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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the development of these cars is a good idea and I say this because in the story it says \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" and there is more to come with this car .A reason why I think this is a good idea is because Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009 and they also said in the story that their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.These cars are very safe but they aren't completely driverless because the car alerts when the driver needs to take over like when you are pulling in and out of driveways or having something to do with complicated traffic issues.These driveless cars can steer,accelerate,and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills navigating through work zones and around accidents.The GM has developed driver's seats to vibrate whn the vehicle is in danger of backing into a object but the Google car simply announces when the diver should be prepared to take over.The reasons they are making these cars are to keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.The Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption and the problems they have now will be solved.I believe that the road for these driverless cars stretches on ahead of them because u have to work hard for what you want and that exactly what they are doing. I believe these driveless cars are going to be come a very big deal and everyone will be willing to buy one.So if you ask me\n\nif the development of these cars are an good idea I would say it's an good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The techology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotion is making Mona Lisa Smile.\n\nMaking Mona Lisa Smile is made for computer imagery, when making of Mona Lisa Smile, The students are finding the \"computer construcs a 3-D computer model of the face.\" the model of the computer move like the human muscles. Also the computer are smart as the human as, and computer tells the true. when the student's finding how is becoming to found the computer 3-D. they sloved the model and the founded. And useful in the world.. when you use 3-D model is look real life you seeing. Is beautiful to look at the imagine on the comuputer or video imagery.\n\nBody of 2, Because the computer useful and how can the computer must do it well. The computer knows your feel happy or feel sad. for example, when the proson did bad things, the police offcial used the computer and they will find you on the computer imagine. And the computer can being to ceek your bones; also the computer are so smart. it will knews everthing; for example, when people's visit the other counrtys, at the ariport when before you going throught, it might have like gate. the gate are put in computer, when you go throught that gate the computer cheek your bodys and inside of your bones; and it'll cheek your bags.\n\nbody of 3,for example, When you have eyes problem,the first they took the picture, on computer, your imagine will shows up your eyes problem; and the doctor will cheek your eyes with computer. The computer's would know how your eyes will gonna work and how much far you sees; or you need glass, it'll shows on the imagine computer.\n\nwhen you eyes cheeks would lay dawn your chin and you look at the green light and everythings the computer know about your eyes. for example, When people went to takephotos store, with their family to take family picture. After they took family picture; the carmerman ask about Adding the photos. And their family choces background, a beautiful picture, and the camerman add imagine on the computer. For the other example, when the US soldier's to fight war with Isis, before US Army's will fight their bad guys US Army's used small ariplan it have carmer, the Army's look at the place on the computer. After they look at on the computer, the Army's knews how many Isis people are there. And US captian let's go his soldier. to fight bad guys..\n\nincodue, The emotional computer class are work well. And helpful, useful and the computer will protect the country's or population. the computer are useful in everything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this fast-moving age, with the development of education and modern technologies, people strive to have a secure job after graduating from colleges and universities. Despite their efforts, so many young adults in different parts of the world have a negative experience of finding a long-term job.It so happens that most colleges and universities focus on students’ academic performance much more than their practical skills. Unfortunately, many companies reserve permanent job opportunities for experienced applicants because there is no need to invest much in their training. Lack of practical experience in new graduates puts them at a disadvantage as far as companies are concerned. The situation is made worse by the abundance of advanced technologies that can easily replace human labor. Robots and computers work more efficiently and with higher precision than humans. That shrinks the pool of available job placements even more, as companies only need to hire highly educated and experienced staff.Fortunately, there is a number of solutions that can help inexperienced workers gain permanent employment. An obvious one is that universities could offer internships to their students, or arrange workshops in addition to classwork. This would help students to get training and experience in their respective fields. Also, the government could examine the demands of changing labor market and steer young people towards professions that will be popular in the coming years. Together with colleges and universities the government could create special awareness programs for graduates, providing them with an overview of various job offers and their benefits. This way students would be able to choose the right jobs for themselves.To sum up, lack of demand in the labour market and insufficient experience are two major reasons why many young people have trouble finding a permanent position. Helping them gain hands-on experience as part of their studies and educating them about career options early on is key to improving the employment outcome for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The hibcus author reveat audience beautiful flower story memories young girl fail test knowing depress failing test The flower helps symbol encourage sad girl tragrant event shows little flower gives comfort girlThe girl Saeng vowed demonstrate overcomes sad memories Shell able capable prove pass feels ok situation experiment destroy life come different country mast capacity its logical adaptation girl going right away In othe words author message its motivate people problems lifes life its give Instead keep working hard get In conclusion working Hard give its part life its selves overcome failing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The fact is that, all over the world, the fast growth of numerous cities has resulted in abundant serious troubles, especially for young citizens. In this essay, I will examine some problems regarding such issues and address several possible methods for them.\r\n\r\nUnemployment among youngsters and inadequate budgets for daily expenditures are two major consequences of quick urbanization. Firstly, mass exodus coming to big cities causes a lack of jobs, mainly for newly graduated dwellers. They need to struggle to gain decent jobs as senior workers definitely have advantages. For instance, plenty of companies, obviously, will choose applicants with more work experience than the ones without it. Secondly, the fact that excessive immigrants rushing to urban areas is the fundamental driver for the increase in renting, food and transport prices. Among all of those living in these places, younger ones suffer more substantially. For instance, imagine a young citizen was hired, he was still considered to be vulnerable to this trend as the fact that a new employer more often than not receives lower pay. That's why a dramatic change in the city population brings about many troubles.\r\n\r\nThe most effective solutions to this urgent matter are to invest more in suburban areas to prevent workers from running to big cities and to limit the number of immigrants. Initially, the authority had better allocate funds to rural and mountainous areas so as to create more jobs and improve infrastructure. It is effective to hold local people back in their original realms. Clearly, it is not necessary to travel far from home while it's easy to earn a living in a place nearby. Additionally, the regulation on limiting immigrants to urban cities should be put forward. For example, if people find it difficult to enter such places, they might give up the idea. Therefore, it is advisable the authority should take immediate action.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the rapid growth of big cities has always been a hot potato which brings about severe obstacles; therefore, more jobs in the countryside should be created and city goers should be limited.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Katherine Paterson said If I right remove book shelf also exactly right everyone else In quote I think trying get across someone picks book magazine reads puts back maybe best book ever find offensive someone else comes along wants read find offensive two different view points book offensive one person another Different view points really effect censor books people different difference feel book could effect happen book I dont believe books movies music magazines materials removed shelves found offensive someone If found offensive bunch different people yes removed bothering one two people people agree offensive dont get rid couple people Take vote maybe see many people agree dissagree keeping getting rid decide whether keep get rid vote I think would fair satisfactory take vote whether fair keep remove If someone memory something read remember experience someone else reads feels offened something fair person get rid Its especially fair person memories experiences So dont remove books couple people might find offensive take vote decide Let people deciede behalf book More people make impact one book never know differnt views find different people one book People need able discuss veiws book bedate whether keep dont choose get rid without several view points book", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus paragraph sums everything hibiscus given Saeng strength courage Just like hibiscus Saeng felt place new country hibiscus helps realize importance adapting survival order live happily She cant alway dwelling past learn like lives Therefore author writes In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test direct symbol Saeng budding opening mind ways like learning drive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper More people using computers days Some people think computers improvements society Others concerned people spent much time computers enough time exercising spending time friends family I believe computers bad thing I think people spend much time s one leading causes obesity interfers people social lifes According recent studys people spend time computers Many ot people spend time online games socializing websites facebook myspace Others spend shopping learning Some online games include world warcraft rune scope many games Many people spend time computer became obese According spending alot time computer one main reasons obesity Many experts agree computers learning cause obesity people using computers often The obesity rate increased Most people spend alot time computer nt interact friend family much This lead ruined relationships loss friends chance losing love family Many experts say person become depressed interacting friends family He also says people became depressed start thinking suicide Spending much time computer bad thing would want spend much time computer even ater hearing cons I believe spending much time computer bad everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is one of the fastest industrys growing rapidly in our generation. There are well over 100 ads on television that ties to better technology. These ads are to prompt customers into buying the latest devices such as the latest computer, mac pad, the IPHONE X, the smart phone that is as thin as a piece of paper, and the widest, flattest television screen. There is something that all of these devices do not have. Now a new system called the Facial Action Coding System is reaching the surface. This system allows computers to dictate how a person is feeling by just their facial expressions such as muscle placemnts in their face, the rise and fall of cheeks and under eyelids. So is this new system valuable, and can it be beneficial to our community?\n\nThis system is beneficial to our school communities. According to the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto its says \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Hauang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructure.\" If computers were able to see how many kids were and were not ingaged in the activity that takes place on computers, then it would help the schools and the state to know what new things to try to keep kids ingaged so they can get the best possible education offered to them. This system is great for Istep test taking as well. Sometimes kids may fall asleep during testing or they may start too dose off and not be as consentrated as they should, and that could have a negative affect on their test. If the computer could read their emotions it would help us to know what the problem is and the reason why kids are losing focus and once we have confronted the problem we can then began the process of finding an affective solution.\n\nThis computer would be very beneficial in offices and in police stations. They could be used to help with criminal justice. A suspect can be told to tell their side of the story infront of a computer screen and the computer would be able to dictate that persons true emotions. This could make the officer, and investigaters job alot easier. They could be used in hospitals to keep an eye on how a paitent is feeling maybe after a recovery or when they are lying on their death bed. In the article it says \" They even can indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" So there is no faking of emotions out of a crime. Its also says \" In a false smile, the mouth is stretched sidways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" There is no faking with that computer.\n\nThis new system has the ability to make our jobs alot easier. Nowadays people dont usually communicate face to face anymore. That means people dont usually express theirselves in person as much as they once did in earlier days when technology wasnt around. So this can be a way to still be able to know how someone is feeling, esspecially if they are less likely to tell how they are feeling when your right infront of them. This can be very effective with younger kids who may not know how to epress how they may be feeling in the right way, shape, or form. This new system gives us a new way to still connect with our community. This new system is a pathway to a brighter future. This new system is valuable to our community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some actions of mankind have detrimental effects on flora and fauna. It is believed that there is no time for the public to redress their mistakes while the community think that this circumstance can be effectively improved by various solutions. From my perspective, I have a strong belief that several measures can be taken to solve this dilemma.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some people have the right reasons to claim that it is an unsolvable problem and that nothing can be done to deal with it. Deforestation or climate change caused by human activities is so destructive that it is placing many species' lives at risk. As a consequence, many species of plants and animals are dying due to loss of habitat and human hunt. Some of them have already become extinct, thus negatively affecting the balance of the ecosystem. For example, in Vietnam where there used to be a large number of tigers, this animal has been hunted for years to satisfy human needs and there are only a few species left. \r\n\r\nHowever, I strongly argue that there are a lot of things that governments and individuals can do to deal with this issue. Firstly, the issue of deforestation needs to be addressed. It is the main cause of the disappearance of endangered species around the world. Governments can plant more trees to create places for animals and plants to live and develop their population. Moreover, strict rules should be published to deter people from cutting down trees and hunting for precious animals and plants. Another solution is to raise awareness among residents about the destructive effects of our activities on the Earth and the ecosystem. Public talks and lectures about the possible consequences of mankind need to be held in order to make the public aware of their activities. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although society thinks that there is nothing to solve this obstacle, I personally believe that there are many effective solutions to solve it. The protection of forests and the awareness of the public are really important in dealing with this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The senator should keep the Electoral Collage because it keeps balance, order, and also actrecy.\n\nIt keeps balance because if the public were to vote on who is the new president of the Untied States some people might fight and argure over who's the new president, why he should be their, and a lot of other reasons. The population might think he will be a great guy and a good president, and that everything will turn out ok. Then when they are elected it turns out he might not be such a great president after all, he's probably going to make all the wrong decides and choices for this nation after a becomes president.\n\nIn the Electoral Collage they look at how many votes both of the candidates get, they also look at what the candidates have in mind for our country and all of the other plans they have enstore for it. Of course the public will have to vote on which candidate they want for this nation to serve as our president. After looking at the candidates background, what their going to do, then they will make a discision who becomes president of the Untied States.\n\nThe Electoral Collage is a good thing to have around because without it the whole voting process will be out of order. Thanks to the Electoral Collage things will stay in order and in place. And in the end we can find and get the best president for this nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advent of versatile machinery significantly influenced the life of both the affluent and less privileged. Group of individuals has blamed advanced tech to be the crucial factor in subdividing classes of people, whilst the others, conversely, claim that improved technique has brought people together. In the following essay I will discuss both views.\r\n\r\n To begin with, machinery is a powerful issue which has covered the whole world. As shown, automation is required for carrying out the majority of not only daily routine, but also chores. Furthermore, currently, all services are linked to computers and the Internet. What is more, desktops or other gadgets don’t discriminate between their users and don’t classify folks by social strata. If people can’t afford Internet access, there are Wifi-hotspots which are available at railway stations, bus stops and recreation areas are available at free of cost to all people, in the society.\r\n\r\n On the other side, although there are affordable techniques for every community, these inventions might not be fully accessible to certain members of the populace due to the expenses needed to procure them. Additionally, some treatments for chronic diseases such as cancer, which is extensively lethal for human, include high cost of drugs, which can be afforded only for the wealthy. Besides, there are a few appliances and machines like last updates of different brands of Microsoft or car companies which the less privileged can only dream about them. Therefore, this is the basic reason to increase the break between both types of people.