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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author makes a good reason why people should study venus is by talking about the certain type of things there is at venus. Also by explaining how it could help others to have a good idea traits, it's also good because of how the author says challenge so others can see it like if it was impossible and try it for themselves. It'll be hard but it won't be impossible for venus to explored even more. Also could be the next thing that we could do experiments on and find out ways to use the planet.\n\nThe author makes a good idea that venus is worthy to study because he talks about the comparisons of earth and venus which makes it curious for people to find out what are the comparisons and also could find out the differences too. according to the text it says \" Today, Venus still has some features that are analogoues to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This explains that there is things from earth that are relatable to venus, and people could research how they're familiar and how they're different from earth. It's important to know because you'll see what venus has and you'll just learn more from what it is from earth.\n\nAnother way the author makes a good idea that venus is worthy to study is because it helps others to have a good idea about venus and traits about itand the challenges. The author makes a good point about how if we did go to search vernus it'll be difficult but it'll be worthy for you to know. An example the author states is \" At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. \" this means that if you were to examine venus, you'll be at a challenge with climate while doing research and exploring. Another example is \" Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This means that it'll be difficult to be able to go out and to see what's the matetrial and objects in venus is like.\n\nThe Author helps the people that want to see how venus is and could help them and do research on it so it could be a good exploration to do since it really hasn't been seerched on and why not do it now? Some people could be curious and might want to know how it is in planets other than earth and learn something new from it. That's why venus should be explored by people that give informationa bout space and planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced One greatest safety As stated paragraph dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flamable Also another issue purposed paragraph nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered back ship would swivel around morning mass Yet another obstacle reason dirigibles could nt dock Empire State Building paragraph existing law airships flying low urban areas These obstacles made nearly impossible Empire State Building serve s original purpose", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ding, went the door bell to the bank. When the man in the black and gray tuxido came to the bank asking for Luke Bromberger. Luke came out wondering who the man was. But when the man walked in to the bank it was just his friend asking him\n\nif he wanted to knoqw if Luke wanted to go on a Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nLuke really couldn't resist going on a cattle boat. Luke knew that it was a opportunity of a lifetime. It was 1945 the World War II was over in Europe. There was many countries that were left in ruines for\n\nthe war. Luke had to help these countries recover all of there food supplies, animals, and more. 44 nations grew together to form UNRRA (which means the United Nations Relief and rehabilitation Administration) group. The UNRRA hired the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas. Luke and his friend Don signed up.\n\nIn August 1945 Luke and Don recieved their orders to report to New Orleans. Luke says that \"we arrived August 14, the day the Pacific war ended.\" Luke and Don got their seamans papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, and they headed for Greece. They had a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats for the horses to feed them. Luke had tured 18 before ariving to Greece which meant that Luke could get drafted for military service. \"When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\" By the time Luke was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\n\"The cattle trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy\" Luke says. \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.But seeing Acroplis in Greece was specia,\" Luke also says.\"So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\"\n\nLuke also toured an exavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.It took about two to cross the Alantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Caring for the animals durnung the crossings kept Luke busy.\n\nThey had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to pulled up from the lower hold of the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out his aunt Katie's farom as a boy has prepared Luke for hard work, but not for the dangers at sea. On his second trip, Luke served as aNit watchman. His job was to check on all the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making Luke's hourly report to the captain. Then BAM!\n\nsliped down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke;s heart going one hundred miles an hour as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A tiny strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide. The tiny strip if metal was keeping him from flying overboard into the dark mysterous Atlantic ocean.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everday, wether we are in a classroom, at our house, or out in public, we are constantly decoding the emotions around us. For example, when your friend walks up to you with a stern face and squinted eyes, you will most likley assume that he or she is angry with you. Recognizing facial expressions is something we as human beings have done for the past thousands of years, sometimes involuntary. With that being said, we do not need a computer software to tell us everything we already know, a frown means you are upset, a stern face means you are mad, a lopsided eyebrow means you are confused, and a smile means you are happy. Creating a new computer software system capable of recognizing different compoenets to a persons emotion is useless, a waste of money, and completey unessary for students and teachers in a classroom.\n\nBeing able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions, may sound like an awesome idea. However, this program is 100% useless. A system that can decode a humans emotion is udderly pointless, for no one needs to know the exact compostion of a human face and their emotions. As stated in the article, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\"every day.\" I mean just think about it, what would you do if you knew the exact percent of happiness in someone, or maybe the percent of saddness? Exaclty, you would do nothing. That information is useless and a waste of time and money. We don't need a machine to exemplify the percise decimal of happiness, sadness, or confusin in any one person.\n\nWhenever you buy a new computer, a new software, or even basic technolgy needs, the prices are always far above then what you predicted. That same concept includes this new software called FACS (Facial Action Coding System). This devloped and intelligent program will cost a pretty penny, without a doubt, for both the producer and the consumer. Not only will you need to forfit you money for this program, but most at home computers are uncapable to withold the magnitude of this program. The article states, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" Spending money, time, and effort on a skill humans have already learned is pointless and fruitless. The development of the technolgy industry has allowed for billions of dollars to be consempated, allowing for the goverment to go in debt, among other things as well. Introducing this program to the population will allow for money that has been worked hard for, be thrown down the drain.\n\nIncorporating this new software program into classrooms around the globe is unessary for the development of students minds. Being able to detect specific emotions in a school setting is useless and a waste of time and money. Teachers are going to college, getting a degree, and expandign their teaching limits in order to be able to correctly investigate and discover the emotions of their students. As a teacher, that is their job. Introducing this technolgy into classrooms will not be beneficial, for knowing exaclty the percent compostion of one persons emotion is pointless, useless, and a frutile attempt to expanding the technology industry.\n\nFACS is a new, intelligent, developed software system that allows for the emotions of any one person be decomposed into specific percent numerals. This evolving program incorporates new and imporoved technolgy functions into a redily avalible software. However, introducing this program to the world with cause nothing but useless and pointless results. Creating a new computer software system capable of recognizing different compoenets to a persons emotion is useless, a waste of money, and completey unessary for students and teachers in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this use of technology would be very useful in the present and in the future. I personally would like to know a how a person truelly feels. It would be very interesting and if it were to ever come into fruition I might even use it on myself someday.\n\nOne reason it might be a good idea to have one is exactly what the author said in paragraph eight you could use it to spot wether a polition or actor is telling the truth. It would be especially usefull for us when we are listening to politicians because we can see if they are making actual truthfull promises.\n\nIf this technology was used to detect the students emotions that would be great because teachers would be able to better understand them. If the teachers know whether the student are happy, mad or sad the teachers then have a chance to act accordingly. As a side affect I feel like having that technology help the teachers understand the students will better the students grades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a common belief that money should be invested in establishing new public amenities instead of remodelling the current ones. From my perspective, I agree with the statement as creating up-to-date structures can attain the citizens’ necessities and safety. \n\nTo begin with, redecorating the existing public facilities has some advantages. First, it is cost-effective. The infrastructure is already in place, reducing the need for extensive groundwork and site development. Besides, renovation costs are typically lower than building costs, making it a more budget-friendly option for governments and institutions. Second, refurbishing these structures allows for the preservation of their unique architectural features and historical value. This helps maintain the cultural heritage of a community and can contribute to its identity and sense of pride.\n\nOn the other hand, I believe that renovating new public buildings is more important. One reason is that these newly constructed buildings meet the demands of individuals. With the fast-changing development of the world, businesses and citizens may need modern and functional designs that are fully equipped with technological facilities, and old buildings may no longer satisfy these needs. For example, many assembly buildings are established, including cinemas, theatres, and town halls, to fulfil the needs of amusement, recreation, and social purposes. Another radical reason is that it guarantees safety and compliance. New buildings are created to comply with current safety codes and regulations. This ensures that the structure meets the necessary standards for structural integrity, fire safety, accessibility, and other crucial aspects. \n\nTo conclude, I restate that constructing new public buildings has more advantages than renovating the current ones as it can fulfil the citizens' requirements and ensure security.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying the planet Venus is not the easiest task. The planet has very high surface temperature. They can be as high as eight hundred degrees fahrenheit. The planet also has high atmospheric temperatures. Along with these high temperatures, the planet has volcanoes and earthquakes.\n\nScientists have sent probes to Venus but lightning strikes them and can destroy them. Even though these have been destroyed, that does not men that we should stop sending them. Humans are filled with so much curiosity so we are not giving up yet. NASA has an idea that can allow scientists to hover the fray.\n\nthis woukld aloow us to explore the plaet and learn more about it while not losing equipment or human lives.\n\nNASA'si dea is amazing, however there are some complications that are currently stoping them from pursuing this. Scientists would not have the clearest view of the planet from a safe distance. This woud make photographing the planet difficult. They also would be unable to take samles of the rock and other substances of the planets surface.\n\nWe should not let this get us down though. THese are onky chalanges that our very intelligent scientists will one day be able to overcome. There is so much that we do not know about this planet that is in our solar system. It is evident that our scientists reserch and invent technologies that will someday help us to view this planet and other planets as well. We shall not let fear and dangers get in the way or marvelous discoveries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the program because,you can experience adventures,and visit many unique places. Also you should join the group because, you can save many lives. You should join the program because,you can have fun, save animals,and more. And I think you should because,you can be a leader,and a really special person to many people. Also it can teach you to be brave and believe in yourself. One more thing,it can be a lot of work,but it is worth it.\n\nTo support the reasons why you should join I will give you some examples from the passage. In the passage it says,It was 1995,World war ll was over in Europe, and may countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies,animals,and more,44 nations joined together to form UNRRA,that helpes to support the claim you can save many lives.\n\nAlso in the passage it says,\"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China, and that helps to support the claim that you can experience adventures and visit many unique places.\n\nIn the passage it says,It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the Unites States and a month to get to china. Caring for the animals during the crossing kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holdsof the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. This helps to support the claim that,it can be a lot of work, but it is worth it.\n\nSo if you are thinking about joining good,and I thank you. If you are not interested it is okay. Some people might have their own opinion about things. Some may think that is cool,I want to join the group. And others may think that is not the right job for them,or it seems boring. But whatever you are thinking about doing just do it .And that was my introduction to my essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college! Well i think otherwise. Electoral College is a process, not a place , which the election of the President is by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College do consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.\n\nThe start of the Electoral College is well handingly choosing the electors, which consists of 538 electors each of course must be qualified. Most of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. The number of members in its Congressional delegation is equal to the entitled allotment of electors in your state, one is for each member in the house of Representatives plus two for the Senators. For the purposes of Electoral College, Columbia District is allowed 3 electors and is treat like a state. and when i say \"state\" for this topic i mean the District of Columbia.\n\nWell backed up reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president, A outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, just look back at the year 2000 it was less likely then a come over the popular vote the Reason for that is the winning candidate's share of the Electioral College expanded his share of the popular vote. For example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\n\"Electoral College is a process, not a place \" each and every step of the Electoral college method comes out to be a well handed system. Its more then enough fairness included when choosing the Presisent and Vice President. Popular vote is more based on \"winner-take-all\" System thats awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate, unlike the Electoral College which is a process that consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I had no idea that my life would soon chsnge after high school graduation. I was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank. Until one day, my friend, Don Reist, told me to come with him to Europe. When we were in Europe I found my dream job. Here's what I did.\n\nIf you love adventure and fun, than you would love to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A Seagoing Cowboy is a person who helps and takes care of animals on ships that are being transported. As a Seagoing Cowboy, you see stuff that byou will never forget. If you are thinking \"What if we have no fun.\", you are totally wrong. You play sports, you read and your crew mates will become best friends with you.\n\nIf you also like animals, as a Seagog Cowboy, you really spend most of your time with the animals on the ship. I, Luke Bomberger, has been a Seagoing Coboy for the longest time. I have enjoed every second of it. Eveyone is super nice to me. This job changed my entire life.\n\nAs a Seagoing Cowboy, was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up another world for me. I have been more aware of my surrondings. And that awareness has stayed with me, leading my family to host a number of international students and exchange vistors for many many years. I hope that one day, you will follow our dreams like I did.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created auther memoir showing feeling came towards things In article says Growing environment instilled great sence family nothing blood relative Also family always happy In text said My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family Last least experiencing new life even left everything behind In article said Many immigrants give children better life even meant leaving everything loved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. I believe driverless cars should not be developed. There are more negative aspects than positive aspects when it comes to driverless cars, in my opinion. There are many reasons why I think that driverless cars should not be produced. Driverless cars aren't completely driverless, they're expensive, unsafe, and technology could fail and cause fatal accidents and law suits against the maufacturers of these driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are not completely driverless. When using a driverless car, you must keep your hands on the steering wheel. The car can't drive by itself through work zones or traffic. The driver has to remain alert, just as if they were in a manual driving vehicle. There's no purpose whatsoever, to have created these driverless cars if they aren't much different from a regular vehicle. The main difference is the cost of the driverless car versus the cost of a manual driving vehicle.\n\nIt costs too much to make and prepare roads for these driverless cars. They created smart roads that the cars could run on. The smart-road systems worked well, but there's not enough money to rebuild all of the roads in the world, or even in America. All roads would have to be upgraded, and that's highly expensive. Driverless cars still can't be bought, but when they come out to the public there will be a significant difference in cost between manual driving vehicles and these driverless cars. It's simply not worth your money.\n\nThere are multiple reasons why these driverless cars are unsafe. They could fail, and fatal accidents could occur. That would be a problem. With the driverless car, safety is not promised at all. The driver has to be completely alert. There could still be complications with the car when the driver has their eyes on the road. The car could malfunction and you would have no way of stopping the self-driving vehicle. It's dangerous, and this is why it's illegal in most states to even test these driverless cars. If the technology fails and someone is injured, there could be one of two causes---either the manufacturer or the driver. Law suits would definitely be filed if someone was injured while in the driverless car when technology was not reliable.\n\nI am against the development of these cars. They're definitely not safe. They're not 100% driverless, and the technology is not reliable.\n\nThe negative aspects outweigh the few positive aspects. I believe that developing these cars for public, every day use, would be tragic. It would be the wrong decision, mostly for safety issues. I go against the development of these unreliable, driveless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the developement of driveless cars for various reasons. First,\n\nthese cars are not 100% driveless. Second, They can be really expensive and not affordable to many and\n\nfinally, it cannot navigate through roadwork or accident in which a driver would need to take over.