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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Its three clock clock tells I cant go sleep I going fishing So its eight suppose seven grandma kept say hell I believe I little worriedNow its ten know Im furious I cry grandma said hell I said CAPS wont went room I realize well hereThen I heard door open I ran I ran said finnaly came ate I look outside seen boat Thats time I patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if we didn't have to drive anymore?\n\nWhat if the cars controlled themselves?\n\nWe wouldn't have to take the bus or a taxi anymore.\n\nIt can save us money by using less fuel.\n\nDriverless Cars would help out so many problems.\n\nThere wouldn't be as much accidents.\n\nBlind people or the disabled could finally get around places.\n\nGoogle has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditoins since 2009.\n\nThe person in the car would need to be alerted to pull into driveways or deal with complicated tracffic issues.\n\nThey built sensors and cameras all around the car so it could detect all the cars around it or when to stop and start.\n\nCompanies started with the idea of smarter roads.\n\nSmarter roads would help navigate the car with radio signals.\n\nThe idea would work very well just that it was to expensive to be practical.\n\nSo they decided to go with the idea of smarter cars.\n\nThey put sensors all over the car so and they also were able to update the software to make everything safer.\n\nThe \"driverless cars\" still needed a driver.\n\n\"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\"\n\nScientists tried to find a solution by adding alarm systems.\n\nThis would allow you to do what need or want to do and the car would alarm you until you take control over the wheel.\n\nSome states have laws that does not allow these driveless cars to drive in.\n\nThey believe that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\n\nManufacturers believe that more states will change the law after they see how safe this driverless car is.\n\nThere is still that question if there is an accident, whos fault is it?\n\nThe man driving or the manufacturer?\n\nAutomakers are still continuing this project in hopes of solving more problems in the future.\n\nTesla has created a car in 2016 that can drive on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\n\nThey plan to have a car to drive itself by 2020.\n\nSo close to getting to the destination.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The increase in population in metropolitan regions has raised the traffic problems for the public.The government constructed the roads without expecting the growth of municipal areas in many provinces . The public interests in using the private transport are a reason for the delays. Repairing the roads and encouraging citizens to use public transport are the solutions to resolve the issue.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nThe cars, motor vehicles and school buses are occupying the city roads, and in some cities the pathways are narrow. During the office hours all the vehicles are coming onto the streets at a time and leading to a traffic jam. People have to understand the reality of the situation and they should prefer the local buses and trams to reach their offices.Shocking facts are revealed in a survey that each family consists of more than two private vehicles in capitalist states.\r\n\r\n The government has to start thinking about improving the underground drainage system in metropolitan cities to avoid collisions. The signal lights should be placed at the intersection of the city centre. Expanding the dimensions of roads and completing the repair works on the highways is essential. Constructing new roadways each year is one method to address the transportation delays. For instance, In Delhi each year the transportation department is building nearly twenty streets.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, local municipality has to educate the people about the unnecessary usage of vans and other four wheelers. The ministry of transport has to monitor the condition of roads around the annual term.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is a bad idea, most people hide their emotions for a reason. Whether its struggle in class or things happening at home, they'll talk about it if the teacher can help but its best to keep those things to yourself and figure out how to deal with it or talk to a professional about those things. In some cases it may help, some people might become dimented or tormented by something on their mind and make rash discisions that harm themselves and others around them. The new technology would probably be very expensive and difficult to implament and gain the permission from parents and school officials who may be confused about it. Many schools are struggling with money and financial issues and there are far more important things to do and invest on rather than spending money on technology that may not even work 100% and only add on to problems.\n\nCan we actually \"calculate\" emotions like math or something? How can computers recognize facial movements humans use to express how we feel? Each human has their own smile and their own unique way of showing their emotions. How can a computer that doesn't have its own intelligence or will discern how a human actually feels? Humans can simply look at someone and tell how they are feeling on the surface but humans also hide things deep within their mind. Most people who trully hold someone dere and care about them can tell when a person is hiding something through more than just facial expressions and facial movements. They can tell how a person feels by the way they are speaking and the way they move their body or thourgh physical changes throughout their body.\n\nI think its nearly impossible for computers to access how a person feels at a moment, whether in class or physicalogical treatment. I believe that only humans and close companions can truly discern how a person is trully feeling, there's just something thats unique to certain people that people around them can feel. A certain atmosphere that people carry and only people close to them can truly understand. Not even specifically trained people can 100% judge how a person is feeling so how could a computer thats not living do it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Theres multiple things with the diverless car i agree with and things i disagree with. I think that developing the \"Traffic Jam Assist\" is a great and important idea. I agree That the cars can steer, accelrate, and break them selfs, but all are desighned to notify the driver when the road ahed requires human stills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. Because perhaps the smart car isnt as smart as it thinks it is, the car ahead of you collides with the on coming tafic on a green light when your smart car is going the speed limit. The car couldnt see what was happing infront of you but you can conrtol the breaks and call 911 to report it. If your smart car would have had all control it would of smashed through the other cars like a bullet, Causing you to be ingerd also. I also strongly agree with the driverless car because drivers tend to get tierd/bored of not driveing for a long period of time because, most people do get bored easy and not driveing can cause alot of bordom on a long road. It could cause the driver to fall asleep and not notice the danger infront of their faces. The text states \" Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" \"The psychological aspects of automan are really a challenge,\" admits Dr Werner Huber.\n\nI do infact disagree with the thought of manufactuers considering to use cameras to watch that divers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. I beleive that drivers desirve their privacy. Even if they are supposed to be driveing their not going to want someone/ something watching them the whole time. They could have really bad anxiety with they know that theres a camera on them the whole time and it could destract the driver.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many reasons paragraph included It shows flower emotionally encourage budding remind home This shown says a blossom two would blown well It reminds homeland It also show adapting new home geese flew saidshe realized many things thought strange become almost familiar now This shows adapting enjoying new life This final paragraph important shows life changing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Earth is the only plant that humans can stand ,talk,walk and breath on by your self with no help . haves 800 degree farenheit when lading from space while the perssure will be 90 times greater with the atmopheric .some peoole want to know is other plants save to vist .\n\nMars ,Venus are the close to earth neigboor from speed of time mars be closer to earth then others venues closer to earth . Veuns has the hottest landing point temperture in the solar system .veunes try living there your car woul be floating 30 20 feet above the floor .venus do have features as like earth rocky mountains valleys craters . some say we may can vist that plant soon.\n\nThe NASA has only one particularly compeliing to study whats beyond what people dont see or dont know for hummans can travel to other plants. earth the best to keep all living goods in things, poeple ,and creachers alive\n\nThats why its good for people to studdy about thinks an just do so they would know what they getting into .earth right now never sound back to me but earing an learing about differnt plants that maybe we might be able to vist in years is aswome to learn an hear about that its not just one plant we could live on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The downside of modernization and convenience is the increase in unhealthy lifestyles and poor eating habits. That can cause a variety of health issues. Some people suggest that the government should raise the tax on fattening foods in order to address these concerns. However, I disagree with this proposal.\r\n\r\nNowadays, the number of people who are overweight or even obese is on the rise. One of the reasons is supposed to derive from the fattening foods that are commonly known as “fast food,” such as French fries, soft drinks, and hamburgers. Besides, these foods are inexpensive and simple to obtain. They are also well-liked by a large number of consumers. These temptations make them unable to stop buying. As a result, they gain weight. However, the crucial reason for weight problems is unhealthy lifestyles. For example, people tend to spend numerous hours sitting when they use computers or smartphones for work or recreation, which can lead to a sedentary lifestyle. This will facilitate fat accumulation in their bodies, which is a source of different weight-related ailments, such as heart disease, diabetes, and obesity. If they have fast food with a reasonable portion combined with regular exercise, diseases related to weight will be decreased. Furthermore, educating people about a healthy diet and lifestyle through the media or in schools can help to reduce weight problems effectively. With the provided information, they will be aware of the pros and cons of the problem and can choose the best way to deal with it.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, increasing taxes on fattening foods can have a certain effect on the buying rate. However, the fast-food industry contributes a large proportion to the revenue and employment of a country. If this industry declines in production, the government may face various negative consequences.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the most effective way to limit weight problems is through a positive lifestyle and a proper perspective on dieting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The potential for the global media to shape the views of the today's youth is considerable. However, while some commentators think that the media has no place within secondary education, other analysts defend the idea that international news should be studied at school. In this essay, I shall examine a number of studies which show that both the view points, to some degree, are justified.\n\n\nTo begin with, the global media undoubtedly enriches teenager's understanding of contemporary affairs. This is because television reports provide a concise summary of international affairs. For example, a study showed that the media heavily influenced teenager's knowledge of contemporary affairs. Since any secondary school education is incomplete without an awareness of such events, it is therefore clear that media can play a vital role in assisting education.\nOn the other hand, many critics argue that teenagers are negatively affected by the global media's focus on war and civil unrest. This is because exposure to violence often leads to depression. For example, recent surveys have discovered that depressed teenagers usually cite the dismal state of the world as a source for their depression. Since, mental health is an important objective of secondary education, it is therefore questionable whether the study of international news wouldn't be a destructive and wasteful use of school resource.\nIn conclusion, it should be clear that there are reasons for and against the study of news at school. Thus if media studies are to enter the school in the future, schools will have to think about how the negative aspects of the news can be decreased, and positive aspects maximized.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is combustion vehicles. Some people believe that increase in fuel prices can reduce carbon emission from transportation. On the other hand, others argue that it will increase the release of greenhouse gases and it does no good of the environment. As such, there are both merits and demerits for this trend, this essay will explain that increase in fuel prices cannot reduce ecological problems.\n\n\nFirstly, crude oil is the main source of fuel available for mass transportation in the current world; however, increasing crude oil prices can even worst the current situation because it is the only reliable gas source. In addition, no matter how expensive the oil cost consumers can afford to purchase until an alternative is provided by the public administrators. For instance, increase in taxation for tobacco goods did not reduce its sales and the same will happen for fuel as well.\n\n\nSecondly, scientists should focus more on the Eco friendly renewable source of energy transportation to help the environment. Furthermore, the government should impose strict laws and provide more public transportation to reduce carbon footprint. For example, Tesla invented electric cars that can perform with electric power source, which is renewable and zero carbon emission. Hence, step by step we can eliminate the greenhouse gas release for clean and green atmosphere.\n\n\nIn conclusion, one can clearly understand that we have to create green energy with available sources with no harm done in the air and people. Finally, the role of the environment is too dire to ignore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting hot dry desert This setting effected making dehidarted hot It hard go fourther knew keep going Also land barin ething around Clearlier setting effected biker", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my english class, we are reading a book about outliers, and that is the first thing I think about when I think about driverless cars. Many people think that outliers in every situation is a good thing; not in this case. I do not believe that driverless cars is a good idea. I believe this because of false advertisement, reaction speed, and liability\n\nWhen I think of driverless cars, the first thing that I think of is that this vehicle will get me from point A to point B without me having to worry about anything. That is where the false advertisement comes in.\" In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driveless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but all are designed to notify the driver when the roads ahead need human skills\"\n\nIf I am purchasing this car, I wanna be with out a care in the world. I want to know that im gonna be able to get to where I need to be.\n\nI have had my license all of 3 months, and have experienced, getting cut off, rear ended, and much much more. These driverless cars will not react fast enough well to many decisions that a regualar person would still stuggle with. Imagine stopping at a red light; it turns green and you go. You look both ways while driving and see somebody run a red light who would of hit you if you werent more causious. \" The google car simply anoounces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" No one would be able to react quick enough to these risk, which is why driverless cars is not a good idea.\n\nMy last reason why driverless cars are not a good idea is because of liability.\n\n\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Breaking it down even more; what happens if the car gets recked in a accident? whos gonna have to pay for it? These questions need be resolved before the care is intoduced.\n\nCars are to complex of tool to be driverless, and can be proved by false advertisement, reaction speed, and liability. These cars need to be kept in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you looking for a chance at adventure, do you want to help people in need, do you love animals, well here is the opportunity of a lifetime, join the Seagoing Cowboys!\n\nWorld War II has cost people many lives, and has left many countries throughout the world in ruins, if you want to help, than join the Seagoing Cowboys, part of the UNRRA (United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). You get to save lives, and help people in need around the world, by delivering and recovering much needed food supplies, animals, and more.\n\nYou also get a generous amount of freetime in the Seagoing Cowboys, allowing you to tour the country's wonders, and experience its culture. Such as the Acropolis in Greece, or mabe you want to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, where the streets are made of water! You may also see the exotic sights of the Far East in China! You may get to see castles or mabe even the Panama Canal on your way to your destinations.\n\nThis isn't a vacation however, as you will have to take on some responsibility. You will have to feed and water the animals, horses, young cows, and mules, and bales of hay and bags of oats will have to be pulled up the ship, stalls will have to be cleaned, however, if you are an animal person you will love being around with all these horses, cows, and mules! Even if you don't like animals too much, this is a small price to pay for the opportunity of a lifetime!\n\nYou will find time to have fun on board, especially after the animals have been unloaded. With this downtime you can play baseball and volleyball, there is also table-tennis tournaments, and even fencing and boxing! Or you can choose to pass the time reading or whittling. All these pastimes help pass the time it takes going back to America.\n\nThis was much more than an adventure for me, and I am sure it will be for you also. It opened up my world, and will no doubt open your world up also. Although it had its ups and downs, and dull moments, the ups greatly outweighed the downs. This is one opportunity that truely changed my life, and will no doubt change yours. You will gain awareness of other countries and their needs, this is one opportunity of a lifetime!\n\nSo what are you waiting for? Join the Seagoing Cowboys and save lives, experience adventure and exotic sights, and change your life for the better, this is one opportunity you would not want to miss!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Acting Coding System could allow you to express yourself without meaning to. It would be such a helpful thing for students, it could allow them to become smarter or even allow them to get a bad feelng out by letting someone know they are upset or stressed.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System would allow a student who was confused or bored to get extra help. As is stated in paragraph 6 of they are confused or bored it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor to help them understand. This would allow someone who was quiet and shy that is to afraid to ask for the extra help in class to get the help. They would be able to do so without speaking up in front of everyone and geting embarassed, they could just simply sit there and pay attention allowing the Facial acting coding system to see it.