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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that great leaders are born and not made. Others, however, feel that leadership skills are developed over time through training, experience and mentoring. In my opinion, good leadership is a combination of both natural abilities and persistent practice.\r\n\r\nThose who feel that leadership is a characteristic that some people are born with might argue that good leaders possess optimism and energy that will encourage others to work together effectively. In fact, some studies have shown that these characteristics are genetic, as are certain individual talents that one may be blessed with at birth. Furthermore, people such as Barack Obama, have a certain charisma that allows them to inspire passion and energy in others, and this particular trait is also believed to be innate.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, many people consider leadership a skill that can be learnt. There are other elements that make someone a great leader, such as discipline and resourcefulness, which can definitely be developed through ones childhood/up-bringing. Furthermore, the credibility of a true leader is built on his self-confidence and mastery of his area of expertise which only emerge after a great deal of time and experience. Without these qualities, a leader’s capability may be questioned, and as a result, people are unlikely to heed the leader’s direction.\r\n\r\nPersonally, I think the skills and attributes of a good leader are both genetic and enhanced through training, experience and a lot of persistent hard work. There are many people born without natural leadership skills that can still become good leaders in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been the main use for transportatation from one distant destination to another. The population is relying on cars more often to get them to were they need to be. Everyone in the communities are becoming lazier and cannot bother to grab a bike or even a pair of skates to help them get where they need to go. More and more of the population do not want to walk to the store which is usually down the street. Cars have even been polluting the atmosphere causing numerous issues, such as health problems and even a rise in the temperature of the planet. The purpose of this essay is to inform fellow citizens of the advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nBy limiting the amount of cars we have in the country or even by reducing the days one can use their car, can dramatically reduce the pollution in the atmosphere and also cause citizens to become more active and healthy. \"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg, near the French and Swiss borders.\"(Source 1, Paragraph 2). Vauban is one community to begin their journey to becoming a car reduced area. \"As a result, seventy percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and fifty-seven percent sold a car to move here.\"(Source 1, paragraph 3). As said by one of the residents, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heindrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.\"(Source 1, paragraph 3).\n\nParis is another city to take on the challenge of limiting the use of cars. Paris is a city where there is an abundance od smog and pollution. \"After days of near-record pollution Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\"\n\n(Source 2, paragraph 10). Because of such effort, \"Congestion was down sixty percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\"(Source 2, paragraph 14). By limiting car usage citizens have only one option, to get up find a bike or running shoes and set out for the day. By doing this the peoples can become very healtthy and reduce the chances of life treatening illnesses, such as cancer and others such as diabetes and lung and heart problems. Just think of the environment, by using less cars we can lower of even completely stop the effects of global warming which can lower the the rising of the sea and help to stop the destruction of the ozone.\n\n\"BOGOTA, Colombia-In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or even took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of trafic jams.\"(Source 3, paragraph 20). These simple and energizing activities can get you to where you need to be and also gets and keep you active and moving. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\"(Source 3, paragraph 24). \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift, \" said Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University and director of its Mobilities Research and Policy Center.\"(Source 4, paragraph 35). The world is changing and with it the health of the people and the condition of the environment.\n\nBy taking time from using motor vehicles we can lower the pollution of the world and improve the health of the people who live in it. By lowering the production of cars, citizens will have no choice but to grab their bikes or skates or even running shoes and begin to move. The time is now for the community to change. Many different cities have already started their change with cars and now is the time for you to join in the movement. One step at a time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features setting affect cyclist way hot quickly coming dehydrated Another feature building seem either abandoned despair", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people that want to make a difference should particepate in the sea cowboys. Before I joined the seacowboys I kust finished high school and I was working two jobs. I was working at a grocery store and a bank. When my friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe with him on a cattle boat I couldn't say no. I knew it was an opportunity of a life time!\n\nWhat we were doing was for the countries that were left in ruins we have to give them livestock so that they don't die of starvation. On the two month jouney I turned 18 before reaching Greece. That meant that I could drafted for the military service, but when they found out I was on a cattle boat they said to keep doing what I was doing for my service. By the time I was discharged in 1947 I had made 9 trips (more than anyother seagoing cowboy). That is what I did for two years.\n\nIf you are thinking about joining the seagoing cowboys I highly recomend it. The seagoin g cowboys need strong ,smart and people that are willing to go away from family for a while to help other people. We are leaving this year on july 5,2016. Bring things that you know you will need. Try to only bring the nesecities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It seems that almost everyone I know has a car. However, cars are the creators of a large number of problems. There are a number of reasons that less car usage would be beneficial to our society. This could include limiting pollution and congestion, improving health, as well as saving money.\n\nCars are responsible for a large part of greenhouse gas and carbon emissions. Cutting car usage would immensely help our environment, which is a goal that many people want to achieve. In some cities in the United States of America, cars are responsible for as much as 50 percent of greenhouse gas emissions. Some cities, like Beijing, China are so polluted, that smog is abundant throughout much of the city, making walking and other outdoor physical activities very unpleasant. Limiting car usage would help narrow that pollution a lot. Our environment has been negatively affected for a long time due to car usage, so it is time for that to change.\n\nWhile many people would say that cars are a necessary means of transportation, there are many other available sources to cut car usage. These sources could include walking, bicycling, skating, taking a bus, carpooling, as well as many other activities. Not only do some of those activities not pollute our environment, but they are also healthy excercises. Cars are also a large reason for accidents and injuries. A large number of people die or get injured every day due to car crashes. While many people are safe drivers, car accidents are almost unavoidable.\n\nLimiting car usage is another way of saving money, which is something that just about everyone I know wants to do. You end up spending a lot of hard earned money on gas or insurance rates because of cars. I know that many of my teenage friends are always bugging their parents for gas money. By using other means of transportation, that money could be saved and spent on something worthwhile to you.\n\nBy now, you should see all the positive effects of limiting car usage. While cars are a large part of transportation, there are a number of available sources of transportation that can be used instead. I hope that next time you are planning on going somewhere, whether it be spending time with friends or going to work, you will think about another source of transportation besides a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should become a Seagoing Cowboy, like in the article \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" for many reasons. One reason, is that you get to help animals and people after WWII according to the text, \"World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more,\"(2). You get to transport animals to new areas to graze. You'd be able to help people get out of poverty.\n\nYou could also get to see places you don't usualy see. For example, \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,' he says. 'So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.' Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete\"(5). Most people would never see those places in a lifetime.\n\nSpeaking of lifetimes, most people who live average lives will probably never get a chance to do this. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy,\"(5). After the job, you may never do it again.\n\nWhile riding the boat, you still get time for fun activities like \"Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\"(8) So, you won't be completely bored while riding to the next area.\n\nLuke(the charicter from the story) also said that \"being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. 'I'm grateful for the opportunity,' he says. 'It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.' And that awareness stayed with him,\"(9) So over all, you get to make memories of the places you've been, and help people and animals in need, better understanding the world around you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont think the use of the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because, students should at least have the right to there own personal thoughts. Students are in a building all day with other students and teachers that they might not trust, like, or let alone even know. Students have no freedom in school, teachers make or tell students what to do everything is watched, students are constantly told what to do by adults that they dont know, let alone trust. So i think students should have the right to keep there personal thoughts, opinions, and emotional expressions as private as they want them to be. Unless you know the student is in danger that students personal thoughts, emotional expressions, and opinions should be kept as private as they wish until they are ready to talk about whatever the situation could have been.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short passage discusses architects want build mooring mast Empire State Building state New York This mast would dock dirigibles modern day re called blimps The mooring mast skinny tower top Empire State Building dock Dirigibles Empire State Building stands feet tall without mooring mast peakThe stress dirigible mooring mast feet lot weight high structure They put modifications deal base area buildingAn important downfall dirigibles helium re flammable could cost several millions damage If zeppelin caught flame densely populated land area could take large amount livesI think mooring mast great idea helped building tallest building one time They still use mooring mast today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Techology is now reading your emotions? The Facial Action Coding System is a computer that can read your emotions. That your not able to understand. The techology to read the emotional experssion of students in a classroom should be allowed because it can detect if a student is not understanding the teacher and can actually describe each trait.\n\nReading the emotional experssion of students in a classroom should be allowed because it can detect if a student is not understanding the teacher. It's importent for teachers to be able to know how there students are doing in there class when knowing there emotions. In the article Dr. Huang says, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" \" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrutor. \"knowing the students emotions can benitfit the teacher and the student.\n\nAnother reason that the Facial Action Coding System should be used is because it can describe each facial traits. Instand of a friend trying to describe your facial traits and getting them incorrect. The Facial Action Coding System can actually calculate every single facial trait that you have. In the article it says. \" Can actually describe each facial trait that convey happy, worried, ect. \" This could be helpful for people that don't know there emotions.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System should be used in a classroom. To read the emotional experssion of students in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being an Seagoing Cowboy is amazing. You can do and see many exciting things just going to your destination. You can help people in need when you get there, when on your way to help others you can visit places that you haven't visited before, and when your a Seagoing Cowboy you can have a varity of things you can do.\n\nFirst off, you can help people in need. When you are a Seagoing Cowboy you help people that just came out of war, so they need help to get back on their feet. When you get there can be assigned a person you can help and hel them. The person your helping can be very nice, you might even become friends with them. Besides, they fought for your country, at lease helping them would be nice.\n\nSecondly, you can visit many places you haven't seen. Have you ever wanted to go some where but didn't have the time to, well becoming a Seagoing Cowboy you can. For example, when I was helping people I got the benefit of seeing Europe and China. I also, visited Venice, Italy on my to China. One more place I visited was Panama Canal also on my way to China. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy gives you the once in a life time opportunity to see and go places where you might never get to go again.\n\nLast but not least, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy you can have a varity of things to do. When I was on the boat I was assigned to help my aunt Katie on her farm. Then on my second trip I served as night watchman. I had to look after the animals make sure they were doing okay. I played many games to. Bsaedall, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, and reading, whittling just to name a few.\n\nIn summery, be an Seagoing Cowboy can be very fun. You can do fun stuff you like to do, you can visit places that you haven't seen, and you can help people in need. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy just might be the best thing you posibly can ever do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I patient Was I go river dad two sisters CAPS way I m patient dad says going north So I chose patient two houre trip But train track brige dad least use tack brake eat lunch brige one houre ride river realy way whe dad go slot hole way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The elecoral college is a group of electors that vote for the president and vice-president. \"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" (What Is The Electoral College, 1) They consist of 538 electors and you need a majority of 270 in order to be elected. They are wrong because they take the majority vote from the state's population and turn it into electoral votes (which is a \"winner-take-all\" system), and they can be anyone not holding public office (which can bring opinions into play, such as segregation).\n\nThe first and most important reason the electoral college is wrong is because they are based off of majority vote. This is bad because people who voted for the other party don't even get counted in the electoral votes. For instance, if there is a population of 1,000,000 people in a state and 600,000 of the people vote for one party, the majority goes to that party, but what about the other 400,000 people that voted for their party. And don't forget the 2000 election between Gore and Bush. Al Gore had the popular vote, yet lost the presidency. How does this make any sense? This leads to my final reasoning of why the electoral college is wrong...\n\nThe electoral college is wrong because the electors can be anyone not holding public office. Anyone not in public office could be basically anyone, even you or me. This can cause problems; such as opinion, racism, etc. They could want somebody to become president because of their skin color or their political party. For example, \"in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" (The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, 11) What if this happens again? We could have a president that nobody even elected for as president and our government could drastically change.\n\nEven though the electoral college is wrong, there is one good thing about it. This is because the \"certainty of outcome\" (In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, 15). Which mean that usually the electoral votes and the popualr votes usually coincide with each other, where both are for the same person. For instance, \"in 2012's election Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote and 51.3 percent of the popular vote\" (In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, 15). So this mean that for both electoral and popular he had the majority of the votes.\n\nAll in all, I agree with \"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO\" with \"abolishing the electoral college!\" (In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, 15). Especially with the \"winner-take-all\" point of it. I think that the population should choose the president off of their opinions instead of being forgotten if their not in the majority vote. Everyone's vote should count. This would be a lot more fair to everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world, many countries have single-sex schools and mixed-sex schools and parents can choose to send their children in any of them. It is thought by some that children who study in gender specific schools face difficulties in the future. I completely agree with this statement. \n\nFirstly, students would be reluctant to the opposite sex as they would be uncomfortable in talking to or working with them. This, in turn, can put an adverse effect on their overall development. For instance, a study conducted by the University of Cambridge revealed that children taught in segregated schools find it difficult to communicate with their opposite sex. Secondly, if boys and girls are taught in separate schools, they may have prejudiced thoughts for their counterparts due to misunderstanding or lack of mutual understanding. \n\nIn addition, they will lack in availing the opportunity to share or grab ideas from each other if taught in separate schools. Since boys and girls have different thinking and attitude to life, they can learn many things from each other, however, the are deprive of this learning in gender based schooling. For example, most girls tend to be attentive and sincere their studies and boys, on the other hand, have more liveliness. The can inculcate different personality aspects from each other. \n\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that students who study are not better prepared for the real world in single gender schools. They would be little confident in front of their opposite sex and unable to understand each other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author give a few reasons why it would be worth to study Venus. The author brings up how we would use this experience in other ways. The author brought up how Venus was once like Earth and how it had inhabinants. The author brings up ways that we could explore venus.