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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that if the poructs will many sell, that the natural would have damge by the production.I strongly believe that people's little action can decrease the damage.\n\nNowadays, the number of the damage increasing have a lot of reasons. The product increase to sell. That is mean the products pakages incresed too. Almost pakages are consist of pollution such as plastics, vynls. For example, smartphone make new version around by every year in several companies.So, people buy the new smartphone by every year include pakages and components too. The phone selling figure will be over 1 million in one year. As result, we have many charging line and other component. That is do not useful everywhere. At that time, they will be the pollution. The pollution goes to natural. that is negative effect reasons. \n\nHowever, if the companies try to change their selling products simple packages. And, if that product's components will be consist of more simple. The pollustion would be significantly decrease. And, we should try to reclyle their pakages shch as papers and plactics. Also, old devices should reclyle too. Although that is a small action, that effet is very big spectially for the natural environment. The companies and people both should try to decrease damage to the natural.The natural have rent by them who the future children. Therebefore, we should use to careful the natural.\n\nThe mentioned above, the increase in the products pollution, that we can solve the problems. if everybody simple action of just reclyle.That is very easy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the globalized society, the issue of increasing business and cultural communication worldwide has sparked considerable debate. Some contend that exposure to the culture of other countries too much will greatly negatively affect the acknowledgement of domestic history and culture. I strongly agree that increasing communication among countries fosters development both in personal and professional settings. \r\n\r\nOpponents show concern about the fade of national identity by exposure to increasing cultural connections as the history and culture of the native country tend to be easily forgotten by the invasion of the exterior culture. For example, along with the increasing exposure to Western culture, most young adults are more likely to celebrate Christmas instead of some Chinese traditional festival since some young people are obsessed with the unknown culture. They might know the origin of Santa but they have no idea of the origin of the Dragon festival.\r\n\r\nProponents, as I am in favour of, hold the view that emphasizing communication worldwide positively cultivates development at individual, enterprise and country levels. At the individual level, worldwide information exchange and multiple languages communication improve the ability of critical thinking and academic learning. At the enterprise level, the popular trend of international trade and international companies provide more employment opportunities domestically. Moreover, the GDP of one country will also be fostered by increasing the economic benefits of importation and exportation. Moreover, while young people are attracted to other cultures, the root cause is the lack of propaganda of their conventional culture and civilization. Under positive public guidance, such cultural erosion will be mitigated to some extent. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while increasing communication in business and cultural settings has some negative effects on the acknowledgement of national identity so far, the positive effect outperforms its drawbacks by improving personal and country development under correct guidance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I whole heartedly believe driverless cars are becoming the future and I can agree with that but its just not that simple. The author raises a great point in saying that the drivers and the car need to work together as a team instead a car just taking the riens of driving. Thats anti-fun and not enjoyable. Additionaly you can see some other flaws as well\n\nWhat will road conditions do to this self drivin cars. If a situation arises that requires a human driver and the car is driving its self or worse the human can even control the car. What could occur then? A car accident is not uncommen in these situations.\n\nThe law however is even bigger of an issue! the law states that self driven cars are illegal in some states! The law either needs to be updated or the car manufactures will need to find a way to get around this. As in stands today in this day and age, Self driving cars are STILL a thing of the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have more cons and disadvantages then they do pros and advantages. The author of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" presents positive and negative aspects of driverless cars but I really only see the negatives. If there are driverless cars, then there could be a lot more crashes then there already are. Driverless cars are pointless and show a great amount of negatives, show that no one in the car will be paying attention, and there are so many safety issues.\n\nFirst, there are many negatives regarding driverless cars. Technology in the future may be able to have cars without a driver at all. In the article though, the author states that currently they would not be truly driverless yet. The driver would still need to stay alert and be able to take over when needed, like driving through a work zone or when they are driving through an accident site. When a person is driving a car, they already need to be fully alert and know what is happening around them at all times to stay safe. If we have someone sitting in the drivers seat waiting to have to take control, then what is the point of not driving it when you pretty much need to continue to know what is going on at all times? There is always the fear that something will go wrong and the car just will not work right. This could cause serious injuries and even death to the driver and passengers in the driverless car as well as other cars and people around them. Another issue is that there is a lot of poverty and familes without enough money to buy a regular car. The amount of technology and work needed to make these driverless cars will put The United States of America in even more debt then they already are. As well as many other countries around the world. The cost for these driverless cars are a huge negative that will result in many people not being able to afford to buy them.\n\nSecondly, when the car is driving without a driver but still has a driver in the drivers seat, the driver could be on their phone, reading something, or listening to music and not paying attention then all the sudden the car alerts them that they need to take over but they are not ready and do not know the reason why they are in the situation to take over the car. This could cause crashes and serious injuries to the driver and other passengers in their car, as well as people in cars around them. Nobody can promise that the driver will be able to pay attention at all times when the car is driving itself. It is kind of like having someone in the passenger seat, they are not driving so they are on their phones, reading stuff, and listening to music, not paying attention to the road. Same goes for a driver just sitting in the drivers seat and not driving the car. They could be not paying attention and then all the sudden they are surprised with the need to start driving in a situation they have not been paying attention to. In paragraph eight of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author expresses that they are trying to bring up in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-ups displays. The author states that this could be a safety feature, but who knows that will work perfectly, or that the driver will be entertained by that?\n\nLastly, the safety issues regarding the driverless cars could be an endless list. If the driver is not paying attention, like I expressed in the pervious paragraph, the issues with safety grow bigger then they already are with actual people driving cars. If the driver has no clue what is going on because they were on their phones, reading something, or listening to music and then suddenly they have to take over, this could cause a crash that could cause serious and minor injuries as well as death. The amount of crashes that happen today with actual humans driving cars are already through the roof, if something messes up with the driverless car, it could be very bad. It is just like how your phone can mess up randomly and stop working, what if that happens to the driverless car?\n\nThe author of the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" expresses both postive and negative aspects of driverlesscars. I believe that driverless cars have more negatives than positives and are pointless. They also show many safety issues that can put many people in danger and show financial disadvantages. In conclusion, driverless cars should not be a thing in order to keep everybody safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverse educational institutions have increasingly encouraged students to remark on and even criticize their lecturers during the past decade in an effort to enhance educational quality. However, opinions remain divided as to whether this should be implemented in high schools. Personally, I feel that both students and teachers at this stage of schooling can gain considerably from this strategy, despite valid concerns about the potential loss of respect and discipline in the classroom.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the advocacy for this initiative is largely justifiable due to its immense impact it can have on the type of classroom management. In lieu of the authoritarian teaching method, which has been criticized as being outdated and fostering learner passivity, classrooms allowing learner comments and feedback are more conducive to the ideal student-centered style. Students can profit from the adoption of this newer methodology, since their interests, needs, and preferences are taken into greater consideration when designing and assessing courses. Given their lack of understanding of the science of learning, however, it is difficult for high school students to provide much constructive feedback. Therefore, it is worth noting that their demands about the quantity of homework and in-class activities can not always be met. \r\n\r\nReasonable caution should be exercised when administering this strategy with high school students. Due to their generally limited life experience and exposure to complex social settings, they may be impulsive in their criticism. As a result, adolescents may deliberately or inadvertently make rude remarks to their teachers, which can have a negative impact on their enthusiasm and patience of the students and, subsequently, the quality of their teaching. For instance, immature pupils who have been reprimanded for not completing tasks may harbor a resentment towards their teachers and insult them whenever feasible. The situation would deteriorate if other students imitated those individuals and do not comply with what the teachers assigned, which would manifest in chaos in the classroom.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I believe that high school students should be given opportunities to express their thoughts; however, solutions should be developed to ensure that students appropriately provide feedback and criticism to their professors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral college process,is most certainly not a place,Yet it consist of a selection of electors. Throughout time,this process of voting has only failed to work like it should 2 times,Once in 1888,andOnce in 2000. electoral voting is like a process that rules out the popular vote. The electors are the people that make the final decision,Dispite however the popular vote takes place and whoever gets the most majoraty of the votes,The Electoral vote is the most impotant voting process.\n\nThe United States Of America states in one very important document,that \"We the people\",as all the people in one,\"in order to form a more perfect union\"what does those words mean? Well those words mean that not just Electors should have the say in who is voted president,But everyone should have a say as in who is president in the world that everyone lives in,the popular vote is the best voting process,The origional voting process and that sthe way the voting process should stay that way.\n\nRichard A. Posner states that \"it is the electors who elect the president,not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors\". that tells you that your not actually voting for the president,that you're voting for electors that vote for the president,They try so hard to trick us,knowing most people are to lazy to stand up and fight for what is right,that they just ru n over us,as in the people. the \"Winner- takes all\"Method is actually awardoing the electoral votes,induces the candidates.\n\nBradford plumer stated that even Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,Bob Dole and the U.S Chamber of Commerce,have all agreed that the Electoral college should be abolished!.\n\n'We the people\" should have the right to vote for whoever we want becouse we are the people that pay for all of the elector's and the fact that we have to vote for who we take care of is just outragious. the people of the United States should stand up and fight for what is right and for what is fair,We cant just keep sitting back and letting the higher powered peopkle run over us,yes we respect the rules that we are supposed to follow and yes we do what we have to do to survive and live a free and healthy life,but this \"Electoral College\"needs to come to a end and \"We the people\" should be able to vote with the popularity voting method.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "well one person right something would fair people right thing That would like six kids one room reason give three kids cookiee three wouldnt right would one person ones book another person wants book would every right grab book theres really nothing could say know feels haveing right every one else like one time teacher gave friend piece gum reason mad didnt get pieace thought got pieace gum reason rest us get one reason like said give right one person give right another person could stand three people volved fight third person standing wactching dont right go jail two phiscally fighting every right sit jail think fight third guy wacthing dont right keep videos fight sould get tickect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief that students should evaluate their instructors so as to keep raising the standard of high school education. Others contend that this might create indiscipline and might be regarded as disrespect. The present essay shall cast light on the two polarized and clarify my stance. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, students are the ones who have the most access to teachers, so they can easily figure out the strengths and weaknesses of those tutors. Therefore, students might facilitate judging a teacher, in order to help institutes to improve the quality of education, and also notice school management about different aspects of a teacher such as cooperativeness, punctuality, and understanding, to name but a few. Singapore, for instance, wants to develop domestic education by assessing tutors from high school students' evaluation sheets. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, I firmly believe that high school students do not have the proper ability to evaluate their supervisors. As a cadre study at school and attain a diploma, hence they have enough knowledge to teach recruitment. On top of that, high school grades are in adolescence and so their negative back is based on emotional feelings rather than detail. Moreover, this phenomenon leads to a loss of honour and routine and the quality of education is decreased. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is apparent that high school students can evaluate their teachers to upgrade their education. However, I unequivocally buttress the stand of not evaluating teachers by high students, because they are immature enough to recognise it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir swifts throughout story First begin Narciso nt sure would like moving different But changed started family also using imagination decorte house Next mood change middle memoir rellized good life anywhere else Also family made moods positive Lastly family s mood negitive move made house home mood change immeditly happy Thats mood created author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient important Ive learnt experience Once I chose babysit cousins eight years old six years old I watch three hours I able call anytime I need help I call I wouldnt get paid paid twenty dollars I could handle This I able I arrived house one thirty dot gotten back friends birthday party surely devoured ton sugary foods like cake ice cream could tell hyper soon I walked door greeted bubbly attitudes My left I stuck wanted play play station But waited play box I began get irritated started argue I call I decided little patient well worth getting paid So settle contradiction I found game could play enjoy After playing game two hours went back yard played tag I watched However unfair one denied tagged began part I frustrated immediately picked phone But I decided one hour left I could handle So I told could play hideandseek instead even though I would normally loathe seeker told I would count wouldnt fight Finally came home I got paid money earned That day I learned patient always rewards", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a change in the social status of people in the current time, whether its getting married or having children. Individuals now delay on having an offspring. There could be various reasons which they want to attain before having an offspring, such as career goals and financial stability. In my view, there are more advantages to this approach. In my essay I will discuss both the views. \n\nOne of the disadvantages when the people decide to have an adolescent at a later stage, could be the medical issues. As we are aware that our human body has a certain way of responding, it is very likely that after a stage it is difficult for a woman to get pregnant. Hence, this could dishearten the couple when they decide to conceive a child at a later period of life.\n\nHowever, there are various advantages due to, which a couple decides to prolong his parenthood. One the advantages could be, having the financial stability. As the expenses of having a child is extremely high, and it cannot be managed if the person does not have the financial ability. For example, In my country the average age of marriage is round 27-28 years. At this age of life, it is very unlikely that the individuals would be financially very sound. Hence this could a reason they defer having the child for a later stage in life. In addition, the individuals are also not very mature to handle all the pressure that can a raise from having a child.\n\nMoreover, the more days the individual are very career oriented. The generation of today is highly competitive and most of them have a goal they are striving to achieve. This is one of the reasons that parenthood takes a back seat. People prioritise their work and career, most of them are in a view that being a parent could shift their focus. For example, in the recent survey, the rate of single people has increased significantly. Hence, it is very clear people have set priorities which defer to the past generation.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that it is important to have the maturity and financial stability when two individuals plan to enter parenthood, as it comes with huge responsibilities and expenses. However, one should also keep in mind the age factor, which can affect the birth of an offspring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Miami, sitting in traffic is simply a part of everyday life, be it during lunch hour or rush hour or be it because of unpredictable accidents or planned road closures. The city is so large that it is oftentimes impossible to walk from point A to point B in a timely manner, and the climate is so unpredictable that is is oftentimes impossible to make such a trek anyways. Could Miami ever be made a car-free community? Considering that these types of communities lower municipal carbon emissions, require better city planning, and encourage people to take advantage of public transportation, Miami, and other cities and suburbs around the United States, should make efforts to reduce private car ownership and use.\n\nCar-free communities are not a theoretical concept. In fact, cities and smaller suburbs have made the move to car-free lifestyles and even been designed with limited car usage in mind all over the world, and even in some parts of the United States. Places like Vauban, Germany and Bogota, Colombia are using this trend to make citizens happier, healthier, and more efficient (Rosenthal, Selsky). Alternative transportation, be it walking, bicycling, or taking a bus, is just as viable a way to get around as cars are, and it leads to smarter city planning that accounts for a higher volume of pedestrians walking from their homes to run errands and go shopping and a lessened impact on the environment through fewer greenhouse gas emissions. These things also work together to make for happier citizens. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" says businessman Carlos Arturo about Bogota's city-wide car-free day, a program instituted by city officials to encourage limited car usage in 1999 (Selsky). A mother of two and media trainer in Vaudan, Germany, where 70 percent of families do not own cars, agrees with Mr. Arturo, saying that life with cars was \"always tense\" (Rosenthal).\n\nIt is very understandable that cars would make people nervous. \"Cars are responsible for ... up to 50 percent\" of greenhouse gas emissions in some areas of the United States (Rosenthal). Greenhouse gas is notoriously harmful for the environment because it speeds up the process of global warming which can result in higher mean temperatures and things like smog that can bring up very serious health risks. Record high levels of smog in Paris, France last year forced city officials to institute a temporary ban on driving while the city's air was allowed to clear (Duffer). Paris typically has a higher amount of pollution in the air than other more eco-conscious European cities, sometimes even a full 67.3 micrograms higher than the level of pollution in London according to Reuters, an international news agency (Duffer).\n\nCar-free communities lower carbon emissions tremendously, making smog and other consequences of greenhouse gases much less pressing issues to deal with. In order to reduce the number of cars on the roads, public transportation must be readily accessible and as effictient as possible. This helps city governments manage the amount of carbon they are pumping into the atmosphere by giving them the opportunity to regulate things such as buses, subways, and other forms of metro transit. Public transportation does not only mean actual modes of transportation, though; car-free communities must make allowances for the creation and maintainment of things like better sidewalks and bicicyle paths for citizens who elect to use them (Rosenthal, Selsky). Congestion would then also be lowered because fewer cars on roadways usually do not result in city-typical, and definitely Miami-typical, traffic jams (Duffer).\n\nWhile it is impossible to assume that Americans will stop using their cars from one day to the next, there are many ways to gradually increase the appeal of car-free lifestyles in commuter cities and suburbs and therefore to reap some of the benefits of diminished popular car usage. In fact, milennials in America have already started this move towards car-free communities (Rosenthal). Younger generations are waiting longer to apply for their licenses and buy cars, instead choosing to utilize public transportation, walk, or car-pool with friends. Sociologists have also noticed that America has surpassed peak car usage, meaning that Americans no longer drive as much as they once did. The \"car culture\" that prevails in suburbs and cities through the nation may be on its way into obscurity if the trend continues (Rosenthal). Scientists, sociologists, and citizens alike will most likely agree that this move will indubitably be one for the better!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article Making Mona Lisa Smile the author describes how a new technology is able to identify human emotions. The technology is called Facial Action Coding Sysytem and it allows it to identify human emotion. Also during this reading i will be using details from the reading to show the vaule of using this technology to help find students emotions.\n\nIn this article i found some evidence that supports the claim that it should be able to use this technology on students in the class room or anywhere for that matter. People do the same thing this machine does on a daily basis such as people looking at one another to try and find out what there expression or emotions are. It could tell if kids were going to be happy about an assigment or not or if the kids were depressed or upset about something and needed someone to talk too. Dr. Huang says that this peice of technology works just as well as the doctor working pn your facial tissue and muscles to figure out what your emotions or expression are. And the sam technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive and more human like. Also people can fake faces and make you belive they are fine and dont need anything if they don't have this technology which could change that out come that person has on life, with this technology we could help people and get the help they need in time instead of getting to them too late and not helping at all.\n\nIn this article Making Mona Lisa Smile I used the information provided from the article to help find how a new technology is able to identify human emotions. Also during this reading i will be using details from the reading to show the vaule of using this technology to help find students emotions. And too my conclusion i think that this would be very helpful in the school setting or any setting that you put it too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though the idea of a driverless car is ludicrous, humans continue to test it out. Sergery Brin has contemplated the car for awhile and has been attempting to maunfacture the vehicle. With an idea that very extravagant, the plan itself would take a long process and an expensive amount of money. Though the driverless cars are being built, the vehicles aren't completely driverless and still has more work to be accomplished. Bin has been asked and has thought of the what the driverless car can do, but many people are conflicted about the safety of the car.\n\nOver the years technology continues to develop and the driverless cars are now the newer way to entertain the hum race. Google has assisted in making the car and has made it to where the human driver has to be caution. The scientists and manufactured the car to help reduce the percentage of car accidents. The car has been built to help the driver when they are in danger or when they are accelerating, about to brake, etc. When they are about to give the control to the human driver, they signal an alarm of some sort and the driver is then given the wheel. If there is a speed limit over twnety-five mile per hour, the driver will have to keep their hands on the wheel and this will help the driver keep alert.\n\nThough the car is built to help on the road and help the drivers, the car can't help with everything. Drivers could happen to fall asleep or be very bored when the car is driving itself and would then cause an issue. If the situation of there being a car accident occurs, someone wouldn't know whether to press charges against the driver or against the manufacturer. The situation of pressing charges to whoever could cause a disruption amongst the people and the businesses.\n\nThough the driverless car is in the process of being built, there are new ideas, situations, and ways that the car could do for the human race and the community. With only a few states to test the cars, the tests are limited to see what the cars can drive through. the question of the acr being completely driverless is still unanswered. There are new discoveries that we have yet to find out about the car when it is done and has been thoroughly been tested. Technology has yet to advance with the driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The harsh features setting affect cyclist hindering journey Yosemite National Park As cyclist traveling along The high deserts California June problems arise The heat pounding sun desert takes toll cyclist causing drink water rapidly deplet supply The cyclist also traveling small gost towns rather stoping appropriate rest stops order refill water relax etc Also refilling encounters hazards Short rolling hills ghost terrain ever snake All features setting impare cyclists ability maintain confidence wether make destination positive attitude toward journey etc", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In most people's life, music takes a special place. No matter if one's favourite is classical, pop, rock, or rap, it can help people distract their attention from unwanted thoughts, alleviate stress, or even reduce pain. My strong belief is that music has a significant psychological effect in maintaining mental health, and some of its most vital impacts are visible on mood and stress.\nMusic can induce extremely strong changes in people's mental states. There are several everyday examples that highlight the tranquillizing effect of music. Many people find out merely by instinct that they tend to calm down by listening to their favourite tunes. When someone feels anxious before an important exam, a medical visit, or a long-awaited date, music can provide a couple of minutes escape from these stressful situations, on our way to the event's venue. Soft music is also frequently utilized during meditative activities, such as yoga or relaxation. Additionally, people can come across the same type of calming tunes in dental or medical settings as well. However, these are quite passive coping techniques.\nOn the other hand, there are more active possible mechanisms by which music can reduce stress. When dancing or working out to upbeat music, people decrease their stress levels through movement. It can be an even more efficient way to let the harmful energies behind because of a two-way effect: music tends the soul, while the movement is good for the body, reducing tension in the muscles.\nIn summary, based on the above-reviewed examples of how music can be helpful in stress-relief, we can see that there is two possible mechanism, a passive and an active, which can play a role in this phenomenon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars good for the future or the destruction of it? I believe that driverless cars are dangerous to human lives because of how technology can fail, How technology has no reguard, and how it can be hard to use.\n\nThe first reason why the driverless car is dangerous is because of how it can fail. If I am driving I sure don't want to have the technology to fail and cause me to kill a person. For example what if the car never told me that I had to start driving and it went through a construction site and killed some of the workers. There would be blood on my hands!\n\nThe second reason why the driverless car is not safe is because it has no reguard for any thing. It is not like a living human that cares about the surroundings and can think to change course if need be. It may not think that a baby passing on the road is a big enough concern to try and stop. It states this in the passage \"most driving laws focus on keeping driver, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers. Which goes along with what i am conveying.\n\nThe third reason why the driverless car is not safe is because of how hard it is to use for some people. I bring this point up because the old people in our society should be served first. They can hardly use Windows 8. Trying to teach them how to use a car that is way more advanced than Windows 8, would be terrible. They would not be able to know when the car is driving and when they should be driving.\n\nThose three reasons are why the driverless car is not safe. It might malfunction, It has no reguard, some people might not know how to use it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I child tech generation generation technology taken new meaning That meaning life Our life revolves around technology general revolves around sun The chief technological preference computers greatly beneficial arent bad many people speculate help us live prosper struggling world Look want roast computers means roast away But without first regarding angles friend absolutely standing situation You could say neucence could never used aho You could argue used detonate bombs lets practical many normal people actually wake upwake point drearyness life type command detonate bomb A serious benefit obviously choes overlook invaluable information aptly places front inch screen You read book reviews read books bag things get cuttingedge news want name meager amount possible strengths Further everything speculate bad bad say When think Do always think vulgar inappropriate pictures illegal images Thats funny keeps family touch gives people things keeps friends different states server Youtube swearing bad videos My family casts actors shows one way know actor capable going channel looking videos created My mother actually contacts actors videos see want become professionals That business finding talent seldom found Lastly even think fact computers used start companys saves lives You probably didnt even know computer astrologists monitor images universe captured hubble space carrier meteorologists track cloud formations satellites using computer Maybe didnt choose say surgeons dictate operations office patient You didnt even say seismologist use computers traet shifting tectonic plates see epicenter major earthquake You didnt know So lets face computers important You probably used little research In fact pardon You probably didnt research first place instead pointing fingers innocent Smooth move buddy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news people use computers people ask computers actually benifit society In opinion I think computers They provide entertainment acess daily uses many websites social interactions I think computers really benefit society Computers provide entertainment people Many people want watch funny videos thier favorite show internet popular website watching videos tube Another great source entertainment video games People buy video games play websites like see entertainment computer much compared program shown certain time instead ever want Another benefit computers bring society acess dailt uses internet provids tell local weather Instead local news imidiatly acess acess encyclopedia distionarys like websites provide easy imidiats fools daily uses One least example towards computers Their many websites One websites called lets upload picture pople family events people video chat people see persons face You ca nt telephone texting cell phone Many experts believe computers taking away time family friends websites like actually adding time In conclution reasons support opinion computers benefit society They provide entertainment easy acess many websites social interactions society would alot harder I think computers benifit society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Use of FACS in the Classroom\n\nIsn't it just the worst when you're frustrated with your homework, but your teacher doesn't seem to get the hint? This is why the Facial Action Coding System was created, or partly. The Facial Action Coding System would indeed be valuable if used in a classroom. It could be useful to kids, teachers, and parents of students. The FACS would be useful to change course of the lesson, or to help teachers decide on lesson plans for following years.\n\nThe FACS uses it's technology to evaluate the expression of Mona Lisa-- a painting. If the machine can figure out a non-living painting's emotion, then what could it do on humans? The FACS focuses on facial muscle movements to interpret the emotion of each item it scans. In the classroom, this could help kids by determining whether they understand. If a kid frowns, it can be obvious to the internet instructor that the student isn't understanding what they're being taught. The instructor can then go into deeper detail on how to finish a homework assignment.\n\nIn the case of boredom, it can help increase average scores. The software can determine whether a student is bored or not. If a student is bored, they will not pay much attention to the lesson, fall asleep, or maybe even shut it off. It is important to make sure the students are having some sort of fun with what they're being taught. The software could detect boredom and the online instructor would know to put more animations in the lesson, or even change the sounds and add music or a new polytone voice.\n\nThis software can also identify mixed emotions. If a student somewhat understands a lesson, but is also bored with it, the instructor knows to create a more lively detailed presentation. It's important to have a reader of mixed emotions in a classroom because of the amount of uncertainty in student's minds. It can also help the instructor know what lessons students understand and which ones they don't. The teachers can then decide what to do from then on, and/or next year, which ways the kids learn and which ways they don't.\n\nThe FACS is valuable in the classroom because teachers can change their lessons to fit each kids needs, and change their lessons for the following students next year. Each kid has their own personality, which requires different ways of learning. This software can almost guarantee improved scores in homework and tests because of how it helps teachers determine what the kids don't understand. Having the FACS in the classroom would deeply benefit the students, teachers, and parents. It would be the smartest choice to include this system into every student computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Willing to work by the youth during their extra time is fruitful for the community and the person both, in terms of enhancing social adhesion and learning of skills. I agree that the youngsters ought to spend free moments in social services voluntarily and freely.\n\tUnpaid communal works improve social relations among the people and the teenagers. The services provided for humanity earn kindness and respect from the humanity leading to strengthened relationships between the residents. People come more close in terms of understanding the hardships and requirements on one hand and happiness in the other hand. Consequently this cohesion keeps the masses connected thus avoiding loneliness and social issues. The benefits are for both the individual and public. Recently the Quaid e Azam University has made it compulsory for its students to work in social services for 1 month during summer vacations.\n\n\tFurthermore, community based honorary services produce skilled workers at an earlier stage. During social engagements teenagers are employed in different types of works thus getting early and in depth knowhow about different fields. Ultimately, they are ready to enter the practical life and ready to adopt it easily. In addition, with work experience, they are at advantage of getting jobs. Availability of skilled manpower eases the concerns of society which it would have faced had the manpower been deficient. Students of NUST with a field experience gained during the internship, are at an advantage in job priority.\n\n\tIn conclusion, community services which are done by young people without honorarium are fruitful regarding social relationships and employment and I support such works by the youth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays people growing more interested in knowing the place they living in, and it is influenced by lot of factors that we will be discussing about .\r\n\r\nThe primary reason is about the House resale value or its estate value, buying a house is no joke and people really wanna make sure if they are getting into a good deal and paying the correct price for the house and its worth investing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One obstacle builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building lack suitable landing area New York City full buildings lot flat ground land dirigible The builders second obstacle could nt find way get mooring mast top building The builders would need make stronger building frame mast could safely top building without adding stress frame Another obstacle builders faced nature The wind top building unpredictable strong times The back dirigible would move wind even tied building The last reason law would nt allow dirigibles fly low urban area Therefore dirigibles could nt dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting essay caused cyclist suffer continue determined The author essay used phrases the sun beating down high deserts California June emphasize extreme heat caused cyclist extreme thirst heat exhaustion The essay also says short rolling hills tumbleweeds long crippling hill describe difficult terrain cyclist faced caused tired slower Finally cyclist faced rediculously large snake plants weeds get way force slow", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I reasons computers effects people First computers good eyes Second reason people get computers lot Third much games places go like myspace facebook even twitter much Keep reading I could tell three reasons First computers good eyes computers like something really computer information dont really got much information could browse My second reason people computers blind could get computers hour Third people dont even dare ocmputer wont might think becaus ethey wear gasses wont get blinder wrong get blinder As reading find second reason fro much computer My second reason people get computers alot well peopel get computers taxes good bills taxes alot information people countries state could get without knowing second people get computers pay bills taxes also get computer maybe order something buy ticket fly place want go like vacation place business trip third reason buy order things thet get websites make lives better like meeting soembody special something else As keep reading find third reason much long computers My third reason alot activities computer example myspace facebook twitter popular website people get meet new people talk old friends In conclusion people computer much health privacy also sure meet strange people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story way show Saeng hibiscus plant like Saeng overcome obstacle plant overcomes obstacle Saengs obstacle adjusting new life first step passing drivers test The reader knows pass Saeng tells mother II failed The hibiscus must make winter also adjust new surrounding survive like Saeng The mother says Saeng strong enough make cold month winter hibiscusThats matter NUM So winter hibiscus job hurdle jump make stay alive winter months job done spring The author ends story Saeng telling spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again NUM If Saengs obstacle completing passing drivers test passes spring right hibiscus passes its test symbolism two showing determined spirits adopt grow deeper adopt pass obstacle time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding is a goof thing to have because then people could be able to tell if your having a bad day or if everything is okay. Now the coding of the Mona Lisa is a cool thing to read but the coding can happen to real life people. The doctors in this story pay attention to evry little aspect of the face and can tell right away if you mad, happy, sad, and/or disgusted.