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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist It affected saying miles first town thinking cyclist getting excited kind done thought going fast past When cyclist got first town said looked dead And kept moving kind knew wasnt getting anywhere Then thinking noticed listened old folks never even porch So cyclist hit first town known right ho never listen old folkes ever Because first town looked like nobody years", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Usually I little patience yes I know patience virtue birthday years ago I stay hospitle room dad spend time mom boring somehow I managed go whole day dad finally let watch room without baerd tears", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars seem to be something that is popular for the near future. In my point of view, the Driverless Car is an invention that could possibly be dangerous for the saftey of us citizens. Why would we possibly need a car to drive itself? The passage states that the car will still need the attention of the driver, so basically it seems pointless. The manufacturers say that there is a lot to work on, that just makes me think it is really not a good idea if saftey is a main concern.\n\nThe Driverless Car is not going to completely be \"driverless\"! They are planning to have some sort of entertainment in the vehicle for the driver, wouldn't that be dangerous? The driver will be distracted and will not be paying attention to the road, what if the displays don't turn off and the car is headed into trouble? The driver has to be alert, and I believe that it takes away from the whole point of the driverless creation. The passage even mentions that the safest way to drive is to be completely engaged on the road with both hands on the steering wheel. There are so many things that can go wrong, I predict that the manufacturers will never be completely positive that the car is 100% safe.\n\nManufacturers are still figuring out how to make the car better, that signifies that there are multiple things that could go very wrong. They need ways to get the distracted driver's attention so they can take over, they need emergency systems, and many more years of working on this project. The creators don't want the drivers to be bored so they are building distracting entertainment inside the vehicle, but they are also concerned with the saftey and attention of the driver. All of these things put together add up to make it seem dangerous.\n\nI agree that driverless cars are possibly our future, they do sound interersting. They catch the attention of many people, it's the type of things we see in the movies and it would change our everyday lives. We have to pay good attention on our saftey more than our pleasure. Many states are against computer driven cars, it is for the saftey of the people. It would be so simple for one small error to go in the wrong direction.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many opinions and ways to view the future of our vehicles. My view is that the Driverless Car is something we could live without, it is another dangerous invention that can easily cause negative accidents. The intention of the manufactures is to make our future dream like and fun, but the cons of this invention are not good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by some that the news is not related to people's livelihood and that is why it does not deserve the attention to read or watch them. In my opinion, it is really questionable if one should acquire such a type of knowledge or not. This essay will discuss both sides.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,processing the news can lead to overloading our brains with useless information. For example, an average citizen has no need to heat the information about wars, conflicts, weather catastrophics, etc. happening in other countries, if it is only not linked with his or her own region. Moreover,to my view, it only distracts the mind and puts a watcher into an anxious mood. My parents watch television news every evening and learn nothing from them but some rubbish facts which are undoubtedly important for other continents but not for Russia, the place where they live.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the information linked with the area where person lives becomes crucial in some sort of situation. For instance, knowledge about local floods, car accidents, fires and other emergency situations can orient purson and prevent him or her from taking part in such unfortunate events.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would say that the question whether perceiving the news by one is useless or not depends on the type of information. It influences mind overload or sponserses society with extremely helpful knowledge which can help it to escape unhappy occasions. I think the government of each particular country should inform the population with the second type.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph author would like finish last sentence story Also last paragraph visualizing putting effort hibiscus Therefore thoughts appreciated plant The author wanted evidence story For example said spring snow melt geese ruturn hibiscus budding I take test It includes winter time plant Also spring plant comes back character saeng get back visit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen a lifeform on mars? You didnt see one, while there is acually a face on mars that sciencetist like me actaully discover.\n\nTwetny five years ago something unfailre happen. The NASA's viking 1 spaceship was going around the planet mars, and was snapping some pictures for his sister to land. When the viking 2 saw some spotted a shadowy like human face it stop. From nearly two iles they saw an emormous head end to end on the red plaent called Cydonia.\n\nThe NASA team finally unveiled the image to see what it was. the notice tjeu have captioner a huge rock formation... which was a human face formed by shadows. The \"Face of Mars\" has become a huge pop icon. it starred in hollywood, appeared in books, news paper, radio stations, and even a haunted grocery store that checkedout lines for at least 25 years!\n\n18 long years after the vikings misson had ended. They took photos pf Cydonia for becoming priority for NASA.\n\n\"We felt this was important to taxpayers,\" explained Jim Garvin, cheif sciencetist for NASA's Mars Explorstion Program. \"We photograpghed the face as son as we could get a good shot at it.\"\n\nFor a long period of time we thought that aliens were just builting the face on mars because there has been no one that went up there expect the vikings or some living thing like an alien. If you want to go up into space to see the face on Mars you cant because in 2001 it has became to look like a mountain instead off a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is assumed that the majority of jobs in the future will be done by machines with artificial intelligence. Although, some unskilled occupations might be replaced by robots, it is unlikely that jobs that do not need the human contact will be taken over. This essay will discuss why only particular jobs will be carried out by people.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, all menial jobs eventually would taken over by robots in the near future. In the other words, due to technology improvement works that does not require any specific and complex human skills can be replaced easily. For the simple reason that, it is far less expensive than hiring, training and employing a human. For instance, in canada some food deliveries have been replaced by automated robots that cost far less than employees. In addition, these food deliveries work around the clock and require no holidays or holiday pays. For these reasosn, robotic intelligence will carry out unskilled or easy jobs.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, conversly, there are some occupations that cannot be replaced because robots will never achieve the ability to do them. Put simply, some jobs cannot be done without a human touch or skill. For example, these jobs include Psychology and Medicine or more. Bots cannot think or feel so they will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution thousands of years to achieve.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is increasingly likely that automatons will end most human employment. Hence, unskilled labour will eventually be done entirely by automatons. However,sophisticated works that require human specific skills will always exist. Ultimately, very few people will be safe in progressively artificially intelligent work force.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, th ey get us places faster and could also show a soc i al s tatis. Sports, muscle, luxeruy, and exotic all can show a differen t stature but, cars are harmful. Gas es from t he cars cause harm to the Ozone layer i n the atmo s phere m a king the w orld hotter every ye a r. We really s hould cu t down o n our car usage or the world could be in big trouble.\n\nOne way Paris is helping out is a partial ban on driving. They do this to control the smog, a gas created f rom cars, to pro m ote good air and have a cleaner cit y . On Monday drivers with a even license plate are ordered to leave their cars home or pay a thirty one dollar f ine, and it wo u ld apply to the odd license plate the next day.\n\nNow Paris is not the only one on the c lean air bane wagon so is the United States. President Obama wants to curb the greenhouse emissions. But in recent studies show that fewer Americans are buying fewer cars, getting a license and even driving each year.\n\nNow even in BOGOTA, Colombia they are helping with the air the capital city even has a special day. On the \"car-free day\" in Colombia, people leave their cars and walk, s k ate, b i ke and eve n just ride the bus. For three years they have done this only allowin g buses and t ax i s per m itted on th e road. Violaters face a twenty five dollar fine if they decide to drive their own car that day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Join the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can experience different adventures from all around the world.\n\nBody#1: In the program, you can experience different countries and adventures from all around the world. You can also visit places you have not been to before. After you come back home, it can make you more aware of people in different countries.\n\nIn the program, you go from country to country delivering horses, mules, supplies and also sometimes food. Joining this program is very helpful to the citizens/people living in these countries because of World War II.\n\nAlthough, joining this program can sometimes be very dangerous. From high waves and huge thunderstorms, to slipping overboard and getting very wet and ice-cold. Sometimes, you are elected to be a night watchman and check on the animals hourly, but just be careful about where you step because you might slip and fall down the side of the ship.\n\nNow that I've told you everything about the program, who wants to join?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because venus is sometimes callled a \"Evening Star\" that star is one ofthe brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot,\n\nVenus is the clostest plantet to earths in terms of density and size,occasionally is the closest in distance as well.Earths,Venus,and Mars,and the other planetary neighbor, orbits the sun to different speeds how much they be going,but there is a difference in each speed. Some of them are closer to Mars and other times to Venus,and most of the times venus is sometimes around the coner in space terms. There is an thick atmosphere and that thick atmosphere is almost about 97% of carbon dioxide blanckets of venus, on the plante's surface temperatures average is over 800 degress fahrenheit,snd the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we all have experience in our own planet. High pressure and heat venusian geology and the weather present additional impediments for example like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquackes,and frequent lightning stickes to probes seeking to land on its surface when it happens. Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of thier way,thirty-plus miles above the surface,and the temperatures would still be nice and really toasty very warm the temperature would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have been supported various forms of life,just like the earth right now. Today,Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth,The challenge presented by Venus has vaule,our travles on earth and beyond there should not be no limited by dangers or doubts but should be expanded to meet edges of imagination and also innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS is a very impressive piece of technology that many people wouldn't believe was possible. The ability to read the emotions of an individual through a simple picture or video is definitely impressive and could be considered one of the greater advancements in technology in recent years. The potential for this system is extremely high, and with proper handling, it could become a very useful tool in society. With that being said, even though this new system is a great piece of technology, it should stay out of classrooms for now because students deserve their privacy, there's the possibility of emotions being misread, and individualizing education is a risky thing to do.\n\nWhile there are definitely students that wouldn't mind having their emotions being read, without agreement from all students having this system implemented into classrooms would be an invasion of privacy and would be unfair to those who would rather conceal their emotions. Having a student's emotions be tracked and recorded while they're trying to learn is immoral. In the article, Dr. Huang states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" While there's a possibility that teachers could utilize this to help the student, would they really change their entire lesson just to suite the needs of one student? Also, a student may be confused or bored, but they may not want their instructor to know that. Their right to conceal their emotions is the most important thing here, and the FACS does not do that.\n\nAnother reason to keep this system away from schools is that there is a possibility that a student may not be expressing their emotion with their face. In the article, Dr. Huang says that a computer could modify the lesson for students feeling bored or confused. It's completely plausible that a student may completely understand a lesson but may indicate that they are confused by their facial expressions. The system would try to alter the lesson to fit the student's learning preference, and this may end up confusing the student instead of helping them. There are endless possibilities for a misread empotion, and until the system is deemed completely free of error, the FACS should not come anywhere near classrooms.\n\nTeachers cannot teach each one of their students individually. There is simply not enough time in the day for that. So when Dr. Huang claims that the FACS will \"modify the lesson\", this may not be good for the long-term education of a student. A student may learn more efficiently in a specific way, but a teacher must teach her entire class. One student is not the instructor's biggest priority. If a lesson is altered to fit one student's needs, would the rest of the class suffer a different method of learning as well? Also, if each student in a class learns most efficiently in different ways, would some of the learning methods be more advantageous than others? If all students are learining in ways that have been modified and individualized for them specifically, than it seems plausible that some methods of learning would benefit students on standardized tests and other things. This individualization may be allowing some students to prosper and setting other students up for failure.\n\nIn conclusion, the FACS is not a bad thing. Actually, it's a great step in technology for the world and will continue to be improved and become more accurate. But for right now, the system is still young. Flaws in the system will be found and fixed. It's possible that in a few years the system will be flawless and ready for daily use. Today though, the system should not even be considered to be implemented into classrooms, for the sake of privacy, the possibilty of an error in calculation, or the modification and indiidualization of learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless cars are coming\". I thought that its a great idea to make driverless cars. The reasons are pubic transportation systems, could improve roads, and makes it safer for drivers. Thats why I think they they should develope self driving cars.\n\nTransportatation for people is really critacl because they need to get places fast and in a safe way. The cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and flexibilty than a bus said the aricle on the fisrt paragh. Which leads to the point in where\n\nsafer transportsion means there should be safer roads.\n\nSafer roads is one of the biggest things the world should have. In the 3rd pragrah its says, \"the track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a reciver on the front end of the car.\" What this is saying is that if the roads would be contraled by people , but the people would be contraling the cars so they can navagate in where the care would be going. Then if we navagate the car it means we can make the driver safe.\n\nKeeping the driver safe is a really good thing to do. To do this is by having alot of sensors in the car and also out side of the car. In paragrah number 7 in the articel it says, \" they can steer, acclerate, and brake themselves, but all are disinged to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skilles, such as navigating through work zones. What this means is that humans driver have to be alerted to take over. This is a good thing becasue we could add another sensor which can navagate threw work zones so that the drive does not have to crash.\n\nFinally, I think that drivless cars should be around the world so that people would get to places faster and be much safer and not crush and get sude by other people. Also, I hope that other states in america are able to pass the law for self driving cars to take place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people in the community believe that youngsters should do some kinds of charity in their leisure time; therefore, both these precious minds and public will favour from this habit. I fully agree with this argument and the details will be discussed in the essay below.