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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The computer blinked life image blonde haired girl filled screen It easy find life thanks actual girl explaining Going library would nt filled one priceless information human interection Computers nessessity life soceity wishes grow expand They supported teach hand eye coordination give people ability learn faraway places allow people talk others online Firstly computers help teach hand eye coordination Handeye coordination useful ability usod excel sports In recent survey kids felt hand eye coordination improves computer use Even simple thing like tying build skill Famous neurologist stated article last week CAPS computer strength When computer automatically process eyes see command hands hand eye coordination improve people sports baseball basketball If someone wa nt become better sports d need turn computer Once people become better sports re likely play become healthy In reality computers help exercising instead decreasing Additionaly computers allow people access information faraway places people If someone wanted reasearch d need type search would presented would link forever search countless things Also ability learn cultures make peole peole cultures understand others something Increase tolerance people Computers resourceful tool help people every different aspect life Lastly computer technology allow people chat Computer chat video chat help different nations Bring good terms places help us understand story comes something happend people go computer ask actual citizen take matter Also video chat online conversation cut expensive phone bills No one wants pay economy Another good point acess family members scaresly visit It help connect within family Oviously computers useful aid todays era advancements push world foreward better place Computers help people help teach handeye coordination give people bility learn faraway places people allow people talk online others Think world computers technologicall advancements The world would sectored unified contact people scare information even The internet like thousands librarys put together Nobody would know much nations news would travel slower Is kind palce want people live", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally disagree with diverless cars. Driverless cars is a cool concept, but there are varias a sundry amount of reason why this is a poor idea. Reason one. If driverlesss cars are a thing then Taxi drivers or Uber drivers will go out of buisness. People would rather have a car with no driver than a car with a driver, and just imagine the amount of workers being laid off from their jobs. How will they be able to feed themselves or their family? Reason two. The amount of money that it will cost to make a fully running driverless car will be absurd. The number could reach in the millions since the technology will be so advanced. Reason three. How expensive will the cars be when they are released? Since the car would be made with so much tecnnology you would think it would be expensive to the public. I would believe the price range for a car like that would be in the hundred-thousanths. Reason four. In the passage it says that th roads needed to be updated since the car uses certain tech. Do you know how much taxpayers would need to give the governemnt to fix them up to a certain degree?\n\nEven though I disagree with driverless cars there are numerous amount of possotive reasons on why drivrless cars could be a good idea. Reason one. Think on how much a driverless car could save on fuel than a car driven by a person. Reason two. It's more eco friendly which is good, but yet would still be expensive. Reason three. A driverless car would be really enjoyable while actually owning and driving it.\n\nIn conclusion, I personally disagree about driverless acutally being on the road in the near future because it would be too expensive. Plus it would hurt the economy since all these expenses would cost tens of millions. Driverless cars would put hard working people who just want to make a decent living out of a job which woud raise the un-employment rate this country was trying to bring down.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir positive I believe mood positive paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Also I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly whole memoir lot positiveness That mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face showing on Mars has been proved to be a natural landform. The Face is a landform because landforms are very common in Cydonia, the only reason the landform looked like a face was because of the shadows visible from the camera, and there was no other evidence found around the face. Also all research for the Face was done by authorized NASA scientists, and the research was believed to be done very carefully.\n\nIn Cydonia it is common to have natural landforms, so the Face was easy to be spotted as one. And as the cameras took pictures from different angles, the scientists could see it wasn't anything that spectacular. What made the Face so intresting and made people have false accusations was what made the Face an actual \"face\".\n\nThe reason that this lanform resembled a face was because of the shadows. There was shadows on the landform that resembled a head, eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Scientists even stated that the Face \"looked like an Egyptian Pharoah\".\n\nEven if the Face was found to look like something that was a living thing does not have an effect on the research that had been completed on this landform.\n\nTo make this statement that the Face is in fact a landform is the amounts of research done by NASA scientists. From snapping numerous pictures to keep resuming to study the Face, NASA has had many ways to prove their point. And after placing the first image on a JPL website, it was settled for most people- the once known as \"Face\" was a natural landform. It was no sign of Aliens or an Alien monument anywhere to be seen on Mars.\n\nAnd the last statement to be concluded about this discussion is that there was nothing else found near the Face to thinking there is any living activity on Mars. NASA has also concluded from the pictures that there had been no objects in the picture like \"airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks...\" So there had been no activity to prove to be nothing more from just a landform.\n\nIn the picture of the Face, it was also evidenced to resemble a mesa or a butte, another kind of natural landform. These kinds of natural landforms were even almost the same height as the Face on Mars. And all of this evidence proved that what used to be thought of as a real face is now catagorized as a natural landform with some shadows that gives it unique look.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when nobody buys cars because nobody needs them anymore? I certainly can't. There are just to many roadblocks, to many\n\ncomplications. Cars need to be safe and practical in order to be on the roads, and I just can't imagine that anyone can make an autonomous car that fits these standards in the near future.\n\nSo far\n\nno one has come close to a car that can drive itself. They only acomplished driver assistance. The car by itself doesn't have the human skill or judgement it takes drive safely while being prepared for anything. If a deer or another car comes out of nowhere and the car doesn't stop in time, or breaks too hard, then someone is likely going to be hurt or worse.\n\nAnd that leads to the lawful side of this idea. Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at alll times. As a result, it is illeagal to even test these autonomos cars. And it would take a long time to convince the State government to remove these laws.\n\nLets go back to that earlier scenario. If someone was hurt as a result of technology failure, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer? This topic could cause court battles and hearings that could clutter up the court system.\n\nI belive that the existance and the use of autonomos cars will not be put in effect anytime in the near future. There are many potential saftey problems and legal hoops to jump through. Plus nobody is close to this technology yet. While it is a nice idea, we are likely to never see this technology in our lifetime.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Joining Seagoing Cowboys\"\n\nIn 1945 Luke was offered to go to Europe with his friend Don and he knew that this was an oppertunity of a lifetime. When he got there he signed up for \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of people and animals. Luke thinks that it was the best experience of his life and that it would be to you to.\n\nAccording to the text, Luke stated that on his trips he was on a cattle-boat and that it was an amazing experience for him. The text also states that besides him helping people he got to oversee Europe and China, and if you joined you would get to see even more. Luke also got to tour a excavated castle in Crete, so if you went you would probably see something even better.\n\nThe text also stated that joining the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" you get to care for animals during the crossings and you had to feed them and give them water to keep you busy. Also going to join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" you have to be prepared for dangers at sea, because if your not you might have something horribly happen to you because you might get the nightwatch job and have to check things and make sure everythings okay and might fall or slip in the process.\n\nAlso, when the trips were over you were able to relax or play games while the animals had been housed for a little. Also it opens up a world to people and it makes you more aware of others in different countries in need. It also makes you feel like you accomlished something that makes you feel grateful that you got this oppertunity to make others and yourself feel loved.\n\nIn conclusion, if you join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" like Luke did then you might bring joy to people's life and to yours. Just know that if you give up an oppertunity to join, then you might regret it for a lifetime, because it makes you feel like you did something that you wont forget. Who knows, you'll probably even persue it and wont give it up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that the international trade and cultural exchange between nations brings significant benefits for each side, while some others think that the tendency causes the loss of their traditional and cultural values. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon overshadow the disadntages.\r\n\r\nThere are a number of reasons why some people believed that developing business and cultural cooperation has an adverse impact on their national identities. First, the globalisation poses a serious threat to traditional and culture value of a nation. This can be explained by the fact that multinational corporations often use their national image and culture to advertise their items, which trigger curiously potential customers that come from overseas. For example, younger generation in Viet Nam tends to imitate lifestyle and fashion of Korean due to the influence of commercial channels, which poses many challenges for nations on how to maintain their nation identities.\r\n\r\nHowever, In my opinion, I believed that the positive outcomes of this tendency are immense. First, Multinational companies create a wide range of job opportunities for local people, which help improve their living standard and boost the local economy. For instance, Apple company has provided thousands of jobs for workers in Viet Nam, Which help them avoid the risk of unemployment and live more comfortably. Second, International commerce and cultural exchange are considered as a golden chance for local companies to flourish in the global market. This means that, In order to compete with international companies, local companies have to be more creative and innovative, they also have much more opportunities to approach new technology and modern machines from other countries. A a result, they can product higher quality and cheaper items, which help them become more competitive with multinational companies. Finally, this trend gives people the chance to explore and understand deeply the culture of other countries. In fact, working in the multinational corporations, A person would expose different cultures and languages from their colleagues who come from other nations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this tendency poses challenges for countries on how to prevent the negative influene of foreign culture, In my opinion, the cultural and businees cooperation brings considerably economical and social benefits for nations", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You have to join Seagoing Cowboys! This gives you a chance to trave around the world.\n\nIt also give you a change to make a diffrence, and help people in needed. You can go to places like China,Philipines,Germany,Eupore,and South America. You can visit all this wonderful places if you join the Seagoing Cowboys. You have a chance to save life. You can be the diffrence bewteen life and death to some. You can meet the native peple of forein lands. You can try diffrent foods and meet new people! The chances are endless! You can see things you never seen, and learn things you never known. This can all happen if you join Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nLike I said \"Beside's helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and Chine.\" You can have fun and help others at the same time. People in other countrys need our help. That's why we need more people. That's why we need people like you!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Good day state senator in this letter I would like to talk to you about changing the Electoral College to a popular vote. Even though the Electoral College is a good way of selecting a president. This meathot has his flaws, under the electoral college system the people that vote are not voating for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. And I think that the people that vote shude vote directly for the candidate they have chousen.\n\nThis makes more sense that voting for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledge to the candidate.\n\nI think at the most basic level the electoral college is unfair to voters. Since the voter are not voting directly for their candidate of choise, I personaly dont think this is the best way to go. The popula elections provide a better way of voting for president. Since it means that the people that vote a voating directly to the candidarte and not the electors. The popular elections is a safer an more fair way to vote. By thid we could evate the disaster factor, for example the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century and the system allows for much worse.\n\nBy this I want to thak you for taking the time to read this letter since I imagin you mus be veary buisy. Thank you for yout tine directly...\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to get hit by a car that had a driver that wasn't driving? I can explain where that idea had came from.\n\nThere is a new car coming out that can assit you on driving. But would you really want to take that chance.\n\nHere are simply a few ways why I would apose this idea. The chance of getting destracted while having something to assit you on the car. The other reason why\n\nI would oppose this idea again is because the liabilitity of the acciendent. And the last reason would be just too many distractions all around and risk everything around when you can just drive normally. Also known as being lazy.\n\nFirst, the thing on with this driverless thing is crazy. They are so many things that can get in your ways and mess you up. All it takes is a couple of seconds to end up in a wreck. and all of that can be avoid by just simiply driver yourself around.\n\nSecond, with all that drama with the driverless thing. There would a lot of complaining about it. And say if someone got an injury by one of these driverless cars that google has came out with. Whose fault would it be the driver or the manufacture that made the car. Who will ever known because people would lie to save themselves and also get a lawsuit on the people who made the car. and tha would save a lot of time and money if they would have just stuck to the regular car.\n\nLast but not least the people who make the car will have a ton of lawsuits on their desks. To save all this time they should just keep the cars the same and work on preventing those cars even safer before they decide on doing something else. this is what i would call pure lazieness. In my opinoin we should not what to take the chance of injurying someone.\n\nIn conclusion, they are unlimited reasons why we should not have these driverless cars. So suport this answer and we will save money and have a safer enviroment. And really just rethink about the whole idea. But going with my instincts to help the people who do not know about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some people believe that playing computer games is detrimental for children, others claim that it has some benefits in terms of their development. In my opinion, playing computer games should be considered positive for children’s development as individuals.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is obvious that spending a lot of time in front of the screen and playing computer games can bring lots of problems for children’s health, especially their vision. When kids play video games being slumped in front of the screen for hours, it definitely makes their eyes dry and, therefore, destroys the protection layer. Furthermore, in some cases, young people will face other severe issues connected with losing their vision clearness, so at the end of the day, they will have to wear glasses in order to correct their vision and see the objects around them clearly. Another key problem that could be brought about by playing computer games is addiction. Children do not have highly developed brains to protect themselves from the mental issues that they could face by being in virtual reality non-stop. As a result, many parents ought to monitor their children in order to prevent them from being addicted and committing suicide, for example. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when children spend their time by forming strategies in order to complete the next level of the game, they surely become more responsible for the result and gain important skills such as strategic thinking and tactic vision which might be helpful for them in their study in the university and the future life, and I agree. By being involved in the process of building a strategy and being responsible for the results, children will be aware of the future consequences of their failure. Moreover, playing video games encourages some young people to be interested in coding and software development and, probably, choose it as their future major in university.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although lots of people vary in their opinion, I strongly believe that playing games on the computer may provide children with many benefits in their future adult lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it tells the readers that it would be cool to see how people are feeling even when they're trying to hide it. A lot of people hide their feelings so people don't constantly ask \"what's wrong\" and more similar stuff. It makes people more upset when they're getting asked that all the time.