\n\nThe author brings up how it the successful and unsuccessful knowledge would help us in other situations. We could use this experience for mars which would seem a lot easier to tackle if we can successfully land on venus and study that planet. We could use the information on how they built the shuttle for submarines, So we could go deeper and not have to worry about the hull being damaged as easily. The information we get on how to properly land on venus would make all of space travel a little easier.\n\nThe piece states that Venus could have been just like Earth once. \" Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and coudl have supported variuos forms of life, just like Earth.\" That exclamation shows that it's possible that there can be life out there that not from earth. The are also features that are also on earth, like mountains, crater, and valleys. What we could learn for why that ecosystem failed could help us in the future.\n\nThe author tells us that people are thinking of ways explore Venus. One idea is that we float in a blimp like craft above the hostile conditions. We still couldn't get the the ground without some challenges but it is a start. The author also brings up how we could bring computers that are made of gears and levers that would work better in harder conditions.\n\nVenus is possible to explore we just have to look at it in a certian angle. We have ideas of what to do but we either don't have the means or can't figure out how to do it. We could float above the surface. We could use a more sturdy time of mechanical computer. The information we learn for landing on Venus and from Venus itself could help us in so many ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is not one of the safest plase to live there is bad air the presure is to high and it get's really hot. the conditions are way to high to even live ther.\n\nEach previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no space craft survived the landing\n\nfor more than a few hours. mabe this Issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent arbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even mor challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere. the tempertures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on ourown planet. The planet is to dangerus for us hummans to go and live on venus, it would take years to evan try to buld a space ship pluse the take of could be cadastrofic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" it states how there are both positive and negative things about driverless cars. To some people, driverless cars are a gift from heaven and are most definitely needed. And to others like me? Absolutely no point in them whatsoever and no benefit in the long run nor short run. Technology controls most of our world now such as social media, what we see on the news, etc. But we don't have to let technology control/take over the basics of life.\n\nCompanies such as Google have been working on this sort of project for a long time. And they've actually been somewhat successful in creating a driverless car. Somewhat as in being you still need a human inside of the car so it can do some things that the car itself can't. I personally find no point in having a car that calls itself driverless when in reality it still needs a human to do the basics for it. Technology is a very good but bad thing in a way. People create/invent things so it can be easier for everyone. Whether its from phones, to moving chairs, etc. It can benefit in a lot of areas in people's lives. But it's not always good.\n\nIn a lot of ways, technology can also be bad. Now I'm not speaking about the United States of America in general but I'm just going to use it as an example. A lot of American citizens deal with obesity, and I think technology plays a role in why so many American's deal/dealt with it. Technology makes us lazy, or even lazier than before. We have escalators instead of stairs so we dont have to walk down, we have taxi services such as Uber for people to drive us around instead of us driving ourselves to whatever destination(in some cases), and now we're trying to make cars that dont even need us to drive. I think we should use technology in a smart, more effective way instead of trying to make us not press the gas pedal/brake and move our arms. Its good to stay in shape and stay fit, and it's not good to always try to find a shortcut.\n\nThese driverless cars seem very expensive to manufacture. The talk of them between major car companies in this article don't seem so cheap. Major car companies like BMW, or Mercedes Benz aren't in everybody's price range. The more these cars keep on improving, the more expensive they get. And it doesn't seem lile they'll be released to the general public, but instead released to those who can only afford it. Plus, if every major car company were to invest in the idea of driverless cars, it would bring the rest of their cars that are automatic or stick shift down the drain. It would be bad for the car companies/manufacturers and those who are buying/can't afford a driverless car.\n\nThis is my opinion on driverless cars and why I think we don't need them nor should we invest in them. I also feel as if not only would it rip away our money, active life, etc. it would also take away the basics of life. Basics of life as in meaning when a family has a daughter/son that is the age to begin driving. Parent's won't be able to teach their children how to drive anymore if driverless cars take over the car market. Teach your children how to drive, be active, spend less money. Buy a car you can drive in. Not a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the use of this technolgy to read the emotional expressions is very valuable. I say this because I think this techonlogy will really help students learn much better. For example,''A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'' Dr.Huang predicts. ''Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'' To me that is a great example because students today learn much better on computers but hate sitting and looking at boring essays or watching boring videos and thats where I think this technology will be great just to come in and shake things up. Now I know theirs going to be some negitive out takes on this, but for the most part I really think this new technology can make an big improvement in todays world. The bad part about this this new technology is it might not get your emotion right all the time. For example, A student could be having a good day and that student is in a very good mood, but the effective human instructor could think the student is in a bad mood and tries to cheer the student up but fails at it. Now the student is angry beacuse the technology is wrong. Things like are probably some of the reasons some people don't agree with the new technology, but that stuff can be worked on and fixed. That is the reason I like and think this new technology is valuable students I think this technology can really help student progress and grow in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although there is no doubt that volunteering is a crucial part of our life, it is important to consider how society can raise awareness about it. There are numerous people who believe that it is inevitable to start doing work without a pension . Personally, I am a vehement supporter of the idea of volunteering.\r\n\r\nApparently, there are a plethora of boons enrolling in volunteering activities. First off, it helps juveniles improving their future career. This is an advantage because teenagers will gain more experience by dealing with others, and they will be aware of how the market is. For example, according to The Times, 70% of adolescents who were part of unpaid work during their university education are getting promoted faster in their work. In contrast, students who prefer to not enrol in any unpaid job face tremendous pitfalls, not solely in their industry, but also in their personal life. In addition, their communication skills will be dwindled down, which can suppress their interpersonal artistry, time-management techniques and leadership skills.\r\n\r\nSecondly, there are abundant programs for student exchange. Participating in such programs can broadening student's horizon because they will be surrounded by cultural diversity. To clarify, the student will be able to learn a new language, new culture and gain experience. As a result, this will impact the youngster's confidence, as well as his self-growth, which will affect substantially his society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having explored both vantage points, I wholeheartedly agree that universities should come up with an idea to include volunteering as a compulsory subject.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some professionals think that the residents will not satisfied with any additional growth in the economy since this nation is already wealthy. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with this statement because while there is a limit that money can bring to us, the increase in economic wealth still makes the citizens more delightful.\n\nFirst of all, one of the reasons why I think the enhancement of Economic wealth still makes people happy is because there will more problems to tackle. As a result of the countries being rich, there will more issues will exist especially about the social. For instance, nowadays, the authorities and the residents need to face traffic congestion and pollution as a consequence of people will tend to buy more and more cars than ever, if the nation is rich, they can supply and encourage their populations to commute by vehicles which use environmentally friendly energy. Moreover, if the country is wealthy, it can provide the latest technology in many categories such as healthcare and education which makes people’s satisfaction grow. \n\nIn contrast, sometimes economic growth will not make people more cheerful cause of the rise of the nation’s economy just a part of their life besides their well-being and relationships. For example, while a person is vibrant, they are a patient who is facing an illness that can not be treated so they will not have true satisfaction. In addition, we used to have money to meet our necessary needs such as food and a place to live, so when all our needs are supplied we will not care about money anymore.\n\nIn conclusion, I can't entirely agree with the statement that the citizens will not satisfied with the economic growth due to the fact that they have used to it because there will be more problems in a developed country than usual so we need money to solve it and also the government can supply the best things for their residents’s essential needs in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is important to consider how teenagers contemplate between free and busy hours. While some people contend that teenagers should involve in free social works during those free hours, other deem that it is trivial. I tend to partially agree with the former argument, and in this essay I will support my view with argument examples.\nTo begin, teenagers should involve in community service because it makes them social. This is because social works are usually gratifying and enlivening; also, teenagers could build rapport in the society. For instance, they can utilize their spare time and embark on a new relation, which is integral for safety and companionship need. However, if teenagers do not involve in social service, they may lack support during emotional turmoil. This happens because there is no one to support them during such ordeal.\nTo put in a nutshell, since there are some obvious merits of teenager’s involvement in social work such as it is exhilarating and invigorating, teens should engage in community work without financial motivation. Personally, I would involve in social service during free times.\nTo put in a nutshell, although there are obvious merits of teenager’s involvement in social work such as it is exhilarating and invigorating, we must take in consideration their need for refreshment and involvement in other sectors. Personally, I tend to partially support the argument that teens should engage in community work; I would involve in social service during free times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" their are some great reasons of why scientist today are still studying Venus. There are some dangers to trying to do this as well. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Scientist have discovered that long ago, Venus was probably covered largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nThe planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. These are some reasons why scientist say that studying Venus is a worthy despite the dangers it present. Despite the dangers The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible soution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\n\nThese are some reasons why scientist today are still striving to get closer and study Venus. Despite the challenges scientist say \" our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". Which from this statement you can conclude that scientist will not give up easily on trying to explore Venus. Scientist today are trying to find every possible solution to try to make it easier to study the planet also known as the Earth's \"twin\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am in total agreement that with the idea of these driverless cars.\n\nThey are a very good idea and would be very efficiant for people with busy schedules.\n\nIt would be such an advantage for us to have driverless cars.\n\nMy reasoning behind this is it would create more time for people, save money on gas, and it would lessen the staticts of death by car accidents.\n\nThis is a great idea because it will help save money on fuel which is very beneficial. In paragraph one it states \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis\" which helps demonstrate my point by proving it saves money and these cars would be way more beneficial a varity of reasons. One being it would be beter for the environment and help our country save money on fuel.\n\nThese cars would help us in a varity of ways.\n\nIt is flexible and conventional.\n\nI can foresee these cars being very beneficial for our country in the near future.\n\nThey would most definately help us in many ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago an enormous head almost two miles end to end has been seen to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the red planet called Cydonia. For some conspiracy theorists, they thought that it was a sign of life on Mars, or it may be from some kind of ancient civilization that was there millions of years ago. Some of them say it almost looks like the ancient egyption statues built on Earth.\n\nGlobal Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997, after the viking missions ended. Chief scientist explained \"We felt this was important to taxpayers.\" So on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia, Mars Orbiter Camera snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. They've got new technology so now the picture has more detail in it, it even shows some rocks on the Mars surface. When the picture was released to the public, it was now revealed a natural landform, no sign of alian civilization or any type of mark.\n\nNot everyone was satisfied with the Face being ruled a natural landform. Some say the camera on board Mars Global Surveyor had to look through clods to see the Face. Skeptics considered alien markings were hidden by the clouds. The Face is a very interesting much more can lay behind the discovery but as the Global Surveyor pass through it when it is all clear they take a picture that is very vlear for all to see. The extraordinary photo was the best photo they have ever taken of the face ruling it a natural landform.\n\nThe Face is a very popular among Hollywood films. It has appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and more, It is truly a pop icon. SOme people think that that face a very good evidence for life on Mars. Evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorist, Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget would rather wish that there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\n\nThe Face resembles a human face like the statues in our ancient civilzation built by egyptians. Our ancient monuments are very and amazingly common to the Face. What if this was ancient civilization at its best. After the cloudless summer picture the world has ruled The Face a natural landform not ancient monument in any means, Some Skeptics still believe however. So as we go on there may be more discoveries that lay behind the monument maybe proof of ancient civilization. Mars is a very indistinctable place, NASA may stumble upon some proof that life beyond Earth exist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars has been floating around for awhile now. People have been coming up with different ideas for years. Futurists, mechanics, engineers and other companies have been trying to perfect driverless cars. Unfortunately, over the years people have been investing so much time and money into these driverless cars, but when are they going to actually become \"driverless\"? The whole idea of driverless cars would be wonderful but in my opinion they will not be reliable enough and will be dangerous, they will spark major conflicts if there is ever an accident, and all the research and technology is very expensive.\n\nIf driverless cars are ever produced and used on the roads it will be very dangerous. People may overlook the fact that the car itself will be driving. They may say \"Well, before when there were car accidents people were driving.\" What they will not be thinking about is how technology malfunctions all the time. How many times have you had trouble with your cellphone? Your television? What about your computer? See, technology malfunctions and has technical difficulties all the time. There is no garantee that the car will not malfunction on the road. If it were to malfunction what could the driver do? What if it were to malfunction so horribly that the driver could not even intervene and take back control. In my opinion I think that driverless cars are just too dangerous.\n\nImagine being on the road relaxing in the driver's seat. Your spouse right next to you, and your child in the backseast. All is going well when all of a sudden you crash into another driverless car. Everyone is okay its a small crash, but who is to blame? When you purchased your driverless car you were told that it will alert you if you needed to take over. You did not recieve any alerts. The victim of the accident is confused as well, but it can not be his fault. You are the one that hit him, or did you? You were not in control of the car, your car was in control of itself. So who here is to blame, is it you or the manufacturers fault? If there is a situation like this, major conflicts will arise. People will argue over who is to pay the bills. In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author even brings up this argument themself. There will need to be all new laws to avoid conflicts of who is to blame in case of an accident.\n\nLike I mentioned before, driverless cars would be amazing to have, but the real question is, \"Is it really worth all the money?\" In the 1950s General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. The track had an electrical cable to send radio signals to a reciever on the car. Engineers at Berkeley used magnets with alternating polarity, and the car read the messages in binary code. These new roads worked very well, but could you imagine how much money that would cost to change all the roads that we have now? Engineers, mechanics, and other companies are trying to find a new way to make driverless cars happen. The new road ideas work, but are too expensive so instead they are putting more and more money into the driverless cars. The driverless cars are improving little by little, but each time a new driverless car is produced that is more and more money being invested in something that has been in the making since the 1950s. There are plenty of more important things to invest our money on. People are fine driving themselves around.