\n\nThese cars are not 100% driveless in the article it said that the cars would not be able to navigate through roadwork , accidents , and etc. They also can not drive in or out of driveways or handle complicated driving issues. These things could lead to accidents in which someone could get seriously injured.\n\nNext, these cars will probably or most likely be very very explensive in which millions/billons of people would not be able to aford. Even tho it is not a serious problem i feel like most people would like to have a driveless car of there own,but because of it being expensive it\n\nwould be very very difficult. In the article it states that the Engineers at Berkeley tride to something similary as said in the pasage, \"these smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to extisting roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical\" .In the passage it also said that radar was a device on the hilltop that cost 200 million dollars\n\nFianlly, it wouldnt be safe. Lets say a driver was taking his driveless car to work in the morning and his lack of sleep from last night got to him in the car and he ended up falling asleep. In the passage it said that google cars werent truly driveless, that the driver would need to take over during complicated things a driveless car wasnt able to do things\n\nlike move through accidents or roadwork and if someone got lack of sleep like they guy from above then the car would get into an accident because the person would\n\nbe sleeping and this accident could lead to his death. The passage also said that in 2013 Bmw announced trafic jam assistance\" and that the car would handle speeds up to only 25 mph that speed is no where near how much people could now a days 25 mph is like for a small neightbor that raffic jam wouldnt be able to work during a regular street in which speeds could reach 55 etc.\n\nAlthough the develepmonts of these driveless cars are increasing i still believ that it is not at its greatest length and i dont feel like we will reach one day when im alive mabye wehn im dead. As you can see i am against the developement of cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the personal idea contribution of people having a learning journey at high schools. While some claim that it is recommendable that potential students should show their views or even judge their lecturers, the opposite makes a statement that it can bring a negative effect on students’ respectful attitude and demolish classroom’s regulation. I would contend that it is comparatively essential for teachers to receive their student’s comments, yet it is only valid to some extent.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, expressing students’ individual viewpoints is tremendously beneficial to teachers. Since it is obvious to realize that these actions from students who directly absorb a wide range of theoretical insights greatly helps their teacher acknowledge their strength and weakness in their teaching methods. For example, instead of imparting this amount of rocky theory by using textbooks, having a sympathetic ear from students’ wish to pass them down in some powerpoint, video or intriguing games is a more suitable tactic of teaching for professors in this technological development’s era, which make their high school students kindle more interests in their digesting knowledge. Hence, learners’ conception plays a relatively vital role towards their educators so as to enhance the quality of education.\r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of conveying opinions of students are widely acknowledged, they need to show their comments with appropriate behavior in order not to overcome the boundary of disrespect . Apparently, an appropriate attitude is put into the priority rather than other elements, which is the reason why negative contributions of immoral learners demonstrate an unthankfulness towards their imparter on whom bring enormous disadvantageous influences. For instance, in this day and age, there are a wealth of harmful comments of students who are not grateful for their teachers on some social media, namely Facebook, Instagram and Twitter, which become one of the alarming cyber violent problems affecting the spirit and reputation of their lecturers. Thus, these actions without thinking is also the obstacle of the high respect for teachers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though making some individual contributions from students is of essence, a student’s disrespect etiquette with their teachers will be expressed clearly if it goes beyond the limit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aothor support this idea in the article pretty well. Venus is the second planet from the sun.Venus also has one of the hotter surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.Venus is called the \"Evening Star''\n\nbecause it is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky.Venus has the cloest density and size to Earth. So people reffer this planet as twin planet of earth.Venus is survuvable fo human son it is worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus is survival for human because Venus used to be one of the planet like earth in our solar system along time ago.'' venus was probably coverd largely with oceans and could have support various froms of life, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.'' this evidence tell us that Venus the most likely going to be where the human move when the earth no longer liveable in the future.\n\nAnother reason that Venus is worth pursuit despite the danger it presents is it is closest to the earth.'' furthermore, recall that venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.'' The Venus is close to the planet we live so if something were happen to it we have to move to Mar or Venus. So, we have research do our resarch on it so we stay there before we find a planet that suit us.\n\nThe idea that we should do our research on Venus even if we know the danger. But there is going to be alot problem when we do it example '' however, peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on the ground conditions because most froms of light cannot penetrade the dense atmosphhere, redering standard froms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researcher cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.'' We will face the danger but it will also evole the human kind by alot.\n\nThis very help full in the easy. People does not care about the future so that they are worried that something may happen to the earth . So research have tosearch for away that will make human live in Venus or Mar so that human does not extienct. This article give me more about Venus in many way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a cool invention. Everyone wishes they can have a driverless car. The cars could be very dangerous also. Drivers still have to be aware because you never know what can happen. The cars are also dangerous because it is not truly driverless, it may not alert you sometimes, and and can cause you accidents in a constrution area.\n\nDriverless cars aren't truly driveless. They can cause bad accidents because of that. The driver should always stay alerted while in the car because anything can happen. In the text it informs us that \"Google driverless cars have driven more than a half a million miles without a crash.\" I'm sure the drivers were still alerted so they wouldn't crash.\n\nThe driverless may not alert you sometimes. You never know when something can go wrong with the car that can mess up the alert system. In the text it say \"they can steer, accelerate , and brakes themselves,\" that can be a bad thing because if the car had a problem it could use one of those in the wrong situation like accelerating in a workzone area or braking on the expressway.\n\nIt can also cause you to have accidents in a constrution work area. Driverless cars aren't perfect so it can mess up at anytime. It basically have a mind of it own so you should always be alert. You can easily have an accident because you'll be fascinated by the driverless car that you wouldn't be alerted. in the text it says\" it has complicated traffic issues such as navagating through roadwork or accidents.\n\nDriverless cars aren't truly safe. You should always be alerted because you'll never know what'll happen. It can cause serious accidents and you can get seriously injured, not just you other people too. It has a mind of its own and human drivers shouldn't a hundred percent trust a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world where technology is rapidly advancing by the day, it is no surprise that the develoment of self-driving cars is taking place.\n\nAt the same time, it is also no surprise that there are hurdles that must be jumped over in order to devleop these machines.\n\nIn spite of the roadblocks the development process may encounter, it is important that self-driving cars become a reality.\n\nWhen thinking about inventions, one must think, why are these things invented in the first place?\n\nThe answer is simple: convenience.\n\nFor almost any invention that can be thought of, it can be concluded that the main purpose of the invention is to make our lives easier.\n\nThe car is a percect example of this. It makes long distance travel easier and much quicker than on foot or by horse.\n\nHowever, the act of driving a car is a dangerous one.\n\nA person is basically driving a 2,000 pound hunk of metal that is hurdling at fast speeds down a road.\n\nFrankly, there is nothing safe about that idea.\n\nHowever, if cars were self-automated, automobile travel would be much safer, as it takes the human error out of the equation, reducing accidents and mishaps on the road.\n\nThough the car would be self-driving, a human would be needed in case of an emergency situation, in which the car would not be able to function properly.\n\nAs stated in the 7th paragraph of the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" , BMW has already tried its hand at self-automated cars, and have developed a system in which the car drives itself, but requires a person's hands to be on the wheel at all times, in case of an emergency.\n\nThis way, the driver would not be totally at the mercy of the computer system in the car in the time of emergency where human intervention is necessary.\n\nSome may say that if self-driving cars were to be a common finding in life, roads and driving laws would need to be changed considerably.\n\nFor example, in most states (save for California, Nevada, Florida, and Washington D.C.), testing self-driving cars is not even legal.\n\nThese people are right, but it is not a reason to deter the development of these machines.\n\nWhen the automobile first came to market at the turn of the 20th century, roads fit for automobile travel and driving laws in general did not exist, as there had not been cars before that.\n\nNowadays, we have highly sophisticated driving laws and road systems.\n\nThis shows that it is not impossible to create new laws to deal with new technology as it is invented, and subsequently integrated into modern society.\n\nCar companies such as Tesla, Audi, and Mercedes-Benz have plans to release self-driving cars in the future. However, it is important that the development of self-driving cars continues, as it is a vital and necessary step in technological progression that should occur.\n\nNot only would it make driving a safer and less stressful act, it is just a logical progression as far as technology and innovation is concerned.\n\nIt would usher in a new era of innovation, that could only make our lives better.\n\nAfter all, is that not the point of any invention?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" in the near future there will be cars that don't need to be driven by people, but will be engineered to drive themselves. Evidence from the article shows, there are both positives and negatives to these cars being released and used by the public people. My opinion is that the development of these cars should stop, and that they will overall have a negative impact on the public and cause much more trouble than they are worth.\n\nThe first major concern of mine is the legalality of these cars. The article states that computer-driven cars are illegal to test in most states, so a person definitely couldn't ride in one in public. Only the states of California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia, are allowed even limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nIn order for these cars to even be released to the public, many states would have to change their laws and it would take a long period of time just to do that. There is also cameras placed in some of the driverless cars, and to me, that is complete invasion of privacy. I believe a person should be able to do whatever they want in their own car without having to worry about being watched.\n\nAnother down-side to computer-driven cars is liability issues if a car were to get into an accident. Would the driver be the one to blame, or would it be the manufacturer of the car? There is no man-made object that is fool-proof, so why would computer-driven cars be any different? These are only some of the questions that people will face if companies do release driverless cars to the public.\n\nI am a firm believer than machines operated by people work much more efficiently than machines that operate themselves. I believe that cars are something that are meant to be driven by people, and if they try to operate themselves, many accidents and machine malfunctions will occur. There is already many malfunctions that occur in modern cars as it is. Also driving is meant to be an awesome experience for people new to driving, and if driver-less cars are developed future generations will be robbed of their chance to experience what driving is really like.\n\nMy opinion is that the development of these cars should stop for multiple reasons, and that they will overall have a negative impact on the public and cause much more trouble than they are worth. The development of these cars should stop, because a great amount of money and time is being put into something that I believe will negatively impact the public. The issues stated above are only some of the issues that people will have to face if driverless cars are released to the public, think of how many more issues could possibly arise from computer-driven cars being released to the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever enough patients deal screaming kids I proudly say It started uncle steve decided move They needed alot help decided take five kids sister I help The problem kids So packed bags headed My expedition car us could fit But didnt take long everybody get uncomfortable Everybody starts feel smocshed get really hot So kids start fighting My got real stressed real fast I thank god atleast car But I sitting front I didn CAPS get watch After hours Id enough My legs getting cramped constant motion making dizzy By driving hours one rest stop It dark We ones road moment I sank lower seat Then Everybody screamed even At first I thought got car accident I opened eyes I alive We hit deer It slid across hood car Finally hours reached It morning I ended surprising much patients I After I dont think I want go roadtrip", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I would say to a person who thinks that the face on Mars was created by aliens is this , for one we have never found any living things besides bateria and organisims on another plant. The reason why I say this is because NASA has no proof besides what they think is a face created by aliens on Mars. I have watched many shows about space and other shows like Brian Games. Brian Games had a show about faces, and it said that you can see an object and make it look human or make it look like a face, such as a specific flower that might look like a face. This is what those scientists are doing in this very situation. They are mistaking a natural made land form on Mars as an alien build face. There are many ways this landform could have been made. It could have been made by wind and rocks blowing across what you could say is a landscape. As you can see from the landform is that it has faided away over time and now looks like a lump of sand, which wouldn't you think if aliens made that they would fix it up and make it look like a face again? So this is my argument on why I believe that this is just a natural made landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often thought that higher age gap between children and parents plays an advantageous role to the development of numerous social skills of their babies. Although the contrasting views are also shared by other people. According to my opinion, I think that such generation gap can bring about more benefits compared to any demerits it might bring. \r\n\r\nDespite the drawbacks below, I believe that the more gap in age, the more positive aspects it brings both for the children and their parents. Firstly, couples can enjoy their conjugal lives quite longer by watching late-night dramas or going for a long drive more frequently compared to those who just got married and gave birth to a boy or girl within few months of their marriage. Moreover, husband and wives can become more financially stable and take wise decisions regarding the birth plus social skills development of a child if they wait a bit longer to become parents. For instance, according to a statistics reported in a newspaper of a European country, it can be noticed that children whose parents are substantially older than them develop various interpersonal skills like communicating with their neighbors in crisis situation pretty faster than those whose parents are comparatively young. \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, there are some issues also involved when the age gap between parents and their children are fairly high. The term “generation gap” is well-known to all which explains why children can’t get proper help regarding the use of latest technology like smartphones, tablets, video games or even browsing internet from their parents if they are too old. Another negative aspect is that children often feel shy to ask for pocket-money from their older parents as they are unable to grow a friendly relationship with them predominantly due to difference in age.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion regarding the positive or negative aspects of greater age difference within parents and their children, I strongly believe that crucial benefits like maximum enjoyment of conjugal life or faster social skills development of children of substantially adult parents far outweigh any of the minor disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news paper This paper going reason computers bad Frist computers bad cause people would nt time enjoy nature nice warm Second reason cause wo nt spend time familys friends time would get computer pay bill buy game computer The third reason going get job cause would nt want get look job cause much fun intill cut light would dum things pay bell se start play thats going make hin That s s bad computer But people going go life cause people love play games computer nt s computers bad people And opinion s alot people might think And thank time read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator, I think the electoral collage is unfair and should be abolished because it is unfair to voters.\n\nIts unfair to voters because of the winner take all system candidates dont spend time in state they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the states. And also because of the electoral vote, because each state only casts 1 vote, the single representative from wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as 55 representatives from california, who represent 35 million voters. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the house's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. The electoral college is widely regarded as anachronism, a non democratic method of picking a president that will to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. Although there is some ups to the electoral college like certainty of outcome and swing states, electoral college is not fair to the people because they dont get as much say as representatives and popular votes so they should abolish the electoral college to give the people a little more say.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line chart describes data about the two years of how many visitors to the community website let us discuss the differences between the first year and the next year.\nWe can clearly see the changes between the two years, so in October the people who visit were around 5000 which is nearly the same in the first and second year unlike in September all of them were less than 5000, after that in November, also December we can see the massive change at the next year the was the number of both lines amidst 15000 and 20000, while the first year also the two line where the same but less then the next year, it obvious that the blue line decline at the next three months, also the red line but not in mammouth way.\nIn April.\nAs it is persented In April the all the lines are start to increase but the red line is highest then the blue line however, in May the visitors were 20000 unlike the first year they were less then 10000, but in June it grow to more than 10000 and on other hand the red line increase to more than 20000 , also the next month there were no huge changes, moving to the last month both of line decrease to around 15000.