to classrooms and engaged in social media take away the attention of other children. As a result, students lose their concentration in studies because of bad friendships and usage of mobiles in the classroom. \r\n\r\nTo solve these practical issues, parents have to visit the school and ensure that their child gets a good atmosphere for learning. Teachers getting ready for an open conversation with their students will be a better suggestion to understand their pressure on learning things. Furthermore, parents and teachers must be aware of students' behaviour and their peer relationships inside school and house. It will improve children's attitudes, and it improves their mental balance in learning. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, students issues related to their academic knowledge are rising. Parents and teachers together pay attention and creating a friendly atmosphere with them which helps to solve the issues", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator, I am not in favor of the electoral college because it doesnt allow the peoples vote to be sincere \"we the people\" is what our country is based off of and by having the electoral colloge set in place we cannot be the people. We are endowed certain rights and freedoms by the government and getting a vote is one of them but with this electoral college propaganda we cannot not give our sincere vote that counts. Truly I do not understand the electoral college to an extent that some do but i dont have to. I know enough to know that this system of voting is unethical and not right. Anyone in there right mind will know this is a terrible system of voting.\n\nFor example barrack obama should not have won and wouldnt have won the second time if it werent for this scrub system of voting.\n\nMuch like taking this test we are waisting our time. We are endowed by our creator certain unalianable rights that cannot be taken away. There is a lot wrong about our government and elecoral college doesnt strike the surface. It is foolish to think electoral college is the biggest problem america has. Not just america but the world. The world is falling apart and all these hypocritical media people are freaking out over the electoral college. They need to grow a pair and take off their mini skirt and open their eyes a little bit. Riches on earth mean nothing. Moth, famine, and thieves destroy here. But riches in heaven is what matters. This country would never even have became independent if it was run by the people who are running it now. First of all this country was founded on God and now the government wont even allow us to have a Christmas party in schools because the word CHRIST is in it. They want us to have a \"holiday\" party instead. they will all see one day. On judgment day. All we can do is pray for them because thats all that can help these distranged men. Love Joy Peace Patience Kindness Goodness Faithfullness Gentleness and Self-control ol ol. Love joy peace patience kindness goodness faithfulness gentleness and self-contol o ol.\n\nOk i am missing weightlifting class to write some bogus essay that doesnt even count. really you are really making us do this? this school district sucks and everyone knows it. everyone.\n\nits time to let go of the mini skirt and grow a pair. and become a school district that actually allows us to learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore? I cannot see this happening. I cannot see this happening because of three reasons: technology sometimes fail, machines are built to help humans, and technology is unreliable. I believe that driverless cars should not be invented.\n\nFirst, I will be explaining my first reason on why I say that driverless cars should not be invented. In the great tragedy of the Challenger, the technology of that space shuttle failed and it was not an driverless machine. Also, the driverless cars have not been proven to be able to handle certain situations while driving which can cause another tragedy.\n\nNext, I am going to explain my second reason on my thesis. Machines are bulit to help humans, for example without the invention of the assembly line would have made the possiblity of modern day cars to be impossible. Also, the invention of automobiles and airplanes were invented to get from one place to another in a quicker fashion than walking or biking.\n\nFinally, I am going to explain to you my final reason. Technolgy is unreliable, computers freeze and shut down on their own all the time. There are various examples of technolgy being unreliable. These cars could shut off in the middle of the highway which could causes many deaths or injuries, or even go off the road and crash causing personal injuries.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that driverless cars should not be invented. I say this because of the three reasons i provided you with. I believe that it would be an safety hazard, and it will cause conflict between the cars manufacturer and the cars owner.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacles would modify entire building s steel frame could withstand extra stress pressure dirigible moored top The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Another obstacle builders Empire State Building faced dirigibles highly flammable filled hydrogen The owners realized may bad idea Hindenburg burst flames If happened Empire State Building would extremely drastic results When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire The owners Empire State The building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York The biggest obstacle though nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around around mooring mast three obstacles builders Empire State Building faced trying allow dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While being able to tell someone's emotions can be a benefitial factor, it is also an invasion of the person's privacy. Many positive ideas come with being able to see how someone is feeling in a classroom, but there are some emotions that people just don't want other people knowing about. There are many different thoughts that go through a human being's head that therefore create the emotions that are felt. Students knowing that a computure is reading their every emotional status can create a very tense feeling and that could effect how the class lesson flows. There is no value in being ale to tell how a group of students are feeling in a class room.\n\nNegative emotions are everywhere, which means anything can happen to anybody, so people can be emotionaly unstable. If a group of students in a classroom were to know that there is a computure that is telling the instructor that there is something wrong with a specific student, it can be imbarrasing. In the text it states \" imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotion.\" That statement is an correct example of why computures that read emotions would be an invasion of every student's privacy. It's also justifying reason that there is no value in being able to tell how students are feeling because it is uncalled for.\n\nThe ariticle goes into futher explaining of how the new software in these computures are helpful and benefitial. Although it might be helpful in other ways than in a classroom, it shouldn't be used to collect information on how people are emotionally feeling without permission. Even with permission, emotions are a valuable part of humans that shouldn. t be taken for granted and used to collect data or research. For the value of emotions would be lost if a computure is using a software that reads the emotional status of the students in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea very well onwhy Venus is a worthy pursuit. Although, there are many dangers and risks people would have to take just to pull it off. But, there are many benefits impending for us if we do take these risks and study it.\n\nFor example, Venus could potentially serve as our \"second planet\". It has similar characteristics to Earth to the point where it can support human life. Although, the conditions aren't the greatest they're livable. Venus is also very close in proximity to us. Meaning it wouldnt take us that long to reach the planet. As I said previously, it can potentially support human life. We could inhabit it if needed. But, we'd need advanced technology that would give us the ability to touch the ground without burning. And as the author suggested we use \"hovering machines\", so we wouldn't have to touch the ground. Going back to Venus' Earth-like characterisics, it has a rocky ground and once was filled with oceans. Scientists have tried conducting missions for little crafts to land on Venus, but the majority only lasted on its surface for 3 hours. Not much time to fully research it. NASA are currently working on little hovering crafts that wont need to touch Venus' surface. This way they could last a bit longer, and more research could be done.