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"content": "I think shouldnt remove material libraries s found offensive People find different things offensive others If started takeing things thers good possibility ll loose everything books people One example I say people offensive bout movies violent scense Others like violence shows The librarie might way someone get ahold something like Another example magazines contain material nt want kids round seeing That magazine could help student assignment school Kids might need material offensive could help life In conclusion I think take movies books someone finds offnesive Some offensive material could used help students education Other offensive material adults enjoy reading watching Just one person finds something offensive mean next person comes",
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"content": "It is often said that going to a place of further education is the best way to have a successful career, whereas others think that it is preferable to go to an activity immediately after leaving school.It is the opinion of this writer that the former and latter choice is the best opinion.\n\n First of all , if enlistment goes to an academy or college , admission will get more qualifications.There are some benefits of studying at a university or college. enlistment will have more knowledge and it was helped them how to apply for a job easily . For example, some enlistment wants to be an architect, they would learn a building or structure and field of study architecture, and students would have more knowledge about that if they studied in an academy or college.\n\n By contrast, there are some benefits of getting a job straight after school .Firstly, work means steady earnings, so it helps to earn money and this reduces the finances. Although recruitment has more experience , they work hard. Admission gets an office straight get an activity straight, they will have fewer gain opportunities to get a good activity . For example, enlistment doesn't have qualifications, they want to apply for a business they want, and the company will not be applied them because they do not have the qualifications the company need.\n\n \n\n In conclusion, if admission goes to an educational institution or college , admission will gain opportunities to get a good job and they can do whatever job they like . I believed that students must study hard , go to good universities and will do an activity they like.",
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"content": "Censorship libraries In opinion I nt really care books movies magazines censored I m person much reading I know books magazines movies filled perfanity In opinion authors way wanted I believe libraries keep type materials shelves sections maybe Taking shelves would disrespectful authorsproducers That work took time entertainment Maybe really dislike cursing books magazines want gone Well listen heeps heeps books find bad If movie type person also like cursing nudity plenty movies innocent I hate I sit watch movie family sudden actors start throwing around word half naked women appear But would simply read movie back case ask would know choose different movie One family oriented safe children eyes So materials sorts fowl language indecent human behaviors nt mean ban libraries If people want fill mind filth let But get stuff Simply try telling people better books read nicer movies watch Be role modle teach healthier viewings",
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"content": "Deterioration is observed in almost every human body after reaching a certain age and therefore it is believed by some people that young members should be made obliged legally to take care of their elders when they face problems in physical, mental and financial terms. I agree with this statement to a large extent reasons for which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirst reason for my agreement is that laws would make young people to make plans that involve securing not only their own future but also of their parents. Usually, people take their needs into consideration while planning future. Not many consider the fact that along with them their parents are getting older too who would after some time require some support finance and emotions wise. Existence of a rule which mandates youth to take care of the elderly would help in safeguarding the future of those who have contributed in the growth and development of their respective nations when they were still young. \r\n\r\nAnother reason why I concur with this view is that old people suffer from mental and physical ailments mostly because they have stress about their future. Since their body and brain are not in their optimum status they can't help but feel helpless and weak. Because of this reason majority of the people suffer from diseases such as heart disease, brain tumor, blood pressure and many more. If there is a law, for instance, that asures them their future, these problems would, in my opinion, reduce by half. \r\n\r\nThough there is a possibility that majority of old people's future would be secured because of the law requiring young people to look after the elders, there has to be some other law too which asks young people to save for themselves to save their future. Because future is unpredictable, one may or may not have someone to take care in the future. Hence, I have one more suggestion regarding the laws to give, which is that young people must have a legal obligation of saving money for themselves to protect their future even if there is no young member in their life to support them. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having a lawsuit that requires young people to protect the future of their elder family members could help in giving them much needed security in their last years of life, however, there should also be a legal necessity for young peoe to save some money for the life later.",
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"content": "People have different viewpoints on whether the creation of automatons supports the advancement of human life in tomorrow or it merely brings problems for humanity. While the entrance of androids to daily life can cause some inconveniences, I would argue that they are useful to accompany human growth.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many reasons against the use of robots. Firstly, one of the biggest concerns surrounding the introduction of robotic automation is potential job losses. If a robot can run at a faster and more constant pace, even in dangerous tasks, thus it could lead to unemployment. Secondly, robots can do all repetitive movements or tasks from what they are programmed to do. With the intensive application of robots, humans can become overly dependent on machines, losing their mental and physical abilities. Also, if the control of robots is not working properly, they can cause destruction.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that there are several benefits of using cyborgs in service to improve human life quality. The first could be that robots can work in harsh environments such as areas that require extremely high or low temperatures, and those that present a high level of chemicals. In such cases, automated robots offer the ideal solution, as they will continue to operate without damage, thereby minimizing material waste and eliminating unnecessary risks to human safety. The second is the constant productivity of automatons. By differentiating from humans whose breaks are required in the working time and sometimes their attention span slows down, robots can work 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, and keep working at 100% efficiency to serve non-stop to humanity. Besides, robots do not take vacations or have unexpected absences.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the usage of robots can implant some negative impacts on human life, it seems to me that all the innovations of technology have the same purpose of making a better quality of mankind life and the point is that we should find a mechanism to take maximum advantages and limit drawbacks of them to enjoy technology era.",
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"content": "They probably ended like build suspense leave reader good note someone think things going get better Saeng get license They get money",
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"content": "Will Venus truly every be explored? In my opinion no because there are many obstales that our sister planet presents. Such the inhospitable weather. atmosphere and, past attempts failing.\n\nInhospitable weather is an exapmle of the obstacles Venus presents. Dispite Mercury being the closest planet to the sun Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system. With tempts. reaching up to an Average of over 800 degrees fahrenheit. Beyong high pressure and heat additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthqaukes, and frquent lighting storm and, If the heat don't kill you those things surely will.\n\nAlso, impediments like the atmosphere also present obstacles. With a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blanketing Venus as of now no spacecraft will make it through there with no scarches. Also clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere to add on the the carbon dioxide. With these conditions the environment would even crush a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of the ocean.\n\nWhich brings me to my last and final point that past attempts have already failed. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on the cloud-draped world. With each previous mission being unmaned, and for good reason. Since not one spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Expalning why not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nFinally, In conclusion this is why I firmly believe that Venus will never truly be explored like any other planet in our solar system because of all the obstacles it presents.",
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"content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because if you like to help people, in this program you will help them by getting supplies for them. If you also like animals, you will care for them and seem them everyday. If you like being on water this is a great program for you. The animals will be on the boat for you to care for them. Also you\n\nwill be traveling a lot to get the supplies.\n\nIt is also a great way to learn a lot of things. You will learn how to take care of the animals and learn about the places you go to. Taking care of the animals is not the only thing. At night you will take shifts and switch to be a watchman. Every hour you will check on the animals too see if they are okay or to just feed them. Also you will walk around the boat to make sure there isn't anything dangerous out there.\n\nIn the meantime if you are just waiting you can have a little fun on the boat. You can play baseball and volleyball with the rest of the people on the boat. Also you can play table tennis tournaments, fenncing, boxing, reading, anad whittling. Then when your done playing, you have to go back to work. You can have a lot of fun just by being on a boat.",
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"content": "When thinking about how we should improve classrooms and education one thing that does not come to mind is Facial Action Coding System. Prof. Thomas Huang is working on a new type of technology that is able to read human emotions and has even suggested it would be a good tool to use in schools. Using the technology it can read a student's emotionas and tell if they do not understand what is being taught but how serious is this problem that computers are needed to read emotions? FACS ( Facial Action Coding System) should not be used to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom.\n\nPutting a computer with new and developing technology in a classroom is expensive and uneccessary. In some cases it would cause more problems than solutions. Prof. Haung's and other people are \"developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\" so his technology is not fully developed and may not be able to detect everything. Devopling can mean many things like it may not all work or still has problems detecting every emotion a human produces. Humans are complex and so are their emotions and actions making a computer detect somthing that is not black and white suggests that humans are like computers when in fact humans are more creative and therfore more intelligent. A computer can only go so far so to make it \"calculate emotions-like math homework\" puts emtions and math on the same level. Emotions are not like math it is more diffcult to understand exactly how well FACS works in detecting how people feel.\n\nThe technology may be able to adjust lessons to make learning easier for the students but where does that leave teachers? The article claims the system is able to \"modify the lesson, like and effective human instructor\" but how would the instructor have time to change and individualize their lesson plan to benfit everyone as a whole. Just like students have different ways of learning teachers have different ways of explaining. Not every student would benefit from the computer unless each student had their own specialized classroom. Again human and computer communication are compared, \" most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to understand that, too.\" Students can tell their teachers if they do not understand a subject and get help outside of the classroom. If in class the lesson is boring and no one is paying attention how can the computer help outside of class? Students can also have more meaningful discussions with humans that may shape their emotions.\n\nEmotionas are complicated and although fake emotions might not be detected some can hide them well. Students may think of a happy memory that makes them happy and the computer may think that it agrees with the lesson being taught. Even just by smiling \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses, but may also help produce them\" could trick the computer into thinking someone is happy. Somethign that happened outside of school that is causing a student to feel sad may also contribute to the factor that a computer can not tell what the emotion is casued by. Emotions can also be influenced by other things such as \"empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciosly imitate another person's facial expressions\" students are in a classroom full of their friends that may be feeling one way and they will feel that way too.\n\nComputers that read emotions into school is not valuable or helpful to education. It is expensive and not worth it becasue humans are more complex than compters and computers can not detect why we feel. Where will peopel be if they let computers tell them how they feel? This technology is an example of it going too far. FACS is unecessary to schools and may work well somewhere else like improving video games. It would be better to let the teachers improve the class because they are the ones dedicating their hours to better improving life and helping students grow. Which is why FACS is not valuable technology in the area of education.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The use of this technology should be used in schools to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom because being able to identify what might be bothering others could be beneficial. Young adults could be facing something serious in their life but may not have the right words to express how they feel. Finding help for those feeling down is difficult. Using this technology could help those in need. This technology can help with identifying if a student is happy or worried, being able to have fun and put a smile on a students face while using this technology, and being able to identify if a student is confused or bored.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help with students and their emotions. \"Of course, most students would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" (5). Not everyone can tell what an individual is feeling. The help of this technology can help those who need it most. It can help detect if a student is happy or worried, but it can also put a smile on someones face.\n\nUsing this technology can help put a smile on your face in many ways. \"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face.\" (6). A lot of technology used today can put a smile on someone's face. Video games, social media, etc. Using the Facial Action Coding System is beneficial in many ways as well. It can help with being productive, getting help for a student who might need it. Technology can help with putting a smile on a students face, but it can also help with identifying if a student is confused or bored.\n\nTechnology can help identify if a student is confused or bored and could also help them for later in the future. \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" (6). Being able to identify a students emotions in a school could possibly help the student with getting better grades, feeling better about themselves, and passing each day with positivity. It can be difficult for a student to explain how they feel to another. The Facial Action Coding System has multiple ways on finding a solution for many problems that students are faced with today. This technology can help detect if a student is confused or bored, if a student is happy or worried, and being able to have fun with this technology.\n\nToday, many students are faced with difficult times. Students have to deal with so much during their schooling years and having difficult emotions to deal with also. The Facial Action Coding System could be very benificial to students and others. It can help with the problems that might hold them back from doing their best in school. This technology could help identify a student who is happy or worried, being able to have fun while using this technology, and being able to identify if a student is confused or bored.",
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"content": "Most modern day book movies music etc fairly good job placing warning form CAPS sticks covers But books practice began happen found offensive books today Why Well s many books past use words today found offensive But books movies music fault like parents try make seem There examples catagory today s society Take book The written example In story words used describe people time Back wrote book perfectly fine use words people today s modern world book list banned It offensive use word people today parent groups others trying get book pulled shelves hopes erasing done past I nt believe book banned s content rather well teaches reader words If teach student high school college class history culture time nt banned It read Movies rating system reason There movies meant younger audience People must certain age rent buy view kind movies leagally Not many people listen system even though exsisted years A horror film suitable young age believes everything sees Movies nt banned gives nightmares makes emotionally aware right wrong That fault parents They ones let watch movie first place So movie nt held responsible If movie intended mature audience s way stay And brings us music There lot music today s age considered offensive There pure genres free cursing used many others today But children teen adults find favorite kind ca nt change minds The governement issued music containing harsh words horrid images mind gruesome scenes elements offensive people must carry sticker The black white CAPS sticker When parents see sticker download whatever using know likely right listen Does nt mean parent actually going listen time means slight chance minds tainted garbage So conclusion I believe movies books music contain offensive material removed shelves Just offensive one person nt neccessarily mean another person There ratings things reason keep children seeing help level harshness given today s society People still argue books The The CAPS many many books like banned They always fight movies A DATE CAPS s removed store shelves gave nightmares gives nightmares saw And always try fight say artist like suited Well pattern going years Those books made many years movies intended adult audience young age artists trying make money like everyone else So parents try argue shelves remember might parent s fault letting view first place",
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"content": "Dear I think computers benefit society computers alot things like teach Computers helpful mostly every thing gets done The computer teaches good eye cordination focus show stuff nt know Without computer really ca nt get thing done reddy A computer helpful lots things like job aplications taxe s grocry store register typeing computer exercising body When computer exercise hand s brains With computers really cant thing Mostly everything life deal type computer I think people said shouldnt computer wrong interact family s far away thats also You enjoy nature takeing look old nt walkt Thats I think computers positive helpful",
