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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the story it states \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" if\n\nvenus once was Earth-like then it would most definitly would be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. If venus was Earth-like once then we need to know what happened and whats the best way to keep it from happening to Earth. Earth is home to alot of people whats there to make us not think venus was home to other living things like plants animals or even people like us its hard telling what venus used to be like but if it was Earth-like it would be a worthy pursuit. The article also states \" Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" this would give us time to check venus out and find out more about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars safe? Majority of the world drives cars. Cars are used to get you from point a to point b. Cars are an example of moblie transportaion. Driverless cars shouldn't be on roads because they aren't safe, they seem too risky, and driverless cars are exspensive.\n\nFirstly, driverless cars aren't safe. Driverless cars sound like a good idea but what if they cause trouble? According to the passage it states,\" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers,\n\npassengers, and pedestirans safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" If drivers aren't alert when driving driverless cars then it would cause a lot of accidents. In some states it's illegal to test computer driven cars.\n\nSecondly, driving driverless cars seems too risky. You have to be alert when operating a driverless car, and this means you can't drink and drive. When you drink and drive in a driverless car you're putting yourself and others around you in more danger. If your driverless car's technology fails you could get injured and so could your passengers with you. Driverless cars need to be proven safe before they actually hit the roads.\n\nLastly, driverless cars are exspensive. The \"smarter cars\" would be really exspensive if they ever hit the market. If making the cars was so exspenive, imagine buying a driverless car. Cars that operate with a driver are also exspensive but they most likely cost less than driverless cars. Driverless cars shouldn't be worth your money.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be on roads because they aren't safe, they could cause trouble, and their exspense could be really high. Driving cars is a responsibilty. If you don't take driving seriously you could get yourself in trouble and you can hurt or injure others. According to the article it states,\"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" I agree with this sentence from the article because with a human driver it could help keep driving a little more safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever patient Like office Well let tell time I One time I really sick I started crying I lot pain I crying hour straight Then mom took hospital works When I got car I somehow stopped crying I told mom I stopped crying told I go see When went seen man rushed We went right waiting room seats taken When came asked man see son That gave us two seat sit After minutes called us medical room She examined I really scared I might nomonia bad virus When came office I holding moms hand She came unto us holding piece paper mom asked I Luckily said I cold ear infection When walked patient room mom pay She pay We go get medicine walked elevator went ground floor went pharmacy The pharmacy full I felt like pancake another pancake When got counter mom asked medicine got along big lolly pop When I got home I took medicine went bed The following day I woke I got lollypop That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some people argue that equal numbers of male and female students should be accepted in every major, I personally disagree with this statement.\nThere are a number of arguments that can support my stance. To begin with, it is impossible to enroll equal genders of students in every subject. It is true that some faculties are underrepresented by a particular gender. For example, STEM subjects usually have more male students than females, but the opposite is true in educational-related subjects, which phenomenon seems to violate the principle that we fight endeavor today, gender equality. Therefore, people want to accept equal numbers of students to achieve a gender balance in every subject. However, the reality is that different genders prefer to study different subjects themselves, but not because of the unequal opportunity. According to one of the research, women show a higher interest in subjects like education, psychology and arts rather than science-related subjects. As a result, it is apparent that admitting equivalent proportions of male and female students can hardly be achieved.\nIn addition, it will deprive students of chances to make their own choices if universities enroll both genders equally in every subject mandatorily. It should be noted that it is students' right to select the subjects freely in college. If students cannot register for the subjects they want to study just because there are not enough quotas left for particular gender of students, or they are forced to study some subjects they are not interested in just because they need to fulfill the gender requirement in the class, it will hinder students' learning in the long-run.\nTo conclude, universities should not enroll equal gender students in every subject as it is impossible to achieve and may deprive students the freedom to choose the major they want to study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph various reasons For example whole passage talking hibiscus flower provides Saeng ability overcome obstacles comfort time disappointment This ending paragraph shows in spring hibiscus budding everything beautiful Saeng take test She knows help hibiscus plant pass test It shows hope trust pass test comes hibiscus flower The plant waxy leaves dainty flowers purplish petals white centers provide strength determination courage power pass test spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I believe that using technology to read students expressions valuable? Well their are pros and cons to this technology.\n\nThe way that technology is able to do this in the first place is beacuse of Dr. Huang and Dr. Eckman. They created a machine that tracks the movement of your muscles. Such as a sign of anger is your orbicularis oris which is around you mouth when it tightens that is a sign of anger. Also when above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you are suprised. Each face is compared to a face with no face expression to compare and find the signs to identify the expression.The computer could also adjust the lesson for you so you are not bored. A regular PC coudnt handle such confusing algorithms but they can write down sample instructions to encode your emotions.\n\nThe cons of The MOna Lisa, is that alot of times people dont want others to know their feelings. They would rather keep it to them selves. Using The Mona Lisa could be breaking their privacy.\n\nAll of around I would say that The Mona Lisa is valuable. Its such a good thing to have around for the most part. Being able to adjust a lesson to the way someone feels can help students to be more interested and better learners. Also knowing the way a student feels can prevent and solve a lot of problems. Lots of prombles in school could be prevented if a teacher knew ahaead of time of the problem or how another student really felt about a problem So yes once again The Mona Lisa is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has always been a raging debate about whether art is an important subject for children in schools or it can be neglected in the views of other important subjects. I am going to scrutinize both aspects in further paragraphs before forming an opinion in the last.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, on the one side of the coin, there are many reasons for supporting other important subjects in children’s school curriculum; firstly, modern technology like computer literacy has become the need of the hour. It is one of the most demanded skills for a job in every sector. If they spend most of their time learning art they will not be able to face the cut-throat competition in this scenario. Moreover, the knowledge of essential subjects like math, and science is highly required in every field. Secondly, Art despite being highly appreciated, still does not ensure any career growth because most fields like engineering, marketing, IT professionals, and managers are found graduated and post graduated in these important subjects.\r\n\r\nOn the other flip side of the coin, art is a creative skill that has wonderful imagination power. It provides the wings to the fantasy and expresses the feelings without the exchange of words. To illustrate, I have come across a painting in which the difference between the rich and poor’s plight was depicted through painting only. Moreover, music is also a piece of art and works as a healing therapy in the hectic world. Secondly, artists bring laurels to the country across the world and ensure that the cultural heritage of the country may not extinct. For this, they are highly paid and appreciated. That kind of respect is no less than a flourished career. To conclude, in my view the selections of the subjects should be left to the students in which they are interested because that very interest helps them to grow in their life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, the advent of media has proved to be significantly crucial in our lives. It has become important as there is an increasing need to be updated about the world. While such advancement has made the world flat in this 4.0 era, it also brings certain negative effects. In this essay, I will analyse both the upsides and downsides of this problem.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the media is a great source of information. Since people can have access to online news regardless of place and time, they can acquire vital facts whenever they are in need. For instance, people who do not have enough time to buy a newspaper in the morning can take their time in the evening to skim some online news to keep themselves up-to-date. When it comes to learning, news media serves a key role. For example, college students need plenty of time to do research yet they have little time to spend at the library. With the help of online sources, they can obtain numerous references effortlessly. These examples have proven that the media industry has positively affected our social lives. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is difficult to validate the reliability of online information. It means that people can only see what the media wants them to see rather than a bigger picture of the whole story. For example, many celebrities have been avoiding being interviewed as they are afraid that the press will paraphrase their ideas and produce misunderstandings. In addition, the mass represents only a one-sided view. Therefore, the public can be easily navigated if they are not wise enough to stay away from fake news. For instance, the production of genetically modified organisms has always been criticised by the media. Yet, several advantages such as extra nutrients, fewer pesticides, and cheaper prices are yet to be mentioned.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the mass industry has successfully fulfilled the needs for information of today's humans. However, it can yield negative effects due to fake news and subjective opinions. Thus, people need to collect only trustworthy pieces of information to enrich their knowledge. Only by doing so can we utilise the pros that news media has brought.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ORGANIZATION people types genres books music movies etc like well nt like Meaning like forces read listen anything nt want Books music entertaining things dont like nt deal I feel neccessary books removed shelves someone gotten offended You told must read book nt company author s fault rented book felt insulted Most likely directing story towards get worked something happen take media You chose Why make company lose investment something could easily taken care simply taking back got I read books listened songs seen lots movies nt best interest I nt make stop saling m pretty sure someone likes Why stop someone elses enjoyment uninterest It s really neccesary And s problem world today people take little situations big catastraphy reason If nt like nt get People need put feet company s shoes realize would understand Books magazines music movies etc made everyone world make entertainment interested Taking shelves would unnessecary person nt like People different opinions life s makes every indiviual different one another So ruin people s fun get want As I stated neccessary remove item shelves someone taken offense something It s company s fault simply nt buy take back Things would much better Get items best fits leave others nt shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I drive I wined when time comes patient otherwise wont yelled loud heart warming sound Starting time year I loved sound Its second favorite sound The vibrations rattaling lags races away driving I could wait turn After I rides mins said words I thought hed never say turn I looked truck Wow look small next truck I ran fast I could pit I climed onto tires rim top tire cab CAPS gaggag Oh yeah This felt right I couldnt go fast I almost tipped So thats good thing So nat shell paconts comes long way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, industrialisation has increased rapidly. Although, it directly affects plants and animals. In this situation, some folks argued that it is too late to tackle this issue. However, others think that some effective measures can be taken to save the environment. I will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, these days deforestation is a major issue for animals and plants. Day by day, the population has increased significantly. Food and housing are basic requirements of humans. So, they destroy due to erosion to fulfil their requirements. As a result, thousands of species are homeless and they can not live without food, at the end the biological cycle breaks down and animals or plants extinct. For example, Asian white elephants have been extinct since 2010. It is the result of the deforestation in the Asian forest. Some of the activities are irreversible. Hence, we can not do this in this situation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not too late to take action against human activities to protect the environment. Firstly, the government should enforce strict action against erosion, they should ban these types of activities which negatively affect different species. Moreover, we live on the planet so it is also our duty to save nature. For instance, 8 billion people live in the world and if only they had one tree per person, in the end, we will have planted 8 billion trees. Parallelly we also should protect wilderness which is endangered in the near future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we can do it when everyone understands the situation. It is our responsibility to save the world from negative impacts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Face or A LifeForm\n\nMany people say that we are not alone in this universe. Some people say diffrent planets have secret life forms on it. But, i dont think believe that a face on Mars was created by another life form beside humans. There has been theries for centurys about space, that we are not alone and people from diffrent planets exsist. I dont think so because it there were other life forms out there why havent they made contact.\n\nSpace is full of adventure, discovery, and wonder but to come to the realization that there are other life form beside or own. It would change how people think and would change reality forever. They put aliens on movies and telivision for entertainment only not to be taken into content. The face on Mars is just a creation of all the space debry and the astroieds that hit Mars and have sculpted in to resembling a human figure or ( human face).\n\nThe face on Mars maybe could have been there for a long time before but, we just didnt descover it till now. People dont know how large space really is. They just know what people till them or what they have discovered, but why would aliens really exsist? Some people say there is life on all planest and we are not looking hard enough.\n\nEven if there were life on diffrent planents why would we just be hearing about it now and not sooner. What the picture actually showa is the Martian equivqlent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. The people of America and of this great nation dont need to be consirned about if we can defend then aginst an extra terresteral attack. Also, we dont know what knid of weapons they have or if they have powers or anything about them. We don't know there weeknesses or strenths. So, we would be litterally out numbers a maybe out-smarted and maybe out-guned and we might lose that fight to defend the world and out home.\n\nSo i dont think it was aliens who did that face. But, the real question is do u ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting on car usage has its advantages. Here are three reasons why i say limiting car usage has its advantages. Limiting on car usage has its advantages because you spend less money, less traffic and less car accidents. Dont you think that limiting on car has its advantages to?\n\nTo begin, Limiting on car usage has its advantages because you spend less money. When you spend twenty dollars a week or more on gas money for your car thats wasting money when you could just buy a bus pass for ten dollars and that will take u where u need to go for a week or more. Right there you just save ten dollars. what would you rather do spend twenty dollar a week on gas to get where you need to go or spend ten dollars a week on a bus pass which would also get u to where you need to go? Also you spend less money by limiting usage of cars by saving money on tickets. Now a days police pull you over any little thing wrong with your car and your tickets are just going to keep pileing up then if you dont pay them or send them to court you licenses will be suspended. When you just could avoid all of that.\n\nMiddle, Limiting on car usage has its advantages because less traffic. I know that in the passage, \"Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" it said,\"BOGOTA, colombia- In a program that's set to spread to other countires, millions of colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\" but if more people are walking instead of taking cars there would be less traffic.