\nOverall, it is clear that the second year the humans who visited the website where more in all the months ulike the last month the where almost the same and the first year was a little but higher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals think that if children take experience prior to going to school it would be more beneficial while others argue that experience has a bigger impact at the age of 18. according to my perspective, knowledge at a younger age is profitable rather than childish age because in teenage people are mature and know about their good and bad things.\r\n\r\non the one ,hand many masses believe that people should take an experience at teenage because they are much knowledgeable at the age of 18. To explicate it, the grown-ups learn many lessons at this age and they remember it for their whole life. Moreover, at teenage people set their goals and work for them In which experience is an accessory. Teenagers not only mature at that age but are also responsible. to cite an example, The New York Times newspaper showed that the humus who took experience at the younger ages now become successful people. as a consequence, it is quite clear that experience in the teenage influences the life of people in future.\r\n\r\non the other ,hand a plethora of masses think that knowledge at an early age is pivotal, however I think it is not a good thing because children are immature and they don't have thinking ability. They can easily forget things. Furthermore, pupils depend on their parents and they do not know much about their decisions, so how they can get experience?.Thus, getting experience at younger age now become benefited people.\r\n\r\nin conclusion, it is undeniable fact that skills in teenage make humans more responsible and informative; also it in enhances the personality of juveniles according to my opinion, whereas children are not ready to take the experience at that age as they don't have the ability to learn things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear People like computers known fact They much like dry addicting irrestable Despite people believe though computers good daily lives You communicate play listen music watch movies even learn language computers So ways computer anything bad fun They help us relax In todays age nt give people joy experienced younger Computer replacement Imagine playing baseball friend lives miles away still kid set exercise adventure Computer broke border giving higher level You got mail Many people hear sentence everyday By many I mean millions alert saying someone sent email messages Sent faster service Instead waiting days letter In matter minutes message sent friends Microsoft electronic messaging systems superior form communication let us speak world Although sounds silly wanted could send message anyone message box Lets say went watch certain movie nt With computer dose drive watch Better yet download movies media available able watch click mouse Computers filled top gadgets accesories make life easier movies anything likely computer They perfect tolls modern society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The pie charts illustrate the proporation of time cost by different activities for the working adults in a certain nation in 1958 and 2008.\nLooking from an overall perspective, the percentage of time spent on working, relaxing at home and other interests or playing sports were increased in the given years. However, the time of other three activities consumed were decreased at the same time.\nIn terms of the events which experienced an increasement of time, the percentage of time of working rised 9 percent, up to 42 percentage in 2008 and become the most time-consuming activity. The activities of relaxing at home and other interests or playing sports were seperately increased 5 percentage and 2 percentage in terms of time consuming.\nAs regards to going out, travel to work and sleeping activities, they were all decreased in different percentage of time. The most noticiable one was going out with friends or family, which dramatically droped from 19 percentage to 6 percentage, approximately one third of the former proporation in 1958. As for the percentage of sleeping and travel to work, they were both declined over the given fifty years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given diagram describes how carbonated drinks are made from raw materials to finished goods. As we can see, there are five stages in the production process of carbonated drinks. To begin with, the raw water should be cleaned through a filter and combined with a water softener and chemicals before going through to the next stage. After the water is cleaned, it will go through a pump, and then electric heaters and a cooling pipe to be evaporated at a certain level of heat with additional carbon dioxide. Furthermore, the water will be sent to the mixing tank, which will be blended with three different materials containing coloring, syrup, and flavor. After that mixing process, the water is already transformed into carbonated drinks, and they will go through the last filter before getting into bottles or cans to be wrapped. Finally, the carbonated drinks are ready to deliver to the supermarket.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There sensorship books library think many great pieces literature one would able get hands nt reach standards People would nt able reads favor right books Would really want take people If arguement change mind copuld atleast put sensored books behind counter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers in presents. The details that help support this claim is that for example \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus, because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Another reason is that, \" Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth..\" the author then begins to mention some of the features that Venus has as well as Earth, such as valleys, mountains and craters. Now despite the dangers that could and can come from taking a visit down to Venus hasn't stopped NASA from trying to find ways to make this mission \"both safe and scientifically productive\". Within the text it states that, \"NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" then it gives examples such as a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape.\" NASA is still working on other possible approaches to make this mission happen. Sure there may be many challenges effecting Scientisits and researchers from exploring and studying Venus, but that dosen't mean its impossible. Towards the end of the of the text the last supporting details that conclude that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is the follwoing, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" and \"Our travles on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\". In conclusion studying Venus is absolutley worthy to persue dispite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people of this generation just sit on the couch and wach t.v or on their phones all day, not one of them want to explore because they're scared. Well i say\" live for the day!\" Only because you don't know whats gonna happen tomarrow.\n\nJoin the \"Seagoing Cowboys\", you can travel to Europe China and more, plus for some kids you can be drafted in the military service(thats a good way to start something after high school).If you still think it's not fun you get to play games like volleyball or tennis fencing and all on the boat.If you like animals then you can take care of the cattel or horses.\n\nA boy named Luke joined and he loved it he had fun and he saw China,Euope,andCrete.Luke stated that he was grateful for the opportunity, and it made him aware of other people in other countries needs, so his family became host for international student and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nSo come join to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" it's\n\nbe a once in a life time experiance that can change your life for the good (it changed Luke's life).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Globalisation has enabled the masses, especially the professionals to explore Their potential in various sectors irrespective of their genders. However, the majority of intellectual duties are performed by the men but the administrators must also uplift the women involved in these areas. The subsequent paragraphs will delve with the above-said opinion with some relevant examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are numerous reasons in support of the ministries enlightening the female to apply for skilled work. Primarily, the fixed number of women enrollment in high-level jobs will provide an upsurge in more intelligent people in combination with male counterparts. As a result, more efficient and effective developments will be fueled in for escalating national growth. For instance, the majority of accountable jobs are undergone by women officials in developed nations. Hence, the active participation of females in authoritative works will be of huge benefit.\r\n\r\nIn addition to the above, permanent positioning of females in decision making profiles will be helpful in eradicating many social evils and wrongful practices such as female feticides, dowry etcetera. Owing to the vanishing of such issues, an equilibrium of social as well as economic well-being can be established. To exemplify the same, it can be witnessed that the women population of developed nations are comparatively less prone to social hindrances and lives an independent life. Thus, women empowerment is vital to create a balanced society and country.\r\n\r\nTo encapsulate , it can be said that a guaranteed ratio of female employment at responsible seats will not only boost the social and economical harmony but also results in national growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a type of technology that can help alot of things that go wrong and it can also be bad.\n\nThis kind of technology can be and cannot be as valuable to read he students emotions because the students will have different emotions each time you read their emotions. So this technology can be valuaable because when you can read the students emotions like if there is something that is bothering them and they dont say anything, this technology can help the staff and teachers know what is going on. and it could be bad because the student who's emotions you are reading is maybe not comfortable with you reading their emotions, so you can get in trouble. So in conclusion this i am nuteral to this type of technology because i believe that it can be good or bad. No t just one or the other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, technology is advanced enough to create cars that are semi-driverless.\n\nHowever, humans demand more.\n\nPeople want driverless cars for maximum efficiency.\n\nHowever, letting cars drive for themselves is dangerous and the development of driverless cars should be halted.\n\nRobots are quite common today.\n\nSemi-driverless cars are no exception.\n\nHowever, if a car was to become fully driverless, it would be considered a robot.\n\nThe artificial intelligence operating the car would be like a brain, making decisions about where to turn and how fast it needed to go.\n\nOn the surface this seems practical.\n\nNo more drivers would be needed, and robots are more coordinated so driving would become a lot safer.\n\nThis is not true.\n\nInfact, if drivers were to dissappear due to the appearance of driverless cars, there would be even more problems than today.\n\nAccording to the three laws of robotics, robots are not allowed to harm or kill humans.\n\nBecause fully independent artificial intelligence have not yet been developed, this law has not come into play yet.\n\nIf an automatic car was to be developed, then the law would act upon and restrain the robot operating the vehicle.\n\nFor example, if a robot driven car was to crash and kill people in the car, the law would be broken.\n\nIn paragraph 9, the author discusses how if technology fails, both the driver and manufacturer would be to blame.\n\nNow with the driver being the robot, more complications would arise, proving that independent cars are dangerous.\n\nDanger also comes from another place, being other people.\n\nThe robot can prove to be safer, being immune to distractions taking place in the passenger seats.\n\nWithout a human driver, the car is able to be controlled from the outside.\n\nIf a hacker were to take control of a robot operated car, the passengers inside would fall victim to the hacker.\n\nComputer development has shown to be advanced enough for a hacker to easily get access to the movement of a car, including locks, breaks, steering, acceleration, and pretty much anything that the robot would be controlling.\n\nThis danger is already a threat to society today.\n\nSmart cars can be hacked due to them relying on GPS and other wirelessly connected sources.\n\n100% human dependent cars cannot be hacked due to the vehicle being disconnected to outside sources and dangers.\n\nThe final major danger with cars being independent is that despite being an automatic system, its reaction speed is too slow.\n\nIn paragraph 4, LIDAR is explained as a rotating sensor on the roof that uses laser technology to generate 3-D models of the car's surroundings.\n\nThis is all assuming that everything is stationary or slower paced.\n\nIf an animal were to suddenly jump in front of the car, or if a pedestrian was to trip and fall infront of the car, it would crush the obstacle.\n\nDespite being an intelligent piece of equipment, the car's sensors would not be fast enough to calculate the sudden appearance of an obstacle.\n\nThe car's artificial intelligence would need to gather, process and use the data all in a split second.\n\nThis is also assuming that the brakes work well enough and can stop the speeding car in time.\n\nWhoever or whatever was on the street would be crushed before the car had enough time to stop itself.\n\nThis also goes back to the danger of driverless cars killing people, except this time it is a danger to the car's surroundings.\n\nLegal issues woud arise, and the robot would take the blame.\n\nHowever people have the tendency to hurt other humans so the manufacturers would be blamed for not having a better sensor.\n\nThe development of newer sensors and faster computers would increase the cost of the driverless cars and decrease its practicality.\n\nDriverless cars would create many issues and potentially be the number one leading cause of death in developed countries.\n\nThese three points are just some of the dangers of driverless cars.\n\nThe development of this kind of technology is practical but risky.\n\nHowever the development of new automobile and transportation technology will not yield to its dangers.\n\nPeople are willing to sacrifice and explore dangerous things if the outcome is tempting enough.\n\nAdvancements and changes will take place, and soon driverless cars will take to the roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the the Facial Action Coding System technology in a classroom is valuable. The FACS helps people read the emotional expressions of other people. This is valuable in a classroom because it can let teachers know how students are feeling of the lesson they are being teached and it can help them know how students are feeling in general.\n\nOne reason why the FACS is a great technology in a classroom because it can let teachers know how the students are feeling towards their lesson they are teaching to them. When students are being teached something, they some times show expressions on how they feel but tend to hide them. \"A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. This can help teachers find out why aren't students understanding the subject; they can either be bored or confused. Students are some times scared to ask for help, but teachers knowing when students are confused, he teacher can help them individually. This is a great tool to use when students are failing classes, or having trouble understanding a lesson. Without the FACS many students could be failing their classes due to not knowing what they are doing. It is helpful for teachers to recoginze the students expression towards the subject, so they can figure out if students are confused. Knowing that tecahers can give them extra help.\n\nAnother reason is it can help other people in the classroom figure out how their classmates are feeling. Students aren't always happy and some times have something tough going on with their lifes, they need that little motaviation\n\nto help them feel happy. \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are tryingto hide their emotions,\" notes Nick. Some times classmates aren't really feeling happy, they could often have trouble smiling for several reasons. The technology can help others know how they are feeling so they can help other people with their problems they are facing. The FACS is very useful for students who have friends in their class. Friends some times lie about their emotions. The FACS can let them know their emotions and can help them if they show saddness.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It is helpful in many ways. It helps teachers know when students are confused and are hvaing trouble understandin the lesson. It also helps classmates know how their friends in the classroom are feeling, by finding out their expression.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", the author is writing about the surprising mission of the Viking ship when it found an enormous head in the Cydonia area of Mars. Although from a distance, the object looked like a head, a closer look by scientist revealed that it was only a mesa. I know it is a mesa because mesa's were common around Cydonia,and two pictures were taken again,three years apart, and they only showed a natural landform. This was proof that what the Vikings had seen was only a natural landform with a shadow cated upon it to give it the look of a human face.\n\nOne reason I know that they are correct is because mesa'a are common in Cydonia. Mesa's come in many different shapes and sizes, and it was a coincedence that this one happened to appear to have the features of a human face. Natural landforms are common on Earth too, of similar shapes and sizes as the the \"Face on Mars\".\n\nIn paragraph six it explains that, in 1998,the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and took another picture of the face.Jim Garvin, cheif scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program stated \" We felt this was important to taxpayers...We photograped the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" This picture was ten times sharper than the one taken by the Viking, and it only showed a landform. Some clouds obstructed the view of the Face, causing people to believe that was the reason they could not see the face.\n\nTrying again to get people to believe that there was no face on Mars, the Mars Global Surveyor again took a picture. This time the picture had no clouds obstructing the view of the Face, so the picture was as clear as day. It, again, showed no evidence of a face, just a large mesa. This was more than enough proof to show that the \"Face\" that the Viking ship had seen, was merely only a shadow casted over the mesa, giving it the features of a human face.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face that the Viking ship seen, was only a mesa, the proof being that mesa's were common around the area of Cydonia, and about twenty years later, two pictures were taken, only showing a natural landform. Although it was an amazing discovery, it was not quite right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affect cyclist many ways First sun making cyclist hot dehydrated He states The sun beginning beat sun big factor affect cyclist Also hills country roads Going hills take alot work use alot energy The cyclist says CAPS replaced short rolling hills snakes road make cyclist timid looking snakes would get bit Againg cyclist states dimond backblocked majority pavement front me old factory gave cyclist hope crushed hopes The factory even made thirsty many affects cyclist due setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit hot deserts On bike ride many places stop food water On bike ride cant bring lot louage Only important materials big enough jug water An example text show bad I got hands knees working handle rusted pump strength He thirst tired didnt know else get water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveress cars have developed a lot in advancing to their purpose, but it doesnt actually replace the driver. Many cars have been developed and tested to see if driverless cars reduce the amount of accidents. Accidents will always be something that will have to be considered. I do not support driverless cars because there will be argumental faultry when it comes to an accident, drivers actually have to be more dependent on the car, and the price of the car would not be accessible at first.\n\nWho is really to blame for accidents that happen by driverless cars? Manufacturers certainly do not want to be blamed for something they did not do, but they did make the car. The driver does not want to be blamed for an accident that the \"driver\"less car did. If driverless cars are to actually happen, there will be a lot more lawsuits coming to the manufacturer becauase they did not actually follow through with the meaning of driverless cars. That is to be said that the manufacturer has to tell the buyer of the car all of the components that actually need to be taken into place to resist from getting into an accident. Therefore, if the driver actually has to do work to resist a \"driverless\" car from getting into an accident, then what is the point of buying a car that you will have to watch over and make sure no accidents actually occur?