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, a person should realize the importance of being a part of the society; besides, he should understand and always remember that populations should only stand-still with the sense humor by knowing the meaning of living in the same neighbourhood. This habit will penetrate into the personality and become a spontaneous behaviour of the person if it is learned in the early stages of life as the routine lifestyle. \r\n\r\nFamilies or teachers can support the youngsters to attend to some activities related with the benefits of the community such as helping the old people’s groceries. Meanwhile, a teenager can take apart to any kinds of environmental cleaning activities in his free time either for having a good time with his friends or to make his vicinity cleaner, which are helping his community to become a better place. Recent research from Oklahoma State University Social Psychology Department has concluded that a teenager’s mental health would become better if he/she attended for a couple of organizations related to the public without taking any money from that.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young people should help to their community in their spare time so that not only their mental health and the community’s well will become better as well which I also fully agree with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion I don't think it is neccesary to use that type of technology in the class room because you can tell when someone isn't paying attention or if they're really bored just by their body language. You can tell a lot just by a persons body language or how they are acting.\n\nIn paragraph 5 it states that,\"you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by look on her face\". You can also tell how a person is feeling by their body language. If their head is down you might think they feel sick,tired, or they might not want to talk to anyone. It is east to tell when someone it feeling happy because when they are happy they stand up straight,have a smile on their face. A person's attitude can tell a lot about someone. For example if you can their name and the answer \"what!\" it can mean they are annoyed by someone or something. Another example can be when you're talking to someone and they answer you with no emotion on their face,and they slumped down in a chair can mean they are either tired and don't have any engery to do anything and maybe want some time to themselves.\n\nMy other reason why I disagree is that FACS might cost the school a lot of money. Instead of buying this technology why not buy more books or take field trips. Why buy something that might be used once rather than save the money and use it for soemthing good. Like buying better computer for the school or buying materials for the classes. If a student isn't paying attention instead of modifying the lesson like it states in paragraph 6. Why wont the teacher help the student after school instead of changing the lesson. It would help the student understand more and help him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has revolutionised our lives. Whereas, some people argue that instead of making lives easy, technology has made human lives difficult. In my opinion, technology has positively impacted our lives in more ways than can be imagined but at the same time it has some drawbacks as well.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, the use of artificial intelligence and robotics has made living efficient and systematic. With these rapidly growing contemporary ,innovations it is possible to the tasks in minutes rather than spending hours on them in the office and at home as well. For instance, a simple task like cooking and cleaning used to take hours to complete, but it can now be done in minutes without putting any physical effort into it. As a result, people find more time to relax , making their lives stress-free.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, if the automation is not used responsibly it can have negative impacts as well, especially on children. Overuse of video games, gadgets, and mobile phones can essentially destroy the kid's future. Moreover, instead of spending time studying they spend all the time in front of the screens consequently, this affects their physical and mental well-being as well. For example, if a kid is spending hours playing violent games, he is more likely to feel frustrated and angry than kids who spend time in healthy activities like sports and reading books.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, where technology has numerous benefits and makes life so comfortable, it can have some serious adverse effects, if used unsupervised among children. However, if kids are supervised they can do wonders using the same technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s time, some people are of the opinion that almost all occupation will be replaced by artificial intelligent robots. I am of the opinion that the profession which required no or less skills would be replaced by robots, but highly skilled jobs will still be done by humans. \n\nThe work which are less skilled work will certainly be carried out by the robots. Hiring a person for a menial job like security guard, parking ticket checker etc requires a lot of money for an employer. So, it is highly likely they will deploy robots instead of humans which are cheaper and need less maintenance, due to this, the company profit will go up. For example, in a manufacturing factory, there used to be a lot of workers and now all the work has been replaced by machines that was only one time investment. As a result, the employers are making huge amount of profits. \nFor this reason, unskilled jobs will be replaced by artificial intelligence. \n\nOn the other hand, jobs that require professional expertise and special skills can never be replaced by artificial intelligence. For example, psychologists, teachers and doctors are profession which require human interaction, and expertise cannot be replaced. Those profession have taken hundreds of years to develop, hence are highly unlikely be replaced by the machines. Moreover, robots can do a work which is of repetitive nature, a task which requires logical thinking and application of knowledge will not be affected by them. \n\nIn conclusion, in my opinion, the jobs which require special training cannot be replaced, on the other hand, laborious or low skilled work will eventually be done by the robots in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been in a car accident? For those who have, they will tell you that it is a very scary situation. In my opinion, I believe that we shouldn't use driveless cars because there are too many variables that come along with driving. So many people get into car accidents every year and if we start using driverless cars, then i think that it will increase the amounts of car accidents every year.\n\nWhile being able to focus on other tasks while driving does sound useful, it would be better for everyone involved to just stick to normal driving. With so many different things that can cause accidents, why put your life in the hands of a computor. For example, in paragraph 7 they mention that the driverless cars that have been made so far are not completely driverless because whenever there is a situation that requires human skill, the driver must take over. So what happens when a deer runs in front of your car? Does it just stop?\n\nMany people have a hard time learning to drive as it is. And while this does help us make it easier, what happens when no one knows how to drive because we let the cars do the driving? With all the advances in technology that we have made, I think this is one we can keep simple. Do you really wanna risk your life in a car that will stop driving itself when a squirrel jumps in front of it? I didn't think so, keep it simple and keep it safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article it talked about trying to travel on Venus. I would say to my best opinion one day we will have the technology to travel to Venus and stay their for my then a couple weeks and be able to learn more about Earth's sister planet. What i like a lot about this article it that it makes sure to talk about a lot of similarities it has to earth and as well as s lot of differences it has to earth as well. What I found the most crazy about this was that no robot or anything we sent to\n\nVenus could survive the harsh conditions for more then a few hours.\n\nWhen it comes down to it the aurthor as you can tell heavily supports the thought of traveling to Venus. I support It also because it never hurts to learn new things about someone or something, but I think the thing that is stopping us is the cost that it takes to send something up there and there is no point to just send someone up there to die. What i like about this article is that it talks about a lot of things Venus has in common with earth and a lot of thing Earth and Venus have thats different then each other. Somethings Earth and Venus have in common together is they are both reletivily the same and they are really close to each other in distance. But some differences are is Earth is ble top have life on it and Venus is not because the heat, pressure, and the chemicals in the air.\n\nDispite the want to travel to Venus and figure it out it seems highly unklikely because how dangerous the planet actually is. While traveling to Venus sounds like a really cool to do sometime down the future right now and I know we don't have the money to support a trip that far away even if its supposed to be close by. One of the main reasons I think scientists want to travel to Venus so bad is because they're always trying to learn new things and you can't punish anyone for wanting to expand there knowledge. In the end traveling there right now seems impossible because of the air, pressure and heat would kill any human very shortly afore setting foot of the planet, but i do beleive that one day we will diffinetly be there one day in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, People do not preffer to have a kid in their early age as they used to before. The main reason behind it is that, most people these days preffer to be well established ecnomically, before planing a baby, so in future they can fullfil the needs of their child easily. This shows that the parents are becoming more responsible these days, however, it is difficult to get pregnant in later age. But,witht the help of the medical advancements, this modern approach has few risks, but the great benifits in long run.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the parents are more responsible these days . For example, both the mother and the father go to work these days, and they want to reach their goals in carrier, before planing the children. This help them to financially support their baby while rasing it. Otherwise, an unplanned child can create many problems between thier parents, either it's mentally or for the money. Which shows the planned birth for a newborn is ideal for its better life.\r\n\r\nIn the contrary, as the people get older it is medically difficult for them to get pregnant. Foe an instance, today, the stress level in the general public has increased widely, wheather it is of the job, life , relationship, etc. and to get settled in the life take a while. Afterthat, pregnancy chances for a couple is smaller as it was in their early youth. These days many medical treatements are avialable to cope with this situation, so the chances for a dispointments are less.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is a wise decision for a family to plan before having a newborn. There is no need for hurry as it will benifical for both parents and the kids. The new generation of our will be raise properly in this way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable, it'll allow teachers to better understand their students.\n\nIf teachers could identify when a student begins to lose interest in a lesson, then the teacher can think of a better way to teach them. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" The FACS also allows teachers to identify which students are going through depression. Leading those students getting faster help, and less suisides. The FACS is able to tell mixed emotions and identify each one in a percent value. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nI believe this evidence is able to express my claim that, the use of FACS to read emotional epressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The technology gives teachers chances to avoid multiple, unwanted situations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you were in Europe on a cattle boat what would you do? First of all here's some things you would do or what you want to do.\n\nOk 1945, world war was over in Europe, and many countries were left in reins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA [ the United Nations relief and rehabilitation administractor].\n\nUNRRA hired seagoing Cowboys to take care of the animals that were shied overseas. Those were the things you would've had to do.\n\nThe thing that you want to do is help people out you would have the opportunity to go to Europe and China. It would take about 2 weeks to cross Alantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. So caring for the animals is a nice and helpful thing that would keep you busy. Stalls had to be cleaned out every single day and you have to feed them. Helping out at a farm would prepare you for hard work. You would be very happy in Europe on a cattle boat exspeacally if you are a man. You would get little hurt but not for long. You would play a lot of games like boxing, playing volleyball, basketball and more. It would be a adventure if you are a seagoing cowboy.\n\nThose are somethings you would have to do and what you would want to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nThis technology is valuable because we can actually determine what or how someone is feeling. However making faces can reveal so much about the science of emotions. Alot of us human beings hide our emotions either because of what other people might think or because\n\nyou dont want them to feel empathy for you, which is feeling someone else's emotional state. There's also a big lack of human communication. For example, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr.Huang.\"So computers need to understand that too.\"\n\nYes i know everyone is like how can we acually calculate our emotions or how can a computer recognize the facial movement that we use to express how we feel. I have prove from the article,\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\",...all 44 major muscles in the model(face) must move like human muscles.\" That detects whether its a human or not because of the muscles in our face. Even if we dont have the system just by looking at someone when they are sad there's a frown, when they're happy abviously a smile, etc.\n\nThe system and us humans can also tell the difference between a fake and a real meaningful smile. In the cite it states,\" In the real smile, the zygomatic(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth.\" And in a false smile,\"..,the mouth is stretched sideways\n\nusing the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" Using this system would really benefit all of us in whether there's no communication then with the system you'll see why.\n\nAnother example would be the Mona Lisa Smile theres alot of emotions going on its a pretty confusing picture if you look at the details pretty closely, but just looking at her like this in the painting we see a smile and we just think that she is happy which in reality there's more than that being shown. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", they used the system and these were the results,\"she's 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\"\n\nThe system will show more than what we human beings believe a human's emotion or how they are feeling, thats why it is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus \" it gives you pros and cons over stuyding venus and even visiting it. It argues many good reasons such as, Its the closest to earth, secondary from our planet, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes fimiliar features, and they have tested many things for survival if were to visit.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun, often refered as Earth's \" twin \". it is the closeet planet to earth in terms of density, size, and even distance. It is simple to see from distant and a safe vantage point. Therefore, It is the closest to visit.\n\nAstronomers have been fascinated because venus may have been once the most Eath-like planet in the solar system. It was probably covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of like just like Earth. Familiar features include valleys, mountains, and craters. Can be the nearest to secondary planetary visit. I use these examples from the text because these are reasons why studying venus despite the dangers my be important.\n\nNASA has an idea for sending humans to explore and stufy Venus. Scientists would float above fray at thirty miles per hour temperatures will be toasty at a high degrees Fahrenheit, air pressure would be close to sea level of Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not be passed Earth levels. No easy conditions but the are survivable. They've also studied electronics to be used while visiting and studying venus.\n\nStudying Venus and exploring can be seen as very dangerous but NASA and others have tested and studyied about the importance and the saftey on sending another. Despite the dangers, pros and cons of this it can also be an awesome experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their is no way that the US can continue approving the electoral college! Its a cotastrophe waiting to happen! The electoral college is going to fall apart any moment. It basically takes away one of every americans best rights, The right to vote! Why would we take time out of our lifes to vote when we are basically voting for someone to vote for us? This can pretty much decide an election and we would have no say. This is a completely unfair part of the election. This is an anachronism and a very non-democratic way of electing presidents. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust has a chance to be betrayed. Although its a small chance it can still happen. It happened in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes but Bush had more electoral votes. If the electoral college didn't exist, Gore may have become president and it may have been a much better run. If we have election by popular vote we will get a fair and legit outcome. Their will be no errors or lying or even hacks in the decision or system. That is why the electoral college is not a good system to use for electing a president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should there be driverless cars in the future? Driverless cars are good to use if you are disabled, or getting ready for a meeting and had no time at home. On the other hand, driverless cars should not be on the roads because they are dangerous in so many ways. They can't see things when backing up. Nor can they stop immediately if a car drives by quickly when backng up.\n\nDriverless cars should not be on the roads due to dangers of people and other drivers on the road. Maybe someone might want to drive to the store but turn early to go somewhere else. The car may or may not turn for the person inside of the car if they tell the car to turn sooner. When a driverless car is backing out of a driveway, they might keep going even if there is a car coming and about to hit the driverless car. Some cars don't see others when backing out of a driveway and they can't automatically stop if there is one close and about to hit you. When backing out of a parking space, driveway, or anything else, the driver should take control to back out and then let the car go back to being driverless. It is for the safety of other cars and the safety of people.