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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator, I'm writting you a letter because I think that we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the united states than keeping the Electoral College. The reason why I think that we should change to popular voting is because every one will be able to have a say in who becomes president.\n\nWith the Electoral College, if you want to vote for a certain president, you are actually voting for electors who are pledged to a certain candidate and would place a vote for the candidate they pledged to to make them president.\n\nThe pont is, those electors can be bad people looking for power. Besides, it wouldn't be a fair game if the Electoral College did that. So in order to make it equal, I would like to switch to a popular vote election. But eiither way, a president is still chosen.\n\n\"The single best argument against the Electorala College is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. Consider the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\n\nBack in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succceeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.) In the same vein, \"faithless\" electors ahve occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. . . Oh, and what if a state sends two slates of electors to Congress? It happened in Hawaii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the Senate, validated only his opponent's electors, but he made sure to do so \"without establishinga precedent.\" What if it happened again?\" Excerpt from \"The Indefendable Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" from Mother Jones By Bradford Plumer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a very interesting planet. It has been discovered to be a lot like our lovely planet Earth. Physically that is, Venus has very similar denstity and size. Some other features are the same, Venus is shown to have mountains, valleys, and a surface of rocky sediment. Given all this information scientists struggle trying to get closer to venus, because of it's danger to humans. Humans could not survive on this planet more than one second, let alone landing a spaceship on it. Scientists have attempted to send rockets and drones over top venus but they have failed to land anything on it for a while now due to it's danger and rough conditions. Venus has temperatures up to eight-hundred farenheit and sulfuric acid in clouds. Venus also has erupting volcanoes, very powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes. It may sound weird as to why scientists would even want to risk futher exploring this planet. The given reason is that Venus once had oceans and actual liveable land. Which means that there could of been life on Venus one day and scientists want to know what life, where that life may have gone, and what happened to evolve the planet. NASA thinks they have figured out a way for scientists to study more about Venus. NASA claims they can hover a vbechicle thirty or so miles above the deadly surface where it is only one hundred and seventy degrees farenheit and the air pressure is roughly the same as it is on earth around sea level and the radiation would not exceed the Earth's numbers. However not everything can be seen from so high up and most or all light forms cannot penetrate the thick blanketing atmosphere. There are also some other devices that are being considered to be used in the mission to study Venus. Such as electronics made up of a silicone carbide. There has been some devices like these tested in a chamber harnessing some of Venus's greatest challenges and the devices have been recorded to last roughly three weeks. Accomplishing the challenge that Venus brings to the table comes with great value because of the amazing insight we would gain and the fact of getting past our curiousity of our neighboring planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship found television libraries schools even homes Do think censorship used Censorship used block one s personal thoughts opinions promote conformism I disagree idea Censorship Not everyone thinks people able images visions however makes world individualized Censorship libraries growing gradually The government want society especially youth read things deemed inappropriate Should one s guardian old enough oneself When read books see language block take parts make book seem classy also block things drugs alcohol A lot people believe books hurt lot today s society I believe reading material could lot educational editors woud leave things censor book I believe parents decide let child read story however child could learn certain situations possibly learn handle difficult things This opinion censorship books could absolutely debatable Censorship book used The government taking certain words story seen offensive This understandable also I believe amazing novel seen way The language meaning used offensively simply state people talked things alive If books like would society learn history culture s history In fairness educational novel times day Censorship movies also growing Television block things language nudity alcohol drugs things nature I would like turn television see things everywhere could educate people I believe censorship used people s thoughts would apt imagine Imagination scare people Some think imagination turn someone crazy something normal normal It community everyone else different scares people This whole essay brings back thought censorship basically conformism The word conformism means become one conform If case one ever come new books music movies magazines ideas citizens culture trapped inside minds", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars shouldn't be legal, yet even made.They can be dangerous and it's never 100% that they will never cause an accident we (humans) could've prevented if driving ourselves.\n\nLike stated in the passage paragraph 8, why should a driver have to wait their turn? I believe if you get a car and want the safest way of driving, drive yourself. There is yet been any evidence that we (humans) should at all trust computered objects. Technology still gliches so why take the chance of your driverless car gliching and if coming into a dangerous situation it cant warn you in time? And as said in the passage paragraph 9 when in an accident who is at blame? The driver or manufacturer? I'd say both should have a part especially with financial responsibility paying half. Before even putting out a driverless car there should be YEARS of testing to make sure anyone in a driverless car will be safe as possible and never in danger.\n\nAll in conclusion i still believe that driverless cars shouldnt be used because no matter how much the maufacturer states it's safe and effective, it could always lead you in danger. Now driving yourself you can know for sure if youre leading yourslef in to danger, and that will be totally on you. You won't have to ever assume or worry about getting hurt because of another computered device, you'll trust yourself. Which is more safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Cowboy Program\"\n\nThis isn't just any type of cowboy program, this is a cowboy who rode the waves. I think it would be good for kids to come helpout at this program. It can make you smart and learn about things you might not know.\n\nThis boy named Luke went with his best friend. His life totally changed. I'm now going to tell you why you should come. What they did their was they helped people. The boy boys played fun games like, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling. They did that to help pass time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy was much of an adventure. Now here are some places they went that I think you might like. It took the group two weeks to travel across the Alantic ocean. They went to China which took a month. Also the program went to Greece to get their Military service. For World War ll in 1945, they went to Europe.\n\nNow I'm going to tell you things they did to help out that you might like to do, if you like to do chores. Luke served as a night watchman. Also he went and checked on the animals every hour. Also to keep Luke busy about the animals is they had to be fed or watered two or three times a day. Another thing is bales of hay and bag of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. The stalls also had to be cleaned.\n\nLastly I'm going to tell you why Luke went on this ship and why you might want to. Luke went on this trip because he wanted to help out is best friend. Also he knew it was possibly the only chance he would ever get to get to go. Another reason is Luke thought it might be good work him. I think he also went on this trip to help out 44 other countries to recover their items. This was a very important job and Luke did a good job. I bet if you tried this, you would too.\n\nDo you think you would ever want to go on this trip? I would, it sounds like you have to do work, but you still can have a lot of fun with the trip. I think it is also important to help out with other things. Maybe some day you should try this some day if you ever get the opportunity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that they should change the election way of how they are doing it. I think that the president should be chosen by the most popular vote. i aslo think that they shouldnt do the voting thing if they are gunna end up chooseing it them selfes. in the passage it said that, the electoral college is made up of 538 electors and only the majority vote is 270. So i dont understand why they thousand of people to vote if their vote doesnt really mater its what senators choose overall. i think it would be fair if what the peple choose the most shall win. What if one of them gets more votes and the senator picks the other because they had more votes in there group, thats not fair. i just think that the overall vote of the people should count, and not make them wast there time. it also says in the article when you vote for you candidate you actuall voting for the candidates elector, so they are trying to trick them into thinking that there votw would count. what if the persident that the senator choose didnt know how to work stuff and had bad disitions, the election is every four years on a tuesday on a november. thats a pretty long time if you ask me. I think that half of the people votes dont cont cause of the sentors that choose. i know it would be long to count everones vote but i dont think it matters because in the end it would be chosen by the people that wanted that president not what the senators wanted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Warmth In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author created mood many waysOne way author creates mood saying paragraph The heart kitchen passionat Cuban music filled air Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations This creates warm mood kitchen seems like friendly place due people gathering togetherAnother way author creates mood saying parents always kept arms door open many people concidered family knowing would us paragraph ways author Narciso created mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon The builders Empire State Building faced opstacles building Empire State Building allowing dirigibles dock thereOne reason Al Smith fourterm governor New York headed efforts construct Empire State Building years office made tower tall The hight building ft But almost losing title worlds tallest tower announced would top hat put towerAnother reason tower made Dirigibles blimps That Could people New York New Jersey Smith wanted place dirigibles could dock But never happened German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners State building realized much worse accident could New YorkIn s idea dropped another dirigible trying proform stunt The Empire State Building never got fofil made", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Abolishing the electoral college would be the best way to go for everyone. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electos, who in turn elect the president. (source 2, Plumer) Some wonder, are the people in the electoral college even reliable? Many also believe that the electoral college is an unfair way of deciding whom the president will be. The electoral college is also flawwed in a way that it makes the smaller states feel less important than the bigger states.\n\nAre the people in the electoral college always reliable? Who even knows who chooses our electoral college? Voting citizens can't even control who the electoral college votes for sometimes, this is unjust and an outrage consitering us citizens do the moral duty to vote and may not even get a fair outcome anyways. And, there are some cases in which voters get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate. (source 2, Plumer) This \"winner takes all\" system is a big mess and highly unnescissary. Not to mention, it is also a very unfair way of deciding.\n\nSome question if the electoral college is a fair way of voting. Which it is not. The electoral college can cause an unfair vote to the presidents which also upsets us citizens. What if say, 5,000 people vote in Florida, 3,000 for president 1, and 2,000 for president 2, and the electoral college sends it off as president 1 gets the vote for that college. But then, that 1,000 vote difference could have changed the vote for president country wide. A scenario like this may be unlikely, but it is possible. It has already happened once, it would be a shame if it did again. Chance of a situation like this draws a lot of people away from voting for president. Another unfair scenario was in 1976 when a tie would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. (Source 2, Plumer) The electoral collage is bound to cause a catastrophe and we should stop it before it does.\n\nThe elctoral college is also unfair in a way that smaller states votes do not feel as important. Some people in the smaller states even say they haven't seen a campaign poster throughout an entire election because canidates feel as if campaigning isn't important in places that only have 3 or 4 electoral colleges. If we had a popular vote society, people in smaller states would feel like their vote is as important as those in the bigger states.\n\nOverall, the electoral college is higly unfair way of deciding anything. It should be abolished before it turns into a problem. Many can agree that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. (Source 2, Plumer)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of students are faced with new found problems when taking on higher level degree education. Whether it is stress due to knowledge changes, or study-work balance mismanagement, undergraduates need to clearly identify these aspects and take much needed courses of actions in order to achieve better education results and an improved student life.\r\n\r\nStress is something that scholars are in the likelihood of enduring during higher education. There are a number of reasons that causes stress in students at university or college. To begin with, knowledge and information from a variety of vocational and career-related subjects tend to be overwhelming. A proof of this claim is that highschool subjects are far more general such as mathematics, biology, chemistry, literature, etc. Whereas, a degree in economics requires an expansion in fiscal policy, small business management or economics law. To adapt to this sudden switch, students are advised to make a few minor adjustments. Spending time to make a connection between related subjects such as mathematics and accounting or literature and law is a smart option. Moreoever, students may apply seek academic recommendation from seniors and lecturers.\r\n\r\nAnother factor to the overall problem is that nowadays, many industries request experiences in specific working areas. Hence, students find it necessary to work while they attend university so that they could start a career right after graduating. An imbalance between studying and working is an obvious result of mismanaging assignment deadlines or time shortage trying to finish the workload. To combat possible poor performance in either studying or vice versa, students should explore academic and simotanously workplace supports. There are a variety of options inluding work-related assignment at university aiming at reducing workload, or work leave, flexitime and jobsharing system at work. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, heavy workload and urge of working are a few challenges that students of higher degree education face. These problems can lead to numerous consequences such as stress and study-work imbalance. However, scholars may improve their mentality by making adjustments to their work or seeking academic and workplace support.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars should not exist.\n\nIt's better to have people actually drive cars then to have people ride in cars without drivers.\n\nThe form of driverless cars in a public-transport already exists, its called a train.\n\nThey have to be very smart cars if they want to drive on its own.\n\nThere are so many reasons why driverless cars should not exist.\n\nThese cars are going to be so expensive that if they do make more then only a few amount of people will have them.\n\nIf people get in a car crash using the driverless car then the insurance of the man or women will have to pay for the damage when it ws actually the cars fault. Even if you crash the car the amount to fix the damage will be very expensive as well.\n\nIn the article it says \"as long as thr driver is watching the road, the car will be watching the driver.\" Now since the driver in not actually driving the driver will eventually pull out is phone or go to sleep and since the driver wasn't paying attention the car would just crash since no was wacthing the road.\n\nEvery single piece of technology always has a malfunction so what makes us think that it is never going to have a problem.\n\nLots of reasons why we shouldn't have driverless cars.\n\nIf people want to but a driverless car it on them. I would get a car that will let me drive but prevent me from crashing.\n\nDriverless cars is not a thing I will ever get. Thats what I think about driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of \"driverless cars\" could be potentially beneifical to the world, but they could be potentially non-beneifical to the world as well. The cars supposively could change the world fundamentally and would \"use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibilty than a bus.\"\n\nbut that doesn't jusitify the reason to produce these cars. The production of these cars propose several of issues for the driver and the manufacturers of the cars.\n\nOne issues proposed is that if the \"driver\" where to be in the car when the car gets in a wreck, who would be at fault? This causes a huge problem for the driver. Machines can never be 100% correct. Machines always have a potentially risk of not operating correctly because after all, they are a man made product. In order for the driver to be at fault and the manufacturer to not be at fault, the manufacturer would have to make sure that their product is always operating 100% which is something that is impossible to do.\n\nHowever, that does not mean that driverless cars could never be a thing. In the future when the cars can be proven safer than they are today, more manufacturers and consumers might consider using them. Safety is always the main concern. If the car fails, it leaves the driver behind the wheel without any control over the car, which could be very dangerous for the driver. It could lead to many lawsuits against the manufacturer for not producing a safe car for their consumers.\n\nAs of today, driverless cars do not seem practical for the everyday driver. The cars just are not all there yet and they can not be succesfull until they develope fully. Some things that they could do to improve these cars is implement more safety bags, seat belts, and other devices that improve safety. They could add a engine override that allows the driver to kill the engine before a major wreck.