\n\nEnd, Limiting on car usage has its advantages because less car accidents. the more cars on the road the higher chance to get into a car accident. I know that you still could get in a car accident with a pedestrians but mostly car on car accidents happen. the less cars on the road the less accidents.\n\nConclusion, Limiting on car usage has its advantages. my three reasons were you spend less money, less traffic and less car accidents. That was how i explain why limiting on car usage has is advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views whether children should take art lessons in their school .I completely agree with those people who think that art should be a part of education. . This essay will discuss both points of view before drawing reasonable conclusion .\r\n\r\nOn the one hand , Art has different benefits for childrens. Firstly , As arts gives the sense of pleasure and comfort , it is vital for spiritual health of children which can be damaged easily during the puberty. \r\n\r\nFor example a recent survey contucted by The Times Magazine has proved that children who are interested in arts shows fewer depression symptoms. Secondly , There are some children who innately gifted. Therefore, it is significant to discover them in their early ages , because they can find wider time in order to improve their talents. For example, Beethoven, the most famous musician in 18th century , has been discovered by his music teacher called Darcy Smith. Finally, thanks to this example, we can understand the importance of art for children. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , despite the others, some people claim that art classes are not useful.The Main reason behind this can be that parents do not consider art as a job field for their children , because the amount of money earned by craftsman is very little today. However , in my opinion, parents should be aware of that money must not be thought as a first issue when choosing a job . Since , loving the job is more important than the salary for the future happiness of children . Therefore , İn addition to science lectures such as physics and math, Art classes should be given children in order to ensure that they can lean toward any subject that they like . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion , as art has different useful impact on children, suchsuch as helping to discover their talents or protecting their spiritual health , classes related to art must be taken by children in schools and parents should not mislead them by thinking about money .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My thought on is that i think they are stupid and shouldnt be made bcuz what if you dont want to drive and then that driveless mode doesn't work then you can't use that mode and maybe have to pay thousands and thousands of dollars to pay for it.\n\nso maybe car companies should try to inovate a little more and make it so that driveless mode doesn't malfunction and eventually stop working then your car can't do the driveless part you. It would also be a good idea bcuz let's say your're an elder man or woman and you cant really stay awake that well and u fall asleep in the car they should put a sensor to tell the car to kick in and make sure the person in the car can stay asleep while your car is sleeping and then after a while the car should have an alarm to either warn the driver while awake or wake up the driver if he or she falls asleep.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are two different views about the effect of computer games on children. While some assert that video games have a bad influence on young boys and girls, others argue that it would be beneficial for them in many ways. Both groups provide compelling reasons to justify their assertion which will be elaborated on in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a group of people believe that playing computer games is an absolute waste of time. That is, playing computer games deters children from spending time on activities which are essential for their well-being in the future. For example, children can learn a foreign language, which will be helpful for them to find a better job when they become adults. Another reason for opposing video games is that they change teenagers' behaviour in a bad way. A good illustration of this is violent video games; children who play video games containing violent scenes tend to be aggressive at school.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others believe that the benefits of computer games cannot be neglected. One benefit of these games is helping children nurture their problem-solving abilities. Designed strategically, most video games encourage children to use their cognitive capabilities, so they can think better and act more wisely in real-life problems. For instance, a child who plays strategic games regularly performs better in circumstances that require using the ability of negotiation. Moreover, in some cases, video games persuade children to do sports. For example, there are many children finding football interesting because previously they had become familiar with sports in a video game. Consequently, although many believe that computer games stop children from doing physical activities, ironically, it helps children to find their passion in the sports world.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, whereas a considerable proportion of society asserts that computer games have a devastating effect on children's behaviour, I believe that playing these games can be beneficial for children because by playing video games, they can be better decision-makers, and in some cases, they may find doing sport charming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is nt saying world called free country I thought wasthere alot things people see world But find ways see anyway matter world many sources get truth maybe even lie s world live From media press poparasi maybe even people around help cause things seen people There thing s people nt know nothing goverment world shields eyes Then s things showin world like alot people think happend offensive Not racisim general also news would people put violent things news like murder storys kidnapping robberys many People find offensive even scary alot people yet keep So nt think removed shelves ever things found offensive people located Just like marine died gay supportors protestors near funeral chanting offensive thing s Say thank god dead soldiers god hates army Nobody stopped If people going come togeather work one another things displayed whats point telling someone else offensive going end And going care world thinking hurting Everyone opinion wants demained people diffrent always see diffrent see So see something offensive book movie outside Dont watch dont read dont try hear friend stranger leave alone We put much effort hearing offensive things leave alone And wouldnt even known Live life dont worry negative lets focus positive see", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This program sounds really fun and you should join. Thats what im talking about in my story to day. I hope after this you consider joining.\n\nOne reason I think you should join is it would be a fun experience. You would be able to sightsee while your on the boat. You would get to play games on the boat to pass by time. Most important of all you get to help people and that should make you happy. Thats why I think it would be a fun experince.\n\nAnother reason I think you should join is that its a lifetime oppotunity. You to go to war and save people save our country and would make me smile. You get go on an adventure of a once lifetime and tell me that wouldn't be fun. You also get to serve our country and that is awesome. That why I think it is a lifetime opputunity.\n\nThe last reason is you get to go on a lot of adventures. You get to go places you never been before. You probably will go to the U.K alot. Same for the alantic ocean you will probablay be on it alot. Thats why I think adventures would be fun.\n\nThats my reason and ideas why I think you should come join us at the program. I hope this made up your mind about coming. Alright I'll see you if you come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few days after May 24,1976 NASA discovered a landform -on Mars- that looked like a humans face.From the few days after the discovery of Cydonia-landform on Mars- untill this day, many people have argured that it was either a natural landform or created by aliens. NASA has proven with many facts that this landform was not created by Aliens.\n\nOne reason that NASA knows that this landform was not created by aliens is because we used a more accurate camera on April 5,1998. Micheal Malin and a camera crew took another picture of the landform that was ten times more accurate than the oringal pictures taken in 1976. Even after these pictures were realesed to the public- in 1998- the people that believed in the aliens creating this oblect still were not satisfied. They began to reason that because of the clouds over the face in the picture the aliens were hidden by the clouds. So mission controllers at NASA prepared to look again.\n\nNASA prepared for another trip to Mars to see if this really could have been somthing made by aliens. On April 8, 2001- a very clear summer day on that part of Mars- a drew took a very close look again at Cydonia. Malin's team captured an amazing and even more accurate photo of Cydronia. This team used an camera with maximum resolution and each pixel had 1.13 more pixels then the photo of the landform in 1976. Milan also stated that \" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\". He also says \" so if there were objects in this picture like... Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see that that they were!\"\n\nSo studying all these facts and photos NASA has has came to a conclusion that these photos show a buttle or mesa-landforms. We have very accurate photos to support this claim. We also have very clear reasoning on why this \"human like face\" could\n\nnot have been created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "[M]Luck point of the view convincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.[A]The texts states that In August 1945 they received their orders to report to New Orleans. When my draft board leaned that I was on a cattle boat trip they told me to keep doing that for my service. Luck made nine trips the most of any Seagoing Cowboys. The cattle boat trips were an unbelieve opportunity for a smalltown boy. Helping people I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and china.[A] It took about two weeks to cross the Altantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to china. Helping out on his aunt Katie's farm as boy had prepared Luck for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. Luck made another trip to night watchman. He had to check all the animals at night. Luck also found time to have fun on board especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luck Bomberger. It opened up the world. He leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.[M] This proves how Luck point of view convincing others to be a Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Politicts have been around for centuries; politics were made to keep the peace and give everyone a fair expresion to the people. We have all herd of people in political standpoint have been corrupt, but what if our own voting system was corrupt and our votes have never made a diffrence in selecting a president by the people. When we vote for our selected president is it really going to change or make a diffence on who gets elected... right? \"of course it will make a diffrence.\" As long as your states electors dont choice by who they feel is the best fit for presidency. On another note what about the Electoral college votes. Why does one canidate always get all the electoral college votes from one state? Why cant we just revert to how many votes the canidate gets?\n\nWhen getting down to the nitty-gritty bits of the Electoral College voting system it is a bit unfair in the ways it works in a whole, but that doesnt mean we have to abolish it and start over. The Electoral College voting system has worked for many years. In stead of just getting rid of the Electoral voting system maybe we should tweek it in a bit that makes everyone happy and makes it completly fair. Each state picks how it gives its Electoral votes, but in most states its a \"winner takes all.\" When a state desides its going to be a \"winner takes all\" state, that means when voting all the Electoral votes will go to the canidate with the most amount of elector votes. Instead of using the winner takes all system each electoral votes should be given fairly. When electors votes for its canidates by the people that single Electoral vote should go to that canidate. When doing this people are in-tern voting for there canidate.\n\nNow that they Electoral votes are being distubuted evenly there is a smaller problem we face. Electors are the people who actully vote for our presidential canidate. Very rarely do these electors not choose the canidate based on the amount of votes they have been given, but it does happen. The electors are in a way chosen randomly but most of the time are chosen by the presidential canidate. Often these canidates do the right thing and vote based on votes gifen to him by the public. When these electors vote they are not well regulated. What we should do is have a sort of security system that alows us the make sure our electors do the right thing. instead on relying on someones trust worthyness we should have a system that counts the publics votes. When the elector is done with his final vote we would then see if he voted based on public votes.\n\nWe the people are faces with another way of voting. We can vote for whatever canidate we please and when done with we will see how many people voted for each canidate, and whoever has the most wins right? This system would most likely give one the canidates an unfait advantage. When Romney and Obama went head to head in 2012 obama won because the amount of Electoral votes, but if we did it by the number of votes it would have been almost completly tied in votes. since Romeny was born in the south most likely each state in the south would vote for Romney. Since Obama was born in Hawiia there is no state near Hawiia that would have the same oppinion. So when using just plain votes one canidate would most likely have an unfair advantage based on the size and populating of each state going for that presidential canidate.\n\nWhen suming it all up the Electoral College voting system is in a way a bit unfair, but when using the method given each Electoral vote would be given fairly instead of a winner takes all system. When going for just plain voting it would most likely turn out unfair or a lot of tied runnings. When given the facts the Electoral College is fine as it is but can be unfair and that is why we should use this method in the next following elections.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "W\n\nhat if we lived in a world with no cars? What are cars really? According to source 4 \"A car is just a means from getting from point A to point B when BART doesn't work.\" If this is true then a cars only purpose is to polloute and cause trafic jams and accidents. If more people took the bus or walked or rode their bike to work we would see a steady decrese of greenhouse gasses. Also the less cars on the rode the fewer traffic accidents there would be.\n\nF\n\nirst of all, We all live on the same planet its up to us to take care of it. Source 1 states \"Passenger cars are responisible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" This quote states that cars are one of the main reasons for pollotion in the world. Therefore, without cars polloting the streets the world would not only be a better to live in but a cleaner one as well.\n\nN\n\next, without cars in the streets there would be less trafic accidents. This is clear in source 3 when it shows\"Clombians hiked,biked,skated or took busses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this cappital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" What this quote is showing is that cars only cause unessacary problems for everybody. Plus the less cars on the streets the fewer recless drivers there would be as a result there would be fewer car accidents.\n\nI n conclusion, the limit on car usage can only be possitive. With fewer cars being sold the levels of greenhouse gasses would decrese. But not only that, less cars mean less accidents. Cars only cause problem in the world, whats being 10 minutes late compared to the safty of your fellow man. Source 4 states Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, propsed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cites in which \"pedestrian,bicycle,private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissins and improve safty.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart shed light on the proportions of UK citizens consuming daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetables in three years, namely, 2002, 2006 and 2010. British citizens surveyed in this regard were divided into three categories, including males, females and minors.\nAs shown in this diagram, the percentages of children, men and women underwent fluctuations respectively in this period. Women had a larger percentage than men and children in all three years while children always had the smallest proportion.\nThe percentage of women who consumed recomended quantity of fruit and vegetables reached 25% in 2002, which rose to 32% four years later and declined to 26% in 2010. Such a fluctuating trend also took place in the proportion of men that reached 22% in 2002 and peaked at 26% in 2006 but dropped to 16% in 2010. Similarly, British children who consumed proper amount of fruit and vegetables accounted for 11% of all UK children in 2002, and this percentage peaked at 18% in 2006 while decreasing to 16% in 2010.\nOverall, the year of 2006 witnessed the largest percentage of UK nationals consuming appropriate amount of fruit and vegetables, which stood in marked contrast with 2002 when the UK citizens in each category doing so made up the smallest proportion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology could change for use in the classroom could be very valuable for us.\n\nOne day one of my friends could be really down in the dumps and look fine, but if we used the Facial Action Coding System on them and see how they really feel we could do something to help them cheer up. That machine would also work on other people to like teachers, parents, and even neighbors. You could go around cheering everyones day up for them and they would think so much of you. If you or yours friends were to also take a bad picture and you didn't think you looked good , or didnt smile the Facial Action Coding System would come in so handy to help make yourself look good.