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"content": "Should certain books magazines removed shelves found offensive YES Children shouldnt exposed certain things Some books magazines explict children certain ages Children read books meet age group If children read books inapporiate age might start act way Parents try remove books offense children real bad affect Children certain age group read books thats level apporiate Certain books magazines music movies explict kids days I think blocked children reach If children started listen inapporiate music read offense books might affect way act Children shouldnt exposed things might brain wash If kids start toread horrible book listen bad music imagine affect might world live today I think parents try keep certain things reach children Parents protest call meetings make sure libraries taking inapporiate things shelves kids Parents want keep kids far away form certain things appear offense It mean ll job good parent Sometimes kids wont always agree parent might say hav realize could whats best Parents nt always want child friend sometimes kids would run I know personal exprience sometimes peoplecan take kindness weakness Being parent already prepared things like In conclusion explict magazines books music really taken shelves kids It might expose children somethings isnt always good",
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"content": "Through the years, new technology has been discovered and invented. With the discover of new technology people now have and MRI, phones, and televison. Now with this new technology still expanding more doctors can study more about the human body. Now with this new advantage of technology doctors and people can now study more about your brain. With this new advantage of new technology people can now study more about the brain and people emotions.\n\nWith advantages of technology, people can study the brain more. With this people get consussions and now how people express more about there emotions. People have their opionion about how they feel about knowing more about there emotions. Knowing that you are faking a smile but other people don't know. To pretending that you are having a good day, but not really. From this new technology identifing all mixed emotions. In the story, they use Mona Lisa as there example and how she is smiling by just the use of the computer. In the article, they talked about a muscle is a clue to something used to spot when smiling.\n\nTechnology is a powerful weapon this days. Through out the future new technology will expand. With technology expanding we will know more about our human body and know some stuff we did think we would know. People with study more about the brain. This discover is a huge advantage in life.",
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"content": "I think author concludes story parography want understand Saeng s strength One reason I think also end story like know inside plant strong covered snow strong s wonts take driving test For example said When snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test That author concludes story paragraph",
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"content": "It is believed that the country's administration should emphasize pollution and the shortage of houses, to improve the health of its citizens. While there are some who have a completely different point of view. I certainly believe that focusing on the above-cited issues can only prevent the spread of certain diseases. \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, pollution variants and scarcity of homes are two major causes of serious illness. For instance, in developing counties like India, underprivileged people are still living in slums. Even they don't get potable water to drink or proper sanitisation facilities there. In fact, there is a completely unhygienic lifestyle. Due to this, they suffer from several diseases such as diarrhoea, malaria, dengue and many others. On the other hand, effluents emitted by large factories cause many lung issues such as asthma. So, some people believe that if the government remains successful in addressing these issues, the health of the inhabitants will definitely get improved.\r\n\r\nHowever, simply focusing on environmental concerns and housing conditions cannot prevent the spread of all diseases. There are several other factors which are to be considered. Firstly, the government should spread awareness among people about the benefits of having a proper and balanced diet. It will improve the immunity system of the native people. To epitome, the Dubia government gives 2 grams of gold for shedding every 2 kgs weight to all its residents. Similarly in every country, the government should open sports centres and only a minimum amount should be charged to locals. This could lead to a reduction in people suffering from diabetes and obesity.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to reiterate that giving priority to environmental pollution and housing will not prevent and cure all diseases. The government should allocate funds to spread awareness and open gymnastics to prevent the spread of viruses.",
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"content": "Nowadays, environmental and housing problems represent a major threat to lifestyle and health on earth. I completely agree with this opinion governments should take action to reduce these impacts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, lack of accommodation force people to reside in poor living conditions and,in its turn,this leads to the outbreak and develops various illnesses particularly,infectious ones among residents. For example, cancer, various types of allergies or respiratory diseases. Homelessness is one of the most significant root causes of poverty. Low-income families are unable to afford life essentials like high housing, healthcare costs,food or education. Their health gets worse and worse from time to time because they lack attention from doctors. To tackle this issue government should provide affordable housing and employment opportunities. This would be a chance for the homeless to earn more money for their needs. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. As the human population increases , we are producing great quantities of waste. There are various measures that government could take to prevent or at least mitigate environmental issues like air, water and land pollution. To solve the problems governments could introduce laws or impose taxes to limit carbon dioxide emissions or other polluters. And they could invest in renewable energy production from solar,wind and water power. In addition, encouraging people to become more energy efficient,by using bicycles and public transport. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it would be better government supply the homeless with reasonably priced homes and adopt new laws against environmental pollution",
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"content": "The author explains in the article that Venus is worth of studying despite the dangers because it is the closest to Earths conditions as in land but the atmosphere is dangerous. In the article the author explains that Venus is \"like Earths twin.\" With the attempts to study the planet itself the spaceships and rovers they send do not even last a day let alone a few hours. The atomsphere is very dense with carbon dioxide which burns the spacecraft before it even touches down. Then the ship has to go through the clouds which are almost pure sulfuric acid which corrods away at the already burnt spacecraft. The study is to see what it would take for people to live on that planet. The people who attempt to live there would need a way to survive almost instantly deadly temperatures of 800 degrees fahrenhite and atomospheric pressure 90 times heavier than Earths. The investigation shows that with that kind of pressure will crush a submarine that could go to the deepest part of the oceans and would liquify almost any metal put on the surface. All in all the benefits of the study would show what needs to be done to make the planet habitable even though the dangers of the study is somewhat high.",
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"content": "Advancments in technology is the future for the 21st Century. Technology is being improved everyday wether it be with phones, cars, or house systems. The development of driverless cars is inevitable, and it's a big step towards greater technology then what is already there.\n\nThe making of driverless cars is already in production because it's a way for technological companies like Google to improve their technology. To discontinue the making of these cars would be to hinder the improvement of technology. There have been no reports of accidents to show that driverless cars are a danger to drivers, passengers, or pedestrians. The use of driverless cars does come with some risk factors because these cars aren't completely driverless, but they are being improved upon with test drives.\n\nThere will be some controversy of the dangers of alert drivers when using driverless cars. To conteract these risks the cars come with built in alert systems such as vibrations of the driver seat, or flashing lights on the windshield to inform the driver when the car needs human assistance for the road ahead. Of course it's not the best safety precautions, but with continued use of driverless cars the technology can be improved upon.\n\nThe most benefit of the development of driverless cars would be the money gained. With car manufacturers like Mercedes-Benz, Audi, Tesla, and Nissan interested in the production of driverless cars, these cars would make high profits in sales. New technology comes out everyday, and the appealing aspect to buyers is that they need to keep updated on what's new. The selling of driverless cars, new inovative technology, would appeal to buyers because it would be considered different and new.\n\nThe continued development of driverless cars would have to have new regulation laws put into place for use on open roads and clarity on who would be held responsibe in the case of an accident, but they're appealing for profit and advancement in technology. These cars would boost the technological and economical world. It would be a waste to stop the production of cars that haven't even been given the chance to really be used on open roads, especially if they have no reports of accidents or death.\n\nDriverless cars aren't a serious danger risk, and with continued production the problems ahead would be solved. The production of these cars is helping the advancement of technology and can bring in high profits. The dangers that the driverless cars could present would be improved apon with the continued use of these cars.",
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"content": "The auther concludes story when cam back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return tis hibiscus budding I take test I think auther used conclusion make reader want finish story Or could write another story finish Most authors conclude storys like reader control ending",
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"content": "Is this an act of aleins? Some sciencetist at NASA say yes, while many of them disagree. This is not some martian temple of some sort. It's just a natural accurrense .\n\nfirst off there is no way this is an act of the unknown because they dont exsist. i understand why you would blame aleins and you do it because most people dont think logicly.\n\nThe reason you believe it is because someone went crazy about it and then sprend it all over social media. then the story got blown out of proportion. After all of that it gets back to the public as something thats not even true at this point and then they believe it.\n\nLets compare some land formation that we have on earth to this one on mars. for example the grand canyon. It was carved out of the earth by the colorado river. another example is the great lakes they were formed by glaciers millions of years ago.\n\nNow lets take a look at the picture of the \"face\" on mars. i can see why you would think this is made by something. which in all techicallity it is. It was made by the weather on mars. you see what more than likely happened is that hundreds of years ago there was a platue there. What happend was that many sand storms come through there and cause a lot of eroution and thats why is has the shape that is has now.\n\nnow the peole that think it was aliens. this picture doesnt not automatically prove all of the studies on aliens true. yes it very much so looks man made and there is now way it is man made because man cant stay on mars long enough to bulid it. So it must be aliens right? No because the is no such thing as aliens.\n\nWas this an act of aliens? NO there is no cosistent proof that this was an act of the unknown. plus ther is to many logical resons behind the fact that it was all natural. therefore those scientist at NASA are wrong. They need another lesson in common sense if you ask me.",
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"content": "There obstacles builders face time building Empire State Building One issues unsolved problems mooring airships fix mast height desirable postpone installation later date The Empire State Building nt destined ever fulfill purpose For reasons apparent constructed And another obstactle lack suitable landing area",
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"content": "The matter of wreckless driving and car crashes due to things like texting is not something anyone should look at lightly. Aside from such, there is also the issue of people not having the ability to drive due to several reasons yet still needing to get around somehow. Cars today are more often than not entirely controlled by the driver, so the thought of purchasing a driverless car is foreign to many individuals. People have come to be so used to the idea of driving vehicles themselves that not only do driverless cars sound odd to them, but also trepidatious. However, driverless cars should be looked at as useful and a positive alternative to everyday cars as they are aware and self-sufficient for their owner's benefit.\n\nFirst, consider the matter of how driverless cars could be aware. Unlike typical cars today, these cars, which are under development by Google and other significant companies, are built with different types of sensors. These sensors all serve different purposes that make the vehicle more aware of its surroundings by constantly generating a 3-D interpretation of the car's general area. Not only that, but they also feature things like GPS recievers, position-estimating and motion sensors, and even inner features that keep tabs on the driver so they are able to take over the wheel if need be. With these functions in place, these driverless vehicles are able to be just as aware as humans are in the driver's seat, if not more so.\n\nHowever, even with this in mind, how are these driverless cars more self-sufficient than regular cars? Maybe they have sensors and are just as aware as humans, but what else can they do that makes them so much better than regular vehicles? Unlike everyday vehicles, these driverless cars are in fact driverless with a few unprofound exceptions. These cars are able to not only be as conscious of its surroundings as a human can be, but it can also drive just like a human, too. This vehicle, which is sometimes addressed as a \"smart car\", has full control of the car's functions. It can brake, handle, and steer itself while on the road, only having the driver take over if there is a particular situation that needs careful maneuvering through. In such events, the vehicle will then notify the driver with an obvious display that signifies a need to be manually directed. Likewise, it can also handle some situations on its own with its ability to reduce engine power and apply brakes when necessary, making it a truly \"smart car\".\n\nWhile efficient and benefitial to drivers, it must be remembered that as driverless cars they are very technology driven, which stands to be a problem in the face of the law. All that is needed for them to make their rise and overturn normal cars is for technology to make some progress. With these ideas in mind, let it not be doubted that with its awareness and self-sufficiency, the driverless car could stand to benefit many and should be further developed.",
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"content": "Ok, well Luke was a Seagoing Cowboy and he got to see many intresting sites when on the job. The artical states that Luke got to see what it is like to be in those countreys. But yet, in the end on their way back they did have lots of fun playing many games on ship.\n\nThe first reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is because you get to help other people, animals, supplies, and you get to feel what its like to be in that place. And you do get to see some pretty amazing sites. You do get to go over sea, and you will be with other people so you won't be lonly. And you can be under 18 to join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nThe second reason you should join is because you will not be lonly, you will have friends there, also you can get friend or family to join if you want. you also can play games on your way back. And it is the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) who are hiring you to work for them. And yet why wouldn't you want to join, it is a one in a lifetime opportunity.\n\nSome people say that you should not join reasons why, well frist off they that you can be killed which is true but yet very low chance of that happinging. They also say that its not worth it and that all that stuff is going to be gone anyway but yet before you can lose the supplies why not use them to help. And they say that you can end up bringing crimanals but yet the Seagiong Cowboys would most likly will bring criminals to safe places but yet make sure that they don't hurt anyone.\n\nIn concusion you should join because you get to help people and animals, you get to see amazing sites, you get to have fun, and you do not have to be lonly when working for them.",
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"content": "is it a face or is it a land mass. The first thing is it is hard to find Cydonia so we get very few pictures of the supposed face. It could just be weird land form that looks like a face. plus the first picture was not yhat good.we can take better pictures today\n\nOn April 5, 1998 when Global Surveyor flew over cyonia they took a better picture. the piture was ten time better than the one took on the viking. and it reviled it was just a natrul land foram.the land form is just like a butte or mesa. just like an lava dome that formed an isloted mesa creating the effect of a face on mars\n\nSo yes the face on mars is just a land form. all the facts prove it. since today we have better camras an space craft we could take better pictures. like the one in 2001 proveing it is just a land mass. like we have on earth mesa os butte that are not actully man made or alian made but just look weird. so no there are no alian made forms on Cydonia it all is just land forms like buttes and mesa that look like a face.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper Have ever noticed lot people always laptop computer Well re web nt get exercise I three seasons people spend less time computers People could get sick probably forget lot stuff never future always wanted My first reason people spend less time computer people could get sick For example lot people eat eat use computers Some people get obese When go internet find lose weight never Some people go internet surgery re fat They think cure obese internet truth cure Some exercise cure get computer When people surfing web forget lot stuff Some people almost spend whole day even life computer nt know else surf web What I seen happen people forget re even They also forget family never contact This nt good people My third final reason future Sure people apply jobs home computer problem nt get enough exercise paid well people work outside house Some people wanted something life s ca nt addicted computers Some people go thearapy stop going internet Do want Getting sick loss memory good future three reasons people stop using computers start getting exercise If I addicted pc I would nt get education I would nt writing letter right Get exercise Together make change find cure",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast author described obstacles builders empire state Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock An architect named Al Smith fourterm governor New York headed efforts construct Empire State Building years office He imagined top Building higher Calling He pictured equipped age transportation dream avation pioneers It seemed possible eyes till obstacles turned The first obstacle struck lack suitable area New York City They would clear four blocks bussy city The architects engineers Empire State Building consulted experts nt plan well Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made buildings framework The building would floors glassedin observation area st floor In end The greatest Obstacle nature",