\n\nDriverless cars can be great for people going to meetings and they didn't have time to put makeup on, then that person can get ready in the car as the car takes them to their destination. Lets say that a person is going to the bar, and they take a taxi there and back. The driverless car would be in great use for that person when they leave the bar. If a person is intoxicated they should not be driving at all. So, the driverless car can take control and take that intoxicated person home without getting pulled over or getting in an accident. Another good reason driverless cars can be great is for gas and speed limits. There are speed limits for a reason and if driverless cars were in control then there would be no more speeding on roads. There would be no more tickets handed out for speeding. With driverless cars there would be less gas used.\n\nMy opinion is that there should not be driverless cars in this world. There is too many dangerous things that can happen like not stopping immediately, just backing out and not caring who is coming, and too many accidents waiting to happen. Some people are right, there can be driverless cars for people who cannot drive if they are injured, intoxicated, or cannot see, but not the whole world should have driverless cars. Also, yes, these cars are good for speed limits and gas usage, but the government would be spending way too much money on these cars. Most of the money that we have would go towards building these. Not everyone would have one of these cars.\n\nThere are many reasons to have and not to have these driverless cars. Some people think that they should in case of an injured person who needs to get to places and if someone is intoxicated with alcohol they should have one ready to pick them up instead of having that intoxicated person have a chance of getting into a crash. Some people think that they should not have these cars due to dangers of people in other cars. There are certain places to have these cars and not to have these cars, and some of the places that should would be downtown in larger cities. Places not to have them are in neighborhoods near kids and in the country. I think that these could work just not everywhere in this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez writes mainly grateful everything grew truly mood created author Narciso grateful cuban culture incorperated life growing even though New Jersey He also grateful parents sacrafices made order grow His parents also taught kind everyone treat everyone like family He grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Deciding career pathways and academic pathways immediately after graduating from high school is a controversial topic in society. Many people hold the opinion that enrolling on further education has many benefits. Others, however, believe that there are many more drawbacks to becoming undergraduate students. Whilst, entering an educational institution soon after year 12 is advantageous in a few aspects, I agree that there are much more positivities of taking gap years for travelling and working because of opportunities to gain life experience and to earn their living. \n\nOn the one hand, there are two most considerable disadvantages of taking gap years which are wasting their and deteriorating academic skill. While the majority of school leavers go to university to acquire knowledge, they will obtain a degree after three years of working hard. Those students who take gap years, obviously are left behind by their peers. Moreover, as the result of inconsistent learning, they might be losing academic skills such as literacy or discipline. For example, if the school leavers enrol for a course after three years of travelling or working when they start as undergraduate students, students being in their age probably start security jobs take another step for post-graduation. \n\nOn the other hand, the benefits of travelling and working after high school significantly outweigh the shortcomings. Firstly, instead of becoming full-time university students, they can become full-time workers to have a stable income. Hence, they can be financially independent which means they have less pressure when they go back to educational institutions later. In addition, some students have no idea what career they want to pursue in the further, so they can take gap years to explore their personal preferences. For example, if they want to become healthcare workers, they can start with personal care workers or patient transporters to get familiar with the hospital environment. \n\nIn conclusion, some students consider not taking gap years due to the fear of being left behind by their peers and the need of relearning their academic skills. Gap years, however, can bright to a number of benefits such as becoming independent in terms of financial aspects and choosing carefully their dreamed careers. In my opinion, the way of spending their time after high school is varied from person to person but having time to decide what they really want could be positive for most the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello my name is Jordan and this is my eassy. He had a very well writen \"essay\" that really makes you think of what venus really had on the surface of its extrem and harsh envierment. The fact that they are thinking of send people to that planet is relly mind blowing to me. He also did an amazing job at discribing the dangers of the planet and all of the extrem caonditions on the surface like the volcanos and earthquakes as mention in paragraph three.\n\nAlso how he mentioned how many veachals have been sent to the planet and how they didnt survived the harsh weather for more than a copple hours. It is very intresting how he discribes the way NASA is trying to deal with the challenges.\n\nthe way they have made some progress. such as the silicone carbide electronics that can survive in a simulated or replecated venus up tp 3 weeks are mentioned in paragraph 6. My question is would'nt the silicon melt with the heat on venus that is hotter than mars that is closer to the sun. It is very intresting how they have ideas of how they can have people on venus with the hover crafts that the resurchers would stay on and collect information.\n\nOneday this earth is going to be imposible to live on and we woill have to move to anoher planet or just die off and honestly we have lived for way to long longer than any other type of animal that has ever lived on this earth. we have survived so many things and eras. Many wars have been foght and many men have dies on this eath just fot the sake of defending there country and having the will honor to die with respect. Other animals have gone we have done too much damage to the earth and taken to many animals to extiton and the oceans are extremly poluted many fish are just dying off and peolpe cant seem to know why but the harsh truth is that the wrold is ending and there is no going back now.\n\nHumans hve changed climet pattens and know evey year it seems like the storms are getig stronger and the summers are geting hotter. The winters are taking longer to arive. and longer to leave volcano eruptions are almost common now evry year ut seems like a volcano want to erupt and sometimes it dose other times its just the ash that kills peolpe. What im trying to get at is that we really should'nt be exporing other planets when we dont even know what 98% of our oceans havent even been expored we need to learn how to take care of this planet before we even think about moving on to another planet or we will do the samething. The goverments dont seem to care much about the subject and act like its not happening. In conclution its amazing that we are trying to send men to other planets but not we really shoud'nt no matter how safe or dangeruse it is we need to fix the problems here on earth first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a basic need for people today we use them to go from point A to point B in the fastest way posible. But one must ask themselves \"do i really need the car?\", \"would i be better off without one?\", how do you tell people that what they have depended on for movement could be hurting them. I believe that cars should have a limited usage in cities because cars affect our efforts to reduce greenhouse gas, they cause smog to form around cities, and cause us to move through life at the fastest pase posible. A limited car usage would change the way we see the world its beauty, its adventersm, and we would be able to save the world from our distruction.\n\nThere is a community in Germany called Vauban where people have given up their cars. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, 57% sold their cars just to move to Vauban, \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much hapier this way,\" media trainer and mother of two Heidrun Walter says in the artical \"In German Subuerb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\". Also the artical states that passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and responsible for up to 50% in the United States. Vauban houses up to 5,500 resident within a rectangular square mile, which makes it posibly the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life, stores are placed just a short walk away so that no car is needed.\n\nSmog; a thick layer of black fog that hurts your lungs and can even kill you. Paris had to ban driving due to smog , cars with even numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive one day and the following day cars with odd numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive. 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters and 27 people had their cars impounded due to their reaction to the fine. This statement from the artical \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" show that cars are responsible for a gas that can kill people, and that people dont respond well to being told what to do. In one week the ban was lifted because the smog had cleared enough but not all the way, just a week of limited car usage cleared the skys imagin what a year of it would do.\n\nCars have us going the fastest we can and people have started to live that way through life. In Bogota they have a day free of cars every years like its a holiday. People left their keys on the counter and insted hiked, biked, skated and took the bus. Even in the rain people didnt use their cars, \" The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" says Bogata Mayor Antanas Mockus. Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza says \" Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\". The quotes from the artical \" Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" show that with out cars people feel realeved of stress and are able to have a good time.\n\nIn conclusion limited car usage would help us presurve the world and create a enviroment that could help people aswell. Cars are one of the most used products in the world people might not want to give up their cars but eventually might have to. Smog and greenhouse gas are caused by car overuseage and hurt the enviroment and people. Limited car usage is posably the only answer to helping the world live longer aside from buying a hybrid car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One I patient going north We pack I already done I packed work family packing still I went sit car I already ready I nothing else I went back inside house almost done packing I went bathroom I got finished packing When got going I wait hours get going got fun The reason I used example took lot patience get mackinoc city nbly That day I learned lot important patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that bachelor degree's holders should carry on their studies at college to get a dream profession. However, some people believe that entering the workforce right after high school is the right thing to do. I agree with the former statement and will explain the reason why in the following essay.\n\nIt must be acknowledged that thousands of applications are sent to universities, both private and public, every year. The most crucial reason behind this trend is that when they are taking tertiary education, they will be taught by well-respected professors and industry experts, who will guide them through their study journey and analyze their specialties. Then they can find out if they are suitable for the job and may decide to change their career before getting an undesirable job. \n\nAdditionally, during their time at universities, they can enjoy social life with all the clubs and societies, as well as work in the companies as interns. In the future, they can be used to enrich your CV and make it different from others. Extensive research has consistently shown that more and more firms and corporations are also interested in the university and community activities besides grades. In 2022, it is estimated that 507,300 job applications that consist of those activities are accepted in Vietnam.\n\n Those against a higher education emphasize practical skills and valuable contacts. They argued that instead of taking boring lectures, they can both cultivate relevant job skills and transferrable skills. Therefore, they will have more experience in the field than the seniors. Furthermore, they will develop a useful network of people working in the same industries, which might help them later on. This point had credibility, but most companies are still in favor of employing university graduates as they've trained properly and academically. \n\nIn conclusion, while both ways can lead us to our goal in career, it is easier to get a high-paid occupation if you enroll in tertiary education. This way can help you get more job opportunities and have access to high-powered positions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Remember those days when you had to persuade your parents into getting something for you? It may have been a new pair of shoes, a cute little puppy, or maybe even a car. Whatever it was, the goal was to convince them into thinking it was indeed a good idea. You did this by filling their head with as many pros as you can think of, and keeping the cons limited. This same concept applies to supporting an idea in an article. The author's support was not very strong due to the overpowering cons over pros.\n\nThe claim that is suggested by the author is \"studying venus is a worthy puirsuit despite the dangers it presents\". However, we heard very little about why studying venus would be a worthy pursuit. According to the article, \"Venus may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\", so the author could have easily elaborated on how this could be beneficial to humans. Although conditions on Venus today are unfit for human life, it was once probably covered in oceans and supported life.\n\nThe last thing you want to do when making a claim is discourage the reader. Yes, the article should touch on the dangers that studying Venus presents but it should not be the main focus of the article. Doing so is just filling the reader's head with more cons than pros on studying Venus and that will not help support your claim at all.\n\nIn order to supprt an idea you must bring out the benefits that will encourage your reader to agree. Simply shining the light on the negatives will do the opposite of support your claim. Everything from your title, thesis statement, body, and conclusion should focus on supporting your idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, I feel that drivless cars are both a pro and a con. I say that because there are some great points that comes along with the idea of drivless cars, and there are also some not so great ideas. Meaning that having a drivless car may give you many benifits and set backs all in one.\n\nA pro and also a great point for having a driveless car is that there will be way less accidents. It states in the passage that, \" while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" Meaning it will send an alert to the driver if they're texting and driving, or basically just not paying attention to the road.\n\nA con to having a driveless vehicle is that it'll be very expensive to buy one because of all the technology and sensors they're using within the car. It states in the passage that, \"Within 10 years, sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to danger of out-of-control skids. Meaning that they puts lots of work into this car to make it safe for the customer, but in the end they put lots of money into it as well.\n\nIn conclusion, I still stick to my opinion on having a drivless car is both a pro and a con. Although the car may be highly advanced and gives you a higher advantage of being safe, it'll also be alot of money. If i was ever asked the question, \" Do i see myself having a drivless car in the future?\" The answer would be, I dont know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does not support his idea well because he has little of evidence to back up the claims that he made. These claims were that Venus could be useful because of how close it is and he called it a challenge for human curiosity. Neither of the claims he made were to vbalid becauise he would go off topic, provide little evidence, and would talk about the benefits of Venus but not say what they were.\n\nWhen he claimed that Venus is useful because of how close it is and said \" ...Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long frames of space travel.\" and then said \" The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable...\" so he made a claim saying that it is a good thing to go to venus but the right after said the value is indisputable but never gave any evidence of why its so good to go to. Then he also claimed that it has value in over coming, that it is a challenge for human curiosity. This is a bad claim because he did not have much evidence or reason to back up going to Venus so he said \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This claim would be much better if he actually listed any good benefits from Venus. Also through the text the author seems to either run out of things to support his claim or he went off topic because he started to talk about what NASA is doing and planning to do to explore Venus like \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions would be to allow scientist to float above the fray.\" He would say thing of what people might be able to do to explore Venus with its hostile conditions but he still never said what could be discovered while exploring.\n\nI don't disagree on his point but how he executes getting it across to the audience does not work. If he provided any solid evidence on what could be learned or discovered on Venus like technology or new elements then it would bring more people behind this idea. But that still does not change the fact that his claims of Venus is useful for future visits and its a good challenge for human curiosity, are not valid and he does not to a good jobs of supporting his claims.