\n\nStudying Venus overall is a worthy pursuit despite its dangers.The benefits are too good not to take advantage of. No one said it was gonna be easy on researching it, and maybe humans wont have too. Maybe someday in the future we have more advanced machines, but who knows. But in this case, its whoever's willing to risk it for our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced multiple obsticles attempting allow dirigibles dock top Empire State Building If thousandfoot dirigible tried land top Empire State Building would add stress building s frame paragraph The building would modified meet needs Nature played big obsticle well The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents paragraph If dirigible tried land back would swivel around around landing zone creating unsafe enviroment Finally government also prevented dirigibles docking building There existing law airships flying low urban areas paragraph These three main reasons prevented dirigibles landing top The Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "PROPER_NAME\n\nMONTH_DAY_YEAR\n\n\"What are some advantages of limiting car usage?\" You want to know some advantages right? Well there are some advanages like losing stress,relaxing,and helping the envoriment. Bet you didnt know that! but im going to explain to you why know because your probely curious why?\n\nWant to know an of advantage of limiting car usage? Well heres one, as said in source number 3 paragraph 24 \"Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with hus wife.\" It says that when not usuing a car you can loose stress just by riding a bike because its less traffic and stuff. So when you dont use a car you can loose stress.\n\nBut thats not just the only advantage, theres more! another advantage is that it can make you relax as well because then you would be able to spend more \"family\" time and some \"you\" time because you wont have to worry about going to places if you cant use your car. Ands thats relaxing because theres nothing better to then to be with your family having fun relaxing.\n\nBut that not it! the most advange to this topic is that your helping the envoriment! why you may ask? well like as said in source 3 paragraph 24 \" Its a good opportunity to take away lower air pollution\" thats some evidence i found because has Carlos Arturo Plaza was riding his bike thats what he said. So he said bascilly that when you use a car your polluting the environment but when you done use a car then not polluting th environment is a advange. So therefore helping your environment is a advange to this topic, and the most important one!\n\nSo you wanted to know some advangaes tolimiting car usage? Well you got your answer. i had give 3 reasons to you have some advanages for limiting car usage. As loosing stress,relaxing,and helping the enviroment, these are some great atvanges but theres many more. I just didnt want to list more because i though i would bored you to death!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to the modernization, several social, cultural and economic problems are becoming the part of the present world. Lack of affordable and stable housing is one of the major problem that has a negative impact on the wellbeing of a country. Remarkable individuals opine that solely the leaders of the country can resolve this issue. This essay will decipher the role of government and highlight apt approaches by which this problem can be sorted out.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, authority’s role in demand and supply of housing is undisputable. Since the politics has the ultimate right in the land management with huge resources of budget. It is quite easy for authorities to build affordable inexpensive houses at a very less EMIs for low incomed people in order to meet the requirement of public housing around the cities. Moreover, higher officials can help the foreign and private sector companies to move in the rural areas so that suburban dwellers do not have to commute to the centre of the city for work, which would reduce the density of metropolis.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, it is the responsibility of the leaders of a country to help their disadvantaged citizens to have a certain degree of standard of life. Thereby, special subsidized schemes for housing should be implemented for the poor people to provide them housing facilities at spending a little amount of money. Also, the market price has been manipulated by the foreign or private sector investors, government intervention should be in place to discourage these investors from purchasing land other than for non- residential purposes. \r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, higher officials being the ultimate power can solve this problem and easily meet the requirement of affordable housing all round their country. Some strict implementations need to be taken to halt the global investors from occupying all the housing land.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last two or three decades, technology has been occuping every place due to speed and less human work. In the past countless works were done by humans but nowadays this trend is completely changed due to the technology, everywhere is being done my machines instead of men. In my opinion about this this trend has more drawbacks b ecause of increasing unemployment and crime rate increase. This essay discusses briefly in the following reasons.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, after the invention of industrial revoultion, machineries have been used many corporate companies instead of people, thus, this can create more unemployment among the population. For instance, in India has been facing unemployment crisis since companies were using machine instead of folks. Thus, coutless people do not have any job in order to they face poverty and scarcity. In addition, this progress affects human employment opportunity tremendously among the younsters. Hence, machine replace of human it is bring more drawbacks. \r\n\r\nMoreover, this process brings more negatives using of an automatic machine than woman can affect society negtively such as crime, antisocial activities, For example, in Indian folks are faced many crimes day-to-day by idle person which means who does not have any work while he thinks negatively like thieft, murder and unemployment and poverty is the main reason for this. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, one machine can be worked a hundred employees affect directly by an innovative machines. Therefore, this advancement process bring more disadvantages. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, cutting-edge can be reduced the population workforce in many companies. Using of heavy machine can bring more negatives like employment ratio increases and this can lead to affecting society negatively. I hope the employers might be used more human workforce than machinery in their companies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author warmth First paragraph two says family would always cook food turn cuban music It also says smell food would fill house In paragraph four says would always family members dinner Some family members would Grandparents Aunts cousins The last reason mood warmth said paragraph seven I never forget parents turned simple house home That means lived three rooms however moved turned place friends family could gather fun", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lately, the tax payers are wondering where their money goes and they believe that their money is not well invested. As a result, some argue that they should not pay any taxes to the government. I totally agree with this approach and I will explain the reasons why.