\r\n\r\n To sum up, according to my viewpoint, the automation has broken the bridge between high- and low- class people to a great extent that presently all the people are enjoying all the amenities that they require.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, but fails to provide enough support to make that statement believable. The author stresses in parts of the article that Venus is valuable and needs to be explored but then counters that with lenghty paragraphs explaining the hazards that come with this. The ratio that Venus is valuable but exploration is dangerous is not one to one. This makes it harder to believe that Venus is actually worthy of exploration. The author mentions that Venus is valuable, but then counters by explaining the dangers that come with this exploration, and finally includes the steps that are being taken to get there which never sheds light on the importance of exploring Venus.\n\nFirst and foremost, the author does indeed suggest that Venus is important and that it is worth exploring. However, the times that the reader can actually see this written in the article is very few, specifically three times. The first time this happens is in paragraph four and it says,\"Recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, a crucial consideration\". The next time it is mentioned is a little bit after that and it says, \"The value of returning to Venus is indisputable\".\n\nThe last time is at the end of the article. The quote says,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself\". All three quotes are supporting the idea that Venus is valuable to exploration, but they are never given any evidnece to back them up making it hard to believe what they adovcate.\n\nNow, besides the fact that there is little to no support for the previous quotes the author goes on to explain the numerous dangers that come with simply trying to explore Venus. The author spends the majority of paragraph three explaing the hazards that Venus presents. The text says,\" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Later on in paragraph three the text says,\"Such and environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to divnig to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liqueft many metals\". These two quotes raise red flags in many readers minds, causing them to wonder why scientists are even considering exploring such a deadly planet. The author also failed to inlcude a counter to the dangerous conditions on the planet and didn't explain why it is still valuable.\n\nFinally, the author tries to make the dangerous and possibly deadly pros list seem okay and feasible. The author goes along to explain the steps NASA and othe scientists are taking to possibly make a trip to Venus. According to the text, \"One particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\". This quote creates a sense of hope for the exploration argument but does nothing to explain to the reader the value in exploring Venus. The text also states,\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, simplified electronics made of silicon have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\". This quote, yet again, explains how there are possible and theoretical steps and options that can be taken to make exploring Venus safe,\n\nbut in the end sheds no light on any benefits, advances, or values that come from being able to explore Venus. The majority of paragraphs five, six, and seven explain more steps and ideas that could be used but, in the end, provide no support for the argument that exploring Venus is worthwhile despite the dangers it presents.\n\nMany people can conclude that space exploration is a positive, beneficial process. However, after reading this article it seems that exploring Venus is not the best idea. The author tires to support the idea that exploring Venus is worthwhile but only mentions it a few times. Then within the middle and end of the article the author stacks multiple counters to his or her argument.The author goes on to explain the hazardous conditons of Venus and steps to get to the planet but never explains the importance of even trying to explore Venus. In the end, the author did not successfully support their argument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclit Do exceed posted speed limit greatly affected setting bike ride caused pain displeasure He travels high deserts California June exaggerates water NUM degers The great heat caused drink lots water depleting much quicker wouldve wished It also sopped energy complicating ride Along way literally nothing nowhea replenish water supply The hilly rough terrain also calls hard tough peddling sopping even energy The heat terrain lack places stop combined awful ride cyclist story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children's attitude toward learning has been a serious concern among many educationalists for a long period of time. It seems that there are many children who have difficulty focusing on their studies. In this essay, I will examine some primary reasons behind this trend and provide practical solutions to promote their academic performance.\r\n\r\nOne of the important reasons to reduce children 's attention to their studies comes from their growing dependence on technological gadgets in modern society. In other words, children tend to spend more time enjoying various activities on their own smartphones and computers today. They are easily distracted by a number of popups of the latest news and events from their friends, which makes it more difficult for them to concentrate on their studies as they cannot help but check them and respond. Such incessant communication online discourages many children from taking enough time to contemplate difficult problems they should learn. They tend to be less patient and anxious when they keep hearing the vibrations and sounds from their device. Therefore, the prevalence of electric tools has a negative effect on their ability to analyze in depth and think critically. \r\n\r\nIn order to increase the level of concentration among young learners, it is significant for them to study in a quiet place. Such a suitable environment where children can be apart from the surrounding noise should be well prepared by parents and schools. Their smartphones and other personal electric tools should be handed to adults or should be turned off for their study time. This will encourage more young learners to focus on their academic performance without feeling anxious to check them. In fact, the prolonged period of their concentration allows them to achieve higher goals. It will also raise their motivation as they come to understand the importance of new knowledge in their life. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the spreading use of digital gadgets among young adults makes it difficult to sustain their attention on their studies. Adults should take responsibility for the management of their screen time in order to raise their concentration on academic study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggets that Venus is the hottest surface plant even though it's not the closest plant to Mars, its still one of the hottest planet's. Since Venus is right around the corner humans have a hgher chance to land on Venus when in a spaceshuttle. Venus has a hgher atmosphere of carbon dioxide then any other plant. Although the atmosphere can average over 800 degree, all the carbon is not good for the humans that spaceshuttle the Earth. The autor got this information by sending humans up to Earth to see what it's like up there. Although we mqay live on Earth, traveling up to Earth is far more dangerous then living on Earth. A long time ago, Venus used to be covered with oceans and wasn't so hot how it is compared to now. Although there are still some features to Earth as before and now, the plant got rockier over time and there was a atmosphere change. NASA had an idea to send humans to Venus to study the planet for people on Earth can know more about the planet. The NASA administration say's that Venus cannot form light throughout the planet and researchers are not able to take anything from the planet,such as, rock, gas, or anything else. There once was a old technoology project that took place in the 1800s , those devices made calculations about gears and the levers. Those projects made it easier for physical conditions. Scientists made it a mission to try and understand Venus up close, There are still rescearchers that are building machines to pay apart to try and find knowledge about Venus. As I stated before the atmosphere in our solar system is much more higher than down on Earth,\n\nScientists say that if we had a solor power the radiation levels would be much more useful for it would not work for the levels on Earth, although ist's much more surivable for humans.\n\nTherefore, as i learned much more about space and NASA from this article. It would be much more nicer on Earth if we had a nicer atmosphere and it would be much more liveable. Scientists are still discoveing information about our solar system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new source of technology haas been invented that has the power to enable computers to indentify human emotions. This is called the Facial Action Coding System. The first step of the computer is to construct a 3-D computer model of the persons face. This includes all 44 muscles on a human's face as well. They must move exactly as if they were human muscles for the experiment to work. Six emotions have been classified by the model that are the most common expressions of a person in their daily life. These would be happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. These are all also associated with each and every movement of the facial muscles. The new created technology seems to be valuable to the people that use it today and specifically would have a value for students in a classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System uses video imagery to track facial movements with the new emotion-recognition software created in the system. It weighs every unit and can identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared to a face that show no emotion also clled a neutral face. Dr Huang commented in the artile \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" that he believes \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\". This could be a great use to teachers in their classrooms so they know what to explain more on and for which student. As a student, I can assure anyone that the worst thing at school in a class is when you can't understand something. When a student is completely confused, they can loose intrest and also motivation to comprhend what's going in in class. Dr Huang also added that \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,\".\n\nThis new technology comes with many benifits and advatages for all people of different ages. The Facial Action Coding System is valuable for students and teachers at school during the day. It will help kids be more proactive and motivated in class knowing that if they don't undertsnad something that help from this system will always be there. It's intresting to see all the new inventions and ideas that continue to be created as years go by to benefit human life and the rest of the world. This is an idea that people need to take advatage of and use at school. For this system to be able to read the expressions of sudents in class will communicate to teachers that a student is in need of more attention than others. The help of the Facial Action Coding System could possibly change the life a kid in class and help shape him into a successful hard worker of today's society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the advent of technology, publicity has turned out to be a ubiquitous part of society. There are different views about the implications of advertising, however, I personally argue that this growth can be equally beneficial and detrimental simultaneously.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the omnipresence of advertisements in every aspect of daily life can bring many benefits for not only businesses and customers but also society. To begin with, through commercials, companies can reach potential buyers, attract them to a particular product and urge them to stick to that brand in a very efficient and cost-effective way. Consequently, while the market for their goods might be captured and expanded, product sales might increase. For clients, it saves their time, effort, and money in obtaining information about the product, as due to advertisements, customers can be informed of newly-launched products to make the most optimal choices by comparing different brands and their varied qualities. Finally, the expansion of advertising in various forms creates far-reaching employment opportunities and provides employment to people all around the world who are concerned in every field. On a large scale, advertising serves as a bridge between manufacturers and customers, expanding business opportunities and raising living standards.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the inconveniences this trend has brought about should not be ignored. Firstly, as for individuals, their choice of products might be manipulated if they heavily rely on commercials. Marketers can employ tricks and gimmicks to incite people to buy products that can be of poor quality or different from what the advertisement had shown before, leading to great dissatisfaction among buyers. Furthermore, customers can feel overwhelmed by the colossal number of advertisements. Should they meet with too many commercials, customers will be fed up with advertising instead of feeling informed of useful information and ignore its well-meaning value. For example, many people have showcased their frustration because they are bombarded with advertising that acutely interrupts their online experience, such as playing mobile games or watching Youtube videos.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the widespread presence/expansion/ the growing prevalence of commercials serves as an incentive for further economic development, it might still leave several repercussions for individuals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can this new technology called Facial Action Coding System or FACS help? Yes, it can help because it can identify a human's emotions. Some don't understand it but it actually could help. the way it can help is by helping our kids when they are in school.\n\nHold on, how can this help our kids while there at school? It is able to help them because it can tell how someone is feeling while they are learning. \"A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(Dr. Huang) In other words it can make something they don't understand easier, but without feeling dumb in front of there peers by asking the teacher if they can explain it in a easier way in class.\n\nTo sum this up, the way it can help is by helping our kids in school. It can detect how they are feeling while they are doing there work. It also can make it easier for them to do there school work if they don't want to ask the teacher how to do or so they can understand it better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantage of limiting car usage is beneficial to helping the enviroment, improvement in America and citizens. Which all lead a happier healthier life, and may also improve our realtionship with other country's around the world.\n\nHowever, even though their are many different advantages to limiting car usage, one of the most important one is helping the enviroment. The amount of green house gas emission is unbelievable, \"and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" compared to \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmison in Europe\". Citizens if we limit our car usage our surronding's would be a healthier place. \"as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter pf wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor\". With cars not being allowed in this community, it create's a safer enviroment for their community. \"pedestrians, bicycle, private cars, commmercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\" which are more examples of helping th enviroment.\n\nFurthermore, another advantage of limiting car usage is improvement of social and also awarness of other transportation. \"\"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\" said David Goldberg, and official of Transportation for America, a fast growinh coaltion of hundreds of groups in the United States... who are promotiong new communities that are less dependent on cars.\" with new kinds of transportation we could get places quicker and improver our lives. Their are many other places doing car free day which seems to be helping, they put rules in place like getting fined oif you use your car. Those country's have seen results. If we do this in America we can see many new results too. \"The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogste. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from particapting\" with this kind of determination it can help build character in citizens.\n\nConcludingly, their are many if not thousands of advantages to limiting car usage, you just have to be a willing particapant. As a citizen of America ask yourself, do you want to improve the world your living in by just taking a very simple step of limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea because from reading the passage he suggests that Venus is a very interesting planet but it's also dangerous. In paragraph 1 it says \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star ,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. \" which is one of the couple of things that make Venus a worthy pursit like it's said. Another thing that is interesting is that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and in size also in distance. Also no spacecraft has survied to land for more than a couple of hours in more than three decades. One of the few things that make Venus a dangerous planet is that it's the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system as said in paragraph 3. Also \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. \" the planet's surface temperature average is over 800 degrees. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and it includes familiar features such as valley and mountains. In paragraph 7 it states that NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus and they're making simplified electonics to test more of Venus's surface but the devices that are being made only last about 3 weeks because of the heat and the conditons of the surface.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author is right in what is he saying by \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". He also suggests that is extremely dangerous go over there and study that planet. In paragraph 2 says \"...No single spaceship has touched down Venus in more then three decades. Study Venus has been a chalklenge for human and all thos e who work in NASA, no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nIn paragraph 3 also show us how that planet has a lot of pressure and heat and also it explain us why they can't go and study that planet for days instead of hours. The reason that they give us in paragraph 3 is that in venus is 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience every day in Eart and of course our body can't stand at that temperature.\n\nVenus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and caters. The national Aeuronatics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Just imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles avobe the roiling Venusian landscapoe. NASA is workinbg on the approaches to studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. \r\nMore people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. \r\nMore people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. \r\nMore people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. \r\nMore people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. \r\nMore people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion my arguement would be that i am with the positive aspects of google cars. And the negative things are nothing compared to all of the positive things these cars can do and new developments\n\nin the making.