\n\nThe facial expressions could show people what the others are feeling but not all the way because people hide their feelings so they look happy but could be sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. That would be helpful because students don't always like asking questions and if you have this software, you'll be able to tell they're stuck. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\n\nI think having this software could help a lot but not really solve things. If people are upset, they don't want everyone knowing they're. So faking a smile throughout the day so you don't get questioned, is easier than being asked all the time. Being asked is nice and everything but I think it just makes people think ab the situation more and they mostly get more upset.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the development in the field of robotics has increased rapidly and its prevalence can be noticed in many places. Many believe robots are crucial for human development whereas some argue they have a negative effect on society. This essay would discuss both views with empirical evidence and conclude with my opinion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, artificial intelligence is one of the greatest milestones achieved by humans. They can be used to study places which are inaccessible to humans. For instance, the world-renowned rover Curiosity, was sent to Mars for a detailed analysis of the planet's features. Without robotic technology, it would take another decade to achieve this feat. Hence, this technology plays a vital role in the development of mankind.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robotic machines have replaced men in many jobs. For instance, in many food and packaging industries, programmed machines are used as they are more efficient and fast when compared to a worker. Furthermore, a robot can work for long hours without any breaks, thus increasing in productivity of a company. This scenario can lead to an increase in the unemployment rate causing a detrimental effect on society.\r\n\r\nTo sum it up, robots have a pivotal role in future development and the need for them is inevitable. Although this development has a downside, considering the future technological advancement, robotic science and technology are essential to achieve it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I patient I wanted psp So time I wanted psp bad I ask parents said I wait till But I really wanted I decided wait long time I finally got psp", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ultimately evident entire concept Al Empire State building strategically flawed It Al Smith s dream dream always reality In theory Mooring would constructed dock drigibles However eventually revealed docking station Empire State building would never possible The reason Al Smith s dream could never prove reality Smith builders hit many obstacles One obstacle faced construction location When landing zone ft ground level extremely tough test complete perfect landing zone much tougher ground level Also location safety high wind speeds altitude It higher altitude get higher air pressure violent air currents CAPS making unsafe environment Next another aspect location fact densely populated New York City mistakes great number casualties would expected Lastly large obstacle Smith builders faced technology s amount technology engineering certainly unparallel technology prevalent today s society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would keep it the same because it would put more work on the poll workers because they would have to count all the votes for each president. If they miss a few votes the wrong person could be elected as president. I would rather them keep it the same because its simple, faster to calculate, and easy to read.\n\nI say its simple because you just have to count the votes and make an elctoral vote and then if u have the most electoral votes for that state it mean that you won the vote in that state. At the end it matters who has majority of the electoral votewhich is 270. It'sbasically the same as how much states you've won to see who will be elected as president.\n\nI also think its faster to calculate because when you do electoral votes you would see how many electoral votes yu have out of 538. The majority of electoral votes is 270 so, If you have majority of the 538 votes you will be elected.\n\nIt's easier to read electoral votes because you are adding and subtracting only 538 people, but if you are counting from popular votes you would have to add up millions and billions of votes that would be miscounted. If it's miscounted the wrong person could be elected for president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using a new technology called Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions, is an excellent program. It could benefit in many ways, and help others with real life situations. This program would help a lot and be very beneficial to everyone who uses it for any reason. The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it will focus on if students are actually working, capture their attentions if they aren't paying attention, and can provide the same curriculum for education without feeling like no one knew anything.\n\nThe first reason why the Facial Action Coding System is valuable is because it can tell when students are not working. By knowing who is not paying attention and are unimpressed with the work given, we can change that so the lesson can be taught in a different, but understandable way. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr.Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"'This statement shows the reader how it could grab the attention of the student and redirect them towards teaching and and learning the lesson. It would be a great use in the classroom, if not used in the wrong way. \"By weighing the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece).\" Everyone can identify the broader emotions people have on their face, but one can tell what's on the inside. But with this program it can identify the mixed emotions, and tell if they student seems confused, sad, etc. We can only see what is on the outside, one may be carrying a facade that they are happy and understand everything, but in reality they're falling deep into depression and sadness, and don't understand what the lesson is.\n\nThe second reason why the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in a classroom would be because it captures one's attention and can teach the same lesson in a different, but understandable way for the student. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\"notes Dr.Huang.\"So computers need to understand that,too.\" Computers can understand through facial expressions and muscle movement how the person is feeling and re-evaluate what they are being told. This could possibily save lives if one thinks about it, in the long run. If one is feeling sad constantly the Facial Action Coding System would catch that and try to make the person happier and better.\"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This could make anyone's day better as well as give them hope for a better future or achieve a goal. Capturing one's attention is class is hard, especially for teachers who deal with extremely young kids who talk constantly, or annoying older kids who don't listen. But using this will prove other wise and capture the attention for students based on their feelings and emotions.\n\nThe last reason why the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to the classroom is that it can re-evaluate and redirect the lesson, comparing the students reactions. They can change the way it is taught so that the students understand the topic or curriculum better. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This would be a great tool to use in class, because it could help the teachers out in many ways, giving them the hint he or she needs to explain in a better way to improve their students understanding.This could also increase better rates of grades and tests all around by giving more and more knowledge to students about important subjects and topics. \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but also may even help produce them.\" This Facial Action Coding System is a great program that can interact and communicate with students in a completely new and unique way. Changing many individuals opinion about school and education. This shows hows the computer itself can redirect what it is doing because the student is not understanding the topic or lesson. They could do this multiple times before actually getting the student to understand what they're talking about. Which is when they achieve their goal.\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can specifically tell if the students are working, capture their attention and change the lesson accordingly, and provide the same lessons or curriculum knowing that every student understood what they were doing. It is a great tool and very beneficial for teachers and students around the world. It is crucial for teachers to know if any of their students did not know what was going on, but with this program it can help identify the problem and find a solution to the conflict. This could bring a huge difference to the world of education and help the kids with disabilities and problems along the way. Giving everyone an equal opportunity with education and a better future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph emphasize willingness Saeng overcome obstacles adapt new life The hibiscus discussed ending quote describes Saengs new hope determination succeed United States For example text states fine petals splayed back reveal long stamen tipped yellow pollen Saeng felt shock recognition intense almost visceral When Saeng found plant seemed together past Vietnam future overwhelmed The hibiscus represents newhope seemingly impossible situation When hibiscus blossomed world open new life waiting begin With thought realized end story reader understands Saeng found new stability eventually succeed In addition text says it felt smooth cool hint velvet toward center known would feel Saengs past memones could reached hibiscus new served immense inspiration The author ended story Saengs new recollection hope prove indeed found something helpful stable new world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in the story the author explains several resaons on why studying venus is fasinating and interesting despite of the danger it presents. venus is a very earth-like planet and has many features like earth. researchers still to this day are working on innovations that will allow the machines that they send to venus last longer. this shows that many people still have an interest of visiting venus and learning more about it. there are still ways this can happen.\n\nin the story \"the challenging of exploring venus\" the author belives that studying venus despiting the dangers presented is a worthy pursuit. in the text the lists his reasonings for his belief. he states that venus is a \"earth-like planet in our solar system , he describes earth-like features that venus has still till this day. \"the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, moutuntains, and craters\". he also explains that venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nin conclusion of this there are possible ways that venus could be studied overcoming the dangers that might come with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Honestly I think they shouldn't change the Electoral College. I have three reasons why they shouldn't change the Electoral College. This Electoral College has made this nation historical,it would be too much work to change it,and it wouldn't be the same if they changed it.\n\nChanging this Electoral College wouldn't be the best thing to do cause it's made this nation have so many historical moments. We had so many presidents that changed this nation. George Washington was probably the most remembered president. Washington fought for our country in wars that happened long ago. He made this country have so much meaning to it.\n\nAnother reason why they shouldn't change the Electoral College is because it would be too much work. It would seem very tiring to change the Electoral College. There are so many rules and amendments that they would have to change. They would also have to change the number of votes that the president has to get. I think it would be better if they left the Electoral College the way it is.\n\nThe last reason why they shouldn't change the Electoral College is because it wouldn't be the same. There are so many great Amendments that should remain the same. It would be chaos if they changed the Amendments. Plus a lot of people would have even more opinions about why they changed the Electoral College. The Electoral College should remain the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph many reasons One saying everything gets back normal thats going take test Second would nothing else say back way wanted For instance building house blizzared came would stop said would continue nice weather In conclusion author concludes story paragraph many reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting affect cyclist energy In setting turns irds hills every Cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some would argue that museums should be for fun while others say that it is a place to provide knowledge by showing the antiques. This essay below will discuss both views along with my opinion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, when museums are designed for fun people visiting it will gain more knowledge because they tend to retain more when they are learning with entertainment. To exemplify, significant numbers of national and international tourists from across the globe are travelling to the United Arab Emirates to see 'The Museum of the Future, which is full of fun and educational at the same time. Therefore, it gives the kind of energy needed for the study. However, in my opinion, entertainment disturbs the flow of study as they will use all their given point for enjoyment so, the result will not be satisfactory.\r\n\r\nMoreover, museums are placed which has their motto to teach students by showing the real objects that have been preserved there. They can learn about the antique objects and can compare the transition in present and also can predict for future. For instance, almost every school in Nepal take their primary and secondary level students to 'Gorkha Museum' to show how Nepal was unified in the 18th century which also displays various ethnic and cultural heritage of Nepal. So this is becoming the easiest way to teach history about Nepal's unification. Hence, I believe museums are the best place to learn and their goal should be preserved.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, visiting museums provides a short time frame and if that time is taken for entertainment then learning will be poor, thus, personally, I believe, the museum's purpose of providing effective education should be maintained.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist bad ways The rocky road steep hills made peddle harder The old people made go rocky way The temperature desert made thirsty ran water fast He said When I tried drop two flavor battery acid The heat could killed anytime For example Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could drop heatstroke gorgeous day June This ride man took Yosemite dangerous ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates many moods In text first mood created caring paragraph says countless extended family members came wentand often someone staying us temporarily able get back feet My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This shows caring would let anyone family would nt care The next mood showed grateful paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrafice This showing grateful says sentence also tells reason grateful These moods memoir created", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Developing countries often have stagnant economies which prompt the sheer number of highly skilled workers to emigrate to advanced countries with a view of having well-paid jobs. I believe there is little doubt that skilled emigration at a high level may wreak havoc on their home countries. In order to alleviate the situation, some fundamental measures, most importantly boosting infrastructure, should be taken.\r\n\r\nA huge brain drain can have profoundly negative impacts on developing countries and exacerbate the situation. One of the major issues is the reduction of well-educated workforce who are critical to the productivity of a country, stunting the economic growth. This, in turn, adversely affect the earnings of low-skilled workers. The lack of doctors, for instance, can put a strain on health care services; consequently, there is a high likelihood of there being an increase in the number of patients. Further fallout is remaining people at home may lack hope as a result of seeing the significant outflow of professionals. Ergo, the well-being of citizenry in these nations is strongly influenced.\r\n\r\nTo restrict the brain drain and tackle the pertinent aforementioned problems, poor framework in all sectors, which is the root cause, should be improved. It stands to reason that infrastructure is the backbone of any country as it generates jobs and boosts economic growth. Therefore, only by investing in development projects, such as providing reliable research facilities, can specialists be motivated to stay. One promising avenue that this can be done is the contribution of foreign investors to such projects if the least developed countries provide this opportunity to attract them. The economy would be flourished by dint of adopting these approaches, thereby encouraging citizens to not only pursue higher education but also be more optimistic about their future. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I maintain that skilled emigration has a knock-on effect on the economies of poor countries, with the remaining people’s hopes being dashed. Hence investments in infrastructure should be high on the agenda to address relevant pressing problems", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the auther evaluates his statement pretty good. The way he evaluated it was great he worded everything just right. He want to put people on venus cause maybe in the future the worlde could end and venus is the only thing closest to earth features. I think venus would be worthy but the tekmpetures are harsh and all the gases. If we can find a way to overcome all of the negative things about venus i think it will be a perfect place to live.\n\nVenus is literally called earth twin. It's called that because they are so much alike in many ways. Humans have sent numerouse spacecarfts to venus but the condition is too harsh for anything to land on it cause i just melts everything. Venus has 97% carbon dioxide blankets and its tempeture averages over 800 degrees. NASA has worked on trying to get a spacecraft on venus many times and it wasnt worked and that why they were all unnamed and no one really knows about them. They thought of a idea of a blimp being 30 miles about the planet but the drawback of that is they can't get the samples they need. Also today\n\nvenus has earthy like features and maybe at one point in time life lived on venus.\n\nNasa has plans to go to venus but the conditions are to harsh. They tried maney times to go and they didnt make it. Venuses living condition ar eto harsh for any living-thing its just to hot and the gases are too bad. They want yo send a blimp there that hovers 30 miles above it but then the problem with that is they can't get any sapmles of anything and then the rip would be a waste.