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding system a software were a machine can dectect any emotion thats on your face. If we make more Facial Action Coding sysytem we can use it for hard situation's we struggle in life. This system can help us know how people feel if there going through a tough time than we can help them if we have more of these Facial Action Coding system. It can help by knowing if a peron likes you or not, if a person loves you and also helps you to know how a person feels a certian way about certain things.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help in many ways in school with students. This machine can help students like learning more or make them like the subject they hate in the artical it says that \"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". If you see an advertisment on the web or anything and you dont like what kind of ad it is than with the Facial Action Coding system it can by your type of mood by either if your frowing or smiling so than it'll give present different types of ad's it also help the system know what kind of ad's or video's you may or may not like. Another way the system can help is communications. A lot of \"communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" thats a way the Facial Action Coding System can help or do.\n\nFacial Action Coding System should be developed more for us to have and know how a perosn feels. Can help in many ways. A hard, struggling situation's including feelings can be difficult sometimes especially to know how the perosn is feeling at that moment. Also in school The Facial Action Coding System Can make school fun and very learnable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are a lot of things that develop and hold a Electoral College together. There are also a lot of down falls to the Electoral College. Every state has 1 House of Representative plus 2 of your Senators in the Electoral College. There are a total of 538 people but 270 of them is the majority vote that wins. There are a total of 5 reasons why we have to keep this method to choosing the president. The 5 ways are Certainty of outcome,Everyone's President,Swing States,Big States and Avoid Run-Off Elections.\n\nThe main reason we have a Electoral College is so they have a right way to choose a president. The main reason for this is so that we dont leave our electing in the hands of foriegn people/immiagrants. The is what the president needs to get elected in the electoral college. There are still a lot of down falls to this method of the electoral college though. One of these issues is \"at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voter\". This means \"winner takes all\" which is they only focus on the bigger states and not the smaller ones because the bigger states have bigger population which means they have more in the electoral college. Another issue with this method is that the person thats running for president might get the popularity vote but still not win. See everyone that votes isnt really voting directly for the president, the people who really count is the electoral college. In order to win the vote you have to convice the electoral college and thats not always easy. So remember just because you won popular vote doesnt mean you won the majority of the electoral vote.\n\nThere are 5 reasons why we keep this method of electing the president. The first reason is Certainty of Outcome. This means \"it's less likley than a dispute over the popular vote.\" Which really means the candidates share to the other people in the Electoral college there share of the popular vote and thats how they vote. The second reason is Everyone's President. This is basically shows that \"the Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\" This means that no region such as south,northwest,etc. has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The third resone to keeping these methods is Swing States. This tells me that its the \"winner takes all method.\" The fourth method why we should keep these methods is the Big States. This explains that \"the Electoral College restores some of the wieght in the political balance.\" this means that the bigger states get a big advantage in the electoral because the people that get elected into office there is based off of population so they have an advantage. THe bigger states get more attention from the candates then the smaller states do. The final reason why we should keep this method of voting is Avoid Run-Off Elections. This means \"the Electoral College aviods the problem of Elections in which no candidates recieves a majority of the votes cast\". This means no pressure for candidates when they win majority of the votes cast.\n\nThere are many ways to develop and to hold the Electoral College together. There are many ways that it falls apart and has it flaws but its the best way for our econany to vote for president. If you think about it if we just did popularity vote that would be like leading our hands into a world of immigrates who know a very little. There a lot of rules for our Electoral process buyt its the best way and the only way we have to becoming a better place. Dont forget to look at the 5 reasons we keep this the way it is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenagers are the most valuable asset of any country because they have more free time for contributing to society. Though the idea of using them in social work is good, millennials of the current teenage generation do not perform well under the mandate of regulatory bodies. In my perception, I do not agree with the statement because, despite having some advantages, there are plenty of disadvantages that could result from forcing them. \r\n\r\nThe energetic, explorative, and creative youth can introduce and implement innovative solutions to social problems. Working with the common man in the streets, they will gain first-hand experience, which would build empathy towards the general public. Statistics show that people who have undergone a 2-year post-study voluntary service in the forces have a higher employability rate and lower crime rate. Therefore, one might think that compulsory unpaid community work will benefit the individual and society.\r\n\r\nThough we have seen benefits in past generations, the current generation of teens is different; they value their freedom and seek a purpose for all their actions. So, rather than a mandated job, which will demotivate and build frustration, it is of utmost importance to attract them to community services. Non-profit organizations, clubs, and societies can do a lot and enable them to contribute to society while spending time on an area of their interest. In addition, introducing a framework that could add merit to those who have worked without getting paid may make them feel good about their contributions, even after decades.\r\n\r\nIn summary, I have highlighted the benefits and drawbacks of mandatory unpaid work for teenagers. In my opinion, if we implement systems to facilitate and encourage the youth toward social services, we will get the best results. In conclusion, I disagree with forcing teenagers to work for free and recommend motivating them to volunteer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\" A boy named Luke Bomberger went on an \"adventure\" as an Seagoing Cowboy. There are positive and negative things about the \"adventure.\" But, I still think people should try out the Seagoing Cowboy programs, because you you can see many wonderful views and ects.\n\nOne reason people should try out the Seagoing Cowboys program is, you can visit many places that you haven't been before like, China, Europe, and ects. Imagine your living in U.S.A right now, and you dream is to go to Europe. Your dream can come true from trying the Seagoing Cowboy programs! Also, places like Europe and China have their own cultures, which are extremely different from U.S.A's culture. According to paragraph 5, it said: \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" So, not only you can visit wonderful places, you can also help people at the same time!\n\nAnother reason is, you can play games like baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, and ects. Playing sports is one of the most popular thing to do in the world. When people have fun doing things, it feels like time pass away extremely fast. The adventure may take weeks or even months, but with fun things like these sports, it'll feel short.\n\nLike I said in the first paragraph, you can see many wonderful views. This reason kind of connect to the visiting places that you've never been before, because when you go to a new place, there will be new things you'll see and learn about. Like I said before, most places have different culture. You can find new things or learn something. Some places have different languages to other countries/states. So, maybe you'll learn new languages and you can communicate with people.\n\nThese are some reasons why people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. It might take a long time to travel, but it'll be fun! There might be chances the participators will get hurt, but what is life withour a few accidents?\n\nLke Bomberger had participate in this program many times, but he still think it's wonderful. According to paragraph 9, Luke said: \"I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" he says. \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" That represents he think this program is magnificent and fun!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays in many countries, people have been putting their interest to find out the history of the place where they live. A bad history and house prices in the future might be reasons why people have been curious about this. Furthermore, they can find the information easily by using web search machines or asking local people there.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are some beliefs that the bad history of the house can give bad luck in life. Some people would do research on their flat history just to ensure that there was not a bad history that happened in the past. The other reason is some people need to know how the inflation rate of their living place in the future. A house can be worth investing if its price grows up over the next years that’s why people are curious about it. For example, many workers have purchased a home around Jakarta as it was known that house prices in Jakarta have been skyrocketing since the 90s until now from the news on the Google.\r\n\r\nWith the development of technology, people become easier to gather the information they need using the internet. There are a lot of online platforms that provide details of the house history such as Wikipedia and Homefindings. On the other hand, asking local people who had lived for long years could be another option to collate the information. Those people can tell the history of the area that they lived in more completely and in detail. For instance, Betawi people are more familiar with the Jakarta area compared to migrating people as they are the indigenous tribe in Jakarta.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are some factors that drive people to know about their flat history. A horror story that usually happens and the predicted price of buildings are two driving forces. In order to get the information, they can either use their desktop to find the data or visit the local people in the region.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion i think that the smart cars are not a good idea. Mostly because i feel like they are really dangerous. Anything can happen to a smart car and put the individual in harms way. The car could take control in the wrong way and could drive off the highway or it could hit a pedestrian. Which means the smart car puts everyone's life at steak. I honestly wouldn't get a smart car because i wouldn't want my life at much greater risk than driving a regular car.\n\nAlso another reason i wouldn't get a smart car is because it will make me or others lazy.I say this because people would get so use to the car doing everything for them that they wont drive themselves. Which brings me to the point if a person is getting a new smart car they will let the car do everything to the point where they wouldn't know how to drive a regular car. This is only my opinion though. To be truthful if i was to get a smart car it would also hurt me mentally, Mostly because i would forget how to do certain things when i drive, because i would be so use to letting the car do it.\n\nSo my last point is about the people whom makes the cars. Another reason i wouldn't get a smart car because what if it starts to mess up. Like what if it take control and takes a life what can we do to the company which who made the car. Will we have conflict? Will they fight aganist you? They are ment to keep us safe but what if that goes wrong? Those are the questions right there can they be answered? They just seem like to much to me its just a better way of putting our lives at greater risk just when driving a car. So these are my reasons i dont agree with people driving smart cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s fast-paced world, there is a constant urge to get work done quicker. The change in needs and quest for success have lead people to a lifestyle where getting work done quicker is the only choice to meet the demands of today. This essay will discuss the reasons associated with the trend and show how it has a negative impact on the society.\n\nThere are a myriad of reasons why people attitude is changing. The primary cause is the willingness to constantly improve in life. Thanks to increased competition in all walks of life, In order to achieve goals people have to continuously make an effort to meet the ever-changing needs. For this they not only have to keep abreast with the latest information ,but are also required to respond to changes swiftly. In short, keeping up with world requires one to be adaptable and spontaneous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental pollution has become a threat to mankind. Imposing heavy taxes on fuel consumption for vehicles is considered by few as the most fitting solution to combat these ecological crises. I do not agree with this statement because there are several alternatives to tackle these problems.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, increasing the price of petrol will help to reduce environmental changes to some extent.But it will have perilous impacts on the market of society. Petrolpetrol is an integral part of transportation. Therefore, the high cost of this fuel will not only cause the prices of all essential commodities to increase but also the value of the currency in a particular nation will start depreciating. Moreover, this will lead to inflation and in turn surplus the poverty ratio. For example, in 2019 the cost of all fuels such as petrol and diesel were hiked due to which the economical status of the country was detrimentally degraded.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the government can take alternative measures to mitigate these issues. Primarily, the usage of renewable resources as a substitute for petrol and diesel will act as a booster to curb environmental depletion. For instance, biodiesel is made up of vegetable oils and animal fats and it emits a low level of gases into the atmosphere. This can be widely used in most transportation modes.\r\n\r\nSecondly, by improving public transportation and diminishing the amount of travelling, the governing authority can motivate people to use public transport instead of individual cars. These measures can help to keep the climate clean and also reduce traffic congestion.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, amplifying the cost of non-renewable fuels is not a feasible option. Instead, improving the efficiency of public transport and investing in renewable energy sources are better alternatives that ought to be considered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author doesn't support his idea very well of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He talks about how most people being sent to venus dont return, in addition the atmosphere is very dangers for humans, and they dont even have the technolgy yet to make it a safe trip. All of those topics will be discussed in the following paragraphs explaining why the evidence the author has does not support his claim.\n\nThe first reason why the authors evidence to his claim wasnt very good was because he started off his article talking about the spacecraft that haven't returned from their mission to Venus. For example in paragraph 2 the author says \" humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author is telling us straight forward that it is NOT safe to travel to this planet and you may not even come back and then he goes on to saying \" Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\". This only tells the readers that scientist aren't even comfortable with sending people anymore because of the failed attempts they have had in the past. Lastly the author says \" Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\". This sentence backs everything up making it clear that humans arent returning because we arent equipped or ready to deal with these \"factors\". Which brings us right into our next point.\n\nThe next thing that made the author lack while trying to support his claim is when he talked about all the dangers thier were for humans. In paragraph 3 the author states \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\". The conditions on this planet are almost impossible for people to live in which is probably why most dont make it back. The author then says \" Also noteable, Venus has the hottest surface temprature of any planet in our solar system\". This is a big point because it seems like small information that didnt need to be added but, really it's big because they wouldn't have put it in there if it wasn't something that raised some concern. Lastly the author says \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes toprobes seeking to land on its surface.\". This goes right into our last paragraph because if they dont have the right technology to help and keep the people traveling to this planet safe then they won't make it back.\n\nThe last thing that leads me to believe that the authors evidence wasn't very good was the way he talked about the lack of technology. For example in the in the fifth paragraph, the author says \" but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\". He also states \" More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get close and personal despite the risks.\". These two sentences could not be more blunt on the fact that we just do no have the technology at the moment to get everything we want, and to keep everything safe.\n\nThroughout the article the authors claim was not supported very well by evidence. there were to mant things that came into play cause it to not be safe nor get what they needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present age, people tend to have children at an older age. From my perspective, it has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will discuss the main reasons associated with this epidemic and reveals why it has more disadvantages.\r\n\r\nThe main reasons for this global problem are people's career and their freedom. Nowadays, individuals' career and their position in society have great importance. Everyone tries to enhance their performance and get promoted; therefore, having a baby is a huge obstacle and prevents parents from reaching their goals. What's more, people without children have freedom. In other words, they do whatever they want and enjoy their lives. For example, a single person can travel or go to parties anytime without worrying about her baby.\r\n\r\nHowever, having children at an older age has significant drawbacks. First of all, old parents' offspring may suffer some disorders like Down syndrome. This problem is more common among old mothers' children, which causes irreparable problems in society. Secondly, older parents are not energetic, and they can't play with their babies properly. They get bored easily, and in the future, because of a huge age difference, they can't understand children, and this causes a disparity between them. For instance, teens with young parents have a good relationship with them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, having a baby in old age has various reasons, like the importance of job prospects and liberty. On the other hand, it has serious demerits like disability and parents' impatient. I personally believe that the benefits of this epidemic cannot overshadow the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Venus are not safe, there are the reasion why the NASA are challenging the Venus. The author idea was that studing the planet Venus are to know everything about this planet and show how bad it could be. There are none of the single spaceship has touched down on Venus. There are somthing wrong in the Venus or somthing bad about it.