\n\nIf we used this technology to read students emotional expressions it would be easier to talk to people about them and why they occur. For instance, the Mona Lisa is a wonderful picture but all the emotions that she had are what make it so famous. If someone could have talked to her or helped her with anything then maybe this would have been a regular picture that nobody would have seen intersting. The science it takes to discover a facial expression is a lot. To discover expressions it take a mopdified PC and some humans to help along the way. In paragrpah 7, the author explains that no regualr PC can handle the complex algoroithams used to decode emotions. Ways that the humans help the computer is by looking for the easy emotions that we see everyday. The scientist also give a test to the reader to see if they got what it takes to decode themsleves. The simple steps that the author gives away are the steps the Doctors used to decode Mona Lisa. If the scientist could decode the Mona Lisa then they should be able to decode actual human emotions.\n\nWhen scientists recommend to put a smile on your face, then do it because it really lightens up the mood and makes yourself feel better and not be down on yourself. Actors put on such a good show because they put a smile on there face for they make themselves get sad or mad. But the Facial Action Decoding System should be used to help decode human emotions because people do not like to talk about thing, if the decoding actually helped us humans, then maybe we could live a nice calm life and talk things out with eachother.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is beneficial to more than just the environment, it is also beneficial to humans. With all the pros and very few cons of limiting car usage, it would be impractical to not make the change. Some may argue that it would waste time to limite car usage, however, if widespread limitation of car usage occurs then the way we live will evolve to adapt to life without much car usage, making it far more convenient in the future.\n\nA common misconception is that limiting car use is solely beneficial to the environment. In paragraph three a resident of Vauban is quoted saying, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" this shows that humans too can take advantage of limiting car use. In common culture today, destinations are far spread out and not compact unless in a large city. This is because it is possible to transport one's self those distances in a car. Limiting car use would effect the suburban culture of being spread out and change it into a more compact, convinient environment.\n\nThe obvious reason to limite car usage is to reduce air emissions that would allow us to have a safer earth to live on. Pollution has become a legitimant problem and if change isn't made, then the earth will be changed for the worse. Large cities where cars are abundantly used have a major problem with smog as seen in paragraph ten. In attempt to clear record breaking amounts of smog, Paris enforced a partial driving ban and it worked. This shows that by limiting car use change can be made to our environment for the better.\n\nWithout using a car, one would clearly need to find an alternative method of transportation. Common alternatives such as biking or walking spark a much more active lifestyle for those who do so. As seen in paragraph twenty-eight, Bogota sponsors alternate forms of transportation and when this active lifestyle was embraced by the city, it changed the city for the better. As result it is quoted that, \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" This clearly displays a much healthier, active lifestyle by those who limite car use.\n\nAll of these products result in clear advantages caused by one thing, limiting car usage. It would be unsensible to not acknowledge that there is change that needs to be embraced in limiting car use in our society before it is too late to change the culture of driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since 1976 people have been in awe of the mysterious \"Face on Mars\". It has been discussed in films, books, magazines, and talk shows. Some people even believe that it was formed by martians thousands of years ago as a monument, but recently scientists have disproved this theory almost entirely.\n\nOne of the reasons this theory is faulty is that the face was just a butte similar to one that can we see here on Earth. We have designed telescopes to discover if this was true or not and we found out that yes, it is just a natural landform on Mars. The shadows happend to be in the right place when the telescope had passed over the butte which caused it to seem as if it was a face. Concpiracy theorists could say that the martians merely just tampered with the sun or Mars so that the shadows would align every so often, but this is just speculation. This leads me to my next point.\n\nThe topic of martians has been a big one since the mid-1900s. We have dicovered many things about Mars since then and no evidence has pointed toward there being life on the planet. Scientists have although, discovered flowing water near the polar caps on Mars's surface. But even if there is enough water, lifeforms can not merely live off of it alone. Organisms need nutritious food to survive. Plants could not even live there because of the soil's lack of sufficient nutrients and it's harmful toxins it has. Besides, Mars is so far away from the sun that the plants would take almost twice as long to grow. Without the ability to have any food, the martians -if there were any (which I have already discussed)- would have died in the beginning of thier lifetime. Now you could say that they could be cannibals. This is just simply not right because if they were, they would have all died off before they could begin to work on the monument on Mars or even discover the technology to build it.\n\nThis battle of whether the \"Face on Mars\" was made by martians or not could go on forever even if we discover more about it. Who knows, the theorist could come up with some evidence later. But in the end, theorists are just theorist after all. They are just speculating even if the whole world knows what is fact.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cyclist passed old towns old man told setting played big part making situation harder overcome passed first abandoned town water source dry empty The text says pumped handle several minutes water would cool tasted like battery acid The second drink source passed abandoned Juice factory The text says a sand blasted picture young boy pouring refreshing glass juice mouth These two objects made situation mentally harder get close needed numerous times taken away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I owned worked librarie I would books music movies magazines many people offensive But I would offensive books music movies magazines childrens area librarieBut I would adult area I would keep type books music movies might ask Well adult older tenageers able handle act like adult reading book watching movie listening music If type book movie music causing violent behavior around town completly remove item shelf Its simple If parents get mad angree books movie music nt let children watch read listen Pick childs book like nt pick book Let children read book lots pictures color Watch My questions CAPS let people read watch something want even offensive people love watching scary offensive movie listening rap music People live defferent worlds even though live one In oppenion offensive books music movies stay libraries Just little younger kids shouls read watch listen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals perceive the time that children spend on television, video, and computer games are worth it, whereas others think that there are bad effects on their development. I believe, these type of medias provide a creative way to learn things, but this indeed affect their mental health also. This essay will discuss both views further and provide a concluding view. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, entertainment industries tend to create their contents for children colourful and lively to keep their attention as long as they can. This is undeniably effective for those toddlers who watch alphabet videos on Youtube for long hours, and do not get sick of them. Due to this way of presentation to them, they learn faster and improves their comprehension skills. Therefore, if controlled moderately, the time they use to watch or play with these contents, would greatly help in their early cognitive skills. \r\n\r\nMeanwhile, opposing side cited negative effects on this debate, such as children becomes impatient and irritable when these entertainments are taken away from them. As they engage and focus on television or mobile phone for a long period of time, their minds continuously process all information that they see, which exhaust them quickly. In addition, this could be addictive to a point that parents can only console them by giving them something to watch on the phone. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a creative way to present contents to children could be extremely beneficial in their learning journey as a child. Although if this was utilised excessively, this may lead to affecting their moods and worse, additiction. I believe a proper management of time for children to spend on these contents will be beneficial in the long run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are used used in everyday life but they may be used too much because of all the damage they do to the environment and the citizens must be informed on it. Cars are used to help get around easier unless if towns are developed so that people can walk or ride a bike everywhere. Cars cause pollution which causes smog and it can really hurt peoples health and the environment. A life without cars can make plenty of people happy due to the fact that people get injured or die in cars every day.\n\nTo start off most towns do not build buildings close together because people have cars which takes up more time to get there and money for gas. If buildings were made closer together everyone could get to the stores quickly and back home in time for special events. If buildings were made closer gasoline would be less of a problem due to the prices being high. In a town called Vauban in Germany seventy percent of all families do not own an automobile.\"All of our development since World War two has been centered on the car,and that will have to change\" said David Goldberg.\n\nCars are known to cause pollution and some places have a partial ban on cars. Paris is well known for the Eiffel Tower and also its pollution problem so Paris allowed people with even and odd number license plates to only drive on certain days or else they will be fined. When cars cause pollution it makes smog and smog can kill crops and animals if it gets out of control. Currently heavily populated areas such as Newyork has a big pollution problem causing grey skies.\n\nA life without cars is a happy one according to some people. A place in Colombia calles Bogota made an event called \"Car-free day\" which is a day where everyone goes the entire day without driving \"It's a good opportunity to take away streaa abd lower air pollution\".\"These people are generating a revolutionary change and it is crossing boarders\".\"The rain hasn't stopped anyone from participating\".\n\nThe reasons people should cut down on car usage is to lower pollution in the air. It just makes people happier without vehicles. Towns could be made with closer buildings to prevent using too much gas. Smog can really make an environment unhealthy by killing some of the plants that are there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear People Computers really good thing think never want get allways chating social networking allways find something wasting time computer anything want I think much waste time kids would spend time help kids homework eat watch tv spend time relax people like laydys kids go online never get time kids dont bad habbits dont stay late You time self clean house cook food husband go shopping take kids mall enjoy life computer gives nothing us gets us layzy work think work maybe hang friends dont computer stuff call friends go shoping cleaning house computer give us anything waste time social network There good thing computers find anything need look stuff talk family far away use good ways good thing never log faccebook stuff good stay You go beach go gym lots stuff going online sitting hours Just try go online go go somewhere insted", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, in many countries, numerous people are eager to carry out some researches about their place where they live there like building, household and so on. It appears due to some causes like how much they are pessimist or how much they are curious about their place. And also they can find this information via the internet, some folk and neighbors, and elderly.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a huge number of buildings are constructed in all countries which some neighborhood’s buildings are older that is a cause of communities’ concerns. First of all, people after living in a house or building for a while, they are curious about the buildings. For instance, they looking for some information about building age or how much it shows resistance against earthquakes or how it built solidly. Secondly, they will become pessimist and seek for some answers. As the results, some decisions are then taken about moving to another place or staying there. On the other, they are enthusiastic about their neighborhood’s history because they want to know what there before were. For example, in our neighborhood there were a lot of bars and clubs which all of them disappeared because of some strict roles.\r\n\r\nHowever, there is a border variety of methods for finding out some data about buildings or neighborhoods. Firstly, the internet has changed our life noticeably that by a simple search on Google you can find every things. Although It gives you a vivid imagination about your neighborhood’s history, it would not give you a specific data about your building because it almost has general data. Secondly, folk are more effective in your research by asking some question from. Thirdly, the best source of information is old people in a neighborhood who packed with a lot of information. Finally, neighbors who have lived in your building more than others will be useful in investigation.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although people are passion about the history of their building, it will bring them more concerns. Ignorance is bliss.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator PROPER_NAME,\n\nThe purpose of this letter is to fight for the cause of removing the Electoral College and voting simply by popular vote. With eveidence from \"What is the Electoral College?'' by the Office of the Federal Register, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, and \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,\" by Richard A. Ponser, I will eleborate on this subject. Now, since I am only fourteen, I do not claim to have all knowledge and be an expert on this method of voting, but it is not the way to choose our country's leader.\n\nThe Electoral College is a compromise between who the people of America chose and who Congress has chosen. This is an incorrect method of selecting the President. The Constitution states that we the people have the choice to select our government; not Congress. Yes, the Constitution's founding fathers also established the Electoral College, but it is a thing of the past. As Richard A. Ponser writes, an \"anchorism\" (In Defense of the Electoral College, par. 1), if you will. Moreover, the Electoral College does not belong in this day and age; it is something that is out-dated and in need of replacement.\n\nThe Electoral College also does not allow citizens to exersize their right to vote for their President, since Congress also has their say in the matter. The voting process was created for the citizens; not the people who are in the government. In fact, Bradford Plumer states that \"over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" (The Indefensible Electoral College, par. 1) This process of voting for President is undesired and despised my many people, by over half of the voters in America. The Office of the Federal Register writes that the Electoral College is \"a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by popular vote of qualified citizens.\" Why does Congress have any sort of influence or say in this matter? The people choose their government; not the governemt itself!\n\nAlright, the Electoral College is something that should not be used, by I can see the point of its purpose. The popular vote of the citizens can be infulenced by others, or advertisements and propoganda from political parties. Some voters are biased and overlook the negative things of the candidates because they do not wish to believe that this person does not support or believe everything they do. The Electoral College helps to balance that out. \"No region... has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" (In Defense of the Electoral College, par. 5) Richard A. Ponser asserts this in his article, as well as the fact that no region or place has any reason to go about \"increasing his plurality\" (par. 5) to make sure that a candidate will win. The Electoral College prevents this, resulting in a compromise between the popular vote of the citizens and Congress.\n\nTo come to a conclusion, I have stated that the Electoral College is not a method that should be used to choose the President of the United States. It is out-dated and does not allow citizens to choose the leader of their country. However, is balances out the popular vote and the Congress's vote.\n\nThank you for taking the time to read this letter.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technology is being developed everyday to make life easier or to improve performance. New software was recently developed that can detect emotion. It analyzes use of groups of muscles in the face and evaluates what percent of different emotions that person is feeling. It was even used to test the famous art piece Mona Lisa. The use of this technology could be to see what emotions students in classes are feeling and alter the teaching stratagy based on the students' emotions. This seems to be a good idea that allows teachers to teach the students in the best possible way, but I disagree that it should be used.\n\nStudents' privacy needs to be protected. If this software was used in a classroom setting the students wouldn't feel like they could express their emotions without being judged and evaluated by a computer. Students would feel pressured to fake or change their facial expressions so that nobody really knows their true emotion. If a student has gone through lots of major difficulties in his day and shows up to class just to have his emotions calculated, he wouldn't feel welcomed to learn. We need the classroom to be a safe place for students to feel comfortable when learning.\n\nTeachers job is to teach their students in the best way possible. Teachers go through college and get a degree on making sure students are able to learn from them easily. Using this expensive software will not be a bigger boost then simply hiring a good teacher. Computers are incredible, but they will never be like humans. Teachers can evaluate students' expressions and change their lessons without this software. Studnets would have a better relationship with their learning environment if a genuine human, not newly developed technology, helped them learn.