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would also allow someone who is very upset to get help without having to be straightforward and walk up to someone and ask. It could recognize you are upset as stated in paragraph 3 and it could alert someone that you nee help. You could then have them come to you instead of you having to start the conversation with them and theyd already know you were upset and needed to talk to someone.\n\nIt would also be able to find what you are interested in and help you find stuff you like and possibly what you want to do. As stated in paragraph 6 the computer can play an ad and it can see if you like it by the response you have suchas smiling it will play more ads that are like that one or if you frown it can avoid ones like that and play something the complete opposite until it finds what you like. This would also allow you to find people who are similar to you that like the same stuff allowing you to become friends and get closer tothe friends you already had.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be a very valuable tool for in the classroom. It would allow students to learn to there greatest ability because it will be able to effectivily modify the lesson when one is confused. It would allow the higher members know if a student was also having trouble and needed talked to. Yes the Facial Action Coding System would be of good use in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern era, the co-educational school has become a controversial trend in recent times. School journeys play a vital role in children's life. However, some people concur that parents should choose co-educational institutions for their children while other people have opposed this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of these trends and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are adequate evidence are obtainable to substantiate reasons. The top-notch concrete is attending co-educational school, which makes children should treat everyone equally with respect and care. As a result, more chance to reduce the crime rate of rapes and abuse in society. Another infamy root is most of the jobs involving in mixes of females and males. Therefore, it's easier for an individual can communicate with other genders people without any resistance. Thus, the above-stated reasons for co-educational schools of its bright side are self-evident.\r\n\r\nWhat is known is that half full for some may appear empty half for others. So people in general trends to distinguish that parents should enrol their children on single-sex schools which has multifarious reasons. A primary reason is children can distract by other things which affect performance in academic records. For instance, boys had affection toward women which lead to many problems. Furthermore, women feel more comfortable and safer studying in single-sex academic institutions. Hence, it's apparent why many are in favour of this trend.\r\n\r\nIn recapitulation, I reiterate that there are strong factors supporting that to educate in co-educational schools has more merits by considering gender equality. Consequently, I firmly agree with the given statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a lot of things people want to do in this world. Usually people would want to just go to a beatiful place but reading this passage theres a different goals going on in this passage and in life.\n\nWhen I had started reading this passage I hadn't known that much about the planet venus at all. I knew in my head deep down that venus is closer to the sun. Deep down its scary to think that someone wants to go to that planets its so hot on the planet and there a lot of dangerous and unhabitable things going on there. An example of what goes in venus would be there being a heat wave of 110 degree's farenheit. Venus would be 8 times more heat than that of earth and thats just the climate that is on that planet. In one of the passages it had that '' If our sister planet is so inhospitable, Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?'' I would say that scientists want to explore more planets because they want to see what is out there in space even though the risks. The thought about going to a different planet has been in scientists head for a long time so doing so would be a huge accomplishment done by us. One of the goals the scientistes want to do is inhabit venus because it was once like earth time-ago.\n\nI would say that there is a lot of goals in this passage and in life, I had talked about somewhat the goals in this essay. The passage was good and interesting learning all the thing that I had read.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a popular belief in our society that adolescents have to be involved in volunteer work in their spare time. I rather agree with this position of people since both sides, community, and youngsters might gain benefits from that.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nThe first factor why I support the idea of engaging adolescents to do volunteer work is the possibility of obtaining necessary skills. It is a common fact that after graduation from an educational institute, young people are unable to find decent jobs due to lack of any experience. Employers in most cases prefer to hire a person with previous working history and recommendations. Volunteer work could be a great option which can be indicated in the resume of a novice applicant. Furthermore, such a type of occupation in a candidate's CV may be considered as proof of a potential hardworking employee.\r\n\r\nThe second reason that makes me agree to involve teenagers in unpaid job is the opportunity to switch them from detrimental activities such as video gaming, wasting life on social networks, or just being inside their home on the sofa with their gadgets. Nowadays many parents speculate about the problem that their children are not doing anything useful but only wasting time on the Internet.\r\n\r\nHowever, I would like to note that there might be some negative aspects of doing compulsory unpaid effort. If teenagers will experience pressure from step forward duties, they can be distressed and lose interest and wishes to be a decent worker in the future. In addition, many students are already occupied by constant exams, extracurricular activities, home duties and they need some space for hobbies, sports and recreation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the engagement of adolescents in suggest task has positive impacts for themselves, first. But our society should involve them gently without stressful pressure. Teenagers need to be motivated to do unpaid task by showing them the benefits and what they will gain by doing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is something that has been loved, hated, and debated on for some years now. We couold abolish it or keep it the way it is. Some say the electoral college is undemocratic and unfair to the voters and the candidates. But some say it is the best way to vote. I'ts seen both ways but is there anything we can do about it? Good or Bad.\n\nThe Electoral College is a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The group of electors for your state are selected by the cnadidate\"s political party. So when you vote for a specific candidate you are voting for the electors he is supported by.\n\nSo why do people want to aboplish the electoral college completely? Because there are some serious things wrong with it. \"perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote\" (Source 2, Paragraph 4). How can there be a tie in the election of the president? Perhaps because sometimes the electors get to thinking in another midset and vote for the wrong candidate...Yes that is poosible. When people vote for there candidate the electors are the ones being selected and aren't always the way they were in their chosing so therefore there can be a serious tip in votes if the electors don't vote for the candidate of the party they were selected by. \"In 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a diect election\" (Source 2, Paragrph 1). The people don't want the electoral college anymore, Who's to say they ever did?\n\nBut even know some don't want the electoral college there are some who prefer to keep it. \"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee, and that trust is rarely betrayed\" (Source 3, Paragraph 2). So when the party selects their electors they are most likely to select the candidate of the party they were selected by. There is also regional appeal,if a president only has diserably mojority of vores in a certain region of the country he is \"unlikely to be a succesful president\"( Source 3, Paragraph 5) . This is because if a president is only desired by a certain region and not the rest of the country, the wants of the rest of the country aren't met and he most likely will not tend to the needs of them, and ultimately doesn't have a chance of being selected as president. Finally, when no candidate for president has a clear majority of votes, the electoral college's votes gove a clear winner and a candidate is selected.\n\nConcluding, both sides have reasonable arguments to if the elctoral college will stay for good or be abolished completely. But it's up tp you to decide which side your own because this is a democracy.. Isn't it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear my state senator,\n\nI would like to keep the Electoral College. I think it would be better for the people. Voters in presidential elction are people who want to express a politcal preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.\n\nThe Electoral Collge, ancachronism, a non-demoocratic method of selecting a president that should be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. The Electoral College method is not democatic in a modern sense. It is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candiate your actully vting for a slate of electors. Our fouding fathers established it.\n\nCertanity of Outcome\n\nEveryone's President swing States\n\nBig Stats\n\nAvoid Run-Off Elections\n\nA magority of 270 elctors votes are reqiured. 3 Electors and treated like a state of purpose. Running for president has their own group of elcetors. Help choose the states electors when you vote for canidate. Governer prepares a Certificate of Ascertanaiment.\n\nThanks for your understanding.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technologies change many aspects of life. One of these new inventions is a robot, and a lot of scientists believe that many tasks will be done by robots in the near future. In my opinion, this inevitable change has many advantages; whilst it also has a few negative points, which will be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nThe main disadvantage of using robots instead of a human in jobs is referred to decrease worker’s opportunities. As a result of it, a large number of people will be lost their jobs, and poverty will be distributed all over society. Another adverse effect of these new changes is related to an environmental vulnerability which is the consequence of excessive usage of electricity for supplying robots. In facts, many countries use fossil fuels for producing electricity, so increase usage of robots can cause increased usage of fossil fuels for electricity production and threatening the environment consequently.\r\n\r\nIn contrast to these negative facts, robots have many advantages for human. The most important positive effect of them is related to saving workers, due to increase usage of them in dangerous situations. The other benefit of them is commercial. For example, robots can work continuously without ant brack for holidays or lunch, so goods productions will be increased significantly.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, tasks forces will be changed by robots in the recent future. This substitution of humans with robots have a few short terms disadvantages, while by the long term follow up, the benefits of them will be more prominent. will be more prominent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper Have ever grabbed nice cold cake sat computer desk I I computers benefit society One way computers benefit society nt make people stand arcuna book store libray hours time Another way computers benefit society letting people chat people world The last way computers benefit society teaches people handeye coordination If ever bookstore library hard find book looking Instead spending hours feet go sit computer ten minuets less On computer get information information anywhere anything one book Going library Have Experts say helps people done many tests people use computers better hand eye coordination people dont use computers Dr health magazine people dont use computers arent Being able skill helps mind As see computer benefit society helps peoples hand eye coordination", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just imagine how many information you can get reading \"the challenge of exploring Venus\" It can teach you a lot of things that maybe you did not know before.\n\nThe author speak about Venus how if he went there, he give you a lot information about the planet like, to Venus people sometimes calle \"Evening Star\" and explain why people give it this nickname. Explain the Venus it is really close from our planet and scienfics should examine better. Maybe the author thinks that there can be life.\n\nVenus is Earth's Twin because have almost the same density and size, and occasionally th closest distance. He says the other planets orbiut the sun a differents speed too. What he means is that sometimes we are closer from mars and others from venus.\n\nVenus is a planet not really safety because a thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, The temperatures can be 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than our planet is, There is not humans who can resist this.\n\nVenus was a planet almost like the Earth, it was covered with ocean and various froms os life. And today still have stuff like the Earth so this mean that scientific should verify this planet better. Maybe is our next planet to live?\n\nVenus maybe could be our next country, no one knows, is amazing and would be amazing if in a future we have to live this planet to another. The posilibilities of that this can happen are not a lot, but if th Scientifics or the NASA find a planet identical to this wil be a big step for the humanity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars would be helpful because if your busy doing something else or if you're just not focus the driverless car can help you. I'm also kind of agaisnt driverless cars because what if something goes wrong as in the driverless car hitting someone or something.\n\nHere are some more reasons why i think the driverless cars are kind of helpful because the car has it's self undercontrol unless it's a car accident going on somewhere ahead of the car; then the driverless car is going to need a driver to take control. The driverless car can also be helpful because what if someone get an important phone call while they're driving they cant focus on the person on the phone and driving at the same time so they can focus on the important phone call while the driverless car take over. The car can also be helpful and useful with all the sensors the car come with. I also feel like it's a good thing because the driver hands have to be on the wheel at all times no matter what. I also like how the google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.The thing i like the most about the driverless car is that manufactures are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\n\nHere are some reasons why i think the driverless car is bad a thing to have because what if the driverless car is going under or over the speed limit and they get pulled over or what if they hit another car ? You can't blame it on the car because the driver should of took over or looked at the speed limit. I also dont like that the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. The driverless car is also a bad idea because what if it's pedestrians walking and the driver doesn't notice them in time to take over, that'll cause a big accident.The main reason why im not really sure about the driverless cars are because i feel like it's going to make everyone lazy and it'll have everyone thinking they can drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclist going heat lack water rough hills trying maneuver around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that the youth gap between parents and children should be more. As it has more benefits for an infant. However, some people believe there should be a less life difference. In my perception, cons are greater than pros. Firstly, I will explain some positive points of this trend, secondly, I will discuss the negatives at the end.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, one of the biggest advantages is that a couple can explore their life with any responsibilities or liabilities. Moreover, these days parents are much educated and they can understand their children easily. As a result, children get more attached to the parents and share everything with them. The relationship gets stronger and parents can guide children in the right way by easily mingling with them. For example, parents will be able to understand what the latest technology is and try to provide that for their child.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, parents of the later maturity will reduce their involvement with their children. Because parents with more youth variation are physically inactive with a child. For instance, people of higher old age usually have more health issues. Consequently, children have the same health problems genetically. Being a parent in the early part of marriage can make their busy life and they will not have time to roam around and be with each other.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, it is quite possible that their children will not be able to support them at the time of their financial need at an older maturity.They become old when their children are young and hence they miss the opportunity of playing with them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if there is not much generation gap between parents and children they can understand the current education trend and guide their children accordingly and also play with them and enjoy. So, I believe it is beneficial for a child if there is not much maturity difference between them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No one wants to wach ads but wouldnt they be more intresting if there was a way they could relate to us more. In the article ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile¨by Nick D´Alto he talks about a way that a coding system can read our emoitions.\n\nIn the text they talk about a program called Facial Action Coding System that will use our emotions to make our experience with technology better.\n\nThe technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valiable because ads can be more personal, it can help keep students more intrested, and can make animated faces more expressive.\n\nAds are an example on how the Facial Action Coding System can be valuable. In the text it states ¨For example, if yoy smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be dirffent.¨ (D´Alto).\n\nSo if a student is doing somthing on a computer and an ad pops up for a math game and he dosnt like it the next ad could change to a math game that he does help.\n\nThe ads coud help the student find a game that can help him learn. Ads and keeping the student mare intrested are ways the Facial Action Coding System is valuble.\n\nKeeping the students intrested is also another way the Facial Action Coding System can be benifical to a student. In the text it says ¨A classroom computer coud recognize when a student is becoming confused¨ (Dr. Huange).\n\nIf it could reconize that then it could modifiy the lession.\n\nThe lession would be better for a student and also it would be like having a teacher right next to you teaching you in the way you learn best.\n\nKeeping the students intrested is anothe way the Facial Action Coding System can be valiuble but there is one more example.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can make animated faces more expressive.\n\nThe author states ¨ The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive¨ (D´Alto).\n\nWhen taking an online corse if a animated faces could be more expressive it would make the student more involved.\n\nAlso it could make the student feel like they have some one to help right next to them.\n\nThis is how making animated faces more expressive can help students in a classroom.\n\nThis is how ads can be more personal, it can help keep students more intrested, and can make animated faces more expressive help support the claim that the use of emotinal reading technology can be valuable for a student.