\n\nIn my opinion, we are just getting lazier. We try to make all these new inventions so that we do not have to do it ourself. We should be investing our money into building new homes for people in countries that do not have enough homes. We should be investing money into more research for diseases. Yes, driverless cars would be useful but our money is being wasted on something to make our lives better when it should be used on someting that could potentially save more lives. The idea of driverless cars is great but they are not reliable and are dangerous, they will spark too many conflicts, and the whole process is way too expensive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is an opportunity of a lifetime because of all the countrys and places you get to go to. Like in (paragraph 1) Luke got invited to go to\n\nEurope by his friend Don. You get to do things that you have probably never done before. In (paragraph 2) it says that you take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Seagoing Cowboys would let you see experiences that you have never seen before.\n\nIn (paragraph 5) Luke says the cattle boat trips were an unbelivable opportunity for a small-town boy. (Paragraph 5) Luke says besides helping people I had the side benefits of seeing Europe and China. The article says in (paragraph 6) how hard it was to take care of the animals. Luke had to feed them two or three times a day. To be Seagoing Cowboys you have to want to work hard and like taking care of animals.\n\nBeing Seagoing Cowboys would be really hard work but it would be a fun job to do. Luke says in (paragraph 9) being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him. Luke says that it opened up the world to him and I am greatful for the opportunitys Luke says.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 there was a mysterious face found on the planet Mars. I'm a scientist at NASA space station discussing some accusations about this face. Some people are beginning to believe that the face was created by aliens. However, that is not the case here. This mysterious face was simply created by natural causes and happens to just have distinct features of a human face.\n\nMy first reason as to why this face is a natural landform is because there is no scientific proof that aliens have ever existed on Mars, or anywhere else. If there is no proof of these aliens living then how could they have possibly been able to create such an artifact. Plus, believing that this was caused by natural causes is way more believable then relying on unproven research that aliens once existed.\n\nMy second reason to this being just a natural landform is scientists believe the nose,eyes, and mouth of the figure are created by shadows giving it an illusion of a human face. This attracted the public which is exactly what NASA wants. So, NASA is using the illusion of this human face to attract more attention to their program and Mars itself. By doing this it is making most people believe the face was created by aliens, which it in fact wasn't. Evidence of this is when the article, Unmasking the Face on Mars states, \"Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\"\n\nMy third and final reason this mysterious face is just a natural landform is that is resembles features of landforms common in American West. For example, Garvin states, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars,\" Garvin also says. If this face resembles American Western landforms so much then it must be a natural landform itself.\n\nAlthough there are reasons this face wasn't created by aliens there are some conspiracies involving NASA. One is that people believe NASA has already found traces of life on Mars and would rather keep that sceret from the public. This is believable because NASA wouldn't want to alarm the public of extraterrestrial lifeforms and create panic. Although it could create panic, NASA should want to inform the public because it could cause support of NASA and thier findings instead. For example, people could start donating money to the company to help with further research and have more knowledge about what they do.\n\nThis mysterious face on the surface of Mars is no more than a natural landform. It was not caused by aliens because there is no scientific proof. NASA wants the public to believe it is a cause by aliens so they could get more publicity for it. I mean, this face has already starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. It's had enough publicity and does not deserve anymore because of the fact that it is just a natural landform caused by natural changes, not aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that i really dont think driverless cars are good for the environment and safety of people, the development of the driverless cars still needs alot of work that needs to be done which again safety is a big problem because why have a driverless car if the driver still needs to be in the car and while the driver is in the car he/she will be just assisting the car for the things the car can't do that the human can.\n\nThe driver will always have to be alert and always focus on the road just in case of a emergency. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel but so far with the car development its going ok it just need alot more upgrades to it, the manufacturers are capable of finishing the process they have to go through they grow closer to the destination everyday but also have to think about the bad like who's to blame if someone gets injured from this so this will need further improvements on sensors and computer hardware and also software to make driverless cars safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates the difference between parents in four tasks of nighttime childcare in 2022.\nOverall, women were significantly more involved with caring for children than their partners. In addition, the attendance rate among these four tasks and parents varied.\nRegarding mothers, around 75% engaged with dressing, while half assisted with children's homework. Another roughly 42% prepared for bed, and 25% played games with their kids.\nOn the other hand, although most fathers cared about their children's homework, the figure was only 10%. Conversely, dressing was the least favorite thing among the four tasks for the fathers; probably just 2% were involved with it while playing games and preparing for bed were equally preferred by 5% of the fathers.\nFurthermore, 70% of both parents played games with their kids at night, but the data was nearly halved when it came to homework assistance. The least number of parents engaged with dressing was over 20%; nevertheless, the ratio of preparing for bed almost doubled.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nWe should change the electoral college to an election by popular votes for the president of the united states.\n\nI believe that everyone should have a say in who their future president should be not just a group of selected officials . Sure some of the peoples choices may end up bias or thoughtless but atleast they get to feel as if their a part of the state. like stated in \"what's wrong with the electoral college\" sentence 11 \"Those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" meaning that sometimes the chosen electors neglect their positions and use it the wrong way. The selcted electors may end up going against the people and/or choose a bias decision. No matter how you look at it their still human and they will make mistakes.\n\nElectoral college shouldn't only allow government official or \"qualified\" citizens to bare that huge responsibility because if they make one wrong move then everyone will blame them but if we have popular vote everyone will have a say in the presidential voting. If we have electoral votes your only giving specific people power while as the other citizens sit down to watch complete stranges balance their countries future in their hands. like stated in \"what's wrong with electoral college\" sentence 13 \"At the most basic level ,the electoral college is unfair to voters\" meaning that electoral votes is unjustified to the people.\n\nElectoral votes should be abolished because it isn't justified for all of those hardworking citizens who always pay their respects to this country. It even states in \"what's wrong with electoral college\" sentence 14 \" It's official : The electoral college is unfair ,outdated, and irrational.\" meaning that the electoral college has been here long enough, it's not justified ,and it's irrational. Something like that should no longer exist. The citizens should have a say in who will become their new president. They should have a majority vote .\n\nLike stated in \"choosing the president\" sentence 15 \"the electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism\"meaning that the electoral college is really old and we no longer have any need for it. The electoral college is something that was meant for the past. There may have been some sort of issue that they could not properly deal with ,so they created the electoral college in order to deal with it. But now we have more advance ways of doing stuff so we don't need electoral college any more . We can now change our ways for voting so that it'll match our time and period.\n\nElectoral votes is filled with holes/bias. So we should find a new way of chosing our new president who is willing to change our couontry for the best and not corrupt our country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How do you feel about our voting system today? Today our current voting system consists of electoral colleges that vote for there certain president depending on your votes for president. We have had this system since the begaining of voting for president for our country. Some believe that our country recieves harm as far as our selection for president goes. What they mean by this is that it all pretty much relies on the electoral colleges to vote our president. The problem with this is that people think that the president should be chose from popular vote, not from the electoral colleges. The thing with this is the our favors can be easily swayed due to the smart and cleverly designed ads during there campaign for president. Now see this wouldnt be a problem except that these advertisements arent always true and could sway our vote for the wrong reasons. This where the elctoral colleges come into play, they limit the amount of votes each president gets by the state. The electoral votes are then distributed to each candidate according to the amount of votes each one gets in the state. If we left it to just popular vote, the new president could just be decided by a couple clever ads and not there actual reasons for running, and what there gonna do for the country. all this being said i do think the amount of electorl votes shouldnt change due to the size of the sate so everyone has a fair chance. Honestly i think the electoral vote system works like a charm and would side with it opposed to the popular vote side of things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph emphasize Saeng s determination come obstacles past experience For example story starts Saeng taking test reliving memories greenhouse started breakdown A wave loss deep story stung Saeng s eyes swept She buys plant takes home mother telling failed The mother becomes understanding helps Saeng s vow retake test narrator emphasizes Saengs determination overcome troubles past go future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technology called Facial Action Coding System claims it can scan a face and tell how much of each emotion the person is feeling. There are some negatives and some positives to bringing this new technology to personal computer. The author of the passage seems to only give a positive outlook on this system, when all aspects should be explored. The negatives to this technology would not be the end all be all of this product, but they should definitely be taken into account for the creation of a better system.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a computer software that scans a face and recognizes what emotions are being displayed on the face. It uses codes to see which muscles are being used to move a face. For example there are certain muscles to show anger like the orbicularis oris which tightens your lips. The system uses these muscle movements to determine which emotion is being displayed and/or felt.\n\nAlthough there are a few negatives to the FACS, it could potentially be a useful product. The passage says that the Facial Action Coding System could be used for relevant advertisements and a more engaging classroom effect. This system could be very helpful for ad agencies that don't know how to reach their public. If a computer scanned a face the instant it sees an ad, researchers could figure out whether or not to show an ad again. For example, an ad for cat litter with a picture of a cat could potentially produce a smile or a look of disgust depending on a situation. If the person doesn't own or like cats their face would not show happiness, and the ad agency could show a different ad. This system would also aide online class courses. If it was constantly scanning a person's face, the creator or teacher of the class could modify which sections seem to bore a student.\n\nThe system may be helpful, but the negative sides to it should be also considered. Because the FACS can only guess what someone is feeling by what is being displayed on a face, it could potentially be inaccurate for people that are prone to hide their actual feelings from their faces. The FACS only does an outerscan, it never sees what is happening in the brain. A scanner of the brain would be more accurate, expecially for people that can not or do not want to show their true emotions. Another possibly negative fact about this system is that it would need to constantly be scanning a person's face for accurate readings. This could become innacurate if used for a very long time. If it were used for an online course, the system would need to be running during the entire class, and the person could get distracted and show emotions for the distraction that are not relevant to the class. This is also potentially invasive, especially for a company using FACS to show relevant ads. People might not want to constantly be scanned for their emotions. There would be a paranoia of always being watched and unless the software company promises the facial recognition would never be used for anything other than for the ad display or for fixing a class, people would feel uneasy.\n\nIt seems evident that the author of this passage is giving the readers a positive look into the new Facial Action Coding System, but it should be taken into account that there are negative aspects to this software. People may not always want to be watched for their emotions, and the system could become inanccurate. Although it seems that the passage points towards effective and positive outcomes, the negative criticism should be taken into account and modified for a better FACS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many things in life we want to accomplish, but cannot, due to its dangers or risks. One of those things is exploring Venus. The author in this pasaage evaluates the pros and cons of exploring Venus, but most importantly, why we should visit Venus. Though Venus is a close planet next to Earth, the author has provivded insight as to why there has not been more research conducted on Venus.\n\nThere are numerous factors as to why there is less human activity on Venus. For example, Venus has a thick atmosphere of \"97 percent carbon dioxide\" and a \"highly corrosive sulfuric acid\" in the atmosphere. Venus is also \"the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system\" despite the fact that Mercury is closer to the sun. Natural disasters such as erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes, make it impossilbe for humans to withstand these horrific events.\n\nIf human beings were to explore and visit Venus, then there would have to be specifc adaptions and tools designed to Venuses characteristics. For example, NASA has a possilbe solution to the \"hostile conditions\" of Venus, a blimp-like vehicle. This vehicle could hover 30 miles above the \"Venusian landscape\". The downside of this invention is that resechers are limited to the amount of insight that can be provided to them. Reseachers would not be able to take samples of \"rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\". NASA is also working on other approachs such as simplified electronics that are more resistant to pressure, heat and other forces. Because of human curiosity, researchers want to work on innovations that would last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nThough visiting Venus may have many obstacles and risks there are many factors that make Venus such a unique and great planet. A long time ago, Venus was once covered \"largely with oceans\", which is a feature on Earth that humans profit off of. The planet of Venus also has familiar featues suh as \"valleys, mountains, and craters\". If NASA is able to make designs that could help humans adapt to Venus, then there would be a vast amount of people that would love to explore and potentially live on the planet of Venus. We should not be limited to what we can accomplish as humans if there are ways to overcome those risks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay im going to be talking about how the Facial Action Coding system is vauleable to the students and teacher and school system.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom because a lot of the students hide how they really feel. They could be smiling but be really sad. I have personally witnessed a girl who smiled everyday and everyone thought she was happy\n\nwhen she was battling depression. All the depressed, sad, and angry feelings start at a young age. It builds up and it just gets worse and worse until they get so bad they give up or blow up on other people and end up hurting someone. I feel like if they can read what they really feel then it could stop a lot of suicides. I also feel like if they can see how the students are feeling, if they are mad that may stop a fight and save everyone the hurt and trouble. Once you find out how they are really feeling then you can talk with them and work it out so they arent struggling with it in the long run. I feel like if we do that then the school system may be better because there's no one who can get away with being angry then starting a fight, or someone feeling so depressed they feel like their only option out of the pain is suicde. They could actually make the students feel safer because they dont have to fear a kid blowing up and not knowing what they would do. It also may make their learning improve. If they arent sad or mad they are focusing on what the teacher is saying and not what is making them angry or sad. Students may start going to school more if they know that they don't have to hide how they are feeling or fear that someone else is going to blow up and hurt them.\n\nThis is why i feel like the Facial Action Coding System is vauleable to the students, teachers and the school system. Maybe our school will get this and save a lot of heartache for a lot of students, teacher, and parents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the invention of a computer that is able to recognize several emotions such as: anger, sadness, confusion, and also fearfulness, was talked about. This is a unique idea that would be quite useful in a school environment, for many different reasons. Whether it's to help with a child's mental health, or even just make a lesson less boring. It will be useful for both the student and the school.\n\nI personally am for the idea of the computer that is able to identify emotions. In the excerpt it was said that the computer would know when you're sad, confused, or even bored. I believe that this is important, especially in the world of psychology. When a child visits the school counselor to speak to them about how they're feeling, it often may be difficult for the student to talk about it. If this computer that was able to read emotions was in the school, the counselor could use the computer to figure out what the student is feeling. When the counselor has a better understanding of how the student is feeling, the counselor would be able to help the student's needs more efficiently and more accurately than they would have if they were unsure about how the student was feeling.\n\nIn the article, it was mentioned that the computer would be able to identify when a child may be bored or confused during a school lesson. Depending on which it was, the computer would be able to shift the lesson being given so that it is either easier to understand, or more entertaining. This would be helpful in a school environment because the child would be more engaged in the lesson and have a better understanding of what is being taught. The child would, overall, be able to gain more knowledge from the lesson being taught, which leads to higher scores.