\n\nVenus is tghe most earthy like planet of them all. if we had to live on a planet we would live on venus but the conditions are to harsh. Venus is two planets away from the some but it is still really hot. Scientist think that many, many years ago venus was covered largely in oceans just like earth today. Venus is one of the hottest planets but its still the one mostley like earth. Atmospheric pressure is 90 times stronger there then on earth and it could cush a submarine meant for diving the deepest parts of the ocean.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people should become a seagoing cowboy because you do alot of things. Like raising some cattle like cow and horses. Play games on the way home like vollyball. Plus you can visit places like italy and china. You can feed cattle or work the night shift its fun.\n\nYou can raise animals. Like cows because there are alot of young cattle on the boat. There is 335 plus horses on the cattle boat plus loads of food so you can feed them which is kinda helping them live so they can help other people that were affected by world war 2. Plus the cows can give them meat and milk so they can feed their famliys.\n\nPlus you can have fun on the way home by playing games. One of the games are baseball/softball which is played in the place the horse and cattle were. one other one was table tennis which is basically ping ball but was called table tennis. We also did tornaments with the table tennis. There was also boxing. reading was also a option with whittling wood was also a nother free time.\n\nOne of the best reasons for going on these trips are the place we went like china. You had time to tour the city you went to on the boat. so you go to new places on these trips like to castles fameous citys and things you can think of. I went to so many place on this trip so i hope you do too.\n\nIn conclusion i say you go on these trip because they are fun but dangerous i cracked a few rips on a night shift and almost fell overboard too. so don't get to excited because you can get super hurt on these things because i didn't get hurt to bad does't mean you can't get hurt that bad. But i still think you should get signed up. Its super fun but you can get super hurt. ive made alot of trips and helped alot of people more people than trips.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Books In world today everything showed every place look Libraries used many people people go research study even find interesting book read One problems poeple exposing personal things I believe libraries censorship Why libraries one Here reasons One reason censorships libraries smart idea younger children search books Any parent would tell would strongly dislike idea child reading something detailed adult like A library place children young adults senior citizens go escape reality somewhere worried book might pull shelf If libraries still want keep certain books stock start age limit books Limiting age books stop younger audiences viewing Another thing could age limiting parents could set age limit library child allowed view certain books Also another way would help stop offensive viewing parents looking children reading watching listening Parents could help keeping eye child Cenorships wonderful way stopping viewing adult like issues More public places start system The world needs understand audiences nt ready reality yet", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author starts off by saying the percentage of the different effects Mona Lisa has in her smile. He states that she's 83 percent happy , 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The use of the new technology called \" The facial action Coding System'' in my opinion does not tell you how your honestly feelings. There is no way the computer can see the way you are feeling , just by smiling at the screen does not mean that you are happy. People smile at the screen all the time and has different feelings. Weather the computer can determain how you feel the only person how actually knows how you feel is you and yourself only. A computer can not recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel. There is no way the computer will let you know how you feel , the article is basically saying that just be smiling or looking at the computer it can determine how you are feeling. Once getting to paragraph 3 it starts saying how the facial Action Coding System works they start off by telling us how the process begings, \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face: all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" From that sentance in the article it is basacilly saying how the computer has a 3-D sensor on it, and when placing your head infront of it it will scan your muscles and from there determine the way you are feeling. As humans we perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. It is hard for a person to determine how ypu are feeling with just facial expressions , for example I could have a smile on my face but inside I could be feeling sad or mad and only I would know no one else. So the 3-D sensor they have on the computer to determine the way you are feeling is not true , a computer can never determine the way you are feeling it can never say that you are 5 percent happy and 90 percent sad , it does not work like that. Only you and you only know the way you are feeling and thats it. So no a computer can not determine the way you are feeling it can not determine the percent of nothing only you know how you feel and nothing else knows how you feel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a modern and high-tech society, some universities and colleges choose online classes as a substitution for face-to-face courses, which has both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both positive and negative aspects. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there is no doubt that with online courses, students are allowed to study at home or wherever they feel comfortable and suitable. It is easy to attend in virtual classrooms their technology devices with a strong internet connection anywhere in the world. For instance, some prestigious universities, including Harvard University, and Cambridge University have online courses, both free and pay fees, in many fields. They also provide specific curriculums and learning paths. Not only the convenience but also students are possible to save time on transport when participating in online classes. Besides, the availability of online learning tools can promote students' independent learning. It creates good habits and motivates students, especially freshmen, to feel familiar with self-study - a popular learning method in tertiary education. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, online learning might not offer learners face-to-face interaction. Firstly, students might find it uninteresting when experiencing a lack of interaction and engagement because of the limitation in providing activities or group work. Consequently, students can easily lose their concentration on the lessons and the effectiveness of their learning is decreased. With classes on campus, the more activities can be created in class, the more attention of students have and also more learning efficiency. Secondly, with some professional or key courses, teaching and learning online might not deliver full knowledge. Students become more passive when attending virtual classrooms and then receive the basic and fundamental, not acquire the core knowledge abundantly. Lecturers or teachers also might find it difficult to deliver the lessons and interact with students. As a result, students will not have a good day learning, and lecturers will work unproductively.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, online learning has pros and cons. Universities and colleges should balance between two kinds of classrooms to offer learners flexible learning opportunities, which one they feel is beneficial and convenient.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir mood varies In paragraphs three four giving mood example explained paragraph four My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us It shows right sentence gave people need needed difficult times In paragraphs six seven mood thankful happy sacrifice parents gave Because future In paragraphs one two mood happy comfy happy home family love given life These various moods memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College was created with good intentions, but it has many vital flaws which allow for very unfair outcomes. The electoral college is an outdated, and irrational way to choose the president of our country for the next four years. It allows for silly tricks to be played - you can win the presidency with a mere fourty percent of the country in support of you. You can completely ignore some of your voters, as you're guaranteed to either win or lose heavily biased states, and you can gain massive numbers of electoral votes due to one more vote for a side in a state count. The system even allows for massive corruption to go unpunished, which is one of the biggest offenses in our country.\n\nThe electoral college's biggest flaw may perhaps be its ability to elect a president that doesn't even appeal to half of the country. According to source two, Al Gore \"won the popular vote but lost the presidency.\" Al Gore had a signifigant victory in popular vote for the nation, yet still was denied presidency due to the electoral college's vote assignment system. If we did away with the electoral college, each and every person would have an equal say, and would be equally important to the candidates. Even source three agrees that the trust in our electors is occasionally betrayed, albiet rarely.\n\nCurrently, the candidates can completely ignore portions of our country. Republicans have a strongly biased voter base in the south - so much so that generally speaking, the Republicans never have a single rally or major ad. According source two, states like South Carolina almost never vote Democrat. It's so rare, that if you lost, you offended the group that has voted unquestioningly for your party since the system has been put into place. If the electoral college system didn't exist, the thirty percent of southern Democrats would have a say, which would make advertising and campaigning all over the country much more vital.\n\nThe electoral college system also allows for an astonishing amount of corruption with no punishment. If a state manages to vote one hundred percent Democrat, rogue electors can still cast their vote for the Republican candidate - and this isn't against the rules. We're essentially putting the next four years of our country into the hands of 538 electors, and holding them to the lowest possible degree of accountability. Again, source three clearly states \"and that trust is rarely betrayed.\" While it's rare, it's still more than possible, and can be quite disasterous.\n\nSome may argue that the electoral college system puts into place a system of certainty and safety, for both the candidates and the people. This, however, is quite far from the truth. According to source three, \"the residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised.\" While this source claims that ignoring biased parts of the population, this is quite far from the truth. People are being entirely ignored by the powerful politicians that are supposed to represent them. That doesn't sound very democratic and fair to me. People begin to feel discouraged and that their vote doesn't count, and this is quite close to the being the case. Only one-half of elligable citizens voted in the 2012 election, which means that one half didn't. Half of our country isn't bothering to vote in the elections because the electoral college system completely negates their vote.\n\nOur country prides itself on being \"the land of the free, and the home of the brave,\" yet our people are being discouraged at every turn by our government. The popular opinion of our people is that the government is out to get us, and there's not much evidence to contradict that. The electoral college system allows for the government to be run by men who didn't fairly win over our country, and isn't accurately representing our views. It's rife with corruption, and allows money to buy power. If we remove this system in favor of a popular vote election would encourage more popular policy, make our government closer to the people, and have little to no negative impact on our country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be a good thing, I totally agree with them. People wouldnt get into as many recks and the other person couldnt really blame it on them for crashing. As shown on TV and in movies they look really cool. These cars would use half the fuel they use now and are far more flexible than buses. Even though they would need a lot of work to accomplish and a lot of time, they could really work out.\n\nDriverless cars would need a lot of sensors, cameras, GPS, etc. I would imagine they would cost a lot of money because that is a lot of electronic things put into one car to make it amazing. Although some cars already have sensors in them, they still dont cost as much as everything else that needs to be put into them. They could help the drivers out more than they can manage alone. There would be less recks, less cops on duty and less money paid to the state.\n\nAntilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the driverless cars, but technology is so far now that it is starting to catch up to reality. GM has developed seats that vibrate when your about to be in danger. In some cars we have now, the camera beeps when we are too close to someone or something. To me that helps out with a lot of people who are too short to see or dont pay attention. It tells you when you need to take over and put your hands on the wheel. Even though they're called \"Driverless Cars\" you still need to be paying attention and not texting and driving because it might not work like you think it does. You still could crash or hit someone or something. Don't take your eyes off the road!\n\nI totally agree with the Driverless Cars, they could set us high up and keep us safe! The human driver should have control the whole time they are driving, and should pay attention. Who knows if the sensors really work? We've been working to get cars like this for a really long time and will hopefully have them by 2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Adolescence is the crucial stage of interpersonal development and learning social skills. During this age, the young brain should be occupied with positive thoughts to be an integral part of the community. Therefore, some people thought that if teenagers serve the community in their spare time without any financial benefits, it will benefit not only the community but teenagers as well. Indeed, I do support the above view and will discuss in detail the significant impact of teenagers’ active participation in community services.\r\n\r\nWhile working with experienced people who are dealing with sparking social issues on daily basis, the teens will gain confidence to deal with unexpected trials in their own lives in the future. For example , if a youth always blames his parents for not providing his luxury items but when he starts volunteering work in the local homeless teen project, only then he would realize how same-aged youngsters are facing hardship for shelter and food due to the family crisis. Secondly, It is well said that Juveniles’ emotions and experiences are permanently imposed on their brain throughout their life. Therefore, to direct these emotions and the learning stage towards social connection will be fertile in the future.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, the community is always seeking the support of juveniles as they are full of energy and active aspiration. For example, due to disability and age -related, illness some seniors cannot avail of some services from the local authorities but minors should come forward to help them with gardening , social activities and medical transportation. Furthermore, teenagers’ new innovative ideas bring the development to the local community centres . For example, most families are disadvantaged financially, emotionally, and psychologically. Consequently, they are unaware of the recent technological developments. Teens help them how to use new technology such as mobile phones, computers and how to use social media to communicate with their families and authorities.\r\n\r\nHence, I do understand that other activities are also important for teenagers but at least a few days or hours should be spent to serving the local people. A family is the part of a society which leads to a city , then a state and a nation. Therefore, The youngsters are the strongest pillar to built not only the local community but a strong nation as well .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some will agree with the point that luck plays a vital role to achieve endeavours. Simultaneously, some will deny this and will stick to talent and hard work are the key to achieving success. My opinion is both luck and hard work is important in fulfilling any task.\r\n\r\nLuck cannot be measured, but it is useful because even we are doing much hard work , at the right stage or situation we may encounter challenges with the environment, natural calamities, or physical injuries like accidents or ill health. So some will stick to the fact that stars should be aligned perfectly for doing any task. If we come across sports, sportsmen will work harder to play a wonderful game, but if any ill health comes before the game things will change. To accomplish the tasks or to achieve our goals luck plays a vital role.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, hard work and talent are the keys to achieving our goals without luck. If we plan everything prior to tasks, then we can definitely achieve goals. Luck is something that is not under human control and thought. \r\n\r\nMy opinion is luck is a belief and hard work is our attention and vision to achieve our goals. These two should work collaboratively as one will enhance the physiological standards like stress relief as the other will enhance the physical potentiality in fulfilling the tasks and also in achieving goals. One should always possess and believe in both luck and hard work .py life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would this new tchnology benifit teachers and their classes, or would it just distract the students? This technology could be valuable in a classroom. It would be able to tell if the teacher is boring the children or if the chldren are interested in the topic being taught. If the children are not interested the topic could be changed or taught in another way that would interest the children. The technology would analize each childs face and if the majority were bored it would alert the teacher that the children do not like the topic or would rather it be taught in a different way. If the children were excited about the topic it would continue to be taught in the same way. I also believe that this technology could be a distraction to the students. They may be more focused on the technology in the room and make faces at it, which would cause them to not learn what is important for them to pass the class and even graduate. The children could also mess with it and mess it up or break it, which would be a disaster and cost a lot to fix. The children may even have to pay for damages which would cause their family a great sum of money. So in conclusion, this technology could be either good or bad. I believe it's mostly good though, the kids would no longer be unintersted in learning new topics that are important for their education and for them to graduate or go on to college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Have ever forgot book needed homework Did ever miss newest episode favorite show Well things solved using computer The computer gives us things need Whether s information games online friend chatting websites The computer necessary society today Countless times I desperate need information If I m school report animals I go computer search whatever I want There s need driving town library searching countless books encyclopedias I think waste time basically everything need twenty foot away And s house There need search hours biographies If need know state capitals find time To s life saver Not computers help information make school projects much easier In experiences I ve needed pictures school projects Instead drawing internet save time effort All need print pictures However essay s let s say supposed ten pages wants write With computer type half time Then done print even send straight teacher But s finished save thumbdrive use computer want All s huge help My final reason computers good serve instant pleasure Computers millions games kid play free Also many website like let interact friends If need tell something need phone Plus miss certain shows want watch music videos websites As kid I m usually never home sports school activites If I miss something almost definitely going computer You nt wait week replay episode Who wants In end I think computers benefit people around world No driving libraries going buying games The computer everything want free Basically I think computer huge time effort saver every household needs It definitely benefits society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, they are a part of alot of peoples everyday life. They alow you to get around easly whenever you need to, but what would you do without them. Some communitys are giving up cars like in \"[Vauban] Germany [where]...