\n\nBy making things more personal.\n\nAlso by keeping the student intrested so they dont get side tracked. Finaly by keeping the student happy.\n\nWouldent you want a more presnal expericence when learning to help keep you intrested and more involved?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the driverless cars is that they would be good to have. A big reason for this is because if they had driverless cars recks would decrease and people wouldnt get hit crossing the road.the reason I think this is because the cars would have computers that would be smarter and more observent about there surroundings. They would be able to respond to situations better than what humans can. This would also make distracted driving a thing of the past because humans would not be controling the caar but instead it would be a computer with sensorse.\n\nA big problem we have now is destracted driving. It causes alot of accedents and caused deaths. a good way to have no distracted driving would be to have diverless cars. Not only would it stop accednts from acurring but also would minumize the deaths due to car crashes. The car would have a laser beam that forms a 3-D model of the cars surroundings.\n\nHaving a car that drives it self would also make parents less afraid of there kids being behind the wheel. If thes cars can drive themself then ther will be no reason parents should be afraid of there teen getting hurt. most car crashs are caused by teen drivers. if cars drive them selfs then teens wont get into car crashs and maybe saving there lives.\n\nThe only big problem of having driverless cars would be the price. if not every one can afford a driverless car it wont make crashs go aaway. yes it will make then less likly to happen but if not everyone can afford there will still be crashs. there will still be people driving and not just driverless cars. if they make driverless cars they should make it to where every one can afford them.\n\nIn conclusion i think that they should have driverless cars.It would help in many ways and make travleing safer for everyone.it would also reduce the number of car crashs. Also it could save lives of people. thats why i think we should have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI would like to make a request. Please abandon the idea of the electoral collage. thats a childs game. It is not fair game. The electoral collage sends a certain number of electors to represent a state. Why not let an individual person represent his or her self? it is obsurd that in Wyoming, a state of 500,000 voters, only get 55 represenntitives. It is with great agrivation that i ask you to make this change.\n\nFurthermore, I would like to state that the electoral collage is outdated and irrational. There is no need for this great mess. The oposition states that the electoral collage is a nessesity for organization. I personally beg to differ. I feel that voting for presidents would be more organized if we counted each individual vote from each individual person. I no longer want to vote for a slate of representitives when it comes time to vote for another president.\n\nIn addition, did you know that there were four presidents that had the mentality to abolish the electoral collage? These presidents, as stated in The Indefensible electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradford Plumer, were Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole. As well as the U.S. chamber of commerce and the AFL-CIO. they were all in favor of abolishing this horrid electoral collage! AL Gore lost the presidency because of the electoral collage. He had 60% popularity vote.\n\nFurthermore, I am ashamed to say that each state has its own amount of representitives. We should have a universal number of representitives for each state because it is unfair that a president can lose a presidential election because a state that had an increaced amount of representitives ran against them. I ask you to please vote against the electoral collage for the following three reasons:\n\nThe representitives dont amount to the number of individuals that voted.\n\nThe electoral collage is outdated and irrational\n\nEach state has an individual amount of representitives.\n\nIn conclution, I ask you to please hear the peoples pleas and abolish this garbage we call the electoral collage. I thank you for taking the time to read this letter and hear what the people have to say about this matter.\n\nA Citizen of Florida,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart provides the information from an adult education centre for the number of two different sexes in four evening courses in 2009 which were drama, painting, sculpture and language . While the pie chart further illustrates the age group of theses course.\nLanguage course was the most popular one among the four course. However, two third of students in the course were women. The second popular course was painting, despite the number of female was lesser than the language course, but male students were slightly higher. Total 55 students in the course. Women in the drama course were still more than male which was 20 and only half of men joined the course. Men was the only higher number in sculpture. However, overall participants of this course was the least popular among all evening course.\nNearly half of the participants were aged 50 or above and only 5% aged under 20. The age group 40-49 was the second large group joining these evening course. While 11% to 16 % were the group between aged 20 to aged 39.\nIn conclude, women and the age group over 50 were more willing to spend their evenig time in learning various courses. The younger group below aged 29 were less interested in joining such evening course.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this story A cowboy who rode the waves luckes participation in the seagoing cowboys program allowed him to exerience adventures and vistit many unique places. The text states that after his high school graduation luck had no idea that his life would change. The text also states that after his high school graduation he was working at two places but got part time and then his friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat and lucke sayed yes y wouldn't he say no to his friend. And he went there when world war 2 had just ended he was helping them get food and other stuff they needed. In the story it says that he became a seagoing cowboy and was helpng out the countries that had just ended war. After helping them out in stuff they needed they got free time to get to rest or to do stuff that was in the place where they had the animals in. I feel like they helped a lot after war and they did really good at helping good thing we don't have wars in our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays it is becoming increasingly popular for people to collect information about the origin of a building they live in. This essay will delve into possible rationale for this growing trend and offer potential sources of this data.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, two main factors are standing behind people's willingness to gain insights into the history of their place of accommodation. Primarily, specific information about the building is often needed during the renovation or modernization of a property. In other words, there are strict criteria regarding the age, the model and the materials used that need to be thoroughly checked before making any architectural changes. For instance, there are some specific rules regarding renovations in post-war buildings, so not only living in that place will be safe, but also these memorable places won't be destroyed. Apart from that, curiosity might play a significant role in this increasing trend. Inhabitants could simply want to become more aware of the place that they spend most of their time in. \r\n\r\nThere are several methods to find information regarding a certain building. Firstly, the Internet guarantees undeniably great source of data. There are many websites specifically focused on the architecture of a particular area, where you search for an exact place and read about its history. For example, Wikipedia offers the possibility to put the name of a street and the number of a building, and it searches for specific information regarding it. Besides, talking with previous residents might also be a great opportunity to gain some knowledge about a building. It is possible that ex-inhabitants were also intrigued with the origin of their accommodation, and might know some details about it. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the increase in the demand for becoming aware of the history of one's place of living is often driven by architectural requirements people need to meet during a renovation, or simply by curiosity. Furthermore, not only the Internet but also a conversation with previous residents could be a valuable source of this data.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke graduated high school and he didn't know his life would change dramatically very fast. Luke had two part-time jobs as a grocery store worker\n\nand a bank worker. Son Reist invited Luke for a opportunity of a life time. The UNRRA\n\nor Seagoing cowboys would take care of horeses, young cows and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nAugust 1945, Luke and Son Reist\n\ngot orders to go to New Orleans they arrived August 14. The Seagoing cowboys had 335 horses plus hay and oats to feed the horses. LUke turned eightteen when he arrived to Greece which meant he could on the military. Luke was discharged in 1947 luke had made nine trips which was the most of any Seagoing cowboy.\n\nIt took about three weeks for them to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and there would be another month to be able to get to China. Luke had to keep care of all the animals on there boat so it left Luke busy for a while. The animals had to be fed and watered two to three times a day! Luke had to take bales of hay and bags of oats. And Luke even had to clean the stalls.\n\nLuke would help out his Aunt Katie's farm as a little boy. But Luke never did anything overseas. Luke would be a night watchman on his second trip. Luke would check the anmals every hour! Luke had a very bad injury while going to feed the animals and couldn't work for a while because Luke cracked some of his ribs Luke was happy to be alive.\n\nLuke would play Baseball,Volleyball,Table-tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling and other games that helped pass time. It was more than an adventure for Luke it opened the world for Luke. Luke said '' Im grateful for the opportunity'' ''he says It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.''", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "~Intro~\n\nThe alien monument you see in the photo in the story is a fake. Let me tell you why it is a fake. NASA only calls this thing a huge rock formation. If this was really an alien face NASA would have kept it hidden and would not have called it an huge rock formation. After a while, web surfers found that it was not a alien monument after all. This face would have really been kept top secret if true.\n\n~body~\n\nIf this alien face was really real, that means that if it was so easy to find the first time with no problems, they can find this same alien face again. But, they couldnt find it a second time. NASA say they had diffuclty being able to find it again, which means that this is not true in any way.\n\n~conclusion~\n\nIf anything ever like this was found it would be secret and people would have been sent out to search for the alien monument. So I believe that something like this is very untrue. This would not be put out to the world for everyone to see. No one would have knew about this if this was really true.This alien monument is a fake, it was just to get the people attention.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author believes that we should further explore Venus despite its dangerous conditions using several facts of Venus and the history of the planet. Venus is the most closely realted to Earth in terms of size and the fact that at one point is was thought to hold many characteristics as Earth does now. Knowing information of this planet can be of aid to us for the future and for our overall knowledge of space. With it now being inhospital many scientists argue that no one should spend further time and money upon exploration. However, the author thinks a human exploration can be both safe and productive.\n\nIt is stated that Venus is considered Earth's \"twin\". It is the planet that relates to it most due to it's size and density, also the fact that it is our neighboring planet. It is thought that many years previous to it's harsh weather and toxic air, that it probably held several forms of life and had features similar to Earth now. The author thinks that learning of Venus can be very important due to it being \"our nearest option of space travel\".\n\nHaving further explorations may seem redundunt to many scientist since it is inhospitable for humans to exist on. For the author however, he contradicts this by stating that having a human mission sent to hover over the planet could teach us more about this planet than before. It could provide us with \"insight on ground\" even thought it would be limited. Readers could interpret the author stating that more could lie on the ground beneath it's atmosphere since it has only been explored for a few hours at a time.\n\nHe leads this further making the subclaim that humans should let their mind be imaginative and that could lead us to innovative ideas, if we don't let dangers consume them. While Venus presents many harsh environmental factors, NASA is working on developing new technology that could be able to withstand it. The value that Venus could hold, might be beyond what anyone thought if they could take more observations and have samples of the planet's resources as the author defends.\n\nThe author presents us with the arguement that human exploration should not be restricted by dangers because it leads \"to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". In addition, the planet that is closely related to Earth is Venus with it size and density, so scientists should have further knowledge of it for the future. Finally, Venus has value because it can show us more \"intimidating endeavours\" under it's dense atmosphere. The author uses several facts to make the claim that Venus should be further explored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient new video game coming I asked dad could preorder said I would wait So I waited I still nt get game So I nt say anything game It birthday I opened last gift video game I excited I gave parents brother went play", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast faced many problems attempt allow blimps dock One problem already constructed frame strong enough new mooring mast blimps A second problem shown quote The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Lsted para The weather height Empire State building would throw move blimps violent ways trying dock The push winds even caused threat blimp blown spire surrounding building threat shown quote would puncture dirigibles shell Lsted para That could happen blimp tried tether building The builders also faced laws flying low urban area All builders Empire state building face many problems trying allow blimps access building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is widely believed that education has become an important aspect of our lives, especially for primary children, which have to be well educated before achieving the period of adolescence. Furthermore, I hold on firmly to the belief that, children should learn how to respect the environment, especially the agriculture such as vegetables and the wildlife as animals.\nTo begin with, children should learn how to cultivate and grow vegetables, in order to respect the environment. In other words, children may experience some extra activities related to plants cultivation during or after school. For instance, educational institutions could organise some apprenticeship activities and teach how to cultivate and grow vegetables. In addition to this, it often claimed that taking part in these types of activities may develop children's skills and acquiring leadership skills. Moreover, young students could experience different types of cultivation, in order to gain knowledge of agriculture sector. Therefore, these may be useful for children's career prospects and for their future.\nSecondly, another vital aspect of our world that should be considered is the wildlife, especially there some animals endangered. In other words, animals have become significant for the world's ecosystems and useful for companionship. For example, it is generally agreed that children may have to learn how to maintain animals. Additionally, children could experience activities in animals protection associations, in order to learn how to keep and protect animals with the support of some volunteers. As a result, children when they grow up are aware to the fact that animals are important and have to be always appreciated and respected.\nIn conclusion, as far as I'm concerned, the advantages of learning how to cultivate vegetables and keep animals definitely outweigh the drawbacks. Additionally, there is no doubt that children doing these activities may gain many positive experiences, develop their skills and learn how value and appreciate the environment including wildlife.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the use of Facial Action Coding System technology to read the emotions of students ina classroom is valuable.\n\nThis is shown through the author's description of the benefits of being able to read expressions of students, as well as the increased understanding of emotions that can be uncovered due to this technology.\n\nRecently, Prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague have developed ways for computers to better communicate with humans through a program designed to calculate noverbal human emotions.\n\nThis technology has proved able to recognize expressions of humans, and so has expanded the frontiers of human communication with technology.\n\nIn particular, this advancement could provide benefits in the education system.\n\nThe reading of expressions in studnets would prove beneficial to the educational process of understanding what content best suits a student's learning ability.\n\nDr. Huang predicts, \"A class Room computer could recognize when a studnet is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 6).\n\nThis shows how the technology would allow a computer to effectively \"recognize\" a students emotions, and correlate or \"modify\" the corresponding lesson to better fit his or her learning.\n\nIt would provide an \"effective\" tool for intructors to be able to better understand what their student needs in order to succeed.\n\nExpressions or feelings such as \"confusion\" or being \"bored\" would allow teachers to better invest time and effort in teaching topics that best fit with these emotions, and so it would help make teaching easier in response to the needs of students.\n\nThe technology would also continue to increase knowledge of human emotions through interpretation of the many expressions such as nonverbal communication.\n\nIn turn this would help with the education of students, as an increased understanding of human feelings would allow the system to acknowledge issues or needs that specific students have.\n\nBeing able to match their emotional abilities with the best subject for them to succeed in would be an option.\n\nThis would provide teachers with a system that best maximizes potential and limits issues in the classroom that involve expression or emotion.\n\nD'Alto writes, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness - and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" (D'Alto 3).\n\nFrom this we can see that if implemented, this technology could help identify primary human emotions such as \"happiness\" or \"anger\".\n\nThis would allow computers to identify \"characteristic movements\" and translate this into emotion.\n\nWith this technology at our disposal, we can better understand how people in general portray their feelings through the anatomy of their face, and better understand the identity of these emotions in the physical aspects of expression.\n\nThis understanding would in turn allow students and teachers to better understand their emotions, and so best match their tendencies to educational programs or classes.\n\nContinuing with the idea of better understanding emotions in the technology would also prevent issues relating to student behavior such as academic honesty or problems with stress or anger, as understanding the emotional expression conveyed by students would help implement systems to better prevent these unwanted actions.