\n\nTechnology is a great way to help students further their knowladge and learn more quickly. However there are some things that technology can not and should not do. Evaluating a humans emotions if one of those things. Paragraph 5 explains how humans can already do this task. There is no need for this software. Studnets would be more comfortable learning where a human was asking them how they are, not a computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Faces in...screens? What would the world be like if you had a computer that could read how you're feeling? Now, you're full of questions and I've the answers.\n\nTo teachers this could be quite an upgrade from going by GPA. This new software trying to make an entrance is a very unique way of teaching. How much easier would a teacher have it, if the computer made certain questions easier, or even harder by the look on a students face?\n\nI'm talking about the (FACS) Facial Action Coding System. A very unique invention that could skyrocket learning to the next level, or even more. Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of the marvolous invention, says \"he classified six basic emotions\" \"happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\"\n\nThis could be a very valuable asset to have in a classroom. Not only is it going to make the teachers job much easier on how to teach the lesson to the majority of the kids. It is also going to make it easier during assignments on the ones struggling. So i beleive that the introduction to the teachers with this technology could be very useful around many schools.\n\nyes making these inventions could pretty much solve the problem that every teacher has. All of the same questions every teacher asks themselves. \"How do i teach this class?\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "why should we participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy? Some people ask but barley anyone knows. This might help us some times. But I think this will tough. We should do this, because it might help us, you sometimes get free time, and it is easy.\n\nThis job might help us alot. We can earn money and get a new house. You are shipping things. Things like milk dairy and other things. You could get a new house or a new car it might be able to be big small or whatever size you want it to be.\n\nOn this job you sometimes get freetime. You get freetime if you work hard on your job. The games we can play are like Poker, Cards, and more. If we don't want to play games we dont have to play any games. Therefore it is your choice if you want to play games or not.\n\nLastly this job is very easy. Mostly because all you have to do is ship crates with animals in them. The story says Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The job is probaly the easiest job you can find. So if you want this job for any reason it is a great job.\n\nThe job is great for all of these reasons. if you frogot what they were the reasons are that it might help us, you sometimes get free time, and it is easy. I think this job would be great for any of us. So if you want this job and if I were you then I would take it. Therefore I think this is a great job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a student is doing a digital activity in class on a computer and she is bored out of her mind. Her head starts to nod forward and it becomes harder for her to keep her eyes open. Suddenly the screen changes all on it's own and gives her a different, more interactive problem to tackle. Feeling intrigued and more awake, she starts to work again. This method of engaging students could be made possible with the use of the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nIt's a technology that detects human emotions by reading them using all 44 of the major muscles in the face. It then calculates the emotion by associating the movement of the muscle with a specific emotion. This could be useful in classrooms because of it's ability to read student's facial expressions and then calculate their emotions.\n\nAlthough you'd be able to read the faces of students who are excited or engaged, this technology would be more useful on the other end of the spectrum. FACS (Facial Action Coding System) could be used to help point out which students are bored, tired, or struggling. Adjustments could be made to learning plans and lessons in order to more effectively engage students of all ages and types, and help them learn better.\n\nIn the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, one of the main developers of this technology, Dr. Huang, further explains how this could be useful in classroms, as well as other aspects of life. He states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 1). This could greatly increase a student's ability to learn.\n\nWhile it might seem that this technology wouldn't make a great impact on education systems, it could significantly improve the learning environment in a classroom. The technology can effectively engage all students in a new and advanced manner, using something everyone has - facial muscles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": ",Honestly it would be valuable to the students in the classroom beacuse paintings like that are you non emotional and you most likley can read the emotion on their face. Now if facial action coding system work properly I think that every class should get one judging by the picture I think the machine is off with the emotions by a little because if you think about it back in Leonardo Da Vinci times it wasnt a trend to smile in pictures so thats why most of the greatest historical picture of people look like they have mixed emotion. Back to the technology , its a good and bad idea to have one but if you know how to work it then every Art and English teacher should have one but there might be some pros and cons about the machine on con could be is that it could have a malufunction or crash which would cause the people who have it to get it fixed. A pro about it is that now you can tell weither or not the picture of the person painted back in historical times were happy,sad or angry all that matters is that the thing works and I think it would be a good idea honestly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The conviniance of the cars would be nice, but what if the car malfunctioned and it crashed? Would the car owner be responcible or would the manufacturer? Whould the cars be able to be hacked, like a cell phone or laptop?\n\nHow would the person or people in the car know they are safe?\n\nI would not feel comfertoble having a computer driving me around and deciding if it takes me through a bad naughborhood or if it takes the long way around. \"\"The psycological aspects of automation are really a chalenge,\" admits Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver.\" If I were to be put in danger, would that compurter be able to get me out of that danger? I don't think so because, again, it is a programed computer. The car is programed to follow the laws set forth. If going over the speed limit to get away from a person trying to harm me or the people I am with is the way that we stay alive, then that's what needs to be done.\n\nIf the car is programed to go the speed limit, how many police officers would lose their job? There would be no speeding, so there would be no need to have them on the road as much.\n\nWhat would happen if there was a fire? If the vehicls are programed to go the speed limit, how will the fire fighters get to the house on time? If there is an acident, because the person in the car has no control over it, how will the peramedics get to the scene on time?\n\nIf the car doors are locked and there is no way to get out in a crash, there will be more of a chance of people dieing from a car crash than before the cars come out. The officers would have to cut the person out, if that can be done. If the crash is so bad that the person can't be cut out what does that say about cars manufacturer?\n\nIn comclution, I think that having driverless cars could cause more damage than good. Yes, it would be more convinient, but safe I dont think so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \" The Chellenge of Exploring Venus\" The author suggests that studying Venus is a wrthy persuit despite the dangers. Venus has value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuase humans curiosity likely led us into many equally intimidating eneavors\n\nOne hink tha the author suggests that stufying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dengers it presents, is that many mission was unmannned and for good reason, since not spacecraft survived the landing for more that a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challening planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nAnother reason that the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers, is that. Aa thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more Challengingare the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 greater that what we experience on our own planet.\n\nIn conclusion studying Venus is dangerous, because the weather is too much for us; there are temperatures that our body can't support or recist. Also Venus is not touched down in more than three decades, so that can be very dngerous for humans to experiment Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay will be about how i think my fellow citizensyou relly thinkk about how much the relly use there cars. i think if every one walk it would make the world a better place an better your self. i think that if every day was a car-free day everyone would be so shock on how good lif would be with out cars.\n\nif you relly think about how there is a car free day in bogota you would think tht they are vary smart. couse once a year there will be less camicals in the air an also or people will be way more athletice that day. An not only that they are smart enogh to make this car free day up they aslo are makeing monye cuss for the poeple that dont wwant to walk they still let only taxi cars an buses still run. if i was the president i would make this a event once a mouth. an just like the artical says \"it's a good opportunity to take stress away and lower air pollution\".\n\nIn the artical of\"the end of car culture it says that \"recent studies suggest that americans are buying fewer cars,driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\". I think that is great couse i want to see more people riding there bikes an injoing there selfs an taking family bike rides. An another main reason y ithink it would be a good idea to limite cars is that there will be more monye in your pocket couse you would not have to go to the gas station every othere day. an not only that you wouldent hae to buy a car couse those are relly exspinsive to. If you think about if your car breaks down you would have to do all kindes of things an pay all typesb of money to get it fix. more people would be more welthy if cars was never brout around the earth.\n\nThere are sme parts of the states an citys that you probly dont need a car. Say im in new your the city i woud never need a car there are subways taxies other ways to get around an just amgin having a car in the big apple the trafic is relly bad an all traficdose is cpouse acsidents if there was no cars fewer people would die in car acsadints an there would be more peole alive in 2015. If we go back to 2000 an we add up all the people that died in car cidents an how mant acidents there were im sure everyone would drive less an alot safer. Im sure if every one was car less the wourld would be a better place\n\nIm sure if i was the presdint i would start a car free day once a mounth an see how that goes. but if it goes well i would try to work on car free day but for a day for weeks an i think if everyone stop using cars for 1 year the air would be very fresh an everyone would be alot hethyer an im sure in the futer there would be no more cars but in cuccsin i think that the wourld shout limmit the amout of time we use cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir mood happiness thankfulness In memoir author talks greatful parents happy lived", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" explans how there is a new type of technoligy that uses a coumputer system that lets people detect peoples emotions. To get the caculated expressions of someones human emotion the computer system uses a 3D model scan of the persons face then uses mats to detect the presons facal muscles then depending on the position they are will depend on there emotion.\n\nI think in a classroom or school situation this form of a computer system shouldent be used for schools for a number of reasons. In the artical the University says the softare couldent run on home computers and mostly all schools dont have amped up computers thet are bulit to run things like this. So if schools want to start using things like this they would need to get the money for the computers and the software if the founders of it are gonna put a price on it. Another reason is why would schools need such a system like this when they could just do this type of thing on paper with simple question to answer to see the students emotion in class. Or the school could send papers home to the parentes asking how the student is doing home and if the school should be worried about anything for the kids safety. Befor papagraph 8 the artical does give a pretty reason to use this type of system. They show the steps of how to smile or what it does to get the right type of smile to read the emotion of happiness. In the 8th paragraph it shows that in a real smile the muscles called the \"prbicuarlis oculi pars palpabraeus\" make the crow's-feet around your eyes. But when someone does a fake smile the mouth\n\nis stretches sideways using the \"zygomatic major\" and a different muscle, the \"risorius\". So when people smile they can be decteced if they are faking it or not. But in paragraph 9 \"according to the Facal Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresse emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" So both paragraph 8 and 9 shows that there is a flaw in this computer system because if someone has never had a \"real smile\" and always used a \"fake smile\" the system will detect no happiness but the oppisite or something else. And thet person will always live with a \"fake smile\" and never a \"real smile\" beacuse the fake one will develop as a real smile if the person keeps doing it because of the facial muscles getting use to it.\n\nSo in conclusion I dont think this technology that can read emotional expressions should be used because there are better ways of finding out a kids emotion. And becasue of the big flaw within the system, that being the human body actualy going aganst the facal scan by getting use to express a certan expression that reads differntly on the computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The global environmental problems are coming in the first earth problem`s list, therefore all offers should come hand in hand to end these troubles and have a clean planet.\r\n\r\nFirst, of ,course one of the ways to reduce global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel, which makes people think twice before using their car or turning on the heating, They will use it at the needed time, not every time. For instance, I remember when I was in Syria and petrol was very expensive, we had not used it a lot, and we heated one room instead of three.\r\n\r\nSecond, there were a lot of methods to make people reduce using fuel, like decreasing the price of electronic cars, encouraging them to ride the popular buses or trains and making workshops to be aware of the environment and their problems. For example, I have my own car, and I look forward to having an electronic car but it is so expensive compared to mine or normal cars.\r\n\r\nAs a result, in my ,opinion the world must be a part of saving the environment, and do anything logical to solve the global environment, without being so hard on people, We just need to aware and hand in hand with our environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke want others to participate in the program ''Seagoing Cowboys'' because when his firend told him to join the program, Luke knew that it was an opportunity of a lifetime. Based off the acticle I read, it says ,''Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China''. According to the text, Luke helped other people, and he wanted them to join in case they want to do the same thing. For example, Luke had turned 18 before arriving in Greece, like he could be drafted the the military service. he wanted people to join the program because they can experience adventures and visit many unique places. Luke also did not only help people but, caring for the animals during the crossings kept him busy. Luke said,'' I'm grateful for the opportunity .'' The author stated, ''And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.''\n\nIt also says,\"It was1945, World War 2 was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).'' Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled\n\nat the Panama Canal on his way to China. Luke helped a lot of people during his trips and trying to convince other to join the program. Like that there would more help for the animals and people the need them. This explains how the argument of Luke's point of view trying to convince others to join Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Road safety has become a pipe dream for most individuals living on Earth. Everyday a significant number of people become victims of accidents thus making it a global concern. Although a plethora of steps have been taken to alleviate these mishaps, the number of casualties have not declined yet. Some people hold the view that punishing drivers is the only way to ameliorate road safety, while I believe that it is necessarily not the only solution. This essay tends to explain the reasoning behind my viewpoint.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, drivers are not the only persons to be blamed for these casualties, highway conditions are also responsible. Nowadays, streets are constructed with substandard materials, accordingly, potholes are formed during the rainy season. Similarly, ongoing maintenance of streets leaves behind dug-up roadways without any proper barricades. Unavailability of street lights also exacerbates the problem. For instance, recently an Indian girl was run over by a truck. At first her scooter fell in a pit and she fell on the road, before she could get up a truck hit her because the trucker did not see her due to darkness.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, inferior vehicle conditions contribute to accidents. In Bangladesh, most public buses are 10 to 20 years old, but are still running on the highways. So, in times of emergency, it is impossible for the operators to stop the vehicle. In worst scenarios the buses can collide with another automobile, killing all the passengers on board. Moreover, there are no organised traffic regulations and highway patrol in most cities hence no security. Due to dysfunctional traffic lights, crossing of pedestrians and cars coincide resulting in misfortunes. Considering all these, the government should be held blameworthy as it is the authority's responsibility to provide safer public transportation and systematic traffic rules.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, mishaps are caused not only by reckless driving but by several other factors. Improved roadways, vehicles and laws are indispensable to enhance the safety of our roads. Therefore, I disagree with the given statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboys is a great job and you could become one too. This could be a great for you and im going to tell you a couple of reasons why I like my job and why you should join in with us.\n\nI didnt really know much about this whole Seagoing Cowboys thing but I might as will give it a try i thought so I did and once I got into this it changed my whole live and this can be you too this can change your life too. If you love animals you will love this job as much as I do. They hired me to take care of animals like horses,young cows, and mules that were shipped oversea and this could also be you. You could take care of all these animals. I made nine trips the most of any seagoing cowboy and maybe If you joined the seagoing cowboys program You could beat my record and go up to 10 11 12 or higher. But the best thing about this is when you get to travel you get to go places you have never ever in your life dream of going. You get to go places like\n\nEurope, China , Greece, and even Italy and have a good time . And you get to go on cattle boats for me they were unbelievable. But a good thing about this job was that you still get time for yourself and get to relax.\n\nThese were a few reasons why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure it opens the world to you. And you should join you will have a lot of fun in this program Its also will open the world to you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive it is just a landform because it looks like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Do you really belive that a face would be on Mars, it is really hard to belive? It would not make sense that a face would be on Mars. I belive it is just a landform because it looks like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 Mars Globel Surveyor flow over Cydonia and took a picture and it was a natural landform. The pectures this time were ten times sharper then the ones from the original Viving picture. There was no alien monument after all. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nOn April 8,2001 Mars Global Surveyor took another picture on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, caompared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. With this images if there are any objects there you are going to see it.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are common to the ones in the American West. They remind us most of the Middle Burre in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nI know that the second picture was taken on a cloudy day and it was not all clear. The origanal picure did have a differnt shadow also. There was however, a third picture taken and that was on a clear day and it showed that it was just a lanform. The origanal picture only had 43 meters compared to the one in 2001 that had 1.56 meters.\n\nIn counclusion the face on Mars was just a moon. There were two pictures taken after the origanal picture and they both show that in is just landforms. I belive it is just a landform because it looks like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars will be a part of the world whether anyone likes it or not. But I the type of person that does not want driverless cars but for good reason. Yes, driverless cars are becoming more and more smart everyday and accomplishing great things but we as humans won't be able to accomplish as much as we want to.\n\nSay there is a 16 year-old with a new lisence which she has been eagerly waiting for for a long time. What kind of driving experiences will she have? Where will she go? She doesn't know yet but she can't wait to find out. But she won't really have any adventures because her driverless car is doing everything for her. Her first drive to a faraway place is done mainly by her car. What kind of accomplishment is that? Humans have become lazier through time and I think it is time to fix that. I'm not saying that we shouldn't be able to have things that make life easier but we should do things on our own sometimes. Not only that but the people making these cars are working on the wrong thing.\n\nOur planet is dying. This is the truth and we need to figure out ways to to keep earth healthy. Yes the driverless cars use less fuel but can't they do that with a driver? If a driverless car can use less gas than the cars today then there is certainly a type of car out ther that uses less gas with a driver in it.\n\nThe cars with drivers may not be the safest way to go but we can make cars safer if we use the technology to do it. A driverless car is very safe but why can't that be put into a car with a driver in it. It can. People just need to make it possible. If we make cars safer with the driver still driving the car then we make life easier but still place the responsibility in ourselves so that we don't become less mature when it comes to it.\n\nA car is a great thing to have and to be able to manage. So we can't let ourselves let driverless cars rule over that. We should propose how we can make cars safer without taking away the responsibility of driving them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diving cars as of now has been a something that is preactically something of a social norm and a nessecery skill for just about everyone. Alot of things have been changing in our sociaty such as the need to drive, but now people are trying to change even the very concept of driving by turing our car into\n\n\"driverless cars.\" This idea of having \"diverless cars\" is not so great of an idea. the Google cofounder Sergey Brin's vision of having a public transportation of driverless cars, is a vision that has trouble some problems. As of today there have been plenty of trails that people have gone through to make driverless cars but none have proven to make one proficient enough for practical use. Some of the reasons being Include costs, excecive amount of technology that is not able to completely take over in driving, and there's driverless cars are still something is not able to compete with an actually human driver. The over all idea and concept of \"driverless cars\" is good, but as for where they stand today they are just impractical and not an actually alternitive to just having an alert driver. \"Diverless cars\" just are not a something good to use as of right now.\n\nIf \"driverless cars\" were actaully resonable to use then they would be great to use, but unforunately they fail to be of practical use and should not be used. One of the main reasons to why it is impractical to be using these so called \" driverless cars\" is because of the costs in money that would be spent on them. In Sergey Brin's vision of \"driverless cars\" he tells us how he foresees that these driverless car would use \"half the fuel of today's taxi...\", but they have not come to be able to do such a thing, and so ur costs for these car would be no different or would just cost us more. Ther is also another situtation conscernting this idea of using these cars in terms of costs. Gerneral Motors and Engineers at Berkeley had this Idea of improving or changing the roads which would be able to control and tell cars what to do, but althoug it work it was impratical. Changing the all roads and adding new equipment to and every car was \"smiply to explencive to be practical.\" The idea of driverless cars is just to costly to make it work.\n\nTechnology is great thing, although when it somes to the driverless car's technology it does not making a practical thing to drive.The driverless car are car fillled with technological advancements, but even with all its fancy tech. it still is not very effective at being a driverless\n\ncar.\n\nWhen it come down to it, a driverless car verses an actual drive, the driverless car still can not compete. This is mainly due to the fact that even with all of it's sensors it is still unable to deal with many of the obsticals of the road.\n\nBeing free to simply enjoy a ride in car is always nice to experinence. Unfortunately even with these \"driverless cars\" that we have today we can not just sit back, relax, and enjoy a care free drive. Driverless car is still a concept that out there, and it's a good one. Until its flaws in it's own concept are fixed it has yet to be of a practical use. Maybe if one day it's able to lower its costs, have a fair use of technology that is relyable, and can just about replace a human driver then prossibly \"driverless car\" could be of practical use. If they do evntually become of practical use then just as Sergey Brin said \"such cars would fundementallly chnage the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nWe should not decide the president by electoral college. Mainly because it's unfair to the voters who took the time out of their day to vote, but then realized they wasted their time because their vote doesn't mean anything, the electors decide who the president is not the voters. The article 'The Indefensible Electoral Collge: Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong' states \"Under the electoral college system, voters vote for not the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" What's the point of voting if our vote basically doesn't matter because we are not the one choosing who is president. The same article also states \"Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always\" We the voters basically don't even decide who's president, the electors do, and we don't even get to pick who the electors are, the state legislatures do. Why is the president based off of who the electors want? there's only 538 of them, it should be based off popularity, the vote of the millions of the people who have voted. Honestly i see no point in voting now since our votes don't decide who the president will be.\n\nElectoral college is unfair to the small states. The article 'Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president' shows a map of America with the number of electoral votes given to each state. If you look at the map, you'll notice that the bigger states have more electoral votes, and the small states have very few. For example California has 55 electoral votes, Texas has 38, and Florida has 29. But states such as Alaska, Hawaii, and Maine have less than 5 electoral votes. Which basically means that their electoral votes don't count nearly as much as the big states do. If we decided the president by popularity among everyone who voted, it would actually be fair to everyone, and more people would vote.\n\nThe article 'Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president' states \"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now\" I don't blame them when the artcile also states \"This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose presidency.\" Then what's the point of voting when our vote doesn't matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting effective cyclist He desert area California limited water supply It hot dry He barely water drink go long way hot humid weather The deficiency water could made became dehydrated Another obstacle biking trip Yosemite National Park hills faced At beginning flat terrain hills pedal makes lot harder One obstacle faced snake ran That setting many obstacles guy If nt heat lack water might able make little easier", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days it is firmly believed that the most efficient method to teach children in schools how to work together is through team sports. This essay disagrees with the statement since some young students might not enjoy playing sports and because team sports can raise competitiveness amongst children, hence having a negative impact on their friendly relationships.\nFirst of all, although it is vital for a children to play sports and keep fit, not everyone is keen on football, rugby and volleyball. Instead, some young students prefer spending their leisure time on other activities such as joining a chorus group or teathre lessons. These activities can encourage cooperation and make children get along with each other, as well. On the other hand, forcing children to play something they doesn't feel comfortable in can make them withdraw from the team game, which would make them feel excluded.\nIn addition, teams sports do not always promote cooperation among players. In some cases, inequities or particularly ambitious behaviours can lead to violent competitiveness, instead. It is generally thought that sport is an extremely selective environment, in fact you need to exercise daily in order to keep fit. If obese children took part in those team sports as well, they could feel isolated because they do not own the perfect body to perform well.\nIn conclusion, although team sports are a great method to teach children how to get along with each other, there are various activities which can encourage cooperation among children, as well. Therefore, it is considerably significant for a school to embrace diversity and make children play with what they really like, instead of forcing them to do something they feel they don't belong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that some members of society communicate and remain acknowledged of new events through social media. There is a number of benefits and drawbacks of using the internet.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in terms of the advantages of using the world network, it significantly reduces the inconveniences when cooperating or seeking different information. In other words, these new media create an opportunity to chat or send voice messages to each other, so people can reply at any time which is convenient for them. For instance, during the meetings at work workers can not talk by phone so social media is often used if it is essential to contact anyone. Moreover, the use of these applications can contribute to lowering the stress levels of users. These apps could be used as entertainment as a person who applies it can face different photographs or posts which may be interesting for him. As an example, Instagram which is widely used by society contains a variety of beautiful photographs of nature which provide a great pleasure after a hard workday.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the active use of the world network can lead to addiction which is a loss of time in the future. If a person intensively uses these apps, he will feel a great desire to take his phone and start viewing different posts that disrupt him from his main work. For example, today these addictions are widely spread among teenagers who use their phones even during important events. In addition, social media are used only through modern devices which create artificial light which is extremely harmful to eyesight. The user stares at one point which even makes the bigger damage as this light enters the eyes continuously. It can be observed in many teens as well as a big part of them start to wear glasses.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, social media can be useful as they are very convenient to use and may reduce stress levels however it can create an addiction that wastes time or even damage a person's health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program that helps the world recover from World War Two. It helps different countries around the world come back from the war and suffering. If you join, you will see many amazing different places while helping the world.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy means you will help countries by helping ship the food and animals to that country so they can recover what was lost. You just have to take care of the animals by feeding and watering them. On the trips we even had extra time to play baseball and volleyball in the empty holds where the animals were. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games also went on. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy can open up the world to you. It can make you aware of other counties and their needs.\n\nI have seen places around the world like Greece and Vencie, Italy while helping there. The Seagoing Cowboys are doing good things by helping people, and a bonus is being able to see many cool sights. It is really a wonderful thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because long ago Venus was once like Earth. In the text it states \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The author may not be the only one that thinks studying Venus isn't a bad idea because Astronomers are fascinated by it.\n\nNow there is quite a bit of danger when it comes down to studying Venus.\n\nThe temperature gets really hot on Venus. In the text it states \" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" That can not be good for the human body. Venus has a thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets and sulfuric acid clouds.\n\nAlso, in the text it states \"such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" I don't know how good of idea this could be because according to the passage \" ...no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" Now just imagine what it would do to a human without the proper gear on.\n\nThan, again they might think it's a good idea to see if their is ife outside of Earth. This could possibly happen in the near future. I don't think the scientists or the author care about the danger that could possibly happen. In the text it states \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nIn conclusion, studying Venus is a huge risk. It could possibly take years or decades until a decision is made, or until the proper equipment is invented. Either way studying Venus has its cons and pros.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles engineers faced Of Any builder You think About high high wind conditions sturdiness frame And payroll engineers Although Al Smith run Problems rethink Mooring Mast agood idea Putting An Thousand foot Dangling Building feet air Al Smith landmark US But Shouldnt put nonusable Mooring Mast At top", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that if google is able to test cars on the rode that they should be able to use the cars in todays life because if they are good enough to be driven on the rode to test, they should be good enough for someone to test them. It was designed for that very reason so it should be good used to drive. In the passage they said \"Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves. In reality, Google has had cars that could drive independently under specifi conditions since 2009.\" I never knew that they had cars that could drive independently, that's something I learned since I've read this passage. I'm really not all that good with car, I don't know my cars either. I just know some of the basic cars that are out today. I wonder if they will come out with a car that you can talk to and it will do whatever you say. I think that some car designers today are trying to come up with a type of car like the transformers or something. I would like to get to know about the technics that cars have. I'm really not a big fun of cars, but it's always okay to leanr about new things that you really aren't interested in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many cities and countries are starting a new trend that is not using cars at all. Vehicles can cause many problems such as air pollution, congested roads, and injuries due to wrecks. Some cities have started some type of way to promote how bad vehicles really are and advising people on what to do to stop driving.\n\nFor three years in Bogota, Colubia, the city has a day called, \"Day Without Cars\" where in this city, home of seven million citizens, nobody can use a vehicle unless they are willing to pay a $25 fee if they were get caught. Columbians greatly support this cause by hiking, biking, skating, and taking the bus to work. This caused the roads to be clear and not congested like they usually are.\n\nParis has a system to help support limiting car use as well. They take even and odd numbered license plates and designate a day that's either even or odd. On the even day, car owners that have an even license plate are ordered to leave their car at home, and vice versa for odd. If they have drive their car on the day they were ordered to leave it home, they have to pay a fee of $31.\n\nThe United States has reached a point to where cars are starting to become unpopular. In 2005, the amount of miles driven peaked, and in April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was down approximately 9% below the peak in 2005. That is eqaul to where the U.S. was in 1995.\n\nAnother advantage of limiting car usage is that some companies that are in the computer/cell phone business are making more money. In the United States, many people are using the computer and telephone to communicate with people because it's faster and easier to access than having to drive around town to meet with someone. This means that computer websites are making more money and the phone companies are making more money since people are using their phones more often.\n\nNext, cars can cause major stress to some people. Traffic jams, animals running across the road, not being able to see due to smog, and car accidents stress people out because they are either too busy to deal with it or being scared that they might hurt someone/something or may even get hurt themselves. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter in an article written by Elisabeth Rosenthal.\n\nAlso people's health could improve tremendously as a result of limiting car usage. Walking to work could burn the calories that people ate at breakfast. Hiking, running, skating, and biking to meet up for lunch or for little kids to go to the play ground could greatly increase people's health. Since people would be technically exercising while going to places, they would be more proned to drinking water to rehydrate themselves which would make them a healthier person in the process as well.\n\nThe process of limiting car usage has started or has already taken over cities and countries. It can reduce stress, increase the health of people, and increase the profit for business. The advantages of limiting car usage may seem small, but in the end they will have a huge impact on societies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinon on driverless cars is, they are safe to have driverless cars. My first opinon is, they will make the streets safer.All the car accidents that are happening will slow down the death rates for the car accidens. The car will have a human at a human but the person will not actually be driving the car like we do now.The invention in 1980 would be agood help for the driverless car because, it has antilock brakes.\n\nDriverless cars will be a big help to get people places and things will get done faster. By the car being able to brake on itself,steer itself, and accelerate itself it reqiures for the human to be navigation through a work zone. The car will be ready to take any sitaution and be quck to get the drivers attention whenever needed. If the human belives that the car is going to slow we are able to take the wheel at any time needed. By using driverless cars people can have more fun when they go places and get places.