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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pollution\n\nThe cars in the world have created a serious problem of polution or also known as smog. In places like U.S and Europe states are trying to get citezens to stop using car on a every day basis and maybe use a bus or any other means of transportion to stop spreading smog.\n\nVauban,Germany is one place where citezens have to live withought a car. It is one place where cars are not allowed but if you really want one you have to buy a large garage worth $40,000 and buy a house. Which is the reason many of the residents dont have a car there and if they were to travel they travel by bike or any other eco-friendly transportion. Which would help enhance the look of the city and have you save gas money for a day or so.\n\nIn Paris,France they had banned cars for a few days till all the smug in the city is gone. People had to use plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers were aloud. Publick transportation was free of charge from Friday to Monday. Alot of smog had cleared up by Monday for the French party to rescind the ban od cars on Tuesday.\n\nBogota,Colombis had their third straight year ban of cars. With only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in the capital of 7 milion. Their goal was to have the citezens use more public transportion and reduce smog in Bogota. And because of that cause two more cities in colomia named Cali and Valledupar joined the Day Without Cars event.\n\nIn U.S lately since 2005 the car sales have been going down and down and the ownership rate of the typical has gone down at a fast pace. Expets in university of Michigan's Transportion Research Institute belice that there is somethign more fundamental going on in U.S. Many sociologists belive it will have a beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviorment, since transportion is the second largest source of America's emissions. Even in NewYork there has been more bicycle sharing and subway transportion to help get rid of the smog in the city created by millions of cars in the city.\n\nPeople have been learning to help the earth by stopping the transportion of cars which has been becoming less and less of a issue so if more states and cites were to join together in lowering the usage of cars and maybe more sco-friendly transportion then maybe we could enhance our image of the earth from global warming. By using the public transportion given or just getting a hybrid car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After long day mom said turn decide went dinner night I chose I love seafood We got legs popcorn shrimp coconut battered shrimp After food got two slices double chocolate lava cake For reason sent us fit laughter We laughed hard started cry We finished going clothes shopping mom said I could pick went eat My brother started whining mom said fair got choose last time I chose brother said would picked anyway I picked restaurant two reasons first close second I love seafood Mom nt lot money said share things instead everybody getting We bought two pounds legs order popcorn shrimp coconut battered shrimp mainly I m kind glad shared cheaper right amount food nt take home boxes We never eat leftovers anyway After dinner brother I begged mother buy dessert much thought convincing said alright ordered two slices best cake I ve ever tasted entire life It rich mom I could barley finish slice My brother gulped ease After done waiter came replaced plates tab We glanced decided get dessert never actually happened Then mom got bad case giggles Shortly brother caught giggles like disease Giggles turned laughter laughter became hysterical We could nt seem figure funny happened People starting stare us still could nt contain Pretty soon eyes started water tears Tears joy I d assume I new one thing sure get Mom managed pay tab fine soon got car herd brother laughing started busting She absolutely convinced cake said reasonable explanation would laugh laugh nothing Now I believe statement ve tried every dessert none effect us We go back whenever know afford dessert want nice long laugh I guess seafood I like I rather enjoy cake We call double chocolate laugh cake", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think things should be like the old days where not everone owned cars. There many advantages in limiting car usege, such as less accedince, better formed communities. There would be more people getting to know there neibors and would be a nice friendly place to stay. People would be in better shap and we would be the fatest country in the world anymore. Experts say automobels are the leading couse of green house gases.\n\nExperts say that green house gases are poisioning are atmophere. So why would we poision what we need to live. why not hang up the keys and get a little exersise get some fresh air.\n\nIts proven that people who exersise often feel better and live a little long. So insted of being lazy walk to work or school get in shap we need to stop teaching are youth that its ok to be lazy. Thats why are country is that fattest inn the world today.\n\nIf less people drive there will be less accedice less people will die because of careless driving or drunk driving. Its a fact that car crashes are the leading couse of teenage deaths. So why put yourself in that percent of people who crash just going to the store or to a friends house.\n\nIf communitys didnt have cars it would be just like the old days where everyone knew everyone. People would be more involved in the community there would be alot less crime because everone would most likely be friends with everone. people would be getting together and having cook outs and having a good time with there niebors.\n\nThose are the advantages i see in limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it is believed by some that learners should be taught to raise their concern and criticize while learning in order to upgrade the educational system. However,others find it undesirable and negative move, as it may cause disrespect of teachers and indiscipline in the classroom. Even though, asking doubts without hesitation can somewhere prove troublesome, I completely loud it's overall advantages and favour it.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, freedom of clearing the questions of scholars sometimes create and you disturbance and distraction in the study room. This is because, lobbies of non serious students are more likely to put an important queries for the sake of creating humor, as they are aware that their teachers are bound to respond. Above all, chances are greater that they can put wrong allegations on their educators for not satisfying their doubts, if they have had any record of punishment. One such case was surfaced in Calcutta when,according to FIR,our teacher committed suicide as he was harassed and disrespected by his students for not being capable of using a smart class screen.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I feel that questioning is the basic right of education. Undoubtedly, when anyone learns something, he is more likely to be sceptical about certain facts which can only be eradicated by asking more and more.Thus, suffice to say, being vocal during class time bills confidence which further leads to success. Secondly, interrogation helps the strengthening the bond between teachers and students. Since students' involvement motivates teachers to go beyond their limitations, as it proves that teachers are being heard and understood. So, in a way, in order to build a healthy relationship, learners ought to be liberal to put questions while study time. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite having some chances of arguments and negativity in the classroom, students should be free to reveal their problems in front of their tutors due to fact that it gives them opportunity to learn profoundly and boosts their self-esteem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some think the Face on Mars is evidence of life on Mars. The Face on mars is just a rock. It is an illusion formed by shadows. In the text, it states, \"Huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.\"\n\nPeople are starting to believe that, becuase of the Face on Mars, there is life on Mars but NASA is hiding it from the public and saying \"conspiracy theories\". There has not been enough proven facts that there is life on Mars. Even if there was, scientists have been reserching for clues and evidence of life on Mars. If they did discover it, i feel it would be something they are proud of and would share to the world.\n\nIn my opinion, the Face on Mars was just a rock, an illusion created by shadows. There is no life on Mars and will not be until proven otherwise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to some, the technological revolution is currently creating a huge disparity between the wealthy and unwealthy group of people. While others believe in the opposite idea. However, I support the former statement as I strongly believe that the new technological innovation is the paramount reason for creating such differences among people.\r\n\r\n To commence with, technological advancements have drastically changed the world we live in and made our life much more pragmatic than we ever anticipated. Although most of these gadgets are eye catching, most of them are very expensive. Therefore, only affluent population can buy them and those in destitude cannot. For example, in the developing countries, only a few percent of the population can buy ipads, iphones mac book , expensive cameras and many more. Not only this, many cannot even afford basic household appliances. They have to perform everything manually. This shows the disparity in the living standard between rich and poor people which creates imbalances and has detrimental effect. \r\n\r\nFrom the other perspective, with these advancements, internet has become relatively cheaper. Thus, with the help of different social media platform, all the general population can virtually connect and interact with each other. With time, they may develop bond and friendship. This reduces the segregation created in the society. Furthermore, it gives platform for every indivisual to express their feelings and talent, regardless of their background. For instance, many people from poor economic background are currently opening channels in youtube and expressing their talent. Through this they are able to generate income for their family. \r\n\r\nThus in conclusion, I support the view that these technological gadgets are the main reason for creating differences among different classes of people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens. It is simply a natural land form. You can find similar land forms on Earth. Also, why would NASA even want to hide the existence of aliens? It is simply illogical to think that it was made by aliens.\n\nThe Face on Mars may look like a mask or a face, but that doesn't prove that it was made by aliens. There are many landforms here on Earth that look like faces or animals. NASA has taken photos of it, and it is clearly just a mesa. Why would NASA hide the existence of aliens from us anyways? Considering that it \"has become a pop icon\" and \"has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows--even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years,\" wouldn't NASA benifit from the existence of aliens?\n\nNASA has not covered up the existence of aliens. The Face on Mars is just a naturally occuring landform that happens to look like a face. It's fun to think about what would happen if it was an actual face or created by aliens, but it was not made by aliens. Anyways, NASA would be trying to prove that there were or are aliens there if it was actually made by aliens. They would benifit greatly if aliens made the face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph telling reader In point view work garden see catches interest I believe author trying express beggining story author shows interest garden interest world around For example supposed buy seeds garden went used mothers money buy big mac So In conclusion I believe I wrote clearly states author feels ended story way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people who graduate from high school often have to face the dilemma of whether to join the academy or college to pursue higher study or to find a profession they accomplished for. This essay will discuss both views.\n\nOn the one hand, it is fairly easy to understand the advantages of studying at university or college. First, the educational institution guides them to have a good foundation for their future life because it helps them to learn what they didn’t learn from the faculty, which cannot be achieved if they choose to work right after they graduate from academy. Second, they believe a higher-level study improves their qualification and the door to a better places. Also, helps to get good remuneration. Professors who are able to give a recommendation letter to land in a good office could be a good example here.\n\nOn the other hand, the idea of working straight after high institution is justifiable in some ways. It is common knowledge that working straight after high institute instead of pursuing higher teaching can help youngsters collect practical working experiences. If they do not want to go for another learning process, they can begin to seek an activity as early as possible. As a result, they are likely to start their professional career sooner than their fellows. Moreover, young people can live independently on their own income without asking for financial support from their parents for the reason that they are able to earn money by themselves to meet their basic needs. \n\n In conclusion, it seems evident that both going for higher study at academy or college and working right after school are advantageous in their own ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist affected long hours riding bike areas never", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram indicates the development of two cutting tools (Tool A and Tool B) in the Stone Age, from a front view, side view and back view. Tool A is a tool of 1.4 million years ago, whereas, Tool B is a cutting tool of 0.8 million years ago.\nOverall, Toll A and B were bigger than 5 cm long, were made of stone and were used in the Stone Age as cutting tools. Tool A had a triangular form, whilst, Tool B had a more complex form which is similar to a pentagon.\nIn detail, the front view of Tool A seems rougher and with less sharpness than Tool B. Regarding the side view, the diagram shows that Tool A was wider than Tool B. Finally, the back view of Tool A shows that this device was thinner than Tool B's back view.\nTo sum it up, these two cutting tools were similar in material and length. However, Tool B seems that it was a more developed tool, which was thinner in the side view and with a more complex form in its front and back view than Tool A.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates culture enthusiastic home made And parents generous selfless eternally grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME. It would be beneficial to keep the electorial college because it is in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congree and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens, if we used just popular vote candidtates would just go to bigger states like Florida, California, Texas, and Georgia and win the popular vote, and lastely without the electorial college there would be a greater chance of a dispute.\n\nFive reasons to keep the electiorial college are:\n\n1. Certainty of Outcome\n\nA dispute over the outcome of an Electorial College vote is possible but it is less likely than a dispute over the popular vote because the winning candidate's share of the Electorial College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.\n\nAlmost all states award electorial votes on a winner take all bases.\n\nThis means that if a president wins 51 percent of a states popular vote they win 100 percent of the Electorial votes.\n\nIn the 2012 election Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electorial vote, but only 51.3 percent of the popular vote.\n\nAlthought a tie in the electorial vote is possible because there is an even 538 votes it is highly unlikely.\n\n2. Everyone's President\n\nThe Electorial College requires a presidential candidater to have a trans-regianal appeal, what this means is that no regian has enough electorial votes to elect a president.\n\nTherefore a president with only one regional appeal is unlikely to be succesful.\n\nIf the president could win the electorial vote with just one regions votes the other regians would feel disenfranchised and feel that the president wouldn't care about what they want or need.\n\n3. Swing States\n\nThe winner-take-akk method of awarding electorial votes makes candidates focus on states called swing states.\n\nThese voters in the swing states are most likely to bve the most thoughtful voters and they are the ones that decide most elections.\n\nAn example of a swing state is Florida.\n\nFlorida always changes between Republican and Democrat and having 29 electoirial votes that is a big deal.\n\n4. Big States\n\nThe electorial College gives back some of the weight in big states that they lose in the senate where every state has only 2 representatives.\n\nFlorida is also a big state having 29 electorial votes.\n\nThis makes Florida even more attractive to candidates to visit because it is both a swing state and a big state.\n\n5. Avoid Run-Off Elections\n\nThe Electorial College avoids a problem in which no candidate receives a majority of the vots cast.\n\nThe Electorial College takes away that complication by providing a clear winner.\n\nLastley if popular vote was used candidates wouldn't have to go to a variety of states, they could go to the same big states including California, Florida, Texas, Georgia, and Washington.\n\nJust winning the majority of these states they could win the whole election.