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"content": "Nowadays, concentration issues are increasing in students. There are various reasons behind that such as hard curriculum, harsh schedule, mischievous behavior. I will discuss cause in detail and some solution. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that young kids paying less attention at school. The main cause is strict curriculum, for instance, school have more practical subjects than art and paintings. Today, most of institutions just focus on technological, scientific, and mathematical program, which make the more tough, there seem no space or time for artwork and game period. Moreover, today children have the all-day tight time table like seven to eight hours at school, after that they have fully packed homework which they have to finish in the evening, therefore they don’t get time play at home. This makes them start avoiding study and do other activities such as play games, watch movies or TV. They prefer more fun and hilarious moments because it is their childhood. \r\n\r\nThere are some effective solutions to resolve this issue. Schools should add some other creative activities in curriculum, some games and outdoor activities which make them more active, so they can give more time to study. Along with, teachers should divide the homework of subjects into weekdays, for example Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday half subjects, Thursday, Friday and Saturday half subject; by this they can get Sunday free for fun and relax. However, parents should provide more emotional support to their young ones and help them in their homework, projects and assignments. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this is necessary to have knowledge about world but other activities also play a vital role in younger’s life because he/she feel more relax after these leisure activities.",
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"content": "This article talks about the challenges of exploring Venus , based on this article we can come up with the aidea that it's almost imposible to explore this planet because of too many factors, this planet is the closest planet to ours and NASA has been makind missions and sent many spacecrafts but non of them has survived very long, all the projects to explore this planet didn't work, that's why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nThis planet has a very thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide, and challenging clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, on this planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the almospheric pressure is 90 times greater than the atmospheric pressure in earth.\n\nMany scientist believe that Venus have been the most Eart-like planet, long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth today. NASA now is working on other approaches to studying Venus. for example,some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that has been tested and lasted more than three weeks in such conditions, another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers,this devices were invented in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\n\nIn conclution styding Venus has been a difficult thing, and scientist have been trying too many thing to do it and they didn't work, but they will still trying until they\n\nget more and more information of this planet.",
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"content": "Did you know that 25 years from May 24,2001 a weird shaped face was spotted on Mars.Some say that it was alien life, but I beieve that it was just a misunderstanding.I believe this because weird landforms shape on the face of Earth, there are weather effects on Mars to cause this erosion,and the picture they took in 1976 had clouds and fog in the way so there was a blurr and you could not even tell what the mysterious figure.\n\nAnything can pop up out of any type of weathering.There is weather on Mars and the weather there could have made an annoynomous figure that obviously looked like a face. There are many explanitions for what happened such as the picture being tooken of of content.\n\nThe picture was tooken not on land, but in the air over clouds and fog. So it could have really been somehing diffeerent under the fog and clouds.\n\nIn conclusion,The landform was nothing but a landform that was coveredin clouds and fog that was tooken out of content.",
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"content": "In this global era, global warming brings adverse effects on the climate of the earth across the world. It is assumed by some folks that the change in climate impact the lifestyle of the individual while others think weather condition has immensely affected the economy of a country. In my point of view, the financial status of a society is greatly affected by atmospheric conditions.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in developing countries weather play a vital role in the living style of people. Societies wholly solely depend on environmental situations. It is to say that, people live their lives and celebrate events such as Basant, and spring festivals to enjoy the weather. For example, in Pakistan's residential structures, dressing cuisine and social gatherings reflect the intensity of the atmosphere which is quite different from the residence of Murree (a snowy area). So climate not only changes the way of life but also changes the nature and the ethical style of societies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, weather conditions greatly influence the financial structure of a nation. To be more specific, developing countries rely on agriculture which is directly affected by the weather. If the environment does not dramatically change due to global warming, these nations will easily boost their infrastructure by growing crops and vegetables. For instance, In Pakistan recently heavy rain caused a devastating flood; crops and vegetables are destroyed in huge sectors. So, the flood not only disturbs the agricultural system of the country but the community is also affected by this disaster. \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, individuals depend on natural resources according to climate but the economy of a region strongly affected society. To exemplify, in Saudi Arabia despite having strong weather, its economic growth is stable as compared to developing nations.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I tend to reiterate although a person’s lifestyle is changed by variations in climate, the effects of economic variations seem to be more significant. Hence, I assert it has greatest the crucial impact on societies.",
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"content": "Dear In recent poll determined used come contact computers said use computers daily work This extensive use technology creates lack exercising habits enjoy nature much less Furthermore people spend less time interacting family friends These demaging effects society The biggest reason people dont exercise says health proffessor nt time This problem directly attributed statistic average spend half hours day computer You argue learning new things broadening horizons However none help people get stay healthy shape Being computer good body Click next link watch beautiful humming bird swarms across screen desktop You clearly see wonder feel Can smell fresh air flies around The computer show nature must log find truly appreciate firsthand Society cheat world s splendor watching screen Fans computers argue help interact people around world people next room Computers bring people globally distance people job school home As humans need contact outside world Why limit typing people talk In conclusion extensive computer use benefit society People spend less time staying active More people enjoy nature desktop instead person Finally society spend much time communicating family friends person The time come take stance It clear computers danger society",
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"content": "Would you feel comfortable standing in front of a computer and letting it try to figure out how you feel?And how would a computer that can read someones emotions help them in the classroom?Although technology has been great in the past few years,can we do better in our classrooms.I say yes with this valuable technology that can read students emotions.\n\nSo how would this work? The computer would first construct a 3-D model of the face,with all 44 major facial muscles.Then the model must move like human muscles,this movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\"Afterward you use the six classified basic \"emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness.\"These are associated with each characteristic movements of facial muscles.For example,your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you're surprised.\n\nWhy would this technology be valuable?Because will be able to see emotions that other people may not.Like for instance,your in a math class and the teacher is teaching the class on algebra.Your doing well until he starts to ramble about how he loves algebra and you lose focus.Then that is when the computer could recognize that your are confused and remind you what you were doing.The same can be said with any class not just math.Say your are at home and don't understand the history homework.Then computer sees this and sends you to website that can help you understand the subject.\n\nThe last reason why the FACS is valuable is to recognize emotions that people can't.Because most human communication is nonverbal we may not be able to know exactly how someone feels.But with FACS we are able to detect exactly how someone feels,even when they are trying to hide their emotions. For instance,an ordinary human being they are not able to see the muscular action units,these determine a genuine smile from a fake one,so they will not be able to tell how you truly feel.They will only see what you show them on your face.But FACS is able to use facial software to convey how you feel based on your facial muscular movement.\n\nNow that all of that was said.Do you now see how it is valuable to students and schools?And not even schools but to people in the workforce.This can improve the way we communicate with each other.Beacause we will know how they really feel and then we will start to care more about each other's feelings.This is why I belive this technology is valuable to read students' emotionsl expressions.",
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"content": "Bell rings Shuffle shuffle Snap EEEE Crack Slam Click stomp Tap tap tap SLAM Creak Shoof shoof Sigh Seventh class day Here go CAPS Tu va ou pas On tude cette classl Tu peux aller au bibliotheque si tu veux blinked chocolatehaired mocha skinned impatiently awaiting answer The truth I knew nt really care I came It made difference I trailed feet behind like pathetic puppy I silent adorable loved I Because I spoke fidgety Because I exchange student translator colorful clothes shocking ten seconds forgotten I flock seagulls haircut So I thought Why go exchange You complete opposite everyone No one wants Just go home But ego ready answer You begged remember For months months wanted thought dreamt So I went girls As expected walked threeperson wide staircase sidebyside I shuffled awkwardly behind Finally arriving sat table three girls talking I glazed eyes attempting look lost thought I nt care I nt included Selfish thoughts buzzed head nt talking I make effort talk I really idea felt How someone feel shadow notice sure never offers insight never makes laugh It s confidence said mother s voice carry But I knew nt simple I alien These girls would never understand I would never understand In frustration I started flick peas across room spoon Pat flick sproing This caught interest discussing something emotional Tears began pour eyes Sniffling went bathroom leaving alone Only could felt felt emotion stared Silently I continued shooting peas stared darted around room Suddenly horrible miscalculation pea hit boy face And turned around swore And I looked across table And laughed We laughed hard I cried So hard huge alien tears flooded eyes People around us laughing even though idea funny I nt even know funny But nt matter dripping tears snot reaching reenacting pea hitting boy s face It friends years laughing happened time It saturated angst lonliness despair I felt past four weeks The connection felt instantaneous like lightening kind connection I felt best friends back home I felt huge swelling sensation chest like balloon stuck inside My stomach aching cheeks sore I felt seizing My heart felt whole even second My soul open It best laugh life Sniffle sniffle GASP Laughter GASP Swipe tears Sniffle sniffle Laughter GASP This I thought This came Bell rings",
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"content": "Do you think Venus is a good planet? Yes and no but i dont have reasons why. All i know is that its a planet and i think its cold. Im going to give you reasons why its good and why its bad. Venus is bad because we cant study the planet well. Venus is good because its the most earth like planet.\n\nVenus is good because its the most earth like planet. The article wuotes,\" Astromers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in out solar system\". Thats good because its like earth and earth is a good planet beacuse people live in it. Its also good because it have montains and can be their nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nVenus is bad because we cant study the planet well. The article states,\" While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely\". Thats bad because we need information from every planet to see how its like. Its also bad because none of the space crafts have made it on Venus.\n\nTo concluse the bad news about Venus is that we cant study the planet well and the good news about Venus is that its the most earth like planet. These reasons were good and it can change poeples mind about what they think about Venus or not.",
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"content": "The Electoral College is a process begun a long time ago due to the lack of educated and literate citizens in the United States, whom the government did not believe were eligible to vote for any president under any circumstances. Now that our literacy rate in the United states is now more than 80-90% (or so I believe), I don't really think that the Electoral College is useful anymore.\n\nThe Electoral College is a process describing 538 electors voted for by the state who will vote for the new president every four years. A majority vote of 270, one more than half, is required to elect the new president. The number of electors for each state equals the number of members in it's Congressional delegation; meaning one for each member in the House of Representatives that represents your state, and two for your Senators. However, I think that a popular vote, or having the citizens themselves vote for the president, may be more useful.\n\nThere is an off chance that electors may vote for a candidate that their citizens did not want to choose, or the chance that two slates of electors may be sent to Congress, etc. Another prospect is the idea of a tie in the electoral vote, which would mean that there would be 269 votes for both Presidential candidates. In the event of this happening, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, in which the state delegations would choose the president. This may be fatal, however, because states like Wyoming, which only have the population of 500,000, will have as much to say about the fate of the United States as a state like California, home to 35 million people.\n\nA lot of people usually are in favor of the Electoral College due to certainty of outcome and swing states. Swing, or toss-up states are the states that are undecided until the very end, and could very well change the entire tide of the Election. \"Voters in toss-up states,\" reads one argument, \"are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-- to really listen to the competing candidates-- knowing that they are going to decide the election.\" But should we really leave such a large and important decision up to such few people? A mere 538? And even less for toss-up states?\n\nOverall, I think that the Electoral College is outdated due to it's lack of need anymore, does not fit the democratic and equal methods of the United States (for the most part), and leaves too large of a decision to too small of a group. Popular voting may just be the solution to this problem, and although popular voting may not be perfect either, it might help us figure out who we really need for our president, rather than leaving it to just a small group.",
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"content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" has led me to the thought that driverless cars should be developed. Driverless cars seem much safer than regular cars. These cars also have better features than regular cars. Driverless cars can't be worse than regular cars.\n\nIn the article is states that driverless cars can do certain things without human interaction. It mentions that these smart cars can brake themselves. This is something that could come in handy when the person driving is not paying full attention to the road. The car also alerts you when it is need of human skills. These features make driverless cars safer than regular cars.\n\nDriverless cars are equipped with more technology and better features than regular cars. In the article it states that some car manufacturers are hoping to bring entertaiment and information systems into the car. These systems will make sure that a person doesn't get bore while the car is doing the driving itself. Another thing is that the entertainment features will turn off when trying to alert you. These technological features make smart cars unique and fun.\n\nNow compare a smart car to a regular car. Which car seems better? The smart car of course! Our world is improving things everyday and smart cars are one of those things. Why not give these driverless cars a chance.",
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"content": "The self driving car, it used to be a dream of the futre but is now a reality.\n\nAs new technology appears, new distractions rise as well.\n\nThe well beilng of people is important, especially while driving.\n\nTherefore Cars that can drive themselves are safer and more reliable.\n\nWith the increase of self driving cars, it means the more they are tested and the safer they get.\n\nSelf driving cars are safer because they have sensors all around, that means that the car is fully aware of its surroundings and is constantly analizing what is going on around it, something most people don't do.\n\nThe sensors used are not new, \"In the 1980s, automaker used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brakes\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming,5).\n\nSince sensors are not new that means that there has been plenty of time to improve them and increase their safety. Like people the sensors in self driving cars can, \"...cause the car to apply bakres on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming,5).\n\nBut sensors can do that much quicker than people, which makes the car and driving much safer.\n\nSelf driving cars are much more relaible than most people.\n\nThey are more reliable because the driverless cars are less likely to cause an accident.\n\nWith new technology rising today, like smart phones, tablets, and computers, the amount of distracted drivers increase as well.\n\nBut with the self driving cars people won't be as distracted and driving because the car itself would do most of the driving.\n\nAlso if there was a need for the driver to take over, there is plenty of ways to get the drivers attention like; \"...flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming, 7).\n\nThe driverless cars are also reliable because the option of using cameras to make sure the driver is not distracted and focused on the rode is increasing, which is more reliable than just trusting that the person is paying attention to the road.\n\nThe self-driving cars can insure peoples safety with sensors.\n\nThey are also more reliable by decreasing accidents by making sure the driver is paying attention.\n\nTherefore by being safe with sensors, and reliable for peoples well being, driverless cars are a positive mode of transportation.",