\n\nDrivers now are actually driving the cars, meaning they are in control. When the driver is in control, they only have to watch over thereselves andthe driving of others. Defensive driving has been the tactic for many years to resist accidents. What would it be for driverless cars? To resist any accident you actually need to make sure your car is doing the right thing. The driver knows exactly how to drive and the calls to make when certain situations come into place, but the car does not really know much other than the computer telling it what to do when those situations come into action. Even in some situations, the car still needs help to carry out actions that need to take place. Driverless cars will not be driverless if the driver still needs to take actions for the car. People would not want their car to stop in the middle of a highway because their car does not know how to respond when another car is trying to merge into the same lane. There will always be flaws in the making for driverless cars. People now do not trust much on technology to take over their lives. Families are probably not going to buy these cars from the lack of reliability they have on computers and trusting a car with their family. Therefore, it should not be called driverless cars in the driver still needs to look after themselves and the car. People would rather just buy a normal car for which they can be in control and know they will not be getting into an accident.\n\nAccidents are expensive, lawsuits are expensive, driverless cars will be expensive. With all the technology a driverless car would have, the price will go up. The technology is pricey itself, practically the whole car is made up of sensors and computers. Who is the driverless car targetting? The whole aspect of driverless cars is expensive. First off, these cars are not coming lower than hundred thousand dollars. Second of all, families normally target cars sixty thousand dollars and lower.\n\nThird of all, everyday cars are making advancements meaning the prices of cars are not getting lower. It makes it hard for a family of four or five to try to buy a car with many advancements. It seems that the target group for driverless cars are mostly the upper class. Everday, prices go up or down, but driveless cars seems like another toy for the rich to have.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars does not seem like a good idea. Drivers are always going to be arguing with manufacturers, they are not given a leisure time, and they might not be able to afford them. Sometimes humans need to take matter into their own hands and not rely on technology for the rest of their lives. Driverless cars just seems to be one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, myriads of people are keen on searching for background information about their house. There are certain factors behind this trend such as assurance of safety, special connection towards home, and superstitions. In order to find history, they ought to consult senior citizens in their neighbourhood or on the internet.\r\n\r\nFirstly, it is an undeniable fact that buildings safety is paramount. In order to ensure that the background details are nessecery.For instance, a survey was conducted by the Harvard School Of Engineering in 2018 about buildings safety in old houses. As a result, about 80 per cent of people who participated in this survey said that old houses are risky. Some of the old buildings collapsed in the UK in 2018 because of not strong enough. In light of the above-mentioned examples, the officialdom had taken some positive steps towards this issue by inspecting old houses every 2 years.\r\n\r\nSecond reason is some people believe in superstitions like their house is haunted by evil. To cite an example, a piece of news that was published in The Hindu Newspaper about scary haunted homes in the UK and many people suffering from them. If there is any doubt about superstitions society could cleanse their buildings or change their house in possible ways.\r\n\r\nThe best way to research the history of buildings is by consulting elderly people who lived near because many of them are lived there for many years. Talking to them definitely discovers hidden things about the old property. Similarly, to uncover superstitions,the internet is the best choice to research this. Most countries are updated about haunted houses online. Apart from that old newspapers and recorded news may be helpful in this scenario. As mentioned earlier, people could get knowledge about their house from the elderly society nearby.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are a plethora of justifications for searching the history of the residence and different ways. Buildings' security and superstitious beliefs are the reason main reasons behind this.To find answers they seek help from the internet or from the old communities in their neighbourhood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The main obstacle allowing dirigibles dock Empire State building s Mooring Mast safety Most dirigibles used hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable The owners realized much worse accident could taken place downtown New York If accident happen dirigible would putting hundreds people s lives risk That idea unpractical unsafeAnother obstacle allowing dirigibles moor Empire State Building s mast nature The winds top constantly shifting due violent air currents This would cause back ship swivel around mast Lead weights could used neither practical safe would dangling high pedestrians", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think The Facial Action Coding System should be put into classrooms. The Facial Action Coding System is a system that enables computers to identify human emotions. This a real system that actually works it scans your face to see what emotions you have.\n\nIn order for this to work the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. I think the use of this in a classroom is going to workout great for the students and the teachers. If you have the Face Action Coding System in the classroom the teachers can scan the faces of there students will the teacher is teaching them a lesson. After it scans the faces of the students the teacher can then see if the students are enjoying the lesson or if they aren't enjoying. This could change the way teachers teach kids by doing stuff creative different days so the kids will enjoy what they are being taught. Instead of being upset about what they are learning.\n\nThis is also a good idea for teacher as well to see if there students are having a hard time or if they are upset about something. Some kids don't like to talk about what they are upset about unless someone ask them first. The face scaning decive will be a helpful thing to put in a classroom. plsu while your face is geting scanned you have to make a happy face therefore the experiment will make you slightly happy. I think they should start putting these in the classrooms now.\n\nHaving these in the class will make kids want to learn and the teachers will be able teach the kids because the kids will be focused. It will be a great thing to have in a school it's always good to see the emotions of the kids in the classroom. Even for the teachers if the teacher is uspet the students can see his emotions with the face scanner. All in all i think they should start putting them in classrooms. I am for the use of this technology as me being a student i think something like this would be a cool thing to have in my school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How the author supports that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit the danger it presents is, Venus is the closest planit to the Earth. In terms of density and size, and occasonally the closest in distance too. In Venus the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nNASA has been sending humans to study Venus, NASA says that Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground coinditions by stayling up and out if their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface,temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. NASA is working on other approaches to stusy Venus like making a machine\n\nthats made out of silocon carbid\n\nto test out the surface area and there mass.\n\nVenus is very dangous because there climate is too hot for humans. by how hot iy is its climate starts to form valcanos. the valcano erups most of the time. the other bad thing is there is frequent lightnig strikes that damages there lands surface. From the standers from the atmospher NASA could not take any photos or videos. most importantly, researchers cannot take samples such as rock, gas, or anything else. NASA thinks that Venus should to get closer and personal despite the risks. NASA is trying to make more matchines to last longer in there climante but how ever they have discoverd to use mechanical\n\ncomputers. i think that the author has a point its too dangours for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These cars should be encouraged because of three reasons: They would cut down on car accidents, all around smart idea and an upgrade on everyday life and for people on the go.\n\nFirst Driverless cars would be a huge impact on everyday life. For example people with good jobs who are always busy and are on the commute most of the week if they are running late they could maybe finish a paper for the huge meeting the boss ordered mandatory. As i glance over while im riding in the car i ususally see people with suits on driving nice cars and there in a rush trying to do two things at once . Lets say you didnt have time to eat breakfast at home because you were running late for school, meeting or maybe just work . You could be able to eat an egg mcmuffin while your driverless car gets\n\nyou where you need while that coffee hits the spot and you only really have to drive it yourself every now and then like it says in paragraph 7.\n\nSecond, Driverless cars would cut down at least 50% of car accidents there are too many people today who aren't paying attention to the road and are oblivious to there surrondings. Whether they are changing the music , texting on there phone or even just taking a quick second to look at their children in the backseat who are arguing nonstop. But with all of these new cars they could be able to do all of that and more without putting there life at risk. The car has multiple cameras so they can always be aware of incoming traffic a deer or maybe just a blocked road. With these reasons i belive that Driverless cars will make the road a much safer place.\n\nLastly most people will think that Driverless Cars will be too expensive and only for the rich and famous which i think would be stupid because most rich and famous people already dont drive themselves around.\n\nJust like normal cars there should be a test to be able to drive these cars and not just a regular license the test should be maybe a little more difficult so not just anyone can go around with these high tech cars.\n\nIn Conclusion people around the world will be waiting on these cars and when they do it will change the world like we see in most movies about the future.\n\nDriverless cars should be encouraged because they will make the road a much safer place , people on the go can use it to there advantage and it would be a huge upgrade on modern technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to be a major part of the future.I'm not against driverless cars.Driverless cars are going to make some people really lazy but,others will take it seriously.Some people would be against it because they don't like the thought of a car driving them to where they want to go.People like me would love for my car to drive for me.\n\nI think that driverless cars would be great.The only thing you have to do is pay attention to what the car is doing.You have to be alert to make sure that you are going to the right place.Driverless cars can be easy on the enviorment.With the driverless car I think that it should not use that much gas if any.\n\nEveryone would want a driverless car.So the government should make new laws for driving.Such as:The driver should be alert at all times while in the car.Every one that has a lisence already should take the drivers test over with the new rules.That way if somone gets a driverless car they dont have to read a manual on how the cars work.\n\nDriverless cars are the future.We should embrace it.Driverless cars would be something that a lot of people would be anticapating.My dad has been talking about driverless cars for years.Cruise control is kinda like driverless cars but,you have to stir the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been discussed whether the primary purpose of museums is to enjoy or to educate. In this essay, I will discuss both notions and explain why I believe the latter is more right. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are educational merits associated with most museums. Firstly, historical museums, which display a range of historical arts, including pictures, sculptures, and videos, are historically informative and well-visualised to visitors, especially the youth. For example, many school trips for students are arranged to visit museums once in a while to learn about historical events with high-quality demonstrations from the tour instructors. In addition, local citizens and tourists can learn about the culture, activities, or lifestyle of cities when visiting the city museum displaying documentary audio and movies.\r\n\r\nHowever, I deem that more visitors would prefer to enjoy the arts than educate themselves while attending any exhibition. It is because artistic products take years to build and complete. While you may learn a new idea and perspective, the majority will benefit more by enjoying the creativity of those than by trying to learn and mimic them. It could be, for instance, a picture of an uncommon genre like juxtaposition or a mechanical art that applies scientific mechanism. Museums, hence, should be the places for tourists to witness outstanding and magnificent exhibitions they have never seen before.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, with the aforementioned, despite the educational benefits, the artwork has more entertaining and relaxing aspects associated with it. Therefore, visitors should spend their time at museums to enjoy the superb exhibitions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been around for awhile and they have had a major impact on society. Many people believe that there is no problem with the frequency of cars being driven. But, there are many advantages to less car use such as improving our cities and suburbs, improving safety, and decreasing pollution.\n\nMany have tried to make cities a little more dense and better for walking but nothing has seemed to work; therefore, they have moved on to suburbs. Now, people are trying to make suburbs better for getting around while walking instead of driving. By doing so, places such as shops will be made closer and more convienent which allows people to be able to consider walking as a better option. By having these suburbs, and soon hopefully cities, reduce the amount of cars used, the people living in these areas will be able to accomplish more in a healthier and safer way.\n\nSafety has been an issue in almost all areas due to a variety of reasons; one being cars. People pass by \"Drive Safely\" signs or memorials on the side of the road too often. Many accidents occur because of all the cars and traffic and careless driving. By reducing the amount of cars being driven, the moment of deaths in car accidents can be reduced as well. In \"The End of Car Culture\", author Elisabeth Rosenthal states, \"Mine (19 and 21) have not bothered to get a driver's license, even though they both live in places where one could come in handy. They are interested, but it's not a priority. They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends.\" Recently, teenagers who are able to get their license haven't really made it a priority. This could be caused by factors such as fear of driving or just because they've figured out a way around driving. Not everyone needs a car to get around; there are plenty of other ways to safely get from point A to point B.\n\nAnother large issue cars contribute to is pollution. Pollution is in every city, every state, every country, every continent. Cars are \"a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes...\" (Rosenthal, Elisabeth, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\"). Cars don't help with environmental issues what-so-ever. They add to the smog issues and they increase the about of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. In the capital of France, for example, congestion was down sixty percent due to smog causing delivery companies to lose money since they couldn't delieve what was needed. Cars are extremely harmful to the environment and they make the issues we already have even larger. By limiting car usage, people could hopefully work on repairing the damage we have already done to the environment instead of worsening it.\n\nCars have impacted society ever since they were made. By reducing the amount of cars driven, cities and suburbs can be improved, better safety can be implimented, and pollution will reduce. Until then, the issues cars create will continue to get worse and by the time people see it, the problems will be too late to fix.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story is telling us readers about how dangerous it is to explore the planet Venus. It also tells us how amazing it would be so see Venus. This story is stating many different opinions on weather or not exploring Venus is safe or dangerous. In this essay I will be evaluating whether Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nSome people often refer Venus as Earths twin. Venus is sometimes right around the corner from Earth so humans have tried to send many spacecrafts to Venus but none of them have survived for more than a few hours. People still to this day are curious to why no human or spacecraft has touched Venus in three decades,\n\nOn Venus the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than what humans encounter on Earth. Long ago Venus was probably covered with oceans and could have experienced many forms of life. So if Venus used to be just like Earth how come the mission to Venus is so scientifically productive and dangerous yet safe?\n\nTo this day scientists are still trying to make machines and spacecrafts that are able to take photographs of Venus. There is so much rock and dust floating around that normal machines aren't able to take pictures properly. Scientists are seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus so therefore they would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nI do agree that no matter the risks we shouldn't just stop trying to explore new planets. We should make new machines and create new technology to help us achieve our goals and our missions. The travelers on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A controversial discussion point is whether enrolling in a university or getting a job immediately after graduating from high school is the best way to a successful career. While the author believes that studying at a university or college is better, some people have the opposite point of view.\n\nIt should be acknowledged that to pursue a prospective career path, an enduring level of knowledge is immensely important. By enrolling in a college, students can obtain even professional skills and knowledge relating to their dream job. Thus, stand a greater chance of landing a well-paid occupation. For example, a study in the USA in 2000 revealed that more than 60% of employees have at least studied in an academy.\n\nHowever, some people hold the opposite view which is the better way to have a successful career is to enter the workforce immediately after high school. First, this help students enrich life experiences as well as occupational skills and also, taking a job early enables students to be more mature and independent in their life. Secondly, since pupils have a chance to interact with the public, they are capable of expanding their relationships with people around them. This will be a great thing as they can rely on these relationships to achieve higher positions in their workplace.\n\nIt is the opinion of the author that having employment right after high school can bring some benefits, notwithstanding, to achieve a higher position, a great level of knowledge is immensely necessary. Because higher standing requires a better in-depth understanding of the occupation ,especially researchers and analysts. This can be obtained through lessons, courses and experiments in university or college.\n\nIn conclusion, without studying in an academy, it is hard to obtain prospective employment only by entering the workforce. I believe that this point of view should be considered carefully and the essay has provided sufficient reasons for this statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story final paragraph show sentimental important plant Saeng She take test winter s cold nice hibiscus survive You need winter hibiscus Not like kind NUM This shows important finds hibiscus like ones home She shows dissapointment last paragraph shows courage strong", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automated Cars\n\nSelf-driving cars have always been a dream of the future, but now, geniuses at Google, Mercedes-Benz, and other big companies, are meaking this dream seem more like a reality. Although most people instantly jump to the con's of automated cars, there are many pro's as well. One pro thats easy to think of, is the sheer respect you'd have from having an self- driving car. Remember when Batman pushed a button on his belt and his car came straight to his location? Well that can be anybody with self driving cars. Automated cars would also be in sync, knowing where other cars are, and what those other cars are doing. There would be less accidents because ther would be no more human error invlolved. Self-driving cars would greatly change how we live, but those changes would be for the better.