\n\nThis would cause smaller states like Ohia, North and South Dakota, and Michigan to not be a piece of the election as much because of their low population.\n\nI hope this helps you decide what to do about the decision between Electorial College and Popular Vote.\n\nThink about the smaller states.\n\nThey don't want to be left out.\n\nThanks,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of individuals nowadays are required to work shifts. Such people are exposed to a variety of problems such as high levels of stress and criminals who might come during the night shift. A few steps can be taken to solve these issues.\r\nShift workers are faced by different problems regardless of their jobs. Firstly, the exhaustion that they face during their working hours is undeniable. Due to not having regular working hours, their bodies cannot adapt to a specific working pattern since they might work in the evenings or at night. As a result, they suffer from the lack of sleep and feel sluggish in the morning and cannot focus on any tasks. Secondly, people who work during the night shift are exposed to the serious problem of facing dangerous people. For instance, a cashier who works at night might face dangerous criminals, thieves, or people who consumed large amounts of alcohol or drugs.\r\nThere are some steps that can mitigate or even eliminate the drawbacks of working shifts. Shift workers must take care of themselves during the time they are not working. In other words, they must get at least seven hours of sleep, eat three healthy meals, and take vitamins. This can help their bodies get stronger and avoid malnutrition and fatigue. Furthermore, they should be checked by their doctors regularly since they are likely to develop anxiety and high blood pressure due to high levels of stress. Another point is that supermarkets that are open during the night must install cameras inside and outside the store to threaten criminals. \r\nIn conclusion, although shift workers face some problems, they can be reduced if cameras were installed in supermarkets and if employees took care of themselves and maintained their health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There can be many advanteges and disadvanteges to having a car but the advanteges to not having a card greatly outweighs having one. There can be many reasons why not having a car is great but the main three are it reduces pollution, reduces stress, and having less cars reduces the noice pollution in a city. Can you imagine a place with no cars?\n\nFirst off the main advantage of limiting car use is less pollution. Cars account for 12% of gas emissions in Europe and 50% in America. Without cars the air would be much cleaner and the Smog would be gone over the cities. London had so much smog over the city that they had to cut car use in half with all of their cititzens. After only five days most of the smog was gone and people could go back to driving. Imagine if we had everycar in the world stopped driving we could get rid of most of the smog in less than one week.\n\nAnother great point on how limiting car use can help is it will reduce the stress gratly in peoples lives. In the first source a man from Vauban Germany said, \"When I had a Car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Also another man from Columbia said during a day without cars, \"Its a good opportunity to take away stress...\" Most stress comes from roadrage or getting stuck in a major traffic jam. Imagine how stresless people will be without cars\n\nFinnaly reducing car use will graetly reduce the noice pollution everywhere. When you go out side whats the first thing you hear? People? Childrean? NO, all you can hear is the engine of cars everywhere. In a city where they banned most cars the sound of childrean drown out the occasional car engine not the other way around. Can you imagine how peacefull that would be not waking up to the sound of cars?\n\nIn conclusion having a car can have its advanteges but limiting there use would be far better for people. It would help stop air pollution, reduce stress, and reduce noice pollution in cities and suburbs. Is having a car really worth it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The vast majority of the population deems that junior members of the house should legitimately take care of the senior households as they become not capable of doing so. I strongly advocate with the opinion of the majority and am going to reflect my own view of such a common issue.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, since humans are the only intelligent being on the face of the earth we have to help people who are in need. Humanity is gifted with empathy, compassion and kindness in comparison with animals. For example, every other creature leaves their family after getting mature enough to live by itself. Therefore, sharing love between one another is the right way in the eyes of the morality in hardship and also kind of pay-back to our elderly members for looking after us when we were kids.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it can be spotted that the government indeed must give a hand in this particular situation. In other words, after all the paid taxes and contribution put into country growth cannot be forgotten in my opinion. In fact, many individuals live not just for themselves but for the sake of family as well, in addition to that most of them have sacrificed their precious lives for country development like scientists, doctors, teachers and etc. I think authorities take action on this problem by stable pension to older members of society and building nursing houses in order to look after people who are unstable mentally or physically. \r\n\r\n To conclude, although looking after someone may be a burden sometimes, generally it is our moral duty to do and legalization of that is something we have to accomplish.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are believed to be mandatory in life today. They get use where we need to go quicker that it is to walk or ride a bike. Cars have many positive effects, but also many negatives. The gas emission percentage from cars in several countries have risen dramtically. Many people say, having a car stresses you out. By cuttin down on car usage, our world could be a cleaner and stress relieved place.\n\nIn many middle-class populated cities, the amount of pollution is sky rocketing. Because of this, some cities like Vauban, Germany are making their communties car free. Doing this can cut down on the amount of gas that comes from the tail pipes of cars, making the enviroment healthier and making it easier to breathe. Not as many cities are going as extreme as Vauban, but they taking the extra measures. In Paris, France the amount of pollution to due to car usage was getting higher by day. So they enforced a partial drivng ban, if they didnt follow this law they would have to pay the thirty one dollar fine. In Bogota, Colombia, they have a car free day that is now spreading to the borders, such as Paraguay. Even by cutting down a few times a day will not only help the enviroment, but will also help people breathe easier too.\n\nHaving a car can put a lot of stress on someones shoulders. You have to worry about maintence, gas prices and even traffic on the main highway on your way to work. If you take away that stress people will be happier than if they got stuckin traffic to or from where theyre going.\n\nDriving is something that doesnt require much physical effort. It can make people lazy. In Bogota, Colombia during their car-free day, people ride bikes, skate or even walk to places. In New York's bike-sharing program not only is it cutting down on gas emissions, its also helping people stay in shape and bemore active.\n\nSo while having cars helps us get places sooner and quicker, its also having any negative effects people are turning a blind eye to. If even one city cuts down on driving for one day, it could help the enviroment. Many cities, states, and even countries are trying to cut down on the negative effects driving has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the idea of driverless cars appeals to many, is it really practical for modern day America? Sergey Brin has proposed and imagined this utopian idea. The creation of these seeming easy cars would actually make everyones life harder, not only on the roads, but in the court rooms as well. These cars would obviously be extremly costly to make, and would put stress on all tax payers if roads were to be remodeled. The idea of driverless cars is impractical and shouldn't be taken seriously.\n\nThere is a quote that states, \"Be careful what you wish for becuase you just might get it.\" What this quote boils down to is that as much as one might want something that aesthetically pleases them, it may turn around to be a truly awful mistake. Driverless cars cause more trouble then they are worth. A prime example would be, if a driverless car were to be made, having to switch the roads and the designs of them. Tax payers already pay for the seemingly never ending road repair, let along new roads for cars that arent even a necessity. Many engineers at Berkeley attempted to use magnets in driverless cars that could read in binary code. They discovered there needed to be grotesque and expensive changes to pre existing roads, making the whole ordeal impractical. After realizing that roads were too hard to deal with, money wise, Google tried to make cars that were smarter. With all of the upgrades required to make a smarter car, the cost of the driverless car wouldn't be fathomable. How are people supposed to drive cars when they cost too much to own and take care of?\n\nAnother huge problem with the new cars is whither a human in the \"driver seat\" would be assisting or driving. If a car could go forward on its own, but can't drive under certain conditions, how is it really a driverless car? If a person in the car were to fall asleep while being drove by the car, then there were to be an accident that the car couldn't handle, how would the car alert the person it was time to drive. There is a big reason as to why people dont hop out of bed and into a car. The brain needs time to adjust and wake up before attempting a process that can quite legitimately kill people. A single car accident can kill many people. Pretending that driverless cars are a toy isn't an option. People with health problems wouldn't find a driverless cars helpful either. Awareness of people who cant feel vibrations, cannot hear, and cannot see, would all be in danger riding in this type of car. Without being in control of the wheel and acceleration at all times reduces the feeling of needing to be alert in the car, causing more careless accidents that could have been avoided if the car had an alert and ready driver.\n\nIf one of these careless accidents were to happen, who would be to blame? With the idea of driverless cars, sprialing and time consuming court cases come along. When accidents happen, usually the two drivers are taken to court, with the exception of car recall cases. When two driverless get in an accident it leaves the question as to why two, in fact driverless cars, would hit each other. This also brings up the question as to if they are even driverless cars. A driverless car would technically have to be driverless and not need a human assistant to run properly. Thus saying, more car companys are more likely to get sued in the court of law for murder, vehicular manslaughter, and many other charges most car companies don't get hit with using regular cars.\n\nAnother pretty famous quote states, \"If it's not broke, don't fix it.\" Today's cars are fully functional and drive almost perfectly on the roads we have now. To switch the great thing that is going on now would be useless. In this economy, America does not have money to throw around. To mass produce driverless cars is and forever will be unconventionally excessive. In order to save time, to save money, and save citizens from dreaded jury duties, driverless cars should remain in the movies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once apani time kids one name wasnt patience The kid name patience They went walk woods get lost would stop complaining told stop complaining didnt say hunted house told want go inside didnt want go went act like got hurt ran dorslamd shut door nob feel They scared dark Then light came said lets get said door nob fell said I dont know ran though house wore door windows terrify ghost coming said happy dad built house said push door open went home end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I accept driverless cars entirely and base my position on statistics found both within and outside of the passage: \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\". The facts I base my opinion and position on driverless cars are: all of the accidents the Alphabet (formerly Google's vehicle) Driverless Passenger Mobile Vehicle were caused by human drivers alone. The second reason is because the vehicles have instant, high speed, and highly accurate radius road mapping systems to navigate safley for both the passengers and other drivers and passengers.\n\nI very much disagree with the sentence found in the passage: \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009\" in paragraph 2 because there are very few conditions that the vehicle could ever function under even in the 2009 model's developed.\n\nI also disagree with the first line in the passage which states: \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cards because no one needs them anymore?\"; although specifically ground vehicles that match the appearance of cars may be unavailable for direct transportation, most humans will rely on some form of direct vehicular control as the human inovation proccess brings more variety to forms of transportation, there will always be a time gap between the development of self controlling functions in vehicles and the manufacturing of the vehicles themselfs. We will move on, but we will always at some point be in control of some transportation directly as we progress through the newer types of transportation such as recycleable aerospace vehicles and extra-atmospheric transportation manufactured by SpaceX.\n\nTo conclude, I believe that taking the step to accept driverless vehicles as they are in post-testing phases is a healthy and natural nessesity for humans to take to allow for greater inovation as it is manufactured. Driverless vehicles are proven to be safer and are heavily misunderstood. Most of the government organizations that take time away from proper conduct of ensuring the safety of drivers with improved motor ways on the world to focus on neglecting innovation and progression of mankind lack the basic leading skills they are required to have to allow for better and newer mechanics.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am one of the many scientist of NASA and what i'd like for people to understand is that the \"face on mars\" is really just a natural landform of the moon and not any ancient civilization on Mars. Although our defenders of our budget and some of us certainly wish there was a form of life on Mars.\n\nWhat it is that your seeing that you call a face on mars is a Mesa. The mesa or the huge rock formation,you all have seen has ended up unlike some other mesas,ended up resembeling a human head. Formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth. This very well did draw all of your attention to Mars which is somewhat good for your knownledge,but with you all thinking there is aliens of some sort it is hard to come by whats true or not to some that have not picked a side of whos right or wrong.\n\nWe had to roll the space craft 25 degrees to center the Face in the feild of view and it was a clear photo we took from that so if they're were any objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were! So again but lastly What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American west. It also reminded Jim Garvin of most of middle Butte in Snake River Plain of Idaho. Thats a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa that is somewhat the same height as the Face in Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I dont think able take magazines shelf pointless people find everything offensive others find offensive like personally stuff people find offinsive I find kind humorous And I understand people likely offended say sexuality ethnicity But censorship makes place seem like strict strict policys makes people wan na go less get want knows thing want censored And I understand kid dont want fo wrong things life try keep away bad stuff long possible But child grows older introduced olderadult type material cut break punish bad something like happens From humble opinion parents strict censorship I completely understand parents point view Eventually people let children find certain things might well allow see possibly age seems like suitable age early privelages When comes taking items shelf peole worse judgement people effect everyone bad judgement", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a good change. This is the kind of change we need, because cars are our main transportation. Right now cars are not helping the economy and planet. Cars are causing global warming and the gases prices are so expensive. People are also in danger because of car accidents. Driverless cars will help us solve many of our problems.\n\nDriverless Cars has many pros to it. Driverless cars would not be all driverless for public transportation. There would still be a driver for pulling in and pulling out of places and being alert when there are accidents. It alert the driver if they are in any danger, and it gets the driver to places faster. If they were all driverless with no driver in the front, then alot of people will being losing their jobs. They aren't going to make driverless cars totally driverless though. Driverless cars are a good idea because it uses less fuel which is somewhat helping the planet, and it is more flexible than a bus. The gas prices might go down and there will be less people getting hurt or killed in accidents.