\n\nAnother point made during the article was that video surgery would be able to be made better animated, with more emotions. This is important for a school environment because if a student is going into the medical field and they're using a video surgery to learn how a certain surgery works, it is important for them to understand the emotional aspect of the surgery as well. The better animated video surgeries may also be able to teach a student a technique more efficiently because they're able to fully understand and see what is going on in the video. Once the student better understands what is going on, they become more educated, leading to better surgeons.\n\nOverall, the idea of a computer that is able to read emotions of students is an idea that would be able to help students recieve a better education. These students will be able to learn things in a way that is easier to understand and is more entertaining, therefore, they will be more engaged in the subject and more willing to learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the driverless cars are not a great idea. First and foremost, if you are ever in an accident it will be hard to determine whether it was fault of the manufacturer or the drvier behind the wheel.\n\nAlso, if we have driverless cars our younger genreation of beginner drivers will never have actual driving experience because they will be so used to the car taking over and doing most of the work.\n\nThe car Sergey Brin foresees may use less gas, but it will make things way more complicated if the car is ever in an accident, especially if the vehicle is used for public transportation. I also feel the driverless cars will cost to much to make. All the equipment that is needed for the car to function properly most likely out weighs any profit the company will ever make by selling the car.\n\nThe driverless car, I feel, will most likely make Americans more lazy than we are already. Not only are we sitting in a car turing a wheel and stepping on the gas and brake pedals all day, but now the car does it for us, that is a amazing recipe for lazieness overload.\n\nFinally, the driverless cars will make us less intelligent. Since we only have to jump in to manually use the car on occasion, we will weaken our motot skills and become less intelligent on an every day activity such as driving. What if one day the cars went out of buiseness, then we will be so used to having our car making most of the decisions we will not be able to handle driving by ourselfs. This is why I feel the driverless cars are not an intelligent option to go with for the future of America. As Donald Trump once said, \" Lets make America great again! \"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story like shes saying time shell ready take test Another way thinking time happens spring would preprared confident author trying say like begining new springs would new beginning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles allowing dirigibles dock like safety nature existing law In excerpt author tells many dirigibles use hydrogen flammable That makes dangerous dock Empire State Building could get accident since New York densely populated would probably harm many people People s lives nt risked land dirigible Another problem builders face nature In paragraph excerpt states The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This would mean dirigible would dangling way New York winds could get dangerous fast unpredictable According excerpt neither practical safe To add obstacles builders nt consider already existing law airships flying low urban areas So meant would illegal dock dirigible Empire State Building Builders faced many obstacles allowing derigibles dock Empire State Building nt meant", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree computers benefits society There threes big reason computers bad people getting attached arent spending time families Others gaining weight stay computer exercising Also people arent getting fresh air getting walk park Computers making people shut families When girl wants play big sister big sister shut little sister continue emailing friends computer Families need stick together member family family picnic family activities Computers addictive games person play ignore everyone sometimes family member go depression ignored Another reason computers bad health issues People get addicted lazy They sit computer chair eat drink bad stuff day People would gain weight might ever get dabetes weight If people nt get exercise need stay healthy might heart problems many serious conditions If weights gets extreme might able lose weight body gotten tov used weight heart able take At last least people stop going outside go walk talk friends People al least go outside day see nature get air They go beach relax relieve stress computer games Having much stress bad health might go depression Being computer way much bad sit dark getting sunlight bad eyes So see alot bad things computer Most problems issues something someones health So I think bad societys benefits I hope take reasons heart Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving can one day be a thing of the past, but shouldn't the driver be in controll in case the car goes on the frits? It would be easier just to have the car assist instead of doing all the work. Three reasons the driver should be in controll are the car could malfuction, the car may not break as fast as the driver could have, and the car can not change direction if destionation is changed.\n\nThe first reason is the car could malfuntion.The car assisting would be a lot safer than the car doing all the work. All computers have some sort of software and it could malfuntion causing deaths and accidents. In paragraph 7 the text states \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This is a great way of helping with stopping accidents, but it could also not do it in time as well. Just because it is in the car doesnt mean it works the whole time.\n\nThe next reason cars should only assist is the car may not break as fast as the driver could have. Cars may not be able to see something before a human can. For an example, its a dark night and the driver is going down a country road surrounded by thick forest. The driver decides to test out the self driving feature in his brand new car he just bought. Suddenly he sees a deer cross the road and the car didn't see it coming. Not only did the driver reck his new car but he is the only one on the road.something he could have stopped.\n\nThe thied and final reason is the car can not change direction if destionation is changed. Humans go everywhere and change their minds in the middle of their journeys. The car may take more time to turn around and find the quickest route. A human can do all that within two minutes which a car takes atleast five minutes. Big time differents huh? Well the car could also not see sighs as well as humans can and might turn on to a one way street causeing a crash.\n\nIn the end there is a reason humans control cars. It's just so you feel free but to keep everyone and everything in one shape. Safety is not technologies concern, technologies concern is doing what it is told.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear name I believe computers beneficial society Computers donot benefit us stoping many people exercising healthy life playing sports enjoying outdoors Computers stoping many people particular younger generations exercising Now days instead bitting gym many people home computer talking friends playing computer games As result many people healthy It s also recorded person computer large amounts times hurting thier eyes resulting increase people wearing glasses If people go start things besides computer live happier healthier better life Unfortunatly many young people getting play sports During decade many sports games come computer Now instead pushing work hard aspact kids ethier play heart dont play The reason instead work extremly hard thier custom teams Also computer electronic stoping kids playing sports xbox playstation xbox psp gamecube gameboy console systems play games distract kids I caught thinking xbox game hackey game olny electronics pulling kids like magnets parents alarming thier kids play video games stay computer hours end Many us dont know truly like go outside camp spend time thier family I came family many families close natural things father brother whole cousin However many families close something togther If fathers took thier sons fishing camping would get away computers fatherson band become stronger These reason sir thought far quite sometime Just remember many people need exercise many play sports many families got exprience outdoors", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars should be allowed for everyone. The cars could help certain people if they are occupied with something else. Some people may not be able to have a driverless car because even though it's driverless, they still have to be there in case of an emergency. Other people may just ignore the signals of the car and it could cause a wreck to occur.\n\nDriverless cars could benefit many people in many different ways. The driver may need to take an important business call, and they can do that while the car is still going. The person could also have an injury and need to go to the emergency room, but have no one else to take them there. If the person has children one of their kids could need something, so they could help them while still going where they need to go. Also, the driver could've woken up late and needs to hurry to work. They could finish getting ready in their car or eat their breakfast. They may need to finish their make up or brush their hair and you can't do that with both of your hands on the wheel and your eyes on the road.\n\nI also believe it would be diffucult to know who is at blame for a wreck. The car could mess up and it would be the manufacturers fault, but if the driver is not paying attention it would be their fault. The driver may not want to take responsibilty and admit to not paying attention to the signals of the car. The idea of having cameras in the car to watch the driver is very interesting. It may feel weird being watched by something, but it would help figure out who is to blame.\n\nThe idea of driverless cars is a little frightening though. There are people that may take advantage of it and not pay attention to whenever they need to take control of the car. The idea is also excellent for someone that may need the time to do something else. I approve of the idea, but there is always the slight chance of someone messing it up. Hopefully if driverless cars become a thing, they will make everything safer and nothing bad will happen because of them. If driverless cars become a regular thing, I think they need to be figured out and practiced with a lot more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are predicted to be coming soon.These cars are vehiculars drive themselves. With these cars comes an added bonus besides not having to drive. There would be a safer and faster mood of transportation. We would have less accidents because people would not be texting and driving instead the car is driving.\n\nAlthough they are not fully driverless yet, car dealerships are hoping that they will be around the year 2020. A BMW project manager said\n\nthat the psycjological aspects of a automation are really quite a challenge. But with the new and improved car what kind of new laws would be but in place.\n\nSome states would have to rewrite a new law that doesnt say that it is illegal to drive such car. Also a new law would have to be made to figure out who has to cover the liability in the case of an accident.\n\nRight now we only have cars that need assistance and can only steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves.With these new cars they would have to be able to sense the world or in simpler words now their surroundings. Some futurists believe that instead of making cars smarter we should make smarter road.\n\nIn the 1950's a company called General Motors\n\nmade a track that sent radio signals to the car. Others tried using a thing know as magnets that alternate polarity. They worked very well but required to much money for it to be a plasuble thing. So that was when people decided that smarter cars would be a better idea.\n\nWith these creative ideas we would be able to avoid crashes and dangering ourselves by just having a driverless cars. We would reduce the pollution because these cars run on very little gas. We would also get places faster because we would not be waiting for a bus. These cars would fundamentally change the entire world and the way of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My mom woke early morning said I need get get ready fast I asked matter said going potter park zoo I know mabe sudden idea I got dressed hit road I wasnt felling well morning We got subway breakfast I didnt eat sandwitch tho cause stumic hurt bad It seemed like hours befor finily got I felling better We paid got map stanted looking awsome animals I got see giant wolfs snakes monkeys lions pekos camels animals It fun We got bind cage go birds flying around lose There little boy bind landed right top head moms phone rang It brother He said home didnt wan na get I could barlley hear mom birds She walked stood outside I followed saying CAPS I said need go where thing I know hanging We walked toward fish building phone rang CAPSt ever hang agian I need fight Its going storm I want home starts poring rain moms still phone I getting wet board I really wanted see fish About minutes later mom hung phone We walk soken wet My mom smiled said CAPS patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We would have prefer converting the Electoral College into a election by popular vote for the president of United States of America. There are sevral reasons why. We the voters don't really vote for the president we vote for a slate electors. If this electoral college system is still in use if you vote a president and your state consisted of 25 Democratic electors then Congress and the President will get 25 electoral votes. \"...those electors could always defy the will of the peopl.\" (Source 2). This is absolutly wrong we the voters should defy our own use of will to which of any president we desire. By changing the Electoral College into a election by popular vote we can as well desire which president to proceed on voting, with any of the electors defying our will.\n\n\"...representative from wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as mush say as the 55 representatives from california, who represent 35 million voters.\"(source 2). This system of Electrol College gives no one vote there potential power of use. Even putting that many votes to just single only party for President and Congress, House's selesction will barely and im sure wouldnt even be expected to give any will to any one people. We the voters dont have as much power, \"when Gore had more popular votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888.\"(source 3). Yet there are still more votes then the electoral votes the one that had more electoral votes and won, ffrom this there is not as much use of power on our votes, that is if the electoral wish to use to his own use, so why keep on having the Electoral College.\n\n\"Most states have a \"winner takes all\" system\"...(source 1), this will reward any electoral, if they chose to the president that won of course. In the toss-up states voters tend to look closely in the campaign, these are the \"most thoughtful\" voters, it should actually be every voter but no its not, not even the ones who will be deciding the election. This is why i do not proceed on still having a Electoral College and changing it into a election by popular vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagining the future without having to manualy drive cars is amazing but it would also be a big hasle. Having these cars would save lots of money and fuel. There is a lot to do with these special cars. Some of the postive things about having these cars built is the way their sensors, driving and assisting, and laws work. Some of the negative outcomes is that the sensors might not work all the time or the car still needs manual help on some conditions.\n\nBrin Can is the man who thought of this whole idea. He works for Google. Brin has a plan to make these cars drive themselves by 2020. He says having these cars made would save on fuel. Americans would only use half the fuel they use now. Also making transportation far more comfortable than a bus or a train. With not having them made Americans would still drive manually like the usual. Without this the people could still drive drunk on off of something and get into far more accidents than these smart cars. These autonomous cars can steer, accelerate and brake all by themselves. Plus it has monitors surrounding the car for any accidents to prevent.\n\nEngineers at Berkeley have use something useful. They put this magnet into the car to help it sense postive and negitive polarity in the binary code. There are sensors on the front and end of the car. Google said for the cars to become more smarter the car needs more sensors. Having these would help humans get into far less accidents then they would by themselves. Still not having these with the regular cars humans can see behind the car or around them as easily as if they had sensors. On these smart cars some good ways to alert humans that they need to take control is the windsheild would flash if the driver needed to take control. Also the seatbelt will vibrate if backing into something. It also announces when the driver should take over.\n\nSome negitive aspects of having these cars would be that the sensors or the car arent 100% there yet. This anonomous car still needs human help when backing out of a driveway or going around construction. Having to be aware and waiting your turn to take over would get boring. That would be very tiring.\n\nWhy wouldn't you want these hand free cars? That help you when needed and giving you some free time. With the help of these cars and can prevent 80% of the accidents that happen when a human is either tired, drinking or lost control of the car. This car will be here before you know it. Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a new car. The Nissan, Audi, and Mercedes-Benz will be the new start of this generation. These cars are hoping to be made and drive themselves by 2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System could be useful for panting and people as well. If you look at at painting at someone you really cant tell if they are happy or sad. If you use the Facial Action Coding System it could tell you how they are feeling in the painting and if they are happy or not. You can easliy tell if a person right infront of you is not happy but sometimes you cant. You can use the Facial System on them and it can tell you how they are feeling. Computers can also help out a lot on what you dont understand.\n\nFor instance in the Mona Lisa painting you cant tell her emotion in her picture. If you use technology it can help you out and tell you if she is happy or sad. It gives you a percentage like shes 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. It can give you an estimation on how she is feeling in the picture. The computer has an 3-D computer model so it has all of the face major muscles so it can tell your emotion on your face. It can show your surprised if your eyebrows are raised up or if your angry yuour lips would be tightened to show anger. You can also write down different emotions that you do in the mirror and see if someone can reconize what emotion you have. It can tell if you force a smile and if it wasn't a real one. Technology is creating better ways to communicate with humans and developing different things for humans to interact with.\n\nI believe that it would be very different and amazing if they use this on people ands paintings0. It could tell poeple a lot of things they are wondering about people in the world or even paintings that they see. It shows us that technology has plenty of ways to interact with us and give us new things to experince and learn about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From my point of view i thinmk driverless cars has its fualts and also has very good points. I am more for driverless cars because i think it will help out alot and make things safer. Such as people have habbits of texting and driving i think having a car that drives itself would allow them to send those texts ina much safer way.\n\nI think this is a very cool and could be safe invention. Obviously i think they have some things they need to work on to make it safer and more reliable but i think in the long run this will work very well and be very reliable product. I would buy a driverless car if i had the chance because it is a very useful tool.