\n\nThe article states that google cars have driven more than half a million miles without crashing. They alert you when you are pulling in or out of driveways or traffic complications. These cars are a smart master peice in my arguement in developing to modify these cars and put more technology to make them better than what they are now. The cars allow better response control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nAfter all the negative componets of the goolge cars are nothing more than just commom sense in driving and taking responseablilty. Being alert to what is on the road in case something happensis always then safest way to drive, therefore this is my postive arguement on google cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes school should have technology to read sudetnts emotional expressions. Why? Because if they do they can help with so many problems it may also prevent fights from happening.\n\nNow some people may say that this is a breach in students privec but just imangin all the harm we can prevent from happeing if schools do invole this into thery system. Teachers and faculty members can be able to tell if a student is going throug a hard time and can help them, they can also see if studetns where to fight and be able to keep them apart from one another. Also having this system may eaven stop school shootings. If schools where to have this they can see if studetns are about to hurt a lot of students and faulcaty but will be able to add extra securtity,and police and get the student the help that they need.\n\nSo in conclusion do i think that people shold use this syestom to protect schools and helpl students? Yes because if we do we can stop having to worry about childern going to school with out having to worry about if they will see them again. So these are the main reason why schools should to help protect our futor in our kids and have them live in a better world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Inside of the Making Mona Lisa Smile story the creator of Facial Action Coding System Dr.Paul Eckman they think there project could help out alot.They are saying that \" a classroom computer could recognize that a student is becoming bored or confused. Both doctors also thik it could be \"like an effective human instructor.Dr.Haung belives that \"mostv human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication so computers need to know it to\". They belive that \"humans perform the same impressive caculation every day\".\n\nDr.Haung belives that \"even though indivsuals often often show varrying degrees of exspression.I think that he is saying that no one barley show emotion anymore and if they do it is through an emoji,phone call,or a video.Also for there project it can turn real life painted pictures to have an diffrent emotion than the original picture had.Also they tak about how everyone has diffrent face exspression emotions. Dr. Haung says \"you can proably tell how your freind is felling by looking at them\" which is very true.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that they shouldn't exist. I think this because technology can have so many issues and it could cause so many accidents. Even though technology gets better and better every year they always have problems and people are always having to fix it.\n\nIn paragraph nine the passage states that the law is trying to make things safe and the safest way to things like this is that a human is alert at all times, taking charge of the road. That already tells you we shouldn't have these type of cars because with something not going right or working with the google in the car, you never know what can happen. Sensors don't always see everything or feel everything so it could always lose its signal or something. Lastly what if one day the google isn't connecting again, and the antilock brakes aren't working. You aren't paying attention and boom you run into something and for all we know you could lose your life.\n\nThe point that i'm trying to get across here is that making these google cars is very pointless. If you want things to be safer and better, than they shouldn't be created. Sure humans driving isn't the safest, but the way i look at it verse google cars humans make it safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming to us in the near future. These cars are capable of driving themelves. For now, they still need human interaction or assistance and human skill in order to safely navigate through work zones, or around accidents. This means that the driver would have to remain alert at all times when the car is driving itself. Driverless cars can cause a lot of problems, but have some features that could really help us on the road.\n\nDriverless cars should not be further developed or put on the market because it is too unsafe to have technology do something as dangerous as driving. There are endless situations, which means that you cannot program a computer to do all of them for you. Especially when it comes to driving through a contruction site, on back roads that are not marked on a map, or up a driveway where precise steering is required. The only reason that this whole push for driverless cars was created, is because people found it too much of a chore to pay attention at all times when driving. Driving should be something that people take very seriously, which people in this day and age seem to miss. Drivers should want to drive safely, which is why the push for driverless cars makes no sense. There is no way that a computer can do everything that a human can do when it comes to driving. However, some of the features of the driverless cars could be helpful, like the cameras on the rear of the car, and on the rearview mirror to help with backing. This could come into play when using precise backing, where you need an extra set of eyes to look behind you in order to see all angles. Also, the GPS reciever would be very helpful if you were ever lost and needed assistance on directions to find your way.\n\nWe should put the idea of further development of driverless cars away, and focus on some of the features that would go into a driverless car, that could better improve our cars right now. Driverless cars would just be too unsafe when it comes to the needed actions, like human skill. Drivers would not feel safe enough to drive them, and in the future when we finally get used to driving them, drivers would not pay enough attention to make the actions that actually require human skill. Driverless cars can cause a lot of problems, but have some features that could really help us on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern digital era, many get the experience of violent entertainment in form of movies and games. While some believe that this experience is harmless and should be allowed to feel without any restrictions, my belief is that it should be censored to some extent to avoid harm to society.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, many argue that there is insufficient data to link violent entertainment to actual crimes. Most of the viewers or subscribers just require the temporary thrill and excitement which does not extend beyond that limit. Moreover, the young generation will be aware of the consequences of crimes through this mode of entertainment and highly likely to obey rules and behave as a good citizen. In addition, some may control their anger or stress by playing a shooting game rather than doing actual harm to anybody. Furthermore, researches indicate that violence received by these modes of entertainment help to balance hormone levels inside the human body as well.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, viewing such violent content without discretion can cause several harms to society as well. Firstly, children are likely to be impacted by this violent entertainment and can try to imitate what is being done in a movie or a game. This can lead to an increase in future crimes. Secondly, people with risky health conditions such as heart diseases could have issues if harmful content is not censored from movies or games. Hence, it is required to govern and regulate violent modes of entertainment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are positive outcomes of not censoring violent content of entertainment, the damage it does to society is unacceptable. In my view, governing bodies should involve and frequently monitor these entertainment modes, especially in developing countries like Sri Lanka.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The majority of individuals thinks that going to university or college is the best alternative to achieve a successful life, while the others argue that having a work then is a better choice. In my opinion, I totally believe that having university education is very crucial, however, having a job is also a good choice.\n\nOn the one hand, going to university is the best approach. First reason is that there will be more opportunities for who have a good qualifications. Take an example, having a good diploma or higher degrees, you will be hunted by headhunters from popular companies which then you would stand a greater chance of landing a well-paid job. The second reason, it is worthwhile to get knowledge from university or college which is the tool supporting almost of your works. Furthermore, many people say that “The more knowledge you get, the more opportunities you could gain.”. Indeed, graduating from a university where you will have many advices from experts so you would find it is more easily get a job from popular companies.\n\nOn the other hand, getting a straight job after school also have some benefits. Many people believe that having a job suddenly after school is better because they can earn money as soon as possible. Nowadays, many have ideal that going further after school is unnecessary and it is also more expensive so they prefer to earning money suddenly after school. However, if they want get more many, they have to work longs hour with a low salary instead of working in a friendly environment, working nine-to-five and having a high paid. One more justification is that working after school is very fitting for whom want to get a plenty of experiences and soft skill, therefore, they can be a headquarter of the queue when applying for a position in the business.\n\nTo sum up, working straight at 18 allows people have work experiences and soft skill when they applying for job. However, people should make sure that gaining enough knowledge and specialist skills before applying for in order to have a successful career and also a dreaming life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Robot car era has begin, and trying to come strong as well. The car industry is ah huge industry , racking up billions every year but now there to start something new that will take the world by storm and the car industry will changed as we know it . The driveless car. People beileve this is what america and the world needs, but is it really?\n\nIn the late 1950s, General motors created a concept car that could run on a\n\nspecial test track. the track was embedded with an electrical cable that send radio signals to receiver on the front of the car. engineerd at berkeley tried something with magnets with alternating polarity. This lead to the all luxury , well balcned , and smarter cars of today ,but can they get even smarter ? Srbastian thrun , founder of the Google car project , believes that the technology has finally caught up to began his dream. But before 2000, \"there was no way\" said thrun , to make something interesting . but now he is on his way to his dream , but is that dream reallt needed and was it safe as well.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"traffic Jam assistant\". The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch srnsors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. n fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. they can steer , accelerate , and brake themselves, but allare deigned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills , such as navigating through work zones and around accidents .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" claims in paragraph 4 that being able to return to Venus is indisputable. Throughout the article the author provides many reasons as to why Venus should be farther discovered.\n\nThe author notes that Venus is at times the cloest planet to Earth, in both size and density, along with distance (paragraph 2). Venus may have even sustained diffrent life forms long ago, like Earth can today. Venus contains some geological features parallel to Earth today, such as valleys, mountains, and craters (paragraph 4). At the end of the author's article, he also states that due to human curiosity that it will lead us to come across similar situations of wanting to explor new terrain, however dangers are in the way. Such things as challenges, like Venus, should not stop sientific discoveries in the future.\n\nThe author provides many great reasons as to why Venus's studying is a worthy pursuit, from beinng the most Earth like planet to have been discovered, to future challenging discoveries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I promise you, this landform on Mars called \"The Face\", is just a natural landform. The only picture that really looks like a face is the picture NASA took in 1976, now we have better technology to show the landform better. A few reasons why we now know that it is just a natural landform are: scientists figured out that is was just another Martian mesa and NASA took another picture in 2001 where it shows the landform in high definition. To learn more about these things, keep reading.\n\nMy first reason is soon after the 1976 picture was taken \"scientists figured out it was just another Martian mesa, common around Cydonia.\" Now I know what you are going to say, \"What made the landform look like a face?\" The reason the landform looks like a face is because this mesa has \"...unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptiam Pharoah.\" After this got out, most people who still believed that it is a landform created by aliens said that it was taken on a cloudy day in Mars and \"...perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze.\"\n\nMy last reason is that when they went back to see the face later on a cloudless day in 2001, the picture revealed that the landform was just a butte or a mesa common around the American West. \"'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,' says Garvin.\" After this picture was released most alien believers, believed NASA.\n\nIn conclusion, I hope you realize that this Face is just a mesa and not a alien form, although it is okay if you do. I am not here to change you opinion. NASA has spent years and years studying this landform. People should not always listen to conspiracy theories, they are not always right. Through all of this proof they have, I sure believe them that this is not an alien created landform, it is just a mesa or butte.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Attention !!! to all the residents of this community are Bendz and Suburban going were all the extoic cars and muscle cars at all i see bendz and suburban, Its few foreigen cars out there in the street. when I riding on the highway I like to see Mustangs and And Lamborginis ride aside if me because its excited other people it make them want to buy Mustangs and Lamborginis.\n\nYes Bendz are nice but i want to see some foreiegn cars Like Bugati and RoyalRoce 50% you will see foreiegn ride around in the city I like to take a trip to see al type of cars with nice paint job and nice looking skirt. You will not see that much cars riding around because people sell them to live in beautyful homes. In 2007 all the streets was full with muscle cars because the rapper Rick Ross was the first person drive a drop top mustang so many people was so excited thats i seen the whole streets with differnt type of mustangs and drop tops.\n\nIn the early 90's thats when automobile was invented, they really was made for middle-class families and Miami to Tallahassee Because it was alot of people thst need gas and lights when the hurricane came through.12 percents of huge houses gas emission in Chicago... and up 72 percent cars-invented area in the united states while they building cars some people has catch buses.\n\nIt has been efforts in the past two years to make denser and better for walking in 2010 that's when stationwagins was invented so people really did have to walk anymore or catch buses but some catch buses because it save gas and money. In the united states the protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and legislators are starting to act.\n\nevery since world war I alot of cars was getting destroy lets stop destory cars because thats our transportation said Martin Luther King jr, a fast growing of hundreds in the united states was getting larger and the car population more foreiegn cars and mucle cars was hitting the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people should stop relying on their cars so much for three reasons. I hope this can change peoples minds about using the vehicles for everything. Even going to the corner of their block just for a bite they use their cars.\n\nThe opening reason why I think people should really limit their car usages is that it causes less pollution in the atmosphere. If drives don't give a limit to their uses of their cars we might end up having global warming. That's not gonna be great. For example before when cars were rarely seen we had no global warming problem, but now that cars are seen all over the places, global warming is near of arrival.\n\nThe following reason why I think people should put a limit to their car usage is that it would benefit everyone because there will be less traffic. Having no traffic at all is a common dream for many drivers that drive to work using the expressway every morning. Unfortunely people have to be stuck in traffic everyday because they don't want to let go of their cars. They should experiment other ways to get to work or to even the corner of their block. They should try bike riding to their destations. That's double the benefit. They get to excercise their bodies and not damage the environment with deadly gases that can cause global warming. In the second source by Robert Duffer he states that \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France\".\n\nMy next reason why I think drivers should limit their car usues is because they are basically killing themselves with fatal accidents almost everyday. There's a lot of causes for fatal accidents, one of them is texting and driving. That's the main cause of fatal car accidents. Drunk driving is at close second. None the less, if people would just pay attention while they are driving there would be less car accidents, or even better they stop using their cars as often to avoid car accidents. Even when knowone is distracted while driving there are still a few car accidents. Most of the time that's just a regular accident with knowone losing their lives, but it happens many tims because the streets are so compacted with drivers eager to move. That's why I think people should stop relying on their cars so heavily. To decrease the death rate to a normal level.\n\nIn conclusion, all these three reasons why I think people should limit the usage of their vehicles are the reasons why the world isn't at it's normal levels of natural events in traffic. If citizens would rely less on their vehicles, we would see a change in the air we breathe and less chances of having global warming, less traffic in city streets, and less fatal car accidents with less people being killed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are getting smarter and technology is getting more advanced. One of those technology is the driverless cars. The development of this is a bright idea. This will change the world in a positive way. The vehicles will come in handy and will be useful for multiple situations. It would decrease the amount of accidents there are by a huge amount. The driver can make the choice, whether they want to drive or for the vehicle to do the job.\n\nThese automobiles will have tons of sensors. Before the year 2000, it was hard to turn these ideas into reality. The author said, \"the sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there, and the mapping wasn't there.