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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you were going cross country on interstates the whole time, why not let your car do the driving for you? Driverless car are great when you do not have city traffic, but it also could be dangerous when something fails in the car. The Google car has driven more than half a million miles without crashing, but it is also not completely driverless. Dirverless cars are the future; this is what the future needs.\n\nMany say that driverless technology is not safe. Some also think that becuse they technology is likely to fail, whoes faut will it be if someone is injured. Many states have limited use of semi-autonomous car. In 2013, BMW develpoed \"Traffic Jam Assistance.\" The car can handle speeds up to 25 mph, but it make the driver hold the wheel. The steer, accelerate, and brake do it themselves, but working through accidents and work zones require human skill. None of the car that are built today have complete driverless technology. Tesla has projeted torelease a 2016 car that is capable of being on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Which means, we are that much closer to developing a full time automatic cars.\n\nWould the drive or the manufacture get blamed if the technology in the car fails? Even if new laws are passed it still woud not resovle the issues with the driverlss cars. Many car that are on the driverless systems, are not really driver less because thay still will need the human skill to guild it around work zones and accidents. Driverless cars are the future of technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress.\" There are 538 electors in the Electoral College. In order for a candidate to become President, a majority of 270 votes is required. I am in favor of the Electoral College because of the certainity of outcome and becouse of the states.\n\nFirst, I am in favor of the Electoral College because of the certainty of the outcome. Because of the number of electors is even means that there could be tie. But, people don't understand that is very unlikely. As said in Source 3: In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, \"A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible-it happened in 2000- but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.\" So, most of the things that people stress over about the Electoral College are very unlikely to hsppen.\n\nSecondly, I am in favor of the Electoral College because of the states. Two types of states are big states and swing states. Big states are the states that have the largest population that \"the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance\" on. One of the other types of states are the swing states. Swing states use the winner-take-all method. Swing states don't vote for the President based on his or her political party. They vote for the President based on who they are or who they like better out of the candidates so you never really can know who they are going to vote for.\n\nIn conclusion, I am in Favor of the Electoral College because of the certainty of outcome and because of the states. The Electoral College have sources to rely on so that it won't fail. Most people just don't realize it because there has been a couple problems with the Electoral College before but, the Electoral College is a good system to have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders The Mooring face many obstacles working allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building In order ensure safety eliminate problems involving stress load pressure dirigible building building would need modified strengthened accommodate blimps modification would cost sixty thousand dollars Many blimps filled hydrogen extremly flammable substance could put building City New York great danger dirigible blow Because winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents difficulty controling dirigibles keeping blimps still keep passengers safe There also law height airships urban areas Using mooring mast top Empire State Building would result breaking law since Mast low These difficult obstacles proved difficult overcome mast seriously used dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring venus essay.\n\nHow many stars are in the sky? Well there is to many to count and there is about 5,000 every night when you go to to sleep. First, Every planet of something different and one of the best one there is earth because it has stars and it's pieceful but some crazy people in the earth. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our the sun. The sun is prob the hottest place there will ever be and You won't be able to get to close and if you try you will get very HOT and may die. Next, how do you think people learn about the planets and walk on some planets ? Do you know who they are called and what they do for us the people in the earth? Well they are called special people that have to wear gear to let them fly in the air and they help tell us about what is going on up there what everybody don't see everyday. Then, they have special equinment they use to help them and learn about every little thing. There are too much gear they use and I don't know what is called. Finally, The earth will be the best planet there is ever and we will learn more things when they find new things to tell us and we will find how many stars there are actaully is becuase there is more then 5 thousand but im not sure how many there are. Earth is in terms of density and size and occasioally the closest in distance too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals commented that rather than mitigating global warming, human beings should survive with it. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since scientific evidence has shown that if not tackled, all the livings on the planet would be extinct soon and the unique way out to deal with it is changing dramatically the natural energy sources. This essay will shed light on the overriding reasons for my disagreement and provide evidence to prove the arguments. There are manifold motives why I believe individuals should find a way to eschew climate alteration. \n\nFirst and foremost, if not irradicated, the human specimen is menaced to disappear. In other words, there is no mid-term when addressing facts about global warming due to the fact that if any measure is not taken urgently, the planet earth could be extinct. For example, the new projection by IPCC pointed out that from now to 10 or 20 years, extreme weather events like cyclones, floods, and the increasing average temperature will continue soaring. As a result, the harsh weather victims will climb as the earth becomes an inappropriate place to live.\n\nSecondly, energy matrix changing is the unique pathway to glossing over climate issues. The carbon footprints sent to the earth's atmosphere is increasing daily due to the fast lighting construction of industries, increasing in automobiles factories, for this reason, the world folk should invest more in renewable energy sources. For instance, the new investigation by energy connoisseurs showcased that one solar power plant of 10 MV powers 1000 houses and a significant number of industries and reduces 10 times the emission of exhaust fumes. Hence, implanting at least 5 of these energy power plants across the world avoids the world from collapsing.\n\nIn conclusion, in fact, evidence demonstrates that it is almost impossible to live with climate change on our planet because it will vanish our species in the near future. Therefore, I still strongly disagree with the statement. In addition, I recommend the world-ruling power instils measures to counter the environmental clime change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People would love driving without hands. BMW will be making this happen by 2020 year from now. No hands would be cool because u can sit in the back and do nothing. Driverless will be safer for everyone. It might save you gas because its was smart car.\n\nNo hands would be cool because you can eat while sitting in the back. It won't hurt your body while sitting in the car for hours. Some people will think you doing magic because no one sitting in the front seat. There will be something for that person whos controling the car. No hands for a drive less car will make everything better you can do a lot of things.\n\nDriverless car will be safer because it can tell you when you in danger or stop if you need it. If you about to fall asleep turn on driverless mode and take a nap. It will save you a lot of time. It will make the right choose for you when you turn it on. Less people getting hurt because they half sleep or doing something bad behind the wheel. Only thing you need is turn it on or park and wait.\n\nThis might save you gas .By making the right chioce for you. It will cost less for gas if its the right way you going. It will be more money in his back pants. More gas the less it will be on the samrt roads if its needed.\n\nPeople would love driving without hands. No hands would be cool because you can eat while sitting in the back. Driverless car will be safer because it can tell you when you in danger or stop if you need it. This might save you gas. It was save you gas and money and money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it would be fun joining the Seagoing cowboys. We would have to work hard macking sure the animals where cared for rightly. Also it takes a long time to cross the Oceon. Lastly we do have a little time to have fun onbored maybe.\n\nWe would have to work hard macking sure the animals where cared for\n\ncorrectly. They had 335\n\nhorses plus enough oats and hay to feesd them. That is a whole lot of horses to take care of see I told you we would have to work very hard. It will aslo keep you busy, infact we barley get to sleep.\n\nAlso it takes a long time to cross the Oceon. It takes about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Oceon from the eastern coast to the United states and a month to get to China. Try doing that without getting sleep. It is hard to do all this work.\n\nWe do have a little time to have fun onbored. Especially on return trips when the animals have already been unloded. We would play baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animaks had been housed. Table-tennis tournements, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThat is why I think it would be fun joining the seagoing cowboys. WIth all the hard work having to care for the animals. It takes a long time to get there and back so it is lick a very ling vacation. We have time to have fun when the animals have been unloaded.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we can keep it, But improve it. Like some people do not want to just vote for a slate they want to vote for a president. How about making that happen that's a easy one. Lets look at some of the other side why are they against it. Remember what happen in the 2000 fiasco election, so much stuff went wrong with that one. How about what happened in 1960 in louisianna, when nearly succeed in replacing the democratic electors with new ones who oppose for John F. Kennedy a vote for Kennedy would never actually got that vote.\n\nWhat if that happens again? Thats a hard one we can improve the stuff like vote on a piece of paper and put it in this huge box and mail that huge box to someone who can talley up the votes so he can get them or something like that. how can we improve the system in a way everybody can join like a website or a likely matter. The president votes only need 29 electoral votes to win. Why not everybody votes not electoral votes.\n\nIt can be argued that the Electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for candidate who has no hope of carrying thier state Democrats in texas, for example or Republicans in California. The aviods the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of votes and cast. What if we do it like we did it back then wouldn't that be easier then doing it the hard way. instead of having a no region have everybody vote.\n\nWould you include the others since they might feel disenfranchised I know I would, is there no regard for the other states. Is there appeal for a unlikely to be a successfui president. The winner-take-all program how is that working? It is form on a method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. For Example in 2012 election to focus thier campaign efforts on the toss-up states. If you can change it how would you and why?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this present world, working and studying on distant places has become so normal due to which most of the people are compelled to spend huge amount of their time on commuting. The arguement that more the time consumption on commuting, more will be the adverse effect of it is a debetable issue which is both agreed and disagreed with by many. In this essay, the two sides of this arguement will be thoroughly analysed and discussed with my own position.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is the better means to maintain the balanced mental health by doing long driving. In another word, being on vehicles for longer time and watching the sceneries, roadside buildings, other passenger inside the public bus or may be in car helps to lower the stress and provides the amusing experience in the life. To illustrate this, in the research conducted in New Delhi, India , which was about the perspective of long way travelling, 75% of the people described it as a good way to get refreshed and become stress free. Hence , it is concured that more commuting time is the best way to get rejuvenated.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is considered as a waste of time as one could perform the plenty of task during such a long time. It means , the time which is spent on moving towards the job or university could be utilized for doing other beneficial thing like studying and duty , so that they can earn money and get chance to learn more. To exemplify, If a student needs to travel for about 1 hour daily to reach to his university, he will obviously suffer from the lack of time for his assignment and he can not give the enough time for his study . Therefore, the time consuming travelling is considered as a burden by some of the public.\r\n\r\nIn summary, the workplace and university on a farther places has both positives as well as negatives as it helps to trigger the stress on the one side, whereas the more travelling time can be worthless in another side. Analysing both the perpectives I believe that the demerits of it outweigh the merits so, it will be more advantageous if a person choose to work and study on their own locality rather than in cities which are far away from their home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face of Mars has proven to be one of NASA's most mystifying cases to ever be solved. Twenty five years ago, as NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, it snapped a photo of a startling image resembling a human face. After releasing the image to the public, many people became fascinated in the \"face\". This rolled the ball for many people to believe there was an ancient civilization on Mars. However, modern technology and expertise of numerous scientists have discovered the face is merely a natural landform. The use of more efficient cameras have diminished any hopes of alien life on Mars.\n\nNASA's Mars Exploration Program has already identified the area on which the face is found as Cydonia. When the face was first seen in the Jet Propulsion Lab, scientists figured it was a Martian mesa, which were common enough in Cydonia. Although it was abnormally figured in the shape of a human face, scientists already knew mesa's were prominent in the area of Cydonia. Also, modern technology, such as a Mars Global surveyor camera, has revealed the fact that the Face on Mars is nothing but a natural landform. The camera's absolute maximum resoultion picture ensures that no \"alien markings\" were hidden by haze, as some skeptics argued. In the 2001 image, each pixel spans 1.56 meters, whereas pixels in the 1976 image spanned 43 meters. Therefore, the better camera quality ensures the truth behind the Face on Mars: a natural landform.\n\nSome people argue that, due to the cloudiness on the planet, alien life could have been hidden by haze. However, NASA sent the Mars Global Surveyor on \"a cloudless summer day in Cydonia\" and captured another photo. Garvin explained \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" Garvin knew if there were any pyramids or shacks, the camera would have been able to capture it and he would have been able to see it. Thus, there is no chance haze could have hidden the aliens. People also argued that the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence NASA would rather hide. This is not the case. Authors thought this would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. Therefore, the belief of life on Mars is simply just for the public. It has been in Hollywood films, books, magazines, and radio talk shows. The Face on Mars was used to engage the public, not neccessariy to inform.\n\nProven from better camera quality and scientific knowledge, people can know believe the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. If any civilization was there, the Mars Global Surveyor would have been able to seen it. Also, mesa's are common in the Cydonia area, where the face was found. In conclusion, better technology from 1976 proves the Face on Mars is a landfrom, and there is no chance any life on Mars exists based on the face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There exists an argument regarding whether learners in high school should be allowed to offer suggestions or to contend with their teachers as a way of promoting the quality of education. Yet, a few others believe this might result in disrespectful and shameful conduct in the learning environment. Personally, I feel the teachers should be allowed to carry out their work without disturbances. In this essay, I will tackle both of these views and give a conclusion.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the purpose of having a classroom in existence is to ensure the free flow of information among the members. Nonetheless, teachers at times may lack updated data on a given topic and only provide half-barked information to students. That being said, most pupils may have come across more recent data that can be of great benefit to the entire class if they were to be allowed to bring it to the fore. For example, since the current education system requires that teachers should stick closely to the provided syllabus regardless of whether it is updated or not, they are limited in the kind of alterations they can make but to rigidly follow through. Hence, if students are given chance to comment, they can bring up new ideas for the benefit of everyone involved.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, granting students such freedom would mean giving them access to a lack of respect and order in a classroom. To put this in perspective, upon correcting a mistake by their teachers, a pupil might begin to assume that he knows better than them. The resulting impact of this route is an indisciplined student who lacks respect for his tutors. Take for instance, in a survey conducted by the ministry of education in Malawi on impcat of student comments on the classroom environment, it was determined that many pupils lost respect fro their teachers. No wonder the present education system deters any student from making comments or criticizing during lectures.\r\n\r\nBy way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that not giving chance to learners in high school to comment is key in maintaining law and order at the classroom level.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a student in high school i think the new Facial Action Coding System should be used. My reason for saying that is teachers could use it for their lesson and see if the kids are getting bored of the lesson or liking it so the teacher could use the new technology to help change the lesson or keep it depending on the students facial expressions using the new technology.\n\nFor example in paragraph 4 Dr. Huang tells us even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression like not smiling using video imagery. The new emotion- recongnition software tracks these facial movements. The Mona Lisa is just a painting and the new software technology can even tell thats shes 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. That in my opinion is amazing who would of guested that we could tell how she was fealing through a painting a couple hundred years later.