\n\nThe Facial Action coding system would be a very nice piece to have with you to hack in to someones true emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, there has been an increase in the number of people delaying their parenthood. Although this trend has a number of benefits, I believe that the drawbacks will be far more significant. \nThere are some reasons why people baulk at the prospect of conceiving children. The first reason is that the cost of raising a child is exorbitant nowadays. Admittedly, most young couples just have meager income, so they will struggle to afford to send children to keep their children well-fed and well-clothed. Delaying pregnancy allows couples to amass wealth; as a result, they will be financially stable before embarking on their parenthood. Another reason is that having children later, people can make the most of their youth. Child-rearing is an onerous responsibility, which can tie people down. In other words, when having babies, couples might spend most of their time taking care of their children, so they will have less time for their hobbies. \nDespite the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that people should consider the drawbacks of this trend. Later childbearing will pose some risks including miscarriage, stillbirth and prematurity. In terms of children, being born premature, they may have to face high risks of birth defects or low birth weight. Apart from that, children born to older parents may be at risk of disorders and diseases, including autism and Down syndrome. In terms of mothers, aged women tend to have more health problems, such as having high blood pressure, which affects negatively on fetus. It also takes mothers longer to recuperate from the labour.\nIn conclusion, while people can decide to delay their parenthood because of some convincing reasons above, I believe that its disadvantages are more considerable. It is therefore important that couples should contemplate doing so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "School plays an important role in the development of children's moral values and raising the children towards the brighter future aspects. It is believed that kids find it tough to focus on their studies during school. This essay will illustrate the causes and the solution to their difficulties.\n\n First of all, youngsters finding it difficult due to the use of methods while teaching nowadays, in most of the Western countries they follow modern ways of teaching along with different techniques to uphold their focus in education, therefore, management should include animations, effects to make the class more interesting. Moreover, each class consist of a huge number of pupils which results in a lack of attention. In addition to this, working hours of the schools nowadays have been increased, it's the main reason behind the youngster's lack of interest in education and lack of sports or any extracurricular activities which make them boredom and inactive.\n\nOn the other hand, along with the studies Management should also focus on the health of the younger children. They should build up some playgrounds and activity grounds where kids can have some relax and sporty time there. Nevertheless, the authorities should arrange the students and teachers meetings every weekend by that they can resolve their problems. Moreover, they should keep separate classes for the smarter students so that the lecturer can give full time to one who is lacking behind.\n\nIn conclusion, the way of education may vary from time to time still it is the responsibility of the organisation to maintain the system by initiating various ways of educating. The students should also discuss difficulties with the management. Counselling should be initiated between parents, students and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are pros to using the driverless car but there are also cons.As a driver you always want to catch up on sleep before driving long distances .With this car you can get some rest inside but dont fall asleep . This car is not that highly trained to keep us as humans safe .\n\nDriverless cars in my eyes are very cool but they are also dangerous and unsafe .I think the inventors of this car has give enough evidence or has shown proof that this car can keep us out of harms way .\n\nMost people go off of fantasy dreams and stuff but at the end of the day you have to face reality , what if the car has mechanical failures while its driving by itself then who would be responsible for it if it crashed and there were injuries ? The drivers!?\n\nAfter thinking this over numerous of times i would still deem this car as unsafe for the peoples sake.I think it is just to risky to even try when we are talking about peoples life here .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine never teaching your kid how to drive. Well thats what would happen if driverless cars happen. That memory stays with a person till they die. Ask anybody about how they learned how to drive they can tell you like it was yesterday. There shouldnt be driverless cars because its too dangerous and elimates many things.\n\nWhen you learn how to drive its a fun and exciting thing. You gain memories from that such as the mishaps you have while learning. You bond closer with whoever is teaching you. It even motivates you to do good in school and save money because once you learn you want your own. Any person can tell you off top when and how they learned how drive because its a ever lasting memory. By having driverless cars it takes away that.\n\nWhere is the fun in driving if its doing it for you? As a teenager you look forward to first getting a car and driving around with your friends. Its a time where you can bond and be social. By having driverless cars its the fun out it , think about what is fun about sitting behind a wheel while it drives itself?\n\nDriverless cars create alot of danger also. Even today when drivers are more alert ever , there are millions of people who die in car crashes every year. Imagine the number of people who will die because people are not aware while the car is driving its self. Its in human nature for people to get a certain comfort level while doing something. Thousands of people on the road driving unalert and comfortable is not a safe thing.\n\nBy having driverless car it takes out alot business also. There's million of kids who learn how to drive thru drivers ed. An average drivers ed course cost around three hundred dollars. Thats millions of dollars thats get thrown out the window if driverless cars become a thing. Thousands of people will lose there jobs because of driverless cars.\n\nAny way you look at it driverless cars doesnt benifit anyone but the people making them. Anything that puts people in harm and ruin businesses is not good for society. People driving around behindn the wheel on there phone while thier car drives itself is not a good idea for the society. At the end of the day driverless cars are too dangerous and elimate many important things we care about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nI think we should keep our Electoral College because its fair if we get to choose our president and he or she wins then he or she should be president. Some people should consider themselves lucky because of what happened in 2000 with that fiasco and it was the biggest election crisis in a century. Even though there is 270 votes required to vote for the president, whats fun about that is because there be more votes and atleast people participate in them. Choosing our president is best because when your voting for the president your voting for state electors. Also, it gives chances for people that want to be president or senator. Electoral college is not a place its a process that it lets people choose who they want in the white house. I think people should start taking things seriously because they might think its a joke but its real serious to other people. Under the 23rd Amendent of the constitution,\"the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for the purpose of the Electoral College.\" After the presidential election,our governor prepares a \"certificate of ascertainment\" listing all the people who ran for president. It also gives them a chance to show and see who would do more for our country,like for example when they do their campaign commercials and what i look at is who does the best. Thats what i think about if it should be changed or not. Thank you for reading my letter and i hope my letter changes your mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One obstacle builders faced havin dirigibles hanging heavy populated area extremely dangerous May german s dirigible destroyed fire another obstacle illegal blimps flying low heavy populaded areas So Al Smith let go plan", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For my understanding on trying to find people emotions out can be really difficult. Im sure teachers also have a troubled time figureing out if there students are enjoying the class or if there bored and not learning anything. a computer to detect if someone is sad,angry bored or just upset could help alot of people out.\n\nWhenever a teenager is boerd at school they seem to find other things to do to get the mind busy. so they zone off and dont listen to the teacher, now just imagine a computer to detect that and the teacher would know. The teacher could use different ways to teach the class in more active or fun ways. Or just maybe a student of teacher is going through a hard time and the students or anyone starts to give that someone a hard time. To be able to detect that and let the others know not to gie them such a hard time wold be best.\n\nThere could always be a downside to this computer everything has a downside to it. Just what do you think would happen if the computer was a tadbit wrong or what if the computer got in the wrong hands. Of course this object could help alot of people out with alot of different things, like could it detect the emotion of other animals such as dogs? they said the computer detects the emotions by using your facial muscles, would it still work on identical twins with the exact samefacial expression but different emotions.\n\nBut for my conclusion with being able to use the emotion detector in a classroom is pro. the reason i chose pro is because i see better things happening for the teacher and the student if he/she was able to use it with there students to help one another way better. so I beilve we should be able to use this object with a classroom and plenty more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" it talks about the development of cars that can drive themselves. The article talks about hoe companies are working on cars who can completely drive on their own with no human assistance. I am against the development of these cars. I am against it because how can you have a car that needs no human assitance, I think it would be a safety issue, and laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.\n\nHow can you have a car that needs no human assistance at all? Even the smart cars that we have today still need human assistance. Firstly, the cars tha we have today still have to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. The smart cars can't not navigate through traffic such as, work zones and accidents. Secondly, in the article it says, \" Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" I agree with that, who would? The whole point of having a driverless car is to not have to drive and manufacturers are no where clsoe to that kind of car. Lastly, the cars that we have developed now can only accelerate, steer, and brake themselves. The cars now have ways to notify the human when the road ahead requires human skills. The manufacturers are not close to developing a car that can drive itself because as of right now all of them stil need a lot of human assistance. They can't really do much by themselves.\n\nI think that driverless cars would be a big safety issue. I do not think that a computer is as alret as a human. In the article it talks baout how driverless cars are a big safty concern. Firstly, what would happen if there was an accident and the computer was the one driving? Would it be thr drivers fault or the computers? Secondly, if something ever went wrong and there was an accident and someone was hurt who is at fault? is the driver or the manufacturer at fault? Lastly, what if the computer is controlling the car and it doesn't see something because it isn't as alert as a human? If the computer hit soemthing would the human's insurance cover it? This is why i think driverless cars would be a safety issue.\n\nLaws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. Firstly, in the article it says that lawmakers have agreed that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. This means that they think safety is achieved when human drivers are the ones driving and not a computer. Secondly, some states are already against driverless cars and no one has even onvented one yet. In California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia it is illegal to even test drive computer driven cars. Lastly, in the article it says that presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. This means that the laws are based on human drivers are more alert and safer than a computer.\n\nThis shows why I am against the development of driverless cars. Driverless cars need human assistance, they are a safety issue, and laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers and pedestrians safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientist Rafael, There's no way it was created by aliens, I think it was just a natural landform because on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, Anyway thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all, So Scientist Rafael that's proof, that it can't be created by aliens and it's a natural landform, well that's one of the evidence.\n\nAlso, in Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo, So I think it'similar, the picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\"\n\nFrom 1976 to 2001, the images changed into a human face formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" That doesn't mean it was created by aliens and besides, we didn't find no ancient civilization on Mars. I think it was a natural landform and that's all the evidence that i have for you, \"Scientist Rafael.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor Computers becoming prevalent Peolple spending much time computers instead activities effect beneficial society Because computers people lacked exercise missed enjoying nature parts world forgotten interacting family friends Computers used moderation place important events lives First computer users receive significantly less exercise use computers According survey done computer users reported exercised least every week In contrast noncomputer users nonfrequent computer users reported exrcised least every week Can one imagine would like everyone loyal computer user Nearly everybody would overweight lethaigic lack sleep due hours computer unworldly Getting exercise essential part everyone s life lacking could deleterious one s health Hopping computer instead getting exercise would make healthier fit country Not computers deprive people getting exercise also prevent people enjoying nature parts world By traveling unfamiliar places world one able experience learn cultures Going internet decent way learn places actually feeling ambiance environment foreign place allows much profound understanding another place For example I went vacation I learned differences traditions culture I saw separation poor rich I lookes humble sharks along river portentous eregant edifices scraping sky It experince I could encounter computer People able enjoy wonders differences world small screen computer screen one s eyes Lastly computers inhibit people interacting family friends From personal experiences I tend ignore friends family Speaking playing generally socializing others critical part everyone s life Without basic necessity people happy In summary computers used excess This sort use could read people getting less exercise fully experiencing world closs interaction friends family To make better country nation people make effort reduce computer use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever mood stop laughing matter ca nt stop That problem good friend I together Most time talking random things find hilarious Luckily teachers two classes together In classes sit next though So teachers nt luck much Just day allowed move seats around new spot class The girl sitting next moved sat next Now nt like girl much I spoke said PERSON sit next grabbed stuff unusually quick manner came sat next The funny thing sat said CAPS saved life For reason I started laughing nonstop We could nt control To honest nt funny I guess way said I saved life I m glad sits next With would boring In sit next good time Our class end day ready go home I sit next taking notes I pass notes backandforth She I talk everything predicaments teenage girl runs high school boys parents I pretty much tell everything s good friend Over years I become closer closer friends Last year I least three four classes together So classes together previously I become acquainted open things I tell everything tells everything One reason I think ve become good friends I find things funny We interests thingsShe good friend I m glad s friend Laughter shortest distance two people I going definitely agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When architects first looked creating safe landing zone dirigibles looked several key factors The Empire State building feet tall heights winds become powerful would blow diridible place This proved paragraph The Goodyear blimp called Columbia attempted reach mooring mast although skillful pilot could get Steel framed balloon close enough dock Spire Another factor architects weigh equation diridibles filled hydrogen flammable If zeppelin catch Fire would massive ball fire coming streets downtown New York The Hindenburg gave us example needed see change mind wanting massive flammable balloon hoovering streets New York City", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People arent using cars as much because it is not worth their time. It is easier for them to just jump on a bus or walk or bike to their destination. Places that dont use cars are having a better life because people are not as stressed and there isnt nearly as much pollution. \"When i had a car i was always tense. im much happier this way\". other countries are getting in on the \"car reduced\" comunities.