\" But, it is now the year 2016 and the world has developed and changed. Making these cars wouldn't be too hard of a work.\n\nDriverless cars would mean less accidents. One of the top cause of accidents occur while people text while driving. If they do develop these cars, this wouldn't happen anymore because the automobile would do the job for them. So, they'll be able to send messages and do whatever, whenever. This plan includes a lot of safety for people in the car and out of the car.\n\nAlso, drivers have more than just one choice. Even though the car itself can do the steering, accelerating, and braking for the human, the human can just turn on the in-car system and drive. This system exists to entertain the drivers. There are people out there who just drive for the fun of it, so why not include this option along? This can be turned on and off instantly according to what the driver wants.\n\nIn conclusion, if people want to increase the population of the world, they would to agree to this plan. Driverless cars would make the earth a safer place for every human being. The car is in control of itself. There are many sensors to warn for cautions and dangers. Automakers want to make these cars that only exist in movies to come true for a good reason. Also, it's not like people will never drive again. There are choices. The driverless cars would make a great amount of difference. It would have a huge impact to our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea that venus is the closest planet to the earth, and that they want to know more about the planet venus.I think that they tried to send spacecraft to know what's on venus,and know what's going on in the planet. In the text it says that \"NASA is working on other apporaches to study Venus in some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface.\"Another reason in the text is to why it's worth studying is \"Many researchers are wroking on innovation that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knownledge of Venus.\" I do think that it is worth pursiting despite of danger because we can learn alot and also see what's going on in other planets so that\n\nway we know what we can do to change and protect the\n\nplanet earth, and not cause much more damage than what we already casued in our solar system.With using robot and other tecololgy is better to know what's going on in Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children are considered the future of tomorrow; therefore, their upbringing plays a vital role in their development and nourishment. Teamwork is supposed to provide a broad spectrum of ideas, creativity, and connectivity. In my opinion, such activities of collaboration and connection in various segments of life should be encouraged owing to their optimum benefits.\r\n\r\nFirstly, extra curriculum activities are exercised in academics to show off the hidden abilities and to encourage the talent of little ones. Events and sports galas are organized to enhance cooperation and relationships amongst students. \r\n\r\nMoreover, teamwork promotes harmony and tends to utilize the full potential of individuals through various tasks. Sports are means of working together, incorporating different schools of thought to achieve specific goals. The capability and individual endurance are challenged when someone works in a cross-cultural or multi-cultural team to bring the best out of it. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, such platforms are aimed to polish the particular abilities of individuals. Leadership, working in different teams under various circumstances, how to manage complex situations. All these elements are very fruitful in their practical life. Furthermore, our children are the future of tomorrow and ultimately will lead the nations and their communities. The habits developed at this stage will decide their fate shortly since leadership development, weaknesses, and leadership qualities are identified and are aimed to further work on them. Such hobbies are also a great source of self-development and learning from the experience of others. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, taking into consideration future aspects, children should be highly encouraged to take part in such learning platforms to train themselves and nourish their talent. The abilities and capabilities developed in the initial stages have a long effect on their practical life and professional career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What censorship Many would say s book without cuss words s movie without racism For I think censorship covering truth I nt think movies books taken self people find offensive When book uses cuss word show anger simply use word I think s okay nt hear world already Now I know people grown hearing foul words many us With movies I think people problem children watching something bad offensive nt let kid watch Thats whats wrong people days nt want take blame things go wrong lives People use censorship way make feel like good parent world owes something When comes someone thinking movie book gone far race censorship gets thrown around Many people issues race nationality messed Though s funny see race use foul words among s book s racism Or certain race made fun shown movie way race nt feel comfortable movie called racist I feel people issue something nt agree take lives Too many people try control something like cencorship For years people wanted books read school censored bad language Why put time toward book censored school I know kids school use foul language time Even worse books read If adults would realize s kids need censore books censorship would nt become huge issue People need realize cencoring books movies nt make offencive words bad images go away covers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many folks are of the opinion that infants and toddlers gain experiences that are superior to those experienced by teenagers. Neither one of these milestones in a juvenile’s soul trumps the other and both age groups learn valuable lessons during these years.\r\n\r\nFirstly, there is much to be said about the first thousand days of an infant’s growth. Conversely, this is the period where they first become aware of their surroundings and the people that form part of their world. For example, they learn social skills, become aware of their bodies and the way it moves and they form attachments with their caregivers. Furthermore, they learn to trust, love, and express themselves as well as behaviours that will remain with them throughout life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are those who believe that minors are influenced by a greater audience and no longer primarily by their parents. Therefore, they are more exposed to the bigger world from which they can take experiences that will form them as adults. For example, as an infant their choices were what to watch on television or what to eat for supper but, as adolescents, these choices have turned into whether they should do the “right” thing or not. Above all, they have learned right from wrong and now they have the opportunity to apply what they learned as a young child.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, juveniles will learn from and take experiences throughout the growth journey. In my opinion, both babies and teens will gain understanding wisdom as they reach certain milestones in their lives and neither age group is superior to the other with regards to them obtaining maturity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should we study Venus? What would we as humans gain from this? These are the questions that the author leaves unanswered and doesn't support. The author does an excellent job describing how we can go to Venus, but he only provides two reasons as to why we should explore Venus, and also poorly explains those reasons.\n\nHis first reason is that Venus might \"have been the most Earth-like planet.\" While this is a good reason to explore the planet the author fails to elaborate why this should make people want to explore Venus. He could've said something along the lines that learning how Venus went from an Earth resembling planet to the unhabitable planet it is now could help us take care of own planet. The author does not make any attempt to show why this factor would make humans want to explore Venus, instead he just explains how similar the plabets resemble each other. And none of this could even be true because it is not known for sure that Venus once was the most Earth-like planet. The author even says that it might have been, not that it was, but that it might have been.\n\nThe second reason the author uses to support his claim is because humans have a \"curiosity\" that \"will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endavors.\" Much like his first reason this is a great one but he also fails to accurately explain this reason much like the first one. Humans do have a curiosity which makes us want to explore things but why should this allow us to ignore all the dangers that come with it? Paragraphs before the author gives this reason he tells about all the dangers that Venus has, he says \"that the atmosphere is almost 97 percent CO2\", that \"temperatures average 800 degrees Fahrenheit . and that atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" After lisiting all the dangers Venus has he then says we should becuase human curiosity makes us explore things, but he says that after giving all the reasons why Venus is dangerous. Sure the author gives great examples as to how people could explore Venus like with a blimp and how they could make exploring Venus easier, but just because we can do something doesn't mean we should. Exploring Venus and new technology wouls cost a lot of time and money. Maybe the author could've said that Venus's natural resources would make a lot of money. That would be a great way to support pursuing Venus because people would do a lot for money.\n\nThe author has a very reasonable claim about how humans should explore Venus, but he poorly explains it. The author's two main reasons could've been very convincing if he had thoroughly explained them and shown that Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers. The author makes readers think the other way because he also gives many dangers Venus has, and this would make people not want to pursuit studying Venus. The author does a great job explaining how we can explore Venus, but a terrible one explaining why we should explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The using of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable thing. Acorrding to the article, it says, \"A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This shows that it can help the student make sure they understand the lesson the teachers teachings. It can also help the teacher see what they nedd to explain more, or what the students are getting stuck on. The article also says, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This helps me explain on what i was saying, that it could help the teachers modify the lesson so the students can understand more of the lesson.\n\nThis technology can help the students and the teacher to strat communicating even more now. It can show the teacher how a student feels about somethinbg the teacher is doing. Also, it can help the teacher see if the student has something going on in thier life that they are not doing thier work. That way the teacher can ask whats going on to the student. It can maybe lower the chances of the students failing thier class. This can help the student go on to collage, so the percent of students going to collage would go higher.\n\nHow do you know that's this technology could be helping students pass thier classes? What it this is the key for all humans to get smarter? These are thing that we should be thinking about. If we would of hev it already, think about how far we could be right now with technology. Just think about how many docters, or laweyers and all those important people we need. Not just that but world peaces. the most thing people wish we could have. peace amoung all humanity.\n\nWell that's what it think about if we had thats type of technology. I agree that we should have this type of technology in the schools. It will help the teacher to find other ways to teach, or other way to make thing easier for the students. It also, help the kids learn faster, and also understand the lesson.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Global environmental changes are unquestionably the most prevalent and worrying issues in any society, and their prevention should be taken seriously. Despite a few problems, such as plastic production and the absence of recycling, I reckon that the decision of the raising prices for fuel is definitely the best way to prevent the worldwide catastrophe.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, the main environmental issue of global warming is caused by two significant factors, which are burning fossil fuels and deforestation. Firstly, expensive fuel could actually decrease a number of cars bought by people due to the fact of economic purposes. As a consequence, people would have a lower level of horrible emissions, which are produced by cars. Secondly, if the amount of vehicles is stable, hundreds of new roads would not be needed, and more forests and parks could be saved. Therefore, the greenhouse effect, caused by transport pollution, could be managed by the natural process of carbon dioxide absorption.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are still a few factors, which could not be removed by changing a price tag. It is known that plastic has not been already replaced by other materials, so its production could not be immediately restricted. Moreover, most people are not used to recycling various types of waste, consequently, tons of rubbish are supposed to threaten the surrounding area. Therefore, hundreds of humans consider fuel price raising to be an inappropriate solution.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite varying opinions, I believe that the advantages of increasing the cost of fuel completely outweigh the relative disadvantages. Without a doubt, this solution would be the first useful step, which government should take in order to protect the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever walked to work or have you rode a bike to work? Many people dont,then again many people do. For example in New York there is a new bike-sharing program for people who perfer to ride a bicycle to get to poing A to point B. There are many other alternitives to getting to point B from point A like Mr. Sivak has said \"A car is just a means of getting from A to B when BART doesen't work.\".\n\nIn Paris the usage of cars has lead to days of near-record pollution rivaled by Beijing,China. Paris has worked to fix this problem by banning the usage of cars on certain days acording to their license plates. For example on mondays motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars,if one did not listen they would be fined 22-euros. That day almost 4,000 drivers were fined. Due to this new ban congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France.\n\nIn another part of the world in Vauban, Germany there is a suburb that has had Street parking, driveways and home garages forbiden. This german suburb is completly car free with an exception of thoroughfare. Car ownership is allowed, but it is highly inconviniant for the owners. As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars. Vauban is an example of a growing trend in Europe.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many alternitives to getting around place to place. Such as riding bicycles and taking publick transportation in New York, Paris, Germany.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Issues related to volunteer work to be done by the youth for the community are being discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming heated questions among the people that leisure time for today’s generations should be spent by doing charity work for the society. While this view is rubbished by some critics who oppose it. This dissertation accedes with the given statement. Both the views have their logics to support their opinion which will be discussed in this dissertation before coming to any conclusion.\r\n\r\nAs far as the matter is concerned, I would like to stamp the mark on this view by stating that helping society in free time by the teenagers has a remarkable impact on the people. The first and foremost point that strikes my mind is that younger generation learn how to become a responsible citizen by adding their efforts into the community. Another noteworthy notion which caters attentions is that they become more social which help them in developing mental and social wellbeing. This can be explained precisely by citing an example of a survey which showed a comparision between student who spent their free time volunteering in social work with children who engage themselves into activities like playing video games and gossiping. The results concluded that teenagers who spent their time doing something for the locality had better social and helping attitude whereas the others had conservative attitude.\r\n\r\nAs every matter has two aspects, another matter of this aspect deals with its opposite side. Some people are in the favor of not supporting their children do anything during their free for the community because they believe it’s a waste of time and instead this time can be utilized in learning something new as an extracurricular activity.\r\n\r\nAfter cogitating on a great deal of thoughts and discussion the conclusion to drawn here is that everything has its own significant value especially regarding the people’s view point of teenagers working for free towards the betterment of the community. All we require is to have optimistic approach and appositive attitude so that we can help in building a better world for the future generation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it easy to prove that a picture is real or fake ? Well people have thier own opionions. The key is to have information about your argument and be able to respond to a counterargument. If a photo is being climed real, but your not buying it you should have information to back you up.\n\nThis \"Face on Mars\" photo is real, and aliens did not make it. It is a natural landform becuase no objects that would be on earth are found in the picture.\" You would see because you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size\". The photo was taken many times and NASA finally got a clear picture of it.\n\nAbout the weather being impossible to shoot a picture because it was winter, thats not true but \"MGS is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips\". It wasnt easy getting a clear picture in the weather conditions. MGS had captured a good final picture with a good angle that made media go crazy.\n\nOur facts have been proven and researched thouroughly. NASA has studied the face and has gotten good picures for everyone to see. The picture blew up and was everywhere, people were fascinated that it looked like a human face. After all the research ... the picture had not been made by aliens, it was a natural land formation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The presented diagram describes the operation of a heated balloon. At first glance, it is evident that a hot balloon contains three major components, including a basket, a burner, and an envelope system.\nA basket is an appropriate spot where individuals stand beneath a hot balloon. Besides, a burner is a piston situated on top of the basket. It combines propane and air to generate flame and heated air. The rope connects the burner and skirt, and it allows the envelope system to be linked with the bottom portion.\nThe vertical lines on the balloon itself are referred to as gores, whereas the horizontal lines are defined as panels. A self-sealing flap is labelled as a parachute valve in which located on the top of the balloon, enabling hot air to flow out at a consistent rate.\nIn other words, if hot air is lighter than cool air, it would rise when the burner produces a flame. Hence, the hot balloon would employ this power to take off.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Coding Systemis a system that can tell your emotions by caculating the way you look and by one little look it could tell it all how your feeling it tells whether your mad, sad, depressed, happy, even mixed emotions.