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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient means understanding tolerant A patient person experience difficulties without complaining There time I patient Being patient difficult I CAPS isnt even moving brother broter obvousilly wasnt patient Hello mame I mean man walk shower CAPS I want to A nice man said kind friendly voice dumb I wasnt real I cut stupuidity said trying act tough year older NUM thinks hes big di anything wants CAPS little man cant cut I waiting line forever nice man said well bad brother making eniesnes waiting patiently line even though line wasnt really moving inside I wanted every one like people I patients wait After brother cut man didnt get punished decided cut hundreds people All people mad mad one anything besides say dont cut me didnt really help Intill cutted person That person young pretty body beautiful blue eyes pretty blond hair name CAPS police man young little boy cutter every one else PERSON said While I waiting patiently got kicked whole park line please thats WonWere was best roller coaster I ever Being patient hard rewarding I also learned patient takes lot understanding tolerant Now know get best patient And worst", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir Narciso Rodriguez happy grateful In ph Narciso s parents gave leave Cuba come children could better life Narciso grateful could nt express thank words ph In ph also states really grateful parent s love sacrifice The reason happy I think family loves Even though re different cultures came together would nt happened parents nt immigrated That I think mood happy truely grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builder Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock noticing dirigibles would unsafly dangling high pedestrians Street There many risk landing huge dirigibles also law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal ship even approach area Famous important dirigibles lots trouble landing like example December US Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached mooring mask could get close enough forceful winds The dirigible could move uncontrolably crash Sharp Spires buildings around In becoming transportation future dirigibles given way airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Real estate buyers are becoming more interested in past information of the building they are buying, which is a common trend around the world. It seems to me that there are two main reasons, including safety concern and psychological belief and several ways to investigate the history of a house.\r\n\r\nFirstly, researching a home`s past allows people to make sure about its architectural history for preservation purposes. For example, it is essential to know when it was built, what it is built of, what changes had been made, or how it was used before. This detailed information can help meet the security requirements of the owners so that they can know exactly what changes and repairs need to be made. Secondly, understanding the history of the house in which you live is one of the reasons to live happily. No one wants to live in a house where some dreadful events had happened, such as murder or violence. \r\n\r\nTracing the history of old houses could be more challenging than contemporary houses. However there can be several ways to explore the history. First, using internet seems possible to compile initial facts since a wide range of records are becoming more available online today. Official websites can be more reliable and provide information on resources and where to find them. Second, information on the history of houses or buildings can be obtained from local authorities, such as National Archives and Property Registry. In addition, real estate realtors should be able to assist the purchasers with finding the basic information, like previous owners.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it appears that feeling satisfied and safe in the house we live in is a reason to discover its history, and online resources and local authorities could be the main source of the information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aliens on Mars making a huge monument is very contarversial. Some people think that the monument is made by aliens but some people think it is man made. But now the \"face on mars\" is being photo graghed with better detail than ever. The \"face on mars\" is natural.\n\nNASA has sent spacecraft to observe the surface of mars and the first on they sent was Viking 1 took pictures of the surface of mars and there seemed to be a face and they thought that there was an anceint civilaztion that built it. Later on they sent another spacecraft to take even better detail of the surface of mars. And in 1998 they got even more detial than in 1976. Then in 2001 They took pictures of it again and with even more resolution.\n\nOthers say that it looks like something made by somehing esle other than humans or nature. And they say it has the look of being man made. But it has been photograghed numorous time and with even better detail and it look like it was made by nature not some other beings. It also states in the artical \"That a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on mars.\"\n\nThe \"face on mars is natural\". There is more evidence of it being natural than being made by aliens. The photos are better and they clearly show that it is just a rock formation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A claim that evaluates how well the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. There is 97 percent cardon dioxide blankets Venus. The clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. on the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degees fahrenheit. Atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nResearchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Venus woulf need to get up close and personal despite the ricks.\n\nresearchers\n\nare working on making our machines to last longer enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nVenus is dangers bevause on how hot it is on the planet of Venus.\n\nVenus is the secound planet from the sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Earth,Venus, and Mars, our orbit the sun at different speeds. Mercury is the closer to our sun. Beyonf high pressure and heat. Venus was covered with largely oceans and could have supported various from of life, just like earth.\n\nVenus is a planet where no human or any living thing can live on Venus. Venus is not a planet that you should go visit because of the 800 degee, fahrenheit is too hot you'll die. Venus is a very pretty planet to look at in the solar system. Just not a place to live on or visit. There is alot of information in the passage i've been given too me. Reading this passage gives me alot og infromation about the planet Venus.\" Beyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted a job on sea? Maybe a job on sea including animals? Well, if that is what you would like then sign up for \"Seagoing Cowboys\". This job will let you take care and be with the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over sea.\n\nAs being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" then you could do a lot of things on the job. On the job you get to feed and nurture the animals everyday. The animals will have a certian liking to you right away if you take that job! When being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to travel a lot! You would get to visit all different types of places and meet a lot of people. The job really opens you up to the world.\n\nNow your probably wondering \" Why should i join this program? It's just a job to be on a boat with a bunch of animals.\" Well I have the answer to that question.\n\nIf you take this job, then you will be considered a hard working and caring person. This job is like no other. Jobs like these aren't offered all the time. It makes you more aware of countries and their needs. Not only countries, this job makes you more aware of the world we live in today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Al Smith faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock mast top Empire State building The first problem architects faced couldnt put mast top building s flat roof The mast would add stress buildings frame Also dirigibles load wind would add stress Another reason safety Most dirigibles used Hydrogen highly flammable Also winds top building violent currents The winds always shifting would cause back ship move Lastely dirigibles couldnt fly near building law air crafts flying low urban areas made illegal dirigibles tie mast anyways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author does a good job to prove that Venus is a worhty pursuit despite the dangers that are presented, they do this by giving information based on actual conditions, studies and actual experiences. The author used a combination of all three of these to prove their claim that Venus is worth the danger.\n\nThe conditions in Venus are a great mix of specific material. The author thoroughly explains each part of the atmosphere in Venus. The text says that \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify metals.\" They are proving that the conditions on Venus would exceed anything that our bodies could handle.\n\nDespite saying this, they make a point when they begin into the discussion of the education it could bring us. In the text it is shown that \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet it our solar system.\" The author supports his argument very well when they say this. They used a status stand point which gives the author more credibility. He then forms a question within the text, by doing this it brought them the opportunity to show the research they had conducted for this writing piece.\n\nThe author brought in the research on the true experiments that were thought up through NASA. He builds up NASA's ideas by explaining to the deepest points, but never hits an oppostion until the next paragraph. When they do this it creates an amazing idea that could have the possibility to work imaged into the readers heads.\n\nThey eventually hit the oppostition and shows the down fall with NASA's great plan. They state in the text that \" More importatnly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and persoanl despite the risks.\" When the author decides to say this they prove the irony of it all. If you can't be up close and personal with the planet then you can't learn the reasons you truly cannot be. From the opposing standpoint it was supported very well once they did that.\n\nThey then go back on track to support their claim. They do this by explaining the experiments done in the past. They state a comparison to the readers when they say, \" Just imagine exposing a cell phone tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin,\" This comment that was made impacts the writing positvely. When they do this it gives the readers something to think about or imagine. It brings the issue to them and gives them a chance to relate somehow.\n\nThe conclusion that he provides gives a clear closing. He states his claim again and uses his evidence to bring the topic to a point. The closing gives you something to think about, it leaves you wondering about the topic and forming your own opinions. In the conclusion it states, \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet te very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The right thing is to not starve us from the education that could be provided just because of a dangerous boundary. All of the evidence that they have stated and proven through the whole essay just ends with them eventually just stating that it is the right thing to do.\n\nThe author does a good job of proving this through the whole essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is always improving. From a simple toaster to a toaster that can make several pieces at once. This facial recognition is a new way of detecting the true emotions of someone. I think the use of this technology is useful to all students, parents, governement workers, and etc.\n\nFacial expression does not have a set of rules you have to follow. For example, when someone is very angry, they might cry instead. In result, the computer might take it as sadness. Most of the time, facial expressions are easy to recognize. In paragraph 2 of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" it says, \"Each expression is compared against a neutral face\" (D'Alto 2). Everyone has different neutral faces. Most people have a good way of keeping in their emotions, making their face look blank.\n\nWhen expressing emotions, certain muscles are tied to certain emotions. In paragraph 3 of the article, the author says, \"... your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you're surpised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger\" (3). Most of the time when you are surprised, you raise your brows. Also, when you are mad, you make a face, and tighten your lips.\n\nWhen in school, you can use your facial expressions to show how you are feeling. In paragraph 6, the author goes on to explain that, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huange predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Several teens do not speak up when they do not understand something that was taught during class because they do not want to be embarrassed. So if you are at home, on a computer, you will not have to speak up you can just act the same, and the computer will change it to help you understand more efficiantly.\n\nIn conclusion, facial recognition is a great way to get students on the right track in school. It can help the teachers decide if their teacher techniques are effective or not. Also, facial recognition can help people understand how others are feeling in certain pictures. If someone throws on a fake smile for a photo, the computer will recognize that. Many different emotions, have different ways it can be shown. The computers detect multiple emotions including: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness (3).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I were a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens I would use facts agenced there theiries.\n\nAs a NASA scientist I know that the face is just a natural landform not created by aliens. Now it would be cool and all if the Face was created by aliens but we all know there has been not trace of alien life. Also if their where aliens, why would they make Face looks like an Egyptian Pharaoh? How would aliens even know about that? There is just no logic in these therioes, what so ever.\n\nHowever NASA has evidence that this Face was no created by aliens but natural landforms. On April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveypr flew over Cydonia and snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original picture taken by NASA's Viking 1 and 2 spacecrafts. This photo taken by, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC),revealed that the Face was only natural landform. Of course everyone was not satisafied, believeing that alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nBut mission controllers looked again, with some hard work, and only gained more facts that the natural landforms made more sense about how the Face got on Mars. Its turns out natural landforms are common around the American West. Also just another reason to have believed NASA is that the buget defenders wished there was an anicent civilization, so if there where Aliens dont you think NASA would have been making money off of the rumor if it were true.\n\nAnyway in conclusion, even though rumors of alien life or civilization would have been cool and all, it's not. Nope,no aliens, just a natural landform!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus presents many dangers that need support to help human survival. Venus is still worth the risk to study despite said dangers. Studying Venuus is a goal for scientists because it is our neighboring planet and is close to our planet for an amount of time. Venus is called out sister planet as it is refered to as many times in the text by the author because of how closely related the landforms from Earth and Venus are. Venus like Earth has many valleys, mounatins, craters and is thought to be covered with water a long time ago and support life.\n\nVenus is close to our planet during a period of time because of how the planets revolve around the sun. This pattern makes the trip to Venus easier for scientists to do because of the amount of time needed for space travel. Venus's conditions are fatal to humans though. Venus has a dangerous atmpsphere to humans as explained in the text. The author states that, \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" The planets regulated tempature is at 800 degrees Farenheit and is hight dangerous to human life.\n\nScientist believe that in due time they will find answers to help neturalize or limit these dangers so they can find out more about Venus and find out more about habibility. A theory be some scientists is that a blimp like machine can carry humans over the clouds of Venus, and fly over the storm clouds a litte higher of an altitude than planes do to avoid storm clouds. This vehicle would be solar powered because of the easy access to the sun it would be well supported and because of the power it could support human life.\n\nVenus is worth the risk to study because it could be used as a backup plan for Earth. If Earth dies or starts to become inhabitable then human life will have a place to go and have a place to see. Venus shows hope as it has many features like Earth such as valleys, mounatins, craters. It is also believed to have an acestory of being covered in ocean like Earth and having been habited by life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can computers really understand our emotions? Details from the article of the use of Facial Action Coding System to read the emothional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable becaues it helps us understand emotions, it helps us see true emotions, and it helps us connect with emotions.\n\nMy frist support is that it helps us understand. According to the article it can detake mixed emotions. For example the new emotion-recognition software trackes these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. It can also indcated where it is a gerneral smile or a fake smile.\n\nMy second support is we can see true emotions. The article staes that in a false smile the mouth is streacted sideways using the zygomatic major. In a real smile, the zygomatic major lift the corners of your mouth. So it proves that this tecnonlgy can indicate the differnce between a genuine smile and a forced one.\n\nMy last support is that we can connect with emotions. The facial Feedback Theory of Emotion says that moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. An example is a drama couch has his students smile and frown to produce those emotions on stage and really feel them.\n\nDetails for the article of the use of this techonolgy to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable becaues it helps us understand emotions, it helps us see true emotions, and it helps us connect with them. This is important becaues some people can't read some emotions and if we can understand them, then we can understand how others feel. Its also important because by understanding emotions we use them more. All of these supports on why this techonolgy is useful and more is why it is very valuable to students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Eploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. All throughout the artical the author gives lots of information on why we should study venus even with there being danger all throughout the planet. he talks about the dangers there could be, but the reward would be bigger in the long run if we explored venus. because of that he wishes to do so.\n\nin paragraph 8 he states \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the instigtht to be gained by itself, but also becuase human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally itimidating endeavores\". he pretty much says that because of human curiosty it will happen with or without venus having dangers and he believes that we should do somthing before someone else does in the future. he believes even if there is high tempatures, radiation storms, and how 92% of the air is carbin dixoide which is all stated as dangers along with many other dangers of venus on paragraph 3. that we need to do more test and make more things to withstand veuns.