\n\nThe computer contructs a 3-D model of the face and uses the 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. Their are six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and by the movement in your muscles they can tell what emotion you are feeling.\n\nThey tell us in paragraph 7 that our home PC can't handle the complex algorithism used to dicode the Mona Lisa. While looking in the mirror by raising your lips at the corner of your mouth. 2 then quinting your eye slighty to produce wrinkling at the corner of your eye. 3 holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up towards your eyes will describe your emotion being happy.\n\nMy introduction is that the new technology is a great idea for for teacher or anyone to use on students it can change the way teachers teach and also change the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, advertisements are becoming more and more popular in the marketing of services and products. I think advertisements can have both - positive and negative effects.\nThe first advantage of advertising is that it can bring a lot of benefits. So, advertisement generates a diversity of employment opportunities. It provides a career for people who prepare the content of advertisements, design logos or brand awareness for companies. Without this marketing sector, we would have higher unemployment in the world. Another advantage of advertising is that it can promote brand, spread awareness of the messages about products and then products should reach potential consumers, it would attract more customers. Also, by advertising, customers could find out about newly launched products. And as a result, people could select from the bigger choice of products and could know more detailed information about products\nHowever, advertising also has some disadvantages. First of all, there are some technology companies which are collecting data about costumers such as your browsing history or your emails to electronic companies to guide your behaviour on the Internet for commercial purposes. Secondly, there are some brands which influence consumer psychology and trigger memories of childhood or Christmas. As a result, people feel under pressure to buy those brands’ products. Lastly, advertisers often focus on selling a brand image rather than the quality of products by using famous and successful people. Then, customers can be manipulated by the misleading, eye-catching image of influence and they will be likely to spend more money and follow the latest trend.\nIn conclusion, advertisements have some positive effects for customers and marketing companies, but it also has some negative effects for customers such as boost sales (when customers spend more money) or celebrity endorsement (when customers are manipulated).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many consumers consider cost as their top priority when making a purchase decision. Spending carefully is essential however, in my opinion, expenditure should not be your top priority when making purchases.\n\nWe should first determine whether a good or service is essential to our daily lives before shelling out any cash on it. We need to make sure the product or service is affordable if it is essential. Because there are instances when a less expensive option will do just as well. When we need to buy a phone, for instance, it does not matter if it is an iPhone or a Samsung; we can save money by opting for the former. People are willing to pay more for a well-known brand. The value of goods and services should be reflected in their prices. We should not go into debt to buy name-brand anything that is not really necessary right now.\n\nSometimes, we have no choice but to put our health and well-being ahead of our financial concerns. Money can't buy what life can. If you are in that position, it is not necessary to base your decision on the cost of the therapies on the market alone. Money can be borrowed from family and friends, or possessions can be sold, but nothing is more important than saving a life.\n\nIn sum, situations that need large financial outlay are uncommon. Yet, unless it is a matter of life and death, the cost of something should always be taken into account when deciding to go over one's budget.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of people have diffrent out looks on driverless cars. I on the other hand think it is stupid, and pointless. With these cars we are putting other peoples lives at risk. They have so many sensors on them! What if these sensors stop working? These cars will cause a lot of traffic problems such as crash's, breaking when you don't need too, just little stupid stuff like that! So, before buying one of these \"driverless\" cars I would advise you to read about it first.\n\nI am against \"driverless\" cars for many reasons, one with being that it would cause a lot of wrecks. You will never ever know when the car might not want to stop or when the car might not want to turn the way you want it. Put it this way, these cars are the most dangerous thing they could ever come out with. The cities want to stop street wrecks. Well, by bringing \"driverless\" cars it is not going to help at all. This car is not safe at all. It states in the passage that \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Which this is basically saying that it's not even legal yet!\n\nTwo being that you never know when the car is going to lose control. It states that \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger to backing into an object.\" For instence say you're in this \"driverless\" car, and you are going down a bump street, you won't be able to feel when the seat vibrates because it'll be so bumpy. With that being said that can make you lose control and crach the car. Now, what if this happend to happen and you have an infant in the car, your risking not only your life but the passangers/the infant in that car!\n\nThree with being that the car has sensors.\n\nIt stated that \" For starters they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" So, they needed sensors to recognize where they are at. They use these sensors for everything. It's all computrized. What if the computer stops working? This just basically means that these sensors are liable to stop working. These sensors are liabile to catch on fire. Last but not least what if you have a horrible person running the computers, and instead of sensing someone to where they needed to go he/she sensored them to a dark alley. The driver would be in trouble and theres nothing no one could do about it because their would be no proof. You guys are putting your lives at great risk!\n\nYour putting your perfect life at risk! These cars are not and should not ever be legal. The majority of the people that would even buy this car would probably be the lazy people. You guys may think this car is amazing, but really it is not. This is beyond dangerous. Think before you act/buy. Before even buying a car like this i'd advise you to read about it first. Read all the pro's and con's! Good Luck.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Narciso Rodriguez Home Our Lives Narciso Rodriguez author creates warm pleasant mood He several ways one writing overcome segregation He says Our neighborhood made mostly Spanish Cuban Italian imigrants In neighborhood cultures came together great solidary friendship In manner creates bright feeling saying even segregation dominant everyone community friends Another way mixed story pleasant sounding talks parents Althroughout excerpt talks greatful parent mainly kind loving As puts They came selflessly give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved giving lives able make others lives better Due greatful love support parents offer uplifting theme story Narciso Rodriguez creates smooth pleasant warm loving tone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author obviously seems grateful thankful states multiple times passage When recalling memories proves warm happy mood The cookings skills parents passed says s grateful passionate Cuban music says still adores day The author also states s sense family blood relative neighborhood well All different cultures neighborhood Spanish Cuban Italian came together great solidarity friendship The author thankful fact s actually told parents could never done something courageous The mood memoir strong positive way also writes way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age To wrap memoir mentions never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars were bound to be coming soon. Can you even imagine a time in the future where you don't have to drive your own car? As time aged so did our technology by getting more vast and advanged. I am very against the new development of these new cars because I think they're not safe at all. A human should alsway have to drive on their own because anything couple happen. One minutue with your eyes off the road, a sensor being read wrong, alerts not going off like supposed too, or even the wrong alert going off. There are even many differen't laws that were pasted in different states to not allow driverless cars. You just never know what could go wrong and you'll simply have no control over what happens.\n\nDriverless cars sound like a pretty cool idea right? Just think about it a driverless car? No way right?\n\nYou don't have to be contol over the wheel at all times. You can just sit back and let the car do what it's supposed to do. Eating breakfast on the way to work in the moring instead of wasting time at home. There countless amazing reason why this would sound like a marveless idea but then again you have to sit back and think about you and everyone else around you saftey.\n\nTechnology will always need a humans help for anything. Think about your phone wouldn't opperate without you assistance, computer, even a stero the list goes on and on. Think about your car driving by itself, what if you take your eyes off the wheel for about thirty senconds thinking your okay to grab something out the back seet real quick. Then something with the car went wrong? The you most likly would be ending up in an accident. Just for taking your eyes off the road for juts thirty senconds. Think about back into the stories it says to get the driver's attention quickly is to vibrate the drivers seat or flashing lights on the windshield to alert the driver but what if the driver doesn't have a quick respond like right away? Then boom, you crash and now you want to blame the manufactoring company. It woul just be better if you were awear on what's going on, on your own.\n\nTechnology isn't always perfect like just like humans, they tend to malfunction here and there. Looking back into the stories it talks about sensors being out on the cars. Have it ever came across your mind if a sensor read wrong? For expample, your pulling out of a parking spot and your car doesn't alert you fast enough that there is a car coming and the other car isn't paying attention. Now whose fault would that be? You'd blame the manufactoring company even if it was probaly your fault. It would just be a better idea to not put yourself in that situation.\n\nPeople in other states are still waiting for the law to be passed like California, Nevada, Flordia, and many more. They're not even allowed to do test driving and stuff like we do everywhere else that's legal. They made it illegal for a very good reason and I believe it should stay that way. There are too many poeple on the road driving everyday and they would like to feel safe. They don't want something going wrong with the cars and accident everyday. They're doing fine with regular cars now, just be better off if everyone stayed that way.\n\nYou always have to be thinking about the poeple around you instead of just yourself. The car might be driving smart but poeple drive like idots. Think hard about your safety before getting these cars. There not a one hundred percent guarentee. Yeah the cars sound like a really good idea and a fun new way of driving but it coould be really danergous as well. Therefore, you have to put your saftey and anyone elses safety first. Better safe than sorry like they people always say. We were doing fine without all this technology before and I think we can keep that going. We're doing fine with the cars we have now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my point of view on driverless cars is not that much of a good idea. You can never put your whole trust in a car. Its a nice and some what smart but technology can fail once again. So many new laws will come by not just for the driverless cars but also for all kinds of car.\n\nMy first reason to my opinion on \"Driverless cars\" coming our way is bad. I say that because then the people already having issues with others driving in the streets with and with out drivers license would have more trouble. Also the people driving will have to be more extra careful. Its not such a safe idea because the road is not something to play with.\n\nAnother reason into why its not a good idea is because no matter how brand new the car is and how expensive the matierials that were used in the car is really nothing. You cant even trust the person driving. Anything at anytime could happen to the car. Its more responsibility for a driverless car. I feel like you need to have experience on a regular car first then own a driverless car.\n\nMy last reason to why its a bad idea too is because of kids around you in other cars. I feel like there would be actually more accidents coming our way. If you cant handle a wheel on a regurlar car there no point into having advanced experince into something more different. Laws will make a change soon and more cops around us. None of that is worth it if we had more good drivers and none lazy people around us.\n\nThose are my reasons to why I feel like there should not be nomore technical things especially on cars. To me thats really dumb and unnessisary. This is only my opinion. Maybe to the kids growing up with everything will think its a good idea because it seems easier. As I grow up I see how people invent things that are not even worth to be in this world. Causes more accidents in the streets then there already is. Then again its only my opinion. Do you think its a smart idea of having \"Driverless cars\"?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Planning to have a child is one of the major decisions in couples life. In this ear, people are delaying the idea of having a child due to several reasons, and the prominent one is to focus on their career goals. While I accept that delaying a child is having few disadvantages, I still believe that this phenomenon is more likely to have a positive impact.\r\n\r\nThere are main disadvantage of giving birth to a child in later age is malfunctioning of reproductive system. This is because after the age of 30, uterus start to loose the normal elasticity. Thus there is huge difference between the contractions during labour time that leads to inaccurate monitoring. To illustrate, California Gynaecologist have found that pregnant women over the age of 30 are at high risk of obvious complications such as foetus death, premature delivery, cord around neck. \r\n\r\nHowever, I would argue that the demerits of planing a child in later age is outweighed by the merits. Firstly, parents can improve the financial situation of the family before child birth. The fact is that mother and father both can work hard in order to earn the required money without any difficulties or pressure. Secondly, having a child after period of time can definitely help new parents to accumulate essential education related to parenting. Therefore, they do not have to face the challenges after the child born, and child care will not he compromised. For instance, few hospitals have already organised the training sessions for the parents about how to breastfeed a child, and what needs to be done before and after the pregnancy. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, It seems to me that potential benefits of having a child later in life are more significant than the possible dangers that was already addressed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The tendency of earning tremendously high wages in several countries will give good effects for a country, while it is thought by some people that the government should control the wages and number of people who can earn them. In my opinion, I believe that obtaining vast sums of wages will be good for the development of country through tax that people pay. \n\nOn the one hand, many people think that a country will acquire good impacts if their people earn high wages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many different obstacles attempt allowing Blimps dock There two major obstacles The greatest reason one safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly NUM If blimp accident like Hindenburg would Empire State building go would affect buildings people city s population Lastly large effect building weather The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents NUM The winds could easily knock blimp attatched reason back ship would swivel around around mooring mast NUM As result blimb would close mast strong enoungh wind blowing blimps weight take mast All weather hydrogen blimps builders two major obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There certain kinds books library Books tooken shelf people find offensive Do get book people might like entertainment If like book get book While looking book one seem right look past It even bother There lot books library find different book instead focusing one book There always many books look If bad book go different section library There going good books person bad books If people would like book library take book shelves It offensive people people world likes book Some people go library see kind books Certain people like certain types books maybe right section person The book could interesting book try If anything reader might even like book check The books entertainment Thats much different sections selections choose If adult like kid book giving kid wrong idea get book kid A different parent might come think book great child though Books sat shelf anybody goes library The librarians take books shelf one persons opinion When get book think others might like remember readers entertainment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Talking about exploring Venus can lead us to new experinces and new innovatios. but, there are also risk being taken. Venus is brightest planet next to us. nearly everyone can tell when its Venus or when is a star. Venus is a very small planet however; it has a very large amout of air pressure and a very large amount of carbon dioxied. not just that it also contains extreme heat temperatures.\n\nAuthor states that is a very high risk discovering Venus, the author says \"tempertures woulld still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\" \"air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" Now according to the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is says that a NASA is going to have to send a person and in a type of ship that would flot above the Venus. however; Venus has a blanket type layer on its atmosphere which would only limit the researchers. \"Researchs cannot take samples of rock, gas or anything from a distance. therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorouh mission to understand Venus would need a up close and personal despite the risk.\" What this piece of evidence is saying is that from a far view nothing can be really done, this would require a upclose and more personal experice.\n\nA mission that would require those types of standards would maybe cause a lot of damage to a human being. Venus is mostly composed of carbon dioxied, 95%, and is air pressure is extreme, 90x, let not talk about Venus temperatures, 800 degrees. The passage also says \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to laste long enought to contrivutr meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\" NASA clams that they are other people in their enviorment that are looking for new ways to get a upclose of Venus. In paragraph 7 says that NASA will be using \"simplified electronics made of silicon and carbid\" they claim that has been tested in chamber that acts like Venus choas.