\n\nFor instance, the author writes, \"But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle... To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\" (D'Alto 8).\n\nThis is an example of the increased benefits of this technology, and particularly pertaining to education, it can be used to detect whether students are being honest or \"truthful\" through their expressions.\n\nAlthough it is not guaranteed, the technology would still provide another option in understanding what studnets feel or what they are truly going through.\n\nIt would allow schools or instructors to change their teaching or development programs in order to relieve studnets of unwanted emotion, and it would also help benefit the disciplinary system, as being able to detect true emotions could help distinguish one issue from another.\n\nOverall and in conclusion, a better understanding of human expression by technology provides an improved tool for instructors to help with the learning and development of students, as this allows them to fit learners' studying emotional tendencies with that of the best option or way of teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving cars can be a danger to humans, but also a threat to the Earth. The usage of cars has plummented since recent topics of smog, and safety. Using a car to get from point A to point B is getting out of hand and unnecissary. Limiting car usage can help save money, it can also help prevent smog or other pollution, and can make humans live a healthier life style. By limiting car usage, you are changing your life style for the better.\n\nLess car usage can play a major role in the way you live your life. One big part of your life it could change is financial issues. Without a car you wouldnt have to spend thousands of dollars on an overpriced vehical. Also you could save money from not having to buy overly priced gas, or having to fix any car issues, such as an oil leak. In the passage,\n\nParis bans driving due to smog , the author states,\" Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters.\" Without all of your money going down the drain, you could spend your money in a more helpful way. With the money that you don't have to spend with car trouble, someone could by a gym membership, or they could go and renovate their house the way that they have always wanted. Without spending loads of money on a car, gas, and car problems, you could spend your money on more important things such as paying of loans.\n\nLess car usage could also help the envirnment dramtically. Because of the ussage of cars the envinment has been hugely effected. Since the envirnment has been greatly affected, so has the people. Smog has been becoming a result of the pollution that cars cause. In the passage,\n\nParis bans driving due to smog, they state,\"Delivery companies complained of lost revenue, while excepltions were made for plug-in cars.\" Not only is pollution affecting the envirnment, but it is also affecting the way that we live our lives, and the way that we make our livings. Without the use of cars income will increse rather than decrease. Also the smog is creating a hazard to everyone who has to work, or go to school. Without the use of cars there will be no more smog, or hazardess envinments to worry about.\n\nBesides money, and pollution, there are other important reasons why less car usage would be ideal. A main point of less car usage would be for health. The world has grown to be lazy, and as a result obesity is becoming a huge issue. Walking to work, or to school can not only help the envirnment, but also help your immune system, and weight loss. Instead of walking, another great form of exercise that will help the envirnment is riding your bike. Using these tips there will be less obesity, and less pollution, and grrenhouse gas in the world.\n\nEven though that driving has decreased 23% in the last 8 years, it is our duty to insure that the world will once again be a safe envirnment for everyone to live in. To insure a safe envirnment, the usage of cars must decrease. If the usage of cars does not decrease our money will. Money won't be the only problem though, obesity, and also smog will increase. To help save the Earth humans must cut back on using their cars. The results will be life changing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I have had the pleasure to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I've give all my thanks you to this program that had gave me the experince to vist unique places. If you are making a chose on wether yoou should go or shouldn't, you should it is a great experience. If your the person out in the croud that what to know what this program is because your intrested than listen up.\n\nWhen when I was in this program we help peoople in need and we went on adventures, like in World War II had just ended and 44 nations need help to recover with the lost of food supplies, anumals, and more. So the UNRRA ( the Unitedd Nations Relief and Rehadilitation Adminstration)\n\nhired \"seagoing Cowboys\" they had wanted our help. What they wanted us to do was to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. that sound intresting to my best friend Don and I so we sign up.\n\nAnother story I have of this program is, was when we had went on our cattle-boat trips. it was an amazing time. Beside of helping people in need, but I had the benefits of exploring Europe and China. With was an opportunity of a life time for small-town boy like me. We had went on gondola ride and i go to see excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on on his way to China. but my favorite part on the trip was going to Greece and see the Acropolis, it was so special.\n\nI hope after you have heard me tell you two storys of being in this program, that i've had made your choice easier, if that is too do this program or if your not going to do this program. Let me just tell you, if your going to sign up for this program you will have fun going on adventures, but trust me on this it is a better experience and feeling by doing something so simple by helping someone that needs the help and would appriate the help. If your not going to do this program, I totally understand if thing is just not something you would get into. I have had a fun time of bringing up the past and telling you some stories that had happen to me when I was in this program. I hope this helpful for you to make a choice on if you want to do this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear name I want argue issue computer use I ll tell benefits owning computer Then I ll talk whole computer network Finally I ll talk advances technology due computer I think use computers town good society There major benefits using computer fact use microsoft write paper Sixth grader says I would rather type write paper Another reason use computer research many articles facts online anything need says The final benefit computer fact know world news flash I would ve never known earthquake without seeing article homepage says Those major benefits kids computer Now lets talk something That said bad really isnt social networking Stuff like use texting form computer helps us connect without making huge phone bill instant messanger I talk girlfriends says Also facebook help us connect global stage I talk cousin says Those major social networking tools use talk people around world One thing important computer advances technology caused laptop portable computer take anywhere I use computer anywhere I like says Also memory card allows us save data computer take school work Eigth grader says I take work I nt finish school home stick The final major advance use printer I use printer print papers bring school said Those major advances caused computer That s I think using computer good us There many benefits owning computer We talk people worldwide ever want The computer even sole purpose many ground breaking improvements technology please help defend us kids case computer use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Winter Hibiscus realativly sad hopeful story uses lots symbols The author concluded story confident ending makes reader feel satisfied The two reasons wrote conclusion paragraph give ending hopeful tone relate objects sees spring Winter Hibiscus ends hopeful tone thanks confident vow Saeng silently makes She rough day author wanted make sure something look goal It also reveals strong person Saeng The author uses conclusion paragraph leave reader hopeful confident tone The second reason author concluded conclusion paragraph relate objects sees spring The geese represent new place living hibiscus represents old home This paragraph links two symbols together reader relate spring The way author concluded story brillantly done It represents hopeful tone symbols relate spring It ends confidently leaves reader satisfied", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think using the Facial action coding system in students in a classroom is not good and the same thime bad. The students shouldt be using that they dont know what can go wrong.\n\nThe technology in 2018 is getting bigger and smarter. The technology is taking over jobs and everything. The facil action coding can be use for some important hings like like they can use it in the police office or somewhere that they really need it. The students can choose to use it or not they wont do it if they dont want to thats like making u do it. Some students will be surpice and some afraid of what might happen to them if something goes wrong. The technology makes alot of great things to hellp us who needs it. Teachnology can end up with the world if bad people do bad things to technology. I just want to be safe and have technology that helps me do good in my life. I maybe use the facial action coding to see how my emotions are but not use it for fun every minute. The Facial Action coding should work just find so all students can use it if is lik e we trying to see if it works good then the students shouldt use it.\n\nI think that the Facial Action Coding should only be use when that person wants to try it and is not scare of what would happen if sometimes goes wrong while checking her or his emotions. Techology sometimes is bad and good but more times is for the good ways to us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should cars drive themselves? This might be the dream of many who think of the future, but reality is driverless cars are more trouble than they are worth. Although car companies argue that driverless cars are becoming safer and safer, they fail to see many serious shortcomings. Cars shouldn't drive themselves because, they are incapable of adapting to dangerous situations fast, they can create many difficult legal problems and scenarios, and humans would not be able to pay attention whenit was needed.\n\nMoreover cars that drive themselves will never be able to replace human logic, reasoning, and intelligence. Computers, like those in driverless cars are programmed with a specific list of actions and reactions. While a human can discern when to do specific tasks, computers on the other hand can only give a reaction from a premade list. Therefore a computer can be stimulus similiar to something else, but then react to it wrongly due to them having no ability to discern or gain experience.\n\nThen there is also the legal problems that can come about from these cars. In paragraph 9 of this article it states,\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" There are many other problems that a automobile can raise so ultimately it's not worth the risk legally speaking. That is why, for good reason many states have prohibited the use of smart cars in their state.\n\nFurthermore it is hard already for people to pay attention while behind the wheel and to avoid distraction and getting bored on the road. If people wwere allowed to drive in driverless cars that only alerted them when they are getting into dangerous situations they can easily become distracted and bored, making it hard to respond when their life might depend on it. A project owner of the driverless cars even admits to it when he says, \"The pyschological aspects of automation are really a challenge.\" Although they propose a sloution to add an entertainment system in for a safety feature, reality is the human attention span shrinks year by year so they would have to constantly update this in order to keep the car safe.\n\nFinally there are many more reasons why cars like this are dangerous. THis could possible give hackers a new to terrorize people, and the driverless cars simply malfunction and kill someone! This why despite the wonder and amazement of a car that could drive itself we want these cars nowhere, especially on our roads!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I have an opinion that I know others will agree with extremely. By popular vote, we should change the election process to The People voting directly. According to my knowledge, the Electoral College isn't fair to voters. I know that many people such as, Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFC-CIO agree with me on this. For instance, in the second passage on the first paragraph, it says that and much more. \"They're not alone [Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter...]; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore - thanks to the quirks of the Electoral College - won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" Suggesting by what this satement says, a lot of people disagree with our system of election. We should be able to vote directly ourselves and not have electors do it for us. How do we know we can trust them? Yes, they're a part of our government, but that doesn't mean a thing.\n\nThe Electoral College was originally founded to be exactly what it is today; a vote that is held in Congress that is made by popular vote by citizens. But it has changed more than you think. In article one in the 6th paragraph, it tells exactly how the Electoral College is run. \"The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in Novemeber. You help choose your state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors.\" This paragraph is saying that the person you vote for is basically supposed to be voted for by his electors. In the second article, what the author is saying is that even though this certain person will get popular vote, they won't agree with it and they'll go against the votors decisions. This isn't the right thing, obviously. I'm sure that no one knows for a fact that's true though. Even though, this is still a messed up way to vote. This country is about freedom and the right to do what we'd like, as long as it's rational. This is not rational. We need to be able to vote independentley.\n\nThere are many things wrong with this aspect of our government. Even though people don't think much of it, we're being treated unfairly. In the second article, in paragraph 2, Plumer (the author) makes a very good point. \"Who are the electors? They can be anyone not holding public office. Who picks the electors in the first place? It depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes.\" This makes us realize that we don't know who, for a fact, the electors are. It also shows that we don't know who the electors will vote for. Usually, they would probably vote for the person that were made to vote for.\n\nNone of us know what goes on in the Electoral College. We don't know if they vote for who we tell them to vote for. We don't know if they practically cheat us from getting the president we want. In article one, paragraph 8, there is something that the governor does that maybe is supposed to reassure us. \"After the presidential election, your governor prepares a \"Cerificate of Ascertainment\" listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors.\" This is just them saying who was all voted for and who all ran. It also says who the electors were. They give us this probably just to notify us but maybe it's also an idea to make us think that Electoral College is proud to help us get who we want. As I have said through this whole letter, we deserve to directly vote for our President. This isn't fair to us or the person we want elected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is irrefutable that globalized world has effected our life in numerous ways.It is a highly debated issue that latest technological development has deteriorated the communication among the family members.However, i believe that through telecommunication we are able to live in global village.\r\n\r\nFor connection, people use various social media channels to keep themseleves update about eache other life's. Some of the people opine that it has reduced the physical interaction and thus, has widened the gap among concrete relationship.However, this concept has been highly exaggerated.In reality, virtual communication has strengthened the bond among social relationship. To cite an example, if the people were not facilitated with the facebook, instagram and whatsapp communication medium, they would not have been connected with each other across the globe.\r\n\r\nDespite of the fact in person communication cannot be compensated at the expense of the online communication, the technology has profound benefits on maintaining the social relationship. The various social media channels offer tremendous interest based groups which not only streamline latest content information but only does help in expanding the networking skills among the distant members.For example in United arab emirates, the Uae fusion group keep the family members informed about their daily life circumstances.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, i reiterate that there are sufficient grounds to reject the view that social relationships might be jeopardized by the advent of advanced communication technologies. It is my genuine belief that as technology improves going forward, so will people's social experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood memoir exaessed many different ways The memoir mostly eprssed gratitude Narciso parents He describes good detail sacrifices parents made Leaving behind friends family hot climate cultures back Cuba Another mood expressed memoir love kindness Narciso s parents kind everyone They turned house hotel people needed help ready go They open dinner friends family members came Even struggled financially still let everyone Narciso s parents made biggest sacrifice What created beautiful moods described memor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are people today spending much time computers If done affect thous In modern day people spend time computers Both think affecting people many different ways Some ways Health social life also education Spending much time pc effect many ways For example exercise The people spend time siting chair could chance gaining wait Then might getting need computer might go get veggies Your want computer Social life could people also Another big problem education Is day computer anything s computer Those resons I think people nt spend much time computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke and I'm going to tell you a couple reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys progam. It allows you to go to different places around the world. For example, you could go to Greece and see the Acropolis. I turned 18 before we arrived at Greece, which ment I could be drafted for military service. They told me to just keep working on the cattle boat, and that would count as my service.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys program means you also get to work with animals. Some of the animals you get to work with are horses, young cows, and mules. It can take a while to get to our destination. It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States, and a month to get to China!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program can be very fun. Sometimes, the cowboys play games, such as, baseball, volleyball, and table tennis. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be fun, but it can be dangerous at times. On my second trip across the Atlantic Ocean as a cowboy, I was a night watchman. I was supposed to check on the animals every hour. One rainy night, after making my hourly report, I slipped down a ladder. My feet shot toward an opening on the side of the ship.