\n\nWith all of these dangers it states in paragraph 7 \"looking back to an old techonology called mechanical computers. these devices were fist envisioned in the 1800s and played an importan role in the 1940s world war ll\" it wasnt actual computer, they didint exist in those days they were devices that made calculations by using gears and levers. the authour believes that is if somthing like that can survive world war ll than it should be made again to go down for testing and studying on venus.\n\nall throughout the artical he has supported his claim very good on why we should study venus despite the dangers on venus. with loads of things of evedice all throughout this artical he talks about the dangers there could be, but the reward would be bigger in the long run if we explored venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beleive that the use of the 'Facial Action Coding System' to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom is valuable and nearly detremental to a student that's learning online. In a classrom with an instructure leacturing, if the student becomes confused, he or she can raise their hand and ask a question. A teacher may even notice when a student is confused by the facial expression they make. Though, learning online is an independent task and most of the time, you don't have anyone to truly explain and fill you in on what you're just simply not grasping on to.\n\nUsing this new form of technology can be helpful to not only the student, but the website or app they are learning from. For example, if a student is reading an article, the website owner or app designer will know if most students find the article interesting or are able to see if the article provided is truly at grade level. The Facial Action Coding System could also be used in grade school type settings. There are plenty of websites now for the education of children, like ABCmouse.com. The program can possibly give the feedback of the child's emotions and sense of awareness to their parents while using the program. With that, it proves my point that the use of this technology is beneficial to all ages.\n\nFor instance, in paragraph 5, the author stated \"In fact we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" then later gave an example of the ability that we have to tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look or her face. As human beings, this most likely began as an instict in order to tell how one another may react, attack, ect. Although now, we are much more than that. Some are striving to be heart surgeons or rocket scientists. We need to have the technology to explain the question in a different way if the student doesn't understand.\n\nA kid may get a bad grade on something simply because of the way the question was stated. That kid could be a genious but just learns in a differnet way. It wouldn't be fair to only provide questions with the format that only a handful of kids will understand. We should want our youth to thrive, we are the future afterall.\n\nIn paragraph 6, the author says \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" showing that the use of this progra is effective in more ways than one. Yes, you may get pleasent ads that suit you and your hobbies, but imagine the spike in IQ levels if the computers can modify the learning material for the student in the way that he or she may need to understand. Just the common use of this program in schools would have a domino like effect on the good outcomes.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of the Facial Action Coding System could have a large imapct on upcoming society. The positive outcomes would be worth a little extra money, work, and the time it would take to install this coding system. This system will effectivley teach students in ways they need and find interesting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue whether the minor should be trained to reprocess waste by their parents or teachers is certainly a contentious one. Parents hold dominance in practical lessons of recycling, while professionals can discipline kids to be more environmentally-friendly \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the home is a far more convenient spot to learn how to recycle domestic garbage in a pragmatic way. To illustrate, parents can provide their kids with the necessary tools while instructing them to accumulate rubbish as well as assisting to think creatively in terms what can be made from daily plastic bottles or packages, which demand years to decompose. For instance, as the majority of waste comes from domestic disposal, it is much more constructive to recycle them at home before they are discarded to landfill sites.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, not only parents can train children to have an eco-friendly lifestyle, but the school is also alternative place so as to enlighten pupils’ competency about biodegradable living and how to contribute to solve environmental issues. The well-informed teachers, whose specialization is ecology-oriented, such as geography or botany, can broaden horizon of the young with regards to recycling, for example. In above mentioned lessons, children could be taught how to switch to renewables, ranging from energy-efficacious devices through differentiating eco-friendly products. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, school can bestow children with more theoretical knowledge, whereas coming out of functional instructions, parents are much more superior. Hence, both, I firmly believe, are equally paramount in terms of disciplining the minors to be environmentally sustainable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is a part of a group that is called\n\nUNRRA it helps people and animals after the war. the reason you should join is that you are helping people and it is cool to go see other places and different like the Acropolis in Greece and china and europe. there are some ups and downs but it is worth it to see where you can go sometimes you will have to work nights watching the animals every hour of the night you will have to be care full because the dangers of the sea is different than it is on a farm.\n\nIt is alot of fun the animals keep you busy and there are games you can play games like boxing,base ball,table tennis,and tournaments on the way over to china or europe or where ever your going they always had fun.\n\nluke was working on his aunt's farm when he was a kid so he was prepared to work daily but he could work all the time luke on night watch hurt his ribs by falling of a slippy later from the rain lucky for a metal strip didn't have him falling over board. Being a Seagoing Cowboy was a live changer for luke he said i'm grateful for the opportunity it made him more aware of other countries and the people needs.\n\nThe work on the ship was hard it kept luke busy the animals had to get fed three times a day bails of hay and bag of oats had to pulled up from te lower deck and stallshad to be clean. In august 1945 luke got his first orders. luke said the day of the parcific war ended they got there sign up papers and bored the SS charles w wooster.\n\nLuke never knew his life would change right after his high school gradution but his friend asked him if he wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys and he couldn't say no so he joind the Seagoing Cowboys and buy the time luke was discharded he had already made nine trips with the Seagoing Cowboys that was the most any Seagoing Cowboy ever had.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboy program because, you get to help people and you end up feeling good about your self. You get to take care and spend time with the most adorable animals. Also, while you are on this trip you get to see wonderfull sights that you may never encounter again. You get to be on sea where the sound of the waves make you feel like your at home. When your on this trip you get to see things along the way. It's not just work you know. You get to play games, spend time with the people you love and care for. I sertianly love it! The most important part about this trip is that you do good deeds for people, they appricate you for helping them when they are in trouble. When you see the smiles on their faces you feel fuzy inside. If you love to relax, see amazing things, spend time with the people you love, have fun, and help people. This is the program for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program, because you can have a lot of fun. You will have lots of fun and get to do rodeo on some cows yeha. You can ride those big horses and go really fast.\n\nI went to a program kinda like this before and rode big horses and fished and rode boats. I got to playin the mud and it was funny and felt really weird. I went in swamps and saw some gators but nun in bad. I even got to see my uncle PROPER_NAME deer is cow out of the farm. Haha it was so funny . You guys do should go to camps like these there very fun.\n\nYou have the best food out there too. Fish, crab, spaghetti , gators, rabbits, squarles, and shrimp. That food is the best food in the world. You can eat anywhere you like. Bring your friends family anyone and enjoy that great food.\n\nOh almost forgot you can bring your sleeping bags, tint, pillows, blanking, or whatever, because you gone be sleepin in cabin. Don't worry though because it be extra warm in there. I enjoyed the last time I slept in a cabin. I slept a few nights and then one night I heard monster creeping on me and I peed down my leg.\n\nI really think you will want to go to that camp with the Cowboys. It will be really great and you get to ride horses and eat amazing food and sleep in a cabin. If you love to camp and go crazy then this is where you need to come. The Seagoing Cowboys. I gerinte you will have fun. There al;so pools and ponds and stuff that you can have fun in. These people travel for long time at time sol you'll be there for awhile.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a controversy about whether we should make efforts to fight climate change. I think it's necessary, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirst, it affects our life negatively. It has been reported that there has been an increase in the sea level on account of melted ice, which can be ascribed to global warming. Such a situation will lead to a loss of living habitats around the globe. Take some scientific reports as an example. Many scientists have detected that the sea level will rise about 6 meters in 2100 because of the melted ice in the south pole and Greenland. As a result, innumerable tropical islands and low latitude areas will be drowned. \r\n\r\nSecond, it will bring countless natural disasters. It's expected that global warming will influence the precipitation largely, which can boost the probability of fierce hurricanes. In the past years, the US and the UK experienced the attack of fierce hurricanes several times. From 1095-1930, there were about 3.5 times hurricanes annually; and from 1995 to 2002, this number ascended to 8.4 times. It's worth mentioning that every attack of hurricanes kills hundreds and thousands of lives, and can cause a loss of millions of dollars. \r\n\r\nThird, it brings about diseases. Due to the extreme climate caused by climate change, those affected places provide a superb growing environment for viruses; creatures like mosquitoes and rats grow rampantly in those areas. As a consequence, they can spread diseases quickly and broadly. Take Malaria as an example. Malaria has killed numerous people in Africa. It is spread through mosquitoes, it always takes place in tropical areas because of the wet environment. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe climate change is a huge problem, and it should be tackled as soon as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When considering what to be taught at secondary school, people are still divided about whether international news should be one of the offical subjects or not. While there are benefits to adding this new channels into classroom, there are also good reasons why it might be helpful to only focus on current curricula. \r\nThe statement that international news should be studied at secondary school is strong for several reasons. In term of social view , it would help students to gain a wider perspective of the world. In this way, youngsters can be widely acknowledge with current affairs so that they could be aware of how to behave properly. Moreover, in the education view, international news accompanied by different academic subjects such as science, literature, mathematics would complete an integrated education, which provide students with a full development to lead their life in the future. It is, therefore, clear that global updating plays a vital role in assisting education\nOn the other hand, it is also understandable that including international news as a subject in secondary school curricula is definitely irrelevant. First, students are now snown with hectic schedule, which may result in overloading if any addings. Moreover, in current education system, especially examniation, it places a great emphasis on academic subjects, if students don’t concentrate enough on these qualifications, they might fail. Secondly, the violence repesented in many of today's news could affect students' performance. This is because at the secondary school’ age, students are still inexperienced to understand those negative aspects. So youngster tends to misjude the situations and act inappropriately. Therefore, the study of international news would be a destructive and wasteful use of school resource.\r\nIn conclusion, there are convincing arguments for the study of global news into the secondary school, but it is also reasonable that it shouldn’t add to be an offical subject.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely believed that one solution to environmental problems would be for governments to hike up the price of petrol. While I consider that this might be an effective measure, I would argue that other measures might have an even greater impact.\nOn the one hand, raising the cost of fuel for cars and other modes is one of the efficient way because of some reasons. Firstly, higher fuel prices can help to limit the number of car journeys. A large number of low and middle income earners are not able to afford the incease in the cost of petrol, therefore they are forced to adapt to other means of transport such as: bicycle, walking, train, bus, etc. Traveling by public transportation instead private cars is the necessary way to cut down on car emission and reduce greenhouse effect. Secondly, the extra money, which collected from increasing fuel prices can be used in order to compensate for the extra expense. Government can raise expenditure on upgrading and expand public facilities and transportation to suffice residents. \nOn the other hand, while this rise in petrol costs might be a useful stopgap measure, national authorities could apply some other solutions to tackle this problem. The first measure is to invest money in developing eco-friendly means of transport. People should be encouraged to use electric cars and motorbikes to prevent air pollution. Moreover, introducing free bus and train passes, as the increased use of public transport would help in the effort to combat global warming. Another measure is to raise people awareness of the need to cut down on emissions from their cars. Environmental campaigns shoud be carried out more, especially on social media to popularize residents efficient ways to protect the environment. \nIn conclusion, a sharp rise in petrol prices would be a useful environmental friendly transport measure, although in the longer term other steps would be more effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driveless cars seem like a good idea are they really? To me it seems more dangerous to be in a car that is driveless. The person could end up not staying alert like they are suppose too. That could cause traffic problems when emercencys are coming through or road construction or worse a car accident. The driveless car could malfunction while driving. If it was to malfunction who do you blame? The car or the driver? I feel like what the artcile said the driver would get bored waiting for their turn to drive would be true. Safety is best when the drivers stay alert at all times. In most states this driveless car is illegal to even test. In my oppion i think why not just control the car yourself. If the car is going to warn you when it needs help i think it'd be safer to just handle the car yourself. I think another negative thing would be if you wanted to listen to music. How would that effect the car alerting the drive when the car needs help? The cars would be just like the cars we have now but you do not really need a driver. There are many postive effects of this, but thers more negative. I think the driveless care just isnt safe and is not a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient Being patient hard I bipolar I savere anger issues My experience patient I lived foster family They grandkids really annoyed My foster family different religion I atheist They would constantly tell I wrong It made upset I didnt say nothing I patient And I hate With anger problems im surprised I didnt go But yes patience take practice lots lots practice Because everyone world patient Tolerance twords children I dont like kids much I wed live tons little kids grand kids foster family I sued kids annoying I tolerate Kids hard tolerate guardian parents worst tell aint even youre parents I tolerated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teachers don't always know how a student is feeling or if the student is retaining any information at all. Well with the new Facial Action Coding System created by Prof. Thomas Huang, this is now possible. The Facial Action Coding System can detect if a student is bored during a lesson by identifying human emotions. The Facial Action Coding System could also tell if a student was having a bad day or if the student was simply not understanding a lesson. Also, this system could even tell if a kid is getting picked on by other students. With this system, learning for students could improve rapidly.\n\nImagine you are student and you think the lesson being taught is ridiculously boring. The lesson is so boring that you stop paying any attention at all and have no idea what you are learning. Well with the new technology of the Facial Action Coding System, this could be prevented. The coding system could identify whether the student was bored and change the lesson. The system doing so could ensure that the student is more interested, and has a better understanding. Dr. Huang, the creater of the Facial Action Coding System, even stated and predicted that with this technology, a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. He stated that the system would \"modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This leads me to wonder why you would not want to have this kind of technology in a classroom if it only helps improve the growth of a student.\n\nAnother reason that I think the system should be used in schools is because of the kids who act out for no reason. As a student myself, I imagine it is hard for teachers to understand why certain kids are acting out or not paying attention. With the Facial Action Coding System, the teacher could find how the student is feeling and determine whether that is why they are acting out or not. Also using this, the teacher could then try to help the student through their feelings and get them back on the path to learning. For example, if a student is angry, the article states that the system could see how the orbicularis oris tightened their lips to show anger. Then, the teacher would know and could determine how to better approach the student. Using this, the teacher could then try to help them through their anger.\n\nAnother problem that faces many students today in many schools is bullying. Teachers try their best to prevent it, but sometimes it can be hard for them due to students hiding their emotions. If the teacher could use the Facial Action Coding System, the teacher could see if a student is getting bullied or picked on. The system would help detect this because it could identify whether a student acts scared around a certain student. Finding this information out could help a teacher dramatically, because they could then better identify the bully. This would make it easier for a teacher to quickly stop and handle the situation at hand. It would then help improve the student's learning if it was being affected by feeling scared of a particular student. Not only that, but it could help try and stop the bully from bullying and improve their learning growth as well.