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With so much technology already being developed for the analysis of human tendencies, what could one more hurt? Nowadays, manufacturers and creators of products are using technologies and algorithims to analyze everything from shopping preferances, to the economic strengths and weaknesses that characterize a specific a consumer. Not to mention, with facial recognition, and widespread survelliance, complex human interactions are beginnning to be broken down into code. While some may argue against this simply because the idea of being \"watched\" does not appeal to them, these advancements have real-world applications that could actually be quite beneficial to society as a whole. The concept of the FACS program being implemented in classrooms is a concept that really should be taken into heavy consideration. The practical applications of something such as an emotional analysis program within schools, have no end. For this reason, it is concievable that the FACS program should be introduced into the fabric of the modern schooling system.\n\nImagine if a computer was able to comprehensively custom-tailor lessons for struggling students, based solely on their unconscious reactions to other lessons. Often times this is exactly what a student needs, and what many student activist groups have been proposing for years. The notion that a student could have a lesson that was customized to fit his or her personality, might be exactly what some parents of stuggling (and academically adept) students have been craving. In the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, by Nick D'Alto, it is stated that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is a compelling argument for a fairly simple reason; most students that do not do well in school, claim that it is because they do not enjoy it, or that they do not appreciate the way that information is conveyed to them. However, this can be remedied. The implementation of the FACS program within schools would provide an alternitave to traditional teaching, and could improve the overall experience of students. Besides that, the FACS program could also be used to analyze the general student reaction to a specific topic or concept. This would provide teachers with more insight into the lives and emotions of their students, and allow them to better prepare lectures, and their coverage of that topic. The article also states that, \" Most human communictation is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Not only would the gathered information be beneficial to other parties for the betterment of schooling, but it would also allow school systems to pick up on particular emotional cues that may only be visible to someone who is emotionally close to a particular student.\n\nThis program, without a doubt, offers many helpful options when it comes to its use within school systems. The FACS system should be implemented into the fabric of modern schooling. With so many applications, It would be foolish not to at least experiment with it in a school setting. While it is true that privacy and reliability are great concerns for many people, convenience and better academics are also great concerns in today's modern society. In a culture that is beginning to value knowledge over all else, it is important for schools to employ every method available to them, to better prepare students for the life ahead of them. Technology should not be viewed as an enemy in an academic world. Rather, it should be percieved as a tool. A tool that gives humanity the ability to accomplish whatever can be dreamed, and gives it the resources necessary to lead its people into a golden era of knowledge and education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries, there are a huge number of people who are passionate about realizing the history of a house or building they live in. \r\n\r\nFinding out the history of our houses helps us to evaluate the price of our houses. In most counties houses of well-known individuals such as actresses or actors, sports athletics and artists are very expensive, because many individuals are pretty keen on living there. The more individuals are interested in purchasing the house, the higher price the house will have. In addition, finding out the history of our houses is a good source of inspiration. We can imagine the life of individuals who lived in our house in the past and guess the implementation of their furniture and other households. In this ,way we are able to have a better interior or exterior design. \r\n\r\nMoreover, there are many sources of data that the owners of houses or buildings can use to raise their knowledge about the history of their houses. Surfing the internet is very helpful because the internet is a good way of information dissemination. There are online books and articles about history and other aspects of life. Furthermore, by going to libraries people can grasp information about history. Usually in ,libraries many hand-write books are maintained. These books are good sources of valuable information.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many ways such as e-books, e-articles and printed books that people by reading them can increase their knowledge about the history of their houses .Finding out about the history of our houses or buildings provide us with the opportunity to design our houses better and estimate the price of our houses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System is valuable in a classroom setting. While at first I seemed a little skeptical about the idea, as I kept reading I realized that having a software that can read emotions of students in the classroom could be great. It could be a wonderful teaching tool. If a computer can read a students facial expression then theres no doubt in my mind that this is a valuable technology to have. There are some really great uses this technology could be used for to help students. Having this technology in classrooms could help students who are confused, upset, or afraid to ask questions.\n\nIf the software was correct about the emotions in Mona Lisa's face being \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\" then the software is really good at what its supposed to do. If the software can recognize all of those emotions from a painting then why couldnt it be put to use in a classroom. The software could recognize if a student was confused and try to give the student easier problems to try and work them up to the more difficult problems. Or the software could just show them websites or videos that teach the student how to do the problem they are confused on. If needed the software could just \"modify the lesson.\" The software could also help a student who is getting upset that they arent getting a correct answer, or that they don't know how to do the problem.\n\nIf the software can recognize when a student is getting upset at a problem, it could notify the teacher so they can help the student. Or the software could just help the student work through the problem. The software can try to calm the student down. If the software is successful then the student can go on with the problem. Or if the software can't help then it could just take the student to another problem entirely.\n\nWhen the software can read fear or worry on a students face with confusion or anger the software could realize that the student doesn't understand the problem, but is too shy to ask for help. The software could find extra help for the student on the internet. It could find the student some practice problems. If needed the software could even find a video explaining how to work through the problem. As a last ditch effort the software could notify the teacher that the student doesn't understand the problem.\n\nI dont think the Facial Action Coding Software can do all of these things to help out students now. I do think in the future that it should be used in a classroom setting. This kind of technology could be really helpful in making sure that no student is left behind. If the software would be put to use in the classroom it would need some extra work put into it so it can do what it needs to in order to help students. But I still think its a valuable technology to have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the use of the Facial Action Coding System is valuable for education. This technology could help students learn at their own pace and help them understand a lesson thoroughly before they move on to the next lesson. I believe that this could help any student anywhere. Whether it is a college student, or an elementary student.\n\nThe success rates of Facial Action Coding System for the classroom are unknown to me, but this could be a very beneficial. Dr. Huang stated, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". This could immensely help a student because the student is not going at the instructor's pace, but at the students own learning pace. Therefore, the student will be able to learn and not have to catch up on a lesson if they were unable to do so.\n\nIf a student were to become confused or bored of a lesson, this technology has the ability to change the lesson for the student. I know personally that when I get confused or bored, the instructor won't notice because there are other students in the classroom. If this technology were to be used in a classroom, students would would probably acquire and absorb information more efficiently because of the fact that the student learned that information at their own pace.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Acting Coding System could be potentially very helpful to students everywhere. This technology could change the way a student learns, and the student could enjoy school because of this technology's ability to personalize to their needs. I believe this technology could change the way that students learn, for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries often known protecting children keeping education atmosphere however would suprised content children find seemingly friendly place With simple library card children could check boatload information could teaching lessons would want learn But nobody looking thier child s shoulders time The answer problem strict censorship Books big powerful vast amount information Even though parents believe publishing companies would intend letting children reading books easily misunderstood truth s library wether book checked Most time adults understand charaters book going This adult s extensively experiences throughout life Another comon belief seperating library younger older would solve problem The fact even adult checks type media older selection stop younger child witnessing reading something simple video magazine home The solution stop materials entering libraries censoring offensive easily misunderstood media gets wrong hands Libraries great research school projects books magazines inapropriate never end place built education experience kids Censorship inforced help keep maintain libraries educational atmospher keeping children safe offensive material", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"So, if you're a NASA scientist, you should be able to tell me the whole story about the Face On Mars, which obviously is evidence that there is life on Mars, and that the face was created by aliens, correct?\" No, twenty five years ago, our Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. Us scientists figured out that it was just another Martian mesa, common around Cydonia, only this one had shadows that made it look like an Egyption Pharaoh. Very few days later, we revealed the image for all to see, and we made sure to note that it was a huge rock formation that just resembled a human head and face, but all of it was formed by shadows. We only announced it because we thought it would be a good way to engage the public with NASA's findings, and atrract attention to Mars-- and it did.\n\nThe face on Mars soon became a pop icon; shot in movies, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. Some people thought the natural landform was evidence of life on Mars, and that us scientists wanted to hide it, but really, the defenders of the NASA budget wish there was ancient civilization on Mars. We decided to take another shot just to make sure we weren't wrong, on April 5, 1998. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter camera team took a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, revealing a natural landform, which meant no alien monument. \"But that picture wasn't very clear at all, which could mean alien markings were hidden by haze\" Well no, yes that rumor started, but to prove them wrong on April 8, 2001 we decided to take another picture, making sure it was a cloudless summer day. Malin's team captured an amazing photo using the camera's absolute maximum revolution. With this camera you can discern things in a digital image, 3 times bigger than the pixel size which means if there were any signs of life, you could easily see what they were. What the picture showed was the butte or mesa, which are landforms common around the American West.\n\n\"But how do we know you're not just hiding things from us?\" You should know NASA isn't hiding anything from the people because if there was evidence of life it would benefit us, so why hide it? If you still don't believe the evidence the pictures are out for you to see, which obviously shows a natural landform. The reason to not believe these movies and magazines is because they ignore the research. They make up things to get the people going, but what they actually should do is pay attention to us, because we have very important findings every single day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion effects computers computers help people us computer lot people exercise interacting family enjoy nature Exercising important computers make health sick much Interacting family important computers help friend family s help help maybe friend computer maybe real important interacting family And last thing important computers enjoying nature It fun bored You outside think computer enjoying much My opinion computers us see mail learn something want find computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a very neat thing to have but unsafe. We never know what could happen having one of these types of cars. Yes they sound like a really great idea. It can do all the work for you as it says in the article \"they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\" Which is really awesome but what if something happens and all that ends in something bad.\n\nWhat if the car starts to have a malfunction and loses control. Who knows who would also be responible for the inccedent, like the author says \"who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" The driver may have to pay for the damge if they were to be responsible for the problem and that wouldnt be any fun or cheap. Also in the article it asks if it would be boring waiting your turn? So true though wouldnt it be boring just sitting there waiting your turn to drive? Aslo what if drivers are to busy on their phones and a deer pops right out and the car doesn't stop on its own. To put the car together manufacturers had to put so many sensors on the driveless cars isnt that a little to much? Last but not least theses cars can't drive through situations like traffic issues or navigate through roadwork. I do not think these cars are worth it.\n\nHow I feel about driveless cars is a no go. I don't think they should be sold to anyone. These people just never know what could go wrong with them. Very great idea just probably should stay an idea. They would need so much done to them to ever truly be safe for the people. It would take them many years to get to where they went them to be. Like they say \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" That's aways away to be waiting for them to come out, by then they'll have hovercrafts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced architects made Empire State Building dirigibles The architects put thousandfoot dirigible top building held cable tether The dirigible s go wind pressure eleven hundred feet The frame Empire State Building strong cost sixty thousand dollars modification made building s framework The architects changed design made something new The architects difficult obstacles building Empire State Building make dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I waiting fitted mirror league hats come mail They dit would take days I said ok thats days flew hats supposed come mail day us truck came I exited box mom CAPS I said I really planted I thought ie come tomorrow didnt come I stil patient close two days past I gave one day I got home friends house yes finally patients payed thats time I patients", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beileve that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports the idea of studying Venus because the author says that Venus could have been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system and the curiosity researchers have to Venus, but thinking about the dangers and doubts that can occur. In paragraph 4 it says, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\"\n\nThe author talks about how NASA has a idea for sending humans to go study Venus and has a possible solution to do that, but it will be risky. In paragraph 5 it says, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Vernusian landscape. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\"\n\nAnother reason, the author talks about how NASA and researchers are working on other ways to study Venus, doing innovations to contribute the knowledge of Venus, and doing comparsions on how it will affect them or improve on while thinking of studying Venus. In paragraph 7 it says,\" Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditons. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparsion, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the author explains some of the ways researchers think about when wanting to explore Venus. They also think about the consequences, but really thinking on how to overcome them. This is a challenge and also a valuable way to gain curiosity and information about Venus. In paragraph eight it says,\" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" This is why I believe that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents with the supporting details of the author.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless car's should be introduced into the world because in the text it says \" the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxi's and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" In the text it also states that \" their driverless cars have driven more than half a mile without a crash.\"\n\nDriverless car's should be in today's world becuse not only are they helpful but they're taking less fuel than a taxi so you're also saving more money. Driverless car's a useful for long road trips because it you're tired you don't have to drive the car can just drive it's self. The driverless car's have went millions of miles without a car crash. The driverless car's have everthing you need to drive safe such as a video camera, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver and an inertial motion sensor. The driverless car's are safe and they'll get you were you need to be and you won't use as much fuel.