[s]treet parking, driveways and home garages are generaly forbiden\" (source 1). This may sound crazy but \"57 percent [of Vauban's families] sold a car to move [there]\" and \"70 percent [] do not own cars' (source 1). One of the reson pepole do this is to reduce there emisions to help the enviroment.\n\nEmisions can ahave a drastic effect on citys because, many people driving in a small area can lock the gases in the city causing smog. In Paris \"[a]fter days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air ... On Monday motorist with even-numbered licence plates were ordered to leave their cars at home... the same would apply to the odds the next day\" (source2). In places like this people don't like having days where they can't use there car, as shown by the \"4,000 drivers [that] were fined\" (source 2) But, in other places people like having a day without their car.\n\nPlaces like Bagota, Colombia \"cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permited for the Day Without Cars\" (source 3), where people enthuaicticly use alternitive transportation to get to work. For some people not driving relives stress, a bussnes man living in Bagota says \"[the day without cars is] a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" (source 3).\n\nEven though cars may seem like an important part of out society today, a cultural shift may be leading america away from cars. \"The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter\" (source 4) so even though you may depend on youer car every day in a couple of years cars may not be the main transportation for the US. So you may want to start thinking about using other forms of transport because the age of the poluting cars is coming to an end.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You know life much harder dont patients If dont Im going tell There time found I going thats good part I ask how getting fly right I knew I going patient I thought I didnt enough patients fly Although I got Now worst thing I got hot We stand outside wait bus It got hot I lost patients got angry everyone I thought I going blow Only I didnt want wait ride anymore Haha I came sences I start easier wait bus eventaly showed I already felt way better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans are becoming more curious about the places they live in, and they started to do some search to find out the historical past about those places. The main reasons of this are internet and slow-living trends in society. In order to learn about those phyical surroundings, individuals can ask older neighbours about the past they know.\r\n\r\nSome people try to practise \"slow-living\" to handle their complicated lives. Although nearly all of us have to move, decide and live fast, some of us want to slow down and explore more about the things we surrounded by, such as the biggest place we spend our lives, our homes. Despite the internet is the main factor of fast living, it also creates an artificial world that we exist in it. However, putting our phones aside and doing little researchs about the history of the places we sleep in, for example, makes us more stress-free and fullfilled and many try to practise those feelings as a way of chillness.\r\n\r\nEveryone has neighbours who is older than overall age rate of the building that they live and they usually have a great knowladge about the history behind the place they all live. If someone is interested in the experiences that the building been through, asking about it to elder neighbours is the best way to collect data about it because these people with a certain stage in life has seen more than any of us. For example, doing an internet search could give us wrong or inaccurate information but the history knowledge about an apartment comes from real life experiences and it contains more details.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the internet and fast-living trends are forcing us to live in a world we do not actually want to live in and as a result of that, many wants to know about the past in the real world and the historical past about buildings they reside is becoming more attractive day by day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is Earth's sister planet. But along with being our sister planet, Venus has the highest recorded temperature of any planet in our solar system. Along with having the highest temperature recorded, Venus also has an atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than the atmospheric pressure on Earth. Clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid also coat Venus's atmosphere, making it difficult to even make it through the outer layers of Venus's atmosphere. So why would Earth's scientists still want to vist Venus?\n\nAccording to the article, Venus is the planet that is most similar to Earth, well at least it used to be. The author tells the reader about how Venus was probably covered in oceans that could have supported life, similar to Earth. The planet also has many other land forms that are similar to the ones we have here on Earth, such as, valleys, rocks, and craters. The author proceeds to say that \"the value of returning to Venus is indisputable.\" Although there are many dangers of sending vessels back to Venus, the author states that the National Aeronautics and Space Administration, otherwise known as NASA, is working on ways to send astronauts to Venus. The author also tells the reader that solar power on Venus would be abundant, and that radiation levels would be similar to those on Earth. He goes on to say that the temperature would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, not an ideal temperature for astronauts traveling to Venus, but it is survivable.\n\nWhile traveling to Venus may take Earths scientists years to figure out, and be very costly, the information we could learn would be invaluable. Although Earth's scientists may be faced with many problems while trying to get astronauts to Venus, from the information provided in the article you could infer that he strongly believes that it is possible, and not only believes that we could travel to Venus but encourages it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aren't driverless cars just amazing? How would you feel if they were further developed so they were public accessable? Driverless cars should be further developed because there will be no more drunk drivers, less crashes, and more cars following the traffic laws.\n\nIf humans do not have to be in control of the vehicle, there will be less driving under the influence. People go to bars to hang out with their friends, or to reconnect with family. They end up under the influence with no way home, except their car. If their were driverless cars, they would not have to worry about getting pulled over and getting a ticket or possibly going to jail. Police officers could take care of more serious crime if they are not thinking about drunk drivers.\n\nCrashes would happen a lot less often, if at all. Driverless cars have the technology to stop the vehicle before they crash or run anything over, therefore, no crashes happen. According to the passage, \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" The world would be a little more safe with driverless cars.\n\nTraffic laws would be followed a lot more often. Vehicles would have the technology to follow traffic laws. Way less laws would be broken. At the moment, driverless cars still alert the driver to take over in certain situations but,\n\nsoon enough, cars will not need the assistance of a human in order to operate. No more people would run red lights, stop signs, or exceed the speed limit, resulting in less crashes as well.\n\nThe world would be a little safer if we had driverless vehicles accessable to the public. They are a facinating piece of machinary. The day these are a part of every day life will be an amazing day!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do think certain books music movies magazines shout removed shelves someone finds offensive Such magazines books movies even music I simply find right peoples opinion s matter depending find offensive two reasons Those reasons picked traveled library looking something enjoy The first reason I think certain books music movies magazines removed form shelves people picked selves Noone ever going pick book magazine even watch movies listen music looks seems even sounds offensive Mainly alot people nt take ofeneded kindly For example would person buy object seem appealing The second reason I think certain books music movies magazines removed shelves going library looking interesting book type music movie magazine Most likely re going end getting one looks intersting something feel fits taste So book sort music movie magazine looks offensive nt get somethings going offend going pretty obvious due looks like seems like even sounds like In opinion I think certain books music movies magazines offensive people taken shelf If picked something library went library looking something would enjoy obviously end knowing something looks seems even sounds offensive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus in one of the brightesrt points of light in the nigt sky, this nickname is misleading\n\nsince venus is actually a planet, venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. numerous factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly carrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere . on the planet superface, temperatures average over 800 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greaer than what we experince on our own planet in ine condition for everyone than humans.\n\nthe national aeronautics and space administration (nasa) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus . the nasa is working on other approaches to studying for example venus study the surfaceand have lasted for there weeeks in such conddition, by comparation, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nearth and beyond be expanded to meet the very edges of imsginstion and innovation one big example is the exploration of planet vanus", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are aliens accually real? Scientists have been wondering that for many years. I believe they are not. The Face is just a natural landform.\n\nThe Face was not created by aliens. In fact, NASA\n\nhas no proof that aliens even exist. After all, if they did exist we would have found more creations of theirs by now. Therefore, they do not exist, meaning that the Face is just a natural landform made by weather. NASA has never seen any type of alien life on Mars.\n\nThe Face could not have been created by aliens. The photographs show that the landform changed over time. Although aliens could have changed the creation, it would be very unlikely. The weather could have made the shape of the Face change. Some of the Face could have eroded away. Therefore meaning that aliens do not exist, and the Face is only a natural landform.\n\nOthers say the Face was created by aliens. However, if aliens existed, they would have made more of these exotic creations. If aliens did exist, why would they give themselves up for some landform after they had stayed hidden for so long? The puzzle pieces just don't fit together. It wouldn't make any sense. The creation is not alien made.\n\nThe Face is only a natural landform. It is not something that was created by aliens. In fact, NASA has no proof aliens even exist. They could not say that aliens created it when they have no evidence. In this essay, it is stated that aliens are not real and did not create the Face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author told us soo much about Venus and all of the details of the plant what it like and why it is dangerous for us to explore the plant and all the very fun facts about it like and how Venus is Earth's twin.\n\nThe author tells us about how Venus is very simliar to Earth calling it Earths twin the author describes how venus is a very dangoues planet but why its wortrh expolring it becaues it just like earth features like i propobly had oceans and could have also have life on it to in the text it states \" NASA possoble soulution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above thr fray\"(5). the author vwery well supports the idea on how he is describing ways nasa is trying to study the plant in the future.\n\nThe author told us how venus would be a great plant to study despite the dangers it has and how it would be impactfull for us to study it andsee if one day we could live on Venus and how it coulb be a huge change for the human life as we know it right now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The life cycle of the honey bee\nThe honey bee, is one of the friendly insects, it reproduces by ovulating, and give eggs.\nThis process ( honey bee's life cycle ) takes between thirty four to thirty six days.\nThe process starts with the female bee, female bee is the one that lays the eggs. It lays one or two eggs every three days, as it's written below.\nA bee's egg is small and fragile, the bee puts it in a place where it won't fall or go with the wind.\nAs for the bee egg hatching mechanism, the egg needs to hatch after nine to ten days, in order to complete the growth of the little bee.\nThe bee hatches on the fifth day after leaving the egg, the young bee begins to grow up on its seventh day after the hatching stage.\nThe little bee turns into a nymph, and the nymph begins to milt three times as it grows.\nNymph grow and transform into a young adult bee, then the young adult bee needs four days to mature.\nAnd it becomes a full growth bee and performs its functions in the nature.\nAnd this process continues among the bees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use or this technology to read the emotional experssions of students in a classroom is valuable because if your struggling on a test and the computer can read this by the expression on your face, then it can modify the test so that the student doesn't fail the test and do better than before . Also if schools did have this it would dramaticaly increase test scores in the shchool which would make the school districe look better and make parents want their kids to go to that school so they have a better learning experance. Also even if it just helped withe homework and not tesr it still would make the schools look better in the eyes of parents . also the softwear can be used for more than just schools it could be used for a voteing balet or at a resturant when you're looking at the menue to see what you like. Also we as people do this anyways fwith are friends and family to see if their sad, mad , happy, suprised, ect. so why would it be any different for a computer to do it al the computer is doing is reading the differnet muscles we use to make any type of experssion.in conclution this softwear would help out a lot in schools and in daily life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building One reasons dirigible hanging one cable tether would add stress buildings frame This stress would cause buildings foundation crack This obstacle caused architects strengthen foundation cost sixty thousand dollars modifications Another obstacle make another floor would used passengers would let elevators bring passengers eightysixth floor baggage ticket area would located These observation areas double boarding area dirigible passengers Once done complete roof framing mooring mast could take place Another obstacle nature winds top building always shifting dirigibles usually land open fields could weighted lead weights could used Empire State Building would hanging pedestrians streets Another obstacle law airships flying low urban areas This would make illegal dirigible tie even approach Empire State Building All many obstacles led ideas dirigibles mooring mast dirigibles dissapeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars becaude nobody needs them anymore?\n\nI can't, google cofounder sergey brian envisions a future public-transport system where fleets of drivers cars from public-transport taxi system.\n\nI believe driverless cars should not be introduced to the human world.\n\nGoogle made a car that deives by itself but in times needs the driver to take over.\n\nWhen it backs out and when there is a construction issue on the roads. The driver must take control and move the car around.\n\nI believe that is dangerous because if the car's motherboard crashes what is going to happen to the car.\n\nThe track which is embedded with an electrical cable that sends radio signals to the front end of the car. What would hapen if the track went down. thats a danger because id people get use to having their car drive for them and they never drive they can forget the rules of the road themselves. When they take control they wont remember what the rules were because their cars were always driving for them.\n\nTHe driverless car can steer, accelerate, and break themselves but also need the driver to be alert to take over when it needs.\n\nWhat would happen if the cars were to give out or not catch the sensor that the pole gave them.\n\nTHey would crash and the driver could be in danger or hurt.\n\ni believe that driverless cars are to dangerous for people to be driving in them.\n\ni also believe that driverless cars will makae people lazyier then they already are. therefor i believe driverless cars should never come out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, several people think, if the fuel price rate increases, which prevents people from using more and more personalised vehicles. This is because the surge of the figure may unable to afford for the majority of the population; eventually, they may start to depend on the public transports, rather than their own car. Take car pooling as an example, this was the new initiative, when the government introduced a new method to counteract the problem of pollution by doubling petroleum oil rate. And they were successful for a great extent. Many reports have shown that this hike reduced the amount of carbon emission in the atmosphere significantly.