\n\nIn Paris they ban driving because of all the smog in the city. they would fine people who did drive on those days and depending on how people reacted their cars would be impounded. people were just using public transportation and by the next few days the smog was gone.\n\nIn bogota, colombia they have had a \"car free\" day for the past three years where people walk to work or school or take public trasportation. \"its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\". and for the first time two other colombian cities, cali and valledupar, joined the event. many people have gone car free for a long time instead of just a day. they just use bikes or public transportation because it is easier and less stressful.\n\nIn the united states people have been driving less adn getting fewer licenses as the years progress. the number of miles driven per person in 2013 was the same as it was in 1995. the renewal of center cities has made the suburbs less appealing and has drawn empty nesters back in. likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. in new york there is a bike sharing program that is really taking off. and the tolls on bridges and tunnels are making people drive less and less. there has also been a large drop in percentage of sixteen to thirtynine year olds getting licenses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives author creates mood story author writing certain way One way author writing empathetacly In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship paragraph A second way author sets mood sneaking deeper thoughts within paragraphs parentheses For example paragraph My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful A third way author sets mood speaking fondly parents I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done paragraph The overall mood author sets memoir kind sweet thankful mood Narciso Rodriguez thankful many thing family culture living america", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram describes how carbonated drinks are made from raw materials to finished goods before being sent to the market. Overall, there are five stages in the production process of this type of beverage.\nAt first, the raw water should be cleaned through a filter and blended with a water softener and chemicals before going through to the next stage. After that, it will be driven to the electric heaters and a cooling pipe to evaporate at a certain heat level with additional carbon dioxide.\nFurthermore, the water will be sent to the mixing tank, which will be blended with three different materials containing colouring, syrup, and flavour. At the end of the mixing process, the water is already transformed into carbonated drinks, and they will go through the last filter before getting into bottles or cans to be wrapped. Finally, the carbonated drinks are ready to deliver to the supermarket.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did not support the idea that, \"studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\" very well. They provided more facts than supporting the idea to study Venus. The author uses a lot of references to scientists, astronomers, researchers, or NASA for the study of Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 8, the author did say that \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value\" but they did not provide many facts as to why they think that in earlier paragraphs. Paragraphs 1,2,3,4,5,6, and 7, are all based on information provided by either NASA, astronomers, researchers, and scientists, or facts from previous events but it doesn't support any particular idea. In paragraph 4 the author asks, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" and they answer with, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" That shows that they didn't present any idea or claim referring to the study of Venus or if it is a worthy pursuit to study the planet despite the dangers.\n\nThe author did not support the idea of studying Venus very well. Their article provided more information about the planet rather than supporting a particular claim or idea. Their question in the beginning of paragraph 4 shows that they weren't supporting a claim, they were providing information for the question. It also shows that no idea about studying Venus being a worthy pursuit was presented until the end of the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, State Senator\n\nHi, State Senator my name is PROPER_NAME and i think you should stay with Electoral College because the Electoral college is a process not a place. Stated in paragraph 1 it says \" The founding fathers establsihed it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualifed citzens\". So in my owns i think what was stated means it should be a tradition and it should stay as a tradition in the American culture. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. With that being said that is just like saying you are choosing a president by the most popular votes. In paragraph ten it says under the electoral college system , voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.To me in the passage the bset argument for you to keep the Electoral College is the electoral college is less work than having everyone vote and round it off for a president to be elected. But i'm not going to waste any of your time anymore just know Electoral College would be the best choice for you to choose\n\nFrom:PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez creates calm grateful mood beginning end memior First describes selflessness parents Narciso explains start lives entirely CAPS left Cuba United States He understands left benefit appreciates Also Narciso thankful although parents moved United States kept Cuban traditions In Narciso s three room apartment Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen CAPS Lastly Narciso expresses appreciation strengthens mood defining home He claims never forget parents turned simple house home CAPS For Narciso grateful appreciation creates calm inviting grateful mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Immigration has been all the rage in today’s world. Opinions differ from whether or not children will be benefitted when their parents relocate to another country for work. These views will be discussed in the essay below, followed by my personal perspective at the end. \n\nThere are several reasons why people think it is advantageous for children to move with their parents to other countries. First, living in different places allows the kids to expose to various cultures and lifestyles, thus broadening their horizons and leading them to be more flexible and adaptable. To be precise, those who have lived in any Southeast Asian countries like Indonesia before would probably be able to walk confidently in streets in Vietnam due to the similarities in the transportation of the two countries. Second, relocating to a new country, especially developed countries, offers young children an opportunity to learn a new language and access to better education. This might bring the prospect of a better life for them in the future since education plays an important role in everyone’s life, particularly children. This is why many people from the Middle East have immigrated to Europe and United States recently.\n\nOn the other hand, opponents believe that this move could do more harm than good for youngsters. Regardless of how good the education the kids are going to have, they might struggle to fit in new schools and to make new friends, especially with the language barrier. Additionally, there is a likelihood for them to face social discrimination, which is unavoidable. For instance, a Muslim student might be mistreated in the Western country that he or she has just moved to due to his or her religion, or a student with a different skin colour could become a victim of some school’s gangs. These issues would leave emotional and psychological pains in children and discourage them to emerge into the new environment, preventing them from moving forward in later periods in their lives. \n\nIn my opinion, there are both benefits and drawbacks of immigration. Parents should be aware of these and come up with potential solutions to help their offspring overcome initial difficulties and enjoy their lives to the fullest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many today have come to the conclusion that leadership talent is innate, rather than cultivated through time and experience. In my point of view, I believe that leadership skills can be learned through hard practicing and training.\r\n\r\nThe salient argument is that there are naturally born leaders who point out the character of a person is a fixed quantity. A good example is Barack Obama who has a lot of good qualities such as an eloquent, stately, physically imposing presence and perfectly walks in a line between warmth and firmness. Researchers have long identified common natural characteristics of leadership such as height, a deep voice, a strong chin and natural grace of movement. These can not be developed to a significant degree and therefore support the claim that leadership is intrinsic.\r\n\r\nHowever, great leadership is more deliberate than spontaneous. Almost of good leaders experienced a long time of training and practicing. They need to improve their soft skills such as communication skills, management skills, solving problems skills,.. Or challenge themselves by some field skills. For example, if you want to lead an accounting team, you need to know a large amount of accounting knowledge and some skills related to solving problems in the field.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though the endpoint may obscure the origins, all leaders should accumulate more knowledge, especially in their field, and also learned more soft skills in order to lead and guide people in the right way. From that, a good leader will make a better future and create more jobs for global market.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He support the idea very well first he put the information of the planet and how look like. The planet hase a nickname and is ''Evening Star''. He put where the located in the solar sistem.'' In our solar system Venus is the secound planet frome our sun''.\n\nHe put frome thge Earth is very dificult to see.''Earth it has proved a very challenging place to examine more cossely. So he put a very good infromation on the two firsts pargraph.\n\nOn the second pargraph he put a very good information like in the pargraph say.''Often referred to as Eath's ''twin'' Venus is the closeest planet to Earth in terms of density and size , and occasionally the closest in distance. And he put too others planets like in the pargraph says.''Earth ,Venus and Mars our others planetary neighbor orbit the sun at differents speed.'' He talk about how close are each other and how the chanche sides.\n\nOn the 3 pargraph have very good in formation they talk about the atmosphere like in the pargraph say.'' A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket Venus''. And they talk about the temperature on the planet's surface.and the other pargraph they talk about how lok like like if they have rocks or why they don go in viset the planet and how the future affect the planet.\n\nThe others pargraph talk about the NASA are talking about if is posible if one peros can go to Venus and que investigue aserca del planeta but they say on the atmosphare is relly cool they are 170 degrees sso is rally fresh but he rally put information rally important and then can othhers estudents puedan saver de esas cosas.\n\nSo he put rally goood information in old pargraphs like how is the planet wich are the nickname and whith how are neighbor and then how the planets chanche and how the planet are very cool and the atmosphare are very cool. So he put very good information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that arranging worldwide sports is a nice idea for the country and it will give some benefits, while others suggest that is an awful idea. From my point of view, It is a brilliant idea for the country and for citizens when they host and are owners of international sports events.\nOn the one hand, arranging a sport event is always hugely expensive. In democratic societies there is always a doubt if these expenditures are appropriate or not. Sometimes it could be thought-provoking about spending this money on charity, medical insurance or to reduce juvenile delinquency for example. Also, there are people who are not fans or spectators, for them this kind of expensive event is not interesting. For instance, in Russia it is a fact that the winter olympic games in 2014 had a lot of controversial ideas about whether it was really necessary or not. I remember that in that time were a lot of discussion in TV and in the internet,\nOn the other hand, when your country hosts an international sport event it is a nice chance to show how rich your country is and express solidarity in your society. It is a fact that events like this, for example \"eurovision\" or \"olympic games\" and other worldwide events help to create an interconnection between countries and cultures. During these events we can see what happens in other countries and how people there live. For example, in 2018 Russia hosted a world football games, and this event invited a large number of foreign specialists and investors.\nIn conclusion, although hosting international sport events could be very expensive, the benefits which it could give to the citizens and to government institutes overload any disadvantages. I believe that each country should try to do it more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day friend line We ran line wait half hour till got But good thing patient After ride got line WOW What line I think line least hour half got But know really patient The", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the autor suggests that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and I agree there are many reasons why I agree and ill be telling you some. The reason why i agree to the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is because like it said in the text on paragraph 2 \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size\" this means tht its like earth so we could possibly breath up there on Venus and start building stuff up there. Another reason its a worthy pursuit is that NASA is working on it already and its probably kinda close to being done so we may as well just complete it since they spent awhile on it it says this in paragraph 7 \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. In conclusion yes i agree to when the Author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. On the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behavior. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. In conclusion, although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay author added many features could picked cyclist jouney One feature water supply running short This shows exactly hot much drinking Another feature would rusty old pipe bad water This shows town abanodoned years water supply wasnt drinking The essay shows hand hot weather lack supplies sense direction", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supportss the idea that studing venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets\n\nvenus.\n\nThe idea that studing venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger each previous mission was unmanned and for good reson since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidatiing endeavors\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus . But however peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safetly far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becaus most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rending standard forms of photography and videography inflective.\n\nThe idea that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because it would be cool for the people who study planet to find out what they coud do to this planes despite the danger but you wont know what they are in till you try to get there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We shouldn't have Electoral College for many reasons but a few main ones. First off it isn't fiar to voters, secondly it may cause riots, and finally they are basis.\n\nIf we continue Electoral College it is not going to give the votes a chance to be seen because the college can vote but the Electoral College is the main vote the country sees because the country always miss counts and have a smaller number if they miss count the percentage of votes can be impacted a lot more and with the 60 percent rule. and yes the College style of votining is used a lot today if we use one vote per state you see how you state votes and dont have to demand a recount because it was already counted for at state level and isn't needed at national level so we wont have a hard time counting everything.\n\nThis method of voting useing a few people to vote for\n\n\"our\n\n\" president is not the smartest thing the country has done and they prove to be wrong every four years becuse the amoust of prosteting will go up the more and more we make these mistakes when we lose votes or demand a recount 10 times or let the college vote for the people in the united states. So witch is it for the Constitution, are we for Amendment 1 with the freedom of speech and press so we can choose our own president or is it that we will all go for the 23rd amendment and go to letting the few people choose our countries fait for the next four years butr then equals the fait for as long as the United States is around free from other countries.\n\nFinally our system of Electoral College is very basis toward whom ever gives them more money to their state or campains more there because we all know that the year leading up to the elections are just a popularity contest and they just are like trying to get prom king/queen everyone promises a vote if you give them something in return, it just happens to be the people who can run for president are very wealthy and can afford to give up a small fortune for a for sure vote to them. But on the other hand if you gave me money like that i would vote for you if i liked it or not and these Electoral College is pressured a little to vote for the person everyone arounf them wants.\n\nIf we got rid of the Electoral College system of voting i believe that we would have a better economy and and the voting system would give more varried results so we can get a more acurate way because it would be easy to get rid of a system of voting but very hard to bring one in to being a thing and we can't easly do that for the reasons of there is already one and that the hoops to jump though for D.C. to pass it. therefor i am aginst haviong the Electoral College and bring use Popular Vote for all states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cycling good sport people cycling shape Also strong calve muscles I think also dangerous well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Germany, residetns have given up on cars. Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\", except the main throughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge are only two places to park.\n\n70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and the 57 percent sold a car to move there. Some say they feel happier now than before when they had a car. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. Greenhouse gas emissions are reduced drastically. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the U.S.\n\nIn the new approach to make cities denser, and better for walking stores are being placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. In teh U.S., the Enviornmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities, and legistors are starting to act, if cautiously. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other tansport.\n\nAfter days of near record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters, an international news agency headquartered in London; 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nPresident Obama's goal to curb the U.S.'s greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week. Recent astudies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So, you think the face on mars was created by aliens? While it's an intresting idea to entertain, it just doesn't match with the facts. Which is shown in how the \"face\" resembles buttes on earth, has been photographed at incredable detail,\n\nand is just an optical illusion.\n\nFirst off, the \"face\" isn't really even a face, its a messa thats' shawdows happen to fall so that the apperence of sunken eyes and a mouth appear. Secondly, NASA photographed the \"face\" at 1.56 meters per pixel (good enough to see a small shack on the surface,) and you know what they found, nothing. No strange symbols, pyramids, or UFOs. And finaly, it really resembles landforms on earth, one scientist named Gavin said \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" the Middle Butte being a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa, about the same height as the Face on Mars. Also, if you think NASA is hideing evidence, they've no reason to. In fact an ancient civilization on Mars would proably get them more funding to check it out, thus hideing evidence of it would be just plain silly.\n\nSo in conclusion, the \"face\" on Mars is anything but, and (sadly) their were no aliens sculpting faces on Mars. All the facts lean towards the face being nothing but a mesa. However you look at it the idea of aliens sculpting it just doesnt make sense therefore while the idea is appealing, I would chalk this up as nothing but an optical illusion on a mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "story condition problem often effected mood cyclist For example sign said Rough road ahead Do exceed posted speed limit time saw snake scared eased past trying keep balance dehydrated The dry hot climate began become problem cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are about to be the future. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, has a dreams of a future with public transportation system where driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. In my opinion, driverless cars are going to be brilliant. I believe just like Sergey that driverless cars can change the world. And google is making sure it is all safe.\n\nThe cars that Sergey imagines would use half the fuel of today's taxis. That is absolutly great way to save money on gas. The driverless cars would offer way more flexibility than any bus.\n\nGoogle has already had cars that could drive independently since 2009. Those cars have passed many tests for saftey. The cars have also driven more than half a million miles without crashing. Google's cars still alert the driver to take over when pulling in or out of a driveway, and dealing with complicated traffic. For example passing an accident or going through roadwork.\n\nTo improve these smart cars they needed a whole lot of senors. The car google modified was a Toyota Prius. Google put postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor. The most important piece google put on the car was the spinning sensor on the roof. The spinning sensor on the roof uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surrondings. All these senors google is using is necessary for the driverless car to mimic a human and the wheel.\n\nSensors were invented in the 1980's. Sensors have improved so much they can detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. Sensors can get information too cause the car to apply braked on individual wheels. Sensors can also reduce the power from the engine, which is far more that was a human can do from the wheel. Even with all the things sensors can do they still will keep improving.\n\nIn 2013, BMW developed the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". The car will be able to handle speeds up tp 25 mile per hour, but the senors from \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" will make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. The car can steer, brake, and accelerate themselves. But are designed to notify the drive when the road ahead requires human skills. For example going through a work zone or arounf accidents. The human must stay alert and be ready to take over when needed. GM has also developed the driver seat to viberate when they are in danger. Other options they have is flashing lights on the windsheild. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch the drivers remaining focused on the road.\n\nGoogle is making sure all the driverless cars will be on the safe side. I believe driverless cars will change the world. In my opinion driverless cars need to be created for the future. If all the tests goes right there should be no problem. Sergey Brin has a dream for public transportation to be better. Driverless cars are about to be the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "he had did good about ut he did good going to venas would be good so most people would want to take a trip there it is way to hot to be up there by your self as well as if your with ah group of people as well but the good thing about it is that you can have an exsperance to do somthing like you better do it it would not be good to miss out the had sent a rovor up there to see how things are going to work out as well also people are want to go there but yet it is 300 times more hot then earth its self as well..that is not many people have really been up to venus..also venus is a very rockey place also you can find metels there as well and last but not least yes to get to venus is a long space traval to get there it takes up to 6 years as well. and mars earth venus are all lined up right next to each other as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" the author does suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author gives out evidence in the article that proves his point of why it could be dangerous for someone to pursuit the exploration of Venus. When wanting to find out something beyond our expectations we tend to go out of our way or to extreme measures to see what really is out there. We all have so much curiosity and we want to know things. The author explains in great detail from his knowledge how Venus looks and what's on its surface. Even with his explanations of what's on Venus it isn't enough for researches because they want to know in farther detail of what there it.\n\nFor the first piece of evidence that the author provides for Venus being dangerous to go to or explore is in paragraph 3. In paragraph 3 it says, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on our planet. There is one point on how the temperature is really dangerous for us and we couldn't handle how it is. A second piece of evidence is found in paragraph 7 as well. In paragraph 7 it says,\" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" This is just another example how dangerous it could be visiting Venus. Here om Earth depending on where you are located you wouldn't be used to errupting volcanoes because Earth is pretty peaceful and that would call for corruption. It'd be dangerous to escape as well if not knowing what to do. Both pieces of evidence came from same paragraph probably being a section of explaining why it's dangerous to go to Venus without some sort of idea or plan.\n\nIn conclusion, the author doesa good job explaining and presenting his idea of Venus having dangers. His evidence was clear and had specific details of each danger. Starting off with the temperature of Venus and how it was \"90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\" was really good evidence. As well as when the author talked about what was on Venus. Explaining any type of event that could occur while being on Venus could be dangerous as well. He explained the corruption of an erupting volcanoe, powerful earthquakes and frequent lighning strikes. In the end, the author did give good points on how it is worthy to visit Venus and do research on it but it does have its dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the Earth's twin\n\nIn this esay we star evaluating how well the author of the book \"the challenge of exploring venus supports his ideas about Venus and what are the similary between Venus and the Earth and all the diference .\n\nFirst of all the author star explaing what is Venus , Venus is one ofthe bightest points of light in the night sky also venus is the second planet in the solar system, venus is calle the Earth's twin because Venus is the closet planet to the Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the Earth and Venus are closest in distance too and sometimes we are closert to mars .\n\nSecondly the author say what are the reputation of Venus ,Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for human to study because the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and the apacecraft survived the landing for more than a few houres also the clouds of higly corrosive sulfuric acid in venu's atmosphere , the plane's furface temperatures average over 800 degrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater than what we experince on our own planet and Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in our solar system,these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\n\nLastly the author trie to tell how venus is a good planet to study because long ago venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth also the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys , mountains and crates also Venus geology and weather present additional impediments like eruptiones, power earthquakes and freqeunt lightning strike to probes seeking to land onits surface , but the author contnue , whit the idea of\n\nVenus can sometimes be our nearest option for a plnetry visit.\n\nIn conclucion Venus are in some poins so sililar to the Earth bust sometimes are the complety opposite of the Earth and the author have very good informacion to supports his ideas of study and vist the\n\nEarth's twin .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is important for children and normally, students obtain education mainly from school. However, some parents choose to teach their kids themselves instead of send them to school. And the number of parents who teach children at home is increasing nowadays. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this approach and settle with a conclusion.\n\nTo begin with, one of multiple merits of teaching children at home is that parents can protect their children from bully. School violence is a common phenomenon in school and enormous students have been bullied by others. Impact of bully leaves adverse influence on development of personality. However, parents are able to eschew this miserable encountment of their children by teaching them at home. Moreover, by teaching children themselves, parents have chance to impose influence on their kids. If children study in school, they will be expose more on behavior from calssmates than parents. They may immitate bad behaviors from peers. Nevertheless, teaching at home would avoid this problem and children will learn to behave well from parents.\n\nHowever, teaching children at home has demerits. One disadvantage is teaching requires enormous time. As a matter of fact, parents do not have sufficient time to teach their children, because they have to work. Parents may find themselves in a dilemma that they neither have enouth time to teach children nor have adequate time spare for work. Another disadvantage is that parents merely acquired limited knowledge and they cannot provide comprehensive subjects for their kids. Teaching necessitates skillful teaching method, which only belongs to qualified teachers. Parents can learn by themselves; but they probably find it difficult to teach students and assure that students also receive the same accurate information.\n\nTo recapitulate, teaching children at home has advantages and disadvantages. However, this essay deems that the disadvantages overweigh advantages. Parents had better send their children to school teached by qualified teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently,many people over the world are focusing more on learning about the past of houses or flats they live in. Many reasons and facts are leading to this. Fortunately, they are several ways by which they can know what they want.\r\n\r\nThere are various causes contributing to this Trend. one of these main reasons is to ensure the safety of the building materials. To illustrate, some materials might be affected by time (for example shrinking). Added to this, to know the nature of the building area. For example, some flats were built above agricultural land make this land be endangered in the future. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, thankfully several ways can help reach the history of these buildings and houses. The easiest one is asking the previous owner or the engineer who built it. In case the flat is built by the government, the person can return the documents. Searching on the Internet and asking the neighbours could also be a way of achieving this. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, to make sure from the materials and areas are the main factors behind people want to find out about their places. And the good news is there are various manners to find this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph bY author shows Saeng giving found hobby look forward An example the winter hibiscus ground Saeng tamped soil around overhead lock Canada geese flew by That author cludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article is write about the exploring of the Venus. Venus, here is a nick name call \"Evening Star\", it is the brightest point of light when you see on the surface. In the solar sysyem, Venus is the second planet from the sun, and it is the cosest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and lot of thing too, its referred like \"twin\" as Earth.\n\nIn space terms, there is no singal spaceship has touched down Venus in more than three decades, because of the each previous misson was unmanned and since no spacecraft survived the landing for a few time. there is one reason is because of the Venus atmosphere is thick and it almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, so that would be a challenging to the human.\n\nAlso, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in solar system with out Sun. Either the Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking on Venus surface. Solar power not would be plentiful. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nThe challenge of meet to Venus has value, because of the human curiosity will likely lead human into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be danger and doubts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need. I thought it might be boring and a lot of work on board herding animals but its alot more to it than that. Its a wonderful job becuase you do not only get paid but you get to go sight seeing, see places you never been before, work with animals, and lets not forget help people. This job changed my life within a second of being on board i use to work at a boring old bank and grocery store now I know I made the right chose choosing to work here I knew I wouldnt have a chance like this again so I took it with out a doubt. Mayby you might want to travel the world and see new amazing places and see ancient palaces ike Geece and at the same time help people in need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happiness second paragraph talks parents made simple home traditional Cuban home heart kitchen Also Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative Also parents sacrifice lot get point This mood memoir happiness I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper like children stay computer time I would nt children even adults wo nt spend time family kids unhealthy lastly get addicted using computer computer language Please keep reading hear ideas To begin children even adults wo nt spend much time family For example people stay computer day wo nt even worry kids remember I read facebook guy game playing nt answer phone tould son got hit car Now news lpaper wa nt son going man s son went I nt think Also kids adults unhealthy exercise A study shown people use internet nt exercise work suffering obeasity cousin always computer doctor tould minimize muchtime hes obeast He weighs pounds due computer time So tell newspaper want kids abease Lastly nowadays kids obsessed computer computer people use computer use computer language school And put internet phone go myspace facebook ect Now newpaper happen wrote computer language article woud nt get fired In conclusion hope took letter concideration kids adults unhealthy kiods obsessed computer lastly wo nt spendtime family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chance that computers would have the ability to fully communicate and understand humans or understansing facial expression has both positive and negative effects in different situations. Some people are unable to transfer their thoughts into the right words to explain how theyre feeling then it would be a positive effect on letting people know how to communicate with them in a way that suits their mood. There are some people that maybe dont want to be read and evaluated by a computer though this is where it would be a negative effect because people should have their own privacy and if they want to look happy but actually be sad then thats just them as who they are and how they handle their feelings how could an evaluation fully understand whats going on the inside someones brain anyway, i dont think peoples privacy should be taken from this new technology. So my claim on this article would be against the new technology to read students' emotional expression im not for it just because in the article it says how their facial expressions are that is how theyre feeling when possibly there's something completly opposite going on in their mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers very effectively by discussing the dangers of Venus, comparing Earth and Venus, and bringing up innovative methods of getting past the obstacle of Venus' harsh conditions.