\n\nAll of this reaseach can lead us to new experinces and new discoveries, however; this is really high risk that NASA is taking. Venus can do stuff unexpected and maybe lead this into major disaster. NASA also states that they have other people using old technology to go to Venus and explore. WWII is he type of technology that they are using to explore on to the bright planet. The thing that those other computers have or technology is that they are bigger and stronger \"systems that use mechanical parts can be made resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus The Author concludes paragraph show shes going give show mom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There lot issues concerning offensive material used entertainment purposes Sometimes things shelves Such movies books magazines etc seriously offenseive people different races different religions Censorship used solve problem like book used keep books picture completely To keep society becoming offended matter thinking However matter complete opposite kinds negative material caring people damage people However also argued The people offended material wether religious race really nt around material first place For example material library people nt need go library In conclusion people nt near offensive stuff offended people cruel also", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays cities indeed become concrete jungles. Therefore, it is crucial for all towns and mega police places to develop maximum large outdoor places such as squares and parks. I agree with this statement. This essay intends to extend points in the ensuing paragraphs. \r\n\r\nThere are plenty of reasons to implement greenery places on the outdoor side of the house. The first and foremost reason is that trees can counteract heavy pollution. Tress can be helpful to purify the toxic air from the environment. Also, it reduces noise pollution, which mostly occurs due to high traffic and industries in mega police areas. Moreover, it helps to maintain physical health as well as mental health. A park provides a clean and peaceful environment, which can relieve stress and anxiety. Also, the park provides various amenities to exercise for good well-being.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, this kind of place can improve the sense of community. In the modern are, people are living a hectic life. As a result, they can not specify a time even for their family members. Hence, it provides a good opportunity to activate social life by getting together. Lastly, the area may develop through some investors, who want to invest money in the grade city. It can be beneficial for their living people. For instance, wealthy city dwellers are more likely to invest their money in local shops. Which are allocated in residential areas. Therefore, societies can easily get the products for their daily needs needsneeds products. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I reiterate my opinion the park and squares are beneficial for communities. It provides good health care facilities and the environment. Also, it increases the social skills of society members.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, our lifestyle is influenced by a number of factors. A host of people believe that climatic conditions have the greatest influence while so much that the local economy is the determining factor. I am totally convinced that the monetary factor is the most important element.\r\n\r\nOver the centuries nomads have realised that the weather conditions are pivotal for governing the type of vegetation of a particular region. Thus, it regulates their food habits. Additionally, it also defines the type of occupation. For example, people residing in the torrid zone are mostly dependent on hunting activities for their survival whereas people living in the region receiving adequate rainfall opt for farming as their chief occupation. Furthermore, atmospheric conditions significantly affect work efficiency. This is because working in a cool atmosphere avoids sweat and hence keeps the employees mess-free as well as motivated and non-irritant. A perfect example of this is the European countries where the workforce has a higher working efficiency owing to the cool climate. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people argue that although the climate was regulating human behaviour for years recently engineers have proved that with both money and knowledge survival even in the toughest metrological conditions is possible. For instance, Dubai a City established in the midst of the desert is equipped with all the modern amenities. This is possible only due to good fortune. Moreover, a wealthy nation can spend more on science and technology and hence can make the life of the citizens much easier with newer inventions.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it can be rightly said that though climate affects work efficiency but with monetary resources one can continue living luxuriously admit the stringent temperature. Therefore, I regard money as a prime factor driving life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face of Mars could not be created by aliens. It is a land form created by the conditions of mars and looks like a face only by coincidence. Mesa's are common in this area of Mars and there are many others like this one just without the same shadows which makes the appearance of a human's face.\n\nOut of so many different land forms in Cydonia why should this be any different. In the second paragrapgh of the article, it stated that the Cydonia region is known for its buttes and mesas. The face of Mars is just another mesa no different that any other one except for its unique shadows. It is strange to see a formation on an supposedly uninhabited planet that depicts a \"human\" face. Espescially when no human has ever set foot on the planet of Mars before. But at the same time, that is all the more reason to believe that this is nothing more that a weird coincidence since no person has ever been there.\n\nTo conspiracy theorists dismay, this strange landform is nothing more than martian butte or mesa and a weird coincidence. It is an interesting formation that stumped and puzzled scientests all over the world. But we now know the formation is not anything that will reveal alien lifeforms or alien activity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the \"Facial Action Coding System\" may actually be valuable. The machine detects emotions from using a picture and that can help with knowing how a person feels. The machine uses the muscles in your face to detect your emotions, it calulates all emotions found, and has most of the common emotions so the FACS has a very good chance of being accurate and valuable.\n\nThe machine uses the muscles in your face to detect emotions. This is useful because different muscles makes different emotions, In the article the athour explained how the machine can tell if someone was happy or not. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" That explains that even if the person tries to change their emotion the real one will still be seen because of the muscles that they are using.\n\nThe \"Facial Action Coding System\" calulates all the emotions found in the persons face. Since the machine can calulate all the emotions it has a better chance if getting the right exact emotion the person is feeling and get all the emotions. This machine would be about to detect how any person is feeling and can show up at 6 emotions.\n\nWith the machine being able to caluate your emotions its able to detect up to 6 different emotions that people use everyday. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. That was a discription of the Mona Lisa painting that the FACS gave. This shows how many differnt emotions she had and the machine was able to pick them all up.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is usefully when it comes to trying to figure out someone elses emotions. The machine uses the muscles in your face to detect your emotions, it calulates all emotions found, and has most of the common emotions so the FACS has a very good chance of being accurate and valuable. I personally think this device is a good idea and that it may be really accurate in finding emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable to the educational system.\n\nOne of the reasons why this would be valuable is because it would be able to tell when you're bored or confused and change it's setup to help benefit you. This way when you easily get bored, the setup will become more interesting and keep you focused in order to keep learning and improve your grades. If you are confused it would be able to help you on things you don't understand so you can truly comprehend the lessons, which is always very helpful. This would help keep students locked into the lesson they're learning and make them enthusiatic as well as interested in education.\n\nFacial Action Coding System would also be very beneficial because it would help students stay productive and on task with their lesson. Usually when students start getting bored on computers they'll get sleepy or stop doing work overall. With this new system, students will be able to keep going and learn more. If they understand the lesson too, maybe it can give them more information and cool facts over what they're learning which would feed them more knowledge. The FACS woud really help the students stay productive by changing its ways to help the learner.\n\nA third way this can really help students is by being online and able to do this at home as well. Many of us students miss some school days. Missing school days makes it harder for us to catch up and understand what the teacher is talking about when we get back. Having this system would make it much easier because when we're home, we would still be able to access it online and finish the day's lesson. With the coding system it has for the faces, once again you would be able to finish and stay on task so you won't fall behind in school.\n\nA final way this is helpful is because in this day and age, many people love technology, especially students. This would make them excited to get a personal computer with the FACS. The students would obviously want to personalize it and make it there own, but also keep them entertained with the lessons. Having one laptop with everything you need for your classes in it would be so much more simple than carrying books back and forth from class to home, and way less heavy. The technology keeps students interested.\n\nAlthough there is many benefits there can also be cons of course. Many students also like to have the help of someone physically there to feel more comfortable with asking questions. The way this can be solved is by asking the teacher when you're in class if you have any questions over what you learned.\n\nAfter reading the article and seeing the benefits of the Facial Action Coding System, I would say this should be available to every student in order to academically help them more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face was discovered forty years ago by scientists at NASA who saw the FAce for the first time and said it was a martian mesa. Later when the photo was released to the public conspiracy theorists believed the Face was an alien artifact, but the picture was taken on an older camera on the Viking I that the photo was fuzzy and no one could be sure of what was on the Face. Twenty-two years later another photo was taken with a camera ten times sharper than the original viking I photo. Still some people believed it was an alien artifact and the clouds on mars covered some alien markings that may have been covered by haze. Some theorists believed that NASA was trying to hide evidence of alien life on Mars. Others questioned theorists about why NASA would want to hide something like that and how it would benefit scientists at NASA. Three years later another team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. When conspiracy theorists saw the picture had no markings of alien origin and saw it was just a bute or mesa like landforms found in the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author writes whatever test take wasnt ready whenever geese return hibiscus return ready take test Maybe wasnt mentally prepared So inconclusion I think says geese hibiscus return take test maybe wasnt physicaly mentally prepared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to help animals when they are being shipped across the sealands. The Seagoing Cowboys can be a fun job, but you get to take care of animals while you are going to different countries. The Seagoing Cowboys can be an adventurous job!\n\nSome people would argue saying,\" but you would be taking care of animals all day.\" But you get to travel to different countries. The job can be hardworking but you get free time out of it. Sometimes the job can be fun. My personal opinion is that, this job is really adventurous and fun.\n\nSome people may think when you are done unloading the animals, it gets boring. It does not get boring because the other cowboys would play games. They would play games such as Baseball, Volleyball, Table-Tennis, fencing, boxing, and they would read too. I think that after a job is finished, there is a lot to do when there is free time.\n\nPeople may argue that cleaning up after animals while on a ship can be discomfortable, you are at least getting paid and taking important animals across countries. But there are responisbilites you have when you have to take care of the animals. One important part is, that most of these animals are horses which can help people get around which you deliver those horses to them. I think that you have to be responsable when you take care of the animals.\n\nWorking for the Seagoing Cowboys can be hardworking and diffcult, but you get to have an adventure. The job may be hard, but you help those animal's lives get across countries to stay safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test The author concluded story way makes reader ask questions much live CAPSs modernist way interprentle means sty makeing reader ask questions instead beig moral story For example CAPSs main character run away could get slaming door Much live story twist test main character talking Is goig try move ww friends live resolution making also leaves reader wanting story go back even read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello everyone you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys Program.This program is where you can help transport animals to country's on a cattle boat.When joining this fun transportation you will surely enjoy it.I know I have!This is a one chance apratunity to join.\n\nIn the past we had someone named Luke ride on one our exclusive cattle boat and then after that ride he has so much that he just decided that he wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program.When he joined he said that it took awhile to get where he was going with the animals but he said he still had a lot of fun.\n\nHe also said that he went on 9 trips before!Just to think a small town boy would be so happy to join from his friend that invited him to ride one of. Our exclusive cattle boats that put a spark in that made him wanna join us Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nThis why I think you should come and join us in our adventures!If\n\nLuke had fun so will you I promise!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "with a huge of life change there are some people who think that makes life too complex , I do not agree with this view and i will discuss this with examples below.\r\n\r\nNowadays, technology has a significant importance in human life need or not ,and it gives people any option they prefer to enjoy their lives and make it easier,whoever ,It changed\r\n\r\n the way of lifestyle in eating and wearing clothes and education also , the communication ,I agree it has many of disadvantages ,likewise , a leak in relationships, especially family communication and it keeps people more busy with social media , Moreover, it enters different culture and sometimes different religion and values in specific teenagers influence with the new trend and try to imitation. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, we can see that technology creates a lot of opportunities in every field, for instance , health , education , and marketing , ac ,,,furthermore, People can find jobs online very fast ,and relationships are increasing because of it , and there are many activities could person involved it in social groups like sports or cooking that make individual has a different and great unconscious.\r\n\r\nTO Sammriez, I strongly believes that , technology makes our lives more easily than previous .with the variety of experience could be a quiet for others around the world .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" believes that studying Venus is something that should be done even though it can be very dangerous. The author gives multiple reasons to why we should explore the planet, or learn more about it. However, some people think the dangers of Venus outweigh the benefits of pursuing research on it. The author supports the idea of studying Venus even though it can be very dangerous. He provides many details, and facts as to why it's a good idea.\n\nFirst off, the author tells what Venus is like. He states that Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin\". This is because Venus and Earth are close in size, density, and at some points in orbit are the closest planets in the solar system. It is also believed that at one point, Venus was a lot like Earth is now. \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our soloar system.\". The article goes on to say Venus most likely had large oceans that supported life, and the planet has things like craters, valleys, and mountains that we also have here on Earth. The author including these details helps get the point across that Venus is a lot like Earth, and with the little research been done already, we've found so much. This helps readers understand that the longer Venus is studied, the more we will learn about it.\n\nNext, the author gives possible ways to study Venus safely, and effciently. The author states, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\". Stating ways that Venus can be studied with people not being put in danger helps get the authors point across. The article also touches on how floating above the surface could keep those studying the planet safe. Temperatures would still be high, but nothing the spacecraft couldn't handle, the air pressure would be like how it is on Earth at sea level, soloar power would be bountiful, and radiation would be no higher than the levels on Earth. The text then states, \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\". Although this would not be an easy job, it is possible to study Venus safely. The details used in this paragraph help convey the authors point that studying Venus can be done safely and that it should continue to happen.\n\nLast, the author gives more ways Venus can be studied safely using different technology. While talking about different approaches to studying Venus the author states, \"...simplified electronics...have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks...\". This quote also helps the reader understand that studying Venus can be done in a safe and harmless way. Using this new technology could help research on Venus advance, and keep those doing the research out of harm's way. The author then goes on to talk about a different technology that was used in World War 2 that can also be used as a new method to study Venus. These are called mechanical computers, and they use gears and levers rather than the electronics that actual computers use. The mechanical computers are made of mechanical parts which are stronger, so they shouldn't be damaged as easily. These are just a few of the ways technology can help safely advance the study of Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, it is important Venus is continued to be studied and researched. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does a great job of conveying to his audience why studying Venus is important even though it is dangerous. In the last paragraph, the author says, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value...