\n\nI think the use of the Facial Action Coding System is a well needed thing for schools because it could tell your teacher whats going on whether you need help or not or if your going through something and need to talk to someone. The Facial Action Coding System would be a great thing to have in school because some kids are shy an dont like to talk and raise there hands in class infront of everyone and if you dont ask questions when you dont understand something that could cause you to fail the class all because of your shyness.\n\nYes , the Facial Action Coding System is needed for schools and worth spending some money on for schools all over the world but them again we wouldnt need to invest in this if students spoke up about what they needed and whats going on but some students jus have a sad or mad face everyday for no reason so the Facial Action Coding Syestem may read their facial expressionand say that student is mad , when the student is just doing there normal face . The school board or government shoudnt have to invest in the Facial Action Coding System if teachers take the time and talk to their students some teachers are the reason the students become mad beause they make the students mad when they have to do too much homework or even class work , it also is a better way for humans to connect with the computers as it says that in paragraph 1.\n\nTo sum it all up this technology could come in handy in certain situations , the teachers might like it but the students might not , your boss may like it but you probably wouldnt . Its a win win situation for students it would tell others how your feeling and if you sad someone might talk to you to let you know your not alone , and for teachers its benificial because it could help you understand your students more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last few years, there has been much debate regarding the pros and cons of social media for each individual. Although this advancement has brought about numerous merits, its drawbacks are ineluctable.\r\n To begin with, it is common knowledge that this technology is beneficial in several ways. First of all, it plays such a fundamental role in our relationship and social life. With personal perspective, it helps us to find our Soulmates who are compatible with our interest and make contacting at ease. For example, this has happened to me that most of my friends are from the internet in real life. Thus, this technology also simplifies meeting, teaching and studying,… On account that it enables people to host meeting and teach online for free. For instance, recently, there has been a pandemic, which was triggered from the corona virus called “ COVID19”, because of this, most schools have to be closed which have severely affected in the student’s study, to improve the situation and also to comfort parents and children, many of them have started teaching online though apps like a zoom or classroom,..\r\n On the other hand, this advancement is not completely perfect. This will directly lead to the isolation among the users’ relationship, since people keep giving priority to virtual ones. Consequently, they could be apathetic about the real relationship out there. A great example of this is the news about those social media addicts who have tended to be isolated in the world outside are now increasing rapidly.\r\n In conclusion, even though the advantages of social media seem to outweigh the disadvantages of its, we should remember to only use it for about 2 hours a day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that when the people of the United States vote for the president it be should be deicided by the popular vote adn not the Electoral College. I shall give you a few examples why. And you might just think like i do.\n\nFirst, I think the president should be chosen by the popular vote because then all the poeple in that state will have a say not just someone else chosing for them. Most people usually chose for themselves because they have the right. Everybody should have a say not just\n\n\"the qualified citizens\"\n\nwriten in source one.\n\nSecondly, yes people make bad and somtimes terribles mistakes but thats what we do. The Electoral College has flaws just like anyone or anything else. Like in source two\n\n\"the single best argument agaisnt the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.\"\n\neven they make mistakes sometimes.\n\nSo yes the electoral college might be useful but it can also be very jugdemental. don't you think you have the choice to choose who leads this country? Maybe you don't but some do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that driverless are should be able to drive on the road because we would hav eto spent a lot of money on the roads and it would be to expensive and the taxs would go up and evreyone would be mad a the goverment. If we did get a driverless car what would happened if it rain because no everyone has garges, would all the sencors get all mess up. What would happen if the car got diconceted from the computer will the car just keep going striaght and run off a cliff and kill an entire family. What if some people dont have the money to buy on and they cant drive regualar cars no more what are they suppost to do. I bet this car would cost a lot and even work i also bet the it would need to a battery and gas to go in the car and they would have to run the gas and the battery at the same time. I also bet that the car would be really small or either really big.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should become a seagoing cowboy,it helped me learn about other countries. On my way to many places like China, I visited many other countries like Italy and Greece. Being a seagoing cowboy is hard work, but if you are like me you will have had to do chores or work on a farm, doing these helps. For me it helped so much the work seemed easy! If you join us you can come on trips with me!\n\nYes, you might say it is hard and will get boring, but if you say that them you aren't even giving it a chance. Just because there are cattle you have to watch and you think you always have to watch them. You don't, you only check on them every hour. Even if you think it gets boring, think again. On our way to our destination we visit many places like Acropolis in Greece which was to me the most special place we visited. but we still visted other places like Europe, China and going on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. We even have lots of sports and other fun activities! We even have tournaments for table-tennis, also you can play baseball, volleyball, fencing, and boxing. If you don't like sports you whittle or read. Now as you can see no time goes to waste.\n\nWhen you are a seagoing cowboy going many places helps learn how other cultures live. It also helps meet new people and learn new things like how to play sports and whittle if you don't already know. Going to Greece and seeing the Acropolis and like I said before it was special to me. I hope you come with me. But if you don't then you are missing out on a real good treat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Senator PROPER_NAME\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME and i am attending SCHOOL_NAME in LOCATION_NAME.\n\nI have recently been learning about the electoral college. i have been learning alot about it, actually, and i have to say. the electoral college sounds like a really bad idea!\n\nFirst off, swing states? that sounds completely unfair. sure its good for states like Texas, California, and New york. but what of the smaller states like Montana, or Maine, or Wyoming even? they deserve as much of a voice as the others.\n\nAlso, this is presidency here, not what game we should play in Gym! majority vote makes absolutely NO sense whatsoever. I mean come on, we are deciding the next LEADER of our country! Again. everyones wishes should be accounted for.\n\nNow im not saying that popular vote is perfect either but it sure beats the college. there are too many variables for the college. too many areas where something can go wrong. If something gets tied then they just throw the vote to the house of represenitives. I think if there is a tie that it should result in a re-election. But thats probably just me (personally i think it should be like the hunger games).\n\nWell thats really all I have to say. I hope you read this letter and maybe you can send it to your superiors or whoever it is you work for to get my letter read by the President. And see if we can fix this problem here.\n\nYours Truly,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that the government should pay closer attention to environmental pollution and housing problems in order to prevent people from health issues. From my personal angle alone, I believe tackling pollution and housing problems are indeed able to improve citizens’ health, however, other measures are also required to cope with people’s illness in the short term. \n\nFirst of all, one of the reasons to reduce pollution is that it has a direct impact on people’s health in many circumstances. For instance, air pollution may severely pose a threat to inhabitants’ life since they are prone to respiratory illness and other chronic diseases, for taking heavy smog in Beijing as an example. In addition, Poor air quality may also give rise to an outbreak of airborne diseases, such as summer flu more likely to occur, widespread and infect a large number of city dwellers, especially for those living in densely populated cities where without a good ventilation. \n\nSecondly, it is obvious that housing problems can influence city dwellers, predominately disadvantaged ones in particular, in aspects of physical and emotional. Those who are from deprived backgrounds are hardly able to afford decent places, and usually live in slums enduring terrible living conditions. Where sewage and waste are not managed effectively, is a perfect habitat for bacteria’s growth, where mice and cockroaches develop their communities, provides the media for bacteria to spread, and where people are stressed and live under pressure in most of the time. \n\nHowever, if the authorities give priority to solve problems of environmental pollution and housing issues for the sake of public health, this probably will not have an immediate payoff as these are strategies in the long-run solutions. By contrast, investments in medical facilities and boosts to health care services can better provide instant treatments for patients, alleviating their sicknesses \n\nIn conclusion,in my opinion, I am of the opinion that profound changes in the environment and accommodations can truly prevent people from illness and diseases, but there is in no case should the government neglect the importance of health care services on residents’ well being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lukes point of veiw of convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program was sotomething that luke wanted to do and he wanted to try and inspire other to also participate in the seagoing cowboys program. And enjoy it as much as he does.\n\nThe passage states,\" It made me more aware of people of other contries and their needs''. The passage also states, \" And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. So those are impotant details to support my anwser. So that proves why luke point of veiw of convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program.\n\nThe author also states,'' But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adveture for Luke Bomberger.'' The author also states, '' It opened up the world to him.'' So that are some more important details. So that proves why luke was convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program.\n\nEven though it may take alot of time to go places to places many people may not like having long trips. The text states,'' It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united States and a month to get too china.'' THe passage also states,'' They took cre of animals and bales of hay and bags of oats had to pull up from the lower holds of the ship. So those are some more details. So that proves again why luke keeps on convincing them to participate in the seagoing program, if they didn't want to they didn't have to.\n\nSo that's why it's really lukes idea and kind of there's to choose from . So that's my anwser for the question and there's many details in the passage that's support many anwsers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting affect cyclist ways making illusionalistic dehydrated He saw idea juice factory working abounded He saw rusty pipes made dehydrated knew pipes could never produce water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self driving cars are mystifying to some people, and the thought is a great fantasy that some want to see come true. While fantasies are fun to think about not all of them should come true. These are my three reasons as to why we should not go into this business.\n\nSo, imagine you wake up for work, everything is going alright, and you get in your brand new self driving car. It was tested by Google, so you think everything will be okay. The car pulls out of the drive and you're on your way to work. You're speeding up faster and faster, but you reassure yourself that everything is fine. The car doesn't stop at the approaching stoplight, which results in you getting in a crash.\n\nThe car is totaled, you're in the hospital, and it's all because your self driving car bugged out. Sure, more and more cars can be tested to ensure that there will be no bugs, but then there are people in this world that are mean. This sort could either have nothing to do with what I'm saying, or they could hack into your car and take control. For what reason that I don't know, but it's still a con of the self driving idea.\n\nAfter this crash you go to sue the manufacturer of this car. The manufacturer says he has nothing to do with it, it's not his fault, so you have no right to sue him. This gets you in the long process of court duty, a lot of research, and stress builds up. It wasn't your fault, you think, the manufacturer could've made it safer. Maybe he could have done a few more test runs.\n\nThe manufacturer comes back at you saying that you bought the car, and therefore should of thought about the consequences that could commence. This lawsuit goes on and on until finally they ask the jury, and they decide that you're guilty. They say that you should have thought of the reprucusions, you lose the fight that you started, and to top it off you've lost even more money.\n\nApart from that visual story I've laid out for you there is also this to consider, why have self driving cars? Shouldn't humans have the intellect and mind capacity to be able to drive in a giant metal box to get to their job? If we're so capable we should drive to our workplaces and homes. It's not just a fantasy that some people thik about, it's also the aspect of laziness in America.\n\nThink about it, the self driving cars make us do one less thing in our lives. It's an important thing too! Driving down the road where you have to trust other people in their cars and in your ability to drive your car. What would we do in our cars then? The car would basically be a very weirdly based time machine that we hop in. We'd be texting in the car, checking our social media, eating our breakfast on the way to work. We wouldn't realize what's going on around us.\n\nWe wouldn't look up at the world outside, we wouldn't see the trees as we pass them or the way that the snow falls on the ground. You won't see the birds on their first or seventy-first flight. The deer in the medow, the squirrels in the tree brances, and the people you pass by. Have you ever driven past one of your friends, honked at them just to see them see you and smile? That connection that you feel then, would no longer be here.\n\nEveryone is so in love with the social media fad. You'd be seeing Celine's status update about her going to the mall with her friends instead of the sunrise.\n\nYou'd see your friend's new profile picture and tap the like button while another one of your friends drove past you and honked. That friend still has a self driving car, and they still honk at you so they can see you. You don't look up, they see you relaxing in the front seat checking out your favorite band's Facebook.\n\nYour friend drives away without seeing your smile or wave. They see the squirrels playing together and the birds flying freely. How your friend wishes to be playing with you like when you two were eight years old, and just thought trucks were 'oh so cool'. To be free lke those birds your friend saw, he has that freedom. The freedom to make his own decisions. He's flying away to greater heights while you're stuck on the ground in your self driving metal box.\n\nSo, after all of these reasons, the technical issues, the lawsuits, and the progressing laziness that America is becoming; this is why I do not like the thought of self driving cars becoming a thing. We have the freedom to drive and so be it. Don't let the robot or computerized world take your life over. Don't let social media and laziness catch up to you. Be the bird and fly free, not the stone whom corrodes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are dangerus to other people. Do the cars still run on gas or are they the new kind that run on solor engergy? What happens if something brakes in the cars GPS and takes to some place els?You can't really tell what kind of truble these cars can be.\n\nDriverless cars are dangerus to other people.How can you know when there's some one infrunt of you like a child on a bike?Will the car stop?Probly not with out it being to late for the child. In fact the car might just go out of control and drive on the side walk running over people.\n\nDo the cars still run on gas or are they the new kind that run on solor energy? Ok for one if the cars run on gas how smart is that.How are you going to tell the car to stop at a gas station to refill. But if it's on solor energy how long will it last with out sunlight on a ranny day?.Say in the middle of the road you run out of energy and your stuck.\n\nWhat happens if the GPS brakes and takes you yo a diffrent place?You might end up on the other side of the contry or even in the ocean. And if you can't correct the car you might be suck in it for hours.I'd rather not take that chance.\n\nIn the end these cars are dangrust to everyone.Are they still good for the envierment?Can you stop the car if it starts taking you to a diffrent place? Will it really stop when needed to? You think about it and see what you think mabe you'll even get inside one of these death traps build for a family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona Lisa is said to have many different emotions. Eighty-three percent happy, nine percent disgusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry. Due to a new computer software, from Professor Thomas Haung of the Beckman Institute for Advanced science at the University of Illinois and Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam, we can calculate the emotions of people and how much of certain emotions they are feeling at the time. I believe this software can be very helpful to people in many different fields: in an office, at a restaurant, and especially in classrooms.\n\nThis new technology can be a very helpful tool in teaching all different types of students at their pace instead of teaching a specific groap of kids at one pace. In a classroom, it can be very intimidating and nerve recking to raise your hand and be the only one with a question. With the new software, the computer will detect if the child needs help or not by the facial expressions he, or she, makes and explain the lesson in a way that child would understand. Also, it can help teachers with the way they teach and the way they give out work. Since the computer can detect emotions, it can also detect they way the children are responding to the way the teacher is teaching and the homework he, or she, is giving them.