\n\nIf there wasn't a strip of metal that caught my side, I wouldn't be here today. I couldn't work for a while because i broke a few ribs. I thought that was fine, because I was still alive. I'm very grateful for the opporrtunity, because it made me aware of people in other countries and their needs. Its a wonderful expierence helping someone in need. See their face light up when you help them makes you feel amazing. I'm proud to be a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the development of driverless cars should be stopped. If the development of these cars are continued, they will cause many accidents.The development of driverless cars will also open millions of lawsuits aimed at the manufacturers and the customers, by injured victims. This will hurt the economy as a result and lead to violence, and even death. The development of driverless cars should be stopped because it is illegal in most states, it will lead to more accidents, and becuase many people will have to pay fees due to liability issues.\n\nDriverless car development should be stopped most importantly because it is illegal in most states. If it is illegal in most states it is because they are not one hundred percent safe, or it is something that should not be done. If it is illegal in more than half of the states, then it should be illegal in every state. Have you ever wondered why it is illegal in most states?\n\nThe use of driverless cars also will lead to many accidents. Most drivers will not pay attention to the road if the car is driving for them, so it should be looked upon the same as if an intoxicated person is driving the car. A person in a driverless car not looking at the road will think they are safe until they look down and the car turns into a construction zone and the car requires the driver to quickly take the wheel. Just as a person under the influence would think they were safe to drive home, both drivers made bad decisions. The intoxicated driver's mistake is driving intoxicated. The driverless car user made the mistake of buying a driverless car!\n\nFinally the last reason that the development of driverless cars should be stopped is because many people may not have insurance policies on their cars if the owner or the owner's car is responsible for the accident. Many people may have to pay large fees to victims because of a mistake that their driverless car made. The worst part is, nobody will care if it was the cars fault because that owner should not have bought the cars in the first place.\n\nDriverless cars pose many threats to families and citizens everywhere. You can never fully trust a machine that is automated to do a job. The safest way to use a car is to drive it your self.\n\nAs the text states, 'Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.'\n\nThe development of driverless cars should be stopped because it is illegal in most states, it will lead to more accidents, and becuase many people will have to pay fees due to liability issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology suchas, Facial Action Coding system, is totally uneccessary in the classroom setting. Claiming that \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' \" is an ineffective way to to really, truly get through to the students. Instead of focusing on adding more technology to the classroom, maybe giving teachers a better salary and better education would help the teachers teach better, then the students would understand the material better. In the article, it says \" we humans perform the same impressive 'calculation' every day\". If humans already have this natural ability, then adding more technology into the classroom that teacher could already be doing, is uneccessary and distracting. I am sure there are some upsides to this, but it really just feels like an invasion of the students privacy. In the article is says \" ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrucor' \"\n\nThe teacher can not just modify an entire lesson because one student is confused, that is unfair to the students that understand the lesson already. Instead, the teacher could work with the student individually and help them with what they are having trouble with. All in all, adding more uneccessary technology into the classroom would be distracting to the students and an invaison of their privacy. The \"Facial Action Coding system\" could be useful somewhere else, just not the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, if society was told that cars would be able to drive themselves people would have called you crazy or would have laughed it off,calling it wishful thinking. Throughout life, we as humans have worked towards new advances in technology. We are always looking for a way to make life easier and simpler. The queastion is where so we draw the line. Saftey. Saftey has been a concern through time because we are less independent and have become more dependent on machines that could easily break, causes permanant damage. With this in mind, it is not safe to have drivless cars.\n\nHaving driverless cars could be harmful to not only to the passenger, but other drivers as well. The text states, \"In reality, Google has had cars that could drive independetly under specific conditions since 2009.\" If this is the case, why are they just coming out with it. It is probably due to the fact that there are casualties. For example, the passage mentions that they have not fully developed the driverless car to handle complicated traffic issues, which is basically what driving requires. This could definatly result in drivers getting injured. Not only could they cause injures, but they could also cause legal issues.\n\nIf one thinks about it, most people don't want to rely on a car's driving if there is a chance it could cause an accident. There are no laws about driverless cars so it could be caos if something goes wrong. What if the car causes an accident because of an malfunction? There is no law about driverless cars, which means it could be blamed on the driver or the manufacturer. These are very concerning points that has to be taken in to consideration. Some may argue that driverless cars are better than human drivers.\n\nAlthough there are numerous drawbacks to driverless cars, some may say they are better drivers than humans. The passage states,\" The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This shows that driverless cars opperate breaks better than humans do.\n\nAlthough driverless cars are good with brakes, thay can't be relied on enough to put ones life in their hands. The passage states,\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This means that even though the point of driverless cars is that humans don't have to drive, we technically still have to drive and stay alert. This seems to defeat the whole purpose of creating driverless cars if it is not actually driverless. Even though we rely on technoloy for various activities, that doesn't mean we have to rely on them to do everything.\n\nThe reality is that driverless cars are more trouble than good. They compromise the saftey of people on the road. They also don't have any regulations or laws, which could impact driving and saftey. When taking into account that there are no laws or order for driverless cars, it is no question that driverless cars should not be sold to society. We,as humans, have a responsibiliy to protect and mantain the saftey and life God gave us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "people using computers often Some people agree computers good I think computers good though They help learn like bored go internet People nowadays becoming smarter smarter One causes internet The internet like big book It holds tons great information There s probly information internet probly one knows read Plus fact internet quick easy Also internet keeps date things going world Without internet We would nowhere Surveys show students use internet information projects school Also internet buy things ca nt stores Going library pain You pay gas plus drag house get car go library What nt library near could go internet Plus people could look book day find find someone else What pain There people like collage people Who nt cars So sapposed get library Studies show nt cars When get bored eat sleep Lay floor staring celing No You go computer The internet sorts fun games websites It also helps make new friends The internet also good way stay contact close friend relative Also photographer sell share photographs online also advertise company buisness either backyard nothing better I think internet great You learn sorts information nt go library play games get bored Is nt internet great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" introduces the idea that driverless cars are almost ready. My argument of driverless cars is, are they ready? Who is to blame if an accident happens? The manufacturer or the owner? Which the narrator also asks, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" The premise of my argument, is that the driver, should in no way be the one at fault. Unless they themselves wreck the car.\n\nDriverless cars are a very unique sort of car. For one, they do not need a driver. In most cases, that is. Driverless cars have one factor that many car companies are working on: they also need a driver. Which makes them half driverless and half driver... full? BMW driverless cars can only go to about 25 mph (miles per hour), \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph,\"\n\nbefore needing assitance by the driver behind a wheel. GM has driver seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger, \"...driver's seats that vibrate...\" Also, the Google car just says whenever the person is required to take over. \"...simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\"\n\nWhat if a special needs/ disabled person uses one of these cars? Are the manufacturers going to blame them for not being able to use their own hands and feet on the vehicle? This is another scary thing that could very well happen in the future. At least a person without some kind of disability would have control of the car if the autopilot did indeed fail. My counter-argument to my argument would be that there are plenty of sensors around the car stated in paragraph 4, \"...they needed a whole lot of sensors,\" but, what if the senors failed? What if every single sensor failed and someone was incapable of controlling the car? Who is responsible?\n\nMy argument is not one that can be answered right now. It is just a question that many could use an answer from. The well-being and capability of the car is an important aspect of said car. Many bad accidents could happen and whether or not the accident is pinned on the car maker or the car driver is to be disputed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nThere has been an ongoing conflict on the matter of the proper method to use when deciding on a president: use of the electoral college, or popular vote. I believe that this should be looked upon in greater concern than it currently is. Not only do many people question this arguement, but they feel uncomfortable by it too. I believe the electoral college should be taken away from the process. This is a more secure way of voting because the people of this nation feel as if whom ever they vote for may not actually be voted for by the electors. And this is, in no way, a good thing for the nation.\n\nIn the first place, the electoral college has its flaws, as anything would. But it's these flaws that the popular vote dosen't have that makes it a less valid way to decide something as important as presidency. The electoral college has a seemingly fair way of deciding such a thing. Each state is given a certain number of electors to represent its population (Ex. A small state such as Maryland would have less electors than California). It seems alright, until you realize how unfair it really is... In one way, though rare, the electors may switch outlooks, and end up voting for the opposite candidate than whom they were voted, in turn, to vote for. Some even choose at random who they will vote for, regardless of who they were supposed to choose. Which then leads to the unfair decision for however many people he or she represented.\n\nNot only does it have the unfair use of electors, but it also is much more inprecise than popular voting methods. While the electoral college, in total, has only a couple hundred votes, it is less rational than the millions upon millions of people across the nation wanting to vote for whoever they wish with the use of the popular vote method. In '\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong', the author explains, in paragraphs 4 and 5, how in the case of a tie in the electoral vote, that \"the Houses selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people.\" Meaning that no matter what the people think, the president shall be chosen for them. And this is not the right way to elect the person designated to run the country.\n\nIn my final point, as not to bore you with countless others, the use of popular vote has already surpassed the electoral college votes, as such in the case of Nixon vs Kennedy, but has not proven enough to win the election. How is that fair, on any level? It shows how most people voted for one candidate, but then have that candidate lose because of the electoral college. Is that not reason enough, to show that people wanted a certain person as president, but because of the electoral college, didnt get as they wanted nor deserved? Not only is it shown in basic reasoning, but it is also shown in the numbers. The electoral college is an unjust way to elect presidents.\n\nI hope this is enough to change your view on the electoral college. It is not the fair way to let the people of this nation have the leader they want and and rightfully deserve. The use of popular vote is. It not only is a direct line of voting from the people, but all in all has a much fairer way to total the votes. A vote itself cannot possibly change from the point it is written to the point when it is accounted for, but an elector can. Don't allow this to happen the next term. And i speak for most of the people in the U.S. when i say, as Bob Dole did: Abolish the electoral college!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many features story affect roles like waters bad directions The narrator says water bottles container tantalizing sips say hardly water left still keep going find In story water something come time gets fish store", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator, the Electoral College has always been a good way to elect our leaders, and it is the best way to do it. It has the ability to use swing states for better voting, larger and smaller states get diffrent amounts of electoral votes, and presidents cannot be elected by a region alone.\n\nThe effect of having swing states because of the Electoral College is a positive one because when a state feels like they have a chance of having their candidate win, they put more thought into the vote they cast knowing that their vote counts. Having voters put more thought into their votes instead of not caring as much gives the better candidate a greater chance of winning, if one candidate was truly better than the other. The more thoughtfull canidates in a swing state will pull more information from the candidates campaigns. Popular vote does not use the winner takes all method so the idea of swing states will no longer have any effect in the election.\n\nAnother great reason why the Electoral College is better than popular vote is because depending on the size of the states a certain amount of votes is given to the electors. Larger states get more attention from presidential candidates because of the majority vote in the particular state. if there was only popular vote then presidential candidates could waste their time on smaller states when they could of been winning larger states. The varying amount of electoral votes for each state depending on its size also allows for a more equal and fair election, due to the less populated states not being able to have more electoral votes then the more populated states.\n\nThe Electoral College allows that presidential canidates cannot win the election by reigional appeal. This means that if a particular reigion favors a candidate they cannot win by only a single regions votes. This makes the candidates campaign less in regions that are more likely to be won and more in other regions. But with the Electoral College this makes it harder for a candidate with only regional appeal to win because other regions feel like their votes will not be as effective towards the election. With popular vote a presidential candidate will not know where to campaign and where not because there is no winner take all method.\n\nThis is why I belive that having the Electoral College is superior to popular vote when we the people vote for presidential candidates.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Spending time on TV, video and online games are a topic of considerable debate. While some people argue that it has positive impact, others claim that it has more devastating influence on their growth where i staugly believe. This essay will eloborate both views and my opinione with relevant examples.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, many people think that using technological, modern devices has significant effect on individuals behaviour. In other words, playing online sports can develope not only cognitive thinking but also enhance sense of independence because gamers makes their own decision which means they are trying to overcome challenging situation, thus, provides being mentally stable. For instance, a recent study shows that approximately 75% of global players believe video games supplymental stimulation and stress relief, where they get healthy outlet from everyday difficults and help them fell happier.\r\n\r\nOn the another hand, some proponents urged that surfing more time on watching television programs can cause serious health problems relates to eye-vision because UV-lights from phone's screen as ability to damage people's cornea. In addition to that, it avert the young ones from indulging in outdoor activities , therefore, they may not feel refreshed or active during the day. For instance, a reserchers shows that an average of 60% of offspring prioritize screen timing and indoor games like video or multiplayer games rather than playing on the grounds which has plagued health-related issues such as obesity. \r\n\r\n To sum up, considering the numerous advantages such as being involved in range of amusement allow physical well-being, it is my firm conviction that console game disrupt the human's health condition.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Since German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed New Jersey would dangerous densey populated area like New York Empire State building greatest obstacle success use mooring mast nature The winds top building shifting due air currents Dirigibles would safe dangling high pedestrians street The major problem architect faced dirigibles could moor Empire State building law airships flying low urban areas Even though seemed like good idea time practical safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that your car is taking up space in your city. Well it's true , Heridrun Walter , a media trainer and a mother of two , city has ban them from using their cars and she says that when she had a car she was always tense but now she feel happier without it. Cars are a very dangerous machine in the world , there good for transportion but also cause alot of problems. They can killl us in many ways , not knowing whats next.\n\nLimiting cars saves money , gas and also your lives. Near the French and the Swiss border a city has ban street parking and home garage to experiment the new district on the outskirts. As a conculsion to the experinment , 70% of the families do not own a car , and 57% sold their car.\n\nCars are a linchpin of suburbs , where all the middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to live. Experts say that a huge inpediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. 12% of passenger cars are responible for the grenhouse emissions in Europe. Up to 50% , some cars-intensive areas n the US.\n\nPlaces like China , Paris and Europe , known as popular cities , are suffering form cold nights and warmer days which cause a warmer layer of air. Not having a car will also make you feel safer and will also save yor city. In addition , it's proven that cities not having cars will make their city denser , meaning better for walking and good for your health and stores will be able to be on the main road instead of being on the side of the highways in malls. So in conculsion , not having a car can make our lives safer and make us have a better community or city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today I Patient meap The meap day It writing reading math It hardest thing school I think hardest thing life helps learn lot might help future jobs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In that work we gonna explain, give ideas and talk a little bit about the problems at the study of Venus because that planet is very dangers to survival\n\nThough Venus is a \"sister\" of the Earth Planet is not the same, Venus is not safetly to people live in their because doesn't have the sufficient oxygen to survival. Thoughthe austronomers are fascined with Venus because is the most similar planet to the Earth. But this planet obviusly have a differents to Earth like, the surface on Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees that is crazy and impossible to survival and in venus are present Volcanos eruptions.