\". Studying Venus can help advance many things, and our knowledge of other planets could grow from this as well. There have been many safe ways found to study Venus, so it should be done. The author also states that, \"Our travels on Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts...\". This quote also shows that the author believes the study of Venus should continue even though it can be dangerous. If we didn't study things just because they're dangerous, then we would have nothing dicovered. The author of this article believes the study of Venus should continue, and does very well at conveying that by telling the audience Earth and Venus are a lot alike, gives new, safer ways to study Venus, and gives examples of technology that could also make the study of Venus a lot safer and easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't understand how anyone can think that is an alien artifact. even though the evidence is right here.\n\none reason this is not an alien artifact is because the artifct was seen to be in Cydonia and in Cydonia their is many buttes or mesas that can form in the shape of a human head making people think that the butte or mesa is an alien artifact even though it is not.\n\nAnother peice of proof is that they took three pictures of the figure and the only one that it looked like it could be a face was took by the worst camera out of the three they used and in the other two improved cameras is showed that their wasn't a face at all even though one of the pictures was taken on a cloudy day it was obvious that it was only a butte or mesa.\n\nOne of the biggest reasons that it is not an alien artifact is because almost all scientists at NASA that are experts say that it is not real, that their is no face but some people believe that they wouldn't want the general public to know. even though it wouldn't make sense because the people at NASA defending their budget would like if their was a face because they would have a bigger funding.\n\nall in all their is no face and it is just a butte or a mesa that was taken at first by a poor camera.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Brian Censorship Libraries Should censorship Libraries If library library yes I going tell I think books movies magazines First I m going tell books I think books censored parts history get kind gross nasty Then also sex ed books need library people read go people say I nt think matter nasty love book book matter reading War books censored need let reader know war really great place Now library yes parent would want eight year old daughter reading make drugs I think could put stuff drug alcohol perhaps go depth keep bare minimum Next I ll talk movies avalible library I nt think anything level Exept like sex ed tapes history movies free days class got In I movies In grade really dont watch educational films s fun films theres reson anything worse Last I m going tell magazines In I nt think magazines big issue Just long theres stuff like At leave I think kids age nt reading They need learning fun magazines Should censorship libraries No level yes level leave book nt movies magazines nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a driver I feel that transportation is very important when getting to your destination, and feel that it can be improved.\n\nBut I also feel that the \"driverless car\" is not the way to do it.\n\nFor one the driverless car is not even driverless, you still need a driver and it questions the safety of the driver and those in the car.\n\nFirst of all the car still requires a driver, which if we are talking about a driverless car, is useless.\n\nThe text states that the car will notify the driver, when to shift gears and take over the navigating, when driving through work zones and around accidents.\n\nBy doing so it is not an actual driverless car if it still has to notify the driver to switch gears, to drive.\n\nThis also leads to my second point, which questions the driver's safety.\n\nIt is said that the car will notify the driver when to drive, with a vibration that is being given off by his or her seat.\n\nTherefore not knowing or feeling the vibration, to alert the driver the are going to switch gears to drive the car, can lead to a major car accident.\n\nThat being said it is not the best idea to carry out this experiment involving the driverless car, since it is not actually a driverless car and questions the safety of the people in the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over the extinction of plants and species due to improper human activities. While some claim that deterioration of flora and fauna is tackled, others believe that helpful remedies of human beings can solve this situation. In my opinion, I would contend that protection animals and plants are still determined to reverse this status.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, convincing reasons due to ever-increasing demands of the people render threats for biodiversity can be not resolved. Firstly, animals bring valuable impacts on social fields such as market, fashion, medicine, leading to becoming increasingly consumed parts of the body of several animals, which have an adverse effect on the existence of animal species. For example, the Horns of rhinos are thought to bring tremendous benefits for certain severe diseases like lung cancer, bringing out rhinos that can die out. Thus, animals are targeted, being on the verge of extinction because of the increase of illegal hunting rate, which is a root of improving this condition of animals is impossible.\r\n\r\nWhile dire consequences on the fauna by the inexorable appetite of people are widely acknowledged, this issue still has resolutions to make a progress in biodiversity. Contemporarily, animal-based aspects play a vital role in society, then the defense of the diversity of animals is necessary. The government needs to start campaigns, boycotting products, which are made by the body of animals. For instance, the world society for the protection of animals, being protecting animals organization, has embarked on a plan to prevent overgrazing bears to consume honey excessively then decrease the use of honey bears as a result. Finally, people still have effective solutions to handle problem about the existing condition of animals\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although the situation become serious, human races have a wealth of remedies to decrease negative impacts on species.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you heard of the Seagoing Cowboys? If not, they are a group that was hired by the UNRRA (United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). They were hired to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules. I, Luke Bomberger, am a part of the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nWe thinks you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys. Some reasons why we think you should be in the Seagoing Cowboys is that besides taking care of and bringing ruined coutries animals. You can visit and seeing new places such as Europe and China.\n\nBefore you can visit those wonderful places, you have to take care of the animals. You have to make sure their stalls were clean, and that they had been fed and watered two or three times a day. You also have to pull bales of hay and bags of oats from the lower holds of the ship you are traveling in.\n\nThere is also fun to be found on the ship. Once you have unloaded all the animals, you could play baseball or even volleyball in the empty animal holds. To pass the time people would do table-tennis tournaments. They would also do fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling to also pass the time.\n\nA job that you might have to do is night watchman. During the night, the only thing you have to do is that you would have to check on the animals every hour.\n\nThese are my reasons why you should join of the Seagoing Cowboys, and what you would have to do if you were a part of the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to live another planet other than earth, mars sounds nice but venus sounds better. Venus is a worthy pursuit in despite the dangers it presents. Studying Venus is a challenge worth taking but it takes extreme physical conditions to descover more of Venus. The author suggest studying Venus is dangerous becuase no spacecraft survived the landing on venus, Beyound high pressure and heat, and air pressure would be very hard for humans because its close to sea levels on earth.\n\n\"The Challenging of Exploring Venus\" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy of pursuit despite the dangers by many reasons. In paragraph 1 it says \"Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" This means its not easy to exmine Venus. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and it took so many years to try to examine and get a piece of Venus. Venus is challenging planet for humans to study even more challenging with the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid that Venus has, Venus high pressure is high and the temperature is very hot because of how close it is to the sun, \"800 degress fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet.\" This explains how its a challenge for humans to descover more things about Venus.\n\nThe pressure humans can take is not enough for Venus it is a little risky to take. \"Beyond high pressure and heat.\" This explains how dangerous it can be to visit Venus.\n\nVenus is worth taking the risk to descover because its out second close planet to earth. \"Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" This explains how people wants to get to know more about venus and its worth the risk because some day we can probably live in another planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "electoral college is a process not a place. the Electoral college work on the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president couting each voter by congress. large populations in states lose by virtue in the mal-apportionment in Senate decreed in the Constitution. popular votes were mostly in florida but in the year 2012 when obama was just beginning to be president, he got 29 eectoral votes it was a success in the same margin in wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. other things being the same alot of large states get more attention from the presidential candidates in a campaign than some small states do. the electoral college is supossed to be a procces for the electors to vote for president and vice president and every 4 years theres gonna be someone new thats facing the president to be voted for the new president of the united states but when the electors come and vote if the president will still stay the president then he,ll become it for another 4 years but if the guy facing his way to be our new president mr. obama will have to stay as vice president. in columbia the district is allocated 3 electors and something like a state for purposes because of the electoral college. the reason in the following discussion the word \"state\" is also refered as the district of columbia. each person who is running for president your state has his or her own group of electors they are generally chosen to the candidates political party but the state laws vary on how there electors get selected on what there", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When hear word patience think I think person standing line store theres people standing front In grade sister I played patient game It could go longest without food could drink water winner gets whole box dunkin doughnuts Day I bottles water sister still hanging Day I bottles water day stomach groaned sister Day groaning growling sister hanging I drink water Day I snapped much food whole fontry gone sister cheering said dont worry ill let one choclate doughnuts kept word In opinion patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine knowing what emotions people display, even though they are not always being truthful of their expressions. The invention that was created is called \"Facial action coding systems\" or FACS. It can read the emotional expressions of anyone. From the passage, Prof. Thomas Huang used the software to test on the Mona Lisa painting. \"She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" The software explained that even though the picture makes it looklike the Mona lisa is happy, she wasn't all tht truthful of her emotions displayed in the picture.\n\nAnother example was that \"\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" Observes Dr. Huang, \"Even though individuals often show varying degrees of an expression.'' (like not smiling broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" the evidence explained that people are often times seen as displaying an emotion. Even though they show said emotions, The scanner really tells what a person wasw feeling. Another piece of evidence from the article claimed that \"Humans can perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. You can tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, sad, etc.\" The quote was stating that humans can calculate if one person is sad by saying \"what's the matter?\" or if they are happy, they ask what brought them in a good mood. Dr. Huang claimed thar \"Artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to display an emotion.\" Even though most humans may have difficult knowing that said emotions are displaying (ex. Alexythmiacs or face blind people) they may depend on the software to help them understand what emotions are on display. Final piece of evidence stated that \"Most human communications are nonverbal, including emotional communication and that computers will need to understand that too. Your pc at home can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona lisa's smile.\" A reason for that is that if a p[erson has a computer and has a look of discomfort, the computer will not really have the scanner to recognise what the person is feeling even if they want the computer to do so. In conclusion, The FACS can recognise anyones emotion with just a scan of the face, But it is good use to see if students will display anything when in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke is a guy who thought that his life would never be the same,after his graduation. His freind is the one who gave him the idea to go to Europe. While the Worrld War 2 was going on in Europe. When World War 2 was over 44 countries came together to help with food supplies,animals,and more..I think that Luke was doing a good job at helping Europe that was nice.\n\nLuke and Don singned up to help Europe. In August 14 they we reported to New Orleans they borded the SS Charles,W. Wooster, headed to Greece. They should had been proud of themselfs, And wanted to help that must have been alot to do and cleanng up wise. One day Luke was keeping watch on a rainy night he slipped down a slippery ladder on his backside, there was a metal pole that stopped him from falling into the Atlantic, he could'nt work because of his cracked ribs.\n\nBut after all he was good at his job and he also liked it. Buy helping people he must of had alot of courage. And God was always with him even when he cracked his ribs he still loved his job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people’s lifestyle is influenced by a number of factors. While a host of people believe that climate is the most important factor,affecting our daily life, others claim that the local economy is actually the determining factor. I strongly opine that economy is the real agent.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, climate can affect both individuals’ meals and their occupations. First of all, during all eras, mankind had to adapt their selves to climate changes to survive. To explain, Although staple crops are mostly consumed by people in tropical regions, Eskimos have brought up neither rice nor wheat;because of the tundra climate, a frozen soil without any possibility of growing a plant, the Inuits have to eat marine animals, secondly it can be seen that people who live nearby the seas, would choose fishing as a career; or if they live nearby woodlands, like the southern jungles of Iran, they may pursue carpentry to make money. Hence, food and work, affecting our daily life, are impressed by the weather.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people's living conditions can be specified by the economy. To explain, the governments of the regions of the world which has poor weather condition can overtake their challenges and gift a happy life with lots of facilities to their citizens. Dubai, in the United Arab Emirates, is a salient example of this matter. This city is located in one of the hottest barren deserts in the Middle East, but through the global trade in fossil fuels, gained a huge wealth, causing the welfare of citizens. Today, Dubai’s population are living in luxurious mansions; even though the weather is extremely hot, the municipality put some large air conditions on pavements. Therefore, economic situations significantly make an impression on humans’ lives.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while the climate can interfere with what people eat or do, I contend that fortune can surely overcome the effect of weather as a city like Dubai has amenities like perfect houses as well as public coolers, reducing the effect of climate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whats up with the electoral college? Can we really trust it? Ofcourse you cant and all that apose can stand up and walk out the door .The presidental race is a fake!!! So the goverment wants to tell you that you need to be a citezen to vote but what are you voting for? The electoral college is a fraud, your supposed to send your personal opinion to vote for the president of your country, not some lazy bum that sits in a chair all year and when time comes to put his vote in he overides yours and the peoples votes for you and not even care because they are getting paid to?\n\nIt only takes two hundered and seventiy votes from the electoral college to elect the president when theres over two billon residents in the united states? You mean to call this a demcracy when its really a underground dictator ship. I dont know how hard it is to bribe a person in a high postion but it is hard to bribe a whole country and thats why I belive we should get to actually vote for the next presdent theres no trust into the peoples belifes i mean yes theres alot of bandwagon fans and people who really have no idea of whats going on in their country but i promise you we wont fool around and compirmise the whole system beliving in our own belifes!!! these fancy bosos mignht thuink they know what their doung but they really dont there just a bunch money thisrty pigs and it isnt fair to the people to rely on theb electoeral college to pick the fate of our country as long as we live on it\n\nThe fact that we cant even pick the electors make it even worse i mean how are we even supposed to trust them i dont know who they are do you? how do you know what the legislators a caplble of they could have been bribed and no one would even know i mean the goverment already has alot of secterts and they could be asdding on the them and you wouldnt evem knowwhy beacuse its the goverment there broken up into little pieces of fruadery its incredibly anoyying to know that if you even try t fight about the rights of a cietzen you'll lose not even having to walk into the court room because the goverment runs that too!!!\n\nWhen I read the title for source two i automaticlly agreed with the incredbly percise source because I have been asking myself the same question ever since i first learned about it in middle school. Every time i would ask the teacher I would always get the same responce \"thats a good question let me get back to you on that.\" I know that its not the teacher because im pretty sure the presidnet cant even ansewr that. Even in source three it dosent answer my question and its the electoral colleges defence but their defense isnt that strong sorry to tell you that it gives me five reasons but there not strong reasons and I belive source two out battles the both source one and two.