\n Another point is here that as the authorities earn the huge amount of tax from those who still travel in their car, this fund can be channelized for the betterment of the environment. In other words, the monies can use to introduce more electric cars, planting more green trees along the sides of the roads, and educating the public about the importance of using the public transport over private one. By taking all these preventive measures, the atmosphere will experience better air quality and less adverse effects of the greenhouse effect. Global warming, slowly, can be eradicated for the certain extent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a saying that goes as this; \"You can't make everyone happy.\" One would typically use this saying if an action they make improves the situation for one person, but creates a worse situation for another. However, if Professor Thomas Huang's new 'Facial Action Coding System' proves to be what he says it can be, then Huang believes that there actually is a way to make everyone happy, even in the school setting. The implementation of technology able to read the emotional expressions of children in the classroom is valuable for both the teachers and the students.\n\nInside a school classroom, there is no doubt that it is hard to please everyone. Therefor, when a student becomes disengaged from the lesson, they often become bored and fall behind in the class. After-all, all students learn differently, so it is inevitable that some of the students will become disengaged. However, with his new technology, Professor Huang predicts that the \"classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson\" (Paragraph 6). With this technology implemented, anytime a student starts to fall behind during the lesson, the computer could make slight adjustments to the teacher's plans to help redirect the student back on track. It is common knowledge that the more a student falls behind in a class, the harder it becomes to catch up, which in turn makes the student fall behind even more. It is a viscious cycle that all stems from a day of not paying attention that could be averted by this technology.\n\nThis technology could also help both students and teachers in a long-term manner. In paragraph 7 of the article, it is revealed that this new technology could \"even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one\" (Paragraph 7). Say there is a classroom without an emotion-sensing computer. In the classroom there is a student who, behind the fake smile is dealing with something that they cannot tackle on their own. The teacher never notices, and the child goes on without help. Now imagine if there was a computer in that class. Once it sensed the troubling expressions on the child's face, it could flag down the teacher and alert him or her to the students problem, resulting in the child getting the counceling he or she needs. In an extreme case, this classroom technology could end up saving a life.\n\nThe amount of improvement a classroom could see if this technology was implemented correctly would be immeasurable. The system could prevent students from falling behind in class because they cannot relate to how the teacher is teaching, and the technology could see through fake expressions hiding more troubled thoughts. With this sort of system, it may actually be possible to \"make everyone happy.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worth-while task. Although Venus poses many risks to humans and technology, the information and resources that can be taken from Venus are overwhelming.\n\nIn the beginning of the article, the author explains the many complications that come along with trying to study Venus. Previously, more than three decades ago, there were numerous attempts to study Venus, but shorty after landing spacecrafts, they were destroyed due to the conditions. This is because of the daunting environment Venus possesses, the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, temperatures can acceed 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater than the pressure on Earth. Although these environmental factors seem to be disasterous for almost anything that would dare set foot on the planet, the author decribes two possible ways to get around this delima. First the author describes an idea posed by NASA. NASA says that sending people to Venus is possible, as long as they're above the intense conditions of the planet. They say that hovering at around the height airplains fly in hot airbaloons, humans could uncomfortably survive. Second, simple systems that use mechanical parts, have been proven to last up to three weeks in a simulated recreation of Venus. Theses \"rovers\" could prove useful for grathering test samples that the balloons above the atmosphere would not be able to, also they would be able to take greater quality pictures and study the land more effectively. Scientists say that Venus could have supported life long ago; as well as have similiar aspects to Earth such as: large oceans, valleys, mountains, and craters. According to the author this would prove usefull if similar conditons arose on Earth, and would give us insite about the rest of the universe.\n\nThe reward of knowledge that would be yeilded from the daunting exploration of Venus out weighs the risks and complications that would arise. The author supports his argument well and makes a convencing claim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sunny day, the birds are singing, and everyone is smiling except for one. You all of a sudden jump to conslusion and you assume they aren't having fun. You walk over and ask what wrong (thinking that they aren't having fun). He tells you that he's having fun. but he's tired and the sleep is getting to him. Your assumtion was wrong, thinking that he wasn't having fun because of the face he made, but in reality he was just tired and he is having so much fun. Just by looking at peoples emotions doesn't mean they're feeling like they display on there face. Wheather with your eyes or a device you can't really know what peoples ture emotions are.\n\nEveryone is different. No person is the same. Paragraph five states that everyones way of being happy, worried, sad, ect. is different. Most people that are happy would make a differnet face. One person would display a smile to display happy, and another person would make a frowning face to display happiness. Just by going what the \"average\" person emotions display is not always valuable. Growing up I would show lots of emotions. When I was really happy I would sometimes cry, most people would think I would be sad, but in reallity I has crying tears of joy. People are differen't.\n\nThe average person smiles when they are happy. Yes, the \"average\" person does, but there are people that are above/below average. The technology looks at mucles\n\nto see if they are faking a smile or a frown. Yes, they are going by the aveage person. Everyone is different. One person might have larger mucles then another person and they could trick the device into making it think a person is simling or frowning.\n\nWith all the evidence, it is clear that the use of technology will not be valuable. Everyone is different. People have different defintions of there emotions. Just by going with the \"average person\" doesn't 100% mean there right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art is something which can have numerous forms. One such form is known as music. While most people have the opinion that latest songs have adverse effects on the youth, a few believe it affects them in a positive way. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain my support for the former with examples. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are some artists which try to spread a meaningful message through their albums. The lyrics they use are weighty and can influence the younger generation in a variety of ways. However, more and more teenagers nowadays disregard such songs and mostly prefer other genres. For example, research conducted by BBC revealed that around 60% of the youth today listen to the genres like mumble-rap and hip-hop. What used to be a tool to spread the message about the hardships of the unprivileged, has now become a mechanism for a modern artist to gain attention by using offensive lyrics. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, as compared to the earlier generation, the current one is quickly influenced by the graphics that some artists use for their music. These videos are mostly obscene and sway people towards the wrong direction. As they are easily influenced, for some this becomes a way to earn quick money. For instance, many social media pay such singers enormous amounts if their videos generate enough views and engagement. As a result, many people avoid doing traditional jobs and prefer earning money through such activities. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although music has the ability to have a positive impact on teenagers, I believe, the one which is produced currently has harmful lyrics and graphics and can affect youngsters adversely.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are both positive and negative things about the driverless cars. I think they have more of an negative impact, because even though the driver can get power of the car, if needed it's still dangerous. People are more attempted to not pay attention if they don't have to control the vehicle, unless something goes wrong.\n\nIt could also be dangerous for other drivers who are on the road who're driving their vehicle them selves. The person with the driverless car could not be paying attention and not take control of the car when needed. The person in the driverless car would more than likely tend to be on their phones, thinking nothing is going to happen. Something could go wrong and the driver might not be able to get control of the car.\n\nAlso the manufacturer could get the blame for the car, even if it was really the person in the driverless car who didn't take action their selves, when something went wrong. It could cause a lot of conflict between the driver and manufacturer if something like that was to happen.\n\nAlso, as stated in the text \"why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Who would like a car that you didn't really feel like you had that much control over?\n\nAlso if the driverless car can brake itself, what about certain weather conditions? If it's snowing and their is ice on the roads the driver needs to be able to brake the car their selves. Or if it's raining the streets get wet and slick.. the driver needs to be able to brake the car their selves. The driverless car being able to brake itself could be dangerous.\n\nI think driverless cars would not be that safe to be on roads with other vehicles. I also think they'd cause conflicts, if something was to go wrong with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is assumed by many people that machines having artificial intelligence will replace humans in all occupations. However, I believe that robots can only perform mundane and repetitive tasks and all other professions where human touch is required will continue to be done by human beings.\r\n\r\nTo start with, robots may perform jobs which are less complex and do not require any specific skills. Many companies are hiring automated stations instead of employees because these are far less expensive.Thus efforts required to train the human workforce and funds needed to pay off their salaries on a monthly basis are reduced. For instance, in banks, automated teller machines have been deployed to accept and disburse cash without a cashier. In addition, these machines work round the clock even on holidays and require no extra compensation. For these reasons, intelligent machines could be used in place of manpower in low-skilled professions. Robots are being extensively used in mines, assembly lines and rescue operations. In future, as technology develops more and more jobs will be taken over by robots.\r\n\r\nOf course, jobs that require empathy, critical reasoning and creativity can only be performed by a human being. For this reason, doctors and nurses will continue to be humans. A robot might be able to diagnose a disease, but it cannot provide personalized care. Psychologists and investigators will also be humans. Likewise, people will still be needed to make robots. The chances of robots making robots look slim. In the same way, robots will have to be programmed by humans.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is likely that an artificially intelligent workforce will take charge of repetitive and mundane tasks that do not require any expertise, but sophisticated jobs requiring critical reasoning skills cannot be performed by an artificial Intelligence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The positive things the author is saying about making driverless cars is more saftey because it got senses in it that can tell if you about to bag back into something it gives you a warning or if your going to fast it uses speed sensors to detect it and gives you a warning. If your brakes stop working while you driving it can detect it and use automatic break sensor to stop your car. The cars could handle the driving task on its own. It got a lot of sensors everywhere on the vehicle. It would have a video camera on the left rear wheel. A roatating sensor on the rood. Four automotive radar sensors. And it would have a GPS reciever. It will also have Dubbed LIDAR that have laser beams to form a constanly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. The negitive thing about having a driverless car is that it would take alot of upgrades and it would need smart-road systems. And the lawmakers says that the only safe way to keep drivers,passengers, and pedestrains safe is if the human driver is in control at all times. If the technology of the driverless car fails and someone is injured, they wouldnt know what to do because they wouldnt know who to blame. It could be the driver fault or the manufacturer. Some people wouldnt like a driverless car because they could get bored and tired of waiting for their turn to drive. And if any sensor breaks while the driverless car is going somebody could get hurt if any sensor is down. They don't got a back up sensor for none of the sensors. It's dangerous to have your hopes on sensors that can stop working anytime. Some people probably think if you got a driverless car what's the purpose of being behind the wheel?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nIf one could sum up the definition of the Electoral College in a few words, those words would be unessasary and room for error. The Electoral College was established by our fore fathers in the constution. Paragraph one in What is the Electoral College by the Office of the Federal Register states \"A compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" It is more than possible that a change in our voting system could better america in all kinds of ways.\n\nI believe that the electoral College takes away the peoples opinion in a way just descreet enough to still call it a democracy. The people still vote and determine the overall outcome of the election, But with an electoral college, there is more then enough room for error. One argument aganist the Electoral College is in the very purpose of the system. The people votes go to an electors slate that share the same view as you, then they vote for a candidate. This is opposed to the peoples vote going directly to the candidate. This method of voting is if not purposeless then problematic. Electors can betrey your trust and vote for the opposite canadidate. A statement from Brandford Plumers' The Indefensible Electoral College says \"Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always.\"\n\nIn America our society is based off of freedom and the electoral college is not promoting it. Please keep in mind that the legislature is nearly compleatly responsable for choosing our electors. At any election they could defy the peoples choice. Excerp from The Indefensible Electoral states \"back in 1960, segregationists in the louisana legislature neary succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" Electors have occasinally been know for simply refusing to vote for their party's candidate. If this is freedom to vote then there undoubtingly needs to be a change in the near future.\n\nScandles like the one thay occured in 1960 rarely happen, but whos to say that it could not happen in the future. Our presidental election is practically based off of trust in our goverment. The Electoral college does reconize voters from each region of the county but due to the way the system is set up, it does a poor job interpreting the votes of the people.\n\nA quote from In Defence of the Electoral College by Richard A. Posner states \"It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popluar vote\" This happened as recently as the election of 2000 Then ask yourself what would really be the harm of ingoring the Electoral College. It only would make the outcome clearer.\n\nThe American elections differ from most countrys in the way that we are a democrecy. we the people can vote. we the people have individual voices that are the composition of the country. The elector college does not oppose this. But rather is opening the doors for coruption. Taking away the Electoral College and replacing it with popular vote, is simply clarifying the peoples decisions, and the peoples decisions is nothing less then America itself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Setting affect cyclsit many ways Just I read story desert dehidrated It hot road bumpy dangers poisnous snakes The cycclist could died many ways heatstroke falling bike dehidration bite form snake Say mountains There many problems face", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that Lukes point of viewIf you were going to ask someone to do it then you would it might change your life. In the article is that he his a little nervous that he will be going on a ship for a long time. And he wanted to got out on sea and see what it was like.\n\nHe said that it will not be good that if he gets injured then you will have to stop working and that is bad! He said that it was a little bit bad when you hurt your self and you can't work anymore.\n\nHe said in the passage that he said that he was thankful that the metal rail saved him from going overboard. He said that was in the text was that there was more things to do like playing baseball. soccer. volleyball,and those other sports too. That is what i think that the point of view for luke is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many times we have seen in movies where cars no longer need a human to be driven. It's hard to imagine that finally it is slowly starting to come into reality. Google says that they have had cars that could drive by themselves under some conditions since 2009. It's exciting to think how far technology has came but have you thought about all the cons this situation would bring? Driverless cars should not be developed because these cars would be to expensive to buy and fix, new traffic laws would have to be made to protect individuals in an act of an injury, and cars are safer when a human driver is in control at all times.\n\nDue to the fact of how expensive these cars are to build, they will most likely be expensive to purchase and to fix. This idea of ¨driverless cars¨ would not go very far with it's ideas because not many people would be able to afford it. Only the people who have the money to purchase this car would have the luxury to own it. Cars like these would not be seen around like it is normal.