\n\nThe aim of the taxes is to contribute economically to the developments of the communities. A significant part of the citizens salary is taken in order to keep parks clean, to build new roads, schools and hospitals. In addition, this wage is used to support people who do not have an income or a place to live. Some public services like the police and the fireman get their support for it. Without this system these services might fail. For example, police cars, defensive equipments and salary come from the tax money. \n\nHowever, although the money of the taxes is essential for these aspects, the tax payers argue that their money is not well invested. Despite of the big amount of fund generated from the taxes, some communities and services do not witness any single improvements or investments. Public sectors like education and health presence a dismiss from the government. These sectors barely survive with the capital provided by the government. Moreover, some presidents spend the tax money to travel and for their personal benefit. Furthermore, people are paying an excessive amount of money in taxes regardless their low salary income. As a consequence, their income after paying taxes is not sufficient to afford their daily expenses.\n\nIn conclusion, the tax payment should be waived, if the money is not invested in the community. In the future, it is pretty likely that more people become poor because tax payments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should particapate in the Seagoing Cowboys progam. This program has many things to offer. You could change from an ordinary person to an extrordinary person overnight.\n\nI, Luke, have joined the Seagoing Cowboys. It was the greatest decision of my life. I used to work two part-time jobs. Now, I have my whole life ahead of me. I get to learn everyday and have the greatest experience while doing so. My favorite part of our program is when you get the chance to go on a cattle-boat trip.\n\nThere are many reason you should join us. The most important one is helping people. You get to help people who's homes may have been destroyed. You get the satifaction of seeing people happy again. You also get to see the world in ways you didn't imagine it to be. While your helping, you might get a free day. You could go sightseeing. You'll have the benefit of seeing all of Europe and China just like I did.\n\nI saw a greater side to the world with this experiance. Maybe you will get the chance of a lifetime. If I were you I'd take it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During the twenty first century, famous personalities are getting name and fame in people heart which was not the case earlier. Nowadays young generation follow personalities whose charm and asset attract them rather than the celebrity known for and setting a wrong example for the future generation. I do not agree with this statement and share the reasons in the following paragraphs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper back couple decades ago computers existed What see There children outside exercising playing friends living somewhat dangerfree lives came computer Computers driving next generation dangerous life staring assortment pixers day longels well ruining civilized relationships I strangly believe computers negative affect society Did know tha number computers sold increases obesity rate gone since computers came lives Because people spend way much time enough time exercising Computers another affect long hours spent front screen decrease eyesight ability My family friend get glasses eyes damaged computer I m worried daughter s eyes stares screen hours end concerned parent How could something harmful possibly good society Speaking hurtful internet unsafe Predators surf web looking young innocent people meet likely abuse parents much monitoring children s computer usage parents unaware internet makes easy talk anybody world Monitoring would also come handy comes innapropriate videos pictures discussions internet It easy surfing web fall upon things seeing Lastly people easily get caught hidden behind computer say mean hurtful things would never said one s face unfortunate factors cause many issues people today Speaking computers negative affect relationships nowadays As I mentioned earlier many fights happen computer communications Even online conversations friendly get people accustomed making people CAPS computer face face After computeroriented friendship people tend forget act face face find personal meetings awkward eighth grader I ca nt talking computers never civilized human beings Unfortunately computers leading us never seeing best friend person technology It even friend It could dangerous poser This yet another problem internet even know relationships It could fake d idea Spending day rolling away front computer putting relationships danger unfortunately effect computers Computers worth terrible consequences civilization must face I urge stop advances technology late Make change today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a phenomenon that people are eager to seek any clues about the history of their residential houses. I believe the reason is the enthusiasm for the culture and the awareness of the knowledge among modern citizens. This essay will discuss this topic and dig out how to research the old architectures.\r\n\r\nFinding out the root of the old houses is an entertaining way to study history and it also benefits our understanding of our traditional culture. Based on the knowledge-oriented society, more and more people have realized the significance of cultural identity. By finding out the history of the home building, they can know what happened in the past and reminds them that they should cherish the peaceful world they own now. For example, some old buildings have experienced wars or were damaged by extreme weather conditions, but they got repaired eventually, and still function well for human beings for many years. \r\n\r\nVarious ways to study those buildings can be recommended. Firstly, people can ask the elderly to know more details about the house, such as grandparents or older relatives. They may tell many real interesting or sad stories related to the house. Secondly, looking for information online is also a handy way.Undoubtedly, the internet owns vast data resources and can be accessible to the public. Finally, researching the aged furniture in the building is also a good approach, they represent some traditional habits or skills which prevailed at that moment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the keenness on the history and culture may be explained to this trend. In addition, many measures can be advised to research the old buildings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From man's very first trip out of Earth's atmosphere to the iconic moon landing, people from all across the world have always wondered what lies in the unknown solar system that surrounds them. Despite the danger and the failures that plagued these early scientists, they still strived to explore space and the planets within it. In writing \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author is able to very convincingly explain the benefits of exploring Venus, despite the dangerous challenges this endeavour may present.\n\nThe article starts off by describing Venus and providing background for the reader, allowing the writer to make a stronger and more understandable claim later on in the work. Venus, as described in the article, is often the closest planet to Earth, depending on the time, and is repeatingly called \"Earth's 'twin'\" because of its similarity in size and density to Earth. The author then goes one to describe the multiple missions already taken to Venus, which have all failed in the end.\n\nWhile the author does state reasons why a mission to Venus could be treacherous, he or she is able to negate these downfalls by listing all the possible benefits of exploring this inhospitable planet. Venus is considered by scientists to be a dangerous planet to explore for many reasons included in the writing.\n\nFor one, its temperature far exceeds in heat any which the Earth has reached by hundreds of degrees. The atmoshpere of Venus also contains a corrosive acid which would be a great obstacle to any vehicle attempting to pass through. The author then goes on to give multiple other reasons in support of danger, but is finally able to oppose these concerns by listing all of the reasons why man kind should explore Venus. For one, Venus is the planet that is most near Earth and therefore will take the shortest time to journey towards. Space travel, the author includes, is very time consuming and not to be taken on lightly. In addition, scientists believe Venus may have once been exceedingly similar to today's Earth. By giving this information, the author is able to infer that information gained by a trip to Venus could be very much crucial to ensuring the survival of the planet home to a large amount of life. The writing claims, after all of these reasons, that \"the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable,\" despite the hardships explorers would face.