\n\nIn the Venus's atmosphere there are the clouds of highly corrosive acid. A thick atmospher of the Venus are almost 97 percent carben dioxide and on this planet surface its was 800 degrees. The Venus has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. In this peace of evidence in the artical it's shows whats it like in the Venus and how danger its can be or whats it like.\n\nThe temperatures of Venus its around 170 degrees Fahrenheit thats means it hotter in the Venus. There are another ways thats the spaceship can be safely its cam be far above the planet not to close to the planets. In this artical the scientists and the researchers how to figer out how to get close to the Venus and the also study about the Venus.\n\nThe challenge of Exploring Venus can be dangrause to be there: its can be hotter, the weather, or maybe the tempertuer. The way the Venus can be is like earth; the people say that the Venus and Earth could be alike. In the artical the author support his idea was the Venus is harder to exploring and in earth its like easer, but the earth can had bad weather like Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is often called the \"Evening Star\" for being the brighest points of light. It's also the second planet close to the sun. And as it's simple to see from distant, it proved a very challenging place for examining closely.\n\nIt's very worthy even though Venus's thick atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide. But getting through the clouds are worse with them being sulfuric acid as a high danger sign for spaceships to only be there for a few hours. The temperature has scortching heat of 800 degrees fahrenheit and 90 times more pressure than our planet. Venus has impediments of erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes to anything landing on it's surface. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may once of been like Earth with oceans and various forms of life.\n\nThe Astronomers think it's a good idea to kepp trying to land on Venus even though their spaceships never last more than a few hours and believe there might be various life forms like Earth and some oceans. But Venus is to deadly with acid, scortching heat, and 90 times our pressure that could crush a submarine. Also Venus has some lighting that strikes anything landing on it's surface and erupting volcanoes with frequent earthquakes. Venus also has a surface of rocky sediments with valley's, mountains, and craters under the clouds and atmosphere.\n\nPeople have tried sending multiple spaceships to Venus but they never came back. It was the brightest \"Evening Star\" but the most dangerous planet with sulfuric acid atmosphere. Astronomers know the dangers of going to Venus but want think theres life form and oceans like Earth. If anything was to land on it's surface, lightning would strike it and the spacecraft could only last a few hours if lucky. My conclusion to this is that Venus is a dangerous place but I would like to see whats on that planet, and know if there really is any life form or oceans. If so the astronomers might take some life from there adn water to bring and test what it actually is. But they can't send people into acid atmospheres and scortching heat just to land on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that cars that drive for you are not a good idea at all. If it were me I would not want my life in the hands of a car. Yes some smart cars may have drove half a million miles without an accident but so have real people. There would be to many complications with these cars, and if these cars did take over our streets there would be less jobs for the people. The idea of some fancy car driving you around might look pretty cool in a movie but I dont think its right for us. So the reasons I say we keep these cars off the streets is to save jobs, save lives from the cars making mistakes, and to keep lawsuits down incase these accidents due happen.\n\nSay they built this system were people dont drive there own cars anymore, the job loss would be outstanding. These cars would just drive by themselves so taxis wouldnt be needed anymore and the cars would most likely be the same so the car companies wont need as many people to make the cars if they have only one model also putting auto dealerships out of buisness. Is that what the economy really needs? Instead of taking peoples jobs by trying to make cars have a mind of their own they need to be thinking of better ways to help the economy in general. There\n\nalways trying to think of a way to make people lazier and more reliable on luxurious technology.\n\nGoogle yet trys to fool you by telling you some of the cars have drove half a million miles without a wreck, what they didnt tell you is the other story.These cars are not mistake proof. Would you rather have your life in the hands of a robot or your own? What if the cars breaks go out and your on a busy highway going sixty? All technology breaks down or has its flaws at some point and its almost impossible to tell when its going to happen. Maybe terrorist could even use this to there advantage by hacking cars.\n\nNow these cars are supposed to save money buy not using fuel.\n\nIf these cars have accidents on the streets and are reliable for deaths theres going to be people sued. So all the money that was saved will just be put into peoples deaths from the vehicles. Imagine what the news would look like. Another google car breaks down, family sewing for million. The courts would be in chaos because of this.\n\nIn conclusion i strongly disagree with the idea of cars who drive themselves. The cars would take to many jobs, be dangerous, and have the economy go down the drain with lawsuits. We need to keep the cars the way they are and improve the laws we have now and make it harder for people to get their lisence. If this takes place there wont be any need for self driven cars. So again your life in your hands or the cars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that that the use of the technology to read the emotional expressions of people is valuable. I think this because sometimes its important to know someones emotion, and if they are faking or lying. This technolgy could be helpful for people to indicate wheather they need help or not. I also think that tis technology could help save lives too. I'll explain why.\n\nFirst reason on why this technology is valuble is because it can be used in the classroom to know wheather a student is confused on the lesson or not. A shy student sometimes wouldnt want to ask for help about the lesson. So using this technology for would be very useful because teachers would now know who and who needs help. It could also help teacher to know if a student is angry, sad, etc to know how to help them. That one reason why I think this techonolgy is useful.\n\nAnother reason why emotion reading technology is useful because in paragraph 8 the article stated \" to an expert, faces dont lie; these muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politcian or celebrity isnt being truthful\". This means now we could know if a leader is being real or not. It could help with votes during an election to choose the correct politician. Not only that but in genral to knoe if people are lying or not.\n\nlast reason why I think the use of this technology is valuable is because it can save peoples lives. using this technolgy would let you know how a person is feeling. If a person is depressed and on the edge of doing something that they shouldnt , using this emtion reading technology could alert people on how others can be feeling very down and thode people could help them. It could also help parents knowing wheather their child is happy or not and I think a parent should know their childrens emotion because half the time we dont express our selves to our parents. So thats why I think using technology that can indicate your emtion is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think almost every movie might offend someone way So wanting take every movie shelf go ahead Everyone different taste movies music books etc If music offends nt listen If book nt read Its simple So I nt think remove books music movies etc That could offend someone reason If remove things might interest people aday would nt anything entertains kids instead going getting trouble I believe every person right read watch listen whatever want listen Also If find offensive nt listen song watch movie even read book magazines Everyones offended different ways another So ca nt help little book song etc offends person I also think give kid chance read sees offensive might might keep himher things might nt read book Also watches movies wants learn every body good people Children read wide variety read drsuess books could reading CAPS Depending children able choose read listen watch The flaw I find Children side magazines fact almost every magazine atleast half naked women man Children years first year see My reason people many different tastes materials I believe read want long offend What reading effect others unless reading also There many people get offended littlest things nt see life get offended hand full times life In conflusion I think people able read want even books people find offensive The offensive things Should taken shelves I also feel children get read things could offensive understand fact life nt easy end offended Also everyone good people things happen people nt like life Finally I think people give reading listening watching looking things interesting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a very impractical design. These cars can not fully drive themselves. It also states that they would add entertainment as you drive. Driverless cars could malfunction, since they run on computers. Driverless cars could be potentially dangerous.\n\nDriverless cars are not fully automated. The name is falsely implied because drivers must stay alert while the car is moving. If there is construction being done or a wreck has taken place, the driver has to maneuver around the traffic. Driverless cars can not be operated without the driver having both hands on the wheel. The idea of driverless cars is not bad, but in order for them to be called \"driverless,\" I believe that they should be automated and not require a driver.\n\nThe article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states that there would be added entertainment while driving, so that the driver would not become bored. This is a bad idea considering that driving, even with the car being automated, requires full attention. It states that a driver would be alerted when they need to take control. The driver could be asleep at this time and may not be able to hear the alert. The driver could also not get the alert all together.\n\nDriverless cars run off of computers. Computers are not alwats perfect, and could often times fail. In the event of this happening, the car could stop, not be stopped, or fail to alert the driver of danger. If the car stops while driving it could create a terrible accident. The car could also not be stopped, and wouldn't be able to avoid the other cars or obey the traffic laws. It could also fail to alert the driver that he/she needs to take over, in case of an emergency. It is a very good concept, but unless the computers could be perfected, it could create a dangerous situation.\n\nDriverless cars are not a bad idea. There could be many flaws involved with the making of driverless cars. I believe that it makes the design useless if it couldn't be fully automated without the use of a driver. The entertainment aspect could make driving a lot more dangerous, instead of safer, like the intended goal. The computers could also just stop working. Driverless cars are not perfect, but the idea could be built on. It all comes down to the drivers personal preference.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that stricter punishments will deter many motorists from driving dangerously or carelessly on the roads. However, I strongly disagree that this is the only way to improve road safety, because there are alternative measures which would also be effective.\nStricter punishments will undoubtedly act as a deterrent, so that motorists will think twice before committing traffic offenses. It is often forgotten that motoring offenses are, in fact, crimes. The full weight of the law should be applied in imposing a range of non-custodial sentences, such as heavy fines, and the confiscation of driving licences. The letter of the law must be strictly implemented, banning offenders from the roads so they will no longer pose a danger to other road-users, including pedestrians. Those who drive while intoxicated should serve a prison sentence, as is sometimes imposed in the UK, because they endanger innocent lives.\nWhile harsh penalties for offenders should be high on the government agenda, there are other steps which national and local authorities should take to improve road safety. Firstly, installing speed cameras has made drivers aware of the need to adhere to speed limits. Many authorities around the world have adopted this very cost-effective measure. Secondly, traffic calming measures have succeeded in reducing the number of accidents,\nespecially in built-up areas. Finally, it is necessary to adopt a policy of conducting regular vehicle inspections, at authorised centres, to avoid accidents caused by mechanical failures.\nIn conclusion, in order to improve road safety, it is not enough to be tough on traffic crimes by punishing more harshly those who violate the law. A range of road safety measures should accompany harsher driving penalties.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is, that they wont be as safe as cars driven by humans. i believe this because they wouldnt know when to stop, they might go out of control, and they wouldnt be very surportive during deflict stiutions.\n\nFirst i believe they wouldnt know when to stop because they might be road block and they wouldnt be able to identify the objects. Examples from the passage are, the cars will probably have a hard time navigating through work zones and around accidents. The cars will also have to deal with complicated traffic issues , such as navigating through roadworks or roadblocks that lie ahead for the autonomous car.\n\nSecond reason is, they might go out of control. The car might face some technical deflicties and someone will most likely get injured. If some dies get injured who will be at fault? wil it be the driver or the manufacturer. I believe it will be the manufacturer because they made the car and they didnt make sure if it was safe for the people to drive arounfd in or not.\n\nMy last reason is They wouldnt be as surportive during deflict stiutions. i think They wouldnt be very surportive because the car might not know what to do. For example, if there was roadblock and the car didnt or couldnt indenify them and the car crushes. What if the car was told to go somewhere and went to wrong way? will it be the cars fault. And if the car got broken down for no reason during traffic will it be okay for other people.\n\nIn conclusion i believ that driverless cars wont be as safe as cars driven by humans. i believe this because they wouldnt know when to stop, they might go out of control, and they wouldnt be very surportive during deflict stiutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unhealthy lifestyle has become a common phenomena with the generation today. Although a wide section of the population is aware about the illeffects of unhealthy habits they continue to indulge in similiar behaviour. In this essay, I will discuss a few causes and solutions that could help deal with this issue.\r\n\r\nTo catch up with the fast paced lifestyle the working class is constantly on a run to catch up with daily task, this leaves them stressed and disappointed leading them to indulge in bad habits like smoking and drinking. Secondly, unhealthy eating is another major concern of the masses. For instance people prefer fast food to make up for the loss of time and eat while they are on the go. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, people donot understand the underlying effects of unhealthy living since they live in the moment and donot understand its disadvantages in the long run. Firstly, people should maintain a better work life balence and give greater importance to themselves. For example, excercising, eating healthy meals and deprive any toxic intake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced dirigibles docked means electric winch hauled line front ship tied mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This strange figure that took the shape of a face on Mars is actually just a natural landform. It looks much like a landform equivalent to a butte or mesa which are common in the American west. shadows around give the illusion to the eyes that this strange figure has eyes, a mouth, and a nose.\n\nProof has been found from high tech cameras that shows that this is just a landform and was not created by aliens. After we found the what seemed to be alien markings we decided to look again. Its has the same height as some natural landforms like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. If they was anything that could have left a mark by aliens we would've been able to see it.\n\nYou can dipect the size of something in a photo 3 time larger in real life. So if there was anything on Mars that shows aliens were there than we would definately be able to see it, but there is none so that leads us to the conclusion that this odd looking figure is just a natural landform and not built by anybody.\n\nTo conclude my arguement on whether or not this strange looking figure is actually made by extraterrestrials or just there by nature I belive this is just a natural landform. There is proof and that it was not made by aliens and none that shows aliens made this figure. We used our best equipment to find an answer by research and strongly belive in our answer. There are no markings of aliens of any sort on Mars that could have built this figure. There is an illusion that this shape is in the shape of a face, but isnt really. The main point of this investigation was just to find out what on earth is this thing and where did it come from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit because it's the second from the Sun,has some similar thing as Earth and because it's the hottest Planet in our Solar System.even though Mercury is the closet to the Sun,Venus is 800 degress and yet everything NASA sends up never stay's up there no more than a few hours.\n\nSince we can't send anymore or anything up there until we find the right mitearls we cant send people up to Venus,Venus has a thick atmosphere pf almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide and has a flat surface are of nothing but acid this could be very dangourses.in Venus the temperatuers is always 800 degress which is the only hottest planet on our Solar System\n\nThe Austonomers wanna study more of Venus only because It's said iti be alike to our home planet Earth.long ago It's said that Venus was actually covered in water and not just one big ball of fire,the Austronomers wanna know how did it go from water to hot.and even tho Venus has similar things to earth like having mountains and valley and even creater and before sending a human to Venus we muct first find out futher information before taking the trip", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author makes a strong point to argue that observing venus is worth taking a risk for. He backs up his claim as well, ranging from strives in science, to just the insight itself.