\n\nAntagonists of automated cars always tend to ask, what if the car goes haywire and tries to kill people? Now think, when has a computer ever tried to kill you? The idea of computers or robots taking over the world, like in movies, is completely insane. Technology simply cannot think or behave that way. There should also be a kill switch in the car, if you are a passenger, and you something goes wrong, there should be a button that will cut off power to the entire car, stopping it dead in it's tracks. The other cars behind it, would be able to stop in time to not hit the car. Of course this is if the other cars where automated, most humans just cannot react in time.\n\nGoing off of that idea, these self-driving cars can communicate with eachother. They can send information back and forth. Constantly knowing where the other cars are, where those other cars are going. They can also send signals that there is an accident somewhere. For example if there is a accident on a street, the other cars will recieve this information and they can find an alternate route instead of congesting the road and worsening the situation. But of course, the main goal is to decrease the number of accidents that occur.\n\nMost car accidents and deaths, occur due to humans driving hazardously. Whether it be drunk driving, texting and driving, or simply bad driving, these all share one thing in common, a human's error. You can drink or even be drunk in an automated car, the car will still get you to your destination, if you can insert the destination. This would not promote drinking, it would simply take drunk drivers off the wheel. In a fully automatic car, you can do anything really, text, watch a movie, play a video game, anything. Lastly, bad drivers would be off the roads.\n\nSadly though, this would take out the joy of driving. Maybe some manual driving can still be allowed, maybe on a closed course. Because some people, including me, love to drive. In conclusion there are many pro's to self-driving cars, mainly being safer roads with less accidents. But automated cars are still far to come, because technology, laws, and simple approval are not where they need to be to see a large amount of driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am Mackenzie Dazzleberry a scientist at\n\nNASA and we has been seeing a figure that looks like a humans head, but I don't like it's that, i think that it is a lanform. The nose could bumps from if people dumped things there or it could be bumps. The eyes could again be waste that people dumped and it formed into bumps or the nose and eyes could be hills on the face.\n\nI also think that the face could be landforms because they are common around the American West and it looks like from the front it looks like a circle but if you look at it from the side it looks like a rectangle. The face could be a landform because we ended up revealing that it was infact a landform.\n\nI belive that the face is a landform because of the shape on the bottom and because from all the pictures we gathered when we put them together they look like a landform, just because the things that look like eyes and a nose doen't mean that it could be an alien, the landform could have bumps or hills that formed from people dumping waste on it or from having hills on it, or it could be dents on it from things stepping, walking, or things falling on it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With Tesla, Google, and a myriad of companies working hard to create the future of driverless cars the present, many problems have arised whether or not this is a good direction to go to. Already, several manufactures have included elements of driverless driving into cars they create, from self parking to driving on the freeway. Driverless cars are a good idea as they would increase the ability of public transportation, make for easy travel for the user, and increase the potentional of stores and shipping.\n\nOne of the many reasons that driverless cars are a good ideas is that it would lead to a more energy effiecent public transportation system. As the article, Driverless Cars Are Coming states, replacing a taxi system with a group of driverless cars would use half the fuel of the taxis, along with being much more flexible than normal transportation systems. This along with electric cars soon being a easy to access option would revolutionize the public transportation world. This would easily lead to fleets of driverless cars roaming around cities and picking up anyone who needed a ride to go somewhere almost immediately, which companies such as Uber are trying to accomplish, and using the possiblity of wireless charging, would allow these cars to travel almost indefinetly which would redefine the public transporation system. Although such a system seems too complicated to be possible, new public transporation companies such as Uber and Lyft already are trying to implement many of these elements, such as having the drivers roam around near city hotspots where people are in need of rides often, in order to be as energy efficent as possible.\n\nAnother reason that driverless cars are a good idea is that it would make for very easy travel for the user. Imagine a car which you could climb into on a late friday night, tell the car to go to a city which would normally take 3-5 hours to travel to, and waking up the next morning at the destination. Although this exact scenario still has several years to be a reality, car manufactures are attemping to do things related to this. Already, Tesla has implemented a self driving system to make a morning commute to work very easy. The car can open your garage door, leave your house, and then close the door with no human interaction. Once you start driving and hit a busy freeway with bumper to bumper traffic during rush hour, you can set the car to drive itself, while being completly aware of its surroundings, braking when the car in front of it is too close, and accelerating when there is a clear path. Although this may scare people as people could think that the driver could not be paying attention to the road, many cars like this have a feature to make sure the driver has their hands ready to be on the wheel, and that the driver is alert as to what is happening. Once the car reaches your office's parking lot, you can find an open spot, and have the car park itself into the spot, even if that means having to parrallel park.\n\nLastly, one of several reasons driverless cars are a good ideas is that driverless cars would drastically increase the potentional of stores and the shipping of their goods. Companies in Europe have already made driverless trucks which can ship goods across the country, which could soon be implemented into the United States. In the U.S., there are severeal services which involve the user using an app to notify a person what goods you want to get at a certain store or two, having that person go to that store and buy whatever goods you requested, and having the person drop off the goods at your front door. This could easily save time for the workers by having a driverless car pick up the goods that you requested, and having that car drive to your house and drop off the goods, all while the worker is helping another customers.\n\nOverall the future of driverless cars would redefine the world we live, making everybodies life much easier. Driverless cars are a good ideas as they would increase the possiblity of public transportation, make for easy travel for the user, and increase the potentional of stores and shipping.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, state senator I think we should change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. I think this because the Electoral College does not seem fair, the president that usually wins in popular vote loses to the vote for presidency, it is considered a non-democratic method for selecting a president, and it is all up to the electors of a candidate. The Electoral College should also be changed to popular vote because it is not the people who are choosing the president, it is the three electors sent from each different state.\n\nThe Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote, because it is not fair to the candidates. This is because most presidents that win the popular vote section of the election then end up losing the presidential vote section, an example of this is when candidate Al Gore recieved the most individual votes when running against George W. Bush, but Bush won the electoral section, recieving two hundred and seventy-one against Al Gore's two hundred and sixty-six. The Electoral college is also unfair to voters, because of all of the states winner take-all system of government, and in seventeen states they did not get a chance to see the candidates. Most people believe the Electoral College is outdated and irrational, a person named Bob Dole, believes that the Electoral College should be completely abolished. Another big problem in the Electoral College is segregationists who do everything to go against certain parties and their candidates, like the time in 1960 a group of segregationists almost succeeded in their effort to get rid of all democratic electors so that new electors would be opposed to John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe Electoral College should also be changed to election by popular vote, because people consider it non-democratic. This is because the voting is all up to the electors selected by each of the different states, meaning that the actual people of the state have no power in the election of the candidates for president. When the people of the state take their vote for the candidates they are actually voting for potential electors who will then go represent the selected candidate, this gives rise to problems like corrupt electors who are dishonest and using cheating tactics, also most states know that their votes will do nothing to help the candidates being represented, examples would be the Democrats in Texas and the Republicans in California. It is also believed that the Electoral College makes potential voters not want to vote at all and they end up not representing their candidates. And most people already have a certainty of the outcome of the election, meaning they already know who will win the election based on the number of votes so far in the popular votes section and the electoral section. The system of electors is also not fair because the people can not control who they are voting for has the electors, and the states number of electors are equal to the number of people on its congressional delegation, which gives big states an advantage over small states.\n\nTo conclude this letter, I again say that the Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote because, popular vote is fairer then the Electoral College, the people have no power compared to the electors and the are subject to corruption with in the system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most current major environmental problems is the air pollution caused mainly by vehicles exhaust fumes . It is often argued that in order to solve this problem , the government should raise the price of combustibles used by vehicles . In my opinion , I fully disagree with this view and believe that this method can be not an effective solution to this issue and there are other special measures that should be taken .\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the government should afford other convenient alternatives to use automobiles. For example , improving public transportation and making it more comfortable and affordable for individuals can be a useful idea because the capacity of public transport such as trains and buses is enormous and the number of used automobiles will decrease significantly and the CO2 emissions will decline also rapidly . In addition , the government should establish public campaigns to aware people of the harmful dangers effects of air pollution on our nature and all of them have to take part of the responsibility to protect the world by taking simple and healthy habits such as using cars only when needed and starting to walk or bike for going to work or study .\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the high cost of fuel can discourage some persons especially those who are not rich in driving . However, the main issue is that some people have unhealthy attitudes toward the environment . For instance ,those wealthy individuals would , most likely , still drive cars , even if the price of fuels become expensive . Moreover , individuals who work far away from their home , would obligatory drive cars . Therefore , despite the rise of fuels , the population still use them for their vehicles.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, rising prices of combustibles do not seem to be an effective solution. Although it would alleviate the problem in some cases , it would not suffice to solve it definitively . That is why governments should consider public awareness campaigns that would help the population to understand the danger of an unhealthy environment and should make alternatives affordable and convenient .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teens are the important assets of a nation; thereby inculcate free social services to the community could shape their future in an effective way and mould them a better citizens. I totally agree with the aforementioned statement for the following reasons explained in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost benefit is that adolescents start understanding the importance and value of a society in which they live. In other words, when the habit of offering social services to the older ones is instilled since the teenage, they would start interacting with seniors and can imbibe invaluable information from seniors' experience. Therefore, juveniles would act more responsible and mature by watching and analysing aged peoples' behaviour. For instance, the environment where we live in affects us in numerous way, so the habit of connecting our seniors is ingrained in them and in future it would become their habit that would be a win-win situation for our younger and old ones.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the free time that juveniles could invest in shaping themselves as a good and humble person could be wasted by roaming here and there. Hence, providing free social services to older citizens them to manage their free-time in a good way. Nevertheless, even in future, the society could get enormous benefits from them, and our seniors would never feel lonely or depressed as their teens are looking after them when they have spare time from their studies.\r\n\r\nTo conclude then, this phenomenon would creat a win-win situation for both teens and aged people; teens can polish and modify their behaviour by following and interacting their seniors while aged people also get a chance to engage with their future generation and less likely to feel isolated and depressed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I writing letter behalf busy people country We come conclusion need want need computers life First need communicate people Second need computers research school work Lastly us kids need computers type essays prompts papers class Communication important everyday life For instance I grandma lives I get see twice year person Throughout entire year I video chat computer whole lot easier flying Without computers video chat grandma I communication one two times year Using computer communication extremly helpful allows many things without travelling like video chatting Another reason computers neccessity reseach easier Many kids nowadays much homework spend internet For I I The internet quick way get reseach Plus research I found accurate book library Computers absolutly needed kids load homework projects need researched Thinks time kids type essays prompts unimaginable Just I type english essay fluently paragraph Final grade I type computer Typing things computer cames school also whole dad frequently typing also typing essays company Many things nowadays order perfect written computer get result hoping In conclusion computers modern devices going live Computers provide great communication everyone around even across country Also make research school become lot efficent Finally computers type papers essays faster Computers neccessity living", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it really all that dangerous to travel to venus?Well some people dont think so and according to the author of this paper he doesnt see much risk in it.The author states that \"Earth's twin is Venus\" this is infering that he belives that since they're so much alike whats the harm in visiting a planet so similier to Earth.\n\nAlthough they are so similier there is still so many diffrences in them,for example; its still un-known what all could be on the planet.However the author states that \"Our travel on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\".This gives you a thought in your head what if a little bit of dangour could lead to a huge discovery.\n\nThis author feels real passtionate in going to venus he has his mind set on travel.He seems to be a real beliver in these things that it takes getting over fear to be able to make it to the big discoveries.Reading the passage you can see that he has some actual evidence of the similarities between Earth and Venus,however;there similarities dont completly block out the dangrous and cost of said travel. If NASA was to send someone up there and there just so happeneds so be some kind of problem,such as;desease or a creature of the un known this could effect NASA in many ways.\n\nNASA would be effected by the money they would have to spend the fix what had happen,they would be losing money and funding for sending someone up there and that person getting harmed.Even though this maybe a great idea,and people shouldn't have to worry based on the fact there could be something amazing on Venus there is still that slight chance.Venus could be a whole planet filled with dessease that desease could travel back and harm alot of people on earth.\n\nAlthough all this worry is in peoples heads yes it should still be given some form of a chance because we shouldnt have to fully fear a place because its new and un discovered.\"Venus is the most Earth like planet\" as the author states.Eventually the worry of space travel to Venus will dial down a bit as NASA advances in technology and the ability to do things in a safer way.If NASA was to stop when the first ever space test had failed we would of never gotten to the moon.These things may worry you but you can't let that worry hold you back.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is a great way for our pollution to decrease. With limiting cars we also will be able to walk place to place without being tempted to drive there.\n\nLimiting car usage will clean up the pollution by a lot. There have been \"efforts in the plast two decades to make cities denser.\" Some places have started to do that by limiting cars, and they have decreased the ammount of pollution where they live. Paris has \"enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" They only did that because days have been so close to near record pollution. They had limited the days people can drive and only after five days the congestion was down sixty percent. If there is a decrease in pollution the air would be much cleaner to breathe for everything, plants, animals and most importantly us humans.\n\nThe other good side of limiting car usage is that we can use other ways to transport and enjoy the outdoors by doing that. We can ride bikes or even walk from point A to point B. New York has started a bike program and it is skyrocketing. People can ride them to work or anywhere they want to go. People say \"the trend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in the percentage of young people getting there licenses. Young adults that are nineteen and twentyone have not bothered to get a license, even though they live in a place where it can come in hand most of the time. How they can get away with doing that is that they have summer jobs not to far so it is in walking distance. Some people have a car but choose other ways to travel from place to place. \"Mr, Sivak's son lives in San Francisco and has a car but takes Bay Area Rapid Transit, when he can, even though that often takes longer than driving.\" There is other ways then taking a car.\n\nUsing other ways to transport is a good way to start cleaning up the areas yo live in. You can clean up the pollution dramaticaly. You can also just walk to where you want to go. If it's not in walking distance you can carpool, take a bus, or ride a bike.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel the use of technology would be a good thing for a classroom.There are many things that would inprove the students abilities and the classroom environment. In paragraph one of this article its tells us how it measures the emotions you are feeling in percentages and lets others know. Using this technology would help the teacher know if the students in the classroom are taking in and understanding the information being put out. With this the teacher can expand the thought or just explains more clearly on what is to be done; the students will not have to worry about not understanding or being afraid to ask a question.