\n\nLet's say that this car is now open to the world, it's safe and you can now purchase it. You drive it and get into a wreck where people outside in the open get injured. Who'd take the blame for it? The car owner or the manufacturer? Many laws would have to be changed to protect the individual in cases like these. In some situations, manufacturers and the individuals would lose a great amount of money to cover the expenses that were damaged during the scene. New laws would have to be created to cover both the manufacturers and the car owners.\n\nTraffic laws say that the only safe car has a human driver at all times. Unless they get the computers to act as a human brain does when in a dangerous scene, cars with a human driver will always be better. People are better off driving cars instead of having a computer do it. It would take a lot of work and money to have these driverless cars work as great as a human brain. Drivers, passengers and pedestrians should be safe at all times and with these cars it's very frightening having the thought of a car going into a computer situation and end up causing great damage to the passengers and pedestrians.\n\nAlthough it is very exciting to finally coming to this point of technology, it's very important to think about all the cons these types of cars would have. Purchasing a car like this would be a situation you'd have to think twice about because of the great risk you'd be on if the car has a defect. To me, I would very much rather keep things ¨the old fashioned way¨ than putting my life in the hands of a computer. Driverless cars should not be developed because these cars would be to expensive to buy and fix, new traffic laws would have to be made to protect individuals in an act of an injury, and cars are safer when a human driver is in control at all times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think ever offensive taken shelf inoproperate Books need like supposed fun help learn yes little violence actionadventure book get mood character setting story understand perhaps Offensive books okay times comedy magazine book making fun something someone taken offensive way joke none offensive way To people going want take kinds books shelf Offensive books parents maybe even friends teach child wrong child learn right way Kids little brains like sponges learn remember stuff well age A child getting hold book tought something book like likley remember I think kinds books taken shelf kids dont need reading kind stuff allready television talked They need edicational books teach prepare uppcoming higher grade levels would fresh start new words grammer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is worth to study despite the dangers and can be a risk to anyone. Venus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nHumans have sent many spacecrafts to land in Venus. Each pervious mission was unmanned. No spacecraft or spaceship has survived the landing for more than a few hours or even touched Venus in more than three decades. Many factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for us humans to study. It can put us in a huge risk.\n\nMore dangerously are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperatures are way different in Venus than Earth. The temperatures average over 800 fahrenheit. In Venus the atomopheric pressure is 90 time greater that what we experience here on Earth. Those conditions are extremely dangerous compare to what humans on Earth encounter.\n\nVenus also has the most hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system, even though Mercury is closer to the sun. Beyond high pressure and heat Venusian geology and weater present more dangerously problems in Venus, such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and lightning strikes. However, astronomers believe that Venus had once had rocky surfaces, mountains, valleys, and oceans.\n\nSolar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth's levels. Not reliable conditions but survivable for humans. More importantly, researchers can't take rocks, gas, or any other objects from a specific distance due to the dense atmosphere. For that reason scientists interested in seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal even through-out the risks it can cause.\n\nAnyone who would want to study Venus and it's geographic surface would have to be put at risk, even to just be a planetary visit. Our travels on Earth and beyond shouldn't be limited by dangers or doubts, but should be expanded to meet the almost the edges of imagination and completion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea by introducing us to the planet and stating key points about Venus early on in the passage. In paragraph one he says, \"In our solar system Venus is the second planet from our sun.\" and that's showing us that the author is intrested in studying Venus. In paragraph two he begins to talk about the different speeds in which Venus, Earth and Mars travel. The author states in the third sentence of paragraph two, \"These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus\".\n\nAs the author states in the third paragragraph, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...\" Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system. The author has to be fully intrested in Venus to know this much about the planet. You will learn that Venus is a dangerous planet and not even metal can survive on Venus's surface. The author states in paragraph two, \"Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\". Venus is so dangerous that in order to visit the planet you can't even land, you would have to float about 30 miles from the ground.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is not impossible to visit in fact NASA is still working on getting astronauts there with different approaches. As the author states in paragraph seven, \"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" so, Nasa is still working on getting humans there. In paragraph eight it states that, \"Striving to meet the challenge presemted by Venus has value...\" meaning that venus is a special place and getting humans there will be exciting. So many humans are curious of what's on Venus because it's so hot there and getting humans there would be a big accomplishment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aurthor dose well in explaining details about venus. Scientists keep learning about venus even though its dangerous? Why, we beleive to think that the reason why scientist continue working on sending man to venus is mostly because the planet is closest to earth and they think it can be a twin of earth with mountains valleys and at one point in time it has had some form of life.\n\nOn paragraph 4 \"astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system.\" It states that long ago it could of had been \"covered largely with oceans.\" But if scientists say that the planet is so \"inhospitable\"\n\nwhy are scientists planing to visit much furher into the venus planet?\n\nVenus has much to offer when it comes to learning about it, reffering to the amount of sulfuric acid in the clouds (how'd they get like that?) If scientist say that earth can be simmilar to venus, will earth get like that, \"corrosive couds?\" I'd like to think not because no matter venus is closer to the sun and eath is just far ways from it.\n\nIf a submarine attempts to go down into the depths of the water there in venus . There can be major damage done to the submarine which is accustomed to go under water but it's the metal that'll melt from the sulfuric acid and the hot tempatures of the planets surface. Venus is known for the hottest planet's\n\ntempature throughout the solar system.\n\nVenus is worthy of pursuit despite the dangers because scientists are wanting to find out if the planet used to be like earth before. If it had been covered largely with oceans? Or simlpy as much as having any sorce of life it may of have had or hadn't had. Wouldn't you like to find out if venus was once like earth before?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A claim that evaluates the author idea is... No matter how hard they try and study about the Venus and learn how to land there safetly, its still going to be a dangrous. like every time u send some one there to study, the spacecraft cant land for a hours and they get in danger. The author kinda want people to just give it up. no matter what you do, Venus will be Venus. In the article it says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". Venus is a earth twin but u should never dream to go there. There is no spacecraft that survive landing in Venus. In the article it says \"No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". The spacecraft cant survive it because the Venus is so hot. NASA is working on other approaches to studing Venus. They be sending people to Venus just to study Venus. They are trying harder and harder. They are now using some old technology called mechanical computers to study Venus. The mechanical computers were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll. NASA wont give up on studying Venus. People didnt know what Venus is before. Back then, Venus was coverd by tree and and mountains just like the earth. Now you can see it at the night time. Venus is called the \" Evening Star,\". It is one of the brightest light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. The Venus is the dangrous planet that u should never go. No spacecraft servived the landing for more than a few hours. NASA is working very hard to study about the Venus and maybe wanna map everything on it. Venus is the \"Evening star,\" that u can see it at night time. People who wants to study about Venus are now using old mechanical Computers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Marking Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Alto is a good article talking about how the system called Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I believe this system is great for a student in a classroom. The system will help a teacher by telling weather or not a kid likes something. Another way the system is valuable is because the system can tell if a person like an ad on the computer or not. The system will read your facial expressions to tell weather you are happy, surprised, angry, disgusted, scared, or sad.\n\nThe first way the Facial Action Coding System is helpful is by telling the\n\nteacher weather or not a kid likes something. Each facial expression is different from every person. For example, if a kid is reading a book on the computer. The computer will read the kid facial expressiones to tell the teacher weather he or she likes the book or not. The computer will send different percentages to the teacher on how the kid feels about the book. If the student does not like the book, the teacher could help the student by giving he or she another book to read. This system can also be helpful for companys that play videos. When someone watches a video and an ad comes on, the system can tell weather or not they like the ad or the person dislike the ad. If the person disliked the ad, the company that plays the videos and ads can play a different ad that the person may like more. I do believe this system will be valuable for the human world. The system will give percentage on how the person feel about something. The system will tell weather he or she shows happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, or sadness.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois has a awesome idea of a system that read people facial expressions. This system will be valuable in the world. It can help in the classroom of school or outside of school. The Facial Action Coding System will tell if a\n\nperson is happy, angry, scared, sad, surprised, or disgusted. Every person has a different facial expressions. This sytem will help tell if they are what their facial expressions say they are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Technology advancing rapid rate many years making life much easier everyday people It helps many ways example keep touch relatives learn new information keep safe updated Computers vital everyday life need A huge purpose computers keep touch With new programs like CAPS CAPS CAPS leaves sorts new opportunities keep touch fun friends previously available Email well great taol keep touch family far away opposed goodol letter take web mail Another huge reason need computers today able reaserch foreign places learn facts without computer would never even heard With computers makes possible go online look research plan flight week later It also great tool learn new things know previusly It huge step education process Computers also provide us extreme saftey security well breaking news Imagine much simpler would able home go computer check best rout home opposed consequently sitting intinse With modern day technology possible They add great saftey protection average people like In conclusions hopefully mind changed topic computers already support well great Now asked spread word great computers vital ensuring better future I understand people enjoy electronics set straight Computer save great tools moving ahead cheer trash", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that advertisements are not so effective and some are not affected by it at all. This essay completely disagrees with that idea because good commercials definitely affect customers' choice in many ways that they may not even acknowledge themselves and it is not worth underestimating the effect of advertising campaigns.\r\n\r\nFirstly, sometimes customers may not even have an honest answer why they buy products of one particular brand instead of another. They can often remember that someone mentioned and praised it, hence, they used the positive feedback to make a decision about getting it. This is how people's minds actually work: it is easier to agree on something if someone has already tried it and had a good experience. Hence, for example, everyone tries \"Mcdonald's\" at least once: it is well-known and everyone knows what to expect from it.\r\n\r\nAnother reason why advertisements have real influence on people's behavior is that humans would like to live happy lives, and advertisers sell this dream very well, playing on weaknesses. They say that potential consumers will be loved and respected if they have and use this and that. \"Apple '' products are good examples of it. They are expensive, and not all can really afford them, but many spend days and nights trying to buy the newest editions as soon as they are released just to demonstrate their status, even if there are more affordable brands with better quality.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, both good and bad marketing has a huge effect on humankind and its choices. Many things were bought just because they were promoted effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author family always quote story I never forget parents made simple house homeThe mood might also always better opertunities life What I mean Narciso Rodriguez s parent s moved better opertunity kids It I learned real definition family And I never forget house s gracious neighborhood many things I learned love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I got checkout line heard impatient groans signs around us Almost every line extremely long whole store packed I groaned along everybody else annoyed long wait My continued cheerful whistling didnt seem notice CAPS going take forever I whined CAPSt negative Its long replied saw responding glare chuckled CAPS play game continued game eye spy minutes line slowly progressed After finished game continued make small talk checked list make sure everything I played game phone Soon next I smiled relief thought good thing kept us occupied As walked store said CAPS youre patient get food laughed drove home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. People say it is an opportunity of a lifetime. You get to explore different places that you might have not gone to.\n\nWhen you are in this program, you get to go to Europe and China. Since they have just got out of war, they have to recover their food supplies, animals, and more. Fourty-four nations joined together to form the UNRRA. That stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration. Then they hired us, the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nWhen they hired us, our jobs are to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Caring for the animals can keep you busy,but it is worth it. They have to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. You have to clean out their stalls.\n\nInstead of watching the animals in the daytime, you could also be a night watchman. When you are a night\n\nwatchman, your job is to check on all the animals every hour. Then give the captain a breif report.\n\nWhen you are on the job can it be a long time. It takes about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States. It can take a month to get to China.\n\nWe have a lot of fun on board, especially when we return home from unloading the animals. We play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. We also played table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and even more games. Being in the countries is fun also.When your in Venice, Italy, you can take a gondola ride on the streets of water. That is what Venice is known for.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy\n\nis an adventure for most people. It can open up more of the world for you. You will not regret becoming one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an opinion that the costs of fuels should be risen to create a solution to global environmental issues. Given this observation, in my contention, this viewpoint is correct in that as much as this situation forces industrial factories to seek new resources for energy, and should the price is not increased, individual car usage cannot be reduced.\r\n\r\nWhat strikes one first about environmental issues is its relationship with the industries which highly consume fuels for production. In fact, because of the absence of compulsory factors like the price, companies do not research a new harmless fuel. Notably, in the farm sector, the fossil fuel expenditures being considerably low, nobody prefers to use renewable energy resources. To illustrate this point, the UK’s farmers do not want to build new solar panel systems, because building costs way more than fuels. Therefore, prices must skyrocket in order to clear the way for the consumption of environmentally beneficial fuels.