\n\nSo in conclusion i have stated in almost every pargargh DO NOT TRUST THE SYSTEM!!! I may be little kid but when I speak I bark and I hope the readers understand why I wrote this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist forty miles desert I arrived fisrt toun The setting desert affected cyclilst cyclist cyclist arising doun road men settings came affected cyclist The man crazy Her water bottles contained tantalizing sips Wide rings driead sweat circled shirt drop heatsroke gorqeas day june simply I listened gentleman tough This responese features setting affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Transportation has been a part of society for as long as the worlds been turning. It all depends what mode of transport you are willing to take on a daily basis. Cars are becoming fewer and fewer in some places of the past few years. People are less dependant on personal transportation which in turn creates a safer, healthier enviroment for ourselves and the others around us.\n\nBy limiting car usage the main reaction would be less pollution and less smog in largeer cities. Places like New York, Paris, Berlin, London, or Beijing could look so much better. Everywhere you look you see and hear about pollution and Greenhouse Gases and Global Warming. All this is caused mainly by humans hand and the cars we drive spitting out toxic Carbon Dioxide wastes. In Paris they had a one day ban of half the cars in the city and the smog went away in that amount fo time.(Source 2) If we limited cars we could unlimit our world to a new, longer lifespan, because cars are truly ripping our planet to pieces.\n\nThe chance of finding public transportation in America is very slim. Most places you go don't have subways or things like \"der U-Bahn\" in Deutschland. Our counrty is made for cars and we throw money at them every year which will eventually come to bite America in the butt. 80 percent of appropriations have gone to higways and the rest goes to other types of transport in America.(Source 1) By creating more viable public tansportation methods we could cut the spending on highways and put the money back into public transportation. By doing so we could limit accidents at the wheel and reduce pollution which I mentioned earlier. We already know that this system works in Vauban, Deutschland where residents rarely own cars and they live happier, quainter lives. (Source 1)\n\nThe time to by a car is not now. Recent studies show that car purchases, licenses, and driving has become fewer as each year goes on.(Source 4) Either from high vehicle and gas prices or an actual social spectical, driving is slowly decreasing all over the world. Hopefully within the next 25 years, public transportation will be a MUST in cities all over the globe, and I'm not just talking about buses. People are more reliant on planes and trains in Europe than any other continent. And we could benefit highly from what we learn elsewhere.\n\nIf we just join together and stop driving alltogether for just one day, the results would be both extraordianry and frightening. We have neglected to see that by not limiting our car usage we have limited our time on this planet. Hopefully our generation will correct the wronging of past generations and improve transportation so it isn't such a loud and obnoxtious hinderence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to be a seagoing cowboy? I would I think it would be fun.You get to see alot of beautiful places,and you can play games to pass time.Especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.The cow boys played alot of games like volleyball and baseball,where the animals was being housed,table tennis,fencing,boxing and even reading.\n\nFirst,the trips was an amazing opportunity for a small town boy.I had the side benefit of seeing china and Europe. Even some places I never heard about its so wonderful.When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle boat trip,they told me to just keep doing that for my service .By the time i was discharged in 1947,Then I had made nine trips,the most of any seagoing cowboy.It took about two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept me busy.\n\nThey had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Last,but being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world to me,im grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self-driving cars are the new inventions of our generation! Let's celebrate we just made a new creative invention that people have been waiting for...or maybe not. We still make mistakes. We are not computers, but we are the ones that create them. Maybe this is not such a fantastic idea when you think about it.\n\nAccording to the article, these cars will be \"safer\" due to sensors that should alert the driver as soon as there is a task that the car cannot perform by itself. These tasks include situations such as navigating around accidents and construction. However, this is still a very new invention. Even older technology that we continue using today contain glitches. The most common is the computer. Even the most popular and well-made brand will still have difficulties. In my experience, cars have had way too many glitches too. Every year people spend way too much money on cars. Maybe we should perfect everything we have before we try to find a possibly more harmful solution.\n\nI don't believe that this was in the article, but I would think that most people would by this driverless car because they want to rest on the way to work. It's early in the morning, and people must want to have just a few more minutes or relaxation, maybe even sleep, before they have to deal with another full day of stress. The problem with this is that people fall asleep quite fast. What worries me the most is that individuals who miss their alarm clock in the morning would most likely miss the vibration that the car would provide, as stated in the article. Therefore, our lack of awareness would cause even more accidents than before.\n\nIn our economy today, people are constantly looking forand losing jobs today. My mother is currently searching for a job that would help benifit our family since she lost her job that provided everything we needed. Now imagine a thousand drivers education teachers and BMV workers struggling to find a job because of this one car. I understand that this will not be an immediate change, but overtime people will lose money and families could eventually break up due to the widespread of this invention.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not support this idea. I worry too much about others due to personal experiences. It's great that our community is using our brains to create an easier world; However, i do not believe that it is the right time. Our knowledge of electronics and awareness of basic people's needs must grow more. I can see driverless cars in our future, but I will only support it when it is the right time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that can read your facial expression! Its a computer softwear that can reconize human emotion. Would this be benfital technology emotional expressions of students in a classroom?\n\nThe computer softwear that can read your facial expressionwas devoled by Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinions. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at what they do. They are wanting to understand better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nThis technology that Dr. Huang and his colleagues have created would be benfital for intergation, prouduct review,and schools. when it comes to schools there are some pors and cons like how would a school afford it and the only time it would probably be used is if a student gets introuble. Some cons are how can the school affored the softwear, how would one use it, and will probably get trained to use it. Some pros are probably will lower the displin in school and less viilents. So the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions od students in a classroom valuable, no because how would the student us it. theyll probably just paly around with the computer softwear.\n\nIn conclusion this is pretty cool but there are some areas where its not gonna help out like school because there are alot of cons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many difficult obstacles one obstacles crowded dirigible crowded cause dirigible hit bump another building pop thing The wind could also make dirigible sway hit another building Another obstacle stress building dirigible tied If wind blew hard dirigible would put alot tension building something could go wrong", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many cities are experiencing perhaps the biggest economic change being implemented into society since the invention of the Model T. People just simply aren't interested in attaining a personal vehicle, or even a license for that matter. As a result, many personal vehicle companies are starting to become more \"mobile\" to stay with the times, or become bankrupt due to being stagnant in sales. Not owning a car has actually proved to come with more advantages than if owning a car. Such as, less carbon emissions in the air, less stress in certain communites where car-free zones are being implemented, and finally restaurants and stores becoming more \"cropped up\" due to rush-hour restrictions; essentially boosting the economy.\n\nThe lack of car use has fundamentally benefitted the environment as an entirety. Cars emit carbon emissions into the air that are not only harmful to many animals, but to humans as well. According to Source 2, in Paris, France alone, it was shown that \"due to the use of diesel fuel over regular fuel, there were 147 micrograms of particle matter per cubic meter.\" Comparing this to other major cities in Europe that find more use for regular gasoline, you'll find that the results are less. In Brussels, there were 114 micrograms of PM per cubic meter, and in London, 79.7. Even though areas that used more regular fuel over diesel fuel were significantly lower in micrograms of particle matter, even 79.7 micrograms can be potentially fatal, and cause lung-related health problems in the later lives of the people occupying these areas. Officials not only in Paris, but also in major cities such as Bogota, Colombia and New York City, New York have also began to take a stand. In Paris, France for example, \"there are certain days in which cars cannot be driven by people with license plates ending in even numbers, and the next day by people with license plates ending in odd numbers. This new way of thinking has been implemented into the French law system to help decrease the amount of pollution in the air.\" (Source 2) Bogota has also found a unique approach to a less polluted environment. \"Car-free day is a day in which no cars are driven, with the exception of buses and taxis.\" (Source 3) Finally, New York City has implemented a \"new bike-sharing program in which bicycles can be rented for a cost-effective amount. In addition to this, bridge and tunnel tolls have also reflected these new priorities by skyrocketing in price.\" (Source 4) These new implementations have proved beneficial in decreasing the amount of carbon emissions in the air. Many communities have not only found a way to reduce pollution in the air, but also live a more stress-free lifestyle.\n\nStress and rush-hour are known to have some corollation, but newer communites are starting to take a stand by limiting the amount of car usage in their area. Vauban, Germany, a newer community only just established in 2006, is an example of one of these communites that has started to \"smart plan.\" Over 70 percent of Vauban's occupants don't own a car, and 57 percent have sold a car to move there.\" (Source 1) A happier lifestyle has appeared as a result. According to Heidrun Walter, an occupant in Vauban. When she had a car, she was always \"tense.\" But now, she's a much happier mother of two, and the distant hum of an occasional motor vehicle is drowned out by the \"chattering of wandering children.\" (Source 1) In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) is suggesting that we start implementing these \"car reduced\" communities in our nation to better society, as well as to provide a more stress-free environment for these new communites' residents. (Source 1) Even in Bogota, people have said that the use of no cars is a \"great opportunity that has taken away stress and lowered air pollution.\" (Source 3)\n\nNot only has pollution been reduced in all of this or the fact that a factor attributing to stress has also been removed, but areas where these communites are starting to form, have also boosted the economy. In Bogota, it has been reported that due to Car-free day, that both \"parks and sports centers have started to appear throughout the city. In additon to this, sidewalks have been replaced by more broad, smooth sidewalks. As well as, rush-hour traffic has been cut, allowing new restaurants and upscale shopping districts to flourish.\" (Source 3) \"Cars are starting to become a thing of the past,\" according to Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University. Even her children (19 and 21) don't have licenses. \"They say they're interested, but it's not a priority for them,\" she later goes on to say. As a result, gas money is saved, and people can spend more money on things that matter to them.\n\nIn conclusion, it has been displayed that the advantages of not using a car are starting to outweight the benefits. The lack of car use in these car-free communities is helping to reduce stress and tension on the road, boost not only the community's economy, but also the entire nation's economy as well. In addition to this, the lack of car use is also helping to preserve the environment, by reducing carbon emissions into the air. According to many sociologists and business professionals, the downfall of the car may well be on its way, but it may not be such a bad thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this facial action codig system would be really helpfull to people who work on computers or students. comptuer work is boring and lame so i would want it to send me somethjing that makes me laugh or smile.\n\nI think the facial acting coding system will be a good idea on life on this plane. t it could help out our students like it said in paragraph 6 it said the computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then the computer could modify the lesson like an effective human instuctor. or when you get on anybody it could see your emotion and give you something that woukld help with it. it could make video games better and in paragraph 6 it says that\n\n\"most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication so computers need to understand that to\".\n\nThen again some people would think that its weird to have a computer watching your face 24/7. ,aybe it could turn into a robot and take over the world. we would never know but if they did come out with the facial action coding system it would be kinda cool to have videos and stuff to cheer you up if your sad if your in a good mood could send you something to make you laugh. Even if your just doing homework and it could tell that your upset or confused or just bugged out by the problem it could help you without even asking fo9r help it would help you out right away i think thats coool cause alot of kids need help on stuff like that and for teachers they cant help alot of students with work. So before the teacher even gets to them the computer could be helping them alreadfy its like a teaher thats already there and lord knows every student wants that extra help to pass.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I have recently read an article by the name of ¨Driverless Cars Are Coming¨, and asked my opinion.\n\nI believe they could be very dangerous, they´re many sensors and techology to do with the car, who is to say they couldn´t malfunction, or intercept waves a sentence from paragraph 4 indicates my fear,¨For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors....Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, rotatin sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors....¨ and much more.\n\nI also believe the driverless cars could put the country in even more debt.\n\nIn paragraph six they state that¨Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.¨\n\nThe last time I herd the United States was eight trillion dollars in debt, should we really consider adding two hundred million per radar to that eight trillion?\n\nI also would like to go back to the subject of malfuctioning.\n\nIf a driverless car malfunction, the company could possibly and most likely be sewed, we would have even more money added to that debt to try to prevent it from happening again and no one really knows spending all that money would even prevent it from malfunctioning again, and lastly we would have some very unhappy customers on our hands.\n\nWe could be talking riots, people wanting their money back, shootings, killing.\n\nSo many unanswered possibilites could go wrong with this idea and production of ¨driverless cars¨.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that ¨driverless cars¨ productivity should be shut down for what we don´t know could become of it in the future wether it be money, mobs of angry customers or people that have been offected by them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are in the near future. \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes Benz, Audi,and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\"(P10). They are not only helpful for the driver by allowing them to relax and not worry about the dangers of the road, but are also safer to other vechicles on the road. This making driverless cars a safe and easy way of transportation. \"Futher improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\"(P5). Driverless cars are a needed update in our modern automobile and will positively effect the world in the long run.\n\nThe driverless car is in fact an efficiant substitutuion for the human, with the car being able to do things a driver can not such as braking and response.\"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"(P5). New improvements of the design allow the car to work faster and still require human awareness if a problem were to occur. Making it much safer than previous models.\"The car can handle driving functions up to 25 mph, but special toch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\"(P7). Their are several options to notify the driver of needed assistance such as \"...driver's seats that vibrate when the vechicle is in danger of backing into an object. The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\"(P7). Some may think this new update may leave the driver bored and uninterested with them being the second in command driver, but in fact some manufacturors plan on making the ride both safe and entertaining. \"Some manufacturors hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays. Some displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over- something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\"(P8).\n\nThe driverless car is a positive improvement to our modern automobile and will be both safe and efficiant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This along lines personal thought Some people happy things others disagree Unless racist sexist one right say something ca nt belong If someone nt like book walk away nt ponder someone else want So I dont like topic personally ok writing Its choice like really nt even choice people say belongs unless rightfully owned individual I know many things I dont like I dont try get things moved banned Its people want read Plus person wrote made object would shot CAPS sadness rejection Along lines insulting race andor sexist If done book stopped disposed People right say happy dont like topic others need move make big deal Now title says book walk away nt pay attention People use research something future Now people selfcentered want need cause huge fight stupid little things Thats people always got things handed I imagine topic came So thoughts believes topic Censorship It nt matter school library someone iswas interested item I know thoughts believes people completely think wrote stupid think smart Its culture grew mind current time place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Homeschooling is something that has grown in popularity in recent years. As with any debate, there are pros and cons for both sides, and the ultimate choice depends on each child's needs and abilities. However, in terms of practicality and feasibility, the apparent advantages of homeschooling may not hold water.