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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, State Senator\n\nWe should change the election process for the president of the United States to the 'election by popular vote' method. This process is a lot more equal and very easy for the people.\n\nThe 'election by popular vote' method needs to become the newing presidential voting process for many reasons. When people vote today its not just the indivisual people voting its the indivisual states voting as a whole. Which in a way can cause confussion and unequality. The electoral college has many flaws inside its system, for instance ''under the electoral college system, voters do not vote for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.'' But if you had the 'popular vote' method every single person that voted would have a personal vote that counted as 1. It is aggreable to sya that ''the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.''\n\nEven though the electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non democratic method of selecting a president. There are still at least two good reasons to keep it. One being that it ''restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states only ny populaton lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreeed in the Constituton.'' And the other being that the Electoral college avoids the problem of elections where no candidate receives a mojority of the votes cast.\n\nIn counterclaim of the good attributes of the electoral college voting system we could still state that the 'popular vote' method is still a much more equal, fair, accurate, and durable way of voting for the president of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think certain materials removed shelves found offensive word saying OFFENSIVE things placed everybody get like little kids religion nt accept kind things For example opinion books music movies magazines show images words offensive people Offensive appropriate thing like certain images videos bad words use everybody hear see You careful think something offensive everyone thinks like everybody different opinion conclusion remember power talk read write think best I m saying prohibit certain books music I m saying time everything young looking good future us also younger kids older people provide us best experience know best kids This free country people express opinion make worth think something bad say important remember let people offend words images nt let force something offensive someone else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think having a Facial Action Coding System in a classroom is very valuable. There are many positive outcomes to having it in the room with the children. It can help stusdent counselers for a school with this technology. It can help just about all the students in a school. I think this would be a very useful thing for a classroom.\n\nHow can it help in a classroom? Lets say a teacher noticed a student that was having a bad day or looked down in general. The teacher would then send them to a computer to use the Facial Action Coding System to help see how the student is feeling. The teacher can then send the student to a counseler to discuss how the student is feeling using the technology on the computer.\n\nIn paragraph 6, it said that the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused with a lesson. If a student the best day, the computer would recognize it and the student can be helped out with his or her situation. Thats when the student would be sent to talk to someone about whats going on with them.\n\nIn couclusion, I strongly think that having a Facial Action Coding System in a classroom would be very useful. It can make a teacher and student counselers job 10 times easier. It may cost the school some money for the technology but it would be toatally worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire state building cross many obstacles order dirigible dock Empire State Building They needed build mooring mast dirigible dock Building This presented another problem however dirigible docked building weight would much building They overcame obstacle rienforcing building s supports The largest obstacle one defeated idea docking dirigible Empire State Building simply elements The violent air currents high winds made impossible dirigible safely tether top empire building For example dirigible Los tried get range mooring mast unable fiercely forceful winds In end Empire State Building could overcome obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A\n\nmerica itself is going down the drain,and its going down hard. Gas prices going up,the rise of obesity,and with Ninety precent of Americans staying home and watching T.V. instead of going outside and taking a nice walk. As an American it sounds crazy that somebody would get rid of their car,borderline insanity. However,in their cases they were justified to do so. To pay for a large garage on your new home which already cost you all that money you were saving is just not right. That's why these very few people have decided to throw away their keys and pick up a pair of sneakers in order to combat the extreme amount of prices,all for a piece of luxury we bought when we were sixteen.\n\nI f there is a place to start this off price is the best option. As I said before the prices that come along after you had the car are rediculous. All the taxes,insurance,not to mention if you want a house with a garage it cost you at-least forty thousand dollars along with your new home,as said in paragraph two. If you walk up to a person and spell this out to them they'd might say something like \"Well its a necessity to get around and another stepping stone in life\" saying this now,its not. I can make a choice and to whoever is reading this you look at this and ask yourself,maybe I don't need this junky Sedan to get around I have two legs and feet to get around. There's my question for you,would you rather pay lets say Twenty thousand on a New or Used car,or would you rather pay Twenty maybe even Ten dollars for a pair of new sneakers/running shoes. Take your time and think it out. While you do that,I'm going to go to my second option.\n\nS\n\no lets move onto the cars themselves. A car in America is the basic standing point for which people get around. Aside from those with Motorcycles,Skateboards,Bicycles and Roller skates. Remember when you just got your lisence and you went with your parents to pick out your first car? Chances are,it was junky used pile of garbage,if not then congratulations on the new and expensive Dodge Camero. What are you gonna do first? Go out and hang with your friends? Nope! You're going to Allstate to pay for insurance,then making sure you have to pay every payment on your car so that it doesn't get Repoed,you might end up getting a second job,which leaves you zero time to yourself or to hang out with your friends. All because you wanted that shinney new car,or the used up hunk of scrap. Heck if you get a used car,chances are you're going to have to put in some work time to replace the parts and fix it up to make it look nice,making your money situation even harder. Not to mention the polution that they give off,not wanting to be the hippie in this situation but its true.\n\nParis itself enforced a partial ban on driving to clean up the smog that surrounded the French tourist hotspot ,as shown through paragraph Ten through Nineteen. I feel like I've made my point here,and now to close this up with my final paragraph.\n\nT\n\no shut down this whole car talk,I'm going to give you an image of what it would be like to get rid of your car,if you're still reading this that is. Imagine that you finally tore apart you insurance bill because some kid chucked a rock through your window and burnt your 'Notice of Reposetion' on your car. Then you go back to the dealer and hand your keys and say \"Keep the car,I don't need it anymore.\" as you then walk towards the nearest shoe store and pick yourself out a nice and comfortable pair of sneakers,and even get yourself a brand new bike. Now you can focus on keeping your house/apartment payments up,and whats this? You're getting thinner? More healthy? Its almost as like choosing to get rid of your car put your life on track to a healthier life style. Now you're walking to work with your amazing sneakers,and brand new pair of Six pack abs,good for you!\n\nI think I've made my point clear. A car maybe great,but its not something we need to survive. To go on myself,I like to see what life has in store for me,and a car would make me miss out of that by driving by too quickly. In short drop the keys and take a hike,literally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Florida Senator\n\nHello! My name is PROPER_NAME and i am 14 years old. I am from LOCATION_NAME. I go to SCHOOL_NAME. This letter is being written to you beacuse i think we should NOT keep the Electoral College, this is because 1. we the people may vote, but it doesnt mean the person that is most voted for is chosen. 2. we dont get to vote for our candidate's electors. Lastly when we vote by Electoral college the citizens dont get to have the full call on who is elected. Now let me tell you more about why popular vote is way more qualified.\n\nWe the people may vote with Electoral College, but the vote that is chosen is not only made up by the citizens, but the vote may be changed by the Congress. Now thats not right! The Citizens should have all the vote like popular vote. The Citizens should choose who is voted for because they are the ones who are going to help us. Not be better for them.\n\nWe dont get to vote for our candidate's electors. The citizens of the United States sould be able to vote for who we want our candidate's electors to be. This is because if something goes wrong we will have the right to change the electors and be happy about who they are going to be. We cant do that with Electoral Voting.\n\nLastly when we vote by Electoral college the citizens dont get to have the full call on who is elected. If we dont get the full call on who is elected then why even vote.\n\n\"We the people\n\n\" means the citizens not over ride the citizens votes and just do what they want.\n\nNow this is my statement on the Electoral College. I disagree with most of everything the Electoral College has to offer not just me but everyone in the United States. Now lets make the election of our president by popular vote of qualified citizens.\n\nSincerely, PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nMONTH_DAY_YEAR\n\nIn this essay I will be explaining why the Electoral College shouldn't be kept,and why we should do a popular vote instead to determine the president of the United States.\n\nIn my opinion we should do a popular vote because we U.S. citizens know what we want. The Electoral College may know what they want for themselves as a unit but honestly I think that the United States should stick to a popular vote. In an article I read called \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer it states that state legislatures can technically be picking electors that will always defy the will of the people. I notice this to be very unfair because if electors are always going to defy what we say and want why should we vote. Isn't one of America's #1 catch phrases \"\n\npower to the people\n\n\" well in this case it seems to be \"\n\npower to the Electoral Collage\n\n\". In this article it also states that in many cases \"\n\nfaithless\n\n\" electors have ocassionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please! So if the electors can choose for whomever they please why can't we. I also think that the Electoral College is unfair because of the winner-take-all system. Candidates don't have to spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning in. While they go to the states that they know they have a absolute chance of winning in and take those winning votes. So in this case I have to agree with Bob Dole: Abolish the Electoral College!\n\nI also think its wrong that voters can't always control who their voting for because we all the freedom to our own opinions and in the process of the Electoral Collage they are basically just throwing all opinions in the trash. They obviously don't care and I see this as completely irrational and unfair. I know that may use the Elecotoral Collage as a way to keep everyone calm but I think if they were to let the people vote they wouldn't have to be worried about us not being calm because that's us getting what we want and therefore why are we going to complain. I also consider the Electoral Collage electors high class. So in this case they are going to want to vote for the benefit of them, I think this is unfair to the lower-income families because if the electors choose a president that is going to want to take all the benefits away from lower-income families how are they going to live? How are they going to survive.\"Remember \"\n\npower to the people\".\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days many kinds merdia liberaries beside books There musics movies magazines many There kind things resources find liberaries Do think certain materials removed shelves found offensive What think I think nt remove Even stuff nt want children know know someday Once remove shelves things informations going removed After nothings going leaft There lot imfornation world Growing children learn kind stuff parents book medias Parent want let children learn much possible However sutten things parent nt want children learn You need think way That children grow become adult know way Why would move shelves going know What point Does nt removing shelves helps children know I nt think point Katherine Paterson Author said All us think books hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books shelf us I agree Katherine Once books mediea get removed reason things going removed reasons I nt think remove like Katherine said nothing gon na leaft children If nothing gon na leaft children main point libaries I believe certain materials books music magazines many removed shelves found offensive children know need know adualt Also nothing gon na leaft children libareries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives author created mood The mood author created something different never seems go downAs Narciso Rodriguez really gives definition family memoir One examples author created mood Growing enviornment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative In paragraph talked moving new home heart kitchen cooked listening cubic music Narciso said s internally grateful know cook still enjoys listening cubic music Its happy mood showing memory Another example My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture Narciso s mood suddenly strict proud parents The last example would last paragraph It home learned real definition family I never forget parents turned simple house home Narciso s mood happy pround say home family really meant lot The mood author created Narciso Rodriguez always proud happy never sad She lot memories one home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change has been the talk of the town these days, owing to the multiple challenges it posed to the globe and its adverse effect on the lives and livelihood of the people. Many people argue that the ideal solution is to raise the fuel cost, that powers the vehicle. However, this essay disagrees with such a school of thought owing to more cons than its pros, since a surge in fuel prices is not a viable solution at all.\r\n\r\nTo start with, the majority of people prefer private vehicles for their personal use, offices, schools, businesses, picnics, and so on. Though it seemed logical to promote public transport while raising the price of power consumed by vehicles, however, this is not a systematic solution to the real problem. Moreover, the larger and giant economies of the world should be held accountable for the worsening the climate of globe. More consumption of fossil fuels, like the burning of hydrocarbon by industries, the power sector, and an unending war of weapons, tend to increase the volume of greenhouse gases that are trapped in the atmosphere and ultimately increase the temperature of the planet.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, a dedicated and committed approach to expanding the use of renewable energy is a feasible solution to the problem. In addition, the government must allocate funds for the transformation towards the cleanest sources of energy. Alternatively, transportation systems can also make advancements in terms of fuel consumed like the introduction of lithium-ion batteries, and electric power vehicles. For instance, Tesla company in the USA has recently gained a boost in their production of electric-powered vehicles.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, owing to the scale of problems being faced by the world in the form of climate devastation, a sustainable and multi-layered approach is the only way forward to facilitate the people as well as promote green sources of energy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, the two solutions both have its pros and cons. But I think the first solution which is, create housing areas by providing taller buildings, is a better solution. Providing taller buildings can save the area of lands being use and can create more areas with green grass or trees that can help the environment. Also taller buildings can provide greater view and can be designed in creative ways. So does the buildings in cities can create a skyline which makes the city scenario more modern and breathtaking. On the other hand, if we choose to build houses on a wider area, the land will still, be eventually out of use. And they are likely to destroy wildlife or nature areas since places that has wide areas are mostly at the rural parts of the country. Also, houses wide spread in a large area can be crowded and can seem messy and not ideal for site. Although maybe some people will think that shorter buildings are safer when there is a fire or when natural disasters like earthquake comes, but the number of times these problems occur are low and modern technology can also help to lower the risk of people getting hurt. In conclusion, I think create housing areas by providing taller buildings is a better solution because it solves the fundamental problem which is not having enough places for people to live by not using new lands and can also creates less harm for the nature, which is significantly important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Accoring to the pargraph they are talking about Venus how danger and how hot the surface is and Venus also have the hotted surface even thought Mercury is closer to the sun.\n\nThe author should support his idea like saying if we build a spacecraft that can survial for a month in Venus surface we might get to study more and by only sending a machine not sending a human\n\nVenus is the 1 hotted planet even thought mercury is closer to sun and Venus and Mar is Earth neighbro this two planet are the closet planet to Eath in our solar system\n\nVenus is the first hottest planet in our solar system, long ago Venus use to have an a Ocean like our planet Earth, Venus is almost like Earth , it have some feature and NASA also think vehicke hovering 30 or miles above the roiling venusian landscape , like our jet airplane travel ar a higher altitude to fly over many stoem, and a vehicle hovering over Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying uo and out of their way. a t the 13+ miles above the surface the temperature will still be at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit but the air pressure will be close to the sea of level on Earth and Nasa also saying sending human into Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, there are a number of reasons for this interest. In reality, the internet and other social media channels offer a variety of information for your research, including available resources, and even more reliable methods: connecting with former owners or seniors.\r\n\r\nThere is an inherent curiosity among people regarding the history of the building or house they live in. Knowing about the background is regarded as a form of self-satisfaction, thus increasing the need to know. Additionally, some people are concerned about the safety of the construction. In determining whether an accommodation is suitable for living, a number of factors, such as durability, age, etc., can be taken into consideration. In some cases, this can be helpful in preventing suffering from collapsing. As an example, some residents of Tokyo, Japan, moved out after receiving information about their homes' facilities and designs from a previous date. This information is no longer suitable for their occupancy. In this way, they would be able to avoid being trapped following a serious earthquake.