\n\nIn conclusion, I think the bnew software will be very helpful, especilally in schools. It could be both beneficial to students and teachers and help strengthen the education systems. Most kids do not like to learn because it is too hard and because they can not comprehend it, but if learning could be made more understandable, or easier, lack of a better term, then a greater amount of students would be more open to learning and actually trying in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think venus would be worthy to explore because we dont know what on there for all we know there could be life on venus we just need to explore it more. We only had the chance to explore it only for a few hours.\n\nOn venus there is a lot of danger do we know that yes but so is going to the moon. And did we risk going to the moon yes we do we knew it was gonna be really dangerous but we chose to do it anyway. We know its dangerous going into space but we still did that anway. So whats gonna stop us from going to venus will it be dangerouse most likely but that shouldnt stop us.\n\nIn conclusion i think we should take the risk going to venus, Who knows what will find we may find nothing or we may find a life changing event or we all might wast our time we will never unless we try to take the risk Because things in life will be dangerous. So that is what i think about going to venus.\n\nI\n\nthink when it comes to studing this planet it is worth the danger. We can find ways to make it less dangerous do you think people did things nowa dayz know it was dangerous yes and this is where we are in life now. The planet maybe very hot but none of that is gonna stop us we should push through the danger. I belive there is always something to find no matter how dangerous it is sometimes that how we learn how thigns are. venus is another planet it has so many dangerous things but it also has so many things we can learn. Like has there ever been like on the planet or is there life hiding on the planet.\n\nOut of all of this this is what i think what should happen we should take the risk we shouldnt let anything get in our way. Nothing has stopped us before going to space why should we stop now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "name I writing I want inform benefits computers I think computers great way kids like learn things world Having computer also helps people need also inform people far away places world I beleive nt computers would nt really know much world Computers also help us send emergency messages across world Some people think computers effect onour society I one think computers positive effect people people also think computers make people spend less time exercising I believe actually helps people exercise go gives different exercising techniques In conclusion I think computers positive effect society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I believe computers positive effect people I believe talk people different countries quarter second send emails people finally go ask question get instant reply First talk people different countries Did ever relative go vacation foreigh country way calling see everything okay Lets say instance brought laptops cellphones Then way contact email Even happens keep touch email You even computer video chat wait get reply Next send emails people Have ever set somebody letter mail wait two three days reply Sometimes letter even lost way finding Well email wait time reply depends fast person talking types people I know type reply seconds I believe two three cars With email eghty three percent chance email lost If reason lost message sent telling message lost need sent new message But likely chances message wil reach destination go ask question get instant reply Were ever wondering something answer tip tongue cant think If probably would smart go You ask question get instant reply And I mean question ask questions wat price If wanted could ask math questions well square root pi From myspace internet full information positive effect people This I think positive effect people talk people different countries send emails ask sorts questions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. Do you ever get bored at school? This technology will help keep you concentrated and excited to do school work. The program is a good idea because it will keep kids from zoning out because their bored. It is a well needed device because, it will help students interested in school and not wake up in the morning and say,\" I dont want to go to school today.\"\n\nWe humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. But a teacher can't do it to every student at once. The program will see if kids are happy, sad, angry, and bored. Then it will change the lesson to adjust to your emotions. Say you were doing a lesson on the computer and it was really boring. The program would see that you are bored and adjust the lesson to make you interested in the lesson. This program would help a lot of students stay interested in schoool.\n\nSome might say it's an invasion of our privacy. It would invade our emotions and some might not like that. But this will help your kids stay interested in school and want them to porsue a career that they want because this taught them what they wanted to do and showed them what excites them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted reveals architects Empire State faced number obstacles Not construction building competive expectations unrealistic The idea masterpiece building held number potential problems architects competitive As workinprogress Chrysler building grew Empire State Building strived taller In order achieve greater heights architects suggested addition mooring mast make building tallest add purpose The addition mooring mast would require lot planning though If giant steel framed balloon dock top building could dangerously shake foundation building frame building rebuilt much stronger Also architects nt realized danger docking dirigibles Dirigibles blimps fueled hydrogen flammable proved threat thousands people living", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientist want to explore Venus and, gather further information about Earths Twin, some may call it. But, expolring Venus has dangers to it. For example, Venus's air consist of \"97%\" Carbon Dioxide, which is also dangerous because, you can't just breath in only Carbon Dioxide. Also the fahrenheit, is 800 degrees, and the preussure of Venus astmosphere is 90 times greater than the one on earth. Another expample, the passage states that, NASA has had a possible way to allow scientist to float above Venus 30 or more miles above Venus's surface.\n\nI think that they should not explore Planet Venus, for most of the reasons states in the passage.\n\nThe Weather on Venus, is mostly likey, and similar ours on earth. For example, the passage states that, Venus expirences \"erupting Volcanoes, powerful Earthquakes, and frequent of lighting strikes to probs seeking to land on its surface\"(paragraph 3 line12). The passage also states that, Venus is the hottest surface temperure of any planet in our solor system.\n\nVenus is also a challenging planet to explore. The passage states that, the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid, and the air consit of 97 percent carbon dioxide. The texts also staes that,\n\nall the previous mission(s) was unmanned, because no spacecraft surived the landing for more than a few hours. Another reason is, the temperture would be around 170 degrees, and the pressure would be about the same of the earths sea level. NASA says \"its not easy condistiomd, but survivable for humans\".\n\nVenus has a close relatable features of its surface like earths. For example, the texts states that, Venus has a rocky sediment and incules, valleys, mountains, and craters on its surface.\n\nEarth also has these feautres, like fore instance the Grand Canyon. Another example is, its would be hard to take samples of rocks, gas, or anything from Venus's planet because of the distance.\n\nThe weather, the feature, and why is challenging to explore is all thr reasons why, scietist want to study more about it. They want to see what challages they face, when they explore a planet and not just earths. NASA is working on approches to study and learn more about Venus, by using simlified electronics made of silicon carbide which has lasted about three weeks on Venus. Modern electronics now have the use to dig deeper, into the extreme physical condtion on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart illustrates the percentage of separated spouses in Finland and Denmark between 2011 and 2015. \r\n\r\nOverall, the features of Sweden slightly declined throughout the period. Despite that, the number of divorced families in Finland surged moderately over 4 years. The total proportion of divorces in Sweden outweighed the whole amount of Finland’s. \r\n\r\nIn 2011 the separation rate was around 43 per cent in Sweden. Then, the value demonstrated a growth which approximately 5 per cent and reached its highest feature in 2012. After that, the divorce data in Sweden fell gradually and decreased to about 36 per cent in 2015. \r\n\r\nFinland’s rates were nearly 40 and, 36 per cent in 2011 and 2012 respectively. After that time the value increased to around 42 per cent in 2014. Additionally, the rate remained the same in 2015. Moreover, Finland’s rate was higher than Sweden’s in 2015 around 3 per cent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced four main problems attempting allow dirigibles dock One problems solved three The first obstacle since dirigible would connected top building single cable enormous stress would put frame building This solved simply reinforcing frame Empire State Building cost sixty thousand dollars make modifications The second obstacle easily solved Dirigibles countries use hydrogen stay afloat Hydrogen highly flammable example Hindenburg blimp burst flame alerted owners builders Empire State Building dangerous accident like especially densely populated New York City could The third obstacle also proved impossible solve high speed winds top building would way dirigible safely During test Los Angeles navy dirigible could get close enough high winds It would easy dirigible spin control hit spire nearby building Lastly already law place prevented dirigibles flying close urban areas would make illegal fly ship New York City", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One thing people world love laugh Why like laugh Laughter every important lives brings us joy happiness fills stomachs butterflies One major thing laughter whole point view Of course everyone makes jokes dorky things simply funny comment All things cause laughter sometimes laughter helps people grow good relationship builds strong In relationships like boyfriendgirlfriend parents children family even friends laughter relationship would boring relationship At times s hard bring laughter picture least need try laugh healthy us laugh In families important grow relationship child parents need funny feelings stomachs make giggly inside could laughter Friends always funny moments laugh s sometimes pranks funny comments jokes s easy start laughing creating good relationship laughing Sometimes laughter could cause bad things use bad things could cause bad relationship We also nt want hurt someone s feelings laughing something happen someone made comment could leave us laughing much loose relationship someone The smiles people faces wonderful thing see In relationships laughter big thing always come handle People bad days sometimes always try make happy well s called laughing I know I bad day I felt depressed mushy I would like someone make laugh simply saying hilarious joke In personal opinion I love laughing especially making people around laugh At times I bad times need laughter system make feel least better I know sadness sometimes take need think positive let negative things take Life much better laughter Imagine world laughter life would wish could happen would make everyone full happiness smiles faces In personal life family friends full laughter I make jokes times things getting diffcult everyone freaking Laughter part us either like s always going us matter Eventually I would say laughter element life I always carry I hope everyone world element laughter seriously s important world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently,the way authorities spend money has never failed to provoke debates among people.While some argue that it is not justified to invest in technology for space discovery, others make a statement that there are more favourable ways to allocate this budget.I am in the middle of these schools of thought,yet the latter still outweighs its counterpart.\r\n\r\nIt goes without saying that space exploration plays a certain role in our life since it is the way for humans to find their new inhabitants.This dire problem comes from the fact that the Earth’s living conditions have to face tons of threats such as climate change,pollution which mainly stem from the irresponsible and improper actions of humans.These make the natural environment’s situation become more severe and can not be an ideal place to reside in anymore.Therefore,the government should spend money on developing space technology with a view to finding an inhabitable planet like the Earth as a backup plan to maintain human’s life in case having some urgent disasters.\r\n\r\nAlthough the importance of investing in space discovery is widely acknowledged,there are still some pressing fields that need financial support from the governors such as education. Apparently,education has been a backbone of the industry as it creates a well-educated workforce that can enhance productivity and economic growth.Consequently,the government should cash in this kind of aspect such as the scholarships with a view to assisting students who have low income and can’t cover their tuition fee.Moreover,thanks to education,the government will also be benefited from knowledgeable employees.Thus,it is obvious that education should be invested in.\r\n\r\n In conclusion,although discoveries about outer space bring a wealth of tremendous benefits to human beings,the authorities should distribute the budget reasonably to other aspects instead of just focusing on space exploration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think materials libraries music art stay active public libraries school libraries They show symbolic meaning ever changing world know People different beliefs anything I nt care say everybody still different opinion anything everything So keep believing want believe s fine nt ruin others ever heard saying nt anything nice say nt say anything well remember saying stick itIn years school nobody protested certain reading materials public libraries everyone read liked library supplied people material wanted read Let s say person wanted read book fall wall library says carry reading history person angry even though find book somewhere else still able find book library That history world know That compares people wanting destroy history made world history people risk lives recognized world compares topic fully I hope essay give protesters second thought topic bickering That", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone patient one time I know I A year brother I projet That needed computer finish I let brother go first Being one computer house I wait After hours I checked see brother close done He I remembered moment slow typer He finished next day In problem I lots time type paper This time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood author memoir thankful proud happy extremely thankful disspite happened life He proud Cuban heritage still proud today He listens Cuban Music cooks Cuban food Also happy In memoir happy tone proud thankful His parents immigrants Cuba still got education wanted even though parents went tough times", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is a wonderful landmark in the region of Cydonia on the planet Mars. Some think it was created by aliens, but this is, in fact, not true. The Face on Mars is really just a regular natural formation and had nothing to do with aliens.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a landform on Mars in the Cydonia region that has shadows and ditches that represent a human face. It is very unlikely that this could have been formed by aliens. According to the passage, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or eveb small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The picture is basically the same thing as a natural land formation on Earth, like a hill or mountain. The pictures taken were at the camera's maximum resolution, so if there were alien life, we would have seen it. The ludicrous notion that aliens had created the Face was just a conspiracy theory probably caused to freak people out or make them think that there are aliens on mars.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars is a normal rock formation, similar to those on Earth. Alien life had nothing to do with the creation of this landform, even though it looks like a face. If aliens do exist, then it is still unlikely that they created the Face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the Essay, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" , The author suports the claim that the knowledge and insight that could be gained from exploaring Venus outweighs it's risks, making it a worthy pursuit.\n\nThe author of the article admits that with todays current technology, it would be impossible to explore Venus. He lists facts that highlight Venus's inhabitability, such as \" No spacecraft has survived on venus for more than a few hours\", \"The atmosphere is almost 97% carbon dioxide\", and \"the clouds are of highly corrosive sulfuric acid\". The author presents these valid points and continues to list more before identifying any specific reward that outweighs them. No spacecraft has landed on venus in over 30 years, so why should we try again? The author reubtes these facts by indirectly claiming that we should attempt and expedition to venus because it is difficult. By overcoming a great and difficult task, we learn and advance more than by overcoming a simple and easy task.\n\nLet it be noted, The author does not expect anybody flying to venus with shear willpower. He also presents ideas and advancments in reguards to how we might be able to fly to venus. In Paragraph 5, the author presents the idea of a blimp, floating 30 miles above the venusian atmosphere, Could be maintained and be used in the research of Venus. At this altittude, the author lists \" temperatures would only be a toasty 170 degrees Fahrenheit\" and \"Air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth\". However, the author does not cover the resources needed to produce a spacecraft of the scale.\n\nEven if the author builds the fact that it is currently impossible to send a manned mission to Venus, The author does inspire interest in the topic. Through the description of several ideas that could be actualize into their desired goal, The author builds reason for belief of his topic.\n\nThe author ends his peice with the conclusion of \"Our Travels on Earth and beyonds should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and inovation\". This ending supports his arguement because it gives the argument that no matter what, knowledge will be gained and expanded from this challenging task. With knowledege being the reward, this makes the authors desire to Explore venus a very worthy persuit with consideration to it's dangers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso rodriguez Home mood created memoir growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative They showed lives teachings basis life reality way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear concern I know everybody dont uses computers people effect computers Well think computer better newspaper news papers could find news well course wheather houses sale tv casting jobs others way instead like virtual It benefits society certain reasons depends times computerscan negative effects people also teach people read write type learn What I talk others see pictures people google things need helps need find way around mapquest A negative issue computers internet certain websites age able Kids website thier parents dont bout looking boys meet People dying making plans someone next day person gone missing I think experts take away computers must kids well mad upset nothing play video games go outside opinions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives explains house effect child grow The mood memoir comforting I think memoir said plenty relatives around freinds probably made feel comfortable Also parents welcoming kind would probably feel comfortable That I think mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, some people believe that studying at university or college because it is the shortest way to accomplish a successful occupation, but there are some opposite aspects that seeking a job after school is more suitable. From my perspective, both of them have advantages that we should take it into consideration.