\n\nA idea for the NASA from me to send people to study the planet, is implement a new jetplane more security for thr austronomers for they can survival and can study the planet. And a new uniform most special for the can have the capacity to survival that dangers problems at Venus.\n\nWith that work we can explain and understand better about the problems with that planet and have ideas to a better study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper brought attention nice sunny day like somebody would want inside The sad truth many people wasting time inside computers rather enjoying day Computers negatively affecting population We getting point whole world might absolutley crazy nothing done For one obese children world Generally children running around burning calories even people teen years Instead kids sitting front computer screens virtual games emails Even chores around house could bring obesity rate lot sitting butt staring screen day The whole screen thing brings next point Staring bright flashy lights long good brain computers cause child ceizures year The radioactivity computer could also mess lot giving cancer cure cancer yet figure everytime computer long putting life risk The longer youre radiation going youre brain Do really want cut life short knowing one could almost called suicide youre reading ve warned So ve basically covered effects computers body physically The computer also effect mentally socially When comes along time world computer know vacation lose everything learned school Its proven computers cause memory loss So get back school ca nt keep s going frustrating nt If would ve read book time computer maybe could ve gained knowledge rather using Computers affect socially everybody wants sit inside computer people fun alone nobody talk computer would like computer friend The debate topic could rage days still winner honesty go turn computer think really worth Think everything would lose everything could never get back would rather something would gain future Its choice responsible enough make one would benefit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers benefit society positive way Without computers would able social We also would ability reseach school online running business would even difficult Without computers society would far advanced Being social important quality life main way social days texting chat online friends Facebook skype give users ability make new friends find long lost friends chat friends I personally skype facabook I able access everyday Without I would nt able chat friends school except sports texting Everyday I workout lift weights go facebook whole statement spending less time exercising time computer false Facebook skype past everyday life without I know I would social Computers also part everyday life I use research school typing paper As seen handwriting great I end typing lot homework Without computers teachers would able read work Computers also help making graphs data tables science lab reports Without computer graphs would handmade presentable Overall computers used everyday school either research type homework Education plays key role society use computers education would receive would My last reason believe computers play positive role society computers keeps businesses running Without computers businesses would unable function could function would awful slow Since society far advanced businesses need computers order complete jobs Expenses income saved businesses computers done paper could lost ruined Computers also simplify work businesses speed tasks would takes long time hand done complete tasks could acheived without computer Computers play large part world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often a debatable topic in today's time, where people have started assuming about the irrelevancy of the media and news channels and it doesn't make any sense to be in touch with any of them and therefore, I disagree with the mentioned statement and will demonstrate how print media and news channels are imperative in today's period by updating people with the latest updated news.\r\n\r\nFirstly, in my viewpoint, the media play a significant role in today's life. In particular they work as a medium to share and communicate with the people around the world or country through the newspapers we get to know each and everything, whether it is related to education, sports, politics, entertainment, religion, for example, all the current affairs and corruption have been exposed by the media and through print media. For instance, places in India, where many people cant have access to television, so with the help of newspaper media they are able to get information such as recently due to drought in Maharashtra all the peasants and landlords were on strike, cases like a child- abducting, murder, inventions in the country all such news have been reached to the locals through print media which is inexpensive and affordable by everyone.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the news channel plays a crucial role to inform and secure data from the various sources. For instance, news channels had helped in informing about novel COVID-19 virus and helped citizens by educating and keeping panel discussion of expertise doctors throughout the world through, which locals got to know more about the virus and safety measures. However, there are at times when fake news or misleading info has been published or shown by the media just for safeguarding a few politicians or well-known people. Still, most of the time they have helped and share insights about the real problems of the country.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, print media and news channels have been providing extensive information to the locals, which is connected to people's lives; however, there are times when information has been misleding for good TRP, but it's worth the time to be in touch with the media.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a growing number of people who are curious about the past of the building they settle in. A lot of reasons may lead to this trend but probably it is mainly because of curiosity and refurbishment. To find out more detail about their homes, asking elderlies who live in the same neighbours and checking documents would be effective ways. \r\n\r\nFirstly, some people have a deep motivation to delve into the past of their houses because of curiosity.\r\n\r\n Many buildings in Europe were used for alternative purposes during the second world war like medical centres, shelters and military centre. Hence, people would like to learn detailed information about their homes to clarify whether they offered a place for such purposes or not. Furthermore, historical buildings demand regular refurbishment to maintain living properly. When it comes to infrastructural issues, having a plan or information about the home would be an exact remedy without damaging the building. \r\n\r\nOne of the most effective ways to find out knowledge about the history of the home is to get in touch with elderly people who are likely to remember of location's history. They generally live in the same area for long years and have a variety of memories. Likewise, In some countries, libraries stock documents about local people or buildings. With access to the library, citizens can research the history of the building they live in depth. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Nowadays, many people become interested in the history of the building they live in. Mainly curiosity and refurbishment are motivations of this trend. Visiting older people and libraries may be sensible ways to find out knowledge about their history of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this story I will be telling you about how the supposed face made by aliens are actually just made by a natual landform that looked like a face.\n\nThis is how we know that it was not made by aliens if it was made by a alien then how is it decaying would they of came back to fix it. To have it stay forever or do they just not care about it anymore.\n\nAlso wouldn't it of kept it's shape for more than 25 years or do you think that is just a sequence that happens to things over time. You never know if they are more advanced then us and can keep all of their stuff in ship shape and if it was a alien it would of stay and not changed.\n\n\"Matian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" \"Formed by shadows giving illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self-driving cars a thing of the future that we used to dream about.\n\nWith recent technology we are prettty close to having self-driving cars.\n\nSelf-driving cars can be the solution to many problems that may occur during the time we are in our vehicles.\n\nHowever, we solve one problem but other problems will occur also.\n\nThere will always be constant arguments about whether these \"Self-driving\" cars will be a successful impact on society.\n\nMy personal opinion on self-driving cars is that they should only be driven by those who can not drive a standard car because of some physical or mental defect.\n\nFor example, someone who is paralyzed for the waist below would certainly have need for car to be self-driving so they are not relying on others all the time to get them places.\n\nOnce you think about if a driver is not driving their car they are just sitting around doing nothing which would lead to boredom which could lead to more things and so on.\n\nWhen you drive you have to be alert to the things around them, and keeps your motor skills from becoming lazy.\n\nAnother debate that has probably occured is how they are able to prevent accidents with sensors that can control the breaks.\n\nWhat if something were to happen to the sensors and they malfunction; that could result in an accident or even a fatal one in fact.\n\nAlso, people may try to blame their car for the accident and you can not truly figure out who is at fault in the situation.\n\nThese are things that everyone should consider about these cars.\n\nThese cars sound amazing but are they really worth it.\n\nLike I mentioned in the previous paragraph they could be extremely useful for people who have a mental or physical defect but not so much for others.\n\nOtherwise i can not wait to see what new technology will be introduced in my generation.\n\nTo conclude, there will always be arguments on everything so there is not truly a yes this is good or no this is bad, but hopefully it will be a succesful impact on society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going against the Driverless Cars Are Coming. Im going to disgree about this article because this is say that it wont causei any kind of of accidents. But what if the car breaks dow, gives up, or just completly doesnt work in the middle of drving. So the driver will have to drvie the car because it can causes the car to spinout or cause a servaly serious accident that might end up hurting the driver pretty bad. So there is alot of ways how a person can get hurt from relying on a car that doesnt need a driver. Plus i think this should be banned like it says in Paragraph 9 \"As a result, in most states it is illgeal to even test a computer driven cars. In California, Neveda, Florida, and the District of columbia lave led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\"\n\nSo like what if the techology fails. So heres what it says in the following actircle \" Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nSo heres the Big Question.\"Whos fault will it be if theres a accdient THE DRIVER OR THE MANUFACTURER????\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral college is a proccess that was established in the constitution by the founding fathers as a compromise between the votes in congress and popular vote of certified citizens that leads to how they select the president.\n\nThe Electoral college has electors who actually vote for the president and these votes are counted by congress. The Electoral college holds 538 electors , but it is required the at least 270 electors must vote in order to elect a president.\n\nwhere the people do have a chance to vote and their vote is seen as a popular vote , but it seems like the electors votes count more than the peoples.\n\nThe electoral college has been a way of electing our president for years , but there is one question . Do the peoples votes really matter?\n\nIn the electoral college there has been cases where the people voted for a president but yet the electors chose otherwise , so are they really representing our votes or are they just getting Americans to believe that their votes actually count?\n\nUnder the Electoral college system voters don't really vote for the president.\n\nVoters are actually voting for the slate electors who in turn elect the president.\n\nFor example if you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for the slate of the amount of democratic electors that are pledged to Kerry.\n\nIf they won the statewide election ,then they would go to congress and kerry would get the electoral votes from the amount of slate that Texas has.\n\nThe electoral college is not fair to the voters. This reason is because of their winner takes all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in the states they feel they have no chance of winning. They only focus on the\n\n\"swing\" states , the states they feel they have a chance in or feel they have to win over. During the 2000 campaign , seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all and the largest media didn't get to see a single campaign ad. Candidates only visit states they feel are important to them which is considered unfair to the voters who actually vote for them.\n\nThe electoral college method may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. The fact that they feel their vote has no effect, they pay less attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. The people's votes should matter because it is our country these choies affect. The electoral college method is discouraging some of the voters to vote. Lets get rid of the electoral college and let the people's vote actuaully matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that is able to read your facial expression sounds pretty cool until it isn't. Technology like this does not seem very useful in schools. I think that technology like this is actually a waste of time because it can embarass someone at school, cause a problem with friends at school, and some people dont want others to know what they are feeling.\n\nBeing embarossed at school for feeling a certain way can cause bullying in school. Some of the much older may think of the person as weak are soft for having being told what emotion was read. Yes, you may be saying well it would also read their emotions too but they might not care. The bullying could get worse with their feelings being read aout loud. foe example, lets say a kid was being bullied for the machine saying he was feeling sad and the bullies are messing with him. He could get angry and cause the problem to become worse then it already was if the machine says he is feeling angry while his bullies are around him.\n\nFriendships could be torn apart from this too. Friends feel a certain way about each other. They may feel like the other is a nusaince and dont see them as a friend. Now imagine that being said to you my a machine and this causes your friends to get made at you. It can pit strain on a lot of relationships to like when someone is around thier girlfriend or boyfriend the machine can say a bad interpretation of what that person was trying to say.\n\nSome people may not want their feelings read out to them. They may be going through alot of pain and stress in their life that they are becoming suicidle. Its really not got to be thinking about suicide especially when this could be a teenager or a child. When their in class they may be feeling wierd about themselves and for someone being able to find out is pretty nerve racking. You might be saying to yourself, well this means it could prevent suicide in adolescents. Well as that is true they might not want people to find out they might want to deal with it on their own which is a tough thing to go through.\n\nProblems like these are reasons that this technology is not important or valuable in school. Its actually a problem for the school it also depends on the bugdet not all schools will be able to afford it. Even though technology is flurishing and becoming more common in places around the world some things like human behavior and emotions should be left alone it is something that makes us who we are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More and more people find it difficult to get a job what they want after graduating a university. There are several factors that explain this phenomenon. This essay will examine some reasons why it is hard to find a job and suggest possible solutions about it. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, corporates that provide good employment conditions such as a high salary, a wide range of perks are not as many as we expect, so the competition to enter them is becoming more challenging. For example, nearly half of the companies in Korea do not offer moderate salary compared to cost of living, therefore many college graduates do not prefer to apply to them. I think the government should take actions to improve the working conditions of organisations by providing subsidies or delivering campaign. \r\n\r\nSecondly, the perception in our society that counts white-collar jobs more than blue-collar jobs has influenced the job preference of university graduates. Therefore the skyrocketed demand of certain jobs makes it more difficult to start their careers where they want. For example, currently the number of people who are willing to become a civil servant extremely has increased in Korea, so just one candidate out of 200 can be hired. I deem that education can help to alleviate this problem, strenthening vocational education for children to have balanced view of all professions. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, although these are the only factors, but business and social aspects resulted in the issues in the employment market. I proposed that the appropriate government measure to boost the overall working conditions and the educational effort to make with less discriminate society on jobs are required.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one challenging planet with its high surface temperature and very dangerous storm clouds that could destroy almost anyone and anything. Venus is Earth's twin, but with more corrosive gas clouds, dangerous volcanoes, and earthquakes. It was believed that Venus was similar to Earth with signs of life living on the surface before the toxic gases started to form. Studying Venus further despite the dangerous challenges is something to consider. If there were signs of life on this planet, there is a chance that with the a ship to study outside of the atmosphere, silicon carbide electronics, and mechanical computers being tested and considered at NASA, there is a good chance further pursuit of Venus is possible despite its dangers.\n\nVenus has very dangerous atmosphere due to it being \"... almost 97 percent carbon dioxide... temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience...\" These features on Venus makes in nearly impossible to even stay on the planets surface with the chance of dying, but NASA is currently working on an idea that could have a human study Venus without actually going into the dangerous atmosphere. NASA plans to create a ship that would float above the clouds just out of the atmosphere where the machine would collapse. The ship would stay at \"thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farhenheit, but the air pressure would still be close to that of sea level on Earth,\" This shows that although the conditions are going to be difficult, this would be a survivable condition for humans though it will be a challenge, especially with what else NASA is thinking.