\n\nIn conclusion, I think having technology like the Facial Action Coding System would be beneficial for both the student and the teacher. Using the Facial Action Coding System, teachers could tell if a student is bored or needs a new approach to a lesson to better their understanding. Also, this system could help determine if a student was having a bad day. This would help the teacher understand the student so that they could try and better the student's day to improve their learning. Using this system, a teacher would also have a better ability of identifying whether a kid is being picked on or bullied by another student. This could help a teacher better handle the situation and improve the learning growth of both students. I think these are all good reasons to have this kind of technology in the classroom, but we will all have to wait and see what the future holds for the Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, advanced technology has been applied widely to all ranges of aspects of humans life. Experts predict that robots can replace humans to take over many current works. Consequently, there will be many positive and negative impacts on our life. In this essay, I will discuss both of these different points. \r\n\r\nAs regards advantages, using robots in manufacturing can enhance labour productivity because they can produce goods much more quickly, and accurately than the normal workers. Thus, it will be greatly economical and profitable. In addition, robots can take over dangerous tasks which can be risky for people such as rescuing or expedition. Moreover, robots can do manual work instead of people such as delivering food, collecting garbage, or even doing housework. \r\n\r\nIn contrast to the positive points above, there will be negative views correspondingly. The most adverse effect is referred that our environment will be vulnerable. Because operating robots demands consuming a huge of electricity and other natural materials. As a result, the more robots are used the more fossil fuel is run out of. Besides, the unemployment rate will grow among people with low-level education due to their manual jobs will be replaced by robots. Furthermore, in case of robots break down, this could cause major problems for a company because of heavy dependence on technology. Also, repair and maintenance expenses are extremely costly. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, as can be seen from the points made in this essay. there will be disadvantages along with advantages to having robots in the workplace. People should consider both aspects, especially the adverse effects on our environment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These three pie charts illustrate how dangerous waste products are disposed of in three countries. Overall, two countries, the Republic of Korea, and Sweden dispose of dangerous waste in three types, while there are five types of disposition in the United Kingdom.\nFirstly, the Republic of Korea and Sweden deal with dangerous waste in recycling, incineration, and underground. The Republic of Korea has 69 percent of recycling\nthem, while Sweden is 25 percent. The Republic of Korea is approximately three times higher than Sweden. In contrast, Sweden mainly relies on dealing with dangerous waste by burying them underground. It is more than half, which means that more than two times higher than Korea. It is 55 percent in Sweden, and 22 percent in Korea respectively.\nInterestingly, there are five types of dealing with dangerous waste in the United Kingdom. Mainly the UK utilizes in incineration. The percentage is 82 percent. The way of disposing type is much higher than Republic of Korea and Sweden.\nIn addition, the UK utilizes in Chemical treatment, and dumping at sea. Each percentage is eight percent respectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage and today ima tell you a few reasons why that is true.\n\nTime after time day after day we use our cars or motorcycles to get from point A to point B some may think that by driving from point A to point B is harmless but im here to tell other wise. Driving your car or motorcycles everday to work causes pollution in the air it makes the air we breath nasty an unhealty it even causes the temputure to rise which is a big no no the antarticle will melt an rise sea levels. So limiting car usage makes the air a little cleaner an healtier to breath\n\nLimiting car usage even helps you save a little extra money cause with gas prices so high it aint cheap to get from point A to point B it cost more to travlel. In some places they even offerd free transport from friday to monday which is great! who wouldnt want free transport i mean whats better than saving money an helping the pollution decrease making the air more freasher an clean. Atfer days of near record pollution paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city those who refused to obey were fined 22 euro($31) other got the vechials impounded\n\nThe less cars on the street the less likley accidents are to happpen sometimes the roads are just to pack an squished you can braley get by thats why many car accidents happen with the car free day makes everyone a little more safer. since the car free day the parks and sports centers have bloomed many peopel are out having a good time riding thier bikes an enjoying the fresh air they dont have to worry about cars hitting them or wasting gas an polluting the air.\n\nIn the untied states the enviromental protection agency is promting car reduced communities. many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill. Americans are buying fewer cars drving less and getting fewer licenses each year goes by.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is a natrual landscape. NASA claimed there was something the first time, but the next time, and time after that there was no face. The photograph was taken in later years with better technology, so thats evedince that there was nothing on the planet.\n\nIn paragraph seven sentence one it states that \" Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.\" In paragraph seven sentence two it also states \" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natrual landform.\"\n\nIn conclusion there really is no face on Mars. In paragraph seven it also states \" There was no alien monument after all.\" In paragraph twelve it states \" That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" That is proof there is no Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the movie \"Back to the Future\" people have been wanting flying cars and robot things, but driverless cars are a very bad idea to make. The idea in thought is good cause the kid inside us is happy but for it to go out on market would cause more problems than the law can handle. A car that can drive itself is a bad idea, because the money needed to make it should be spent on better things, unempolyment would drive to the sky, and learning to drive will be unneeded until its to late.\n\nFirst of all, the money needed to make the programs and the cars should be going into better things. The money to make and test the program could have gone into building a new neighborhood for the homeless families liveing in shelters. The safety part of the program that needs to be tested is useing alot of cars that will be crashed and alot of people getting paid to watch the crashing of cars that could have been use to test a new strain of food that can grow faster.\n\nSecondly, a lot of jobs are lost in the making of a driverless taxi service. If people stop buying cars then dealerships throughout the country will close down and people will be laid off. To have that many people without jobs, or have jobs lined up after, that would hurt America more than it could handle. All the people who are driving taxis would be not needed when it is cheaper and safer to use the driverless cab.\n\nLastly, driverless cars would make learning to drive an unneeded skill. People would slowly stop learning to drive and forget how to. When the car gets hacked by something and you need to drive the car to save yourself the skill isn't there so you crash anyway. Meaning that people would die in car accidents caused by hacking and no one knew how to drive to get out of the problem at hand.\n\nIn conclusion, a driverless taxi service is a very bad idea, becuase money could be used for better things, the jump in unempoliment would sky rocket, learning to drive will be unimpornat until it is imporant. Don't stop dreaming and slowly get to that goal, but never make it unneeded to drive a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From prior knowledge or just by reading \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" some may argue that the Face on Mars was created by aliens, when in all reality it is a natural landform.\n\nOne claim would be, NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it . In a passage from the story the narrorator says, \"... defenders of the NASA budget wishes there was an ancient civilazation on Mars.\" Another support from the article is, \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a prioritry for NASA...\" Both passages from the article support the claim that NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it.\n\nAnother claim is, the Face actually is a butte. In the article the narrorator says \"What the picture actually show is the Martian equivalent of a mesa/butte-landforms common around the American West.\" Also in the passage it reads,'\"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using th cameras absolute maximum resolution.\"...you can discern things in a digital image 3 time s bigger than the pixel size,\"...\"So if there were objects inthis picture like airplains on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\" Both examples from the article support the idea that the face is actually a mesa/butte or natural landform.\n\nTo sum it all up, according to the artice the Face is an oddly shape natural landformed mesa/butte; it was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of advertisements is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world. There are several problems caused by this trend, and various solutions could be taken to improve the situation.\n\n There are a variety with different problems of this phenomenon. To begin with, having many details about advertisements from companies makes consumers distracted with their choice. For example, on program TV people want to buy a desk but having three advertisements that they buy a desk so people must think about choosing a desk better, a desk has a comfortable price and good quality. Another significant problem to mention is that the incresing number of advertisements from competing companies causes boring for viewers. For example, having advertisements over in program TV make to effect viewers because they watch programs which they like and don't want to lose emotion.\n\n Despite of these circumstances, there are several solutions that governments could take to solve the problems. Firstly, an effective solution would be to controlling from the organizer and government about checking advertisements comfortably. For example, Youtube should check a number of advertisements because people are watching the song but having an advertisement appearance which affects to viewer. The second measure would be for governments to approve real advertisements and fake advertisements to consumers avoid cheating. For example, before accepting advertisements grow programs to sell the government and organizers must check all the detail about companies and products, so when consumers buy products will avoid poor quality goods.\n\n In conclusion, the problem of increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies is unlikely to be entirely eliminated in the short term. However, various measures can be taken to tackle the issue to reduce the effects it is having on the current society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I sitting house hours waiting grandma pick go get friend I believe lot patience get farther wait want", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I nt think books material taken shelves libraries people might find offensive I think parent sees something want child reading right allow child read unfair take shelf entirely That book marked offensive could way another person learn book possibly gain something There nonfiction books marked offensive nonfiction It something really happen anyone learn something reading take away would taking away knowledge another person could obtained I believe library people choice read choose ripped shelf parents nt want child reading I think want child read parents tell child nt want reading everybody wins I know I read nonfiction books would marked people offensive book I also learned much topic hand To take away book would showing care might offensive people could help extend knowledge another If take away every book might racial slur act violence would left children read learn They read books find racial slur act violence hurt someone emotionaly physicaly never fear concicence might face later Overall I think books material libraries kept shelves someone finds offensive anything else nt read deprive someone knowledge We live world today education everything think everyone education But take away every book person like left learn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, to Miami senator. Americans should change election by popular vote for the president of the United State. The Electoral College it's not a good thing that is helping the citizens to express thier own thoughts in political. In Electoral College it's not really voting for the president it's for a slate of electors that turns elect the president. This shows that we the \"People\" that have the right to vote who we believe to be the leader for United States we are not really choosing him.\n\nAdditional, \" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer shows \" the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational\". This can explain the Electoral College is \"unfair to voters because the winner take all system in each sate\" that means candidates can't spend time in each state getting their chance to win thier vote from the state for the next four years. However, electoral college \"avoids the problem of elections in which no candiate receives a majority of the votes cast\" shown in \" In defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the preseident\" by Richars A. Posner. This can help the candiates to not be a tied so the Electoral College reduced and thiers a clear winner. What if their was a tied would citizens like a machine take thier decision on who's going to be the leader of the United States ? I don't think so becasue a machine doesn't have a right to vote.\n\nIn therefore, in 2000 Al Gore lost the presidency but won the popular vote. \"Over 60 percenet of voters would prefer a direct election ... this year voters can expect the popular vote win could again lose the presidency\" explain Plumer. This wasn't the voters decision was the Electoral College we should't have something that doesn't express our right of speech in political. However, the Electoral Collge \"process consists of the slection of the electors, they vote for President and Vice President\" this shows that the citizens can vote to be the most faithful President to be the leader on this opportunity land. To end, we shouldn't keep something that it's not really showing the voice of each citizens on this wonderful world we have as Ameica.\n\nTo conclude, we should change election by popular vote for the president of the United States. If we have a tie in the elctoral vote, \"the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president \" this explain we the citizens didn't chose the president would you like the citizens get mad a make a protest to chose the president ? American would like that so please senator take out the Electoral College becasue you never know if one day the citizens get as one to protest to get rid off the Electoral collge with their power of speech.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is acknowledged that students from suburban areas find it tough to receive higher education. Whether it should be made easier for them to access university education becomes an ongoing concern, which incurs a highly-charged debate.Obviously, higher education opportunities bring about benefits to students in multiple ways. For example, higher education becomes increasingly important to senior high school graduates, partly it determines if they have the competitive edge in the job market, and partly because it is seen as a guarantee of a certain level of the mental ability, from the computer literacy that is required by the most employers to the capacities of acquiring new knowledge the soonest possible which is valued by most . With a university degree, students from rural areas obtain a job easily, thereby bettering their living conditions and their family as well.Higher education also, however, to impose a heavy burden on families since the rise in the tuition fees are increasingly beyond those families’ ability to afford. In addition, with the mounting evidence, a university degree is not always a guarantee of seizing a decent job; therefore, their living conditions are likely to able to earn back their tuition fee after graduation. people argue, students from rural areas are not well-advised to pursue a university degree. But I perceive their desire to further their education should not be disrespected and the government should subsidise them to receive higher education.In conclusion, university education should be made fair to everyone, predicated only on their academic performance and mental abilities, rather than their financial capacities and the government should subsidise those students in need.Teacher’s comment: Not all the parts of the task were covered. The writer’s position is relevant to task prompt, the main ideas are also relevant but not all of them are developed well enough. The information is presented coherently, it is evident that the writer progresses from one idea to another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, human activities undoubtedly have detrimental impacts on organic life forms. While many people argue that any solution to tackle this dire problem is too late, others believe that the situation can still be improved by taking effective measures. In the following essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the argument and state my opinion. \r\n\r\nMany individuals think that any effort to solve the irreversible damage of human civilization on nature is overdue. This is due to the fact that this issue has lasted for several decades without any effective intervention. Simply put, over the course of history, civilizations have driven a large number of plants and animals to the verge of extinction for a host of reasons, whether to satisfy our personal gains such as collections or deforestation, or false rumours. For instance, during the past decade, a fabrication stating that rhino horns can cure almost every disease known to man, caused poachers to hunt down rhinos to collect their horns, meanwhile collectors would pay a fortune to gain access to these rumoured magical cures. Consequently, the number of rhinos drastically decreases, and despite any effort to preserve this endangered species, rhinos die out owing to the fact that the remaining specimens cannot mate and reproduce. Moreover, humans also cut down forests to make room for agriculture and construction sites, causing numerous species to lose their natural habitats. These are only a few examples of the harmful impacts of human activities on nature. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many solutions can be utilized to improve the situation. First of all, technology has been innovated in our time, and many of these innovations have the potential to enhance the natural habitats of plants and animals. In today’s world, scientists have developed numerous ways to protect and preserve, as well as replicate endangered species in laboratories and provide necessities for their growth after releasing them into the wild. For example, an extinct herb has been recreated and nurtured in an ideal atmosphere, and researchers would take special care to guarantee its flourishment after planting them on suitable grounds. Furthermore, nowadays awareness of society about the detrimental effects of human civilizations on natural life has been raised, so people are increasingly concerned with conserving organic living forms. Taking bears as an example, people in Vietnam used to hunt and kill bears to extract bear gall, however, this practice has gradually been abandoned thanks to the education of the government. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reason that leads individuals to believe that any measure to deal with the negative effects of humans on nature is overdue is that it has lasted for too long. Nevertheless, several methods can be taken into account to solve this situation, such as the application of technological innovations in conserving wildlife. From my point of view, human effects on wildlife can be reversed using technologies and raising social awareness about biodiversity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called the Facial Action Coding System lets computers know what expressions people really have. Most humans are able to do this without much thought but computers are just now catching up. The ability of FACS to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable, especially for online classes and assignments.\n\nFacial Action Coding System would let online colleges and schools know how their students react to lessons. For the most part, computers today do not use voice commands, so \"most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communicaiton. So computers need to understand that, too,\" states Dr. Huang. If the online lessons were very boring and students were falling asleep, the computer would recognize the students' emotions and later change the lesson. Humans as well as computers using this software use facial features and expressions to tell what students are feeling towards their schooling. Having FACS in computers would allow for a more customized learning experience.\n\nIn the classroom, online assignments tend to be very boring at times and could really use some student feedback. With the use of Facial Action Coding Systems, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,\" states Dr. Huang. If FACS were put into school computers, the software could recognize the students reaction and change the assignment for future classes without the teacher having to do change it themselves. This allows computers to have a more active role in student learning and gives teachers a break when it comes to reading their students expressions.\n\nThe new technology called Facial Action Coding System lets computers read students' expressions to modify lessions based on the individual. This could provide for a very immerisve learning environment and create much better oportunities for students later in life. The cost would be a little high for any changes to occur relatively soon but it is certainly an investment people would be willing to make to help our nation's education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is an argument that is not for the Driverless cars. Driverless cars are cars that would use half of the fuel today's cars use, and are more flexible than a bus. These cars are like cars on autopilot that drives themselves, but may require a person to take over and drive during some scenaries, like to manuever around accidents. There are already cars that drive themself but are not allowed in many states due to the high risk for safety.\n\nThe text states, \" Without the option of smarter roads, manufafcturers turned to smart cars- but how much smarter did the cars need to be?\" This quote is just a slight hint the cars would be very very expensive in many different ways, like buying one for ones own use, or even to build one let alone a lot of them. Then the text states this,\" For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors. Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensores, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" This is a quote from the text showing the different types of part the car will need just to allow it to drive itself without accidents, this shows it would be too expensive for normal everyday people to buy.\n\n\"So just how driverless will the cars be in the near future?\" This is a quote sited from the text that asks a really good question. Do the cars drive completely by themself or do people need to take control every now an then. The answer is they are not completely operating by itself, people need to stay aware of what is going on and watch the road just as the car is doing. This text proves my answer.\" In fact none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accfelerate, amd breake themselces, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the huan driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" This brings about many questions and arguements about driverless cars.\n\nThere is another good question, \" Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" This is a good question huh? It is, so what if a person decides to use their cell phone, because the cars are to drive themselves why not use their cell phone, right? The text says,\" Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\" Then is states,\" something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" This means that if they were to add in-car features and someone was not using them, instead he/she was on his or her cell phone, how would the car notify that the person needed to take over, this places a big safety concern.\n\nA counter arguement about the Driverless cars would be that the cars do lower the fuel usage, and are far more flexible than a bus. If the fuel is not being used up it would not immit as much gasses into the atmosphere, so it would be much better for the enviroment, but not so much on the safety of the people, which is a bigger concern to many people.\n\nThis concludes the arguement, I am not for the Driverless cars. There are many reasons for this statement. Cars are to expensive to build and or to buy for many people. Why drive a car that is supposed to driverless, when really you will need to drive it everynow and then. Why would you not drive a car that would need you to pay attention the whole time, why not just drive the car yourself, you may get bored just watching. I conclude my arguement stating that I am not for the Driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can a computer system percieve emotions of humans? The software that perseives the emotions of others has improved accurate descriptions of people. The Facial Action Coding System has percieved the emotions of Mona Lisa and has tryed to accuratly grade the percentage of each emoition from the picture. The program bases off of 6 basic emotions which fall in to more complicated catagories. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles no only expresses emotions, but also may help produce them.\n\nThe program is going off of the physical emtion but not the mental emotion the person is having. This flaws the percentages overall. Being another individual you can see what the persentages are and agree with them by looking at the picture in person. The mental emotion of someone may be a lot diffrent then what they are expressing physically.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System may be a bit flawed but has improved accuracy quite a lot. Even here is says, according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles no only expresses emotions, but also may help produce them. The system is very accurate when scanning others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe first photograph closely relates story As worry authors son suffs lot And shows friends look like Also shows surf boards emphasizing surfers That I believe first picture The second relate little cause surfer surfing So conclusion first photograph moreaccurate story second photo", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "first paragraph kind happy came living year happy I born living Simple house situated two family blondbricks building Ironbound section onhappy parents shares kitchens", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars would be useless, the reason that I think this is because \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldnt drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Most people( mostly teenagers) like to go joyriding with there friends or just drive around town to blow off some steam.\n\nAnother reason that I believe that driverless cars are a bad idea is because what is the user of the car falls asleep and doesnt awaken whenever the car alerts them that they need to take over in a potentially dangoures situation. \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nThis means the driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when there is a possibly dangours situation. These necessitates of the the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a problem occurs.\"\n\nAnother reason is that these vehicals could be extermly costly for the consumer's. All the technology that will be needed to be placed into this car will be costly not only for the company but will also be for the customers. There are also many problems with these cars considering that we do not have all the tech needed for them, Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that driverless cars should not be mass produced.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons that Luke joined and become a Seagoing Cowboy since there are so many of them I will tell you one of them.\n\nOne reason was because after World War II the UNRRA\n\nstarted hiring Seagoing Cowboys and Luke's friend Don Resit invited him to go on a boat cattle to go siteseeing in Europe Luke knew that this was a lifetime oppurtunity so he agreed to go with Don.After Luke aggreed to go with Don the heard that the UNRRA was hiring Seagoing Cowboy so Luke and Don signed up. Although it looked like a easy job it wasn't that easy on one rainy day Luked went up a ladder and slipped he fell that may not sound that horrible but turns out Luke ended up having cracked bones which caused him to miss some days from work. When Luke and Don were bored or wanted to waste some time they would play games such as baseball, volleyball, table tennis, boxing, and more things other then the things listed.\n\nThis may not sound cool to people who don't like animals, board games or sports, but to some peple it sounds like a dream job because you get to do something that you like wether its because they're with one of there friends and they get to be with animals. So if a young kid like me can do a giant prompt about a story that means think what a educated adult can do. This brings me to a end of my prompt just remember the things I said in the last sentence and don't forget to try new things like a job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, more and more people are listening to different types of music and that make a good effect on them. However, others believe that the new music is affecting in a bad way to the teenagers. This essay agrees that teenagers can be affected gloomily.\r\n\r\nThere are a lot of teenagers who are listening to different types of music in which they feel that the lyrics are related to what they feel or what they had. In particular, in rap there, a lot of people are doing that type of music to express their feelings. This essay agrees that teenagers are being affected negatively. As an example, the rappers are showing one part of the story and singing it which could affect the younger.\r\n\r\nHowever, many agree and feel that recent music can have a useful effect on the younger generation by helping them to focus and relax. Specifically, People are working while they are listening to music to concentrate more. For instance, the students are being affected by the culture that everyone is listening to music, and that makes them want to explore modern music.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people see that modern music can be a good thing for this generation to listen to, particularly to help them relax and express what they feel whitelist others believe that current music types are harming teenagers in a different way. However, we need to be careful to what we are listing because not everything is true and that should not affect us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I belive certain materials removed I belive people able freedom speech I also belive somebody something mind able say I ways tell peolple mean say say whay mean Now younger kids getting ahold magazines movies inpropriate material yes censored nt placed places younger kids get", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders many obstacals attempting allow dirigibles dock A thousandfoot dirigible top building held single cable tether would put stress buildings fam The steel frame building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Theese obstacals", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine sitting in your classroom listening to a lecture, then all of the sudden, your teacher finds out that you're bored by reading your feelings. Reading human emotions is now something that you can do in real life, not a science fiction novel. These reading systems could be used for many advances in the school system to improve education. Bring able to read students emotions in the classroom is a valuable tool for the instructor to have.\n\nFor as long as education has existed, children will get bored of learning because it can be too slow, too fast, or just not the right type of learning for them. According to paragraph six, it states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This technology could save time for teachers by recognizing when a student's focus has ben lost. The text also states, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Modifying a lesson could engage the students brain by tfiguring out their best learning style.\n\nIntroducing the Facial Action Coding System to schools can also help with deciding if a student is telling the truth or not. According to paragraph eight, it states, \"Faces don't lie, these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrit isn't being truthful.\" If a student is lying about something that has happened or something they have done, the FACS can read these lies. Picking up on lies is a useful tool for all types of schools. They could help reduce danger and violence in school systems.\n\nThe school system could also find use of this technology in the everyday technology classroom. This technology could aid students in learning about how our, rapidly growing, techological world works. According to the text, it states, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" Using the FACS in a technology classroom could influence students to join careers like computer programing, or the medical field. It also can help prepare other students for the type of technology that they will begin working with as finish school and become adults.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System should be implemented into school systems. The system should be in schools because they can aid students in the classroom and help give them the right learning style. The FACS also will help recuce violence by recognizing when a person lies. It can also give students insight on today's technology and future career choices that are opening up. The FACS is a helpful tool that needs to be put into the classroom for students and teacher's aid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing use computers bad society With people getting less exercise enjoying nature less interactions world bad good Almost everyone computer gets used taking away great time go active outside First exercise important part day happening less less kids sitting infront computers day long There much talk days fatest country Well one main causes almost everyone stairing blankly computer screen instead active Computers big problem cause laziness occure often miss favorite show look online find Or project look online find enough information click awaySecond enjoying nature scarse thing All search online could find picture front yard much less people outside Because needs go outside could chatting friend looking new technology People always computer CAPS care enviorment much wasting electricity fun internet place There lot less people going places needs go look pictures It s taking away thrills poeple used going places getting house seeing parts world far away first hand instead computer Third less interactions personaly well everyone Kids text facebook chat talk person friends loosing talking skills actually conversation Because online time think talk person nothing say CAPS think full talking potential People seeing eachother less less text talk computer think need see eachother ok talk internet Friends family start know less CAPS see emotion computer Also say learn someone minutes playing minutes talking With case friends make friends without even knowing person full understanding Lastly computers good everyone becoming unhealthy With people getting less exercise enjoying nature much less interactions people wasting time infront computer screen getting fat rather going outside people passing baseball There many better ways people could spend time infront computer Why CAPS see", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some reasons why you should join the seagoing cowboy program and how you join the program and what you have to do while you are there. You will be going to other places helping people and help others like animal like from a war or something like that.\n\nThe reason we want you to join because if you like to helping people you are going to help people too. Like if they are in the hostpitol you can help them or if they are out their then you can help them by telling them whats wrong and will maybe be tell you something like if they got hurt or maybe not but you can try your best to tell them whats wrong.\n\nAnother reason why we want you to join is that if you like animals then you can help animals like Horses, young Cows, and Mules we really want earth to be a happy place and that. We want animals to stay alive becasuse if we wouldn't have animals we wouldn't have any protien in our bodys and we wounldn't be as strong as usually.\n\nAlso if you join the program you will be going on trips like to China, and Europe so if you like to go trips and helping people and helping animals you can join this program.\n\nSo if you like this program you can join and you can change the world. You can also save someones life and you can help over thousands of people that were in a war.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I waited game I couldnt get yet So I asked mom buy new game much cause dollars said wait days went I finally asked mom buy said well yet I said thank Then next morning went game store I saw game I wanted I told mom went counter bought game", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The era of globalisation has made nations around to globe to become interdependent in terms of politics, education, medicine especially international trade and culture exchange. Many regard that the rise in economic and traditional diversity of one nation possess beneficial impacts upon others. However, some object to this idea because of the visible possibility that indigenous values may be perished. \r\n\r\n To begin with, numerous developing countries have been experiencing a rise in employment opportunity and a massive economic gains with regard to globalisation. The modern business has now found its capability to approach customers of oversea countries. To clearly explain this, companies possess a greater chance to have their products increased in sales numbers and to modify their items to become more approachable and more versatile. Furthermore, the cultural relationships among countries allow employees to go abroad and learn more new things about their neighbours. For example, the Americans usually take trips to Vietnam to experience a wide variety of exclusive foods and learn about the history of their past rival. These people exploit this prospect to improve their foreign foods’ quality, especially Pho and to enhance USA’s historical educational quality.