\r\n\r\nObtaining information about the history and origin of our accommodations is no longer a problem due to the widespread use of the Internet. Asking our elderly neighbours is the least acceptable method. An example would be the buildings in Saigon, where investors have created a simple app that shows all the periods they passed through in a clear manner.\r\n\r\nIn summary, people are interested in knowing about the background of their home due to an innate curiosity and awareness of safety. It is possible to do this by consulting the internet and the narratives of others who are more knowledgeable about the topic. While the sources on the Internet are carefully selected, and other information is verbally transmitted, we should avoid misunderstandings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people believe that playing competitive games by students plays a vital role in their studies, whereas others assert involvement in these activities is not beneficial for the children. I intend to discuss both the views followed by my own opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, advocates of latter view opine that competitive sport can adversely impact the studies of the pupils. In order to participate at a level which requires consistent practice, students need to spend enough time in the field to participate in it. Due to this, they often fail to spend time in their academics, thereby negatively affecting their studies. For example, a child who practices in the morning and evening for sports gets tired and generally skips the classes and self-study hours to recover. This situation clearly depicts the effect on the education of sports students as they do not get time for studies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, proponents of the former notion assert participation in competitive sport enhances certain skills which can assist the young ones to imitate these characters in their academic life. To explain, players are not only trained to bear pressure, but also to hold their nerves in any competition by the sports coaches. These qualities are generally required in taking competitive examinations as well, which are not easily provided through teaching in classes. Thus, students who are equipped with these skills through competitive sports activities are more likely to get succeeded in the examinations which require competition such as entrance exam for various prestigious universities and so on.\r\n\r\nIn my perspective, sports activities can aid the students to perform better in their education unless they spend a large share of time in the sports field only. It is primarily due to the fact that outdoor activities increase oxygen content in the body, which can make students more sharp and active. This is imperative for their studies because it can help them to raise their concentration while learning as the fresh and active mind is more focussed according to various studies as well.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, students ought to dedicate some time to competitive sports as it can help in terms of building character which can assist them in their education as well as refreshing their minds to increase concentration in studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders empire state building faced try make perfect especially designers They went alot work effort time They tried make different arrangements government people The dirigibles always near mooring mast They afraid would knock one day They also wanted become transportation future The transportation airplanes The dirigibles became world s highest soda fountain tea garden sightseers So plans nt quite work planned everything else seemed work okay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast builders Empire State Building faced several obstacles attempt allow dirigibles blimps dock One reason difficult allow dirigibles dock Empire State building safety issues According Marcia Amidon Lsted Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable With New York City dense population risk taken Another obstacle faced architects Empire State Building nature The start paragraph states The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents With high winds dirigible even tethered mast would swivel around mooring mast Another difficulty docking dirigibles according excerpt paragraph existing law airships flying low urban areas Due law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area A final obstacle builders faced advancement airplanes made difficult dirigibles prime source aeronautical transportation Even though builders spent lot time effort making Empire State Building national neglected many potential problems mooring mast led never accomplish full potential", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The benefits of visiting and studying Venus outweigh the dangers and risks of Earth's sister planet. According to the author, Earth and Venus have many similarites which makes scientists believ that Venus was once a habitable planet. \"Often referred to as Earth’s “twin,” Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too...Venus...may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\"\n\nThe author talks about ways that NASA is trying to make to visit and study Venus in a safe way. For example, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above them surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard of the Seagoing Cowboys program ? If you have not heard of this program you are missing out . The Seagoing Cowboys program helps with animals and people . I think you should sign up for this program if you can . It is fun , your helping while having a awesome time , and doing your part while being exited .\n\nFirst of all I think you should sign up for this program because its alot of fun .Can you imagine traveling while helping others ? If you sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program you get to see all types of sights . In the passage Luke got to go to New Orleans , and Greece which shows you that you get to travel to awesome , mouth dropping sights. The passage states that Luke says \"\n\nthe cattle-boat trips were an unbelivable opportunity for a small-town boy \" which shows that this is not a waste of time . So you have alot of fun , get to see amazing sights , and its not a waste of time so why not sign up .\n\nSecond of all do you see how much help and care your giving . In the passage Luke cared for animals during the crossing , he fed them , and cleaned after them . Luke also severed as a night watchman for the animals , which means he was being on gard for the animals . Him watching over the animals effected people by them not having to worry about the animals . Luke also made hourly reports to the captain , while he was doing this he was also having fun . So Luke helped alot while having fun , why not join today .\n\nThird of all you are doing your part . Everyone has a part to play , and everyone has to help in something . Luke stayed up late to watch animals and gave reports to the captin , Luke made his mark on the world and he didnt expect anything back , but he did get something he got to see mind blowing sights , meet new people and animals , and the satisfaction of knowing that he helped . So there are three important things that will make you think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program , why would not you join .\n\nOn the other hand people might say its not worth the time , you will have to leave home for some time , and you do not get anything out of it . Well , it is worth the time because you get to see amazing sights , and meet amazing people and animals . Yes , you will have to leave home but just think of all the stories you will have to tell . If people say you will not get anything out of joining the Seagoing Cowboy program , tell them you will see many sights , have alot of fun , and meet new people . So you do get something out of being in this program .\n\nIn conclusion , i think you should sign up because you will help animals and people . You wll see alot of places , Luke even went to Europe . If you sign up you will do your part . Also you will be happy and exited , nothing close to boredum while your with the Seagoing Cowboys program . So go and join the Seagoing Cowboy program !", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" by Nick D'Alto, he describes a new type of technology known as the Facial Action Coding System, and how it utilizes a computer software to identify human emotions. Developed by Dr. Thomas Huang, this software was made with the intention of creating better ways for humans and computers to communicate. Dr. Huang also presents the idea of bringing this technology into the classroom, claiming that it can help teachers when a student is confused or growing bored; however, this idea may not be the best way for facilitating the classroom environment. The use of facial scanning technology in a classroom setting in order to read the emotional expressions of the students there will actually bring more negative consequences that outweigh the benefits.\n\nOne of the first reasons that must be considered would be this technology could be very expensive. According to D'Alto, the process begins by having the computer construct a 3-D model of the face and, \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\" in order to identify mixed emotions. This is fairly recent technology, and with the complexity that is required in order for the computer to determine the emotions of the subject, this system could be very expensive for schools to invest in. D'Alto also mentions that, \"your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile\" which thus leads to the conclusion that the complexity of this technology would not suit the computers most schools are able to afford. Thus, the introduction of this technology into the classrooms would not be valuable in the face of finances.\n\nFurthermore, the students' morals must be considered as they may not want their teachers to scan their faces constantly during class. Throughout the article, D'Alto explains how the computers analyze every feature and muscle of the face in order to piece together an analysis, \"all 44 major muscles in the model [... are] then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\". Dr. Huang designed the software to be like this because the computers need to be able to recognize the subtle facial movements humans use to express their emotions. By having such an in depth analysis of every small feature on one's face, this may make some of the students uncomfortable, which needs to be put into consideration while deciding whether or not this would benefit the class as a whole. This should also be run by the parents to first see if it is alright with them for a computer to analyze their child's face daily; is it worth this trouble to pick out every emotion a student is conveying? To further expand on this factor, using this technology in order to see how another person is feeling limits the conversation or connection that could have been shared. This could not only reduce the friendliness of the classroom environment, but also how close each student is with each other.\n\nD'Alto goes on, adding that while each emotion remains similar universally, there are still some individuals who \"often show varying degrees of expression\", therefore, it would vary from student to student, and the accuracy will not be 100% every single run through. While the teachers are able to interact with their students and learn more about how they are feeling through this way, the computer merely scans the students' faces without taking into consideration how their personality, gender, race, age, can affect these results. As D'Alto mentioned, some people tend to smile more easily, while others do not have as broad of a smile. This could lead the facial scanning software to incorrectly analyze the emotions of students, a major downside to incorporating the use of this technology in general.\n\nFinally, by using this facial decoding system, it may also take away from the lessons in class. Not only is it distracting to the students, but it also seems very time consuming to scan every student's facial features. In this situation, human analysis would be the most efficient because it would not have to go through the process of individually calculating what percent of each emotion a student is conveying at the moment. Humans can also detect the quick changes of emotion that students go through during school. Additionally, students could be curious as to how distorting their faces would alter their results of the facial scanning, which would greatly distract them from the learning environment of class. For example, the article states, \"In the real smile, the zygomatic major life the corners of your mouth. Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using teh zygomatic major and a different msucle, the risorius\". This shows that by altering which muscle on the face is contracting, the way the emotions are conveyed would be altered as well. Students could end up playing around with the software by changing these muscular arrangements, and lose the attention that could have been on the teacher's lessons.\n\nOverall, while the Facial Action Coding System is very impressive and is able to read human emotion, replacing simple human analysis of each other would create many more negatives inclucing: the inability to afford this technology in the first place; morals of the students, staff, parents; the accuracy of the software from person to person; as well as the enormous distractions it could cause during class. Thus, the new software that Nick D'Alto has presented in his article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" presents many attributes that could be useful in certain situations, however in the classroom setting, this would not be the best idea to implement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit faetures setting effect cyclist To keep cool hot summer day might neccessary one find shade Just add misfortune story There one eight building car structure kind This factor help cyclist infact make cyclist exhausted Another element story effects cyclist lack water Early story author explains The water bottle contained tatalizing sips With miles go cyclist starts loose hope making destination alive The feature rolling hills also affects cyclist The cyclist already tired enough add misfortune flat roads replaced short rolling hills hills short still could put impact ropolalive hills Many features story effected mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage '' Making Mona Lisa Smile,'' their a study saying that Dr. Paul eckman has technology that reads the facial features in a humans face that tell the doctor what that person emotions are. The study in talking about would be (FACS) Facial Action Coding System. It's a study of where these Sceintists or Doctors can read your emotions with technology. Their trying to use it for good and i think i could beused for good. Becuase theirs people with diorders like ,depression disorder and these program could help beucase if the FACS can read the person emotions they can see what wrong with that person and help them solve the problem. Their trying to see what happens in the classroom if they see what they can do for student is think that if they bring into the classroom if can help alot of people stuggleing with thing. Beucase if they can bring it to the school people that have problem learning the FACS can help the teacher find out whats wrong and help that person. The docotor said in the passage that the FACS can read emotions by reading your musles. Because doctor ''Eckman'' said that their are six differenbasic emotions, Happiness ,surpise ,anger ,disgust ,fear , and sadness. And then associted each with characteristics movements of the facial muscles, for example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle ( above your eye) it raises when your suprises. And your orbicularis oris ( arund your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. Thats how they can read your emotions becuase your facial features and emotions. So i think i can be helpful for people everywhere becuase some people have trouble working or studing when something is goinng on. So FACS can be really helpful to people everywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would be against driverless cars because of the simple fact that you dont have any control of the car. One of the cars allow for the driver to be aware of the road and make certain gestures to make the car do as told.\n\nAs for my thoughts i would rather be in full control. A driverless car could also be a distraction, the driver may think the car has complet control but, it is not a human behind the wheel. One car can handle driving functions at 25 mph, but the driver has to keep control of the wheel. There is no point of having a car that can drive itself, if you have to watch the road.\n\nFirst, you never know if the car has a problem. You could be just waiting on you turn to drive and the car has a moufunction. would you be alerted of that? What about other drivers that dont have the driverless car, every one dosent drive the same. their could be any problems on the road ahead of you and you could have no control of it because you car is driving.\n\nIn conclusion i think driverless car are not the best cars to have on the road. We have pedestrains and drivers to keep safe. Who knows what could happen havinfg a computerized car on the road, it's not safe. Computers have a mind of their own and we amire the safty of our roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor Have ever used computer Odds means know convienient positive computers Did know use computers regularly These technological marvels provide many ways communicate learn showing computers extremely positive effect people Who nt ever played game computer Computers provide many forms entertianment games music videos I drive hours see grandma The thing kept away grasp boredom trip portable computer I played games watched movies Critics computers argue people use computers ever participate physical activities Of course try exercising crammed car traveling computers positively affect It mother baby Unfortunately none relatives witness baby coming world live side minor set back prevent seeing baby thanks computers nt even leave homes This computers offer many ways social social networking sites Within hours baby born many pictures videos social networking sites let everyone enjoy baby sister Computers make life convienient Last least computers fine tool school necessary succeed education One snows day I assigned research paper Too bad I nt know one thing I asked mom drive library take books report due snow library s power went therefore closed This issue though beacuse I spend minutes computer searching information instead spending hours browsing countless pages book Thanks computers I received A report Overall computers serve many helpful purposes people These marvelous machines provide entertainment socialize people around world even provide information topic would like readers understand computers positive lives everyone elses I encourage spread message everyone know benefits using computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many families across globe use computers whether way deserts However believe computer negative effects like lack exercise In perspective I agree I truly believe computers positive effect society used correctly With computer side I believe many positive effects towards computers many things internet entertaining If computer I m sure agree tons good things For example I know many online colleges Ever heard commecial CAPS students got succesful carreer Not get discounts many items shopping online There many shopping sites online Furthermore many shops like catolog online effenly Lastly close relatives friends live far away many options today like CAPS Webcam programs like see talk using webcam find friends check daily These good reasons computers sucess economy Some computers used entertainment Online many play like CAPS Online I play many including I love amusing world You watch many favorite movies watch funny obeses internet via worldwide used source watch upload videos world see A video CAPS young boy gets bitten younger brother This entertainment system also great way use time lik re bored I see people need use wisely make plan use computer maybe hour day A computer also many great sources learn like online website fun called With play many fun learning interesting facts science In science class use websites many times us learn motiongravity You also conduct research web many projects I know I use web almost every project I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smiles,\" the author tells us how this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System allows computers to recognize human emotions. For many that would be shocking and interesting. This news has certainly peaked my interest. This new technology could be a major breakthough in many cases. The author gave us many examples to go off of but their are so many more. I believe that this Facial Action Coding System can be used for good when it comes to internal or personal problems, helping to improve students learning process', and to improve the overall way we communicate with our computer.