\n\nTo finish this up I think this will be a very great thing to make and put on the market. i think it will bring alot of plesure and good things to those who buy it. I think it copuld go for alot of money and car dealerships would make alot of money off of it. It brings more saftey i thinkand would work well and really change the way people would drive from now on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are those who think that increasing the price of petrol for vehicles would be a resolvement of environmental issues. In my opinion, I partially disagree with this view, and the reason will be elaborated in the enlisted paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirstly, let us look at the advantages of this change. If the cost of fuel for cars increases, people who always use vehicles would hesitate to ride on these. This is because they have to spend more money on cars than in the past, and they would alter from cars to local transport systems. For instance, there was a considerable rise in the price of gasoline between 2020 and 2022, and it produced an increase in train users. Thus, if the price of fuel goes up, it would lose the users of vehicles. Subsequently, it would have positive effects on the environment. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, There are a lot of fumes or fossil fuels that are consumed to generate electricity or energy. In addition, the proportion of these is more higher than the percentage of the fuel that is used for cars. According to research done in 2018, in Japan, 80% of gasoline was utilized for making electricity, whereas the proportion of gasoline for vehicles is 10%. Furthermore, if the cost rises, individuals change to electric vehicles, and it would make more demand for electricity. Hence, although it would lose the number of car users, it would be meaningless development. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are some positive influences on climate change, this alteration has a likelihood to produce more adverse impacts on nature. Therefore, I subtly disagree with this statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "techonology called the ficial Action coding System enavles computer to identify human emotions is really good thing. we would like to know If they are lying about their emotional. Dr. Huang is really smart but I think he is right.\n\nFirst,computer to identify human emotions is really good thing because we would know If they are lying to us or no. Acoording the text \" can we actually \"calculate\"emotions like math homework\",I think they got the right point because our emotional is like calculate. They have to calculate are we really sad or happy. Another example from the text\" The Mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do\". I Hope our school should do like that so people we could help other people whenever we are sad.\n\nSecond,these day a lot of people they are lying to another people to much. Honestly, I used to cheat on my girlfriend too back in the day but the good part is that we don't know facial action yet. If we both know that time I bet she will say\" let do this because I want If you are cheating on me\". Still right now she don't know that I cheat on her but we are already broke tho. I saw on social media a lot Boyfriend and girlfriend did that. When they know they both got cheating,both of them feel wierd. People is really good at hide thing I hope we are did Facial Action so we could know how is lying or nah.\n\nFinally,I think Dr huang is really smart doing those kind of thing.\" The software is the latest innovation from prof,Thomas Huang if the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University OF\n\nlllinois.\"Some day I want be like him,He is my idol from now. Also If someone ask me who would I want to meet right now,I would say\" I want to meet with Dr. Huang\".\n\nConclusion,every year different technology is coming out,I can't Imagine what is going be like in 20 year later. What kind of technology would be going out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several reports in top-rated newspapers around the globe have confirmed and encouraged young generations to have the opportunity to learn from their community on the weekends or after school hours. According to some people’s opinion, youth should spend their free time on non-remunerated jobs to increase their social and future job skills. In this essay, I will summarize it would benefit the community.\r\n\r\nFirstly, many people can say that if teenagers do community work, they will avoid any negative actions against their own community. Working for the community increases the value of helping others as well as the sense of belonging and makes them stop reacting negatively forward with what they have built. For instance, in New York, there is extra work implemented after school where aggressive kids grow their own plants in the community garden to keep them calm, show them how to give to the community and value their work and effort. \r\n\r\nSecondly, non-paid community work should allow the youth to learn some social abilities to relate deeply to society that they have never been taught in school. People gain a wider range of experiences once they start their adult life. This may lead to new ideas for cohesion in society or a greater feeling of individual fulfilment after the work done in the community. As a result, collectivity is created as a benefit of all these activities. For example, a few studies centres in Europe have as an extracurricular subject at school where people get together in a range of nonprofit activities focused on helping many people in need.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, young adults would benefit from social activities that make them avoid negative behaviour toward their own neighbourhood. Also, learning useful skills to improve the relationship with others and gathering to support each other. From my point of view, I completely agree with the idea of young generations spending free time helping other people in exchange for life lessons and foment higher connection with a society which reduces any kind of attacks on the community and the number of problems in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While builders tried figure way dirigibles dock Empire State Building obstacles faced If dirigible held single cable would add stress building s frame The dirigible would cabled top also difficult Empire State s flat roof Also weather huge obstacle The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents CAPS line The wind would cause dirigible sway stable Builders also keep mind using building could harmful pedestrians well dirigibles would close ground The planning aircrafts land refill easy task builders", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author is not stated or unknown in this case, starts out saying \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" Driverless cars can shape our future into something new, amazing and beyond brillient. I too can envision that driverless cars will submerge in the world and replace the gas guzling and earth killing cars we have today.\n\nTechnology advances may not always be good but they might not always be bad either. The author gives both the positive and negative sides of the driverless cars. A lot of companies are making computer-driven cars but they are still requiring a driver for some aspects, such as roadblocks or accidents that need them to manouver around that they cant really sense. In paragraph 5 it states \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing a far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Driverless cars are proven to be more alert than humans can be which is a great safety call from the company.\n\nDriverless cars can be a great benefit to us and the safety of everyone around us. They can help if you're working in some type of buisness job and need to finsih up a couple things before a meeting. Workers needing to call and talk to some clients or even a stay at home parent who needs to help their kid on the way to school or something. They can also help with drunk drivers. They could take them home, wouldnt have to worry about someone getting hit, like a hit and run, or a car wreck. It would be much safer for them and everyone else that night who is out and about doing their thing.\n\nLike all things, they do have a negative side to them. Sensors could fail or the car could go into a unknown course and have no idea what to do, a car could come out of no where and cause a wreck, lots of things could happen but ther positives outweigh the negatives this time or in any case, they always do. I am looking forward to driverless cars in the near future from Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan. Wont you be too?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of keeping or changing the Electoral College has beeen around for quite some time. Some may argue that it is an unfair way to vote for presidency, although some may think otherwise. The Electoral College provides different opportunities for other political members as well by the common people. In this voting method you are able to trust each member running, they are for people who wants to express himslef politically, and that in balances political weight throughout.\n\nThe Electoral College requires candidates that are trustworthy not only to others but to everyone. It was said in an excerpt from\n\nSlate Magazine that ,\"... each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee...\" This basicaly means that we get to choose which candidate that we can trust with more big political problems. This shows that we will be heard through these electors that we know we can trust. Although it different cases, this might become a democratic problem from we are not able to speak personally, atleast we know how they will manage and work the elections properly.\n\nDifferent people have different perspectives on several things,especially when it comes to politics. Political places need the different views of other people to be able to make a non biased decision. They want to see how others feel and think about different situations. By keeping the Electoral College, we will be able to express our different political references. In the\n\n\"In Defense of the Electoral College\", it was stated that \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political reference...\". In defense to the Electoral College, people who were to vote are the same people who wants to express how they feel about one thing. The people who vote might feel so strongly about political situation than others. As stated in paragraph fifteen that this may become a problem for it is not a democratic way. Although I argue so. The people living in the country or city has the equal amount of chance to be heared and be represented by talented, intelligent,and trustworthy people.\n\nThe process of the Electoral College provides an even political balance throughout a nation, or so it stated by Posner. By cponducting the process of the Electoral College, it will create a more homogeneous region throughout the country. We will get the same equal rights and chances as well as people across the nation. Political balance is hard to keep withing a big state, although large states can be simmered down with Electoral College. It does not only do that for large states, but it also help the even smaller states.\n\nElectoral College has been an efiicient way that has been around for years to select reperesentatives in each state that may have a bigger chance in politics in the future. As the people of one country, we are able to get our voices heard throughtout the world. The Electoral College contains people who you are able to trust, the people who can express their political views very clearly, and that it provides political balance throughout.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im not so sure about this, a computer that tells you how you feel. Nope my head can't wrap around that. Everyones face is different. My bestfriend and I are together all the time and her amd face is different from my mad face. Her sad face is diferent from my sad face. Everyone works in different ways. I dont see a cumputer can tell you how you feel when you already know, They are making a model of a face, if a computer is able to tell you how you feel then it should be able to tell who you are. Whats the point in this whole thing. If I already know my feeling a than, why have a computer tell me, or anyone who's around. Im totaly against the computer that tells you how you feel. Some may like it for some reason but I don't. Know the next thing is its gonna tell everyone in your contacts to cheer you up. Its just gonna start texting people on it's own. Like when im mad i don't wnaat anyone around, I don't want to talk to someone I barely know, nor do I want my phone telling me i broken harted. When im mad, sad crying, ot yorrified. i want nobody around me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recruiting new employees can be a long and painful process. Some employers conduct interviews to select new employee. I disagree with the given statement, which says that interview is not a reliable method, and other methods are better. I believe that interview is reliable method, but there are many other methods which are equally good, and the choice is on the recruiters as to which method they find suitable for their need.\n\n \n\nThere are many reasons why interview is preferred by some employers for hiring new employees. Firstly, by the interview the recruiters can get an idea about the personality and social skills of the potential employees. In interviews, there are face-to-face interactions and the candidates have to answer impromptu questions, from which personality traits can be judged. Also, by asking some case study type questions, employees can judge traits like ability to handle pressure, confidence, and ability to think outside the box.\n\n \n\nHowever, there are many other selection methods with varied advantages. One of the common methods is written test. This method is preferred when the focus on judging the theoretical knowledge of the person. Another conventional method is group discussion. This method is good where basic job requirement of the company is conversational skills for instance jobs. Group discussion can be determining the convincing power of an individual. Last but not the least, there can be combination of all three methods like written tests, followed by group discussion and finally interview. This method is the most through of all the methods checking everything from personality traits to knowledge and also communication ability.\n\n \n\nIt is evident that different methods have different advantages and the most method cannot be singled out. It depends upon the situation. For example, interviews asses a person's individual traits better whereas written example in an area. There are shortcomings of every method too for example there is a chance of personal bias interviews. The combination of methods can take too long to select a candidate and may be too expensive to conduct for small companies.\n\n \n\nTo conclude, hiring method depends upon the job and company requirement. In some situations, conducting interviews is more apt, whereas in some situations the other methods may be more advantageous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From my point of view, I agree with encouraging youth to have（do) unpaid work to help local communities, but there is a little proportion of this opinion I don't agree, that is teenagers should be required to do this.\r\n\r\nNowadays, the majority of youngsters grow up in the internet environment, which causes them to have fewer opportunities to take part in realistic social activities than before. If they are willing to help local communities to do some daily work, I think they will improve their social abilities and accumulate practical skills, such as building friendships with other same ages and using office software on computers. These kinds of stuff can be positive effects on their lives.\r\n\r\nAnother point that I want to emphasize is that not all youth should be required for doing this, there are various activities for teenagers to utilize their time, such as advanced learning, physical exercises, or just relaxing with their families during leisure time. What matters is that young people have their own right to choose what kinds of activities they are enjoyed in.\r\n\r\nFrom the view of the other side, what a well-known fact is that the labour costs have become increasingly higher than before while social economics developed. But at the same time, studies show that charities are short of the labour force, for example, the component of old people in the population of our society becomes bigger and bigger, what is the intractable problem is that young people are exhausted from their jobs, which causes they do not have enough energies for taking care of their parents and children. If teenagers could help local charities to take care of the elderly, it will be a powerful positive effect to improve this social problem. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that teenagers who have abilities and wills can devote themselves to unpaid work to help local communities, it's definitely beneficial to both individual teenagers and society , and what I will consistently think is that people can not require all teenagers to do anything that is not written in the law until they are willing to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People computer something good cool Why cool cool computer help everything I reasons The first reasons school homework work project something like computer help lot Because computer sign internet go google web side The second reason computer help house example You big problem car something like You go computer see pieces car The thrid reason computer cool time make everything thing We go web facilitate life Now realize work homework project ideas writting book chat information print picture ect And architect make proper work house see computer cool But people use computer bad thing example pornography something bad cool appropiate people The computer something fabolous super genius My opinion computer help lot something like need life No live life something Something see family webcam This fabolous nt used webcam something bad learn thing nt know I think reason used computer good thing Appraise computer Please", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage would be great for people in a big city, not so much the country. It would be good for people in the city because everything is right beside each other and if it wasn't you can have taxis so it saves gas. Its also good to cut down on car usage because it will make us healthier. If we don't drive all the time its better for the environment.\n\nThe first reason for cutting back on car usage is because everything is right beside each other in a city. There is no reason to waste the gas to drive right down the road. In the country its different because it may be a small town yes, but everything may be 15 to 20 miles away. And we don't have taxi's or buses.\n\nHave you ever thought about walking everyday to school or work? Everybody would be in great shape! We would walk everywhere and if you're running late then you will most likely fast walk which is even better. People would start eating better because they would get cramps walking to work, they would start exercising more. Even if they didn't like walking to school or work they would have to so they wouldn't have a choice but to exercise.\n\nWe harm the environment everyday with the cars we drive. Why not just stop using cars so we can help our planet and maybe make it a better place to live? All it would take is you walking a couple blocks to school, work, or the store and that would already be helping us.