\n\nMany people are scared to ask a question or for futher explaination in fear of being made fun of or others just thinking you are dumb.Yes, it is good to ask questions in a class but if you are just having trouble doing so, the teacher will already know and just pull you aside later, also ask what was not being understood.\n\nThe new technology can also help identify if the teacher is doing his or her work well enough, not just giving any old lecture or paper work for no real reason . Therefore, if every student is doing well and understanding everything and teachers are doing their jobs right, students will have better grades. They will have better test scores in class room tests and even standardised tests and that is a big win for the students , parents,and schools.So, with that being said technology will just get bigger and better and help the society and its people to do better even in a class room.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modren time, there are many crims and evreyone has a point of view. In this essay I am going to discuss the reason why crims is beeng evrey our and I will discuss how to reduce it.\nI will start with offenese of at least 15 years. sorlly there are a lot of people in these day are killing a men or a gril he should sbeand his life in prison, becouse if they didnt let them in jail than they will be a serial killer and they will kill a lots of people. And also the money laundering in their types, the Bank should say somthing about this crime becouse there are people don't no about it so wehen the bank see inflating in the bank account they most inform the officil authority.\nI will discuss now about crimes with a sentence of less than 10 years, starting with thief the polise shoild safe people from them, and I see if they put a cameras every our than that will stop them form steling and the secand crime is drugs sell and these is more denger of the thief becouse they are not only 1, 2 they do a groub to sell it like mafiea.\nIn opinion, I see that the crimes start with movie example, there are a lot of under 16 see a movie about serial killer so wehen he becam a man he kills becous this's what he see wehen he was chaild so we should be responsible for what our children see and every person who commits a crime will be held accountable according to what his crime is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys. The Seagoing Cowboys help a lot of people from when they were injured during World War Two. This oppertunity will help you see the real world and helping others just like you want help sometimes. I think it is so fun that I've been on the trip 18 times. If you're in the military, this will show how you serve others and help them. In this great job in which you will also get to travel the high seas! There might be a lot of dangerous stuff that will happen because your in the ocean, like the time that I cracked my ribs and I couldn't go on some trips for a while but it was an an adventure. I was scared after that but I knew that all that matters is if you have a good time and you get to see the great work you're doing. You also get to stop places and get to sightsee places that you might have never seen before, it's a blast. So come join and have a blast as you join the seagoing pirates and help the people that have been injured in other countries from World War Two.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience tough achieve sometimes But nt mean give keep trying succeed rush life become impatient used succed I tell popular virtue story explain patience CAPS year fall big race takes place All animals come It extraordinary event It tradition year one slow animal one first around commute see champion At time fastest around signed year time The signed complete year wat nt pride slow ca nt champion runners get ready shouted announcer The lined CAPS rushed ahead kicking air For slowly waiting behind run like never never looked back wanted win The trophy rightfully ways Right I mean fastest animal continued way slowly surely making way finish line CAPS stopped looked around No one around CAPS noise asked aloud CAPS came stomach caught race nt realize hungry CAPS one little handful berries decided picked handful another another Finally full little bit sleepy I ll take little nap ai nt gon na catch anyways laid slept Little know whole time eating napping catch saw sleeping decided wake case sick continued slowly slowly walk hill inish line woke sound cheering stood The raced finish line late already If patient might", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that employees’ hard skills are least necessary than their social abilities. However, this way of thinking is more common in the old generation. I disagree with the opinion that scientific knowledge is the most significant thing that employees need to have to enter the job place, and in this essay, I will explain the reason for this belief.\n\nFirst and foremost, although social capabilities will help employees to communicate with others and leads to getting promoted quickly in the job places, it can be nothing if someone has no technical capabilities to get the work done. For technical roles such as Data Scientists and Software engineers, even though it is valuable if they can communicate with the business partner properly, the most crucial qualification is to be able to do Mathematics, Statistics, and Machine Learning. For instance, in a company, the higher level in one technical position, the more you are expected to make a quick decision based on the evidence of the analytic results and this is supported by a thorough understanding of the concept of academic theory. Thus, someone will be able to make proper results of every analysis done throughout their work and avoid errors.\n\nSecondly, if anyone has expertise in the technical knowledge proven by their academic qualifications, this will be an added value if they want to enter a workplace. Especially with the abundance of people in the productive ages, there will be a high supply of human resources so it will be beneficial if someone has their own unique value. For example, a hiring manager will hire someone to fill the position of Data Analyst if they also have knowledge in marketing and business proven by their university transcript. This way, they can compete their skills with other candidates and could get the job more easily. \n\nTo conclude, although communication and social skills are valuable, academic qualification remains the top priority to choose a candidate for a job position in the industry.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been a wildly debated innovation since the late 1950s.\n\nI am against the idea of driverless cars.\n\nMy reasoning for being against it is that it is less safe and the computers will not always work.\n\nThe idea of computers and sensors running cars is not as safe as a human mind running the car.\n\nTo start, computers cannot react to situations that are about to happen the way the human mind can.\n\nFor example, at say a four way intersection with stop signs, the human can know to wait for other cars to go and go themselves when it's their turn.\n\nWhereas a computer controlled car may go at the same time as another car and cause a crash.\n\nSecondly, a computer controlled car will give the same amount of attention to easy and difficult situations.\n\nThe computer may not find the situations difficult enough to give a human control of the car.\n\nIn the end of that event there will most likely be a crash.\n\nIn the article it states that computers are set up to send directions and controls the brain of the driverless car.\n\nThose computers may not always work.\n\nFor example, say a storm knocks out power lines and those lines can't work again until manually fixed.\n\nThe facility will have back-up generators, but those will only last for so long.\n\nIn the instance of no power working the computers, the main navigation systems will be cut off and there will be no way of controlling the car or sending a signal to alert the driver.\n\nAnother example is that internet connection can only work for so long.\n\nThe internet could easily weaken or fall and it would be very probable for the car to be given wrong directions, thus sending the passengers to severe injuries or possible death.\n\nSince the 1950s, the innovation of driverless cars has been a huge debate.\n\nIn my personal opinion, I am entirely against it.\n\nFor those few reasons, the innovation and testing of driverless cars should be ditched and cars should continue being controlled by humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They NASA have problem becuase they think a face I was find in mars is create by alien people.Thiy face in internet,movies,magazine,and books I want to ask to people a sure is create by aliens becuase they are story people read for he child they alien do piramid o help hilter in second war.\n\nSOCIAL MEDIA people check old her social media why the people check web pages? do you none da is true?are you sure?Is not photochop?why? in this world people think old is true mayor in web pages they are not true.\n\nALIENS to much people think aliens are true\n\nyes are\n\ntrue aliens is base name is area 51,they have aliens one aliens crash in new mexico in old world they are aliens flying is like U.S.A thinking aliens are theorists I going to say something U.S.A have aliens in area 51 and he killing aliens for experiment.\n\nMARS you can life in mars I think is landform becuase have more big volcan in old galaxy is can land form are robots in mars working getting rocks and another things.\n\nCONCLUSION I thing U.S.A is getting peplo a think aliens are bad want to kill peolpe that is not true and yes is landforming is more landforming mars and NASA none are life in mars about is landforming.What aliens want to say to people?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Living in a world of unusual habits and features would be overbearing and apprehensive for individuals. All people have a structure for their own living while following their beliefs or customs. Human beings have evolved from a variety of settings which has enabled them to create enternal memories or daily habits of their own kind. Individuals studying another environment such as Venus will bring different and numerous facets to their life. People practicing the components of the planet Venus is a worthy pursuit because of the planet's features, the knowledgement that scientists will discover, and the producement of devices.\n\nTo begin, Earth is a contrasting planet that isn't identical to any other aspect in space. However, the planet earth and Venus have obtained similar qualites that would result into a much bigger asssumption. Centries ago Venus had acquired oceans that covered the planet just as Earth. According to the passage, \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Life forms being a possibilty on Venus protrays that any kind of living such as humans or animals can be capable of surviving on this planet. Even though life has the ability to live on Venus, the only obstacle involved with this theory are the animals and human beings adapting to a new way of living. Moreover, people and animals getting use to their new structure of life on Venus will be able to use the qualities that the planet performs as of today. The passage states, \"Today, Veuns still has a some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar featres such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Venus having the same facets as Earth represents that life on this planet will destruct and kind of livng. At last, the studying and the consideration of life on Venus will be an enormous movement for the nation.\n\nIn conclusion, people practicing the components of Venus is a worthy pursuit because of the planet's features, the knowlegement, and the creation of devices.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The unmasking the face on Mars is not a real face. As much as we wish here at Nasa that it was and there was an ancient civilzation on Mars so our budget would be higher but it is not. It is a natural landform, kinda like the Middle Butte In the Snake River Plain of Idaho. We have check mulitple times since there was a little haze in the first photo but we do not fly over it often. It took 18 long years to get to the bottom of this and it is simply just a natual landform. We are certain.\n\nWhen we finally released the image we titled it \"huge rock formation.\" It cause huge attention to Mars which we were indeed greatful for but in the picture it was formed by shawdows giving illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth. \"Face on Mars became a pop icon, was in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and was the talk of grocery store check outlines for the next 25 years. You might think since we found that landform on mars it means there is life on Mars but that is information we do tnot want to reveal at the time. There is just no way that that was created by aliens but here at Nasa we wish it was. As you can now see it is not.\n\nI understand there is a lot of theorist that ssy it was created by aliens but the truth does not lie and that we did not take the pictures at the right time because it was cloudy but once again we went and took more than one picture to make sure we were postive. We thought at the begginning what you did but there was factors that show it is not. We felt it was important because of the tax payers and to get the bottom of it and after 18 long years of questions we finally know it is just a ladnform", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear register I writting urge affect computers people helpful The reason I say computers helpful helps give direction helping economy send messages thru quickly instant messaging Read I could let know things computer helpful I know I said computers help gives direction let explain like You know need go somewhere far nt know act car Well think computer option left Like example I going south nt nt know get So option computer We logged google found direction So first reason read next Okay okay okay know way economy rediculous Away computers helping economy instead people driving go pay bills could pay online Because s saving money state wo nt pay questions get gas cars often get rebuild Like example gas station near house getting rebuilt something went wrong pipes costing us say nt away could save economy Its time move next reason Listen s reason computers helpful Im known instant messaging This helpful nt house phone cellphone wan na tell family member friend something really bad happened could tell thru instant messaging CAPS would surely would get Like one time friend aint house phone cellphone somebody trying brake house instant message let know could get send cellphone And I called mom let know befor I know another massage coming thru saving CAPS reading computers helpful helping give direction save economy instant messaging could agree saying computers helpful Its still opinion read minds think read say nt true", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To the fact,parents are the first teachers to their kids.it is commonly believed that storytelling by parents is really important.Whilst,others argue that reading books and watching television can be done by the younger generation and parental intervention is not required.In this essay,I am going to discuss both views and share my personal opinion.\r\n\r\nParents are the first persons who spend more time with children than anyone else.So,during the course of childhood,if parents are telling the stories taking some time out from their other work,children will be motivated towards the good manners and they will carry it when they grow.As we know,the first impression is the best impression.Furthermore,apart from morality,the bond between the parents and children will become very strong which creates a lot of positivity in the children.For example,students who spent their childhood with parents behave well in school and on the other hand,youngers who did not spend their time with their parents act oddly.\r\n\r\nIt is also argued that,nowadays,children are capable enough to manage their work,including,reading books,watching television of their choices like cartoons or movies.If the parental impact is missing then it may lead to several negative ways on the children.In other words,children give more importance to television to parents.For an instance,a past survey,reveals that more than 60 per cent of children prefer to spend their time in front of the television by enjoying their favourite program than seeing their mother or father.\r\n\r\nIn a conclusion,parents killing time with the children is very important for their children personal growth rather than allowing them to do their activities of their own.It is also suggested that the more time parents spend with children in teaching them stories,the more good manners their children learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join this program called the UNRRA or the United Nations Relief and Rehabiliation Administration. This program goes over seas to go and help people rebuild there country that was destroyed by the WW2 war. If you like animals and traveling to new plaes this is the place to join.\n\nThis administration is a very good program.\n\nYou really get the best of both worlds because you could try something new and you get to visit countries that you have never could have. There was a fellow named Luke Bomberger and, his friend asked if he wanted to go on a Europe cattle boat. He took the oppertunity and it changed the whole life for him. He even said that you would find it a hard time to not have fun. On the way there You constantly took care of the cattle and that always kept him busy Luke said. On the back he had a blast with all of his new friends they played: table tennis, baseball, volleyball, fencing,boxing, reading, whittling, and other games that helped him pass time.\n\nThis trip will change your life. You should really join this program. It really shows you how lucky we are to have what we have now( technology and other fun games). It is also a fun thing to do with all of the other entertaining activities. If you do it you will be saving thousand and thousands of people but having fun too. You should really consider joining the UNRRA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do u believe thatis was really made by alen or is this just a normal landform? This is just a normal landform because when the picture was on web surfer it was reavling as a natural landform. The 3 reason is because malins team got a closer look and got absolute resolutions, what the picture actually shows, and it has become a pop icon.\n\nFirst reason is because when malin and his team got a close snapshot of the face they got absulute results. First, in the story it says that amlins team got a better photo of the face than the vikings. This explains that when vikings took the picture and let people or scientist assume wat they wanted to. Another example is when they got the image and it was revealing as a natural landform proving there was no allien monument. This explains that they were provin that it wasnt a monument made by the aliens. Third,\n\nit was compared to the image span taken by the vikings in 1976. This explains that they were trying to compare the diffrence between the pictures to prove it was a landform. The vikings may have got a picture but malins team got a better picture to prove it.\n\nSecond reason is becuase what th picture actually shows. First, it says that it is equivalent of a butte or mesa. This explains landforms common around the american west. Second, it reminds him of most middle butte, or snake river plain of idaho. This shows that he know wat else it looks like comparing to an earth formation. Third, the lava dome formed an isolated mesa around the same height as the face on mars. This explains that he is comparing it to wat it looks like from landforms to the face on mars. Could this picture actually help prove wat it is.\n\nThird reason is becuase it also has become a pop icon. First it has become a pop icon in movies, books magazines, and\n\nradio talk shows. They might of did this to get peoples opinion on what they think it was a landform or created by alliens. It also had people thinking that NASA would rather hide the conspiracy theorists. This explains maybe why they should of keep it as a research and left it out of magazines and movies and stuff. Third NASA wished there was a budget and ancient civilization on mars. This explains that NASA is trying to defend their budget and wished that ancient civilization on mars. Should they have left it as a reasearch or it was a good idea to put it in movies and stuff.\n\nI believe that it is just a landform that was made as stuff went by it. The 3 reasons are malins team got a closer look at it, what the picture really shows, and it has become a pop icon. This is just a normal landform because when malins team got a closer picture and got absulute results.