\n\nThis new technology as I hope, can be used to solve many issues. When it comes to internal or personal issues or problems that occur, it can be quite stressful or upsetting some times. We could use this technology to read the emotions of a student and identify the changes in there mood. This technology, as Dr. Eckman said in the passage, can detect happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Suppose a student's family member was in a car accident. This technology could identify that something wrong has happened by the sadness on the student's face. Suppose a student suffers from depression. We could code these computers to not only identy emotions but again, alert to us that something is wrong. This, in turn, allows the student to get proper treatment and help.\n\nAnother way that this new technology could help, as Dr. Huang stated, is if it could recognize when a student becomes bored or confused. This is a sure fire way to help thousands, if not millions of students stay focused in school and learn. When the program recognizes the students boredom or agitation or confusion, it could make things simpler or change the way they are learning to best keep them entertained and on board. A lot of students in my very own school are hit with such boredom that they doze off in class. With this new technology that can change.\n\nHave you ever had times where you got frustrated because your computer wouldn't cooperate or do the right thing you requested? I sure have and it is quite often. This Facial Action Coding System could help in those situations as well. If more emotions are put into this system it could detect and find a way to change those emotions if negative. They have technology where you can command your computer or device with your voice, but sometimes that does not work either. This new technology combined with the voice commands could help us communicate or requests and objectives clearly so the computer can understand. Although our devices may not be flesh and blood, they do indeed have brains. Uncapable of many things, but never the less it has a control center. We could better communicate with our devices through this new technology.\n\nThis technology, like I have described, can have many good and positive uses. I'm sure you could come up with many just as well as the rest of us. As technology advances we learn to accept it and adapt to it. We use it in everyday life. As you can see, I believe this technology could improve humanity and student's lives by identifying problems and finding ways to fix them, improve learning process', and better our communication with computers and such devices.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having driveless cars would not be a great development for our community. For one, having cars that drive by computers can malfunction alot easier the humans driving. What if the car gets into an accident who would be at fault?\n\nFirst of all, why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver? Drivers would get bored waiting for their turn to drive. If you have a driveless car there is no point in having a driver because , the car will be driving itself. Most driving laws focus on keeping people safe. Having a computer driving your car which could possibly be hacked by another person, and then you will have no control over your car. My personal opinion on driveless cars is that it is really not safe to having something driving your car.\n\nSecondly, is that if the technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault?\n\nThe driver could be at fault because the car is his/her name. It could also be the manufacturers fualt because, of one small thing they had messed up on. This driveless car could cause alot of damage to our society by the way it is driven by the computer. The compuer in the car can just do its own thing and the driver of the car having no control of it.\n\nLastly, How much money is going to cost to produce such a complicated device? It could cost a million dollars just to build one of these cars. w\n\nIn conclusion, having a drivless car is just ignorant in many ways. People have enough trouble just getting their license. Can anyone just go out and by one of these driveless cars or do you have to have a certain endorcemnet? The manufactures would have to come up with entertainment for the driver while they are not driving. There are so many questions and concerns about this whole driveless car idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the development of driverless cars will help us out a lot. The cars have many benefits that can help us. They have sensors that will help us out while we drive. The cars can steer and brake by themselves when nothing is interfering. It is also more safe for the driver. Many reasons why the driverless cars are more safe.\n\nThe driverless cars have sensors that make it possible for you to be safe. The sensors scan everything around it, so it can drive normally. The sensors also allow the driver to be more safe, because of the sensors. If it senses out-of-control skids or rollovers, it applies the brakes or reduces the power from the engine. This is quicker and more effiecient then how a person would respond to an accident.\n\nThe number one thing that makes these cars facinating and safer, is that it drives by itself. These new cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. They can drive by themselves, but also still need your assistance when needed. When the car needs your assistance, and needs you to drive. It will send a vibration through your seat belt which alerts you to take over.\n\nThe driver will be more safe with this new car, because of all the features this car has. This car can sense its surroundings and reduce the engine or apply the brakes depending on your situation. The car also alerts you when you need to be watchful and take over when neccesary. This car also uses half the fuel we use today. This stops many dangers happening with our environment.\n\nThe new driverless car has many features and safety protection for us. Many of which are listed, sensors that search its surroundings. They can drive themselves and sometimes need our assistance. A lot of safety protection for people driving. The driverless cars will be great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wouldn't it be amazing to travel around the world country to country and being able to see beautiful sights of their landmarks? Well if you're getting interested keep reading because part of being in the Seagoing Cowboys program has many contrasts on the sights you'll see now and other places that you've never seen! Participating in this oppertunity has many advantages maybe on what you'd like to be when you are a grown adult.\n\nTo begin with, the sights if you choose to join will be marvelously outstanding in the distance and upclose. And you may get a benefit from helping people in need of your help and seeing the countries of Europe and China! Once you get to Greece it's breath taking if you get to the part of Greece named Acropolis. There is also an excavated castle in Crete annd marveled at the Panama Canal as you head to the country of China.\n\nSecondly,traveling the high seas when your on board on a boat it can be somewhat fun. The cowboys play baseball and a little of volleyball to keep their minds bussy. This also includes table tennis tournaments, fencing and boxing, reading, whittling, as for games had also helped the time pass by.\n\nIn addition, this opportunity shall make you more aware of your surroundings. For example, the people that have their needs but maybe they don't have food or water to drink and knowing you did something good makes you feel good about yourself. Not only in your country but in other countries and their troubles that you may not think about or outside of your state. Just thinking about how many people out there in the world no matter rich or not they all need our help at times.\n\nLastly, once again the Seagoing Cowboys program can be a big influence in your life and the way you treat and think of others. Just image the way people around the world need money,clothing, and shelter. Knowing you made a difference little or big no matter what size of goodness changes the way you live and the way others live as well. Many people have done this and their reviews are pleasuring to read/hear because it opened up a whole new world for them that they never known of that has just been rediscovered!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Are computers possitively affecting society As technology advances humans relying people use daily I believe computers effect people possitively help write papers social tool big help research After reading letter doubt computers possitive effect people society My first reason computers possitive effect people help writing papers Whether writing resume science report spreadsheet none ever seen nowadays done hand Everyone expects see flawlessly inked letters printer paper whatever piece writing This helps people writing paper writing takes many drafts get piece perfect pain write draft hand In additio easier read someone s writing typed especially writer hand writing However computers help writing papers My second reason computers passitively effect people social tool Many websites online days social networks youtube facebook twitter myspace In listed websites many others well people meet people friends games The nice thing meeting online nt plan time meet person online guys begin chatting The chatting also helps people longdistance relationships whether friends mates family Online chatting help people stay intouch someone might see everyday That big help everyone s social life keeping us online sites like eharmony matchcom take people little time worry love match perfect mate This also helps people shy get married start family This helps people live happier lives another possitive effect Finally computers possitively effect people making research much easier My dad always says You kids got easy I growing d go library spend hours researching could write papers simple Using internet search engine type topic get latest articles seconds Libraries might recent books someone might ve checked topic s book Then The internet also extremely useful help research topic specific certain becteria species book briefly mention The internet much broader range articles much easier find information topic With research taking less time understand people spend time enjoying day like playing outside library stressing find book topic This strong reason computers seen negative effect society To conclude computers possitive effect society help write papers social tool big help research Where would handwrite everything Think many fewer friends maybe even relationships would without social websites What hours research two clicks away Computers changed lives better appreciate us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many obstacles attempting ensure dirigibles could dock Empire State Building For example first problem arose construction mast atop building According excerpt A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame From immediately know frame Empire State Building would properly modified order dirigible safely successfully dock mast Another minor issue making whole construction look decorative architects designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature winds altitude would unstable dirigible dock The problem winds could potentially swing rear dirigible around mast extremely dangerous risky", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is actually a natural landform. It's a huge rock formation which is also common in the American West. It's proven by Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbit Camera because it's ten time sharper than the orginal. All this mostly proves that it's not an alien monument.\n\nWhen NASA reveal the image for everyone to see, the authors thought it's a good way to engage attention on Mars. According to the text, it stated, \" huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadoes giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" This caption have brought attraction on Mars and books, magazines, radio talk shows, and Hollywood film has starred.\n\nMost of the people thought of an alien comparacy but when Malin and his MOC team snapped a better view of it, it proves it wasn't an alien monument. According to the text, it stated, \" And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a oicture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.\n\nIf it's not an alien monument, what is it? Garvin said it was a landform which reminds him of mostly Middle Butte. According to the text it stated,\" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nThe picture is a landform after all. Most might be disappointed that it's not an alien monument. It's also been proven by the pictures over the year they had taken of which mostly is not an alien monument. Again, it's a picture of a butte or mesa, which are common around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the finance issue after they retire. However, whether they should save money by themselves or receive assistance from the government is a controversial issue. This essay will discuss both sides and my view is that a financial-independent person will bring more merits.\n\nIt is clear that authority plays an important role in allocating resources to improve their national security and the general welfare of its people. A disturbing fact is that there are a lot of older citizens who unable to work to earn a living out there, some of them even do not have their own children to rely on. So, the government should give their top priority to assuring high-quality life for especially the elderly. However, a strong rising of the old-age dependency ratio year by year seems to be a great burden on the government efforts of improving the quality of life. If each person can save money on their own, the government could spend these expenses to solve other problems like reducing the unemployment rate or tackle environmental issues and so on.\n\nBesides, it is undeniable that the older generation today have rich knowledge and gain many practical experiences through their career, hence, they have self-awareness enough to prevent themselves from becoming a social burden as they are afraid of being an unworthy person when they get old. Although each family member should take care and provide basic needs for the elder people, it would be unethical for the old to rely totally on them. So they tend to save a certain amount of money from their monthly income in their early period of a career in order to avoid dependency on others and enjoy their old age. \n\nIn conclusion, despite governments should hold the duties of providing its citizens with efficient subsidies, I believe that people should prepare for their living expenses when they get older rather than expect from government grants.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The current generation of famous personalities are known more for their attractive lifestyle and less for hardwork which I believe is misleading the youngsters. I will explain in this essay how the focus on extravagant lifestyle of a celebrity instead of focusing on their work can leave a wrong impression on the youth.\n\n Firstly, the living style adapted by the well known people sets unrealistic goals and standards for an average person. Moreover, the importance is given to the looks and style of clothes rather than the succesful art which also results in people spending unnecessary money on expensive beauty and health products. The youngsters try to look like these stars by using overpriced materialistic things and hence, loose their focus on studies and their career. There are multiple online websites that sells the exact clothes used by the celebrities with an astonishing price range. With such standards a young person gets influenced easily and lead a misguided life.\n\n Secondly, the overshow of the luxurious way of life of a famous personality leads the people to beleive that the hardwork is the least imprortant part of their success. Their talent and artistic work is overshadowed by their media presence. As we all know, the social media has been an intimate medium to get an access to a celebrities life which is mostly deceiving. Although, the purpose of these stars is to motivate people but they end up leaving a bad example of putting the glam above the job.\n\nIn conclusion, I fully agree that by putting the excess expenditure of money and a luxurious lifestyle as the centre of attention, the famous people are misguiding our present youth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I believe computers effecting lives many people More people keep getting sucked amazing things computers forget important things life People exercising hanging friends family computers dont even teach much really think People nt even realize computers take away important things life Fore istance people nt getting nearly much exercise need In generation kids overweight obese generation People get caught computer forget exercise day least every day Computers add list excuses anything People already spend way much time watching tv It rots brain studies acually show people less aware less connected world people around Computers tv s say going minute next thing know hours already gone Computers exercising brain re exercing s really counts Even computer research school project computer still would nt help Most people nt time run library get books need resort computer That nt smartest idea half websites click go nt even correct information You might look read even sounds good nt mean s right Next thing know assignment thought aced On top getting false information people nt even know look get information re looking People type looking google search box press enter Then click first link see use information right page Then different windows popping far People give start goofing computer nt feel like trying get back page If people went library research old fashion way would stop notice things life missing People focusing family friends rather playing games computer Sure talk people computer ca nt bond really see feeling It s better invite fun playing board games talking person change Even spending time family friends re probebly thinking computer whole time go something change little fresh air would nt kill You go amusement park ride rides cousins something keep mind computer People nt realize spending much time family rather computer acually notice missing long As see computers nt helping anyone It s either exercing getting false information spending time family Seems computers around nt everything s cracked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir grateful kind many reasons Narciso Rodriguez tells parents made hard choice come leave friends family careers behind He really shows people read memoir respects parents thanks much make life better This memoir relates people real life He explains comes loves way live life simple happy accomplished far parents In memoir details description makes want keep reading learn life In conclusion everything memoir kind precious", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting road affected cyclist many different ways Because towns road made difficult find water led dehydrated state The old guys sworn next town eighteen miles road I would conserve water go inward hour The rolling hills road making use energy Because buildings miles broke ride short distances", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some humans think increasing the price of gas is the best way to resolve international environmental issue. \r\n\r\nI do not have personal opinions. However I can provide some points to consider on this topic. \r\n\r\nIncreasing the cost of fuel can be a strategy to address global environmental problems in several ways. \r\n\r\nHigher fuel prices can lead to reduced consumption as individuals and businesses may seek to conserve fuel to save money. This can help in reducing greenhouse gas emissions and overall environmental impact . \r\n\r\nHigher fuel costs can generate additional revenue that can be allocated towards environmental initiatives such as conservation efforts, research and development of sustainable technologies and infrastructure improvements for public transportation. \r\n\r\nHowever there are also potential drawbacks to increasing the cost of gas.