\n\nI do see a future in driverless cars. There are so many good reasons to have them why shouldn't we make them. I hope that they keep a person driving too, because if they got rid of the front driver many people will lose their jobs. The driverless cars have a good future and will help the world and the people in many ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph Saeng wants thing good The reason I said cause last paragraph says Saeng vowed silently which means wants best", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine that you are in scientist at NASA, the man that you worked with was an photographer of Mars. As the man comes in he as an Trapper keeper as he is walking down towards your office. He shows you the photographs that he took when he was outterspace on the planet Mars. He noticed something about the picture and he tells you to look at it and ask you what do you see, you tell him that you see an figure that looks like an face. Then he agrees with you, you start to jump to conclusions and ask if it is made by aliens or is just a regular landform. A few days later NASA unveiled the image for everyone to see. The note on the paper was stated \" huge rock formation.\" As they are passing around the picture for everyone to see one of the co-workers had assumed it was made/formed by an alien. You and a couple of your workers were talking and assumed that it was just a regular landform and changed as the years went by. The manager had did a little debate, if they thought it was made by an alien they would have to go on one side and if they thought it was just a natural landform that is going to change as the years go by they would have to go on the other side. The people of NASA that thought it was an alien artifact, had to explain and decribe why. One of them volunteered and said that they think it is made by an alien because there is no way that it is just going to change through the years. You interupt him and say that is possible because many things change over the years, policies, laws, taxes, and many more things. You explain to them that it is not made by an alien becuase the photographer of viking 1 and viking 2 goes around and takes pictures of the planet as it circles around then they noticed something different about the figure when the picture was shown. The people that is on your side agree with you and say that you are true so they ask for more evidence to make your statement better than what it was. So you tell them that what the picture really shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. You and the co-workes take the last look of the picture and you are amazed. As the years goes by you see that the face doesnt appear on anymore of the picutures from the time it started to the time it ends ( 1998 - 2001. )", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "when someone driveless on cars so people can't buy them so they won't get money to pay for the cars so it can like when somebody is like looking at them driving cars. So it effeat them by trying to get cars so when ethey see that they can't get them cars are drivingless to other people they can get to pay for the cars for when tghe cars. Get people to buy them it's going to be hard for them to get one that they want for their self so when people get their cars they always want they can alll ways pay for them if they have to get one if they want if you look at somebody with a car you would say i want that car to but if they don't have no more you can't do nothing to get the car you want in your life for cars it's going to be hard for them to come up with something they want to do for them so when it come to cars you can't get your mine off of it till you get the car you want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are very convincing but i honestly think its not convincing enough. Driverless cars have some good and bad strategies to them, Drivers would be just wasting their time sitting there waiting their turn to take over the wheel. What do you think about the Driveless cars are they a good thing or something bad?\n\nMy opinion about Driverless cars are that there really not all the way high expectations. They seem attempting but not that very attempting. Driverless cars are kind of like human control cars the only difference between the two cars are that with Driverless cars you dont have to put your foot on the gas pedal,i think that driverless cars are not that really safe neither.I have reasons why I dont think there safe.\n\nMy first reason about the google Driveless car not being safe is that if something goes wrong in the car fails, in the person cant control the wheel or the break in time they could be really injured.Since the driverless car is made up with technology the car might have a technical problem and the car can blow up in that just my opinion not saying that the car is really going to blow up.\n\nMy second reason that the Driverless car is not a good idea because,its going to be to much complication between the person that invented the driverless car and the person who might get hurt.The law wouldnt know who to blame because it would be hard to tell, Was it the person not paying attention?or was it the Driverless car not being so driverless?.\n\nI think the driverless car would be better if it could do everything without a human still have to watch the road,and pay very close attention to everything thats going on. I think if the driverless car really wants to be a driverless car it shouldnt need a human to still take control over the wheel or to monitor that everything thats goin on. If a driverless car going to be a driverless car it needs to be really do everything i mean everything that a driverless car would,yes they have everything down pact navigation,automatic brakes,cameras to back up,speed that go up to 25mph, and that can even allcurate by themself. It just need more.\n\nDriverless cars are cool but not that cool that i would drive it. I think that driverless cars need more detail left to them more safety features, and more technology features and thats my opinion about driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by some that youth crime should be restricted by the laws while others believe that this is the parent responsibility. Although the former view can be true to some extent, in my opinion, the latter view is more reasonable.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many reasons that lead people to believe that juvenile crime has to be punished on account of some reasons. One of them is that kids or teenagers need to be responsible for what they have done, especially breaking the laws. To be more specific, if the punishment applies to young people, they will remember and won’t be reoffended. Additionally, the criminals can use the kids to violate the laws without any restriction by the regulations. For example, criminals can use children to rob a bank, and the police will see the problem that the kid is breaking the regulation. However, they will pass this problem because they are just children.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I hold a firm belief that in delinquency crimes parents should be punished instead because the children are not well educated. In other words, if the kids get involved in criminal activities, it is probably because the parents have not taught their children correctly and correctly. Moreover, children, in general, do not have enough awareness about what is right and wrong, and it will be unfair if the government punishes them. Thus, the parents will have to be responsible and be compensated for what their child did. In particular, while the children started breaking the laws, it was already the parents' job to teach them probably about good and bad things to do. The laws are especially the strictest rules in the country.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, youth crimes being punished can be justifiable in some aspects, yet I still strongly believe that parents should be taking the responsibility for their children since it is unfair for little children to be restricted by laws.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That Is noticeable watching television affect children's behavior whether related to the program and length of time or not, some people argue that only watching tv can change children’s behavior that is not related to tv program and the amount of time children spend on watching tv. However, I believe that length of time has a more significant influence on behavior of children.\r\n\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, watching tv for a long time and when children become over-reliant on television for entertainment have a negative impact on children’ behavior lies in a fact that brings TV addiction for children that is resulting in the physical problem for youngsters. For example, children fall into the habit sedentary lifestyle that is a highly detrimental effect on physical health. In addition, decrease outdoors and physical activities for youngsters, the more significant issue of excessive watching tv impairs social communication abilities of children; besides, they reluctant to be in relation with others in their real life, so children find it hard to play and live with others. Consequently, watching tv in a long time can change the normal behaviour of children and that a have a destructive influence on them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, without regard to the length of time that youngster consume to watching TV that have evil impact on them, watching movies and images on television can have a bad effect of children’s behavior. Some countries tv shows glamourized depictions of inappropriate products and behavior such as drug addict and violence; thus, it may adopt unhealthy habits. For instance, youngster by watching violence movies encourage them to have a harsh behavior and children persuade to drink alcohol and use drug is fashionable, without being aware to health risk.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although both factors play a vital role to have an effect on children's behavior, but I personally believe watching TV particularly in a long time have a most considerable impact on them. Hence, supervision of parents can avoid youngsters from damage of watching tv in their individual and social life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced attempting dirigible dock ca nt top part building put piece piece building become stressed point might collapse", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time family point My sister really wanted go small kiddie rides I didnt feel like I wanted go one fastest tallest rides The It looked really cool dad I ran entrance got wait time board said one hour fortyfive minutes I really wanted go ride really wasnt worth standing line So line started moving half way signs said minutes I told dad maybe another day But dad said well trough soon told watch people go talk We moved little time minutes dad said maybe another day left line find mom sister", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today in the world everyone needs a car. A car is one of the most used and most needed appliances in the world today, but cars also cause many accidents, injuries, and fatalities. One way to avoid accidents is by allowing the car to assist with the driving. If self driving cars becomes a common thing there will be less accidents, less drunk driving, and less deaths. Many people believe that cars should stay manual to the driver because the enhanced amount of technology for a self driving car could have a glitch or have a technology fail. Although there is a great fear of this happening to the new style of car, many cars already use extended amounts of technology. The cars being created today have better, more enhanced technolgy that cause the smarter car to help everyone.\n\nThe average car made today has a great amount of technology already being designed into the car. If a self driving, smarter, car is created for the average customer the difference between the smarter car and the average car made today would be the amount of sensors. Many people may question having an extended amount of sensors in the car because the more sensors the more likely a sensor has a chance to fail. While the fact of a higher possibility of a sensor failing is true but there is already a great amount of sensors in cars today. Also, new cars being developed will have a better sensors than the sensors currently in cars. Sensors in cars today detect seatbelts, open doors, and impact of car to deploy airbags. Advanced cars around the world today already detect the surroundings of the car to help avoid crashes and improve parking. One flaw of the technology of the typical car to day is that a driver does not always comprehend or listen to signals and sensors being given by the car. In order for safer driving to occur cars must become more self dependent. Smarter cars will immediatley understand and react to the sensors in the car. Also a self reliable car will help fatigued and worried drivers. The car could automatically program routes via GPS, relieving the stress of directions. Another area of concern raised by those who oppose the smarter cars is that pedestrains will be in greater risk of harm with a smarter car if the car has a malfunction. This is a true problem, but the smarter car is not full reliant of technology. The car will still need guidance of a driver who can see pedestrians and stop. None of the cars developed are driverless, although the cars have its own sense of direction, acceleration, steering, and braking can be done by the car alone, the driver has the final decision on what the car will do.\n\nAlthough many critics oppose the idea of having a car that has so much power and freedom, the smarter car is safe and functional. The smarter car is the next generation of cars and the next great invition that can change the lives of everybody evryday. Most people who think a self driving car think that there will be no need for a driver when that is not at all true. The smarter car still requires a licensed driver but it can provide great help and security to the driver. The self driving car can do many more things than the average car which makes the new car of tomorrow a smarter car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives mood created author love sacrifice In memoir author shows love showing love child parents also showing love throughout community The author shows sacrifice showing parents give order child better life In memoir talks lot neighborhood cultures came together great solidarity friendship It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people This shows closeness people neighborhood represents love well Sacrifice shown Narciso s parents They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved This shows parent left behind representing sacrafice At end author also mentions I never forget house s gracious neighborhood many things I learned love This ties mood throughout memoir Love sacrifice mood throughout memoir author created", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The government assigns considerable money to education. This is important for people because they may ignore the recreational activities, which as vital. I partially agree value of leisure activities for students.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, spending money on education is very essential for the nation. If people are educated, can nurture another generation very well. Also, they could have higher-paid jobs in their field of expertise, which can help to economic society. For instance, if the government pay attention to the deprived and educates them, they will be successful in the future and they can change the situation of their family. So education would be most meaningful for any nation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, free-time activity is just as important as education. The government should not ignore it, as it can improve learning, especially for children and teenagers. The government can regulate leisure activities which is beneficial to find people's interests and talents. For example, any city must have a place for children to learn about different jobs in the form of games and entertainment. knowing their interests makes the learning platform more targeted.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, while I agree the cost of tutoring is useful for society, I believe that education along with recreational activities can be more effective, so it will be worth spending.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives makes mood seem loving cheerful gratefulThe mood grateful Rodriguez s parents making house home among things In paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice parents ton Rodriguez constantly grateful Their also lot love mood book lots mentions family In paragraph says My parents always kept arms doors open many people considered family arms opened big family surely signs lots love The mood excerpt also cheerful Rodriguez says Passionate salsa music filled air And Cuban feast albeit frugal Cuban feast always filled air Music feasting two cheerful things areBy recalling experiences childhood manages make mood memoir loving grateful cheerful time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that stars are known for their expensive lifestyle rather than their accomplishments. Few individuals think that this mentality is not good for our younger generation. Others, however, feel that even though we are more focusing on their personal life still they are setting any wrong example for teenagers. I completely agree with the former statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.