>\r\n\r\nIndeed, it can be said that at home, education can be precisely tailored, taking place at the child's pace, and answering their questions as they ask them. Parents can also include subjects that schools don't normally teach but they want to teach their children, such as a certain religion or subjects related to cultural heritage and language. However, with no formal curriculum, homeschooling leads to unstructured learning, and as a result, homeschooling outcomes fall short of expectations in most cases. In contrast, studying at school provides collective knowledge. The school's formal curriculum is well-structured and developed by professionals who have been trained in the field and have a better understanding of children's needs and psychology. To make matters worse, it is impossible for parents to take care of all aspects of education and ensure that their children receive a comprehensive and balanced education.\r\n\r\nAnother consideration is the child's adjustment to social norms. Homeschooled children, confined to the comfort of their homes and a safe environment, are less prone to peer pressure. However, peer interaction is hindered, depriving them of healthy competition that inspires them to push their limits and succeed at their highest potential. Schooling requires an atmosphere of learning from peers and the ability to think differently, avoiding problems that may arise due to the child's inclinations. As homeschooled children inherit the beliefs of their parents and mentors, their perspectives can become narrow or biased. In a classroom setting, children have many opportunities to interact and collaborate with their peers, which will help prepare them for acceptance and adjustment in the inevitable future workplace or social situations.\r\n\r\nIn short, although it seems that family education caters more to personality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In other nations, after graduation in high school, youth are encouraged to go overseas for travel or to find a job for a period of one year prior to enrollment in universities for continuing studies. Some people believed that these have an effect on young people. The advantages on young people when working or traveling before entering college are saving money and making funds which can be used for matriculation, and they can have enough time for mental break which foster mental health that will help them more prepared individual as student. While the disadvantages are waste of money when traveling and delayed finishing studies when working.\nMoreover, when deciding to take an educational break for travel or work between finishing high school and entering in college has advantages. First would be making funds for enrollment fees and saving money for allowance. Young people can have the opportunity to support themselves in their studies instead of asking financial support from parents. By this way, they become more independent because they can provide their daily necessities. Second would be achieving healthy mental health through traveling abroad. For some students, high school is stressful just like college especially when they are too serious in studying. Going abroad for a vacation might help to destress the students at the same time giving self a time for relaxation which is essential to the mind and body.\nHowever, this decision also brings disadvantages to young people like wasting of money or savings from parents when traveling abroad. Instead of saving this money for college, it is used for booking a trip, hotel accommodation, and other recreational activities. Another would be waste of time, because instead of finishing studies on time in a university, students might be delayed in their graduation because of a year spent in vacation. As a consequence, timeline in studying and getting a degree is longer than usual.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to read someones elses emotions and expressions is not always the most valuable thing to do because people hide there imotions for a reason for example to be alone not to make other people fell sorry for them thats why alot of people hide there emotions and face expressions.\n\n''Emphaty (feeling someone elses emotional state) may happen because we unconsiously imitate another persons facial expression. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.''\n\nThe quote/piece from the passage shows us of much one of these new computer programs can tell about us and our emotions and expressions but this quote all so tells us how much science has advance in our world and how much we all need this type of science because all evebody talks about is science how we can make our world better useing more amd more science descovering new science and this step of emotion and expression regonition us huge because althought alpot of people are not in favor with it there alot of ways to use this new technology. foe example police can use it in solving interogation cases by detecting wether there laying or telling the truth by there face expression this technology can also be use by profesional guides consulors when there with there patients because that way they khow how there feeling and can help them better. In conclusion all this shows that this new technology of being able of telling your emotions and expressions is not the most valuable to some people but it can also be use to help people with there problems and that how science technology should be used.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nIn all honestly, getting rid of the Electoral College is for the best. It's unfair to the voters. Changing it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States would be easier for the people.\n\nSource 2 states that the Electoral college is unfair for the voters because the candidates don't go to states they don't have a chance of winning, because of the winnner-take-all system. The candidates only focus on the tight races in the swing states. Sorce 2 also claims that in the 2000 election, 17 states didn't see the candidates at all! That's pretty rediculous. And voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't even get to see a single campaign ad.\n\nIn the Electoral College system, voters dont only vote for the president, but for electors, who also vote for the president. Then again, in source 2, the article says the the electors that were voted for can vote for anyone they choose. That's some tricky business.\n\nVoters can't control who the electors vote for. Electors aren't even voted for by the people. They sometimes come from state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes even the presidential candidates themselves. The second article says that the legislature is responsible for picking the electors. And these electors coukd always go against what the people want.\n\nArticle 1 says that to Electoral college is meant to be a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College consists of the meeting of electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of electoral votes by congress.\n\nDoing away with the Electoral Cololege is the best thing to do for the people. IT's unfair and tricky. The people deserve to be respected and not cheated out of their vote by electors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new software can make 3-D models based off your face, to be able to do this software need to have fine accuracy. the software could identify humans emotions, but should be used in some cases. As in making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. What they shouldnt be allowed to do, is to choose certein ads and tv shows based off your emotions.\n\nThe new software is a compter that can know someones emotions just baseed off of one photo, or painting. This compter has such fine accuracy that it can make 3-D animated faces by the 44 major muscles thats in your face. This compter can know weather if your happy, surprised, anger, etc. This makes it easier for game designers to create people with better expressive faces, can help with video surgery.\n\nThe desgners of the computer also want it to show peolpe ads based off the peoples emotions, weather if there sad, happy, mad, etc. This would make people more incline to buy something based off there emotions. Which shouldn't be allowed, beacuse the computer could take control over peoples wants and there needs based off there emotions. This also is a lake of privite life, meaning that, beacuse your computer is scanning your face to \"finger out your emotions\" it also have a copy of your face. Which if people can get a hold that, they would have personal info. For example, with the new Iphone X. you can unlock your phone by putting your camera towards face. so if you happen to fall asleep, someone could get a hold of your phone and unlock it by putting it towards your face.\n\nIn conclusion the new computer software is a great creation which could help with computer animation and video surgery. But shouldn't be allowed to be used for ads, to make people but stuff based off there emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human nature and activities performed to have a gloomy effect on flora and fauna all over the globe. Many people are of the view that the time is gone to do something about it while a part of the population still believes that there is time to take some positive actions towards it. I am personally inclined towards the latter part of society which would be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, a number of activities that are prevailing in the industry have a deteriorating effect on plants as well as animals such as the industrial waste that goes into the sea and other areas, animals go on to drink this water and further get a number of diseases with the chemicals which get mixed with water. Consequently, cutting down forests and killing animals for food is another point which is essential for living up to the human race as it is the source of feeding and getting the necessary items available for an ever-growing population. For instance, wooden furniture is an essential commodity for people which is being made by cutting down trees, thus impacting nature and unbalancing the forests. Hence, the increasing demand won't let the situation differ rather it will get worse as the demand rises with numbers.\r\n\r\nOn the flip side, actions can be taken related to the waste being produced by industries as it can be dumped at a place which causes a limited effect on animals. Similarly, there are ways to protect animals which are being killed for food in case there is no demand from people and they shift to going vegan as killing an animal for food is even worse for the human race as implied in a number of mythologies. Furthermore, steps can be taken by the government to curb the cutting down of trees along with implementing laws that help protect wildlife and natural habitat from cruel human activities towards them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, looking at the current scenario world is heading towards a situation where the flora and fauna would get diminish as time progresses but there must be laws in place to protect the ecological balance that is of paramount importance for the natural habitat of animals and their living source that are plants.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what will happen if we keep using cars as a means of transportaiton? All the air pollution, killing the atmosphere, wasting valuable reasoruces. The future is going to be a place where we can't even breathe in air without having a mask on our heads due to smog. Going green as in limiting cars is a tremendous idea for the communites, and for the planet for various reasons. No smog in the atmosphere, greener communites, and more benefical ways of transportaion. Once you go green you will go never back.\n\nTo start off, Smog is one of the main disadvantages of owning or being in heavily populated area where they use cars frequently. Smog is when the cars emit there gases out of there tailpipe, and get traped in the atmosphere causing people to have problems breathing. Articles in the city of Paris in France said that they had to ban cars due to the smog in the atmosphere. They hit a near record of air pollution and stopped people form using there cars on certian days to clear the smog from the atmosphere. On that five day period of the intensifying smog actually rivaled the place of Beijing, China which is known to be one of the most polluted cities in the world. Once the smog cleared they rescind the ban of car usage only to be a the same place there are going to be now if they keep on using cars.\n\nIn addition, cities around the world are creating new communities where they are not allowed to use cars. In Vauban, Germany the residents there are in a set up where they cannot use cars in there everyday life. 70 percent of the people over there do not own a car and 57 percent sold their car just to move into the community. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrum Walter, a resident of the city. Other places in the world like in Bogota, Colombia is in a program that they cannot use cars in there life. The life were they are no cars is a good life for a community and for everyone else.\n\nLastly, the end of transportion is not done, but people are finding new ways of transportation. Newer ways of transportation has stared in New York they have a bike-sharing program has skyrocketed. As well as car pooling since only one car or van is being used rather than 4 of 5 cars it is more efficient. People in the United states are using these ideas in there everyday life. Sutdies have shown that are less likely to get their drivers liscense and get a car. The world will be in a better place without car usage.\n\nTo summerize, limiting car usage is a extrodinary idea to make the world a better place. To cease the air pollution of smog, to make greener communities, and to make efficent ways of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author includes show determination pass test matter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of many controversial debates in the crucial impact of high-tech machines is related to their availability. According to society, the accessible of computer engineering is widely expected to cause greater disparities between the wealth and the poor, while others believe it has potential to reduce inequality. In this essay, I will analyse both perspectives which contribute to my viewpoint.\r\n\r\nGranted, it can be argued that such development of technology accessibility is augment the interruption between high status and low status individuals since the cost of having and utilizing advanced programs can be prohibitively unaffordable for many people, particularly those from low-income backgrounds. As a result, those who can pay to invest in the latest technological innovations gain a significant benefit over those who cannot. Another drawback of this enhancement is that the superior countries tend to have greater GDP, which means that they are more conveniently to access, an upgrade of numerous modern devices, while those in underprivileged nations are left behind, therefore subsequently exacerbate inequality between countries.\r\n\r\nHowever, this line of reasoning is not sound since there are multiple comprehensive approaches from such critically progress such as improving accessibility of education. For instance, online platform classes, by providing people with access to high-quality educational resources regardless of their location or socioeconomic status. Therefore, this method can help level the playing fields and furnish individuals with knowledge and skills they need to succeed in the modern economic. Furthermore, the considerable breakthrough of such progress is that can enhance availability to healthcare by enabling such as remote consultations, telemedicine, and other form-related of digital health. This almighty technique can be particularly beneficial for people who in rural or remote areas who may not possibility access to healthcare infrastructures.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the impact of modern devices accessibility on social status inequality is nuanced and depends on various factors, I believe there are more advantages that mankind can be gained from such this advancement such as online classes and digital healthcare techniques.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present, a large number of people are realized of the history of their residence. This essay will analyze what might be reasons and methods to find out this information.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons individuals care about the data of their accommodation. First of all, a house is a great investment for owning an estate. Consequently, they must reliably acquire info for their financial security. For example, statistics of murder or crime for making inhabitants confidently live fearlessly. It is not only for people who own and live in their house but also for someone who rents a property. Moreover, one matter they must concern about investment is the quality of building construction. According to the strong structure and the climate change in districts, these must affect increasing of property value. The final reason is social living, buyers should receive the unique style data of those areas for considering and deciding to pay the huge money for those places.\r\n\r\nPresently, there are many systems to search for it. The first one is finding news and situations which have ever happened in each zone on the internet. Secondly, the interview by surveying the local people in the district for a long time, they are able to receive the myths from an inside point of view. Lastly, Hiring house check-up specialists. They are able to provide the details about materials, quality of the structure or the construction legal.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, the history of buildings research in many countries, people can be aware of most of the information for various reasons such as business and living safety. There are many accesses to find out about those houses. To illustrate, Internet, expert offices and local resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people, including nasa, believe that \" the Face\" is just a natural landform. Yes, it is odd for a landform to look like a face on a planet thet doesn't have rain fot it to erode like that. It is a very agruable topic because there is really no proof of life on Mars.\n\nFirst off, the Face on mars is simply a natural landform. For all we know the face could've been there for a while but we never saw it before becasue Mars could've rotated around to that side. Also that was the first ship that NASA sent to Mars to take pictures, therefore it could be older than we think.\n\nSecondly, the only reason it \"has\" eyes, a nose and a mouth is because of shadows and clouds. The way the light is shining upon the Face it is casting a shadow to make it appear as if it really had facial structures. It was also a cloudy time of year on Mars when the pictures were taken.\n\nNext, Most people can agree that it is very odd for something to look like a face that isn't man-made. NASA isn't 100 percent sure that there is/ is not life on Mars. Therefore we can not make a correct statement that the Face is man-made or not.\n\nThen, you have to take in consideration that NASA waited 18 years to go back and get more pictures. If you look closely at the pictures, the Face changed in those 18 years. It faded away naturally over the years. You can see that because you can't really see the facial structures that good anymore. If there was life on Mars they would've repaired it. If you look at the picture from 1998 at the angle the picture was taken at, it looks as if it is a mountain.\n\nFinally, It is most likely a natural landform because it faded away never repaired. The clouds and shadows upon the Face make it appear as if it was built. There is no proof that there is or is not life on Mars. For all we know there could be aliens on Mars but NASA is not for sure that there is because they have never stepped foot on Mars. NASA has only had a rover to take pictures. Only pictures is all that NASA has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We have all seen the look on Leonardo da Vinci's very own Mona Lisa's face. Some might see a blank face. Some may see happiness, anger or even fear. A machine by the name of Facial Action Coding Systems (FACS) can tell you exactly how she feels. This new technology can even be valuable in the classroom.