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"content": "In memoir mood created Narciso Rodriguez welcoming cheerful One example describes paragraph This described neighborhood saying In neighberhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship meant matter background neighbors always welcomed Also paragraph author says parents came selflessly let child better life even though leaving home country Lastly paragraph Rodriguez describes warm memorice home birthdays parties family He said scent life love air For forever grateful parents learned true meaning family",
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"content": "The use of facial action coding systems in schools would be very benificial to every one.\n\nIt is valuable to the classroom because it could help kids not loose interest when learning, it could make a certain lesson plan for a certain kid to learn to the best of their ability, and it could be used to see if the teacher is doing their job in teaching us kids in the best way possible.\n\nFirst of all, having facial scanning in school would help the child to not loose interest in a certain topic that they are learning about.\n\nFor example, if a kid is just reading and analyzing a really boring paper about the history of rocks, then if the facial scanning picks up that the student is really bored and has lost interest, then it could switch it up to a fun research paper that would keep a little kids interest.\n\nThis would be extremely valuable for the student because then he/she will learn more and in less time because they are zoned in and not out.\n\nThis new technology could help a kid get into a better college and live a better life.\n\nSecondly, the student would have their own custom lession plan.\n\nThis idea right here is huge for many reasons.\n\nOne the student would learn at a pace that they are comfortable doing and at a level that best suits the certain individual.\n\nAlthough some people may like the one big class learning all about the same thing, I know everybody would want to have the option of learning at a pace that only works for them.\n\nLastly, the facial action coding system could be very benificial to see if teachers are doing their job to the best of their ability.\n\nFor example, a student could be showing up as very confused or stresse when being taught a lesson.\n\nSometimes that kid will not ask a question even though they don't know how to do a certain thing.\n\nWith the emotion reader you would be able to see that a certain kid was strugging, and as a teacher, go see what you can to help that person.\n\nHaving this tool aviliable would help teachers out tremdesly.\n\nIn this paper I explained to you how having the facial action coding system is benificial to not just students, but teachers as well.\n\nAgain if we have this tool in our classrooms then it would help the students not loose interest, have a custom lesson plan to learn to the best of their ability, and how it coulf be very benififcal to see if the teacher is helping the kids learn in a way that is right for the student.",
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"content": "Hey there, it is Luke. And I am asking you to join the Seagoing Cowboys. We are running out of people and would really enjoy some more help with the program. I would believe that you would really like this program, you would have the opportunities of a life time! Yourself and many others on the ship would be able to see and explore places that you can only think of.\n\nAre you starting to like the idea of it now? Well I am almost sure that you would love it even more if you were on the ship right now! Expecially if you are a big animal lover why, you might as well hop on right now. Here in the Seagoing Cowboys program there are lots of animals that you can never get tired of! And I know what you are thinking, you are probally thinking about you're family and how much you are going to miss them. I know, that is what I thought about to before I myself joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. But, you really have to think about this. You would be missing out on an adventure of a lifetime! And I think you're family would understand if you were leaving to help people around the world. Mine did! And see some very very cool things while you are out there. After all there is a world out there and you are just waiting to see it.\n\nNow maybe you could at least consider being apart of the Seagoing Cowboys program? I mean, I love it and you could too! Maybe you couldeven pass this note around? Why not ask some close friends and family or some people you know if they might want to join the program too! I think they would love it! Well, maybe you could get back to me about this. And I hope that I can see you soon!",
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"content": "Participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program was the greatest experience that I've ever had.\n\nYou should participate in it also.\n\nThere were so many fantastic things about it, that I can't list all of them.\n\nThere were three main reasons that I loved the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nThe first one is that it was absolutely fun!\n\nThe second reason is that I got to get the chance to really help others.\n\nLastly, I got to experience a lot of amazing things.\n\nThe first reason that I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is that it was so much fun!\n\nI got to tour so many new places that I had never even dreamed of getting to see.\n\nI got to see Europe, and China, even the Acropolis in Greece!\n\nThat was my favorite part of the trip.\n\nAnother reason that I think you should join this program is that you get to help people.\n\nI got to help so many others.\n\nDuring World War 2, so many countries lost everything.\n\nWe helped these countries greatly.\n\nWe restored food, animals, and so much more to them.\n\nI think that they are extremely grateful.\n\nThe last reason I think that the Seagoing Cowboys program is a great group to participate in, is that I experienced so many new things there.\n\nWar is never a pretty thing, and I got to see that.\n\nYou might not want to see this, but I've realized how important it is to help the people that have lost things.\n\nAfter I saw the remains of this war, I realized how hard it was for the people.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is fun.\n\nI got to help so many people, and experienced so many new things.\n\nThese are the three main reasons why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nI absolutely loved it, and if you join I promise that you'll love it too.",
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"content": "Nowadays most universities graduates are not able to find a lucrative job related to their field. In my opinion, the root of this problem lies in the outdated education system that should be modernized and overpopulation growth which requires more awareness among people towards selecting right profession as per their potential. \nTraditional university education doesnot preapare students for their job for a number of reasons.One of them is that many programmes are too theoretical.In this competitive period, a company always look to hire a best candidate having diverse knowledge about their field work with hands on experience.for example, knowledge of IIT software. Futhermore due to overpopulation there is always high number of applicants, therefore competition is very high and selection process is also strict sothat few candidates are able to make the cut.\nA reform of higher education could alleviate many of the problems but would require joint efforts from universities and the government. If universities worked closer with the employers, they could teach students practical skills that companies look for. Meanwhile, the government could develop guideliness on how many students universities should recruit in each subject in accordance with market demand. Students should get proper councelling from experts in the same field and ought to be taught on how they can get job in their profession.\nIn conclusion, a likely reason why many graduates cannot find a job in their fields is because university education might not have provided them with the right skill set.I think that universities and government could improve the situation by updating the content of the programmes and limitimg the number of students in each subject in line with market demands.",
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"content": "Dear state senator,\n\nIt is the utmost respect that I ask for the method for presidental election be changed from the electoral college to something more suitable for the opinion of the people. The electoral college is an unfair system to the people, it can allow for individuals to decide what to do with the votes, not by the people of the United States of America.\n\nRevising the electoral college system may seem like a bad idea but the good that could come of it overlies the bad. If the election of a president was based directly by the voters , then candidates could promise money to the people who vote for him/her. There could also be other propblems with direct democracy such as what would happen in the chance of a tie? Who would break the tie? And how would it be decided fairly. The electoral college shouldn't be removed, but should definitely be revised.\n\nThe electoral college permits the power of the electoral votes to go to whoever the choose. The electoral college is unfair to voters due to the winner-take-all system, whichh causes candidates to focus only on states the are \"swing\" states. In the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see candidates at all. The electoral college is an out-of-date system and either needs to be replaced or revised.\n\nWhen running for president, the candidate has a group of electors. With each candidate habving their own group of electors, it provides without having to visit each state to nget their vote. The only thing the president is required to do is to wait. In reality, the preisdent doesn't even need to campaign, since the electors in the college votes are what matter. So, the candidate could just bribe the electors for certain states and he/she has that states' vote.\n\nThe voters do not vote for the candidates, but vote for the slate of electors. The electors are picked at state conventions, the state party's central comittee and sometime the presidential candidates themselves. The biggest issue with the electoral college is the disaster factor. The diaster factor are the potental problems with the system, such as back in 1960 when segregationists in louisiana legisllayture nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors who opposed John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe electoral college is an outdated way of elections. The electoral college puts the power into indivduals' hands not the people. It was created back before the eduaction was nothing close to what it is now. Therefore, the method of voting on representitives who then vote for the presdient is obsolete.",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because scientists believe that one day humans can learn to live and adapt on it. Venus may have well been the most earth like planet in our solar sytem. Although Venus has it's own challenges and risks, scientists are still discussing further visits to its surface. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus.\n\nVenus is sometime call the \"Evening Star\", because it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system Venus is actually a planet, the second planet from our sun. Venus may seem a pretty simple planet to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has been proved a very challenging place to study closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too. Venus is a very difficult planet to study and that is probably why not a single spaceship has touched down on it in more than three decades.\n\nNumerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge planet for humans to study. What's challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. A thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit on the planet's surface. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times larger than what we expeirenced on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans have faced on Earth.\n\nDespite all the challenges and risks, why are scientists so fascinated by this planet? They believed that long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans. Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has faamiliar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Scientist somehow believed that Venus could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nWith all the challenges and risks, Venus is still and will be a worthy planet to study because one day us humans can live and breathe on it. One day it can be exactly like Earth. They don't call Venus Earth's twin for no reason. Despites the danger it presents, Venus is a worthy pursuit.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it is suggested to study Venus because it is a worth pursuit despite the dangers its presents. Venus should be study because it can become useful and more understandable for the audience. Studying can help with having a better understanding of the topic, have a clear understandment of looking at it from a different perspective, and learn what are the benefits from it.\n\nFirst of all, it is important to study Venus because it can help you understand the passage better. By all means, not having to get confuse or getting lost beause we do not understand anything. Studying can help us prevent from getting lost and help us realize how did it start and what cause this. It can also answer all of our questions that we wanted to know.\n\nSecond, having a clear understandment of looking at the aarticle from a different prespective and help us see it differently. As we read the article, we want to be open minded and put ourselves in someone elses shoes. In that case, we want to know how they felt and what they think about it in their perspective. We want to understand from two ways that we are allow to do.\n\nFinally, we can learn what are the benefits from it. Learning new benefits is also important to gain from reading an article. This may also help us in the future, learning new ideas and how that can affect us or our universe. It can also show us how it moves and what is the temperature, shape, and other information. We learn more about it and it will most likely have us stund that we didn't know how much one object can have so many information.\n\nThis is why we should study Venus because not only is it a worthy pursuit despite that dangers it presents. It can help with having a better understanding of the topic, have a clear understandment of looking at it from a different perspective, and learn what are the benefits from it. This is important to teach students because it can lead them into a good start from learning so much.",
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"content": "Every state should have the right to free trade in local or export things without limitations from authority. I partially agree with this statement, due to the fact that both arguments have beneficial and negative affect on society.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, in developed countries importing products without controlling and putting some diminution by the government might lead to poor quality items. Subsequently, all suppliers will check the condition of it. For instance, huge countries like China or the USA cannot control all factories' manufacturing quality. Eventually, there are put some restrictions on the seller in order to keep stable economic growth. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, there are numerous benefits to people on free trade on import. Firstly, new business starters who start with a small amount of budget cannot follow government restrictions. For example, exporting cotton had prohibited in Uzbekistan. As a result, year by year growing cotton has been going down because demand is low and price also is minimal.\r\n\r\nSecondly, doing monopoly in local trade is easier by putting restrictions. For example, the window manufacturing company “IMZO” do a monopoly because the tax rate is high installed by the authorities of Uzbekistan. Subsequently, this company does not have competitors and the price for windows is high. \r\n\r\n To conclude, putting restrictions on trade has some drawbacks like controlling the quality. However, the advantages overcame the disadvantages and have a good impact on society. I believe business people should trade without any restrictions.",
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"content": "Lukes participation in the Seagoing Cowboys program allowed him to expierence different adventures and visit many unique places.\n\nAlso he can take care of hores,young cows,and mules that are shiped over sea and on there way to greece Luke turned 18 which meant he could be drafted for military school.They were on a cattle boat for a trip\n\nBy\n\nthe time he was discharged in 1947 Luke had made nine trips which was the most of any Seagoing Cowboy Luke had fun when the animals were releasted out of their cage the cowboys also played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed\n\nthoses games also helped time go by.\n\nSea Cowboys were much more than a trip to Luke Bomberger it oped up the world it helped other countries and their needs and to help them survive and to stay healthy\n\nand to have a good life and good choices.\n\nThat stayed with Luke Bomberger and it led him to leading a number of internalional students and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nI think that Luke made a good choice to help other people and to take care of animals.",
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"content": "Using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is a vaule. It will help the students' that start to feel bored or confused. Once it detacts those emotions it can change the lesson.\n\nThe FACS (Facial Action Coding System) as the protential to help students, and teachers in the classroom. FACS can read the students faces and tell wither they understand the lesson. It will then change the lesson to something that will help the students better understand. The FACS can also detecte when a students is getting bored of a lesson, and will change it to a more pleasing one. It will change to better acommidate the student's needs.\n\nFACS can also help the teachers better understand their own students more. Since the FACS system can read the six basic emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It will help the teacher know what their students are feeling. Teachers will know more about their students, and will be able to form a closer bond with them. The FACS system will help the teacher understand what the student need more help with, and what they are more intrrested in.\n\nThe FACS system can read the facial muscles, and this is how it can detacte the emotions of people. It can even identify when someone has mixed emotions, and compares each expression with a neutral face. This is how it can regoinze when students are feeling bored, confused, or any other emotion. The inventor of the FACS system, Dr. Paul Eckman, is the one to classify the six basic emotions. He also was the one that asscociated each with characteristic movemetns of the facial muscles. Like when your frontalis pars lateralis raises your eyebrows when you are suprised, and you orbicularis oris tightens your lips when your angry. All this can help the system tell when the students in the classroom need a change in the lesson.\n\nThe FACS system can be very helpful to the students and the teachers in everyday classrooms. It will change the lesson to better accomidate the students that start to fell bored or confused. This is the reason why the FACS system is a vaule.",
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"content": "Societies' needs are provided by the governments such as health and education facilities, safety, a better economy, reduction of environmental problems and more. They decide society's priorities and then care about them one by one. While many people argue to prevent illness and disease, others think environmental pollution and housing problems are more important than them. In my opinion, each problem starts with hygiene and economical situation so, it's more important to reduce environmental pollution and housing problems. \r\n\r\nAll the public's problems should be fixed by the governments and I think any kinds of pollution are the most serious problem because it causes diseases. Many crowds suffered from a lack of nutrients, clean water and air. Unless they don't access clean resources and the environment, they get sick easily. Of course, experts should work on vaccines, other diseases or health facilities. If these problems solve in earlier, diseases won't exist ever. Moreover, housing problems are similar to environmental pollution, they are directly related to many illnesses. Also, if people have got their own house and enough income, many diseases never exist. Government should try to improve each individual's income so, their life expectancy would be better. Furthermore, many illnesses are related to morale. While people are living in leaner areas, their life would be longer and healthier. \r\n\r\nAuthorities are charged of solving communities' problems. I believe solving pollution and housing problems are the most important ones. These are the roots of many problems. If people live in better conditions, they would be healthier and happier.",