\n\nNowadays, due to the increasing usage of social media, school kids are getting easily influence by them as it has become easier to connect with celebrities. For example, If an actor is currently shooting for his next movie in a different location, still he can reach out to his fans through Instagram or Facebook. As a consequence, the youth is getting more attracted towards them and they try to copy their idols. Moreover, while doing so instead of getting inspired by their struggles they tend to concentrate on their glamourous looks. \n\nFurthermore, another important aspect of this is the media. The current media houses are more concerned about their television profit rate. As they are getting more views on promoting their charismatic and fascinating way of living, they continue to do so rather than showing motivating and inspiring facts. For instance, during the Olympic games, we have seen many athletics winning awards but also need to showcase the hard work and the challenges they have overcome. This will encourage our generation to set goals and guide them to fulfil their dreams.\n\nIn conclusion, a mutual effort of parents and grow individuals of the country can teach our upcoming generation to have a bright future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this computer would work wonders in a classroom. It could allow teachers to know which of the children in the classroom are having problems understanding the lesson, allowing the teacher to help them more. This could also help other studys of the human anatomy, as it shows how facial expressions are done and also what they mean. In the famous, \"Mona Lisa\" painting, many people observe her smile and think that she is being forced to smile, and that she is actually scared, frighted, or just angry. Using this computer means that we could debunk/prove this theory. This could also solve crimes, some that have not been solved to this day!\n\nThis computer could also help with crimes as it could show that if a suspect is making a certain facial expression, they are lying or telling the truth. This could help police catch people who are breaking the law, but not put others in prison for nothing. This computer could help with these problems that occur in the real world, and it would save lives in the process. This would be very helpful in peoples daily lives, and it could help people who have problem such as mental health. If a child is slower than other children, this test could help decide whether or whether not these children need the extra help. If they do need help, this machine could even put them in the correct classes!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "out with the old and in with the new. \"The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" - \"the Indefensable Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" from\n\nMother Jones by Bradford Plumer. The Electoral College needs to be replaced it has too much room for failure, manipulation,and its loose guidelines allow unfair representation.\n\nThe Electoral College has too much room for failure considering the only guidlines for electors are those that are not holding office and depending on the state electors are chosen in various ways. the garuntee that electors will vote in favor of majority vote of their state is not garunteed. \"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a comprimse...The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meetin of the electorswhere they vote for\n\nPresident and Vice President, and the counting of electoral votes by congress.\" - \"What Is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register.\n\nThe Electoral College allows room for manipulation and as cited in \"The Indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" as \"the single best argument against the\n\nElectoral College\" would be the disaster factor described as the thing that the american people should consieder themselves lucky didnt happen. The articles asks the reader to \"consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" Citing an event in 1960 where louisiana attempted to replace electors with others that would vote in their favor and John Kennedy would not have won popular vote. In the event of a tie the election will be passed to the House of Representatives, because each state only gives one vote allowing states with meager population to have the same holding as states that represent millions upon millions and given the information that voters may vote one party to president and another for congress, the house's selection can hardly be reminiscent of the choices of the people that each one person represents.\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair because the candidatesknow which states will vote for them and which states definately wont and the ones that they might be able to find their way in favor. for example in \"the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all\"-The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong. jeopardising the validity of the entire capaign by putting the votes in the hands of swing voters to see who wins favor with visits to poor elementary schools and weak middle school student council campaigning by promising free ice cream and kissing babies.\n\nThe Electoral College needs to be thrown out there is no fixing what is already widely regarded as an anachronism. the Electoral College is a flawed system and maybe in some utopia it might work but not in america it wont there is too much at stake to keep trying to mske it work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being competitive plays an indispensable role in children’s lives. It is argued that there is a positive impact of competitive sports on studies of adolescents, while others think that it puts a negative effect. This essay will discuss both of the arguments in the subsequent paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, Some argue that competitive sports have negative effects on the education because they waste a lot of time on sports activities. This is to say that nowadays, children are under increasing pressure to perform academically, so the time they spend on sports, can be utilized in their studies. For example, a survey in India found that In India, children have a huge burden due to the hard syllabus but they spend 2 hours per day on sports. However, I do not agree with this school of thought because of the reason elucidated below.\r\n\r\nSome people say that participating in competitive sports makes children successful in studies. This is because sports create a drive to win, which teaches them that hard work and discipline are the keys to success. Therefore, they devote equal time to sports and study and want to win both in sports and studies. For example, it is often the case that children who participate in sports are more likely to achieve higher grades than those children who do not. Therefore, I believe that this view should be preferred. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite sports competitive activities waste an immense amount of time, I believe that these sorts of activities have many benefits because it instils invaluable skills that make them successful in their studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is driverless cars really what we need? In paragraph seven near the bottom it staits that the human in the car needs to be alert. If it is a driverless car shouldnt the driver not have to be alert? if the driver still has to be awear of all the suroundings then is there realy a point in having a car that drives its self, but can not preforn simple tasks like pulling in and out of a drive way (paragraph two).\n\nAlso lets take into acount how many people may think that its okay now that there are cars that drive their selfs that they can get behind the wheel when they are intoxicated. What about a case where a person falls asleep because they are getting bored waiting on the car to tell them its their turn to drive.(paragraph Eight)\n\nSome people will not wake up to alarm clocks let alone their car telling them that it needs help. Texting and driving no doubt will get worse the driver may think the car can handel it for one more text, but it couldnt.\n\nWith how the draving laws change are we going to have to spend more money to get our cars to download the new laws and even then will we really be safe? Will the driving age change now that knowing how to drive is not really needed?\n\nYes the cars have sensors and GPS and cameras but even people have missed seeing a Deer, Racoon, and in some cases even people. Also how is a car going to know the difference between a person daydreaming and one that is alert? What if the car notifies you too late that they dont know what they are doing? Will you be left with all the blame? (papragraph 9 last sentance) Yes its an intresting concept but not intirely safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During forth fifth grade family I went rides lines none line long The line huge As brothers best friend I approached thought would never get My dad said wait didnt see point When got half way one employees shouted NUM minutes became excited Eventually made front line wait current trial But speaker came CAPS rides must stop told continue A thunderstorm rolled must safety issues considered leaving feeling shouldnt talked kids met line played games like rocks paper scissors waited pavillion line Once storm rolled away allowed us The ride thrill I wind hair small mist rain thankyou dad keeping us line", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author article about studying venus is good. My opnion is that we should study Venus because that can be a good thing for us because if something goies wrong here maybe we can use Venus so we can go live over there. Its good that we should study it so they can see that needs to be done and we need to survive if we ever have to leave earth. I read in the article that is dangerous because they are lava and earthquakes and venus has the hottest surface temperature in any planet . i rad it on paragraph 3 line 10 \" venus has the hottest surface termaperatures of any planet in out solar system\". i read about the volcanos and eraquakes on paragraph 3 line 13 \" erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes\".\n\nthey refer venus like \" the earths twin\" if they call me like that is for a reason maybe it can really be like the earth a place where humans can live there without a problem. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus> Its on paragraph 3 line 1 \" A thick atmosphere of amost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus\". the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. Its on paragraph 3 line 3. So its really dangerous but if they want to study it its for a reason maybe there is things they are can do to fix it so it can be a good place where humans can live,\n\nWe should study Venus is a perfect oppurtunity for us to study new planets and see what we can do to have another safe planet. Its gonna be dangerous but i believe that we have the right tools and the right equiment to go over there and we have really good machines so they can work in there .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To I would say reason author concluded story paragraph would different reasons To explain could mean new begining starting For example geese fly away came back means changeing So said changing starting could represent chance take test start get another chance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Society, without any doubt, is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of different people. It is often argued that parents should tell or read stories to children, whilst others disagree and think children are capable of doing such things by themselves. Although many people claim that children can entertain themselves, I firmly believe parents should read books or watch shows with children. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.\r\n\r\nInitiating with the points supporting the first school of thought. Firstly, a multitude of people claims that parents should spend as much time as possible with children such as reading bedtime stories despite any inconvenience. This is because adolescents require parents affection. Besides, if parents are swamped with work and responsibilities, they will give inadequate time to children. Thereby, it is crucial for working parents to read or tell tales to children. As an illustration, a recent study held at Standford University has shown that 45% of parents with hectic schedules read books or watch series with children so that they would not feel unloved.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, society thinks that children do not need parents to read books or tell stories. This is due to in this period of technology every child has their own cell phone or tablet with available applications where they can engross themselves thereby they do not seek parents attention. Moreover, many parents argue that children should read books and watch on their own at an early age so they would not encounter problems in later life. As a result, they will live a better life. For instance, a recent study run by an Oxford professor found that 60% of adolescents in the UK, who used to indulge in activities themselves, are seen to be successful at a very young age.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,according to my perspective, no matter how busy parents are they should give their children time by doing small things like reading books or telling stories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The car is one of the most important inventions, but it's taking so much in our life style\n\nThe car is one of the most important inventions on the human history, they give us a big adventage in the second world war, and after that, they do our life more easier, because with they we can travel big distances and be fast in other places like work or malls etc, but in the actuality is so nessesary.\n\nIn the \"world of today\" the cars are an obligation to everyone, because the people can't go walking to every site because today all the paces are so far from our houses, the people who lives in the suburbs just can't go to anywhere walkin they need a car or take the public transport, so they need other way to go anywhere without a car, like in the city of Vauban Germany, the people in Vauban goe's to the soccer games to the mall leave theyr childs in the school and everithing whitout a car!, the people in Vauban don't have a car because it's so expensive have one, in Vauabn if you want a house with a parking site you need to pay $40.000 dollars!, that's so much money and as a result of this the 70% of the Vauban's families don't have car, and a 57% of this families sold his car.\n\nAs a result of the experiment in Vauban's, the suburb's goes more small and more closely to everything doing the people more happy with this new life style, maybe we can lear something with this people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "HEY YOU!, you should join the seagoing cowboy program because. If you would like travelling mabe you hould go with here is why. Also if you like contestes and roff stuff you should go with. Also if you like horuses you should go with here is why.\n\nYou can see excavated castle in Crete and panama canal in on the way to china and acropolis in Greece. Also explorer Europe and China , gondola ride Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Also fed, gron, muck stales that the horses were in.\n\nYou can find fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You can play baseball, volleyball games in empty holds where animals were. Also table-tennis tournamennts, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games to pass the time.\n\nYou can also help people because the war put them to rounes and the animals will help them live. Also saves people from dieing and starving. You need to be strong and kind and helpful. That is why you sould be a seagoing cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Well it's clearly made from aliens,\" Bart explained.\n\n\"It's just a natural landform,\" I answered back.\n\n\"What's your proof?\" Bart asked.\n\nNasa sciencetest have discovered a natural land formation on Mars that resumbles a face. Conspericy theorists believe that it was aliens. Here is some evidence claiming thqat Nasa is right. Some natural land forms on earth(called a messa) resemble to the one on Mars. Nasa uses the highest quality cameras which would have piicked up any clues to alien life form if there was any there. Also Nasa scienctests are the ones who went to Mars and saw it up close so they can speak what they saw.\n\nNasa uses cameras with 1.56 meters spamed pixels which is ten times sharper than before. \"It reminds me of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Says Garvin. Landforms like the one found one mars can be found on Earth. These are called mesa. It's even the smae hieght as a messa on Earth and they can be different shapes which explains why this one could look like a face. Nasa sciencetests have clarafied that it's just a land form and they are the ones who saw it in person. The people can't make things up about an image since they actually haven't even seen it in person.\n\nIn colclucion, this is just a natural land form on Mars. Some natural land forms on earth(called a messa) resemble to the one on Mars. Nasa uses the highest quality cameras which would have picked up any clues to alien life form if there was any there. Also Nasa scienctests are the ones who went to Mars and saw it up close so they can speak what they saw. So this was not created by aliens.\n\n\"Do you beleive me now?\" I asked after I read all of this to Bart.\n\n\"Yeah, I guess you were right all along,\" Bart sadly agreed.\"Man I hate being wrong.\" He said.\n\nThen once the conversation ended the aliens from Area 51 escaped making it a code red. The aliens were weak since they haven't aten flesh in days. Bart and I had to head to Arizona to check it out. The aliens said that they need to go home to their planet.\n\n\"Were is your planet?\" Caption Charles asked.\n\n\" Mars,\" The alien said weakly.\n\nWe all gasped. How did we not know this the whole time. We spoke to the alien for many hours revialing more and more secrets. Apperently their civilazation was inside of mars, hiding from the out side dangers.\n\n\"Who is right now?\" Asked Bart.\n\n\"You,\" I groaned.