\r\n\r\nHigher fuel prices can disproportionately affect low income individuals and households who may struggle to effort basic necessities if transportation costs increase significantly. Rising fuel prices can lead to inflation and higher production costs for businesses, potentially impacting the overall economy and leading to increased costs for goods and services. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while increasing the cost of fuel can be a tool in addressing global environmental challenges, it is essential to consider the broader sorial and economic implications of such policies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The average teenager spends hours computer daily People spend much time computers They nt exercise much nowadays Also nt enjoy wonderful nature offer Most importantly people spend much time computer nt see family friends These reasons people nt spend much time computer Since people spend much time computer exercise less less A recent poll shwos every overweight If modern society nt many distractions like computers maybe people would bore maybe fo outside Back population obese So number skyrocketted Back electronics nt popular fun kids played games eachother outside regular basis Now s rare kids motivated put mouse go play kickball neighborhood friends The kids would rather sit inside airconditioned hoose thatn go outside good healthy fun work sweat Computers keep people exercising affect people negative With computers popular people less involved nature Our society nt take time notice cool breeze waves crashing hot They nt take time appreciate beautiful follage feels showered snow chilly People would rather sit computer hours wonders world People nt respect natural beauties nature offer Computers take away people enjoying nature s joy Computers run people s relationships family friend year old would rather talk girlfriend computer spen time Kids nt organize priorities enough adding computer mix makes worse Peple accounts social networking sites like facebook sometimes drame filled cause problems Friendships easily ruined usually cause kind misunderstanding It sad true kids would rather watch goofy vidoes visit grandparent Computers negative people since ruin relationships friends family People spend less time computer Computers main factor vast increase obesity rates Kids need regain healthyness s late Also people ages realize natural beauty naturel computers get way Most importantly computers ruin many relationships friends family The cause stress unnecessary drama As see computer negative affect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natural landform\n\nSome people may think that the face on mars was made by aliens. I don't think its. I'm about to share with you why it's not.\n\nThe reason why this face wasn't made by aliens is because they're are a lot of landforms that look like human faces. The reason for this is that's how landforms are formed. In this case this face look like the Middle Butte in the snake River Plain of Idaho. If you do not know what that is it is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght of mars, and that wan't made by aliens. The Face on mars was not made by aliens it is just how the landform was formed.\n\nNow I hope that some people know it wasn't made by aliens it is a natural landform. I hope after reading this people learn something. I just shared with you why its a regular landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a teacher or classmate being able to constantly know how you are feeling, or what you were thinking. Would that benefit the lesson being taught at all? Or is that simply an invasion of privacy? This technology would not be beneficial to those in a classroom. Rather than putting this technology into use, both teachers and students could instead be honest or simply use the instincts already given to them; doing so would allow this technology to be utilized for something that could advance our society instead of staying in a classroom, and humans cannot always depend on technology to begin with.\n\nThis article states that this computer could be used in benefits to teachers in classrooms. According to this article, this advanced technology would be able to detect \"when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" While this could be helpful in some situations, if you are a teacher, you should be able to detect a student's confusion without the help of a computer at your side. Relating to students' boredom, a teacher's only job is to push students to learn, not to entertain them. There has to be communication in both the students' and the teachers' roles; if one is confused, one should express it, and if a teacher assumes one is confused, they should ask.\n\nThough it is understandable that one would wonder what those around them think about, it would be easier to use one's common sense to determine this, as oppose to technology that one would have to carry around.\n\nIf this kind of technology were to be used on an every day basis, our society would immediately begin to deteriorate. Being amusing at first, this computer would change our lives, possibly not for the better. Those able to use it would become too reliant on the machine, and they would be unable to interact with people around them without it. Likewise, there are many more emotions than the ones listed (happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness), and we should be able to detect those on our own; detecting emotions cannot be something learned through a computer.\n\nAny classroom would be better off without utillizing this technology. Even though society has to advance at some point, the use of this computer in a classroom would be inappropriate and unnecessary. Any functioning human being could detect a friend or collegue's emotion without the help of a computer, which is even stated in paragraph five: \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" Also stated in this article, this computer could be utilized for \"video games or video surgery.\" Rather than using it in a classroom, this new technology should instead be used to advance in branches that need discoveries.\n\nIt is human nature to cling to any new technology as if we cannot breathe without it. While technology will always advance, it is not necessary to use it if we will not benefit it. Likewise, we should not constantly be depending on it. If humans continue to ignore our unsettling dependence on technology, it could eventually turn against us and harm us. It is unnecessary for computers to even understand human emotion, though Dr. Huang states \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to understand that, too.\"\n\nThe use of this technology in a classroom would be pointless; it would not be beneficial a lesson at all, unless the class being taught was related to that of computer science or computer engineering. Having to rely on a machine such as this would send our progress backwards. Instead, we should utilize our instincts provided to us and recognize how important it is to be able to deduct emotions by ourselves. Using this technology every day would be an advancement that we are not prepared for. Though we act like it and think it, we as humans do not need technology at our side to function on a day to day basis.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead setting greatly affects cyclists The desert climate burrows upon cyclist For example route takes also place get water The heat lack water combine deadly dehydration upon cyclists The setting forces cyclist become determined wants live He must continue pray town come restock water become hydrated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, traffic jams are the most urgent issue for many cosmopolitan cities around the world. There are several causes of the high volume of vehicles on roads. However, there are certain steps that governments should take to resolve this problem. This essay will be discussed both main factors contributing to this problem and solutions to remedy.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the two main causes for this issue are the low prices of oil and poor public transportations. Firstly, people choose to drive private vehicles rather than travelling by public transportation as the oil's price is cheap. The advanced technologies of oil productions drive down the cost of producing oil and therefore, most people at all income levels are able to afford this fossil energy. Research from Imperial college London reveals that since 1980 when oil price had decreased for the first time, the high levels of oil consumptions have corresponded with the high volumn of traffic on the streets.\r\n\r\nAnother important cause is that public transportations have poor conditions and are unreliable. Workers, who need to work in the morning, would unlikely to take risks of being late according to the delay of buses or trains. Therefore, people are likely to drive their own cars so that they will be on time for working.\r\n\r\nThere are several steps that governments should take to remedy this issue. The state should consider taxing on oils in order to raise the price of energy consumption. If oils become more pricey, people will avoid to drive private cars for working or travelling. For example, after Chinese government increased taxes on oil prices, the traffic on roads were reduced by 60%. Moreover, an additional action would be improving the public facilities. Governments should provide more budgets to maintenance bus and train systems as well as increase the frequency of services provided by those transportations in order to gain more users. In Japan, for instance, the main reason that 90% of Japanese people use trains in their daily life as they trust in the high quality of public services in their country and therefore they are willing to travel more on trains.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that oil prices and poor public transportations lead to high levels of traffic on the roads having said that there also certain solutions that governments can take to resolve this issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mysterious Face Found on Mars?\n\nThe mystery of the face on Mars, true or false? The face on Mars is just a mesa landform. This is proven by Nasa's Mars Global Surveyor when it took a picture of it with a camera that had a pixel span of 1.56 meters.\n\nSome may disagree with this because they believe scientist are hiding this \"consiracy theory\" from them. An evidence to prove that their is\n\nlife on Mars.\n\nHowever, after reading this prompt your opinion may change.\n\nFirst, it is just a landform because of all the evidence's collected from the article. In paragraph 12, it clearly states that \"What the picture actually show is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa\". In 1976 the picture looked like it was a face of a human becuase of the camera's quality. The camera's from 1976 to now have evolved. \" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo\". This shows that the quality of the pictures differences. Last, if scientist were to really hide this \"conspiracy thoery\" from us it wouldn't make a difference. In fact NASA would be benifiting from it becuase how it would appear in news, radio talk shows, books, etc. Paragraph 7\n\n\" There was no alien monument after all\".\n\nNext, now some believe that this conspiracy theory is a secret hidden from us by NASA. They think the face is evidence to prove life on Mars. This is because in paragraph 8 it states that \" The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian lattitude where it was winter in April '98, a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet\". They believe that this may have caused the face to be hidden in the clouds. Also another reason they may believe it is a face is becuase they might have seen something that had false information on the web. This might be becuase in the text it states that \" The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon\".\n\nLast but not least, now that you've read this prompt is the face on Mars really a face? The face turns out to be just a landform on Mars. The pictures from 1976 were unclear tooken with a camera that had 43 meters per pixel. Then in 2001, NASA retook the picture with a camera with that had 3 times bigger pixels than the one from 1976. Last, the picture was a big evidence to the people that it was just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many cause of limited car usage tends to have less people on the streets. Near the French and Swiss borders ; streets and driveways and home garages were not allowed for free parking. It forced people to park in places where it was usually crowded. Most people did not like the parking rules. They either rode their bikes or walked back and forth to get to their destination. Later after that, many people were very upset with the parking rules, that alot of them decided to sell their car so they could park wherever and that had opened spaces for multiple cars to transpass the roads at the same time.\n\nSame thing in Bogota, Columbia but the problem they had, was the pollution in the air. Columbians rode on buses with other people because the believed it was safer than being in a car and getting in an accident. Paris had the same problem, except they were fined to be driving. About 4,000 drivers were fined and others cars were to be impounded for arguing about being fined.\n\nI think the better way for the car problems, is to have all people discuss the problems and explain what is best for other people. The solution near French and Swiss border is to let people park wherever they like and Columbia to clean up their pollution so they can live through fresh and safer enviroment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to visit the world? If so, Seagoing Cowboys program is perfect for you! Visiting places that you want to visit is pretty sweet! You could go to places like Greece, Europe, China, and many more awesome places!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys went overseas to New Orleans. The day the Pacific war ended! How cool right?! Again they were off to another place. It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the Eastern Coast of the United States and a month to get to china. Also, the Cowboys baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. They had excitment when they went around the world.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboys was probably an honor! You would have a fun time on board, and you would go to very cool, and different countries and habitats, it was a awesome journey for the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you think it would be safe if your car drove you not you driving your car? I think it would be negative thing if that were to happen. It does not reallly seem safe even if it is tested, something is gonna go wrong and someone will get in an accident.\n\nFirst, I don't think it would be a good idea becuase it says in the article \"The human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. The necessitates the car being ready to quicly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" So if the human isn't paying that much attention and crashes, whose fault is it, the human or car? Because the car isn't that advanced and the human wasn't paying attention. I think if they come out with a \"Driverless Car,\" it should really be driverless and the person behind the wheel doesn't have to worry about anything. It also says in the article \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" I agree with this because if it is snowing and the roads are icy, would you feel safer if a human was driving or technology in your car? i would think that most people would say human, because they might not test the \"Driverless Cars\" in that condition compared to a human that has experience and can do things easier. The article says, \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved,\" but can it really be solve? You can test positively on a sunny day but when it is windy and rainy and the wind is blowing on the side of the car, will the problems be solved then? Will it have better control than a human? I would be really surprised if it did.\n\nSecond, if it gets in a crash, would it be okay to say it was the cars fault? I know it says if it needs the humans attention it will vibrate. But can you always count on that? I think that not everything is perfect so at times it might not vibrate and it will crash. Will the human be able to sue the company. or will the company stick by their product, even though it is in the wrong. I think if one person gets in a crash and says it didn't vibrate then every other person that gets into a crash with the same car will say the exact same thing. And then it would make people not want those cars and trade theirs in for a new one. So is it really worth risking your life all for some car, that you knew it had a potential in messing up?\n\nThird, the article says \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" It goes back to do you want your car to drive you or do you want to drive it? It is like is your car the boos or you? And that should be an easy answer, I wouldn't let the car drive me it doesn't make sense I bought the car so I could drive to places.\n\nI would never want my car to drive me. It just seems too dangerous, and not safe. Even if you do it in an accident I would want to be driving knowing I did everything in my power to not get in that accident than knowing it was some technology that made me crash and potentially die. I just wouldn't want to wonder \"What if?\" And I hope you wouldn't too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undeniable that most companies rely on interviews for hiring new employees, but some people believe that this dependence on interviews is wrong and that other alternatives should be preferred as they are better. I believe that interviews are a reliable method, and the other methods cannot be considered more effective.\n\nThere are many reasons why interviews are suitable for hiring new employees. Firstly, through the interview, the recruiters can get an idea about the personality and social skills of the potential employees. In interviews, there is face-to-face interaction, and the candidates have to answer impromptu questions, from which personality traits can be judged. Also, by asking some case study-type questions, employees can judge traits like the ability to handle pressure, confidence and the ability to think outside the box.\n\nIn addition, although there are many other methods for hiring, none of them could be considered superior to interviews. One the other common method is the written test, which is good to judge the theoretical knowledge of the person. However, this method cannot give a good idea about the personality of the candidate. By contrast, through interviews, employers can judge both the knowledge and temperament of the potential employee. Moreover, the written test is fallible to cheating as sometimes candidates can take outside help.