\n\nIn further support of this claim, the author explains the multiple ways that scientists are testing in order to make a trip to Venus possible. The article shows that already, mutiple ideas have been proven to work.\n\nThe author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" is able to very sucessfully make the claim that Venus is worth exploring through negation of the dangers of such a trip by providing multiple benefits of a visit and the ways in which scientists have already found to make the trip possible. Exploration is exceedingly valuable to maintaining and improving life on Earth and, as written by the author, \"should not be limited by dangers and doubts.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think computers benefit us They allow us interact people talk family far away help us school gives us easy access information much people usually family friends live away computer allows us interact The computer lets us email instant message play games friend websites like facebook see recent pictures It s easy interact family friends live far away internet allows us The computer nt let talk family friends lets meet new people interact new people world It let s make new friends play games chat The computer really helps stay touch people s easy convinent way The next thing computer helps us entertains us Children hiper homework done nt anything computer let s us play games chat friends watch movies videos load picture etc It alot us Kids could hang school go computer allows want go home parents know safe away drugs alcohol bad things get Just kids like computer nt mean s thing Kids athletic always playing sports always hiper computer helps go away They go school hours go basketball football practice sometimes need break The computer nt always fun s useful The computer helps us school It allows us type essays projects It also allows us easy information help write essays Websites like google bing easy websites help us get good accurate information whatever topic The computer useful comes school As see computer important lives makes life alot easy s choice much want spend But matter computer definatly benefits us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author tells us about how Venus is a planet in our solar system that is almost impossible to explore. Venusian geologist haven't been able to figure out to successfully land a spacecraft on it yet but someday they might be able to.\n\nVenus may never be able to be examined up close but it has been from a distance. Scientists have made many trips to other plants and dwarf plants like Mars (r.i.p. Mars Rover 2006?-2019), Saturn and even as far as Pluto. Scientist could potentally one day make it to Venus and land or have some kind of drone spacecraft on it for exploration. For example, \"Imagine a blimb-like vehicle hovering 30 miles or so above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" this could potentially happen some day if we keep working towards it.\n\nMaybe some day in the near future scientist will get something on Venus so we know more about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For a very long time, interviews are the most common and spread method of selection at almost all companies. However, many people believe that interviews are not right and appropriate way to select employees, and there are other better methods to choose them. I tend to trust traditional and tested methods everywhere, so I disagree with them who dislike the interview method. Because, there are several factors which confirm that interviews are reliable.\n\nFirstly, it is proven that at interviews, interviewer can check not only technical knowledge of employee, but also his communication skills, stress tolerance, and his suitability for company. Because, interviewer can do anything, for instance: give test, questions or just have a conversation with employee. It fully reveals person and allows to find out all the necessary qualities. \n\n However, interview may not show the all skills of employee, but a lot of companies conduct an internship after interview, where company fully understand is the person appropriate for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not be allowed because they are not safe! The reason I do not that they are safe is because driverless cars can only steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Which means the human driver must take control of the car at work zones, constructions zones ,and accidents. This means the human driver must stay alert at all times and be careful about what there doing and still pay attention to the road, and whose to tell that they will stay alert? and be ready for what ever conflict the driverless car comes too.\n\nI think that with people having driverless cars that they will be more reckless and not care whats going on on the streets. I feel like some might try to take a nap and what happens if theres a work zone and the human driver has to take over? The car will just crash right? because the human driver is to busy being asleep. Yes i know they built in vibrating seats but whats to tell that itll make the driver up in time? or what if theres ashortage and it doesnt work. Theres a lot of things that could go wrong with driverless cars.\n\nAlso whose to blame when it comes to a car crash? the driver or the manufacturer? Driverless cars are not safe! Some more reaasons i do not think that driverless cars are not safe is anything can happen to techonolgy , it can fail whenever. At any given momment all sensors can shut down , the navigator can stop working and so on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless car! Indeed, Google has created a car that can drive on its own. I have many thoughts on the driverless car Google has created, some good and some bad. So am I for or against it? I would have to say I'm for it. I believe that this invention Google has created is spectacular. My three reasons for this is you'll save up money, benefit the person or individual in the vehicle, and finally you'll have an experience of a life time.\n\nMy first reason why I'm for the driverless car is because of the money an individual would save. Nowadays its expensive to get your own car, and so much work too. Imagine just not always paying for gas everytime your car runs\n\nout of fuel. The driverless car would only take up half of the gas. In addition no more paying the taxi driver an unreasonable amount of cash. The driverless car is also way more flexible than buses. As it had said in the article,\" offer far more flexibility than a bus\". With driverless cars you'd be saving more money! This is my first reason to why I am for the driverless cars.\n\nMy second reason why I'm for the driverless car is that it'll benefit the individual. For example, imagine someone is running late for work and they haven't got dressed, well no worries, the driverless car has your back. While the car is driving, you can quickly get dressed until the car needs you to drive. In addition, say you have to call someone for a very important reason (I highly don't recommend it for your safety) but you can't look at your phone because you're driving. Well now you can make calls safely as the car drives. Finally, if you want to just relax, then you go ahead and relax, the car will be driving for you until you are needed to take control.\n\nThe driveless car is a benefit to various individuals. This is my second reason.\n\nMy third and final reason to why im for the driverless car is because it would be the experience of a life time. Who wouldn't want to ride in a driverless car? Yes it would be scary at first, trusting a car that drives on its own. But it would be fun too. I mean it would just be like the television shows and movies you watch about them. But smarter and improved. I believe that it would be an experience of a life time to ride in a driverless car. This is my third and final reason.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are a very interesting invention to be made. I am totally for the driverless cars. And yes i know, there may be many concerns about it, but theres a reason why it would be tested. But driverless cars may be the newest way of cars. It's a great creation google has came up with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr or Ms Senator,\n\nPresient Richard Nixon, and President Bill Clinton both have something in common; they won their presidencies with the Electoral College, not the popular vote. (According to \"In Defense of the Electoral College: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. Paragraph 22) Richard and Bill only won 43% of the popular vote against their opponents while they were running for office. This is why the United States needs to keep the Electoral College instead of switching to the popular vote for the elections.