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In most countries, providing the best education to young people is becoming a main goal. Nevertheless, some believe that teaching adults who are not able to write or read is much more crucial, and it needs more funds to be run. I completely disagree with that statement due to reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraph.\n\nSpecifically speaking of Indonesia, the number of illiterate groups is much lower these days in comparison to 20 years ago. Also, we are headed to the fact that Indonesia has numerous youngsters of productive age. Focusing on only one side, which is the illiterate group, may abandon the other one, which may have detrimental effects on the whole country. Hence, the main target must still be investing in youngsters' education. Instead, the government can support the illiterate by holding educational events, such as weekend reading clubs at social houses. By doing this, the number of people who can’t read or write can be decreased without spending too much money.\n\nFurthermore, we have many literacy aids nowadays. In public places, we see instructions followed by pictures that describe the messages. An illustration of this can be seen at the stations; there are symbols and arrows that are colour-coded, all of which are ubiquitous here. Also, the directions are also informed by human voices, which are operated automatically. Getting access to information in public places is easy. Lastly, with the advancement of artificial technology, the transformation of data is fast, affordable, and handy. For example, low-end handphones are able to operate voice recognition, and as a result, they do not need to type, which means the illiterate population can do messaging.\n\nIn conclusion, the government is not compelled to spend huge amounts of money to educate the illiterate. Because their population is limited, they may employ technology to assist them in understanding and producing information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading excerpt many obstacles builders faced attempting dock dirigibles top Empire State Building Firstly lack suitable landing area The builders knew add mooring mast top could safely land passengers could board exit Another problem faced placing thousandfoot dirigible top building would stress buildings frame This pressure along wind pressure would converted way buildings foundation Lastly biggest obstacle nature The winds top building constantly shifting violent air currents allowing back ship swivel around mooring mast Although bright idea improve transportation product never worked thought properly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you're driving you are harming the planet. Allot of people do not realize the impact that they are making on the enviroment. Besides the fact that youre releasing toxins into the air driving is also dangerous and you can harm other people if youre not careful. There should be limited car usage for multiple reasons. It is much cheaper to ride a bike, in some places when you own a car you have to pay seperatly for a garage to put it in and you also need to buy a car and cars are not cheap. Riding youre bike places is better for the enviroment and will save you money that otherwise would have to be pent on a car and putting gas in it. Also if there is limited car use then the green house gas emmision could be lowered. Another reason is that people who are driving are likely to be tense and when you're on a bike you could be much happier than driving a car everywhere.\n\nWhen you own a car there is alot of maintnence that goes into the car. Also when you own a car you need to put gas in the car. In places like Germany there are very few places to park a car and they also have to pay to put it into a garage. Owning a car could be a very costly deal and it would be much easier to ride a bike down the street to the market or other places that you need to go.\n\nThe green hosue gas emission in the United States is up to fifty percent. Driving cars everywhere is ruining our enviroment. We need this earth to last as long as we can and polluting it is not going to help us. Riding your bike places is an efficent way of transportation it may not be the fastest but it will get you where you need to go without polluting our earth. Driving cars is not only polluting our earth but it is also killing people, irresponsable drivers that drive under the infuence have killed dozens of people. Riding a bike is much more safe.\n\nIt is said that allot of people are tense when they are driving and that giving up driving has made people much happier and less stressed. When you give up driving you also give up the stresses of driving and makes you hapier.\n\nIf there is a limited use on driving it could make you ess stressed, it could lessen the pollution on earth, and it could save you money and get you to places safer and cheaper than driving a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Although Venus has many challenges that go along with wanting to study it more and explore, that shouldnt stop you from doing what you really desire.\n\nThe \"Evening star\" is very easy to see in the night time even to an amateur stargazer. They also concider Venus to be earths twin because the density, size and distance of it. Venus is the hardest planet to sudy but pursuing it is something that they should still do, eventhough there are possible consiquinces to it. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, and not a single spacecraft has touched down on venus in more than a few decades. Venus has a very thick atmosphere of about 97% carbon dioxide and the clouds are of highly corrosive and sulfuric acid. Venus is very hot but beyond that there are erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. Astronomers are fascinated by venus becasue its the most earth-like planet in our solor system. We think that long ago it was covered wiht oceans and could have supprted many forms of life , just like earth does. We do run into challenges due to all the dangerous things that could happen along the way with a visit to the planet but we arent giving up! The National Aeronautics and space administration has one compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Scientists could float above the fray. Just like jet planes can fly at a higher altitude to avoid storms, a blimp-like vehicle can hover over venus to avoid the unfriendly grounf conditions. But if we hover we cant really get a good look at the ground and study it, take samples of rock,gas,or anything from that distance. Scientist that would like to understand venus a little more will have to take the risks and get up close and personal. Scientist are still working to find a simplified electronic made of silicone that has lasted up to three weeks in the conditions through a simulator.\n\nScientist will not give up on tryign to find a way to get a better understanding of this planet we call Venus despite the challlenges they will have to face. The author done a very good job on including a lot of information and telling us how Venus IS worthy of being pursued", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the new technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble and a great idea to have in all schools that way if a student is having probelms then the technology can see it.\n\nIn the article Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto he says in paragraph 6 \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr Huang predicts Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" leading to that if a person gets out of track or gets bored the technology will pick up his or her face emotion. This leading to if the person gets bored then it makes the lesson a little more intresting. Also if a person gets confused about the lesson that they are on then the person that needs help can get the help without asking and making the person undertstand what they are doing all because the emotion technology will pick up that they are confused and need help.\n\nIn conclusion that is some reasons why we should have the new technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. That way if students need help then they can get it without them even asking because the technology will already know that the student needs help or is bored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This memior created warm touching mood explained childhood I espicially think part said Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encomposed formed backdrop life warm home shows overall perspective normal day childhood Also states family nothing blood relative really makes memior interesting also teaching lessionsAll memior great warming mood something I wo nt forget I hope I write memior heartwarming interesting one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, a remarkable natural landform was discovered on Mars, a land form known now as, The Face. Scientist have debated on whether The Face is a natural landform or created by an ancient civilization on Mars. I believe this is really just a natural landform, and the reason I believe this is because of recent evidence. Reasons why I support this are, in 1976 picture quality wasn't as advanced as it is today and, this rock formation is similar to ones that occur on Earth.\n\nThe Face, a huge rock formation, at nearly two miles long. This face like formation is also known as Cydonia. Cydonia in the mid 70's was thought to be a strange landform built by aliens. Although, really it's like any other naturally occuring landform on Earth. According to the artical \"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\" In the new updated picture of The Face, it is clearly seen as a land formation, not done by aliens.\n\nThen in 1976 picture of Cydonia was not as advanced as it is today. In the 2001 pictures, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 photo.\" This quote from paragraph 10 explains that, the picture power was very noticable different in the photograph from 1976 than 2001. This means that the pictures from 1976 are not reliable because of the poor pixel quality. Proving that The Face is just a natural landform.\n\nOn April 5th, 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor traveled to Mars and flew over Cydonia for the first time. These photos were said to be \"...ten times sharper than the original Viking photos,\" according to the artical.\n\nSo on that day in 1998 people tuned in to find out the real truth. A quote from paragraph 7 in the artical states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waitng when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform.\" In the end, it turns out that there was really no alien monuments.\n\nIn conclusion, my claim is that The Face is just a naturally occuring landform. First, are Earth landforms that are similar, called mesas. Next, pictures took in 1976, are outdated and have poor pixel quality. Lastly, since April 5th, 1998 there are pictures proving that The Face is just a natural landform. Therefore making my claim true, The Face on Mars is nothing but a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The fatures setting affected cyclist hard control hill bike rough road hotter making thisty running water Also wasnt building sight could get anything drink Also know go These features affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that using this in a classroom will be valuable. However, this could also be a bad idea. It states in the text that your freontailis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised. First of all, It is good to know that, because looking at old photographs taken you can see if the person is happy or not. Second of all, the computer can tell if a student is bored, confused, sad, and happy. Which is very good for the teacher. If a student were to be confused on something that they were learning, and did not want to ask in front of the class, it would show the teacher that they need to know more about the subject that they are struggling with. Finally, It is very inspiring how the computer can tell when your actually being serious with your facial expressions, and when you are not. I believe that all schools should try these. This will be the future, and will be good when used in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the vanus is the\n\none of\n\nsince brightest the points of\n\nlight is actually a planet often the referred is to closest in distance too venus and mars and others planetary neighbor\n\nsun at differences speed mean that something the humans have numerous spacecraft land on this good reason since no spacecratf survived challenging planet the surface a crucial consideration in this national aeronautics the value seems long time possible solution humans to study on the surface temperatures\n\nbut the air pressure would be close ton that of sea survaveble for humans on ground mission to understand maybe we should think of the would think or working on innovations that would to last long enough on other though of computers devices make calculation existing in thos dyas be more delicate by comparison during three weeks in such chaos carbide just image exposing a cell comes acid or heat capable of melting tin to be more and more striving to meet the challenge presented has valiues not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet should not be limited by dangers and boubts but should be expanded to ,eer the very edges of imagination and innovation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist riding desert middle June yet little water This affects thirsty doesnt lot water drink desert middle June makes hot Also story says comes Welchs Grape Juice Factory side building see picture young boy pouring refreshing loss juice mouth This make cyclist even thirstier continues one find water bait shop", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would say that driverless cars could be dangerous in many cases.\n\nThere could be an accident if there was a driver just going across the road and the driverless car malfunctioned.\n\nThe driverless car could crash straight into the driver no matter how people see it.\n\nThe article stated that driverless cars can't see the road themselves but they can sense when something is coming near it.\n\nEven if a driverless car sensed something near it; if the car was going at any type of speed like 25 mph it would probably hit somebody that it might not have sensed.\n\nAnything bad could happen with these new generation of cars, sticking to how regular things are is better than taking a risk of someone getting hurt.\n\nThe moral of my essay is to tell people that even if people say there is no harm done by making these cars, the truth is anything could happen and it could malfunction anytime.\n\nMy answer would be no to having driverless cars even if they made it a bit safer that doesn't mean it wouldn't accidentally crash into someone.\n\nDriverless cars would work better as a gps not as a car that could move on it's own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Other people should join the Seagoing Cowboys for many reasons.One of the many reasons are it would be an adventure if you joined the Seagoing Cowboys and its an experience you could learn so much.You could learn about horses because if you join the Seagoing Cowboys you get to feed the horses and clean and learn about them and you can also see many diiferent unique places like Europe or China and also see Greece. From my point of veiw Greece was a special place.Another thing that you can do is you can have fun on the boat. You could play table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,or whittling. All those games help pass the time from being on the ship.Also, it was a grateful oppertunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy. There are a great deal of perks to being a Seagoing Cowboy. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can help you learn many different task it teaches others a lot of things they don't know how to do. Thats why I think it's a good idea to be a Sea Cowboy because it will teach you many things that you might not know how to do and you would have a great deal of fun and many experiences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although some people believe that the aim of museums is to entertain people and give them joy, others say that museums should be educational. In my opinion, a museum should be both entertaining and educational.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is said that museums should be entertaining. This is because if museums put emphasis on entertainment, many families may be encouraged to spend their free time by going to museums rather than doing a useless activity like watching TV. For example, holding some games in museums can be an effective way to attract visitors, and bring joy to them. However, emphasizing on education can turn museums to a boring place, as a result of which this monotony may put the public off going to exhibitions. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others hold the view that museums should be educational. Firstly, because these places should broaden visitors’ horizons about their local culture and history. By following this way, it is highly unlikely for a country’s culture and background to be forgotten as museums act as reminder and help visitors to remember the history and customs of their community. For instance, putting some paintings about the ancestors of a country on display can help local people to remember parts of their history. Secondly, since museums are open to the public of all age groups they should take advantage of this opportunity and educate visitors so as to solve many problems. For instance, environmental issues can be addressed if people are taught how to reuse their stuff. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion. I believe that museums should put emphasis on both entertainment and education, in this way while people can enjoy travelling to exhibitions, they can be provided with useful information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience basicly waiting tolerating Every year family become seasonal camp ground There play fan make many life long friends Every weekend go take speed boat glass CAPS pat lake dock dock Then go fishing every part lake sit six hours This patience comes sit watch oar bobbers float smooth glass like lake sit watch talk bake sunlight It quite peaceful thowe I m school I spend time parents Then school I wait threw year patient year So sit sudden noise bobbers sinking water After theres yelling CAPS net sayings The funny Part ethier large bass small And takes patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir happy thankful He grew traditional Cuban home parents cooked able get great sense family Not blood relatives everyone would There racism within neighborhood They came togather Many people dinner everynight His parents loved sacrificed lot His simple house home These things created happy thankful mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would Google make things easy by making a driverless car or would you stick with a normal passenger car? In my understanding I never knew google was trying to make a way to have driveless cars. Im thinking is it safe, will it help with transportation, and will it be alot of technology problems to control. Here is reson why that might be good to have driveless cars.\n\nFirst,Google been working on this project for years. In the passege, it says,\" Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\"Google is trying to find companies that are willing to help or have some type of different thing that would make driveless cars better and smarter. In the text, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special tets track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the cars.\n\nHere are reason they might not be good to have. In paragrph 2, it says,\" Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways, or dealing with complicated traffic issues\". Are they reliable for navigation or accidents? Google thinks by using laser and updated sensors would help the car.\" The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there, and the mapping wasn't there\", said in paragraph 6.\n\nGoogle is trying to help and make ways to have good, easy technology. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Traffic laws are written with the assumpton that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars.\"\n\nIn conclusion, Google and other companies are trying to make things better for people in this world with new technology. Is it good for them to make this is type of product or new machineries? This story tells everything about it and if its right for people in communies safety. I think it might be good to have driverless cars. Do you think its good to have driverless cars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology for 2 reasons. Driverless cars are run off of computers and can malfunction easily. Also driverless cars will make drivers lazy.\n\nDriverless cars are pretty dangerous for many resaons. One reason is that they run off of computers. How could that be dangerous you say? Well for example driverless cars have new features like \"Traffic Jam Assisstant\", \"Antilock brakes\", and \"Driver Assisstance\". These features are not always reliable, they can malfunction at any given moment in time. And they require a human to drive. Driverless cars are designed to notify the driver when the road requires them to take over. These features could malfunction easily.\n\nThe second reason as to why driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology, is because they will make driver lazy. If a person gets a driverless car they dont have to pay as much attention to the road as they need to. The driver will grow lazier thanks to these new features the car provides. And if the machinery were to malfunction the driver and the manufacturer should be blamed for the damage that is caused by this. Driverless cars are limited in: California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia because of these reasons.\n\nTherefore driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology because of those reasons. Driverless cars are proven not to be \"driverless.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of the new technology to read the emotional expressions of people is not valuable. If people want to tell you how they feel, then they probably will. I do not think you should \"invade\" their privacy, feelings, and emotions. People have their own feelings and they have them because they are THEIRS. If they wanted to share their feelings then they would. But a lot of people want to keep their feelings to themselves.\n\nHumans every day kind of do the same thing as this new technology does. The article states \" In fact, we as humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" Which is true, because if say we see a friend who is upset about something, and they are not really crying or anything, but you can just tell by their face that they are upset; then that's using a \"humanized version\" of the new technology. That is almost the same thing as the new technology, except with the new technology it literally SCANS your face and has access to your personal emotions. It invades your private mind.\n\nAnother reason that supports my opinion is that the student's peers could find out the results from a person's scan and tell everybody when most people want to keep their feelings/emotions to themselves. This is not a good idea, it is sharing to all kinds of other people how someone feels and that is not okay. You have to let people have their own thoughts. When they did the scan on da Vinci's Mona Lisa painting, that is fine because it's just a painting. The painting is not a living thing with feelings.\n\nI think that if someone wants to use the new technology to scan historic pictures or historic things then that is okay. I think it's important to understand our past. If finding out what someone from the past was feeling helps us understand history then yeah sure! Why not do it. It's not going to hurt anybody or anything like if you were to use the technology on something living.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that we should not use the new technology on anything that is living and has feelings. But I think that it is okay to use it on historic things (like da Vinci's Mona Lisa painting) so we can really truly understand the word's past. It is important for people to have their own feelings, emotions, and thoughts. It is also okay for people to share their feelings. But they should not always have to share them. I feel like in a way, this new technology is \"forcing\" people to share their emotions, feelings, etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "woke cal cousin saying wanted hang introduce cousin never met got phone hung scurried shower got ready fast could got house frantically ran door opened really fast expecting kind reaction new cousin one got nt expected right opened door began cracking laughing couple minutes got kinda mad nt know laughing looked realized pants rushed back room put shorts came back living room still coach laughing stupid mistake sat couch across asked laughing purpose joke nt believe nt blame stupidest thing say circumstance stopped laughing cousin asked thing iv done like replied started stories dumb stuff like ended topic talked half day reciting dumb stories embarrassing turns made dumb mistake made easy us get along start talking soon walked reason good relationship since met in end glad made us really close laugh either us stupid stuff s story laughter element relationship cousin", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's 50/50 because sometimes doing things like reading peoples emotions with some tech device that someone made could make. The person they doing to they could get angry or not trust them if it was a friend thta did that to them or. Then some people could like it they could like how they feel how there emotions really do apper on a device that can read emotions or show. The percent you got for each one and there is other things thta could read your emotion muscles and many other things like going to a mirror and try something that could show youn that emotion you have by making faces that could reveal your emotion. Thers many ways you could show your emotions but if a some tech device does that for you and gets that wrong could get people mad or just beleave it. There dosn't have to be no tech device to show your emotion you can find that out yourself your yourself there isnt any one other you be yourself don't a device do that be great and show the emotions you want to other see that your happy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The value of using technology to read students' emotional expressions is an outstanding idea . The new software , the Facial Action Coding System , can help you understand everyone's emotions around us. This new software , has been develped to detect the feelings of others without them announcing their emotions .\n\nIn Mona Lisa's picture she looks happy and angry . The text states , \"She's 83 percent happy , 9 percent disgusted , 6 percent fearful , and 2 percent angry\" . With the computer software you can use video imagery to recognize facial movements . The software can identify mixed emotions and and any neutral expressions . For example , most humans wear their emotions on their sleeves , but most humans can't describe each facial trait . The facial expressions on each emotions aren't always very universal , individuals often express their emotions in different degrees . Dr . Huang states , \"Most human communication is nonverbal , including emotional communication\" . There are ways to demostrate emotions through computers too . Computers can become an effective human instructor if they recognize the different emotions .\n\nIn conclusion , the technology usage of \"The Facial Action Coding System\" is a great usage of technology to read students emotional expressions because it will allow us to have empathy for eachother . We unconsciously imitate eachother's facial expressions . We could all help eachother in the world , and talk out our feelings instead of holding it in .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By reading memoir I know Family Just Family blood relative family loving eachothor always eachother The author greatfull For everything parents doneFor example paragraph says I alway greatful parents love sacrifice", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author s story happy gratefull Happy even though new country came purpose living culture past family family My mother father came country couage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind family friends careers country loved Also greatfull sees parents could happy I always gratefull parents love sacrifice I warmth kitchen humble house cuban feast always filled air scent music life love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This persuasive essay is about why you should join the the Seagoing Cowboy Program. The Seagoing Cowboy Program is an amazing program with a lot to offer. You could change your life easily by going into the program.\n\nLuke Bomberger had no idea his life would change but \"He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nLuke said that \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy\" He also said \"Besides helping people I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\n\nIt's an amazing opportunity because you get to help people, and you get to see beautiful places like Europe and China. You get to have free time and few jobs let you have free time. \"Luke found time to have fun on board he played table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and even whittling. If that's not enough I don't know what is. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is just an opportunity you don't want to miss.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers positive effect people They give ability talk people online friends also family live far away also allow kind work ca nt done hand even allow people learn far away places people First computers positive effect people They give ability talk people online friends also families live far away For example half family live mom uses internet communicate Secondly computers positive effect people They allow homework cant done hand Such essays typed ca nt hand written projects school Lastly computers positive effect people Computers allow people learn far away places people For example I first came country I nt know much I research learn great things In conclusion computers effect people They give ability talk people online friends also families live far away also allow kind work ca nt done hand even allow people learn faraway places people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of smart/driverless cars. I have chosen to support these cars because they will use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus, they can sense the road and dangers better, and the cars require little human attention.\n\nFirstly, the cars will potentially replace taxi services. I think this will be a great idea because while you would still have to pay for the service, there is no human element of error. If there is an element of error, however, you will be the one at fault because you are the only passenger and driver. I believe the replacement of the traditional taxi service is a good thing.\n\nThe smart cars are good at sensing dangers on the road ahead. Because the cars have technology that can even start to turn on the brakes before the driver can, the driver will be safer and does not have to respond as quickly. The \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" is a good development because the driver must still remain alert but the car does most of the work.\n\nLastly, I think the smart cars are a good idea to develop because they allow the driver to be safe in a vehicle that they are not in full control of. A project manager driver from BMW, Werner Huber states, \"We have to interpret the driving in a fun new way.\" I think that if the developers of the smart car add a type of entertainment to help the passenger stay interested, then the driver will still be alert.\n\nI believe the development of the smart car is a good idea because people will not have to take a taxi anymore, the smart cars are more reliable, and the smart cars will require less attention from the driver. I believe that the smart cars will do a good job on the road and that there are very few risks if they are tested correctly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The last thing I would want children seeing offensive material thought learning zone Somewhere people learn new things expand knowldge If dirty magazines movies sexuality offensive music inappropriate websites available children completely defeats purpose safe learning enviornment My opinion libraries used primarily educational purposes That means appropriate books magazines also age appropriate Computers also great resource contain many offensive material My standpoint issue computers monitored If someone wants look inappropraite images websites time privacy home It allowed public innocent children exposed That nt fair kids nt fair parents tried protect kind suggestive material I m sure many people would disagree proposal However type people nt morally structured I nt kids look Or perhaps nt concerned issue They argue really severe need computers monitored blocked websites Yes think real harm But way raised causing think respect With magazines argue children exposed suggestive material sometime But everyone start thinking like morals would forgotten In cases morality might issue In fact religion might important issue A lot people religious particular religion looking suggestive unholy material Parents want walk children find starting images go believe They think losing child s innocense Having things open accessable kids teenagers could unintentionally send message indulging sexual activities acceptable according religion When I little girl I remember going often mother pick books school I distinctly remember seeing naughty magazines laying across table I walking toward children s section My mother appauled laying open like especially right next children s books She complained one librarians asked please remove The librarian apologized agreed placement magazines little line Ever since mom little sceptical dreads going I suppose I involved issue reason informative article I write place blame anyone judge people beliefs On contrary purpose writing inform general public issues explain side arguement I nt see reason materials hand almost anyone access I understand need obtainable need I m hoping reading I opened eyes concerned parents least made aware matter Thank time Sincerely", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every day I must patient difficult things I must patient I playing watching sports Every weaken brother play play football league bewaring I bit almost two hours games parents make wat game My favorite speed football since I first base man eat fields I wait ball I help team I also patient meap long I must wait people done As see I patient many situations", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph give sense hope growth The flower represents Saengs homelard makes feel comforted It connects emotions reminds way The growth flourishing hibiscus corresponds flourish Saeng When blooms true piece home able take test The story overcoming obstacles adjusting change The visual nearly lyrical expression blooming hibiscus makes reward result struggles seem much beautiful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph alot different reasons One reason author could concluded story paragraph might try A second reason author could concluded story paragraph probably wanted try make mother proud A third reason author could concluded story paragraph probably really felt really disappointed In conclusion mess something try maybe alot better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys. You get to do so many amazing things. I have a lot of fun doing it myself and I think everyone else can too! I have had great new adventures in this program. I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it helps out others (including animals), you get to go new places with new people, and because it is a great opportunity.