\n\nThis recently created software scans facial movements. It weighs the different units of expression. Although Mona Lisa is just a painting that doesn't move, she is compared to a neutral face. According to Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe, researchers of FACS, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nIt may seem unlikely that Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FACS, only uses \"six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear and sadness\", but when the computer constructs a 3-D model, it uses all 44 major muscles in the face.\n\nImagine making a certain facial expression and your computer screen magically changes its settings. In the future Dr. Huang predicts \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This could cause a dramatic postive change in test scores. Also not all students can gather information the same way. Students will want to know more if the information is grabbing their attention.\n\nAllowing computers to scan information from facial expressions in the classroom setting can and will drive students to want to learn because of the personal format and reliablity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I fighting little brother kicked chin I promised I would tell even I busted chin open second time kicked I fell ground right front everybody else I swarmed like bunch bees around hive full honey That I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus presents very many reasons for humans to study it. For one, scientists have reason to believe that Venus may of been similar to Earth. A second reason for humans to study it is that there are geographical landforms all over the planet. With this being said, Venus is a worthy pursuit to explore and study although it will be very dangerous.\n\nScientists beleive long ago, Venus was able to support various forms of life. They say it could have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. It is beleived that Venus may have once had oceans and very similar geographical\n\nlandforms similar to Earth. It is also beleived that Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar landforms such as valleys, mountains and craters.\n\nVenus presents very many challenges that may almost seem impossible for humans to explore, but it is worth the risk of exploring and discovering what may of once been on this very unforgiving planet. Venus presents many reasons to be explored, such as the possibility that it may of once been able to sustain a way of supporting various forms of life and having similar geographical landforms similar to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traditions and standards of behaviour have long been integral parts of society, serving as a defining aspect of different nationalities and tribes. Today, there is a rising concern about the significance of those inheritances in modern society. I believe certain traditions should be preserved, while other customs, causing unnecessary burdens, should be eliminated from modern life.\r\n\r\nSome traditional and moral standards play a crucial role in preserving the identity of a nation and serving a good purpose. For example, respect for older people exists in many societies and forms a basis for good social relationships. Another simple example is how people perform a handshake when they meet, which shows the level of politeness and respect for another person. Such gestures and behaviour standards should persist in society because they generally benefit humanity.\r\n\r\nHowever, certain traditions are not worth spending time or money on and do more harm than good. For example, one of the most burdensome customs in the world is Uzbek weddings, which are generally known for a large number of guests invited and overly expensive restaurants where they are held. Uzbeks work almost their entire lifetime to accumulate enough money to organize such weddings for their sons and daughters. These traditions bear little benefit for people, and the amount of time and dedication wasted on them could be spent on more valuable activities.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, every nation has custom social norms and traditions which form its identity. But there are also plenty of practices which only exist for demonstrative purposes of power and wealth, which, I believe, do not have a place in contemporary society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, having a child is one of the most important factors in parts of people's lives. The first baby was born when the parents were ageing. The following essay will discuss why having children at older ages is more beneficial.\r\n\r\nThe fact that most people have a first child when they are older ages have two main reasons behind it. Firstly, parents pursue succeeding in professional life which means they have a stable in their careers. When they were steady, secondly, money will be achieved in return for their work hard. Clearly, academic staff in many countries, who have their first baby when they are 35-40 years old, can afford what children need such as living costs, education, health, and so on. Hence, no doubt why people who are older ages just have their first children.\r\n\r\nThe consequence of this phenomenon is that social problems caused by children decrease such as any kind of crime. It is because children grow up with quality. They are able to be teachers, doctors, businessmen, scientists, and so, having the knowledge to think, analyze, and distinguish whatever problems that they have faced. Furthermore, these children will become vital persons who drive their countries to be successful in the future. Therefore, there are more useful for having children late. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, becoming a parent when getting older after success in a career is the best choice for me because it can guarantee that parents can raise their children to be qualified people in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble because teachers and other students can tell how a student may feel. It is important to know how someone is feeling so they can get counciling if needed, or so they can cheer up others. It's also important to be able to recognize facial expressions and the different types of muscle movements. This new type of technology can also be used to improve school systems. The Facial Action Coding System is of value to use on reading students' emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can regonize how a student may be feeling. This could be beneficial for teachers and councilors because then they could help the student with any emotional problems they may be having. The technology, \"can even identify mixed emotions\". Mixed emotions can show a mix of happiness and sadness at the same time because people's emotions aren't always clear, and people can appear as something they are not. Facial expressions for each and every emotion are diverse.\n\nRecognizing facial expressions and different muscle movements can help determine how someone is feeling. Instead of, \"we humans perform(ing) this same impressive \"calculation\"\", we humans can use a more reliable source. The Facial Action Coding System can, \"handle the complex algorithms used to decode\". It can, \"indicate the difference between a geniune smile and a forced one.\" Having this in a classroom can tell what students are actually feeling, and we humans wouldn't have to be forced to guess.\n\nThis type of technology can improve how schools work. If, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", then a teacher or staff member can better help that student or excite the class. Or, \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". The learning process can be made more entertaining and enriching to students.\n\nHaving technology to read students' emotional expressions in school is vauble. It can determine if a student has mixed emotions and needs a councilor, it can calculate how a student honestly feels, and it can improve school systems by giving more attention to those who are troubled or bored. This technological system can be beneficial and vauble.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Unmasking Face on Mars is just a natural landform on Mars. Many objects on Earth can resemble a face it could just be a mountain of sand that some how looks like a face. In the article it claims of huge rock formation that \"resembles\" a face. The picture was taken by a space craft at a far away distance forming shadowing giving the \"illusion\" of a nose, eyes, and mouth.\n\nFirst, the reason why the \"face\" is a natural landform is because on Earth you can compare a face in many objects around you. Some natural landforms on Earth such as Middle Butte in the Snake river Plain of Idaho looks like it has a face also. You can make out a face in even day to day objects. Even a tree near your neighborhood could look like a \"face\".\n\nSecondly, the reason why the \"face\" is just a natural landform is because the huge rock formation causes shadows. The shadows of the huge formation of rock can create the illusion of a face. The shadows can make it look like it has a nose, eyes, and mouth like structure in cases such as this one.\n\nLastly, the \"face\" on Mars is a natural landform because the photo was taken by a satelite. The pictures come in pixels meaning it could come out blury or unclear to clarify. The shadowing of the mound also gives the illusion in the picture of a \"face\". The \"face\" on Mars is only a natural landform that was mistaken as something else more than that because of the illusion of a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist For example page Kurmaskie said I got hands working hande rusted water pump strength shows desperation due lack water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout history, adult people have been those who worked on farms and they also were responsible for breeding animals. Recently, it has been suggested that kids in elementary schools should also take part in such occupations. In this essay, I will count possible advantages as well as some disadvantages of such a change in life, in order to conclude whether or not it is a cost effective notion.\nIt is commonly believed that the enviroment has been endangered by imminent risks. Some people speculate that humans have been less connected to nature and therefore are not aware of the detrimental effects of their activities on the environment. Thus, teaching children how to raise up vegetables and how to get along with pets can probably strengthen bonds between children and nature in early phases of life. Furthermore, If children grew plants in early stage of life, they would develop unique creative skills alongside enhancing their productivity. Moreover, some experts claim that treating animals may benefit children as it would improve their social and communicational skills.\nOn the other hand, there is another aspect which merits futher consideration. Some plants are known to be poisonous and unsafe to young people. In addition, growing plants and spending time on farms might make children prone to a few insects and reptiles which can be really dangerous. Finally, animals could be harmful if they are treated inappropriately.\nTo recapitulate, as we try to wiegh up the pros and cons of such an enterprise, I still reckon that the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages. However, in order guarantee the possible advantages I have mentioned upun above, certain safety measures should be taken to offset the potential risks opposed to children as they are in proximity to plants and animals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I strongly belive computers nt benefit society much people think I think nature provide qualatys computer A computure provide fitness real interactions friends family experience real world Did know children overweight lack exercising Acording computer systems leading cause lack exercise So would system leads obesity considered benefit sociaty Anotherthing topic overweight children spend hours Put healthy activatys basketball tennis wich also leaves socialy behind lacking healthy experiences wich leads next point People think computers know everything truth vary little things experience computer For example read world war realy know people thinking combat fealt like A computer teach feal real life experience Many deployed army write You would know like war playing game reading article nt provide experience My explamation computers greatest affect scociaty true life interactions family friends Their one true way see family friends personally People claim talk friends family time satisfied seeing real example romantic relationship would fail way communicated threw Unlike relationships sucseed I hope letter newspaper get peoples attention I would apretiate joined cause help protect scociaty dangerous computure technology could cause obesity bad relations inexperience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This kind of technology should not be used to read students' emotional expressions for a couple of reasons.\n\nFirst of all, whether you are a teacher, counselor, or another student, you can never assume what is going on in someone elses life unless you know first hand. If we bring this facial expression recongnition software to schools, it could reveal what someone else is going through, hence invading their privacy. If someone is going through a tough time and hasen't told anyone, that means that they don't want people to know about it. This new technology would reveal someone's sadness and could lead to finding out that that person has depression. This could potentially leak out into the rest of the school and that person would be made fun of because this software found it out.\n\nSecond, why would we want this at our schools. If I could have one valid reason as to what purpose we could possibly use this software in our schools, maybe it would make more sense to me. In my perspective, this technology is useless when it comes to schools. Maybe in crime solving and lie detectors it would be useful, but never schools. What are you going to do, tell little Jonny's parents that he's 40% depressed? No! Even if he was depressed, I'm sure he'd want no one to know about it. With this software around, students would have to try and hide their emotions from it. I believe that students should have the basic right to show their emotions how they'd like and act freely when it comes to emotional expression.\n\nIn conclusion, this software should never be brought to schools for privacy and uselessness reasons. If by any means it does come into schools, it should be restricted and only the right people should know their emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator, I am wriitting you this letter to argue about removing the Electoral college. Using the electoral college has caused some disrruption when its it comes to the votes. From the article \"The indefensible electoral college\" it says that \"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors\". Who are the electors? well anyone can be an elector not holding public office. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? no. these are one of the reasons to remove the electoral college.\n\nAlso, the electoral college should be removed because of the 2000 voting fiasco that happened. from the article \"The indefensible electoral colllege\" it says it was the biggest election crisis in the century\". Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors wioll always defy the will of the people. If we the people vote for our choice to run this country their should not be any of these fiascos.\n\nNext, even presidents, AFL-CIO in their time have aggreed with this. they all want to remove the electoral college. according to the article a gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Algore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but won the presidency, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all system in each state, canidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\n\nFinally,the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. This system should be removed you might not know what elector you are votingfor or after that 2000 fiasco why would you still have have the electoral college.\n\nIn conclusion, these are my reasons why the electoral college should be removed. first, you wont know what elector you are voting for. Next, the 2000 fiasco. Finally, because it is unfair, outdated and irrational.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are a lot of different opinions regarding the teaching of children and what is best for a childs developement. Although some people believe that homeschooling is the best teaching method for the developement of children, most people are of the opinion that it is essential for children to go to school.\nThe most popular of the two opinons is that it is important for children to attend school. The main reason that people believe this, is because socialization with other children in school is viewed as being essential for the cognitive and social developement of children. The advantages of children attending school therefore consists of an improved social life with more friends their own age. This can help young children figure out how to navigate social situations better and improve their own self-image by receiving confirmation from their peers. Although there are a lot of advantages for children attending school, there are also a lot of disadvantages. The main disadvantage is that children don't get to spend a lot of time with their family. This can decrease the influence that parents have on their children in the long term and inable their ability to raise their children according to their own values.\nThe other less popular opinion is that it is better to teach your children at home rather than to send them off to school. The main reason that some people believe this, is because these parents are concerned that outside influences have the ability to disturb their childrens upbringing. The greatest advantage of homeschooling is that it promotes a better nuclear family and provides parents with more control concerning their childs upbringing. However, this schooling method comes with some disadvantages too, since childrens social developement can be hindered due to inatequate social interactions with children their own age.\nIn conclusion, I believe that it is best for childrens developement to be taught at school, rather than parents teaching their children at home. I hold this opinion since school attendance can enhance childrens social skills and their ability to navigate the world around them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist riding tower stopped directions These old men told take short cut got lost He ghost town desert In conclusion desert hot", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too!!!!\n\nIn paragraph 5 the arthor includes that NASA has particularay complelling idea for sending human to study venus.\n\nIn paragraphn 8 the arthor says striving to meet the challenege presented by venus has value, ot only beacuse if the insight to be gainied on the planet itself.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the arthor also says our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nAs the arthor metion earlier in paragaraph 2 about earth's previous misson was unmanned,and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, mabety this is the issue that explains why not a single spacweship has touched down to venus in more than 3 decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nEven more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atomsphere. On the planet venus the surface, temeeratures average over 800 degress fahrenheit, and the atmosheric pressuire in 90 times greater than what we expreienec on our own planet.