\n\nAnother selection process is a group discussion, which is good where a major job requirement is conversational and persuasion skills for instance sales jobs. They are really not suited for technical jobs because these are not customer oriented. On the other hand, interviews hold good for any type of job as the interviewer can frame questions to test the particular skills they require.\n\nTo conclude, I would like to reiterate that the preference for interviews for hiring among employers is justified as interviews have advantages over other commonly adopted methods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natural Landform\n\nUnmasking the Face on Mars is talking about how some people discused how it was created by aliens and other scientist just say it is a natural landform and i agree.\n\nMay 24 2001 tenty five years ago NASAs space craft found a shadowy likeness of a human face . Scientist believe that it is a natural based lanform called a Martian messa common enough around Cydonia . A few days later NASA unveiled it for all to see. Now few scientist think their is an alien artifact, but they are wrong.\n\nAs soon as word got out on April 5th 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time.\n\nThey snaped a picture ten times sharper than the originak viking photo . Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the JPL website to show the picture scientist revealed the picture as a natural landform there was no alien monument after all , stated in paragraph 7 .\n\nThere was no evidence of there ever being an alien just a historical landform that was a familiar to a humans face . But people were still not satisfied about the research . What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or messa lanform not an alien or artifact .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming' I an for driverless cars i can see them even you can if you have ever seen any movies aboput how our futur will be.\n\nMy position on driverless cars is for driverless cars not against them because i can see them in our future i can see them solving the many problems that people have now with cars i am here to explain why i am for the driverless cars.\n\nThe reasons i thinkk that driverless cars would be a good thing is because of these reasons: they're will not be as many car recks as there is now there is no evidence or proof behind why they're will not be as many but this is why i think that most recks are caused by teens on there phones or drunk driving but with the driverless cars they will allready have routs set in place., The driverless cars will not cost as much money to go around in because gas will most likely not be a problem because cars are progressing into electrical cars. also if there ever is any trouble the car will tell the driver before it even happens unlike regular cars which you have to wait to you are right next to an accident when it happens you will then be stuck in slow traffic.\n\nThis is why i am for driverless cars this is why i will argue for the evolution of driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "author created memoir uplifting one His memoir talked growing gattr Newark New Jersey became ghetto time immigration His neighborhood full Spanish Italian immigrants His family would come would dinner together would people stay house got back feet He childhood full family friendship great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever walked outside and taken a deep breath of fresh air but then you realise that the air youre breathing isnt alll that fresh? Thats because air pollution has greatly increased in recent years and the number one reason for air pollution is the exhaust from your cars. Yes, the amount of cars in the world has increaesed dramtically in the last 10 years. While this is good that the luxury of owning an auto mobile it has also put a burden on the earth and future generations. while cars have made it easier for our day to day lives the amount of pollution in the world has become too high to not do something about it now. instead of taking the modern convenience of a car what if you decided to ride your bike to work for a change.\n\nThe fact that the amount of pollution is ever imncreasing should be enough of a reason to limit car usage. Instead of driving every time you go somewhere if you just rode a bike or walked when its convienient you could make a difference in the world. You dont have to completely stop driving your car but just limit the amount of times you do drive and that little extra effort will make a big difference in the long run. the world is facing an epidimic in which we could not have clean air for our future generations to be able to take their kids to the park and enjoy a nice day in the sun.\n\nNot only is limiting your car usage better for the enviroment it is also better for your body. When you decide to ride your bike or walk opposed to driving your car you are getting a work out from doing so. This may not seem like much but when you look at how often you go places the numbers start to add up. In the ten minutes that you would take to go to the bank you could spend fifteen minutes riding your bike and getting exercise multiple times through out the day. thiss can also give you much more free time to do something physically active that you ignored because of a car, with the motivation to go out pollution free you can start up running or even learn how to skate and enjoy the go.\n\nWhen you decide to make the change and not drive as much you open up endless possibilities for what you could do instead of sitting in one place driving. You become more active in the community and this helps the enviroment and you as a person. limited driving has been proved to be a great idea in more ways than you would think. Just doing your part can help out.\n\nIn conclusion the facts are all here that limited car usage is the best way to go for decreasing air pollution and making you a better you. It will help the future become a brighter and cleaner place to live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Job Interviews are commonly undertaken by companies of all sizes seeking candidates to fill a role. They often consist of dialogues between a Human Resources representative of these companies and the professional interested in the position. During the conversation, the applicant's profile in terms of qualifications, skills and work experience is assessed against the job description and the company's expectations. However, some people argue this approach is insufficient for capturing the right employee. In my opinion, to ensure a more accurate hiring process, other methodologies should be explored along with interviews, such as group activities and personality quizzes.\n\nThe importance of job interviews when it comes to hiring new individuals to integrate a team cannot be dinned. It has proved to be the most traditional and practical method largely adopted by companies worldwide. They can offer vital insights about an applicant and lead to more informed decisions. However, people often act like robots by answering the questions in a way they know it may be expected by the hiring person. In this sense, other approaches should be introduced to a more holistic understading of the candidate capabilities. \n\nMany companies are already introducing new methods to find the best matches for their positions. These contemporary approaches evaluate profissionals during dynamic activites designed to capture the candidate's behaviour in complex situations, where pressure and conflicts are common. In this case, applicants tend to express their realselves, values and logic thinking. The findings are often combined to the interview results as profile matching exercise. \n\nAnother way to further assess the job seekers profiles is by assigning them some personality quizzes. Quizzes are powerful tools that can be used for gathering more information about of a professional strenghts and weakness. They also can help the company to allocate the professional into the right team and role. Some professionals can naturally act like mediators, while other need to be led by others, for instance.\n\nIn conclusion, interviews will always have its importance as they are still insightful, simple, straigthforward and demand minimum resources to be undertaken. However, when combined with other approaches the hiring process become more precise. In this case, companies need to invest time and money to introduce these complemantary approaches. Finally, this may make sense for some companies and positions, but not for the majority.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beileve the author supports this acticle very well humans could survive on Venus. It would take time and work but I beileve it could happen. Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds.\n\nThese diffrences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. The Harsh tempatures and low air pressure the raidation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.\n\nNASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplifed electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted weeks in such condtions.\n\nEven more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On planet's surface tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our solar system, though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on it's surface. If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronmers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters.\n\nIn conclusion I believe humans could live on Venus unless It orbits too close to the sun it could get to hot. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dnagers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Would you want to live on Venus with the high tempatures and low air pressure?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society , associated stress become an increasingly important issue with students or those who are studying and working . They are compared and influenced by people of the same site, same ability or location, the same group in society is believed to be more successful. This situation does indeed cause certain negative effects, but in my view, they will be overshadowed by an optimistic side .\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons why associate stress is not a very positive thing . Depending on each person's age and personality, associate stress also manifests itself differently. Expressions of associated stress can be positive or negative. With regard to the negative side , stress and influence from our peers cause us to conform as a way to fit into the social group and our family . The stress from the comparison of our scores at school makes us feel depressed and prone to failure.\r\n\r\n Additionally , leads to depression, always feeling anxious and pressured when around excellent people . Because we want to show that we are not inferior to others and easily agitated when provoked by someone . Due to the imposed expectations from society and those around them losing self-confidence and self-esteem when having to race after others with a different frame of reference . \r\n\r\nMeanwhile , It is beneficial for individuals when colleagues or friends encourage them to do something positive or push them to grow.\r\n\r\n Another key is healthy competition will help them be more motivated to act and achieve the desired results . It brings motivates us to study harder, achieve higher scores, and progress at work\r\n\r\n. That can be a role model for us to strive and improve and there is a saying that is often used in business: \"No pressure, no diamonds\". This means that the strain from the success of those around you makes you work harder and try harder to become a person like your friends.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , any problem usually has both positive and negative sides, this depends on how we ourselves perceive and solve it. associate strength can be the push that creates the motivation to push you higher, but at the same time, it can also push you down to the abyss of despair.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world, it is more common to see couples have kids at an old age. Most importantly, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in the sense that, having children later in life gives them more insight as to how to take care of the youngster's physical, financial, and psychological needs, and also, how to note for signs of abnormalities. However, there are various complications like preeclampsia and an increased maternal death rate these problems could be easily handled with appropriate medical interventions. This essay will be discussed in the subsequent paragraph, relevant examples would be provided and a logical conclusion would be drawn.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, everything that has an advantage also has disadvantages, while many would argue that the disadvantages might be brutal. I would like to point out that the downsides such as preeclampsia and an increase in the maternal death rate could be easily managed with the inception of advanced medical equipment and close monitoring of both the mother and the fetus. For example, according to the research held in a teaching hospital in Nigeria, it was gathered that complications as a result of pregnancy in old age have reduced to about 3% with effective medical management.\r\n\r\nAlso, the merit of having a kid at an older age surpassed the demerits which could be easily managed. Not only does it give them the mental preparedness that is required to raise a youngster, but it also helps them to prepare for the financial burden of catering to the kid and providing appropriate basic amenities. The knowledge gathered through experience could also come in handy when it involves paying attention to abnormalities. For instance, according to an analysis that was collated in a hospital in England, it was noticed that children who suffer from infant death and diseases have parents that are younger and inexperienced.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay discussed how the benefits of having children later in life are more important than the demerits which could easily be contained. To plan for the total need of a minor, the parent has to take their time before going ahead to bear offspring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children are the backbone of every country.So, there are people who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will result in flourished society and the individual growth of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that this motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, social work with children can be easily associated with personality development because during this drive, they tend to communicate with a variety of people, leads to polished verbal skills. For example, if they start convincing rural people to send their children in school they have to be such a convincing attitude along with developed verbal skills to deal with diverse kind of people there. This improved skill will help them lifelong in every arena. Apart from this, the true values of life like tolerance,patience,team spirit,cooperation can be learnt. Besides that, young mind serves the country with full enthusiasm that gives them feeling of fulfilment and self satisfaction. This worthiness for themselves brim them with self confidence and patriotic feeling.Moreover, going and experiencing multiple culture and tradition make their horizon, so broad that add one more feather in their cap.\r\n\r\nHowever, It is truly said, no rose without thrones. Can the drawbacks of this initiation be ignored? Children go to school, participate in different curriculum activities, endure the pressure of peers, parents, and teachers and in the competitive world they should not be expected to serve society without their self benefits. This kind of pressure might bring resentment in their mind.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe, notion of teenagers doing unpaid work is indeed good, but proper monitoring and care should be given to avoid untoward consequences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features cyclist rough road ahead kind lD war forts I thought going scenery story turns want prepared He took directions olden guys havent left house sense carter office He bike peddaling threw California desert things carry cause bike He ran water could got heatstroke colapsed middle nowhere one around save So heat gone drive insane make thirty bite The conditions biker hormone I dont think prepared Always stick gut", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting story make ride difficult cyclist For example cyclist moving high deserts California kurmaskie This shows cyclist high altitude makes breathing difficult Then cyclist notes Flat road replaced short rolling hills Kurmaskie The hills would make trip difficult This evidenced cyclist describing one long crippling hill Kurmaskie Clearly terrain got increasingly difficult negatively affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author created warming loving tone Narciso created mood including greatest aspects home For example paragraph explains endless celebrations family friends formed backdrop life warm home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke and his friends set up a program for people to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke also set up a where they would have a speech of why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys. Once everyone sat in thier seats Luke came up to the stand.\n\n\"These are some reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program, it could a once in a life time opportunity, i know it was for me, I thought is was going to be fun once my friend invited me to go with him\". \"You will have a lot of fun in this Seagoing Cowboys program, their will be stuff to do on the cattle boat to pass the time\" Luke said \"You would kind of have a free time of sightseeing, cattle-boat trips is an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy\".\n\nAfter that a lot of people has signed up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. Everyone liked being on the cattle boat. Everyone liked being overseas they still had table tennis tournaments, played baseball, volleyball, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. Everyone liked the adventures and the marvelous sights. Everyone also thought that it was a once in a life time opportunity. Everyone just could not describe how marvelous it was to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Everyone liked the fealing of being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There time I go doctor monthly monthly chek When got building aunt I relized cars usuall When stepped inside noticed flier said NUM shots threw took elevator fourth floor stepped waiting room seen people Luckly people waiting I wait hour fortyfive minituts I finally got see doctor gave shot made shure I ok After long day I went home took big nap", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of limiting car usage is a outstanding plan. Because of this idea it helps out everybody in a way so that there are good advantages. By limitig the usage of cars the air will have less polution and that means better air for us to breath. In france diesal makes up 67 percent of vehicles, witch is definately not helping the polution problem. If people use their cars less that means that they save money on gas. Ovcourse the proble is the smog in that country so that os why they want to limit the driving. Like it says over the past two decades they want to make the cities denser, and better for walking in the suburbs. In the suburbs make i more compact and more accessible to public transportation with less space for parking. All the development since world war II has been centered on the car. David Goldberg said a fast growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the united states ... who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. That will be a good thing because it is an advantage of less polution in the atmosphere. So that is all of the advantages of less car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the problem of an increasing number of people suffering from obesity is of concern to the government and citizens . Some feel that increasing the price of fattening foods in order to address the problem. In this paper, I will argue that there are other methods that can do a better job .