\n\nThe thing is people today are so selfish and take everything for garnet. The things we could accomplish if we only cut back a little bit. Just save gas, if you are going to the store that is two blocks away, don't call a taxi, don't crank your car up, just walk there. People would be so much healthier if they walked everyday, and we would help the environment. I'm not telling you to start being a tree huger or anything, just think about it. Would you rather live in a polluted environment or a healthy one? The choice is yours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building If builder s would want dock dirigibles couldnt right area land New York City lack suitable landing area Another obstacle would know kind weather nature s self take control The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The dirigibles landed Empire State Building would weighed back would lead weights would weight Another reason obstacle dirigibles used gas hydrogen rather helium gas hydrogen highly flammable gas lot harm passengers present dirigibles could dangerous Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI believe that the Electorial college should stay because without it the U.S. would get out of control with voting. We need the Electorial college for so many reasons. Some of the reasons are so that we can vote and keep all of congress and our President in order. We need this mainly for voting, sometimes I can admit that not everything this Electorial College does I agree with. But for the U.S. reasons for staying as one we need this more then ever so that we can vote and so that we can have president and all our different congress people too.\n\nBut like I said at the top that there are some cons to this agrument, if we should or shouldn't have the Electorial College. Some things that bring conflict to this whole process is that some peoples votes wont have effect in the voting for who becomes president next or not. All votes should count, because if they know that why should we even vote if some peoples don't count. It is like we want that president who ever it is at that time to win and no votes even matter. This part is disappointing in the last paragraph of the Article.\n\nIt says \"...for example, or republicans in California. Knowing their vote will not have effect...\" Going back to what I said up in my second Paragraph, everyone needs to have their vote count. Everyone deserves a chance to say who they want to runa certain part in the U.S. should and should'nt be. Hello? Remember freedom of Speech whatever happened to that.\n\nIf Congress keeps this up people can get mad and riot about that or do bad things to harm people or congress. We need everyones vote to count no mater what. We need everyone to have a choice or say in there votes because they are voting for that person because they think that they are best to run the country or a certain roll in congress. So it may seem really crazy to think we need this but we really do so that congress doesnt fall and then conflicts come. We need this to have everything in congress and the people of the U.S. to run corectly.\n\nThank you for going out of your time to read this Mr. State Senator.\n\nSincerally, PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One hundred years ago inovators wouldn't have dreamed of inventing driverless cars. The very thought of an automobile being able to drive itself would have been a feet only the gods could do. In the twentieth century, though, technology has advanced more and more each day and that includes this mind boggling idea. Many would say that driverless cars are unsafe and would needlessly use up time and energy but the truth of the matter is, driverless cars are our doorway to another world of inventions that could not only benefit our daily lives but save others as well.\n\nInovators around the globe agree that self-driving cars are, at least, a great accomplishment for humanity. Until 2009 cars, such as these, did not even exist; because of the brillant minds of many amazing inovators, we can now say that humans are one step closer to a new type of world that doesn't have to involve death because of irresponsible and reckless drivers. In the passage \"Driverless Car are Coming\" the author even states that \"The in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" Of course the author is right, but what about all the sensors cars like these would come equipped with? Many say that these cars would lead to disaster and countless car accidents but, in fact, these cars are safer than any other we have seen before.\n\nAlthough we are not quite ready for driverless cars to be driven around town, inventions, such as these, are what make our civilization so unique. Self-driving cars are not only impressive because of how complicated they are, but the idea that someone could have to think that these cars could be made possible. Driverles cars are safe and might include back-up options in case something goes wrong and the driver needs to steer. Law-makers feel these automobiles cannot be safely driven around other individuals but they have obviously not looked into how able these cars actually are. These cars are what gives us a chance at other inventions that we cannot even fathom down the road. These automobiles are what will insure that our futures may be just a bit brighter because of these self-abled cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mistaken for a star, the planet, Venus is the second planet from our sun and nearly Earth's twin sister. Look more closely, it has proven to be a very challenging place to study closely. Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, because It is Earth's twin, life used to be on it, and it is making scientist curious and wanting to get on Venus.\n\nIt is said that the planet, Venus, is Earth's twin. Venus is the closest planet to Earth by denisty and size, it is occasionally the closest in distance too. The close planets, Venus, Earth, and Mars orbit the sun at different speeds. Earth is sometimes closer to Mars and sometimes closer to Venus. The Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eripting volcaneos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes just like Earth has.\n\nThe planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to stufy Venus. Their possible solution to the hostole conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Our jet airplanes would travel at a higher altitude to fly over many stroms. 30-plus miles above the surface, the tempertures would still be really hot at around 170 degrees, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on Eath. Radiation would not exceed Earth levels and Solar power would be plentiful. These are not easy condititons for a human but survivable.\n\nHumans have sent countless spacecrafts to land on Venus, which none of them survived the landing for more than a few hours. No humans were ever aboard. Venus's has a thick atomosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and there are clouds od highly corrosive sulfuri acid in the atmostphere. Venus has the hottest furface tempture of any planet in our solar system.\n\nDispite the dangers Earth's twin brings, Venus is still worth Exploring and having a chance to be explored. This planet has a lot of challenges but NASA is already finding a way past them, making it to where humanity still has a chance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to sail across the ocean. If so become a Seagoing Cowboy. First of all you get paid money for sailing. Secod if you like animal you can tme with them. Lastly, you can make new fried compations and more. Does this sound fun . This is why you should sigh up to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIf you become a Seagoing Cowboy you can get paid for sailing. If\n\nyou like boats then this is the job for you. You could repair broken boats. Also you could be the captin of the ship. You could be a person that cleans up after the animals.Lastly you could just watch the animals . I would want this job would you.\n\nIf that does not interest you the do it for the animals. Again all you have to do is watch animals. This job will be fun if you make it you. You could feed the animals. You can love the animals. You also could befriend an an animal. I dont know what you do. But it is up to you.\n\nLastly you ca make a friend. You can be friend with the person you sleep with. You could be frieds with the captin or the person who watches the animals at night. You could be friend with a animal. It your choice in who pick. This is the last reson you should become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI hope you want this job. You could make friend with anyone. Also you can take care of animals. Lastly you can get paid for sailing.This job could help the world. This is why you should sigh up now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter one greatest gifts life It s helps get day year long term life For many things go wrong day For example I could forget assignment ends big part grade difficult day All need make bad things seem like old memories long pleasant laugh It ten times better laugh shared someone else That s moved I tried keep look kids like loved laugh make people laugh The first days rough I met lot new people Some wanted know name others get know better fine There one person I noticed multiple classes So one day teacher asked us partner write myth creation something got way Quickly I looked around choose someone every one would partner I would sitting awkwardly without partner I asked boy classes I really noticed even heard talk He agreed partner We introduced told name He quite voice I barely understood name read paper We work paper together felt like individually I began throwing ideas around would say something laugh I could never hear would say We worked paper couple days continuing interchange words Meanwhile I still trying make least one good friend I thought maybe threw friend could meet friends time I would set friends In meantime I ate lunch sister You would think would slightly awkward uncomfortable It nt though actually pretty nice bond become stronger That would work well us made friends After time made couple friends ready move So one day eating lunch one new friends passed asked go sit I hoped bad would say even say maybe tomorrow There I sitting lunch room full eyes judging sitting anyone I began eat lunch faster could say sternocleidomastoid I Panicking inside completely calm outside I paced hallways looking someone hang Then I saw That three classes I casually walked tried start conversation For reason felt relaxed I trying make new friend I already talking one In beginning two guys talked classes school different previous Then sudden began talk movies especially resent funny ones We could stop laughing classes especially auto mechanics We would use shop time trying remember funny lines movies trying say act best could Soon also found watched many tv shows We could make laugh pretty much anything one us said I noticed special quality made extremely funny I nt sure anything said I would laugh uncontrollably We laughing buddies soon actually became great friends We really bonded laughter During time would find new things That made us realize lot alike Its months become greater friends I made friends making laugh laughing jokes I knew different tho I made greatest friend I ever Now I m moving s worst part I know bond sharing greatest laughs life continue stay friends long time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The years go on and knew inventions keep comming out. The facial Action Coding System is a new technology that has scientists have came up with. The tool is used to messure your state of emotions wheather you're happy, sad, worried, or even surprised this tool will say it all. This could be used for many things and i think its a good idea.\n\nThis technology can be used in school to show the emotions of students while they are in class. This could help school directors know wheather a teacher is a good teacher or, well not such good teacher. While calculating the expressions of students in the class students should have a excited and calm expression. Of course there will be that 2% bored out of their mind. But i think many kids should be relaxed at school. This will show the teacher that they understand the lesson and they dont need to reteach it. Lets say that almost more than half the kids are stressing and are showing a worried or bored expression on their face this could mean that the teacher is just not doing enough to help teach the kids. The teacher could also ask if the kids understand and most of them stay quite when confused with the lesson because they are scared of being judged. But now the teacher can know to reteach the lesson or move on with the next.\n\nAnother way this technology could be used is to show the expression when adds pop up, as the article states when an add that someone doesnt like pops up the next one could be an add that is related to one that is in their interests. in that form you wont see any dumb or just adds you dont need to see. Today in this scociety we use fake emotions just to be nice or so we dont get in trouble but with this technology we can truly understand and know how we humans feel. Many people lie when it comes to crimes this could help cops with their investigation go alot smoother by seeing peoples ex[pression and they could tell if the person is lieing or trying to hide things. It could possibble help end crimes.\n\nI believe this technology can be very helpful in society today. This technology could help kids around the world accomplish many things. It could also help people opinions get out there therefor we could have better things on earth and less bad things. With this invention many things could be done without even saying a word just by your face muscles. who would have thought!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story I read inspiring I relized true blooded family isnt family theres people bond little become family according close The mood created author happy It happy everything said story true made feel lucky great family freiends I call family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Does everyone need a personl car? Cars have allowed us to travel farther and faster than ever before. They give an individual the capablity to live far away from work and still be able to arrive at their job on time. Car also permit one to travel with multiple people as once. However, cars come with the huge problem of pollution, and many counrties have banned the use of cars to combat this issue.\n\nOnce Paris, France had seen recored amounts of pullution, in the form of smog, the government enforced a partial driving ban. This ban allowed car oweners with even numbered licese plates to drive one day and car owners with odd numbered to drive the following day. As a result of the ban the somg covering paris had decreased. On the other hand, businesses such as Delivery companies had lost revenue seening as they weren't able to drive.\n\nOther cities ,such as Bogota, Colombia have followed Paris's example and started a car-free day once a year. For three years now this car-free day has promoted alternative transportation, such as walking, biking, or riding a bus. Since, the car-free day has been stared 118 miles of biking paths, broad side walks, and sport centers have been created along with the decrease of polluted air.\n\nAlthough some cities may put restrictins on cars in the city Vauban, Germany an expermental suburb has been created in which cars are banned completely. As a result 70 percent of the citizens who live here don't own a car. As a result greenhouse gas have been drastically reduced. To make this possible city planners have created communities that are denser and in walking distance of stores and restraunts.\n\nIn conclusion cars come with many benifits such as, having the freedom to live anywhere, travelling miles in the matter of minutes, and traveling whenever you want to. However, Paris has put a restricted ban on cars. Bogota has a car-free day. Vauban has created suburbs with a comlete ban on cars. all these efforts are to decrease the pollution created by cars millions of people drive everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter important part life either friends making laugh making laugh One prime example three closest buddy s went hunting That trip bast worst hunting experience life worst shot missed two bears one biggest bucks life But best reached tired state every little thing funny The trip turned failure important thing blast teen age boys ridding around pick truck making laugh Another example one two boat loads friends went trip nearby fishing hole called small quiet many people go peaceful I brought fifteen foot duckfishing boat ten foot canoe I controlling big boat boat motor towing behind us canoe Inside canoe two kids nt mean funny cant help laugh We good fishing starting wrap On way back stopped fix pole slack rope pulling canoe became slack When started move slacked tightened canoe lurched forward unbeknown standing time caused almost fall mean almost mean thing left boat feet hands holding side rail The part water butt This turned high light trip still bring time time My friends lot adventures turn bad turn funny", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph story seasons change plant dont likely grow winter time So learn lesson take wait next time learn basically lesson right time comes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock one obstacle dirigible would held single cable tether This would add stress building s frame order make frame sturdy modifications building s framework cost sixty thousand dollars Another obstacle builders faced dirigible s use hydrogen highly flammable Since New York densely populated area would work well The dirigibles would also weighted back lead weights In order lead weights would end dangling high pedestrians street safety issue one last obstacle builders faced law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal ship ever tie building approach area", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a lot of negative and positive things about the planet venus. The negative things about it is it is dangores to explore it and to live in it. For example the dangores eathquakes in it are strong. Also there is alot of lighting strikes in Venus.\n\nThe positive things in Venus is that we can explore new things that we never saw before. We can learn about the air in it. We also can find new metirals in it.\n\nIt is hard and dangores to live in any planet but not Earth. First thing humans need to get to is gravity in the planet Venus. Humans are not use to live in a pllace with\n\nlow gravity like Venus.\n\nExploring the planet Venus can\n\nbe also dangores. When exploring Venus we need to get safety thing to use to explore it. The temperature is high in it whic humans also are not use to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient Two weeks ago said coming grandma happy bought sister bus ticket Bus tickets cost lot money It dollar That lot money She miss bus I really want see I could wait So suppose coming She nt come I sick I called job I said CAPS nt come said coming patient I said Next day CAPS yet I said CAPS patient tomorrow CAPS I understand I gave I thought coming So mom called godmom She said So told going I love I good I asked CAPS I cheese burger I said uncle mom said coming I told mom I giving coming So I said I hanging So I air hustled mom said uncle I get something eat I thought ment grandmother So I thought So I called back mom said ohh I get food uncle dog I said For dog She said know dog food So mom got god mothers house I could walk legs back arm every part I move body hurt So grandmother came house keys So said uncle whispered something I said Ran uncle room hug I said I went grandmother birthday She live south caroline yeah The writing That I patient So I could wait mom s", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The school plays a vital role in children's behaviour towards society ,especially during their secondary education. Few believe that private institutes produce a more responsible generation towards the community. On the other hand, some argue that private secondary academy has a negative impact on the nation and I agree with the latter. Let us discuss both views in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirstly, in private schools equal importance are given to both, academics and sports. The students from these academies manage to secure a good career in sports as well as in other sectors. For instance, a student who has good sports skills can compete, and win at national level games and represent our country. A student with good academics can secure a top college for his higher education. Hence, private academy can be an advantage for secondary university students.\r\n\r\nSecondly, though the educational quality of private academy are good, the tuition fees are very high. This makes the middle class people to think that the quality education is for the rich, and they stop their children from studies. As a result, more number of youngsters end up going for daily wages job. The future of country will be impacted when young minds are not educated.