\r\n\r\n However wonderful the advantages may be, foreign policies may terminate a country’s exclusiveness. Globalization has provided a more diverse world in terms of culture’s quantity. One culture may become dominating and make others disappear. Once the culture of a region completely vanishes, it will reverse the merits which globalization evokes. For instance, if Vietnam’s indigenous food like Pho disappears, the amount of international tourists will disappear. Therefore, the tourism industry in Vietnam will fall into chaos and thereby downgrading the whole economic system.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, though globalisation may benefit countries in terms of the economy, those countries, neglecting its policies about such progress might one day disappear completely off the world map. From my own experience, it is up to every individual’s awareness to not only keeps their identity but also encourages national growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robot cars or driverless cars should not be developed. The development of thes cars can lead to many negative influences. Such as lacking or lazieness, wrecks, a lot of money and could be hacked. Driverless cars to many people is a thumbs down.\n\nThere are many different things that the humans just phiscally need to do and driving is one of them. The development of cars that can get you from point a to point b is already good enough. Most teenagers and adults like the thought of them being able to drive phsically and mentally. It would get boring after awhile because you would just be sittting there the whole entire time not incontrol of anything. There has been way to many technology objects that has been created which has been proven to make the human generation lazy. Creating safer transportation is positive and should be the direction cars should be leading towards. Driverless car may sound a little cool, but could lead to many dangerous harm.\n\nThe dangers of a car driving itself isn't so safe. There could be many malfuntions that could create car crashes. Many malfuntions could happen such as not braking in time, string uncontrolably, elctrical explosions, or maye even if the car accelerates when it's not needed. Teenagers could sitting in one on the road texting and not paying attention while the vechile is heading towards a tree or a person. The danger zones of driving will rise even more. Technology with other minor things is already expensive, hard telling how much these cars would cost.\n\nCars already are very expensive to buy now, so what could make these cars easy to produce and sell? People just need to learn how to drive and enjoy it. the safty of the driverless cars isn't asured to the public and can make tragities. With all the new technology what couldn't stop a hacker hacking into your cars computer base. And then you have automakes and driver problems in who would accident fault would be on. this driverless car inventing process should just be stopped.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers negitive affect people connect others always computer never outside My first reason computers hurt eyes long time sitting People I know complained eyes hurting using computer Studys show taht people use computer long time likly loose eye sight people outside day Another one reasons people inside electronics day less likly good people skills If nt good people skills probibly wont alot friends need would probibly computer And never know could like Also inside day get proper excersize could bad others My third final reason people makes fun sit inside day nt come computer If ar computer likly fail school nt homework projects instead computer playing games And likly get fights parents guardians computer never see hear Also wont able go online pay bills witch could bad everyone So reasons I think computers could bad Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I get done mom computer I needed computer She told would minutes So I waited I decided watch episode spongebob I waited As episode ended I went back computer She still wasnt done So I made bagel bites pizza mini bagel I ate I got I started getting full But I kept eating I ate ate I really hungry I finally got stuffed I decided stop I went check see mom finally done yet yet wasnt I went outside go play sports friends We got tired eventually went home As I walked door I looked computer still use I went go take bath baths soothing I took warm soothing I got I went upstairs change I came downstairs surprisingly mom I went get came said time bed I woke early This took lot patience hard wait long", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author finishes spring time new beginning Since Saeng failed test wants start spring like flowers To know hibiscus grow back though dying For spring come time start new babies born flowers blom new beggening forming", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart illustrates how a cutting tools were changed a million decades ago. Tool A and tool B are related to different year periods, 1.4 million years ago and 0.8 years ago, respectively.\nOverall, there were some significant developments made over a 0.6 million year period in the width and thickness of tools, with the latter becoming thinner. The hight of tools did not change at all.\nAnalyzing tool A, it is seen that it was a massive, not very precise edge-tool. According to the age in which such prickers were made, it becomes clear that the stone was the most common material of almost all things. The stones need to be sharper for good cutting ability, that is why the front, side and back of tool resemble a triangular shape.\nIn contrast, tool B was expanded, especially it's front and back sides. Analyzing the side view, the cutting tool became much thinner compared to the tool A.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many companies, nowadays, must increase their sales, so they are increasing the number of advertisements in order to compete with other companies. This brings both positive and negative effects on customers, therefore government should have methods to lessen this problem which discuss in this essay.\nIncreasing in a number of advertisements from many companies can cause advantages and disadvantages to customers. For the former, people will get more information about product that they want to buy and can compare about their costs, function and services after selling. this can help them to choose the products which suitable for them. However, for the latter, a large number of advertisements may annoy people when they watch main television programs. In addition, those advertisements may attract people to need to buy the product that are not necessary for them. Moreover, when companies spend their budget on advertising, they also set higher price on their products. This leads people to lose their money more over.\nThere are many means to solve this problem. First of all, governments should control the quality and the numbers of advertisements. They should allow only advertisements showing fact information and control the number of broadcasting per day in order to help people to get real information for decision to buy products and less annoying them. Additionally, people should be permitted to decide that they will watch or reject those advertisements by skipping those are not interesting.\nIn conclusion, a large number of advertisements cause benefits and drawbacks to customers which they can get more information, while they may be annoyed and spend more money by not necessary. Therefore, governments should control quality and the number of them and permit people to skip some advertisements to help people from disturbing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there has been a discussion about whether the art subject is necessary for school children or not. Although many people oppose the suggestion of having art as one of the subjects at school also, many people support this. However, in my opinion, like other subjects art subject is also important for the students to learn. This essay will examine both sides of the views in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, many people believe that studying art subject help the students to learn about the vast heritage and culture of the nation they belong. To put it in other words, many people strongly agree that, nowadays children are lacking morals because of the unawareness of cultural values so, learning art subjects at school is necessary to alleviate this issue. For example, juvenile crimes are inclining because of the mentioned reason and this had been proved by the study conducted by Punjab University in India in 2018. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary, few others completely believe that learning other subjects like science and maths will be more useful for the children in the future. This is because of advancements in technology and people blindly think that only technically skilled graduates will be getting better paying job opportunities. Due to this mentality, people reckon that studying art subjects are unnecessary for school children. \r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, people should realize the importance of all subjects and the values this carry in student's future. In my viewpoint, studying art subjects at school are really beneficial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator, I strongly disagree with the Electoral College. In my opinion, it is extremely unfair to voters. Candidates don't even spend time in the states they know they have no chance of winning because of the winner-take-all system. They only focus on the tight races in the \"swing\" states, which isn't very fair at all.\n\nAlso, it is outdated. We need something new, something way better. Not all of the states even seen the candidates at all and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. And to me, that isn't very good at all. They all should be able to see the candidates and all the media markets should be able to see a campaign ad.\n\nThe article \"The Indefensible Electoral College; Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" written by Bradford Plumer, he states that \"The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best.\" I agree with Bob Dole! Abolish the electoral college! It's unfair, outdated, and even irrational. In my opinion, there is absolutely nothing good about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe in aliens? Well if so you are wrong. There has never been a form of any kind of alien found. If they really do exist don't you think we have found them by now? The technology we have now in days is very advanced and most likely we would have found them by now. You scientist at Nasa believe that there was an ancient civilization on Mars from these aliens and what they supposeply created. Not too many people agree with Nasa.\n\nYou scientist at Nasa have found what is called the \"Face on Mars\" and believe it to look like a face.Nasa has shared these photos and has caused a lot of attention towards Mars. The \"Face on Mars\" has become a pop icon. It has appeared in Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows and even haunted grocery store checkout lines! People shared their opinions on if they really thought aliens could have done this, but it turned out Nasa was wrong. The \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform.\n\nNow all of you scientist at Nasa might be dissapointed that there are no such things as aliens, but what brought you to this conclusion in the first place? There has never been a form of any kind of evidence that aliens are real so why say aliens caused the \"Face on Mars\"? Just making sure that all you scientist are updated at Nasa by saying the \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform. Thank you for the concern, but quite frankly you are wrong. If any more questions about the \"Face on Mars\" there is a whole lot of evidence that there are no such things as aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just like Luke, you can participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program for free!\n\nWhat does this program do, you might ask? Well we're here to tell you just what it is, and why you should join it!\n\nWe're part of the \"United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaion Administration,\" or in shorter terms, the UNRRA.\n\nWe have worked together to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. All together we are 44 nations. But helping others isn't the only benefit, you get to see sights you've never seen before.\n\nEveryone has the benefit of seeing atleast one country. Last year, our group had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. They also got to ride the gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Our group also got to see an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on their way to China.\n\nThere isn't only helping people and seeing sites, you actually get to travel the high seas. However, this might be the hardest part. The groups were always busy and it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. The part that had to be the most challenging for some members were caring for the animals during the crossings.\n\nThere are also fun times on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Usually we play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals are housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure for some people. For most of our groups, it opened up the world to them. They stated that they were \"grateful for the opporunity, and that it made them more aware of people of ther countries and their needs.\"\n\nIn conclusion, that is why you should join our Seagoing Cowboys program. Thank you for listening, and we hope to see you in the future!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people say that there is evidence that a face has been found on mars. In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it tells us some facts about the face that was discovered. I don't think the face they found on mars is really a human face, but other people may disagree, it is just what you believe. Maybe it's real or maybe it's not? We can only find out by studies.\n\nIn the article in section two it tells us what it could possibly be false \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" That fact that is from the article says reasons why and why not it could be true. The part that makes it seem true is when it said \"Only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh\" that could mean something but can't it just be a natural landform?\n\nOne reason why i don't think it's true is because people had no way to get up to mars in that time. How could they possibly get up there without haviing to get a space ship to go into to mars, and I'm sure they were expincive how could they have paid to get up there? They say it's a possibility that it could be a alien aircraft, but after studies it showed that it wasn't. So what could it be?\n\n\"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyrimids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This sentence from the articile shows us that maybe the evidence they find could be real, but again could it not just be natural landform? There are many things found that people believe that could be hundreds and thousands of things, but we don't know for sure until after studies are done.\n\nThis article has many thing to make us see that it could be true, but it has things to make us believe that it's not. Maybe all those thing could be natural landform, because people today can't land where they were found how could poeple back then have done it? We may never know the truth about what it is, only studies is what makes us believe many people go by \"I won't believe it until I\n\nsee it\" Those people will probably not think it's true until they see it down on earth with all the evidence. Maybe one day we can find out the truth about what it really is!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robotic technology is relatively new in our life. As we can imagine, this science will be developed more in the future. However, it has already started to replace some people's positions. Is it possible for all jobs will be done by AI robots? In my opinion, lots of professions could be done by them. \r\n\r\nPhysical work could be done by robots because they design for human needs. For example, a small engine could help a surgeon to doctor or a strong one could work instead of a human. They don't get tired or sick. In addition, they would protect people from dangerous situations. For instance, harmful weather conditions such as oxygen level or temperature don't bother them, and even if they them affect, they could be repaired.\r\n\r\nIn the contrast, there are lots of careers that they can not do. Robots don't have emotions or ethical values. They act like how they codded. For example, if you give a couple of pictures to AI and ask for a new one, it would create an art piece but without any inputs, it can not do. It's same for the music or other kinds of art. Moreover, society always needs psychological help or communication. Again robots can not meet these needs, at least not in close future.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, robots could do some people's jobs. Mostly, robots would serve people and do this job instead of them. However, they can not work in any sector. Many jobs need ethical values and emotions so, they can not replace humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Various technological advancements have been made in past couple decades that have turned the human life around. Many of which have been for the better of humanity. It does not come as a surprise to discover a new software with the ability to read human emotions has been developed. This new software, called thr Facial Action Coding System, utilizes all 44 major muscles in the human face to interpret emotions. Many have argued whether this software is valuable in reading the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. In my opinion, this software would be incredibly valuable in classrooms all around the world. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom allows teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans, aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education, and will eventually bring change to school systems for the better.\n\nThe use of this technology will allow teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans. No matter how clever a teacher's lesson plan can be, it all comes down to whether their teaching strategies benefit the students or not. As a teacher, it is difficult to attempt to understand how the students' feel about they way you teach. If this technology became available to teachers, they would be able to gain a better understanding of their students emotions, strengths, and weaknesses. Dr. Huang, proffessor at the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, argues \"'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication...So computers need to understand that, too.'\" Just like Dr. Huang explains, the majority of human communication is nonverbal. For this reason, teachers are not aware of how their students are feeling most of the time. If this new software was utilized in a classroom, the program could interpret the students' emotions, therefore producing helpful feedback for the teacher. To sum up, utilizing this form of technology will help teachers better understand how the students feel about their lesson plans.\n\nWhen teachers are aware of how their students feel, their lesson plans and the way they teach will change as an effect. If a certain teaching style shows students are not enjoying the class, the teacher will then adjust his/her lessons in order to better capture their students' attention. When explaining how his technology works, Dr. Huang predicts, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" Similar to what Dr. Huang describes, I believe being aware of the students' emotions can be extremely helpful in schools and to teachers. Modifying lesson plans can inspire students to stay on task, work hard on the work they are given, and enjoy the learning process. Allowing this new technology to be available in classrooms aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education.