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Learning history need not be restricted to only understanding civilizations or ancient culture. These days people of some countries are inclined towards understanding the history of their homes and buildings that they reside in. This essay would be elaborating more on the reasons for the rise in this interest area and the sources from which people could obtain more information related to history of a building. \r\n\r\nFirstly, understanding the history of a building would help in gathering information on how old the building is or what materials were used in the construction, thereby helping people to understand the durability of the building. Moreover, since people put in a lot of their savings while buying a home, this would help them in gauging if buying a property would be sustainable in the future. On the contrary, another factor for the interest in history could be due to the increasing rate of crime and paranormal activities across the globe due to which people are being more cautious under such circumstances. \r\n\r\nThere are numerous sources available to help out in researching the history of a place. Although there are many documentaries and articles available online, it would be more insightful to get in touch with the local population to obtain information related to the area. Since the local people would have been residing in the neighbouring areas for a longer time, they would be aware of any abnormal activities that has happened in the past. To know more about the building composition, one could always reach out to the civil engineers or construction workers in the area. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe that the easy access to any information online has resulted in people being more cautious and aware of the events happening across the world which has led to the rise in interest and research in minute details such as the history of a place for which more accurate information could be obtained from local sources rather than relying on online information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lots of people might think that all this new tech is stupid and not helping you out at all. But when you look into it you'll be suprised to see how much this tech can actually. I think Facial Action Coding System would help so much in school CPU's, Most kids would barly be getting bored in class and actually be intrested in the subject for once. because lets be honest we all get bored when we just stare at the computer doing the same thing over and over again.\n\nI think this new type of technology needs to be in classrooms right away. In ( Paragraph 9) it states that \" Classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". but \" Then it can modify the lesson\". This proves to us that kids will always stay intrested in classrooms. So when you are intrested you're also paying attention, and when you're paying attention students are likely to get that much of a better grade in that class.\n\nBut with every good thing also comes with some flaws.Other people think all this new technology is going to distract everybody from their learning, Or the kids wont be focused on thier grades. Well im here to state thats incorrect. I say that because in (Paragraph 6) the whole point of the technology is to keep people intrested to what they're doing in class. In the text it states \" If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow, but if you frown, the next ad will be different,\" That just proves that their should be no way schools should turn around from this piece of technology.\n\nAll of this new technology is really helping out the world, and I think the Facial Action Coding System just adds on to that. it keeps people intrested, and it doesnt even bore people. Thats why I agree with adding this Technology to schools right away.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of people think that climate is the most an important factor in the way people live. However, others think the local economy is a major factor. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, climate can affect people's meals and their occupations. Because it survives in every climate situation. For the more, most individuals in some places are people can not able to grow foods like vegetables on wether. For instance, growing plants in major cases in water. some countries' summer climates don't have much water. They can not grow plants. It affects not only plants but also affect animals like fish. Another reason is that people choose their careers according to the weather. Some individuals choose fishing as a career if they live near the jungle. Moreover, like a woodcutter, they choose their career to earn money.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the living situation of people can affect the economy. If the economy of the country is higher than it comes to whether they can change and provide its requirements for citizens. For example, Dubai is one of the hottest countries but although they have fuel. But they had huge weather. Today most the population lives in a luxurious lifestyle. Moreover, they can develop countries with Goble economies that have young workers with good education systems. If the economy of countries is good if they can provide better education as well as more people will succeed in their jobs. Therefore, the economy of the country well increase.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the climate affects people's foods and their occupations. Therefore I believe that the economy of the country is more and more key.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles Blimps dock way many risks taken make mast dangerousI think mast opposed many risks one would flying low two caught fire hit lightning would explode people would get seriously hurt OR mast could snap As said The yet unsolved problems mooring air ships fixed mast height made desirable postpone later date final installation landing gear CAPS Clavan means fact many problems mooring air ships mast nt safe go right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that disbanding electoral college would be in favor of most peoples decisions. This way everyone has a chance to vote decisively and not having electoral college decide who should be the president of the united states. Electoral college dosent let the people decide who they want to be president. It lets the lets the slate of electors decide which is totally un fair in my decision. People are the ones who elect which president they feel will make the United States a better country. Maby the slate of electors have a different decision in mind than what the people of america think about who should be president.\n\nPopular vote would be much better in my decision because it gives everyone a chance on picking there president and not having other people pick it for them. Say there was a tie in the electoral votes, than they would be passed onto the house or reps were state  delegations vote on the president and not the people of america. There is a greater quantity of people than there are slate of electors and house of representitves. The electoral college is completely unfair to voters because in each state candidates dont spend time in states they dont think will help them win presidency. We the people dont have the ability to choose who we want as a president and we want our freedom of being able to do that. There will be less conflicts and anger from the people if they disband electoral college.\n\nBut in many eyes electoral college are in favor to those people. They think its right to have the slate of electors vote for who they think would be a better president. The electoral college does avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. But it could lead to more pressure in the election process, which could greately complicate the presidential elections. There for saying that electoral college isint a good decision to have. People should decide what they want to have for this country. They should be able to take a mark and say we dont want electoral college anymore for the United States.\n\nIt would have to be weighted in an election of the people to decide what they want to have. Electoral college method of selecting a president may have a big impact on people by not choosing the president they want. Saying in the peoples minds that Electoral College should be disbanded and gotten rid of because it depends on what the people of the U.S. choose, not the slate of electors. We the people of the United States should have the freedom to choose what will make this  a better and stronger Country!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage. The majority of people that own a car have a lot of stress due to gas money and paying for the car. Owning a car is a serious expence. There are other types of transportation that can be useful for the people.\n\nAccording to Source 1, in Vauban, Germany 70 percent of the people that live there do not own a car, and 57 percent sold a car in order to move there. People were starting to realize that when they owned a car they would always be tense. After getting rid of the car, they have been much happier and less stressed.\n\nSince there are less cars in the streets of Germany, people have stopped and realized how beautiful everything was. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, is now reilved as she walks the verdant streets where she can hear the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children.\n\nIn Paris, France due to the cold nights and warm days, the car emissions have been trapped by the warmer layer of air. Sometimes, weather can be the effect of something bad happening to your car. In the everyday world, people have been killed and have been in serious accedents. Not only because of the weather but also because of the lack of resposibility and concentration it takes to drive a vehicle.\n\nAs said in Source 3, in Bogota, Colombia many people do not drive cars. The majority of Colombians hike, bike, skate, or take buses to work or wherever they need to go. The goal of this is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Carlos Arturo Plaza, a buisnessman, said \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" while he was riding his bicycle along with his wife next to him.\n\nAs people ride bike or hike or even just walk around their city, they can see and learn many new things just by being more aware of their surroundings. Cars have been in this world for a long period of time already. It's time to take a break from the madness and start realizing how beautiful life is and how beautiful it can be by not destroying it with such a machine. Not only will there be less stress, but the world will be a lot more safer than it was.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars do seem like something nice to have, but I don't think they are a good idea. I am against them because technology can always go wrong somehow, people don't actually need them, and if there's nothing wrong with cars right now then we shouldn't have to change them.\n\nFirst of all, technology can always go wrong. Nothing in the world is perfect. There are always going to be mistakes. Technology can go wrong somehow and cause even more problems. Driverless cars are being invented so that driving will be easier and safer. Even though that's the idea, they might just end up causing more problems. For example, what if the car glitches and doesn't notify the driver that they need to be driving the car? This can cause a crash.\n\nSecond, people doesn't really need driverless cars. They will just be a luxury item that would be nice to have. Cars are meant to help people get around places faster. It is a humans responsibility to be alert and cautious when driving. We can't always count on others to be cautious when driving a regular car, so we won't be able to trust that they will be paying attending in a driverless car.\n\nLastly, if there's nothing wrong, why change it? There isn't anything wrong with the way cars work. If there isn't anything wrong with them, then why are people trying to change them? For example, if you have a certain way you study and it helps you to do good on tests, are you going to study a different way? Probably not. This is because there is already a way that is effective for you.\n\nOverall, I don't like the idea of driverless cars. I don't like them because something could go wrong, people should be more responsible, and there's nothing wrong with cars so we shouldent be trying to change them. This is why I am against driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The rider affected two men giving wrong directions The rider followed advice instead taking right way ended taking long way He getting thribiy He also came face face snake Then finally found nearest town got help", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello there i am here to convince to invest in the new tecnlogy of self driving cars.as the glossaruy i just had you read shows the many advantages of driverless cars.Now i know that there are laws that make this investment a bit more risky than others but with your deep investor pockets laws change. I mean how could you not love the idea of self drivin cars you spy on your custmers easer than ever! Mean theres\n\nno one to stop you after all the govements in your pockets and the consumer barley care at all\n\nnow lets look at the downsides of course. As manfacters you be blamed for acidents now we get around by making ,People skyscraper tall contract so ob tuseiy worded that rhe average man wound't no that hes actully responsible for accidents.Through may that calls some puplic outcry.And in car entertaiment your those of you that own large media companys how can you disagree with that idea.And others her think about that adspace that opens up.\n\nin concliusion how can you disagree with any the ideas presented here they show huge market that you can get in the ground floor. for the prophet margins are unheard of .and like the iphone you sell thing over and over again to the stupid populaceso i hope that my presentation has waited your opinions in favor of me and a wonderful day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would the use of technology to read emotional express be valuable in class?\n\nThe use of technnolgy is very useful in th classroom, it helps students with many tasks. Using tecnology to read emotional expressions would be great way of helping teachers knowing how their student feels during class or during a lession. The process of using to technology to read emotions is when a computer conducts a 3-D computer model of the face. The face has 44 major muscels that the computer memorises. Eckman has classified 6 basic emotions \"happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness\".\n\nMost facial expressions are universal, even though many people show many kinds of emotion video imagry can track these kinds of facial movements. When you look a friends you can tell how their feeling by the look on their face. But most people struggle at describing how they feel. Using this technology at school will let teachers know if a student is having a bad day and they can help them feel better or make their day better. Classrooms can start by having a Classroom computer letting the teacher know if a student is understanding the lession by their facial expression. If most of the class show a facial expression that they are not understanding the lession the teacher may change the lesson to make sure students learn it. Most students in class room are to shy or pershaps scared to answer or question thinking they will get it wrong, with new technology teachers will know how the students feels about gettin answers wrong or feeling shy in the class room.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "studing venus can be very dangerous with how hot it is and how its the hottes planed even though murcury is the closest to the sun and the amountn of carbon dixide is really high. it is worth exploring because what if soething happens and we all need a place to go we cave a plane that is close enogh that we can go and it wouldnt be that hard. it could also not benefit us with the way the air pressure is if we get there and the air pressure is to high then it could kill us instently and there could be no point and going but if they figure out a way to get past the air pressure and make it safer then there are many reason to go and explore it and send a team of astronots to venus and let them set things up and do testing how the climat is and if there is a way to do the tsts that they need to to see if there is a way to live there and eventually build a whold nother home on that planet as \"back up\" planet. we need a back up planet that is closer than anyother planer and is we get on venus then it will be eaiser to look at other planets and explore and study them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of safer driving. They can benefit not only the drivers, but they can also benefit the enviroment around them. Driverless cars could fundamentally change the world. The development of driverless cars means that driving can be smarter and safer.\n\nImprovements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more driving tasks on their own. With growing technology, driverless cars could have many features that improve the safety of the car and the driver. This allows for a better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". Driverless cars could handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. This could result to better and safer driving in traffic jams or heavy traffic. Also, special touch sensors make sure that the driver keeps hold of the wheel. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\n\nGM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. This keeps drivers aware to proceed with caution and to drive with safety around objects.\n\nThe development of driverless cars means that driving can be smarter and safer. These cars can make a safer driving enviroment for the driver and for other drivers as well. Continuous growth in driverless technology can lead not just to smarter cars, but it can also lead to smarter roads. In conclusion, driverless cars can benefit driving by make it safer, better, and smarter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Saeng vowes spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test The author concludes paragraph hibiscus brings comfort home confidence Almost familiar now This quote story shows things starting right starting feel comforting making relize living similar used live When around hibiscus brings back memorys flowers used lived Both mother daughter appreciate flower found similar back home For example story mother says Its flowers arent pretty strong enough make cold months here This shows appreciate similarity old hibiscus In conclution author concludes story paragraph helps readers understand importance girls memory used live", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral collage should be disbanded.  Not only is it unfair to minority party voters, but it also is unreliable.\n\nThe electoral collage consists of people voting for an elector, which in turn votes for a presedent.  This may sound like a good idea, but in reality, it over-complecated and scrambles things. This has lead to a less wanted canidate able to win the election. During 2000, presidential canidate Al Gore recieved the popular vote, but not the precidency, due to the proccess of voting for the electors, rather than the presedents.  This led to Al Gore recieving 266 electoral votes, and George W. Bush winning 271, therefore electing a less popular president. Not only that, but the ellectors being voted for may not even vote for the canidate they say they will.\n\nThe winner-takes-all strategy was placed to reduce the chance of ties and have the canidates focus on taking over the swing-state votes, but an unintended consequence was the reduction of voting from minory party votes, for example, when a Democrat in Texas or a Republican in New York votes, they hardly get any say, and therefore may stop voting.  A popular vote for presidency would allieviate this problem and make it able for anyone from a state to have an equal voice in the state.\n\nPopular vote would lead to members of different states having the same amount of power, while the electoral collage leads to unequal representation.  Because of the Senate's two representitives per state, people in less populous states have more power.  For example, California has 2 Senate representitives and 35 million voters, and Wyoming, with a much smaller population, has the same amount of representitives in the Senate, leading to a Wyoming resident having much more than a Californian one.\n\nAll in all, the ellectoral collage is a bad idea.  Not only does it ensure inequallity, but it also leads to inaccurate voting and discrimination against a voter who votes for a  minority statewide canidate.  To trully be fair to all voters, the popular vote method should be implemented to resolve all the problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood passage It give child better life Next Cuba good place They get start new life Another reason get Better jobs hear They get live house They also help refugees Finally refugees celebrate arrival country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When fossil fuels are burned up it causes severe harm to the atmoshpere and is harzadous to society and everything around us .\n\nThere are many disadvantages and advantages for using any type of veichle and burning up fossil fuels . Cars can take you wherever you desire faster than any other type of land transportation but in the process of traveling in your car, your car is in the action of burning fossil fuels that later on will turn into harmful gas which hurts the enviroment around us . Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, drving less and getting fewer licenses each year . Every year we should decrease the amount of cars being used because excessive car usage can be a big hit to the atmoshpere and your wallet . There are more advantages of limiting car usage than disadvantages because humans dont really need cars to naviagte their way in life.