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , there are benefits in private institute with regards to quality, but at the same time number of students benefitted by the university are limited due to high fee structures. Therefore, private schools would be an negative impact on young minds as well as towards the society and nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes the use of this technology, facial action coding system can be valuable because if the student are bored or confused the teacher will chang up the lesson. For example when they chang the lesson up they can make it more fun for them and when they are confuse they can slow it down for them and try to help him with it. What this is that more people will pare attention more and will know wants going because it's not boreing. Another thing is when they are confuse they will know how to do it then because the teacher had slow down the lesson and the sturdent will know how to do it then.\n\nAnother example is if you are sad they will be a dd that pop up to make you smile if that ad don't work another ad will pop up. What this mean is that this technology can make you happy when you are sad or when you are angry it can make you lagh. So what I am trying to say is that this technolgy can chang the day of your life. This technolgy can help other peolpe out with they life how to tech the lesson and lot more so this will be perfict.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about a new technology called Facial Action Coding System, or FACS.\n\nThis technology lets computers know what the humans using it are feeling.\n\nAn example that the article gives is about ads.\n\nIf you see an ad on your computer and it picks up that you are disgusted or angry by it your next ad will be something different, but if it picks up that you are happy or intrigued by the ad then your next ad will be something similar.\n\nI think that this could potentially be used for good by helping kids be more interested in schoolwork, knowing when they are confused, and to help with students individual learning styles.\n\nI think with this new technology if a kid become uninterested in work that they are doing then the computer will know to switch it up.\n\nFor example if a student was answering questions about the periodic table and became bored, the computer could scan their face and detect that they are bored, it could then change the type of questions it is giving the student.\n\nThis helps the student become interested in their work again.\n\nInstead having the same thing repeatedly it could switch things up when the student becomes bored.\n\nThe student will then keep going instead of stopping or giving up when they are bored, which causes them to learn more and get more work done.\n\nAnother reason I think FACS could be helpful is when students are confused by what they are learning.\n\nThe computer could pick up on their confusion and go back and help them relearn what they didn't understand the first time.\n\nIt could detect which skills the student is confused about and help them until they understand.\n\nWhen the student doesn't show confusion anymore the computer could then move onto a new topic.\n\nI think this will mostly affect the kids that are too shy to go and ask for help from the teacher or in front of the whole class, instead they can go at their own pace and not worry about the other students around them.\n\nFACS could also help with the individuality of students learning style.\n\nIf one kid learns better when physically doing the things they are learning then the computer can pick up on that and give them more opportunities to physically do those problems.\n\nAnother example is if the student learns better by reading, FACS will know that they're less confused when they read about the topic and can give them their lessons in reading form.\n\nTeachers don't have time to work with each kid and their different learning style, but FACS has the time and can pick up on it.\n\nIt would also help the teachers with knowing how the majority of kids learn the best.\n\nFACS can help with the students that don't like to ask for help on their own, it will detect that the student is confused, bored, or ectera and help them.\n\nIt would help with making them more interested, knowing when they are confused, and their individual learning styles.\n\nIt can detect that the student is angry or happy with the way they are learning.\n\nIf teachers don't have time to help each student individually then FACS can.\n\nIn the end I think that FACS could be a big help in our school systems throughout the world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would not one feel violated? This system is programed to read one's emotions. What if that person does not want others to know how they truely feel? Having this new technology will make someone feel insecure and violated. Having this technology only to be used to read a students' expression would violate one's personal feelings, make one feel insecure, and creepy.\n\nThis technology would violate one's personal feelings. It would violate them because what if that student is sad because of something that happened to one of their family members. That student would not want to be read by this machine only for the teacher to then find out that they, the student, are sad. That student would not need anymore pity because that might cause them to burst into tears and or become even more sad. This would obviously make the student feel like they have to talk it out with someone even if they are not ready too yet.\n\nThe FACS can also make a student feel insecure. Imagine having clinical depression and then going to school one day and being read by a machine on a day where the anti-depression pills are not working. Being surounded by all those happy people in a class would most likely make a student with depression feel bad about themself. They would beat themselves up for not being happy and having depression. This can lead up to that student having a lot of insecureties about one's self.\n\nThis program is just creepy. Nobody would like to have a computer read one's emotions when they are doing work on a computer. It would just be weird and over the line. One's computer would be able to KNOW how one feel. Computers are not supposed to know that. Also what if the program allows one's computer to have a voice of its own like Siri? Someone could be sitting in front of their computer looking sad and all of a sudden their computer talks asking if they want to talk about it. Albiet this technology would be able to recognize when a student is becoming bored and confused,it would not help in the long run because it may malfunction and misread a student's face.\n\nHaving this technology in a classroom would not be valuable. Technology has come a long way, but having a comouter know how one feels is over the line. A computer should never have to be one's only friend who understands them because they, the computer, can read one's emotion. Although humans do perform this type of emotional reading towards comrads, technology can not. because this technology would be able to recognize when a student is becoming bored and confused, but it would not help in the long run because it may malfunction and misread a student's face. Violation of personal feelings, insecurities, and being creeped out would be an effect of having technology read one's emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Have seen someone emailing coworker person laptop coffee shop Well I I know need benefits People everday use computer work Also keep touch friends family Plus s start new improved future whether use computer get latest gossip job computer important part people s lives My mother works computer everyday job though seem important family needs money food bills Half uses computer jobs money like family Recently computer company took survey see many people use company work A whopping amount use computer work That people benefit using computer They depend email get boss layout statewide meeting save get raise deserve You even uses computers write articles paper More half benefit working computers Everyone says family important thing right What yo live far away Well email course Some experts spendiong much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family originally invented keep touch family So experts reason people use computer keep touch families Even people army use comptuer communicate Using computer nt bad people think Look The future coming New technology greater knowledge coming Computers start people nt stoped since Sure course computer couple downsides But thing invention nt No one stop coming learn live move Computers beginning something good nt stop something could even better Next time go outside look guy business suit emailing girl coffee shop smile know benefitting Whether s work one keeping touch relative Maybe someone next big idea future Take chance computer stop negativity pleasant surprise come way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To whom it may concern,\n\nIn my own opinion I think we should keep the electoral college because of the specific fact that it has to make candidates strategize on which states to heavily campaign in. Some candidates don't even go to some states. Like in \"2000, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina\" (Source 3 paragraph 13). With that being said, most candidates will try to get as many swing states as they can with a few large states, (California or Texas), \"Voters in {\n\nswing\n\n} states are most likely to pay closer attention to the campaign-to really listen to the competing candidates...\" (Source 3 paragraph 20). That is good because if they are paying closer attention to the campaign, then candidates will make sure that the views that impact those states more are adressed heavily. \"Democrats in texas and Repulicans in California might vote the for the other side because of the fact that their is vote will ahve no effect\" (Source 3 paragraph 23). That would be assuming that in the up coming election a Republican candidate pops up and surprises evryone in California and all of a sudden 55 more electoral votes to the Republican party. \"Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce and the AFL-CIO all agreed on abolishing the Electoral College\" (Source 2 paragraph 1). They all said and agreed on it, but the one thing about it that's so great about the electoral college is that it also has the voters watch and think about who they vote for. If they had gotten rid of the electoral college, then voters wouldn't take their time and they would vote for whoever had the popular vote in their state. If that were to happen then the whole election would be based of of what the candidate looks like and not what he's saying. \"Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with new ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy\" (Source 2 paragraph 11). To me that just seems like a waste of time trying to get new electors and replacing the ones that were against one candidate all because of a standing on the political spectrum, doesn't that seem a little to much. Most people might also think that every state has a \"winner take all system\", but Nebraska and Maine both have a variation of proportional representation (Source 1 Paragraph 7). That is something that voters should know about because it shows that their state is doing what it can to make sure it isn't all 1 sided.\n\nAs I conclude this letter, strategize before you campaign and you could be the next president.\n\nSincerely,\n\nJohn Owens", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some materials libraries information offensive towards others But removed found offensive Some people believe removed depending bad offense But materials removed sexual racist life threatening offense Some material offensive comments sexual If offense sensored author artist material went far good reason material removed It make person feel emotions bring It also make person feel violated offended There material racist comments Racism one biggest conflicts world today It something starts fights arguements It also causes individuals feel bad Racism cause people feel hurt also So much racism material removed There material offense seems life threatening Say book whole nation author slips something seem like nation would danger someone feel offended want material removed Material much threat make one feel like life danger like something bad going happen They would feel life threatening offense want removed shelves So offensive materials removed shelves Yes If found sexually life threatening offense racist comments removed individuals wo nt feel offenses life threatening hurtful cause negative emotions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay features setting affected cyclist The cyclist used words discribe setting like flat road short rolling hills There also example The way cyclist discribed setting gave reader visual picture I think cyclist affected setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The belief certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves offensive depends situation material relating If one wants see type resources heshe must mature enough withstand It depends material library situation s If children s area I highly suggest removed since s clear child process type information If s teen section person must mature enough take sort inappropriate matter leave In adult section however argument sort obvious person must fully mature take sort material One example sort aspect whether inappropriate material removed comic books called CAPS tales CAPS These type materials inappropriate disturbing events books distributed teen section Now ages years age usually spend time would likely read type information Some teens would horrified looking books others would fascinated It varies people type material would like read It depends situation material distributed Another example whether inappropraite material taken shelves movies put situations There time young lady around early teens wanted check type movie never saw So checked watched parents saw uneasy sections movie The person thought jumping situation If person mature enough go matter would fine young still made matter worse Whether inappropriate material removed shelves depends material distributed shows one person change difference situationTherefore whether type material taken shelves depends situation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people would say that driveless cars are a pretty good idea. But I don't believe it is. Most people would get in accidents more often.\n\nThe reason why I say dirveless cars are not the smartest idea is because if you have driveless cars everywhere there would be a higher chance of getting into an acccident than just you driving the car. This would likely happen because what happens if the system malfunctions on you and you are just there driving not knowing that the system isn't working, and then before you know BANG you hit another car.\n\nNow, some people are saying \"well in the article it says that you need to be aware of you enviroment\" which in other words you need to know what is going on outside of your car. But, lets be real most people now and days don't really look at the road. They are texting or doing something while not looking on the road. So, what I am trying to say is driveless cars are not woth the wait nor the money. Most people in this world will probably be doing the same exact thing when you are the one drive the car.\n\nSo, some of us can be clear to most of you guys. That driverless cars are not woth it and that most if not all of us will be doing the samething as before and nothing will change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,\n\nState Senator:\n\nI am writing you this letter today to tell you that we should change the elction by popular vote for the president of the United States. At the most, the electoral college is extremely unfair to the voters, and the system allows much worse disaster than the fiasco that happened in 2000.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair to the voters voting for the president and other candidiates. Using the \"Winner-Take-All\" system, the voters know they have no chance of winning, focusing on the tight races in the states also. All because they can't spend time in states.\n\nAlso, voters vote not for the president, but for the state of electors who vote for the president. Get this, if you lived in Texas, and you wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pleadged on him. Don't forget that there is the off chance that those electors won the stateside election, they would go to Congress and John Kerry would get 34 electoral votes but, who are they electors? I'll tell you, they can be anyone not holding public office.\n\nAlso, another reason why the Electoral College should be vacant, is because of the what happened in 2000. During the 2000 campaign, 17 states did not see the candidiates at all!\n\nThose sates would include, Rhode Island, and South Carolina. Also, voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign add. Not one, and the electoral college has the power to make things worse than what happened in 2000.\n\nIt's no secret anymore, the electoral college is unfair, irrational, and outdated. We should not let the electoral college get away with what they are doing! completley unfair to the voters and another fiasco like 2000, or even worse than that can start up again. It's hard, it's very hard for me the say this, but I know, and you know that Bob Dole was right, we need to abolish the electoral college!\n\nI hope you have the time the read this letter and seriously think about making some changes. I don't know much about politics but, I do know that what the electoral college is doing is not right at all. They are cheating voters just like they have been donig since 2000, maybe even a long time before that.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\nSCHOOL_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's life, English is one of the biggest common language in the world. It is often argued that the benefits of learning English as a global language will superior to its drawbacks continueously. I completely agree with this idea due to the fact that English is one of the easiest language to learn and most education system in the world involve English as one of the courses.\nEnglish should be continue to use as a global langauge because it is easy to learn. Each language in the world involves different movings of the tongue in the mouth, but some of the languages have similar tongue positions with English, such as Italian, Spanish and French. It will be difficult for people in the world to start adapting a new language and using completely different tongue positions. For example, chinese, one of the most challengeable langauge in the world, it mostly does not need the support of the tongue to touch the teeth or anything else. It is hard for people with other mother language to adapt the pronounciation. Therefore, one of the biggest advantages of English as a common language is the easyness of it.\nIn addition to the easyness of English, numorous education systems in the world include English as one of the important subjects to learn support the benefits of English that will continue to overseed its disadvantages. Since English as one of the spreading languages in the world lasts for many years. A lots of generations learn English since their childhood and English already take a huge part of their educational studies. It is hard for people to abandon this language and step out of their comfort zone. For instance, one of my best chilldhood friend learn English for almost 6 years, but since she went to Spain for two years as exchange students, she get used to the way of learn English, instead of Spanish, so she fell her grade there. It is clear that English as one of the essential courses in world, it has an important connection with the education system globally and it has a huge influence in our studies.\nIn conclusion, the easyness of learning English and the crucial role of it in the educations system support my opinion that I completely believe that the advantages of spreading English as an important language in the world will keep outweigh its flaws.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the developement of \"Driverless Cars.\" Although a driverless car may sound cool, or may change the world someday, there are some negatives that go along with the production of the car. Driverless cars would be an expensive thing to prouduce. It would cause human driveres to not pay attention as much as they need to, and traffic laws would need a lot of updating.\n\nThe car would not be completely driverless, in the text it reads \"Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over...