\n\nThis new software could potentially bring new change to whole school systems. If the program finds that a school's learning environment is what is hurting the students' education, new change could come about. Learning how students' truly feel about the school's environment could also result in school officials to feel empathy. Empathy, the ability to feel someone else's emotional state, can happen when we \"unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" (paragraph 9) School officials could study the muscles involved in creating emotions and then spend time with the students in the school they help run. In other words, school officials would have the ability to feel empathy for the students, therefore bringing forth new change in the school systems. This new technology with the capability to read emotions will eventually bring change to school systems for the better.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Action Coding System, is a brand new technology that can read the emotional expressions of students. Many have claimed this new software could be potentially utilized to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. On the other hands, many others believe the ability of this technology is not valuable. In my opinion, this software would be incredibly valuable in classrooms all around the world. The use of this new software allows teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans, aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education, and will eventually bring change to school systems for the better. Next time you come across a new technological advancements, think about how it will benefit the people around you. If it is something that could be very helpful, support it and help it succeed so positive change can begin to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers benefit society Computers help hand eye cordination make easy learn different places allow people talk video chat Computers teach hand eye cordination typing eventually get good dont ever look keyboard search anything internet want learn country search find new things never knew Maybe want go vaction another country ca nt decide country go go computer look tourist attractions countrys decide want go If vaction live different place want see video chat computer Those reasons I think computers benifit society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting could affect cyclist In case effect cyclist According text Sometimes life feel cruel This good example knew road going rough going mph So features setting effect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author includes exccept end meaning reason Saeng hibiscus symbolizes everything home past comfort Saeng feels flower bloom Which enable get used new home retake test It also resembles hope plant make winter bloom spring The author used connect feelings Saeng realistics flower bloomability", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local people using computers years But good health Were thinking power teens internet If need info We lots great books If need communication phones We need go outside exercise computer another reason america becoming obese First teens harmful stuff internet others People invented facebook myspace Almost every teen america facebook Did know theres cyberbullying People humiliated others internet How know person talking heshe say s heshe Teens give away much info gone missing action The internet powerful weapon teens handle kind power Next although computer convient device true something called books We cant believe everything said computer We get need books People lived middle ages without computers books Why Have grown lazy thing get look book Finaly communication seek simple text call go trouble turning opening pages chat online We become lazy device s need homes sure good thing dont forget bad one It seems like computer another reason america growing obese We need get walk hang friends sports But adicted computers It s like powerful drug To conclude I think computers good us Teens power facebook Fake dangerous info book Lastly health At point I ask computer worth everything think No", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, most students learn many school subjects, not only academic topics like math or language but also non-academic, such as science food and how to prepare it. However, not least have their opinion that students should spend more time on important subjects, particularly academic matters. I believe academic and non-academic subjects should be balanced, and this essay will explain both views.\nHuman brain development makes our kids learn many things in the early phase. Therefore, most elementary students have already learned math or non-native languages, which differs from the past 10 or 20 years ago. Also, they learn subjects unrelated to academics, for instance, science food and how to prepare it. These things are important to them, as they have the knowledge to choose healthy food and prepare it properly, cooked or uncooked. Another reason students should learn about this is that they currently love junk food the most for their daily meals, which is not a good fact for the next generation to have a long life.\nNevertheless, the knowledge of academic subjects should be learned in line with non-academic ones. The main reason is that it will be their foundation for a successful business or career. Without this knowledge, although they have an adequate understanding of the non-academic matter, they will find it hard to compete with other business competitors or candidates in any job recruitment. Eventually, with a long life and a good business or career, they will have a wealthy life ahead and, indeed, their life positively impacts others.\nTo conclude, students with a balanced knowledge of academic and non-academic subjects will have a bright future with a healthy and wealthy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI wrote this letter to tell you we should keep the electoral college process. I know you must get hundredths of letters everyday about this,but it is a very important topic to discuss. We did it this way every since the founding fathers created it. Most people wouldnt understand that,but this is a process on witch are nation grow up on learning. Its kind of amazing that we still remeber this way,and still continue to use it. This is just one of the reasons that have yet to come.\n\nAlso,wouldnt it be diffucult to just change the system out of thin air,think about it. You also have to think about the people who disagree with changing the system. People can stop voting if they dont like the system. If nobody votes,then are country cant move fourth into the future,and if that happens the USA mint have a civil war. From a diffrent stand point it mint not be a bad thing to get a new system. This is just another reason why we shouldnt change the system of voting.\n\nThe system we have now works,so what will be the point of changing something if it is not broken. The system we have now makes sure not one man has more power than the next man or woman. Think about the improving we have done to the current system,before blacks even couldnt vote into they improved the system. Back then their were alot of errors and stuff wrong with the process into they started improving. Now,why would you want to throw all that hard work away. This is just another why another why we shouldnt get rid of the current voting system.\n\nWe even made amedements to help enchance the system,without these amedments the power will be uneven. For instance if they didnt make a amedement to stop slavery then,blacks wouldnt even be able to vote. How bout they didnt make a amendment to give girls the right to vote then the power will still be shifted. You also cant forget how many people fought to make the power equal. If the power is shifted in the tighest a civil war can break out,and ruin what we worked so hard to protect. This was the last reason why we shouldnt chang the system.\n\nAll in all my letter was about how we shouldnt change the current system we have now. If we do all that hard work will go to waste. We spent so many years perfecting the system. Many people have fought to keep power in check bewteen people. If we made a new system it mint be worse then the system we have. That is why we shouldnt change the system.\n\nsincerly,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest the studuing of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.In the story the author put out information on the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable.The author had put information in the article about striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value.The author expresses his feeling on the topic by writing our tavels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nIn the story the author stated human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Due to the fact that Venus may well once have been the most Earth-like planet. I believe our curiosity will make us strive to explore Venus.Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours it would be untouchable by human we couldn't last a second on venus.\n\nOne of the dangers of Venus is its thick atmosphere of almost ninty seven percent carbon dioxide.Another danger of Venus is Venuses temperature.The atmospheric pressure is ninety times greater than the atmospheric pressure we deal with on Earth.The environment of Venus would crush a submarine accustomed for diving the deepest parts of our oceans.\n\nTo wrap it up Venusian geology and weather are highly dangerous and cause trouble to the probes seeking to land on its surface.The paragraphes before show that the author believes the exploration of Venus is worth it despite the danges Venus presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"If Venus is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing futher visits to its surface\"? That question is because astronomers are fascinated by Venus for the simple fact, it was a twin to eath.\n\nPeople want to know why Venus is worth it? All of this time,work, and effort researching it, yet some think to be useless. But what if something would happen to earth, and human life wer to go extinct because of it? I'm pretty sure someone wouldn't let that happen, so we'd have to transfer to the next planet that resembles to earth and could possibly change so that humans could adapt. In the text it says,\" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because the insight to be gained on the plant itself, but also because human curiosity will lead us into many intimidating endeavors\".\n\nIn my opinion I agree with the author on many levels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are a negative factor. As the author stated, having driverless cars will be in need of many new laws to compinsate for these new cars. These laws would cause more hassle for the people to have new laws put on these cars. These laws may cause problems for people who do not have these cars.\n\nSecondly, I believe that these new types of cars will need to have a new type of insurance. This would prove to be troublesome for insurance compines and for the people. The prices for this insurance would be expensive and hard to afford.\n\nFinally, the safety of people would be at a risk with these cars. If one of these new cars have a maunifunction in it's technology, it could drive off the road, hit another tdriver, or even kill someone because of it. The manufatures could make a mistake in the programing and it would be a deadly killing machine on the road.\n\nThe best safety on the road is cause form aware drivers not aware technology. A perosn could make a better prediction on to where to stop then any driverless cars. Driverless cars are a negative impact on the road and to people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus paragraph conveys theme story adjusting changed life So many things changed Saeng hasnt full adjusted yet way life Yet learns needs determined adapt survive like Hibiscus The text states In spring hibiscus budding The hibiscus teaches Saeng never give like hibiscus doesnt give survives winter She learns determined even though failed test first time memories helped going go These ideas last paragraph summarize idea giving even feel place She slowly gotten used new place recognizes seasons thinks last thought", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, all we know is that environmental problems and housing has been increasing around the world. Many people claim that governing bodies have to focus on problems of the environment and increase housing to minimize excessive detrimental diseases. I partially agree with this viewpoint inasmuch as governments have to focus on these main global problems although I believe that governments should address other measures to prevent illness and disease instead of spending time on housing and environmental issues. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, these days, there have been increased problems with environmental pollution in this world. Due to the technological advancements in today’s world, the majority of people are keen on purchasing vehicles as much possible as they can and there heavy traffic jams can be soared. For example, if people are driving cars a lot it is more likely affect to the environment. Even though they produce exhaust fumes and increase vehicular emissions that contaminate the air so badly. As a result, many people suffer from several health disorders ranging from anxiety, and asthma to neurological disorders. Moreover, there are many housing problems that can be identified in recent times. Due to the rapid growth of the population and the destroying forests for construction. This will have a negative impact on nature. This is because governing bodies introduce new legislation on minimizing excessive car emissions and housing as well. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are myriad ways to alleviate acute issues in terms of health diseases. First and foremost, environmental pollution and housing problems are not the only causes of illness and disease but also poor nutrition, lack of exercise, and inadequate access to healthcare are all factors that can contribute to the development of widespread diseases. Therefore, governing bodies should focus on combating these issues in order to prevent disorders. For example, For example, the government can provide subsidies for healthy foods, create public spaces for physical activity, and increase access to healthcare services.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In all countries around the globe armed police personnel are common. However, the necessity of arming them is debatable. Some people claim that it leads to the unprecedented attack on common people and perhaps to state terrorism and violence, while I concur with the side of those who argue that it is essential to maintain law and order. The reasons are manifold for my support will be discussed in this essay. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I totally disagree with the notion that state terrorism is raising because of armed police officers. In fact, many people who believe this notion are not ready to understand the fact that the police department is directly controlled by the home department of government. And thus there are myriad public councils are working to strictly monitor the judicial use of these weapons by police officers. Additionally, these people often come with an example of some random police encounters with common people. Although these incidents are true, I believe these are mostly accidental and the police officers who are responsible for these also have been punished severely for their negligence. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the country's entire internal security management is under the control of the police department. In order to maintain these superiorly, they are in the need to develop some sort of fear among people. This fear in my opinion is healthy for the betterment of society. Furthermore, police and state security forces are the first-line workers who need to witness some dangerous situations. Despite their personal well-being, they work towards the welfare and security of the people. For example, recently one of the police inspectors in my neighbourhood was brutally attacked by some petty thieves during a situation when he tried to arrest them for shoplifting. This incident made me think in favour of armed police officers that if he was allowed to carry his weapon, he would have got prevented the attack. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, not only do armed police officers use their weapons to maintain law and order, but also for their self-protection. Therefore, I totally agree that arming police officers will never lead to state terrorism or violence, in fact, it prevents these.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Exploring Venus. Venus is sometime some called\"Evening Star\".Because it the one of the brightest points of lighht in the night time in the sky the venus nickname misleading since Venus is a actually a planet.Because first they dont know the Venus is a planet yet.In the solar system Venus is the second planet from the sun.\n\nFor the exploring The Venus is a very challenging place to examine second more closely than the sun. The Venus is the closest planet to the earth with the size and the density the Venus is occasionally the closest in distance to earth.In Planet the are this called the distance speed. The distance speed mean that sometimes people are close to other planet because Venus is sometimes around the corner.\n\nVenus is a challenge planet for human because in paragraph 2 it said no spaceship landed in the Venus in more than three decades already and they said it a challenging planet for the human spaceman to study around Venus. On the. planet the temperature average are over 800 degress fahrenheit and it pressure are 90 times greater than they experience in there own planet.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperatures of any planet in our solar system. what!!!! I thought the sun is hottest even the mercury is closer to the sun the Venus is like erupting like volcanoes like an earthquakes. The Venus mission both safe and scientifically productive.The (NASA) trying to to send human to Venus to study and at the thirty miles above the surface the tenperature would be 170 degrees Fahrenheit but it the same with the sea level on earth.\n\nTo explore the Venus planet many of the researcher are working on innovation the would allow the machines to last\n\nlong to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.NASA working on other approaches to studying Venus.The scientist figuring out how spaceship can land and human to survive in the planet called Venus.Some scientist looking back in the past to get the technology called mechanical computers . They were made in the 1800s and they play a really important role in the 1940s the played them during world war ll.\n\nThe technology computer are old but it still usefull till now because it device make calculations by using gears and levers and do not requires electronics at all it might be old it but usefull. The Venus need exploring because human curiosity will likely lead us into many intimidating endeavors. The travels on Earth should not be danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a lot of dispute about the electoral college, therefore causing much confusion. The president should be elected by popular vote only. This allows all voters to be treated equal, avoid untrsutworthhy electors and everyone will be given the same amount of knowledge about the campaigns.\n\nThe electoral college creates an unfair set up for the voters. The winner-takes all system gives all the electors to the presidential candidate who won. This system disregards that the opposing candidate received any votes, because all the electors are given to the winner. This doesn't give a chance to the candidates whose party is not necessarily popular in that state. Candidates, therefore spend more time and money campaigning in states they know their party is popular in. According to Bradfor Plumer in 2000, 25 of the largest media markets did not see a campaign ad, because they lived in one of the seventeen states that had no campaigning. Some candiates don't even campaign in some states based on this. According to an excerpt from\n\nMother Jones by Bradford Plumer most candidates focus on the \"swing\" states where it is close competiton. In the case of tie in the electoral vote, the house of reprensentatives vote. This means one vote represents the whole state. How is that fair for a state like Wyoming that has 500,000 voters?