\r\n\r\nYet another reason why prices should be increased is the number of vehicles, which consume 65% of the fossil fuel all around the world. No one would dispute that drivers can be deterred from these cars thanks to increased costs only. Not only can it force people into a new type of vehicle, but it also can alleviate emitting harmful gases. It is exemplified by TESLA, which is a new electrical car brand, their board members claim that the cars reduce carbon emissions by 55 per cent. Thus, having highly expensive prices for fuels can disappear the percentage of emissions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing fuel costs has sparked much debate among some. I concur with the idea that the rate of cars in traffic and industrial companies are responsible for the environmental problem, hence, prices must be risen for deterring them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper editors I recently read atical talking experts concerned people spending way much time computers Well I agree I strongly belive computers tacking time away exercising enjoying nature even interacting family friends Well look teen s day becauming weight like back days nt computer internet much people weight even obiste time go exercis play sports othes Exercising importent espeshaly teen weight even obiste well theis problems nt go away cost futer chance getting deobetice also pay medications treatments comes Experts also belives spending time computer tack time away enjoing things nature offer When might argue good thing people learn different types place s world Well I delive read places online look picture ca nt one tacking pictures see And ca nt one experincing insted reading Experts also believe spending time computer tacking away time able interacting family members friends Well teen I learned intercating family friends vary important health I person agrees study shows kid talk perents good convercations parent ability well school respect towed others verces kid teen ca nt really conversation talk parents For example type person talk family You good grades A s learn respect person ca nt talk parents troble concentrating even macking troble fro themselfs getting Well I know newpapper editer vary busy person lot diffent things I hope take concideration remmember importants exercisin enjoying rotune interacting familys friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers today much different computers back They help projects homework many experts concerned people spending much time computers I think computers help people many ways like teaching handeye coordination They re useful people talk friends family members nt seen long time computer skills required real world Handeye coordination important using computer help people build coordination This helps one type report one good handeye coordination typing skills finish report minutes If one poor handeye coordination well minute report take hours No one likes sitting infront computer hours Everyone friends best friends talk every day But happens friend moves outoftown outofstate possibility outofcountry They might forgotten never seen Well thanks technology advancement computers people chat online instant messaging myspace facebook They catch upon things check s new even see posted pictures The thing applied family members moved away Who would nt want talk friends family nt heard Lastly computer skills important real world Skilled people good knowledge computer world get great jobs like computer programer state create websites jobs Other jobs people computer experience would editor movies shows That s big money No wonder schools computer classes It s get students good background computer Computers bad They teach handeye coordination lets people talk people online get people great jobs Many educated people would agree computers nt positive effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some reasons why being a sea cowboy is a good idea. It is very occupational, working the stables and feeding the animals makes the trip seem less long. There are very many sights to see, such as, taking relaxing gondola rides in Venice, touring excavated sites like the elegant castles in Crete, seeing the famous Acropolis in Greece. There are many more exotic and beautiful structures to be seen as a Seagoing Cowboy. Along the way gift shops and antique stores that can be visited and bought from.\n\nPlaces like China are availible to visit and see. The program has all of these offers as well as delivering all of the animals that are on board with you. This is an even greater opportunity to young men who have just come out of high school, it can open things up for them. Help them realize and be aware, that there are other people who have needs in other countries. After it's all over, you can take another trip if you wish to.\n\nBeing a sea cowboy means more than just moving animals from place to place. It helps others in need, people who have nearly nothing. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can make all the difference. That is why being part of the Seagoing Cowboys program is a good career choice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When sitting in class do you ever feel like you can read someones emotion, well now you can. With the new program Facial Action Coding System you can make a 3-D model of someone and scan the face mucsles to tell you what emotions they are feeling. You have six basic emotions that this program can detect just by your mucsles in your face. When they scanned Mona Lisa's face she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 2 percent angry.\n\nNow if people start turnning towards this method of telling how people feel instead of asking them to make them feel better then you are shutting yourself off from society and that's not okay. If you want to now how someone feels don't make a 3-D model of their face to have a computer tell you just go up and ask them how they feel and what will make them feel better. It amazes you when you find out how many people turn towards technology instead of face to face converstations.\n\nFianally if you scan someones face to see if you can make them feel better than you are doing it all wrong. You need to walk up to that person and say \"Are you okay, what do you need to help you\". Also when you do scan someones face they can put on whats called a \"Fake Smile\" and trick the computer into thinking it's a actual smile, so it will say they are happy when in reality you are mad or upset. Put down the elctronics and focus on what's important in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is developing new stuff everyday. Things that are usually an everyday thing are becoming less and less, like the driverless cars, some people despise driving and some people love it. Can you imagine cars that you don't even have to drive? You just tell it where to go and it takes you there on command.\n\nI think that's crazy, driverless cars starting out are going to be very dangerous and the road to explore and find new ideas to make them safer is going to be a long one. Some of the cars Google has built have been able to \"drive independently under specific condiotions since 2009.\" Google also says that many of their cars have driven miles and miles without a crash, but that's with a driver who's ready for anything to happen and ready to act at any given time.\n\nWhen the driverless cars actually become driverless, I think it'll be a disaster because some people are going to get carried away with it and just not think that their car will never have a malfunction. More people are going to wreck and people are just being plain lazy nowadays. It really doesn't take that much energy to drive a car. Of course you have to stay awake and make sure you're paying attention to the road at all costs, but people are just getting things handed to them.\n\nWith driverless cars people probably won't have to do drivers ed and their drive times with instructors who are making them better drivers. I think it's just nonsense.\n\nOn the other hand, there could be a couple positives to this. Some people are born with conditions that can make them not able to drive or do stuff most people do, but with the new driverless cars they'll be able to enjoy the satisfaction of just being able to sit in that drivers seat just like any other person out there. That is if they find a way to make the completely driverless, because if not then they say,\"this means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\n\nOne of the most common tragedys that occur are people dying from drunk drivers. Some people make stupid decisions when they're drunk and they might decide to drive home because they think they're well enough too and of course if you're with a bunch of other drunk people they're probably going to encourage it because they don't no any better.\n\nWith the driverless cars, people making that poor decision won't or might not be affected by it. That's if the scientists find ways to make the cars safer to where you don't have to drive it at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a fact that students face severe issues to focus on their education in school. It could be due to either malnourishment or inappropriate time management of pupils and there are adequate measures like ensuring proper supplements can be adopted to alleviate this issue.\n\nPrimarily, the malnutrition which adversely affects the learning ability of students by reducing their proper functions of brain and other vital organs. To illustrate , proper intake of nutritious meal which contains vitamins and minerals at correct time is mandatory for the development of the intellectual activity of a student. Apart from this , the impact of visual and social media platforms diverts the attention of students from their studies. To explain , the increased screen time will reduce the characteristics of the brain to think and concentrate as well as it will lead to making the child lazy and obese due to lack of physical activity. Hence the child feel sleepy and fatigue during the class hours and that will gradually lead to learning difficulties.\n\nOn the other hand,there are effective steps can be taken to tackle this issue firstly , the parent and teachers have to make sure that the student is getting enough nutrients .To explain, it is the obligation of elders and the government that to support the children who are physically weak by ensuring their adequate food by providing free school meals . Furthermore , a well-managed time frame for using internet and proper guidance by adults to control the usage will be more beneficial.Moreover ,encouraging them to do more exercise instead of playing online games , so that their blood circulation as well as thinking ability improve and which will enhance their attention in the classroom .\n\nIn conclusion, the weak physical strength and impact of digital media is affecting the concentration of students in classroom. Whereas, supply of proper food and experienced guidance in using the internet can make a big change in this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It was the first we have ever seen anything like this in awhile and we were excited. It wasn't just something that you could easily skip pass because it was more than what anybody could have explained. Every single one of us were going crazy but alot of us thought that it was formed by aliens but thats the thing, aliens are real and for them to think that is just outrageous. What we had discovered was \"The Face on Mars\" and it was amazing. Suddenly out of nowhere this guy in the office, Frank Gobble, freaked out because he thought that aliens are real and that they had formed the face and that they were even coming for us. He's crazy right?\n\nEverybody had to calm him down because he was just going straight out crazy like you wouldnt believe! Although people may have thought that aliens were real I had to put my opinion out on to the table to fix all of this even though i knew it would cause much more of a problem. \"Why would you guys even think that it would be formed by aliens if they arent even real?\" I said. Not alot but a couple of people had my back cause they even knew that they werent real. But as soon as I said it Frank just went completley off with his life and everyone was scared but I wasnt because i knew for a fact that i was right 100 percent.\n\nSince Frank didnt believe me I knew that it was time to set him straight and give him the facts. \" If you havent already heard yet but it was claimed as a 'huge rock formation which resembles a human head...' not a face formed by aliens!?\" I stated. As soon as he tried to talk he went speechless because he knew that what i had just said was completely true. \"That right there is a NATURAL LANDFORM Frank\" I said as I pointed to the picture on the screen. In that time everyone in the room went silent and then I realize i have just proved or at least I think I did.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that a rock formation on mars would look like a structure created by aliens. Through out the years cameras have become more complex leaving the 1976 picture easy to fall in a false light.\n\nNASA states that the rock formation was formed by shadows giving the illusions of eyes, nose, and mouth. The formation would easily fool any alien enthusiest who looks for ridiculious objects to say it was made by aliens. The project ended because of lack of money they used to take picture of rocks, rocks? That money could have gone to finding a cure for aids or cancer but we had to waste all our money on rocks, rocks? Twenty-five years of this nonsense and were still trying to find something that is not there. Why do you think every country hates us.\n\nRock formations are common on every planet so why did we spend all this time on one?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If author would think would fair someone creation taken shelves offended someone In opinion I believe references considering movies books music magazines inapropriate However I nt think anyone right take shelves offended If everyone right take something shelf offends would nt anything left In mind everything could possibly offensive someone For example I read book stereotyped cheerleaders like everyone else The way make cheerleaders horrible Considering I ve big time cheerleader entire life I got little offended I m way book described After reading book I might enjoyed choice read I nt going back book store demand take market I one person nt like My philosophy would ignore things nt like purchase item offends I know age targeted audience books movies nt always ones come across For example child coming across movie includes inapropriate languages scenes That I say keep walking pay attention materials Or parents censor children see hear read Moreover I think fair someone s artwork whether music book magazine movie taken display shelf Those authors creaters worked hard anyone else Just best suited one person mean nt suited someone else In conclusion I nt think fair items taken market nt please people I m sure someone enjoy It would nt fair artist time harkwork Everything market could probably offend least people way welcome real world They need learn deal ignore like I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars safe or unsafe? Many states think they are not safe since the technology could short out and cause a wreck. I feel that a driverless car with the right technology would be safe as long as the wiring isn't tampered with by an outside source.\n\nSergey Brin the Google cofounder and many other big companies are taking the leap towards self driving cars. The ones developed so far still require the driver to have their hands on the wheel while in unfamiler situations like road work and pulling in and out of driveways. The Google car is safe on the road since it has many gadgets to help protect the passenger and others on the road like video cameras, GPS receivers, and a Dubbed LIDAR which makes a 3-D model of the car's surrondings. The Google car has driven more than half a million miles without getting into a wreck using all the gadgets equiped showing that the car is more safe than a human driving.\n\nSome companies have tried making a smart road instead of a smart car. For example, in paragraph 3 it states that engineers at Berkeley tried to make a road using the negative and positive polarity equiped on the car and road. The road would be easier to make happen, but our current roads require many upgrades and the roads are very expensive to install. Also in paragraph 3 it states that in the late 1950, General Motors created a concept car that could only run on a special test track. Many companies have followed the route of smart cars instead of smart roads due to cost like Google, BMW, Tesla, GM, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan.\n\nThe companies working on the cars have made many safety features to help protect the passenger from a wreck. For example, GM has seats that vibrate if an object is behind them will backing up. The Google car has a voice that plays when it needs you to take over the car in instances like in a construction zone. Many options are being considered to make sure the driver is paying attention even without driving like the vibrating seat, the voice telling the person what to do, flashing lights on the windsheild, heads-up display, and even cameras to make sure the driver is watching the road.\n\nMany states think that the self driving car is unsafe so they do not allow them to be driven in that state. Only four states allow them to be driven there and they are California, Nevada, Flordia, and the District of Columbia. The companies building the cars feel that more states will follow once the car proves to be more \"reliably safe.\" At the bottom of paragraph 9 it states that \"new traffic laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" They say this since if the technology fails causing an injury who is at fault- the driver or manufacturer?\n\nOnce the driverless car starts to get even more safety features I feel that the car will be allowed anywhere since it will be safer than some people driving themselves. One example of this would be a drunk driver. Would someone rather have them drive or an equiped self driven car? It could save many lives of pedestrians and reckless drivers for just being an option when someone doesn't feel the desire to drive or is uncapable to drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are beginig to come to be a big issue. They are causing so many disadvantages to overpopulated and average populated areas of the world. If the amounts of cars being driven/owned reduces we will come to plenty of advantages in manys ways. Human Health, abilities, and living spaces will all benefit from being car free !\n\nLess cars makes the area less compacted which allows more space for side walks and walk ways to be built into the small town that have a high population. Places such as VAUBAN Germany and French and Swiss borders and many other places will have noo street parking, driveways and home garages. Without all of the car infested thing such as spoken there will be appropiate space and routes for public transportation and makes things and place s more accessible. Instaed of having a mall along side a distant highway it can have walk ways and more space for shopping centers and people to come not having to worry about having to find a space to park or any other conflict we all would run into reguarding personally owned vehicles. Not mentioning many more abilities that will come to hand when we become car free. Becomming car free environments is a very important task also for health reasons of everyone. Riding bikes, hiking, and walking will all come a part of everyones daily activity if not while being publically transported.. Smog is also a big issue hear, agreed? For example, in Paris, there smog percentage went down 60% because they are going through the process of limiting ownership of cars.\n\nIt is guarenteed that we will benefit from being car free. Less hassal, large decrease in accidents of vehicles and in health of all around. it is a big change but but an even larger advantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is very easy to find someone who smokes in today's society. Even though we were taught that smoke is harmful, we see people exhaling this thick fog everyday partly because some people think that it is cool and it can be purchased almost at every store. This essay will discuss deeply about what causes people to smoke and how this issue can be alleviated.\nFirstly, part of the society believes that it is trendy to smoke. In many pop culture, such as songs, movies, and novels portray smoking possitively. A comedy show that I have seen illustrates one of the character that smokes to be more cool, giving this character an untouchable aura, whilst other characters that did not smoke seem tangible and therefore mundane. Furthermore, cigarettes are easily accessable in any store. A recent study proved that over 80% of those eager to smoke for the first time actually started this behavior because they can buy it from their local shops. The trend from pop culture and the convenience in accessing smoke adds up to the reasons why some people continues with this habit.