\n\nThe law agreeing with the driverless car is was a good idea. In other states such as, California,Nevade,Flordia by using semi-automous cars and a start for the driverless cars.The car being a reliable safe thing will be a help to prove that the driverless cars are a good invention to help humans out.If the driverless car in invented fully then the laws will be changed into different ones.I believe the roads will go a lot smoother and things will bw done faster from the roads being clearer.\n\nThose are my opinons on why i think we should have driverless cars. First reasoning is they are more safer. Then, i think it will help people get around more and faster way.Finally, the law is argruing that the roads will go alot smoother with driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author does a good job of portraying how Venus is worth being studied despite its dangers. They talk about the different dangers in studying Venus, and they also talk about why it is so interesting and why it would be worth studying further.\n\nThe author shows this through the text because they clearly state why Venus is considered so dangerous and also why it is so interesting. For example, in paragprah 3, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide...clouds of corrosive sulfuric acid...temperatures average over 800 degress fahrenheit...atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet.\" These are some examples of the dangers that are presented when trying to study Venus. Despite the dangers, Venus would be worth looking into because it provides new information and a greater knowledge of what environments are like on other planets, for example, in paragraph 4, \"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" These are some examples of why we should look more into Venus because it has similar features to Earth and it is interesting to figure out why or how they are similar. The author proves their point by explaining that these dangers could potentially be worked around. In paragraph 7, \"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditons.\" This is showing that while Venus may be very dangerous to observe, there are advanced technologies out there that can lower the risk that comes with studying this planet. As the author stated in paragraph 8, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagaination and innovation.\" What the author is trying to get across in this line, is that we should not limit ourselves or limit how much we can know or see solely based on something being too dangerous, when there are innovations out there to make it possible.\n\nThese are some of the examples of how the author demonstrates his ideas on why we should study Venus despite the dangers that it presents. The author did a good job presenting his ideas, as shown in the text and examples provided.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Happy, angry, sad, disgusted, fearful, and suprised these are all emotions that drive our life. Now what if you could know exactly how someone is feeling in a few seconds without having to ask them? Or be able to detect if someone is feeling suicidal ? In the following paragraphs you will find out ho that all is now possible thanks to Dr . Huang's Facial Action Coding System.\n\nThe Facial action Coding System or FACS for short is a new program that reads your emotions. This program uses a scanner to find the location of your muscels in your face and then calculates what your mood is in a precent. For example in paragraph 1 it says\" She's 83 precent happy, 9 Precent disgusted, 6 Precent fearful, and 2 Precent angry...\"This is how you would get your results. Now think of all the things this could be used for.\n\nDepression, one of the biggest killers in the world and most of the time goes unnoticed by friends family and loved ones. Now what if you could tell when someone is depressed and could help them.With this program you could do just that. Think of all the lives that could be saved and young minds that wont be wasted. But what if the computer could make these people smile as well.\"if you smile when a certain web ad pops up a similar might follow but if you frown the next one will be diffrent.\" as stated in paragraph 6. This means therapy could be in your own home where all you have to do is look at your computer.\n\nThreat detection , What if you could detect when someone is angry enough to shoot up a school or rob a bank or commit a crime. Since this program can give you prentge of moods immage how much safer schools will be when you can stop a shooting before it happens.Imagine a world that you could be proud that you kid lives in. Now some might say that this would be unethical or something out of a movie that would be bad in the wrong hands. But there is really no bad in this if you can stop a crime before it happens and do it ethically there is nothing wrong with this.\n\nGrades can be hard to keep and everyone learns at diffrent paces. But as stated in paragraph 6 \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored then adjust the lesson to how they learn.\"This would allow the teachers to have more of a one on one experince instead of having to teach everyone at once. With grades on the rise immagine 20 years after that when these people creat buisnesses and become the future economy and how well they will be prepared for the real world.\n\nIn summary this FACS program could be one of the greatest inventions ever. Wether it be stopping crime / depression or helping to teach students. This program will revolutionize the future of our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. Exploring Venus could be challenging because of it's geology and critical living conditions but study of scientists and astronomers are fascinating it similar as the planet we live in which could be a worthy pursuit despite the danger.\n\nVenus is the closet planet to the Earth and it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Venus is a chllenging place to examine. Venus's temparature and atmospheric pressure is more than the Earth it could be a risky place for a human being to survive or live at but besides danger on this planet, Venus once maybe was one of the planet that is most likely Earth a long time ago. In the articles \"The Challenge of Exploring Venuse\" it states that \"On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure sis 90 times greter than what we experiene on our own planet.\" this concludes that Venus is a dangerous place to survive at because it's near to the sun too. In the article \"Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in our solar system, Even though Murcery is closer to sun.\" this defenses the claim of danger on Venus is. It also causes erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes as well. Besides all danger Venus is somehow a worth pursuit, \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and carters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a plantery visit,\" this tells that it also have so many features as like Earth. Venus has to get up close and personal despite the risks for making the misson safely for scientist to product. As like many scientist are working on thier mission for Venus through the specific devices they've made to approch for studying Venus. NASA also has been working on it for a while.\n\nVenus is a worthy prusuit despite the dangers it presents and tells us about in the article. Exploring Venus and challenges that might explorers would face through the exploraion. A human could accomplish any thing while living on Earth easily traveling from one corner to the other corner of the planet. On Venus human has dangerous living conditions but scientists study might worths more than the danger and in future there are easy and safe ways for explorers to aknowledge about the \"Evening Star\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not going to take over the transportation industry. Driverless cars have many negative and positive aspects to the making. Many people have found it hard to believe that they are \"driverless\" cars. There was an article on CNN website on May 3, 2016 that is about how one of Google's driverless cars crashed. The idea of the cars working into driverless anytime soon is not going to happen.\n\nThe positive apects of the car are many, but they are ruled out by the major aspects of negativity. The text states, \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". The idea of the many sensors they spread across this car is crazy, but they are mimicking the driver, so he or she does not have to drive. Second, \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\". Google cfounder Sergey Brin is stating that his driverless car has less fuel usage than a regular car and many more options than a bus. The positive attributes are crazy on the results they got that could change the environment and human lifestyle.\n\nThe negative aspects of the driverless car are very high in priorities for the company. According to the text, \" Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffice issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents\". This \"driverless\" can is not showing its true meaning of being driverless if it has to be taking over by a driver to pull in and out of driveways. Furthermore, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer\"? The car is causing many different problems in many different categories. It is saying that they would have to make up new laws of liability for if someone gets injured in a technology malfunction, it sounds like a lot of issues that can not be fixed.\n\nThe driverless car has many issues and advantages that can be handled in different ways. According to the text, \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved\". They are stating that the problems with the cars are being solved by the minute. Second, \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". It is hard to believe that they can have a car watch a person and be controlled by that. The driverless car is very luxury, but would middle class people be able to buy it?\n\nThe driverless car is a statement that does not mean what it is stating. According to the text, \" Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors\". Those are just a few of the \"driverless\" cars sensors, how is anyone going to be able to see out of the car with all of those gadgets in the way. Furthermore, \" The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over\". The cars name is \"driverless car\" then you have to have the driver take over when you can not do simple tasks like pulling in and out of driveways. The car just seems like it is very far from being \"driverless\".\n\nThe driverless car have not found their spot in the world yet or for quite a while. The concept of having the driver have to take over a driverless car is crazy on how they call it driverless, but need someone to take over the wheel at times. The car has many positive aspects to it and would be astounding if they had found a way to make it driverless, but until then they are not very interesting to me. Driverless cars are not going to take of the transportation industry.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The desert area California makeing dehydrated The trip long enough water get took maps way The old men thot havent left confines porches since carter office told shortcut followed ended almost killing due heat stroke dehydration If cyclist would followed map could stoped store water setting bad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They scan your face get your emotions and see how you feel.The reults are wonderful and your happy but is it right? Can a computer really scan you and tell your emotions.How does it know how you feel it's just a computer it doesnt have facial futures or emtions.\n\nThe human face can show so many emotions and has this for a reason. You can look at a person and tell if there happy or sad bcause of there facial futures. The artical states that \"the facial evpressions for each emotion are universal\" showing that everone should be able to tell eachothers emotions without the tecnology. We show the facial expresions we have to show our mood and give off our emotions.\n\nHowever the computer may help in some way to a class but as the atical ask \"how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we use to express to show how we feel?\" If im happy and this computer says im sad well how does it know? This is tecnology that someone is using to comapre one persons face with someone elses and not everyone uses the same emotions to show the same feelings.This computer could be good for telling us the feelings in art but you shoud be able to look at art and tell the emotions thats what art is its emotions in panting or drawing form.\n\nThe artical states that most human communication is nonverbal and includes emotional communication. Why do we need the computer to tell us the emotions when you can look and tell yourself. Each expression is compaired to a nutral face what if the machine guesses wrong what if you show different emotions for different fellings than other people? We can tell emotions we use them everyday but the computer dosent its only telling you what the people who put it together know.\n\nIn conclusion should this tecnology be used in the classroom? Should we really leave the finnal call to the computer and also how does the computer know your feelings if it doesent have its own. Whys should we let the computer tell us our emotions? The choice is yours to decide but to even decifer if or if not to use the computer but even doing that your showing emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, sounds like science fiction huh? But with advancements technology, pioneered by Google, they are science truth instead. The original concept of a driverless car was created way back in the late 1950s by General Motors, it was simply a car that was sent radio signals from electrical cable in the testing track. Personally, I find the concept of driverless cars both interesting and dangerous. Though they have made marvellous advancements since the original concept in the 1950s, I believe driverless cars still have quite a ways to go. My main reason is that, it's not truly driverless all driverless cars currently require a human operator to moderate the vehicle. And when people are involved the margin of error increases exponentially, because even when we are controlling the vehicle we switch our attention elsewhere and are easily distracted. I can't even imagine the amount of distraced \"operators\" if they aren't in control for the majority of the trip.\n\nIn addition to Google, other institutions have tried to make driverless cars. One of the more impressive versions was the car from Berkeley, the car was able to read magnets polarity on the road through binary code and could translate them as messages. The problem with this design however, was its cost as it would be extremely expensive to fit roads with magnets of this type. So no smarter roads, then back to cars, in the first pioneering attempt Google fitted a Toyota Prius with position estimating sensors on the several positions of the vehicle. But one of the biggest, if not the largest, blockages for driverless cars is the law iself. Currently, traffic laws do not permit such vehicles in most states, to even test these cars you need to be in California, Nevada, Florida, or the District of Columbia as they are some of the few places in the country where driverless cars are legal to test.\n\nWill we see driverless cars in the near future, that I cannot say. I can however infer if it is possible that Google, one of the most adaptive companies in the world, can make it so. In the present however, these cars are sadly more concept than reality and will probably be so for a very long time. I challenge you the reader, to go out and find your personal stance on these \"driverless\" vehicles, and to inform your colleagues, friends, and family about the coming future of autonomus vehicles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is Venus a worthy persiut? Will it help us learn more about our Earth? The answer to these questions is yes. Venus has some features that are really similar to the ones on Earth. By learning more about Venus we can apply the knowlege to our palnet to further help it. This knowledge can be applied to avoid catastrophes or other bad furtune.\n\nOne way we know exploring Venus is a good idea. Is the fact that Venus is a dead ringer for earth. Their apperance is uncanny just by looking at them. Venus and Earth are really similar plants, they are even nicknamed twins. Earth's size is extremely close to Venus's size. The fact that these planets share a similar size can help infer that they work and sustain themselves similiar. For example, if two people are the same size they probably have similar needs. Their caloric, water, nutrient, and other needs are probably the same. Knowing more about Venus can help the Earth be a healthier place.\n\nAnother reason the exploration of Venus is essential is that Venus used to have the same geological features that earth has now. We know that Venus was once covered by ocean just like Earth. The surface also was evidence of rocky sediments. This can help infer that there used to be valleys, mountains, and even craters. The earth inhabits all of these characteristics as well. What happend to the ones in Venus? The answer is unknown that is why it is crucial to explore Venus so that Earth can avoid the same misfortune as its twin planet.\n\nThe last reason Venus needs to be explored is that by the few times that it was explored. The is evidence of past life. There is a big chance that Venus supported various forms of life. These forms of life are now certainly absent on Venus due to the horrid atmosphere. Why is life absent? The reason is unknown, but Venus has answers. The future of man kind depends on an exploration to Venus. The Earth can not parish, just as Venus did. Scientist need to uncover why Venus is in the condition it is in, so that they can mold Earth's future for the better to substain forms of life.\n\nVenus and Earth share so many characteristics. Knowing all the possible information about Venus can help the Earth avoid the current state of Venus. Their size will help us know the needs of Earth. The change of the geological features in Venus can help humans prepare for change. Finally, Knowing what happend to the forms of life in Venus can help the human race live on. All these factors are crucial for the prosperity of our home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors good story kind happyness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people have a viewpoint that enrolling in a famous University and obtaining a degree is worthful and it will land themself in the finest Multi-National Corporate Companies, whereas some others will be pondering to undertake employment immediately after completing school. I agree with the former point of view and in a forthcoming paragraph, I will elucidate the reasons why an individual should take up employment after graduating.\r\n\r\n On one hand, Education is said to be the passport of the future and an individual, who has passed from a university or from its affiliated college, will not only obtain the dream job offer from one of the finest MNC'S but also can demand the highest salary, perks and incentives. Because most of the companies in this modern era, has certain prerequisites such high qualification from renowned University and required skills, accordingly land talented graduates in their companies and take up more challenging role of managing and developing the business. Moreover, research conducted by the California research institute has emphasised that Corporate companies prefer to hire 60% more individuals who have high qualifications and skills obtained by studying from renowned universities and colleges.\r\n\r\n On other hand, people who prefer to undertake job opportunities after school, always struggles to find dream job opportunities in the corporate world, because they neither qualify for the requirements of qualification and skills set up by these companies nor can perform job duties and responsibilities as expected by their supervisors and manger because of lack of understanding of corporate work. Hence, they end up taking low profile jobs that require low skills, abilities and knowledge, compared to their requirements of corporate companies. Hence, it is obvious that industry requires people, who have high qualifications and knowledge.\r\n\r\n Therefore , I conclude that an individual who prefer to study first in university or college, then choose to work on job opportunities, will be more satisfied with higher job roles prospects in different fields than who prefer to work first after school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The computer could help in the clssroom by telling the teacher how a caertain student is acting or feeling, then the teacher could possbly recognize the face of the student without the computer. The teacher could tell how bad the student is feeling. They could prevent violent actions before the occur.