\n\nNow you're probably wondering, does high school students even know what the Electoral College is and what it's job? Yes, high school students do know what the Electoral College is and what it does. The Electoral College is made up of 538 electors. Your state amount equals one member from the House of Represenatives and two from the Senate. The electors are chosen from the candidate's political party. The Electoral College decides the president and vice president every four years every Tuesday ater the first Monday in the month of November.\n\nMr or Ms Senator, the Electoral College needs to stay instead of the popular vote because when you have the Electoral College you will get an outcome from it unlike the popular vote. Almost all states have the \"winners take all\" method which according to \"What is te Electoral College\" by the Office of the Federal Regisiter (Paragraph 7) this method is when all electors are awarded to the presidental candidate that is winning. Also the popular vote overrides the popular vote. In \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner (Pararaph 18) the 2012 presidental campaign for example it was the battle between Mitt Romney who is a Republican against Barack Obama who is a Democrat. Obama received only 51.3 percent of the popular vote and Obama got 61.7 percent of the Electoral College. As you can see the Electoral College overrided the popular vote which ultimately made him president. Also in \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the Presiden\" (Paragraph 22)take Richard Nixon's and Bill Clinton's presidental campaign. Those two only won 43% of their popular votes but they won their elections with the Electoral College. Without the Electoral College all three of these presides wouldn't have become President of the United States.\n\nTo continue on, the Electoral College should stay instead of the popular vote since one region of the United States doesn't have enough power of the Electoral Votes to make a presidental candidate win. Look at \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" Mitt Romney doesn't campaign in the South part of the United States since he knows that he is popular in that region with the electors he doesn't bother camapigning there since he knows he will win their votes. But he has to campaign to other states and regions since he knows the South doesn't have enough power to make him president. And with that comes your swing states and the big states. Swing states listen to what the presidental candidates have to say since they are toss-up states. These swing states literally can \"swing\" the election. These are the states that are going to decide who the next president is. And that ties in with your big states; California, Texas, Florida, New York, and Pennsylvania are some of your big states since they have the most population out of the United States. These states can also be swing states since they have the most votes out of every state. With the power of the popular vote a presidental canidate can become president, and other regions will not have a say. But using the Electoral College that can't happen.\n\nOn the other hand, according to \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" (Parargraph 14) the Electoral is outdated, irrational, and unfair. In \"The Inefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer key names such as Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, AFL-CIO and the U.S. Chamber of Commerece all want to get rid of the Electoral College and use the Popular Vote. Look at the presidency that was in 2000 with Al Gore against George W. Bush. Al Gore would have won the election if the election was based on the popular vote. He won the popular vote with over 60%! But unfortunately, he didn't win and lost to George W. Bush since Bush won the Electoral College votes. But some people don't really know what they are voting for in election which is why the Electoral College is the way to go. Also people complained with the \"winners take all method\" some candidates don't go to certain states and only focus on the swing states. In the 2000 campaign seventeen out of fifty states didn't see the candidates. But the candidates didn't go to those states since they knew they had no chance of winning those states and they needed to focus on the swing states to make sure they win the election. Many people do call the Electoral College an anachronism, but it doesn't need to stick in the past, it needs to be kept in the present and in the future.\n\nUltimately, Mr or Ms Senator, the United States needs to keep the Electoral College instead of the popular vote because you will always have an outcome and one region can't overpower another and make a candidate win the presidental campaign. Yes, as said before many people want to get rid of the Electoral College but it will stay with the United States and move forward with us people.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA student", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Arguements on whether the state senator should favor in keeping the Electoral College or change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States are occuring today. Each favor has its advantages and disadvantages, but we should favor in keeping the Electoral College. This is because less disputes are likely to happen and not voting will not effect the election.\n\nOn the other hand, changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States has some advantages. In \"Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\", author Bradford Plumer claims \"the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational\" because \"candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning.\" This means that the candidates focus on the \"tight races of the 'swing' states.\" To continue, Plumer also argues that changing to election by popular vote makes every vote count;however, chaning to election by popular vote will cause mant disputes and it is not the right way to keep everyone satisfied with voting for a new president. Keeping the Electoral College is more realistic.\n\nTo begin, the Electoral College is fair to the states, leaving fewer disputes. In \"Source 3: In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\", author Richard A. Posner explains that the Electoral College \"restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution.\" The Electoral College gives larger states more attention from presidential candidates as opposed to a smaller state. Posner continues the idea with \"the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\" To break it down, voters who pay close attention to the campaign will be the most thoughtful voters and they will recieve the most attention from the candidates. This reduces the amount of disputes because the presidential candidates will decide on who to give the most attention to.\n\nIn addition, the Electoral College method does not get affected by the ones who chose not to vote. In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\", author Richard A. Posner states that \"knowing [the voters'] vote has no effect [gives them] less incentitive to pay attention to the campaign.\" But, \"voters in presidential electons are people who want to express political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide and election.\" This means thatchanging everyone to a single vote will have no effect, too because people will not put thought into who to vote, but they will just vote for whoever.\n\nTo conclude, the state senator should favor in keeping the Electoral College rather than changing to election be popular vote for the president of the United States because less disputes will occur and not participating will not be effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Within Nick D'Altos article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Nick helps me view the value of using technology to read ones emotional expressions. The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of a student within a classroom or ones facial expressions throughout a painting can help distinguish how one had felt. Technology can be used for many things and now those from the Facial Action Coding System has been using this new technology to read the expression given off of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. D'Alto helps put reasonings behind his new Facial Action COding Sytem by promising applications throughout yourself and throughout those in famous paintings.