\nI believe that there are solutions that can tackle and reduce smoking, beginning with medias should portray smoking to have consequences that are relatable. A movie I have seen showed the protagonist's constant need for cigarette throughout the show. However, in the end when he finally unites with his crush, he develops a severe disease, mainly from his smoking habits, in which he regretted in the end. This method of portraying people who smoke totally made my younger niece scared of smoking. In addition, government should control the accessibility of cigarettes. Policies that result and fewer stores being able to sell cigarettes and increasing tax pricing of smoke of any kind will definitely make smoking less convenient for many people.\nIn conclusion, although many people knew how harmful smoking is, many people think it is cool to smoke and it is convenient and easy to buy. By making smoking less trendy in society and harder to access, I believe that smoking will be less attractive, hence reducing the number of smokers in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article we have seen that technology has been coming along quiet a bit. I didn't even know that since 2009 driverless cars have been around. Whether we realize it or not they're developing in our society more than we could've ever imagined. Have you ever watched a television show or movie where the car can drive itself? I know what your thinking wow that would be so cool, a self operating car. Believe it or not Google has done that already.\n\nThe risk of having cars that operate themselves will result in alot more car crashes for teenagers, and that will result in insurance being increasing for the parents. Everyday there are over 1,000 crashes that involve teenagers being reckless drivers. In the article the author states\" Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" The key word from that statement is alert. Teenages already are not alert the way it is, and now we want to give them the opprotunity to be even more reckless. In today's generation we have the distractions of cellphones, friends, and mostly technology. Most teenages drive with there cellphones and over 2,000 per day get in a car crash because the use of technology behind the wheel.\n\nI personally am against it myself, even though I'm a teenager and think that would be cool. I still have the maturity to realize that being behind the wheel of an automobile is a privelege, and its a big responsibilty. When your behind the wheel of the moving vehicle you need to be an alert driver. Part of being an alert driver is having you hands on the wheels at all times, because at any moment the car could get out of control and the next thing you know you're in a ditch. I think its so fascinating how much technology has come over the years, but today's generation gets overwhelmed with all of the technology that is thrown at us. I would've never imagined Google came up with a Google Car project and to think they've been around sense 2009 is crazy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, is a very challenging place to explore due to its ferocious weather conditions although worthy of a space misson there despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus, also known as the ¨Evening Star¨ is earths planetary neighbor. The atmosphere of Venus is made up of almost entirely 97 percent carbon dioxide. One of the more dangerous factors of Venus is the highly corrosive clouds of sulfuric acid. Temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. Venus holds the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in the solar system.\n\nDespite the deadly conditions on the surface of Venus, astonomers are fascinated by Venus because it ¨may well have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.¨ A long time ago, Venus was probably covered in oceans and may have supported various life forms like Earth. Venus has a lot of features that are similar to those of Earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes the familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus could hold some very valuable information. Scientists are currently discussing further vists to the planet as of right now. If scientists can figure out how to overcome such conditions they plan on taking a trip to Venus soon. If scientists do overcome such conditions to make this trip, this could possibly mean many scientifcal advancements!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus author ends last specified paragraph When came back I take test again leaves many unanswered questions reader might The reader might want read next piece work Basically last paragraph drows attention reader many unanswered questions revolve around I failed test We also know her gentle grandmother mrsLambert home Another reason author might end story paragraph effect reader The reader left assume imagine things come Will pass test Will go home What happen All know when snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again likely author ended story paragraph dramatic effect reader This I believe author Winter Hibiscus ended specified paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face wasnt designed by aliens. There isnt any proof that alienseven exsist. The face is an illusion, you have to catch it at the right angle because if you catch it at another angle you ont be able to see it. You can see that aliens didnt make it because when they took the picture in 1998 you couldnt really see the face, but in 2001 you could see it 3 times better than the first one. When taking pictures you always have to get the right angle because either something gets left out or something dosent shows up. If there were any aliens we would have seen them due to the fact that we have spacecrafts taking pictures of it and we have been on the planet ourselves. If aliens did make it why are we just noticing it why didnt we notice it the other times. or better than that why havent we seen any aliens working on it. If aliens did do it why is that the only thing they made why havent they made other things why just a face? We all know that aliens dosent exsist so stop saying that until we have evidence that aliens exsist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For centuries, artworks have been titled 'Work of Art' based on their extraordinary qualities. However, some people argue that nowadays, the standards are decreasing and the labelling of substandard artworks as 'masterpieces' has become ubiquitous. The upcoming essay will discuss why I agree that original paintings are being neglected while usual ones are being praised.\nFirstly, the superficial nature of humans is responsible for this change. These days, people do not see the meaning behind the painting or the message the artist is trying to convey rather they buy those paintings which are popular and contemporary. To illustrate it further, in art auctions it can be seen that when one person bids on one painting, no matter whether it is good or bad, others also start putting their money on it. Thus it is clear that normal art forms are winning prizes due to public attention.\nSecondly, some artists might bribe the organizers of exhibitions to promote their canvas. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances when artists were caught while signing up deals to increase the sales of their work. If a certain artwork receives publicity then it is impossible that it would not have an influence on the public. This type of promotion skews a person's opinion about a certain picture and so are forced to think about purchasing it, leaving behind original ones. Therefore, it is apparent that the diabolical activities of painters are responsible for their works being labelled as masterpieces.\nTo conclude, the maintenance of social position and influence of painters are the prime causes for the popularity of ordinary artworks and the negligence of true works. Hence I agree with the given statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author chose end paragraph paragraph represents new beginnings starting When Saeng fails driving test moment weakness feels lonely sees plant reminds home Vietnam In since plant comforts its flowers arent pretty its strong enough make cold months here In quote Saengs mother tells flower place yet found courage determination still grow In closing paragraph Saeng decides like flower birds also find coarge face fears She deciedes retake tests", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist anything reading Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted speeding Limit In beginining cyclists begun cycling cause uses positive tone describe setting For example paragraph four says the cool pines running rivers Yosemite name written When says reader imagines someone excited destination dry day As cyclists attitude becomes lower reader makes connection setting In paragraph thirteen cyclist says I wiped swear eyes make sure wasnt mirage get excited reader make connection getting pretty serious cyclist continue Overall setting changes burning sun extremely hot shortage water cyclist becomes sarcastic less upheat For example taking rocks mouth states with luck Id hit bump lodge one throat This shows bad mood affected features setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates mood inspires us try hardest mood perseverence The mood perseverence expressed memoir many ways One way stress moved United States lived one bedroom apartment They finally saved enough money able move bedroom apartment In neighborhood family raise much money possible buy food help people need anything water shelter clothing The reason move Cuba begin better life United States never gave day finally enough money live", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe they should change the voting to popular votes. In my perspective voters are the most important in the elections. There opinion on the president should be able to count either way. Lots of voters feel left out like there opinion dont count. Sometimes the president elected by the electoral college is not the one every one wanted; he has diffrent points of view in what he want to do.\n\nThe president that the electoral college has elected is not always the one everyone expects to be. Lots of presidents have won by electoral college not by the voters. These presidents that are elected by the electoral college can possibly be the presidents to bring the United States to the ground.\n\nThe voters feel they know what is best for our country. They always elect the person that will bring America to the top. For example Barack Obama he is helping immagrants go back to school be able to get a job and be something in life, like maybe a mechanic,doctor, or even a federal officer. They chances that he has gave us lets people know that these are the type of presidents we need.\n\nPeople feel left out because if the electoral college ar the people that are going to select the president what is the point in voting. Lots of them feel that electoral college is more important than what we the people think. The electoral college doesn't let people feel that the person hat they have selected is the president that will help out the United States Of Americam to become number one.\n\nOn the other hand people believe that the electoral college is good and we should keep having it. They believe this because because they think that they know what is best for us. Also that their vote is the best option than ours.\n\nI believe that the president should be able to win by popular vote because we the people shall select the best president. The president that will once again put the U.S back on top. The president that wins should win by popular vote not by the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is about a computer than can get facial expressions down to an exact science and even percents of what people are feeling. The Mona lisa is a very hard painting to read what is happening or how she is feeling but this computer solved it. She is 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. This computer solved something no one has known but Leonardo da Vinci himself. I think this kind of techknowledgy is amazing and fasinating. A classroom computer could tell when a kid is bored or confused. This could help teacher tell when to chnage their teaching style. It could also tell when school fights are about to happen, but lets stick with the positive impacts of this computer. If you have a kid that is mentally chanlenged or slow this could tell what they truly get and what they need help with more. I know in our school we have fast learners who are super smart and slow learners who are super smart as well and get frusterated whenthey get behind trying to keep up with the fast learners and the teachers cant tell when that happens. It could make lessons more effective. If you have to look up the internet how to make a happy face. You need this. It will tell you if you need less fear, more happines, or even less anger in your life. Humans can recognize some of the facial expressions but to get it down to a percent is amazing. This techknowledgy could be used all around the world. It would be used with criminals to help see if they are lying or not to nust him/her for what they did. It could be used with suicidal people to keep them away from those thought and even taking their own life. One of the biggest ones it could be used in the military to see if people are menatlly healthey enough to do this kind of work. Or even somehow be transformed to find schoolshooters and/or bombers at events by reading there faces. This has the potential to save lots of lives if it was formed into something like that. This tech could be at the top of the list for some of the best ever created by man kind, and its all thanks to one man Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for advanced Science at the University of Amsterdam. These men specialize in human and computer comunication. And they have made something amazing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know you might think that the face on Mars was created by aliens, but here at NASA we have been doing reasearch for many years to find any signs of life on other plants, and so far we have nothing. The face on Mars might look like it was created by aliens, but our reasearch shows that it is just shadows. Also because we have been doing reaserch for so long all of our studies show that there is no possible way that any creature would be able to survive on any other planet in our solar system other then Earth. Also as it said in our reserch it is just a rock formation that happened because of soemthing like a landslide.\n\nWhen all of us here at Nasa first saw the image we knew we had to study it! When we beagan our studies we sent a space craft up to take pictures. When we recived those pictures we noticed that it looked like it was a shadow of the way we were taking the picture or maybe the way that rocks were laying. We were all still curious on how the rocks got there so we kept studying!\n\nAt NASA there is always reaserch of something going on! When we first started reaserch one of our main goals was to figure out if there is any possible way that people could live on any other planet then Earth. So far we have concluded that there is no possible way that anyone could survive on any other planent, because there is no suply of food or water. So with our prior knoladge of that we knew that there were no aliens on any planets!\n\nEven though we knew all these things we still wanted to know more so we continued our reasearch. While contuning our reaserch we found out that it was highliy possible that there was something like a landslide on Mars. With our knoladge of landslides we knew that they can sometimes form things like rock scopluters that look like things they are something they are not. So with all of our reaserch we all came to a conclusion.\n\nAll of us at NASA were very sure with our conclusion of this was not created by aliens that it was just something as simple as a land slide and shadows. Throughout our reasearch we found out that the reason the rocks look like a face is shadows, and that the rocks got there from something like a landslide. These are the reasons us at NASA belive that the face on Mars was not created by aliens but simply rocks and a shadow.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How Laughter Laughter huge help going difficult times Like time brother got ran skid steer tracked loader farm We nt know bad going time uncertainty family us help us keep us getting It another day farm running machines The day going fine dinner mom told brother go cut corn CAPS mom brother said unison She would nt hear told us hurry leave So went shop got skid steer My brother still nt come I started started driving towards garden I saw brother coming corner eye He running fast could I yelled stop wait kept coming He tried jump front forks missed fell I got cab saw lying ground crying My uncle standing near happened called ambulance We nt know wrong leg looked little funny looked closer saw bone sticking leg Finally ambulance came looked asked questions happened I told could went back house It nerve racking know going happen leg hoped would nt serious I spent night grandparents house I lot trouble falling sleep night though The next morning I go school I still nt know lot know brother s leg broke compound fracture The whole school day friends helping feel better telling jokes funny stuff keeping mind accident It hard knowing going Later night went see We learned broken big bone leg gone back together fine My mom stayed whole time hospital things around house little bit different Me dad sisters clean take care house It pain I hate house work time vary boring When mom brother finally got back week things went somewhat back normal My brother ware thing leg sucked fluids wound help heal faster There giant screws coming leg attached bar outside leg He healed fine though giant scar bone came leg It nice family friends cheer us help us get And laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear know people today use computer necessary reasons true fact computer help keeping touch friends getting latest news even gives map access Let tell important facts computer Of course friends different cities andor states Instead charging phone bill many people keep touch via email Email high tech super easY All need friends email adress send anything friendly hello pictures family Teens love chat friends re able get know better computer Sites facebook certainly popular generation teens The fun messages makes everything great Keep mind avaiible ways get touch friends see computer great Everytime I log onto computer I m able see latest news updates I remember going seeing something pop favorite band breaking Thanks computer I got read I extremely glad I d seen I nt I would nt got see last concert While I understand computer healthiest activity definaltly great news source everyone reads news whether political celeberties Knowledge s currently happening country exercise equally important therefore I d first support computer possitive effect people today Have ever lost Maybe nt write correct directions could nt remember Next time bok directions computer helpful could really save hastle There re many websites maps print map quest much easier clearer way understand exactly need go In opinion help much would right idea go cheer today Imagine places could go getting map online Keep mind one many great things computer Now know posotives computer remember could benefit Being able chat friends one best Do nt forget hearing latest news finally never get lost print map There s doubt mind computer possative effect every one The time get pick computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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