\n\nDriverless car's should be used in today's world because they aren't as bad they people driving their own car's. Self driving has caused more acciendents than driverless car's. Driverless car's have went millions of miles without crashing. Driverless car's also provides you with a lot. Driverless car's should be used in today's world because they are more sufficent than the self driving cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program it is a great way to help people who just have lost their homes or something inportant in their lives. People have already joined like Luke he has just started and is on his way to Europe and China. You get to go sight seeing go to places you never thought you would go. It says Luke aslo toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at Panama Canal. You might be able to meet new friends see family.\n\nIt says in the passage \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs\". You can also try to get other people to join the program it is also very fun you can study their language while your there and see all kinds of things like art, acient history, and colleges.\n\nThe program brings animals to diffrent countries along with food, water, and cargo. It also says in the passage to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA which means the United States Relief and Rehabilitation Administation. In the program you could take up to nine deliverys. The UNRRA tries it's best to give people in other countries what they need we have never failed and we won't start now so come join our program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The byciclist Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed speed Limit effected many ways environment The talked feature environment lack water The byciclist going die water really dehydrated Another feature heat It really hotwhere narrator bycicling When hot heat dehydrates So narrator pushed limit heat Also everyone gone towns every town came hauntinghim got mad lodgers hetalked really frustrated The smooth flat road gave way rolling hills made harder ride Lastly snake inthe road affected avoid All things affected", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the Electoral College? Well the Electoral College is a founding fathers established by the Constition as a compromise between election of the President by the vote of Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College was created for Big States, Avoid Run Of Elections and Centainy Of Outcome.\n\nThe Electoral College will restore some of the weight in a political balabce that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitution. For example a large state get more attention from presidential candidates in a champaign then a small state would. The reason big states well get more attiontion than small states is because the biger the state is the more pepole there well be and thats like hitting a glod mine for the presidentil candidates.\n\nThe dispute over the outcome is possible. As it happened in 2000, But it's less likly then a dispute over the popular vote. For example in the 2012's election with Obama and Romney' Obama received a 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. Even A very slight plurality in the state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that sate. Even a tie in a nationwide electral vote can happen because the total number of votes is 538 and 538 is an even number, but it is very unlikely.\n\nTo Avoid Run-Off Elections The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in witch no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. There is pressure for the run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the elections of the cast and that pressure, witch would greatly complicate the presidentail election proess and is reduced by the Electoral College witch invariably produces a clen winner.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my personal opinion I would say that the technology to read other people emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not a good valuable. The Facial Action Coding System wouldn't be a good valuable because why would school bother buying the Facial Action Coding Sysytem for their student just to check if they happy or not. Instead of buying Facial Action coding System they should buy school material,books or even online websites for kids to learn,because kids really wouldn't like a computer checking them out if they are happy or sad.\n\nStudents wouldnt like to go to school knowing that almost everyday that there going to check their emotions. Everyday there are people that go to school sad,depressed,happy, and exited and those people dont wat to tell other people how they feel like. Even if those people try to fake smile theey wouldn't get away without it because in the article it say's \"In a false smile,the mouth is streched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle,the risorius. To an expert,faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. So this means that it can detect a fake smile because of our face muscle called orbicularis pars palpabraeus.\n\nEven though it's kinda a cool invention but it shouldn't be for students or schools because sometime students want to fix here emotion by themselve or sometimes they don't want anyone to see that person emotion. My own opinion the Facial Acting Coding System should be used in places like in therapy or somewhere just related to behavior but it wouldn't be a good value in a school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think kids even adults get computers would use good causes When people get computers spend time inside They need get outside get exercise Even little things like going friends house take jog instead bike When people spend time computers talking freinds low socializing awile wo nt know communicate people All would set time limit computer use work otherwise Computers could also used good things If project school need type computer find pictures internet computer would good resource If job working computers fixing computers would spend lot time computer It also lets interact people othe side world You also learn interesting facts places Computers could also used bad reasons When people use could use play cool new video game got This lead getting obese They also use sexual harrasment stalking people People also use horrible things like selling buying drugs illegal things So see computers nt safe lot ways I hope read understand important facts explaining reasons consider Thank good day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many people have a desire to search for information about the house or building they live in. But there is still a question of why it happens and the possible reasons will be discussed in this essay. \r\n\r\n One of the main causes is curiosity as the majority usually looking up the information about buildings before moving to them. Some are sure it is necessary to know the house’s history and find out about previous owners and the reason this accommodation is on sale. The solution is to contact the agency, which may help you with such a request. However, it can not have information about people that were living there as it is confidential and the data may be deleted.\r\n\r\n Some people also assume that reason lies in horror films. People start to think that the plots of all scary movies are based on true stories and furthermore, can think of many strange things, even though it is a usual house and it is how subconscious works. For example, you are renting a cottage somewhere near the forest and hear frightening sounds. Most likely you will remember the moments from the films and start overthinking. \r\n\r\n To conclude, it is hard to find out about many houses on the internet and there is no substantial reason to do it. In contrast, searching for a history of a house can only be a great idea when it is ancient and it can be an accommodation of famous people from the past.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about what we would do if the earth was no longer in livable condition? Well some might think of living on a another planet, which may be possible with Venus. The author of this article has given some perfect examples as to why studying Venus is worth it.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying Venus is worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents by stating how Venus could have been earth-like. In the passage the author explains how Venus was \"..probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life..\", the text also states that Venus had \"..a suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" which could make Venus \"..our nearest option for a planetary visit\". The author explains how venus is not only earth-like but how us humans are just really curious about things and studying venus will help us learn new things about our solar systems and maybe even potential forms of life! In the article it states that \"venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\", this shows that the author\n\nsupports the idea that studying venus is worth the trouble.\n\nWhile it is true that Venus is extremly hot (average temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit) we could possibly make the mission to Venus both \"safe and scientifically productive..\". The author explains that even though there are hot temperatures and extreme enviromental aspects, we could get a closer look at Venus, this shows in passage five when it says \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray,..\" The author continues to say that \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\". While the temperature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit the air pressure would be lower then its orignal pressure of 90 times greater then what we experience on earth to what we have at sea level. Another example the author brought up was that \"solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" this shows that Venus could some day become our new home which is why more studies should be done on this planet.\n\nVenus may not only be useful for if we need to live there but its also one of the closest planets to Earth, which makes it a great spot to stop at on any space adventures we decide to take later on. The text states that \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" which help the author prove even more that we should continue our study on Venus even though it has tough terrain and conditions that we will have to face.The author explains some of the issues that we will face due to the inability to see that much while floating from a safe distance. \"`Hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere..\", the author says \"maybe we should think of them as challenges\" to which he adds that researchers are already looking up solutions \" Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\"\n\nWith all of the challenges that NASA is going to have to face you can't help but to agree the possibilty of studying Venus more indebth is a good idea. The author of this article has given some strong irrefusible points that suggest studying Venus is worth the risks due to the possiblity of Venus being used to benefit us in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea by giving information how its different from today then on the 1940s. The author is telling the reader on \"paragrahp 7\" to imagine a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size with the the author wants to say every planet has is own neighbor but they got thier sapce. The author wants to inform the planet Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even thought Mercury is closer to our sun. The author claim is why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface even when Venus still has some features that are analogous to those Earth. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humas to studt Venus.\n\nThe author is saying on paragraph 8; 'Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also only because of the human curiosity'. The travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovaton.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir happy thankful I think memoir talking boy apreshiates parents moved better life I know last paragraph boy talks family never forget parents turned simple house home So thats mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hunting patience Hunting cant go git deer You got wath Because deers dont come rith Deer dont like people deer came smell If patience git nothing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Declaration of Independence granted us the right to control our government. Thomas Jefferson once stated, \"When a nations government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the right of its people to abolish it and establish a new government.\" After viewing the articles Source 1:\"What Is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal register, Source 2: \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, and Source 3:\"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner it seems clear that the Electoral Colleges have lessened the power of the people in our nation. With the Electoral College method of selecting our nations new president the people of our nation become less empowered, they may cast their vote but the choice of president is never truly theirs. The Electoral Colleges drive people away from voting because they see the election as if their vote will not matter. To further empower the citizens of the United States the Electoral Colleges should be abolished.\n\nThroughout our nations history the majority vote has lost due to being outvoted when it comes to Electoral Colleges. Because of the majoity vote losing out to Electoral Colleges, people have come to believe their vote will not matter in the long run. In Source 2 Plumer declares, \"faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate\". With this method of selection for our country's president, the vote is never certain. The slate of electors that the people essentially vote for may or may not stick to the original plan. This ties back into people losing hope that their vote will not matter because they trust the electors to vote their canidate into office, when the electors could go either way. Another key point is, the canidates may not campaign in states that have a lower number of electoral votes. In Source 1 the Office of the Federal Register also asserted, \"Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate\". Due to the Electoral College system being based off population some states have more of a say than others. Whenever a state decides their votes for Electoral Colleges the state typically contributes every vote it has to one canidate. When this occurs the state's people may be misrepresented.\n\nElectoral Colleges do not reflect the democratic style of government we have had for hundreds of years. In Source 3 Posner states, \"it is the electors who elect the president, not the people\". Ever since the United States has been around our lifestyle has been purely democratic. The people are supposed to the empowering body of our government and their voice is the one that should be heard. But since we have the Electoral College the voice of the people has become muffled. No longer is the presidential election a democratic event, but one that is decided through the votes of only a few chosen American citizens. Plumer observed in Source 2 that, \"During the 2000 campaign, 17 states didn't see the canidates at all\". If the people of America are truly part of our governing body then they must see the canidates and hear what they have to say. The Electoral College has driven canidates away from states that will not have much say. These states are then left to make a decision for themselves and decide based on their personal preference, they are never able to truly hear what these canidates may or may not have to offer.\n\nOn the other hand, Electoral Colleges do have a lack of uncertainty. As Posner said in Source 3, \"the dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible but it's less likey than a dispute over the popular vote\". The Electoral College provides the American people with a certainty of outcome. Whenever a state decides where its Electoral votes are going the canidate typically wins by a landslide electoral-vote victory.\n\nAlthough the Electoral College has a few appealing qualities, it is mostly an unfair system for the United States. The colleges should not have the power to decide the president, that should be the people that reside in the country's choice. Thomas Jefferson spoke of the people taking control of their country's government and the citizens of America should do just that if they are ever to escape the grasp of the Electoral Colleges.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Middleton middle school Im one students My name Im new think Im boy Well better listen listen hard Im going say twice patience vurture On first day I walked class I sat next girl wavy blond hair sparkling blue eyes genuine smile CAPS said my names said perky voice CAPS I said back Im call CAPS uh replied CAPS let show around CAPS I answered back I became fast friends introduced friends made fun boys name yelled I said wouldent let go Finally I said CAPSs Just let handle this CAPS asked crossing arms tapping foot way couldent thing CAPS dont patience I said getting little angry couldent understand CAPS way said storming room CAPS wait I cried I hat run CAPS please dont get You cant keep getting mad making fun I know trying protect Have ever patience I asked ready run ran CAPS said looking scuffed floor Then I told everything I knew never problem", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think computers take much time important things But really everything would like know right You learn nature cool websites even history Here reasons effect computers First learn much nature online You view many types animals study Learn plant effect life Also learn many things changing Secondly many coll websites join Theres games play keep occupied day You even chat online friends maybe find long lost friends School sites available students studying help Lastly computers show much history People things world famous people back compared famous people Most important life changing story changes peoples life today I hope I ve enough agree As see computers many resources learn learning websites history arent even half Think Thank listening", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not using cars or not using cars as much can be extremely benefitial to not only the enviroment but also to the health of people .\n\nGetting excersise is extremely important in modern times heart diesease is a major factor in todays society and that can be easily prevented with minutes of excersise everyday .\n\nThe less you drive the more your bound to walk or ride a bike to your destination .\n\nWhile having completely carless communities can be an inconvinice .\n\nCutting back on car usage and even using hybrid cars can be benefitial to the enviroment .\n\nEven in the United States cars are becoming less relivant.