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"content": "I dont much patience Ill tell story time I It sunny day outside school I homework So I invited friends going landslide skate park We home wasnt My mom said CAPS hes two minutes go him So I mad I writing note put door reads CAPS go late Sorry time next time CAPS But I signing note pulled That story I patients",
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"content": "Using Facial Action Coding System will make changes around the world. Predicting what anothers person emotion towards you or somene else is very important to communicate, otherwise there will be confusion.\n\nSetting up this new system of facial recongnition would be a huge step through technology as we know it. This sysem alllows computers or other devies to be more safisticated and secure for their user or owner. Why just use your face as the password when you can use any emmotion your feeling. It wont just aids adults it will also aid underage teens or elementary kids. As for an example in the text it of Making Mona Lisa Smile that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored ,\"Dr.Huang predicts.\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video sugery.\" Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication.\"notes Dr.Huang.\"SO computers need to undersant that too. This is saying that kids and gaming companies will also benefit for them. In the Facial Action Coding System it predicts emotion and a big one is hate and to second we have lies. In the text Making Mona Lisa Smile. \" it states that \" In a false smile , the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a difrrent muscle, the risouris.To an expert,faces dont lie;thses muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling pollitcian or celebrity isnt being truthful.\" All this shows is how corrupted the govermnet really is.\n\nIn conclusion, Using the Facial Action Coding System it is the for most advanced piece of technology that will secure and protect your money, idntity and most importanly , life.",
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"content": "When Designing dock dirigibles top empire state Building oBstacles faced One proBlem couldent drop mooring mast top empire state Building Because frane Building So Because proBlem The come way modifey frame Building Building could put added stress mooring mast Another problem faced dangerous I deemed dangerous Because dirigibles filled Hydrogen extremely flammable couldent happend Hindenburg happen floors aBove city streets crowded people So Were oBsticals faced building mooring mast top empire state Building",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered about the Seagoing Cowboys? I would love to join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to take care of animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas. The Seagoing Cowboys is alot of fun because on the way back you get to play fun games like Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whttling, and more games.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you would have alot of fun and traveling. When you go to places you have never visited before its alot of fun like going to Europe, China, and Greece. You get to cross the Atlantic Ocean and the Pacific Ocean there you will get to see whales and dolphines swimming in the ocean.\n\nYou will have some bumps and bruises along the way but I bet you can fight through it like Luke and Don did. I also bet you will have as much fun as them too and get to know what more places feel like.",
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"content": "I think the face on mars is a natural formations because its just a rock and if aliens did make it we would have seen them on a picture from viking 1. The picture that was taken in 2001 show that there is npothing down there but a rock formation and dirt nothing else.\n\nThe rock formation is just a mountain that was not built by aliens but by nature itself and the condition on mars is to harsh for anything to live on.\n\nThe picture shows us that it is equivalent as a butte or mesa like ones in america west. So that is why I think it is just a rock formation not a alien artifact so there is really no need to carry on and keep trying to find out everything about it because taxpayers will just be paying scientist to watch a rock for a few years just for them to find out that it really is just a rock formation.",
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"content": "Censorships libraris would liked cutting worlds air supply It would taking away readers imagintion stoping readers able express mind My veiw censorship libraries would needed Libraries around world good jobs keeping certain books apperpate ages levels By removing certain materials libraries would cause reader attention removed Then readers would demanded leave books alone Then fight books like would need censorships libraries Books made keeping people wondering learning excited By cutting away different materials would stopping people enjoying world minds More take books away population watching television gets higher Then would author actors actress People minds would wondering learning kept excited I remember little girl went library I library looking book I wet big kids side called tried check book The library lady told young showed age level books took book back Then able check book So sating censorships needed libraries That would tking away librarains job So dont take away readrs imagintion",
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"content": "We run our elections by a process called Electoral College. This process consists of tje selction of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The Electoral College consists or 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoal votes is required to elect the President.\n\nThere also is another process which is the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. We could change to popular vote but why would we change how we run the election if this is how we have been doing it for years. Also there are many other reasons why we should keep the Electoral College. Such as certainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, Big states,and also avoid run-off elections.\n\nA dispute over the outcome of an Electoal Collge vote is possible but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning canidates share of the Electoal College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes, 538, is an even number, but it is highley unlikly. Also the Eletoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a priesident.\n\nThe Electoral College restores some of the weight in the politial balance that large states ( by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the constitution. The winner take all method of awarding electoal votes induces the canidates. Voters in toss up states are more likely to pay more attentionto the campaign to really listen to the competing canidates, knowing tjat they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters.\n\nIt can be argued that the prsident may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no hope of carrying their state. I believe that we should not change our electorial process to popular vote and i think we should stick with the process we have now ; Elecoral College. I listed my resonas why but the main reason is that everyone is so used to the Electoral College process because we have been doing it for years so to change it, it might confuse everyone and actual make the elections even more difficult and it might end up messing up our election and cause an unfair vote.",
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"content": "Centuries ago when people discovered land and islands they did affect negatively the biodiversity of the planet. Even now, industrialisation, deforestation and urbanization developments have a huge impact on various species of animals and plants, leading to endangerment and disappearance. Some think that those effects are irreversible and can not be improved, whereas others believe that taking any measures may assist with preserving the remaining ones. I strongly believe that it is possible to keep them alive and save endangered organisms at least. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is not late to reconsider humans' priorities and decisions,before decisively ruining the ecosystem by diminishing them. There are possible ways of solving this issue, which commences from intentions and faith that every inhabitant of the earth should have. Moreover, the government plays a big role in tackling it, by imposing strict laws in order to combat illegal logging and the deleterious effects of agricultural practices. Also, there should be organised organisations or groups of people who help to preserve creatures and plants from poaching and trampling. Hence, everyone must exert influence on the local environment and its dwellers. \r\n\r\nHowever, it is can be denied that a plethora of bio-organisms is fading away as humans do not stop using natural resources incessantly and litter shelters of exotic types of wild animals or plants. Therefore, believers claim that the vital majority of diverseness already has gone and the minority of those will become extinct in 2-3 decades. This will be accurate, for example by 2050 the creatures such as the tiger, koala, polar bear and even elephant will extinct from our planet. Furthermore, if humans do not halt dumping waste,oil or leftovers, sea creatures are suffering and it may lead to another tragedy. \r\n\r\nTo recapitulate,human activities damaged the planet including the animal and plant species. However, it seems to me that humanity can overcome this challenge by working together towards preserving the rest of the species.",
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"content": "The positive and negative polarity as a messages in binary code.\n\nWithout the option of smarter roads,manufacturers turned to smarter cars.\n\nThier cars have driven more then half of a million miles without a crash,\n\nsuch as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\n\nThe people block the roads to make a smoother roads\n\nfor people can drive,\n\nsafley to thier house and traveling and moving so the roads wont be slippery.\n\nThe track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car.Within 10 years,those sensors had became more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on thier own. The goverment changing the laws by little by little to the point for students or parpents dont have no assecents",
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"content": "I think driverless-cars wiil have a positive impact on society. the reason why I think this way is because, it can provide transportation to everyone. It will also cut down the use of fuel, so it would make the world much more green. different car companies are still working on the cars to make them more safer and to make them more efficient, transportation wise. Nissan, Audi, Mercedes-Benz plan to have driverless cars by 2020.\n\nAlthough there might be some challenges with having the driverless car out on the road, companies have improved on many problems the cars had. One of the problems would be braking. Companies have created new ways to help the driver in the driverless car be more safer. New ideas such as vibrating seats to let the driver know when the driver is in danger of backing into something. Another one is announcing when the driver needs to take the wheel when there is dangerous road conditions it cant handle.\n\nEven though self driving cars look like it is ready to take the, many people belive the car is still dangerous. the reason why is because the laws in some states say that a vehicle must have a person fully operating the vehicle for it to be safe. so, in conclusion self driving cars will have a great impact on the world.",
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"content": "MANY PEOPLE THINK THAT YOU NEED TO D EVERYTHING WITH A CAR BUT YOU REALLY DONT BECAUSE THE\n\nDEVELOPING WORLD, WHERE EMISSIONS FROM AN INCREASING NUMBER OF PRIVATE CARS OWNED BY THE BURGEONING MIDDLE CLASS ARE CHOKING CITES. IN PREVIOUS BILLS, 80 PERCENT OF APPROPRIATIONS HAVE BY BLAW GONE TO HIGHWAYS AND ONLY 20 PERCENT TO OTHER TRANSPORT.\n\nCAR TRAFFIC WAS DOWN 60 OERCENT IN THE CAPITAL OF FRANCE, AFTER FIVE-DAYS OF INTENSIFYING SMOG. FRANCE HAD A TAX POLICY THAT FAVORS DIESEL ENGINES OVER GASOLINE. PARIS TYPICALLY HAS MORE SMOG THAN OTHER EUROPEAN CAPITALS. PARIS HAS 147 MICROGRAMS OF PARTICULATE MATTER PER CUBIC METER COMPARED WITH 114 IN BRTUSSEL AND 79.7 IN LONDON FOUND.\n\nAMERICA'S LOVE AFFAIR WITH ITS VEHICLES SEEMS TO BE COOLING. THE NUMBERS OF MILES DRIVEN IN THE UNITED STATES PEAKED IN 2005\n\nAND DROPPED STEADILY THEREAFTER, ACCORDING TO ANALYSIS DOUG SHORT OF ADVISOR PERSPECTIVES, AN INVESTMENTS RESEACH COMPANY. IF CAR BUYERS ARE MERELY OLDER OR BUYING FEWER CARS IN LIFETIME RATHER THAT REJECTING CAR CULTURE.",
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"content": "I believe that driverless cars are not a good idea. They have the potential to be very beneficial but there are many complications. Driverless cars are expenzive, cause liability issues, and may not be 100% safe for all of the passengers.\n\nDriverless cars have many parts to them. They contain lots of technology and different types of sensors, a GPS receiver and a camera near the rearview mirror. Self driving cars require all of these things and more in order to be able to drive around the same skill level as a human driver and to be semi-driverless. All of the technology required to build these cars will make the cost of these cars very high and not very affordable.\n\nTechnology is not fool proof, and neither are humans. Both make mistakes and legally you would have to be able to answer the question of whether or not the person in the car that is \"driving\" is the one at fault in an accident, or if it is the fault of the technology and the manufacturer. At the moment, these cars are only semi-autonomous and require a human to be in the car and ready to take over in case problems arise. If the driver isn't able to avoid an accident because of the cars technology, then who's fault is the accident?\n\nSafety is another important concern. Will fully autonomous cars be able to react quickly enough to prevent an accident that a human could have avoided? I think that semi-driverless cars are a better idea than fully driverless cars as technology can fail or malfunction and that can put all of the passengers in the car in a dangerous situation. Having an alert human driver that is able to control the car at any point and time would be important for the safety of the passengers.\n\nI do not think that having cars that can drive completely by themsleves is a good idea. It would be very expensive and they would not be available to everyone because of cost problems. There is always going to be oppurtunity for the failure of technology in these cars and that can cause not only liability and legal issues, but would also raise saftey concerns for those riding in them.",
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"content": "Technology may be a problem for other occasions, but if technology is used for good especially for students education it can be really helpful. In my opinion the Facial Action Coding System can he really useful in schools. If students don't understand the question or directions the computer can make the question easier for them to understand and if the teacher is busy the computer can help them instead on waiting on the teacher.\n\nFirst, the system can make the recognize the student facial expression and help them understand the question better. In the passage the author includes \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\" As included in the passage \"modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" the system would be helping the student like if it was a real teacher.\n\nLast, you wouldn't be waitng around with your hand in the air wating for the teacher to come help you the system will just help you out. Instead on the time waiting on the teacher you will have been doing your work all the time. The system may explain it better,you never know.\n\nIn my opinion i still agree that schools should have the access to use the Facial Action Coding System for students who have trouble understanding.",
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"content": "It is commonly believed that a lot of people want to know about the past of the house or building they live in.This essay will consider the reason for this and the way how society is searching for their details.\r\n\r\nFirst of all,as human begins, more prefer to discover new stuff and explore new ideas about the historical background.It has a number of benefits rather than drawbacks.Finding out the history of your house helps you to know whether you can or can’t alter parts of the building. At the very least it could prevent you from causing irreparable damage to original features, which you would be keen to retain, if you knew their worth. It would also guide you to use the right materials and methods, which would be in keeping with the house.Secondly,Built history can help us learn more about the people who lived, loved, worked or worshipped in a place and can help us to tell not only a story about the place but also about our ancestors. \r\n\r\nHowever, the residents could use various methods to research those things. For example, if you need to identify some historic background of a specific location or region you could simply clarify it on the internet.In addition, we can find more information throughout the local library, the museum, various multimedia, such as TV, all newspapers, movies.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,nowadays, people are becoming interested in the history, the area they staying because it would help them to identify a background of the location and could get a basic idea of the place they going to live in the future.",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program has allowed me to go and to experience many adventures. I joined because of a friend, who invited me to go to Europe, so let me be your friend and tell you why you should join.\n\nIn 1945, I joined and helped \"countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more.\" Peggy Reif Miller, so we were hired to care for the animals that were shiped overseas. If you join you will be able to help others in need just like I did.\n\nOn August 14, 1945 we got onto a boat and headed to Greece. On the trip there\n\nright before we arrived I turned of age, so \"I could be drafted into military service,\" Peggy Reif Miller, but they said to keep doing what I was doing for my service. This just shows how much being in the Seagoing Cowboys program helps countries. Now the Seagoing Cowboys program is work, but it can also be fun. In the empty places that were for the animals we, the other cowboys and I, would play many different games. All the games we played were to mostly help pass the time.\n\nI also had a lot of time to see the places we went. I loved seeing\n\nEurope and China. Please, join the Seagoing Cowboys program, so you can help others just like I did.",