\n\nThe author brings up the dangers of exploration on Venus throughout the article.\n\nIn Paragraph 3, he says, \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of out oceans and would liquefy many metals.\"\n\nIt is explained that the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, the temperature is over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the geology and weather make up a dangerous environment.\n\nThe author's use of these specific details and descriptions informs the reader how dangerous Venus really is, and sparks their curiousity for the benefits of exploring Venus.\n\nThe author explains in Paragraph 4 that Venus was likely much like how Earth is now, with oceans and a supportive environment for the growth of living things.\n\nToday, Venus is rocky, with similar geographical features to Earth.\n\nBy providing the reader with this information, the author helps build the understanding of the importance of Venus to humans on Earth.\n\nThis new insight teaches readers that because Venus is so similar to Earth, it would be important to gain more knowledge on it.\n\nIn Paragraph 5, the author talks about NASA's solution of using a floating vehicle to study Venus in survivable conditions.\n\nHe later encourages people to view the risks as challenges that inspire innovation.\n\nInnovation leads to improved technology and better, more effective ways to gain knowledge on Venus.\n\nOne example of this innovation is \"simplified electronics made of silicon carbide.\"\n\nAnother example is more work on mechanical computers, that \"can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"\n\nThe author supported his idea that studying Venus is worth the risks by explaining all of the ways that\n\nscientists are working to improve methods of exploring Venus.\n\nThis support is useful because it can inspire the reader and provide important information.\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author effectively supports his idea that studying Venus is worth the danger by listing those dangers, explaining benefits of gaining insight on Venus, and discussing the ways scientists are currently working towards better exploring technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons why \"Smart cars\" that drive themselves can be useful and many reasons why they would be a bad decision. Some good reasons include safety for drunk driving, driving for people with disabilities and phone usage safety. A bad reason is that there will be no one to blame if a car crashes because it was not a person driving. Also there are too many changes and money problems that will occur with the construction of the \"Smart Car.\n\nMany people who drink and drive get caught in the act or end up harming someone which is why a smart car could be useful. There are only certain times when the actual person has to drive and when you're drunk you are incapable of doing so.\" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves...\" This could help keep people safe from drunk drivers or even adults or children incapable of driving. Many people love to text and drive wich can eventually cause an accident and a car that could drive itself while you were texting would be much safer. Even if there aren't cars that can fully drive themselves then maybe a little tweaking would help.\"...The in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" This is something that would bring accidents down to a low and safer amount.\n\nMany things keep us from having \"Smart Cars\" such as costs and in case of an accident, there is no one to blame. The cost of making the car plus roadways that work with it is much too expensive. There are many ways to do it otherwise but still none that are cost effective. \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Also, people don't believe that the smart car would help anything or make any difference and they don't want the trouble of an accident; there would be nothing or no one to blame.\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" It's way too risky to have the problem of and accident because of legal difficulties.\n\nMany people think the smart car is unnecessary and has a limited amount of uses. Maybe a day will come when smart cars are in use but not any time soon. Hopefully a change in mind will come for many people and the smart car will finally be manufactured.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello my name is Luke Bomberger and I am apart of the Seagoing Cowboys. I joined the orginazation for two reasons. Number one, because it interesting to see a bunch of different sights. Number two is that I get to help people who were affected by war. I was eighteen when I joined the orginization, so that meant I could be drafted for war at any time. This made me feel me feel worried, but then I went to Greece and I every thing was okay. Now enough about me I am here to encourage you to join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nYou should join the program. It feels great to know that you are making a difference in somebody's life. Plus, like I said there are a lot of cool sights to see. I have been to nine different places. I saw something amazing in each place out of the nine. You can try all new different things. Like new food, new music, new sports, new almost everything. Now I know what you are thinking that is crazy how am I supposted to adjust to something so quickly that is impossible, but trust me it is not as hard as is sounds. If your still not hooked (which I don't know why you wouldn't be) it can be a lot of fun. I know again it doesn't sound like it but when we arn't helping out we play baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, we read, and whittling. So I hope you decide to join.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of a student in a classroom is valuable because it can help teachers or even other students know when someone is struggling on a certian topic. When being able to tell if someone is struggling is important because teachers would be able to get the student extra help for them to understand the topic fully.\n\nLetting this technology into a average classroom would be very helpful for everyone. For students it would be able to see if the lesson needs to be slowed down or if the lesson should go by quicker for the best learning experience. Dr. Huang states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\"(Paragraph 6). One big problem in a classroom for the teacher is knowing if the student fully understands the topic because most don't ask quetiosn when they are confused but with Facial Action Coding, it would remove\n\nthat barrier and let teachers know how students are feeling. It not only tells the teacher if they are confused but also if their lesson is keeping the attention of her students or if her lesson is boring to most and she can adjust the lesson with that information. In the future the teacher might not have to change the lesson themselves because, \"Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\"(Paragraph 6). The new technology, Facial Action Coding, has the potential to adjust the lesson for the student in the future because sensing emotion is just the start for the new technology.\n\nSome people might debate the opposite saying that knowing the emotion of the students is not important for them to learn because its been the same for many generations. But knowing if someone is happy during school also transfers to the life outside of school. The article states,\"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\"(Paragraph 9). Being able to put a smile on a students face in the classroom even if it a fake smile helps real happiness come out and continue to stay throughout the day as long as they are enjoying the lesson.\n\nWith this technology students and teachers would be able to see which students are sad in the classroom to see if they are having personal problems or if they need help too. Most schools care about the well being of their students but some students are to scared to ask for help but by having Facial Action Coding teachers would be able to inform the student's parents or guardians that their is something wrong if the student has a sad expression the majority of the time. Being able to have this technology to identify this probelm would help get the student the help they need in or outside the classroom.\n\nIn conclusion, the good out weigh the bad when it comes to Facial Action Coding because having it in the classrooms becomes a valuable tool for many to use. It is a great tool for teachers to help create a happier and more enjoyable learning enviroment for the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One part if me thinks that we should have driverless cars but another part of me thinks that we shouldn't. What if something goes wrong with the driverless car or what if the car doesn;t go the way that you want it to go or what if you crash? Do you just blame it on the car like its the cars problem or is it the persons problem? What if it your car gets damaged badly can they fix the driverless car and will they have parts for it?\n\nI also idea because what if you have to call someone or text someone and its something important. I think they're also good for navigation. You could just tell the car where you want to go and it will take you there. It could probably cause less accidents because its ran by a computer and usually the people fault foir the accidents but what if the computer just stops working? Does that mean that the car just stops working?\n\nBefore they realise the car I think that they should have better technology first. The technology now is amazing but I don't think a computer can be smart enough to drive a car just yet. In the future I definaltyu think that they are going to have Google cars that drive themselves.That is my opinion on the driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information is presented in two pie charts which compare the amount of time, in percentage, that employees spent on six different activities in a country between 1958 and 2008.\nOverall, it can be clearly seen that while each activity that working adults did experienced a wide variety of changes, working and sleeping were the most and the second most popular categories in both years respectively. In addition, the most significant change in employees’ behavior was travelling to work.\nTurning to first main feature, working ranked first in activity that working adults spent their time on over the survey period, contributing to 33% in 1958 and 42% in 2008. Next, sleeping ranked second in the activity that employees did. In 1958 the amount of time that employees slept was an exact 32%, before decreasing slightly to a precise 25% in 2008.\nTurning to another main feature, with respect to going out, the popularity of this activity decreased noticeably from a modest 19% in 1958 to only 6% in 2008. Nevertheless, there was also an increase of 5% in relaxing at home. In 1958 only 8% of working adults spent their time on this activity. After that the popularity of this activity rose to a modest 13% in 2008. The last key point to note is travelling to work which rose fourfold from a precise 2% in 1958 to an exact 8% in 2008.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The passage explains that a computer that can recognize facial expressions could help students. The passage also explains how the FACS is a good source for finding different levels of emotions.The passage also explains how the FACS actually works and it can find the different expressions in your face. We all do these calculations everyday but with a computer this is more accurate and trustworthy.\n\nThis proccess begins by creating a 3-D model of a face, After it makes the 3D model it measurs all 44 major muscles in the 3D model. Then it detects emotions by measuring the different muscles in the facial structure.\n\nThe FACS can find many different emotions and levels of emotion. The Mona Lisa in this passage is \"83% happy, 9% distgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\" If this system can do this to wsuch a complex painting then it definenalty would work for other peoples paintings/Faces.\n\nIf students were to use this when they get frustrated or upset and then it could make the subject or work a bit more understandable. This system could help people all over the world. This system could be used in many different alternative schools for students that are more upset and frustrated with life so it can make things understanable for the kids that arent as smart as most.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine someone driving a car when they haven't slept more than a few hours. Now imagine them swerving to the side and into your car because they fell asleep. Driverless cars would help eliminate some of this by allowing a driver to rest, keeping the driver from being the one controlling the car, and helping to alert the driver when they need to be paying extra attention.\n\nNot everyone can sleep a little bit longer before they have to get up.\n\nMaybe they got home late from visiting their mother in the hospitol and had to be at the airport early in the morning to fly back home.\n\nThey would have to drive themselves to the airport while they are very tired and stressed.\n\nIf their car could drive itself they could rest for a while and other people driving would be safer.\n\nYou do not want a drunk driver to be the one controlling a car.\n\nWhat if they can not find anyone to drive them and with their clouded judgement decide to drive themselves?\n\nIf their car could drive itself he would not have to be the one controlling it.\n\nTherefore everyone could drive a lot more safely without having a random car swerve into them or someone else. Also, they have sensors that would see things our drunk driver would not see or would just ignore.\n\nFor example, there could be a person behind the car. The sensors would stop the car to keep that person from being hit.\n\nIf we installed a type of alarm system into the car when the drivers attention was needed then they could be easily alerted.\n\nPeople are use to waing up to alarms and they work effectively.\n\nIf they had flashing lights, a vibrating seat, and a loud noise then the driver could be woken up or just made aware quickly.\n\nThis would allow people to get the extra rest they need and would give the car the ability to awake them as needed.\n\nSome people would argue, however, that these cars are not safe because they do human assistance.\n\nWhat if they can not get the drivers attention in time? These cars would be equipped with great alarm systems that would grab the driver's attention instantly.\n\nDriverless cars are still very much a thing of the future but with new technology adavnces everyday they are achievable.\n\nThey could help with so many things including allowing exhausted drivers to get much needed sleep, not allowing dangerous drivers to control the car, and alerting the driver when they are needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern Censorship issue plagued society centuries It unnecessary unconstitutional As certain guarenteed documents keep society anarchy If right pick liturature read watch listen taken away put country Censorship means allowed country today In given certain Some including freedom speech freedom press already contricted wrong eyes government nevertheless taking place We lost definitely constricted Why government able tell us read If censorship allowed come frightening If government supposed for people tells us read read going stop telling us wear drink even eat Censorship libraries one biggest issues There countless examples censorship written liturature allowed For instance college student writting research paper effects rape child government sees rape too graphic student He given right use materials necessary write fullyinformed paper But censoring libraries taking books government hindering education s countries youth Some classics also speculated The known classic since written It used classrooms everywhere around country education But recently availability book questioned Throughout novel nword used never insult During timeperiod writing word common much less severe meaning modern day societies But time changed s meaning removed libraries curriculums across country This unlawful censorship One greatest books time classic removed lives youth racy language Censorship taking place written liturature Movies music also magnifying glass censorship Movies rated reason give viewers age group movie appropriate This helpful parents able selfcensor children But government able choose specific child able view It parents right able expose expose child whatever see fit country s lawmakers Music one biggest part society today With invention iPods devices music become much common portable Censorship becoming severe change music style The music styles modern teenagers greatly differs grandparents Almost nothing seen unacceptable many today s rappers displayed choice lyrics The music business taking quite beating become popular With common themes sex drugs money seem offensive citizens others shrug normalcy So someone say No listen This allowed yet How one person group people decide acceptable They Censorship morally wrong well lawfully wrong Taking media citizens books movies music unconstitutional What would forefathers think censorship become Before pull unacceptable book shelf remember great countries citizens individuals like Sincerely", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The first problem that needs to be considered is some media actually write down untruly messages it is affected our environment and economic stability. news is a very important part of our life. They give us data regarding trends and issues every day. For being published statement, they arrange step by step the qualified reports. They bring to us as a reader, much crucial information from many sources so urgency is really needed.