\n\nNot because they are not useful but because cities are becoming so compact that there is no longer a use to drive cars to stores and shops. The only time people drive is for long distance or to work or school when it is cold or raining. If I could ride the bus to and from school I would, but, they refuse to pick me up in the mornings so I drive my moms\n\nSUV\n\nistead while im not complaining because I dont have to ride in sticky seats or be constantly harassed by the kid behind me kicking my seat. Driving an\n\nSUV\n\n(which is also extremely hard to park)\n\nis not a very efficient way to get to school. While I tried walking it was difficult getting to school on time and i was depleeted of energy.\n\nSo driving became the most efficient way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir ment happy thankful mood The mood created happy child Narciso hapy parents moved He also happy house house home The kin Narciso thankful parents let people home untill somewhere elese call home He also thankful got parents marvilous culinary skills cook well He also thankful parents love sacrifice The mood suppose get happy yet calm mood well read Their nothing exciting parts get happy feel calm I said nothing really jumping life story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author describes how a new technoloy called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The new software has been developed that imroves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. The software is the lastest innovation from the Prof. Thomas Huang of illinois, working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam.\n\nDr. Huanga and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans. In the fact these humans can perform this same impressive \"calcutation\" every day. LIke you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her/his face. The Mona Lisa can really really bring back a smile to her face.\n\n\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" Dr. Huamg predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Those were some of Dr. huang predicts. The computer can write some simple instructions that can make Mona Lisa smile with different emotions.\n\nWhile looking in the mirror:\n\n* Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth.\n\n* Then squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrinking at the coners of your eyes\n\n* Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up, towards your eyes.\n\nIn the fact, these are the instructions for a face that looks happy. Its all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\n\nMy conclusion, this new technology that Dr. Huamg is pretty amazing. This system or computer is a good thing it can make people smile and it can make Mona Lisa smile. It can also make the students smile or they can know what emotionl.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator, I am feeling the need to change the Ellectoral College to election by popular votes for the president of the united states. I feel this way for three reasons. The first reason is because over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind that we have now. The second reason is because under the Electoral college system, voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The last reason is because the most basic level, the Electoral college is unfair to voters.\n\nThe first reason why I think that they need to change the Electoral College to election by popular votes,is because over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the Electoral College still has it's defenders. That was the first reason why they should change the Electoral College to election by popular votes.\n\nThe second reason why I think that they need to change the Electoral College to election by popular votes, is because under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, butr for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. So the Electoral College usually wins since the votes go in to the House of Representatives first, which is really unfair to the other people that are doing the election. That was the second reason why they should change the Electoral College to election by popular votes.\n\nThe last reason why I think that they need to change the Ellectoral College to election by popular votes, is because at the most basic level, the Electoral College is unfair nto voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. But it's official: The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arrguments in favor of it are mostly asserstions without much basis in reality. That was the last reason why they should change the Electoral College to election by popular votes.\n\nState senator i'm writing you this letter so you can hopefully change the Electoral College to election by popular votes. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. so the only last words that I have to say to you are: Abolish the Electoral College!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In view of the food shortage around the world, the idea of having insect-based protein is raising. According to recent research on the willingness to consume insects as food, it shows that the countries likely to accept insect products are Mexico with 71% of people willing to eat insects, followed by Peru and Thailand, which have 58% and 56 % of the population accept the idea. While Russia, Australia and USA against having bug-based foods the most that only 32%, 34% and 35% of the general public are willing to taste insects.\nHowever, it is doubtful that utilizing insect-based food is a solution to the food crisis. The research also stated the market price of insects. The general price of insects is at least double compared to plant-based food like rice. The price of some kinds of insects like weaver ants and bamboo caterpillars is even triple the price compared to beef. Having bugs as a new protein source is still a question mark at this moment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is a tremendous advantange. Haven't you ever thought why? limiting car usage has its reason why its an advantage. One of the huge reasons is pollution, cars tend to create pollution, congestion, smog and many other harmful things. Source 1-4 mentions useful information of the disadvantage of owning or driving a car. Source number two mentions how cars tends to create alot of pollution, for this reason in Paris they decided to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Nobody would like to live in a place where you have to be breathing dirty, contaminated air and knowing you produced it by your own car when Paris enforced to ban cars for a few days to clear out the global air not many fellow citizens participated about 4,000 citizen were charged with a fine for not following the rule. why would you try to be disobbident when what they are trying to do is help you clear out the global sir so the citizens living in that area dont get sick with any disease and dont harm our earth where we live. The advantage of limiting car usage will be creating less pollution to have a better global air. Cars aren't the only way to get to place to place there is other way to transport for example public tranport like buses, train or even if its not that far walking and itll be a create exercise.\n\nYes, driving a car could sound great because you get to drive anywhere you want and get to places quicker instead of catching or waiting for a public transport when you need to get somewhere and your in a rush. Cars are a huge hand like a big help because it helps people get from place to place. Also remember that cars arent cheap at all an example is that source number one mentions \" Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two placesto park-large garages at the edge of the development, where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" What this quote is pointing out is that to be able to park a car if you own one it has to be in a specific place and which you have to own and live by there which costs alot of money. Limiting yourself for car usage would make you save up a whole lot of money. Instead of wasting like 40,000 dollars in a parking place for a car and have to be living there you can easily just get on public transport and be able to live where you want. source #1 also mentions \" As a result 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a to move here. when i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" this also points out the not many people in Germany dont own cars and not owning a car really doesnt bother them because they found better way to get a transport and also believing that Saving up money is a really important thing because when you become independ you have to start paying bills, food, and many other things that wyour parents wont give you anymore so why waste it on gas and car washing instead of just getting somewhere in a easy transport and the money you wouldve been wasting in non-sense now will be saved up for something more useful. thinking about it car limiting is a useful thing finacialy and global reaosns too.\n\nLastly another advantage of limiting car usage is less congestion the less driving there is the less traffic there will be. Traffic is a big headche to people who try to get to their jobs or certain events on time. Public transportion might ttake long to get there also but its becauise there isnt as much buses because not many people get on public transportion and the less buses there is and more cars who cause traffic the more time it'll take off our time. Source #3 states \" in a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of colobians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily deviod of traffic jams.\" Bogota, colombia has a great point doing this event once a year will demonstrate citizen that the less car usage the less traffic jams there with be and it will be more relaxing and calming area to live instead of hearing screaming, beeping and other annoying sounds caused by unpatient people. This event that colombia has done has cause other states to realize that thats a great idea and some tried experminting it in their country.\n\nIn conclusion limiting car usage has its great advantages which benefits the citizens living in that area so if it benefits you why not try limiting car usage. Limiting car usage creates less pollution, less traffic jams, and your able to save up your money for something thats actually important. Cars aren't the only way you could get from place to place theres many other options like walking, or riding a public transport theres always an answer to everything. By limiting car usage we create less pollution in the air we breathe and there wil be less harm done to the earth and to the citizens. Always try new things and let limmiting car usage be one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Space travel. Just the thought of us doing something so advanced is spectacular. It is well known we have been trying to travel to Mars but what about Venus? Venus is a dangerous planet so why would humans want to go their? The author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" says Venus is worth studying dispite the dangers it has.\n\nSo what does Venus look like? Suprisingly the article tells us that Venus might have been of the most Earth like planets in our solar system. The article\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states \"Venus was probably covered largly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\"(para. 4). That is shocking to think that there was a planet that simplar to us in our solar system; although, Venus has lost some of those characteristics it still has some Earth like features to this day. The article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" also states \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\"(para. 4).Venus may not look just like Earth anymore but it is amazing that the planet shares some charatoristics to this day.\n\nAs astanishing as all this may be it still does not explain why scientist want to travel their. As stated earlier and states in the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" Venus \"may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system\"(para. 4). by traveling to this planet we can find out more about if Venus is like Earth and how as well as why it looks the way it does today. The article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" also states \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\"(para. 4). Space travel is becoming more and more realisted and if we could figure out more about the planet we can then plan how to land safly on Venus.\n\nBut how are scientist going to study this planet with its harsh conditions? The artcle \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying out of their way\"(para. 5). On Venus's surface it is 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the armospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. So this is a very clever option to avoid these conditions. However, no samples would be able to be taken from the surface but there is an option for that as well. The article\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" also states \"some simplified electronics made of silicon have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\"(para. 7). Three weeks may not seem like a long time but it is more then enough time to collect samples and information.\n\nVenus is a very dangerous planet and even though we have this technology it still might be a while before it is used and even longer for humans to get close to the planet. However, that does not mean humans should give up and loose intristed or curiosidy. This means that humans should try harder to accomplish this goal. Venus is worth studying dispite the dangers but the only way can get there is if everyone helps and supports the misson.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboy program is not a popular choice of career. But meeting new people, traveling from place to place, and taking care of animals is fun, right?\n\nIf you'd like to make more frineds, there's all sorts of ways to meet new people. In this program you're able to do just about every one of them. The first new people you're going to meet are your fellow crew members on the ship. Then when you get to the destination you meet even more people, whether it's strangers on the sidewalk, or even an army crew waiting for their animals.\n\nTraveling? Definetely! I've traveled to so many places. Some of my favorites are Greece, China, and Italy. My favorite part about Greece was the Acropolis. On my way to China, I saw the Panama Canal. I loved taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, and adventuring an old castle in Crete was pretty cool.\n\nIf you're a big animal lover, this job may be for you. I've taken care of hundreds of animals. My first shipment contained 335 horses! Along with the horses, enough hay and oats to get them through the trip. The trips were very long so taking care of the animals kept me busy and as long as I was busy, they were healthy. The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. And the stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nLike I said, meeting new people and traveling can always be fun. And if you love animals, you're practically ready to sign up. The Seagoing Cowboys aren't always easy, but it sure is fun!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Parents responsible child whether s taking school making sure grades even watching child reads Libraries remove offensive books magazines movies etc That parents reponsibility s library s The library place go want get book movie magazine ect Whether s enjoyment research That book specifically placed library someone read If took material library people oppion found offensive would nt many books left library Who choose books offensive anyhow If adult mature teenager went library look book nt took shelves parents could nt watch child pick book Or even teach books wrong The parents full responsibiliy child reading something inapropriate eyes How would library know books take shelf parents different ideas right wrong If kid young parent would one taking child library could easily watch book magazine movie re picking Most libraries children s section anyway It library s responisbility watch child s parents Their job supply community books movies magazines etc Libraries keep books shelvles people enjoy book would like read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many obstacles laws future disasters There several problems design location mooring mast One problem winds top building constantly shifting Even though architects adjusted design mast still dangerous land blimpAnother major problem dirigibles They filled combustable hydrogen If blimp catch fire like Hindenburg debris would fall pedestrians The last problem law prevented airships flying low urban areas In conclusion due laws dirigibles nature mooring mast used", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars has many conspiracies, but believing it was created by aliens is ridiculous. There is no proven fact or discovery that aliens exist. I would have to disagree with that, and just believe it is a natural landform. There has many research done and work to figure out what the Face on Mars is, and saying it was created by aliens puts that hard work to shame.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a qustionable conspiracy. However, I believe The Face on Mars is a natural landform because we have no evidence of alien lifeform. In the article it states, \"MichaelMalin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper that the original Viking photos. Thosands of anxious web surfers waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform\". Based on this evidence I can state their was no sight of any aliens. I believe there are other natural reasons as to why their is an object that looks like a face on Mars. Pictures were taken as well to show proof that their isn't any alien lifeform on Mars. It also states in the article that the Face on Mars is more equivalent to a butte or a mesa which are natural landforms. Although people may have wondered if there was lifeform on Mars, technology wasn't as advanced back then. As years went on, technology became greater, and we were able to use that technolgy to see if there was signs of life.