\n\nWhen reading Nick's article the numerous questions about the Facial Coding System seemingly had been answered. Within the article many professors from different colleges had been developing different indept ways that humans can communicate with computers to help bring the software to a new level. Nick convinced the readers to fall in liking wiht this software due to tha fact that he persuaded them by stating what the computer does. Nick states that \"the process begings when the computer constructs a 3-D computer mode of the face\" which most likey brought more people into the idea of technology reading emetional expressions (para 3). Nick explains the basics of the technology along with the more indepth features that the computer is able to do considering how rare it is to have a software that can read human facial exoressions. Within th article it explains what the software can do such as \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness\" (para 3). This shows how the technology used can read many different emotions from those. Which persuades those to want to explore more into the software and how it actually serves a purpose.\n\nThis piece of software comes with many complex algorithims. The technology used is much more advnaced than your regualr software programs because it has to be able to read human expressions as well as the expressions off of those who have been painted. Within the article Nick gives us simple instructuons that can help us \"encode\" the different emotions we expirence as well as the how this technolgy can help us when figuring it out. Nick's instructions are placed within three steps and those steps are, \"Step one: Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth. Step two: Then squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling (\"crows-feet\") at the corners of your eyes. And finally step three: Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, toward your eyes\" (para 7). These steps can help show how at home you can recieve the basics of the emotional expressions revealed although this software can help you determine the deeper aspects of ones emotions. Nick also states that \"it's all about those muscular action units\" which helps us undertsand that the muscles within our face dtermine a lot about our expressions and with the expressions that we project to those within the situations we are placed in (para 7). Emotional expressions people give off are often hidden and with this new technology software we can dig deeper into one's emotions as well as with those feelings in resemblance to the actions being taken place if it's a historical figure that we are scanning to find out the emtional expression of them.\n\nThe background inofrmation on the Facial Action Coding System was breif although its still uprising. Nick explains that the \"new software has been developed [to] [improve] accuracy in precieving the emotions of others\" which has shown many great examples on why this technology is useful (intro para). Within the article Nick explains how the software works but he also mentions who has been working on the software and how much knowledge that has been put into this software. Nick says that \"the software is the latest innovation from professor Thomas Huang,.. working in collaboration with professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam\" which helps us understand who had been putting in the knowledge of this software invention (para 1). Although professor Huang and professor Sebe were known as the starters of the inovvation, many of their colleagues had helped then and still help them brain storm better ideas and ways for their software.\n\nAfter reading Nick's article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" I believe that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students and those in paintings such as the Mona Lisa is very vaulable. What makes it valuable to me is the fact that it's hard to read the emotional expressions of those in life and those who have major aspects of today's history. Those who have made history and are nonliving to this day we can put this technology to use and help determine theire emotions thorughout images and it can help us discover deeper into the person themselves as well as the time period in history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A decade ago, people were preferred to doing their task at home by hands and they avoid using science inventions. Whereas, in the present era, individual love for handling machines for their daily routine works. It has lots of advantages but we cannot neglect the downsides of usage of technologies.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are a plethora of advantages of using machines which can save a lot of occasions and perform better than humans. For example washing clothes manually consume too much, water and detergent. Therefore, people use a washing machine for wash bucket of clothes at one time and save their water and detergent also. Moreover, people use a kitchen appliance like blender, microwaves and refrigerator for cooking food and preserved it for a long time.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some drawbacks of using technologies which can affect our health and fitness. In past people doing their homes chores manually and they stay healthy and fit because their body was always busy. Therefore, the ration of diseases at that time very less as compared to the modern era. Furthermore, in past people love to doing work manually and they promote that culture to their next generation. For instance, a few years ago people encourage their children to do work manually and give them a reward to motivating them for doing works physically.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the use of machines for daily routine work is good in terms of saving and utilities. However, it can be harmful to humans in long terms and people lost their health gradually if they will not do any kind of physical activity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir loving happiness The mood happiness loving toward two parents Quote I alway grateful parent love sacrifice The mood show author great childhood loved neighborhood much Quote I never forget house gracious neighborhood many thing I learned love The mood author created also showed nt care nt lot money loved lived people live even nt blood relative Quote Growing enviroment instilled great sense family nothing blond relative To wrap mood author created memoir love happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars, huh? Well i like the idea of it, but i also see a few errors and flaws in google`s plan.I feel as if it would be an absolute crash course if focused on a daily basis. The author to this articale trys to inform us on the pros and cons to a driverless car.\n\nI`m all for the invention on driverless car. I feel like they could save lives, as well as keeping people from paying tickets or going to jail. It would make it easier; definitley with the built in GPS system. Reason`s i dont approve the use of driverless cars, well let me explain. If the car is running mainly on technology it could\n\ncatch a virus and its hard drive could fail, or crash. What if there is an malfunction, and the car starts to drive off in to cars or houses? People now a days cant even keep a phone for more then a year, how do you expect to keep a car for longer?\n\nThis is how i feel about the topic driverless cars. I personally think it would be a blow out. But what i say wont affect the production of the new cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most interesting topics to discuss in current times is how automatic machines are taking over the future inventions. While Scientist's from across the globe argue that this is a right time for Artificial Intelligence to start control the world. However, others argue that giving complete authority to the machine can have some serious drawbacks, which will risk human's life at workplace. I strongly believe that there should be balanced automation technology for better future, which human can control if it is necessary. However, I will explain the both sides of the question with examples. \r\n\r\nThere is an ample evidence to show that automated machines can produce significantly more amount of production when compare to humans. Which means, automated machine can do 5 people's work in one hour with less manpower. In the same way, R&D departments form various industries providing more employment opportunities for graduates to develop advance machines. For example, economically developed countries like the USA, Germany and UK already deployed automated machines in manufacturing industries. As a result, more production can be done in short time. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some commentators suggest that too much of automation technology at workplace can lead to serious outbreaks. For instance, machines have no control of taking decisions on their own, unless someone can programme them to do so, mistakenly, if a person is standing at the machine operated location, he can be injured. While recent study from the University of Melbourne states that, if automation technology started expanded, unemployment rate will increase more likely to 25 percent in Australia. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly recommend that automation machines at industries will provide large amount of production in short time. However, too much of automation will make humans lazier in future. There should be balanced workload where machine and human can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author in the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is talking about how he enjoys learning new things about Venus even though they never stepped foot on it, he enjoys the risk.\n\nThe author claims that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers because it is so much like earth, they call Venus \"Earth's Twin\" and the \"Evening Star\". The author talks about how Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, but it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. \"Astronomers are fasinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\".Since Venus is so close to earth its easier to see what is going on there. As the author said in the passage \"Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additonal impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\", The author also says Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\n\nThe author is talking about how NASA has an idea to send humans to study Venus. The only way they could get any close to Venus's surface is if they \"float above the fray\". \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out their way\". In other words means if they don't get anywhere near Venus ground nothing would happen to them. The author stated that anywhere near 30 or more miles above surface temperatures would still be very hot up to 170 degrees fehrenheit. \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\".\n\nIts is so hot in Venus that taking pictures is very difficult because the light cannot take the horrible hot atmosphere. The author is also talking about how researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything, from a distance. Probably since its not in the same atmosphere it could change or disappear if its not kept in the heat. The author is talking about how they are making up new technology that will survive for a long time in Venus so they could learn new things and discover other things about Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author said that humans shouldn't be intimidated because of the dangers on Venus and other planets, that should push them to want to try new things and discover more than they thought.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates kind happy In neighborhood despite costums elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship The quote author thinks different cultures uniting together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive computers household good idea They play games learn talk many Here three reasons computer good thing Having computer great play games There many varieties choose There card games board games even games You play solo might fun easyier bring friends along ride As see computer fun thing computer Useing computer learn wonderful The computer take places never seen heard maybe place could nt afford go You learn place s sunny time places s Another thing computer teach animals Animals way us There still much dont know Many scientists spent lives studying animal put iternet better educate The computer also teach handeye Handeye great trying sport like football baseball basketball Also never know ll need catch somthing My final reason also helpful Being able talk computer good using voice chat instint messenger choice While talking computer might make new friends share intrests hobbies And chat long online Also talking express ideas feelings Somtimes might need blow steam Or maybe post idea one day famous As see games learning talking easier computer This I think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree computers bad effect people spend less time exercising To much time computer takes away knowledge takes away time family friends So please listen I explain I feel way My first reason situation people spend less time exercising lead drowsiness laziness stop exercising Another reason affect ability run even stand says people exercise lot able work nt wo nt able nothing ll miss fun lazy come My second reason situation takes away knowledge For one might forget learned Seconds toturing needed could nt focus even forget people know even live spend much time computer reason situation takes time away family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many people believe that children in the thirteen to nineteen age group should be forced to take part in volunteer work which can create many valuable contributions to their local community. Personally speaking, I totally agree with this statement and the essay below aims to clarify my point of view.\r\n\r\nOne of the cogent reasons why I agree with this opinion is that doing unpaid work can help children to improve their ability to deal with problems in different situations and develop their advanced skills. Firstly, if students always study theory without practising what they learnt, their flexibility in solving problems will be greatly reduced. When you are learning, everything you know is just theoretical and you can not predict what accident is going to happen in the future like when you go to work. Working at an early age will help you to come into contact with reality and be capable of dealing with unexpected incidents from your experience. For example, if you want to become a teacher, you can choose to teach children in churches or orphanages. This work can help you to understand children's psychology more, thereby easily imparting knowledge to them.\r\n\r\nMoreover, by applying in practice the knowledge which is taught at school through some unpaid jobs, teenagers can recognise their weaknesses and strengths early. From that, they will be able to give themselves some precise orientations about what they can do and focus on developing their own skills. Apart from enhancing the students' skills, encouraging young people to help the local residents without getting salaries also creates a responsible society. When doing unpaid jobs becomes a duty for teenagers, all kids will have to do it due to its subjection which is essential for their homeland. And in case they do not perform this obligation, they can suffer some deterrence from older people.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are some demerits such as wasting important time, I think the benefits of the idea of forcing children to become volunteers is necessary for both individuals and their community due to its huge merits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Besides being totally awesome, driverless cars could be extremely beneficial to the people in general. The many sensors on these vehicles help to to ensure the safety of the passengers as well as the human driver. People new to driving, elder drivers, and maybe even drivers udner influence would have an enormous amount of pressure allieved, therefore preventing the many deaths caused by vehicular accidents. Sensors like that of the modified Toyota prius; the rotating sensor dubbed \" LIDAR\", the position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, the GPS reciever, and other valuable equipment to secure the name of safety towards the vehicle. The death toll caused by reckless driving could be critically lowered because of the advancement and use of this technology. Now there is the argument of what if the tech fails, or if there is a special situation with the road. Heads up displays and other alerting software should be able to alert you if the vehicle needs human accompaniment to ensure that you still remain in control in these crucial incidents. That being said, it is still advised that the driver remain alert at all times while on the road, preventing the need of these alert systems being used heavily. The psycological changes this type of car can bring are unprecedented, because the people in general don't have access to these cars in the first place, because of safety concerns.