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"content": "The title seems to say it all, exploring Venus would be a challahnge. Throughout this entire passage numerous facts about how dangerous and unmanagable this explorition has been and would be is elaborated on. But all of the cons are swifly overpowered by the pros given by the author.\n\nAll of paragraph 8 suggjests that exploration would be worth it despite the many hardships it would take. The author explains this need to understand venus saying \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value...because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equall intimidating endeavors... should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (8.1-3).\n\nThis direct quote exemplifies the authors view on why this exploration is necessary.\n\nThis is true, the exploration of Venus is pertinent, not only to fuel our curiosity, but to better understand our own planet. As stated in paragrph 4 \"If our sister planet...it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (3.1-4). This provides an explanation on why exploration to this near-by planet has credability.\n\nIf Venus' surface, feature's , and once life forms are so similar to our own; exploration is necessary in order to avoid detrimental mistakes. Venus is now uninhabitable even for spacecrafts sent in the past. If scientists understood the downfall of Venus, it may help prevent the downfall of our own beloved planet, Earth.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the future but are they right for the future. Driverless cars are on their way and eventually drivers will only be needed in emergency situations.How would they affect the world in which we live in? Is it possible that it can imrpove the world or be even more dangerous than drivers now. I believe that driverless should be a thing of the future and be allowed for people to use. There is no doubt that driverless cars will be in the future.\n\nOne reason to have driverless cars it because it would simply be efficient for everybody. For example the cars could save gas because they wont speed or wont push the engine as hard to use more fuel. They could also provide the person with comfort because he can be in the car stress free and relax knowing that he will be safe on the road. These cars will also be extremely reliabable, when they need gas theyll pull over for you to put gas in it or you wont get lost because theyll kniow where to go. Driverless cars will also save a great amount of money by reducing the amount of traffic violations resulting in less tickets.\n\nDriverless cars will have a great impact on people, companies, and businesses if they have to ship items on land. Semi trucks are annualy the biggest reason of highway crashes and number of deaths or injuries. Driverless cars will provide the ability for longer drives because currently people who drive semi trucks can only drive a certain amount of hours before having to pull over. Semi trucks are dangerous when you see a semi trucks you automatically drive away from fear with driverless cars you would have more confidence in driving cause you know you are safe. Driverless cars would also allow companies to run faster because packages and items will be getting delivered much faster with these cars.\n\nSafety takes a big part in car manufactures today but with driverless cars you wouldnt really have to worry about your safety. Speeding impacts a lot of people negatively with the correct programming on these cars you wouldn't have to worry about speeding cars and other traffic violations that could harm you. With the technology of these cars and knwoing their surroundings cars wouldnt crash as much and would be less dangerous overall. In case of a mistake in the sensor and an accideent happens the result will be safer because the cars will not be speeding which will equal in an almost controled crash. Many drivers have had to struggle with their car being damaged and then the other driver runs away from the crash incident, these cars could be made to immediatly stop when a person gets injured or something dangerous happened.\n\nThere is many reasons why driverless cars will be a thing of the future. Will you support the idea of these cars or are you agaiinst it. These cars have many benefits and will be a vital piece in our lives. They will create many differneces and we can all drive in a safer invironment as i have stated. Will you join the rest of the people in the future when these cars come out?",
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"content": "In the passage the Author suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit desite the dangers it presents. In the first paragraph the author says ¨Venus, sometimes called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.¨. In that quote it is saying that the Evening star is so bright that someone is not really paying attention could see it because it is so bright it can not be missed. It is also saying that it is one of the brightest points of light which means if you are lost you could look up and hopefully see that star and it will give you some light to find your way. Another quote from paragraph one is ¨However, this nickname is misleding since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun¨. This quote means that even though Venus looks like a star because it extremely bright, and shows off an extreme amout of light it is a planet. Many people mistake Venus as a star but once they find out it is a planet they are amazed because of the brightness of it. In paragraph two it says ¨Often referred to as Earths ¨twin¨, Venus is the closest planet to earth in tearms of density and size, and occasionally the closest distance to earth¨. In that quote it is saying that Venus is known as Earths twin because of the size. The Earth and Venus are about the same size. It also says that Earth and Venus have about the same density as each other. In my opinion I think that the planets should all be different sizes and densities because of the fact that everything is different. When it comes to planets they should all be different sizes, so that people can easily point out the planets and be able to name them easily and not get them mixed up because of them looking the same size in the atomosphere. In the passage in paragraph three it says ¨A think atomosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankes Venus¨. In this quote it states that most of Venus is covered in carbon dioxide. If scientists wanted to go study Venus they would have to have many layers of protection on because carbon doxide can be very harmful to the human body. Especially since the carbon dioxide percentage is so high it can extrmely hurt the human body of anyone that goes to Venus to study it. My thoughts on this topic are that if they want to study it they should send up a professional to put something on Venus that can dectect any movement or anything on the planet. They should do that so the scientists wanting to study Venus can study it from a safe distance and out of harms way.",
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"content": "I think other people should participate in being in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I believe this because it is an opportunity of a lifetime to help recover countries that were left in ruins during World War II. The person who decides to be a seagoing cowboy would be joining 44 other nations who have also joined the UNRRA ( the United Nations and Rehabilitation Administration) .\n\nWhile being a Seagoing Cowboy there are multiple things people can do. For instance they would be able to cross the Atlantic Ocean and go to places that a person might not\n\nhave gone to before. A example of a place is China or the Acropolis in Greece and in Venice, Italy they could go on a gondola ride in the streets of water. There are tons more things a person could do while being a seagoing cowboy. Another thing a person could do while being a Seagoing Cowboy is take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over sea. Of course the person would not always be working so they would have chances to play things like baseball and volleyball, Table-tennis, fencing, boxing, and reading to pass the time. Most importantly, they would be helping countries who need help and have less things than we do in America.\n\nIf the person decides to be a Seagoing Cowboy make them grateful for the opportunity. It would also make them more aware of people of other countries and thier needs. That is why I think some one should join the Seagoing Cowboys program and become a Seagoing Cowboy.",
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"content": "Using FACS (Facial Action Coding System) in the classroom would greatly help students and teachers alike. FACS would let teachers see if a student is struggling or confused by a certain assignment. If a student liked a certain subject or school activity, the Facial Action Coding System would help teachers and staff recognize this to better work with the student. This software would also greatly help determine if a student is feeling ill, sad, or uncomfortable.\n\nIf we use FACS (Facial Action Coding System) in the classroom it would greatly help monitor each students' understanding of an assignment. FACS is designed to monitor individual users through the camera of a computer, because of this each student would be monitored. If the program thought that the student was struggling or reacting negatively to a certain subject or assignment, it would notify the teacher so that the student can get individual help with their issue. The author of this article also states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", this would greatly improve the way we teach and offer information to students.\n\nThe software program FACS, can also detect positive emotions. By detecting positive emotions we could help understand if a student likes a certain subject or type of assignment, making it easier for teachers and school staff to help suggest a certain class or activity to the student. The author also talks about the software being used to detect a user's reaction to advertisements, in paragraph 6. I believe this could same technique could be used in schools to help students find a class or school activity that they enjoy doing.\n\nThe FACS software program would also be a great tool to show if a student is feeling sick and not ready to fully participate in a class. If the software notices that a student is unconcentrated or looks sick and \"disgusted\", it could help the teachers and school staff fix the issue in a more efficient way. FACS software would help teachers keep students focused on their work by notifying them if they are unfocused or unproductive in the classroom.\n\nFACS software provides many benefits for both students and teachers in the classroom setting, It's pretty clear that using a software like FACS would greatly improve performance in the classroom.",
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"content": "In the modern era , people can make a bond with other country masses with the help of phones . Few individuals think that inclining businesses and cultural contacts between nations is a positive growth , however others are against this notion . I totally agree with formal views and will discuss both views along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin , with a formal statement . First and foremost reason is people get more knowledge about new products and those have good value in any kind of work with the help of countries can be able to gain more profit in future years or they can set a new targets for more gaining . For example, in the year , 2015 a survey was conducted by UNO which was indicating 70% of companies grow their new target by increasing contacts with other nations . Moreover, with the help of cultural contact with other nations people are getting more knowledge about other cultures which help them learn new things from other nation and it also stops an idea of hating for others as well as it maintains good relations with other countries .\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, with the latter view . Individuals are against upper paragraph views because they think when they start contacting with other cultural masses then maybe they start following other nations cultural values and it will also impact other masses so with it how other countries become more multicultural. For instance , in the year, 2010 when people began the use social media they got more knowledge about other cultures of nation so with it they changed their lifestyles. In my point of view, when countries start good relations in any business field then they can set up new brands for other nation which will help to incline national income and many masses can get jobs under the new companies so the unemployment problem start goes down .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, good bonds are always creat by talking it is a fact so if masses talk to other nation it will grow the knowledge of lifestyle or they can get good manners , but without losing their own cultural values .",
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"content": "Technolagy today has come very far, we have went from flip phones to smart phones in a matter of years. Leaving us with all kinds of helpful ways to communicate. Now companies such as Google are planning on developing another day to day need, transportation. These companies are coming together on making a computer driven car. Computer driven cars would be able to ideally take the job of driving. Which will eliminate the stress and strain off of day to day traffic for drivers.\n\nThis product is a well thought idea for drivers. One reason in paragraph 5 states that the car can apply brakes on each seperate wheel and reduce the power from the engine, which allows a much better responce than any human driver could do alone. This statement shows the independence of the veihcal itself to do what hummans do in a more efficiant way. According to this new car it may be a potential safer way for people to drive.\n\nWith a smart car you are less likely to get involved with a wreck, according to paragraph 2, Google's cars have driven more that half a million miles without a single crash. Even though these cars are not completly indepent they still have a better rate at staying wreck free than just any normal car. These smart cars are not as popular right now due to exspences; however they will soon be priced at a better cost. Also they will become smarter and more efficient as soon as better and more upgraded technology comes into place.\n\nEven though these cars have some risks it is not a bad look out opportunity for the future to come. In fact these cars will start to become more and more ideal for an every day driver. With the new technolegy booming smart cars will soon become a big investment for a majority of people with vehicals.",
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"content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus also know as Evening Star, Venus is the second planet from our sun, is the closes planet to Earth and has the hottest surface temperature in any plane in the solar system.\n\nVenus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varios forms of life.\n\nThe NASA has been studyng about Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condtions. The NASA was trying to look back in the oldest project and old technology called \"mechanical computers\" those devices were first envisiones in the 1800s during the World Was II, the project was a good technology that they can used, those devices make calculations at all.\n\nThey're travels to Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, they want to meet they very edges of imagination and innovations.\n\nThey still trying to found an answer and trying to make projects.",
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"content": "When walking in the halls of my own school I see all kinds of emotion. In high school, you can probably find every single emotion in just one class. To me detecting emotions isn't hard. Most teachers don't find it hard either. I don't believe that technology to read students emotions is a good thing. Nor do I believe it would be a valuable source for a classroom. In my opinion, it would be another way to make society more like robots. Cell phones have already demontized our emotions and ability to detect how someone is feeling. Having a computer at school to detect how we feel would not be a good thing.\n\nI understand that computers are becoming more advanced. However, nothing can replace the prescence of real teachers. In paragraph 6, it talks about having a computer at school to modify the way a class is taught based on the emotion of a student. This paragraph goes on to say the way it would modify the lesson is, \"like an effective human instructor\". To me this sounds like taking away teachers all together. Which in the long run heightens the unemployment rate once again. Teachers aren't payed for the money. They teach because of the interaction they have with students which comes from emotion. As much as we talk about not liking homework and tests, many students have a relationship with their teachers. Teachers can see when a class is bored and modify classes already as a whole. They don't need fancy equipment to do that. They were born with it as a part of human nature.\n\nA lot of people claim that the youth of America already spends to much time in front of a computer. This would be taking that theory to a whole new level. As students would literally have to just sit and stare at a computer for this technology to work. I think the use of computers to further an education is great. However, detecting what emotion a student is expressing won't help. In paragraph 8, the author states that this new technology can even state when someone is faking a smile. While this is great and extroidinary, what will the computer do to change the fake smile into a real one? Lets be honest, who smiles in class while learning about statistics? Interactive games to learn don't even produce real happiness. The students still know they are being taught and have to pay attention.\n\nIf you see someone is sad, looking at them and detecting it won't help. Even if you give them a tissue to try and modify how they are feeling, it still doesn't change their sadness. Not to mention, how many people have the exact same interests? No one! With the technology to modify the lesson for students, they would almost need to fill out a form telling the computer what a student likes and doesn't like to fit a computer to a person. While being able to detect what emotion a student is feeling, the computer will not be able to successfully modify a lesson without knowing how to get the students attention again. It only knows that the student is either bored, happy, sad, etc. A computer can't know how to focus a student and get their attention based on their personality unless you program it to. Which is a quality teachers are once again already equiped with for free. Paragraph 3 states that there are only 6 basic emotions. However, what about confusion. The article as a whole never states how it would help a confused student. Paragraph 6 breifly states that this technology will be able to detect a confused student, but how exactly will it modify the lesson to help the student?\n\nI haven't yet touched base on the cost of this technology. While in paragraph 7 it doesn't state how much technology like this would cost. It does state that, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms\". This would be yet another expense for schools that isn't needed. There are better technological things that a school could spend it's money on. Such as security systems or even more interactive classrooms to get students to move around and have fun at school again. Teachers do a great job at reaching students to get them more invloved in class. Once again they don't teach for the money. They want to change lives through real interaction with students. Which to them is free of charge. Maybe instead of a new fancy system we use the money to pay teachers more for what they do.\n\nFacial Action Coding System will not help out a classroom. There are to many factors that computers can't detect that a teacher can. Such as their emotion from the previous day. Teachers know their students better then any computer will be able to. It will not increase they learning capability of students. It could quite possibly hold them back. A confused student doesn't know how to tell a computer \"I don't understand this, could you please help me?\" Students don't need a fancy system to help them learn and detect what they are feeling. They really already know how they feel.",
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"content": "Many people different views opinions things No opinion view right wrong Books music movies controversy nt removed shelves everybody finds offensive people right view others ca nt make desicion everyone Everybody entitled views opinions ca nt make others see things way If someone library thought CAPS series offensive might ones think They ca nt tell library remove re uncomfortable books Things go majorty rule person majorty They re one problem Everyone right view listen want long s legal If someone finds type music find offensive ca nt tell store remove One person ca nt change everything fit needs They would making plenty people unhappy type music removed To make everyone happy person could listen There s huge selection music person could listen without uncomfortable One person make desicions everyone The president nt even make desicions government helping If one person felt magazine inappropriate nt right change They re one charge ca nt one change magazine It might inapprpriate people enjoy reading I believe everyone s entitled opinions views nt make everyone see way Books music movies magazines things people try control re uncomfortable subject inside material Some stuff inappropriate offensive one person ca nt change Not everybody find offensive people right view watch listen want one person ca nt make desicions everyone",