\n\n On the one hand, if we choose to get a job after studying, we will have a chance to earn money, so it creates an independent lifestyle and income and easier to live without parents. For instance, my brother decided to live apart from my parents to look for a job, and he claimed that he would not receive any money from parents. After he found a job, he could pay for everything by himself. Moreover, getting a job can cut down on living costs for families and afford to start a family soon. Also, it helps us have more practical experiences, understand more workplaces and social skills, even have more relationship and make easier to have a quick success in career.\n\n On the other hand, we will have opportunities to improve our education level and acquire more academic knowledge if we continue to study at university. Therefore, it increases the chances of getting a job and lead to success shortly. What is more, we can find out more our possibilities and talents of ourselves like solving the formulas quickly and easily. Eventually, continuing to study at college can train more ability to research and live independently. Also, it accumulates both practical and academic experiences.\n\n In conclusion, getting a job after school and continuing to study at university or college have unique benefits that we should not miss.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Home The Blueprints lives creates distinct mood I think mood Warm caring comforting loving The author s home family oriented blood family His neighborhood family Racism norm segrigation prevailed When Narciso Rodriguez discribes sounds comforting loving He My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This brings happy light feel article coforting wellWhen Rodriguez I always grateful parents love sacrifice mood changes bit Now s admiring grateful compationate As Narciso Rodriguez discribes parents Struggle could grow nicer feel hes grateful loving The mood happy loving full compasion point This mood created Home The blueprints lives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology seems to advance further and further everday. We see new softwares and devices coming out fairly often. Although this technology is created, many people have opinions on how it will actually help in the long run. With the Facial Action Coding System, I believe this software is going to help in many ways. It will make all kinds of positive change in the classroom and even in places of work.\n\nOne positive change I believe it would make is to help children learn in the classroom. Kids have a tendency to get bored in class while learning, and often stop paying attention. This is a bad habit that can easily be fixed with the Facial Action Coding System. This software can detect change in emotion and help keep things interesting in the classroom. The author, Nick D'Alto, states that,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This software is the perfect way to always have the attention of students.\n\nAnother reason I think this Facial Action coding System is extremely valuable in the classroom is because it works with children all over the world. I believe that is extremely important. Children all over the world will be getting a higher education while having a better experiece, because their school time will be spent learning about things they enjoy, and not staring a screen with blank minds. D'Alto writes that, \"the facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" So this software can be used anywhere and on anyone very efficiently.\n\nAlthough this software has some great benefits, it also has a downfall. One problem with the Facial Action Coding system is the price. I'm sure given the amount of detals and time put into it, it comes with a bit of a price tag. Some schools may not be able to afford it. This is still a great product though, and it should still be available to the schools that can afford it. Many schools would find this to be helpful, and most likely invest. Eventually, as the software becomes more common, access to it will become easier and the price will not be a problem.\n\nWhile most technology has a few slight inconviences, this software only seems to have one. The Facial Action Coding System seems to be extremely innovative. I hope to see this product in schools soon, available to children. The boredom and confusion of these children will no longer exist, which will make these kids all the more happier to go to school and continue their education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You visitor click get prize That normal thing computers give viruses people get personal information That one reason computers bad On top CAPS computers kids obducted day says missing child agency They get obducted kids go rooms get trouble On another note rely computers much healthy us CAPS ads cause many problems says More people world computers This world wide poll More kids When kids computers always click ads These ads cause catastropic problems Peoples computers get viruses identities get stolen credit card information gets found Therefore things happening going yell kids ca nt blame thought going get free xbox Now I told ups let tell chating Chating computer bomb waiting set CAPS rooms main Now I told chating let tell people rely much Instead looking book read Everyone thinks computer answer every problem reality things internet false says Technology magazine deals disadvantages technology I remember I needed know flight cancled I went google looked The website I went said cancled later I called airport make sure said took scheduled And instead email send letter Do want kids obducted fo rooms course want miss flight vacation No I dont think computers bad used often No one wants identity stolen ad We need things often stop relying computers everything us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going to talk about the story \"the challenge of exploring venus,\" and im going to explain how well the author supports venus and his ideas and the idea of studying venus a worthy pursuit depite the dangers. And why he did a good job in supporting this idea of studying venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea of studying venus by explaining the dangers of venus and its dangeours conditions. The text states \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth.\n\nAnother reason why the author supported the idea of studying venus is that venus hasan't been discover or explored over 3 decades is because of the dangers in venus and its conditions. The text states \" Each previus missin was unmanned, and for good reason, no spacecraft survied the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\"\n\nThe last reason why the author did well in supporting the idea of studying venus is scientist have hope in studing and exploring venus because is close to us and we could travel there. Alsois similar to earth long ago. The text states \"astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system> Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some fetures that are analogous to those on Earth.\" \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"\n\nAnd this is why the author did a good job in supporting the idea of studying venus and whyis a good planet to studdy and explore despite the dangerous of the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How setting place effects cyclist one dry cyclist would ridy haurst shouldnt place thats dryLike story says I travelling high parts California June meaning really hot drySecond would animals dangerousA cyclist riding place diamond back snakes says text I toiled onAt point tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously larger skilt really look like adiamond back really one would really dangerous cyclist riding type dangerous places matter type areThat settings surrandings effect cyclist its bad place ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, which is sometimes called \" Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for people to see it at night time, even an amateur stargazer could easily spot it.Venus is also called Earth's \"twin\" because venus is the closes planet to earth in terms of density and size.\n\nThe author gives a great evaluation about\n\nthe way he supports the idea of studying venus whhic is honestly a great idea but he also talks about the wonders of venus and also challenges that they would come across such as like th atmosphere, it's inhospitable, but Venus was long ago just but it went trough some extreme climat changes and that's why is inhospitable now.\n\nConcluding all it would be great to go and study venu's surface because it would help understand how it changed so much trough the years and what made it change so much, and also help reach further out into the universe. Humans have already gone to the moon, why not go further?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this argument I'm going to tell you why the face on Mars, is acually a landform.\n\nOn the red planet called Cydonia A.K.A Mars. Twenty five years ago NASA Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars snapping photos of landing sites when they came across a landfrom that looked like a human face. When scientist saw the picture they thought it was just another martian mesa, that is common around in Mars, but it had unusual shadows that made it look like a Egyptian Pharaoh. A few days later NASA showed the image for all to see. The caption was \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.\" They thought it would be a good way to attract attention, but some people think the face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization in Mars, although few scientist believed the face was an alien artifact. The first image appered on a web site, revealing... a natural landform it was actually a martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landform common around the american west\n\nThat was my argument I hope you will take my side that the face was not created by aliens and it was mearly a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Electoral College vote is important because it is the government officals who make up that vote. They have experiece with governent matters so they could have better judgement than the majority population.\n\nNow that statement it not one hundred percent accurate but I would guess that the people running the country would hopefully have a decent idea for who should run everything. Now this doesn't mean that everyone in higher power is smart and knows what choices to make. Some would argue that none of them have any idea what they're doing. I have slightly more faith then those folks. I think the Electoral vote is important, just not as important as it currently is. I think the Electoral college vote counts but I do agree that it shouldn't be the most important group of vouters. Voting should be by the people for the people. So the majority vote should be the primary source.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that the Electoral College vote is important but not as important as the majority population vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this world, we want to gain more knowlege to better understand what's around us.\n\nNow, scientists want to be in the next level of understanding. They want to gain more information about the Venus. Venus is also called,\"Evening Star.\"\n\nThey know that it is a very dangerous thing to accomplish. However, they're still doing it anyway. The author even says,\"Is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" He also said,\" To contribute meaningfully to our knowlege of Venus.\"\n\nScientists study many things, they explore many planets: Such as Moon, Mercury, Saturn, etc. But this, it's beyond what numbers of people to even imagine doing it.\n\nIn paragraph 2; the author help me relize, Scientists love challenge. The author said that, \"Since no spacecraft survived the land for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" They know more facts about the danger of this mission. This is what happens, when people set their mind and fucus, nobody can stop them. Still, they willingly to go, the fact knowing the \"conditions are far extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\"\n\nScientists believe seeking to understand is more crucial; despite the risks of dangers. They focus on completing mission that no human has ever done before.\n\nThey were motivated by their own believes. They were inspire and get courage on their own ways. The author said,\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers an doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" It means learning and gaining knowlege should not be stop wether it was on Earth or beyond. But rather, increase it to the fullest to reach out expectation.\n\nThe author gaves us a way to accomplishes the impossible. It was by not giving up and continues to believes in how we started.\n\nWhen gazing up the star, we were dazzled by the sprakled. But to look closer, it's a dream came true. We see how wonderful it was. But if we keep on imagine and never do it, it won't come true. Only, if we cast out fear aside and our doubts, then take a step forward. We know that we'll meet our expectation. This is what the author wants us to believes in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers positive effect peoples lives They big helpers They teach skills need life The technology abilities help us tasks every day Finally help people keep touch meet knew people I think computers positive effect lives Computers teach us many things First learning use computer skill need life At jobs know work computer Today computers essential part work enviornment Handeye coordination another skill computer teaches Computers actually help sports way To catch ball need handeye coordination The technology computer gives us helps us alot life If need directions look computer If could nt would call resturant directions Without computers help would write papers For students would nightmare reports without computer We would read many books get information The world would much different place without computers Sometimes people love move far away us It s hard keep touch phone happens The computer keep touch With programs like facebook twitter possible You chat pictures You could even keep touch Computers almost anything possible In conclusion computers great machines They teach us life long lessons They help us need something report Computers even keep people touch relationships nt fall apart I nt know I think computers keep world running", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite the challenges of studying Venus. Scientists suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Venus has a lot of dangers and challenges. Scientists suggests studying is worthy for many reasons. For example the humans curiosity.The challenges of studying are the hot temperatures and high pressures. Another challenge of studying is the highly corrsive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nScientists are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Scientists suggest that Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus can somtimes be out nearest option for planetary visits. NASA's possible solution to the conditions on Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. This vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the dangerous ground conditions.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. Scientists are trying to avoid the dangers of Venus while stufying the planet, Scientists are woking on technology. Some of the projects scientists are working on is the old technology. The old technology called mechanical computers were first envisioned in the 1800's the computer played an important role in the 1940's during World War ll.\n\nScientists are studying the planet Venus because of the curiosity. Scientists say that Venus has value. The challenges of studying the planet Venus won't stop scientists from studying Venus. Scientists will continue to make technology that will hold all of the challenges of Venus. Many researchers are working on innovations that woul allow out machines to last long enough to contribute the knowledge of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face of Mars\n\nWhat if the Face on Mars was actually created by aliens? How would have the world reacted? Well we wouldn't know. The face on mars is actually a mesa that happens to be shaped like a face. We know that the face on mars was not created by aliens because there are no signs of life, as far as NASA knows there is no life on mars, the Face of mars is just a mesa, but if the Face was created by aliens we would be able to see symbols and signs but all you can see are just small vallys and ridges. Aliens did not build the face on mars.\n\nAs far as we know there is no visible life on mars. The reason for this is because mars is inhabitable. The conditions are mars are to harsh for any living organism to be able to live. There have been many expiditons by rovers that have roamed the red planet for years and still have not seen any forms of life. The author states, \"There was no alien monument after all.\" With all this it would be almost impossible for a life form to be able to live on Mars.\n\nEventhough there is no visible life on Mars there has never been a sign of life ever being on Mars. Again with all the probes and missions to Mars there has never been a one-hundred percent fact that there has been life on Mars. The Mars rovers have taken over 100 samples and still have found no signs of life ever being on the planet. When the author quotes Jim Garvin, We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it. The reason for this is because the planet has no life on it and if the only exciting thing that the scientists at nasa could find was just a mesa that looks like a face.\n\nAll in all this is not a creation made by aliens it is a mesa on the Red Planet Mars. NASA has released facts about why this wonder of mars is just a normal natural landform. Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001a cloudless summer day in CydoniaMars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view, said Garvin.\", the author also gives us this peice of information, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" With this all being said with the high resoloution picture and the quote from the scientist at NASA you can say for sure the Face is a natural land form.\n\nAlthough some people might say this is not a natural land form. They might say that it is a alien artifact left by some martians or some garbage like that. Some people dont under stand that crazy land forms canjus occur naturaly. The author gives the reader a wonderful example of this on our own planet, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West. It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, says Garvin. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. So if we on earth believe that the mesas in the American West can be made by the earth doing what it does why cant Mars make its own land forms.\n\nThe face of mars is just a natural land form in one of Mars's mesas. There are no signs of life on mars, There have never been any signs of life on mars, and the Face of mars is just a cool looking formation made by a mesa biome. So what will you be doing accepting that the Face of Mars or looking to every little nook and cranny of the web of lies called the internet to find out what the real truth is about the Face of Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenges that we have in our world of tecnology is that some of it is not good enough and that is ok because we are getting better. The challenges we face trying to go to Venus is that there is a thick atmosphere of almost 97% Carbon Dioxide is covering it in like a blanket which is very hard to get through. According to the author, \" Often referred to as Earth's (twin,) Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" It would be nice to have another planet to go to in case of this one had gotten distroyed or in like population. We have faced many challenges in our technology now that trying to go to another planet like Venus in paticular, maybe in the future we could live there but not now, It would be nice to have another planet to go to if there was something bad to have happen to our planet now or maybe if we got to crowded in this world with the population.