\n\nLaws that pretain to driving were made to ensure the safety of the people in", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagrams show the process that occurs when making carbonated drinks. There are various steps in the process starting with Water cleaning to Package for supermarket.\nIn the first part of process is Water cleaning, Raw water will be sent to factory to filter it including using water softener and chemical to clean all water before sending it to pump. The second part of process is Heating evaporation and carbonation, the pump will send to electric heaters which heating evaporation occurs through a cooling pipe. Then, carbonation by adding carbon dioxide. In this part water will be changed to carbonated water. The next stage is Mixing, the carbonated water will mix together in the mixing tank. In this part, the tank will add coloured including syrup and flavour as well. Then, filter the water again for Filtering and filling where live in stage 4. Water will fill into 2 parts which are Bottles and Cans. Finally, packaging to supermarket for selling worldwide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars? Am i for or against them?. I believe that driverless cars could be fun for some. especially those who are lazy and dont like the complications that occur on the road. So, therefore they'd like someone to take over the wheel for them so that they don't have to deal with the complications of driving the a road that is just confusing and disorganized. Sure, why wouldnt you want a driverless car. But, a driverless car can take som eof the fun out of actually driving for future drivers.\n\nFirst I am completely against the future of driverless cars because i would like enjoy the fun of driving with my hands. What i mean by that is that i would like to enojoy the feel of turning the wheel at the time i want and also putting my feet onthe breaks as i please instead of using voice comand and telling my car when to stop. To me the idea of driverless cars would seem just a little boring as explained in paragraph 8 when the authors claimed that \" Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for thir turn to drive?\".\n\nSecond i am also against the future of drieverless cars becausehow would it have an affect on our lives in the future? How would it show off mankind? not just as a very smart species but a species that is very selfish and has took what was once given to them and changed it into something that has have basically been tooken for granted. I enjoy the cars we have today but what's gonna come next after \"driverless cars\" ?. Are there going to be floating T.v's?\n\nLastly i am against the futre age of driverless cars because it just cost to much. Some people who have a complete low income can't afford that much money on a car that is worth ober 500,000 dollars. Some of the fellow americans today are considered to still be \"paying\" off there car debt from when they first got the car. Therefore i wouldnt exspect driverless cars to be so big in the future depending on price.\n\nDriverless cars? Am i for for against them? I have explained in the following essay that i am against driverless cars because of the price, enjoyment that it can infict, and the way it has changed the minds of civilians today. I gave three reasons why i am against them and gave details to back up my reasoning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College,because the Electoral College is process consists of the selection of the electors ,which the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President , and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nThey get to vote who is going to be but, the Electoral College is consists of the selection of five hundred thirty eight electors. The majority of two hundred seventhy electoral votes is requied to elect the president. I think that is not going to be alot of votes of people who is voting for the person who they want. Is just voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. Not always the voters can control whom their electors vote for!\n\nThe argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky, because the two thousand fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. They was lucky that happen , consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Perhaps the most worrying thin is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair,outdated, and irrational. The arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality, and the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. There's five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president and those five reasons is certainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, big states, and avoid run-off elections. These five reasons have something to deal with Electoral College. Is just some arguments that they have of electoral college, in of defense of the electoral college.\n\nIs just asking if the electoral college works? I think that it doesn't because they have arguments about it ,about they dont get that much votes. And that something is wrong with the electoral college. People should decide on what they want and that voters can control whom their electors vote! It can be a argued that the electoral college method of selecting the presisdent may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying thier state. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator I am arguing to you in favor of keeping the Electoral College for the voting process of the president. Why I am in favor in keeping the Electoral College is why should we change something that's already working good. The Electoral college system is a system that voters vote not for the president, but for a slate who in turn elect the president. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. Why we should keep it is because we have been using it since 1960 and i dont see why change something that works, is slightly fair, and everybody is happy.\n\nThe electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by delcaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college method is not democractic in a modern sense.... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When tou vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.\n\nThe reason is thatr the winning candidate's share of the electoral college incariably exceeds his shares of the popular vote. For example,Obama are likelyeceived 61.7 percent of the electoral vote comparad to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes casr for him and romeney.\n\nThe winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in 2012s election to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up state. Voters int oss up[ states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign to really listen to the competting candidatesw knowning that they are going to decide the election they are going to decide the election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worth searching and studying because it might have been the most earth like planet in the solar system. Long ago, venus was probable covered with large oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that venus can sometimes be our nearest optioon for planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. The value of returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission safe and scientiffically productive.\n\nI think that venus should be explored because then there could possibly be new life there and we can have a new planet that possibly people could go to but it wouldnt be possible for many more years. It would be dangerous exploring venus because it is really hot there. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray usuing a blimp like vehicle that is about 30 miles above venus. The tempature would still be like 170 degrees but air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earths levels. Not easy conditions but it would be survivable for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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