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe aliens did not create the Face on Mars. I believe this because there is not any proof or reseach to show that aliens do exist. The face on Mars is just a natural landform, and there has work done for many years to show it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name Im writing time I patient It nice eighteenth going drive vaction going land Everybody house hold packing every thing hammer rented trip every one would fite car We packed things car My made us good breakfast A hearty meal sasauge pancakes bacon scaldded eggs It delicouse After got car highway I fell sleep hour drive By ten acloak night I woke back My sister yelling brother sister got urgement told use quited get nerves And I patient another two day got I glad overall funture till go back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist roads hilly old hard ride It hot scares supply water He seeing things wasnt When try get water weather hot water pump came hot", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the face is just a natural marking,and there is no proof that it was created by aliens.In the unmasking of the face of mars it looks nothing like a face would you still think it was created my aliens?Scientists didn't even think it was face.Even though some might think it was created by aliens there are a lot of things on this earth,that are weird looking but we don't know how they came about.I don't think aliens would do anything that perfect looking.On the JPL website it revealed a natural landfrom,there was no alien monument after.Even though some people weren't satisfied with the picture,they probably were still thinking it was created by aliens.The face is located at 41 degrees north martin latitude,where it was winter in april '98 a cloudy time of year on the red planet.The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Skeptics think alien markings were hidden by haze,but it is cloudy around that time.I say I have proven my point ,and i dont think that it was created by aliens. There are many artifacts on earth some may be created by aliens some cloudn't.The face on this palnt is a natural artifact.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that many people in some parts of the world are fond of knowing about buildings' historical background. There are several reasons for this interest and also a variety of ways to obtain such informations, which in the following paragraphs will be discussed\r\n\r\nPeople have many personal and impersonal reasons to search for the history of houses and mansions. Firstly, sometimes they just search it for fun and it is a hobby for them in orther to satisfy their curiosity. Secondly, it is an issue for some people to be informed about what types of people, or people from which walks of life were living in a particular building. Actually, they are too sceptic that they want to know everything with details. For example, they want to find out whether any crime happened in such place or not. Furthermore, they want to understand what happened to the last inhabitants of a house and is there any extreme mistakes with that home and its previous residents or not. Finally, Even they like to know about the last refurbishment to if, any neccessity repairments like; indoor and outdoor designe need, they take action.\r\n\r\nThere are many ways for a curious individual to search for the background of a mansion. One way is to ask from people who are live in the neighborhood of that house to find out about the previous residents. The other way is to investigate and check the remaining objects in that house. Nevertheless, they can easily understand about the last residents' lifestyle, customs and cultures and Also the secrets that were in their home. For example, by a remaining photo they can be informed about the members of that family or their way of clothing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a group of individuals are interested in searching about buildings' history. not only there are many reasons for this action, but also are several means and ways to find out about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The settings affected cyclist fact ones dont want near water tired pedaling The time place affected greatly wasnt cool breeze air June California He middle flat deserts sense part civilization get water The quote old timers havent left confines porches since Carter office helped realize taking advice direction old people dont go anywhere bad idea Flat road replaced short rolling hills This quote shows terrail features affected cyclist Furthermore cyclist realivingly found civilization running water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by saying the astronomers are fascinated by Venus, NASA working on a way to approach Venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by saying the astronomers are fascinated by Venus. In the article it says \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This shows that it's worth pursuing because astronomers find it fascinating.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by saying that NASA is working on a way to approach Venus. In the article it says \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have tested for three weeks in such conditions.\" This shows that NASA is working on a way to approach Venus.\n\nThe astronomers are fascinated by Venus,NASA working on a way to approach Venus is how the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nWhat have Richard NIxon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole, all in their time agreed on?\n\nThe Electoral College.\n\nThe Electoral College is not a place, its a process.\n\nBy the passage of source 1 , the founding fathers established the Electoral College as a compromise, between election of the President by a vote in Congress and the election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Keeping the Electoral College is important.\n\nHaving an Electoral College is a safe way to ensure that everyone get to envoice there opinion. For example, the Electoral college avoids problems and tries to fix eveything so that everyone can be happy. Many people don't like the fact of the Electoral College because they feel that their vote doesn't count. But really every one's vote does. When the American citizens vote and there is a tie between the two candidates then thats another time when we use the Electoral College.\n\nEach Candidate running for President in each state has his or her own group of electors. Each party (democratic or republican) selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee. I strongly believe that we should keep the Electoral College as any force of back-up when it comes down to voting!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One rainy day far away place soccer gamethat I remember day like yesterdayIt last game season important things went wrong process I going like I said I wearing uniform aunt said bye I deep blue shy big black rain cloud comes Oh I m beach thinking self game going get called On turn go font ready ball CAPS I fall face fall coach take go back beach hopeful team game lose two points time leave aunt called coach s phone answer I think self ok shes little late look time ten go hour finally shes cold wet mad game aunt said nt get mud seat well s little hard s aunt says going party looking like said time waste little argument aunt says ok get see food team mates muddy s seems like could move show heavens day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "And throughout memoir constant mood happiness In beginning memoir describes home started became wonderful home He said passionate Cuban music amazing aromas cooking Then paragraph says loves parents love sacrifice continues saying grateful toward Lastly paragraph says I never forget parents turned simple house home This mood expressed memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng would silently spring take good ending story goods ended story listed come malance ready spring plant beautiful time spring plant ending spring near trying take test time think its goods ending ruler strong machines saeng spring makes near paragraph That good ending plant stays", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary world, a hugely-popular issue of juvenile delinquency has never failed to attract citizens’ attention. It is thought that immature humans who break the law should be punished as same as mature individuals . From my perspective, I totally disagree with the statement. \n\nFirstly, we should not treat juvenile criminals and adult ones the same, because a majority of those children are not educated sufficiently or correctly in schools. In other words, in these days, schools have focusing extremely on academic knowledge, such as maths or physics without teaching students about morality and philosophy. As a result, those pupils are not able to distinguish whether what they do is right or wrong. Taking Vietnamese young student as an example for that, most of the minor crimes have been caused by the youths who do not receive a good education in schools. \n\nSecondly, the reason why we ought not to give a fair punishment between youngsters and adults who have anti-social behaviors is those juvenile criminals have been affected negatively by the social media, such as Facebook or Youtube. In the modern life, an increasing number of young individuals use social networking websites and they are likely to be captivated by sensations stories and breaking news which relate to violence. Consequently, those people tend to imitate those illegal actions. For instance, young citizens will fight their classmates or even commit a murder if they watch or read excessively violent topics on the social media. \n\nIn conclusion, there are two main reasons why juvenile criminals are mature ones should not be punished the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary society, young individuals who have been subject to peer pressure may have begun to demonstrate emotional and behavioural changes. While this type of pressure can help teens consolidate their behaviour and their performance in the classroom, I assume that it can also have an adverse bearing on their mental health.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that through regular interaction with constructive examples and perspectives of peers, who are in a similar age group or social status, the primary benefit for young students is the possibility of forming and maintaining frequent academic practices. Those adolescents tend to take others, especially those with whom they have admiration, as role models. Consequently, the presence of positive role models boosts the likelihood of academic and even social achievement among young pupils. For example, observing a peer’s success in a prestigious intellectual competition, such as Road to Mount Olympia - a well-known competition for outstanding students to showcase their intelligence - can motivate other students to study industriously and enhance their performance at school.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, I believe that the adverse effects of peer pressure on an individual's mental well-being overshadow its benefits. It is worth noting that this tendency can increase stress levels in the young, which in turn can make them feel inadequate or become reticent when expressing their opinions and personal ideas. If a sense of anxiety and depression persists without proper adjustment, this can result in the suicide of many emotionally driven young people, a very undesirable outcome. For example, in 2022, a Vietnamese boy committed suicide by jumping off a tall building as a form of protest against his father’s insistence that he studied for a long period of time at the expense of sleep and entertainment. He was so pressured by his father and peers to perform outstandingly in school as well as gain a respectable university in Hanoi that he made an impulsive decision to end his life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, peer pressure has the potential to be a positive force for reinforcing personal abilities,however,I personally believe that its highly devastating impact on students’ mentality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a tough disition ,but i would have to side with No. The first main problem is that almost all states say it's illigal to use them, so good luck traveling. Another issue is that the cars don't travel that fast, so long distance drives could double or even triple the time it would take to get there, vs you driving. If the car somehow crash who would be to blame? That can be another issue, if it came to legal resons who would be to blame? Another key reason is Drivers will be less aleart due to them well . . . not driving, creating an issue if the car needed a driver and they wern't prepard because they were sleeping, on the phone, or ect. Even if the drivers were paying attention the driver would still have to drive making it not a self driving car.\n\nSelf driving cars still have a long way to go ,but it is intresting to see how they are now and how they can improve. Mabey I'd switch my mind even in the near future ,but for now, i'll stay with my own driving skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree that businesses should do more for society than make money.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money to survive in a competitive world. The priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees' wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company cannot pay its bills or meet customers' changing needs, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only positively contribute to society in good financial health.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, companies should not be run to maximize profit; they have a broader role to play in society. Owners and managers have a social obligation to treat their employees well rather than exploit them. For example, they could pay a \"living wage\" to ensure workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects, or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimize their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this argumentative essay, I will be arguing that driverless cars should not be allowed at all. If we have driverless cars then a lot of accidents can happen. It can also be dangerous because there can be a technical difficulty, that can cause the machine used car to hit another machine use car or a automobile. If we have driverless cars, a lot of buisnesses could go out of business.\n\nThe Google cars are made like robots. They'll talk to you, they'll tell you when they can't pull in and out of driveways. But my thing is , how is the passenger going to help you? What if they don't have their licenses? What if they don't even know how to drive? I don't see why driverless cars should be allowed.\n\nDoes Google cars track people names? If they do, anybody can put a fake name in and ride in the car. I also think Google cars can cause in a lot of robberies and murders. I say that because if they are in a google car, they can shoot at anybody, and nobody would know who it is because the Google cars are all the same.\n\nDo Google cars have cameras? If they do, what is a passenger comes in hoping to do a robbery or something dangerous and they have a face mask, gloves, and a body suit on. To ride in a Google car, do you have to have your licenses? What if a teenager around the age 13 or 14 needs a ride to the gas station, and the Google car is having difficulties because of the traffic? How will the child be able to help?\n\nIn conclusion, I think Google cars are dangerous. Again, they can close businesses, cause violent things to happen in the city, and cause accidents. Google cars could also charge a lot too. This is my argumentative essay about why Google cars should not be legal or allowed on the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The computer great achivement man It useful finding information fast many capabilities Even though computers every useful tool modern world It negatively afect people People nt getting enough exercise always computer Along socialy active The lost probably negative effect exesive amount freedom people get internet Exercise probably one important thing live along healthy life People atleast taking along walk everyday If people sitting infront day much moreover people People shold healthy life style computers around every corner People also losing ability interact Life becoming dull Every one either texting someone The biggest surprise online dating This horrible might dating crazy person If someone think inlove cople meets dont know interact real problems Even computer You could use time socialize friends family Last emerce amount freedom computers There lots bullies people want sell stuff people want personal info Many kids sign something like facebook re cairful They put staff like adress nt pay attention sending friend request Computers way much negative effectson people It would great system could improved people need responsible People wont get interact Take walk Just dont let computers control life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming and we all know it, but is it a good thing? The world keeps coming out with greater technology every single day. Some people believe that technology isn't always a good thing. Most people talk about cell phones and how it takes away from what kids could be out doing, but instead they are at home on their cell phones. Even though I may be a teenager and in the technology era my opinion is I don't think driverless cars are a good idea. When I think of driverless cars so many questions pop into my head. I start thinkging what if? or How do you? I'm sure the same thing happens to other people when they think about this topic also.\n\nI am going to support the reason why I think that driverless cars are a bad idea, and this is how I will do it. Do you ever like to be in a situation where you have zero control over what is gonna happen? No oodles of people do not like to be in that situation at all. That's how I feel driverless cars are I feel like if you where going to get into a bad car accident what could you do to stop the car if you weren't in control? You wouldn't know what to do. In the article it clearly states that \"the human driver must stay alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". How fast are you likely to be able to take control of the car if something like a car accident where fastly approching? Exactly it would be incredibly hard. They make these commericals and advertisments sound amazing, and make it sound like nothing would ever go wrong, but what is really behind all this technology? Well we will never know. Letting some robot take over something that could cause death does not sound like a fun time to me. As technology will continue to progress, when you go to take drivers ed is there even gonna be an instructor teaching you or is it all going to be the car? These are all things that need to be assessed.\n\nLike I stated in the beginning I do not like driverless cars and I probably still won't no matter what. I don't know about you but I like to be in charge most of the time,\n\nand driverless vehicles do not alow that to happen. I think technology is starting to take over in loads of areas, and yes I am quit addicted to my cell phone but do I really need a car to drive for me? No that is completely lazy and is just an excuss so people can text or talk on their cell phones. Technology is the reason why most people get into vehicle accident every year and die. Do we really need more technology to cause problems? No we don't. If I ever had one of these driverless cars offered to me I most likely would not take the offer because I don't like this idea at all. In the near future I hope vehicle companies will take the opinions, and ideas of car buyers and use it to produce something that they will like.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Health is so vital that we should pay more attention to enhance it. This essay will give insights into how I strongly agree with the idea that spending public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle to prevent illness is more significant than spending it on treatment of people who are already ill.