\n\nThe author states many strong reasons for his claim. To start off, one of the reasons the author gives for a observitory visit to Venus is because it, \"Can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\" This shows that he is trying to back up his original claim with the fact that its perhaps the closest option we have for these visits. Also the author strides to say that it will give more knowlage on Venus if we study it. \"Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet (paragrpah 8).\" This also backs up what he is saying because the fact that more can be learned from Venus alone, is a huge reason for some to go observe this planet.\n\nIn conclusion, the author makes a point to say a observitory visit to Venus would be behnificial and supports his claim very well using facts and explaining what and why some of his reasons should be taken seriously. Therefore, the author did a great job in backing up his claims and explaining them thuroghly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons that limted car usage would be good. 70 percent off familys in french and swiss boarder do not own car they dont need them.\"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\". 57 percent of people sold there car and moved there.\"All development since world war II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\".\n\nIn paris they banned cars for a little will because of the pollution making smog. Any one found driving would be fined. Almost 4000 people were fined for driving on that monday and 27 people has their cars impounded for thier reaction. After 5 days the the smog started to leave and they could see beijing, china which are the most polluted citys in the world. In france 67 percent of cars are diesel.\n\nIn colombia on car free day people kiked, biked, skated or took the bus on car free day. It was the third start year they had to ban cars to reduce all the smog and people who didnt listen had to pay 25 dollar fine. For the first time other places joined the event to help with the pollution.\" These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders,\".\n\nObama's studys show that more and more americans are not driving and not getting there licenses as each year goes by. And they wonder has america passed peak driving. On april 2013 the number of miles driven per person went down 9 percent.\n\nin conclusion it is better to not drive for a little than to drive to help pollution from getting really bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the typical teaching method is no longer related to the present student's condition and problem. The teachers will slowly leave the traditional way and make a comprehensive change in 2050. I strongly agree and will explain the reason further. \r\n\r\nAs we have known, the teacher used to gather all of the students into one room. The number of the student is in the range of 10-30 people in one class. Taught by only a teacher, all of the students are given the same treatment. However, they will not get the same result from each individual because of their different condition. Those who have a high enthusiasm for learning will get better results in examinations rather than the ones who are not interested at all. It will be the biggest challenge for the teachers if they wouldn't improve their teaching method. Moreover, the presence of technology and instant entertainment make the student attention are easily get distracted and zoned out. \r\n\r\nFor these reasons, The teachers will completely leave the old way which is no longer relatable. They will make different psychological approaches for each of the individuals before start learning and make an adjustment based on their interest and ability to process the information. Technology is also the main media for teaching, so it will be more attractive and the information will be given thoroughly and evenly. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that the traditional teaching method will slowly be left behind and completely changed by new and more advance in 2050.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Appearing of social media had a tremendous impact on contemporary life, a vast amount of individuals use them every day for communication and receiving new information. While it has plenty of benefits such as possibility of finding like-minded people, who share your interests, and receiving news in real-time, we should take into account some drawbacks such as scrolling addiction and fake news.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the social network is a great place to meet new friends with shared hobbies, which might be hard to do in offline life. You can join a community that is built around any activity that you are interested in. For example, I have recently joined a gluten-free backing community where I met nice people from different countries who shared their recipes and experiences. Furthermore, online media provide you with convenient way to get news almost immediately as data is shared live.\r\n\r\nContrarily, overusing social media can lead to unfavourable consequences such as scrolling addiction, depression, or anxiety. Continued checking of the news feed can be dangerous for mental health, as has been well-established in the scientific literature, individuals may develop addiction to get information online, which results in a lack of concentration and a depressed state in real life, which is not that colourful. Moreover, reading news only from social media can be harmful, as it does not get through the appoval and deep fact-checking and, in many cases, can be fake. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, social media has become an important part of our lives that serves us to be in touch with close ones and receive actual information. Considering the described above, I believe that the benefits from the possibility of finding friends and interesting people overweight the drawbacks of developing addiction or meeting fake news.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many humans believe increase the cost of fuel day by day because some country there are a lot of climate change problems. Furthermore, I think this method the best way for drivers.\r\n\r\nMany country, grow the cost of different fuel and this situation might be to solve environment issues. Because some people economic a lot of power source. As a result, the weather is always clean and also some human's to solve lifestyle issues. Government be the best way and for humans. For example, now the weather extremely dirty also this system would be several benefits for people. That is, some people use less fuel. \r\n\r\n Nowadays, many humans use different fuel especially young people after the government increasing the cost of diesel bit this method very bad for population. Because there are a lot of poor families in my country. So, I think should be less the cost of fuel. Besides that, government must be annaunce other the best way. Furthermore, this system should be very good for poor families. For instance, my neighbour poor family and also his job driver and he always buy expensive fuel. So, I think this system do not to solve climate change issues.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many humans buy very expensive fuel. As a result, poor families increase number is year by year. Moreover, some children might be do not study. So,the government must be think another extremely good system for the local population. But I think the cost of fuel is do not the best way and do not to solve environmental issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, environmental problems and climate change are the most popular topics for all generations. Some people believe that preventing climate change is not possible for societies. Therefore, they only encourage citizens to learn how to cope with it. However, In my perspective, I do not agree with this point of view. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be examined.\n\nIt is undeniable that most people think that protecting and preventing the environment, such as the forest and the ocean, are too difficult, unrealistic, and unbelievable way. Therefore, they neglect to fix these issues and tend to find easier solutions. Some people only how to live with the hazardous problem. However, I do not believe that this is an appropriate way.\n\nIn my personal perspective, I believe that encouraging people to be concerned about climate change problems such as global warming, as well as educating children to learn how to protect and prevent the world would be the most effective way to address these issues since most of these issues are caused by humans and should be fixed by them. For instance, if we generate some subjects related to climate change issues in school for the younger generation to understand people's behaviours harming the environment, it would embolden them to change some terrible habits of humans. Using some eco-friendly products and reducing plastic bags are excellent examples of how to prevent the global warming effect.\n\nOn the other hand, if people neglect these climate downsides and still behave in the same ways as before, our world will harm and affect not only humans but also animals, such as wildlife animals, whose habitats will be destroyed and they will be extinct in the future.\n\nIn conclusion, people should urge and have the courage to prevent climate change. This will be the best solution and will change our earth into a peaceful place. In addition, both humans and animals will live in this world peacefully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to help out your nation? Well you've found the right place. My name is Luke Bomberger and I work for the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabation Administration). At the UNRRA we hire Seagoing Cowboys to help ship food supplies, animals, and much more across the world.When I woked for the UNRRA I went through some though times but I also had some really great times too.\n\nI was serving as the night watchman and I had just finished making my hourly report back to the captain. I slid down a ladder onto my backside. I almost fell off the boat but thankfully a small strip of metal stopped me from falling off the boat. I was very thankful I had not fallen off but I did cracked a few rib bones so I couldn't work for a few days.Though sometimes it may be dangerous the UNRRA is very fun.We play many games such as baseball and and volleyball games. We also have table tennis tournemnts, we fence, box,read,whittling and many oher games.\n\nDo you want to sign up for the UNRRA? If you would you can sign up right now. You can sign up online or at our building. It may be dangerous but it's a lot of fun. Wouldn't you like to make a lot of new friends? The UNRRA is the right place for you then.GO SIGN UP NOW!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is often referred to as our planets twin or \"Evening Star\". It is so close to earth it is one of the brightest points in our sky. From Venus's atmosphere, to it's natural disasters it is the closest thing to earth accesible right now. The Author shows more support toward the harsh conditions rather than the plus sides of exploration with scientific details such as the cimate of the planet, the various attempts we've took to try to reach Venus, and the lack of reasoning to explore Venus.\n\nThe author describes Venus's climate to be one of the most exotic in our solar system. In the text it states \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" which is no way possible to inhabit human life. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. If you were to land on this planet, you would virtually be crushed instantly. The natural disasters that occur on Venus are quite simular to Earth's, but more extreme. In the text it states \"erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on it's surface\".\n\nThe Author gives us brief examples of why we should explore Venus. In the text it states \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\". This quote supports the authors claim by giving a valid example for a safe way to observe the planet. Another example the author provides is \"simplified electronics mad eof silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaod of Venus's surface\". This quote also offers another valid support piece to the authors claim. There are possible ways to explore the chaotic planet of Venus.\n\nAfterward, the author provides various attempts of exploration of Venus. In the text it states \"humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world. This quote demonstrates the numberous attempts we have tried to explore Venus, but failed. Another quote from the text that supports my claim is \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason\". This quote virtually translates to because of the harsh conditions, no human could endure the planet which doesn't help the authors claim of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nAlthough there are a few reasons to explore Venus, none are valid enough to spend the money for an exploration mission. In the text it states \"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". This quote is provided by the author in attempt to support his claim of pursuing Venus but doesn't offer any other facts to support the claim. The author also states travels of beyond Earth should be \"expanded to meet the very edges of immagination and innovation\". This quote is given to us by the Author but doesn't show any support of how exploring Venus will allow us to meet \"the very edges of immagination and innovation\".\n\nIn conclusion, The Author shows more support to not explore Venus with giving negative information of Venus, rather than posotive facts and reasonings. The Author only gives us two examples of how to safely explore and study Venus, but has no valid reasoning supporting his claim. In the text the Author describes the planet and harsh and not habitable to humans, rather than giving supported points toward his/her claim. The Author provides more information of NASA's previous failed attempts rather than giving more information of new advancments to possibly explore Venus safely. The Author shows some valid points to explore Venus, but the negative information and the lack of reasoning and factual information to support his claims made him/her fall short of the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is called “Evening Star,”. Venus is the closest planet to Earth.Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is sometimes right around the corner,in space terms,humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nAtmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet. Venus cover Large Ocean and suppor virous forms of life, just like Earth. (NASA) has one particularly idear for sending humans to study Venus. Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nTemperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground. rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\n\nVenus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value. human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Venus is really danger.spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author menoir The author grateful chance growing The title named Narciso Rodriguez He talks life came cuba parent welcomes people come cuba They come together great solidarity friendship I think mood every happy To see parent made something notthing The author parent show life teaching basis life I feel way parent brought better life I think learn everything parent How act So yea last sentence said I liked He said I never forget parent turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a thing of the future. They are exciting, interesting, and convenient. Who wouldn't want a car that could drive itself? With the right technology, fatalities from car crashs could become a thing of the past. No more getting lost, your automatic car would have GPS already installed. There are so many opportunities and benefits to automatic cars.\n\nCollisions and crashes take the lives of hundreds each year. This is usually due to drivers loosing focus, falling asleep, being intoxicated, or simply just not following the law. Driverless cars could prevent this. In section two of the article, it says Google's cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, however Google's cars aren't completely automatic just yet. With a fully automatic car, however, harm cannot come to anyone if the driver loses focus or falls asleep because the car will be fully in control. This would be a huge benefit to people who have had one too many drinks to safely drive themselves back home. An automatic car would get them home with ease and prevent many accidents from happening.\n\nThink of all the people who have ever been late to an event because they've never been there, and have gotten completely lost. With driverless cars, you wouldn't have to worry about stopping and checking a map every 10 minutes. Unfamiliar places would never be a stuggle to navagate through.\n\nWith every new technology update, there are always bugs. Signals may not be recieved by the senors (which have been used since the 1980s), cars may short out, etc. Who would be the blame of these errors? It is hard to say. Driverless cars, like other new technology will of course have to be tested many times to be able to insure saftey to the passegers. Bugs are bound to happen, but this is a minor flaw to the advances it would bring to the public.\n\nIn conclusion, there are benefits and downsides to driverless cars, but in this case, I believe it is safe to say the good outweights the bad. It's time for society to advance, and what a brilliant and efficent way to do so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pirated music videos downloaded from the internet is adversely affecting the entertainment industry.While some feel that it negatively impacts the musician,others are of the opinion that it does not affect them too much.In my opinion,such an act will result in heavy losses to the music companies.This essay discusses both views and explains why only through proper channels the work of singers should be heard.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,there are some websites through which the latest movies and songs can be seen or heard prior to their release in cinemas.Many download from these sites and share the link with their families and friends,which will deter them from going to the theatres to save money.Investors and producers face huge losses due to prior viewing ,as the public is reluctant to watch it again.For instance,Salman Khan's movies are the most awaited ones of the year,but last year his movie Radhe was leaked on the internet,following which the movie faced decreasing revenue.I feel that this act disappointed his fans all over the world and hence measures should be taken to protect the screening of artists work before their release date.\r\n\r\nSome feel that it is just the financial loss faced by the distributors, and this absolutely does not affect the image of the Hero or the Singer.They do their part of duty be it acting or singing and collect their remuneration for the same.They are in no way involved in the financial aspects of movie-making and distribution.For example,it was noticed that despite the movie Radhe being declared flop,Salman Khan was paid his fees,which ran into crores of rupees.The pre-release controversy of his movie did not affect his public image.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,downloading and viewing without any legal rights of any picture or song is badly affecting the movie industry financially.I feel that though this does not alter the status of the artist involved,it definitely creates financial woes to the industry producing and marketing them for audience entertainment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today we will talking about The challenge of Exploring Venus, what's is venus, where is ubicate venus and why is important talk or learn about this subject or who discovered this mean.\n\nVenus is a planet in our solar system and is the second planet from our sun and occasionally the closest in distance too Earth, Venus, and Mars , in this palnet the scientist can't explore this planet because is so far away from the Heart , and this have some differences, for example; one of these is the speed mean that sometimes we are closer too mars and other times to Venus.