\n\nMy first reason on why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because it can help out people in need.\"UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" That is one example that the program lets us help, not only just the people but also the animals too. I also found \"They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece- with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\" That is one reason why people should join this program.\n\nAnother reason people should join this program is because you get to go new places in the world, for example I went to Greece! \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" Also another piece of evidence is \"So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy; a city with streets of water.\" This is another example of why new people should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nAn example is because it is a great opportunity for people. You get to do so many new things with new people. \" But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger.\" Being a Seagoing Cowboy is an eye opening experience for me. I also found in the text is states\n\n\"It opened the world to him. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" he says.\" This program is a great experience and adventure. I know I couldn't pass down the opportunity once it was handed to me. The article says \"Luke couldn't say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\"\n\nThese are just a couple reasons why I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It can help others and animals. It is a great time you will have with people and with all the new places you can see and explore. I had fun with this program and I think a lot of otherr people can too. So once again this is why I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator i really think we should keep the electoral college. I mean look at how far we have come in are lives were we have kept this system working for years and it has not faild us yet. If we try to change IT now we will probally screw every thing up and it will probally be to confusing because of how the world is today.\n\nIf you look back at the probloms we had in the past we got passed them and came back stronger and improved we really just need new electors and just keep the system the same but get out with the old people and in with the new ones. \"This method is a non democratic method also\". this method also cant get any more fair because the people vote who they want and whoever has more votes then they win. whats not fair about that?\n\nthe electoral college avoids the problom of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast. I really think we should keep this method so in the future we can always go back in history and talk about this method and the 23rd amendment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many problems obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock nature At ft winds strong unpredictable get close dock dirigible On top nature laws prevented landing Airships could fly low urban areas even attempting approach area would illegal This idea still posed great deal potential danger even laws wind nt exist Many dirigibles made using hydrogen highly flammable In highly populated area New York City one catch fire damage would horrifying I hope Al Smith willing pay thousands dollars title world s tallest building nt get mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program changed my life. It opened me up to new experiences and opportunities. That is why I believe other people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program too. Here are some reasons why I believe you should also join along.\n\nFirst of all by joining you get to help those in need. While I was a Seagoing Cowboy we had to care for a country's animals that were shipped overseas. Which was an amazing experience for a small-town boy like me, which surely this would be a great experience for you too. Another example is that you get to visit many different places. Once I was able to see Europe and China, even Acropolis, Greece. Also I got take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. It was an amazing experience that you would feel almost everyday if you joined the program. May I add you will have fun? Once when we took return trips, after the animals been unloaded, we would play baseball and volleyball in the empty holds where the animals were housed. We also would play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and even play games to pass the time. It was a fun time.\n\nThese are my examples of why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Surely, if you join you will be open to new experiences and opportunities as I was. I hope you take these reasons in consideration and join, I bet it'll be an opportunity of a lifetime!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is clear that cars by far is the most popular mean of transportation. However, using cars leads to many problems to society and environment which should be solved by both government and individuals.\nThe foremost problems caused by having more cars is congestion. Instead of travelling by bicycles, public transport or walking, many people use cars to commute to work which is the main cause of traffic jam. For instance, In Hanoi, people spend a lot of time traveling in rush hours because of the traffic which causes low working efficiency and wasting of time resources. Furthermore, Emissions from cars results in environmental problems, especially air pollution. This will effect on people health and lead to some serious diseases such as lung cancer and asthma if they breath in a lot of smoke from cars every day.\nThere are several actions could be taken to decline the car usage. Firstly, government should enact policy to encourage people use other forms of vehicles which are friendly to environment. For example, if more cycling lanes are built, more people would ride a bike to work instead of driving. Secondly, they can increase tax on cars and parking fee as well as develop public transport such as train and bus to decrease the number of people buying private cars. Finally, it is more important to raise people awareness of the problems of having more cars by advertising and having those public to all citizens.\nIn conclusion, massive uses of cars cause many problems but a possible solution can be adapt to prevent bad effects of them on environment and society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although the idea of coexistence between climate change and humans appear reasonable, this cannot be viewed as the ultimate approach for humankind to combat climate change.\nThere are a number of compelling reasons why the coexistence is fraught with pitfalls. First, climate change is largely shaped by human activities rather than nature itself. For example, in order to produce the energy that drives the world's economy, most nations rely on carbon-rich fuels like coal, oil and gas, which directly correlates with the intensification of global warming. Second, even if citizens agree to keep the environment the way it is, corporations, especially in the manufacturing and mining industries, would not as that would affect their profits. Therefore, it can be implied that if corporations were not held accountable for the contribution to global warming as in the case of coexistence, the issue of climate change would inevitably be exacerbated.\nIt is more economically sound to actively prevent climate change than to ignore it. In fact, the costs, either financial or non-financial, of dealing with future consequences of climate change can be overwhelming. For instance, the increase in intensity and frequency of storms can cause massive destructions and deaths in many coastal areas, which would take decades to recover. In addition, rising temperatures have also contributed to the extinction of species worldwide. It should be noted that the extinction is irreversible and comes at great cost the the ecosystem and apparently humans living within it.\nIn conclusion, actively combating global warming must be regarded as top priority given the high urgency. Governments and corporations worldwide should take steps to ensure that climate chagne remains at bay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to be a cowboy who crosses the sea? Now you can, if you join the seagoing cowboys program! I think you should join the program because you get to help nations recover their supplies and explore the world as you travel which I thought was really fun to do.\n\nOne reason I think you should be a seagoing cowboy is to help the nations by giving them more things they need such as food, animals, and more. I think helping the nations by doing this in the war will contribute to them so they could win if I give them the things they need to win the war.\n\nAnother reason I think people should join is to have fun. I say that because while you are at sea you could explore different places around the world. While being a seagoing cowboy, I visited places like Europe and China while i was working as a seagoing cowboy. I also went to Greece to see an Acropolis, and I even went to an excavated castle in Crete. When the animals are unloaded you could play many things such as Table-tennis, baseball, volleyball, and many more in the empty holds where the animals were.\n\nIn conclusion, i think people should join the seagoing cowboys program because you get to help the nations regain their supplies, and you get to have fun by exploring around the world. You should join because the seagoing cowboys program is fun and helpful to many people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Winter hibiscus Ho narrator never clearly indicates test Saeng failed However subject matter word choice clear test important Saeng mother also new life Throughout story saeng s longing homeland powering The flood memories came back purchases hibiscus obviously painful part everyday life Saeng working working hard keep memories Vietnam alive knowing must learn live customs lifestyle There somethings dosent need change like passing test Saeng realizes use memories keep spirits alive use motivation This last sentance story impowering learned use things together memory change when hibiscus budding I take test again", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" This planet is worthy of the risks and issues of exploration. While the author maintains to cross his point, he uses evidence and facts to change the readers' ideas of this messy planet, by comparing it to more similar terms that are more pleasent to the reader.\n\nFirst the author starts by explaining and describing the unabitable conditions of the planet. The author states that \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth;\" Which are refering to the extreme temperatures of \"average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" and the \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 percentage carbon dioxide blankets.\" Second he follows to counterclaim his points by questioning, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing fursther visits to its surface?\" This persuades the reader to question themselves, What is so bad about Venus? or more important What is so good about Venus? Which he replays and answers by comparing, once again, Venus with our own planet, Earth. He states that, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Changing the reader's idea or previous image, that he already provided, passing from an \"inhospitable planet\" to a planet that \"was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\"\n\nIn conclution the author crosses his point by using evidence of a very dangerous, and unabitable planet, and what it once was and how similar it was to what is now our Earth, or also \"Venus' twin.\" As a way to persuade the reader into believing that Venus is worthy of its investigations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An unusual face was spotted by Viking 1 in 1976. Looking at evidence that were provided, it shows that the \"unusual face\" found on Mars was just a mistake. Even though they had picture of the unusual face the first time they spotted, it was a really blurry one so it created illusions for people to make it look like there was actually a face on there. It was later proven by Mars Global Surveyor that it was just a natural landform on Mars using photography. Therefore, pictures don't lie which makes the \"unusual face\" just another natural landform.\n\nIn 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia, where the unusual face was found, to snap a picture of the unusual face which was ten times sharper than the Viking photos. Since the picture was pretty clear, it reveal what was actually there on Mar's surface. It proved that it was just a natural landform and that it wasn't any alien monument. People may say that since it's winter it was the cloudy time to of the year of for Mars so other things such as clouds could've had an effect on the picture but it doesn't change the fact that it's just a landform no matter how unsatified the people were.\n\nIn addition, NASA unveiled the image saying that it was just a huge rock formation. They noted that it resembles a human head because of the shadows. It was creating illusions for human eyes so they didn't see the actual object but instead they saw a face on Mars. Although, some scientists believed that the face was an alien artifact which was what got Mars Glbal Surveyor to even begin taking pictures of Mars to prove that it was just a natural landform. Overall, the face on Mars is just an illusion even though some people believe it's real.\n\nHowever, people might think it's real. Looking at the evidence provided by the Vikings which was the first photo of the face on Mars, it really resembled an Egyptian Pharaoh. Even a few scientist believed that it was an alien artifact and it even became a pop icon. It was starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines and radio talk shows which mean people actually believed it. The face on Mars attracted many people's attention. Which is why people could say it's real since the majority believes it but what really matter is how it's proven. It was proven using a camera that snap pictures clearly. Everyone was later informed that it was just a natural landformed because of the picture taken in 2001.\n\nIn conclusion, the face found on Mars was just a natural landform that looked like a face because of a blurry picture taken by the Vikings in 1976. Many scientists and people believed that it was real but it was just an illusion to the human eyes. In 2001, Marlin's team took a snap of the face on Mars which prove that it was just a natural landform. Garvin compared it to the landforms on Earth so that people could understand and believe that it was just a natural landform. Therefore, the picture taken in 2001 was an evidence that proved that the unusual face found on Mars was just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now and days, our world has transformed from using simple transportation to one source: the automobile. However, recent studies have shown our slow progression for the past years, discovering other ways of getting to point A to point B by having programs, reducing pollution and smog along the way, and living in an affordable economy.\n\nTo begin with, cities in our world have proven to be \"car-free cities\" by allowing programs to show other ways of transportation and reducing pollution and smog along the way. In Bogota, Colombia, a program where it is \"a car free day\", millions of Colombian's hike, bike, skate, or take buses to work and as Enrique Riera mentions in source 3, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution (paragraph 24)\". Colombia has been hosting this program since the 1990's and it has spread around the world; the influence Colombia has done is beyond incredible. Although the program is not held everyday, it impacts the world slowly. Also, in source 2, the usage of car in France has decreased drastically because of the \"intensifying smog (paragraph 14)\". Because their tax policy \"favors diesal over gasoline (paragraph 16)\", they're required to use diesal, but the French decide to rebel to save the enviroment, in result causing delivery companies to complain. Although, because the French did use less cars it made the smog clear up. In all, programs such as the one held in Colombia influence all arts of the world with showing other ways of transportation and even saving the enviroment.\n\nIn addition, the world continues to reduce the use of cars because it becomes more affordable to the people. When the economy crashed in the United State's, people relied on their cars, until they realized it was too expensive to pay gas, pay parking, but needed an alternative and as it says in source 4, \"people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit...(paragraph 36)\". People do not want to go back to a car based economy. They're finding other affordable sources. Not only does the usage of cars affect people financially, but also emotionally. In Vauban, Germany, as a result of forbidding street parking, house garages and fee's, 70 percent of the famalies do not own cars and Heidrun Walter, a mother of two, who usually bikes, expesses herself about the situation in source 1, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\". Clearly, the use of less cars result in a finacial plus and an emotional change as well.\n\nIn conclusion, \"car free days\" are much more effective in a way that demonstrates the world other options of transportation, an opportunity to save the enoviroment, and an affordable economy to all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi,I am Luke.I want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.Oh,you want reasons why you should join.Well during the adventure I got to sight see.And I got hard work. to do which was fun.And when the animals are unloaded we play fun games.And I will tell you about it.So I sugest you to be a seagoing cowboy.