\r\n\r\n First of all, raising the price of junk food can certainly help to shape consumers eating habits to some extent. Consumers would seek alternative options over sugary and fast foods because of a limited budget . If unhealthy foods such as pizzas , burgers and soft drinks cost too much, people would rather buy cheap and healthy products so they can minimize the expense which in turn modifies eating behaviours . In addition, increasing the price of junk foods is one way to tell grocery industries to manufacture ,for example, sugar-free drinks and free sandwiches which concern people's health conditions more .\r\n\r\n Secondly, simply raising the price of junk foods can not eliminate the problem because people who favour fries or chips will not change their dietary habits easily. Therefore , more methods are required to ease people's weight problems.To start with, the government should consider investing money in fitness facilities . For instance, building more fitness centres and sports stadiums will encourage people to exercise . Physical activities significantly assist trainers to burn fat and calories inside their bodies , thereby effectively promoting activating lifestyles and reduce overnight problems . Besides that, professional counsellors should give advice on a healthy diet to the general public so that people can pay attention to their dietary habits.\r\n\r\n By way of conclusion, raising the price of unhealthy foods is not the only way to help obese people.The government should put more effort into the improvement of public facilities or services to solve people's weight problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I agree computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give ability learn faraway places people allow people talk online people More people see computers positive effect people Spending time computer great way enhance handeye coordination It also teaches type fast Typing important skill need jobs It important throuhout school teaching us type also use handeye coordination loaded You keep eye move arms hands hit Computers helpful many ways Have ever looks like would found With computer Comuputers give people ability learn faraway places people You get pictures important cities places knowledge people lies Yes would social studies look buts much easier faster online Computers save time make life easier Computers learning advanced everyday They give oppurtunity talk people online whether world street In order need web They sold computer stores already installed computer Being able talk people online really great thing Its fast way learn person maybe one different country Its almost like pen pal last computer People saying computers negative effect people They say people spanding much time computer exercise They also say interacting family friends All things All manage time Or day computer If thinks everyone say computer positive effect one last invention created I would like thanks f reader time hope hat support ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to know what your students are feeling in class may help a whole lot! Facial Action Coding is advance technology to show the scientist what people are feeling. Few scientist are wanting to put these in schools so teachers know what the students are feeling about there class if they sleepy or bored the teachers will be able to know because of the computer.\n\nFirst, to have this new technology in class is valuable. It's valuable because will be able to understand there student more and if they need help because with the new technology they will know that. If the students need help the computer acknowledge that the student is confused and teacher can go and help them even though they might say they dont need it the facial program will identitfy that they do. It is benefical to both teacher and student because they will be able to know if the person is down or sad depending on how their facial expression is and how they are in need of help of some sort.\n\nSecond, the way this new technology works is it uses the way your face is constructed. It using your cheek bones they way you smile and the way you get your wrinkles when you do. But it takes a few scientist to figure it out like Dr. Paul Eckman is the creator of FACS. He has classified the six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgusted, fear, and sadness. They all have very basic but common features but not a whole lot. For example, when youre mad your mouth shrinks and your face tightens up. Which is called your orbicularis oris around your mouth.\n\nTo wrap this up i am for this. I think teachers can use the help with this new technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want somthing that reads your emotions and finds out weather you are happy, sad or depressed. If so read more to find out some more information about this device to see if you would want this at your job or school.\n\nThe reason why this can be a major impact in the class room is that it can read your facial expresstions. Teachers can see if students are struggling or if they are goofing off in class. Teachers can use this type of tool in the class roon to see what they can't see from their desk. This device can read six emotions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Also can associate with peoples movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscles (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\n\n\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recogntion software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weightign the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpice). Each expresstion is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\n\nWe has humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell hoe a friend is feeling simply by the look on his/hers face. Of course, msot of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. Yet Dr. Huang observes that the facial recognitinal machine works wonderfuly and would be amazing in any class room.\n\nIn conclustion, i belive that this device should be in schools all round that United States. My reasoning is when people come in the school that system can do backround checks on parents or adults that come into the buliding. That makes sure they keep the school safe for teachers and students in the process of everyone else in the building at that time. Plus they can have data that will be saved for when they know when that person can to the school and left the school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "''Are you kidding me, you actually think that figure on mars was created by aliens?'' ''Yeah I do, if it isn't aliens then who or what made that face on mars.''\n\n''I dont know how that got there, but i'm telling you now it wasn't made by aliens.''\n\nAs you can see the three different photos showing the figure on mars was just a misunderstanding. In the 1976 photo it looks blury, but in 1998 and 2001 photos you can see it more cleary. In the article it states '' The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.'' So that means the clouds made it look like a face.\n\nAlso during 1976 the pixels on the camera could have been bad so it could't take clear pictures. In the image 3 it shows it more clearly, so that means technology has gotten better. According to the article it says ''Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That proves that the camera in 2001 was better then the camera in 1976.\n\nNobody will ever know if aliens made that figure on mars that looks like a face.\n\nIt could have been a butte or a mesa. For example in the passage it states ''There must have beem a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their monitors. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\n''So there, I proved to you that the face on mars was just a mesa.'' ''I don't care what you say im sticking to my opinion.'' ''Okay what ever, I know i'm right and you're wrong.''", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars is very scary to some people. In the article it talks about how if danger is coming up on the car, it vibrates the seat that you are sitting in to alert you. I don't believe that this is a well enough of a design to alert the driver, unless the danger is far far away. Driverless cars should not be used because of how dangerous they could be, all the technology could fail at any second and because of the all the flaws that might occur while driving.\n\nIn the article it talks about how the driverless cars can only go about twenty five miles per hour. This could be very dangerous. On the highway cars are going about sixty miles an hour, while your car is moving at a measely twenty five miles an hour. It could also be dangerous if the driver falls or something. I know some models of car acquires you to have your hands on the wheel, but you could fall asleep while your hands are still on the wheel. Some people are also heavy sleepers so the vibrations from the chair might not alert the driver quick enough, so the driver won't have time to make an evasive manaeuver to dodge the oncoming danger. I just can't see anybody or myself using one of these cars. I don't really see the point in having one of these cars as well. Why get one of these cars and drive twenty five miles per hour, when you can just drive yourself and make it much easier on yourself. Having one of these cars will also use a lot more gas rather than just driving yourself.\n\nPeople should not trust technology enough to put their own lives out in danger. Technology is useful for some things but having a driverless car is pushing technology to its absolute limit. In the article it says the Google had cars that drove more than half a million miles without a crash. This may be true but this is because all of the precautions Google cars have. The cars alert the driver when pulling in and out of driveways and dealing with complicated traffic. This really isn't a driverless car then, is it? If you're on the highway you would basically have to drive the car yourself because there is always complicated traffic on the highway.\n\nMany things could go wrong while driving in one of these cars. The driver could fall asleep and the alerts might not be loud enough or whatever to warn the driver about the danger that is coming up. The manufacture could screw something up because they aren't really sure about things, considering that this idea is relatively modern. There definitely still are flaws to discover within the systems of the manufactures. Google said they haven't had an accident yet, but I'm sure that an accident will eventually will occur and many things could happen. People could get seriously injured or even worse, die.\n\nI think that driverless cars have a bright future ahead of them, but at the current time I think they could cause danger and harm to the driver, pedestrians and other drivers. If it was me running the state I would also ban it being tested because I wouldn't want to endangre any of my beloved citizens. I think that it's smart that some of the states banned testing of the driverless cars because it could cause some serious damage. Driverless cars are dangerous to our community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I wating grand pa get home He gone aumish sale find chicken coop chickens I helping grand I maring I exited To get home Then I went outside I work pass time I first cleaned barn Then I cattle I fed walked wattered I cleaned chiken coop Then I chicken collected eggs I fed I watered I fun I worked volleyball Then I practiced hitting piching softball Then I worked shooting hoops Then I rods gator little Then I went When I came back I thought Then I saw hillI know I wuld thrush So I got slasher went field thrashing I loaded track Then I got back put tractor attached header I went worked ground I got back I thinking I know I hear pulling grandpa We get track town", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow, from the mar really look like humans face. It have eyes,nose, and mouth. It weird that on mar there is nothing and it shape like that is really weird. Most people think there is alien who live there do. They say it maybe it for living thing for alien. I think it just a natural land form because there is no alien monument.\n\nFirst, The face of the mar really is popular for other. It even appear on hollywood film, books,magazines, and radio. Maybe it just not close enough to see if it flat or it like mountian. It show a lot of stuff going on on mar. Mar is really history for people in may 24,2001.\n\nNext, I think it just natural land form because on the shadow it look like pyramid. If you look at the shadow and you can see it not it have to much pointing on the top. The eyes waht they call it might be the whole for some water. the mouth can be just a crack on it.\n\nFinally, if we can go look closer scientist NASA might catural n tell. They just look at the front they won't know how it shape like to look side to side. Scientist NASA will have to look closer so they can tell if there is alien or not. It depend on to look closer. It just landform because it did have no alien monument.\n\nConclusion, this is all about face of mar well it truth, but if you look at the shadow it show only triangle. it will be better for scientist to look closer instead just making up stories about unmasking the face on mar. It just natural for land to have mountain, and there is no such an alien. according to ther text\"There was no alien monument after all\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI think we should get rid of the Electorial college because they are unfair. There are only a few reasons to why we need the Electorial college. I think we should get rid the college because it is a non- democratic method of selecting our president. It shoule be overruled by declaring the candidate who got the most popular votes. Its the electors who select the president not the people. When you vote, you are actually voting for a slate of electors.\n\nAnother reason why would get rid of the Electorial college is because of the winner takes all system. Canadiates dont spend time in the states they know have no chance of winning. They only focused on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. During the 2000 capaign, seveteen states did not see the the candidates at all including Rhode Island and South carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets did not see a single campaign.\n\nIt can be argued that the Electorial College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, demo crates in texas, or reblicans in California for example. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incntive to pay attention to the campign thean they would have if the president were picked by popular vote... The voters in presidential elections are people who to want to express a political preferance rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.\n\nWhats wrong the Electorial College?\n\nWhen we are under the Electorial College system , voters vot not for the president, but they vote for slate of electors. For example if you lived in texas and wanted to vote for [John] kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get 34 electorial votes. These electors could be anyone not holding public office. Plus voters can not control who the electors vote for. Voters end up getting confused because of the candidates the electors vote for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their are three reasons why Luke's point of view convince people that they should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One reason was that it was an expirience of a life time,he does what he likes to do,and he gets free time to do fun things. Thoes are the reasons why Luke's point of view convinces others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nI can support this answer that the Seagoing Cowboy's program was an expirience of a life time when the passage says \"but the Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger\".\"It opended up a new world for him\". I can also support that it was an exprirence of a life time when the text says,\"I'm greatful for this for this opportunity,\"he says.\"It makes me more aware of people in other contries and their needs.\"thats the reason that it was an expirience of a life time.\n\nI can support that he gets to do what he likes to when the texts says that \"Biside helping people ,I had a side benifitt of seeing\n\nEurope and China. I can also support that he likes what hes doing when the text says \"Luke also tored and excavatede Crete and marvoloues at the Panamna Canal on his way to China.\"\n\nI can support that found free time to do fun thing when the text says the cow boys played baseball and volleyball table tennis and more fun things. They also boxed read whiting and more those are the reasons how he got to do fun things\n\nIn conclusion he did alot of things to inspire people to be a Seagoing Cow boy. If mre people were like hime the world would be a better place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, many communities preferred finding the history of the apartment or the building they staying in. In different parts of the world, crowds were preferred to search for paranormal things. This essay will explore what might be this case and the way of how society is searching for their details.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, as human begins, more prefer to discover new stuff and explore new ideas about the historical background and also paranormal things as well. Many families in present days, keen to find out the history of a house they live in. It has a number of benefits rather than drawbacks, such as they can identify the historical outline in their current city an apartment. In addition, they could find out legal clearance in the current deed, title report and land plan as well. Some residence was preferred to search the previous ownership, construction methods and materials used by earlier owners, interior home designs they were used and many more. \r\n\r\nHowever, the residence could use various methods to research those things. For example, if you need to identify some historic background of a specific location or region you could simply clarify throughout the internet. On the other hand, we can find more information throughout the local library, the museum, various multimedia, such as TV, all newspapers, movies, etc… \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in present-day society, has been changed compared with the following decades, while people are becoming interested in pinpoint about the history, the place they slaying. Finally, it would help them to identify a background of the location and could get a basic idea of the place they going to live in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology, of all sorts has undergone immense changes over the course of history and still undergoes various changes in the present world. Computers are one such technological invention which has progressed over the past several years. Untill now, computers have been viewed by humans as something that does not have reactive intelligence, emotions or the ability to respond to anything but coded language or instructions. However, Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advaced Science at the Unversity of Illinois along with Prof. Nice Sebe have proved this mindset wrong by inventing the Facial Action Coding System which enables computers to indentify human emotions. This invention proves to be a valubale and significant improvment in the world of computers, for the first time computers being able to react to something so specific as faical changes which human themselves havn't quite mastered. This invention has widespread benefits in various fields of work. However, this invention of the FACA is most helpful and valuable in classrooms to read emotional expressions of students because in can provide for a more comfortable and enjoyable student environment.\n\nIt is most important for students in classrooms to have a comfortable environment because it indirectly and directly effects a student's performance in a class or subject. This can be ensured through the FACA since it can perceive accurate emotions. In Paragraph 6 of the excerpt, Dr. Huang predicts \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nThis quality has various benefits one of which is that it can help teachers to chager their teaching styles based oon the resulsts that they receive from the FACA which is an indirect benefit to students.