\n\nVenus maybe this issue explains why or not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades, scientist said that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, also this planet has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerul earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nWe know that Venus is a planet in our solar system but that we really don't know and scientist wants to know is know about if in that planet probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, human wants to conquer some of those planets to live in the future, that's the reason why the scientist are discussing about that, or if the rich peolpe can build some skyscraper or some building for rich people go to travel in Venus.\n\nNASA is working to know more about Venus, another example is if the electricity can works there, or how we can get it,\n\nVenus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, more importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has values, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nWe talked about Venus, we know now that human wants no only have more information they want explore and live there, also they want or we wants to know wha't there or if there exist life, but we don't know if Venus got inhabitants is not our planet and we need to leave it, but if we are capable to conquer, our next planet to live in the future would be Mars or also Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the progression of the society, many people do their family planning in their thirties rather than twenties which was common a decade ago. This essay will discuss positives and drawbacks of this trend and which outweighs the other.\n\nAs people have turned extremely ambitious these days, they prefer achieving their goals and indulge into starting a family later. This priority shift not only help them focus and earn huge amount of money to make them self sufficient, but it also helps to financially support the future generation in a better way. For instance, financially independent parents are able to provide a better lifestyle for their children than those who are unstable in their careers.\n\nOn the contrary, ageing brings vulnerability of severe health issues in a person's life. By the same token, pregnancy becomes complicated at the later stage, both for a man and a woman. A recent research concluded that, the probability of conceiving in couples is reduced by 23% after they touch their thirties and can further be declined up to 53% over the age of thirty five. Secondly, individuals do not remain fit enough to support their children, if the age gap between the parents and child is big. For example, if a child is born when a man is forty five, his child would be only twenty and not financially independent at the man's retirement age. Hence, the family might need extra financial aids to support the children.\n\nIn conclusion, they are few advantages to starting a family late such as a child can be provided better financial aid to support his life, the disadvantages are more and it outweighs the advantages as the complications in conceiving can increase with a person's age and the generation gap between progenitors and their children is huge which can become a major issue in future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "About twenty-five years ago, something happened around Mars. NASA, snapped photos of the object. On Mars, there is a face printed on the plant. People think it was created by aliens. NASA said it was created on it's own. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa. Those are common around Cydonia. A couple of days later NASA saw a nose, eyes, and a mouth. Everyone belived it to be a face of an alien, but NASA said it's just a face on Mars.\n\nThe face on Mars has become a popular icon. It has starred in Hollywood films, appeared in books, magazines and more! Some people think the face is \"bona fide\" evidence of life on Mars. Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars. The face, is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98.\n\nMission controllers prepared to look again. Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the plant like a fax machine. Thousand of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site. The pictures were revealing a natural landform. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, com[ared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can discern thinkgs in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size\". In egyptia-style prramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were! There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Proupulsion Lab when the face apperared on their moniters. NASA, a few days later, unveiled the image for all to see. The authors thought it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa. Landforms common around American West. People say thst it's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain group of individuals claim that general sports facilites aids in resolving heath related issues. On the contrary, some people assume that this approach has no considerable benefits on the human body. In my perspective, I believe it has huge significance in improving health which would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, recreational centres such as gyms, swimming pools are plays a vital role innimproving well being of human . Owing to that fact, it assist in building endurance , strength and power that will ultimately increase the fitness level of a person. In addition, these places are accessible to every person of the community. So , one can easily use according to their schdules .All these factors in combination promotes a stragety to build a healthy nation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, these days people are extremely busy in handling work load and completiting targets and meeting deadlines. So they hardly get somwtime for themselves to utilise the benefits of these places. In addition , there are many other sectors of the society which are needed to be improved to provide good health services to citizens such as hospitals.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion , it is not possible abd afforable for everyone to get all equipments for excercising at home as they are very expensive . Recreational centres offfers them at a reasonable prices and even free of cost. So it gives chance to improve health despite of their financial condition.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although a number of other sectors also require good funding but there are lot of incredible benefits of general games centres on health which should not be ignored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I like this feature. I'd consider it very helpful on both computers and robots. Regarding robots, I wonder if Baymax from Disney's \"Big Hero 6\" had something like it. He was like a robotic nurse as explained by the main character. However, it wouldn't work in concrete tunnels.\n\nRegarding computers, if the feature could have come out a bit sooner, then Nickelodeon could've used it for a non-animated TV show they came out with, called \"I Am Frankie\". I'm still waiting for the show to continue. In one of the last two episodes of this show, one of the judges for this competition that was like a quiz show said that computers can't feel human emotions, but a girl who was part computer proved her wrong. I like this show because it gives me proof of how smart computers are.\n\nIn conclusion, this feature should be used in all computers. I'd like for it to be used in robots too, that way robots could take the expression and mimic it. I'm pretty sure the \"Transformers\" movies have something like it too. If the \"Transformers\" movies and \"Big Hero 6\" use it then it was probably already thought of. With computers, someone could type into the computer \"How am I feeling today?\" and the computer could respond with an emotion like said computer has ESP.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is debated by some people that parents of children who breach the law, should be penalized in the same ways. I disagree, as no parent would ever encourage his or her child to become a criminal, and punishing the parents for the fault of one child would be unfair to the other siblings.\n\n\nParents, no matter how many offences they have committed themselves, would never persuade their infant to break the constitution. That is to say, parents have an innate desire, to raise their teenager to become a successful, case-abiding citizen. However, kids these days hardly ever listen to their parents, and yearn for independence, at a very early age, from their parents and statute. For instance, a recent survey in the UK showed, almost 80% of the children who were caught shoplifting, were already being seriously condemned and punished by their parents. \n\n\nAnother reason I am against punishing the parents for the crimes of their infant is that this would be unfair to the other innocent siblings. They have done nothing wrong, and thus, don’t deserve to have their parents taken away from them. Putting their parents in jail would also increase their chances of following the bad path and the whole family would be destroyed. Children raised in social care centres and foster homes are known to have 10 times more personality disorders and violent temperaments.\n\n\nIn conclusion, parents should not be convicted for their children breaking the case, as they try their best to deter them from doing so. Moreover, this will be unjust to the other siblings who didn’t commit any offence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you every heard of a seagoing cowboy, if you haven't well today is you your lucky day. I hope you will want to be one someday because you get to travel the world on a boat and water, and get to ship cargo etc., yes you may get sea sick, but in the end I know, and you know you'll start gettig use to it.\n\nA seacowboy is a person who get's to go on cattle-boat trips which is an unbelievable opportunity for small-town boys. You could possible end up seeing Europe, maybe even China one day. It usually takes about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United states, and a month to get to China, but hey it's all up to the water and weather. Being a seacowboy can be very dangerous, because with all the storm that you could get cought in can be REALLY dangerous, and very unsafe, but in the end it is really fun, because you get to see all kinds of different thing like wild life, different countries, etc.\n\nSo if you ever want to be a seacowboy i wouldn recomend bringing a wetsuit, lots of water and food, some extra cloths, and a camera to hold all of the memories for when you go to go on a work trip. So get those pen, pencils, paper, etc. because i think your going to go to college for a very special, and amazing job. :)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She say cloning spring I take test know failed test againg mother disappointed trying hard enough maybe never closer The mother think jst keep failing test connection past expeirences effection new country ability overcome obstacles ar finally I think comforted memories homland", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think they should bring driverless cars?I think they should bring these driverless cars but I also think they should'nt.If you want my opinion I think they should because they have had their driverless cars drive half a million miles without crashing,but I also think they shouldn't because these cars can only handle driving functions up to up to 25 mph, and also a human could get bored waiting on their turn to drive.\n\nFirst of all, I think they should bring these driverless cars because it keeps safety on the road like in the second paragraph it states,\"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" So that could be a good opinion to bring the driverless cars.\n\nSecond of all, however I think bringing the driverless could be a bad idea because these cars can only handle drivg functions up to 25 mph.Which i'm sure alot of people would want to not go that slow.\n\nLastly, my last opinion on not bringing these driverless cars is that i'm sure humans could get bored on waiting on the monitor to tell them when to take the wheel.\n\nWith all that said I do not think they should bring the driverless cars because,a human could get bored waiting on his/her turn to drive,the cars can only handle funtions up to 25 mph but I also think they should bring the driverless car because it bring safety to the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorian collage is a very popular thing amonst states and well some states have a just one law for it others are a lot more strict on there laws one of the ways they can win is by a winner take all vote but the other way is by a more popular vote where the people can vote and then the winners of the voting will vote agenst eachother and thoes two states are nebraska and maine\n\nSo what is the electorial collage you might ask well what happends is voters vote not for the president but for a state of electors who in turn elect the president if you lived in texas and voted for john kerry you vote for a state of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry. on the off chance that thoes electors won the statewide electon they would get 34 electoral votes and kerry would get 34 electoral votes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspapers I think computers possitive effect people could chat online There electronics children plug computer learn different stuff And pay bills computer People phone od nt want leave house moment computer go chat rooms local website chat friends family Also many people websites like facebook myspace etc find new people many things common And people find person looking I think jusy come new electronic little kids like leaf frog plug computerlaptop learn alaphabet counting numbers even spelling This good product little kids cam use extra work school stay smart learn school school One day I mother light bill like said website bt I forgot s called could pay bills right So instead going go local show thay pay bills like get computer home So people publish newspaper I think I hope think good response tells good things computer And I hope sticks around long time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been in all of our minds since television and moives have put them there. Google has had driverless cars since 2009, but are they safe to be in one. While haveing a driverless car seems epic it does have some downfall to it. Driverlesss cars , or smart cars, are a bad idea because it cost a large amount of money, a driver must be on the wheel and on alert at all times, and it even has problems with the law.\n\nDriverless cars in the late 1950s had to run on a special track. The smart-road systems worked well. It was actully a succesful test, but it would have require massive upgrades to the existing roads. The roads would be too expensive to upgrade. So instead of smart-roads they moved on to smart cars. The smart cars would need a lot of sensors to work. The senors would of course become more advance, but so well the cost.\n\nAlthough the smart cars cost a large amount it also still needs a driver at the wheel. The car can handle speeds up to 25mph, but the sensors make sure the dirver hold on to the wheel. Even though it is a smart car none of the cars can go without a driver at the wheel. The car would need a driver for roads it can't navigat thourgh. Such as work zones and around accidents. The car can not navigat thourgh these places which is why it alerts the driver that the need to take control of the wheel. To improve this the manufacturers put cameras in the smart car to watch driver. They make sure that the driver is focused on the road. If there is a road the car needs help with, it would vibrate the seat to alert the driver.\n\nEven if the car can alert the driver the law focus on on how focused the driver is. In some states it is illegal to test a computer-driven car. Such states worry the the car would cause an accident to the passengers, and pedestrians. If the traffic laws change it would still need to cover liability of the accident. So if the car fails and caused an accident would the driver or manufacturer be at fault.\n\nSo in the end driverless cars are a horribly idea. They would cost a large amount of money. As well as they are not actully driverless and needs someone to be there, and they are agist the law at some states. Driverless cars should just stay in television and moives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The atuhor support the idea of exploring venus by giving details about how we could explore venus. Such details include temperature, preassure and storms. He also says that Venus is the most eart-like planet out there, and it may have had oceans that may have contained life just like earth.\n\nThe author states that venus is a dangerous place to visist, because of temperature, preassure, and other weather related problems. \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" He says this because humans are used to earh's atmosphere, therefore it would take some time to acomadate to the extreme conditions. Of course the government could always invent something to make the place more habitable. \"such an enviorment would crush even a submarine accostumed to diving to the deepest parts of out oceans and would liquafy any metal.\" There are obviously many dangers to exploring Venus, but the earth is dying , and it is all the human fault for killing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lets think about this, a computer that can tell you feelings. You couldn't think about that if someone just asked you to, and you wouldn't think of what to say if someone said,\" This computer can tell you if you are happy, sad, excited, or frustrated.\" That would be something anyone would have to see for themselves for them to believe that this is acually true.\n\nIn the passage it states\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This means that a computer can also help the same way a teacher would if was in need. This computer could help alot because not many students like to ask for help from a teacher.\n\nUsing technology to read a humans emotions is a great idea. It makes things easier on other people due to not knowing how to explain your emotions. The computer can help you to tell you how you are emotionally. In the paassage it says,\" Most humans communicatioon is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So a computer need to understand that too.\" They are basically boosting the data so it knows more about emotions whe it becomes hard to point out the feelings of someone.\n\n\"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions.\" The Mona Lisa painting was made to try, and test the computer on telling rather it can see Mona Lisa's emotions. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9p percent disgusted, and 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The PC was put to the test and was able to calculate the emotions of Mona Lisa.\n\nI beileve that having a computer that can detect your emotions is a great idea. Helps student better on learn the process of an assignment. Helps teachers teach when they can't get around to everyone in class. Able to help the people express there emotions they are feeling if they can't seem to tell. A computer that tells emotions could be a big help to anyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road ahead exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie feature setting seem negative cyclist The setting seems start worrying cyclist two miles said could make next miles easily For example cyclist says Not two miles next section ride I noticed terrain changing Flat road replaced short rolling hills the cyclist seems worried point things aernt going easy seemed going From point setting seemed get worse cyclist later cyclist ends saying It didnt really matter I going die birds would pick clean That cyclist began notice fear dehydration The cyclist ended making realized big effect nature", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I writing concern people computers You concerned people computers nt spending time either excircising enjoying nature interacting family I agree fact people computers become lazy nt spend time interacting activities I one day made survay many people agree many people computers nt interacting activities people I asked said agree corse others nt care much Many people think s normal I checked web site specializes weight get feet loose weight eazily web site I read article web page paragraph sec states obesity caused either computer andor lazyness Of corse people might disagree people disagree big time athleats I chate pro player said CAPS I kid nt things either home work playing outside friends Even big time athleats agree Well conclusion I agree fact fact people computers makes lazy interact family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the old world, people didnt have car's, they did everything on foot. They got food, ran erronds, and just to get out of the house with the family. So how come now adays people are so dependent on their car's. Places around the world are implimenting rules or laws now to stop people from abusing the car.