\n\nExcessive amount of car usage can be really harmful as well to the people driving on the streets . There are likely more accidents if the population of cars on the streets increase because if one tiny crash occurs and the streets are over popluated that one tiny crash can now become a huge crash with the other vechiles around it . Cold nights in France and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions and due to this lots of smog was created and the roadways were shut down to its lack of vision , this could've been provoked if diesel fuel was'nt over used in France. Limiting car usage is a great factor because there so if it happens , less car accidents will occcur , the action of global warming will decrease , money being spent on gas will decrease and our atmoshphere would'nt be all gassed up with burned fossil fuels .\n\nMany people also suggested that everyone should cut down the car usage and all the fossil fuels being burned up because it causes lots of stress , Heidrun Walker is a mother of two and a media trainer stated \"When i had a car i was always tense . I'm much happier this way.\" As a result to Walkers statement , many people agree with her because when you have a car you have to worry about buying gas and what if you dont have money for gas, what if you dont make it on time and you need to go pick up your child , there are so many ''what if's'' and problems when having a car . When not having a car you can save up lots money in your bank account , you can take care of the atmoshpere by not burning and using up fossil fuels and you can decrease the percentage of you getting into a severe car accident .\n\nLimiting car usage brings alot of advantages to yourself and everyone around you and also some disadvantges . Many people can benefit from not having or limit the car usage because it can save you lots of money and take care the enviroment your living in . There are many solutions to get somewhere rather than using a car that when using fossil fuels to harm the atmosphere it raise the percentage of global warming .  Limiting car usage can help save the planet , cause less deaths around the world , save money , reduce the percentage of global warming and allow living things to breath oxygen and not harmful gasses that can hurt the respiratory system .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Narciso Rodriguez Narciso seems get certin mood tward parents mood happyness greatfullnessThorought hole Narciso constantly thanking parents everything done gave better life His parents gave Jobs thier houses left ther family thier friends return go give thier son better life witch constantly saying greatfull honored parents give everything Over All thorought The sets mood happiness gratfull ness tward loving parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars by Google's modified Toyota Prius, the smart-road system and the Traffic Jam Assistant.\n\nThe first positive thing about the driverless car is the Google's modified Toyota Prius. The Google modified Toyota Prius has a postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, and a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror. It also has four automaotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an intertial motion sensor.The important thing about the google modified Toyota Prius is that it has a spinning senor on the roof. It uses laser beams to for a constantly updating 3-D modelof the car's surrounding.\n\nThe second postive thing about the driverless car is the smart-road systems. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. The car read positive nad negative polarity as messages in binary code. These systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to exiting roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\n\nThe negative thing about the driverless car is the Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can steer, accerlerate and break itself but requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.The human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs. Manufacturers are alson considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\n\nThe author uses postive and negative things about the driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is Rashaad, Do you ever wonder what seeing venus whould look like? Or is it a worthy pursuit of dangers? Well today im going to tell you but first i am going to give you some backup information about our lovely twin venus. Venus is one of the brightest ponits of light in the night sky. Venus also has an nickname becuase of its brightness which is called the evening star. Venus is often refferd to as the earths twin becuase of its terms of density and size and sometimes the closest. But venus tempatures average over 800 degrees farherint and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on earth. That is some background information so you can get an idea of what venus is.\n\nBut the real problem is that venus has a worthy pursuite of dangers heres why as in the text it says that,¨Humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned,and for good reason,since no spacecraft surivived the landing for more than a few hours.¨ This shows that venus is very dangerrous not even a space craft chould land on it. Now lets find out why. The reason why venus is so dangerous becuase A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dixoide blankets venus. Also on the planet´s surface averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure is like 90 times grater than on earth. This is problay why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\n\nThe author uses great detail to back up why studying venus is a worthy pursuit of dangers. becuase in the text he shows use the dangers that are already on venus and how it is super hot and that the weather is very diffrent from earth i can support this becuase in the text it states that,¨Beyond high pressure and heat,Venusian geology and weather present additional impdeiments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earhquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. this shows that he is giving us proper details to show why studying venus chould be worthy of being dangerous .But thats not all The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. In My opionon that is a sucide mission becuase we don´t even have that good of technolgy for humans to barley even have any oxygen to breath on there.\n\nBut the study of all this may not be left behind becuase humans want to explore all of the planets one day so this is good but dangerous trying to study Venus. But im going to give you some more information about the studying of exploring venus. So there solution to try an test this study out is to have a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling venusian landscape. But they say it whould still be hot it whould at least be 170 degrees Fahrenheit. But a vehicle hovering over venus whould avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by stying up and out of their way as it says in the text. But NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. But they have tired lots of exermeints as it says in the text like this one we it said that, Some simplified electronics made of sillicone carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus´s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\n\nBut the moral of this essay is to show you that the author had some good detail to show that studying venus is dangerous and a good thing if we find some things out. but all of this like the weather one day we are going to find out how we can fix all of that and how we are going to get better technolgy to fix all of this up so we chould land on mars safely one day. Also don´t forget that NASA is still doing some research on the planet so problay later in the future we might have alot of things to problay to help us with alot of things in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of these cars because those who own one would never know if the the car would stop working and will crash. Also waiting fo the driver to take its part too when driving, Although having a driverless car would be dangerouse to those who own one and the community.\n\nHaving a driverless cars would be a good idea but can cause an acciendent. In the text, it states that, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover libability in the case of an accident.\" If those who owns a driverless car got into a acciendent the new law would have to order to cover the damage. Also by having a diverless car, if the car have stop functioning well, it would cause someone to get injured. An example from the text is, \"If tecnology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer.\" Having that car, those wouldn't know who to blame. Driverless cars can cause problems so it wouldn't be a good idea owning one.\n\nThose who are thinking or has a driverless car can get into problems that they aren' aware of. Those people can cause an accident and can be dangerous to those around them and themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would living in a world without cars be like? It doesn't sound very pleasant. Getting from point A to point B would be a definite hassle, right? Well, not exactly. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the United States was back in January 1995. he number of miles driven here in the U.S. peaked in 2005 and has steadily dopped. Car usage is not onle dropping here, but around the world as well. Paris banned cars due to smog that was polluting the city. But, is using cars less all that bad? Nope! Here's why.\n\nTo begin with, it can help reduce pollution around the world. Source #2 states \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partialdriving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" That's how bad the pollution was in the City of Love. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined 22 euros because of using their car. \"Congestion (traffic) was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog. The smog rivaled Beijing, China which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" Sounds like a really bad title for a city that attracts many tourists every year. The ban allowed for the smog to clear.\n\nNext, limiting car usage can benefit the current efforts to reduce greenhouse gases. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\" Source #1 states. If car usage is limited, it can help reduce the greenhouse gases being emitted into the atmosphere by a significant amount. \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United State's greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitious assist from te incipien shift in American behavior,\" Source #4 states \" Recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars and driving less.\" Good going, America!\n\nOf course, many people might say \"Why would not having a car be beneficial to me?\" It certainly can be! \"It's a good oppurtuinity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza in Source #3. The stress of having to be careful with your car or face the consequences from the insurance policies or lawsuits can finally be lifted of your shoulders. You will be rid of the struggles of the rush hour, as well as the need to be having to pay for gas (which is not exactly cheap).\n\n\"Different things are converging which suggests that we are witnessing a long-term cultural drift, said Mimi Sheller in Source #4. This is a good thing to be a part of. Soon enough, we'll be seeing people walking and riding bikes from point A to point B, like they do in Vauban, Germany.  I don't know about future complete bans of cars here in the U.S, but I believe they will be far less common. When someone such as Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, is in on a business plan for a world where personal vehicle owneship is undesirable, you know you have to be in on it!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The choice of who becomes president should be left to the Electoral College. The people are the ones who vote for slate electors and the outcome is fair. This is why the decision of who becomes president shdould be left for the Electoral College to decide.\n\nThe first reason why deciding the president should be left to the Electoral College is because the slate electors are voted on by the people. Each party chooses a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. There is the possibility that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the popular vote. Even though that happens very rarely. Voters are needed when choosing slate electors because a single persons vote may effect who is chosen fo the position. The Electoral College is decided on by voters and wheather or not someone votes may change who becomes the slate elector for your state.\n\nAnother reason the Electoral College shuld remain is because the outcome of the vote is fair to voters. A presidential candidate, required by the Electoral College, is to have a trans-regional appeal so that if he or she is favored by one region the residents of the other regions do not feel as though their votes do not count. The weight in the political balance that large states lose is restored by the Electoral College.  Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay attention to the campaign and are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\n\nThe decision over who becomes president should be for the Electoral College. The Electoral College is chosen by the voters of each state and has the larger chance of the outcome being fair. The people choose their slate electors and trust them with voting for the party's nominee. these are reasons why the Electoral College should be the deciding factor on who does and does not become our new president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Narciso Rodriguez narrator shown happiness throughout memoirOne example author showed happiness thinking cooking They admired parents helped teached cook They would hear music back adored heritage backround In story says My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking When authors still live parents relatives would come eat fun To reflect back memories made author happy In story says Countless extended family members came went often someone staying us temporarily able get back upon feet CAPS example author thought time parents moved They thought lucky parents come nice place In story says came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that aliens are real, but they're not! Many people believe that this photo is caused by aliens. They don't know the true story of this and that it has to be caused by natural landform. There's no proof that aliens are real and no one really proved it at all! People just assume that it's caused by aliens because they see a big hole, but it's natural landform. Until I see proof that aliens are real then I will believe them, but right now there is no proof at all.\n\nMany people think that it's caused by aliens, but it's not. It even said, \"NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation.\" It may look like a face, but that's just how it is. Conspiracy theorists don't even know what they're talking about. They just assume things, but they never show proof. NASA even showed proof that it's not caused by alien, but it may look like it was caused by aliens. It's just a natural landform.\n\nMany people waited to see if the natural landform was actually caused by aliens. JPL revealed that it was a natural landform and that there was no alien monument after all. Many people still believe that it's caused by aliens and people even showed proof that it's not caused by aliens. Not everyone was satisfied that it was a natural landform because, \"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face.\" There really hasn't been a single one proof that aliens actually exist.\n\nAlthough, the natural landform does look like an alien, but that's just how the natural landform is. The picture was actually showing us a butte or mesa, which is a landform that is common around the American West. So, this is common here, in the Earth, so this has to be common in Mars. They even said, \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" So, it was provened to be a mesa.\n\nMany people thought that this picture was to be an alien. Many people, including NASA, even showed proof that it wasn't an alien. NASA at first did think that it was an alien, until they showed us proof of what they researched. People even showed us proof that it was just mesa, which is common to happen. It may look like it was caused by an alien, but it was just a natural landform that looks like an alien.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nWe all are here today to right a letter to argue in favor of keeping the Electoral college, or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. The Elector College process consists of the selection of the Electors, the meeting of the Electors where they vote for the president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. It consists of 538 electors 270 elector votes is requiredto elect the president.\n\nSo? witch one do I think is the best. I agree to keep the Elector College because things are running ok for now but it think the the people of the United States should have a little more say so in the disitions made in america because we are the american peopele and we have the right to speak are mind, and if we dont think somthing is a good idea we should be able to tell the congrees we dont belive in that and choice somthing eles that more people agree on. The only thing i see wrong with every one getting to have a say so is that not every one agrees with one another.\n\nI do agree that a bigger population shold get more elector votes but i dont thing it i far but it is what it is and i dont have a say so im ok with it. the only thing i have to say is its not right that the bigger populated states get the most etention they are the most important but i dont feel its right all states should be equal no mater there population size.\n\nI dont think that they shold change the Election of popularity because instead of voting for the right thing we could just vote for the presedent that is offering the best stuff, and when presedents promise us stuff it dosent alwasy men there going to keep that promise. they keep promises to every one and they cant keep a promise to one person with out breaking that promis to another person. like i sai i think the elector college should just stay the same way as it is with thoughs little changes because it is working. but things stop working at some point and when that time comes we will need a new system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it was talking about Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is actually a planet it has a nickname called Evening Star.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun often referred to as Earth twin. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. They are trying to land a spaceship on Venus its been three decades that a spaceship has landed on Venus. Its becoues the on the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. They are studying Venus becoues long ago Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. Venus has rocky sediment and includes familier features such as valleys, mountains,and craters. NASA is trying to send men up to Venus to studying it but they are trying to bulid something that hovers over Venus and they can studyng it. NASA is working on other approaches to studyng Venus.\n\nVenus is a planet to know about becoues that might be the next planet we might be living on. I think its a good thing to study on Venus becoues its a planet that might be closes to ours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think computer something bad A computer help many things could help learn chat friends entertain A computer get sucessful life helps learn lot things computer engineering Computer engineering job pays good money fix computers challenging first look search websites ll find answers Chatting number one thing kids adults teenagers good bad way good phone bill wont high save minutes bad also ruin eyes remeber dont get close screen The computer fun millions websites go To fun example three main ones I go fun They tons games kids adults I Have proven point computers bad help learn lower phone bill also fun Yes I know might take exercise time away hurt eyes cares make time limit time exercise Do get close screen hurt eyes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Face on Mars: Conspiracy Theory?\"\n\nAn \"abnormal\" figure was seen on Mars by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. They saw the figure have almost a human like face. NASA noted it as a \"huge rock formation. . .which resembles a human head. . .formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth. Soon, The \"Face On Mars\" was a pop icon. It was in movies, books, talk shows and more. Later, everyone just instead accepted it as a conspiracy theory.\n\nA counterarguer would reply with seeing as the marking has features of a face, it should be a face, right? Well, not exactly; \"the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing. . .a natural landform.\" Yet, not everyone can say the that the world wide web can say is the most reliable source. In the picture it really shows a butte or mesa, not an alien face. Even though, this may be the case, there are a few individuals who still believe that the marking were left by martians or aliens roaming the planet (Mars).\n\nIn conclusion, the \"alien sighting\" did recieve alot of attention even if it was only a rumor. People took what they are familar with on others, such as eyes, nose and a mouth, they were able to put to get a face. The \"Face on Mars\" sparked up rumors, story and conspiracy theories on the topic. Though the theory was proved to false, we still wonder if aliens and/or martians exist in our galaxy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]