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanis, piowerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles including nature safety law attempting allow dirigibles dock The builders first imediate concern structure building When moured dirigible would add stress building To counteract added weight building would need modified strengthened The builders also worried safety German dirigible destroyed fire Since gas used keep dirigibles aloft highly flamable downtown New York densely populated realized could dangerous The greatest obstacle high winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents With dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swiveling wind While lead weights could used open landing fields would neither safe practical hanging pedestrians streets Lastly law existing stating airships could fly low urban areas This would make impossible dirigible even approach building The combination obstacles made impossible dirigibles ever dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever though about what Venus is like? In the story the author talks what we could do to see what Venus looks like. Are sister planet is truely a mystery Although some people whould say it is a waste of time, it is important because it could prove there was it is like there, it could have highly benifical materials, it would prove we can do it.\n\nthere is a problom with us get there and stay there for mor than a second. We do not know much about the land but there are mountains, caverns, and volcanoes. The weather is not very good ether there are frequant lightning storms and powerful earthquakes. The atomosphere is high crosive in the clouds at least.\n\nWith the pressure of Venus below sea level there is no dought there is new materials there. The entire ground is made up of sedimant rocks that can with stand the sulfic acid. If we could get some it would be easyer to go there and last alot longer. This how ever would be extremly difficult because we need something that could withstand it to get it and come back.\n\nSome Astronimers and scientists just want to prove thay can do it. everyone is working together to make this happen. The failure will not stop some people it will just drive them to do it even more. They may do it just to due it but all around they just will do what ever it takes.\n\nThere are reasons to do go to Venus to prove we can or even to help benefit are technology. No matter what we will not stop until we do it we will never give up. now there is only one thing left and that wis one thing. will you be the generation who will compete this challange?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Two summers ago I went We drive hours straight I mostly sat back seat listened player boring car ride On way I looked licence plates different states We half way stopped dunkin donuts early sister I got donuts hot chocolate Then got whole bunch little booths show passport got And finally We stayed nights Then rode hours go When got patience paid And thats time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy? I think you would have fun because, you get to travel\n\nall around the\n\nworld and see countrys that you haven't seen before. Also you get to take care of animals, when your on the boat.Last thing is that you get to go across the Alantic Ocean and the Pacific Ocean.\n\nThe first reason why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is that you can go places you haven't been to before.One place that you can go is Europe.Another would be China.You can go to so many places when you are a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nOne thing that is cool about this boat is that you can take care of animals.You name the animal the boat will\n\nhave it. For example like a cow that will be on the boat. Also a hores but you do have to clean up after all of the animals but thats okay because there aren't that many and it will be worth it.\n\nHave you ever dreamed of going across the Alantic Ocean well I have been across it 16 times and across the Pacific Ocean only 2 times. If you want to go across the oceans\n\nI\n\nwould sign\n\nup to be a Seagoing Cowboy and you would go across them alot and it would be fun.\n\nMe Luke Bomberger never thought that is would become a Seagoing Cowboy but look at me now.You should become one, because\n\nyou get to go to other countrys like China and Europe. Also you can take care of horses and cows. Last thing is that you get to go across the most magical place across the Alantic Ocean or the Pacific Ocean and maybe see the sun set.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are soon to come to us. But we don't know when they are going to be here. Technology is becoming more and more advanced as the years go on. We are already one step closer to having more advanced vehicles. Maybe driverless cars aren't such a bad thing.\n\nWe've all drooled over the flying cars and the cars that could drive themselves in movies and tv shows. \"In reality, Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009\" (P2) But their cars aren't entirely driverless since they can't back out of driveways without some help or they need help navigating around roadwork or accidents. Cars are more so then less only assisting us. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" (P7)\n\nDriving a car that isn't completely driverless isn't that exciting. \"The physcological aspects of automation are really a challenge,\" admits Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver. \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" (P8) Making driverless cars is going to be a real challenge. But as the road is out in front of us we get closer and closer to that point every day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper On subject computers Their pros cons I would say sides provide veru important reasons nt use computers I think computers important many students like First computers help fellow classmates many asisgnmenrs Some us simply nt time go library look book might nit even posses information needed On internet find amount valuable information It also helps develop handeye coordination peopel say learn handeye coordiantion outside Although true typing fats neat As see hand wriitng best I type fast make little mistakes I need neatest hand writing everThe way I see computers fastert way alot things So spend time writign neatly might nit even able go outside see nature dad environmentalist uses computers Sometime easy way t always best way thats must balance Do infrom people stop using computers balance thier time Everything good s balanced example coffiene In large amounts rather unhealthy need small turn caffiene helpd computers Besides computers made everwhere trying get rid simply unreasonable We already recession dont need trouble I prefer talk friends eye eye however computer perfect alternative So see comuters evry helpful balance answer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last two or three decades, science advanced has increased more tremendously than ever before, as a result, people get more benefits from it. These days, cosmetic surgery is quite popular across the world and the population they want to enhance their beauties by surgery. I think it is a positive breakthrough. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.\r\n\r\nThere are some reasons for people choose the cosmetic operations. Most actress are doing this surgery for enhancing their beauties while they will get more movie chance to act, so, they earn millions of money from their beauties. For example, the famous south Indian actress MS Nayanthara has not succeeded in cinima field when she was enter afterthat she was done cosmetic surgery to enhance her beauty with fair skin, as a result, she got many movie chances to act with superstar hero's. Hence, people do cosmetic operations for enhancing their beauties in order to they can accomplish in career.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, this is a positive development because it helps to the public are being more self-confidence and beautiful. Which means some folks face not be appropriate while they suffer the inferiority complex to compare others. This kind of surgery can give their life back with more beauties. For instance, one of the skin disease called Vitilogo, many affect this issue while they lose their beauty but now there are many cosmetic surgery have done in order to people who suffer this issue can be relieved. Therefore, this surgery is a positive development and it helps enormous people's life are changed drastically.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, cosmetic operations can help to the population are being beauty, self-confidence, so, they can far away from the inferiority complex. Hence, I think this is a positive development because it change people lives from dark to bright.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most teenagers are eager to get their license, but with the amount of cars being bought and used declining, it seems as if most don't mind not being able to drive. While it may be extrememly hard to not own a car in our society, there are many advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nPollution has always been an issue in our world, mostly because of cars. Diesel fuel was blamed for \"near-record pollution\" in Paris, and driving was banned to clear the air. Because cars cause so much pollution that it forces us to ban them, it is therefore causing us to slow the buying on them. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below where they were in January of 1995. This may be because most Americans cannot afford a car these days, but not owning a car will definitely not burn a hole in our wallets.\n\nNot only are cars consuming of our space (with a car comes a garage), they are comsuming of our money as well. Gas prices have been and are currently rising, which makes it very difficult for some car-owners to pay for other important necessities in their lives, such as children.\n\nLimiting car usage has also made an impact on some people's mood. In Vauban, Germany, 70 percent of families do not own cars, and it has been more than beneficial. Media trainer and mother of two Heidrun Walter says \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" For example, you might have had a bad day, or are upset about something and are driving home from work. Your anger channels into your driving and causes an accident. This all could have been avoided if we cracked down on the usage of cars.\n\nOverall, cars have been very beneficial for our society, but we get even more benefits if we stop using them. Pollution can be reduced, money can stay in our bank accounts, and moods can be positively changed if we stop using cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,\n\nSenator\n\nI think we should change the election by popular votes for the President of the United States. It's a more accurate process and who knows what people running for office has up there arm. The electoral college voting has a repeated tendancy to vote for the state of electors and that way they end up voting for the President. People prefer to vote for exactly who and what they choose to vote for and Electoral college isn't the way to go for it. What would happen when we run out of electoral votes just stick and choose a President? In what world is that fair and accurate?\n\nPopular votes will actually help the voters voting and it might even be a faster process, whose to say, it could even be better. People aren't voting for President anymore which is the most important person in the senate, besides you the right hand man. The Citizen's voting are starting to vote for the state electors do to where they originate or live in. Citizens have not yet grasped the rules of voting and tend to vote unfairly and not for the real reasons we urgently need these people in house,senate, or office. In some states electors refused to even vote for their particular party's candidate and choose to vote for who ever they wish to vote for which is a good thing. these electors prefer to vote for whoever will do a better job in office and that's what were scoring for with popular votes. What happens to votes when there's a run off, because there isn't enough votes to be held accountable for? Thats a question to think about , because there could be a lot of problems to be the cause of it.\n\nTo have a certain number of people vote for who they choose to be President is surprisingly unrealistic. Why choose the majority rule when you could have thousands of People praying for a change vote for a change in their their future for a better life. The \"winner-take-all\" system has to be the most challeging systems of them all but seems to work out after all. \"Electoral College is the best way!\" what happened to the People actually living off of the rules that the Electoral college Voters choose for the people all together? It's time to make a change, why not start now and see how the congress feels. The biggest Decision that should be made should be made fairly by the people, the citizens. In paragraph 13 it even states \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\" why not make a change make a difference.\n\nTo whom ever it may concern, Big States are the main key. If we could get the big states to take part in the Popularity vote the smaller states will join in. Hoping for the best the Popularity Votes will soon rise and all the discrepencies won't be needed. If you understand where I'm coming from you'll think about what I'm saying if you care about the citizens your trying to help out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Mona Lisa Smile the authour describes how new technology called The Facial Action Coding System Enables computers to identify human emotions. The process beging when the computer constructs A 3-D, Eckman has classified six basic emotions, The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\n\nWhy I disagree with the authour is because you can't tell people emotions even with the computers. In the story its says that \"The process beging when the compputer constructs A 3-D Computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the modle must move like humans muscles\"(3). A human can move there face in many different ways even if there sad they can have a happy look on there face if the happy they could have a sad look on they face. So what this proves is that computer try to tell your emotions by your face expresions but really can't.\n\nHumans have a lot of emotions some you can see and some you can not see but all humans have there main emotions. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\"(3). So what this is saying is that your main emotions can be known by a computer because you so different expressions when you are in them emotions. But even if you are show different emotions it would still be hard for a computer to tell how you fell even if it was the smartest computer in the world because say you are mad but even know your mad you showing expressions of being happy so what would the computer say it would most likely say your happy even know your not.\n\nEverybody show there facial expressions for each emotion. in the story it says that \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, observes DR Hunang, even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression like not smiling a broadly\"(4). And what that is saying is that when you are happy you show a facial expressions or even sad or depressed. Some people do show a lot of emotions but somepeople dont could make it harded for a computer to read if your happy are not.\n\nSo what I have proven in The process beging when the computer constructs A 3-D, Eckman has classified six basic emotions, The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. Is that computer would not be a very good way of reading people emotions. Because have there own way of showing the feelings and emotions so show heavy emotions some show light emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is a natural landform, trust me. It is just a huge rock that is real, but a shadowing effect gives off an illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth making it look like a human head has been created there purposely. Some people say that an alien could have been the one to make this human head figure, but with the new picture we got that is ten times better than the old one we have been able to prove that there was no alien monument after all.\n\nEven after we have proved that there was no alien who created that, people are still not even satisfied. Some even said they believed that the alien markings could have been hidden by haze. With that being said, on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor came close enough for a second look at it. We once agin got another extraordinary photo of the figure using the cameras maximum resolution. in this picture if anything was there you would have been able to see it in that photo, but there was nothing there to see in that photo that an alien could have been responsible for this random figure.\n\nIf you are wondering what the picture did show, it showed the magnificents of a butte or messa, which stands for landforms that are common around the American West. So it is a common thing that happens which explains why they found one on Mars. No aliens, just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that teenagers should be involved in some kind of volunter jobs ,in their spare time.This contribution would be beneficial for children and society.I completely agree with the above statement as this helps teenagers to become a responsible person of the society in the near future and also results in beneficial contribution for the society.\nFrom the adoloscent point of view ,by doing unpaid jobs in their freetime, children can get rid from their boredom.IN addition to that they can also get valuable experiences by pursuing this types of works.For example,teamwork they can learn how to work togethere and cooperate with their colleagues.Researches show that children ,which are involved in any kind of community works in their high school time ,they have good working skills in their future employment.Moreover,by doing volunteer jobs ,they can very well keep them busy ,so there are less chances to spoil.Many times teenagers spoiled their life because of influence of bad company .In their spare times they hanging out all day and late nights and involved in some unappropriate works. Thus to make children away from this kind of things ,unpaid jobs are excellent ideas.\nApart from the above benefits ,society also gains a lot with the valuable contribution of teenagers.\nThere are various non-profit organisations ,which need such assistance of volunteers in order to run such organisation.For example,local libraries,British Heart Foundation and Care homes.In Britian there are many such organisations ,which can get great help from teenagers volunteer\n contribution and appreciate it.\nIn conclusion,I believe that any kind of free communities work is very essential for positive development of the teenagers and this works are also proven beneficial for society as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dose the American citzens vote even count any more in the election for president? American citzens over the age of 17 have a right of having a vote for a president for America. The popularity vote is not having much of effect as the electoral college, the ellector college is also a non-democratic metod of the choosing of a president. these cause the election to be kind of fixed.\n\nThe electoral college consists of 538 electors A larger amount of 270 electoral votes is ruled to elect the president. According to a gallup pollin 2000 Al Gore won the popularity vote but lost the presidency because of the electoral college. More then 60 percent of the voters choose a direct election to the kind we have. The electoral colege has a large advantage over the popularty vote.\n\nThe non- democratic way of choosing a president tha should be changed by the candiate that gets the highest popularty vote the winner of the election. It is not democratic because the electors who elect the president, and not the people. It is as if that when you vote for a candidate you're voting for slate electors. it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\n\nThe popular vote also has a down side to it the votes coould choose a president fo the wrong reasons. This could cause a disaster and be a very bad thing for the American people. The electoral college pays very close attention to that a looks at both candiates reasons of there decsions. In 1960 , segregationists in Louisana legislature nerly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with diffrent elecotors thta would oppose John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe popularity vote almost has no effect to the president election and that should change because the people that live here and pay taxes should have a effect on who leads it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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