\n\nI got hard work but it was fun.Two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean and from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China can give you hard work.The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day.Bales of hay and bag of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship.And the stalls needed to be cleaned.All of these things was hard work.\n\nDuring that trip I got to sight see.I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.So was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water.And I have also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panana Canal on his way to China.It was great seeing them.\n\nAnd I got to play games with the others when the animals were unloaded.I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals were housed.Table tenis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped past the time when I was onboard.All of these things are fun when I was onboard.\n\nThese are the reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.I hope these three reasons convince you to join.So this is why you should join this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. These details from the article have influenced this paper to be for the development of these driverless cars. These cars could save many lives, possibly benefit our planet and the future of the human race. They have the potential to change the world and will help us as people live healthier lives.\n\nThese cars will have the ability to notify a person when they need to take control of the vehicle. This will allow the car and the driver to comunicate and will reduce the likelyhood of a collision due to an unaware driver. This feature has the potential to save numerous lives. This may also play a role when a person is tired, sick, or the person that will recieve the collision.\n\nThese cars will come with in-car entertainment to allow the driver to relax and be entertaind while not driving. Since the cars will be able to comunicate when a person is needed to take over, there should not be any problems with when a person is needed on the wheel. These cars will have sensors that will scan the area around them to help it navigate. They will be able to do most of the driving tasks required on a regular road.\n\nThese cars will help our planet and the other things living on it. Since the cars have been predicted to uses half the fuel used in a normal car today, there will be significantly less polution. While protecting the life on Earth, these cars will help stop changes in the climate. Global warming may start to be a thing in the past if there is less pollution from cars. This will allow us to live much healthier lives.\n\nThese cars could be life changing. The world as we know it would be better with the development of these cars. Their potential will be life changing and the start of new ones. These cars could save many lives, possibly benefit our planet and the future of the human race. These cars have the potential to change the world and will help us as people live healthier lives. This is why I believe we should start the development of these driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever had a job in high school when it was a huge deal. Well if you did not i'm going to inform you about a teenager who has one. If you have a bet it is nothing like this one! So, now I am going to give you some deatials about this passage. Which side would you pick.\n\nFirst who would want to miss out a job of a life time! In the passage it states , \"Luke could not say no.\" If Luke could not say no then why would you. Also the text states, \"He knew it was an opportunity of an life time.\" That should be another reason why you should be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys program. All the things that Luke was saying I would want to sign up myself.\n\nNext ,but on the other hand it is a terrible idea to go to the prgram. One reason is it is a long way to travel . In the text it states, \"It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from eastern coast of the U.S.A and a mouth to get to China. also you will miss all of your loved ones. These are some reasons why\n\nyou should not join the program.\n\nIn conclusion I think it was a good Idea to join the prgram.I have stated\n\nwhy and why not to join. Also they exsplain them to to give you more deatials. This job is a great opportunity . Luke side of this essay is right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The limiting on car usage would be a huge positive on the world and the people. As everyone knows, cars now adays are the key to \"Making it around the world\". They say cars make your life easier and its good for the economy. Some of those facts are true but at the same time not exaclty.\n\nAutomobiles are the \"linchpin of suburbs\". People can not live without their cars and need them for where ever they need to go ; work,the park,the store. Sooner or later in the future humans might not live at all with the usage of cars. In the article In German Suburbs,Life Goes On Without Cars, it says \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmisions in Europe\". All these fums and such are beimg spread in the air. And in Paris, pollution was a big effect on the peopel. Filing the air with smokes and harmful gases that affect a persons health. Do you want to go outside and have a hard time breathing?- Nope i didnt think so. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France after intensifying smog. Diesel fuel was the cause of that only because France favors diesel over gasoline. This decrease in cars will be better for implications for carbon emissions and the environment.\n\nWhen you buy a car, you need space for it to stay in. A space can cost up to $40,000 max. That is alot of money you could save for other appliances and daily life products. Also with a car you may get fines for speeding or anything in that state. In the article Paris bans driving due to smog Robert Duffer said motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined. The less cars the better! why go through all that trouble. As well as less cars means no highway usage meaning more construction for buildings and stores. And think about it! More stores you can shop at and save more money to shop at those stores because you arent buying gas everywhere you go and paying for car innsurance.\n\nCars are benefitial for alot of things. But for the people and our future,it would be best to cut out cars and make our lives healthier and better. It will become a huge positive on the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Companies are spending more on marketing than ever before. With increasing competition, businesses are promoting their products aggressively. Therefore, I believe customers are getting influenced immensely. This essay will discuss the consumers' response by these advertisements and some solutions.\n\n\nFirstly, there is a lot of false information that companies convey about their products. This leads to people believing everything they watch on television or online. The main reason is the cut-throat competition, and to survive they have to sell their products, no matter what. Agencies usually hire already popular celebrities, to gain everybody's trust. For instance, to promote health supplements, athletes are chosen, the customer starts connecting the healthy lifestyle and fitness of that sportsmen with the supplement. One possible solution to the problem can be, celebrities should research all about the brand before endorsing. It will ensure the audience gets the right product.\n\n\nSecondly, with marketing we end up having more items than we need. Misleading promotions are the main reason behind it. For example, if we ever see a luxury brand commercial, they always focus on rich people's lifestyle. This is because, they want to connect their brand with luxury, which has a little to do with the actual product. I feel, government should monetize these commercials, they should check the product's authenticity first, and any type of online marketing should also be checked.\n\n\nTo conclude, companies will always find loopholes in the system, to exploit it. Unless the government impose strict rules, the problem will only escalate. Also, It should be the responsibility of citizens, to check what to trust because the false information will be there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be useful and should continue to be developed because they would be potentially safer, more efficient, and help drivers by making driving a less intensive and dangerous activity.\n\nDriverless cars would be safer then current cars. One way this woud be true is because many driverless (and current with-driver cars) have features that allow them to sense danger in traffic. For example, as stated in paragraph 7, it is shown that BMW is developing a car that can steer, accelerate, and brake. Even though the cars are not completely driverless, further development of the cars could possibly fix these issues. Driverless cars may also be able to find each other via GPS to avoid collisions.\n\nDriverless cars could be possibly more efficient than current cars. For example, a driverless car with a GPS could possibly find the quickest and most fuel-efficient route to a destination. Another thing driverless cars may be able to do more efficiently is determine the best way to save gas or prevent wear and tear to the car on a case by case basis. For example, a car with a smart computer may be able to decide whether it is more fuel efficient to turn off the engine or leave it running, depending on the amount of time it will be left idle. To combat wear and tear, a driverless car may be able to accurately determine the best distance and amount of time to brake to keep the damage to tires and brakes as low as possible.\n\nDriverless cars could make driving less dangerous and intensive for drivers. Currently, drivers must keep their eyes on the road and have full awareness of everything going on around them to drive safely. A driverless car with safety features similar to the ones described in paragraphs 7 and 8 would allow the driver to not worry as much about what is going on around them. This may allow them to do other work or concentrate on something else, like children in the car.\n\nDriverless cars would generally be a good thing to continue researching and developing, as they would make driving safer, more efficient, and less intensive for drivers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System technology to read the emotional expressions of students or a singular student, is and could be very valuable. This technology could help teachers with finding out if a student in their classroom may be depressed, anxious, worried, confused, etc. In the passage it states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused.\" In the passage it also states that \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This technology could help teacher's drastically with figuring out what lessons students are struggling the most with and what they can change to make there lessons slightly easier and more effective. F.A.C.S technology could not only possiably help improve students grades and comprehension of the material they are learning, but also help in my personal opinion could drastically with school shootings. If the teachers had the Facial Action Coding System in their classroom's then they could possiably save a child's life. Being able to see if a child/student is depressed or not could greatly benefit the saftey of schools. It could also help teachers recognize that a student in their class is struggling and they can get the student/students the proper help they need, which could possibly help prevent a student from taking their own life. In conclusion, the use of the Facial Action Coding System technology to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable because it could help teachers get students who may be depression, the proper help they need which could possibly prevent a child from taking their own life. The technology could help teachers see if a student in their classroom is forcing a \"fake\" smile to hide that they are upset, anxious, worried, depressed, etc. Or if te student is truly happy and has a genuine smile. This technology could greatly possibly help techers learn what they need to spend more time working on in the classroom. This could also help the teachers learn what they could modify in their lesson plans to make them slightly easier for there students. With this is in mind, the F.A.C.S tecnology use in the classroom could ultimately help not only the students but the teachers, paraprofessionals, subsitute teachers, etc. It could help improve students test scores and overall learning environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit author uses features setting show effects cyclist In essay rider gets directions two old men perch In essay said Never accept braid advice collection old timers havent let able centres porch since carter office This shows old man could wrong places change Also short cut almost runs water The essay ststed I would conserve water go inward hour se test inner spirit He running water determination get last terrain affects The Hills prove challenge limited supply water The essay states Flat roads upleed sheed rolling hills This shows extremely determined Even though hills added struggle made That author used features setting add struggle cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating debate over the significantly ever-increasing advertisement day in day out. Although this problem may have both pros and cons, I believe its advantages may outweigh its disadvantages.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, there are several benefits of advertising for the time being. Advertisement can create great opportunities for businesses to sell more products with high quality because more people know about that product on social media. The TH true milk company, which can be cited for certain examples, has sold a great many products and their revenue increased significantly after advertising their products on online social networks such as Facebook, youtube, and google. Compared to other products which are not introduced in social media, the counterpart will bring numerous significant profits for the company. Therefore, advertising plays a very important role for businesses.\r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of advertisement are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. Nowadays, some people are not keen on marketing activities because too many ads are annoying for people using social networks or watching TV. For instance, when they are watching some films on TV, advertising videos appear suddenly and it takes them much time to watch something that they do not have a demand for and they can feel unhappy and uncomfortable. Therefore, it brings a great volume of complications and negative influences on people’s lives. \r\n\r\nIn short, advertisements have either advantages or disadvantages in user’s experiment. However, I would contend that it would do more good than harm.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience It warm I sisters house playing wii niece brother law matt comes living room says CAPS bored lets something today decided would go michigans adventures day My sister told us pack coler snacks drinks put pillows blankets back seat car But little know actually six hours go six flags matt mom planning weeks After car two hours moaned are yet no said were lost oh I replyed But I really didnt think lost weve michigans adventures thosand times For rest ride pretty quiet In words asleep When I woke niece shaking excitment I stretched squinted suns raise eye adjusted light I looked around realised six flags When got first ride rode supeman ride sit things lock around legs stomache tilts like flying wanted ride bad line hours long While standing line found things like swing play metal railing play I spy sorts things finally ride I realized really fun worth patient didnt complain", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although some might argue and have a different opinin, facial recognition is extreamly valuable in the class room. It can tell if a student is confused with the subject. It is also able to recognize if the student is getting sidetracked or bored, with that information, it can modify the program to better teach that student.\n\nAs we advance in the technological feild robots and computers are more capable then they used to be. Computers in the schooling system is not an uncommon thing and it is used as a tool to teach students. The FACS program will be extreamly valuable to students. Every student learns at their own pace, where one student understands it right away another student might have difficulties with the subject that they are learning. With FACS this is no longer an issue, the computer system can read based off of facial expression if the student is understanding the subject or if they're having troubles. With this information the computer system can modify the teaching method or go back over parts that it belives the student is having troubles with. This goes along with if the student is slowly starting to get sidetracked and bored with the computer as most children do. The software can read this and make the subject more appealing to the student to keep them on task so that they can best learn the subject matter.\n\nAll around FACS is a very binefical program and it will help a lot of students that move at different paces than others. Teachers can not help every student simultaniosly. With this program they dont have to worry about this because the computer will recognize the emotion of the student and will modify to best fit that student specifically so that they can learn at the same capability as others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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