\n\nThese computers can help the teacher learn more about the student and what they do when they are feeling a certain. Like when the student is confused the could use the computer and learn to see what student does when he is confused. If the student is confused again, the teacher could walk over to him/her and ask them if they need help.\n\nThe teacher could use the computer for better use. They could tell when a student is mad, and send them to the counsler to talk about the situation. If you get the mad student to the counsler, then you could help prevent fights and negative activity in schools. I feel like this computer could make schools a lot better and a lot safer.\n\nThis computer could help schools academically and help make it a better/safer place for students. The computer can help the students in so many different ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood author created memoir sad happy wer interested I think memoir good one I liked tital Narciso Rodriguez", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more and more couples have a plan to give birth in their older age than in the previous generations. This happens because of some certain reasons and I believe that this trend brings more drawbacks than benefits.\nThere are some causes that contribute to the decision of having children in old age of parents. The first reason is related to freedom. Bringing up a child would take a large amount of time of married couples, this results in the lack of free time for themselves to do what they like. For example, those who have a hobby of travelling will feel comfortable and carefree when taking trips to their favorite destinations without worrying about taking after of a child. Another reason is that high cost of living. The increase in prices of goods make parents find more difficult to raise a child nowadays than in the past, therefore they want to have an abundant source of finance before giving birth by spending most of their time in their young age to work and having children in their old age. \nOn the one hand, having children late will affect negatively to mothers’ health and babies’ as well. Giving birth at an old age results in disorders and innate malformations in newborn babies and even take mothers’ life. Another disadvantage is the negative effect to the economic development. This is because the growth of old population leads to the shortage of young labor workforce. Thus, the economy has to rely on mainly older workers, from that economic performance and productivity are low. On the other hand, delivering a baby in the old age also bring advantages. Parents have more time to work and earn money in their young age, hence they can secure a better life for their children in the future. For instant, my aunt spent most of her young time to run her own company and decided to have a child at her 35. Now, she had a lucrative income from the operation of her company and her daughter is sent to one of the prestigious international school in HN. \nIn conclusion, there are various factors leading to have babies in the old age of couples. I argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Electoral college is a good way to vote for the president or vice president because i think without the Electoral college, we wouldn't have anyone to vote for the president or vice president. We have each candidate running for president in our state and it has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by the candidate political party.\n\nI agree that most state have a winner take all system because it awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. The 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College.\n\nThe word state refers to the District of Columbia. The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. We help choose our state's electors when we vote for president because when we vote for our candidate we are actually voting for our candidate electors.\n\nI think the best laid defenses of the system are wrong because some voters might sometime vote for the wrong candidate and they might sometime get confused about the electors. After Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college, he won the popular vote but lost the presidency. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. The disaster factor is the single best argument against the electoral college. I agree that most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state. Candidate don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the swing states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidate at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina,and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad. I agree that the it's official that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best agruments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. The agruments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right. Abolish the electoral college.\n\nI think the five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President was for its lack of democratic. The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. I disagree the advocates of this postition are correct in arguing that the Electoral college method is ot democratic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When we vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors because we're not actually voting for the president, we're just voting for the slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed. However it it entirely possibe that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections inn which no candidate receives a majority of the vote cast. I agree that they made the five reasons for retaining the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I strongly believe that we have found something on mars and that it is just a natural landform. Their are many ways people can take this matter but since I am a scientist at NASA I can tell you what really happened. People may or may not believe me but I know what happened and I hope that you can listen to what I have to say. Aliens in my opinion are not real and I strongly think that they only way that a face would be on Mars is by a rock formation that happened.\n\nWhen we looked at the pictures that they found of the rock formation there we saw a head,nose,and a mouth but ther were also formed by shadows. Then came Mars Blobal Surveyor and helped out and got more pictures from the rock. They got pictures that were ten times sharper then the orginal pictures. After all they concluded that there was no alienen moument at all and that is was made out of rock.\n\nThe people thought that it was a alien moument and got frustrated and that we were wrong. Of course there had been things about it on tv shows and radio talked and maybe even in grocery stores. You might think that we wnated to hide from what we saw because it wasn't what we would have hoped for. The truth is that we didn't want to make up something that wasn't real because then everybody would believe that and then it would be also bad for NASA. NASA goes into outer space and we find stuff that we haven't known about and that interests us and makes us what to go out there more.\n\nWhen people then make up things about hiding it they only think about what people around them that are saying. They don't go up to space and they don't see what we see in space. Even if there were life we would share that but lieing to people about life in Mars is not right. It's not fair for people to think that their is life just because we saw a face. We even had help from other people to help us. They helped us with the pictures and with those pictures we could also tell there wasn't life.\n\nI concluede that what we have found is real and that there was only a rock foundation. We don't want people believeing that wrong thing and for NASA then that also would be bad because then we couldn't discover all new things that we found to everyone. I hope that I have convinced you why there wasn't an alien monument but just a rock formation from Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses paragraph works perfectly end Wit saeng tell snow gone take test If one read lives says She really likes hibiscus hibiscus goes back life spring new energy take test From experience hibiscus see plant really influent Because plant reminds much old home Also see everything everybody get second chance In case test wants take Also spring lives couple month adjust new situation At moment homesick even home So hibiscus good think hold onto old home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers are something of the present, and man-kind is hoping for more efficient computers in the future. More and more lately students are being assigned a computer of their own supplied by the school. Sometimes these computers are used for bad but mostly good. The Facial Action Coding System could be helpful for furthering academics in school corporations and could be used to help state testing which has just recently been switched to online.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is something that school should invest in. It should not become something that everyone needs to have because some schools cannot even afford books! For the schools that can afford this program it could be made beneficial many different ways. For example, many students become tired using their computers, so if the computer reads the child is becoming tired it could offer an academic game or a brain teaser to make the child more lively. The article states, \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr Huang predicts.' Then is could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" This program can also read happiness and sadness. Some students suffer from depression and have thoughts of suicide. This program could notify the teacher or counselor if the student is continuously sad or angry. This could help prevent things such as school shootings, self mutilation, or even suicide.\n\nSome people may argue this program is taking away from a teachers job or is could be used for the wrong things. Technology has taken the load off of teachers in the last ten years, but it has also caused some harm. With technology comes the problems of students not having their computers charged, money shortages, and things breaking. Those things have distracted from students learning. In the big picture, do the pros outweigh the cons?\n\nIn the overall outlook on furthering a student's computer's capability using this program is the better option. Everything comes with problems. It does add something more to a teachers plate, but it also helps a teacher make a connection with the student. The Facial Action Coding system is beneficial and should be considered by school corporations around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beileve the tecnology of \"Driverless\" cars is necessary in todays society, and should be used for its worth. One of the few big ideas i saw in the article was the newer use of sensors in the vehicles we use today. Many of the sensors today are used to warn and stop the driver from any collisions or accidents that may accure, at any moment. I beileve that this technology is needed now more than ever for everyone, and not just unexperienced or handicaped drivers. I am currently still learning how to drive and will get my license very, and i am very cautious of my peers driving too. I would feel more comfortable that the car could stop itself wiith out the drivers noticing, and possibly stoping to stop a collision or save my very own life. I would very much like to see this technology come to fruition, and let the world harness it's abilities to further mankind towards a safer and better future.\n\nThe laws aginst the use of these \"Driverless\" cars are very reasonable too, and need to adjust for further research towards the safety of the people they aim to protect with these laws. I beileve they dont realize that testing and researching these new methods is a step foward, for safety, and not for just the sake of testing variables on somethings. They don't seem to understand that these technologies are being invented to help save people today. If you searched on the internet for just one second you could find all sorts of stories, about their own cars saving the drivers from creating a terrible mistake and saving their lives. These laws make me question us, as a society, more than ever, and as a society how are we allowed to grow in knowledge and sciences, if we cannot test our ideas? We must further sucome to the new technologies we have available, at this time, but we must not lose ourselves in context. We have to push towards breaking these laws aginst testing and accept the new technology, for the future.\n\nAs a child i watched cartoons with flying cars and cities in space, and in todays age we have the ability to strive for this dream of the future. One day I hope to be sitting in a cab that s driving itself perfectly fine and not releasing large amounts of toxins into the air that we all breath, to survive. This is yet another thing to admire of these \"driverless\" cars, and that is the ability to use much less amounts of fuel, rather than traditional vehicles. As you may already know cars pushout lots of burned fossil fuels, but with the new technology that has been presented, these cars can use less fossil fuels. The burning of less fossil fuels is a \"thumbs up\", and has a lesser impact on the world, rather than a world without them.\n\nI gladly accept the new technologies that \"Driverless\" cars have presented to me today, and feel safer knowing a computer system can save me from human errors. I can guarentee that this technology is safe and efficient for the world, and should be further studied to further the new technology to more suit society. The further interest or study in new sensor technology is to thank, just as much as the fuel concerns we have today with our own vehicles. The technology of the future is here, and we need it to help save the lives of many people. We as the society of the future should not stand back and watch the possibilities of our future be restricted by laws, that just dont understand the purpose of this technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There could be many conclusion. We have never seen edvidence of alien. We only know what we study and found. We are trying to find what the creature or object is. In my observation it does look like a face, or an mask. As you can see through the years we have gotten better picture of the object. We have been doing this project for twenty five year.\n\nWe have tried the best techonlogy to finding the object. We have hired many scientist to study the face. Somepeople spent their whole life time on this. But for years we have seen alien on television, and they were ugly creature. But this isn't the face of an alien. This is an face of an human. Unless you are saying that alien came to earth and decide to take somebody, and they did. That mean we would have to look through every missing flies case from when 0-1976.\n\nNow of course we don't know how long the face, mask, or object have been up their. But when we are able to go to Mars we will be able to get the closets look, that we can get and find that out. Their is no telling if this was the work of an alien or just material in space stacking up. And it end up looking like a face. Maybe it just a bump on the moon. But the real question is if their are aliens out there in the Univese why wouldn't they show their face?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph plant seems remind homeland calms budding feels stronger In story Saeng kind outsider sees plant sees part past back home In story says gets shaky tries say at home When says and hibiscus budding I think really saying ready accept country home flower reminder homeland At end story says see getting used geese flying V getting used country ready take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I strongly believe computers big benefit society days There much learn computer And lot fun learn computer book For intinst let s say student report could nt get hands book All student would type words internet hundreds websites pop topic wants learn Another reason computer benefits society ways keep contact family friends live far away Like instints I live far friends And I could talk outside school computer We would able talk chat room game The goes Family Lets say childre go vacation wants keep touch All would type much want click send computer instintly But write letter mail would take maybe week two reach child way around But many cool things computer There bunch games play videos watch You make music make money My favorite would computer programs Flash macromedia best though You get make animation clips even movie Computers really fun play computer many advanrages today society Which m thank full computers great stuff That I believe computers benefit society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many car manufacturers develop skills of their particular vehicle to become driverless. Yet, I doubt they realize the dangers of these driverless cars because their minds are filled with dollar signs. Considering all of the details provided in the passage, I would go against driverless cars being created. People have waited more than several years for this idea to come to life, but is it really a great one to occur? When you take in all of the pints made these vehicles could become a hazard to human kind statistically increasing the amount of reason for car accidents.\n\nWhen you first think about a driverless car, it's relieving because you wont have to do any of the driving but sitting and relaxing. That is until you hear the concept of these cars. The vehicle remains driverless in only mediocre traffic but when it's difficult for the car to retaliate the road ahead it depends on the driver. This can result in the reason more car accidents occur because the warning for the driver to take charge could cease working. The driver will be distracted unaware of the responsibility he needs to handle and could possibly crash into another car. The passage states, \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault---the driver or the manufacturer?\" Technology has already taken over young individuals mind and is the reason less kids are inviolving themselves in extra-currricular activities. Driverless cars should not be made or else they shall take the common sense and driving skills out of adults' minds.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly disagree with the creation of driverless cars. It may become a higher factor of car accidents than under the influence driving. Driverless cars may hurt the company who made it and the one who bought it. The question will remain standing because there will be no right or wrong. No one will get justice and this is why driverless vehicles should not be manufactured.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel like this new method of technology can be very helpful in classrooms. Apart of me disagrees that it is. I feel like this method of technology, can be helpful, but it also is an evasion of privacy. It's cool and all to know that your computer can detect if your happy or not, but it's also creepy to know that your being watched. Someone has to be able to know how your feeling. The teachers can use this in classrooms and I feel like it would be affective. Therefore when class is dismissed and there is no reason to use it, who knows what the computers or watchers can do with this material. It can go both ways, it can be helpful and affective in classrooms, but who knows what can happen after that. If the teacher is in the classroom with them, there should be no need for the program to be in school, but if its a diffrent type of enviroment and the teacher can always be there, I feel like this program would work perfect. If the teacher gets notified when the student is dazzing off, or playing around, it can really help the students to be more attentive in class. That being said I think it is all just a matter of the enviroment and the influence in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being Patient Being patient s good bad I good things happen I I patient Here good things happen A time I patient I tryed dance team dance studio I nuervie l never tryed anything befor I wait wait wait dance studio call mom One day I friend house mom called said CAPS made dance team I happy I could nt wait learn new dance Then I could saw everyone dance compitions It much fun Another time I patient broke arm I relly patient I careful arm I cast I waited get Now I cast I patient doctor said healing I nt need cast If patien better things come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watchings TV affects children, it is hard to determine it is whether the length of watching time or the content of programs has more effects on youngsters. Although I believe that the time spent watching TV has negative impacts on young people, I think the content of programs has more marked influences on them.