\n\nNASA was also making \"simplified electronics made of silicon carbide\" which is an electronic that \"have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions,\" Which both informations show that this electronic is stronger than what a normal device would be used for exploration of another planet and it could last in harsh conditions. Many devices and electronics are made to withstand conditions extremely harsh, but the conditions Venus is giving is on a level out of this world. So for such an electronic to last three weeks on the surface of Venus is surely something to test and make sure it is possible for use of exploration, including with the other device NASA is working on.\n\nAnother project NASA planned on using was \"an old technology called mechanical computers,\" These devices were mainly used back around the time of World War II. It was a surprise to use devices back during that time to use now, but the mechanical computers \"make calculations by using gears and levels and do not require electronics at all,\" The modern computers are very powerful with information, but are more delicate with harsh conditions, but the mechanical computers are more resistant to the different conditions that could destroy a modern computer. Modern technology is not capable of withstanding high temperatures, pressure, and other different extreme forces, but with the mechanical computer, those forces are less likely to cause an issue and the computer is able to withstand them.\n\nVenus can produce very life threatening conditions for humans and electronics combined, but the new ideas and technology like the silicon carbide electronics, the blimb-like vehicle to fly just above the dangerous surface, and the mechanical computer to withstand the harsh conditions, there is a good chance for humans to actually voyage out and study Venus. Though the challenges will be tough, humans are willing to find a way to defeat these challeges, especially NASA. Venus is going to make it difficult for people to study and explore within its atmosphere, but humans are getting smarter, and will find a way to penetrate through Venus's atmosphere and study what is beneath those dangerous clouds that clouds what is on the surface that can't be seen from a distance. NASA and humans are evolving, and when people evolve, they get smarter, and when they're smarter, they will start to see there are ways to actually explore their own solar system, and soon the galaxy. Space isn't going to be unexplored to the people of Earth forever, so finding a way to face any harsh conditions any planet throws is something NASA and the people of today are trying to figure out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time I needed patience We groccery store man exactm When first got I exited going get lots junk bad ther We started get lots food looked really good I started eat The cart half way got stuff full get another cart started get hungry But time meat section I starving My mom said CAPS get couple one things I waited waited told go checkout All long I felt like I CAPS little girl walked getting smart I couldnt take I talk little girl But I calm I realized turn I happy I got home mom cooked bacos I ready go bed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do we want to have driverless cars? There are still things that the driverless cars cannot do themselves. Are they safe? Are driverless cars good for the people? In this arguement These are some of the quesions I'm going to answer in my opinion.\n\nIn the future could cars actually drive themselves? That is a question we cannot answer at this time. Right now cars can drive themselves, but not in every situation. In paragraph 2 of the artical it states \" Google cars aren't truley driverless; they still alert the driver to take over...\" The \"driverless\" cars are not so driverless. They alert you when pulling in and out of driveways, when complicated trafic issues occur, and when there is roadwork. The car will alert you in any situation where human abilities are needed. In some cars they have sensors that can sense when to stop, or if there is something the driver did not see to stop for. In paragraph 4 it states \"... uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rear view window....\" They have the sensors for all different things while the car is in motion. But how does that help the car be driverless?\n\nIn some cases the \"driverless\" cars are safe, but remember the car is controlled by a computer. It can still shut down and crash. In paragraph 2 it states \"... cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" What happends when the car reaches one million miles? Would is shut down and crash? We don't know that because the text in the artical doesn't state that. Would someone want to have a car that could drive itself, but the human still had to be aware of the road? What if the car is on the highway and alters the human, but the human is sleeping? What if the human wasn't paying any attention to the road? That is a safety hazard. In paragraph 7 it states \"... the human driver must remian alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" What person is going to pay attention to the road if the car can drive itself? Paragraph 2 also states \"... 2013, BMW ... development of \"Trafic Jam Assistant\"... car can handle up to the speeds up to 25 mph.\" What person can't drive at 25 mph? Why would these cars be any safer than a regular car?\n\nWhy would anyone want \"driverless\" cars if they really can't drive by themselves? Would any human want to wait their turn to drive their car at 25 mph? Would the human driving the car got into an accident and they were not the one driving? New laws would have to be made for those situations. New roads would have to be worked on so that the new \"driverless\" cars could work. Woud anyone go through all of this trouble just so that we could wait our turn to drive our own cars? I don't think anyone would want that. So why do we need driverless cars? Just to be lazy, or to just drive at low speeds? I don't think that I would want to be lazy and drive at 25 mhp for my car to be \"driverless.\" Would you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Within walls narciso young parents created traditional home There heart kitchen Narciso parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinar skills narciso love cook Quite countrary narciso neighborhood made mostly Spanish Italian immigrants time racism parents came selflessly immigrants give children better life They sacafised leaving family friends careers county came I think memory nice happy one becuase memorys knows family went", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers helped people tramendisly past years Thanks computer scientest found cours deseses jobs become easier communication friends family become afordable I believe computers positive effect people educate people places world help people jobs give people chance talk phone without pay anything Is someone trip country might go computer learn country culture Another thing might go website could find afordable flights hotel stay If child report country go computer find facts country Computers educate people places world You go website videos short clips going learn current events costs If want see friend birthday nt money fly halfway around world see vidieo chat Computers help people save money talking computers friends family even coworkers Computers helpful ever since invented They help people learn places world anything want learn They also make jobs work easier also help people save lot money talking people computers insted phone Computers improved demastrecly years screens use small would press buttons boot computers big flat screen turn push button Who knows computers like years", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient friend went mall around supposed shopping new school clothes When got sun really bright sky birds chirpping hot day When walked hardly anybody went store called full people I thought I concert wait longest line long people almost doors So waited waited Finally front line casher said CAPS waited long line probably hour I give guys discount went shopping got rewarded patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the ever growing use of technology, classrooms need to be modernized more and more. The use of computers is now a necessity in many classrooms, with teachers and students relying on these electronic devices to play fun activities, read scientific articles, and much more. There is no real good way for teachers to know how students are feeling in their class. There is no real feedback to let the teacher know if they should change their teaching style or the material they cover. The implementation of this techonology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable, but there should be cautions on the effectiveness of this techonology.\n\nI supported the claim for the value of using this techonology to read students' emotional expressions for the reasons of providing feedback to the teacher, making the classroom interactive and fun, and stopping the faking and disguising of emotions. The major reasons I support this claim is feedback. Teachers need to know when their students are actually understanding their lessons. They need to know whether their teaching style works for the students and enables them to be active learners. I have noticed that in every school I have been to, there is always a teacher, or multiple, that do not connect with their students and the students don't learn much in their class. This leads me to my next point about changing the classroom experience. In the some of these classrooms, students are sleeping through class, while the teachers go on with their lesson. If this technology was to be implemented, then the classroom experience would be more tailored to each individual student. With the rise of technology now, almost everything in the classroom is technology-based, and this technology, if tailored to each students' needs, will help make the classroom more interactive and a better learning environment for the students. In the paragraph, the author talks about the use of this technology to better display ads that a consumer would be interested in. But if used in the classroom, then actual lessons could be displayed differently based on the student's emotion while learning. As Dr. Huang said,\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". This quote just goes to show us that as the world becomes more tech-oriented, this technology needs to be able to understand and adapt to better suit human emotions. Finally, this technology could be used to know students' true feelings, not just what they want teachers to think. Students too often put a smile on their face and zone out of the class that they are in, tricking the teachers into thinking that they are actually listening. Using this technology, teachers will accurately know when the students are forcing their smiles and when they genuinely are interested in the topic of the day.\n\nThere are 2 limitations however, that should be addressed. One of these is how accurate this technology is. With technology, there is always room for error and schools and teachers must be aware of that. They should not automatically judge students based on this technology when there is a possibility for error. Another key issue is privacy. How many students or their parents will give permissions for schools to implements this technology? This might be a controversial topic and we just don't know how the students will accept this.\n\nThe major reasons why this technology should be implemented in todays' classrooms are because it will give teachers feedback, helping them to make the classrooms more interactive and fun, while stopping the disguising of students' emotions. Even though I did mention some limitations, the overall benefits and value of this technology to read students' emotional expressions outweigh any potential drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph illustrates the percentage of paper and cardboard, glass containers, plastics and aluminium cans that were recycled in the period between 1982 and 2010. Overall, it seems that paper and cardboard remain the highest recycled material while plastics stayed as the least recycled products throughout the period. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, in 1982, the amount of paper and cardboard recycled started out at about 60%, afterwards there was a noticeable rise to 80% in the year 1992 but it later saw a steady decline to 70% in 2010. As compared with glass and containers which is the highest recycled product beginning at 50%, 1988 saw a slight dip, it subsequently rose to 70% in 2010. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the two least recycled materials saw an increase over the period. Aluminium cans rose significantly from about 3% in 1982 to approximately 47% although plastics saw a minimal increase from 1% to approximately 9% at the end of the period-2010.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Planets can be twins? Venus is known as Eath's twin. At one time Venus was the closest to Earth, but has grown to become less and less like Earth over the years. Therefore Venus is getting more and more dangest to study as the years go on.\n\nVenus is very important to study. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and in size. Sometimes in distance too. Depending on what time of the year it is, due to plantet orbiting around the Sun, will depend on if Venus or Mars is closer to Earth.\n\nVenus is difficult to study because of how dangest it is. Almost 97 percent of Venus is carbon dioxide. Clouds of highly corresive sulfuric acid are in Venus' atmosphere. The pressure on Venus is 90 times the pressure on Earth. Venus is the hottest planet in the solar system, even though Mercury is closer than Venus to the Sun. Venus has an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The conditons on Venus are far more extreme than conditions on Earth.\n\nDue to all the changing features Venus has had over the years. Venus still has some things like Earth. Some familiar features are valleys, mountains, and craters. The changing has caused no spaceship to touch down on Venus in more than three decades. No spacecraft has ever survived the landing more than a few hours.\n\nThis proves how the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, but is very dangest. Venus is important to study because it is Earth's \"twin.\" This shows how Venus is dangest. Venus is challenging to study, but is worth the danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator please keep the electoral college. There a few reasons why we should keep it heres a few. The electoral college is a easy way of picking the president the most popular canidate with most votes is the winner. Also each party picks a nominee and trust is very rarely betrayed.\n\nThe electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast. The electoral college system is a fairly simple way of voting that most people understand replacing it with something else would just instill alot of mis understanding in people ,wich could possibly result in a huge decrease in the amount of people that vote. Also the negatives of the electoral college are not really a big deal that coud cause a fixing or a inbalenced vote towards one side over another.\n\nIn conclusion I think sticking with the electoral college is a wise decison because there isnt anything wrong with it ,why fix something that isnt broken?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This topic of Driverless Cars is amazing i've thought a lot about having a driverless car sometime in my future. I think is a good new invention that has been made. I think should be new laws the can limit certain driverless cars. And the fact that there will not be only one type of driverless cars but as other car manufacturers drive to build this great car will be awesome.\n\nMy biggest concern about these cars are the liability in the case of an accident. I do truly wonder if there is an accident between an driverless car and a regular car, who or what is to blame? The fact that the car has special touch sensors, what if there is a malfunction? But i do like that this car has speed sensors at the wheels antilock brakes.\n\nOverall I am thinking that driverless cars are a good idea. With so many supporting qualities i think it is a safe car. I think over time there will be more advanced cars that take a new step at a time. I can't wait until 2020 when maybe Mercedes-Benz has an safe driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traffic congestion is increasing day by day in most of the urban and rural areas and it is becoming a deteriorating situation all over the world. There are two major reasons of increasing traffic and to cope with this there are some measures which should be followed by every member of the society.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, first cause of this situation is overpopulation, with the escalating of people all around the world, every member of the family prefer to have his/ her own vehicle , which creates a high density of volume on roads. Second cause is lack of proper road and bridges which creates a traffic jams on roads. Buses, trains and other private vehicles are running on same road which ultimately creates road busy all the time.\r\n\r\nTo mitigate this issues, governm can create awareness among people to use of public transport and put heavy taxes on private transport.Besides, government should construct some new roads and bridges so that there would be separate lane for heavy vehicles. In this way, traffic could be controlled and less accidents and jam can be seen on highways. \r\n\r\nTo sumup, local authorities and individuals should work together to address this problem by following some measures. Individuals can use bicycles to ride to shorter distances.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows new begining starting For example fact moved different country Thats author means spring comes Spring represents new life Saeng mother Also snow represents blanked past hard times Last least hibiscus starts bud also means new beganing So put together get hard times going away snow melts new beginning spring starts flower buds That author put paragraph story needed fresh start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university. The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This unique landmark that appears on mars, also known as the Face, has been around for much of time. The birth of it's popularity began in 1976 when NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft snapped a photo of it. Many belive this is a form of aliens being on the planet Mars, many believe it is just a landform.\n\nThe Face that appears on Mars is just a natural landform because it is not logical for there to be an alien landmark such as this, the Face has faded overtime, and there was no sign of any objects near, around, or on it.\n\nOvertime there has been many reports of alien spottings. The question is are they real? Over decades people claim to have encountered an alien but there has been no research claiming that they are 100% real, there has only been theories. Like these theories, The Face has just been one big theory as well. On paragraph 7 it clearly and bluntly states that the Face is just a landform, not an alien marking.\n\n1976 was the first spotting of the Face, 2001 was the last picture of it. Overtime you can see in these pictures that it has faded away. The only time the Face appeared to look like a face was in 1976. In 1998 the face had seemed to blow over, plainly just smoothing out. In 2001 the face was purley just gone. Landforms change rapidly over time, whether it's on Earth or on Mars. So if it was an alien marking, why would the face have vanished? It would have stayed.\n\nIf this was an alien marking there would be some evidence that the aliens have made it. On paragraph 11 NASA researcher by the name of Garvin stated that him and members of NASA used the most high quality best cameras that could pick up quality the size of a rule of a thumb to see the Face. Garvin stated that there was no sign of objects near or on it, and on paragraph 12 he simply stated that it was a butte or a mesa.\n\nThe Face is just a landmark appearing to have the shape of a face that had descend overtime, nothing more nothing less.