\n\nAnother popular dilema of the electoral college is untrustworthy electors. The electors are chosen in different ways. According to Bradford Palmer in 1960 there was a problemwith the Louisiana legistlature choosing bias electors. Segregationists wanted to be rid the democratic electors and replace them with electors who would not vote for John F. Kennedy. In another case, there has been a history of electors voting for whom they want instead of their party's vote.\n\nVoters often are not update onall the campaigns due to the unfairness of the electoral vote. There's no doubt that the electoral college is a confusing subject, but this often creates confusion in the ballot box too. There has been times when voters have casted votes for the wrong candidate. The voters know about the presidential candidate not the elector. States often do not get the same level of campaigning as eachother. According to\n\nSlate Magazine a larger state gets more attention from the presidential candidates than a smaller state does. Over 60 percent of citizens who vote would like a direct election instead of the kind we have now, says Bradford Palmer.\n\nThe electoral college has caused enough confusion in its lifetime. The United States should change to using only the popular vote to allow all the voters to be created equal, avoid untrustworthy electors, and everyone will be given the same amount of knowledge. This will prevent bias people and a more knowledgable campaign.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast builders obstacles attempting allow dirigibles blimps dock First needed suitable landing area Mooring Mast But building mast The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Workers framed building way th floor But framing mast could take place roof completed Before advancing next stage project architects suddenly realized dangerous disasterous result could The Hindenburg set good example could nt The area around building densely populated The dirigible strong chance resulting disaster New York City considering violent air currents The project simply risky great idea involving future transportation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undoubtedly the case that urban areas around the world increasingly suffer from congestion. In this essay, I examine the reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies the authorities could implement to reduce the level of traffic in our cities.\r\n\r\nThe first step is to understand why traffic has increased in towns and cities. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this. One is that cars have become more affordable for the average consumer, and they are no longer a luxury item, but something that most families expect to own. A second reason is that public transport has become increasingly unreliable in recent years, not least because many bus and train services have been reduced because of the difficulty in funding them. The third reason is that society has, in general, become more mobile and this means more people are prepared to commute to work by car than they were before.\r\n\r\nThere is almost certainly no one solution to this problem, given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to improve the reliability of public transport to encourage people to take the bus or the train rather than get in the car. It would also be possible to discourage people from driving to work by introducing special tariffs for using the roads, especially during peak periods. A successful example of this is the congestion charge scheme in London, which has certainly reduced the level of traffic in inner-city areas.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are a variety of different factors that have led to rising levels of traffic in urban areas. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution, any action should probably involve encouraging greater use of public transport and making it more expensive for the motorist to drive in urban areas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today in sevral countries becoming aware of history of the home place is getting noticeably popular among people. This trend has got its own couses and in this essay I am going to point out some of them and to give an idea about what can be done with being able to find out and spread information buildings and houses that people want to know.\r\n\r\nTo start with, I have to admit that this idea is complately personal and many people might be disagree with this notion. As I noticed, having interest for finging out the history of house or building is mainly occuring in Europ, America, UK or in Canada. However, when I looked at developing countries or countries which is experiencing war or difficult political situations have nothing in common with being interested in knowing building’s background. As an example I can present my own country, Uzbekistan. Here majority of population are trying to survive reather than being interested in cultural or historical background of place.\r\n\r\nFuther more, question comes to what people should do in order to find or search for needed information I have an idea which might be turned into a good start up business plan. However, it is easily said than being done. As we all know, nowadays, we have a lot of custemer service businesses. I think with the help of some experts like archiologists, chrnologists, historicans and definitely project managers we will be able to help persons or families to have precise data about about history of house and building. Because of many people do not have enough skills and knowlage to do this job by themselves , this type op sistematic service would benefit both scholars and coustemers equally.\r\n\r\nIn conculision, as said earlier curiocsty like being intersted in the background of building or house is a state of mind which has its own value aethetic ambitions. But if a mind is concerned about basic human needs in order to live there is no place for to seek your own truth through your history. However, ways to reserarch and investigate is not very simple though it can be reached if first stapes are taken.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a good idea. I believe that it has lots of uses. I believe it would be very beneficial to the classroom. I think it could have lots of diffrent applications as well. The military, CIA, and FBI could use this technology to see if someone is lying. The Government could use this technology as a facial recognicion system.\n\nThe classroom would benefit the most from this. As it said in the passage,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confuse or bored.\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I think that this would be so beneficial. I think that it would make it much more easier to learn on the computer. I have tried computer courses before and the classes were either very easy or very hard their was no inbetween. However, if the computer was able to see that I looked confused most of the time it could make the class slightly easier. It could also make the class harder if it felt that I wasnt that focused and hurried through the course.\n\nI think the military, FBI, and the CIA could benefit from this technology as well. As it said in the passage,\" to an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometims used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This computer software could allow us to interrogate people much more accurately. Instead of allowing a human to interrogate they can allow a computer to do it simpler and more accurately. The likelihood of falsly accusing someone or letting a criminal go would go down because the computer would be able to recognize the lies or other deception.\n\nThe software would be very helpful in the world of security. Every government building, bank, school, etc. could have a facial recognicion system inplace. This would make our lives much more secure and peaceful. This is because the computer would be able to process your face and make sure that you belong where you are trying to go. These would help with crime as well. Lets say a criminal is on the loose. He happens to walk by a business that has one of they by the door, the computer picks up his face and sends a warning to nearby police that this criminal has been spotted. The police are able to apprehend the criminal easily because of this machine.\n\nThis software has many uses throughout our day to day. Children will become smarter becasue the lesson is uniquely tailored to their learning speed and style. The military, FBI, and CIA could accurately interrogate criminals easier. Every building could have a facial recognition making it our lives much more secure. Overall this technology would make our children learn quicker, more effectively but also let them learn in a very safe and secure place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Necessity of FACS in Classrooms\n\nHumans communicate through the expression of their emotions. A person can hide his or her emotion to any extent, and if we do want to help we can't do anything because we don't know their true emotions. Technologies like the Facial Action Coding System which enables computers to identify the emotions of humans will allow us to understand the emotions of others. This technology created by Prof. Thomas Haung will not only allow us to create a stronger relationship, but also helps teachers to understand the emotions of their students. By using this technology, teachers will be able to recognize the emotions of their students and change the subject or planning of their teaching for student to learn effectively.\n\nTeacher and student relationship is very important when it comes to education. Students spends most of their times at school with their teachers. Which means whenever a problem occurs, students will most likely approach their teachers for help if they can't ask their parents for help. In order for students to be comfortable enough to\n\ntrust their teachers is that they must have a strong teach to student relationship. Being able to recognize how the student feels will help the teacher understand what is going on in the mind of the student. On paragraph 4, the author wrote \" By weighting the units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.\" FACS will recognize how the student feels about a situation, as a result this can help teachers to find solutions to the student's problems.\n\nAnother way FACS is valuable to students in a classroom is by determing the emotions of students in a class. Students in classes gets bored the majority of time because of the subject taught in class or how it is taught. Teachers don't know how to help the student because they can't recognize their emotions or thoughts. Imagine how helpful it will be for teachers to recognize how students feel about their class? When students gets bored, and the teachers identify this, teachers can change the course to adjust for the students. This is what Facial Action Coding System is invented for, to recoginize the emotions of humans. As mentioned in the article on paragraph 6, the author stated \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Using FACS will enable teachers to modify their lessons for students to enjoy the course.\n\nPeople who do not think FACS ( Facial Action Coding System) is not valuable in classroom may argue that computers cannot recognize the true emotions of students. On paragraph 3, the author wrote \" All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles...\" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness...\" The creator of FACS created the technology which recognize the six basic emotions which humans expresses the most. The 44 major muscles which is used for determining human emotions are seen active with the technology. The technology has the 44 major muscles to help determine the emotion of a human. The author also said \" Using imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" There is credible amount of evidence to prove that FACS can and does determine the emotions of humans.\n\nAs our society progresses, new technologies like the Facial Action Coding System are invented to help benefit the human race. In this case using FACS which recognizes the emotions of humans will help students and teachers in many ways. Emotions are what determines how others preceive what we're feeling. Knowing how a person feel can help us bond and create a stronger relationship, but sometimes we can't understand or see how a person truly feels based on their emotions. For this very reason, FACS is necessary and valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classoom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that there will be a lot of benefits of having driverless cars in the future, utilizing this invention could mean less human error on the roads, having those cars to be used as public transportation could be really convenient since everyone will have access to a form of transportation especially those who do not have a car to begin with, but driverless cars might be too reliable. Although this is all well and good, there are challenges and hurdles driverless cars will have in the community, safety will still be a concern to some people.\n\nIf by any chance driverless cars are widely used and completely implented to our civilization, new laws will be made involving the safety of people when in a driverless car and everyone completely abandoned the concept of driving manually.\n\nNow what if everything else fails and one day the driverless cars stopped working, no one will be able to get to their own destinations with ease, you will also never know when these machines will malfunction since they are completely automatic in terms of driving. Unless the issues are solved and driverless cars are safe and reliable enough, it should not be used by the community yet.\n\nThis technology is still new to us and poeple just started working on driverless cars. We as people should be a bit forgiving, and it is okay to give negative opinions about it. It just means those are the things they need to fix and it could help them improve driverless cars. I agree that a driver should be given an option for drivers to drive and use autopilot by simply giving us a feature of turning it on and off. I still do not have a good feeling of relying to machines completely, machines might be rarely making mistakes but they are far too unpredictable unlike having humans behind the wheel, which again, one of the reasons people have a concern about and requested laws and regulations from the government. In consluion, technology is great but it should not be controlling our way of life on a daily basis too much than necessary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article Making Mona Lisa Smile, the author explains how the Facial Action Coding System works. According to Thomas Huang and Nicu Sebe you can tell how people are felling through a computer. The computer can scan your face and tell you if you're happy or sad. This is very interesting considering not even humans can tell exactly how you feel, but a computer can. There would be very mixed emotions about this throughout the world. They use all 44 major muscles, movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\".\n\nIn the article they talked about putting this in schools. This could be very useful in many schools. If teachers knew how everyone felt by just looking off a computer screen it'd help them a lot. Most teachers can't tell how they feel all they can do is ask and students can easily lie. So if the Facial Action Coding System was programmed in all the computers in the school it'd be very helpful. In the article it says that it can even tell if they are faking emotions by the way the muscles move. You can even use this program to see the emotions off pictures and paintings which is insane.\n\nThis program could be very valuable in school classrooms. Teachers could tell if a student is undertanding it or not or if they are just bored or angry. This could help education a lot across the world. The longer they work on this the more emotions they could get the computer to scan. The teachers could see what interest the students and what students don't enjoy learning about.\n\nMost teachers go off of what most kids want to do and some kids just lie and say they want to do a certain thing so they look cool. This program could show what every kid in the class wants to do by scanning their face. Which is so valuable for teachers. This progam would give a chance for the teachers to get closer to each and every student in the class. The Facial Action Coding System would be very valuable in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that in order to end environmental issues, the state should raise the fuel's cost for all transportation modes. I strongly agree with that statement because cars and other vehicles are the major contributors to air pollution and society prefer to use their own vehicles to travel rather than using public transportation due to the cost-efficiency.\r\n\r\nMost of air and water pollutions are produced from substances emitted from cars and motorcycles. Those substances can be produced in a greater amount depending on the number of transportation modes wandering on the road. For example, a recent publication by Cambridge University stipulated that there are at least 80% of the pollution in the country are resulted from the usage of transportation modes.\r\n\r\nIn addition to the above, another reason why the government should consider to increase the money that needs to be spent by the citizens is the fact that they believe the cost of using private vehicles are far cheaper compared to use public transportations. Consequently, the amount of person who opts to use their private cars or motorbikes is greater than the citizen who prefers to use buses or trains in order to reduce their daily expense. For instance, a survey by the Indonesian Traffic Observer showing that there are at least 8 of 10 persons choose to travel to their office by using private transportation modes since the money they spend to buy the fuel for their vehicles are not so expensive than the price of the public transportation cost. Nevertheless, the government should also consider reducing the cost of public transportation to encourage society to use buses and trains.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the significant amount of environmental pollution is caused by the number of cars and motorcycles and the cost of fuel are cheaper than using public transportations. Therefore, I believe it would be prudent for the government to increase the price of fuel of cars and other transportation modes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the bar chart illustrates the average number of minutes in billions had been consumed by different types of call services, local, national /international, and mobiles in Australia from 2001 to 2008. Overall, local call minutes from 2001 to 2008 were the most common and consumed service compared to the other types of telephone calls in Australia, while the lowest amount is mobile with 2 billion minutes only in the year 2001 and started increasing dramatically with approximately 2000%.\nAccording to what is shown the local number in 2001 was 72 billion minutes. However, the number kept increasing till 2005 and reached the peak of 90 billion which was the highest number of minutes consumed, then in 2008, it dropped to 72 billion same as in 2001. According to the national/international number is growing significantly from 38 in 2001 to 61 billion minutes in 2008.