\n\nSince the car was invented it has always had the same issue, not the engine or the interior, but the environmental issue. And now that people around the world are realizing that, they have created rules and laws to ban or reduce the usage of cars. A community in Germany called Vauban have given up their car's to help the environment, and people love it. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter, a mother of two.\n\nParis \"The Love City\" in France has Banned cars because of the high amount of smog it creates. After the law was placed, only after five days, congestion was down 60 percent.\n\nParis has the most smog compared to any other European captials, they had to do this or the smog would take over the city. And since the ban has been posted, smog has been clearing and is now much more limited in the area.\n\nMajor cities like New York were built in a narrow way, so its more congested when too many people are driving, and the buildings are much closer together so its more convinent to walk or bike to places rather than drive. New York has implimented a new bike-sharing program, and it is a hit. And around the nation a similar program is the car-sharing program. It encourages people about car pulling, it is when multiple people go to work or school in the same car, it puts less cars on the road and has plentiful benifits. Like less carbon dioxide in the air, less traffic, and saves on gas money.\n\nBill Ford, an exeuctive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, pitched a plan to live in a world that owning a personal car was impractical. He proposed to partnering with telecommunications industy to make a city or many where the \"pedestions, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emission and improve safety.\"\n\nBanning cars around the world isn't a solution because they are more convinent than taking a train or walking, but their needs to be a cut down on the amount we use a car, we abuse it. Eventually all the greenhouse gases might end up destroying the planet we live on. But their are solutions, implementing a world day were we dont use cars would help tremendusly, their are other means of getting around other than car. For example Biking is a great form of excersice and will get you to were you need to be faster than walking, while getting in shape at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say that sports can teach you the values of life, especially at school and in addition, team sports can help you work in coordination and will assist children to learn about sharing in life. I completely agree with this statement and I will explore this topic with suitable examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, even though sports can teach us the lesson which books couldn't do, cooperation can be coached particularly by team sports and not individual sports. For example, badminton singles players, although they are capable of winning medals and prizes, they cannot be the same player when it comes to double's games. This is because they are not trained to play together or be dependent on other players. While this may contribute to one's self-confidence and hard work, they won't be able to enjoy other person's success or in other words, share happiness like doubles players do.\r\n\r\nMoreover, this is the reason many people believe that playing team sports is tough and also it is essential to be taught at school. To clarify, in team sports like football, if one player plays selfishly without passing the ball and scoring goals, he might be successful, but it is not enough to make a team win. One must learn to contribute to the team by even sacrificing his goal and passing it to their teammate to be a part of a successful team. This will make him a terrific person in life and an outstanding team player too.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are some advantages to learning individual sports, it is most important for children to learn team sports to know the importance of togetherness and I personally think it is the best way to educate them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is sometimes argued that hosting some international sports ceremony like the Olympic is a thrilling event rather than wasting money. In this essay, I will discuss both views and m opinion.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, there are myriad advantages of holding such occasion. To begin with, the country hosting it gets to represent their culture and traditions through these games. For examples, some nations include their traditional dances and, culture in the opening and closing ceremony which is watched all over the world. Also, as different countries sportsperson participate their fans come from all over the world to support them, which apprises the tourist industry income. This directly or indirectly builds the economy of the country.\r\n\r\n Another advantage is that, while preparing for this event and even when the tournament is going on it creates a lot of job opportunities for people to work part-time for the short term. They hire people for various work sometimes technical or sometimes physical. These events create a possibility of new development which can be enjoyed by common people after the games. for example, Delhi hosted the Commonwealth Games in 2010 and created new places for tourists, which are now being used by local people.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, hosting an international tournament requires a large amount of investment. Sometimes government take this money from other essential funds for poor people and use it for these events. For example, after Commonwealth ,games the income tax department found a huge sum of fraud that was done by some people in the system. All these preparation cost huge money and after the event, it requires proper maintenance. \r\n\r\nTo conclude there are both advantages and disadvantages of these events but clearly, pros outweigh cons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driveless cars are that some people don't derves driving a car because people thinks it is okay to drive and text or call someone. It the people fault that we have some many crashes. But a couple years ago we didn't have so many crashes. \"Their cars have driven more then half a million miles without a crash\". The other reason is that people has used google Gps for their location and sometimes the Gps takes the wrong way and have to do a back road tracking. \"Without an option of smarter roads, manufactures turned to smart cars.\" There are cars that hold of trafic because\n\nof how they want to play on their phones unstead paying attection to the cars ahead or besides them.\n\nThe people that are driving the car are not always at that bad but their are also people who knows how to drive but want to be stupid about how to drive a vechile. Their some people who thinks it fine to because a texter while driving.\n\nSome people who knows about cars are mean because they dont want a little kids even know to start a truck , I think that next year the preident is gonna change the age of how old you have to be. The kids in 2015-2016 are 13 and up driving around in a vechile and the parents not caring if the kids get hurts by crashing into something.\n\nThe law is the reason why we\n\ngot so many vechile crashes because nobody learns how to drive and another thing is that nobody teaches them how to drive and everybody wonder how they got their license.\n\nThere are people coming and making new vechiles and its how much they use that we have to give them. There are new laws that the government has made about how people dont know how to drive the much or drinking/smoking while driving , and sometimes even with the kids being in the car. The BMW automatly gives the people their permit or license and not even good at driving. The BMW has development the traffic jam assistant and the car can handle driving functions a speeds up to 25 mph. \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of \"traffic Jam Assistant\". and also \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph\".\n\nEvery new vechial people has put new things in the vechial , like\n\nheated seats, touchscreen radios , flashing lights, Gps built in , things that people wanted to be in there . People dont even know what is the steeringwheel and the acclerate with the brakes themselves. People that drives around the navigating through work zones and around the accidents and dont pay attenions where they are going or whats in front of it.. People that has a car and that doesnt even drive it why would people want it to sit and get nasty and not even be able to drive it and then people that doesnt have a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author effectively persuades us to study Venus by using ethos. The author also tries to inform the audience with facts about Venus and how Venus functions by using logos.\n\nIn the passage the author persuades that studying Venus is worthy because of the differences it has with Earth. In Venus, the enviroment is capable of crushing a submarine that is meant for being in the deepest parts of the oceans and liquify it's metals. In the passage it says, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\" (paragraph 2). The quote explains why we haven't been able to find much detials and evidence of Venus because our spacecrafts don't last long before the metal and technology gets melted. The author tries persuading the audience by informing and giving facts about Venus and how Venus functions. The passage talks about the things that could happen in a high pressured enviroment and with high temperatures. In the passage the author gives us a lot of facts about the history of Venus and why people decide to study it. Astronomers were fascinated by Venus because of how much it relates to Earth and a long time ago it was covered with oceans and could've had forms of life just like Earth.\n\nThe author also tries to inform the audience by telling us why the NASA studies Venus and the conditions we'd be in if we touched the ground by using logos. On Venus NASA researchers say that hovering over the planet can limit insight on ground conditions\n\nbecause most forms of ligh can't see through the dense atmosphere. Researchers can't take samples of Venus such as: rocks, gas, or anything else on the planet. In the passage it says, \"Therefore scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\" (paragraph 6). The author explains what we'd need to do in order to study venus more and understand it. Researchers now are working on making new innovations that are resistable to the atmosphere and pressure of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think way people use computers bad int s good people s health people use computers lots times refuse spend time family friends find something s computer going studying My first reason computers bad effects people use computers health issue Health important sitting front computer hours makes matters worst By way hunch back order see something small computer creen hold mouse waiting click onm something long period time cause arthrities My second reason computers bad effects people use Are people computers end sometimes refuse spend time family friends like example say week ago made promise family get together family count come get computers go neat websites never heard s amazing right WRONG know s day family get together line hour amke excuse come And breaks family s heat My last reason computers bad idea learn another computer going But ore fun traveling meeting people place setting neck back sore I right I think I Also idsfun ear foods culture fing cool lame computers To sounds like good time invite family friends therefore conclusion personal opinion computers bad effects people health cause later bacj neck problems maybe even activities People use computers lot love spend time computers refuse spend time family friends You find something like culture land go study instead going computers hours I hope opinion convinces others hoe computers bad effects people use lott take action hands right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First , me and my partner Christina was in the lab one day when we discovered a mask on Mars. Me and Christna thought different things about the mysterious mask on Mars. My thought was that it was just from natural landform but , Christina thought different she kept going on about how the \"aliens\" made the mask to tell us there living on Mars. I asked her alot of time about why she thought that and you wanna know what she always said! She said \"isnt it obivious that no one else in on earth and so no one can make it\". I was thinking she was crazy! Shee must of been off her rocker . Some facts from the story is that \"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation. . . which resembles a human head. . . formed by the shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth.\" and \" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image appeared on a JPL web site , revealing . . .\n\na natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nLast , what the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author in this article believes that the pursuit of studying Venus is well worth the dangers and obsticles it presents. Although the author presents many reasons why this exploration would be difficult, they proceed to explain to us the benefits of traveling to Venus.\n\nOne of these difficulties would be the thick atmosphere on Venus. In paragraph 3, the author states \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". This could make it difficult for any spacecraft to make it through the atmosphere. Next he concludes to inform us that the clouds on Venus are highly corrosive. Found in paragraph 3, the author claims, \"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid is Venus's atmosphere\". On top of the thick atmosphere it also contains highly corrosive clouds. Next found in the third paragraph, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet\". This makes it difficult because we have to make a spacecraft a material that won't melt. We also have to find a material that can handle the atmospheric pressure. The author told us in paragraph 3 that this atmospheric pressure could crush sumbarines that were made specifcally for this kind of pressure deep in the ocean.\n\nIn the next paragraph the author states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". This explains to us the reason why scientists are so curious about this dangerous planet. The author continues to tell us in paragraph 4, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\". Scientists are curious if this planet, so similar to Earth, has ever supported life. In paragraph 8 the author tells us that the challeneges of getting to Venus has value. Also found in paragraph 8 the author claims, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\".\n\nAlthough there are many risks that involve traveling to Venus, the author also supports many benefits of doing this. From what we know about the article, I can say that the author believes all of the dangers will be well worth it. He doesn't only believe this to be true for Venus, but also for any other travel beyond Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nAs stated on paragraph number six towards the end, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". We can always detect on the way a perdon is feeling just by looking at their facil expression that they are giving .This new computer technology thing would turn out to be somehting very succesful to a way that the teachers would now be concerned to where exactly it is that the students might just need help. This proves that we can not always prove how a person is feeling to help them out because they don't speak up even though it just might be because them may be feeling scared to ask a simple question.\n\nTeachers would feel a relief on even aswering a simple question that would turn out to help out and improve on something for as simple as it may be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is an easy excuse to get yourself into a car accident. I truely dont think the world would be ready for a technological advancement like this.\n\nI am against driverless cars. As the aricle states, the cars aren't truely driveless. When the author stated this, it made me still think that this idea could still be dangerous. I feel like there will be more accidents with driverless cars than with regular cars of today. My feeling is how will a self-driving vehicle sense that there is a crash? How will it know if there is a car stopping in front of them? It just seems like an easy way to get into an accident. I think it would be better for the world to have an assisting car, not a self driving car.\n\nIn saying this, the world is not ready for a self-driving car in the near future. I think that in the hands of somebody smart and responsible, this idea would be great. But i think the world has to many irresponsible people in it to have a privelage like this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I ting computers good u get learn people like famous people deid long time ago Computers good u get learn places like texas Learning places fun Having computer good u get serf web could play games see alot times like You could talk frends far Talking mySpace yahoo website could talk tiferent people met trew wed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy grateful He grateful parents give everything give better life In memoir says They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved happy opportunity better life learned real defition family In conclusion mood memoir happy grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, studying and participating in physical workouts have the same importance to the development of children. Therefore, parents should try to balance the amount of time children spend for both these types of activities. \nOn the one hand, it is important for a children to be well-educated. Spend time studying can help children to train their ability in logical thinking and hard-working. These skills not only shown it value to increase the productivity of the students at school, but also very benefitial for their life after graduation. It can be argued that these skills provide more jobs opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore improve the quality of life for students who have them. Moreover, it is also crucial to ensure our next human generation have enough knowledge to continue the humanity’s development. They are the future world leaders, so giving them a better education can result in the latter new inventions, economic growth or greater future prosperity.