\n\nThe challenges we face trying to go there is that its is the second planet from the sun so it would be hot. Our technology is not good right now but soon it will be good enough to have successfully landed on Venus. The seasons like on Earth are months but on venus it might not be. Not a single spacecraft has landed or has survived a landing which is very scary. It has said in the article, that not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus for more that three decades. This is one of the challenging planets but soon in the end when we figure it out and we will celebrate. Also on our planets surface temperatures averages over 800 degrees Farenheit, but Venus atmospheric pressure is over 90 times greater than what we experience now on our own planet! There is no way that if our technology cant make it then there is no way that we are. Not even a second.\n\nWe cannot live there for so many reasons but soon we will have been able to figure it out successfuly landed on Venus. There is reasons why we cannot live there and here is some reasons why. Venus is the hottest planet and its the second planet from the sun. Mercery is the planet that is the closest to the sun but Venus is the second but yet it is the hottest. Its very hot but we probably would have no season because the Venus spins an orbits around us alot faster than we do. The carbon dioxide, acid, and even gas is scary poisons that can kill us in seconds. Also that we would have to worry about if we did go there. If none of our spaceships can go there and not survive then we are more than likely not to have survived by the time we reach the outer layer.\n\nIt would be nice to live there but there are so much bad that could happen to us. If we were to have figured it out then we are more and likely to surive if we could also figure out what we can do to keep us alive like maybe have a space suit on the whole time. We could totally go to one planet and have a greater chance of living then to be stuck on one and be trapped. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well be the only chance that we have. It is almost Earth-like planet in our solar system alone. Venus was probably once covered in largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. Venus has a surface of rockey sefiment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountins, and even craters. Venus is also the nearest option for planetary visit, but the crucial visit of space travel to get some people there is going to take awhile. Is it an identical twin to us and it is the closests to size and even density.\n\nIt would be a good place to go and seek shelter if our world would have gotten distroyed. In the long run it would be really good to figure it out and actually have a spacecraft successfully land. There are its challenges but we as humans do not give up until we find the answers. We will have eventually be on Venus but it will take a long time considering that it has taken 3 decades and it might be longer to have sent out a spacecraft and it succesfully land. The reasons why we can't live there is many of reasons but we will soon fine out ways. Even NASA has an idea of what could work. It might be a really dumb way but in the end if it does work then we will have successfully be on Venus. Even if we are floating blimp like around 30 or so miles about the roiling Venusial landscape.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senitor,\n\nThe Electoral College is an ineffeciant way to cast presidential votes. We the people vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If we were to change to election by popular vote then the elecions would be truly fair. After all, it was said by our founding fathers that we the people are who change the government and the face of our nation. It would lead to more voters and an overall better quality of said electee.\n\nThe Electoral college voting system is flawed in many different aspects, such as the chance we take of electing electors that may be biased as much as to betray their pledge and vote for a presidential canidate that you did not vote for them to vote for. Voters cannot control whom their electors vote for.\n\nThe Electoral college is unfair to voters and irration in all. It is anachronial and non reliable and should be abolished and replaced.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard of \"The Face on Mars\"? At NASA, we believe that the face is just a natural landform on mars. The face is a natural landmark that was discrovered on Mars. Nasa sometimes sends out intelligent drones to take an adventure on Mars. The drones explore parts of the planet, bringing back information of new landscapes or discoveries. The Face gets explored by the drones and the drones always send new information back about the glamorous and unique landmark. Some people even believe that the Face was created by Aliens.\n\nIn addition the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" article, provides us various details that support my claim of the Face just being a landmarks. Twenty-five years before May 24th of 2001, scientists from NASA discorvered this landmark, that not long after, went viral. Citzens in the country made up theories of the Face and how it somehow is an alien making and the individuals chose not to believe the intelligent individuals over at NASA's space center who say it is simply a mesa. Most people are smart enough to have the knowledge of Aliens and how their non-exisitent to the galaxy. The world would defintley be terminated and in trouble, if more people believed in aliens versus, those who do not believe.\n\nDo you belive in aliens? If Mars did have aliens, where are their houses at? What are there water sources but where are their shelter aswell? Zero gravity is two extravagant words to describe Mars. Think about this, on earth we have gravity and it hold us down versus living on Mars floating through out the galaxy.\n\nWould their be little alien babies playing with astroids in the air?\n\nEven though, some might think that aliens made the Face because of all the alien markings and sucipisious sounds, at NASA we believe that their are no aiens. The Face is a masterpiece made from a mesa, not silly non-earthly creatures. To create such an artwork, the aliens woud have had to be seen while constructing the glamorous landmark.\n\nOverall, aliens did not create the landmark, it was created by a mesa. In the United States Of America, there are many landmarks that people would say would be created by aliens, if they landed on Mars. The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, potrays something very simuliar to the Face. If you think that the Face was created by aliens does that mean you believe all of the simuliar landmarks such as the one in Idaho that is on United States territory were created by aliens too?\n\nAt NASA, we have completed various amounts of research to know that the Face was not created by Aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays the sentences that judges give to criminals is always at the centre of attention of the society; some people think that the best way to reduce the amount of crime cases is to give longer prison sentences, while, others say that there are other alternative ways to stop it. This essay will talk about both views and, at the end, I will give my opinion about the argument.\nIt is always more common to see long sentences for criminals, also if their crimes are not too bad to deserve that type of punishment; the reason why the court gives to them long sentences is because they think that staying a lot in prison will make the criminals understand that what they did is wrong and, next time, they will think twice before doing something bad or against the law.\nHowever long sentences can go against the human rights because they will take away from prisoners years of their life; for this reason, some people think that it can be better if, instead of stay close in a jail without doing nothing, they can be used in various works that will make them useful for the society and better person at the end of the sentence, like cleaning the city, helping old people in retirement homes and also cook for poor people.\nI think that there are other ways to stop crime instead of giving long punishments, also because everyone should have a second chance in their life and, more importantly, teach and show to prisoners different aspects of the community will help cities to become better places with less crimes to stop.\nThis essay talked about two different types of views about crime sentences in our society, with my own opinion about the argument in the last part of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyday technology is changing for the better. There is a lot of contriversy about cars. Wheather they should be driverless or not. I belive that it is not a good idea for the cars to be driverless. I think this becuase humans are smarter, technology fails sometimes, and it will be too expensive. The idea of cars being driverless is scary.\n\nFirstly, I believe that humans are smarter than any computer in the world. Humans know what is going on whereas computers dont know as much. comeputers can fail to sense something and get in bad accidents. Drivers also have better senses, computer can always fail. I belive that humans should be the only ones driving the cars.\n\nAnother reason that i think cars should not be driverless, is becuase technology always fails. What if one of the sensors fail and you loose control of the car. The artilce said that the cars arn't fully driverless, so what is the point. Also, computars can glitch and cause horrible accidents. technonlgy is not very reliable.\n\nlastly, another reason why cars shouldn't be driverless is becuase it would cost a a lot of money. Cars will have many sensors and devises that are very expensive. The roads will also need to have some senors in them and that will cost a fortune. the cars will also need a lot of energy to keep all the sensors running, which will mean that the battery will need to be changed constantly, and batterys arn't very cheap. I belive that it will cost to much money to make the driverless car.\n\nIn conclusion, I belive that driverless cars shouldn't be made. Driverless cars will cost toom much, humans are smarter, and technology is not reliable. Driverless cars will cause alot of debt and accidents. It is pointless to make them if the driver will always need to be there taking the wheel. So the cars are not completely driverless. Driverless cars are not a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The evolution of cars have mostly been focussed towards design and fuel efficientcy for many years, rather than a way to have a car that helps the driver drive. Cars are a big part of Many people's lives so it would make sense to improve on the machine thats most people use daily. The safty of this technology may scare some people at first nomous but the car compnay will assure the safety of the consumers. This innovative technology may not be accepted at first, but many experts already projected a time when this will be seen as common.\n\nThese cars can help with accedent prevention because the LIDAR tecnology can react quicker than humans can. Another example of this car showing more safety is that it will stay to the regulate speed instead of going over it. Not only does this work for safety but it can also be more efficient by going on the fastest route with its built in GPS.\n\nAlthough the benefits are there, people will continue to be scared of this technology. This technology was not possible in the past, so many people weren't aware of it. This could be the reason why some are against the idea of autonomous cars.\n\nMost people do not like change and this could be the reason why some are against this idea of a self driving car. Even though some people are resistant to change at first, many time they will give in and in turn, like the change. People may be scared of deciding who is at fault for an accedent, but the technology malfunctioning is just unlikely. Google has shown this by sending their own autonomous car that had gotton into only one accedent. That one accedent may sound scarey, but it wasn't the autonomous car's fault. Human error is many times more likely than the technology failing and the law will insure that the companies include safety features with the car\n\nAlthough this new idea may be frightening at first, many experts already project a time when this technology will be common. Many people may not like this concept and many will simply not have it. Having this available for public use does not mean that everyone has to get one of these cars, it is just better for people who do want them. Once the safety measure are shown to be profficient enough, there will be no reason to not have this technology on the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's era, children are more impacted by famous personalities. People claim that, celebrities are followed more for a fashion and money than their intelligence. This essay will argue, why young ones are impacted and how it creates a wrong influence on them.\nCelebrities have a great influence on the younger ones. Social media plays a vital role to make an ordinary individual turning into a famous personality over night helps to make them look extraordinary. No matter what, if the person lacks any talent, but exceptionally good at showing off money will get famous soon. For example, a rich person can post a video of riding of his/her latest Tesla car on Instagram and that video will be liked by millions of people around the world, that's how they get recognised. Overall, young generation is easily attracted to a materialistic world rather than admiring actual efforts.\nDespite celebrities being highly followed they leave a negative impact on the minds of young ones. Children try to imitate them in every sense, moreover, they desire to be one of them in a mere future, which directly impact their career in the initial stage of education. Also, they devote precious time on copying them instead of focusing on their studies. For instance, children try to maintain glamour by wearing same clothes and making videos to the perfection, which impacts their interest in homework. In short, young generation is easily bullied by the fake world without thinking the negative aspects.\nThis essay argued that younger individuals are mesmerized by the spark of famous personalities ignoring their hard work and talent. In my opinion, it is rightly said that children are more attracted towards celebrities because of their looks and richness than their skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most driving laws focus on keeping divers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, but could the development of driverless cars have an affect on poeples actions while in the car? Haveing a car that is in need of little human interaction could give the driver an exuse to drive drunk. The cars system could fail and create a problem instead of preventing one. Finally how are the privers waiting for their turn to take over going to maintain focus.\n\nWill having these self driving cars give more people the idea that it is ok to drive under the influence? In this atical, it is stated that a human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation reguires human skills. A driver that is not in a state were they can make a snapy disicion. Tjis could lead to the failer of taking, this could end up making a huge inpact on the lives of other people aound them.\n\nHow can we be sure that the car will fail to serve its perpose? The second detail to catch my eye was the question asked in the article \"If the technology fails ans someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" With any vehicle there is always a chance of a mecanichle failure. In a smart car there are many peices of technology that are important to insure everyones safety. Even with the chance of a driverless car being completed there are potentialy more chances of one peice of this technology malfunctioning and creating a problem.\n\nFinaly how will we keep the drivers focus on the road? This article quotes the words spoken by Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver. Werner speaks of the challanges of psychological aspects of automation and how we will have to interpret the driving fun in a new way. People falling asleep might become a big problem, the action of paying attention when the work is done for you, may not be a simple task.\n\nThe idea of a driverless car is a dangerous idea to be playing around with. Haveing a car that is in need of little human interaction might cuase the thought that drunk driving would be safe. The cars system could fail and not allow the driver to take over. The driverless car could cuase a huge problem with maintaining focus, this could mean someone failing to take over when needed. In conclusion when all of the work is done for a driver, it could lead to problems that might have been otherwise prevented.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sports, be it any kind, has an impact on children's education. Sports keep children healthier,happier and mentally sustained. The intensity of this impact depends upon different factors. But, anything which is over-done also has its negative consequences. So, we can say that competitive sports have both advantages and disadvantages regarding a child's educational career.\r\n\r\nNow, let us look at an example of a student, who is studying full-time and is not involved in any kind of sport. This kind of student often finds it difficult to socialize and is isolated from the rest of the world. After assessing his situation, one might find that his natural tendencies of communicating with other people have declined. \r\n\r\nConsider another one, for instance, a student who is just focusing on competitive sports all the time. The obvious result would be, his results will start to fall behind. He will not have knowledge about different subject matters and automatically will face problems in his career and job. \r\n\r\nSo, what should be the median of both these situations?. People arguing that competitive sports are important for keeping a child on his track, to make his life healthier, are right to some extent. While, other people arguing that it has negative impacts, are also right as well. But, it all comes down to balance. If a student knows how to balance education and sports, side-by-side, he will not only succeed in his career-oriented life, but also, will excel mentally and physically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children around world find wandering library every day These children exploring literature world learn grow The library wonderful place many genres literature children books nonfiction books fiction books adult books movies etc There certain genres certain age groups lot materials libraries parents want children even hear name I think normal parents feel way neccesary Children right explore literature world however want Reading different types literature terrific way learning library shelves stripped books occupying space There many different types books movies magazines music shelves library These great forms literature way learning different things Although lot parents want children exposed materials If child want s read book let read crying loud Parents might say corrupting child books music nt corrupt children s environment people around said ability cause corruption It normal thing parent protective child certain extent A parent supposed help child grow learn right wrong They every right protect child dangers world keep learning art literature They re supposed sheild child faults world even book Literature every form great way learning Libraries nt strip shelves wonderful books crated literature world one s entertainment learning If child want s read book every right read book They able explore however desire", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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