\nMain while, the mobile service in 2001 consumed was only 2 billion then the service became more popular in 2005 and reach 12 billion, moreover, the number had been doubled in 2006 to 23 billion and raised sharply to 46 billion minutes in 2008 which is 44 billion minutes compared to 2001", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, pollution problem turns more serious. People are suggested that the policymaker should higher the price for fossil fuel used in private vehicles in hopes of lowering their consumption, whereas some set of people disagree. I total disagree with the reducing of the usage of resources in order to solve the environmental difficulty. \r\n\r\nFirstly, the method of rising the cost of private travelling can only make a little effect on nature protection. Since there are many other human activities, for example, the factories operation and aeroplane travelling, even emit more carbon dioxide and contaminated pollutants than driving a car. The government is better to form the regulations from other aspects instead of focusing on the pollutants producing from vehicles. The reducing demand for driving can only contribute to a small effort to solving the air pollution problem. Thus, rising the cost of personal transporting is relatively useless in achieving environmentally friendly development. \r\n\r\nSecondly, it is more effective for the government to carry out policies in pursuing sustainable national growth. By focusing on long-term development, the policymakers are recommended to explore new opportunities but not lowering people's quality of lives. There are some sources of alternatives, such as electronic car and renewable energy generation. All of these policies can safeguard the living standard of citizens. To strike a long-term sustainable achievement on natural protection, it is an ideal approach to look for new and high tech method on transportation. Thus, a new exploration of energy-saving is needed and serving as a more effective option to save the earth. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, considering the above-discussed points, it is evident that increasing the price of vehicles' fuel can only serve a little help on the environment. Unless the government make new changes, it is likely that we will not see any reduction in this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whether the public should be entitled to own a gun or not is a topic of heated debate. Some people advocate for this idea, whereas others do not. This essay will discuss both opinions, and explain why I agree with the latter/former. \r\n\r\nProponent of this idea believe that the government should allow the residents to possess in their houses for self-defense. On the one hand, in cases of suddenly finding a thief, people who do not have guns are likely to put themselves and their family in danger of getting killed, in the worst-case scenario. Especially, in some countries that have high crime rates, the states give citizens permission to use firearms so that they in order to protect themselves from accidents. However, if not, they may start protests causing some social instabilities.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, possessing guns is not necessarily a must in home as in certain situations, it is more of a threat for residents rather than saving them. Public safety still can be ensured through some other measures taken by the states such as increasing the number of police officers patrolling residential areas. Moreover, the government can impose stricter laws and punishments for those who break the rules. Those approaches can tackle concerns of ordinary citizens about dangerous crimes and protect them from terrible consequences of uncontrolled use of weapons. Especially, mass shootings in the USA recently are also the reasons/explain why we should raise objections in possessing firearms. Many cases of innocent people are killed, especially children, which emphasis/highlight the need to prohibit guns.\r\n\r\nin conclusion, private weapons is not necessarily a must in home. i personally believe that gun is just used by goverment to protect residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think wrong remove offensive non offensive books shelves library one two students like want see others reading Somethings ok reading learning although indeed offensive ok matrerials left shelves used good purpose learning fun It important readers exposed broad spectrum reading materials Not exposed materials clean normal introduced things foreign writing If took everyting shelves slight bit offensive completely suited readers would many books would keep peoples atention In conclusion I strongly believe materials left shelf These materials important learning cases keep readers attention Keep items shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you ever think of having of a car that drove itself at certain times?\n\nWell, Google cofunder Sergey Brin has , he envisoned a future with an public transportation system such as driverless cars. Some, say this invention wouldn't be reliabe and could cause possible danger, but me I personally think it would be a great idea. Simple reasons such as , lets say you had an issue in the car that\n\nyou needed to take care of but you couldn't\n\nbecause you were driving. A driverless car would be great for that situation , it would drive and let you take care of your probnlems. The car would also alert you whenever complicated traffic issues come, navagating through roadworks, and pulling in or out of driveways. Driverless cars could be very handy so here is a little about the making, and model of the cars that they are processing through now to make sure its safe for you and others to drive.\n\nDriverless are basically smart cars they have a spinning sensor on the rood which is the most important bit of technology in this system. In the article it stated that,\n\n\"The Dubbed LIDAR\n\nuses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surrondings.\" Every bit of technology used for this car is to help mimic the skill of a human being at wheel. The sensors can cause the car to appply the brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. This would allow better respones and control more than a human driver could mange alone. There is Imporvement on the sensors and computer hardware that is assiting the car to make it drive safe, and leading cars that can handle more , and driving tasks on their own.\n\nThe car can handle driving functions up to 25mph , they can steer, accelerate , and brake themselves, and still notfity the driver when the road ahead needs human skills to navigate through. Even, though you dont have to do all the drivign you should still remain alert just incase trouble comes along and you need to take over.\n\nThe car announces , or vibrates the seat when the car is in danger to notfiy the human , this would be very handy when your not paying attention and taking care of something that is important at the moment. There is talk of placing cameras to watch the driver while the driver is focused on the road. Dr. Werner Huber wanted something exciment for the car so he bringing in car-entertainment and information systems that use head up displays. This way the in-car system would be a safety feature.\n\nThe making of this car would finally be annouced after they make sure it is safe for the frives and passengers in the car. New laws would need to be made in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. The road for the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us , but we grow closer to the destination everyday.\n\nThis is why i feel driverless cars would possible come in handy in the future especially, with all of its handy features being added on day by day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First off I want to let you know that Electoral College is a process and not a place. It was established by the founding fathers. Process consists of the selection of the electors, the metings of the electors where they vote for president and Vice President. The electoral college consists of 538 electors and the majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The amount of members in its congressional delegation, \"one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two of your Senators\". The candidate that's running for president in your state has it's own group of electors. They're generally chosen by the candidate's political party but that state law varys on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. One of the best things about the Electoral College is that it's widely regarded as an anachronism and a non-democratic method of the selecting of a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes wins. it also requires a president candidate to have transregional appeal. Always remember \"voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, painting became extremely popular, especially among children. It is no wonder that young people like drawing because it occupied them all. However, there are some people who think that such arts are a distraction and wasting time. In this essay, I will try to discuss both sides of one coin and write my own opinion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, arts such as painting and drawing are the best way to express your fantasy, as we know human beings have super fantasies mostly in childhood. Moreover, drawing is an effective way to improve a child’s focus. That’s why in the majority of countries painting is an obligatory subject in schools. Even though these types of art seem not useful and boring, they will considerably rise the human creative mind. Also, recently Kazakhstan Today magazine has done a survey saying that people who are doing arts are happier rather than people who don’t.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, we are living in a modern and high-technology time. That means that exact science like math, chemic, geometry and physic more valuable. That is the reason why some people want their children to learn scientific stuff. Many of them believe that to get achievement person should have some exact professional skill. Take the Japanese as an example, most of them for hundreds of years are paying attention to real science still than the arts. As a result these days, they are one of the most developed countries in the world.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, both sides have a plethora of benefits. I personally think that in childhood arts are more important than an exact science and after growing up it is good to pay more attention to valuable for society subjects instead of creating art.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nThe face on Mars is a mysterious object Mainly because how it resembles a human face from the first picture in 1976 but that picture is outdated. One of the most recent picture taken in 2001 shows that the \"face\" is actually just a landform that appears on Earth and it is common in the American West. This landform is that appears commonly on Earth is known as a mesa. If the face on Mars was proof of an ancient civilization on Mars NASA would have better funding than it allredy has and there would be more exploration on Mars.\n\nAlthough the Face on Mars has become an icon in pop culture that dosen't change the fact that it is just a mesa and at that time the camera wasn't nearly as advanced as what we have now.\n\nThe combination of cameras that werent nearly as good as the cameras that we have now and the shadows that the image had on it made it look very similar to a human face when NASA first took a picture of the mesa. More current pictures show that what looks like a human face in one picture actually is an average land formation on our own planet. So in conclusion the Face on Mars is nothing more than a naturial land formation that can happen on Mars and Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wouldn't you want to always enjoy school and not be so bored all the time? What if youre computer could change your mood during school? In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", they talk about having a computer that knows your emotions during school. I believe this is a great idea because kids will enjoy coming to school, teachers would get more free time, and more kids would graduate.\n\nKids will enjoy coming to school if they had a computer that recongnized their mood. In the article it states, \"According to the \"Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion\", moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may produce them.\" If the computers made kids smile, it would lead to a happier school life. Maybe kids would actually want to come to school, which would bebfit everyone. It would lead to better attendance for the kids that like to skip days and a better enviroment for the kids that also have an unhappy life at home. Teachers would be happy too because everyone would be on the same lesson and not falling behind the others due to missing school.\n\nTeachers would get more free time if this came into place. The tecahers would just have to teach a quick lesson and the computer can modify the level of difficulty for each student to understand it more. In the text it states \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". This shows that tecahers aren't always good at telling the emotional of a child. If the child is very shy, no one will know if he understands it or not. A computer would be able to detect him being confused and modify itself so he can understand it better. Even though a shy kid normally doesn't ask questions, less questions would still be asked because the kids understand what their doing. This leaves the teacher with more free time to grade their papers or put in grades.\n\nMore kids would graduate if a computer could modify itslef to help the kid understand something better. In the article it states, \"A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructure\". This could benefit a tremendous amount of kids. If a girl can't understand what she is supposed to do by a set of instuctions, the computer could modify the instuctions so she can comprehend them.\n\nThis idea of compters being able to detect a kids emotions would be a great benefit. It would over help everyone out with their school life. They say that being happy can benefit the way you work too, so if you could be happy while you work, it would also benefit you. I believe this is a great idea because kids will enjoy coming to school, teachers would get more free time, and more kids would graduate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that these cars shouldn't be allowed because It gives the people behind the wheel a chance to get their phones out. If the car can run by itself and move then the people most likely wouldn't pay attention to what is going on. My point on the driverless cars is that they are good in one way and bad in others.\n\nIf the cars have cameras on the back end of the car and on the front then the driver could see whats behind him if he wasn't paying attention. Since crashes don't happen as often with these new cars then others behind the wheel is safe and many won't be getting hurt. Most of our laws want to keep drivers, passengers ,and kids safe while in the vehicle. In some states it is illegal to test computer-driven cars. They have to be proven that these cars are safe before allowing them on the roads.\n\nThe car is also known to alert the driver when they are needed to get through work areas, places the car can't control on its own without driver assistance.\n\nThe driver must remain alert when they come into a situation that the car can't do on its own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The founding father's wanted a good amount of power to the people so the president wont have full control over the country. With the electoral collage in act it will give less power to the people, gives more power to the electors, and the disaster factor.\n\nThe electoral collage gives less power to the people. This is true because the people have to vote for a elector instead of the president himself. People may get confuse on who is voteing for who. Ultimately the only types of votes that actually matter end up being the electors votes. Sometimes \"faithless\" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please. This makes the peoples votes almost worthless.\n\nElectoral collage gives more power to the electors. The founding father wanted to give power to all the people; not small groups of them. Stae legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. This means the electors have the vote not the people. When the actual people vote they basically fliped a coin hopeing that some person they don't know voted for the right guy. The electors vote is what matters; not the peoples.\n\nThe single best argument against the electoral collage is what we might call the disastor factor. The 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. State legislatures pick the electors, and these electors can disregaurd the people's votes and pick who ever they want. Back in 1960, segregationists in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe electoral collage system is a bad idea because it gives less power to the people, gives more to the electors, and it is a disaster factor.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, university schooling is available to every individual who wishes to make a prosperous career. Despite that, people still consider that opting for job straight after secondary education is more beneficial. Similarly, I believe that securing job after school is a more viable option these days.\n\nHowever, a large section of our society still gives preference to higher learning as it provides a better salary and a chance to become a researcher or scientist. As per the World Economic Forum report of 2016, people with graduation or post-graduation tend to secure a high paying work as compared to a high school pass-out. Even the standard of living was far higher for people with a degree, and the chances of doing research were also high. Most of the scientific breakthroughs are made by people with higher study: Abhijeet Banerjee was a graduate of Harvard University who was given the noble prize in 2016 for his exceptional performance in economics. Thus, higher schooling is considered a way for moving up in the society.\n\nNevertheless, there are advocates for people going for jobs before college. It has become a common trend these days for people entering the workforce without a degree as it is considered useless by many people: in 2017, more than 46% of the unemployed in the United States were university graduates. This has created fear among people, and now more and more students are looking for jobs rather than going for research job which requires a degree. So, we are observing that work has become a priority for many people rather than studying in esteemed universities.\n\nEven, I also consider that we should opt for a job after secondary education as college learning is very expensive and requires hard-work. Everyone does not have the funds to support their study, therefore school learning is considered more than enough as it allows to earn livelihood. Universities require focus and determination, a lot of universities do research which is not a cup of tea for everyone. Therefore, a dramatic rise can be seen in the number of people entering the industry without a degree.\n\nTo summarize, there are advantages and disadvantages of college learning and people have different preferences, but high school is more beneficial as it saves money, and provides enough knowledge and skills to tackle problems in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Advances technology computers bad thing When computer company s make cool updates computer systems people want shut computer good thing As child spend time indoors online Computers take time away spending time outside exercising And affect crucial family time Computer advances bad country town Nowa days kids would much rather spend time computers outside This negative affect First important students see feel nature last time I checked computer Children need see animals smell sweet scent flowers feel breeze brush cheeks A second reason going outside important sun Even though sun harmful days still important health everyone spends time sun The computer takes times away nature unhealthy dangerous Computer also take precious time away exercise If people spend time computers exercise Everyone supposed get least minutes activity daily one ever spends much time working Also obesity numbers increased greatly since invention personal computer internet Obesity make life difficult people also lead disease Life computers lead less people exercising obesity rates increasing Another issue computers cause people spending less time families Family one important things world everyone spend hours daily family Plus encouregement family many students excel school sports gives graet selfconfidence Computers take time away something thw important everyone family Many people affected negatively computers The technology takes important time away children adults It takes time away outdoors exercising family Yes computers make life easier much negative affect positive one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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