\n\nAnother benefit of the FACA is that it would be able to detect the emotions of the students when the teachers is occupied or busy with aother students or while teaching. Then the FACA can be used more like a backup check to see if the class has a good understanding or if they are confused and the teacher needs to spend more time on the topic.\n\nThis proves that the use of a Facial Aciton Coding System is valuable to a student in a classroom environement and ensures that students have a comfortable learing atmosphere. These benefts may not always be directly helpful to students they do help them in significant ways by corrcting or helping the teacher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist since affecting condition She needs water survive next town far away So could possibly pass without brake hot temperatures When I tried draper I flavor battery acid Kurmaskie If doesnt find water soon affect herb condition Also features setting affects determination When knows needs find town works harder would conserve water go inward hour atleast inner spirit NUM She would try hardest make smart moves make town fast possible She works harder since knows without water life danger Now things could get even rougher", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders empire state building aced attempting allow dirigibles dock structural problems breaking laws keeping dirigible safe air The structural problems would caused pressure buildings foundation pulled dirigibles The builders also breaking The Law law saying low airship fly urban area dirigibles would way low The final obstacle builders keep dirigible safe air This due high winds airship would swinging around could break Another issue would blew pieces would fall onto downtown New York City", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The gap year is an issue that has sparked debate. It is widely accepted that young people should travel or work for a year between completing high school and beginning university studies. From a personal perspective, the benefits are more significant than the drawbacks for young people who decide to have a gap year.\nOn the one hand, most students who just completed high school education have stressful periods and lots of plans that want to do. Young people could feel disoriented which means they need time for finding what they want. There are a lot of youths who put themselves under pressure thus, they get more and more stress in their study and work and can get some mental illness. In order to have a gap year, they will have enough time to relax and establish a plan for their future. Nowadays, more and more students decide to choose a year to do anything that they hope to perform. Besides, their decision will help them understand themselves, and have opportunities to experience jobs that have not been done before such as volunteer work and long-day traveling.\nOn the second hand, there are some negative points of a gap year for the youths. The young people who decide to have a free year will face late completing university studies which may lead to having fewer opportunities than their peers deciding to start university immediately. On some occasions, it is difficult for young people who do not have any experience to find internship jobs. Thus, they may waste lots of time without any achievement.\nTo sum up, the gap year will bring more experiences for young people. It is my belief that the advantages outweigh the others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is clear that development in technology is playing a major role in delivering education today. There is a view that by the end of year 2050, the typical presence of teacher and students in classroom will cease to exist. However, In my opinion, I agree with mentioned statement to certain extent as their will still be certain scenarios that shall remain as it is.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the pace with which education infrastructure is growing and adapting, it can be established that societies are accepting the virtual education platform. For instance, over the duration of past decade, fifty percent of the total academic degree's are now being offered online and by the end of next decade, it will be one-hundred percent. Recent technological advancements, such as virtual laboratories, assessments through artifical intelligence, certification exams being proctored using web-cam has left presence of individuals in classroom redundant. Evidently, with all the news ways of teaching, the typical presence of the students and a teacher in school classes is questionable.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe certain scenarious between teachers and students are most-likely to remain unchanged for possibly the next three-decades. As an example, childrens will still be asked for regular home-work, assignment submission and regular examination. Failing to which, they could face same consequences. Furthermore, the most obvious problem of childrens being unattentive in classes and facing punishment would stay unchanged, even if the lectures are delivered virtually. Although there might be changes in the way childrens are punished so as to motivate them to study, but that shall not hinder the regular arguments between them.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, with the advancement of technology and changing behaviour of education delivery by 2050, In my opinion, certain, traditional scenarios between teachers and pupil, such as arguments, and punishments shall stay unchanged.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would favor changing the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The president is more important than the electors. Who knows if the electors are being paid to choose a president? The people vote for what they want and need. The people should get what they want, not what the electors want. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nTo begin with, the electoral college is not fair! For example, you can have 500 people voting for you, but then your opponent has 55 electors voting for him. Then most likely your opponent would win you but why should he win you if you had more people voting for you? That is really unfair. Also its like a winner-take-all system.\n\nTherefore, the electoral college is out of date. We are in the 2000's, not the 1960's gentlemen. This system is very old style, it was even used back in the 1960's when segregationists almost replaced the Democratic electors. This electoral college is a disaster factor. All it does is makes things harder and worse for the state.\n\nAll of these reasons is why we should get rid of the elecotral college and change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The electoral vote is just not fair to anyone. It is so old styled which should be changed. Its a really bad system thats hould be removed. The electoral college should be changed to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast explains developing idea landing dirigible Empire State Building eventually rejected due many obstacles The first design flaw engineers stress dirigible would add building s frame A mass size attached building single cable tether would building s foundation The greatest obstacle engineers allowing dirigibles dock safety With use hydrogen dirigibles highly flammable This would created dangerous situation ove densely populated area downtown New York The final obstacle builders wind The winds height extremely strong Chapter says Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This would create dangerous situation ship s passengers In The Mooring Mast described would nearly impossible land dirigibles atop Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Regarding we are in the centure of development and modernization, everything ride on technology. Therefore, nowadays there are different thoughts about children's watching TV. Despite it has some harmful sides, I mostly agree with that televison is educational for children.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, watching television regularly causing them to spend most of their time staring at one point in front of the television. Due to they are sitting at one place all day, they may become lazy as that kind of children prefer watching televison or playing online games rather than playing outside with their friends. This can affect their communicativity which may apart them from their peers.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, television offers a plethora of educational programs that stimulate children's curiosity and enhance their learning experience. Channels dedicated to science, history, and nature provide engaging content, fostering a love for knowledge. Additionally, televison introduces children to diverse cultures, promoting a global perspective. Through documentaries, travel shows, and international programming, children gain insight into the rich tapestry of the world. Well-crafted children's programs encourage creativity and imaginative thinking. Animated shows and series with positive themes contribute to the development of a child's storytelling abilities and problem-solving skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, television for children is a double-edged sword, offering educational enrichment while posing potential risks. By conscientiously managing screen time and content, parents can harness the positive aspects of television, ensuring a healthy and constructive viewing experience for their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Flooding is a serious problem that affetcs people all arround the world, it can destroy entire communities and end people lives. Natural catastrofes like flooding, huracanes and many others don´t occure every day, anticipation is key. The diagrams show how houses can be protected in areas wich are prone to flooding.\nThe diagrams show on the one hand where there is a stopbank and on the other hand where there is no stopbank. To raise buildings ais very important in this matter. Ground level and flood level must be taken in account.\nThe starting point is the ground level that must be mesure against the 100-year flood level. The boulding must be raised from the ground level so that the house florr level is 300 mm above the 100-year flood level. The river/dam and the internal runoff are the extreme factores.\nBoth diagrams show how to prevent bouldings from flooding with the main difference of of the stopbank.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some adopt a view that exploring the facts of the accommodation is getting more concern among the public in several nations. I will discuss the possible reason for having this going on and some ways humans could apply to search in my perspective. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, rehabilitation would be the reason for this. It can not be denied that discovering the ins and outs of old-time details would enable the owners to get an insight into the configuration and architectural design. Therefore, this would help them organize and rearrange the furniture as well as the room arrangement so that their apartment could be more structural and functional than before or compatible with their taste and style. Without the previous knowledge of the building, it would be impossible for them to renovate and refurbish later on due to possibly infrastructural infractions. \r\n\r\nIn terms of some plausible ways, people could apply to satisfy their demand. Firstly, it can be irrefutable that advanced technology could bring humans to the information available world in no time. Indeed, individuals could figure out the dwelling by a click through the internet on the computer or smartphone. This is due to the fact that the sellers must have updated all that the buyers need on webs or advertisements such as price, number of rooms, facility, timeline, direction and even some images of the residence. Thanks to this, the public could envision the place they would like to own. Secondly, paying a visit to the location would be indispensable. Having said that a practical survey would make individuals ensure their premier insights, thereby benefiting them from making the ultimate decision of purchasing the shack. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that having the previous detail of the shelter through the internet and fact visits is absolutely pivotal for citizens in terms of renovation and arrangement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are a great idea. If you are a business man and you're busy and you need to get things ready on your way to work driverless cars could help you out, but you still need to pay attention to the road because the driverless cars need to be controlled under certain circumstances.\n\nAlthough their name is a driverless vehicle a driver still needs to operate it when needed such as when there is consruction or if there is a wreck in the middle of the road so the driver needs to pay attention even if he doesn't need to drive. The car will notify the driver if the road ahead requires human skills by either telling the driver or flashing lights on the dashboard.\n\nMost driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passangers, and pedestians safe. Some states think the smart car may abstruct those laws such as California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia. These states won't even allow computerdriven cars be tested. I think the idea of a driverless car is great but as you can see some other people don't.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One person I know patient one time I associating That one person waiting call email promised happen The call email basketball team dominant state The person calling emailing person I coach team He saw person I brother play tournament downstate The coach recruit players team He watched one brother s game approached game They talked team told would great asset team My brother said would love play gave coach phone number email address The coach said would contact days maximum On drive home brother kept checking email took us days get home The day coach never called emailed The second day still nothing My brother patient come never stressed coming The third day trip back home brother understanding mother told might happen So get home oclock I starting doubt brother brother made team Then phone rings My brother talked hung said made team That one time brother patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System doesn't seem to bad until there comes a day where you want no one knowing how you're feeling. In the article, the author explains what this technology can do. So far, the article does a job identifying your emotional expressions, \"according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions\" (D'Alto 1). I am against the value of using this technology to read students thoughts or feelings. There are days when you want your own thougths and feelings kept to yourself, privacy, and as well as being able to learn something new everyday.\n\nThere come days when you don't want peope knowing how you're feeling and for some odd technology to just assume your feelings is just not adding up to me. The article shows a picture of the young Mona Lisa sort of smiling. Yes, she doesnt seem to happy, but is she? Only she knows. I dont agree with the computer system judging her feelings. \"Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearfull, and 2 percent angry\" (D'Alto 1). To me, she looks like she's being forced to smile but like I said, only she knew her feelings while the picture was being taken. I don't believe that should be a thing, no one should be told how they are feeling. If we as humans dont really have a reason to judge, why should technology be able to.\n\nAlong with that, the article talks about \"a classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto 1). Recognizing it could allow teachers to change their lessons, due to students being bored. How come? Daily there are students who complain about how boring a class is. No one forces them to come. Students come to school to learn, we don't expect to have fun. If a technology were to let teachers know when students were bored they'd be changing subjects seconds, by seconds. Students in that case, would be happy to act bored just for the sake of it. Less learning would accure if it were for the technology to detect kids who don't care about school who are constantly \"bored\". No one said school is fun, but neither should a technology detecting students feelings should get in the way of learning.\n\nIn the meantime, we have trouble understanding people. To allow a technology to have the power to easily understand thoughts, feelings of us humans is just critical. Allowing a technology to determine your friend's feelings is overrated according to my calculations. \"Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisly enough to convey specific emotions\" (D'Alto 1). I don't believe something so ordinary could barge in and make us feel disturbed knowing not someone but something knows the way we're feeling.\n\nTherfore, I am against this value of using this type of technology to read students emotional expressions. I believe there are different types of people in this world. There are days where you don't want to share your feelings to people, so why technology. If we are willing to share our thoughts, we will. Not have something so unusal do that job for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Other than that, I conducted a project regarding survey on the public’s satisfaction about quality and security of agricultural products in Suzhou, and additionally, participated in the sampling and testing of Hairy Crabs Recirculating Aquaculture Systems. My investigation and laboratory as well as leadership and collaboration skills were advanced during the process. Besides that, in the satisfaction survey, I realized that even in the same group, people’s satisfaction about a product or a certain kind of product can be diversified, and also I deeply felt the difficulty of summarizing the views of a group due to the diversity. In this case, I started to ponder how to investigate people’s viewpoints by multiple indexes and then make a good integration to improve promotional strategies and produce optimal policies. Beyond that, managing the new media platform including push of tweets and maintenance of user operation in the Publicity Department of Sunshine Drama Association elevated my competences in oral and written communication. Through this experience, I came to understand that effective promotion depends on a precise grasp of the audience’s needs, scientific management and productive decision making. All of these motivate my exploration about advanced tools of strategy and decision making.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "VENUS\n\nvenus is actually a planet, venus sometims called the \"evening star\" in our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun. while venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\n1- the umas stuydin the planet venus for more than the 3 decades numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging plante for humans to study, despite its proximity to us but the planet venus is a small and dangerous planet in the system solar because venus has a atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. these conditions imposivilite the life in this planet and are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present adittional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\n2- also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even thought mercury is closer to oue sun. if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? at thirthy-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be cole to that of sea level on earth.\n\n3- the scientist has the idea in the future visit the venus and come humans and stay living in the planet venus but how?\n\nastronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have benn the most earth-like planet in our solar system. long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth the value of returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive? NASA has one particularly comeplling idea for sending humas to study venus. NASA's posiible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray...\n\nthe humas can stay in venus? the solar power would be plentiful \\, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. not easy conditions, but survivable for humas\n\nstriving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight t be gained on the planet itself, but also because hman curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on earth and beyound should not be limit by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people consider that leaders are genetically skilled. On the contrary, others claim that leadership can be learnt. In my opinion, to be a leader requires some specific traits of personality, while some skills can develop. \r\nTo begin with, to be a leader demands some natural skills. The person in charge should have a strong personality in order to take the lead. Furthermore, he/she should be an outgoing person, gregarious, and full of energy. All these personality traits help the leader to manage, to gather people together and, also, to inspire and motivate them. For example, Denis Matsuev, a famous Russian pianist, is a natural born leader who organizes big events like international piano competitions or big concerts. He, with his charisma and high professional abilities, manages a lot of people. So, being charismatic, sociable and having a strong personality are important natural skills for being a leader. \r\nOn the other hand, some people consider that leadership can be developed. Nowadays, there are a lot of trainings which can help people who want to become leaders, like public speaking, NLP and so on. In these programs, future managers are learning through various techniques to overwhelm their lack of confidence or others fears related to managing and communication. For instance, Dacian Ciolos, an ex-prime- minister of Romania, had been a technocrat before he was prime-minister. He was not a natural born leader; he did not like to show on TV or in public, too often, like politicians generally do. However, since he involved in politics, he has improved his leadership skills quite significantly. As a result, today he is considered more popular that his ally, Dan Barna. So, it is proved that some leadership skills can be learnt. \r\nIn conclusion, some people are born as leaders while others become rulers by their choice and by learning it. In my opinion, leadership can be achieved by practice to a certain point, when the natural skills will take the lead.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In oour solar system,Venuse is the distant but safe vantage pooint of Earth,it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.Earth's in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.alsoNumerous factors cotribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for\n\nhumans to study.The value of returning to venuse seeems indisputable ,NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditile on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float ,and also thiry plus miles aboce the surface,temperatures still be toasty at around 170 degrees,\n\njust imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. Our tracels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers. also therefore\n\nscientists seeking to conduct a thoroughmission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.Ormaby should think of hem as challenges.\n\nOn the planet's surface temperatures aveerage over 700 degres fahrenheit,and the atomospheric pressure is 90 time greater that what we experience on our own planet. and also notable has hottest surface temperature on any planet in our solar system and The venuse can somethimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit,a crucial consideration given the long time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers positive effect people With computer could many things They provide plenty information communication even entertainment The reason find unhealthy negative people abuse computertime Ever used popular website wwgooglecom Sites like many great need information Your practically type word automatically hundreds thousands links containing information word choose How could much knowledge named unhealthy negative effect people Computers dictionaries references translators encyclopedias even history pages hold massive informatiion So go ahead expand knowledge If log onto one famous wellused social networking websites find new way communicate friends family Equipped tools various settings keep safe find longlost friends outoftouch family members instantly catch Again many people abuse websites putting harmful words inappropriate things problem easily solved report website manager adult You know safe online computer negative object If know use right ll enjoy messages family instant messages friends There wide variety entertainment computer From videosharing websites like wwwyoutubecom gaming websites like wwwonemorelevelcom These sites provide games many videos even learning aids There sites purchase music ang movies even clothes furniature Many stores online websites wher purchase items shipped front door How could possibly regroup Also video games specially created computer buy installed isntant entetainment I mean nt like play games shop without go trouble finding time go I know aunts So see computers nt negative unless abuse computertime waste countless hours reason You need limit Without s plain weird spending day computer So fun Learn communicate entertain youself", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As class begins, it becomes hopeful that the teacher will give an actual interesting lesson. That all goes to waste, when the lesson becomes boring. In the end, no knowledge is gained from it. The question then comes into place, by the look of the students' faces, does a teacher notice when their students are bored and confused? A new technology has been developed called the Facial Action Coding System. This software can discipher peoples' true emotion according to the look on their face. This process is done by analyzing \"all 44 major muscles\" that can determine emotion. The Facial Action Coding System should be installed in all classrooms because students will gain a better understanding of any lesson and teachers will be able to improve their way of teaching.\n\nFacial Action Coding System can be very useful in the classroom. According to the article, \"a classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becoming confused or bored...it could modify the lesson.\" When it comes down to a student's education, modifying a lesson is a way for the student to able to understand it better. As if they were confused or bored, they would not be getting any knowledge from it. A software that detects confusion or boredom from a student is key to letting a student have a better understanding of any lesson when modified. Therefore, it would also improve grades and comprehension.\n\nNot only will students benefit from Facial Action Coding System, but as well for the instructor, or teacher. Sometimes, a teacher could get carried away with a lesson. Meaning, that the teacher won't notice the faces of their students letting them know if each of them are understanding. According to the article,\"by weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.\" A student doesn't have to be just confused or bored, but it's impossible they might have mixed feelings about a specific lesson. Once a teacher has recieved this information, it becomes more clear to which student understands and which does not. This will provide insight on which student needs more help to get a better understanding. Also not only will it tell how students are feeling during a lesson, but the teacher could reflect on their teaching skills. Students who show boredom, teachers could figure out how to make the lesson more interactive. Due to this, it will improve their methods of teaching too.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System should be used in classrooms all over the globe because it could benefit both the students and teachers. This software could modify lessons when it detects confusion or boredom in a student. Therefore, the student would get a better comprehension and possibly better grades. As for the teacher, the students' emotions could reflect back on how they are teaching a lesson. As a result, their teaching skills could become improved and create a more interactive and involved classroom. The Facial Action Coding System is a software that could change and affect all education positively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today there are many reasons why we should and should not have car. One of the main reasons is air polution so many people are bying cars and all these cars are creating all this polution. The United States Enviromental protection agency is promotting cars to be reduced. After near record polution, Paris baned driving to clear some of the air. I do believe cars cause a huge disavantage to our clean air but i do not agree with banning people from driving gassed cars, But It would be better for the environment if people would start buying electric cars (hybrid) because some dont run off of gas and some use very little gas. Using these electric cars will benifit everyone because it cost less instead of buying gas and it leaves cleaner air in our environment. Even if lets say forty percent of United States citizens used electric cars that would still leave a huge roll in having cleaner air for us to breath, But if we all do switch to electric cars then cities need to provide cargers for cars like this so that if we are out for a while and our cars battery dies we can charge the car, I think people dont use these cars as much because they think well what happenes if my cars battery dies then there screwed. So i believe if they came out with chargers and bigger cars for families then more people would want to participate in joining an electric car, Because this wont just be saving them money this is also saving some of the air that we breath.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because, You get to see and visit many cool or weird places that many people may never get to see in their life. You have a lot of free time after you clean the stalls, feed, water and groom the animals. With a lot of free time on your hands you have a lot of time to play games such as, Volleyball, Baseball and other games. A cool thing I have learned about being a Seagoing Cowboy is like me, If you turn 18 while on The Seagoing Cowboy progam, and you're able to be drafted, if you do manage to get picked, being on the Seagoing Cowboys Program counts as Military service.\n\nWhen you join the Seagoing Cowboys you help people in need. You help people in need of food, and suplies to survive. Being a Seagoing Cowboy opens the world up to you and makes you relise that there all many people all over the world that need help. The UNRRA signed people who didn't have very good jobs or good pay and made them Seagoing Cowboys to help others trying to recover from wars and other disators.\n\nWhile being a Seagoing Cowboy I had to check on the animals every hour to three hours. Cleaning stalls and feeding all the animals takes up a long period of time. You had to get down loads of bales of hay and oats which ment you had ot be strong. You also need to be careful around the ship and being on the ship, you could get hurt by one of the animals or something could happen to you like what happend to me, I fell down a slippery ladder and got caught by a metal peice hanging on the boat, I did crack a few ribs but I didn't fall into the ocean.\n\nIt takes long periods of time to go from country to country or from state to state, or even to the other side of the world to help someone in need, so you need a lot of paitcene for those long periods of time being a Seagoing Cowboy. Caring for the animals while going to diffrenet places kept me very busy, whilst still having planty of free time while abord the SS Charles W. Wooster. It takes bravory and gut to be a Seagoing Cowboy, being on the ocean for very long periods of time, not being able to see your family, not having the greatest of food and resorces, all to help other countrys, or states in need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I honestly dont think driverless cars are a good idea. Yes, there are benifits to driverless cars but I personally think there are more disadvantages than advantages. I my self personally like the fact that the driver does not have to drive the car all the time. I think it would be a good idea for handicapped people.\n\nI do not think it is a good idea for many reasons. It states in the article that the cars are eqqipted with a gps, but what if there is a current construction or hazard in the route it takes you? How will the car beable to pass another car on a two lane highway? How about drunk drivers? If a drunk wants to get in a car and drive, that car would allow it, but whenever it is time for the driver to take over, 99.9% of the time that will not happen.\n\nI think there will always be manuel driven cars and trucks around. If someine needs to tow something a driverless car would not be able to tow anything. Farmers, personal buissness' and many other people would have a big issue with this.\n\nAlthough the world is nearly going to all electronics, mechanics will have to go back to school to learn about these new cars. Most manuel driven cars never have peoblems on the road, because everything is mechanical. Switching everything over to an electronic sensor will mess everyone up. If a laser goes out for surroundings around the car, the driver cannot do anything to help it.\n\nDriverless cars is a bad idea. Drunk drivers will be a huge hazard. Along with many other road hazards. I think it is a good idea for handicapped people, and disabled people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship All us think book hope none children chldren taken shef But I right remove book shelf that work I abhor then also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us quoted author named Katherine Paterson I nt believe certain materials books removed shelves circumstances Everyone entitled opinion certain materials If books removed shelves due censorship point writing even reading books If people continue remove books re found offensive wo nt books left read I seen many offensive books Whether something religious beliefs even revealing much sexual content I m sure s offensive someone somewhere Books written authors believe right express writing If take away ban certain book shelf would author wrote book think world full offensive rather disturbing books It ca nt right get rid things bother us Everyone right read book want Just offends one person nt mean offends everyone I believe censorship unnessesary What gives anyone right remove change something s inappropriate I personally read books I would nt want little kids read nt mean I remove shelves Perhaps somebody else waiting find book If I remove I m restricting others experiencing joys reading book Censorship general wrong Everyone entitled beliefs different ways expressing I nt believe anyone right take something someone worked long make remove find offensive There always something wo nt approve Just nt approve nt mean everybody nt approve Authors write books reason musicians write music reason people make movies magazines reason What gives anyone right take something somebody made ban rest world s offensive Books help us become educated open minded towards different thoughts ideas We nt ban offend certain people If nt like book offends nt read It s simple If people continue remove books re offensive wo nt books left read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the developing new technological world pollution are most affected factor to preventing a climate change. Also, damage of environment to prevent modulation in climate. Generally mankind are thinking to change those life with the environment is to safe for it’s. If asked to support, I would choose partially agree with this sentence also my opinion is elaborated further.\nModern cities the weather are very bad condition at that time, because of the human are main factor of the change environment. Moreover, green house effect is very harmful to our environment and that is polluted by people. For instance, a farmer is growing the vegetables on his farm but they would grow up the non- seasonal vegetable using the green house. So, that the important to damage the over environmental cycle. In contras, people has to knowledge of the how they can stop this effect and also get a less pollution.\nAnother side, some has think of the batter option is human are manage to live in all type of the environmental condition. Furthermore, in some case, climate is very unknowing situation that might we can manage it, that time the we can settle with climate situation. For example, in ruler areas people will know about the all kind of safety and protection of the those development; consequently the government will provide a this type of knowledge of it’s population. Thus, the society have defense to the any type of the weather condition.\nTo conclude, general public can cover both of the situation handle in any of the climate change. In my opinion they have to focus on the less damage of environment and also the learn about how to survive in the difficult weather condition.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For a long time, people have been rather facinated with cars that can drive themselves, showing them off in cartoons and in movies. But, is this one technology that should remain fiction? I belive the answer is a simeple \"yes.\"\n\nWell the idea is facinating, and in theory great, many diffrent problums arise, as they are bound to whenver a new technology, easspecilaly one for the public, is made. One of these is the fact that, since it is new, there are not many laws, if any, in most states for them. Such as, what if there is an accident? What if you drive one of these cars while under the infulance, or while texting? Can you be in the drivers seat without a licance as you aren't technicly the one driving? All these, and many more issues could arise from a legal standpoint.\n\nAnother issue may be that a driver will not always remain alert while the car is drving itself, so if the car alerts them that they need to take over,\n\nthe driver may not always notice. The driver may fall asleep in the driver's seat during a late night road trip, thinking that since the car is driving itself, they have no need to stay awake. So, if the technology fails, which it can as it's not perfect, the driver will not be able to take over in time, or even at all and that could lead to a disaster.\n\nThese cars aren't a good idea simply because they aren't safe. Too many things could go wrong with them, and their simply aren't enough laws set in place to ensure the safty, and their most likely won't be many in place until it's too late and things have already gone wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed Posted Speed limit cyclist takes journey terrain get Yosemite In part California lot towns people The rode rideing dangerous long It dry hot", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to some people, today’s music can create bad infuclence on youngster and on the other side, it could bring the positivity amoung them. This essay will explain the both sides. \r\n\r\nMusic is a power a one can have to express their feeling and it can infulence people’s mind. If the words are positive it will bring good energy between people. As example, when people listen to religious music, it help them to keep their mind clam and stable. According to survey happened in a local newspaper, people usually listen to good music in a morning to have a good day as well for good mood for the whole day. Some people even analysize that music help them to focus more into their work. Therefore, mostly in the malls and stores people play good music to keep everyone’s mood good and for positivity as well. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, music has some bad impact on people as kids these days learn all the foul words from music which is not good for their upbrining. Young people follow their favourite artist bad habits as well such as somking and driniking in music vidoes. Music also become a resaon to have fight amoung people. For example, a music lauched by a indian singer last year on the religious matter became the ground of fight amoung different religious people.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, music is a power to infulence all the people in the world therefore usage of right words and music can a create big difference in the socitey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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