\" With that being said, a driverless car wouldn't be the correct name for it. Another reason the production of these cars would not be a great idea, is the money. For the car to respond to the things it needs it would require massive upgrades to existing roads, which is not practical. Along with the road needing upgrades, the car would too. The car would need a whole lot of sensors, in the text it states, \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" As if the human body is the best driver in the world, I feel as putting most of the control in the car would not be a great idea. To get cars up to the proper state they need to be would cost a lot of money.\n\nIn a driverless car the \"driver\" would still need to be alert when \"driving the car.\" The thought of having a driverless car would make people think they can text, eat, play games, and drink while driving. Yes you say, \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver,\" how reliable would those cameras be, they could easily go out, break, or mess with other signals.\n\nThe law is what is stopping these cars from being out on the road. Traffic laws are written in the assumption that a human driver has control at all times, not when there is an accident, construction, or busy traffic. Traffic laws can change frequently, but if these driverless cars were to become a thing, traffic laws would need changed abudantly. New laws would need to be set in place for liability in the case of an accident. How would you solve that? Who is at fault? The driver has control when it needs to, but the car is doing most of the work. The statement about the displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over, what if the driver can't get the displays to turn off.\n\nIn conclusion, the production of \"Driverless Cars\" should not continue. It will cost a whole lot of money to get existing roads up to pass an inspection. Along with the fact that the human behind the wheel in case need be could fall asleep, drinking, or texting and not paying attention could cause more accidents then needed. And finally take into matter all the changes traffic laws would have to make or change. It would be better to let humans driver themselves to where they need to be instead of some computer genorated car get me to my destination.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir nice homie feeling The author tries let know home physical walls place relationships made The congregation family friends The signifagant good times celebrations occurred people loved home The author tries show love affection throughout home always filled air sent music life love The author shows love goes throughout home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many features setting affect cyclist In beginning get water becomes dehydrated goes rough ride loses energy Then finds bait gets water All greatly affect cyclists condition", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face on Mars\"\n\nmay look like an alien has constructed it but the shadows of the bumps make it seem like it is an actual human face. If it were aliens who had built the Face on Mars, wouldn't there be more? The answer to that question would\n\nbe yes. The pictures from 2001 show that that the artifact was really just a natural creation. Before scientists had found the Face on Mars, the question is...just how old is it?\n\nIn the beginning of the aricle it states,\"New high-resolution images and 3D alimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa\" (UTFONM, 1). Thus meaning that the Face on Mars was not created by aliens. Before the pictures in 1976 and 98' were awful quality, the picture in 2001 shows exactly what the Face on Mars is. The article also stated that the Face on Mars,\"...huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by the shadows giving the illusions of eyes, nose, and mouth\" (UTFONM, 1). This is proof of it only being a natural landform.\n\nIf aliens had created this form, wouldn't there be more of these human looking landforms. There is no evidence in the article that states aliens were the creatures who made the Face on Mars. If the Face on Mars was created by aliens, NASA would have wanted to research it instead of hiding it because they would've gotten paid. According to the article it states, \" Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars\" (UTFONM, 1). It would have been beneficial to NASA if it were made by aliens.\n\nIt makes sense to infer that it could only be a structure made by aliens because who knows the capabilities of these creatures. Although in the article it states,\" There was no alien monument after all \" (UTFONM, 1). There is solid evidence that the structer was not created by an extraterestrial creature. Even knowing it not being made by an alien, when was it created and how was it created? That answer we may never know.\n\nIn conclusion the landform found on Mars is not made by aliens. This was proven on April 5, 1988. The purpose of the article was to show people that the Face on Mars was just a natural monument. In the end of the article it states, \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West\" (UTFONM, 1). We even have similar things like the Face on Mars on Earth. All in all the form on Mars was not created by any aliens of any sort.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lets begin with so far there is no such thing as aliens or any extra terestrial life for that matter. Also \"The Face on Mars\" is just a natural land form.\n\nAs stated in the article \" The Face on mars \" was first discovered in 1976 in thr Cydonia region of the planet. It was discovered while the Viking 1 spacecraft was going around the planet taking pictures. Trying to find a landing space for it's sister ship Viking 2. Although releasing the photo to the public brought attetion to mars it also lead people to belive that there could be life or was life on mars.\n\nAlthough few scientist believed that \" The Face on Mars\" could be a alien artifact 18 years later they returned to the red planet because \" Jim garvin explaind that thwy felt it was important to taxpayers.\" Finally on April 5, 1998 The \"MGS\" flew over Cydonia for the firt time. Michael Manlin and his camera crue took a picture \"ten times better\" than the photo that was taken by the Viking. A lot of people were curious and nervous waiting on the release of the photo. Some were disappointed when it was released because \"it revealed a natural landform.\"\n\nThey were disappointed because \"The Face on mars is located at \" 41 degrees north martian latitude.\" They werent satisfied with thiss because at this latitude it was winter in april of 1998. Which is a cloudy time of year for mars. People were claimimg that perhaps because the camera had to oeer through thr clouds the alien markings were hidden by the haze.\n\nJim Garvin, chief scientist for NASAs Mars Exploration Program said that \"its not easy to target Cydonia infact its hard work.\" Then on April 8, 2001. The \"MGS\"\n\nwas passing over Cydonia and drew close enogh for a picture and they took the picture from the direct center of the face. Also the picture that was taken was better quality than the two before it and was taken on a \"cloudless summer day.\"\n\nIn conclusion if \"The Face on Mars\" would have been an acient alien arifact you would have been able to tell. So it is just a natural land form. Although it is similar to the lava dome is in the snake river plain of Idaho.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we should have driverless cars. Driverless cars may beneifit a lot for humans. We have tons of human errors and accidents. Having driverless cars can help reduce those problems. People may hate the idea of driverless cars, but I think it would be a good idea for us.\n\nDriverless cars can help with a lot of things such as accidents and human errors. We may be in a huge rush and start multitasking. Women will start doing their make-up while driving, men and women may eat while driving, or we all may start texting. The worst thing that could also happen or has happened is being on drugs or drinking and driving. We all know that drinking, texting and driving has caused many accidents for years now.Having driverless cars can help with this because we wouldn't be driving unless we had to.\n\nGas may be expensive in some places around the world. People drive far to work, school, and etc. We use a ton of a gas going somewhere we normally may have to go almost everyday. We travel around with our family using a lot of gas as well. According to this article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" in the first paragraph it says that cars would use half the gas of today's taxis. By having the driverless car we would save way more money and use it for something else such as bills.\n\nI think having driverless cars may be a big beneifit. We'll have less problems around. Having less human errors would be a big beneifit. I talked about what it would benefit and how it would. I believe that we should have driverless cars for many reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What students are going to follow after high school will decide their future career, so making a good decision is very important. Many people believe that getting a university or college degree is the best option after finishing school, meanwhile others think that starting with a practical work is more beneficial. In this essay both opinions will be discussed. \n\n \n\nNowadays most well-paid and convenient jobs are only available for high educated candidate, that explains why a large group of the community believe that studying at the university is mandatory to achieve success. For instance, a student who will graduate as a dentist, a physician or an engineer will get his dream job so easily, that will lead to a high life quality and better mental and physical health. Thus, the importance of having a diploma in order to have a good career is a common belief among people. \n\nHowever, other people are convinced that working straight after school is the best option. That can be explained by the fact that young people get the chance to gain a lot of experience with a real job rather than following the theoretical traject. Furthermore, a person can never be independent, unless he or she has a stable income, which is mostly not possible to have as a student. Earning money also affords a comfortable life. It is statically shown that in the Netherlands, 50% of people who chose to work have their own cars, in contrast only 7% of students own vehicles. \n\nIn sum, both working and studying have their own advantages, whereas people will always look at life from different perspectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a contentious argument about why folks have become keener to know about the evolution of the house or building in which they are residing. In this essay, I will examine the main causes of the same followed by possible sources people can opt for.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the public has started developing an interest to know more about their homes in order to avoid getting stuck in illegal property blunders and for personal safety reasons. Moreover builders these days are misguiding their customers through activities such as building construction on land which is not authorized for construction. For instance, recently a builder from Delhi, India built a residential building of 15 floors in a prohibited area and sold the flats to clients for a very high price. However, after a short period of time government authorities took action against this illegal infrastructure and innocent owners were not only fooled but also wasted their money as they were not aware of the fact that the building was constructed in a restricted area. \r\n\r\nDue to such reasons people are becoming very cautious when it comes to buying any kind of property as it is showing a continuous upward trend in terms of price. To tackle this situation, in this modern era, solutions to every problem can be found on Google, so people should definitely read reviews about the builder as well as the property which they are planning to buy. Apart from this, getting information from the people who are already staying in the same locality can be a very effective way to know more about the advantages and disadvantages.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although there are many property frauds taking place due to greedy builders , self-awareness will be the best way to avoid it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I support advances technology I going tell thinks way One rainy day I dont think going go play rain could go computer play games Talk friends Or could use computer school work work Say look something school ca nt get liebery computer house You use find info You use computer learn something like making somthing lot You use computer school nt go hang friends You something online Last things ask friends homework nt miss So I support advanes technology", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph want reader see saeng stop passes drivers test like geese wont stop south winter author trying show beauty trying going obstcles goal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea by giving many examples towards the text. He provied enough support towards his idea. The idea of studying Venus is worthy despite the dangers. With the information provied we can determind that the author gave enough reasons. For example \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth.\"(para.3.) What its trying to tell us is that Venus is a planet in which in life is nothing close to ours. The planet is buring hot due to the fact it's closer to the sun. Explaining that life in Venus isn't possible human.\n\nScientists take a big role, they are the ones that plan everything. The amount of time and effort placed into their work determines if we get to travel to Venus. For example \"scientists seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get uo close and personal despit the risks.\"(para.6.) Getting up close and looking at the real thing there... standing in front of you, unsure on what to to do. Everything around you looking brand new, thats what the scientists want,, To be able to look at the Venus in person, the authour supports this claim by supporting deatil.\n\nAfter reading the passage I am able to infer the main idea, which was the author supporting his idea of Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The infernace I was able to capture,\"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors.\"(para.8.) This paragraph gives us the idea of us humans. We could be told one millions times not to do somehting, but at the of the day we all end uo doing it like it or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people want to search history about historical places like accommodation or buildings that they live in and are familiar with. This essay will discuss why people are interested in finding the story about their living building and what are the effective methods to find the answer.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are two reasons why people want to know about history in their house: they prefer the mystery of history and they have expected to find treasures. Firstly, people who love to learn about the past are interested in historical places and stories, especially their own accommodations that are really close to them and easy to solve the mystery. Another reason is that they love to be a treasure hunter like other famous hunters who are able to hunt a lot of rare artefacts and antiques. For instance, a well-known treasure hunter in India said that he found tons of golden spoons under the basement at home. Then, the golden spoons were sold to the billionaire and he earned lots of money.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nThere are some possible means to help families research information about their buildings. Almost every historian and archaeologist suggests asking for the data from the elders in their family since they have experiences and authentic stories. In other words, grandparents have knowledge which has been told by the ancestors about their house. They can give the correct evidence. In addition, some people believe that the most relievable data are from the central library in their hometown since the statistical knowledge and fundamental knowledge was recorded on a basis of information and only genuine families can access these sources.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the purposes of finding history in their accommodation are people interested in the mystery of places and want to find antiques to receive a large amount of money. Moreover, information on the past can be gained by asking from the elders and library of the city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "''the challange of exploring venus '' in the number four the author says Astonomers are facinated by venus because it may wee once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system.long ago, venus was probably covered largely with ocean and could have supported various form of like earth, the author seggest that studing the venus is a worthy because to learn all about the planet because our solar system is the most important in the world it's worthy to know about the planet the planet exist for us to give us sun and cold for our good to be fine and nathing happened to us the world is our all the people live in the world have to worry for the atmosphere the venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even thought mercury is closer to our sun.beyond high preasure. venus is actually a planet ,in our solar system venus is the second planet from our sun while venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventage point of earth,it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely\n\nin conclusion, is about the planet and aur solar system ,to study about the planet all about the planet is important to know because is important for all the people in the world and the venus to because is the second planet from our sun in the world so venus and mars is our other planetary neigbor,orbit the sun a different speeds the is my conclusion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think having smart cars is a good idia . I think it will prevent people from gettin injuries and getting in a car carsh .but then\n\nthere is some pros and cons about having smart cars that are\n\nsafer in the roeds .I n my point of view i think we are try to prevent the death rate from people crashing each year .So we are making this world a better place .\n\nI think that the good thing about this cars are that thay dont take up as much fuel.They do prevent injuries from happening.\n\nthey made the next reveloution of cars alot safer. The car\n\nlowers down are death rates of car crashes each year .You dont have to stand in trafic no more because it tells you were traffic is.\n\nMy negative thought's about this is that some thing can go wrong with this piece of technlogy.They are having a argument about if some body crashes who's responsabilty is it you or the creater. The car\n\ndoesn't always protect you from crashing it tells you that you are about to carsh bout it dont stop the car.some people are picky about the look of the car. Thay should test it out to see if it is a safer way to drive.\n\nI feel like they should take thoughs negative thoughts and make them into good ones. But we know that no matter what the futer is gonig to change so they are going to make cars safer. They are going to make technology better then ever .We should be thinking in are safety and thoughs cars could lead to that.make us a better state makes us look better to.\n\nSo like i siad trying to make this world a beter place to live on.so i say lets give this idia a try we have to in my opinon . let I siad it prevocts people from crashing . lower death rates in are state makes us look better. i know there is some pros and cons but guy think about your childern they need to be safe to..", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From seemed possible way make Empire State Building famous relizing hard going builders Empire State Building faced several obsticals allowing dirigibles dock These problems included added Stress buildings frame Therefore foundation would motified Strengthened accomodate added stress Not builders worry structural winds The winds top building constantly shifting due violet air currents After obsticlas builders finally realized dream impossible overcome", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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