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "wants travel traveling fun exciting go people love sometimes go somewhere people know well Every two years choir opportunity go trip together During trips students able work college professors eat tons junk food get away parents great time together It s experience every dreams At beginning year choir director announced would opportunity go I ecstatic going I m extremely introverted person I knew I nt really friends choir I also ca nt walk scared I would left behind store I could nt open doors would go across street corner nt dip street thousands things racing mind I terrified I would separated one friend choir I almost nt go I m really sure mother convinced everything would alright I nothing fear Once arrived split groups see wanted go explore wanted go street one windiest roads world My worst nightmare came true I separated I tried tell nothing would go wrong chaperons would nt leave behind back mind I kept coming conclusion I would alone bunch strangers city I knew nothing Somehow I got bus slowly taking away One girls came sit attempted start conversation That one longest bus rides life When arrived bottom street split yet one group going walk top steep hill going ride one old trolleys top walk hill nt steep I forced go trolley hill steep part sidewalk contained steps since I ca nt walk alternative trolly Several kids went us group A couple hours later getting lost turning several wrong streets found trolley station bought tickets Luckily I managed avoid conversing whole time ride hill enjoyable Some local people smiled us excited riding trolley We saw houses stores ride There six people group time two chaperons four kids Once reached top hill two kids decided really go bathroom one chaperons raced back hill find public restroom This left alone remaining chaperon We walked leasiurly hill talking Every often would ask question I would answer words possible s going walked past group men arguing front store one yelled CAPS Whatcha You goin house We nt really know talking talking kept walking reached end block I simultaneously broke laughter The man talking The rest way hill started coming different weird responses I said man one hilarious last one conversations go eventually got different topics made realize I really many similar traits We loved musicals enjoy reading annoying younger brothers Ever since day I fairly good friends took moment laughed together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was working when his friend Don Reist said if he wanted to go europe on a cattle boat. Luke said it was an opportunity of a lifetime. So he didnt give up the chance to go with him. The reasons you should go is that you can see new places that you have most likely never seen before or have never visited before. You will have an experience of how to take care horses,young cows,and mules that would be shipped from place to place.\n\nBut along the way you'll find out what it feels like to take care these animals like as if you were on a farm because these are animals that would be on a farm. Besides you could try new food that you could have never tried in your life. You could have a chance to meet new people. Also while in that place you could experience what their culture is and also what they do in that culture. The only places you would go to though would be italy,china,new orleans,and greece.\n\nSo on your way these are the places you could explore and visit for a while. So these are the reasons I think you should take the chance to become a seagoing cowboy if you ever got the opportunity to become one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we continue to work on cars that can drive without human assitance?\n\nThe answer is yes and there are many details from the passage that support this.\n\nIn the passage the author talks about some of the complications that scientist and engineers have come across while trying to make this type of car. The passage also explains some of the new advancements fixing those problems.\n\nWhile there may be many complications with the car, technology is getting better everyday.\n\nSince technology is improving so vastly and new improvements are created everyday the resolution to these cars is just over the horizon.\n\nIn the text it explains how we did not have sensors, computer, or mapping to help the cars operate in the years before 2000.\n\nWere as now, only sixteen years later, we have all those things and advanced versions of them.\n\nThis just goes to show how fast and vastly technology is improving.\n\nWith these improvements, problems with the car that need improvements in technology might not be as far away as people think.\n\nIn the passage it states that the cars can brake, accelerte, and steer themselves.\n\nThe only problem is that it needs a human driver to take over when it passes through work zones and around accidents.\n\nThose problems are just minor setbacks because the car can sense them and alert the driver.\n\nThis means that the car can sense these problems, but is not progammed to respond by itself to the situation yet.\n\nIf scientist and engineers continue to work on sensors, then one day they might be able to program the car switch lane or to avoid objects in work zones that it can view in its sensors.\n\nSince it already knows how to steer and can sense the other cars this adjustment is closer than people think.\n\nIt's also a very safe and fun product.\n\nSince the car alerts the driver when something happens and watches the driver it ensures that they are always paying attention to the road to avoid risks.\n\nIn the text it states that the driver must stay alert and be ready to take over at anytime. The text also states that the touch sensors in the car make sure the driver's hands are always on the wheel, their seat will vibrate if the get close to backing into an object, and all of them are progranned to alert the driver when they are needed. In additon to this the BMW project manager wants to add in-car entertainment.\n\nThis entertainment will also cut off automatically when the drivers attention is required.\n\nThis proves that the car will be fun and safer than other cars because they do not shut off entertainment automatically in times of need.\n\nFinally the development to make a driverless should continue.\n\nOne reason is because technology is improving everyday and new improvemnts in our products that we already have.\n\nAnother reason is beause the product will be fun and safe.\n\nLast but not least people do not always pay attention when they drive and the car will alert when they need to.\n\nIn conclusion this will be an amazing and safe product for all passengers and drivers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article states that venus should still be studied further despite all of the danger that it brings toward the people and the equipment used to do so. The author supports this giving evidence and ideas. The author talks about the things that we have tried to do in the past that have failed and the ideas that we and NASA have for the future.\n\nIn part 2 the author states, \"Each previous mission was unnamed, and for a good reason, since no space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" Then the author goes on to talk about the new ideas and advances they have made such as, NASA came up with an idea of peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet.\n\nIn conclusion I think that the author supported this claim very well. The way that they talked about in the article it made it very clear that they knew exactly what they were talking about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This sounds like a great idea because teachers wouldn't have to worry about getting around to everyone in the classroom, re-teaching the same lesson, trying to figure out what activities/ lesson can help the kids understand more but this could aslo be a big distraction.\n\nI think that the use of this technology to read students expressions is valueable because whatever lesson it is being taught if the student is bored or confused it will modify the lesson. I think this is very useful because as a student i know that when a lesson is boring or not interesting its hard for me to pay attention or get focused. So the fact that it could tell that im not really into it or getting it and it'll change itself to something more \"my style\" is great. I know that teachers can't be everywhere at once to help or make you understand so when you're at you desk with your hand up waiting on the teacher to get to you probably frustrated by the now the computer will sense it and help you out before your teacher has to see you. This also helps by saving time in the class rooms because somethings not every student will get right away and instead of the teacher re-teaching it over and over the computer will see that your not getting it and change the lesson to something a little more complex, that you get and understand.\n\nNow as much as i am with this idea, a downfall could be students getting too carried away with it. Even though we are in high school kids can still be a little immitaure, this could be a distraction to the kids. They'll try to play with the sytem by making the wrong facial expression on purpose to see if the computer could guess how they're feeling. This could take away from valueable class time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many countries around the world, many students work along with their studies in order to gain experience or to fund their expenses on fees and books. There is an ongoing debate on whether young students should take up part-time jobs. In my opinion, teenagers should be encouraged to find relevant part-time employment if they really want to.\r\n\r\nWorking alongside studying will make the younger generation more responsible. Having the opportunity to spend time in an environment where they may face certain challenges every now and then will prepare them well for the future. A marketing student working as a sales representative, for instance, will gain sufficient customer-facing experience which could boost his confidence in the future full-time company. In addition, knowing that it takes at least some amount of hard work in order to earn money, will encourage them to spend it carefully and understand its value. Therefore, teenagers should take up jobs that allow them to gain experience as well as earn money before graduation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, however, students should be allowed to focus primarily on their education. Instead of spending time on irrelevant jobs that may not have any significance in the near future, teenagers should be allowed to concentrate on their careers and strive hard towards their goal of achieving excellence. A student who works on a job for instance may not be able to prepare well for his exams as most of his time will be usually spent at work which might impact his overall score. Thus, young people must avoid working and concentrate on building their career path.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that the younger generation should put their efforts into something that will be useful for them in their field. Although youngsters should aim at excelling in their school rather than finding employment as it will avoid any possible distractions, finding a job will be fruitful in attaining responsibility as well as knowing the importance of hard-earned money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nThere is a great population of people who believe aliens exist and cause strange things to happen and space crafts to appear. Many people know that it is just science fiction and that there is no evidence showing that aliens actually exist. This has been going on for decades and the believers need to face the truth. They can belive as long as they want, but there is no evidence.\n\nThe Face on Mars was not created by aliens, but is a natural landform. Meteors and other space rocks strike the planets, and even the moon. Those can be a possible cause of the Face on Mars. With astronauts exploring Mars to see if it is capable of supporting life, the Face could be caused by the humans collecting large amounts of the planet and walking all over it. Aliens are nothing but a fictional character in the many Hollywood movies.\n\nAs humans with the sense of sight, we are used to seeing faces on a daily basis. We look at clouds and depict them as something we have seen before. Or a tree that looks like a face was made out of it's bark. It is understandable that you could see a face on Mars because that is human imagination. The Face is just a natural effect of what caused it to happen. Sure, we might not know about everything that goes on in space, but we do know that many people are interested in the fact that Mars may be able to suport life.\n\nScientist are doing everything they can to know more than enough about Mars. They have rovers and cameras to look at Mars from Earth and be able to study it without traveling all the way there. There are many photos and videos of Mars and what you might see there, but no aliens were found. Their equipment is high quality and no blurs or scratches could be seen as something it's not.\n\nFor those who support the belief that aliens roam Mars, they can invest on the discovery, but find it wasteful. The Face is just a landform and you would need evidence to support your alien claim. There are many photos that were taken over time of the Face and the differences could be because of erosion or asteroids. Many things go on in space, but alien activity isn't one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite hope anticipation surrounding construction mooring mast atop Empire State Building project never destined success In The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted many obstacles described builders faced attempted allow dirigibles dock mast The first major obstacle builders came upon dirigible mounted onto mooring stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation This obstacle caused need abundance extra support frame needed maintain sturdiness building The arguably greatest obstacle builders faced rapid wind currents surrounded building The winds caused problems dirigible even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This caused major design flaw builders way would maintain control safety dirigible docked mooring As much plan dwarfed others time shortlived The plan far many obstacles overcome serves better today memorable characteristic Empire State building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In persuation essay talk content nt remove offensive books music movies magazines shelf In essay everyone agree content opposing side aurgument In essay nt exception essay disagree viewing audience however situations audience go sides To begin matter case remove offensive books music magazines movies library I nt believe content remove see In cases exception banding material nt seem logic In point view removal materials seems little extreme however putting content higher shelf seems pratical instead removal good Yes might offensive time period offensive movies books magazines books look comedial taken serious For example really offensive show called CAPS really offensive people see entertaining This show offensive everyone yet still see In show warning label stating seen children older Parents advice acknowledge kids seeing It s creator content banned yet job parent mindful kids reading watching looking listening In case nt away right subject However creators conent see way vent lifes experiences opticals faceor make people laugh They see safe way espress It might offensive people s life You might like seem harsh s real life Secondly always something offend nt seem logical banned An example might religion A religion person might might offend It nt mean religion offensive get banned remove everyone Your religion offend someone deal embrace differnces If friends different religion nt mean never talk ever Thirdly might express going people wo nt agree You might create book song movie offend someone way For example series offensive guys girls A disagrrement two girls fighting charater better There always opposing side A might tried hearing time might find offensive girl compare Saying ca nt boys like even nt remove together For might seem greatest movie ever terrible movie universe Fourthly another example show called CAPS queen south women nothing begin yet ended wanted countries Some people seem might cool like It nt seem people go uot cause television show shows consequences This show example could happen become exactly like Some offensive material teach lesson pervent person something later regreat In conclusion everything life offends us way It nt matter deal life goes There way see one thing enjoy maybe offensive others It would nt seem fair take something enjoy offended one person So I belive libaries censorship nt risk In opinion everyone freedom choose want read watch even listen And also choice stop reading watching listening", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i think the idea is a good idea , but what if all the cars is gone in someone eles wanted to use the car it's gone be a big arguement or maybe a riot if its more people envolved in the sistuation.\n\ni wouldnt wont that car because in the story it says its a navgation that tells u if theirs a accident etc .. but what if its messed up or doesnt work at the moment what if something happends to car and you dont have a phone or dont no how to use the navgation ?\n\nLike the story says if someone is in a accendent or the technology fails who ault is it the drivers or the manufaturer ? What if something was to happen in it was the manufaturer fault ? what if something happends that the driver did in dont no how to fix the promblem right there or lies abough it ? i think regular cars should just be the opptuion or people should be able to pick on thier on .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Knowing the history of the house they live is being popular in recent times. Curiosity and rising the market value of one’s building are capable of explaining the activity, and moreover, asking about residents in the same area and doing exploration on the archive or internet give tremendous clues.\r\n\r\nIn some countries, digging through the past about their accommodations is caused by two main appropriate reasons. The first primary reason is that people unconsciously tend to know the root of what they obsess because it is our human nature. For instance, they try to relate belongings to something unique, namely a historic event, a famous person, or a supernatural thing, in this case, it is their home. The second is increasing the value of their properties in order to find out information. If the findings are extraordinarily valuable, they would increase the price of the owners' houses.\r\n\r\nThere are several ways to explore certain data such as asking neighbours and doing research on the both internet as well as archive office. Firstly, chatting with neighbours is the simplest method as they can talk about it while introducing themselves. Secondly, another way is that they can choose to search articles in newspapers from the archive or online content on the internet If a person needs facts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, nowadays, some are interested in doing exploration about the previous events of their accommodations. however, most people are only curious about whether there were any celebrities who lived, whether things that happened were written in history books, or whether unusual actions occurred, others’ main concern is getting benefit from rising the rate of their collaterals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear belive advances technology good society must misunderstanding computers positive affect people community giving us well hand eye coordination giving us ability seek find information learn It also allow people communicate online others Hand eye coordination important thing helps us everyday new technology computers help us skill use says Computers help us lot almost active computer users improve hand eye coordination using computers small amount time everyday education essential especially learn better salary get With new technology earn degrees learn short period time My aunt got online six months ago got promoted job Gaining valuable online nt go adults children well report need help homework new technologies one effective fastest ways learn find information doctor specializes emotionsfeelings says last month new millenium preteens teenagers simply love new advances technology want learn take tool use Computers also great way communciate s fast easy I uncle lives rarely get see due distance som catch messaging social netwroks emails It s even free unlike costly long distance calls The communication also great businesses A company reach contact customers reschedule appointment give receipts advertist many things Computers essential effective techorlogy use people around country world They improve handeye coordination allow people gain education gives people opportunity communicate others another great useful step communities around world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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