\r\n\r\nThe main negative aspect is that our population was easily influenced by television, likewise social television, electronic television and other kinds of publishing. Instead of the pandemic, the journalist should work properly on the area already stated. Furthermore, they really understand about the public interest alike as special themes or topics today, next week and on every occasion. It is very crucial due to the effectiveness of daily data. they explore the artist and politician's scandal and make it a highlight of the day. It is such an incredible crime of the journalist to blew up the bad side of a person and make a bad behaviour of our children for instance. \r\n\r\nOverall, many beneficial steps through this activity. the positive aspects of mass media are they teach us to gain knowledge, use critical thinking, keeping in alert, particularly to our government projects. For example, the development of our country is always be monitored and reported by the publishing to all citizens. Moreover, entertainment is also our favourite one. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think broadcast publishing is a fascinating and essential aspect for any kind of reason. Many people get the benefit from these fields. The data is valid and reliable when it is through the process and the right procedure. Subsequently, each of us must be careful while reading or assuming a picture or a passage in the newspaper and other public places. Although it is forbidden and not important, these kinds of matters often happened every time. In general, it is really related to us as a user.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear people read news paper like play computer day Than hour I think take time read article wonderful newspaper I writing article using computer hour My first reason computers issue makes pay attention school To support reason dont think making play computer alot makes think computer think school They play much mess focus school My second main reason makes allways want talk computer So play mare hour like said cause addicted like drug s like dont want addicted drugs hope woudnt want addicted computer To continue allways computer make sound like life play day everday I would hope woudnt want like Most importantly final reason shoudnt let child play computer hour day Because get weight Your well get go bathroom eat stuff house Your go side play wont get exerse I hope understand I coming I brother offering hospital right computer much messed doctor said make I praying well make alive I hope woudnt let mess life forever Thank much takeng Time read article I hope would remember article whole ontire life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir grateful everything parents done showed She happy things admires parents love sacrifices took In memoir talks parents came United States oneroom apartment sister They finally afforded move threeroom apartment She finally called home says article She thankful family important friends She says showed lives teachings basics life This author s mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The first big obstacle designing mast Architects could nt drop mooring mast top Empire State building flat roof If dirigible moored would add additional stress frame wind pressure would factor well The mooring mast never destined fulfill purpose landing dirigibles nt safe nature dirigible swivel back could possibly weighed lead back cant hung pedestrians street A practical reason could moor particular law already place air ships flying low Although happened two dirigibles attempted moor first turned back due bad weather conditions second one publicity stunt dropped newspapers landing gear could installed use wire recieve In result idea shelved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driveless car has its pros, and its cons. My position on the it is positive rather than negative. The driveless car has many features and positive perks. But it still has its bad perks. Driveless cars come off to me as a pretty good idea and i support the idea.\n\nDriveless cars come off to others as a bad idea to invest time and effort on.\n\nBut the Driveless cars also have their pros. Driveless cars would change the amount of fuel we use by decreasing the amount by\n\nhalf, not only that its saving half our fuel it is also a great way for our technology to advance leading to other inventions that could just keep improving our everyday technology. Driveless cars would also be a way to prevent people from drunk driving or even just normal wreaks.Driveless cars would be good for new drivers would dont know the roads or where they are going.\n\nDrivless cars can be a harm, or just a plain bad idea. Some people may want cars to continue being the same, or they just may not trust technology. Driveless cars could be a bad idea considering that technology could crash or fail at any point and time.Driveless cars would consume lots of materials, and cost a lot per car made.\n\nDriveless cars dont seem to be that bad of a idea to me. Driveless cars would help new learners know the road, or even teach them a little about it. They may be a fortune when making them, but its a great way to conserve our fuel. They also could lead to other inventions for improving our future.\n\nDriveless cars can be a good and bad idea for the future. Although, advancing our technology with driveless cars would be a pretty great improvment, but not only a improvment but a\n\ngreat way to teach young drivers the rules of the road and how to drive. They driveless car would be a perfect innovantion for our future and whatever else it inspires.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke didn't paticipate in the Seagoing Cowboys because he hat to stay at home. And because he had just graduated from high school. he didn't think it was nessisary to go and he had a leave at home even tho he had a family at home. He didn't want to just leave them at home with out him. Becuase he had no one to watch them when they was at home alone with no one to talk to. He desided to stay and not go so he can be there with them and he was going to pertect them from harmes way. he loved his family to much to just leaver to join a cowboy group with people her didn't know at all so he said No and that he was staying with them. Because if he would have left it would proboly change ther life and his forever. they didn't want to stay home by there self for a long time he wanted to stay and help them out around there house and other stuff. And because it was to danges for him any way that is why he didn't want to go. And he just wanted to stay and not put himself in danger because it was a war and he didn't want to die and never return.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine if something could keep students up and ready to learn throughout an entire lesson that they couldn't care less about? It seems like an unlikely scenerio more likely. Most students are interesting in every single class that they're required to take, it's almost enivitable. Keeping students interest in a subject is what keeps them wanting to keep learning it. It could be life-changing to be able to have a computer that is able to keep a students interest in what they're learning up.\n\nAdding something like this in to schools nationwide could be very manditory to keep students successful. It's not new to anyone that if something bores you, you probably have no desire in keeping it in your memory. If something is uninteresting, it's an instinct to want to find practically anything better to occupy you. There could be a computer designed in order to scan a student's emotion to detect whether or not they're bored. If the student seems to be disconnecting, the assignment could make the next question a different scenerio with a similar topic.\n\nIn the passage, it says that the FACS enables computers to be able to read your expressions in a way that can alter the experience for each individual. \"Being able to modify the lesson, just like an instructor.\", is a key component.\n\nNot only could the computer be able to keep you from getting bored, but if you're entertained by the assignment it is also able to continue questions similar to the one that catches your attention. School is boring for a lot of people because of their disconnection for the materials that they are learning. Being able to connect each different student to a similar assignment could be groundbreaking. Discussing something each student can relate to is valuable in keeping everyone engaged.\n\nLet's take students that are homeschooled for example. Nowadays it's easier to homeschool children thanks to the internet. Some kids to work better alone without much instruction, but most need something to keep them from getting distracted. Not having a teacher to stay on you to do your work could cause people to disassociate from the required task. It's just like having a teacher one on one working with a student.\n\nTo further my position in this argument, I believe that these computers will be very valuable in classrooms everywhere. A lot of schools in this century use computers for a broad majority of their lessons. Doing assignments on paper seems to be the minority now. This already makes it hard for teachers to be able to connect to their students, which many children need. This computer is somewhat like an individual instructor for each person in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every year family reunion two weeks Cousins aunts uncles come across country enjoy weeks together We go small town right next famous The problem four hour drive know Im patient My brother I always rotate every year see rides mom We flip coin I always lose If ask impatient But get everybody happy see wait launch patience And thats story patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\", we are faced with another difficult task. We have had many hard task in our past space wise, from our first step on the moon, to the discovery of Pluto being a dwarf planet. Studying Venus closely is a worthy pursuit because, it's a challenge and who doesn't like a challenge, it would be a exploration many people from generations old and new would like rake on themselves, and possibly we could find a way to live on a planet other than Earth.\n\nExploring Venus is going to be extremely challenging. For example, the passage says \"Venus has the hottest surfqace temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" This place is going to to be extremely hard to get close to because of the heat. We can't even take pictures because \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the atmosphere.\" Our most high-tech cameras can't even get a decent picture of the surface of Venus.\n\nMany people from the new and old generation are obbssed with space and everything to do with it. Our workers at NASA have created electronics that have been designed to last on Venus and they have survived weels in the harsh terrain. NASA is constantly discovering something new about space. They are even using designs from the past like our \"mechnical computers.\" They are using the design of mechanical computers because the are very durabole under harsh conditions, which is what we're gonna need in order to explore Venus.\n\nThe planet Venus is very much like Earth. There are so many energy resources there. \"Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" That is great because if we lived on Venus we wouldn't have to worry about pollutting the planets as quickly as we have done on Earth. Also, we would be able to spread the electricity widely throughout the palnet.\n\nIn conclusion, exploring Venus would be a worthy pursuit for many reasons. We are going to get there one day with the way our space administrations are working. There is so much we don't know about the planets in our solar system, even our own planet. We should take the opportunity to explore whatever we can as soon as we can. That way we won't go extintic like many thing in our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No way can that actually be made by aliens. The pictures don't lie, it is a natural mesa. We haven't even found life yet so how can we assume this is made by aliens.\n\nThe face is really just an illusion. It is just a Martian mesa with unusual shadows that, ironically, make it look like a face. We only released it to the public to get an attraction to Mars. The program didn't mean for all these conspiracies. All we wanted was some publicity for mars.\n\nWe even took another, better picture to prove it. I know not all people believe us that it isn't an alien monument. If you look at the picture though, it is clearly a natural landform. The picture was ten times sharper than the original. Still you doubt are findings about the landform.\n\nAgain, I think whole-heartedly that it is natural. You can believe what you think it is. We don't even know of life on Mars, how can aliens make it if none are even there. You can be a fool and think that it is a alien monument, but the pictures show it. It is nothing but a perfectly natural monument on the possibly populated Mars.\n\nYou may never believe me unless you go there and see it yourself. Personally it easily shows to be a natural landform. Many believe to this day that aliens made that structure and that it is impossible to have a natural sturctue of that likeness. Then again many more believe that it is perfectly natural and just an illusion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is evolving and its evolving fast, for the fact that now we have a computer that may read students faces to determine if they lost interest and than alter the thing they are looking at. We will be talking about what this technology could leade to, what it may mean for schools, and how positive it may be.\n\nNow this technology is quite advanced but, could it be a little far? Personally i feel this technology could be something positive in our lives but it could leade to many bad things. People will start relying on their computer to make them happy, people who have loved ones may just use a computer to read their emotions rather than actually trying to figure it out.\n\nSchools are always trying to keep students happy, or willing to learn. But they seem to always lose their interest, so maybe it will help classes and maybe help advance students to a better grade or maybe even get them somewhere were they feel intrigued in. It could also help for the fact of students who are angry, helping them relax or putting them in a different situation.\n\nThis technology is very positive but still has its down sides. In my eyes, I see this as something negative for the fact being that humans need to try and reach someones heart and know them. We cant have technology just tell you if someone is happy or if they upset. You wouldnt really get any experience in social skills.\n\nSo to end this off, i do not agree of having this. This technology will end social skills and hurt schools for the fact of no one would be used to one another. Social skills is one skill everyone needs to have, learn, and use on a day to day bases.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, State Senator\n\nThe Electoral College is a great process that was created by the founding fathers in the Constitution.\"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compronise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" The electoral college consistw of the electors the meeting of the electors of the voting for president and vice president. The electoral college process consists of 538 electors. When you run for president you have to get majority of the 270 electoral votes its required. Every candidate running for president has there own group of electors.\"Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.\" The electors are chosen by the candidate's political party.\n\nWhen the presidential election is over your governor prepares a certificate of ascertainmentits listing all of the candidates who had ran for president in your state. The certicate also says the winning presidential canddidate in your state.\"After the presidential election,your governor prepares a \"certificate of ascertainment\" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.\"The states certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives.\n\nThe electoral college should be keeping the electoral college because its a very important process of how we choose the president. If we just put our say in the votes some people might feellike htey amde the wrong choose in the voting. And if we just let congress picl our president because thats not fair becuse this is our conutry too adn we should have a say about what the presdent gonna do or what are some of he/she plans to do for our conunty.\"the electoral college is widely regarded as and anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ougth to be [overruled]by decaring tht candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\"\n\nThere a five reasons to keep the electoral college certainty of outcome,everyone's president,swing states,big states and lastly avoid run-off elections. It is possible for a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote.\" The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the popular vote.\" A presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.\"This is a desirable result appeal is unlikelu to be a suffessful president\". The electoral college restores some of the weight in the balance the large states lose by virtue.\n\nIn Conclusion the elecoral college should stay becase it makes everthing fair for the electoral candaiets and so citizen of the united states have a chance to ahve a say in what they want as a president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders faced empire State Building attempting allow dirigibles dock The possible dangers something fall The hydrogen highley flamable dirigible could blow ingor one aroud The empire state building may strong enough withstand moving back side moveing much dangorouse winds could possibly pull part building could nearby pedastrians", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is coming in fast. Driverless cars are what everybody has been waiting for. Sense 2009, cars have been created where they can drive by themselves under very specific conditions. They are the next big thing, but are they safe? Driverless cars are still being worked on, they are not very accurate, and the manufactures are only assuming that the problems ahead will be solved.\n\nDriverless cars are constantly being worked on. They will never stop being worked on. In all cases, humans are actually still needed while sitting in a driverless car. \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" This quote simply means that while sitting in a \"driverless\" car, humans are still required to pay full attention and take over when needed. Driverless cars should be true to their title. They shouldn't be called \"Driverless cars\" if humans still have to drive it. Also, this means that the cars are going to be constantly worked on because they will always have a new techonological problem that they are going to need to fix in order for the car to fully be able to drive itself.\n\nDriverless cars are not accurate at all. People are still in need of some answers. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver, or the manufacturer?\" This shouldn't even be a question that the people would need answers to. Now, if driverless cars are going to be the next huge world-changer, than the manufacturues are somehow going to need to make the cars seemless. They are going to need better sensers, cameras, better navigation. They are always going to need to be better. Also, driverless cars should be something that a human can just hop right into, and relax while driving to work or to the grocery store. It shouldn't be something that humans have to be alert and scared while driving because they know that at any time, something could go wrong. If questions like this are being asked, the company just simply isn't accurate enough.\n\nManufactures are working on driverless cars all of the time. Does this mean that they have exactly what they need to make the cars flawless? \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems will be solved.\" This quote simply means that the makers of the cars are still uncertain about whether or not they are going to be everything that everyone has been dreaming of. They don't even know if the problems that lie ahead will be solved! How could people trust their lives in the hands of such an uncertain and inaccurate company?\n\nIn conclusion, yes, a seemingly perfect driverless car would be totally awesome to have. It would be awesome to just relax and have the driverless car take you to go on a vacation or to work. The chances that people are willing to take is up to them. Driverless cars are still being worked on, they just aren't accurate enough, and the makers of these cars are still uncertain about them. Driverless cars just aren't ready and may not ever be ready to hand off to someone who intrusts their lives to the manufacturer or to the car. Questions are still unanswered, and they may not ever be answered; Therefore, driverless cars are not the best choice for our future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nAfter much research, I have decided that the electoral college should not be kept. It is not completley fair, because the citizens think they're voting for their prefered candidate when really, they're voting for that candidate's electors. That means that if a candidate wins the votes of the citizens, he might not win the electoral college votes. This also means that he was not the president that the U.S. citizens wanted, but what the electoral voters wanted. In the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" they ask the question, \"Can voters sometimes controll whom their electors vote for?\" and they answer, \"Not always.\" This proves that the electoral college is not fair. Also, the electoral college shouldn't be kept because some electors will, \"refuse to vote for their party's candidate and cast a vote for whomever they please,\" says \"The Indifensible Electoral College\".\n\n\"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" says \"The Indefensible Electoral College.\" That is more than half of the United States population, therefore we should get rid of it. I believe that we should abolish it along with that 60 percent, thatway when voting, it will be much more fair. Also, it will make choosing the president of the U.S. up to the people.\n\nSome may think that keeping the electoral college is good because, If there is a tie in the election, the electoral college can break it with their votes. Although this does help, it has only happened once, therefore proving to not be needed. Other reasons are because it gives certainty of an outcome, helps big states, and avoids run-off elections, but are also not that important.\n\nIn conclusion I, along with 60 percent of the U.S. populaton, believe that the electoral college should not be kept due to its unfairness.\n\n-PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While there are people who think the eradication of poverty very much depends on the development in economy, others believe that it should be ceased due to deleterious effects on environment. In my opinion, economic growth is necessary to alleviate poverty and raise living standards, but the preservation of environment is also needed to be taken into account.\nOn one hand, a booming economy increases living standards and lift people out of extreme poverty. People drive benefit from higher living standards, as it opens up ample employment opportunities for young people, so they can stand on their own feet without living off their parents in late 20s and early 30s. This encourages early marriage and enables the youth to get a job to save money to start a family. Therefore, if young people can afford a family life, they will less likely get caught up in dishonest relationship and have happier life.\nOn the other hand, although the development of economy makes people more affluent, the irreparable damage it causes on environment is irrefutable. Economic growth increases productivity which leads to the more consumption of non renewable resources. The pollution they impose on environment can maintain for years. For example, the use of plastic which when deposed of do not degrade. And so many toxic waste emitted from factories jeopardize our health and causes environmental destruction, as these pollutants sustain on environment for long.\nIn conclusion, however economic advancement has a detrimental impact on environment, it is a must for every country to boost its economy. Since it enhances people 's living conditions and disentangles them from poverty besetting many underpriveldge society. I am of the opinion that the merits of economic progress outweight its drawbacks. Because it provides welfare benefits and services for people so that they can be better off and apply environment friendly methods to mitigate its harmful effects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The installation mooring mass top Empire State building would made building well city New York incredibly important modern travel s Alas many difficult obstacles made mast impossible complete First get mast top buildings frame strengthened reinforced painstaking expensive Second builders deal possibility blimps exploding Another obstacle builders faced nature With constantly shifting violent winds top building zeppelin would sway swivel around mast making difficult dangerous unload passengers With high winds zeppelin could even detach mooring fall onto city potentially killing hundreds Lastly builders failed take account law forbade dirigibles fly close urban areas This law made illegal blimp get near Empire State Building let alone dock The thought mooring mast Empire State Building fantastic idea albeit one destined fail beginning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "KEEP ON THE SHELF I think get rid books library If would nt books left The thing worried rated movies Yeah taken library If one book offensive someone dont get someone else might like book For example older woman looking magazine sees teenage woman taking drugs half naked Although teen sitting right next likes gossip We nt get rid books would one genre There would nt categories left library A good idea separate books put ones seem offensive back keep childrens books away big mystery horror books Another example A student goes library work history report slavory nt books slavory somebody thought offensive african americans I understand reasons books taken library sexual content Children need around kinds books Or books taken religious belifs like one book taken worshiping devil something The movie situation understand I would nt want little daughter walking grabbing something sex scene drug content You take shelf wait right another example nt get taken shelf Just want shelf nt mean everybody wants shelf Then libraries movie business would To sum everything nobody choose library nt Personally think variety library If everybody would get bored books Over KEEP ON THE SHELF", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. As driverless cars are becoming a new deveoping technology, it's best to ask yourself, \"Are driverless cars really a necessity?\" The answer is, no, they are not a necessity for many reasons. We should not continue to develope driverless cars mainly because; driverless cars are not completely driverless, the car would need a new built-in entertainment system to put inside of the car, and if something were to go wrong with the car, who is to blame for this?\n\nWhen you hear the words, \"driverless car\" what comes to mind? Perhaps, you think of a car that can take you anywhere, and young teens the age of thirteen not needing an adult to drive them to a desired destination. However, driverless cars are not 100% driverless. In the article, the cars are said to be able to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, because of this an alert driver is said to still be required. People are still needed to be able to navigate through work zones and around accidents. Manufacturers are still working on creating new ways to alert the driver when human skills are needed, but it is no secret that this will continue to cost money.\n\nAnother reason why we should not have driverless cars, is because to have them, companies think a built-in entertainment system should be created, installed and required inside of all driverless vehicals. Today, we already have vehicals that contain a television inside for the passengers who occupy the back seats, to help keeped them entertained. This new entertainment system is said to shut off when the car needs the driver to take over and will not be available to a driver who is texting or using their phone in any way. However, putting in an entertainment system would still be considered a distraction, just the same as if someone were to be using their phone, and the article states drivers will need to remain alert, but they can not remain alert with an entertainment system.\n\nFinally, we should not have driverless cars because, if an accident were to occure, or if something fails, who is to bame for this issue? There are situations where we would not know who to blame, the driver or the manufacturer. We could blame the driver, stating that they should have been paying attention and been alert to stop the accident before it occured. However, we could also blame the car's manufacturer, because they were supposed to build the car and make sure it was not able to fail in the first place.\n\nAs you can see, driverless cars could bring more trouble to us than we realize. They are not a necessity, we do not need to use driverless cars as our dominant way of transportation. The article states many positives and negatives aspects of the development of driverless cars. However, we should not continue to develope these cars because; driverless cars are not completely driverless, the car would need a new built-in entertainment system to put inside the car, and if something were to go wrong with the car, who is to blame for this?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus would be a worthy pursuit, but the dangers of trying is a high risk of a human never coming back. Despit from the hotness of the planet, we do not know everything on Venus there could be gasses that a human can not breath in or maybe its hotter than we think. There are alot of things we do not know about Venus, there is only so much we can do right now with the technology we have but later in the future we will be able to go to Venus and study what is on the planet.\n\nVenus is Earth's twin they have the same size,mass and duration. Venus is a lot hotter than the Earth because Venus is 2nd closest from the Sun. NASA has tried to land space crafts on Venus but the space craft only last a few hours on Venus because of the hottness of the planet despit the atmoshpere is thick and hot. The last space craft that landed on Venus was 3 decades ago. Venus is a challenging planet to go and try land on because it is hot and the atmosphere is thick. NASA wants to land a human on Venus because they want to know the reputation Venus has since it is so similar to Earth from mass,size and duration.\n\nA thick atmosphere covers Venus of 97 percent Carbon Dioxide. Another thing challenging about Venus is that the clouds are acidic and thick as well. Venuse's tempetures advrage around 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirence. At that temeture on Venus it would melt metal in minutes. With that pressure it could crush a submarine. Venus has the hottest surface of any other planet in our solar system. Venusian geology have studied the what the weather would be like on Venus and the results came back that there are somtimes erupting volcanoes,earthquacks and lighting stikes. Scientists can not take samples from a far distance such as rock or gasses on the surface of Venus so that leads to a human going on Venus to get the samples but it is very dangers. We call Venus the evening star because it is the brightest point in the stars in the night, but the name is misleading since Venus is a planet.\n\nDespit from Venus being dangerous and Earth's twin and what scientsists know abour Venus. NASA will go into the future and get samples and find a way to get life on Venus to find out the mystery on what is on Venus and what it is made out of. Venusian geology will find more about Venus, but you have to be safe when u travel to Venus because of its enviroment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered that an enormous amount of jobs are going to be taken over by artificial intelligence robots. Although a huge number of jobs will be replaced by bots, there are certain jobs where these will accelerate productivity. This essay discusses the rise in performance at the workplace.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand side, most jobs are at risk because of artificial intelligence. All those jobs where processes are predefined and monotonous in nature are already replaced by bots while others are going to be in the near future. For instance, cashier and accountant roles are already eradicated by auto teller machines and sophisticated software solutions. Moreover, they provide instant services 24 hours a day and seven days a week without any break and extra cost in terms of services. Hence, machines are rapidly capturing the workplace.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand side, humans became more productive after the emergence of cutting-edge generative artificial intelligence technology. Since it provides rapid responses to problems, task execution is much more effective now. To illustrate, gathering ideas for the brainstorming and logic building is no more a hassle. Code can be written and troubleshooted in a short time period. Prototypes would be prepared and evolved effectively. Thus, machines are enhancing the abilities of employees and providing them ease in performing there tasks at the earliest.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, definitely, most jobs will be performed by robots. Obviously not only there will be a huge cut in the workforce, but there will be much improvement in terms of the performance of the personnel. Infact, with the convinience of bots effective productivity is inevitable which could not possible otherwise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who says that driverless cars will make our future better? The ones who want to destroy it. I am against driverless cars for three reasons,\n\nit could result to global warming,it will cost alot of money, and could be hazardous to the safety of all organisms. This is my belief because I feel that these cars will make the world fall apart even faster.\n\nFirst, driverless cars can result to global warming. To be able to build these cars, the humans will build multiple factories to make the parts. They will release new unknown toxins into the air, that can possibly be untreatable. Also, they will take up alot of new land, and destroy forests, and our oxygen supply.\n\nSecond, it will cost alot of money. Money is crucial in this world. It would cost millions, close to billions, to try to find parts that would be needed to construct the vehicles.Then to go out and try to hire people to make these cars. Also, if these vehicles are actually made, it will cost all of the people who would die to have these cars, pay thousands.\n\nFinally, the safety of all organisms. Who's to say that these vehicles wont malfunction? It is already forbidden in Calinfornia, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia, to test drive these cars due to the fact that, it is unknown whether it is safe or not. If someone gets into a wreck in this supposedly safe vehicle, which will be the one to blame? The manufacturer, or the driver? If this backfires, there will be lawsuits, fighting, and violence.\n\nIn conclusion, all signs really do point to the opinion that the driverless car is a bad idea. It's believed to make our even more dark and dangerous then it could possibly be. Driverless cars could be our worlds undoing. It could cause global warming and flood our earth. It could cost a lot of money making millions of people go bankrupt, and lastly it could be deadly to all life on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to be a person who takes care of horses, mules and young horses, not only that but oversea? Then the Seagoing Cowboys program is just for you! Then this is a great job fo you! It is a nice job to have because you get to work with horses and who doesn't love animals? Not only that! Joining the program lets you be with them oversea.\n\nIf you love animals, this program is perfect because there are some horses, young horses and mules that need to be taken care of. It is your duty to make sure they are ok. This might sound like a boring job but it's not, this allows you to be with animals. Not only that, but it's pretty fun!\n\nThis program not only provides being with animals, but the good thing is that you don't have to drive! They take the horses oversea which means that you don't have to do any work but be with horses! Pretty awesome right? If I were you I would choose this job.\n\nLastly, if you think about it, you are with animals all day and you don't have to drive for nothing! Sounds like a pretty simple jib to me. That's not all though, since some horses are shipped to other places, this means you have a chance to visit many unique places that you probably haven't been to before! It's like a 3 in 1 package! It's basically not a program anymore, it's more like a vacation!\n\nThese are great reasons this program is the one just for you. It is quite the program for every one! I mean you are with animals all day, you don't have to drive them which is great, and you get the chance to visit unique places! Please join this program it is great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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