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"content": "I believe materials shelf belongs basically anybody world I also think materials shelf allowed removed long materials get put back spot matter My experiance books really great like read times spare time read When get book look book observe way take library know wanted read book observe great thing bookwhen read book im fast reader im reading like know book gunna end begans If pick magazine library would nt take library cause magazines expensive get times also hard replace ever needed replaced But get one would look important stuff get kind stuff times think movies nt able library cause people could take ideas movies andor steal movies libraries would expensive pay tooken library watch movie would enjoy much possible cause day comes turn chance watching turn Music passion people people would go buy cd s something listen music would listen get idea play ever wanted become musician something like times would write lyrics song way understand singer singing either listen song My point something comes shelf return rightful spot otherwise consequences people trusted much longer",
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"content": "The setting affected cyclist greatly throughout ride The water bottles contained tantalizing sips growing realization I could drop heatstroke pG kurmaskie This quote saying heat rough terrain length shortcut running water Thats realizes could die heatstroke listened bunch old men",
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"content": "The setting affects alot cyclist For example city seel rush tired everweled But forest happy bit less stress A setting sets mode also attude story",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper I nt think censorship Everyone right read watch whatever makes happy Just someone offended nt mean shouldnt exist Maybe take books movies shelfs censory alone would offend someone It would offend person wrote book made movie There many reasons censory shouldnt libraries My first reason freedom speech People right say write whatever believe Just offend someone doesnt mean take opportunity read away people nt offend Give people full right read write whatever want Also use censorship s going effect literature bad way By using Censorship take books offend people shelves Not books shelves means one read If one read books one learns One thing take consideration authors money Alot times library I see book I really like I ll go buy But taking books shelves means one see The author s write books make point make money If take books dont make money dont make intended point In conclution I think censory overall bad idea One freedom speech Second could possibly drastically effect literature Third taking away authors money point view These important reasons I surrport censory",
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"content": "There were some experts who believe that when a country is already wealthy and rich, Additional enlarge in economics wealth wouldnt make the citizens anymore gratify, I absolutely disagree because any additional enlarge means the rise for both the nation and people, Which will help the country throughout the journey.\n\nAdditional increase in economics will provide the country with a lot of income which will open new path's for greater things and will help with the development of the nation it self and the people because the improving of life facilities will improve the living and inteligence of the people which will also provide good education, increasing income will also contribute to the reaissance of the people and increase the workforce, And can be one of the 10 top leading countrys as will.\n\nA country who's already rich and developed should not be held back from achieveing there goal, there are no limits to evolution the richness and the development of the nation the safest and the most greatest way to keep on achieveing the best results and the strengthening the capabilities of the people, The increasing of the country resources strengthns the people resolve and it helps more to unite the people .\n\nIn conclusion there is no limits for a country who wants to keep on developing it self , And if they are togther , the people and the leaders of goverment will awaken the nation and reach the summits , Evolution has no limits they only need two things determination and resolve .",
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"content": "The diagrams illustrate the construction of a simple solar panel and how it works to heat air or water while passing through the inner chamber of the equipment. Although more complex and modern solar panels are available in today’s world, a solar panel simply consists of three main parts, a box-shaped basement, transparent glass, the entry, the exit of the inner tube. Naturally, sunray as an energy source is essential to use the heating system.\nConsidering the function of solar panel, transparent glass which is in optimal thickness act as a receiver of heat from the sun, that eventually transfer to air or water. A similar principle works for both substances. While the substance to be heated moves through the cylinder, heat energy is convected that provides heated material which can be used for different purposes such as household or commercial needs. Finally, a heated substance is pumped into pipes which are mounted to the outlet of the panel.",
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"content": "Everyone has thought about the autonomous driving before. Whether it was they thought about the positives or negative affect of the driving. Autonomous driving is a very good idea. Driveless cars are a bad idea of this time period because the computer systems are new, computer systems still requires the driver's attention, and there are not laws for driveless cars.\n\nDriveless cars are a bad idea because the computer systems are new. Since, the systems are new they will have a lot of problems just because the new technology that the earth has not seen yet. Furthermore, the systems are going to change according to how thw weather is and different variables, such as how the road conditions are. That would be a problem because that means the car could stop working at anytime whether people are in the car are not. Then, that will cause new lawsuits and high insurance rates.\n\nAnother reason driveless cars are a bad idea because computer systems still requires the driver's attention. This is not good for the drivers that experience fatigue because they are sitting around in the car waiting for the system to fail. This will cause saftey concerns to be rasied about taking chances\n\nwith about not knowing when the system will fail or not. In addition, why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver. Most people think once they buy a driveless car they will just be able to fall asleep behing the wheel and wake up at their destination. On the other hand, there are sensors on\n\nthe steering wheel that will slow down your car to a complete stop if it does not detect their hands on the steering wheel. So, the question gets asked again, why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver.\n\nFurthermore, driveless cars are a bad idea because there are not laws for driveless cars. This is a red flag because with no new laws for driveless cars if there is an accident with a driveless car who is it to blame the manufacturer or the cosumer of the driveless car. Since, most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety\n\nis best achieved with alert drivers how are the supposed to rewrite or add to the law according to driveless\n\ncars that do not have a mind of it own. In addition, what if the technology fails and does not dectect the pedestrians and hits them.\n\nOne common objection to driveless cars being a bad idea is that they are a good idea because the let the drivers relax when driving on long road trips. However, all driveless cars are not fully driveless and require the attention of the driver during certain road and weather conditions. Therefore the driver would have to stay up doing the road trip, and that would be pretty hard to achieve because they are likely to be tired from driving all of the other countless hours. In addition, what happens if the driver does fall asleep after the car has been driving for about an hour. The car runs out of gas because the driver is sleep and the car tried to notify the driver, but he or she was sleep. Furthermore, what happens if the driver does fall asleep after the car has been driving for about an hour, and the car runs into road conditions and cannot dectect the road lines anymore. The car tries to notify the driver, but the driver is sleep and the car runs off of the road.\n\nIn conclusion, driveless cars are a bad idea of this time period because the computer systems are new, computer systems still requires the driver's attention, and there are not laws for driveless cars. However, they are on the right track. It is just not the time for bringing all of the new technology to the real world.",
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"content": "The new technology to read human facial expressions might be a little too much. It might say your emotion is one but your not feeling that emotion and then it will just throw you off. But if we could use it just for pictures, and projects in schools, that might be a bit more intresting.\n\nSay if we got this new technology in our schools today it might not always be correct then throw some students off, or it could become very distracting and take away from the students learning. Todays kids are so involve with technology and it shouldn't really be mixed in with our schools as much because students just become distracted\" \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrcutor.\" \" What if the coomputer reads the wrong emotion that the student is feeling and then it wouldn't give them the correct lesson. But if we used it for school related projects then that might help with the students learning and engage them more.\n\nIn conclusion it wouldn't be the best solution to use this technology to read students emotions, becaue it might not always work, and students can become distracted easily. But if we could use it for projects or to do research then that might be a way that students can use it for studies.",
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"content": "The world of driveless cars will come in the near future says Sergey Brin. Since the 1950s, the car companies have been thinking of self-driving cars. Some people may agree to these smarter cars but others may stick to just driving themselves everywhere. If I had to choose I would much rather be driven by the diverless cars, but I don't think I'd trust them to not get in any accidents.\n\nI have mixed feeling about these cars because I'd prefer one but have to choose the other choice. So my final choice would be that I'd drive myself. I would drive myself because I would feel safe knowing I had the wheel and not some AI that could malufunction or make a wrong choice. In other words I would know what's going on and know what to do in bad situtations, such as the article said in other car accidents, difficult traffic situtation, and bad divers. Also, the GPS that the car has could be out dated and not go the right way, so you would probably be late to where ever you are going. Which brins me to my next point, my mom always makes me late so if I leave a little late then I need to drive a little faster than the speed limit (but not enough to be pulled over) to make it on time. Another thing I wanted to bring up is if the car is diverless and all you need to do is tell the car where to go, then is would be easy for little kids to get in the car and make the car drive not knowing what they are doing and get in accidents easier.\n\nI could agree with some things on the driveless cars. The first thing I can agree on is that it has sensors so that it can sense other cars coming towards it. I also like how they might be different versions to the self-driving cars, like som might be sensored or some might beamagnetized. Finally, I like how if you were to get in a tight spot, then the car will force you to do all the heavy lifting so you don't get hurt.\n\nThe driverless cars have their ups and downs but they will probably end up in our laps sooner than we know it. The driverless cars are in our future and that future is not far away. But I, like some people, will stick to the old way of drive a car.",
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"content": "The question whether art education is necessary for children at school has drawn much attention from the public. While some people argue that teaching art subjects is a waste of time, I believe that it is significant for children to learn art-related subjects.\n\nAt the outset, it is thought by a handful of people that art education at school is a waste of time. There are more important subjects that would benefit children for their future life. Science, technology and mathematics, for example, are of great significant subjects which allows students to find a good job after graduation. On the other hand, studying arts does not lead to a successful career. It is easy to see that those days, most artists have been struggling to make a living from selling their work of art.\n\nDespite the above arguments, from my perspective, learning art is necessary for students at school because of some radical reasons. Firstly, art subjects including music, drawing, painting and sculpture allow children to enter a state of relaxation. After concentration on STEM subjects, what learners need is to unwind by usefully physical activities in order to make a balance. For instance, singing a song in the musical class could bring positive emotion to students. Secondly, studying art could improve performance in other subjects. It is true that art enhances fine motor skills, hand-eye coordination and problem-solving skills which may assists children in attaining better learning outcomes.\n\nIn conclusion, although several individuals claim that it is a waste of time for art education, it seems to me that having access to art classes is essential for children.",
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"content": "Without any ,doubt society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of different people. Therefore, this has become a debate able issue whether to make a successful career an individual should study at university or college, or they should immediately find employment right after completing school. This essay will not only shed light on both the perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion\n\nOn one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of studying at university or college considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is while doing higher education students mind become more broaden, for example when I was in a school, I studied many computer courses but I only gained the basic understanding of the subjects because schools don’t teach core concepts they just provide basic knowledge to the students which is not enough for them to become a successful person in this modern technological world, On the other hand when I attended the university I got more understanding because of the practical knowledge that I got from there as the university prepares students to be more hands-on rather than just providing theoretical information, for instance, according to recent research conducted by googling it is observed that 80% of universities don’t teach only theoretical knowledge of the subjects but side-by-side also teach practical understanding, so that students should be ready to crack any job interview and get the job which they wanted \n\nOn the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case it is often argued that students should start the jobs straight after finishing their initial education people often have this opinion because they think that they would become more responsible and would have more practical knowledge as compared to those who directly enrol themselves in higher education. To exemplify it one of my friends was doing a job right after finishing school, he was doing a job in the automobile industry and was earning a good amount of money apart from that he also paid his complete education fee on his own he didn’t take a single penny from his parents, his father always say that I am proud of my son that how responsible he was during his early age of life, secondly he got admission in the engineering university and was doing automobile engineering and he always scored good marks in every subject not only that he also got the job right after completing his degree because he already had a decent amount of experience in this industry he did not found the job, job found him, hence it is also suggested that students should start the job after completing his or her school \n\nAs we have seen that there are no easy answers to these questions. On balance ,however, I believe that individuals should complete their higher education first rather than doing any kind of employment",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus,\" the author uses many details to suggest how venus is important to explore even though the risks are extremely high.\n\nThe first example of how the author proves that venus is worth exploring is in paragraph 4 the author states, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" The author uses this quote from NASA in the article to show how even though they know its extremly risky, people are still trying to find solutions rather than leaving the problem.\n\nThe second example is in paragraph 7, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide has been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditions.\" This example shows how the scientists are so curious in Venus that they simulating the harsh conditions to make strong technology to survive on Venus.\n\nThe third example is in paragraph 8, the author states \"Striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The author uses this example to summaraize that if we take the time and make the technology to explore Venus, then good things could come out of the solutions.\n\nIn conclusion, the author uses all these examples and more to greatly explain why exploring Venus even though scientists are very aware of the many dangers, is such a good idea to invest time into.",
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"content": "Some people say that the availability of automation is widening the division between the rich and the poor, while other people think it is closing the disagreement. Personally, I believe that the availability of machinery has little to do with the divergence between the rich and the poor.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, having access to the latest and most advanced automation could bring a number of financial benefits to people. Advancements in machinery have brought about large changes in the way people work and do business, and more specifically, in the efficiency of most workplaces. Automation has enhanced the productivity of most businesses around the world, particularly in manufacturing processes, and this has consequently boosted the profits of many companies, and therefore possibly made many wealthy businessmen even richer, thereby increasing the wealth crack.\r\n\r\nHowever, with an increase in the availability of many new technologies, it is also becoming more affordable for the large majority of people, which has provided more equal opportunities between people, whether rich or poor. For example, the internet has become extremely widespread throughout the world these days and has provided people of all financial status access to a great deal of information that they can use to their advantage to help them educate themselves in order to live better lives, and therefore potentially decrease the void.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I do not believe that access to machinery really has much impact on the inconsistency between rich and poor people. It is education and the acquisition and application of knowledge that may affect the wealthy cut between rich and poor.",