\nOn the other hand, physical workouts also play an important role in the life of a child. Doing regular body exercises is believe to be benefitial for the children’s health, especially for the immune system, thus help to reduce the risk of children suffer from many kind of diseases such as obesity or near-sighted. Physical activities also force youngsters make contact with the nearby society, make them more socialize and out-going. Beside, playing sports is also effective in reducing the stress and anxiousness for children, which is often occur to students recently\nIn conclusion, physical activities and study are both necessary for children, and should receive equally concern from parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers benefit society much I believe fo various reasons I state passage Although sometimes people spend much time computer nt mean computers bad society means people need learn spend time wisely Overall I think computers positive effect society One reason I computers huge advancement technology They able make everyday life easier They allow store information Learn many places communicate friends family For one device amazing Also make something like computers imagine possibilities technology advancements Computers start Anouther reason I believe computers greatly benifit society provide entertainment You watch movies computer download fun games There hardly anything ca nt computer If cold outside raining still entertain computer Computers great around Now anyone thinks people spend much time computer computers bad society wrong I think people wrong computer ca nt force spend time It s fault choose use computer much You always choice go outside take walk Computers wrong choose use wrong like expression guns nt kill people people In conclusion I believe computers great thing espicially modern society Computer one greates advancements technology benifit society well So ever wondering weather buy computer I suggest get one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many variations and models of cars in the world today. One very questioned type is the idea of a driverless car. There are some manufactures who have taken it upon themselves to try and make this car a reality. Driverless cars seem to be like pretty cool thing to have and show off, but they shouldn't be allowed.\n\nThese cars have a high expectation and a possibility of maybe changing the world. Driverless cars just aren't a human. A car should be fully controlled by a human being. They could help, but it involves too many risks rather than rewards. These cars can't react to every possible situation that presents itself. If a situation comes up and the car doesn't know what to do, how till the driver know. Will the car give the driver enough time? Another problem or delay is that there would have to be so many traffic laws changed or new ones and the same for laws after an accident occurs. There will be countless questions about what happens if the technology of the car fails or if someone gets injured. Who would be the blame for this? It is best for society to keep the cars the way they are now and have humans be the control.\n\nTechnology is well advanced in the world today. It is also what fuels the world every second of every day. The technology in a driverless car could depend on a life or injury. Why have a life depend on technology? Say no to driverless cars and be in control.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa\" talks about a new technoogy that can read faces. The new technology created by Prof can detect your emotions based on you face. The technology can help us in many different ways in school. It can help kids that get confused, kids maybe that are focused or bored, and it can help teachers understand how there students feel about something in class.\n\nThe new technology can be helpful in many ways. The first way it can be helpful is by helping students. If teachers could see if a child was confused it could help them work with them so they can understand. The worst thing for student is to struggle and not understand something. If they dont ask about it they could just fail the test or the homeworks. It could help teachers help the students that dont want to ask for help ,but need it. The technology could help raise grades everywhere.\n\nThe second reason it can be helpful is dectecting whether a student is active in the assignment not paying attention, or bored. If the student is active it can tell the teacher that this student is doing his work and being responsible. If a student a bored emotion that would tell the teacher he is not ino the subject and doesn't care. It could connect the teacher with student so the bored kids can get inspiration to start working again. If the child is bored the technology can detect and the teacher can tell that student to get back to work. As stated in paragraph 6 \"\"A classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", Dr.Huang predicts.\" This technology can help teachers crack down on students that are bored and dont pay atention in class.\n\nFinally the technology can help the kids that dont ask for help. They don't ask help because either there shy or dont like help from anyone. The new technology can help teachers realize when a student needs help that never asks for help. This student may do poorly on tests and other academic things. This could help the student learn and grow instead of getting frustrated by things they don't understand. It would raise the students grade significantly if they could understand what was on homeworks and tests. Students could start acheiving more instead looking for answers and help at home because they wouldnt ask in class. The teacher can just go over and help them easily.\n\nThe new technology in \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" can help students and teacher everywhere understand things better. The inovation from Prof can help classrooms everywhere. It can dectect when a student is confused, bored or not paying attention in class, and wether a student is just to stubborn to ask for help. If the technology could reach school systems it would be amazing to the see the results . The ability to dectect emotion from every student is outstanding. The work it could do for schools would help students succeed tremendously across the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "highway casualties are a serious problem for many people in this modern society. Some individuals are keen to think that harsher punishment will be solved this authentic problem. While others believe that the government should make a tuff mandatory principle to resolve this issue. I opine that highways must be controlled by the authorities to prevent automobile hazards.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, maintaining avenue protection management must indeed install more cameras to decrease boulevard mishaps and crime rates. Many populaces agree with this that the administration should have sterner laws for those who drank while they drive. In this condition driving agencies are only allowed to give the license to adults, not to teenagers.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some humans think, these laws cannot be successful unless management provides facilities which can obtain street safety. For instance, pavement condition is one of the important aspects of line safety. It is disputable that most pileups are influenced by the artery narrower. According to research, most course incidents happen due to subway uneven surfaces, and many nations just ignored these vital issues that cause hazards, and many died just because of it. Through the research is clear that a lot of countries do not have laws for teen drivers which is the main source of disaster. In addition, all nation regimes must have an act for kids’ drivers to secure human lives. There should be a compulsory regulation that children must not be allowed drive before the age of 17, and every state government must have to pay attention to their city driving conditions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many citizens believe that the reason for major casualties is harsh drives and lack of control. In my opinion, all calamity should be stopped in any case. The administration must have to teach the younger generation about safe driving because it is a matter of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Parents and teachers in many countries are feeling increasingly concerned about the effect of digital devices on vital skills of school-aged children. They are alarmed by the declining ability of young people to read and write and its suspected link to the influence of modern technology, and I wholeheartedly share their view. This essay will outline the reasons to watch out for the consequences of widespread use of computers and mobile phones by our youngsters.Primary school is a very important period when children develop their fine motor skills, which are involved in learning to write. Time spent typing on a mobile phone or a tablet doesn’t contribute to the necessary workout of the small muscles in the hands and fingers of young people. Not only do they get less practice in writing but also fewer opportunities to train in spelling words, since the ‘autocorrect’ and ‘autocomplete’ features use the first few letters to guess the entire word, therefore making it unnecessary for the child to remember and type it correctly. Another companion of unrestrained use of mobile devices is the jargon that is often used in text messages, where words are shortened or distorted. Exposure to ‘texting’ tends to replace the correct words with abbreviations in young minds, causing their spelling accuracy to decline.Reading is another casualty of unrestricted access to smart devices. Video content can be more appealing and immersive for kids and they often are automatically drawn to it instead of books. Reading requires regular practice and needs to become a habit in order to fully develop as a skill; however, it is being perceived as a boring and labourious activity by many youngsters compared to effortless video-watching. Easy and instant access to videos and movies pushes books further down the list of preferences of young audience, and it takes a significant commitment from parents and teachers to ensure that children continue to read books.To sum up, modern technology can be a friend or a foe for young children, depending on the choices adults in their lives make, regulating the amount of screen time and its purpose. Without due care the writing and reading abilities of kids can be harmed by other, more enjoyable activities they can use the devices for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is the closetst planet to the earth in terms of density and size and occasionally.i think that studying in venus is a worthy pursuit despte the danger because venus is the second planet in our solar systerm that is mean that the sun is really cose to that planet is is really haot in this planet .\"each previous mission was unmanned ,and for good reason ,sin no spacecraft survivedthe landing for more than a few hours.in the article\"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanckets venus.\"\n\nthe national aeronautics and space administration has on particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.NASSApossible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such\n\nas valleys,mountains and craters.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying venu is a worthy pursuits despite the\n\ndanger it because on the planet surface temparature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what\n\nwe esperience on our own planet.\"studying in venus is\n\nworthy pursuit despite the danger ike the say in the article that imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roilling venusian landscape for an exemple some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venu surface.\"\n\nMore importantly resaech cannot take samples of rock ,gas or anything else from a distance .many reaseach are working on innovation that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value ,not only because of insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nHowever peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmospher rendering standard forms and photography and videography ineffective .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One reson to join this program is that you get to travel around the world to help people. Think about all the families that don't have a place to live anymore because of a war or big storms. Think about the childrens' education and health. The families that work so hard for their kids. If you were in that position right now you would want someone to help you. All of these people hope to have someone save them. Things will get better for them if you just sign up for this program.\n\nAnother reason to do this is that you can play games and visit places where you never been before. Maybe you can visit China and go see amazing artifacts. You can visit some castles and go on a tour. Go to Venice, Italy and taking a gondola ride. You might be lucky enough to go to Greece and see the Acropolis.\n\nIf you want to join this program you can. Think about all the people you can help. People will look up to you for joining this program. This program will benifit your life and others. You will be thanked by many people. Think about all of this and join this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author shares many key facts to explain how worthy but dangerous exploring Venus would be. In the pasasge the author shares the life risking ways Venus could be ,but he or she also shares the importance and information gaining ways of how worthy exploring Venus is. The factors of how dangerous Venus is may not set us back from exploring and investigating the factors that Venus provides.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that blankets the planet. The passage states \"even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The author already shared 2 of the most dangerous features of the planet ,but is still wanting to explore. The conditions are more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth , but this could help scientists investigate how closely related it could be to earth.\n\nVenus is refrred to as ''Earths twin\". The passage gives us ways how eath and Venus are similar and differant. Putting aside the dangerous attributes of Venus it just has to be worthy of exploring ,because earth really was! It gives us a place to live and expand. How awesome would it be to do the same on Venus?\n\nIn pharagraph 4, it states \"Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". This was a good supportive fact for the author to help us understand why this is to worthy of discovering. The passgae also includes that today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. But how do we know? We have to keep an open mind to the information given to us about how dangerous this could be.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface out of any planet in the solar system. The author shares that there are erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes ,and many other dangerous factors to add. This informs us that if Venus is so worthy to discover, we need to find safe healthy ways to do so.\n\nNASA is working hard to find ways that it woud be posible to explore Venus. In paragragh 6, the author includes \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cant penetrate the dense atmosphere\" ,this tells us there are still major set backs. NASA continues to research on differant approches to study Venus. They are striving to meet the challenges of Venus and its danger .so they can prove it could one day be like earth.\n\nThere are many facts shared in this passage to help us believe that Venus is important and worthy of exploring. Like the author says \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. The author wants us to believe him or her, and she does this by supporting this with claims and true facts on the topic. He or she proved no matter the factors of how dangerous Venus can be we can't be set back from exploring the factors that Venus shares.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, the historical facts about particular buildings could interest only architects or estate agents. However, in modern-day society, residents themselves are becoming more curious about the place they currently live in. This trend might be caused by the historical significance of the building as well as the supernatural aspect of it. Internet articles and neighbours might be seen as a research medium.\r\n\r\nThe historical value of certain places receiving more attention from the public. That is due to the fact that the vast majority of local organisations share information related to some crucial historical events by the means of social media. For instance, in some countries government publish pictures of houses and buildings that were destroyed during wartime, as a remembrance of the hard times. This in turn results in the younger generation, who did not live in those times, recognising their homes and growing interest to investigate the story behind the walls. Additionally, some people experience paranormal activity after moving into a new house. In order to confirm their assumptions, they begin to research previous owners and the house itself. \r\n\r\nNowadays, there are fruitful tools to learn about the past of the buildings. Individuals could use the Internet to find articles related to any house they are interested in. As an example, certain states in the USA have websites specifically dedicated to buildings and their part in historical milestones. Furthermore, people, who live in the same area for a long period of time, could help with a better understanding of the past of a particular architecture. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the growing keen on people's desire to investigate the past history of their place of residency is undoubtful. Such phenomenon is explained by youngsters being curious about historical events and how their homes partook in them. Moreover, the paranormal activity could lead to individuals' research on buildings. In order to conduct these investigations, residents could use online sources as well as other people's knowledge on the history of the location.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to exploreteh world? Well if you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program you would be able to. There are all kinds of different places you go when you are a Seagoing Cowboy. There are also some jobs you have to do like cleaning out the stables and feeding the animals, but it is a lot of fun.\n\nThe text states \" He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\" It will make you feel free being on a boat. The Part that is the best is getting to see all the wounderful sights. You could go to China, Italy, Greece, and other places. When you are a Seagoing Cowboy you can exlpore different places of the world. You get to meet different people and see how their coulture is different.\n\nThe second best thing is all the free time you have after the animals get droped off. The text states, \" The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\" There are all kinds of games you can play, so you will not be bored.\n\nIt is fun getting to interact with people from different cultures. It is also really cool to be on a boat with your friends and animals. All you have to do is clean out the animals housing area and give them food and water. You also get to interact with the animals when you feed and water them.\n\nWould you pass up being a Seagoing Cowboy? I would deffinetly not pass up a once in a lifetime opportunity. Just thing of how many opportunitys like being a Seagoing Cowboy come in a lifetime. Hopefully now if you have an opportunity like this one you will chose to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The most effective method to resolve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel used by automotives. This essay disagee with view point as there are many other factors like industrilazation and deforestation are the important factor for harming nature. \n\nFirst of all, due to industrilazation many industires and factories are exhausting harmfull gases in the air. This gases are untreated and contain hazardous particles which causes air pollution, this smoke is not only affecting humans but birds and animals also. For instance in Delhi capital of India every year estimated \t1.2 lakhs people are killed due to air pollution according to WHO reason reason for this is the chemical factories located in outskirts of the city. Rising the cost of petrol will surely be of a help but government should regulate the smoke released by manufacturing companies.