\nOn one hand, the consequences of watching TV for a long period of time are deleterious. First, The more children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to them. They might become more overeliant on TV for entertainment, which results in a sedentary lifestyle. Thefore, they are likely to have health risks, such as heart attack and diobety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Waking up early on a Monday morning is already horrible, but the traffic is worse. Imagine a car that could drive for you, while you can relax. Sounds great, only your self driving car doesn't drive through traffic, roadwork, or accidents. Throughout the last decade many car companies have developed prototypes of \"driverless\" cars, though none are really driverless, in some states they are illegal to drive, and have many safety concerns, developing this car would make humans lazier than we already are. This \"driverless\" car would cause more harm than good, by creating this car we are inabling humans.\n\nThese cars are still developing, to respond to the varying safety regulations that need to be made for this model. Foremost they want to adress the saftety aspects of when the car needs the human to take over. Although this car is said \"driverless\" in certain situations such as, when pulling in or out of driveways, responding to traffic issues, driving through roadwork, and accidents. This feature of the car puts many people off. When they hear a driverless car they expet a car where their presence is not needed to steer through traffic. Though the car has many sensors to navigate through traffic, it is still necessary for the human to drive through obsticals. The sensors being used are suppose to mimic a human's driving skills, then why can it not navigate through traffic, without the use of a human?\n\nTo many these cars may still seem as a good investment, but what about the government? Driving laws are written for the mindset of a human. \"As a result, in most states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars.\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming) States such as, California and Flordia have allowed limited use of 'semi-autonomus' cars. Once the safety of the cars is superb it is expected that more states will follow their lead. Also, the question of, whose fault is it for an accident? For cars that include the help of a human to navigate through some situations, it could be blamed on the human. Yet, for cars that are the sole drivers, and do not require a humans assistance, accidents could be blamed on the manufacturer. This could create many law suits and conflicts between automobile companies that produce these cars and the owners.\n\nWaking up to drive in traffic may be annoying, but it is safer than trusting a \"driverless\" car. With the safety problems yet to be fixed, laws prohibiting the usage, and the need for humans to still pay attention, it makes for the driverless car to be undesirable to most. These cars may improve in the future but, I am still against their production.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the participation of teenagers in competitive sports is a topic that sparks intense debate. While some argue that these sports have a negative impact on education, others believe that the effects are overwhelmingly positive. In my view, the advantages of competitive sports outweigh any potential drawbacks.\r\n\r\nCritics claim that highly competitive sports can have detrimental effects on teenagers. They argue that the pursuit of victory at all costs may compromise their physical well-being, leading to serious injuries. For instance, my own sister broke her leg during a basketball game as she disregarded safety precautions in her fervour to win. Moreover, opponents of competitive sports highlight the psychological toll it can take on young individuals. Adolescents, still developing emotional control, may experience profound despair in the face of defeat, which could potentially lead to depression. I vividly recall considering quitting football after my school team lost in a championship, but with the guidance of my parents, I learned to persevere.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, I firmly support the notion that competitive sports have significant benefits for teenagers. The desire to excel and prove oneself can positively impact their self-esteem. The satisfaction derived from achieving success in a championship or winning a highly anticipated game instils a belief in one's own abilities. Furthermore, participating in competitive sports nurtures valuable cooperative skills, vital in today's interconnected world. In my school years, I honed my ability to collaborate through the creation and discussion of performance strategies with my team. This skill has remained invaluable throughout my life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although competitive sports may carry the risk of physical and mental health issues, their potential positive impact cannot be ignored. By ensuring safety measures are in place, individuals can develop a strong sense of self-worth and enhance their cooperative abilities. It is imperative that we recognize the overall value of competitive sports in the education and personal growth of teenagers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee.\nIn essence, a honey bee's life cycle takes roughly seven weeks. Regarding to the diagram, is composed of only 6 diferent images, even thought, it describes with detail all different stages of a bees life cycle: from its birth until it reaches maturity.\nBeginning with the cycle, it starts when the bee larvae rests inside and egg, which will probably be attached to a wall inside the honneycomb. 10 days later, eggs will hatch and a baby bee will sprang out. Within the next 21 days, the bee will grow in size. It is remarkable the fact that nymphs moult 3 times as they grow. After a month of growth, the bee will become a young adult. Finally, bees are consider mature, four days after they reach adulthood. As for reproduction, female bees lay 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "LIMITING CAR USAGE\n\nCar Usage is more in U.S. because of transports,jobs,moving from one place to other,etc. We should use the cars but carefully because it can occur an accidents. We should reduce the use of car. Nowadays there are so many collisions occurs on highway roads in U.S.If we reduce the use of cars than we can save a lot of money and reduce the pollution. Reduce in cars usage can save money and reduce pollution.\n\nThere are Multiple resources to support the idea to reduce the cars use and to save money. For Example,\n\n\"\n\nIn German suburb,Life goes on without cars\n\n\"\n\n,by\n\nElisabeth\n\nRosenthal ,From the\n\nNew York Times ,It examines that,\"70 percent of vauban's Families in Germany do not own the cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move here\".\n\nHeidrun Walter said that,\"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". A media trainer and mother of two,as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor. Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\". Car Ownership was allowed,but there are only two places to park-Large garages at the edge of the development,where a car-owner buys a space,for\n\n$40,000 ,along with a home.\n\nIn\n\n\"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\"\n\n,by\n\nAndrew selsky ,It states that In BOGOTA,Colombia,\"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day without cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines\". It also examines that the turnout was large,despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on bogota.\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\"said businessman\n\nCarlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. The without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in bogota in the mid-1990s.\n\nIn\n\n\"Paris bans driving due to smog\"\n\n,by\n\nRobert Duffer ,examines that,\"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\". On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro($31).the same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Diesel fuel was blamed,since France has...[a]tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in france,compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe,according to reuters. Paris typically has more smog than othe european capitals. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nIn conclusion,Reduced of car usage can save money and reduce pollution. Limiting of car usage is great idea. The resources above tells about how was the life of other countries without car. The Resouces above have proved that reduce in car use can save a lot things for life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that people of the youngest generation should spend their free time working in charities as this would be beneficial to both them as well as the communities. I strongly agree with this notion, this essay will discuss how voluntary work helps a teenager to gain experience and it helps them to see themselves as valuable contributor to society. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, working in a community organization will help young individuals to learn new things apart from education. Also, education does not teach how to deal with real-life problems as it can be learned only through experience. Furthermore, working in the real world quickly teaches them certain skills which in future can be used in their resumes. To illustrate, when an individual works for a community they handle a lot of pressure which teaches them how to handle stress and t manage time.\r\n\r\nperhaps even more importantly, when enlistment volunteer themselves to help the community they realise that their actions have a positive impact on the world around them, which helps them grow as a person. Often, the problems in the public seem overwhelming but if students are given a chance to make at least a small change by helping or serving others it will make them responsible whilst contributing to the nation. For example, a survey has found that serving unpaid organizations has helped the nation to increase the literacy rate as people are aware of the roles and responsibilities at a young age itself. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I totally agree that students should work for unpaid communities not only for the betterment of the world but also, for their personal development. because I believe only working students can improve their skills while significantly creating a positive impact on humanity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the newly created software for detecting human emotions could be a good idea but also a bad one. for example take you are a young student learning in class, what would happen if you became distraught or confused? would your face pop up on the bord? or would it just send a message to the teacher saying you need help. this new type of tecnology somewhat exist in every day life but it can not tell you your emotion, just the diffrance of you over someone else.\n\nWhat would happen if someone got ahold of this tecnology and made it look like a countrys leader was lieing and he is given the death penelty for his actions for witch he didnt even do. But what if it also help take down wanted terriorist? that would help out the world quite a bit. My oppion is that this is not the best idea for the public to have. schools and police stations and such yes but i do not think that is is something you just let anyone have right now because it is cool.\n\nThe fact is that this software could cause allot of harm and that doing so could resault in the long overdo war that we know will start and just hasent.the world may fall into caous and many people may die all do to this computer system that tell if you are happy,sad,mad, if it reads your face wrong and says you dont agree with something it could lead to major consiquenses. Not in america but in the countries that want to fight.And we do not need anymore wars or battels in time.\n\nBut what if it could stop people from dieing to suicide? thats always a plus and then the world whould be happyer then it currently is.But that is an if you can fake happy it cant read your brain and its not worth the money if its not 100% accurate. Why waste the time on something like that when you could go and create a type of everyday household item that would keep you safe in a natral desaster. Or a penciel that never runs out of led and saves trees so we always have air to breath. These are all major what ifs and they all have their own outcomes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The latest technology always amazes me. At University's Professors are creating technology that can identify your emotions by reading your face through a screen. Sounds crazy and a little doubtful at first but this new invention could be someting unique.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe and his colleuages are creating new ways for humans and computers to communicate. They started off by trying this new devolpment on Leonardo da Vinci's painting \"Mona Lisa.\" What they gathered from this experiment is the emotions in the face from the painting. When you think about it facial expressions can really show how you're feeling on the inside.\n\nThis technology would be very valuable in a classroom. In school a good percentage of students have a hard time latching on to what they're learning or really understanding the material that's being taught. While going through their lessons on the computer the computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or losing intrest. With that information the lessons can be motified to help the students keep the concentration and understand the lessons that's being taught. While using this technology, the computer can keep data on the students and record the students growth throughout the classes.\n\nStudents can struggle with school and paying attention but the use of this technology could really make a change. The professors should start out small with this invention and record the results in classrooms to figure out if there's any adjustments they can do to improve. This could really be benficial in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot can come from driverless cars. They are what people decades ago would have never thought to be so close. Before the 2000s it seemed to be a crazy new invention in things like cartoons and TV shows, but what would happen if this really came true?\n\nDriverless cars should not be used at all. Thousands or maybe even millions of people work with cars as a hobby, job, or an actual career. If this 'driverless car' actually became real, how are all these people suppose to work? It would not just take a few jobs, it would take thousands of jobs all across the United States. People that test drive cars, deliver products, and truck drivers; all of their jobs will be taken. What about certain situations such as icey or slippery roads or even harsh conditions. Technology fails all the time, actually a lot more then you think. Technology is a great thing, but its to much to invest for mistakes and malfunctions to happen so easily, definetley in the cars business.\n\nMany people all across the world are fascinated with cars and just love driving cars. If driverless cars were real then a lot of people would lose money and something they have been fascinated there whole life with. What would happen with huge franchises such as NASCAR? They would be nearly forced to shut down or the business, the money, and the fascination would dimenish. Thousands of people every year come to watch those cars race. Could even be a tradition in some peoples family to watch and go to those races. Car shows would also be a huge thing that would be forced to shut down. Car shows are huge and all across America. A lot of people that work there would also be out of a job.\n\nPeople might argue with: Driverless cars can cause less accidents and reach a destination easier and faster. Well it is true, but what about all the things that can happen? If you depend on sometihng so much to get you to your destination, what happens if it fails on you? What if a solar storms from the sun hit Earth and cause technology to malfunction all across the world as it has happend before? A lot of these questions come to play when your thinking about making driverless cars.\n\nBefore the 2000s it seemed to be a crazy new invention in things like cartoons and TV shows, but what would happen if this really came true? To me the question is no, it should not come true at all. Even though there are many pros when dealing with driverless cars, there are also as many cons which plays a big role.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time I patient I first foot ball game I wanted get I wait I waited hour get The team tied still winning The coach injured player put I ran fast I tackled guy ball tumlied I ran touchdown If I would nt patient I would nt game cause coach would nt put ind time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, choosing the right school for children is gaining popularity in ambiguous parts of the society. With the autonomy of choosing mixed-gender or single-gender classrooms, the parents are debating their choices. However, some feel that the children attending single-sexed schools may suffer in the future years of their life. In this essay, I will explain how single-sex institutions can affect the after journey of students.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, this can drastically change their confidence level to communication. Although, the pupil in the learning institutions are taught how to talk with manners but socialising with someone of the opposite sex can bring a little hesitation leading to not been able to present their ideas well. For instance, a girl studying in \"only girls\" college may find it hard to make guy friends \r\n\r\n. Therefore, children from thay schooling might not be very comfortable to socialise in the unisex environment.\r\n\r\nSecondly, this might affect some individuals thinking process. Most people from the single-sex schools might find it hard to form a relationship with other genders as they might consider it a wrong thing. For example, in countries like India, especially during the old times, girls who had friends from opposite genders were judged as a bad person. Hence, in the same gender schools the thinking process continues to be like the old times.\r\n\r\nTo wrap up, I strongly agree education can work wonders to groom a human being boy having the right atmosphere and multi-gender environment around can prepare the individual in every situation. Therefore, co-educational learning system should be considered by adults while preparing the child's future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses have a huge role they pray in the community such that apart from making profit,they also have public responsibility.In my opinion, i full agree with the statement that business has to attend to social needs in the community and paying of taxes which support the government in building the society.\r\n\r\nFirstly,projects are part-and-parcel of community activity as they help in discovering talents through involvement of games and show solidarity with the member of the society,Moreover this a way of building confidentiality with the society and strengthening security of the business where they also utilize that opportunity to advertise for their products which increase their sales .For example,Kenyatta University host largest Africa games in the year 2022.Therefore,businesses are such an imperative projects in the community because society look up into them for growth apart from making money.\r\n\r\nSecondly,businesses pay taxes hence making profit is indispensable as the government has a policy for entrepreneurs that they have a cut that is submitted to the government.Moreover,this collected taxes facilitate in bulding the society.For example,infrastructure and water projects has currently been implemented in the villages through member of parliament.Therefore,institutions must make profit because they have a role to meet the need of the society and for the purposes of the growth of the projects itself and survival.\r\n\r\nTo sum up,corporation has a duty towards the society not only making money but also helping members of the society discover talents through social activities.Notwithstanding, they support the government through collected tax from entrepreneurs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenege of Exploring Venus\", the author belives that studying Venus can provide insight on the planet and also provide new discoveries. The author uses the idea that humans can't help but explore against the reader to prove that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nIf Mars fails to host the human race, we might still have a chance, and that chance is called the \"Evening Star\" also known as Venus. The authors main point of the passage all revolves around the idea that we will explore Venus someday, or maybe even live there. In the passage it states \" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (4). The author isn't saying we should study Venus for fun, he's saying that people will start studying it eventually. In the passage it also states, \"Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" (5). Venus might one day be our last hope which is the reason why the author is trying to convey people to start studying it.\n\nAll in all, human courisity as said by the author will lead us everywhere. Venus though, will bring people insight on the planet and new discoveries despite the dangers, and the author supports that idea very well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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