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"content": "The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as compromise between election of President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of a qualified citizens. Each candidate running for President has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party. You help choose your state electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your canidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. I think we should keep Electoral Colleges. It gives people a chance, help with responsibility, and it is competitive. Thats why i think we should keep Electoral College.\n\nInitially, it gives everyone in the political group a chance. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional delegation: on for each member in the House of Representitaves plus two for your Senators. The District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. Everyone in the political group votes. That means if you already did'nt ruin your reputation you have a chance at becoming the president because, everyone on at one point and time in the political party is equal. It also make sure everyon is heard, it makes everyone useful for something. The Electoral College gives everybody a chance which is probably the best detail about the system.\n\nIn addition, Electoral College also hekps with responsibility. Laws are vary on how the electors are selected and what thier responsibilities are. It can either take away responsibilities or give more resonsibilities. This can help people out alot, people won't get task that they can't handle and other people won't get task that would bore them or would be to easy from. It also gies people restrictions that had already had problems or that had did something something that was'nt alowd. This is helpful to those who are'nt very skilled at something, those who are probably to skilled at something, and those who are probably just in the middle. This is also another great detail why we should keep Electoral College.\n\nFinially, it is competative. Most states have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. This would make would people work harder and strive for higher expectations. The competitiveness level would be even higher becuase everyone is going for the same goal, this would make thing even more exciting to watch and here about. So the Electoral College dose not only just make the system good but it also makes it exciting and competative, which would helpe people want to learn more about the election. Thats another big reason why we should keep Electoral College.\n\nIn conclusion, Electoral College is very good. It gives people chance to strive for greatness, it helps people with responsibility, and it is very competitave. I think we should keep Electoral College it is a great achievement to our country and is a advantage to our election. It lets everyone be heard, it teaches people how to deal with the roles they have to play the system, and it makes people work harder. I think Electoral College is good for us and we would be dumb not to keep it.",
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"content": "Consequently driverless cars have been making a spalsh in popular culture recently. With them being emphazised in several blockbuster movies, and popular television shows. However I don't support the development of driverless cars, and I think its gonna end up causing more trouble and waste of our tax money. Starting with that so many companies are trying to make driverless cars, but none have succeded without a human in the car on actual roads not on special test tracks. This century in my belief is heading way to far into the technology world, making everything technology based. One of these days technology is gonna be smarter than us humans, and take over .\n\nFirst of all, in the passage in paragraph three it says that, \"many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads\". So if they do develop driverless cars, they will need to be additionnaly money spent on remolding the roads we already have to accomdate to these new driverless cars. That was even stated later in the paragraph where it says that, \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply to expensive to be pratical\". Plus with the millions going into developing these driverless cars, this development is simply too pricey. Along with that the money going towards these developments will be from us, taxpayers, and the government. When this money can simply go into our education or the poor, something thats good for the people instead of a project that we really don't need.\n\nFuthermore progress towards driverless cars, has been that the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to twenty-five mph, but special touch sensors make sure a human driver still keeps hold of the wheel. So far that is still a long way till driverless cars, since so far none of the cars developed have been completely driverless. Although who wants a driverless car that still needs a human driver ? Like for example in paragraph seven it says that, \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of 'Traffic Jam Assistant'... they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notfiy the driver when the rpad ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". Whats the use of spening a fortune on a driverless cars, when we humans can just drive the car ourselves ?\n\nFinally when and if driverless cars do became a reality, they will need to be additionally laws and rules put in place to accomdate the new development. Also with that driving books may be slight more complex, driving schools will be teaching whole different units insetad of learning to drive, it'll be more of what to do if something happens to the driverless car. Futhermore a line from paragraph rasies questions where it says that, \"even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident\". Whose fault would it be if there was a accident within a driverless car, the driver or the manufacturer ? That is exactly why Im against the development of this, because it just complicates things.\n\nUtlimately driverless cars do appear cool and hip in the popular culture these days, but thats not reality; and im not sure reality is ready for this project. Not only is this development of driverless cars time investing, but also expensize too! Also the ones that have been developed so far, still have a long way to go before they are completey driverless. In addition to, safety concerns arises with this development like what if there was to be an accident or wreck. Lastly we don't need driverless cars, when we have humans who can drive the car itself, just like we have been doing for the past generations. Have you ever heard of the saying, 'stop creating the wheel' ? Meaning we already have a wheel, so why try to keep creating another one, just like we already got drivers, humans. We don't need computer operated cars to do the driving for us!",
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"content": "Those who have the desire to possess a house tend to do some research about the history of the new house before purchasing it. There are several reasons why they are doing this activity, and this essay will explain which approaches they can use.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why doing some research is popular among people. Firstly, the new residents want to ensure that they will get good facilities and a suitable environment. In other words, with high-quality facilities and a safe place, they might live in prosperity without distraction or feeling under threat with crimes. In addition, house finders have some purposes related to their work. Take a hectic worker, for example, they tend to choose to live in a place that is closed to their workplace. This is due to the fact that they do not consume their time to commute and it would reduce their expenses.\r\n\r\nIn terms of ways that dwellers can use to decide what kind of a new house fit for them associated with the advent of technology and making a communication. Through the internet, a person can access several platforms which offer a lively home. For instance, they can easily find several comments and a level of satisfaction in the residential areas. Furthermore, making communication with the local society would be an important aspect for house hunters. From this activity, they can acquire information through some conversation, such as, they would know how folk over there interact and socialize with each other. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, searching the history of the new home is an essential part of people's making-decision connected with the reasons of the conveniences and financial purposes. By doing this, the use of the internet and interaction with the local society is needed to find which building is suitable for them.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author describes a new technology called Facial Action Coding System, which enables computers to identify human emotions. However, Facial Action Coding System is NOT valuable to students in a classroom for these reasons.\n\nIt is not really someones buisness or job to be able to read the mind of another student. Reading someone's mind is not beneficial to the person reading it or the person that is getting their mind read. At the end of the day you are just finding out whats on their mind and going back to whatever you were doing. The article talks about how Mona Lisa's face, in reality, is 83 percent happy, 9 percent dusgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. But the question is, who really cares? Nobody is going to change the way they look at that picture any differently wether thay knew how she felt or not. It is just unnecesary and unuseful information. While being able to calculate someones emotions seems to be a useful tool, it is really not. Nobody really cares how Mona Lisa is feeling or what she is thinking, they just enjoy the quality ot the picture; and even if they do care what she is thinking, there isn't much one can do once they find out whats on her mind anyway.\n\nSecondly, people try to hide their emotions for a reason. It is not someone else's job to try to find out whats on somebody's mind. If a person wanted to express what's on their mind, then they wouldn't need a machine to to tell somepne for them. They would just be able to express themselves and express how they feel. If they are trying to hide how they feel, then perhaps they don't want people to know how they actually feel. For example, if somebody is deperessed, but they try to hang out with their friends in class to feel better, that person would not want people to read their face and determine that in reality, they are sad and depressed. They could have been trying to put on a happy face to try to cover up how they are feeling, so its wrong to try to read between the lines when the person does not want you too. And that could be the reason why Mona Lisa had such a straight face in that picture: because she did not want people to know what or how she felt.\n\nLast, but not least, thereis really no reason in being able to calcuate someone's emotions. After you find out their emotions, then what? You mist likely just go back to what you were doing anyway. No difference is being made by being able to reaso someone's mind. In reality, being able to read someone's emotions is just a way of being nosey becsuse there is nothing that you can really do with that information. In the article, when they read Mona Lisa's emotions, there is nothing that they can do with that information other than tell someone. It is not beneficial in any way to know what Mona Lisa's emotions were. So once they get that information, there is really noting that they can do with it that benefits anybody, thus making it unnecessry to be known in the first place.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is not necessary or valuable for reading students' emotional expressions. It is not someone's buisness ot job to try to read the emotions of someone else. It is no use of reading soemone's emotions. And people don't want their emitions to be read; if that was the case then they wouldn't try to hide them. That is why the Facial Action Codig System is not valuable.",
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"content": "\"\n\nThis program has been a very good experiance, ''luke has said.\n\nI got to learn how to feed the animals and keep watch.\n\nIt? even better since Don is with me. I think that this Seagoing Cowboy is a great program. Since this is such a great progam I should convince other people that they should join. There are many reasons why.\n\nPeople should join us. People should join the\n\nSeagoing Cowboys. The first reason why is that there could be more people feeding the animals,water them two or three times a day. They could make sure thet there was hay for the animals. Also the people can be a watchmen or two. The people could also be night watchman.\n\nThey could just help others. Some people could go on an other ship and do other jobs there. They can have some animals in a pen. They can have a person to care for them. They could have the same jobs on the first ship but be on another ship so they can deliver the animals and get more done and be able to deliver them at the same rate.\n\n\"If I asked more people to come and help it would be a huge opportuinity for them to take. they would get the experiance to serve the ship and do what has to be done,\" said Luke. Everyone who took the chance or job would be a huge help. We could have many ships go out. They could get the job done.\n\nSo explorers, if you would like to have an adventure this is the job you may want to try. People will realize or they will be aware of people in their countries and their needs. As a group effort people make a difference. This job would be good for you. This job isn't all about hard work. There are some fun things too. You would get to meet other people as well.",
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"content": "A highly controversial issue today relates to housing scarcity creates socio-economic differences between the dwellers. A copious folks petition that such problems can be resolved by the local administration. I firmly believe that and withstand the view this essay will further elaborate on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nto begin with, there is no denying the fact that the difference between countryside and urban areas raises the tensions between dwellers and the general perception government spent most of the budget on the cities areas instead of the countryside however the burning topic of today's age is the shortage of housing societies in big cities not room the dwellers of rural area causes socio and economic tensions",
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"content": "When walking library children finding books movies magazines look It offensive I believe authors fault offensive language work I understand parents get upset child reading book looking My opinion students able choose want read offensive stop reading book I feel student adult know harmful student Censorship library find books everyone read I think ban anything library used something useful person I find hard believe libraries remove every offensive book movie music shelves rating item horrible I nt think good idea ban things libraries need use information book If offends read book choose another book Authors work hard writing book go publishing process My opinion I feel remove items shelves libraries content item appropriete someone My views vary I older children someday But right I think remove items shelves libraries",
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"content": "This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. Then paragraph two it talks about how its a planet again not a star and its saying that its the closest planet to earth.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that kind of heat and pressure could even crush a submarine.\n\nIn conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin.",
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"content": "Although driverless cars are coming it is not necesarily a good thing. With current technology cars are able to steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves. But, if there is a problem such as a work zone or an accident, then the driver must take over.\n\nIn the past driverless cars were tested on special tracks, and they worked very well. However, this system would have required upgrades to existing roads, and it would have also been very expensive to install.\n\nCurrent driving laws make driverless cars illegal in most states. The assumption is that only a safe car has a driver in control at all times. With the current laws if there is an accident involving a driverless car, it has to be taken to court to figure out who is at fault.\n\nDriverless cars can take the ease off the driver, but they cannot make driving safer. The driver is still responsible for the actions of his or her vehicle.",
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"content": "Right after finishing high school, teenagers often wonder the whether they ought to continer their education on get a job, while many people believe that keeping of studing at a collage or milersity will be the best was to guarantee a successful career, others claim that working straight after school is a better opthion.\n\nStart wooking after graduation is beneficial foro. several reasons fiotly, by working yang people will be able to start earning me be matume possible. As a result, they will Jas soon aro enough, and be able to love independently their own income. Secondly, a person who decides to look for a gob rafters then persuing higher education is likely to have a chance to obtain a lot of real experiance and practical skills, \n\nThis lead them to progress more greekly may in there chossen profession.\n\non the other hard, Some people arguce that it in more beneficial for young people to continer their studies after high schols/ firstly, A college student prepares students to meat akademic qualification, which most employecon pequire nowadays. Consequently, unindrosity graduates usually have oppertunities to exon higher salaries that whose with out qualification. In addition, the job market is becoming 'hora soon Competitive simee hundreds at applicants oflen. chase one position in an organization. Haming a degree is an obvious advantage \"that university graduates have. In many countries, stadents who graduates with an engineering degree are higher paid and have as good job. easy \"time\" getting a good job.\n\nIn conclusion, it in trave to Say that the both working stright after high school and Continueing higher level studies earch has their own unique advantages.",
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"content": "Despite to the presence of vast amount of translation programs on computers and other electronic devices, it is still considered more beneficial in terms of learning language itself. In this essay, I will be describing my total agreement with this dilemma.\nThe utmost reason for learning new language instead of using various programs is that human brain makes necessary changes in its structure and produces necessary chemical substances which in turn gives other functions to the brain. As a result of this human brain gains new functions in addition to the language skills.\nAnother benefit coming from directly learning language is the opportunity to express your beliefs and emotions in that language which is impossible to realize via software programs. People around the speaker tend to understand the spoken language more easily and get the speaker's ultimate goal in a more usual and humane way.\nThe third reason for studying the language rather than carrying a software to translate might be the possibility of immediately using language. In other words, software programs can not find the right words according to the situations or conversations among people. As a consequence of this, due to different meanings which translation devices remain useless in such cases, huge misunderstandings can occur.\nIn a conclusion, in addition to the reasons mentioned above, using language by learning it always seems realiable and more realistic way than using device for this purpose. As I raised my pure opinion toward gaining language skill earlier I strongly believe that this method has been the most preferable method for decades and it will be.",
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"content": "Diverless cars aren't a good idea. Even though Genral Motors developed a special test track to determine is these cars are working or not , when this car is sold the might still be a defect.\n\nAt first the were constructing a smart road that took a lot of magnetic sensors, which cost a lot to do. So they started a smart car. to make this car they need alot of sensors. This car took alot of time an work to manufacture. The most important part of this Toyota Prius was to mimic the skill of the human at the wheel. These sensors were advanced to detect response to danger of \" out of control skids or rollover\". The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. Even though it allows better response for the car, what about the people in the car that might get hurt inside the car.\n\nThis diverless car might be good for some, but some might think that people should still take caution in there their driving because if people use this car more, people might get to use to the car stopping on its on . They might forget how regular cars work.",
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