\n\nSecondly, cutting of trees and buring of plants has detrimental effect on the mother earth. Trees are destroyed for building houses, furniture and sometimes for commercial purpose. Due to this wildlife is killed along with problem like global warming and soil erosion. Loss of the rain forests has resulted in warmer and drier climates near the tropics, according to NASA which has not only destroyed ecosystems but also has lead in exctint of species of animal. \n\nIn conclusion, putting taxes on the crude oil will certain benefit in reducting in nature contamination but issue like having control on emission of fumes from industry and deforestation will have major part.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be writing about why you should paticipate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I will include details from the story. Also reasons to join the program. the last thing i will include is examples from the text.\n\nMy frist reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is just to experiance new things. You should not be on your phone all day doing nothing. Get up and at least try to have a little bit of fun. if you have never been there or even heard of it how do you know it is going to be boring. You never know until you drop your phone and actually join. You might end up having some fun.\n\nA second reason is well look what Luke Bomberger did. He joined 44 nations to form unrra (the united nations relief and rehabilitation). UNRRA took care of horses, young cows, and mules that wers shipped overseas. Wouldnt you want to spend your days with nice and loving animal that wont hurt you. You never know, if no one joins Seagoing Cowboys then maybe there could have been animals who were in dangered, or might be extinct. I think that animal are really fun to hang out with.\n\nThe last and final reason is you dont just take care of animals but you help the places that were dastroyed because of world war II. It would be great if you actually got to see where many people were fighting, got killed, injured, or much more in world war II. Just like Luke in the story, you can also go to may places that he went like new orleans, or greece. This is your oppertunity to visit beautiful places that you have never been to before. You could also meet new people.\n\nTo summarize everything up those are some reasons why you should join Seagoing Cowboys. You just never know until you try it out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Educating adolescents is essential in some countries. but, educating seniors in life who does not know how to read or write is also important and the state should invest money on this. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement because they already have experience in living their life and reduce youngsters from dropping out of college as they don't have money to pay.\n\nThe first reason is adults might already found a way to earn money and understood how to live their life without any educational knowledge. This proves that, it might not be so important for them even though they don't study. Moreover, as they already found their way learning a new skill might not be a drastic change in their life. For example, The Indian government introduced night schools for elders, who really understood basics of education. However, many people stated that they did not find chance of implementing it in their work.\n\nThe second main reason if there is no support for youngsters' education there are high chance of discontinuing as they cannot afford fees. This is because the more money the government invest for elder people, the less they have for teenagers. Hence the government cannot satisfy all poor students. For instance, The Indian government is trying to remove education reimbursement for students as there is no budget to allocate and they have already promoted free education for elders.\n\nTo conclude, In many countries education for adolescents is on the top list. but, educating elders and investing on their education by the government is not important as providing education for young people because seniors in age have experience and already framed their careers and helping poor students will reduce the dropout rate as their families cannot afford education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of technology in the classroom that allows computers to read the facial expressions of students and understand their emotions is extremely valuable. I think this becuase, it could recognize when a student may need more help, it would make learning online much more effective, and could help a variety of ways all through different grades.\n\nThe text talks about how a computer could tell how a student is feeling about the material. Paragraph six states \"A classroom computer could predict when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto). By predicting when students have become confused, or bored by the matieral, it could allow the teacher to know who needs more help. After seeing this the teacher could possibly pull these students asside and try re teaching the lesson in a different way that they would undertsand better or would keep them more engaged.\n\nThis type of technology could also be extremely valuable to somebody doing online schooling. The text states, \"Most human communication is non-verbal...so computers need to understand that too\" (D'alto). This example shows that as of now a computer is unable to comprehend a lot of the communication a human puts out. If, for example, a kid taking an online math lesson understood everything to begin with, but then became confused after a certain new topic was brought up, the computer with this new technology could easily recognize this and expand more on this new part and make sure the student displayed signs of understanding before moving on.\n\nAnother big advantage to this type of technology is that it can be used effectively to help in classrooms from Pre school, all the way through college. For example if in an early grade, a student was playing a learning game and displayed a frown, the computer could quickly recognize that this student is not enjoying the particular game, and could maybe shift to another game that would be more suited for this childs learning preferences. Paragraph 6 also states, \"the same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery\" (D'Alto). By making faces more realistic in video surgery it could even be useful to a student whom is in medical school, or by allowing for a wider range of creativity in someone who is in to designing animated video games or movies.\n\nTo conclude, i believe this technology could be a great addition to all kinds of classrooms for a number of reasons. This could be a huge advancement in today's education system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author talks about how many people have fought in weather Mona Lisa was smilimg in the painting Leonardo Da Vici made , they were trying to figure out if she was happy, mad, sad, or annoyed. but thatnks to Dr. Haung , he figured out that Mona Lisa is happy and smiling in the painting. He said that there is a computer that can analyis weather you are happy ,mad , or sad ,etc. and so the people that said she was smiling were right about the painting. scienetest have also called smiling 'zygomatic major'. but that not all in the text they said that this might be one of\n\nDa Vici's new codes by using facial expression. even thought Mona Lisa doesn't have any eyebrows the computer was still able to analyis if she was happy. the computer he used for this is called an' emotion algorithms'. they have been trying to track down her emotions for centuies. According to them Mona Lisa used muscles to show enough expression to rove she is happy. in the text it says\" according to to the Facial Feedback Theory Of Emotion , moving your facaial muscles not expressesemotions, but also may even help produce them\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper Computers fairly new everone one everone wants one There many great things used But getting used much As student teenager I know I using mine way I need Sure fun sure usefull time consuming You work chatting friend also sitting Being computer taks away lots exercising activits I deffintly saying stop using computer totally becasue agreat inveshion But sit computer chatting friend lives right street could outside playing game kickball something fun It would good idea chat line friends family thay live far like states Another time I would say use computer work projects homework Or even job involves research Computers great tool use But people aboose privilage go one websites nothing reserech So need computer school work stay task That way get need done If student job comon day person s hard use computer There many helpful things use But nt mean need day night Take minutes hour day talk people never get see reach Then get enjoy nature You nt need hour I stronly agree experts people spending way much time cumputers Use befit help kemp getting bord Do nt abuse fact enternet need resherech get done stay task Rember hour day enough So get computers go side stay fit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, known as the second planet from the sun. know that this is a terrestial planet, it is a dangerous planet. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft sruvived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus´s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even dicussing further visits to its surface? Astronemers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. In conclusion, Venus is too dangerous to reach the surface but scientist will continue finding ways to land on Venus and discover the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opionion on Driverless Cars Are Coming is a goood idea because,when people are on the roads during traffic when they get off work most people are tired and trying to rush home.And sometimes people get in to car wrecks and they get injured real bad because sometimes they brakes won't work. And I think with this New Driverless Cars idea is good because the car is watching the driver and the car will not move if the driver is not paying attention on the roads and the Driverless cars has execellent brakes so if you murge in to traffic and another car was driving fast the car would stop.\n\nThe Driverless Car is also good for people when they are going out of town because there are a lot of people that get tired of driving and they want to go to sleep.The Driverless Car will take over and drive to your destination and the driverless car will also let you know when it is your turn to go back to driving .And the driverless cars also can drive without anyone being in there and they are really good on the road .And The Diverless cars are good because they don't take up a lot of gas and people would not have to worry about taxi's or city busses. And the driverless cars also have camera's in there so the car can se what you are doing at all times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some of the positive aspects of driverless cars are that ¨the cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash.¨ Maybe there would be no more car accidents. The driver would still have to be alert at all times just in case of a car accident or work zone. Another positive aspect of driverless cars are that it would help out a lot of people. People don't like to drive for a long period of time. Another positive aspect is that is warns you when you are about to hit something. ¨GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.¨\n\n¨The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.¨ I think that would be help out so much people.\n\nThe negative aspects of driverless cars are sensors. They are not fully driverless. ¨Google cars are not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in or out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.¨ If the person is not paying attention or doesn't have enough time to get control of the situation then there would be a car accident. Another negative aspects of driverless cars is safety. There isn't 100% positive that this would even be able to work. They have tested it out but that doesn't mean an accident or something tragic couldn't happen.\n\nThese are some of the positive and negative aspects of driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Coumputors mind browning They make break somone financhely They also perduce amasing graphis aritist cant perduce Coumputrs also great recer antal acitivitys also take life away I talking real life talking activitys away home Now lets see benifits problems come far handle money We use put chets hide click type securty number people also invist items invisting tricky dont always win You win small lose big say coumputers today hd The screens made liquid crystal fourmula hardens The lights back pixels wort bring stunning graphis life On coumputers today people make money selling graphis made coumputers So would another plus coumputor dose human I went school lern perduce great graphis All teens kids adults used coumputer recerantol acivitys On todays coumputors play games watch videos listen coumputors People engoy selfs Some people ran get trouble fooling around web But nothing stressed playing games personly I like go youtube find funny vidos school I use youtube account get many views The worst thing coumpurts ruin plan gobo somones socal life people get addicted cant stop coumputor takin away For example people play world war craft get addicted cant stop I problem I chek tube lot Well I hoped readers No matter happens I think coumputors bennafit problems", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In conclusion Winter Hibiscus Saeng notes retake driving test spring snow melt sand geese returnThe spring events occur along annual budding winter hibiscus Her family moved Vietnam bought winter hibiscus plant remind childhood When blooms retake driving test body bring hope new beginning life citizen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are defintiely something that not only will make lives much easier, but will also make traveling in a car much safer. The introduction of them is revolutionary, and soon, lawmakers will not have a case to ban them from being used. With these cars, human civilization will be changed forever, for the better. Driverless cars are the future of luxury and safety in automobiles.\n\nFirst of all, the cars could make lives exponentially easier and more luxurious. With the task of having to drive themselves, people could take driving as a time to relax and think. As stated in the article, there could also be entertainment systems in the cars themselves such as televisions, gaming consoles, and computers. So long as the devices are ot operable anytime the car requires human input, there would be no safety issue involved, and may even serve as a safety feature, alerting drivers of possible imminent danger.\n\nNext, safety in driving would be increased to a near accident-free point. With every car making safe, legal turns, following the government mandated speed limit, and using a GPS to ensure following a safe path, how could any accidents even occur? The only cause of an accident would be a malfunction in the vehicle, which is very rare in even today's cars. Human error would be almost completely eliminated, making today's cars seem like deathtraps compared to driverless ones.\n\nIn conclusion, these cars would bring a new level of safety and entertainment to people's lives, maing the highways cleaner and the driver's seat more enjoyable. With driverless cars just ahead in the future, human civilization will be drastically in day-to-day life for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars might be the future but is it safe. Their are still arguments o weather this is safe or not but their are already driverless cars today. Driverless cars have been tested and driven for many miles without accidents but they are not fully driverless. Their might be smart cars but they still have their compications such as pulling out of the drivway and driving through constuction work on the roads. For these reasons and more I am against driverless cars.\n\nAlthough they are supposed to be driverless the help of driver are still needed. What if the car cannot handle the situation and the driver needs to take control and the car malfunctions. This can result in an accident that wasnt neccecaraly the drivers fault. Would the blame be the drivers who couldnt do anything but struggle to take controle of a malfuntioning driverless car. If its not certain wether the driver or the company gets the blame for the acident then these should not be out on the streets.\n\nI think they are dangerouse and not as reliable as a regular manuale driven car. If the law cant back you up for these types of things yet then I dissagree with the use of driverless cars. Peoples lives are in danger with cars that are not yet fully operational to take on the road. If driverless cars cant guarante no malfunctions do to probable causes then I stay against these driverless cars of the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile' the author is telling us about the FACS\n\nwhich stands for facial action coding system that can identify human emotions. This technology will be valuable in reading the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. Teachers and students would be able to use this amazing technology in which ever way needed.\n\nThe FACS technology is an amazing way to determine the emotions of people by reading their muscles of the face or the way ones mouth is moved. In paragraph 6 the author tells us if the student becomes confused about a lesson on the computer, then the computer could read facial expressions then later on modify the lesson so that it becomes more interesting to the student or whoever maybe working on the assignment. This piece of technology would be helpful in my school or in any school because if the students are working on a assignment or test and they get confused maybe the computer could help the students out. In other words, give the students a hint or re word the problem they were struggling on. This system of technology is beyond amazing\n\nThe FACS system is an effective and amazing piece of technology. The author lists so many ways it can read your facial expressions it is beyond amazing. The system can be helpful in a classroom especially in circumstances where students need extra help or are behind, ths piece of technology would be beyond useful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear aunt Mary, \r\n\r\nHow are you? I am overjoyed to receive your letter and to learn that you are planning to be a space tourist. It is such an exciting idea but I feel that you need to consider more about the advantages and disadvantages before you go. \r\n\r\nAs you and I are probably aware , the space-travelling industry is a whole new industry and a new industry means more jobs for people. In this way, by participating in space travels, you are helping to create a new job market that can help more people here on earth. \r\n\r\nAnother thing about space travel is that it allows you to get a new perspective on Earth: the perspective from above that you have never experienced before. Maybe this change of view might help other people to come up with new ideas about what we can do for our earth relating to climate change. Since this is a serious problem all people will be equally affected, including you and me. \r\n\r\nBut unfortunately, space-travelling also has its disadvantages. The first thing is that space tourism probably does more harm than good to the environment. Since the rockets will release a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, therefore increasing the rate of climate change and global warming. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, I am also a little skeptical about the safety of space tourism. As you know, the technology of space travelling is still new and unlike travelling with planes or trains, nobody knows what might happen. In the end, nobody can promise or guarantee anything for your safety. So I think you might want to think about the trip more. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, although I can understand the interesting idea of travelling in space, I still think it is too early for you to go on a space trip. But like I have said before, the technology is still new and safety is hard to guarantee when you are out there in the infinity of space. \r\n\r\nI hope my letter was not too long and please greet your family for me. \r\n\r\nBest regards", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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