\r\n\r\nThere is one major reason why public money should be spent on promoting a healthy lifestyle. This budget is made up of taxes of citizens, hence it should be applied to them instead of the ill only. For example, the authority can employ celebrities or KOLs to encourage everyone to exercise, since those influencers have a significant effect on viewers. After having awareness of caring for their conditions, there will be a lower chance of them suffering from illness or contracting diseases. Therefore, nations will be contributed and developed by vigorous citizens. Otherwise, if public money is paid for treatment of people who are already ill, there is just a small number of people being able to access this budget because the ill constitute a minor proportion of society.\r\n\r\nSome proponents for remedies would argue that lives are so invaluable that we should invest money in curing them. However, due to that graveness, this payment cannot enable the patients to recover, so that it will probably be useless. Consequently, not only is it a waste of money, but it also prevents tax payers from deriving benefit. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that public money should be spent on encouraging a healthy lifestyle to prevent illness rather than on treatment of unhealthy people. It is my firm conviction that this money should be invested in everyone because they have made up this budget.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I recently heard people believe comuters different effects people To past computers caused problems human body Amny becoming computers So question I believe computers neagtiove First computers caused exercise become unhealthy said spending time computer need realize sitting computer danger health nt want eye problems To computer much work playing games I realize enough I need stop go exercise keep wellbalanced health says CAPS technology increases people given glasses need make changes So I somputers become unhealthy My people spend much time family friends In pase mon used yell people believe important know Computers keep divorce could computer People need within families decrease interaction My last reason people ot people enjoying nature chance express thought Many people need time think happening life internet TO past stressed I never relax think things I computer something homework people much going life believe Do see nature helpful So see computers negative effect people nt get enough time enjoy nature To conclusion I believe computers huge negative effect people The reasons people would less active people interact well people enjoy nature So I strongly vote negative effect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever library asked yourselve following questions Who reads Why Are kids reading watching stuff Do kids check Or ever wondered said self statements I nt want kids pick read This offensive This goes morals I nt know kind freak convention I m part Lets get This place wack Ever consider books get banned library Who bans books I think things offensive pull shelves I think stick side library put age certain age check books I dont think cussing books offensive When person No matter goes world They going learn hear curse words People use like words and the They going hear till thier grave Wheather chose use s thier choice For banned moved diffrent group books sexist raciest alot sex really grusome I think go upstairs mushy romance wacked western I mean people could go check adult library area The staircase circulation desk When busy go upstairs check see young children I think The top level certain area adult area They mushy lovey dovey stuff cow boy shoot stuff offensive stuff The stuff much sex really raciest really sexist grusome stuff like people killing people funAlso adult magazines Do nt act like nt know im talking You know go aisl market girls thier bikini half naked Then cosomos upstairs I mean talk give pleasureable sex I would hate little year old year old pick thing would scarred life Then main level area teen books You know vampire books heros crazy fiction stuff magazines movies nt bad Then bottom level children level Games puppets movies easy books That sums I dont think anybody able ban book I think open anyone There huge meeting With mayor couple teachers one english teacher level parents librabiens The person wants banned tell everyone stuff Like Author Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book shelf also exact right everyone else And books left us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increasing pollution of the environment ,some persons deem that one of the best ways to solve the environment problem according to increase the price of fules.But i do not think that is the best solution.\r\n\r\nSome folks believe that one of the best solution to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles.Because higher fuels prices increased people’s spanding on cars and other vehicles so people will reduce the frequency of using cars.Tail gas include carbon monoxide ,sulfur dioxide and other gases harmful to environment ,it can cause air pollution and green house effect or acid rain.So increase the price of fules can help to protect the environment.\r\n\r\nHowever,I deem that way can not solve the problems from the root.Because environment pollution problem is a complex problem,it can divided into air pollution,land pollution and water pollution.Vihicles and car tail gas just occupied a small proportion. If it can be solved ,environment problem can not be solve absolutely because water and land pollution.In addition,if the cost of fuels increased,there will be some rich folks use the cars as usual.So I consider that the better solution is that goverment should encourage bicycle companies to dispense a certain amount of free cycling cards to citizen,this can attract some people to choose this environmental frendily to commute.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,increasing the cost of the fules indeed a good way to relieve the environment problem,but i think provide free and environmental friendly transportation to people is a more adaptive way and can solve this problem more effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "setting affects cyclist strongly story mentally physically wasnt ready going For example text states No better piece advice solo cyclist would never Accept traver advice collection old timers wasnt left cosines theer poiches since calter office So youg guy took maid advice older guys get pack backin thier day probably shortcut", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea becuase we should study Venus becuase it is important to study about a planet that is close to the earth.Besides all its dangers that Venus has i think it is a good scientific thing we should learn about. In the article it stated,'' Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfuly to our knowledge of Venus.I know this becuase it stated in the article and i learned about in science class and we did a whole project on the planets and i like Venus better than the other planets.It stated in the excerpt,''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys and mountains.'' I know this becuase it stated in the expercet and we learned alot about this planet and i think they should do more investigation on this planet.Venus is a importnat planet to our world and schools should study that planet on how it contributes to the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that keeping the Electoral College is the wrong way to go. That changing it to election by popular vote is a better decision. Because the people of our nation should be able to choose who they want to be the president not the 538 electors. Why not have the whole nation vote for who they want and who ever has the majority of the votes win? That sounds like a fair election to me! The electoral college has so many faults, that just one little tiny mishap can cause a huge disater within the election.\n\nThe electoral college does have some advantages. Like swing states, or avoiding run-off elections . But it also has disadvantages for example it takes so many risks, its unfair to voters, its outdated, and irrational.\n\nThe electoral college cheats the people who are voting. I mean they didn't sign up or vote for the electors\n\nNO, they did it for the president. So why not give them that chance? It makes it easier on other people and the election is a fair one.\n\nThe picking and choosing of the electors is unorganized. Each year its a different person.\n\nSometimes state conventions, sometimes the states party's central committee, and sometimes the presidential candidates themselves.\n\nVoters that go and vote for which ever president they want, really aren't even voting for the president their voting for that president's elector. Which is someone who goes and votes for that president that picked them as their elector. And sometimes the voter that is actually voting for the elector to vote for their assigned president will end up voting for a different president. Also voters will sometimes get confused about all these electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\n\nSo in conclusion, changing from Electoral College would be the best choice to make. Because election by popular vote for the president isn't so complicated, is more reliable, isn't so risky, and most importantly the voters get a fair election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markests didn't get to see the candidates at all.\"-Bradford Plumer. Are society is relaying on this electoral college system, when we don't even know who are those electors. I agree, that we should change our election to a popular vote because people get often confuse to whom their voting for, and it might lead to picking the wrong person that would be helping leading this country. On the other hand, the people that agree on keeping the electoral college system say that \" when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.\" The majoredy of citizens don't even know who their voting for, imagine their going to be more lost and eventually ending up voting for the wrong person. The electoral college should be remove for good which will allows to have a stable society.\n\nThe Electoral college dosen't allow the candidates to come and visit the states. So, you don't even now who you're voting for.\" In 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly suceeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" What's the point of having privileges to vote, when the segregationist who elect electors are against the president you voted for. What's happen to having free rights, and be able to vote for who you want, and knowing that he or she would suceed and lead our country to the right path. By having the electoral college system it is getting rid of those rights. Also the \"2000 fiasco\" was known as the biggest problems we had in the century. Are goal is improving our country not deteriorating it. If we change our election to a popular vote we wouldn't even be in this mess.\n\nCitizen who agree on keeping the electoral college system say that \"electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in 2012's election to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states.\" What wrong with all the states? Are we not part of this country to? Their focusing all their attention on the states that they would be recieving their votes from. Their not even giving other states an opportunity of getting to know their candidates and what their offering to are country on improving it. Another, example is that the electoral college votes relay on larger states. They do that because they know that all their votes are going to come from the bigger states but that's incorrect they should relay on the whole country completely of getting their votes from.\n\nIn conclusion, the", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Readers many hours day spend computer In modern world seem hard tear away trusty computer screen face life Nearly everyone computer ruining country With hours wasted virtual world people lacking exercise leading many problems They also avoiding nature outside losing contact family friends I think computers causing way many problems peerhaps consideration evidence could come think Statistically overweight country One reasons Hours sitting computer replaces healthy exercise spending lives computer sitting clicking exercise The great lack exercise causing health problems Not exercising lead abesity damages joints terribly Then diabetes developes taking away quality life Finally heart disease top killer country All spending time computer ask amount time spend computers much damaging Every day beautiful way sometimes beautiful us saying beautiful us comes outdoors clear skys warmtemperature These days come quite often Glance window go back texting laptop Our bodies need get sun without going outside nt get traveling outdoors deprives body important affects health well inside computer keeps us expenence real experience learn things computer virtually What happens forced real world cant really anything Everyone loves friends family nt make sense would rather email trivial things instead talking Instant messaging nt really bond people conversations planned time think person nt know real would say This frays bonds people ca nt work together even family ca nt work together nobody wants Computers take away much spending much time Blatantly bad people Not effectively cause abesity fool us thinking things really virtually make close people come apart ruining A country sick useless isolated time step away computer real life gets demolished effects computers cause", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The majority of the people in the country think that developing an economy of a country should be considered first by the administration. Meanwhile, the rest of others thinks that poor people in a country should be at the top of the priority list. In this essay, I would discuss the territory economy level and the unwealthy people.\r\n\r\nFirstly, by improving the growth rate of an economy we can elevate the living standards of the people by bringing more goods and services to the country. Secondly, the unemployment rate of society is decreased. For instance, we can offer more jobs to underprivileged people by developing a new industry. And to that, we may also reduce the overall expense of the people who are living in the society.\r\n\r\nHowever, we should also give equal importance to the less fortunate people. Because poverty is the disgraceful and unjust condition that has always haunted humankind. It divides the people into classes like high class and low class. And it also leads to diversity among the people. so the authority must take effective measures for the people. for instance, an equal educational system for all, scholarships for below poverty line people, or to the first graduate people in a family. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Economic growth leads to better living standards for the people. While considering the poor people we can improve the overall development of the economy of the country. So, the administration should give parallel importance to the economy and the less fortunate people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the change of climate is considered to be one of the greatest concerns for all living beings and especially for humans. Some would say that we need to stop trying to prevent climate changes, but we need to adapt accordingly. According to my personal opinion, I do not agree with the idea of proponents because if we don't try to heal mother nature then our life will deteriorate slowly and in the near future the earth will be completely inhabitable. \n\nTo begin with, changes in the weather not happened suddenly, however, it is slow but steady. Additionally, our lives are directly and indirectly controlled by climate. To simplify, if we compare the climate with 100 years ago, then one could easily notice the differences and most of us have already seen how it is affecting us in terms of an increased number of natural calamities, new viruses etc . For example, in India, there are some places where the annual rain count was 200 mm on average 50 years ago, however, these days it is below 10 mm and nearly turned into deserts and there are no other ways for the local residents to leave those places permanently. Moreover, it is not limited to a specific country or a region, the effects of climate changes are forcing us to change our way of leaving and it may be too late to even try to stop now. Nevertheless, we need to try our best to prevent global climate changes. \n\nMoving on to the other point, the changing weather can make our whole planet barren or completely engulfed with ocean and if that happens, then there will not be a great chance to survive. To elaborate, mostly the atmosphere around us is controlling the weather and that itself is changing due to numerous human activities. For instance, most of us are aware of the effect of the global warming and how it helps to melt the arctic ice layers which in results will increase the sea level and in the near future, many seasides cities over the globe will be submerged and with almost certainty, the scientists can predict that no animals even humans could survive that. In a nutshell, we need to at least try to prevent these kinds of scenarios from happening.\n\nTo conclude, there are maybe a few chances of survival for humans with changing climate, but overall it is assumed that more than 90% of all life forms will perish along the process so personally, I believe that we need to try hard to reverse climate changes. I would suggest that the government and the local communities should try to make a harder effort to prevent climate changes so that we can have a sustainable future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted author talks many obstacles builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State building The first obstacle faced involved dropping mast onto buildings flat roof This task would easy using single cable lower mast would add great deal stress buildings frame Another problem faced nature The violent winds would cause dirigible swivel around mast The greatest obstacle involved safety Lots blimps outside use highly flammable helium rather hydrogen Helium makes dirigibles likely cause explosion risk many lives people New York Lastly existing laws New York balloons dock Airships flying dangerously close urban areas Many obstacles faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building mentioned article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I recall famous madican named prefering stunt took enourmous amounts pateints courage named CAPS In Time The madichian stay block ice days hours The great madichian sweater He consiled ice open public magnificent madichian said I could bearly hear anything He waited hours like falling abyiss bottomless pit Until final seconds ended The madichian finally free And alive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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